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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Around the world we are seeing drastic drops of limiting car usage. In VAUBAN, Germany cars, street parking, driveways, and home garages are forbidden in this new district. In Paris after days of near-record pollution, Paris decided to ban driving to clear the air of the global city. In BOGOTA, Colombia it has been the third straight year cars have been banned with only buses and taxis. The United States of America has even passed their peak of driving in 2005 and dropped steadily since.\n\nGiving up your car may seem very hard to you, but for the people in VAUBAN, Germany seem to like it much better. In fact street parking, driveways, and home garages are forbidden in this experimental new district. Car ownership is allowed, but there are only two places to park-large garages at the edge of the development, where a car-owner buys space, for $40,000, along with a home. Nearly 70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars they seem to be much happier this way.\n\nAfter days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air. On monday people with even-numbered liscence plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a fine of 22-euro. The same would apply for odd-numbered plates the next day. Nearly 4000 drivers were fined and 27 drivers cars were impounded for their reaction to the fine.\n\nIn BOGOTA, Colombia they were in a program to spread to oher countries. They were on their third straight year that cars have been banned. Although buses and taxis were permitted for the Day Without Cars in this capital city of 7 million. The goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. Violaters faced a $25 fine.\n\nI think this is a good oppurtunity to take away stress and lower air pollution. And this is a revolutionary change.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph come back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test paragraph show hibiscus reason Saeng wants try test If hibiscus budding snow melt geese return hibiscus strong wont give test", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article is asking whether , we want the Driverless Cars to come , my opinion is no for the Driverless Cars .There are many reasons why I said no . The first reason why I said no was because , it is really gonna make me feel less of a human bein . I've grown up knowing about self driving cars . Its really , just not the type of enviroment I can see myself living in .\n\nI would rather drive a car , than a machine doing it for me . Plus when it gets itself into a uncontrolable event , it leaves it to the human too fix it .Another thing would be , about how would they even make it work . What if the car breaks out of no where , and your somewhere that you know nothing about . That's another problem , that we have if we end up having Diverless Cars .\n\nDo we still have too pay for the gas , to have a robot drive . There are many things that havent been answered in this passage . Like I said I think we shouldnt have Driverless Cars , they shouldnt change whats good , where it's at .\n\nAnother thing you cant call them driverless cars , if the people still have control over .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many different criteria by which a job applicant can be selected but in today's world interview is the primary form of selecting candidates for most big companies. Some people believe that it's the right way to go ahead but some people disagree and feel that an interview is not at all feasible and should consider other methods. In my opinion, I disagree that an interview is not a reliable method, and other methods are better. I believe that it is reliable, but there are many other methods which are equally good and the choice is on the recruiter as to which one they find suitable as per their needs. \n\nThere are many reasons why most large organizations choose interviews as their preferred criteria to hire people, one of them being able to judge the aspirant on basis of their interpersonal and communication skills. For instance, interviews have face-to-face interactions where the candidates have to answer in-prompt questions, from which personality traits can be judged. Also, by asking case study type questions, employees can be evaluated on the ability to handle pressure, confidence, and their ability to think outside the box. \n\nHowever, many other selection methods have varied advantages. One of the commonly known methods is a written test. This selection basis is preferred when the focus is on judging the (theoretical/conceptual) knowledge of the person. Another conventional selection basis is group discussions by which a candidate can be judged on his communication skills and his ability to convince people. This form of the process is majorly used for jobs that require employees to interact with other people, for example, sales jobs. Last but not least, there can be a combination of these three methods like written tests, followed by group discussion and finally personal interview which will ensure the candidate is thoroughly judged on skills checking everything from personality traits to knowledge and also communication skills.\n\nTo conclude, the hiring process depends on the job requirement. In some situations, conducting interviews is more apt, whereas in some situations other methods have more advantages.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I don't think that driverless cars would be a good idea. I think that many people would make them unsafe or malfunctions could be very dangerous. If there were only a few of these cars and not a large amount that would be better.\n\nThere can be people that try to steal things from these cars or purposly vandalize them. There's a chance that people could also sabotage them which could be very dangerous. People might also try driving the cars while under the influence because they'll know they're self driving but when it's time for them to drive it could lead to many accidents. If a car were also to malfunction while on the road it could put many peoples lives in danger or if there's an accident without a driver it could cost lots of money for repairs. If they make a large amount of these cars, lots of money would be spent on making them, and repairing them.\n\nI think that these driverless cars, while being useful at times, will end up being a bigger burden on people than it will actually help.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people believe that young people should be required to participate in social work during their free time to benefit both the individual and society. I agree with this idea and will explain why in the following paragraphs.\r\n\r\nThe first reason to support mandatory social work for young people is the positive impact it can have on the community. When young people get involved in their community, it can lead to significant development in various areas. For example, providing free education to illiterate individuals can greatly benefit society. Therefore, it is important for the younger generation to contribute to society.\r\n\r\nAnother reason to support mandatory social work is the positive effect it can have on the individual's life. By helping others, young people can develop a sense of humanity and compassion. Sharing knowledge with others can also enhance their own understanding and improve their lifestyle.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, requiring young people to participate in social work during their free time can lead to significant benefits for both the individual and society. It can promote development and improve the quality of life for everyone involved. Therefore, I support this idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" it talks about how technology is used to read human expressions. I'm going to give my opinion on technology reading students emotions. I think that it is good for us to have something like this because it will help us see what people are thinking. In the article paragraph five the author says that we could identify each others expressions but we don't really know what each one means for example being happy, sad, or angry can have different looks and we might not know what they are. The author also states that with his computer he can tell what people are thinking if they are upset or excited, who knew that one expression could mean so many things. Sometimes the muscles are used to show if a politician or celebrity is telling the truth, it can also tell if someone is doing a genuine or forced smile. That is my opinion on \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" and I think it would be amazing to have.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The lone biker Rough Road Ahead Do exceed posted speed limit strongly affected features landscape The sun important factor drives first consume water quickly drives search water sourceThe sun beginning beat I barely noticed I hitting water bottles pretty regularly quote reveals even though biker acknowledged sun body required water depleting supply water bottles A lack water feeling two hundred degrees flavor battery acid The water bike able find consumable The important factors matter survival fish camp biker finally reaches I stumbled rather modern bathroom drank deeply sink The biker brink dehydration fish camp finally reganed strength continue journey", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Trying and studying new things can turn out to be good even though there could\n\nbe negative tihngs about it. In this article the author tell us on how studying venus can turn out to be good even though it has some dangers in it. He talks about how Venus is almost identical to Earth and why we should try to study it.\n\nIn the second through third paragraph he mentions on why he says scientists\n\ndon't like to really study Venus. He mentions how the planet is hot for us too study and how 97% of it is covered by a carbon dioxide atmosphere. Also he mentions how our spacecraft can't last more than a few hours. He says that none of that should stop us from studying Venus because there is lots of good things about that planet.\n\nHe mentions how Venus was once a Earth-like planet in our solar system long ago. He also says how Venus was probably covered by ocean and had life in the planet just like Earth. He mentions in a praragraph on how some Venus has some analogous features just like Earth. In prargraph 4 he says \" The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and crates.\" Also he says how Venus could be our closest option for a planet visit because it is right next to earth just like Mars is.\n\nIn other paragraphs he mentions how NASA is trying to send some humans to go out and study Venus by sending them there. He mentions how they can use a hovering vehicle to stay out of the storms to be albe to study the planet. The paragraph also says how it would be 170 degrees fahrenheit , but the pressure would be close to sea level on Earth. It also says how the conditions may not be be easy, but it could be survivable for humans.\n\nStudying Venus could turn out to be a good thing for all of us humans. There could be new things to learn about the planet that could probably help us here on Earth one day. Even though there is some critical conditions on the planet it shouldn't stop us from studying it. So all we have to do is give Venus a chance for study.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I patient I witch little bad girls sisters house My sister asked I wanted spend I god kids came That sister rembend go So morning left kids hours So I wait patiently come back Finaly", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays education is a crucial debate for almost all humanity and it is important for youngsters as well as adult population. In my opinion, the government should allocate equal resources and investments for elders and youngsters. So in this essay I will delve into that ideology.\n\nTo begin with, young population is our future and in society tons of individuals must prioritized this vital stance because the ability of fast comprehension and learning of kids. A highly educated kid with literacy might contribute to the countries economy and provide a big economic growth in the future.\n\nOn the other hand, the government should make an investment to elderly people likewise the young population of the country because being illiterate as an adult is conclusively compelling in each aspect of life. For example, increasing the education level among adults maintains a high employment and workforce with equipped crowd. \n\nTo conclude, having discussed the topic in detail, it is important to strike a balance between investing in education for adults and youngsters at the same time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is hard to deny that luck of housing quite widespread problem nowadays. Furthermore , housing scarcity can be a source of all subsequent issues for community. Some people reckon that only authorities can find a solution. From my point of view , it is quite a logical statement,and I definitely support it.\r\n\r\nConsidering steps that should be taken by governments,there are several ways to work it out. Firstly, authorities should encourage people to move countryside. And in order to do it effectively, they should use various methods to involve people. And one of this method is running a campaign in social media ,where will be discussed all benefits of living in a village. Additionally, authorities have to pay attention to ways to get to the city from village ,as a lot of citizens won’t lose their jobs because of the moving countryside. So that’s why it is important to make it convenient and inexpensive. \r\n\r\nReturning again to job question, governments of the country should provide more vacancy suggestions in the rural areas as, more than 90 percentage of people moved to metropolis just for getting a well-paid job. If job opportunities increased,people would be more willing to move countryside. It would be nice to mention latest poll conducted by authorities of the Maharashtra province demonstrated that near 35 percentage of youths don’t wanna live in a large city,but forced to do that, due to luck of job suggestions. \r\n\r\nHowever ,it should be mentioned, that citizens and builders also play an important role in solving this problem. They could help authorities by doing at least something like invest more in building skyscrapers and flats. Apartment usually require less space on the land, whereas, bungalows require it more. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, notwithstanding the fact,that luck of housing is become more common issue among population,it can be solved by a few smart decision. In general only governments can influence on it effectively, but of course with citizens support.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A certain number of individuals feel that the only way the government can successfully tackle the rate of famine and poverty is by improving the growth of the economy, on the other hand others believe this growth is having a detrimental effect in the society and as a result should be shut down. In my opinion, despite the harmful effects of economic growth, I believe that growing the economy by building infrastructures will create jobs which will end the problems.\n\nTo begin with, one of the main causes of why people are poor and cannot afford daily meals is because they are unemployed. If the government should focus more energy and money into the development of infrastructures such as the building of hospitals, airports, train stations and sanitary systems, these will create thousands of jobs for people, thus ending the hungry strike and poverty among their citizens. For instance, Togo that was previously one of the poorest countries in the world, with 30 % of its population living in poverty, is now the second blooming economy in Africa after their new president invested the 1 trillion dollars they borrowed from the World Bank into infrastructure.\n\nHowever, other people feel that the ill effects of economic growth should not be over looked particularly in regards to pollution and overpopulation that might result from this growth. They are of the opinion that people will tend to move to areas where infrastructures are being built which will lead to more diseases from being overpopulated. Additionally, they are concerned that the crime rate will also go on in areas like train stations and airport at night because of the lack of sophisticated police force. In my opinion, I disagree with this notion as there have been examples of countries that have undergone rapid development without problems such as air pollution, overpopulation and increase in criminal activity. \n\nTo conclude, quite a decent number of people believe the key to eradicating poverty is for the government to develop the economy, while others are more worried about the drawbacks associated with economic growth and should therefore be stopped. In my candid opinion, I agree with the notion that an improvement in the economy is the most effective way to end poverty, moreover a better planning prior to the development of the economy will negate any possible drawback.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars sound like something that you could only see in a Si-Fi movie. They are here to chang the world and trying to make it a better place. Driving makes a hug impact in the human life. Ever since the first car was invented, humans have had to travel in a shorter way. The transportation way is heading a new direction since techology is improving we can see the difference bewteen the first car to a car that could be able to drive by itself.\n\nHaving a future where no body has to drive a car by themselves sounds pretty impresive. But you also have to think about what could those types of cars can give us and make our lifes better. These new inventions have not all been successful, but the companies making them are making progress by finding new ways to make these types of cars go more then just a small traveling distance and then stop. In my point of view these cars could actually give us the chance of not having to stop for a rest when you're tired, watch movies or televison shows while your car is still running. They could save us from spending so much money on gas and some could be safe for the enviroment.\n\nCompanies such as Google, have had cars that could be drive independently under specific conditons since 2009. There have been cars that have drove more then just a few miles with out even causing an accident. Cars that are truly driverless may help dealing with complicated traffic issues.Not only are they working on Smart cars but also smart roads.In order for the car to travel where you would like to go, they might develop a system where the road could have a binary code in order for the car to remember the places you travle to.\n\nThe car would really have to be smarter for those types of ideas, they have worked with a lot of people to have a clear view of what the car could look and drive like. Every car needs ways to protect the passengers. And so automakers find new ways to prevent accidents incase they every happen with these types of cars. Automakers are continuing their work on the ways there could be a car that has all the abilities of having good safety measures and having the ability to drive on there own.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Problems face Building dirigibles dock lack Suitable land area mooring mast could Be Simply Drop empire state Building flat roof top A dirigible A thousand feet held By cable tether would add lot stress frame stress dirigible load wind pressure would transmitted way foundation And Reason safety Reason dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the usage of this new technology to read emotion has alot of potential for many things. It can read off your emotion even if your faking your smile, frown, etc. The use of this technology to read the emotional expression of students in a classroom is valuable because it can benefit the students learning, it can make learning more enjoyable and can help the student with any conflict they are facing inside or outside of school.\n\nThis new usage of technology can be used to benefit many people. This new technology can benefit students by being able to know their emotional expression and how they feel that day this can lead to teachers helping cheer up the class if the majority are not doing the best. this could also detect the stress/worried emotion in a student letting a teacher now that they may be overworking their students. This is similar to how\n\nthey said ¨you could probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by looking on her face.