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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "IN CONTEMPORARY ERA, PROGRAMMABLE ROBOTICS ARE PROLIFERATING AT AN ALARMING RATE. THERE IS A GROWING PERCEPTION IN THE SOCIETY THAT ALL OCCUPATIONS WILL BE CARRIED OUT BY ROBOTS IN THE NEAR FUTURE. WHILE, I BELIEVE THAT MOST OF THE MEINAL AS WELL AS REGOROUS JOBS ARE LIKELY TO BE HEADED BY ARTIFICIAL INTELLEGENCE; HOWEVER, OTHERS THAT REQUIRE HUMAN PRESENCE WILL REMAIN IN THE HANDS OF HUMAN ONLY. THIS ESSAY WILL DISCUSS ABOUT THE REASONS SUPPORTING MY OPINION.\n\nTO EMBARK ON, ROBOTS MAY REPLACE HUMAN BEINGS IN ALL THOSE JOBS WHICH DONOT REQUIRE ANY KIND OF SPECIFIC SKILLS AND EXPERIENCE. THE MAIN REASON BEHIND THIS TREND IS, EMPLOYING ROBOTS FOR SIMPLE TASKS WILL CONSIDERABLY REDUCE THE COST OF EMPLOYING THE MANPOWER. IN ADDITION, THE TOUGH JOBS THAT MAY JEOPARDISE THE LIVES OF HUMANS, WILL DEFENATELY BE CARRIED OUT BY MACHINES. COAL MINING, FOR EXAMPLE, IS A CUMBERSOME TASK FOR A LIVING CREATURE, WHEREAS, SUCH THREATENING JOBS WILL BE COMPLETED BY COMPUTER OPERATED MACHINE WITHOUT BEING CHANCE OF ANY MENANCE. THUS, IT IS CLEARLY VISIBLE THAT ROBOTS CAN FACILITATE THE INDUSTORY THROUGH MULTIPLE WAYS.\n\nON THE OTHER SIDE, ADMITTEDLY, THOSE OCCUPATIONS THAT DEMAND HUMAN CONTACT AND THEIR ACTIVE INVOLVEMENT WILL NEVER LET DOWN. SIGNIFICANCE OF HUMANS IN SOME JOBS SUCH AS EDUCATION, PSYCHOLOGY, MEDICINES WILL REMAINAS IT AS FOR AGES. LACKING IN EXPRESSIONS, ABSENCE OF WORD COMMAND, AND BEING NON EMOTIONAL, ARE THE FACORTS PROVING ROBOTS INCOMPETENT FOR SOME SPECIFIC JOBS. AS PER EDUCATIONISTS,THE STUDY CONTENT TAUGHT BY SOME SOFTWARE PROGRAMMS SEEMS JUST LIKE SEDENTARY TALKS DUE TO ABSENCE OF EXPRESSIONS, WHICH WILL NOT BE AS EFFECTIVE AS EXPLAINED BY A TEACHER, WHO, NOT ONLY PARTICIPATE ACTIVELY, BUT ALSO FOSTER NEW LIFE IN STUDENTS THROUGH VARIETY OF GESTURES. HENCE, ITCAN BE SAID THAT ALL JOBS ARE NOT SUITABLE FOR ROBOTS.\n\nTO SUM UP, DESPITE OF THE FACT THAT TECHNOLOGY HAS INCORPRATED ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENT IN DAY TO DAY LIFE, NONTHELESS, DENIABLE FACT IS THE IMPORTANCE OF MANPOWER WILL NEVER BE COMPLETELY OMITTED FROM THE WORLD.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": ".\n\nRecent advancements, in technology and transportation in particular, are reshaping our world in an unprecedented manner. Nowadays, it is not unusual for people to work abroad. Most expatriates relocate their families to the countries they work at. Some people argue that this phenomenon negatively affects children, however, I agree with those who believe the opposite is true.\n\nThose who think that relocating children to a new place is undesirable do so for many reasons. Their most common argument is the negative impact of moving on a child’s personality. There is no doubt that living in a different community comes with its challenges, especially to young people, as they get exposed to behaviours, actions and customs they might not be familiar with. As a result, children could possibly feel a lack of stability and some confusion. It is also likely that their patriotic feelings and sense of belonging to their home country could weaken as they would miss many opportunities to celebrate their national events.\n\nNevertheless, I firmly believe that opinion to be ludicrous, as it seems that getting exposed to a new culture is beneficial in many ways. It fosters young people social and emotional capabilities. Moreover, children living abroad have better opportunities to lean and practice new languages. Mastering more than one language improves not only their intellectual development, but also their opportunities in acquiring better jobs in the future. According to a recent study published by the University of Chicago, competency in more than one language increases employment chances on average by 200%.\n\nIn conclusion, I strongly believe that living in a different country positively affects children in all aspects. Acquiring new languages, and an open minded and tolerant personality are just few examples of the many possible benefits", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These four passages \"In german suburb , life goes on without cars \" , \"Paris bans driving due to smog , \" Car -free day is spinning into a hit hit in bogota and \" The end of car culture . Talk about life with out cars , how that benefits us and how it makes people feel.\n\nSource one talks about life in Vauban , germany and how cars arent allowed in the suburbs . If so then you need to pay a fee . Not using cars is better for the environment and makes people feel better about themselfs . \"When i had a car i was always tense . Im much happier this way \" stated heidrun walter . You see more people outside , riding boikes , and children playing . 70 percent of people in vauban dont own cars , and 57 percent of people sold their cars so they could live there . Also in source two it talks about the banning of cars in order to clear the air of the global city . Anyone who refused to stop using their cars were fined . Paris had more smog than other european capitals . In source three People of the city bogota , colmbia , hd a free day also in order to get rid of smog . People hiked , took buses , or skated places .\"its a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution .\" Stated businessman carlos arturo . Improvements have also been made to the city . such as new side walks ,less traffic,parks , and sports centers .People are way happier . In source four it talks about how americans are becoming less interested in cars . Sociologists believe that it will have a positive impact on carbon emissions . Limiting car usage is better for the environment and the people who live in it . Its better for people to ride bikes and go walking . I think that if everyone would continue to stop driving then the world would be a better place .People would live longer , less violence and more happiness .\n\nIn conclusion , driving cars can cause a big probem in people lives . things would be easier if everyone quit driving all together .More and more people each year dont get their licence or just stop driving period . Thats how things should be .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine that you sitting in a car and not having to do anything but relax yourself. Imagine watching movies and do whatever you want in a car without having to worry about looking out for cars, getting in an accident, or having to move your leg constantly. This is when driveless car comes in. Developing driveless cars will make our lives much easier. Pollution would not be much of a problem anymore. We won't have to worry about fuel price or having to take a driving test.\n\nDriveless cars are cars that are made from trustable computers. Just like the name, driveless cars doesn't need human to drive it. It could drive itself but when it requires human skills, it will notify it. When the driver needs to take over the driveless car, there will be a headsup display. The driveless cars could take you anywhere you like without you having to worry about having to drive long distance or getting in an accident. All you have to do is relax and when your skills are needed, take control over and fix it.\n\nDeveloping driveless cars will help prevent air from polluting. People will drive less and less cars will be develop. If we creat more driveless cabs rather than creating cars, more people would want to take the driveless cab. When most people in the world are driving their own cars, every years the air is more polluted. By creating driveless cars, we are helping the air from being polluted by carbon dioxide.\n\nHave you ever worried about fuel prices? There won't be anyone who does not worry about fuel price in this world. The price could go up or it could go down in a day. By developing driveless cars, you would not have to worry much about fuel price. According to the text, it saids that driveless cars would use half the fuel of today's taxis. Not having to worry about fuel price means alot.\n\nDeveloping driveless cars will make our lives much easier. We won't have to worry about having to focus on the road, worrying about the fuel price, air being polluted, or getting into an accident. Would you rather have a car that you can relax yourself in or a car that needs your attention?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that we should not have driveless cars because it could cause alot of problems like car accidents or people walking across the street and getting hurt. I think that the people that are making these cars arev going to fast I think they need to slow down a little bit and think about what could happen if something goes wrong with the driveless car. i think it would help kind of because what if there was a little inciddent in the car the person could just let the car drive by it self and the person can see whats going on.\n\nI think the law should wait on making this decision on wether driveless cars should be legal in the u.s. like what if the drive less car ran in to someone on the street is it the drivers fault or the cars fault?its already legal in 3 states. I think the lawmakers should wait until making it legal in other states so they can see if these driveless cars would do any damage to anyone.\n\nI think the driveless car is not ready to be selled into other states yet. i think that this will take the fun out of driving because everybody wants to learn how to drive even me. but i think driveless cars wouldnt work yet. i think they need to wait until they get better technology and keep running many test until they get the results they need.\n\nSaftey is very importand in this article. i dont think driveless cars can hanle that type of responsiblity on driving\n\non the highway or in traffic jams. drivers should still keep there eyes on the road if something goes wrong. like having to go through work zones or around accidents. in my oppinion i wouldnt by the car because i would want my kids driving there own cars. i would want them doing it by them self other than having a computer do it for you.\n\nthe law should not make drivless car legal until 2025 because we would have better technology and have a smarter computer where it can think more like a human when driving and having the skills when on the road.\n\ni also would wonder what would happen if the car got into an accident ,\n\nwill it cost more to get it fix ? So thats my oppinion on why driveless cars should not be legal in the united states.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggests\n\nthat studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it present.Why does the author suggests this the author is saying Venus is refereed as the Earth twin because it has a lot in common the only promble is that Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system.Astronomers are fascinated by Venus becasue it may well once have been the most Earth like plabet in our solar system.Scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up closeand personal despite the risk.Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value ,not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itslef.\n\nAstronomers are fascinated by Venus becasue it may well once have been the most Earth like plabet in our solar system.Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported varios froms of life, just like Earth.Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth.The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includdes familiar features such as valleys,mountains,and craters.\n\nScientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up closeand personal despite the risk.Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many stroms,a vehicle hovering Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out their way.At at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit ,but the air pressure would be close to that sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed Earth levels .not easy conditions ,but survivable for humans.\n\nStriving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value ,not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itslef. Human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\n\nWhy the author suggests taht studying Venus is worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.The plante surface is like Earth.Solar power be plentiful and radiation would not exceed Earth levels.Human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear, Mr. senator\n\nFebuary,3 ,2015\n\nElectoral colleges,what do they do for us? How is this system useful? It's not, the electoral system we use today is mind boggling. Why do we evan use it? Sir the only good outcome is that we do not have to count as much. If we were to use a regular system it would make the people feel as if they were in charge. So many people all think that we should do away with the electoral colleges.\n\nThe electoral colleges would be good but what if there is a tie? Should we run another election? I mean who cares right you think of how likely that sounds but if 9,246 pople in Ohio and Hawaii voted the oppisite we would of tied. There are 538 electoral colleges and to tie you would get 269.60 percent of votes would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now.\n\nTo win a election you have to have 270 electoral colleges. The voters sometimes get confused on the electors and vote for the wrong candidate. Some electors follow the winner takes all so they dont evan bother with some of the states. The electors that have magority becomes either republican or democrate. Each canididate running for president is either a republican or a democrate.\n\nSir the electoral colleges are bad because we can have a tie, the people can get confused, and the system does not work for the people . People want to pick there own president. Also the electoral college only helps us were we don't have to do alot of math. These are the reasons i feel that the electoral gollege is no good.\n\nThank you for hearing my opinion, sincerly ~ PROPER_NAME.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We should go to Venus even with its dangers. We humans could find out so many things if we do. There might be animal life or even oceans with life in it. We could learn what the ground texture is like. Even learn abiut the gases that are on the planet.\n\nIf we find life on Venus it would prove that their are other life out there. There could be life under the ground but we wouldn't know that cause we cant even get to the surface of the plant. If there is life on the plant we could learn how they world by watching. Maybe even with pictures. With oceans we could find if there are organisms in it. It would prove that there is a different kind of life on the planet.\n\nWith learning about the ground we could see what minarals it holds. If its the same kind we have on earth or if there are ones we dont even know of. If we could grow plants in the soil or if there are plants growing in it. If we go under the ground there could be worm like creatures or even caves. Who knows how big the caves could be or what could be in it.\n\nNow with getting to Venus. We would need a ship or rover that could with stand the pressure of the plant. One that could maybe could go under ground and have something stick out from the ground every once in awhile. Maybe even one that could stay in the water of the plant. If we can build a ship that can with stand all of Venuses wearher. Than we could study it freely.\n\nThis is why i think we should go to Venus. Or make a ship to Venus. With Venus we could learn many things. Find minarals we dont have on earth. Maybe even find more simalaerities between are planets.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "MONTH_DAY_YEAR\n\nGoodmoring senator before I start , I would like to ask how are you doing and how's your family. I hope everybody health is great and family problems. Today I want to talk to you about some little problem that's not going as well as I thought it was going to go. Electoral College is not a good idea for us citizens. Because everybody in this country that works and come from another country , should be able to vote for their President. The Electoral College consists of 583 electors. A majority of 270 electoral vote is required to elect the President.\n\nThe presidential election is held every four years on the Tuesday after the first Monday in November. Us citizens think that's a better idea. Don't you think? The presidential election most have a \"winner-take-all\" system that awards all electors to the winning presidental candidate. And after the presidential election, yout governor prepares a \"Certificate of Ascertainment\". Listing all of the candidates who ran for President in your state along with the names of their respective electors. The electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party.\n\nAccording to Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole they agreed on abolishing the electoral college . The electoral college won the popular vote but lost the presidency over 60% of voters. What that means? 60% of the people didn't agree with the electoral college. The single best argument against the electoral college is what they might call the disaster factor. Us the American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century. The state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors , and that those electors could always defy the will of the people.\n\nAt the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all system in each states they know they have no chance of winning , focosing only on the tight races on the \"swing\" states. During the 2000 compaign seventeen states did not see the canditates at all. Including Rhode Island and South Carolina. Also voters in 25 of the lqrgest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad. The electoral college is unfair, outdated , and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertionw without much basis in reality. Bob Dole was right. Abolish the elctoral college!\n\nIn conclusion, The Electoral College is widely regarded as an anachronism , a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner. There are five reasons for retaining the Electoral College despite its lack of democratic pedigtee; all are practical reasons, not liberal or conservative reasons. This is all I wanted to tell you , I hope you listen to what I'm trying to tell you. I know I am not the only one that thinks like this. If you would like to contact me back you could email me at EMAIL_ADDRESS. Thankyou and have a great day!\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars does sound nice but it may not be the best thing for us. People may take the driverless cars for advantage. Driverless cars allow you to drive without really driving the car. This sounds wonderful but have we really took everything into consideration.\n\nFirst of all people may think that since you arent really driving they can take this oppertunity to do the things they werent able to do when they are driving the car, such as do their make-up, or talk on the phone, or even text. \"The human driver must remain alert and ready to take over when the situation requires.\" The driverless car isnt really driverless. The driverless cars still require drivers and people to pay attention.\n\nSecondly the driverless car may have an manufactorual mess up while in the middle of driving. If this happens will the car be able to alert the driver then? Will the driver be able to take control of the situatuion? \"Wouldn't the driver get bored waiting for their turn to drive?\" Waiting on your turn to drive might get very boring. There's nothing to do, you don't get to control the car in any way and it may get frustrating not being able to do anything.\n\nWhat would happen if you got into an accident? \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?\" The answer is they dont really know, you would probably have to go through a lot of work and judicial cases just to be able to insure that it wasn't your fault. Would you put your life in the hands of a man made machine that you have no control over? These machines can go wrong at any giving moment in multiple ways.\n\nSure driverless cars are cool but will it keep us safe 24/7? Do we have all the legal stuff aline to continue the production of the driverless cars? Are humans responsible enough to have driverless cars? These are questions that we should take into consideration when driverless cars come into play.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You ever been with someone that thinks something true but really not. Well I have. And one thing that people think is real is the face on Mars was created by aliens. But clearly the face is natural landform. So today im going to give three reasons why the face on Mars is a natural landform on Mars.\n\nWell the first reason the face on Mars is just natural landform because people have checked back since to see more evidence. For example on April 5,1998 Mars Global Surveyorflew over Cydionia. Michale Malin and his Mars Obiter Camera team took a picture ten imes better than the viking photos. Than they put the picture on the web whene revealing a natural landform. No alien monument after all but even after that people still wasn't satisfied enough so sooner or later they did it again.