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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars can go in many different ways for me. I have postive effects on the subject such as, a person not having to drive as much is they don't want to, less accidents, and less distraction. I also have negative effects on driverless cars. Not being in control 100% of the time, being distracted with other actions, and defects with the car.\n\nTo most diverless cars sound like a great idea. I know a person like my mother would love the idea of driverless cars because she hates driving. Anyone who really not fond of driving all the time and are really busy alot of the time in their life must get tired of driving. I feel as if the driverless cars would be a huge plus for them! Also I feel as if less accidents would happen if driverless cars were made. The world is full of wreckless drivers and theirs really nothing we can do about it. But if everyone car is driving at the same abount of safety then that should lower the rate if accidents around the world. Plus its like driving with an extra brian in the car,because the car has special ablilties. This creation would also help the mind of teens as well. There are teens all over the world getting ready to drive or are already driving. Teens can be really distracted by just being a teenager. And by the car being a extra helping hand on driving could help the teens do certain things while driving such as chaning the radio, adjusting windows or mirros even making a phone and that could not only help teens but everyone.\n\nEven though I have many positive effects on the driverless cars there is still negative affects. Driving can being a very dangerous thing. There always something you have to look out for while driving. Your mind has be focus everything around it most importantly people. Even thought it is a driverless car I feel as most of the time you should be 100% incontrolled of the car just to make sure nothing bad happen outside your sight. You should be able to control everything. Also not driving your driverless car might give people the idea that it's their time to do what ever. Which is not the case! Even though you are not driving you still should be completely focus. You should not be texing or anything els that would keep yours eyes off the road for more than a few seconds. Lastly with newer cars their will always be deffects in the cars. If the car is brand new then any problems the car has might more difficuly to figure out. And driverless cars have deffects written all over it.\n\nSo there goes my position on driverless cars. That even though driverless cars sound like a great idea we always should keep an open mind on cons of the invention. Also that saftey should be a number one factor in the whole situation. I love the idea of making advantages in the world today. Just as long as they work well and make life safer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The architects mooring mast blind amount problems could arisen Balloons strong nt already know s windy top empire state building The wind Could drive drigible right spikey doom They real way keeping drigible contained usually lead blocks held From stories air nt safest plan Also non CAPS dirigibles used hydrogen instead helium In crowded New York City fireball like would devastating due hydrogen highly flammable The builders really planned better", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Humankind has always been fascinated with the concept of cars. Motorized vehicles that effortlessly take you from one area to another when compared to more traditional methods such as walking. Everyone wanted a car for themselves to become a part of the innovation. But as time has passed, we now realized that it was naive of us to think cars were going to revolutionize transport, as some of the more simpler ways of transport (bike riding, bus) outshined car ownership in practicality and efficiency.\n\nNow more than ever, alternative transportation methods are being promoted heavily in order to reduce the amount of pollution in the atmosphere. A shining example of this is in Paris, France (\"Paris bans driving due to smog\", source two), where the goverment took the initiative to limit the usage of vehicles to reduce the amount of smog in the city.\n\nParis, one of the most idolized cities in the world, was at a point where the density of smog and pollutants in the air rivaled Beijing, China, one of the most polluted cities in the world. However, after the driving ban in Paris, the city saw a drastic reduction in the amount of pollutants in the air, as it dropped down from 147 micrograms of particulate matter/cubic meter. Not only that, but Paris also saw an inprovement in car traffic, dropping down to 40 percent of what it originally was five days after the ban.\n\nWith all this in mind, how does this benefit the population without looking at the pollution reduction? This can also benefit us physically and psychologically. In Bogota, Colombia, a generally congested city, filled with traffic jams and other problems; Mayor Antanas Mockus promoted alternative transportation in the \"Day Without Cars event\"(Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota, source 3). In an effort to encourage public transportation in the city of 7 million inhabitants, Mockus promoted an event in which the only form of motorized transportation available was taxi cabs and bus rides. This mean that the people took the opportunity to bike, walk, hike from one point to another. Subsequently, this also indirectly promoted physical fitness and a stress release for people wanting to take the chance to enjoy their day. As Carlos Plaza evidently states that it is a great way to take away stress, while on a bike ride with his wife. Colombia has also opened up new bike path, parks, and sports centers, which is all the more proof that this initiative is promoting physical fitness and psychological wellness.\n\nOne could argue that this revolution of alternative transportation could have negative consequences on car industries and other businesses that rely on personal vehicle, and they wouldn't be wrong. But this phenomenon doesn't necessarily have to hurt anyone, as these same industries can promote their time and resources on projects that also promote alternative transportation. Just as well, in recent years, the amount of people getting driver's licenses and relying on personal vehicles has seen a significant decline, such as the amount of young prople driving decreaed 23 percent from 2001 to 2009, or when a study showed the amount of miles driven by the average American peaked in 2005 and steadily declined since then (The End of Car Culture, Source 4). People started to see the efficiency of alternative transportation, and capitalized on the opportunity to make transportation more accessible to everyone. Whether its from the expanding biclycle paths in New York City, to the Bay Area Rapid Transport in San Francisco, these are just a few examples of the steadily growing list of cities promoting more accessible transportation.\n\nSo with all of this in mind, there is irrefutable evidence that the more simpler methods of alternative transportation to limit vehicular usage is more efficient and practical. As seen in Paris where the city saw a significant drop in the amount of smog the city contained. Or when Bogota where an event that banned vehicular usage promoted physical and psychological wellness. People opting for alternative transportation is the global phenomenon that benefits us in more ways than we can imagine. There''s no doubt that the older, more traditional methods of transportation out perform personal vehicles in efficiency.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time I patient dad waiting get money chiuahuce It dada sold giutar uncle get money day coarse didnt A day went still nothing When mom came picked I went swim practice trying patient wait dad get money At around dad called saying wont get money till I mad still tried patient A days went soon I excited We finally got I patiently waiting week tired So I patience worth That time I patient something goodIt really paid", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting main factor effects cycleist The cycleists main problem low water dehydrated trying keep balance dehydrated state The author wouldnt dehydrated werent hot Also problems faces setting related like snake rough road If would taken place mild area wouldnt conflicts", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Limiting car uses will change the enviorment in a dramatic way.\n\nVAUBAN\n\n, Germany\n\n- residents don't use cars, they dont even have room for cars. The only way to get a parking space is at your house which you have to buy for $40,000, along with a home or large garages at the the edge of the develpoment. Streets are completely \"car-free\" besides a few streets on the edge of the community. 70% doesn't even own cars. Heidrun Wlater, former car owner says \"When I had a car was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" They are healthier and less tense because they walk, and bicycle keeping their self fit and active.\n\nPARIS\n\n, France\n\n- banned driving due to smog. Even-numbered plates one day then the next day odd-number plates, the ones who did use there cars they got a fine of 22-euro ($31). They did that for five days. 4,000 people were fined and 27 people had their cars impounded due to there reaction to the fine. A car being droven every other day helps out with the polution. it cuts back on the polution if it's not running putting it in the enviorment. It's like if you drive once a week then you are only putting a little bit of polution in the enviorment. You aren't putting as much as you would be if you drove everyday a week.\n\nBOGOTA\n\n, Colombia\n\n- They walk, bike, hike, skate, and take buses to work during the car-free days. It's been the third year in a row that they have had this day. The goal is to reduce smog and it works. Violaters are fined $25. More cities like, Cali, and Valledupar joined the event. They are taking a stand against polution and cleaning up the smog. The bicyclers made 118 miles of bike paths. Just for this day. \"This is a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\" said business man Carlos Arturo Plaza.\n\nUnited States of America , President Obama's goal is to curb the green house gas emissions. Everyone is asking \"Has America passed peak driving?\" In 2013 Americans drove 9% per person below the peak which in January 1995 that's where we were. Cars per house hold has came down. There are cellphone apps now a days thet help out with car pooling. Instead of driving yourself to work ask your co-workers to switch days with you. Some days you drive them to work and other days, they drive you to work. You both would be saving on gas and putting less polutuion in the air. People from the ages 16- to 39- years-olds are just getting thier license, while older people maintain their license was the research Mr. Sivak's has found. Many people just get jobs where they can walk to work, use public transportation or car pool with friends.\n\nWalking, riding a bicycle, hiking, and skating are all ways to get somewhere without creating polution. If there is a way to cut back on polution then you should take that oppertunity. Car-pooling with a friend, or co-worker is also a way to cut back on polution. Instead of two cars coming from an area to go to the same area they should just use one car to go to that area instead of taking to cars for it. My point is save the enviorment and create less polution like Paris, Bogota, and Vauban. They created way to help out the enviorment, you take a stand and you make a change.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being able to calculate if someone is happy or sad is not valuable. People themselve should be able to tell if someone is happy or sad even if they are covering it up. Dr. Eckman is able to detect if someone is happy or sad without FACS ( Facial Action Coding System). You can detect someone's emotions by the way they are acting.\n\nEven without the new technology that the doctors invented to detect your emotions people should be able to tell if someone if happy, sad, etc. People should be able to tell if they are sad when they arent talking as much as they used to or mad when they have a bad attitude. They could tell when their happy when they are acting normal and laughing at jokes. Also your mostly with the people that you know the best so you should be able to tell their emotions.\n\nDr. Paul Eckman, the creator of FACS, is able to detect someones emotions without his new system. If Dr. Eckman could teach people how to detect someone's emotions then it would spread across the world then nobody would need the new system. When Dr. Eckman told us to look in the mirror and do the three steps he provided he was teaching us how to detect if someone is happy. Dr. Eckman created something that could be easily taught to people around the world. If people are able to be taught what FACS could do then therefor you do not need FACS.\n\nMany people all around the world mostly are only with people that they really know personally. You should be able to detect how someone close to you is feeling be how they are acting. If they are not acting normal they obviously something is wrong, so now you need to find out what is wrong. They could detect if they are sad if they are not talking a lot and moslty just sitting around. If they are mad you could just look at their facial expressions when you tell them something and be able to tell if they are mad. So you should easily be able to detect the mood of somebody be the way they are acting.\n\nThe FACS that Dr. Eckman created is most likely expesive to make and install, also could talk alot of time. So if he would just teach people how to detect peoples different emotions by their facial expressions they he could be saving a lot of time and money. Once Dr. Eckman has taught people then people will then begin to teach other people, which then would lead to nobody needing the FACS.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time I patient I helping kid class project We science project kid didnt understand anything He would put things wrong place write things didnt go science didnt listen anything correctly lost I couldnt beleive lost hard work So started I helped patient After three days almost done When done putting final touches presented got A got A made feel good I got rewarded hard work patient To end patient makes feel good person helped feels good This time I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There times I patient This one time I went dentist got sat Let tell something I hate dentist So probably sat hour two But one good thing I got missing school I think test day I think worst place go dentist doctor The one thing doctor dont wait long That means get go But sometimes patient Like get job interview One good thing patience get good places Being patient polite way go So prep want go patient way Not patient disrespect Its like treating things like dirt Patience sort like table manners nice proffessional If I go patient leads good future", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people now a days use cars, trucks, buses or other ways of transportation on a daily baises. Most do not even think twice about all of the pollution they are creating in our world, or even the traffic that they are helping create. Fellow citizens should start becoming aware of this problem and finding different ways to travel.\n\nMany people who work in larger cities tend to face many traffic problems when on their way to work, sometimes causing them to be late for their job. If we were to begin doing things like car-pooling, walking, biking, or even just taking a bus to work or school we could immedialty see changes in the amount of traffic. In Paris, after reaching several days of near-record pollution, they ordered a partial driving ban in attempt to clear up the city. According to source 2: Paris bans driving due to smog, \"Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France...\" in just five short days. Other places, such as Bogota, Columbia are also taking part in car-free days. These places are also seeing a drastic decline in the amount of traffic seen in the city. The author of source 3: Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota, Andrew Selsky, millions of Columbians hiked, biked, skated, or took buses to work during a car-free day, leaving the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams.\n\nAnother advantage to limiting car usage will be that there will be a noticable decline in the amount of smog and pollution. \"Paris typically has more smog than other European capitals\" as stated in soure 2:Paris bans driving due to smog. After being ordered a car-free day, smog was cleared enough by the following Monday for them to call off the ban on cars the next day. One simple step such as a week-long car-ban can reduce the amount of pollution drastically. Elisabeth Rosenthal states in paragraph 8 that \"an increasing number of private cars owned by the burgeoning middle class are choking cities.\" If we begin to limit our car use, we will notice great changes in our environment.\n\nIn conclusion, if we do just a few simple things in our society, we will be able to notice the great advantages to limiting car usage. The amounts of traffic in cities will decrease, as well as the amount of pollution in our city, all because of just a few simple things that we can change.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a variety of sports which are played and introduced to the world. Day by day, people intend to create different types of sports and they can be categorized into two sections single and team. Although, the majority of the games fall into a single type, team games can be shown discipline of a person to achieve something bigger in larger groups. I strongly agree, children should be taught the value of team sports as a foundation of school education.\r\n\r\nIn the modern world, humans have been the classic example for all causes and threads. It all depends on the human attitude towards the world well being. In this case, team sports give the best attitude. ,Moreover team sports cannot be played as selfish. You have to give priority to the entire team's idea and create plans to win a game. \r\n\r\nAlso, one more important thing is to learn how important everyone has to play their part to win a game and be supportive of each other when someone within the team keeps failing. Furthermore, winning or losing in a game is expected, we should not blame each other, rather we must be thinking about improving as a team for the next game. This kind of role plays in childhood days, gives a big exposure to grow as a person who will understand another person and to respect ideas. \r\n\r\nTo conclude , modern world people are trying to come up by pushing another person down without thinking about it twice. I believe team sports can make a person think in a broad way and be united with each other despite all the facts.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "According to one study , it is shown that in developed countries people are asumed to live more than before .in my opinion, this situation have bothe disadvantages and advantages that depends on how they use thier lives. It has some drawbacks ,namely people have to deal with more dificulties and sadness in life , society force with more problemes in taking care of ealderly individuals . However, this has some advantages that will be discussed in the following essay.\r\n\r\nIt are expected that life expectancy of individuals raise and it has some disadvantages. Initialy, if the long of life were more, people would face with more dificulties in their lives, becuase life is full of sadnesses and socially and family problemes . For example a 90 year old one is likely to see the death of their family memberes that has high level of strees . Additionaly, society must provides some facilities for ealderlies that needs a high budget, thus more 70 years individuals force more cost toward government , for instance they need medicine , hospitals, socieal servises ,etc. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, when ones live more than 80 year old , it has some benefits . For instance they have more oportunity for being happy, because they have more time in their lives, thus if they used their life correctly they would have more opourtunity to be succesfull . For instance 80 year old is enough time to speand on learning uesfull skills and taking benefits of them . \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, advantages and disadvantages of living long are equal and depends on how people use their lives, in addition how government manage this situation .