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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper On subject computers Their pros cons I would say sides provide veru important reasons nt use computers I think computers important many students like First computers help fellow classmates many asisgnmenrs Some us simply nt time go library look book might nit even posses information needed On internet find amount valuable information It also helps develop handeye coordination peopel say learn handeye coordiantion outside Although true typing fats neat As see hand wriitng best I type fast make little mistakes I need neatest hand writing everThe way I see computers fastert way alot things So spend time writign neatly might nit even able go outside see nature dad environmentalist uses computers Sometime easy way t always best way thats must balance Do infrom people stop using computers balance thier time Everything good s balanced example coffiene In large amounts rather unhealthy need small turn caffiene helpd computers Besides computers made everwhere trying get rid simply unreasonable We already recession dont need trouble I prefer talk friends eye eye however computer perfect alternative So see comuters evry helpful balance answer", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. I believe that his suggestion would be valid. The reasons that the author provides are apealing benefits for just the exploration of a challenging planet.\n\nThe author claims that the dangers of the planet can be overcome by just a few modifications to the average spacecraft, which would be projected to last only a couple of hours. These modifications would be made so that the spacecraft would last longer in the harsh conditions. The author states,\"Each previous mission was unmanned, and for a good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.\" This text shows the dangers of attempting to explore this planet. The author also stated, \"These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals.\" This shows that even the best and strongest built technology would not be able to withstand this planets wrath.\n\nDespite these dangerous and extreme conditions, NASA believes they may have determined a way to still explore this forbidden planet. NASA's solution would be to hover above the surface 30 or so miles to avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by not being in it. Paragraph 6 states,\"At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels.\" This shows that exploration of Venus would be harsh but definetly possible with the right equipment provided to withstand these conditions.\n\nNASA is also working on other possible solutions for their Venus exploring issues. For example, in paragraph 7 it states,\"Some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\" Even though the simplified electronics only last for three weeks, a lot of information can be gathered in that time. Three weeks is definetly a lot longer than a couple of hours, which is what the normal spacecraft would withstand. But NASA is also working on old technology called mechanical computers. As paragraph 7 states,\"These devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require eletronics at all. modern computers are enormously powerful, flexible, and quick, but tend to be more delicate when it comes to extreme physical conditions.\" This shows that collection of data on Venus is not as complex as upgrading technology, it means that NASA should just bulk up their already existing technology for the conditions presented.\n\nVenus is a very tricky and very dangerous planet for exploration but despite all of those factors, it is still possible with the right technology. The benefits of this trip to Venus definelty outweigh the possible negativities. Though we may never be able to stay on Venus for more than three weeks or so, it would be worth the daring exploration so that we may become bold enough for even more daring explorations of our solar system.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke encourages people to join the seagoing cowboys program because he thinks since when he were in the program it was amazing I know this because in paragraph 5 it says the cattle-boat trips were unbeliveible opportunity for a small town boy.\n\nAlso it says But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special so was taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water. I think he thinks that the places they go are really special because each one of the Countries has different things about that country. Maybe one country might be more poor than the other but he is impress how they are manaing to keep their selves together and not fall apart.\n\nAnother reason I think Luke trys to convince people to join this program is so they can learn and change the way they used to be. The program can teach them alot I know this because in paragraph 7 it says Helping out on his aunt katie's farm as a boy had prepared luke for hard work, but not for dangers at the sea. Thats teaching him how to survive on his own he's getting taught and he is changing during this program so thats what he thinks this pro gram can do for other kids wanting to do this program.\n\nLuke trys to tell you all the things you can be instead of the things you think you have to be. Before Luke was in this program he worked at a grocery store and as a banker I know this because in paragraph 1 it says Luke Bomberger had no idea that hi life could change soon after his high school graduation. he was working part time jobs in a grocery store and a bank when his friend Don invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat so that why I think he trys to encourage people to join the program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is a planet in space, that is the second planet from the sun and the closest plant to Earth density and size wise. Venus has a \"thick atmosphere of almost 97 carbon dioxide\" which makes it a very toxic place and top of the \"clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in the atmosphere.\" Other dangerous conditions are such as the temperatures that \"average 800 degrees Fahrenheit.\"\n\nThe author suggets that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it presents. It is a worthy pursuit because researchers can explore new types of rocks, gas, and etc. Because Venus is such as harsh planet, it makes everything on the planet that much rare. Despite the conditions, when things on the planet are discovered it can make a huge impact on the history of space and scientists.\n\n\"NASA's possible soultion to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float ablove fray.\" The author presents an idea that would allow humans to be able to observe the planet despite the dangers it presents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood memoir grateful content The author mood quotes puts I born simple house situated twofamily blondbrick building ironbound section Newark New Jersey That author care much house looks price location It I learned real definition family nothing blood relative grateful people considers family Also I always grateful parents love sacrifice came selflessly many immigrants give children better life That right quote feeling grateful The author also puts phrases parentheses add bit I eternally grateful I adore day Those show happy grateful life last next quote family members grateful It closeknit community honest hardworking immigrants extended hand people necissarily kind clearly need", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that cars that drive themselves should not be made. In the Article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" it seems like there is more negative effects than positive ones.\n\nMy position on driverless cars is that they shouldnt be made. I think this because what if the car has techinical problems and crashes. Also in the article it talks about the manufactures being able to watch the passengers drive that invades the passengers privacy. Also think about the cost of these driverless cars a family that is struggling already has trouble buying a car that they drive imagine them trying to pay for a car that drives itself. Plus think if a passenger did get in a wreck who would be to blame the passenger or the manufactures that made the car. next neagtive aspect i see about these cars is the passenger is going to be more likley to fall asleep while looking out the window versus if they were acutually driving the car. What if the car can't wake the passenger up in time and the car wrecks that is a huge safety hazard. Another reason i dont think that these cars should be manufactured is imagine how many taxi drivers they would be putting out of jobs. Also think about if the passenger is drunk it might seem like a good idea to have a driverless car until the drunk passenger has to take control that could be dangerous not only for the passenger but the other people around them.\n\nThese are the reasons i think that these driverless cars should not be manufactured. I think people should judt stick with normal human powered cars. It seems to me that more negative things can happen than positive ones.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever imagined a driverless car? Google cofounder Sergey Brin \"envisions a future with a public transportation system where fleets of driverless cars form a public-transport taxi system.\" I believe that driverless cars are an intellectual idea. Not only do they help prevent crashes, but they also use half as much gas as taxis.\n\nThe Google self driving cars have driven over half a million miles without a single crash. These cars have been around since 2009. Although they are not completely driverless, they are still safer than regular cars. The author states, \"they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents.\" As long as the driver is being attentive, this is a safe way to go. They can also help those who try to text and drive. The author shows this by saying, \"Such displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over—something not available to drivers trying to text with a cell phone. In this way, the in-car system is actually a safety feature, and safety is a big concern.\" If the driver happens to be texting while in a normal car, they will not know when to pay attention to the road. They could be so distracted by their phone that they do not see upcoming traffic. In this situation, the driver could crash into the car in front of them. If they had been driving a driverless car, then the driver would have been alerted of the upcoming traffic, preventing the accident from occuring. These cars are also safer for the environment. The author also states, \"The cars he [Brin] foresees would use half the fuel of today’s taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus.\" These cars would require half of the amount of gas taxis use today. They would also be ready to pick you up whenever it is needed, unlike a bus.\n\nBy the year 2020, you could be riding in a driverless car. Accident rates would decrease tremendously. You would also save a great amount of money that used to be put towards gas for your car. The environment would be cleaner and healthier. Driverless cars are a great idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that driverless cars shouldnt be used in any way. As ot states in the article who will get blamed for an accident if one will accure the driver or the manufacturer. Driverless cars are pointles if you own a car you should drive it, dont be lazy and have the car do it.\n\nThe whole thing on having a car is so you can drive. If your not in controle over your car who knows what could happen. The car could misfunction and cause serious accidents. Whats the point of having a car that will drive itself? The laws that they would have to pass to get the cars tobe able to drive on the road anyway are redicoulus.Why would you want a driverless car if you still have to drive it. Just drive it by yourself and deal with it.\n\nMy aspactation on driverless cars are they don't need to be on the roads, they could be even more dangerous than a regular person driving.They dont need to be legalized anywhere. If your gonna buy a vehical then buy it to drive it dont buy something you dont even have to drive. Your going to spend arounf 70 thousand on a vehical that you cant even drive, its pointless. Spend the money on a real car that your in conrole of and not technology, technology can mess up within seconds and cause everything to crash and fail. I belive that there wil be more accidents with driverless cars than there is with us humans driving. If these cars", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Even though driverless cars are a new addition to today's society, there are both positive and negative aspects of driverless cars. For example, driverless cars are beneficial because the car can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves. GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object. For the driver's safety, manufacturers are considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road. This allows them to be able to watch the driver as the driver watches the road. Some manufacturers also hope to bring in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays. Drivers are able to control whether or not they want the displays to be on. Surprisingly, the in-car system is actually a positive safety feature, which is a big concern.\n\nHowever, driverless cars can be very dangerous and cause problems for the citizens of today. For example, the driver can get into a serious accident by using the cars ability to steer,accelerate,and brake by itself. The car is designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills,such as navigaing through work zones and accidents. However, if the driver is not aware of this, the driver can possibly get into an accident. Due to the fact that the drivers attention might not be on the raod because they have a car to drive for them, whereas if the driver was driving a car without these privileges they just might remain alert at all times. Another example of how driverless cars might be negative is beacuse if technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer?\n\nIn my opinion, driverless cars are taking the fun out of driving. There was a time when people were excited to drive, but now that experience is being taken away. Driverless cars prevent human ability. Taday's soceity no longer has to steer, accelerate, or use the brakes because the car does it itself. In short, driverless cars have both a positive and negative effect on the world today.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is no denying the fact that using social media to keep up with friends can be a debatable subject. While it is a commonly held belief that it is easy to communicate and connect with friends and family. there is also an argument that opposes this idea. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, social media can give easy communication and connection with friends and family . In other words, it gives access to a wide range of information and news about your friends. In addition, there are some platforms for community building and support. For example, an app is used to help the community with doing some activities and gatherings.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, social media can be a distraction, and addiction. It is also possible to say that, it can cause a car accident because of the addiction. Moreover, it can have anegative impact on mental health from cyberbullying and online harassment. For instance, it can also affect their comparison and self-esteem .\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there are no easy answers to this question.On balance, however, I tend to believe that social media can help to keep up with friends, I suggest that they put strict rules on when and where to use it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The local newspaper wants know opinion effects computers people Computers effect people People meet new people learn new places talk friends Read learn computers effect people lifes My first reason people meet new people You meet new people around world You keep touch email Its quicker new way meet new people My second reason learn new places You learn new places clicking webpage Computers faster way learn I gives everything need know ne places want learn My third reason talk friends Computers many diffrent social websites talk people You wont wait school next day talk computer With new quicker stuff talk friend ever want Finally know computers affect people We meet new people learn new places talk friends Computers days Hope enjoyed reading affect people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The challenge of exploring venus is is that the atmospheric pressure is over 90 time greater then what we have here then what we ever will have here on earth. The normal temperatures on venus is about 800. The most we every get here is about some where in the 100s if you go to venus you will cook like your diner would. And there is way to much mercury on the plant. The plant havs a rocky surface. It has valleys and mountanins. It is kinda like earth.\n\nNASA has an idea thst they want to send people up to go and study the plant but not put then not the plant cause you can't land on it. They want them to fly above it and study it. And see what they can learn about it and see about it. But still being that far away from the plant it would be 170. The air pressurse would be sea level on earth. They would be hovering about 30 miles above it. It would not be easy for them them but it still be survivable for humans.\n\nNASA is working on a study on Venus with a diffrent approaches. One example is the silicon carbide that have been test in chambers. The have looked back at old technology. One called mechanical computers they where frist made in the 1800s. But they frist played a role in the 1940s.\n\nThey are looking for stuff that will give them more power. Modern computer are more powerful, flexible and quick. They need it to suroivoiur the heat of Venus. because it is not use to that much heat.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "New high resolution images and 3D altimetry from NASA's Mars Global Survey spacecraft reveal the face on mars for whatit really is. why do people think \"the face\" is created by aliens? Here is to show you why \"the face\" is a natural landform. The text states that \"Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the images first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing . . . a natural landform.\" this means that there was no alien monument after all. The text states that \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\" This mean that what the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa--Landforms common aroung the American West.The text also states that \" We just don't pass over the Face very often.\" this means that the planet like a fax machine in narrow 2.5 km-wide strips. in conclusion this eans that the face is a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A wide range of people make conspiracy theories based off of tv and maagazines. Most of their theories are false due to lack of research. A lot of people make conspiracy theories, and a lot of people come to believe they are true and they start making false accusations against the government not revealing discoveries to the public.\n\nA global surveyor orbiting Mars captured an image of a face like figure on the surface of mars, NASA thought it was a mesa. It turned out to be a rock that had formed on the surface of mars.