\n\nSo on April 8, 2001 Mars Global Surveyor went close to Mars for a second look . They rolled the spacecraft25 degrees to the center of the face in the field of veiw. Then Malin team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera maximum resolution. Each pixel in 2001 image spans 1.56 meters compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best1976 viking photo. You can see in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixek size. So if thats the case if there was any objects like spaceships on the ground or egyptian style pyramids or even small shacks we could see what they are.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The number of couples that choose to have children at a much later age tend to do so because they would have time for their relationship and careers. However there are both pros and cons to this decision.\r\n\r\nFisrtly, the advantages of concieving much later in life allows couples to establish themselves and their careers. By doing this, it ensures that they are both emotionally and financially stable before taking on the responsibility of a child. For instance, a couple in their early 20s would be less equipped with their finances to meet the demands of parenthood. In contrast, a professional couple in their mid 30s to 40s would have had a rather comfortable sum to ensure that they can take on the responsibitly easily. In addition, couples would have time to travel the world and explore without having to worry about their children. This gives them a sense of freedom and also, they can spend that time to build their relationship. These could be reasons why people would prefer having children at a later age.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the disadvantages of a late parenthood might bring about medical complications. It is a known fact that the risks of complications rises with age in both genders. These, could range from miscarriages to irreversible defects to the foetus. Research has shown that women aged 35 years of age and above are more likely to experience a miscarriage, then compared to a women age 30 and below. Also, men experience a decrease in their testostrone levels with age and because of this, makes concieving chances lower. The medical reasons could be a detterant for people to not wait for a great difference in age gap as well.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, given that there is freedom and financially before planning out parenthood, we should instead avoid the medical complications that arise from late pregnancy. I strongly believe, that in order to be fair to both ourselves and the child, we should plan for parenthood as soon as we can in order to avoid the painful process that entails a huge age difference and complications.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I believe computers positive If think actually help learn different programs Say need tutoring advice basically find computer even little kid I m absolutly sure websites programs trust re fun educational You know people complaining computers taking away time exercising inteacting family friends Well family living somewheres else You chat And also execise computer I m sure keep reading ll know I think re positive Having trouble school Are blaming computers Well change If re able prove people computers help us learn educationaly people might actually think computers nt bad technology coming days arent bad I m pretty sure sort tutoring program even college online Now theres something look Do kid younger friend even younger brother sister Are always looking games play Well I m sure fun learning games websites computer So re fun think much re learning It s real fun way learning You imagine re learning well re school Do family live far away nt see much Well computer posibily stay touch You guys chat check see everyone It s perfect way stay touch Want know would also good way connect webcam You nt one s suggestion So way get talk see Is nt cool I nt know I think Well ve heart I ve say I think computers positive I hope think If really think nt bad They re actually helpful Thank", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Computers They anything But think really helping us Yes research physically re You spend less time exercising interacting family friend impact computers lives future Exercise necessary lives People need get something front computer screen says fact one hour exercise good health However two three wont Thats way I lazy unactive worthless overweight As result computers blame Are relatives face face computers Computers let us things like video chat relatives go facebook myspace chat email The problem lazy You could getting relatives live see waste enemy going travel agency internet instead say travel agent people havent seen relatives states years People need go computers games hows computer You dont even take This bad People need old fashoned way use computer daily People lose jobs computers Everything made simple theres need hire secretary employ office personals Factories They dont need many people Computerized take jobs quicker easier cheaper They one day take Thats good In conclusion Computers seemed like best thing hit earth really really think prevents exercising seeing friends family cam impact lives bad way I hope see I m coming", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I aegre waf evansmant ov tnachnolage The evansmant ov tnachnolige halp fined kohar froi alnsas Tnanchnolage waf ont ot wod go moon Tnachnologe evans maech The people tnacholege frchr fror good ov live Famas invanyor ues tnacholage leki lena orde dvanse fling mashine Tnachologe grat", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Turning 16 is one of the best times of your life because you get your license, your own new car and you dont have to rely on your parents to take you every where but, instead of getting a new car, why not get a brand new stylish bike? Millions and millions of people drive their car to provide them transportation to get to work, errands, school and little did they know much car usage really effects not only our planet but, ourselves too. Limiting car usage is a very effective way to eliminate stress, lower air pollution, reduce traffic, and save money to make the world a better and healthier place to live.\n\nTwo of the many advantages of limiting car usage is it eliminates stress and lowers air pollution. Being stressed is very unhealthy and a simple way to limit your stress is by limiting car usage. A media trainer named Heidrun Walter stated, \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way(Source 1).\" If having a car is stressful, then ride a bike, or take a bus that still takes you from point A to B, just like a car does. Car usage is bad for our planet when it comes to air polution. \"...Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States(Source 1).\" Using other options besides taking a car would reduce greenhouse gas emissions. Limiting car usage is a happier life and healthier living.\n\nSaving money and reducing traffic are other advantages of limiting car usage. Traffic is always a problem when trying to get where you need to go. \"Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog...[The smog] rivaled Beijing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world(Source 2).\" There's always so many people rushing to get to work in the morning and your car only moves a couple feet per minute from all the backed up traffic but, if there wasn't so many cars on the road, that would never be an issue. Saving money is always an advantage especially in today's economy, and all you have to do is limit your car usage. \"As of April 2013, the number of miles drive per person was nearly 9 percent below the peak and equal to where the country was in January 1995(Source 4).\" The reasoning behind that is because people \"could not afford new cars, and and the unemployed weren't going to work anyway(Source 4).\" Riding with a friend is always a way to save money and limit traffic too.\n\nCar usage is a big problem in today's society. Eliminating stress, lowering air pollution, reducing traffic, and saving money are all advantages of limiting car usage that will lead our planet to a healthier and better living. When your parents surprise you with that pimped out bike instead of a car on your birthday, just remember all the beneficial reasons of limiting car usage and plus, you won't have to pay car insurance.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Mona Lisa is one of the most popular paintings to exist. Until recently, no one knew what emotions she was feeling. Now, Facial Action Coding System has unvailed the truth. According to the article, \"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\"\n\nThe use of this technology, FACS, to read the emotional expressions of students in a classrom is valuble because the computer can make the student become engaged in the lesson.\n\nThe use of FACS in classrooms will make kids become engaged in their lessons. The computer will see through the webcam if a student becomes uninterested or confused. Then the computer will modify that lesson for that student, like a teacher would do. Students will enjoy learning and will learn the best way that works for them.\n\nHowever, teachers can argue that FACS will take their jobs. Dr. Huang said, \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" Meaning the computer software could do what teachers can do. And eventually replace the need to have teachers.\n\nIn conclusion, using FACS in classrooms will benefit students tremendously.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After I read this article, I already have my own opnions about this situation. Many people would think that if they do not need to drive everyday, and they do not need to focus on if there are some drangerous things in front of the car, these will make their life become easier. I know it is so great, but every thing has the two sides, there still has something problems about the driverless cars.\n\nNowadays, more and more people are use car to do any things they want. Cars make their life become much\n\nmore easier. So people have an idea about if we have a dirverless cars, what thing will happend, whether or not these cars will bring us more benefits. From my aspect, I disagree wiht it now. Let's imagine, if we go to the very steep mountains, and the zone which have a lot of swamps, whether or not these car can make quick responding in the dangerouse situations. Safty is the most important thing in our life. I think we do not have an ability to produce a very perfect driverless car.\n\nIn the other hand, driving is kind of skill in out life. Many people still interested in drive cars, they like have a competition sometimes. There are some beneficial things about drive car by ourselves. Practicing driving car is kind of way to help us try our best to focus on something. And some people will feel better if they drive cars by themselves, because driverless cars will make them feel like that someone controls their lives, then make them uncomfortable.\n\nFrom the articles, some interesting opinions also sounds like good for us. Such as develop the smarter road, and \" traffic Jam Assistant\". Those are more possible to produce, although some problems still between them.\n\nIf I will choose the way to develop our car, I would not choose Diverless cars. The little personal reason is that I have even drive, so I think it will be funny if I practise more, and become a good diver.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is it crazy that now there is a Facial Action Coding System that can identify human emotion in the world? Having a human emotion detected technology system is a bold positive choice in a classroom. A strong device that can read emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because, teachers can get feed back on their students about certain assignments, peers can understand one another easier, and overall a better environment as a school. One device easily has three reasons why it would be a great investment for students and teachers.\n\nReason one, The Facial Action Coding System is positive for a classroom because, teachers can get feed back about certain assignments based off students emotions that the system detects. In the text Dr. Huang predicts that \"A classroom could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, (par 6)\".\n\nThis been said, the evidence above is reactions you can get out of students and in the long run prevent. Not only does the system help the teachers by detecting these emotions, FACS will aslo benefit the students because the assignment or classroom function will most likely change due to the results.\n\nReason two, The Facial Action Coding System comes to benefit within peers themselves. The author states that \" Dr. Paul Eckman, creator of FACS has classified six basic emotions- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness (par 3)\". Getting assignments changed because boredom is a good thing; but, would it be a plus that peers know what one another also think in the classroom too? Muscular action units can easily change the way students look at one another in the classroom.\n\nReason three, The Facial Action Coding System can cause an overall significantly better open environment of many classrooms and even the whole school.\n\nAlso, Dr. Huang has noted that \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication (par 6)\". The notes above by Dr. Huang proove that not many people such as students to student or student to teacher share what they are thinking or feeling verbally. Would it be so bad for students and teachers to connect overall in the school and each and every classroom?\n\nTo gradually sum everything up, The Facial Action Coding System is an immensse benefit to students and teachers in the classroom. Technology that can read emotional expressions of students is valuable because, teachers can build feed back on their students about what is going on in the class, peers can understand one another easier through six basic emotions, and overall a better environment as a school can be promised. Mkaing faces and finding a device that can detect emotion can not only chnage things but open doors for science.\n\nIn conclusion, as the text states \"According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them (par 9).\" This evidence above is the exact reason why FACS would be a outstanding investment for classrooms all over.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Has someone ever told you that the face on Mars was real, but you knew it wasn't. The face on Mars is a natural landform called a mesa, but people mistake for a face because of the shadows it formed. The face on Mars is a natural landform because research with space crafts and the study pictures over time.\n\nThe face on Mars is a natural landform because of research with spacecrafts. Research with space crafts has shown that the face on Mars is just a landform. Many people thought the face was an alien artifact when it appeared in many books, a Hollywood film, magazines, radio talk shows, and even in haunted grocery store checkout lines. People still may not believe it, but there is more to say.\n\nThe face on Mars is just a mesa because of pictures shown overtime. The pictures between 1976 through 2001 show the face fading away. They show the face was nothing other than a moutain like landform. The pictures were taken with high-tech gear that they had back then. They were taken when Spacecraft Viking 1 was looking for another spacecraft, Viking 2. It was Snapping pictures and it got the face. Later, NASA found out it was just a mesa.\n\nIn conclusion, people still may believe that the face on Mars was real, but studies show that it was just a landform. The face on Mars is just a landform because of research with spacecrafts and and the study of the pictures over time. My final thoughts of this is that the face was cool until I saw that it was just a mesa. It was cool to learn about this, but it was just a goofy looking mountain.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars\n\nHave you ever thought of being a scientist at NASA or have you ever seen the Face on Mars? Well I am a scientist and I have been very lucky to go to space and see the Face in person. It was one of the best experiences that has ever happened to me in life! Some people think that the Face was created by aliens even though there has been many tests and agreements that it is just a natural landform. I belive that it is a natural landform beacuse there is proof that scientists have figured it was just another Martian mesa, there are pictures that proves it could just be formed like that because it is common around Cydonia, and there has not yet been any proof to encourage it was created by aliens.\n\nThe scientists and I have done several researches ever since we first saw the Face. Everything has yet led to prooving it is just another Martian mesa. Looking through all the pictures, everything stated that it is just a huge rock formation. The rock resembles a human head with eyes, a mouth, and a nose. I believe that after all the temperatures such as the heat and coldness, it could have caused it to be shaped like that. There has probably even been spaceships that has landed in Mars in search of investigation. The spaceships could have formed these shapes when landing there.\n\nAs you probably know, it is very common around Cydonia to have these kind of natural landfoms. Yes, it is common to have shapes and forms that are unusual such as the Face. The only difference in this one was that it had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh. Theres not really much of a difference if you think about it. It is unbelievable that it's the first time poeple think of an alien doing this art work when they have never thought of this idea when we have found other evidence of natural lanforms like the Face.\n\nThere has been plenty of evidence to proove that the Face is just a natural landform, but there is no proove of it to be created by aliens. Looking at the pictures closely, there are no footprints, fingerprints, or marks to show any living life in Mars. If theres no living life in Mars, then how could there be aliens? I want you to think about that. There has not been any kind of creatures found in Mars which is shocking.\n\nNow that I have explained myself of why I believe that the Face is just a natural landform, what do you think? Do you still believe aliens created it? If you do, I encourage you to do some research and tell me the reasons of why you think that the Face was created by aliens. After all the research I've done, all my conclusions sum up to the same knowledge through the evidence prooven.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear conneticut like catch favorite television showscar shop latest trends Or maybe even planning get together old friends Well todays great technology computer I see experts trying decide whether computers healthiest thing benefits society opinion I think great As know I years old year old brother spend alot time computer homework I like shop online discounts sales I know thing cheaper stores I know brother likes go concerts buy latest video games My grandparents older nt watch alot tv read Newspaper computer great catching favorite tv shows news With great pieces machinery chat storm old friends facebook teens shopping brand names like All clothes designer stuff everything want half us nt money If go computer get names items less compared NUM Computers lower price things want need I days grandparents try decents conversation kids grandchildren go right vack little As grandchild used talk days going great deppresion computers got catch news I sit great conversation You also catch shows missing everyone talking school The kids wo nt missing When I grade I got first facebook I thought I could That I went camp met new kids found facebooks I keep touch lossing friendships You see I know scientists experts probably smarter year old girl I know teenaters parents facebook say great connect people around world So I know experts going make best dicision whether computers benefit society please take ideas consideration", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Seagoing Cowboys Program\n\nHave you ever thought that you would like to travel around the world and get paid for it? Well, if so then this job could be perfect for you. What you do is you travel around the world helping people in other countries feed and take care of their animals, and you will also bring aniamals to different countries on ships and take care of them.\n\nYou could be like Luke Bomberger and get to do very, very many things that others have'nt been able to do. You would be able to go over the ocean, see things that are unbelievable, and it could also be an amazing storie to tell someday. This would also be an once in a life time opportinity for anyone so take the chance once you get it because, you most likely wont get it again.\n\nThis job would also take alot of work for anyone thats just how it is. You would have to feed and water all the animals three times a day, even if its storming extremely bad you will have to do your job and take care of the animals. Yes you may get hurt but in the end you should still love that your doing this job becuase it's what you want to do and if it's not something that you want to do then you dont have to do it, but it's still something that is very amazing.