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe certain books movies music magazines taken shelves offending I come across books movies music offended I believe organize books movies music different way perhaps First people offended certain books movies speak something Finding way reach happy medium If everyone could take certain movie book shelf would nt left opinion If people find offending stay away certain types books movies Secondly people like offended books music movies Its fair ones like able read listen watch want If someone nt like movie loved take away s fair buisnesses lose customers Lastly find happy medium offended people like I believe could organize books movies music magazines different way Instead organizing author organized age restrictions Just like rated movies rated video games Books music organized fassion also It would easier people offended stay away ones nt want around In conclusion I believe allowing one person take certain book movie shelf smart One fair people offended Two buisnesses lose customers Three better way solve problem", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The planet Venus is also known as the ''Evening Star,\" due to how it is one of the brightest points of light in the sky during the night. Venus is also sometimes referred as the Earth's ''twin,'' this is because Venus is the closest of the planets to Earth when comparing density size, and occasionally distance. Even though Venus is safe to see from a distance, but it has been proven that Venus is extremely dangerous when to close. Venus's physical conditions are so lethal that trying to study the planet isn't worth the risk.\n\nFurthermore, An article called \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" states reasons otherwise, as how a way a human can examine Venus with a special kind of technology. Venus's conditions are so lethal that trying to study the planet isn't worth the risk. The atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide surrounds Venus. Along with the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in the atmosphere of Venus. In addition to, the planets conditions are very high compared to Earth. For example, in paragraph 3 it states, \"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\"\n\nThis information reveals how lethal the planet Venus truly is when compared to Earth.\n\nSecondly, NASA is working with an old electronic that further supports the idea of studying Venus. Even though this electronic is stated to survive the lethal conditions of Venus, it isn't going to be retrievable from the surface of Venus, as humans can only get as close as 3 miles from Venus's surface. Including, the piece of technology is extremelly old and outdated. For example, in paragraph 7 it states, \"These devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War ll.\" This information proves against the authors point, and shows how invailed and outdated the technology is.\n\nTo conclude, The study of Venus was attempted and failed. Knowing more information about Venus will have no purpose because the living conditions are unstable. Venus's conditions are so lethal that trying to study the planet isn't worth the risk.\n\nThe temperatures are way to high and the air quality is sad. There is no technology at this moment that can survive the extreme physical conditions of Venus. Even if the technology is new or old. After all, Earth is ten times better.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As the years go on and we grow what also grows is the advancement of technology. Since the new era of technology has taken place the possibilites have become endless. Years back they didnt even have electric window control it was all done with a handle that you had to turn and turn until your window opened. Looking back on that compared to this day and age we have cars that are so close to driving themselves is that the safest idea no, but in my mind i think its a great idea to make self driving cars because everything technology wise is growing rapidly so we cant just leave cars old and boring we need to keep up with the technology we have at this time in our lives and make something new and awarding.\n\nSo we all know how many safety concerns we face in cars when on the road and this is exactely why people believe we shouldnt have self driving cars. Therefore i believe self driving cars are getting a bad rep without even getting a chance. if you dont test an idea you will never know if it would have worked or not and with the technology we have today i believe that in the near future sometime soon we will have a full self driving car. I understand that it will be hard to do and i agree that it can be very unsafe and so thats where the trial and error part comes in you have to try new things to know fior sure if they will work and i can say now that in the near future if we do end up having self driving cars that everyone who uise to say dont try it its not safe will themselves be buying self driving cars.\n\nIn conclusion, i know that the speculation with self driving cars is odd but the real truth of the matter is that thats our future. Every few years new inventions come by surprise and shock the world and this is just another thing that i can confidently say will come soon and take the world by surprise. Will there still be people trying to get rid of this invention? of course people will try but thats the key to sucess having people say things about what you have made and making it something so big that those same people will be shocked that ever thought something bad of you. So time is not slowing down for anyone its going fast and so soon hopefully by 2020 as seen in the article companies can start to announce self driving cars and change the way we look at cars now.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often said that in order to fight diseases, the government should invest more money in encouraging a healthy lifestyle in lieu of spending money on the treatment of people who are already suffering from illness. In my view, I partially advocate the idea. And through this essay, I aim to analyse my standpoints in order to reach a relevant conclusion.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, I agree that a large proportion of the state budget should be allocated to activities or campaigns that promote a healthy lifestyle. This is because a lot of diseases nowadays are actually the direct result of people's unhealthy habits. For example, children who eat fast food on a daily basis commonly can suffer from a range of health issues, namely weight problems and obesity. These diseases can be prevented if people are made more aware of the severe consequences of an unhealthy diet and the benefits of sustaining a good health. In addition, there are a number of incurable diseases, such as HIV, AIDS and many forms of cancer. Of course, there are drugs and treatments that can prolong the life of patients suffering from such diseases, but the better solution in this case is obviously trying to prevent these diseases from occurring, instead of trying to cure them, which can often place a heavy burden on patients' families, and on society as a whole.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the treatment for people who are already ill should also receive adequate funding, due to the fact that some diseases simply cannot be prevented. People living in many tropical or coastal regions, for example, are highly vulnerable to waterborne diseases after a natural disaster such as a tsunami or heavy flooding. Besides, there are also some illnesses and disorders that are inherited. For instance, if a person suffers from asthma, it is highly likely that his children will also contract respiratory diseases, regardless of their diet or lifestyle. These mentioned cases would be almost impossible for people or the government to prevent; therefore, money needs to be spent on the treatment of patients.\r\n\r\nAll things considered, both promoting a healthy lifestyle and spending money on the treatment of people who are already ill are equally important in the fight against diseases, and each country should develop flexible plans to adapt to different situations.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story construction workers faced problem The idea dirigible s dock ontop empire State Building comming end When thinking idea architecture Never put thought legal persasures air crafts cant fly low urban areas Also heavy wind picks building making air craft hard controll Another dangers could inflict civilians If right air craft get loose dingle urban areas like german dirigible catch fire Blow Even though prototype work discontinued project giving air planes better way travel air", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that this technology is very usueful. This technologhy would be so amazing to have around, it would help students and teachers out so much. it can tell when you are bored, happy, sad, scared, worried, and can even tell when you do not like an ad. It could really help out in classrooms and other places.\n\nFor example, if you are sitting in class and you are doing something online, the computer can tell if you are bored and adjust itself so you are more into what is going on, or the teacher can come over and help you out too. It could also sense when you do not like an ad, all you have to do is smile or frown at the ad, if you smile you should get more ads like it, but if you frown it will try to find an ad you will be interested in.\n\nAnother example would be if your friends are worried about you because they cannot tell how you are feeling, then they can put you in front of a computer and the computer can tell them your mood so they can try to help you, or if you are going to see a therapist for help with a mental issue or anything, they could set you in front of a computer so they know your mood without you trying to explain yourself to them.\n\nOne final example would be if you are worried or stressing out about something, the computer could tell someone so they can take you somewhere so you can just chill and relax and forget about everything that you are stressed or worried about, then you will be able to go back to whatever you were doing and complete it.\n\nThis unique piece of technology can help out with so many things. It can tell when you are upset, scared, worried, angry, and bored. Every classroom should have one of these. It would make being able to read people so much easier. It would also keep the students interested.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "An emerging trend which has generated a widespread phenomenon in the entertainment field is watching home movie. I am inclined to believe that watching movies on screens is much better than coming to the social cinema. Not only will watching movie at home help us to save our precious time, but it can also be a private area to enjoy TV series.\r\n\r\nTo look at the entertainment aspect, the most important factor to consider is the daily form of recreation. If a person has his or her private applications or websites to relax against some pillows while watching the movies, it will be one of the best option for them to save an amount of huge money instead of uncomfortable going direct to the social cinema. Such a form of entertainment, moreover, will create a private place for us to watch wonderful movies without irritating the others intensely. The more people are around, the more bad emotional feelings we will get. It is true that we always find confidence and truly happy whenever we can gather with friends or family members, which can be destroyed while watching in the social cinema with strangers. In order to avoid this situation, all we need to do is self-quarantine, find a great Tv show and relax.\r\n\r\nWith that being said, everything always has its defective sides and it is pretty true on home-movie watching. What really makes audience truly boring about the film is a distraction. Assuming a person is watching his favourite movie, he might be momentarily distracted by social media platforms such as Facebook, Instagram or even the notification of messages which is pretty unpleasant. Watching movies in our private area can affect negatively on our routine, we might be immersed in blockbuster movies or Tv series and be lazy. Moreover, Blue light from computer screens will cause some contemporary symptoms such as eye strain, blur vision or headache.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, watching the movie is on the rise, and watching movie on computer trend brings both advantages and disadvantages to our self and the others. Moderation is the key to remain the balance and solve these problems effectively.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people believe that imposing harsher punishments on driving offenses is the most useful measure to enhance road safety. I largely disagree with this view. It is quite understandable why people claim that more severely punishable actions should be taken by government to have better road safety. The two most notable causes of fatal accidents in the road are that a large amount of drivers are likely to be indeed addicted and exposed a lot to alcohol and in turn be drunk when they commuting, and driving above the speed limit, which is one of the most popular crimes commited by people . Therefore, giving much stricter punishments such as fining them much higher money or even custodial sentence can render them more careful and entail a falling mortality rate. However, I believe that education is by far the most effective measures so as to improve road safety. To the best of my knowledge, the odds of commiting driving offences sometimes hinges on the attitude of drivers. The government and school should organise a lager number of driving lesson to educate them about the negative consequences of accidents on victims and themselves. Comparing to punishments, the increasing awareness is more practical and time and money saving. To illustrate, if students are taught about attention when driving in the early days, the latter will become the inherent instinct of their life and prevent them from a lot of misdeeds. In conclusion, my convinction is that punishments are important but education is the better solution to tackle road safety problems.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I thing more people should join in the Seagoing Cowboy program because we get to visit diffrent places and help people out witch always makes me fell better about myself and it makes that person you are working for happy too.\n\nThere is also an unbelievable opportunity of a small-town boy, or antone who wants to join and has a little expereance with animals. I had the benifit of seeing Europe and China. I also got to see the Acropolis in Greece witch was realy cool.\n\nTraveling the hight seas was hard sometimes but i got over it. It took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to China. But caing for the animals kept me busy, they had to be fed and watered three times a day. But there are also other jobs you could work.\n\nThe fun things you could do on board is play baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed, but the only way you could play is after you have returning from trips after the animals had been unloaded.\n\nSo i hope that after you have read this you are thinking adout wether you should do this or not. I personaly think you should do this because it is sometimes fun and diffrent and not everyone has this opportunity. But make sure that you ask your parents first before you go sailing off without them knowing were you are at or going, that would be bad and you dont want that to happen. I hope to see you here next year.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In The Mooring Mast focuses obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock Laws made impossible original purpose mast An existing law airships flying low urban areas This law made illegal ship ever tie building even approach area Some dirigibles try due wind safety reasons idea dropped The safety human beings took part construction When German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire owners Empire State Building realized much worse accident could taken place densely populated area When dealing countries take account may use safest things Mother Nature funny thing The winds top building constely shifting With wind changing moment s notice hard ship land When building something always prepared obstacles", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt mooring Mast builders faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock Empire State building First risk dirigibles places outside US cause fire states Most dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable CAPS This would become big issue run risk dirigibles pass highly densed air cause fire inadvertently By building loading dock potentially harming area downtown New York Second another obstacle would get way building dock nature Builders say The wind top building constantly shifting due violent air currents CAPS Even attempt tie dirigibles chance back move around idea winds would much handle brought alternatives like lead weights become hazard pedestrians Finally law prevented airships fly low The article reads This law would make ilegal ship ever tie building even approach area CAPS law made extremely hard builders The overall idea make airship land building obstacle made bigger problem The idea dock vanished much risk Nevertheless excerpt The Mooring Mast describes challenges put upon builders build dock", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays despite all the various types of clues we have about our healthy lifestyle, most of them are not successful to capture people's attention ,plus extra warnings released by pundits have not been noticed by people and people still continue their previous methods of living and nourishments. In my opinion, people's life contains many big and small issues which will not let them think the detrimental movements and just want to do their routine work. Eliminating all problems will help communities to follow all recommendations and a healthy way of life.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, making structure for people's safety is one criterion but the most important one is to encourage them to follow the notices and adapt them to their life. With this regard, authorities should organize some macro-political for health activities and set some advantages for one who uses these structures. For instance, providing free bicycles to reduce the amount of usage of private means of transport or make some noticeable discount for using one who uses public transportation. Considering that, the huge support will be happened by the government and folks will not be worried about the expense of the utilization of the new structure. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand , some health movement does not need a special device, it is just about your lifestyle and should be complied but the community still do not care about the noxious relocating. In these cases, the educational system could be played an active role and make people obey the rules or even recommendations which are just suited for their liv. For illustration, making a special compulsory lesson for pupils to teach them the real way of life to keep them safety. \r\n\r\nto sum up, there are many healthy lifestyles in which special frameworks will be given to residents by experts to amend their way of life and cause well-being. In spite of that people still follow their own rules for safe, the best dissolution to affect all these programs is that special problems in their life must be resolved and intensive schemes should be set up by authorities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is it challenging exploring Venus?well in the article it stated that sometimes venus is called the \"Evening Star\"is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky,making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot\". The nickname for venus is misleading since it\"s a planet. Venus is actually the second planet from the sun in the solar system. And it's also the closest planet to earth. another statement from the article stated that \"human have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world. Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spacecraft has touched down on venus in more than three decades\".\n\nI think it's very challenging to explore venus because in the article it stated that \"numerous factor contribute to venus's reputation as a challening planet for human to study, despite it's proximity to us\". Venus also has the hottest surface temperature so that mean it might be hard for them to get around it but people still try to study venus no matter what's on there because it's closer to earth and they need to know new things about other planets and venus is the closest one to look for what's there. They are willing to try and take the risk.\n\nIn conclusion i highly think it's good to try to find out what's there on the other planets some people might be intrested in finding out about what's going on around those other planets. It might be hard but some things are worth finding out.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is undeniable that there has been a recent increase in the number of people who commit crimes in urban areas all around the world, especially juvenile delinquents. There are several causes of this alarming trend, but measures could certainly be taken to tackle the problem.