\n\nNASA revealed the image to the public, The image caused an outbreak of conspiracy theories. There were a lot of debates on whether NASA was hiding something from the public or if they were being truthful. The majority of the public thought that NASA was hiding the truth, and they thought that the face was the result of foreign life forms.\n\nMars surface can form rocks and a vast majority of things that can be spotted on Earth. The rock formed", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Ultimately evident entire concept Al Empire State building strategically flawed It Al Smith s dream dream always reality In theory Mooring would constructed dock drigibles However eventually revealed docking station Empire State building would never possible The reason Al Smith s dream could never prove reality Smith builders hit many obstacles One obstacle faced construction location When landing zone ft ground level extremely tough test complete perfect landing zone much tougher ground level Also location safety high wind speeds altitude It higher altitude get higher air pressure violent air currents CAPS making unsafe environment Next another aspect location fact densely populated New York City mistakes great number casualties would expected Lastly large obstacle Smith builders faced technology s amount technology engineering certainly unparallel technology prevalent today s society", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The night cool night cold definetly muggy temperatures brought This type degree weather would allow wear jeans tshirt still comfortable The air hugged skin I walked path led friends front door Overhead I knew stars hung sky paid attention Inside house I knew bestfriends awaiting arrival I also knew potential angry For I know I know I left school day feeling gut told something nt right Walking home I increased distance churning stomach prodded look back When I staring looks I could nt nt want place faces All made heart give occasional hard thumps chest nervousness Yet I pretended everything okay For I know I told might well I m overreacting I knocked whitepainted wooden door stared maroon sidepaneling waiting answer My friend answered door From somewhere inside I could hear friend laughing I knew I missed something laughter explained I stepped inside There hollow feeling chest I wanted know I missed I hated knowing A mix emotions jumped around inside body causing head jumbled mess I could nt make sense I gently pushed open bedroom door fingertips Like always turquoise walls sound radio station music jumped greet laughing dancing music saw stopped stared The moment seemed stretch expand time I felt guard go If mad fine I nt anything wrong I would maintain innocence The moment stretching stretching point I thought might break hugged completely catching gaurd filling sense right I d known I nt done anything wrong Everything seemed normal felt like second explained gut feeling I I walking home school day I accused putting work reading project The accusation appalled deflated pride Instead mild anger boiled I simply walked door cool night I heard friends calling name following street I kept walking I told anger I know sake making scene The footsteps I listened behind suddenly came faster pace I glanced shoulder saw running Against I let highpitched scream started running digging feet concrete sidewalk I felt determination flow veins I would walk way home dark make point caught tried pull back house I resisted might I knew I could nt get grip sheer stubborness I planted butt curb refused budge I realized I passed two houses My friends exchanged glances picked arms legs started carrying towards direction house I grasped anger slipping hands I wanted stay mad I could nt I started laughing tension I still felt swarming around lifted flew away A grin decorated face one ear good sense came back gracefully They set middle road I looked admired stars I missed winking The last ribbons laughter still danced around air whispered everything going okay", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The public thinks that the governments have to make solutions to alleviate environmental pollution and house problems because those complication trigger a lot of issues for citizens like having difficulty to persist in a normal lifestyle. I agree on this subject, so I will present my perspectives and conclude in this essay.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, several experts argue that children who have diseases like atopy and respiratory obstacle are getting increased by natural pollution and it will be treated by mitigating the problem. For example, when I was young, some friends had an atopy very commonly or respiratory issues. Although they could not see and find effective methods to treat this symptom in the capital, they got a cure by living in rural areas. As a result, the more governments make laws related to eco-friendly, the more the citizens will acquire an improved life atmosphere.\r\n\r\nAdditionally, most young adults argue that there is a polarized house trouble between urban areas and the countryside because they have to settle in a city to earn money unconditionally. However, many adults suffer from housing dilemma due to fluctuating real estate prices and poor house environments. Even if they hope to live in the countryside such as their hometown, they can not maintain that lifestyle because of financial issues. Consequently, to minimize this gap, the government should be aware of and make solutions to these controversies\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe that people, especially the young generations, have complication like housing and caused environment that are addressed by the government and solved.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I'm neither for or against driverless cars. I'm for and against them in someways such as them being safe enough to drive as in it has so many sensors in it to be safe for passengers, but if the sensors malfunction then its not okay and no longer becomes safe. How does it notify the driver when it needs to be transfered from automatic to manual? There are so many question to ask. This car just has so many pros and cons.\n\nFirst thing to talk about is the sensors. Obviously, it has to have multiple sensors to read signs and stop lights. It needs to track the road and view on coming traffic but, how does it know when there has been a crash up ahead or construction. There could be police scanners involed and they would have the car notified. But, every machine has to have a malfunction and on a smart car that is driverless can be at very high risk. There may not be a bolt that is tight enough or a wire not in the right place. The odds are about one hundred to one but the chance is still there. Other than anything malfunctioning the car should be safe.\n\nNext, the notifications.how will it know to notify the driver and how will it do it? There are many possible ways that it can notify the driver as in Siri. As I mentioned in the last paragraph how will it know when to notify the driver?there are also multipleways this can be answered or solved. There could be police scanners or they have a chip or some device that is imediately notifide when something around it goes wrong.\n\nLastly, what is the point? What is the point of having a driverless car if you have to keep your hands on the steering wheel and be alert at all times. The Point of a driverless car is that it should be able to drive itsself. If a driver falls asleep at the steering wheel then will the car stop or notify the driver until the put their hands back on the wheel?\n\nIn conclusion, I'm not a big fan of the driveless cars because the sensors could malfunction, the notification system could be unuseful, and there is no point to a driveless car if you still have to drive it at some point. So, in my opinion, im not a big fan of driveless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience perso someone deal difficulties without complaining Like waiting docters office fora checkup Or eye doctors maybe dentist When doctors office quiet phone ringing Then doctor walks dentist waiting waiting", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine you are exploring Venus, It can be one of the best experiences you could ever have but it can be also danger because it's not like visiting other country on the earth, it would be visiting other planet.\n\nIn paragraph two the article states that Venus is often referred to as Earth's \"twin,\". A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Thid make Venus more challenging to be explored.\n\nThe article also states that on other planets that are like Venus temperatures\n\neverage over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience in our planet. This is what it makes us think more about exploring planets like Venus because it's putting our lives on risk.\n\nBy all this evidence from the text about how exploring Venus would be we know that is a very challenging exploration and also can be interesting at the same time because is called Earth twin and what if there can be ny life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Movies popcorn music headphones Right It fun games someone s innocence completely destroyed The simplest forms entertainment minipulated today s world Many children modern society quickly becoming conditioned used seeing reacting media found everyday store shop library The innocence youth today slowly destroyed subliminal messages found music magazines movies The messages type media sex drugs violence The world music evolved much past decades time We go jazz disco funk rock hard rock hip hoprap All types belonging certain decade But era music industry exploding rap hip hop music This type music triggered towards three ideas sex drugs violence Almost every song heard today radio iPod likely something one three The sense naive innocent broken listening songs everytime radio The youth need listening whatsoever therefore parents aware children listening think effects media Recently people turning articles segments works read instead good old fashioned novels The novels written era clean nonexplicit But today literature gone new course More companies becoming less tradional upfront topics sexual violent drug related For example see articles strictly pretaining sexlike actions Possibly side page see ad cigarettes Soon enough kids going think everything seeing looking okay soon act upon The libraries offering magazines rental restrict children reading due lack modesty morals found magazines There always sense subliminal messaging throughout development evolution cinematic world movies Movies timeless object entertainment But recently subtle blunt hints sex drugs violence portayed almost movies offered box office today There action packed movies fighting blood punching Then sappy movies seems main characters emotional fights soon resolved session steamy sexual actions These types movies offered libraries nationwide easily accessible children The youth country need seeing actions hearing messages In way shape form morally correct All library censorship weak The people organize let kind media float around kids pick moral issues need checked The times child reads listens watches media subliminal blunt messages sex drugs violence going think okay act actions All sense innocence destroyed children children anymore", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Just like Luke, you can participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program for free!\n\nWhat does this program do, you might ask? Well we're here to tell you just what it is, and why you should join it!\n\nWe're part of the \"United Nations Relief and Rehabilitaion Administration,\" or in shorter terms, the UNRRA.\n\nWe have worked together to help countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more. All together we are 44 nations. But helping others isn't the only benefit, you get to see sights you've never seen before.\n\nEveryone has the benefit of seeing atleast one country. Last year, our group had the benefit of seeing Europe and China. They also got to ride the gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water. Our group also got to see an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on their way to China.\n\nThere isn't only helping people and seeing sites, you actually get to travel the high seas. However, this might be the hardest part. The groups were always busy and it took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to China. The part that had to be the most challenging for some members were caring for the animals during the crossings.\n\nThere are also fun times on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. Usually we play baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals are housed. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time.\n\nBut being a Seagoing Cowboy is much more than an adventure for some people. For most of our groups, it opened up the world to them. They stated that they were \"grateful for the opporunity, and that it made them more aware of people of ther countries and their needs.\"\n\nIn conclusion, that is why you should join our Seagoing Cowboys program. Thank you for listening, and we hope to see you in the future!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I beilieve it could be valuable in some classes because classes like art and gym are classes that kids have fun in. Classes like english and science are a little different to calculate because they don't usually do anything fun. Some kids like those classes but other don't. A lot of people in todays world walk around with what is called \"resting b*tch face\" where there is no expression and they do not want to take the time to look a certain way. This means that some people could be happy but not look it and visa versa. There is not a good way to get around that situation. Therefore the results would not be accurate. One good way to test if the students like their class is by giving them a survey and let them tell you them selves. I believe that this is a bad idea to test out on students.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the use of this technology would be valuable. There are many ways that it could be valuable in the classroom. Especially whenever students are doing work on their computers. Here's why.\n\nIf a student is on their computer working, they don't always like what they are doing. This system could change that. If it can detect that the student is getting bored or doesn't understand the lesson, it could manipulate the lesson to change how it is being taught. This could help the student understand the lesson and even make it easier for them to do. If it is detecting that the student is happy and it understanding what is going on, it could even have a pop-up that says, \" Good job, keep up the good work!\"\n\nAlthough, sometimes it could get to excessive or maybe some of the students don't even want them on their computers, so there could always be a button that you can shut it off so it doesn't pop up when that student is logged in. I think that most students should have this on their computer though because I feel that it could really help out in a major way.\n\nAll in all, I think that they should put these on computers. It could help students to get their work done faster, and even help them to get it done more efficiently. Some students could even learn the lesson in new ways if they don't understand the way the lesson is being taught the first time. Even if some students don't want it on their computer, you could always turn it off. Overall, I think this system would be valuable to students in a classroom", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper I tell negative effect people computer usage How would react nt time exercise enjoy nature spend time family friends Well people nt notice losing time stuff due using computer No time exercise What mean I see questions flying heads great people No time exercise means exactly sounds like since people every day wasting time computer playing games chatting people ect They nt get really want time exercise What nature Are person likes enjoy nature I know I Since time flys people computer sometimes nt realize would probaly thinking I never got go outside go walk forest enjoy nature Well sometimes truth people say stuff like nt help motivate basically saying I ll go nature walk tomorrow nt happen I ll next day Odds person saying wo nt actually go walk thinks going okay keep pulling What ever happened spending time family friends Oh I know I know family friend time wasted computer people nt realize since time wasted computer nt even time sit talk family fun go friends catch movie something As heard people using computers I believe negative effect nt time exercising enjoying nature talking family friends ect All time spent computer replacing time stuff good thing Computers negative effect people I say find way cut computer time", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author chooses end story deep connected way Itis ended On note rebirth second chances Saeng vows come back inthe spring snow melts geese return Hibiscus blooming I take test The author connecting sense oF new country second chances rebirth Spring snow melting could connected rebirth geese returning could symbolize second chance connected saengs second chanceThe author also shows saeng getting used new country shows sense hope Itshows thereis hope test", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Throughout time, pollution has been known to be a huge environmental problem. The excessive amount of individual car owners driving down streets is in no way helping this issue. Efforts to diminish the number of cars we see on our roads have been taking place in order to help the environment and therefore citizens as well.\n\nIt is no news that passenger cars are harmful to the environment. They release gases that pollute the air we breathe affecting not only us but the environment as a whole. Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of green house gas emissions in Europe and up to 50 percent in some areas in the United States (Source 1). This realization has led to the promotion of \"car-reduced\" communites by the U.S Environmental Protection Agency (Source 1). But the problem is more widespread than that. Paris has acknowledged the importance of this issue after witnessing smog that rivaled Beijing, China, known as one of the most polluted cities in the world (Source 2). Paris's solution was to enforce a driving ban in order to help clear its air. Due to this ban, congestion was down 60 percent shortly after the intensifying smog (Source 2). It is a known fact that transportation is America's second largest source of emissions, therefore, limiting passenger car usage can greatly benefit the environment as well as citizens' everyday lives.\n\nLimiting car usage has not only proven to be helpful towards the environment but towards citizens as well. With a decrease in car usage comes new benefits not just to individual citizens but to communities. Less cars means less time in irritating traffic. Usually, car traffic and traffic jams leads to huge amounts of stress. This is because the idea of not getting to work is stressful; not getting to work means losing money. Losing money adds even more stress. But when limiting car usage, losing money is not an issue one has to think about. Carlos Arturo Plaza agrees by stating that \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress...\" (Source 3). Rush-hour restrictions and other efforts towards limiting car usage have cut traffic making it easier for citizens to get to their jobs (Source 4). Those who choose other forms of transportation that are less harmful to the environment have even less of a problem and appear to be much happier. Heldrun Walter states that when she had a car she was always tense but now she is much happier (Source 1). The evidence has proven that limiting car usage is benefical to not only the environment but to citizens' daily life as well.