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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Vroom! Vroom! Is the familiar and common sound heard all across the world. Can you believe that cars can be so helpful and convienient, yet cause so many problems? The United States, Environmental Protection Agency, jumped on board with it's new promotion of, \"car reduced\" communities. This is a new act that will limit car usage, and help protect our Earth's environment. Motorits all over the world are contributing to the Greenhouse effect, stress, congestion, and pollution in the air we breathe. Countries such as, Columbia, France, and Germany are trying to reduce pollution, and the long term affects of cars have on the world.\n\nMiddle-class families, ranging from Chicago to Shanghai, make a huge impact on our greenhouse. Up to about fifty percent in the US alone emits carbon dioxide gas, instead of trying to reduce it. According to the international agency headquarters in London, the congestion and traffic within the capital of France, went down sixty percent, after fining citizens for being on the road after five days of a near-record pollution. The smog that covered this global city had one hundred fourty seven microorganisms per cubic meter. They had blamed diesel fuel as the reason for the smog. The cold nights and warm days trapped car emissions. If we started this new idea, we would see a large improvement within our enviromnment.\n\nBeep! Beep! Traffic is such a stressful situation to be in. Wheather it is on your way to work, going home, getting lunch, or going to see a friend, the streests are flooded. This new act will promote the simplicity of transportation. This will release a lot of stress on people, and make their lives happier and healthier. People will be more connected and involved with their community and surroundings. Sidewalks are being layed out all throught cities, for people to find a new efficient way of transportation such as, walking or riding a bike.\n\nSome countries are so used to not having a car or even having a space to put a vehicle. In Vauban, Germany, people are giving their cars up more and more. They just see the positive affects this \"car-free\" act has on them. Today seventy percent of families that live there do not own cars. The rate of people getting their license has gone down dramaticlly as well. Car companies are scared for their business if everyone tries to conserve energy.\n\nThis limitation of moterized vehichles may be just what the world needs to improve it's environment. This saves more energy, reduces pollution, keeps people healthy and stressfee. Living a life of simplicity will make you more happier.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How well something is said and in what way it is said to the audience plays a role in how the big or small the impact is; Depending on how well written something is makes a difference as well. In a passage called \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author gives an excellent essay on why traveling to Venus is a worthwhile journey.\n\nFor example, the author states, at one time Venus is believed to have been the closest resimbled to Earth. In paragraph 4, the text states, \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supportes various forms of life, just like Earth.\" The planet has a rocky surfaces and also has features such as valleys, mountains and craters. The author states,\"The value of returning to Venus seems indisputable..\" This proves that the author presents relatable evidnece that the journey to Venus is a worthwhile trip.\n\nThe author gives NASA as an example of the information that is provided in the passage. In paragraph 7, \"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus...\" The author states that NASA is working on using a device like a modern computer. The paragraph also states how there are problems with NASA's idea as well. The author gives an acurate example to help the reader picture what it would be like. This proves that the author can give evidence that supports the overall claim.\n\nOn the contray, the author gives more background information than what good could come from studying Venus. The author states all the information that desscribes the atomosphere and what the surface of Venus is like but gives very little information that concerns the reason why Venus should be explored. However, without the background information about Venus's surfaces and atmosphere it may not be understood as to why the journey to Venus is such a trouble. The author provides information that can help understand the reason that astronomers should study Venus.\n\nIn conclusion, the author does well at supporting the idea that the trip to Venus is worth taking. The author states information that is from reliable sources, such as NASA. This proves that the author has a well supported idea that studying Venus is a worthwhile pursuit even thorugh the dangers that are going to be faced. The author provides a wide variety of reliable information that supports his claim allowing for a strong claim. The author gave a well written essay that can appeal to all people and change their mind to see in the way of the author's claim.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"The Search For Venus\"\n\nVenus is know as a planet, sometimes called the \"Evening Star\". It's even called the earths twin because both Earth and Venus have the closest terms of density and size. even sometimes closests in distance, but scientist have to realise the danders of Venus, \"its proven a very challenging place to examine more closely\" reasons why is because due to the thick atmosphere of 97 percent which is carbon dioxide that blankets Venus.\n\nThe National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA), is planning to send humans to study Venus and learn more about it.\n\nThere soultion for them to be able to do this is that due to the hostile conditions of the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray, example like they said \"imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the landscape.\" which what they would be doing if they were to float above it. The only bad thing about what they are trying to do, is the dangerous conditions.\n\nIts far more extreme than what any human has encountered on Earth. Reasons why is because Venus has clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in it's atmosphere. It's temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\n\nIt would be best for scientists to study more on the planet of Venus and on how the atmosphere works, and how we can adapt to it'senviorment if we can even adapt to it with out anything bad happening. Which we do have the technology to do all this, but it will take time to make sure everything should be how it should be so that things are capable of the planets atmosphere, like a rocket ship that could be launched to Venus.\n\nLike for example if NASA just built a rocket ship and launched it to Venus without knowing the outcome it could end bad. Reasoning to this because they might not have knew the temperature of the planet, or maybe not even know what the atmosphere is capable of doing to the ship or the humans if they were to go on a mission. It took years to study Mars, and NASA is still finding stuff out about Mars to this day.\n\nThey said \"just exposing a cell phone or tablet to acid or heat capable of melting tin.\" What they are saying is that if we do not study Venus enough a mission could go really bad which will no be good nor NASA. Due to what we didn't know about the planet. Just sending out a ship to Venus with out not knowing what can happen would never be a good idea, better safe than sorry.\n\nThe author is right about his ideas that studying Venus would be a worthy pursuit despite what could happen, because they can take the time to study more and more and figure what the planet is like, no matter how long it might take to reach the planet and get to get up closer to the planet wihtout anything going wrong.\n\nNot every planet is the same, and why isbecause how the solar system works. Like Mercury its closest to the sun and the planet is not capable of having life living on it due to how hot it is. So it's a good idea for scientists to study the plants before just making a mission to Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I beleves censorship libraries aloud If cersorship parents child child dont need censored By censoring something small books movies I think give people fake sense really happens Just something isent censored doesnt mean taken context eather Think like walking street going censor people say bad words show bad habits even go far seeing death Being kid really never censored anything including books ive learned alot I feel I went librarie get book censored taken shelf I shown fake world Once life cant censored shouldnt consor anything else A censored book movie whatever could also determin much someone could learn People go liraries learn hard facts proff evadience depending subject witch looking This meny reasons I think cendor libraries shouldnt aloud Consorship chosen outher people In end never know whats better till try", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As technology increases, the idea of driverless cars is startin to become a reality.\" Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive thenselves by 2020.\" As the passage states that diverless cars are on the way and are already in progress. Although the thought of not having to have your liscens sounds great, I am against the developement of these cars. The developement of diverless cars would cause conflict among manufacturers and the people. Also there could be mechanical problems that come along with the developement of driverless cars causing safety issues. Lastly, most people enjoy having control over their own car which also allows for responsability.\n\nSafety is a the number on issue with driverless cars. If there was a mechanical issue while people were on the road, it could cause injuries. Also, if the car was not functioning right and you are stuck out in the middle of the road, who would be there to fix it? Just like any other mechanical object, it is a possibility that thing will go wrong.\n\n\" If the technology fails and someone is injured, who it at fault - the driver or the manufacturer?\" In agreement with the quote from the passage I also question who is at fault. These issues will cause unessesary conflict between the manufacturers and the people. Being able to manually drive cars would additionally enable us to avoid these issues and know who is resposible.\n\nHaving control over your own car gives you more comfortability knowing who is behind the wheel and how the vehicle operates. Also being able to drive yourself will teach you responsability that is necessary part of growing up. \" even if trafic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover the liability in case of an accident.\" The developement of driverless cars would also lead to new regulations of the law and the people having to know it.\n\nAlthough driverless cars are long way away, its a big transition from diriving a car \"manually\" to literally automatic. I am against the developement of these cars because it will cause conflict withe the manufactures and the peolple. Also there could be mechanical problems that could cause safty issues. Lastly, most people enjoy having control over their own car which also allows for the learning of responsability.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The development of these cars have both many posituve and nevative things to them. They can really help the future in ways that kigjt nkt be possible at this time. In my opinion i tyink that these cars would be a bad idea, because there are mire bad thungs that could happen than good things.\n\nSome people might just say they are good for the future without knowing the consequences for any possible accidents.\n\nOne reason why these cars would not be good woukd be if there is an old person that can not drive they could consider one of these cars. The problem is that if it is time for the driver to take over the car and if the driver does not know how to drive, this would lead to a problem. Accidents could occur if non drivers are in the car. It could lead to a critical stage of punishment in case you are in a fatal crash or get stopped by the police.\n\nMy other argument is that these cars could potentially stop working if they do not have proper items for this car.\n\nMost people arent going to have the right things for this car, if they crash the car might not function the same and proper way of how its supposed to work. This car could break down for no reason.\n\nI feel like these cars would be more helpful in some way but you also need to look at the negative things of this. Every positive thing always has a negative thing also.\n\nThere are going to be consequences if the car is not used right. It might not be affordable for most people either.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear editor name I believe computers benefit world people well I say lots people talk family friends long distance Also computer teach lots thing Finally makes social In strong opinion computers better world Firstly many people talk long distance family friends You web cam allows chat see person Also another site talk friends lot put pictures even videos even though talk phone phone costs money plan When use computer completely free Secondly computer teaches things help later life let s know things well The computer people made programs computers really cool The programs teach type called type learn type fun Also programs let know read It great kids need know things ways Finally computer makes social This let s know things happen school school You talk people email conversation You also meet new people places good relationship You friends know wo nt need figure So I believe computer good idea good You talk people long distance The computer teaches things life Finally makes social people So strong opinion good idea computer", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A group of individuals have different views on climate change. They believe that we should accept it instead of stop it. I consider myself an opponent of this perspective. I think we still have a lot of time to tackle this issue.\n\nTo commence with the first idea, I can say that there is various way to do to tackle this problem. Actually, a lot of organs and the government should put this their priority. To cite an example, they can set some rules for recycling and using renewable energies instead of coal. On the one hand, using less amount of paper can reduce cutting the trees and can prevent erosion. On the other hand, having modern agricultural equipment is one of the improved ways to handle this issue. Moreover, we still have plenty of time to tackle this problem and diminish melting poles.\n\nDespite the solutions, climate change has a plethora of consequences that is irrefutable from losing a lot of food sources to having a high temperature. Hence, nobody can refuse it and continue their normal life. In order to lose the north and south poles we cannot even have drinking water and we will have suffered from a lot of diseases and finally die. Sea levels are becoming disastrous and a lot of people might die from this. Furthermore, they become displaced and lose their health. That we cannot cope with. The subsequences become none stoppable and people will become homeless and cureless illnesses if we do not handle this issue.\n\nTo conclude, I agree with people who want to find ways to live with it. It is clear that we must cope with this problem instead of living with it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Books movies magazines music life We know whats wrong s right Every school different Some schools limits books re two years old reading something like s gon na inappropriate If re sixteen reading book s inappropriate age limit Every age different going find fortythree year old hobo streets reading CAPS Most likely ll reading mystery book something appropriate age someone s five Books nt banned elementary mother nt want seven year old reading CAPS Just mothers want banned nt mean Be smarter watch kids reading nt banned children nt want kid reading Do nt agree music life Not everyone listen rap listen opera Do nt see musical artist world depend music So rap banned talks killing drugs drinking I say cares Do nt listen nt like nt mean ruin everyone else I love kinds music nothing banned In opinion I hate christian songs I think re slow constantly talking nt mean I ruin everyone else I hate Everyone different one Music helps gets life I know helps get nt banned Movies movies movies Video games video games video games We love cuddling watching movies together movies right us Movies ratings like video games Ratings show s appropriate twelve year old verses twentyfive year old Adults would likely playing rated game watching rated movies Little kids age six would playing rated games watching rated movies As see everyone different especially comes things Rated movies usually gore sexual themes strong language things little kids never watch It nt mean banned maybe blocked home banned In opinion I think movies books music video games etc nt banned It carefully watched see s hands lands s eyes viewing We responsible enough pick material No one tell read watch unless I youth Then material suppervised parents", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In a classroom there are many emotions being expressed and with thirty plus students it can be difficult to tell what the overall mood of the class is. Teahcers and instructors can benefit from knowing the emotions expressed from their lesson plan. The feedback from their students can help change up how they convey the material. The use of technology that can read emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. Technology that can read emotions can be helpful in many ways in the classroom. This technology can help with some situations in the classroom.\n\nFor example, if the instructor is teaching in a certain style that may confuse the students, this technology can help. The instructor probably would not be able to tell if the students are confused unless they ask, but most likely the instructor would not want to interrupt their lesson every few minutes or so to ask. With this technology the instructor would be able to know right away whether or not the students are confused or bored. This would help them change up the lessons in order to effeciently teach the classroom. In the text it states,\" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored....Then it could modify the lesson\"(6). When a student conveys a certain emotion the computer can pick it up and gather the overall emotion on a certain lesson which will be helpful for and in the class room. Lessons can be modified for better understanding of the students.\n\nIn conclusion, this technology has many helpful uses for the classroom. It can help with lesson planning in the class. It will be able to tell the instructor if their lesson is efficient or confusing. This will also help out students who are confused but chose to not tell the instructor. It will help instructors better understand how student percieve information in class. This techonlogy has multiple uses that are overall helpful in classroom situations.