\r\n\r\nThere are two main reasons why teenagers take part in unlawful acts. The first main reason for this problem is that parents do not have enough time to take care of their offspring and possess the necessary parenting skills if they have to focus on working to support their families. Thus, these children gradually live their lonely lives and become disruptive to express themselves more, even breaking the law through shoplifting, pickpocketing, or vandalism. Another important factor contributing to this issue is that some of the youth are easily influenced by films and their surroundings, which results in incorrect thinking. If they watch too much television about crime, they will also have a tendency to commit crimes as a way of making a living. \r\n\r\nThere are several actions that governments and individuals could take to solve the problems described above. One good approach to decrease the crime rate among young people is that the authorities should impose strict punishments on youth crimes to warn and educate them about the consequences of committing offenses. Furthermore, the government should spend more money on important sectors such as education and security. Secondly, individuals, especially parents, should raise their knowledge about raising a child by participating in classes and campaigns that teach them parenting skills \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while there are evident reasons that bring about this phenomenon, I believe that great efforts from the government and individuals are necessary to address criminals.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is worth noting that an increasing number of folks, regardless of where they reside, tend to explore the past of the house they currently live in. I firmly believe that people's intrinsic curiosity and concerns about their safety combined are responsible for the phenomenon.\r\n\r\nFirstly, curiosity is the nature rooted in human beings' minds, which encourages residents to find out what has happened to their house decades ago. It is fair to say that ancient architectures and buildings may have witnessed various events and happenings until they are torn down, arousing the curiosity of those who newly move in. If there is something horrible once happened in that house, such as a vicious crime or a period of unfortunate experience, I believe a majority of the new residents would think twice before deciding to move in due to superstitious.\r\n\r\nIn addition, it is true that houses or buildings, especially those that possessed a long history, could be eroded by rain or termites to some extent and may even collapse, which threatens the safety of the dwellers. Given this reason, it is understandable for individuals to gain some knowledge about the history of the old house, allowing them to take measures accordingly in advance. To be specific, old buildings could encounter problems with ageing electricity wires or drain pipes being blocked up, which would significantly deteriorate residents' quality of life and even put personal safety at risk. Being well informed of such conditions, residents can seek help from maintenance workers by improving the circuit of the old house or simply changing a new pipe.\r\n\r\nIn terms of the methods to research the history of the house or building, the most efficient way is searching for some keywords on the Internet, which keeps large amounts of information for a long period of time. Another feasible way to know about the house is to get acquainted with the neighbourhood, especially those elders who have lived in the district for really a long time and thus are familiar with what has happened in the past nearby.\r\n\r\nIn summary, we can draw the conclusion that it is not uncommon for dwellers to find out the past of the house where they reside because of curiosity and concerns for safety.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article Making Mona Lisa smile by Nick D'Alto refers to a new piece of technology that allows people to see exactly how others feel, or react in certian situations. The device was created by Dr. Huang and measures facial muscle moments then associates them with emotions. The device has proven to be succesful at reading emotions of real people and portrait paintings. Using this piece of technology in the classroom would be beneifical for all parties involved.\n\nStudents experience a wide range of emotions during the average school day. The new tool could be used to indentify all of them. Starting with analysis of how students are feeling right when they walk in the door. This would be helpful to the school because it would allow them to identify students that need help as suggested by Dr. Huang. Eliminating the need for teachers to ask students for questions. Teachers would know exactly when students had a question, because he or she was making a face of confusion.\n\nThe emotion reading computer could also tell guidence councilers how children are really feeling about their current situation. Allowing for a deeper more pesonal conversation that would create a better enviroment for healing the students emotions.\n\nAnother, way that the machine could be helpful is that it could help teachers interven before students brawl. Instead of fighting the machine would assist those in charge by seeing the issue before it becomes one. According to Nick D'Alto the machince currently searches for the emotions, anger, surprise, happiness,disgust,fear,and sadness. Technology continues to make advances everyday and this machine would be able toe search for more emotions everyday.\n\nStudents require a vivid and visually entertianing lesson, with the new technology this is possible. Dr Huang believs that the machine could search for the emotion of boredom and then suddenly change the way the students recieve the message based on their attentiveness. This would be more useful because some teachers do not change they way they present the information. Technology with the ability to adapt to the needs of the students is important and another reason why it shoul dbe incorperated into school systems.\n\nOthers argure that the technology could be bad for schools. Some poeple believe that it would be a waste of the public's time to invest in something that can already be done by a person. Dr. Huang himself compared the compter to something similar to what humans would do when looking at emoitions of others. It would take jobs away from the area replacing teachers. These all may be true, but sometimes people missread emotions. Teacher can not teach and think about how ever childs emotions at the same time, this new technology would help teachers.\n\nThis computer could most definatley be benifical to schools, because of its ability to identfy emotions. The machine could help notify teachers of confused studnets, help guidence councilers identify the true meaning of how students feel, and finally help staff stop situations before they can come up. All togther these reasons show that this technology is needed in schools on a global scale. The combination of both school and technology is the future and this is definately something that will be incorperated soon.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As a NASA scientist, I believe that the \" face \" on Mars is a natural formation. I dont believe that aliens could have formed this. During my work, I have discovered many different ways to make you believe that the face is natural.\n\nThe scientists that work with NASA, such as myself, have found many different reasons as to why the formation looks like a face. During our time photographing Mars, we have been equiped with much better quality cameras, which help us see things better on Mars itself. Over the years, we have discovered that when you use a higher quality Mars Global surveyer (MGS), the \" face \" no longer looks like a face. Still some people didn't believe us the first time we got photographs of the land mark, so went and did it again. This time, we made sure that there weren't any clouds that could default the photos of Mars. What we found out by looking at these photos is the the facial features are simply just shadows. Take the eyes for example, while photographed from the middle of the land mark, there is a shadow being created by the sun. From this angle, the sun makes the land mark seem as if it had eyes. The \" mouth \" is simply just a hole in the land mark, which looks like a mouth while photographed from the middle of the land mark. There is no way aliens could be the cause of a natural piece of land on Mars.\n\nNow that you understand what the \" Face \" actually is, I hope you dont still think aliens were the cause of it. There is scientific proof that it is a natural piece of land that just so happened to form on Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College is \"unfair,outdated,and irrational\". if the Electoral College is unfair why should should the U.S keep this process in our goverment? who really knows? But on the other hand popular votes is a great way to keep voteing fair and rattional to the U.S citizens.\n\nFirst of all,their are many reasons popular votes are way more usefull and fair then the Electoral College, say one canidate gets 80 percent of the U.S votes but the other candiate wins because of Electoral College vote it just makes no sense. a large anount of americans are considering the Electoral College vote the diaster factor the reasons for that their are many to say such as unfair,outdated,and irrational and much more.\"it can be argued that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a canidate who has no hope of of carrying their state\". that qute demostrates how some people dont even vote because the Electoral College gives no hope to some potential voters.\n\nSecond of all,popular votes are more logical and sensefull then other voting stratigies. to most ameriacns it just makes more sense to use popular voteing procsess then the Electoral College because they actaully have say in the potential president. if potential voters are not voteing because the Electoral College then why have it?\" the Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in wich no canidate recevies a majority of the votes\" this quote explains how canidates can not get majority rule over the other canidate. Electoral College should be replaced with majority rule.\n\nOn the other hand, Electoral College avoids the run-off elections,\"the Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no canidate receives a majority of the votes cast\"this quote explains how Electoral College makes the voteing process easier and has less pressure on canidates and voters. also the Electoral College restores some of the weught in the polyical balance that large states lose by virtue of the mal-apprtioment of the senate decreed in the constitutuion.\n\nlast,popular votes/majority rule are in all a better way of voteing in the U.S because of the fairness and rights the U.S citizens all deserve,yes the Electoral College votes are easier but in the end who really wins? noboby does.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Now a days people are demanding strict legal provisions on essential nutrition and food behavior to improve people’s health. However, the others advocate that taking vitamins and food is completely individual choice. In this essay, I will discuss on both perspectives and will put my own viewpoint at the end of the essay.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, some group of people strongly believes that the government should be responsible for formulating laws on public health. This is because people are paying taxes to the government from their regular income. For example, the government collects its revenue from the taxes of its citizens so the government has to act on voicing for people’s health. Thus, some set of individuals emphasize on the responsibility of health ministry on advancing legal laws on public health.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some second on the sole responsibility of government in developing laws for health of its native. They state that the wellbeing is completely a personal choice and dependent on individual’s right to be fit and healthy. For instance, some trusts that the different food habits and supplements work differently on each individual’s body. Furthermore, same provisions on health laws may not create the same benefit to all individual because each individual has different body type and have need different preferences on food. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, some agrees that government should be made accountable for legalizing health laws whereas some disagrees and believes that health is an individual preference. In my view, though health is a personal choice but it should be legalized and constantly monitored from the government also to create equal health benefits for all people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many ways for a human being to convey an emotion with a facial expression. Someone can indicate happiness by smiling, sadness by frowning, or, confusion by furrowing their eyebrows. Each facial expression signifies someone's emotions or thoughts to others. The Facial Action Coding System (FACS) is a new technology that allows computers to recognize and identify human emotions. Although the FACS is a creative and unique way of identifying human emotions, using the FACS to read emotional expressions of students in a classroom is not valuable.\n\nThe main reason why using the FACS to read emotional expressions of students in a classroom is not valuable is because of the importance of expressing human emotions to others. In a world full of new technology that is constantly being improved, it is appealing for people to try out new gadgets and devices. However, as people are connecting with technology instead of connecting with other human beings face to face, the social aspect of humans is failing. In Nik D'Alto's article about the FACS, he excitedly asks readers the question, \"Hold on! Can we actually 'calculate' emotions - like math homework?\" The FACS's goal is to \"'calculate' emotions - like math homework.\" The FACS denies students the chance to feel empathy for others. If students are constantly concerning themselves with what the computer \"calculate[d]\" their emotions to be, then students feel like they can only express themselves through technology. As a result, no human connection is made when students are having a conversation face to face. Emotions are meant to be shared and expressed freely so that friendly relationships can be made; they are not meant to be solved like \"math homewrk\" in a classroom. The FACS takes away the human and social connection between students, which is extremely important for students to build healthy relationships and make smart decisions.\n\nAlthough the FACS is a creative and unique way of reading human emotions, it is not valuable for students to use it in a classroom. The new software would cause a lack of empahty for others, confusion about how students should express their emotions, and poor social interactions between students. Many new inventions of quicker and higher-quality technology is exciting to test out at first. However, placing the FACS in classrooms causes students to conform to ideas that cause their emotions to not be expressed healthily to others. Students would begin to find it normal to share their emotions with a computer screen rather than the student sitting right next to them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of the Facial Action Coding System would be a useful piece of technology to read the emotional expressions on the faces of students. The Facial Coding System allows computers to read actual human emotions. This would be helpful for figuring out if a students needs help, users of the technology could know someone else's emotions even if they try to hide it, and people would have more empathy towards others just by knowing their emotions.\n\nWhen a professor is teaching, he or she cannot tell whether students understand a topic. In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" by Nick D'Alto, Dr Huang explains how \"a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" (qtd. by Huang). If a computer can show how students are feeling than teachers will know if their teaching styles are working to keep students attentive or when students need more help. This new technology can allow teachers to assist more students.D'Alto also explains that with this new technology we would be able to tell how a peer is feeling if they do not want to talk (D'Alto). Sometimes our friends are feeling a certain way and we cannot be exactly sure why. By using the Facial Action Coding System, we can have a better understanding of how someone is feeling and what they are going through. In the article, D'Alto states, \"Empathy may happen because we unconsciously imitate another person's facial expressions\" (D'Alto). Many times people do not know how others are feeling. If others could know their emotions then empathy would be more likely to happen. Empathy is putting yourself in someone else's place and feeling what they are going through emotionally. If more people could show empathy then society would all around be a better place.\n\nSome may say that a computer cannot read a human's true emotions. But D'alto explains how \"the process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles\" (D'alto). The Facial Action Coding System is built to process every little part the face. The computer does not just provide you with basic emotions. It gives you a more in depth analysis of the user's emotions which proves that a computer has the correct technology to be able to examine a person's face and know their emotions.\n\nThis new technology is useful in many ways by allowing teachers to know how students feel after or during a lesson, to identify how a person is feeling even if they do not want to talk, and it also can allow people to have more empathy towards others. In conclusion, the Facial Action Coding System is a valuable piece of technology to read a students' emotional expression.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that you should participate in the Seagoing Cowboy program because, you get to help people and you end up feeling good about your self. You get to take care and spend time with the most adorable animals. Also, while you are on this trip you get to see wonderfull sights that you may never encounter again. You get to be on sea where the sound of the waves make you feel like your at home. When your on this trip you get to see things along the way. It's not just work you know. You get to play games, spend time with the people you love and care for. I sertianly love it! The most important part about this trip is that you do good deeds for people, they appricate you for helping them when they are in trouble. When you see the smiles on their faces you feel fuzy inside. If you love to relax, see amazing things, spend time with the people you love, have fun, and help people. This is the program for you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent years technology has become part of our daily life, robots and artificial intelligence were designed to make our lives easier and it is one of the biggest accomplishments in human history. With the fast development robots are having, some individuals think that they will harm humans and change society as we know, others just think they are tools that are crucial for the future. I personally believe that robotics is great as long as we are able to control it.\r\n\r\nIn light of the folks that believe that technologies are far more harmful than beneficial, some will say that the heavy automation of simple tasks will leave us without jobs and opportunities however this can be argued because the more automation and technology there is, the panorama of jobs that work with this intelligence will just increase for instance take the case the steam machine, lots of workers were afraid that they would be thrown out of their jobs and impoverished however the locomotive just generated far more employment.\r\n\r\nSome see the robots as hazardous and although these machines aren't perfect their main motive isn't to damage humanity,for ,example take the case of robotic surgery, using this method doctors can perform complex procedures that may be impossible by other methods however this method has been related to 144 deaths in us and everybody started pointing fingers at it, nonetheless people tend to ignore that the robot is designed to learn and help humans which translates into this method improving over the years and normal surgeries are not injury nor mortality free.