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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of the new technology, the Facial Action Coding System, to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom, is not valuable. It should be used exclusively for educational purposes and to help students gain knowledge on their studies in school.\n\nThis new computer software that can detect emotions should not be used on students, but on other material. Although I do not believe this is a valuable system to use on people, I believe it is valuable for people to use for educational purposes. For example, if students are examining a piece of artwork in art class and need to examine, or would like to determine, the true expression of a person's face in the artwork, this system could be used for that. If students wanted to go more in-depth and figure out specific percentages for each of the person in the painting's expressions, they could also use this system. The text reads, \"She’s 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\" This was figured out by using the Facial Action Coding System on the painting of Mona Lisa, which determined careful, specific percentages of each of her emotions shown in her portrait, all within her neutral facial expression. I believe this system should be used in the classroom, exclusively for students' education and for examining certain material, such as artwork.\n\nI believe there are better, more educational uses for the Facial Action Coding System than to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom. This system could be used for students interested in, or participating in, a technology class. The text reads, \"Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements—in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa.\" The video imagery would be incredibly valuable to a student working with technology as a way to capture careful movements and detect emotions of artwork or another educational source. The text also reads, \"The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles.\" I believe students, especially ones working with technology, should be able to use this system, as it would be a valuable tool to use if they were to examine or study this process. It is important that this system is used correctly; to help students with their education and expand their knowledge on subjects in school, such as technology.\n\nI do not believe the use of the Facial Action Coding System is valuable for detecting students' emotional expressions. It has better uses, such as for close examinations of artwork, research, and statistics. I feel as if students do not need a system to \"de-code\" our emotions, as students are typically able to fully express theirs on their own. Although it may be difficult to detect certain emotions of a student and encourage them to fully express them, I feel it is necessary to keep it that way, in respect for the student. The text reads, \"classified six basic emotions—happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness\" which I firmly believe is not useful, nor valuable. Typically, those six basic emotions are easiIy detected by humans and do not require a computer system. I do not believe a computer software system should determine students' emotions, let alone any humans', unless they would personally like to use it. I think of the Facial Action Coding System as more or a toy, if it is used to detect human's expressions rather than an educational material's expressions, such as a piece of artwork.\n\nThe use of the Facial Action Coding System to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is not valuable. This system should be used for educational purposes, whether it is used for close examination of a person in an artworks' expression, or for research or statistics in technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars, some people think they are the most important things ever made. In some places like Colombia they barley ever use them. Some people in Colombia even say that their everyday life is maybe even easier. People actually do get more easilystressed by just owning a car. With all this evidence given it is clear that limiting cars would be an advantage.\n\nCars are in fact a big disadvantage. In source one it even goes into detail about how much money it is to just to be a car-owner. In Freiburg, Vauban's streets there are \"car-free\"  car-owners spend $40,00 along with a home to have space for their cars. As results to this 70 perecent of people in Vauban are not car-owners and 57 percent sold their cars. In source one it also says that the United States previous bills were 80 percent alone have gone to the highways and another 20  percent to transport. In source two and three Paris and Colombia were having to pay for fines of $25 to $31.\n\nAs another result to all the money people are playing just to be a car-owner people get very stressed over all of this. In source three Colombia banned cars with the exception of buses and taxis. After three years of banned cars people hiked, biked, skater, took the bus or took a taxi. With the three years and still in progress people in Colombia soon began to relise that \"it's a good opportunity to take away stress\" said Carlos Arturo Plaza a local buisness man in Colombia.\n\nOf course no one could buy any cars or stress over them if we can't breath. Cars do hurt our enviroment and green houses. By the gas and pollution we put into the world by just driving our cars around isnt any safter as if we got into a car crash. Everytime we drive cars or take the bus we just hurt our planet, plants, and people a little more and more. Just by this fact alone people should know that driing cars around everywhere is a giant disadvantage.\n\nIt would be an advantage to limit car usage because cars make everyone pay large amounts of money just to be called a car-owner. From spending all this money and being fined over stuff people do believe isn't fair most people in fact do stress themself out over this which is not healthy for anyone. Another fact abput limiting cars is that it would indeed improve our saftey not one for us people but for our enviroement too.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If walk store see book dont like magazine could care less able get rid My answer You libraries books say displayed store You viewers buyers suppliers dont like dont buy look When I eighth grade I went church missions trip There alot cool things I saw This one popular places When would nt working serving others would walk around shopping There alot people city packed time Now said alot different stores opinion time thought inappropiate age level My whole group walked store really didnt belong clue kind store Our actions simply invovled nodding heads good bye cashier walking continuing day shopping We remove books pictures even magazines store Reason store right remove anything After left people walked store liked saw would removed items wouldnt got see liked That would like someone removing something store I like meaning d never get see I would nt want If walk store see something like nt able try get rid object Whether want kids seeing cant You take risk walking store seeing store youYou browse around buy things would like Every store certain things find offensive people might like That goes opposite people find offensive might like It big chain many loops So say take piece material shelf display Now material gone thought offensive Say another person walks ame store takes something shelve thought offensive Now two things gone shelve actually liked took shelve upset took This cause alot conflict big situations future allowed One person likes one person doesnt If dont like see store nt walk simply ignore stuff offensive These opinions catagory I believe nt able take stuff shelves terminate stores products Always aware getting self know outcome decisions make This could cause alot lossed jobs many conflicts shoppers viewers like I hope take consideration understand reasonings I said", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays , Pollution and housing problem is one of the major cause of various types of diseases. According to some ,folks it is the whole sole government's responsibility to focus on these problems which will lead to good human life , I partially agree with this statement as it should be the citizen's responsibility as well. The same will be discussed in further paragraphs with a suitable conclusion .\r\n\r\nTo commence with, Firstly, the government should definitely pass some laws to reduce pollution, for example, stop releasing untreated water from factories in water bodies so that the general public of that area won't consume polluted water . Another example, improving refuse collection from door to door so that housing problems can be improved . Moreover, the government can run some awareness programmes so that the general public will become more conscious of how a polluted environment can lead to severe illness . \r\n\r\nOn the other hand , it is not only the government's responsibility to take care of these issues , being responsible citizens of the country everyone should help in this . Such as stopping using one-time plastic means it can not be reused , another example , is focusing on recycling or at least sorting garbage in different bins so that government can manage it further . Moreover , stop throwing rubbish anywhere , it should be thrown in bins only . Try to make the earth greener by plantation such as planting more trees which will possibly lead to a reduction in environmental pollution and will help in preventing disease.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, Definitely government should focus on pollution and housing problems issue by raising awareness that how detrimental it could be to humans life and can lead to illness or disease but it should be individual responsibility as well to take care of their surroundings which can help them to live a better and healthy life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper I believe use computer horrorable thing people world I think nt exercise enjoy great outdoors good time family friends When computer exercising body This problem exercising thing stop life span could greatly shorten nt stop children grow larger healthy So children care internet healthy expert said PERCENT children school today pounds grades average pounds less grades computer craze stop kids continue go side get fun Smart parensts wanting children fun back yard children inside side get vitimans sun The experts said CAPS children stop going computers never see true beauty outdoors see nature thing children need Interacting friends family important everyone Because one family member health problem go hospital one never talk One year I found great grandmother died cancer I idea cancer And I wish I hospital But nt never talked Do nt let kind thing happen talk fun friends family So see use computers horrorable life end sooner children get fat drift apart friends family So nt let happen anyone else Tell everyone", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood memoir changes throughout story First mood starts friendly In neighborhood despite customs elsewhere cultures came together great solidarity friendship This tells us everyone neighborhood nice In middle story mood strong determined They struggled personally financially braving harsh northern winters This tells people stay strong hard times Lastly end story greatful I never forget house gracious neighborhood many things I learned love This tells narrator thankful All moods story fit together nicely", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Here are some reasons why it would be great being a seagoing cowboy. Some reasons are because you can explore a lot of seas you wouldnt except also you could probaly also meet a lot of new people and be friends, but it would also be really scary cause a lot of people die in seas because they can drowned or can die cause you wouldn't have food or anything because you would be traveling through the sea with food but probaly not enough because eery one can eat it all and you would not have any more food left or water left for all of the guys that are traveling with you guys so they would die cause of thurst or starvation witch can lead you to die. But you could also crash and break a bone or die during the crash. Here are some information about the story of seagoings cowboys and some information about Like Bomberger. Luke Bomberger crossed the Atlantic ocean 16 times and the Pacific Ocean twice to help the people affected by world war ll. some information is that when luke was in the boat i think they crashed witch lead him to crack his ribs. But i think it would be really dangers being a seagoing cobow.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article the author uses many examples on why Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The article not only talks about his side he also talks about the opposing side. As said in Paragraph two \"since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than three decades.\" This is just one example of the article doing great in inlcuding his train of thought and the opposing side. Another example in the article where the author talks about the opposing side is \"These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth.\" This is commonly done by authors who are giving you both sides of the argument and then backing theres up with further explanation.\n\nAs you continue reading the article the author then supports the idea on why Venus is a worthy pursuit. He mentions that \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various froms of life, just like Earth\" This is huge because another planet that supports life can lead to many maginificent finidings worth checking out is basically what the author is trying to get out of you. Further into the article the author brings up the idea that \"a blimp-like vehicle could be hovering 30 or so miles above the rolling Venusian landscape\" This gives a much safer and reliable option that the author mentions to study Venus and like said in the article \"avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way\"\n\nTo come to a consluion the author did a great way of explaining both sides of the topic \"should Venus be explored despite the dangers it presents.\" The author supports his opinion with facts and safer options to study Venus. These safer options can get the reader to agree with Venus being explored. Finally the author made great connections between both sides but making his opinion stronger.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that driverless cars should be made. Driverless cars can make the said driver's life easier, because they'll be able to talk to people without worrying about getting in a crash, they can find something that they dropped on the floor. Seeing movies and shows that include a self driving car as kids has always been fascinating.\n\nEven though some people appose this idea, it could make everyone's lives and jobs much easier. If you have a phone call from a very important persn at your workplace, you would normally have to pull over and take it, put the phone on speaker, or use Bluetooth. But with a driverless car, you can take the phone call and not have to worry as much about getting in a car accident.\n\nAs cars are being made better everyday, we always find a reason to go and get the new model of the car. So why not a driverless car be the next one?\n\nWe can get around still, do all the same things, but we won't have to steer, or do anything as much with the car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that many individuals believe that reading the news in the press and watching it on television wastes too much time as it does not relate to any aspects of their lives. Personally, I partly agree with this view due to some reasons.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, It is considered to be a waste of time to catch the news through the newspaper or social media as the appearance of numerous fake news every day. This happens because there are some content creators nowadays who make themselves well-known by posting untrue stories online. This leads to the problem that people involved in the stories somehow are not only misunderstood but also misjudged by the readers. For example, a few famous artists in Viet Nam were said to pass away after a long time suffering from cancer, while they are actually fine. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, reading or watching the news is suggested as the best way to keep up with the latest information about things happening around the world. People living far away need the news to catch up with what is occurring in their hometown or country. Besides, news can help us to improve our general knowledge as well. For instance, about 3 years ago when the Covid-19 pandemic broke out, everyone had to be isolated from each other and therefore, getting news on some online basis or on TV was the most efficient way to get information about what we had to do to prevent the disease. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it seems to me that the news has both positive and negative extents. It is necessary for readers to choose the source of news carefully in order to get accurate information.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author memoir creates loving peaceful happy mood story It always saying house always filled friends family This gives story loving mood shows Also paragraph says Here innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed formed backdrop lif warm home This sentence shows home loving warm Lastly mood Narciso throughout memoir greatful He always saying much appreciates parents moving create better life That mood memoir throughout whole passage", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As a teacher imagine being able to have more students engaged with a class lesson that they enjoy, this can very well be the future at some point in time with new technology such as the Facial Action Coding System.\n\nThe FACS can percieve the emotions of others and send feedback as to which emotions they are feeling which is valuable information within a classroom setting.\n\nIn paragraph 6 it states that \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\"\n\n\"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"\n\nThis is valuable information as it allows the teacher or instructor to modfiy the lesson so that it corresponds with the students emotion which in return allow for more students to be engaged with a class lesson.\n\nThis new technology also allows for the instructor to be able to empathize with a student that may be feeling sad or distrought.\n\nIn paragraph 9 it states that \"moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may produce them.\" this means that the instructor can use the feedback to put on a \"happy face\" to empathize with the students more which means that if you're smiling anyone around you is more likely to smile and empathize aswell.\n\nThese are multiple reasons as to why I believe that the Facial Action Coding System in a classroom setting is valuable, not only to the teacher's success, but the students' aswell.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are horses still a useful means of transportation? Years and years ago people thought that horses were the best way to get from here to there. They would not run off of a cliff or into another horse, if they saw danger they would stop and avoid the collision. If the driver could manage to get used to the bumps, he or she could probably even fall asleep riding a horse. Now, people have decided that these large metal boxes called cars are safer and more useful for the people inside of them. It just so happens that we seem to be going back to the days of riding horses. New technology has given us the ability to create cars that are able to drive themselves. These self driving cars are the most convenient way to get from point a to point b.\n\nHow great would it be to live in a big city that had taxis everywhere? All a person would have to do to get somewhere is just walk toward the street and wave their arms for one. But inside each taxi is a driver who would probably much rather be doing something else. This upcoming technology gives people the ability to make every city a city where no one has to drive. Just walk up to the street, get into an empty car, and wait until it arrives at the requested destination.