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting affects cyclist alot ways The first way riding middle desert June If riding woud nt painfully hot Also rolling hills probablly didnt help If mostly hill would fine Riding bike hill tired near impossible", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, the production number of customer goods has exceeded the total amount of permittable goods distributed throughout the demographics of society which might instigate detrimental side effects on the environment. The plausible causes of this phenomenon are nature exploitation and unfiltered toxic waste disposal as a result of the large production of manufactured goods and the cultivating solutions would be to conduct environmental restoration, minimize the use of goods, and execute toxic waste detoxification.\r\n\r\nIn the following decades, as the need for goods has been increasing and expanding, more and more natural resources are being exploited. For instance, the massive use of palm oil, the raw material to produce chocolate and the main ingredient for frying which originated mainly in developing countries such as Indonesia, Malaysia, and Thailand often took over a large number of palm tree forests in these regions. This, if not being controlled in a sufficient way, would result in deforestation, a purposeful act to clear out large areas of forest lands. Deforestation in many ways threatens the livelihood of wild animals and disrupts the animal ecosystem. As the ecosystem dies, the animals that live in the ecosystem would eventually be eradicated and thus, diminishing biodiversity. In addition, hazardous waste attained from the post-manufacture of household commodities such as spa bath, detergent, and soap that is thrown in the ocean would defile the water and as a result, fish dies, and oceans are polluted. For that reason, the natural environment is damaged. \r\n\r\nThe cogent solutions to these problems are to reinstate the environment through reforestation. For every ten palm trees being taken for producing cooking oil, ten more trees could be replanted. Furthermore, eliminating its use whilst implementing a green lifestyle and utilizing eco-friendly goods would prevent massive exploitation. For instance, replacing palm oil with fish oil would lessen the number of palm trees being cut. Last but not least, detoxification is one way to purify the waste that is produced from manufactured goods. A range of equipment and machines with advanced technology that could filtrate dangerous substances in water waste would eliminate the number of oceans being contaminated. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the high number of consumer goods production might lead to several environmental destructions including deforestation and water pollution and the sufficient solutions to these issues are reforestation, eco-friendly product consumption, and waste purification through technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Newspapers have a huge impact on people's belief and the way they perceive things. In my opinion, this phenomenon is a positive one because it enlightens people with happenings around the globe and at the same time educates the public and provide opportunities such as job offers to them.\n\nFirstly, Newspaper is a medium through which people can get aquatinted with adequate knowledge of what goes around. This is because apart from television, radio and the internet, newspapers are another effective media platform that carries informative news about current happenings in the local and international scene. In addition, the newspaper is beneficial to people who do not have access to other media platforms and they can be equally informed as others. For example, people in Nigeria where there is a constant interrupted power supply, now rely on newspapers as a source of information in other to be updated with the ongoing pandemic.\n\nSecondly, people have been educated and enlightened through newspapers. Method of hand washing has been taught since the beginning of the pandemic and people have learnt how to avoid direct contact with people. Finally, jobs have been advertised in newspapers as well as scholarships, which has created opportunities for the people. Several businesses have gained customers as well as employed more people to their company. For example, 56% of the employees of NNPC confirmed that they got to know about its vacancy through their adverts on newspapers.\n\nIn conclusion, newspapers have had positive effects on people's judgement and belief and at the same time, it has created job opportunities and enlightened the public.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We use cars for many things. We use them for work, for getting supplies and grocures and most importantly, we use them to get places alot quicker. But cars harm are environment in some pretty bad ways. They create greenhouse emissions and Smog. Which is why the world is trying to rid itself of cars.\n\nCars of today and back run on gasoline which we get from fossil fuels that we get from the ground. This resource wont last forever and will eventually disapear if we keep using it. The stuff created from cars exhaust pipes damages are air supply and are environment. it creates smog in the air which is bad for the lungs to inhale. Like the people in Vauban, Germany who dont even drive cars, im sure there air is clean or atleast alot cleanier than ours is.\n\ni Believe we should find a new solution to cars other than just removing them from use. i Believe they should produce more electric cars. Yes, it may not go along with the american dream of having a roaring engine and a blower sticking out of the hood but it will save our planet one step at a time. And being a car lover i wouldnt want to see cars go but i think a change to electric would fine and helpful.\n\nLike it says in source 2, places like paris and bejing are some of the most poluted places in the world. If we dont find another solution to are cars its just going to get worse. The smog pollutes are air and the thick warm air traps it in our ecosystem. Alot less people are driving every year and thats good which means less harm to the planet.\n\nI love cars wether its muscle or sport but sadly we wont be able to drive them forever unless we do something about it and make a change, a word the world is scared of. People should buy more electric cars or invest in or just not drive at all. Ride a bike or something, americans need the bike ride and im sure the rest of the world could use one too.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Women play a major role in computing for centuries. However, only 20% of the women are in tech-based jobs. This essay will discuss some of the problems that women face and what can be the possible ways to help them get successful in their tech domain.\r\n\r\nAccording to the past surveys, computing sector is one of the worst impacted career fields when it comes to sexual orientation. One of the foremost reasons are that they are unappreciated in the workplace. Moreover, the higher authorities show doubt in the chances of women addressing and resolving specialized issues. Another reason is that the working women come from a family where there is a chaos and pressure from both the family and work push them into a deep pit from where they are trying to escape from a long time. Most of their energy is spent totally on validating their balance.\r\n\r\nThe organization should take these issues seriously and try to solve it by sensitizing sexual orientations at the workplace, such as providing them the opportunity and support to lead the team, appreciating them occassionally that will motivate them to give their best. Family should aid them by removing the society obstructions pushed on them. Ladies should feel more secured and protected all the time.\r\n\r\nThere are diverse companies such as McKinsey, believe that women in computers greatly outweigh any costs. The best way to shrink the women in computing is to encourage them to consider technology careers. They can always volunteer for the projects even if they might not have enough knowledge to learn and outsource themselves.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are opposite views as to which stage of life would exert the most influence on a child's life. Some people hold that the pre-school life is the most influential, while others disagree and claim that the teenage life, notably the period of staying at school, would be more important to his/her life. This essay is to evaluate both views and demonstrate my opinion.\nBefore entering the school, children usually receive the most influence from their parents and friends. At home, children would spend much time with their parents teaching them a variety of knowledge needed to help an adolescent act properly and get recognised by the society in the future. When staying outside, children would also be influenced by their friends or other peers since children tend to resemble the behaviours of their peers in order to integrate into the social group of adolescents.\nIn the school life, a child's personality would be shaped both by classmates who frequently interact with the child and potentially affect the child, and by teachers presenting knowledge in various fields of science and liberal arts so as to help the child obtain a basic understanding to the world.\nAs far as I am concerned, it is rather arbitrary to conclude which period of life would be more important than the other, since a child's psychological development is too complex to be understood. After all, the importance of pre-school life or teenage period might vary from one child to another. Children have their respective understandings as to which person deserves their admiration and which period of life teaches them the best lesson.\nTo sum up, children would be influenced by different persons in different periods of life. It depends on children's own intention as to which period is more pivotal, and which person should be admired.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Every museums and historical buildings reflect the traditional culture about the region. Money should be spent on design new public buildings like museums rather than recreating the old ones. I disagree with this statement to large extent, but to some extent I agree.\n\nTo begin with the reasons of recreating the old buildings. The first and the foremost is ancient buildings brings a unique image of past culture. Moreover, historical spots are the collection of moral and traditional culture which gives traditional ethnics in old buildings. So, renovating the existing buildings is very crucial because its give awareness about past centuries famous and popular activities.\n\nIn addition to this, ancient building designs creativity is very unique and very attractive which attract more visitors or travellers. Old museums bring some collection of old culture things which is very little in recent century. People can easily attract with these ancient things because this related to their religion and people also believe in ancient things as well as gives respect regarding to their traditional and moral galleries. People can easily aware with their nation's history with the help of ancient museums. For instance, Tajmahal is very popular historical building and very attractive as well as provide a true love story in past culture.\n\nOn the other hand, in some situation creating a new building is very important because nowadays adopt western culture and attract with western culture. So, they also want to see some modern building. Therefore, creating a new building is also attracting some visitors and also create some history for a new generation.\n\nTo conclude, recreating the ancient building is very vital because its provide some beneficial information about the history and everyone right to know about the past history as well as creating a new architect provide some latest collection about the culture and advancement.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Delayed childbirth is a trend that is becoming increasingly popular. A lot of people are beginning to have children later in life than what was previously obtainable. Yhr major reason behind this is the fact that people have become more career driven and would like to excel outside of parental duties. There are many drawbacks to this recent development, however, there is one huge benefit (fufillment), that makes the decision very tenable. Hence, the advantages are far greater than the negatives. \n\n Nowadays, people are raised with the ideology that there is more to life than being a parent, therefore a lot of individuals put off giving birth to later in life as opposed to the habit of the previous generation. Women in particular, are more ambitious than ever and strive to have accomplishments outside the home. In addition, men are also not left in the backseat, as they also aspire to generate enough wealth to cater from themselves and their families. For instance, a survey carried out by the fertility clinic in Harvard, in July 2016, revealed that about 80% of people have decided to start bearing children in their late thirties, so that they can focus on their careers and dreams. \n\n The majority of people that give birth later in life have the advantage of career advancements, as well as being emotionally, psychologically, financially amd physically stabel enough to raise children. Although, there are studies that show that fertility decreases with age and people should not put it off till later, so as to avoid medical problems. However, it is safe to say that the preparedness to cater for children outweighs any other disadvantage that can be thought of. Furthermore, the long wait allows for development in all ramifications and fufilment in all aspects of their lives. For example, from personal experience, my mother used to say that the fact that she had us later in life, after all her accomplishments made her more relaxed and fufilled when she started raising us. She never felt inferior or had any cause to regret. Looking back, she always thought it was the best decision of her life as she did not have to wait on any man. \n\n In conclusion, more and more males and females of this present generation are deciding to have children in their later age. This recent development can be attributed to the increasing interest in career accomplishments. The joys of a fufilled life outside parental activities remains a huge benefit despite the various disadvantages of giving birth late, so therefore, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Across the Sea and Beyond\n\n\"Come on please,it will fun\" as Luke Bomberger begs you to join the Seagoing Cowboys. Luke is trying to get people to join the Seagoing Cowboys. In this paperit will be adresssing some reasons and claims from Luke of why a perosn should join the Seagoing Cowboys.\n\nLuke claims that during his adventures as a Seagoing Cowboy that he gets to visit lots of places when the Seagoing Cowboys go to China, Europe, and many other places. Once he got to see the Acropolis in Greece. Another time when Luke got to go a place in Europe is when he toured an excavated castle in Crete. Luke also got to go to Vencie, Italy and take a gonodola ride. Another fanizitic time Luke got to tour was the Pamama Canol on his way to China. That's why Luke claims during his adventures he got to go many different places as a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nLuke also claims that before arriving in Greece he had his eighteenth birthday, which ment he could be drafted by the military. When the draft board learned that Luke was on a cattle-boat trip they made a deal with Luke stating that he could work on a cattle-boat for instead of military service. After two years of cattle-boating Luke was discharged he had the most trips of any Seagoing Cowboy he had nine. Thats why Luke claims instead of fighting in the military a person could be a Seagoing Cowboy and bringing animals like horses and cows to people in need acrcoss the sea in Europe, China, or other countires that need help and food after battle or a major war that they lost.\n\nAs one may see that there are many great benefits of becoming a Seagoing Cowboy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator,\n\nAfter researching the Electoral College process I find that the process should no longer be used. The process is not effecient for choosing the next US president and therefor the voting process should be changed to popular vote.\n\n\"Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president.\" This makes the Electoral College not a democratic method for electing the president. This nation was founded on the belief of democracy, so when the government ignores the call for a democratic method for elections it is disrespectful towards out Founding Fathers, and especially to the citizens of the United States of America. Furthermore, state representatives may misrepresent a state, possibly by defiance. This has happened in the 2000 campaign where segregationalists defied the people and nearly succeeded in replacing the electors for those who opposed Josh F. Kennedy. Although defying the people does not happen often there is still the risk of repeating history to a greater extent.\n\nContinuing, the ''winner takes all system'' causes states with smaller populations to be ignored. According to source 3, \"Knowing their vote will have no effect, they have less incentive to pay attention to the campaign than they would have if the president were picked by popular vote.\" Larger states are paid the most attention to by canidates because they will receive more votes than compared to the number of votes a smaller state would produce. This causes smaller states to have less interest in the campaign because they know they have a lesser chance of their favored canidate winning. Even more, canidates focus on swing states. Swing states are states that can be easily convinced for votes. It is important for all states to focus on the campaign so that an unworthy or unprepared canidate is not chosen for presidency, but only large and swing states are paying attention. In contrast, it can be argued that no single region can shift a campaign greatly, nonetheless a single voter`s vote.\n\nThe Electoral College should be rid of. The process is not democratic and misrepresents voting citizens in more ways than one. If voters were able to directly vote for canidates then more states would actively engage in the campaign and all people would be represented equally. It would lower the chance for downfall, and the chance for incidents to occur. I propose that the next presidential election should use the process of popular vote to choose the next president for the United States.\n\nPlease take into consideration my proposal,\n\nStudent A", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you know what a seagoing cowboy is? Luke Bomberger was a ''seagoing cowboy'',a person who helped foreign countries of sea's after WWII. Luke was apart of the UNRRA, (the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration)to help foreign country's who have been left in ruins get back on their feet. On his way to Europe,he had to cross the large and vast Atlantic Ocean.