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"content": "Some have voiced support that juveniles should contribute to the community by taking part in unpaid work in their leisure time as it is greatly beneficial for both themselves and society. In my opinion, this is a matter of debate in light of different factors before any conclusion can be drawn. \r\n\r\nThere are various compelling reasons why teenagers should spend their leisure time doing unpaid work for the community. To begin with, this is a great opportunity for them to gain some practical working experience. Through these kinds of activities, they may face certain challenges which would help sharpen their soft skills and widen their horizons as well as having a multi-dimensional view when evaluating and tackling the problems. For example, in some developed countries such as America or Australia, teenagers will take part in some church activities including cleaning, decorating for special occasions and giving a hand in some team works. That would help them enhance their problem-solving skills and the ability to work with each other as a team. Another noteworthy benefit that should be taken into consideration is that when contributing to society, those juveniles will learn how to love and share with people around them leading to a healthy mind and a friendly society. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, teenagers should enjoy their free time in the ways they want. As for most of the parts they are fully occupied with their hectic schedules at school, so it is unfair to ask them to work without pay. They have the right to hang out with their friends or play sports to blow off some steam and achieve great physical and mental development. Provided that fact that they join in the community work without payment, they will get exhausted and that might affect their daily routine, and in the worst-case scenario, that would have a negative influence on their academic performance. For instance, in some cultures, teenagers have to spend their holidays working for the pagodas or temples from 4.30 in the morning until 7.30 in the evening and they have to go to bed at 8 o’clock. Although this is a truly meaningful activity, it severely impacts their biological time and makes them feel extremely tired after the holidays. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while some have voiced support that juveniles should take part in community work without payment in their leisure time, I would argue that it is better to let them enjoy the time in the ways they want.",
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"content": "In 1976, the so called \"Face on Mars\" was first photographed by Viking 1. Scientists were initially surprised at the appearance of the Face, but soon concluded the it was nothing more than a Martian mesa. Some conspiracy theorists deduct that the Face signifies alien life on Mars. Life that NASA has decided to keep secret. This is incorrect. NASA would have no benefit from hiding evidence of life on Mars. The expeditions to survey the landmark cost severely. Furthermore, in 2001, Mars Global Surveyor captured a detailed photo of the Face, showing that the mysterious landmark is nothing more than a Martian butte or mesa. Also, the landmark resembles that of landforms common in the American West.\n\nThe \"Face\" found on Mars lead many to conclude that Mars can in fact support life. Many also believe that NASA would rather keep this life secret. Both of these claims are false. If there truly were life on Mars, NASA would have no motivation to keep it secret. The expeditions to survey the landmark require heavy funding and millions of dollars in assets. NASA would have this issue concluded, rather than to continue to spend millions to survey the Face. There is also conclusive evidence found in pictures captured by Mars Global Surveyor that show the Face to be nothing more than a Martian butte of mesa. The photos depict the landmark as nothing special. In fact, Earth has similiar landforms found in the American West.\n\nThe \"Face on Mars\" is not evidence of alien life. NASA would not lie to protect evidence that could save them millions of dollars. Furthermore, the Face is simply a naturally occuring landform found on Mars. And is simliar to those in the American West. In conclusion, the \"Face of Mars\" is a naturally occuring phenomenon, not a sign of alien life.",
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"content": "In this modern era, the host of people decided to delay their family plannings for later adulthood as compared to the ancient years. I believe that this trend has more demerits than the positive effects on the population and I shall provide my reasons in the following paragraphs.\r\n\r\nApparently, there are many a reason for this development by the couples. To commence with, nowadays, adults become more career-focused and goal-oriented. As long as they have set their plans for their near future related to their ambition, family planning ultimately comes at an end. In addition to this, people have multifarious opportunities to do something interesting in their leisure time as compared to the past. Thereby, a section of society wants to enjoy their lives at full extent rather planning babies which is definitely a huge responsibility. For instance, in recent years, there are a number of entertainment sources such as cinemas, treasure hunts or trampoline parks has been established as compared to the past.\r\n\r\nHowever, in my opinion, this idea of delaying the conception process would have some consequences for the population. Primarily, the predominant drawback of having babies in the late 30s or 40s would increase the complications of pregnancy to the mother of a child. As more the women body gets older, more risk of abnormal deliveries is there ought to the complexities of childbirth. Moreso, there would be a rise in the greying population which will constantly plummet the economy of a nation. To elucidate, the government has to pay more funds to the elder populations as retirement funds and there would be less helping hands to balance ecologically.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I would like to pen down by saying that it is true that lately everyone wants to be carefree and unstressed from the obligations of parenthood and tend to lead their life with full enjoyment, however, I believe that that feeling of being a parent is also a pure blessing so we should understand the matter of time before its too late.",
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"content": "Some people think by encouraging a sense of competition in the youngster can lead to the development of a strong personality and determined mind. But, others think youngsters who were taught to share and be corporative will turn into helpful adults.\nThe sense of competition indeed can generate excitement and can push youngsters to give their best. On the other hand, the competitive feeling can cause hatred among children, especially if the parents were pressuring their child to always take the lead. For example, when I was nine years old I used to have a friend in my class that had a great sense of competition. She often caused problems when she lose or answered wrong. Unfortunately, the teacher got to know with the encouragement of her parents the girl felt pressured and the fear of disappointing them. In addition, parents can teach their children to co-operate and to engage with other youngster, to motivate them and to help them learn how to share, which can become a great experience when they get older and be more understanding and considerate.\nHowever, a sense of competition is not always frustrating it can encourage a youngster to develop new behavior that can help them to discover adventurous journeys. Furthermore, being competitive among children might attract shy children to engage more and break the wall of fear.\nIn my opinion, teaching children to co-operate is far better than being competitive. It can improve children behaviour in positive way.\nIn conclusion, while people agree to encourage children to have sense of competition, I agree that childern can share and help each other without the need of being competitive.",
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"content": "The author starts by telling us all the bad things and dangerous possibilities of Venus if we were to go there but then starts telling us of all the benefits knwoing more about Venus would have. Yes, it is very dangerous and could end badly but shouldn't we know about planets around us? Venus is the most earth like planet besides earth. We should know what is on it, what it is capable of, etc. We cant let fear limit us to exploring the unknown.\n\nIn the text the author says \"Often referred to as Earth's \"twin\"\" by saying these type of things the author is making Venus seem less scary. The author belives Venus is somewhere we shoudl explore, we should know more about it becaseu its the most earth like, its the closest, we could discover many new things, and it has many factors we should know more about. The author tells all the benefits of going to Venus. The author says \"to understand Venus we would have to get up close and personal despite the risks. Or maybe we should think of these as challenges.\" The author is very set on persuading us into beliveing that Venus is worth exploring. Exploring Venus would further are knowledge of space and how other things work, its worth the risks. We just have to be smart about it.\n\nHe supports his beliefs by explaing NASA's new ways of approach on visiting Venus. The author explains in depth teh old computer systems, he talks about electronics being made of silicon cardide, etc. The author is telling us many ways we could things that make this trip safer, easier, and to have a higher chance of success. Paragraph 7 is all about new, smarter, better things they can do to make the Venus trip safer and more possible. He also connects it other things and trips. Humans curisoity will lead them there, mayeb lead them places worse. The need to know the unknown is what motivates us to do the crazy, smart, furthering our knowledge things we do.\n\nIn Paragraph 8 the author says \"striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only becasue of the insight to be gained, but also becasue human curiosity will likely lead us intomany equally intimidating endeavors.\" \"Our travles on earth should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagintion and innovation.\" Further explaining that no matter what it will eventually happen and when it does it will good because it is better, and safer to know the unknown.\n\nThis all supports his belief that going to Venus would be insightful, and good. The knowledge that can come from this adventure/ exploration are worth the risk. He proves this by using evidence from NASA, explaing how its safer to know the unknowns, and simplify suggesting that since its so earth like we should know more about it. It has potenial and we need to eb the first to see adn obtain that potenial.",
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"content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Home The blue lives gives alot different moods One mood gave happiness I got mood said cuban music filled air cuban music normalli happy I know Cuban music filled air states Passionate Cuban music I adore day filled air Also I got mood welcomeness parents always let people In house I know parents states My parents always kept arms door open many people considered family Lastly gave mood love I got feeling parents hard jobs loved kids I know states They start lives entirely taking whatever work could find These moods memoir Narciso Rodriguez Home The blue lives",
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"content": "Driverless cars would be a good source for people to have. It would be a very helpful thing, we would use less of our time to drive than the time we do today. People would have more time to do other things also. People would also take a break from driving because they sometimes get tired of driving so much. For example people have to drive so much when they go to their jobs,stores,doctor etc.\n\nDriverless cars have the best aspects, some exaples are transportation,safetly and awesome.\n\nI think that driverless cars would be a good transportation for the people. I think the driverless cars have very good aspects that will do good foe us. For example people would drive less and that means they would use less fuel and not waste a lot of money. Driverless cars also uses half of the fuel that taxis use today, therefor people would save up more money. Driverless cars also have a very good flexibility more\n\nthan a bus so I say that these upcoming driverless cars are going to make our lifes easier and better.\n\nAnother reason why we should have the driveless cars are because they are safety. Cars has been drive for more them a million miles without a crash so that means that their safe to have them. These cars also alert the drivers when they have take over pulling in and out of the driveways. Also when the cars gets to the point where there is a coplicated traffic issue like roadwork or accidents. Driverless cars alerts to know that somethings is happening and therefor we can avoid accidents or other stuff.\n\nLastly driverless cars would just be awesome. It would be very nice to have a car like that and that you would have o worry about driving it. Also if actually wanted to drive the car because it would be boring not driving you could. The driverless car would quickly turn off and the driver could take over.Its awesome because it has several aspects that are just great and that people would not\n\ncomplained about it because they are satisfied and like it.\n\nPeople would be fascinated to have these new cars. People would think they are worth to make them because it would be a very good thing for the whole world to have. Another good thing about thsese new cars, is that a lot people would want to buy because they would really like them. Therefor the people who made them would sell a lot ot the driverless cars and would make a lot of money.",
