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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many reasons to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. Not only do you get to travel around the world you get to help others who countrie or town that has been detroyed. Many people liked the outcome from their trip and you probably will too. You dont have to do it every year but if you would like to you can. You might be gone from your family for a while.\n\nCan you just picture yourself traveling around and going places that you might only can go one chance out of a lifetime? In the passage in paragraph one it states how Luke felt about going on the trip, \"He knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime.\" Would you want to miss out? I sure wouldn't. All you have to do is join the UNRRA.\n\nThe UNRRA stands for the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administraction. The only bad thing about the trip is that you still have to work. The article includes some information in paragraph 2 that during the program you have to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas. Your probably thinking ew,no gross, but this is progress of helping the coutries that have been ruined. Keep in mind that this is a good cause, the animals need comfort too.\n\nNext, the good part about the trip is the unique place you would be going. In paragraph 5 it states, \"Luke had made nine trips---the most of any Seagoing Cowboy.\" That can be one of your goals if you join the program. Not only did Luke and Don and others just travel they also had free time. They played baseball and volleyball games and many more but they also got to explore freely around the countrie they were in.\n\nAlso, in paragraph 9 includes, \"But being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than a adventure for Luke Bomberger. It opened up the world to him. \"I'm grateful for the opportunity\" he says. \"It made more aware of other people of other countries and their needes.\" In conclusion, let Luke's inspiring trip be a goal for you to be apart of the UNRRA program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If people look at images of Cydonia Mars, they will come to see what looks like a mysterious face. A plethora amount of people belive that this face was made by aliens. Aliens are not real, and if they where we would have come to account with them by this day in age. It is humorous to think that people belive in aliens. These claims are rediculous to even think about if you have common sence.\n\nThe mysterious face on Mars is just a mesa. It is just something that came to be like how the Grand Canyon was formed. As the cameras get better pictures, the face starts to disappear. The picture was took in 1976 when technology was just now new to us. The conspiracy theory is not true.\n\nPeople claim that then new picture of the face is not a valid source because it was \"cloudy.\" These claims are rediculous. We went up into space again to find that it still looked nothing like a face. If this was created by aliens, then that means the pyramids were created by aliens, or Niagara Falls was created by aliens. It is the same as saying the universe was created by aliens.\n\nThe face is just a natural landform just like any natural landform on Earth. If the face was supposidly created by aliens then you could also say that about any natural landform on Earth. In fact, the new pictures of the face look nothing like a face.\n\nPeople who believe these theories must have a huge imagination. If these aliens are real, how come we havent come to account with them yet. Many people believe that the face was made by aliens. The mysterious face on Mars is was not created by aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am for the development of driverless cars.I support the development of driverless cars because it's important for people to get used to and improve technology to better our world,driverless cars could potentially be safer than when other people drive.The driverless cars would reduce the power from the from the engine,resulting in better response and control.\n\nIn today's world in it very important to keep up with the technology that is constantly being improved.The driverless cars are a new technology that could potentially be safer than when another human drives it themselves.Drivers frequently run through stop signs,speed on country roads,interstates,etc.This problem leads to alot of car accidents and even death.Driverless cars follow rules.In the text it states,\"It uses lasor beams to form a constaly updating 3-D model of the car's surroudnings.\"\n\nDriverless cabs will definitally stop alot of drunk drivers.When people get drunk,it is hard to keep balance and think clearly.Intoxicated drivers could call up a driverless cab to take them to their destination safely and responsibly.The driverless cars would contribute to this problem.According to the text,\"Sensors can cause the cars to apply brakes on the individua; wheel and reduce power from the engine,allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\"\n\nSome humans get nervous while driving.During traffic jams, alot of people do things to pass the time waiting for the traffic to go again. Driver less cars have the \"Traffic Jam Assistant.\" It is said to handle function up to 25mph.The text states,\"special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel.\" Althought the car is not completely driver less, it is able to accelerate,stear,and brake themselves.\n\nPeople who are against the driverless cars, would most likely talk about the car braking down, or not safe to drive.They wouldn't be to interested in having a car that says it is driverless but is not completly drivers less. As it states in the text,\"We have to interpet the driving fun in a new way.\" manufacturers do that by adding special in-car qualities and entertainment.Secondly,\"Such display can be turned off instanly when the driver needs to take over.\" Before the car would be able to be driven by humans, the car would have to be approved in the states to be driveable.It is not uncommon for cars to break down when they are old.\n\nI support driverless cars. They would reduce tons of accidents that happen on the roads.Safety is the number one concern when people drive,with this technology people would be safe.Driverless cars use alomost half the amount of oil and gas.resulting in less air pollution.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "`\n\nDriverless cars would be a good thing. It would be a big step in technology. Take some risks out of being on the road. It would also save some money. A car that drives itself would be a great achievement.\n\nTo begin, if the car drove itself then it wouldnt be as dangerous. When people are drunk they wouldnt wreck because of them being careless. The car can take over and have heads up display. Somthing not available to drivers trying to text with a cell phone. This makes that a safety feature, and safety is a big concern.\n\nSecondly, The car can save gas money. With the car driving the proper speeds and everything the car wouldnt waste gas. Sergey Brin foresees that the cars would use half of the fuel in todays taxis and offer more flexibility than a bus would. The cars would be a good change for the world and the environment.\n\nFinally, The cars would be a big jump in technology. It would be a big advancement. Radars used to be a big deal now anyone can get them. There are already some cars that can already drive themselves a little but there not ready for the streets. Tesla thinks in 2016 they will release a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time. Mercedes benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020. Every day we get closer to having an automated car.\n\nI think the automated cars would be good. The roads would be safer. Cost less money than spending gas all the time. It would be easier to drive the car. The car could be easier to learn.\n\nOverall the driverless car is a great idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator of the state of Florida,\n\nI would like to propose you to keep the electoral college in regards to how elections are made for the presidency and vice presidency. I in my opion as well as in other feel that by keeping the electoral college decisions on votes would be satisfactory for us in due to th e couting of our votes for the elections that we face. It would be a much rather delightfulness for the state of Florida if you would keep on helping sustain the electoral college and its' bases of funtion as well as in the rightchesness that belongs in our votes for the candidates that run for election either for presidency or vice presidency. Further more I wish to ask you to maintain our votes fair in wich i mean don't do an unfairness of our votes that is to say, our votes that get sent to you so that you can put in the final vote. As you may know there are many hateful critcism on how the electoral college functions and I'd like to say that if you could put up with the so many critics and just keep doing your job on electoral college then you could put up a positive ad on how the electoral college really works so that the many people that crtisize and have doubts on how the electoral college will truely know what is happening with their votes for election times. Our nation really needs this even though it is a really old system of governmence towards our voted that fall in you hands. for instance in the article \"The Indefensible Electoral college: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\"(paragraph 14) it states \"...The electoral college is...outdated\" this shows how even an article was written to discuss the faults in the electoral collage and how its sytem works. the electoral collage may recieve many hateful critism on how fair the electoral collage is, but all in all their shouidn't be anything to worry about knowing that what you're doing is right in terms of governance and politics. With all due respect I would like to thank you for helping sustain the the electoral college with your fellow out of state caleeges, its a pleasure having having you as our Senetor and this goes as for everyone that enjoys your supportment to the government and how its electoral elections are based due to this system. I hope this really helps on how our government system on elections are critized, and that for at least there are people that actually hope for the prosper of the electoral college and the benifits that come out of it as also the many unlawful things that could arise in the nation if we didn't have and electoral college. With all due respects I hope that your manegment of our votes in elections be used wisely in the electoral college unlike other places in the world where much is corrupted and is used against the people instead of for the people. Thank you for taking your time in reading this article Senetor of Florida.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author presents both positive and negative aspects of driverless cars. These cars have been thought of in 2009 and have been driven more than half a million miles without a crash. The negative way is that most people will still have to be alert and this will cost more money, and depending on the crash of both veichle and drive we will not be able to fiigure out who has done it.\n\nMost people are having a hard time focusing on the road just because of texting or being on the phone with others. There were positive ways of the driverless cars,but there are limits these cars can face.\n\nThere are some positive ways of the driverless cars. In 2009, google cars has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions. These cars read the positive and negative polarity as messgae in the binary code.There were also sensors at the wheels in the creation of antilock brakes, they have become more advanced in the pass ten years. Further improvements in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer. Driverless cars will give the driver more time to text and finish phone calls with others. Also help in keep drivers, passengers, and pedestrains safe while driving in control.\n\nThe negative way of observing driverless cars were the price of how much all this will cost, how most people would react, and weither or not whose fault would it be if a crash has happened. Even though these smart-road systems in the beginning worked, the requried massive upgrades to existing roads and that is way to expensive to be practical. These sensors that car needed you would not just go buy at radio shack, but some where at a highly expensive manufacturers. People would need to be alert the whole time. Some signals would be sent out if you needed to address the wheel, such as a viberating seat, announces when the driver need to take over, or flashing lights on the windshield. Manufacturers are trying to set cameras to watch if the driver is paying attention, but means we are being watched and our privacy will be invaded. Some countries are allowing limited use of the driverless car because traffic laws are written with the objective that is only safe if a car has a human driver in control. If technology fails and someone is injured whose fault is it the driver or the manufacturer. Something could have broken and maybe a signal was not given to the driver causing them to crash. It could aslo be the driver was heavnily intoxicated and could not take control of the car.\n\nIn conclusion there are positive and negative ways of the \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\". The positive side of seeing this is that there will be less accidents. Cars will also be able to drive independently letting us have more time to text or be on the phone. Sensors will be way improved in near future with the brakes and sending us alerts. The negative way of the driverless cars are that America will be pushed more into debt because of the expensive parts that are needed, if there is a crash no one will know who has done it, and how fast will people react to the signals of the car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent years, it is assumed that the rapid advancement of artificial intelligence (AI) might replace human workers. While it is possible that all menial jobs will eventually be taken over by robots, it is unlikely that jobs requiring human connection will be substituted. This essay will discuss why I think not all jobs will finally be replaced by AI.\r\n\r\nRobots may eventually replace all human labour that does not require specific and complex human skills. Many companies these days have increasingly applied AI for repetitive tasks because it is far less expensive than employing a human. For example, several banks currently reduced the number of their staff due to the advanced financial technology that allows customers to do transactions simply by putting a few buttons on their mobile phones. These instances clearly illustrate that some routine tasks could be eventually substituted by AI. \r\n\r\nHowever, in some situations, people are significantly required to perform certain roles and responsibilities instead of help from algorithms and tons of information. One of the main reasons is that AI lacks human relations which are considered essential for some sensitive businesses. For instance, when people have personal problems and decide to see a psychologist, they expect to see a real human who can empathically validate their feelings and allows them to truly express their vulnerability and AI or algorithms impossibly fulfil these duties. For these reasons, I believe not all work will be completed merely by automated machines.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there are increasing possibilities that AI will replace employment in some industries. In my opinion, unskilled labour will be likely to be taken over by robots; however, sophisticated duties requiring human-specific skills will always exist.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I had a friend who asked me\n\nto go with him to go to Europe on a cattle boat with him. I said that I would go because it was a chance in a lifetime that I could not say no to. The Seagoing Cowboys take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas. We headed to Greece with a cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them. But being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for me. It opened up the world to me. I said that \" I'm grateful for the opportunity.\" I also said\n\nthat \" It made me more aware of people in other countries and thier needs.\" I had time to have fun to so I was not always doing a job. The cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in empty holds where animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass time. You could be a young age like 18 to go and help but that aslo means that you could end up helping the military. You can go to oter countries like Italy, China, Greece, and Europe.You should join because it mighgt help you understand what the people do on the ship. You could join so you can help people in need and help them get what they need to live.\n\nIf you are 18 you could be drafted for military service.It also means that you could be helping the peoples country. I had made nine trips the most out of all Seagoing Cowboys. You could beat the record if you go. When you are traveling you want to be careful because you never know if the boat might sink. The boat might sink because there is too much weight on the boat. It could cause a number of international students and excange visitors. I had many people come to my house. So it might have an effect on you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I computer user think computers helpfull many ways They help get new They help function machines They help people learn new things Computers help find get new They provide public another way find new another job My brother example went university learned become micanic hard time finding job looking street somone told go go CAPS computer found good job still works The computer great way find job Computers help function machines All machines use run hand run computers That good someway bad another way They help make product less time Today cars made less time ve seen sometimes cars saw assemble line michanical robot hands putting together using computers One major problem many people lossing The computer teacher people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Im Evan and a guy at my work named John says that the Face on mars was created by alien's. I told him \"Its not created by aliens and me and others at NASA have proof\". He said \"show me the proof than EVAN!!!\". So I then went to get my boss and asked him if i could see the pictures and articles about the face on mars. He said i couldn't see them right away because he needed them so i gad a wait a whole day. The next day my boss handed me the paper and i was so exited to go to John's face and show him the facts.\n\nThe first things i showed him were the 3 pictures because it shows how it looked over all those years. Then i showed what NASA said, which was \"Huge rock formation which resembles a human head formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" The authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to mars.\n\nIt was a pop icon, it starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows, even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years!!! I told john \"Even only a little bit of scientists believe the face was an alien articraft.'\n\nEncountering the face on mars was not an easy task i told him, and they just don't pass over it very often said Garvin i told him. They even took other pictures where the pixel size was 3 times bigger so if there was other objects like aircraft or pyramids they would be able to see them. The face looks like Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. Then i asked him \"Now was that enough proof for you to believe me' and he said i'll tell you tomorrow. John went home and did research, when he came back he said \"yes I believe you now.\" After that i was like want to be friends and he said Yes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think they should bring driverless cars?I think they should bring these driverless cars but I also think they should'nt.If you want my opinion I think they should because they have had their driverless cars drive half a million miles without crashing,but I also think they shouldn't because these cars can only handle driving functions up to up to 25 mph, and also a human could get bored waiting on their turn to drive.