\n\nAlso dont think that it is all just work, work, work, because its not. You will be able to have free time when the animals are gone. You will be able to play games, when you stop you can go and see things that are in other countries that you have'nt seen before, and you also will be able to meet alot of new people and you may connect very well with that person. Even though there will be ups and downs you will always have the unremarkable stories, and you ever know it could be so amazing that it may be turned into a storie.\n\nSo why not take the chance of a life time because you only get to live once so why not make it count. So go out there do your best and while doing that, you could have fun with others, on a ship in another countrie, and also get paid to do it. You would also have a really good feeling because you are helping others. Take the chance cause I can't come up with any reason at all on why you should'nt.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In Narciso Rodriguez s memoir Narciso really sets joyous happy mood describes home gives reader feeling much loved home sets mood gratefulness well describes much parents sacrificed grow well There way express gratitude spirit generosity early age demonstration important family friends sets ecstatic mood reader wants home This mood Narciso Rodriguez sets way shows reader great home really", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Limiting car usage can be helpful as we try to reduce our negative impact on this great big miracle of a planet. Reducing or even eliminating the use of cars would greatly drop the amount of damage done to the ozone. Even then, some people living without cars found their life to be less stressful. Aside from these two simple solutions, a life without cars can save so much more.\n\nFirst off, without cars the pollution that's depleting our ozone would be nearly gone. The gas emissions from tailpipes account for 12% of greenhouse gas emitions, and in some places even 50%! Life this advanced on a single planet in this great big universe is such a miracle. We need to protect our planet from greenhouse gasses if we wish to continue to exist on this planet.\n\nSecondly, not only do cars cause a great deal of life threatening polution, but some people living without their cars found their life to be less stressful. Owning a car is not only expensive due to maintainance but because of these fluctuating gas prices! If you were to sell your car now and either walk, bike, or ride the city bus to work or school you would save thousands. While keeping city busses would still cause some pollution it's not as great the amount of pollution as millions of cars. Also, walking would help keep the world in shape since it is a great way of exersize.\n\nIn conclusion, getting rid of cars would be the best thing we can do for the planet. Not even getting rid of them but at least reducing the risk of them. It would keep the world in shape, and keep your money in your wallet. All of this while reducing the harm we are doing on our miraculous planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the present age, there has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether by developing technology and artificial intelligent science all kinds of careers will be done by robots in the future. From my perspective, although in the future machines will have a huge impact on human life, there are many areas in that robots can not be considered as an alternative to human work. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, some people assert that in the next years, robots will be able to do most of the jobs in society and there won't be any opportunity for individuals. However, I strongly disagree with that statement. In fact, machines which work based on artificial intelligent are made by the human, as a result, they never have been able to do the jobs that need mental skills. For example, if a company face serious financial problems, only persons with skills like problem-solving, leadership, and teamwork will be able to solve them. \r\n\r\nThe second reason that we have to take into consideration is that the ways of communicating with other persons are a special ability of humans. Precisely, robots can not communicate with each other as well as with individuals. For instance, being a teacher needs to have many skills, but the foremost is that a teacher can make a strong bond with their students. Due to that, pupils will have convenient contact with their lecturers and it affects their learning outcomes.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, I would like to conclude that the capacity of robots is limited and they never be able to do all kinds of careers which individuals do. Furthermore, artificial intelligence has many differences to the real one, based on that, there are always jobs for people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author of this article, \" The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" he starts off by telling us about the planet. He included some fun facts like it is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. But later on he gets down to his main point studying Vensus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author then stating numerous of challenges and risks that Venus gives like corrosive sulfuric acid, a thick atmosphere of 97% carbon dioxide that blankets venus, how the average temperature reaches 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and that the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. Earlier in the article the author states to us how, \" Humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world. Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spaceraft survived the landing more than a few hours.\"\n\nFurther on in the article the author starts to support his idea progressively more. Starting in paragraph 5 he starts to use evidence on how big space administrations like The National Aeronautics and Space Administration or further known as NASA is coming up with more ideas and technology that will create a more safe supporting conditions that will with hold the hostile conditions that Venus holds. A little bit into paragraph 5 the author claims how they invision a blimp like vehicle that hovers 30 or so miles above the rolling Venusian landscape. This invention will not allow us to be able to touch Venus's surface and will only be able to provide limited sight on the ground conditions but will avoid all the unfriendly ground conditions. At the end of paragraph 5 the author states to us that \" Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy, but survivable for humans.\" From that last sentence right there it proves to us that it is survivable for humans, but it is not easy. After hearing that sentence that the author used to help support his idea. I thought that the sentence was something that really affected how he supported his idea.\n\nAll in all I will say that the author did very well in supporting his idea on is Venus a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. To support my evidence that I supported in evaluation on how well the author did supporting his idea, I looked at the very last sentence in the article in paragraph 8 and when I read that, \" Our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" that is when I knew he did a good job supporting his idea with evidence in the article.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the contemporary world, most children spend their productive day in front of the TV set. Some believe that watching TV is an added advantage in terms of child development whereas some oppose the idea stating that it has many detrimental effects in long term. \r\n\r\nIn my opinion, I believe watching TV is rather beneficial if used effectively. Therefore, I do not see any negative impact in spending time watching it. This essay would discuss both views and provide examples for each argument.\r\n\r\nFirstly, spending too much hours in front of the television is time-consuming this will end up in children not completing their studies on time. Further, watching TV for a longer period of time has serious damage to your health such as poor vision and poor cognitive development, therefore, less screen time would be helpful especially for young viewers in order to protect them from the harmful effect. UK scientists have identified that 80% of children suffer from thinking and cognitive disorders as a result of spending too much time in front of the screen.\r\n\r\nSecondly, there are many arguments which contradict the above stating that television itself is an information library where children can gain more knowledge and develop their language skills by watching it. For instance, for young viewers \"Peppa Pig and Blippy\" are some of the favourites and meaningful channels which significantly does a great impact in terms of developing children's knowledge and skills.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, even though watching television has some detrimental effects it is paramount important for a child to gather vast knowledge in terms of developing perspective.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinion driverless cars are safer and more efficien than nomal car.In paragraph five of the passage it says, \"the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and ruduce power from the engine,allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\" A driverless car can be safer on the road because it wont get distracted by something else and will have better reaction time than a human.Humans can easily sometimes get distracted by things they see while driving or by their phone.A driverless car will still need a driver when needed to navigate a work zone or around accidents.\n\nIf the driver gets tired or needs to call or text someone the driverless care can drive itself safety and the driver will not cause an accident,because he did not pay attention to the road. The driverless cars can be used to reduce traffic because it will cause less accidents. It can also be used to get a drunk person home safe without any accidents occuring.The driverless care can also help people that are learing to drive by assisting them on the road and preventing accidents.Driverless cars can also help people get to their destination without getting lost.\n\nDriverless cars are smarter than humans.They can break by themselves when the sensors detect another car behind them to prevent an accident.Driverless cars also have the ability to break faster than a human can.In paragraph five of the passage it says, \"the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and ruduce power from the engine.\" They can also assist old people while they are driving to reduce road accidents.\n\nDriverless cars can also help our planet.Driverless cars will use less fuel and be more efficient than normal cars are now.In the first paragraph of the passage it says \" The cars he forees would use half the fuel of today's taxis.\" The reduction of fuel beign use will help our ecomony and our planet.It will help our planet by reducing all the harmful toxic gases that go up into our atmosphere every day.\n\nIn conclusion driverless cars will make the roads safer,reduce accidents, help our planet and our economy.With driverless cars on the roads it wil make our roads safer.It will also help our economy grow and rise.It will also help our planet and ruduce the toxic gases in our atmosphere.Driverless cars are the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "She wrote response tell everyone ready time spring comes Then take pass", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I disagree with this technology because how can u tell exatly how they are feeling from a picture.Alot of people can fake there facle expressions to hid how they are really feeling.\n\nI dont beleave its possible to find a person exact prctenage on their mood by a picture of their face .For example the text states that \"She's 83 precent happy,9 precent disgusted,6 precent fearful, and 2 precent angry\"that makes no sence to me on how a computer can do that. Like another example the text states that \"Eckman has classified six basice motions happyness ,suprise ,angry ,disgust, fear,and sadness-and then associated.\"With all the types of emotions there is known to man how come they can only predict 6 and why arnt the rest of the emotions on here.\n\nHow dose technology even tell someone how they or another person is feeling.There are them type of people that fake their facial expressions so no one knows what mood they really in.The text states \"Useing video imagery, the new emotion-recorgnion software tracks these facial movements-in a real face or in the painted mona Lisa.\"How do you even get the exact precentage off a painted picture that showes there has to be some type of lieing in this.Another example \"Each expression is compared against a neutral face\"They are basicly comparing someone to another person so how do you for a fact that \"nurtal face\" is 100 precent normal no feeling at all .This shows that there precentages can be wrong gerasticaly.\n\nSo it only going to be able to tell 6 feelings when some people feel other ones thats not on that list. The text states that \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\".How do the reconize that when they only can reconize 6 feelings and neather of them are on there. The text also states that \"Your home PC cant handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile.\" So whats the point of makeing the softwere if most people cant use it at home on their computers. The text states that \"According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotions , moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but aslo may even help protect them.\" Why put may ?Shouldent they be forsure what this can do sence they did so much resurch on it.I beleave with something this huge they should be garenteed that it will do what is expected and make sure there are no negatives to this .\n\nIn conclusion this is why i dissagree with this technology. I personaly beleave that are teconlogy isnt good enought to read people emotions and tell us are exat precentages.In this case i dont think they got enought information and proof that this will work the only test they made was on a painting over a few 100 years old.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology is gradually developing as we go into the future. New inventions are being created everyday, such as driveless cars. When you think of driveless cars you may picture things like you see in the movies, but they are much more complex. I personally think that the developement of driveless cars is a good thing and will benefit us later in the future.\n\nIn the article, the author believes.\"Driveless cars will use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer more flexibility than a bus\". As you can see driveless cars will benefit the earth and the needs of humans. The company,Google, has had independent driving cars since the year 2009. Their research states that their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash. This research shows that the developing of driveless cars is improving and actually becoming a product that will later be in use.\n\nAlthough these cars are categorized as independent, they still require the alertness of the driver. The car itself will need the driver's assistence when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with traffic issues. I believe that the car not having complete independence will actually benefit the driver. Since drivers today are already being distracted by phones and passangers, not having complete control could help them be safer on the road. I appreciate how the car can move on it's own, but also requires the driver to be somewhat aware of what is going on. Let's face it humans will always be distracted, but not having to actually drive a car might reduce the number of accidents caused by texting. I know it sounds crazy that the driver not paying as well attention, but with the car driving on its own the driver would be able to text and get distracted.\n\nDriveless cars are improving scientific research and inventions. Back to the benefits of the driver just having to be aware, technology has helped so much in the process. The car can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves. Scientist and workers were also able to create a viberating sensor in the seat to help the driver be aware when the car needs assistence such as in a traffic jam. The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone. The author believes, \"Manufacturers are also considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road\". I believe that this would be a great idea and will improve the drivers safety. I know that driving might not be as fun and people will use interest if all they do is sit there, but then they will be able to text and do whatever else they are prevented to do when actually in control of a car.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that driveless cars will actually benefit us later in the future. Its high-tech equitment and special sensors will fascinate people and lead to the purchasing. I believe that allowing product in other states will improve transportation systems and the needs of people. I predict that in the future, there will be other independent vechicles and systems being created. Driveless Cars are coming and we better be ready.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why exactlly should one spend there time in the Seagoing Cowboy program? Being in the Seagoing Cowboy program is a progam you should participate in. Just think about the many horses and cows that are harmed and need our after help after a war. This experience is a great one and you should try it.\n\nTraveling is a big part of this amazing program, you get to see so many many historic sites and arcitecture. Being able to cross the Atlantic or Pacific Ocean by boat is pretty cool. One of the times this was used was in 1945 after World War II ended in Europe. Also in 1945 the Seagoing Cowboys helped after the Pacific War had ended.\n\nAfter world War II ended many countries were ruined to help fix this 44 nations joined together to form the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration (UNRRA). This is also a very good way to help in a fun way. The Seagoing Cowboy program saves many animals who would have else not made it through that deadly war or natural disaster. This is the program made for people who love animals. There are always cows or horses on board that are being rescued.\n\nThere is always work to be done as well. So, if your strong and like to work that could be a plus. Haybales and grain always need brought up from lower holds of the ship. Stalls always need cleaned and there is always work to be done. Sometimes you can catch a break on the way to another port and then you can relax.\n\nSo why should you join the Seagoing Cowboy program? Well for one reason, your helping so many animals and people too. There is always animals that need our help because well, animals can not talk for themselves so we have to be there for them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the story, Luke rode the waves. I think it would be amazing to be like that. It would be a chance to see the world. Although it is dangerous, it would be worth the risk. It is also be a chance to see amazing ites no one has seen before.\n\nI think Luke is on the right track with being a sea going cowbow. In the text, it states \"Luke also found time to have fun.\" paragraph 8. This says that it's not all work and no play. In the story it quotes \"I'm grateful for the opprunity.\" paragraph 9. This says that Luke is honored to be a sea going cowbow.\n\nAll I said today was how it would be to be a cowbow. Not everyone wants to be on a ship. Althogh, even with the risks, it would be worth it. I hope you might wnt to be one. But I would want to be one myself.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars could be the key to the furture. Think about it, a car that can steer, accelerate, and break themselves, and are designed to notify the driver when the road requires human skills. The driverless car is designed to get the driver's attention when a problem occurs. Dirverless cars have many positive aspects.\n\nImagin how easy it would be to take a road trip. Instead of placing a GPS on the window-sheild and being nervious on making a wrong turn or having to turn around, the driverless car has a GPS built inside so it can navigate on its own. The driveless car has special sensors to make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel. For example, GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object. When this happens, the Google car announces when the driver should take over. Driverless cars also have built in camaras to watch the driver watch the road so no accidents accure. Though driverless cars may have many questions on what happens if there is an accident, or would the driver get bored not doing anything. Dr. Werner Huber, a BMW project manager driver, hopes to bring in-car entertainment and information system that use heads-up displays. Such as displays can be turned of instantly when the driver needs to take over. This in-car system is a good safety feature.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars are a big concern to the future. They can help make driving to far places easy and the roads a little safer. Driverless cars are not fully driverless and will still need the drivers attention and hands on the wheels. When the car is in danger into backing into a object or if roads are closed ahead, the driver will be notifly and will have to take control. Think about the future and how driverless cars would make a difference.