\n\nHow much time do people drive every day? Some drive for hours every day. Think of all the possibilities in these hours. If a person could just get in a car and wait for their arrival, they could do whatever they wanted in this time. Perhaps they have some reading they want to catch up on, or some computer work they have to do, if they don't have to drive, they can do whatever they desire during this newfound freetime.\n\nSometimes people can be careless and dangerous when they are driving a car. This recklessness can endanger the lives of many people, including their own. If a vehicle was capable of avoiding these dangers and able to constantly communicate with other vehicles around it, it would be able to get people where they need to go much quicker and safer than today's vehicles are capable of doing. These new cars, much like the horses people used to ride, would make car accidents a rare occurance.\n\nThese new self-driving cars are going to be one of the most life-changing inventions this world has known. These vehicles will be easy to find and easy to use. They will give their users more free time as they ride in them. And\n\nmost importantly, after a few years of perfecting their programming, they will prevent most accidents. These new cars are going to reinvent how we get where we need to go.If these vehicles are able to do all of this and drive all on their own, what do they do in their free time?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article the author presents both positive and negative aspects to driverless cars. My position on the driverless cars is positive. My postiton is positive for two supportive reasons. One reason is that the driverless cars will use half the fuel of todays taxis. Another reason is that the cars will offer far more flexiblity than a bus.\n\nThe driverless cars will use half the fuel of todays taxis. The driverless cars will help\n\nincresse the world from more air pouloution than we alredy have. The cars will also help the oceans and the water streams from oil leaks and ect.The driverless car will also help the eco system and even better yet it will stop the ovone layer from opening even more.\n\nThe driverless car offer far more flexibility than a bus. The driverless car will help people that are in a rush to get where they have to go and not have to stop at all thoses bus stops on the way. The car will also be in favor the the people that missed the bus and wont have any more transptation to get where they have to go ,\n\nThe author did a great job of presenting both positive and negative aspects on the driverless cars.My reasons support why my postion on driverless cars is positive.The car will bing joy and a more healthy eco system to todays world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock nt lot room land The length four blocks New York City They also needed consult experts take tours equipment They lots experiments tests dirigibles It also dangerous land It also bad enviroment hydrogen used s highly flammable Dirigibles ca nt dock nt stable makes safe people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is software that can percieve peoples emotions. The software which goes by the name, the Facial Action Coding System, can detect feelings accurately. Some uses of this new technology is astounding. But would it really be helpful in the classroom? While this new technology seems promsing, it just wouldn't work in the classroom. This is due to the technology being inaccurate, flawed, and inconsistent.\n\nFirst off, the Facial Action Coding System could allow teachers in schools to modify lessons but that doesn't mean it will help matters at all. For example, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" While this technolgy can read the emotions and help notice when the lesson needs to be modified, that doesn't mean it will prevent students from becoming bored and actually get information from the lesson. Especially when its taken into considerstion that there are usually twenty to thirty students in the classroom. What may help one student doesn't always apply to the other twenty or so students in the class. Therefore the technology seems flawed as it can apply to one student but not necessarily twenty to thirty students.\n\nAlso, the Facial Action Coding System can be inaccurate like all technolgy. Human beings are very off sometimes when attempting to read emotions. Who says technology can be any better. The passage shows, \"For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face. Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc.\" This example shows how humans misinterpret emotions. Technology can easily do the same thing. Another example of this is the Mona Lisa painting. The text states,\"The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computer can do.\" This example shows that the technology can be inaccurate because the technology may recieve one range of emotions from the painting, a person could recieve a completely different set of emotions. This example could very well apply to a student in class because everything is different from student to student.\n\nIn conclusion, the Facial Action Coding System seems promising in a classroom but seems very flawed, inconsistent, and inaccurate. Students may or may not benefit from their emotions being read and lessons being changed in the classroom. Each student is different, so one change will not benefit all students.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concluded story like positive Like geese coming back positive take test She knows pass test In story said Many things thought strange become quiet reptition season upon season almost familiar hernow This means moved thought everything strange seen anything like Now living would get use knows happen nothing become strange anymore since home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is broadly believed that every adolescent would not only personally benefit from spending their leisure time for jobs without payment as requested but also provide aid to their neighborhood. From my perspective, I find this point of view favorable.\nFirstly, spending their spare time on some simple labor can be considered as an internship that helps the youth develop professionally, socially, and even emotionally. Working without the expectation of salaries or wages gives teenage boys and girls opportunities to cultivate and enhance their skills, to make social connections with their peers and superiors, and on top of it all, to learn to appreciate the meaning of the jobs. For example, volunteering at the local soup kitchen gives youngsters who are passionate in cooking chances not only to do what they love, but also make friends and sharpen their skills if they want to become a chef in the future. Ultimately, at the end of the day, a sense of contentment and happiness would rise in them as they reflect on how many hungry people they have helped feed. \nFurthermore, contributions from male and female adolescents who work in their free time are altogether gradually making the society a better place. Revisiting the aforementioned example of teenagers who work in the local soup kitchen for free, it can be asserted that they are, in fact, helping laborers with lower incomes to finish their jobs of serving the society, such as giving nutrition to street sweepers who keep the town clean. The youth’s work undoubtedly belongs to a chain reaction where one small good deed leads to another.\nIn conclusion, I strongly believe putting adolescents to work in their free time gives them personal benefits in a variety of aspects, as well as facilitates other indirect positive influences on the society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Obesity has become a protracted conundrum globally. Certain individuals believe that raising the cost of fast food is the solution. This essay totally disagrees with this view because depriving people of fats can lead to other dangerous illnesses. Furthermore, sometimes, obesity is the product of lifestyle, unrelated to fatty products.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, while raising the prices of takeaways, for example, could lead to reduced consumption, not everyone will fail to access these, and people deprived of fat can develop other conditions, such as mental illnesses. For instance, several studies in Africa find that the shortage of Omega 12 and Vitamin B minerals, which can be obtained from certain fats from takeaways, is the leading cause of depression in the continent.\r\n\r\nSecondly, it is imprudent to imagine that obesity is only related to fastfood like fried chips and chicken. It could also result from poor lifestyle choices or realities, such as the lack of exercise and living with chronic stress. For example, it was reported in several media platforms, during the Covid-19 pandemic, that social distancing measures, preventing individuals from their routine exercises, caused them to gain weight. Such media outlets encouraged people to engage in indoor workouts to improve their health.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, therefore, this essay completely refutes the notion that increasing the prices of weight-causing foodstuffs is the best solution for obesity. While it prevents consumers from purchasing the foodstuffs, it also deprives them from accessing important nutrients, which causes distress to their health. Likewise, increasing weight can also be the product of poor lifestyles, which must be addressed to improve overall well-being.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The memoir Narciso Rodriguez creates warm peaceful interesting mood The way author described way used live looks like lived loving peaceful enviroment She also creates spanish theme I could relate For example paragraph says passionate Cuban music s grateful know cook She also said paragraph never forget parents turned simple house home That quote makes mood memoir loving", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever enough patients deal screaming kids I proudly say It started uncle steve decided move They needed alot help decided take five kids sister I help The problem kids So packed bags headed My expedition car us could fit But didnt take long everybody get uncomfortable Everybody starts feel smocshed get really hot So kids start fighting My got real stressed real fast I thank god atleast car But I sitting front I didn CAPS get watch After hours Id enough My legs getting cramped constant motion making dizzy By driving hours one rest stop It dark We ones road moment I sank lower seat Then Everybody screamed even At first I thought got car accident I opened eyes I alive We hit deer It slid across hood car Finally hours reached It morning I ended surprising much patients I After I dont think I want go roadtrip", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people think that it is more important to prioritize the education of adults with low education over the education of young people and that the government should invest more money in this area. In my opinion, while the government should assist uneducated adults, it should not be a priority, particularly over educating young people.\n\nOn the one hand, the progress of a country or nation depends on the education of the next generation. In other words, young people are particularly important to the development of the country, and the thoughts of contemporary young people will affect the direction of the country in the next 20 to 30 years. For example, Liang Qichao, the leader of the Reform Movement of 1898 in the late Qing Dynasty, once said, \"A strong youth makes a country strong.\" During the signing of the Treaty of Versailles after the First World War, Germany, the defeated country, handed over Shandong, which should belong to China, to Japan. This led to the outbreak of the May 4th Movement in China, and the main force of the demonstrations were young students. These two examples fully illustrate that the education of young people will affect the future development of the country.\n\nAdults, on the other hand, are also a part of the state. Their role is to pass on experience in different areas of knowledge to younger generations. It is their responsibility to ensure a peaceful transition from the older generation to the younger generation. Additionally, the proportion of young people in each country is significantly greater than the proportion of illiterate adults. If the focus of education is changed to educating adults who cannot read and write, it may change the country's economy and destiny.\n\nAll in all, although adults play a pivotal role in society, it does not make sense to spend a lot of money on them. However, equal action for children is justified because of their potential to change the fortunes of nations. So, I still strongly disagree with this statement.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The whole \"can you imagine a timeinthe future when no onw buys cars because no one needs them anymore\" is the hook in. We'll always need cars only because they're our way of transportion. Cars are the only way of transportion unless you pay to fly, or take a bus.\n\nGoogle has createted a car that car drive its self around, can stop the car for you. The car will alret you when you get to close to another car, the seat will virbate when you get to close to another object when backing up. The car can navigate its way through a traffice jam. It can handle up to speeds of 25 miles per hour. It cna streem accelerate, and brake itself.\n\nThe car can read the postive and neagtive polarity as messages in bianry code. They require massive upgrades ti existing roads, something that was simply to expensie to be particlal. But without the opition of smater roads, manufactures tunred to smarter cars. They had to figure out how much the carneeded to be. But first they needed to start with a whole bunch of sensors. Sensors are nothing new of course. But thats how they needed to start out, if they wanted the car to be a whole lot smarter.\n\nThey have to think about the law. If a car of drivoing itself and it gets into a crash who's at fault? The driver the car of the manufacturer? They would have to take that court. The traffic laws are always changning so they maufacturer would have to update the car a lot depening on when the laws change.\n\nDriveless cars are better than no cars at all. So it'd be niceto have drverlesscar.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nThe Electoral College is widely awknowledged for serves a purpose as a method of selecting a president and vice president, not a legitimate college. The Electoral College was established by the founding fathers in the Constitution as a compromise between having the President elected by a vote in Congress and an election by a popular vote of qualified citizens. This process of choosing a president needs to be modified into popular vote for the reasons that the Electoral College was established to actually vote a slate of electors, voters feel disenfranchised, and is unfair to voters.\n\nTo begin with, the Electoral College was actually established for voters to vote for a series of electors, which then get together to have the final decision. Stated in \"What is the Electoral College?\" by the Office of the Federal Register, \" The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise...process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress.\" This means that under this system, voters don't vote for the president, but for electors who then elect the president. The voters sometimes aren't told full front that they are chosing someone else and not always can they control who their electors are voting, leaving many puzzled. Voters aren't to be puzzled. They are to vote who they'd like because it allows them a freedom to express who they want because they are strongly awknowledged of the troubles of their society and how they should be handled.\n\nIn addition, the Electoral College makes voters feel discouraged and disenfranchised. According to \"In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President\" by Richard A. Posner, it is stated, \" No region...has enough electoral votes to lect a president...residents of the other regions are likely to feel...that their votes do not count...that he really isn't their president.\" This means that voters feel that the presidnet they chose is their president because they believe their votes count.\n\nFuthermore, the Electoral College is unfair and irrational to voters because the candidates they \"vote\" for don't spend time with them. Sizes matter to the candidates. According to \"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\" by Bradford Plumer, it is stated, \"...the electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-takes-all system in each state, candidates do't spend time in states they know have no chance of winning...\" This quote conveys that because some states are small in population and size, they will not help the candidate succeed. This is immensely discouraging to the voters because they feel worthless for not being big in size. Candidates should not have an excuse to not thank all their voters because every vote counts, not matter how small.\n\nAdmittedly, the Electoral College allows a clear and certain outcome because it exceeds the popular vote, however, the method is actually turning off potential voters for a candidate. The popular vote allows every voter to express their opinions because the overall vote chooses the puopular president.\n\nIn the final analysis, a change is needed because with the Electoral College many candidates are losing potential voters considering that the qualified feel that they arn't doing much by voting considering they aren't voting for the president, but a gamut of electors to vote for them. They alos express the feeling of discontent and unfairness because they feel that they don't count and know they have no chance at winning.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created memoir I think comfort happiness First paragraph Here innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations These make people happy childhood family friends partys wonder I think memoir happy Also paragraph My parents always kept arms door open many people consider family knowing would us This puts smile face people giving others nt I hope brings smile Last paragraph filled air sent music life love I read I think nothing bad jut family singing laughing warm cozy fire place It brings comfort Over thats I think memoir comforting happy", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The advancement in the technology makes the people believe that sooner all the jobs would be replaced by the robots. In my opinion there is no doubt that artificial intelligence has replace the workforce but it cannot be completely replaced by the robots. I will elaborate my opinion in the below paragraphs.\r\n\r\nTo start with, there is no doubt that the technology has expending its arms in each and every field whether it would be a hospitality, medical, ecommerce, transportation and airlines. By this, the technology has replaced the few workforce in many fields but still robots are also handled by the human. Let's take a very simple example of computer. Initially all the work in offices like hotels, hospitals and airprts used to be done manually and for that the large workforce need to be put in the field. So after arriving the computers, the hospitals can easily fetch the data from computer with the help of only one person, no one need to find the files and put the files back and arrange them. \r\n\r\nTo continue with, lets take a recent example of automatic washing machines. in the past days two to three people used to wash the clothes by hands and used to spend 2-3 hours on that and now for the same work we need one person to operate the machine. So it does not completely replace the work force but reduced the numbers. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, the artificial intelligence make the life easier and confortable but it cannot work without human interference. In my opinion, the technology cannot completely reduce the workforce, it makes the life easier.