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"content": "The mood created memoir Narciso Rodriguez made feel like I kitchen eating Cuban food listen music Also told life cuban immigrant My grandfather followed path He young boy family immigrated Cuba But worked hardest became succesful man This story completely reminds since I background I know mood speaks The memoir really shows The person coming close nothing become succesful person Finally mood created shows put mind could accomplish anything Also shows mood created typical cuban home",
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"content": "An increasing number of people, nowadays are becoming more curious about the history of their homes and their buildings. In this essay, I will bring some underlying reasons for this interest and a potential method of doing research towards that.\r\n\r\nTo begin with the main causes for this interest, first of all, the majority of people are enthusiastic about knowing the history of whatever they possess like their own house. For example, they like to know about people who used to live in their homes previously, as well as search whether it was a residential building or it was for another purpose.This is because it is the nature of humans to have the desire of getting information about anything they have. Secondly, they need to know about the date of the house to have information about its structure, to prevent any danger if it is very old.\r\n\r\nThere are several ways of researching the history of the house and any home. The first way is to conduct research through the Internet. There are numerous sites providing information about the buildings of the areas. The second way is that they can easily ask the last habitats or the neighbours about the building. Finally, there are some agents which collect information about the buildings in their neighbourhood, which all landlords of houses can refer to those places.\r\n\r\nIn a nutshell, knowing about the history of your house is anyone's right and need and citizens can collect information about them whenever, and wherever they want.",
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"content": "Do you think that there are advantages to limiting car usage? Yes, I do think that there are advantages to limiting car usage because of pollution. There are many advantages of having limited car usage. This includes many different transportations and because of car culture.\n\nTo begin with, there are advantages to limited car usage because of pollution. Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog, the smog rivale Beijing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world. Diesel fuel was blamed, since France has a tax policy that favors diesel over gas. Diesel make up 67 percent of vehicles in France, compared to 53.3 percent average of diesel engines. Paris has more smog than other European capitals.\n\nTo continue, there are advantages to limited car usage because of many different acts of transportation. In Bogota, Colombia a program is set to spread to other countries. It was called a \"Car Free\" day which meant that you could not use your car for a whole day. Millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day leaving the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams. It was the third straight year cars have been banned with only buses and taxis permitted for the Day Without Cars in this capital city of 7 million. The goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\" said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza.\n\nFurthermore, there are advantages to limited car usage because of Car Culture. President Obama's ambitious goals to curb the United States greenhouse gas emissions is to shift in American behavior. Research studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by. The United States has long been one of the world's prime car cultures. The number of miles driven in the United States peaked in 2005. \"What most intrigues me is that rates of car ownership per household and per person started to come down two to three years before the downturn,\" says Michael Sivak, a research professor at the University of Michigan's Transportation\n\nResearch Institute. The internet makes telecommuting possible and allows people to feel more connected without driving to meet friends. With all these changes, people who stopped car commuting as a result of the recession may find less reason to resume the habit.\n\nIn conclusion, there are many different advantages to limiting car usage because of pollution, many different acts of transportation, and because of Car Culture.",
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"content": "Dear newspaper think computers bad effect people today I know I nt Over people today computer On computer find great things place people If nt best handwriting type computer help look stuff want go look favorite hockey player Instead going library hoping theres book You name hundreds different websites using came That save lot day save lot money If go family trip year sum Place need change Then look another place online features way closer going year So computer look places want travel look cool facts future sport player If messy handwriting getting harder harder teacher read learn type computer At least students schools today getting zero homewrok test teacher ca nt read hand writing If type computer spelling grammar ever sizes color pictures make grade high fact little work die So people think computer help anyone well reasons computer help someone Computers help kids find something help computer also find video favorite player favorite hockey players give warning playoffs You find good stuff online You find favorite song cellphone Over people get song computer Also computer play favorite song computer For example favorite band drop kick murpheys find songs Alot people think computer good us But I say wrong You find info future person look If messy handwriting go type lastly songs video much browse web For example website Computer help kids find info better type paper sloppy",
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"content": "We don't realize it, but pollution has gotten worse. Although, with the help from Columbia and Germany's bans on cars, we can change that.\n\nWhy drive someplace that's down the street, when you could save the gas and money and walk, or maybe even ride a bike? All around the world people use cars to their advantage and even though it seems like just a little ride around the block, it's really making more pollution spread out into the air. Vauban,Germany has made the decision to ban all cars. There are two ways to keep your car: by buying a parking lot space down town, $40,000, along with a home; or large car garages at the edge of the development.\n\nTaking away stress is another advantage for giving up your car. Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two says, \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" Walking doesn't add pollution to the air. Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gases emissions in Europe; and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States. Bikes and scooters have the same effect as a car, just with less pollution. Just by riding a bike you are not only not sending out pollution, you are getting a free workout. Just by even car pooling you are saving your country from being overthrown by polluted air.\n\n\"All of our development since the World War II has been centered on the car, and that will have to change,\" said David Golberg, an official of Transportation for America, \"How much you drive is as important as whether you have a hybrid.\" Many experts expect public transport serving suburbs to play a much larger role in a new six-year federal transportation bill to be apporved this year. In previous bills, 80 percent of appropriations have by law gone to highways and only 20 percent to other transport.\n\nThe car is one way to get around town, to travel, to car pool. However, with one less car we could change the way we live in the future. Imagine, less smog, more people walking and riding bikes to get to places, and less people being stressed. We could be setting a forever-lasting trend.",
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"content": "In the article \"Driveless Cars Are Coming,\" the author presents both the postive and the negatives aspects of driveless cars. Some of these positives are using sensors to help the driver control his or her car and the way these driveless cars will help the drivers drive safe. The negatives of these cars is the amount the money these driveless cars need in order to be made, and that the driver still has to be in control of the car. But these are the aspects of the author. I am going toward the development of driveless cars, for one they make our lives a little easier,and they keep us more safe.\n\nThe development of driveless cars will make our lives much easier in the future. That's one reason why i'm going for the development of these cars. In the aricle the author saids \" the information from the senors can causse the car to apply brakes on idividual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\" When the author saids \"allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone\" saying that the car it self can control it self, than having a human control it's own car,therefore meaning the driveless cars control all functions of the car and we don't do anything but just follow what it does and be the driver. The author states that with \"further improments in senors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on their own.\" The author saids that these senors thar are coming out on these cars will help the car itself and the driver have better control of the vechile. These senors that are put into the driveless cars will make ours lives easier as drivers.\n\nAnother reson why my aurgument is going for the development of these cars is the safety the drveless car provides it's drivers. The author states that \"the car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel.\" The \"special touch sensors make sure the driver keep hold of the wheel\", will help the drivers be in better safe condition. Allowing these sensors to control the car will make our driving lives safer, by making \"sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel\", so no accients happen. Another way to help keep the driver protected from any accients occuring is adding other equiments to help us park and be aware of the road. \"Manufacturers are also considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remainign focused on the road. While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver.\" The cameras that instuled, will help driver be safer on the road at all times.\n\nIn conclusion, the development of the driveless cars wiil help help imapct the lives of the drivers. They will make our lives a lot easier and handle our protection on the road, therefore my augrement goes for the development of these cars. They must continue this jounrey of these cars. We need them espicallly in th furture. We can have less car accients with the help of the car even though there must be a driver, and who doesn't want a more safer environment. Don't we all.",
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"content": "Facial Action Coding System, what I think about it is it's interesting and it could help a lot of teachers out and maybe see if the sudents need help or if theres going something wrong in there life.It also could see if something bad happen to them. Kids would probaly like this too because it might help them in some situations.It would let teachers know how they feel and whats going on in there students life's.\n\nYes I think the Facial Action\n\nCoding System would be valuable for students in a classroom.The reason I think that is because in the texts it says that the Mona Lisa is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. So in that case we could see if a child is upset or if there fustrated on a math problem.So in this case if a child is really having problems in school and not telling anyone the Facial Action Coding System could help teachers see if the student is having problems and to see why he or she is so upset.\n\nSo thats what I thought of the Facial Action Coding Systems and how I felt about it. Maybe the Facial thing isn't so bad. Well maybe one day the Facial Action Coding will come to our school and help the students here. It will aslo help other sitution and different place out and other than just school.Thats how I felt about the Facial Action Coding Systems.",
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"content": "The Facial Action Coding System is a spectacular idea for the classroom. I beleive this for a few reasons. Those\n\nreasons being, able to to tell if your students are bored, being helpful to tell if your student isn't understanding the lesson, and if the students are too \"afraid\" to ask for help.\n\nIf your students are bored in class you can tell if they are. You could spice up the lesson or play a game that allows the students to learn the lesson but in a more fun way. If you're teaching in a \"boring\" way some students will just block your voice out and continue to talk,play games or even look out the window, so then they don't learn the lesson and when it comes to test time they weren't paying attention so how are they going to know it on the test?\n\nIf your students need help and you don't know it unless they raise their hand how are you supposed to help them understand the lesson better? If we had FACS in a classroom we would be able to tell if a student is confused and needs to be taught again or taught in a different way if possible.\n\nIn high school most students are afraid to raise their hand in class and ask a question because they don't want to look \"stupid\". In these cases if a student doesn't raise their hand how will the teacher know if they're struggling with the lesson or not? If we had FACS we wouldn't have to worry about if a student was confused or not. You could tell that they were even the slightest bit confused. You could repeat that part of the lesson again or you could even ask to see them after class and see what they needed help with.\n\nI believe that the Facial Action Coding System is a valuable thing to have in classrooms because you can tell if they are bored,confused, like the way you're teaching or even mad about something that you're asking for an opinion on.",
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"content": "There is a strong believe that the government ought to look after and support people while they retired. However, not everybody share the same point of view and they assume that every single person is responsible for own future. In my opinion, both groups have right, nevertheless, the authority should support own citizens especially after they hardly earned the future pension.\n\nFirstly, every single country has set the length of work time, which can give a right to get the minimal pension. Average person works much longer than that, to get higher amount of money, which will let them afford level of life they used to it. Moreover, it would be unfair when the government could not pay back or support them when they get old. It is their responsibility to save some part of money to be able offer them to the older population. \n\nOn the other hand, the opponents claims that every individual need to save own money on a separate bank account for future. In addition, they do not have any trust in the further authority plans and advise to have a backup plan. I will probably listen to them because we do not know what may happen in the next decade. Surprisingly, saving just 10% of our monthly wage can give a boost of money available on our retirement. \n\nTo sum up, I believe we should have trust in the country where we live and politics, however, can not boycott people who are afraid of their future. The current situation is extremely unstable and noone is able to predict and ensure the public about something what will be ready for them, for instance, in 40 years period of time.",
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"content": "Anybody should be able to vote like teenagers,and aldults because the Electoral College is a process,they consists of the selection of the electors,and at the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters.\n\nFirst,\n\nThe Electoral College consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electors votes is required to elect the President. Your state's entitled allotmentof electors equals the numbers of members in it's Congressional delegation:one for each member in the House of Representatives plus two for you Senators.\n\nSecond,\n\nThe Electoral College avoids the problems of elections in which no candidate recieves a majority of the votes cast. For example, Nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 both had only a 43 percent plurality of votes,while winning a majority in the Electoral College.\n\nThird ,\n\nIt can be argued that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state-Democrats in Texas,for example, or Repuublicans in Claiforina. Knowing their vote will have no effect, they have less incentive to pay attention to the campaign than they would have if the president were picked by popular vote.\n\nInconclusion,Anybody should be able to vote like teenagers,and aldults because the Electoral College is a process,they consists of the selection of the electors,and at the most basic level,the electoral college is unfair to voters.",
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"content": "Owing to evolution of technology, there is inevitable hammering of advertisements on television, radio, and roadside hoardings. Indubitably, it is the most persuasive tool of marketing hence has become an indispensable part of human life. In my perspective, it is beneficial for society by virtue of not only providing information about new products launched in the market but also dispersing social message effectively.\r\n\r\nTo embark with, adverts assist manufacturing concerns and consumers by giving them information about new products and services launched in the market or recent innovation in existing products. If advertisement houses do not promote goods, it would be impossible for the brands to sell their products. In addition to it, advertisement industry is boosting economy by generating jobs on large-scale for thousands of individuals. With respect to this, it has become the backbone of many economies of the world. An exemplification of this could be, as per an article published by ‘The Times’, an efficacious advertisement has 95% chances to materialize the product into sales.\r\n\r\nBesides this, it is pertinent to mention here that it is an effective tool by which social issues can be tackled. Since, advertisement usually features famous celebrities, figureheads, the people who general public admires and when these prominent personalities touch any social issue, it has more convincing power. Amitabh Bachhan tells public to bring their children for pulse polio immunization is an epitome of it. Therefore, advertisements are very informative in nature and has many positive attributes rather than deteriorating effect.\r\n\r\nTo recapitulate, having discussed a great deal of deliberation, it is incisively clear that marketing through print media, audio-visual means has tremendous merits, as they are a source of information about commodities as well as social message.",