\n\nTo pass time on there way to Europe they played games such as,Table-Tennis,fencing,and boxing. They also read and whittled to pass time. The way Luke got into the seagoing cowboy business,was his friend asked him if he wanted to join him,and he couldn't pass up this surreal oppurtunity. But, the downside was he he had to travel the rambunctious sea's. The ship Luke and Don boarded to take these cattle over to Europe is the SS Charles W. Wooster.\n\nReasons join this program are that you get to help others get back on their feet in times of disaster such as war,hurricane,tsunami,nuclear disaster,or other types of disasters that may happen. But their also some dangers to be aware of. During one of Luke's journey's to Europe he slid down a slippery ladder on his backside. If it weren't for a small strip of metal he would have fallen into the dark Atlantic Ocean. But,besides broken ribs he was glad he wasn't sleeping with the fishes,literally!\n\nIt's also an adventure to. During another one of his trips he got to boat around the watery \"streets\" of Venice,Italy in a gondola. Also while in Greece he visited a excavated castle. He also marveled the Panama Canal on his way to\n\nChina. But,what came most in handy is that he used to help his Aunt Katie on her farm as a boy so, Luke was prepared for the hard work.\n\nSo as a conclusion to this story, I would hope you join an organization that helps others in need, especially countries overseas. Even though this job might be hard, your making a difference in our world and there's. You could join an orginization like UNRRA,or just simply join and orginization that helps new Americans,like immigrants from foreign countries fit in in our society today in America. That would be a good example our country could set for other countries. This should be our goal for every thing and anything. Are goal should be to help others and just not ourselves. We need to stop being selfish and help other's get back on there feet if their in times of need. This is the example we should set as The United States of America.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I would like inform public using computers isnt bad The first reason I think make computers good people meet via yahoo gmail For instance could meet someone learn culture beliveths My second reason I think computers help people someone didnt newspaper could get news via nbccom foxcom able still find whats going world", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Every individual opinion censorship Some people believe instances perfectly fine others disagree I m one person thinks instances things censored Schools right censor put libraries students read especially magazines Some magazines articles arent appropriate school hours even school building Schools want something inapropriate shelves students see Censorship even understandable elementary schools Younger students libraries monitored even carefully Younger kids elementary age nt really know nt read In public libraries things little different Parents usually monitor kids check Most adults know read summary back book know checked If summary vague know read pages inside book A couple times I ve gone public library I checked book I thought suspense When I got home began reading turned I wrong The book romance book I nt care read So I returned book library Most time read synopsis back book nt always reveal much book So best thing read couple pages book check Everyone right opinion censorship I believe instances things available checked censored In instances things left adults parents decided want allowed checked", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood author created memoir happy joyful The author explains lived child vividly air mixed aromas cuban food cuban music author still loves today It seems like good childhood He says parent selfless took refugees home It gives story warm feel like could almost mom dad He make story personal family members explains His parent best could family That mood set", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "writes excerpt The Mooring Mast obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting create dock dirigibles In late Al Smith confident height use building would achieve Those working project mooring mast consulted experts US Naval Air Station eventually found project much handleThe mast never fulfilled intended use due numerous issues faced main one nature Docking dirigible high altitude building s peak proved practically impossible The danger project civilians New York flaw well due inability keep dirigible controlled wind high flammability vehicles Legally speaking another issue concerning law would allow dirigible fly altitude required dockThe idea mooring mast interesting realized dirigibles may become significantly popular However mooring mast impractical obstacles posed overcame ambition used design", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It's 5:00 am and you just wake up for school, but how do you get to school? Studies show the the majority of highschoolers drive. But many dont realize what emissions from fossil fuels do to the enviroment. Smog can destroy the ozone layer and induce toxins into are bloodstreams. Some countris have been inducing partial bans on cars. Limited car usage from these bands can help reduce smog, increase air quality, and save money.\n\nThe first reason why Limited car usage can be a good thing is because it can reduce smog, in heavily crowded cities passerby cars make up over 50% of fossil fuel emissions. Thats over half! reducing car usage can save the enviroment from pollution. in paris driving was partially banned for about a week and the smog in the city was reduced by almost 60%. just driving every other day instead of everyday could help your local enviroment immensly.\n\nSecondly, Limited car usage can increase air quality. The use of less fossil fuels causes less carbon emissions. Carbon emissions can decrease the amounts of oxygen levels in the air. So to put it simply, less driving equals better air! It's that simple.\n\nLastly, Driving less frequently allows you to save money. Gas is expensive, the average American spends over 15% of their income on gas every year. That can really add up. I'm sure theres a million other things you would rather do with your money than pay for transportation. Many transits and buses offer free transport as a substitute. That's right, Free!\n\nThe reasons above are why limited car usage can be a good thing. So what if you have to ride a bike or use public transportation. Don't reducing smog, increasing air quality, and saving money seem more important than your complaints about sitting next to someone on the transit. Think about it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Almost features settin affect cyclist For instence fact hot causes drink lot water need lot water In story goes thirsty sweaty The water bottles contains tantalizing sips Wid rings sweet circled shirt These description suggests hot since sweety hes drinking much Another feature setting rolling hills make feel like never going reach next town I began breaking ride distress I could make test for He making ride seem like lot short rides could make", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist rougher terrain got cyclist strain make For example terrain turned hills cyclist struggle climb hills caused use energy Also terrain flat smooth cyclist less problems making long journey For instance cyclist less strain would tired would drink much water In conclusion features setting affect cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The charts demonstrate the sex distribution in a various of age groups between France and India in 1984.\nBy and large, the males and females in the population of France almost balanced each other particularly in the age groups of 0-65 years old in 1984 with a symmetric sex composition. The age group 30-35 was revealed to be the highest percentages of population in France whereas the largest proportion of Indian population was in the age group 0-5 with a skewed sex ratio.\nGoing into more details, in regard to age structure of population, India had a vast majority of population in younger groups, constituting for 49% of population in the age groups of 0-20 years old. In particular, the highest percentages of Indian population presented in the age group 0-5 with the males to felamles ratio around 7% to 6.5%. Indian aged 70 years old or more was shown a steep decline, reaching less than 2% of population with balanced sex distribution.\nIn contrast, French people aged 10 - 40 years old made up the largest section in demographic structure, accounting for approximately 45% of population. The age group 30-35 reported as the highest proportion of population in France with around 4% of population in each gender. The males to females ratio in the age group 85 years old or more was represented to be the smallest of population in France, by 0.2% males to 1% females of population.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that you should join the Seagoing Cowboy group/program because it could really help other people . Then once you have helped at least one person you start feeling a little better about yourself. I also think that you should be a Seagoing Cowboy because you could trave to different places in the world. i think that you should be eighteen or older to join the Seagoing Cowboy program because you cant really travel anywhere until you are eighteen or older . You should NOT I repeat NOT join the Seagoing Cowboy program if you don't like animals,don't want to feed animals,don't want to bathe animals,don't want to pick up animal poop,or basiaclly do anything with animals , then you are not the right person to become a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nI think that girls should be able to become a member but of course they have to like animals. The girls should have their own program but should be called the Seagoing Cowgirls. I think that the most kind of people that would join this is like people that grew up in a farm or that love animals. You could also join this program if you like to help or like to unite with other people that like to help.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Never would anyone have expected to be alive in the time when we are making the technological advances towards driverless cars. Personally, I am not one for the idea. I think driverless cars would be unsafe, they would be very expensive, and it takes away chances for people to learn something that everyone should eventually be introduced to in their life.\n\nMy first point as to why I am against the idea of driverless cars is because I feel like they would be extremely unsafe! Imagine driving down the road and your car just suddenly malfunctions and you aren't able to control it. As cars are heavy and very powerful, we can not over power a vehicle, no matter how small it is. Small pieces of technology malfunction such as cell phones, computers, digital cameras and so on, what makes you think an even larger piece of technology wouldn't malfunction and be potentially deadly?\n\nMy second point as to why I am against the idea is because we would invest quite a bit of money into test vehicle before we had to pay twice as much for the finalized ones. As the United States is already drowning in debt, I highly doubt we have the money to make cars that drive themselves. For example, say every prototype costs 250,000 dollars to build, that doesn't include the money it would take to fix all of the problems it has or the insurance that would be needed on the vehicle. Insurance would be another problem. People now pay maybe 200 dollars for insurance a month, with these cars, the price would probably go up a few hundred dollars.\n\nMy third and final point on the topic is that the these vehicles take away something that every human should eventually know. As a 16 year old, I have just gotten my permit and will soon be driving. I like the feeling of being able to do so. It helps people grow up and show responsibility. This idea also teaches people to be lazy. We complain that we have the highest rate of obesity but we don't even want to make people drive their own vehicles. It makes us look like hypocrites.\n\nThe idea of driverless cars is ridiculous, in my opinion. I think this because they are unsafe, extremely expensive, and takes away tradition. Whether they end up finding the money to make them or not, I would never own one.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are known to be the future of transportationl. Some people think that this is a great idea for the future, while others are not in favor of this idea. Some people also believe that these cars will never be truly driverless. I do not agree with the idea of having driverless cars.\n\nIf driverless cars can truly be made, then we will not have the fortune to be able to drive a vehicle. The text states, \"Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive by themselves by 2020.\" A lot of teens and adults really enjoy driving and it can be a very fun experience. If people do not have to drive anymore, then there will be no reason to have a drivers license and that is a good way to identify yourself.\n\nThere could be problems when one of these cars crashes. We would need to set new rules and regulations for this type of car. The text states, \"If technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer?\" This could bring a lot of problems and cases to the courthouse, and could end up in bigger disputes.\n\nThese cars will also make us pay a feee constantly as if it was a taxi, since we will not be able to pay for our own cars anymore. The text states, \"He envisions a future with a public transportation system where fleets of driverless cars form a public-transport taxi system. We would always have to deal with paying a fee if we wanted to go anywhere.\n\nSome people say that this idea will make a big positive impact to our future. The text states, \"The cars he forsees would use half the fuel of today's taxi.\" These cars can bring a lot of positive things to us, but we have to consider that we would constantly have taxi like fees. We would not be able to drive in the future if we have these cars.\n\nDriverless cars can be seen as a good idea, or a bad idea. I believe that we should not have to deal with this because this technology is taking up our licenses. It is also taking our privlage to be able to drve. It would also lead to court cases from wrecking that could end badly, hurting the company or the victim.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In 1976, NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was snapping pictures of possible landing spots for Viking 2, when it noticed a human face staring right at it.\n\nA few days later, NASA released the photo publically, and it caught on fire.\n\nThe face has since become a pop icon, and appeared in a Hollywood film, books, magazines, radio talk shows, and haunted a grocery store's checkout line.\n\nIt has even attracted conspiracy theorists that think NASA is hiding alien life on Mars.\n\nBut they are all incorrect.\n\nThe face was discovered in the Cydonia region of Mars.\n\nIn Cydonia, mesas are common, and this one just happened to have an unusual shadow.\n\nNASA also unveiled the images to the public, proving they had nothing to hide, otherwise they would have kept this secret.\n\nNASA also stated they wish there was an anicent civilization on Mars.\n\nAnd Jim Garvin, chief scientist of NASA's Mars\n\nExploration Program said it is equivalent to a earth butte or mesa.\n\nImagine if you were a scientist and saw a face on Mars.\n\nYou would've been astounded and amazed.\n\nThat is exactly what mission control felt like when they saw this bizarre looking landform.\n\nBut they quickly discovered it was just another Martian mesa.\n\nThe face was discovered in the Cydonia region of Mars.\n\nIn Cydonia, mesas are common, and this one just happened to have an unusual shadow.\n\nNASA also unveiled the images to the public, proving they had nothing to hide, otherwise they would have kept this secret.\n\nNASA also stated they wish there was an anicent civilization on Mars.\n\nNASA took another picture in 2001.\n\nThis picture looked nothing like the picture in 1976 of a face.\n\nThis is because NASA used more advanced cameras than it did in 1976 to come up with a clearer image of the mesa.\n\nThe camera used in the 2001 photo had new high-resolution images and 3D altimetry.\n\nAlso, each pixel in the camera in 1976 covered 43 meters.\n\nThe camera in 2001 had each pixel cover 1.56 meters.\n\nYou can also discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than pixel size.\n\nThat's a huge difference in picture quality.\n\nYou can see NASA's not trying to hide anything.\n\nThe picture was not leaked, so we know NASA meant to show the public the picture.\n\nDon't listen to the cospiracy theorists.\n\nThere are no conspiracies or theories.\n\nJust an oddly shaped shadow of a Martian mesa.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir greatful greatul many reasons Some things greatful parents home culture family I say mentioned topics alot memoir One reason greatful parents culinary skills As said memoir parents shared cooking duties unwittingly passed rich culinary skills love cooking still today I eternally grateful Another reason greatful love parents give without parents love sacrifice would nt courage I know memoir said I always grateful parents love sacrifice I ve often told much courageous thing I could ever done The next reason greatful family always reason parents always keeps door open family greatful life love It learned real definition family would never forget place called home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Presently,humans give birth to kids in an old life.\r\n\r\nThis essay will explain in detail the good and bad impacts and as well compare both sides.\r\n\r\nTo start with, there are many benefits to bearing children with a declining heart. One of the major reasons is that kids will live or stay with their parents as they are growing old. People believe that it erases loneliness , having a full house or a big family and coupling with someone that will take care of them at this stage of their growth.\r\n\r\nIn addition,in some developing countries that use manual labour for farming, they believe that the larger the family, the more the workforce. Furthermore, some cultures see this as a blessing from God and a sign of high fertility. For instance, the Yoruba tribe sees little ones at the end of maturity as a prestige .\r\n\r\nHowever, the disadvantages of giving birth in old age outweigh the advantages.\r\n\r\nFirstly, lack of finances to train the kids. Some nations have a retirement age limit, where they are no more active to work and thereby reduce their income, which could affect the welfare of the family as well as taking care of the child's needs.\r\n\r\nSecondly, as we grow old , the body's system and function are degenerating, which could lead to complications during pregnancy, labour and the post-delivery period with health issues such as hypertension, and post-delivery bleeding and it could also lead to death.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, having babies at the end of growth is more dangerous and problematic as opposed to the good side of it. I , therefore recommend that government should make more awareness of family planning to prevent unwanted pregnancy in an old life .