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"content": "There are controversial perspectives heating a debate over human’s damage to plant and animal species. While some claim that it is too late for any solution, others hold a strong view that some people claim that society should take effective action to solve the problem. While the former is valid to some extent, I would contend that the latter would potentially bring out more positive impacts.\r\n\r\nIt might be late for any action, since the environment has been seriously damaged. Society has tried plenty of environmental projects ,,nevertheless these projects still can not bring out a huge impact. For example, Stripped Project, Greenlife Project and Trash Again are some famous environmental projects in Ha Noi, yet they have not brought out a tremendous change. If society can not find a way to solve environmental problems, it might be too late. Therefore, the point of people who claim that it is late to save the environment is partly right, but it does not mean that the environment is unable to heal.\r\n\r\nWhile it is concluded that it might be late to save the environment, there are a lot of actions that can be taken. Despite the fact that a small change can not help the environment, if everyone makes a pale change, it will be big as a whole. To give an instance, the Earth Hour Project has globally caught the attention, and made society understand the importance of protecting the environment. \r\n\r\nDespite how late society is, everyone still can save the environment, rather than doing nothing. \r\n\r\nTherefore, society should try their best to save the environment, it might be late now, but evidence still speaks up that everyone can fix their mistakes on the Earth.",
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"content": "Many places around the world have been taking charge and limiting car use to the public. There comes some great advantages when doing this. You can help limit greenhouse gases, relieve the stress from cars, and become less dependent on your car for transportation.\n\nThe big advantage about limiting cars is to help prevent the rapid spread of greenhouse gases the creates smog in cities. From source two you learn that cold nights and warm days cause the warmer layer of air to trap car emissions polluting cities even more. With these dangerous gases in the air, the world is in great danger of becoming unhealthy and we are to blame for this awful cause because of the over use of cars. By limiting the use of cars you limit the amount of pollution in the air.\n\nBy limiting car use an finding other means of transpotation, you can actually relieve stress put on you from the constant beeping and noises made by cars. By walking or riding a bike you hear the nice peaceful sounds of the great outdoors while knowing you are doing good to you and the environment. Some people, as seen in source three, have taken this experience of the limiting of cars to share the experience with thier companion riding a two-seated bike. \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution.\"\n\nBy limiting the use of cars you begin to be less depended on cars. By this happening you learn your life will know longer be circled around your car and you begin to see that driving a car everyday is not really needed. By using public transportation of car-pooling you greatly decrease the amount of pollution in the air while also having a ride to work or where ever you need to be.\n\nLimiting cars can have multipal advantages to it. You can help stop half of the greenhouse gases that are caused from cars, relieve stress, and become less dependent for the need a car. This will cause you to become a better citizen and help make the world last longer for hundreds of generations to come.",
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"content": "He increase in the production of consumer good results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem? Nowadays, as most consumerconsumer goods are manufactured, more damage has been inflicted to the environment. I will outline several reasons for this and put forward some measures to this issue.\n\nFirst of all, the increase in the production of consumer products harms the environment in two ways: the chemical by-products from the manufacturing process and the mass production of disposable goods. As more goods are produced, more toxic wastes and emissions are released from factories into nature. Water sources are contaminated, and the air is severely polluted, which results in the deaths of many marine and terrestrial animals. Also, to accommodate customers’ ever-increasing demand, more single-use products are introduced, most of which are non-biodegradable. Though having a short lifespan, these products can remain as wastes for thousands of years, turning our planet into a huge landfill and posing a threat to the living habitats of all creatures.\n\nActions must be taken as soon as possible to minimize the negative impacts on environment arising from the increasing amount of consumer goods. First, companies should promote the use of eco-friendlier materials. For example, the giant coffee chain Starbucks has recently replaced plastic straws with reusable alternatives made of materials like paper or bamboo. In addition, many governments are also encouraging the development of more sustainable manufacturing processes. For instance, many states in the U.S offer tax breaks and incentives for businesses using renewable energy, and some firms are even allowed to purchase green energy at cheaper prices than traditional fossil fuels.\n\nIn conclusion, there are two main reasons why the environment is severely impacted by the increase in production of consumer goods. To address this issue, governments and companies must join hands to make the production lines more environmentally friendly by switching to greener materials.",
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"content": "If you become a seagoing cowboy like me then you will never see the world the same. You travle to all these places like Greece,Venice,Crete,China and The Panama Canal. I have been to all of these places and they were beutifull. You get to try new foods and meet new people. You can wander away to explore in your free time. You can even see famous buildings and landmarks.\n\nBy helping people you will feel better about yourself. Your making the world a better place every day. Your giving people food and water. Your also helping animals. You learn how to take care of cattle and horses. You have to feed,clean,and make shure they have enough to drink. It may sound hard but its fun with all the friends your doing it with. Sometimes you have to work other jobs on the ships like being a watchman.\n\nOn the ship you have some free time. You can play games like baseball and volleyball in emptey holds were animals have been kept. You can play other games like table-tennis, fencing,and boxing. Reading,whittiling and games like checkers or chess also helped pass time.\n\nBeing a Seagoing cowboy was somthing more than an adventure for me. I got to see so many new places . Im so gratefull my friend Don Reist invited me to go to europe ono a cattle boat. I couldn't pass it up becase it was the opportunity I would never get offerd agian. I crossed the Atlantic Ocean sixteen times and the Pacific Ocean twice to help people recover from World War II. I was aware of people and ther needs. My faimly hosted international students for a number of years. I really hope you consider becoming a Seagoing Cowboy after reading this.",
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"content": "The author does not support the idea that Venus is a worthy pursuit. There is very little data supporting text in the wrighting. There were very little statments to back up what the author is saying. The author is more invested in what they need to do to get on Venus then why we would want to and what we as a plant caould gain.\n\nIn the passage there was a lot of information about what they would have to do. For exampel they have tested suits in chamber simulating the chaos of Venus that have lasted three weeks. They have also stated that they would use a machanical computer to insted of modern computers because of the heat and atmospheric pressure.\n\nThere was very little data to state that there would be a scientfic benefit to sending humans to Venus. The author as also stated that Venus may have had life on it at one point, but they are basing it off of pictures of what could have been valleys, mountains, and craters. Through out the whole passage I saw no real evedienc that we sould go to Venun and no real scientific facts that would support that statment.",
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"content": "Nowadays, with the technological and scientific advancements, the Internet has a strong impact on people and young people tend to use it regularly. Therefore, online class are opened a lot via the web instead of going to the traditional classroom. As for me, I believe that with this development, it brings many benefits for education. However, I presume that this trend may give to some downsides.\r\n\r\nSome benefits that people may enjoy this trend. Firstly, Online learning will be more cost-effective than traditional classes. Secondly, distance barriers can be erased thank to online education. International students can join courses in foreign without moving abroad. For example, a Vietnamese student would be learned speaking skill with native teachers living in America to enhance their English skill at home. Moreover, learning on media may have a flexible study schedule and reasonable for everyone. Because there are now families students without economy conditions. so, they have to study and work at the same time to earn extra income help to their parents. Besides, they will be looking for many available learning materials as well as references.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, students attending those courses usually tend to procrastinate doing their tasks. This, consequently, requires students to have intense concentration, self-discipline and time management skill. Besides, distance learning students will without regular face-to-face interaction resulting in a lack of rivalry and motivation. Moreover, they will not develop as many social skills as the ability to work individually and in teamwork.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, despite some limitations of online courses, but I believe that online courses offered by universities greatly help the students. Online courses help to spread education far and wide instead of restricting it to the confines of the classroom.",
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"content": "In the article is talks about how the future will consist of driverless cars. The driverless cars have their pros and cons.I suppory driverless cars because they would use half the fuel of today's taxis, The driverless cars are secure and lastly they have skills a human has.\n\nI present the positive side of this argument. I support driverless cars because they have many benefits. They would use half the fuel that a taxi normally would, the cars would fundamentally change the world. in paragraph 1 it states \" The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus...Such cars would fundamentally change the world\". The driverless cars will be the future.\n\nAlthough Google hasn't found the right recipe to make this car fully function, newer technology will make it happen. They have used multiple diffrent sensors to mimic the same skills as a human. The LIDAR will help notify the car of it's surroundings becasue the LIDAR is a sensor that forms a consistant 3-D model of the cars surroundings. The sensors have evolved since the 1980s, It first started off as antilock brakes and now transitioning to driverless cars.\n\nThe BMW is working on making the driverless car as secure as possible. They have gotten sensors that make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel even though it is driving itself. While trying to secure the cars, they know there are jobs the cars can't do on its own. The car will notify you when it will need your assistance to accomplish a transaction. The cars notify you when there are work zones or to drive it around an accident. in paragraph 7 it states, \"... but all are designed to notify the driver whe nthe road ahead requires human skills, such as navagating through work zones and around accidents\". This means the human driver must remain alert and ready to take over when the situation requires.\n\nIn conclusion, because driverless cars have many benefits they'll be mostly likely used in the near future. The cars are safe, and enviromentally sufficient which means with futher technology and understanding of the cars they'll be able to advance to a whole diffrent level. Driverless cars will be the future.",
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"content": "I find the idea of \"driverless cars\" a bad idea and more negative then positive. First of all the \"Traffic Jam Assistant Car\" google came out with in 2009 isn't completely driverless and just alerts you when to drive. It's also a hassle to build , many sensors, camera's, magents, etc. Lastly , it's not the safest idea considering most of the time you don't do anything, you could possibly fall or asleep or be texting and not notice a car coming towards you. Here are some scenario's explaining why this car isn't the best idea.\n\nIn this car,\n\nyou literally just sit and wait for the car to tell you when do drive which is boring , you're better off just driving a car yourself. For example imagine traveling and there's a lot of traffic , crazy routes , and roundabouts and U-turns etc, ; Wouldn't it get annoying if every 5 minutes you had to take control of the car? You stop for like a small period of time and then the car alerts you over and over again , wouldn't that get on your nerves? It's easier if you do it yourself and would take a lot less time.\n\nThis car is also such a hassle to build. There's so many new electrical aspects like the article said including the magnets and camera's and sensors. It's just too much in my opinion.\n\nAlso the safety aspect! What if you're dependent on the car to go down what looks like a clear rode and you stop for a minute and check your phone or reach to get something and a huge car comes out of nowhere and the car alerts you but you can't make it in time?\n\nWhat if someone's driving for awhile without alerts and gets bored and falls asleep? There's so many things that can happen if you depend on a car to do most of the work for you. This car is just another reason for more car accidents and is not needed.",
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"content": "Would you like if your emotions are being detected withouht your consetiment? Technology is every day beging more capable of new things, in terms of artificial intelligenece. The new software has been developled so that it can read or decode the emotions of others. Dr. Eckman has classified six bassic emotions - happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness-, he assocciated each emotion with movements on the facial muscles.\n\nIt is important to know how the muscles in our body , in our face works , and what an amazing way to know through technology. But at the point to that technology knows what are your emotions to then use them on \"what you need\" is not correct. I am not saying that when we want to search about emotions through technology there should not be anything on it. But what if we are trying to hide emotions for our or others good and technology just cames and reads or decodes your emotions how would you feel?\n\nIt is also important to know the basic of emotions, because that how you express yourself.",
