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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As I walked lane looking perfect gift I saw day I find sold Today moms birthday I find gift The perfect gift precious moment figurine I asked manager fact back sadly didnt He said The new shipment arriving five I didnt think I could wait another three hours My dad drove home I pacing back forth thinking would occupies sadly didnt Finally I realized I needed relax patient I know time five dad I went back store time perfect gift right front I picked give clerk scan I hand money head strait home When mom get home I hand mom gift realize patient come handy comes waiting", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "->In \"The Change of Exploring Venus,\" the author suggests that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author states \" Striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also becuase human curiousity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\"\n\n->The author constantly states why Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. One of these reasons being that Venus \"may well once been the most Earth-like planet in our solar sytem.\" And he goes to support his claim stating \"the planet has a surfce of rocky sediment...valleys, mountains, and craters.\" And the author also states,\"Venus was prbably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" The author very much wants to believe that Venus was once just like Earth.\n\n->Another reason why the author thinks Venus is a worthy pursuit is becasue \"Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit.\" He states this because it is a \"crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel.\" What gives him hope of Venus being a worthy pursuit is NASA having the idea of sending humans to study venus. Which involves a \"blimp-like vehicle\" thirty-plus miles above the surface, avoiding the deadly ground conditions. or making \"simplified electronics made of silicon carbide\" to study Venus's surface.\n\n->As shown, the author makes a compellling argument as to why we should pursue studying Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author of this article uses many ways to inform us that we don't have many studies of Venus and why we should furher pursuit the exploration of the planet. He give information to how Venus is like earth, how scientists are discussing about it, and how NASA has had ideas of sending humans to study Venus.\n\nHis first reason being that venus id very simmlar to earth. \"Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of desity and size, and occaionally the closest in distance too.\" is the first sentence in pargaph 2, he write this to infere that if Venus is so simmilar to earth there might have been a form of life once. Exploring the plant can show us if there ways once some life on it.\n\nHe writes about how scientists are discussing about vists to its surface because of the familiar features the planet has. The features are valleys, montains and craters that we have here on earth. They are trying to make the trip there both safe and scientifically productive.\n\nNASA has an idea on how to send humans to study Venus by using a \"blimp-like vehicle\" that will hover 30 or so miles above the landscape. It would make the conditions less easy but survivable for humans.\n\nBy using this information we get a better look at why we have not study Venus as much as scentisits have liked but also show how much more advanded we are getting. He reason were understandable but more explain is need for the reason to be pressasive.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The above graph illustrates the distribution of population in different countries and their global wealth percentagewise.\nOverall,it is seen that the china has the highest population whereas northamerica and Richasia-pacefic has the lowest.However,when it comes to the global wealth,the major percentage is shared by the 3 regions,North America,Europe and Rich Asia-Pacefic.\nIn regard to global wealth,the North America is highest at about 34 percent followed by Europe and Rich Asia-Pacific with about 30 % and 24% respectively.The contribution of the remaining countries to the global wealth is relatively low being below 5 percent where the global wealth of India and Africa is of same value.\nHowever,when it comes to the population,China stands first with about 24 % followed by India,Europe,and other Asia Pacefic with a similar percentage of about 15 percent.Despite having a large global wealth,North America and Rich Asia-Pacefic has lowest population of about 6 percent and 5 percent respectively.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist greatly First beating sun The heat dyhydrates almost kills The rocky road also factor It takes time energy preform Another key ingreedient setting desert There one help nt place get water In conclusion setting big factor story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The aurthor say's that it is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers of going to venus. He says that it is dangerouse and not worth it. He said 'it is very challenging and it is proved' which means its hard to get their and could be dangerouse. Many people tried to go their but never landed on venus. They even also sent out space crafts and they disapear or just dont even make it close to venus.If someone evr makes it their it would be dangourouse.\n\nNo space craft has made it their for more then 3 decades. He says that that it is dangerouse beacause of the bad things that could happend , like if humans\n\ngo check it out it will be bad because there is acid flowing around the air. I also think it is dangoures because it was proved to be challenging and because no one ever made it their even spacecrafts havent. venus also has the hottest temprature on the surface then any other planet which is dangourouse for humans. If a human ever makes it their it could be dangerouse if they are their for to long. They have a limit of how long they should stay their.\n\nTo me this means that it is dangourouse to go to venus. I also think that NASA people should just not try to go their because people could get nevouse when they go their and just forget about the limit time they should be their. The aurthor was right fro\n\nwhat a read and the reasons i saw of why it was dangorouse to go to venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Social media is a big boom these days. With the help of smartphones, people can learn about their friends, families, and current affairs happening around the globe by just scrolling on social networking sites. This phenomenon has both benefits and drawbacks which have been discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs.\r\n\r\nTo commence with, social networking sites such as Facebook, Twitter, and Instagram have provided easy access to all kinds of news from all over the world. It has various benefits, first and foremost, it is time-consuming because people can perceive information at any time of the day using their smartphones. Secondly, people can access the comments, and messages on the posts that other folks are posting which, helps them to evaluate the opinions of different people. Furthermore, such platforms provide a great source to connect with family, and friends from all over the world. For instance, research has shown that people choose video calls to connect with their friends, and relatives who live abroad instead of international calls.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are a few drawbacks, although it is a great way to connect with people from all over the world however, this technological revolution has completely surpassed the physical interaction among people. Also, some broadcasts on social media have proved to be fake and created to influence the community because it is easy to viral any news like wildfire using these platforms.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, despite of being a few drawbacks, social media is the most convenient way of connecting with the world by sitting in one place, and its advantages cannot be neglected.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author emphasis how studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents is very important to Astronomers. \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" mainly supports how Venus is worth the riskand challenge to explore to see if it's as much like Earth as it's said to be, because it is close to Earth in size and density, has similiar geographics, and is known as Earth's sister planet.\n\nFirst, Venus is set up with similar distancing as Earth it's sometimes often referred to as \"Earth's twin\". The text says that \"Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too.\" Venus is so similar to Earth, but yet so challenging to explore.\n\nSecond, just like Earth Venus has mountains and valleys. Some might even say long ago there were oceans, because the text says \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life,just like Earth.\"\n\nThen, Venus is known to be Earth's sister planet! Venus has always been the closest planet to Earth other than Mars, but if Venus is so much like Earth astronomers can't figure out why it's so much more inhospitable than Earth.\n\nIn conclusion, Venus is a very challenging place to see and be. Venus has not been touched in more than 30 years! In the text it says \".. not a singlr spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.\" So although Venus is the sister of Earth astronomers know very little about her. So they keep in pursuit to learn more despite the dangers it presents everytime.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When I went get new phone I patient grandma likes work spacific person The man named grandma waiting finally came us went phase I wanted talking long time grandma said I wasnt patient I wouldnt get new phone day We make counter hes showing thing phone I want get I could look Me grandma finally leave I new phone I like Name one time patient patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As humans, our natural instinct is to look for ways of improvement. Driving is a big risk factor in our every day life, so finding ways to reduce the effects of life on the road is beneficial to all of us. If the driverless car means less accident occurance and more alertness, I am all for the driverless car. Although there are minor kinks to smooth out, that will come in due time.\n\nDriverless cars propose many good situations. With the assistance of these cars, less accidents are likely to occur. Many young drivers text and drive, which leads to a lengthy number of accidents a year. With the driverless car, the driver can actually be alerted before they reach a road block or when something pops up unexpectedly. These cars can steer, brake, and accelerate all on their own. This would mean that if the driver were to get distracted and the unexpected happened, he or she would be able to have the chance to get their mind right and asses the problem.\n\nWho wouldn't want to be able to reduce the chances of getting into an accident? When it comes to manual driving, if you look away for a second it could mean crashing into the car in front of you. It could mean backing into a hidden pole. These smart cars have many sensors and cameras that will ensure these things from happening. Google has test driven these cars 500,000 miles without a crash so far. Basically, driving with these cars would be more like performing a job with moderate supervision and an all around less stressful act. It is nerving driving on an interstate with thousands of cars flying around you. There are no room for mistakes. Having assistance wouldn't hurt.\n\nLike any new technology that falls before us, there are always problems. So far, the driverless car is not able to navigate itself through accidents or work zones, but manufacturists are already working on solving those problems! Our technology has come such a long way. We only keep making improvements. Pretty soon, our cars will be driving us safely from one destination to the next.\n\nOver all, driverless cars seem like a smart way to go. It's where we are heading. Things are improving everday. I know I would like to eliminate as many harmful things out of my life as possible, and these driverless cars would help so many problems that us new drivers will have to face everyday. Our eyes can only see and do so much. Having this car would make driving safer for everyone!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driveless Cars Are Coming\n\nSo you know how in the movies that take place in the future and they have really high tech cars that run on there own and fly in the sky? Well the world probably is going to have them type of cars. So companies/car manufactures are creating a such thing called driverless cars. Google have even started to create cars like that. The cars are pretty high tech but they is still in the beginning stages of becoming driverless. Right now Google cars aren't truly driverless, the cars alert the driver to take over when pulling in or out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues.\n\nFirst, so to me I think it is pretty awesome that we are creating driverless cars. I think it is pretty awesome that technology is evolving into something spectacular. Probably in a ten to twenty years we will have flying cars. Also it not just Google that want or is creating driverless cars it is Mercedes- Benz, Audi,Tesla and Nissan. I also believe that it is amazing what some of the cars will be able to do. Some cars like Google's Toyota Prius that they modified uses sensors. The senses is all around the car. With them sensors they combined all the input that is very highly necessary for the driverless car to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel.\n\nSecondly, although I believe that this is the next step to a futuristic world there are still some downfalls of the driverless cars that they probably need to improve. For one out of everything it is probably really dangerous. The cars can easily not work at all or stop working while in the middle of a busy highway which can harm so many people. With that they wouldn't know who was at fault the driver or the manufactuer who created the car. Also the price of the cars to me is probably going to be a total downfall. The car may really be pricey. It can probably be in the mid hundred of thousands or even millions.\n\nLastly, I really do believe that this will be an great idea on all parts. It will take so long to master the perfect car with everything intact. I myself will probably love to have a driverless car in the future. I really hope that Google, Tesla, Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan will be able to create the perfect driverless car and possibly more. That would be an awesome experience.\n\nConclusion, so that is my postion on driverless cars that is in the making. I think it would be an awesome thing to have on the streets if it is safe. If it is not in anyway safe I don't think we should have them at all out on the streets. This is an start to an future where probably everything is smart technology. Like it said in the text, \" The road to the truly autonomous car streches on ahead of us, but we grow closer to the destination every day.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "They want people to go study in Venus but it is a darngeous planet. is it even woth to risk their lives on this mission. But their i many sloution to that problem. Thesis :The problem studying a venus is the risk, dranger, tempeature but should not should not stop us.\n\nIn the Article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" reported Venus is dangerous becuase they sent a spacecarft to space. Not many people surivied\n\ndied in a few hour. In a lifetime no one has been able to land on life time. Venus it is a very hot planet include Powerful earthquakes and lighting that Strike to the land of Venus surface. There temperature is around 800 dergree that is 10x tempearutre what were use to earth. No wonder why Venus it is very darngeous not able many people could not survice.\n\nIn the Article\n\n\"The Challenge Exploring Venus\" reperoted\n\nVenus was not always a dangerous planet becuase long time it use to be earth life. Example the rocky surface some Feature are include what we have life on eath. Valley and Mountains it make scientists want to go back to study in venus. NASA are coming up with some ways Scientist can go study in Venus. Then we can know more about the planet. One day Venus might go back to earth life won't be as dangerous.\n\nIn the Article \"The Challenge Exploring Venus NASA\"reproted NASA is caming with intvend For Studying In Venus. One is Vechile above 30 mile above surface It would help by not staying on the groud because the bad effect it had. The temperature would be close to earth level won't be easy but human would be able to survice. But also ned to get close to the planet even know that risk their going to take. inculding their going to be a machine allow know about Venus. The machine were made in 1940 in world war 2 were very imprortant. By using the Machine the tin wold not be able to melt.\n\nConclusion: Even through Venus is very dareous planet to Study. Those people should just take the risk to Study at venus. NASA is coming up with many ways to keep the people safte. Maybe one day Venus can go back to earth lice", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One day I basketball practice I running team I getting really really thirsty suicides running exercise I asked coach could go get drinks coach said after double drible back exercise I exercise rushed drinking fountain I end girl line I waited waited finally I faced drinking fountain one girl says I drink thank you I could stunnedThats I heard bright ladys lets go I mad I quickly took second drink water rushed coach Im fisst one alot I take long drunks teammates call fish", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear senator,\n\nWhat are the chances in favor of keeping the electoral college or changing to election by popular vote for the president of the united states? Does the Electoral College work?\n\nFirst of all, What is the electoral college? The Electoral College is a process, not a place. The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the president by a vote in Congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens.\n\nThe Electoral College process consists of the selection of the selectors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for president and vice president,and the counting of the electoral votes by congress.\n\nWhat's wrong with the electoral college? Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn the president. At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all systemin each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing on the tight races in the \"swing\"states. It's official: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. And the arguments against direct elactions are spurious at best. It's hard to say this, but Bob Dole was right: Abolish the electoral college.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The reason author concludes story paragraph let readers know Saeng hibiscus I thinks author concludes telling reader hibiscus gives saeng goodluck good luck She past test In story tells us much saeng adores plant For example got hibiscus She reached toched petal gently It Felt smooth cool Thats author use thal paragraph end indicate Saeng make feel confident", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people believe that \" the Face\" on Mars is actually a alien of some sort or a human. I can truly convince you why it's not a alien, it's only a landform. I can see why people can believe its an actual face because it has the qualities of a face: eyes, mouth, and nose. Here are my reasons why this is definetly a landform.\n\nFirst, there is no evidence of anyone going to Mars. \" Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on the JPL web site, revealing... a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\" Mars has a very harsh climate and no one would even dare go off to a terrible, deserted planet to just not come back.\n\nSecondly, there is no history of anything in space involving aliens and their artifacts. Many would say that the aliens didn't want us to knw they exist but the article states it could have been a person going to Mars. Scientists would have contacted the world and said we have evidence or living organisms on Mars.