\r\n\r\nTo conclude although some robots are not very safe right now like the case of robotic surgery, i strongly believe that they can bring big positive changes in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One obstacles faced strong winds Because violent air currents winds constantly shifting The dirigible would constantly moving around They could nt even weigh would people far could fall A second obstacle faced laws There existing laws airships flying low city It illegal airships even come city Those two obstacles stop using dock dirigibles", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people believe laughter key part relationship There many times even slightest laugh needed break tension even relieve stress every It often said laughter best medicine also cheapest Laughter easily found common come In case laughter comes naturally sister I particular reason saved built relationship today When younger older sister I get along well She would always tease laugh I would laugh things find humorous way shape form This constantly caused conflict many arguments two us therefore hated sense wanted nothing As sister I grew older wiser started become much alike We still made fun teased antagonized pulled childish pranks instead getting angry would laugh instead As continued make laugh found getting along much better Soon began hanging fun parents told us Before knew sister I best friends It rare hear siblings best friends I lucky able say older sister best friend Personally I feel laughter played huge roll relationship older sister I Now depend know matter always make one another laugh virtually cheer We hang need get away something need get chests We know know always laugh end", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Sergey Brin has a wonderful idea but when it comes down to safety and who will take the blame for the accident,then thats when the real argument starts.\n\nwhat happens if someone gets killed I believe that Sergey will not want to take the blame.When we were all little kids,yes we did see cartoons with flying cars and yes we wanted to be like them.My questions are how,what,when,and where do you think this is gonna work.\n\nSergey wants the car to be driven like a human but wants it to be perfect by creating a program that creates a 3-d model of the car and a human.Sergey should know humans aren't like computers and they cant be.In 2013 BMW made the ''traffic jam assistant '' which was developed the car cant go over 25 mph but human contact has to be made with the driving wheel to make sure that the human keeps hold of the wheel.\n\nThe cars can accelerate,steer,and brake themselves.If the road ahead\n\nlooks like it might need human skills then they have made a seat that vibrates to warn them.The only reason it will switch to this zone is because it is not ready yet they have to create another program so that the car can drive in places it usually couldnt.They put a safety program that you cant use your phone while driving.But why put that if the car can drive itself?\n\nIf most of the states in the U.S dont allow too many manufactures to test cumputer generated cars then why do you think they're gonna let one out for sale?What happens if there is an accident who's in blame is it the company or the driver?The car that is being released in 2016 can drive 90 percent of the time what happens if that other 10 percent cant reach the wheel on time and something happens?The cars will not be out for long until it can drive 100 percent of the time!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Since the industial revolution the demand for cars has grown. Cars have been needed for transport to go to work, school, or just plain traveling. But recently the demand has decreasing. All around the world \"no car suburbs\" popped up and people are dying to move. In source one a German city named Vauban only have 70 percent of families owning cars while 57 percent sold their cars to move to Vauban. This new trend of no automobiles is said to lessen stress, reduce smog/ greenhouse emissions, and make cities more accessible. \"America's love affair with its vehicles seem to be cooling\" says source four.\n\nGreenhouse edmissions wither away with the less cars that ride up and down streets. In Paris, the typical smog reaches to about \"147 microgram of particulate matter per cubic meter\" stated by source two. This makes it harder for traffic to see and causes an unsafe enviornment for walking. Paris was said to have banned half of cars one day and another half the other and the smog was cleared enough to rescind the no car rule. Greenhouse edmissions, like carbon, can cause acid rain, raises the temperature, and can clog up breathing pathways making it unsafe to go outside when the smog is strong. Carbon can be admitted through the fuel of cars. In France, over 50 percent of cars use diesel fuel which causes a greater amount of greenhouse gas edmission. If society can walk or ride bikes to work or school then the amount of automobiles needed will decrease. The lessening number of automobiles can help create a safer and healthier enviornment.\n\nNot only is the 'no car' trend happening in Europe and developed countries but it is happening all around the world. Source three talks about Bogota, Colombia using a no car program. Once a year Colombia participates in a no car day. \"Million of Colombians hiked, bikes, skates, or took busses to work\". The ones that did not were given a 25 dollar fine. This day in Bogota has gotten so popular that people from other countries have traveled just to witness. The idea of no cars can improve city dynamics. Bogota alone has built 118 miles of bycicle paths. The open area away from cars has created room to build parks and sport areas, restaurants, and shopping centers. While the revenue of cars are decreasing these new areas are increasing in revenue. If using no cars for a day can have this large of an impact in a developing country than it must create a big impact for developed countries.\n\nEven though a no car program can be a huge benefit there are still people disagreeing. A growing crime rate can make it not be safe enough to walk or ride a bycicle to work. For some, work may be to far away to create a short enough walk or ride. Some places, like here in Florida, does not have a transit station close by. But even the idea of car-pooling can lessen the the use of cars. Picking up just a couple of friends on the way to work or school can lessen the amount of cars on the road. This can create less traffic and carbon emissions and is safer than walking or riding a bike alone. While some argue that the demand for cars has shrunk due the recession it can also be said that cars may not be the top priority. Source four states that between 2001 and 2009 the amount of young adults driving had decreased by 23 percent.\n\nWether your on your way to work, school, or practice it would be smart to find another way of transportation. If your new years resolution was to get fit and go to the gym, ride your bike or run to work. Bicycling and walking can create a healthier you. Cars have done more harm that good to the enviornment but it is not too late to change that. We can use places like France, Germany, and Colombia as a great example of a new way to change life. Lets do ourselves a favor and maybe pick up a buddy on the way to work, or ride a bike, take the train, or walk. Lets take part in the new trend of no automobiles.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The line graph illustrates the number of overseas tourists to three different areas in a European country (coast, mountains, lakes) from 1987 to 2007\nOverall, it can be seen that the number of visitors has increased for the three categories of areas over the period given. Furthermore, in 2007 the highest number of visitors was reported on the coast at approximately 85 thousand. The second most popular areas were the lakes and last were the mountains.\nIn regard to the coast, we can see that the number of visitors from 1987 to 1992 decreased. However, from 1992 to 2007 there was a consistently increased number of tourists climbing to over 70 thousand visitors in the final year of analysis.\nAbout the mountains, the number of overseas tourists begat at 20 thousand and has increased to reach over 30 thousand by 2007.\nFinally, the lakes were visited by 10 thousand tourists in 1987 and rose significantly to reach over 70 thousand in 2002 and then decreased to 50 thousand by 2007.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am against delevopling these driverless cars. I believe that they are inferior to manual driving.I believe that it wouldnt be safe. If one company uses the technology and mass produces these cars. As everyone believes the hype they buy the car, then it malfunctions and causes many crashes then many people wont believe in the selfless driver car after that. also we would have to spend money on making better roads everywhere so the can funtion the same everywhere. Then what if the driverless car cant react to a human driver in a situation. Then machine must be really advanced to recogize the drivers actions and then react.it wouldnt be abled to. Also could it react to drunk drivers? or any reckless drivers?\n\nAll in all i dont see driverless cars as being great. I see too many problems,and\n\nrisks for this to work. Maybe it would be when we are more sure have better technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hunting one favorite hobbies Hunting requires think lot patience When sitting tree blind experience one boreing minutes life definetly requires lot patience After settle quite wood come alive around I admit I dont lot patience hunting requires different kind patience Hunting something many might think sitting around nothing But patient enough quite rewarded whatever hunting This one thing I definetly think requires lot patience kind patience would think its entertaining patience That I think everyone patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driving cars is a big thing for people now, but have we taken driving too far? Driving has increased major problems around the world. I think that we should limit our car usage sometimes though. It can help the environment, allow us to do activities outdoors, and decrease health issues.\n\nHelping our environment is one of the biggest problems we are facing across the globe. Have you ever thought that a car is one of the leading causes of air pollution? In \"Paris Bans Driving Due to Smog,\" Paris had to ban driving driving because the air pollution was so bad, they had to find a way to clear the air. Also, Bogota had to ban cars except taxis and buses in order to reduce smog, as it says in \"Car-free Day is Spinning into a Big Hit in Bogota.\n\nLimiting our car usage will also allow us to do activities outdoors. We use our cars daily for work, school, visiting families, or for the park. Sometimes we even use it when we don't have to. \"In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars,\" stores are placed near the block, so people can walk instead of using their cars. A media trainer, Heidrun Walter, even admitted that she has been so calm ever since she sold her car. People seem much happier and active without cars than with it.\n\nLastly, it can decrease health issues. Cars make a lot of pollution in the air, making it harder for people to breath fresh clean air. Congestion was at sixty percent in the Capital of France, as it says in \"Paris Bans Driving Due to Smog.\" In all sources, it says that driving can even increase stress.\n\nAs a result, driving is a bad habit. we should limit our car usage so we can help the environment, so we do outdoor activities, and decrease health issues. We don't always have to drive in order to get to someplace. Decreasing car usage will help a lot of our problems we deal with each day.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is indeed the fact that few cities across the globe experience the severe challenges of the high amount of traffic on their roads. This essay will discuss the potential reasons of this issue followed by the solutions to tackle them.\r\n\r\nFirstly, the reason why some towns suffer from the increasing number of vehicles on the streets is no existence of a law related to driving restrictions. It means a law that prohibits people to drive their vehicle on a specific day or at a certain time does not exist which provides a liberty to drive anytime and anywhere. In addition, the inefficient public transport is the another major reason. It means that the distances across different destinations are not efficiently connected via public transport. As a result, people experience inconvenience while availing public transport to travel whereas opting to drive a private vehicle becomes a feasible option for them. For instance, due to the absense of direct connectivity of Delhi with Gurgaon, millions of employees residing in Delhi, drive to Gurgaon every day to work in their private vehicles which causes longer hours of traffic congestion at toll. \r\n\r\nHowever, the above-mentioned concerns are certainly be dealt by implementing the following methods. Firstly, public transporttransport can be improved which should connect all the major destinations in a city effectively and efficiently. This will definitely encourage commuters to shift to public transport which can increase their possibility of on-time arrival at their desired destination. Secondly, a law that prohibits people to drive their vehicles on roads, can be issued in which a driver must be penalized with the heavy challans upon violation. Consequently, the number of vehicle on the roads of a city will decline drastically. For instance, considering the concerning increment of vehicles on the roads of Delhi, the government implemented an even-odd rule which reduced a traffic by 40 to 45 per cent.\r\n\r\nConsequently, although the increasing traffic in many cities is the result of the absence of required regulations and an effective public transportation, the improvement of the transportation system and implementing driving regulations can certainly address the issues.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you like to go to Venus? Venus is the second planet from the sun which makes it easy to see it's a beautiful sight but is still dangerous. The author stated that \"Venus has proved Challenging place to examine more closely\". There are many examples of the dangers of Venus.\n\nVenus is not a safe planet to land on or to get near and the author explains why with two reasons. Venus's clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid is dangerous and is why we cant go there. The author stated that \" On the planet's surface, temperatues average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmosperic pressure is 90 times greater than what we expierience on our own planet\". Venus has the most hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. An example of this is when the author says \"Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.\n\nThe author says that it is dangerous to travel to Venus because of the Surface temperature and the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid. The author makes some good points on the dangers of going to venus. After reading this do you still want to go to Venus?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In beginning use dirigibles seemed like good idea They could new form transportation appeared flaws As development dirigibles progressed showed signs problems The engineers planned mooring dirigible mast Empire State Building would added lot stress building s frame They next found safety issue Most dirigibles used hydrogen instead helium flamable Also would use lead weights hold dirigible moored It would dangerous lead weights dangling pedestrians street With lead weights dirigible would simply swivel air possibility puncturing shell Finally law airships flying low urban areas This made illegal ship even approach building There high hopes use dirigibles end cons pros", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Public opinion is divided over the effective way of being updated on world news. While some people tend to be informed of news by conventional papers, others prefer alternative media platforms. I personally lean towards the latter view.\r\n\r\nNewspapers are known as the best way to get news for several reasons. A key reason could be that, papers are one of the most reliable media with a long history behind them. In newspaper offices, news are under supervision of specialists and educated staff. More precisely, the editors check the authenticity of the news before publication and make sure that it is not a rumor. In addition, the elderly are usually not interested in using smart devices to obtain news owing some physical problems or complications in using these devices. For example, my mother can’t easily touch her smartphone screen because she has lost her fingerprints due to doing host of housework\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, with the advancement of technology, other media outlets have become more influential in informing about news. To begin with, Individuals can easily access many online news websites anytime and anywhere and perform multiple activities simultaneously. For instance, I usually listen to podcasts or news on YouTube while I am painting. Moreover, some people believe that the modern ways of receiving news are more sustainable than using newspapers. By getting news through mass media or social media, there is no need to cut off trees to make papers and also no additional waste is produced.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although there are some convincing arguments in favor of using newspapers to be informed of news, from my perspective, other media platforms are more beneficial.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Yes I believe certian materials removed shelves found offensive Some people want read things less intrest Materials like offend many people removed public shelves For example someone accident stumble upon book containing inappropriate materials They could take home begin reading realize material reading contains information offends That really concerns people hurt library held book could begin losing customers Another reason inappropriate materials publicly displayed children What young child wondering around store library randomly picked book magazine offensive pictures That young child would see things meant child see But happen Imagine angry parents child would They would likely everthing could get materials removed displayed public within child s reach Children deffinately need seeing things also even adults even prefer Religion also example places watch put shelves It religions read inappropriate materials And knowing book contained read would greatly offended upset That could turn many people away reading certain books even going store even purchased materials In conclusion perfect examples inappropriate materials removed prevent people offended This materials books magazines etc removed public shelves offend many people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days a large number of couples decide to have babies after spending at least few years since their marriage. According to some experts, there are various reasons which urge parents to have children later in their life. Career, changes in social belief, women empowerment, escalating living expenses, increased life expectancy are some of the major causes of this trend. In my belief advantages of having children later in life outweigh its demerits.\n\nFirst, a growing number of parents are very passionate and enthusiastic in terms of career development and their profession is the primary reason they do not expect to have children in the early stage of their marriage. It is intuitively obvious that in this age of huge competition, unemployment and economic crisis, people around the world are constantly worried about their career and job promotions. As a result, parents decide and determine to postpone their first childbirth. Second, women empowerment has changed the old way of life where a woman's sole responsibility was to look after the children. Since many wives are working these days, they decide to take babies after they reach a stable job position.\n\nFurthermore, social belief regarding giving birth of children has changed dramatically and people are more concerned about the living expenses than the number of babies they have, unlike older generations. Additionally, parents who study full-time in universities can not concentrate on their studies competently if they become parents. Enhanced life expectancy and changes in the social belief are two other reasons for this trend.\n\nUndeniably people who either work or run a business can reach to a stable position before becoming parents. Thus they can take better care of their babies which would have been impossible if the baby was born earlier. It is often a fact that having offspring early in life can escalate expenditures and financial responsibilities of parents. In particular, if the parents cannot allocate time for them, they grow up with psychological issues. Such young parents often lack the knowledge and time they need to properly take care the baby. Ultimately, parents might put their career at a risk as well as the future of their children if they become parents before they are mentally and economically stable.\n\nReversely, having offspring in early life have few advantages. Such parents have new members in their family and their isolation would be extirpated and they will become more family-oriented. \n\nIn conclusion, despite the pleasure of having a new baby in early years of marriage, parents who decide to have babies later can primarily, readily and precisely focus on their career, can easily fulfill financial requirements and have sufficient time to persist, strive and struggle in order to have a stunning, and illuminated future in life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nThe purpose of me writing to you is because, i agree that we should change the way we vote for our president. Everyone has a right to vote but dont you think a easy prosses would be much bette? there are many reasons i disagree with using Electoral Collage but there are way to many reasons so im only going to give a three. my three reasons on why we should not you eletoral college is because the prosses, the problems, and finally because its old.