¨ if a teacher knew directly how stressed/worried you were they might slow down or postpone due dates for later dates.\n\nThis new technology can make the student into a new person and change their learning expierences. This new technology to read the emotional expressions of students can make a class enjoyable. For instance if you are not enjoying a class and or the class has always been boring or you know that you struggle in that subject this new technology can change that. This new technology can sense the emotions you feel class and inform the teacher on how you feel leading to the teacher making changes to the class or how he teaches. This was best explain when the article stated ¨A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, ¨Dr. Huang predicts. ¨Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\". this explains it all and how a teacher could use this to their advantage.\n\nThe usage of this new emotional expression reading technology could detect emotions that could cause dangerous things. for instance they can help a student who may be dealing with something outside or inside of the school. This new technology can help prevent bullying, schoolshootings, self-harm, etc. If this technology is implanted anytime soon it could save many peoples lives. this new technology even has the power to \" Indicate the difference betweem a genuine smile and a forced one.¨ this could really identify any troubled students and prevent them from doing anything risky\n\nOverall this technology could really benifit all schools around the world. They have the potential to change learning, make students happier, prevent dangerous activity and develop new ways of learning. If this tech was implanted many years we could have prevented lots of bullying, shootings and sef-harm.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper see owning computer effect Having computer make lazy behavier indoors inside dont hang family friends Everyone loves computer ever thought Spending day even half day computer make lazy When lazy becoming lazy dont want anything without anything become overweight So need exersize s good exersizing protect health problems diebities Get computer go walk Why would anyone want indoors computer go enjoy nature posses Being drawn computer indoors instead breathing fresh clean air outside Being outside lots fun You go swimming even picnic local park When outside also see breathtaking scenery wild animals exotic plants flowers live among us If go outside atleast hour day ll see fore sure much better computer Staying computer long realy matters friends family Why talk internet friend meet something fun Friends family realy important nt spend time become upset Being friends family supposed best moments life dont spend computer Go call friend something fun I hope understand computer one best idea Having computer make lazy enjoying nature spend time family friends If everyone got computer least hour day ll live happier healthier life So turn computer get couch enjoy life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The articual is about The Challenge of Exploring Venus. The claim is about that can Venus be worhy pursuit despite the dangers. From the text it explains \" Atn thirrty-plus miles above the surface, tempertures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earths.\" \" Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels.\" \" Not easy conditions, but survivable survivable for humans.\" okay so its explains why its good to be there but its bad to be there.\n\nA claim from the text it shows that why we going Venus it say that \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" \"Our travles on earth and beyond should not be limmited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edged of imagination and innvation.\" this shows why me might go Venus later on in life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author memoir created many different moods One moods author set sympathetic sense sympathy parents could live oneroom furnished apartment Another mood created mood proud The author set talking born simple house adored music culture cooking family The author set mood sadness stated time overt racism norm segregation prevailed United States This creates sad mood racism bad concept also family Cuban Other moods author set moods gratetfulness happiness The author set mood gratefulness towards end excerpt started saying thankful selfless parents caring parents Also said humble house Cuban feast always filled air scent music life love Happiness mood author lived good home family full love care said I never forget parents turned simple house home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many individuals believe that attending University or college is better than getting work straight after graduating from high school. Young people think it is not ideal and lose their time. I will provide an opinion at the end of the essay.\n\nOn the one hand, teenagers want to get an operation right after the high academy. They can make money to help their family with the economy. Besides, they also want to become more mature and independent to relieve on parents' living expenses. If they have a particular career, they will feel responsible.\n\nOn the other hand, it is very easy to understand when studying at a University or college which will have a lot of advantages. Firstly, they will have more knowledge and widens their vision of the world. And they believe that certificate can help them get into a high part profession to pursue prospective employment, there will be a promising career path. Moreover, it also helps to get an office more easily. Because now higher education is suitable for people to enrich their life experiences after entering the workforce right after high school.\n\n To conclude, things that provide evidence for these two views when both viewpoints. it is crystal clear that studying at university or college is the best route to success in a career. Every teenager should choose higher education rather than work after school right away. Furthermore, each person needs to have a task to learn more knowledge, skills and earn money to help support the family economy", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What if we could tell how all of the people us were without even asking. Most people can tell when someone is sad, happy, or mad just by looking at them, but what happens when that person is hiding how they are truely feeling. What then? Well new techonlogy can allow us to see exctly how someone, who is trying to hide there emotions, is feeling. This is unfair for many reasons. The technology may be cool but people have a right to keep how they are feeling a secert.\n\nThe computer software works by making a 3-D computer model of the face; the computer watches the different muscles in the face move to identify how the person is feeling. The technolgy delevopted by Dr. Huang can even calculate mixed emotions with the exact percent of how strong the emotions are. Dr. Huang obseres that \"facial expressions for each emotion are universal\" I htought people expressed emotions in different ways though? Dr Hoang also states that \"even though individuals often show verying degrees of expression.\"\n\nPeople have a right to not tell people how they are feeling. Did we really need to know the Mona Lisa was 9 percent disgusted? Now that raises the question of why? Was Leonardo de Vinci's hair messed up? Or did she think he needed to take a shower? What is the point in knowing someone is feelings without knowing why? We do not need technology to ask someone how they are feeling. or even why the are feeling the way they are feeling that way.\n\nThere are really no benfits to knowing how someone is feeling without knowing why. The technology is very cool. It is crazy how Dr Huang was able to develope a computer that uses muscle movment to idenitfy emotions. The technology is useless though unless you are prepare and willing to ask why?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "An increasing number of people are concerned about the purpose of teaching sports at schools. Many people believe that schools should offer competitive sports in a curriculum, while others are against it because it may negatively affect children. In my opinion, I would argue that competitive sports should not be allowed at schools as they may bring many drawbacks to children.\n\nIt is a belief that competitive sports bring many advantages for children in the future. First, competition is a natural instinct in humans, and it is likely to strengthen children’s personalities. Therefore, competition is healthy because it pushes people to give their best or even over their limitation. Second, children need to experience these competitions at schools. This is due to the fact that when they graduate from schools, they have to step into the real world where people have to compete with one another to get jobs in daily life.\n\nOn the other hand, the negative effects of competitive sports should not be overlooked. The first reason is that sports should provide children with a sense of enjoyment rather than competition. Addionally, playing sports with their peers can build their relationships and teamwork skills. If competitive sports are brought to the curriculum, their relationships will be disjointed and fragmented. Another consideration is that playing sports encourages children to have physical and mental development, meaning that they become healthier and may have fewer diseases, such as diabetes. Whereas competitive sports may make them feel stressed because they have to against one another for higher grades.\n\nIn conclusion, sports are great activities for children’s development. Personally, I believe that competition in schools brings more harm than benefits.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wondered what it would be like to have to pay less on gas? Or that to have less fuel in the cars you are driving today? Well I have. Ever since I've started driving I'm always thinking why am I paying so much for gas. Or why am I putting alot of gas in my car. Well the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" is thinking the way I'm thinking. I think the driverless cars should be made in the future because it's less fuel, less crashes, and less driving.\n\nThese cars are having less fuel then any other cars. These cars can be expensive to buy but you don't have to put as much fuel as anyother car. These cars can be really cheap to have because you don't need as much gas. Who doesn't want a car where you don't have to put as much gas. Well I know I want a car like that because putting gas and paying alot of money for gas is so much. In paragrapg one says \"The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer more flexibility than a bus.\" This sentence is saying the cars that they are making are going to use half the fuel of today's taxis. Imagine how many times does a taxi put gas. Well now it's going to be half of what they are putting if they get one of these cars. A taxi puts alot of gas everyday and now putting half? Well taxi's are going to become cheaper.\n\nThese cars have less crashes. For right now there is alot of crashes in the U.S. Imagine having a car like this with less crashes means less people dying and more people living and not being afarid to go out and worry that what if they get in a car accident. In paragraph two says \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash, but so far.\". In this paragraph it says that the cars have been on the road for more than half a millon miles without a crash. A regular car can be driving for 10 miles or not even 10 miles maybe like 5 miles and they have a crash. The difference between a regular car and a driverless cars is that a regular car has more chances to be in a car crash then the other cars.\n\nThese cars you don't have to drive as much. It's less driving then regular cars. Yes, there are times where you are going to have to take control of the wheel but other then that you are not driving it's the car that's driving. \"They still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigationg through roadwork or accidents.\" (paragraph two). In that quote thats honestly the only reason why you would have to take control of the car but other then that you really don't need to be driving it. The car drives itself. You can just sit back or lay down and relax if you are tired of driving. These cars would work if you would go one long vacation trips like going to Mexico or to California. They would work because you can relax and have a nice road trip and not be as tired.\n\nI think that driverless cars should be made in the future because it's less fuel, less crashes, and less driving. All those things in a car would be nice so we don't have to worry about anything.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the present day, there are many advanced technologies that have been developed, and many of the technologies have developed to make our life easier than before. However, it is undeniable that some of these technologies especially A.I robots come to replace us in many jobs, such as service jobs, lawyers, drivers, or even medical jobs. The following paragraph will be discussing my perspective. Therefore, the conclusion has been reached. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, from my perspective I cannot entirely agree with the statement because there are some jobs that will not be replaced by A.I robots. The first example is engineering jobs, I believe that this job cannot be replaced by A.I robots due to that engineering jobs need more than the knowledge in engineering fields, it needs to has creative thinking and improvise thinking that A.I robots are not good as humans, and finally for why engineer jobs will not be replaced by A.I robots which is engineering jobs is the field that create the robots, so the robots still need engineers to fix their errors or problems. \r\n\r\nMoreover, other jobs that I believe that it will not be replaced by the robots are architect, singer, actor and actress because all of these jobs require highly creative thinking and emotion in their works and the reason that why robots cannot take over all of these jobs is due to that the robots have a logical thinking and others is follow the order that has been assigned. They do not have own thinking only a number for them to use.\r\n\r\n In summary, the former and latter paragraph have already provided the reasons and examples from my point of view. However, I believe that some of jobs should be taken by the robots such as construction worker, accountant, or plants worker because the A.I robots have a percentage for making a mistake lower than humans.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear senator,\n\nI belive that Electoral college is unfair in many ways, and maybe it would be good to keep the election by popular vote for the United States. The reasons why changing the election to Electoral college would be; smaller states would not see the candates because they would go to the bigger states like California, Texas and other states that are bigger then ohio or south carolina some of this states didn't even see a campaing ad how sad is that because this country is know for the equalness off every one but yet the electoral college forgets about seventeen states that are small because their vote doesn't matter.?\n\nKeeping the election by popular vote would be the best. The fact that the people of the United States are able to see and vote for whom they perfer not the electors who elect the president. You might think that keeping the electoral college election is not as bad or unfair because it can help elect a president when the one of the presidents vote are majotite of vote it can help a run off election but I beive the best way to select the president of the U.S would be by letting the people chosse what they think is the best so the people know they are noticed in this contry.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The new Facial Action Coding System was valuable. Helps us communicate in better ways. The new software would help detect how you feel. It detects if you really feel a different emotion according to the muscles you use.\n\nStaring into someones eyes and trying to calculate how they feel inside is difficult. However, we are not all good on hiding emotions. According to the article, the way you physically move your faces helps you detect on how you are feeling. If you look upset or worried it would be easy detect and when someone realize they while try communicating with you. Having to hide emotions and not communicate it is easier to notice in a person.\n\nThe software will help recognize your emotions just by looking at your face. For example, in the article it says \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\". It will be helpful to the instructor to have more coefficient lessons for the students. The article also tells you \"most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication\". The creator of the software(Dr. Huang) suggest that computers should understand that just like us human do.\n\nMuscles moving physically can really give a clue on how your emotions are at the moment you react. According to the passage when you lift up your eyebrows it shows that you are surprised. Other examples are when you smile to the sideways, you are fake smiling. In the passage, it also indicates that when you see somebodies facial emotion it can make you feel what they feel. Muscles that begin at your cheek bones show that you are giving a real smile.\n\nMost people believe that being able to detect someone's facial emotions can be helpful because we can communicate when they are sad or worried. Beong able to celebrate with someone that you are happy or excited can be useful thank you to the computer software. Having the ability to detect feelings can help get better solutions, not only physically but mentally as well. Muscles can always help you indicate someone else's emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Presently famous personalities are more known for their luxurious lifestyle and richness than their talents and performances, which negatively influences the younger generation. I entirely agree that famous personalities are a bad influence. In the subsequent paragraphs, I shall explain how famous personalities set bad examples for young people. \n\nFirstly, some personalities are only famously known for their richness and attractive lifestyle, and often it adversely affects the psyche of the younger generation. They make you think it is mandatory to look graceful and must buy expensive products. Their acting skills might be mediocre, but they have become a sensation through the public display of their materialistic wealth and charming lifestyle. At times these personalities end up engaging in habits like smoking, excessive drinking, or drugs, which negatively influence the younger generation. \n\nAdditionally, celebrities have a harmful effect on the self-esteem of young people. Celebrities commonly display and associate beauty with perfect bodies. When youngsters see that, they want to look like them. While trying to imitate them and grow thin, youngsters develop eating disorders. Also, dissatisfaction among youngsters with live-like celebrities often leads to seriously negative health consequences. \n\nBesides the fact that certain good personalities like Bill Gates and Ratan Tata inspire youngsters to achieve their goals through hard work and dedication, there are a significant majority of celebrities who are hypocritical. \n\nTo sum up, famous personalities do negatively influence the youth through their public display of wealth and unhealthy habits which harm the mental health of the younger generation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It night eve I couldnt hardly wait In family eve go grandparents house When talk eat favorite open presents As mom dad I drove grandparents house I couldnt open car door fast enough I sprinted front door rang door bell hundred times CAPS hello grandpa said CAPS eat fast I open presents yah sure done eating I sprinted stairs fast I could I couldnt wait As I waited patiently old relatives opened presents finally turn I ripped wrapping paper saw game Since first present I open fast I waited paitently turn", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There was a world before cars. One without polluted air, green house gasses, and holes in the O-ZONE layer. Transportation was done the old fashioned way, with your two legs. Aside from your legs, we now have other methods of transportation aside from legs and motor vehicles, such as bikes. Technology is on the rise.. But are cars on their way down?