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"content": "From Luke's piont of view covincing others to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nThere are three reasons why you and others should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. One of them is taking care of animals, the other one is having unbelievable trips, the last one is the jobs you do and the free time.\n\nThe first one were going to talk about are taking care of the animals.\n\nWhen you join the Seagoing Cowboys program you have to care the horses until they go to a different person.\n\nAnother supporting detail is about the cows, you need the cows to get the milk from or what are the others participates going to drink.\n\nThe last supporting detail is the mules that were shipped overseas.\n\nThose were all the supporting details for the reason about taking care of animals.\n\nThe other reason that were going to support is the unbelievable trips they travel by.\n\nThe first supporting detail is about the cattle-boat trips they get when they participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. Also, we get to tour an excavated castle in Crete.\n\nthey also marveled at the Panama Canal on there way to China. That is another reason why you and the others should participate.\n\nThe other reason you should join is you got to do many jobs so you won't be bored, and you also get free time.\n\nOne job you get is being a night watchman you get to check on all the animals every hour.\n\nAnother one is cleaning up. You have to feed and water the animals two or three times. Bales of hay and bags of oats had to be pulled up from the lower holds of the ship, and also the stalls had to be cleaned.\n\nThose were all the reasons and supporting details of why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nThere were three things to support my reasons in each paragraph.\n\nThat is why people should join the Seagoing Cowboys program.",
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"content": "Nowadays, thousands of institutes teaching different skills to their students and they are very hopeful for a better future also parents should train their children to learn different work.\r\n\r\nFirstly, I strongly agree with the notion, schools should pay attention to academics and prepare their students to perform well in examinations and get good grades. for instance, there are a lot of institutes which are giving training in different fields of life such as, cookery, woodwork and many others skills which can help them to succeed in their lives. However, nowadays parents are also working for their children day and night for their better career they don't have enough time to give lesson children on different life skills which are useful for them.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, all things considered, friends are also stuck in their daily routines they don't have much time to give lessons on useful skills. In addition, governments should focus on these types of schools which are teaching different art of life and also spend a huge amount, it should be free of cost governments bear all expenses. In other words, globally authorities spend big amount this kind of schools because they make sensible citizens who work hard for their country.\r\n\r\nIt is impossible for schools to concentrate on both fields because they are different if they try to work on dual challenges might be difficult to perform well so schools should restrict their syllabus. \r\n\r\nI conclude with, institutes are trying to make money more money than their rivals so they make effort to continue with many challenges at the same time.however, it could be harmful. In a way, schools pay attention to the academic and final terms of students.",
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"content": "final Paragraph 1 imagine you are a scientist\n\nat NASA discussimg the face with someone who thinks it was created by aliens. I would have told the person i was speaking with that the Face on Mars was not created by aliens because, in the story it says in paragh 7 that \"and so on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time,Michael Malin and his Mars Obrbiter camera MOC team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing ... a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all .\" Thats one of the reasons why i would tell the person i was speaking with that the Face of Mars was not created by alies. Paragrapg 2\n\nI would also tell the person im speaking with that Mars Global Surveyor flew over an had taken a picture to show everyone there was no aliens. Stated in pargraph 6 it says \" Although few scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact phoyographing Cydonia became a priority for NASA when Mars Global Surveyor MGS arrived at the Red planet in spt. 1997, eighteen long years after the Viking missions ended. Stated in pargraph 11 its says\"As a rule of thumb, you can discernthings in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size,\" he added\n\n\"So, if there were objects\n\nin this picture like airplans on the ground or Egyptian style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!\" Paragraph 3 I would tell the person im speaking with that all this is coming out of a true passage about The Face of Mars because we have been studying about the Face of Marsfor years now.",
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"content": "On way back home doctors I getting annoyed I want mom get annoyed So I tryed great pacient Once I would play seat NUM minutes passed I getting patient Buy I still keep roln Once I got home I went bea relaxed",
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"content": "Are driverless cars better for humans to drive? Yes i think so! People might think that a driverless car is not a car we should ride in but we really all should ride in more driverless car. People might say it would malfunction or you will get in alot of crashes but actually driverless cars have driven more the half a million miles without crashes, but the driverless calot of gas, well the driverless cars use half the fuel u need for regular vehicles.\n\nDriverless cars are actually really safe for us humans; They have many ways to warn us about inciming danger such as the driver seat. The driver seat vibrates when the car is in danger, so the driver know what to do in a really bad situation. That's not all! Is that all? No! They also have sensors in the car to alert your when driving. I think think the sensors make the car especially safe when a human is driving. If you happen to fall asleep or have a reaction to something such as having a heart attack or a siezure, the sensors will automatically trigger and the sensor will apply the brakes and reduce the engine power to stop the car, so u don't get in a crash.",
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"content": "One patient time I ever downtown one greatest places around poupules As I dad friend waited table hungry It minutes scince orderd I stayed patient much I mad hungry I stayed indefatigable food Finaly came I satisfied",
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"content": "I think author concludes like almost like new beginning The ending story makes think Saeng going get life It makes think plans start life comparison hibiscus Once plant starts over rebuds start It also shows determined continue life She let life distraught move Vietnam She hopes able start life The ending cliff hanger show story yet completely ended It shows still possibility get life It also shows doesnt let failures control She strong young woman determined overcome",
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"content": "Many people reading book listening song watching movie reading magazine found upset disturbed peice media feel removed shelf found I feel since everyone definition offensive disturbing libraries media centers separate materials books magazines My opinion everyone find things disturbing offensive It depends person s background religion personal beliefs I think books magazines shoulds banned library shelves particular person finds peice material offensive If find disturbing discontinue reading book magazine listening One person able make choice keeping certain book magazine shelf somewhere I m sure someone find offensive The partial point writing book song express one s opinion topic reader listener approve opinion respect director author s thoughts move If library media center contains inapropriate books magazines moviees create special areas shelves keep material This area could created adult mature readers viewers listeners I also think books peices media inapropriateness label regarding offensive explicit content If someone finds song book magazine article offensive disturbing I think single person right removed public ways keep material reader listener s hand know possible offensiveness If warning signs shown reader listener realize taking risk offended disturbed If measures taken I think keep readers viewers listeners pleased",
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"content": "The author support the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despuit the dangers. It proablity they should do at because Venus is next to Earth and Mars but different speed mean that sometime we are close to Mars and othe time to Venus. but some scientist\n\ncan say that\n\nVenus\n\nprobably coverd largely with ocean and clould have supported various form life just like Earth. But it was long ago, But Venus has the hottest surface tempture of any plant in our solar system, even Mercury is closer tto the sun but stil Venus in the hottest on other palnts.\n\nSome how NASA one particularly compelling idea for spending humans to study on Venus, they probarly solution the surfaces of Venus would allow scientist float above the roling venusian. they sure be form a ship to safely far above the planet can provied limited insight o the palnted, but there are problem that reachers cannot take thing on the plant like rocks, gas anything else. but there is a other way the reseachers are working that would allow their machines.\n\nThere is that studying Venus is worthy to prsuit despite dangers because they could to futghte out that Venus is probaly like Earth to live on. but soemtime I think that is dangers what well happen if something got wrong on Venus. In the present time right now that the scientist say that Mars can probaly be just like Earth, but I'm not sure if they sure do sometime they sure do it to make sure that Venus like we image to be.",
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"content": "I think proud mood cause saing parents",
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"content": "Economic powerhouse countries have always been known for low unemployment and poverty levels. However, to reach that level, those countries have inflicted unrepairable damage to the environment to realise their rapid economic development. This has raised a debate among experts about the benefits and drawbacks of economic growth to the global society. \r\n\r\nGovernments have always hoped that accelerated economic expansion could have solved poverty and hunger problems in their countries. Nevertheless, countless nations with rigorous economic power are still struggling to bring prosperity to their areas. This is because the majority of developed countries with massive economic power suffer from corruption in their governmental bodies. Consequently, although the nations are capable to distribute their wealth through tax and subsidies to end poverty and hunger, the capital is only flowing among the oligarchs of that countries.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the rise of sustainable economic development that considers not only the environment but also corporate and government acts of conduct seems to eliminate the drawbacks of economic growth. Moreover, implementing this concept could accelerate a nation ambition's to achieve net carbon zero without reducing its economic expansion rate. This is possible by integrating the economic concept with the core values of environment, sustainability, and governance. Additionally, the government could allocate their tax and subsidies more efficiently to reduce hunger and poverty in its area.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the majority of countries achieve economic growth by inflicting damage on the surrounding environment to boost their productivity and end poverty and hunger. Nonetheless, developed countries with strong economic growth are still struggling to bring prosperity to their area. A new economic concept that considers the environment and sustainability allows the integration of both economic growth and conscious development. I believe that implementing sustainable economic growth might offer a solution that capable of eliminating hunger and poverty yet is safe for the environment.",
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"content": "I think that using driverless cars are a positive thing. There are some negatives that come along, but everything has negatives with them. There are more positives to outweigh the negatives. I think it will be much safer and enviromentally friendly.\n\nJust think about all the drunk drivers out there. With the driverless car you do not have to worry about anymore. There are also a very high amount of people that text and drive or just on there phone. That is a bg safety issue. Again, the driverless car controls everything so you will not have to worry about any crashes or accidents because of people on there phone.\n\nIt makes it easy to get places. There is a built in GPS, so the car already knows where to go. People get lost all the time because they dont know what to do or where to go. Yes the car does make the driver actually drive when there is a lot of traffic or construction, but by the time these cars come out I am sure that problem will be fixed. Even if the problem does not get fixed, the car will still have done most of the driving for you. It makes it so much easier on the people using the driverless cars.\n\nThe driverless cars are extremely safe. There are sensors all over the car to show it how close thing are, when to stop, and where to go. There is another sensor that uses satellites to give it a map out of the car on the road, and the roads at all time. That is an axtraorinary device.\n\nThe car only uses half the amount of gas that a normal car will use. That saves the owner of the driverless car a gigantic amount of money. It is also safer for the environent. If only half the normal gas amount is being used, then it is a geat thing for the Earth. There will not be as much drilling and sucking out of the gas. That will give the Earth more time to get more gas and it will last much longer for us to use.\n\nThere are some negatives with the driverles car. If there is to much traffic, construction sight, or just something the automobile cannot handle then the driver will have to take over. That is a problem because why would you need to have a driver driver a driverless car? The cars still are noot fully ready and prepared to be used yet, so that gives the manufacturers more time to fix all of the flaws. There could be technical problems with the car, but that comes with anything there is that is new. There are most likely a couple years before these cars will be ready to sell, so that leaves a lot of time to fix all the problems and flaws.\n\nThese driverless cars seem to be very safe, easy to use, easy to maintain, very helpful, and good for the environment. These driverless cars will be a ginormous help for everybody that is on the road. They are definitely a positive product for the world.",