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story winter hibiscus paragraph story several relevant reasons By concluding story way shows Saengs growth willingness strive best When says take test shows gain confidence beginning gain comfort place home country She striving working toward best become successful And making best given situation The author trying give depth meaning study way Saeng went nervous worried saying II failed test setting goal take time bud blooms next year Basically author full circle ending story way From speaking test sharing flower experience mother state retake test next year", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am for the use of driverless cars. There are many advantages to having a driverless car and this essay will explain why driverless cars are the better option.\n\nAs it is said in the article, automatic cars could make public transportation far more flexible than taking todays buses. It is also said that driverless cars could use half of the fuel that is used today and this could be very important in maintaining our fuel supplies. This could be a reality in the near future.\n\nGoogle has made cars since 2009 that have driven over a half a million miles without a crash, this kind of technology could stop hundreds of fatal crashes all over America. It could also stop people from performing illegal maneuvers such as speeding or shifting lanes without signaling. Although todays automatic cars are not fully driverless, it could be a luxury with alot of time and effort put in.\n\nAlthough saftey is a concern, if everyone's car was mostly automatic, it could stop the saftey risk of drunk drivers and other people that drive under the influence. Waiting for your turn to drive the car in case of an emergency could be boring, but in the article it says entertainment systems could be installed that could turn off instantly so the driver knows when to take over. If the car malfuntions then installments ofcameras could explain in court how was at fault in the accident.\n\nAutomatic cars could save our fuel supply, stop fatal crashes, and stop the acts of drunk drivers. These are all reasons why I think driverless cars are the better choice in shaping a brighter and better future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is it a good idea or a bad idea to join the Seagoing Cowboys Program ? There can be good things to do or bad thing to do in the Seagoing Cowboys Program. It's a good idea to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys Program because you can help people in War world 2, you can go on adventures, and you can go to different place.\n\nFirst, if you participate in the Seagoing Cowboys Program you can help people in World War 2. However, some people may say that people in the Seagoing Cowboys Program may go undercover to go help the bad guys. But, the good guys can help the americans win the war. They can help the americans win the war for peace. This shows that if you join, you help win the war.\n\nSecond, if you join the Seagoing Cowboys Program you can go to unigue places. However, some people may say that they don't like to go places. But, if you do you can go to places you never been to before. Another thing is that you can see different and crazy things at these unigue places. This shows that you never know what you see at these unigue places.\n\nThe Last thing is, if you join the Seagoing Cowboys Program you can go and expericance an adventure. However people may say that they don't like to go on adventures. But, if you do, you can expericance some wild action on your adventure. You can experiance some challeges on your adventure. This shows that you can be a person that likes adventures.\n\nIf you join this program, you can help people in World War 2, you can go on an adventure, and you can visted unigue places. So you should really join this program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use Facial Action Coding System or FACS could be extremely valuable in the classroom. The amount of time students are confused on a subject or do not understand what the teacher is saying because they are moving to fast could drop tremendously if teachers could read how the student's are feeling. The teacher could know that the whole class is bored with a lesson and modify that lesson later to make it much more interesting. Knowing how the student's feel could change the classroom for the better.\n\nThroughout any student's school career there is a moment when they are confused by a subject and was forced to retreive additional help in fear of a bad grade on their upcoming test. Some students would be too shy to stop the teacher to elaborate or could not visit the teacher after class due to time constraints and forced to look up youtubes videos hours on end in order get a grasp on a subject. If the teacher knew that multiple students felt this way in their class, they could change their lesson plan to make things much more understandable for the students just as Dr. Haung predicts. The Facial Action Coding System could bridge that disconnect between teacher and student.\n\nNot only could a teacher make a subject easier to comprehend, they can also make it much more enjoyable. This technology can help a teacher know if their students are bored or not. If the teacher knows this they can make a lesson much more interesting, getting the students engaged, which leaves less heads sleeping desks. This could lead to students having more of a passion towards subjects such as math or chemistry because they are having fun with those topics. Some time if someone doe not find a subject interesting they won't try hard in that class unlike someone who does like that subject.\n\nKnowing student's emotions through this technology could change the experience of school as a whole. If teachers were to follow the readings from FACS students would be able to comprehend and enjoy a variety of subject matters, there could be much less sleeping bodies in class, and the engagement level in classrooms could skyrocket.Just only if FACS and schools cooperated to make the education system better as a whole and makes things a better experience for the student.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that it is a neat idea to have driverless cars but only if all of the things that could go wrong have been evaluated. I can also tell you that they will never work out everything that could go wrong no matter how much they think they have. What if there is a malfunction and the car swerves and drives off of a cliff. That wouldn't be the drivers fault it would be caused by faulty technology. There would have been nothing that the driver of the vehicle could have done to prevent that from happening. What happens if one of these cars runs into another car because the technology stopped working. As stated in the passage would it be the drivers fault or the manufacturer.\n\nYou have to keep all of these things that could go wrong in mind you can't just think about the upsides of these smart cars. It would be neat to have a car drive for you i'll admit that and that is amazing that we're working on something that can do that and that we have became that technologically developed. There is just many things that need to be taken into consideration. There are so many ways someone could get hurt in something like this smart car. I think it would just be safer to not have these type of cars out and about on the street. What if they malfunctioned and ran a pedestrian over and neither the person in the car or the pedestrian walking would have seen it coming. There are already so many people being killed by drunk drivers now a days. I think achieving the development of this kind of technology would just make the death rate go up and this world doesn't need that happening it is already heart breaking how many people die in a day already.\n\nPeople should not have to dread walking around if they do not have a vehicle just because they fear of this technology hitting them. They would have to take the necessary precautions in order to have this kind of technology on the streets. I don't think that the developers think of all the dangerous things that could happen by having these cars. They all just think of how cool it would be to drive a smart car. Well I can tell you that I think that to many people die from drunk drivers or people that aren't paying attention to where they are going when they are driving around. Yeah were still going to have people die from these things. We don't however need there to be more people dying because of faulty technology.\n\nThey can think that they have worked every kink out in their technology but, I can assure you that they haven't. There is always going to be a risk of something happening with this kind of technology. It's not just safe because the manufacturers say that it's safe that is just not how it works. All i'm saying is that we should be more concerned with what could go wrong than what is cool. I would rather be safe walking on a sidewalk then not wanting to leave because im scared of dying. I think that we just need to stop being lazy it's just steering a steering wheel it's not rocket science.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many obstacles architects never realized building docking station dirigibles One obstacles faced height lack safety arose In German dirigible Hindenburg use highly flammable hydrogen caught fire New Jersey described paragraph thirteen Should happened dirigible docked high New York City airship would plummet ground many New would going day The largest obstacle faced though nature Air currents storms would cause dirigible teathered mooring mast rope swivel around around mooring mast dangling high pedestrians street As pointed paragraph fourteen neither practical say The third obstacle faced preexisting law airships flying low urbanized areas Even tall Empire State Building still impossible legally dock new mooring mast Al Smith s idea finally abandoned due safety nature state law", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The I sitting living room family talking every always end laughing One great grandpas house got done opening presents middle floor cousin thought dad inside At first tried convince dad side talking uncle nt believe us even though dad outside talking circled observed convinced dad Then started poking We laughing cute thought dad He kept saying I know opened dad dad walked house asked laughing We told story started laughing Later playing room wanted show dad toy playing So dad climbed told dad outside went outside look dad nt When came inside looked every room could find dad After standing dad jumped scared screamed like little girl laughed really hard mad first started laughing At time five dad jumped got really scared thought would funny scare dad hid dad came inside told dad look dad called name looked every room pretended like could nt find started laughing dad acted like going sit made laugh super hard When got like know I dad said well started laughing silly goose best ever That time laughter brought two people together", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Reading article expresses many different mood changing auther While reading notice s proud Cuban culter explaining united family always long remember Most important greatful parents everything ve see sucuss life s I admire author This story giving thanks parents culture He mood mostly proud thankful throughout whole story Like end says I learned definition family meaning family love This pasage made realize everything mother went see brother I success I say I relate auther", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Setting Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit really determines story turns The setting deserted areas desert even roadways In desert water making cyclist become dehydrated without water thought going die In road areas speed limits extremly high fiftyfive miles per hour This would good since waterdepleting When finds areas abandoned water pumps liquid comes water tastes like battery acid Setting affect alot story Without setting story would alot different", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although driverless cars are a great way to improve technology today, there are severals reason to be against this idea. The article \"Driverless Care Are Coming\" has a point when it comes to the benefits but they failed to mention the flaws of driverless cars. There have been many deaths due to automobile accidents which leads me to believe that without a driver behind the wheel the number of deaths will rise.\n\nSome drivers today are often careless when it comes to the safety of other drivers. They only worry about the well being of themselves. Though I am not a driver, I feel as if the idea of driverless cars are just to limit the amount of activity the driver has to do. Not everyone can afford the driverless car, and knowing that this car would most likely cost a fortune to buy. There would be an unbalance of today's cars and the driverless car in the world which would only lead to problems for us in the future. What would happen if an ambulance were to come speeding through the lanes, and the car failed to pull over?\n\nThese cars also use alot of technology that could, at any moment, blow up and cause death upon the human race. Those who are for this new development for these new and \"better\" cars, are only trying to make it easier on themselves. Without a driver in the car, who is to say, that when a pedestrian were to walk across the street that thecar would stop and allow that person to cross safely. Not only does the car cause problems for people on the road, it causes problems for people who are carrying on with their day, walking.\n\nThe article presents great reasons why the car is very useful, and they make a great point on the benefits but they fail to point out the minor details most people would need to know in order to make the correct choice. If the idea was more thought out than there could be a possiblity of more people being for it but as of now, this car is a waste of time.\n\nI believe that a driverless car, is one of the most unthought out idea I have heard in quite some time. This car, is very convienent, but also very unsafe. We not only need to think about the safety of the people driving the cars, but the producers who are surrounded all day by these deadly machines.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is no secret that some celebrities are more renowned for their luxurious lifestyles than for their attainments, and they have a detrimental impact on young generation. While I agree with this assertion in most cases, I also support that there are several well-known people who act as positive models for juveniles.\n\nOn the one hand, the main reason why I espouse this notion is that many celebrities are famous due to their glory and reputation which are not attained by hard work. To illustrate, these kinds of people regularly attend extravagant parties and festivities. In addition, they tend to appear on magazine headlines by demonstrating their flamboyant clothes, grandiose mansions and expensive cars. A prime example of this is Jennifer Lopez because of her glamorous daily life. She often displays her fashion, cars and villas for publicity. For this reason, youngsters suppose that profile is better than a good manner, without pondering its background. Hence, it is believed that this lifestyle can affect juveniles in a negative way.\n\nOn the other hand, some celebrated individuals’ prominence is a fruit of their strong determination and great ambition. In other words, these people are a proof that accomplishing objectives is a viable avenue to become prominent in their chosen fields, so all of us hold them in high regard for their success. For instance, Lionel Messi is one of the highest-paid football players in the world. Indeed, he stated in his biography two years ago that he applied himself to develop his real skills in order to be the most talented soccer player. Therefore, he is extremely inspirational for young adults, and they perceive him as an idol. Hence, these types of luminaries can promote children to improve their aptitudes. \n\nTo conclude, it is true that nowadays a lot of famous people obtain fame from lavish lifestyles instead of their accomplishments, and it sets a bad example for children. However, I believe that celebrities who are famous for their successful careers and great talents impress juveniles positively. Given this condition, it is recommended that renowned people should alter their way of life to be good role models with their meaningful achievements.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "from \"the challenge of exploring venus\" the author belives thier are great benifits of venus. In paragraph 2 it says \"often referred to as earths twin, venus os the closest plant to earth in terms of denstiy and size, and occasionally the closest in distances too.\". venus its almost alike to earth. The aurthor belives it to be. Yes venus is are \"sister planet\" but what about the dangers of going to venus?\n\nVenus has a thick atmosphere of alomst 97% carbon dioxide, even in paragraph 3 it says \"Even more challening are the clouds of highly corrocsive sulfuric acid in venus atmosphere\". How are we to visit venus when we cant even breath on the surface. the conditions are far more alarming then any human incounter.\n\nYet again still think we should go to venus but why? In paragraph 4 is says \"astronomers are fascinated by venus because it may well once have been the most earth_-like plant in our solar system.\"\n\nEven withe the dangers of venus one day we will find a way to land on venus. Venus maybe are new home.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From observations I beleive materials removed libraries All students right readlearn different subjects Even includes offensive Some subjects might considerderd offensive like holocaust example If didnt learn happened horrific time could possibly happen without us even knowing happened But students choice read subject simply ignore cosidered offensive In conclusion I beleive materials libraries censored removed shelves People need learn little everything goes world better educated wellrounded individual", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System could do wonderful things in a classroom and also for students. I think that this system would be a great thing for every school to have because it would tramendously help student in their classes. In this essay I will be explaining why I think this would be a great thing for everyone.\n\nSome people might think that the Facial Action Coding system is a waste of money, but I think otherwise. In the article it explains to us how the system could intentionally help students. In the sixth paragraph in the aticle it states that \"a classrooom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" I think that when some students are confused in class or don't know how to do something, they become embarrassed. The Facial ACtion Coding System could help a stsudent when they are confused by giving the student some more detail on how to do something. This would be great in classes that students tend to struggle in. When a student apperas to be bored the computer will recognize it and give the student something more entertaining to look at or simply watch. Teens do not like to be bored throughout their day, but it so simply happens each and everyday.\n\nSo this system could help them everso simply.