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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The diversity world makes rather difficult please every person time What I find appropreate another find obscene volgur What I enjoy read listen watch manner media consumption I indulge insult bother someone else matter fact probably That still make right remove I others like offends another person A child walks grocery store nt get want proceeds drop fbomb More half time heard language parents If parents media right Maybe media nt hidden justincase child hears If parent guardian want child hear things nt allow listen They control enter house To remove things library would like trying keep child ever seeing naked body hearing curse word Every time bathe d need blinders d never able leave house people always watch say public No I feel like every type movie book etc belongs library There cutoff inapropreate volgure something still allowed public library Novels descriptive reader almost see every aspect procreation taking place pages place seperate public library right along movies really show every aspect Although I like thought actually remove said books would unfair To deny access find books fine wouyld wrong A wise author Katherine Paterson said All us think book hope none children children taken shelf But I right remove book shelf work I abhor also exactly right everyone else And books left shelf us The truth statement would hard prove A religious family believes book I find innocent fantasy book series promoting witchcraft satanism remove library I remove previously stated graphic romance novels A mother wants child sheltered considers filth planet removes books drug addicts abuse books war re full death And continues finally left empty shelfs forgotten building longer purpose The graphic novels I find inapropreate could placed adult section higher children reach The protective parents deny children media deem inappropreate instead world Although everything appropreate everyone nt right censor something world There ways cencor things parts others Nothing romoved library content At placed less accessable manner", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The effect s computers people resinable children people Computers good people day s people spleeling time computer arent realling miss eye s people adicted Now people useing computer like nutting So people think computers nt hurtful eye s time people speeling computer speeling time family friend People helpful line computer thing People nt useing computers like day computer mess eyes s people understand day I think limeit people go computers", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In several nations, an increasing number of people are concerned about the origin of their places of residence. In this essay, I am going to discuss some relevant reasons for this phenomenon, along with how people could actually research the history of their houses.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, questioning the origin of everything has long been somewhat mankind's instinct. Given this, people are into figuring out their houses' history because it does lure them by stimulating the excitement of finding the answer. Indeed, the more ambiguous something is, the more exciting people will be. Second of all, people will feel safe and secure only if they could know the beginning of their living places. This is because, from the idealistic perspective, people might not want to get involved in such horrible events that did happen in their homes. Therefore, they must investigate to get rid of risky outcomes that they might otherwise suffer.\r\n\r\nTo research the history, there are two ways that are easiest for doing the investigation. First, people could ask their previous houses' owners about the past of their homes; hence, knowing a series of stories that are interesting and mind-blowing. Second, senior neighbours are quite relevant and invaluable in telling the old stories because only they witnessed all things that happened in the past. For example, I usually ask my grandparents to know how my house had been looked like before I was born, and the answers always triggered me to ask even more questions.\r\n\r\nIn a nutshell, it is actually exciting and mysterious to dig into the history of something such as residential places. The main cause of this phenomenon stems from the curious attitude that has long been 'programmed' in our brain. Obviously, only by asking the elderly or the former homeowners can people know the whole series of past events.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "New cars, that can control themselves ,are being manufactured in the United states. The driverless cars have censors that can tell the vehicle when to move forward or stop moving . In the passage it says \"Google has had cars that could drive independently since 2009\" and the cars are still being worked on to this day. A human must still be presant so they can take over and drive if the car needs to park or is having trouble in traffic. This new driverless car is still rather new and I think it puts people in danger.\n\nImagine if this self moving car has a mess up or is a little damaged and it goes out of control. The human inside the car might not be paying enough attention to realize the car needs help. I believe that if you were to allow people to have a self driving car they would eventually lose the feeling of responsibility . Although the car is able to drive to certain places, due to its computer programming, people might over look that they still must be focased and ready to drive.\n\nThe new cars will notify you if it needs you to take over. This is helpful but still a large risk . Censors do have the ability to mess up and cause crashes. I dont see why they are trusted. In the article \"driverless cars are coming\" it states \"if technology fails and somone is injured , who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer.\" this only adds to my point of lack of saftey. How is one sipposed to know if it was their fault or the manufacturers .\n\nI think it is not safe to have cars attempt to control themselves . There are so many times when they could glitch and kill people. I am against the idea of driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think Luke would advertist the Seagoing Cowboys programs as place where your giving back to people and also getting to travel the world to some fun place you might have not been to. Some details from the story to support what Luke thinks is, if you join Seagoing Cowboys you get to help coutries like Europe recover supplies that the people need to live. Also take care of many different kind so of animals and even get to site seeing when your done with your hard work or have free time.\n\nSome fun places that you might want to vist is Europe and China because they different kind of historial and beautiful sites. Before you can get to theses countries one thing you might want to consiter is the different dangers of the the sea. Details from paragraph 7 this sentence is when luke served as night watch man and he slid down the slippery ladder onto his backside. Luke had cracked his ribs and was out of work for a couple of days.\n\nBeside that is only thing you have to be worried about because if you think about the Seagoing Cowboys programs, you are making so many people happy because you are help them get back to lives. Your also changing and benefiting your life. Evidence from paragraph 1 is \",Luke Bomberger had no idea his life would change soon after high school. \"So come and join to make your life and our lives a better place.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever dreamed of driverless cars in the future as a child? Well if you have, that dream seems to be coming true. Companies have said that driverless cars are completely safe, but would you be able to trust that? The thought of driverless car may seem absolutely wonderful, but the dangers that come with it may not. Driverless cars shouldn't be allowed on the roads because they are not completely driverless, driving laws may change, and we need smarter roads.\n\nAccording to the article, it says that \"In 2013, BMW announced the development of \"Traffic Jam Assistant\". The car can handle driving functions at sppeds up to 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel and the driver must remain alert\". If the driver still needs to hold on to the wheel, then why are they called driverless cars? This can be very dangerous because the driver may not be fully alert to take over. Something may go wrong to where the driverless car doesn't alert the driver to take over in time which could lead to a serious accident.\n\nAccording to the article, it says the \"Driving laws mainly written on having a human driver controlling the car at all times.\" Driving laws focus on keeping driver, passangers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is fully achieved with alert driver. If the driver isn't alert than that could cause lives to be in danger. Driving laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times, not having a human driver drive only for a certain amount of time and the car driving itself. Traffic laws would have to change in order to cover the liability in case of an accident.\n\nAccording to the article, it says that \"Smarter roads are too expensive to be pratical\". If there is a smarter car on the road, we will need to have smarter roads and that comes with a lot of work. Smart-road systems work suprisingly well, but they require massive upgrading to exsisting roads. For starters, the driverless car will need to have an excessive amount of sensors. That causes the car to need a lot of improving in order to function with exsisting roads.\n\nDriverless cars has its perks, but it has many downsides also. Driverless cars could form a public transportation system where people all over the world could use. While that may seem amazing, the dangers of having cars drive themselves overtakes that because driverless cars are not completely driverless, traffic laws may change, and we need smarter roads. The safety of driverless cars may change, but however, we need to wait for what the future holds for us.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When people see something on the internet or on the T.V they instantly assume aliens but i assure you that the face like object on mars in not an alien artifact. Twenty five years ago we took a picture of mars and there appeared to be some soart of face like figur, when the photo hit the media people all over where convinced thet the object was an aliens face.\n\nBut nevertheless even if there was a civilization on mares us in NASA would binifit from it. But studies even show the the object is equivalent to a butte or a mesa-landformes common around the American West. The reason it lookes like a human head was because \" a huge rock formation... wich resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth\"\n\nWe know this because when we took a picture in 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo.\" So of there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyption-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!\"\n\nSo in the end there is really no dibate weather it is a alien or a land form because here at NASA we have the cold hard proof from all of the photos we have taken to all of the research we have done on the object that the object is just a plain old landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine if you could realize your friends emotions all the time. Facial Action Coding Systems might be our new way to know how someone is feeling. New software is being developed to better comunicate emotions. What if we had this technology in schools? To better understand our peers and know if they are okay. This would be a tremendous advance in schools nowadays.\n\nIf we had this technology in school teachers could better understand their students. Teachers could find out how the student are feeling and adjust according to what the students are thinking. This machine would help classrooms everywhere because if a student is board of the lesson odds are they are not going to pay attention. A student is not always willing to talk to a teacher and tell them why they are not doing well or what they dont like about class. You cant always be perfect at guessing how someone is feeling by what you see because they could be hiding their emotions from you. People would think that the machine would not work right and it would be false information being read. The machine is constructed by callibrating it to recognize all 44 major muscles in the model to move exactly like humans move. The machine has six basic emotions happiness, suprise, anger, disgust, fear and sadness. And along with the characteristics are movements of the facial muscles. Each one of the emotions are designed to be read of human facial movements to detect emotion. All the steps to constucting this machine are great and are taken off of human facial movement.\n\nFacial Action Coding machines could help teachers and staff stop suicidal thought or actions from occuring. Teachers are at school to help students and just the regular teacher dosen't always catch a student having a horrible day or getting bullied constantly. This machine could help teachers find the kids that are having it rough and sit down with them and talk. This machine would take away the amount of suicidal thoughts and even suicide at high schools all across the country.\n\nThis machine would help in many different catigories. If teachers started using this machine and making kids feel better everyday it would make students want to come back to school and want to learn. This would increase grades and student to teacher bonds. The students would carry that home and that would help parents. Kids would do more choirs and help around the house more. They would stop being so hostile twords their parents. This machine could bring so much good to schools and communities all across the world.\n\nAlthough this machine would be great to have in schools it could be taken as a privacy issue. Students might not feel comfortable if a teacher or elder has a machine that can read how they are feeling. This could be an issue for many parents as well. If a parent does not want this in the school their child goes to they are more than likely to take their child out of that school. This could provoke other parents as well to get the wrong idea about this machine. The parents could see this as a danger in a school because they would no nothing about the machine or the students could be frightened from this machine.\n\nTo conclude my essay I think this device would be a great thing to have in schools. It could prevent kids from being bullied, having suicidal thought or even being board in class. It would help teachers get the right idea of what to teach in class and get the idea of students that might be having a really hard time. All in all this machine would be a great tool to use in schools all across the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "All my life I have seen seen movies with cars that drive themselves, and as it turns out there are people out there trying to create this vision to come true. It was in the late 1900's when people first started to even try this concept of having a car do things on their own without a driver. According to the passage in the late 1950s there was a company that created a car to run on a track on its own. There has been millions and millions of dollars spent of this new concept even though there are already cars out there that we as humans can drive. The people who are working on this are still a long way on getting a car to do everything a human can already do. Many questions are still in place on the many things that would need to change when these self driving cars come out. If there are already cars in this world that function well, and making these cars have been such a problem, then what is the point of having them?\n\nTo begin with, the cost in developing these cars is ridiculous. According to the passage one company has spent around 200 million dollars on a self driving car. Yes I do agree that something needs to be done to help enviornmental issues, but I believe that this money can be spent on other things. Those 200 million dollars could have gone to the research on medicine, to try and find a cure for cancer, the national debt, or to even help with all the people in this world that are starving to death. In developing these cars many things would be needed to change, such as signs, laws, and roads all things that will cost even more money.\n\nRobots are slowly taking over what we as human are capable of doing, for example these cars. There are people out there trying to make a car to do something that we can already do. What is the point of that? The reason that humans are reckless and self driving cars can be safer is not true. There are multiple videos on line showing a car without a human being tested that have failed, and have hit a person. In the passage it states that there would need to be new laws set in place in case of an accident. Who would be at fault? Would it be the owner of the car, or the person who made the car? Many conflicts would arise from figuring out who will be at fault for the person that the car may harm or kill.\n\nAs a child we are all super anxious to start driving, and what will happen when the kids of the future generations don't have that opportunity? Driving today develops responsibility in teens. They have to know when to fill up their gas tank, to not drive in certain conditions, and to work hard to earn or buy their car. If we start to rely on robots to take over what we can do soon we will not know how to do anything or to know responsibility like we do now.\n\nThe passage states that it will not be until 2020 for some companies to even release their self driving cars. By then many more millions of dollars will have been spent, and possible accidents will have occured from testing these cars out. We hear about all the problems that occur daily on the news, the time spent on these cars is not doing anything to solve that. Let us spend our time and energy on something that will make a difference in making this world we live on a better place, and not on something that serves little purpose. We can already drive a car ourselves we don't need a car to do that for us.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It's a once in a lifetime oppurtunity like I knew for people to help others and explore around the world. When you join the Seagoing Cowboys program you will get to take care on not just animals, but also people in need. As I said \"Besides helping people, I had the side benifit of seeing Europe and China,\" I said. Also in Venice,Italy it was \"A city with streets of water.\" As you travel to theese far away places you also haft to take care of animals along the way.\n\nCaring for theese animals willl sure keep you busy, but it is quite easy all you do is feed them, water them, and clean stalls. This experience is also good with connecting with people on the ship. I had fun on board with games such as baseball,volleyball,tabel-tennis,fenncing,boxing,reading,and other games past the time. With this journey it made me aware of people of countries and there needs. So join not only the Seagoing Cowboys for helping people, but also the exsperience.\n\nEven though on the Seagoing Cowboys program you get to see cities and have fun, but it is also a tremendus amount of work. As you said taking animals is actually hard dependig on what animal. You need to clean,feed,and give water to animals every single day. Sure you have breaks but it is still a lot of work for one person. Not to metion this exsperince is on a boat. Most people either have sea sickness on boats as well you have a extreme chance of crashing,sinking,drowning,and also falling off board into endless ocean.\n\nWhile travilling all over the word you haft to deal with climate and time change. It will take some getting use to constantly changing weather and sleep schedules. Also its very hard to even sleep on a boat with sailing on dangerous waters in the dark every night. While caring for people is a great deed to do it is aslo hard watching people suffer everyday even though your helping them you can still think of other people in that situation as well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Wouldn't it be amazing and such a relief if humans themselves, didn't have to drive their cars everywhere? Driverless cars, I am all for them. WIth driverless cars I am almost positive it isnt a hassel going anywhere. If you are too tired, too sick, or too anything you would still be able to get in your car and drive off, except it'd do it on its own. I think that driverless cars would be good for our world considering physically driving humans always get into crashes.