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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Feedback on education system is the integral part for school peers and future generations in their career perspective.However , there are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of society vehemently views that teachers should be adviced on their competency while others emphasis that it is not a fair notion to de-evaluate the educators.\r\n\r\n Apparently various factors make a section of people advocate that teacher's performance also must be measured , monitored and there are many reasons to substantiate it.First and foremost is facilitator's knowlegde is transffered to his fellow students , smart teachers can only handle difficult subjects effectively.Secondly , teachers have their favourite fellow being in the classes which are inconvinient for the rest of students where they feel insecure or ignored.Educator should be sensitive on this matter and give equal attention for all of the study group.Thirdly,coaches must improve their required skills and keep update on the latest subject information.\r\n\r\n On the otherhand , some believe that mentors should not be demotivated by backhand compliments by his or her own class followers for myraid reasons.Chiefly , it would degrade the face value of the mentor.In addition , it creates hostile study atmosphere.Besides , it leads to difficulty in maintaining peaceful realtionship between dictator and the students.\r\n\r\n In my profound opinion , mentors are respected and given importance before the God in our culture since ancient age.In due respect to our school dignfied persona our coaches , its not advicable to allow students to comment on own guide.School management can bring a systematic approach for getting feedback to provide a healthy study environment in any institutions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I know that the Face is a natural landform. I know for sure it was not made by aliens because aliens do not exist. We do not have a trace of alien lifeforms in our solar system. The Face was shaped into that form 25 years ago. We do not have proof that the Face was made by aliens. What it actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or messa-landforms common around the American West. Even though Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, it did shoot a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Mara Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look. They had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view. A person said \" It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\" Scientists say that each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters,compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo. They said if there were objects in the picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a small chance that the picture we saw that appears to be a face was left by ailens. We took multiple photos time and time again and none of them came back the same as the original. Also when we zoomed in there was no evidence supporting that alien built or form the figure that we saw. There was no tracks, no ships, and there was no sign of life.\n\nThere was no evidence left on that planet to show ailens where ever there or left the figure we saw. We have natrual land forms and that reminds us of mulitple things. So there is a possibilty that what we saw use to be a old volcaneo or somthing else.\n\nDetails that we took from the multiple photos we took don't match or even look like the first photo. All the othere photos we took was better quality than the first and none of them look like the original. So there is a chance that the camera caught somthing that with the unusual shadows was a once in a life time photo.\n\nSo what you are saying just doesn't match up with the fact and evidence we have on file. Thats why we beleive it wasnt left by ailens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Things in life has changed over the years 2018 is a whole new year with many things different then the 1980s for sure. In the past there was no phones or laptops. Now in the present almost everyday something comes out new. There is always a new software here and there. I do not find that a \"Facial Action Coding System\" is valuable for kids in the classroom.\n\nI do not think that it is valuable for kids in the classroom. I do not think that it is valuable because if kids do not understand they will have a confused look on their face. They will also be the ones to ask questions about what they are confused on. Kids have many emotions but I do not think that it will be able to be hard to tell if they are struggling or not.\n\nThey said in the passage that it is a painting \"It's the subject of Leonardo da Vinci's Renaissance painting, Mona Lisa.\" Also in one of the paragraphs below it says that the human face has to have all 44 muscles in the face to be able to show if they are happy, sad, digusted, etc. In the painting how could there be 44 muscles is the real question. You can not paint 44 muscles in all the right spots when not everyones face is the same shape. Having the same size shape of the face and testing people I can see why they would say that you would be happy or sad. This is a painting and there is probably not a single person with the same face as Mona Lisa.\n\nThe \"3-D\" computer model could possibly show all 44 musles in the face but that would be a lot of face scanning because like I said before in my last sentence there could not possibly be someone with the same face shape. How can they test multiple people when those people could have the muscles all over there face. There is simple ones like the \"frontalis pars lateralis muscle\" which is above your eyes and the \"orbicularis oris\" which is around the mouth. that is only 2 out of the 44 muscles that they have to scan on a persons face.\n\nIf they wanted to test multiple people that would have to have someone who actually knows where all of the muscles are. In the right stop because if you guess the spots the mood can be wrong. I do not find that it should be used on anyone. Human communication is when two or more people talk together. That is one of the most simplest ways to find out if the kids in your classroom does not understand what you are going over with them. Emotional communication is when someone lets out all of the emotions that they have and will show them becasue they will either be mad with a grumpy face on or they will be upset and not smile at all.\n\nI came up with that it is not valuable for kids in the classrooom because I do not understand why there would have to be a software out when the student could just ask a question in class or even ask after class. There's many other things to do then to have to scan the face and have someone point all of their facial muscles out to find out how they feel. Plus there are multiple kids in the classroom that you would have to scan and not everyone has the same facial structure that would be many times pointing out every single facial muscle and finding out how they feel when there are simpler ways to figure it out.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story cyclist afected setting paragraph talks seeing old water pump trying get water At end story gets angry sees old welches juice factory relizes old men didnt know talking Also end realived finds Gary water", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are smarter cars really better? What are these cars capable of? Driverless cars should come to an end because the driver must be alert at all times, the driver might get distracted or bored and they are illegal in most states.\n\nDriverless cars can drive themselves. It's like watching a pet bird. You still have to be around to make sure nothing happens. In the 7th paragraph, it states,\"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires.\" You are just babysitting the car and you could easily get bored because it's not a baby.\n\nWhy would you buy a car you can't even drive? \"Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver? Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting on theit turn to drive?\" You could get distracted fast, especially if you have a short attention spand. For instant, you have to drive 3 hours and you have nothing to do because you are not driving. That's a cause for distracting and then diaster.\"Safety is a big concern.\" and thats why it's not legal in most states.\n\nSmarter cars are illegal in most states. In the 9th paragraph, it states that \"Lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers. Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. As a result, in most states it is illegal even to test computer-driven cars.\"\n\nThese cars are illegal because there is a lot of untested things that could go wrong. \"Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedstrians safe.\" If these driverless cars are crashing into each other, no one going to be safe.\n\nSmarter, driverless cars are not better if people are getting hurt. Distracted drivers, that must be alert at all times in unsafe, illegal cars are bad thing for society.\"We grow closer to the destination every day.\" Drive Safe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is more important to spend public money promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill. To what extend do you agree or disagree?\r\n\r\nHaving a healthy routine plays a vital role in order to achieve success in life. Citizens health should be prioritized by the sates. There should be more planning, campaigns and strive to spread awareness about how people can live healthily rather than putting efforts into curing a desease. I agree with this statement that more and more funds should be sanctioned creating awareness which is extremely important. This essay will throw some light on the same. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, in today's fast-paced life, health has been higly\r\n\r\nundermined due to cut-throat competition across the globe. Which causes many health issues like anxiety, unwanted stress and hampering productivity. Such problesm have become a major concern gloablly. Moreover, better way of living and scheduled routine not only help an individual increase the success rate, but also make a person more positive towards the desired goal and well-organised in daily life. For instance, generally, unhealthy person mood fluctuates a lot, which leaves a negative impact on his performance, family and friends and becomes a hurdle in his success. Thus, health oriented approach as well as knowledge is really important. \r\n\r\nAnother primary reason is, in recent time, big section of people eat junk foodwhich again leads to the dispropotinonate diet. Due to this take away food culture youngsters are facing many ailments like obesiety, high blood pressure and heart diseases. Nationa and international health experts have already alarmed that upcoming generations may face sever well-being problems as compared to previous one. Furthermore, weaker immune system is also one of the causes of emerging unwanted diseases in recent time. It is evident that if one's immunity is not strong than it is very likely to fall sick. I think Covid 19 is one of the best example for this. The virus impacted those who were already unwell and it affected them the most. It was also proven tha alchohlic person and smokers were badly affaeted,too. Hence, spreading information about staying healthy and more importanatly how to execute healthy living in their lives is paramount. On the other hand, people need to be more concerned about their health. \r\n\r\n In conclusion, It can not be denied that providing a treatment for any illness is imperative. However, in my veiw, enhancing quality of life and sanitations is quite beneficial. Governments should more careful and more and more money should be sanctioned in order to provide basic information information related to health. So that every individual must be aware about this health and hygene.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nThe Electoral College process should be kept because of its many purposes and the fact that it was established for a reason since it's easy and simple and has absolutely no hassle for counting up the votes and adding up the individual votes made by the people of the state.\n\nSince the electoral college process only consists of 538 electors that are selected, meeting of the electors who vote for the president and vuce president, and the counting of the electoral votes by the congress. This is a easy and simple process that causes no hassles since it has a sense of democracy and organization with it.\n\nThe electoral college process is very fair since which ever candidate running gets the majority of 270 electoral votes. It's a organized sysytem that doesn't base off of popularity which is fair because if you vote by popularity and have a president in office that everyone voted for but is running the country into the ground because of terrible reasoning and democracy the people and the states are to blame for voting for a president who wasn't guarnteed to keep his or her word about solving the country's problems.\n\nThe electoral college process does need a few tweaks here and there but that's something to take up to the president or congress. The electoral system needs fixes in place such as what would be good for the state and changing its laws and the system being able to work with the boundaries that certain states have with their own different voting process and its laws how the voting process works.\n\nIt may also need work on how the system supposed to work instead of voting for the people who will be in the electoral colleges to vote for the president you would like to vote for. The voice of the people should be heard instead of casted out by different state electors and representatives that may see his or her own views differently than the people of the state do.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is debatable issue as to whether boxing, a seemingly bloody sport, should be excluded from the modern society. As far as I am concerned, the attempt to remove boxing from the current age is utterly unjustified.\nAdmittedly, boxing is often associated with various disturbing factors, such as foul language, disregard to rivals, violent punches and inelegant appearance as a result of intense physical contacts. However, such gory scenes may frequently take place in underground boxing games which are barely recognised by the professional community of boxing and by the legal system. Unlike underground boxing, professional boxing upholds moral principles and universal values, for examples, respect to opponents, obedience of rules, etc. Also, professional boxers are protected by safety equipment and judges who may stop the game when witnessing any player suffering serious injuries. Therefore, the health hazards involved in boxing games may not be as severe as the public assumes.\nAnother reason reinforcing my position is that boxing already enjoys considerable popularity around the world and plays an important part in people's entertainment, as exemplified by the successful ticket sales of most boxing games and high audience rating of TV programmes broadcasting boxing matches. Given such popularity of boxing, the removal of this sport may cause widespread dissatisfaction and complaint.\nTo draw a conclusion, the exclusion of boxing is completely groundless and irrational, given the safety protection, sportmanship and popularity as reflected in this sport. I expect in the future, more views could arise to furnish the understanding in this regard.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Rules and laws are important for society to functioning well in right path, if people do whatever they want freely in regular life then it might lead society to malfunction. This essay will argue why I completely reckon that laws are entirely needed for uplifting of civilisation.\nThere are plethora of reasons why rules and laws have implication of lifestyles. First and foremost reason is that, crime, accidents and environment. If there are not certain rules about crime then people definitely do many criminal activities in each and every place , so other persons do not fell secure and safe. If people have freedom for whatever they want to do then , it will very dangerous for society as well as environment. Secondly, young generation could not differentiate what is right or wrong without the teaching of rules. For example, if official authorities could freely get implicated in money laundering from the national budgets and not encounter any punishment , then possible results in the political, economic and social turmoil in the country.\nMoreover, if there are no traffic rules then the situation of roads will not be imagined by anyone. The drugs are legal in countries then it is mainly effect on young generation's future and they will never know about right things. Pollution is only controlled by the Government's rules. If there are no any rules then human can not imagine the pollution level in the air.\nOn the contrary, some people think that, rules and laws are unnecessary for their rights. If people aware about, what is good or bad for society, environment and themselves then it is not issue about laws and rules. However, many persons really can not understand about rules , so the Government made for people's peace and safety. Regulation is key that perfectly handle people's life in particular manner.\nTo put in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, rules and laws are essential for the functioning of society. If citizens are given freedom to do whatever they like, then they will not only fall into bad habits but also creat confusion and nuisance in society as well as nation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Human activities have had a negative impact on plant and animal species for a long time. Some believe that is it too late to reverse this impact ,however others think that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. I believe that it is never too late to start taking measures for improving this situation. \r\n\r\nOn one hand, as some people believe there has been a huge impact on the surroundings which cannot be reversed by any kinds of measures. Few such impacts were extinction of few rare species of plants and animals, deforestation, ozone layer depletion. For example, there is a rare plant species known as the Eucalyptus. The oil from this tree is used to cure many ailments and now this tree is extinct due to its vast usage. There are no more traces of this plant available on the planet. These kinds of acts done by humans have done an irreversible impact on nature.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some people believe that it is never too late to do something to save the environment. It is accepted that there is huge damage done to the environment but that doesn't mean people keep on damaging the world. There need to be certain measures to save the environment. We can plant more trees where there is deforestation happening, there can be measures to save the species which are about to extinct, we can reduce the emission of greenhouse gases as it affects the ozone layer. For instance, the world animal protection organization have taken measures to save the tigers as their number is decreasing due to hunting. They have laid certain ground rules on the hunters and are creating a safe environment for these species. Such measures help to save the damage done to plant and animal species.