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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir like mellowish mood Almost like fun loving feeling The author literally put memoir I read Paragraph two used parentheses several times within text The parentheses given author s look reality Which helped create calm mellow feel Over mood fairley simple fun In last sentence stated author said I never forget parents turned simple house home It basically described family much made best The last sentence made whole memoir calm mellowish feel In conclusion author memoir created mellow feeling throughout whole memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the the face on Mars was created by aliens is crazy. We still have not found these creaturs yet. I believe it is another folk tale.\n\nOver the tears we have been sending rovers to the planet mars. I would of think that if real aliens made the face of mars that we should of found them or their homes already. Besides I\n\nthink aliens would be smart enough to build something. What kind of tools would make the face that is on Mars.\n\nIn 1976 we had saw the the \"unmaking the face of mars \" for the first time thanks to vinking1. In 1998 we saw the face a little bit better than befotre. Since 2001 we have seen the face much better the face has changed over the years. So that would mean that something\n\nor someone had to be still building this thing. All planets do something that we call nature. What if Mars is still making its world?\n\nWhen NASA found out aboust this face on Mars, the news hit everywhere. I think about the the aliens building this face on Mars is just another imaganary think that people would use to make a movie. Everyone needs to talk about somethink or make somethink to get money. Brining some fake story wuold sure do the trick. Some produsers don't even care about whats happening in outer space. All they want is the money.\n\nIn conclusion I think that is crazy that aliens would make the fcae of Mars. They would be stil here if they did. Also, the red planet's face has change over the years. Finally, NASA could be just trying to get attention. I can tell you one think, it's not working.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Emotions are hard to read. You think you know what someone is feeling by their facial expression. Just take the Mona Lisa for example. What precise emotions is the woman trying to potray? That is why Doctor Thomas Huang invented the new software that can detect emotions. The new software should be used in the classroom to determine the emotional expressions of students.\n\nDr. Huang said \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal.\" This means that trying to understand what someone's facial expression is saying or how they are feeling is hard to understand. \"Using video imagery, the new emotion-recogntion software tracks these facial movements.\" The software reads every muscle in the face and its position at the time of the expression. It then determines what the person is trying to communicate through their facial expression. This could be helpful in the classroom by seeing if someone is confused, happy, bored, or tiresome.\n\n\" 'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr. Huang predicts. 'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.' \" This says that the software is capable of keeping the students attentative to the lecture and can help a student understand the subject.\n\nThe software is also capable of spotting when someone is lying. \"To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a 'smiling' politician or celebrity isn't being truthful.\" The software could be used in the classroom in the following ways: to see if a student really understands a subject, can be used as a lie detector, or can be used if a teacher knows what they are teaching. Going back to the facial movements, a student could say they understand something but really they do not. Just listed above, the software will detect if the student is lying about that.\n\nWhile some would oppose this software, it would be beneficial to be used in the classroom. This would be the same thing as adding computers to schools. Many were against adding computers into schools, but now they are used every day by every student. The government could use this software on interrogation and in the courts; stated above, it could be used as a lie detector.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The diagram illustrates a comparsion of different sweet foods' acid level produced in a mouth through a measure of their pH values. The higher acidity produced is, the lower pH value is shown. Fruit sugar, cane sugar and honey are selected in this analysis.\nBy and large, the lowest level of pH value between sweet foods is cane sugar, dropping to 3.5 points in the first 5 minutes after it is eaten. And its pH value stays at points below 5.5 at which tooth decay occurs, of 25 minutes' duration. Honey remains its pH level above 5.5 points except the first 15 minutes.\nGoing into the detail in regard to their acidity produced by minutes, the pH value of cane sugar dramatically slumps in the first 5 minutes, reaching 3.5 points. Its pH value rises steadily to 5.5 points after 30 minutes gone, lasting 25 minutes under the level of tooth decay. Simultaneously, fruit sugar is the second lowest of pH value, falling to 4 points in the first 5 minutes. Followed by an increase to 5.5 points after 15 minutes later, the pH value of fruit sugar shows a further upward to 7 points after 35 minutues elapsed.\nIn contrary, there is a level off in the pH value of honey between the first 5 and 10 minutes, accounting for approixmate 4.8 points after dropping. After that, its pH value has a big jump to 7 points, the normal acid level in the mouth, after 25 minutes gone.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Mr. Senator,\n\nAlthough it seems irrelevant and unnessary, the Electoral College is very helpful and is needed more than people think. The Electoral College is helpful in three ways: one; there is a certainty of outcome in the votes, two; two types of states to persuade, and three; helpful to avoid run-off elctions.\n\nThe Electoral College helps keep the certainty of outcome in the votes.\n\n\"The Electoral College is widly regarded as an anachronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be [overruled] by declaring the canadidate who receives the most popular votes the winner.\"\n\nsource three:\n\nIn Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President by Richard A. Posner\n\nThe Elctoral College also gives the candidates a second chance at winning the election. Although someone won the popular vote portion of the election, they [the canidate] could still lose the election at the electoral portion. The electoral portion of the election is where the elected representatives go and vote for the president again and have a final deciding vote. Even with this prestegous process sometimes there are instenses were the \"underdog\" wins the electoral votes and\n\nNOT\n\nthe popular votes. Although these instenses are little to non-exsitent.\n\n\"But each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee (and that is rarely betrayed)... [;however,] it is entirely possible that the winer of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote. Yet that as happened very rarley. It happened in2000, when Gore had more popukar votes than Bush yet fewer electoral votes, but that was the first time since 1888.\"\n\nsource three:\n\nIn Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President by Richard A. Posner\n\nWith two types of states, swing states and big states, the candidate can get wrapped up in trying to get the most votes in one particular type of state,-typically big states- they dont notice how the oppisite type of state could benefit them in the long run.\n\n\"The winner take-all-method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates - as we saw in [2012's] election - to focus their campaign efforts on the toss-up states...\"\n\n\"They are likely to be the most thoughtful voters, on average (and for the further reason that they will recieve the most information and attention from the candidates0, and the most thoughtful voters should be the ones to decide the election.\"\n\nsource three:\n\nIn Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President by Richard A. Posner\n\nOn the other side of this arguement would be the big states (Texas, Califrnia, Florida, etc.) who usally vote the same party every election.\n\n\"The Electoral College restores some of the weight in the political balnce that large states (by population) lose by virtue of the mak-apportionmentof the Senate decreed in the Consitution...\"\n\n\"So, other things being equal, a large state gets more attention from presidential campiagns than a small state does...\"\n\nsource three:\n\nIn Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President by Richard A. Posner\n\nLastly, Th Electoral College helps aviod run-off elections.\n\n\"The Electoral College aviods the problem of elections in which no candidate recieves a mojority of the votes cast.\"\n\n\"There is a pressure for run-off elections when no candidate wins a mojority of the votes cast' that pressure, which would greatly complicate the presidential election process, is reduced by the Electoral College, which invariably produces a clear winner.\"\n\nsource three:\n\nIn Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President by Richard A. Posner\n\nIn conclusion, we need the Electoral College to help us with three things: one; provide a certainty of outcome in the votes, two; two types of states, and three; helpful to aviod run-off elctions. Prsonally, this is the only logical solution to our nation's voting system.\n\nSinceraly,\n\nA concerned citizen", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As a teen you wanted to drive. You wanted that freedom to go anywhere on your own. When we are young we dont relize the damage driving a car does to our world. It effects green house gasses, and C02 levels. In my opinion it also makes the human race lazier, or less athletic you could say. I'm a high school student, and to be honest I still want to be able to drive. But with limitation. I live about at most 3 miles from every place I need to go daily. Theres thift shops, Family Dollar and game stores within a mile of my home, and a 7-11 not much farther, Theres also a Naborhood Wall-Mart in 3 miles. The only place thats not in walking distance is school, and I just take the bus. My Mom daily drives to atleast one of these, I dissagree with that. Everytime I go walk with my 3 younger sisters, we go down nd have fun. While yes our feet hurt later, its still worth it.\n\n\"VAUBAN, Germany-Residents of this upscale community are suburban pioneer, going where few soccer moms or commutin executives have ever gone before: they have given up their cars.\" In Vauban any street parking is forbidden, along with driveway and garage parking. They are what you would call a \"car-free\" suburban area. While you can own a car, there are only two places to park on the edge of the development and it charges a rediculious fee to park there. Due to this 70% of Families there don't own a car. \"When I had a car I was allways tense. I'm much happier this way,\" Said Heidrun Walter a mother who moved their with her family. They got lots of positive feedback from families in the development.\n\nAre we Americans causing most of our issues with gasses from cars? Luckily no. \"Recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by.\" As said by Elisabeth Rosenthal, the writer of the passage \"The End of Car Culture\" which go's into whether car numbers are increasing or decreasing, and whats in the future for it. She says that it seems like America has gone down, and pasted the peak on cars. While you might counter, \"Thats just the economy effecting how everyone spends their money and cars werent at the top.\" But people who stopped because of the recession may have no reason to restart that habit.\n\nBiking, A healthy way to transport your self from one place to another. It keeps you fit, more active. Alot of issues with people today is if they are over weight or not. While I'm not saying that just because your thin that your healthy. If you dont exercise or eat well you aren't. To be Healthy and fit also doesnt mean body builder extremes. All I'm saying is as a person being healthy is easy, we just make it hard. When you see that donut instead of the carrot. or the couch instead of the bike. It seems like an ultimatum that our mind invents. When in reality we can have both. If everyone had to walk places it would make that mind oggling ultimatum easier. Forcing us to walk more instead of drive everwhere would make couch and donut time more aceptible.\n\nEveryone wants to drive, with the freedom of going anywhere. I know the feeling. But overall we over drive, even if the amount has lowered. It's no secret that it effects our town, our country, our world with C02 levels rising. I'm notsaying lets get rid of cars completely. But if everyonce in a while before you pick up your keys to go down to the near by 7-11, take a moment and set down your keys and walk.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is a common belief that the main target of the museums being enjoyable for the visitors, although other belief supports that they should engage to educate. I will briefly elaborate on both views.\nTo begin with, the museums are being visited by the millions of art fans in the modern life. The fans are spending their leisure time in order to observe the piece of arts and ruins. The major target is controversial whether they should be full of joy. For instance, Anatolian Museum, which is in my city, celebrates European Museum Day every 18th May. They ask for some artist and students to tell the stories. Therefore, both of the enjoyment and information is shown and reflected to the special day guests. Due to, if they learnt their cultural heritage, they would be aware of importance of all ages, all humanity. \nOn the other hand, some individuals have just merged to amuse in the museums. They do not care about history. However, they can adjust to the contemporary art galleries. When the people tend to the these types of activities, they can change to a better person who is indulgent, open-minded, intelligent. For instance, a local science-fiction conseptional ones are initiated in these days, particularly for the youth. Not only to join a part of the conventional museum, also modern galleries can be developed because the minority of the citizens is interested in only future based ones. Meanwhile, they can spend time both on amusement and learning.\nIn conclusion, even the museums cannot learned to the public about the past ages, they can enlighten about the future. The most significant thing is to be consciously and science. At the last words, the museums are one of the modern learning hubs in order to increase quality time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Having a driverless car can have positives and negatives about it. It could help people. It could detect accidents even when the driver isn't paying attention.\n\nSome positives are that there are some drunk drivers out there,but if there was a driverless car they dont have to drive the accident rate would be way down. Another positive is that the disable are able to depend on themselves more. Some negitvies are that the sensors could fail and cause an accident. Some people drive drunk causing accidents but if there was a driverless car then they dont have to drive. Another negitative is that when there is road work and the driver has to take over and he is too drunk to drive. The negitave outlook on the disable driving is that they are not able to drive and then there is and the sensors turn on then the can have an accident and it would be there fault not the manufactors. then there would be a courtcase. There are also cars that can do arrands for disabled Therefore the driverless cars can be a bad thing and a good thing.\n\nThere are some cars that can drive them selves but not completely. there are many things these cars can do.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The importance of punishment in juvenile crime has become an increasingly debatable topic in modern societies, with conflict views on whether children themselves or their parents should be punished. From my point of view, while parents play the pivotal role in moulding the development of young children, it seems still important for children themselves to be held responsibilities for their illegal behaviours.\r\n\r\nAdvocates for punishing parents point out the importance for parents to educate their offspring and the potential outcome of reducing the possibility for children to do anything illegal. The primary cause of this method is to give parents more responsibilities for their children’s behaviours. Parents, consequently, would teach their children about the basic laws in our community and ensure them forming a strong law-abiding consciousness. Meanwhile, whenever children intend to commit crimes, they would consider that it is their parents who will undertake the consequence. As a result, children may stop having illegal behaviours if they take care of their family members. \r\n\r\nHowever, only when disruptive children being punished will they learn the severe outcome of committing crimes. Foremost, different kinds of punishments play a deterrent role in educating young offenders about the importance of respecting the laws. During the process of being sentenced, for example, young criminals would understand the responsibility they need to take as a citizen in a community. While it sounds like a strict way to teach children, over the long run, it is beneficial to their personal developments. It would narrow the odds of re-offending and prevent children from embarking on a criminal path after them being liable for the illegal behaviours made by themselves. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although punishing parents may be helpful in family education, I firmly believe it is necessary to enforce children being punished when they have committed crimes. It is the most effective way to educate children from being responsible for their behaviours, trying to eliminate the possibility of re-offending.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The diagram indicates the development of two cutting tools (Tool A and Tool B) in the Stone Age, from a front view, side view and back view. Tool A is a tool of 1.4 million years ago, whereas, Tool B is a cutting tool of 0.8 million years ago.\nOverall, Toll A and B were bigger than 5 cm long, were made of stone and were used in the Stone Age as cutting tools. Tool A had a triangular form, whilst, Tool B had a more complex form which is similar to a pentagon.\nIn detail, the front view of Tool A seems rougher and with less sharpness than Tool B. Regarding the side view, the diagram shows that Tool A was wider than Tool B. Finally, the back view of Tool A shows that this device was thinner than Tool B's back view.\nTo sum it up, these two cutting tools were similar in material and length. However, Tool B seems that it was a more developed tool, which was thinner in the side view and with a more complex form in its front and back view than Tool A.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Home The Blueprints Our Lives written Narciso Rodriguez Narciso talks family made house home The mood sets throughout memoir love selflessness gratefullnes This memoir shows love paragraph Rodriguez reminisces countless extended family members came went often someone staying us temporarily able get back feet My parents always kept door open many people considered family knowing would us This shows love even nt blood related still consider family cared beyond belief This memoir also mood selflessness Rodriguez says moved selflessly give children better life even though meant leaving behind families friends careers country loved ended facing many hardships new country The last mood shown memoir gratefullness Narciso Rodriguez grateful cooking abilities love cuban music parents love sacrifice Especially grateful parents turned simple house home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The diagram illustrates that the process of corn which is formed into ethanol fuel with various kinds of steps from the starting point of Corn to the lasting point of Transporting.\nOverall, there are 3 main steps of processing from the beginning to the end. In the fourth section and sixth section, adding water and liquid is the most important part of these formed of fuel.