\n\nWith this kind of car, there would be less crashes.Car crashes are one of the biggest reasons for death anymore. From being drunk, to texting, to being exhausted, to just not thinking, crashes are all around. Howeever, with a driverless car, that is less likely to happen, considering the fact that the ill person would have nothing to do with the engine, or steering wheel , or even the car itself. This is a wonderful way to prevent one of the leading causes of death. Automobiles that can handle themselves would be the best thing to ever happent ot his country. ''\n\nLife itself would be easier if we all didn't have to drive manually. So much could be done, and prevented. Just think of a world where you are just sitting in fron of a wheel, without your hand pressed up against it, and you being one hundred percent alert on the road, terrified if someone is going to make the right or wrong move. Instead, its not your choice on whether or not you crash, it is the cars choice.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In 1976 we found a land form on Mars that apeared to be a human face the picture was sent bact to our lab for studies ad afews days or weeks later the picture was showed to the public. After the picture was showed to the public everyone started saying that the land form was alien made and it hit the big top with all of the buzz but no one every had hard proof that that was even every a possiblity and so in the next I will explain why that can't be.\n\nAfter the picture got sent out many people believed that the land form was alien made. So we went back for another picture to show that the landform was just a landform and that it wasn't alien made,but when we went back for that other picture it was winter there so the air was very thick and foggy so people said that there could have been sonthing that we missed. So we went back in the summer and the picture that we too was high pixle and very high quality so there was no way we could have missed anything. If any life forms lived in this area we would have seen some kind of proof but there was no proof anywhere of any life on Mars. That is why there is no possible why for there to be any life form on Mars.\n\nIn this passage I explain why there is no why for there to be life on mars. There was a land form that was on mars that many people believed was alien made but our studies prove that that is not so. We took high quality and high pixle picture that couldn't miss anything. so all in all there is no alien life on planet Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine being convinced that completing a certain task is worth any strugles along the way, and you end up severely hurt because of it. That is exaclty what the author of this article is trying to do. In the article, \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\", the author does a poor job of supporting the idea that studying a planet as dangerous as Venus is worth it. Studying Venus is a terrible idea because technology isn't advanced enough, it would take years to discover anything beneficial, and the costs' of this, both in money and lives, are outrageous.\n\nTechnology throughout the world has improved since the 1900's,however, it has improved on Earth and in regards to Earthly tasks. When talking about something as dangerous as exploring another planet, it is easy to see that our Earth bound technology simply cannot do the job. in paragraph 5 of the article, the author describes an idea that was thought up by \"The National Aeronautics and Space Administartion\". This idea is to have humans 30 or so miles above Venus for exploration. The author claims how this would be beneficial in keeping humans safe from the Venusian landscape. However, The author does not support this idea well, as he goes on to say how not much exploration can be done from there, and the conditions would still be extremely dangerous but \"survivable\". Also in paragraph 7, the author explains how NASA is working on other approaches to study Venus. He explains how they are working on some simplified electronics, made of silicon carbide, that have been testedd in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface. This may sound like a good thing, but it is far from one. This is because the author finsihes by saying that the electronics lasted only three weeks. If a computer can't withstand Venus's conditions longer than three weeks, I am very doubtful that a human can. This proves my point that our technology is far too inadvanced for such a task like exploring another planet. Therefore supporting my claim that the author did a poor job in supporting this idea.\n\nExploring unmarked territory isn't something that can be done over night. Unmarked territory is exactly what Venus is. Even if technology did evolve enough so that humans could visit this planet, it would takes years, decades, even centuries, to accomplish. In the article, the author continously offers alternatives for exploration. He does this is paragraphs' 5,6, and 7 where he gives examples of organizations that are working towards this exploration. However in all of the paragraphs, the author seems to only be giving \"what if\" scenarios or in some cases just simple ideas that have been thought about and are possibly being examined. He fails to provide any real data or statistics for these things, except when he mentions the simplified electronics in paragraph 7. Even then, those devices are only able to survive for 3 weeks, so it would still take many years to just improve those devices. Also, in paragraph 6 the author states, \"Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus\". This statement is very broad, and it does not key in on any form of information that should lead us to believe that to be true. These details from the passage prove my point on the amount of years it would take, as well as the fact that nobody has any idea how long. The question to be asked here is, \"Is it worth the wait?\". For these reaons I stand behind my claim that the author supported the idea of exploring venus very poorly.\n\nAssuming that the exploration of Venus does eventually happen one day, how much money would go into it, how many lives? These are all questions that need to be considered when brainstoming the idea of visitng another planet. The author of this article is avoiding all of these mainstream problems by simply saying it's worth the risks, when it actaully is not. In paragraph 3, the author explains all of the dangers of Venus and how they can affect humans. He explains, \" On the planet's surface, the temperature averages over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" Considering that this is true, we can definitrly assume that condition on Venus are severly dangerous, and a lot of people may get hurt trying to explore it. The aurthor also states, \" These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oeans and would liquefy many metals. What the author is stating here is that not even our strongest materials and creations can withstand the conditions on Venus. This means that in order to explore Venus we have to design all new machinery, which would cost a lot of money, not to mention the human costs as we would need humans to test things out. He also makes it notable that venus has the hottest surface of any planet, despite not being the closest to the sun. All of these facts are serious concerns when regarding human safety as well as propr functioning of machines. Even if exploring Venus was a possibilty, would it be even be worth it after all of he human costs and money costs or paid. What we are discussing here is putting human lives at risk, and spending a ton of money on a project that is no where near being ready ready to present. These reasons as well as the provided facts assure me on my claim that the author did a terrible job of supporting this idea of exploration.\n\nIn conclusion, since our technology isn't advanced enough, it would take far too many years to do, and the human and money costs wuold be outrageously high, we should not explore Venus. Exploring Venus proves to be very dangerous, and we have proved that we are no where near being ready for such a task. We would first need to advance our technology for the task. This would take years to due, it would also use up a ton of money, and put people in serious danger. The author did a terrible job of supporting the idea that exploring Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dnagers it presents. For one, there were not enough facts presented in the article that were beneficiary to the idea. Also, of the pros that were present, the cons outweighed then tremendously. Exploring Venus proves to be a terrible idea, atleast until we are actually ready to do it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of the tecnology is to read emotions of a person. Even to read the emotions of students in a class room. Would that be ok to read the emotions of someone? To know the emotion science of a student and know how they're feeling?\n\nI disagree to use the that kind of tecnology. Sure, it can help by know the emotions so you can help the person feel better. You can also learn the emotin science. Even help you learn about that person a litte. Just by a picture like paragraph 4 says \"Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition softwar\n\ntracks these facial movements _in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa.\"\n\nBut doesn't make it right to read the emotions of someone. The person should be able to tell or show you haow they feel if they want too. People hide their emotions for their own reasons. If you knew how they were feeling, It could make the situation uncomfortable.\n\nIn conclusion, you shouldn't know how someone elses emotions without them telling/showin you. No one wants someone that could be spying on them, just to know their emotions. It's rude and disrespectful to that person. so, we should not be using that kind of tecnology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Once I taking test really long I done early Me friend waited long time They gave us two half hours test I finished hour half spair My friend finished within five minutes I read book finished I wait another hour actually something Remember bring something patient If nothing wait quietly Patience good quality Patience used waiting something someone", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is the second planet from our sun. In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author is telling us why it might be a good idea to study Venus despite the danger Venus presents. The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it presents because no spacecraft to survived the landing for more than a few hours, it has the hottest surface temperature, and because it may be the most Earth like planet in our solar system.\n\nFirst of all, why exploring Venus might be a good idea because no spacecraft has survived the landing for more than a few hours. Whoever is\n\nthe first to make the spacecraft survive for more than a few hours would make history. If someone makes traveling to Venus safe enough then maybe they could send more people to see Venus. The article says \"Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.\" The article also says that \"Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.\" It's evident that the author believes if a man travels to Venus then it's a\n\nchance that they would survive. If they find a way to travel to Venus without dying then more people would maybe want to go to Venus. The first person would make history and become a legend all around the world. The author wants to study Venus so they can find a safe way to travel to Venus.\n\nAnother reason, why the author suggests\n\nthat studying Venus is worthy because Venus has the hottest surface temperture of any planet in our solar system. If someone can travel to Venus and survive it would be nice because it has the hottest surface temperature. \"Also notable, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun.\" \" Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land in its surface.\" Its evident that if someone can make it on Venus knowing its surface temperature is the hottest then that means they could probably survive on any other planet as well. The author knows the dangers of traveling to Venus but he still think that they can survive on Venus.\n\nFinally, why studying\n\nVenus is worthy despite the dangers it presents beause it maybe the most Earth like planet in our solar system. The article says \"Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth.\" It also says \"The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" Since it's just like Earth it could be possible that people could live on it, if they could survive being on Venus. It's just like earth has the same features and all. Thats why its worthy of studying Venus despite the dangers.\n\nIn conclusion, why Studying Venus is worthy despite it's dangers because It has the hottest surface temperature, no one has survived Venus for more than a few hours, and Its one of the most like Earth planets in the solar system. Surviving the hottest surface temperature planet would be a hard task. Being the first to be able to land and stay on Venus would be very important despite the danger. Venus is just like earth but hotter. It's very important to study Venus despite it's dangers because its just like Earth and no one really have done it before.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The \"face\" on Mars seems to be an actual face. That is understandable. Aliens are what, real? I believe otherwise. Aliens did not create the face on Mars because of illisions from the shadows, attenton for Mars, and the day of April 5th.\n\nFirst off, illisions are made up of many things like color or shadows. It makes it to where the human eyes has trouble figuring out what the image really is. The eyes can see one thing and inteprept it as another. The face on Mars is that way. The shadows that are coming from the sun reflecting on Mars is causeing a misconception of a face. The article states that, \"A few days later NASA unveiled the image for all to see. The caption noted a :Huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illision of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" (3) This shows that it is an illision of a random rock formation that was created on Mars, not by aliens.\n\nNext, we have the fact that it was a pop icon for Mars, a way that Mars could get attention. The article states that, \"The \"Face on Mars\" has since become a pop icon. It has starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows-even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years.\" (5) This shows that the populatity that there was a face on Mars went, well, viral. It was everywhere. It went viral because there was the illision of a face and not because some believe that it was created by aliens.\n\nFinally, April 5, 1998 came around. The Mars Global Surveyor proved it was a natural landform and not a alien monument. The article shows this by saying, \"And so on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbitier Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeard on a JPL web site, revealing...a natural landform.\" (7) This proves that there were no aliens that created this natural landform.\n\nThe opposing side may think and say differently. Others may say that there are things that could be holding back the fact that alien markings were hidden. The article states that, \"The face on Mars is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter April '98-a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet. The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face. Perhaps, said skeptics, alien markings were hidden by haze.\" (8) This says that there could be ways that the alien artifacs were hidden by the clouds.\n\nThe opposing side has a point. They are correct in that way but then again the artlicle states that, \"Neverless, on April 8, 2001-a cloudless summer day in Cydonia-Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look.\" (10) This just proves that the MGS did take another look proving that the landform was indeed natural.\n\nOverall, the reasons that the face on Mars was not caused by aliens are the facts that there are illsions from the shadows, attention for Mars, and the day of April 5th.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author explains very well on why studying Venus is worth it, even if its dangerous. Having people from Earth visit Venus would be historic. Also the author gave some great information that is important about Venus if people from Earth visit it. The author says that Venus is the close planet to Earth.\n\nIn paragraph 4 the author says that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for plantery visit. Visiting Venus can help us learn more about Venus then knowing it as the \"Evening Star.\" Visiting this planet can help us understand what type of living can surive there or in general, technology. The author mentions that Venus is kind of Earth's twin. Maybe going to Venus will give a more in depth on why they are twins.\n\nAnother reason why the author explained well is because the author stated that many spacecrafts were sent to land. But many of them didn't survive more then a few hours. If technology is good in our time and can't even surive landing on Venus. Wouldn't people still want to try but with someone who can explain what happens. And with technology maybe they can fix it and make it better for someone living can go to Venus.\n\nThe author stated in paragraph 6 that scientisits are seeking a conduct through a mission and to do that we need to get close. Even if its dangerous to get to Venus. Even scientists think that to better understand Venus we need to get close. But they are starting to work on making machines that will last long enough to understand Venus.\n\nIn a couple yaers anything can happen, but Venus will still be another planet that is our neighbour. The author did a great job on supporting the idea. Its defineitly something worth to study. And maybe worth it even if its risky.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This Face is a natural landform. It's probably just an old hill covered in dirt or dust. There are hills on Earth that are probably shaped like this. It just has holes in the hill that makes it look like a human face.\n\nThis Face is a hill. It just so happens that it is in the shape of a human face. If you look very closely, there are holes, or craters, in the face. I do see why you would think that it's made by aliens. There are other things on Mars that people think are built by aliens, such as pyramids.\n\nIt kind of reminds me of pyramids that the Egyptains built. There are pyramids on Mars and there is proof of that. Yes, aliens COULD have built this, but I don't think so. There have been sightings of \"aliens\" on Earth, but this does not mean that aliens built this. Do you have proof that aliens built this? No; there is no proof that aliens built this. If they did, you would have to find some kind of evidence that they did. I do myself believe in aliens, but that doesn't mean they built this face.\n\nI know I have said it a lot, but this face is a natural landform. It is simply a hill or something in the shape of a hill. People find all kinds of things like this. I myself is very intersted in these kinds of things (aliens and such) and yet I think that it is just a simple hill covered in dust that just so happens to be in the shape of a face. There are probably hills on the Earth that are in the shape of a face. It is just a natural landform. There are natural landforms on the Earth that are shaped like this.\n\nIf this face was built like aliens, where is your proof? You have none? That's what I thought. It is seriously nothing other than a hill, covered in dirt, in a shape of a face.\n\nTherefore, this Face is a natural landform. It is just a hill covered in dirt or dust in the shape of a face. People are very fasinated by this. Some think it's an acient thing built by alines; however, it is not. It is a hill that has holes that make it look like a human face. If this was a an acient thing buitl by aleins, there would be proof.