\n\nI really like the idea of having something in a class to help the students. It is a really great idea and it would be so amazing to have these in classes. I'm sure some people will totally hate they idea, but once they figure out how much it could actually help someone they might soften up to the idea of it. The Facial Action Coding System is defintely something each and every school needs.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" is an informative piece that thoroughly discusses the advantages and disadvantages of the autonomous automobile. The sole purpose of this article is to inform and impact one's knowledge on the future means of transportation technology. In my opinion, driverless cars are convenient and savvy, but are also to be handled delicately and with precaution.\n\nThe self-driving vehicle is a realistic option for transportation. In paragraph 7 it states, \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skill.\" This is evidently an advantage of driverless cars, for it minimizes the burden on the driver. It gives, us, readers reassurance and faith in the safety matters of the self-driving vehicle.\n\nThe progression of transportation has been deemed impressive and remarkable over the years. The focus of this positive trend was concentrated on: How can one develop smart cars without developing smart roads? \"....in the late 1950s, General Motors created a concept car that could run on a special test track,\" ( Paragraph 3). Susequently, that ideal plateauded and was perceived to be extremely pricy. On the bright side, that lead to the development of smarter cars.\n\nIt is extremely essential to convert to the usage of the autonomous automobile. Our country, as a whole, has made so many unique and outstanding technological advances. It would who of us to not cherish our accomplishments of advancement. This topic goes deeper than just the manufacturing of a new, authentic invention; it translates into ,the larger than life concept of, advocating towards a better and more proactive lifestyle.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying Venus is dangerous and hazardous. The author explains what exactly makes it this way and even so the author explains why we should still study it. The author explains how venus is most like earth in terms of density and size. Astronomers beleive that Venus \"may well once have been the moat earth-like planet in our solar system.\"\n\nThe author talks about how Venus gets \"over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmosphereic pressure is 90 times greater\" than earth. The author talks about hiw metal would melt on teh surface and how the pressure would smash a specially made submarine. Venus also contains \"eruptig volcanoes, powerful eathquakes, and frequent lightening strikes.\" Even thirty-plus miles above the surface, tempatures would stll be around 170 degrees fahrenhiet, but pressure would be around what it is like at sea level on earth. With all of this bad you would have plentiful solar power and radiation would exceed earth levels. The author explains how we can't speciments from venus abd that we need to find a way to get the speciments. Researchers are working on innovation that would allow machines long time to last whule contrubuting to our knowledge of our sister planet.\n\nVenus is dangerous but NASA and many other researchers are looking for ways to make studying venus possible. Not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades, and researchers are trying to change that. Researchers are looking bck at technology used in world war two. The author takls about venus being a backu planet if this planet becomes unlivable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The diagram illustrate processes of storage area is make from concrete canvas material.\nThe first step is concrete canvas manufacturing, It is bulit by combine three layers , which is Fibrous top surface, dry concrete and waterproof layer in order, and it is delivered by transportation to the area, then unwrapping the canvas from package to the next stage spreading area on the ground by use pegs on four corner of the 10 metres area with the rope on back of a car. Next step is use airpumping by eject air in the area with airpump which have a door on the opposite to increase area size. then watering the area by spring the water until it have grow to 8 metres, and then let it set by air for 20 to 24 hours.After that, the final outcome can use for storage.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Could the new technology called \"Facial Action Coding System\" enable computers to indentify human emotions? Yes, the new techonology could enable the computers ability to detect a haumans emotions to help in the school enviroment.\n\nThe professors Thomas Huang and nicu Sebe who are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communiacte are trying to find that a 3-D computer contructs how we feel. To help the professors Huang relies on a psychologist\n\nDr. Paul Eckman creates the system. Emotions that could be detected are the six basic emotions that are associated with each characteristic of movements in the facial muscles are happyiness,anger, surprise,disgust,fear, and sadness. All those emotions can make you have you face a certain way. For example when you are really surprised your mouth could drop wide open and your eyebrows could raise. With the new technology using\n\n\"video imagery\" tracks the movement of a real or painted face by looking at the different units indentifying mixed emotions. By helping identify Huang observes that da Vinci studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles to clearly state specific emotions. on the computer it stores similar anatomical info as a code (Da Vinci Code). If you were at school and so seem to be bored, confused, or excited and the computers webcam looking at you and it changes what you are doing, or it helps you all by the look on your face. That could help students get engaged into theri school work. For that to work the new technology Huang states that \" Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication, So computers need to understand that, to.\" if the computer undersatnds how you feel without taling to it, it could help a lot on how student feel about their assignments.\n\nIn conclusion, new technology could have a positive feedback on how student perform on there school work. The professors and the psychologist could be making a great new technology to help the performance of students. Allowing a computer to have \"Facial Action Cosing System\" could help teachers and students out at school.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think author concludes paragraph wants give For example wants show us never give anything even fail Therefore thats ends like", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The diagram depicts that, there are different six stages of salmon fish's life, from its egg stage till adulthood.\nOverall, the salmon fish goes through six main phases to fully grown in their hatching period. There are three different resource of water for their cycle.\nTo start with, salmon fish migrates from ocean to river for spawning their eggs. Thus, the life cycle of salmon starts from incubation in river. After the emerging from eggs, the infant salmon spend their next stage in freshwater and this phase called emergence. Then, they stay in freshwater for grown for a while.\nAfter a few days, they swim to estuaries where they are rearing continues. In large river , they grow bit larger and next to this , muturating fishes migrates to sea for grow more. After that, they stay at ocean for become fully adult fish. Finally, salmon travel for spawning egg in river. This cycle is remaining being continues.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this modern day and age, the number of worldwide companies is going up and this trend is believed to have created positive effects. I personally agree partly with this view. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, one’s life may benefit from the appearance of several multinational organizations. To begin with, a greater number of global companies means people have great chances in order to make a living because there will be a position for them in the company. Besides, one may have to communicate and meet lots of people when working in a global organization, which means they will have a clear opportunity to widen their social circle. Moreover, customers might receive magnificent customer service from many multinational companies. Companies located in countries means they have an enormous number of customers. This means they have to put effort into enhancing their customer service. As a result, one could experience outstanding service from these companies. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, negative effects could be the result of multinational organizations. Firstly, it is extremely hard for those who want to create their own business because they have to compete with lots of big companies. For example, start-ups in Vietnam have to undergo difficulties because they have to face several big worldwide organizations. Besides, customers often tend to choose well-known companies such as worldwide companies and newly-created companies might not become their option. Secondly, being fluent in several languages could be one of the requirements for those who want to have a job in a multinational company. This means those who are just able to communicate in their mother tongue cannot work for a global company and this may tighten their opportunities in order to get a job. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the huge number of global companies results in lots of benefits for people such as creating jobs for them or giving them significant customer assistance. However, there are still several downsides to this trend, naming creates difficulties for start-ups or for those who do not know a foreign language.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire state building faced many obstacles course bringing Al Smith s plans life One air ships flying low Urban areas illegal If breaking law nt large enough obstacle issue New York citizen s safety also came play Most dirigibles dangerous due flamability So one wrong move could killed many exploded densley populated area Another huge obstacle came play lightness dirigibles would allow s rear swivel around around mooring mast The way stop would put citizens danger", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Others should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. Luke feels that others people should participate in the program.I know that Luke feels this way.\n\nIn the text it states when Luke turned 18 before arriving in Greece, which meant he could be drafted for military service.When Lukes draft board learned that he was on a cattle boat trip,they told Luke to just keep doing that for my service.\"By the time Luke was discharged in 1947 luke made nine trips, the most of any Seagoing Cowboys.\n\nThe texts also states that The cattle boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small town boy, \"Luke says. Beside helping the Acropolis in Greece was special,\"So was taking a Gondola ride in Venice,Italy,a city with streets of water\"Luke says. Luke also toured an excavated castlein Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to china.\n\nIn conclusion, this evidence proves why Luke thinks others should join the program \"Seagoing Cowboys\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In many relationships I always laughter love sadness anger complacations Allthough one person I relationship involve laughter reather boring sad I would spend troumendous hours time get one little giggle sound laughter He rather gental soul could never harm fly still could laugh eventhough happy I would ask many times sure happy dont seem like I never see smiling laughing I see frown I told sour face replyed back yes I happy becuase I nt laugh nt mean I besides silly grin face could I happy reply I simply shrugged began cant laugh replyed back drowsy voice gettig tired topic everyday I ca nt laugh I choose I said well earth would sighed huffed really getting tired topic allright nt stop said gental strained voice im going stop nice I might talk rest year course joking could never nice besides bestfriend could nt talk The topic dropped never brought I saw It cold I walked house one morning go school I saw big moving rental truck outside house instandtly knew lied rather tell moving away I began think always asking would laugh would silly reason leave I went house caring I late never show school I figure leaving Once I got porch house walking door I blocked door way could go making sure wanted get box clothes truck would answer I asked said father got promotion work move new york I begain cry told I young eight years age twellve I knew I going get see I made sure I lefted school would hang lefted That night park told willingly without asking CAPS I know always wondered I dont luagh said went like I said I cant laugh I dont want I I young I teased smile I didnt understand would anyone tease I asked though would someone tease nice repled new teeth grew old ones nt look great And I still puzzled teeth looked good I asked nt smile teeth look fine said I would I nt know teased many years I nt feel need well I could smile truth told I want I said really much excitment yes reason person makes want smile grin always always happy I couldnt admit well becasue girl I guess girl make want amile friend younger makes feel little weak I didnt understand time I older I I glad I one night see smile many phone calls hear laughter I heard laughter shortest distance two people quite frankly absoultyl true becuase night friendship grew even phone call little laughter", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people believe that we could live in an unpredictable environment which resulted from a global warming, whereas others argue that we should find a way to prevent climate change. I totally agree with the later statement. In this essay, I will give reasons to support my opinion, including examples from my experience.\n\nFirstly, not only humans but also animals cannot survive in a harsh environment. Therefore, I think finding a way to live with it is wasting our time. In contrast, we should encourage communities to prevent climate change. For example, due to the global warming, the weather is getting hotter. Consequently, some people in Africa are suffering from it, and some of them died because they could not bare the weather. Another good example is that one cannot live without animals and plants. If the ecosystem of plants destroyed, it will definitely affect animals. Unfortunately, mankind will get the negative impact as well.\n\nSecondly, even if protecting environment requires huge efforts from communities globally, it will lead to a powerful impact and a last longer solution. For instance, dwellers in Australia are confronting with bushfires every year. Australian alone could not prevent this problem, as the global warming need cooporate from everyone. In addition, rising of the weather one degree Celsius may cause some animals extinctions. Nevertheless, societies could stop this issue by pay more attention to adjust the way of living now, such as stop using plastic bags, reducing gas, etc.\n\nIn conclusion, people should immediately start prevent the climate change from today, since it will be getting worst in the future. Besides, I firmly agree that people should stop doing harmful things to the nature because this is the only way that we can live longer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that driverless cars will make people even more lazy than they already are. When the driverless cars arrive no will feel the need to study and get their license. Then a small percentage of the auto industry will fail because no will buy cars, \"Can you imagine a time in the future when no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore?\" paragraph 1.\n\nThe amount of money it would take to updgrade all the existing roads and interstates would be horidous. We would need to hire multiple companies to install the cencors/tracks on all the roads which would cause more back up and would be to time consuming for the daily comute. The cars themselves would be expensive to make, adding all the censors or tracking systems would make the price of the cars sky rocket to where people couldn't afford them.\n\nEven though we call them driverless cars, they are not truly \"driverless\". Unlike in the movies, such as IRobot, we would still need to stay alert if there is sever traffic jams, road work, and navigating through accidents. So at them moment, driverless cars are more of and inconvience.\n\nAlthough I can say that driverless cars would be helpful. With the way the population is growing, traffic is becoming more and more of a problem. I think driverless cars would help reduce the build up on interstates if they are on a track. The sensors on the cars would reduce the chances of having a fatal crash.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It has utterly been claimed that computer games and films which consists of violence are extremely well-known. A plethora of individuals opine that films and computer games have a great number of detrimental impacts on community, so they ought to be restricted; however, an overwhelming majority of people deem that they are innocuous and assist persons to relax.\r\nOn the one hand, I understand why a vast majority of people support the opinion that violent movies and games are harmless. The proponents of the notion ensure a variety of points to elaborate their standpoint. First and foremost, in today’s world, people are overloaded with their work, and they also have hectic schedules; therefore, having worked, they are more likely to being interested in crime films and violent games in order to relax and refresh their mind. The second point to note is that according to the researchers of Baku State University, watching criminal films and playing violent games cannot negatively affect individuals since people could hardly remember and repeat these kinds of acts in their real lives. \r\nNevertheless, I would side with those who argue that violent films and games should be banned. The primary reason why I think that these types of games and films ought to be forbidden is because they fundamentally consist of violence which can have a huge number of adverse influences on individuals especially immature people. To be more specific, children basically want to repeat and illustrate these actions which they observed, due to this reason that if adolescences watch pornographic films or violent games, they detrimentally affect teenagers’ psychology. Furthermore, these games and films may increase crime rate in the future. In other words, nowadays having observed these movies and games, people may start to practice in their real lives which they noticed, as a result of which in the future individuals tend to commit a crime more than at present.\r\nBy way of conclusion, there are certain justifications for the former statement, albeit I am of the opinion that violent movies and computer games should be banned. I recommend that especially immature people should not be interested in these kinds of films and games.