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"content": "Dear state senator,\n\nI argue in favor of keeping the Electoral college because, it requires a presidential candidate to have transregional appeal,its actually a good thing. Basically all voters are involved because if it wasnt for that one voter the president wouldnt had been elected as president. A candidate with only one regional appeal is unlikely to be a successful president. if we didnt have voters we might would have the worst president of them all, he could do bad things for the country he want, which may affect us as a country. Dispute over the outcome of an Electoral College votye is possible is because, the winning candidate's share of the Electoral College invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote.\n\nAnother reason, is that the electoral college restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states by population lose by virtue of the mal- apportionment of the senate decreed in the constitutuion .Large states such as florida , wyoming, gets more attention from presidential candidates in a campaign than a small states does. It is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote . yet that has happened very rarely. But each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee and that is rarely betrayed.\n\nin addition, We can have argue that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off the potential voters for a candidate who has no hope for their state . They have to be more careful about who they want to vote because, it can cause alot of damge to the president or even the world that we live in. They should let people who already know about the political party's and the democrats and the republicans.\n\nto be continued, We should have our background checked on if we should vote or not because , people have faked thier identity and voted , or even forced someone else to vote for them even if they didnt want to. the electoral college is a very important process that goes on in this world just to make our place a better one . If our electoral college do better we can have more oppertunities in life, like when the good president becomes president just like obama , He can do good things with the taxes or even make it easier for kids to have jobs so they wont have to be on the streets doing bad things and maybe even one day they would grow up to be able to vote for thier favoritem president.\n\nAnd that is why I argue in favor of keeping the Electoral College.",
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"content": "This line chart depicts how much waste produced by three different organizations during 15 years peroid. The waste production was measured by wieght.\nAccording to what's shown, company A procuded the hightest amount of waste in 2000 which was about 12 tonnes per year. This amount gradually decreased unitl it reached 9 tonnes yearly in 2015. While company B waste production wieght around 9 tonnes per year during the peroiod between 2000 and 2004. In 2005 the waste production shows sharp rise followed by rapid fall in the next 10 years. In regards of company C, the company start with the lowest quantity of waste in 2000, this quantity rocketed in the next 15 years. By the end of 2015 the waste of company C wieght about 10 tonnes annualy.\nTo sum up we can say that, each company of the three has different patteren of waste mangement over 15 years period.",
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"content": "There is a lot of debate about if driverless cars are a good idea or not. Some think that they are the future of cars, while some think they are just big hazard. Autonomous cars have perks and downfalls just like anything else, the only question is do the perks really out way the downfalls? I think that they do not. Driverless cars are dangerous and unecessary.\n\nWith driverless cars there is a major saftey concern. They are run by technology and even though technology is a great thing, it usually tends to be attached with error. The cars are supposed to alert the driver when they need to take over but what if the driver is not paying attention. If they had a long night and are on their way to work early the next morning it would not be abnormal for driver to dose off while behind the wheel since they have nothing else to do. Or if the system crashed how is it supposed to be able to alert the driver it is failing? The driver could be on their phone thinking everything is fine and not realize there is a problem until it is too late.\n\nAnother concern with autonomous cars is do we really need them? We have been driving cars ourselves for a very long time so why do we need to change that now. They might just cause more trouble than they are worth. Lots of new laws would have to be made and many roadways would have to be changed. This is all very expensive so where will the money to pay for that come from? There will be a lot of unhappy citizens if taxes are raised again. So if there is nothing wrong with they way we are now, there is really no need to start all this hastle.\n\nIs inovation really more important than human saftey? Although driverless cars would be cool and interesting to use, there is really no need for them. The problems out way the benefits. Even if they were completly safe to drive the money that we would need to kickstart autonomous cars is not really there\n\nMaybe test tracks could be opened for drivers to go expierience what they are like, but they should not be \"tested out\" on our roads.",
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"content": "Dear Local Newspaper I think computers good bad thing Computers allow use play games learn almost anything But computers simulate fresh air exercise Computers allow people play wide variety games People play chess solatire great deal games like Computers also allow us play wide variaty online games I think least three different sites online games Each site least different games Hundreds thousands people play online games everyday What would nt computer play games We also search topic computer anywhere This amazing thing able Imagine nobody computer would research much knowledge Yes using computer much faster Plus print thing computer book copy important But highlight important How much could No matter much computer kids getting bigger bigger long Computers amazing society benefits lot But like everything computers downside So please inform adults kids goodness computers also warn bad things could happen spend much time computer outside",
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"content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" the author explains how new technologies are allowing compters to read facial expressions. The use the Facial Action Coding System in classrooms is valuable, because it will benefit both students and teachers. This technology will help teachers identify if their students are understadning the lesson and if their students are enjoying the lesson and staying engaged.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System will help teachers identify if their students are understanding the lesson they are teacher. In paragraph 6 the author states,\"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huange predicts.\" Teachers could use this technology to monitor their student's facial expression when watching a video or an online lesson. Teachers could ensure that all their students are understanding the content they are teaching. Teachers will be able to modify their lessons and how they are taught based on their students' reactions. They could also insturct their students to take notes on these computers, so that the teacher can identify if their students are fully engaged or not.\n\nTeachers will be able to understand if their students are enjoying the lesson or not with the Facial Action Coding System. The author states, \" The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive--for video or video surgrey.\" This technology will not only help students and teachers understand each other better, but will help students have more fun as well. Teachers will have the ability to show more interesting and engaging videos and online simulations to their students, so that they will stay engaged and focused on the lesson. It will give teachers the ability to monitor the enjoyment of their students, so that they will be able to modify their lessons t o help keep their students happy and focused. This will also help teachers make their future lessons more enjoyable or less depending on the reactions of their students.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that the use of the Facial Action Coding System in classrooms is valuable, because it will benefit both teachers and students in the classroom. The use of this new techology will help teachers know if their students are understanding the lesson, and it will help students stay engaged and focused on the lesson.",
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"content": "I do agree with having a positive and negative aspects of driverless cars.\n\nAlthough there are more positive things about the driverless cars than negative things.It will be a brand new world if they prefected the driverless cars. No more accident while texting and driving, no more traffic jams, and these cars uses half the fuels.\n\nThere are many positive about having a driverless cars. one good thing is, it could be a public transpot taxi system. These cars would uses half the fuel of today's taxis and they are far more flexible than a bus. Amother good thing about these driverless cars are that they could take over the wheels when you are textong on your phone. These cars can also alert you when the vchicle is in danger of backing up into an object.\n\nThere are some bad things about these driverless cars. One of the bad things about these driverless cars is they works better on these special tracks, but those tracks cost too much. So they created the cars with four automotive radar sensors, a GPs reciever, and an inertial motion sensor. The cars will notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, like navigating through work zones and around accidents.\n\nI would like to see these kind of cars in the future,but with more advance technologies. Technologies such as the cars navigating theirselves, parking on their own and could drive around theirselves on trafficjams and accidents. In the future, advenced technologies would make these driverless cars to be safe for the drivers,passengers, and pedestrians.",
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"content": "Although some individuals are of the opinion that the best way in which they can achieve a successful career is by studying at college or university, others believe that getting a job straight after school compares favourably. Both views will be discussed in this essay, coming to a conclusion at the end. \n\nSome people argue that the only avenue by which young people can bring about a chance is by applying for a job immediately after school in order to succeed in their careers. First and foremost, only by doing a job that can young members get acquainted with how to meet challenges in their real life. It is encountering difficulties in working place that can make a more significant contribution to make a success e in a career. By way of illustration, making money at a young age can lay the groundwork for an independent life. Meanwhile, the young live up to lower expectations normally compared to those having tertiary education. Not only do they work with a minimum wage but also, they work under pressure to prove themselves by assuming heavy responsibility. On top of that, they enjoy more practical and valuable experience than those inexperienced in an academic environment. \n\nHowever, securing a job directly after school have beneficial for young individuals, continuing, and completing courses at college or university outweighs the disadvantages. To begin with, without higher education, individuals will not be eligible to apply for idle job vacancies and go into a market straightforwardly. With university or college being the best place, they are able to build a close rapport between outstanding students and their professors to carve a niche in their future career. Moreover, only after the university or college route that professional knowledge and expertise can be obtained, not by doing a job. Only through university or college can they realize the untapped potential of their exceptional and incredible abilities so as to offer excellent career prospects. They stand a chance to obtain hands-on experience in soft skills and boost team working spirit through collaboration in an academic environment. \n\nIn conclusion, despite finding a job right after school is a paramount consideration, I take the view that young people seize the chance to obtain soft skills, widen the cycle of friendship and hold higher education as well as break into a market effortlessly to pay the way for a successful career.",
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"content": "2020 can't come fast enough. 2020 is the year that Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves. Tesla has projected a 2016 (this year) release for a car capable of driving on autopilot ninety percent of the time. Google has had cars that could drive independently under specific condition since 2009. You could do so much more when you have an independent driving car that you can with a non-independent car, if something is about to happen, you will be warned and it uses half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility that a bus. Beacause of the reasons previously mentioned, I stand in firm affirmation of the development of driverless cars.\n\nWhen you drive a driverless car, you can do so much more with you time in the car. If and when driverless cars become a thing, texting/talking while driving laws could be abolished. But by 2020, texting might even be obsolete and we might be just speaking to the phone while it types for us. We've all known girls who do their make-up in the car on their way to their destination. With non driverless cars, this is extremely dangerous to the driver, the passengers, other cars, and pedestrians. Even though most girls know the danger of this, they haven't stopped, so why not make is safer when they do do it?\n\nIf something were to happen on the road like an accident ahead, road blocks, consruction, etc., the driver would be warned before hand. The warning could be a number of thing, whether that be a vibration in the seat or a beep.\n\nSelf-driving cars are so much more eco-friendly than regular non self-driving cars. They use half the fuel of today's taxis. Think of how much fuel that would save America. Less fuel used means less pollution in the sky and it might even help with global-warming. Think of the polar bears and other endangered species!\n\nSelf-driving cars are a good thing. You could do so much more when you have an independent driving car that you can with a non-independent car, if something is about to happen, you will be warned and it uses half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility that a bus. Beacause of the reasons previously mentioned, I stand in firm affirmation of the development of driverless cars.",
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"content": "Yes I strongly agree with a computer in school that read students emotions. I say this because many students does not like to read and get tired or bored really fast and easily, and this computer is capable of changing that.\n\nThis computer can stop students form being bored or even confused, Dr. Huang stated that \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" Dr Huang also predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instuctor.\" With a computer like this it can stop many trouble with students and their aility to focus.\n\nAnother reason as to why I feel as this may help is because if an ad pops up and the computer tells you frown then the next and will be different and if you smile to that one then, the ad after that will be similar to the one you smiled too. This can benefit in and out of school because no one likes ad anyways and now you can have an option to where you can see ads you like instead of keep seeing the same ones you do not like over and over again. Maybe even if you are doing research in school these ads can maybe benefit to your research.\n\nIn conclusion, there's many ways this can benefit you in your learning and your ability to focus. As to why this would be a beneficial option for schools to persue in. Not only would it be less stress on teaches but, a greater advantage for a student to advance in basic reading skills by reading things the student is intrested in.",
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"content": "Having computers detecting when your are confused or when they become bored. Technology detecting someone's emotions is uses full. This type of techonolgy would help in many different ways like in police station when they are interagating they could use this and try to see if some one is actually telling the truth or not. This technology would be vauable in classrooms because, it could help the teacher know if a student needs help, it could help the student by showing the way they are feeling over a subject, (such as when they are bored, the teacher can make the subject a little more intreasting)and also it could help the counsolers in knowing if someone is having a rough day and help them out.\n\nComputers like this could help fix problems that happen in everyday life. In classrooms around the country there are places in which students don't understand a subject or in which are needing help with it, and by having this type of technology it would help teachers know what is the student feeling about a certain subject. In many cases there are students in which dont get the class and do not say anything about it so they end up failing. By having this technology teachers could detect the way the student is feeling toward this subject and work with them. This would prevent students from failing the class and actually get to comprehend the subject.\n\nBeing able to detect is someone's emotians could solve a million things one of them is bieng able to help a students out. There are students in which are too shy to ask a student a question and just continue the whole tri not knowing how to do a certain thing.\"\" A classrooom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts\", this could help students instead of having to ask the teacher can already know if a student is confused or bored. Being bored with a subject can often make a student just try to entertain himself by watching a moive or playing a game on his or her computer, this would make the student not pay attention and lose focus. Introducing this technology to students would help them get help without having to ask and avoid the part where they become all shy or asking.\n\nThis same techology would be useful to prevent problems between students. In school this would be helpful to counsolers as well. Schools are trying to find a way to prevent bullying from happening thoughout the nation and by implementing this type of technology in school it could help teacher or counsolers find the people who are suffering from this. Not only will it help bullying but also if they implemented this then it would help see when a person is angry and are about to do something stupid. This would also help counsolers know when students are havinig problems at home.\n\nThis technology could improve the way school is and the why teachers teach. This technology would be the future of students learning. This technology should be applyed to school camaras in and in classrooms when it is developed enough. Having this technology in schools would be valueable because, it would help students pass classes, it would help teachers help students, and it would help counsolers help students as well.",
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"content": "The setting essay Do exceed posted speed limit dry sandy hot deserted On way Yosemite takes short cut desert When first leaves hot flat part desert His mood high confidence Things began well enough I rode morning strong legs smile face With arrives first town hes wasnt worried bad plenty water moves The terrain starts working search water Flat road replaced short rolling hills large high way sign jumped It read Rough Road Ahead Do Exceed posted speed limit This lowers confidence especially everything deserted heat stroke one would around find He keeps determination sees factory yet moves When see first comp overwhelmed relief terrain flattens When asked need direction say map keep stick terrain knows rest He keep hopes follow true set directions",