\n\nFirst of all, I think they should bring these driverless cars because it keeps safety on the road like in the second paragraph it states,\"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\" So that could be a good opinion to bring the driverless cars.\n\nSecond of all, however I think bringing the driverless could be a bad idea because these cars can only handle drivg functions up to 25 mph.Which i'm sure alot of people would want to not go that slow.\n\nLastly, my last opinion on not bringing these driverless cars is that i'm sure humans could get bored on waiting on the monitor to tell them when to take the wheel.\n\nWith all that said I do not think they should bring the driverless cars because,a human could get bored waiting on his/her turn to drive,the cars can only handle funtions up to 25 mph but I also think they should bring the driverless car because it bring safety to the streets.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People fall into two camps as to whether watching Tv affects teenagers badly or not .Although watching TV yields benefits for teens, however, İ strongly believe asser that parents ought to place a cap on watching TV for their children \r\n\r\nIt is mentioned why some people assume that watching TV is more profitable.First and foremost by watching , they develop thorough insight into various countries and their cultures and appearances as they gain a deeper understanding of the environment of countries,thus exploring new subjects,learning practical skills such as cookery and paintings through a broad range of programs on TV. This ,in turn, prover the necessary experience for their future life.Furthermore,watching TV enables family members to consolidate their bonds,on the grounds that families tend to gather in the living room to enjoy watching TV and socialize and spend quality time with each other.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nI , however,argue that watching TV may damage childrenʼs health as children are confined at home when watching TV and they tend to be sedentary .This, as a result, leads to them constant health implications such as obesity and diabetes which are becoming increasingly common among editors.Another issue is watching inappropriate content on Tv .This is because children watch programs featuring violent and explicit content ,which stimulate undesirable behaviour in them\r\n\r\nIn a nutshell, even though watching TV assist children to explore new pieces of stuff and communicate with their family members.I would assert that parents should limit the amount of TV for their children.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Most people are likely to have a successful career and good future. Every person having their own mind goal for it. Some are like to study in depth to get a better knowledge, while some are like to gather experience in the market by doing jobs in their interest field. However, which is the best way to get a success in career or a good future from these two mindsets. \n\nFirstly, The believer of depth study in university or college believes that after school, the people should go for higher studies to get more intelligence. It will help to build their knowledge about how to survive and make a better future. However, they believe that the study of school is not sufficient for surviving in the world. For instance, many people have been unemployed due to lack of knowledge in their field, and then creating their small business for surviving. Nowadays, many people believe about taking higher studies will be better for their career.\n\nOn the other hand, Many believe that after school, the people should get a job to better experience about their field. In the bunch of companies, many new technologies and process of working has been established. Many people believe that the people will get a knowledge by working in the open market, while the universities or colleges are not giving practical and updated knowledge about their field. For example, In the market, many new techs are coming for implementation, if the people are working earlier, they will know about the updated techs and products and also, they are having experience about using some previous technologies.\n\nIn my opinion, there are many ways for making successful career. However, there are not only one best way to achieve a success. The one best way to achieve success is the hard work, interest and the mind set goal. \n\nTo conclude, These both two ways are the best way to get a successful career and a good future. But, the people should have an interest in that field, and also they should be a hard working person for it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars have been in development since the 1950's, for the goal of eventually making all other forms of civilian ground transport obsolete. No real progress has really come until a couple decades ago, when things like Radar and GPS became readily available for civilians. These cars could bring great benefits, as they would be safe, still have drivers to take the wheel, and they will be here relatively soon.\n\nThese cars would be safe. When the car hits bad traffic, or a hard to navigate place, it would notify the driver of such a situation. Googles \"driverless\" car anounces when one of these scenarios arises. Another one, developed by GM, has \"driver's seats that vibrate.\" These cars could also have \"in-car entertainment and information systems that us heads up displays,\" that could be,\"turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over.\" Of course, the \"driverless\" cars would also have a human there.\n\nSo called \"driverless\" cars arent 100% driverless. If the systems malfunction, the driver can take the wheel. The cars could have measures to make sure the driver stays at least semi-alert, such as \"Flashing lights on the windshield and other heads-up displays.\" In this case the light would attract the attention of the driver, and the driver would start paying attention.\n\nAutomakers are working and developing these cars, and have been for a while. Soon, these driverless cars will be available. Tesla has announced that a \"car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time,\" as early as this year, 2016. Other auto manufacturers \"plan to have cars that drive themselves by 2020.\" These manufacturers include Nisan, Mercedes-Benz, and Audi.\n\nDriverless cars aren't druely driverless, are quite safe, and are going to be available soon. There is no real reason to be against having these cars on the road, or to have all cars be truely driverless in the near future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Due to the advancement of technology, many jobs can now be achieved by the use of machines and computers. This development has a great impact on our society and it is good to know whether this is a positive or a negative tendency. Some people feel that this is an advantageous trend, while others believe that this has negative impacts on our community. Personally, I tend to support the latter approach. \n This innovation has made people's life much easier and more convenient. Since robots have replaced many manual labours, employers have the chance not only to save valuable time as the machines do not require any further training, but also to increase their revenues because machines do not demand monthly salaries like humans do. For example, in many grocery stores in the UK, customers can now scan and pay their shoppings in vending machines, resulting the save time on waiting in the queue. This is a clear benefit for the community. Nevertheless, this innovative method can cause dire problems. \n Looking on the other side of the coin, robots have significantly increased the rate of poverty and unemployment. Many jobs have been limited due to this innovation and therefore it's more difficult to get employed compared to a few decades ago. For example, from vending machines have been invented many cashiers have been unemployed. Furthermore, these machines consume high amounts of electrical power in order to operate. As a result, this tendency has definitely a negative impact to the environment since electrical power industries pollute the environment for the generation.\n To conclude, this innovation has great benefits for our society in one point, but I believe that the disadvantages of this trend outweigh the advantages. High rates of unemployment cause massive problems for the humanity.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The graph illustrates the process of transforming rainwater into drinking water in a city in Australia.\nOverall, it can be clearly seen that rainwater undergoes five sequential steps to become domestic tap water, ready to be used in the house.\nFirstly, roof drainage is installed for the collection of rainwater. When it rains, the water moves along the roof drainage, and pipes lead into the water filter. Next, the water filter removes basic pollutants, such as leaves and sediments, and begins the first step of water purification. After that, the water flows into a large square water storage tank and then inflows to the next tank for treatment. When enough rainwater enters the treatment tank, chemical substances are injected through a small device on top of the tank to sterilize and ensure the safety of water quality. Once the water is fully purified, it is pumped into the house as a source of drinking water.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock They consulted experts taking tours equipment mooring operations New JerseyThe architects could nt drop mooring mast top building would add stress building s frame The Stress load would transmitted way building s foundation The steel frame would modified strengthenedThe greatest obstacle nature The winds top building constantly Shifting due violent air currents Even dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would around around mooring mast You could weigh would dangling high pedestrians Street neither practical safeThere also law airships flying low urban areas And When tried delivering newspapers noticed nt going work", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am very much against the idea of putting my life on a machinge. I no not agree in putting my life and others in danger because I am to lazy to drive the car myself. So many things could go wrong when letting a machine work for us such as more distractions, machine breaking down, WIFI disconnecting, and overconfidence are all things that could cause accidents and death all because we want a machine to do work for us!\n\nThe fact that people are actually considering risking their lives so that they can places faster and more convienently is very concerning. We are actually hoping that one day we can sit back in the car and let a machine take us places and actually believing nothing would go wrong. I don't trust in machines at all. I am a student at Guerin Catholic were computers are needed, and I see someone having problems with them everyday. If we cant trust simple electronics like computers to be working for us everyday, then how are we suppose to expect a car that needs sensors, lasers, GPS, WIFi, and so many other things to work 100% of the time. We are risking our lives and those of others trusting that all this will work properly.\n\nToday we have laws that prevent us from using phones and other electronics in cars, because they are distractions and can cause accidents. In the text we learn that some manufactures are wanting the car to control 80% of what happens so that in unexpected cases we humans can take over. I seriously doubt that is someone were in a car in which the did not do anything but sit for 80% of the time that they would not be doing something else. If we allow people that much time to have a machine control the movements of the car we cannot really expect someone to just be 100% ready to take over the job to prevent something dangerous from happening. It just won't happen! If we have people texting and talking on phones inside of cars were we are the only ones in control of what is happening how are we to expect people to be resonible enough to know when they need to take over in command because the machine warns us. The law clearly warns us to not talk and drive and yet we do it. What would be different when the machines says, \"take over now\"?\n\nIn our world today we already have a lot of technology in control of part of our lives. We drive machines, use computer, phones, GPS, WIFI all to help us in our daily lives. We of course know that the are not 100% trustworthy, because we see them breaking down all of the time. Now imagine a car on a road with about 50 other cars around. Are we seriously thinking about about installing a system in these cars that drive them for us. What would happen if one of them suddenly broke down? It would be a catastrophe! This car would cause a major accident and could possible ruin everybody else around them. They indeed would be very convenient if they worked 100% of the time, but since we know that won't happen then we shouldn't do it. There is just to much at risk!\n\nSomething else we should think about is what will happen when a car breaks down, hitting another car and killing the other driver? We known today that there are laws that specifically tells us who is to blame in certain accidents. In a world with no drivers or with drivers who control the car 20% of the time, then who are you gonna blame. If you blame the company which built it they will simply say \"well you bought it. What happens now is your fault and not of my concern\". Is it really your fault though? How can you be to blame if your not even in control of what you are buying? The answer is your not. Truthfully there is no one to blame excpet for those who though all this would be a good idea!\n\nThese are all very good reasons that we should think again about what we are about to do. Companies should overlook the money and start thinking primarily about peoples safety and the danger it will be if all of this actually comes to reality. After seeing and analyzing all these reasons are you really going to risk your life by letting a maching drive you, or are you going to put in the extra effort and drive yourself?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Im agree with the Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President. This is my claim, A dipute over the outcome of an Electoral College vote is possible it happened in 2000, but it's likely than a dispute over the popular vote. The reason is that the winning candidate's share of the Electoral College invariably exceeds his share of the popular vote. For example, President Obama recive 61.7 percent of the electoral votes copared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes for him and for Romney. Because the total number of votes 538 is an even number, but it is highly unlikely.\n\nThe winner take all method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates,  to focus on their campaign; the voters in toss-up states are more likely to pay close attention to the competing candidates.  The electoral college restores some of the weigth on the political balance that large states lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Constitution. The most popular vote was in Florida in 2012. Who won the vote, got 29 electoral votes. So other things being equal, a large state gets more attention from presidential candidates ina campaign tahn a small state. Nixon in 1968 and Clinton in 1992 both had only a 43 percent plurality of the popular votes, while winning a majority in the  Electoral College the 301 and 370 electoral votes, repectively.\n\nThere is pressure for run-off elections when no candidate wins a majority of the votes cast; that pressure, which of would greatly complicate the presidential election process, is reduced by the Electoral College, which invariably produces a clear winner. Democrats in Texas, and Reublicans in California. Thir vote no effect, they have less incentive to pay attention to the compaign than they would have if the president were picked by popular vote. But of course  no voter's vote swings a national election, about one-half the elegible American population did vote in 2012's election.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This special artifact that was found on Mars might have been created by aliens, or a Martian mesa. On May 24, 2001 NASA's Viking 1 was circling around mars. Something different happened that made TV, magazines, even Hollywood. Viking 1 captured a picture of a FACE on mars. At the time no one knew what made this but NASA did have plenty enough of ideas to figure it out sooner or later.\n\nAn argument would be is are aliens actually real or are they a mythical creature that people say is real. The man NASA is talking to would have to find out himself and so would NASA. NASA has plenty enough cameras in space to know if there are actually aliens up in space. This could have been created by a Martian mesa. The face might of had many weird, or unusual shadows.\n\nThe only problem would be is there aliens in different Galaxies, or on different planets like the ones in our Galaxy the Milkyway. The Aliens could have flew over and made a face on Mars, or carved it themselves. The problem with the Martian mesa is the shadow could have been created by the camer or ship that was flying around the planet Mars.\n\nThe was to prove them wrong though is, we have been studying and flying cameras out into space for awhile and have been searching for aliens the whole time. NASA's cameras are still in space and they are still searching. The Shadow was to large to be created by the ship or camera that was flying around mars. The shadow could have been around Cyndonia which is common.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What is Venus? Venus is a planet that is the second planet from our sun. The author wants us to explore Venus to make it our second home even though there are some risks that can harm us humans and any other life form on that planet. It will also become expensive to study Venus.\n\nWith expolring Venus and humans possibly exploring there it won't be such a good idea because it can cause those peopl to die. In the text it states \"On the planet's surface,temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the amospheric pressure is 90 timess greater than what we experience on our own planet.\"Paragraph 3 second sentence. The author should not include this information because than less people will become less intereted to visit Venus and acttually live there. These are dangerous temperatures for us to luve there becaue we also won't be able to grow food and we could possibly be cooked to death.\n\nIt would cost us money to build mechanical computers again. In the text it states\n\n\"Another projecct is looking back to old technology called mechanical computers...,but these devices make calculations by using gears and levers andd do not require electronics at all.\"Paragraph 7 sentences 3 and 5. By stating this in the text he wants us to know a possible solution to explore Venus. A mechanical computer hasn't been used in almost a decade. How can they possibly find how to make these computers again. They probably will make them over and over again that wil recuire more money and by the time they actually get it rioght to explorre\n\nVenus someone could posssible already found a solution for it to happen.\n\nWith this being said the author really doesn't give us a view on why we should explore Venus. By giving us possible outcomes such as building the mechanical computer and sending people to Venus. Those don't really help because they don't give us a better explanation to what will happen if we ddo become succesful with them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars could arguably change the future. Google has been working with semi-autonomous cars since 2009, and these new innovations could potentially solve an environmental crisis here on Earth. Unfortunately, many people think that if a car drove itself, it would be a danger to others on the road and to the driver as well. In many states, even testing these cars is banned. Are driverless cars dangerous enough to merit controversy?