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, however how much damage has been done to the environment by human activities, there can always be some measures taken to save the planet. People need to care about their activities and need to keep in concern the damage being done to the environment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter Laughter one ability everyone world Not help make friends also turn day way around The capability laugh huge importance world Without laughter days would dull sad somewhat depressing When I see someone laugh brightens day makes smile causes laugh along By laughing become happier learn others make bad days better I experienced first hand joys laughing bring I bad moment I believe laughter extremely important keep life Not everyone great day time Bad days occur seeing one funny incident laughing turn whole day around make great Many people hear statement Laughter shortest distance two people statement similar one never agree Often times scoff disagree completely It turns I used one people Most days could plus go school day long ruined little People kept telling I laughed I might feel better often I actually fun I participated throughout day I never believed I How could one action simple laughing change way I feel everyday life The possibilities unlikely I nt think I d change views either years ago It started like usual day would great My hair mess sister I could stop fighting brand new phone broke right started shopping trip I decided day going horrible far nothing worked well As day went nothing worse happened nothing better either I kept traveling around going stores shopping Finally last stop saw situation occur As sitting stop light waiting traffic move I spotted strange man sitting across road The man looked though injury foot suspicions confirmed began walking like hurt penguin would barely shuffling feet bobbing moved forward The sight man made smile I pointed started laughing uncontrollably Then I began cracking The man crazy way walking made laugh proceeded turn entire day around What I thought impossible turned exact opposite possible Laughing could bring closer others make day amazing As result trip sister day views beliefs laughing changed greatly Laughter actually shortest distance two people Even though little sister I arguing funny man came done laughing realized span minutes become closer ever It crazy think one incident change mind strong beliefs happened day memory I going keep forever I m happy happened result I begun think differently laughter effect certain situations life I think laughter one greatest pastimes quite often", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars could have a very postive impact on the world today. They could be much saver than having humans drivers. Since 2009, there has been cars that could drive independently. Google is the main employer of driverless cars. Driverless cars use sensors to detect traffic, or cars around them. Driverless cars could have a positive impact on the world through less accidents, and provide more safety to the community as a whole.\n\nDriverless cars are much saver than human driven cars. There would be no fear of drunk driving, or texting while driving. Driverless cars would get drunk people home safely and you would be able to text in the car without the fear of an accident. \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" This quote shows what driverless cars can do without someone working the wheel. Some sources say that the safest car is one with a human driver in control at all times. I disagree with this opinion because human's can be very dangerous at times. Driverless cars would restrict speeding, and cause many less accidents with their advanced techonology.\n\nIf many of these companies thought that Driverless cars would be hurtful, why would they make them? If Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan all think that this would be positive, than we should too. There are many laws that protect the safety of drivers, passengers and pedenstrians. Driverless cars are designed to protect these people. Also, no company will release these cars for sale until they are one hundred percent certain they are safe. \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\" This quote shows the progress google has already had on this subject. This happened in 2009, so I believe that in future years there could be a time where there are no accidents.\n\nDriverless cars are already in motion. They are safer, and more reliable than human driven cars. These cars use sensors to help them see where things are around them. In the past, these driverless cars are not completly driverless. If there is bad traffic, or construction, they needed driver assistance. In the future, there will be cars that can move past all of this. Also, they will benefit the enviroment because they would only use half of the fuel used in today's cars. This is why driverless cars would be beneficial to the world today.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My view on driverless cars is completely negative. I do not believe that driverless cars will be a successful thing. Driverless cars will not be used as much as normal cars because people will not trust a driverless cars to get them where they need to go safely. These new cars can be unreliable if the sensors break while the car is driving there might not be enough time for the driver to react. If the battery in the car dies because of all the electronics running off of it then the car can't self drive and someone would get hurt.\n\nThe \"Traffic Jam Assistant\" is a car that can drive itself but the driver always has to have a hold on the wheel. If someone is using this car and they fall asleep and the car stops in the middle of the highway it would be disasterous. Also if the driverless cars are developed people are going to start feeling like they can do more things while the car drives for them. For example if someone is listening to music and can't hear when the car alerts them they would get in an accident. Those are all valid statements and also why i don't think driverless cars are a good idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There has been a fuss about the Elector College. Many people get confused about how it works and if they're satifyied with the whole process. Show we \"abolish\" the Elector College? Should we keep it? Honestly we should keep it. We the peope have more then enough control on who is chosen for the president of the United States Of America. We don't really vote for the president but our vote impacts the decision.\n\nMany citizens of the United States Of America think their vote doesnt matter, it does. Why? Well, first the government is runned by the people. Its very rare to not get the president that has the most popular votes, the last time when the president wasn't chosen was in 1888. It's less likely for the president with the most votes to lose the election. For example, Obama received 61.7 percent of the elector votes compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney. Plus, almost all states award elector votes on a winner-take-it-all basis.\n\nPerhaps, there was no system. Would it be simpler? Yes it would but we have to also be fair, there is 538 electors and a majority of 270 elector votes is required to elect the president. When you are voting for the president ypu want to win,you are actually voting for your canidate's elector. How does the system work? First it's the process that has the selection of the electors , the meeting of the electors where they vote for the president and vice president , and last but not least the counting of electoral votes by congress. Obviously it is kind of confusing because it would be much simpler if the winner would be the one with the most popular votes.\n\nDid you know that the Elector College avoids the problem of elections? They do due to how much pressure the candidte can go through. It can easily complicate the presidential process. For instance, Nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 both had only a 43 percent plurality of the popular votes, while winning a majority in the Elector College (301 and 370 elector votes exactly). When avoiding the elections and campaigns , there a better chance of clear winner.\n\nSo there you have it,three main reason's why we should keep the Elector College. We have why the process is important and why we have it. How the process work's because it was confusing to many people , so it's defined and hopefully you'll like to stay and support the Elector College. Your vote does matter.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The population in cities is constantly increasing, and thus housing crisis is a most common problem big cities are facing today. This is a major concern for governments as it not only increase the cost of living, but also affects the quality of life for its residents. I do agree that only governments can solve this problem by taking various measures, such as restricting landed houses to save the space, encouraging vertical residential buildings and gradually expanding the city.\r\n\r\nIn the olden days, people lived in landed independent houses as there were lots of spaces in the city. However, this is not possible in the modern cities as the city population is increasing rapidly, and resulting in a space shortage situation for accommodating housing for all. One of the action governments can take is to discourage building new landed houses and encourage people to live in apartment flats. For instance, the Singapore government has built thousands of high-floor residential flats through a housing development board to accommodate its ever-growing residents in an affordable way. It also stopped permitting for building new landed houses to deal with the space crunch.\r\n\r\nSome governments are also looking at options for expanding the city to create more residential properties. For example, Bangalore, one of the fast growing cities in India is continuously expanding by incorporating more residential properties and other infrastructure at the outskirts of the city, which gradually becomes part of the growing city. However, this option is viable only when there are enough spaces surrounding the city. For cities like Hong-Kong and Singapore, which are islands, the only option is to grow vertically within the city. Solving the housing shortage is an issue that requires proper planning and big investment and residence of a big city have very little to do and the government seems like the appropriate authority to solve this problem. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the cities are growing rapidly and so the residents of the city also grow. Thus, it is the responsibility of governments to take appropriate measures to create a better living place at an affordable price for its city residents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do believe certain books removed shelf offensive From point view yes libraries public means open everyone Kids could see photo appropriate people different religion could hear foul language could give libraries bad image I relate I also heard things I proud foul language That effected I heard I went around people positive life saying Of course could effect child negative way Kids grow positive atleast thats parents teach get hooked things see try immitate From experience turn good mother believed physical discipline But child taught things bad effects learn hard way This reason I wish censorship local libraries Also people different religion could find offensive We different consumers walk library everyday enter find peacful opposite For example muslim could walk library others listening music nothing profanity Now person right report person listening say library restrictions At times okay want book bad words library needs know limits Then library bad image big problem When something gets bad look sooner later anymore Meaning consumers stop going library one thing could lead another For example leave library people work want come back tell people library But problems constantly happen leave tell friends good library Then figures add finally struck s gone Now removed happen Children immitate see heard complaints filed library If I problem restriction levels library I would stop going And library help atleast courtesy mark sections library This make sure know see read", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We are really excited of what planet could be our new house in the future. An option is Venus, the closest planet to Earth and also the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Scientifics agree that Venus is inhospitable, but the question is: Why are they discussing further visits to its surface?\n\nAlthough Venus is a dangerous planet due the high temperatures that this planet experience\n\nwith an average of 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the athmospheric pressure 90 times greater that we experience on our planet scientifics find something in Venus that they love: the similarity to our planet.\n\nVenus has a surface of rocky sediments and has familiar features such as valleys, mountains and crates that really catch scientific's attention.\n\nVenus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers, because humans curiosity is enormous, and our wiches of find a new hospitable planet are even bigger and our imagination and innovation doesn't know the borders.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How would you like to live in a world in which there is no motor noise or exhaust smog clouding your air? That is a world I would love to live in myself. There are multiple benefits that come with living vehicle free. An econiomic benefit is not having to pay for gas or car repairs. A social implication is being able to get away from your little shell on wheels and meet new people while walking, biking, or carpooling. Another benefit is that it will greatly reduce pollution to help preserve the environment.\n\nOne great implication of limiting car usage is that you greatly cut down spending on gasoline or repairs and maintenence for your vehicle. Americans spend hundreds of dollars a week just to fill up their cars. How awesome would that be to take that one hundred dollars a week and put it to someting you really need or want?\n\nThere are also social upsides that come with limiting automobile usage. People tend to isolate themselves from the world around them when traveling in their little bubble. Riding a bike or walking to get from place to place will cause social interaction to skyrocket. You can meet many new people and get closer with the world you are living in. Instead or the latest pop song blaring through your speakers, you can enjoy the sound of birds chirping, the casual bustle of people running errands on bikes, and the smell of the fresh air. If you absolutely need to use your car, you can call up some friends and carpool with them. Carpooling still allows you to have social interactions and it also cuts down spending for gas as well as", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article the author talk about Venius and its studies. He did a well job supporting this article with details and his own opinions. Venus isnt worthy of pursuiting dispite the dangers.\n\nIn\n\nParagraph 3 the author states the dangers of Venius and how they'd effect us. In sentece 1 the author stated \" A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus.\" This is dangerous because that means theres a low oxygen level and human need oxygen to live. The author also stated that \" On the planet's surface, tempatures average over degrees fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what Earth experiences.\" If the atmospheric pressure is 90 times gratter that is likely to crush a human, also no human can live in 800 degrees farhenheit weather. This is not a habitat for humans to study or be in.\n\nSome reasons I think I might be undertandable to go is they have protection from all these things. The author states in paragraph 5 that if they had\n\nequipment that can aviod heat and unfriendly ground conditions they could study it more and I agree with that.\n\nVenus should not be a planet allowed to be studied without nesaccary equipment . The Heat, unfriendly gorund conditions, and the carbon dioxide blankets are all a risk to humans. Especially the atmospheric pressure is very danger and is why\n\nI dont think Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral college is a way of voting for Presidency. Electors are the people who consist of that. Their are 538 electors. A majority of the 270 votes is required to elect a president, The 23rd amendment of the constitution states that 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the electoral college. The candidate's political party generally choose the electors. The Presidential election is held every 4 years on the tuesdaay after the first monday in november. Most of the states have a winner takes all system except Nebraska and maine. After the presidental election, the governer prepares a \"Certificate of Ascertainment\".\n\nThese are Cons about electoral college .Voters dont vote for a president,But for a state elector. The disaster factor is the best argument against the electoral college. The electoral college is irrational,outdated and unfair, And the arguments have pros that are assertions without basis in reality. The Electoral college is not democratic in a modern sense. The electoral college is also a anachronism. The Electoral colloge is a process that is full wit pros and it also has its small and enormous cons.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Pardon me, but i would like to disagree with you. What the picture acually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa. The Face on Mars is just a natural land form. The Face on Mars is a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa. Just like we have many lanforms here on Earth, infact there is a lanform in Idaho. It is located in The Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain, is what reminds me most of the Face on the planet Mars. We have more lanforms like the Face on Mars in the American West.\n\nConspiracy theorists say that the people of NASA are hiding the evidence of life on Mars. I mean think about about it, why would we hide evidence that would benefit this whole organization? Most of the people here at NASA wish that there was an early civilization on Mars. If we did find life on Mars we would share it world wide, it would be one of the greates scientic breakthroughs in history.\n\nDo you understand what I am saying? The Face on Mars was just a Natural land form, not a monument built by aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think driverless cars are a great idea for our future.\n\nFor many years prople have bin working on cars to drive by themselves , from 1950 to now. But there are many things still being worked on, for example, the driverless cars are still needing the passanger to drive out of driveways or take hold of traffic situations like bblockades. Many sensors make the possible as well. Another simple subject of the matter is that the driver will be notified when to take over such as a vibration of the seat tells them when.\n\nIt is not like the self driving cars are dangerous if they malfunction the car should be able to let the driver drive\n\nhim or herself. It is a matter to look at about the safety situations of the cars, wether it is a brake malfunction or an engine malfunction. Even if there were problems towards the car we still have engineers and scientists developing ways to complete these cars and make them completely safe for everyone around. They even plan to make them completely safe by 2020 not far at all.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today's world technology has taken over. Driverless cars are starting to develop. Is this a good or bad thing? Some may see it as good, but in my opinion driverless cars are a bad thing.\n\nDriverless cars have more risks rather than a human operated vehichle. One of those risks or concerns that was pointed out in the article is what if the technology is to fail? If the car is operating on it's own and a wreck happens; who is to blame? Is it the manufacturer for faulty technology or the driver? Either way this would cause more problems with who's fault it would be if a wreck were to happen and could cause major legal troubles. Another thing that goes along with technology failur is the safety of everyone in the vehicle and everyone around. The technology would not be able to sense a problem or poor driving conditions like a human operator would be able to. The technology would not be able to react and adjust to these situations.\n\nAnother downside the article pointed out was the driverless cars are not entirely driverless. The car would still need an operator to be allert and ready to take over. So what is the point of a driverless car if they still need an operator? The point the article made, \"Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?\" This is a relateable statement it would get boring sitting there having to be allert but not doing anything. It would get really tiring after a wile. The article talked about putting in-car entertainment in the cars, but if someone were too invested in the entertainment of the car they would not be allert if the car would need the operator to take over. This could cause crashes and put the safety of people in danger.