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"content": "In recent years, public health is becoming an important problem . Many people said that government should put laws for nutrition and food to develop public health .Whereas others believe that humans should know what they buy . In this I essay I will discuss both sides then I will move in to give my own view. \r\n\r\nTo begin, there are drawbacks to this statement .firstly ,some old people don't know how to read , so the government has to put a law and who doesn't follow the law. They must give them a fine . Especially these days there are lots diseases . Secondly, a few companies don't care about people . They want just profits from products. \r\n\r\nHowever, many people have skin allergies to food . Therefore, people have to read items before buying them.Additionally, a lot of people like unhealthy food such as chocolate and fast food . The government can't do anything to people with this product . \r\n\r\nIn conclusion , if governments do not put laws. there are disadvantages to this issue .For instance, old people who can't read and people who have allergic. Although, the government can not do anything for people who love unhealthy food. Personally, I think government can not be able to remove whole bad food . But they can reduce the food that has more damage .",
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"content": "Contrary to popular belief, the Face on Mars is not a face, but a natural landform on the surface of Mars. Now, this may be hard to agree with, but the Face is actualy a structure similar to a butte or a mesa, a semi-flat landform common in the American west. It should also be noted that the area around Cydonia (a region on Mars on which the Face is located on,) is extremely cloudy around the time the pictures were taken by the Viking 1 in 1976. Also, Cydonia has many other mesa-like structures that are quite common in the area. The manner in which the Face was formed is unknown, but many scientists belive that shadows formed from outcrops in the area created the illusion of the eyes, the nose, and the mouth on the structure, giving it it's facelike apperence. There were three diffrent gruops of photographs taken of this structure. The first was taken by the aformentioned Viking 1, in 1976. The second was taken on April First, 1998, by The Mars Global Surveyer. The last one was taken in April of 2001, again by the Mars Global Surveyer. If this was a face, would'nt all three pictures be the same, insted of the last two being clear eveidence that the Face isen't a face at all, but rather a naturaly forming landmass? So, in conclusion, there is a scientific explanation to just why and how this strange and peculuar structure came to be. Even though this unusual sight looks just like a face, it's just a rock structure on the face of a red planet we call mars, not an ancient Martian temple.",
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"content": "The laws have changed. We now have days where we cannot use our cars for the day. We can only get around using buses, a local taxi, bikes, walk etc,. Would this benefit us or would it not? Some cities and countries around the world are banning cars. Instead they would like to use public transportation, a biciylce, or maybe your own two feet to get around. I believe that this topic is reasonable and I agree.\n\nThe United States is considering this law of not having to use our cars for a day or two each week so we can get out in the fresh air or try out some new transportation for personal knowledge of more ways to get around. The paper, The End of Car Culture, states that \"recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by.\" Assuming, we are already shifting into a lifestyle of not having a car for a day or two. To me, this would benefit the country because of our high obesity rate. If more people ride their bikes to places or walk places, this will give them more exercise opportunities and help them lose weight in a more constructive way. Just riding your bike or walking a mile to the grocery store a day can definitely help someone out.\n\nSpeaking of helping things out, how about the environment? The article, Paris band driving due to smog, states that \"After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\" Robert Duffer also states that Paris uses Mondays to be deicated ro even-numbered license plates are ordered to leave their cars at home and the next day odd-numbered license plates were ordered to keep their cars home. The diesel fuel in Paris was hurting the environment so that is why they banned cars. Here in the United States I believe that the car pollution is also hurting our environment. Riding bikes and walking places is a good activity for everyone to do.\n\nMost of us, except the 2% of people in America, have trouble with money. Riding bikes around and walking to a friends house or to the store, would definitely help our money situations. Not having a car two days a week means we do not have to get gas as much, which would save us money. Using a taxi would be useful too but, not as much becuase the money adds up also. Not using cars can completely help our community and country in so many ways.\n\nBanning cars for a day or two sounds like a fantastic idea. Being able to go out and get fresh air and get some exercise would be great for our country. Less pollutions, less money and more constructive activities for getting around to places. All sounds like a good idea to me. Let's see if the United States takes action.",
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"content": "Imagine you were on an anlantic and it was storming and you were sliding down the ship but you did not fall because there was a small meatal strip that saved you from falling. That would be so scary and exciting so that why I think you should participate in the seagoing cowboys because I want you to have have great opportunity like Luke did and I want you to have lot of more expirences.\n\nFirst think of all the fun you will have. Like playing baseball and volly ball games. Also table tennis, fencing, boxing,reading,and whittling. Alot of the games you will play will pass the time.\n\nAnother reason is all the places you will be visting. Like Europe, China,and seeing the Acropolis in Greece. You can take gonda rides and see the citys and streets and water of these places you see.\n\nLast reason is seeing all this animals and feeding and taking care on them. Like seeing elhpants, tigers,and horses. The resposablitile you will learn like taking care of when they sleep, what to feed them, and to clean up after them.\n\nTo conclude you should join the Seagoing Cowboys because of the great opportunity and of all the expirences. You will have fun, you will be visting different places around the world, and you will see lot of different animals and you will have to take care of them.",
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"content": "By doing a Facial Action Coding to a classroom full of students would be different and interesring. This would be the first time anyone has done something that like. But the results could vary cause of how the students are feeling.\n\nSay there is a girl who is having a really good day, she got asked to Prom and she said yes. It made her day and she was happy for the rest of the day. And then take a boy who was late for the bus and had to walk to school. He would be tired and upset. They both have two different emotions, so the results would be different.\n\nRead this part of the article, \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\". If a classroom did a scan and all the students were tired, not interested, and ready to go home, the teacher could take those results and make the class more interesring for the students. The students would probably have more fun and want to do the work if the teacher made it fun and interesting for the students. But don't make it too difficult for the students cause they could shut down again.\n\nBy doing the Facial Action Coding, the result could be different for some students. But it would be fun and interesting to switch things up a bit and have while learning. By doing the Facial Action Coding, you can see how the students really feel. And it cpuld help them and you (the teacher) get a better understanding of how to teach.",
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"content": "Since the development of cars, cars have been used as the main transportation used by people. However, even though there are many advantages of using a car, there are many advantages of limiting car usage. There are many advantages of limiting car usage, such as walking and public transportation, less pollution, and results of this.\n\nOne main advantage of limiting car usage would be the ability to walk around and not have to find parking spaces. According to Elisabeth Rosenthal, author of\n\nIn German Suburb, Life Goes on Without Cars , the author wrote, \"In this new approach, stores are placed a walk away, on a main street, rather than in malls along some distant highway\" (Rosenthal, Lines 45-47). Rosenthal also wrote that public transportation was another option instead of using a car by stating, \"But its basic precepts are being adopted around the world in attemps to make suburbs more compact and more accessible to public transportation, with less space for parking\" (Rosenthal, Lines 42-45). Walking and public transportation have been useful alternatives of using a car.\n\nAs walking and using public transportation have been an advantage of limiting car use, another advantage would be less pollution. For cities like Paris, pollution in the air is a big problem, so the Paris government have enforced pollution in the air. Robert Duffer, author of\n\nParis bans driving due to smog , the author stated, \"After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city\" (Duffer, Lines 1-2). The author also wrote that, \"On Monday motorists with even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31). The same would apply to odd-numbered plates the following day\" (Duffer, Lines 3-6). Paris suffered great pollution due to cars, so it would be an advantage of limiting car usage to reduce the amount of pollution in the world.\n\nAs a result of limiting car usage, many different countries, such as Colombia and America have reduced their car usage. In Andrew Selsky's\n\nCar-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota , the author stated that in Bogota, Colombia, \"millions of Columbians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day yesterday, leaving the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams\" (Selsky, Lines 2-5). The author also wrote that \"The goal is to promot alternative transportation and reduce smog\" (Selsky, Lines 8-9). The author also included a quote businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza said, \"It's a good opportunity to take away stree and lower air pollution\" (Selsky, Lines 15-16). While in America, author Elisabeth Rosenthal of\n\nThe End of Car Culture , wrote that \"recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by\" (Rosenthal, Lines 4-6). The author also wrote a quote of Michael Sivak (who's a professor and studies trends at the University of Michigan's Transportation Research Institute), \"What most intrigues me is that rates of car ownership per household and per person started to come down two to three years before the downturn\" (Rosenthal, Lines 29-31). The author also wrote that \"If the pattern persists-and many sociologists belive it will-it will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment, since transportation is the second largest source of America's emissions\" (Rosenthal, Lines 36-40). The driving also stated that \"Demographic shifts in the driving population suggest that the trend may accelerate. There has been a large drop in the percentage of 16- to 39-year-olds getting a license\" (Rosenthal, Lines 64-67). Rosenthal also stated that \"a study last year found that driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009\" (Rosenthal, Lines 84-85). There have been many results due to limiting car usage in many different countries around the world, such as Colombia and America.\n\nIn conclusion, there are many advantages of limiting car usage, such as walking and using public transportation so there wouldn't be a problem finding a parking space, there would be less pollution, and in return, it would make the world a better place.",
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"content": "electrol college is not just a college it is a process, The electoral college is a process that consist of the selection of the electors, it started in the founding fathers established in the constitution as a comprise between election of the president . this means that the electorol college should stay this college is more than just any old college its history ,its in the constitution this college should not be gone this college should be honored. these electorals mainly select the votes for the people in the white house like the president and vice predident. our state is entitled allotment of electors equals the nuimber of memebers in the congressional delegation . i want electoral college to stay because they are good at things for the state . and they also have a big role in alot of things.\n\nthe electors college plays a big role in our state . under the 23 amendment of the constitution , the district of columbia is allocated 3 electors and a treated like a state for purpose of the electoral college . this means that because of the electoral college the district of columbia is treated like a state . so electoral college is the reason why some districts are called a state why take this type of college away if this has such a big role in alot of things to do with the congress . with out the electoral college they wouldnt have presidents or any thing . in every election the electors are always there in every president election every president have their own group of electors behind them . they are joined by a canidates political party .\n\nu may wonder how the electors work because all u do is see them behind the prsident well the process is hard and they want students who wants to be an elector to get ready on what they are about to get in to . it first start off by the u choosing the president when u choose the president u choose the group of electors this means when you choose the president the electors goes with him or her , most states have winner takes all system that awards all electors to the winng pesidental canidate's electors . after the election the govoner pepares a 'certificae of ascertainment'. this means that that it is listing all of the canidates who ran for president in your state along with names of their respective electors . the electors go through a long process . and the college wants the studentsa to know all the things they need to before they become electors.\n\nthe electors deserve to have a college someone might want to be an elector and they might think its hard for them it wouldnt be anything with out electors they do more than just stand behind the president they do more they help the president the president we have today wouldnt be able to run for president without a group of electors . and they need a college for someone who wants to be an elector. this college should be honored to be in a program like that these electors are needed in our country with out electors we would have nothing if we didnt have electors the electoral college is widely know as an non democratic method of selecting a president that outa be by declaring the canidate who recieves the most popular votes the winner .\n\nthese are all the reasons why we need the electors program . because they play in a big role of our country and dthey also good for our state and .l so we need these progems to show young student that being an elector is not easy itbis very hard and a long process and we need to show students how the experience is and they also need to be knowleged trained to do stuff that will make our country better . because if they mess up on one little thing its an automatic fire for them . we need these colleges because it plays a big role and it reuires the votes. of the president meaining it helps the president win .",
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"content": "I can fully imagine a world with self driving cars. They would make the road so much safer for everyone who travels in the world. There would be a major decrease in the amount of reckless drivers, and drunk drivers. I am totally for the idea of self driving cars.\n\nSelf driving cars can have many impacts on our society, one way is by cutting down on emissions of cars by using less fuel. The text states, \"The cars he forsees would use half the fuel of today's taxis...\" Sergey Brin cofounder of Google said that the self driving cars can cut down on the amount of fuel we use and be more efficient than a human driven car. Cutting fuel usage in half could save a lot of carbon dioxide emission from cars making it more environmentally friendly than the cars we drive today.\n\nAnother way self driving cars would benefit the population is that they would be more flexible than most public transportation systems. The text also states, \"...and offer far more flexibility than a bus.\" Sergey Brin said that these cars would make it much easier to get a ride than if it was public transportation like a bus, making it more convienent to people and more appealing.\n\nFinally another pro for self driving cars and the most important one is that a google cars have not been in a crash in over half a million miles while being on the road. The text also states, \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash,\" Google cars can be very trustworthy, showing their superiority to a human driven car and how much safer it can be.\n\nOn the contrary there are some downsides to these cars. For example they are not fully driverless. According to the text, \"but so far, Google cars aren't truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents.\" If you come across construction, which is not uncommon on todays roadways you will be alerted by the car saying you have to take over and control the car through the traffic.\n\nThere are many pros for the self driving cars, safe, economically friendly, and make schedules more flexible. As well as some downsides, like they are not fully autonomous yet. Overall, the positives of self driving cars can outweigh the cons by mass margins. If all you had to do was drive through constructions and then sit back and relax while the car does the rest on a long road trip, that is not so bad. It is way better than having to do it all by yourself for the whole time.",
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"content": "Facial Action Coding System (FACS) is a new technology that allows computers to see the humans emotion. I think the Facial Action Coding System is vaulable. I think the Facial Action Coding System would be very helpful in classrooms. I think this becuase the computer would be able to identify if the student is bored, confused, or understanding. The computer would need to be able to identify this so it can alter the schoolwork or the lesson to help the student understand the lesson better.\n\nAs a OTHER_PII, I know classes and lessons can be boring. There is some types of problems and lessons that I find entertaining though. As a big sports fan, math problems or history problems that deal with football or basketball, I find entertaining. I just don't see those types of problems very often. If a student is bored, they might fall asleep or lose train of thought. With the Facial Action Coding System, students wouldn't get bored so often. Students wouldn't get bored so often because the new technology would be able to recognize that the student is bored and would alter the problem or lesson to something that is entertaining, something that is funny, or something that catches the readers attention.\n\nWhen a student doesn't understand the topic or the lesson, there really isn't much us students can do about it. If a student is confused about a lesson, the Facial Action Coding System has the ablility to identify that. The Facial Action Coding System could modify the lesson or the question to help the student better understand the subject. For example, algebra is a tough subject. Especially with all the equations and steps we have to remember to follow. I struggled with a certain topic in algebra. I struggled with that topic until I found a different way to solve it. Facial Action Coding System works in a similiar way. If a student is struggling or doesn't understand a topic, the computer would be able to change or modify the lesson and maybe the student would understand better. The FACS would maybe be able to teach a different or an easier way to solve the same types of problems.\n\nTime to deal with the opposite. If a student completely understands the lesson and understands all the steps needed to solve the problem, the FACS would be able to identify that and would keep giving the same types of problems. If it isn't broken, don't fix it. Right? The FACS would be able to see that the student understands and is able to catch on with the lesson. So why would they change the lesson? Students that understand should be able to practice on the type of problems that they understand.\n\nTeachers aren't able to alter the formula or lesson just because a couple students don't understand. So with FACS, the students will get the proper learning that suits them. FACS would make schoolwork and homework so much easier because it would teach the lesson to the student in a way that the student is sure to understand. Students don't all think the same. Teachers clearly don't understand that we don't all think the same. With the help from FACS, every student would be able to understand the lessons. Which would probably raise test scored, homework scores, and grades in general. Some students undertand things that other students don't, and vice verca. For example, I understand sports. I understand sports because I was taught and I learned about sports. Other students don't undertand sports maybe because they just don't find them interesting or maybe because they had a hard time understanding sports. Like I said before, students may be confused, students may understand, or students may get bored. FACS would alter the lessons to fit students uderstanding better.",