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Lots of people might think that all this new tech is stupid and not helping you out at all. But when you look into it you'll be suprised to see how much this tech can actually. I think Facial Action Coding System would help so much in school CPU's, Most kids would barly be getting bored in class and actually be intrested in the subject for once. because lets be honest we all get bored when we just stare at the computer doing the same thing over and over again.\n\nI think this new type of technology needs to be in classrooms right away. In ( Paragraph 9) it states that \" Classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\". but \" Then it can modify the lesson\". This proves to us that kids will always stay intrested in classrooms. So when you are intrested you're also paying attention, and when you're paying attention students are likely to get that much of a better grade in that class.\n\nBut with every good thing also comes with some flaws.Other people think all this new technology is going to distract everybody from their learning, Or the kids wont be focused on thier grades. Well im here to state thats incorrect. I say that because in (Paragraph 6) the whole point of the technology is to keep people intrested to what they're doing in class. In the text it states \" If you smile when a web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow, but if you frown, the next ad will be different,\" That just proves that their should be no way schools should turn around from this piece of technology.\n\nAll of this new technology is really helping out the world, and I think the Facial Action Coding System just adds on to that. it keeps people intrested, and it doesnt even bore people. Thats why I agree with adding this Technology to schools right away.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The challenge of Exploring venus,\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents by telling that\n\nFirts of all the article bagans with a very detailed presentation of what is Venus, wher its located and the nicknames that scientists gave for it. In the first paragraph the author says that it has been proved that Venus is a very challenging place to examine more closely. Venus is like the \"twin\" of the Earth because of his density and size. Just in the first 2 paragraphs he explain how humans already have sent\n\nnumerous spacecraft, and each previous mission was unmanned, because no sapacecraft launched has touched down on Venus. He reiterate the argument that venus is a challenging planet for humans to study.\n\nIn my opinion paragraph 3 is one of the most supporting paragraph to the idea of that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite, he starts to say the risk that persons could have if they go to Venus,\n\n\"On the planet's surface temperatures average is over 800 degrees Farenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experince aon our planet\". He keep saying the extreme conditions that humans could not face. He asked himself why are scientists even discussing to visit it, but he knows the rason very well: Venus once have been the most Earth-like planet in aou solar system. He continue talking about how NASA is working\n\non other approaches and studying Venus.\n\nIn his last paragraph he wrote, \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expandedto meet the very edges of imagination and innovation,\" meaning that we don't have to have limits, but we need to have more criteria about knowledge, imagination, and innovation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The essential survive crazy thing called life So instead writing one experience laughter key element I going write montage true events laughter shows true colors I I think I start blond moments first seems s natural hair color When I little I would take shirt throw ground like mommy I ca nt find shirt would tell PERSON threw ground I would look wrong places result crying floor would pick shirt floor hand I would thing Yeah could say I little embarrassed I got older video camera s I love grow laugh embarrassing move There another time figured initials spell whenever I go swimming brother friends start singing theme song I start laughing I let think I nt care eventually Guess still nt stopped I beginning think I stuck nickname rest life The kept rolling I first grade brother way second grade decided tell first grade teacher I called parents began laugh like crazy told yeah little thing called Looking back funny I remember look face could say classic As I advanced years moving I joined organization I learned later color black prohibited functions Well night I initiated I wore black hair accessories shoes I felt embarrassment need laugh I found later I like make jokes funny comments whenever I get nervous speech I get give speech front approximately onehundred twenty people I made little efforts making jokes comments I mention I nt jokes ceremony went people went along laughed even though I hit head dream catcher taught okay cry depressing things life okay fear things frighten okay love anyone want okay live life importantly okay laugh mistakes I think one thing I always remember pass children I settle family wo nt awhile I learned lesson I babysitting little cousins sick lot responsibility thing brother helped I would nearly lost without I know people surround positive attitudes hearts gold formed become better person laugh seems way learn mistakes laugh well show deeper meaning way life meant lived Remember life hands lemons take opportunity make sweet lemonade throw friends get laugh every Thank", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the recent compititive era , the young generation face the multiple problems in the work selection. Mostly, the higher education institutions are hardly able to meet the professional choice of the students . There are many and various reasons behind this problem. In my piece of writing, I shall shed light on the reasons behind this problem.\nMore importantly, a sole cause which shows incapability of the universities to provides unsatisfation in the job is the cut throat compitition. For example, in every field of the qualification, the number of white colour unemployed is increasing rapidly. The higher institutions can not unlock the door of education equvilence jobs. So, the universities can bless the limited number of work chances. Apart from this, due to population explosion, the quantity of the candidates is relatively much more. There are more than double eligible person as compare to the number of vacant positions.\nMore admittedly, the universities timely provide placements to the learners, while the learning time period . But it is depend upon the capability of the youngers to get the job. To illustrate, the education institutions arrange the various workshops and talent tests for the students to give them chance to shift professional compass toward the right choice. Furthermore,sometimes , with the less demand of the particular field, an education system encourages the students to gain experience in other field, which helps the youngers to earn name and fame in various fields with the transforming skills one sector to the other.\nIn a nutshell, sometimes, the universities are unable to provide proper and appropriate work area to the young generation because of spike compititon and over papulation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is an ongoing debate regarding paying taxes. While some people argue that they should possess all the money they earn without paying taxes to the government, I believe that citizens should pay taxes considering the benefits of society. This essay will discuss my opinion in detail with relevant examples. \n\nTo begin with, income is needed for countries to provide free facilities to people. That is to say that the government is providing free access to amenities such as healthcare and education to their civilians and they indeed need money to pay for the workers in public services in order to maintain the well-being of society. Such services cannot be provided without taxing the income professionals. For instance, developed countries like the United States and Canada are taxing an average of 18% to 20% of their citizen's salaries as it is reasonable because the policymakers cannot always rely on the support of other countries. \n\nAdditionally, if the masses are not paying taxes, it would contribute a huge burden to the state budget. In other words, authorities do not have a significant source of income to manage their budget while providing such free facilities to their countrymen. Therefore, they are pushed into a situation to continuously seek financial aid from wealthy nations which leads to a financial crisis. For example, India introduced a taxation policy in 1890 after they were impacted by a huge economic downturn. \n\nIn conclusion, although some proponents argue that people should refrain from paying taxes, I believe that citizens should pay at least a certain percentage of their salary to the state for the services they use as well as to balance the budget for societal benefits.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper stand hole computers thing becoming big issues people spending time books instead comuitateing friends family exercising injoying nature Just like expert tinker siad book called computers To much time computers rackemed saven hours outsiad make wnight people get coumite shion friends family I bet know kids siting thier cowth play vite games Another people need exercis leading country abeast due litle exercise mostly computersAnd last importint well people injoy nature fullist blivie jack cup thinks said PERCENT people injoy nature years longer people likely heart I think computers bad people jackup sisintsits many percentages well", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Few people believe that the youth should be asked to perform the social service during their idle time, as it would be beneficial to them and to the local group. In my opinion, I completely agree because the young generation would understand the importance of the responsibility in their life and would also gain experience before starting their professional career.\n\n\nFirstly, the teenager would acknowledge their contribution to the humanity by indulging in the daily job during their spare time. This platform would enhance their social skills and also they would be more mature to take a decision at their homes and towards the society, as they would be faced with the multiple real-life challenges in the future. Therefore, they would not be shocked when difficult circumstances arise in their life. Furthermore, the community gets the advantage of working with the manpower, which does not cost to them. For example, In India, it is a mandatory exercise given by the schools to the students that they should spend one month with a local NGO in their region, which would aid in enhancing their personality.\n\n\nSecondly, Youngster would experience the working style in different local bodies, and this would assist in grasping the corporate culture, which would further prepare them to assignment efficiently after their tertiary education. Additionally, they can learn to act professionally when working in any organization. For instance, a recent study proves that the trainee who comes for a short term training program gains significant knowledge about the style of working in company and it has helped them to duty with the higher productivity whenever they start working for any firm.\n\n\nIn conclusion, social responsibility enhances maturity in the teenager and they imbibe the quality of being professional while working during their free time. While society gets benefited by working with the youth, who are energetic and it also do not impact them financially. Given the situation, I strongly believe that the youth should be involved to project with the NGO during their summer breaks, which is mutually beneficially to both the parties.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate over family trees. While some claim that it is necessary for people to study their family history, the opposite makes a statement that they should concentrate on present and future generations. Whereas the former is valid to some extent, I consider myself an advocate of the latter. \r\n\r\nWithout a shadow of a doubt, family history plays a paramount essential role in each family. Family history helps descendants to absorb beauties, continuing the good traditions of their ancestors. For example, the family has a tradition of studying medicine, their children will often be educated, oriented to follow in the footsteps of their ancestors and continue that profession. Besides, the children will absorb the knowledge passed down by their ancestors and continue to develop more. Hence, family history is of significance.\r\n\r\nWhile the necessity of family history is widely acknowledged, people should focus on present and future generations. For families doing business, they should pay attention to their children, children should be educated and have a clear direction because the future generation is the opening gate for development. For instance, in Thailand, one of the most famous families there owns many large businesses with huge wealth thanks to the teach to be patient and to keep growing what their ancestors did when they were young. Thus, looking forward to the future generation is important in every family. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, people should not only research family history, but should also focus on present and future generations for complete development.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am against the driverless cars cars for many reasons and how it would affect us humas when driving or assisting the car. I am against the driverless cars becaus it will take the things or places that humans would want to do on their own instead of a car taking them there by itself. It also would get us fustrsted because we wouldn't know when to control the car or if when controling it every other time while driving. Driverless cars could also make humans not want to have the car anymore because we would want to start driving by ourselves. Also it would make us teenagers wanting the car because we aren't driving it and we dont even knwo how to control or dive a car. We don't have our license or permit yet. It would lead to the teenagers turn to drive and they don't know how to use the car which would to either a car accident or the death of a teenager because of the driverless car.\n\nThe affects of haveing this car is a lot. One affect of having this driverless car is that it would need a lot of gas just for one car. Another affect is that the car it self could lose control and something bad could happen to the driver. It would also need multiple battery changes because the car driving by itself takes a lot of battery juice from the car. The driverless car could also affect us because there could be times that we would want to drive on our own and the car want let us. The car could shut down on us while it's driving. It requres massive upgrades to existing roads, as it say's in the paragraph 3 sentence 5. It also needs alot of sensors and when those sensors are in they could brake or die and it cost more money to get them and fix them then any ther normal car.\n\nWhen having these cars there are many reasons why we should'nt have them. Looking at the reasons ahead would at least help people realize that we don't need a driverless car in the car. As it in paragraph 9 it say's '' if the technology fails and someone gets hurt who is at fault the car or the maufacture. Driverless cars are good ideas but there dangerous to us humans.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Basically excerpt talking The Mooring Mast It construction One obstacle builders Empire State Building faced safety Most dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable This quote reveals dirigibles made highly flammable s dangerous people s lifes Pretend dirigible fire s flying high sky causes lifes The obstacle builders faced law The reason practical reason dirigibles could moor Empire State Building existing law airships flying low urban areas Even though building tallest building New York But still low laws Airship fly low urban area causes accidents The Empire State Building feet means top build strong forceful winds like dirigibles could nt stop get close top building In December US Navy dirigible Angeles approached mooring mast could get close enough tie forceful wind", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people believe that the most effective way to teach children cooperation in teamwork is by encouraging them to join team sports at school. I completely agree with this idea and will give my reasons as follows.\nFirstly, team sports require children to work together and practice communication in order to achieve a common goal. For example, in Taiwan, many schools have baseball lessons in sports courses, and some schools even have a school baseball team. In such courses, children can learn to trust one another and develop communication skills by playing. Furthermore, they can develop mutual understanding and compromise with their teammates in order to reach a common goal. In this way, they can develop their social skills, find a way to cooperate, and build positive relationships with their peers. As a result, team sports experiences will contribute to their social skills and social life as well.\nSecondly, team sports can teach children the value of perseverance and resilience. Through the experience of competing with other teams, children can learn to accept the ups and downs of success and defeat and go through any difficult situations with their teammates. This is especially the case if they fail in a competition as they can learn to encourage each other and develop a sense of group belonging. For instance, we can see many touching stories in team competitions where despite being on the losing side at the beginning, the team rallies, and members encourage each other to restart. This can be a great lesson for children to build their resilience, self-confidence, and a sense of belonging, as well as develop a positive attitude toward their life in the future.\nIn conclusion, I believe that team sports provide children with opportunities to develop their social skills, increase their confidence and resilience, and ultimately benefit their whole life. Therefore, they should be included in the school curriculum for children.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It class messing around desk like usual isnt usually patient kind person Then teacher asked question class thought head one best answers hand shot straight air One first hands raised CAPS Lots answers NUM PERSON berry said berry kind round person big glasses see But students love teacher CAPS whats answer I scratching head Okay CAPS language good answer though There hands air In head wanted blurt answer knew time going least try patient CAPS last people go NUM PERSON berry exclaimed raging impatience inside head outside looked calm could CAPS said CAPS metaphor answered CAPS youre right metaphor CAPS darn answer mumbled breath But even though another classmate took answer happy knew waiting patiently", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The history hidden behind where people live seem to be more appealing than the past. Various factors contribute to this phenomenon. For those who have interest in investigating the historical meanings of the architecture, there are multiple options which can help them do the relevant researches.\r\n\r\n The reasons can be found in the people's desire of historical knowledge which is an indispensable part of the country's culture. The whole society encourages the further development and deep exploration of where people live, resulting in the great interest in the underlying history. Moreover, in the contrast to the modern life, the exploration to local historical places can serve as a comforter and modifier in daily life, which attracts more and more people.