\n\nA new trend is starting, and like all good trends they have hefty price tag. An excerpt from \"In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars\" written by Elisabeth Rosenthal in the\n\nNew York Times . In paragraph two it gives an example of the expensive lifestyle to live if you would choose to live with a car, \"Car ownership is allowed, but there are only two places to park--large garages at the edge of the development, where a car-owner buys a space, for 40,000, along with a home.\" Not going green comes with a price tag. Residents of this new community are pleased with the cut down on motor vehicles. Less stress, less pollution. According to the text in paragraph five \"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe.\" 12% may not seem like much, but if you look at the big picture, its quite the amount.\n\nAnother issue that is caused by motor vehicles is smog. Smog is what happens when there is fog and a mixure of gasses created by the exhaust in a motor vehicle. Pollution in Paris is at its all time high. In an article from the\n\nChicago Tribune by Robert Duffer, \"Paris bans driving due to smog\" in paragraph eleven says, \"On Monday motorists with even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars ar home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31). The same would apply to the odd-numbered plates the following day.\" This ban gives people the opportunity to cut back on fuel by car pooling, taking public transportation, or riding a bike. Many drivers did not cooperate and approximately 4,000 drivers were fined. Consistency is key, will Paris continue the cut back?\n\nAround the world officials are working to cut back. Bogota, Colombia has the car free program which bans all but busses and taxi's and leaving anyone who doesnt obey to pay a 25$ fine. In an excerpt from \"Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota\" by Andrew Selsky written in the\n\nSeattle Times paragraph twent two says, \"The turnout was large, despite gray clouds that dumped occasional rain showers on Bogota.\" This shows although there is bad weather people are still set on reducing motor vehicle transportation and decreasing smog. Along with the reduction of car usage Bogota is encouraging sports and outdoor play. Sidewalks have been enlarged and smoothed with leaves way for walkers and bikers. Parks have opened up as well as sports centers.\n\nAre use of motor vehicles really decreasing? In an excerpt from, \"The End of Car Culture\" by Elisabeth Rosenthal from the\n\nNew York Times in paragraph 41 shows evidence, \"A study last year found that driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009....\" Car culture is ending, and going green has just begun. Around the world from Paris, to Bogota, to the United States we are all cutting back on motor vehicle use. This will be a project that takes many years to finish but with the team work of the world, most definately anything can happen.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everyone knows what the Mona Lisa, one of the worlds most famous paintings held at the Louvre in France and now they are using it for to find the emotions in it. The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because it can show us how there day has been and how they are acting.\n\nOne example is that how they are acting because in the article, it mentions: \"According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial mescles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them. (\"Putting on a happy face\" actually works!) A renowned drama coach, Constantin Stanislavsky, had his actors carefully reproduce smiling and frowning as a way to create these emotions on stage. Empathy (feeling someone else's emotional state) may happen because we unconsciously imitate another person's facial expressions\" (D'Alto). This explains to us that we can pick up other people's emotions by being around them of talking to them.\n\nAnother reasoning is that how there day has been because it says in the article: \"In fact, we humans perform this same impressive \"calculation\" every day. For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face. Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc. Yet Dr. Huang observesthat artists such as da Vinci studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotions. His new computer software stores similar anatomical information as electronic code. Perhaps Dr. Huang's emotion algorithms are a different sort of \"Da Vinci Code\" (D'Alto). This explains that you can tell someone's emotion by looking at them and you can how there day has been going.\n\nAs you can see, we should have the Facial Action Coding System because of how it can show us how there day has been and how it can change their emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The goverment uses a system of elctoral votes well i dont think we should during the presidential election the people shouldnt be voting for an elector who is gonna vote for them.\n\nwe shouldnt have an electoral vote because as always there would be a close election and the person with the popular vote can somtimes lose the presidency \"and yet the electoral college still has its deffenders what gives\". The bad thing is knowyone really votes for the president with an electoral college depending on what state you live in you\"ll have a certain amount of demacrat for the person an a certain amount of republican and depending on who you chose theyll get those 34 votes why is that fair.\n\nElectoral colleges can really mess things up because when you vote you vote for somyone who wouldnt even be in the public office so who are vyou really voting for somtimes the state conventions make them choose who thier voting for. most of all this process can really confuse you and make you choose the wrong canidate. Then if theres a tie then the votes get xent somwere else were morev strangers that you dont know vote on youre votes\n\nThe goverment uses a system of electoral votes i dont think we should do that because every state has an uneven number of electoral votes wich can kinda throw the hole voting process off so let the people have thier own say in wh they want to vote for", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars\n\nHave you ever seen a landmark that looks like something else? In 1976 a Mars roover named Viking 1 spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face. This just hapened to be huge rocks together looking like a face. NASA named this the \"Face on Mars.\" The \"Face on Mars\" has become a pop icon. It has appeared in a Hollywood film, books, magazines, radio talk shows, and even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years! The Face is not a natural landform because it looks exactly like a face, its on Mars which could be an alien, and many roovers have seen the Face when they go to Mars.\n\nThe Face is not a natural landform because it looks exactly like a face. How can we not know that it is not an alien. NASA people can't go up to Mars to look at it face-to-face. Roovers can only take pictures of it. Mars is too far away that NASA can't send people up there to make sure it is an alien. There isn't any oxygen up there so people could breathe.\n\nThe Face is on Mars, which could be an alien. People have always thought that there were aliens on Mars. This time there actually could be one on Mars. Life on Mars could be a real thing. Mars is a eird place because it is red, unlike Earth which is mostly blue and green.\n\nThe Face is a natural landform because NASA has proven that there can't be any life form on Mars. There is nothing that they would be able to eat to stay alive. The planet is red and there isn't any water or anything to drink for them to survive. There is no possible way for any life form to survive on Mars.\n\nThere is a natural landform on Mars that looks like a face because huge rocks were fromed together looking like a face. This is all nature, there is no way that aliens could live on this planet. Natural landforms all around the universe. Mountains and hills are all over Earth. Nature takes control of everything that is alive. The Face is a natural landform and not some kind of alien.\n\nThe\"Face on Mars\" is a natural landform because aliens can't live on a planet without anything to survive, natural ladforms are all over the universe, and the Face is just huge rocks formed together looking like a face. I strongly believe that this is not an alien, and that this is a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinion, driverless cars sound like they can be very covienent and nnovative. Both of which (convienence and innovation) are never bad. We can't stay the same forever. We'll die that way. As a planet, we need to start moving forward\n\nBut if the idea of driverless cars isn't executed correctly, it too can kill us. And since I don't want to die yet, I think the people who make these things need to do a little tweaking before they put them on the market.\n\nBeing a young teen who recently recieved his driver's license, I actually like driving. So if driverless cars were available today, I'd be down for it as long as there was an option to choose when it's driverless. I like going fast and bumping music. I wouldn't want to sit there like a robot and wait for the car to tell me when it's my turn to drive. Everything about that idea just sounds trash.\n\nHowever if I as the one in charge were able to choose when the car was driverless, it would be lit. I could take naps on long roadtrips. Therefore, I'd never be tired. But in order to take a nap, the driverless car must be 100% trustworthy and able to drive like a human would. So I think if the people making these things would step up their game a bit, driverless cars could be very convienent.\n\nBut gas is another thing. I have no idea how cars work, but if driverless cars would help me save money then I'm all for it. Being a young businessman with swag out the roof, one of the main things I care about is my money and what I spend it on. I need to be able to cop the new Palace drop, dude! I can't be wasting my moeny on gas. It's all about priorities. So if driverless cars can help me afford what's really important to me, then awesome.\n\nWith all that being said, I'm down for driverless cars. I just think the idea of them needs to be tweaked a little. They need to be 100% trustworthy and able to drive JUST like a human who's as alert as a study hall teacher. Also, they need to have an option where you can go from driverless to non-driverless, because some of us like driving. I have faith that this can happen, because anything can happen. Cheers, fellas.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist like goup hill along long bumpy type roads Then essay says Rough road ahead exceed posted speed limit make things difficult average Especially lack water make things worse", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Home The Blueprints Our Lives talks fashion designers life One example paragraph page talks backround Narciso states My parent originaly Cuba arrived United States The paragraph goes talking parents names Nex paragraph page This sets mood growing new inviorment For example States Growing new instilled great Family nothing blood relative Quite contrary nieborhood made mostly Spanish Cuban Italian immigrants tim overt racism norm segregation prevailed United States page paragraph It shows mood loves house For example says I never forget house gracious neiborhood many thing I learned love In conclusion mood creates author", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke went up to people asking if they want to join or participate in the Seagoing Cowboy program.But alot of people disagreed.One lady said that she dose'nt want her child being away from her but luke explained to her that its not that bad but she didnt listen.So Luke was tired of being rejected so Luke put in ad in the news paper and he also added how he became a Seagoing Cowboy and how it changed his life.And the next day Luke checked if anyone participated and so far 14 kids joined and that made Luke really excited and happy. The parents asked if Luke can meet the kids so Luke did and one boy named Josh Maiz came up to him and said ''I want to be like you, you are really confiedent and brave thats why I joined and im glad i met you''. Luke had a tear in his eye and Luke was confiedent and had hope in the kids. And the parents and everyone was happy.The next day Luke went to get the paper and he saw that there was a story about him in the news paper so he looked at the right hand corner to see who wrote this and it said ''Josh maiz''.The End", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many factors that makes Venus a very challenging planet for humans to study. Although Venus is the closest planet to Earth, there are many risks that have made it a very challenging place to examine more closely. Venus is the second planet from the sun which makes it very hard to achieve missions. All of the previous missions were unmanned because no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. In the article \"The Challenging of Exploring Venus,\" the author supports his claim that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents by telling the reader about Venus's thick atmosphere, NASA's possible solution to Venus's hostile conditions, and all of the forms of light that it cannot penetrate.\n\nStudying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite a challenge it presents, like Venus's thick atmostphere. The planet's surface and the atmospheric pressure is much more greater than what people experience on Earth. The temperature is so much greater that it would crush a submarne. Paragraph 3 states, \"Also notable, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun.\" There are too many risks from this planet being the hottest planet in the solar system, for people to explore it. It wouldn't be safe for people to experience this incredibly hot planet.\n\nAnother challenge that studying Venus brings to the reader, is NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus. Vehicles would be hovering miles above the landscape to avoid the ground conditions by staying up and out of the way. Paragraph 5 states, \"At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth.\" It could be very dangerous with people many miles above the surface, along with the termpature very high. Although it's survivable for humans, it's still very dangerous.\n\nAnother challenge that studying Venus brings to the reader is all of the forms of light that it cannot penetrate. Since the light isn't penetrating the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography effectively, people only receive limited insite on ground conditions on Venus. People have to look at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet to even get a little bit of insight. Paragraph 6 says, \"Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks.\" Since researchers can't take samples of things like gas, or rocks from a distance, they are working on innovations that would allow their machines to last long enought to help with their knowledge of Venus.\n\nStudying Venus has many challenges to go along with it. Although studying this planet is a worthy pursuit, some dangers were presented by telling the reader about Venus's thick atmosphere, NASA's possible solution to Venus's hostile conditions, and all of the forms of light that it cannot penetrate. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system which makes it hard for people to explore it if the pressure is so high. Vehicles hover miles above the landscape to avoid the ground conditions by staying up and out of the way. Since it's so hard to get close the Venus because of its risks, people have to look at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet to even get a little bit of insight. Although there are many dangers that come with exploring Venus, people get so much out of the result if researchers get to exploring what they needed to, to inform the rest of the people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus\n\nThe author supports for the idea by studing venus is a worthy pursuit desoite the danger because the author gives ideas and facts about venus and how in his oppinoin, how venus is would be amazing to study and how astronomers are facinated by venus although it could be dangers to get their becuse in the article the author states, \"since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours, maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on venus in more than three decades.\" this line from the text explains how its dangerous to go because no spacecraft was able to land. Another example to support this text is \"Numerous factors coontribute to venus's reputation as a challeging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us.\" this lne supports this text because it explains how human take these challenges knowing that anything could happen, even if their life is lost.\n\nNASA is working on other approches to study Venus. \"Temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on earth. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans\" this line explains how humans could go, but had to figure out and how to land their in order to do any reaserch. Another example is \"more importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else from distance... Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks.\" this line also explains how rearchers could reasrch Venus and how they can not take anything from Venus, like rocks, gas or anything like that because they don't want anything bad to happen or take any risks on our planet Earth.\n\nNASA is also comeing up with ideas on how to make studies for Venus and reaserche Venus. In the text it states \"Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers.\" this line explains how NASA is thinking out the box and trying to think how they can reaserch Venus by using old electronics that may have helpped them in the pass, which is a great idea. NASA says \"modern computers are enrmously powerful, flexible, and quick, but tend to be more delicate when it comes to extreme physical conditions.\" this line explains how they woring hard and knowing what will happen t the mechine but is able to be fixable and will be able to continue the reaserch.\n\nVenus is beautiful. Venus is sometimes called the Evening star. \"The challenge of exploring Venus, that an Author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers in presents\". these where my reasons and examples on how the author supports their idea and how they gave many deatails.. Venus is hard to study but scientist are smart enough to be able to study it even if it take years.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Fifty years ago, a car was the American dream. Every household in the country needed a bright, shiny vehicle in their driveway. Times have changed since then, with new increases in technology, a global consumption crisis, and a bigger population than ever. In the past half-decade a new breed of vehicles has dominated the agenda of some car manufacturers and interested parties. The self-driving car has made its way into the hopes of the next generation of drivers. Cutting edge companies like Google, Tesla, Mercedes-Benz, BMW, and Audi have already taken leaps and bounds to the self-driving car, or autonomous vehicle. But is this technology safe for the general public? Though autonomous vechicle's are still very new and experimental they are the future of driving.\n\nEvery year thousands of people are killed by driver related accidents. This\n\nincludes drunk driving, text-while-driving, and other distractions. After all drivers are people too and everybody makes mistakes. But what if it did not have to be like that? Computers are far more reliable than humans and never get fatigued or tired after long hours on the road. These same computers are the brain of new self-driving cars and they fail exponentially less than people do. A common critique of self-driving cars is the trust of computers but statistics show that they should have nothing to be worried about.\n\nMany times when people hear about self-driving cars they think of vehicles that have no passengers, and while Google does possess such technology that approach is not the use. The cars can also operate with the driver instead of dominating all driving. This is already shown in Tesla's Model S and Model X which have semi-autonomous driving, able to steer, accelerate, and even park, this is also shown in the passage. BMW's i3 and i8 can also assist drivers with driving, not nessesarily dominating the driver. Driverless cars do not have to mean that only the computers are in control. which was a main focus of BMW as mentioned in the passage.