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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Sergey Brin has a point if the driveless cars take less fuel and are driveless in ways they will be a hit. They believe that americans and people all over the world will be sitting in driveless car by 2020. if so the world will change, technogly is always advancing. First, how will it work, second what as humans will we have to do, and final what are the flaws.\n\nFirst they wil have a: left rear wheel, a rotating senor on the roof, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and a inertial motion sensor. They have tested it and had one operating since 2009. It is driveless but only been tested in specific conditions. A car that can drive by it self if you get to rest for but only a moment in a operating moving self driving car how would you feel. For instance what if you had to get something from the back of your car such as a bottle that fell from your baby's lap or mouth, if your kid couldn't fix his sit belt or wouldn't, and if you drop your wallet and needed to find it before got to a toll, drive in window who knows. If it is even driveless for certain period it is still \"driveless\".\n\nSecond, as humans we may need to be ready to take control at moments like navigating through work zones ,and around accidents. If they put laws where you must have hands on the wheel you may get bored, but they are bringing in- car entertainment and other systems. Already is a notification system for the driver such as vibration on the seatbelts, google voice alert, flashy lights on the wind shield. As humans may have to take control at periods of time but think about irratiating time in traffic gone of you leting on and off of the brake that would be magifincent right?. Many believe so. Third, there are some flaws like you may get bored of sitting there waiting to take over. Plus you having to pay attention to the road period is not fun but wouldn't you want to know what happened if something goes wrong. Laws will change like not having hands on wheel may become one, CPU error and you get stuck what to do, and if something happens to you or another person from a accident of a automative vehicle who is to blame. There are flaws but still that comes from the peole that want you to be nontrusting of this new invention and it's glory. Conclusion, if your not ready now you better be on 2020 when the world will change with driveless cars. if you want to be the one manually driving in 2020 all for you. you better make your decision fast because it's coming fast. You dont have much time to choose. What will you choose?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit Joe Kurmaskie setting affects cyclist various different ways First listened old man wrong path So travels its hot June day California deserts The odds start The water bottles contained tantalizing sips wide rings dried sweat circled shirt growing realization I needed drop heatstroke gorgeous day June Kurmaskie From ganle tell hes tired almost water It puts lot strain cyclist manages", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "At office I appointment At office I waiting room come back Then asked questions foster mom question Then left went found othere talked Then came back said goes papers need The foster mom said ok Then said CAPS patient I apprisiate much CAPS Ill see guys next time ok said bye", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \" Making Mona Lisa Smile \", the author explains this new technology and decribes how it works. The technology would have many benefits. Which include: students focusing more, getting more involved, and even doing better in school. The new technology can have major avdcantages for not only the students but the administration as well.\n\nBy using the Facial Action Coding System the studetns will tend to be more focused on something that cathes their eye. If the new technology can tell when one is getting more or distracted it can change up to lesson plan. \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" The lesson can be changed into something not only benefitical but entertaining for the students. Holding the attention of every student is a hard task for one teacher so with this new system it can help hold the attention. Even when the teacher has attention of some students some dont focus on the same situation. holding the attention is a major factor in a school setting and with the help of the sytem learning can change. Every student has a different learning style.\n\nIt can also help on how much the stdents interact. The students will learn at their pace with their required style of teaching the new sytem will provude them therefore leading to better understanding of the task at hand. The students will start participaiting more abd ecen start sharing their thoughts on the siblect. Plus the new exciting way of learning will make them want to show how mch they learned with the new Facial Action coding System.\n\nLastly, if the students are focusing more on their new and improved learing techniques then they will also get more of their homework done. The new technology will hold the attention of the audience and teach the topic better. This system will help the teachers get every childs attention rather than some. Every teacher teache at her pace her technique they think is best for us but sometimes their way is not the right way for every student.\n\nThe new Facial Action Coding System has many advantages that school administration should take into consideration. It will help kids lern, feel proud enough to interact, and even give them boost of confidence to get better grades.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The cyclist hard trail bike order get It easy bike flat smoot terrain get rolling hills makes lot tougher The biker said I noticed terrain changing Flat road replaced short rolling hills It also hot sweating getting dehydrated Id read sucking stones helps take mind thirst eighteen miles next town without much water The first deserted town didnt drinkable water It hard bike conditions important always prepared know going", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I totaly agree that driverless cars should be illegal in every state. A car that\n\ndrives itself and your task is to watch the road or at lease try? Was an un-smart decision made my a mad, money making man. Driving a driverless car put the people in the vehcile and everyone and thing around in harms way. Also, you never know what to except with the self driving car. That's a \" it was a technical defeculity \" waiting to happen.\n\nMaking a self driving car was a mistake in the hiding. You're giving technology the upper hand to how fast, how slow,a car can go, whereand how to a destinantion. What if the driver falls asleep? What if the car drives you of the road and you have no way to get into the system to shut down the manufacturer? What\n\nif you wreck? There's so many what ifs. The companies didn't think about the downfalls the car could have they were just looking at all the dollar signs and how much money they would be gaining by having a million dollar plan. Like in the article says, \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?\" Their is so many reasons on why a driverless car should be illegal.\n\nTheir is always downfalls with a million dollar idea, but everyone seems to look past that. They see it as the new big thing so why not get it like everyone else or test drive it like everyone else? There would be no point into having a car either then. It ruin the life we grew up wanting. Having your own car, to drive where you want with your two hands on the wheel and one foot on the gas. No one looks at it like that anymore, look at the easy, lazy way out. A driverless car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author of this work is in favor of taking on the great challenge of landing a \"rover\" on Venus for research and exploration. Venus has many extreme conditions that the earth does not have to endure. The author presented many \"solutions\" to these problems. Although plausible, the creations would be impractical and would not produce ensured results. The author's support for the idea of exploring Venus is mediocre at best.\n\nBeing the second-closest planet to the sun provides for some nearly impossible conditions for human exploration. With Sulfuric Acid in Venus' atmosphere, and surface temperatures being over 425 degrees Celcius (about 700 K or 800 F) , the likelyhood of humans on Venus is nearly nonexistent to begin with. To combat the hot temperatures and the acidic atmosphere, NASA proposed the idea of a \"blimp\" that floats above the planet's shell. Although the blimp could survive high in the air, the practicality of if is not present. Having a blimp that cannot touch the planet is not going to help scientific research at all. While being above the clouds of Venus, it is impossible to see the surface with human eyes. Seeing the surface would require technology that uses light from the electromagnetic spectrum with a high frequency and short wavelength. It is also impossible to collect rock samples from the planet for soil examination. This idea would not be beneficial enough for the risk of investing a lot of time and money.\n\nAn additional idea that was brought up by the author was \"Silicon electronics.\" Siliscon electronics would be resistent to the harsh conditions on the planet-- for a while. The systems would run for about a month before total failure. these silicon systems are very expensive to bein with and are still in the development phase here on earth. Creating enough silicon circuits to power a rover or vehicle would take years to manufacture. And by the point of satisfactory innovation for silicon electronics, a new product may have been presented.\n\nLastly, a \"cave-man\" idea of mechanical computers came into play. These basic forms of work require no fragile electronics at all. Using gears, levers, pulleys, and ramrods, corporations have been able to create many devices. When made out of an acid-resistent substance that can withstand high pressure, a mechanical machine may work. The only problem with a mechanical machine is that once on the planet, sure it can do work, but it would be unable to transmit and data findings back to a receiver on a ship or earth. There would be a point where some sort of electronics would be needed. And as of right now, there is not an effective enough invention that could put humans on Venus to live and research.\n\nThe author of this article is trying to push a principle that is not fully developed yet. The reasons that were provided may work after many years of design and development, but right now, none are practical. A combination of the three presented ideas may actually work the best. Use a blimp to float above the planet, tie a cable to the blimp that connects is with machanical machinery, and use silicon electronics to transmit the findings. Damage could be repaired by raising the equipment back up to the blimp. Innovation does not come easy for those who are in charge of it, but ideas like this are needed in providing an answer for a difficult question.\n\nOverall, the author's arguments do not satisfy the overall risk and reward stakes. After more time passes, maybe he will write another article depicting what will work for sure. The support was not presented in a way that was convincing enough to dive right in to this new frontier of space.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The advantage of limiting your car use are extremly helpful mainly to are envoriment. Some countries are now banging people from using there vehicals to get the smog levels down. There goal is to promote alternative transportation and ruduce smog.\n\n\"It's a good oppotunity to take away stress and lower air pollution\" said businessman Carlos Arturo as he road a two-seat bicycle with his wife. In Bogota, Colombia there is a day where everyone has a car-free day. It also releaves on the traffic jams and also reduces the amount of accidents. On that day vioators faced $25 fines, might be a little extreme but its a good way to get the people thinking of new and smarter ways to travel. If in a city of 7 million everyone can join in, why cant states and countries try this?\n\nIf we had car-free days maybe once every month or twice a month that would help keep are envirorment heathy and clean. Parks and sports centers would also greatly bloom, more people would want to get out and enjoy life more. Less harm to are earth will make sure it last longer and they way are kids kids can be able to see what a wonderful planet we have.\n\nI feel that less cars should be used, more walking and bike riding less gas more money in are pockets.\n\nThe less we stress areself by having to worry about global warming and the more we can worry about injoying life will be better. When we use less and save less that helps the goverment the people the envorment. EVERYONE! Just one time a day we used a bike instead of a car that cuts are pollution in half.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is a planet that is called sometimes \"Evening star\".The planet Venus is called the \"twin\" of Earth because \" closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size ,occasionally the closest in distance too.\" as said in Paragraph 2 .NASA is trying to explore Venus but, Venus has a thick atmosphere about 97 percent carbon dioxide which covers venus. Trying to persuit of studying Venus is dangerous but it is worthy to perusite the study of it.\n\nNASA ( The National Aeronautics and Space Administration) is currently studying to send humans to study Venus as said in Paragraph 5. The author supports this idea of studying Venus and he makes a lot of really great reasons why. Some include that \" jet airplanes trael at a higher altitude to fly over many storms\" in Paragraph 5. This would not be a bad idea but, this could not happen if they are not able to reasearch.\n\nAnother reason why it is worth pursuiting even though it is dangerous is that Nasa is not only sticking to one idea to explore Venus NASA is looking into more approaches, safer approaches like \"simplifying electronics made of silicon carbide\". \"These approaches has been tested in a chamber simulating the choas of Venus's Surface.\" Have lasted for three weeks in such conditons\" Paragraph 7. NASA got these ideas from looking back to old technology called mechanical computers. In the 1800s is when there were first envisioned.\n\nMy overall claim is that NASA has the potential to explore it just takes time.\n\nSooner or later Venus will be explored I say this because \" Many researchers are working on innovations that allow our machines to ast long enought to contribute meaningfully to our knowlege of Venus\" (Paragraph 6). This statement supports my thought of NASA being able to research Venus soon or later. \" Scientist seeking tto conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risk\"(Paragraph 6). Finally, another reason it worth studying is \" Long ago, Venus was probably covered larely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth\" (Paragraph 4).\n\nIn conclusion, Venus is worthy to pursuit despite it's dangers it presents. \"Our travels on Earth and beyonf should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be exapanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\"( Paragraph 8). These are the reasons why Venus is worth exploring.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" by Nick D'Alto, the author introduces the reader to a new scientific \"development\": the technology to recognize and analyze facial expressions. D'Alto explains, in explicit detail, how this technology works thanks to the information also provided by the minds behind this advancement. While D'Alto uses very enthusiastic language throughout the article, going as far as to addressing the reader, I, personally, could not be more unenthused by this development.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System, or FACS, works by identifying the 44 major facial muscles in a human face. While it is operated thanks to a complex algorithm that recognizes emotions, only six basic emotions are put into the system. Now, this is a problem. Humans are much more complex than simply six different emotions, and like Dr. Huang himself states in paragraph 4, \"Individuals show varying degrees of expression,\" insinuating that emotions have more depth to them and can't be defined by a single label. The use of this technology in a classroom would not be valuable, in my opinion. Students in a classroom setting often act accordingly to the place that they're in. Sure, there are disrespectful and rowdy students, but many (if not most) students act differently at home or simply outside of school than they would in a classroom. I don't think it's valuable for teachers to retain this information, as it has nothing to do with their ultimate goal, which is educating the students. If a student has an issue, they can go to the school's guidance counselor or talk to a parent.\n\nComputer-based technology does not capture the full spectrum of human emotion or the varying ways of communication between people. Have we, as humans, reached the point where that type of technology is available and acurrate? Can software deduce the complexities of human expression? I think that with time, with technology rapidly changing, and with new discoveries being made every day, acurrate and viable recognition algorithms can be useful. In the meantime, however, this technology should not be introduced in places like classrooms because of the fear of inacurracy and false data.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author Winter Hibiscus made good choice conclude story when come back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test again This paragraph hints reader Saeng intends combine new old lives Her old life represented hibiscus used constants back home The geese symbolize new life become almost familiar now The obstacle faces passing driving test The author implies spring old new parts Saengs life combined Saeng able overcome obstacle well With geese ground Saengs life come full circle", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A good education is a constitutional focus nowadays. Some people believe that private schools are best for learners. While others contradict this idea and say that it harms the community. A nation is a mixture of rich and poor people. However, middle and lower classes can not afford and they also face many other problems. Furthermore, I will discuss both the views and elaborate on my opinion.\nOn the one hand, some people conclude that private schools are beneficial for scholars. In other words, private schools have set their mark in education. For example, the beacon house school has top rank in Pakistan. Every year, 70% of tutors got selected in the medical profession. Besides, they have educational standards with highly skilled instructors. As a result, private schools are more attractive and rich families are wishing to get their child admissions.\nOn the other hand, some people argue that private schools mark a negative impact on the nation. In other words, it is somehow true. Because the rest of the nation accepts elite class is hand to mouth. Moreover, they cannot afford an expensive school and its costs. All parents wish to give their children a good education. But some obstacles are there which resist them to do so. Due to this, a negative impact implies to the community. \nTo sum up, schooling is essential for all toddlers. The elite class can straight forward do so. But the issue arises for the rest of society. There should be some separate quota for the middle and lower class, with affordable fees. So they can also fulfil their kid's dream.