\nOn the first step, the corn will be stored and milling to be reached to cooking. It will need 4 hours times to be cooked and water would be added into the cooking. On the second, Fermenting will be hold on (48 hours) after the cooking levels of speed. Then, the separating time has arrived, within this process the liquid is then added into the solids of separating product.\nIn the final steps, after (5 hours) time of mixing purifying ethanol will be get its point. Taking ethanol has stored after its purifying steps and then transporting in the surface area to get to ethanol fuel.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I remember time I patient I use able wait anythingone time I patient I asked mom game said tomorrow got game day I asked At one time I thought I patient person In whole family I patient I wait month I go cedar point You burn patient Some friends patient cant wait long I Some even ask teach patient I say thing I say everybody asked patient You born patient Its something learn years I could want three week without getting paid dad As people get older grow lesser That doesnt work everybody But sometime soon I know patient like everyone else I get older Who knows maybe somebody might patient I world", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One day stormy night gone wood shed get wood The wind thrashing trees coyotes distance barking moon I taking one piece time trying make sure pile would fall As I watched step lost footing small cylindrical log foot long hit head My brother came find taking long arrived body unconscious He took shop connected woodshed cold turned furnace keep warm In accidentally locked door outside locked shop As I woke faint sleep splitting headache could remember happening rain pounding side woodshed sitting next sad look face also shock well He told happened door getting locked would never get till morning I looked around trying find something get door could nt find anything My parents could hear us storm since asleep helpless matter tried So instead looking gloomy side decided make stories tell jokes pass time till morning As made game called found lot similar interests also laughed jokes laughed time seemed fly time warp three hours seemed getting hungry couple snacks pockets sat furnace ate told jokes friends parents laughing kept us cheered another three hours After started hear storm start leave sky like ghost leaving world next life We started making fun different movies re actors actresses I started talking big ears started cracking laughter uncontrollably came back big lips laughed hard could nt breath looked holes shop see morning dew grass birds chirping trees knew would nt long found As waited parents come find us looked said thank We knew saying nt meant times I tried get us shop pulling shop time spent together laughed It made us closer already also gave us memory laughter spent together instead night disaster horror We cherished memory ever since happened even though fight tiny inconsiderate things sometimes make fun know deep love", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To concern I heard people debate tell whether computers benefit us bad us I think computers great They allow us talk people world They give us ability learn things Lastly save us money Are nt things benefit us I think Please keep reading hear computers good First computers give us ability talk people world A lot family lives different thats I talk computer If move away friends family would nt want still keep intouch Well could chatting computer To keep ball rolling computers give us oppirtunity learn different things If I go CAPScom I could type anything I want get information Or I get answer question Are parent wants know child school You could go school website check grades class To wrap computers save us money everyday If needed look information project without computer would drive way library buy book But computer could get information easy convienience home In conclusion could see computers benefit us many ways Thay give us ability talk friends family around world They give us oppirtunity look information quick easy Lastly save us money everyday Thank reading letter I m sure persuaded think computers good thing", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The diagram illustrates the way how solar energy can be used as a source of household energy. Overall, the process consists of 5 stages, which implies the use of different devices, namely solar panels, the inverter, the electrical panel, the utility meter and the utility grid. The construction needs the sunlight to be converted into energy afterwards.\nFirst of all, solar panels on the roof of the house absorb the sun energy and transform it into DC current. Next, the DC current is converted into the AC current by going through an inverter, which can also be used as the generated electricity controller.\nIt is important to note that the electrical panel is used in several ways. First, it distributes the electricity to your home. Second, it is connected to the utility meter that flows back extra solar energy to the grid. Last but not least, if the amount of sunshine is not enough to supply the house with electricity, the utility grid, that is also wired to the panel, provides it in the usual way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The challenge of exploring venus,\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers if presents. A that true because is the closet planet to Earth why not try to see something new. And why not try to expolor the world we only live once. Plus wouldn't you every try to see the worldor go to different plant and see.\n\nMy reason to why see Venus is to see whats different. And one of them is the speeds and the challenging planet for humans to study. Also how the atmosphere of 97% carbon dioxide is in Venus. Venus is the hottest surface temperature. Its a plant most darnguse place. But why not spice your life a little bit.\n\nThe national Aeronautics and space Administration ( NASA). You might asking your self about NASA and what it has to do with it but I well tell you. NASA's see the possible solution to the hostile the conditions on the surface of Venus. It also see the conditions that if its survivable\n\nfor a humans to live there and vist it. And they also decied who get to go there with there equiment.\n\nThe value that Venus has. The insiht to be gained on the planet itself,curiosity will likely lead us into many equally. Limited the dangers and doubts , expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. And the travels on earth and beyond shouldn't limit anything if we are well to try our self. NASA works on and study many thing and could be studying for Venus and trying to see what in it to look for and try to find a way to achive it. NASA's is also a possible solution all the dangranto what we see.\n\nI feel like the author is right we should feel or acppect anything we didn't try just because someone see the negative and not the postvie to. And t there should be no limit to anything and fact if we are trying to see other place to live or to see why not try to go to the places close to us and see if we can start with that.My supports to all this paragraph 8 \" Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" this part made me go to this and not saying no to. We should acppect this challenge of exploring Venus and show them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There has been a huge argument about driverless cars on whether to make them and actually continue with it or not. According to the article \"Driverless cars are coming\", ideas involving driverless cars have been thought of since the 1950s, but the cars have not been fully completed. For that reason, driverless cars should not continue to be developed. Having a car that does the same things you could kind of defeats the purpose of you being in the car at all, there is no point. The cars can be extremely dangerous. If you want to be safe, that means giving up things you might think you want.\n\nDriverless cars should not continue being developed because there really is no point in have a car that can do all of the things you are able to do. It is said that driverless cars can operate fully on their own until certain times require otherwise, \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires\" (paragraph 7). These cars can basically be categorized as kind of useless. Why have a car that will basically only drive straight until needing to turn? If there is ever a real driverless car created, it should meet all of the basic requirement such as knowing how to turn properly.\n\nAnother reason why driverless cars should no longer be created is because they could go horribly wrong while someone is driving. While driving, the driver will want to be able to rely on a car that will take them where they need to go. Driverless cars could be deemed unable to do this. While someone is driving, they do not want their car to break down nor do they want it to explode or anything like the other new devices coming out. There are others also agree, \"Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. As a result, in most states ist is illegal even to test computer-driven cars\" (paragraph 9). Some states believe that by putting customers in the seats of these cars, they are putting them in serious danger. This is why some states have these driverlsess cars banned and illegal. If possible and badly wanted, everyone should follow along.\n\nDriverless cars might seem very nice until serious things end up happening. They might allow the driver to take a break from driving, let the driver relax and see things without just driving for a long period of time, but they will not guarantee ones safety. If safety is wanted by everyone then driverless cars should be given up on. Also, maybe people actually like driving, they would not want to give up the amazing opprotunity of driving to a computer when they can do it themselves. Driverless cars should wait to be given to the public until fully complete.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using the Facial Action Coding System to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. Just by looking at someone you could probably tell how they are feeling or thinking, and this software can do the same thing.\n\nThe article goes into great detail of how the system works. \"The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles.\" (Paragraph 3) The software is very advanced and able to calculate emotions just like we can through our eyes. The software has been tested on an array of different people so when if students volunteer to be the test subject for the system, it is valuable.\n\n\"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal, observes Dr. Huang, \"even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression\" (like not smiling as broadly.) Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements- in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa.\" (Paragraph 4) This helps show that some might believe that there is no way a computer can accurately determine emotions by facial movement, the software was designed to be as accurate as possible.\n\nIn conclusion, The Facial Action Coding System is valuable when reading the emotional expressions of students in a classroom. If students consent and want to try it out, there shouldn't be an issue with the system delivering accurate results, according to the article.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are separate ideas about the fundamental purpose of museums. Some people believe that museums should entertain young individuals by providing a joyful and entertainment environment. In contrast, others reckon the primary, and merely goal of museums should be educational approaches. In the essay below, I will examine both views and give my personal perspective.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there is no doubt that museums are a rich and invaluable treasure for education purposes. There are a wide variety of museums, such as archaeological museums, which is by far the most common and critical types of museums, historical, science and technology, and art and gallery museums. It means museums are a radical (original) and crucial source of knowledge and education. Furthermore, these pieces of art and treasures can provide accurate and reliable knowledge and experience visually. It is proven that any books or short video documentary cannot convey information such ways museums can. Because it enables visitors to roam around the museum and see, feel, and even read comprehensively regarding what has occurred in the previous eras in historical museums and what is happening in the extraordinary and admirable world of technologies in scientific ones.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, museums can be considered one of the most beneficial and instructive sorts of recreational activities. A number of marvellous and inspiring exhibitions in diverse subjects are held in museums worldwide, annually. Besides, these golden and valuable environments are the best and the most distinguished places to bring families and friends together to visit and spend such quality and joyful time together. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, although people attend museums with different aims, it can be educational and research achievements or spending quality and a good time as leisure and pastime activity. I am convinced that museums are the most appropriate atmosphere and caters for fulfilling both tendencies and demands.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The technology should be used in schools to read student emotions as the machine can tell more than one emotion at a time and could help against bullying in schools. The device can be used in schools to help against bullying and figure out when kids are stressed.\n\nThe device starts of by making a 3d model of the persons face which it gives all 44 major muscles for emotion. the device does the same things that people do the text says \"In fact we humans perform this same impressive calculation everyday.\" This shows that the device is not any diffrent from having another teacher in the classroom. The text also says\" Most of us would have trouble actully describing each facial trait.\" This shows that even thought humans do the same calculation the machine does it can explain and understand better.\n\nIn conclusion the device should be allowed in classroms to help against problems in the school. The device can be use to find stressed out studnets so teachers can help them before anything bad happens. Also it could help find sad students and figure out whos being bullied.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As I admit that the concept of a driverless vehicle is interesting and sounds very cool. Although, I can not agree that a driveless car would be safe for the public in any way shape or form. What if a problem comes up, and we need to take action ourselves? Would this car be expensive to produce? Do we really need a driveless car? This concept needs to be tossed away and we need to focus on the now instead of the later.\n\nSafety is a big concern we have in our country. how do we keep people safe? Driveless cars will only add to this concern. In paragraph 9 the author states \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?\" this statement sparks a concern for people. What if the technology fails? how will we be able to stop an accident in a car that drives it self? We need to think that if there is a mistake in the programming of the car or the production, that a person life is at stake. This is a good reason why these cars shouldn't be produced and that is for the risk that we could lose people to somehting we won't have control over.\n\nAnother safety hazard is the unthinkable accidents. Anything can happen, and when somehting occurs how will this driverless car respond? In paragrph 7, the author states that the car will alert the driver to take control if there are work zones or to move the car around an accident. Those are things we can expect to happen but what about the the things we may not expect? How will the car alert us if the unknown happens? If there was a construction mishap and a beam falls down to hit the road, the car wouldn't have enought time to alert us.\n\nWe wouldnt have the time to react to such an event quickly enough.\\\n\nWhen an accident happens, who will be at fault, the driver or the manufacturer? As a new way to get around comes out, we need to make laws for the driving speed limits and other things. If a driverless car came on to the scene, what would happen in a accident? who would be at blame for the accident. It's a serious question that needs to be answered. It cant be the drivers because they had no control. At the same time it can't be the one who made the car either, depending on the accident. This car isn't safe for us. How will we even decide the laws for driving if its a car that drives it's self?\n\nThe idea of a driveless car is interesting and it's futuristic. We may someday have the capablities to even construct a car that can. Even so, There is too much bad that can happen and to many questions on how will we even react to these situations. So the idea can wait and we can focus on much more important things inour society that need fixing today.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph shows saeng mature confident knowing take When says saeng vowed silently thought everything phrase almost like going start", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A computer can tell the Mona Lisa painting is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. A computer is a complex machine with almost everything in it. A computer stores information like what sites you have been on, documents, and more. It also lets you get information in less than five seconds, but is this a good idea to use in classrooms with students? By looking at the reading \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" we can see how computers are helpful when it comes to students' expressions; the teachers can change the lesson up to make it more exciting on the spot.\n\nThe software that can read people's emotions is the latest innovation from Professor Thomas Huang, who worked with Professor Nicu Sebe on this project. They are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate. \"The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an 'action unit.' Then Dr. Huang relies on the work of psychologists, such as Dr. Paul Eckman, creator of FACS (Facial Action Coding System). Eckman has classified six basic emotions-happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness-and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles.\" All of their research on human expressions went into this software. They noticed your frontalis pars lateralis muscle raises your eyebrows when you are surprised and your orbicularis oris tightens when you show anger. By using the software on the Mona Lisa painting, they predicted how she was feeling. She was more happy than angry according to the software, but by looking at the painting, a human can not tell if she is happy, angry,or sad. The computer can tell us how she is feeling by acknowledging her muscles in her face. This software can also tell us when a student is happy, confused or bored, and it will help the teacher adjust the lesson for the student. \"A classrom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confued or bored.' Dr. Huang predicts. 'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\". The technology can help a teacher and a student succeed together by telling each other how they are feeling even if they do not talk during class. Most students raise their hands to answers questions, but a student will not raise their hand to say \"I'm bored\". Some students do not want to tell the teacher they are confused either. Hence for the computer will automatically tell the teacher and they can explain the lesson better to the whole class because there are always multiple students who need extra help, but will not ask. There for, their software will make humans interact more by telling us how they are feeling.\n\nIn conclusion, the software Professor Thomas Huang and Professor Nicu Sebe will help read students' emotional expressions. The software has information on how a humans' muscles move when they are happy, sad, angry, fearful, surprised, confused, etc. By using it on the Mona Lisa, we can see that the software works and it will also help find problems in it. Dr. Huang predicts that the software will also help the teacher know when a student is confused or bored. The teacher can then adjust their lesson to make the student more attentive. This will help the teacher succeed in their job more, the lesson more informational, and the student more productive in their school work.