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued that people's lifestyle has greatly affected by the climate, while other believe that it is the economy of a nation that impact human life the most. In my opinion, climate change is the biggest concern due to its harmful impact on people's health.\r\n\r\nTo commence with, there is no doubt that climate change is the biggest threat facing humanity. Climate impacts are already harming health through pollution, diseases and extreme weather events. In other words, nowadays people are dealing with many detrimental problems such as respiratory and cardiovascular disease which leadsto a life threat for an individual. As a result, not only the medical expenditure has increased but also they might be dependent on medicines throughout their whole life. Moreover, due to climate change hunger and poor nutrition food have risen. Crops may be destroyed or become less productive because of an increase in extreme weather events. Thus, people might not be grow sufficient food.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the economy of the territory is the most important factor in citizens' life because if an economy grows, the employment opportunities have also increased resulting in them getting a chance to live in better conditions. In addition to that, one can also manage to build a suitable lifestyle not only for themselves but for their family members as well. Secondly, the nation's economy allows better facilities for the public such as good education, the hospitality sector. Therefore, if the economy would not grow, people experience poverty and unemployment.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is undeniable that the economy of a region has a great impact on mankind, I believe that climate is the biggest threat to all humanity due to its extreme effects on health and less availability of food.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers is presents. The author thinks that studinging the planit Venus would be usful to us. He says how we could do it in a safer matter than landing on the planit. He has a goood idea of the echnoigy we could us to do it. Also has a good sencse that it is dangris to do it.\n\nThe firts thing that the author dose is telll us how dangers it is or could be if we where to land on it. I think he should have went in to more detal about is in like the sences of all the threts and what would happen if it was to go wrong and we ould have to land on it. Over all I think it was ok\n\njusy needed a little more on that part to explane it just a little more.\n\nThe technoligy we could use for the trip. I feel he has a good snces of the kind of technoigy that we could use as in get sampuls and think of that sences. He knows we'll have to use an older technoigy then what we would use on like say a moon landing. We could use a reguler new computer or machen to take a sample of that. If we was to on Venus it would get destroid befor it hit the ground. He explanse that we could use a computer used in World War II. it was a sistime of gears and levers that will give and answor that would be corect. so that we could make in more stronger so in would last longer in that invierment.\n\nI think it would be a good thing to do to go there to learn about it. It could give us more inscite on out owne plante and why it is getting hot than what it used too. I think the auther did a grate job of explaning it and his reson by it. I just think he needed to explain that one part better and it would have been a little better.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I think computers good effects people letting people talkto family friends live faraway Computers also let learn different places people around world My first reason computers let learn different places people around world This helps going vacation foreign country learn test historical sights also learn best hotels If project due foreign country search give data need My second reason computers let talk family friends live faraway This helps keep touch nt seem like nt know Computers also let talk friends live faraway want hangout would let talk days good", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In an increasingly chaotic world, preventing offenders always a common concern. In several methods to solve this problem, people tend to think education plays a vital part in rehabilitating criminals. From my point of view, I totally agree with this opinion.\nFor the most part, it is necessary to combine care and money to bring a good education. Many surveys demonstrate that almost the law-breakers are at risk of offending owing to their circumstances including poverty, neglect and low self-esteem. As a result, they cannot expose to education so many offenders are deficiency knowledge which may contributed them to commit a crime without hesitation. In fact, young offenders tend to re-offending quickly because it is extremely hard to help them control aggression without good education and supervise. Therefore, our priority must to equip them with knowledge and working skills that help them easier to attending school or finding a job. Moreover, instead of discrimination against them, people need to share and support them in order to keep them from a life of crime. \nIn conclusion, educate offenders is completely crucial to help them perceive self- worth and integrate into society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" it states that cars without a lot of imput from the driver is no longer just a work of science fiction. Although driverless cars is a huge advancement into the engineering field they still need input from the driver and they are hard to make laws for.\n\nThe article boasts about it's a self driving car, but what is the point of a self driving car if it still needs input of the driver. The self driving cars still need a driver that is paying attention at all times. If the car needs the driver to be paying full attention to the road then whats the point of having a self driving car.\n\nIf the self driving cars became a reality then it would be difficult to make laws for. For example if there was a collision because of the car who would be held responsible, the driver or the manufacturer. The traffic laws put in place are written with the idea of humans behind the wheel. These traffic laws are put in place to keep people safe and lawmakers know that alert drivers are the key to keeping us safe. For this reason these cars are already illegal in some states, like Florida and Nevada.\n\nIn the article it states that the car has functions to get the drivers attention when it needs the driver to drive, but those functions can catch the driver off guard and cause an accident. Surprising the driver then making them take charge is very dangerous and could end up with a collision.\n\nWith the self driving cars there are alot of ups in downs. Even though it is a huge advancement to cars and engineering it is still something that still has major flaws. One example is still needing a attentive driver at the wheel. Another example is that it is difficult to make laws for and isn't something lawmakers widely accept. Self driving cars should stay a work of science fictions until it can fully achieved.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author story ends story paragraph explains Saeng give hibiscus Earlier story explains winter hibiscus die In paragraph says snows melt means seasons keep going Saeng keep going trying Also author says geese return means geese keep coming back Saeng keep trying take test", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everybody wants privacy. Sometimes it is a good thing to leave a person alone, whether he or she is feeling sad, happy or angry. Using this Facial Action Coding System to read the emotional expressions of students is not valuable.\n\nThere might come a time when a person is sad because he or she has lost a loved one. That person probably would not want anyone knowing how he or she is feeling at the moment. If a computer is used to understand his or her emotions, it could cause that person to be more upset or sad. The computer could acknowledge emotional expressions, but it still has yet to learn how to respond in a situation where that person needs help. In paragraph six, the author states that a computer can know whether you're feeling happy or sad, confused or bored. In school, when a student needs help, the person can just raise his or her hand to get help from the teacher. A computer will most likely use complicated words to modify the lesson.\n\nThe problem is the new technology can read emotions, but it cannot really understand the person as much as a human being can. On most of the paragraphs in this article, paragraph eight for example, the author describes about how the computer looks at facial expression to understand someone's emotion. In school, there are shy kids who are afraid to ask for help. Normally, those shy kids are smart students who get good grades. It is true that one cannot just assume all shy kids are smart. But in this case, it is more likely that a shy student will ask help from a teacher, who can understand him or her a little bit better, than a computer that can just read facial expressions.\n\nThis technology could also end friendships or relationships. In paragraph seven and eight, the author mentioned that the computer can recognize the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one. This would mean that there is no way to hide your emotions. For example, two friends get in an argument because one person was jealous of the other one. In most cases, that jealous person could have hidden his or her emotions, but with the new technology, the other person will know. Sometimes, it is a good thing to be able to hide emotions and feelings from other people.\n\nUsing technology that can read students' emotional expressions is not a good idea. For one, it is most likely a computer will not do a better job at teaching students than a human teacher. Also, computer cannot show empathy to someone who is going through a tough time. Last but not least, this technology programmed to be helpful could unintentionally end friendships or relationships. Computers may be useful in many cases, but they can never really do as much as humans.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nI am writing to you to tell you that we should change to popular vote because for one there is less likely to be a dispute over the popular vote rather than an Electoral College. The reason is that the winning candidate's share of the Electoral College invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote. In 2012's election, for example, Obama recieved 61% of the electoral vote compared to only 51% of the popular votes cast for him and Romney.\n\nThe electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of ir are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates dont spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tigth races in the \"swing\" states.\n\nUnder the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. theres a thing called the disaster factor. The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century. The system allows for much worse.\n\nThe electoral college systems has lots of flows and is way too outdated. We should switch to popular vote and life will be easier.\n\nSincerely,\n\nJulia", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hello I writing talk censorship libraries In libraries tons materials language images offensive broad view subject My view censor stuff library censor tv I deaf parents always captions house Everyday I see bad language thats inot censored I also seen images censored The youth time mostly watch tv use library So censor tv I see things tv wont see library In conclusion would like say dont believe libraries censor materials studdent still find There plenty places worse Like crimes scenes cime scens blood gore library would language These views ancd could differnt", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" the author discusses a new technology's ability to read people's emotions. The Facial Action Coding System looks at the major muscles in the face and interprets what it means when certain ones are flexed. The authour argues that this system would have various applications in various industries. Although being able to read students' emotions seems like a useful tool, it would not be effective in a classroom and it would feel invasive to the students.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System seems like a useful tool to have in schools. After explaining the implications in other industries the author states, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is coming confused or bored... Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" In this instance, emotion reading technology seems beneficial to students because it allows for a quick and easy fix to certain emotions that are preventing his/her learning. This appears to be useful but, The Facial Aciton Coding system would only work if a student was feeling \"confused or bored\" because a computer would not be able to counteract feels of sadness or anger which can also prevent learning.\n\nGiving school computers the ability to read emotions would be ineffective in a classroom setting. After giving many examples of how the system could be used, the author states, \"Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to deconde Mona Lisa's smile.\" This reveals that if school computers could read emottions they would not be capable of doing it effectively because it would not be able to handle the \"complex algorithms.\" Also, a computer would only be effective in changing certain emotions even with complicated coding. If a person feels depressed, a computer would be able to identify that, but not provide any solutions.\n\nEmotion-reading technology would feel invasive to students' privacy. When explain a human's ability to calculate emotion, the author states,\"...you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face. Of course, most of us would have toruble actaully describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc.\" This reveals how the software would allow people to know everything about a how a person feels. Most people try to hide their emotions and having this software would take away that ability.\n\nThe author gives an example of how, \"if you smile when a web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow.\" Similar to how this would feel invasive to a consumer, a student would not like having a computer that is aware of all of their emotions.\n\nEmotion-reading software seems like a good tool, but it would not be effective and it would feel invasive to privacy in a classroom setting. The system could help with certain emotions like confusion or boredom but it would not work with more complex feelings such as depression or anger. Implementing the Facial Action Coding would take away a right to privacy of emotions. Overall, this new technology has many useful implications but it would not be suitable in a school.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I agree newspaper people spending much time computer exercising everyone knows computers addictive people need get people making addicting creating things never ending games distracting people life family work exercise", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author quite comforting homey As author describes life growing home child seemed pleasant life author ex plained greatful learned things family portreyed simple enjoyable mood When author spoke family friends came dine apartment made home Narciso created relaxed mood Everyone came Rodriguez s home welcomed treated close family The overall mood memoir friendly welcoming Rodriguez s home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Throughout the article \"Making Mona Lisa Simle\" by Nick D'Alto, the author describes a new form of technology called the Facial Action Coding System. This system allows computers to analyze and identify the emotions that people have based on the appearance of their face. While this newly developed piece of technology would be useful, it cannot work on home computers. The use of this system to read the emotional expressions of students would be very valuable in the classroom because it would be able to describe emotions that are not easily interpreted by the human eye.\n\nFirst of all, the use of this technology would be valuable because it would allow teachers to know when their students are confused. The Facial Action Coding System would be able to monitor students from their web cams and notify teachers when they do not understand what they are being taught. This would be valuable because teachers would be able to better help students who do not understand by knowing who those students actually are. At times, students to not ask questions or raise their hands because they are too afraid to look dumb in front of their peers. This system would allow teachers to reach out to students who need help without the student having to ask in front of the entire classroom. By using this system, the students may actually increase their performance in some subjects because their teachers would have helped them in situations where they were confused. Overall, the addition of this system in the classroom would be valuable because teachers would be able to better help students who are confused in school.\n\nAlso, the use of this system would be valuable in the classroom because it would show when students are sad or angry. This would be valuable because when people are not in good moods, they are not likely to pay attention or give their best effort in school. By using this program, the school counselors could be notified when a student is sad and set up a time to meet with that student. Most of the time, counselors do not know what students need emotional help, and this system could tell them which students do. After talking to a counselor, students may feel better and eventually perform better in the classroom. When students talk to their counselors about what is making them sad or angry, they can recieve valuable information from their counselors on how to solve their problems in the best way possible. This system would give counselors a better idea of what students are going through and how to help them. Overall, this system would be valuable in the classroom because it would help counselors better know which students to talk to.\n\nIn conclusion, the use of the Facial Action Coding System in the classroom would be very valauble for students and staff. By using this system teachers and counselors will be able to help more students who need their assistance. This system would be able to point out students who need help emotionally or academically. After a student recieves this help, the student will perform better in school because they feel more comfortable or better understand a subject in school. Largely, if this system was implemented in classrooms across the United States, the performance and mental health of students would increase.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Most individuals advocate that a large void between the age of adults and children is advantageous, however, I believe that a greater age difference between the kids and elders has way more drawbacks than its positive aspects. Firstly, this essay will discuss how it affects relations and secondly, we will examine how it is good for children's learning.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, the generation gap plays a significant role in holding families together. To elaborate, the mentality and lifestyle of the people change as per time and if there is more difference of it in generations, then the relationships are hard to remain stable thus splitting the families apart. For example, in our neighbourhood, there are old parents who had their offsprings quite younger and they could not cope up with the way their children used to live, therefore, all of their children left them alone. In spite of this, if the ageing rift is less, then the families are expected to have healthy relations and better understanding.\r\n\r\nIn addition to this, a small gap in the age of elder ones and younger ones in families have incredibly helped those children excel in their academic and professional careers. To further explain, a person's knowledge and experience should be up-to-date in this advanced technology era and if the parents are not too older than their kith and kins, then it becomes obvious that they will assist them to compete in this fast-paced world. For instance, younger couples are nowadays focusing on teaching their children about the computer and technology by being their mentors. Moreover, the large generation gap sometimes becomes a hindrance in the children's journey to success in terms of not supporting his ideas.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, the generation gap plays a major role in defining the strength of relationships among the family members and the exposure of the children. As mentioned above, less the age difference, more is the understanding and affection between adults and youngsters, along with that, it also plays a key role in child nourishment. Hence, I believe that the disadvantages of greater generation gap outweigh its advantages.