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir one happiness safety care Narciso parents loved closeknit community All descriptions family cooking family neighbors eating together enough make anyone feel happy Throughout memoir Narciso emphasizes care parents You know Narciso s parents loved attitude toward In paragraph writes I always grateful parents love sacrifice shows parents care When author writes In neighborhood cultures came together great solidarity friendship It closeknit community honest hardworking immigrants extended hand people necessarily kind clearly need These two sentences give reader feelings safety emphasize care This memoir Narciso Rodriguez creates mood happiness safety care", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people believe that harsher punishments imposed on driving crimes were the sole way to keep roads safe. From my own standpoint, while I agree that this method could be effective in reducing the number of driving offences, there are other solutions available to tackle this situation.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, it is true that punishing driving offenders heavily can help improve road safety. Indeed, harsher punishments seem to act as a deterrent to prevent commuters who break traffic laws from recommitting driving offences. Heavy fines, for example, are extremely useful to target people having financial issues who are unable to pay the fines and, therefore, will follow the traffic rules to avoid being punished. Another typical example is vehicle confiscation which is likely to work well with those depending on their private means of transport to make a living like truck drivers.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I also support the idea that there are other measures which can be adopted to address driving crimes. One feasible solution is setting up a system of surveillance cameras on the main streets, which can effectively hinder would-be driving offenders from breaking traffic laws. In addition, the construction of dedicated lanes separating cars and buses from motorbikes and bicycles appears to reduce the likelihood of unexpected traffic accidents happening between these vehicles. Furthermore, the government imposing an official ban on private cars from travelling to city centres in a certain number of days of a week, like what Greece already did, also allows inhabitants to travel more safely.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it cannot be denied that there are several advantages of heavier penalties; however, national and local authorities can combine them with other solutions to ensure the safety of commuters as much as possible.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today's society, there is a growing debate about whether sellers could sell their commodities to other nations without any restrictions from authorities. In my opinion, I totally disagree with this viewpoint because of some drawbacks that it could bring since governments have a robust influence on the trade market.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, the independence of trading between many countries could lead to the underdevelopment of local businesses. In many nations, especially in developing countries, many products depend on the supply of other nations, otherwise, they do not have enough resources to develop their own goods. Thus, these countries' demands may base on the supply of other nations, and the governments could not control the price and quantity of commodities. For example, by virtue of the dependence on coffee quantity from abroad countries, the price of coffee in Laos increased by 200% in a 5-year period from 1995 to 2000.\r\n\r\nSecondly, the freedom of trading could decrease the income from taxes of many nations. With the development of technology and transportation, the logistics industry is developing to become one of the highest income in many countries. Moreover, taxes in this field could support many local companies to compete with global ones in market share and products. Technical machines could be an obvious example, to rise the supply of products in Vietnam, the government raise funds for local technological corporations and reduce the taxes they have to pay. To balance the supply and the demand in a nation, the government need to pay more attention to local companies to bring suitable products to customers.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I firmly believe that this proposal is a negative development for every countries because of the underdevelopment of local businesses and a decrease in the income of taxes. Therefore, it is advisable that governments should impose restrictive control on the import and export of global goods.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this digital era, we can’t deny that the computer is one of the most critical things in the education program. It is so essential that almost every student has already had it in their home or even on their hand. However, I believe that everything in this world has two impacts, either drawbacks or benefits. In this essay, I will explain my opinion about both sides with relevant examples and experiences.\nIf we go back to 20 years ago, only a few schools already had computers in their classrooms to support their education programs. Nevertheless, as technology never stops improving, thus the computer itself is getting cheaper every day. Hence, most schools can afford to provide computers in their classrooms now, and there always be risks to that. In this case, students may use computers for personal reasons unrelated to the lesson. For instance, they can play a game on the internet or access any prohibited website in the classroom.\nDespite the risks, there are also several benefits that students will have from computers. First, it will give them a lot of positive information or knowledge, not only related to Information Technology but also to other matters. For example, schools can provide an e-learning program for any subject, containing materials to be learned in the classrooms and homework to be done by students. Furthermore, it will help not only students but also teachers when reviewing the students’ homework with computers.\nAfter all, the benefits of computers in classrooms sometimes outweigh the drawbacks. However, schools must consider the mitigation of any unrelated use of computers if they want to provide computers in their classrooms.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper The average american uses computer least everyday machines definetley beneffit society people easily learn faraway places learn whithout carry heavy books papers chat people country sometimes even world First computers teach world without go library appart book free sites like wikapedia provide fast knowledge anything use sites essay trip planning satisfy curiousity people believe computers people excersizing enjoying nature however computers promote exercise going look nature computers provide quick easy access travel agencies well information popular tourist areas reason They also bring advertising sites gyms ideas excersizing home Computers nt hinder workouts nature walks make easier But computers make things easier well much easier use computers dragging around heavy books carry small laptop also worrying keeping track papers Everything saved laptop Computers organized files even messy student keep organized another advantage anything typed computer neat easy understand handwriting example schools simplified laptops Each given one use books CAPS much easier said one student difficult kinds Computers make simplier My last argument people talk anyone using chat sites someone cousin distance country still keep touch sam friends moved lot faster mail carriers taking one person another almost instantanious also private mail sealed give pass word protected also sites socializing messages also People talk one another This help people learn culture cities sometimes even Different countries sites help close gap cultures They help get video racism help make world ideal Computers make comunity better They let us learn faraway places make easier enjoy enable us talk people almost anywhere anything You ll realize computers benificial society", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I suggest to try the Seagoing Cowboys program based on the information and the passage I have read. It can help you learn and experience things you have probably never done before. Also you could go places you have never been before and probably would like to.\n\nA reason to join the Seagoing Cowboys program is to learn and experience new things. If participating in the Seagoing Cowboys program it makes you realize and make you more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\n\nSecondly, playing games on trips like baseball and volleyball can also be fun. Also table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, whittling, and games also helped pass time. At last, being a Seagoing Cowboy can be more than just an adventure.\n\nIt can open up a new world.\n\nAs I see it, joining the Seagoing Cowboys program can be an opportunity of a lifetime to travel on a cattle boat and help people from a different country.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When I got involved in the Seagoing Cowboys program, it allowed me to do many things I had never done before, and go places I had never seen. If I hadn't of joined the program I would have had to stay where I lived and would've never seen the places such as China, the Panama Canal, Italy, Europe, and Acropolis.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy, I was able to see the other side of the story from people on the other side of the world. When I lived in America, al So, I joined in on the Seagoing Cowboy program, thinking that just maybe, I would be able to make a difference in this world. Having prior knowledge about what exactly \"hard work\"\n\nI was able to get many things accomplished that other people in that program that normally people wouldn't be able to do. Besides just helping devastated people with their homes destroyed from the battles of World War two, I was also able to have unique adventures to places that you don't typically go to everyday. Besides from that, when I was on my second year of being a Seagoing Cowboy, I was serving as night watchman. I was making my hourly reports to check on the animals every hour when I had slipped on the ladder and I went feet first towards an opening on the side of the ship. Luckily, a strip of metal along the edge of the boat had caught my fall and kept me from flying over the edge into the dark Atlantic ocean. Altough I had a few cracked ribs from the inccedent, I was able to find some sort of fun to do while I was waiting for the animals to be unloaded. All of the cowboys decided to get together and play baseball and volleyball in the empty stalls where the animals had been. We also found games to do like table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and game helped us pass time. Not only that, but being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than just an adventure for me. It opened up a whole new world for me. I'm grateful for the opportunity. It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs. Being able to see this, I was able to recruit many international students and exchange visitors for years, and maybe, you will too.\n\nWith some background knowledge and determination, eventually you will be able to become a Seagoing Cowboy too.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, the majority of individuals pay attention to gain more knowledge about their place of accommodation. In this essay, I will present reasons such as people's doubts about spirits and Damon's on houses ,and about which they can collect information either by contacting individuals living before or by reading history books.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, some part of the population has a strong belief in the presence of spirits and Damons in places that are old or being vacant for a long time. For instance, a big population has a fear of having the effect of ghosts and spirits in homes, for which they search a lot for their relaxation. Secondly, most people are worried to face extreme weather conditions of winters and summers. Therefore, they want to know information about the construction of their ancestor homes which are most popular for having insulating qualities. Furthermore, many individuals are afraid of natural disasters like floods, earthquakes etc. As a result, they search about the frequency and the reaction of those events on the specific locations and houses. For example, the countries which are more prone to natural disasters have changed their house designs accordingly to prevent the emergencies which their ancestors faced.\r\n\r\nThere are myriad ways through which anyone can find the above-mentioned information. First of all, many prehistoric books which are available both in libraries and online have been written by old people about different areas. Secondly, people can get themselves informed about their interest place by contacting those who have been living in the same site.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, a large population has different doubts about some specific locations owing to which they feel uncomfortable, to live in that venue, hence it is entitled to have clear their minds by different ways and live a relax and comfortable life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Interplanetary exploration is a modern day project that scientists are making quick progress on. Scientists are fed up with staying on Earth and the natural human instinct for craving new knowledge drives them to explore where no man has gone before. Scientists have tried numerous times to study Earth's sister planet, Venus, but have failed and coming back with no new knowledge about the planet. With recent ideas and new innovations, scientists have carefully and thoroughly thought about every possible danger and how to counteract it. This might cause the possibility of sending humans to Venus.\n\nOne of the main reasons we could explore Venus, is that it is refferred to as Earth's twin for many reasons. Venus is roughly the same size and density of Earth. With Venus's orbit in relation to Earth, Venus is often our closest planetary neighbor. Venus also boasts many similiarities that Earth has. Venus has numerous mountains, valleys, and craters, just like Earth. Also, Earth grew and supported many forms of life with the existence of water and oceans. Scientists have found evidence of water being found on Venus's surface which is a good sign. Both planets also contain clouds over their landscape. But Venus's clouds are much different to Earth's clouds, containing sulfuric acid and carbon dioxide, poisonous to humans.\n\nThis challenge has driven scientists for years to come up with new or use existing products to be able to study Venus. The atmosphere of Venus has proven to be very hazardous to metal, melting tin and other metals within hours. scientists have come up with a new metal called silicon carbide, which has pproven to last upo to three weeks in Venus's conditons. But this is not all scientists have come up with though, using mechanical computers, they are able to do many calculations that are very difficult for humans to do on their own. These computers were used in World War II using no electronics, but rather a series of gears and levers to do what they needed to do. This has proven that scientists are capable of overcoming even the most challenging of tasks. Using this new and old technology, they are trying to come up with machines or instruments to be able to study the ground from their new aircraft.\n\nWith the harsh conditions of Venus's ground and atmosphere, scientists are not able to get a machine to land on the surface of the planet without it breaking or melting, causing them to think of another approach to study Venus. With the idea of how jet passenger planes fly over storms to avoid danger, they took that concept to Venus and will try to create an aircraft that will hover or fly thirty miles above the surface to avoid the danger of Venus's clouds. Flying at an altitude of thirty miles will replicate many condtions found on earth, such as the sea level atmospheric pressure, Earth's radiations, and wind speeds. This will increase the safety of these missions by a substantial amount. These new concept will aid in the exploration of new planets.\n\nScientists are humans that have a natural crave for new knowledge. We have tried interplanetary exploration for numerous years, but with little ot no success. But with modern day technology and ideas of the past, we have come up with ways to overcome challenges often brought with space navigation. We have come up with silicon carbide, a material capable of overcoming the conditions brought Venus's atmosphere. Venus is Earth's twin, boasting many similiarities between the two. With science quickly progressing with no end in sight, we will inevitably go to another planet, whether nature tries to stop us or not.\n\nWe will improvise, adapt, and overcome many challenges brought with space navigation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "According to the author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus.\" This planet is worthy of the risks and issues of exploration. While the author maintains to cross his point, he uses evidence and facts to change the readers' ideas of this messy planet, by comparing it to more similar terms that are more pleasent to the reader.\n\nFirst the author starts by explaining and describing the unabitable conditions of the planet. The author states that \"These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth;\" Which are refering to the extreme temperatures of \"average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit\" and the \"thick atmosphere of almost 97 percentage carbon dioxide blankets.\" Second he follows to counterclaim his points by questioning, \"If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing fursther visits to its surface?\" This persuades the reader to question themselves, What is so bad about Venus? or more important What is so good about Venus? Which he replays and answers by comparing, once again, Venus with our own planet, Earth. He states that, \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" Changing the reader's idea or previous image, that he already provided, passing from an \"inhospitable planet\" to a planet that \"was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life.\"\n\nIn conclution the author crosses his point by using evidence of a very dangerous, and unabitable planet, and what it once was and how similar it was to what is now our Earth, or also \"Venus' twin.\" As a way to persuade the reader into believing that Venus is worthy of its investigations.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In a way I think it would be good to use the technology to read students emotional expressions. The teacher should have permission to read the students expression so it doesn't invade anyones privacy of thoughts and feelings about someone or something. Eckman has classified sic basic emotions-happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. The person with the technology should have to have permission to see how that person is feeling.\n\nMaybe that person is sad about somthing that is going on at home and doesn't want anyone to know about it and question him/her about the sistuation. Say if a student is disgusted with the way the class is going and does't want theteacher to know that's what they are disgusted about. In my opinion people should have the right to keep their emotions private and to themselves unless they want someone to know. So that being said people should stay out of other peoples busines unless they want that person to know about it. I think that the teacher with that technology shoud have the students and parents permission depending on the age of the student.