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is considered by many people that government should responsible for the arts, while others argued that spending money on fundamental human rights such as health and education is a responsibility for the government to safeguard. In my opinion, the argument that it is better to spend money on education and healthcare is an argument that is both advantageous and disadvantage by many. The two views will be thoroughly discussed and analysed before drawing a reasoned conclusion.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there are many several benefits that government should spend a large sum of money on healthcare and education. Firstly, low-income families provide a chance to have an effective medical treatment such as the exorbitant cost of medicine. In addition, the authorities can maintain the health of the population by increasing a spot for checking their health problem. Secondly, children and university students is an important role in developing countries. If all children and university students, the most significant resource for the country's development, have more education opportunities, the country will be more competitive at an international level.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it is not only healthcare policy but also diets and a clean environment that government should spend money on.To start with, the government should play a role in an individual's diet. For instance, if citizens have a lack power to buy a healthy diet, they can provide health problems such as high cholesterol and high level of sugar. This mean government should pay attention to the human diet. Moreover, it will provide many benefits if the government spent the money on this such as free healthy meal \r\n\r\nTo summarize, education and healthcare is a significant part of human right that government should have a responsibility with.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Environment is the surrounding in which the lives of plants, animals and human beings survive and operates. Imperoving the environment is the duty of each and every living being living in the society, only governments and large companies together cannot make any difference. if all the parties get united as one anything can be done to improve the environment.\nThe writer disagrees with the statement than agrees. Environmental pollution, enviornmental degredations have shown a rapid increase in the past few years. The main reason to this disaster is that people have become more selfish and keep on passing the ball to other people saying that it is their responsibilty and not ours. Based on a recent research conducted by a group of Researchers in The United States of America, they have concluded that the most damages to the surrounding is caused by the activites done by humans.\nin writers opinion, there are few steps that can be taken to improve the environment. The main step is, supporting 3-R system, that is reduce, reuse and recycle. If we could promote this system, environment can be uplifted, because there will be less amount of wastage. Secondly, volunteer cleaning programms in the society can be brought up together with education systems to the community about how to keep your environment clean. These are the some of the main things that can be done to uplift the environment.\nIn conclusion, the habitat and the surroundings can be improved with the invovement of all the three parties, individuals, governments and large companies, if they work sensibly.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The future is a huge thing that manny people plan on having to be big. New technology, devices, transportation, homes, and many other things that make life easy will eventuually be turned into something more advanced. In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", the author presents both positive and negative aspects of driverless cars. As for my opinion, I believe these driverless cars should be made even with a few difficulties, these cars are possible to be driven as the future developes.\n\nAs the article begins, it asks, \"Can you imagine a time in the future when no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore?\" and when I think about that question, my response is, yes. I could imagine a time, the time of the future, where everything is advanced and especially the use of transportation. The article explains how others have been fascinated of driverless cars as well and quotes, \"Television and movies have long been fascinated with cars that could drive themselves.\"\n\nCar companies started to wondering on how to create driverless cars and many start off with computer driven cars or something simple. \"In the late 1950s, General Motors created a concept car that could run on a special test track. Engineers at Berkeley tried something similar, but they used magnets with alternating polarity. These smart-road systems worked surprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was simply too expensive to be practical.\" Not many were successful but that didn't stop other companies from trying.\n\nFor any type of car, safety was the most important thing and driverless cars will obviously have that as well. As cars began to advanced, so did their safety. Sensors were created, video cameras on the rearview mirror and many other kind of sensors. \"Sensors are nothing new, of course. In the 1980s, automakers used speed sensors at the wheel in the creation of antilock brakes. Within 10 years, those sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-contril skids or rollovers.\" The creation of new cars were in the minds of many engineers and even until now many more ideas are being brought, tested and invented. \"Further improvements in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on their own.\n\nDriverless cars are possible and clearly can be safe to use. Many are just waiting on the law for the approval. As soon as these cars are able to be used, the future is creeping its way up on huamanity. Many are being tested and it's only a matter of time for the future to happen and I could imagine how the world will be with driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether job applicants’ social skills are more important than their academic qualifications. In this essay, I will explain why social skills are more vital, compared with academic qualifications.\n\nThe merits of outstanding social skills are apparent. Firstly, communication is the key to career success in this day and age. This is mainly due to the fact that the 21st century is best characterised by constant interaction with different people, no matter the communication happens in person or online. Secondly, the ability to sell products or services is of paramount significance in any business – this requires strong social skills. For example, an employee with excellent social skills is able to have an impact in front of customers or clients; as a result, products or services can be perceived as high-value. Furthermore, employees with better social skills are generally more easy-going, which is very important to the workplace, including the employer. After all, as the saying goes, “Who you work with is as important as what you do.” – An enjoyable work environment needs socially skilful employees.\n\nIn contrast, some others may claim that academic qualifications are the pre-requisite of employment. Apparently, many positions require certain qualifications. However, in modern-day society, more and more employers have realised that whether employees can get the results that the business wants is the key to a business’ success. It can be seen that qualifications do not play a key role in this regard.\n\nHaving considered both views, I think employees’ social skills are of overriding importance for an organisation. Also, I would suggest employers consider job applicants’ social skills first, which I believe is soundly based on the above reasoning I have presented.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you really want people to know your emotions all the time?The \"Facial Action Coding System\" can detect how other people are feeling and if their are trying to hide their emotions. To be honest I really don't know howm I feel about that new technology. It can be a really good thing or it can be a really bad thing. I am stuck in in the middle of both. Its really just base off on how you just feeling and if you want people to know your emotion 24/7.\n\nHere is why I think this new technology is a good thing and a bad thing.\n\nYes it will be cool to know how your friend is feeling all the time and if their are feeling good or not. If their not you can ask them what is wrong and maybe be their for them if their are sad. It will come in handy. But what if your friend don't want you to know how their are feeling? What if thhey are going through stuff like depression because what is happening at home and they don't want you to know? Every time you come around they are fake smiling and laughing because they don't want you to think that their something wrong? But also, with this technology you can see how they feeling and they can get serious help. That where both parts come in at as if this tecnology is a good thing or bad. Their is a lot of people that hide their emotion because of their scared of what people going to think of them. What if sombody is sad and then a person come up to them and start making fun of them for no reason. All because of the technology nobody can never hide their emotion and it wil make a lot of people life worser. It will make people want to commit sucide . But you can stop that because of this new technology and can get them real help. That why I don't know I am with this new tecnology or not. It can make people life's better or worser.\n\nMy conclusion to this new technology is still unanswered. I don't know what to think about it. It is a very hard making decision. I really like the thought process of it but I just don't know how I feel about it. It can change a lot of people life's in a good or bad way just by their emotions because you can see how they feel.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Youth plays a vital role in the growth of many nations . Today most countries reported a dramatic increase in the younger generation compared to the older ones. This essay will discuss the causes that going to account in present and future for a country because of this development.\n\nFirst of all, the younger generation can make a lot of changes to a nation because they are really energetic and smart. To elaborate , if the younger population increases it will lead to economic growth in a nation. It is obvious that the outsourcing of foreign companies from various regions will become more interested to open new branches in the country to acquire more talented and creative employees so that they can enhance the productivity of the corporates. Therefore, corporates provide huge salary packages to gravitate younger minds to the institution for different vacancies . Hence, it will lead to changes in the infrastructure of the cities in the nation by accounting a significant variation in every sector such as transport , health and education , eventually , it owing to a sudden rise in economic growth.\n\nHowever, in the future , the current belief and cultures of the nations will innovate when the younger generation recognise other traditions are more exciting and fun than their current culture. Thereby, it will change the entire custom , laws and lifestyle of the country . Consequently , creating new beliefs and traditions in countries. For example, in India living together custom was seen as a crime in the early days , Whereas nowadays the law has completely changed by allowing citizens to do so. In ,addition unemployment could be major and could be a major problem for nations to concern more , because every individual will be highly educated and talented in every profession . Thereby , it will lead to huge completion in every work sector, as a result , major people.will be unemployed in the future.\n\nTo conclude, young people can be.a good asset for every nation because they are highly talented and energetic as result they can provide so many benefits to communities . However, in ,future it can have some drawbacks like diminishing.of old cultures and unemployment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Resons that you should be apart of this woud be to many. the good part about this is that you get to help and that this is a once and a lifetime opporunity. the good resons that you need to sign up for this is that you can spend time with your friends and play sports while the animals are gone.\n\nI think that they should come because this is a once and a lifetime oppourtunity. The reson that they shoud come is simple they should come because the sights that the town people will miss is astounding. Another reson is they should come because the feel of the free ness\n\nyou can have when you do this is magnifisant. The reson you should come is that you get to hang out with your friends like in paragraph 8 Luke said \"The cowboys played baseball and volly ball in the empty holds where animals had been housed.\n\nThe most exiting reson that you should come is the sights that you will see like in paragraph 5 when Luck says \" I had the side benifit of seeing Europe and china.\" \"This would be a great opportunity for a town boy like me\" he says. The time you spend on the boat will be awsome and the people you will meet and the places you will go will be spectacular.\n\nAnother reson would be that you get to help peopel and care for them after this awfull thing that has happned to them. The reson that you should sign up is that you can help them get the things that they need and to travle the world france,greece,china and Europe. The best reson of all that you should go on this journy is that you can get the oppourtunity to be apart of something to help the greater.\n\nThe resons that were listed were great ones that you should sign up and be apart of something good. To help these people would be a great thing to do and for yourself. To see all these sights would be over welming and breathtaking. The thrill of going to new places would be amazing and hanging out with your friends would be awsoe to. You can see the world and go places that you would never seen if you did not sign up for this. The best part is that you get to make trips as Luck says \"By the time he was discarged in 1947 he had already made 9 trips, the ost of any seagoing cowboy\" That would be good because Each shipment would be less than a month.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everyone has different emotions throuout the day. Knowing what someone is feeing is helpul. It can keep you or anyone else from saying or doing something wrong to a person. To have technology in a classroom is next level. When I think of technology being in a classroom to read studednts' mind's I would think of older students, maybe highschool, only because they have so much more going on in their lives, and have many more emotions. I do not think it is a valuable thing to have this technology in a classroom. Some students do not want others to know what they are feeling, teachers would not find it useful through out their day, and this expression reader can fail at any time.\n\nI myself do not like telling peers, or others, what I am feeling at the moment or that day. I walk through the hallways and sit in class not showing any expression to how my day is because I am there to learn. Besides myself I know there are so many students who feel the same. They just go to school do complete their tasks and go home. Many students do not have personal or close relationships with their teachers, so talking to them about a problem, if they are upset for example, that was not mentioned to the teacher would make the student feel uncomfortable.\n\nWhat are teachers going to use this for? Give less homework to a student because they are having a bad day according to the expression reader? When students are in a good mood and are happy these emotions fill the enviornment of the classroom with joy. All a teacher really can do is talk to a student about what could possibly be wrong or inform a more speacialized person to work with a student over issues.\n\nLastly, is this technology realy trustworthy? Maybe someday the computer may just stop working, or it may give false information about a student. The author talks about how the muscles move and signal to the computer which emotion a person is conveying, but if there are \"instructions for a face that looks happy\" then why not perfect the expressions and trick the computer.\n\nOverall I do not think that having a computer tell emotions in a classroom is valube, or even necessary. Having one of these computers in a doctors office sounds more efficient. In therapy for someone who is traumitized or mentally emotional patients, where doctors need a better and more accurate answer to how somoene is feeling is more valuable than a classroom, because we like to keep to ourselves, we wont get anything better or worse out of school because of our emotions, and we never know when we might become perfect hiders of our emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wondered how it would be like to travel the world? Then become a Seagoing Cowboy its invigerating to do. You travel by boat to distant lands and drop animals to those places. My crew would play games on return trips in the empty space on boats. We would play games like vollyball, baseball, table tennis Tournaments, and all sorts there. These are just some of my reasons to join now!\n\nI also got to see alot of things on th trips I went on, nine to be exact. On a trip to China I got to see the great and Marvelous Panama canal! Venice a beatifull city with steets of water was one of my stops. These are sights some only wish on going and wouldn't imagine anyone passing that up! Thats why I'm here, to tell you to join now it changed my mind and it will change yours to. I wish you could see what I saw on my trips, its better than any picture you will ever see of it.\n\nIn my conclusion I would like to say it's not without its risks. I almost fell off the ship once but some metal caught me and I wassafe. You also attend the animals on board the ship and clean the Stalls or else it would stink bad. Other than that you have that feeling in you that you made a right choice. You would to if you joined us ,and become a Seagoing Cowboy today. You will never regret joining trust me from experience.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you want to be a seagoing cowboy? I was once, and I think that the experience is very fun-filled and educational. You will meet many different types of people on your journey. Does it sound fun? Well, here are some reasons that you should decide to become a seagoing cowboy.\n\nFirst off, you will find that there is always something to do on board the ship, I found that there are many things to do so you can pass time. I played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed on return trips after the animals were unloaded. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games were some of the activities that we did.\n\nAlso, when you are off the ship and you need something to do, you can explore the surrounding area. On my trips, I toured an excavated castle, saw the Acopolis in Greece, took a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, and marveled at the Panama Canal on my way to China. There are many things to see and do anywhere you are.\n\nLasty, you always know that the things that you do help many people in many ways. I always loved seeing the smiling faces of the people that I gave my time and energy into helping them. The people that we helped were survivors of World War II. Their belongings were destroyed, and most of their countries were left in ruins. We gave them food supplies, animals, and more.\n\nSo, do you want to be a seagoing cowboy now? If you do, thats great! The experience lets you remember that what you did changed peoples lives forever. If I had the chance to become a seagoing cowboy again, I would take it. This made me more aware of what life was like for other people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are the next big thing to come into our world. Driverless cars would be such a help to everyone around the world. With all the traffic out there you get tired of stoping and going, then hitting the gas then the brake. Well now you dont have to do any of that with driverless cars. They'll do it on their own, all you have to do is steer at times. So, with having driverless cars they will do less harm to the enviroment, safer for your freinds and family, and it's easier on you.