\n\nYet many people would believe living organisms on Mars and I can agree with that if they have fantastic reasoning to their theory. They might say that if someone went to Mars they coud have not brought back anything or they got stranded on Mars and that could have been their body. People may believe that anyone on Mars would not survive the deserted planet with harsh climate and they would surely die there. Some sort of creature may have made it and they would give us evidencce of life on Mars.\n\nYou never really know if there may be some sort of living organim on Mars unless you study it closer. Either I may be correct and it just being a landscape made from a storm or I could be wrong and its a living organism. We will never know unless we do the research.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear people school sit computers school They nt go outside enjoy nature Visit family friends even exercise people affected Going outside enchance knowledge go walk woods When walk find interesting new species Also outside play friends siblings times neighborhoods lot kids start pick game baseball You also build new things You could find big tree build treehouse tireswing family Going outside leaves lot fun activites When kids sit computer nt interact family friends During go beach friends It cool without pay money air conditioner You also find oportunety go different state day Or could go acros country see sick grandma newly named cousin Going picnic give time get know new people You could invite friends bring new friend whole group met You also lot tasty food would nt want Going places family friends pad worth wild experinse kids chose go computer exercise Kids become overweight When computer kids eat Eating hours day good idea You go schools basketball team run distances cross country Once team make new friends get exercise day When team exercising learn life skills You learn benifits working team So getting exersise important role life Why would choose computer You would nt able enjoy outdoors Or spend time family friends You would become weight unhappy So nt choose computer choose another activity", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Every time I walk hall I see couple either laughing things could disqualify test I know fact people get voted cutest couple school ones laughing opposed later Not laughing create couples families eventually next generation creates friendships within schools families activites etc That s personally I believe laughing single powerful action person Every person I friends laughed viceversa Especially one friend I ve gotten even closer since met I adament going church I young I always shy church allows social others without reticule However I saw one girl sitting back corner I felt scared like I probably would anywhere else My parents always wanted social said one way go way meet new people I maybe first time life say hi She replied giving name However I went back shy self walked back terrified talk one else However I third grade happened time passed things changed About years new church opened new class open children age groups I cemented classroom one two regularly showed However one day I one age group Well actually I one age group time I saw girl walking dad could tell forced go class It took picture eventually I realized It girl scared church girl scared class She could clearly recognize I made hand gesture telling come saw smile She shortly proceded laughing little bit This I realized I met someone special Now everytime I see smiles That s I know friend long time Laughing ca nt put quotes put someone s memories rest life I know fact cause lot days passed since I still memories Laughing easiest way tell person true friend something forgotten", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The reason author concludes story paragraph Saeng wants thing good The reason I said cause last paragraph says Saeng vowed silently which means wants best", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is generally argued that educational systems should allow high students to contribute to their teachers, or even make criticism; diametrically opposes that, others believe it exerts an adverse consequence due to a lack of respect and discipline in the classroom. This essay will delve into both views and give a conclusion. \r\n\r\nIt can’t deniable that students having a voice in the classroom may boost their motivation. For instance, some high schools in Ho Chi Minh have collected student feedback to improve their education quality; therefore, teachers know what problems students get and find out effective solutions. Parallelly, learners open the doors to demonstrate their capabilities as well as feel appreciated since their contributions can help their lessons enhance which is considered a stepping stone for students to take more responsibility for their schooling.\r\n\r\nNevertheless, if high school students are given permission to express their thoughts about their educators, this somehow can bring an abuse of rights. In other words, teenagers who do not fully develop their social awareness and knowledge easily misbehave when submitting comments in the classroom. For example, when disagreeing with teachers’ approaches, the youth tend to communicate with indecent languages, but educators still receive these opinions causing learners likely to think that their knowledge is better than that of teachers and instructors have to listen to them. As a result, in some cases, the classroom will become chaotic since students inevitably no longer follow instructions given by teachers failing to gain their respect.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, in the views of aforementioned arguments, my unshakable conviction is that the disadvantages of giving students a right to comment on their teachers will surpass its advantages.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nI write this letter to you in favor of removing the electoral college and using a popular vote system to elect a president. One reason is that qualifying citizens don't vote for the president, instead they vote for a slate of electors (Paragraph 10 Sentence 1) who then vote for the president. This process makes it seem useless for the citizens since they can't directly vote for the president. This is a democracy, right? The citizens can't control who their electors vote for most of the time, (Paragraph 10 Sentences 9-10) thus making it much more complex than how it needs to be.\n\nAnother reason that the electoral college is a problem is that the system may cause alot of conflict between states, resulting in a big mess leaving only the government to fix. These conflicts can include the fact that only one vote is sent out in each state (Paragraph 12 Sentence 4) that represents all the many voters which could range from a few hundred thousand to millions of citizen voters, making the system once again unfair to voters. The candidates don't spend much time in states in which they know they won't win (Paragraph 13 Sentence 2) but spend alot of time in those states that represent themselves, either the republicans or democrats. The electoral votes in my opinion object alot of campaigning but if the electoral system was gone, then these candidates can spread their word to each and every state without much annoying favoring.\n\nThere are a few reasons though that the elctoral college can help maintain some problems which could lead to chaos in the future. For example, if the voters in the state of Florida vote the same for each candidate, the stysem can help avoid any further conflict since only one vote is being submitted due to the debating of the state electors as explained in the above paragraph. Another small reason is that no region has enough electoral votes to elect a president, (Paragraph 19 Sentence 1) making each states vote count.\n\nIn conclusion, I personally find that getting rid of the electoral college would be more beneficial for the citizens and can avoid any major problems in the future. Even though the electoral college system has its advantages, popular voting would be a much more simpler way to elect the president.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars is just a landform. There many reasons on why it just a landform and it wasn't created by aliens.One reason is that the picture taken in 1976 of the Face is not the only picture that existes. Another reason includes that the Face could be compared to other landforms on Earth. The shadows that caused the landform to look like a face is also a reason on why the Face is not created by aliens.\n\nThe picture taken in 1976 of the Face is not the only picture that exists. NASA took another picture of the Face in 1998. The picture shows the rock is not a face. However, people still believed that it was built by aliens. The picture was taken in Mars' winter, which according to \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" was a cloudly day. The picture taken in 1998 is not the most recent photo the Face, though. In\n\n2001, NASA took another picture of Mars. This time NASA went on\n\n\" a cloudless day\". The picture taken in 2001 shows clearly that the Face of Mrs was just a landform. However, this is not the only reason on why it's just a landform.\n\nAnother reason on why the Face on Mars is just a landform is that landforms on Earth are similar to the Face. NASA has declared that the Face is just a mesa, or butte. According to \"Unmasking the FAce on Mars\", these types of landforms can be found in the American West. For example, in Idaho, there are butte in the Snake River Plain. The article also says that Face of Mars is just another version of a mesa. There are other reason on why the Face of Mars is not built by aliens.\n\nAnother reason\n\nincludes that the shadows that where on the Face helped make it look like a face. In the article \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\", it says that the shadows help create \"the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth\". If the shadows were not present when the photo was taken, the Face would not appear to look the same. These are some of the reason on why the Face of Mars is not built by aliens.\n\nThe reasons on why the Face is just a landform are not the only one. There are many reason on why it's just a landform. The reasons that were mention, however, are on e of the most important. These reasons help support the fact that the Face is a landform and it wasn't built by aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that this face was created naturally.\n\nIn the article they give plenty of explenations on why the face was created naturally . LIke in the 1st paragraph they said ,''An enermous head nearly two miles from end to end seem to be starting back at the cameras from a region of the Red planted called Cydonia.'' That shows how they came upon the face. They took three pictures of the face . The first picture was taken in 1976, the second pictures was taken 1998, and the third picture was taken in 2001.\n\nA few days later NASA unvieled the image for all to see .\n\nThe authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars. The ''Face on Mars '' Has sense become a pop icon .\n\nIn paragraph six it said ,'' Although few scientist believed the face was an alien artifact photagraphing Cydonia became a priority for NASA when Mars Global Surveyor (MGS) arrived at the Red Planet in Sept.1977, eighteen long years after the viking missions ended .'' '' We felt this was important to taxpayers,'' explained Jim Garvin, chie fscientist for NASA's Mars EXploration Program .\n\nThouysands of anxious wed surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing . . . a natural lanform .\n\n''There was no alien movement after all. '' stated in paragraph seven .'' . Malin's team acptured an extraordinary photo using th camera's absolute maximum resolution.'' Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters , compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo . What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa--landforms common around the american West . That is why i believe that the face was created natrually.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Use of FACS in the Classroom\n\nIsn't it just the worst when you're frustrated with your homework, but your teacher doesn't seem to get the hint? This is why the Facial Action Coding System was created, or partly. The Facial Action Coding System would indeed be valuable if used in a classroom. It could be useful to kids, teachers, and parents of students. The FACS would be useful to change course of the lesson, or to help teachers decide on lesson plans for following years.\n\nThe FACS uses it's technology to evaluate the expression of Mona Lisa-- a painting. If the machine can figure out a non-living painting's emotion, then what could it do on humans? The FACS focuses on facial muscle movements to interpret the emotion of each item it scans. In the classroom, this could help kids by determining whether they understand. If a kid frowns, it can be obvious to the internet instructor that the student isn't understanding what they're being taught. The instructor can then go into deeper detail on how to finish a homework assignment.\n\nIn the case of boredom, it can help increase average scores. The software can determine whether a student is bored or not. If a student is bored, they will not pay much attention to the lesson, fall asleep, or maybe even shut it off. It is important to make sure the students are having some sort of fun with what they're being taught. The software could detect boredom and the online instructor would know to put more animations in the lesson, or even change the sounds and add music or a new polytone voice.\n\nThis software can also identify mixed emotions. If a student somewhat understands a lesson, but is also bored with it, the instructor knows to create a more lively detailed presentation. It's important to have a reader of mixed emotions in a classroom because of the amount of uncertainty in student's minds. It can also help the instructor know what lessons students understand and which ones they don't. The teachers can then decide what to do from then on, and/or next year, which ways the kids learn and which ways they don't.\n\nThe FACS is valuable in the classroom because teachers can change their lessons to fit each kids needs, and change their lessons for the following students next year. Each kid has their own personality, which requires different ways of learning. This software can almost guarantee improved scores in homework and tests because of how it helps teachers determine what the kids don't understand. Having the FACS in the classroom would deeply benefit the students, teachers, and parents. It would be the smartest choice to include this system into every student computer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is believed by some people that increasing the prices of the fuel is the key to solving environmental problems. In my opinion, I completely agree with this statement. Firstly, this essay will discuss on how this decision can reduce the emissions of dangerous gases releasing into the air and secondly, explain how it can decrease the overall consumption of this resource utilized by human beings for industrial purposes.\nIncreasing the price of fuel can reduce the number of vehicles travelling on the streets. This can prevent in emission of greenhouse gases, particularly from vehicles into the air and as a result, it reduces overall pollution, which is also one of the primary contributing factors in environmental issues. For example, the United Kingdom has recently surged the prices of the fuel and it resulted in lesser traffic and even showed significant difference in the air quality due to lesser hazardous gases released. Therefore, it is clear that increasing the cost can actually make a difference to tackle this problem.\nAnother reason to consider inclining the prices of the fuel would directly reflect in the reduction of all other industries using fuel as a primary energy source. In other words, several industries use diesel and gas as a primary source of energy to provide electricity to their machines and now people will double check on spending hefty amounts which will eventually reduce the excess consumption of this resource and therefore look for renewable ways to run their machines. It is therefore playing a prominent role in tackling the contributing factors of environmental problems. Hence, it is patently evident that hiking the costs of the fuel is beneficial to the society.\nIn conclusion, surging the prices of the fuel can tackle environmental problems as it reduces the vehicles that emit gasses into the atmosphere and overall reduction of its consumption which are powering up machines. It is recommended that more and more countries should take this initiative for a better healthy air in the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir solidority paragraph says My parents shared cooking duties unwittingly passed non culinary skills love cooking still today I eternally grateful Passionate cuban music I adore day filled air mixing aromas kitchen also paragraph says growing enviroment instilled great sense family nothing blood related This mood created author solidarity", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Seagoing Cowboys program is a great opportunity of a lifetime. You are able to take care of horses, young cows, and mules to ship them overseas. There are a lot of experiences for you but it does take a lot of dedication and hard work.\n\nWhen World War II was over in Europe, many places and countries were destroyed. If you join the Seagoing Cowboys program, you can help these places and countries regain what they lost like their food supplies, animals, and a lot more.\n\nThis program visits many places that were ruined during the war and one of those places is Greece. If you are 18 and wish to be drafted for military service, this is an amazing opportunity to do so. You can help your service if you join this program because you are helping already by shipping animals to where they belong.\n\nBesides helping people, you are also allowed to experience adventures and visit many unique places. These trips are an unbelieveable opportunity for small-town people. You get the benefit to visit China, Europe, Greece, Italy,and many other places. Seeing the Acropolis, an excavated castle in Crete, the Panama Canal, and taking gondola rides are also other benefits of the Seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys program is much more than a adventure and it might open up the world to you and many others. Someday you might even be grateful for this opportunity and you might finally be aware of other people's needs and countries. Do you think that you can participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are both positive and negitive aspects about driverless cars. How much money will this all cost? How about if this idea of a driverless car is unsafe? Can we trust these 10000 pound cars with our lifes?\n\nIn my opionon i think we should just keep things how they are now, what is so bad about driving yourself? If were going to make driverless cars these manufactuers should actuly have them be diverless cars because the name is deciving, you still have to be alert and be prepared to take over. I think if your just relaxing and enjoying the ride and all of a sudden the car alerts you that you need to take over you wouldnt have an as quick of a responce time if you where to be driving and paying attention the whole time. Even if the manufactures had vibraving seats to alert you or flashing lights i still dont think people would have a good responce time.\n\nSo in my opinion i do not think we should have driverless cars however i do think that we should have cars that can detect if where to close to somthing and it breaks automaticly. as for driving itsself and such i think its a bad idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today’s world, the using of the national budget is a heated topic which is collecting many different opinions. Some people argue that the government should invest in the art while others think health and education are more important. In my perspective, health and training are a general demand of the majority of residents.\n To commence with, Arts is an important part of both nation and individual. To demonstrate, the art products such as pictures, photos or a song is a particular way to show a beautiful soul of a person, some of them also have the characters of the authors. Besides that, the piece of art is a place people send their emotions or record the special moments in their life. On the other hand, many nations receive a lot of advantages from the art. For example, a large part of art shows the traditions, the symbols or the beautiful places of a nation, then those are attracted. As a result, the image of the nation will be enhanced in the global stages and more and more tourists will visit that country which can increase the incomes of national budgets.