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One time I patience I wanted phone I didnt get phone I knew I gon na get one someday The day finally came get phone birthday I opening presents I didnt know I getting last find big present cell phone So I called friend said whose phone calling I said I couldnt believe I could patience long time I happy I could patience long I know someone could patience long Once I got phone I wasnt patience waiting texted message come back After I got patience waited I got text message back I wish I could patience everyday cant Im happy I phone I call mom activitys I know way I patience could I ever patience Some days I never patience anything one day I teach someone patience I happy But day every day I patience everybody I wish everybody patience day Patience means wait day moment live This time I patience I want people patience I hope someday everybody world patience everybody Will please help people patient could teach someone new every day I patience trie patience wait another thing happen life I hope patience times Thanks reading time I patience times I want patience Hope enjoyed story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The given pie charts provide information on the nutritional consistency of two different types of dinner, baked potato and Macaroni.\nOverall , it is clear that there are five types of nutritions available in both dishes eventhough the highest propotion is from carbohydrates.\nFurthermore, saturated fat and other nurtients has the lowest percentage in both macaroni and baked potatoes.\nMedium baked potato is high in carbohydrates which is 35% and less in saturated fat and other nutrients. Moreover, it has equal number of glucose and other nutrients which is 15%. Baked potato contains protine little less than carbohydrates which is 25%.\nCarbohydrates being the highest amount of nutrition that Macaroni contains which is 52% of overall nutrient percentage and less in other nutrients. It has more saturated fat than protine and glucose which is 21 %. Macraoni containes equal number of Glucose and protine which is 11% of total.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am against the development of driverless cars. I am against these cars because they are not completely independent, they could cause accidents, and they will develop conflicts between the manufacturer and the driver. These cars could cause a dramatic change in the driving society.\n\nI am against these cars because they are not completely independent. \"They still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues.\" This means that the driverless cars are not compatable to fully being able to drive alone. The driver in the car would have to be alert when a situation has approached. If there was an incident where the driver was not paying attention or the signals would have not went off , the driver would have never known to take over, which would cause serious incidents. The driverless cars should be able to be commited to the road fully.\n\nAlthough the Driveless Cars are tested, they could still cause accidents. Accidents could occur if the driver is not aware of the car being in need of help with specific traffic issues. Also, anything could go wrong with technology. These cars lack human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. These situations could cause an even more devastating effect.\n\nFurthermore, these cars will cause conflicts with the law between manufacturers and drivers. Laws would have to be changed in order to fit with the development of these driveless cars. If a situation occurs and the driver is hurt, whose fault is it? If the car is driving, will it be the manufacturer? Or, if the driver is in control and there is an accident, how would anyone have known? These cars should be more reliable.\n\nIn conclusion, I am against the development of driveless cars. I am against these cars because they are not completely independent, they could cause accidents, and they will develop conflicts between the manufacturer and the driver. These cars could cause a dramatic change in the driving society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "More and more youngsters are now refusing to have a career in Agriculture. In this paragraph, I will analyze the reasons for this phenomenon and answer the question of whether the young generation should be encouraged to participate in the work of a farmer.\r\n\r\nWith the booming of technology development, the world that we are living in has become more and more advanced , creating a better living conditions and people, especially the youngsters are becoming too attached with these comfortable and convenient lifestyle. This is the main reason why young people tend to avoid working in the agriculture sector because of its effort and hard-work. Another reason that can not be ignored is that a lot of young people have a firm belief that a career of a farmer has no prospect, fortune and opportunity in comparison with other jobs. \r\n\r\nDue to the lack of young labor in the agriculture sector, many people have raised the question of whether more youngsters should be encouraged to do farming work. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this statement due to the fact that the importance of farming should not be ignored by people at a young age. Let aside all arguments, it can clearly be seen that agriculture is one of the most pivotal industries in our world. A huge amount of food that people consume daily comes from farming, and also the huge amount of income that agriculture creates can not be overlooked. Therefore we should raise the awareness of young people about the importance of agriculture as well as why they should participate in the farming work.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When patient come without complaining And understanding tolerant And patient something steady Because nervous patience gives lot time And come steady patient And person experiences difficulties And patient waiting get something knew patient And patience come", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story winter hibiscus by Ho storey ends Saeng promising take test spring The author likely ends way shows Saeng getting sorrow test spring Hibiscus This shown Saeng says II failed test NUM shows leaving homeland makes even sad promises spring flowers try She says spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test again pg shows getting sorrow becoming determined looking forward taking test", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this life i think that there should be a limited amount of car usage. For the simple fact that gas is bad for the earth. In many way to some people this may be untrue. But I think that the limited amount of car usage would be great for the earth. My reason being is that car's make people excersize less, causes smog , bad for the enviroment.\n\nTo begin with, i think that limited amount of car usage is good for lazy people. I mean people will waste gas just to drive 3 minutes to a store when you could walk to save gas. It really makes no sense that a average person could be so lazy. You can be doing two good things at one time. By just walking for your health and saving up on gas,The text says,\"Many experts expect public transport serving suburs to play a much larger role.\n\nNext, I think it is a good idea because it wont cause so much smog which is a bad thing for the air. According to the text,\"Paris has banned driving due to smog Paris enforced a partial driving bad to clear the air of the global city\". The last thingwe need to do is be breathing in dirty air and pretty much gas. Almost 4,000 drivers were fined. Twenty seven people had there cars impounded for their reaction to the fine.\n\nAlso, My final reason is that it is bad for the enviroment. Luckily The text says,\"President Obama's ambitious goals to curn the united states\". Its about time some one point out the wrong honestly in my opnion if i was president i would ban driving to unless your like traveling to a far out state or your work is really far. I think that is should not be allowed.\n\nSo to sum it all up, I think that a limited amount of car usage would be good for the enviroment. And have a good impact on the world. Once again my reasons for it is that make's people excersize less, causes smog , bad for the enviroment. So my fellow citizens think about what you are doing to the world and how it not only effects us but how it also effects you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the Story \"Unmasking the Face on Mars.\" The face on mars has apparently been founded in 1976, NASA claimed the the face was formed by a alien, Here is were I come in, The world had made a bunch of movies including aliens from mars, Mars, for hundreds maybe thousands of years have been the 'Aliens home'. Why I think that this 'face' Is just a natural formis because, take the moon for example, there is a whole bunch of hilly things on there, It just so happened that there is a rock on mars that looks like a face. Malins team captured an extraordinary photo using the cameras absolute maximum resolution.\n\nThat is how they captered the 'face' on mars, Of course there it's gunna be an extraordinary thing that there is a face on mars, There are so many thing in the world that are strange and no body seems to find those strange, maybe it's because the 'face' specificly takes place on mars.\n\nhuge rock formation . . . which resembles a human head . . . formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\n\nThis supports my claim because maybe the 'face' is a rock that just so happened to look like a face, NASA sometimes takes things to far when it come to things like these. huge rock formation....\" It basically says that the rock is a formation \".......giving the illusion......\" IT also stated that the rock gave an illusion that is has eyes, nose, And a mouth. I clearly gives out that opinion that if you put it together you get \"A huge rock formations giving the illusion.........\" and so on.\n\nI also think that The 'face' Is just a rock the looks like a face, clearly I stated that. Lets just break it down The face is a rock, which apeared on mars, NASA said it gave the illusion that it was a face, NASA also believes that since it was on mars, Aliens created it. Thats what you get when you break down the story, Even if it was created by aliens, who cares, its a rock, there is nothing special about it exept how it looks like a face, just because it was on mars doesn't mean aliens created it. I know being creative is an amazing thing but it's just a rock the formed into a face, just like how over times 300 million years ago when dinosaurs exists the earth was whole, and over time it TRANSFORMED into what it has become now. Notice how i used the word transformed, ...\"over time it transformed .....\" in the text... \"Huge rock FORMation.\" It is just a rock thats looks like a face, and just because it's on mars don't mean a thing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "He tells us that venus shows signs of once having life and watter because of all the hills and mountains and valeeys and craters. and since venus was the second earth like planet it makes sense since earth is home to all these life forms and all these metal and materials. and the examples are scattered through out the article and are actually very fascinating and cool because its weird to think other plnets couldve helped life forms other then earth itself. this article was pretty fun and im so glad i got to read it and learn from it. but the thing about this is i learned so much more about venus and what it is like on there with the sulfur acid and the hot temperatures and the prssure on it and how a human would die instantly but how scientist are finding ways to look at the planet without anything getting destroyed or damage. life is so amazing if you rell just stop to look at it and have time to realize how lucky we are to have all these things next to us in our own life and what we will have in the after life in heaven with God himself and how everything we do will pay off and we'll have endless peace and hope forever.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "NASA has gotten so many questions about this face on mars. Is it created by aliens , is it a sign ? So many question unanswered to world about this face made about the unknown. People have wanted answers and\n\nI'm a NASA scientist will give it to them as truthful as I can.\n\nFirst question , Is this face made by aliens ? Most common question of all , NASA isn't really for sure if aliens made this becuase we still don't have proof of alien life or life on Mars. We haven't went to down on Mars to detect it or scan it . See if it was a rock formed by Mars itself or was it just there before and we haven't noticed it .\n\nNext question, Is this an sign by the unknown and if it is what would earth do\n\nor NASA ? NASA has already think that\n\nthis face remind this of a natural landform on earth but we are not sure if this is an sign from what you may call it the unknown. If is was an sign from the unknow , we would probably go check it out and see if there any life on Mars form this to appear.\n\nFinally question , Do you NASA scientist believe that Mars made this on it own ? Mars could have made this on it own, but we are going with that thorie until we go check it out scan it , run test the whole nine yard before we go with something we are not sure about . Mars have made rock own it own before or it can be just an meator land then and made it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "we shouldnt be able to use this technology on the every day human.\n\ndue to the passage to the left we can calculate peoples emotions.\n\nda vinci used this algrithm when he was painting mona lisa.\n\ndue to dr huang it is all about the muscle expressions. we can normally tell when our friend is stressed out or upset. but we shouldnt use this because it is invasion of privacy. if someone wants someone to know how they feel then they will tell somebody to tell emotion you have to know how the muscles move it is calle the zygomatic major(muscles that begin at cheek bone. it should not be used in the classroom because again it is bacicly invasion of privacy and should not be used if something is wrong with a student then someone should let a counceler know and let them talk to the student not use technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "computers benefit society hotly debated topic among citizens town Many argue computers provide quick easy communication help children adults learn even teach balancing habits generation I firmly believe computers necessary society I miss words working overseas two years One ways contact father Communication extremely important society brings families friends closer together Computers provide variety forms communication instant messaging ORGANIZATION allows people called visual phone conversation A tearyeyed says CAPS since wife died daughter companion With I hear voice every day see face It never fails make smile instant messaging also give society fast easy communication others Invitations announcements quick hello done Therefore computers important communication society Have seen look child s face heshe learns something new Computers provide excellent variety education society For example toddlers children use programs CAPS programs teach reading writing speaking children CAPS child used toddler says resident teachers impressed reading writing skills I could nt proud Computers nt teach children teach adults Did know adults learn knowledge environment politics basic information computer Computers needed help people learn society Finally computers teach balance A mom says CAPS teenager learned balance computer life I definitely see connects areas balance well teenagers learn balance computer time also learn balance extracurricular activities school This shows result students actually learn responsibility computers I hope society consider fact computers necessary provide commonication teach education help kids learn balance lose Computers certainly improve society", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Smart cars may sound smarter than a human being but how smart are they? Smart cars are suppose to be driverless and use less fuel. In my opionion smart cars should not be developed. A smart car can have a technical difficulty and cause an accident and the fault could be said to be the drivers when it never was. This can bring conflict with the driver and the company of the car which can lead to bad consiquences. The car should not be developed becuase it can have techincal difficulties, have a high cost, they take away the fun of driving and learning.\n\nSmart cars should not be deveploed becuase it can fail on something and have techincal difficutlies. The car may not sense something around its surroundings and won't be able to alert the driver on time causing an accident. It can also have failing on the GPS and go a wrong way. The worst casesenerio would be the steering wheel locking and the driver would not be able to control the car if something was to happen. Smart cars may seem smart and safe but technology doesn't always work how it is suppose too.\n\nAnother reason why smart cars would not be a good developement would be the cost of the car. The car may be very high at price and wouldnt sell. It could also get a huge donation to get the car started but that money could be a waste by not having a successful project. The car could need something new and it could turn out to be very expensive and won't get fixed being left alone. The car may also need a special street to give it eletrical signal which would be expensive to remake new streets. Smart cars may just be a waste of money.\n\nAnother reason for not developing smart cars is we loose the fun in driving and learning. As a teen, people get excited because they get a new oppurtunity to learn and practice something new. We learn the basics of driving and learn from it. We get more freedom to do things and to go to places. But having a smart car can take that away. A teen won't learn from a mistake they do by not driving and correcting themselves. All a person would do is sit there and wait if anything happens. But a teen can have no knowledge in driving and won't know what to do. And as teens we can easily get distracted and cause an accident if we don't pay attention.\n\nIn conclusion, smart cars shouldn not be deveoloped. A smart car may sound smart and safe but when it comes to the real world technology can mess up and cause accidents. A human being should always have control of its own thibgs that being their life or their car. A smart car's technology can mess up, be very hight at price, and it can take away the fun of driving and learning. Smart cars should not control our driving, we ourselfs should.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System is a good idea. I believe that it has lots of uses. I believe it would be very beneficial to the classroom. I think it could have lots of diffrent applications as well. The military, CIA, and FBI could use this technology to see if someone is lying. The Government could use this technology as a facial recognicion system.\n\nThe classroom would benefit the most from this. As it said in the passage,\" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confuse or bored.\" \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" I think that this would be so beneficial. I think that it would make it much more easier to learn on the computer. I have tried computer courses before and the classes were either very easy or very hard their was no inbetween. However, if the computer was able to see that I looked confused most of the time it could make the class slightly easier. It could also make the class harder if it felt that I wasnt that focused and hurried through the course.\n\nI think the military, FBI, and the CIA could benefit from this technology as well. As it said in the passage,\" to an expert, faces don't lie; these muscles clues are sometims used to spot when a smiling politician or celebrity isn't being truthful.\" This computer software could allow us to interrogate people much more accurately. Instead of allowing a human to interrogate they can allow a computer to do it simpler and more accurately. The likelihood of falsly accusing someone or letting a criminal go would go down because the computer would be able to recognize the lies or other deception.