\n\nFirst, the driverless cars are less harm to the enviromen. Just think of all the taxis out there in the big cities wasting all the gas that we put into them. It harms the enviroment way too much. With these special driving cars it's a proved fact that they use half of the fuel today's taxis use. That means it's not polluting the land as much and the oxygen will be cleaner and fresher as well. With all of the pollution going on our ozone layer is decreasing rapidly and ith the makings of these cars it wont harm the ozone layer as much now, and as a matter of fact it will help it.\n\nMoving on, the driverless cars are all in all safer than modern day cars we drive everyday to world and back. At night when you cant see very well and your in the back country it can see up ahead way farther than you ever can. Here's a situation for you, say your driving along in a regular and a deer runs out of the field and SMACK! Now your calling a tow truck in the middle of night and your kids are scared. Now if you had the safe driverless car it could of hit the brakes because it saw the deer run out of the field, and now your driving home safe and your kids are safe. Don't worry about steering, the special car is made to do it. You can just sit back and relax and enjoy the ride to wherever you are going.\n\nLastly, you always want things to be easier on you right? Well now we have a solution for you. Instead of hitting the gas then the brake in the big cities, have the car do that for you. So you don't get fustrated of hitting the brake and gas you can just chill. This specialy made car can ultimately bring you a stress free life.\n\nNow you can see that having a driverless car can bring you a better life. With all of the values it has you will never regret gettting one. If you're at the car lot and have to decide wether driverless and have to drive. I can count on you'll make the right choice. So, making it less harmful to the enviroment, making it safer for your travels, and finaly making it easier on yourself, driverless cars are the way to go.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is no denying that working shifts might be harder than other regular jobs. This essay is intended to analyze the several drawbacks this category has to face daily, as well as to suggest some solutions to reduce the burden on workers. \r\n\r\nFirstly, there are numerous issues when considering working shifts. In fact, if it is not always pleasant to work, it is much less enjoyable when it is due during nights, bank holidays or weekends. While ordinary employees have the chance to spend festive moments with friends and relatives, healthcare workers, to give an example, are going to the hospital. Year after year, these missed precious moments contribute to a potential burn-out. Moreover, it has been demonstrated that working at night alters the circadian rhythm, which has negative consequences on the physical and psychological sphere. To conclude, these are just a few of the innumerable concerns shift workers have to deal with.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are different solutions to at least sweeten shift-workers'workers conditions. For instance, an economic incentive should be given to them, especially when considering weekends and bank holidays. In addition, the number of wards should be limited following the guidelines written by the Society of occupational medicine. Finally, extra days off should be guaranteed, in order for workers to spend a proper amount of time with families and friends while they are not sleeping, as well as to profit from daylight to accomplish ordinary tasks. Perhaps, with those suggestions they might cherish their employment a bit more. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, there are countless cons to working during shifts. However, there are luckily a bunch of options, alternatives and ideas to ameliorate the condition of this essential class of workers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although youngsters usually have more leisure time than adults, they do not always invest it intelligently. Many are asking for an unpaid community service developed by teenagers in their spare moments. I completely agree with this kind of job because it could be advantageous for them as part-time employees and for society as well. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, by developing outdoor activities during free hours, young people could increase crucial values such as responsibility and respect. Learning how to perform certain activities could result in personal advantages. For instance, maintaining city gardens in good shape, cleaning parks and, assisting elders in hospitals are some of the options to be performed as community jobs. Also, each activity should be completed in a specific period of time. Then, following schedules could teach time respect to many individuals. In addition, with this program youngsters could be busy doing something safe, otherwise, they could spend too many hours on social media.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, unpaid community work could be helpful to increase cities organization. In some regions, cleaner spaces could be a daily scenario. Many hospitals enjoying this program could secure the necessary attention to elder individuals. So, nurses and doctors could focus their attention on other tasks. Moreover, unpaid workers in many cities could save a high amount of money. Therefore, governments could invest more money to improve social necessities. For example, after a few years, some cities could enjoy better public transportation, better schools and, more hospitals. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, learning how to be responsible and respecting labour hours could be advantageous to teenagers future because they usually learn those during their first job. As they would not receive any payment, savings could be used to improve some facilities. For those reasons, I completely agree with the idea that teenagers should be obligated to perform these activities without receiving any money.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Valubale FACS Technology in the Classroom\n\nFACS is an acronym for the new technology named Facial Action Coding System. It enables computers to identify human emotions. This technology is quite interesting and also complex. Dr. Huang predicts \"A classroom computer could recognnize when a student is becoming confused or bored\". He says that by knowing that we as students are bored the computer would \"modify the the lesson like an effective human instructor.\"\n\nI believe that FACS, the new technology of facial action coding, would be very effective and valuable in the classroom. I know that as a student reading a so called \"never ending\" article causes me to become sleepy and uninterested. With the modification of the lesson, I think that it will enhance the attention given to the lesson. Students are struggling so much as ADD and ADHD seem to have been on the rise or rather the diagnoses or those things. Students become uninterested when they don't think that it will benefit them or their future and when they have to read a lot of material that's dry. If attention to the lesson is heightened grades will more than likely raise as heighten as well.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that a Facial Action Coding System would be nice to have in the classroom and would bring a lot more interest back into school work. At the end of the article the author stated \"Whoever thought that making faces could reveal so much about the science of emotions!\" That being said, I think that another claim could be \"Whoever thought that making faces finally worked after all these years and we get someone who cares enough to make our lessons interesting\". So many students around me and I know that other students in other areas don't even care about school anymore because they don't feel that their opinion about what they learn matters and it's sad that a computer software program has to do it instead of our leaders and teachers but as long as we get what we need and as long and our grades go up I find this FAC system to be amazing software to put into the school systems.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In passage The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted talked obstacles facest trying allow dirigibles dock Empire State Building The three main obstacles safety mother nature existing laws One greatest obstacle safety Lsted states Never fulfilled purpose The greatest reason one safety Most dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable Because hydrogen highly flammable would way would safe The building could catch fire danger Secondly nature would affect dirigibles Lsted states The greatest obstacle successful use mooring mast nature The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents The violent air currents couldnt allow dirigibles Empire State Building ca nt dirigibles violent air currents It isnt safe Lastly laws obstacle builders face Lsted s knowledge The practical lesson dirigibles could moor Empire State Building existing law airships flying low urban areas The law huge obstacle builders building dirigibles Because ca nt build something law Because safety mother nature laws thats stop builders building dirigibles", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A sport is a form of activity that incorporates physical and mental skills to create a genre of entertainment which is commonly done as a team. Because of the impact it has on the mind and body, playing a team sport is a good way to teach children life skills such as cooperation. \r\n\r\nAs a child, it is difficult to sit in class and concentrate while having an excessive amount of energy. This is why allowing them to participate in a sport as part of their curriculum is crucial. The feeling of synergy when being with friends, in the outdoors and running around as much as possible is indescribable. They are using up all their energy without even thinking about it while exercising and becoming fit. By the time they are in class, they are ready to concentrate. This is one reason as to how sports allows children to cooperate in a school setting. \r\n\r\nFurthermore, there would be a set of rules that a team needs to abide by so that they are able to win. If the chosen sport is football, each position would have to communicate on when to pass the ball, work with each other as a team to identify the strengths but also follow the rules. If at any point the rules are not followed, a yellow or red card would be given. This shows that there are consequences if restrictions are not abided by. The children would be learning about teamwork, communication and cooperation while simultaneously having fun.\r\n\r\nTeam sports are beneficial when it comes to teaching the younger generation. It is a great educational tool that provides life skills, fitness and fun times all at once. Because of this, it is the best way to teach children about life skills like cooperation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, this has become the first priority for almost every student to be a successful service-man. Some believe that if students start work immediately after school, it will probably be helpful for them in the future. However, I think that it is more important for students to complete their higher study before embarking on the job world for a successful career.\n\n\nOn the one hand, those who argue that it is good to start work just after finishing school, they might point to the early pay initiate. For example, a student who starts a job after school curriculum at the age of 17 years, he will have good savings when he reaches 22 years and this saving could help him for a better marriage life. Moreover, they will get more time to learn the professional skill and they can be a skilled employee in their field at teenage age, and this could help them to gain their salary and position.\n\n\nOn the other hand, it is my opinion that university study plays a vital role in the highly skilled profession and success in the future. For instance, if any student wants to be a doctor or an engineer, it is mandatory for them to complete academic courses from certified universities like Medical Science or Bachelor of Engineering respectively. Additionally, often employers set certain criteria of the minimum education level for such a higher position in their organisation and to achieve that, it is compulsory for students to go through the proper stream from the university. \n\n\nIn conclusion, although there are some benefits to start working straight after completion of school education like early pay start also could help well-established life at a young age, it is my belief that to complete university and college curriculum would have a successful career.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Television is an inevitable part of everyone's life in the present era. It is watched by all age groups for entertainment and learning purposes. It is argued that children should not watch it because of its drawbacks, while it is also said that it helps children a lot. In my view, I would say watching television has lots of benefits, but the time for doing the same must be restricted and they should be allowed to watch specific episodes only. This essay will discuss how television affects the eyes, body and character of our offspring, and how it also helps them to enhance their learning and boost knowledge.\r\n\r\nWatching TV has implications for the eyes and body because it gives a lot of strain on our eyes. Seating in the same place for prolonged periods has negative effects on our postures. For example, children are so interested in Cartoon-related programs that they even forget to eat and seat properly. They watch TV from very close proximity, which is not good for the eyes. Another negative effect is on their moral values and character. Children are vulnerable and immature about good and bad things, so they watch adult or age-restricted content or may come across such adverts that divert their minds towards negativity of the society. \r\n\r\nHowever, TV offers a lot of benefits to its all viewers. offspring can learn entertainment programs that offer them interesting ideas and imagination skills, which enhance their learning capabilities. In addition to this, there are many educational shows telecast every day for children to learn from home. For example, Some basic coding-related programs are presented on TV every day for children to make them aware of insights into software programs. Furthermore, children can watch The Discovery Channel to learn how things are made, which will open their vision regarding the future of industrialization.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion, I would say that TV helps juveniles in many ways, such as learning, exploring, entertaining and so on. But they must be watched TV under their parent's supervision, and the contents and time should be restricted.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, Although watching TV has adverse effects on the eyes and body, it helps children to learn and entertain at home. I must say that all parents should watch their offspring to limit their hours and contains to mitigate the risks mentioned above.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "So we can all agree that Venus is a very interesting planet. It is known as the evening star to some people. Even though you can get some good looks at it from earth it is hard to look ar close up. Also most of us know that this planet is inhabitable because of the planets conditions. Even though it is inhabitable scientists are still interested in the planet.\n\nThe author of this passage claims that is is still a worthy journey to try to explore this planet despite all of the dangers. Personally i would agree with him/her for various different reasons. He says \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life\". For just this reason I think scientists would go crazy over. Since this planet might have been habitable at one point. If this statement is true then scientists should be looking into it so we can find out what went wrong.\n\nThe author also explains that there is a way we can get a little close to the planet. With some sort of aircraft that can hover about thirty miles abive the surface of Venus. Which is a good idea on there part, but they won't get any samples of rock or anything just a better view. They would get more insight on the ground conditions though which is a start. NASA is working on they're machines so they could last longer on the surface. Also they might have to send them on a manned mission even though there are risks it could be worth it in the end.\n\nIn another way the author goes on about some simplified electronics made of gears and switches. This idea sounds crazy but he has a good point, considering that these devices could last on the planet unlike modern tech which would melt. He said \"These devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War ll\". Which means this is like ancient tech., but it is the only tech. that could be survivable on this planet. I don't know where or how they would get there hands on this kind of stuff, but anything sounds good concidering we cant send people to this planet because of the conditions\n\nAll in all the author does a great job of explaining the reasons we should still look into exploring this planet. He gives great attention to detail and has spot on ideas. This passage is really detailed and etiquate. I love the way all of the words flowed together and the various reasons he gave on why we should explore Venus. Which is why i agree with him.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "INTRODUCTION: A brand new software has been developed. This software improves accuracy in perceiving the emotions of others; This new software has promising applications for a variety of industries.\n\nImagine a computer can tell how you're feeling just from your face, like for example you go to a computer and ask her how am I feeling today, then the computer will say= 83%happy, 9%disgusted, 6%fearful, 2%angry; And you'll be like WHAT?, how can a simple computer make such a thing?.\n\nThe process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D model of the face, with 44 major muscles this is called \"action unit\".\n\nDr. Paul Eckman, creator of FACS (Facial Action Coding System)\n\nBODY: Dr. Huang observes that the facial expressions for each emotion are universal and humans perform the same impressive \"calculation\" every day; How?: you can probably tell how is your friend feeling just looking at him or hearing his voice.\n\nThis software could change the whole world; For example imagine you are in the ethernet and then a web ad player pop's up, if you smile at it a similar ad might follow; But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\n\n\"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" Dr. Huang predicts.\n\nCONCLUSION: Moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also can help produce them; we unconsciously imitate person's facial expressions. So in conclusion I would say that we can start using this magnificient software and his technology to read student's emotional expressions because it could also help teacher's to see how their student's are doing and if someone is distracted or bored the computer will notice the teacher so he/she can move on into another thing or go talk with the student.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Acording excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon builders Empire State Building faced obsticles attempting attache dirigible mooring unit top building In paragraph says The greatest obstacle successful use mooring mast nature Then describes harsh winds could render mast unstable Another obsticle making mast law stating derigibles could fly certain altitude The set altitude higher building tall The last obsticle safety paragraph talks blimps filled hydrogen highly flammable The effect blimp fire vastly populated area would devistating The mooring mast Empire State building ingeniose idea many obsticles make work", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist extreme change The cyclist riding small road desert In desert hot cyclist sweating lot getting dehydrated Also desert sense direction Also towns run nothing cyclist couldnt get water drink rehydrate Only comes small bait shop close finally get water", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are number of people who thinks that schools should focus only on the academic success and help students to pass their examination and skills like cookery, dressmaking and wood work should not be taught in the schools. They states, these skills can be develoved by parents as well as by friends of that student. From my perspective, I strongly believe that this statement is correct, but I will be explaining both points of view with the support of some relevant examples.