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"content": "The mood created memoir peaceful happy riminder said remenber coming get beter Life The alot says Growing enviroment istelled great sense Family nothing blood relative The says glade parents help lot says I always grateful parents love sacrifice The reminds us alot started end says I never forget parents turned simple house home CAPS",
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"content": "Luke wants other people to join the seagoing cowboy program. He wants people to join it so that persons life would change. From the world war 2 he wants to help the people that doesnt have enough food or their house got destroyed. It will help you because when we are done giving our will to that person he or she will want to help other people too. Also he could take care of any animal that is damaged or hurt and he will take care of them when they are shipped overseas. It will be an opportunity of a lifetime for your animal because we will treat them well and give them enough food for them to survive. When you see people treating the animals they will want to be part of the group so he can help other people or animals.\n\nIt will be an opportunity of a lifetime because you get to travel overseas and probably see the place that you always dreamed of going to. Also you might want to have the animal you were taking care of because you worked hard on taking care of it. Maybe when your children grow up they will want to be part of the Seagoing Cowboy program. You will be having alot of fun because you get to see some amazing things that you never seen in your life. Also you get to take a gondola ride in Venice, italy you cant say no to that.\n\nWhen you return from the trip overseas you will never forget about it because you will want to tell the whole world about how much fun you had. When you tell the people how much fun you had hey will want to join the Seagoing Cowboys program. Also on the trip back home you unload all the animals you can play volleyball games and other games that will help pass the time. Also you will always remember the trip of a lifetime",
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"content": "In paragraph 2 it was stated that Google cars aren't truly driverless. Also in paragraph 7 it was said that none of the cars developed so far are completly driverless and humans need to stay alert to take over the wheel. Finally in paragraph 9 it asks who would be responsible if technology fails. I'm against driverless cars.\n\nHumans need to know how to drive a car for simple actions. In paragraph 2 it says divers sometimes need to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as roadwork or accidents.\n\nStated in paragraph 7 none of the cars developed so far are completly driverless and humans need to stay alert. Human need to know how to drive a car incase technology fails or an emergency. If a human doesn't know how to drive a car and relies on the car and you're in a dangerous situation, then the driver and passengers are most likely to be killed. A human needs to know how to navigate through work zones and around accidents. The Google Car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over.\n\nSafety is the number one most important thing when being in a car. It's the drivers job to make sure everyone in the car and themself is safe. If someone is injured or technology fails, who is at fault- the driver or the manufactuer? Trafiic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.\n\nI'm against driverless cars because Google cars aren't truly driverless, humans need to stay alert to take over the wheel, and who would be responsible if technology fails.",
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"content": "Autonomous cars are the cars of the future.\n\nThey will be able to drive themselves without any human interaction needed.\n\nAutonomous cars would be far more intelligent than any human driver, preventing numerous crashes that are due to driver discraction.\n\nAutonomous cars will forever change the way people commute.\n\nAutonomous cars would change the way people commute to and from work.\n\nThey would also change the way people travel.\n\nWith no human needed at the wheel, autonomous us cars can make traveling long distances a lot more enjoyable.\n\nIt would also allow the human occupants to do others things rather than just sit and look out the window.\n\nAutonomous cars are also a lot smarter than the average human driver.\n\nThis comes from the fleet of sensors that are stored on-board. These sensors include cameras, GPS, inertial motion sensors, automotive radar, and the most important of all, LIDAR.\n\nLIDAR uses laser beams to map the area around the car.\n\nThis generates and 360 degree 3-D model of what is happening around the car.\n\nIn the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", the author points out many good atributes of the autonomous car.\n\nThe author claims that autonomous cars would use one half of the fuel used by the taxis of today.\n\nLess fuel used could mean less toxic emmissions and a cleaner environment.\n\nThe author also states that the autonomous car would have more flexibility than a bus.\n\nToday, a bus runs along a predetermined route.\n\nA public-transportation system that used autonomous cars would be far better for those pepole who do not want to stay along that predetermined route.\n\nAutonomous cars will also be a lot safer.\n\nThe article reports that Google's fleet of autonomous cars have driven more than half a million miles and have not had an accident.\n\nThe autonomous car would be a lot safer for the people riding inside but also for the people around it.\n\nAutonomous cars are able to see everything that is going on in its sphere of influence.\n\nThis is something a human driver could not do because we do not have a 360 degree range of vision.\n\nThe autonomous car is driving its way into our everyday lives.\n\nIts will make the world a safer and cleaner place to live in.\n\nThe autonomous car will change the way people commute forever.",
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"content": "Censorship I understand libraries would decide keep certain books shelves Libraries place learning work If sitting near someone public library reading smut could feel awkward Although people find certain items unoffensive disagree Imagine mother young child decided wonder library Your child finds magazine It s CAPS Not something going want explain child If library kept magazine never would happened Libraries public place taken seriously If people really want find something inappropriate find somewhere else The modern world today makes easy people find anything without large hassle Therefore fine keep certain materials libraries How people take libraries seriously dirty books books rude language scandalous themes If trying get work done learn distracting items shelves make things difficult Libraries serious places treated",
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"content": "The mood created author memoir positive one The author tells parents immigrated Cuba born He never said one negative thing life growing Newark New Jersey He mentioned parents love cooking love passed He said grateful He also mentioned along cooking Passionate Cuban music He described neighborhood made cultures came together great solidarity friendship As final sentence author stated never forget parents turned simple house home",
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"content": "First off I don't think there are a such thing as aliens so i don't think that would be the case. Im here to tell you guys and ladies that this is a natural landform built from rocks piled up and all around each other. If you think the aliens did it how could they have done it if it's sticking outside the ground instead of inside. As you see in the pictures when the years go by the cameras and pictures get better asthe face structure starts to disappear and it makes it look like a bunch of rocks. They don't know if they actually seen a face they said it was winter on that side when this picture was tooken. So there were clouds and just a lot of stuff covering the cameras when they took the picture. This is a natural landform from rocks and other stuff but i would see why you would think that. It is kind of weird to see other things like this on other planets that don't even have human life or something close to it for this to happen. You should have already known it wasn't a face when JPL web site said it wasn't and it was just a natural landform like all the other craters.",
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"content": "Artificial intelligence and mechanical electronics have been the core of contemporary advancement. Robotics is now a field that is not unknown and the spike, we are seeing in its implementation is something huge. Today, robots are present everywhere whether it is at home as your cleaner and vacuum or in the operation theatre as surgeons' assistants. However, the opinions on it are quite the opposite. Some believe that it is the best invention in the history of mankind while some believe otherwise. I opine that its benefits are weighed higher on the scale as compared to its drawbacks\r\n\r\nTo begin with, robots have taken the world by storm through the outcome and their performance. The first and foremost advantage is it has never been so easy to solve complex problems as it is today. robots have the innate ability to do various tasks together and to provide accurate answers. Secondly, they are now sharing the workload of human beings by performing various levels of work thus providing them with a sense of relaxation. For instance, many surgeries are now performed by Da Vinci which is a specialized robot to assist surgeons and in this way, half of the burden has been reduced.\r\n\r\nOn the other side, there are drawbacks that should be taken into consideration. One of them is the industry will soon be converted into an AI-driven workforce and as a ,result millions of people will be jobless as e!employers will prefer this one-time investment instead of paying an amount every month to the employee. Another thing that is alarming is the lack of power to change decisions timely. These electronics work on the installed and manufactured intelligence therefore they do not have the capability to switch their mode according to circumstances. For example, if a robot is teaching a class that is not disciplined, it has no power to process how to keep children motivated.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I would like to say that in spite of a few deficiencies, it is going to help human beings in great ways in the near future . All we need to understand is that these creatures can take up our responsibilities but can never give us emotional support. So, use the robots but stay connected to the people",
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"content": "It is often said that most people benefit students contemplate at an institute or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. This essay will discuss the debate, and give a concluding view.\n\t On the one hand, most companies desire to get a highly educated worker. Due to employees play a key role in exceeding other competitors and running a successful company. Therefore, these ways are opening up by going to institute and improving your education. For evidence from the most successful people graduated at an educational institution. Another argument is that if they study at the educational institution, they will be bosom friend who come from other countries of the world. Thus they will be able to work in a team and adapt to anything. \n\tBy contrast, opponents of this view point out that not all pupils live in a situation where study at the institute, or even possible. Examples can be seen in less affluent countries, where the expense of maintaining a seminary may be hard. Finally, it must be said that not all young people actually desire to study at the educational institution, because their interests lie elsewhere. For example, some of them want to work after school.\n\tOverall, it is logical to conclude that a highly educated worker, unearth the culture of communications should be positive of our enterprise. It would appear that it serves the interest of both the offspring and family's environmental.",
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"content": "In recent years, taking a responsibility to help elders has been of much interest to the general public. Some deem that it is reasonable to take care of old ages legally. Nevertheless, other people assert that it is never a duty for young generations.\n\nTo begin with, it is evident that elderly people don’t have sufficient strength to labour outside. As getting older, their health condition will get worse mentally and physically. According to an sociologist in USA, he pointed out that it will be more and more difficult for the elder to earn a living when their ages are over 65. It can be said that more than 65 years aged elderly will encounter substantial issues concerning survival such as foods, shelters and apparels. There is no doubt that the government should prioritize to support older families for their stable aged years.\n\nOn top of that, people should not dismiss older families’ economic matters. Due to their lacked capability to work, their budgets will be shrunk on a day-to-day basis even though their ages are rising and their medical fees are more needed. Moreover, they also already consumed most of finances to support their springs in their young ages. Let’s take an 80 years old man who has no money to cure himself because he spent all of his money to raise his kids. In this situation, there is no method for him to flee from this situation. Therefore, there is no doubt that the young should return their rewards to return their contributions for nations and families. \n\nIn conclusion, it goes without saying that the youngsters should take their duties for the older’s better welfare. This is because they are lack of physical and mental ability to work and loss of financial assistance. Given that this trend will become more prevalent in the future, the young generations should find ways to minimize its influences from this issue.",
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"content": "I personally, think that it would be a bad idea to use this kind of technology in shools to help students learn. This is mainly because of errors that the computer could make, or other outside factors. If the program makes changes to the lesson due to facial expressions alone, then it would make an unbelievable amount of mistakes. In case you still aren't sure what im getting at ill explain in more detail below.\n\nFirst lets just ignore the outside factors and I'll talk about just the flaws of it telling emotions based completely off of facial expressions. Im sure that I am not alone in saying that no matter how I'm being taught I will, without a doubt, be bored. If It detects this then it will try to switch to a way of teaching that it thinks that I will enjoy. The problem, however, comes when I'm bored with that way as well. Because it would keep switching, it would be almost impossible to learn anything due to the program changing how the lesson is tought every five minutes.\n\nNow lets ignore the problems with the facial recognition not working properly, and focus on the outside factors that would make putting this in our schools a disaster. Lets say that you hate a the way it is currently teaching the lesson. Then out of nowhere you see PROPER_NAME over in the corner fall out of his chair and smile, meanwhile your computer is sitting there thinking, \"Oh boy, the human really likes it when I teach this way!\" and decides to teach like that more often. Well now that kid is stuck learning that way until the program can take a hint and change it. Now lets explore the opposite effect. Lets say that the program has been doing an amazing job teaching you, but your cat died yesterday so you are verry sad. The Program now thinks that it is doing a bad job teaching you and decides to cross that method of teaching off of the list and try another one. Now you aren't learning as well as you could be otherwise.\n\nIn conclusion, I think that it would be a horrible idea to utilize this technology in our school systems. With even one of the errors that I mentioned it would be a bad idea, but with both of them happening at once they would practically be destroying the students' educations.",
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"content": "Holidays are deemed necessary for the employee to rest so they can perform better. The length of days off may vary, but many believe that company should give their workers a minimum of a month per year. I believe that this is important to prevent burnout and improve overall health so they can do their assigned task well.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, holidays are vital for everyone, including workers. The company should allow their workers to leave the office for up to months per year to prevent burnout. Burnout which commonly occurs in workers, especially in a high-pressure environment, may predispose to bad decision-making and a decline in work performance. Moreover, staff may opt to leave the company that treats them badly by forcing them to work without sufficient days off. For instance, many young workers are resigned from their job in a startup company due to stress in the high-pressure environment. Hence, it is important for business owners to give their employers several days off to take a good rest and maintain their mental well-being so they can perform well in their jobs.\r\n\r\nSecondly, vacations are necessary to maintain the staff's general health. Overworked and tired workers may lead to a decline in work performance and decision-making. Proper sleep and rest are vital in maintaining good health to perform daily tasks. For example, a tired doctor on 24 hours shift may make mistakes in assessing and treating their patients that may lead to malpractice. Therefore, it is important for a company to allow their staff to take time off the office so they can rest peacefully and fully recharge their stamina in order to perform their responsibilities.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, business owners should give their workers sufficient time for a vacation to maintain the employee's mental and physical health as it is vital for people to do their job well.",