\r\n\r\n The researching methods can be numerous, for people can finish the researches both online and offline. Libraries are the best place for people to find something relevant to the history of the architectures. There are numerous books and newspapers documented, which are available for the researchers. Local residents, especially the elderly ones, can also offer help in the investigation process. Those who witnessed the history changes can tell many hidden stories of where we live. Online tools such as computers and mobile phones are also accessible to those history of the house or building. Different kinds of background information could be easily searched on the Internet, enabling those passionate researchers to fully dig out what they are interested in. \r\n\r\n In conclusion, the reasons for people's interest in the history of ancient sites are various which can be concluded into the aspects of both individual and society. People can also have different access to the research job.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, people debating whether robots would serve in favour of the future society or would have detrimental effects. While both approaches have rational concerns that have to be assessed, in my turn, I would suggest that the integration of high-tech creatures is an inevitable step in order to achieve the desired society of the future.\r\n\r\nNo doubt that a certain portion of people is vulnerable to the rapid changes occurring in the last decades. Modern technologies are altering lifestyle and occupational standards in various fields, which, consequently, strikes the most dependent interlayer of communities. For example, AI is going to substitute dozens of professions in the next years and the list of these occupations will get longer with every step of inevitable progress. Deducing this, more and more people perceive robots as competitors with low requirements in capitalistic systems that prevail in today's World.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, introducing robots into daily life will make it very convenient and more productive. In other words, integrating these helpers will definitely reduce the level of suffering and distress all over the World. For instance, accessible and precise health care, safe and convenient fabrication and production are small parts of possible benefits. Moreover, these changes will eager humanity to focus on self-cognition and self-expression which is the only way to create a healthy society in the future.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, while there are justified concerns regarding the effect of the integration of robots within the capitalistic system, the possible benefits would outstrip any negative moments. In my personal opinion, reminiscing changes in recent history it becomes clear that adequate implementation of robots will push the whole of humanity toward a bright future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When I was small I would always dream of having my own car and now that I have one it's not what I thought it would be. I\n\nwould always play with my little car and I would pertend that I was in the race track. Now it is a lot more work and you have to stay foces to the road. I do agree that they should develope car that can drive them selfs. It would make the world a better placeand if they work hard they may even discover on how to make a car run without using any fuel.\n\nWhen they first invented the mobile car , anyone that had the money to by one bought one or maybe even more. As the\n\nyears went on and the amount of deaths that ocurred rised they had to do somthing about it and that what they did. I think that they will be able to achieve on making driveless car the the amount of death will soon drop as fast as a rollacoster. In the article it said that by 2020 we will have theis car that can drive them self but that is olny if they truly want to secussed on make the world a better place.\n\nThey have a point by saying that the driver will get bored of waiting for there turn by like what they said that if they put in any entertainment and an information system i think that they have a shot of making this driveless car come a hit.\n\nIn my conclusion I do agree that they should make the driveless car because it would make the world a better place and safer and if it fells once than they try in till they get it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that using the new software, the Facial Action Coding System, has promising application to use it is in a classroom to read the emotional expression of students in a classroom. So the teachers would know how their students is feeling, and how they are doing in class.\n\nThe reason i agree with this new technology is because, well in the passage it says \"The facial expression for each emotion are universal\" observes Dr. Huang, \"even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression\" (like not smiling as broadly).They use a video imagery, that tracks these facial movement. By weighting the diffenet units, the software can also indentify mixed emotions. So even if the students don't show facial expression, the technolgy can tell how they are feeling, and so the computer can change it up and help the student learn better.\n\nAlso the second reason why I agree is because the computer will know when you're happy or sad. For example, if you smile when a web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad migh follow. But if your sad, the next ad will be differnt. Also it can help students learn better, in the passage it says \"a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" So if a student is confused, the computer will make the lesson more understandable. So the student will learn better and don't need to struggle and will help the teacher.\n\nThe third reason why i agree is because the computer can tell if the students are lying about their emotionn. It says in the article \"but in a false smile, the mouth is streched sideways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle\". The computer will spot when a smiling is fake or not.\n\nIn conclusion i believe using the new technology to read the emotional expressions of the students is indeed valuable.So the student will understand better in class and every student won't behind, and will make the teacher life easier.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people think the face on mars is created by martians or some type of aliens.others think its just natural landform,i gathered facts from the article to prove that the face on Mars is a natural landform.\n\nIn 2004 May 24th Vinking 2 landed on a shadowy likeness of a human face.An enormous head nearly two miles from end to end seemed to be staring back at the cameras.They assumed that the face was created by living life.It had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharoah,common enough\n\naround Cydonia.\n\nFew days later NASA unveiled the image for all to see.The caption noted \"huge rock formation\". . .which resembles a human head...FORMED BY SHADOWS GIVING THE ILLUSION OF EYES, NOSE,AND MOUTH.........So on APRIL5,1998 the MOC team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos.They reaveled the photo on a JPL website...a natural lanform proving that there was no alien monument after all.So if there was no alien monument that means that the face on Mars is a natural landform.The face is shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose and a mouth.With that illusion given,the previous Viking thought something that detailed had to be created by hand.illusions are very tricky they could have you see something that isnt really there.So if the Viking saw a clear face on planet Mars he would quickly assumed it was created by living life no one would think that it is a shadow illusion until its proven.\n\nBut the MOC\n\nteam try to prove there point.They decideded to snap c much larger and clear photo to prove that it is landform and just an illusion,and they did.So the face on Mars is a natural landform given an illusion of face features which is pretty cool.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is an opinion that most number of icons of modern pop culture are well-known rather by their handsome and income but art skills, thus they become a worst example for teens. Although there are plenty cases confirming this statement, namely, in changing of appearance without improving art skills, in my mind, there are multitude of artists who gives an excellent influent to youth especially in charity activities. In this essay will be embraced both pros and cons effects to miners. Also I will give my own opinion.\n\nOn the one hand most of public sources are keen on telling about external qualities oppose to inner content it leads to popularization of appearance fiches. As a result, an avid readers of magazines see only news about what did he or she bought or may be what kind of dress she wearing on party. Actually, such method of collecting and receiving information is very easy, therefore it is most massive character. In addition, it has as aim to knock in to young immature minds. As a consequence, propaganda gets a goals by hocking teenagers who as sooner color his hear as read an art essay.\n\nOn the other hand, there many among youths who attracted more to achievements of popular person but his appearance. In addition, there are also journals and articles which tells stories based on some concerts or exhibitions of famous, it contributes to construction of demand for real arts. Resulting in locating explorers who appeals to inner world of people. Consequently, each source of info will find his consumer. A very important example of positive influence is involving people in activities links to aid of poor persons or making a donation for supporting an area in developing countries.\n\nIn conclusion, in spite of mind-blow appearance often leads to easy going of youth, I believe that benefit of involving youth in charity activities is overweight cons, thus I disagree in maximum with statement in topic of current essay.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Not all cowboys ride on horses, there are some special cowboys that ride waves. I am one of them ,I am Luke Bomberger a Seagoing Cowboy. When my friend Don Reist gave me this chance, I went for it and now I would like to give you the same chance that he gave me. Exploring this vast world, helping your country and others, and facing the sea with new friends by your side are all things we do.\n\nThis world is big and changing each day. You may not get to go to Greece or Venice on a regular day basis, but being a Seagoing Cowboy opens your eyes to the true beauty in the world. I have gone to Venice, The Acropolis in Greece and the Panama Canal on my way to China. Traveling the sea shows you beauty and it honors your country and others.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy is no picnic, but it is a true service to your country and other countries as well. After World War II countries were in ruins and in need of supplies. Seagoing Cowboys meet their needs because we bring them animals they may need , food they need and so much more. We serve the 44 different countries that formed the UNRRA (the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitaion Administration). We not only serve our countries, we face the sea with new friends by our side.\n\nThe sea may come across as fish, beaches, sun, dolphins and fun, but it is actually much more dangerous than you may think.\n\nWhen it was my first time for the nightwatch it was hard because it was raining, the deck was so slippery that I almost got knocked overboard,but the small metal strip kept me from from going of the edge. I was lucky to be alive, but I didn't work for a while because I cracked my ribs. This may all sound bad ,but the sea isn't all seasickness, sharks and cracked ribs either. We know how to have relax because after the supplies are dropped off we have some fun like; playing baseball, volleyball, table-tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and more games helped us have fun on board our ship.\n\nIn conclusion, the sea is full of fun, pain, service, and exploration. I sincerly hope after this you choose to be a Seagoing Cowboy because that is one thing you will never forget. The chance of a life time, to be a cowboy who rode the waves.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technological advancements are exploding within our modern world, but there are some very negative aspects about them that create setbacks for them to thrive. Within the car industry itself, there is controversy over whether or not allowing driverless cars to be a part in our world because it can cause major issues with safety on the roads themselves. An example would be that those driverless cars only assist the driver, so they still need a person ready to react if the car needs help in specific situations, which eliminates the core virtue of the car being driverless. Another is that if there were to be an accident caused by a driverless car that is still drivable by man, who would be the one to blame for it? Within our world today, having driverless cars would craft a negative impact as a whole because of overall performance of it being driverless and being a safety concern on the roads themselves if an accident occurred.\n\nDriverless cars in our world today would not be beneficial because it would not be fully functional on its' own without a driver ready at hand. As stated in the article, there have been many advancements within the car industry that have made it easier for the driver as a whole. But, there still is no true evidence of a car being completely efficient on its' own. As stated within the article, \"None of the cars developed so far are completely driverless. They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills\" (7). There are still features missing within a car that don't allow it to be fully functional on its' own; it can perform basic commands, but cannot do other functions that are seen on the road. All cars still require \"human skills\" which means that the driverless car, isn't completely driverless in the first place. This is negative because if a consumer wants a car to drive itself, why would he/she still have to be fully alert just in case something happens to where the car can't do it on its' own? It completely defeats the purpose of the car being driverless if it cannot do these tasks alone. This is one major negative aspect of the development of driverless cars because it cannot provide the services wanted by the people in our world today. But this isn't the only issue given through the idea of driverless cars, safety seems to be a major concern for most people.\n\nCars that are able to drive themselves are still a negative proposal because of the safety concerns regarding regulations and accidents on roads. Safety is the core ideal for driving cars and in order to achieve that, there must be a fully awake and alert driver in the hands of the vehicle. If there isn't anyone able to keep watch of the car, than that entity on the road is not allowed in the first place. This article states, \"Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times...If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault - the driver or the manufacturer?\" (9). Only a vehicle on the road that contains an alert and awake driver is considered to be safe according to numerous traffic laws. So what this means is that if there is no person within the vehicle controlling it with their own hands, that entity should not be allowed on the road. The reason for this is because it would impossible to determine who would be the one to blame if an accident occurred; would it the person or the manufacturer of the car itself? Accidents are prone to happen no matter who is in control of the car, and this negatively shows that it could create much more controversy amongst people and the makers of the car. And without a singular person driving the car, than that vehicle is considered unsafe, which shows how this can negatively affect the complete safety of those on or around the road.\n\nOverall, the creation of driverless cars is having a major negative impact on the world as a whole by not being fully functional and pushing forth safety concerns for all people on the roads. Through the recent development of driverless cars, there are features missing from them that would consider them driverless in the first place. They are only allowed to steer, accelerate, and brake which would enforce major safety concerns on those in or around them. If there is no driver in control of the vehicle, than there is no telling what would happen if an accident occurred, and who should cover the expenses for it. The world today is fully functional and currently safe without the artificially intelligent vehicles on the road; but if we were to have them, there is to be many significant downsides to them that endangers all people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I do not think that the Facial Acting Coding System should be used in classrooms for a few reasons. First of all, there is no need for this data. Second, It is an invasion of privacy. Third of all, it is unescessary. Finally, it is not going to work well. The Facial Acting Coding System should not be used in the classroom.\n\nThere is no need for the Facial Acting Coding System in schools. \"New computer software that can recognize emotions\"(Paragraph 1). It is a software system that has been design to read emotions as this quote shows. If it were put in place in schools, the implimentation costs would be quite high, and all it would produce is useless data. In the end, The software just generates data that would not relavent to education. Does it really matter how a bunch of high school students feel?\n\nThis software also would be an large scale invasion of privacy. \"Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements\" (paragraph 4). If installed in schools, students would be watched by cameras all day, something many parents would disagree with. Also, given the current risk of any computer system, it could be abused by hackers with maliscious intent.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System also would be an expensive waste of money. \"In fact, we humans perform this same impressive “calculation” every day\" (paragraph 5). If this is easily done by humans, there is no need to install it in classrooms. If classrooms already have a teacher, why would a computer be used to recognize emotion? Since teachers are teaching, They will probably not deviate from their already busy schedule in order to make the lessons more \"interesting\".\n\nThis software is newly developed and like most software, it has its flaws. For example: \"Your home PC can’t handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa’s smile\" (Paragraph 6). If this is the case, then every classroom would need a powerful computer, which would take even more money from school's budgets. Also, every person expresses emotions differently, what a computer interepts as happy for one person may actually be them feeling sad. Also, there may be ways to game the system. \"Constantin Stanislavsky had his actors carefully reproduce smiling and frowning as a way of creating these emotions on stage\" (paragraph 9). If actors can recreate happy and sad expressions, student could too. This means that students could easily fool the computer and cause it to record incorrect data.\n\nThe Facial Acting Coding System should not be used in the classroom. It generates useless data and it intrusively invades privacy. The system also would be expensive to procure and intigrate, as well as possibly not functioning. The Facial Acting Coding System is better suited for other industries and uses. It does not belong in schools.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This article has some good points and some bad points why they want to have driverless cars. The author has a lot of good points, but in my opinion they are not good enough for me to believe that these cars should be allowed on the roads.\n\nIn the article \"Driverless cars are coming,\" I feel as if these cars should not be developed due to the fact that the cars cant not completely control themselves in road blocks or certain situations where the cars nedd the driver to take over, which makes them no longer \"driverless\" cars. These cars have not been approved for complete reliable saftey. automakers are continuing their work on the assumption that the problems ahead will be solved. but then again will they be one-hundered percent sure it will be solved. there are enough accicents alone right now so why have a car drive for us that has unsolved problems. it just does not make sense.