\r\n\r\nTo commence with, school should focus mainly on the studies of the students. Providing them better educaction, that is the main obejective that the parents send their children to schools. This help them to get better remarks in the examinations, which help them to improve their academic background. In addition to this, student with some excellent academic record may receive some better job opportunities in futur as compared to the other people. For an instance, there are many countries with parents who want there children to be a doctor or an engineer, instead of chef or fashion designer. These kind of fields can only be achieved if the children focus more on their studies and examinations instead of some other activities. Even there are few guardians or parents who suggest that the school should provide sports activity instead of some extra curricular activities.\r\n\r\nIn contarst to this, students and their parents prefer that school should have some other skills aside from the subjects and examinations, such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork. This help them to develop their resume stronger and opens many industrial opportunities. Let's assume if the school have some other activities such as cookery, this will help the student to grow their foundation if he or she wants to be a chef.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, school should provide some of other extra curricular activities but should not make them mandatory for every students to learn them. This will t students to achieve whatsoever goal they want to achieve.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Electoral college should go away. electoral college is unfair. each party picks a slate of electors,although it only takes trust to pick that elector it is unfair because it is what the people want. there are 4 reaons why electoral college shouldnt be used today. one may be that votes arent from people and votes are only elected by the electors,and the polular vote most likley always win. which means that people vote for the elector and the highest votes from one state to the elector,the president now has that state and now has votes from it. this is why ecltoral college shouldnt be used today. it is unfair that we cant vote for our own president and the electors get to choose.\n\none reason why electoral college is bad for the people is because of the thing called disastor factor. this is a bad affect to the voting. this happen in 1960 and was with John F. kennedy. what happen was the state legislatures are technically responsible for the electors and that the electors could always tell the people what they want. this was a key factorbut,what to fiasco did he helped changed everything. and here to today we still use electoral college. although we still use fiasco method it is getting better but still is a disastor and i think we should just make something that the people want. this woild be better and maybe an easier way to choose a president.\n\nanother unfair subject that electoral college does for voting is the prospect of tie ,this is a method in which only states with a certain amount of people allowed to vite. this is an unfair method because, for example hawaii has only a little amount of people and cant vote. also many other states cannot vote because of there population. this is very unfair and should be stopped. every state should be able vote. and again there is only one vote for each state and this method should be voted by state but by people to get a better examnation of what people want. since each state only cast one vote it is the senates job to pretty much vote for the elector. we should let the people vote the people vote themsleves so there is a more accurate vote,than just a single vote for the whole state.\n\nanother reason why the electoral college is unfair is because of the winner takes it all method in each state. this is a very unfair method because i do agree that every state should be able to vote. it doesnt matter if the state only has a population of twenty. every state should be able to vote for preseident, esspecially if you are old enough to vote. it is only fair. there are states such as rhode island and south carolina that are too small and other 25 of the largest media markets didnt get to vote. this is unfair . the system should start letting at least every state vote.\n\nthese are reasons why electoral college shouldnt be used today,this is a very unfair way of voting. forget the electoral college method and just start letting the people vote. yes it might hard to keep track but this way, if you let the people vote they will know what the people want and it would be much more accurate than saying one vote for each state . they should really take time thinking of ways to make this better and fair. because electoral college isnt fair at all. they should abolish electoral college from the united states. go back to directed elections. bob dole was someone who said that they shouldnt allow this, and i certainly agree that electoral college shouldnt be allowed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studing Venus is worth pursuite despite the danger in the present because if you didn't study Venus , you wouldn't know about Earth. Studing about Venus will let you know about the condition. It will also let you know about the speed , the tempeature .\n\nFirst , studing Vensus is woth pursuite despite the danger because it will let you know about the condition. The condition is not easy . There is alot of stuff you have to be safe around. In the passage it says \"Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging plant for humans to study , despite its proxmity. This means that it is challenging and the condition are not that easy for humans to take\n\nSecond , studing Venus is worth pursuite because you will know about the speed of floating you take. The floating is also a serious condition. In the passage it says \"NASA'S possible solution to the hostile condition on the surface of Venus would allow scientist to float about the fray. Imagine a blimp-like vehivle hovering 30 or so mile above the rolling Venusian landscape\" This shows how the surface is not serious.\n\nLastly , studing\n\nVenis is woth pursuite because you will know about the tempature. The tempature is very hot. It is also a thick atmosphere. In the passage it states \" On the planet's surface , temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit , and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" This shows about the planets tempature it times hotter than us human experince.\n\nIn counclusion , I think studing Venus is woth pursuite . You can learn and expereince different things you've\n\nnever done before.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think way say hey I didnt come something Ill back next year take test like hibiscus budding snow melts geese return year", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the NASA are just lying so they can caught attantion to the public plus i think that the NASA just made the face by them self and made it look like it was there before they get to mars, and there is no such as alien the NASA are just lying to make it realistic and in the artical they said this might caught attation to the public and it really did, even tho there was an alien, the how can the alien know hwo human faces look like, it not impossible plus the alien won't even know how to draw, alien don't have brain's they are just a creature living with out brain's so I'm not gonna believe that their are alien or the human face that had been discovered by the scientist i think it just a lie or they just make it up, i think the public shouldn't belive it either. But it up to them im just saying that it a lie.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When author writing setting mood really important The mood created memoir heartwarming shows greatful person home although extremely smallNarciso Rodriguez lived small crowded home however fact parents tried hard make sure Narciso good life made house great His parents made best filled passion love laughterThe author good job setting mood memoir When talking home readers could almost feel love food listen music The mood uplifting author shows lot gratitudeIt makes smile read memoir pleasent memories caring givingNarciso Rodriguez amazing parents much In memoir excellent job setting mood readers tell greatful", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The world of automotive technology is constanly changing for what engineers believe is the best for society. There are always new and improved ideas for cars, but some of them may not be in the best interest for people. The idea of a car that drives itself seems both unreliable and unrealistic. After reading this passage the idea of a self-driving car seems like more of a hassle than the number one item on a person's Christmas list.\n\nThe \"driverless\" cars of today are far from not needing drivers. Most cars, like the Toyota Prius, have many sensors within the car. Though these sensors do help alert the driver if the car is out of control, they do not fix the siuation or get themselves out of it. I have been in a Toyota Prius on a dangerous, icey road, and the car did alert the driver when we were out of control, but the car did not correct the situation it rather made a loud beeping noise and had a flashing signal on the dash. These cars are not driving themselves, but instead relying on the drivers to pay attention to their warnings.\n\nSelf-driving cars are also a problem when it comes to legal situations. Dr. Werner Huber believes that entertainment while driving is a great idea for drivers who still need to pay attention to the road. So what happens when a driver is distracted and does not adhere to their self-driving car's warnings? Well the same probelm that occurs with drivers every day. There will still be wrecks and deaths. These cars are not making the roads a safer place, but instead making legal situations more confusing by not knowing who is at fault for an accident.\n\nThough these cars have no large, positive effect on society engineers still continue to work every day on them. These cars are not changing what the base of a car is, but are getting plenty of attention for it. Self-driven cars are unachievable, and they do not benefit society in a positive way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think drivless cars are both good and bad. Good because you dont have to worry about driving all of the time specially if you dont enjoy driving alot. Drivless cars are also good because it is increasing technology and it is advancing as time goes on because as you know technology plays a big roll in drivless vehicles and companies vehicles today. The bad about drivless cars is that with a drivless car you can only do so much and after a while you have to start controlling and navigating the car because you can only do so much with the car. Also the bad about driveless cars are that you never know whats going to happen to the car since it is controlled by a computer and sensors. What If the sensors mess up ? or what if the car gets out of control and you have to take the wheel? I think that drivless car should only be drove when they have all of the information and right details and they make sure that the car is 100% safe because with all of the people buliding these cars they never know what can go wrong with the cars they are bulding.\n\nThe argument for drivless cars would be that they both are equally good and bad because in the article it states how drivless cars are good because they can drive themselves and stop themselves and the bad was the car couldnt back up or cope with traffic like an actual human can. The authour states in the story how the drivless car keeps the attention of the driver so the driver want take him/her eyes off of the road whitch they have sensors in the car that tells you when the driver will hit something or takes him/her eyes off of the road.\n\nDrivless cars play a big roll in the world today and they should euqually be injoyed but if the car doesnt have all of the qualities that its suppose to have then why buy the car ? If the car is not fully capable of doing everything on its own then why is it called a drivless car ? because you obviously have to still control the car after a certain amout of time. As tecnology increases today these cars will get more advanced and there will be a way that the car will be able to be used on its own. The car will become a great investment for whoever decides to buy this car in the future and they will injoy the car and all of the technolgies that go a long with it and there will soon be no longer a use for a car that you have to stier on your own. And thats why drivless cars are good and bad", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people think that the Face on Mars was created by aliens. Just imagine how can an alien race that may or may not be exdinct, built something like the Face on Mars. Hear me out on this one, but what if the Face on Mars was just an natural landform? Let's think about for a minute and see what can come up with. Let's delve deeper into this interesting idea, shall we?\n\nNow what if the Face on Mars was a natural landform? \"We photographed the Face as soon we could get a good shot at it.\" (6). My evidence is the structure itself, maybe it just looks like a face, who knows! We believed maybe because it looks like a face, aliens created it. Let me give you more evidence.\n\nAliens has been a man's fantasy forever. Do we know that that aliens really do exist? Ever since the first man on the moon, sciencists have been working to prove that aliens exist. We barely have enough evidence to even prove ourselves. Do we humans have enough evidence that shows aliens are real?\n\nNo, we dont have enough evidence that shows aliens are real. Maybe one one day we may or may not find an alien race on a farway planet. Until then, we just have to more evidence that proves it. Who knows, maybe aliens did created the Face on Mars? My conclusion is that the Face on Mars is a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter two people one ways know really good friends Laughter cheers really bad day It reason know great bond relationship Laughter bond two best friends I It friends long One best friends named I friends years We close every thing together We hang together play soccer together live close together laugh together loves go camping family The past years taken I along last trip I texting lot trip one service camp site mom yelled texting much mad kinda angry agreed mom yelled I yelled back I nt like ganging I said I know I m getting phone Just shut really surprised I said became intimidated We stopped talking things really awkward little Then friend also trip us fallen flat face trying cartwheel I tried laugh mad could nt help funny So burst laughing together realized nt mad We knew way little fight like going stop us friends We hugged said I m sorry laughter great thing s nothing better knowing friends always make laugh even mad It make bond stronger really repair damage broken relationship In case laughter fixed many problems like always", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless Cars sound like a good idea when it comes to knowing you won't have to use the pedals unless you are in a tough situation. This can be helpful to those who have broken their leg so they can't drive a normal car. But with this new car, they could drive in non harming areas. This could do more harm to people than help them though. If the driver in the new car would wreck they wouldn't know who's fault it would be, the drivers or the manufacturers. If someone gets injured in the driverless car, whether it be if the technology failed or just an accident, the company may get sued or have to pay the hospital bill. This could be bad if the driver thinks the car will comepletely take over the driving for them and they don't pay attention. This could lead to themselves or someone else getting badly hurt.\n\nThis car would be a good help to those who don't have much money because it uses less fuel than a normal car, and they wouldn't have to pay to ride the bus. \"The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexability than a bus.\" It is good that the touch sensors make the driver hold onto the wheel so they don't get distracted. \"The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel.\" This can help, but not totally get rid of, accidents and injuries because it doesn't let the driver get distracted.\n\nThe new car would harm people with all these sensors they put into the car to tell the driver when it's time to take over may make the driver on the other side of the road distracted if it's a light. When the car is driving by itself most of the time, it can possibly cause more accidents than before. \"Tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time.\" When the car is on autopilot for that much time, the driver can easily get distracted by the most random things. Examples of this would be looking out the window or talking to a friend in the car, and this would make you take your eyes off the road and you may not even realize it.\n\nAfter all this I think that they shouldn't make these cars because so far they haven't had many crashes, but they might. The only difference between a normal car and a new driverless car is that it drives for you when you are driving on an open highway. \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\" \"They still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents.\" These cars aren't really a big change from a normal car and a normal car I think is far more safer for yourslef and everyone else on the road.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit is because in the passage, he explains on how log he has been studying it and at the beginning called it an \"Evening Star\" because it one of the brightest points of light, giving more specific examples on why its more worthy and how important it is to study it immediately to know what else that it might do.\n\nAnother valuble reason that it is important for them to study and examine Venus even more is that Venus is the closest planet near Earth. But, also knowing that both Earth and Venus have travelled around the sun at various different speeds. In the passage, it says \" These differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times Venus. Because Venus is sometimes right around the corner- in space terms- humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world.\" This is showing on how hard that they have worked on study on venus to know more on its whereabouts and how dangerous it can be sometimes.\n\nIn my conclusion, this is all shows all why people of Earth want to study Venus so badly and knowing on how dangerous it can really be on studying the planet. For example, on the planet, that it has a very, thick atmosphere which is almost 97% carbon dioxide on it, having highly corrosive sulfuric acid in the atmosphere, and the temperature being at 800 degrees fahrenheit. This giving out a reason on why it is dangerous to enter Venus, but still wanting a chance to explore the planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The single best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor. Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. I argue in favor of changing the Electoral college to election by popular vote for the presidents of the united states.\n\n\"Perhaps most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the electoral vote. In this case, the election would be thrown to the house of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president.\" (The senate would choose the vice president). Given that many voters vote one party for president and another for congress, the House's selection can hardly be expected to reflect the will of the people. For example: If you lived in Texas, for instance, and wanted to vote for someone, you'd vote for a slate of 34 democratic electors pledged to him.\n\nAt the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the \"swing\" states. \"And if anyone has a good argument for putting the fate of the presidency in the hands of a few swing voters in Ohio, they have yet to make it\". For example: In 2012's election, Obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney.\n\nI dont like the way they did it, the senate suppose to vote not the people because some people just vote for a reason or to get a job. \"It's official; The electoral college is unfair ,outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality, and the arguments against direct elections are spurious at best.\" The electoral college requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal. No region has enough elestoral votes to elect a president.