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"content": "Dear I believe computers positive effect people They give ability talk people online friends also family live far away also allow kind work ca nt done hand even allow people learn far away places people First computers positive effect people They give ability talk people online friends also families live far away For example half family live mom uses internet communicate Secondly computers positive effect people They allow homework cant done hand Such essays typed ca nt hand written projects school Lastly computers positive effect people Computers allow people learn far away places people For example I first came country I nt know much I research learn great things In conclusion computers effect people They give ability talk people online friends also families live far away also allow kind work ca nt done hand even allow people learn faraway places people",
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"content": "Imagen being in a regular classroom. Imagen yourself not understing the topic. Imagen not being able to tell the teacher you don't get it because you're afraid to be made fun of. This is what the Facial Action Coding System prevents student from experiencingwhen taught a new topic. This helps student by having the system already knowing they don't understand to topic they had just learned. Although Facial Action Coding System watches your face is wierd, it'll help out teachers and students because it'll help our classroom be more understanding, helpful, and communicate better.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System can help classrooms be more understanding.\n\nIn the article, it states, \"In fact, we humans perform this same impressive \"calculation\" everyday. For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feelling simply by the look on her face (paragraph 5).\" It also states,\"For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears in you screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be differnet (paragraph 6).\" These quotes show that classrooms can be more understanding with this system. Because if you frown, the teacher will be notified and will ask if you understand yet or need help. And this system will help teachers to more \"calculated\" of what their class needs more work on. And understand the topic they have learned.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System can help classrooms be helpful. In the article it states,\" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor (paragraph 6) .\" This means that this system can be helpful by providing information to the teacher. And so the teacher can have an effective teaching plan to help out the class in learning the topic better. So they don't get lost and confused on the topic.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System can help classrooms communicate better. In the article it said,\"The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive- for video games or video surgery. \"Most humans communication in nonverbal, including emotional communication,\" notes Dr. Huang. \"So computers need to undersatnd that, too(paragraph 6).\" This all means that this sysytem will help us communicate better. And because most of human communication happens nonverbally. It won't be too diffcult to do. This system will help the students and the teacher to communicate with each other effectivly without saying a word.\n\nIn concluion, better communication, more helpful, and more understanding are some of the pros of having the Facial Action Coding System in the classroom. Although having the Facial Action Coding System watch your face is pretty weird. Other than that, it's pretty cool that it can help the student(s) and the teacher. The students get a chance to work together to help the teacher understand them better. This system helps them communicate better overall. And helps the teacher to create a better and effective teaching plan overall, too. This Facial Action Coding System helps the student and the teacher to understand, comunicate and help each other.",
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"content": "In story winter hibiscus minfong Ho author concluding story last sentence showing everyone seasons growing plants comes time flowers start growing back take care plants favorite lives take care Also author probably put conclusion story like get people interested reading story later getting left sense suspense dont know really go back plants another reason I think auther ended still snowing cares plans isnt gon na worry right time For example says when come back I take test thats showing isnt giving anythin loves keep trying gets",
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"content": "ON I understand mom saying She told couldnt get anything pay bills She thought wasnt lot I told Im fine I got I wanted around didnt understand good father helping take care us My mom take care kids self hises But daddy would always say I know would give But beening I didnt want heer stuff cause lies My mom found tow jobs keep everything Then came everything ok grandma passed away My mom auntie uncle make money stuff looked pretty everything went know still cry think Then time I didnt patient hard think gone So mom tell I need learn understand shes better place love ones But day I cant understand meaning someone says gone But forgotten",
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"content": "People have been driving for many years. Cars today have evolved dramastically since the first car came out. Since we have new technology, it means that we have more non-fuel efficient cars. We need to think of a way to cut out all the negative things that cars give us. Paris, for example is banning cars that have an even numbered license plate on Monday. Bogota, Columbia is also banning cars and telling people to find an alternative transportation. Lastly Vauban, Germany is demanding to be \"car-free\".\n\nParis has had days of near-record pollution, so they had to think of a plan to reduce the pollution in the air. On Monday motorists with even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave thier cars at home of pay a 22-euro fine ($31). The same would apply to odd-numbered plates the following day. Almost 4,000 drivers were fined and 27 people had their cars impounded for their reaction to the crime.\n\nIn Bogota, Columbia millions of Columbians hiked, biked, skated, or took buses to work during the car-free day. This day has been going on for 3 years. People faced $25 fine if they violated this event. Citizens were saying that \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower the air pollution\". Parks and Sports Centers have been built, old un-even sidewalks have been smoothed out and rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic.\n\nIn Vauban, Germany residents of this upscale community are giving up their cars. Street parking, driveways and home garages are generally forbidden in this experiment of being car-free. Car ownership is allowed but there are only 2 places to park; large garages at the edge of the development, where a car owner buys a space for 40,000, along with a home. 70% of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57% sold a car to move here.\n\nEven though many people still own cars, they still give off bad things for our enviroment. Many cars produce a gas that is bad for the air. Many countries have banned cars on certain days to cut down on air pollution. Paris makes you pay a fine if you are caught driving a car on a certain day. Bogota, Columbia has a specific day that cars are banned and you have to find a different way of transportation. Lastly, Vauban, Germany is demanding to be car-free and have certain ways to have cars but pay for them. If we can keep making acceptions of taking different ways of transportation then maybe we can cut down on air pollution for good.",
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"content": "I personally like the idea of driverless cars. I think it is more handy, useful, and helpful as we progress in the future ahead of us. Data shows that these cars have driven more than half a million miles without a single crash. The less crashes on the roads, the better. All it does is make it a safer and more pleasent environment for everybody on the roads.\n\nThese cars also have an awful lot of sensors too. They have even tried to become more up to date with them to prevent roll overs, skids, or any bad type of accident waiting to happen. These cars have alot of control over what goes on. Such as with speed, breaks, power, and wheels. Which is more control than a human driver can have alone.\n\nThey can go to a speed up to 25 miles per hour. Which is not to fast, but not too slow. The car even makes sure the human hands are on the wheel at all times, so when needed we can take back over the car. Human skills are still needed for sites in the car such as workzones, bad traffic, and different complicaated road situations. The car even vibrates the driver seat when it is about to back into something so the driver can be alert and know what to do and how to handle it as quickly as possible.\n\nWhile the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver. I think that statement makes things very safe. Although the car is called driverless, It's really not. Humans can still be in total control if wanted. All thats needed to do is shut the driverless system down. But, they are alerted when needed, and they are still required to be alert and to pay attention at all times regardless of the situation. If we had the option of this car, why would we not want it? All it can do is save us hastle, and time. While giving us a better and safer experence during it all.\n\nI think it's worth a shot and we do not have much to loose with trying it out. At first, sure, it may be a scary thought. This generation has become so dependent on technology, we will begin to lack our skills. But on the other hand, we make the technology. So we can create it to fit our needs and what we wish for it to do.\n\nAll in all, i don't think this car idea is a negative thing. It can only be positive, and we can fit it to our needs.",
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"content": "Nature affect everyone even dont think Expecially cyclist traveling anywhere everywhere In Do exceed Posted Speed Limit Joe Kurmaskie perfect example settings laffect people like cyclist When youre riding bike actually cross country transportation know youre going The cyclist story decided take advice older fellows ends going wrong route cyclist town water werent towns begin anymore atleast If dont water like guy hills could kill And case know example l gathered pebbles struck mouth Id read sucking stones help take mind thrist This guy knew little bit survival tips If hed gone way without standing yo thrist hills probably would kind stroke That way setting could harm",
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"content": "Dear I beleive using computers good thing They help learn subjects places think interesting nt know They help save environment These reasons I think using computers good thing First help learn new subjects Say report school nt know thing You could go sit computer enter ORGANIZATION google search press enter There hundreds even thousands entries You could sit forever learn magnificent creations You learn subject computer anytime You could even learn computer history Seond help save environment People always using paper paper comes trees When cut trees harming environment We depleeting oxygen supply destroying habitats animals insects If everybody used computers would using less paper We could use send documents papers could bring tax appointments pair suits Computers could even used school work The teacher could asign homework email student student could fill email back Sure would still use paper somethings would using way less People could also use less fossil We could talk via internet things like skype communicate witness waring burn Thirdly computers could help us advance Computers help find ways many things better medical treatments efficient travel even every day life We could find better ways treat serious medical conditions help computers We could find ways treat cancers maybe even common cold Computers could also hep us find efficient way They could help find mroe efficient feel efficient could help make teleportation device It could also help us explore deeper space find planets galaxies Computers could also help us every day life When get imagein able screen able hot shower breakfast work equipment ready within five minutes That really would future computers Those reasons computers school reasearch space beyond",
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"content": "Reporting violent crimes and other violent issues could represents a adverse consequence sometimes. Overall, it is important to enphasyded that people are geting more and more violant and we can't blame only media as a mainly factor for those behavior.\nThis kind of questions is almost a phylosical one and we will keeping this doubt for a long time, or even never now if people are becoming more agressive because they are more expousure to this kind of news, or if we are having more report regarding to violence just because people are getting more violent.\nI believe that people could feel estimulated to be a criminous person when they have a minimium certain that they won't be punish.\nFor instance, stolen and other minimius crimes had increase at california region after they anounced that stolen under tham $1000 are consider a crime anymore. So the sensation that people could do anything wrong and that is no penalty for that, estimulates the number for stolen.\nIn other hand, when we see some hardly rules the number of crime are dipest low, as we can see at Dubai, for instance. As all penalties are really hard and strongly implemented this place is considering highest safe.\nI bilieve that restricting any kind of information be showen in the media doesn't solve the problem, and, in fact, bring another new problem related to limited population information. When people know what are happening, type of crimes, etc, they could be prepare to handle with those problems and prevent theirselves.",
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"content": "There are both positive and negative things about the driverless cars. I think they have more of an negative impact, because even though the driver can get power of the car, if needed it's still dangerous. People are more attempted to not pay attention if they don't have to control the vehicle, unless something goes wrong.\n\nIt could also be dangerous for other drivers who are on the road who're driving their vehicle them selves. The person with the driverless car could not be paying attention and not take control of the car when needed. The person in the driverless car would more than likely tend to be on their phones, thinking nothing is going to happen. Something could go wrong and the driver might not be able to get control of the car.\n\nAlso the manufacturer could get the blame for the car, even if it was really the person in the driverless car who didn't take action their selves, when something went wrong. It could cause a lot of conflict between the driver and manufacturer if something like that was to happen.\n\nAlso, as stated in the text \"why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver? Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?\" Who would like a car that you didn't really feel like you had that much control over?\n\nAlso if the driverless car can brake itself, what about certain weather conditions? If it's snowing and their is ice on the roads the driver needs to be able to brake the car their selves. Or if it's raining the streets get wet and slick.. the driver needs to be able to brake the car their selves. The driverless car being able to brake itself could be dangerous.\n\nI think driverless cars would not be that safe to be on roads with other vehicles. I also think they'd cause conflicts, if something was to go wrong with them.",
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"content": "A time I patient I doctors office I waiting doctor come But taking really long time come I patient hard stay caled andy doctor came I started feel better",
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"content": "In some countries, people tend to be keen on past stories or events of their accommodation, whether it is a house or a building. I suppose that the rising interests of the whole society in culture and art contribute to this.\r\n\r\nPeople are better educated today in most countries with economic development. They can take courses related to history, culture, and art at a young age. Particularly, those living in big cities have access to history museums or art galleries. As a result, they become aware of these subjects, and some of them even fall in love. In addition, there are more cultural activities held in the society, such as exhibitions of historical materials or plays about historical figures, which attract a growing proportion of the population. These changes all lead to increased attention on cultural and historical issues, specifically, the history relating to their own accommodation.\r\n\r\nThere are plenty of approaches for these people to investigate for what they want. One way is that they can search for some information regarding the local history in the library, where they may also have access to endless data on the Internet. Another suggestion for them is to have conversations with some elder neighbors, especially those who are knowledgeable. If they know about something, they are always willing to share. Also, consulting some specialists in this field is a practical approach. From them, average people may receive guidance about what steps they should take to find the answers.\r\n\r\nIn most cases, these instructions may help people to find out the history of the house or the building they live in. However, the situation can turn out to be complicated sometimes. Therefore, the government or the community should provide some support for the residents.",
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"content": "Exploring Venus is very hard to make it but not imposible, in the article says that Venus is 800 degrees Fahrenheit which that almost imposible for a human to survive in that weather. But only with a good suit that can be posible becase the tecnhology that we have in these days and the tecnhology that NASA have that can possible. but they will need a good suit because Venus has venus has the atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blanckets.\n\nThe question is if our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientist even discussing futher visits to its surface? is because Venus may be the planet that it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet soler in outr system.\n\nIn conclution there is a posibility for the humans to get to Venus because there is not much difference as the Earth. Venus has rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains and craters. so those are some big posibilities that Venus can have humans in the future.",
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"content": "I think censorship libraries wrong Books movies magazines ment inlighten inform entertain reads If find something offensive book movie even magazine nt mean next person If nt want child reading watching things limit watch read nt make people nt problem reading watching suffur They right books movies magazines shelves There times I ve wanted book libaray wo nt get adult content book Yet I raised reading book nt adult content The goes movies I allowed watch rated movies I eight years old Yet movies ratings tell s child adult like rated The libaray works child rent movie rated without parent present get goes movie theater Parent worried childrens well nt make libraries take books movies magazines shelves things find offensive Other people pay taxes books movies magazines would like read much next one like libraries bann The way story written Someone found offensive gathered lot people nt read book took word person banned book If read book d would understood nt ment offensive fictional story I remember living town lot christin people libraries christin books When I went libraren asked series books always turned christin population I told I much rights books shelve books shelves I never got books maybe someday look back requests think way gotten The reason I think censorship wrong one able tell people read watch When pay taxes everyone books movies libraries shelves If problem child watches reads limit child reads watches Do nt take away people rights read watch want",