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"content": "In this modern-day society, big shots have a tendency to become well-known owing to their fortune rather than their accomplishments, which has detrimental impacts on the youth. As far as this argument goes, I strongly support the viewpoint for the following reasons.\n\nTo begin with, It goes without saying that admiring those bad models may turn teenagers into pragmatists. Indeed, by being influenced by those big shots, the youth will have a tendency to judge other people by their looks and their possessions rather than their talents. For instance, my friend Duy said that he only made friends with people who had good outfits or looked rich and fancy. Given his stance, Duy was boycotted by his classmates and he ended up having no friends for his entire high school years. \n\nFurthermore, those bad celebrities will inculcate bad outlooks into victims’ feeble minds. Apparently, teenagers will embrace the idea of spending money haphazardly due to watching their idols, depriving them of insights into the importance of money. As a typical example, my acquaintance gradually became a spendthrift after spending three hours a day watching his idol’s videos and following in his footsteps. Moreover, he always indulged himself in buying accessories and sports cars on a whim, making his parents sell their house in order to fulfil their son’s pastime. \n\nIn a nutshell, I pen down by reconfirming that I do support the idea of claiming that people who become well-known thanks to their money and glamour but their talents and achievements have detrimental impacts on teenagers.",
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"content": "Imagine a world where people have lost all desire to do things for themselves. With these new driverless cars approaching, our world could end up like that. Although the idea of a driverless car may seem great, it could also be very dangerous. Development of these cars is not the best idea because people will become too dependent on them and technology is bound to have some sort of issues at some point.\n\nHaving a car that drives people around all the time seems like a great idea, but the reality of it isn't so great. If people get these driverless cars then they will become dependent of them. Having these cars throughout generations would mean at some point, no one will even have to know how to drive. That could be very dangerous if a car malfunctions. What can a person who doesn't know how to drive do if their self-driving car stops working?\n\nAt some point, technology is bound to malfunction. Even the passage mentions that there is a possibility that the technology could fail. If it does, who would be to blame? Could you blame the driver for not knowing how to drive? Or could you blame the manufacturer for making the faulty vehicle? Someone could seriously get hurt. The possibility of it all makes this \"dream car\" sound even more dangerous than it already does.\n\nThe idea of a driverless car seems too good to be true. With something that seems that amazing, there must be some downfalls. In order to prevent some of those downfalls, such as people becoming extremely dependent on the cars and the possibility of the cars' technology failing, people shouldn't continue with this development. The stage they have the driverless cars at currently is a perfect stage. A human should always be in the car and alert in case of an emergency.",
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"content": "It is a thought conceived by some that one of the solutions to detrimental issues of the environment is to inflate the cost of automobile fuel. However, while I believe that the inflation of petroleum price could help curb environmental problems, other ways like, the prohibition of deforestation, could also prove useful.\n\nTo begin with , the impact of increased vehicular fuel on the environment could have clear advantages. For one, the hike in the pricing of petroleum products would discourage the use of vehicles that depends on them, consequently, oil refineries that are the major pulluters of the atmosphere would be forced with low patronage leading to their closure. For another , the increase in fuel price would reduce road congestion because people would be forced to walk, whereas, without the inflation of fuel prices people would drive their cars. For example, two-third of the America citizens have cars, causing serious road traffic and more travel time. Hence, for these reasons, it is clear that an upward review of the fuel prices would result in an environment rid of pollution.\n\nIn addition, the prohibition of deforestation could improve the environmental condition in many ways. Firstly, the preservation of the countryside and all the variety of plant species there rather than its destruction for the building of factories, houses and power plants would be a solution to environmental problems. Secondly, since plant absorbes carbon dioxide and produces oxygen, it should be protected in order to clean the environment from the fumes that automobile produces. For instance, in Brazil, large portions of rainforests are secured so that the plant revitalizes the air quality. Thus, from here, it is clear that deforestation could mitigate environmental problems.\n\nTo conclude, inflating the price of fuel for cars would solve the environmental problems, also, I believe that the ban of deforestation would be productive. Globally the forests should be preserved in order to have a future clean environment.",
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"content": "In recent times, it can be realized a growing interest among individuals in different parts of the earth that they intend to collect more historical information about the place such as flats and villas that they are living there. This essay will point out some reasons caused this widespread trend and also suggest some constructive ways to gain more data about this topic. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, the primary reason for this tendency might be the interest to the historical topics. Some residences specially who live in the old and historical buildings would like to know more about the past time of their place because listening to and reading a part of historical tale could always be attractive and pleasant for some of this planet inhabitants and these legends could be more interesting and attractive when the owner of that place will give performance in the future of this storyline. On the other hand, some citizens who want to buy a house or flat prefer not to rely on advertisments or assertions of property aggencies due to this fact that they opine that these sources of information could be misleading and if customers trust them, they will trick them so they try to collect information about that past of that buildings themselves. \r\n\r\nAlso, there are several ways to find a wide range of data about different constructions which are located in dissimilar neighbourhoods. For instance, one of the most effective and convinient way to carry this research out is using different websites on the internet and browsing through them precisely to gather a huge amount of accurate information about the desired structures. In addition, there is another workable method to get enormous amount of data about a particular place. The residences can ask from their elderly neighbours about that place, certainlly the older generations have more knowledge about this topic. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, recently a considerable nember of dwellers display this tendency to know more about the history of the place that they are its residence now. Some of them are just history lovers and some of them can not trust others and they do not want to accept others’ claims about the property that they intend to buy and they prefer to shoulder this responsibility. Additionally, there are some available methods for them to get their desired inforamtion for example conducting a survey in their nighbourhood and also doing an inventigation on the internet.",
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"content": "I against to use technology to reed faces because some times our expressions do not mean that a computer now how we fell.\n\nThis told us how this program is created, when a computer create a 3-D, computer model of the face: all the 44 muscles in the model moust move like a human muscles.\n\nSo this tell us that the compuner do not now how exactly how we feels in that moment because, the program only recognyse the muscles of the face. So this is a not a good option to used in a clasroom because if you fells happy, or sad, the teacher can ask you if yor are mad because acording with the computer you are.\n\nOr your friends see the program that says you are happy, but yourself is sad, your friend will be start to joke with you and, you do not liked, maybe they will be have problems.\n\nIs not possible that a computer can tell us how we fell.",
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"content": "In the first photo it looks like it is a human face but when it goes to the second photo it look sbasically like nothing. Maybe just like a cloud but nothing really then when it goes to the last photo it looks like it is a hard object but it has cracks in it. In the story it says \" Twenty five years ago something funny happened around Mars.\" it says that something funny happened. It did not happen on purpose so we do not know if it was an alien or another creature.\n\nThey thought that it was a Martin mesa but it was common for that to happen around Cydonia. The \"Face\" had an unusal shadow on it like it was made to look like an Egyptian Pharoh. It only loooked like that in the first photo not the second or third. When NASA took photos of the face and put them on the internet everyone basically freaked out because they thought it was a sign for alien life. It could be but there can be many other reasons why it looks like a face. They say that it could be just a natural landform but many people like to think that \"oh it is not it is a sign of alien life\".\n\nThe caption on the photo when they posted it on the internet was \"Huge rock formation...Which resembles a human head... formed by sadow giving illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\". That was a go getter for attention it looks like they just want to get attention so they can scare people like a lot of people do. It was a good way to engage the public but it was also a bad way of getting their attention. It was bad because a lot of people can get scared because of something they hear and this story did not seem really believeable. A lot of people will believe anything they see on the internet it bacisally does not matter on what it is about they will just believe it.\n\n\"The Face on Mars\" had became a pop icon it was on Hollywood films, in books, magazines, and radio talk shows. Also in the story it says \"It once haunted a grocery store check out line for 25 years.\". That is just crazy that peope will believe things like that ! Sometimes people just want to scare other people and tell them lies about anything. Some people think that the face is \"bona fide\" evidence of life on Mars. People say that NASA wants to hide every reason from them so they do not find out anything.\n\nThey just want to say conspiracy theorists and not tell the truth..... That could be true but in this case I do not think so. The people on NASA's side the denfenders of NASA thinks that NASA's budget wish that there was ancient civilaztion on Mars. If NASA tells people everything about \"The Face\" then people will just spend all their time getting worried about it and want more reasons on why that it is there.\n\nSometimes things like \"The Face\" can pop up and people just would not know how it happened and why it did happen. They thought that the photo just was not sharp enough to see it cleary. It showed that it just was a natural landform and there was no sign of an alien monument.\n\nIt was just a cloudly time of the year and the camera caught the wind blowing and the haze got in front of the photo. They went back on a cloudless summer day to see if they can get a better photo then before to see what it was.\n\nIt showed that it was a Martain equivelent of a butte or mesa. Landforms are common around the American West. It showed that it was a lava dome that takes a form of an isloted mesa about the same height as the face on Mars. It was never a sign that aliens were on Mars but aliens could be on Mars and we would of never knew but they took a photo on the wrong night so they had to go back and see it again. The whole alien story was very unbelieveable to me but people will believe in anything.",
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"content": "The BMW and other car places are planning on making thier cars driveless by 2020. These cars could help older people who cant drive. It could also help new drivers on the road and sleepy drivers.\n\nWho do we blame if the car causes a crash and its not the drivers fault but its thier car? What if the car tries to takeover everthing and some how the car gets messed up. What if the car dosent let you get out the car ? What if the car blows up on its own? There are a lot of questions that need to be answered.\n\n2020 is a good time to figure out if we really need these cars by then . They need to answer any questions if asked , so they will know everything they need to know about htese cars.\n\nFurther improvements in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handel more and more driving tasks on their own.\n\nWhile the driver watches the road the car watches you.",