\n\n\"The electoral college is widely regarded as an anachromism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be Overruled by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner.\" It can be argued that the Electoral college mehod of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their states- democrats in Texas, for example, or Republicans in California.\" Knowing their vote will have no effect, they have less incentive to pay attention to the campaign than they would have if the president were picked by populars vote.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, there is a trend about discovering apartment's background. People have started to explore their flat's history and learn about it. There might be reasons for this movement which this essay will explain and provide methods to learn about one's home. \r\n\r\n Finding out about someone's property has become overwhelmingly popular. This can be owning to understand why that property has such structures. For instance, if people live in Istanbul have a flat with a wide balcony, which looks through the street, it means that their home was built by Armenians lived there in the past. Another reason for being curious about house's history might be because of the house's architectural features. Moreover, the architectural features of a property can be understood by learning its historical purpose. For example, dwellers in a building might be enlightened about the shelves in the cellar, which were constructed to store wine, when they discovered their building's background. \r\n\r\n There are many practical methods to research about historical states. If people aim to find out about their houses, firstly, they should contact with their local political administrations to receive the historical plans of their houses. Secondly, they might make a request on the city council to access their houses' old photos; by doing this, they can resurface old features of their houses. \r\n\r\n In conclusion, the history of the buildings creates diversity amongst the architecture of the houses. House features can be understood by property's history, and people might want to explore these. Contacting with local administration would be helpful, if people aim to research about the history of their houses.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Even after proven wrong, people are still thinking that the face on mars is an actual alien made face. In paragraph 10 it staes that on April 5th 1998 a global surveyor flew over Cydonia with a camera 10 times sharper than the photo taken in the original 1976 picture, shown to prove that on this picture the closer up it looks less like a face. But this wasn't the end of the research.\n\nThe reaseach continues but with an even better camera to try and prove all of the conspiracy believing people wrong. In paragraph 11 it states that the new digital image taken in 2001, was a 3 times bigger sized camera from the 1998 photo, and it was sharper than ever. This image spans over 1.56 meters! If this \"face\" was made by aliens, then why were there no artifacts found around the photograph? The extremely high def. picture would have shown said artifacts. But there are still specticals believing otherwise.\n\nThe pictures are proven to be a natural born landform, pictures don't lie. Yes, maybe if we were ON Mars we would find some new facts to maybe prove one anothers views even more, but for right now NASA is winning. Conspiracy theories are theories. Picture evidence is pure fact shown to a persons face.\n\nJust like the belief in wether or not earth and people were made by god or science. They're both theories that's why people have to have \"faith\" in what they believe. The Big Bang theory for example is a theory because it doesn't have enough evidence to be proven that it legitimately happened. It goes the same with religion.\n\nIn conclusion, people all have thir different beliefs. Some believe that the \"face\" was alien made, some believe it's natural born. But no matter what people believe, fact is fact. What would you believe, a conspiracy (something not officially proven) or a fact with picture evidence?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars is a mystery of how it was created. Know one knows how it was made, if it was created by aliens or just a natural landform. People may think that since it is in space it has to do with aliens in some possible way. Scientist Jim Garvin discovered a landform similar to the Face on Mars. The Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. It is a lava dome that takes the shape of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars. They also have discovered that the surveyor has labeled it a natural landform. The Face on Mars is catergorized as a mesa which is around the American West. Could the Face on Mars be a natural landform?\n\nThe similar land form in Idaho has the same height as the Face on Mars. The pictures that they have captured shows the martian equivalent of a butte or mesa. If this was a alien type of act the MGS would have seen the alien's shelters, airplanes, and pyramids. The Face on Mars is not a alien' s sculpture. NASA's surveyor had labeled the face as a natural landform. The surveyor catergorized it as a natural landform because it didn't pick up any traces of alien activity. Also, if NASA wasn't forsure about their discovery they woudn't have posted it on websites or annonced it to the world. They said that they would have rathered kept this information classified. Why would you put a false statement on the internet, expecially if it involved aliens, because then the world would be going crazy. They would be preparing for them to attack and abduct people.\n\nI could understand why some people could believe that aliens made up this rock like object. One of the most obvious reasons is that it is space. On the day when they wanted to take another picture it was very cloudy and you couldn't see the face, which some believe that aliens had hid the face by a haze. But, we haven't had any discoveries or theroies of there being aliens in this galaxy.\n\nIn conclusion, the Face on Mars is a natural landform that was not created by aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I disagree with the development of driverless cars because I think it's safer for a human to drive instead of technology. Humans are more aware of their surroundings and technology can only sense it's surroundings. If the technology is good and has been tested multiple times I still wouldn't want to be in one because something could always go wrong. The technology could get a virus and mess up or it could do something the person doesn't want it to do.\n\nManufactures had to use a lot of senser so that the car could move by itself. The Toyota Pruis uses all kinds of different sensors to make the car have the same skills as a human driver. But what if the sensors stop working? Then what will happen? If there was a accident nobody would know if it was the cars fault or the humans fault, it could be both. If it was the cars fault for causing an accident I wouldn't want have another driverless car and it would be a lot safer for everybody to have human drivers. Manufactures are trying to make sitting in the car more fun by putting entertainment devices in the car while the driverless car is driving. I think that is going to be a huge distraction in the car for the humans. They say if the humans wants to drive then the entertainment will automatically shut off. But what if it doesn't shut off? If the entertainment doesn't shut off then the human driver will be distracted by it and it could cause an accident.\n\nI think it would be better and safer for every car to have a human driver because you can't alway trust technology. So many things go wrong with technology nowaday's and people don't see that as a big deal, but they will see it as a big deal when they trust technology to drive them around and they get into an accident. I wouldn't want technology driving me around because technology isn't always perfect and it just can't be trusted driving people places on the road.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a social expectation that all teenagers should be forced to do unpaid work to improve the local community, which can enhance the well-being of both individuals and society. Personally, I do think participating in voluntary work in the local community should be justified because of several reasons. \r\n\r\nIt is undeniable that unpaid work can provide young people with a valuable opportunity to cultivate their skills. In fact, to achieve daily tasks involved in community work, teenagers need to communicate with plenty of clients who have diverse backgrounds and character traits, adjust their negative emotions brought about by stressful situations, and reflect on what they can do to improve their services. These activities all require comprehensive skills such as critical thinking, resilience, self-care, and empathy. Therefore, it could be a predictable outcome that teenagers who regularly train themselves through these activities are more likely to be competent compared to their peers. In this sense, the advantages of community work outweigh the drawbacks. \r\n\r\nAs for society, unpaid community work may contribute to the declining rates of juvenile delinquency and therefore more stable social order. I reckon the reason why youth crimes are still existing in our society is the lack of citizenship education among teenagers. However, voluntary community work would be an efficient pedagogical tool to gradually educate teenagers on the sense of social responsibility. This means that the more teenagers engage in volunteering work, the more likely they are to commit offences or threaten public safety. Consequently, social stability can be improved due to community work. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I strongly support the proposal that requires teenagers to participate in unpaid community work. Not only can they acquire various skills from daily practices, but also can prevent the youth from committing crimes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Over the last few years,the number of people who prefer to fuel has increased significantly.Although there are several advantages of fuel,it can have some disadvantages as and drow a conclusion.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand,there are several benefits of fuel increase.The first merit of it is considered to be that is the income from fuel.For enstance, nowadays,peolpe's demands for fuel are increasing, because the number of people in our country is increasing year by year, so the prices of fual are increasing.Another positive aspect is though to be that solving these global promlems,This is because if we do not solve this proplem,it will eventually lead to many things.\r\n\r\nOne the other hand,despite mentioned positives it also has its downsides.One of the major disadvantages of it is that harms the environment.For example,it emits foul odors and poisons person.Another important demerit is that expected price.This is because many people may not always be able to afford it.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion,while fuel can offer several positives there may be some drow back too.From my personal point of view,agree of this will out weigh the disagree", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you want to cause more accidents just to keep up with the newest technology? As stated in the text \"He believes such cars would fundamentally change the world\" But how? Driverless cars aren't safe at any cost. In paragraph two the line stated \"Their cars have been driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\" That may be true, but on the other hand are there hundreds of people at a time driving these driverless cars? No. Of course there are no accidents \"So far\" Which is also stated in the text.\n\nThis is technology, technology has many flaws and glitches when using it. Technology always has to have a human to touch it in order for it to function. As the article states \"Sensors are nothing new\" technology senses us humans, so that means it relies on us to function, right? Also according to the article \"The driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires.\" Driverless cars still depend on alert drivers, so why not just drive a regular vehicle?\n\nThe safety of others is grealty important in this situation. As stated in the article \"Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe.\" Say someone did get hurt by one of these driverless cars. The driver wasn't alert to the situation, and tried to argue that they weren't aware that they had to remain content, because it was suppose to be a \"Driverless car\". As the article states \"Who is at fault? The driver or the manufacture?\"\n\nOn the other hand, Yes it would be a thrill to try out one of these driverless cars. They would be something extremely fun try. But no, I don't agree that they should be able to be sold so that hundreds of people can be \"driverless drivers.\"\n\nMost importantly, Driverless cars aren't fully capable of being drove without the assistance of a human being. Driving these types of cars you still have to remain content and alert, Just af if you were driving a regular automobile. so why not just drive a automobile?\n\nIn Conclusion, Driverless cars aren't a topic I agree with currently. They would cause many more accidents on roads. They aren't needed in everyday life situations. Although, it would be fun to take a ride in a driverless car and feel the thrill of knowing you dont have to do everything for the car to go in motion. Driveless cars depend on humans just like regulars vehicles. So whats the difference? A little more to brag about?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Now you may be in favor of the Electoral College but sir I'm here to change you mind. Why are so many people in favor of this process maybe because they can guzzle up your money , my money\n\nOUR\n\nmoney . I say lets go with popular vote not some elector in a monkey suit. We let them have a \"winner-take-all\" system as stated in paragraph 7 from an excerpt from \" What Is The Electoral College \". Why do we need make the District of Columbia like their own state , why should we go threw all the hassel of putting certain numbers of electors for each state when we can just go with popular vote. The vote we have.\n\nWhy do we need such an abomination for voting, when we can all vote for the person we want to win the election not, just some group of electors Democratic or Republican so they can vote for us .\n\nWe as the\n\nPEOPLE\n\nshould have the right to vote for our selves. It's such a crazy process ,we could just as easly mess up who we voted for , it's not always very clear .\n\nWE\n\ndont even really vote for our Electors. \"Well who does ? \" you ask. The state conventions ,sometimes the state party , sometimes even the presidential candidates themselves. We should be lucky that the 2000 election was the biggest crisis in a century ; but this process could end up getting much worse like in 1960. The segregtions almost led to no more Democratic electors. We still proceed with all evidence as to why we shouldnt have Electoral Colleges.\n\nWe do have democratic electors but the Electoral College is a very non-democratic process. People in favor of this say even since 2000 when Gore had more popular votes than Bush but fewer electoral votes it hadn't since 1888 . We are the the people we should have a voice that rings loud and clear , not one who whispers under the big booming voice of the people the higher leaders think have a bigger say. We should be the majority not the minority. Even in favor of the Electoral college you can see the many flaws that have come about the age old process. You have the swing states that follow a \"winner-take-all\" method.\n\nThen we have the big states that use some of their large states. like in Florida the 2012 election the state had a very close popular vote and got 29 electoral voates. Then it came down to Wyoming with 3 electoral votes and it took all.\n\nNow I hope you can see why We should toss the Electoral College out the second story window. The vote's come to close to call in a lot of these runnings. The people we vote for can always turn their backs. Plus it just gets to caiotic to handle even when we treat the district of Columbia a state. Even the people with the popular vote get tossed out the window. The Electoral College should be put down , and Replaced with the Popular votes of the Us citizens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist many ways It made tired thirsty near exaustion", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The cyclist traked barren land trying get land rivers valleys Trakling first town cyclist saw ramshackie shed rusty pumps corral lotated desert California The cyclist angry old men led barren town however kept hope traveled next town Their found abandond fruit juice factory bottling plant discuraged cyclist started give I going die clamed hope loot The man feels like nothing left its old men caused Then finally cme across bait shop found giving huge reliefe The features effects attitude baren land lose hope cyclist Therefore whats around us affect us education friendship survival", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are books things found libraries offensive Why offensive offensive What done books movies magazines movies offensive people In opinion books I could think offensive others particular reasons Some reasons include put races comments book author wrote written towards Others find books music magazines movies offensive terms people use Some people get offended think s directed toward take personal Music offensive people becasue language use They might look children listen children nowadays say things music try like person saying Movies offensive language violence way people treated A good movie would It violence language people treated harmful way But overall movie teaches war things ve gone get country today Magazines could offensive words used slang words cursing words violent words The magazines could nude pictures people parents want children getting ahold things like Overall I think things could offensive people probably nt take shelf s offensive If d look certain way everything library could offensive someone case take everything s offensive might take everything s library So I find right take away things ofensive people If offends nt read listen even look one pressuring So therefore s right take things shelves people like", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Seagoing Cowboys\"\n\nImagine always being out in the seas where theirs beautiful scenery. Imagine actually looking foward to helping animals and hear the noises of the wind blowing you across the Atlantic Ocean on a boat. Well thats what Luke Bomberger had to look forward to everyday. Its called being a '\"Seagoing Cowboy\". Here are some reasons why you should become a seagoing cowboy. First, Seagoing Cowboys take care of horses,cows, and mule that are shipped here. Second, caring for animal keeps you busy. Lastly, on free time cowboys play fun games like baseball.\n\nSome people think that being a seagoing cowboy is boring but most people think its pretty cool. when you take care of horses, cows, and mule it actually teaches you some life lessons like what to exactly do with those exotic animals.\n\nCaring for animals is time consuming it takes up a ton of your free time but its all worth every single bit of you're time to learn from it.\n\nWhen cowboys play fun games its usually at times when the animals have been unloaded off the ship and when everything has been cleaned and ready for more animals.\n\nFrom attending to every need of the animal and letting horses,cows,and mule fill your free time to. Later playing a game on the ship when you did all that work it really makes you hapy and ready for more challenges that life gives you. So sign up to become a \"Seagoing Cowboy\" today!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am Luke and I am a Seagoing Cowboy. If you ever get a chance to be a Seagoing Cowboy you better take the job because their is a lot of cool things you can see.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy is a very unique thing to do. You can go to different Countries and see very fragile things. When I was on my way to China I toured an excavated castle in Crete. Then I had marveled at the Panama Canal on my way to China. There are so many things you can do and see.\n\nThe Seagoing cowboy is also special because you can spend time with nature on the sea. I had went to many differnt places and had fun spending time with the animals. I get to feed them oats and give them water and some other things snd you get to clean out there pins. Then the animals will keep you busy and that is why I like it.