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"content": "I think that people should join the Seagoing Cowboys progam. I think that because it will give young boys/men more experience. In the passage it says, \" Luke Bomberger had no idea that his life would change so quick.\". I think that he was really over wellmed that his friend asked him to go on a trip with him to Europe.\n\nSome things that were said, was that they traveled to places like Greece,\n\nChina, Venice, and many more. Trust me I went there for such good causes, like to help countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more. Did I forget to explain that the UNRRA hired the Seagoing Cowboys to take care of the horses,and young cows, that were sent overseas.\n\nThere are also lots of things that could happen while you are aboard the ship, there was one time when it was raining really hard and I was going back to report to the captain, because my job was to check on all the animals\n\nevery hour. So I was going up a slippery ladder and I slid down the ladder onto my backside. My heart raced as I shot feet first toward the an oppening on the side of the ship. A small strip of metal along the edge stopped my slide, keeping me from flying overboard into the dark Atlantic. I was happy to be alive, but I couldn't work for a couple of days because of CRACKED RIBS!\n\nI also found time to have fun after the injury, especially after the return of trips after the animals had been unloaded. Us cowboys played baseball, volleyball, table tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and some more games that helped us pass the time. But I will tell you this being a Seagoing Cowboy is not easy but it is full of adventures for people like you and me. It made me nore aware of people of the other countries and their needs.\n\nI can relate to Luke Bomberger because my friends invited me to Girls Scouts and I really do have to admitt that it was a lot of fun. There were lots of adventures to do, we wen on field trips, we even to a trip NIPSCO.",
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"content": "In opinion features selling affect cyclist many ways For example talking abut terair changing long strat roads shard winday one speed limit changing saidhe waterdepleting fuier sands like hard time doesntwnt go",
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"content": "Im currently writing comic book I havent begun drawin yet Here major scene book CAPS yet asked curiosity CAPS yet replied sound fear voice They lost really lost Are yet little asked CAPS youll patient ORGANIZATION said becoming annoyed quickly So walked hours still sign castle Little egar meet queen imagined queen kind patient beautiful woman could tired lifting shoulders said CAPS castle long patient minutes finnly saw castle I I said smile Jumping sholder bolted narrow path way Because waited excited ever Not found castle learned patient",
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"content": "Venus is Earth's sister plant or as other people like to call it, \"Earth's twin\" Venus is counted as Earth's sister or \"twin\" planet because of how close in desity and size Venus is to Earth. Scientists have tried and tried to explore Venus with little robots but the little robots only lasted a couple of hours on Venus's surface, Venus is believed to be uch like Earth is now. Scientists believe that Venus used to be covered in oceans, greenlife and other type's of life before Earth. Scientists are worried to physically go on Venus themselves because of the dangers they will facewhen arriving on Venus, Venus's atmosphere is blanketetd in a thick blanket of almost 97%, there are clouds of sulforic acid, tempertures reach to at least 800 and the atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater than Earth's. The author thinks that scientists should get up close and personal despite the danger or \"challenges\" that they fac from Venus because, we could have insights on Venus, we wouldn't get to sample anything, weshouldn't be limited in exploring just because of the dnagers. We should explore to the very edges of imaginations and innovation.",
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"content": "The first chart indicates the results of a survey of people in the UK who traveled abroad and the reasons why they traveled from 1994 and 1998. In addition, there is another chart which areas they visited. Overall, it can be seen the main reason the UK residents visited abroad is for holiday, and the total number of people who traveled steadily increased every year, except for 1995. In addition, they visited Western Europe extraordinarily much higher than north America, and other areas.\nInitially, the total number of abroad visiter started at 22,072 in 1994. Somehow the total number decreased in 1995. It was specificalltry 21,610, but the number soared to 24,949 and reached a peak of 28,828 in 1996 and 1998 respectively. To break down the detail, the main purpose is for holidays. It is apparently much higher than other reasons and its percentage tend to be almost two-thirds every year. Aside from holidays, two reasons follow the second reason for business, the third reason for visits to friends and relatives. It is not so significant changes in percentage.\nInterestingly, , they almost visited western Europe from 1994 to 1998. The proportion of visitors is much higher than in north America and other areas.It seems to be around 90 percent of visitors went to western Europe.\nThe proportion of visiter can be seen slightly increased, however, there is no significant change.",
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"content": "From point view student books music movies magazines etc removed shelves material contains I read watch listen things everyday parents thrilled nt changed person I today You ca nt escape things like drugs sex explicit things might want children reading It s society These things everywhere taking materials shelves going solve problem I think freedom read listen watch whatever would like removing things takes away freedom I think inappropriate books music movies magazines etc taken shelves CAPS items society It s everywhere look Billboards signs books magazine music television movies etc taking things like books movies music magazines shelves going stop inappropriate behavoir Everyone society still going act way whether stop children hearing You still commercials billboards etc What going Ban children life general No I nt think Reading listening learning stuff nt going make child horrible person I personally think certain age need know stuff For example I m good student I behave well outside school I good friends I get along family I also read every single one books All people drugs suicidal sexual related things These books extremely good Definitely best books I ve ever read reading books nt changed I I nt drugs I m sexual things would hurt I read books From experience reading things honestly kind helpful It takes deeper things Everyone knows basic learning get school extremely Reading books listening kind music watching kinds movies takes whole different point view Back experience books read stories based life relationship daughter Crank trilogy books show life You see struggle hurt pain family goes starts walk monster also known Reading books makes realize I nt want ever put things family It gives whole new look things After reading I believe I wo nt ever offensive things From experiences student I nt believe taking offensive material shelves necessary It gives deeper look information things Also ca nt escape explicit material These things part life something ca nt run hide You accept fact s s going away If think children going start kinds things reading talk You ca nt protect children offensive material At least forever",
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"content": "Driverless are something you think about in the futrue but no driverless cars are coming. Google's cofounder Sergey Brin envisions a future wth driverless public transportation. The driverless car would use half the fuel of today's taxis use. They would have more flexibility then a bus. Sergey Brin believes driverless cars would change the world.\n\nGoogle has been working on these kinds of cars since 2009. Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash. Google cars arent not driverless ; the car alerts the driver when dealling with complicated traffic. Different companies are making computer driven cars. In 1950s , General Motors created a concept car that could run on a special test track. The track was embedded with an electrical cable to a receiver on the car. The problem with smart-roads is that it would be to expensive to upgrade the roads. The problem with driverless car is that if the car got into an accedent who is at fault the operater of the car or the manufacture.\n\nDriverless cars are soon to be part of our world. The cars would be extremely use full in big communitys and replace taxis. The problem is the cars are not 100% driverless and if the car get in to trouble and the driver is not paying attention there will be an accident.",
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"content": "The author supports his idea on why we should study Venus despite the dangers it presents is because acording to the story Venus is often referred to as Earth's \"twin.\" Another thing the article says is that Venus is the closest planet to Earth beause of the density and size. Venus also used to be covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life.\n\nI think we should study Venus despite the dangers because it used to be the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. We can also study it so it can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, but it will take a while to get there. There are also downsides like how will people live in Venus if it is too hot for us to live there or it'll still be hard for researchers to study Venus because researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else because they cannot touch the ground otherwise they will burn. There may be some solutions to study Venus a little bit more because according to NASA they have an idea in which it involves a vehicle. It will look like a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. The vehicle will be hovering over Venus to avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. Although the temperatures will be around 170 degrees Fahrenheit and the air pressure will be a little strong, it will still be survivable for humans.\n\nThose are the reasons on why I agree with the author suggesting that we should study venis despite all the dangers the planet has.",
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"content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon obstacles builders Empire State Building faced allow dirigibles dock One example one paragraph existing law airships flying low urban areas This law would make illegal ship ever tie building even approach area",
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"content": "I think that the \"Face on Mars\" was not created by aliens. It is just a natural landform that happend to resemble a human face. Besides, even if alien life did exist, I doubt they would make a human face shaped landform. It is hard to believe that alien life could've created something without leaving any other evidence with it. Some reasons to support my theory are that alien life is unlikely, a natural landform is much more realistic, and the face could've been an illusion created by the camera.\n\nSo far we have found no alien life so it is highly unlikely that this was created by aliens. Though there have been possible signs of life on Mars that does not mean that there definitely is. Many people believe that aliens are not real. I believe that they could be but probably not somewhere so close to us. I do not believe that there is any life on Mars.\n\nIt is much more likely that the \"Face on Mars\" is just a mesa than an alien-made landform. It could've been easily created with all of the storms and extreme weather on Mars. Mesas are commonly found in Cydonia so it is not unusual that one might look a bit funny. This one just happened to look like a face. Besides, a natural landform is much more realistic than an alien-made landform.\n\nThe \"Face on Mars\" doesn't even resemble a face entirely. The cameras weren't as good in the past and with our new technology we can see the picture in higher definition. Our cameras have improved greately so that we can get pictures that get higher quality pictures. The illusion of the face was just created by shadows and blurry pictures. Now with our better technology we are sure that it is just a mesa.\n\nWe know that the \"Face on Mars\" is just a mesa and couldn't have possibly been created by aliens. Though it would be fun to believe that the \"Face on Mars\" was created by aliens, Scientists can confirm that the face is just a natural landform.",
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"content": "I have known Ms Madhu Rana through his work experience with our organization. She joined the department in the month of Feb 2017 and is working to date, as a consultant Landscape Architect for the water and wastewater supply sector at the Head office of the Delhi Jal Board, New Delhi in India.\r\n\r\nListed below are his key roles and responsibilities:\r\n\r\n• Site Supervision or Coordination\r\n\r\n• Conceptual Design\r\n\r\n• Design Development (DD)\r\n\r\n• Working Drawings\r\n\r\nMs Madhu Rana has shown the kind of initiative, which is necessary to be successful over the long term in our Organization. She has excellent skills, yet remains focused on the overall needs of the client. Not only she is a conscientious worker but also has an excellent work ethic.\r\n\r\nI recommend Madhu Rana, on account of her impeccable integrity and dedication to the assigned job and responsibility. If you have any further questions with regard to his background, please do not hesitate to call me at on+91 9650291619 or e-mail me at",
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"content": "saying give keep trying like plants spring time",
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"content": "Nowadays, video games have become very important among people, in particular to children. Some people believe that video games are useful for young people, but on the other hands, others think that they are harmful.\r\n\r\nIn this essay, I will discuss about both views.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, in the last decades the majority of western countries have become more technologies than the eastern ones. In particular, among children has developed a great passion for video games. Unfortunately, this is a huge problem, because they cause health and social issue. For example, war video games involve in the children a bad sense of anger towards others. Another relevant bad effect is certainly the vision issue. This happens when children stay per hours in front of video games.\r\n\r\nOn the other hands, other people think that video games are useful for spending their free time. Thanks to them, young people can communicate with other people from another country. So they are a good way to learn another language. For example, a Japanese child can speak with an American child. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, video games are a bad way to spend time and causes health problems. Due to this child have to reduce the time of using them.",
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"content": "Censorship libraries issue among communities long literature around As expressed Katherine Paterson one right remove book shelf deems unexceptable everyone right remove books deem unexceptable Everyone individual view unexceptable leave book left shelf In saying government censors materials books music movies magazines nothing keep banning There bound someone wants certain thing censored government see something censored This brings another question deems something unexceptable viewed In mind matter opinion leave something like government s hands decide upon I believe books music movies magazines ever censored It choice individual read listen watch certain material The government s opinion whether something censored changed time The novel The onced censored banned government contained language scenes viewed inappropriate readers If work remain banned canon american culture effect american literature day would lost I see literature another form art Art never censored lack halt developments society Artists ones take risks writers If people allowed take risks would become society Developments made researchers inventors artists writers possibly deemed risk Should censored Another instance censorship negative affect society culture regime Music books art movies everything censored banned rule A whole generation lost power deemed enexceptable like Now put power picking unexceptable hands one group people Whole generations books music etc could stake principles There reason allowed see read listen whatever would like nation The government ability censor libraries hinder exposure ideas unknown us Lack exposure cause society s ignorance world around Who stop government censoring could next major masterpiece literature Nothing stopped banning The limit This question one ask keep government potentially cutting nation future masterpieces",
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"content": "The first problem that needs to be considered is some media actually write down untruly messages it is affected our environment and economic stability. news is a very important part of our life. They give us data regarding trends and issues every day. For being published statement, they arrange step by step the qualified reports. They bring to us as a reader, much crucial information from many sources so urgency is really needed.\r\n\r\nThe main negative aspect is that our population was easily influenced by television, likewise social television, electronic television and other kinds of publishing. Instead of the pandemic, the journalist should work properly on the area already stated. Furthermore, they really understand about the public interest alike as special themes or topics today, next week and on every occasion. It is very crucial due to the effectiveness of daily data. they explore the artist and politician's scandal and make it a highlight of the day. It is such an incredible crime of the journalist to blew up the bad side of a person and make a bad behaviour of our children for instance. \r\n\r\nOverall, many beneficial steps through this activity. the positive aspects of mass media are they teach us to gain knowledge, use critical thinking, keeping in alert, particularly to our government projects. For example, the development of our country is always be monitored and reported by the publishing to all citizens. Moreover, entertainment is also our favourite one. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I think broadcast publishing is a fascinating and essential aspect for any kind of reason. Many people get the benefit from these fields. The data is valid and reliable when it is through the process and the right procedure. Subsequently, each of us must be careful while reading or assuming a picture or a passage in the newspaper and other public places. Although it is forbidden and not important, these kinds of matters often happened every time. In general, it is really related to us as a user.",