\n\nSo no, I believe these cars should not be allowed to be on the streets. There is to many risks, and there are a lot of little kids that play in the roads that could easly get hit by one of these cars and then who are the parents to blame the driver or the car. It is just to much to handle.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "No, this new technology is not useful at all because theres no need for a computer telling you how you should feel. How could a machine that doesnt have feeling detect how you are feeling even humans have trouble detecting thatand we have feelings. In a classroom this wouldnt be helpful because its not helping them in school with anything. That is what student want is help in school subjects not their feeling that we ahve friend and family to talk to not som random computer. Most of the time the computer would be wrong because someone could depressed with a happy face on.\n\nIn paragraph 1 it says that they tested this on a painting. How could the computer make a 3D model of the face on a picture that it flat. The information that is givin couldn't be accurate at this point. Also she had a strait face in the picture how could she be 83 percent happy if she showed no emotion in the original picture painted. Also, in paragraph 5 in lines 4 and 5 is says that they had to add to the picture so the computer could pick up the face and tell them what she was feeling.\n\nIn conclusion this would no be useful at all because its a computer that doesn't have any type of emotions or feeling trying to tell you what you are feeling. Every person has a different face and everyone has different feelings and thats hard for even a computer to understand. Humans have trouble identifying these feeling because no one knows what someone else is feeling except themselves. No computer in the world could tell you what you are feeling. Even if they do have this crazy sofware that they think might work.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you be able to tell an emotion of someone just by looking at them? Prof. Thomas Huang thinks so, with the help of his latest invention, the Facial Action Coding System. This is a software that is able to \"read\" emotions of the users, and formulate a new type of lesson to make it more interesting. The Facial Action Coding System is being used to calcuate emotions for promotional, visual, and learning benefits, and for students in the classroom, this technology seems like a plausible idea.\n\nOne of the many uses of this coding system is for promotional uses. The artical reads, \"if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different (6)\". This goes to help companies know whether or not you enjoy their product. The software will learn what you like and it will know your emotional preferances towards certain ads. By using this technology, it can recognise if you are pleased, and will give you ads you can enjoy and feel comfortable watching. This use of technology would be useful in the classroom because it would limit the content of ads that are not helpful on computers. When a student sees an ad pop up on their screen, confusion will arise and that will let the sofware know not to play ads like that again. This software will help restrict content and make using the internet more enjoyable for students.\n\nVisually, the software is important to society. An important use of this software can be used during video surgery. The sugery can be seen in more detail and the doctors will be able to percieve emotions clearly. This is not only useful for doctors, but for students as well. By being able to recognise the emotions that people are going through, like pain or fear for example, students who are training to be surgons can watch these videos and take notes on how to improve technique and accuracy. These students will use the technology to recognise flaws and be able to improve upon them. The Facial Action Coding System is useful visually, from video games to video surgery.\n\nWhile these two aspects are important, one of the main uses for this technology is for learning and growth purposes. \"'A classroom computer could recognise when a student is becoming confused or bored (6)'\", Dr. Huang says. By being able to see when a child is becoming confused with his or her lesson, the computer could adapt the lesson to be more entertaining or effective. This use of the software could be vital in being able to properly equip students with the knowledge they would not have learned well otherwise. The technology could be used almost as a human instructor. The computers are able to understand facial movments and read reactions, which will also show us what the teacher needs to change in the lesson. This software could change the entire education system just because of the ability to read the student's emotions.\n\nThe uses of the Facial Action Coding System are uncountable. You can use this to encourage and limit promotions, enhance the visual aspects, and improve learning in the classroom. This software can be used as a guide and as an administrator for students while they are learning new material and surfing the internet. Technology like this is valuble for a student in order to live up to their fullest potential.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Based excerpt three reason s obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock These reason s one close city high short The second reason wind spun blimp around mast And third reason German blimps filled hydrogen next heat would blow And blimps filled helium", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using technology to read\n\nthe emotional expressions of students is valuable. We now have technology that can prove what we are feeling. In the article it states the steps of how we can find out our emotions. Also Dr.Haung said that a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. If they know what the students are feeling then the teachers know what do .\n\nFirst it begins with a 3-D computer model of the face. It say's in the artical that all 44 major muscles in the model must move like a human muscles. After all of that , they can determine the emotion of the student. Also by just looking at there faces we can determine there emotions.\n\nIf we use this type of technology we can help students out. If students have probelms, the computer can help out. If the teacher's know what the studetn's are feeling then they can help out. The teacher's could sit down with them and talk to them. Also the computer can give the teacher new ways to teach in class.\n\nFinally the computer's can be helpful to find out\n\nother things , besides emotions. By doing this, scientest can find out what other things ccomputer's can\n\ndo for us. Finding what peope are feeling is very helpful . It gives us a llittle bit of information of what the person is thinking. From that information we can do something about there emotions.\n\nUsing this type of technology is very helpful. It helps us find out about our emotions. Also other's emotions .\n\nThis help's scientest know what, other things we can do with this type of technology. This technology can help us in many ways , besides find out what people are feeling. It's great that we know that computer's can help us out , not just by using the internet\n\nbut in many other ways.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays,many academics are thinking about their profit which comes from student's fees rather than quality of education systems.some individuals claim that academics have the privilege to turn scholars into knowledgeable citizens as well as well educated.I strongly accord with this view.\r\n\r\nTo embark on,there are ample reasons why educational institutes ensure systematic behaviour for their students.firstly,it will be helpful for getting jobs easily in the upcoming days,therefore they need not struggle to search occupation after graduation,as a result,they might be in a higher position with decent salary.secondly,school is the main root of growing children's ability,if children schooling is not good enough then it leads to affect on the their higher education and position.moreover,education systems not only enable good sense of humour but also provide confidence to reach high position.for instance,according to the education department,many people do not have a proper posts as they do not have enough knowledge to get job because their study is not in an appropriate way,thus education systems are very imperative to get cognitive skills.\r\n\r\nOn another hand,some institutes are always thinking about how to get profit instead of giving proper education to individuals,as a result,many individuals might be lost their future in terms of jobless and lack of cognitive skills.furthermore,having a good education facilitates many opportunities without any worries.for example, according to the survey,people who reside in foreign countries have a good occupation rather than people who inhabit in India because education system of foreign countries offer a great facilities without expectating the high income from students.\r\n\r\nTo conclude,these days,we can not survive without the education because technology has been increasing day by day,thus schools should provide all facilities to students in terms of quality of education and skills without expecting anything back in return.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is no doubt that art plays a significant role in humans culture. Many believe that art is crucial subject for little ones, while other argue that it is a wastage of time. The following essay will explore the topic from both perspective and justify reasons and appropriate epitome.\r\n\r\nTo commence with, it is undeniable that art is a medium that connects people with the culture and society which lead them to know clearly about the context of historians as well as culture. As a result, this instills a sense of pride and confidence in them. For instance, in India, art is mandatory to teach from the primary classes. Moreover, it improves the perception and problem solving skills due to this youngsters learn to think out of the box, to innovate. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, many people argue that instead of art, other subjects are more important such as english, science and mathematics because it gives better career opportunities. Besides, studying art does not lead to a successful career. It is easy to see that in these days, most of the artists have been struggling to make a living from selling their work of art. Therefore, these are some reasons why other things is essential.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is true that without art children does not know about their old culture and also art improves their problem solving skills, however, i believe that in order to become successful in future, one must learn other subjects such as science and english due to better career opportunities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "average fourteen year old annoying eight year old brother named parents werent eligble names It beggering school take clothes shopping Problem made go wouldnt complain month oh Sigh Oh well late thought boys department helping pick clothes Out comes eye sees getting daring get better look gasped could fail guys school since pick clothes boys department I stared need girls bathroom stay get The dare awkward CAPS understanding said I know laid agot complaining PERSON CAPS patient good thing thought got class", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "in my opinion the auther dosint relly oprovide good evidence as to why we should study venus. All he says in the text is that astronomers are fascinated by venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our sola system.but but it feels like provides more info on to why we should'nt. In the text the aother states that. On the venus's surface tepertures average\n\nover 800 degrees fahrenhit. it continues to say that atmospheric pressure iis 90 times greater than what we experience here on our own planet. this is showing that it might not be a good idea to explor this planet. but the aother themselfes admit to this in the next part ware the aother states. ''these cinditions are far to extreme than anything humans enciunter on earth. This is from the text weare the aouther them selves admit that the conditions are to extreme. this shows that the outher really didnt soppert his clasim vary well. even though i think it was a good article ifeel that the aouther should have provided more evidence to better support the claim.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To newspaper edits Should books music movies magzines reading materials removed materials view offensive I think good idea Reasons like Author last sentence said remove books shelfs no books us read That true I sure lotts books offensive people maybe readers get offensive understand materials read For example topic liking gender become problem maybe reader gets offensived types topics understand get An reason could america last time I checked free write talk want talk write Its fair say well true people right say want say mind And topic reading material offensives mean take away writers material Doing like putting duck tape writers mouth If reader right say mind maining free write wish write If see I coming takes lott talk teacher someone highter postition reader something understand tell you ask do say thing remove book writer Other reasons say removing reading material could humans always willing learn something new When person reads always learn something new It could new event place unknown grammer diffrent styles writing know topic books music movies magazines good way learn new things fun better something fun think anything well big role lives Another reason remove reading materials make reads feel like alone Like true story break family relationship Or could story base something happening writer like death loved deal Just picture two girls mad world hates tape angles While girl lost grandmother listening tape angles makes feel together whole knowing loved good place Now think second girl would start like first girl sad alone leaved When take away material like small tape librarie s shelf take away feeling writer reader s Finally last reason remove materials shelfs remove material shelf likly topic still It could radio internet delete reality And could even happening unlikly would people still talk And nothing stop people talking you lock bird cage still wants fly away you tell cat dog run away turn away gone explambles I trying say try remove books music magazines topic dont like still I understand reading materials offend better turn head around move onThe reader like topic others would thats always good think And maybe problem reader get topic maybe read learn give chance end likeing understanding better Books music movies magazines reason could teach something new learn", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that watching TV affects children. While some people believe that the length of the duration spent watching them that has a significant impact on children. In my opinion, it is the content of the program that has a more marked influence on their behaviour.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there are several reasons why watching Television for long periods of time has negative effects on the development of children both physically and psychologically. Firstly, children are exposed to intermittent flashes of light from the television, this could cause serious damage to the eyes. As a result, it can cause temporary blindness if children watch Television excessively. For example, when children keep their eyes glued to screens for several hours, waves from the television may cause a headache, even this can significantly increase the risk of developing obesity and type 2 diabetes. Secondly, the enormous amounts of duration are spent wastefully for electronic devices by young viewers instead it should be used in more useful activities like reading, exercise and interacting with friends or their relatives. All of the activities are crucial for a healthy lifestyle. For instance, When children watch television excessively, they are less likely to be spending time developing social skills. To finish, the productivity of group work will be decreased if the lack of communication skill.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it is the broadcasted images that have the most direct effects on young viewers. In other words, children are easily manipulated by the adverts which take them to the virtual world. In view of the fact, which coax them to purchase products that are not always worth their money. To illustrate, Since 2010, toys of the Star Wars series are very popular among teenagers and sales of these toys are very high in the market. In addition, the advertisements are delivered in such a way that children start pestering their parents to buy those products. To give a clear example, the fast food chain McDonald’s promote their Ads to attract more and more teenagers to eat fast food which is not good for health because it contains high levels of fats and cholesterol which cause obesity and diabetes in children.Thus, these adverts should not be allowed to be shown in mass media\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, though both two factors have their own implications, I believe that the content is more considerable. Hence, parental intervention is essential in controlling children's TV viewing habits and awareness of children about programs with a healthy mind.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The media way people get reach others Whether magazine movie etc everyone world going see way another If piece work nt seen acceptable many peoples point views nt available public I personally beleive something seen volgure offence shouldnt displayed Millions people viewing I would nt want kid looking Why would anyone else want opposite Kids pay attention detail really well something negative could change mindset child We want bring kids right letting availabilty negative material uncalled Its kids either affected adults also affected media Adults get fooled beleive I remember one time books magazines school taken shelves exact reason I beleive librarians right Some kids school nt viewing reading unacceptable things Some students matured enough take something different view another student I beleive something taken shelf nt seem appropriate enough I stand whoever Nothing negative affect person viewed innocent child There positive affect child times brought best abilities", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I strongly disbelieve that the face on mars was created by aliens. I do not think that there is alien existence out there. This claim was made 20 years ago when we saw pictures of the faces. I think that it is just an natural landfrom. Evidence say that NASA would rather hide, say conspiracy theorists.\n\nThe ''Face on Mars'' was an pop icon. It started a hollywood flim, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows and even haunted grocery checkout lines almost 25 years. On Apirl 5,1998, Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydoina for the first time, Micheal Malin and his MOC(Mars Orbiter Camera) team take an picture 10x sharper than the original photos. Thousands of web suffers were waiting to see if it was alien existence. On an JPL website it revealed that the picture was an natural landform...no alien monument after all.\n\nI conclude that there is no alien monument among us. What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms around the American West. ''It reminds me of most Middle Butte in the Snake River of Idaho'', says Gravin.''Thats a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated messa about the same height as the Face on Mars''.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program because it will open up the world for you, it opened up the world for me. One thing I learned is to be aware of people of other countries needs.