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Now that news is instantly available on the Internet and social media, gone are those days when we used to sit with the newspaper, starting the day in the morning. Also, owing to the advent of mobile applications like WeChat and Line, the heartfelt letters that we used to write to our near and dear ones have become extinct. Though there are both advantages and disadvantages to this development, I believe it is more beneficial than harmful. \r\n\r\nThe first and straightforward advantage is the reduced use of printed materials. Consequently, fewer trees are cut down for paper making, imposing less pressure on the environment. Secondly, the internet makes news available to the public sooner than any conventional print media. Thirdly, social media has become the most effective means of communication. People from all over the world can come together over WeChat or Zoom without having to spend much money. It used to be very difficult for us in foreign countries or even in other cities to attend familial gatherings and ceremonies. Nowadays, thanks to technology, we could stay connected no matter how far we are from each other. \r\n\r\nHowever, when there are merits, disadvantages are also bound to be there. One major demerit is that electric gadgets are so addictive that human beings no longer know how to live without their smartphones. The young generation does not talk in person as long as they chat online. Even during social gatherings, it is not uncommon to see people glued to their mobile phones without showing any interest in the person sitting next to them. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, although there are both pros and cons in using the , in my opinion, it has brought us more benefits than harm and hence the advantages outweigh the disadvantage.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I agree with the author's passage of creating Driverless Cars and selling them off when the law approves because, there is lots of advantages for people when buying a driveless car. Lets say someone is busy and has other things to do and cant properly drive since they are working with something else at the moment it would benefit them. For people who are driving and have important calls or texts they can put the car to drive itself and the person won't have to worry about being on the phone and drive at the same time. Maybe that's not quite possible but let's say it is at that moment and it would benefit the driver. Other things like, taking a trip. When the driver is not quite feeling well anymore and needs to rest they could put the car at drive its self and would have a chance to rest for a bit, unless the car alarms the person of something they can't do and let the driver be in charge. Some disadvantages that this \"Driverless Cars\" might have are law and safety. According to the text, \"California, Nevada, Florida, and Distric of Columbia have led the country in allowing limited use of semi-autonomous cars; manufacturers believe that more states will follow as soon as the cars are aproved more reliably safe. Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufaturer?\", they are stating that even if the law is aproved to let these cars be used by people what will be needed in the process and after. There will still be doubts and not so assured assumptions to which these cars are going to be completely safe. There's no garranteed towards these cars but yet they are a great idea. If you think about it, it would be a great thing to do for those who are in need in this type of car. It may have its imperfection but it is still a benefitial request that might turn out as a success.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood storry happy She discribes lucky parents like Cuban She loves music food culture She s glad parent careing helped people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are mny factors that influence using technology to read emotions in the classroom. The technoogy can influence certain lessons based on given understanding. Facial expression evaluated by these computers could help teachers. This kind of technology could benefit the future as well. Lesson planning, teacher help, and futue technology are three factors that contribute to using emotional expressions for the classroom.\n\nFacial exression are a elling sign of the current state of emotion a person is in. These emotionas are universal for people to understand, such as a smile representing a good mood of a friend. Now computers are able to tell emtions based of facial muscles, which has led to innovations in the classroom environment. For example, if a student is working on a homework assignment and gives off a look of confusion, the computer can tell that the student is struggling to understand whatthe question or problem is asking or how to solve the problem. This new technology could benefit the student in that the lesson could be mdified to help the comprehension of the learner.\n\nThis technology could help teachers ina sense that they have easier communication with their students. Since teachers have to teach a multitude of students, it can be difficult for the teacher to see who is struggling with the material presented, Most communicaton between people is done through that of emtional communication rather than verbal. From that this formof technology can help teachers know who comprehends themaerial, who is confused by the directions or the material, or those who simply do not understand the content. Using this facial expression technology can be of beneficiary to those in educaion.\n\nEmotion technology can be of benefit to not only the school evironmwnt but also can open new doors for the future. Even though the algorithm is not compatible with a normal PC at home, this technology could benefit in the future for new innovations such as helping a students interest levels for at home assignments. The only slight flaw that could go against this facial software is that computers cannot detect genuine emotion. Such as a person hiding certain emotions that are not shown on a facial expression. However more advancement and developments of this technology in the future could benefit many people in different circumstances.\n\nMany factors of Facial Action Coding System can help benefit students in a classroom. Three factors significantly hold value to the influence of this software. Students can be able to have customized lessons to maximize learning in that subject based of assinments completed on the emotiion recognizing software. Teachers will be able to communicate better with students in helping undrestand the content and what needs to be focused on more. Future softwares can be made from this intial technology that can recognize students understanding and comprehension of the material from at home assignments on possiby a PC. Overall, the ability to recognize emotions of students from muscle movements of the face is a great advanncemet for the classroom enviroment, and once more developments are made, man students will benfit in being able to understand the material beter.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph hope The conclusion author made say amount time Saeng overcome failure prepared test second time In text says Saeng realized many things thought strange become almost familiar improvement", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Does we are really voting for the elector or someobody else?, sometimes elections can be unfair but one of the best methos and the one more easily to understand and fair is by electing the president by popular vote.\n\nTo beging with,every state should be treatly the same, have the respect campaings and no one state should have advantage or disadvante at the time of voting because sometimes representatives can give a advantage or a disadvantage and sometimes can give a catasrophic decision, but also more power for bigger sates that represents 35 million voters like california.\"given that many voters vote one party for president and another for congress, the House's selection can hardly be expected to reflect the will of the people\".\n\nother example of this can be seen in te elections of 2000,\"seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all, including rhole island and south california,and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad. And this just show how when we have electoral collegue can be a disadvantage for candidates, if they know they are not going to win they don't focus on those states,and some people who want to have more options or listen to other persons they cant because they dont see a campaign to convice them.\n\nIn summary,its better to the winner to take all cause almost half of the population agrred with the candidate thinking and maturity to select whats best to others,but also whe you are voting fot the state elector you cant control their final vote and sometimes you don't choose who you is your state elector and you don't now if he has the best wisenes to decide,if two presidents in popupal vote get close that mean that a lot of people agreed with the same person,but that doesnt happen when we have electoral because its just a minimum number and we dont now if everybody in the state really agreed with the representator.\n\nTo summarize,if we want a fair election and be part of it, listen to others options, have part of the the decision of our president , and be trheated the same and the our vote really counts we should elect by popular vote.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "hello the face on mars is just a nautral land mark. Personally I don't belive in aliens , I don't think that aleins made that face on Mars. Do you guys see in pargraph 7 thousands of people were waiting for that alein moment and what did they get nothing . In the last parogrph of the story it said that it shows that the picture actually shows is the martian equivalent of a butte or mesa , that is a common landform in the american west . he says that it reminds him of the middle Bette in the Snake River plain of idaho. That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the face on mars that what Garvin says .\n\nHere is more resons why I think why that it is just a nautral landform. Mars has now water all the water the is there is all traped in the ice so how are the aliens actually geting a drink plus what about the temputers they must be freezing so would you want to live there. If there was any civilition then way havn't we seen any aleins there there is no phisical eveidence that there is any there. so you can believe on anything you want but i hope you make the right choice and agree with me.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many things could made bycicle ride much enjoyable one thing wasnt middle actually knew For example There one sight building car structure kind There almost water get day For instance The water bottles contained tantalizing sips know going harder In conclusion things made trip hard", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Alonging with the development of society, families' role, structure and the number of members are changing very fast. Some people put forth the argument that we should study about family history, while others believe that we should concentrate on the present and future generations. This essay will examine both perspectives and propose my opinion about this problem.\r\n\r\nIt is cannot deny that history play an important role in the modern life, including family history. Studying about the past help us to learn form our ancestors archivements and mistake, which can improve our life. It also takes part in the family tradition conservation. For instance, several family in Viet Nam keep the tradition of making potery products, or restore some kinds of arts that their family use to perform in the past. Lastly, family history gives us something to pround of, so it can improve our mood and make us more satisfy with our life. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the concentration on the present and future generations is crucial. From my perspective, this is more significant than study about history. Firstly, history is in the past we cannot change what was happended. However, we can improve the future by our care to education, health and emotion of our children. In fact, in Viet Nam, just a little number of family know clearly about their ancestors further than 5 generations. Due to this reality, we can conclude that study about family does not have much impacts on these days life. Moreover, focus on the development of the next generations bring several benefits to our society. To demonstrate, after the improvement of education in Viet Nam after 1945, we defeated France and America to gain our independence, and the life of people and the economy of our country are also increased. Therefore, focus on the next generations has many advantages in several factors such as economy and life satisfiaction.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe that learing about family history is important. However, focus on the future generation is more significant, because it improve our comunity in many aspects", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator of Florida,\n\nI believe that we should keep the Electoral college for our compromise between the election of the president. I argue this because with the Electoral College we get to vote for who we believe is gonna help us out during thier years as President not the choice of the president who we might not believe or trust in anymore to vote for us or the other side. So I argue to keep the Electoral College to select our presidemt for the U.S.\n\nThe Ellectoral College lets us People who are able to vote vote for who we want. In \"Does the Electoral College Work\" Source 1: What is The Ellectoral College? written by the office of the federal register states that\"by a popular vote of qualified citizens\". This displays that we the peoplewho are suppose to be here in The U.S qualified and a citizen are allowed to vote four our people because those are our rights. So Mr. Senator please keep the ellectoral College by helping to keep it for the people of the U.S just like me.\n\nIf we are voting for president the majority of thr votes goes to the president who earn it which says that these people of the U.S need the president they voted for which is the president who won. In \"source 3: In defense of the electoral college:five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the president\" it shows in2. Everyones President that\" The ellectoral college requirs a presidental candidate to have trans-regional appeal\". So it not possible for a president to cheat its what the people choose for them to help them so the president they choose does what the people wanted or needed. Si I argue for you to do mea fovor and vote for the ellectoral College to stay as is.\n\nIn \"source 2: The indefensible Electoral College: why even the best laid defenses of the sysem are wrong\" they tell us wee voting for someone we dont want. But that is why you learn about your electors and who they want so you choose the one whon is going for you which is your president. Its as easy as doing a little research to find out who your really electing for as president of the U.S.\n\nI believe that Us americans should keep the Electoral College so we can keep our rights as our nation for the people. That is what we fought for for our freedeom and our rights. So I argue Mr. Senator to favor in keeping the Electoral Collegeso we can get our electedpresidents for majority of people in the U.S. SO lets stay away from the presidents choice because that is not our rights we are the people for the people to vote for who we want as qualified citizens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many agree that driverless cars would bring many benefits to society. On the other hand, I disagree on the idea of producing driverless cars. Driverless cars will arise more problems in the upcoming future. Driverless cars could cause more accidents, if something goes wrong who could you blame the manufacturer or the driver, and it would just be pointless to drive places if you are not directing the way. Driverless cars should not be the next invention.\n\nAccidents always happen. Even now when humans are driving vehicles, but if there is many accidents with humans driving imagine a car driving itself. A car does not have reflexes. Therefore, if an accident happens really quick and the sensors do not alert the driver like it should be then there goes another collision. Many things could go wrong with the sensors and could cause terrible accidents.\n\nIn this case who could you blame for the accidents that occur with the driverless cars? On paragraph 9, it describes safety, but there would be new laws to cover liability of an accident. The manufactures would have some fault because they invented it. It would be their fault if the sensors did not work. It also is the person driving the vehicle's fault, but not if the sensors did not warn them in time.\n\nTechnology is making people lazier and lazier by the minute. Driverless cars will continue to make society even more lazier. There is absolutely no fun in getting in a car and not driving around and just waiting for something to happen so it could be your turn to drive just like it asks on paragraph 8. It would become pointless to go through all that process of getting your permit and license if you are not driving the vehicle. It would be hard to interpret driving fun in new way with driverless cars.\n\nDriverless cars will bring benefits in a way, but also many complications. Accidents are most likely to occur because humans are not driving the vehicle, but the vehicle itself is driving. There would be uprises on who you can actually blame since the driver was driving but the manufacturer created it. There would be no point in getting a license if you are not driving the car. Driverless cars are going to be pointless to even own if you are not driving the car yourself.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think that the FACE was created by aliens ? Well i think the face is just a land form but thats how i feel about it , I don't believe that aliens are real . On the other hand you might think they are real and i don't blame you because when i was little i thought they was real to ... by all of the movies i was watching about aliens taking over ect .\n\nAlthough , few scientists believed the face was an alien artifact photographing . So they photographed the face as soon as they could get a good shot at it . On April 8, 2001 a cloudless summer day in cydonia Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look . When they had did they a pixel in the 2001 image spams 1.56 meters , they image was not a face anymore it was really Martain equivalent of a butte or masa . It reminds me of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,\" says Garvin. \"\n\nFinally, now you see that there were no aliens on mars and they aliens are not real . It was just the Martian equivalent of butte or mesa landforms . so now with all this information i just gave you, you should believe me now .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The designers Empire State Building faced many challenges attempt allow dirigibles dock s peak The greatest reason safety para The dirigibles dangerous Strong winds could blow different directions possibly hitting building And crash debris would rain upon New York City Since wind would use lead weights hold dirigible place However city would neither practical safe para Finally law prohibiting airships flying low urban areas This would cause docking illegal For reasons builders Empire State building faced challenges allowing blimps dirigibles dock building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear The say people spending much time foucusing computer homework getting fresh air outside I say people Computers giant step new technology For example use computer research school communicate friends online give children time learn far away places people If research paper school checked books subject paper suddenly relized forgot one important books You race back library find closed Computers come handy You google book find online copy book make grade paper Also possibly trouble math homework home alone That computers So easily go teachers website would explanation specific lesson Children commonicate friends extent Such homework question talk fun Without friends children would knowhere Statistics show children permitted talk friends school stay drugs promote stronger education grades The internet created heck It invented people communicate childeren reaserch fun exploring well For example learning far away places people culture exploring animals even online shopping availble These necessities people access Without computers would know important news needed information needed specific moment Computers future yes I repertative computers lives communication shopping learning purposes teaching research places animals people culture Also email purposes get important news around everyone applicable This continue forward computers technology future So people keep computers important stepping stone needed growth moving onto future technology Plus would want good computer game", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Influencing plays a vital role in everyone's life and most of the masses from young age are often influenced by their same age pupil. Although, it have several advantages yet it also has some disadvantages. This essay describes both sides.