\n\nIt's no doubt that driverless cars would be beneficial to our environment since they use half the fuel of a regular vehicle, and there is no reason why we should ever be so afraid of change that we won't permit the research of a potentionally world-changing invention. Surely testing driverless cars is not without it's dangers, but the benefits that we would reap as a result are nothing less than a necessity, especially since the driver is always in control of the vehicle. Google is working on a car that will drive itself and also alert the driver if the car was about to wreck. If America is about promoting anything, it's saftey, and it's no lie that anything this monumental would be set in stone without the proper precautions being taken.\n\nAmerica is taking part in an advancing technological revolution, but the earth is deteriorating as a result. The constant burning of fossil fuels and the invading of natural resources for materialistic goods are pushing our planet to the brink. In times like these, we need to seize opportunity and take action before our only home in the cosmos is reduced to a regurgitated wasteland of the earth's unusable resources. With driverless cars in our near future, we'll be able to create a fully-autonomous public transportation taxi system with no need for personal cars. It's important for us to care about and care for the planet because if we don't, who will?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often said that adolescents must be encouraged to participate in unpaid social services during their spare time, as this would be beneficial to both themselves and society. From my perspective, I agree with this statement and provide the following reasons. \r\n\r\nIt is obvious that by taking part in voluntary social jobs, younger generations can gain more practical experiences and expand their social circle, which makes a significant contribution to their comprehensive development. For instance, caring for the disabled or preparing meals for the homeless enables young people to enhance their useful life skills. Moreover, in their leisure time, doing unpaid work is considered an efficient method to prevent youngsters from playing portable games or surfing social media sites, which is the root cause of their sedentary lifestyle. \r\n\r\nVoluntary work plays a crucial role in solving various social problems. Indeed, there are various activities conducted by students that have a positive impact on the ecosystem, taking garbage collection as a salient example. This not only supports the community in handling environmental issues but also raises the awareness of adolescents in protecting their ecology. Moreover, there are several social works, such as looking after patients that need personnel who sometimes demand a high salary, which results in a financial burden to the authorities. Therefore, youngsters are able to handle these tasks free of charge, and the budget can be allocated for more urgent problems. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, unpaid work by teenagers in their free time can equip them with social skills and make them conscious of social problems. In addition, the community benefits from these jobs by mitigating employment costs.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the artcle \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" the author talks about how cars are becoming more like the movies on televison how people always wanted them to drive themselves. Cars are improving very much that can be both good and bad because as the technology improves so do other stuff driveless cars be good but dangerous and might even change the world and also human kind or generations to come.\n\nSince the technology has really been improving cars are starting to do that but no completely people still need to be in the car in the article the author states that \"The google car simply announces when the driver needs to take over.\" I do not agree with this kinds of cars that just warn the drivers when to take over what if the driver was sleeping and the cars was trying to alert the driver that he had drive but the driver could not hear or really didnt care then the driver would die and or injure other people. And also the author claims that \"most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe.\" But instead of warning the driver if the driver doesn't take over the car should stop within\n\nseconds so that nothing bad happens. I also think that alot of people would be suing diffrent companies for disasters but really it wouldn't be the companies fault but the drivers for not taking over when alerted as the author claims \"if the technology fails and someone is injured, who ia at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?\" In conclusion as said in the article \"the road to the truly autonomous car stretches on ahead of us, but we grow closer to the destination every day. They already have a year when they will probably release a car that can drive its self as the author said \"Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves b y 2020.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\". She describes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. According to the passage, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" I can agree with Mona Lisas demonstraion that, If a classroom compter could see your emotions, I think the information on the web will be much more interesting until the computer sees that your emotions are acceptable. Havin this computer software, kids and adults of all levels can read people more easily and try to help them. Wether its in school or at home. Kids can learn easier and understand more with this computer software. In passage 6, \"Most human communicaton is non verbal, including emotional communication,\" Dr. Huang has a good point. Most human communication is non verbal and hard to read emotions. Having to see or tell will have a lot more communication. Less problems will suddenly appear. In conclusion, The use of this technology could be helpful becuase it will help people understand students ouside of school and inside of school. Students will become smarter because a computer ad can make sure they get better information if they arent interested. Teachers would would have an easier time teaching as well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "lot positive things technology especially computers Computers gives chance communicate people around world also computers gives opportunity go educating websites last makes easier shop pay bills Talking people around world interesting Computers help using internet You learn almost different people cultural background even talk friends families live cities states maybe even countries Yes people might say cost much s really one ime price Computers helpful students well teachers That reason students get homework help educating websites On hand helpful teachers put students grades online wo nt kids bugging s average certain class Yes I know bad unappropriate websites lot ways block For example I I needed lot help teacher told website called studyisland going everyday boosted grade Computers give chance get bills paid shopping cheaper price Their ways things buy online could come days late think much time money saving ordered offline instead going store But s also helpful people disability They re lot positive things computers They give chance communicate people across world gives chance go educating websites last helps pay bills go shopping Local Newspaper computers big benefit society without lot things wouldnt possible", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper come attention people concerned using computers much Well I disagree statement I think computer teaches handeye coordination The computer also lets leave foriegn people paces Lastly computers helps communicate others As recently stated I think computers useful help handeye coordination For example write papers school document work re using coordination You nt even notice hang typing tend move faster This machine beautiful invention please nt take away The computer also everyday life useful learning new things far away places people Another thing dont realizes using computer someone long distance places How would get information without spending ton airfare gas The computer quickest way find information Finally computer important resource chat friends A researcher showed computers You chat I think computers affects They teach handeye coordination teach far away places computer lets chat online friends I see computer way I", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "venus sometimes is called evening star because in the night make some lights in the sky venus is actually planet in our solar sistem this planet is the second from the sum venus is along time by earth this planet is close to earth in size and occasionallyare cose to earth too.\n\nvenus and mars this are the anothers planets orbit to the sumand a diferent speed venus alwas is around the the corner in space .\n\nvenus almos have a 97% percent carbon dioxide blanketson the others planets surface temperatures average over 800 degrees and thgem pressure is 90 times greater than we are experience in our own planet .\n\nthe planet have superface of rocky sodiment and includes familiar features like valleys and mountains and craters sometimes will be conciderate give the long time frames or space travel.\n\nthe national (nasa) has one in particular compelling idea for around 170 degrees the sistemsolar have a 9 planets and the only one we they live there the name is earth this is only one planet have water,life,oxigen,air,nitrgeno,oxido this is thinks what we really nedd in real life this planet have animals,birds and persons too", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System if offered to students can help them choose another career path for college. But the argument is if FACS is valuable to students. Now, it all depends on the student. If they grew up around coding and that kind of technology, they would be interested. In today's society, we have so many options for a career path. It would he hard to convince a lot of students to do FACS.\n\nThe biggest group that would be easy to persuade are the math and science kids. Someone who is going to major in business of social studies might need a little bit more convincing. High schools should insitute FACS as a class. High school kids have a lot of personality and students can be more observant of people in the future. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human\n\ninstuctor.\"\n\nThe last example is the drama coach teaching his students to express emotions. When we go somewhere or a place we've never been before, we adjust to the enviroment. We act differently around our friends than we do around our family. Our facial expressions change as well. When we go somewhere we like to be at, we are general happy. 'Whoever thought that making faces could reveal so much science of emotions.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood memoir created author greatful family done I know throughout memoir would always say much appreciated parents made house Cuban home I also know mood memoir author greatful said liked neighborhood many different cultures Spanish Italian The author also said I never forget parents turn simple house home That I think mood memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear senator of Florida,\n\nIn my opinion of the Electoral College, I think we should keep it. Many people would most likely say I am wrong to think that way or I am just a kid and I have no idea what I am discussing, but I really think we should even though it has some flaws, here is my three reasons why.\n\nFirst, it was established by our founding fathers. The ones who fought in battle against Britan. They sacerficed their lives to get us where we are today. Its not just a law, its what connects us to our ancestors and its what makes us unique from most nations voting systems today and back then.\n\nSecond, Though most will complain that we are not actually voting for president, but that we are putting our time and effort into voting for a slate of electors who then vote for president. Even though there is no rule against them not voting for the president of your choosing, most of them will vote for him since they are on his team and have pleged themselves to him. So really there is a very high chance of them voting for the president you want. I say they have done a very good job for such a stressing carrier.\n\nThird, It has been going good so far. There are'nt wars taking place outside our homes like in some countries. Our Republican and Democratic parties are gracious in victory or humble in defeat. Yes there are some flaws in the system but thats just human nature. None of us are perfect and we never will be. We will make mistakes and we just got to live with them because there going to happen whether we like it or not.\n\nThis is my three major reasons why I think we should keep the Electoral College. I hope you found them intresting and will take the words to heart. Please dont tred on the fact that I am just a teen, but that there is a teen out there that actually cares about our nations future and government.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The importance author ended story like show readers importance plant It seems author native country doesnt lot around new place comfort The author able find hibiscus place thought wouldnt able gives strength anything It possible whatever challenge author trying get fact support plant gives achievement confidence complete task", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When ever went library found book offensive complain try get certain book shelf Have ever read book half way questioned reading Why would read book know re going like If someone right authority take books shelf bothers I exact right I thought everyone treated equal rights When ever read I always read back book whats called summary story I see I m going like If I know book going offend magazine even movie likely I m going even bother giving attention Obviously author doesnt like censorship wouldnt arguing It s obviously something bothers everyone intitiled beliefs disbeliefs I respect people stand find hardest ways hard prediciments I say I always go libraries read books I m reader But tell I ever go library found book shelf offends probably going offend someone else So would even try bother getting away offensive people Everyone intitled opinion But think s going offend someone praticular s probably going bother someone else I m saying everyone alike people believe things people believe People hav agreements disagreements I agree right You would amazed amount different things people get offended I tons experiences movies books music magazines offended But I didnt let pull anything For example I stopped watching movie I stopped reading book bothered You ca nt wear emotions shoulders stand rights tell people believe ever tell anyone ca nt believe opinions If certain things offend let bother stop move something else Like I said I alot experiences offensive things I read watched Like awhile back I watched movie black man locked prison killed prison accused something nt It time era also black Thats kind stuff really upsets Because We look different see things different But bodies function breathe air I always gone saying CAPSt ever judge book s cover read So whatever people think I believe one thing s let people believe things want believe ever tell someone think act feel I agree Katherine Paterson", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Computers More people using They used talk lesieure many things But computers good thing Computers good thing around Besides practically unlimited information stay touch family using You use word make documents powerpoint presentations organize ideas Also use excel manage finances Windows movie maker allow contruct movies ifl camera Besides obvious helpful features play computer games watch mores listen music computer Like anything computers downsides Some small big computers expensive You ca nt see s really talking computer Also many people important information computer Peoples computers infected information stolen leaving people helpless Bugs also seriously damage computer rendering imposible use Many people smeared internet well Hate sites encourage terrorism racial violence drug use web You careful go using internet Also sometimes computers take peoples lives People spend much time facebook enough time reading keepng touch family Computers great things Between great features allowing informed time programs great managing buisness s wonder almost every household one Many people nt like computers They say cons outweigh pros I disagree Yes cons annoying sometimes serious But smart enough stay away install antivirus software never give away information unamed surce pros outweigh cons So overall smart enough computer fun convienent edition life allowing ever imagined", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The FACS (Facial Action Coding System) is a computer software that can analyze emotions by processing muscle movements. Dr. Paul Eckman, the software's creator, has grouped facial muscle movements into six basic emotions. This software can also recognize mixed emotions, and can be used for a variety of purposes from video games to classrooms. Although we, as humans, are able to analyze facial expressions, this type of software might be able to complete the same task in a more efficient manner. Using this technology in a classroom setting to understand students' emotional expressions can be beneficial in that it will help to quickly identify students who are struggling.\n\nMany students feel shy in the classroom. They might hesitate to raise their hand and ask a question. Specifically, if the student is a part of a large class and does not feel comfortable asking questions in front of others who might make fun of him or her, the student might avoid asking the question all together. These kinds of students can be benefitted from having software similar to FACS. If the FACS software can help identify a student who is struggling to understand a concept, it will cause minimal fuss and feelings of embarrasment for the student.\n\nAnother benefit of using software like FACS in a classroom setting is speed and efficiency. To elaborate, the FACS software might help to modify the curriculum faster than a traditional teacher. It can also help the teacher to understand which students require further help and explanation. The teacher can then prepare additional work for the students to practice with, or the teacher can set aside a special time to help out the students who are struggling. If the FACS software notices that a large portion of the students in the class are feeling confused or overwhelmed, it can help the teacher realize this faster so that he or she can explain the topic further.\n\nFACS will help to progress the learning of students. It may take some time for students to get used to having a computer program in the room, but it wil be beneficial in the long run. Technology will be very apparent in the future and students need to adjust to changes relating to technology. In this day and age, technology is everywhere. Another concern may be related to teachers. Teachers will still be fully emplyed; FACS will just be a supplement to help the teachers. This will help increase efficiency and help students learn valuable skills.\n\nAlthough some may believe that having softwares similar to FACS in a classroom will be detrimental to the learning of students, the benefits that can be derived from FACS greatly outweighs any detriments. FACS can help improve classrooms in a multitude of ways. Namely, having emotion recognition softwares can help to eliminate feelings of embarrasment in the class room. Also, this will help teachers and increase efficiency. It can help teachers quickly determine which students need help and how to modify the lesson. It will also help students and teachers alike to learn valuable skills and get used to the larger role technology is beginning to play in our lives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "They compair story statement eachother story give thing test even taking test give cause taking", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine having a Facial Coding System computers that identify's yours or your classmates emotions. How would you feel about having this system in your classroom? Would it be weird? Would it be fun and intersting?