\n\nDriverless cars are not a good idea. They have not figured out the legal work that would go along with it. If a car were to crash they have no way of knowing who is at fault. The safety of people is put at risk. The cars are not even completly driverless they still need an allert operator ready to take over if a problem occured. Driving should be the responsibility of a human not a computer. Driverless cars are not where our future should be heading.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Humans are curious and one thing to peak our interest is definetly the planet of Venus. Venus is the most Earth like planet in our solar system, scientists believe that life could have, at one point, existed there just like the life on Earth today.\n\nVenus is referred to as our twin, so it is not hard to imagine going there, right? Well, the conditions woud prove otherwise, the surface can reach up to 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the atmosphere is composed of 97 percent carbon dioxide. There are some extreme risks and serious conditions that would stop a manned voyage to Venus.\n\nThe author explains that despite there being many challenges in the way, it could be good and we could benefit from the exploration of a planet so extreme. We strive to learn and know everything we possibly can, so going to Venus seems logical. There have been spacecraft sent there before, but not any manned space shuttles. The author explains how the challenges of Venus draw us closer to it, that we want to know about it, to learn. The goal of exploring it is to find out just how much Venus is like us, and to learn if there is or was any life present on the now desolate planet.\n\nVenus proves to be a challenge, but humans love challenges. Despite the conditions of Venus we still want to further explore it, and gain an understanding of it. Nothing will stopus from going if we want it bad enough. We want to know more about Venus, so I feel as if we will one day send a manned mission to Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The passage explains that a computer that can recognize facial expressions could help students. The passage also explains how the FACS is a good source for finding different levels of emotions.The passage also explains how the FACS actually works and it can find the different expressions in your face. We all do these calculations everyday but with a computer this is more accurate and trustworthy.\n\nThis proccess begins by creating a 3-D model of a face, After it makes the 3D model it measurs all 44 major muscles in the 3D model. Then it detects emotions by measuring the different muscles in the facial structure.\n\nThe FACS can find many different emotions and levels of emotion. The Mona Lisa in this passage is \"83% happy, 9% distgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry.\" If this system can do this to wsuch a complex painting then it definenalty would work for other peoples paintings/Faces.\n\nIf students were to use this when they get frustrated or upset and then it could make the subject or work a bit more understandable. This system could help people all over the world. This system could be used in many different alternative schools for students that are more upset and frustrated with life so it can make things understanable for the kids that arent as smart as most.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nick D'Alto wrote this passage in the mindset of informing us how this new technology works with analyzing and even producing seemingly accurate emotionsal information theough a computer analyzing the muscles in individuals faces. Prof. Thomas Huang is primarily the man who produces or made this program for a computer. They used this to determine the emotions of the magnificant work of the great artist \"Leonardo da Vinci\", called the \"Mona Lisa\".\n\nThey claim that it can produce the same or even better results for many different jobs than people can today.\n\nThey say that they can set up a computer that can do a teachers job, in the classroom. They say that it would be able to read students facial expressions and emotions and determine if the students are confused, bored or even any other emotion. Then it can reteach the lesson in a different or more simple way than the previuos way. The people also say \"most human communication is non verbal, including the emotional communication\". Therefore, it would make this computer even more relevant. They also say that using this could improve many digital subjects such as video games or video surgery to make the faces more expressive.\n\nThe prefessors have a reasonable argument for their program and they might be on to something. If this computer/program can aid teachers in teaching their classes, this computer would be the perfect fit for further the kids learning experiance. Therefore, it would be a great aid to the teahcers for them to get to better teach the students if the teachers themselves dont pick up the students confusion or frestration.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To opinion computers negative effect people I think negative causes people get less exercise spend less time family friends distracts things get done First computers negative effect people causes get exercise For example many football soccer baseball games practicingg computer webcam night Another way get work done WIthout even leaving house You shop online stay home work online even go college things include getting around day things lazy Second computer causes interact people less Now family friends went I sat right nt even look playing computer games know lot kids I reading magazine interacting kids much got computer Lastly think computer negative effect It distracts kids conversations first people talk someone computer hard absorbent re Secondly computer distracts kids homework I know first hand wherever I type assignments I get end going different websites getting work done lastly distracts kids household chores Some kids put side forget re budy playing game surfing web know I I d get big trouble Those reasons I think computer negative effect people Because causes get less exercise nt interact people much distract So unless want things happening I suggest spend less computer", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "NO IMAGE", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, it is acknowledged that students from suburban areas find it tough to receive higher education. Whether it should be made easier for them to access university education becomes an ongoing concern, which incurs a highly-charged debate.Obviously, higher education opportunities bring about benefits to students in multiple ways. For example, higher education becomes increasingly important to senior high school graduates, partly it determines if they have the competitive edge in the job market, and partly because it is seen as a guarantee of a certain level of the mental ability, from the computer literacy that is required by the most employers to the capacities of acquiring new knowledge the soonest possible which is valued by most . With a university degree, students from rural areas obtain a job easily, thereby bettering their living conditions and their family as well.Higher education also, however, to impose a heavy burden on families since the rise in the tuition fees are increasingly beyond those families’ ability to afford. In addition, with the mounting evidence, a university degree is not always a guarantee of seizing a decent job; therefore, their living conditions are likely to able to earn back their tuition fee after graduation. people argue, students from rural areas are not well-advised to pursue a university degree. But I perceive their desire to further their education should not be disrespected and the government should subsidise them to receive higher education.In conclusion, university education should be made fair to everyone, predicated only on their academic performance and mental abilities, rather than their financial capacities and the government should subsidise those students in need.Teacher’s comment: Not all the parts of the task were covered. The writer’s position is relevant to task prompt, the main ideas are also relevant but not all of them are developed well enough. The information is presented coherently, it is evident that the writer progresses from one idea to another.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When a student is confused in school they are supposed to raise their hand. It's been taught that way since day one. Whether that is followed or not is hard to say. Some students are scared to raise their hand however, as they grow older and mature, they seem to find more courage to ask questions which is the way it has always been taught. Students generally make faces when they are confused, that can be beneficial to the teacher if they're paying attention. A recent computer software has been developed by Professor Thomas Haung that indicates peoples emotions. It was used on the Mona Lisa to get every percent of each emotion on her face. It was suggested that this software be put in schools to benefit students. However, this innovation should not be put into schools because of the varying ages of kids, how much it would actually be used, and the convienence of the schools budget and space in the classrooms.\n\nThis computer software that can tell every percent of what emotion on your face is a very fascinating concept but is not the most convienent for pre-school and elementary students. In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" it was said a classroom computer could recognize confusion or boredom from the students and then in which change the lesson for a more beneficial class (para 6). If this were to be put in place into an younger classroom it could be misleading. Younger kids have spunky behavior as their minds are still maturing and developing. They might find the software fun and amusing and make many facial expressions which would alter their lesson plan in class unaccordingly. Others may argue that little kids could possibly get bored of doing that every day and eventually calm down about it so then it would be useful. Though you never know when a little kid could find something fun again, it's just that easy and would then again rise to misleading lesson plans for the young students.\n\nIf this technology was put in a highschool classroom where students minds have better matured and developed it would be more successful. However, there would need to be a computer for every student and not all schools can provide that.\n\nSome students may even find it uncomfortbale to have their expressions and themselves being watched and analyzed all day. As a result of knowing they are being recognized as confused, they could easily act and prevent their expression from giving that result or not even use them. People can already do the work of this software, friends can tell how you're feeling based on your facial expression (para 5). Also mentioned in \"Making Mono Lisa Smile\" people use their knowledge to tell whether a politician or celebrity is faking a smile or being truthful (para 8), again proving that people can already do what this software is, just not as precise with numbers. On the other hand, if these computers were installed in schools and became a regular thing, then it could eventually be excepted by students and they would actually use the software to their benefit.\n\nTeachers would find this innovation helpful. They could argue that not all students express if they trully understand material or not. If they had this software it would accurately show them the truth about their students. But students could still refuse to use it which would lead teachers back to square one.\n\nMaybe even before a students first day of school they were taught to raise their hand if they had something to say, it's normal. So let students do that because the computer software that tells every percent of every expression someone is having is unecessary to have in a school because of the varying ages of kids, how much it would actually be used, and the convienence of the schools budget and space in the classrooms.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In various nations around the world, a growing amount of people are becoming curious to explore the history of the household or the apartment they live in. The reasons for the creation of this matter are the financial aspect, unavoidable renovation and lastly growing a bond between the house and the people. I will explain further with points and answers.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, people's curiosity could be caused by multiple reasons. Firstly, I imagine if you know the historical environment of the building they add some economic value to it. So, if the homeowners want to sell or rent the property they can gain the price according to how old is the building. Secondly, when you find out how old your house is, you can do regular restructuring to make it last longer. Thirdly, knowing the history of the building could bring the residents closer together.\r\n\r\nIn addition, their different ways to search for information regarding a building's history. Such details can be found in the town's local library, where old documents are located and they are surely reliable. Next, online websites can be a way to learn the historical facts you want about the house you are living in. Furthermore, another convenient way is to ask an elderly person who lives in the neighbourhood and he will give you all the data about the old days. For instance, the elderly community members know the past more than the others as they have been there when some historic events really happened.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, many reasons can make people interested in their house's past. It is a way to create a bond with your family, to have your own investment in the aspect of finances and ,lastly you give life to an object that has lived for a thousand years with a number of surrounding historical events.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One obstacle builders face amount wind blowing high air The dirigibles big wind lot resistance made sway backAnother obstacle dirigibles filled hydrogen highly flamable Being filled flamable gas could easily turn disaster Especially people close ground", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people believe that giving longer prison sentences is the best way to reduce crime. On the other hand, others believe that there are better ways to reduce crime. This essay will discuss both views and my opinion.\nSome people insist that punishment is a priority as culprits have gone agaisnt ones country's law. When they serve more years in prison, there is no chance for them to re-commit crime. In addition, some suppose that those who can not afford themselves, will feel better in the prison. As prisoners have to live in a systmatized cycle, they do not need to plan their budget and life. There is interview with an offender who continuously commits crime to go back to the prison.\nContemporarily, others say that there are better ways to reduce crime, such as rehabiliation and education. Most offenders lack moral value. Furthermore, they mostly have wrong mindsets or thoughts as some have never been educated properly. Therefore, other people think that education is better way to improve prisoners' behaviour. Society ought to give an opportunity to re-start their life again.\nI agree more with the second view. Obviously, we have to punish those people whoever break the law. However, punishment should not be a priority. Education is important. Community need to lead a way for them so that they can re-born as a totally different person. There is a statistics of crimes rates in the United States of America which implicits that strict punishment and longer prison sentences reversely led to an increase in crime rates. Therefore, the government needs to concentrate more on education and rehabiliation rather than security and control.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that it would be fun to be a sea cowboy. In the text it says that he got to visit places the problebly never get to visit. In the text it also states that he liked taking care of the animals and people. I think that he likes to fly around the ocean which is part of his job.\n\nI Believe that he wanted to join because of his friend asking him to. In the text it states that his friend asks him to join the UNRRA. In the text it also states the even though he gets hurt he still likes the job. I believe that is why he wanted to join.\n\nI Believe that he kind of likes animals. in the text it states the he likes taking care of the animals. In the text it also states that he likes checking on the animals every hour or so. I believe that is why he liked being the night guard for the night other than the slipping of the ladder incidant.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you like to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program? I think you would love to. You would be able to get to help people and save people, you would also get to travel the world and learn about different cultures. Even though you it might right now seem just like work, work and more work, you also get to have fun.\n\nWhen your a Seagoing Cowboy you get to help people, and save them to. Maybe some of their houses got destroyed, or maybe then don't have enough supplies top trade care of themselves and their loved ones. Well being a Seagoing Cowboy you get to do this for people all around the world. You would definitely be able to meet new people and I think you would have a lot of fun. During 1945 many countries were left in ruins. Wouldn't you love to go help those people find food, find or build a shelter for them, and more? This would be an all around great experience.\n\nIn this experience of a life time you would also be able to travel around the world. Wouldn't traveling around the world seem fund? You be Abel to learn so much, like, maybe a new language, or some new facts that maybe you didn't know about that country. You would be able to learn about cultures and have a new experience. Being able to travel around the world would be amazing. Even through you are still doing work you would still get some free time too. It's now just work.\n\nEven though you will be working most of the time, you can not just work, you have to have fun with it. Like you get to see animals and stay with them on the ship. Like when you have the shift to watch over the animals, you get to see them and check on them. Maybe even pet them. Ther could be all sorts of animals on the ships. Who's knows it a surprise. You also have the opertunity to see different places. When you get to your destination you get to explore or stay on the ship. You will be able to see like Greese, or China. Tidi would ave an awesome experience to me.\n\nSo now do you think that being apart of the Seagoing Cowboys would be fun? You would be able to help people across the country, you would be able to learn about different cultures, and would would get to have fun. This would be an experience that probably no one really has done. You could become a hero by justly helping people. I think that you should join the Seagoing Cowboys. What do you think?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The given chart displays the average level of precipitation and heat that Kolkata could have in a month.\nOverall, we can conclude that the temperature for every month is ranked at least above 20 degrees and the rate of the rainfall, which is graduated in millimetres, is higher in summer than the other seasons.\nIt seems thanks to the climograph that the rainfall might mostly depend on the temperature and the season. When the temperature of Kolkata is not above 25 degrees, which it is during November to February, the precipitation appears to be under 50 millimetres whereas when it may seem to be between 27 and 30 degrees, the rainfall has a significant growth, namely more than 200 millimetres.\nHowever, it is not when there are the highest temperatures that the precipitation seems to have the same level as well, for instance, the highest heat may be depicted at 32 degrees whereas the rainfall appears only to be at 100 millimetres. Contrary to the highest temperatures, the lowest heats have the same level than the rainfall, namely the minimum.