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The technology presented in the article is quite impressive and very useful. Although there are many good uses for this tech I don't believe it should be used in a schooling environment. Granted there are many pros to using it. These can include knowing when a student is bored and changing the lesson to something more exciting, or finding out when a kid is infuriated and ready to explode. Also this technology could potentially prevent school shootings by finding out the emotions a student might have. I believe the issue boils down to the lack of privacy students would be feeling and the discomfort of knowing we're being watched.\n\nAs a student the thought of always being watched a monitored concerns me. As a teen we sometimes keep our emotions hidden like secrets, and want them to stay that way. The lack of privacy would feel immense. In my opinion the pros and cons have a distinct balance. I would feel safer knowing that the kids on a short fuse would be known about, and worried cause the technology would be violating my privacy.\n\nReally I don't think this technology should be used in a schooling environment. I think the comfort gained by knowing school shootings could be prevented is shot when my privacy comes into question. I think there are many uses for this technology and that many advancements can come from it, but it just doesnt belong in a school.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If you were asked, \"do you think there are aliens on Mars\",what would you say? Would you bring up the topic of the famed Face of Mars, if you said yes? Well stop, because that is false information. Just read this short essay and change your mind about the subject of aliens.\n\nIn 1976 the Viking 1 sent a picture of a supposed face. NASA, shortly after getting the image, then made a false testimony stateing that an alien carved face is on Mars. The now famous image of Mars took a name The Face. Now twenty-two years later NASA tries again at a picture of The Face. The picture turns out good, but a cloud blocks a part of the image. The people aren't happy and they get NASA, three years later to get another picture, and it it shows no evidence of an alien carved face. The talk of The Face soon dies down.\n\nSo to sum up what happened, in 1976 the Viking 1 sends a picture of a \"face\". NASA states that this is an alien's doing. The image recieves the name The Face. Twenty-two years later NASA tries again, and gets a good picture, but a cloud blocks the right side. The people aren't happy. Once again NASA takes another picture, and there is no face. So after reading this you still have your opinion, or you just changed it, but I firmly believe that alien life is a hoax.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggestes studying Venus because it is a very interresting planet because it could also be dangerous and we will be able to study it. Venus is also know as the \"Evening Star\", but they also say that the name Evening Star is mis leading because Venus is actually a planet. Venus is the second planet from the sun which can probably be a reason why it can be so hot. we can see Venus from a distance because its safe, but scienstes say that it can be really dangerous up close. Its so dangerous that a spacecaft hasn't landed on Venus in over 30 decades.\n\nVenus has many things to discover about it but, some have been discovered about the planet. Venus is referred to as Earth's \"twin,\"because its the closet to planet Earth in terms of size,density and distance to other planetary neighbor but, orbits the sun at different speeds. Earth is sometimes closer to Mars and sometimes Venus is closer. Venus has the highest surface temperture even through Mercury is closer to the sun. The planet Venus has a thick atomsphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets. The average temperatures of Venus is over 800 degress. The mission was to send out rovers to get dirt samples and bring it back to study and learn more.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the modern world ,a burning issue arises that the batch of individual asked that economic development is the only think to finish hunger as well as poverty ,meanwhile another say that the growth of economic is harm the environment so it must be ended.I discuss both the views in my upcoming paragraphs and also give my opinion on this\r\n\r\nTo the set of wheels in motion, first and the foremost reason is that with the asset of economic growth authority can remove the hunger and poverty from the nation . To make it more, when the government have lot of money then they want to spend on this topic not only this both reason can finish from th country but also activities can improve , however when the authority can help to the poor once with they provide the amenities regarding home ,food and also give the job opportunity to them and when thing is implement by the government automatically the hungerness and the poverty will remove from the nation. For example, in 2019, the government of Canada gave this all facilities to the mankind of there country and with this 75 %hunger and poverty is finished in their nation.\r\n\r\nOn the flip side, one more thing is that economic development also pollut the environment. Since, when the authority can increase the growth of economic then they want to made more and more industry as well as companies in their nation and also invent to much experiment to grow the economic rate to remove the hunger and poverty from their country. For instance, in 2020, a survey was monitored by the authority of Russia and the research the amount of smoke which exhaust by the \r\n\r\nindustries of the nation and after the result the authority was shocked because with more use of industry pollution is risen at the level of 60%.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, according to my opinion both view have own point of view. Although both were also seen in some nation. So, government want to choose another way to vanish hunger and poverty from the country.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology today is crazy. It keeps expanding and getting bigger, better, and faster. Recenltly scientist have made a computer that has the power and technology to read emotions in students and in other people. I feel like this shouldnt be used in a classroom.\n\nI feel that a computer shouldnt be able to tell wether or not a human being is sad or mad, it shouldnt be able to tell our emotions. Our emotions is for us to handle. Yes, us humans can tell when people we know are sad or down, but computers should not. People would use the computer for somthing else, like to see others emotions. Peoples emotions should keep to their self. It isnt for a computer or other humans to now, because its your emotion.\n\nYes, this could be valuable for some things, like movies, and video games. THis is not something we could use everyday in a classroom. We could use the computer to see whats wrong with a student. Once we figure out whats wrong with the student, for instance lets say the child is sad. The child is so sad, he cant work or do anything, and us humans cant notice it because he is hiding it. We could use the computer to see what emotions he is having. Once we figure that out we could help him, by doing somthing that makes him happy.\n\nThis computer couldnt be valuable in a classroom. If a teacher assigned their students to make a project over the expressions of a human.\n\nThen the coputer would take forever to load. Each human expresses their emotions in a different way. One could be hiding it better than the other. Therefor the computer could get the students emotions wrong, and the students could fail.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Academic and education are debatable topics.In several ,nations younger people are given priority for learning yet illiterate adults should be given a chance for learning .Although authority might spend extra expenses for the same .I agree to a larger extent with the former's view .My inclination is elaborated further .\n\nThe younger generation should receive more priority in order to learn .The foremost reason to support my viewpoint is that kids are considered to be the future of society .This is to state that making them learn a few lessons will help them to serve the nation in a fruitful manner .Even though younger ones are more energetic and innovative than older people .Therefore ,imparting education to the little ones might help to create a developed nation .\n\nMoreover ,the grasping power of the children seems to be higher .The reason is due to the plasticity of brain cells at a younger level ;one can learn things more quickly.This would help to reduce the burden on the teachers who are constantly engaged in their work.For instance ,learning mathematics tables at younger age seems to be quite easy than grasping at the adolescent period .\n\nHowever,few efforts should be taken to make adult people educated .To commence with ,to improve the living standards of commuters .That is making them write and read might help to find job opportunities.This would help them to yearn for income and to fulfil their basic necessities.To illustrate ,helping the adolescent groups to read and write might help them to work in a mega store or different retailer's shops .\n\nTo conclude , the younger generations are getting more preference in education because of the better grasping ability as well as they are termed to be future of the nation .Even though youth should be taken into consideration in order to improve the living standards of the commuters .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The ability for a computer to recognise facial features can be used in many ways. One such way is the ability to accurately predict someones true emotions. This capability allows us to make guesses on what people are currently thinking about. One use for this new technology would be the addition of emotion-detecting cameras to classrooms in attempt to make the class more enjoyable for each student. The potential to use this in a classroom would inevitably help the way some people learn, however It will likely do more harm than good.\n\nIf the main focus would be on the enjoyment of the class, and changing the course based on how students react to it, then many issues would begin to appear. The first being that everyone is different, and everyone learns in slightly different ways. If a camera detects that one student is bored and struggling, it may change what they do in class to something that everyone else may not enjoy. The same situation applies if the camera detects someone that really enjoys doing something, so it may add simmilar schoolwork to the class. If a student was struggling with that method of learning they would suffer due to someone elses ability to learn.\n\nIf the main focus was something not based soley on education, and was more about the student being happy during class, there would be more options. The article mentions the computers capability of recognising the true emotions of someone, making it impossible for a student in class to pretend to be happy. If an emotion-detecting camera in a school often finds that someone is truely depressed, the school may be able to take action in a few ways. They would have the capability to reccomend the student do some sort of facial movement that would make them happer as mentioned at the end of the article, or they could send the student to a qualified professional to help them deal with depression.\n\nOverall, the facial recognition and emotional detection devices are capable of a lot of things that can improve the world. However, within a classroom setting, using a system to make everyone happy is essentially impossible due to the many different circumstances at play. A better way to attempt to make a student happier would be to do something similar to whats mentioned in paragraph 9. If students were required to to some sort of facial movement at the start of class, they may be set to a more enjoyable mood.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the rapid growth of technology , the world has come a long way . Newspaper plays a significant role in human life . The newspaper has become the main source of getting news about what happening across the globe . It has been universally acknowledged the importance of Newspapers. There is a range of conflicting arguments related to its pros and cons . As far as I can see it's more justified to say it has more benefits than negative effects .in further paragraphs I not only shed light on the assertion but also elaborate on my point of view regarding the matter.\r\n\r\nTo embark on, if we have a deep look we will be able to identify a good number of reasons why newspaper influences the human community . first and foremost , it helps folks to keep updated with the news about what's happening across the globe. To elaborate , newspapers provide us with numerous pieces of news such as politics, sports, entertainment, general knowledge and many more . In consequence, people are alert about the current scenario and choose the right decision . Furthermore, one can get information about other countries without going outside of their house . For instance, some international newspaper such as BBC gives us important News from across the in one page. It not only helps people to gain knowledge but also helps them to fit in the contemporary epoch.in addition, newspapers are very easy to find and also affordable. It is the best pocket-friendly way to gain knowledge. On top of them , newspapers provide job opportunities. Many big companies do advertising through newspapers to hire employees . For example , a survey showed the data that 60% of people who applied for the jobs got to know about the vacancy through Newspapers.\r\n\r\nTo sum up , newspapers play a significant part in human life .newspapers give us current information which helps us to stay updated and also direct us to the right path . Reading newspapers also build consideration and make pertinent. After weighing the outcomes it can be said that it has a positive impact on the human race .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the use of the technology to read the emotional expressions of students in the classroom is valuable.One reason why is beacuse you never know what they are going threw.Also you might not no how they day is going so you would be able to use the technology if they dont want to talk about it.although you probably would need permission from students to use the technology on them.I also think that the technology would be nice to use on teachers to see how there day is going and whats there emotions.\n\nI also think its a good idea because if the computer detects that you are very angry or very sad you could go talk to A consuler. I although one reason i like the program is because it just dosent work on humans it works on pictures.Also like the program could help beacuse it could detect whats your emotions on what is being played on the computer.Also the program could help because if A ad pops up and you frown then it should be skipped but if you smile it should play more ads like that or ones simliar to it.The Technology should be able to detect like what percent of the emotions you have or is having.\n\nWhat i also think is valuabe in this progam is that whenever you move a muscle in your face it can detect your mood.Although i would want to know does the program only works on aldutls or would it work on any age level.The program would also help the teachers know if the students it confused or bored.Also if the computer detects that the student it confused A effectived human instructor could help.Although if the student is bored the program could get them evolved or move on.\n\nThe One thing i think that is going to be hard how is the program going to detect all the facial emotions and feelings.Also what if the program started to malfunction would the computer start to mess up.The program could detec,t how the students feels about the assiment.According to the Facial feedback the teacher would know if the students understands and doesnt.Although i would want to know if the program would detect how we feel about the assement.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea of Driverless cars in the future can be a very controversial topic. Many may say that it is too dangerous, but others argue that there are ways to ensure safety and that these cars are the future of technology. In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" the author presents both sides of the argument. After reading the article, I have come to conclusion that Driverless cars are a positive change in technology and can be used for the better.\n\nGoogle has already invented the driverless car and has been making improvements for years. The car contains sensors on the wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted on the rear view mirror, a GPS reciever, and an intertial motion sensor. All of these things are used in the car to ensure you are provided with a safe ride. Because of Google and their invention of the Driverless car, in the future this could be the public transportation system. These care would use half the fuel that taxis use today and a driverless car offers far more flexibility than a bus. Paragraph 5 states, \"Further improvements in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on their own\" This quote is showing that all the sensors and cameras that they have inserted into the car make it safe to ride in and make it so that the car is mimicking how it would drive with a person behind the wheel.\n\nIn conclusion, The google driverless car is an invention that could change the future and they way that we get places. There are both positives and negatives found while testing these cars and making improvements. Overall, with all of the sensors put in the car to ensure safety, google can make it possible to have a safe ride in the car. Once all improvements have been made to the driverless car, it will change the future of transportation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear senator\n\nI would like to ask you to please change voting regulations from the Electoral College to popular vote. The Popular vote would work much better because voters are not really voting for a presedent we are voing for a slate of electors.\n\nThe electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. An example of this is in 2000, Gore and Bush were canidates, and when the votes were counted Gore have more popular votes but less electoral votes then Bush, this was the forst time that happend sence the election of 1888. Another example of the electoral college regulations being unfair is in 2012 when Obama recived 61.7 percent of the electoral vote as opose to only 51.3 percent cast for him and Romney. And a nationwide tie with electoral votes is possable because of the number of votes is 538, its an even number although it is highly unlikely.\n\nThe winner-take-all method of awarding all electoral votes to 1 specific canadate is unfair aswell because as we have seen in 2012 the canadates focus mainly on serton states because all states are worth a diffrent amount of electoral votes. Such as California being worth 55 votes and Washinton state being priced at 12 votes or New Mexico being at a total cost of 5 votes.\n\nIn the end the electoral vote is unfair. I just wish that you would change the voiting regulations from bring and electoral vote to being a popular vote.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some would argue that robots are beneficial for peoples upcoming development,while others think that robots have detrimental impacts on community.While robots have some influences in the number of employees and cannot handle unexpected situations ,I believe that they have a significant role in the repetitive industrial activities and working in hazardous environments.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand,increasing capabilities of robots in functioning complex tasks will eventually eliminate some human jobs.Many companies and industries are replacing their workers by robots to save money and time.This ascendancy of robots in performing different fields of job will affect many people financially and mentally.As robots also depend on human programming,it can be dangerous for any mistaken or in unexpected circumstances.Foe example,in USA it is revealed that driveless cars can not make good judgments in their surrounding and they involve in many tragic accidents.However,I believe that robots are essential in humans future advances,because they can handle strenuous and unsafe jobs.\r\n\r\nIn the other hand,it is taught that because robots are automated they are important in the accomplishment of unchangeable tasks and they are also viable in dangerous areas.Androids have the ability of lifting heavy loads and in the manufacturing,assembling,packing,and packaging of items precisely,Which cab be very exertion.tough and boring jobs for human being.The artificial intelligence of this machines in doing things perfectly on time allows people to save time and spend it on jobs and other different activities that require full concentration.Robots can also perform effective results in harmfull situations.They used to detect dispose harmful materials for human health in industries.For example,they can be used to inspect chemical factories where radiation,toxic chemicals or explosive gases pose significant risks to human employers.I believe that,robots are necessary for future development because workers can save time and are able to manage and maintain efforts to acquire new knowledges and skills,they also help employees to stay safe in the processing of risky chemicals.