\r\n\r\nTeenagers learn more from those who are in similar age because they feel more confident in front of them as compared to teachers or parents. Also,they can share everything with each other including personal matters without any kind of shyness,moreover, young students learn easier and faster due to the peer pressure which helps in their academics. For instance, according to the survey of 'Times of Japan' 90% school learners perform better because they study with their same age friends during the lockdown period. This happens because students who are shy in class,they feel free to ask anything with their friends. So 'peer pressure helps them to incline their confidence. It also helps to undergraduates to exchange thier knowledge with each other.\r\n\r\nHowever, sometimes things go wrong and the reason is peer pressure because sometimes youngsters join wrong group as a consequence,they lost right track. Apart from this, In this technology world, most of the students spend their time with social media sites and when they influence from their influencer they quite studies in between and try to do those things which the influencer done in his life without as research and they face failure and the cause is peer pressure.\r\n\r\nIn summary, peer pressure has both merits and demerits but, its disadvantages do not outweigh its advantages. Because its cons seen in rare cases", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" the author shows ways how using technology to read emotions can actually help students. Judging by the articles reasoning this could be a valuable technique for teachers and students in the classroom.\n\nThroughout the text the author brings up many ways on how emotions can seen and used to help people with certain things. In the text the author says talks about how the human body can natural read expressions on someones face to help them understand what the other person is feeling whether that be happy or sad. With this knowledge scienctist have found a found way to duplicate this and improve on it using technology that can read someone's face and tell you what sort of emotions they are feeling. Adding on to that this can help\n\nmany people including students with certain tasks.\n\nIn paragraph 6 line 6 the article says \"'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr Huang predicts. 'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.'\" With this knowledge it strengthens the claim that it can be valuable for students. The reason why is because if a student is bored or confused they will either stop doing the assignment or they will continue to go through it getting wrong answers without help. If technology were able to read this and modify the lesson it can help explain a lesson to a student who is confused or add something to the lesson to a student that is bored. This type of teaching can also help with students doing homework because if they do not understand a problem and need help on it or have a question the problem could explain itself or adjust to the student for it to be something better to understand.\n\nAnother example on how this can help students is in paragraph 6 line 9-10 the author says \"The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive for video games or video surgery.\" This quote proves that it can also be used for medical students. How this quote supports the claim is because if people go to medical school to be surgeons then the schools can teach the students how to perform surgery with a simulator and having the faces show actual expressions can increase how well the medical students do during class when the see something that has actual emotions and expressions.\n\nIn conclusion the use of facial expression recognition can help with different kinds of students complete different kinds of tasks. The article uses many different examples on how this new type of technology can improve students learning and also help teachers teach. With this type of technology students could be learning more information in a new way that could be quick and easier than how it is now.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting directly affects cyclist I traveling high deserts California June This affects cyclist June hot going desert makes worse would continue drink water He also using energy making sweat drink water One ramshackle shed Several rusty pipes corral couldnt hold lamest mule greeted me This could also cause problem cant renew water source means conserve cant use much energy Both things factor setting desert water affecting cyclist cycling cold day", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In lives narciso Rodriguez The mood calm I metiond Is To every one I like Back round story Like one story time line To happend That Is The mood CAPS", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author ends story way plant leaving geese represent change Saeng The hibiscus nt remembers back home The budding hibiscus shows Saeng s happiness home This paragraph shows familiarity budding plant gives Saeng courage ability overcome obstacle The geese paragraph represent keeping time The plant budd time geese return spring If author nt included final paragraph full effect memories Saeng would nt fully portrayed This line implies Saeng unable overcome obstacle newness place budds bring sense home able defeat obstacle driving test She confident", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "They should change it to election by popular vote. Just because the electoral college is not divided evenly through out the states. So the president can win for having more states vote for him or her. The number of people in the state shouldn't count as how many votes they get.\n\nLike it says in the artcle \"In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President\" paragraph 21 number 4 that \"a large state gets more attention from presidential candidates in a campaign than a small state does. . . .\". So its unfair to the smaller states just because of the size all the states should have equal numder of votes. People might say like in the artcle \"The indefensible Electoral College:Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\" in paragraph 13 that the \"candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning.\" Thats why all the states should have the same number of votes so the candidates would go there to try to win them over.\n\nHaving popular vote help voters want to vote again. Like in the artcle \"In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President.\" \"The electoral college method of selecting the president College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state.\"So thats why it should be changed to popular vote.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that the use of technology in the classroom that allows computers to read the facial expressions of students and understand their emotions is extremely valuable. I think this becuase, it could recognize when a student may need more help, it would make learning online much more effective, and could help a variety of ways all through different grades.\n\nThe text talks about how a computer could tell how a student is feeling about the material. Paragraph six states \"A classroom computer could predict when a student is becoming confused or bored\" (D'Alto). By predicting when students have become confused, or bored by the matieral, it could allow the teacher to know who needs more help. After seeing this the teacher could possibly pull these students asside and try re teaching the lesson in a different way that they would undertsand better or would keep them more engaged.\n\nThis type of technology could also be extremely valuable to somebody doing online schooling. The text states, \"Most human communication is non-verbal...so computers need to understand that too\" (D'alto). This example shows that as of now a computer is unable to comprehend a lot of the communication a human puts out. If, for example, a kid taking an online math lesson understood everything to begin with, but then became confused after a certain new topic was brought up, the computer with this new technology could easily recognize this and expand more on this new part and make sure the student displayed signs of understanding before moving on.\n\nAnother big advantage to this type of technology is that it can be used effectively to help in classrooms from Pre school, all the way through college. For example if in an early grade, a student was playing a learning game and displayed a frown, the computer could quickly recognize that this student is not enjoying the particular game, and could maybe shift to another game that would be more suited for this childs learning preferences. Paragraph 6 also states, \"the same technology can make computer animated faces more expressive- for video games or video surgery\" (D'Alto). By making faces more realistic in video surgery it could even be useful to a student whom is in medical school, or by allowing for a wider range of creativity in someone who is in to designing animated video games or movies.\n\nTo conclude, i believe this technology could be a great addition to all kinds of classrooms for a number of reasons. This could be a huge advancement in today's education system.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine on Earth the high for tuesday was 800 degrees. That is what venus is everyday. Venus is considered to be Earths sister. You can also call it the evening star. The real question though is is it worth it to go to venus?\n\nThe author in the article belives that it is worth it and we should go to Venus. What intrest the autor most is what could be on venus or what we could find. Venus could have vary may held Earth like creatures. It also could have been mostly oceans and has features like rocky sediment.\n\nThe reason we can not visit venus is it has a 97% atmosphere. Also the surface is almost 800 degrees fahrenheit. With that high temperature on its surface it can liquify basically anything. NASA has conducted a few missions to Venus but all have been unmanned for the reasons listed above.\n\nNASA has been trying to come up with a solution for years so we can travel to Venus. What they have come up with is a blimp like aircraft that hovers over Venus. It is hovering over Venus by abouy 30 miles. A problem with that is it is still 170 degrees fehrenheit. Another problem is the atmosphere is 97% so the use of cameras and video are out of the picture. Another prototype they created was a machine made out of old computers which are silicon carbide. The prototype was put through a simulator and lasted 3 weeks.\n\nIn conclusion yes it would be risky to go to Venus but it is worth it. Could learn about what Venus' past life was like and was there really Earth like creatures. We could learn some similarities and differences between Venus and Earth. The main challenge we have to get past is 97% atmosphere and 800 degrees fehrenheit. NASA has created many prototypes that could lead us to Venus. I would say it is well worth it to go Venus and figure out what its past life was like.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless Cars\n\nWhat in the world is a driverless car? A driverless car is a car that is basically a taxi system. Companies are controling these driverless cars. I feel like it is unsafe due to the fact that,it is being controlled. It sounds like it would be something great to try out but then, again it doesn't say too much of anything about being safe when being in this vehicle. personally in my opinon it would be better for humans to drive the car like we drive,them now. All this extra stuff is just going to cause for the city and the companies to spend more money, now lowing gas prcies is fine but making driverless cars doesn't even sound,safe at all. We need to keep cars how they are now so when we need to use the brakes we use them or when we want to speed up we use the gas panal. It's not that hard to keep the same idea but make it better. If these driverless cars don't have a human driver then what would happeen. I feel like way worst things would happen nomore what they do to fix the cars,there will still be car crashes and people getting hurt it doesn't matter either way it,goes if you don't have anytype of responsibility you can still get hurt reegardless. I am in the postion of not agreeing with getting new,transportation like that.\n\nUsing regular cars are not as bad.When using a real car you must be responsible and know exactly what is expected when driving.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From now several decades, the world have showed a huge interest in the\n\nexploration of space. The challenge of differents countries to study our Galaxie is now more incredible and extreme than ever before. In this paragraph, we are going to interpret how the author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\n\nFirstable,\n\nin paragraph 3 the author describe the planet Venus as an\n\ninexplorable planet because of it's athmosphere,\"temperatures average of over 800 degrees Fahrenheit\",\"The conditions are far more extreme than anything human encounter on earth\".\n\nBut then, as we go further, the reader is submerged by the visioin of the author of the fascination of the Scientist and the world to explore more and more the environment around, \"human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" Paragraph 8. But also, the author description of\n\nthe work that is made by the NASA\n\nto\n\nfind a solution and make the seen impossible human exploration of Venus show is believing of the worth of this pursuit.\n\n\"The value of returning to Venus seems indisputable\" paragraph 4.\n\nThan, the main support that the author give to his idea is that Venus could has been a planet full of life, \"have probably supported various forms of life\" Paragraph 4. This idea of possible life on other planets is an idea that have always captived the world attention, and so we understand that for the author this visit is clearly worthy despite of the danger of this pursuit.\n\nTo conclude, we have seen during this paragraph how the author support his idea that the visit of the planet Venus is worthy and should not been limited by danger. Firstable by the argument of the fascination of the Scientist and the world to explore more and more the environment around. Than, the fantastic interest of the NASA Scientist in\n\nthe possibility of life on other planets. Those two arguments shown by the author in the article makes a support of the worth of the visit of venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Teaching and learning process has design for creating a best child in future. There are number of ways in teaching method and one of the ways is team sports in school age. Group sports bring numerous advantages for students and to the society . It is a positive concept to build a corperate child through team sports.\r\n\r\nIn modern world, there is a huge compeetition to become a best student or the most talented child in the school. Therefore, students have become very selfish and try to defeat the others without concerning their mantality or physical status. The cooperativity is going to vanish gradually. Sports is one of the best solutions to create a well behaving child with flexiblity.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, because of team sports children recognize how to keep effective interpersonal relationships with the others, Some children do not know how they need to speak with the other fellows. Students will be very cooperative when they play as a group because they need to communicate with team members. For example, most of the Europien primary education has designed according to the group theme. Therefore, it will greatly affects for the pupils' personality and cooperativity spontaneously.\r\n\r\nNevertheless, some people believe that, children need to get ready for the competitive future since their childhood and they try to build roborts through education system whithout thinking about the cooperativity. For exampe, some school children have sport competitions. Then, these childern try to win in sports events also. Most of them are very selfish and they do not know about the cooperativity. However, sports is crucial to build cooperative children and school education is a good chance for that.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, cooperativity is a salient factor to enhance the qualities of a child. For that, shool education is an imparical oppotunity. There are huge advantages from group sports such as improving flexibility, communication skills and cooperativity.Therefore, teaching team sports need to include to the school syllabus to teach the cooperativity and to change students' attitudes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The future is a time of new inventions. New time, new techmology and new ideas on how to imporve the world. Google has been playing around with the idea of driverless cars much like the ones in the movies we watch. Driverless cars sounds like a good idea, but does the bad out weigh the good? In my opinion diverless cars are a bad idea because people will neglect their attention on the road and it is probably not what it seems.\n\nIn today's world people have trouble staying focused on the road as it is, but now they would think they won't have to pay attention at all because the car's are considered driverless. People constantly text and drive or call and drive which is the main way to get into a car accident. What if the car is trying to alert you to tell you that it is your turn to take the wheel and you are sleeping because \"it's a driverless car\" and you don't have to be alert, then you run over someone or run into something, who's fault would it be yours or the manufacture? The driverless car makes a compelling argument on how it would use less gas and if you are drunk the car could drive you home.\n\nWhen you are watching the ads on your television, they tell you all the things you want to hear. For example, when Burger King has a new burger they make it look big and juicy, but in reality it is small and dry. It's the same way with driverless cars, they make the car seem like a good deal and they tell you all of the things that make the car sound good, but in reality it doen't work like they said it did. Google claims that the car is \"driverless\". The first thing that pops into my head is me laying down while the car takes me to my destination, but that is not the case. The car still needs a driver which is weird because it's driverless right? As the article says, \"Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver.\"\n\nThe future is filled with the potential of amazing new technology that can blow your mind, but the driverless car isn't one of those inventions. The car isn't completely driverless, so they should change that name to of a driverless car to a driverless car most of the time. The cars put more people in harms way even though they mean well the outcome is not pretty. There will be an increase of cell phone use and less time paying attention to the road. Well, i guess the bad out weighted the good.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building taste obstacles attempting dirigible dock The dock would break laws The dock would also danger people It would also put lot stress frame building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you want to be able to feel more safe while you are in the car? If you answered yes, then you might want a car that can senses all the dangers that's surrounding you before you can. Car is a great transportation to go to places, so it's important that you are safe while you're in the car. Diverless cars are being develop; driverless cars are cars that can drive itself without you touching the steeling wheel.\n\nWhile you are in a car, it is important that you're safe from all dangers that is surrounding you.Most cars company are developing driverless cars, meaning that the car can drives itself without you even touching the steeling\n\nwheel. Almost every cars have safety featers. For example, in paragraph 4 it said, \"Google's modified Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor.\" All these sensors will help you be more safe while you are in the car.