\n\nThe electoral collage lets be honest is a huge big unfair process. There are very many steps to the Electoral collage and i belive there are many more ways we can vote. Picking the hardest one in my personal opion is just not to bright. We should have a easy way to help the people running the electoal collage and also help the citizens. There are many resons why doing this wil;l halp the process so we will have our president voted faster.\n\nThe eletoral collage has very many problems in its system. a few of them are that when the citizens vote they are not voting for the president they are voting for the elcetors who vote for the presidents. Another reason is Eletoral collage is very unfair. The peeople or the electors that are voting are not always the right ones also depending on which side you are on rpublican or the decmocratic sometimes een for example you are a republican one of your electors could be democratic as i said before very unfair.\n\nFinally everyone gets tired of crummy old boring things! Have you ever hear it is good to try new things? lets face it the system is really old. I believe would shold try differant methods of selecting the president. If for any reason it does not work out we can always try something else or go back too the same way. i belive that we should try something new and not the same old boring unfair way we have been using for years.\n\nAll in all i belive that we should change the way we vote for the president. This eletoral collage from my understaning is not something we should keep using. As i said there are to many reason that i would have to write down but here are my three reasons to change the way we vote. First the prosses of picking the president, second the problems that the eletoral college has, and last because the system is old and needs to change so, no that you have read this are you going to help me and everyone else change this system?\n\nin my respect, PROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Presently famous public figures are more known for their luxurious lifestyle and richness than their talents and performances, which negatively influences the younger genesis. I entirely agree that famous personalities are a bad influence. In the subsequent paragraphs, I shall explain how famous big names set bad examples for young people. \n\n Firstly, some big shots are only famously known for their richness and attractive lifestyle, and often it adversely affects the psyche of the younger adults. They make you think it is mandatory to look graceful and must buy expensive products. Their acting skills might be mediocre, but they have become a sensation through the public display of their materialistic wealth and charming lifestyle. At times these end up engaging in habits like smoking, excessive drinking, or drugs, which negatively influence the younger person. \n\nAdditionally, someone has a harmful effect on the self-esteem of young people. personage commonly display and associate beauty with perfect bodies. When youths see that, they want to look like them. While trying to imitate them and grow thin, teenagers develop eating disorders. Also, dissatisfaction among minors with live-like heroes often leads to seriously negative health consequences. Besides the fact that certain good bigwigs like Bill Gates and Ratan Tata inspire to juvenile achieve their goals through hard work and dedication, there is a significant majority of superstars who is hypocritical. \n\nTo sum up, famous big shots do negatively influence the youth through their public display of wealth and unhealthy habits which harm the mental health of the childhood.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "News has been the means of getting information for many decades. However, it is said that reading and watching the news program is useless. In this essay, I will argue why I totally disagree with this statement.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, one of the major reasons why we should keep up with the news is because we can get up-to-date information about what is happening all around the world. For instance, in 2020, there was a sudden COVID-19 outbreak that required civilians to stay at home and wear a mask outside the house. There was no way the citizens could hear the pandemic except by reading information through the newspaper. As a result, many people could quarantine and survive the disaster. Clearly, accessing news is a crucial thing to do these days. \r\n\r\nThe second reason why we should stay informed through news is we can develop critical thinking skills. By following the news, you are exposed to a variety of perspectives and viewpoints on current events. Furthermore, this can help you develop your critical thinking skills, as you learn to evaluate different sources of information and form your own opinions based on evidence and reasoning. As an example, my cousin formed a habit of reading the newspaper every morning. Therefore, he can build informed conversations with others on a variety of topics such as politics, science, health, and technology.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, this essay argues that people need to keep in touch with current events by develop their current routine to watch and read the news. In my opinion, everyone should stay updated with the news.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people find certain books music magazines offensive inappropriate young reads Many people think material removed libraries completely People think young people exposed offensive material effect choices make react certain situations At time people say remove book shelves They say everyone right read listen whatever wants Its persons right choose weather age appropriate Its elses right take away choices nt People belive remove material libraries think corrupt young minds They believe material convey message alright books music saying This turn create different mind set young reader Which cause young reader aggresive like make bad decisions well well around These people want libraries learning healthy eviornment young minds grow naturaly unharmed offensive material People believe leave material shelf say one elses right make decison removing Its readers right choose weather read material The read likely learn material saying regaurdless weather library They believe would better young reader learn safe enviornment one else later life show tell The enviornment maybe alot dangerous library learn though one else I believe way I believe one elses right remove books libraries But also believe avalible young readers get These books maybe offensive people choice read They read books affect I believe books suitable young readers placed either higher shelf different part library young readers acsess If readers parents want learn safe enviornment sit children explain In end rights use choice weather read listen certain material It one elses choice besides", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many individuals think that art subjects, such as music, dance, sculpture, painting, and many more, are crucial to education, while others claim that such activities are a waste of time. I concur that it is a crucial subject, but I think youngsters should learn about various subjects, not only art. Both points of view will be discussed in this essay. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, There are a number of reasons why teaching art to kids in school is important, including the fact that it can increase students' self-confidence and help them overcome stage fright. For instance, when students participate in school events where they must perform on stage in drama, dance, speeches, and music, their self-confidence and stage fright will both increase. Second, Children can learn about our cultural heritage by visiting museums. For instance, a teacher should visit a museum or other historical location once every six months. In addition, Teachers should be teaching painting, it would be creativity of mind, If people increase their skills in painting and other art activities it would be they have new ideas. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, Some people believe that art is only a short-term hobby and focused more on subjects like science, technology, and business. Children who are only involved in the arts do not have time for other subjects. Due to younger students choosing other subjects over art, art-subject jobs are less common today and require more training. For example, let's take the example of photography. We need to spend in high cameras and locations for portfolios so that the public will be interested and artists can earn. Other subjects lead to success more than the arts, so children need to make a greater expenditure on the arts, which is one kind of business. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, schools should emphasize the arts as well as other subjects, and teachers should teach students about our cultural history and the advantages of the arts.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being people always make feel comfortable around likely best quality friend Everyone flaws friend always look past find good one trust A friend tell joke make laugh cry Making someone laugh always help think s possible life get worse Laughter valued gift given You know inside s making happy seeing smile face There many times life I laughed hard I cried There truly greater feeling world knowing people life cheer even saying something ridiculous breaks hysterical laughter I laugh lot throughout day When I nt people get suspicious feel like s something wrong That s literally much role laughing plays life Laughing second language life There one time particular life span far made laugh hard I cried tremendously hard My friends staying house boys We many things mad us question sanity hot sauce spoon full watched comedy shows also ate sick It time lifetime laughed While watching comedy shows could nt breath We laughing hard Nothing could make stop laughing I would keep replaying every joke head I d start laughing even I already hurt much watching earlier The comedian magician words way put together seemed like reading sacred scroll ancient times I laughed cried I probably ten minutes straight It unbelievable Making lifelong memories friends something I never forget I truly know great I life people would kill shoes get love support I get friends family All experiences things I learn whether re good bad I know going help later life able make right decision presented All laughs share people makes know good time throughout day smiled laughed They made point day great well Being around great well I know re already accepted lives I nt try anyone else Everyone laughs point another throughout lives matter much deny I really nt even know would better feeling able let little giggle every I really nt think I feel really honored I amazing people life always make exciting full laughter life It nt way personal opinion Live life fullest would want live way", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Home Blueprints lives Narciso Rodriguez author stretches importance family The mood Narciso Rodriguez creates comfortable loving homey feeling He states grows learning family nothing blood relative He says family welcomed everybody Strangers needed help neighbors extended family He creates loving mood said lived closeknit community He also says These cultures came together great solidarity friendship says I never forget parents turned simple house home sense appreciation feel comforting atmosphere Those moods I felt reading memoir Narciso Rodriguez", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As the author tells in the article, Venus is very dangerous due to thick atmosphere of about ninety-seven percent carbon dioxide that covers venus. Not only is the atmosphere high, but the temperature and atmosphere pressure as well. The temperatures average is over eight-hundred degrees fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is ninety times more than what humans experience on earth.\n\nAlthrough, the conditions are extreme. The author gives reasons to visit and research more about Venus. As stated, \" Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" The author states that they are very amazed how Venus could have been the most similar to Earth. The author continues by describing Venus with similar Earth features, \"The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar fetures such as valley, mountains, ans craters.\" Next, the author states that Nasa is already working on making a spacecraft to last long on Venus. As said, \" For example, some simplifield electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\" Nasa is already planning to visit Venus for research.\n\nOverall, the author supported his idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers by giving reasons and telling how Venus could be very similar to a Earth-like planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In many parts of the world, cars are used on a daily basis. People use their cars everyday to get to work or any other place they go. These people should probably consider limiting their car usage. There are advantages to it and it can be beneficial.\n\nThe limiting of car usage can be helpful to them and their city's environment. I think that the people should limit their car usage because it can lower air pollution and air pollution is one of the biggest problems many cities or countries in the world are facing. This is because those citizens use their cars too much and they don't limit how much they use it.\n\nOn source 3 a businessman from Bogota, Columbia says that its a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution.\n\nIn addition, citizens from every state and country should limit their car usage because they don't have to worry about traffic. These citizens should walk, take a bus or ride their bicycles to where they go.\n\nIt can also save them time and avoid the trafficjam in the streets and it might help them get to their destination faster. Source 3 says that\n\nColombians hiked, biked, skated, or took buses to work during a car-free day leaving the streets of the capital city eerily devoided of traffic.\n\nMore over, citizens should limit using their cars because in some countries around the globe many people are cooperating and taking the advantage of limiting their car usage.\n\nIn some countries from Germany, there are families that do not own cars. On source 1 a media trainer and mother of two said that when she had a car she was always tense and now she's happy the way they are car free. In the city of Paris, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the global city . The usage of cars have created smog in different countries including Paris. In source 2 it says that motorists in Paris with even numbered plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a $31 fine.\n\nIn conclusion, people from all the countries and cities of the world should take the advantage of limiting their car usage. It can benefit them by avoiding traffic if they ride their bicycles or walk, spending money on gasoline and get to where they need to go faster. Another advantage would be to avoid air pollution to the environment and city and help making it a better place by being a great and considering citizen and limit the amount of car usage.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In libraries certain materials shelves offensive peopleI seen materials eyes But Should libraries take shelves matter Thats question Some might find offensive others It depends person Libraries cant please everyone In opinion libraries take materials shelves material take shelf could material another person enjoys Just dont take material shelf nt mean nt solutions think materials tooken shelfs Some solutions fix problem could take offensive materials put taller shelves room thereselves children people like idea dont see certain materialsThen people find offensive people dont get side matter solves solution problem If solution nt work many The librarie take really offensive materials replace others suitable Overall I think libraries take materials Just try make people offensive nonoffensive side happy conclusions one", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on driverless cars is that car manufacturers need to do more research and develop a more safe and effective driverless car, but the thought of driverless cars is pretty cool.\n\nHumanity has always strived to improve thier inventions. When we invented the telephone people soon wanted it to be wireless. Now look where we are; we have phones that can fit in the palm of our hand with more computing power than a 1970s space shuttle. the advancement of technology in the past 150 years is almost unbelievable. from the invention of the internal cumbustion engine to the supercars today we still come up with better and more efficient ways to transport ouselves around. back in the day people would laugh at the idea that cars could move over 140 miles per hour. now it is common to see a car going over 180 miles per hour. But now we are in a time were large automaking companies are developing vehicles where you do not have to drive. the computing power and sensors will be expensive now, but in 20 years they will be mass prodiced and will be on most of the cars on the road.\n\nAs you can see, there are many reasons to have autonomous cars and reasonss not to. but my opinion thinks that autonomous cars are the future and can hopefully one day eliminate car crashes on the roads", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If Venus is so inhospiable, why are some scientist discussing visits to its surface? \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" is abut the risk and how hard it is for our technology to survive Venus' surface to explore. This is how the author supports his ideas of studying Venus.\n\nHere are some of the authors claims on why it is imortant and worth it to explore Venus. The author thinks that studying venus is a worthy persuit despite all of the dangers that come with exploring the planet. The author says that astronomers are facinated by Venus because it it could have been the most Earth like planet in our solar system. Also becuas Venus was porbably covered mostly in oceans meaning that life forms could have lived on the planet. The planet also has rocky sedement, valleys, mountains, and craters just like Earth. Venus can also be our nearest option because space travel takes such a long period of time. Because of these reasons the author thins that Venus is worth exploring eventho the risk is so high.\n\nIn \"The Challenge of Ecploring Venus,\" the author has supported his ideas. The author said that Venus is most Earth like and could have also suported life long ago. Also that it sometimes the closest option for exploration. I think that we should explore Venus more If our technology advances enough to allow us to explore safely.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This technology would improve students ablity to understand the emotions of others which is a postive improvement that should be placed. This technolgy could help understanding of students when learning about a subject or a person of intrest in the class room or on projects.\n\nThe students get the explanition of how the system works for example in paragraph 3, \"the process begins when the computer constructs..\" which will help them with how the process works from the start. Then\"..software can even identify mixed emotions\" paragraph 4, which shows that there isnt always only one soild emotion so the varities vary. also it explains the method behind the work \"...simliar anatomical information as electronic code\" in pargraph 5.\n\nSome may argue that this takes away observing but in all honesty this explantion of how it works and the explantion of emotions through a software is so much more imporant. That we have the technology thats willing and able to do things like this. So we should accept what is being offerd and improve are learning system.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear, Senator\n\nI agree in favor yo keep the\n\nElectoral College . Beacause the founding fathers etablished it in the\n\nConstitution as a compromise between election of the\n\nPresident by a vote in\n\nCongress and elction of the\n\nPresident by a poular of qualified citizens. We would not want to change the\n\nConstitution that are great founding fathers had once made before. Under the 23rd\n\nAmendment of the\n\nConstitution of the\n\nDistrict of\n\nColumbia is allocated 3electors and treated like a state for purpose of the\n\nElectoral College.