\n\nKeeping a clean environment is something of major importance. If one does not take care of the environment there will seize to be a healthy environment in which to live in. Limiting car usage is a big step when it comes to keeping the environment free of pollution. Not only is it beneficial to the environment but it helps citizens live a much happier life lessening the causes of stress. Limiting car usage helps the air needed to breathe, the money coming into your pockets, and one's overall happiness.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Mars..... the red planet. We call it many things, some of us people beleive that there is and once was life on the planet mars. But now NASA has discovered something far from anything we've seen before.\n\nThe face of on the stone may possibly be weather created by its own planet. In the artical it states, \" What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a buttle or mesa.\" Which this means the face looked like landforms juist like on earth, that are found in the American west.\n\nIn paragraph 11 a man states about the \"rule of the thumb\" which tells us about how you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size. this explains to us that if the face was real there shouldve been other things to see around it.\n\nLastly in paragraph 7 the artical says in April 1998, they sent Cydonia over to mars too take pictures and there was no cloudy weather it was perfectly fine, and it took photos of the face. People at home were waiting for the picture to be released, just to find that it was a natural landform.\n\nPeople can beleive that this is a real face however, they are wrong becauase that the pictue that was taken by cydonia looks just like a normal, natural landform and also the image they had, if they would've zoomed in on it 3 times they should've seen oher things. They also say that the face just looks like a mesa just like in the west of America.\n\nYou should beleive that this is nothing but just a nrmal landform caused by the red planets natural enviorment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Land either froms by its self, by people, or by having chunks taken out of it by meteors. The face on Mars could not have been created by a living life form, for the planet is unsafe for life. The rocks created a formation that looks like a face because of all the shadows and dust that were in the picture. Mars was hit by a lot of meteors and that is also why it looks like face. The face on Mars is most likely a volcano, a mountain, or a valley. Meteors have hit Mars so it takes some of the rocks and land away and it could happen to look like a face made aliens, but it cant be because it is a natural land formation of rocks.\n\nMany people would disagree because they believe that Mars could have living lifeforms. Mars cant have living things on it because of the air being as toxic as it is. People think that there is a possability for things to be able to live on Mars, but there is no way for life to sustain on Mars because there is no where to grow food and raise animals to eat. There is no oxygen to breath so animals would just die because of lack of oxygen.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I personally am all for the driverless cars idea. Through time, everything has evolved and is still eveolving to newer and better ideas of the original. For example, we started with little shacks, now we have skyscrapers, we rode horses now we have cars, we had mail, now we have email or texting, the point I am trying to make is everything needs to evolve for us to improve anything. Technology is a big part of our lives today and we rely on it for most of anything and everything.\n\nEvery year we have thousands maybe millions of deaths and injuries resulting from car crashes, the fact of the matter is, people are irresponsible and reckless. We have drunk driving, texting and driving, and simply just not paying attention that causes all these wrecks and I believe that driverless cars could solve all these problems and save a lot of lives.\n\nDriverless cars could also solve other problems such as gas prices. In the story it mentions that driverless cars use half the amount of gas as taxis do and they are way more efficient. People could have a lot more money spending half the amount of money they usually do on gas. Do you know how much money people spend on gas? A lot. So these are the reasons that I am all for driverless cars, it's the next big thing, why would we say no to that?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on drverless cars is in the middle between yes i want the cars to be driverless, and in the middle of also saying no we shouldnt have driverless cars. In the passage below I will state the pros and the cons of having driverless cars.\n\nPros of having a driverless car is with a driverless car you wouldn't always have to worry about keeping your hands on the steering wheel. Unless the car is built to only be driverless if both hands are on the steering wheel, in the passage it stated that some vehicles still need both hands on the steering wheel. It states that hands need to be on the steering wheel, because if there is a road proble ahead the driver could take control until the driverless vehicle could take control again. The passage also states that the vehicles still have not yet become totally driverless, because no matter what the cars will always need a driver just in case for emergencies.\n\nWhy driverless cars could be a bad thing, driverless cars could lead into problems. Problems would very, such as the car that is driverless wrecks into another car that has a driver, the driver from the car dies, but with the driverless car no one can take the blame for the death of the driver, because it is a driverless car. Also the passage states, that lawmakers know the safety is best achieved with alert drivers. It also states about how laws have made it so only alert drivers are to control a moving vehicle, so they are well aware what is going on. Also the driverless care would also be a bad reason. because what if there was an accident how would you be able to tell what they are suppose to do, how would they determine wheather to stop or to just ignore a accident site, how would they be able to tell when they're too close to a car or when there is a stop light or a train up ahead.\n\nSmart cars are being tested everyday trying to make them better safer, more coificient. None or less the smart cars could either be a good thing, or a bad thing to our society today. The choice is up to people weather or not they want to risk their life or stay with just driving normally.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The whole story Saeng buying hibiscus response failing driving test This crushed She wants reminded old homeland read past driving lessons So goes green house find plants similar ones used homeland She try make feel better still in warm moist shelter greenhouse Saeng broke wept Saeng feels failed hibiscus gives hope memories old country Her mom clearly sees understands doesnt yell Saeng spending plant Im glad got Saengs mom says knows comforts daughter Together plant hibiscus By planting Saengs hope grow pass driving test make new country The story ends lines Saeng decides hibiscus grow She ready face driving test hope support adapted The hibiscus although one old country knows adapt surroundings plant new country The plant grow adapt Saeng grow adapts new country", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Based on what I've read some believe that there's a face on Mars, and it could be linked to extra-terrestrial life. But I don't find this to be truthful here's why. If you look at the picture from 1976 it can resemble a face, but if you look at the 2001 picture it just looks like a landform. Here's another thing, the one from 1998 looks like volcanic activity is emerging, which could be the case. These pictures contain important information, and data that can be analyzed, which will help NASA find out more about this.\n\nLet's go back to the Viking 1 spacecraft. This machine was built in 1976, which could possibly mean the machines camera was broken, or malfunctioning. One major factor in this is NASA. NASA is a company who study's life outside our atmosphere. When they launch probes into space it costs millions of dollars to do so. When they find real life outside our atmosphere they get paid for all the research they've done.\n\nThen there's the rumors that certain people spread around. Usually it's untrue, but there's a possibility that it's true. These are theorists, they do this to gain popularity for themselves, or sometimes even money. The \"Face on Mars\" did gain lots of popularity for itself among time. It got movies, magazines, even haunted grocery checkout lines. But among that it caused other things.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars Driving Themselves?\n\nHow efficient could a car be with nobody behind the wheel? Many automobile companies like, Gerneral Motors and Berkeley, are contemplating the creation of a driverless car. A driverless car would require no help accerlerating, steering, braking, or any other task. A prototype has been created by Google's cofounder, Sergey Brin, who hopes to reduce the use of taxis and busses. If driverless cars are created, disaster will be the only task achieved.\n\nFor starters, companies will spend far too much money on trying to create this dream car of theirs. According to paragraph 4 in the \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" reading, these cars will require many sensors, which are not cheap. Wasting money on uncertain creations, like this one, will ruin the company's budget plan. Of course, sensors are nothing new, but the excessive amount of money needed for them is unbelievable. No company should risk their money and, possibly, their bussiness on pure hope.\n\nPeople may argue that they will never need their own car again, if a driverless car could just take them anywhere, but those people never think about how much they would have to pay for this car to take them anywhere. Yes, without a car, one would never have to pay for insurance or gas, but once those fees for the driverless car start stacking up, paying for insurance and gas would not be so bad. These cars are basically an overpriced taxi without a driver.\n\nSafety is also a key factor. When riding in a driverless car, one is giving a computer the responsibilty of their life. According to paragraph 9, it is illegal in most states to even test driverless cars because of how dangerous they can be. Accidents are also bound to happen in these new cars, so what if the driverless car causes a severe accident? Will the owner of the car or the manufacturer be liable for the damage done? With cars driving themselves, accidents will be more likely to occur. The only positive way to keep drivers and the people around them safe is to have a human being manually driving the car.\n\nAutomakers are still testing and trying to improve the flaws of the driverless car, but they should reconsider their priorities. Companies such as, Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have driverless cars by the year of 2020. These companies are putting a lot of time and money into a dangerous creation. Developing a car that could have a strong possibility of failing should not overshadow the safety of citizens. Supporting driverless cars is the beginning of giving up control.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The growing in the production of consumer products outcomes in harm to the natural environment. In my opinion, there are several reasons why increase the production of consumer goods have a negative impacts on natural environment including, dofrestation, and create pollution, however, there are several meausres to address this issue namely, introduce the strict laws against dofrestation, make mandatory for companies to treat the water polluted. \n\nTo begin with, the primary reason why raise in the production of consumer goods results in adverse to the natural environment is deforesation. This is because dramatic cutting down trees can lead to increase the amount of Co2 footprint in the atmosphere, because tress plays a significant role to absorb Co2 emissions from the earth. Therefore, more production of consumer goods can leads to contribute to global warming and climate change result of increase the amount greenhouse gases. Water contamination is another reason why produce more goods can lead to damage the ecosystem. This is because factories use fresh water with chemcial substance in their production process of their goods. Consequently, when factories finish production process they release water polluated to the rivers and lake without treatment. \n\nOn the other hand, there are several actions can taken by the government to tackle this problem. The first effective solution, the authorities should introduce harsh laws against deforesation. Furthermore, they can impose taxes in goods produce result of deforesation in order to discourage production companies to produce more goods. The second efficient solution, the government should make compolsory for companies to treat the water contaminated before release to the rivers or oceans. \n\nTo sum up, form my perspective , there are different reasons why increase the production of consumer goods have a adverse consequences on natural environment including, dofrestation, and create pollution, however, there are several solutions to deal with this issue namely, introduce the strict laws against dofrestation, make mandatory for companies to treat the water contaminated.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My sister niece came It three years since I last seen When brother sister I went dads weekend decided would go camping beach That morning woke early packed everything car My dad brother work us girls got ready After everything packed small little town surrounded mountains absolutely nothing couple houses park river forests around My dad built small one roomed cabin summers back It wood stove one corner bunk beds fulfilling almost half cabin counter always messy food supplies would bring The whole ride messing giving one another horse bits claw pulling peoples seat belts would tighten across chest We also telling funny stories one another trying embarrass When got gravel road dad started making car slide back fourth scarring While everyone else laughing screaming That decided go bed early could wake get ready go beach noon one actually wanting go sleep Everyone trying make fun rest While everyone else taking yelling go sleep quite started yelling random stuff make mad When everything silent one would yell something like late sleep like baby would start yelling everyone else busted laughing That one funnest nights Everything hilarious look nt funny stupid I believe made fun possibly could It become one vivid memories We look back laugh", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many advantages to limiting car usage. The majority of people that own a car have a lot of stress due to gas money and paying for the car. Owning a car is a serious expence. There are other types of transportation that can be useful for the people.\n\nAccording to Source 1, in Vauban, Germany 70 percent of the people that live there do not own a car, and 57 percent sold a car in order to move there. People were starting to realize that when they owned a car they would always be tense. After getting rid of the car, they have been much happier and less stressed.\n\nSince there are less cars in the streets of Germany, people have stopped and realized how beautiful everything was. Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two, is now reilved as she walks the verdant streets where she can hear the swish of bicycles and the chatter of wandering children.\n\nIn Paris, France due to the cold nights and warm days, the car emissions have been trapped by the warmer layer of air. Sometimes, weather can be the effect of something bad happening to your car. In the everyday world, people have been killed and have been in serious accedents. Not only because of the weather but also because of the lack of resposibility and concentration it takes to drive a vehicle.\n\nAs said in Source 3, in Bogota, Colombia many people do not drive cars. The majority of Colombians hike, bike, skate, or take buses to work or wherever they need to go. The goal of this is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. Carlos Arturo Plaza, a buisnessman, said \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\" while he was riding his bicycle along with his wife next to him.\n\nAs people ride bike or hike or even just walk around their city, they can see and learn many new things just by being more aware of their surroundings. Cars have been in this world for a long period of time already. It's time to take a break from the madness and start realizing how beautiful life is and how beautiful it can be by not destroying it with such a machine. Not only will there be less stress, but the world will be a lot more safer than it was.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why do we have emotions? Why were we given thought of feeling and expressing them with our face? Our ability to do that is amazing and has helped us understand each other better through the years. As technology is always advantcing so has our understanding of other humans, but now scientists are creating machines to do that for us. To become our eyes and calulate the exact percentage of the basic emotions we feel, is this really needed, and if anything, might hurt us as a whole? I believe that this Facial Action Coding System is a waste of time and could harm the future of humanities ability to understand emotions.\n\nFirst, is how at the bare minium the Facial Action Coding System is worthless. From the \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" article by Nick D'Alto, some perks it is able to include from this is only the idea of face reconition allowing ads to know whether you are smiling or frowning at the ad to know whether to keep ads like that or move on with new ones. This is a huge flaw because people can already log into a computer happy or upset but the FACS isn't going to know that so the system is basically ruined. Another thing is it being able to change a lesson to suit a students emotions if they are feeling confused or bored. This could be a good thing but how is it going to change the lesson to make it better? Even if it does it still wouldn't mean it would make it better for the student they could still be bored with the lesson making the FACS useless again.\n\nSecond, if this thing becomes more widespread and popular to the extent of everyone can use it anytime, then that's taking able for humans to naturally understand one another's feelings without FACS. I already explained any ideas given in the article are useless but if one day everyone is using it in forms of video chatting or smart-glasses, this is taking away from the natural experience of human commuication. Take for example texting, texting is dimminishing the vaule of talking to one another face-to-face, if future generations this could lead everyone to be more un-social and that creates problems on their own, this could be the same with advancements we put into FACS, more people becoming reliant on FACS to the extent where when we don't have it we will become naive to socailizing.