\n\nIn this program people are sent over seas with hundreds of\n\nanimals. After the war in 1945 was over in Europe many countries were left in ruins, this program is helping other countries recover food supplies, animals, and lots of other things.\n\nIn this program 44 nations joined together to form the UNRRA ( United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation).\n\nI think you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program because it might change the world for you,\n\nwhen you join you are not just traveling you are also helping other people in different countries.\n\nIt takes about 2 days to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States.\n\nIt took 1 month to get to China.\n\nOne of you will have to check on the animals at night, the animals need to be fed or watered about 2 to 3 times a day.\n\nOn the way back\n\nsince there are no animals you can play games like tabletennis tournaments, fencing tournaments,boxing tournaments, reading, whittling, and many more games in the empty stalls. Games help you pass time while over seas. The cattle-boat trips are great opportunity to go over seas, help other people's countries, and to get to travel to China and other places!\n\nThe most trips that the Seagoing Cowboys program has ever had was nine trips. If you turn or are 18 you could be drafted for military services. Caring for the animals during the crossings will keep you busy. Bales of hay and bags of oats have to get pulled up from the lower holds of the ship, for the animals to snack on so they don't starve over seas. The animals stalls had to be cleaned. The Seagoing Cowboys program is a opportunity of a lifetime!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One day way school I went pick friend told new game called call duty world war kept talking dose online last class day sat said I cant wait go home play new game I said cool said start complaining I wait one hour I told patient wait said right its like its going anywhere I play anytime told wana come play went house prayed game I told remember always patent till time", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think limiting car usage is a great idea for america. Studies show that in Bogota, \"the people are generating a revolutionary change.\" Says Enrique Riera, the major of Asuncion, Paraguay. People are either walking to their destinations or riding their bicycles. Also the less you use your car, means less air pollution everywhere so the Earth is more healthier.\n\nLimiting car usage could also help people's physical and mental health. Walking could lower your stress levels and let you think about the nature that you see instead of thinking about what your mad at. I know this from experience because I get stressed very easilyand walking anywhere helps me calm down. Another thing about limiting car usage is that the car wreck percentage would be lower than it is right now. There would also be less deaths in the world if they limited the usage of cars.\n\nDid you know that there are aproximently 118 miles of bicycle paths only in Bogota? Well there is and acording to Mockus, the city's major, \"It's the most of any Latin American city.\" Also you could use the bicycle paths as walking paths for exercise or just to walk anywhere. People would be in more shape if they limited cars. But the only bad thing about using a car in Vauban, Germany is that you have to pay for the car and a spot to keep it whie only being able to drive it on the main throroughfare, where the tram to downtown Freiburg runs.\n\nIn conclution I think it would be a great idea for America to go car-free.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In order to detect human emotions these students are saying thrie computer can do it. I dont believe this and i'll tell you why.\n\nComputers can tell you how u fell on the outside but can't tell you about the inside. Emotions are not based on facial expressions. I can smile through pain but the computer won't tell you that. Many people cause decive you with there emotions. The person who created this only uses six basic emotions that can decive you on the outside.\n\nExplaining human emotions are very difficult because you cant actually tell how they feel on the inside. The emotions the show on the outside could decive how you see things. You should take the time to ask the person how they really feel after you get the results to see how accurate the computer really is. This computer cause not actually help these researchers.\n\nMost human communication is nonverbal, including emotional coomunication. With this being said i do not believe any computer in the 21st century is advanced enough to read true human emotion. Maybe one day somebody will invent the greatest computer ever. But as of right now emotion truly can't be read unless the person themselves actually tells you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent years, the phenomenon of vending similar but popular items is happening constantly while some people consider that would be more drawbacks. Nevertheless, I strongly agree with the above statement, and I will further emphasize my position in the following essay.\r\n\r\nAs for the first point, vendors prefer to sell the most popular but the same products in their stores may because persuading famous products in the world is most people’s choice which can make them connect to the world and exhibit the rewards of endeavors from hard-working to friends. For example, my cousin had been trading the unique filed items as his business and earning less revenue to support his family’s basic costs, but when he decided to adjust the variety of products, the profit increased as soon as he wished. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some seller regard that may result in a negative trend if there are too many similar items in the same area, buyers would not be attracted to come into their shops but do the window shopping. For instance, my sister delights in wandering in the mall and comparing the price of her favorite items in different stores in order to save more budget for her standard of living which may lead businessmen to decrease the value as vicious competition to obtain more income.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, we can say businessmen have been doing their best for their clients, However, some refuse to upgrade their commerce style which is quite alarming. From my perspective, although it is a sophisticated subject, as a client, I believe that it would be an informed choice for selling the same goods which not only provide us with more options for the price but also prevent us spend unnecessary costs in our foreseeable future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The picture below demonstrates the evolution of cutting tools A and B ,over 0.6 million years in the Stone Age. It is compared with regards to its shape in different views ( front , side and back view) with its size being common (5 cm).\nIn overview , from 0.8 million years to 1.4 million years the tool making has become more sophisticated in size and shape .\nThe tool A front view is of a triangular shape and is strikingly similar to modern day spear heads, giving it a cutting edge over tool B whose body is more of oval and has less ability to pass through the enemy or animal.The side view of tool A shows the mastery that people have gained in making tools . The sharp edge with a large base provides a technological upper hand than that of tool B.\nHowever , the back view of tool A and tool B has not much differences to its front view respectively.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It late I going point So take forever drive sitting back sent alone back one talk phone So finally get wasting patients car get go wait ride minute ride worth still hours lot time So I waiting get ride go line second ride All rides least NUM hours long Except one ride got crowd came So leg minutes time got ride top hill probably line So really lucked one But time park closed got car huge traffic jam patients left line leave park another half waited waited finaly moved got park road take closed car accident talk huge detoer added time traffic taking way time got hotel I didnt one drop patients left I felt like I going blow I didnt I acted patient good thing I lot patients", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Limiting car usage can be a good effect but also can cause a lot of stress. In source 2 it tells how on Monday motorists with even numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or they would get fine with a $30 dollar charge. An it happened to odd numbered plates the next day. I dont htink thats a good thing to go by because some people might have jobs hoe are they suppose to go to work? other than a city bus.\n\nSource 3 tells me In German Suburb they do things without cars. An it say that 70 percent of Vauban's families dont own cars. An the people who do have cars 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe are responsible for it. Source 2 also talks about a even that they have that last all day. The event is to not use cars during the whole day. Lots of otheer countries thought that it was a good idea so they joined into the evnet. The day without cars is part of a improvement campaign that started in Bagota in the mid-1990s.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I belive computers benifit society many reasons Computers around many years everywere go usualy see one That must meen people love These many uses fun expeirences computer Computers make people happy makes better society happier make people happy play games like tetris even cards Compuer games make people happy ever bored nothing going hop computer play game Some awsome games featured computer cards pinball great game The computer makes happier home soon kids get home school use games chat freinds Another reason computers benifit society pay bills buy hings internet When pay bills buy things internet need go waste money gas makes people happy hey save money It also saves polution car nt going less computers also saving society well My last reason computers benifit society make smarter make better school learning often people cultures For example last research project social studies I used computer got A made happy effect makes society happy Now reasons computers benifit society They make us happy made us smarter make us better society I love computers everybody else", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent years, news reports on TV programs and news papers tend to focus on incidents and emergencies rather than positive developments. In Japan, because of this phenomenon, many people are influenced this country might be more dangerous than they thought. I disagree with these tendencies and should focus on more positive developments, including entertainment.\nTo go into detail, in Japan, once people turn on the TV in the morning. People face often face some news reports about a murder case, who were murdered, who is the criminal, and background details. In addition, there are more than 5 channels on TV, these all 5 channels broadcast the same incident at the same time. The Japanese government might take the control of media in order to agitate people to keep their attention on safety. It might be important to some extent, but it is not necessarily a good influence on people's mind if they were required to watch such a fierce, and negative incident every morning.\nIn contrast, when it comes Japanese crime rate, and case. They reached a peak of 2014, and keep decreasing until now. The cases are not significant derrence, compared with a few dacase ago. In addition, almost Japanese crimes tend to be petty crimes, such as thefts, frauds, shop lifting, and so on. In terms of the murder case, Japan is ranked as the 5th safest country among 160 countries in 2017. This means that the more media reported the savage crimes, people misunderstand Japanese society is getting more dangerous than a few decades ago.\nFinally, it is understandable to report such a heavy incident to some extent. On the other hand, they should also report positive and attractive news, such as tourism, especially inbound sales figures has been increasing and contributing to Japanese economic growth, and some Japanese athletes have been successful in MLB(major league baseball), and football. This news must be more fascinating for Japanese people to encourage their own national identity.\nIn conclusion, this is not a black-and-white issue. But it might be more beneficial for people's minds to be positive. If some heavy incidents happened, the Japanese government should restrict TV companies to broadcasting only one channel, or limit the time shorter.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today's modern society, most sporting events are used by companies in order to advertise their goods and services. And some people assume that sports in general are adverse influenced by doing so. From my perspective, I totally disagree with this notion and the reasons for that will be discussed in this essay.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, the reason why I do not support this claim is quite simple. In fact, promoting products can be accomplished in several ways, but none of them has the ability to negatively affect the events. For example, many companies these days choose billboards, posters, online advertisements as a measure to raise their product's visibility to the customer, which hardly impacts the content of the events.\r\n\r\nAnother reason why I disagree with this claim is that not only does the promotion have any bad effect on sports, but also can act as a decoration for the sporting events. In actual fact, the advertisements usually are uniquely designed as well as have interesting slogans and attractive content. Therefore, most people find the streets and events better-looking with advertisements. Moreover, it also can have beneficial impacts on the local economy and tourism as well. For instance, it not only provides locals with job opportunities, but it also helps the country have more good points in foreign eyes.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, if I look at many ways, I would argue that advertising products in big sporting events positive effect on sports and events because it makes overall appearance much better and improves the economy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood memoir happiness caring selflessness According text I always grateful parents love sacrifice That s mood describes memoir Narciso Rodriguez background family", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience patience whatever cames If dont patience somethings happen sisters firend wanting cross rode didnt want wait didnt look ways car caming ran frot got hit car She cuts rode burn took hispoteli sister mom went go see day acciecd She cut couldnt really walk She much cuts someone help walk later maybe mouth got hit went docthers kept getting really bad head acts They said something called coma atices like lilttlel coma So thats happens dont patience even something samll like crossing road patience But patience good things like story like mom told wait car windows air So I I getting really bored I get I seen guys trying open car window So I garbed cell phone went back sat gorond called They way drive way Now got cars ran guys get soon found guys guys looking I got money awared catching The money awared dollars So patience geting car got money Saved live would killed seen helped find bad guys So something patience save lifes help find bad guys never know could get patiences thats story patienes gave So always patiences", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although new day age damand high elctronic books hard back paper back books obsolete quite yet Many people still like old tradition traveling libraries starting quest perfect book Also economy downfall cheaper way go But big question people find everything desire local library For people maynot case library censoring Yes true many libraries censore many things would think would inapproite childrens eyes I agree things displayed shelves libraries Although adults teens desire mature actricles things avaible children view One loyal customers library children parents Parents want children exposed explicet materials young age Also libraries lose young families customers would almost half clientel gone drain So next time want buy something maybe mature children might want reconsider going library Instead go book store buy whatever need Keep children safe innocent environment", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The younger generation is the backbone of our society. I totally agree that teenagers should be required to do community work in their free time. They should be taught from a very young age about the importance of community service and how it will help the humanity as well as their own development. \r\n\r\nOne of the ways in which this can be done is by having schools and colleges include community service as a part of their curriculum. They can have their students do say twenty hours or so of community service each month other than their regular study course. They can provide them with different options each month be it serving at a senior citizens home or orphanage or volunteering to clean the neighbouring roads or parks. Community service will help the teens to be more responsible. They will inculcate belongingness to the community. This will also learn teamwork and leadership skills by working with others. \r\n\r\nCommunity service will help the community in many ways. It will also reduce the pressure on the government manpower to upkeep the society as they will have helpers helping them. It will also make the maintenance work quicker due to increased manpower. It will also help keep the surrounding clean. The younger generation can also bring in their creativity in community service, which will help both the community and themselves.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, because community service will not only build responsible citizens and develop their personality, but it will also benefit the community, it is essential to let the youngsters do community work in their free time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nToday I would like to point out why we should keep with the program Electoral College. \"\n\nIn the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qulified citizens ,\" as stated in the articel\n\nWhat is the Electoral College? by The Office of Federal Register . Which makes the Electoral a great part of doing the highst or popular vote of President. Not only that but\"\n\neach candidate running for President in your state has his or her own group of electors.\n\n\" which helps them amd still be equal enough to the other runing President. In the article\n\nThe Indefensible Electoral Colloege: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong it says in the bottem of the fist paragraph \"\n\nThis year voters can expect another close election in which popular vote winner could again lose the presidency. And yet, the electoral college still has its defenders.\n\n\" which is saying that most Americans prefre to have this electoral college for popular votes.\n\nReading in the article\n\nIn Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President they point out the \"\n\nwhen you vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors....but each part selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the part's nominee (and that trust is rarely betrayed)\n\n\" to repeat that trust is rarely betrayed so that means the Electoral College is something you can count on. \"\n\nThe Electoral college restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states (by population) lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Constitution...\n\n\" balancing the large states will help more knowing that Electoral College is to do the job. The Electoral College help avoid run off- elections in the same article it explains an example of what will happen if Electoral College is no there. \"\n\nNixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 both had only 43 percent plurality of the popular votes, while winning a majority in the Electoral College...there is pressure for run-off elections when no canidate wins a majority of the votes cast; that pressure, which would greatly complicate the presidential election process, is recued by the Electoral College,...