\n\nWhile driverless cars are still way in the works, their benefits are undenyable with new semi-driverless cars on the road everyday and more lenient state regulations the future of driverless cars are bright", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I usually find some cases that can relate with this topic. Tax may be a sensitive things to discuss by some people that have a high salary but they also have many responsibilty in their home. For example I have come across several cases, they have a minimum salary that must to pay the tax too but they decide to not pay the tax just because they have still many responsibility to pay their children's school fee, to meet household needs, etc. They ask that pay tax makes they have difficulty with this. So that's why more people only want to earn money than save that for some their need.\n\nBut, in this cases. as citizens who have the obligation to pay taxes, we should be obey the rules in our country. Pay taxes is must if we have a salary that able to pay tax. Tax regulation said that tax deductions will be deducted according to the amount of salary you get. The tax will deductions only a few percent from your salary that you gave from your company. \n\nWe should be realize that we must to pay taxes in our country. Because as citizens of course we usually use state facilities such as used a road. \n\nAs we know some state facilities are made from the taxes we have paid. \n\nBesides that, we always found another way to pay tax for examples, if we bought some goods or foods at the mall or restaurant, we automatically pay for 10 percent tax.\n\nOn this topic I disagree if people only earn their money but they forget to carry out their responsibilities as citizens to pay tax but without realizing it, they always use state facilities. \n\nWe must to help our country become a country thay complies with regulations.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hi I'm Luke Bomberger. I'm a Seagoing Cowboy. My life changed when i joined the Seagoing Cowboys program. You should join the program too! Why you may ask?\n\nYou get to help people all around the world. The Seagoing Coyboys take care of the horses, young cows, & mules that were shipped over seas. To help these countries recover their food supplies, animals, & more, 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA (the United Nations\n\nRelief & Rehabilitation Administration).\n\nFor exaple, my friend Don Reist & I went to Europe to help. It was 1945, World War II was over it Europe, and many countries were left in ruins.\n\nYou get to sight see when you have the time. You get to take once in a lifetime trips around the world. It's also fun abord the ship, especially on the return trips after the animals have been unloaded.\n\nThe cowboys and I played baseball & volleyball games. We also did; table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, & games to help pass the time.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy opens up the world to you.\n\nSo you see? Being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for me. Even though it requires alot of work. When it comes down to it, you have lots of fun & help a lot of people. Thats all that really matters!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Personally I don't agree with this technology product. If you're in a classroom wouldn't you think the teacher would know if the student was feeling mad,sad,or happy? Why rely on technology when humans are more than capable of doing these things theirselves.\n\nThe article states \" You can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\" Which goes back to my reason for not to use technology when humans can do it with a simple look. I belive it is a waste of money and time. For instance, what if the machine they use to find out children's emotions doesn't work properly or doesn't work at all. Then you just lost a lot of money and you wasted time. Yes it has some benifits like for example, It could be really hard to notice when somone is faking an emotion but this 'technology' could tell you what emotion they're feeling. So it has some good things about it but i think humans can tell if someone is feeling a certain emotion.\n\nIt could turn out to be a really big deal in the future, but I dont think that it would be that great to have. The teachers and other students can tell when another student or somone else is mad, sad, happy or almost any other emotion so why waste money on technology when it is going to tell you almost the exact same thing as a human will.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author believe that studing Venus could bring good things regradless of its dangers. Life on another planet sounds crazy but Venus once, many years ago had earth like features that could maybe prove that Venus is actually worth studing. The real question is, can research be done on another planet with such high temperatures? I believe the risk isn't worth the struggle but finding put more about Venus could bring many benefits. Author claims yes it could be done with the right equipment but is it worth the risk.\n\nCould people live on another planet with such high temperatures? Well the author claims in the article, \" Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth\" (The Challenge 4). This shows that life possibly existed in Venus many years ago and could maybe in the future carry human life. \"These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals\" (The Challenge 3). With the right equipment, living on Venus could happen in the long future, but would people really what to live as robots in outter space avoiding the risks.\n\nLife on a different planet could bring benefits in the long future. The author brought up many good reasons on why his idea of studing Venus is worthy of trying despite the dangers. With the right techology, maybe the authors claim can be proven and considered as another planet for life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a negative advancement in human technology for 2 reasons. Driverless cars are run off of computers and can malfunction easily. Also driverless cars will make drivers lazy.\n\nDriverless cars are pretty dangerous for many resaons. One reason is that they run off of computers. How could that be dangerous you say? Well for example driverless cars have new features like \"Traffic Jam Assisstant\", \"Antilock brakes\", and \"Driver Assisstance\". These features are not always reliable, they can malfunction at any given moment in time. And they require a human to drive. Driverless cars are designed to notify the driver when the road requires them to take over. These features could malfunction easily.\n\nThe second reason as to why driverless cars are a negative advancement in human technology, is because they will make driver lazy. If a person gets a driverless car they dont have to pay as much attention to the road as they need to. The driver will grow lazier thanks to these new features the car provides. And if the machinery were to malfunction the driver and the manufacturer should be blamed for the damage that is caused by this. Driverless cars are limited in: California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia because of these reasons.\n\nTherefore driverless cars are a negative advancement in human technology because of those reasons. Driverless cars are proven not to be \"driverless.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Limiting car usage has so many benefits to give us. It can even lead to saving the world. We've lived without them before so it's not the end of the world if they are gone for even just a day.\n\nFirst of all, cars are responsible for pollution(not all) in the atmosphere such as the greenhouse gas emissions. According to Source 1, experts say, is a huge impediment to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes....Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States. That is basically saying that having cars as often as we use them is harming the earth through their gas emissions. That cars are responsible for a certain percantage in the pollution.\n\nAdditionally, let us see about the few polluted cities or capitals such as Paris. They almost achieved a new record for pollutution! But the way they are handling it is quite successful. \"On Monday motorists with even-numbered licese plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffere a 22-euro fine ($31). The same would apply to odd-numbered plates the following day.\" (Source 2)This gives them a chance to reduce significantly the pollution by half if the license plates ratio were balanced. They are taking turns in car usage and lowering pollution and it's a great bill or law to help reduce the pollution. They needed that because according to Source 2, last week Paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter (PM) per cubic meter comared with 114 in Brussels and 79.7 in London, Reuters found. That's a lot of pollution they have been carrying. But \" The smog cleared enough Monday for the ruling French party to rescind the ban for odd-numbered plates on Tuesday.\"\n\nFurthermore, there's more beneifts of reducing or limiting car usage. In BOGATA, Colombia, they have a Day Without Cars and it's starting to spread to other communities as well. They want to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog and those that violates will face $25 fines. This sounds like a very great and effective idea. Many people are participating in it and not only that \"Parks and sports centers also have bloomed throughout the city; uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic; and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up.\"(Source 3)\n\nIn conclusion, limiting car usage will give us a greater advantage not only in our businesses but also our air. Reducing pollution is just the start of it, imagine many more benefits are there to come if we keep up with these conservative efforts.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter plays huge part life family loves laugh We always making people around us laugh put two together someone going start cracking Sometimes kids family games make start There one couple us play one ever oficaly gave name call theLaughing The starts one person standing froung everone else thats playing The goal try get one people start first one laugh trade places thing We really dont play often theirse nothing else One night two nefues I siting around looking something little nefue said CAPS play His older brother I didnt really want play nothing else bouth said would It started like always nobody really wanted go first sombody finly maned went got started After everbody good time It went like houre started get boaring I strating get board minds going ouit little nefue didnt want us went take turn went turn started like usually making stupid faces funny sounds try get people laugh We seen faces herd noises wasnt going work realised wernt going laugh started telling us story He started story saying CAPS guy right didnt anything besides chair box He loved chair box The story wasnt funny yet went CAPS guy went bed tired woke stuff gone His chair box two things world gone So went looking things He searching day night couldnt find anything chair box even clue could gone So disides go bed maybe would back morning like maybe dream woke turned wild boar said started running around acting like pig That got us didnt want stop kept telling story In story turnd everytime guy went bed something strange would change got funny My family loves laugh others laugh us Just like nefue didnt want stop telling story us cracking Weather hanging telling couple joaks making love laugh Lauchter huge part life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are you for driverless cars? Im not. Im not for driverless cars because what if they malfuntion. Plus having driverless cars takes out the fun in being able to get up and go places. Im also against it because you wreck its either your own fault or the other drivers fault. Whos going to take the faults if something happens while the car was driving its self?\n\nIn the sotry it states \"Why would anyone want driverless cars that still needs drivers? Wouldnt drivers get bored waiting on their turn to drive?\" thats exaclty what I was thinking. Why be bored while dirving in a car when you can drive the car your self? Nothing wrong with your ability to be able to drive? Also in the story it states \"new laws will be needed in order to cover the liability in the case of an accident. If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault?\" , that is soemthing I would like to know the same thing about, because if you having nothing wrong with you and your able to drive and you dont wreck then your good but then your driving in a driverless car and something happens . Would the accicdent still be your fault even though you had no control over what the car was doing ? What if they said yes it was your fault ? Wouldnt you be mad because you honestly didnt have control over anything goiun on but since its your car its your problem and your fault. You coulve drove and it couldve been either been a nsituation that was avoided and something that you woukldnt have had to worry about if your car wasnta \"driverless\" car.\n\nNo, im not for driverles cars. Im against them because to many technolody things could go wrong, and then who is to blaim? What are you to do? When all of it couldve had maybe been avvoided if you wouldve drove? Are you for or agianst driverless cars ? driverless", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The technology used to read peoples expressions is very weird just by the look of someones face you can see everything that the person is feelings.So the use of that kind of technology can be very useful to kids.The reason I say that is because what if the kid is going through depression and they don't say anything to anyone before it was to late to help them.\n\nThere is many reasons I say this type of technology can help many kids going through things in life.One of them is anger what if the kid has so much built up anger that one day he just lets lose on someone they might accidentally say the wrong thing to them.Then they just go off on them then there would be lots of conflict between the two people.\n\nThis could help everyone in the classroom the value of this technology is very high.According to the article it says,\"You can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on there face\".What if that isn't the answer what if they are putting on a fake face.They could be easily putting on a fake smile to avoid people asking her what is wrong with her or in a different situation they could be acting sad just for other peoples attention and she just wants people to notice her.With that kind of technology in schools we wouldn't have to worry about that type of stuff anymore we would know how the people are feeling at all times.\n\nSo yes I think that it would have a lot of value on schools to have that type of technology in there building.To prevent anything bad happening to them and all the kids there.So they don't have to worry about anything in a school that they are suppose to be feel safe in at all times.With that maybe kids will feel safe again and not worry to go to school every morning.It might be that one kid that has so much anger and depression that he can't handle it anymore.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" a man creates a program that can detect human emotion. That man is Professor Thomas Huang. The program he created can detect on how a person is truly feeling. I only know 6 emotions so far and they are happiness, anger, sadness, surprise, fear, and disgust. The program could lead to major scientific/artistic break throughs.\n\nThe program uses muscle identification to determine what emotion the person is making. A specific muscle is used to make an emotion. For example, the zygomatic major is used to move the lips up to make a smile. The zygomatic major and the risorius is used to force a smile like if you feel awkward, depressed, or upset but doesn't want to show it. So even the program can tell if you are forcing a smile or you are actually happily smiling.\n\nExpressing emotions everyday could improve how you actually feel and you may get more out of life than you would with a straight face. People will think you are are happy if you smile, sad if you frown, content if you have a straight face, etc. People analyze how you are feeling to share iin your happiness, make you feel better so you are no longer sad, and calm you down if you are angry. With this program, people can now understand human emotions better than than naked eye. This kind of program could be used in therapy sessions, doctor's offices, and hospitals.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System is a new software that developes the improves accuracy in perceiving the emotions of others. The system has six basic emotions-happiness, surpise, anger, disgust fear, and sadness- and then associated each with characeteristic movements of the facial muscles. The software can even identify mixed emotions. Each expression is compared againest a neutral face (showing no emotion. How does it work? The process begines when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face, all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles.\n\nThe argument talks about if the use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable or not. The technology will idnetify what the students behavior is like. If a student doesn't want to show what they are feeling, the technology will solve it out. Empathy (feeling someone else's emotional state) may happen because we unconsciously imitate another person's facial expressions. Whoever thought that making faces could reveal so much about the science of emotions.\n\nI think this technology is not valuable in a student's classroom. The student's emotional expressions will be easy to find out what they are feeling because it's in person. Mona Lisa painting needed the technolgy because no one knows what she is feeling like. This technology will be good use for paintings, pictures, etc, that it can't be expressed. The technology should only be used for educational purposes, not to find out what the student is feeling in daily. It is easy to see a genunie smile and a fake one. In the real smile, the zygomatic major (muscles that begin at your cheek bones) lift the corners of your mouth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator of Florida,\n\nI strongly adivise you, hoping you will take this advise, to discard the Electoral Colledge and change it to whoever gets the most popular vote for the pesident of the United states. In Bradford Plumbers article he states \"The electoral colledge is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality.\" The sad part about that is true. Yes, it was made hundreds of years ago and it worked but as time goes on and technology changes, the world changes, and some things just are not the same and dont fit anymore.\n\nAs some of the state of Florida coming together, the electoral college does consist of some advantages, for say to avoid run-off elections, as Richard A. Posner says, and \"restore some of the weigh in the political balance\"... but\n\nIT'S NOT FAIR\n\n.\n\nAs we vote, we vote for the state of electors. Not the president ourselves, they do it for us. If we are not allowed to vote on our own then why even let us vote anways. I feel we are being baby feed. If this is true why even give us any rights as a human being living in the United States all together? Can we not control who we vote for? Sooner or later we wont even watch the presidental elections or even vote and you all will be on your own!\n\nTo go along with, I feel that if the electoral college was abolished, then it would be easier on everyone, expecially the senate. Again in Bradford Plumbers articile, \"Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates do not spend time in states they know have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the swing states.\" If we are not in a swing state then what are our chances of seeing the candidtes or even a campaign. That siduation would be more hard on you all in the senate then us, the people of Florida, we just wont vote!