\n\nFor this reason in the word state also is refers to the\n\nDistrict of\n\nColumbia . Each candidate running for\n\nPresident in your state has his or her own group of electors. You help choose your states electors when you vote for I agree in favor yo keep the\n\nElectoral College . Beacause the founding fathers etablished it in the\n\nConstitution as a compromise between election of the\n\nPresident by a vote in\n\nCongress and elction of the\n\nPresident by a poular of qualified citizens. We would not want to change the\n\nConstitution that are great founding fathers had once made before. Under the 23rd\n\nAmendment of the\n\nConstitution of the\n\nDistrict of\n\nColumbia is allocated 3electors and treated like a state for purpose of the\n\nElectoral College.\n\nFor this reason in the word state also is refers to the\n\nDistrict of\n\nColumbia . Each candidate running for\n\nPresident in your state has his or her own group of electors. You help choose your state electors when you vote for\n\nPresident because when you vote for a canidiate you are actually voting for your candidates electors.\n\nWhatis wrong with the\n\nElectoral College . Under the\n\nElectoral College system voters vote not for the\n\nPresident but for the slate of electors who in turn elect the\n\nPresident . The single best arguement againt the electoral college is what we might call the disaster facter. The american people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election in the century the system allows for much worse. Prehaps most worrying is the prospect of the election vote would be tied in the elctorlal vote. In that case the election would thown to the house of represenitives where state delegation vote on the president .\n\nIn conclsion this is why we should keep the Electoral college. Because they have plans for back up and everything is orginised for america.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I belive this is one of the best of writing i've read in a long time. But I have to disagree. I belive this invention is a waste of time. The teacher who said it'll help make lessons fun in science in schools, no it really wouldn't. Kids go to school for an education but they want it to be fun and enjoyable but shcool has'nt been that way in America for many years. It's just the way the American education system is set up. A mood teller wouldn't drive me to be motivated in school to be completely honest. What would drive me is eachers who want to teach with a purpose not ones who come here to reeive a pay check. If you know your friends good enough too you wouldn't need a machine to do a virtual scan and personalize the person you're lok at. This invention was a waste of time and probably a great big chunk of money too. I understand this invention woudl be great for science in a labaratory but not in a achool classroom just no. Keep it for your ancient artifacts but not the millenials. But all in all I juat beleive this will only work in a science lab somewhere, kids dont want this type of technoogy kids want ipads fro homework, personal laptops, longer lunches, longer passing periods so I dont think this would ever work. I'm not bashing this whole entire thing though, too invent somethign you gave to be a technological genius to make it work, last, and look presentable for everybody. Its not just wires and duct tape. It's true science and I respect that. But pleasejust keep that at the colleges and we'll take the things we enjoy not a coded runnning monster machine that eats code for breakfast, lunch, and dinner.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being a scientist at NASA is very hard because you have to make sure that you are correct when talking about something important such as the Face. Many people like to make theories about subjects but nobody knows about the real information. Not unless we share it to the public, we will not share things we want to hide from everyone. The picture was not made by aliens and we explain why it is just a natural landform.\n\nIf I were to be a scientist at NASA I would tell the person that the Face is just a natural landform. There are many conspiracy theorists that claim we are trying to hide something, such as saying aliens made the Face. In the article it says\n\n\" evidence that NASA would rather hide \" , that is correct. If the aliens did make it then we wouldn't have showed the public the photos. We would want to keep it out of newspapers, magazine, tv shows, and movies.\n\nNASA would also never want lots of people to see the picture of the Face if they were to hid something. We would make the picture an enigma to the citizens of the world. Scientist in NASA have studied these for years and they have all the information. Also in the third paragraph in the article it tells us that there are some shadows that make the the Face get the illusion of having eyes and a nose. The third paragraph says \" The authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars. \" which is telling us that they want people to know more about Mars so we obvisouly wouldn't be showing the pictures if the aliens made it.\n\nAlthough there were few scientist that believed the Face was an alien artifact, in paragraph seven it says\n\n\" ... a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all. \" , NASA scientist take their jobs very serious. People continued to say the Face markings were made from aliens but the NASA scientist said it was just a natural landform and some of the pictures were made from the shadows. On April 8, 2001 it was a cloudless summer in Cydonia, Malin's team got an \" extraordinary \" picture of the Face because many people such as the theorists said maybe the alien markings were hidden behind the haze.\n\nIn the second paragraph NASA was excited to see if the Face was something sensational and the article says \" Scientist figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia. \" the only thing that made this one stand out was it has shadows that give it facial features such as a nose, eyes and a mouth. NASA soon showed the picture for all the people to see with a caption telling them what it was. NASA would not show the picture and make up something if the Face was really created by aliens.\n\nIn the very last paragraph the article tells us what the picture actually shows from what the scientist at NASA have gathered. Paragraph twelve says \" What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the American West. \". The scientist are telling us that the Face is just a landform, as a NASA scientist there is a lot of information about the Face and it was not made by aliens. NASA has got many photos of the Face and have also commented about what made it look like this.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I dont like the idea of using technology to express emotions. The artical says \" computers need to understand that to\" but how will they help us not feel down anymore? How will a computer talk about your problems with you? How will it help you get better in the long run? It wont , because it doesnt talk to you , it doesnt help you with your personal issues like a real human can. A computer will not help a studen who is mentally and physcally drained, they need to see someone who can mentally help them and make them better than they were. If the only thing i had to express my feelings to was a computer , i would never get better because it doesnt talk back or help me sort out my problems it doesnt tell me what right from wrong and what to fi. So no i do not agree with this.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author passage seems happy way life today She explains parents originally Cuba arrived United States She tells us born situated two family blond brick building She talks growing enviroment instilled great sense family She mentions parents raised well made seem like extremely great family The author memoir seems extremely happy thinks found definition family", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A lime I patient last year every day I patient aunt last year aunt would pick back school someday I didnt know picking like one time first day school I didnt know happening I didnt know going pick I didnt phone I couldnt call mane There I waiting patience school As I waiting I friend house I went back school waited For minutes felt hour aunt came picked", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars may be in out near future. I personally think that driverless cars will be a neat addition to the worlds automobiles, but may also be bad due to of safety issues.\n\nFully automated acrs may be a cool idea depending on hopw manufactures persue these ideas. Immagine needing to go on a long trip and not having to stay awake for the whole drive, then immedately crashing when you get to your destination. immagine being able to sleep while you travel the world in the comfort of your own car. Imagine not having to focus on the rad at all and be able to take part in conversations and games while driving on the road. this could be our future, but may not be a a very safe one.\n\nIn the story it says,\"Presently, Traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in controll at all times.\" I agree with this statement because what would happen if an automated car \"looses connection\"or \"dies while on the road\" resulting in a collision causting people their lives? who would be at fault? You? the Manufacturer? things like this have to be discused before you can even think about seeing a fully automated car in any future. Regulations need to be set so we can pass laws that allow SAFE automated cars in all of the world.\n\nAutomated cars will be a neat idea to bring to life, but it might be a little bit further into the future than you might think, but it may be the next big step in public transportaton. All we need to do is to figure out what to do if something happens while on the road.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper tired lazy people sitting computer wasting life bacause The issue think people spending much time computer I strongly believe people spending much time computer And reasons people spending less time exercising people enjoying nature less time interacting family friends Without doubt probably know exercising least somewhat helpful life people sitting home computer exercise going cause people gain excess amount wait Because sit around And nothing except computer The re going lazy re going So re going want anything really s waist life And cases cause depression Just ask local resident says mom used computer time nothing life became depressed And soon killed people going become like I know lot people like outside nice sunny day somebody day room eyes computer screen Because cant think anything else lives someone loved Doing life I m pretty sure would try something help get path Just ask another local resident says I remember coming home everyday mom shades pitch block like dark cave would sit hours computer wasting life I remember asking long since ve gone outside answered almost two months I know family family member mine computer junkie And I remember family get together aunt one could never come Because busy computer And", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I agree computers positive effect people They teach handeye coordination give ability learn faraway places people allow people talk online people More people see computers positive effect people Spending time computer great way enhance handeye coordination It also teaches type fast Typing important skill need jobs It important throuhout school teaching us type also use handeye coordination loaded You keep eye move arms hands hit Computers helpful many ways Have ever looks like would found With computer Comuputers give people ability learn faraway places people You get pictures important cities places knowledge people lies Yes would social studies look buts much easier faster online Computers save time make life easier Computers learning advanced everyday They give oppurtunity talk people online whether world street In order need web They sold computer stores already installed computer Being able talk people online really great thing Its fast way learn person maybe one different country Its almost like pen pal last computer People saying computers negative effect people They say people spanding much time computer exercise They also say interacting family friends All things All manage time Or day computer If thinks everyone say computer positive effect one last invention created I would like thanks f reader time hope hat support ideas", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face\n\nHave you ever heard of a planet having a face? Neither have I. Even though there seems to be eyes, a nose, and a mouth, on a planet, does not mean that this sighting can't be a natural landform, and it also doesn't prove that there is life in space.That is why \"The Face\", is just a natural landform.\n\n\"The Face\", is just a natural landform because they can't prove that aliens are real. People think that they have seen UFO'S in the sky, but how can they prove that it was not just a shooting star? They can not prove it. Not even the smartest scientist or astronaut can prove that UFO'S are real, because they have no physical evidence, Just like Aliens. Out side of Earth is a completely different system. there is very little ways for aliens and life forms to live there. Yet again, they only have weird sightings like \"The Face\" to explain their reasoning for life in outer space and on other planets.\n\nThere is not life in outerspace, or on any planet, even though, the other side would bring up UFO'S,\n\nand bring movies like \"E.T\" to state their proposition, how do we know that these \"UFO'S\" are not just shooting stars or helicoptors, and movies like \"E.T\" are fiction, even though they seem so real and so believable, it is quite obvious that its just not possible. NASA has never had any sighting or any true proof that life does exist outside of our world, and even when they get the slightest and silliest ideas that there is life, they get the worlds hopes up and then when people ask for evidence, they say something like \"there is currently no physical evidence, however research says \"...\". \" You get the picture. it just cant be proved, and most likely wont ever be able to be proved.\n\nfinally, \"The Face\", people are obsessed with, is really just a landform, a very cool landform indeed. There were no aliens responsible for this landform, or any other landform. it was most likely, just created by the draft, or by the seasons of the planets, maybe even created by the gases that are in outerspace. That is why the face on the planet is just a natural landform and in no way related to other life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why do people think aliens created the Face on Mars?\"\n\nMany lots of scientist of NASA think that the Face was created by aliens maybe they are correct maybe they are not ,my opinion is that aliens did not made the Face.\n\nOn 1976 NASA discovered the \" Face on Mars.\" Some of the scientist trusted themselves and believed it was made from aliens ,but they wrere actually all wrong.\n\nWhy? They were wrong because is just a natural landform that didn't prove nothing to the scientist that believed that aliens did it. On April 5,1998, 2 mens when and flew over Cydonia (where the Face was located) and snapped a picture ten times better,sharper one picture you could actually see well the Face.\n\nWhen that happened everyone was waiting for the picture of the \" Face on Mars\" and they discovered for sure that the Face on Mars was only and actually is a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The landform on Mars is very similar to the mesas or platues of the North America's Southwest. The Face of Mars is indeed a natural ocurrance. It has been proven with some very expensive and accurate technology that it is not an alien artifact. It would be in NASA's interest to share it if it is an artifact. The first 1976 Viking photo is not creditable.\n\nThe credibility of the Mars Global Surveyor has been tested twice on the Face. It took its first picture of the Face in 1998. Sceptics blamed the weather for covering up \"hidden alien signs.\" Three years later, the Mars Global Surveyor took another picture of the Face. This picture was taken with optimul weather conditions and on the highest resolution possible for that camera. The clearity showed that the Face of Mars was mearly an amazing landform, not an alien artifact.\n\nIf for some absurd chance it was an artifact of some ancient alien race it would have helped NASA. They could have recieved more funds to go explore and find remenants of the alien civilization. They would have told everyone. They could make a huge profit from it. NASA could get more money from investors and taxpayers. It would have been to there benifit.\n\nThe Viking 1 photo is 40 years-old. The quality of it is not near;y the same as the Mars Global Surveyor. The Face of Mars may have only been seen because of weather conditions that day. In 1998, the Mars Global Surveyor took a picture ten times sharper than the already 22 years-old. The Mars Orbiter Camera took a picture that was a lot clearer but still not good enough for some.\n\nIn conclusion, the conspiracy theorists have no reliable information. It has been proven by the MOC and the Mars Global Surveyor that it is just a landform. The 1976 picture is too old to be reliable. All it shows is a mesa with amazing shadows. NASA probably dreams it was an artifact so they could get a budget increase. All of these points lead to one obvious answer, the Face of Mars is just a mesa on Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The graph indicates the population in various nations in 2023 respectively, along with it, forcasts regarding the number of residents in surveyed regions in 2025 and 2050.\nOverall, the majority of nations are expected to experience a growth in coming years, except Italy, which the figure is predicted to go through a downward trend. On the other hand, Indonesia contain the largest figure of residents, while the least number shown in Argentina.\nIn 2003, there were 238 millions people lived in Indonesia, which was 7 times larger than that of Argentina, in which the group of indoesian will continue to expand to 312 millions by 2050. Although Argentina was where has the leasat number of residents in 2003, the figure will go through a rise to 62 millions as the second biggest population among surveyed nations.\nItaly is the only regions that display a drop over times, from 54 millions in 2003, it is expected to lost 9 millions of residents by 2050. As for Republic of Korea, the figure is barely changed between 2025 and 2050 at 52 millions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using technology to read someones emotions is not valuable. Computers dont understand people like people understand people. Having technology in the classroom wouldn't teach anyone anything about how to read emotions. The technology can't read peoples emotions like we can. We know the emotions better than the technology people want to use.\n\nIf the technology can use math as a way to read emotions than we could do it too. People dont want to use math to read emotions, they want to use their instinct. Humans know human emotions better than anything else. If someone is around that technology who is sad and wants to hide that saddness, then the tech will read that and will tell everyone.\n\nI strongly disagree with technology being made to read emotions. I also strongly disagree with putting that tech in schools where people dont want others to know they are sad. In conclusion we should not create the technology to read a humans emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article it tells the readers that it would be cool to see how people are feeling even when they're trying to hide it. A lot of people hide their feelings so people don't constantly ask \"what's wrong\" and more similar stuff. It makes people more upset when they're getting asked that all the time.\n\nThe facial expressions could show people what the others are feeling but not all the way because people hide their feelings so they look happy but could be sad. A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. That would be helpful because students don't always like asking questions and if you have this software, you'll be able to tell they're stuck. Moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them.\n\nI think having this software could help a lot but not really solve things. If people are upset, they don't want everyone knowing they're. So faking a smile throughout the day so you don't get questioned, is easier than being asked all the time. Being asked is nice and everything but I think it just makes people think ab the situation more and they mostly get more upset.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars. They're a simply luxuary that you can find anywhere from driveways to parking lots to just parked right out on the street. Nobody ever thinks twice about driving their car, after all they get us where we need to go in a quick amount of time. However, cars could be the most deadliest thing in the world, and it sits right next to our houses. From the exhaust fumes that fumigate in the air all the way to obiesity, cars are just a silent killer waiting in the shadows.