\n However, while the art just satisfies a part of the society, health and education are the general demands of every resident in a nation. To begin with, Health is the main reason of the stability and the development of a country. For example, in this year the Corona virus is affecting many nations, they have a big problem with the epidemic, they also have to close customs boundaries which against them trade the products with other nations then leading a shock with their economy. Besides, education is the unforgetable factor, because the higher rate of resident who graduated higher education such as university or collage means the nation' illiterate rates is decline and more and more residents can build the nation effectively.\n In conclusion, I firmly believe that the national budgets should be invested in personal demand such as health and education more than the art.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The way the author suports his idea is good enough to understand the danger and consequences of it. starting off on paragraph 1 the author let's us know that venus is\n\nthe secound planet from our sun. He also let's us know that venus is simple to see from distance but its every challenging to examine when you're closely. The author lets us know earth and mars are is other door neighboors. The author tells us that venus is hard to examine being close to it due to high tempeures.\n\nThe author also tells us that there haven't been a spacecraft that has touched down on venus for more than 3 decades. The author supports this with saying that spacecrafts only survive a few hours. meanig that venus is a very hot planet which makes it hard for humans to study it. NASA is working on electronics made of slilicon for us to be able to study venus.\n\nThe author supports the idea in every way he could when he said it was challenging for humans to study venus. He let's us know why and how he mentions in paragraph 3 that the atmosphere is thick of almost 97 carbot dioxide.\n\nHe also tells us that tempeture avarage aare over 800 degrees fahrenheit letting us know humans can't suprt that type of tempeture. He also calls out some solutions on how humans could live in venus but he let's us know that the conditions would be bad but that it is survivable.\n\nThe author let's us know in parageraph 7 that NASA is working on simplified electonics made of silicon. And that the ones that have been made have lasted about 3 weeks in such conditions . He also let's us know that another project is looking back to an old technolgy called mechanical comuters. He explains that these computers were used back in world war ll they were very important he let's us know that it did not require electronics at all he explains mddern comuters are more delicated. what the author is saying that these computers are resistant compared to the compiuters we use now in days the author explains his view and supports it in every paragraph.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Book Book Certain studies shown many people world many diffrent intrest Wheather cars boats toys animals nt matter intrest I firmly beleive library books tons things Just one person might agree nt mean another able read possible learn This going debate nation wide going decision made fast There many people making enimies world I asked submit opinion beleive allowed check book want If opposite person agree fact books checked outh nt watch There multiple solutions problem The librarys could diffrent sections diffrent types books sorting class hobbies There could also age limits kids nt get ahold anyting nt watching readingThat way people would never even see books agree Well cant wait see results turn I also hope people make right vote Im saying vote way opinion Either way angry people people bursting joy So letting voice opinion", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author believes that studying and exploring Venus is worth the pursuit despite the dangers it brings. The author uses facts and information to back this idea up. The author has facts on poor conditions on Venus then gives us information and ideas on ways to overcome. The author is using a problem and solution method.\n\nThe author supported the idea with facts and more ideas that would make it safer and beneficial to us if we travel to Venus for further examination. In the article the author talks about how Venus has really bad conditions, but they are all just challenges that can be overcome. These challenges are the main thing holding us back from exploring further. The author believes that our travels beyond Earth should'nt be limited by dangers and doubts.\n\nThe article also talkes about how we need longer lasting technology for further research. It mentions mechanical computers and how they don't require electronics at all. The author suggests using the mechanical parts, like the ones used in the mechanical computers, and using them to create technology that will last longer on Venus. This would allow for more research. More research means better understanding of Venus which will allow for better technology to with stand the conditions.\n\nIn the paragraph above the author gives us a problem on how our technology can't survive the conditions, because the systems get fried and break. Then the author gives us a possible solution to our problem. The author gives us a new idea for better technology. The author uses a problem and solution to support the idea.\n\nIn conclusion, the author supported the idea well by using a problem and then giving a solution using facts and evidence. The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it represents. The author then goes on to show us that these dangers can be overcome and these dangers shouldn't stop us from exploring.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "scholarship means imparting knowledge to a person. Better learning is the first step to enter into the best plan. Some people are of the view that studying at college or an academy is the best way to a successful program, while others are of the opinion that getting a career after school is better. This essay analyses both of these arguments.\n\n \n\n First of all, there are some benefits of getting a job straight after school. Firstly, work means steady earning, so it helps to earn money and thus reduces the financial burden of the family ,especially among low-class communities. Another important benefit is that doing a particular office creates a feeling of responsibility. As a result, the person becomes more independent and self-reliant at younger age itself.\n\n \n\n By contrast, it is fairly easy to understand the advantages of studying at a university or college. Firstly, learning always increases our knowledge and widens our educational horizons as well. This helps in the moulding of overall personality and to succeed in his policy. Secondly, the professional culture or higher culture at the university matched is the backbone of one person’s race. To make it more clear, basic education from schools helps to identify our talents and interests in various subjects and courses and college-level matched culture is the field where we sow the seeds for better program opportunities. Moreover it helps to get better activity opportunities. This is because proper higher matched discipline improves the qualification and the door to better career places. Also, helps to get good remuneration. In addition, proper and good improvement always acts as a better deposit for a successful system and it is an asset.\n\n \n\n To conclude, when we weigh both viewpoints, it is crystal clear that studying at an educational institution or college is the best route to success in a career. Getting an activity after school has more demerits than merits. The government should take proper steps to give better learning to a higher match to all irrespective of financial status, religion, caste etc.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the contemporary era, a number of people stay in employment without retiring even though they are aged. In line with this, there could be various reasons for being encouraged to remain in the occupation while some individuals suggest that salaries are evident to be the most crucial factor which affects to make a decision which is mentioned previously. This essay only partly endorses this statement as I believe there are also other conditions which taken into account for making a determination. \r\n\r\nTo commence, there is no doubt that income plays a significant role in workers' motivation for performance. Principally, it is a fact that money is an essential part to survive in the current living society since to own a desirable product we need to pay the proper amount. It is possible to sustain life by only purchasing necessities such as food, clothes and accommodation, however, these are the components which are acquired by spending hard-earned cash from endeavours. Additionally, the amount of pay is the one factor which is commonly considered when people apply for a job. To extend, individuals who are likely to cooperate with the company for long term, highly preferable to obtain a well-paid occupation or to be offered a high salary.\r\n\r\nDespite the above-mentioned merits, I still believe there are distinct reasons which contribute the labours to motivated in their career. Firstly, job satisfaction is a major part to consider by officers whether it fits their characteristics, was the business that they aimed for the whole life or do they feel interesting and try to solve every day passionately. According to a recent survey from the Korean news, 73% of people revealed that they stayed without leaving endeavour for more than 10 years as the occupation was their dream job which caught their attention in their childhood or they genuinely loved to go to work days compared to other 27% labours indicated that who only attempt to handle their effort by considering the salary showed maximum or less than 5 years. Secondly, the work environment is viewed as a widely recognized cause for this as appropriate interactions with workers and bosses can tremendously boost the confidence and further commitment of employees. For example, if you are about to fall and have a hard time, you can stand up because there are people around you who will help you and give you strength rather than giving up the whole situation.\r\n\r\nIn a nutshell, generally, income seems to be the predominant factor which is determined foremost. On the other hand, many other elements, involving job satisfaction and a cooperative atmosphere should not be neglected.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The overall mood created author memoir courage perseverance First Narciso Rodriguez s parents traveled United States absolutely nothing money background information In paragraph Narciso states My mother father come country courage without knowledge language culture Narciso s parents would bravely step new world nt know anyone could nt communicate anyone nt really ideas going The Rodriguez s also persevered challenges racism segregation country In paragraph states time overt racism norm segregation prevailed Narciso s parents get problems people also fight mental challenges due racism Lastly paragraph Narciso says parents always braving harsh winters yearning native tropics facing cultural hardships His parents courage persevere new weather financial struggles The overall moods Narciso Rodriguez created bravery perseverance", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Work. School. Party. No matter what you have on your to do list you still have to get there, so why are car sales going down and how is it benificial to our society? Teens and young adults can often be heard discussing what brand of car they one day hope to buy and all the modifications they will make to 'trick it out'. Many people though end up being 20 or older before they actually get that car they always talked about, and despite parents claim of laziness there could be more to it then that. So what advantages could there be to a world with fewer cars on the road?\n\nThe first topic that is at the forfront of the minds of most people just starting out their new life is cost. The world revolves around money, thats just the way it is, so many people are finding themselves cutting out things that they don't really need. Now I know what your thinking but before you begin your argument that you really need that blue mercedes you saw in the magazine think about just how much that cost compared to your last paycheck, not so exiting anymore right? With public transportation becomingh more and more avalible many people are choosing to take the public bus rather then buy their own car. Another thought is all those taxes you pay. What you thought they went to police and teacher's wages and building nice little parks for the kiddies? Well acording the Environmantal Protection Agency 80% goes into making Highways and other transport, and why do they need that much money? Because we drive 100 tons over them every day. Many of the more polluted citys are even begining to put laws into place banning or restricting traffic in some areas and placing fines on those who violate them. Between the purchase price and matnence as well as gas and the money used to fund roads and highways theres a lot of dough pouring into your car drives.\n\nNow heres the topic I know your all tired of hearing about but its still very important, the environment. Car emmisions are the second biggest source of polllution in the atmosphere, first place going to powerplants and third place being cows, yes cows. Is a world blanketed in smog and smoke where the very air that sustains you is poison the kind of place you want to live in or, for that matter, raise kids in? Its not the the planets health we're talking about here its the health of everything living on it including us. While we're on the topic of health one of the greatest health issues in America is obesity, now imagine if everyone left their cars at home and walked or biked instead, the whole country would be healthier then ever before. And you know how when you go into the country the air smells so nice and clean, well that could be the city too if we just cut back on emmisions, we could have nice fresh air as well. Now think of your children, or friends or even yourself, just outside playing football when a car comes by and almost hits you, dozens of people die every day in car crashes that wouldnt if there were less cars on the road. So think of the health of your familly, your friends, your pets, and yourself.\n\nFinally we have the cultural shift, many Americans are already choosing to carpool take public transport or even just walk and less and less are buying cars. This trend is so noticibly prominent that car companys are trying to come up with new ideas and products to keep their customers coming. Citys are coming up with new systems of bike and car borrowing as well as a partnering with the telecommunications industry to create cities in which \"Pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and imporve safty\". So for those of you that can't stand to be left behind by the times jump on the band wagon and you can do your part to bring about a new cleaner era in the world.\n\nCars, the parasprites of a modern age, keep multiplying and destroying more and more. The emmisions given of by these monstrosities will linger more many a milenia poisoning the air we breath and devastating the world out children will inherit. Unless we do something to stop it now this travesty will continue to ravange all life on the planet untill we are on the brink of extinction, so do us all a favor and help to push this new trend of a car free world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this day and age, contemporary attention has been placed on whether leaders with more years of age or younger directors are better for the management positions in corporations. I strongly believe that senior managers possess more advantages than their counterparts in leading an organization due to some reasons below.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, it is not an exaggeration to say that seniors committed most of their life to the workplace. During the company development, they have faced multiple challenges, dealt with unexpected situations and witnessed various ups and downs. This means they possess a wide range of specialized knowledge and practical experiences to come up with solutions for any circumstances, which is not an advantage of younger leaders. Besides, choosing to work in the same place even at old age means that they are loyal to the place and would love to be a permanent part of the system. With that being said, managers with more years of age can lead a corporation more effectively, compared to the younger ones.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, when it comes to the success of a company, it is the employees’ level of trust and respect in their manager that matters. Generally, senior leaders are less likely to encounter any difficulties gaining respect from other colleagues. To be more particular, they can maintain the stability and solidarity of a group since those years working alongside the staff provided them with a profound understanding of each member and a powerful voice in the workplace. Meanwhile, young individuals need to prove themselves worthy for the position and make efforts to gain trust from their employees.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is undeniable that some people may believe authority positions should be held by young leaders. However, I hold a firm belief that those managers with more years of age can operate an organization more effectively, due to the aforementioned reasons.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A high number of traffic is a major issue in most of the big cities and towns all of the planet earth. The main reasons this happens is a big figure of vehicles on the roads and the viable solution is to increase the public transportation facilities. \n\nThe increased amount of private automobiles is one the main causes of huge traffic. It is very easy to buy a new car because of the bank's loan scheme and instalment payment and people are buying too many of them. As the number of vehicles is increasing, however, the roads are not. As per the study, every contemporary metropolis need twenty five percentages of its land area for roads which is not a common practice in most countries. As a result, people are spending too much time on commuting. For example, capital city Manila in the Philippines, where it takes more than four hours to travel around twelve kilometres.\n\nTo tackle this problem the government should implement a better public transportation system as well as rules on buying new cars and more taxes while driving in a major metropolitan area. Most of the cities do not a modern transportation infrastructure and people totally rely on personal vehicles. As per the latest survey in the Philippines, people think if the metro railway was good, they would not take out their cars in the capital. In addition to the modernization of the public transport, the government should impose rules on buying more than one car per house as well as include high taxes while driving in the city centre. For example, we could talk about Singapore and the U.K. In Singapore, people need an approval for the authority before buy a vehicle and in the U.K people pay extra tax when they drive in London. Both countries have a minimum level of traffic mess.\n\nIn conclusion, big and contemporary cities of the world are having traffic issues because of the high registration of new automobiles and less number of roads to support this demand, but it can be solved by the implementation of the public transport system and taxes on buying a new car and driving in the city.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Limiting car usage has many advantages. For example, less stress on the people who uses cars. When i had a car i was always tense. \"I'm much happier this way,\" said Heidrun Walter, in\n\nIn German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars , by Elisabeth Posenthal. it was also stated that if you have a car, its going to cost you $40,000 apart from getting a house to park a vehicle in a garge if you own one. In\n\nCar-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota by Andrew Selsky, it was stated \" I;ts a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution, said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza...\"\n\nRush Hour is a main problem on the roads. The traffic is like a chatty person-hard to get by. In\n\nCar-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota by Andrew Selsky, it states \"\n\nIn a program that's set to spread to ther countries, m illions of Colombians hiked, biked skated or took the buses to work during a car-free day yesterday, leaving the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams. Every person who did drive in any car-free program got a fine. The less traffic the people have the less they have to worry on getting to the place they need to go. \"Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital France, after five-days of intensifying smog...\" was stated in\n\nParis bans driving due to smog by Robert Duffer. The less traffic helped the city's air clear and was able to lower the Diesal fuel to disapear in the air.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "hear people talk about the social obligations that companies have. I completely agree with the idea that businesses should do more for society than simply make money. On the one hand, I accept that businesses must make money in order to survive in a competitive world. It seems logical that the priority of any company should be to cover its running costs, such as employees’ wages and payments for buildings and utilities. On top of these costs, companies also need to invest in improvements and innovations if they wish to remain successful. If a company is unable to pay its bills or meet the changing needs of customers, any concerns about social responsibilities become irrelevant. In other words, a company can only make a positive contribution to society if it is in good financial health. On the other hand, companies should not be run with the sole aim of maximizing profit; they have a wider role to play in society. One social obligation that owners and managers have is to treat their employees well, rather than exploiting them. For example, they could pay a “living wage” to ensure that workers have a good quality of life. I also like the idea that businesses could use a proportion of their profits to support local charities, environmental projects or education initiatives. Finally, instead of trying to minimize their tax payments by using accounting loopholes, I believe that company bosses should be happy to contribute to society through the tax system. In conclusion, I believe that companies should place as much importance on their social responsibilities as they do on their financial objectives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patient help got life If You nt patient wo nt know go next future uncle patient face month He running muck phone call Finally someone yelled patient call He bid us patient hardest thing He dined could nt call next day He said ended forgetting He said trying patient could waiting patient America s next They add would call got They soon phone mug A woman nicely said MONTH I speak sanders please uncle replied yes I month family kept telling patient So I nt anymore You keep practicing Someone else call details much hung upon phone I m happiest days lives uncle lot Really kept ground patient He told us hard worked great ending Here s future advice Always I mean always patient Your going get anywhere life nt Patient important life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Empire State Building built tallest building World even today still remains one tallest It design plans purpose tallest building however It supposed serve passenger exchange refueling dock dirigibles Most people know though many complications involved architectural designs plan mast Architects knew would easy build creation could simply drop mooring mast top Empire State Building They knew example building needed modified accommodate added stress mast height building would need increased They made necessary changes building realities progect soon set mast never built greatest reason safety The hydrogen used power dirigibles highly flamable endangered citizens New York Also according aricle greatest obstacle successful use mooring mast nature There powerful winds high altitude would blow make difficult dirigibles properly controlled navigated", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Olive Oil is manufactured through several ways. First of all, the olives are picked from the trees by the farmers. Then the fresh olives are rinished using the cold water. The machines used are specific and it helps belt to smash the olives. After smashed, the olives become either olive paster or the olive stones. The next step is to put those into a bag with holes. Moving onto the next step, it will be pressed by a certain pressurer. It gives a great amount of weight on the olives so that it can be well pressed. Moreover it will be separated into either oil or water. Then, it will be stored and sold to the consumers. Thus, it is quite apparent that olive oil is manufactured by specific steps. And so more, olive oil is widely used as it is a good source for the chefs when cooking.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In article The Mooring Mast describes difficulties designing Mast Dirigibles dock top Empire State building Al Smith mayor New York City time construction Empire State building came idea add mooring mast top building He wanted make New York city technologically advanced city After mast proposed desingners discovered problems mast installed They discovered would modify steel frame thousand foot dirigible moored top building would transimite stress way frame foundation due load wind pressure The wind speeds top building would blow dirigible around wind unsafe close building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "New technology is always created, and it only gets better and better every time. Technology is very important in schools because most kids are accustomed to interacting with technology on a daily basis. This makes school a little more fun for students who do not enjoy school as much as others. But did you ever think technology could be used for emotional purposes at school besides making it a little more interesting? There is a new invention called Facial Action Coding System that could help teachers and students have a better learning environment. Using new technology like Facial Action Coding System could be used in the classroom to help quiet students understand a subject and give teachers results of how the student feels.\n\nIn a classroom there is always some students that need help but do not want to ask for it. That means that their grades will most likely go down, and it will not be the teachers fault. Students feel ashamed to ask for help when they don't understand something because they don't want to look dumb in front of their friends or teachers. This problem has been going on for a long time, but new technology like the Facial Action Coding System might just be the solution. This new technology can read the students facial expressions when they are confused. \"'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor'\" (D'Alto 6). With this new system students who don't like to speak up about their lack of understanding can get help without telling their teacher. This will prevent their grades from going down and improve their understanding. Therefore, the Facial Action Coding system would benefit the students who find it difficult to communicate their needs to their teachers.\n\nIn addition, instructors can learn the students' ways of learning and how they feel when they get the results from the Facial Action Coding System. It can be a challenge for teachers to understand their students because most students don't open up to their teachers. \"For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by looking on her face. Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc\" (D'Alto 5). Like with friends, teachers might notice their students might be feeling down, but they don't want to ask because they don't want to make them feel weird or the student might deny that they are not feeling well. It is impossible to know exactly how a person is feeling, and without knowing that we can't offer help. If the Facial Action Coding System was in the classroom students and teachers could have a better teacher to student relationship without too much awkaward communication.\n\nAll in all, technology is being created to make our lives a little easier, and a classroom can be difficult to run without communication. The Facial Action Coding System can help students and teachers understand each other to be succesful. For example, if a student needs help but doesn't want to ask for help the system will recognize confusion and change the lesson so the student can have a better understanding. Afterwards, the teacher will get the results and approach the student to give him or her the help they need personally and in private. If new inovations are being created we should use them to help us understand one another.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why you should go to programs\n\nI think people should participate in Luk's progam because in the text it says, \"Luke also found time to have fun and the fun they had was baseball and volleyball\". Luke has a lot of things to do because it says, He was working two part jobs in a grocery store and a bank his friend Don Reist invited him to go ona Europe on a cattle boat. So you can tell they go on alot of adventures all the time because in the text it says, \"It took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic ocean from the eastern coast of the United States annd a month to get to China\". Luke and Don are always prepared to go to places because it says, \"Katie's farm a boy came to Luke to prepare him for the for hrd work not the dangers at sea and his job was to watch the animals every hour\". Luke got to see new things because in the text it says, \"It opened the world to him i'm grateful for the opportunity he says, It made me more aware of people of other countries\".\n\nLuke had to watch alot of animals because in the text it says, \"UNRRA hired seagoing cowboys to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas\". The captain he slid down a slippery ladder on his backside Luke's heart bursted like 300mph. As he vrrrrooommmeeeddd a opening on the side of the ship a long strip of metal stopped his slide from falling into a dark Atlantic. On his ship they have so much fun activities I know this because in the text it says, \"That they have table tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing reading and whittling\". Luke said that the day in pacific war ended they got there seaman's paper's and boarded the SS Charles W. Wooster headed for greece.\n\nAnd this is why I think you should go to the program I hope you like it\n\nTHE END", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College is a group of selected electors for deciding the president. Each state has its own amount of electors depending on its population. States like California have fifty five electors, while Wyoming would only have three. This factor makes the Electoral College flawed. The electoral college can also ignore their states votes. On the other hand, popular vote is not dependent on the population of the state. Having all the votes go directly to which candidate they was voted for. This would allow the presidental candidates go to all areas of the United States. So although many think their vote goes directly to who they voted for, the Electoral College has the final say.\n\nThe main problem with the electoral college is that every state has its own number of electors. Smaller, less populated states are ignored during the election, while the presidents focus directly on high population states to get more electoral votes. Since most states go off a winner-takes-all basis, all the votes for the other candidate are ignored. Also in the occurence of a swing-state, candidates focus all attention on them. The voters in the swing-states then know more about the presidents and are more thoughtful on who to pick, while the voters in the parts ignored know nothing about the presidents. Some states can also be completely ignored, having no campaign there at all.\n\nOn the other hand, the popular vote is more interesting. With this, state population does not matter. As a nation the voters can vote on the presidents. Although it is used today, it almost doesn't matter if you have it. In the 2000 election between Al Gore and George W. Bush, Al Gore toke had the popular votes, but Bush toke the electoral votes. This allowed him to become president. The popular votes were ignored in that situation and allowed a president with less of the nations liking to take office.\n\nThe final factor is the electers themselves. Another cause of the 2000's election being won by the elector college is some of the electors completely ignored their states voters. They decided to place their own vote. If the state is small and one of the candidates have a big lead, it won't matter. Although if they are neck and neck it can be those few votes that decided the election. This would also cause a less liked president to take office. Without the electors there would also be no favoritism. The electors can be choosen by the candidates themselves and can a bias electoral vote from them.\n\nThe point is, the Electoral College is unreliable. The nations voters can be ignored. If the government wants a certain president to win, they can hire electorals who are baised for that cadidate. Without it, the nation's people can have their say in the election. No state would have to be ignored due to its population. So although many think their vote goes directly to who they voted for, the Electoral College has the final say.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting sffects cyclist need comfort riding infrastructure around people best mood nice colun cars beautiful sky ride like infrastructure must watch people cars day streetsigns act So thats outing feature setting would affect cyclsit", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The growth in the manufacture of consumer goods leads to in destruction to the natural environment. My essay will outline a number of reasons for this trend and a number of its associated solutions.\n\nTo begin with, the increase in production of consumer products that harm the environment. When more goods are produced, more waste and toxic emissions are released from factories into nature. Water sources are polluted and air is seriously polluted, leading to harmful to humans and the death of many marine and terrestrial animals. For example, in Vietnam, when the Vinh Tan thermal power plant increased its electricity production, it caused extremely serious environmental pollution, affecting surrounding people, and columns of black smoke were continuously released. Therefore, leading to serious air pollution for surrounding people. Meanwhile, growing production of wares will consume a lot of materials. For instance, in a rural area of China, a large number of trees are cut down in the forest to put into factories to produce house construction materials and tools. Consequently, This directly affects the ecological balance and habitat of many animal species.\n\nHowever, there are some possible solutions that can solve this problem. Firstly, companies should promote the use of more environmentally friendly materials. For example, coffee giant Starbucks recently replaced plastic straws with reusable alternatives made from materials such as paper or bamboo. Secondly, regulators need to enforce strict regulations on the consumer goods industry. For example, they can impose heavy fines on these manufacturing companies for littering or polluting the local environment, which can protect the local environment from being polluted by irresponsible behavior. of these companies.\n\nIn conclusion, although this trend has a negative impact on the environment, there are still some possible solutions to solve this problem.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" has two differnt point of views perspective. It is wheter a genius idea or a very poor idea. Most poeple may thinkns it is a great idea and some of them may not. People have their own ways of thinking about this and own points of views perspective.\n\nThes types of car will no matter what will come in the future, in matter of fact they already started to create these cars. \"In 2013, BMW announced the development of Traffic Jam Assistant. The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel. In fact, none of the cars developed so far are completely driverless.\" Theses cars would be the next generation of car, and be at the same time boring.\n\nMost think that this is a great idea. Because it will reduce the change of getting into accidents and could save millions of lives. Most may not because they might think that whats the point of having a driver then. When would the driver have its turn to drive. It would take a feeling away of being able to drive freely.\n\nWhat I think about this article is that it is a not a great idea. Yes, it will readuce the chance of getting into a car accident and less people dying and I do care about those lives but I wouldnt want a car that would do everything for me. I want to drive my car and i dont want it to do stuff that I can do, like stop at a stoplight.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driving Cars are Coming to be a new thing,and they can be safe for some new drivers that are Just starting off driving.When they are bringing the new driverless cars people are Going to want the new car because they might think it's a good idea to have.This driverless cars might be illegal in some states because people can't trust that the car will be good for people to drive around.\n\nThe reason of bringing these cars is to show that cars are smart enough to drive on the roads by there self.\n\nIn 1980 automakers used speed sensors at the wheels in the creation of antilock brakes The human will have to take over when there is something on the roads that is made for human skills.\n\nThere might acually be some driverless cars on TV but there are none in real life. Some peopple say that it can be safe for them to make the driverless cars and some people say its very dangerous.Some people might take advantage of the driverless cars and do the wrong thing with the car. The point of thinking about the cars is because they think it might be a safe thing to do for people that are new at driving.\n\nThe invention of driverless cars can be a good and bad thing. The cars have driven more than half a ,illion ,iles without a crash , but so far, google cars aren't truly driverless;\n\nFinally, The cars are being made for the people that are new at driving and that they need a new car to drive that can sometimes drive for them. Driverless cars might be a good the when it comes to letting the car drive you around, but there might be some bad things about it. The driverless cars are nice to be something new to the world.\n\n.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "All around the world, people are using gas-gusling vehicles of mass destruction. Recently, Germany came up with the revolutionary idea to limit the use cars by forbidding street parking, driveways, and home garages in the new, experimental district of Vauban. Others have joined the bandwagon as well, instituting new laws, such as the \"Car-Free Day\" in Bogota, Colombia, and the partial-driving ban in Paris, France. France, Germany, and Colombia are the predeccessing countries to the innovational car usage limitations. These limitations have many advantages, such as a decrease in pollution, traffic, and a long-term positive culture shift.\n\nPollution and the emission of green-house gases is one of the common issues troubling countries world-wide. A limit of the use of cars and other various vehicles that run of fossil fuels has been proven to help counter the depleation of Earth's Ozone layer. According to\n\nSource 2: Paris Bans Driving Due to Smog,\n\n\"[The Smog] rivaled Beijing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world... Paris typically has more smog than other European capitals... [Last] week Paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter (PM) per cubic meter compared with 114 in Brussels and 79.7 in London, Reuters found.