\n\nWe hope you make your decision wisely,\n\nFlorida", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Turning mast Empire State Building dock dirigibles many obstacles There obstacles like flamable gas dirigibles dangerous near densely populated area wind constantly shifting due air currents would dangling high pedestrians These obstacles difficult solve In dirigibles filled hydrogen hydrogen highly flamable dirigibles caught fire It also dangerous densely populated area dirigible ever failed would fall inocent bystanders It also dangerous winds shift lot get popped objects buildings around dirigible Thus difficult turn mast loading dock dirigibles Turning mast Empire State Building loading dock dirigibles difficult safe", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, a number of people believe schools should provide education to kids on the importance of recycling waste materials.However, others think they can get this knowledge at home.In my opinion, children have a better relationship with their parents, therefore, they should be educated about salvaging waste materials at home.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, Children spend more time in school than they spend at home. Therefore, the education sectors play an important role in a child's life. That is to say, it is mandatory for a school to provide all the necessary knowledge to children, which in turn helps to build character.It's a known fact that the younger generation tends to learn faster . Therefore, it is the duty of the teachers to educate beginners on the importance of recycling junk without the need for disposal.This is because parents send their kids to school for the main purpose of positive improvements in all aspects of their lives.Take ,for example, my nephew Riley, he reuses an old shopping bag whenever he visits the mall because he knows the importance of recycling.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, A number of children take their parents as role models. As a ,result it is possible for them to follow the examples their role models portray. Therefore, parents should enlighten their kids more on waste recycling, this is because it is more of a lesson of character, so this can easily be taught to children by their loved ones.Recent studies have proven that the younger generation looks up to their parents when growing up. For example, when I was young, my dad had a collection of cans and sells them back to recycling companies, this is a habit for me currently.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion, it's the sole responsibility of parents to discipline their children because they tend to be much closer. This is because it will teach them a lot including the importance of keeping some waste materials while converting them into something important for their use.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the training of the child begins at home and there is nothing like excess knowledge. In my opinion, parents should educate their children about waste recycling at home before they are sent to school, this can be done by showing a good example always.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "New technologies are created everyday. A new technology that was recently created is one that is called the Facial Action Coding System. This system enables computers to identify human emotions. This system itself can be very valuable to read the expressions of students in a classroom.\n\nThis resource can be very useful to teachers as well as students. This system will be essential to teachers when it comes to online assignments or practice games. As stated in the article \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" \" Then it could motify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" That would then make the teachers job easier because if they are bored or aren't understanding the topic the system will read that and change up the lesson a bit. The students will also benefit from this because it makes learning fun and easier to understand. The easier it is to comprehend something the better a student will do in school.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System would be a great asset to the student classroom. It makes school run smoother and easier for the staff and students. This new technology will help not only the education department but many others as well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial action coding system is a good move to a higher level of schools. The Facial action coding system is going to make students emotion more valuable. The Facial action coding system well make the teachers know how their students feel about the class which is the most important thing to know. Are they bored, happy, disgusted, or angry.\n\nWhy is it important to the teachers to know how their students feel about the class? It's important because mostly the way a student feel about a class is what going to make him/her pass or fail that class. If the teachers knew their students feelings they well have a chance to change their students feeling. That's what well make all the teachers \"the best teacher.\"\n\nIn conclusion the Facial action coding system is a good move to a higher level of schools. The Facial action coding system is going to be very helpful for teachers too. Finaly I think that the Facial action coding system is going to be one of the most valuable things in schools.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recently, the extent of the environmental problems we are facing has become so vast, that major policy changes are required on a global level. Several people believe that one of the most feasible solutions to these problems, is to increase fuel prices for vehicles. I personally disagree with this idea, and in this essay, I will elaborate on the possible hindrances that it could cause to the general population of a country. \nEffluents released by the combustion of fuel in automobiles is definitely one of the leading causes of air pollution. Often, the degree of damage done to the environment is so extensive, that it is either difficult or impossible to breathe with ease. This is especially true in large cities having a high population density, where innumerable vehicles hit the roads on a daily basis. However, increasing fuel prices would definitely not aid in solving the problem at hand in a way that benefits the public, especially in developing or underdeveloped countries. For example, in a developing country like India, the average per capita income is far below the poverty line. In this case, increasing petrol and diesel rates would make the commodity entirely inaccessible to the common man. Furthermore, this would lead to an increase in fares in public transport, thereby discouraging the public from using the service. An overall hike would be seen in the price of goods, due to the increase in their transportation costs, and low-income houses would face serious difficulties to make ends meet. \nSecondly, let us look at the adversities faced by countries where the constant rise of petrol prices is a pressing issue, by considering India as an example. The inflation of oil prices was a major cause of public outrage, as citizens claimed that the tax being placed on the product was excessive, while the government claimed it was essential. Hence, it is clear that though increasing gas prices seems like an airtight solution on paper, it would inevitably cause numerous difficulties in the lives of the public. Therefore, we must first consider educating people on the processes of car-pooling and the benefits it could have to both the environment, as well as their savings. Another possible answer could be the odd/even method, wherein citizens must alternate between using private transport and public facilities. \nIn conclusion, even though this method might bring about the desired result, it would give rise to several other issues. Therefore, I strongly believe that while the proposed solution might seem obvious, it is not possible to implement this on a global scale without putting the middle and lower classes under serious strain.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people think artificial intelligence robots will take the position of humans jobs in the near future. Though some think all works can be replaced by robots, but it is not possible to get detailed, accurate finish jobs like humans. This essay will discuss that only the minority number of jobs will be done by humans.\r\n\r\nRobots are likely to take the jobs of humans in most sectors which does not require people’s input throughout the process and work duration. These days, every company wants their job done quickly and cost effective. Hence, using robots instead of humans helps them to increase their production value and decrease labour costs. For example, a year end article published by Toyota Mortars mentioned that they had to meet the demands of consumers so machines and robots in the assembly line helped them produce a surplus quantity of engines. In addition, production line requires only power and timely supervision, these factors eradicate giving humans monthly salaries and statutory pays. For these reasons, the workforce will be replaced by robots which needs replacement.\r\n\r\nConversely, not all jobs can be done by robots even if they are well versed and work efficiently. Some works require human’s mind and critical thinking. There are fields where only people can do the job perfectly such as doing artistic works, giving advice to people. For instance, Mona Lisa painted by Da Vinci still stands out as an extraordinary painting in the world. It can never reach a higher standard, without a human touch even for many years to come. Artificial intelligence can never reach the perfection. Overall, certain professions are untouched and can never achieve the quality despite the advancement of robots.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, artificial intelligence is likely to take over most of the people’s tasks. Layman’s jobs which do not require skill and logical thinking may be replaced by robots; however, skilled works can only be done by humans.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The line graph illustrates the percentage of paper and cardboard, glass containers, plastics and aluminium cans that were recycled in the period between 1982 and 2010. Overall, it seems that paper and cardboard remain the highest recycled material while plastics stayed as the least recycled products throughout the period. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, in 1982, the amount of paper and cardboard recycled started out at about 60%, afterwards there was a noticeable rise to 80% in the year 1992 but it later saw a steady decline to 70% in 2010. As compared with glass and containers which is the highest recycled product beginning at 50%, 1988 saw a slight dip, it subsequently rose to 70% in 2010. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the two least recycled materials saw an increase over the period. Aluminium cans rose significantly from about 3% in 1982 to approximately 47% although plastics saw a minimal increase from 1% to approximately 9% at the end of the period-2010.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Who would want to sit in the driver's seat but not drive, and just watch the car moving by it self, and just looking stright a head and not do anything. That would be so boring. just talking about and thinking about sound really boring. I don't think that \"driveerlss car\" should be invented for many reason.If people\n\nare going to invent a driveless car, the people who used to drive would be bored, and if there is a driveless car why would anyone need to practice how to drive a car? \"Why would anyone want a driverless car that still meeds a driver? whouldn't drivers get bored waitng for their turn to drive?\".\n\nIf the driver is not driving for a while then they would not know when to contoal the car and they would dose off for the rest of the way, and\n\nthey would also forget that they were driving. If there is going to be a driverless car than why would we need car? The driverless car would not know when there is an emergency or anything else that is going on.\n\nIt would onlt know the things that it's prgram for, and it is also counting on human to control them. But why would anybody want a car that is going to take over the 90% of the driver's job and the driver gets only 10% of the driving? Not only do they driver not get to drive they also don't get to do anything but to hold the whilee the whole time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless Cars Are Coming? Maybe so driverless cars may sound like an awesome concept, but this can cuase issues in the long run. for example a driver needs to be aware and has to keep his/her eyes on the road ahead.\n\nMy position on driverless cars my sound interging at first. I feel like the developement can turn out to be the best invention in the history of car manufactures. WIth driverless cars we will not have to worry about so many crashes as we have been having ln the last couple of years. The concept is already invented we just have to make sure it stayes safe and meets all the standereds. Driverless cars can casue a big chaos for some states many arguements will break loose. Sure we will hvae to keep the passenger aware of his/her surroundings at all times by keeping thier hands on the wheel at all times. As stated in paragraph 7. With the technology advancing we coulf have driverless cars on the road by the year 2020. Google has been working on the google car since 2009 it has been 7 years the car has drivin millions of miles without a crash as stated in paragraph 2. That is saying something big. Cars are now becoming more smarter then ever with technology added into them we can now have a car drive by itself up to 25 miles as staetd in paragraph 7 with BMW's Traffic Jam Assistance. Already car manufacturers are having thoughts about haveing cars drive themselfs by the year 2020 with Tesla projeccted to release a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time as stated in paragraph 10.\n\nLawmakers are not to happy with the idea of putting driverless cars on the streets. I understand they are trying to keep pedestrians safe also the passengers. If and injury happens who will take the blame the passener or the manufacturer? I strongly feel if the driver is in the drivers seat and has his/her hands on the wheel then the driver will be taken the blam they also have to be aware at all times.\n\nDriverless cars are not so far from becoming a reality we are not so far from seeing driverless cars on the streets or on our own drveway. With technology we can make the roads a safer place with less injuries and less deathes would you not agree?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should join the Seagoing Cowboys program! Here's a reason why, You could go sight seeing to places you've never been to like Venice or China! Keep reading to find some more reasons.\n\nYou could help all kinds of people get better from sickness or other kinds of problems they might have. You might get a chance to do a job you've never done before. On board after all the hard labor is done you could play games and meet new people while your at it. It could give you a special look at the world around you. You could go to all kinds of places like China, Greece, or Italy.\n\nYou get to take care of all kinds of animals. It depends where you go on your trip but you could go to Greece and see the Acropolis or take a gondala ride in Venice, Italy. You might be able to break the record of the most trips as a Sea Cowboy. It would probably make you feel good knowing that your helping people. While on board you could get really good at games you've probably never tried or were really bad at.\n\nYou could go sightseeing. \"But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special, So was taking a gondala ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water.\" You would always be busy. \"Caring for the animals kept Luke busy. They had to be fed and watered two or three times a day.\" An expeirence like that can open up yours eyes to the world. \"It opened up the world to him \"I'm grateful for the opprotunity.\"\n\nAnd that is why I think you should join the Seagoing Cowboy Program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This chart illustrates the proportion of British male and female in different age group buying fruit and vegetables as recommended by the world health organization per day in the year 2006.\nIn general, 55-64 years old British residents consume the most fruit and vegetables, while female spend more money on fruit and vegetables.\nTo be specific, it can be identified that elderly people would like to consume more healthy food than young people, of these, residents aged 55-64 years bought the most amount the whold age group, with approximately 32% and 35% of men and women respectively. It is worth to mention that among the elderly age group, 75 years old group is the only age group that different gender consume the same percentage fruit and vegetables in this chart.\nAs for the young and middle and people, people aged between 19 and 24 consume the least healthy food compare with the rest of the age group in this bar chart, which is around 15%, while female consume slightly higher than man. By contrast, in the age group of 45-54, the percentage between male (around 23%) and female (around 27%) has the gap compare with the rest of the age group.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagen just looking at your computer and your computer telling your emotions. Do you think that is a good think? I believe that it is i good idea because it can help you learn something that is boring to you, help you understand what you do not know, and the computer can give you instructions on how to do your work.\n\nOne reason why it is a good idea because it can help you learn something that is boring for you. The computer can help find a video or something that can help the work be for fun or extced for you. For example, say that I do not like math or i can not figure out what the answer is because i am bored the computer can find a video to help me.\n\nAnother reason, is it can help you learn something you do not know. For example say the teacher does not explain a problem correctly and so the computer looks up a video or something that can explain the problem.\n\nLast reason, is the computer can give you instructions on how to do your work.\n\nFor example the computer will look at your face and will see that you can not do a problem and sees your frustration and the computer will look uo an article,video,etc.. that will help you and it will give you instuctions on how to do something.\n\nIn conclusion, as you can see the technology to read the emotinal expressions of student's is a great idea because it can help you something that boring to you, help you understand something that you do not know, and the computer can give you instructions on how to do your work.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars was not created by a alien lifeform. That is like saying that aliens made the Pyramid of Giza and what not. There is obvious evidence that the Face of Mars and other major structures are not made by aliens.\n\nIf aliens created the Face of Mars, then how are there not any structures that seem like a network of civilization found on Mars and have not been found by the Curiousity Rover? The Curiousity Rover should already have lots of artifacts and organic matter tested.The Viking 1 was a old machine that made a rough picture of a face and technology has come a long way since then.\n\nAs the study states, they say that it seems more like a mesa or butte like the ones on Earth, as Mars is structurally similar to Earth. Other than that Mars is a third smaller than Earth, mostly red, no current waterstreams, and has barely an atomosphere. The atomsphere is important for life as well and, lifeforms would die eventually without an atomosphere.\n\nAnd also if the Face was made by aliens, NASA would already have several clues of previous and or currently living lifeforms on the planet. NASA would not hide these clues from us because it would help in their interest because people want fantasy to come to life. The public as made the Face an icon until it was debunked in 2001. NASA in general says that they would love to share that they found an ancient civilization on another planet and are trying to find civilization of other planets as well.\n\nAs the belief of alien lifeform of making the Face still exsists. There are circumstances to prove that this is wrong. The tested material, the structure of the planet, the technology now, and publicity certainly points towards the conclusion that there were and are no alien lifeforms on the planet Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports his idea well thought out, in the essay \"The Challange of Exploring Venus\" the author starts out by talking about Venus which is also called the \"Evening Star\", he then goes on about how Earth and Venus are like \"twins.