\n\nAnother good thing about driverless cars in the furture is that the car would use half the fuel of today's taxi system and offer far more flexibility than a bus. Another good reason to have driverless cars in the furture is that, say that you are going on a vaction and you are driving about 4-5 hours, but you don't want to take a rest before you would slow down the time of getting there; so by having a driverless car, you can set the car to drives itself while you can relex and rest for a bit. After you got some rest and feel better, you can set the driverlss mode off and you continued driving.\n\nCars that can detect dangers before you can it's important feater to have. In paragraph 7 it said that \" In 2013, BMW announed the development of \" Traffic Jam Assistatn.\" The car handle drivong functions at speeds up tp 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel.\" this means that the car will help the driver focus on the road. Also in paragraph 7 it said that \" They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves.\" meaning that if you are not paying attention the car can stop itself before an accident happens.\n\nSo yes developing driverless cars is a good idea in the future. It has a lot of safety featers that can help to stop an accident before it happens. it's important that you are safe while you are in the car. Most of cars company is developing cars that can drives itself without you even touching the steeling wheel.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When people hear the word transportation, the first most likely thing that comes to ones mind is car. It is typical to think of a car as just a way to get from one place to another faster, but what about the effects of driving. Cars are one of many things that cause pollution, releasing gases that harms our Earth we live on, the very planet that keeps us alive. Limiting car usage could benifit the earth and give you advantages.\n\n\"Paris bans driving due to smog,\" by Robert Duffer, the title it self says all, paris has a pollution issue due to the cars that they drive and stated in the article because of \"near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partical driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\" Because of the actions Paris had to make it reduce the congestion in the captial of France by 60 percent, those who didn't follow to what was told \"suffer a 22-euro fine,\" about \"4,000 drivers were fined\" according to Reuters. We shouldn't only resort to cars as transportation, inventions such as the bicycle are still around to this day and the percentage rate of bicycles causing pollution is, zero.\n\nAuthor Andrew Selsky states in his article, \"Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota,\" that millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during the car-free day.\" This day was done so it can encourage people of altervative transportation and reducetion of smog, and according to the article some may say it works. \"It is a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution\" Stated by bussiness man, Carlos Arturo Plaza.\n\nThe advantages and possiblitys people could have if they limited the usage of vehicles, in Duffers article it is proclaim that \"parks and sport centers also bloomed through out the city.\" The once beated up side walk, is now restored with \"broad, smooth sidewalks,\" and coming back to the congestion, \"rush- hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic.\" There possiblities bloom with the upscale of shopping districts and new restraunts increasing.\n\nIt is understandable for one to not like the idea of reducing the usage of ones car, but if you sit back and realize it, cars are \"responsible for 12 percent of green house gas emission\" and thats just in Europe. In the United State, there percentage increases to 50 percent. All according to Elisabeth Rosenthal's article, In \"German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars.\" Beijing, Chine is guilty of being the \"most poplluted cities in the whole world.\" Everyone is a culpret when it comes to poplution and that is why everyone should take time to look at the facts and change, help the earth that helps you. Instead of driving your car to work thats just down the street, take a bike, If not take a shuttle. Don't relie on one source of transportation.\n\nThe opportunitys that could accore if one just limit the usage of his or hers motor vechile are endless, but it all starts with a choice. Rethink the way you see cars, think about the effect and possiblities that could offend mothernature. The advantages such as building cardio and decreasing of stress and pollution. The time to change the amount of times we use our car is now because limiting the usage of cars is right, and when you give to the planet the planet gives back.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are the cars of the future.\n\nWhen you think about the future you like of hover boards, spaceshifts, and automobiles that can literally drive themselves; well the future is almost here.\n\nAdvances in driverless cars have not only made them plausible, but it has also made them a safer alternative to human skills.\n\nMany car manufactures have been working on driverless cars, driverless cars have been driven over half a million miles with no accident, and driverless cars have safety features and abilities far beyond the skill of a human's ability.\n\nGoogle has modifies a Toyota Prius so it can drive itself.\n\nThis special Prius has a huge amount of various sensors from wheel to roof; it even has a LIDAR on the roof that continously updates 3-D imaging of the surrounds of the car using laser beams.\n\nIn 1980 we only had antilock brakes and within the next ten years those sensors have become so advanced that they could detect and respond to skids and rollovers better than a human.\n\nBecause of sensors driving a car toda in safer than it ever was, further advancements in the technology of the car have made it so human error is lower. So why not make the car driverless and have NO human error?\n\nIn 2013 BMW announced their development of a car that can handle driving up to 25 miles per hour, but the car features touch sensors that require the driver to keep hold of the wheel.\n\nThis car can steer, brake, and accelerate themselves.\n\nAlthough this car does have near driverless attributes, it is still not driverless.\n\nIf we had casrs that could basically drive themselves with little to no help from humans, imagine the future when the car doesn't even need a human inside drive.\n\nDriverless cars also improve the safety of everyone on the roads, or near them.\n\nSome driverless car manufactureres hope to develop a car that uses displays that can be turned off the instant the driver needs to take over, as a form of in-car entoertainment.\n\nIn a way, this display system is a safety feauture since it is turned off automatically when the driver is needed, unlike a cellphone.\n\nGoogle's driverless cars have driven over half a million miles with no crash.\n\nThis proves the safety of the driverless car compared to the safety of a completely human operate car.\n\nDriverless cars might be illegal in most states but that is starting to change, California,Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia are the first to allow limited use of semi-autonomous cars.\n\nThe saying, \"the trend is your friend\" applies to this situation, and soon the country will legalize the use of driverless, or almost driverless, cars.\n\nDriverless cars have more capabilites than a completely human operated car, they are safer, and they have peeked the interest of many large manufacturers.\n\nDriverless cars are the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The following table gives information on the average monthly rainfall in five cities. In the first row of the table, every month of the year is shown, from January to December. In the first column of the table, five cities are visible; Hongkong,Tokyo,Jakarta,Cairo, and London. The following cities are from very different parts of the world, this why there is great differences between the values. The city with the least rainfall was Cairo, hence there was not any rain from September to December, while Hongkong and Jakarta have had significantly more rain throughout the year. Hongkong peaked at 380mm of rain in August, and experienced the greatest fluctiation in monthly rainfall, with the biggest difference between January and August. In Tokyo, there is a steady increase in monthly rainfall from January to December, with only slight deviations. Jakrata seen the most rain in January, with an outstanding 300mm, which decreases until August, then starts increasing again until December. London is the most consistent out of the 5 cities, with the biggest difference between months being 25mm of rain.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Our mother Earth is currently facing a lot of environmental concerns.Some people believe that by increasing the fee of fuel we would be able to resolve these issues. In my opinion, it may help to some extant, however, this is not the only solution to clear up this problem.To begin with, people from driving their cars release carbon dioxide into the atmosphere which is detrimental to the environment.\nThat is, increasing the fare of has can help make people run their own vehicles less often and this change forms the air much cleaner.However, this turn will not stop environmental concerns. \nMoreover, hiking the pay of the fuel will affect weak and middle class family.\nYet, another compelling reason against the statement is that, people can handle and lessen environmental problems by some better quick fixes.For instance, using renewable sources instead of non-renewable resources would be an appropriate way. For example, solar power is an efficient substitute for gasoline.Furthermore, improving public transportation and encourage people to use them is another practical solution.To put it differently, the capture attraction of people to travel by bus or train.For instance, encourage people to adopt public transportation by decreasing the cost of tickets.Not only will it eliminate air pollution, but it also helps to reduce traffic jam.\nTo conclude, considering the points discussed above, the most rational conclusion to be drawn is that, the hike in the petrol bill is not the best solution to this problem. Investing in renewable energy sources and improving the efficiency of public transport is a better alternative that ought to be considered.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do believe everyone beliefs Do believe everyone express culture opinions Where s one place experience In library one judge beliefs culture opinions In library right open mind I believe kinds books music movies magazines material removed shelves found offensive Everyone different beliefs understandings For example someone go library purchase book famous deceased person like understand cultural background would take offensive come across book shelf If everyone say books materials put shelves libraries would nt libraries If everyone kept opinions libraries everyone could possibly remain happy arguements Everyone could express everyday way", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When each person drives a diesel-gussling car, it is like several thousand smoke covered knives being thrown at the soft protective blanket up in the sky. Pollution is destroying our ozone and our environment, but now we need to face our ramifications. Autos are causing cities to form new laws banning these leeches from being driven. Car usages should be limited, because if we dont, our pollution will be worse than it already is, and using a healthy alternative to transportation will lead to a healthier life style.\n\nPollution produced by our main method of transportation is killing our planet. We live on the wonderful planet earth which has been generous to provide us with a home and food so we can survive, but when our home is destroyed, we will soon become extinct. Global warming is a famous term heard around the globe, and this word is not used lightly. Our world is heating up due to the many green house gasses produced by the emisions of the cars we use. These green house gasses can not escape our atmosphere which then is heated up by the sun and is melting our polar ice caps. These ice caps, not only will flood multiple cities, killing thousands if they do not escape in time, but they also hold our natural fresh water reserve. The green house gasses are affectng our seas and our skies as well. An article called\n\nParis Bans Sriving Due to Smog , written by Robert Duffer, states that \"Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of internsifying smog... [The smog] rivaled Beijing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world.\" Beijing is also one of the worlds most populated countries. The terrifying smog and the rising seas are not the only factors leading to our demise. The green house gasses are producing holes in our ozone that protect us from harmful sun rays. Without the ozone, the world would not be habitable because of all the cancer humans will have by just standing in direct sunlight. We are the world, and by killing the world, we eradicate our whole species. We need to help our world with some healthy substitutions to cars.\n\nThere are several different ways transporation could be healthy for both the enviroment and ourselves. The worlds obeisity population is higher than ever. An average amount of calories we need to consume per day is about 2000 calories and most of the world are consuming way over that limit. If we supply bicycles to cities, we could burn off those extra calories by just going to public places, events,and even jobs. Biking and walking to places not only work out your physical apearance, but also keeps our mind healthy. Exercise trigger neurotransmitters in your brain to fire off endorphins, like adrenaline, which keeps your body moving and working without putting strain on your muscles. Exercise also fires off dopamine in your mind which produces a sense of joy. Elisabeth Rosenthal wrote an article named \"\n\nIn German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars\n\n\" which interviews people from germany about their lifestyle. \"'When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,' said Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two, as she walked verdant streets where the swish of bicycles and the chatter of wandering children drown out the occasional distant motor.\" Life is much more jovial with no cars, and germany knows it.\n\nThere are already different countries that have moderated and replaced their walking smoke factories to their fat burning bikes. We need to follow in their foot steps and moderate if we do not want to be left in the dark ages. The government needs to limit the amount of usages for cars, because the constant use of autos will lead to out doom via pollution, and without cars, people are more likley to live more healthy and happy lifestyle.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The planet of Venus by scientist logic, is like a sister planet to earth. Possibly once holding life on its surface or oceans. A study of Venus would be a highly valuabe pursuit despite the dangers. We could learn valuable information about it and maybe even about our own planet. We could discover new elements to add to the periodic table. We could discover if life does or did exist on the planet that could leave us to conclude that there could be more life out there.\n\nWith this pursuit we could further the development of technology by creating things for Venus that we could use here on earth. Though on the contrary it would be very hard to stay on the planet as it's atmosphere is 97 percent dioxide. We still don't even know what the ground is made of yet so landing a very heavy spacecraft would be super risky to do. The surface tempurature gets up to 800 degrees Fahrenheit so things can definitly burn up on the surface with what little oxygen is in the atmosphere. The super high risk could be met with super high reward though.\n\nWe could go try and explore Venus but it would be super hard to do as our technolgy is not ready for that yet, but I imagine that it would be ready in the next couple decades. For now all us non-scientists can do is sit back and wait for the scientists to develop the technology for the task.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this excerpt the authour seems to be pretty convinced that we need to study venus and see if it is sustainable for human life.\n\nThe reasons that we may need to visit venus is that our earth could run out of food or the air could get to polluted to the point were we wont be abel to go outside and breath fresh air. This is why they are resorting to venus. Now venus might not be substainalbe for human life but thats why we need to go so that we can figure out because what happens when the bad does whappen what is earths plan B. They are also interested because at one point they belive that it was just like earth with flowing rivers, grassy mountains and blue skyes. This is why they are so intreged because it seems to be the closes thing we have if our planent was to get destroyed or we couldnt live on it anymore.\n\nNow venus does have some bad things to it like very acidic rain and that would not be good for our lifestyle everyting we had would be ruined so what would the point even be somepeople may ask. NASA stated that there are way around this like metal roofs and thicker roofs if not metal. But some people may ask whats the point if your house could be damaged over all of this well i think that its better than being dead.\n\nNow not going to say that we will need venus anytime soon but it is in the thought process for many scientist so i think that it would be a good idea to fund venus trips because it could happen to my children or grandchildren.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think censorship libraries good idea people wouldnt get read want I read world war books wide selectionof others take away offensive id nothing read If find book think offinsive I put back dont get I think age books like book ages especialy movies magizines kids dont need read see certain things books movies sometimes refer drugs alcohole murder I dont think music big deal music isnt influincial music videos soometimes bad Movies sometimes go far though wouldnt want kids watching wouldnt mind take thos shelves offinsiveI dont think books taken shelf parents know kids reading anyway I would least check book magazine geting kids parentstheres always going offinsive books movies parents job make sure kids dont get thos kinds books magazines", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are in the near future. \"Tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time. Mercedes Benz, Audi,and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020.\"(P10). They are not only helpful for the driver by allowing them to relax and not worry about the dangers of the road, but are also safer to other vechicles on the road. This making driverless cars a safe and easy way of transportation. \"Futher improvements in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on their own.\"(P5). Driverless cars are a needed update in our modern automobile and will positively effect the world in the long run.\n\nThe driverless car is in fact an efficiant substitutuion for the human, with the car being able to do things a driver can not such as braking and response.\"The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\"(P5). New improvements of the design allow the car to work faster and still require human awareness if a problem were to occur. Making it much safer than previous models.\"The car can handle driving functions up to 25 mph, but special toch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel.\"(P7). Their are several options to notify the driver of needed assistance such as \"...driver's seats that vibrate when the vechicle is in danger of backing into an object. The google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over.\"(P7). Some may think this new update may leave the driver bored and uninterested with them being the second in command driver, but in fact some manufacturors plan on making the ride both safe and entertaining. \"Some manufacturors hope to do that by bringing in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads up displays. Some displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over- something not available to drivers trying to text with a cell phone.\"(P8).\n\nThe driverless car is a positive improvement to our modern automobile and will be both safe and efficiant.