\n\nThird, is the invasion of privacy this can create. To look into a persons facial muscles to calulate the exact percentage of what they are feeling can be consider creepy and inhumane. Personally, to know that a computer knows exactly how I am feeling makes me feel uneasy. I know I am not the only one and others probably feel worst able this then I do. This was in the same vein as when the lie detector first was made, everyone was fancinated by a computer being able to tell if you are lying. However the person who made it regets ever making for its inconsistancy on being accurate. Who should say that FACS will always be accurate and falsely accuse other's emotions into a legal bind or hasty agument?\n\nIn conclusion, this essay is to prove my claim that this Facial Action Coding System is not worth anyones time, money, or thought. From it being basically useless without any sort of advancement including the loophole around ads to it really not helping students with lesson plans. Then the idea of us becoming more naive people and another reliant on technology to understand others. Finally, the inhumane way of distrubing our privacy with and it could also falsely calulate our emotions and cause more harm then good. WIth everything said this should give a clear view of that terrible invention we call FACS should be put away and never opened again and to take this as a learning experience.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People are facinated with the Man on the Moon and the idea of Martians, but most people do not think about life on Venus. Venus is the second planet from the sun and shares many geographical features with Earth. However, studying this planet is made difficult by the dense and toxic atmosphere, high temperatures, and violent weather. Despite this, some people think that Venus should still be explored, and the author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" is of this opinion. The idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers is well supported by the author as seen through the rewards of studying Venus and the progress that has been made towards studying Venus.\n\nFirst, the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers is well supported by the author as seen through the many rewards of studying Venus. After laying out the dangers of studying Venus, the author explains why scientists continue to study the planet. \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system\" (4). By studying Venus, astronomers and geologists can predict what might happen to Earth in the future. Gaining an understanding of Earth's future may well allow scientists to predict what happened in Earth's past. Scientists are eager to learn about the early years of Earth's past, as it is shrouded in mystery, and this thirst for knowledge motivates them to study Venus. In describing how similar Venus was to Earth, the author says, \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life\" (4). If there was once life on Venus, the similarity between it and Earth would grow. As with geology, if biologists can understand what caused life to cease on Venus, they might be able to predict how life on Venus and on Earth might have started. The author shows that scientists studying Venus reap the reward of being able to learn about Earth's geology and early life. By laying out the various rewards to be had from studying Venus, the author is strengthening his or her argument that Venus should be studied.\n\nSecondly, the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers is well supported by the author as seen through the large amount of progress that has been made towards studying Venus. Although the author describes how Venus could be studied from the air, scientists still desire to learn about Venus from the planet's surface. One of their solutions to the problem of getting equipment to last on the surface of Venus is to expirement with new materials. \"Simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the choas of Venus's surface and have lasted of three weeks in such conditions\" (7). Research and experimentation taking place on Earth is giving scientists and astronauts more options for studying Venus. Although conditions on Venus are not hospitable to life, these new scientific advances are making it possible for data-gathering equipment to be sent to the surface of Venus and last long enough to gather data. Other scientists are moving away from traditional electronics and looking into purely mechanical systems. \"Systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces\" (7). The alternative that has presented itself to would-be explorers of Venus is older technology, like that found in the earliest computers. Scientists have realized that modern technology is too fragile and that more durable technologies are needed. By turning to other forms of technology, scientists are widening their options for ways to study Venus. The author mentions three different ways that scientists are making progress towards being able to study Venus - from the air, using new materials, and using old technologies. The author's postion that Venus should continue to be studied is supported by the scientific advancements that are serving to make studying Venus a reality.\n\nIn conclusion, the author's opinon that Venus should continue to be studied despite the dangers is well supported by the rewards of studying another Earth-like planet and the advancements that have been made towards being able to effectively study Venus. Scientists have strong motivation for studying Venus, and new technologies are making it possible for them to overcome the challenges presented by Venus's harsh terrain. Although scientists studying Venus are unlikely to encounter any life forms, what they do discover will help them to understand Earth's past and shape our future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The empire State building builders faced couple Problems docking dirigibles mooring mast Some I nt even know I ll buildup The dirigible Now I never learned zeppelin I know one thing Do get front sides I The mast This thing failure nt question I chose Something else one multi CAPS questions The reason many things could go wrong This thing fall unless something really special forging building highOverall s long anyways problems Several others I forgot mention obvious reasons reason nt use zeppelins much anymore", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face on Mars is not an alien formation but just a simple play on eyes. The face just hides in the shadows on mars. One reason I think it is just a shadow is that in the comparison pictures from 1976 to 1998 and 2001 all look different. They all give a different look on the face. Another reason i think the face on Mars is fake is, if there were civilations on mars they would also on the 3D image. So if there are no homes or shelthers there, who made it? No one did. It is a natural formation. Just like the ones in the United States of America. In the U.S.A those types of formations form in the Midwest. The formation is actualy called a butte or mesa. People say it reminds them of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. This is why I think the face on Mars is just a natural formation and not the work of aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many individuals who think that hosting giant sporting festivals such as Olympic is a way of wasting the expense and the government should use that money on the other stuff more important than. However, I personally believe that organizing such events bring a host of advantages for a nation. \n\nThere are various compelling reasons why people think the government should not spend a fortune on organizing large festivals that resemble sports. In fact, the events\" requirement of infrastructure makes a substantial investment for host nation to ensure the sufficient availability of traffic and sports venues. Moreover, the lower level of development a country has, the more enormous investment it needs. Thus, while many priorities like environmental pollution or poor living standard become heated, it seemed that the financial burden for festivals is unnecessary, that was why the Brazil authority received a lot of criticism when it hosted the World Cup in 2014. \n\nIn spite of these arguments, I strongly believe that hosting such events has plenty of benefits influences on a country. Firstly, there are numerous tourists and visitors attend these events to support and lift up the morale of their teams. Local people observe a dramatic rise in the sales of their goods and services.\n\n Secondly, sports are the sources of entertainment and chirpy for followers, people can get golden opportunities to meet and witness the performance of their favorite stars. Thirdly, international sporting events also popularise a country to the world and thus the potential tourism industry of this country gets benefits from that. \n\nIn conclusion, it seems to me that there are many positive effects for holding international sporting events although this has some notable drawbacks.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock One important obstacles face thousandfoot dirigible adding stress buildings frame Therefore modified strengthened accommodate new situation NUM builders face obstacle safety Dirigibles used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable NUM line The greatest obstacle faced builders nature As winds shifting top building back dirigibles swiveled around mast Previous solutions dirigibles moored open landing fields could weighed back lead weights NUM line safe mooring mast Empire State Building Lastly obstacle faced law airships flying low urban areas NUM line made dirigibles could even approach area There several obstacles faced builders trying make Empire State building docking station", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" the author describes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. The use of this technology, to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom, is valuable. I believe this technology would be great to use in a classroom. It would really help the teacher with his or her lesson. Dr. Huang predicts that \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\". If a simple classroom computer can determine a students' emotions, that would be a great assistance to a teacher. The teacher would then know if he should go into greater detail or if he should make his lesson plan a little more interesting.\n\nHuman Beings can be really good at hiding their emotions. With the Facial Action Coding System no one would be able to hide their true emotions. If someone was really depressed, but they portray themselves to be happy, this technology could stop that person from hurting themselves or others. If a school therapist or school social worker had this technology it would make their jobs so much easier. They could sense what the students are really feeling, rather than what the students want them to think their feeling. Also, the school therapist would know if the patient would need to be prescribed any medicine.\n\nAnother reason why the Facial Action Coding System would be a good idea is because, as stated in the article, it could reveal so much about the science of emotions. The FACS (Factial Action Coding System) could detect a false smile. If you are not feeling geniunely happy, if you are just \"putting on a happy face\" this technolgy would be able to see through what your false act. This new technology could become the next big thing. It would be able to uncover the truth about alot of people.\n\nThe last argument I am going to state on why the FACS would be valuable on detecting students emotions is that the technology could tell whether a student is telling the truth or not. The article states in paragraph 8 that usually when someone squint their eyes slightly, to produce wrinkling at the corner of their eyes usually means that their not being thruthful. FACS uses muscle clues to determine whether a person if being truthful or not. This would be great in a classroom. For example, if someone is being bullied and they tell the teacher but the bully says he isn't bullying anyone, this would be great for the teacher. The teacher would know which one of her students is telling the truth.\n\nIn Conclusion, the Facial Action Coding System would be a superb idea. This new technology would not only be very interesting but it would also save many lives. This technology could be used in many different jobs. It could also help many people. With this technology you would no longer have to take someones word on how their feeling, even when you have a gut feeling telling you otherwise. Rather than assuming what someone is feeling you could now know for sure with the Facial Action Coding System.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is currently a contentious argument regarding the purpose of having cosmetic surgery since more and more people prefer to use this method to improve their appearance. Considering the factors that support the decision to choose this improvement method, there are various reasons which I will discuss in this essay. In terms of consequences, I personally believe that there is a positive development.\nIt is the fact that people have a wide variety of rationales to have cosmetic surgery. An obvious example of this is that people can design their new appearance in the way they wish to be look like. This is because a doctor could perform modern medical techniques such as modifying bone at the patients’ nose to change their real face, which natural face improvement cannot do. Another common reason is the increase in self-confidence. When people have plastic surgery, they tend to believe that their appearance will be more accepted by other people, helping them to feel more confident.\nContemplating the effects of people who have plastic surgery, there are many vital advantages. A common criticism in favour of this is the rise in productivity in workplace. When people feel more confident as a result of having cosmetic surgery, they tend to be more courageous to communicate with people in other departments, leading to the increasing workflow between two teams. Another classic example is building more networking. This is because people who positively improve their appearance tend to attract other people’s attention. As a result, more and more people might want to know them.\nIn conclusion, it is undeniable that cosmetic surgery could address people’s eagerness to have better appearance and be more confident, which, in my opinion, results in a positive consequence to both society and them. This is because they would have willingness to contact other people and draw other people’s attention to them, which could grow their connections.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created memoir happy I think hapiness says paragraph In neighborhood despite customs elsewhere culture came together great solidarity friendship mean happy friendly family In conclusion s mood I think created reasons", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars are benefits for getting you from point A to point B, but there are many other ways you can receive transportation that way. Cars can also get you there quicker, but its not worth what we are doing to our enviornment and ourselves. There are three major advantages about limiting your car use. It will help out our enviornment with the air pollution; you can hear the peacefulness of birds and kids playing, and its a financial rest.\n\nFirst and foremost, it will help out with our air pollution. \"Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog...\"(14). The gas we use to fuel up our vehicles is polluting the enviornment when we use it. If we used Paris as an example, we can have odd and even driving days for odd and even license plates (11). That means only half the people with cars would be driving on the road each day which could alter the air pollution. Another reliable example is Bogota, once a year they have a car free day to limit the air pollution (20). Carlos Arturo Plaza believes, \"[i]t's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution\" (24).\n\nIn addition, the neighborhood or city you are in wouldn't be as loud. Have you ever imagined a peaceful enviornment with no car horns or engine? Heidrun Walter said she was always tense and now she is happy without her car, because she can hear the swiss of bicycles and the chatterring of children playing (3). Rarely do I ever have peaceful moments unless I'm inside school, or at the neighborhood library. For example, a peaceful walk to school can mentally prepare me for my day ahead, and save my mother gas money.\n\nThe amount of money one pays for a car could be equilvalent to amount some else pays for their house. Also, when you get the car, you have to put gas in it for your engine to power up. Limited car use wouldn't just effect you as a person, but the economy as a whole. \"In previous bills, 80 percent of appropriations have by law gone to highways and only 20 percent to other transport\" (9). If we reduced our car usage, the United States wouldn't have to spend 80 percent of appropriations to highways and they could even it out more to other transportation use. Plus, if you didn't have to pay for gas every week just imagine how much money that would save you.\n\nLimited car use doesn't just effect you financially, but it also contributes positively to the enviornment. In additon, more peaceful moments can be added to your agenda of things to do. Cars are reliable for their speed and transportation, but when it comes to long term effects, I don't know if its really worth the risk.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars and traveling play a big and important role in today's society. They are used everyday by everyone, and are one of the leading causes of death in this world. Driverless cars seem to be a great alternative to driving.\n\nPeople travel every day whether that be to work, school, or the grocery store, they are always traveling. Imagine having a car that drove for you, that would make people's lives much easier. It would also save a lot of money, Google cofounder Sergey Brin forsees that these driverless cars would use half the fuel today's cars do. Google has had cars that could drive by themselves under specific conditions since 2009. They have driven more than half a million miles without a crash. Think about if everyone got one of these cars, the number of wrecks would decrease dramatically. But as of right now Google cars aren't 100% independent, they still let drivers know when to take over. Tesla has announced a 2016 release for a car that can drive on autopilot 90% of the time. I hate to say it but many of us have seen accidents caused from being under the influence of drugs. If these cars became more popular maybe those numbers will decrease. Some people may disagree with driverless cars but when they could save lives, and minimize the ammount of accidents that happen, im all for it.\n\nI believe everyone should get one of these cars. They will cause less accidents, and be cleaner for the enviorment because they are not using up as much gas. Driverless cars will someday be the new alternative to driving.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Emotion camitmint hope reasons author ended story when come back Saeng vowed silently spring snow melt gees return hibiscus budding I take test last paragraph shows emotion Next It shows comitmint says hibiscus coms back take test Lastly shows hope try redeam These reasons used last paragraph", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Ever wondered how your peers feel like but don't know, well now you do! Due to new technology by Dr. Paul Eckman, you can now tell how someone is feeling. But is this new technology useful? And is it reliable? Well let me inform you about it.