\n\nIn my opinion it sounds like a pretty cool idea, but to have it in a classroom and know your classmates emotions sounds pretty wierd. Becaue I wouldn't like for my classmates to know what im feeling or my emotions at that time, that sounds pretty personal to me and I think thats giving to much information to your classmates. I mean I'm not saying its a bad thing for your classmates to know your emotions, but I honestly wouldnt like it.\n\nNot only do I think its some what personal but it do sound pretty intersting at the same time. Like I think its cool that the teacher would know when you start feeling that the class is boring and the teacher can do somethung different and make it fun or change the way that he's teaching and do something else. Like that sounds pretty awesome, but other hen that I wouldn't like havving this type of system in my classroom.\n\nHonestly having this system in my classroom its like a 50/50 percent because it sounds cool and everything, but at the sametime I don't like it because I wouldn't want my classmates knowing what I'm at that in the class because I don't people knowing my business only the people I truly trust. Thats another thing you might not talk to all the people in your classrooms and might not know them or trust them like that. For example, one day you could be sad and all your classmates are going to know and they might be asking you whats wrond and what if you don't want to talk about it.\n\nAll in all, I'm in a 50/50 chance it sounds fun and all that, but at the same time I dont want them knowing my business.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I bored I bored I know would pay iof I flit tookheavers In I hoven I went bathroom eat lunch plaed sellfon I sleped soller I", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Young people of this generation just sit on the couch and wach t.v or on their phones all day, not one of them want to explore because they're scared. Well i say\" live for the day!\" Only because you don't know whats gonna happen tomarrow.\n\nJoin the \"Seagoing Cowboys\", you can travel to Europe China and more, plus for some kids you can be drafted in the military service(thats a good way to start something after high school).If you still think it's not fun you get to play games like volleyball or tennis fencing and all on the boat.If you like animals then you can take care of the cattel or horses.\n\nA boy named Luke joined and he loved it he had fun and he saw China,Euope,andCrete.Luke stated that he was grateful for the opportunity, and it made him aware of other people in other countries needs, so his family became host for international student and exchange visitors for many years.\n\nSo come join to be a \"Seagoing Cowboy\" it's\n\nbe a once in a life time experiance that can change your life for the good (it changed Luke's life).", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I would tell them that how could an alien do that if they have never seen a human. I would explain to them that its kind of hard to turn a rock into that, that is why i would think its natural. But since the rock looks like that it would attract attention to mars and it would make people want to pay and learn more about it. I would also say that thr face on mars has been in a few films,books,magazines,and radio tallk shows because when people found out about it it was a top/ very popular thing.\n\nBut things would be more truthful or realistic if there was some type of civilization,war,or history about people living there, like in the 700 B.C earlier and later than that. People that would believe in the aliens would want more info or proof. Talking to my scientist co-worker they want to keep going taking better picks so it looks better and so they see if there is any alien marks. But it is very hard for them to search and look for things like Cydonia for example. Its also very hard for them to take pictures of it when its winter because of the clouds and dust.\n\nBut in 2001 each images spans where 1.56 compared to 43 meters per pixels in the best 1976 viking photo. You can discern things in a digital image three times bigger than the pixel size,so if there where any objects on the ground like houses,shacks,planes,water,aircraft, or anything else you would of been able to see it. But in a way the aliens could of been tiring to send a messages to earth to let them know it was life there. But if they continue with the pixels, and to make bettter pixels they would be able to see even more every time.\n\nThere are a ton of things on earth that look like something but its not its just natural (it just happen). So something like that could of happened on mars, but it would be kind of strange for something to happen like that to happen on a planet where the is ''no life'. But everyone has there own opinion on what they think but we can only leave it up to the scientist to figure it out a regular person mostly likely can't only the pros. Us scientist will be able to figure it out today,tommorow,next month,or even years from now but hopefully one day we will find out. In my opinion I think we will with the technology we have and the things that will still be invented and be released one day.\n\nSo there is no way to really prove if aliens are real or fake. They are most likely fake, because they haven't tried to reach earth in any way. But if they did they would come in some type of aircraft. The aliens whole entire world would be shock and scared. No one would know what to do,because no one would even think something like that would happen in this current generation. But it could happen whenever most likely when its least expected.\n\nBut in some part of the world some, or alot of people are preparing for this are always waiting for this to happen. People should always be prepared for anything rain,sleet,snow,tornado, or anything evrything. But if the aliens never knew about life in earth, and they decided to send aircraft to like we did if they saw a rock with a alien looking thing on it they would react like we did. They would keep sending taking more pictures, however they would look at it they would get curious and try to make a trip to earth not knowing that there is actual life there.\n\nBut if earth did the same thing it would be a problem its taking a huge risk. When they would arrive and look around if they saw aliens they would panic. The aliens would be stronger then them most likely they probably wouldn't be making a trip to home. The aliens would some what react like a dinosaur if the NASA people didn't move (but they would) they would't get attack. But if they did move they would,so tiring to have NASA to go to mars is very risky for NASA and the astronauts. So they could make a better attempt by sending a drone and going around the whole planet,but the drone cant do everything that a human can. So if there is a cave or a door only a human would be able to search it the correct way, plus the drone could easily brake down or fail.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Upon high school graduation, students face the dilemma of continuing their studies at university or taking a job. While some believe it is better to pursue higher education, I agree with the idea that enrolling at a university leads to more success in their careers.\nSome may argue that working after high school helps those graduates develop an independent life and gives them an insight into their future careers. First, they can learn to live independently by managing their own income and spending. In Vietnam, students taking jobs after high school and living away from their parents are more self-reliant adults who can cover the compounding costs of accommodation, transport and food without asking their parents for a monthly spending allowance. Second, they are given the opportunity and time to observe how other people work in their workplaces. As a result, they may acquire a better understanding of their chosen profession and thus make a rational decision about their future, whether it is better to go back to university or to run a business. \nHowever, I believe it is more beneficial for students to continue their studies. One benefit is qualifications are an essential prerequisite for employment in certain professions. It is considered illegal to practice medicine without medical degrees or give legal advice without law degrees in most countries in the world. Another benefit is people with post-secondary education and years of experience in an industry have a higher chance of rising to the top and becoming leaders or managers of their companies. This is because the diplomas or degrees in addition to work experience they possess can convince others that they the necessary skills to regulate the operation of a company’s department. \nIn conclusion, while the option to work after school seems attractive for several reasons, I believe that pursuing a degree is more likely to lead to an envious career.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Winter Hibiscus Minfong Ho author concludes story paragraph Saeng vowing take test spring Minfong used paragraph means never give even fail first time For example Saeng failed drivers test buying Hibiscus taking deeper things realized shouldnt give", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that Facial Action Coding System could help us humans in the future.A claim I have for my reason that I think it woukd help is that the software can identify certain emotions we can't.It would also be use full to teachers because they could figure out or try to help a students that's feeling down or depressed.\n\nWithout the technology teachers wouldn't even know what is going on and it could affect the students work and the rest of their life.It even says in paragraph 6 that the machine could \"Paint facial muscles precicsly enough to convey specific emotions\".That could help with lessons taught by teachers to make the learning enviorment better for the kids.They would be willing to try to learn more and pay better attention to the lseeon if they can interact.The schools would see a great improvement in test scores and all around.It could also help the teachers just not with helping the kids but themselves as well.If the kids are doing well they would proabaly get in increase and salary.This would be good for children all over the world and would be a great value to kids.That is why I think kids everywhere should get a device.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Thses driverless cars shouldn't be develop, Because they are driverless and never know what might happen. It is control by computer so something can go wrong and hurt the person that is in the car. Accident happen once in a while but driverless cars isn't really safe for humananity for this generation. Maybe in the future when we gain more tecnology, then we can try to use the driverless cars. Many companies could try to develop the compter driver cars but they should test the cars untill it is 100% sure that the cars are safe for people to ride.\n\nOne good thing about the driverless car is that the person who is riding the car can drive too.When there is so issue with the car and the driver could take over the wheel and start driving, which will make the person riding safer.Sensor are also good, but can the computer really take over the car and keep the passenger safe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the issue of whether advertisements are becoming more popular nowadays has been raising a lot of debates. Some might say that the activity of introducing products to the public is a positive development because it brings a lot of benefit to people's lives. On the contrary, others insist on the opinion that it is a negative trend caused by annoyance and the quality of the brand are usually overrated. Viewing from a general perspective, I personally agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, the growth of advertising is supposed to be an advantage for improving inhabitants’ life. Firstly, the customers can open their knowledge about items which they want to buy through classified ads or commercial breaks and they have more choice to make about their beloved products. For example, a human who wants to buy a television can consult the digital information and the advantage of this item through video or ads in the social media or show adverts and make their decision what is suitable for them. Secondly, advertising generates a diversity of employment which helps workers have the income to pay their living costs. For instance, it provides occupations for artist, painter, editor, content or ideas for advertisements which bring money to workers to improve their life. Finally, the development of advertising contributed to people's enhancement of comfort and diversity in shopping and standard living by income from working. \r\n\r\non the other hand, some of the population think that it is a negative influence because advertisements sometimes are annoying when they appear all over the place with a high density from street to social media, besides the quality of the goods is often overrated which makes customers disappointed. However, with regular appearances on the internet, advertising helps consumers update information about the goods better.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, promotion of items to the public has some drawbacks such as wasting of money or making customers feel bothered but it is a good trend for the development by supplying a benefit to inform products and open the job opportunities for people so that advertisement is a positive.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wondered why the citizens of a country have the opportunity to voice their opinion in which who they feel should be president. Well i found some information in source 1 that talks about electoral college. Electoral college is not a place but its a process that was found in the constitution as a compromise between election of president by the votes in congress and election oof the president by a popular votes of qualified citizens of the country. I think that they shouldn't change to popular vote in the United States because the electoral college is more fair and plus they don't know the outcome of the election of the popular votes of the prsident of the United States.\n\nI support the electoral college because it allows you to voice your opinions in which who you feel should been president. It's also makes you feel that once you voted that your opinion matters. In source 1 they talk about when the \"Presidential election is held every four years on the Tuesday afterthe first Monday in November.\" also you help choose youir state's electors when you vote for President because when you vote for yor candidate you are actually voting for you candidate's electors.  In source 2 they explain it in more details. \"Under the electoral college system, voters votes not for thre president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president.\" They mean that don't matter if you vote for \"John Kerry\" and he's a Democratic and the number of whoever pledge to Kerry would be added on to his votes. thats why i like the electoral college.\n\nBut one the other hand, there saying that they might change it to the election of the popular votes of the president of the United States. I think they should keep using the electoral college because it actually have better benefits or outcomes because you know who you voted for and from what they told you, you believe they can make it happen. There's some states that have a \"winner-take-all\" system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate.\n\nBut the bad side about the electoral college is that what happens if thr president you like is a republican but you like the democratic senator? Well i dont know what your going to do then because going to be a problem.\n\nElectoral college is not a place but its a process that was found in the constitution as a compromise between election of president by the votes in congress and election oof the president by a popular votes of qualified citizens of the country. I think that they shouldn't change to popular vote in the United States because the electoral college is more fair and plus they dont know the outcome of the election of the popular votes of the prsident of the United States.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Should libraries censor reading material s students school That yes quistion reading good people age s topic suitable certain age group Yes I think censor reading material But exstent need books kids certain age groups like sections young kids teens adults child wants read graphic material must pramission parent reason say things get published authord ment read certain people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Thousands of axious web surfers were waiting when the first image appeared on a JPL websit revealing...a natural landform\". Those people must've been really upset upon hearing this news. They had high hopes for The Face to be a creation of alien life on mars. But due to the fact that it's just a butte/mesa, an illusion, and just a piece of rock all together, those people need to accept the truth: Alien's didn't make The Face.\n\nFirst of all, the Face is just an illusion, or a trick playing with your eyes. An example would be that when NASA unveiled the image, the caption said as quoted, \"...formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose and mouth...\" This example shows that because of the perfect shadow casting, the rock formation on mars is just an illusion that's messing with your mind.\n\nMy second reason as to why The Face isn't a sign of alien life is that is resembles a butte or a mesa, which are landforms common around the American West. An example of this would be that it reminds Garvin of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. This example shows that since it may remind people of other landforms that we have on Earth, and that we even have landforms similar to The Face at all, it must be and is a natural landform.\n\nMy third and final reason is that The Face is just a pile of Mars rocks. For example, when a foucused picture of this landform went viral, it was clear that it was just a pile of rocks, rather than the original picture, which was 10 times less foucused then the latest one. Knowing this, it is clear that aliens did NOT in fact, create The Face.\n\nSome people might say that aliens mightve moved the rocks there themselves. This wouldn't be the case, considering that there are no clear signs of life on mars currently. No aliens means no alien made faces on mars. It's purely logical that The FAce is just an illusion and a pile of rocks and nothing more.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Undoubtedly, these days, people have to find a way to better weather conditions. It is often argued that people are able to adapt themselves to climate alterations, but it lasts for thousand years and this is while climate change for people is extremely more comfortable than adapting themselves to this situation, which is unimaginable difficult and time-consuming. I fully agree with this fact that it is better for people to change climate and not to try to reconcile themselves with this situation. In turn, this essay will discuss ways to alter climate by people.\n On the one hand, the more people cultivate trees, the more the weather will be cleaned. That is to say that trees are unthinkably capable to absorb the CO2 (carbon dioxide), which in high concentrations can damage human body cells and eventually leads to cell death, and this is while that trees can absorb carbon dioxide and easily convert it to oxygen, which is incredibly useful for everything in the world. For instance, in forest countries, where the number of trees are a lot, several kinds of cancer such as breast, brain, chest and stem cell cancers are extremely rare. In my opinion, enhancement of cultivated trees can secure the survival of planet Earth. To sum up, tree cultivation can help people to change the climate, significantly. \n On the other hand, the more people use fossil fuels, the higher increased weather temperature will happen. That is to say that consumption of fossil fuels is able to increase the atmospheric pollutants as well as the weather temperature causing several damages of environment such as increased melting icebergs and fires. For example, in the recent decade, which the weather temperature of the world became warmer by up to 2 oC, the rate of fires over the world increased by up to 12%. I believe that consumption of fossil fuels must be reduced by humans to decreased atmospheric pollutants happen. To conclude, people have to decrease the consumption of fossil fuels, significantly. Alongside these contents, in some situations, people can adapt themselves with difficult environmental conditions.