\n\n\"\n\nKeeping the system Electoral College is a great system that needs to stay. State Senator it would be caotic if the system didnt exist. Keeping the system have and still will solve some of outr voting problems.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some Problems faced building emPire State building hight building buildig high also epecting things bording dirigibles The dirigible building could couse collapes thats The contractor shape Skeleton building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author in this passage is very supportive of his idea because he gives insight and talks about the entire picture instead of just the good about exploring Venus. The author allows the audience to see the risks people need to take to explore Venus.\n\nAccording to the author we can't get people on Venus just yet because the conditions on the planet are just too severe. In the text it states \" Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last.\" With this happening eventually we can send machines to Venus that can survive the harsh conditions and further help us figure out how the planet was once supportive of life forms and help us figure out ways to inhabit the planet. While these machines are being worked on Nasa is also working on a blimp like machine that can allow for a human to go to Venus, but they won't be able to get samples of Venus it will allow for a better picture of the planet and allow us to better observe and find out more about the planet.\n\nThe author also provides the readers with ways that Nasa is trying to accomplish with different electronics. The text states \"some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface.\" This allows the audience to see that when Nasa goes to Venus, they will be prepared for the harsh conditions and allow for a safer enviornment. They are also seeing if old computers could be a factor in being more cautionary on Venus because the older computers were more durable and the parts may not melt like the computer do today because the older version computers were made of less electronics and more levers and things like that. The author wants the audience to know that these researchers are taking the precautions and making sure that their astronauts are going to be safe on this planet.\n\nThe author provides thorough evidence to all sides of his idea to show the audience that he doesn't just think about the good in exploring Venus he wants the readers to see how dangerous it actually is and all the equipment testing you need to be safe on this planet. It allows the readers to see the good and the bad in exploring Venus but he also tries to sway your own idea of exploring Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you like the ocean and sight seeing ? If you do then the Seagoing Cowboys program is right for you ! In this program you can go on adventures and go to many cool places . This program will change your life forever . You don't get to go to places like Europe every day . This is a once in a life time chance .\n\nIn this program you will get to help people in need and help take care of animals that are shipped overseas . You can also go to places like Greece and see the Acropolis . You may also get the chance to go to China . During your trips you can go sight seeing if you have time . Some times when your done with you work you get to play baseball and vollyball .\n\nRemember that this is a chance of a life time . You get to go sight seeing and play games . You also get to save animals and help people in need . Most impartantly you get to have fun doing what you love . Please , join the Seagoing Cowboys club .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Ageing is an unavoidable stage every human has to go through. While some believe the authorities are responsible for caring for and supporting their aged citizen financially, others suggest individuals should take responsibility of their retirement. In my opinion, governments should offer basic care and funding to their retired population. This essay will discuss the reasoning behind my belief.\n\nTo begin with, if governments provide basic health care and financial support to the elders, it may release the pressure from the next generation who feel obligated to pay for all of their parent’s expenses. Therefore, they can focus on their production and education which will benefit the country. For example, many young people from Hong Kong contribute almost half of their income to their parent’s care due to the lack of retirement support from the government, thus the pressure of overworking reduce the motivation of citizen to pursue higher education or improvement. As a result, Hong Kong has been falling behind in educational and industrial development, furthermore, overpassed by countries like Singapore as the international financial hub. \n\nMoreover, the aged population was once labour resources, who paid taxes and contributed production and value to the country. Consequently, they deserve fundamental healthcare and basic needs such as housing and transportation support from their government. For instance, retired Australian citizens are entitled to pension and their medical bills are covered by the Medicare scheme. \n\nIn conclusion, I strongly recommend governments take care of their aged citizens and offer financial support to them. Not merely because less pressured working citizens would be more productive, moreover, secured and motivated labour would bring positive influences to the development of their state. Also, the retirees, who once dedicated themselves to the development of the country, are well-deserved care in return.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "No I believe anything taken library someone thinks s offensive I believe poeple right read want authers right wright want One statements speech giving people right say wright want People nt take anything libraries libraries built storing things like books magazines music movies If people start take things away use would library If everything taken nobody would reason going library This brings CAPS speech meens people right wright want others find offensive nt reed Also expresion lets people If people wish express reeding right One personal experiences I love music two best friends One goes library find music listen He found bands I never heard I realy liked If someone found offensive I would never got hear good This I believe people nt take things libraries deny others something could love also destroys history libraries around long time store much information would shame deny future people right read wonderfull peices work someone worked real hard create", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A lot of people don't know that this techonolgy nowadays could determine the way you feel, it could determine the emotions that peope feel. It also shows the emotions or feelings of others. People probably think that this some type of joke or laugher kind of way when its not there really is techonology nowadays that could detect it. There's probably many ways people can detect to read the emotional expressions of students. Some ways that you probably didn't even know of.\n\nA lot of people wonder how this works they don't really know that one easy way to show emotion or to show how you feel is by looking at them and looking at their actions. Once you have already seen them and that they are feeling some kind of way that's when you realize that there is something going on or that their sad or happy or that they are just going through stuff. People know that by the facial expressions on their face. They say that us as humans perform the same impressive \"calculation\". Some people struggle or have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried,sad,etc. This would be one easy way students can detect emotions.\n\nParents probably disagree about using technology when showing their emotions. Not just parents but maybe some students wouldn't like it either but if they think about it instead of waisting your time just guessing what their emotions are you would know if they use the proper techonology. They had made a process that began when the computer constructed a 3-D computer model of the face and it showed that all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles.\n\nAnother interesting thing that they discovered was that Dr. Paul Eckman was the creator of FACS (Facial Action Coding System). He had classified six basic emotions- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. It also associated each with characterestic movements of the facial muscles. They invented somethIng else called video imagery, the new emotion software is that they track facial movement. As you can see its so easy to see their emotions or how they feel. They even show different weighting of units.\n\nThe author says that the Mona Lisa demonstrates is really to bring a smile to peoples face while it shows how much the computer can do. It would be really strange if a computer can tell you if your happy or sad.\n\nIn my opinion parents and students should get the idea of using techonology its way easier to detect peoples emotions instead of just guessing or thinking you know how they feel. They shouldn't have a problem trying to make the place better.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although driverless cars may sound cool and all, they also sound a bit dangerous. Even thougha machine is driving for me, I would still feel paranoid knowing that I have little control over what happens. By what the article says, driverless cars should be coming out sometime within the next 4 years..That would make me 20 when I would no longer have to drive myself places. I feel as if everyone should need to know how to drive a car because not everyone can afford a driverless car. If cars are as expensive as they are now, imagine approximately how much they will be now that you don't need a driver.\n\nWith all the additonal 'accessories' needed for a driverless car, prices would rise. Would this mean that the need for gas would lower? Or would they still need as much gas as normal? Even if gas was out of the question, driverless cars have been proved to not be dangerous, but still, they aren't completely driverless. The driver still has to take action and focus. So, is the car really driverless?\n\nHow would safety play a role in the production of a car like this? If a driverless car got in an accident would it be the \"drivers\" fault or the car company? The article discusses that question everyone seems to be asking, yet still no answer. Does this mean insurance goes up? Although a driverless car seems like a good idea, it also seems like it could be a bad idea.\n\nIt seems as if there are a lot on unanswered questions for something coming out in the next 4 years. Laws would need to change, maybe even age restrictions. Would you still need to be 16 and three months to get behind a driverless car? In my opinon, I would push the goal back and instead of coming out in 2020, make it 2025. Something like this needs to be well thought through before putting other peoples' lives on the line.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine this you're in a very populated city. Lets say New York, New York, U.S.A, London, England or any densily populated  city for that matter. Now aside from the sounds of car horns blairing and the sounds of the thousands of people around you there is one thing that would most likely stand out the most to people; the smell of car emissions mixed with the food street venders sell. Now they may not be a huge surprise but think about this, a city or suburb without cars. Now some may say that limiting the use of cars is a terrible idea and would hurt the working call citizens, but it may be better then you think. The reasons why these \"car-free\" places might not be so bad is it helps reduse the growing percent of greenhouse gas emissions that cars give off. You wouldn't have to deal with smog, and there wouldn't be as much noise pollution as there is with cars. Yeah these points may not seem like they are worth not having a car but there are comminties that actully don't allow cars because of those reasons. So maybe after this you may think a little differently about your car and may think about moving to one of these places that have alread choosen to go \"car-free\".\n\nFirst off, probably like most people around the world you love your car, bt do you ever think about the car emission you admit into the air just driving to worl and back home. Now that does seem bad but, as shown in paragraph 5 of,\n\n\"In German Suburb, Life Goeson Without Cars\", an essay by Elisabeth Rosenthal, she writes that experts say the passsenger cars alone are reponsible for about 12 percent in Europe, and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the U.S for greenhouse gas emissions. Now 12 percent doesnt seem like a lot compared to the 50 percent but that is still a lot of greehouse gases getting put in our atmosphere year after year.\n\nNow think about this idea of a \"car-free\" suburb or city again. An example of this kin of place would be the city of Vauban, Germany. Now in Vauban drive ways and home garages are forbidden; now car ownership is allowed but there are about two places to park. Now that place to park is a large garagw at the edge of the developement where as well as buying your house you have to buy a parking space for $40,000. Now because of this 70 percent of the families don't have cars and 57 percent of them sold their car to move there. Since there aren't car used here the air is much cleaner and because of not having little to no cars there they don't pollute the air.\n\nSecondly, another reason to think about moving to one of the places is that there isn't any noise pollution from cars. Beause of the lack of car noiseses these suburbs and cites let you hear nature a little better and also allow a kind of peaceful feeling making these p;aces probably a lot more chill and \"sleepy\" in a since. making them good for people who don't want to live in a noisy city but don't want to live in the middle of no where.\n\nLastly, another good reason to move to these little areas would be that there is no smog there to make it harder to breath. A real world example of this would be from the informative essay, \"\n\nParis bans driving due to smog\"\n\n, by Robert Duffer. Which basically states that due to near-record pollution Paris put a ban on driving to try and clear the air in the city. Now to help inforce the ban the put a 22-euro fine($31) if you where driving on a day your licsens plate was not allowed to drive. Now because some people did follow the ban nearly 4,000 people were fined and 27 people had cars impounded because of the reaction to the fine. Now because of this some companies complained about lost renvenue and the transit of free of charge according to the BBC. And because of these efforts the smog cleared enought that the ban was lifted. Now that probably isn't very convinet but in car-free areas they don't have to deal with making it eariser to get to work on more accessible public transportation options like a bus or a bicycle.\n\nNow think about this idea about car-free places one more time knowing what the benifits are compared to the risks you get. Maybe noe you just might look at these places a little more carefully and acually think about making a switch to live there in this greenhouse gas free, noise free, and smog free zone.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you seen the photos of the \"face\" on Mars? Well, These photos aren't showing a face, they're actually just showing a Mesa. Scientists have barely and evidence to show that this is an actual face, and Martian metas are common around the American West.\n\nFirst, what these photos are showing are martian metas, landforms found common in the American West. The reason scientist questioned was this landform a mesa or an actual face was because of the unusual shadows thst made it look like an \"Egyptian Pharaoh\". \"We photographed the Face as soon as we could get a shot at it.\" A statement made by the chief scientist Jim Garvin, suggesting that this photo could go viral and probably make money.\n\nSecondly, Scientist barely had any evidence that this photo was an actual face on Mars. There was no type of face structure which would most likely hint that this \"face\" is just a natural landform that\n\ndecieves the look of a face. Lastly, the scientist proved no evidence how\n\nthe so called \"face\" ended up on Mars.\n\nIn Conclusion, the \"face\" on Mars is not an actual face it is just a natural landform claimed as a mesa, which is commonly found in the American West. Also, scientist had no evidence to support how this \"face\" ended up on the planet Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wanted to visit NASA? Well, what if you were a scientist like me and you discovered a face who thought it was created by aliens. How crazy is that? An unmasking face you have discovered on mars created by aliens! That is very odd and quit ammusing also! Lets find out if this is really true or not. Some scientists think the face was created by aliens but I think it is a natural landform.\n\nFirst, the unmasking face on mars couldn't be created by aliens. In fact, it is a natural landform. The article states that, \"We just don't pass over the Face very often.\" (9). This face isn't something you'll see veryday, it's very unordinary. The article states that, \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mese-landforms common around the American West\" (12).\n\nNext, the unmasking face had resembled a human head...formed by shadows giving illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth. It couldn't have been created by aliens. The article states, \"Although few scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact, photographing Cydonia became a priority for NASA when Mars Global Surveyor arrived at the Red Planet in Sept. 1997, eighteen long years after the Viking missions ended\" (6). Although some scientists think it was created by aliens, it is actually a natural landform.\n\nFinally, you can agrue that the unmasking face was created by aliens but really is wasn't. The article states that, \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West\" (12). Not everyone will be satisfied. How much evidence you can prove or not prove, the unmasking face was not created by aliens.\n\nIn conclusion, all scientists aren't 100% correct. The article states that, \"Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh\" (2). Would you like to be a scienitst? Would you like to go to Mars and expierence many new things?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You would get a lot of different answers from a lot of peopleif you were to go up to sme and ask them on what they think about the driverless car. But if you were to go and ask me that question i would have to say that I don't think we need to really be focusing on that as much as we should for other thngs in this world, it isnt as safe and could be very dangerous, there isnt anything wrong with having others drive themsleves.\n\nFirst, I personally believe that there are more serious issues going on in this world that we should be focusing on more and putting more ofthe money twoards that then spending millions trying to get a car to drive by itself. A driverless car is not something we need to be worrying about when we can keep it easy and simple like it has been for many years and just have drivers driving the car.\n\nSecondly, it has yet to been passed by the law due to safety percautions. As of right now the driverless cars are not as safe as a car that has some one driving the vechile. So with that reason whhy there I dont feel like what the need is to try and create something when we are all doing fine and would be doing even better then the driverless car.