\n\nIs this new technology FACS (Facial Action Coding System) actually useful? Yes it is, what if \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\", well as stated in paragraph 6, the computer \"... could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This technology could contribute to the teacher, in multiple ways.\n\nWell according to Dr Eckman, he has programmed the system to classify \"six basic emotions- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness...\" These six basic emotions are then \"associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles\". These muscles are Frontalis pars lateralis (above your eyes) which raise your eyebrows when you're surprised; your orbicularis oris (around your mouth) tightens your lips to show anger.\n\nWell now that you no about this new technology, you might be able to figure out how someone is feeling, just by the facial expressions that they show. And yes it is useful, and actually reliable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping will help us to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today.\nSpeaking about traffic problems, I always think about Moscow. No town I have ever been in has such a big trouble with road traffic. A huge quantity of public transport types, a few cars for one family, all of it creates a constant flow of traffic.\nOf course the increase popularity of IT-jobs and freelance helps people to spend more time home. The Home-office concept appeared relatively recently but a lot of people choose it already. I think after pandemic this type of work will be the only viable option.\nThe same situation is observed with education process. The almost a year pupils and students spend in Zoom and Skype. It's hard for me to say if online study has the same quality as a physical communication with the teacher in the audience. But the time savins are obvios.\nI can't disagree that home office and online studies will help us to avoid daily traffic jams. But also I wouldn't say that it's the only way.\nWhen city infrastructure gives me a possibility to get to the place by foot, I would love to do it. If the city provides an opportunity to ride bicycles or scooters a lot of people would try it. In this way some people will leave the car at the garage. It seems to me that alternative types of transport become more popular each day. If the city goverment will support this trend, the amount of traffic will reduce without any additional measures.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often argued that educating children to become good citizens is the teachers’ responsibility, while others believe parents should be the ones undertaking this job. I strongly feel that although children spend most of their time at schools, parents must be responsible for raising their kids according to the correct moral values. \n\nOn the one hand, some people think that since children spend a great amount of time in the schools, it is the teacher’s job to make sure that the students learn how to become great citizens. This is because parents do not have enough time to provide their kids knowledge regarding moral and ethical values as they are working. As an illustration of this, several parents wake up early to go to work and when they arrive at night, their children are already sleeping. \n\nOn the other hand, It is the parents’ responsibility to teach their children how to behave in the right manner in society because they were the ones who made a choice of building a family. Therefore, even though sometimes it is hard to balance work and personal life, mothers and fathers have to make time to help their kids to grow up and be exemplary members of the community they live in. Thus, the burden of educating youth cannot be put on school teachers.\n\nIn conclusion, whilst there will always be those who believe teachers are responsible for educating children about ethical and moral values necessary for life, I am conviced that this should be done by the parents as they are responsible for bringing up their kids in the best way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While driverless cars do seem like a good idea, there are only a few things that I can think of that are bad about them. I feel that driverless cars are a good idea, and that the states or the majority of the states should be allowed to let the citizens have them. There are many differant reasons that I think driverless cars can be a good idea. I feel that they could help in many ways, and prove to be a good thing for many people.\n\nOne reason that I think driverless cars are a good idea is because there are some people who are blind and have appointments or jobs that they need to get to. With the help of a car that can fully drive itself people that are blind or have anyother thing wrong with them can get to places that they need to be without depending on another person to drive them around.\n\nAnother reason I think these cars would be a good idea is because if there is a person that wants to be wreckless when they drive, they will not be able to. With the car controlling where the person goes, if it is a fully driven by the computers, then they will not be able to do anything wreckless or cause any problems. Along with that there wouldnt be any problems with speeding or violating any laws while on the road. If a computer and a lot of sensors are controlling the car then the amount of problems on the road will decrease.\n\nThere are many problems that can be fixed because of fully self driving cars. With a few years and a lot more money we can have self driving cars. And with the help of many people working self driving cars we can make the roads not only safer, but we can also make more people with disabilities more free to do what they want.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the method of using code to determine an emotion on a child's face in the classroom has some good ideas but it has some major flaws. There are two flaws I'm mainly concerned about. These flaws are not an impossible problem to fix, in fact the creator of the software even overlooked them. These flaws can be fixed in time and definitely won't remain a problem if they reach the classroom.\n\nAccording to the passage the computer can see the look on the child's face and sense if it's bored or confused but not every child reacts with their face. Some children get disgusted or worried or even angry with schoolwork and show that emotion and the text shows no evidence of the software\n\nbeing able to account for that. Some children can be sleepy and the computer could mistake that for boredom and change the lesson entirely and make change it from something the child was fine with. On the other hand if the child is bored then making the lesson more \"exciting\" might not make the child want to do it the child still might not feel the need to do the lesson. Another thing the passage states is that ordinary computers can't run the software so we then have to end up paying much more money for computers that can run this software that might be heavily flawed.\n\nSo I think the Facial Action Coding System still needs some work before it can enter the classroom but in all its not a bad idea at all. Just give it some time and teach the software how to adapt to a wider range of emotion and it should be ready for the classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many advantages throughout the world that would come from limiting car usage. Countries have been limiting and getting rid of cars and it has only ended up becoming a benifit. If we stop using cars so much we can avoid things that about to happen soon. For example, greenhouse gasses are going to run out, cars cause financial issues, and the more cars there are being used the more polution there will be in the world.\n\nNowadays communities like Vauban are rising up all over the world. People have given up their cars to live i that community or bought a space towards the edge of the community to park their cars. About 70% of the community gave up their cars to live there, 50% sold their cars to live in Vaubans. People in Vauban were interviewed and some say they are much happier without a car because they were tense with one. In Europe the way of living like Vauban has spread in Europe as a trend. Stores are placed on main streatsd instead of malls so you can get there easily without a car.\n\nFor a while there was a partial driving ban in Paris. Paris had smog as bad as the pollution in Beijing which is one of the most polluted cities in the world. About 4,000 drivers were fined and 27 were impounded for not complying with the temporary car ban. The people of France blamed Diesel fuel for the pollution as 67% of vehicles in France run on Diesel. The temporary bans on were erased when the smog was cleared a few days after.\n\nFor three years Bogota, Columbia has dedicated a day to a day with no cars. In this day people can only use busses and taxis as a form of automobile transtoprtation. The goal is said to be to promote alternative methods of transportation and reduce smog. Violaters were charged with $25 fines. Later on, the cities Cali and Valledupar, joined the event. People got around walking, biking, and hiking.\n\nLimiting car uses can lead to better things. Less pollution is definitely one of the benefits of driving less due to the smog produced. People have been in better financial situations and have been living better lives because of it. We will soon be running resources so the less we use the resources we have, the more we will have for the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dr Huang is a Prof. at Advanced Science at the University of Ilinois Also with Prof. Nicu which is from the University of Amsterdam.They both created a machine\n\nthat can tell thier humans emotions by thier face.The machine constructs a 3-D model of the face and use's all 44 major muscles in the model of the face.Dr Huang wants to use this machine in a class to teah lessons so if the students get bored he can switch up the lesson.I disagree with Dr Huang because we are all different and we arent always going to like every class we all have different classes we would rather be in.\n\nI Disagree with Huang becuase evryeone prefers different things. Line in the text it says \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal. This shows the machine is can be wrong.Its not 100% accurate so the machine might tell the instructor wrong therefor he willl switch the lesson and it willl still be the same.Also people can fake smile and the machince will get it wrong. Kids will be able to trick the machine into thinking the kids are happy and the machine will be pointless.These are the reasons why i think people should not use the machine\n\nin class to modify lessons.\n\nIn conlusion if the machine is able to be 100% accurate to tell the emotion then it should be able to be used in class but other then that it shouldnt be used due to the reaons in pargraph 2.In the future if it gets better then it would be more helpful in class but as of 2018 is should not be used.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can you imagine buying Driverless Cars? I can imagine a point of time were people no longer buy driverless cars, because they could eventually get worthless. In the story it say's that people are still waiting on that moment were they can call for driverless cab's to take them anywhere they desire. I feel that it might be driverless cars in the future, but they are are going to have to make new laws in rules to keep pedestrians safe.\n\nDriverless cars can be negative or positive polarity, because they can be good and an way but can also be bad an a way. The laws may change to keep people safe from getting hurt I don't feel that Driverless cars are the best thing to do but it may happened in the future in the story it say's that none of the car's are completely driverless, because they all work the right way with no problems.\n\nHuman drivers have to be ready at all times incase an alert, and the situation were ther're driverless cars and getting new laws. I don't feel Driverless cars would be be a problem nut if cars are messing up than they use Driverless cars as something new but it can hurt many people with cars driving by itself or doing the opposite of what your'e wanting it to do.\n\nHow would you feel if there were Driverless cars in the future, what would you do ?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Citizens are exposed to a society with advertising. In my opinion, it encourages us especially to consume without thinking and young people especially need protection from it.\n\nConsumers are encouraged to spend money on what they do not need. Advertisements manipulate people by employing glamorous, successful people. Then the employed celebrates use the products they are endorsing, for instance, they attend TV programs wearing the newest clothes, in order to lead the latest trend and this is so persuasive that consumers will buy the products while they actually do not require. Moreover,the citizens are always sold products without awareness. For example,when they watch a football match, the billboards surrounding the pitch sell the products they are advertising and if you watch a blockbuster , you very probably see products placed throughout the film.It means that consumers are influenced even when they are relaxing.\n\nAdvertisements bridge consumers and manufacturers and it informs consumers what choices they have, but it does not mean advertisements should not be regulated, the consumers ,in particular, young generation need protection form society and family. Above all, alcohol products should display that juveniles can not buy and tobacco advertisements must be banned.The products aim at young generation must be censored strictly, and they must display specific usages and harm. On the other hand, parents should protect their children from exposing to advertising such as the newest i-phone,it is not necessary to buy the newest i-phone only for the newest trend but the young is seduced easily, without the protection form their parents, they will lost themselves in the commercial society.\n\nIn conclusion, we are influenced by advertisements throughout all time and everywhere.The society and family must reduce the young generation’s exposure to advertising.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper Computers today negative effect people The valuable time getting daily exercise reduced see family enough costs outrageous Owning computer surely good idea sitting around day idea workout Having computer would bad physical lifestyle Clicking mouse typing away moving hands whole body An individual nt use computer daily f large amounts time would healthier someone always uses computer I remember seeing commercial children lives eneded later life computer usage tween Not unhealthy antisocialism probable Many kids even adults spend precious family time playing sims creating ideal family This however acceptable Spending time family something precious When asked computer usage said could easily became addicted turns addicted family suffer They stop inviting places You would nt want loose people going ther another CAPS shouts computer You another virus uh oh s deleting hardware scholastic essays important bookmarked websites sentimental photographs Do idea much would cost even try retrieve data Well d alot I know youre probably thinking This could nt happen reality yes storing things computer much riskier hard copy It also save money Furthermore appliances use electricity re even plugged outlet So get electric bill nt surprised computers costly s worth one Computers another unnecessary thing life It take away overall health reduce family time cost big bucks It fact survive without computer But without hjealth Well d dead I consider ideas", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars may be modern and use half of what todays taxis use . Yet they are not truly driverless, they still alert the driver to take over in certain conditions , for example pulling in and out of drive ways or driving through road work or accidents. Which brought them to the idea of embedding streets with an electrical cable that sends radio signals to a reciever on the front and end of the car , which is stated in the passage. These smart road systems worked well but require massive upgrades to existiing roads , which is simply too expensive. So with out the smart roads a whole lot of sensors are needed on the car , one specific sensor is the special touch sensor which makes sure that the driver keeps their hands on the wheel at all times . Besides that there is also seats that viberate to alert the driver and flashing lights on the window shields , which would add on to the price of a car. Also stated in the passage that so far none of the cars are completely driverless. They can steer , accelerate and brake themselves but they still notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills . This means the human driver must be alert and ready to take over at all time. Which might not always happen , a driver may not always be attentive of the road ahead even with alerts included in the car. Which brings up the case of a drivers, passengers , and pedestrians saftey , and lawmakers know that saftey is best achieved with alert drivers , which is stated in the passage. Traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. Infering to why in most states it is illegal even to test computer driven cars. Yet even if traffic laws change , new laws willl be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. If an accident were to occur due to the technology failing , who is to blame the driver or the manufacturer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A new computer softawre sytem has been developed to read tiny hints of facial expressions to help people better understand others emotions! I wouldn't think this would be vauluable at all , in\n\nfact I\n\nthink this would be a tremendous\n\nwaste of money. While I see the purpose of this , and yes it more than likely has a\n\ntargeted auidience I personally don't believe that is the school environment. Its all fine and well using this technology to read expressions of paintings, and even people. I believe the workplace , such as an office building, would largely benifit in the happieness of their employees using this software. Then again I also believe that is the targeted market. In the article it states that your average home computer can't run this software, the already tight school budget can barely afford its slowly obselete computers now yet alone state of the art expensive computers. The software itself can't be cheap either, After all someone wouldn't develop this type of software and hand it for free.\n\nThis could also be a huge invasion of privacy for some students. When most students are upset it is seen and observed by either their peers or by their teachers. This is thanks and possible to every humans ability read body language and facial expression just by looking atsomeone. The same could be said from each of the other emotions such, as disgust , anger, and happieness. When student wants someone to know their emotion the person will know. Now what if they don't? That's where this system could be used, but also where it could invade privacy. If student dosen't want someone knowing their emotional state for whatevr reason it may be , don't they have a right for people not finding out? Well sure, using the system to subtly detect what they could possibly be feeling could help resolve this, it could also make it worse. What if the student lashes out on the person using it for invading their privacy, or what if the machine is wrong and the wrong emotion is read. All reasons to keep something like this out of our school environments.