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion,although robots decline the number of employees and can cause accidents,they changed the industrial and other systems of the world revolutionary that is why they are vital for next generations progressing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The auther supports his idea by writing a paraghragh and putting in ideas or what people reserach. The author starts the paragragh by telling us what is venus is and what conditions that the plants has what earth does not have. The next thing is that the author said that Venus is the closest planet to the earth in terms of density and size and occasionally the closest in distance too. The next thing that the author puts in the paraghragh is that venus go around the sun in diffrent speeds then the earth. I think we should explore venus because venus might have the material that earth has not the second thing is that venus might have new creature that we never seen before that can with stand the conditions that venus has. The third thing is that venus never ben explord before so we might see thing we might not have seen on earth. The next thing I want to say is that we can use venus as a waypoint for space ships to go back and refule and get things to explore new planets but the conditons on that planet IN the paragragh it said that venus has sulfuric acid in the air is 90 time denst as the atmaspher on the earth. The second thing is that the artical said venus average tempoture is over 800 degrees fahrenhiet and venus has the hottest suface tempoture on anyother planets in our solar system. The third thing is that venus weather presents thing like eruping volcanoes powerful,earthquakes, frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. The artical said that peopel try to get to the surface of venus and it was not working until they made a robot that can with stand the surface for three weeks. The next thing is that long time ago venus use to have thing that earth have to but over time they distaper and have the same surface like earth the nexts thing is that they were thinking to put a huvering vehicle like a plane that can huver over the clouds that can scan the surface with out have something happening but they cannot take samples so they have to get close and personale. so the nasa is tyring to get samples from venus and worrking on the computers that can scan the suface. Thats the thing I can sume up from the paraghragh.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Mingfong Ho closes story paragraph shows far Saeng come determination persevere The narrator says She lifted head watched distinctive V etched evening sky slowly facing distance Ho This Saeng recovering crying even though misses homeland wants adapt succeed The narrator also said she found still shaky say words home lest burst tears again Ho Being away homeland makes Saeng legible", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think other people sould try help other cause they dont't have anything like ue so it unfair that they have nothing but we have all kind of things like food water after the wars some dont have home to stay in i think that we sould work together to help the homeless and the one who lost there house by war.\n\nWe sould have all the same stuff and thing as everyone else cause it ulike them to have food,water,etc,and more but we do so if they are differnet we are all the same and they sould be able to get things to it not fair that they all sould be happy as we are cause we are all human together we help each other like Luke and Don did to help that were in war and lost all there homes and their food and water.\n\nSo i think that we sould come together and help give food and other thing to the poor so they won't feel left out on all thing that are going on in America. they probly think that we are just having fun and they suffer though all kinds of thing like no real cholthes or shoes nothing and we have it all they probly are reallt skinny they can't wear anything but old cloth.\n\nwe sould put up a fundraiser and use the money to get them some new thing and work together and rebulid up their houses again os they will be safe and warm inside a home . sometime i feel like we are just need a break from all this technology and go back to books and learn things that are in our brains then when you learn how to care for other then you can go back to the way you are and e happy as will they if you are much about them.\n\nDon and I think that they sould join a help suvice and help people who had war and lost everything they had to earn so we came and traveled every plac you can think of that had war and gave them food,water,and a home to stay at.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars. Possible or not? Either from personal transportation to public, people have been wondering; \"Is it possible?\" I belive that with the technology that we have today, it is very possible. It would reduce accidents massively, but it is technology. If the self driving mechanism would malfunction, that car could become a hazard to the driver and anyone around it. But it is still an interesting idea to think about, considering what everyone sees in movies.\n\nMany companies are already trying to construct working self driving cars. For example, the first people to truely test this theory out was General Motors in the late 1950s, while nowadays companies include; Google, BMW, Tesla, Mercedes- Benz, Audi, Nissan, and GM are a few. A few issues that they have to make a fully functioning model are that it would be too expensive to truely make it functional, especially if the maufactures use magnets to run on a set track down every road. Another issue they have is that they cannot steer themselfs around accidents or construction. But with those issues aside, it would be a lot better for the enviroment, lowering exaust by about half of what it is today, and it also would lower accidents.\n\nAll in all, self steering cars are the future of our lifes today, although an expencive option, it would be worth it. Whether its smart roads, or smart cars, would be benifitial to how we deal with things now. They would lower accidents, and allow idiots to text on their phones while driving. Just look out for the stray dog on the roads, and you'll be fine.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe the this is not valuble in a class room.\n\nIn the text it stats that we porform the same impressive \"calculation\" every day that means our teacher can probalbly tell how were feeling just by taking one good look at us. Also how coild we know if its 100% right they put it on a painting but how do we know that thats how the painter painted it? Another reason is that its an invaction of personal space what if people dont want you to know how there feeling? your going to have a computer to tell you how they feel?\n\nThere are 44 major muscles in your face and the system picks up on all of them but how do you really analize happyness it can track facal movement but it also is not perfect its states in the passage the mona lisa is a painting so how can it track all 44? and how can you use this in a classroom when students emotions change every 5 secends. One secend your haooy and the next your mad its going to be alot of studies going on to see how the next person if feeling . Other than useing an computer just ask the next person if there ok because sometimes thats all you need.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While the developed economy is believed as the sole solution for the alarming status of hunger and poverty. It is also considered as the main cause of environmental destruction. In this essay, both views will be discussed and from my perspective, I strongly agree with the former statement.\n\nOn one hand, economic growth enriches the budget for society. As a result, those unlucky people can give more support such as food or money. That helps them a lot in improving their daily life. In addition, developed economy has the high demand in the number of employees. In other words, providing a huge amount of jobs which would reduce the unemployment state. Thus, the poor now not only get job but also have chance to change their life.\n\nOn the other hand, increase in the number of factories is an evitable consequence of economic growth. That causes harm to the environment because factories are the main source of exhausted emission and other kinds of contaminated trash. Polluted air, water and soil are the outstanding examples for environmental damage by the factories. Moreover, to expand the industrial area aiming to serve the development of economy, forest will be destroy to make use of land. That leads to series of negative effects such as increase in the amount of CO2 in the atmosphere, green house effect,…\n\nIn conclusion, the developed economy brings both pros and cons. In details, the positive results in eliminating hunger and poverty. In contrast, negative consequences on the environment. However, I suppose we should take advantage of growth economic rather than reject it. Even we can apply it in protecting the environment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author ended story paragraph paragraph says going try take test make changes changing life For example sad story failed test want go home If passes spring might try make changes live This author concludes story paragraph", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology, of all sorts has undergone immense changes over the course of history and still undergoes various changes in the present world. Computers are one such technological invention which has progressed over the past several years. Untill now, computers have been viewed by humans as something that does not have reactive intelligence, emotions or the ability to respond to anything but coded language or instructions. However, Prof. Thomas Huang, of the Beckman Institute for Advaced Science at the Unversity of Illinois along with Prof. Nice Sebe have proved this mindset wrong by inventing the Facial Action Coding System which enables computers to indentify human emotions. This invention proves to be a valubale and significant improvment in the world of computers, for the first time computers being able to react to something so specific as faical changes which human themselves havn't quite mastered. This invention has widespread benefits in various fields of work. However, this invention of the FACA is most helpful and valuable in classrooms to read emotional expressions of students because in can provide for a more comfortable and enjoyable student environment.\n\nIt is most important for students in classrooms to have a comfortable environment because it indirectly and directly effects a student's performance in a class or subject. This can be ensured through the FACA since it can perceive accurate emotions. In Paragraph 6 of the excerpt, Dr. Huang predicts \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"\n\nThis quality has various benefits one of which is that it can help teachers to chager their teaching styles based oon the resulsts that they receive from the FACA which is an indirect benefit to students.\n\nAnother benefit of the FACA is that it would be able to detect the emotions of the students when the teachers is occupied or busy with aother students or while teaching. Then the FACA can be used more like a backup check to see if the class has a good understanding or if they are confused and the teacher needs to spend more time on the topic.\n\nThis proves that the use of a Facial Aciton Coding System is valuable to a student in a classroom environement and ensures that students have a comfortable learing atmosphere. These benefts may not always be directly helpful to students they do help them in significant ways by corrcting or helping the teacher.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author happy The love Of cooking still today I eternally grateful Passionate Cuban music Which I adore day filled air mixing aromas kitchen I always greatful parent love sacrifice I ve often told much courageous thing I could ever done They lives teachings basis life My mother father come country courage without knowledge language culture They came selflessly many immigrants give children better life The author s mood happy grateful parents give author better life leaving s behind", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator my name is PROPER_NAME. Im a 9 grader at SCHOOL_NAME, and i believe that in the furter i want to vote for a president that will repsent our courty and us as a unit. Furthermore I want someone to fight for the freedom we been waiting for all along. I think that the electoral college should stay open becasue our fourth fathers established it in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president by vote in congress and election of the president by a popular vote qualified citizens. There for the electoral college consists of 538 electors. the 23rd Amendment of the constitution, the district of columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purpose of the electoral college. what have Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO, in their time. they all agree on the electoral college. If those peopl", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator,\n\nThe electoral college is an unfair and irrational, and should be abolished immediately. The fact that the race for president can end in a tie is completely absurd. Also the fact that popular vote can mean basically nothing is dumbfoundidng. In a country of democracy popular vote seems like a it would be standard. popular vote seems like the best idea when it comes to a country for the people.\n\nThe electoral college is highly unfair to voters. Presidential candidates dont even have to visit all of the states to win the elections. The representation that the smaller states get is unfair. Presidential canidates will only visit states with a high number electoral college representatives because the states are known as \"swing states\". Swing states greatly influence the outcome of the election because they can hold the most power. If a state such as texas with 34 electoral votes was to have the same amount of power as a state with a much smaller population than the electoral college would seem much more viable.\n\nThe electoral college state representatives do not have to vote with that states popular vote. Al Gore, in the 2000 presidential election, won the popular vote but still lost the election(Plumer 9). The fact that a canidate can win the vote of the people but still lose the election is horrifying. How can you trust a system that works against what the United States of America is about. It completely takes away the right of people to decide what goes on in there goverment. The fact that the electoral college state representatives do not have to vote with people is highly unfair.\n\nThere is one crucial flaw in the electoral college, the election can end in a tie. In 1976 a tie would have occured if just 5,559 voters in Ohio and 3,687 voters in hawaii had voted the other way(Plumer 12). If we were to switch to a system were all states including the District of Columbia get one vote then the election could never end in a tie. Although this still seems highly unfair to the voters because the representative could go either with or against the popular vote the election could still never end in a tie solving the amjor flaw. What was to happen if we did have a tie? It has not yet been desided because it never has happened and that is a major problem.\n\nThe electoral college is highly unfair and should be disposed of immediately. The electoral college is biased towards the larger states,has major flaws that can only be fixed by getting rid of the system and does not give a fair view of what the people want. The system was poorly thought out and needs to be replaced.\n\nsincerely,\n\nJordan P.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days, the competition between different companies is more and more increasing. As a result, a number of advertisements are launched aiming to attract more people. This essay will discuss how advertisements influence consumers and how we tackle these challenges.\n\nConsumers are influenced by advertisements in several ways. First of all, advertisements raise awareness of their products. To explain, they try to embed a brand image in our brain by using pictures, colours and music. If we can recognize their products, we will have a tendency to choosing these products over other brands. According to recent research conducted by Harvard University revealed that 80 per cent of people make a buying decision easily if they have seen that product before. Furthermore, many companies hire celebrities to promote their commodities. It can encourage people, especially fan clubs, to buy these goods unconsciously. A good example is K-pop stars. Many teenagers in my country buy a product just because their favourite idols are a presenter even they do not need it. \n\nThere are various ways to solve this problem, firstly, we have to carefully consider whether we need this product or not. It can waste our money if we do not really use it. Moreover, governments should implement some regulations to prevent exaggerate advertisements. This might lead people to misunderstand product usage, particularly in food and medical products. \n\nTo sum up, companies employ a variety of strategies to reinforce people remembering and buying their products. However, consumers should think precisely before they buy something. Also, governments should play an important role to reduce overstated products as well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock One obstacle faced dirigible moored single tether stress dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation nearly eleven hundred feet Another obstacle foreign dirigibles used hydrogen highly flammable Hindenburg destroyed builders realized accident would much worse happened ove densely populated area like New York City A third obstacle violent wind currents would cause back ship swivel around back dirigible could nt weighted like open landing fields would cause weights dangle dangerously pedestrians street These major obstacles reasons mast top Empire State Building never used dock blimps", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Mona Lisa Smile is a intresting article about this new upcoming production of technology. It says that in the future they could have students computers have a facial reconzation deviece in it to tell what mood there in to adjust the to whatever there feeling. I feel as if it is not needed for it to be in a learning enviroment. I think its inpratical and would be very expensive for the school to have. That could cause multiple problems just with that problem alone. What if the student wasn't even paying attention to the lesson and it causes it to register there mood but there mood isnt based off the lesson because there not paying attention so it would be invaild infomation. He states in the article it can only find out a couple emotions and boredom isnt one of them. It also poses a security threat to the students or surrounding family because if it can see faces what else would it see or even not mean to capture but does. Over all I just don't see this fit for a students use and would be to expensive anyways. It could work in a perfect world though but we don't have one of those.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the recent days, the usage of social networking sites like Facebook, twitter, google, and many more is quite popular. People rely on these agents not only to communicate, but to know about recent news as well. I think its advantages outweigh disadvantages. This essay will explore both the aspects of social media.\r\n\r\nTo begin the positives, these sites introduce the world of virtual reality to people. This is because an individual can connect with his kith and kins sitting miles apart. To present an example, nowadays people prefer to video call their family members on traditional occasions to feel their presence, who are residing in foreign countries. In contrast, people have to stand in the long queue to hear the voice of their loved ones. Additionally, it has helped society to remove the conversation gap. Today we can chat, talk, share good memories, play games with a relative who is far away. For instance, during lockdown of the country, my brother, who resides abroad, use to play ludo with me to spend some happy moments. Whereas, in the past physical presence in the vicinity was must involve in some games.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, social media update the human not only in terms of trends, but regarding recent affairs like: charity, sexual assault, national crisis, and weather reports. These agents release news within no time, to clarify, I came to know about India is helping other nations regarding a medicine through Instagram.\r\n\r\nAs every coin has two faces, so does these sites have. Firstly, national and international connection demand a good strength of signal. If the network is poor, then contact cannot be established and vice versa. Secondly, many cases of online theft have been reported while money transfer, which could be eliminated by proper use of safety programs. Finally, people could spread fake news; for example, a person remorse that his neighbour, who had travel history to Greece, is covid19 positive, though he was not. Despite these drawbacks, I believe slight awareness of people can assist in overcoming these issues.