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"content": "There Are Many Jobs Out There, Things Such As A Factory Worker, A Farmer, And Even A Fisherman. But There's On Job You May Have Never Heard Of, It's Called The Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nAlthough Dangerous At Times, This Job Lets You Evplore The Ocean And Its Vast Beauties, You May Get To See Places Cuch As Islands, Historic Landmarks And Beautiful Cities. Aswell AnChance To See Local Farm Animals And Feed Them, The Reason These Animals Are Being Delivered To Different Countries Is To Help People From Around The World With Things Such As Drought And Hunger.\n\nThere Are Also Ways To Have Fun Aswell, With Games Such As Table Tennis, Baseball And Volleyball. There Are Some Competitive Sports Such As Boxing And Wrestling. And Other Activities Like Reading And Whittling.\n\nThis Job Gives You A Chance To Help, Explore, And Have Fun On The Open Ocean, I Would Reccomend This Job And It's Ins And Outs. Have Fun!",
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"content": "How do you feel about our voting system today? Today our current voting system consists of electoral colleges that vote for there certain president depending on your votes for president. We have had this system since the begaining of voting for president for our country. Some believe that our country recieves harm as far as our selection for president goes. What they mean by this is that it all pretty much relies on the electoral colleges to vote our president. The problem with this is that people think that the president should be chose from popular vote, not from the electoral colleges. The thing with this is the our favors can be easily swayed due to the smart and cleverly designed ads during there campaign for president. Now see this wouldnt be a problem except that these advertisements arent always true and could sway our vote for the wrong reasons. This where the elctoral colleges come into play, they limit the amount of votes each president gets by the state. The electoral votes are then distributed to each candidate according to the amount of votes each one gets in the state. If we left it to just popular vote, the new president could just be decided by a couple clever ads and not there actual reasons for running, and what there gonna do for the country. all this being said i do think the amount of electorl votes shouldnt change due to the size of the sate so everyone has a fair chance. Honestly i think the electoral vote system works like a charm and would side with it opposed to the popular vote side of things.",
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"content": "\"Twenty five years ago something funny happened around Mars. NASAs Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet, snapping photos of possible landing sites for its sister ship Viking 2, when it spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face.\" This is an excerpt from the article \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\". This is describing a strange feature found on the face of mars in the region of Cydonia.\n\nAt first there were no clear pictures of the face and no certain explanations. The Viking 1 found it in 1976 and back then the quality was not so great. Scientists thought \"it was just another Martian mesa\" but they also noted one unusual shadow, so they were not that clear on the reason. In 1998 NASA took another picture in better resolution but it was cloudy and some people were not convinced that it was a mesa. In 2001 NASA was finally able to capture a clear picture of the formation, putting down any kind of conspiracy theories.\n\nSpeaking of conspiracy theories, many believed that \"...the Face is bona fide evidence of life on Mars\". Some theories were that aliens built \"an Egyptian pharoah\". Some of the scientists at NASA even believed that it was evidence of alien life on mars! Conspiracy theorists say that NASA would rather hide life on Mars, but defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilisation on mars becuase then NASA would get more money to go to mars.\n\nNow with higher resolution pictures NASA scientists have found what the \"Face\" really is. It seems that their earlier guesses were in fact correct! As quoted in \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\", \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa\". The scientists were correct on saying it looked like a mesa. They have even found out with higher resolution pictures that it almost resembles the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. They both have a similar height and shape.\n\nSadly the \"Face\" is not an ancient alien ruins or a temple. Dont we all want it to be proof of life on mars? Scientists have proved that it is not though. Scientists say that it is in fact a mesa, and they put to rest a long standing mystery of the face on mars and any conspiracy theories with it.",
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"content": "The driveless car has its pros, and its cons. My position on the it is positive rather than negative. The driveless car has many features and positive perks. But it still has its bad perks. Driveless cars come off to me as a pretty good idea and i support the idea.\n\nDriveless cars come off to others as a bad idea to invest time and effort on.\n\nBut the Driveless cars also have their pros. Driveless cars would change the amount of fuel we use by decreasing the amount by\n\nhalf, not only that its saving half our fuel it is also a great way for our technology to advance leading to other inventions that could just keep improving our everyday technology. Driveless cars would also be a way to prevent people from drunk driving or even just normal wreaks.Driveless cars would be good for new drivers would dont know the roads or where they are going.\n\nDrivless cars can be a harm, or just a plain bad idea. Some people may want cars to continue being the same, or they just may not trust technology. Driveless cars could be a bad idea considering that technology could crash or fail at any point and time.Driveless cars would consume lots of materials, and cost a lot per car made.\n\nDriveless cars dont seem to be that bad of a idea to me. Driveless cars would help new learners know the road, or even teach them a little about it. They may be a fortune when making them, but its a great way to conserve our fuel. They also could lead to other inventions for improving our future.\n\nDriveless cars can be a good and bad idea for the future. Although, advancing our technology with driveless cars would be a pretty great improvment, but not only a improvment but a\n\ngreat way to teach young drivers the rules of the road and how to drive. They driveless car would be a perfect innovantion for our future and whatever else it inspires.",
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"content": "I think that driveless cars are great because for example say if your on the road and your hands start to get tired you can relax and let your car do all the driving and driveless cars can also be good for people with arthoritist or people who have bad hands regardless of the causes.\n\nI think driveless cars are good because if your on the road and your hands start to get tired the car can do all of the work until you feel like driving again but you still have to be cautious and be aware of what your cars are doing. The car to me sounds great because in the story it quotes \" The combination of all this input is necessary for the driveless car to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel. So basically if you have a driveless car and your not holding the wheel the car would still drive perfect do to it having the skill that make the car drive like a human is\n\nbehind the wheel. These cars also have problems you have to be ready and grab the wheel if your car lights blink indicating that you are about to hit someone or something.\n\nDriveless cars would also be good for people to have arthoritist because if the car drives it's self the person behind the wheel wouldn't really have to do anything only when the time comes. The story indicates that the people in the car entertainment are trying to make driveless cars fun because i know if someone just sitting in there cars doing nothing but listening to music they would get bored but i also know people with arthoritist would love these cars because they will not have to use there hands they could just sit back and listen to music. Driveless cars can be perfect for many people of all kinds and they can help in the society.\n\nDriveless cars can also be great for people that wants to have fun\n\nif they dont feel like driving. For example i dont recommend this but for people that drink and drive driveless cars can be a little bit better and prevent them from getting into a car accident. In the passage it states that this car has many alerts like the windshield wipers they flash if your about to crash or the seats shake so this is why this car is perfect.\n\nIn conclusion now you know why i think driveless cars are perfect because they are good for the roads and good for people with arthoritist.",
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"content": "Driveless cars should indeed be the next big thing. Having a driveless taxi service will be even better for people who can't afford a stable transportaion everyday. Starting off the cars may not be as safe but things will progess to get better to where you can trust your child being in a driveless car. Having these cars will make streets more busier but it will help everybody get to where they need to be at a certain time. We are expecting to run out of oil in the next 30 years so trying to find a solution now is something that needs to be done now. Cars are something we use everyday in the world, we will not be albe to use them is we have no oil so trying to find more better and less expensive ways are better. Having a driveless car saves tons of many with not having to buy all of the time.\n\nCars will forever be needed all around the world for everyday use, rather its with oil or not we will forever need them. This was will be a very good way to continuing on to have cars and getting place to place. With technology being so good now, we can make a very safe drivless car that will attract everyones attention to switch over to a driveless car. Not only will we not have to spend tons on gas there will also be less air pollution and that is something we need because air pollution is just going to continue on getting worse if we do not try to stop it now before it gets to hard for us human and also animals to breath than that will bring many health problems which leads on to death for humans and animals. If us humans lose our animals that us losing everything to where it won't be any man kind left here on Earth. One tiny mistake could hurt everything, maybe driveless cars don't sound safe but you can only find out if you try them out. Everything happens for a reason so maybe this is for the good and we have to get poeple to understand all of the postiv ethings that a driveless car has to offer to people. Letting people know the pros and cons will change people minds knowing that the pros outweigh the cons.\n\nThere is both good and bad things that can result of of this but we will never know until perople test it out. Driveless cars are something that us as humans have to work on together to make it come true. Viewing it as a postive thing will be a good way on making this come true. Be more open-minded sometimes we as people have to take risk to see what the results are. Driveless cars will be a very good way for people to get transport.",
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"content": "I think using technology to read the emotional expressions of the sudents in a classroom is a good thing because, what if someone had computer time when coming back from the playground and they were bullied but no one knows, the computer would know if they are sad then the child can get help.\n\nAnother reason is because, if a child is being beat at home and the teacher comes behind him and he gets scared because he thinks its someone at home getting ready to hit him/her the computer could detect that and the teacher can call someone for help.\n\nA third reason is because, a student can be happy about their birthday or making a new friend or something and the teacher can have a good day knowing there is joy in his/hers eyes.\n\nThat is why i think it is a good thing for a computer that tells emotional expressions should be in a classroom.",
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"content": "Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. Well Venus is the second planet from our sun. It is also proved a very challenging place to exmine more closely because Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth. Venus is also the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, it is also clostest in distance too. Venus is sometimes right around the corner in space and humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on the cloud-draped world, and since they went there they don't survive for more than 2 hours.\n\nAlso numerous factors talk about Venus being a challenging planet for humans to study. They say it's even more challenging the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric in Venus. The temperature that the planet holds is 800 degress Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what they experince on our own planet. This is more extreme than anything humans can hold on Earth. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, it's amazing because even though Mercury is closer to the sun Venus is still hotter.\n\nVenus has once been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. They even say Venus was probably coverd with largely oceans and could also supported various form of life, just like Earth. So basically they are saying it Venus was some what like the Earth. So now in day venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. Venus can also be sometimes be our nearest option for a planetray visit. Venus seems indisputable.\n\nVenus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks. But they thought it as challenges. Also now many researchers are working on making machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus. So it can be stronger than humans and they can last longer with Venus. There are still NASA working on other approches to study Venus.\n\nSo this is all the inforamtion they have for Venus. It is very powerful and hard to do awhole thing about Venus because humans going over there can die about in 2 hours.",
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"content": "Have you ever wanted to know what planets are very close to the earth? well venus is the closet planet to earth in terms of density and size. And occashionally the closet distance. Earth snd venus and mars are our planetary neighbor.\n\nMaybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has tpuched the planet venus in three decades. A thick atmosphere almost 97 percent caron dioxide blanket venus. As of today Venus has some features that are analogous to those on earth. The planet venus has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and creators.\n\nPeering at Venus from a ship orbitin or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography. Researcher cannot take samples of rock, gas or anything else from a distance.\n\nOur travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\n\nEach misson was unmanned and for good reason. sinnce no spacecrat survived the landing more than a few hours, The venus is also called the evening star. its also one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, making it simple for even a amateur stargazer to spot. The nickname is misleading since Venus is actually a planet. Venus has also provided a very very challenging place to examine more even alot closer",