\n\nNot enough evidence for you? Okay lets say you have a tecaher use this software on their students. The teacher scans the room and discovers that over ninety percent of the class is disgusted by their teaching. How would this make the tecaher feel? Probably not that great. Maybe this could lead to the tecaher improving their style of tecahing, but i thinknot. What I believ would happen is eitehr one of two things. One the teacher continues tecahing and acts harshley towards their students, as an act of retaliation for their combined disgust.Or two, the teacher feels inadequite of their skills and quits tecahing to pursue a different career.\n\nIn all I think something like this should stay away from any school, and be reserved for it's target marketplace.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Did you know that mars was created naturaly as a natural landform? Does Mars have a simular landform as Earth? If aliens has created Mars, where are they now? The passage Unmasking the face on Mars has the answers to all of those.\n\nI believe that Mars was created as natural landform just like Earth. It has simular landforms as Earth. Mars has a dry sandy desert like climate simular to Earth. Except Earth has alot of different types of climates. If Aliens has made Mars why did they make it simular to Earth's desert climate? If aliens did make the climate for Mars it propbably would have been way different than a desert climate. Earth was made naturally and has naturally made several climates. The desert climate is one. Aliens could not have possibly made Mars because if they did where did they go? Why did they leave? They probably would have stayed and lived on Mars if they had created it.\n\nMar's desert climate has very simular landforms as Earth's desert climate. Garvin from the passage Unmasking the face on Mars has said ''It reminds me most of middle Butte in Snake River Plain of Idaho''. That was from the 12th paragraph. Garvin has said this while he was looking at the pictures of the landforms. In paragraph 12 of the passage Unmasking the Face on Mars says '' What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa---- landforms common around the American West''. That's another example the Mar's climate has simular landforms as Earth's desert climate. Scientist have said that Earth was like venus at first and then came together and formed on what it is like now naturally.\n\nAliens could have not possibly built Mars. Mars was probably created simular to how Earth was created. Scientists have even said that along time ago on Mars there use to be water there because they have found spots on mars simular to Earth that rivers run are running on. Now it looks dried up and something has happen to Mars to where it turned Dry and desert like. Earth was the same way along time ago before humans existed. It was a hot fire lava vocanic type of climate until Earth has changed and made several climates and water.\n\nEarth was made naturally and by comparing how Earth was made and the simular features it has that Mars has I believe that Mars was created naturally like Earth. If aliens did create Mars for the simular features that Earth has why did they choose that climate?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\" What have Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, Bob Dole, the U.S Chamber of Commerce, and the AFL-CIO all, in their time, agreed on? Answer: Abolishing the electoral college! Well i think otherwise. Electoral College is a process, not a place , which the election of the President is by a vote in Congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. The Electoral College do consists of choosing the electors, reasons to keep the Electoral College method of choosing the president.\n\nThe start of the Electoral College is well handingly choosing the electors, which consists of 538 electors each of course must be qualified. Most of 270 electoral votes are required to elect the president. The number of members in its Congressional delegation is equal to the entitled allotment of electors in your state, one is for each member in the house of Representatives plus two for the Senators. For the purposes of Electoral College, Columbia District is allowed 3 electors and is treat like a state. and when i say \"state\" for this topic i mean the District of Columbia.\n\nWell backed up reasons to keep the Electoral College method of choosing the president, A outcome of an Electoral College vote is possible, just look back at the year 2000 it was less likely then a come over the popular vote the Reason for that is the winning candidate's share of the Electioral College expanded his share of the popular vote. For example, Obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney.\n\n\"Electoral College is a process, not a place \" each and every step of the Electoral college method comes out to be a well handed system. Its more then enough fairness included when choosing the Presisent and Vice President. Popular vote is more based on \"winner-take-all\" System thats awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate, unlike the Electoral College which is a process that consists of choosing the electors, reasons to keep the Electoral College method of choosing the president.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" is about how Dr. Paul Eckman created the Facial Action Coding System, or FACS, to analize emotions such as happiness, suprise, anger, disgust, fear and sadness by facial expressions and muscle movements and in this article they use their technology to read the face of Mona Lisa by da Vinci. The article states that a 3-D computer constructs a model of the face and all of the 44 muscles in face to help analize the emotions of a persons face. Although this technology is very advanced and could be used to discover and explore new oportunities, is the information valuable enough to be completely true? Some people have facial expressions that could mean something completely different and this could lead to many flaws in the technology and not make it reliable enough for people to believe that it actualy works.\n\n\"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" starts the article with percentages of a certain amout of an emotion. Since numbers usually influence people into thinking that numbers are associated with something important, it leads them to believe that this article must be important in some way, but nowhere else in the article are there any other numbers or tests that show that the analization of the face is the correct emotion. Not having any proof that this technology truly works makes it seem to be not very reliable and the results to be untruthful. The article states,\"\" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts. \" then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"\" this statement is not reliable because students have many expressions and emotions, there are many things that goes on in everyone's life and it could make them feel any kind of emotion and it does not always have to be associated with class or the lesson. If using FACS in classrooms would help improve the lesson, then it would be useful, but most people would prefer for this to be tested in a real classroom, then the students would be asked what they were feeling, and then repeat the hypothesis of seeing if the lesson changed enough to help students understand the lesson better and to be supported by multiple tests and facts.\n\nThis technology can be very helpful for education and more, but until there is more proof and support that this actually does work then the people would be more likely to purchase FACS all over the world. The Facial Action Coding System could be another kind of da Vinci code, but it needs more work and proof to gain the complete trust of the people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From the past decades, there have been many renovations of home building and construction for living in the society, and it is particularly related to the residents ‘ lifestyle. building or residences are not only shelters but represented the cultures, customs and memories of people who used to stay there. Many cities in each part of the world are changing the city planning followed the increasing populations. Somehow people could afford the house or mansion, they might be curious more about the background of the land or the residences that they were leaving than only just staying for their beliefs and for prosperity in their lives. \r\n\r\nIn China, they have the scope before building the residence that should be related to the location; the houses that had a river or canal in front of them or located in front of the mountains, claimed to be the best place with resident horoscope and would bring wealthiness and financial stability to the house members. Or in some other Asian countries, It is forbidden to live in house which has a history of murders or crimes , because people who lived in those houses , might face bad luck and bad situations in the future. Thus, it depends on the resident's personal aspects and beliefs for selecting the houses. The way that they found out the history of the house might come from the ex-house owner's storytelling or from their ancestor that they believe these sources and narrates from generation to generation.\r\n\r\nHowever, in this decade, people decided to own house that closed to their workplaces or was convenient to access public transport. And another factor that these generations have been concerned about was the smart city option and the friendly environment atmosphere. It is preferable to live in a city where there is no pollution in the air or water and provide good waste management. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the history of land or house is not the main factor for selecting permanent residences but we should concern about the convenience and good environment that were surrounded each house. To find out the myth or history of house or village might be not as important as the friendly surrounding to ecosystem in our community and this world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As a scientist for NASA I think that their was not piece of aliens left and that they did not form the face of Mars.The face of Mars had been growing over the faces of year and if aliens left it behind as an artifact then why would it still be growing and getting bigger.It something that is forming on its own to show that maybe one day there will be life on Mars.They have send Space craft into space 3 times already they where in the year of 1976,1998 and 2001,Each time that they have taken the picture from space everything has came back a little bigger each time so it must have something that the planet is doing.\n\nThey had to roll the spacecraft 25 degress to center the face in the field of view,each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1,56 meter,compared to 43 per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo.If there were objects in the picture like an airplane on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramides or even small shacks,you could see what they were!There for there is no evidence of a alien anywhere.\n\nResearcher think that it is forming something that forming from the planet nothing else not aliens or anything because they have not left anything there and if they where forming it we would know because the images would show someting or some king of evidence.I think that it is something to show that there will be lfe on Mars and the planet is suddenly forming something that will keep us living and we have air and water to drink and to have a way of building thing.\n\nMars could be forming by Aliens because it could be there sign to have humans come to their planet and it could be safe we don't know.We have to find something that is going to prove to us whatever is forming this could be a god thing or a bad thing.NASA thinks that it is something that is forming that is going to bring life to the plant,They believe that its going to help but it could be Aliens trying to put us in danger.When we get evidence of something true then we will have the real answer to what we need .\n\nRight now I think that it is something that i just forming onto the planet that is going to bring air that we can breath and water that we can drink I think that the face is a sign that scienctist need to go over there and try something new or find out some more imfromation about everything that is going on.The people that have put in work thinking it is aliens there is no prove of that and untill we do don't think that.Its a sign that one day there will be life on Mar's.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders empire state building faced many obstacles idea docking dirigible building height Dirigibles mostly outside US made hydrogen rather helium Hydrogen extremely flamable gas dangerous highly populated downtown Safety major concern accident like Hindenburg something want risk The ability docking lightweight flyer also difficut With strong winds tethor cable attached back end air craft would blown around making aviator blimp hard control Also law stating aircrafts may fly low buildings stated especially incodent hindenburg New Jersey A blimp could possibly hit spire another building The reality docking lightweight aircrafts major saftey difficult concern These obstacles builders empire state building faced", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The picture demonstrates the procedure and workflow for university entry for high school graduates.\nIn general, the whole process for the university application can be divided by three phases, including the initial application, verification process and subjects selection.\nFirst of all, students, who have obtained the high school degree, have to complete an application form which can be downloaded from the website of university. The completed form can be passed to Administration department of university by email or in person. Around 2 weeks later, the student will receive a provisional acceptance issued by administration department to ask for further document submitted in the inital phase. The required document must be compiled and sent back to the department within the specified time which is shown on the acceptance.\nA 2 weeks later, the rejection notice will be distributed to the ineligible applicant after verified the application with the regarding document. The unsucessful applicant can apply for the alternative course and resubmit the completed application form to Administration department; otherwise the application is regarded as cancellation. At the same time, the successful applicant will collect an acceptance letter to compete enrolement. The eligible applicant will have a registration with the relevant Dean after selected subjects. After finished the registration, the student can enter university.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles allow dirigibles dock For instance paragraph talks Hindenburg bursting flames New Jersey much dangerous would highly populated areas New York", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The diagrams show the weekly pounds spent on fast foods in the United Kingdom and the volume of fast foods purchasing in gram for two decades, from 1970 to 1990.\nIn general, the high-income group spent much money on hamburger foods which occupy the highest sales on fast foods in the U.K, by 45 pounds per week. Whereas the lowest expenditure on fast foods is pizza approximately 6 pounds a week. In the volume of consumption, there is a rapid rise on fish & chips sales over the period contrary to a continuous reduction on pizza spending in the decades.\nTo start with the fast-food spending, hamburgers is the highest sales of fast foods per week in the U.K. In the high and average incomes classes, the amount of hamburger sales are the top one in their spending on fast foods, 45 pounds and around 32 pounds a week respectively. Fish & chips spending in the high-income group hits around 16 pounds a week, compared with the spending on pizza almost 19 pounds a week. This is followed by average income classes whose weekly expenditures on fish & chips and pizza are 25 pounds and around 12 pounds individually. Conversely, those with lower income spend much on fish & chips approximately 16 pound a week which is the top one of their fast food costs, compared with hamburgers and pizza which are around 14 pounds and 6 pounds a week.\nGoing into more detail with regard to the fast-food consumption in gram, there was not significate increase on fish & chips spending in the start of the period. They were a slight rise on its consumption from around 100 grams in 1970 to 150 grams in 1980, followed by a surge in 1985 by 300 grams and a further jump of 200 grams in 1990. The consumption on hamburgers had the same trend with fish & chips over the period. In the beginning, there was a slow upward on purchasing of hamburgers between 1970 and 1985 from around 30 grams to 100 grams. Then, a sharp increase in the consumption of hamburgers was 300 grams in 1990. In a contrast, a continuous decline on purchasing of pizza reflected between 1970 and 1985 from 300 grams to 200 grams and subsequent a plateau discovered in 1990.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article talks about Prof. Thomas Huang of the University of Illinois working in collabration with Prof. Nicu Sebe of the University of Amsterdam developing a software that can read people emotions. They have tested this software on the painting of Leonardo da Vinci's painting called Mona Lisa\n\nI think we can use this software in classrooms read students emotions. This could tell us how the students are feeling about the topic that they are working or they are about move onto. In the aritcle it talks about Mona Lisa \"Shes 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. Its the subject of Leonardo da Vincis Renaissance painting, Mona Lisa at least according to some new computer software that can recognize emotions.\n\nThis could tell us how the students are feeling about the topic that they are working or they are about move onto. This could also tell wether the student has a question or let us that the student might not understand the topic. If schools use this software, our numbers in passing the test could go higher up.\n\nThis could tell us how much is a student interested in the topic. We can use this software in colleges to like if the student is interested in the class or is being forced by his/her parents to take that class.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story Winter Hibiscus paragraph show Saeng starting over In spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding life starting fresh way Although miss old life grandmother well fine toothed comb She making effort take test By relating test shows ready give loss grief", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Plan My claim would have to be that computers who identify human emotions would be a valubale thinkg because many students come to class felling down or sad sometimes and instead of them keeping i to them selves.\n\nSomebody would hopefully be kind enough and ask if there doing okay or if they need somebody to talk to instead of just having to go thruogh it them selves, just like a child going thru depresion at the end of the day you want to look for those children and help them. But another think would be why would we need this in class instead of using money for this technology they should fix the schools and bring more learning experiences around the country instead of wasting money to see how somebody is feeling youll make somebody happy by just saying have a wonderful day today like the person grading this test i hope you have a wonderful day and i hope at the end of the day i pass this because its a big part of high school and im clearly not the smartest student but at the end of the day i get what i have to do done and dont complain but this invension would be a good project to go around at the airport or banks just to see peoples reaction when they walk in and as there going out to see the diffrence of there face reactions. the mona lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile while it shows how much this computer can do,imagine a computer that knows when youre happy or sad, thatll be really creapy once it knows how you're feeling.