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although the social sites pose certain threat to society in terms of robbery and wrong news, still it has many pros which cannot be neglected.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea kind unrealistic first place When dirigables would try dock building structure building would nt able handle violent winds zeppelin It caused many problems What dirigible attempted dock heavy winds blew s tail end around hit building The Hindenburg another zeppelin destroyed fire Lakehurst If disaster like occurred heavily populated place would chaos Impractical unsafe plan would nt work They would need something stable The plans nt completely thought All problems combined would cause postpone building landing gear These plans new age transportation dirigibles would never happen Airplanes safer efficient new way travel", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While the idea of having a fully-autonomous is very real, scientists are still very far from it. Research is being conducted every day to improve the efficeincy and safefty of these new semi-autonomous vehicles. In my opinion, driverless cars are inevitable and I would not doubt that I will end up seeing one in my lifetime. But as of right now, cars can't do as much as scientists are hoping for in the future. With that being said, I will there will be a more positive outcome of driverless cars than negative.\n\nMany skeptics say dirverless cars will never be possible. But, what they don't realize is that we are closer than we ever have been before regardless of how much research is still necessary to succesfully make a fully autonomous car. Google's concept car has been able to drive over half a million miles without a crash. Their car still requires a driver, but it is only for more advanced tasks such as traffic issues or roadwork. Other companies have also attempted to create a driverless concept car and the concepts have showed potential. They are far from driverless but they are going in the right direction. BMW announced that their car could handle driving speeds of up 25 mph but still require the focus of a human being behind the wheel.\n\nWhile I am very supportive of driverless cars, I think there will always be flaws, no matter the size. I think there will always be malfunctions but that does not mean that those can be fixed either. The research that has been put into these vehicles have been very strenuous and have proven that there will never not be flaws in creating an autonomous car. They still may crash but the probability of a fatal crash in a driverless is much lower than the probability of a fatal crash due to human error. Humans get distracted thus creating more chances for an accident to occur. With driverless cars, there is no chance of human error or the car getting distracted because driving is what it was built for.\n\nThere are not many current laws or regulations on autonomous cars, so even if Google or BMW were to finish research and create a flawless and driverless car, they wouldn't be able to manufacture them on a commercial level. This is because there wouldn't be any laws covering liability in the case of an accident, if an accident were to somehow occur. It is undetermined who would be at fault for the accident according to the state. I think the company should be more at fault, considering they are advertising these cars as \"driverless\".\n\nWith my opinion on driverless cars being said, I still think they are a good idea and will benefit society in the long run and keep more people safe. There are bumps in the road regarding laws and the time it will take to get to where big name companies want to be. But, if we are all patient and let scientists conduct quality research, I see a bright future for fully autonomous cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people share a perspective that secondary school children should study international news as one of school subjects. And that is mainly because it enlightens them with more knowledge and broadens their horizons. Likewise, there are other folks who consider it as a waste of valuable school time because they think students should focus solely on academic books. In the essay, I will discuss both sides. In my opinion, I firmly believe reading foreign articles should be mandatory for peripheral academy kids.\r\n\r\n To begin with, learning about things happening worldwide from peripheral academy level will surely increase a pupil's intelligence level. They can enlighten themselves with stuff happening globally such as development or any good and bad stuff like natural calamities or wars. Information as such will make them more knowledgeable and broaden their horizons. It will also help them in the long run in building their careers and will convert them into strong capable personalities. It will come in handy during inter-institute competitions like debates or during speeches. To put it more simply , it is quite easy to render someone speechless during a debate competitiom if your wisdom level is high compared to them\r\n\r\n On the contrary, there are folks who discourage reading global headlines in institutes. It is because they are parochial and have a very orthodox thinking that a tutee can only score good grades if he or she studies academic books. They feel researching about foreign headlines is a waste of time as minore level tutees should only focus on excelling in institutes by mugging up conceptual books.\r\n\r\n To conclude, reading global headlines in phrontistery should be made mandatory as it is quite advantageous for a tutee. As mentioned earlier in the essay, I hold the view that studying cosmopolitan bulletins as one of college subjects is necessary in order to educate students in the right way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often argued whether studying painting, drawing and music is useless or important for school children and if it should be encouraged or not. The paragraphs below will outline both sides of this trend and, further, I will give my own point of view.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, some individuals claim that studying art subjects in school is positive, because it can boost creativity and help juvelines in problem-solving issues. It is well known that painting and drawed pictures usually have more than one interpretation, which forces people to look from different point of views and, yet, cause disturbance to not ensure them of the right meaning. Therefore, as in puzzles, it is needed to find different visions of the same problem, to reach to right path.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some parents depart from this idea, as they consider having theoretical knowledge rather than subjective ones a better investment in the long term to engage on a course and, consequently, find a job. For instance, in Brazil, Universities tests are based on regular subjects knowledge, such as mathematics and history. Therefore, to enroll in a course, being a hard skilled person is necessary.\r\n\r\nAlthough, in my opinion, I strongly deem art a positive subject to be maintained in school curriculum. Nowadays companies expect proactivity from employees, thus, estimulating kids' soft skills can help them to deal with problematic situations, which is fundamental to build a career.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, both arguments have their merits. Although, I consider studying artistic movements essential for children development as it can be a positive add to be a proactive person and a problem-solver.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent years, many countries have reported a decrease in the number of students choosing science subjects in universities. This is a concerning trend that can have a profound impact on society. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons behind this problem and its implications.\nThe first reason for fewer students selecting science subjects is likely that these courses are difficult to comprehend. In general, science courses such as mathematics and physics involve complex theories, formulas, and concepts that require a great deal of hard work to understand. Furthermore, they are often taught in a theoretical manner and fail to show students how this knowledge can be used in real life. In other words, it may seem impractical for them to learn science courses. Lastly, it may be hard to acquire a practical job through these theoretical subjects in the future. As a result, students may give up studying science because they find scientific studies unappealing, impractical, and not promising for their future careers.\nConsequently, the lack of students studying science subjects can have a significant impact on society. First and foremost, there may not be enough qualified scientists and teachers to teach the theoretical foundation of technology, medicine, and engineering. This could lead to slow progress in these areas, and society may suffer as a result. Moreover, the decline in the number of science students could lead to a shortage of scientists for research and development in industry, which would have a negative impact on the nation's economy.\nTo sum up, the decreasing number of students selecting science courses in universities is a worrying phenomenon. The main reasons for this are the difficulty of science courses and the lack of job opportunities in science after studies. This could have a negative impact on society, as there may not be enough qualified scientists to pursue research, and this could impede progress in fields such as technology and medicine.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Travling to venus and to explor is can be a tought thing to do. Just going to the moon was hard. Venus has the size as earth but the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater then what we are used too. Venus also has a hot atmospgere going up to 800degrees fahrenhite. Its atmosphere made up of almose 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus.\n\nThe travling distents from Earth and Venus is somtimes closer and somtimes farther. just the flight to venus it would take up to years. and landing on venus hot surface. On Venus there erupting valcano, powerful eurthquake, and lighting strikes.\n\nIf we were to travle to venus and we make it is there going to be life form. Venus was also once like earth is had oceans and posbely life form. The planet has a surface of rocky sedemint and inclused valleys, mountains, and cragthor. if we were to stay there now witll there still be life? of will nothing exist.\n\nTher tradgy that happes on venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus’s surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. Its eurth quakes is bigger and valcand always erupt and lighting always strikes. and if we land what is the season gonna be like there will we burn of freez.\n\nin concluision i think that we should sitll resurch from earth. is we travle to Venus we need to know how long it will take and food ration and if we land is it gonna be to hot.The tradgy that happans almost every day earthquakes, and lighting striks.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience seem easy however hard Waiting line waiting etc requires patience Everyone matter young old patience like I I grade Each day I wonder its dream nightmare Everyday I grade I always wanted something would change life eternally After year wish would finally come true I patient waiting letter granted denied Before I knew mom dad I plane headed straight china There would see great wall forbidden city mention main purpose adopt little sister I idea I I patient weeks went lobby caregiver along families waiting child I couldnt believe ones receive gift china BIG The moment mom tried take started warning pinching kicking knows else After hour calmed calmly played toys That night went dinner My dad odered milk shake let also He get back glass empty We soon learned would rollarcoaster ups downs She loved cake ice cream wanted dad It dads dream come true In conclusion use patience everyday matter big small Patience work way life matter hard Everyone patience question will use", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Human being has always been abusing the mother earth since the industrial revolution. Almost every kind of environmental problem or animal distinction, are the negative result of human activities. Some people believe that we can still save our planet and immediate actions must be taken. Others think that these actions are just grasping at straws. In my opinion, both approaches are equally reasonable, but personal statements vary.\r\n\r\nSome people believe that we can take proactive approaches to save plants and animals. For example, panda has once been taken as dangerous distinctive species, but with the effort of many zoologists, pandas are being transfered to a much safer environment, such as the zoo, witch can insure the conservation of them. Now, we can see pandas in zoos all around the world, the number of pandas are surely secured.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some people say that such actions can never keep up with the damages made by human. Some disruptions are irreversible, like the ozone hole, it takes centuries for it to recover. Before that, animals and plants may suffer from drought and forest fire. Moreover, according to Darwin’s Natural Selection, it is quite natural for animals to die out. Dinosaurs become extinct because of the volcano explosion, and it is unnatural to preserve them or even bring them back to life. We surely don’t want to see such horrible nightmares like the movie Jurassic Park to happen in real life.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, some people nowadays engage in environmental events, and devoted themselves to protect the living creatures on earth. While some only take passive actions. I believe that although there are chances that these protective actions are useless, we should’t give up on doing so. If we don’t give it a try, we will never know what we can accomplish.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Information about the number of participants in evening courses in 2009 (either women or men) is provided by the bar chart, whereas the pie chart focuses on the age of those people.\nOverall what stands out is that language courses are the most attended ones by women with 40 participants, 10 more than the painting courses among women, whereas for men it is close between painting and languages with 25 and 20 participants, respectivly. As far as the age group of them goes, most of them are over 50 with the staggering 42% which is 16% more than the second most popular age group which is people betweem 40 and 49 years of age.\nFurthermore, men had 10 participants in both drama and sculpture classes, whereas women had double that in drama courses and only 5 in sculpture. People between the age of 30 and 39 made up 16% of participants, while 11% were from 20 to 29 years of age and those aged under 20 came up to only 5% of all people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting effected cyclist great way The snakes blocked pathways hi short water supply made hard continue He felt could drop heatstroke His environment information old man made ride hard continue All settings big effect", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", it is stated, like the title says, that driverless cars are seen to be the main idea for transportation in the near future.\n\nSergey , cofounder of google, believes in the idea of driverless cars and envisions a future with them as a public-transport taxi system.\n\nSergey believes such cars would change the world.\n\nI agree with the idea of diverless cars, but I also think that diverless cars should be futher tested before on the streets.\n\nThe reason why I think they should be futher tested, is because of the hicups and\n\nconflicts the article explains about.\n\nFirst, the driverless can steer, alccelerate, and brake themselves just fine, but they can not do some human skills like navigating through work zones or avoiding accidents.\n\nThe cars are designed to notify the driver when such times happen, but does that really make it a driverless car?\n\nGM has developed drivers seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object and Google's envision simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over.\n\nAgain, the person in the car still has to take over at points not making a driverless car.\n\nAlso, there seems to be problems with standard driving laws with the idea of a driverless car.\n\nOne, who should be responsibly for an accident, the driver or the manufacturer?\n\nPlus, in most states it is illegal to even test these driverless cars.\n\nFor example, states such as California, Nevada, and Florida have allowed the use of semi-autonomous cars but not driverless cars.\n\nA BMW project manager has stated in the article, \"We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way.\"\n\nSome of many manufacturers have an idea for this statement.\n\nThey plan on bringing in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays.\n\nThey would use this feature for saftey reasoning which they claim as a big concern.\n\nOverall, I like the idea of driverless cars and I hope to see them in my time of living.\n\nBut like i said before, there are many problems with the idea of driverless cars.\n\nHopefully, the problems stated in the article get fixed or inproved to the point where the idea of a driverless car becomes a reality.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars is a good idea, because with cars like that humans will not have to drive no more. In my personal opinion I think is a really good idea but if have its disavanteges because so far the cars aren't truly driverless because they still alert the driver to take over when pullingin and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents. so the question is are totally safe? what would happen if the technology fails and someone is injured? who is at fuault the driver or manufacture? what would the manufacturers do if something bad happen?\n\nAlso how much will the cost when they first come to market? It cost alot of money to build one so is probably is going to cost alot for some one that wants one of this cars but they are too expensive to buy. another problem would be waiting on the law as the article says that most of driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe and every body knows including lawmakers that safety is the best achievedwith alert drivers. presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times which means if something happens while a human is driving then is the person's fault but if a driverless Car is driving its self\n\nthen it would be bad and there colud be a lot of concecuenses for manufacturer. So as\n\na result, in most states it is illegal even to test computers driver cars because it is not totally save.\n\nAutomakers should continue their work untli the find a way to create driverless cars completly safe for the people to use and prove that they are ready for people to have them and then will be legal in every state.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents by explaining the similarities between the Earth and how we can overcome our differences as well.\n\nThe author believes it is worthy of a shot because of the ways to avoid major problems, such as flying at a high altitude to evade the extreme pressure of the atmosphere and dangerous sulfuric acid clouds. The text states, \"Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" This piece of evidence shows how clever the author is willing to get to investigate Venus and just how possible this may actually be. The text also states, \"...not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equallty intimidating endeavors.\" This evidence goes to show that not he is not interested in exploring the planet to purely learn about the planet itself, but it is also human curiosity that pushes us as a race to adventure and discorver things that are of the unknown.\n\nIn conclusion the author strongly supports the idea of pursuiting the exploration of Venus despite the dangers it presents. Although as the author stated, it is better to think of these \"dangers\" as challenges, as we can overcome them and reach our goal. We have the potential and technology to get there, we just need to put our heads together and do it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars, have been a way that almost everyone uses to get to point A to point B since around World War 2, And for awhile they were always growing in popularity. It seemed for awhile that cars were going to be around for some time. Almost everyone had a car, from the young to the old, all over the world people were driving. But that's going to change soon in the always evolving world.