\n\nThe software would be very helpful in the world of security. Every government building, bank, school, etc. could have a facial recognicion system inplace. This would make our lives much more secure and peaceful. This is because the computer would be able to process your face and make sure that you belong where you are trying to go. These would help with crime as well. Lets say a criminal is on the loose. He happens to walk by a business that has one of they by the door, the computer picks up his face and sends a warning to nearby police that this criminal has been spotted. The police are able to apprehend the criminal easily because of this machine.\n\nThis software has many uses throughout our day to day. Children will become smarter becasue the lesson is uniquely tailored to their learning speed and style. The military, FBI, and CIA could accurately interrogate criminals easier. Every building could have a facial recognition making it our lives much more secure. Overall this technology would make our children learn quicker, more effectively but also let them learn in a very safe and secure place.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir author created upbeat mood He clearly grateful family happy childhood He pointed parts home situation could negitive growing cancelled negitive things noting positive aspects situation For example memoir wrote family immigrated United States good jobs Cuba start lowpaying jobs got He said hard found positive way look situation He writing parent s situation taught always work hard never give So overall made could depressing story upbeat happy mode He even made story teach lesson hard work importance family giving others", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are the future. You won't need to buy another car again as long as you have Google's driverless priust. Google is taking transportation to another level.\n\nGoogle has come up with an ideal that may be brilliant. They came up with driverless cars, but they're not completely driverless. They are trying to help people out with road conditions and traffic jams. I think it is a good ideal because most people drice crazy and get nervous when there is a traffic jam or road block. In my opinion I think the car will be safe because in the passage it states \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" In the passage the article also states \"While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver. Google is trying to make the car as safe as possible for all passengers, drivers, and pedestrians. I think everyone should look into Google's ideal and consider giving them a chance with the driverless cars.\n\nSince Google has come up with this ideal, traffic may possibly be more safer for everyone. Google is working hard for everyone's safety.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When came back saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test The authors main porpuse lines wa grab readers attention making continuing paragraph closing shes adapting circumstances Saeng values uniqueness plants also conforted memories homeland", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In article authors mood seemed happy good For example likes parents selfish hard working people tried make life happy He also liked would invite lot people come visit treated like family He also likes tought things know cooking His mood seem change talked Cuba job bit eser New Jersey They tried make much could mood seemed bit worried His mood changed happy menchened loves way treat house like real home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people heard about the amazing viking 1 photo from 1976 tooken by NASA. You might have seen it it when it first happened or it has also been in many movies. The question that everyone is truly asking was, is it made by aliens or is it just a natural landform? Well, it is just a natural landform. It was very common around Cydonia, scientist have proven it, and scientist have checked and done so much research over it many times.\n\nFirst off, it was common around Cydonia. That shows that this is just another thing that we thought that might have a special kind of touch to it, but really it was just done all by itself. In the text it says \"Scientist figured it was just another Martian Mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh.\"(2) This is showing it might look a little different than normal but it is very common. The scientist are showing how they are just like any other Martian Mesa just a little different shapement. Everyone is just wanting it to have a different outcome than what it was.\n\nAlso, scientist have shown their facts to the world. They are trying to prove to people that it is just a natural, common landform. In the text it said \"Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first apprearedon a JPL web site, revealing... a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\"(7) This scientificaly proven that there was no alien landform it was all natural.\n\nLastly, scientist have checked their research and the face many times. They have used different cameras to take pictures of it. They have gotten many angles. They also have taken multiple pictures of the object. They studied each photo carefully. In the text it says \"Mission contollers prepared to look again.\"(9) It also says \"Nevertheless, on April 8, 2001- a cloudless summer day in Cydonia- Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look.\" (10) This is explaining how the scientist didn't just go one time and just take that as an answer. No, they went multiple times. Then, they also made the picture \"3 times bigger than pixel size\"(11) to look at the photo better and bigger.\n\nMany people might say that this is very uncommon to happen in space. However, that is not true. Scientist say that it is actually very common around Cydonia. In the article it states \"scientist figiures it was just another Martian Mesa, common enough around Cydonia\"(2) This is showing how they are common around Cydonia and that there were no aliens involved.\n\nThat is how come it would be considered a natural made landform. It was very common in the Cydonia, so it was not unusual to have a landform like that. Scientist have proven it, they showed it to a bunch of web surfers. They also have checked over it many times, with different equimpment, angles, etc. Do you really think that there are another spieces roaming Mars?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Having failed drivers test really upset Saeng Not moved new country loss grandmother really made thing worse The Hibiscus plant story like symbol It represents life reminds one Vietnam The way memorys come sees flowers shows felt It starting new overcoming obstacles When says hibiscus budding I take test shows starting new making rough times symbolized winter It symbol hardship overcome", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Wow!, many people suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it present. Venus is the planet that is the closest to earth. 97 persent of carbon dioxide blankeds the venus. Our sister planet is very inhospitable.\n\nFirst, Venus is closest to earth. They also says the venus is the seconds planet from the sun. They also says that the Venus is the brightest in the night sky light. In paragraph 1 says that\" In our solar system, Venus is the second planet that is from the sun. Venus can be easly seen from the distance but save vantage point of earth\".\n\nThen, 97 persent of carbon dioxide blankeds the venus. When there is a lots of carbon dioxode blankeds it more challenging. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. The temperature on planet average over 800 degrees fahrenheit, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planets in our solar system, Mercury is closer to the sun but somehow the Venus is the hottest planet.\n\nNext, Our sister planets. Astonomers are fascinated by Venus, Because it may well once has been\n\nthe most earth-like planets in our solar system. Venus still has some features that are analugous to those on earth. Then I think it mean that the Venus is like our earth planet, I wonder if there is a plant on Venus just like earth. NASA has one particular compelling idea for senting human to stusy the Venus.\n\nIn conclution, sciecties suggests people to study the Venus is worthy pursuit despite the dangers it present. They also say that Venus is closest to earth. 97 persent of carbon dioxide blankeds the venus.Our sister planet is very inhospitable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There were many details from the article from Luke's point of veiw that supports convincing others to join th Seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nOne detail from the story that supported it was that World War II happed in Europe. That is an important detail because during or after a war, the counrty is most likely going to be in ruins. Also, in the article, it says, \" many countries were left in ruins. To help these contries recover their food supplies, animals, and more, 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA. UNRRA hired 'Seagoing Cowboys' to take care of horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas.\" That detail is very important because \" Seagoing Cowboys\" are a part of the UNRRA, which is a project that helps recover food supplies for countries that got destryed or maybe in a war. That is very important because those countries were left in ruins, and people were left without food. And some of those peple were already injured.\n\nAnother reason to join the program, is because they get to travel around the world, and have fun doing it to. This is a good reason because lots of people dont like traveling long distances, beacuase they think its boring. But in the article, it says, \" Luke also found time to have fun onboard.\", and \" The cowboys played baseball volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time.\" That detail, supports that you can do activities to help pass time, have fun, and make to trip worth-while\n\nMy last reason to join the program is beacuse you would be helping a lot of needy people. Not only does the UNRRA help lots of people, but so does the 'Seagoing Cowboys' that come along with it. That program also helps a lot because they help feed and take care of animals that other people might not be able to.\n\nThose are my reasons to\n\npersuade someone to maybe join the \"Seagoing Cowboys\". If not the Seagoing Cowboys, then maybe the UNRRA. I hope reasons like these could change someone's mind, and maybe help them join.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke's participation in the Seagoing Cowboys effected his life and how he saw things. He got to see unique things, participate in the recovery of other countries during the war, and it impacted his life forever. Other people who want to help the world should definitely participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nThe first reason why other people should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program is because they would get to help recover other countries from the war.\n\nThe text states, by the time he was discharged in 1947, Luke had made nine trips-the most of any Seagoing Cowboy. On all of those trips, Luke was helping deliver cattle to other countries to recover their food and animal supply. Many countries were in ruins and they needed the help that the Seagoing Cowboys provided.\n\nNext, more people should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program because they would get to see and visit many unique and interesting places around the world. The text states, Luke was able to see the Acropolis in Greece. The text also states, on his many trips, Luke got to take a gondola ride in Venice, Italy. Luke also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China.\n\nFinally, others should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program because it will change their lives. The text states, after his great adventures as a Seagoing Cowboy, Luke's family was lead to host a number of international students for many years. The text also states, this experience opened up the world to Luke. Luke also got to bond with new people on board the SS Charles W. Wooster. He got to spend lots of time with them including times of playing volleyball, baseball, fencing, and many more activities to help pass time.\n\nThis shows why more people should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. They would get to see unique things, participate in the recovery of other countries during the war, and impact thier lives forever.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wanted a job on sea? Maybe a job on sea including animals? Well, if that is what you would like then sign up for \"Seagoing Cowboys\". This job will let you take care and be with the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped over sea.\n\nAs being a \"Seagoing Cowboy\" then you could do a lot of things on the job. On the job you get to feed and nurture the animals everyday. The animals will have a certian liking to you right away if you take that job! When being a Seagoing Cowboy you get to travel a lot! You would get to visit all different types of places and meet a lot of people. The job really opens you up to the world.\n\nNow your probably wondering \" Why should i join this program? It's just a job to be on a boat with a bunch of animals.\" Well I have the answer to that question.\n\nIf you take this job, then you will be considered a hard working and caring person. This job is like no other. Jobs like these aren't offered all the time. It makes you more aware of countries and their needs. Not only countries, this job makes you more aware of the world we live in today.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is exploring and studying Venus a great idea? The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. Human curiosity has gone beyond on willing to do anything to find out how Venus was created and find out the purposes it has, and to also collect any natural resoures it has to study them.\n\nVenus is a challenging planet to study but it is the closet one to Earth. The author compares these two planets by their density and size, including the distance. They go on explaining why it is hard to study Venus by describing the weather and geology, and comparing to Earth's impediments. In paragraph 2, it states, \"... not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades...\" meaning spacecrafts don't even last more than a few hours there because there are possiblities that they might get destroyed and lose researches.\n\nIn paragrapgh 6, it states, \"... researchers are working on innovations that would that would allow machines to last long enough...\"\n\nThis is another reason why researchers work hard on inventing machines that are capable to last in Venus to collect data and resources to bring back on Earth to study them. The author goes on telling us that some electronics have lasted three weeks in that condition and they don't require electricity at all unlike modern devices that are sensitive to extreme physcial conditions.\n\nTo sum it all up, Venus is a worthy pursuit\n\ndespite the dangers to study. This rises up human curiosity in wanting to learn more of Venus. They will take any risk to get close and learn what the planet is made up of and what to use to get information from it. It is proved to be the challenging planet to oberserve closely and why it is risky to do this misssion.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although driverless cars seem unfathomable today, it is likely that they'll be present in the near future. The article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" describes how we see autonomous features in many of the cars that exist presently and advanced development is already underway to fully automate all cars. Based on what I've read in this article, I believe that driverless cars should be available for practical uses because it would be the next chapter in modern automobile history, their safety advantages, and their ability to improve the effiency of society.\n\nCars have been progressing and advancing ever since they were created in the early twentieth century. As stated in the article, the gradual improvements of\n\ncomputer hardware and sensors have made cars safer and easier to drive. The advances that allowed automakers to utilize speed sensors in the creation of antilock brakes are leading to the many advantages that would be seen in autonomous vehicles. Cars that are able to drive themselves make perfect sense considering the technological advances we see in many of modern society's aspects. Driverless cars would just be the correct and next step toward in the history of the automobile.\n\nNot only would fully autonomous cars be historic, they would be much safer than any of today's vehicles. We see features of a driverless car in many of today's automobiles. They'd be similar to the BMW's \"Traffic Jam Assistant\" or how drivers' seats in GM cars vibrate when there is danger of backing into objects. Although the cars that include these features cannot fully take over for the driver, they're sort of what to expect when we actually see fully autonomous cars. The human brain simply cannot calculate and formulate a plan as quick as a computer can. Driverless cars would prevent human mishaps error, drastically improving safety. Surely, autonomous cars will decrease the accident rates among drivers.\n\nDriverless cars would also bring about a more efficient society. According to the article, fully autonomous cars would be able to reduce gas consumption and improve public transportation. They'd be as simple as calling for a taxi, but they'd be without the hassle of bus or subway stations. These vehicles would also be as individual as one would prefer, preventing any unwanted intereaction with other humans. Instead of being crammed on a bus with people you don't know, you could have the peace of mind by yourself in a driverless car.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars would be great for society. Autonomous cars would be a logical next step in the automobile's history. They're much safer than any of today's cars, and much more efficient. Driverless cars would make the world a safer and better place to work and live.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The map illstrats the three potential areas for an entertainment center.\noverall, there are two locations on one side of the river and one location on the opposite side of the same river.\nIn the first place is possible to replace to leisure area is a factory, because is close to the river. The second area that could be transformed into an entertainment place is the residential area, which is located on the same side of the organization as the river.\nthe last position that probably exchanges to the area for relation is agriculture which has positioned in the opposite direction of other buildings that has a lot of trees. in addition, there a road betww", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Machines get smarter everyday. It's something most of us see, but may not take into consideration. Think about it. Your search history, your GPS destinations, even your Wifi hotspots. The machines gather information about us to make our lives easier. Most of the times, it's a good thing. They help us by reminding us of things and let us connect to the rest of the world with just a few keystrokes. However, this FACS, would have a major impact in the school system. It would be a terrible decision to implement FACS into the school system.\n\nDon't get me wrong, I love technology. It's improved and become what many consider just a dream. It always us to do many things that we could not do physically. I'd go as far to say that they're smarter than us in a few ways. They give results and they learn more and more about us. To some, that's concerning. To think that machines are secretly learning about human behavior and plotting plans to take care of the world. Most don't care or don't mind. Either way, people have different views on this.