\"\n\nThe author talks fully in context with the planet never going off topic, talking about the dangers and affects of trying to understand more information about the planet Venus. The author talks about conditions and how NASA uses their technology to circuferance the surfuce of Venus. In the passage \"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus.\" (Paragraph 7 Line 1). The author talks about the conditions on Venus, survival affects for humans. In the passage \"Tempetures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" (Paragraph 6 Lines 1- 11). NASA is taking steps with modern technology to understand Venus. In the text \"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus.\" (Paragraph 7 Line 1). The author goes on and talks about the atmosphere, temperatures and living conditions. In the passage \"A thick atmoshpher of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth.\" (Paragraph 3 Lines 1-7). In conclusion, the author has talked about the dangers of trying to understand our so called \"twin\" planet more in depth. We should not be afraid to travel and do things that are scary because we will never get there without trying.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people believe businesses must take their income seriously and be unconcerned with public responsibilities. While I accept that this perception is justifiable, social responsibility also has a vital role as their money.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, we should recognize that the top priority of any business is how much money they make not how much kindness they can spread into society. Income involves the survival of the business and all members in that organization intimately, and if one business does not have money, it will be unable to pay for its workers, managers and the worst is the owner of that company could not possess any economic benefits, as a result, this company seem to be a failure and could bankrupt anytime. Another reason for its importance, all entrepreneurs want the money will flow into their pockets, not into society and an economic foundation rougher than their competitors so being careless about the public is the general trend of them.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are many compelling reasons why I am convinced that society is the actual reason for business success. Because their fame could determine the number of consumers, purchasers always base on the attitude of the shop to decide whether they should need to support them or not. Moreover, if the belief in the business of the buyer is strong enough, the company will have a lot of aid in some cases like a large number of loyal customers or a huge investment in a complex case. Furthermore, being responsible to society can confirm their credibility and revamp the belief of customers about humanitarianism so that it could help the company have a reliable image and will have some legal conditions recognized by governments to implement a lot of economic strategies in the future.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while it is irrefutable that businesses just need to focus on income, I would contend that taking public responsibility is more crucial and beneficial because of the further advantages it gives", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why the Electoral College Should be Replaced\n\nDear Mr. Senator, ever since the Presidential Election of 2000, the concept of our electoral college has been highly scrutinized, and this is rightly so. The electoral college is undemocratic, unfair, and should be replaced with the popular vote.\n\nEven people who support keeping the electoral college (such as the author of\n\nIn Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President , Richard A. Posner) agree that \"...the Electoral College method is not democratic in a modern sense..\" (paragraph 15). America was founded on democracy and making sure that the people's voices were heard, and not allowing the people to directly vote for the leader of the country goes against that.\n\nThe electoral college is also extremely unfair to voters. Because of how the election system is set up, a candidate could win the people's popular vote, but not the electoral votes and would then not recieve presidency. This occured in 2000 in the Gore vs Busch election. Even though a majority of people voted for Gore, Busch still ended up with the presidency (paragraph 9). Having the electoral votes take pecedence over the popular vote takes away the people's voice and bscially tells them that their opinion doesn't matter as much as the electoral college's opinion.\n\nThe electoral college is also unfair because it discourages campaigning in non-swing states. A democratic candidate would not campaign in a state like California that is heavily democratic because they know they are almost definitley going to win the election in that state, meaning they will get all of that state's electoral votes. A republican candidate would not campaign in Caliornia either because they know they would have almost no chance of winning in such a heavily democratic state, and they would be wasting campaign money with no hope of electoral votes from that state (paragraph 13). This means that people in non-swing states like California don't really know much about either candidate because they were never informed. Then the people in these states tend to vote for their party solely because they have nothing else to go off of. It is unfair for voters in non-swing states to be left in the dark just because all of the electoral votes are almost guaranteed to go one way. If the US used popular votes for the Presidential Election, republicans in democratic states and democrats in republican states would have a voice too.\n\nAnother way the electoral college is unfair, is the standing procedure in the event of a tie. There are 538 electors in the electoral college (paragraph 3) which is an even number, meaning the electoral votes for each candidate could be tied. In the event of a tie, the House of Representatives would have an election and each state would get one vote. That would mean \"...the single representative from Wyoming, representing 500,000 voters, would have as much say as the 55 representatives from California, who represent 35 million voters\" (paragraph 12). This would make someone from California's vote count for much less than someone from Wyomig's vote.\n\nIt can be argued that the electoral college is beneficial in the fact that the winning candidate's share of electoral votes exceeds his share of popular votes. For example, in the 2012 election, Obama recieved 61.7% of the electoral votes compared to 51.3% of popular votes (paragraph 18). Some say this is beneficial because it reduces the chance of a dispute of vote counting. However, this is actually not a good thing. 51.3% of people wanted Obama to be President. Not 61.7%. Yet Obama still got credit for 61.7%. About 10% of voters who didn't support Obama didn't get their opinion heard.\n\nThe electoral college has been around for a long time, and it's time for a change. It is simply undemocratic and unfair. It prevents every person for having an equally weighted vote. The electoral college needs to be replaced with a popular vote.\n\nThank you for your time Mr. Senator.\n\nSinceraly,\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit Joe Kurmaskie features setting affect cyclist old people around along time cant ask advice theyre old old give information wouldnt know talking A better piece advice solo cyclist would Never accept travel advice collection oldtimers havent left confines porches sine Carter office That features setting examples essay", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "in today's modern world, advancement in technology development has provided many ways to marketers of promoting their products and services to the general public. For example, Tv ads, and online ads on video streaming websites, these ads are clutter everywhere which ultimately leads to a negative impact on behaviour and our mindset.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, the advertiser usually promotes consumerism, which anchors on buying frequently. we are always told to buy new clothes, and stay trendy, or we won't look cool without buying the latest iPhone. These advertisements create a habit that negatively affects individual financial status. moreover, They use stereotypes, Through advertising, they create a feeling toward how a certain group of people should look like. For example, beauty creams tailored towards women, try to project the white colour of a woman as superior to the other colour, and women must accept this projection that the media portrays and consider this as having higher status. \r\n\r\nAdditionally, mind cluttering everywhere you see you may find an advertisement. In current times people desire to make their life as simple as possible, but due to this factor, we have to process thousands of information daily. Furthermore, misleading, companies often make products look amazing through their advertising design and stories. But in reality, it doesn't perform as described in the ads. Additionally, adverts generally create low self-esteem by manipulating thoughts and by persuading you to buy products that will make you happy.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, in my opinion, advertising negatively impact our mental health and sometimes gives us a financial dent. As most people are blindly following the trends without thinking about their consequences", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People should join the Seagoing Cowboys program because it is a amazing experience for anybody.One reason why I think you should join is because you a lot of adventures all of the time.Another reason why you should join is that it can increase your skills such as awareness of people in other countries.The next is that taking the program can be a big risk because sometimes when you go to sea there can be dangers to look like bad\n\nstorms,big sea creatures and more.Also doing things like this can increase how brave you are.The last reason is that this program can give you a lot of chances to get good jobs because this program can put your name out and can get people to know you some people might want you to be a huge part of their company.So to sum it all up I want you to join if you do it can make you a better person,and it will a exciting experience for anyone that comes and participates.Those are some reasons why you should come join the Seagoing Cowboys program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator, I think as a citizen that we should keep the Electoral College going. The Electoral College is keeping us in the right track. There are many reasons is to why we should keep the Electoral College up and running. My personal opinion is that if we don't keep the way it is going, things will become wrong. I have many concerns that i'm going to be sharing with you. Hopefully you will understand.\n\nFirst, Electoral College has 538 people in the congress working to count the votes that people make. The most votes a President can get up too for winning is 270 Electoral votes. Us citixen's help choose the state's elector when we vote for the President because. When we vote for the candidate were are voting for the candidate's elector. I feel this is fair because if we just had people by popular vote it would be a crazy mess. We wouldn't really look at the qualities each President has or whom ever we may be voting for. Voting is a very serious thing and letting it be done by popular would be making the wrong choice. The Electoral College is voting for President of the United States and, the candidate of who will be Vice President with him.\n\nSecond, December is when we find out which electoral will be running our state. Goes for each and individual state. The \"Certificate of Ascertainmet\" list all of our candidates running. Then they will announce it on the year of election in December. This makes things go on a simple flow. Like i said if we just have a popular voting going around it doesn't make it fair for the Candidates running. We vote for the Slate of electors who then go an vote for President. I think this is right because some people don't understand political things and make the wrong choice of President. If we have people who are in the government and know how to be a good congress we should trust them to make the United States a well place to be. No one is ever going to have which ever Elector they want. Some people may just vote for one of the candidates because their bestfriend voted for him or her.\n\nThird reason is, If we have people that have more knowlodge then us then, we can have a good President. If we just based it off what we might know and not know. We could be putting are self as American Citizen's in a bad place. If there was to be a tie then we still have someone with more knowlodge then us to back us up. The House of Representatives where they will vote for President. This is usually on rare occasions, but if it were to happen we would have no worries. Some people vote to just vote and don't really know what there voting for or what that person might do for us. Some people may vote because of what race, what they look like, anything really. I think if we keep the Electoral College it will keep us good.\n\nWhat i'm really trying to explain is that. The President should be choosen correctly and wisely. Some people aren't very educated in politics and, we don't want just votes beacause we can vote. We want the votes to mean i know this person, i know he or she can do the job. I know this person is capable of being our President. In the end i honestly feel the Electoral College will work for now any to many years that will past.\n\nSinceraly Taylor", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "European countries such as Germany and France have been experimenting with their suburban districts by limiting the usage of car. In the suburban districts cars are forbidden. According to source one \"70 pervent of families do not own cars, and 57 perent sold their cars\" in order to live in the suburban areas. Some people may think that they cannot go a day with out driving their car but there are some advantages of limiting the usage of cars. Like limited car usage can reduce traffic. You can also stay healthier and stress free.\n\nDue to over population, people will always need transportion. Cars are the primary source of transportation. There are so many people who are constantly on the move; backed up traffic is a result of this. As car become limited in some place the fewer traffic there is. No more getting to work or school late.\n\nPlaces like the United States of America have always had to worry about it's citizen becoming over weight. According t the article \"recent sutdies have suggested that Americans are buying fewer cars.\" Not having as many cars around can motivated Americans to walk or ride more bicycles. This can ultimately keep them healthier. By walking and riding bicycles it can help the citizen from becoming over weight. Not only will it reduce the risk of the citizens becoming over weight but it also helps the to stay in shape.\n\nGases prices and car repairs have also been an issue for US citizens. Worrying about these situations can get very stressfull. Some people may not be able to afford the high gas prices. Some people can't even afford to repair their cars when it has been damaged. The stress from worrying about gas prices and car repairs can cause people to have heart attacks of strokes. Both of which can lead to death.\n\nThere are many advantages of limiting car usage. Some of which i just named. Limited car usage can reduce traffic that means no more being late to work or school. It can also keep you healthy. Walking or riding a bicycle can help you stay in shape. Most imporantly in can be a big strees reliefer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the past children used to have more responsibilities in comparison with the current situations. Some have the idea that it has more benefits than what is occurring nowadays. From my point of view, the given responsibilities should be limited to what a child can handle.\r\n\r\nHaving more responsibilities can prepare children for life. Due to the numerous duties that kids may be in charge of, life skills are encouraged and developed in a more effective way. Being influenced by the experience gained, the children are wiser to take appropriate measures to solve any issue imposed . In Japan, the education system promotes being responsible by encouraging the students to clean their school as part of their daily routines. Children who are used to taking more responsibilities can act more accurately in life.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the reduction in the number of duties may provide more time for children to play which is fundamental to their mental health. We need to consider more time to play for children, if we want to have healthier children. Having numerous duties is harmful to their mental health as their capacity to handle and deal with many tasks is limited. In Africa, there are many kids deprived of childhood as they have to work like grown-up adults. Play is vital for every child as it brings satisfaction and happiness.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although some have the notion that preparing children for life by giving them different responsibilities is crucial, I think the need to play should considered as the first priority for any child.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today im going to be talking about new technology called the (FACS) or the Facial Action Coding System which is able to read emotions just off facial movement and reactions. Im going to talk about how this new system may or may not be a useful source of telling peoples emotions. Also im going to be giving you my opinion on this software and what i think about it. I really hope you like my essay and enjoy.\n\nFirst off im going to start by reasoning why this my be a reliable sourse of telling emotions. In the sytem of the program it will create a 3D image of all 44 major muscles in the face. Then will recognice the feeling of a person by witnessing how the muscles in there face may move. Depending how they move, and the system analyzes there face may determain weather a person may feel happy,\n\nsurprised, angery, discuted, fearful, or sad. (Example) When the eyebrows of one is raised this may be a sign of surprise, or when a person's lips tighten they my be angry.\n\nNext im going to be talking about how this system my not reliable. A computer is only as smart as the programer that programmed it. Not all people can show or tell eveyones emotions by looking at them. So that means neather may the computer system. In the the passage it says that the system nor another human may be able to tell weather your holding a genuine smile or a farced one. Making the system tell the wrong emotions.\n\nNow im going to be telling you my opinion on FACS system and program. I think that this is going to be an inefficent program, because there is not actual way for anyone to create a system that will 100% read correct emotions in anyone. it's not possible in my opinion. Like i said a computer is only as smart as the programmer who programmed it. Lots of people cannot tell weather or not someone is faking an emotion by the ay they put out a look.\n\nI hope you enjoyed reading about the FACS system program. I really hope you like how i talked about weather the system may ot may not be a reliable system, and my opinion about this program. Thank you for reding my essay and have a wonderful day.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people are of the opinion that the fund which is used to explore the universe should be spent on more practical sectors instead. While I concur that the ambition of studying outer space is justifiable, I believe that the government should use this amount of money for other purposes which bring more benefit to citizens.\n\nOn the first hand, for decades, it is undeniable that the growth of humanity has been mostly based on people's curiosity, which makes exploring celestial bodies more necessary to keep pace with the world's development. Firstly, the technology for aerospace investigation is one of the methods which has triggered people to reach certain achievements. For instance, scientists carry out many studies in the labs located on other planets to find more resources to provide to the earth's life. Besides, the experiments on the universe distinctly bring some benefits in the future such as broadening knowledge about interactions between planets, then people can predict upcoming disasters due to out-of-the-earth factors.