\n\n\"All of our developement since World War 2 has been centered on the car, and that will have to change,\" says David Golderg, an offical of Transportation for America. In the suburban community of Vauban, Germany residents are giving up their cars in an attempt to promote car-free communities. As a result 70 percent of Vauban's families don't own a car! The members of the outstanding community actually like not having a car, Media trainer Heidrun Walter said \"When i had a car i was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" Heidrun Walter isn't the only one thinking this way 57 percent of the population of Vauban sold their car to move there. But Vauban isn't the only community who thinks this way... All over the world more and more commmunities are thinking this way.\n\nParis, France, puts a ban of driving due to smog pollution due to the main usuage of diesel fuel. Paris usually has more smog than other European capitals as it is with it having cold nights and warm days trapping car emissions. The smog, which was progressivly getting worse, rivaled even that of Bejing, China, which is the one of the most polluted places in the entire world. The ban took place on a Monday for even-numbered liscened plates and Tuesday for odd-numbered liscened plate numbers. But even with the ban almost 4,000 people were fined a fee of 22 euros ($31). The smog cleared eough with those who did participate that they didn't have to enforce the Tuesday ban, which goes to show that even a large city can fight something as global as pollution.\n\nThe people of Bogota, Cali, and Valledupar, Colombia take a day out of the year to have a car-free event. Bogota, the capital of Colombia, with a population of 7 million have been doing this for 3 years to promote alternate transportation and reduce smog. The violators of this event face a $25 fine, and probably more than a few disapproving looks for those who like to participate. People around the world go to join Colombian cities in their day without cars. This is Cali and Valledupar's first year and hopefully not their last either! The day without cars is part of a improvement campaign started in Bogota in the mid 90s, which saw the construction of over 100 miles of bicycle paths, according to the city's mayor this is the most of any Latin American city. To encourage people to walk around more they fixed the uneven, pit filled side walks with bigger smooth version, and rush hour restrictions have been imposed which has dramatically decreased traffic, plus new upscale resturants and shopping districts have popped up.\n\nIn the United States studies are showing that more and more Americans are buying cars. Young people are becoming less interested in having a car or even a liscence. In the year 2005 the number of miles driven was at its highest but since then it has steadly decreased by 9 percent. The number of miles driven now is equal to that of january in 1995. Part of the drop is due to the recession going on, no one can afford to get new cars, and the unemployed don't work so they don't have as much as a reason to get a car. If the pattern keeps going as it is with less and less people driving the next few years in America and possibly around the world will be years of change that will change how things work for generation to come.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When reading this article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" I though that would be a great ideal but, reading the passage made me think about accidents and what would happened if the technology stop working on the car. After realizing this i'm 100% against the development of these cars and everyone should.\n\nIn paragraph nine it said \"only safe car has a human driver in control at all times and that safety is best achieved with alert drivers.\" that right there is true. I also want to show you something in paragraph nine it said \" If the technology fails and someone is injured,who is that fault - the driver or the manufacturer?\" right there should be the big reason why we should not have this because who are you going to blame the person could say that it was the car when it really was him not being alert.\n\nThere is some good things when it comes to technology but not this we can't always relay on it. We have became more independed we can't have technology do our driving for us, technology pretty much does everything for us any was.If you don't want to drive then get\n\na \"human\" to drive for you not technology.\n\nIn the states of Californai, Nevada,Florida, and the District of Columbia it is illegal to do that and I think that ever state should be like that too! Make this country a better one by not tearing it down and making it wrost already. Having technology do our driving could make everthing go down hill. It could lead to a much bigger cause to death and driver not paying attendtion because they relay on the technology. We all need to wake up and ask ourself will this be good for us or not?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Mona Lisa has caused many problems over the years because it is hard to read the facial expression that Mona Lisa is expressing. Through new technology, humans can now scan a facial expression and figure out what a facial expression is. An arguement has surfaced with the up and coming new technology. This arguement is if this technology should be used in the classroom to scan students facial expressions. The use of this technology to scan facial expressions should be used in a classroom setting because the technology can help teacher know if students understand the material that is being taught to them.\n\nHumans read emotions everyday and there are facial expressions that everyone knows and understands. In the article Making Mona Lisa Smile by Nick D' Alto, Alto says, \"In fact, we humans perform this same impulsive \"calculation\" everyday. For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\" What Alto is saying is that, humans know how someone is feeling just by looking at them. Reading facial expressions can also help teachers know if their students understand the information being taught to them. In a classroom setting, it is sometimes very hard for teachers to see if their students are retaining the information being taught to them. The average teenager is very hard to read by their emotions that they are showing. Teenagers are going through the cycle of puberty which releases lots of different hormones. This means that teenagers can acctually be very happy but because of the hormones being released, teenager's expressions show that they are sad, upset, or like something is bothering them. In a classroom of teenagers, teachers will teach information to their students, but as the teacher is teaching, they will look at their classroom and the classroom will seem lost when the class is actually understanding the material very well. If this technology was introduced to a classroom setting it could help the teacher get an idea of how the class is feeling while they are learning. In Alto's article he interviewed Dr. Thomas Huang says, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" Dr. Huang is basically saying that if these computers are added to a classroom setting it could help the teachers modify their material to make it more fun for the students. If students look forward to class, then students will work more and learn more which in the long run, will help students get into good colleges and into good careers.\n\nIf this new facial expression reading technology was added to a classroom setting, i would significantly help the teachers make their course way more fun for the class. This new technology would allow teachers to make their students look forward to class, which helps the students learn, because the class is more interesting, fun, and different than other classes. This technology should deffinently be added to a classroom setting because students like fun classes not boring classes. This tech would help the teachers make their class fun and not boring.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this cutting-edge era the improvement of technology has been caused one problem that many jobs take control by robots or computers instead of people. In my opinion, I believe that the technological improvements will lead to more beneficial for human beings. This essay will discuss the advantage and disadvantage of using robots or computers automation in the workplace.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, The utilization of robots to change human role in work place will cause many people lose their job. Many kind of jobs have a same pattern that could be replace by robot. For instance, waitress in a restaurant they have one job to serve the costumer, so the owner of restaurant change this role by the robot to efficient the cost they spent. As a result, many people who work as a waitress have lose their job due to the reason that robot is more effective than human.\r\n\r\nIn contrast, The new technologies of using robot in the workplace will bring more beneficial to be more productive. If human have limit energy and time when they do their job; robot could work better with limitless of that. For example, government abolish a rule that people have to work with maximum 8 hours a day, but robot can do more than that. Consequently, company will be more productive and spent less time when they have to finish the job.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, the trend of using robot in a workplace have cause a problem that many people will lose their job. Meanwhile, I think it is truly agree that this phenomenon give more beneficial to the company due to the productivity in workplace.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Good afternoon, Mr. or Mrs. state senator.\n\nI am writting this letter to you in regards of trying to persuade you to help change the election of the president of the United States. For many years, we the people , have fought our way towards freedom, and your assistence has been with us for a very long time, but if we the people have managed to fight for our freedom, than I beleive that we also have the power to choose our president. We can't just have a president based on congres's opinion, we all have different opinions. That is why we all stand as one and decide who we vote for. Instead of having 270 people vote for our president, why dont we have thousand's of people vote for our president.\n\nWe decide what is good and bad for us, not congress . Many people ,ie Richard Nixon, Bob Dole, the US Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO have all agreed on to abolish the electoral college. As the passage say, in 1960 segregationist nearly succeded in replacing democratic electors with new ones. that means the they might have despise Kennedy, one of our most succesful presidents. After all, the electoral college is unfair to voters, besides the electoral college is pretty old. We are living in the future, where we learned from our ancestors mistakes not just about life but also about politics. Most people consider the electoral colege as outdated or as an anchronism. By YOU helping US, we could abolish the electoral college.\n\nThank you for your time from PROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Computers are something of the present, and man-kind is hoping for more efficient computers in the future. More and more lately students are being assigned a computer of their own supplied by the school. Sometimes these computers are used for bad but mostly good. The Facial Action Coding System could be helpful for furthering academics in school corporations and could be used to help state testing which has just recently been switched to online.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is something that school should invest in. It should not become something that everyone needs to have because some schools cannot even afford books! For the schools that can afford this program it could be made beneficial many different ways. For example, many students become tired using their computers, so if the computer reads the child is becoming tired it could offer an academic game or a brain teaser to make the child more lively. The article states, \" 'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr Huang predicts.' Then is could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.' \" This program can also read happiness and sadness. Some students suffer from depression and have thoughts of suicide. This program could notify the teacher or counselor if the student is continuously sad or angry. This could help prevent things such as school shootings, self mutilation, or even suicide.\n\nSome people may argue this program is taking away from a teachers job or is could be used for the wrong things. Technology has taken the load off of teachers in the last ten years, but it has also caused some harm. With technology comes the problems of students not having their computers charged, money shortages, and things breaking. Those things have distracted from students learning. In the big picture, do the pros outweigh the cons?\n\nIn the overall outlook on furthering a student's computer's capability using this program is the better option. Everything comes with problems. It does add something more to a teachers plate, but it also helps a teacher make a connection with the student. The Facial Action Coding system is beneficial and should be considered by school corporations around the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A new technology called the Facial Action Coding System allows computers to read human emotions has recently been invented. It works by recreating the human muscular motions in the face that are characteristic of certain emotions. Although this technology that allows computers to read emotions may seem irrelevent, ultimately the technology could potentially improve the way that students learn, and help students with social problems that they may have in school.\n\nTo begin, the Facial Action Coding technology can be used to tell whether or not a student is understanding a topic. According to Dr. Huang, a professor of the Beckaman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored...\" (6). This would allow the instructor to alter the way that they teach the topic to better convey the message. This can also be used when a student needs some kind of stimulation to be able to focus in class. The author Nick D'Alto also states that the \"software can also identify mixed emotions\" (4). This would allow the teachers to see the students who are stressed and confused and those who are happy and excited. When a student is confused or stressed, the teacher can provide additional practice or tutoring in that subject. The information that a teacher can recieve from the software in very valuable. Humans can read emotions to a certain extent, but some people are good at hiding how they really feel and this can be detrimental to their education. Dr. Huang states \" most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication\" (6). By enabling teachers to use the technology, they can offer assistance to a student who may not ask for it otherwise.\n\nIn addition, students can bennefit from this technology in the social environment. According to Dr. Huang \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal\" (4). This means that if a student were getting bullied but they were hiding it, the teachers could find out the information quickly and help the student figure out what is going on. When a student is identified as being sad or depressed, the computer coud show funny pictures to help the student feel better. In fact, \"according to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them\" (9). This means that by smiling, the students will actually make themselves feel better.\n\nOverall, the use of Facial Action Coding technology is very benneficial. Whether it be from a strictly educational standpoint, or from the social envirionment side, the results are in favor of improving the school experience of students.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people strongly believe that the face that has beem discovered on Mars was created by aliens. Others say it was just a natural landform that was unitentionally created to have the appearence of a face on Mars. NASA unveiled the image for all people to see. In that case, the image really convinced many people that the face was created by aliens. In fact, the face on Mars has even starred in movies, talk shows, and magazines. As a scientist, I strongly believe that the so called \"unmasking face on Mars\" was just a natural landform.\n\nOn April 5th, 1998, Mars Global Surveyor had flew over Cydonia and Michael Malin and his Mars Obiter Camera team snapped a picture that was ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first made it's appearence on a JPL web site, revealing that it was just a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all!\n\nIn conclusion, what was strongly beleived to be a human face that was created by aliens on Mars, turned out to be just another natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Seting one important neds cyclist terrein weather bad hotter cylist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "i think that we should keep the electoral college beause it keeps things in order and people get to vote on which thing or person they want to be president or vice president and without it people couldnt run nor vote for who they think would be better at running office and it consit of 538 electors . they have already had it in why take it away now it keeps things equal and right to all american citizens of the united states of people wait for every four years to be able to vote on the people they want in office and who they want vice president the one with the most votes is president and the one with fewer votes is vice if there is a tie between the to then they have tokeeo running till one gets the most votes and the other is vice preisdent over 60% iof voters want a direct electon and the rest dont that is over hafe who want it the elcetoral college is widely regarded as anachronism a non demoractic method of selecting a president not the people but each party is selected a slate of electors trusted to vote for the partys nominee and it is entirly possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not wine the national pouplar vote there are five reasons for retaining the electoral college despite its lack of democratic pedigree all them reason not liberal but it is less likely than a dispute over the pupoler vote canditdates share of the vote is possible .\n\npresidnate to have trans regoinal appeal no regon not south north etc. has enough electoral votes to e3lect a president so a soild regon favorite such as rommney was heavily in those states for he gains no electoral votes by increasing his puoplarty in states the winnwe thake all method of awarding electoral votes includes the candidtates as we saw in 2012 election . i think that there is a good purpose for having the electoral college so people can have ethe freedom to vote equal amoung the mations world wide voteing everyone can speak there mind no matter were they are or where there from any where in the world can vote for there president and vice president the guys who run for president and vice want there votes of the people to make it equal and fair for everyone waniting to be president and live a good rich life in the white house . everyone wants to be rich and heathle so thta they csn do whatever they want so we have to have a vote on who president and who not the pepople need to see whos runing.\n\nin order ffor the people to have ther rights they need to know there president they let the people let them know there a oppontes and how they will make a good diffrence in the world to all equal rights and none wqual if you feel like that you dont wanna vote you dont have to vote for anyone and let everyone else vote of ypur sick or whatever may be the problem then you can send a letter to vote instead of walking all the way down there or driving and waisting your gas freedom says you have the right to vote.\n\npeopel all over the world want to vote on a president and vice oresident the people thta have the next hightest votes get to run for election aginst one other person for vice president .i think that the electoraal college is to stay and give the right to ther people all over the world and every where elese in the world the electoral votes it what lwts us speak are minds and us have the right of freedom and equalness over the entier world today in our nation is diffrent than how it use to be wee blacs wasent allowed anything and that only men can vote and women equals right and diffrent races equal rights of america black folks couldnt run for president neather i think that america should keep equal we all have to live togather why not live in peace", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I would tell them that it was just a rock as said in the article \"huge rock formation\" ,i also can prove that it is not an alien because in the article it states that \"arrived at the Red Planet in sept 1997...\" they went to mars to take pics of the unknown formation to prove to everyon that it was not made by alien the NASA described it as an \"natural formation\" ,even though this still left others with questions NASA said \"the crema on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the face \" which means that the picture wa not as clear as you thought it was with the clouds in the way NASA stated \" what the pictuure actually shows is the Martin equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West...\" These are all reasons that state that the landform was not created by aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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