\n\nWhich brings me to my new point, implimentation of the Facial Action Coding System in schools. The Facial Action Coding System, or FACS, is a profiler. Profilers monitor how a subject works, thinks, acts, and even feels. Scary, huh? Put that into a school system and you may just have found treasure trove of blackmail. Now, I know what some will say. \"This system will help us help the students\", or \"FACS will help decrease school shootings\". Those individuals make good points, but there's one thing you have to consider. Human behavior. People don't just cough up how they feel most of the time. To have an eye watching them and judging them will only make them hate it more. It may make people feel worse off than they originally were.\n\nI'll end with this. Yes, the system could be beneficial, as long as it's in the right hands. Privacy is a critical part of people's lives and most like it not to be broken into. To have this system in the school system would be a bad call. Especially high schools. Those are some seriously tough times for some, and pushing those people could result in an event. A very bad event.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "At the present time, famous people are more popular for their charm and prosperity than their hard work, which portraits a negative example for the youngsters. This essay agrees with the aforementioned statement. This essay will first, discuss, that youngsters are more attracted to their style and thus undertake harmful activities and further, outline that they follow their bad habits and lifestyle and thus grasp bad habits which spoil their lives. \nIt is clear that young people are mesmerised by the style and physical appearance of movie actors and take steps to adopt their style. This is to say, youngsters get involved in rigorous exercise, strict dieting and having steroids, which will help them to get the physique similar to the actors and actresses, which eventually has a negative effect on their body and health. To elucidate, a recent study conducted by The Times showed that more than 80 percent of young adults suffer from some physical problems as they involve in detrimental activities in order to adopt their style.\nApart from this, young people are magnetized with the lifestyle and parties for the famous people and try to adopt all their negative habits and behaviours which hampers their overall personality. In other words, young people have an opinion that in order to live their life as famous people they follow their footpaths, thus develop habits of drinking, smoking and illegal drugs. As a result, they are not able to build a successful career. To exemplify, a recent study conducted by The Times of India found that more than 60 percent of young adults become addicted to drugs and alcohol by copying famous people.\nTo conclude, the drawbacks of celebrities becoming popular because of their glamorous lifestyle and wealth on young people is that they not only undertake harmful steps to enhance their beauty and physical appearance but also copy their bad habits and behaviours, eventually destroying their lives", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent years, having children later has become an increasingly popular trend. There are several reasons for this phenomenon, and I believe it has some obvious drawbacks for each family and our community. \r\n\r\nThere are two main reasons why more young adults are choosing against having children when they are in the beginning stage of their career. Firstly, instead of embarking on parenthood at an early age, modern women are likely to pursue tertiary education and want to move up their career ladder. If they got married and had a baby, the working mothers would find difficulties in splitting their time to devote working and taking care of their offspring. Secondly, the young childless families may have a strong feeling of self-enjoyment. This leads them to prefer enjoying their life rather than raising children. For example, modern women are apt to take care of their bodies and socialize with their friends better than nurture a child. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, delaying giving birth is no longer every family‘s private affair, but also it strongly affects the survival of a whole nation. This tendency negatively influences old parents and their future kids when the wives decide to have pregnancies. In fact, after 35 years of age, the old mothers may tackle the danger of having a miscarriage or delivering the baby difficultly. Moreover, if there is an easy delivery of the mothers, the babies are prone to be at risk of having Down‘s syndrome. As a result, this can negatively affect the shapers of a nation’s tomorrow and the quality of our future productive workforce. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there are some reasons that many people tend to delay having a baby in their life. Consequently, this might negatively affect each family and our society at large.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Computer Cars\n\nWould want a computer driving your car with your five month baby in the car? I strongly dissagree, I wouldn't let a computer drive my car! I personal think that the Driverless Cars are too risky. Therefore I dissagree with the Driverless Cars because its dangerous, laziness and expensive.\n\nThe Driveless Cars ways are way too dangerous . What happens if the sensors doesn't go back to driver? The car will crash\n\nat some put of the place you going. The driveless Cars gets its battery ran down way too fast and that can be very dangerous, because the car can shut down.\n\nThe car won't be able to you it's\n\ncontact any emergancy savers becuase it wouldn't have any battery.\n\nSecondly , getting a Driverless car is being lazy.\n\nIt's already unhealthly that we drive cars, and now it's going to be an computer driving the car. Some scientisits\n\nbelive that the Driverless Car can cause the world to have everything done by any\n\ncomputer . That mean the world wouldn't be healthly because, everything would be done for us.\n\nThirdly\n\nI think\n\nthe Driveless Car is too expensive. The driverless car cost millions of dollars and that is bad. If the car breaks down it would be even more expensive. I think you shouldn't waste you live savings on that junk !\n\nInconclusion Driverless Cars are stupid! The car is dangerous\n\nand expensive . Driving the car will be", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus being somtimes closer than mars is a way to be able to explore the planet for a short amount of time. \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may have once been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" Why do astronomers want to explore? Because they are trying to find some sufficent materials and may discover things that Venus has but Earth does not. The dangers of exploring Venus do not stop the scientists from wanting to see what is in our solar system. In a few years or decades who know what kind of materials and machines can be made to so that the astronomers can survey and survive on that planet longer than what privious things have lasted due to the 800 degrees Fahrenheit, bad weather, and the dense clouds that have \"highly corrosive sulfuric acid\" in them.\n\nVenus has a vast amount of dangerous weather such as; volcanoes, earthquakes, and strong lightning occuring frequently. This planet could have also had large oceans like Earth has, \"the planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" Due to those similarities, scientists must believe that this planet is very simlier to Earth and want answers. The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) belives that \"sending humans to study Venus\" is benifical to NASA's work and studies on Venus.\n\n\"NASA’s possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape.\" as NASA tries to find a way not the put harm in their men and women traveling is by working towards new and inventive ways to reduce the harm levels. \"At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth.\" The temurature difference is a major concern for NASA, they are wanting to try and stay above sea level here on earth but traveling to another planet and decifering the sea level and comparing it to Earth may be a challenge.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that when the people of the United States vote for the president it be should be deicided by the popular vote adn not the Electoral College. I shall give you a few examples why. And you might just think like i do.\n\nFirst, I think the president should be chosen by the popular vote because then all the poeple in that state will have a say not just someone else chosing for them. Most people usually chose for themselves because they have the right. Everybody should have a say not just\n\n\"the qualified citizens\"\n\nwriten in source one.\n\nSecondly, yes people make bad and somtimes terribles mistakes but thats what we do. The Electoral College has flaws just like anyone or anything else. Like in source two\n\n\"the single best argument agaisnt the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor.\"\n\neven they make mistakes sometimes.\n\nSo yes the electoral college might be useful but it can also be very jugdemental. don't you think you have the choice to choose who leads this country? Maybe you don't but some do.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some opine people that have own transportation vehicles have more responsibility to paying taxes for oils and this opinion might push individuals have dropped their desire for having unnecessary for buying cars for tackling climate change, however, it seems an extremely radical view to correct human behaviour, due to the fact, suppression and attack dreams and desires of people is not a real solution for avoiding unwanted harmful footprint us, so, I am going to explore a topic and give my solution for that.\r\n\r\nIn a beginning, it is a fact that our nature is a shared precious wealth for all creatures, so there is a sense that we must protect it, consequently, each person must pay their own duty to preserve and build a flourished environment, due to this reason, tax is designated for residents who can be able to have an active role in their lands, regarding this, public and private transportation are critical factors which changing our earth, consequently, everyone that has a personal vehicle would pay taxes on oil, furthermore, policymakers would prefer to increase the amount of taxes for preventing unwanted impacts by private transportation, however, they should know radical rules will cause dissatisfaction for a long time.\r\n\r\nSecondly, suppressing needs and desires is a way to educate people, so, it would not be extreme on that, because, many men and women are big fans of their own vehicles, in addition, they enjoyed driving a car, so, high taxes on private vehicles might send a message to them that government has been ignored they're wanted and it will become a start point of complication and would grow in depth and wide scale.\r\n\r\nIn my insight, as my recent experiences in Canada, I found some returning shopping stores where you can borrow products like clothes and return them in two months, so, there is a way to release the stress of the population to have different clothes and give them opportunities making flexible decisions, so, it would seem a form of correction behaviour in our society and has not a negative effect.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, paying more money to the government as a tax is not a suitable solution to prevent human interruption in nature, besides, extreme suppression and mandatory rules have harmful effects on the interaction between society and policymakers, so, we must try other routes to tackle this critical situation in peace and wisdom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "First off i would like to tell you what a electoral college is. It is a process when a compromise between election of the president by a vote in congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. The founding fathers established it in the constitution.\n\nThe process consist of the selection of the electors where they vote for president and vice president, and the counting of the electoral votes by congress. The elctoral college consist of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president.\n\nEach canidate running for president in tour state has his or her own group of electors. The electors are chosen by the canidatespolitical party, but state laws vary on how the electors are selected and what their responsibilities are.\n\nThe presidential electon is held every four years on a tuesday after the first monday in november. We help choose our states electors when we vote for the president because wahen we vote for our canidates we are voting for our canidates electors.\n\nWe have to save the electoral college because we have to have 270 electoral votes to have a president. If we got ride of it there would be no president or we would have to come up with an idea related to the electoral college. Thats why we should keep the elctoral college.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir talking boy s life parents living nice people I think authors mood would like happy Nice caring people rude Its careing love happiness", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concluded story paragraph make clean slate like started So past longer haunts Saeng sounds bit relief takes mom plate I believe feels better end paragraph sounds sure She sounds certain sounds want start says snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test again To sounds like brand new person Who forgotten past", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The line graphs compare the enrollments of students from overseas and local areas in Australian universities between 2001and 2010.\nIt is clear that the total number of enrollment of local students was always higher than that of overseas students. While the commencing number of local students remained stable, the number of the enrollments of students from overseas saw an upward trend.\nIn 2001, while the commencing figure for enrollments of students from overseas was approximately 16000, the number of those coming from local regions was around 170000, more than 10 times of the figure for the former. There was a huge gap from the total number of students enrolled from overseas and local areas in 2001, with 20000 and 400000 respectively.\nOver the period of 10 years, the commencing line of enrollment of local students remained relatively stable, with the highest number peaking at 220000 after a small rise in 2002, seeing a slightly decline to the same figure of 2001 and reaching to 200000 in 2010. The commencing number of overseas students witnessed a dramatical rise from 16000 in 2001 to about 40000 in 2010. The total number of overseas students also showed a drastical increase, soaring to the summit of 81000 in 2010 while the total enrollments number of local students increased from the original 400000 to the peak at 600000 in 2007 and remained a four-year consecutive same figure in 2010.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author tells how Venus is worth going to see as a challenge because no one has manned to stay on the surface for more than a few hours to see how it is and see the challenge of it because in paragraph 2 it says \"not a single spaceship has touched down on venus in more than three decades\".\n\nVenus is a planet close to earth it is a planet where not many people go to see for reasons like its dangerous,, its average over 800 degrees fahrenheit that not many people survive going to see it, its powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes but the NASA still send people to study it.\n\nVenus is dangerous because of its tempeture and hoe risky it is but the NASA has ideas of still sending people up there to study it like for example in passage 5 \"Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\"\n\nits telling how they can still go up there to study it the just have to make there spaceships out of silicon carbide and they say in passage 7 \"it last for three weeks in such conditions\" so there making ideas and plans how to get up there to still study it cause its important to then and they look at it as a challenge.\n\nIn \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author is saying explore it but then he is saying be safe at the same time because of the danger that can happen but he wants you to still look at it as a challenge and see if you can do it or not because there is people still studying it and still making plans to do it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the FACS is a wonderful idea. Because we all get bored in class but when the teacher asks why sometimes we don't really even know why. Reading our emotions is like reading our mind it shows someone else what were thinking right through our facial expression. To support why it is such a good idea in paragraph 6 i read \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" That's really cool, learning could be fun agaain. Maybe there is a reason were not learning anything because it is boring. We need a reason to pay attetion. Not because we need to learn but because we want to. I also read in paragraph 5 \"For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\" What if we don't eben know our own emotion maybe this is what we need someone to help us not only in the classroom but outside of school.\n\nIn conclusion to what i have wrote i think that the FACS is a wonderful idea because all the good it can do for students in need of that extra help in learning. Figuring out why things are boring and what teachers can do about it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driveless cars are coming. Whether you will buy or support this new idea or not is your choice. I think driveless cars are going to be the new thing everyone will enjoy. Getting around will be easier, and everyday life will seem a little less chaotic. Even though you may get bored and want to drive, you may now text without your life being at stake as it says in the last sentence of paragraph eight. The question that may pop up in a lot of consumers mind is what if something goes wrong wit the system of the driveless car? Manufacters not only want the people to be safe but want their product to sell as well as the story quotes in paragraph 8, last line. Why sell something messed up to the people to have them get seriously injuried and then no one buy it because of its bad reviews? Therefore, I believe manufacters would test and secure its driveless car product for safety before putting it out there on the market. When running late for work or school, you can easy just have your car start and drive as you are preparing for a meeting, answering missed calls or texts, or simply applying today's makeup for school. This also gives you a chance to sleep in later and be more rested. There are so many teens and adults who lose lives because of people who slip a text and look down from the wheel for five seconds. This could stop with driveless cars. With the growing software and media over the years, engineers have managed to do the impossible that we only see on television in the movies as it says in paragraph two. As it states in paragraph nine, \"most driving laws focus on keepng drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawakers know that safety is achieved with alert drivers.