\n\nNow, a car isn't really out to kill us, at least not intentionally, but unfortunatly the worst thing about a car is behind it; the exhaust. A couple hundreds of chemicals float out into the air and slowly kill the Earth's ozone layer. Every year the Earth gets hotter and hotter as the ozone layer becomes thinner as more cars end up on the road. It really is just a domino effect thats still in the process of tumbling down. The reason why we don't think too much on it, is simply because as we sit in air conditioned cars, we don't notice just how hot it really is. But what happens when the ozone layer is completely destroyed? Well, just hope your wheels don't melt down into the pavement while your driving.\n\nA cars bad streak doesn't end with making the Earth into a giant sauna, of course some people might like the idea, but what if our cars, were the reason our diet never works? As more cars end up on the road, less people are walking and biking to get places. Even now, more teenagers are on the road with cheeper and more efficient cars which means that combined with a teens natural laziness in everyday life, its like we've been giving a robot to replace our legs. Would you believe that some people would drive their cars just to get a few blocks up the street? It's absolutly tragic, almost as if we're just waiting for the end scene in a horror movie.\n\nSo, even though cars may not be waiting for us outside our showers with a knife, it's slowly destroying the planet as well as our health. However there are solutions such as carpooling, taking the bus or even walking or biking more. Carpooling lessens the amount of exhaust fumes on the road, and walking keeps our cardio up and is even just enjoyable. So before you grab your car keys and head out the door, just take a look into the sky and a quick glance at yourself and think \"do I really want to be overweight in a sauna?\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article, the author implies the idea that studying Venus is a worthy endeavor despite its many dangers. By using examples, descriptive details, and more, the author supports this claim very well.\n\nThe authors does many things in this article to show the relevant danger that the planet Venus presents. They did this by using factual information at the beginning of the article. For example, in paragraph 3, the author states that \"a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere\". This example show the evident danger that Venus holds. Another example of the author showing the dangers of Venus is the author states, \"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit\". This being another example of how the author shows the dangers of Venus.\n\nThough, on the other hand, the author also gives the idea that Venus is worth exploring despite all of its dangers. One example being when the author says, \"astonomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Eath-like planet in our solar system\". This shows that the author believes that Venus is a worthy planet to be explored despite the danger it holds.\n\nAnother example of how the author supports theri claim is that they used factual information in the article. An example of this is in paragraph 5,where the author states, \"NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray...at thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans\". This is one of the many factual statements throughout the article that shows the support of the author's claim.\n\nThe author also says this statement at the end of the article saying, \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imaginations and innovation\". This shows that the author also believes that Venus is worth exploring because they give their own opinion about the future expeditions of man and how they should forever expand exploration. In conclusion, the author support their claim that Venus should be explore despite its evident dangers by using factual information, personal opinions, and descriptive details about the exploration of Venus, showing that they believe it should be explored because of the challenges it presents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is a common belief that students should evaluate their instructors so as to keep raising the standard of high school education. Others contend that this might create indiscipline and might be regarded as disrespect. The present essay shall cast light on the two polarized and clarify my stance. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, students are the ones who have the most access to teachers, so they can easily figure out the strengths and weaknesses of those tutors. Therefore, students might facilitate judging a teacher, in order to help institutes to improve the quality of education, and also notice school management about different aspects of a teacher such as cooperativeness, punctuality, and understanding, to name but a few. Singapore, for instance, wants to develop domestic education by assessing tutors from high school students' evaluation sheets. \r\n\r\nNevertheless, I firmly believe that high school students do not have the proper ability to evaluate their supervisors. As a cadre study at school and attain a diploma, hence they have enough knowledge to teach recruitment. On top of that, high school grades are in adolescence and so their negative back is based on emotional feelings rather than detail. Moreover, this phenomenon leads to a loss of honour and routine and the quality of education is decreased. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, it is apparent that high school students can evaluate their teachers to upgrade their education. However, I unequivocally buttress the stand of not evaluating teachers by high students, because they are immature enough to recognise it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, individuals lavish so much funds on their bodies just to look much younger than they really are. I believe, to some, it is a norm whereas others might have a different opinion. Nevertheless, I think such a bad lifestyle. Although, taking care of yourself is good, however, been extravagant in other to cheat nature is a waste and unwise decision. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, many individuals these days, are living a fake soul in other words a life of unnecessary spending and imitation. They spend more than enough just to mimic a fan, a celebrity's lifestyle. They go the extra mile to acquire money justly or unjustly. Most youths in my locality portray such. They get involved in social vices like, picking pockets, breaking and entering. Although, the aftermath of it leads to detention or even imprisonment. \r\n\r\nIn addition, many women are fond of looking young, they become obsessed with that. They can do anything for money including selling their chastity and for what? A makeup kit, designer attire, body lotions and creams. After which, they ended up getting sexually transmitted infections like gonorrhoea, syphilis, warts and so on. Whilst the unlucky ones ended up losing their precious heart. As in the case of a former colleague who met her end at the hands of a ritualist.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, people squander more of their finance because, they want to have a baby face, they want to be recognized in society, and to some, fitting in, is all they could think of. The incessant urge to buy things they don't need at that moment in their life. In order to blend in. The drive for modern Cosmetics has ruined many relationships and wreaked havoc in numerous homes. Wives became disobedient to their spouses on account of failure to procure modern Cosmetics products and children rebel against their parents who could not afford them a luxury lifestyle.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, being extravagant in order to appear appealing and less old, has become the norm for many individuals, young and old, spinsters and spouses. And, the consequences of spending more than enough and more than a person can afford on physical appearance have wreaked havoc on happy homes and relationships. As such it is a bad influence.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea of driverless cars has been a fascination of the world for a great amount of time.\n\nAlthough it could have originally been a laughable idea told as a joke, it appears now that the dream of automated vehicles could become a reality.\n\nMany companies are creating cars that do not require a human to operate it, and despite the slow process of development, progress is being made.\n\nHowever, the public's opinions concerning the implementation of such cars in current society is varied.\n\nDespite the fact that there are those who believe that driverless cars are beneficial to the world, it is evident that the development of these vehicles should be discontinuted due to the issue with laws and liabilty, unreliabilty of current technology, and concern for peoples' safety.\n\nThe purpose of the law is to regulate society and to provide safety for civilians.\n\nCurrently, lawmakers agree that \"safety is best achieved with alert drivers\" who are \"in control [of the vehicle] at all times\".\n\nIf driverless cars were to be introduced and regularly used by the public, theres is no way to ensure the safety of both drivers and pedestrians.\n\nAs a result, many states in the United States have \"limited [the] use of semi-autonomous cars\".\n\nIf even the activity of semi-autonomous is limited, surely the laws concerning fully autonomous will be much more strict.\n\nTechnology is known to fail in certain situations and is not completely reliable.\n\nIn the case that a driverless car were to be involed in a accident, the liabilty of the case would not be clear, and it would be hard to determine whether \"the driver or the manufacturer\" is at fault.\n\nOverall the introduction of driverless cars would not be beneficial, if compared to current cars, due to the fact that it would have to result in the development of new laws, and the issue of liabilty would not be clear.\n\nIn order for a driverless car to work, it must have the capability to analyse its surroudings as a human would.\n\nAlthough sensors are extraordinary inventions to aid electronic devices to understand the world,\n\nthey are not extremely efficient, and do not match the human caliber of sensing.\n\nFor example, the modified version of a Toyata Prius utilizes \"a whole lot of sensors\" in order to function.\n\nThe sheer amount of sensors that are needed are simply ridiculous, and due to the fact that all the sensors must be used simultaneously while driving makes the car inefficient when compared to the five basic senses of the human body allow people to drive safely.\n\nIt is noted that \"the driverless car [can] mimic the skill of a human at the wheel\", but it cannot fully replace the role a human plays while driving.\n\nThe inefficiency of using sensors on a driverless car supports the notion that such cars should not be produced.\n\nLastly, safety is a big concern for the future of developing driverless cars.\n\nThe reason for the existence of vehicles is to travel from one place to another safely and at a reasonable time.\n\nIt is true that Google has created cars that \"have driven more than hald a million miles without a crash\", but \"Google cars aren't truly driverless\".\n\nThis implies that simply because a semi-autonomous car provides some level of safety, it is possible that the same level of reliabilty may not be re-created in a fully driverless car.\n\nThere is no data to support the fact that driverless cars and more reliable than current cars.\n\nBeing in a fully driverless car poses a great risk to the passenger, because there is always the possibility that \"the technology fails and someone [will be] injured\".\n\nFor that reason, it is not a good idea for fully autonomous cars to be developed.\n\nThere are many issues that are inhibiting the introduction of driverless cars\n\ninto society such as problems with liabilty, the unreliability of current technology, and the issues of safety that are involved.\n\nThere is still much research that has yet to be done before determining if the innovation of a driverless car would be plausible for everyday life.\n\nAlthough currently, the idea of a fully driverless car does not seem acceptable by many people, there may come a day when it will become normal for someone to own such a car.\n\nIf the level of technology continues to improve, and the changes of traffic regulations and liability laws are done, then the introduction of an autonomous car will be more than likely to occur in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator.\n\nI think that the electoral collage should be changed because it makes voting unfair, more people would vote,and it would be more effective.\n\nThe electoral voting system is unfair because your vote dosnt really count if the majority of the votes goes to the opposing party. It would be more even if your vote counted directly towards the party rather than voting for your states electors. I also feel that more people would vote because with the state electors your vote wont matter if the majority of is oppiste of who you voted for.\n\nAlso, other people would vote for other parties more rather than just the democratic or republican parties because the majority of the people are just gonna vote for those parties.\n\nIf the votes were not for the state electors and for the president than George W. Bush would not have been elected and the majority of the votes went towards John kerry so that wasnt fair for him.\n\nAlso every states number of electors is different, if they are going to have electors per state I think it should be the same amount for every state because if more of the states voted for the republicans but the democrats could have had the states with the larger amount of electors and won the election. The tinier states wouldnt do much for the election if they only have three electors. Also without electors voting, there would be a less chance of there being a tie in the election. It might make counting the votes easier but voting would be more effective if it was without state electors.\n\nThose are the reasons why I think that the way voting is should be changed and hopfully someday it will be.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, coordination skills plays vital role in everyone’s life . It is considered by some individuals that team games are the excellent method to understand the importance of of cooperative ability for pupils. This eassy would not only outline my argument but also, elaborate some illustrations in upcoming paragraphs.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, sports are the one of best activity which teaches to youngsters abundance of skills . To be more specific, the first lesson of any games is team work, while playing sports the leans how to play in team and apply their strategies with agreement of others. Moreover, during the game some situations come out where they learn understanding and coordination with each other. For example, cricket , football or hockey are the games where Hard to win the games with cooperation , there should be good communication among team .\r\n\r\nFurthermore, learning cooperation is not only beneficial for career even though, this helps in personal life . To precise , if kids learn the ability of coordination, then they can easily do work or balance their life with their near ones. In addition , in professional life, one needs to work with team and under their senior , therefore having skill of team spirit and cooperation is essential . To illustrate, Multi national companies is the example of grow in team,because employers work with others colleague and do difficult assignments that is only possible with coordination of all of team members.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, having ability of working in group is significant in this present scenario . Playing sports teaches plethora of skills to youngsters for their future life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit affects cyclist The setting affect physically mentally In story setting provides water cyclist making weak In mental aspect greatly affected features setting An example see abandoned welch s factory sees picture boy pour refreshing glass juice mouth This made hang head rode He also thinking die This features setting affect cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A few people believe that playing competitive games by students plays a vital role in their studies, whereas others assert involvement in these activities is not beneficial for the children. I intend to discuss both the views followed by my own opinion.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, advocates of latter view opine that competitive sport can adversely impact the studies of the pupils. In order to participate at a level which requires consistent practice, students need to spend enough time in the field to participate in it. Due to this, they often fail to spend time in their academics, thereby negatively affecting their studies. For example, a child who practices in the morning and evening for sports gets tired and generally skips the classes and self-study hours to recover. This situation clearly depicts the effect on the education of sports students as they do not get time for studies.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, proponents of the former notion assert participation in competitive sport enhances certain skills which can assist the young ones to imitate these characters in their academic life. To explain, players are not only trained to bear pressure, but also to hold their nerves in any competition by the sports coaches. These qualities are generally required in taking competitive examinations as well, which are not easily provided through teaching in classes. Thus, students who are equipped with these skills through competitive sports activities are more likely to get succeeded in the examinations which require competition such as entrance exam for various prestigious universities and so on.\r\n\r\nIn my perspective, sports activities can aid the students to perform better in their education unless they spend a large share of time in the sports field only. It is primarily due to the fact that outdoor activities increase oxygen content in the body, which can make students more sharp and active. This is imperative for their studies because it can help them to raise their concentration while learning as the fresh and active mind is more focussed according to various studies as well.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, in my opinion, students ought to dedicate some time to competitive sports as it can help in terms of building character which can assist them in their education as well as refreshing their minds to increase concentration in studies.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I believes computers positive effect people one computed help promote handeye coordination fact computers also help teach people distant places people without leaving re home computers also allow people talk via What would without computer My fist reason I believe computer good thing handeye coordination According eye watch keys using typing brain builds connection hand thus better eye hand coordination CAPS fact millions car acidents year wich cause fact driver vehicle look whey make kept thier car On road eye hand coordination I computers every person world would less acidents year Secondly fact computer transport somebody mind distant person A study showed people surveyed find information faster fact child age use computer find specific information needs matter seconds I observed children know use dictionary encyclopedia fact people contact talk people one allows contact long lost friends fact talk theme There fact contact someone halfway around globe How cool reading letter sharing company I believe support cause This computers improve handeye coordination link people people places allow people talk via", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think it is a bad idea to get a driverless. I feel as if there would be to many people who just would blow off their responsibilitys as a safe driver. I thnk this because they wouldnt be driving the car the car would be driving itself and that would make people pay less attention. But dont get me wrong it would be a nice and amazing idea if we could all be responsible enough and pay attention so that we dont cause accidents. These cars would also help us from accidents because it would be smart enough to know when there is a stop sign or anything like that.\n\nSome things that could ruin this idea would be if you thought about what if they mal-function and the car crashes and seriously hurts someone. Im sure that the cars saftey system as in air bags and other things would become one of the prime resources if it did mal-function. I feel as if more people would trust this car if there was a percent or something on how efficent this car would be.