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Over the course of history, the human race has evolved from living off hunting and gathering to working in huge skyscrapers and travelling across the globe within hours. It is safe to say that the purpose of almost every invention and innovation that contributed to this change was to make life easier and more enjoyable. This attitude will not change, and hence we continue to see new innovations every day from smartphones and touchscreen computers to pinpoint GPS systems, and 3-D printers. Humans continue to work tirelessly at making new creations to better equip us to handle life on Earth. Driverless cars are just one of these innovations that will greatly benefit the human race.\n\nMore than a billion people drive a car every single day. The amount of energy and time that it takes, times a billion, is in itself stunning. But saving trillions of hours of wasted time trying to get from place to place is only one of the many luxuxries that driverless cars will provide. Millions of people die every year from automobile accidents. This number will not change until controlling a car is taken out of the hands of unpredictable, irresponsible humans. Use of computers will enable driving not to be affected by any outside factors such as emotion, intoxication, or inexperience. Furthermore, cars that run on computers will obey speed limits, lanes, traffic lights and all other trafffic rules, the ignorance of which currently results in almost all crashes and deaths. A computer will also be able to stop the car or shut it down quicker than any human could resulting in much higher safety. Will there be technical failures resulting in mishaps and tragedies? Without doubt. But will the number of people dying be anywhere close to what it is now? Not in a hundred years.\n\nThe benefits of driverless cars far outweigh any of the cons listed in the passage. They will remove any unwanted human quality from affecting driving, hence transforming driving into a safe, enjoyable, calm, and time saving activity. Never will anybody ever have to worry about getting stuck in traffic with nothing to do, because they could do their work, text, call, read, nap, or even watch some Netflix while their car drives itself. This is in the unlikely possibility that an uncrowded country like America will even have traffic jams with these cars. Driverless cars, like countless other innovations in history, will be a huge step forward for humans in making life as calm, positive, and enjoyable as possible.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on mars is just a natural landform. any scientist believe it was created by aliens, but i feel like its just a normal landform. To prove that it is a natural landform and not built by position of mars, erosion, and time change.\n\nThe position of the planet can also be the reason why the rock looks like a face. In paragraph 2, it says that the rock did have shadoes that could give anillusion of eyes, mouth, and a nose. In paragraph 8, It gives the season which caused clouds. Clouds are one of many reasons that causes shadows. These clouds could of ben in a cerrtain position that gave \"The Face\" illusions.\n\nA possible explanation that the face is just a natural landform is erosion. In paragraph 8, it states that . Mars experienced a vey cloudy time. As known that clouds can form rain and/or wind which can be used to wither ddown rocks. Wind on Mars could be harsh and putting a lot of pressure aganst a giant rock causeing it to make indents. These indents can be seen as eyes, mouth, or even a nose.\n\nAs you see in the pictures that were taken by Viking 1, over the time period the face began to dissapear. In the pre-story,\n\n\"The Face\" was hand made by an alien then wouldn't you think that they would keep itin good condition . Instead \"The Face\"\n\ndeformed over the time. Just like on earth, rocks break down over time.\n\nThere are many factors that can be said to prove that \"The Face\" is just a natural landform.\n\nEven an website like the one in paragraph 7, can state that it was just a nateral landform. With enough evidence you can prove that it was indeed a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I do not believe in driverless cars. Driving is something we look forward to. Once we get our license and can drive all that hard work is paid off. If computers drive for us then what is the point of having to wait?\n\nI believe that if we, humans, have computers do everyhting for us then what will there be for us to do? I happen to really enjoy driving. If computers drive for us then who knows if there will be a maufunction and it wrecks without warning. While the author did say that the car alerts the so called driver if there is any need for human help, how will it be able to tell if it is a cunstrustion site for sure. Or what is the road changes? I don't think driverless cars are a smart idea. For example; most states in the US have laws against it, for our saftey. We should know that we can't count on computers to work 100% of the time. How many times a day does your microwave stop working? Or how many times do you have to reset you wifi? If we can't count on machines to bake our food for us than how can we count on them when we are putting lives at risk?\n\nI know that there are some precautuions thatg can be taken to avoid this, but it's not worth the risk. Computer modified cars are helpful, but there should always be a human driving. While, most car accidents are human errors just think about how many times the driverless car will wreck until we have a perfect one. I just don't believe that it is worth it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Teenager is a very active phase of life when they have so much curiosity to explore about the world. In order to utilize that energy in a positive way, I do believe that they need to be involved in a social work as a volunteered. This will help for a community as well as teenagers themselves as it will give them a kind of sense of being worthwhile in a society. Moreover, it is obvious that community will get benefit from it as it will help to build harmonious society. \r\n\r\nThere are three reasons why I recommend to include teenagers in unpaid social work. Firstly, when teenagers start working in the community from the early age of their life, they will learn different life skills which will be useful for them in the future. Furthermore, it will help them to gain work experience which will make their life easy to find the job in their adulthood. Moreover, teenagers will feel the sense of being included and being part of the society which help them to grow mentally and physically. Thus, I strongly support to involve teenager in social activities. \r\n\r\nSecondly, encouraging teenagers in social work will help to lower the risk of them getting involved in illegal activities. As teenagers are very curious by the nature to see the world and they can easily influences by other as their articulative ability to distinguise right and wrong is not fully develop, they might choose the wrong way during this stage of life. Therefore, keeping them busy in community work in their free time will help to distract them from making the bad decision in their life. \r\n\r\nThirdly, involving teenagers in a community volunteer work will set an example for others to be selfless and help each other. Moreover, it will help to build a peaceful, harmonious and cooperative environment in the community. In addition, observeing teenager doing the social work will encourage others to do the volunteer work in future. Furhtermore, teenagers will feel empower, proud and confident being part of the society and being able to bring the change in the community. \r\n\r\nThus, it is beneficial for both community and teenagers themselves, I would highly recommend them to participate in social activities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is it a face or a landform? In the images captured by the MGS, showed what looked like a face, but starts to shape differently over the years making it seem like a landform. \"An enormous head nearly two miles from end to end seemed to be starring back at the cameras from a region.\" The \"enormous head nearly two miles end to end\" seems to be a landform. As thee has been no sign of life on Mars yet, as NASA says, it could not be a human face. After going back snapping more pictures of the formation, NASA finally got a better look and said \"There was no alien monument after all.\" As said by cheif scientist Jim Gavin. Finally, the evidence comes to life as NASA says \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American west.\" proving that the picture of \" the human head\" is in fact a landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everyone remembers mars the planet that Nasa was trying to get on to see if it's possible to live on? Well now they changed into a diffrent planet called Venus.\n\nThe author of the article \"The challenge of exploring Venus\" is stating his choice on what Nasa is doing. He is making it very clear that he wants people to explore Venus. He gave a hint in one part of his story. For example he says \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has valuse, not only becuase og insite to be gained on the planet its self.\" He's is giving his full suport on Nasa's choice to go and study Venus. He also is saying to keep trying even though it is dangerous. In the text it says that \"A thick atmoshpere of almost 97% carbon dioxide blankets Venus.\" This Is saying that its very dangerousover there on Venus and the pressure could destroy everything there.\n\nIn Conclusion he gives his full support no matter what. He is hoping that they keep striving to find a way to successsfuly accomplish whatever they need to do.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear. Mr. President,\n\nI feel that we should change the Electoral collage to a direct vote. As the author states in source 2 \"Under the Electoral collage system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors..\" I believe the people should have a better say in who gets to run the USA. We should aboilish the electoral collage because people need to be able to vote for the president himself not his slate of electors. Also some electors don`t actually vote for who they are representing, And the electoral collage is just not fair.\n\nThe people should have a better say in who their president gets to be. They shouldn`t be voting for the Slate electors, but should be voting for the president. Sometimes the votes get overulled by the popular vote. The electors really only focus on the swing states. That`s just not right at all.\n\nBelive it or not some of the electors dont even vote for the president they are representing. It doesn`t make any sense to do that. The electors should be voting for who they represent. That just increases my points value. The people should be able to vote for who they want.\n\nThe electoral collage is just unfair. The state legislators pick the electors, and some of those electors could always defy the qill of the people. It is unfair to the voters mainly because of the winner take all system, They mainly only focus on the swing states. Sometimes people get confused about the electors anf vote for the wrong canidate.\n\nMany people can`t figure out if they want to get rid of the Electoral collage are keep it in place. The Electoral collage should be gotten rid of because the people should have a say, and some elecotrs are not loyal and can go agaisnt the will of the people. In the wise words of Bob Dole \"Abolish the electoral collage!\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The time I patience I years old I years old mom said I go dentist mom waked I said yes Im going sleep said wake time go dentist I popped started screaming like quiet people house tring go sleep I said ok mom like go grab clothes I like ok put clothes I saying stuff I like Im going dentist get stickers I keep saying pulled parking bf I stopped said parked car I opened door parked car I opened door mom signed us sat lot people sat mins later called us I yell came dentist lady took room told lift head put thing move doctor came like clean teeth I crying cause I thought gon na hurt I crying talking gon na hurt put thing teeth said set dont hurt done mins later female lady dentist like pick tickers I happy I finally got stickers left got car I went sleep day I patience", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the passage, the author says, \"...Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sedimentand includes familar features, such as valleys, mountains, and craters. Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a cruical consideration given the long time frames of space travel.\"\n\nSo, for that being stated, that is why the author thinks the planet, Venus, is still worthy of visiting and discovering. The author also states that it's nearly impossible to go there. He said that we could be able to get there, but not able to touch ground because of the heat Venus holds. We wouldn't be able to touch or take samples of anything because it would be too hot.\n\nThe author states that NASA is working on new ways and ideas on how to approach Venus. He said that NASA has made something similar to Venus's heat and that they made something that would, maybe could, protect it from all that power of heat.\n\nLastly, He restates by adding in his conclusion, that Venus has value and is worth discovering more. He says that we will more than likely to discover more of what Venus has to offer because of the curiosity that we humans have and that nothing, not even the fear and douts we have will stop us from exploring and figuring out new things. He sates that we shouldn't be limited to travel because of the doubts and fear we have. The author states that we need to take a little risk to explore.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"OTHER_PII, why do you have to bring this up again?\" I tried to reason with her, ('she' was my conspiracy theorist sister) we had been arguing again over wether or not the \"face on mars\" was really that,\n\n\"OTHER_PII i'm telling you they hid something from you, the public, and me, too. You may be more like mom with all the brains and being a NASA scientist and all that, but I take after dad and have it within in me to look deeper than the facade the government has put up. That face on mars isn't just a butte or a mesa, it is an alien spacecraft!\" OTHER_PII ranted to me, and after only five minutes, I was beyond exausted with her and firmly told her, \"You are tired. I am tired, we both need to get sleep or else we will be here all night. We can continue this in the morning, we'll even talk about it all day if you want. I have the weekdays off now, remember? Good night sister, sleep well.\"\n\nI knew that the first thing out of my little sister's mouth would be some crazy, irrational idea to convince me about on of her theory's, so imagined how surprised I was to hear \"Good morning sis.\" when I woke up to get my morning coffee. Though I was not to surprised to see that the next thing out of her mouth was, \"About that thing on mars, the face, I want you to know I will never change my views on it no matter how many facts and statistics you hit me with.\" feeling relieved she didn't want to argue any longer, I simply said, \"Okay OTHER_PII. whatever you want.\" and that was the end of that. Apparently, even if you are somone like my sister and you've seen the picture confirming with absolute resolution that it is just a landform, you still don't change your views.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A life filled to the brim of better days is what we all want, and limiting car usage has some of these advantages. \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,' said Heidrun Walter. The sound of children outside of the pollution free community is much more satisfying then getting somewhere with dangers involved. A life without cars is less stressful and more free to explore in safety. Driving tends to make drivers uneasy for fear or crash or being late to work from traffic.\n\n\"Mr. Sivak's son lives in San Francisco and has a car but takes Bay Area Rapid Transit, when he can, even though that often takes longer than driving.\" Clearly being late to work and stressed is not something people favor espically when getting to work for free is possible. \"Public transit was free of charge from Friday to Monday, according to the BBC.\" Instead of spending thousands of dollars expecting an easier lifestyle your neck rests on the chopping block with the blade ever silently above until it completes is mission. Having this ability feels like freedom but it's actually just a fear inducing, death causing machine. A simple healthier life on a bike seems more enjoyable, and even more so when it promotes good health and your life.\n\n\"In this new approach, stores are placed a walk away, on a main street, rather than in malls along some distant highway.\" Not one person can really enjoy a twenty or fourty minute drive to a mall or anywhere for that matter. It's a waste of time, money, and life. Taking a 5 minute walk to a mall is much more beneficial to your body and health than adding gas to your lungs, and it's quicker too. \"Parks and sports centers also have bloomed throughout the city; uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic; and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up.\" Children playing outside instead of inside on their new tablet could be our future again. Parents don't have enough time to spend thirty minutes driving to a park when their child seems content on their fancy iPhone 6. Shopping is also a favorite anywhere, but it seems to be drifting online. Taking five minutes to walk to the mall and save money on not buying a car or spending money on shipping will give more money to buy stuff! A bonus is no more wrong clothing sizes or ordering a lotion that smells like toliet water. Ease of lifestyle is a desire that can be fulfilled when waving goodbye to miles of road and hello to a new jeans that fit for once.\n\nPollution is a horrible topic that everyone wants to stop, however everyone is ignoring one of its sources. \"After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\" It sounds like Earth is becoming like the movie Wall-E, and next stop is a ship in space leaving this trashed planet behind. Paris is setting a great example at trying to remove pollution for healthier living and a better environment. The United States has clearly been challanged and in its effort to be the best it followed suit, \"...It will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the evironment.\" It is hard to imagine a healthy ecosystem with flourishing plant and animal life in our current situation. With Paris and the United States assisting in the idea of other transpot methods not only will animals have a better chance at not becoming extinct but so will the human race. Dying of pollution will no longer be a concern and money spent on poison can go to lifes other pleasures.\n\nHappiness, fast travel, no pollution, and more new stuff sounds like owning a car right? Carlos Arturo has a taste of the sweet life, \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution.\" Sadly this is not what a car provides because in fact it only reverses these good things. Despair sets in with fourty minutes waiting in traffic while clouds of gray swirl into the sky returning a shirt that didn't fit. Reconsidering the advantages of having a car and considering the advantages of limiting car usage is the right way to live a perfect life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When luke was on the sea he had all these amazing jobs that nobody would probluy do than him and people don't want to travle on a boat with animals\n\nbecause they would proubly think why they took that job and why they are watching anmails that is not their's.In the paragraph 9 from luke's point of veiw it says that being a seagoing cowboy was much more than an adventure to him because when he is on an adventure he says it's like the adventure opened the world to him.He is grateful that he can do this job and he said that It made him more aware of people of other than their countries and their needs.When luke was on that boat he siad that their would be more people to come and their would be visitors for many years when they come their.Their is a awareness that stayed with him so that he can be leading other people into that job too.\n\nThe reasons to join this program is that when you are on these adventures you would have fun to and fom luke's point of veiw he had a great time.Luke wants more people to keep coming and visting every time because they can learn a lot of things from being a segoing.It also teachs how you can become one and what they do when they animals are on their and what they do when the anmial are off the ship.In the story it says,\"And that awareness stayed with him, leading his family to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years.