\" The driveless car law would not pass if this was going to fail or become reckless. We grow closer to driveless cars each waking day. In paragraph ten, it is said that Tesla has projected a release for a car capable for driving autopilot ninety percent of the time. You would still have to pay attention to the road but at least you would have more time to yourself. In 2020, Nissan, Audi, and Mercedes Benz plan to have cars that can drive themselves wihtout the work of a human. Imagine a world where there would be less accidents because of texting or new drivers scared on the road. Please take this new idea into consideration, and think. Our technolgy is already so sophisicated now, what would it be like after driveless cars making our world more organized and better?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "always place choice travel whenever parents question I would like go The rolling green hills stunning sunsets thrilling thunderstorms certainly large part reason go idea seeing side family overpowers reasons The core family always friendly smile caring personality sharp sense humor makes friends acquaintances wherever goes Yet due fact live hundreds miles apart I m able see three times year family drives house twice every drives grandparent s house weeks I cherish every moment I spend especially accidentally makes fool causes hysterics A summers ago I traveled check town s antique flower shops dinner We spent hours driving around town scoping shops raid gems either must already oldfashioned homes I lost interest first hours antique shopping never passion mine I ready take one hour trip back go swimming cousins Once spent money couple treasures hours later exhausted prepared head home happened upon pizza shop main street Our mouths watered thought eating slice rather going inside eat ordered pizza take home bake instead In white pickup pulled shop s parking lot leaving I inside grabbed pizza Upon return minutes later aroma pizza wafted cab making mouths water desire get home grow exponentially placed pizza back seat grabbed coffee revved engine We lost thoughts sneaking slice pizza suddenly front tires pick dipped thumped onto road nearly dropped hot coffee lap panicked grabbed handle door reflex We flabbergasted stunned little kids trying grasp nt exist Moments initial panic realized accidentally driven curb We burst laughter poor redrose face apologetic smile wider She cautiously drove traffic laughing hysterically tears sea blue eyes along I Our hysteria episode lasted minutes time pulled vacant parking lot none us wanted another unplanned adventure road I wiped tears eyes trying stifle laughter recompose still giggling wiping mascara face turned around look She locked bright eyes mine smiled sweetly could burst hysterics After next small hysterical episode finally able pull back onto street rest civilization As pulled cautiously I burst CAPS run anymore curbs drew another round laughter always laughter tears Because family natural bond Yet without laughter bond would nearly close glued together currently Hundreds miles farmland open road separates us The occasional phone calls emails communicate My caring humorous loving person I ever encountered I unfortunately nt get spend much time I would like But every time I see I smile think comical stories Without humor laughter share bond would close would clueless current world joy", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is sometimes called the \"Evening Star\" when it is no star at all. Venus is a planet right next to Earth. The author provides examples of the advantages of exploring Venus such as getting a better understanding of Venus, its the closest planet to Earth, and its the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. The author believes a worthy pursuit is to study Venus despite the dangers it poses.\n\nFirst of all, exploring Venus would give us a better understanding of this planet and why it is important we study it. On the planet surface of Venus the tempertures average over 800 degrees, and because of the dense atmosphere most forms of light cannot be penetrated. In the article it states, \"If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface? Astromomers are fascinated by Venus becuase it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system...recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel.\" With the author adding this in his article it proves that studying Venus could benefit the human race in the long run.\n\nSecond of all, Venus is the closest planet to Earth. This gives Earth advantages of being able to send out a spacecraft to land on Venus. The article says, \"Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too, Eath, Venus, and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. These differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus. Because Venus is sometimes right around the corner...humans have sent numerous spacecrafts to land on this cloud-draped world.\" With this in the article it shows that being able to send out spacecraft to Venus expands the curiosity and imagination of scientists wanting to explore Venus.\n\nFinally, Venus is the most Earth- like planet in the solar system. In the artice it describes, \"Long ago, Venus was provably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Eath. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" This proves that Venus could of been just like Earth today.\n\nIn conclusion, the authors suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despute the dangers it presents. The author gives us evidence of why its important such as, we would expand our understanding of Venus, it is the closest planet to Earth, and its the most Earth-like planet in the solar system. There is no garantee that the study of Venus will continue, but there are many reasons why it should.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Books books well magazines music movies etc therefore one purpose right To read well thats I thought Even though books magazines even movies might offend people nt mean tooken shelf I think nt tooken shelves Beacuse someone like wrote someone like probably even willing read Though sometimes books magazines inappropriate offend people nt mean remove entirely sometimes people need read things completely comfortable Because reading things nt know entirely sometimes helps learn bad things It also helps prevent kids smoke drugs hear look things experience Books magazines offend people telling nt want hear Even though want hear drugs sexual content always going surroundings children see experience Putting book magazine drugs libraries going make kids people try drugs Its people ca nt control get around see even hear It s called self control people people nt Reading book drugs prevent things like happening So I think libraries leave books shelves If people nt want see local libraries nt need pick book magazine watch movie These books magazines movies help us become stronger people They also help us community try stay clean These books important community read nt ever get tendency bad things This I think books offend people shouldt removed libraries The libraries need move books magazines another section library nt want see accidentally read something could possibly offend This could help people avoid things Libraries need keep books magazines movies shelf Just today local library", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Despite the dangers that Venus holds, scientists are still pursuing futher exploration onto the surface. Many spacecrafts have traveled to Venus but none have lasted more than a few hours in the tretorous climate. Temperatures on the planet's surface average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit and a thick atmosphere of 97 percent carbon dioxide surrounds Venus. Aside from the high heat and pressure, Venusian geology and weather add additional issues. Earthquakes and erupting volcanoes impede the surface, and frequent lightning strike the probes seeking to land. Even though Venus is inexplicably dangerous, the unanswered questions, the close proximity and relativity to Earth keep scientists pursuing Venus and its dangers.\n\nVenus may be close to Earth, but climate and weather impedes traveling to the planet. Since it is hard to get to Venus, it is hard to answer the many questions that both the community and scientists ask themselves. Unanswered questions, make Venus worthy of further exploration. Presently Venus is inhospitable, but the realization that it once supported oceans and various forms of life keep scientists interested. The only forms that are similar to Earth, are the moutains, valleys, and craters that form there.\n\nSome would think that being in such close proximity to Venus, it would be easy to explore, whether it be from a telescope or fresh pictures taken from a rover, but that is not the case. The powerful weather and other impediments, keep the spacecrasfts from landing on the surface for more than a few hours. Also, Venus has the hottest surace temperature of any other planet in the Milky Way solar system, even though Mercury is closer to the sun.\n\nScientists have found out that in the past, Venus supported land masses, oceans, life forms, and other things relating to Earth, but the question still stands, how did it become the harsh planet scientists explore today? The structures that still stand such as moutains, serve as a purpose to further explore Venus. It proves that once Venus was just like Earth and Earth could one day become like Venus is now.\n\nFurther exploration of Venus could help scientists learn more about what happened to Venus and why it became a heated wasteland. Venus used to be just likde Earth before what happened? Over time, Venus' climate became significantly hotter and the life forms and most of the surface structure dissapeared.\n\nThough Venus is extremely dangerous, the questioning scientists, the past relativity and close proximity to Earth, keep exploration to Venus still possible", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am against this topic. I am against this topic, because I think it will distract the students. I say this, because they will be trying to change their emotiones to get diffrent things. I think it violates their privacy and other things. Now days it tis not hard to hack into a computor and take pictures of the person on the other side.\n\nThis FACS thing will probaly encourage the person to hack into a computor and change the pop ups or the emotions based of the other persons emotions. It could lead to people making the computor say special things to make a person happy about themselves, but it could lead to them talking the other person to meet them outside school. What is your thoughts?\n\nI am strongly against this topic, because if I was a parent I would not want my kid using this product. I say this, because there are a lot of creepy, crazy, and a stalker. It could be used to lead the child to do a surtain thing. The pop ups chould lead the child to see or do bad things. The pop up could be changed by a hacker if they want. They could tell them to do drugs or drink under age. This is all bad for a kid. I would never want my kid to do any of that if I was a parent. I would never want my kid if they were old enough to drive and get drawn into drinking by a pop up ad and then kill someone, because they where drinking and driving.\n\nAnother reason I am against this is for the teachers side of things. Say you where a teacher and had FACS on the computor and all your students where changing their emotions to get diffrent pop ups. There your students are destracted and are not listening to your lecture or lesson for the day. Then you have to stop class and get onto the students. Then you may have a kid tell his mom or dad you yelled and told the class to stop goofing around. With their emotions. Then they call the school and you then have to go to a meeting about what happened. Then you will have to try not to get into trouble by the state or you head leader. This could cause a lot of disruptions in the class and they will not get the education that they are there for. I am not saying that there is not already a lot of destractions alreadyby phones, talking, and chromebooks. It is not going to be as bad as emotion based pop ups.\n\nFor the muscle and painting part of the passage. I think it had no relavents to the main idea of emotion based pop ups. Back then when the Mona Lisa was painted they didn't have computors or advanced technology. It could of been stated a little bit diffrent. Like\" Mona Lisa never rarly smiled, but now as technology advanced and we now know that muscles change our facial emotions.\"\n\nIt then could help the scientific side of the FACS. Like now we know that your muscles help you change facial emotions. This then could help us then have more emotion based pop ups. This may sound like I am for they FACS, but I not for it. It is a vilation of privacy. What if the kid is having very bad thought like death or harm. Which is a very bad thing in teens today. This could lead to those bad pop ups again.\n\nAll in all I thing this FACS should be outlawed in the U.S. and other countrys. I thing it could be used in a bad way. If I was a parent I would never ever let my kid use this FACS. I thing it coul sway my kids thinging and ideas. Also it would affect why they are at school. I sent them to school for an education, so they can get a could job. If I was a parent I would never want to see my kid on the crime life.\n\nWhat are your thoughts? I am a strong against this topic.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In 1976 the first image of \"The Face on Mars\" was captured. NASA's Viking 1 was circling the planet when it spotted the likeness of a human face. Nearly two miles from end to end the face was from a region called Cydonia. Scientists figured it was just another mesa, landforms common in this area. When NASA released the picture to the public it became a pop icon. Some people think the Face is evidence of life on Mars, however, NASA disagrees.\n\nConspiracy theorists feel that the Face's true reason for existence is something that NASA would rather hide. In the mean time NASA's budget defenders wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars. Finding such a thing would greatly benefit NASA and hel them in many ways. Therefore, if the Face really was proof of life on Mars, NASA wouldn't be hiding it, they would be announcing it for their own good.\n\nOn April 5,1998, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team snapped another picture ten times sharper than the original photos. The new image first appeared on the JPL web site, revealing that the Face was in fact a natural landform, not an acient alien civilization. However, conspiracy theorists were still not satisfied due to the fact that it was a cloudy time of the year on Mars. NASA prepared to look again and captured a final picture on April 8,2001. What the pictured shows is a mesa, landforms common around the American West.\n\nOf the three images NASA snapped of the Face, none of them show any alien monuments or civilizations. The increased pixel sizes would have picked up any objects on the ground such as pyramids or planes. There is no reason for NASA to believe they discovered anything other than a common natural landform. The only difference is that this landform has unusual shadows that make it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nobody is a stranger to the fact that we live in a digital world. Many experts contend that over the next 10 years, robots will take over the jobs in many industries, which are currently done by people. To my way of thinking, there are both pros and cons to this proposal in equal measure. \r\n\r\nThere are many advantages, if you ask me, to this situation. In the first place, it increases work productivity at the workplace. Machines can work much longer hours than human employees without taking breaks. Their result is much more efficient and far more accurate than employees. People may make mistakes at work, but machines do not. Added to this, they do not have to be paid. Some occasional repairs are may be required over the long periods. This saves a great amount of money for businesses. For instance, many supermarkets in many countries use automatic customer check-out points, which avoid hiring many workers. \r\n\r\nBe that as it may, the downsides of this phenomenon, if you ask me, are just as big. For one thing, it raises the unemployment rate. People who lose jobs because of this will have no income and therefore no money to spend. This could cause serious consequences for the economy. To name but one example, governments cannot get taxes from individuals. As a result of this, governments do not have enough funds for schools, hospitals, public transport and many other facilities and infrastructure. It follows to stand, therefore, that the quality of all essential services will suffer. \r\n\r\nTurning to my own experience, the way things are when it comes to this issue in my country, China, is the same as it was across the world over. My home city of Shanghai is a classic case in point. Here, many factories use robots to make products. Many workers cannot find jobs due to the higher preferences for machines in industrial sectors. \r\n\r\nAt the end of the day, there are merits and drawbacks to all choices we make in life. It is very important that governments play a role in creating enough employment opportunities for humans. This will develop their societies in a much more sustainable way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph wants emphasize girl completly dissatisified leaving home He ended wanted hope learn love new home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, with gas prices skyrocketing, along with prices of new cars, it is logical for any person to invest their time in the use of public transportation or carpooling. As you can see in this passage, many countries have already begun to take a stand to protect our planet by limiting car usage to reduce the amount of gas emissions. America as a country needs to find a way to get involved as well.\n\nIn Vauban, a city in Germany almost all homeowners have given up their cars and turned to bicycling and walking to get where they need to go. Paris upholds a fine where people who have even-numbered license plates are allowed to drive on Monday's and odd-numbered plates on the next day. If a motorist did not abide by this rule they were forced to pay a $31 fine. Also, in Bogota, Colombia, the nations capital participate in an annual \"Day Without Cars\". Only buses and taxis were permitted and violaters faced $25 fines.\n\nIn America, transportation is the second largest source of gas emission, us as a country to take a stand to change that and protect our planet. With the rise in new technologies of things like cellphones and smartphones, cellphones now have car-pooling apps where it's as easy as clicking abutton to find a ride to work without driving your own car. It's also beneficial to you because you don't have to spend your money on gas, tolls and other fees. It's very simple to catch a ride on a bus or train as well, its cost efficient and good for the enviroment. Getting rid of your car altogether is beneficial in more ways than one. You don't have to worry about the cost to maintain your cost for things like repairs and insurance. And of course, you dont have to spend as much as $200 a month on gas.\n\nCountries around the world have begun to use their resources to limit the amount of car usage. In just simple ways like carpooling or taking a bus or a train, each person can help in making a change to our world to save our atmosphere from pollution.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the author supports the idea because its good to find out about a new planet when we need to move form ours. I think taking risks for mankind is good because what will happen when our would is almost gone and we need a place to stay. I think we need to explor to because it will also help with knowing things and see if there are living things there as well. I think this because lots of sientits are looking at the planet and studying it and making all the obserations that they can make from just looking at it. I feel like when we do send things to that planet we are not finging anything else i think they ned to send people to that planet but be 30 miles away so nothing happens to anyone and nobody gets hurt or dies. Despite the dangers i think it is a very good cause.