\n Some people are of the opinion that modification of climate change is possible. In this way, they declare that enhancement of cultivated trees and reduction of used fossil fuels can help people to propel the climate changes to desired side. I am sure that several different ways are accessible to help people to change the climate.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hi My name I think computers bad I think yes people play computer much also learn lot things Another reason kids like bullys stop bulling spend time computer stay away stress You also talk friends even video chat Computers teach lot For example computer breaks virus figure problem You also learn read news missing For example also ask questions nt understand people would answer question In moder afoot kids teens even adult computers look things nt understand For example I read along book read word I nt know read around I still nt I would go find words mean Bullys people like street people computers stay computer play games They play hitting games shooting games even board games You even watch fights want What ever want got This good thing one get everyone happy Bullys also go computer relax stay away people hate The computers make relax nt around people tell computer ever want Kids teens adult nt leave house justto talk friend two I said computers hace microcam comminicate others For example dad trying get computer microcam incontact mom brother sister I He get one nt live us He leave go back Another example would one friends move far far away talk microcam even send message back forth So I think computers bad idea bad things I say learn stay good communicate", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood memoir generally happy Narciso talks wonderful home growing Narciso speaks wonderful music food talks family s happiness house grew became home The mood happy makes feel love felt living parents home New Jersey To conclude mood happiness proudness fondness It brings back memory s anyone s first home love", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you love  drive? Well some poeple do and they just don't like to drive every day to work.\n\nfirst thing if people don't want drive they could just ride bike to work that help them with exerics. Also they don't know that the gas is ever high and they can't affored it and that why they walk or ride the bike.\n\nAnother reason is that 27 people had there can impounded or on side of the road becuase  they ran out of gas. when you drive and you see your gas meter and it on the E and your car just stop and you about 2 miles form the gas stion and you have a gas can in the back but you don't want to walk and you know you need that gas so that you can get home you think,think,think and you said i'm walk and you get out the car get the gas can and go. and people don't like drive they can just ride the train to work or the bus becuase you don't really have to put gas in your can you just ride and get drop off were you work.\n\nNext thing i should think that they should make sidewalk for people that want to walk to school,home,work,or freinds house. Well if they family want to go on a trip to see there grandma then they can take there car and go see her. And what ever car you got please look for the limit becuase some car drink gas and then you have to fill it back up again. If it was just less driveing they approach stores,and other thing that they can walk to. If you need a ride home you can call the tax and they will take you home and you really don't have to drive or put gas in the car.\n\nI think people should stop drive becuase you really don't need to drive every day about 4,000 people don't have there license and the drive. if you drive and it cold you should trun a on the heat to low becuase heat will messup your emission. and that why i should think that people should walk stead of drive all the time.\n\nWe all the people should just say that Monday,Tuesday,Wensday we all should drive to school,work or where ever and Thursday,Friday,Saturday they should walk to work or take the bus. And that why the people should drive less. what you think?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays,air pollution is one of the major problems in the world.Some people believe that raising the price of gas for automobiles can solve this problem.I totally disagree with this view,since expensive gasolines can affect on individuals who rely on autos for work and other stuff.Needless to say that there are other ways to resolve this ecological concerns.\r\n\r\nTo begin with,people with low-income can be unfairly impacted by the expensive worth of autos. Individuals use cars in their daily life for many reasons.Cars are used to get to work,to travel and so on.It means that they spend a plenty of gasoline.In this case,raised price of fuel can take a bunch of money from them.For instance,to a person who earns 30 pounds for month It is too prohibited to spend casf for fuels.Because they save some money for food,clothes and other essentials.Finally,it is the wrong way to resolve the air quality concern.\r\n\r\n Secondly,we have various ways to deal with this trouble. There are many factors that bad affect air quality.For example,burning of garbage waste and cutting down the trees.As I see it,government should take actions on these things rather than increasing the price of fuels.Not only government,every human being can take action.For insttance,if we less burn the rubbish or plant some plants or even trees, it is our best to a better air quality.\r\n\r\nTo sum up,to my ming,instead of raising the payment of petrol,government should focus on more enormous factors.Not only government,It is our responsibility to keep our nature safe and clear.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After years and years of technology advancements scientists have developed a computer that reads human emotions. This computer uses muscles in a human face to tell the persons emotions. But will this actually help further science on the human body, or are there possible negatives to this?\n\nFirst of all is how does the machine work? The machine works through the muscles in a humans head; \"all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles\" (Alto 3).\n\nBy doing this the computer can classify the basic emotions; \"classified six basic emotions-happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness\" (Alto 3). Right now it maybe only able to identify these emotions, but since the technology is already here it could become a lot more advanced with in the next decade. As said in the article these computers can be used to improve school work, video games, video sugeries,and even in advertisments. But are these the best ways to go with this technology.\n\nThere is no doubt that this technology could be vital in some places, but is it needed everywhere? In doctor offices this could be a great tool to use, maybe to even help diagnose depression, and surgery rooms it can also used to identify even more vitals then surgens can now. On the otherhand when it comes down to schools, and advertisments it's not going to be needed. Companys already have enough ways to manipulate humans with advertisments why should the people give them another way to. The main focus though is on schools which a student doesn't need to know exactly how someone is feeling, for the most part a human can tell how someone is feeling; \"In fact, we humans perform this same impressive 'calculation' every day. For instance, you can probaly tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face\" (Alto 5). At school someone can also exploit someone if they knew exactly how they felt.\n\nSome still may argue that these computers will be schools. They may bring up the argument of how a computer at school can recognize your emotions \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is beoming confused or bored\" (Alto 6). The thing is most work done from junior high and up isn't fun work, so it will be hard to change things to make it more interesting, and if a student is confused they already have a teacher to assist them in what they are confused about. Now in something like elementry school it can be useful to help kids stay on track. This is possibly where people who agree and disagree on having these computers in school could find common ground.\n\nOverall these computers can be very productive, and useful in some places. School from junior high and up is not one of those places. At this point it would be a waste of money.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars may seem like a good idea, if it works. But what are the negatives, sure being able to tell the car where you want it to go and then just being able to sit back and relax the whole time would be nice. But on the other hand would it really? Driverless cars mean that we rely solely on technology to keep us safe and get us to where we need to be and lets face it, technology rarley works perfectly. I don't think that driverless cars are practicle because of safety hazards, money concerns, and it goes against our cultural norms.\n\nSafety is the main concern when it comes to driving, I mean most of our laws concerning driving is about keeping the driver and possible passengers and pedestrians safe. But we all know that there are always going to be people who brake those laws and cause a safety hazard for everyone else on the roads. But is a driverless car really the answer? I dont think so, when does technology ever run perfectly all the time. The article states \"...traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. As a result, in most states it is illegal to even test computer driven cars.\". So relying on technology to safetly get us where we need to be in a timley manner and in one piece is just unrealistic. How often do GPS systems take you to the wrong location, or how often do the brakes on cars go out? Too often to be putting our lives in the hands of these technological systems.\n\nMoney is another big concern, because even if we were able to fix all the little bugs in the manufacturing aspect of it, how much would these driverless cars cost? Could they be put into a reasonable price range for the average Americans? Whats the point in even imagining them up if the average American could never actually posses one? So though in the begining it may seem to open up many job oppertunities for the american people as a whole, in the end if they have to close down factories or out-source the jobs then what's the real gain? Because how many American dealerships actually manufacture their products in America? Few to none.\n\nAnd lastley our cultural norms, in American when someone turns 16 they get their license, now though this might not be the same for everyone, for the majority it is. So what happens when suddenly thats no longer possible because there are no more drivers needed? Suddenly a huge mile stone is taken out. Its a right of passage, something to signify the freedom they are able to have now that they are growing up?\n\nSo in conclusion, driverless cars, though really cool in the bigger picture, are probably going to be more work then they will really be worth. I dont think in a practicle stand point that they should become something we see in our day-to-day lives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", I disagree that driverless cars should happen. I feel that there will be plenty of accidents because the has malfuntioning issues and the car doesn't alert you when you need to take control of the car. Another issue is that the can exceed the 25 mph limit while it is malfuntioning and put other drivers and pedestrians at risk.\n\nWhen the car starts malfuntioning the everything inside and out will basically shut down and cause multiple crashes and injuries. Yes, safety is a big concern but the car is a machine and can shut down at any moment. In example, if you're driving down the highway and your smart-car shuts off, you're putting may peoples lives at risk.If there is an accident who is at fault, the driver or the manufacturer? Both the driver and the manufacturer is at fault, because the driver was exceeding the safety point and the manufacturer because his car couldnt tell the driver to slow down.\n\nThe car has a 25 mph limit but what if the car exceeds that limit? The car could ask for the human to start driving, but the human could fall asleep and lose control. So, if the car malfuntions during a long drive then you will put everyone's lives in danger. Even exceeding the limit as a computer is screaming out that someone will end up in the hospital or dead. You are putting your lives at risk for a computer system.\n\nIn conclusion, I personaally feel the driverless cars should not be made. There are many risks that you are taking without a human behind the wheel. Yes there are humans that cause accidents and injure others while on the roads but when you let a computer take over many things can go wrong.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are you against of this technology to read people's mind? I am against it because there are people out there that suffer and want to get over their life. If that technology read their mind and the world knows it they will suffer more and never get over it. Also, there are many good reasons to agree it and there are many reasons that I disagree. The technology might ruin every person's life.\n\nIn addition, I disagree with this technology because in the text, third paragraph says in order to read the expressions your face bone has to be different, but there are a lot of emotions that people don't show, you might be happy or sad and your face still the same. I don't think that tecnology can comprehend people's emotion and people's mind. Basically, the third paragraph says that emotion are base on your bones but I notice when I am sad, happy, disgust or mind blank my face is the same: a face that's blank minded. Most people can't read my mind and I don't think the technology can either.\n\nAnother reason that I don't agree with technology reads mind is because there are people who don't want people to know what's in them. For example, if there's a girl is unhappy and in order to make her friends to be happy she do everything and maybe no one will notice and her friends will be glad for her. If the technology reads her minds and let her knows about it, their friendship might be in chaos and ends.\n\nAlso, why I am disagree with it because I remeber one time my teacher told me that science is not always 100%. I don't think this technology is accurate because I notice when one of my friend is sad I can tell by the way she talks but not her expressions. In the text says that not only your facial muscles knows your emotion but also produce them, but what if your bone is twisted and have an unhappy seems face but you are actually happy. The article says that facial muscles produce emotion, I disagree with it because when I feel sad or blank most of the time my facial bones still the same.\n\nIn conclusion, this technology shouldn't invented because it might not be accurate and says false about people expresson. This technology can only read expression only by bone but not voice or heart so I don't think it's accurate. That's why we shouldn't use this technology because science is not always 100% correct. We should get to know the person's mind better instead of use technology to know theirs. If you don't know what's in them then, that means relationship is not close and it's better to learn their minds and know each other better.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author s mood wondering near end changed happiness I thought mood wondering first wondering home Then changed happiness author knew home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea of driverless cars sounds very unsafe/ unnessasary. We don't need to be spending more money funding this. Lets start with saying are people really that lazy to not want to drive themselves? We need to be able to have complete control of our vehicle at all times! Anything could happen when putting your trust in a car. The car could completely malfunction and lose all control and cause a huge crash and could really hurt someone. Imagine your car losing control and wrecks into someone and kills them! You would be charged with murder because you didn't have all control. Cars are expensive enough just imagine how much these cars would be! We are too busy spending all our money on stupid ideas like this and we have much bigger problems!\n\nThere is some good in these cars like not wasting as much money on gas or if you aren't that good of a driver they do most of the driving. You wouldn't have to worry about drinking and driving home. This also would also help with texting and driving you wouldn't have to worry about watching the road and your phone.\n\nBut just because there are a few perks to a driverless car doesn't make it any safer! I completely disagree with driverless cars, i know they will cause many accidents and lead to many injuries or even deaths that could have been saved due to lack of control of the vehicle.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some say that sports can teach you the values of life, especially at school and in addition, team sports can help you work in coordination and will assist children to learn about sharing in life. I completely agree with this statement and I will explore this topic with suitable examples.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, even though sports can teach us the lesson which books couldn't do, cooperation can be coached particularly by team sports and not individual sports. For example, badminton singles players, although they are capable of winning medals and prizes, they cannot be the same player when it comes to double's games. This is because they are not trained to play together or be dependent on other players. While this may contribute to one's self-confidence and hard work, they won't be able to enjoy other person's success or in other words, share happiness like doubles players do.\r\n\r\nMoreover, this is the reason many people believe that playing team sports is tough and also it is essential to be taught at school. To clarify, in team sports like football, if one player plays selfishly without passing the ball and scoring goals, he might be successful, but it is not enough to make a team win. One must learn to contribute to the team by even sacrificing his goal and passing it to their teammate to be a part of a successful team. This will make him a terrific person in life and an outstanding team player too.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while there are some advantages to learning individual sports, it is most important for children to learn team sports to know the importance of togetherness and I personally think it is the best way to educate them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nFor years, the presidential election has been running with an Electoral College, one in which the public does not vote for their choice canidate directly, but instead for a slate of electors to have a final deciding vote. Although the system could have worked like a breeze when first originated-- a point to be reckoned with, since I do not see how the system ever correctly displayed the citizens of America-- the Electoral College method has proven itself to be un-deomcratic, unfair, and an unjustly irrational system.\n\nSimply stated, the Electoral College does not allow an accurate representation of voter's beliefs, taking their votes and twisting, manipulating them into a deciding vote from electors. The popular vote can be seen as an input/output machine, the people's own votes going in the contraption, and once inside, the input is stretched and exagerated to output a \"neater\" electoral vote out of 538. While some argue that the Electoral College vote is usually rather close to the popular vote, it just isn't the same as when the Constution loosely states America as a  'for the people, by the people' nation.