\n\nOn the other hand, it is apparent why many are in favour of allocating the money which is for space exploration on more advantageous aspects. The most conspicuous reason is that humans in recent years have faced many problems, particularly, environmental degradation and severe transmitted diseases. In detail, the environmental concerns are more and more significant because there has been no practical measure to tackle factory waste and emission. Otherwise, owing to the budget shortage, not everyone around the world is accessible to medical services which have been a burden to the healthcare system. Meanwhile, beyond-Earth research requires a large amount of money which can be used in finding proper solutions for those existing problems.\n\nIn view of the arguments outlined above, I conclude that although getting to know about the cosmos is important, improving current problems is more a priority to society. All things considered, from my perspective, space exploration is not a proper way to use the government subsidy in this situation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays a certain number of people dedicate their life totally to their work and career. \r\n\r\nRecently, more and more people have been spending a lot of time in the offices doing overtime. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of this attitude tendency and provide a logical conclusion.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nFirstly, when people spend too much time at work, they neglect other spheres of life. Almost every person has a family and relatives, which assist, believe, and motivate us. However, the majority of men and women forget about it. Society prefers to work hard, spend time with computers or colleagues, and make a career. Therefore, workaholics do not have time for close people. Moreover, the divorce rate increases every year, children see their parents only on weekends and elderly parents wait for a phone call. Therefore, workaholics do not have time for close people and social life. \r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nSecondly, long working hours influence human health. For example, people who work overtime do not have time to exercise, and they often eat fast food, because cooking needs time. Therefore, they have a problem with obesity. Another problem is the influence on eyesight. More and more young people are wearing glasses as they spend too much time looking at the computer screen or other devices. \r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, diligence is a real chance for young people to demonstrate their motivation and attitude to the employer. It is especially important after graduating/graduated from university without real working experience. Additionally, sometimes people have a deadline, for example, finishing a project, which will take them long hours to meet the deadline and complete the task, however, it does not have to be permanent and long term. \r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, overtime has a negative effect on people’s social life and health, maintaining work-life balance is extremely important for men and women. Sometimes people can have long working hours but no more one or two times a month.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, people are keen on all things which happened in house or building where they live. In fact, some where buildings are existing with weird story what knowing that is attractive. furthermore, people are able to find more thing about the plot in the internet. Moreover, asking from indigenous people could also help them.\r\n\r\nRemarkably, in some countries ancient building with long time history has been existing. However, these plots have been being interested by most of individuals. Moreover, some people are looking forwards dreadful story about historical house. Furthermore, sometimes they were finding some undeniable frightening ones. For example, some old houses in the historical city such as Shiraz or Isfahan (Iran) are existed which ancient families were living there and had fantastic and weird story that many people are keen on to know. On the other hand, finding these myths is likely not easy.\r\n\r\n Before, they were just figuring out those from indigenous committees but nowadays searching in the internet is the better way to find ample information. Moreover, some ancient buildings have official history which everyone could find precious data about those. for instants, In Shiraz, A building as name Shapouri building has official history which people had able to read it before they go into there. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, people are interested to know about history of plots where they live, Basically, I believe knowing about the past of house can help them to live better there. Moreover, finding data in web sites is literally the best way which they choose.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With a paradigm shift in social belief and people's fascination about having an enviable career, they tend to become parents at a later stage than the past. There are some prominent reasons for this and I personally believe that it has more negative consequences.\n\nTo begin with, the average year when people get married has increased than that of our ancestors. As a result, childbirth is naturally delayed. According to a recent survey, many young people who start their career after their graduation are more focused on their jobs than having their own family. Besides, a many young people are undecided whether to marry or not. Eventually, when they get married, they are already in their mid-thirties and they take some time to settle and have some financial stability before having their first child. Furthermore, the old belief that a girl should be prepared to manage a family and have children earlier has changed and more wives work in offices than ever. The decline of the joint family has also contributed to this trend as couples solely take the decision of having a baby, unlike the past.\n\nIf we notice the detrimental impacts of this trend has, we would surely try to reverse it. The most cynical outcome of this trend is the number of couples struggling to become parents. It is scientifically proved that infertility rate among couples is higher who try to become pregnant after mid-thirties. Some of the couples eventually break up their marriages due to this and it brings unfathomable social problems. Furthermore, having a child in the early years of marriage make the couple more family-oriented and this eventually help them have a better future.\n\nTo conclude, late marriage, nuclear family structure, and more focus on jobs are the main reasons people become parents at a later stage and this has undeniably more adverse results that the positive sides.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is no doubt that there are countless people do not find the connection between news and human life, therefore, they highly think that it is really time-wasting to read the newspaper or watch news on television. From my point of view, I partly agree with the view above.\r\n\r\nIt can not be denied that these days, there are a large number of articles are no longer meaningful for citizens because of their poor quality. It means that the majority of media organizations now have the tendency to pay attention to their revenue most instead of focusing on the standard of the newspaper. For example, Vietnamese people have face up with numerous international emergencies and problems that are unrealistic about their local community such as terror or criminals. Consequently, individuals may suffer from negative impacts on their mind and these misleading articles are likely to lead individuals to a wrong awareness of our society.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, a great number of humans strongly believe that there are quite a few reasons why each individual ought to read newspaper regularly. First of all, when everyone expose to news or newspaper which relate to our environment namely air pollution or soil pollution, they can aware of dangers of pollution deeply. As a result, humanity may find solutions to tackle these problems as well as contributing to the beautiful nature together. Secondly, if members of media strategies post criminal news on the internet or other electronic media, they can prevent a mass quantity of people from breaking the law. It means that people who commit a crime on purpose can have a full view about consequences if breaking the law. Therefore, reading newspaper may provide humans with countless of merits provided people read them on national websites.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although there are several reasons why people suppose that watching news is time-wasting, I still agree that newspaper plays an indispensable part of human life because it brings individuals a huge source of helpful information relating to our citizens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local Newspaper I reading article computers I agree kids adults time enjoying nature interacting family friends But also kids adults fun time outside enjoying But comes usage computers helpful searching information I think kids adults need get active get healthy kids nt want play outside play outside play video games When I little kid I would always play hide seek mother doesnt like play anymore technology rather computer phone Kids world know use computers nt want outside Computers helful report something important For example people businesses going need computers Also teacher sighs project someone going need computer search information person Finally alot kids nt taking responsibilty school They nt school serious Kids think computers teach everything well wrong things computer made But also making life healthy So thats computers good usage bad time kids nt play outside anymore computer helpfull searching information What I ve sadi nt agree", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "my position of the driverless cars is like old whack cars are driverless cars nobody really drives them anywhere and drivermore cars are like cars that everyone drives her in there.. like if i had an old truck and i have an mustang i will drive the mustang cause its a better generation of the old truck.. the old truck might have issues and the new car probably don't , thats why it called driverless car because people really dont drive the same old car like they used too , they so stuck into the new cars thats coming out and not worried about to old car that been with him for some couple of years, they looking at the new things thats added to the car and forgeting about to old one. to me... i think old cars are sorta better than the new ones.. some new ones are just ugly and they back in the day cars was the stuff.. no lie about that one! but anyway im working on my permit now and already saving up for an car.. im working on finding a job too so i can buy me a car so i wont have to ride the bus anymore and just like driver my own self to school and get my work done so i can gradute and do me for the rest of the years i got to live. and the details i got from the article... i didnt really get any from the artice cause im very sleepy ... i didnt read as much so i don't really know what to write about then driverless cars... they said\" these smart-road systems worked surprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was simply too expensive to be practical.\" they also said google cars is not really good like any other car.. because google sometimes be messing up and giving you false information. i really don't know what else to right about.. so let me just write about cars ,i only like cars if they have like heat and air , a drop top and if they have a radio.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Education is a major reason for commnities to develop, espicially focusing on childern in this prosses. For the reason that kids are the future. Some people prefer their kids to get home-educated, while others believe that it is important for them to go to school. I am a strong advocate that children must go to school for a variety of reasons, wich will be mentioned in this essay.\nTo commence with, eventhough it is important to get a proper education and this can be found in both schools and at home, however, going to school on a daily basis can garantee the kid to communicate with his/her peers. And this can be in a negative or positive way- nowadays, but no matter which way the kid experiences, it is still going to be an experience that the kid will develop and learn from after. And it will assist bulding the child's character, in addition to, other fundemental traits. Like for example, gaining self-esteem, and leading skills, and so on ...\nLikewise, it is children nature to be too energetic- generally speaking- so going to school, and playing with their friends, can be the best way for them to get rid of this energy. For instance, if the kid was running around the house, he propably would get scolded by his parents. Because at home there is no much space like outside. In addition, it is for the child's physical health to be active and go outside, not stay at home all day.\nOverall, I believe that it is a better option for them to go to school instead of getting home-schooled. As well as, communication and playing with other children which can be a proper way for them to get developed mentally and pysically.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, it is perceived that the effective way to remedy issues relating to the environment is to increase the pump price of gas for vehicles generally. Although some people believe that this move would resolve the environmental crisis, however, I vehemently disagree with that statement. This essay will elaborate that petroleum products such as fuel is not the major cause of climate disasters and increasing the cost price will not yield their intended purpose.\r\n\r\nTo start with, research has shown that harvesting trees without replacing them, mining and poor waste management are the major causes of environmental problems. Besides, if we fail to address \r\n\r\nthe aforementioned causes and concentrate on fuel alone, I am afraid that the situation will be worse in the future. For instance, the government should legislate a law that prohibits the cutting of trees, wrongful disposal of waste and regulate mining companies. Despite the fact that increasing the prices of gas would to some extent aid in protecting the environment, nonetheless, it will not have tremendous a benefit as one may think. \r\n\r\nMoreover, even though an uptrend in the prices of gas to some extent will curb about 10% of environmental problems, that in itself is not sufficient, as it will cause hardship on the people as most of them will resort to other activities such as coal mining which will be detrimental to the environment. To exemplify, in 2021, the authorities in Sierra Leone increased the cost of fuel from 10,000 Leones to 20,000 Leones per litre in order to discourage vehicle owners from using their cars. Sadly, the transport fare for public transport shot up and the prices of groceries and other goods became a big challenge for its citizens. In addition, curbing fuel in isolation will not be beneficial to the climate. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, even though some people believe that increasing the cost of fuel for vehicles in my estimation, I totally disagree with that position.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The given table shows the information about the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.\nThere are lot of information clearly mentioned in this image.\nBar X represents the number of employees and factories where as Bar Y indicates the duration(years).\nNumber of employees are gradually reducing from 1851 to 1901 in both genders and reached the lower level at 1901.Overall employee numbers also reduced gradually as like the easrlier.\nIn contrast the number of factories are increased drastically and reached the maximum at 1901 which is 600 factories.\nBased on the picture it is clearly conveyed that the numper of employees are significantly reducing from 1851 and on the other hand the number of factories are tremendously increased when comparing to the year 1851.\nBases on the given information it clearly understands that the increased number of factories may enhance the delopment of the society economically and also which helps to improve the quality of life of the local people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There exists an argument regarding whether learners in high school should be allowed to offer suggestions or to contend with their teachers as a way of promoting the quality of education. Yet, a few others believe this might result in disrespectful and shameful conduct in the learning environment. Personally, I feel the teachers should be allowed to carry out their work without disturbances. In this essay, I will tackle both of these views and give a conclusion.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, the purpose of having a classroom in existence is to ensure the free flow of information among the members. Nonetheless, teachers at times may lack updated data on a given topic and only provide half-barked information to students. That being said, most pupils may have come across more recent data that can be of great benefit to the entire class if they were to be allowed to bring it to the fore. For example, since the current education system requires that teachers should stick closely to the provided syllabus regardless of whether it is updated or not, they are limited in the kind of alterations they can make but to rigidly follow through. Hence, if students are given chance to comment, they can bring up new ideas for the benefit of everyone involved.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, granting students such freedom would mean giving them access to a lack of respect and order in a classroom. To put this in perspective, upon correcting a mistake by their teachers, a pupil might begin to assume that he knows better than them. The resulting impact of this route is an indisciplined student who lacks respect for his tutors. Take for instance, in a survey conducted by the ministry of education in Malawi on impcat of student comments on the classroom environment, it was determined that many pupils lost respect fro their teachers. No wonder the present education system deters any student from making comments or criticizing during lectures.\r\n\r\nBy way of conclusion, I reaffirm my position that not giving chance to learners in high school to comment is key in maintaining law and order at the classroom level.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Companies are spending more on marketing than ever before. With increasing competition, businesses are promoting their products aggressively. Therefore, I believe customers are getting influenced immensely. This essay will discuss the consumers' response by these advertisements and some solutions.\n\n\nFirstly, there is a lot of false information that companies convey about their products. This leads to people believing everything they watch on television or online. The main reason is the cut-throat competition, and to survive they have to sell their products, no matter what. Agencies usually hire already popular celebrities, to gain everybody's trust. For instance, to promote health supplements, athletes are chosen, the customer starts connecting the healthy lifestyle and fitness of that sportsmen with the supplement. One possible solution to the problem can be, celebrities should research all about the brand before endorsing. It will ensure the audience gets the right product.\n\n\nSecondly, with marketing we end up having more items than we need. Misleading promotions are the main reason behind it. For example, if we ever see a luxury brand commercial, they always focus on rich people's lifestyle. This is because, they want to connect their brand with luxury, which has a little to do with the actual product. I feel, government should monetize these commercials, they should check the product's authenticity first, and any type of online marketing should also be checked.\n\n\nTo conclude, companies will always find loopholes in the system, to exploit it. Unless the government impose strict rules, the problem will only escalate. Also, It should be the responsibility of citizens, to check what to trust because the false information will be there.