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The reason Luke joined the Seagoing Cowboys was so he could help rebuild people's home so they wpouldnt have to move to different countries. The purpose of the Seagoing Cowboys was to bring livestock and food for the livestock so they could live and eat so they wouldn't to stay without shelter.\n\nfood so they brought and the reason luke knew how to do all that hard work was because he helped out a bunch on his aunt's farm with cattle and horses and on Lukes second trip he was a watchman at night so no one would steal i would think.\n\nThen later on that night he ended up breaking some ribs because he crashed into the metal strip on the side of the ship so he wouldnt fall in the ocean. Whenever he got free time with the other cowboys the played baseball and volleyball then they'd go back to work . and then he figured out what being a Seagoing Cowboy mean't to secure people's needs and and helps citizens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author is writing about why Venus should be explored despite the dangers it has to offer. The article that the author has written goes over the challenges of getting to Venus are and what could be possible to succed in getting to the planet.\n\nThe author spends the first three paragraphs of the article going over the dangers and complications of getting to Venus. The fourth paragraph is when the author really starts to explain why going to Venus would be a good idea. The claims that the author is making are not as strong as they could be though. Points such as,\n\n\" Venus still has some some features that are analogous to those on Earth.\" and \"The planet has a surface of rocky sediment that includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" are only describing what the plantet looks like, not giving reasons as to what the planet has to offer. Many of the points given by the author are the negatives of trying to go to Venus, making it seem like the author is against trying to go. The points included are \" no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours,\" and the mention of \"the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere\". The author also goes into the facts of what make Venus probably the most dangerous planet in our solar system, including the surface temperature being the hottest out of all the planets at over 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure being 90 times greater than our own planet. Even if we were to get to the planet the author states that, \"most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective.\"\n\nWithin the article there are very great points made and the author definetly did research, but there is just not enough evidence to support good reasons to face the dangers of Venus.The article overall provides many facts, but not enough to convince that the author supports the idea of studying Venus up close.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear newspaper editor I think internet computers houses We chat friends family noone would get bored nothing learn new things different websites We able communicate friends family people school think computer good For example friend moved could nt talk phone It long distance I talk facebook There lot websites talk like facebook twitter even myspace even skype skype webcam talk threw My mom said friends chat online It nt matter old Anyone learn important things There lot websites educational things computer worth If old ca nt go school go google type math term science even learning new language Everytime I social studies homework I go online trust s really helpful Some things computer fun You wo nt get bored type games A lot parents complain children bad things streets The kind things bored people think statement true If computer playing games talking friends would like two state people go computer others states Remember s fun Everyone enjoys computer I think internet access lot things people think s bad everything We computer chat friends learn important interestings things wo nt get bored I hope made mind decided internet access waste time I m one thinks computer keeps alive", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays more and more people want to live by themselves. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative trend?These days a vast majority of people want to lead an independent life. The fundamental reason lies in people’s educational qualifications that fuel their craving for freedom in life. This can be seen as a positive trend because living alone is likely to nurture a mature mindset at early stages of one’s life.Many people are well educated to stand up on their own. Tertiary education broadens their horizons, and they wish to experience freedom of life. With a very good educational background it becomes easier to find a well-paid job, and with lucrative income they gain confidence to lead an independent life, thereby achieving their goals. For example, engineering graduates can find a job in another town and their salary is enough for them to move and settle down there. This enables them to move away from their family and live on their own.Living alone helps one to develop maturity, which can be seen as a positive impact on individuals and the society as a whole. Being independent means young people have to face life challenges alone and going through this process improves their resilience. They become more responsible, as they have to take care of themselves and develop budgeting skills and saving habits, for their future needs as well. Better planning of their finances nurtures the custom of wise spending at early stages of adult life.In conclusion, the reason why many people wish to live independently these days is because their education level gives them both the awareness of freedom in life and means of achieving it. Since living alone promotes one’s maturity, it seems to be a positive trend in today’s society.This response covers the task requirements by addressing the two parts of the question, why people choose to live alone and whether this is a positive trend. The ideas are clearly explained and supported, the information is organised in paragraphs in an easy to follow way, and the level of coherence is adequate. A range of complex sentence forms is used and there are no grammatical errors. Overall, this essay is likely to score Band 8 in IELTS.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent times, the development in the field of robotics has increased rapidly and its prevalence can be noticed in many places. Many believe robots are crucial for human development whereas some argue they have a negative effect on society. This essay would discuss both views with empirical evidence and conclude with my opinion.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, artificial intelligence is one of the greatest milestones achieved by humans. They can be used to study places which are inaccessible to humans. For instance, the world-renowned rover Curiosity, was sent to Mars for a detailed analysis of the planet's features. Without robotic technology, it would take another decade to achieve this feat. Hence, this technology plays a vital role in the development of mankind.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, robotic machines have replaced men in many jobs. For instance, in many food and packaging industries, programmed machines are used as they are more efficient and fast when compared to a worker. Furthermore, a robot can work for long hours without any breaks, thus increasing in productivity of a company. This scenario can lead to an increase in the unemployment rate causing a detrimental effect on society.\r\n\r\nTo sum it up, robots have a pivotal role in future development and the need for them is inevitable. Although this development has a downside, considering the future technological advancement, robotic science and technology are essential to achieve it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Wouldn´t it be shocking if technology was able to read your emotionl expressions ? Well the latest innovation from Prof. Thomas Huang was able to invent a software where it could read ones emotional expression. Some might not agree with this software but others will and im one of those people that would value using this technology to read students emotional expressions.\n\nIf this technology was able to read students emotional expressions it would be easier for teachers. We as humans might tell how someone is feeling but comparing us to technology , they would be able to tell better. ¨ A clasroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.¨\n\nTechnology in a classroom that helps identify the students emotional expression could be something diffrent.\n\nProf. Thomas Huang didnt make this software for no reason. He made it to show that technology is good in their own ways. ¨ Dr.Huang and his collegue are experts at devloping better ways for humans and computers to communicate.¨ Technology like this would be helpful not just to teachers but other people in the world too.\n\nIf this technology was to become helpulf maybe more technology like this would be made. ¨ The facial expressions for emotion are universal, even though often show varying degrees of expression¨ many people have very diffrent emotions and even if they try to hide it , its still there. The technology would be helpful because even if someone was to try and hide there exprssion of emotion the software would be able to recognize it. I claim for the value of using this technology to read students emotional expressions not just because its helpful but because it would be something diffrent the teachers and students would try out.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article it is talking about how a new technologysoftware, that they have made, can read the facial expression of person in a picture. Scientist have studied the Mona Lisa painting by using this software. Prof. Thomas Huang, Prof. Nicu Sebe, and Dr. huang are all trying to make this software.\n\nIn my opinion, I am all for this new software. I think it would be super cool to find out what someones or even your own expression is to some things just by the way your face is. You can really tell how someone feels about you when you get them to do this reading. I think when it reads it won't be accurate everytime, I think it will show some off data. You may be really happy but your facial muscles won't say that you are.\n\nI bet this software can for sure have it's up and downs. I think that it will get it wrong sometimes because only you really know how you are feeling. This also can be a bust. It may not read it correctly and screw it up. You just never know. I think it will work most of the time tho.\n\nI am all for this. I think that this will be a super cool software when it is completely done. I would for sure try this out just to see how it presents my emotions. This will be a really cool software when they are completly done with this.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist dehydrating The cyclist said I toiled At point tumbleweeds crossed path ridiculously large snake The cyclist desert mile rode became dehydrated The desert sun drying body He said passing landmark I eased past trying keep balance dehydrated state went desert affected dehydrated", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Manyresident of the community of suburban pioneer are going to a place where many other never gone before and even give up thyeir own cars. The street parking,drive way,and even garage are forbiden in new district. In outskirt of freigburg,near the french and swiss borders. Vaubam is almost car free exect themain thoroughfare where i down town there owner a space for around 40,000 and even come with a house a 70% of family donot own their own car other wise a 57% dold their own car to live suburman community.\n\nFrance has a problem with cars the car where made to stay in a garage og a house until fuder notice but all owner were charge a 22 euro fine (31$) other wissw around 27 cars have to be impounded because of their reaction. Then around monday the smog had clrear out enough for some of the license plates where let ou also by tuesday.\n\nIn bogota colombia the spread other country millions of colobians hiked,bike skated or took buses to work during a car free day for people not had use there car to be motivated to do new thing by riding bike having fun and ecercise car starting to be banned only buses and taxi where in use they also banned car that way they reduce the amount of smug in the enviroment the people where charge a 25 dollar fee if they wouldnot obey the law of no cars. Rain started in bogota people couldnot participate in the event. Two other colombian cities started the events. This made big improvement its started in the 1990s. Many good things happened the uneven side walks were fix and many store and resturant the rate went up because receive more custormer in rush hour.\n\nPresident Obama said \"ambitious goals to curb the United States greenhouse gas emissions\" people are buying fewer cars as the recent studies have shown fewer license were being out as each year goes by; population growth has increase by the years the number of mile driven by a person was around 9 miles per hour in 1995 the people couldnot really afford new cars and it will not help the uniploment rate. People think with changes stops car commuting as a result of recession may find less reason to resume the habit. The internet helps people communicate without having to go out of their home to visit them. New York bike sharing program helps many people to share time as family. they have done a study young people drecease the driving. Ford motor made partner with the telecommunications industries the crated cities connected network to save time conserve reasources and lower emissions and improve safety for child,teen and mostly use adult.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Facial Action Coding system sounds like something that would be invented or created in the far future. So if there is a real such thing as a facial action coding system it seems that there aren't many negatives as to why it shouldn't be used in a classroom setting today. The Facial Action Coding System should be used in the classroom setting because it will show students understandment, interest level, and overall thoughts over a topic or subject. Also another plus is it could show students themselves something they may be interested in which they didn't know even themselves.\n\nSo imagine a class where there is a Facial Action Coding System on a computer for each student to use, there would be so many benefits to using something like this, it sounds perfect for a classroom setting. First of all, it would show teachers the understandment level of students to a certain topic or subject, so if there is a subject or topic in which kids faces were scanned for their feelings about that subject, the teacher could maybe improve or make the lesson easier for students, which overall would create a better education system for the sutudents in the class and better oppurtunity. The second reason as to why it would be valuable to have the facial action coding system int he classroom would be because it would show students and teachers levels of interest kids may have on a certain subject or topic. For example say there are kids in a class and they begin there science notes or studies etc., and some kids have more higher interest feelings than others on the topic, that can show both teachers and even students what they truly feel about science, and it can lead to helping kids making bigger decisions in their lives, such as whether or not they want to pursue a career with lots of science involved or not. The third reason to use facial action coding system would be because it is universal. From the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", it is said that \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal.\" The facial expressions for each emotion being universal means that anyone from anywhere around the world can use this as a tool to help them succeed in school, no matter what ethnicity they are from, and if they look different. Also if this facial action coding system is universal, imagine how accurate it is. So it definetely would be valuable to classroom setitngs all around the world, and would creat greater oppurtunites for students to get a better education.\n\nTo conclude, the Facial Action Coding System would be valuable to a classroom setting because it shows understandment, shows interest, and is universal which could also mean it is extremely accurate and enhanced. The Facial Action Coding system has many benefits to it which would be a great help to teachers in a classroom as well. The Facial Action Coding System could be used as a tool to succeed to many around the world. And so overall, the Facial Action Coding System is great and would be extremely valuable to classroom settings.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do u ever want to go exploring Venus? Venus is a planet in our solar system. Venus is very challenging place to go. Earth and Venus are close bye. Venus is called the evening star one if the brightest point of light in the night sky. Venus is fun place to go exploring. Venus is the second planet from our sun.\n\nExploring planet is very danger. People can be die by exploring or can get injury. Its is so imporant. If some thing wrong people have to give their life away. In pargrpah 3\" a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmoosphere.\" When you are going to exploring venus or othe planet you have to be careful. When some thing happend you will give you life away. Its so imporant\n\nTheres some people name NASA they have explored Venus or other planet. They said that some simplified electronics mad of silicon carbide have been tested in chamber simulating the chaos of venus suface. They have a devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1440s during World War 2. Venus systems that used mechanical parts can be made mor resistant to pressure,heat,and other forces.\n\nWhen you get to Venus you are flying you can't walk. The Venus a ship orbiting or hovering safely far abouve the planet can provide only limited insight on ground. In pargrpah 6\" More mportantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock,gas,or anything else from a distance. Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.\n\nI'll love to go explored Venus it look fun. Explored another planet is good you can learn new thing. You don't have to walk you will be fly so it will be fun. It will be danger but u cant get new thing or learn new thing. I'll love to explored .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit written Joe Kurmaskie features setting affected author many ways One feature hills The speed limit affected author felt moving slow In story says I waterdepleting evidence", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you like to know more about Venus? In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author explains Venus very well. This article has a lot of great infomation.\n\nIn the article is said that it is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. If they was up in the air it would be cooler. \"At thirty plus miles about the surface, temeratures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on earth. This quote explains what people would do just to see the surface of Venus.\n\nThe article also talks about how venus could have been an earth like planet. If Venus was like an earth like planet it would be worth the dangers to go see the planet in person. \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largley with oceanss and could have supported variousforms of life just like earth\". In this quote the author is explaining what Venus looked like a long time ago. This is another reason he state why going to venus would be worth the dangers.