\n\nSeveral times throughout history, the Electoral college has swayed the presidential election in a completely different route than what the outcome of the popular vote would have been. The perfect example, constantly brought up in arguments against the Electoral college, is the 2000 election with main canidates of Republican George Bush and Democrat Al Gore. Through the popular vote, it is clearly seen that a majority of voters chose Al Gore to be their president. Through the process of the electoral college and manipulation of votes, though, the Presidental canidate ended with George Bush winning the election with a 271 electoral votes versus a 266 pointed toward Gore, thus creating an entirely different viewpoint of the people.\n\nThe idea of an Electoral College is also what has swung possible voters out of voting rooms, the voting method's 'winner takes all' outlook overriding. With the set up of the Electoral college, popular voters decievingly decide for a slate of electors instead of a President. For example, if a majority of Florida electors voted for Bush, the entirety of Florida's 29 votes are down for Bush, even though not all electors really did vote that way. Those citizens in states who do not fit with what large majority of voters believe are discouraged in voting for their own canidate knowning that, no matter what, it's almost certain their state will end up giving its votes to the canidate they oppose. This can lead voters to not voting at all, creating an even less accurate election while the country pushes citizens to vote, frowning down on them if they do not.\n\nBesides major points, there are many smaller faults wiithin the Electoral college. In example, there is always the possibility of a slate voting for a canidate that differs from the one they have pratically promised to vote for. The fate of our country is put into the hands of the 538 members of the electoral college, opposed to the vastly greater full population of American citizens. Also, with the 538 Electoral College members being an even number, although rare, it is more likely for there to be a tie than if the popular vote was used in deciding the presidential canidate.\n\nA pro Electoral college argument is that the citzens in swing states-- states that are likely to go either way in an election instead of an almost certian outcome-- are more likely to pay attention to ad campaigns knowing that their state is most likely what will decide the winner of the election. Advocates say that they are, on average, most likely to be the most thoughtful voters, and that the most thoughtful voters should be the ones to decide our nations outcome. This outlook is littered with flaws, first starting off with the fact that swing states get more media coverage than the rest of the nation. These voters are valued more than others and are given more information to have an informed vote. Besides the fact that it is proposterous to value the vote of one citizen over another, this isn't fair to members of other states who recieve virtually no coverage due to canidates feeling like the state's vote has been secured since day one. The nation as a whole should recieve all the facts together with equal coverage, so that each and every voter can become a thoughtful one, and not only those located in swing states.\n\nAll in all, the decision to abolish the Electoral College is a backed up one, the facts and details there to support, meanwhile advocates for the practically ancient method don't have many solid counters to prove their point.\n\nI hope you take this letter and it's claims into consideration.\n\nThank you for your time,\n\nFloridian citizen PROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are few people who can can imagine living a full life in this generation without thewse glorified metal boxes with wheels attached to them; even fewer set living a life similar to that as a goal. The advantages of limiting the amount of cars being used are suprisingly unique due to the dwindling amount of disadvanteges there are. Some of these advantages include reduction in greeenhouse gas emissions and that there will be a reduction in smog. It is always nice to see humanity band together, willingly or forcefully, to work for a common good.\n\nLet us begin with the most pressing issue: preserving the environment. Studies have shown that nearly \"12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe...and up to 50 percent in some car intensive areas in the United States.\" come from passenger cars (Rosenthal 1, 5). Reducing these greenhouse gases, which pose a threat to the Earth's atmosphere, would be an improvement, although slow, still an improvement nonetheless. While this would not be the immmediately noticable of changes, making an effort to cleanse our cities of pollution would be.\n\nMoving on, some places have taken this matter into their own hands, matters that some would describe as extreme. Paris, France is one of these examples, \"enforcing a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city...motorists...ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine...\" (Duffer, 10-11).It is pleasant to see a city taking this matter into their own hands. This ban, though, did spark an uproar on the Internet, but it did die down. Many approaches to cleansing city-air have been drastic, but others such as in Columbia, had some sort of event where \"the goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog.\" (Selsky, 21). This did allow a public freedom, despite there still being a fine in place. The remarkable fact of this is that even though cars are being banned, a large portion of the targeted population actuallly do not mind the change, even \"'the rain hasn't stopped people from participating'\"(Selsky, 23).\n\nSuprisingly enough, this car-ban revolution is still going on today. Many more people are starting to realize the benefits to the ban. Elisabeth Rosenthal, in her article\n\n\"The End of Car Culture\"\n\neven adds in that many \"sociologists believe...it will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment...\"(34). This simply furthers the ideal that humanity as a whole CAN see a chance to change, wants to desperately do so, and WILL do so...eventually.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everyone different views works literature wheather books magazines movies music If libraries removes stuff shelves would loosing business would loosing children would taking away reason shelves These libraries would loosing business people maybe like kind stuff The people running business decide take older pieces work offend younger people generation The stuff wrote sang played things harm people The things harm people show people younger generations life lived older days slaves This would play roll children use library also If literature taken children think things always way see If children grew see book hear song watch movie things olden days much changed never believe taught children As older still never interest learn types things never knew growing These things wrote teach people children things used used harm people When people take things harmful getting true meaning author mind wrote Libraries keep peices literature shelves teach young people world came older relatives lived came", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper people Is nt computers swell I mean nt one learn knowledge two play alot fun games last least talk friend Well I hope enjoy essay computer world Have ever diffuclty finding something libery Well forget libery cards go computer s On fin ever looking One time I project favorite rocker mom told check libery book I could nt find one So instead I jumped computer really jump way I went guess I found I needed know getting rocking project mean ther s alot learn computer like s going world around us even learn little world around us even learn little insects big plants Well s I got using knowledge Welcome back Well I m going tell games play computer The game I m going tell favorite game called left dead never played game probably like game sound really hard scary well m kidding hard first little scary still fun Another game I enjoy playing online game called PERSON game fun takes kill fun stuff For example I m lvl mage I take lvl I use high leveled spells anyways alot things computer Like kill zombie hared quest two cares hands fun Now last thing I m going tell talk friends well like I moved I could nt really hangout friends I got I talk see friends webcam Another good reason able use computer talk family members joined My uncle joined s going leaving soon I m wanting see I ll see webcam able chat Well reason good reason computer One use learn two hard care gaming three talk friends Thank nice day", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Team sports at school are believed to be the most optimal way to teach children to cooperate. Personally, I disagree with this notion. In this essay, I will explain my justification in detail.\r\n\r\nAdmittedly, team sports are incredibly effective when it comes to teaching youngters to cooperate with others. Through a competive environment, players can develop problem-solving skills, self-esteem and strategizing. For example, they can recognize the strengths and shortcomings of each teammate which can be used better to compete against their opponents, especially in sports which have more than 5 participants such as football, volleyball and basketball. In addition, team sports provide a working environment where players work together to achieve a common goal. This can be achieved through verbal communication, body languages and hand signals. In other words, regularly participating in team sports enables teenagers to develop their communication skills which are essential to cooperate effectively.\r\n\r\nHowever, it is important to acknowledge that cooperation skills can be cultivated by other activities beyond team sports. Firstly, communitive learning strategies, group project, community activities and even creative activities like theatre and music can also provide valuable opportunities for young people to develop their collaboration skills. In fact, these activities promote cooperation and ability to work effectively in a group setting. They encourage youngsters to understand different perspectives, value teamwork and appreciate the benefits of collective effort. Secondly, not only children may be inclined toward or have the opportunity to take part in team sports. Thus, it is crucial to create a range of activities and environments that cater to diverse interest and ability, ensuring that everyone has a chance to develop their cooperation skills.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while it is true that team sports can help children to develop their cooperation skills, I believe that this skill be developed through a variety of activities and environments . By providing a balanced approach that contains all activities, we can effectively nuture the value and skills in cooperating among adolescents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The moods created author memoir loving care family sacrafice warmth All moods demonstrated author describes interpretation family described everything parents done The passage states came selflessly many immigrants give children better life even though meant leaving families friends careers country loved parents sacrificed much cared loved children much willing give lives country leave behind everything order make Narciso s life better Their family provided warmth care everyone needed They truly learned real meaning family The author created loving mood memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The reason tht Luke joined the program was to help other people. Here are some reasons you or someone else might want to join. One reason you or someone you know might want to join the program is because it gives you chances to see things that you don't normally see in everyday\n\nlife. Things and places like, Greece, Europe, Italy, and China. There are many places that you can tour, like if you could have privledges that other people don't because they aren't in the program and don't get to travel over seas every month or so. When you do travel, it can be dangerous but very rarely. It is more fun than dangerous like I said, it is very rarely dngerous. There are many games and activities that you may want to join such as, table-tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and many others.\n\nIn the text I said, \"Besides helping people, I had the benefit of Europe and China. But seeing Acropolis in Greece was special.\" I had the opportunity of seeing new things and going to new places that he wasn't used to. You can have the same priviledge as me and you can see new things just as I did. I also said, \"I'm grateful for the opportunity.\" I got have so many experiences with new people, animals, and places, that I'd never thought about before. I worked two jobs before my friend invited me and I knew right away that I was given the opportunity of a life time.\n\nLastly, the people and animals that I'd helped made me feel good. I rember I said, \" It made me more aware of people of other contries and their needs.\" I had lead my family to host a number of international students and exchange visitors. My job on the boat was to check on all the animals every hour and report it back to the captain. That experience that I had with traveling and working with animals and people, helped me better understand people's needs and neccesities in their lives. Being in this program helped me understand people from other countries' needs, allowed me to visit many other places in the world, allowed me to have fun on the boat with the other cowboys, and allowed me to work with animals, but mostly have fun. That is why you or someone you know should join the program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Seagoing Cowboys is a wonderful program that helps countries that are left in ruins from wars.\n\nNations gathered to form the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration to take care of mules, young cows, and horses that are shipped over seas. Not only are you helping other countries if you join, but you also get to see marvelous places such as Italy, Crete, and China. The Seagoing Cowboys is a program where you can learn many character traits and a place where you help your world.\n\nWhen I signed up for UNRRA,\n\nI knew it was a once in a life time experience and that I just couldn't past that chance up.\n\nAfter I turned 18, I could be drafted in military service. So when my draft board learned that I was on a cattle-boat trip, they let me keep on doing that.\n\nWhen I was discharged, I had made nine trips-the most any other Seagoing Cowboy had done. In my time, the cattle-boat trips were an unbelieveable experience, and other than helping people, I got to tour many places.\n\nEven on board I had a jolly time.\n\nOn return trips, the cowboys and I played baseball, table-tennis, and volleyball in the empty animal holds.\n\nIf physical activity isn't your thing, you could have still have read, whittled, and played small games. The Seagoing Cowboys aren't just about exploring places and playing games though. The UNRRA opened up the world to me, as it made me more aware of people in other countries and their needs.\n\nMy awareness has stayed with me as I have lead my family to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years.\n\nYes, I do realize that joining UNRRA can be a risky thing. Even myself had gotten into an accident before, I'm even still happy to be alive.\n\nOne day I fell down a slippery ladder on my back, but then a tiny strip of metal kept me from flying into the dark and mysterious Atlantic. With that, I couldn't work for a few days because of my broken ribs. You might be scared to join because of your own safety, and I respect that. However, so many other positive things have came from my experience in the UNRRA to out number that one incident.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe you should join the Seagoing Cowboys for many reasons. Not only are you getting adventure into your life, but you're also helping others. I believe the UNRRA made me a better person, as it opened up a whole new point of view for me to the world, the world's people, and their needs. So next time someone metions the Seagoing Cowboys, get a little more interested. And when you go and sign up, tell the people Luke Bomberger sent you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A face on mars real or fake. The explaination for the human like face on mars is natural landform. It is natural landforming because in the artical it state the the human like face was fromed by shadow. \" the caption noted a \"huge rock formation . . . which resembles a human head . . . fromed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.'' In my conclusion the alleged face on mars is from natural landforming. THn on April 5, 1998 Mars Orbiter Camera got a picture better the the Viking did. then it turned out it was a natural landform so in the end aliens did not create it. \" And so on april 5, 1998, when\n\nMars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Micheal Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camara (MOC) team snapped a picture ten time sharper then the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing a natural landform. there was no alien monument after all.''", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator,\n\nI agree with Bob Dole about abolishing the Electoral College. The Electoral College is unfair to the voters. It's called the diaster factor for a reason. The American people should be able to vote for who they want. It states that when a person votes you are clearly voting for a slate of electors not the president himself. The Winner-take-all system in each state, candidiates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning,focusing only on the tight races in the \"swing\" states.\n\nThe electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. It is widely regarded as an anachronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner. No region has enough electoral votes to elect a president. Residents of the other regions are likely to feel disenfranchised- to feel that their votes do not count, that the new president will have no regard for their interests, that he really isn't their president.\n\nShould residents of another region feel like their votes do not count? No, they shouldn't each vote should be counted in order for the president to get into The White House. The president is their president as well as mine and yours and they shouldn't have to feel as if he wasn't and wouldn't want to know what their interest were. They should be treated equally.\n\nIn the big states the Electoral College it restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Constitution. Other things being equal, a large state gets more attention from presidential candidates in a campain than a small one does.. Every state should have the same amount of attention, not be treated differently.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think author concludes story parography want understand Saeng s strength One reason I think also end story like know inside plant strong covered snow strong s wonts take driving test For example said When snow melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test That author concludes story paragraph", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Computers great invention They allow many different things They alot positive effects people Computers deal sorts things handeye cordination learning faraway places people talking online anyone Come wonderful world computers Computers super positive effect people They help teach hand eye cordination You look screen without look hand move mouse You see s going looking screen Doing helps everyday skills like playing sports If use eyes hands hit baseball even Computers teach hand eye cordination able two things Would amazing could find recipe go Well You could simple A computer helps people different things It s also easy different culture people places Let s say A computer gives learn something Computers almost everyday They give instance great way talk people You chat people typing Further sites like page post opinions You also friends page see These sites give people chance find old friends Webcam becoming huge sensation Sites like skype let see talk person They allow talk people feel Computers benefit people world doesnt Computers help people physically able learn new things able computers arent taking helping", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting story hot filled rolling hills These factors greatly effected cyclist The hot weather bad cyclist limited water supplyThe text says The sun beginning beat down NUM Showing temperature rising The text says Flat road replaced short rolling hills NUM The authors battery leaking acid harder make hills Seems like everything went wrong man still made", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Florida State Senator,\n\nWe, the people have been given the Electoral College in order to allow both us and congress a say on who will be the next face of our country. I know that you should not fix what is not broken, but maybe it time to allow some changes in our election. The Electoral College attempts to maintain a fair voting process, but like many great ideas it comes with a few kinks.