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear editor I believe computers important part modern life proves available everyday Many times nt even think using computers becomes part dayly routine We use computers everyday many ways sometimes stay intouch far away friend learn experience faraway places ever practice hand eye coordination Computers benifical life might able live without Most people experienced friend relitive move happens hope lost use run stay touch Many computers nowadays built webcams alows get email With systems actualy get image fried relative Even oprah winfrey uses webcam feature computers people skype show In adition many ways stay touch even computer older These reletively new social networking series include facebook twitter many Every morning wake sportscenter always famous posting twitter pages This another great use computers In economy many people spending thousands go beach paradise use computers go virtualy Computers great aspect alow learn experience many expensive things For example wanted learn somthing india would nt go local library check book could type many give access information could ever need This prooves also valable studing faraway paper The computer great way get information every leave home Handeye coordination important skill many people lack It alows throw baseball play videogames even drive car Many computer sceptics believe nt benifit using computers recen study done news report reveals people use computers better handeyecoordination computers users When driving often need operate car radio volume pass goldfish kids time could improved handeye cordination would handy Hand eye coordination important skill developed use computers In conclusion computers benificial handeye coordination communication well geting information topic Computers one significant ever valuble many many ways", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays protection of the world environment is becoming a priority for several concerned people. The extent of consuming products is increasing day by day which poses a great threat to this modern world, in terms of land and air pollution. This essay will discuss two main reasons including an increased quantity of wastage and scarcity of organic resources and some solutions to address this overarching issue.\n\nSeveral reasons can be considered responsible for polluting the current ecosystem. Firstly, the waste of products has increased at an exponential rate because of the industrial revolution that the world has observed in recent years. Selling a huge amount of one-time-use bottles by beverage companies is the best illustration of this thing. These canes are a big part of the problem of landfill. In addition, factories are using more and more natural resources. This not only results in depletion of organic fuel but also carbon particles are rising tremendously. It is, therefore, two main factors which are contributing to destroying numerous habitats.\n\nHowever, despite these issues being significant, a variety of measures can be taken to mitigate these obvious problems. To begin with, recycling is one of the best ways to tackle this issue. For example, plastic bottles, and aluminium canes can be used again for repackaging. This activity could reduce the problem of the waste quantity of useless things. Another way is that a handsome amount of profit made by industries could be consumed to save the environment. This can be achieved by building recycling plants along with the introduction of green belts around factories to trap carbon particles from polluted air, released by industries. Therefore, it is possible to reduce the negative consequences of consumerism.\n\nIn conclusion, this essay discussed two major factors that could play a crucial role in increasing trash and how this phenomenon can be dealt with by introducing the culture of recycling and using money from the industrial sector to build green sections around them to purify the air.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\", many points are made as to why Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. In this essay, I will explain each one and why it is reasonable enough to still try to understand Venus.\n\nFirst, there are many dangers on the planet Venus. In the text it says \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide blankets Venus.\" This fact would make it almost impossible to breath on the planet Venus. It also says \"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees farenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet\" This explains that Venus is unhabitable. However, scientists are still discussing further visits to the surface. In the text it explains \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" Long ago, Venus probably had the ability to support life, seeing as many scientists believe it once had oceans just like Earth. The text states \"Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth.\" This explains that despite Venus's dangers, it could still be partly habitable if further discoveries are made. NASA is working on finding ways to study Venus. The text says \"some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\" This is explaining alternative ways scientists can study Venus without worrying about the dangers.\n\nIn conclusion, Venus is still considered a worthy pursuit despite it's dangers because scientists think it was once similar to Earth and still has the chance to, one day, be habitable and support life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This article\n\nis talking about\n\nVenus where the author suggests that studying this planet is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. In this article you can see the description\n\nof Venus , its has a nickname\n\ncalled the \"Evening Star\" ,\n\nis a place to examine more closely , which is a vantage for the scientists.We have numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a\n\nchallenging planet\n\nfor human to study .But its a planet with\n\ndiferents things that make it\n\na planet diferent to our planet , but interesting .\n\nA point that the author used to support\n\nthe idea to study Venus was that Venus is closest planet to Earth, and has similar things as the author said \" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and\n\noccasionally the closest in distance\n\ntoo. \"\n\nBut its has diferences\n\nlike the temperature , in Venus is 90 times greater than our planet and the author said \" These conditions\n\nsee more far extreme than anything humans encounter onEarth.\"\n\nThe author\n\nmake a questiosn\n\nhimself that says \" if our sister planet is so inhospitable , why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface ?\", so what that's mean ,its mean that the Venus planet it's not a good place where humans can be survive\n\nabout the temperature and the health in this planet .But Venus was probably covered largely with oceans\n\nas the Earth .\n\nWe have the NASA's ideas about sending humans to study Venus .\"NASA's possible solutions\n\nto the hostile conditions on the surfac of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray .\"\n\nthey said too\n\nthat the solar power\n\nwould be pentiful and radiation\n\nwould\n\nnot exceed erath levels , not easy conditions , but survivable for human . NASA work on approaches to study Venus\n\nlike electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulation the chaos Venus's surface .\n\nIn conclusion Venus a planet interest to the scientists , beacuse Venus has many similituds and diferences about the temperature , few life and others\n\nand with the NASA's ideas its most interesting . this challenge to study Venus has value , not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet\n\nitself , but also beacuse human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors , thats mean it can be a good work and study for humans in\n\nour planet , because Venus is a interesting place\n\nthat make us imagination and importance for more imformation .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Limiting car usage could come off as absurd to some people. They ask \"Why would I reduce my use of something that gets me to my desired destination the fastest?\" Despite the fact that cars appear to be more conveinient, the harm they do to the Earth far outweighs the benefits. Cars have become more and more prevelant in the entire world since World War II, as society has been built around the car and its ease of use. This unremitting usage of the car has resulted in a shocking amount of pollution to the Earth. The reduction of car usage is advantageous to the environment. Cars produce so much pollution, have a gradual decuction in use would have possitive effects on the environment.\n\nThe greatest advantage of limiting car usage is the positive effects it would have on the environment. It is common knowldge that the Earth is in a state of self-destruction, with humans pouring in incredible amounts of greenhouse gases into it. A high percentage of these harmuful emissions come from cars and other gas-powered vehicles. If car usage was limited, a much healthier Earth would result. According to the article \"In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars\" passenger cars were responsible for 12 percent of grenhouse gas emissions in Europe, and nearly 50 percent in highly congested cities across the United States. With this in mind, cutting these numbers down, even if only in half, would bring about such prosperity to the environemnt that benefits would soon be noticed. These figures show that the reduction of car usage is pivotal in the fight to protect the environment. Also in the article \"Paris Bans Driving Due to Smog\" it is said that car usage became so heavy in Paris that it developed insane amounts of smog, rivaling that of Beijing, which is one of the most polluted cities in the world. Clearly the root of the problem for Paris was the abundance of car usage, which once limited, reduced the smog greatly. This proves that cars can be a huge problem for the environment, but limiting the usage will have near immediate benefits. Again the environmental benefit of limiting car use is seen in the article \"The End of Car Culture.\" The article states that a limit to car usage would \"have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment, since transportation is the second largest source of America's eissions.\" This article does not only say that cars are large part of pollution, but it also directly claims that less usage would be good for the environment. Limiting car usage is very important to maintaining the Earth as it is now. It is gradually becoming more and more polluted, and the limiting of vehicle use can stop that.\n\nDespite the convenience of the car, it is such a harm to the enironment that its limiting of usage is absolutely neccesary. Several exmaples point out that cars are one of the biggest means of pollution, as it seems everyone is always drving them. Limiting car usage is one of the best things that can be done to save the environement. It is obvious that the preservation of our planet is far more important than the convenience of turning a five minute walk into a short one minute trip. With the ecological benefits of the limit of car usage, this limit of usage is defnitly advantageous.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I disagree with this use of technology beacause i think we are relying too much on tech. Today we use so much technology that we are taking a test on a computer that used to be on paper! I worry that if we were to have a nationwide powersurge we'd be sitting ducks. but a couple decades earlier I think we could have been alright. When you are talking with someone you shouldn't rely on tech to tell you how they're feeling, personally I think it's inhumane. I should be able to look at someone and by they're expression (which the computer reads) I myself alone should be able to tell what they are feeling, and if not then you can ask them with your words like a human being would. We aren't robots we don't need to ask siri how are loved ones are feeling. It completely takes away the joys of bonding and in the case of mona lisa, the elegance of mystery. I personally love art and portraits because it's fun to try and figure out what they are thinking and then ask someone else what they think because that person might have a different idea. Using technology would take away peoples idea to different veiw points of the same portrait. I think we should rely on ourselves to figure out what mona lisa is thinking. Personally to me, she looks like a caring guardian kind of woman, maybe a mother or loved one. Going back the text says she was 83% happy, 9%disgusted, 6%fearful, and 2%angry. I say it's 100% up to you. In the case of the students what if the picture is taken when they blink? Or if they sneeze? Jane could be having a really sad day and the picture could be taken at the worng moment and say she was ecstatic. You can rely on tech for these readings you need to read them face to face. Ask them how they are feeling, don't just run up and snap a pic. In conclusion, use your words and ask how someone is feeling!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood memoir happyness friendship glory example My parents always always kept arms door open many people considered family knowing would us A feeling friendship honesty closeknit community honest hardworking immigrants extended hand people necessarily kind clearly need mood memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke Bomberger was one of the many people that participated in the Seagoing Cowboys. He was one that had no clue what was right there in store for him. In this article, he explains many different adventures that he was able to go on, and sites he was able to see. In this article, I will convince you and explain to you the wonderful things that you could do and see if you are in the Seagoing Cowboys Program.\n\nOne of the many things that Luke explained in this article was the heading overseas. Heading overseas means you would be going into a ocean for a long period of time. If you have ever been overseas, you would say that it is an amazing experience. Luke got to go into the Atlanic ocean for 2 weeks while heading to China. He got to see not only the wonderful sights of the ocean, but also the animals that roam the waters.\n\nLuke also describes some of the trips that they go to and see. One of the trips that he said was amazing was the cattle-boat trip. Luke also meantioned that he not only got to see that site but also the wonderful sites of Europe and China. The group also got to go see the Acropolis in Greese. Not to meantion the gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with street waters. Have you ever been to a castle? I sure haven't, but if you join the Seagoing Cowboys, you might be get to see some like Luke did in Panama Canal on his way to China.\n\nI think that joining this club might be pretty fun. If you don't think that traveling in the Atlantic Ocean for 2 weeks, going to a castle, or going on a gondola ride is fun, then there is something wrong with you. Although, I think that if you really went, then you would love it!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Several people hold the thought that graduating from university is the most suitable way to a successful career. However, others claim that it is better to join work right after schooling. In my opinion, studying at college provides more exposure to every student in starting their career in a particular field. Whereas, school won't gives this space for the same. This essay will substantiate both views in my opine in the following paragraphs with relevant examples.\n\nFirstly, employment is necessary for every student where an university plays a crucial role for providing a wide range of opportunities to all the graduates. It allows placements from different companies that gives graduates to improve their skills and help them in getting jobs. Moreover, it encourage students in acquring the practical knowledge and indulge them in field projects where they expose themselves to real world and be confident face the society. For example, students who graduated from college working in reputated company because they have skills and ability to learn in their job. Thus, studying at college help young people in shaping their career.\n\nOn the other hand, some people think students should start employment once they completed their schooling. Despite having less practical knowledge, students work out of enthusiasm. This provides them to grasp the knowledge as their mind acts on high pace. Furthermore, they start earning at their early age if they start working right after school, which helps them to be independent. According to the recent survey, a girl working in an industry who just completed matriculation, support her family with her income.\n\nTo conclude, although employment after schooling is interesting, studying at college always essential to mold a student career in achieving their desired jobs. An university will always stand to motivate their graduates in starting their career.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The auther mad seem like like loved flowers like working syr wit people mom anierpaady liked see togod wit life come back becus thay liked place", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying the planet Venus is worth studying but its worth despite the dangers of it because Venus is second closes planet to Earth. People often called Venus as 'Earth's twin\" because of there terms of size. Scientists believe that planet Venus probably is coverered with large about of oceans and could support any form of life. Another reason why we should discuffer is that in Paragraph 4 it talks about how is that Venus have some features like for exsaple Venus has a surface of rocky sediment has valleys, mountains, and craters. The planet Venus can be our somewhat be our nearest option for planetary vist.\n\nThe reason that its hard for scientists to study Venus is that no spacecraft could survivr in a landing formore then a few hours. Another reason why its defficult to land in paragraph 3 it says \"On the plants surface temeratures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric is over 90 times greather than what we experience on our won planet.\" This gives a exsample of how dangerous and hard it could be to study Venous. NASA had an idea for sending humans to study Venus, and that idea is creating a possible solution to the histile conditions on the surface of Venus. That would allow people to float above the fray.\n\nFinally i believe that studying the planet Venus is worth studing for but its worth despite of the danger of it because we can probably discuffer life or any lifing thing in Venus. We possably find some resourses that Venus have that could help us or change thing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author says a lot about studying venus. there are many examples of what venus is like and how it compares to earth. NASA wants to send people to venus to study it. But going to study venus could be very dangerous for many reasons.\n\nas used in paragraph 3, the author states that\n\n\"the atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide\" . He then also sates that \" on the planets surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit. Also that the atmospheric pressure is 9 times greater than what we experience on our on planet.\" i believe that NASA shoudnt send our people over to the planet because it is way to dangerous.\n\nin conclusion, venus is a earth like planet that NASA studies. i believe that we shouldnt send our people to study because its to dangerous. Also at the same time it would be a great project to study. NASA is going to continue to study venus. its going to be a hard and dangerous planet to study, but they will get the job done.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced attempting dirigible dock ca nt top part building put piece piece building become stressed point might collapse", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In process building empire state building architects many obstacles One main obstacle making foundation strong enough Another wind factor They many problems building Empire state buildingIn order dirigibles dock Empire state Building streghten whale foundation If dirigible docked whale building would twist sway Another problem wind wind coming building would spin dirigibles high rates speedEven though faced many obstacles successfully completed Empire State Building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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