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "libraries nt remove items becouse people find ofensive People prefer difrent types books renoving reduses selection A lower selection books means less people reason go", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that yes we should keep the electoral college. To take it away would be wrong to me i have many reasons why and pay attention to find out why i believe we should keep the electoral college. I think it would probably be best if the ones who don't know what an electoral college is should really pay attention because i'm going to explain what it is to all of you reading this.\n\nTo start off why wouldn't you want to keep the electoral college to me that's a sign of are freedom. The ones who don't know what an electoral college is we will get there soon just stick around. I am arguing that yes we should keep it because its important. The electoral college is the right to selecting/voting for president and vice president and people like that. Now to began on with the reasons i think it is important is that's a sign of are freedom to me that gives us a right to vote for who we want running this economy. Not being able to vote for this kind of thing could be bad because when we vote for the people we want running this economy we are choosing wisely because we don't want this town or anything to come crashing to the ground because of some man or woman who really doesn't care about the people they just want their name to be heard.\n\nSome may disagree with what I've had to say but they clearly didn't think about it to much. Also some people really don't care about who gets elected they just don't care nor do they wanna vote at all and most don't. When someone votes to me that's a good thing because we have went through all this freedom stuff and then were able to vote and no many people want to vote that's pretty ridiculous if u ask me that's a sign of freedom like I've said before and when we go through a lot just to get u this grant of freedom and people just throw it away that's a sign of disrespect. I know that me being young and not able to vote yet and probably not making any since at all is probably making who ever is reading this mad but i wasn't put here to be taken right back out at a young age i was put here to live a life that was chosen for me and when people who are to dumb to realize it don't vote or at least don't try makes me mad because their not seeing what there doing just going in there and putting what ever name down on a ballot is wrong but going in there knowing a little information and choosing the person you think would make a good leader is fine.\n\nPeople wonder why are world is so messed up and they don't realize it but its messed up because we made it messed up we had the choice to make it better but we chose to make it worse see taking away the electoral college is taking away are rights to make are community a better place and no one sees it but the ones who actually care and who are with me on this. People could show me a million articles on why we should do away with it but i will still agree with keeping because we didn't come this far as a community to just throw it all away and let people who don't care take away are freedom and rights to helping the community out and choosing wisely about are world and trying to keep are community as clean as possible and as safe as possible.\n\nWell you have just heard my argument on why i think we should keep the electoral college and not do away with it because some people just don't care. I know that who ever is reading this could think differently about what i had to say and they may be saying this fourteen year old has no idea what shes talking about and they may be right but i know that when my time comes to be able to vote i will be there and i will be choosing who i think will be the best and i will care.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe book none us read It shelf book store think grow read child right Also music shelf remove store Children age shouldnt way get rated r music centrain music shouldnt shelfs little kids get hold So lets get movies playing shows No child able see half things showing movies child expose things grow likely expose That another way young children half things peoples make certain movies need think children would act toward ones make Most magazines sold today giving children wrong idea When magazine fill alot say say things kids world nothing think foreal ok spent wrong message young children And know thinking like true well kids days listen ever think right half magazines make things sound real", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit, alothough it will be a challange. I claim that the author does a good job of supporting this idea. Studying Venus would be benfafitial because it allows us humans to understand more about the closest planet to earth. It would also be benfaftial because it is often referred as Earth's \"twin\". Studying Venus will not be easy due to the planet having the hottest surface in the solar system.\n\nStudying one of the closest planet's to Earth would be benfafital to us humans because it gives us more knowaldge about it. In paragraph 2 it states \" Earth, Venus, and Mars our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at differnt speeds. These differences in speed mean that somtimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus.\"\n\nAnother quote from paragraph 2 would be \"Because Venus is right around the coner--in space terms- humans have sent numerous spaceraft to land on this could-draped world. Both of these quotes show that Venus is benfaftial to study because it does not take long to get information about the planet becasue it is close to earth.\n\nVenus is often referred to as \"Earth's \"twin\", which is also another reason why the author used to to support his claim. In paragraph 2 the auhtor states \" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size.\" In paragraph 4 it states \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Another quote from the passage that supports this idea is in paragraph 4 \"Today, Venus still has some features that are analogus to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familar features such as valleys, mountains and creaters. All of these quotes prove that studying Venus is very benfaftial because it is very smilar in some ways to earth than any other planet in our solar system.\n\nAlthough studying Venus will indeed be benfaftial, it will not be easy due to the planet with the hottest surface tempture in the solor system. In paragraph 3 the author states \" A thick atmosphere of almost 97 precent carbon dioxide blakents Venus. Another quote is in paragraph 2 \" Since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. Paragraph 3 states \" On this planet's surface, temperatures avarage over 800 degrees farenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experiene on our own planet. Paragraph 3 also states \" These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an enviornment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest part of our oceans and would liquefy many metals.\" All of these quotes prove that it will be a challange to study the surface of Venus, but in the end the hard work might pay off.\n\nAll of these statements prove that the author uses alot of detial througout the article to support the idea of furthuer studying the surface of Venus. It is one of the closest planets to earth, It is also referred to as Earth's \"twin\", but it will be a challange to study the surface due to the extreme environment that Venus has. This shows that us human's should futur out studys to keep exploring Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Throughout the essay \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author does a good job of suporting the claim that studying Venus is worth while. The author provides examples and counters them with ways to overcome said obstacles, and uses specific examples on how NASA plans to study and explore Venus.\n\nVenus has many different aspects and characteristics from Earth, such as the temperature of over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure that is 90 times greater than the pressure on Earth. Geological and weather challenges include lightning strikes, erupting volcanoes, and powerful earthquakes. The author mentions all of the issues regarding visiting Venus in the second and third paragraph. Although the author mentions the challenges, he/she is doing that to completely inform the reader by giving all the details and then finding ways to counter those obstacles. The author brings up the question of \"If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface?\" in the beginning of paragraph 4. This shows how the author brings up an argument against the initial claim, and then proving that argument wrong to make the claim more valid. Next, in the fifth paragraph, the author uses evidence from the National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) to provide ways to escape the hostile conditions of Venus. For example, one idea is to allow scientists to float above the fray in a blimp like vehicle. Again in the second paragraph, the author again mentions another plan by NASA to study Venus. This plan is to use simplified electronics made of silicon carbide because they could survive Venus's surface for a limited amount of time. By using specific evidence and research already done by NASA, the claim that \"Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents,\" is being proven well. Lastly, in the final paragraph, the author does an excellent job of summarizing the scientific gains that would come from exploring Venus. The last line states, \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" which is a fantastic summary of the article and shows how well the author presented and supported his claim.\n\nIn conclusion, the author uses excellent writing skills to support and validate the initial claim, and does it very well. The author thoroughly analyzes each danger and possible solution, and also states the positive effects of traveling to Venus. By using specific evidence and research from NASA, and countering all of the dangers with possible solutions, the author supports the claim brilliantly.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The technology, Facial Action Coding System (FACS) was created to recognize peoples thoughts/emotions through a facial coding system by the muscles or movements in your face. Created by Prof. Thomas Huang, he tested it on Leonardo da Vinvi's Renaissance painting, Mona Lisa. Not only does this technology just recognize your emotions, but on a computer, it can respond to your emotions as well. Dr. Huang's new computer software stores similar anatomical information as electronic code.\n\nThe real question is, would this be helpful or benefit us in a classroom? I think yes. The author states that \"If you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar one might follow.\" Can you imagine having a computer that knows when your happy or sad? Having computers like these in school classrooms would be so valuable, due to the lack of \"fun\" in school, these computers could determine when youre bored in class and change something about it. Or say you're learning a new lesson in math class, and you're becoming very confused. The computer would recognize your confusion by the facial expression you have and help you out. Dr. Huang says, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" Another reason this technology would be helpful is because it would be less physical work and planning for the teacher. Teachers wouldn't have to deal with their students being bored, confused, or falling asleep in their class while they are teaching. This technology could greaty change the way class goes during a school day in many positive ways.\n\nThe new technology 'FACS' can encode any emotion of yours, this would be so helpful to us students in school for important reasons such as, being sad, or being confused. If so, the computer can modify things or help you out. Dr. Huang did an incredible job of creating this masterpiece, he stated that \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional commnication, so computers need to understand that too.\" This technology could change the world, since us humans now of days are so addicted to our phones. This computer can not only help us in school but be a new way of emotionally and physically communicating with other people. In school classrooms, and at home. The Facial Action Coding System is a very valuable thing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that using technology to read emotional expressions of students in a classroom is beneficial. This is because students maybe struggling from depression or anxiety. It is easy for people to fake a smile or not act sad. Using the technology today, society can figure out whether or not someone is in a good mental state. This technolgoy does not just calculate one eotion, but multiple emotions. It would be a good idea to use this new system of calculating emotions because individuals misinterpertate another person's mood. With using this device humns would have a clear and better understanding of how someone is feeling. \"The Facial Action Coding System\" can help teachers with their job. This device can detect whether a student is bored or understanding the material. If teachers new this, they would find a better way of teaching. The device is 'all about those muscular action movements, they even indiate a difference between a genuine smile and a forced one.\"\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is valuable in the classroom because it can tell the differene if omeone is being truthful or not. If a student gets in trouble and chooses not to tell the truth, this device can detect it. The article states \"to an expert, faces don't lie, these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a smiling politician or celebrity isn't being truthful.\" It's also important to detect students emotions in the classroom. The teachers never know whats going on with a student. For example a student could have a rough home life, that could lead to making bad choices like self harm. It's important to know what a student is feeling so they can get help earlier on. Not only is that a good thing to know, but it's important to see if the student understands the material being taught. If the student is unsure what is going on in the lesson, the teacher needs to find a way to help the student understand. If students are bored or confusedduring the lesson, the teacher needs to modify it. Teachers can do this by making work more hands on and intresting.\n\nIn conclusion The Facial Action Coding System is a smart and effective way to indicae someone's emotions and shouls be used more.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many individuals believe that students should participate as volunteers to contribute their services for society whenever they have spare time. This would be helpful for a student as well as local communities. I agree with this notion of participating in unpaid social work. This essay will discuss the main points with examples. \n\nTo embark with, students who indulge in unpaid work, they would be able to comprehend their responsibility towards society. This is because ,when they are allowed to involve with other residents and they come to realize the problems associated with different issues like education, poverty, pollution and many more. A Child Welfare Scheme, for example, has revealed that many poor families have been helped by school students by supporting them in agricultural activities. As a result, volunteering not only essential for a local community but also important for individual growth. \n\nMoreover, unrewarded work aids the children in shaping their character. As they learn how to communicate and handle difficult situations. They can develop myriad skills such as leadership,behavioural and cultural values.For instance,a lot of students have developed an acceptable character after joining volunteer sheme started by USA government.Consequently, they will gain love and affection from public. \n\nIn conclusion, unpaid social services should be introduced in villages and cities and numerous students should be encouraged to utilize their leisure time, which will be imperative for them and societies as well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Space is a mysterious undiscovered place. Scientist are always trying to discover more and more things about it so we have a better understanding of what's around us. We have landed on the Moon and sent rovers to Mars but they're so many other things we can explore. For example, Venus is a planet that we haven't been properly able to explore due to its dangers. In this text the author brings many valid points about exploring venus that outwiegh the risks.\n\nThe author uses the distance between Venus and earth to support why we should go to Venus. Scientist want to explore many things in space but a big problem is covering the long distances. Being the third planet from the sun, Venus is neighbors with Earth and Mercury. This makes it easier to send aircrafts to Venus because of the short distance between the two planets. In paragraph 2 it says, \"Because Venus is sometimes right around the corner-in space terms-humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world.\" This shows how convienient the distance between Earth and Venus is for space travel.\n\nThe author also uses the similarities between Earth and Venus to validate his claim. Venus has many similarities with its neighbor planet. In paragraph two the author writes, \"Often reffered to as Earth's \"twin\", Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size,\". The author also writes that Venus has a very similar features with Earth. It has similar featurs like valley, mountains, craters and a surface of riocky sediment. With a planet so close to Earth in geology exploring it might help us find more things about our planet too.\n\nThe author defends his claim by talking about ways that Nasa is trying to discover Venus. Venus is a planet that has exremely high temperaturs with an inhospitable enviroment. Many of the rovers that have landed there have only lasted for hours. This is true but NASA is finding new ways to make it possible to discover Venus more efficiently. In paragraph 7 the author writes,\"For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks.\" Discovering Venus is possible but we just need to put more work into find new ways.\n\nThe author brings many pieces of evidence to validate his claim that Venus is worth exploring. Venus is close to Earth making it easier to travel there. Venus has many similarities with Earth so scientist are more interested in exploring it. Even though it has extreme temeperatures and high pressure, scientist are finding new ways to be able to explore venus. All in all, the author proves that Venus is very interesting planet to explore and we should explore despite the dangers that we might face.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I dont believe that drier less cars are a good idea. While the prospect of having a car smart enough to know where it is going and has the ability to get there is great, but in some situations letting technology make some of the decisions isnt the best idea. The cost of production of these \"smart cars\" would already be a lot of money, not to mention the cost of the sutible roads for these cars, \"These smart-road systems worked surprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was simply too expensive to be practical.\"\n\nWhen it comes to a life or death situation in a vehicle, Im not sure how many people would trust their car to make the right choice. If the car was put into a situation where a dog runs out into the road with traffic around it, would it stop and save the dog or continue driving as if there is nothing wrong. Also how does the car decide what roads are too dangerous for it to have control, what if there was construction and the car did not recalculate fast enough, would it keep speeding along or would it feel the bumps of cement in the road and say that it is not safe.