\"It is going to help out students and so that they can become one.\n\nWhen luke was on that boat he was helping out his aunt's farm because it was going to prepare him for hard work.On his job for him to work hard he had to check all of the animals\n\nand from other people point of veiw some people would not even want that job.Some people might not want tat job because they nevered joind and that they never no the what they do in that program.In pargraph 8 when they can find time to have fun they.When they find time to have fun is when they was going back home because they droped off the animals\n\nand they have been unloaded.\n\nIn pargraph 8 you could have lots of fun when you are done with your work and when you are on your way back home.The text says,\"Luke also found time to have fun on board, especially on return trips after the animals had be unloaded\".When you are a seagoing cowboy you would have more than just a adventure.If your where just like luke and took at job and went with that job than you would had an awsome time too.When you are on the seas It will take you a long time to cross the sea but you would have something to keep you busy every day.\n\nIn pargrph 6 you could be travling about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean.I know this because the text says,\"It took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the easteren coast of the United stated and the month to get to China\".When you are on that boat you would have to be caring for all of the animals during the crossing so that you could keep yourself busy.Then when you have different trips you could be come something different.When you are a seagoing cowboys you would have lots of fun so.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Competing in school is an undeniable part of education, especially in sports fields. Some believe that there are enough goals in the schools to be catched and sport matches should not take a place in Syllabus. I opine with the later view.\r\n\r\nFrom one point of view, children need an extra motivation beside if their academic courses education. Art and sport are the fields where they can show their tallents and creativity. Moreover learning how to work in the team and reach a goal is one the most important lesson that they can learn from sports. According to Dr John Smith's research regarding this topic, 73% of the teenagers who participate in sport teams has higher higher score that their class avarage level.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, children need to learn their lessons with relaxed mind rather than in the callenging sport fields. teenagers are full of enrgy and pushing them to release it in the exercise fields may lead to personal arguments and break friendship. besides, the priority of sport and academic courses might be swapped and children may concentrate only on sport championship, which is not the goal of any institute.\r\n\r\nI believe that the benefits of sport matches in schools outweigh its drawback so we need to supervise it to stay in its main goal and look at it as a basis.\r\n\r\nTo sum up above, even though sport competition in school has some negetive effects, but we need to manage it and keep it as a part of children's training life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Narciso Rodriguez certain mood created For example one mood love family everything love In paragraph says My parents always kept arms door open many people considered family knowing would us This quote shows family took care everyone even thought much themselvesAnother example mood together Narciso s family helped imagrants get back feet Paragraph says came selflessly many imagrants give children better life even though meant leaving behind families friends careers country loved Narciso s family helped less fortunate often The mood story inviting peaceful", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever patient I I say rewarding I sitting waiting room I planned got washed deepcondioned flatironed The lady front desk called Im sorry wont today anyone else youd like A perplexed expression spread across face CAPS I asked yes client right She take tomorrow three oclock she suggested thats fine I said My feelings kind upset changed I walked outside It raining So I guess good thing I didnt get done It good thing I patient Being patient its advantages", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Their is many differnt ways this could not be made by a alein. One big reason is that this hasnt only happend once this has happend before when one of are satalights were circling the earth taking images. But it was just somthing that looked like a face because of the shadows reflecting on to it.And plus we have never found life on mars so why would they just come there to create this face. Like all the rocks around the face they look the same so it would just have to be a rock that was formed in that way. Like this story I read it says that it could just be a landform common around the American West. And it also said that \"huge rock formation . . . which resembles a human head . . . formed by shadows giving it a illusion of an eyes,mouth, and nose.\" So there is many different illusions and this one just happend to be a face.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the Facial Action Coding System is a very cool thing but there not much use for it. Yes, there some things for an example, in the text it says \"If you smile when a web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different\". There are different way to tell if you like the ad or don't. For an example,Youtube can tell what kind of ad that you would like by the videos you watch like for an example your watching a compilation of best touchdowns of 2017 then sports ads like Nike, Powerades, or sport equipments ads will pop up. In the text it says another use for the Facial Action Coding System is when \"A classroom computer could recogize when a student is becoming confused or bored and then could modify the lesson, like an effective human instrutor\". That has some use but the problem with this is that we have teacher that can do the same. The Facial Action Coding System will probably cost to much for some schools because they school would have to buy laptop or new classroom desktop for each class or each student. Thus the value of using this technology would be more for the future where we have robots that walking among us.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear recently posed question Newspaper The yourk asking readers technology I support computers give one opportunity learn different people world culture save massive ammounts time today s hustlebustle society talk people online via certain computer programs With computer one learn scores information foreign countries culture I read article man participating church program foreign citizan would come make friends learn This man assigned farms never fields thought would nice welcome house familiar setting Unfortunatley knew nothing computer though quickly retreated could learn everything home When woman stepped door eastastic feel like home ended staying getting married If charmed knowledge computer might stayed wonderful life Also says language students spanish french higher success rate computer learn countries He says average grade kids computer A average grade kids computer Therefore computer learn faraway places people ensure happiness succes future Computer also save massive ammount time In school Newspaper told homework problem CAPS night homework I vocals galore deal I look word huge dictionary I failing nt time homework Then family bought computer nice using online dictionary I could finish homework minutes compared hours I finally well computer would would kept failing timesaving computer ALso says people get work faster look traffic reports computer instead listening radio He says people get boss impressed consistent timing As see time valuable thing computers help save Finally computer allow one talk online A student misfortune break one vertabrae The doctor told would able participate school The student came plan speak teachers via laptop webcam Everyday teachers would give update computer When finally marched back school barely work make teacher bad interacted computer computer would month s worth work learning make would overwhelming Also says students communicate families college better relationshops college Obviously able talk computer useful thing In conclusion family computer good thing Not allow people learn places home also gives us time allow us talk withour ever leaving comfort home I recommend everyone wants easier life invest computer", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the state senator should change the electoral college to vote for the president of the united states. I think it would be a lot easier to do and make sure a president would be elected. They also wouldnt have to worry about it being a tie. And if it was a tie then they would be able to decide who the winner would be. Also the people will be able to vote for the president of the united states and won't have to worry about the electors voting for someone else that they didn't vote for. They also don't have to pay attention if the president were picked by a popular vote. Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election. The electoral college method of selecting a president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state. The residents of the other reigons are likely to feel disenfranchised to feel that their votes do not count, that the new president will have no regard for their interests, that he really isn't their president. The most thoughtful voters should be the ones to decide the election. This would a lot easier than the electoral college and would let people actually vote for the next presiddent of the united states of america.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" it was talking about Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. Venus is actually a planet it has a nickname called Evening Star.\n\nVenus is the second planet from our sun often referred to as Earth twin. Venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size and occasionally the closest in distance too. They are trying to land a spaceship on Venus its been three decades that a spaceship has landed on Venus. Its becoues the on the planets surface temperatures average over 800 degrees. Venus also has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. They are studying Venus becoues long ago Venus was covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life just like earth. Venus has rocky sediment and includes familier features such as valleys, mountains,and craters. NASA is trying to send men up to Venus to studying it but they are trying to bulid something that hovers over Venus and they can studyng it. NASA is working on other approaches to studyng Venus.\n\nVenus is a planet to know about becoues that might be the next planet we might be living on. I think its a good thing to study on Venus becoues its a planet that might be closes to ours.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Winter Hibiscus author Minfong Ho concludes story paragraph way saying shes going forget happen past failing test shes going better next time Its like author saying reborn like hibiscus spring comes Through story Saeng adjust like hibiscus And hibiscus inspired Saeng well shes So its new beginning Saeng learning hibiscus", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Home owning has always been the first on list of the any individual's serious life goals, especially when it comes to modern society, where people have to work hard to acquire a living space for themselves. Hence, finding the right place would be vital. As a result, an increasing tendency to explore the past of the buildings they inhabit has emerged.\r\n\r\nObviously, there is a dramatic availability of reasons why people tend to find more emotional forces in harnessing the history of their accommodation. First and foremost, curiosity has long existed in the bloodline of our ancestors, along with other survival traits, and we simply just inherit it. It plays a vital role in the history of humans and stays in every aspect of our lives. And it becomes clear when it comes to unravelling the secrets hidden within the walls of their very own residence, for you to imagine, a century-old house lying among the vast land of woods. Given a second thought, it can be explained in a more practical way. In a modern society where the money leads our motivations and controls our behaviours as such, investigating our future home holds significant importance. Having deeper insight into the conditions of the space you will soon occupy may provide you with valuable information for further repairments or replacements as well as a better chance when negotiating with the former possessor of the place. Moreover, even if you are not a history enthusiast, you still can benefit from the understanding of your home's surroundings, neighbourhood and local culture. In fact, life will be of ease if you have a good relationship with your neighbours. No one wants to be away from the life of the community rather than being a part of it, do they? \r\n\r\n Regarding the methods of examining the accommodation, there are some you should take into consideration. To begin with, a throughout discussion with a real estate agent or a past owner of the property would be fair enough. Be sure to prepare the list of the information you would like to make clear for a smoother conversation between the two of you. Also, you can do it on your own. The local government's data storage system usually contains everything you need to know about the details of the house. Not only will you be flexible in time management but also feel convenient when all it takes is some simple clicks and all you want will be displayed right in front of you. Last but not least, a small talk with the neighbour will probably help you out. They have lived there for years and witnessed a lot of things, therefore, getting along well with your next-doors is the key.\r\n\r\n In my opinion, a clear house examination should be executed before you pay for the real estate because it is worthwhile. Also, finding the right approach to such is vital to save your time and money.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent years, the decision of having children later has become increasingly popular trend. There are several reasons for this phenomenon and I do believe this has some obvious drawbacks for each family and our community.\r\n\r\n There are two main reasons why these days more young adults are choosing against having children when they are in the beginning stage of career. Firstly, instead of embarking on parenthood at the early age, modern women are likely to pursuit tertiary education and want to move up their own career ladder. If they got married and had baby, the workings mothers would find difficulties in both splitting their time to devote working and taking care their offspring. Secondly, young childless family may have a strong feeling of self-enjoyment. This lead them to prefer enjoying their life rather than by raising children. For example, many men may choose to go oversea for leisure travel or for own business while women are apt to take care of their body and socialize with their friends.\r\n\r\n On the other hand, delaying giving birth is no longer every family‘s private affair but also it affects strongly the survival of a whole nation. This tendency has negative influence on old parents and their future kids when the wives decide to have pregnancies. In fact, after 35 years of age, the old mothers may tackle with the danger of having miscarriage or delivering difficultly the baby. Moreover, in case there an easy delivery of the mothers, the babies are prone to be at risk of having Down‘s syndrome. As a result, this can negatively affect the shapers of a nation’s tomorrow and the quality of our future productive workforce.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, there are some reasons that many people tend to delay having baby in their life .Consequently, this might have negative effects on each individuals families and our society at large.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The bar chart illustrates data related to the expenditure of six commodities(namely photographic film, toys, CDs,perfumes, tennis raquets and personal stereos) in England,France,Italy and Germany.\nIt is apparent from the information supplied that the percentages of photographic film,perfumes and tennis raquets in Germany have shown consistency as a trend as the equivalent bars are even at 150.Moreover, it is evident that the expenses for the France products saw considerable fluctuations since photographic film's spending reached 165 and tennis raquets cost 145. With regard to the Italian goods, the range of expenditure was between 150 and approximately 155.Furthermore, the quotas of photographic film in all nations were increased or flat in regard to other variants,in comparison to the personal stereos which were dropped lower than 150(with the exception of Britain's personal steros ) , slipped to Finaly, from a considerable 155 which accounted for the personal stereos in Britain, the cost for purchases soared to 170 for the photographic film in the aforementioned country.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created auther memoir showing feeling came towards things In article says Growing environment instilled great sence family nothing blood relative Also family always happy In text said My parents always kept arms door open many people considered family Last least experiencing new life even left everything behind In article said Many immigrants give children better life even meant leaving everything loved", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In The Challenge of Exploring Venus the author talks about the dangers and goods about exploring Venus.\n\nThe author supports the idea to explore venus really well.\n\nHe says that Venus has a bunch of the same characteristics like earth including, mountains, craters, and even valleys. They even think that there were big oceans.\n\nI think that they should explore Venus, because in paragraph 4 it talks about how our sister planet Venus long ago was covered in oceans and could have supported many forms of life. If Venus could be able to have that kind of life on it couldnt it as well support humans? It is a long shot but say something happens to earth, we have a getaway and could send people in spaceships up to Venus. In conclusion, I think that scientist should keep trying to figure out how to get spacecrafts to land on Venus and how to make us sutible to survive the conditions on the planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph show girl going like hibiscus The next time blooms girl ready test take pass The authour wants show girl give try make sure passes The author involves hibiscus show girl bloom time hibiscus pass test", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I aware many people stateing people spend much time computers getting enuff exercise well I lot people useing computers gettiing enuff use Im going explane within paragraphs First I would like start saying good people computers working books learning activities learn new thinngs help sucessfull life people play games cross word puzzles riddles many Same use internet ingredence car parts ect Next useing computers helpful human race effect students school parentsguardiansteens It effect lots schools useing computers exspecialy students It effects parents beca use sucess life help find jobs jobs Finally getting enuff exercise going bed eating go school work something day involves walking Nobody sits home nothing days Theirs always something place go Well I hope think I told take consideration Thank time remember job done computer", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "venus is the closest sighn of life out of all our planets in our solar system we should presue our investigation to determin if life was a thing on this planet before the planet was a giant death trap with valcanos and craters and storms and lighting preventing our space crafts from entering its atmostfear we should put more research into our space crafts and technology to find out if we can get scientists close enough to better identify the planets surface and find out if there is a reason why the planet is so dangerous for life forms like us so we can design some form of safe travel maybe even bulid a space station so we can be able to get people close enough to do reaserch of the planet . and to suppoert my writing it says in chapter 7 of the story the challenge of exploreing venus NASA is working on other approaches to study the planet to see if there is actually life on venus .