\n\nIt also state that it would be good for human curiosity. If we traveled to Venus we could really find out what it is made up of. \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has vale, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors\". In this quote the author explains some thing we would get out of traveling to Venus and that why it would be worth the dangers.\n\nin this article the author explains a lot of good reasons on why we should visit Venus. Even though the dangers of it it would be worth the infomation. It would give Asronomers alot of good information about our sister planet that we may never know.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people think laughter big part relationship truly think good laugh spouse good thing means good time I tell true story girlfriend laughing good time talk another time laughter big part life In next paragraphs decide laughter help lot life laughter fun meant hurt someone make upset mad I think people really mean hurt people nt care say others s laughter sometimes hurt people I said things people thought funny person saying nt think funny This first story I m going tell I dating month laughter big part relationship like tell jokes make laugh smile If nt laugh good time would relationship go It would nt go way would want go So try everyday make laugh smile things say important thing life anyways makes laugh time think thats good thing funny person time So long relationships laughter go The one person think made laugh probably dad My dad every day comes pick always something funny say I nt think said something funny one day long time The times dad bad day work comes home still bad mood try say something funny get bad mood nt work go room get away But time dad comes home good mood job easy likes people works Now would different story still lived I m When lived dad commute back forth work That hour drive one way put good moodbut nt get really see much lived anything funny think always try say keep laughter goingI believe laughter big part friends friends like joke around laugh things funny friend likes smile likes tell jokes usually become friends person gets friends whole community starts like intill says something makes lot people mad At baseball practices like tell jokes jokes say something make whole team laugh another person funny tells lot jokes funny face exasperation last person funny one guys thinks inst funny really I think good friend relationship peopleI told think good laugh good thing relationship It good around parents good relationship I hope liked story I enjoyed writing topic explains explains spouse friends I think everybody laughter life day day keep good attitude wit people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars have been around since the early 1900's, but now it seems there is no need for them. The younger generations have not been getting drivers licences and technology is making it easier to ride with someone else or telework. It is an all out war against automobiles and the United States isn't the only one fighting in it. Vauban, Germany, Bogata, Columbia, and Paris, France have all joined the war against personal cars.\n\nHow to win a war against cars; stop owning them. Vauban, Germany's population is doing just that. Over half of Vauban's population sold theirs cars so they could live in Vauban, and over seventy percent don't own a car. If people don't own cars, then there is no need for parking. Now, without parking lots or garages all over the place stores and schools can be closer to home. For those that require a car to get to a farther away work there are two parking garages, but to own a spot in one of them one you must buy a home there and pay forty thousand for the parking space. Residents of this experiment have even gone to say that without a vehicle they are less stressed and happier.\n\nJoy was not what Paris communters felt when France closed down the streets to certain vehicles for one week. Why would they close the streets; smog bad enough to rival one of the most polluted cities in the world. Paris is usually the European city that has all the smog, 147 micrograms to London's 79.7. So the government decided to do something about it. For five days they alternated from even licensed-plate cars could drive to odd licensed-plate cars could drive. To appease everyone without cars the government made public transportaion completly free allowing those without vehicles to still get to where they needed to go.\n\nIn the war against cars public transportation has played a big role. Take the city of Bogata, Colombia for example; every year they have a completly car free day where everyone takes public transportation or walks. Due to the day without cars public transportation is better than ever, as are the sidewalks. Busses have nicer interiors and are more accomodating, and old, cracked sidewalks have turned into smooth, flat sidewalks that are safer for everyone.\n\nSome might say that it is impossible to live without cars, because of illnesses and the lack of safety. However, in Vuaban, Germany people are less stressed which acounts for many immune systems shutting down. In Paris, France they were able to clear their city of smog in five days, without smog there would be nothing to hide the sun on a nice day letting people get vitamen C also while keeping their lungs clear. In Bogata, Colombia public transpotation and sidewalks have improved tenfold since the day without cars started as has safety. Without cars there are no accidents, people cannot injure others by drunk or reckless driving, and it allows the police to watch for crime instead of speeders. Overall our society would benefit grately from becomeing carless.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In modern society rare come across someone nt know basicly operate computer According statistics project known youtube shift happens children facts used computer age four While debated computers bad firmly disagree Computers one best technological advances human race made helped education reconnecting even times good environment I wonder people disagree hope reading At schoo three computer labs twenty five computers library twenty computers teacher two computers classroom Wheni look amounts addit know computers schools clear computers helped education system Many teachers students research projects click button There websites students school get assignments next day Also teachers put grade books drive This saves paper ensures accuracy final grade As student think computers greatly improved schools many ways mostly At one point another life older want reconnect old friends Thanks computers process reconnecting much easier There social networks facebook twitter valuable finding friend camp Let s say connected someone ve found got promotion You want call nt know hone number know email address Email messages send instantly anywhere And re ask phone number always great talk old friends Computers helped make easier My friend recently purchased sony laptop She liked features energystar ecofriendly Now days computers made green battle environment Paper saved online encylopedias newspapers journals etc Not computers needing less less electricity You save green green Today s society helping mother nature actions computers In opinion computers helping hurting They assisted education social reconnecting environment We must look kindly upon advancement miracle invention known computer", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Just cause it looks like a face it does not mean there are aliens. When have there ever been real signs of aliens. Even if there where they would have shown themselves to astronuts. Honestly alien most likely would not be scared of us realelisticy.\n\nIf aliens where real they weapons and mind would probaly be more advanced. They would have to have made homes, spacecrafts and probably guns as well. Think about it it has to be a natural land form just look at the our worlds natural land forms. Im sure there are landformes that look like faces or objects somewhere. So it must be a landform that is the only way because aliens would have showed them selves by now it is just that simple.\n\nThe eyes where probly shadow on a rock that looks like a face and that probable the truth. Also its impossible for somthing to live with out oxygen and there are no trees meaning no oxegen. It also either really hot or really cold mening somthing would either over heat or if cold freeze and that is my argument.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some society believes that watching tv when you are a child influences their actions, but some individuals say that is the amount of hour a child spends watching tv. Technology is present in our lives and new generations are growing up watching tv. This essay will discuss spending longer hours watching tv and how this influence their behaviour. Overall, I believe watching tv do not influence their behaviour if their parents control how long time they watch and also what they watch. \r\n\r\nSome individuals believe that watching tv does not influence their behaviour, but this also can depends what type of program these children are watching. It is the responsibility of the family to control the access to programs with violence, bad vocabulary.\r\n\r\nCurrently, children are growing in this technology generation, which can impact their behaviour; for example, parents now are busy with work and sometimes can not control what their children are watching.\r\n\r\nWhen children spend a long time on tv. It will impact how the child communicated and behaviour. This can lead to social anxiety, children now do not know how to socialize and develop anxiety with normal conversations. This is a problem in general, in view of all children spend a long time on tv and do not learn how to socialize, this will impact the way how those children socialize, make friends and also connections, for ,example if one individual doesn't learn was a child how to socialize, they will not have friends. In addition;will probably struggle to find a job because these individuals toneed socialize to make connections to obtain a good job. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, permit that kids spend a long hour watching tv can impact their act with supervision or not, the difference is that with supervision these children will not access content that's is not appropriate for their age, but still impact how to tell will interact\r\n\r\nwith other people in the future in work school and etc.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir upbeat happy one This uses memoir describ happy upbeat house child He saying I never forget parents turned simple house home This indicates happy mood son happy parents love sacrifice helped pave road future That memoir happy mood", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Life has been complicated with the advancement of technology.It is believed by most of the people around the world. Well, it is true to some extent, but not totally agreed.\n On a positive note,the excellent improvement in technology made everyone lives simpler and faster. The availability of plenty of gadgets helping everyone to enjoy their lives to the fullest without any trouble.For example , groceries can be delivered without shopping manually . Likewise, there are humongous advantages such as , people can be connected via social media for socializing themselves and talk to each other virtually make us feel they are directly talking to us in person. All these errands will give immense pleasure to individual .\nOn the contrary, although, there are many benefits with technology being improved there will be disadvantages too. Nowadays everyone's friendship is restricted to social media applications.No one is either interested to meet directly face to face .And if we observe the current situation happening in every home is like ,each individual has their own gadgets and they live in their own world therefore, no family time .\n\n To recapitulate , the betterment in technology makes individual an expert .Ensure that ,technology should not make us addicted or break the relations.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear think people stop going computer Well yes getting exercise People s body start get lazy nt want get They spending time family instead would like spend free time This people stop lazy fresh air people spend time computer interact family Well think get entertain technology instead family The reason I nt like compter much get hook fast ca nt stop When interact family get know better priceless This stop damage peoples minds Another reasons I would like hear less time exercising When people nt exercise anything body They start eat much later become lazy When exercise tons energy anything Like bunge jump When excerise look healthy people notive This excerise best healthy always fit In addition third reason I would like read enjoying nature Enjoying nature good time relax You swim beach feel amazing breeze good time When computer sitting instead going outside habit It hurting environment people nt want get enjoy nature This tollerated people lazy In conclusion reason people spend life computer think entertain technology instead interacting family People start eating much become lazy People never leave house instead computer This stop hurting environment people becoming lazy", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think shouldnt remove material libraries s found offensive People find different things offensive others If started takeing things thers good possibility ll loose everything books people One example I say people offensive bout movies violent scense Others like violence shows The librarie might way someone get ahold something like Another example magazines contain material nt want kids round seeing That magazine could help student assignment school Kids might need material offensive could help life In conclusion I think take movies books someone finds offnesive Some offensive material could used help students education Other offensive material adults enjoy reading watching Just one person finds something offensive mean next person comes", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being Patient A years ago I started horse back ride I love muc h About month ago I ordered new riding boots This time I defien tly patient Me mom went stake line tackcorn ordered new boots When arrived small sent back Days days went I waited boots They didnt come I patient Another day went mom finally called They said reship something I goes fourteen day processing Both mom patient Weeks went still boots My mom gotten new credit card week Another week went mom I getting impatient She called company said tried change shipping credit card said declined But problem fixed Im glad I patient enough wait boots riding comfortably new riding boots", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author gives us a lot of reasons that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\n\nThe first good reason he gaves us is Venus have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. He also explain us why, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Eart . He is saying \"just like Earth\", this is very importat sice knowing Venus has some caracteristics in commun with our planet it makes us easier to think and prove this planet could be a possibily fos us in the future.\n\nThe author keeps supporting his idea of studying Venus with some more examples that both of them have like valleys, mountains and craters, and this is a good reason because since the more things in commun they have the more probablities there are for us with Venus. He also recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, which means we really need to study this planet if we\n\nwant to get this goal.\n\nIn conclussion the author supports the idea with many good reasons, and all of them are very important for us because this planet could mabybe be a possibility for us in the future or at least gives us some clues sice it has a lot of things in commun with the Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is common for some people to think that adolescents should be required to do some community work in their free time without being paid, moreover they believe that it could benefit teenagers and the society. In my opinion, irrespective of the numerous arguments that exist on either side, unpaid work could help adolescents to understand what they love to do and help their personal development with a consequent positive benefit for the community indeed.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, it always happens to young people to start an occupation only because they need money to pay for their holidays with friends or their material wishes. However, often they continue to do the same job without thinking if they really like it or not, with the result that one day they discover that they want to change but they don't have a lot of skills to attend a new job. Experience a job without being paid could help them to really understand the value of their time. It sometimes happens that this kind of experience could be the first step in the discovery of a passion.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, the community might also have some beneficial effects because of a lot of reasons. Firstly, free work is always beneficial for the community. Moreover, there are a lot of public agencies that need support and they don't have enough money to pay for it. Finally, if teenagers discover these realities, they might have a better mindset throughout their adult lives. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, unpaid work could be positive for the development of teenagers in different ways, with a significant advantage for the community. Anyway, this practice has to be managed with attention and focus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, people’s lifestyle is influenced by a number of factors. While a host of people believe that climate is the most important factor,affecting our daily life, others claim that the local economy is actually the determining factor. I strongly opine that economy is the real agent.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, climate can affect both individuals’ meals and their occupations. First of all, during all eras, mankind had to adapt their selves to climate changes to survive. To explain, Although staple crops are mostly consumed by people in tropical regions, Eskimos have brought up neither rice nor wheat;because of the tundra climate, a frozen soil without any possibility of growing a plant, the Inuits have to eat marine animals, secondly it can be seen that people who live nearby the seas, would choose fishing as a career; or if they live nearby woodlands, like the southern jungles of Iran, they may pursue carpentry to make money. Hence, food and work, affecting our daily life, are impressed by the weather.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, people's living conditions can be specified by the economy. To explain, the governments of the regions of the world which has poor weather condition can overtake their challenges and gift a happy life with lots of facilities to their citizens. Dubai, in the United Arab Emirates, is a salient example of this matter. This city is located in one of the hottest barren deserts in the Middle East, but through the global trade in fossil fuels, gained a huge wealth, causing the welfare of citizens. Today, Dubai’s population are living in luxurious mansions; even though the weather is extremely hot, the municipality put some large air conditions on pavements. Therefore, economic situations significantly make an impression on humans’ lives.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, while the climate can interfere with what people eat or do, I contend that fortune can surely overcome the effect of weather as a city like Dubai has amenities like perfect houses as well as public coolers, reducing the effect of climate.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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