\n\nLIke example \"if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen a similar ad might follow. but if you frown the next ad will be different.\" this sounds good so when you want certain kind of apps to pop up but once the system knows how youre feeling is another thing instead of seeing how im feeling they should help out people in need who need the help to help them keep there emotions better, Also crazy how theis technology would make it easy for a computer to recongnize when a student is becoming confused or bored. My claim would have to be that I would wan this in my class or around my school beacuse i personaly feel like many students will come into school with a diffrent mood if they knew there expresions or feelings are all being detected, instead of them coming sad theyll probabaly chear up a bit since they maybe dont want anybody to know how there feeling and itll try to hid it and change there mood from what it was at first. This process all beigins with a computer that constructs a 3-D computer model of the face, all 44 major muscles in the model unit must move like a human muscles. Some coding system facial expressions that its going to be able to read is six basic emotions like happiness,surprise, anger, disgust, fear ,and sadness, many people are not gonna like the idea of this beause people don want to let everbody know what they are feeling or what there thinking of.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recently growing issue censorship libraries came attention This unfortunent extreme People right unmolested knowledge censoring libraries direct violation right Libraries meant place learning kept way History filled moments glorious inglorious We nt always proud want happens events remain irrespective whether choose acknowledge To think turning blind eye less clean make go away unrealistic also totally ignorent facts I realise things chilldren see hear I m suggesting expose things I m merely saying trying hide deem unclean neither right good idea general We ca nt shelter children forever sooner latter learn things wish nt This inevitable Life nt seek hide darker side us hide children serve little handicap Do children need protected things Yes time role induvidual parent protect child Protect children nt expence everyone else Why views hinder others Those would persume know people see touch Those prudish enough believe people need protected natural form history desires right preahaps even less everyone else interfere induvidual decision making People right make choices believe right force oppinions others This essay make difference said needed said thus served s purpose With task completed I finnish good concious", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One time I getting arrows one ring arrows So instead ringing bell hundred times I waited quitley patiently I waiting min come one come said thank patienet ringed I could leave That time I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the new Facial Action Coding System (FACS), old boundries can now be broken. This new system allows special computers to recognize the emotions a peson is expressing. The software is so advanced that it can even depict if someone's presented emotions are real or forced. Dr. Thomas Huang, who invented FACS, agruges that this technology would be a great improvement in classrooms, and he is right. By using a Facial Action Coding System, it would help engage students in their acedemics and allow them to reach a new level of potential.\n\nIf the FACS was in classroom, their computers would have the capacity to detect when a student is bored, confused, or frusterated. Having technology that could read students' emotions would allow the computers to detect if students were bored, not challenged, or struggling, which would make the computer \"then modify the lesson,\" predicts Dr. Huang, to be more interesting, advanced, or activate helpful tools. This would be a major improvement in schools. If FACS was implimented in schools, students would be less likely to get bored, left behind, or stressed.\n\nIf the Facial Action Coding System when into affect, and student no longer felt bored, stressed, or left behind, think of how that would change students' potential! Students would have improved GPAs and grades. They would be less likely to fall short in classes, and therefore take more advanced classes. It is even likely that more students would not drop out of high school, and more would get into college, and with better scholarships.\n\n\"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,” states Dr. Huang. “So computers need to understand that, too.” If computers in high schools were able to understand their users' feelings, the students would have greatly improved learning experiences. When there is an increase in educational tools that help students, they will be more likely to succeed. If students' had the oppurtunity to benefit from FACS in high schools, their impact on society could be so much greater.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood author created memoir happy thankful He grew traditional Cuban home parents cooked able get great sense family Not blood relatives everyone would There racism within neighborhood They came togather Many people dinner everynight His parents loved sacrificed lot His simple house home These things created happy thankful mood", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders mooring mast plan construction well consider potential risks mast One reason mast s fate sealed safety issues Most dirigibles blimps used hydrogen rather helium If one blimps fall sky many people would killed New York many people walk everywhere The builders also needed considered violent winds high altitude These winds could blow dirigibles around making difficult keep one spot passengers board refuel The winds constantly shifting They could blow blimps onto spires Empire State Building causing burst fall ground Unfortunately law prevents airships flying low urban areas This would make illegal ship ever tie building even approach area I think Al Smith focused keeping height record potential dangers mast", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Internet has changed the way people interact and fetch their surrounding information. More and more people are now preferring it on social media. I believe that even though there are a few drawbacks of the trend, the advantages are far more.\n\nFirst of all, the paramount advantage of social media is that it allows people to stay connected no matter how far they might be living. It acts a good platform for people to stay in touch with friends and relatives who live abroad. To illustrate, more than half of the world population is connected through social media according to a survey done in 2018. Moreover, everyone is running a rat race, no one has any time to go out and interact with others as everyone is running a rat race in this fast paced world. So, with the help of these sites, they can easily stay in contact by simply dropping a message or making a call during their work or school time.\n\nIn addition, time is another major factor why people are getting distant from news as no one has the time to sit and watch TV or read newspaper as they did in the bygone era. Now, they can simply go on the social sites and get the news they require. To exemplify, pages on Facebook such as ‘Quint’ posts the news in 60 words for people to read quickly. Further, people get a chance to get news of local and international happening as it provides opportunity for locals to express their viewpoint.\n\nOn the other hand, it has been widely seen that due to social websites, the face to face interaction has dramatically plunged and is not as strong. Furthermore,, the news on such social websites are written by non professional journalist. There have been several cases when a false information created chaos and a toxic environment.\n\nIn recapitulation, I think that it is a boon that social media allows people to stay in contact and updated with the surrounding at the same place. It is suggested that an amalgamation of real and virtual friend should be maintained and people should always verify the news they get do so that harmony can be maintained.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \" Making Mona Lisa Smile, \" the author describes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotion. They also include information about using technology like the Facial Action Coding System to read the emotional expressions of students. While reading the article, the idea of facial recognition interested me. A system that will simply focus on your reaction, take that information, process it, then give you an alternative lesson to help you spesifically is very facinating. The Facial Action Coding System could especially assist kids who are too anxious to ask questions in class or raise their hand for extra clarification. This system could also help the teachers out as well.\n\nThe statement in paragraph six states, \" A classroom computer would recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson like an instructor. \" This helps out a lot of teachers and makes it easier for them to get through more lessons quicker. Every kid is different and has their own prefrences of learning. For example, a long lecture and note taking might interest and help Timmy learn the lesson more, but doesn't keep Adam's attention. Adam prefers more interactive and hands on learning style. In a classroom, a human instructor cannot tend to every child's preference, but the classroom computers can, with the Facial Action Coding System.\n\nAnother reason the Faction Action Coding System would benefit in classrooms is helping the kids who mentally can't ask for extra help if they needed it. For example, lets says Voilet has horrific anxiety and the thought of raising her hand makes her want to vomit. Violet will definitley struggle more if she's too anxious to ask questions about the lesson. If the Coding System was used in the classroom, this would be no problem. She wouldn't have to say a word to the teacher. The computer will simply read her facial expression and modify the lesson for her. If Violet seemd confused, the computer will further explain and modify the lesson just for her.\n\nSometimes, teachers cannot thoroughly answer every student's question and give them one on one help. There is only so much time per class period and only one, maybe two teachers per classroom. If the Facial Action Coding System was used, the kids who need that extra clarification can get it. The article states thats if the student seems confused, it will modify the lesson and make it easier for them to understand. The teachers wouldn't have to run around trying to answer all the student's questions, when the computer could do it in a snap.\n\nIn conclusion, the Facial Action Coding System should be used in classrooms everywhere. It can only benefit adn ensure that all of the kids in the classroom are getting the learning experience they deserve. The Coding System helps the kids and teachers as well. Students will be more comfortable and at ease. The teacher will be able to use more time for the kids who need mor help than others, too.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The electoral college is not a good thing and it certainly messes things up it takes votes away from people, It changes the votes to make a person lose presidency even by changing the senators, and it's a winner take all system these dont turn out good no matter what. It's even overthrowing the people with the popular vote yes it sadly is possible.\n\nWhy would you still have the electoral college if it doesnt help anyone at all?\n\nThere are many many ways to win an election and this is not one good way it can easily make one side lose even if they won the popular vote. The odds of one side winnning is easily changed with electoral votes. This inturrupts the odds of how much the people likes them then it turns into how much the government of states likes them. However it could help some people win if they are not the popular vote.\n\nIt can also make anyone with the popular vote lose when they should have won like after Al Gore during the gallup poll thanks to the perks of the electoral college won the popular vote but he lost presidency over it. Even though 60% of people prefer the direct election now some prefer the electoral college.\n\nBut this can all be due to the fact that the electoral system was made by our founding fathers on the Constitution so it may only be natural that they support it. A good arguement was when the system allowed for far worse when the electors for defy the will of people like in passage 2 it says \"in 1960 when segragationists in the louisiana legislature almost succeeded in replacing electors who would appose John F. Kenedy\" that is just evil. Although the law has not been changed since the Constitution was made.\n\nEven at the most basic level the electoral college is still unfair to voters because of the winner take all system put in place for each state. They saddly dont visit every state in passage 2 it says \"Candidates dont spend time in states they know they have 0 chance of winning, focusing only on tight races\" Although the winner take all is made just to do what they are using it for by awarding electors to the presidential candidate (exept for Maine and Nebraska) it is being used for what they are using it for.\n\nIn all the electoral system is not good but its not all bad it takes the votes away from the people,Its a winner take all system, and its taking people down who deserve to win even changing the senators to make them win. Its evil and makes no sense to what they are doing trying to give other parties a chance i get it but its gone a little to far.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The artificially intelligent robots have been part of the society since it was created and today many of our daily tasks are possible because of it. Some people argue that this field would overtake all the work done by humans. In my opinion, to an extent, it can be possible, however, there are some jobs that will still use the human labour rather than using robots. \n\nTo begin with, robots have overtaken many job positions currently. When it comes to companies which produce cars, technology and food, it is pretty likely to see robots in their production lines performing most of the duties, because of the accuracy and the efficiency that they have. One robot might do several tasks at the same time, whereas one person can possibly do only one task and require more time. Furthermore, the artificially intelligent robots provide various benefits. While employees need to get paid, vacations and insurances, robots will only require installation process and maintenance, which is pretty convenient for the company cost.\n\nHowever, I believe that there are still some jobs that cannot be done by artificially intelligent robots. Firstly, the medical field is likely to remain requiring doctors. For instance, Although there are some robots that can undertake a surgery, the doctors are still domain most of the medical procedures and researches due to the complexity of the human body and their experience. Secondly, the jobs regarding with the economy and administration are more likely to require people who can predict future crisis and economical approaches. In my opinion, robots are not prepared to undertake the duties of a project manager or stock analysis yet. \n\nIn conclusion, although robots can be useful in production processes, I believe that some jobs will still remain done by humans. However, there is no doubt that in the future, artificial intelligence will be a treat for the humanity.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying Venus is worth pursuit despite dangers because studying Venus gives humans more knowleldge about the planet and space. From studying Venus we have learned as humans that Venus's atmosphere is 97 percent carbon dioxide and sulfric acid. Venus is also 800 degrees Fahrenheit. Without studying venus we would not know such things. In the article it states \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors\" also the article states \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination.\" So without studying Venus we would learn nothing or maybe even miss something important without studying venus we wouldnt know the dangers of it and the facts mentioned through the article. Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do u wont to know how a face got on mars.There are many apinyons what people think about it. I think something crashet in to it. Same people says othere whyes.\n\nThe face on mars is probly from the wilnd or somethink hiting it and it makes the face looking. According to the text they think it is a rale face or somthing. They tock pictersh frome the sadlight stachon in space. There are scientests studing that today.\n\nWhat i think it was from a rock hiting it and it made the fac or it had a wind storme and it made that face. According to the text they think it was frome there rockets landing there. Many people have there own apionyons. People say someone made it to show they where there and did not tell any one so they have something to talk about and to descuver what hapened.\n\nPeople wonts to know how the face got on mars. Many people dont like the way we are finding a face on mars. There are many things people wont to know about the face on mars and i think it is from wind or a big rock but thats me.\n\nThis is what i think about the face on mars. I had many questons runing throw my mind about the face on mars. One of the qustons i had going throw my mide is how would they see it on mars or if they where on mars and sall it mack a face.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the author supports this idea by trying to figure out how venus can be worthy of making it float above the fray. the palnet has a surface of rocky sedimant and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\n\nNasa has ideas of sending humans to study venus so they can try learn how venus can possibly be useful in the future or trying to figure out how venus has very different solutions to our problems. but venus has storms and it is very hot of 170 degrees fahernheit and the planet can provide only limited insight on ground coditions because most of the lights cannot penetrate the dense atmospherere. more importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anthying else, from a distance. thats why venus would need to get up close and can despite the risks. scitentist have made silcon carbide and been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus surface and have lasted for three week.