\" The city of Paris had legislated, \"On Monday motorists with even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home... The same would apply to odd-numbered plates the following day\" (\n\nSource 2\n\n). Resulting from their legislation, \"The smog cleared enough Monday for the ruling French party to rescind the ban for odd-numbered plates on Tuesday\" (\n\nSource 2\n\n). Paris, originally one of the worlds' most-polluted cities, decreased their pollution so much in one day that it was deemed unnecessary to continue the ban for the odd-numbered license plates the next day. \"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States\" (\n\nArticle 1: In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars\n\n). A decrease in these emissions could have significant effects, as witnessed in Paris. Also, a Local Colombian businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza claimed that the Car-Free Day was \"a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution\" (\n\nSource 3: Car-Free Day is Spinning into a Big Hit in Bogota\n\n). The government and their factions are in agreement that the ban on cars is only positive. Whether it is Colombia, Germany, or Paris, the restriction on drving was a major success. Imagine if more countries around the world opted to institute this ban; there would be no energy-crisis nor would there be as much of a pollution issue.\n\nAlong with the decrease in pollution, there would be a massive decrease in traffic. The vehicular limitations in the beta-countries (France, Colombia, and Germany) have shown that the restrictions imposed decrease the amount of traffic significantly. Based on\n\nSource 3 , in Bogota, \"... a car-free day yesterday, leaving the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams.\" Rather than having a holier-than-thou complex, these Colombians supported the greater good of their country and ceased use of all cars on the car-free day. A positive domino affect occured in Colombia as well. According to\n\nSource 3 , \"Parks and sports centers have bloomed throughout the city; uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad smooth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic; and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up.\" These beta countries have improved the standard of living by meerely putting some restrictions on driving for brief periods of time. The United States has seen various changes as well. While there are no current driving restrictions, new priorities are being discovered, such as the bike-sharing program in one of America's most heavily trafficed cities, New York. According to\n\nSource 4: The End of Car Culture , \"New York's new bike-sharing program and its skyrocketing bridge and tunnel tolls reflect those new priorities, as do a poliferation of car-sharinf programs across the nation.\" Nations are beginning to catch on to the contagious cold of revolutionary alternatives to driving and traffic crises.\n\nFrance, Germany, Colombia, and the United States are already seeing positive changes. The long-term culture shift is proving to be an aspiration for many countries. According to\n\nSource 4 , \"The internet makes telecommuting possible and allows people to feel more connected without driving to meet friends. The renewal of city centers has made the suburbs less appealing and has crawn empty nesters back in. Likewise the rise in cellphones and car-pooling apps has facilitated more flexible commuting arrangements, including the evolution of shared van services for getting to work.\" People are becoming more connected through digital devices as societies become more technologically advanced, therefore the need for a large amount of privately owned cars has become moot. In Vauban, Germany, Heidran Walter, a media trainer and mother, claims, \"When I had a car, I was always tense. I'm much happier this way\" (\n\nSource 1\n\n). Commoners, such as Mrs. Walter, are respoding positively to the laws of the experimental district of Vauban, which has very few areas and opportunities for cars. In fact, \"70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move here\" (\n\nSource 1\n\n). This modern-day industrial revolution is drawing vast numbers of people into the areas inwhich cars have become a rarity.\n\nSource 1 also states that \"Vauban, completed in 2006, is an example of a growing trend in Europe, the United States and elsewhere to seperate suburban life from auto use, as a component of a movement called \"smart planning\".\" The beta countries have had much success and have not seen failure yet. Although in France, \"Almost 4,000 dricers were fined... [Twenty-seven] people had their cars impounded for their reaction to the fine\" (\n\nSource 2\n\n), it should not be considered a failed experiment. Of the millions of people who live in France, they only saw a small fraction of driving infractions on the day they limited driving. The long-term culture shift that the world is beginning to see is certainly moving in a positive direction.\n\nBetween ISIS and the iPhone, the world has come across a variety of both positive and negative circumstances. Considering all of the positive effects of limitations of cars, including but not limited to less traffic, a decrease in pollution, and long-term culture shifts, there have been many advantages to the switch to a car-free enviornment. Even though transportation may take longer, it will be safer and better for the enviornment. Not everyone country can guarantee that all of their citizens will abide by the new laws, as shown in France, but a small fraction of the trouble is better than the mass population of millions, and in some places billions, wrecking havoc on the planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars was a natural creation. It is similar to the Middle Butte landform in Snake RIver Plain of Idaho. The facial features was created by shadows makily it look eerely like a face. The features of the Face are an optical illusion. NASA concluded that it was not made by aliens.\n\nThe Face is similar to teh Middle Butte. The Middle Butte is a lava dome that takes the form of a face. The landforms are common around the western parts of the United States. The picture shows a face that could only be like the Middle Butte in Snake River Plain in Idaho. This is how the Face could be a natural feature. The Middle Butte from Idaho was formed when lava and the earth combined and made it look like a face when you are on Google Earth. The Face on Mars is just like the Middle Butte that is in Idaho. It is possible that there was once lava or a liquid that combined with the surface to make a facial feature that you see when you look at the Face on Mars. The Face on Mars is also not very well detailed. If it was a monument then it would have detail. It would have eyebrows or details around the mouth and eyes so it resembled a certain person. This is how the Middle Butte on Mars is a natural figure.\n\nThe Face was an optical issusion. There was shadows that made the Face look relatively similar to a human face. The shadows also could have been formed by the clouds that were blocking the view of Viking for a while. The Viking had to get closer to take a picture of the natural landform. The landform could have been just a pile of dirt or a pile of rocks that had holes that made it look simillar to a face. Some people argue that the alien markings were hidden by the hazey clouds. When the Viking went over the Face it only took a few pictures. When the Mars Global Surveyor went over Cydonia for the first time they snapped a picture 10 times better than the original Viking picture. The picture from Mars Global Surveyor had better quality than the picture from Viking. This is how the clouds and the camera on the Viking made an optical illusion.\n\nNASA concluded that the Face was not like the Egytian style pyramids. They came to a decision that the Face was just a landform that under the certain circumstances looked like a face. The people at NASA also said that the camera had zoomed in so that if there was a shack or an airplane or a person on the ground that they would be able to see it. NASA even used a different camera that has better zoom than the one used in 1976. The camera used in 1976 was 43 meters per pixel. The one used in 2001 was 1.56 meters per pixel. If they didn't find any proof of alien life with the 2001 image then how can you argue their is any aliens?\n\nIn conclusion the Face on Mars is a natural figure. NASA verified that the Face was just an optical issusion. The camera on Viking was not very good compared to the camera of later explore Mars Global. The camera on Mars Global was able to take a picture 10 times better than the one on Viking. The face and eyes and mouth were created by shadows. This is how the Face on Mars is not an alien monument.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine, scrolling through google just like you do everyday, and finding something you could only remember as a nightmare from your childhood. Well that may have been the case for some. In 1976, photos from NASA were leaked around the world, revealing a strange face on the face of Mars. But is that reaally what it was?\n\nWhen scientists saw this formation, they to were astounished. Most just believed it was a martian messa, but few didn't. They believed there was truly acient life on Mars. Messa's were very common in Cydonia, the place they found the landform. So that was what it was expected to be, but there were still skeptics.\n\nPeople from around the world believed NASA wanted to hide something. That they didn't want anyone knowing there really was life on Mars. But why would NASA want to hide something so extrordinary? Not to mention the fact they would get even more publicity and money spewing their way. But the people weren't satisfied, so NASA decided that in 1997, they would go back and capture more.\n\nThis would prove to be very difficult for NASA. The rotation of Mars would make it hard to actually land near Cydonia, but in 1998, they did it. The photograph was ten times sharper than the last from 1976. It showed that the formation, was just a formation. Not any ancient artifact. NASA took all that time to prove something that was already proven. Yet few people still were not satisfied.\n\nThe people argued that, because it was winter on Mars, it was to cloudy for the camera to take a proper photograph. They thought maybe alien markings were covered by haze. So NASA decided to set off one last time. On April 8, 2001, the Mars Global Surveyor came close enough for a second picture, this time with even better cameras. It once again, showed for sure that the landform was nothing but a messa.\n\nOne scientist, Jim Garvin, Even compared it to the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho, trying to help the people understand. NASA whent through so much trouble to prove to the people that it was not life on Mars. So they eventually came to the conclusion that it was just a landform. But there will still always be skeptics. Will you still be one?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story like ready move life When everything turns back take test move But flowers gone worry school For example wrote Almost reluctantly realized many things thought strange become quiet repetition season upon season almost familiar like geese This means use change accepted situation", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Facial action coding system is a great way for teachers to understand how a student is truly feeling about an assignment or lesson in class. Facial action coding systems can help teachers to know if a student needs to either move ahead for a lesson or slow down. This software will help a student further comprehend the work their being assaigned instead of giving up early on. Not every human expresses their emotions the same way on their face so the coding system would have to be advanced and be able to detect slight emotions for every face.\n\nThe Facial action coding system does not always work the same for everyones face. A student can be deceptive and it may seem on their face that they are attentative and happy about the work, but could just be thinking about what their going to have for lunch. The pros for the facial action coding sytem are that the system would be able to detect when a student is completely furious and confused about the work they are doing. Another senario for the facial recoginition system would also be able to detect if a student is really confused about the work but they have all the right answers. This system would certainly prevent cheating from students and promote more honest work.\n\nIn this article ¨Making Mona Lisa Smile¨, the facial recognition system detects that Mona Lisa is feeling 83 percent happy, but is she really feeling this way? Emotion can not always be detected through facial recognition. Humans can have serious mood swings and can be deceptive and indecisive with their emotions. One moment a teenager could be 95 percent happy, but with mood swings varying the next moment that same student could be 65 percent frustarted. Facial action coding system is a great idea to implicate into schools if, the sytem does not have any flaws with detecting faces.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars would be a great advance in technology. People may have to help the car through tough driving situations, but that's understandable. Even though there are laws against it in many states, when people see how safe these cars can be then the laws might change.\n\nThere have been many great advances in technology in the past decade. Technology keeps getting better and better. Back in the 1950s people tested the driverless car but they also needed a smart road. Now instead of needing a smart road engineers have started creating a new type of smart car because having to replace all the roads is an almost impossible thing to do. On these cars there is a version made by Google who modified the Toyota Prius and put sensors on the left wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automative radar sensors, and a GPS receiver. This will all help the car in driving itself.\n\nEven though the car has all those things there are still ways it would have to be used by humans. This isn't a bad thing though. If the car couldn't go through traffic and had problems then a human would need to take over because it's just too hard for the car to all that stopping and starting again on its own and you're also saving your car froming being in an accident. Another way manufacturers thought up to keep drivers from getting bored waiting on their turn to drive was putting in an in-car entertainment that will be shut off when the driver is needed.\n\nIn many states there are laws that it is even illegal to test driverless cars. People think the only safe car is a car with a human driver. While laws are put in place to protect the saftey of people and other cars, when people see how safe the new driverless cars are then they will change the law.\n\nThere are many ways thar driverless cars are good. I only listed a few of the many. That's why I think driverless cars are the future of this world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today join the sea going cow boys as there travel around the world seeing unique places such as seeing Europe,China,Acropolis,Greece,the Panama Canal,excavated castles and much more. If you join you will sail on a cattle boat trip also this is a huge opportunity for small town boys and many more people. You will be kept busy by caring for the animals on board during the crossing. All animals must be fed watered 2 or 3 times a day. Also caring also means cleaning out the animals stalls. If that isn't enough for you then we also have challenges and tornements below deck to keep you busy when all your work is done. Also if you need something to do we always could have a night watchmen just in case one is tired we have shifts for the night watchmen so you always have a good sleep and your ready to get on the job in the morning see you soon,\n\nLuke", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I really don't think that aliens could have done this. actually i could give you a few reasons why and reason one, that just sounds crazy. Aliens dont exsit.\n\nIt's just a natural land form. There are all kinds of dents and holes on these planets. Besides the natural landforms are common enough around Cydonia. \"in the article it states, \"Thousands of anxious web surfers were wating when the image first appeared on the JPL web site, revealing...a natural landform. There was no alien mounment after all.\" Reason two is landforms are common around the American west. The test even states, \"What the picture actually shows is the Martail equivalent of a butte or mesa-landfors common around the American West.\" Finally reason 3. If ypu look at the pictures long enough, the longer \"the face\" has been there there more it transfors into a dent and looks nothing like a face.\n\nI believe its a landform and hopefully these reasons help you beive it too. The scienctists proved has the facts that it is a landform and not a alien face.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are could revolutionize our way of life and transportation forever. They would be a huge benfit to our soceity for these main reasons. It will be safer to travel in a driverless car. Trasportation in cities would be more efficient with driverless cars. Cars would be more enviormently friendly. First lets look at driverless cars can help keep us safe.\n\nEach year thousands of american lives are lost to driving fatilities. This could all be prevented if people chose to use driverless cars. Dirverless cars have sensor on all angles of the car and can ditect every thing around it. People on the other hand can be distracted easily by either thier phone or another passenger. If we put in the use of driverless cars many lives could be saved. This is only one of the other reason whey they would be a benifit to our lives but lets look at driverless cars from a economic stand point.\n\nDriverless cars could help the our lives be more productive as well. In the cities like new york or Chicago have busy roads that are always backed up. This means that there is alot of time lost becuse of the lack of efficencey in transportation.Most of the time these traffic jams are due to large accidents. Self driving cars would be able to reduce this problem because it would not have any accidents. They can scense every thing around them and make judgment calls that would be always safe for the passenger. The self driving car can help improve socity as much as it can improve our enviroment.\n\nEach year we try to cut back on CO2 emisions by making cars more energy efficinent or more eletric and driverless cars can help us as well. Driverless cars use GPS systems in order to find the quickest way to its destination. This means that each trip taken by these cars are the most efficeint trips. They also be shared amoung other people makeing require less CO2 emisions to travel each day.\n\nSelf driving cars can help our way of life in every aspect of our society. It can make the roads more safe, It can make transportation more efficent, and it can make enviorment more clean. I am excited to see when this science fiction will turn into reality.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood author creates memoir shows soothing grateful memory authors home relatives The author creates peaceful tone representing calmness comfort happiness displayed memoriesOne example authors way creating comfy peaceful mood paragraph Passionate Cuban music filled air mixing aromas kitchen Here innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed formed backdrop life warm home two sentences give deep warm thought family friends along comforting images kitchens sweet aromas cooking This type writing gives reader calm mood based comforting words used sentence passionate aromas innocence warmAnother example paragraph author displays happiness shows gratfulness family family done This adds mood memoir representing great family much mean peopleOverall author uses calming strong words get images feelings memoir Because able create peaceful comfortable mood expressing love family friends", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe author chooses end story wit paragraph symbolizes closure The plant represent home But realizes sight geese flying sooth evenyone leave home point She come terms happening try drivers liscence soon When hibiscus buds symbolic ready try", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Mr. Senator,\n\nThe Electoral College is a unfair system used for voting the reprentative of our nation. Bigger states with a bigger population get more votes, and smaller states get less votes. Its not completely fair, but then again when is politics fair? If the majority of big states are all a certain paty (either democrst or republican) them the entire system is thrown off, unfair, and unbalanced. Its much more fair if the people of the United States vote amd the votes were to be counted as individuals and not grouped to see which has the greater percentage and then given a certain number of votes to that party's candidate.