\n\nSome other major problems would be the price range i mean lets be serious no one wants to spend alot of money on a car that isnt worth it. I think if the car was a little cheaper and was alot more reliable on being able to pull over and stop without human work. the part that is good about the car telling the driver to help is it would keep the drivers alot more on the road then they would be if it could stop and pull over all on its own. One more problem i can see about this is there would be alot more texing on the road then is needed which would proabably cause alot more carelessness when people care riving to then would cause more accidents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that we should be able to have the popular vote, so we can be able to choose who we want as our leader and for the reasons that we want them to lead our country. When we vote we accpect that whoever got the popular vote should be our president we dont want the Electoral College to change and over power our voting. We want our right to vote to actually mean something and for us to make some decisions in our country and who should be the leader.\n\nWhen we where given the right to vote and given some power to our popular vote we we were accpecting to be able to use that right to help descide what is best for our country. as it says in the article,\n\n\"You help choose your state's electors when you vote for president...\". What that means to me is that when we vote for our president we are just helping our electors have a better point in our sperspective. So when we vote we aren't really getting what we want we are just helping the electoral college get what they want. We should be the ones who are getting what we want we are the ones out there struggling and fighting for what we want. The Electoral College doesn't care about what we want and how we feel about the situation. If we were givven the right to be ablle to vote we accpect for that to happen so there really isn't any point in voting because we still have a chance in having our popular vote getting over ruled. That isn't fare to us to be given a right and it not being any power in our favor. This is the same reason why everyone doesn't vote is because they feel that there vote won't matter do to the Electoral College.\n\nMore importantly we have our right of freedom of speech from the Bill Of Rights. Also the Electoral College has 538 electors and they only need a majority of 270 electoral votes to elect our president. So that means the they get the popular vote as well as we do but the only difference is that they have more power than we do which isn't part of our rights. So that being said they dont care what we say either way its going to end up in a popular vote the will just have the final vote and that means they get what they want. Also as the article states in the second section that,\n\n\" according to a Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore-thanks to the quirks of the electoral college-won the popular vote but lost the presidency, over 60 percent of votors would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now.\". That right there is saying that he won the votors popular vote bout because of the Electoral College he lost the presidency. So he won the part of the election but due to the people with more power he lost which is wrong and shouldnt be allowed. As I was saying the people that actually get effected by the election and the president should have the upper hand in power. Another quote from section three,\n\n\"The Electoral College is widely regarded as an anachronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled...\". There is another reason that the the Electoral College should be excluded from the election of the president.\n\nIn conclusion as the citizens of the United States of America should have the say in who is our leader and how the election is decided. The Electoral College should be overruled by the citizens and have there power taken away from them. We the people that want the right president for our country should have the power. As our right to vote should be enforced and respected. Also we all should come together as a country and fight for what we believe is right and for what we deserve as a nation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "DEAR:\n\nSTATE SENATOR\n\nI believe that the\n\nElectoral College is a good thing. The way that the world has created it now is simply significant. It is like the last ray of sunshine in an empty tunnel. Don't try to get into what the others say about the way that the president should be elected. We are building the future, rock by rock, well we just picked up a brick.\n\nThe\n\nElectoral College is not a place( even though it has \"college\", in it's name), it is a process as stated in the 1st source . \"WHAT IS THE ELECTORAL COLLEGE\"?\n\n\"The\n\nElectoral College is a process, not a place .\n\nThe founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and the election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens\". As you can see, there is no reason to change it so that the president gets his votes by poularity. It might have been good as a teenager but just remember that this is not your Highschool \"PROM\", you dont just win by fame. Being the president is hard work. If you wish to be president, dont jog for it, run for it.\n\nNow future presidents out there just remember that you will required to have a canidate as stated in source 2 . \"THE INDENSIBLE ELECTORAL COLLEGE:WHY EVEN THE BEST-LAID DEFENSES OF THE SYSTEM ARE WRONG\"\n\n? \"The electoral college requires a preisdental candidt to have trns-region appeal. No region(South, Northeast,etc.)has enough electoral votes to elect a president. So a solid regional favorite, such as Romeney was in the South, has no incentive to campain heavily in those states, for he gains no electoral votes by increasing his pluality in states that he knows he will win. This is a desirable result becaus a candidate with only regional appeal is unlikely to be a successful president\". This shows that in order to be an amazing president you need a canidate.\n\nI am in keeping things the way that we have it now. IT is like why find a needle in a haystack, whe you could buy one and not go through all off that pain.\n\nSo just do not waste your own time on something that do not need to be done. It like why buy a lighter, when you have a perfectly well conditioned box of matches in your house. So dont go 18 century go 21 century.\n\nSINCERILY\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is the Face a natural landform or not? No one will ever know. Yes the Face in a natural landform. If you think that the Face was alien made than your wrong. This was not made by aliens it is a natural landform that has shadows that cause the lanndform to have such apperences as a nose, mouth, and ears.\n\nThe Face is just a landform because in the passage is says that with newer technology they would have been able to see other things on Mars. The passage says that the picture really shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa. The MSG had the best camera on it taking the best photos. Each of the pixels spans 1.56 meters compared to the 4 meters the best Viking photo that was ever taken.\n\nAfter the first Viking photo was taken it instatly appeared on the JPL web site. When the photo appeared they noticed that is was just a natural landform and that there was no alien statue after all. In paraghraph three of the passage it states that \"Although few scientist believed the Face was an alien articfact\". That right there prove that the Face is not an alien articfact.\n\nThe Face is not an alien articfact. In the pasaage it states clearly in several different paragraphs that scientist dont believe that the Face is a alien articfact. Many people believe that the Face is just a natural landform. The eyes, mouth, and nose are all thought to be caused by shadows.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are people who want to live on mars and study and there are people that want to live on and study venus. this artical suports the idea of inhabiting venus and it supports it well. They give us ideas about why we would want to explore it even the ways we have started to reasearch it. People also like to have ideas on how things could work as well and this author does it perfectly they tell us about how we can live off the surface and sure little reasearch can be done from of the surcae doesn't mean it cant help us better understand. With understanding comes ideas so we could better our selfs with this info to find more ways to get closer to venus' surface to study more. However the author says things that could stray us away from wanting to explore it. They say that the text that have been done have only gotten us up to staying on the surface for 3 weeks and to some that may not be a large enough time for them to think the pay off is great enough. I think the author did a great job in how worth it is despite its dangers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports his idea that studying venus is dangerous, Venus sometimes called the \"Evening Star\" is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, and that is dangerous to study because \"a thick atomsphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. And that on the planets surface, the temperature average is over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. The conditons are more extreme than what anything humans encounter on the earth.\" Nobody can really study about venus beacuse its the hottest planet there ever can be. But the NASA have an idea for sending humans to study venus, and NASA's possible solution is to allow the scientists to float above the fray. The researchers cannot take samples of the rock, gas, or anything else on venus surface from a far distance. And the Astronomers are fascinated by venus because it may well once have been the most Earth life planet in our solar system. And NASA's goal is working on other approaches to study venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is becoming quite common around the globe that people are buying new things and getting rid of old products by throwing away as compared to earlier where people reused the things after getting it repaired when being smashed. This essay will provide the reasons for this happening and also highlight the concerns which are rising.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, people are purchasing new things rather than getting it fixed due to easy convenience. In other words, people nowadays have a hectic schedule and do not have enough time to for themselves, so in spite of repairing the broken things , they prefer to buy new products which save time and also repairing costs more than buying new ones. \r\n\r\nSecondly, people are getting attracted, to advertisements due to massive consumerism of the product. Furthermore, with the globalization people desire to have updated things and as a result ,old things are being thrown away or replaced. For example, a survey conducted by the University of Oxford found that 70% of people choosing new things over old ones after getting damaged as it saves time and feels to upgrade.\r\n\r\nDespite the benefits, it also has negative consequences on the environment, in order to fulfil the demands of people, companies are exploiting natural resources. Deforestation, de-vegetation and lagging are prevalent in many societies. Moreover, people are producing more rubbish by discarding traditional items and adopting products of presents-days.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, it is seen that people today are more advanced and wish to have new equipment and products by throwing old ones which are detrimental to the environment and raising many concerns. Therefore, government and locals should be responsible to create awareness to start implementing three R's in life which are reduced, reuse and recycle the things which will be helpful to all living beings.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are good patient Sometimes I sometimes going tell story I patient normally patient situations like I want school mom take test drop mall meet friends While I waiting I texting internet stomach started rumble I hungry I wanted text mom make rush I get something eat I texting I stopped thought I I knew hard long studied test I didnt want get bad grade I sat I texted people People called mind food After mom finished test came room I asked CAPS go looked smiled said I felt confident know hungry I shouted me to got car went subway I got forest meal With cooking chips drink delicious My mom dropped mall I told friends happened We laughed reason went charlete others places well After I thought I never want I starting started hurt I sat hours nothing never I At least I bounding rime mom Thats one bright side", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Well when we 1st hear about the Electoral College we think it's some college where students go who drive BMW's, Audi's, Nissian GTR's, Nissan Skylines,Honda Civic SI's,Toyota Supras,Chevy HHR SS,Ford Focus RS,Subaru STI's,etc. But is it really a college like that? No unfortunately not as a matter a fact it's not even a college to physical go to if you thought it was a college you can physical go to then you are the biggest chunk that ever stepped foot on this earth. According to paragraph 1 it says \" The Electoral College is a Process not a place the founding fathers established it in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president by a vote in congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens.\" So when you hear that it's not a place and its a process yay! we're learning.\n\nBut let me stop you right there happy readers who are learning, that's not the question so wait heres the part when you feel like the biggest chunk again... the question is Does The Electoral College Work? Aha see you thought you won the 4v4 but really it's just getting started. Like how can you win if you don't know anything about the process college well thank godness im here because im gonna educate you goats. According to paragraph 2 \"The Electoral college process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for president and vice president,and the counting of the electoral votes by congress\". So what i think it's saying is that this is how like our wonderful presidents get elected. this is the voting system that elects vice pres,pres,meeting the to runners and electors thats the electoral college in a nut shell. But you guys are still scrubs you need to know a little more before we can answer this question.\n\nActually no we don't need to learn a little bit more you guys aren't chunks you are Pros at this we all are you know why? So let me tell you why our founding fathers started this in 1769's or something like that but ever since they made this system it's been going on until 2015! so the answer to that question would be yes it does work because it gives the people a right to choose who they want and the president doesn't get to much power and without this system we wouldn't have any presidents you know what i mean.\n\n- Clown", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In vauban, Germany Residents of this upscale communitiy are suburban pioneers, were a few people like to call home because street parking, driveways and home garages are generally forbidden in this experimental new district. Also as an advantage there are only two places park a large garage or buy a home for 40,000 and u get a parking spot.\n\nAs a result 70 percent of vaubans families do not own cars and 57 percent sold there car so the could move to there. The good thing is that some people were really tense when they had a car and now they are more happier in there new enviorment. In 2006 they were an example of a growning trend in Europe, the Unied States and elsewhere to seperate suburban life from auto use, as a component of a movment called ''smart ''planning''.\n\nThe good news also is that parks and centers also have bloomed throughout the citiy. New Yourks new bike sharing program and its and its skyrocketing bridge an tunnel tolls. with all these changes people who stopped car commuting as a result of the reccesion may find less reason to resume the habit. An also pedestian, bycicyle private cars, commercial an public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Natural Landform\n\nUnmasking the Face on Mars is talking about how some people discused how it was created by aliens and other scientist just say it is a natural landform and i agree.\n\nMay 24 2001 tenty five years ago NASAs space craft found a shadowy likeness of a human face . Scientist believe that it is a natural based lanform called a Martian messa common enough around Cydonia . A few days later NASA unveiled it for all to see. Now few scientist think their is an alien artifact, but they are wrong.\n\nAs soon as word got out on April 5th 1998 when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time.\n\nThey snaped a picture ten times sharper than the originak viking photo . Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting for the JPL website to show the picture scientist revealed the picture as a natural landform there was no alien monument after all , stated in paragraph 7 .\n\nThere was no evidence of there ever being an alien just a historical landform that was a familiar to a humans face . But people were still not satisfied about the research . What the picture actually shows is the martian equivalent of a butte or messa lanform not an alien or artifact .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article \" Driverless Cars Are Coming\" poses both the positive and negative aspects of the developement of driverless cars. The developement of these cars does seem useful but it seems that they would cause more prolems than solutions. The public transportation system is fine as it is.\n\nThe developement of these driverless cars poses a lot of potenetial issues. Some of these issues include safety and the law. Driverless cars could pose safety issues. The technology could fail and cause potential disasters. Driverless cars in regards to the law could cause trouble. The article gives the example \" If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer?\" New laws would be needed to cover liability in case of an accident as such. A lot of the traffic laws would need to change to fit the new way of transportation as well.\n\nAlthough the negative aspects out-weigh the positives, there are still some good things about the developement of these cars. One thing the article mentions is that they would only use about half of the fuel today's cars do. While that is a good thing these cars still pose greater problems. They say they will be safer, but what if the technology fails? This type of technology puts people at risk.\n\nIn conclusion, these driverless cars of the future are potentially dangerous. They would cause problems with the law and they pose safety concerns. Their developement poses little to no positive aspects. The world would be better off if they ceased the developement of these cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued that advancement of robots in society has a positive impact, whereas some individuls are in a doubt about this statement. In this eassy, I will discuss both views and I personally believe that robotics is the positive sign for this developing world.\r\n\r\nOn the first hand, there are some neagtive questions by handful individuls about automation. In this present world, job plays a vital role for become a bread winner and run smooth life, so dependancy on artificial intelligence can become the huddle for the job seekers. To illustrate, companies will start installing more automation instead of hiring indiviiduls for any job in the manufacturing plants that pratice will directly impact to job seekers. The another major negative impact of artificial intelligence development would be human's health. Preciecly, by developing the automation, people will start relying on robotics and they will start avoiding daily physical activities which is not beneficial for their health. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, technological advancement is a positive tend of economical growth for any nation. By setting-up more auto machines in industries can bring the financial growth in the terms of production and effeciency. For example, recently a American company has seen drastic changes in their production units by installing automation in their manufacturing plant. This practice also benefical for companies and individuls for risky jobs, there are lot of jobs which have life risks for workers, therefore robots are the best alternation for completing such kind of jobs ( installing and cleaning windows of skyscrapers). For solving mysteries of space or past, Robots plays a vital role for these jobs, scientist are not able to figureout unsolved things without automation. To examplify, recently, ISRO findout the dark side of Moon and become first organization in the world who find this spot of the Moon and this was happened because of robots.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there are some negative results of tecnological advancements , however automation also brings the abundance of development in every sector in this world and made human's lives easy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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