\n\nthats why venus would take a lot of time to figure out how venus works in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "According Katherine Paterson wrote article censorship library Should beable right take book magazine movie etc shelf freely Whether re offend I believe right pull thing shelves freely If right would cause problems many stand points think One problem could cause people thoughts towards book movie cd forth If one person looks like I nt like pulls shelf thats one less things somebody like Now since person nt like material offers public nt mean somebody else dose nt Nobody entire world exactly Every body world likes dislikes If freedom take things would nothing anybody read listen watch eat etc You also think would affect business stores libraries businesses If everybody pulling everything shelves would sell read If business making money re going closed Ecspecially today economy business wants run low money In Katherine s article end said And books left shelf us That basicly reiterating I said earlier peoples likes dislikes everything If nt want kids anybody else kids looking something believe offensive You take one workers move different section Like section older kids people Mainly falls parents content want kids looking You re ones raise way want raise If think young something thats tell whatever We right take anything shelf Books movies music etc entertainment If nt entertain mean anybody else", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes end story paragraph pecause saying take test What means thing next year She addapt life like hibiscus She also saying beest everything world living fullest So aas good conclusion Story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Senator, I think we should keep the Electoral College because, of certainty of outcome, everyone's president, and swing states.\n\nAn argument over the outcome of an EC vote is possible, for example, in the 2012 election, Obama recieved 61.7% of the electoral vote when only 51.3% popular votes cast for him and Romney. Almost all states award electoral votes on a winner-take-all basis, even a slight plurality in a state creates a landslide electoral-vote victory in that state. A tie in the nationwide electoral vote is possible due to the total number of votes-538-is an even number.\n\nThe EC requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal. No region has enough electoral votes to elect a president. A solid regional favorite, such as Romney was in the South, has no incentive to campaign heavily in those states, for he gains no electoral votes by increasing his plurality in states that he knows he will win. This is a wanted result because a candidate with only regional appeal is unlikely to be a successful president.\n\nThe winner-take-all method of awarding electoral vote induces the candidates to focus their campaign efforts on the toss-up states. Voters in toss-up states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign knowing that they are going to decide the election.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Among all of global issues, food shortage can clearly be seen as one of the most concerning as the ultimate result of this issue is hunger and death which is relatable to all. One of the solution being brought into spotlight is consuming insects. While some people believe that this can be a proper path to end the world's hunger, others argue that it will further lead new problems.\nTo begin with, there are various aspects of advantages in using bugs as protein substitutes. Bugs are not only available in all continents but the majority of them have short life cycles. If farms shift to grow insects rather than the currently available lifestock, less costs and investments will be needed as they only need weeks to mature while other lifestocks require months or even years. Then, what prevent the humanity to covert to insectivore?\nAs well as tremendous benefits, the idea of consuming athropods can raise numbers of concerns. Introduction of new insect species and increase of their populations can extremely affect native ecosystem. To elaborate this, alien species introduced from one area to another can be dangerously invasive and can ultimately result in extinction of native species. One example is gold fish which were released into lakes can multiply their populations in short period and over the years, they doubled in size and eradicated their counterparts in original food chain. Therefore, arthropods which are much smaller and aglier can effortlessly escape farms and survive in extreme environment will cause disasters to the nature and crops in the farming areas.\nAll in all, consumption of insects can be humanity's new opportunity to survive as it requires less resources and provides abundant produces. Nevertheless, this change in food source require more researches to ensure sanitary and nutritions as well as time for the consumers' adaption to the new concept.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The bar charts illustrate five different methods of how the Republic of Korea, Sweden, and the UK deal with waste products. The five methods are recycling, underground, incineration, chemical treatment, and dumping at sea.\noverall, recycling is way more in Korea while underground dumping took first place in both Sweden and the UK.\nFirst, Morethan two third of the waste is recycled in Korea while incineration is more than half in Sweden. Korea dumps 22% under the ground and incinerated less than 10%. Sweden, on the other hand, recycled a quarter of its waste but incinerated a fifth of the garbage.\nSecond, the UK dumps most of its waste under the ground incinerating only 2%. Chemical treatment and dumping at sea both share 8% of the UK's waste product.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, parents can decide between having their children learn at single-sex schools and mixed-gender schools. It is considered by some that there are some drawbacks in the single-sex environment that affects students in the future. While I agree that single-sex schools could offer children disadvantages, I believe that whether they will be faced with the negative consequences depends to a large extent on the student.\r\n\r\nStudying in a single-sex school could be detrimental to the student's development. One reason for this is that the students might not become prepared to work in the real world. Most people will work with others of different genders in their professions. However, single-sex classrooms do not provide youngsters with opportunities to interact with others who are of the opposite sex. This could lead to difficulties working effectively with coworkers in a workplace as students might lack the skills required for it. Another reason is that people generally learn better with diverse perspectives. There are several differences between males and females in how they think and feel because of the biological differences as well as the cultural perceptions toward each sex. This enables students to look at things from various viewpoints. For example, girls mature faster in general, which can offer fresh perspectives to boys in the classroom. \r\n\r\nDespite the downsides which I mentioned above, how attending single-sex schools will affect a child’s future varies from person to person. For instance, some individuals will be successful if they received more benefits than disadvantages of single-sex schools. Some of the benefits include a sense of security from being surrounded by similar people and lessons that are tailored to meet the needs of each sex. Another example would be those who have plenty of opportunities to communicate with peers of the opposing sex, namely through local sports clubs or community programmes. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although it is true that a single-sex school could affect young people negatively when they get old, I think that there will be those who take advantage of it. It is advisable that parents weigh the pros and cons carefully before making a decision.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the Facial Action Coding System can bring some help into classrooms. Most students, like myself, get bored when working on the computer. If the computer can read our face expression to see that we are bored and change what's on the screen to something more appealing, then maybe it would brighten the mood.\n\nThere's no doubt that most students don't like school and fine it incredibly boring. Working on the computers brings a sort of excitement because we prefer technology over standard teachings. Personally, I would prefer to sit on the computer, like I am now, and learn and do assignments. In fact, I'd rather be able to sit at home and work on school work and be able to take breaks whenever I feel like it.\n\nSchool is like work, I hate it. if this FACS technology can brighten things up at school, then just maybe it wouldn't be so boring. Maybe I wouldn't mind getting up at 6:30 every morning to get ready and go somewhere I don't even want to go. I would love for a computer to read my facial expressions and change what's on the screen to something more suitable for me.\n\nLike I said before, it's no surprise that the majority of students do not like school. This FACS technology could really have a bright future. If it all goes well then it just might make school a place where children and young adults would actually look forward to going to.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Mr. Senator, I have written this letter in hopes that you would change your mind about keeping the electoral college. Popular vote is the best method of voting because people's voices would be heard, and it would give more people the motivation to vote.\n\nTo begin with, you've probably herd the term democracy since thats what our government is right ? well that word comes from the latin words demo & kratia meaning people rule . Popular vote would be better than the electoral college because then peoples voices can truly be heard, no scams, no funny buisness, just old fashion voting. Popular vote is also an easier and much more simple system than the electoral college. with popular vote all you do is look at the polls and see who has more votes as apposed to counting each and every states electoral points until you get 273.\n\nIn addition, if popular vote is put into action then it would inspire more people to vote, some citizens are very skeptical about the electoral collage but with popular vote the facts are in the polls. According to \" The Indefensible Electoral College\" by Bradford Plumer The electoral college is infair, outdated, and irrational.\n\nIn conclusion, Popular vote is a better idea than the electoral college because theres no funny buisness, and the peoples voices are truly heard. I hope this essay i wrote helped you make the right decision to drop the electoral college and switch to popular vote, if you have time to write me back that would be much appreciated.\n\nsincerely, PROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent days, many people think that the best decision to claim successfulness is crawling in ladder of higher educational system, whereas others proclaim that spending the time in secondary school is enough. Yet, I believe that both of them gladly give their own impacts in positive ways. \n\nFirst and foremost, studying at university or college bring powerful effects of knowledge for students and alumnus. Firstly, relationship that build by connecting to others when we do academic or practical learning such as in daily class, weekly competition, and annual organization, will blast the linking circle of friends. For instance, as sophomores, they hardly get the essential point of study after spending in a one-year period, but they can widen up their circle through adaptation and habituation by which students can grab a lot of friends with different background of varied majors. Secondly, supressing incident that exacerbate the work life, and prohibit to be gullible human being later on, by modulating the knowledge. For example, working in technological area that thrive nowadays is dangerous by improving intelligences, several cases such as suspicious mortgage in company pact. \n\nOn the other hand, graduating from high school is not bad even though narrow-minded oldsters judge through the educational backgrounds. However, the majority of vocational schoolers already have provisions to jump into work life in which they are supported by vocational curriculum. As evidence, vocational students indeed have specific talents which are the beneficial factors to sail in work life. \n\nTo sum up, although, I strongly agree by those advantages between going to university and high school giving more positive impacts to approach the better carreer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood The story talks Cuban culture He talks times All time spent family celebrating cuban herritage They would come dinner Thats set mood", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "He concludes story like dont feel defeated She aware believes complete task Also selfconcious flower reminds home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the aritcle, The challenge of exploring Venus, the author claims that we should explore Venus more despite the dangers it has. The author uses a good claim, has good evidence, a good countercaim, transitions, and a good conclusion. Here is what the author does throughout the paragraph.\n\nThe first thing that the author does in the paragraph is have a claim. The claim is we should explore Venus more despite what is very risky. The author already has a counterclaim in this claim. We should explore Venus, but there are risks to it. Another counterclaim to this statement is that spacecrafts have only lasted a few hours being destroyed on Venus a lot. The author also has something to counter this but saying that there can be other ways to explore Venus besides sending people there.\n\nThe author also uses evidence as to why we should explore Venus. The author states that Venus has a lot of things on it that make it similar to earth. The author also states at one point Venus could have been like earth and had the same things, such as mountains and oceans. The author also gives reasons how she thinks we can explore earth. She also has counterclaims for this to, but also a claim but at the counterclaim for that also.\n\nLastly, the author uses transitions throughout the paragraph. The author uses words such as if, often, however, etc. The author never runs on a sentence or a paragraph, and makes sure to give it a transition before ending a paragraph.\n\nIn conclusion, The author of fthis story uses a claim, evidence, transitions and no run ons.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, climate change is a crucial issue that it will have irreparable consequences in the future, but some communities argue that we can adapt us to these critical conditions rather than search for a way to solve and change this problem. I definitely disagree with this attitude because I believe that we still can alleviate human influences on the Earth's temperature with some beneficial solutions.\n\nGovernments and individuals play an important role to ensure the enforcement of some approaches in opposition to humidity alteration. Firstly, governments of countries especially industrial nations must introduce strict laws for minimizing carbon dioxide emissions that lead to global warming. They could omit the transportation which uses fossil fuels and generalize the transportation of the green fuel such as electric cars. Secondly, allocation of “green taxes” to the companies such as airlines and other factories and investing in renewable energy systems production can be a smart solution. Finally, people can control and reduce the harmful activities that they have a serious impression on climates. For instance, they can utilize bicycles or public transportation instead of personal cars or they can select the worthy politicians who have useful plans for humidity variation control. \n\nNot surprisingly, I would like to point out that the earth will face with disastrous problems if society want to live with humidity change obstacles rather than follow the mentioned measures. For example, I don’t think that individuals would be able to cope with merely increasing sea level because millions of people will lose their homes and jobs in that case, and they would try to immigrate to other adjacent countries to survive. Therefore, the spread of famine, disease, and poverty will grow.\n\nIn conclusion, we must focus on alterations to humidity problems and find out a way to solve this important issue, and I completely disagree with the crowd who think that we can spend a lifetime with it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The number of residents who are interested in exploring the past of dwellings they live in is increasing in some regions. In this essay, I will describe the reasons and the way residents find history.\r\n\r\n There are some reasons why the occupants tend to explore the past of their living places. Firstly, people consider that the history of their house is important because the location has been culturally impacted by circumstances and neighbours. To be more specific, residents need to assimilate into that culture once they move to the place. Therefore, they check whether the culture is the one they like. Another reason is that residents prefer to stay in a dwelling that has great stories. For instance, if renowned persons such as presidents' families, leaders for revolution, skilled professors used the residence, dwellers can enjoy by imagining how the notables contributed to nations and became famous.\r\n\r\n Several methods to search histories are available. Nowadays, the internet has a greater impact on searching histories than paper books. As anyone can write articles on the internet without restrictions, it is possible to search both the bright and negative sides of history and reputation about dwellings. Additionally, there is a strong possibility that beneficial stories have been handed down by the local people. \r\n\r\n In conclusion, some locals are attracted to studying histories around their dwellings because their preferred cultures and respectable histories provide the residents with conformable lives and infinite imagination. In order to explore histories, citizens take advantage of not only the internet but neighbours’ historical stories.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people think minors working an unpaid part-time job for communities might have advantages for themselves and for the local residents. I personally agree on how part-time jobs for minors will bring many benefits for their future, because they will learn how to manage their time for work and play.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, the main reason they will benefit from part-time jobs is that they will have hands-on experience, thus increasing their hard and soft skills, such as communication, leadership, and teamwork. Many minors and recent graduates, for example, struggle to find work due to a lack of experience. They will have an early start in learning how the work field operates as a result of this. Another one is that they can help communities that are in need and grow connections. Working with the community that surrounds them will not only benefit the community but also themselves, because helping people will give us our own satisfaction and contribute to the country, starting with a smaller scope.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, many adults are concerned that, because of their part-time jobs, minors will have less time to play with their friends in their spare time. But most importantly, it’s not about how the part-time job would take their time, but how minors will learn to manage their time so they can work and also live their lives as teens. A lot of part-time jobs are usually open around the summer, so they can divide their time more easily now that the school term is over.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, I fully agree with how the unpaid part-time job will give more advantages to minors and the community, as long as they can balance their work and play time with friends.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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