\n\nAlthough the process I think will be fair does include greater numbers, the government has equipment such as computers to do the counting for each person. This system is rigged and unjust. It is the opposite of what America and its foundation is all about - equality. I would like yout to take this to washington and even if you get scrutinized and pestered, you should ride forth because lots of Americans think this system is corrupt and if we want our voices and opinions to be heard there is no one else we can tell but you. So represent us small town people of LOCATION_NAME, represent the nation in undergoing a process that will finally make our country one of equality.\n\nSincerely,\n\nGENERIC_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The challenge of Venus. Venus is sometimes called the evening star why because it's one of the brightest points of light in the night time. The nickname evening star is misleading because Venus is planet its the secound planet of the sun. Venus is a worthy pursuit. Venus is planet not a star it the secound planet of the sun.\n\nVenus is a planet. Venus is often referred as Earth's twin Venus is the closest planet to Earth terms of density and size. Venus is occasionally the closest in distance to Earth. The diffrences of Venus is the speed sometimes we are closer to Mars then Venus because Venus is right around the coner and they have sent many spacecraft to land but not many have lasted a few hours. Venus is referred as Earth's twin planet and closest to Earth.\n\nA thick atmosphere of 97 percent of carbon dioxide blankets Venus. On planet's surface the average temperatures is 800 degress Fahrenheit and the pressure of the atmospheric is 90 times greater what we experience on our planent. Venus has the hottest temperature of any planet in our solar system. Venus is blanket by a 97 percent of carbon dioxide and has the hottest temperature of any planet in solar system.\n\nScientists are discussing further visits to its surface. Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because its was once most like planet in our sytem. Venus can probably could been covered by a ocean and could supported various forms of life. The National Aeronautics and Space Administration has been sending people to study Venus. Scientists still discuses about futher visits and NASA has send people to study venus.\n\nThe author suggests that studying Venus is dangers yes he's right because Venus is one of the hottest planet even though Mercury is closer to our sun beyond the high pressure and heat Veusian weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes. So yes its dangers studying Venus many space craft haven't lasted hours in venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays government is providing many facilities to their people. There are some people who think that government has to provide support to the struggling artists like painter, singer and poets. While others believe that if government give assistance to those artists then it is nothing but just a waste of money, This essay will discuss why it is completely important to support this type of artists.\nOn the one hand, some people think that artist like painters, musician and poet should not be supported by government. They have reason to believe that, providing fun for this artist is the waste of money, instead of doing hard work to grow stronger this artist are wasting their money on alcohol. For example, one of my friends who is a singer and whenever he got aid from the authorities he went to the nearest bar and drinks the alcohol by that money. Because of this reason, people disagree with the statement that to support artists.\nOn the other hand, people who are in favour of that the government should provide help to the artist to build their career. They believe that some artists are poor and they don't have anything to feed their family. They just have their talent and in that case people believe that government should provide financial support for these types of artists. For instance, my neighbour uncle is a great painter, but he is poor and if they get the help of government then he could show their talent and can earn some money to teach their children. It is the reason that makes some people believe that artist should be helped by the government.\nIn conclusion, whether artists should be supported by government is becoming debatable. Some people who think that if artist are \rSupported by government could make us proud, while others disagree. In my opinion, government should assist the artist who is poor and needy and in that way the money won't be wasted.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I found strong censorship libraries I would like express strong disagreement actions I found things removed shelves due content Some content vulgar explicit offensive still give right remove things Books movies music magazines big parts peoples lives removing things big part someones development First taking books shelves means There reason books written published nad meaning teach people give information things would know otherwise Taking books shelves pretty much sheltering people mostly kids information would benefit matter way Yes books talk sex yes books offensive terms unless children exposed things like know wrong If read books slaves treated never know slaves If never read book married woman affair wo nt understand significance cheating When people read things learn little common sense understand things wrong Books taken shelves rate movies looked manner Movies days come along way Flicks like use high form technology people would idea done decades ago Some movies due contain vulgar language offensive terms sometimes even nudity I relate wanting little child see This mean things removed though In honesty I want little brother sister walking past container picture girl lingerie front I think anyone else ok Other movies put display kids rent though Movies teach history although graphic content Movies help learn somethings like kill rape Movies show things also teach incredibly horrible things time I think movies go past put adult section I think pornography put display anywhere movies need available high extent Movies good teaching tools magazines follow path In world today magazines like jam packed information better kids young age even people school I feel like educational magazines graphic show things children see hand seeing help understand Now I saying I want put magazines display people see learn little clothes girls wear magazines show little amount clothes people forced wear countries They able view magazines could show little nude side people starving eat twice week Things like although offensive maybe people viewed teach It show kids people need help people help Once pornography available anytime magazines educational aproach could contain naughty things due teaching able heard Magazines available hand take careful approach music Music probably hardest figure censored things I spoken today People use music express feelings Whether feelings good bad get song Music something brings people together allows unique time Music taken away people going vulgar content anything matter There thing called clean version pretty much song curse words Songs cleaned available way I undertstns taken sheleves I think everything made available Music powerful people taking away right thing In conclusion censorship done Yes somethings removed due extremeness contained things learned I feel like stay matter People go learn many tools used teach Music movies magazines books big part peoples lives taking things right", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Libraries ment types books movies music magazines It gives variety things look even check An offensive book movie even music shouldnt taken shelf bad things People agree everyone entitled opinion Through experiences observations reading I help explain opinion dont think offensive books movies music magazines taken shelf If book offensive deserve taken shelf Somebody likley worked hard book could put shelf If find book offensive put different section tells head time books section I real experiences I know people awear books re put onto shelf would therefore put anything offensive next childrens book Same thing music Music music listened People like types music favorite bands dont like certain bands swear whatever nt mean album deserves taken shelf usually rating front appropriate age dont pick If nudity sexual content tell put different section For instance old library I used live would put rated movies different section going check would older parent It really person could either make right choice wrong choice It s libraries fault pick offensive book well common sense The libraries shouldnt take offensive things shelfs people lack common sense dont know They could make effort kind seperate bad good wrong right even appropriate non appropriate But usually person making decesion", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Empire State Building faced various obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock Most importantly danger involved ambitious plan Blimps outside commonly used hydrogen highly flammable gas instead helium After German dirigible destroyed fire owners Empire State Building saw true danagers accident like downtown New York Successful use mooring mast another obstacle The winds high altitude made difficult dock Once docked dirigibles would dangle pedestrians neither pratical safe The existing law airships flying low urban areas create probles After Los Angeles failed reach mooring mast high winds owners started see unsolved problems By late s idea quietly disappeared", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Learning how to drive has a teen builds character and responsibility in us as young adults. As teenagers, we make mistakes and we also hopefully learn from them. With technology advancing so rapidly, people are starting to loose sight in doing activities without technology. As a growing society that relies on technology, we can forget the basics of growing up, which is making mistakes. If we never make a mistake how will teens ever learn to become an adult. These cars would be great, but would take away from a major learning experience for new drivers today.\n\nAs a teen, I know how excited it is to finally be able to drive on my own. It gives me a little taste of freedom. I don't have my parents telling me what to do all the time, it's just me and my car. Yes, I'll make mistakes while driving, no one is a perfect driver. But, I will learn these mistakes and use them in other activities in my life. Instead on trying to rush through a yellow light, I can slow down and be safe. I can use this stratigy in my life, by taking my time and not risking to much. Also, driving as a teen will come with great responsibility and trust.\n\nTechnology is a great in our society today, but is that worth loosing part of our childhood. Yes, these new cars will be safer. But then how will we be able to learn about who we are and build character. Also, \"diverless cars\" will prove how much we rely on technology now. We still need to know how to do things without technology. Another example is cell phones, they are amazing. I love mine and all it's functions and apps. But, now I see myself texting more and more instead of the face to face interaction. That's something people are starting to forget. That's how the new cars will be. They'll be a great advancement but it'll also have many downsides. Teens won't be able to learn from their mistakes becuase they won't be driving. Would you be able to get your license earlier on or will insurence change? There're so many negatives and positives to this idea.\n\nOverall, I think these new cars will help be safer. Also, a great inprovement on driving and technology. But, I'd rather make a mistake driving and learn from it and use it in my life, then to never learn anything from driving. As a teen, I want to learn, be curious, take risks, but learn from the all at the same time. This will shape who I am becoming as a person and will make me unique. No driver is the same, everyoen reacts differently, so these new cars will take that uniqueness away and everyone will be driving the same way. Therefore, I don't really like the idea of \"driverless cars\" in the future to come.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hello my name is Luke Bomberger and, welcome to the Seagoing Cowboys program, you can't stand animals getting hurt or even worse so join the program to save the little critters. Now don't just sit there lying on the sofa, come help us save animals and the plants, so they both don't get hurt.\n\nBeing a seagoing cowboy is much more than an adveture, it opens up everyones world world. Here at the program, we have all sorts of fun, volleyball,baseball, and even table tennis tournaments and more.\n\nYou can be 18 because when me and my friend were here I just turned 18 and I was here that is how I got my start, we got here August 14 the Pacific war had just ended. We headed for Greece with a cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them.\n\nIn 1945 i have made nine trips the most of any seagoing cowboy, it was not brevity to cross everywhere to where i needed to go, I also toured Canal on his way to China. It took two weeks to croaa the Alantic ocean form the eastern coast of the united states and a month to get to get to China.\n\nWe need more people to help us with this program, so why don't you just join us already come on it will be fun.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Limiting car usage is a tremendous advantange. Haven't you ever thought why? limiting car usage has its reason why its an advantage. One of the huge reasons is pollution, cars tend to create pollution, congestion, smog and many other harmful things. Source 1-4 mentions useful information of the disadvantage of owning or driving a car. Source number two mentions how cars tends to create alot of pollution, for this reason in Paris they decided to enforce a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. Nobody would like to live in a place where you have to be breathing dirty, contaminated air and knowing you produced it by your own car when Paris enforced to ban cars for a few days to clear out the global air not many fellow citizens participated about 4,000 citizen were charged with a fine for not following the rule. why would you try to be disobbident when what they are trying to do is help you clear out the global sir so the citizens living in that area dont get sick with any disease and dont harm our earth where we live. The advantage of limiting car usage will be creating less pollution to have a better global air. Cars aren't the only way to get to place to place there is other way to transport for example public tranport like buses, train or even if its not that far walking and itll be a create exercise.\n\nYes, driving a car could sound great because you get to drive anywhere you want and get to places quicker instead of catching or waiting for a public transport when you need to get somewhere and your in a rush. Cars are a huge hand like a big help because it helps people get from place to place. Also remember that cars arent cheap at all an example is that source number one mentions \" Car ownership is allowed, but there are only two placesto park-large garages at the edge of the development, where a car owner buys a space, for $40,000, along with a home.\" What this quote is pointing out is that to be able to park a car if you own one it has to be in a specific place and which you have to own and live by there which costs alot of money. Limiting yourself for car usage would make you save up a whole lot of money. Instead of wasting like 40,000 dollars in a parking place for a car and have to be living there you can easily just get on public transport and be able to live where you want. source #1 also mentions \" As a result 70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a to move here. when i had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" this also points out the not many people in Germany dont own cars and not owning a car really doesnt bother them because they found better way to get a transport and also believing that Saving up money is a really important thing because when you become independ you have to start paying bills, food, and many other things that wyour parents wont give you anymore so why waste it on gas and car washing instead of just getting somewhere in a easy transport and the money you wouldve been wasting in non-sense now will be saved up for something more useful. thinking about it car limiting is a useful thing finacialy and global reaosns too.\n\nLastly another advantage of limiting car usage is less congestion the less driving there is the less traffic there will be. Traffic is a big headche to people who try to get to their jobs or certain events on time. Public transportion might ttake long to get there also but its becauise there isnt as much buses because not many people get on public transportion and the less buses there is and more cars who cause traffic the more time it'll take off our time. Source #3 states \" in a program that's set to spread to other countries, millions of colobians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day yesterday, leaving the streets of this capital city eerily deviod of traffic jams.\" Bogota, colombia has a great point doing this event once a year will demonstrate citizen that the less car usage the less traffic jams there with be and it will be more relaxing and calming area to live instead of hearing screaming, beeping and other annoying sounds caused by unpatient people. This event that colombia has done has cause other states to realize that thats a great idea and some tried experminting it in their country.