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think peolpe should got to the Seagoinh Cowbboys camp because It seems like Luke had fun. At first he didn't know after High-School graduation everything was going to change working two jobs at the bank and the grocery-store. When his friend asked him to come along he knew It was a chance to have a little fun, and get away from work. It would probably be a good idea to go to the camp because to have something fun to do once in a while.\n\nIf you went you would probably go and do lots of things you' ve never done before. Like for example when Luke went to the Acropolis in Greece, taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, acity with streets of water. Also he toured a excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal onhis way to China. Maybe you'd want to do something cool like that one day. Plus if your a animal person this should definetly be your thing because the animals would keep you busy sometimes. The animals had to be fed and watered three times a day. Plus Luke also found time to have fun on board (play games) after the animals were unloaded. Games like baseball, volleyball, and boxing It also helped pass the time If you were bored.\n\nThis could be a dream in a lifetime for you to go places you've never been and do things you've done It's not just taking care of animals It's also an adventure.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator,\n\nI think that Electoral College is a great and fast way to gather up votes to pick on our new president but i think that it has some big issues and the neagtives overcome the positives. One of the great things Electoral College brings that it is widely regarded as anarchronism with means that the votes wont be \"overruled\" it would acutally be the maguraty of the people voting on the president. If not it would be the elctors who elect the president, not the people. Also the party the people select is highly trusted and rarely betrayed. There have been a lot of cases in the past that go against Electoral College. One of the things that i am against the electoral college is that the voters dont actually vote on the presidental runner up they are actually voting on the state electors that who in turn elect the president. Also most worrying is in the case of a tie in the electrical vote. In that special case the elctection would actually have to go to the House of Representatives which means that state delegations vote on the president and The Senate would choose the vice-president. Basically the Electoral College is unfair to voters cause of the winner takes it all system in each state, candidates dont spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning so they only focus on the tight \"swing\" states. Its official in my opinion that the Electoral College is unfair , outdated , lack of democratic pedigree and irrational. It has lack of reasons in favor. I think we should just get over with this and go old school and get done with all this confusing matter and change to election to popular votes it took more of time but it was more accurate and caused less problems. Amazingly Bob Dole was right: Abolish the Electoral College!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My opinion on driverless cars is that they should not continue to be developed. They would cause more problems than they would be fixing. Cars are inanimate objects so they do not have any cognitive function. There is no way they can ascertain what might be traffic issues or dangers. There also is not a way that they can keep they drivers alert. creating driverless cars is just letting everyone who drives them to be even lazier.\n\nThese cars are not truly driverless either. They still require a driver to operate them at certain times. When the driver is not driving, how are they going to keep the driver ready to take over? There is no way to positively ensure that every driver of the driverless cars will be alert. When the driver is not alert what will happen? Will the car crash? Are the companies willing to deal with the consenquences if that does happen?\n\nThe driverless cars should not be developed anymore because they would cause more problems than we alrady have with automobiles. They would not fix anything . They dont have the cognitive ability to make decisions. And also they would be enabling our already lazy generation to become even more reliant on technology and become even lazier.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the present circumstance, the innovation of technology as well as artificial intelligence has supported mankind in numerous processes. Although some people claim that automation can lead to unexpected consequences, I believe that the benefits of machines outweigh the disadvantages. This essay will discuss the advantages of technology like the ubiquitous nature of machines in human life as well as their automation function.\r\n\r\nIn modern life, technology has appeared in every aspect of the community. Starting from the smallest dishwashing machine in the kitchen to grand manufacturing robots, it has always made human life easier. In addition, technology has the capability to create more occupations rather than remove them . For example, numerous manufacturing factories require skilled engineers to operate them. As a result, companies will hire more professionals with specialized knowledge to handle gadgets. Furthermore, office works also relate to machines. In the past, fax machines were utilized strongly, and at the present, every organization treat photocopy machines as must-have things.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the machine is defined as a mechanism to function automatically. As it removes people from physically demanding tasks for decades, individuals do not require to do such heavy things. Also, the automation of machines can also increase production efficiency. To illustrate, in the past, it might take many days to produce a car, but now with the support of automated machines, companies are capable of manufacturing thousands of automobiles a day. Therefore, these advancements create sustainable development for society.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the development of automated gizmos is inevitable. As it benefits both the communities and people, I believe that we should consider these machines as our partners in order to innovate further.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days, it is believed by some that studying at university is essential to success while others think that students should go to work after finishing high school. Although there are certain reasons why students should go to work, I personally think that studying at university is more necessary. \n\nOn the one hand, getting a job after school can have several benefits. First, having a job after finishing high school can help save time. This is mainly because studying at university takes 4 years or college takes 3 years. In that time, one may have achieved a lot if he or she goes to work. Second, getting a job after graduating from school can be financially beneficial. The main reason for this is that people do not spend too much money on tuition fees. Also, getting a job can help them earn money in order to cover their living costs.\n\nOn the other hand, it is my firm belief that going to university is more significant to future success. To begin with, students can get a good job after finishing university. The main reason for this is that a lot of companies require university degrees to apply. Going to university, people can learn more knowledge and practice in their speciality. Moreover, by attending university, people can have a chance in the future to develop themselves. This is mainly because they can study higher education such as master's and PhD. In addition, they can do research in the field that they are interested in.\n\nIn conclusion, while getting a job after school can have some merits, I would argue that university can give students a better future in their careers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "All countries today prioritize convenient, safe and eco-friendly public transportation, but recently, there has been an increased population growth, which has led to gridlock in cities and towns, as a result. I will explore in fact this phenomenon and find a solution to this problem since it seems that this complication needs to be dealt with highly in order to prevent road congestion.\r\n\r\nIn the first place, policymakers must ensure that there is not an influx of people especially in the centre of cities due to the fact that it might cause a heavy influx of people.\r\n\r\nSecondly, the national budget must invest to build effective infrastructure, such as metro lines and railways, for which engineers and professionals are necessary.\r\n\r\nDue to this, traffic congestion has become one of the top priorities for maintaining a tranquil town, but it has been understood that this condition has been created because of the rapid growth of the population and the imbalance in the distribution of communities. In order to deal with this problem, mayors can employ specialists and educated people to build high-tech roads and divide cities into neighbouring areas for living.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The era of mass car usage is slowly coming to an end. Many countries around the world are implementing innovative methods of limiting car usage in their country. Although a car may seem like the logical and easier way for one to get around, there are many other less costly, and better for the environment methods of transportation. It is crucial to the future of the environment for the world to act now and use less cars. Cars produce emisions that are very bad for the ozone. If the ozone tears, radiation from the sun will penetrate the atmoshpere and severely damage the earth in which so many life formes thrive. There are countless advantages of limiting car usage that would benefit all the world in the long-haul.\n\nNew communities are rising all over the globe where car usage is severely limited and all residents are pedestrians. It may seem like a dysfunctional community but the residents actually feel to the contrary. \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,\" without the use of cars, residents and their families feel much more content. All the resources they need are within the community and definently within walking or biking distance. This is just one of many progressive ideas that has proved succesful and very beneficial.\n\nIn other cities where polution is very high, bans on car usage are coming into place very well. Citizens are discouraged by law to operate personal forms of transportation on certain days. This came into place in Paris after the whole city was drowned in smog. Smog is the pollution exerted from cars and mixed with fog. Although some people did break the law to use their car, it worked for the most part. Many people do not realize the the effect polution has on the environment until they are able to see pshysical change. That is why the world must act now before pshysical change can be seen globaly.\n\nChange needs to happen now. Many communities are begining to see the effects of their cares and are using them less. Cars are a trend that is slowly decreasing. maybe one day, there will be no harmful car usage. Maybe one day. Change is a' comin.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine having to argue about keeping the Electoral College or changing to Election by popular vote for the president of the United states of America. which one would you choose? If i had to choose I Would pick to Abollish the electoral college because it effects who president, confuse people and candidates don't spend enough time in the states.\n\nThe first reason why I said that we should abolish the electoral college is because it effects who can become president. In passage two it said that \"in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore thanks to the quirks of the electoral college won the popular vote but lost the presidency\".\"Over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now. And yet , the electoral college still has its defenders. what gives?\n\nThe second reason why I said that we should Abolish the electoral college is because it confuse people. when Al Gore won the popular vote but lost the presidency I bet a lot of people were confused. Most people would have pefered a direct election to the one we have now.\n\nThe last reason why I said that we should Abolish the electoral college is because candiates don't spend enough time in the states. what i mean by that is that is because of the winner take all system they know that they don't have a chance of winning. In the passage it said that during the 2000 campaig, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad.\n\nIn conclusion the reason why we should abolish the electoral college is because it effects who becomes president, it confuses people, and candiates dont't spend enough in the states. Now that i told you my reason don't you think the same.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire state building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock The builders cautious safety played big role dirigibles Many dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen instead helium Because hydrogen highly flammable would nt want city destroyed risk massive fire Another problem nature There violent air currents building danger local pedestrians New York The final obstacle builders faced trying pursue dirigible idea law prohibited airships flying low urban areas They would breaking law even allow within area building many issues occurring development dirigible plan idea using quietly disappeared", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When building Empire State Building builders overcome many obsticles One obsticle example lack suitable landing area The dirigibles large spanding feet therefore city buildings many suitable areas land Another obsticle overcome fact city allow dirigibles close rural areas Although reasons plenty enough article mentions perhaps greatest obsticle nature The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents pg All idea land dirigibles place unrealistic", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It has been suggested that topic for discussion, more people believe that art is a necessary subject for children in different places such as school, on the one hand the others believe that it is a waste of time. I am to admit that there are both correct and incorrect points on this topic.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, I am of the opinion that art is indispensable for more people because this activity can help you to develop your worldwide, thinking style, comments and so on. Moreover, many prominent artists commenced this process from childhood and they have been unforgotten yet. As a matter of fact, the art is being used by people like(as) both profession and hobby. That many people can earn income from it. Personally, I believe that art helps to affect to become creative. Briefly, I think that art is crucial and indispensable.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, as a matter of fact, in this day and ,age some people claim that it is a waste of time. It seems to me that there are more reasons as a pattern they think that essential subjects are to enforce by people. A human believes that there isn't meaning on this action and the young or the others must be realized more decisive acts than art. For ,instance they should separate more time for resting, relaxing, learning lessons and so on.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, my own view on this matter, we can't deny how is important art in people life so I believe that art is essential for children at school. If they don't desire to engage with this activity, they will enforce their opt.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting described author challenging three reasons distance water heat All occurred multiply effects others As time went cyclist grew tired heat In one sentence effect heat clearly described cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Education plays an imperative role in developing a career . some people aduce that , it is a better way for young people to studying at unviresity for their good career,whereas others beleive that going straight to the job after their lower studies is the best way for them. both these arguments have there own advantages and disadvantages\n\non the one hand, there are some benefits if people go for a job staright after their school , such as, they can earn more money at their younger age as well as juveniles can earn their living standards by their own as they will be independent. Moreover, youngsters will get more time to settle down their business because they do not have to spend many years in studying university. For example: it usually takes two or three years to complete diploma or degree in colleges ,so , in the mean time youngsters can think of their career instead of wasting time in university.\n\non the other hand , enrolling in higher education is the better option to boost their career. Firstly, people get more knowledge about their future goals as well as they can learn ,how to handle puzzling situation of life. secondly, big companies or organisations prefer to hire people with higher education as well as certified qualifications,rather than, people who do not even have a certificate for their skills or abolities. Now a days, only people with higher studies or experience get good jobs .for instance: In Canada , big companies higher workers with their proof of studies and employment ,however people without degrees are not trusted for professional positions\n\nTo conclude, it seems that both arguement have their pros and cons ,howevere studying more or getting qualified is more indispensable to get a good job.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "So the reason why Venus is despiting the danger is because it's \"not in easy conditions but survivable for humans\" but it also says \"At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Farenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels.\" So what this passage is saying is that Venus could be a place to live in and to also discover of how much it's like over at Venus like in Earth so it would have the similarity of how it's like in Earth. To see if it's safe to live in Venus and to also see how they would move us to Venus.\n\nIn paragraph 5 it says that \" the NASA has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way.\" So there could be a posibility to be able to live their just to see if it's actually safe for us.\n\nIt is a good condition living in another place we could also discover about scientists know what would be good for us to be able to live and to what would actually happen in the future for all people in this world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "JUST\n\nimagine one day, of limiting the use of cars. It is true that people couldn't reach their destination as quick as they want to; however, there are beneficial advantages for limiting car usage. Such as, citizens having a much better time, less smog interrupting the oxygen, and the community might be better without vehicle culture.