\n\nThese so called \"smart cars\" could be a terror on roads, while it may be able to determine what to do in some instances it doesnt have human intelect or intuition. The car cannot make some of the crucial decisions needed to stay safe on the road. What happens when it snows and the camera gets blocked, would it pass the driving ability to the driver or would it continue being in control.\n\nIf made correctly self driving cars are a brilliant idea, but until scientists can make it 100% safe, I dont think they should be allowed on the street.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that we shouldn't change the Electoral College \"winner takes all\" system. It has been working well for the past couple of presidents. Yes, it might be unfair for thoses who are wanting to be electors and can't because the person they are running for lost but the ones who did win are doing what they believe is right. Just because of one big out break in 2000 doesn't mean the system will fail again. It will gradually progress trough out time and soon it won't ever fail again. You just never know unless you let it continue until it doesn't work any longer and when it does you find a new, better system that will work for decades. In 2000 people might have switched their votes because they thought that person desirved it not the other guy. The system of \"winner takes all\" hasn't failed since 2000. It works so why get rid of it. If it were to fail multiple times then yes get rid of it and find something new but it hasn't.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This important paragraph narrator put story For instance Saeng saying new home flowers important school test And saeng doesnt many friends go see school hibiscus remind old friends made Saeng simply stating everything back normal way wants take test In conclusion narrator used paragraph let us know saeng feels", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph when come back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test again The author shows Saeng take test ready pass test Also author concludes story paragraph shows ends story knowing take test knows faith take test make mother proud passed This author concludes story paragraph", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever offended Did lash keep open mind come try understanding People offended many things every day life So broaden minds see offenses normality You re party bowl full candy stationed right beside front door You walk take piece Wait nt want piece What going Do take pieces nt like bowl throw away simply drop back bowl choose new one If throw candy away mean party guests You narrowed choices selfish opinion That candy could guest favorite But since YOU nt like take away guests privilege eat candy They nt deserve If re searching books library come across book nt interest offends put back look new one If re trouble finding right book ask librarian suggestions topics books check Go new library even nt mess something nt Especially something small book The point matter nt like something disregard The moment book book alone starts causing problems moment anyone intervene But come really think book could cause problem If child problems nt think ought check s going instead looking see heshe checked book hope none children took shelf This quite possibly one last things I would think causing problem I even thought Opinions cause lot problems Sometimes people need keep opinions agreed", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article, facial recognition software called the Facial Action Coding System allows for computers to better understand and identify human emotions. The software was created by Dr. Paul Eckman, who is a psychologist. The FACS technology is used to analyze several muscles upon the face to determine the current emotion of the person or people who are using the software. Many feel like this technology could possibly be used to change up the education system by analyzing the faces of students who appear bored or uninterested in the cirriculum that is being covered. But, the cost to run and maintain the systems that are needed to run the FACS within schools and other facilities may create an issue because it is costly, and not everyone is going to have the funding to put into such a system.\n\nIn a classroom, every student is taught the same lesson and given the same lecture in the same exact manner as every student sitting around them. Their faces, just like any other human being, can determine their current emotions towards the subject they are learning or the topic that they are covering. FACS has the ability to analyze all 44 major muscles in the human face, which are responsible for showing emotion every single day. Dr Paul Eckman, a psychologist, created FACS to analyze the facial muscles on the human face and determine the current emotion of someone behind a computer screen. Along with Dr. Eckman, Dr Huang explains how facial exprssions play a role in human emotion, \"The facial expressions for each human emotion are universal\",oberserves Dr. Huang, \"even though individuals show varying degrees of expression\" (like not smiling broadly). With the invention of this technology, some feel that it could change the educational system by analyzing the emotions of a student towards the subject they are learning.\n\nIn the article, Dr. Huang explains how a classroom computer could analyze the emotions of a student during a lesson or lecture, \"a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" And while this may seem like a good idea, the technology used for FACS cannot be run on a home PC due to the complex algorithims that it uses, and the results may be the same for school computers, which run on similar or less capable software than that of a home PC. This is mentioned in paragraph 7, where it explains the same reasoning why the software cannot be used on a home computer. Another possible issue could come when schools do not have the funding, nor the room for computers in every classroom to adjust the education system. While the technology may be an innovative way to change how students learn, the cost to update compuers, install software, and manage it would be very costly for a school system to continue with doing.\n\nIn conclusion, the Facial Action Coding system is a great way to enable computers to communicate more clearly with humans, but may not neccessarily be ready for common use within schools or other places just yet. The algorithms used in the sofrware are too complex for most operating systems used within homes and schools, and may need further development before it is released to the public for common use. In addition, the idea is good for the future, and may change the way the education system works for generations of students to come.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir PERSON creates happy loving mood In time racism segregation normal family many happy times home Newark New Jersey His town filled Cuban Spanish Italian immigrants His neighborhood united hardworking In memoir Rodriguez writes kind parents In memoir states My parents always kept arms door open many people considered family knowing would us p Rodriguez s family always willing help others knew favor would returned The Rodriguez family used strong kindness help everyone neighborhood In return respected Also Narciso Rodriguez writes bravery parents He writes They came selflessly immigants give children better life p NUM His parents wanted help children give better lives They sacrificed needs wants children The loves parents sacrifice love Last least Narciso Rodriguez writes struggles parents He writes They struggled personally financially NUM The Rodriguez family struggled racist acts different climates children They wanted give children better life given Cuba Overall Narciso Rodriguez writes parents struggles lead happy moments", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast builders empire state building would faced many consequences attempting allow dirigibles dock A regular sized diriglbe made enormous steel framed ballons They went fast eighty miles per hour could cruise seventy per hour The Empire State Building s would faced building dangling high pedestrians street neither practical safe And even dirigibe landed ship would swivel around around would made building moveable Even ship would land illegal ship ever tie building even approach area", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear computers hold exclusive inofrmation I believe good effect people The majority students today crowd around computer taking care body Such excersising going outside People need enjoy wonders nature instead sitting computer Not computers impact people also impact family friends There less interacting time risk going computer Different websites expose wrong thing get trouble I firmly believe computers hamble affects people In today already loaded obese poeple outof people physically healthy majority obese people today state computer Computers attract people sit computer hours time excersising enjoying outdoors Computers damage bodies way luering go enjoy nature I definatly argue fact computers bad effect humans Computer change body mind My sister computer bedroom I barely see She stays time mom calls dinner takes five get away computer Computers affect people keep humans away civilization Friends family impacted lack interaction one person It s disrespectful take time away friends play computers This ruins many peoples social health ignore family friends people stop trying interact When computer finatics came around want anyone Computers definatly unhealthy affect people use How would feel tons personal info got public Nowadays computers major chance Websites like mysapce twitter information click button exposed world Computers background kind effect people Some dont understand bad info picture sends fully negatively impact career edecation Computers help people make wrong choices doubt people let time spend internet Many agree computers disadvantage many people way Whether taking health away keeps many indoors costs friends family computers good physical social health Computers send information risky They majority impact future impact people bad way", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez feels great amount passion love He goes detail culture says much means He also feels love love family friend always He says That family goes blood", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt faced multiple issues theory It took lots time people begin realizing reality For example Airships law preventing getting low urban areas Also realized major would play negative role Wind would cause swing around Docked They thought way rear ship soon realized unsafe many people They heard New Jersey Destroyed fire Due hydrogen Also unsafe New York population Overall began realize saftey issues unpractical", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders empire state building faced many problems attempting dirigibles dock Some apparant reasons dirigibles made weather conditions existing laws airships flying urban areas Dirigibles made safest materials made hydrogen extremely flamible This would make docking Station unsafe dirigible ever caught fire If dirigible ever get caught fire accident would severe since Station would densely populated area In paragraph says greatest obstacle successful use mooring mast nature Due violent air currents atop empire state building ship would swivel around mooring mast making unsafe dock If something happened dirigible would unsafe many pedestrians The last reason docking station built paragraph existing law airships flying low urban areas It would illegal dirigible tie docking station law This law high winds fearing would blow dirigible onto buildings The docking station unable built safty reasons existing laws", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days as the population is increasing at an unprecedented pace, the housing shortage has become one of the main consequences. It is concerned whether it is an obligation of the government to alleviate this issue or whether the nation is responsible for the lack of accommodation. I firmly believe that both parties should integrate and contribute to the solutions. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, there is ample evidence that sustainable housing is strongly due to government regulations. That is to say, political houses should establish certain restrictions on the numbers of people and land that is distributed to each citizen. For instance, a recent survey has revealed that 25 countries had a scarcity of land to construct new houses because of the fact that government didn't allocate the land properly and residents were prone to build large houses in order to outperform one another, which later caused housing shortages in multifold metropolitan cities. \r\n\r\nSecondly, it is explicit that because of the nation's unprofitable purchase of lands and housing facilities, it has become prevalent to some citizens to inevitably live in flats and accommodations. It can be solved by public organisations that can share and divide some houses, which indicates that the government is not fully liable for such an issue. For example, several cities concluded that this problem is partly due to people's actions, 45 per cent of which could solve this problem by uniting both the government and the nation. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, it can be clearly seen that I strongly advocate that it is not only feasible for the government to come up with a solution, but also citizens of the city are able to resolve the scarcity of housing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In primary school, especially in the countryside in Japan, primary students have an opportunity to learn how to plant and grow vegetables. In addition, students need to feed and observe animal growth and health. This is a great advantage for children to enrich their knowledge of how essential our lives consist in society. It is obviously advantageous than disadvantages.\nFirstly, the procedures to grow vegetables take a long time from cultivating the soil to harvesting vegetables when they grew up. This means that it is great education for children on how to produce our food and agriculture industries have been paying an outstanding effort and time. This education causes students to become aware of the necessity of gratitude to people who are working in these industries.\nIn addition, it is also mandatory to keep animals in a good condition is worthwhile as young as possible. Animals also have lives, and their lives easily devastate unless they are fed. This is also the same in human lives. Young children will be able to recognize how sensitive to keeping animals a good condition, and be more respectful to their own parents and how deep love they give to children. As a result they are more willing to give a hand who need help.\nFinally, these activities, such as growing vegetables and keeping animals are not only helpful to learn what our society consists of, but also more educational for children firsthand, instead of watching documental TV programs. Through these activities, children will become aware of current issues, for example, food consumerism, extinction of animal species, global warming, and so on. If they learned as young as possible, the number of people who are concerned and make specific actions for these issues will increase. As a result, our lifestyle will improve more peacefully.\n動物　繊細に状況を観察していいコンディションを保つことの大切さを知る。それは人にも共通しているため、世話を通じて親に対する感謝や、友人に対して暖かい言葉をかけることができるようになる。", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Artificial intelligence is believed to take over most of the jobs done by humans in the future.\r\n\r\nWhile most unskilled jobs will eventually be taken over by robots, replacing humans in the jobs that require human contact is unlikely. This essay will discuss why eventually only a handful of jobs will be carried out by people.\r\n\r\nRobots may replace humans only in specific jobs where human skills are not required. Many companies are replacing people with artificially intelligent devices which are cost-effective as compared to hiring and training staff to carry out easy tasks. Moreover, these robots perform these jobs with more precision and productively which will eradicate the challenge of human error and the time taken to complete a job. To cite an example, supermarkets have replaced cashiers and stock checkers with bots which costs way lesser than employees. Furthermore, these bots can work round the clock and do not need any days off. For these reasons, jobs that do not require human involvement will be replaced by artificially intelligent robots.\r\n\r\nConversely, robots will not be able to replace jobs that require a human touch. The human capacity to perform certain jobs is much more than machines and robots will never be able to achieve that capacity. Some examples of these specific tasks are massage, education, health and social work. For example, machines can not replace doctors as it is impossible for machines to carry out an operation. These tasks require can be carried out by specialists with high skills and can not be matched by bots.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, while some people agree that human employees will be replaced by machines, others believe that they will not be able to replace certain skills. In my opinion, artificially intelligent machines are capable to replace human workers to a large extent but it is impossible to match the human capacity to perform high skill jobs.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Poof! Cars are starting to disappear. Many cities and countries are prohibiting car use, they feel it would be drop pollution rates. Your probably thinking right now; this is crazy, who would ban cars? Just think about it there are many advantages to not having a car. First, you wouldn'nt have to worry about gas, theres no need to buy gas if you dont have a car. Second, you'll become healthier. Third, more interraction with the world.\n\nAll the money you spend on gas.. what a shame! If we didn't have cars you'd have more money, imagine what you would do with all that money. Maybe a nicer house or maybe a nice big pool in the backyard, you'd never know unless you give it a try. I know what your thinking how would I get to work or how would I get to the doctors; they're would still be public transportation to get you to important places.\n\nIf there were no cars, many people would be a lot healthier. Not just people, the environment would be a much healthier places. Polution rates go down, less asthma attacks, more fun, no honking, no worrying about wether the kids are alright to be outside by themselves; sounds good to me. There would also be more family bonding, go for nice walks to the park or beach.\n\nImagine your walking down the street, you know everyone, you stop and talk, maybe laugh. That's what it'd be like with no cars. Not one face on the street that you didn't know. Many gatherings with friends, many laughs, a lot of fun it sounds like.\n\nThe car culture is starting to end in many countries and cities including the United States of America. No cars sounds nice, yes maybe you you think there would be many poor effects on the culture but you also have to look at the bright side. More money, you'd become healthier, and you'd have more interractions with world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There has been discussion revolving around the issue of whether museums are a place where people get educated or it is an amusing place to get entertained. I tend to believe that exhibition center should be a place of education. In this essay I will explain my opinion.\r\n\r\nThe primary factor we need to take into consideration is that museums are tourist’s biggest attraction place. For example, people who come to visit any country tend to stop by the museums to be entertained. It is that because places like this manage to put exhibitions that are interesting or somehow be appealing to the customers. Moreover, it is a perfect place to entertain children. For example, it sparks children curiosity and get them to be excited for school. It is for the reason that museums are predisposed to have exhibitions that keep children interested.\r\n\r\nIn contrast, some others may claim that museums goal is to educate. To start with, children or adults who are going to museums learn about different cultures, historical events and it can develop the perfect mindset for young people which help to sympathize or identify with other people. Another argument can be made that it allows people to find their interests in life through authentic demonstrations that are held in museums.