\n\nIn conclusion limiting car usage has its great advantages which benefits the citizens living in that area so if it benefits you why not try limiting car usage. Limiting car usage creates less pollution, less traffic jams, and your able to save up your money for something thats actually important. Cars aren't the only way you could get from place to place theres many other options like walking, or riding a public transport theres always an answer to everything. By limiting car usage we create less pollution in the air we breathe and there wil be less harm done to the earth and to the citizens. Always try new things and let limmiting car usage be one of them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Citizens are encouraged to retain all their salary earnings, while they are promoted to pay a certain amount of tax to the nation government. This is a debatable topic. This essay is going to discuss both sides of view and listed out my opinion. \n\nFirstly, those nation people are available to put all their salaries into their bank account for their future use. Although they earn a large amount of money from the companies, they will spend a certain amount of money within their living societies during their daily life. Eventually, the quality of life is not equivalent to the salary input. For example, in Hong Kong, young adults are necessary to spend money on their rental apartments, foods, clothes, personal and medical expenses since those nation governments would not have a great support to them. \n\nOn the other hand, a number of citizens are promoted to deduce a certain amount of money from their salaries to the government tax department. Having deduced around 40% of their total salaries, the employees cannot have a lot of money for them to save in bank. Moreover, they would like to spend money on their essential daily life expenses only. For example, in New Zealand, those workers would not have a high encouragement for them to spend on those high brenchmarking products including Gucci, Coach products. The national hospital would provide a standard medical services as well as full medical coverage on the clinical expenses for the elderly. \n\nIn conclusion, from the aspect of the government of country, they have more power and capacity to control the usage of money from the high tax income. I believe that a citizen is willing to have a well-developed and fully medical coverage under paying a high tax scale of salary rather than paying his or her attention on the expenses when steping into senior age group. I strongly support that the government should set up a high tax income scale for their national young people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist greatly One feature would dryness land He pedaling long time became dehydrated yet drop water know long didnt think could make far Another feature setting heat He felt like could go heat sun made want heat stroke Clearly features setting greatly impact cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Based excerpt morning mast obstacals builders faced attempting allow dirigibles empile state Building Building ft tall building hard adding Mast Would even harder Allowing dirigible land empire State building would dangerous The german dirigible Was destroyed causeing damage The owners empire State building realized much worse accident could If It taken Place densely Populated area Such town There fore The mast Put never used dirigible", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper Those support advances technology believe computers positive effect people I one agree Computers wonderful devices allow people ages learn world s people It allows people talk family members live far away freinds sometimes buisness associates Technology also provides education Do nt think socializing learning two important aspects everyday people Learning new things interesting actually see Books helpful defending made Internet websites gives pictures uploads almost every week Therefore know want book next visit Yes books give tons information much thousands websites right minute Want learn speak spanish look fast easy internet No need look look hundreds books get one little fact Throughout everything day chatting friends good way relax fun Whether s close friend coworker There several ways talk friends phones texting instant messaging even video chat Yes cause time away family easily say goodbye friend talk later Finally learning huge deal people today Well advanced technology found ways educate students fun way Websites colorful fun teach kids multiply read About children attached colorful objects books words So parents guardians computers arent bad re actually good", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think it is very capable of being used in a classroom or elsewhere to use. In paragraph 3, it states that the technology scans 44 muscles in our face precisely, to determine how they have moved to show emotion. If a prinipal was talking to two students in his/her office who were in conflict, the prinicpal could hear both sides of the story, and then use that technology to scan the students' faces to see how they were feeling. If one felt 83% angry, and the other only felt 36% angry, he could talk to the kid that was more angry to try to get him to calm down. If he thought one of the kids was only pretending to be happy, he could scan their face as well and determine what emotions they were actually feeling.\n\nIn paragraph 7, the author explains how the technology can pin-point the facial muscle movement in order to precisely tell how the person is feeling. If a person was faking a smile, the scanner would detect that, because it says that when a person is not genuinely happy, their \"smile\" goes more sideways, and their cheeks don't move up. When a person is showing a real smile, their cheeks go up and their eyes squint, like crows feet.\n\nSo if a student and another student were in a principals office over a fight, instead of the principal asking them \"How are you guys feeling?\", he could just simply scan their faces' 44 muscles and let the software determine how they were feeling.\n\nI like the idea of the facial scanning technology, but realistically, we probably won't have this in our schools anytime soon. It would cost too much and it isn't really a need. It is a helpful tool, but teachers and administrators don't need it when dealing with students.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Internet is employed extensively across the world, serving as an essential tool of communication. Nevertheless, the widespread use of internet triggers an intense debate. Some people hold that the use of internet should fall under control, while others disagree and argue that such control is groundless. This essay will analyse both positions and illuminate my standpoint.\nAs for those who support the control of the internet use, they may have their position grounded upon the fact that criminal activities run rampant online, threatening individual and public security, as exemplified by hacking technology aimed at stealing personal data illegally, fraudulent advertisements aimed at cheating money and notices post by terrorist groups brainwashing the public. Such activities, if unchecked, may exert undesirable effects on individuals and society. Given such omnipresent dangers online, the control of online activities may be justified.\nOn the contrary, in terms of those objecting to the control of the internet use, they may justify their position by highlighting importance of unlimited online activities, as demonstrated by the improvement of work efficiency. A case in point is that posting advertisements online is apparently more efficient than issuing leaflets on a street, from the perspective of a company intending to publicising its services and products. However, the notices post online may present fake information cheating the public. To address this issue, it is necessary to control online activities.\nAs far as I am concerned, in view of omnipresent hazards online, intervention is needed to screen dangerous information and ensure the safety of the internet use.\nTo conclude, the control of online activities helps to protect us from various cybercrimes, although it may slightly affect the efficiency of work. Personally, I opine that the importance of online control should not be underestimated.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To get this thing started I absoulutely love being a Seagoing Cowboy! It is adventerous and a lot of the things I do can just absoulutely take my breath away sometimes. There are a lot of things I could try to persuade you with, but we don't have time for all of those. One of the reasons that everyone should join the Seagoing Cowboys is that we get to go and travel to a lot of places. These places aren't just ordinary places, these places are amazing because, they are places that people dream to go to! For example China!\n\nI turned 18 before I arrived at Greece. By the time I was discharged in 1947 I made nine trips which is more than any Seagoing Cowboy. I have been to many places like Greece, China, Europe, and many more. When we had free time we played baseball, volleyball, we had table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whitting, and games also helped pass our free time.\n\nI also have crossed the Atlantic Ocean 16 times and the Pacific Ocean twice to help people affected by World War ll. As you can see I have done a lot while being a Seagoing Cowboy and this was all done at a young age. You have to commit to it and then you will love it! It is a great time but you also have to work hard, trust me I have learned that. I hope that after reading this I have persuaded you enough to make you want to try to be a Seagoing Cowboy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If the author knows how many times can spacecraft can survive to know how the planet is dangerous is how which can cause less distance for amy craft to get on which he wants to know how to find a way to discover how to get to it. The scientists want to disscuss how they want ot get to the surface which provides that the planet is 97 percent carbon dioxide which the clouds can corrosive sulfuric acid. But the temperatures are average over 800 degrees which it is extreme for humans that ecounter it which can get the spacecraft from landing of how it attracts to metal to crush it. If the author thinks that if there will be a way which they have in the insight the planet will have a safe advantage then they will discover its known source for a better planet to work on better inventions for getting to it which the challenges are to have a better study of the planet when it will become a safe enviroment for the planet which helps discover why is it the dangerous planet. The author wants to know how many years will they get to the planet if they have the right solution is they want more secrets make technolgy and human life more better so the author wants to encourage people to have better conditions for them and for the planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Social networking sites, for instance Facebook, are thought by some to have had a detrimental effect on individual people as well as society and local communities. However, while I believe that such sites are mainly beneficial to the individual, I agree that they have had a damaging effect on local communities. With regards to individuals, the impact that online social media has had on each individual person has clear advantages. Firstly, people from different countries are brought together through such sites as Facebook whereas before the development of technology and social networking sites, people rarely had the chance to meet or communicate with anyone outside of their immediate circle or community. Secondly, Facebook also has social groups which offer individuals a chance to meet and participate in discussions with people who share common interests. On the other hand, the effect that Facebook and other social networking sites have had on societies and local communities can only be seen as negative. Rather than individual people taking part in their local community, they are instead choosing to take more interest in people online. Consequently, the people within local communities are no longer forming close or supportive relationships. Furthermore, society as a whole is becoming increasingly disjointed and fragmented as people spend more time online with people they have never met face to face and who they are unlikely to ever meet in the future. To conclude, although social networking sites have brought individuals closer together, they have not had the same effect on society or local communities. Local communities should do more to try and involve local people in local activities in order to promote the future of community life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think author concludes story paragraph failed test winter dont get hibiscus spring get hibiscus try take taste pass", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think driveless cars should be developed. These cars can take the driving out of driving. They can prevent accidents before they begin. As stated by the article, \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\" This shows that even with half a million miles driven, the car is still safe.\n\nFirst, these cars prevent accidents before they happen. Once they are more developed you could sleep in your car while it travels down the rode. The article states, \"It uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surroundings.\" This technology can warn you when there is danger and keep you safe.\n\nNext, the driver can be interertained while waiting on their turn to drive. These companies are thinking of \"Bringing in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays.\" The article also states that \"Such displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over.\" This will keep the drivers entertained and safety a \"big concern.\"\n\nHowever, these cars cannot be driven without a human just yet. They cannot pull in or back out of a driveway. But there are many advances in technology happening today. \"Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020.\" These advancements aren't too far away.\n\nI think these cars should be developed. The advancements are underway and should be here by 2020. These cars can entertain you, keep you safe, and save you money on gas. Once they are driverless you can also sleep in them. I hope these cars are developed because I want one of my own.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, people has became too much dependent on smart technological gadgets.A fraction of individuals opine that, technological evolution has made humans too difficult, and to avoid this issue individuals should not use any kind of technical gadgets.I completely disagree with above notion.In the forthcoming paragraphs i have elobareted such reasons regarding it.\r\n\r\n The first and foremost technological advancements are very beneficial for human in their work-life.To elobaret this, multi national corporations uses electronic gadgets like, computers,printers,xerox machine and so on.which make a buisness person work burden less stressful.Computers are usefull in many ways like sending any Email,make presentation, making files, and so on.Furthermore smartphones taking the place of computer.In recent times smartphones are now equally smart as computer also they are easy to carry for people.People use mobile for call people,send massages,play videogame and listen music.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nAnother reason is technological evolution make people life smooth in many ways.For instance use washing machine, dishwasher, microwave oven, airconditioner are the gadgets which make a woman's life less tough.washing machine wash the clothes without any guidance as well as dishwasher clean the dishes and utensils.Infact with the help of our surrounding technology, we can concentrate on more meaningful work.Also this gadgets can give people spare time which they use to spend with their family.\r\n\r\n To conclude this issue, technological advancements make people life easy in buisness with gadgets like computer and laptops.And, also helpful for a person to do daily chores like washing clothes,plates and utensils with the help of gadgets like washing machine and dishwasher.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, violence on social media is becoming a serious problem that happening. Many people argue that this trend can damage the society, others claim that these factors can affect people's behaviour. In my opinion, I believe that this kind of violence does not affect our society. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, the programs that are being put on television should take measures, such that they do not include extreme violence. Some people do not have any plans on hurting people; however, if they are not mentally stable, they can be affected. Up to now, there are many examples for this serious problems. Many kids have been affected and murdered their friends, parents, ect, due to the violence scenes on TV and computer games. \r\n\r\nHowever, watching TV and playing computer games that have violence can have some advantages. Some people learned how to protect themshelves only by doing these. These activities are also a good way to reduce stress from work and school. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the government should share the knowledge about benefits and drawbacks of this trend. I strongly believe that other factors influence the people's behaviour in the society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many think that the public concerns and resources granted to wildlife conservation are being more than necessary. However, I do not concur with this point of view as thousands of animals and birds out there are still facing the threat of being erased from the Earth every year.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nAdmittedly, mankind’s awareness of the paramount importance of biodiversity has been on a rise recently. To begin with, stringent policies have been implemented to protect wild animals from being privately possessed by individuals whose main purposes are to exploit them for entertainment. In China, for example, pandas are only legally possessed by government bodies and whoever breaks the laws can be heavily fined or imprisoned. By conducting these principles, governments have alleviated the crisis of the panda population over the past few years. Had it not been for this implementation, pandas could have been put on the verge of extinction or would b even completely erased from the Earth.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nNevertheless, such deeds are insufficient because of the following reasons. The first one is that the government only allocates a certain amount of the national budget for wild animal protection, engendering a lack of financial support in providing medical aid to all species. This can be exemplified by the increasing number of extinct rhinoceroses in India whose inadequate finance acts as a deterrent in injecting chemicals into rhinoceroses’ horns to protect them from being hunted. As a result, those that are exempt from proper assistance may confront a higher probability of being killed by illegal poachers or hunters. \r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is true that some living species are receiving a high level of people’s attention and resources in certain places, but in others, this is not the case and more attempts need to be made for the sake of genetic diversity", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" focuses on the complex software that can analyze a face and even read emotions. The author claims this could be very useful in teaching, for being able to acount for the student's emotions could very well help the computer adapt and change the lesson more efficiently. While this could be true, there are a lot of questions that should be asked before this technology can be implemented, such as it's effectiveness and privacy.\n\nThe sixth paragraph says how the computer can know if you're happy or sad, and gives an example \"If you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad may follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\" This seems to be very helpful, but what if said person was smiling about something else? what if the person remembers something funny that happened the other day and suddenly they notice they keep getting uninteresting ads that pop up? There would be no way for the computer to tell if it was really the ad that made the person smile. Another issue is how it is used in class. Paragraph six states \"A classroom computer could recognize if a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" How would the computer tell what degree a pupil is confused? If a student looks a little confused, the computer may read this and respond as if the student was very confused, thus wasting the student's time with more help than they need. One more way to look at it is the privacy violations the software may bring. What if a student is opposed to a teacher being able to technologically and truthfully read the students emotions? does the computer take a log of the faces of the students? There is too many suspicious questions in regard to the morality and safety of the use of such software.\n\nThe software definitely shows promise. It seems to show how far we have come to understanding the relation to facial expressions and emotion. That being said, there is still too much to account for before this new technology can be integrated into classrooms, such as efficiency and morality.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What I think about driveless cars is that I think it will cause more accidents. The reason why I say is because today we have alot of accidents already with people not paying attention. So just think about how many we are going to have when people won't pay attention to their car's warnings. Also stated in the text people will try and blame the manufacturers because the driver wasn't paying attention. The invetion I feel like it would cause alot of unnessesary deaths.\n\nI do think though that sometimes it maybe the manufacturers' fault. The rason I say so is that they may have accidently put in a faulty part inside the car. Also the passage did state that the car was going to be made by Google, so it would be safe to assume that all the sensors would be on a wireless network of some kind. Wireless networks are known to be hacked or they shut down fpor some reason. This would most likely cause the cars' \"safe\" functions to not work as they are supposed to. Those are just some ways that smart car accident could be manufacturers' fault.\n\nLastly I think that the smart car could be a good idea for these reasons. The idea of letting the driver know of oncoming danger is crucial to parents and newbie drivers. It could actually save lives like telling people that ther is a truck coming or they are getting too close to a cliff. The text also said that it can tell drivers if ther is an accident,traffic stop, or anything in the way that would hinder the driver. I think that the idea in the text of it being on autopilot in some situations but will require the driver to drive sometimes. This would mean that the car will try to save the driver from dangerous situations, but it doesn't mean it voids the act of driving entirely. These were some pros that I thought were the best.