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"content": "In the article The Challenge of Exploring Venus, the author describes the difficulty of having humans on the planet but the many benefits it could bring scientists is without a doubt great. The author shows this idea in a fairly well manner by, explaining how people could inhabit the planet, how we would have unmanned vehicles on the surface, and explaining how it would help us study hostile enviroments.\n\nThe author explains how could inhabit this hostile planet with the surface being so hostile. NASA proposes an aerial vehicle like the following, \"Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape.\" This means that some solar powered vehicle would either orbit or hover around the atmospher of Venus far above it's hostile landscape.\n\nSecondly, the author explains how we could have unmanned vehicles on to the dangerous surface that Venus provides. They propose using an old technology that would be able to operate under these hostile conditions without melting as modern electronics generally do, \"Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers.\" This shows that with the more resiliant domputers they would be able to last a much longer amount of time then their modern counterparts.\n\nLastly, we would be able to study these hostile enviroments with a combination of these two technologies that sould be put to use by scientists and astronauts. If this mission were succesful we would be able to understand alot more about these hostile enviroments, \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" This shows that if we managed to succeed in such a mission it would be extremely beneficial to humanity in the future.\n\nSo even though the author points out that traveling to Venus is such a daunting task, we should still put the effort in to explore this planet. The author points out these points very effectivley but they could have been supported furthermore by listing more benefits to exploring such a hostile enviroment.",
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"content": "Censorship important Especially pertaining books magazines movies music almost people reading watching listening Some media books magazines libraries everywhere highly offensive certain people send wrong message children teens So take shelves I personally think media aspects shelves libraries offensive people alot people s opinions The readers ones claiming books media aspects libraries offensive The authors directors singers judgement opinions come people fans critics We nt taking library shelves offensive people This leads back quote Katherine Paterson states And books left shelf us We ca nt take everything shelves everyone s opinions different censor everything wo nt anything left Right good job censoring everything putting rating video games movies Rated movies known adult watchers goes video games Music play radio censored foul language make effort That leaves people choice watch listen read things want know beforehand might offend Although sometimes people think censoring media aspects enough censorship s done offend others By taking everything shelves people s opinions could potentially make someone else angry lacked things want read watch Censorship wholesome without removing media shelves world",
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"content": "Imagine if you went to Mars, and you saw a face shaped like a Egyptian Pharaoh? You saw the same shape in Cydonia, and you thought it was the same monument? You thought it was a real human face? What if I came to the end of it, saying it's just a natural landform. NASA reveiled the picture, it sure grabbed the publics attention, What if all that was just a lie to get money off of people that found that picture interesting. They could have edited who knows.\n\nOn April 5, 1998, when a team flew over to Cydonia, for the first time a few men named Michael Malin and his team snapped a few pictures. It was sharper than the original Viking photos. When the picture was reveiled, it was just a natural landform. After all that their was not a monument with an alien on it (Unmasking the Face on Mars 1, 2, 3, 7).\n\nThe \"face\" you see in the picture is just a plain landform. The group went back again, it was not easy to target Cydonia again. When they finally found it, they took the pictues where you could see closer than you thought to see if there were pyramids, airplanes, or small shacks. They came upon the picture there were butte or mesa, and natutal landforms. That reminded them, that was a dome of lava, that looks like a form of a mesa that's deforming and looks the same height as the Face on Mars. This comes to the end that it's just a natural landform. ( Unmasking the Face on Mars 8,9,10,11,12).",
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"content": "Could you imagine sitting behind a wheel of a driveless car? The thought may sound good, but in reality it's worse. Automakers should prevent making driveless cars. Driveless cars are dangerous, and a waste of money.\n\nDriveless cars are dangerous. In the state of Indiana about five out of ten smart cars are bought each day. About one out of three cars are wrecked each day. The features of normal cars are already distracting. Let alone make a driveless car. In paragraph eight, it states \"wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?\" If a driver got bored waiting on their turn they could easily fall asleep. What if they fell into a deep sleep? That would be even more dangerous. Also, easier for a wreck to occur. The driver could easily get distracted by their phone or anything. All of these situations are dangerous. Nobody should take the risk of hurting someone or themselves.\n\nDriveless cars are a waste of money. In paragraph ten, it stated \"Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020.\" Here in Indiana, a Mercedes-Benz run about $80,000. Imagine spending that much on just one car. You can buy two for just that one price. People will spend that amount on a new car, but not college. Around the world, two out of three students miss out on college. Imagine your mother spending that much on a new driveless car instead of college for you. Wouldn't that hurt your feelings?\n\nDriveless cars are dangerous, and a waste of money. Automakers should prevent making driveless cars. You can save about ten lives a day by preventing driveless cars. May we all strive to help save a life. I wouldn't waste my money on a driveless car, and neither should you.",
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"content": "The author presents their own opinion on why we should investigate Venus for human civilization. In each paragraph that the author writes, they explain in detail the pros and cons about the study of Venus. Using the knowledge that they have of the planet, many of the ideas that they present give the idea that they are determined to give us the reason to agree with him.\n\nThe first idea that they auther states is that Earth, Venus, and Mars are all very close in terms of density and size, and is very close in orbit as well. This leads to Earth sending spacecrafts to land on Venus to gain research on the other planet, but each time, the spacecraft only has limited time to gain research because of the harsh conditions. This gives the author a way of explaining the details of Venus in a descriptive way. Venus has an atmosphere of 97 percent carbon dioxide, clouds with highly corrosive sulfuric acid, the average temperature is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the pressure is 90 times greater than Earth.\n\nEven with the highly hostile environment, the author explains why astronomers are still trying to visit the planet. The author explains how Venus may have been like Earth in terms of nature. Their detailing explains how Venus was possibly covered largely with oceans and had the same ability as Earth by being able to support forms of life. The author also states that when Venus is close to Earth's orbit, astronauts can easily fly to it's surface and land.\n\nThroughout the essay, the author explains the difficulties and how we can get past inhabiting Venus. He describes in many ways how landing on the planet can be beneficial for research and living conditions.",
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"content": "In today's era, children are more impacted by famous personalities. People claim that, celebrities are followed more for a fashion and money than their intelligence. This essay will argue, why young ones are impacted and how it creates a wrong influence on them.\nCelebrities have a great influence on the younger ones. Social media plays a vital role to make an ordinary individual turning into a famous personality over night helps to make them look extraordinary. No matter what, if the person lacks any talent, but exceptionally good at showing off money will get famous soon. For example, a rich person can post a video of riding of his/her latest Tesla car on Instagram and that video will be liked by millions of people around the world, that's how they get recognised. Overall, young generation is easily attracted to a materialistic world rather than admiring actual efforts.\nDespite celebrities being highly followed they leave a negative impact on the minds of young ones. Children try to imitate them in every sense, moreover, they desire to be one of them in a mere future, which directly impact their career in the initial stage of education. Also, they devote precious time on copying them instead of focusing on their studies. For instance, children try to maintain glamour by wearing same clothes and making videos to the perfection, which impacts their interest in homework. In short, young generation is easily bullied by the fake world without thinking the negative aspects.\nThis essay argued that younger individuals are mesmerized by the spark of famous personalities ignoring their hard work and talent. In my opinion, it is rightly said that children are more attracted towards celebrities because of their looks and richness than their skills.",
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"content": "Patience Wow want critism sure Well since asked looks like Im give Patience cousins uncles aunties even I need CAPS days times We need every day key word patience mean Patience means understanding tolerant Also means experience difficulties without complaining Or words long suffering also able wait want done Being patient something I time need Like daddy say time going always get receive everything want youll learn patience That one word I like something I really wantso story patience explained way",
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"content": "The limitation of car use provides many improvements to our envionment and health. Many different places have now started to get into the habit of preferring to use bicycles, car-pools, or even walking. Limiting car use could lead to less polution, more activity, and even safety. If we were to limit the use of cars, we could save many lives, including our own. While limiting the usage of cars many doors could open that leads many different places. Limiting cars could possibly terminate childhood and adulthood obesity. It could also provide happiness and joy, and even willing exercise. Cars both hinder, and help us, it gets the people where they need to go, but it ruins the environment and makes many people lathargic.\n\nWith the limitation of cars comes the major improvement on polution.\n\n\"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe.... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States\" (1, Rosenthal). Passenger cars are responsible for 12 precent of the greenhouse emissions found in Europe, and where most cars are used the greenhouse gass emissions are up to 50 percent. The amount of gas that is polluting the air is asoultly hazardous to the health of many people. \"...[The smog] rivaled Beijing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world\" (1, Duffer). Paris eventually needed to ban driving due to the smog that was being produced from the cars. As stated in the ariticle, \"...it will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment, since transportation is the second largest source of America's emissions, just behind power plants\" (1, Rosenthal). If we were to limit the car usage, many smog and greehouse gases would not be as much of an issue as it is now. If we were to limit the usage of cars and prefer to car-pool, alot of gas, money, and lives. With the limiting of car usage comes the possibility of living a longer, healthier life without pollution tearing a hole in the ozone layer.\n\nLimiting the use of cars can also produce more activity among the people and hapiness. Limiting the use of cars forces many people to start walking, using trains, running, and even bicycling. As states in the article, \"New York's new bike-sharing program and its skyrocketing bridge and tunnel tolls reflect those new priorities, as do a proliferation of car-sharing programs across the nations\" (1, Rosenthal). Many places are now starting to realize that the people are slowly loosing interest in cars and now perfer to walk, run, or even take public transportation. As stated in the articaly, \"..millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work leaving a car-free day yesterday, leaving the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams.... 'It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution'\" (1, Selsky). \"It has seen the construction of bicycle paths, the most of any Latin American cirt....Parks and sports centers also have bloomes throughout the city; uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rush hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic; and new resturants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up\" (1, Selsky). Many citizens are starting to prefer to walk rather than drive. The perople are slowly moving away from motor vehicles and are starting to go outside and to exercise. As mentioned in the article, \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,\" (1, Rosenthal) This choice is making alot most people happy and satified. Many people no longer need to fret about gas money or traffic, or even about arriving on time. Having no car is a stress-reliever that saves you time, stress, and keeps you from pulling at your hair. Exercising is also a much easier way to be able to blow off steam and reduce stress.