\r\n\r\nHaving considered both views I believe that museums are beneficial for educational purpose because it helps to find yourself and ne interests which can lead to expanding your mind and worldview later on in life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How well did the arthour support his the idea the studying Venus ia somthing that is worthy of being pursuited in the futer? in the artical \"The challeneg of expolring Venus\" the athour going into deatil about why the plant Venus we should be looking in to ans studying dispit the dangours conditon that come along with the plant.The athour supporting idea that stuyding Veuns even though the plant holds a lot of danger conditons are well suppoted ideas due to his point he make on vaule of the plant,not easy to mange but survivbale condtion on the plant right know and exploration.Venus according to the paasseg is said to have onece been a planet that was very earth like .in paragrahp 4 it says \" Venus was probaly covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life just like earth.\" this plant was andis very simlar to earth in more ways then one it is close to earth and according to the athour holdds simlar featuers like creatuer valleys and mountians . All of this information shows and telles us that this planet is one that holds a lot of vaule and is a plant that should be returned to in order to closer examin it .it holds featuer that are simliar to earth and is one of the cloeset plant to earth also.In this passage the arthour also note in paragraph 5 that the condition on the plant are not the easyiest condtion to be in but are survivable for humans to be in.this shows us that it will not be easy for humans to go and vist Veuns but it is something that they could do and survive in.Nasa has come up with ideas that would allow them to send human to go study venus .in the artical on paragrah 5 it talks about how Nasa is think of creating something that they escribe as \" a blimp-like vehicle hovering\" this vechile would allow human to hover 30 or so miles over Veuns this will allow humas to to explore Veuns easliy.Curiosity is something that the aruthour talks about at the end of the artical on paragraph 8. the arthour says that \"curiosity will likley leas us to many equally intimidating endeavor.\" meaning that no matter waht there will all be dangour to any curiosty the human have that can lead to intimated encounter and danger in the futuer.this is very ture human are very curious and anthing that we can become intresed could be potental dangours to explore. The arthour follows this comment this up by saying thin in the artical in paragrahp 8 that\"Our travles on Earth and beyond should not be limted by dangers and doubts but should be expaned to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.i agree with that stament and he make a good argument that we should not hold aare selfes back fro learing more just cause of possibale dangerous that could accour.In counclusion the arthour made goos supportive calms on why we should explore Veuns even with the the dangours porsent due to vaule of the plant,not easy to mange but survivbale condtion on the plant right know.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Making Mona Lisa Smile the authour describes how new technology called The Facial Action Coding System Enables computers to identify human emotions. The process beging when the computer constructs A 3-D, Eckman has classified six basic emotions, The facial expressions for each emotion are universal.\n\nWhy I disagree with the authour is because you can't tell people emotions even with the computers. In the story its says that \"The process beging when the compputer constructs A 3-D Computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the modle must move like humans muscles\"(3). A human can move there face in many different ways even if there sad they can have a happy look on there face if the happy they could have a sad look on they face. So what this proves is that computer try to tell your emotions by your face expresions but really can't.\n\nHumans have a lot of emotions some you can see and some you can not see but all humans have there main emotions. \"Eckman has classified six basic emotions happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles\"(3). So what this is saying is that your main emotions can be known by a computer because you so different expressions when you are in them emotions. But even if you are show different emotions it would still be hard for a computer to tell how you fell even if it was the smartest computer in the world because say you are mad but even know your mad you showing expressions of being happy so what would the computer say it would most likely say your happy even know your not.\n\nEverybody show there facial expressions for each emotion. in the story it says that \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal, observes DR Hunang, even thought individuals often show varying degrees of expression like not smiling a broadly\"(4). And what that is saying is that when you are happy you show a facial expressions or even sad or depressed. Some people do show a lot of emotions but somepeople dont could make it harded for a computer to read if your happy are not.\n\nSo what I have proven in The process beging when the computer constructs A 3-D, Eckman has classified six basic emotions, The facial expressions for each emotion are universal. Is that computer would not be a very good way of reading people emotions. Because have there own way of showing the feelings and emotions so show heavy emotions some show light emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "For starters, the power to read someones emotion is too much, what if the person dose not want to be read and would like some privacy. Facial recognition is already a thing and the reading emotions is a useless waste of tax dollars for more reason than one.\n\nif this is a goverment funded project, then, one why, and two, what for. in the case that you are wasting money for things more immportant, like fixing the hunger epidemic, or stopping corupt people from oppressing others, you have decided to make a technology that reads faces, there are uses for this tech, but is it what we need or is it something that can wait untill everyone is happy and healthy. Understaning that there are uses for tech like this, what other uses does it have, the only thing for it is the \"makeing school lessons less boring\".\n\nIn another case, people not wanting to be read like a book and having it done anyway, dose not sound like fun. Creating a socity where everyone knows how everyone else feels, there are flaws that will devistate populations, perhaps someone dose not want to talk about somthing and the compter or cellphone with this new tech dose not know this, then offends the persson by telling a dark secret or spilling the beans about your emotions to some blabermouth that spits the info to the internet for example \"to an expert, faces dont lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a smiling polititinn or celebrity isn't being truthful.\" not only dose this tech give people the power to see through fake smiles, but it is also a hudge invasion of privacy and should be frowed upon, then again when has a polititian ever been truthful to begin with.\n\nThe main point is, with this tech taking away the ability to hold a secret, it makes our socity seem like robots and always wanting to be read like a book and have our emotions described as \"numbers on a spread sheet\" or words on a screen. The entire reason we are human is because we can read emotions without the use of a machiene telling us how we feel, insted of our friends asking us \"are you okay\" a computer program says \"you are feeling sad\" after some trgic event. Also the program has only basic emotions and feelings progamed into it, nothing as complex as a state of deep depretion.\n\nHowever this program could be useful for diegosing depression and stats that doctors still have trouble finding. Imagine if insted of reading feeling and telling you how you feel, the program could, for say; recomend a way to feel better if you are sad, or help relive anger stress with some soothing music, and even help make sure everyone is happy with out the big buck spending for therpy of a phycologist.\n\nIn conclution there are both good and bad things this program can do, but with all that power come a lot of risk and exposure. Read somthing wrong and disaster wil stike. Leave something unchecked and things get out of hand, but worst of all if the program gliches or the machiene malfunctions and someone pays the price with their life. But, remember just because its smarter than a human, dose not mean it cant fall victem to human error.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, one of the widely discussed and important topics is environmental issues such as pollution and climat change. Some people believe that it has occured due to material and wealth growth of countries, and it has no solution. I completely disagree with this statement, because it is possible to prevent environment damage by negotiating with countries which has great influence and finding a solution.\n\nTo begin, there are plenty of countries that are the main sourse of some vital fossil fuels or minerals. By manufacturing these kind of materials, they are causing a land and ocean pollution that are also affecting many species. However, apart from developing countries there are some reasons of damaging environment. For example, citizens of poor countries don't own private bin or don't have educatonal lessons like where litters can be tossed. Consequently, they are spreading rubbish around them and increasing amount of distributed waste.\n\nSecondly, we can avoid pollution disasters by just a few straightforward rules. If people commence throw out the trash to the special bins and collect spreaded waste in surroundings, we are able to the win fight against nature damage. Furthermore, scientists are trying to discover new ideas how to solve environmental problems and there are several successful inventions. For instance, scientists say that if we reduce production of carbon dioxide, it is possible to overcome climat change.\n\nIn conclusion, all aforementioned points illustrate that runner countries in developing process have great impact on nature pollution, but there are more crucial measures that we have to embrace for future of the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying venus can be very dangerous but that hasn't stopped scientists and astronomers from exploring Venus and studying it and having more information on that planet.\n\nAlthough you never know whats going to happen when exploring new things scientists find it very intresting to keep exploring Venus to keep finding out some of the features it has and maybe what it even used to look like. Venus is the second planet from the sun so its still very hot. Exploring Venus is very nice its diffrent from earth but also very similar it has like type features to earth like the mountains, valleys, and even craters. Venus also has a surface of a rocky sediment.\n\nOn the planets surface it temperatures over 800 degrees fehrenheit so it is extreamly hot. It also has the hottest temperture in our solar system even though its not the first planet closest to the sun. Astronomers are also discussing future visits to Venus. They are very fascinated to that planet because it may have been just like earth at one point with oceans covering it and it also could have supported diffrent forms of life on its planet at some point even if it was many years ago. Astromomers also feel like it doesnt have easy conditions but its still survivable for humans they just have to figure out how they can live around the heat and diffrent things like that. In the text it says that \" Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.\" And the weather impediments are like some of the things we have here like the earthquakes in certain parts of the worlds and the volcanoes too. So in some ways its similar to earth but with more extreme dangers.\n\nThe author did a very good job at supporting how dangerous exploring Venus is but how it also is a very cool planet to explore. The author also stated this in the aricle \" Our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expaned to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" Which its sorta saying that even though its dangerous we shouldnt stop our minds from exploring diffrent things and imagining diffrent things.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One car, one life, one big accident. That is all the future is asking to develope by continuing to try to improve and inspire people to use \"driverless cars\". I do not think driverless cars should ever become a new big thing for many reasons. They can malfunction on you. They still need assestence if they cant handle a road situation. They might not update any new laws or road changes nearby. There is so many negative reasons and thoughts that appear when thinking about the development of driverless cars.\n\nMy first reason to why I am against driverless cars is because they can always malfunction. What if it doesnt see an animal in the road and runs it over will it stop to help, would it starting loosing control? Who knows because your not the one behind the wheel. You could have stopped and saved that poor animal, instead you let your car take control. Also what if it just shuts down? Turns off completely in the middle of the road. All electronics have a point in time where they are slow and slowly begin to shut down. How long would you have the car to keep? Do you think a driverless car can last you up to 10 years? Maybe if your lucky. The weather and the technology cant keep up and hold its together as long as a gas opperated automobile is. What if it doesnt let you take control because it malfunctions and you end up hurting someone? Like it says in the text \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacture?\n\nAlso, what even is the point to have an automotive that still needs you in the car. If its not smart enough to drive without needing your assistence it would be useless. So say you are driving down the street and your texting and letting you car drive on its own. All of a sudden it crashes and hurts other including yourself. It would still be your fault even though you was not the one driving. In other words if you get in a car accident would the police put your car in jail or you? Well you offcorse if your even recovered from the crash your car has put you in anyways. Driverless cars allows drivers to think they can keep their eyes off the road when all reality they have to pay attention and be alert. If you have to have your eyes remained on the roads at all times then you might as well drive, atleast you will be secure and more alert.\n\nFinally the car over all is just a big mimic. People are tying to develope objects with human like qualities. In the text it even says \"The combination of all this input is necessary for the driverless car to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel.\" Personally I believe being human is special and an automobile can never be as special as a human life. Yes we may love our cars but never as much as one would love there children, friends, or family.\n\nDriverless cars are just an overall bad idea and we should keep our state safe and the people in it. I'm not the only one who agrees. Driverless cars are illegal in most states. In the text it mentions \"As a result, in most states it is illegal even to test computer driven cars.\" This shows that im not the only one who belives they are not safe and no matter what upgrades and assumptions that are made will not make a driverless car a good idea. Lets be original and stick to the safe way lets avoid the one car, one life, one accident.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When I could wait I open gifts My mom dad give sister second sister us give us money go buy thing like My dad mom dad mom mom dad mom give us money like mom dad dose I rember I buy cute cuformin boots I could wait open boots I asking open one gife mom dad said I got mad So next day I wake moning I look living room one I wait patent wake I could wait time takes forever tim I could wait", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus has been a planet neighboring the Earth and the Sun for many years. There has been many discoveries about the planet Venus and about other planets too. More discoveries can be made in order to figure out how we can live on other planets and also other discoveries for Venus can be made.\n\nVenus is called the Evening Star due to the fact that it is very bright when seen. Venus is the second planet in our solar system and it is almost as bright like the sun, when a stargazer looks up to the sky they can see our planet venus because it is easy to spot for a couple reasons. One beinging it is bright and the second it is close to our moon. The Moon and Venus can be considered twins, they are close in size, and it is close to our Earth but it is also close to the Moon. Venus is a warm planet not nearly as hot as the Sun but somewhere around there, so if huamns were sent up to space to live on Venus they wouldn't survive. There is no water in Venus it is just hot and lots of lava.\n\nOver the years NASA has tried to send spacecraft up to Venus. They haven't been succesful due to the fact that it's so hot on Venus, every spacecraft ever sent has only lasted a couple hours. Not a single human has even been on Venus, they wouldn't want to risk someones life if a spacecraft cant survive than a human wouldn't be able to survive. Venus is truly a difficult planet for humans to study, not a single space ship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. Planet venus has 97 percent carbon dioxide, the temperature is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit that is extremely hot, that is 90 times greater than what we experince on Earth. We would think that Mercury would be a hotter planet due to the fact that it is closer to the Sun but it turns out it's not.\n\nEven though Venus is a hard planet to study scientist haven't given up yet. They are willing to do everything that is possible in order to find out more about it, scientist still want to visit the planet. Scientists say that Venus at one point was the most Earth-like planet in our solar system, it probably had Oceans on it, Valleys and even mountains. Scientists are still developing new technology to send humans up into Venus so they can study it and find out more about the planet. They have even thought about designing something that allows astronauts to float on Venus so they dont have to be on Venus, that way they wont get burned.\n\nIn Conclusion, more discoveries can be made in order to figure out how we can live on other planets and many more discoveries for Venus can be made. Many things are still being tested in order for us to find out more about our planet. Scientist aren't going to give up until they get some clear shots, there may be some difficulties during the process but it will totally be worth it. Nasa is working on other approaches to study Venus, some simplified eletronics have been made to make it easier to study Venus. These eletronics will be easy to use so scientist can make further discoveries but also study the planet without getting hurt.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If i was a scientist at NASA i would show the world that there was no aliens on mars just because the face was created by huge rocks. If there was a alien on mars the scientist would reported to the world. The huge rocks on mars made the human face and the nose, eyes, mouth.\n\nAfter a few years past by the face on mars became really big by having the on books, magazines, radio, talk shows, grocery stores also. NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization. Some scientist belived that the face was an alien artifact. On April 5, 1998, when mars surveyor they flew over to cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his camera team snapped pictures ten times faster. Sharper than the original viking photos. There were thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting for the pictures when they first appeared on JPL web site revealing natural landform. No aliens monument after all. This is why the face on mars was a natural landform over all.