\n\nINITIALLY\n\n, one of the auspicious advantages of limiting car usage is citizens having a much better time. To illustrate my point, in Bogota, Columbia, they've launched a campaign in the mid-1990's called the Car-free day. Columbians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during work, leaving the streets of the capital city to ellude the traffic jams. Also in result of the Car-free day campaign, parks and sport centers also have bloomed throughout the city; uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic; and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up.\n\nIN ADDITION\n\n, less smog interrupting the oxygen is another benefit to limiting car usage. To explain my reasoning, Paris has banned the privelage of driving due to smog. Paris typically has more smog than other European capitals. Diesel fuel was blamed, since France has a tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline. Diesel make up 67 percent of vehicles in France, compared to a 53.3 percent average of diesel engines in the rest of western europe, according to Retuters.\n\nFURTHERMORE\n\n, the community might be better without vehicle culture. To explain, President Obama's ambitious goals to curb the united states' greenhouse gas emissions, unveiled last week, will gety a fortuitous assist from an incipient shift in American behavior: recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by.\n\nALL IN ALL\n\n, there can be auspicious advantages to limiting car usage because of citizens having a much better time, less smog interrupting the oxygen, and the community might be better without vehicle culture. Some people may say that cars get you to your destination faster; however, it may be all for the better.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is a landform not a Civilization!\n\nIn the atricle NASA has comfirmed that the ''Face on Mars'' was just an landform also called a Martian mesa. The image was found in area in mars that is called Cydonia. The shaped like face looked like a real human face, but it was just shaped that way. Others think that it is a ancient alien civilization that used to be on mars but now there is nothing on mars and it seems like the Alien civilizaton has left things behind when they disappered.\n\nWhen NASA first saw the face they didn't know what to belive so they too pictures in 1976,1998, and 2001.\n\nWhy it is a landform and that it is not a alien civilization because Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera crew snapped a photo\n\nof the face ten times. Web surfers were waiting for results and it came out as a landform so there for it was never a alien artifact.\n\nReasons why people would think that the face could have been a face from a alien civilzaion because the face really looked like a actually face and that it could have been from an acually civilization. Some people believe that we are not the only ones in the universe and some other people think that we are the only ones in the universe and when this these images was sent it made people believe at the time that when there was no answer to what the face ment to people.\n\nBut when NASA comfirmed that the image was just a landform people most likely still believed that it is still an alien civlization because to some people they ask where did the artifact get there? Is there any other artifacts that are on mars or in another area? After movies, blogs, and books lots are considering these things and some people might be afraid of what else might be out there. NASA might be trying to answer some of these questions but for right now it is just a landform.\n\nNASA has found more space like things that couldn't have been explained but maybe in the future they could find more things on mars than just a landform or try to find more things on other planets than mars. There is a whole solar system for us we could find a least one thing in the universe that is not just landforms.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir talks making house home community family Growing enviroment instilled great sense Family nothing blood relative par paragraph goes onto talk growing Italian Spanish Cuban cultures one community differences aside made community family Rodriguez talks warmly good things say childhoodthe mood memoir Rodriguez remembering culture filled childhood I learned real definition family And I never forget house gracious neighborhood many things I learned love par seven The memoir dedication life reflection experiences within family He writes memoirs loving spirits dedicating knowledge family", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The challenge of Exploring Venus\" it talks about all the dangerous features that the plant Venus has. In the article it states that \" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. This is a postive thing about Venus because people may want to exploer Venus because its like earth. Also Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet of the solar system. This creates the idea that Venus may not be worth studing because of how dangerous it may apeal.\n\nDespite that Venus may be seem like a dangerous planet to study its actually worth studying. Venus is worth studying because the author states that \" Venus may be well known because its the most Earth- like planet in our solar sytem. That suggest the idea that its worth studing because of its like earth and people may want to study a planet like earh. Not only is it just a planet like earth but its the only planet that is like earth in the solar system. Also Venus is worth studying because it has increiable things that happens such as erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquackes and lighting that strikesto probes seeking to land on its surface. Thoes event that take place on Venus are worth studying because the events are very exciting and intresting people may want to know more what happen on the planet Venus.\n\nIn conclusion Venus is worth studying beacuse of the exciting events that take places. Also because of how Venus is the only planet in the solar system to be like earth and people may want to learn more about how they are so similar. Despite all of the dangers Venus presents its actally worth studying because you dont have to visit the planet all you have to do is learn more about the planet and learn why its so dangerous or why its like earth and why 3 major events take place.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent times, several people have had conflicts about whether employers have to obey the dress principles in office or whether the productivity of work is their priority. I strongly believe that people should concentrate on the quality of their work completely instead of their dress, and this essay serves to elaborate on my opinion.\r\n\r\nA majority of people argue that employers prioritize the quality of their work. When people pay all their attention to working, their production and performance in a company will be better and bring several benefits for both themselves and this company instead of spending time on resolving the problem related to fashion. Specifically, their company receives more reputation, hence employment's career and position may have a chance to be promoted. For instance,in a prestigious company like Apple, there are no requirements about the employees' dress, Apple's employees spend most time on design, fixing errors, and enhancing their products. These criteria made Apple become a famous and successful brand and community with several electronic devices existing everywhere.\r\n\r\nMoreover, the dress restrictions may expand the gap between employment in their working environment. Several companies force their workers to wear impolite clothes with many costume accessories, some staff want to show their wealth to others by their fashion style and only interact with people who have brand clothes like them and avoid working with people wearing simple clothes. Hence, after a long time, these kinds of working environments may become a fashion competition, instead, people have to create ideas, and products to promote and increase the company's profit. Many companies have collapsed for a similar reason that the directors create complicated and unnecessary principles that lead to low-quality working environment, so many employees quit their jobs and these companies lose their customers.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I firmly believe that bosses should not impose dress rules on their staff based on the effect on the productivity and workplace.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Helping out people in other contries with the UNRRA makes me feel good inside. Let me tell you why everyone should join the UNRRA's seagoing\n\ncowboy program\n\nFirst and for most , it is very fun. We play all the average games like baseball , volleyball ,\n\ntable tennis , fencing , boxing and ready. Another\n\nway we have fun is with the animals. Watching the baby horses play is adorable.\n\nLast but not least my friends and I have fun. We tell jokes and play pranks . You know the usual guy stuff.\n\nThis program teaches responsiblity. I am in charge of the animals and I have to feed and water them 3 times everyday and clean their stalls once a week. It may not sound fun but it is worth it when you see the light in peoples eyes when they recive one of our animals.\n\nAs well as responiblity you get certain rewards. On my free time I like to see the awesome structures that the people have in their cities. In total I have gotten\n\none gondola ride , 2 trips to Acropolis and 1 trip to the Panema Canal.\n\nThese are only the three top reasons why everyone should join this program. and if you are interested the UNRRA always needs new people!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that newsletter have a profound impact on people’s viewpoints and sentiments. There could be several reasons for this phenomenon, and I consider it to be a both positive and negative issue.\n\nThere are two main reasons why papers have a far-reaching influence on the public. Firstly, the bottom line is the globalization. This is because this trend triggers more and more people to approach the daily basis and current affairs so that they can find a new business opportunity or just keep abreast of this constantly changing world. Gradually people can shape their perspective towards life, depending on the ratio of positive articles they peruse, unintentionally or not. In addition, newsletters are considered to have a tendency to change the traditional role of books as an indispensable source of information. Take online newspapers as an example. Nowadays, with the prevalence of advance technology, people are inclined to rely on this kind of information source to broaden their horizons, instead of books as before.\n\nOn the one hand, newspapers can have positive impact on readers. For example, when new stories such as reports of the work of the medical staff after a natural disaster or the philanthropic campaigns of public figures to help the communities. This kind of news might inspire us all to lead a better life. On the other hand, pessimistic ethoses about life can also stem from reading miserable articles. In case the public are repeatedly exposed on a daily basis to stories about crime, war and tragic human suffering around the world. I believe that such repeated exposure gradually desensitizes people, and we become more cynical about the world and more skeptical that we can do anything to change it.\n\nIn conclusion, the beneficial effects of newspapers on individuals are undeniable; however, I hold a conviction that everyone should filter out depressing articles to mitigate the potential adverse effects on them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting big impact cyclist When started ride confident old timers right directions roads take get Yosemite National Park Though sun bearing refused give says The sun beginning beat I hardy noticed He came places worn deserted knew alone anything happened The desert heat made water pretty regularly tried get I got hands knees When l tried drop two flavor battery acid paragraph He thirsty would drink hot water Then thought miles go kept going He weakening pedaled along changing terrain trying keep balance dehydrated state With little energy last passed abandoned Well Grape Juice factory probably tested patience sanity He resorted gathered pebbles stuck mouth keep mind thirst He losing hope came upon Gary wilbers fish camp best bet felt relieved able get cool water By s learned lesson stick map", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The ever developing field of technology continues to change and shape our lives every day. As we migrate towards a world that is more technalized than ever, it is inevitable that technology eventually begin to be able to do human functions such as recognizing emotions. The Facial Action Coding system is a prime example of this with many valuable assets. The use of this technology to read students' emotional expressions is valuable in a classroom as it can be used for online lessons, can allow teachers to see how individual students feel about certain topics, and can allow students to connect with online learning.\n\nOnline lessons are a amazing example of how valuable this technology can be in classrooms. As Dr. Huang predicted in the article, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" classroom computers with this technology could moniter a student's emotions and then modify the lesson accordingly. If a student already knew the information and was bored, the computer could detect this and the lesson could move on to something more challenging. If the student was confused, the lesson could go into greater depth in its explanation. The possibilities are endless. This is extremely valuable when it comes to online lessons. Online education is becoming increasingly popular but the problem is, it is hard to modify the lessons based on the student's individual needs as a teacher can when teaching in person and seeing the student's reactions firsthand. This technology would allow teachers to have online lessons in their classroom with the lessons still being fitted to the student's individual needs.\n\nSometimes it is hard for teachers to gauge how students feel about certain topics. Students are not always honest with how they feel, especially when they need help. This new technology provides the solution to this problem. The computer could monitor the student's emotions during certain lessons on certain topics and then compile this information for the teacher to analyze. Using this data, the teacher could see how each individual kid is feeling about topics and know who is confused and needs more help and who is ready to move on to something harder. The teacher could also see the percentage of the student's emotions as shown in the article. This is priceless for teachers as it allows them to gain undertsanding of their student's emotions towards what they are learning and allows the teacher to act accordingly.\n\nWhen learning from a physical teacher, students can emotionally connect with them which enables them to feel more comfortable with the material and what they are learning. Computers do not have this. However, with this new facial action recognition technology students would be able to connect with the computer more because they know the computer is recognizing their emotions and acting accordingly. The students would feel understood. Students being able to connect more with online learning is a major development and could ultimately revolutionalize online education.\n\nCritics of this technology may argue that it cannot replace human interaction and the human connection between student and teacher. While this is true, this technology is not aiming to replace this interaction but instead, enrich it. If the teacher is more aware of the student's emotions, the connection can deepen and the teacher can help the student in ways the teacher did not know the student needed help previously. This technology allows education to grow and become more personalized. It is not trying to replace the human interaction and connection of teaching but enable it to grow.\n\nModifying online lessons based on the student's emotions, teachers having knowledge of how their students feel about topics, and students being able to connect with online learning are all perfect examples of how valuable this technology in classrooms truly is. Some people may argue that technology can not replace human interaction, but that is not what this technology is for. It is for enhancing the connection between students and teachers. This new technology has many assets and many ways that it can be valuably used in a classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez life mood containing greatful showed parents gave love whole life Both parents born raised Cuba moved United States Starting lives taking job could find Then born Both Parents raised love care introducing Cuban background life As telling story readers could tell greatful family like Also shared non blood related family remembrence parents life changed moving showed respect towards", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What think computers I think computers positive effect people All kids Please heed following advice Computers good thing kids I teaches life skills handeye coordination lot technology Expert states PERCENT success full jobs involve kind interation computers learn skills early age soon become experts Technology part life today continue increasing years It s grevious idea want separate kids technology As child sister grew computers knew fully use age went collage amazing computer skills Today works law ferm presidental secretary She gets paid loads money Today trys get learn tech stuff If kids know want best present future People say kids future theyre succesfull Computers great way kids ages learn communicate another others We want kids happy kids use internet research things projects Kid therapist says kid chat kids though internet like facebook myspace normaly socialy interactive kids I know thinking lot CAPS thing internet dont want kids see conversly set limits child block also dont want kids risk obesity lack excercise So give time limits My cousins go computer hours day They whatever time left chat friends Its As see computers seen possotive manner Heed advice allow kids freedom internet They happier trust", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "History is an inseparable part of our life, and some part of it, as a mystery, is interesting to the public. Nowadays, in some nations, people are going to explore seriously the history of their accommodation. The reasons for this trend are unknown, but possible reasons such as watching some mysterious movies or increasing human awareness are introduced. In this essay, I will scrutinize possible reasons for this change and the ways the community could achieve precise data.\r\n\r\nThe first and perhaps the most important reason for this attitude is releasing some movies that stimulate audiences' curiosity about the history of their houses. In such movies, there are some inhabitants seeking the past. Consequently, it leads to discoveries which are exciting for viewers. For instance, Dr. Morphy's House is a famous movie in this field which by searching precisely could find a hidden treasure in his basement room. After watching this movie, the number of people making efforts to find out more about their houses rose noticeably. \r\n\r\nIn addition, the awareness and interest of individuals in history have increased. With the development of the media and the internet, the public knows more about history, and seemingly it would be an adequate reason for their seeking about the past. For instance, one of those interested in unfolding the historical events told me that after hearing about this matter that his neighbourhood was a safe place in World War 2, he was encouraged to collect information about the history of his accommodation. \r\n\r\nFor achieving this goal, people utilize various resources to become familiarized with the past and events taken place there. Books, the internet, and interviews with former inhabitants all are different ways to respond to their questions. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, there are various motivations for individuals to know about the history of their houses. What is important are their methods of collecting information to achieve credible and valid information.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this day and age, it is a common belief that it may be better for government to allocate more funds to the construction of new houses as well as road systems rather than the restoration of old buildings since this activity can waste the authorities a large amount of money. From my perspective, I do not concur with this view because of a myriad of culprits.\n\nFirst and foremost, I put forward my idea that renovation of the old buildings might be of uttermost significance to preserve the distinctive architecture as well as cultural values of the locality. If this is implemented well, it will attract numerous visitors paying these destinations a visit annually and make a huge contribution to the revenue of our countries. Hoi An ancient town in Viet Nam is a telling example of this. Indeed, this destination has a national and worldwide reputation for a wide range of buildings which faithfully followed the bold architectural designs of China. As a result, the old buildings turn Hoi An into one of the most outstanding tourist attractions in VietNam which may be ample to compensate for repair fees.\n\nBesides, ancient architecture are believed to play an indispensable part in the history and culture of every country. Thanks to these, individuals can keep their identity as well as the enormous sacrifices of their ancestors to win the victory in the former days in mind, and they will endeavour to live up to the previous generations’ expectations as a result. For example, no matter how exorbitant the price to restore old buildings may be, the government still invest much money in preserving Independence Palace because this heritage site can instil in every Vietnamese’memory how bravely the former generations sacrifice to form the Socialist Republic of Viet Nam these days.\n\nIn conclusion, notwithstanding the costly expenditure spent on restoring ancient buildings, I believe that it is pivotal for the government to take old architectural renovation into consideration seriously.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempts allow dirigibles dock mooring mast Al Smith architect man behind idea Empire State building He maker Chrysler building competing eachother construct world s tallest building To make Empire State building bigger Chrysler building Smith going construct somthing John Tauranac stated Would equipped age transportation dream aviation pioneers That dream travel blimp The Empire State Building going mooring mast top dock air ships It going easy concept The architects could nt drop mooring mass roof would stress buildings frame The greatest reason mast would never fufill destiny safety The excerpt states Most derigibles used hydrogen Hydrogen flammable There also law air ships flying low urban areas After numberous attempts modifications idea shelved", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people know would upset wasnt anymore books shelves library I think books offensive wants read book boring excitingThe libraries lables books people go check books would lable says book right sertin people contain bad language Thats example There adult children sections library maybe sections every type books like murder mysteryThat also goes movies music magazines I love going though books library never know expect book", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the artical, \"The challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author shows that going to Venus is worth it dispite everything that could go wrong. Venus is the closest related planet to us. Anyone who explores Venus will have to go throught some trouble. Venus' atmosphere is 97 percent carbon dioxide ande reaches 800 degrees. According to the author a trip to Venus is well worht and trouble because we can discover the similarities Venus and Earth have. Venus is an ideal trip because it is the nearest planet which reduce the time people are away from earth. People are already trying to make an effort to go to Venus safely so why waste their hard work.\n\nSpace travel takes a number of years to complete. Distance is very important, \" a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel.\" Astronomers try to keep space trips as short as they possibly can. With longer exploration time the dangers increase. It's a budget problem too. With longer explorations they need to pack more neccessities. The astronomers can also face sickness due to the new climate they are experiencing. It's safe to say that the shorter the visit the better is it for everyone.\n\nVenus is our twin planet. Scientist believe that Venus had the same type of structures as us. They believe that Venus once has oceans and could support life. Venus is very similar to earth, \"it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" What happened to Venus could potential happen to Earth. With this trip to Venus we can see what happened to that planet and then find ways to stop it. Gathering some samples from Venus can lead to a whole new theory of what happened to the once hospitable planet.\n\nIf people are still not convinced the author goes in depth to show way on how people are trying to find ways to make it safe. NASA knows how dangerous Venus can be but they could have found a way to make it safe. The first problem is the 800 plus degree heat but a \"possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray.\" This is will make it a less scolding temperature. This will also make the air pressure less thick. They have created various way on how to combat all of Venus' problems.\n\nThe author supports the idea of going to Venus with lots of facts of why it is important that we go. They even go a step further to understant that Venus is dangerous but provides ways on what NASA is doing to make is as safe as possible. Based on the tone of the article it is clearly shown that the author includes lots of fact to back up his claim. They had key points that made this article reliable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People tend to have different views about whether students should be taught to examine and judge their high school teachers. While students' critiques on teachers can sometimes be useful for educational quality, I believe this would significantly weaken teachers' management and cause the lack of discipline for students.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, it is possible for high schools to upgrade teaching standards by telling children to examine and judge their teachers' performance. For one thing, when teachers know their students have opportunities to provide learning feedbacks, it would largely stop inappropriate teaching behaviours, especially teachers' bad habits, such as failing to diversify their teaching and not admitting their mistakes. For another, it may help to make sure what students learn is proper and sufficient, while pushing teachers to act as role models in front of their students.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it perhaps causes more consequences in high school study as it encourages students' indiscipline. For one thing, allowing students to evaluate teachers' performance, means that the traditional relationship between teachers and students would change. When teachers are afraid of receiving negative assessments which might affect their jobs, what students can learn would have to depend on students' autonomy. This can significantly reduce their learning quality, especially when they slack off. For instance, if some students start to act up and distract other classmates' studying, teachers would face the dilemma of whether to stop them or pretend not to see this. In fact, most of them are not likely to risk their careers. This is why I believe high schools should not allow students to make comment on their teachers.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, I can understand why some people might want students to evaluate their teachers, but it seems to me that this is not practical and sometimes is even harmful to high school education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine if you were a student in a classroom, working on a difficult problem. Then, a computer is scanning your facial features to conclude how you may be feeling in that moment. One might feel frightened and unable to do their work. If the FACS computer system were used in everyday classroom settings, work would probably never get done.\n\nAs a student, some tend to do less work while being watched by their teacher. Having this sort of technology to read every aspect of your face would make a student self-consious. In a classroom, the student is there to learn to improve their knowledge. Their emotions should not be judged in such a manner. As stated in paragraph 6 of the article, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored....\" Usually when a student is confused they ask their teacher, or a fellow student. Though some students never ask for help, they shouldn't be scanned for it.\n\nThe FACS computer system is not needed in school. Students should not have to be scanned just so a teacher can improve their method of teaching. If a student is becoming bored, most teachers attempt to lighten up their lesson, instead of just ignoring their students emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "First of all I will agree with the development of driverless cars. As we all know that the technique is improving, the new technique is shows the good way of them to serve us. The driverless cars is one of these new techniques.\n\nThe driverless cars will help us by a lot of different ways. For example, the driverless cars will improve the safety of cars, it can let the drivers have time to sleep in the long-term travel, it also can help old man or childern to drive. The car will be really helpful, it will be more popular than the old car than we are using now.\n\nIf the technique of driverless cars improved and don't need human driver anymore. That's a good news for old people or childern. Because they don't need to drive at all, the computer will fix all of the problems.\n\nIn the article it talking about the driverless car is still waiting for the Law. There are a few states is allowing the driverless car. That is a good start, in the future there will be more states and more counties allow the driverless car.\n\nThe article also talking about the driverless car's bad way. It's still not really safty yet. I know the driverless car is not safety yet. But we should give the driverless car some time to improve. I believe in the future the Driverless car will be more safty than normal cars. Because the normal cars are contrl by humans, humans will make mistakes. For example, in the long term drive the driver will be really sleepy or maybe the driver will take a phone call when he is in the driving. But the computer will not be tired, so it is better than the human drivers. But we should give them some time to improve the driverless car.\n\nThe technique of the driverless car still imporving now. I think the technique will be progress and become well-done some day. At that time the technique have already grow up and it will be a lot save than human control cars.Maybe now the driverless car are still have a lot of questions but in the future the driverless car will be more safty, more common and more confutable. So I think the Driverless cars will have a great development in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What do is your position on driverless cars they ask.\n\nNo, driverless cars should not be aloud.\n\nYes, they might make life easier but also more dangerous.\n\nDriveless cars are all based on sensors, camera, receivers, and computers.\n\nI think they should not be aloud to be on the road because of the dangers in today world.\n\nYou got the computers in these cars, whats holding back the terrious from hacking them?\n\nThey could upload cars with software that could make them drive off a cliff or into the sea.\n\nLet alone the computers can't be relide on.\n\nWhat if they short out and there is a big crash?\n\nWill you be aloud to fight agenst the makers and have them pay for everything?\n\nIn my theroy we should not have them in this world.\n\nAre techonogly is advaning at an alarming rate and no good can come from that.\n\nWe will all be come fat people laying around this earth, sucking up all the oxyen and died.\n\nWe need to slow the technogly rate down and let the people catch up now.\n\nIm 15 years old and I can't get the hang of some of this techonogly.\n\nWhat do you think will happen to all these older people?\n\nIf we get driveless cars they won't know how to work them, they will be so lost and will probably stay home and walk places.\n\nThese cars are just bad news and its only going to get worse.\n\nHistory will repeat it's self once again.\n\nWhen the Titanic first made it's showing and it was so advaced in technogoly that everyone on that ship felt safe until it crashed and sunk.\n\nI don't want a tragety in my life time were technogoly got to far ahead.\n\nSo no i don't think this is a good idea, it may seem like it at the moment but in time it will all fall, it will all fail in this world and there is millions of billions of dollars out the doors.\n\nThe products they are using to make these cars all gone we only got so many in this world lets us them right.\n\nBy 2020 I don't want to see these cars driving around by them self beacuse is just going to hit us where it hurts.\n\nDriveless cars are just not a good idea for us yet.\n\nWe need to let the people catch up with the technogoly.\n\nGive it another 15 years and this world should be ready to have them.\n\nThank you for reading this agurement I hope it opened up your mind to think alittle more about this.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the chart below, we can see some information about eating insect products and the current price for the specific meal available in the marketplace and that pictures also describe few meals with number to describe the using of those meals. For example,Buffallo is 2.38,Beef-3.03,pork-1.91,chicken-1.08,glutinous rice-0.82,rice-0.78,Giant water bug-3.3 and so on.In those showing items, weaver ant(wild) is the highest using meal with the rating ff 10.65 and the less usable item is Rice with 0.78 of total use. But, the best describe with the percentage where Mexico has the most percentage of insect-based products in global willingness with 71 percent and on the other hand Peru stands in second position with 58 percent. Also, Thailand is in number 3rd position with 56 percent in global willingness.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many citizens, nowadays, are inquisitive to learn about the home they live in as extensively as possible primarily because they want to learn about the background and style of their apartment, assess the safety, and find out if it is haunted. I believe nearby elderly citizens and the internet could be two invaluable sources for such curicommunitiesnity to find the best possible material about their buildings.\r\n\r\nThe knowledge of the history of a house gives people a sense of self-satisfaction. This is why individuals, especially those who live in a home that was built many years ago, are often interested to find out more about Adobe. The background often includes how the house was painstakingly built in an era when technology was not so advanced. Thus, exploring the background reveals some unique and fascinating facts. For instance, it was a common misconception for many dwellers in the old part of our city that their residences were built during the English colonial era. Researchers recently found that those houses were built mimicking the English styles but by the local masons. It was fascinating to finally learn about it. Moreover, the construction and the built quality of a house convey much to report about the safety and durability of the houses. Knowing such details could prevent the nation from facing any disaster like falling victim to a collapsed house. Finally, some folk superstitiously think a residence might be haunted if it has some bad history. Learning about its history often comes from their personal belief and their motivation to either cleanse the house or move off. \r\n\r\nTo get proper information about the houses, humans can talk to local senior citizens who had been living there for quite a while. They can offer first-hand information about the building and much more details that are not available elsewhere. On top of that, the internet could be another effective source to get details of a house. For instance, many websites store data about houses in the UK, and anyone can find them online with just a few mouse clicks.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, people's motivations to learn about their houses could range from safety reasons to simple curiosity, from superstition to practical reasons. To get the best information they can contact elderly locals and browse the internet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author talks about how Venus is called the Evening star because is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky and because is the second planety from our sun. It's a very challenging place to examine more closely.\n\nVenus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. Earth, Venus, and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit\n\nthe sun at different speeds this means that sometimes we are closer to Mars and sometimes to Venus.\n\nHe also talks about how humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on Venus\n\nbut each mission was unmanned because no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.\n\nVenus has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide that blankets it. But the most challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. The planet's\n\nsurface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit so this makes Venus a very hot planet the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater\n\nthan what we experience on our planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Do exceed posted speed limit Joe Kurmaskie many things effected cyclist Such water He really good water drink When I tryed drop two flavor battery acid He wasnt able drink water battery acid could made sick Also unstable roads bike made things hard Rough roads ahead To ride unstable ground hard So two examples water Rough roads made features setting deffinitly effect cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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