\n\nAnother thing I did was taking night time watch. Watching the animals at night is very cool and every hour you get too go up and tell the captain what is going on. But on the rainy nights you have to be careful. One night I was walking down the steps and slipped and about fell into the dark ocean. That night I knew I had to be more careful.\n\nThere are alot of things you can witness as a Seagoing Cowboy. Seagoing Cowboys have a lot of unique Oppertunities and if you get the chance to be one you better take the job and you will witness cool places.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Narciso Rodriguez author creates grateful loving moodFirstly author creates grateful mood He s grateful parents sacrifice moving They face racism Quite contrary neighborhood made mostly Spanish Cuban Italian immigrants time overt racism norm racism prevailed United States They wanted son good life The author creates grateful mood Lastly author creates loving mood He feels loving mood family love take care He considered neighbors family My parents always kept arms door opened many people considered family knowing would us They loved many people knew could trust To conclude author creates loving mood", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars dont even sound safe. Then don't ever sound useful if im being honest. Yeah it's something that we can make happen now a days but we can make flying cars a thing to.\n\nDriverless cars can cause many accidents if you really think about it the driver will take advantage of the car. He or she driving the car will think it's okay to not pay attention because the car will let it know when something is about to happen what if its too late and an accident happens. What if the driver is intoxicaded and doesn't pay attention to what the car is saying. What if the car starts to mess up and the driver looses control of the car. There is so many things that can go wrong with this espicially now there are so many things going on with texting and driving and drinking and driving. Imagine the accidents that can happen.\n\nWhat if the driver wakes up super early one day and are driving to work. They have the driverless car driving and they fall asleep because there not moving or doing anything simply because the car is driving itself you know how bad that accident can be? If you have a regular car that you control you will have to stay awake because you are the on moving it and controlling it but if you have the driverless car you arent really doing anything but trying to stay careful and paying attetention which can cause you to fall asleep. I don't see this has being safe what so ever so many things can go wrong so many people can get hurt. What if the driverless car messes up and they blame the driver and not the manufacturer many people would get angry.\n\nIf they really want this to happen there should be so many rules in the car. Some can be that every passanger has to have a seatbelt or the car won't move, the driver must have both hands on wheel the entire time the car is in motion. Not a single car can be to full. Loud alert signals when something is going to happen to aware the driver. A voice check to see who is driving etc.. It does sound appealing knowing you are going to get in a car and not have to drive it but me being safe and the others on the car are way more important then me being happy. I would rather be happy and safe and drive my own car then to depend on a car computer that can break down anyday.\n\nDriverless cars are just not something that sounds safe what so ever. If you have someone driving for you then whats the point of learning how to drive learning how to park taking your time studying and preparing for the test all of that will be useless if you have a car that drives on its own most of the time. You know how many teenagers are going to try to take there parents driverless car just because it drives on its own and they know they won't get pulled over because the car is driving perfect. Many people are going to think its okay to be on drugs and intoxicaded because they wont have to worry about there driving.\n\nThis is just not well what so ever. There so many things wrong with this idea it can cause many problems. Many people are going to take advantage of the car. There's some people that are responsible but theres also many people that aren't.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people believe that a new production known as \"driverless cars\" is going to influence the way we as a people view driving. I couldn't agree more. I personally believe that this new product will be a success and I cannot wait to see this idea put into action. This product is going to change the way the future goes from place to place and it will make life easier as far as transportation. According to the passage, General Motors created a concept car that would run on a special test track. The track was embedded with an electrical cable that sent radio signals to a receiver on the front end of the car. That way, the car would have the ability to perform certain functions and tasks.\n\nMy only concern is the price of the vehicle. I know that it is going to take a lot to make it, therefore, it is going to be very costly.\n\nWhenever the hybrid vehicle first came out, It was very expensive. The hybrid vehicle is a car that does not require gas for it to be able to run. All it needs is an electrical charge. When that first came out, I thought the concept of it was very clever. Just the same as the \"driverless car\". To conclude, I hope to see this vehicle put into action and I can't wait to see how far it expands.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" the author describes how new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. I believe that the use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. I believe that this new technology and what is claims to be capable of is very useful for a classroom. If the strudent is struggling, it would be aware. If a child was depressed, being bullied, or being a bully, the computer that is able to read the child's emotions would be very beneficial.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System would be beneficial to detect when a student is angry or upset. I believe this is a huge benefit to the classroom because of what has been happening recently at schools. The student who is angry is usually the bully, or a victim of bullying. Many children commit suicide due to depression from being bullied. However, in other cases there has been acts of violence. On Valentine's day this year, February 14, 2018, there was a horrible school shooting. It has been one of the most horrific mass shootings in years. Today there are many worries of parents that schools are no longer safe. I really feel that with this new technology being capable of detecting emotions, this could lead to prevention of suicides, violence, and an upset child. In paragraph 3 it says,\" Eckman has classified six basic emotions- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness- and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial musles.\" ( D'Alto 3) This quote informs us of the new technlogoy's basic capability of being able to read emotions, which I believe, is a huge benefit to students who struggle in school with depression or who are victimized.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System can also be beneficial to detect when a student does not comprehend what they are being taught. Since the FACS is capable of detecing emotions, the computer will be able to see that the child is confused, lost, or strugging with that they are learning. In paragraph 6 it says,\" 'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr. Huang predicts. 'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.' \" (D'Alto 6) This is another great benefit because if a student is too shy or afraid to ask a question about the lesson, the lesson will be modified to the students understanding. This is a great quality because I lot of times there will be teachers who just do not feel like explaining what you don't understand. They teach at their own pace, especially in highschool.\n\nIn conclusion, the Facial Action Coding system is beneficial to a classroom because it will be able to tell exactly how every student is feelings, instead of having to pull the emotions out of them and keep asking \"what's wrong\".", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I would like thank advance taking time read letter means lot I writing today come attention people saying computers benefit society Those people wrong Computers amazing They allow easier research I learn countries talk people online I stuff alsmost every day We re finishing pretty big research assignment english social studies It involved taking note cards different sources Luckily I able go card catalog computer find many books topic typing keyword We narrow options easily search something specific After find topic check see s reliable information reading summary All done minutes lessThis would nearly imposible without computer I relative A back family I trying plan trip visit We able go search engine find directions house airport gave us directions estimated amount time would take get ve also able plenty research foreign countries push button s simple convenient My two uncles live On thanksgiving mother upset missed I able set video chatroom mom could talk great convenient go instant message talk people world nt even money In conclusion computers helpul learn foreign countries easy access research talk online s long list things make computers great would take long write Thank listening", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many companies have been working on driveless cars. Driveless cars are cars that can drive themselevs without a human. I think this isn't a very good idea to continue to work on.\n\nThere are many problems with these driveless cars as the text states \" designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" This basically means the car can not drive on the interstate because there is always a work site or an accident on the interstate. What if the car doesnt notify you that you need to take the wheel and you get into a really bad accident? You must be paying attention at all times and that ruins the whole point of a driveless car.\n\nMany states dont even allow driveless cars as the author stated \" in most states it is illegal even to test computer-driven cars.\" How are we supose to drive these cars if they can't even be tested in our state? If these cars were ever ready to drive by themseleves we would have to wait for the law to pass for every state. It will most likely take a while for all this to actually happen. I feel this is a waste of time and money!\n\nWhat happens if someone does get into an accident in their car? Who is to blame? Do we blame the company that made the car becasue the car wasn't doing its job and it never alerted us to take the wheel? Or do we blame ourself for not paying enough attention? Some may say one or the other but it is a driveless car so I think the company should be blammed and who needs a huge law suit on their hands when they've spent all this money on making these cars?\n\nYes, I will say these are really cool cars and they would be nice to have some day. But I feel like its just a waste for now. It would be nice to be able to just sit with your family or friends and chat all the way to your destention but the world is just not ready for this stuff just yet. The car needs alot of improving and work before we put them on the streets.\n\nThese cars have many problems that really need to be worked on before we put them out onto the road. I feel they are a waste or money, time, and aren't very safe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Globalisation and Industrialization has impacted working and eating habits of almost everyone residing in Tier 1 or Tier 2 cities. Fast food chains and QSR restaurants have emerged as a go-to place for people in corporate jobs due to high workload. Public health in general, depends majorly on these two factors. This essay will discuss both aspects of government intervention in regulating availability of different eating options in order to improve general health in the country. \r\n\r\n Although eating habits are unique in every region, religion and even generation, there is one similarity, which is need of nutrition for our body to maintain immune system and ability to perform the required tasks. Depending of various job types, different diet patterns are more appropriate for different people, and accordingly humans have developed their eating habits around it. This directly affects the health which, albeit gradually, improves overtime if we consume nutritious food; and remain physically active throughout the day.\r\n\r\nI strongly advocate that maintaining overall health should be the responsibility of oneself in general. However, authorities should ensure that private companies are not overburdening their employees to perform more than what their job entails. Regulating nutritious food entirely may result in favouritism and undue inclination towards one industry, hampering the level playing field for various businesses. \r\n\r\nPartial involvement of government in releasing the minimum nutritional requirement for people, enabling transparency on the ingredients used in food items being sold in outlets or supermarkets, guidance on leading a healthy lifestyle will always ascertain the good of their citizens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Well need patience fishing whe food comeing going served also patient everybody else", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is new inovations that may help improve classrooms invented each day. Almost everyday everyone reads something that was just invented to help improve a clasrrom, or help improve out computers, or a new software upates for iPhones. Do you ever get angry when a add comes up and you can't skip it even though you watched it over 2 times within the past hour? There is a new technology called Facial Action Coding System, that could solve your problem. It is a new technology being developed by Prof Thomas Haung, who is woking with Prof. Nicu Sebe to develop this technology. This technology can caculate someones emotions by reading your face.\n\nI think that Facial Action Coding Systen will be a very vauleable thing to have in out classroom. It can help us in so many ways. There are many kids everday who don't understand a lesson but are too afraid to ask the teacher for help. I have to say I am one of those people. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, Dr. Haung predicts. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effectiive human instructor.\" (Pargaph 2) This technnology is something that has never been thought of, or even attempted. The technology even decoded Mona Lisa smile. \"She's 83 precent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\"\n\nThat is something that has never been done, or even attemped. There are so many amazing ways that this new technology can be used. You can obvisouly tell when someone is angry, but you can't caculate a percentage like they did with the new Facial Action Cody System.\n\nThis new technology can even detect when you are not happy with the Web ad pops up on the computer. It can detect if you are happy with the ad, or upset with the ad. If you are not happy with the ad the next ad will be different. if you smile when the Web ad appears, a similar ad will appear after the next Web ad. \"For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\" (Paragraph 6) This technology could be a potential money maker. It could be sold all around the world, and make tons of profit.\n\nThe technology can even detect when a celebrity isn't being truthful. \"To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a smiling politician or celebrity isn't being truthful.\" (Paragraph 8) Every day in Hollywood there is a new celebrity scandal. Most of the time it is another celebrity telling the pabaratzi that this celebrity did this. Then they will put it on the front cover of a magazine and it will be sold all around the world. This new technology can even detect when Donlad Trump or any politician is not telling the trruth about something. Because we all know that they lie a lot to us. The technology can do the world wonders, and help us know when people are upset, happy, disgusted, or even not telling the truth.\n\nConcluding this technology will be a very beneficial thing to our classrooms, and even the whole world. I never like to just talk about one thing. I like to give many different views of the whole article and not just stick with one part, because people need to know the whole thing not just one part. Every new invoation has it's goods and bads. But Facial Action Coding System is a huge breakthrough in modern day technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In some countries people are intrested in finding out about the history or buliding they live in. Because some housesand buliding has it's own identity and history like some leaders visited the house or lived there like this people are intrested to wanted to know their house or bulding history.\r\n\r\nThe reason why the people are eagrly intrested to known the history of the house or buliding is they wanted to known the history of previous house owners and it's history in the previous years's. Some houses and buliding has it's unique history because they build long long years ago ansd also it has it different ownersin different period of time,. Also some popular people or leader visited and lived in there. So people known about the previous land owenersand their living lifestyle. Some buliding has it's unique identity because some important decision taken in the buliding rooms. Example like White house the buliding has it unique identity like the bulding welcoms lot of U.S presidents and some important decesion also taken in the rooms of White house. Also some historic bulding attracts tourist and people also known it's history.\r\n\r\nPeople can resarch through the websites abou the history of the buliding and its unique identity. When it comes to houses they can see it from their household documents or if they needed additional information means. Some countries has library in there they can get the additional information of their house history. Because in some countries people can easily to known details about the historic houses information in the libraray.\r\n\r\nIt is good to known about the history of the houses and building. We can tell some other people about its identity and unique quality and its importance in the world. The people who try to gather inforamtion abou the history of houses and buliding they make us to remember it's history.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many obstacles builders Empire State building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock Since German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed New Jersey would dangerous densey populated area like New York Empire State building greatest obstacle success use mooring mast nature The winds top building shifting due air currents Dirigibles would safe dangling high pedestrians street The major problem architect faced dirigibles could moor Empire State building law airships flying low urban areas Even though seemed like good idea time practical safe", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A 3-D computer that has been made to show the emotions of a person has been in the works. It has been tested on paintings like the Mona Lisa showing her emotions. What if schools had computers like these 3-D ones for school allowing them to be more advanced then before. I believe these computers can allow schools to raise test scores, help counsleors, and make classes more fun.\n\nI believe that these 3-D compters could be able to help out test scores because they could tell when theres a confusing lesson or boring one. These computers could be able to detect when a student is confused on a lesson or even bored. I believe this could be helpful for teachers because they can change the way they teach there lesson in a more understanding way thus have better test scores.\n\nMy second argument on why these computers could be useful to schools is helping out kids who are scared to talk out on their probelms. I think counsleors could find a machine like this useful for students who still fear tallking to them. Not only that but these machines could help them know when kids in class are sad or angry.\n\nMy last argument is making lessons more fun. These computers can be able to see the students who find lessons or schools boring. Thus could help teachers know to make the class lessons better to have more students excited for class.