\n\nAnother positive of limiting car use is the safety that is provided. Many Americans are now choosing to not recieve a license. The people are slowly moving away from the driving of cars and are now preferring to use public transportation, or even walking. People are now slowly starting to center their lives around where it could be easy to transport. Their place of work could now be centered around where public transport is able to drop them off, a walking distance, or even on the normal route that a friend, whom you could be able to catch a ride, wouldn't mind dropping you off at. As stated in the article, \"They organize their summer jobs and soical life around where they can walk or take public transportation or car-pool with friends\" (1, Rosenthal). Another reason why many people do not drive, is due to the fact that many families and people cannot afford a vehicle, or they choose to not purchase one. As stated in the artice, \"'What most intrigues me is that rates of car ownership per household and per person started to come down two to three years before the downturn'\" (1, Rosenthal). With less amount of people on the road, this lowers the possible chances of someone being in an accident. The possibility of poeple being in car accident have been lowered, because a majority of the people are refusing to drive. As mentioned in an artice, \"When adjusted to the population growth, th enumber of miles driven in the United States peaked in 2005 and dropped steadily thereafter, according to an analysis by Doug Short...the number of miles driven perperson was nearly 9 percent below the peak and equal to where the country was in January 1995\" (1, Rosenthal). If the people were to drive less this would mean less accidents and less pollution which could lead to lenghtier lives and to healthier lives.\n\nIn conclusion, with the limitation on the use of automobiles comes the many possibilities that could possibly save lives and re-shape them into something much more healthier. While reducing the usage of automobiles comes exercise and the relief os stress. Maybe childhood or adulthood obesity would not be as large of an issue if were reduced car usage. Many people could then be healthier and more involeved in their communities. With the limitation of car usage comes the unlimited possibilities.",
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"content": "From story girl moved Vietnam United It hard girl understand anything anything bring memory back Vietnam The author concludes story paragraph fail test see wants see hibiscus budding II failed test Saeng said mother Her mother actually understand happen let Saeng keep hibiscus make Saeng feel better Saeng miss Vietnam lot like try best overcome obstacles",
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"content": "I believe things nt taken shelfs people offended There nt like something every nt like For example might book makes females look dumb personally nt affect girls get offended thier superior knowledge I friend gets offended movies black guy always gets trouble dies first So removed every movie offended would left I feel offensive magazine shows girls pretty makes people feel insecure Even though I feel offended I m going request remove magazines give tips actually helps people feel better I took away could cause issues If something removed shelves good reason Like magazine showed nudity I would understand removing kid nt see itSome libraries remove things could potentially cause great issue Maybe newspaper talks great disaster every one swarms stand attacking Something like cause people hospitalized library sued Yes I agree people would request stuff removed ca nt always get way I know people would say thats fair saying says life nt fair thats true So next time hear one wanting something removed tall next time want thing removed refer back So conclusion things nt removed unless nessecary So someone offended thats problem You always walk away dont look listen",
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"content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" the author informs us on how new vehicles are being built that would take away most, if not all of the driver's control in the vehicle. The idea is fasinating but, with every new idea, there is always more than one fault, because nothing is perfect. Is taking the risk of mass producing these automobiles in the future worth a human life, or many?\n\nFirst and foremost, cars were just a show of status and new inventions in the 1920's when they first started ot come out, only men could drive them because there was no power steering to help a weaker person turn the wheel. Now, about a hundred years later, \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" states, \"He envisions a future with a public transportation system where fleets of driverless cars form a public-transport taxi system.\" Which would have never been a thought even fifty years ago, but because of how technology has advanced, now the Google cofounder, Sergey Brin, can now dream of complete lathargicness. What he does not see is how dangerous cars already are with the human brain at the wheel. Statistics can support how many accidents already happen a year, and half of them will be because people aren't paying attention, the other part could be drunk or buzzed driving, and a \"new\" cause that has occured ould be texting and driving. Having no human influence on the car's action \"90 percent of the time,\" as shown in paragraph 10, could lead to problems in the car gaining a mind of it's own, there are a handful of movies out there that showcase the dangers that technology can posses, I believe that the car companies need to watch those fictious films and be more careful when they're messing with new machienes.\n\nTaking away the need for constant attention to a vehicle could be problematic because people could start to get lazy since there is no need to always pay attention. When the vibrating seat, the announcement, flashing lights on the windsheild, or other heads-up displays fails to work a single time: what happens then? America is a lazy country in general, eating McDonalds constantly and having the rate of obesity go up 200% in the last 50 years. The addition of self driving cars may just be another cause to why people kick the bucket early on, decreasing the population at a higher rate than it is going up. I say this because people would stop walking or running places, most likely, if the public transportation is affrordable on a day-to-day basis then that would add to their weight gain and laziness to eventually lead to physical problems. If a person does die from an accident or even a health condition and they used the self-driving cars everyday, would the company be responsible? If not, what kind of reputation would that send to other states and people? Not a very good one, meaning sales would decrease and maybe the idea will just be another mistake of the rich taking advantage of the poor.\n\nAlso, new laws being put into place to help satisfy the saftey concerns brought with the new car could be too restrictive and anger the people. Some states, if they declare the law unconsititutional could choose not to abide by it, what will the government do if they don't enforce it? Violence? Peaceful compromization? It is a risk too big to take because once the government gets involved, esseintally everyone loses hope because most of the time their decisions are not fair to all. Money is also a problem, we could be sent into another Great Depression if too much is spent on new roads to accomodate. Pollution of the air will also still be a major problem because fossil fuels would still be used, even though the tank is only half as much as taxi's now, the exhaust would add up if everyone used this new transportation.\n\nAll in all, the idea of vehicles performing the task that a human being does is incredible but, it is not safe for the manufacturers, the public, or even the government to indulge in this need to keep on improving technology. We are scraping by now with accidents happening on a daily basis, deaths are at an alltime high due to lathargicness and obesity, and laws are not always welcomed by the people. The addition and satisfaction of the self-driving car should not happen anytime soon because there are too many negative issues that need to be sorted out before the public is welcomed to all.",
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"content": "My argument is against the development driveless cars because the driveless cars needs drivers and drivers also have to wait for their turn to drive.\n\nOne positve way about my argument for the Google cars are that the Google car let the driver know when he or she should take over and watches the driver to make sure the diver is focusing on the roads.\n\nSecond negative way about my argument against the driveless cars are that they need drivers to control them when its the driver turn until the car decides wether it wants to be controlled.\n\nMy agrument isfor the development cars because these cars have television and movies on the cars because the cars can drive themselves and that can drive half a million miles and 25moh without any crash and also alerts the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with issues.\n\nThis is my way of my argument of Driveless cars and against driveless cars .",
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"content": "Some people have never thought about the plant Venus,but it is closer to our plant then any other plant. The author says why people should explor the plant Venus,but the exploring it will be dangers. The author says that the plant Venus is sometimes referred as Earth's twin. Also the author says that the plant Venus is about 170 degrees Fahrenheit it you go to Venus. Also in the article Venus has never been visted since three decades.\n\nFirst, the author supports his idea by saying that the exploring will be dangers but not that much. For example if you go to explore the plant Venus there is a chance of you been in danger. Also in our plant the temperatures averages about 800 degrees Fahrenheit and on the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater. Also another example is when the author says \"Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like eurpting volcanoes,powerful earthquakes and frequent lighting strikes\" which means that the danger is high. Also the author says \"since no spacecraft survived the landing\" which means that it is dangers and could have a chance to die.\n\nSecond, the author supports his idea by saying that \"Venus is Eath's twin\". For example Venus is the closest plant to Earth after the sun. Also in the article it says \"eurpting volcanoes,powerful earthquakes and frequent lighting strikes\" which means the Earth has the same things. Also another example is in the article it says \"planting and farming can happen\" which leads that the Earth you can plant and farm same as Venus. The plant Venus is the same as the Earth,but Venus is more dangers.\n\nThrid, the author supports his idea by saying that the \"plant Venus is about 170 degrees Fahrenheit\". For example if you go to the plant Venus you will have a chance of diying. Also in Earth the highest temperature was about 110 degrees Fahrenheit,but in the plant Venus it is 170 degrees Fahrenheit. Also another example the author says that \"the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater\" which means the pressure in the plant Venus is greater than the Earth's pressure. The pressure is high in the plant Venus,and also it is higher than the Earth's.\n\nIn conclusion the plant Venus is very dangers. Also in the plant Venus you can die because of it is danger. Also another reason is that the plant Venus is the Earth's twin they have a lot of similar things. Also the plant Venus is more hotter than the Earth, and you can die in it. Therefor, the author supported his ideas with good information.",
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"content": "Population in a few countries are trying to indulge themselves in knowing the history of the houses that they live in or the cultural heritage of their king or queen’s mansion. I agree with the given statement that more people are interested in knowing about the history of the periodical constructions, which are either made for them or for rulers of that kingdom. The main reason behind this sudden surge of this sort of cultural swift is because of people are started to know about the places that they live in, either through the free time that they had or through discussions with friends. Due to the pandemic, whatever the root cause, people are researching it online or offline.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, it is a lot easier for them to know about the buildings that they live, because it was either their own buildings are constructed anywhere between 50-100 years out some of which date back to more than that, but we can ask our grandparents who were living now about the history of the building, how it was constructed, who made it, old people are more interested in telling the story while having lunch or a dinner. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, when it comes to larger buildings of the kings in a particular area, people like to know through online research and if possible, have a visit themselves like a vocation. For example; more people are visiting the British palace, some say that it generates around 500 million pounds in revenue just by visits alone. If you take that into consideration then we can see the scale of which people are inkling towards this particular culture.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, people are knowing about buildings and their history in a few countries, either through online or offline research, mainly because of the pandemic which makes people curious about knowing about life and the history of what they had in life.",
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"content": "The main features setting affected cyclist fact June dessert heat I could drop heat stroke gorgeous day June kurmaskie This helps us realize bad heat June middle California dessert This affected cyclist dehydration fact inthe middle one help This month June dessert heat affected cyclist",