\n\n\"Non-swing\" states have it rough when its time for voting season, because their chances of ever getting their voice heard are slim to nothing. In the second source; paragraph thirteen, the Office of the Federal Register mentioned that candidates spend their time on \"swing\" states due to them having a better chance of suceeding there than, \"non-swing\" states. This is unfair to the citizens of those states not being able to get a word in, let alone a simple acknowledgement of who they may be voting for. Even in the third source; twentieth paragraph, the 'OotFR' mention that only those few lucky states chosen will receive more information on the candidates than those unfortunate few who were discarded like an old newspaper.\n\nVotes are solely dependent on the electors of the states, as shown in paragraph ten of source two. Voter often get confused over who they are placing their votes towards,often voting for the wrong candidate or have no control, whatsoever. In the following paragraph, John F. Kennedy was in trouble back in 1960 because of the LA state legislature nearly got new electors so that most of Kennedy's popular vote would not be received at all. Overall the electors play crucial part in the Electoral College, but must could not trusted to hold that much responsibilty.\n\nAll-in-all, the Electoral College contains some flaws, which is normal. I'm not asking for you to abolish it altogether, but compromise and evenly distribute the power of the votes and who gets a say on what is happening.\n\nSincerely,\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Getting from point A to point B seems like such a big issue when youre in your teens, having to rely on everything else to get where you need to go. Some of us don't know how beneficial it is to not even have a car to worry about. Millions of Americans get in their car each morning to go to school, work, or to the store, but how much could you really save if you stopped relying on your own vehicle all together? It seems harder than it is but the effects are worth it.\n\nJust owning a vehicle, not even driving it, puts a big dent in your monthly pay check with the insurance and paying off the car. Then add all of the gas money, repairs, and possible tickets, you got yourself a load of cash that you could be saving or spending on something else. Just imagine a life where you have deleted your personal transportation for a week. In source one like Heidrum Walter noticed, \"When i had a car i was always tense. im much happier this way.\" It would take a load of off your shoulders, allow you to be less stressed and able to worry about more important things. On top of making your life a tad easier its one more person contributing to the Earth, taking away air pollution.\n\nMultiple cities around the world are having days throughout the year to give up personal transportation, and some places banning it all together. As source three stated, in Bogota, Columbia, \"It was the third staight year cars have been banned with only buses and taxis permitted for the Day Without Cars in this capital city of 7 million.\" Not even the rain had stopped them from participationg. The fewer vehicles on the streets, means a better environment for everyone.\n\nStudies have shown that Americans are buying and recieving less cars and liscense each year. With unemployment at a high rate and many families still in and recovering from poverty, it's too much money and stress for a lot of people. From source four, \"If the pattter persists-and many sociologists believe it will-it will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment, since transportation is the second larget source of America's emissions, just behing power plants.\" Something as simple as limiting our time spent in our cars could benefit the world so greatly, especially with global warming taking a toll quicker.\n\nIt may seem difficult at first but it is defiantly duable and effecient to put away vehicles all together, or atleast more often. Cell phones and all the new apps make it easier to communicate with friends, enabling car pooling and to maximize the fuel spent to speak to others. Gathered from source one, \"Passenger cars are respnsible for up to 50% of greenhouse gas emissions in some car-intensive areas in the United States.\" That in its self should be enough to get you out on your feet to lessen the gas that's being emitted.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think libraries remove material book music movies magazines I think libraries keep thier alot people tht thier stlye reading Sometimes go librarie get book go look magazines movies music Thier alot movies right u go cheak Music way I feel like thier stuff librarie kids like go Im sure edgucational books movies magazines If people take stuff kids teens like Some might return backThier alot students listen music watch movies I love cheaking movies libraries easy always movies u lookin The movies easy find quick If music offfensive stuff take shelves peopel thinkin would put movie music magazines book shelves know offensive public Inconclusion hope people libraries take offensive stuff shelvesIt would bring move people would respect thoes people The public wouldt worrie picking book alot stuff thier kids need see read listen That goes movies music magazines books I really hope people make right choice", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" the author describes the new facial recognision technology called the Facial Action Coding System(FACS). This system claims to read emotion expressions. I think that the FACS could help sience in understanding the emotions and muscle relationship and think it is a valuble thing in classrooms.\n\nSome possitive thing about the new technology are adaptation and improvment. With this new technology we can use it to adapt different things like ads and school lessons. Ads can sometimes completely take out the interest on the viewers for the video and can be sometimes unpridictable. This has happend numerous times in classrooms when a teacher wants to show a documentary that is all ready slighty borring and an ad showing an exciting new superheroes movie comes up So now you have the entire class talking about it and not paying any atention to the documentary about Charles Darwin and what he did. Having these distracting ads adapt to what the audience is feeling could help bring down the amount of times this happens. The FACS could also help in computer lesson planing. If the FACS would be installed in a computer the computer would be able to realise that a student is no longer paying attencion becouse of boredom. So system can then improve what the lesson has by chnging the order around to give the student a more personalised lesson thus having the student learn easier.\n\nThere are some bad feedback as well. If the FACS system succeds in improving the academic scores of the students the school administration might deside that the teacher are no longer needed to teach the student, the students could just study in there cmputers. Another way the FACS could not be so good is that it is likely to be very expencive and there is ways a possibility it can malfunction and give unwanted changes in lessons and other sections in which it would be used.\n\nIn conclusion I think that the FACS could be of great help in the world if it could be 100% reliable. This system could benifit the every day use if used corectly and I think that the FACS could help sience in understanding the emotions and muscle relationship. I think it is a valuble thing in classrooms.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I feel materials book music movies magazines etc removed shelves found offensive Some like offensive things library Some would sometimes want know certain things offensiveMost could offensive alot different thingsDifferent different things offensiveWhat might offensive probably offensive dont like offensive things shouldnt check like offensive things jus could check outI feel shouldnt removed dont like offensive things shouldnt check outYou cant removed things offensive dont like offensive things Everyone right like offended things I read book offended told react situation overcome situation So things offend things read things tell overcome situation tell situation offended byThats I feel shouldnt remove offensive books", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear newspaper I ve read article peoples opinion affects computers I believe computers good thing With talk others far away fast You learn lot It also teaches handeye coordination My first reason good ran talk others Without computers would almost impossible meet people far away talk easily They even webcams see You use webcams even simple comment facebook myspace webcams quichest maybe even coolest way Secondly learn Computers many websites give alot information resent It s muchn easier get internet type something look threw bunch booksThe internet dictionaries news stations weather history find things With dont even need books They even maps print directions My final reason teaches handeye coordination When first start using computers normally pretty young sometimes nt always type fastest Computers become advanced even touchscreen wireless mases So first start normaly look see writing later adults want look screen becames easy know handeye coordination grown alot better stated In conclusion I think computers good part everyday life bad They easy communication people help learn teach good fast handeye coordination kids", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit setting affects cyclist many ways The speaker tells us hes riding bike middle desert June This shows author probably hot The author tells us road turned hills bumps This would make difficult author would use energy move hill And lastly cyclist tells us towns came abandoned uncared This would good cyclist would able get water trip", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Computers one world s best discoveries today For one help educational processes They also help connect people world little time neccesity science research Overall computers best thing ever happened mankind First foremost children today already struggling educational systems But new computers strive meet every goal Teachers tell everything computers underneath hard drive wealth knowledge awaiting saked eager minds Also todays world waiting almost nonexistant Learning type gives children better opportunities success later life Family say child school day Normally would miss homework But check online get back crucial studies feeling better unless want risk tommorow s future workforce computers essential tool us children One best things lot world re different connecting helps us learn tell move forward society Conneticing internet programs like important buissnesses helps make decisions faster ultimatly effect us But nt fooled It also befor pleasure say buissness trip No problem Just go webcam nt miss anymore In government problems evolve quickly steathily To solve president quickly connect hisher advisors still hisher office Connecting people computers maraculous important life know In addition would nt science nt computers First making great strides cancer research day estatic common computer If nt might even kemotherapy Lets face computers faster us way faster But god thing faster proccesing means faster research While simple machine tell us cure proccesing speed It certainly brings us lot closer unraveling mysteries certain diseases shold beneath Two minds better one Even scientist know everything But connecting computer scientists world analize research make informed responsible decisions Certainly extend life exsentency nt want ve larger s people say people glued computer screens But bear mind people helping stay alive helping lower heathcare bill yoour talking So get ill find cure nt still compain found attached keyboards monitors Trust know So come agreement life Computers good things like enhance youth s advention connect help us find cures malignant diseases illnesses world So help world help go promote use computers across community It advance us society end", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is one of the most beautiful and tantalizing heavenly body. It is much closer to Earth than any other planets. Venus is a brilliant object in the night sky and sometimes brighter than any other stars in the heavens. Only the sun and the moon outshines her. Like the remaining planets, Venus revolves around the sun inside the solar orbit of the Earth. Thus, Venus can either be a morning or evening star. 1 Her name, Venus, comes from the Roman goddess of love and beauty. Venus, as a planet, is rather frustrating.\n\nIn these given data, we can say that Venus is not just a mere planet revolving around the Sun, but a planet full of mysteries. It not awake our senses but it can poke our curiousity by asking question of what's and how's about her. In the science advancement today, more facts will be known about Venus. Powerful radar and other instruments will probe its thick clouds, mapping the surface and timming the rotation. Satellites and rockets will relay back information on what the clouds are made of. Someday, valiant explorers may descend through clouds and start discovering.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The members immediate family known incredibly clumsy easily startled Broken dishes common occurrence house spilled drinks stubbed toes bloodchilling screams whenever toaster pops Though us used types things everyone around us lead interesting encounters Many people find pleasure jabbing sides hear scream laugh I trip slightest crack floor Though get annoying sometimes also give reason get pride laugh thus relieving tensions I feeling social setting For example years ago I staying troop Any situation involving large groups people intimidating increasingly terrifying group made girls ages four eighteen adults thrown make sure girls bludgeon death Worse still I staying hybrid somewhere cabin tent majority girls middle school needless say always get along Despite fact best friends though times able get past petty differences cool enjoy time talk joke around people similar places life On one occasion I attempting make bed one top bunks process stretching sheet petrified mattress possibly around Being intelligent person I I decided lean wall behind balance forgetting course fact wall thin clothlike material could support weight The second I realized I done I reached frantically something hold tried vain keep plummeting backwards floor certain death Milliseconds I would smash hard wood floor I managed grab hold one bars side bed hung dear life swinging back forth back forth Finally I let go propelled almost gracefully onto bed sitting underneath mine It long time laughter died In short amount time cliques biases grudges forgotten became bunch random girls placed room together group strengths weaknesses passions flaws Though adolescent years incredibly difficult many times feels like loneliest person world always comforting know people laugh cry like experience many joys embarrassments One essential skills learn able laugh time time let vulnerable front people We basic desires love acceptance laughter", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The cyclist riding high deserts California In environment everything looks miles The cyclist dehydrated getting worse protection sun It hard cyclist keep good spirits even coming across towns sources water The cyclist says About forty miles pedal I arrived first town This place might thriving little spot one time say last world war morning fit traditional definition ghost town This made cyclist doubt old timers directions In wide open desert cyclist coming across something least twenty miles The heat lack water lack civilization made cyclist think going die birds would pick clean When cyclist spots abandoned Welchs factory cyclist says used seemed last bit energy The conditions affected cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some problems builders faced building mast top building builders could nt drop mast top building s flat roof wind would cause stress frame blimps could hanging The steel frame building would modified strengthened make mast The cost modifications another problem two", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The role of schools in shaping individuals and citizens is a subject of debate. While some prioritize molding good citizens and workers, a balanced approach must also prioritize empowering students as unique individuals.\r\n\r\n Schools have a crucial responsibility in fostering good citizens. Through subjects like history and civics, students learn about social responsibility, diversity, and global issues. This cultivates a sense of civic duty, equipping them to become active participants in society. However, solely focusing on this aspect can neglect the diverse needs and aspirations of students.\r\n\r\n Simultaneously, schools must prioritize the development of individuals. Nurturing creativity, critical thinking, and emotional intelligence empowers students to excel in various fields and make unique contributions to society. Extracurricular activities, arts, and personalized learning approaches can help discover their passions and talents, fostering self-confidence.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, schools should strike a delicate balance between nurturing individuals and fostering good citizens. By empowering students as unique individuals, they can create a generation of proactive, empathetic citizens who contribute positively to society, thus achieving the dual purpose of education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This invention of having a computer read your emotions is helpful for some people that have a hard time reading other peoples emotions, dr. paul creator of the facial action coding system created this invention to help people identify other peoples facial emotions and feelings.\n\nThe facial expression like not smiling shows that the person isnt happy witch is sad or mad, in da vincis masterpiece his painting shows each expression is compared against a neutral face just like showing that there is no motions in his masterpiece painting of the mona lisa, the claim that i see in this invention that it is not really that helpful because i think everyone knows how to identify eachothers emotions and there feelings by looking at the persons face i see this invention also not helpful because if everytime a person wnts to know the other persons feelings he has to bring his computer to check his emotions and feelings that would take alot of time and i dont think people would actually waste there time doing that because its easy to identify eachother peoples emotions and feelings\n\nIn the conclusion using the computer and the facial action coding system may be helpful to some people and it may not be helpful to other people because the computer and the facial action coding system not everyone can have those stuff.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The topic of Driverless Cars is a very interesting topic, with both upsides and downsides. But I think the downsides just outweighs the upsides a little more.\n\nThe idea of Driverless Cars has been dreamed of for many decades, and the system of fleets of driverless cars from a public-transport taxi system is a very effecient and eco friendly way for transportation. However, safety of the drivers comes first, with the public-transport taxi system, what happens if the system that navigates the cars have an error and causes malfunction across the world. This is a disaster that is not affordable.