\n\nI am for schools having these computers. These schools coudl realy be more advanced then ever with them. I think they would help schools with scores, help counsleors, and make classes more fun.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When Luke was a little town boy he made a huge inprovment by becoming a\n\nSeagoing Cowboy. He saw a lot of stuff on the boat as you can tell on paragraph 5 he said, \"Besides helping people,I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China.\" That would be a great experince for a small town boy. I think it was a great idea to join the program because, you could tell your grandchildren about all the things you have seen and done. If his friend had not been there to tell him about it he would have been working two jobs his whole life. Luke is probably very greatful.\n\nLuke is also the best there because he has went threw the route nine time as you see on paragraph 6. Luke point of veiw would probably tell more about what he saw during the trip and what he did. He loves to help people by this job he has helped bring all the cattle/food. Luke is very talented for having this job because you have to feed the animals about three times aday and keep them alive. You can state this information on paraghraph 6 and 7. He worked so much he got hurt and craked his ribs. He was happy to be alive. Therefore he had to stay at home to get better.\n\nLuke's point of view would also tell how fun it was to work there and he would convince you that it is a realy good job. He was very happy to get this job beause he said, \" I'm grateful for the opportunity.\" Luke created history and when he could not do the job any more people visited him all the time like students and many familys to live on all the history he made. It opened up Lukes world up when he got the job. Its also so cool how they played sports when they had free time to take the time away. Its amazing how he can get all those animals and pick them up on the boat and take them across the country and drop them off. He was realy good at his job to do that! That is how Luke Bomberger made history in America.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In 1976 a mars global surveyor image from 1998, and the latest MGS image from 2001. Twenty five years ago a \"human face\" was photographed on Mars. NASA'S Viking 1 spacecraft was trying to photograph possible landing area for the Viking 1 spacecraft's siter, Viking 2. When they were capturing photos they came across a face. Now you're saying that it was created by aliens.\n\nIf it was formed by aliens, Where did the aliens go? Where did they come from? How do you know for sure that aliens exist there has been no sightings of \"Aliens\". Nothing can live on Mars. If so why are they not still there.\n\nIt was a Martian mesa, common enough around Cyndonia, it only had ONE unusual shadow. No more than one unusual form. We had researchers, we also had all the right rescources to figure it was only a Martian mesa. Where is your evidence that it was aliens.\n\nIt was just a landform that was formed on Mars. They only sent it out to attract attention to NASA. When it did it got way to out of control. The article also said that \"the camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds\". If a high tech camera can't see through clouds then how could \"Aliens\" see through it.\n\nThe landform was equivalent of a butte or mesa, those are landforms common around the American West. If it wan't a common landform then maybe I would believe you.\n\nIt was not \"aliens\" sorry to dissapoint you. If you could please have more research next time, that would be great. Evidence is apart of what we do here at NASA.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars Is a natural landform. It is formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes. Even though many people beileve it was created by aliens few scientist do not. It is a natural landform, because a few days after the spacecraft was circling around the planet, and taking pictures NASA unvieled the image for everyone to see. The caption read, \" huge rock formation... wich rembles a human head.\"\n\nParagraph 7 on April 5, 1998, Mars flew over Cydonia for the first time. The team was taking pictures ten times sharper than the original photos. Thousand of web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared seeing that, it was a natural landform. Also that there was no alien monument after all. There is proof that after (MOC) took better pictures they were able to see that there was no alien monument after all.\n\nIn my conclusion the Face mistaking as something created by aliens is really just a natural landform. According to paragraph 12 the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In The mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted obstacles builders empire state building faced try make perfect especially designers They went alot work effort time They tried make different arrangements government people The dirigibles always near mooring mast They afraid would knock one day They also wanted become transportation future The transportation airplanes The dirigibles became world s highest soda fountain tea garden sightseers So plans nt quite work planned everything else seemed work okay", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There day I patient I nice girls aher getting nrvise push hitting So I let front lot people ready lady said stop push Then class I rise hand said patient I said I patient shut shut please dont shut I time teacher call got mad", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Getting to see China, Europe, Greece, and Italy, were one of the best parts. But that's not the only good thing about the program, once you drop off the animals, the crew members play baseball and volleyball, table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and other games to pass the time on the way to our next destination.\n\nBefore you get to have all the fun and free time, you have to take care of the animals. That means feeding and watering them, but there are some risks. On my second trip, I was put on duty as a night watchman, and one rainy night, after making my hourly report to the captain, I slipped on a wet step and fell down the ladder on my backside. My heart was beating faster than ever as I shot towards an opening on the side of the ship. Luckily, there was a small strip of metal along the edge that stopped me from plunging into the Atlantic, but I had cracked my ribs, disabling me to do work for a few days.\n\nBut the fun and travel is worth the hard labor and pain.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Facial Action Coding is used to find the emotions of people based on how their muscles move in their face. As should by Mona Lisa she is \"83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 perfect fearful, and 2 perfect angry.\" Therefore the FACS has show. Mona Lisa's emotions just by the coding. As you can see FACS would be great to help out around the world.\n\nFacial Action Coding could help a lot in schools with helping people learn better. Dr. Huang states \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" This shows that the classroom with FACS means a classroom where learning can become better. If a student is confused FACS can modify the lesson or help get the student unconfused. Also instead of students zoning out in class Facial Action Coding System will notice it. After FACS notices the student zoning out it can make sure the student zones back into the lesson. FACS can tell is someone is faking being happy. These are all reasons why VACS can help with everyday life.\n\nIn the end Facial Action Coding System could change how the school systems and the everyday life of humans are changed. With VACS no ones emotions would be saves, so it would be easy to tell if someone is scared, tired, sad, and happy. Mona Lisa was just a example what would you do it that was you?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter little exactly little You look everyone faint clue anything Now usually parents step They feed love take care importantly teach need know Growing I ve learned need help others One way I find easy help others laughter Laughter nt something effects people around also effects You ask anyone re life anyone ever made difference making laugh Or could made difference making laugh able think time happened Though I know fact someone made difference life making giggle For instance I remember day I felt alone forgotten I felt used betrayed even Growing I knew friends second family They always Though like kids fought end day everything backed normal People say CAPS come I never noticed easy I I little I thought I bad nt matter problems change still hurts fight friends You still days feel horribly alone quite sure One days littlest thing seem cut deepest This day one kind days Now see I young I third grade best friend girl named I nt remember exactly fought I remember felt I remember walking classroom near tears I d dealt cruel whatever said day really hurt I always first classroom I m sure exactly I I always In seat I sat nt move My brain taken little world sorrow That s asked wrong Even child I hated people I nt really know asked I okay embarrassed another reminder I showing weakness people probably nt care Though time different weird way helped I explained teacher happened rush tears details What really made difference everything teacher tried comfort make feel better made laugh Whatever exactly I told response nt make feel better made realize nt big deal I giggled time everyone class I happy At end day back best friends My teacher honestly favor As kid vulnerable You nt look world harsh unforgivable place That s people turn like Its environment grew around I believe I changed small effort That one little joke made realize everything s going get better long run Laughter s important ever since I helped realize effect people Even small age still make difference Since I ve used teacher taught I learned sometimes even could nt make laugh smile happy fact tried really made difference Laughing important changes people matter age", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "At end essay Winter Hibiscus Ho ends positive manner When come back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test again The reason I think author decided put show Saeng felt country So country spring take test country reminds original country spring Which makes feel like home least take test Thats author put sentence end essay", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "i don't think that the new technology is valuable. I don't think it's valuable because there is really no need to check how people feel. I think that would be valuable in other situations, like for depressed people, or for like an aslyum to check how these people feel. I think that it would be a waste of money, it would be to much money for all the features to add. The passage said that it Facial Action Coding System would have to scan your face and i think that would be a lot of money for just making something that would be able to check how you feel. You could sell it to certain people that help people out with emotional things, so like they would scan their face in the begining to see how they feel, after the meeting they have the person in charge would have to scan their face to see if that meeting changed the way they felt from the begining. It would be good for certain uses but to have it in schools wouldn't really help. I think it wouldn't help in schools because i don't think people would just like it if you just had to scan there face to see how they feel, i think you have to ask them first and if they say yes you can see how they feel. I don't think we should have this around because there is really no need why you need to check how people feel if you don't know who they are. Even if they are just students doing what they need to do i don't think they would like people knowing how they feel, i know i wouldn't like people scanning how i felt if i don't know them because some people don't like people knowing the stuff they feel and how they feel unless you know them and can trust them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One time sister mom pacint l went dicks sporting goods l wanted new bag adidas sandles crazy scocks well took hours pickout socks zebra strips blank blaid dots sister get get anything cause money So finaly I pick zebra ones l find adidas l could find like hour later one left witen size girl took right feet took l looked mom nappy l went get bag one pink left l grabbed went home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would being in a driveless car be fun? yes, but its also dangerous. Let me tell you why. Say you had a bad day or something and you just want to get rid of the pain and your only coping skill is drinking,\n\nbut you don't want to drink at home. So you drink in the car. why? because for one you don't like drinking in front of your children an why not drink in the car it gives you silence from all the loud noise the kids be making at home & you don't have to drive because the car drives itself. Okay so you stop by the liquor store and buy some 1800 remy and vodka. Now you in the car slowly drinking your problems away, temporarily though because everybody knows alcohol & drugs is not a permanent solution, But you in the car drinking and the more you drink the stronger the urge of wanting to kill your gets. You won't stop because you feel like you can drown the feelings in alcohol but out of no where you hit a big 18 wheel semi and you die. Moral of the story is if that car wouldn't have never been driveless that person probably would still be alive and at home with his kids, But since he wasn't trying to show his children bad habits and he bought that new driveless car. He felt like he was safe enough but you can never be to safe. remember that.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "At present，visitors should take responsibility for protecting the culture and environment of the resort they travelled to, but this suggestion is too impossible to keep.In my view，I strongly believe that it is possible to be a responsible tourist ，even though it is very difficult. I will prove my opinion by introducing the efforts that government can make and illustrating the role that technology can play in informing the local culture. \r\n\r\n On the one hand, visitors are more likely to be responsible visitors as long as the local government can actively launch policies on the environmental preservation aspect. For example, the harsh stripe penalty in Singapore ensures a clean environment in the city, because no one dares to litter around casually. Another similar example can be found in China. Chinese government releases a regulation about littering that anyone, including visitors, who violates the rule may pay a 100 yuan fine. Thus,this government policy forced visitors to take the responsibility for environmental protection as they are travelling.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, how culture is prevented depends on the visitors’ awareness，because they might destroy the local culture unconsciously if they do not have an access to local culture. However， nowadays，this error is less common due to the development of technology. For , example，visitors can search the local history and culture on the internet before they travel to that place and watch a documentary about their destination. Therefore，the technology provides a channel for visitors to learn about the local culture and it raises their awareness of culture preservation.\r\n\r\nIn , conclusion，Because of the supervision from the local government in tourism and the help that is provided by technology，I believe it is possible to be a responsible tourist and they should pay attention to the conservation of the environment and culture", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I would like nothing censored I nt matter right I kid choice matter I care I forced see I sure alot parents dont follow censorship rules Like buying rated CAPS movie game kid years old matter parents following law I say shrew law comes parents right tellshow kid things goverment I Think never really choice matters affects directly I think follow ever rules untill years age I wish I knew I dont Because logical reason vote affects For I know could law right going make generation less powerfull last generation I saying true I saying possible thing like happen Video games They weakness I admit I nt see reason games censored When people say things like CAPS play video games violence make murders makes frustrated There one single thing proves I known censored life learn cant even handle Its sad really beable watch news learn going world Just kept away life I nt know get censorship idea first place Did parents tell bad never watchread Where hear I beleive came media self I see headlines CAPS watching movie cause murders Then would made percentage manny turn murder watch movie compare nt What I really saying I try let peoples beleifs get head change beleifs Even writing cause someone change beleifs I really hope I nt", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some say laugh common language people people nation nation If true laughters speak languages around world In lives need laughters around When laugh nt benefit themslves also people around themThere reslut people study phscology noticed nt cry sad sad cry Same thing laughing happy laugh I remember I middle school everyone class needed go stage presention Before presentation began everyone quiet nobody talking nervous The classroom dead quiet could even hear pen drop I sat desk know I neverous I thought I would pass second I believed friends thought Suddenly heard kid laughing I know laughing whole calss started laugh could feel neverous situation gone Everyone started talk walk around That helped cliam I felt big heavy thing shoulder suddenly disappeared The story unforgetable I realized aould laughter change situation bad goodLaugh could change whole world dangerous peace I laughter I love laugh I laugh I feel everything better It could positive negative laugh dose make life better People around think I fun could feel joy I bring themLaugh important part relationship My friend I get together always laugh everything random house sky We really fun together There one time I wondered nobody group laugh together That would fun anymore Without laughters distance friends I would big gap laughter would distance us Then I noticed group people Maybe bad day amile faces When sat together nobody talked laughed lunch time They seemed friends anymore After dys started talk They laughed like good together I realized laugh could change everything It could change inside relationship also people view realationshipLaughters help us lot On mental physical social benefit us lives", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How would a person feel if they could drive places without actually driving? Seems insane, but as in the passage \"Driverless Cars are Coming,\" it possibly could happen soon. People need to have driverless cars. Here are some reasons why.\n\nFirst off, people need to have driverless cars because it is proven to be safe. As said in the passage, \"Their cars have driven more than half a million times without a crash..\" Over the past few years there has been over a billion car wrecks causing injuries or worse, death. Driverless cars can decrease the stiutation, and there will be safer roads.\n\nSecond, people need to have driverless because it is the next big thing! In the passage, they talk about how a google cofounder, Sergey Brin, evinsions a future with a public transportation system where fleets of driverless cars form a public-transport taxi system. How relieving would it be to go places, especially at night, without worrying about the next car to get wrecked? Some people say that such cars will fundamentally change the world, as said in paragraph 1.\n\nSome people may think that driverless cars would not be safe at all, and may cause more wrecks. Little do they know, driverless cars have a lot of sensors, such as a soecial touch sensor that makes sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel. Driverless cars are not completely driverless, it will require human skills when needed, as said in paragraph 7. Driverless cars do not put people in danger.\n\nIn conclusion, people need to have driverless cars. It is safe, fun. and the next big thing. Although the driver may still have to drive, he/she do not have to drive the whole time, and will not have to worry so much. Are driverless cars the future? Or illegal? If a person is for driverless cars, they should speak up and be heard.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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