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recently, the number of people who take nutritious food and do physical activity is increasing. In this essay, I will explain why they motivated and suggest solutions to push ahead with this trend.\r\n\r\nOne of the possible reasons for this trend is that accurate health information became easier than ever before. With the development of technology, people can obtain plenty of information, such as the relevance between good health and lifestyle. For example, on the internet, people can find articles about obesity and depression, which are caused by the excessive intake of junk food and a lack of work out. Besides, many articles provide how to cook nutritional meals. Easily access to fitness and cuisine information led people to reconsider their eating and workout habits, thus, more people tend to eat healthier and doing physical activity on daily basis to avoid getting illnesses.\r\n\r\nBy adding the opportunity of learning about cooking and exercise, the number of people who follow this trend will more increase and encourage them to continue for a long time. Experts like registered dietitians and sports instructors can teach an effective way and new methods that most people would not know. For instance, the city where I live has well-reputed yoga lessons for its convenience, which do different forms from the past ones. Citizens can join that whenever they want and will never get bored since every lesson varies. Therefore, setting an affordable environment that includes beneficial advice will encourage more people to consume balanced meals and doing work out.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, much health information led people to eat nutritious meals and doing physical activity daily. In my opinion, offering an opportunity which people can learn about cooking and exercising without hesitation will propel them even more.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "No, we should not have driverless cars!!! I am against having driverlesss cars riding around. You would think that most of the people would rather drive a car then to be getting rode around. There could also be alot of probems later on that could go wrong with a driverless car. Personal i wouldnt want to own a driverless car in my future.\n\nMaybe just one day or night you just want to go take a ride in your car to clean your head go where ever you want to go, with a driverless car there could be some issues with that. With a driverless car they will have a speed limit that they can go.The car can only drive 25 mph maybe that day you want to drive fast but you cant because it only goes that fast driverless, or even just chill and curze down the street, but with the car you cant becasue its programed to go that speed. In a driverless car its says that u will have to stay alert because something could possibly happen. If im going to spend my money on a driverless car i would want to just be able to kick back and not have to worry about grabbing the wheel or making a quick stop. Also with the driverless car if u want to make a quick run to the store or gas station you have to set the gps to that place and then go when you can just go drive there yourself.\n\nNow, what if i want to go to California,Nevada or Flordia and I cant because these cars are illegal im those places. I should be able to go where i want in my car with no issues. As they say in the passage laws are changing everyday and a driverless car could end up not being up to the law and that could give me ticket having to spend more money. If my driverless car and I get into a accient is it my falut or is the comapny who built it falut. This are questions i need to know.\n\nEveryone dream when they are a child is to learn how to drive and then get their dream car. If we have driverless cars the fun of driving and having your won isn't going to be the same. I say no i am agaisnt have \"driverless\" cars and i wouldnt even want to share the streets with them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the contemporary days a lot of cities experiencing dramatic growth. And that’s why authorities struggled with lack of residential land where builders can construct fresh accommodation. It is agreed that only government can eliminate this issue. This essay outline actions that can be taken in order to fix it up.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nIt is believed that officials could influence on a a lot of process in the cities. And one of them is encouraging people to move countryside. For instance, in year 2001 town Bakersfield in USA was experiencing dramatic growth. Subsequently,it invoked some unpleasant consequences. So local authorities decided to adjust it by encouraging people to move in a villages. They started used all possible methods to involve people. And one of them is using social media to inform people as for all benefits living in village. Additionally,they came up with idea to provides convenient way to get job from village. In results,near 15 percentage of local population moved countries.\r\n\r\nReturning again to job question, governments of the country should provide more vacancy suggestions in the rural areas, as more than 90 percentage of people moved to metropolis just for getting a well-paid job. It would be nice to mention latest poll conducted by authorities of the Maharashtra province demonstrated that near 35 percentage of youths don’t wanna live in a large city,but forced to do that, due to luck of job suggestions. \r\n\r\nSo, If job opportunities increased,people would be more willing to move countryside.\r\n\r\nHowever ,it should be mentioned, that citizens and builders also play an important role in solving this problem. They could help authorities by doing at least something like invest more in building skyscrapers and flats. Apartment usually require less space on the land, whereas, bungalows require it more. \r\n\r\nTo summarise, there are some possible ways to deal with lack of housing is encouraging people to move countryside and provides more job opportunities there. Therefore, shortage of housing can’t be completed solved by citizens ,but for government. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that after moving some people in villages, housing shortage will be adjusted", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, many children involved in different types of jobs to have some kind of financial assurance for themselves. However, whether this is good for their development and personality is a controversial issue. I personally believe that paid works is harmful for children for several reasons.It is said that children gain valuable experience in the work place. This may be true. However, I would argue that children are mainly employed in jobs that require manual work and are poorly paid. The recent statistics reveal the common tasks that children are assigned to are washing dishes, mopping floors or serving food in restaurants. Meanwhile, this kind of jobs actually provide children with necessary and useful skills to apply in their future .This brings me to the second point. Defenders of child labour that it is an effective method of learning. The point is children should be able to apply knowledge taught to them in a real life working environment. Although this is undoubtedly true, it also means that children may neglect the classroom study and even fail the class. The worst thing is yet to come. They may become so preoccupied with the benefits ahead of them such as small salary that they may leave school.Finally, supporters say that it helps them to build responsibility in the family. They will understand how it is difficult to earn money and therefore have compassion for their parents. This is true to a certain extent, but may have a totally adverse effect on children. As children can make money at an early age, they would feel that it is appropriate to spend it on luxury things.In conclusion, I think that parents should take measures to restrict their child from work, otherwise it would have negative consequences to their future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Throughout the years, it has been known that competitive sports can play an important role in an adolescent's life. Although many believe such activities have a positive impact on a teenager's development and education, others are of the opposite opinion. From my point of view, playing a sport when young can be beneficial, as it creates healthy habits. This essay will discuss both the positive and negative sides sports can have on a teenager's life as well as brush over my opinion. \r\n\r\nFirstly, the majority of parents and teachers look at competitive sports as a beneficial activity for their children. For one, playing a sport promotes physical and psychological well-being to humans who are progressively developing, it reduces stress and improves focus when in or out of class. In addition, competition can also create the willpower of performing better academically since, in order to win, people are always looking for ways to outdo themselves. In my point of view, playing sports during your teenage years is one of the best decisions a person can make, not only because it helps them in their present lives, but because it can bring so many positive habits in the future, such as eating healthy foods or doing exercises regularly. \r\n\r\nNevertheless, as beneficial as competitive sports can be, some people might argue that they have more negative impacts on a teenager's life than positive ones. Exposure to too much competition can result in problems such as not knowing how to lose and connecting those losses with the feeling of failing, which causes a larger problem which is self-doubt. For many people, for instance, being a team player might be fun and rewarding, as for others, it can be draining, causing stress and comparison between them and the other team members. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, as many negative effects as a competitive sport can bring in a teenager's development and education, the positives outweigh the negatives when realising what competition can do to one's life, building so much resilience.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State building faced many obstacles building mooring mast airships dock top building The stress preasure thousand foot dirigible docked top building great buildings original frame work support reinforce strengthen framework base preasure would transmitted buildings foundation Another obstacle dirigibles outside filled hydrogen instead helium Hydrogen much flamible hydrogen dirigibles like German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire nt want happen New york s population The final obstacle violent shifting air currents building Even front dirigible mast tied mooring mast back would swivel around mooring mast The many unseen obstacles mooring mast made unpracticle docking point dirigibles In s airplanes dirigibles disappeared ticketing bagging rooms turned tourist site seers areas", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of this technology to read students emotional expressions is not valuable. The software may be incorrect on how a studnet is feeling or it may be a intrution of personal space/information. The software may stop emotional communication for sure and or communication period.\n\nThe software may not always be accuate and be wrong on some parts. As the text states in paragraph 1. \"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\". The way it gives percentages on how someone is feeling doesnt always mean thats what they're really feeling. Also when a software can recognize how a student is feeling it's sometimes a matter of invading personal information and/or thoughts. As the texts states in paragraph 5,\" For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\" connecting to \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\", in paragraph 6. If a student is having issues such as feeling sad or mad about something they should be able to come to a teacher or adult themselves rather than a computer pointing it out. The same technology may be a threat for people to actually connect on a emotional level and nonverbal at all. In paragraph 6, it states, \"The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive-for video games or video surgery.\" connecting to \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,\".\n\nThe creators of the software inlcuded some good examples on why we would need this. In paragraph 1 it states, \"For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on their face. Of course most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc.\". It is true some of us would have trouble reading someone if they were depressed or unhappy. It would be good to have that reassurance to make sure they are okay and prevent something from happening to them. The software would help students in the classroom when they are having trouble undertsading something and the teaher is not around. As in paragraph 6 states, \"A classroom computer could recogize when a student is becoming confused or bored.. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"\n\nOverall I feel the software is not a very good idea, due to lack of communication and accuracy. Although it has some good values in it, it wouldnt be a good way for humans to tell their emotions and communication through one another.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author creates warm happy welcoming feeling describing friends family always visiting happy family time The author Narciso Rodriguez never mentions bad times shows kind everyone This quote memoir proves Narciso creating good mood throughout story The innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed formed backdrop life warm home This quote think shows well author creating happy mood memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay cyclist greatly affected features setting Under conditions could barely survive make destination It clear features setting affecting states The speed limit mph I waterdepleting mph Sometimes life cruel In efforts slowly getting weaker sign sees makes feel worse seems mocking He also states Id read sucking stones helps take mind thirst allowing spit left circulate With luck Id hit bump ledge one throat This shows ready give completely wouldnt care died From authors tone clear features setting affect cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever thought of how the Facial Action Coding System could be beneficial in your everyday life? In a painting of Mona Lisa this sofware is very helpful at describing emotions. This technology can help computers and humans to communicate better. \"At least according to some new computer software that can recognize emotions. The softwarre is the latest innovation from Prof. Thomas Huang, of the Beckman Institiute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois, working in collaboration with Prof. Nicu Sebe of the University of Amsterdam. Dr. Huang and his colleague are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate.\" This invention can make a difference in our everyday lives.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System can be very effective on teachers in a classroom. Some teachers might have a hard time understanding if the student is grasping onto the content or not. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Dr. Huang predicts. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instrector. The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive.\" This could dramatically help the teachers and students become more successful. It can help identify emotions that a person is feeling, without verbally having to say what is going on.\n\nThis is a valuable technology that can greatly impact the world. Identifying specific emotions for what a person is feeling can do a great deal of help. \"According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only express emotions, but also may even help produce them.\" This invention will help make life a lot easier for a lot of people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think you should join the \"Seagoing Cowboys\" because you can help others when there is a war and give them food. Luke signed up a program called the \"Seagoing Cowboys\". What they did was is take care of horses,young cows, and mules.\n\nLuke wanted to help those in need so he signed up. He said, \"Besides helping people, I had to see the side benefit of seeing Europe and China, but seeing Acropolis in Greece was special.\" He didn't just want to help people he wanted the chance to see all those places he could see and when he join in the Seagoing Cowboys he had the chance. He maybe thought it was all just helping people but he had the chance to see different places he had never been to. He also took care of the animals. He said they had to be fed and they kept him busy so he never had time to sit around and do nothing!\n\nThere you have it all the good things about joining in the Seagoing Cowboys. Well hopefully you woud want to join the Seagoing Cowboys!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinion I feel like it would be helpful to the staff at school. If there were computers that could read emotional expressions then there would be a lot of people caring for each other, and there would also be people helping each other out with certin things.\n\nI am for having technology that can read students' emotions because their would be a way for people to help them out and try to help them through the tuff times that they may or may not be having. In the article the author says that the computer can tell what kind of emotion a person is feeling even when they're faking a smile. In the article the author also states that there are six basic emotions: happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness, and they have associated each of the emotions to characteristic movement of facial muscles.\n\nIn the article it gives an example of web ads and when they appear on the screen if some one smiles then there would be a smiliar ad to it, but if some one frowned the the ad after that one would be different. The article also states the Dr. Huang predicts that \"a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, so it then would try to modify the lesson like an effective human instructor.\" Another thing that is stated in the article is that you can try to \"encode\" different emotions while looking in a mirror, or by having a friend look at your emotional expression and they could try to see what emotions your feeling.\n\nIn conclusion I feel like if every school had the technology to read emotional expressions of students, then it would show a lot of different ways people can help some one.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "At one left would patient Being patient means understanding tolerate Somebody thats patient experiences difficulties without complaining There one life I patient Yay Yag My mom taking friends I I called many friends told wanted go Meanwhile packed water bottles hopped We looking window OMG Look big roller coasters One friends shouted There first ride I saw The highest fastest roller coaster well lasted seconds So talking decided go Wow The line huge We said I shouted ok I heard awesome ride lets patient Meanwhile waited waited finally next people ride We went ride sudden ride start didnt know lasted seconds We waited two hours worth In conclusion I really think patient good thing life even takes hours I learned much going patient matter always need patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One of the biggest problems facing all over the world today is that too much food is wasted. Some reasons that account for this trend can be identified, but there are some steps to be taken to change the situation. \r\n\r\n Initially, there are various reasons why food is being wasted in manifold areas of the world. The first reason is that in developed countries people buy food items more than their needs. For instance, in each meal, they cook a lot so that they are unable to eat it all, which makes food be leftover. Beside that reason, another factor is that people do not have preservation methods due to a lack of technology development especially in undeveloped countries. For example, in India it is not affordable to buy a fridge or freezer or use preservatives for their food, which can lead food to be easily perishable. \r\n\r\n Despite some reasons mentioned above, there are several possible solutions that can be taken to mitigate this problem. Firstly, the government should raise awareness for citizens to buy and cook just enough to eat. They just have to buy and cook only for one meal to avoid wasting food and money. By contrast, in undeveloped countries, they should invest more money in farming, transportation and preservation methods. For example, they can receive sponsorship and investment from foreign countries to have modern technologies and improvements. As a consequence they can facilitate the traffic development to reduce the time to delivery, which might minimize the possibility of food spoiling. \r\n\r\n Given the points raised above, wasted food is indeed a prevalent problem, but there are solutions that are relatively doable. Being aware of this problem is not enough, people must also do their part to use food economically.