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"content": "introduction\n\nVenus is one the brightest points of ligth in the sky however this is misleading beacuse venus is on of the most dangers places in the universe.\n\nvenus is one of the most dangeour planet to a human to live in the Article venus has temperture of average of 800 degrees fahrehit and a atmospheric pressure over 90 time greater than what we experience on our own planet\n\nthese condition are far more experience on our planet.\n\nwe should stop studying venus because if we try to land in venus it\n\nhas the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system so if any human step in venus they will diead because it is to hot for human to live there.\n\nvenus is so inhospitable why are scientists are even discussing further visits to its surface maybe because they wanted to find another place like earh or because they think that earth dont got to much time so they wante a another location so they can be safe.\n\nvenus is so inhospitablle venus surfave is 170 degrees fahrenheit\n\nnot a single criture can survive and venus if we wanted to find another place like earth where we can live in it most defenitily not venus because is so dangerous for our body so what if we leave venus alone and we got to mars wey better than venus.",
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"content": "The author ends story When come back spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test again For many good reasons Some reasons keep moving adapting new life Canada She going change way life try fit new culture She also going relive memory grandmother wants handle better A wave loss deep strong stung Saengs eye swept her She wants able handle loss better The author wants emphasize story yet",
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"content": "What do you think of when you are driving your car? Do you think of your surroundings, the other people driving there cars, or where you need to go? You could sit there in your car and think of all those things without having to drive. Those are some, of many, resons why driverless cars should be developed. Driverless cars can be useful for not only doing things while on the go, but they are useful as well as safety goes.\n\nDriverless cars are sensor designed vehicals that can drive you from place to place. As safety goes, people want to feel safe with or without being in control of driving. These cars are designed to also have an atomatic brake that stops when it sensors other cars, stop lights, or even stop signs. In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author states, \"The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\" This by itself helps the safety of people who arent paying attention, or even if they are, they have that ability for the car to sensor stop better than you would driving a normal car.\n\nAnother good safety quality is, we still have control over the car if we chose to. Yes, parts of roads may require human control over the cars, but it has a built in vibration system to alert you if you need to take control over the wheel. In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author states, \"They can steer, accurate, and break themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigation through work zones and around accidents.\" This explains how we still are required to drive the car during these times, but on most occasions the car can drive itself. If you don't want the car to drive itself, you can drive it as long as you want, and when you let, it will notify you straight away when you need to take control to navigate certain areas.\n\nThese are clear examples of safety reasons and how driverless cars are useful. They can sensor their surroundings, have great breaks, and you can still have full control over the car if needed. Driverles cars are cars that should be devoloped more today.",
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"content": "I think the author did a good job of why we should still study venus dispite the risk. He states the risk of sending any maned or unmaned craft to Venus. He says how we can overcome or try to over come these problems.\n\nThe author states how sending any maned or unmaned craft ot venuse would be vary risky. He say says that the temp can get up to 800 degrees. hot enfouf to melt parts of a space craft. There is aslo the enourms wight of the atmosphere. The atmosphere on Venus is 90 times the wight of the atmosphere on earth. He says that is more than even the deepest parts of the ocean.\n\nThe author also says how we can try and over come these obstcals and get valebile data from Venus. He states an idea about using a hot air ballon like object to study Venus from about 30 miles from the surface. The temp would still be 170 degrees but we could work around that. The air pressure would be coles to that at sea level on earth. There is anether idea about simplified electronics made of silicon. Acording to test NASA did they woulf last up to three weeks. The last much longer than what we use in rovers that we send to the Moon and Mars.\n\nThese is why I think the auther did a good job staing why we should contune studying Venus dipite the extrme condations. He says all the dangers we would face trying to send anything there at all. Then he gives ways we can over come these dangers.",
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"content": "You are enjoying the view as your self-driving car is driving down a one-lane, cliff-side highway. As your car turns a corner, you notice that a bus, that is too long for the route, is heading staight for you. What happens next? Are you are driven off the cliff to prevent a bus full of casualities or does the bus drive off the cliff preventing your death but causing a bus load of casualities? If driverless cars are coming in the next four to five years then I wouldn't be satified with it until somehow that problem is sovled.\n\nIf you want a casuality free, mostly, driverless car system you should make it so the cars can communicate amongst themselves to slow down because a bus is coming around the corner or speed up on a rural highway that is barely used. To do this it would take billions of dollars if not trillions to invest in research, seting up satellites, constructing communication centers which are used to receive the signals from the satellites. This probalby won't happen as it is so exspensive but you never know until it does or something like that.\n\nAnother way you could make driverless cars is by giving the cars an \"instruction manual\" on rules to follow. This could include following the rules that we already have or a rule that in case of accident causing conditions one car had to veer out of the way. That rule would easily lead to the scenario stated at the beginnging. This is the way people will most likely take because it is way less expensive than the first way. Even though the first way is safer for everybody.\n\nA third way people could do it is, as said in the article, \"Egineers at Berkeley tried something similar, but they used magnets with alternating polarity. The car read the positive and negagive polarity as messages in binary code.\" Do something like that where something would be under or inside the road that car reads. This is very similar to how a scanner reads a barcode. This would most likely be the most expensive option but probably not the safest nor the deadliest though.\n\nThe beginnging of driverless cars would definitly get a name in history but would it be good name or a bad name? \"The road to the truly autonomous car streches on ahead of us, but we grow closer to the destination every day.\"",
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"content": "Scientist Rafael, There's no way it was created by aliens, I think it was just a natural landform because on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos, Anyway thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all, So Scientist Rafael that's proof, that it can't be created by aliens and it's a natural landform, well that's one of the evidence.\n\nAlso, in Nevertheless, on April 8, 2001 a cloudless summer day in Cydonia Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look. \"We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view,\" said Garvin. \"Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution.\" Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo, So I think it'similar, the picture actually shows the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa landforms common around the American West. \"That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\"\n\nFrom 1976 to 2001, the images changed into a human face formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" That doesn't mean it was created by aliens and besides, we didn't find no ancient civilization on Mars. I think it was a natural landform and that's all the evidence that i have for you, \"Scientist Rafael.\"",
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"content": "Im a scientist at NASA my name is Marvin i was told that there is an unsure artifact on Mars that many have brought up and talk about lately. As we all know or belive that there no such thing of life on any other plannet. Now thata we see a landform on Mars you all change your minds about this. I will say no this is not showing any sigh of anything this is just a landform.\n\nThis is a landform. The way i see by the facts and reserch that there is no possible way that aliens could have just thought to do this. What im saying is if that is the case so if soming like a alien shape was to appear that it means there is aliens here on earth. No because we would have been found out if there was anytype of aliens here on earth. So the same on Mars just cause a landform apear dont mean anything different. \"only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoash\" this was said about the face so if the only thing that made it look like a face was the shadows then there is no way that the aliens did this. \"The authors reasoned it would be a goodway to engge the public and attract attention to Mars.\" so now\n\nthis means they was just trying to make money of the picture now they where trying to have all the attentionon this. \"The face on Mars has sice became a pop icon.\" this shows they are really playing with it. \"it was winter on the side if the red plannet where the picture was taken, camra on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the face.\" i see this as not even sure if there eas a face at all.\n\nNow that u see that the facts and pictures all show that could have never even been nothing but a landform. Next time when they want to try and make money off just making things they should get more facts on the background of it\n\nand not just thoughts. It's just a landform.",
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"content": "Well I can tell you that the face wasn't made by aliens because 1976 when the first discoverd the face is was in the 3rd paragraph it said\n\na ''huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illsion of eyes, nose, and mouth.'' And also there has been no other alen markings that aliens exist on mars. And in the last paragraph it say '' what the picture actlly shows is the Martian equivalent to a butte or mesa-----landforms common around the American West. But in mission controllers prepared to look again.\n\n'' As a rule of thumb, you can discren things in digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size,'' he added. So now you can see that no\n\nallen made the face was made by Mars itself. And also ''thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a jpl web site, revealing ....a natural landform. there was no alien monument after all in paragraph 7.",
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"content": "It is thought by many that nations, where wards are sent by their parent to a mixed-sex academy, have a better edge over their counterparts. In my opinion, I totally agree with the notion because it affects the build-up of early self-esteem in girls and restricts competitive spirit which affects the male child.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, the development of personal confidence in the female child happens at a much younger age in the presence of interacting with the opposite sex. Thus, this hinders them from acculturating into a new system when they graduate into tertiary education. For instance, a study conducted in 1993 by the Federal Ministry of Education revealed vividly that one of the key reasons for a low image worth in the female gender is the absence of interaction with their masculine age pair. Therefore, this imbalance has a negative impact on personal development.\r\n\r\nAnother point to consider is that the male gender has a much lower level of assimilation when they are younger. However, in a joint-sex school, they are able to balance this out as they compete to do better in assessments and examinations. For example, in a recent survey conducted by 25 teachers of an all-boys school, the majority attested to the fact that maximum motivation in boys can be achieved when both gender are placed in the same class for learning.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, in as much as we have more regions that have adopted to give parents the option to choose, teachers and school authorities still have a responsibility to be strict to curb indecent acts and inappropriate practices among students.",
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"content": "Have you ever seen those movies will the smart cars that drive by themselves? Like the bat moble in batman? Those aren't just cool but also really safe and may be the type of transportation in the future years. I like the idea of one and I'd buy one. The development of driverless cars is brilliant because it will change the world, it will cause less accidents and is the \"New trend.\"\n\nSergey Brin, google cofounder, belives that driverless cars will change the world. How? They would use half the fuel of todays cars and be more flexible. Technololgy is improving everyday and this is good because all these new things are being put on the market and making cars safer. Sebastion Thrun, founder of the Google Car project, stated \"There was no way, before 2000, to make something interesting. The sensors weren't there, the computers weren't there and the mapping wasn't there.\" This shows that technology is imroving by that driverless cars will evolve the world.\n\nDriverless cars cause no accidents. Google has had cars drive independently since 2009 and have been driven half a million miles without an accident. Isn't that incredible? A lot of car crashes are caused by drunk driving, and texting but ow that the driver won't driving wouldnt that mean no accidents are going to happen as much now?\n\nAutomakers have been working with sensors and within 10 years they have become more advanced to respondikng to danger. These sensors would stop the car if it were about to crash into something.\n\nThe sensors have a better response and control than a human driver.\n\nDrierless cars will be the \"New trend\" because everyones going to be wanting one, and it will be safer. How many times\n\nhaveyou seen your favorite actress wear something, and you were like \" Oh I want that!?\" Almost everyone has said that at least said that, I know I have but the point is that all the celeberties will be have one them and that would make up want to have it too. I mean look at the adavantages of a driverless car.\n\nI believe that driverless cars are brilliant because they are the \"New Trend\", it will change the wolrld and cause no accidents. If you haven't seen a movie with one of these driverless cars then you better search one up and watch it because they really are facinating.",
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"content": "With the progression of the society, many people do their family planning in their thirties rather than twenties which was common a decade ago. This essay will discuss positives and drawbacks of this trend and which outweighs the other.\n\nAs people have turned extremely ambitious these days, they prefer achieving their goals and indulge into starting a family later. This priority shift not only help them focus and earn huge amount of money to make them self sufficient, but it also helps to financially support the future generation in a better way. For instance, financially independent parents are able to provide a better lifestyle for their children than those who are unstable in their careers.\n\nOn the contrary, ageing brings vulnerability of severe health issues in a person's life. By the same token, pregnancy becomes complicated at the later stage, both for a man and a woman. A recent research concluded that, the probability of conceiving in couples is reduced by 23% after they touch their thirties and can further be declined up to 53% over the age of thirty five. Secondly, individuals do not remain fit enough to support their children, if the age gap between the parents and child is big. For example, if a child is born when a man is forty five, his child would be only twenty and not financially independent at the man's retirement age. Hence, the family might need extra financial aids to support the children.\n\nIn conclusion, they are few advantages to starting a family late such as a child can be provided better financial aid to support his life, the disadvantages are more and it outweighs the advantages as the complications in conceiving can increase with a person's age and the generation gap between progenitors and their children is huge which can become a major issue in future.",
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"content": "The mood created author memoir described many ways For one mood graciousness done Narciso Rodriguez In memoir says I always grateful parents love sacrifice This feeling graciousness tells love sacrifice feels parents went The memoir also shows mood graciousness understandings parents taught In memoir says Growing envronment instilled great sense family nothing blood relative This understanding taught large impact life time The final express graciousness memoir feelings toward passions parents taught In memoir says unwittingly passed rich culinary skills love cooking still today I eternally thankful Passionate Cuban music I adore day filled air These express passions skills followed author adult hood holding special place heart These descriptions mood created author memoir",
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"content": "The human body is a complex network of muscles, bones, and organs to create one functioning person. These muscles, bones, and organs create diverse emotion whether it is through the face or through the body. The emotions help express themselves to others in order to relay their feelings to events or surroundings. A technology able to read a vast amount of emotions and help indicate their feelings would be incredibly beneficial to society as it would make understanding each other easier. This could help students in the long run by helping the school or instructor understand what interests them and what disinterests them by knowing their feelings to the emotions they convey.\n\nThe problem in schools around the country is the struggle to encapsulate a student's interest and maintaining it for numerous years. A technology that can help lead students in the correct direction, from the first day they step into a school, can lead to a more productive society. As Dr. Huang puts it, \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,' notes Dr. Huang. 'So computers need to understand that, too.\" (D'Alto.) If we can use this technology, we will be able to put the expressions and emotions into words and percentages. This removes the barrier of people struggling to understand each other. This technology will pave the way to a brighter and more efficient world by making people interested and happy to do what they do from the first day.\n\nTechnology is the way of tomorrow and will help create a better world. A technology that helps understand human emotion consistently will be the next big advancement for communication and language. A student needs to be understood in order for he or she to understand. A program that can easily make that happen in a few seconds as opposed to several years can help everyone enjoy what they do a little more.",