\n\nLastly, why fix something if it isnt broken? i get that driverless cars could be helpful for some people at times but to solve that problem that's what taxi's are for. Everythng has been fine with having the people drive the car themselves. People will be more alert then the driverless car itself so it is just best to just keep it as the way it has been going and let the people drive the car themsleves because there isn't anything wrong with doong it like that.\n\nIn conclusion, if you were to want to hear my opionin on what I have to say about the driverless cars I would say I think they are neat and could be somethng big in the future to come. As of now though I think that there are bigger things going on in this world right now that we should be focusing on, they are not proven to be as safe then what it is with having someone driving the vechile. And there is not a big problem on having people drive the cars themsleves so there isnt a big need for a solution like this.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter brings enthusiasm joyfulness means matter Have ever thought laughter part key element relationship A time laughter really helped made relationship I met one still today best friends I started fifth grade new school I transferred private public There couple people I knew family people cousins As imagine I sat people I known life position awkward So eventually end day I ready leave school first time I ever got walk home since school much closer last I walk home kid lived right I never known sheltered young life Luckily easy talk something common skateboarding This started talked certain falls pleasant asked could hang school shy guy I said okay After awhile came skateboard told go ramp I So I fell right back thought hilarious started together This since walking home really made feel comfortable kind bonded us I feel fall key part friendship made awkwardness go right window helped us start talking funny thing seen Ever since every time hang something happens laugh hard imagine goes memories good times always sweetened mood say always makes good time great time remember truly boring time lets go something time Also situation I start laugh I feel good every one laughs I laugh Most friends also friends laughs times I make laugh All relationships I comfort two even people bonding making every one feel like good time This key encounters people even friends awkward enjoyable So really case necessity every thing would dull plus would really one able appreciative time Therefore every time I meet someone new even someone I know laughter needs exist order relationship anyone", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, most companies employ workers after interviewing them. Certain individuals think this is not a perfect way of choosing workers since there are better ways of doing it. I, however totally disagree with the above assertion as I believe that interviewing people is the best option. The essay below will discuss this issue at large.\n\nTo begin with, because of the internet invention, most jobs are advertised online and if an employer decides to hire someone without doing an interview, they would be putting both the company and themselves at risk. For instance, a lot of people use fake names and qualifications online. A study by Chung Chung in 2019 found that about 76 per cent of individuals on social media platforms were using fake names, occupations and ages. Thus, he advised companies to be careful when advertising jobs. For such reasons, I opine that doing interviews is important as it gives the employer a chance to physically see the one seeking employment and even see their qualifications.\n\nFurthermore, without doing interviews, the company would not know if the curriculum vitae they received is true. Some job seekers sometimes lie when talking about themselves. To illustrate, a certain company in Zambia was looking for workers to help build a railway line, most people applied but when the day for interviews came, a few were employed. This happened because some individuals had lied in their curriculum vitae that they were physically strong and able to lift heavy rail equipment . When the day for proving it came, they failed to carry the blocks. Thus to avoid such cases, companies must prioritise interviewing prospective workers.\n\nIn conclusion, I totally disagree with the idea of avoiding interviews when hiring workers. This is because interviewing those who applied for the job helps employers to physically and personally know their future employees thereby avoiding being scammed. These and more issues are discussed in the essay above.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am against driverless cars, because I find them to be dangerous. All though it gives the driver a break, there is always a posibilty of the sensors messing up or shutting off. Say your driverless car is driving its self and a sensor goes out while its going 45mph, and the driver so happen to look away when a kid runs out in to the middle of the road and the vechicale is unable to stop it self. These driverless cars can cause alot of problems, between the manufactors and indiviuals. If there happen to be a error in the car system and an accident accour, whos fault will it be?\n\nIf they do bring driverless cars into play, they will have to set up a brand new set of laws for the roads. Would you be able to get your license at a younger age or will they make the driver legal age higher?\n\nThere are many malfunctions an error in technolgy now, how will be forrsure there wont be errors in the cars system? If there was would it be expensive to fix? If this malfunction was to create an accident, would the driver have persmisson to sue the manufactor.\n\nThink of your safety, would you want to put not only your life, but your children, mothers, fathers, brothers, sisters and over all familys lives in the hands of a driverless car?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The extreme temperatures occur situation becomes dangerous In case extreme weather I lived time eight years old It happened middle almost record high temperature occurred The day peaked one hundred twenty five degrees make matters much worse entire neighborhoods power gone Nobody air conditioning many people ended getting severely sick injured We lived gated community everyone got along great People neighborhood gathered together put tents shade provided everyone cold water There important things must remember situation like happens must good attitude s help complaining also think help people need I nt think community would lasted nt everyone s great attitude spirit course laughter It important good attitude situation like What point complaining getting mad reason I told would last forever keep chin I could tell many kids even adults complaining much harder time coping situation It hard complain eight yearold I eventually managed help lot water If keep spirits interact people say seems go much faster I remember whole family one tents sitting around telling funny stories telling jokes I would much rather day like family normal boring one Out many important things could possibly think If nt think much better time complaining It important many situations keep mind topic wo nt stressed I saw many people could nt take They would say bad easy tell stressed If try make situation good one keep thinking get matter bad During many people needed assistance The community big help set tents provided people water snacks However started get bad people suffering exhaustion many put There several ambulances help people get back normal Some people need go hospital get attention The community eventually got day serious injuries The power came back around six oclock Being exhausted people slowly walked drove back houses Our whole family walked back house immediately turned air conditioning Everyone relieved happy finally situation Even night day low one hundred twelve degrees We played games told jokes rest night able get Our family stayed strong many others nt last It goes show Laughter shortest distance two people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless Cars are not something that we need invinted. The only reason people would want driverless cars invented is becasue they're lazy and don't want to drive themselves. We are able to drive our cars we have now, Drivers Ed classes will have to undergo new information to teach, and people who already know how to drive a regualr car will have to learn all the new ways that are avaliable to oporate the cars. It will waste a lot more time and money when driverless cars come out.\n\nThere is nothing wrong with the cars we have now. We are fully capable of driving cars ourselves. It's a lot more accurate and safe if humans oporate vehicles and not technology. What if an accident occurs when the car is opporating itself? Do we blame the car since it was the one driving or the person behind the wheel because they could have taken over? A lot of lawsuits and money could come from accidents with driverless cars. If we stay with regular cars we won't have to worry about wether to blame the car or the person behind the wheel.\n\nDrivers Ed classes will have to be taught differently than they are now. Teachers will have to take the time to learn new material they have to inform everyone on that are taking the classes. And the classes will probably be a lot more expensive since you'll still have to learn things they teach now plus all the new information with driverless cars. People will be less likely to take drivers Ed because of the cost rising. So there is less moeny being taken in by the school that offers the class and less fully educated drivers on the road opporating vehicles.\n\nPeople who already know how to drive the cars we have now will have to learn the new laws of driverless cars and how the road ways will be different. It'll be a lot of unnecessary time take away from them just to learn something we don't absolutly need to know. And it'll probably cost them more money in some way by learning these new regulations brought on by driverless cars.\n\nDriverlesss cars are a waste of thought and technology. They will just make us more dependent on technology and cause us to be more lazy. We're alright with driving the cars we have now, Drivers Ed classes will have to change to fit what is needed to be taught with the new cars, and people who have already learned how to drive will have to waste time learning new things about driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program because it would be a great way to work with animals, travel, and visit new places. By joining you'll be able to learn and know how to care for animals. You'll also be helping countries find there way back to the top like Luke did. You can have fun on the Seagoing Cowboys program only if you want to. Luke had fun and tried new things, he made this program benefit his life into doing new things, and so can you, you only have to try.\n\nLuke wanted to travel, so he managed to go to Greece, Europe, and China. Luke also wanted to work with animals and care for them and he got to just by signing up for this program. Luke got to tour the exavated castle in Crete and he also toured the Panama Canal, and so can you, you have to just sign up for this program and benefit from it. Luke cares for the animals because he liked them and they were fragile to him. Luke found time to have fun by playing baseball and volleyball games. Luke also played table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, and whittling to have fun and pass the time.\n\nSo you should sign up for the Seagoing Cowboys program, so you can have the same experience as Luke, and to meet new people, new animals, and visit new places just to enjoy life and have fun. Also by signing up you can maybe have a family if you choose to, its your choice and your life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "She cant wait till flowers start come back snow melts isnt cold grow going take test failed geese flowers come back", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports his claim very well yes we can go to venus and that would be amazing to see but we cant with stain those condtions. 800 degress surface is very hard to be able to with stain is metals arent even to stay solid on it. But her does have a good point if we take a thick metal jet and fly over 170 miles in the air and just watch down. That would keep us in a nice area of heat becuase then we wont have to worry about being hot because how high we are up and how fast were going will cool us down. I feel that we shouldnt do it there use to be life forms there and oceans but it got so hot they arent there no more. Then we should just leave it how it is and mind our business. What if we do happen to revive this planet history always repeats itself\" doesn't it then that would be billions if not trillions burned into ash ... literally. Just because the world is way to close to the sun and we cant take having that risk we can lose hundreds of thousands of lives if we try that its already bad enough the world we live on suffers with world hunger and global warming imagine venus. Venus is a quite small planet and its already hot imagine if we do find some way to cool it off and we start making factories and global warming becomes a thing literally every thing will look like its silver just because if we do this everything will melt from either the planets hot surface or global warming making the planet hot again.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The following essay claims that parents should encourage their children to do more sports instead of forcing them to spend all their time studying. And I partially agree with this statement. Although, I concur with the idea that education is quite important, too. That's why I concur with the idea that children should spend time doing both of these activities. \r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, I want to mention that education is quite important for the child's future. Good education does not only affect child's future, but also helps them to make their outlook wider. And this ability will be important in their adulthood And they would be able to have their opinion and express it. Because in my opinion, education does not consist only of different kinds of school subjects, it also includes finance, the ability of public speaking and expressing one's mind. \r\n\r\nBut I also agree with the idea that sport is also compulsory for the development of a child. Firstly, regularly doing sport helps a person to be much healthier and makes a person much stronger. Also, it was scientifically proven that doing sport makes your brain work better and age less faster. I think that it is quite important for everyone. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, I concur with the idea that the child should not only study, but also do sport. By combining both of these activities a child would be able healthy, smart and sociable. Also, I would like to mention that habits that are built in person's childhood stick to that person until the end of their life. That's why during that period of time you need to build as much healthy habits as possible.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Describe mood author memoir mood athor memoir Is hard time grow parent s keep movieing bay age twentseven year old Narciso Rodriguez liveing family live one apratment room When growing racism growing When growing mother father taught cook number one thing learned love one", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Mars has alot of land forms like cracks,crators,and hills. I am certian it has land formations if it has hills and cracks. Erosion created land forms on earth with wind and rocks falling on each other like a slow chain reaction. It is highly posible for it to have happened on mars may tousands possibly millions of years ago to star erosion. Mars is filed with many resonses for it not to be livable if it were ever consitered apon. It most likely a cluster of dust and bolders than live beings made this face. People see faces in every thing from light sockets to morfed trees. I know the face on the moon is a popular land formation like the ''Grand Canyon''. It be impossible to not try to think aliens did it but there are things here on earth famous we didn't create. I know mars has land forms too.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports the idea very well by adding how venus can not only benefit us but also what the history on venus could have been, and what we can learn from it. The author also states that Venus is basically earth's twin with the size and shape of venus. The only problem is it's very difficult to get to venus. Even with a rover going instead of a human. Which is good because no rover has survived longer than a couple of hours.\n\nEven with those risk Venus can benefit us by us getting there to fill up on solor energy and bringing it back to earth. The author also supports the idea by explaining how thick the atmosphere is by saying ''almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus'', and also ''the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we expirence here on our own planet''. Which means it what more than any other human have expirenced here on Earth. The author also provides the weather like erupting volcanos, poweful eathquakes, and frequent lightning strikes. Also stating that venus still had earth like analogous like rocky sediment, Valleys, moutains, and crators.\n\nSo the author did very well supporting the idea which is shoud we go to Venus?The author provided us with valuable information that can help us find whats on Venus for us and how it can provide for us. Such as solor pannels that can give us energy. Also with pressure that a human can not survive in. So the author did very well in giving us information that supports the idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Florida senator, we should keep the Electoral College. The Electoral College has been around for decades, produced by the founding fathers, it was made as a compromise between the two different ways the president should be elected. One way being by a slate of senators, and another by simply popular vote. It was made so that citizens could still have their vote, but more politically advanced senators could make a decision. The Electoral College is not only more efficiant but it lets the citizens keep their votes as well. I favor the Electoral College instead of popular vote because it helps avoid run-off elections, it uses the winner-takes-all method, and gives equal oppourtunity to smaller states.\n\nRun-off elections, as known as, the gigantic issue with a popular vote election system. In 1968, Nixon, and in 1992, Clinton, both only had about 43 percent of the popular votes which was not enough. This is a problem because it complicates the presidential electon process. This is where the Electoral College comes in hand; the outcome of the votes becomes very clear this way. Instead of dealing with tricky numbers and percentages, the electoral college uses the \"winner-takes-all\" method. The winner-takes-all method is as literal as it sounds; the winner takes all. For example if someone was running for president and they got 301 votes and 370 electoral college votes, they would win (you only need a majority of 270 votes to be elected.\n\nLastly, using the Electoral College benefits smaller states. Think of this, you live in Maine, or Hawaii, or somewhere with a smaller population than Florida or California- your state would not have really that much of a impact on who wins the electon. Although, you cannot choose who your state senators in the end vote for, there's a greater chance of your state having a bigger impact. It naturally balences out some of the more heavier politically impacting states. Even though things are equal, in the long run larger states (population wise) will get more attention than states with a smaller population.\n\nThere are upsides and downsides to the Electoral College, but from a political perspective it is crystal clear that it is a better choice. Citizens for popular vote do believe it is unfair to the voters having a board of senators making the big vote/impact on the president, but those senators are highly trusted people who know what they're doing. I favor the Electoral College over popular vote because it helps avoid run-off elections, it uses the winner-takes-all method, and gives equal oppourtunity to smaller states.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]