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Since World War II we have been heavily dependent on the modern day transpotation: the car. Some say the car is an innovative and convienent method of transportation, while others say that it will be the end of the environment. As the evidence indicates, there are advantages to limiting car usage.\n\nDissenters of the idea claim to say that limiting car usage will negatively impact the car industry, but it doesn't. Limiting car usage doesn't mean that people will have to stop buying cars; it simply means that they will have to find a different method of transporation. Source 2 says that in Paris on certain days motorist, who had an odd or even license plate number, had to leave their cars at home and find an alternative method of transportation. Does the evidence demonstrate an impact to car companies? Did they have a financial deficit due to their lack of buyers? The answer is simple: no, because they didn't ban the use of cars. Also, car companies can well benefit from places that limit car usage but allow hybrid cars; this allows for an increase in revenue. Most car companies in today's society model hybrid cars that run on primarily electricity and gas. In Paris, they made exceptions \"for plug-in cars, hybrids, and cars carrying three or more passengers (Source 2)\". These exceptions actually promote the buying of hybrid cars! This will boost the economic profit of the car companies, not damage it. Limiting car usage does not affect car companies, but instead supports it.\n\nThe limitation of car usage betters the environment. Cars emit greenhouse gases in the atmosphere faster than they can be removed. This causes health problems in living organisms and pollution of ecosystems. Cars are liable for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe and 50 percent in areas in the U.S. as Source 1 states. People are playing with the balance of nature and if its not fixed then humans are as good as dead; this is why the implementation of limiting car usage benefits people. The effects of this can be seen in Bogota, Colombia, whose goal is to reduce smog and promote alternative transporation (Source 3), and Paris, where intense smog covered the enitre city: \"The smog rivaled Beijing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world.(Source 2)\" The source explains that cold nights and warm days trapped in car emissions and after a few days of reducing car usage the air cleared up. This shows the effectiveness of the limiations of car usage.\n\nThe limiting of cars also boosts community wellness. The people who experienced this regulation had positive views on the matter and even on rainy days they participated! Bogota, Colombia has gone into its third year of banning cars and the turnouts of the pariticipation were large, with two other Colombian cities joining and municipal authorities from other countries to view the event (Source 3). The evidence show that limiting cars wasn't opposed by the people, in fact, other countries were wanting to get in on the action. This limiting of car usage really cuts down on traffic congestion and new community projects have been established to ease the transition to alternative transportation. Heidrun Walter, mentioned in Source 1, syas that when she had her car she always tense and stressed and is happy with the change. The source also mentions that the \"swish of bicycles and the chatter of wandering children drown out the occasional distant motor (Source 1).\" This shows that the limitation of car usage greatly enchances the wellness of the community and promotes a safe and stress-free environment for the people.\n\nIn summation, the limitation of car usage doesn't negatively impact car companies, but instead increases hybrid car sale revenue, echances community wellness, betters the environment. The things that can be accomplished with this regulation only has benefits for everyone. With this in mind, why not implement this ideal in order to better the lives of not only this generation but the future leaders of the world?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days recycling turned into a crucial parameter in favor of keeping the environment out of any harm, so, we should start to teach this lifestyle to our children from the very beginning.\r\n\r\nWhilst some people claim that this should be part of the school’s program, I have an opposite opinion with them and I believe that this should be part of the child upbringing process in the home.\r\n\r\nWith regard to the Educational programs in school and how important or efficient are they, some people put this argument forward that we should teach recycling to our children in schools. Firstly, they believe \r\n\r\nchildren should be trained under the supervision of specialists and definitely, the most qualified teachers could found in the schools more than any place. Along with, it believed by some that the best outcome will have occupied in Educational environment. As result, when these two elements get along with each other; the best education will come to our sons and daughters.\r\n\r\nHowever, I don’t believe these arguments stand up to scrutiny.\r\n\r\nTo begin, it has been shown in many cases and experiments that the schools haven’t that much Effectiveness that we thought, despite, we should put this in mind that children may have not the same understanding about recycling and environmental threats as we do, so, it is a better idea to teach this concept to them in a safer place like home and with hands of parents; the most trusted persons for children. Hence, they will learn about this unfamiliar concept and accept it more easily.\r\n\r\nAll in all, although some people think children should learn about these staff in schools, conversely, I strongly believe that is better for them to get taught at home as a part of the upbringing process.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Home The Blueprints Our Lives Narciso Rodriguez mood created author greatful happy Greatful mood memoir greatful many things First greatful parents always loved I always greatful parents love sacrifice I ve often told much courageous thing I could ever done para In memoir makes mood greatful talks greatful friends culture like I said parents It warmth kitchen humble house Cuban feast always filled air scent music life love greatful home lives lives It I learned real definition family And I never forget house gracious neighborhood many things I learned love para He wrote greatful everything So mood memoir greatful happy", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A group of the public argues that young children should serve a community free of cost in their leisure time, which helps to carry out fruitful results for both of them. I strongly support that view of people because doing social tasks will not only help teenagers and chance to explore skills but also provides helping hands to people.\r\n\r\nBeing engaged in social work gives mental and physical satisfaction to juveniles. In their busy lifestyle, they don’t have time for extra curriculum activities and get more depressed. But working on community task give a chance to them to divert their energy in a good way which helps in reducing their depression. For example :- a study carried out by a university in the United States in which get results that adolescents who serve in the community for 10 hours are less likely to feel depressed as compared to those who do not volunteer.\r\n\r\nAdditionally, doing volunteer work with youngsters gives aid to society for a better living environment. Many organizations efforts to the improvements of structure and environmental conditions of society which leads people to obtain a superior quality of living style. To illustrate :-India a campaign was started by the Indian Prime Minister with unpaid workers in which they sweep roads and planted herbaceous trees on the sides of roads to overcome air pollution which ultimately benefits the local crowd.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I think, volunteer job is two-sided benefits, so stepping forward for the public effort by juveniles to utilize their energy in a positive direction and individuals get welfare in society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Computers amazing advantage use modern day age They easy learn use connect old friends even learn going online school college offer Computers amazing advancement use one Who nt like computers They easy learn use variety forms Almost every college student computer laptop They could never used one learned easy Most computers come already installed necessary programs including form virus protection software simple software Moving hard leave place many friends place new Computers make much easier letting connect without wait mail writing letters There email facebook myspace let chat old friends new friends even parents Some people say things dangerous start talking people nt know People keep coming even ways stay connected nt miss opportunity These people smart figured way school online This helpful somebody injured trying get another degree get better job People get assignments class takes one two months People get job enjoy nature still day open busy Sure people nt get enjoy campus price gasoline days s worth So nt person sitting around nothing buy computer stay touch technology Remember computers easy use stay connected friends go school This technology help hurt", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It shows give ends almost way began shows people stay attached past reasons I believe author concludes story paragraph It shows people give even though failed test try later pass Also story ends way begins taking test getting ready good way writing One last thing shows people shouldnt become attached past look one thing reminds fall apart takes test see look familiar flowers without falling apart", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some features like change landscape affected cyclist Differing flat land miniture hills highways kind hard cope especially considering dehydrated water", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Ok, I am posititive that \"the Face\" wasn't created by aliens, \"the Face\" is an natural landform. The picture may resemble and Egytian Pharoah but, doesn't mean that \"the Face\" was created by aliens. \" As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times larger than the pixel size\" quoted Garvin. \" So, if there were objects in this picture tat look like airplanes, Egyptian-style pyramids, etc\" quoted Garvin. We took the photo a total of three times, one in 1976,1998, and oone in 2001. as you can see the resolution of the photo got better. Its just a landform, stop with the contraversy and theries of what you guys think it is. NASA has done research for many years on \"the Face\" I think they will know what the object is by now. What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or messa - landforms \"common\" around the American West. Which means the \"Face\" is just a landform that just so happens to look like a face resembling an Egytian Pharoah.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood memoir I believe grateful enspioring Narciso s parents imigrants Cuba live rasict community working able support kids They great parents Narciso provide basic nacessidies They feed buy clothes Narciso kind thankful trouble mother father go also considerate try help need The mood grateful Narciso feels toworrds parents", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper article concern It become quite aware problem face media today Information individuals seek evolved still changing rapid pace Technology new information vast extremely difficult censor Two weeks ago took year old niece local public library find book Once automatic doors library opened darted straight movie section I couldnt help laugh I knew thats truly wanted go library When asked movie looking turned cover reservation said I ca nt let young niece watch I thought silently Then realized easy child access adult information I agree statement degree I believe started taking certian information away completly would find ignorant But let children future world vonerable adult information greatly effected teens violent video games explicit magazines For example niece able check book library books like famous book intitled CAPS means struggle german My year old niece read quite well impressionable many young children Public media outlets need heavily monitored includes public libraries retail stores internet I believe books censored content much like movies This makes distibutor left responsible consumer aware content effect", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People these days have different views about what students should do after they leave school. While many people claim that school leavers should secure a job, I would claim that it is better for them to pursue universities or colleges.\n\nOn the one hand, for those who want to get a job straight after high school, they believe that this is beneficial for some reasons. Firstly, since they take part in workforce early, they can make money and save a large amount of money which enable them to afford their interest in travelling or shopping. In fact, they can get payment each month and do not have to waste money on tuition fee or school materials. Secondly, this can be seen as an opportunity for the young to accumulate practical experience and useful skills. This can be explained by the face that curriculums in accademic institution include many subjects which might not concentrate on the skills meeting the demand of the jobs. Therefore, getting involve in the real workforce can be a good ways to develop these skills. \n\nOn the other hand, I believe that the school leavers should attend higher school as it is the best way to success in their future career. First of all, most of the top careers which receive admiration from the public require accademic qualifications as an essential condition to be hired. For example, to become a doctor of a layer, individuals are forced to study 4-6 years in universities otherwise their appication would be not meet the requirement of the occupation. In addition, those who graduate from accademic institution have a better chance to get high salary jobs. That is because they are classified in qualified employees who is taught to think and solve problem logically. Certaintly, the employers have more interest in people with university's degree than school leavers and are more likely to be willing to pay more for them. \n\nIn conclusion, while many people believe peole should get a job straight after school, I would argue that university can give them a better future in their career.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The different settings essay writing affect cyclist old hopeless look I think cyclist stops first town hes looking around expecting find quaint bustling little place instead finds abandoned decimated old houses And picture situation imagine discouraging almost frightening must As cyclist continues miles hes becoming slowly dehydrated finally sees building At first thinks building mirage wrong situation worse old juice factory right point kind get feeling every things turning theres hope left But finds fishing camp entire perspective things changes feels thankful saved", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, global-warming and environmental problems are big consarn and day by day it is increasing and as a result, many part of world's temperature is rising, rain is getting less and air and water are getting polluted. Some people believes that by increasing the cost of fuel for cars and other private vehicles will help to fight with this environmental issues. I am disagree with this statement.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, increasing fuel cost will not solve the environmental problems, but it will create unbalance in society. People who have enough money they can still afford the costly fuel and roam anywhere they want. On other hand, people with low income will be deeply effected because this increases their overhead in monthly expenses. For example, rich people already buying the costly cars which are heigh fuel consumption, so they already afford car and fuel. On opposite site, average people chose fuel economic car to save fuel and it's cost.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, environmental problems not just cause by the fuel but there are many other elements also play a part in this. like chemical industry, their by-products pollute the water and many other industry burn coal which also effect to the environment. Instead of increase the fuel price, government and other organization should spread awareness of all this issue and plant more trees and save woods will be more effective.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, If increase in fuel price will create unbalance in society which only effect to average people and rich people still afford it. Though, environmental issues not just cause by fuel and there are many other factors responsible as well and awareness should be spread about it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "judgment comes expirience expirience comes bad judgement qouted uncle s dad Computers nt around long public public little experience Therefore public also lacks judgement using computers detrimental effects starting show Computers caused damage people To begin computers issue people In studies spend time NUM hours wearing glasses Because bad effects screen eyes Furthermore computer games made addicting causes sit front computer instead excercising This one biggest causes obesity My little brother used addicted flying game sat front hours every day started get fat As soon stopped playing going outside immediatly started lose fat Therefore people need move around instead sitting front computer To continue second argument detrimental effects computers enviroment First computers need electricity run That electricity comes power plants Over powerplants coal petroleum natural gas based When people turn computer bored wastes electricity nt need used Furthermore scientists suspect humans major cause global warming It common sense powerplants burn respective fuels create electricity In words definite connection computers global warming Also powerplants release pollutants air eventually cause acid rain To end last argument people s skills In school survey used computers hours per day nt know cook even light match There definite connection two people put something microwave eat able go back computers fast possible The matches lit parents light fires candles But happens natural disaster strikes like How able fend The way cook would fire There would nt microwaves cook canned food Furthermore would able even start fire without light match Evidently excessive computer use could detrimental effects natural disaster even adults need stop Do want thought Should enviroment home suffer bored people How handle major natural disaster In conclusion people spending much time computers need stop People becoming environment losing important life skills We need come together cooperate keep people healthy retain life skills importantly ssave one beautiful", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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