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"content": "In some nations, people are increasingly bringing attention to discovering historic houses or buildings where they live. This essay will describe the causes and how to investigate this issue.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, time has a close relationship with history. And history is closely connected with everything. Therefore, The structure also belongs to history. Looking at the history of buildings or houses were totally differently used by period. And also we could predict the living environment at that time. For example, suppose there is a 100-year-old building. And it probably has changed an owner many times during a 100-year period. Each time has changed an owner and the utilization of a building have changed as well. Thus we could get to know many things from the history of the structure.\r\n\r\nNevertheless, It is hard to maintain and preserve buildings or houses for a long time. Sometimes destroying a building is easier than maintaining the institution. It is not easy to keep protected individuals for a long spell unless the government control it. Because many countries keep maintaining their cultural heritages including historic buildings as well. So it is good to start a position. For instance, we could find in history that we can investigate the foundation of the building stories. After then move to legwork, as long as a building is in existence.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, through the history of building and investigation of structures we could learn a variety of information and it leads to our living environment. It does not matter what their cultures and regions.",
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"content": "With cutting-edge evolution in robot technology every day, we are having a looming dilemma about whether human services will be replaced by machines. However, to reach any meaningful conclusion, we will have an in-depth debate about both benefits and drawbacks in depth.\r\n\r\nThe main disadvantage of using bots instead of a human in jobs is that it decreases workers’ opportunities. As a result of it, a large number of people will lose their jobs, and poverty will be distributed all over society. Another adverse effect of these new changes is related to an environmental vulnerability which is the consequence of excessive usage of electricity for supplying droids. In fact, many countries use fossil fuels for producing electricity, so increased usage of automatons can cause increased usage of fossil fuels for electricity production and threaten the environment consequently.\r\n\r\nIn contrast to these negative facts, bots have many advantages for humans. The most important positive effect of them is related to saving workers, due to increased usage of them in dangerous situations. The other benefit of them is commercial. For example, droids can work continuously without ant brackets for holidays or lunch, so goods production will increase significantly.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, task forces will be changed by robots in the near future. This substitution of humans with bots has a few short-term disadvantages, while by the long-term follow-up, the benefits of them will be more prominent. will be more prominent.",
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"content": "I think story came back story starts It started Saeng going take test pass So weather better would batter time trying pass test This way I think came back test",
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"content": "I think that driverless cars are an amazing example of what humans are capable of doing. I also believe that they can be dangerous. They can really become a big help to society if they can make them as safe as possible.\n\nThe reason I think the driverless cars could be dangerous is because they could lead to wrecks. In paragraph 2 it says that the car alerts the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents. The driver might not be paying attention and if he doesn't take over the wheel, that could lead to an accident. The driverless cars do offer great things that could help us. In paragraph 1 the article tells us that the cars use half of the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus.\n\nMy conclusion is that we should take some more time with these driverless cars. I think we should work on them more and make them even smarter than they already are. This is the best option because it could make them even safer and that is the most important thing.",
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"content": "The Face on Mars is just a natural landform there was no real evidence of it being showned to be formed by aliens.\n\nAs\n\nI looked at the evidence and the photos that the scienctist gave me they showed that in 1976 the face was full of dust and etc. Which could have formed the face from probably erosion of the dust or even the illusion of the human eyes,mouth, and nose .\n\nFor Example in the article I read a passage that said \"Although few scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact\" , they had no real proof of it being this .\n\nThen another photo that I recieved from the team in 1998 showed that Face started to show as if it was unmasking itself for us to see, which had probably given NASA the thought of it being an alian artifact , but still they had no real proof of it being this .\n\nI read a passage and it said \" And so on April 5,1998 , when Mars Global Surveyor few over Cydonia for the first time ,Miachael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos .Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the first image appeared on JPL web site, revealing . . . a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\n\nBut still not evryone was actually satisfied . So on April 8,2001 (MGS) drew close enough for a second look . And Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution. Each Pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters , compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo.\n\nIn Conlusion, there was never any real proof of the Face on Mars being an alien monument the only proof that NASA had was based off of opinions. They had no Factual evidence.",
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"content": "Based excerpt obstacles builders empire State building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock mostly due dangers violent winds altitude may cause aircraft crash either building ground For example two blimps attempted docking one could come close building winds The able deliver bundle newspapers hoisted rope In conclusion main problem unstability aircraft docked",
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"content": "The studying of Venus is a worthy pursuit dispite the dangers it presents. All misson before now has been \"umanned and good for no reason\". With the landings not being able to stand longer a few hours. These reasons explain why earth hasn't been sending spaceships to visit venus. Venus's thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide, clounds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid and over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and pressure 90 times greater than Earth its self. These conditions are very extreme and unsuvivable for humans, But with recent soulution the author has supported the trip is worth a try.\n\nVenus is the most Earth like planet in the solar system, Venus was proably once covered in rocky sediment and familiar features like valley, craters and moutains. This can be a very big step for science and lead to so many helpful studies. Humans curiosty can lead to many equally intimidating endeavors.\n\nNASA has came up with a great idea and a possible soultion to float in a blimp-like vehicle hovering about 30 miles above venus. From this spot the condition won't be easy, but humans can survive though it. Insight is also limited and samples cannot be gathered, but seeking scientists would conduct these challenges working with innovatins that allows tools/machiens to last long enough to contibute to meaningfully to better out knowledge of venus. Some simplified electronics made of silicon caride have tested in venus simulators and have passed to be succesful for three weeks in venus;s extreme conditions. Also they have been with the thought of adding in devices making calculations by using gears and lever that require no eletricity.\n\nIn conclusion, Venus is the closet planet to earth in all of the sloar system. This means that this is a chance to gain greater and meaning full knowlege. This was an fail misson being of venus's extreme conditions and has been for 30 years. With new solutions human can get closer than ever to venus for many studies. The solution have new gadgets and devices to help out on these trip. This presenting and supporting the authors idea of venus being worthy of the pursuit of danger.",
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"content": "How awesome would it be to be able to get in a car and NOT have to drive it, instead the car drives you!? Driverless cars are going to make a great impact on this world. I believe driverless cars are coming to help the world.\n\nDriverless cars are coming. There is not much people can do about it. Driverless cars are here to help us, and stop us from gettng into a bunch of crashes. \"so far, driverless cars have driven more then half a million miles without a crash, but google cars are not truly driverless, they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in or out of drive ways, or any accident that may have occured ahead, or if there is a construction site up ahead.\"\n\nAnother great thing about driverless cars is all the procautions the car takes while driving. For example the manufacturers put bulit in sensors \" Google modified Toyota Prius uses position-estamating sensors on the left rear wheel. a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotives radar sensors, a GPS reeiver, and an inertial motion sensor. Which is a wonderful addition to not having to drive.\n\nWhen they first tried to make driverless cars before the 2000's they were not able to. Because the sensors were not there, the computers was not there, and the mapping was not there. Radar was a device on a hilltop that cost two hundred million dollars. All in all it was just not time for driverless cars, but now is the time.\n\nHow may of you dreamed of being able to get in a car, but you did not need to drive it. It will be another invention that will have a renouned effect on the world, such as computers, television, and the internet. But driverless cars, by far, will be the best.",
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"content": "Liability over senior households that are physically, mentally and financially incapable has been a hot potato. A number of people claim that the responsibility should fall on younger relatives. While this essay completely agrees to the opinion, however, it still considers the capacity of these junior family members.\n\nSome part of the society might argue that these old folks lived longer and intrinsically have longer experience. Furthermore, this gives them a wider perspective when deciding things for themselves or when they are facing problems. Even so, this gradually modernizing world may be beyond their comprehension. For instance, they might not know about the profound impact of vaccine and reject them. At the same time, they may be unable to access knowledge through internet as it is a new technology that just came about to existence around fifty years ago.\n\nOn the other hand, junior family members are more well-versed with the ever-changing world. In general, younger generations at least know how to surf websites to search for information even when they are not knowledgeable. They can use online shopping websites to search for the cheapest price, for example, in the market or even search for research thesis in Google Scholar. Consequently, any decision that takes place will therefore be comprehensive and takes every possible factor into account.\n\nPsychologically speaking, normal family members love each other in pain and pleasure. When they are in difficulties, they may approve of something that they think are the best for each of them even when others might argue about it. Besides that, they also celebrate happy occasions together. They care for each other out of love and most decisions would not be biased. Even when they are in financial difficulties, most of them would cater to their parents first.\n\nLast but not least, considering the wisdom of the older generation and the devotion of theyounger generation towards family affairs, I firmly believe that these junior members who are mentally and physically stable should have the legitimacy to take care of their parents.",
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"content": "Yo Im narrator know dude tells story well Im gon na tell story patience Ok armadillo His name Now ordinary armadillo armadillo without shell All armadillos made fun told get shell So smart thought idea decided make shell went junk yard look things help make shell He found lot light weight metal took home melted started long process metal smithing shell When shell complete tried fit nice snug The next day went school everyone impressed super shiny longer made fun patient make shell",
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"content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Narciso created moods relatable yet make think One mood happiness This reading feels happy beginning hand shows Narciso went life loves childhood paragraph says parents shared cooking duties unwillingly passed onto rich culinary skills love cooking still today Passionate Cuban music filled air mixing aromas kitchen These sentences show loved environment lived home made happyNarciso also created mysterious mood This mood made think home word family really means Narciso s family great big loving group peoplemany even related Paragraph says parents always kept arms door open many people considered family knowing would us This shows thier consideration family large inspiringThe main mood memoir Narciso gratefulness Narciso grateful many things especially able live life way He mostly grateful parents paragraph says I always grateful parents thier love sacrifice Narciso s main mood gratefullness grateful toward everyone everything made life good made",
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"content": "The Facial Action Coding System (FACS) is valuable for showing emotional facial expressions of students when they are working on a computer and we will be able to see if they're emotionally okay or not. Also we will be able to see if they are interested in what they are learning in school.\n\nIt can detect your facial expression by seeing if you smile or frown and the shape that your 44 major muscles make in your face during your lesson in school, for example, Happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. Also when your frontalis pars lateralis muscle (above your eyes) raises your eyebrows, that means that you're surprised, and if your orbicularis oris (around your mouth) tightens your lips, that means that you show anger.\n\nAccording to the article, \"if you smile when an ad appears on your computer screen or phone screen, a similar add might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\"Dr. Huang predicts.\"\n\nSo yea, the Facial Action Coding System can help out in the classroom with many different students. It can help find out what students are actually interested in by their emotional face expressions. This can also help students find out what they would like to be and what career they would like to pursue in their future. And thats my argument on why I say that The Facial Action Coding System is valuable.",
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"content": "Dear local newspaper see population use computer They getting fresh air spending time family friends On hand computer come much use For many people Family lives quite distance away well friends getting touch possibility You also learn far away places like The computer often used projects essays important You learn quite bit computer The computer used many ways One way keep contact Sure go park spend time everybody live close For people relatives even good friends live quite distance computer It great way keep contact You keep everyday updated times For example cousin recently went country college months blog computer keep everybody update stay contact The phone always option To learn far away places great Online learn history specific places You see towns much You even see pictures Maybe one day even get see specific places person How cool would School big thing nowadays Students project project assay essay lot work grow older becomes work computer less weight shoulders With essays type fix mistakes without looking sloppy Projects easy fix messing nt big deal On hand americans ever weight The computer lot Most people come home sit computer rest evening They nt realize big effect computer make person More people exercising Spending time family Computers negative thing positive It helpful could imagine But yet make huge negative effect people It help keep contact people learn far away places even school work Let benificial use",
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"content": "There many ways setting affected cyclist One way story says hot could become dehydrated could possibly heat stroke also rodes windy This could problem hes tired might able go around turns might keep going straight get lost even That features setting affect cyclist story",
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"content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nI think that our president's should be chosen by popular vote because they have better chances of winning and they will know how many people agree with what they are trying to do in the United States.\n\nThe president's have better chances of winning because they can have the most votes and wouldn't have to wait on the Electoral College. Such as paragraph 9 says, \"Thanks to the quirks of the electoral college-won the popular vote but lost the presidency, over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now.\" I think that was unfair because Al Gore could of been the president but instead he was not, after all the campaigning he did to get those voters to vote for him it ended up as a waste because the voting didn't get him anywhere. If I was a president I would be highly upset because I knew I could have a big chance of losing just because of the Electoral College. What doesn't make any sense to me is that the voters are not voting for the president but are voting for a slate of electors. What's the whole point of voting then? People are out here voting for electors that they don't even know and most of the electors are people who not holding public office. In paragraph 13 it says, \"During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad.\" To me they are cheating people out of their votes, people vote for the one that they think could make a change not just voting just to be voting.\n\nThe president would know how many people agree with what they are trying to do in the United States. The electoral college votes won't help them know who is really for them and who's not because if someone win over electoral votes there are going to be people out there mad about the fact that they had won. This will make people not want to vote at all because 9 times out of 10 the person they are voting for gone lose. The electoral college just makes it difficult for the people that are running for president. I'm not saying that it should be easy to just become something big, but if you worked hard enough I think that you should be honored enough to become president through popular votes. This will make the incoming president feel appreciated for all the hard work they did to recieve all these votes. They will know that what they are trying to set forward is good for some people and not just for them. Such as paragraph 12 says, \"Perhaps most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote.\" What would happen then? That's why you should just give it to the person with the most votes because they deserve it.\n\nI hope what I have really proved my argument that we should change the way a president is chosen so it can be fair to everyone. I think this will make the incoming president feel confident in himself to make this happen.\n\nSincerley,\n\nPROPER_NAME",
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