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As I read \"The challenge of Exploring Venus \" I feel as the main idea is to get people to understand that it is kind aimpossible to get to Venus. It is bassically dangerous to visit because its so close to earth but at the same time so far from it. Earth,Venus & Mars are all close together on the solar system but in real life its impossible to visit all 3 like we could visit states in one day. The authore really wants us to understand how interesting that Venus is because it holds alot of carbon dioxide in bankets,its beyond hot but cold in Venus,and is the biggest planets on the solar system. In the passage, The NASA wants to send people to venus to check out the planet because no human has yet to visit Venus in the last 3 decades. \" Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life .\" That should just explain to you that Venus is very large soit will definitly take awhile to get there.Hopefully one day in the future the NASA will achieve and get somebody up there to other planets and can show us other non astronstunats what it is like.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While some citizens argue that the provision of public sports facilities has tremendous effect on improving public health,others,on contrast,think that it has no considerable impact on the health of general citizens.This essay examines both the views and explains why I think the need for physical facility is incredibly important.\r\n\r\nOn one hand,many citizens and I believe that the development of centre for physical activities can have considerable effect on the mind and body well-being of individuals.If the access to facilities such as tennis,badminton and other sports are provided in an affordable,reasonable price,people do not fear to step-out to spend their time for exercising.For example,any free or cost-effective provisions,motivate dwellers to challenge their comfort zone. As a result,the major cause of obesity,which is, less bodily movements can be eliminated.So,the health complications can be minimised to a greater extent.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand,few others defend that there is no need for any capital investment on physical activity centres.For these people,the citizens of the nation have no time,amidst their tightly packed work schedule.Despite the construction of greatly attractive sports facility,non-availability of time will only result in huge loss of money. Evidently,individuals do not find time to stand and stare,or in other words,more specifically, the sports buildings are no benefit for general public.Instead,more awareness can be instigated for the reduced intake of junk and unhealthy products.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion,despite the belief of few that funding in sports wouldn’t benefit human society as there is not enough time for them to utilise the facility,like many others,I strongly agree with the plan of introducing recreational centres for the health benefits of all.Therefore,it is strongly recommended for the emergence of leisure activities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Autonomous cars are making a statement; who wouldn't want to benefit from a self-driving car? Autonomous cars can really change the way of everyday transportation; however, this can also be a bad thing. Changing a part of our daily lives could really be a hassle, but a self-driving car could help in so many different ways. Safety is a key issue here, but autonomous cars are built with safety as the first thing in mind. Techonology and engineering are key to these cars, and we've reached a point in time where almost anything is possible.\n\nI am for the development of autonomous cars. However, I believe they should still require human skills to be driven. Technology fails at times, so that's why I am more for semi-autonomous cars. Humans are capable of so much intelligence, and with modern day technology advancing, semi-autonomous cars can really assist us in our day to day lives. If autonomous cars are a success, there should be restrictions regarding our safety and the safety of others.\n\nSafety is a major concern with cars.\n\nWith normal cars, there have been times where a car company has had to recall certain vehicles with unnoticed, long-term issues. With autonomous cars, car crashes are nonexistent. According to the article, \"Their [Google's] cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash...\" Car crashes are one of the most awful experiences a person could go through. They are life threatening and killer. Car crashes could leave a person in fear of driving or simply sitting in a car. Not one person should have to go through that. It's not easy going through one; with car crashes being minimalized to nothing with autonomous cars, the roads are safer for everyone.\n\nSince technology is improving, autonomous cars are looking better than ever. The technology included in a driverless car is very possible; however, it has not yet happened. Semi-autonomous cars have been a success - they allow easier driving with just as much awareness. Semi-autonomous and autonomous cars have the ability to save thousands of lives every year, maybe millions. Cars are built for a person's safety on the road - autonomous cars are no different.\n\nIn conclusion, I am for autonomous cars. Without a doubt, I trust the idea of semi-autonomous cars more than autonomous cars, however. There are pros and cons to an autonomous car, but an enormous pro of autonomous cars includes the major concern of safety.\n\nAccording to the article, not one crash has happened with independently driving cars. Car crashes are life threatening, and not easy to go through. This is why I am for autonomous cars. More lives can be saved everyday, every month, every year.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever laughing something someone said began laughing harder joke person whose laugh almost humorous joke Then put good mood funny laughing occurred could world s worst mood Laughter cure almost anything bad mood crying re sad It also help make mood room brighter simply makes awkward moment disappear One bright day called asked I wanted long board get lunch Of course I wanted I m always typical order chocolate malt milkshake croutons ranch I jogged house block long boarded downtown On way I shared I good day far I needed cheered She feeling way When arrived excited get seated could catch others lives eat When walked inside noticed crowded seemed day waited table After getting seated noticed older couple sitting booth behind us kids school booth front us man women across aisle ordered strawberry milkshake burger fries I ordered usual After lady took order left I started telling reasons bad moods She bad mood friend treating right I bad mood friend mad something never happened We quite upset frankly laughing mood When sudden heard sounded like mixture goose s honking donkey s braying We turned around find lady s laughter I looked looked started busting laughing This went minutes straight We could believe sound like could come human s mouth probably loudest laugh I ve ever heard We also loved fact happening public place people around lady setting made fun I continued laugh lady laughing somehow started relieve bad moods started smiling little I could nt stop smiling laughing Laughter unusual way putting people good mood relieving bad moods Regardless laugh normal little chuckle unnatural sound coming someone s mouth laughter brings people together s great way turn awkward moment memorable moment Someone said laughter shortest distance two people person knew talking", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many reasons features setting affect cyclist There ways mentally physically The ways mentally cyclists loose determination pride fight journey cycling The ways physically setting hot rough cyclist would lack water food supplies Those ways cyclist would affected features setting mentally physically", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting large affect cyclist If cyclist would happen cycling snow could eat snow keep dehydration If cyclist Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit cycling winter time would thirsty time Also whole ride hill would tired", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many corporations are sponsoring sporting events or teams as an efficient marketing tool. Some believe this trend exerts negative impacts on sports. I somewhat agree with this.\r\n\r\nIn the first place, sponsorship leads to a win-win situation for both the event and the corporation. Primarily, companies can provide financial support to competitors that desperately need money. The costs of holding and publicizing a sports event can be exorbitant, and a high-profile international game, such as World Cup, expects billions of dollars. Therefore, the financial aid subsidized by sponsors is essential to cover the venues, equipment, catering and other costly expenditures. In addition, it is a lucrative business for companies, because sponsoring popular teams and competitions can gain immense visibility, develop positive brand associations, and cultivate customer loyalty of certain die-hard sports fans.\r\n\r\nIn the second place, there are valid reasons to say endorsements damage the events and athletes with their business nature in certain ways. Firstly, the sponsor can manipulate or even exploit the athletes, teams and events to suit their interests. For example, when Nike invested $160 million in a five-year sponsorship of the Brazil national football team, the company was allowed to specify where, when and against whom the national team would play. Secondly, some corporations associate sports with negative images. The cases in point are the alcohol and tobacco companies whose media coverage promotes highly addictive products that deteriorate public health. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, sponsorship has mutual benefits for both parties but over-commercialization will also bring about unwanted manipulation for sports properties and reputation risks if associated with controversial products. On balance, I propose that sports properties should always select their sponsors with caution and never compromise their inherent virtue for revenue.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is no doubt that our future that beholds us is headed into big changes with technology. We have already morphed into a society where technology is such a big hand on how we live now. Driverless cars are coming and they are coming for the better.\n\nDriverless cars could help us in many aspects. Some being as simple as less crashes and others being as big as how to prevent those crashes. Under specific conditions, Google has had cars that could drive independently since 2009. Although not being truly driverless, their cars have driven more then half a million miles without a crash. Googles modified car uses lots of position-estimating sensors that can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine. This would allow far better control than a human driver could manage alone.\n\nIn conclusion, i am in support for driverless cars. Not only do they have a bright spot for the future but even at this point in time they could help us change the world for the better.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear sit computer glass water afterschool snack possibly work snack You log many accounts open chat boxes friends start researching project As people log technology seem come new things computers Some people missing dont see negatives like social relationships failing procrastinatting lack learning Beep one new message On computer talk friends family sometimes people much real life relationships fail You cant type message hide feelings behind screen Also kids get older many jobs require customer service good talking people computer cant help Whatever say internet read posted anywhere site time whereas real life really talking School learning important sometimes I know I homework procrastinate say CAPS later need check putting learning stop Some people dont like school important persons life like successful need balance school learning computer time dont forget exercise possibly work Computers helpful research guides facebook twitter going slow So buckle start research Chatrooms email things harmful There many predators waiting anybody log Its dangerous someone pretend someone Also computer day exercise lead obesity sometimes hands posture give carpal tunnel syndrome There many bad things result computers Many times life youll need find balance Dont overlook negative could get hurt Computers nice careful whittle away time", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the facial action coding system is a great tool, it can be used in many situtations. Describing the expressions on Mona Lisa's face is probably just a trial run to show to the people that they have invented something amazing.\n\nThe FBI or police force for example, they could pause a crime scene tape and not only identify the person, but read his face to tell what he is feeling while doing the crime.\n\nWhen it comes to using it in a class room monitoring students, it could help prevent some fights, if their facial expressions express emotion and madness toward someone it may be able to stop a fight here and there. But being a student myself, i dont know how i would feel about having a camera pointed at me all day at all times at school, reading my face telling someone how im feeling. Yes i understand the point of security cameras, to catch people doing stupid things they shouldnt be, but having multiple cameras on you at once all day would get frustrating. Not that i would want to do anything to see if i could get away with it, it is just like having the same feeling someone is watching you, sometimes you feel it, and i feel like thats how i would feel with cameras everywherre reading my emotions and everyone around. I know they are in the halls and places but if they put them in a classsroom, that would be too far.\n\nI also dont believe most schools would put that kind of money in to their security system, i know for sure my school would'nt. All that money in cameras and a tech room for all the monitoring systems and the technology would be way to much for what you get out of it i think.\n\nSo at the end of the day, i dont think facial action coding system woul be very usefull in a school environment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often said that it is preferable to start work immediately after leaving school, while others think that attending a place of higher education is the best way to achieve success in your career. The writer of this article thinks that the latter is the best choice \n\nOn the one hand, some people find it appealing to find employment after graduation because they will have the chance to gain practical experience linked to their chosen field and pick up top soft skills like time management, adaptability, and leadership. Promotions and a successful career follow from this. For instance, there are a lot of applications for a single position in a company despite the fact that the job market is growing more and more competitive. \n\nOn the other hand, some people think it is easier to find a good job if they graduate from university with a good degree. In other words, having tertiary education puts people one step ahead of others who do not and this can be the deciding factor in getting a good job. The competition to get into the university and the increasing number of graduations show just how significant this level of education is for people’s future work opportunities. \n\nIn conclusion, even if people's perspectives may differ, I believe that tertiary education is necessary for having a successful career.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My argument for this driveless car would be, who would I blame if the technology or someone was injured- the driver or the manufacture. This passage will show the argument between two people. In the passage the law focus on keeping the drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe. The possitive about the driverless cars would be they can steer, accelerate, and break themsleves. The human driver must remain alert of all times becuase the driverless car will quickly get the driver's attention whenever there is a problem.\n\nThe negative would be the laws. In the text it says that if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. Also, the traffic law says that the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. In the passag it says the car watches the driver while the driver watches the road.\n\nFor me, I wouldn't need the driverless car. I mean it's cool but I'm worried about my safety. I just don't like how the driver has to wait to take over the wheel. What if they like driving? This day, people are lazy. They rather have someone or something to drive for them. For example, Uber. I just like the fact that this car alerts. What if you got in a car accident or what if the car alerts you late? All I care about is the safety of the people who will use this driverless car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "school s office usual thing I elementary school already developed habit making sick I could go home It worked several reality adults could outsmart sickness As kid I perfect actor apparently acting skills fading All staff new harder make ways I remember forth grade I made appearance office really choice innocence I never knew could happen next My cousin I classes used look alike kids teachers would often confuse looked like twins One day cousin struggling couple math problems math teacher decided stay minutes school help However also use ride bus I decided wait order catch bus together Those minutes became already missed bus That s made appearance office chunky old lady new heart I would always remember sitting chair front computer filling papersThis time knew nt one wan na go home days We missed bus said asked us gave explanations In meantime called make sure telling truth When showed office lady explained said problem confused explanations thinking missed bus reason making look like liar When heard said I nt telling truth I tried explain lady mistaken use even cousin tried defend office lady said sure I said Being kid I felt ashamed even though I knew I telling truth Mrs decided give demerit deep inside I knew I said truth s matters As kid seems like end world situations Feeling anger I nt able anything I look back brings smile face poor judgment I could think teacher mean I see big misunderstanding Now around years passed memory still I get best When I hang cousin base conversations funny moments childhood bring laughter remembering foolish things young Sharing moments bring us closer family friends better thing enjoying moments long lasting laughter people love", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recently many folks decide to give birth in their old age due to financial independence and maturity to cope with the stress that comes with childbearing thou there is infertility and congenital abnormality which are common among older ones\r\n\r\n There are benefits that come with giving birth at old age that is more than disadvantages, I will expatiate on these in my upcoming paragraphs with relevant examples\r\n\r\n To begin with, older people are financially capable to cope with any financial challenges that come with childbearing without looking up to family for assistance unlike the young folks, they give quality and adequate care needed for the children, more so they are physically,and emotionally rally and psychologically mature to cope with the stress that comes with childbearing, their reproductive system to is mature for childbearing, moving on older folks are mature enough to ensure discipline and training of their children due to experience compared to younger ones.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, in as much there are benefits of giving birth at an older age, it comes with some challenges too, there is a high rate of infertility in older folks due to hormonal imbalance, also the level of congenital abnormality is common in people of older folks compare to young folks and secondary infertility is another issue with old people too.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, people give birth in old age because financial independence and maturity which are necessary for childbearing is lacking in younger people while the negative effects are infertility, and congenital abnormalities which are not common in young folks.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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