\n\nAll-in-all I think it isn't that good of an idea just because so many bad things can lead to the deaths of many. If the companies making the smart cars tweaked a few of the ideas and made sure to test every car for faulty parts then I guess some people will be ok. The people that won't, which makes me still think is a bad idea, are the ones that don't pay attention or care for the well being of others. A idea that the text said was that they make the car record the driver to see if they are paying attention. Another idead that I think should go along with this is that the drivers that don't pay attention get severe punishments and have their licenses revoked. Even though I think this is a bad idea I am not against it, and I would like to see what inventions will be made in the near future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator,\n\nI think the voting should be based off of the most popular vote. When we go to vote all we're voting for is electors to vote for the president they choose. In my opinion the people of the United States of america should get a saying in who they want as president. If the voting was based off of the most popular vote, it would be fair to everyone.\n\nFor example in 2000 when Al gore recieved more individual votes then George W. Bush and Bush one ,that was unfair because more poeple wanted Al Gore as their president rather than George W. Bush. The president is going to be ALL the people in the United States president, not just those 29 electoral voters president. In 2012 Obama won the election because of the 61.7 percent of the electoral votes not by individual votes. If the voting wasn't based off of the electoral votes than maybe the united states wouldn't be so much in debt and have so many people not wanting Obama as our president. Maybe Romney would have been a better president and have took the U.S out of so much debt. After all, 53.1 percent of individual voters voted for Romney.\n\nRomney's chances of winning by electoral college were thin because since he was in the south he had no incentive to campaign heavily in those south states. Many voters don't vote because they know their vote won't matter at all when it comes to voting for the president of their choosing. If 35 million people vote in California, it would only count as 55 representatives. Is their really a point of them voting? no point at all.\n\nIn conclusion, if you really want a fair win for the president ,the president should be chosen by the people , not the electoral college. When i'm old enough to vote i hope it will be based off of who the poeple want as their prestident not the electoral college.\n\nSincerely, a student who's parents voted for Romney.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "THE CYCLIST SETTINGS HINDER HIM IN THE ESSAY ROUGH ROAD AHEAD THE CYCLIST IS IN THE DESERT IN THE SUMMER TIME WITH HARDLY ANY WATER HE IS TRYING TO FIND HIS WAY TO YOSEMITE BUT HE GETS LOST ALONG THE WAY BECAUSE SOME OLD MEN GAVE HIM BAD DIRECTIONS DURING THIS TIME HE IS RIDING HIS BICYCLE FOR MILES AND MILES IN THE HEAT OF THE SUMMER HIS THOUGHTS OF THIRST GET IN THE WAY OF HIM TRYING TO CONTINUE ON TO FIND YOSEMITE I BELIEVE THAT IF THE CYCLIST WAS IN A COOLER ENVIRONMENT THEN THINGS WOULD HAVE BEEN DIFFERENT BECAUSE HIS SETTINGS WERE SORT OF A DISTRATION TO HIM", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The purpose of museums is a topic which sparks great controversy. Although I understand why some people support the view that a museum should be an entertainment venue, I still believe that it is for educational purposes.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, it is argued that tourist attractions such as museums should be enjoyable destinations. Firstly, in terms of the economy, museums should have some interesting activities or decorations in order to attract more visitors. Not all people are interested in learning the academic details of some artefacts or the origin of some creatures. Moreover, by redeveloping the museum for entertainment, visitors can feel more interested in acquiring new knowledge. It is undeniable that in recent years, the government are trying to make study be more enjoyable so that people can enhance their performance in learning.\r\n\r\nNevertheless, I am in favour of the opinion that museums are built for preserving old values as well as being a lesson to modern people. First, the aim of any exhibition is to teach people about what they do not know. In other words, if people concentrate too much on entertainment or innovation, this will somehow devaluate the ultimate goal. Moreover, museums are also the places that preserve many important and unique exhibits that have appeared on the earth. For example, the most expensive painting Mona Lisa which was drawn by Leonardo da Vinci is conserved at the Louvre museum in Paris, France.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, despite understanding why some people believe that museums are for entertainment, I still hold the view that knowledge is more important. It will help to pass and maintain our historical values.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If we have cars that can drive them self gas would be rendered useless. Cars that can drive them selfs would relie on energy instead of gas. The reason we dont have driverless cars yet is because we dont have the material that is required to do so.\n\nIf we make cars that drive them self then one day we humans are going top forget how to drive and when the cars stop driving them self what would we do then. What would happen if you were in a situation where you had to drive the car if needed but you couldn't remember how to do it. If you had to a driverless car that you had to drive to the store or anything like that you would have to walk instead of the car taking you because you dont know how to drive anymore.\n\nWhat would happen if the cars alarm system didn't work and it got stolen you would'nt have any way to get it back. Most people don't think about these things when they really should. What would happen if your car didn't stop when it was suppose to you can't blame that on the car. What if the car required something special who would replace it a mechanic or a scientist? Driverless cars can be dangerous because many thing could go wrong with it and no one would know how to fix it with ease.\n\nOne more thing to take note about the car is how much would it cost to buy or fix it. Everybody needs to know that if thet want one. What if the cars got recalled would they get their mony back or no? Many people would sue the persone who sold them the car if they didnt get their money back if they got recalled. How many would be sold when they finnished the project because they are going to have to test it before anything.\n\nWould it be worth buying probably and I'm not saying you shouldn't because its a good idea but whoever is making this car needs to thing about the consiquinces that follow. When the car gets releisted there could be problems with the car that the manufactuer didn't see. the person who is making this driverless car needs to test it him/her self before anybody buys the car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever patient I especially one main time life That main time life I waiting dog babies My dogs name mae three years old full blooded pitbull started took early check The said good pulled mom side My heart pumping faster ever usually pull parents side I means something bad My mom screamed rejoiced I ran screamed CAPS going babiesthen I scremed We went got dixixe took bark play night got steak supper The next months going faster ever Well least seemed like Now get bigger The said six months atleast puppies its aready five half mom said milk now I told sister I wouldnt doubt said went took inside night The next day I getting ready school mom said hey sweetheart I called said wouldnt surprised puppies today I said oh cool lets rush shes going lot right then said goodbyes I went bus stop The bus ride usually takes like hour school today felt like thirty minutes The day going fast Before I knew I home I walked front door mom said oh time honey babies ran garage faster ever laying blanket I jotted licked hand I told everything going alright I went inside get bowl water soft food I come back already two puppies It took hour two another hour two Turns girls Now eight dogs house The mom mae eight little girl puppies cutie bootsier Tinker bella harmony melony I love dogs", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is undeniable that museums are places that are full of knowledge and full of history. Some people believe that museums are the places for fun however, some people think that the purpose of museums is to educate. In my opinion, museums are the places, which enhance our knowledge by their diversity and also educate us. I think this way for two reasons, which I will explore in this essay. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, the diversity, which we used to see in a museum is incredible. Placement of different cultures depiction at one place in itself is an outstanding notion, which helps us to know about the history of many things around the world. My own personal experience is a compelling example of this, as in my final semester I have to submit a project on ancient culture in the college. I found the museum, the best place to do my research work on the history project. It helped me to understand the ancient culture and people very easily. Hence, with good ,grades I completed my project on time. \r\n\r\nFurthermore, some activities in museums are very much attractive for the children such as short movies to enhance their knowledge with high-quality sound. For ,kids this will a learning with fun, and they feel motivated to go there again and again. Some displays are also very attractive with lights and sound both for knowledge and entertainment. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe that museums are the best place to know about our history, culture, and people of a particular time or era. Everyone should have a visit to such a knowledgeable place and children must see them both for fun activities and for the knowledge.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The diagram illustrates the life cycle of the honey bee.\nIn essence, a honey bee's life cycle takes roughly seven weeks. Regarding to the diagram, is composed of only 6 diferent images, even thought, it describes with detail all different stages of a bees life cycle: from its birth until it reaches maturity.\nBeginning with the cycle, it starts when the bee larvae rests inside and egg, which will probably be attached to a wall inside the honneycomb. 10 days later, eggs will hatch and a baby bee will sprang out. Within the next 21 days, the bee will grow in size. It is remarkable the fact that nymphs moult 3 times as they grow. After a month of growth, the bee will become a young adult. Finally, bees are consider mature, four days after they reach adulthood. As for reproduction, female bees lay 1 or 2 eggs every 3 days.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We have two neighbor planets Venus and Mars. But Venus is the closest to Earth in density, size and sometimes the closest in distance. Also Venus is called Earth's twin even though they are a lot differant.\n\nBut some people think that if we can get past all the bad weather sometime in the fucher we can go on it. We have sent space crafts their but none of them have lasted longer than a couple hours. The planet is very hard to study but, scientist think long ago that Venus was like Earth with large bodys of water and could suport life.\n\nThe plants weather is horrifiyng constant lightning, earthquakes, and even volcanos erupting. But their is silicon carbide that has been tested and represents Venus like chaos so scientist can study a little bit of how maybe Venus weather is and how it works. The atmosphear is 97% and with the clouds with high corrosive sulfuric acid in the atmosphear. With all of these varibles it would be rally hard to study. In the artical and like I said earlier long ago scientist think that Venus was alot like Earth and it might be possible to live on.\n\nIn the futer scientist beleive that we can study Venus better and understand how it works right now it is know as the hardest planet to study because of the condishions. And the planet has a rocky suface with valleys and, mountains, and craters.\n\nThe authors artical is good on how we should care about going and exploring Venus. And learning what happens and why and maybe even sometime in the futer living on Venus will happen, because it is so similar to Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Going library always struggle someone faced many different genres books That isnt choice faced either There music magazines Just within books many different subjects catagories kids books biographies autobiographies etc On top alot different types music fit everyones different styles Some people might say books andor music could found offensive appropriate But meterial library I nt think problem staying away things might find offensive Therefore I think certain books music kept away shelves due self opinions There multiple different books library one might find one book offensive doesnt mean book pulled shelves The reason someone else could find book good resource need something People know looking library think book offensive could keep self checking book This problem similar others around world For example go mall shops know like go stay away ones dont like find offensive due items sell That doesnt mean store banned mall Thats people might find store interesting want purchase thier items I think reasoning goes different books meterial library A way library could adress problem pulling theses books shelves maybe taking survey thier local visitors thier town asking think different genres books different styles music After taking survey library could seperate items different catagories sections within library This could help problem tremendously due fact people could stay away sections might find offensive find looking alot easier I know I sit read im always caught reading popular subjects I like read subjects murder files drug bust biographies autobiographies And comes music I listen wide variety music hiphop country alternative rock etc Some people find wierd unusual goes show everyone wants read listen thing Therefore library keep wide selection different meterial keep everyone happy", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "An increasing number of people are becoming crucial too fat. There are controversies recommended to solve this problem with thriving food. In my opinion, I disagree, because to solve this problem people need a total change our eating habits and exercise regularly.\r\n\r\nThe solutions for this problem need a total change in all of our eating habits. We should revise the contents of all of our daily foods and ensure that it provides us with all the basic nutrients and all of our heath-requirements for example, fruits, vegetables, milk, fish, meat. \r\n\r\n Moreover, we should add the exercise to our daily routine, as the doctor recommend that we should practice walking daily for a minimum of 10 minutes. Also, we should implement this concept in our new generation to raise a good healthy family. The governments should have a great role on this by organising a campaign that would advertise for a healthy lifestyle and offer places for free walking and a sports centre at a low cost.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, obesity would always be a common heath issue unless we change our lifestyle in terms of healthy and balanced diet and good physical exercise.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It has been said that increasingly people in some countries are becoming interested in looking out about the history of the home or building they attend. This topic will describe the reasons behind this approach and explain the method of finding this informationinformation. This essay will discuss these tendencies of finding the history of the house followed by examples for its benefit on people’s psychology.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, recently, human getting more interesting in knowing small details so, having information about the house’s history contribute to filling the missing gaps in the individuals brain. It is also can utilize to explore the problems of this property which make it easier in the future to fix these issues. For instance, if they found out that these places were renovated, that can tell them it might need some other construction work. \r\n\r\nSecondly, some houses need insect treatment as they can have s ome harmful bugs like bedbugs or some other type. These bugs can cause some diseases plus it is not peaceful to have them around you. For this reason, knowing ahead of time about the department's history can save such fundamental work for the owner from being in the house without having a clue about the damage that would show up in near future. This information can be accessed by doing some web research on Google and looking up the date of building the house.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, everyone has the right to know the history of the house or department that they need to buy so knowing the right information at the right time can save people time and money for their own advantage.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The limiting of car usage can be very useful in todays society. The emmissions of gas and diesel vehicles are at the top of the chart when it comes to pollution of the atmosphere. But not only pollution, it could cause a lot of people to become a little more healthier if we walked, ran or biked somewhere in stead of taking a five minute drive to the convient store.\n\nIn many major cities of the world, air pollutants have became a danger to the health of not only our lungs but also to the earth. The gasses that are emitted build up in our atmosphere making a thick barrier that traps other gasses inside that are intended to be set free. Paris, France had one-hundred and fourty-seven micrograms of particulate matter per cubic meter.\n\nA lot of citizens of these large cities are combating the pollution problem by putting bans on cars and car usage. But most are cutting back due to there not being a ban where they live. They choose to walk, run, bike, skate, etc... This creates a healthier way of life for these citizens as well as saving the planet. The are saving our world just one step at a time.\n\nSo as proved in these articles, there are so many postive things that can come from the restriction of automobiles. Including The preservation of Earth itself.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper come attention computers positive negative effects people In past negative effects people In survey taken magazines people negative effects computers Inmy opinion I think comuters negative effect people First people interacting family friends important interactions people When computer really interacting You sit staring screen In survey taken people computer interacting people around Parents nt se etheir kids much always computer Parents would love see kids move Interacting family friends healthy Computers take away fromhanging family friend Secondly people nt get enjoy nature People computer might go outside involved computer Stay one room thing books people need fresh air learning nature nature If dont enjoy nature dont know going onNAture around us would miss survey taken local magazine people computer While people enjoy computer nature Lastly people spending much time computers less time exercising Exercise important mind body Our bodies need stay healthy fit The lack exercise increasing fast The people get computers people exercise America weight already join People computers long become weight People rather play computer got exercise healthy body Dr local doctor seen people become weight exercise much used He says computers provide exercise He recommends people use computers less computers In conclusion I think computer negative effect My three reasons people interacting friends family enjoying nature getting less exercise I negative effects people important decision", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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