\n\nWith the devolopment of sensors and radars, automated cars seem very safe. But even with the sensors and radars, there are just some situations where a human is needed to decide. For example, if a person sees a car swerving side to side the person immediately knows to drive slower and make as great a distance it can make between him and the car. This is a judgement that only humans can make, if the automated car was in control the car would only follows the rules and regualtions of the road and not consider the possibility of others breaking the rules.\n\nAnother point is the affordibility of the automated cars, to make an automated car you need top edge technology, and not many peopole can afford that. Also the companies that are developing theses cars are also very famous named brands that are fairly expensive, and because of this unaffordibility, there will be a mix of automated and regular cars on the road and that can cause a problem.\n\nThe last and final point is the fact that not many people are comfortable putting their lives in the hands of technology. If you are in an automated car and the system stops working and someones is injured who is responsible of the injury, the driver or the manufacturer? Its just that many people want to be in control of their own outcomes and not some computer that is sitting in Google's office.\n\nIn conclusion, the thought of automated cars was a good idea, but lack the security it needs.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper I must admit experts centainly right cause I know people stay computer day thats really good ask Instead computers learning faraway places talking people go exercising relax interact family friends Exercising much better computer I say say When computer sitting playing online games checking things whatever case get board hungry I know theres snacks around whatever Instead computer hours maybe even day getting fat There many ways exercise You take walks go joggin could play sport I mean lot things computer I know people could workin day still come home computer Rest good also You nt always jump computer could relax watch movie eat pop corn enjoy could even take nap little something nt always get straight computer really nt use The way I see family computers always going time one important Friends nt always dependable really nt need around selected thats point Both family true friends feelings spending time computer gon na leave come back home something nt right Tomorrow nt promised live today So enjoy life got chance spend time something active family friends really computers try balance time", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator,\n\nI've come to the conclusion that most U.S. citizens want to abolish the Electoral college. For the reasons being is because the american people vote for the presidents we want for our country, not the state electors choosing for us. As in the source of \"what is Electoral college?\" (The Office of the Federal Register), state's, \"you help choose your state's elector when you vote for president because when you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidate's electors\". what's whrong with the electoral college you may ask? Accordingly \"under the electoral system voters vote not for the president but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president\" state's source two \"The Indefensible Elctoral College\" (Bradford Plumer).\n\nWhat Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, and etc. had in common was abolishing Electoral college. Supposedly they are not the only ones; \"according to a Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore-thanks to the quirks of the electoral college-won the popular vote but lost the presidency\"(Bradford Plumer). As most peolpe believe: the electoral college is unfair, unreasonable, and just simply outdated.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state.\nTo what extent do you agree or disagree?\n\nThere are people living in different countries who often asks themselves 'Why should we give decent part of our salary to the state?'. It could be no clear why taxes are existing but nevertheless they are important for the functioning of the whole nation of each particular country.\nI think that taxes are a necessary part of our life and without them we could end up in a very bad situation.\n\nSome may say 'If we had this money we would be better at managing them than the government!'\nBut I think it is not true for most of them. Quite a few people in the world have appropriate education for creating and managing long-term plans when we talk about money. Also, when we pay the tax we supporting not only our future, but also the life of the other people too.\n\nIn my opinion the main reason why we should pay taxes is a availability of public services. For example, public transport, education, medicine etc. All these things can't exist without taking part of a income people of the country. Of course to have all these things working properly government has to do its job at good level.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that taxes are important part of the modern world. Without it, any big city couldn't exist today. Also, all of this is true only if the government of the state doing their things right.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Emotions are something everyone expierences everyday. On some people, emotions are hard to see by observing. However, on others people, emotions can easily be seen. Computers that can calculate emotions allows for humans to know instead of guessing a persons' emotions.\n\nHumans and computers have been existing together for a long time. Computers have helped humans keep information safe and gain more knowledge. Computers have always been known to do just that; keep information and knowlegde. But is that all computers are good for? In the article it states, \"Dr. Huang and his colleague are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate.\" This line demonstrates that experts are developing new technology that could allow for computers to interact more with humans. By developing the technology, new opportunities will arise and improve the quality of life.\n\nA common issue in this era is people accusing others of doing something they did not do. If someone accuses another of an emotion, that could possibly make the person mad even if that was not their original emotion. In the text it states, \" 'Most human communication is nonverbal, inlcluding emotional communication,' \" This line supports that humans tend not to communicate. Therefore, accsuing someone of a certain emotion could be wrong. Another line in the text states, \"Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc.\", This line proves humans have trouble recongnizing certain facial expressions. Without the help of computers, humans struggle to read emotions of people such as their friends. However, happy, sad, anger, worry, etc. are not the only emotions especially for a teen.\n\nDuring school, teenagers show mutiple emotions. Some may be more obvious than others. A common emotion for teens in school is boredom or confusion. Sometimes a student does so well at hiding it that the teacher does not know what they are feeling. Which is why computers could help figuring out the emotions. In the text it states, \" 'A classroom computer could recongnize when a student is becoming confused or board, ' Dr. Huang predicts.\" This line demonstrates that students can get bored and confused with what they are doing in class. A teacher may change their teaching style but some may not know what is going on inside the students mind. This quote states, \"The same technology can make computer-animated faces more exspensive-for video games or video surgery.\" This line supports that showing emotions when in front of a computer screen will have a wide variety of benefits. Showing facial expression could possibly improve games and other online tasks.\n\nComputers have improved many things in life. Calculating emotions is one of many amazing abilities of technology. By donating money to experts, who develop new technology, can allow them to create more ideas and show the world the successful invention.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced obstacles order allow dirigibles dock Saftey main focus New York densly populated area many dirigibles filled highly flameable hydrogenOne problem builders relized dirigible would hanging single cable teather wich would add stress frame would need adjust building strengthen frame This costed sixty thousand dollars adjust After taken care builders still problemsAnother problem builders faced since building highly populated area many pedestrians walk dirigibles would docked The winds top would cause dirigible blow around lead weights could used dangers falling", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I personally agree and disagree with this idea. First, i agree because it seems like a really good idea, it will make driving more fun and exicting. Not all people like to drive all the time so why not have a car do your job in driving for you? Its a cool thing to show off, Lots of people are fasinated with this car. Their cars has driven half a million miles without a crash, but you can never be sure when one is bound to happen. It would change the world though. People wil be facscinated with this car and would want to try it out.\n\nI also disagree because, this can be a very dangerous thing to do. You never know what could happen having the car drive itself. It could mess up without warning and bad things could happen such as crashes and wrong turns. The sensor they put inside the car could lose itsself and not see people walking across the street, then now you have an accident. You always want to make sure you and your peers or pedestrians are safe. You just cannot make sure of that with a driver-less car. If a negative thing would happen while driving this car, it would create a bad look on the people who made the cars because, they've said so many positive things about the effects of this car, what it can and cant do, so people are depending on the manufactures to keep their word.\n\nI just disagree because, the world is crazy and you never know what could happen. People could get hurt such as pedestrians, other drivers could lose their car due to accidents, manufacturers could lose their job due to an unhappy customer. It seem too dangerous. This car has its pro's and con's. It could be a fun entertaining thing to do, but you should also worry about your safety.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Architects Empire State Building faced tremendous amount obstacles attempted allow dirigibles dock Al Smith man wanted construct tallest building stated December Empire State would feet tall It decided building would mooring mast top docking airships like dirigibles The blimps however spacey Some long one thousand feet length So mooring mast sounds fitting It would allow dirigiblesblimps anchor refuel well letting passengers onPresently purpose mooring mast never carried Problems faced dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen instead helium Hydrogen highly flammable German dirigible Hindenburg incident caused Empire S Building s owners realize bad would happened densely populated area like New York The winds top building always changing A dirigible tethered mooring mast would back ship swivel around around Weights could nt added weigh back blimp would right people walking streets Another practical reason law airships flying low urban areas This law made illegal blimp even approach buildingOn December US Navy dirigible reached mooring mast However could get close enough tie blimp place due forceful winds The captain could nt even take hands controls fear In late s idea disappeared replaced airplanes", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In passage winter Hibiscus monfong Ho quote come back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test symbolizes new journey new country lives In test Saeng personal discrepancy missing homeland states I failed test This test meant failing She test ability function new country failed The came back quote started analyzed deeply snow obstacles hibiscus When obstacles melt away buds new stronger person take test", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Driverless Cars Are Coming.\"\n\nSome people argue everyday about should we have\n\ndriverless cars? Should we be in control of the car at alll times? Many\n\narguments has happen over these simple questions, but think about it should\n\nwe have driveless cars? Of course! All people should have driveless cars. Why\n\nshould we have to drive when a car can take control? Some people cant drive\n\ntill there 30 because they dont have their license. When you have a smart car\n\nwho needs license or permits? The cars is driving it's self!\n\nPeople ask what happens if the car gets in\n\nan accident, or dont know what to do when it comes to traffic wrecks; or even backing out your driveway. Well \"GM has developed driver seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object.\" \"The Google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over.\" \"Other options are flashinglights on the windshield and other heads-up displays.\" \"Some manufactures are also comnsidering using cameras to watch that drivers are reamaining focused on the road.\"\n\nGoogle has had cars that could drive independently.\n\nTheir cars have been driven more than half a million miles without a crash. Google cars aren't really driverless cars. They still alert you to take over if anythings in there way. Google still working on the problems. Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have a car that can drive themselves by 2020. Would you test \"drive\" it?\n\nIn conclusion, we the people should have driverless cars.\n\nWe have almost nearly everything to make a driverless car. Why do you think we shouldn't have drivless cars? We will be safe, theres alerts. But do we think its a good idea?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think its ok so you can know how the person is feeling. If you know how a person is feeling then you can react to them in a way. The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Eckman has classified six basic emotions- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. If your in a classroom and you don't have one of those (FACS) then one day a student can come in all calm in the from out of nowhere there's a fight. But with a FACS when that person comes in the room, and the computer scans the person and it shows that the person is angry. Now that the teacher knows that the person is angry an they can see if they can calm them down. In paragraph 6 it's says \"a classroom coomputer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College is a process, not a place. The founding fathers established it in the constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens. I think the best way to know who wins the election is by the majority votes to the candidate.\n\nThe Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress. The voting system should be done like specificly, because if you setup different things it's not going to work at all. It depends what kind of setups you are making. But I think it's not the good way to make voting system in setups.\n\nEach candidate running for president in our state has his or her own of electors. The electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party, but state laws vary on how the electors are selected and what their responsibilties are.\n\nUnder the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. The singal best argument against theelectoral college is what we might call the disaster factor. The American people should consider themselves lucky for the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the sysytem allows for much worse. Consider that state allows for much worse. Consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people.\n\nPerhaps most worrying is the prospect of a tie in the elecrtoral vote. In that case, the election would be thrown to the House of the Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president. Because each state casts only one vote, the singal representative from Wyoming, representating 500,000 voters, would have as much say as the representative from California. Given that many voters vote one party for president and another for Congress, the House's seletion can hardly be expected to reflect the will of the people. And if an electoral tie seems unlikely, consider this: In 1968, a shift of just 41,971 votes would have occured if a mere 5,559 voters in Ohio and 3,687 voters in Hawaii had voted the other way. The election is only a few swing voters away from catastrophe.\n\nIt's official: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. And the arguments against direct elections are spurious at best. It's hard to say thsi, but Bob Dole was right: Abolish the electoral college!\n\nThe Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal. No region has enough electoral votes to elect a president. So a solid regional favorite, such as Romney was in the South, has no incentive to campaign heavily in those states, for he gains no electoral; votes by increasing his plurity in states that he knows he will win. This is a desirable resuly because a candidate with only regional appeal is unlikely to be succesful president. The residents of the other regions are likely to fell disenfranchised-to feel that their votes do not count, that the new president will have no regard for their interests, that he really isn't their president.\n\nIt can be argued that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope for carrying their state-Democrats in Texas, for example, or Republicians in California. Knowing their vote will have no effect, they have less incentive to pay attention to the campaign than they would have if the president were picked by the popular vote. But of course no voter's vote swings a national election, and in spite of that, about one-half the eligible American population did vote in election. Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election.\n\nMy only suggestion is to do the votes through the majority voters to the candidate because any kind of setups are not going to work. And the people are not likely going to believe all that stuff. It's kind of hard to do that but, it will going to work.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Traditionally in many parts of the world, it has been women who have stayed at home to care for children. This has led to the ideology and expectation that women are more suited to this type of work than men.The overwhelming status quo where women stay at home to care for the children probably derives from the fact that women are the ones who have to actually give birth to children and, following that, they are the ones who for the early part of a child’s life have to feed the child until it is weaned. In times past, this state of affairs probably led to the women assuming the permanent role of carer for the home and children, whilst men went out to work, whether it was to gather food or work in fields or factories.In spite of the fact that this became what was expected in family dynamics, it does not mean that men are necessarily less suited to caring for a child than women. It is very possible for men to care for a child, even from birth onwards in today’s world. Babies’ milk formula can be mixed by anyone and fed to a child. The fact that many women today choose not to do this again does not mean that they are better suited by nature to care for the child.Suitability for childcare is a matter for individual temperament and aptitude. Not many people, whether they are men or women, feel totally confident and knowledgeable about how to care for a baby or young child at the start. They need advice from their own mothers and fathers, midwives or from books. It is only from experience that skill with childcare comes and this skill can be acquired regardless of gender.All in all, I do not agree with the statement that men are less suited to childcare than women. I believe that aptitude to look after children is a matter of individual temperament, not gender-specific inherited qualities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]