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"content": "In the modern classroom, technology plays a key factor in the everyday life of a student, whether it be researching for an assignment in English class, or simply using an online textbook for Chemistry class. In any case, the most important thing about technology is its use to the operator, and a good way to put this is that \"a computer is only as smart as the person controlling it\". That is why emotion-reading technology like the Facial Action Coding System is paramount to keeping the computer as user-oriented and personalized for the most productivity.\n\nIn the article, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" by Nick D'Alto, D'Alto talks about how Dr. Thomas Huang, a professor at Beckman Institute, created a set algorithms fit to calculate one's facial expressions by targeting all of the fourty four major facial muscles to measure percentages of emotion based on the average human muscle uses for certain emotions. In today's world, technology like this is already being put into place, but on the smaller scale of simple facial recognition. From apps like Snapchat that scan your face to put funny animal features on your face in a picture, smartphones unlocking at the simple notion of a face, or even military-grade scanners to track down the bad guys, it is evident that this sort of technology has plenty of useful properties.\n\nFor previously saying that this technology could track down terrorist leaders, it may be difficult to understand why or how this technology could possibly apply in the classroom. Actually, D'Alto gives examples of just how the Facial Action Coding System would work towards a brighter future through school. In Paragraph six, D'Alto explains that in a computer-centralized classroom, computer-camera-friendly software would have the capability to adjust a lesson or video based on the viewing student's facial responses. This adjustment to the student can completely revolutionalize education, as learning would not have to be some generalized, bland experience fit for all, but instead have each lesson mold to fit anyone.\n\nWith all great ideas, there are some implementation and safety issues involved. For one, the applicable software required for something like this in a large classroom setting would be difficult: with distractions in class like talking to friends, or working on pencil and paper along with the computer, a somewhat buggy program could read a facial expression of disgust or laughter while talking to a friend as a negative response to a lesson, possibly messing up the learning experience. In another aspect, some people are already paranoid about being watched by the government, and this could be an understandable fear to some extent. With serious issues like online security breaches and threats towards schools, it could be quite possible that people intenting to harm or threaten students could hack into camera feeds that would be more available through learning programs and watch students, or leak photos with threatening comments on social media.\n\nIn a general sense, it is difficult to say whether or not programs like the Facial Action Coding System should be integrated into the daily education of students at school. On the one hand, a personalized learning experience would bode well for not only grades, but general understanding and enjoyment in school. In the wrong lighting, though, the technology could be more of a threat than a help when it comes to school safety. If paired with the right software and protection, I believe with no doubt that the technology should be used to better the technological experience in and out of the classroom, and with this growing day and age, it is uncertain what else could come about in the near future.",
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"content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez undoubtedly creates mood happyness love love family friends His definition family different people s definitions many people would agree definition He calls family blood relatives love friendship people eachother By creating mood love happyness draws reader cultural story life affected parents family When describes food laughter neighbors kitchen house feels warm feels like place someone would love Because talks things people want hear accomplishes great feeling warmth happy throughout reading",
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"content": "People have different views whether children should take art lessons in their school .I completely agree with those people who think that art should be a part of education. . This essay will discuss both points of view before drawing reasonable conclusion .\r\n\r\nOn the one hand , Art has different benefits for childrens. Firstly , As arts gives the sense of pleasure and comfort , it is vital for spiritual health of children which can be damaged easily during the puberty. \r\n\r\nFor example a recent survey contucted by The Times Magazine has proved that children who are interested in arts shows fewer depression symptoms. Secondly , There are some children who innately gifted. Therefore, it is significant to discover them in their early ages , because they can find wider time in order to improve their talents. For example, Beethoven, the most famous musician in 18th century , has been discovered by his music teacher called Darcy Smith. Finally, thanks to this example, we can understand the importance of art for children. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand , despite the others, some people claim that art classes are not useful.The Main reason behind this can be that parents do not consider art as a job field for their children , because the amount of money earned by craftsman is very little today. However , in my opinion, parents should be aware of that money must not be thought as a first issue when choosing a job . Since , loving the job is more important than the salary for the future happiness of children . Therefore , İn addition to science lectures such as physics and math, Art classes should be given children in order to ensure that they can lean toward any subject that they like . \r\n\r\nIn conclusion , as art has different useful impact on children, suchsuch as helping to discover their talents or protecting their spiritual health , classes related to art must be taken by children in schools and parents should not mislead them by thinking about money .",
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"content": "I dont think that driverless car's should be made. I think that it could be good at first ,but after a couple years all the sensiors and technoligy coulod start going out. That could cause alot of problems resulting in injuries or death. Like the passage said who would be at fault if a crash occures, the manufacturers or the cars owner who wouldnt be driving? This is why i think that all projectes on driverless cars should be shut down.\n\nSome people would say it would be so much better and save a lot of gas ,but it would only be a matter of time for the cars to start having issues and recalls. The driverless cars would just be another very overpriced car any ways. With all the technoligy and work and design that has went in to them it would just be to expensive. The cars may be a lot better for the envirorment and everything but i wouldnt trused all of the senciors and technolgy and computer systems in them. If just one sencor went out that could cause the car to turn into traffic and bam the passengers in the driverless car could be dead.\n\nSome of the smarter states have a law where its illigal to even test the driverless cars. Like the passage states driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe. With these new computer driven cars , I beleave they are just endangering every one even more. With the driverless car u would have to get in it and program the place that you wont it to go to. What id you dont knoe the adress of where your going?\n\nThey could be a good thing someday in the future. After the advanced technoligy we have becomes even more advanced and smarter. But for now they should work on better more important things.People just need to keep diving own thier own. Because if you have to stay alert and have your hands one the wheel you might as well be driving it by yourself anyways.\n\nI just think that our world is lazy enough the way it is and people can at least still drive themselfs. It is still safer to drive by youself than it is to have your driverless care drivng you. I dont trust all that stuff because just think about the issues they have with cars. add that much more technoligy and computers ,that is just so much more stuff to mess up in the future. That is why I dont think driverless cars should be made.",
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"content": "If there was a driveless car's it would be really cool to have because you wouldn't have to worry about anything, You could some were really far in the air riding in a next car. I would really love to have one of them because you can tell it were to go in will take you there and you can take a nap are do something else beside worry about how crazy people when they are driving around. that would be very cool to have that's all i can say.\n\nBut you would have to worry about if it goes down in strop driven what can you do to make it stop are make dont go so you won'ty kill your self are so it won't kill you. Driveless car it a lil crazy when you think about it though because what if you not paying attetion and it runs into something are it stops and you can't do nothing about it. Would it have A wheel were it turns it self our do you have to tell it to turn.\n\nOne cool thing about it tho if you get pulled over by a police men and your not the one driven the car the car is driven himself our herself, what can they say but drive slower are put your seat belt on what for im not driven and you can't give me a ticket becausde of someone else wrong doing that's very crazy. But i think it would be very cool to have a driverless car.................",
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"content": "The new technology that show emotions of people's faces is very helpful. Have you ever looked at someone and thought, \"Are they faking that smile, or are they truly happy?\" With the new technology out today, you can put in an image of someone, and it will tell you their exact emotions. This technology can be helpful, especially in the classrooms. This is because sometimes teachers are not sure on how you actually feel, and what your mood is. If this technology were implemented into the classrooms, it could help teachers know your mood, help students know your mood, and this will help teachers know how students like to learn.\n\nTeachers being able to know your mood, and how you feel, is very important. Especially if you don't do well in school. A lot of people can fake a smile, and say they are fine, but in reality they might be having a hard time at home, which leads to them doing poorly at school. With the new technology, teachers can know if you are actually depressed, sad, or even angry. Any of those emotions could lead you to do poorly in school. If teachers know your real emotions, and can help them try to figure out how to help you.\n\nIt is also important for students to know your emotions. This is so that they know not to bother you, or if they need to ask if you want to talk about it. A lot of times, kids will tease and bother eachother. That usually isn't a problem, usually they are just kidding around. But if you accidentally tease a kid, that just had something traumatic happen in his life, you may set him off. With the new technology, students can know exactly how their classmates feel.\n\nFinally, if the new technology were implemental in classrooms, it can allow teachers to be able to teach you better, and for the students to learn better. Every student has their own style of learning that they are most comfortable with. If teachers can see that a certain teaching style may stress out, or anger a student, they can know to try and teach that student a different way. This allows for the students to pay more attention in class, and learn better.\n\nIn conclusion, having this new technology in classrooms would be very valuable. This is because it can change the lives of students, and teachers. I think every classroom should have this technology.",
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"content": "This is not created by aliens, it was created by landforms and only landforms because aliens are not smart. What would they do with a face, just make a rock out of it? Scientists agree that is was created by natural landforms.\n\nThe only way it could have been created is by natural landform that happen way longer than when they dicovered the face. In paragraph 7 it says \"Revealing... a natural landform. There was no alien minument after all\". That states that there was no aliens involved with the face. What would aliens use to make the face in the rocks?\n\nScientists say that in paragraph 12 \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-- landforms common around the American West\". So this means that it doesn't really have any evidence that aliens made it. This just means that it very well could be just natural landform creating things.\n\nBut, some people may think like the people in paragraph 8. \" The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face. Perhaps, said skeptics, alien markings were hidden by haze\". So right now it shows that there could be a possibility that aliens could have made the Face. This one piece of evidence could be the evidence they are looking for.\n\nIn conclusion, no one knows what made this interesting Face on Mars. But we do have a lot of information about what could have made it if it wasnt aliens. When we don't have a lot of information here, we can not really think what this Face was made by. All in all we think this Face was made by simple natural landform.",
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"content": "From the time that school had been implemented as a necessary component of modern society, the emotions and behaviours of students have correlated to the interest they have in the lessons they were learning. The behaviours are sometimes not analyzed, causing the teacher of the class to either bore his students to sleep or\n\ngiving his students so much freedom that they don't have the patience to carry out the work required of them. Teacher and class evaluations have been formed to try and fix this issue, but they are not reliable. But a multiple choise questionare isn't the way to determine the characteristics of a human being. A device that could analyze the behaviours of a student would better represent that person.Using technology in order to read the emoitonal expressions of a student in a classroom would be valuable because the students emotions show how they respond to a given lesson.\n\nImplementing technology that would allow a teacher to know how his sudents were responding to a lesson being given would improve the quality of the lesson being given in order to fit the needs of tthe student, as well as helping the teacher better improve his lesson plan to balance out the amount of mentally taxing work and relaxing activities that corrospond to the lesson. It is a well known fact that many students do not enjoy a class because they do not like the way the teacher goes about informing his students. This problem often leads to students being disengaged in a lesson and not learning what was taught. The teacher, however, is not aware that the student is not engaged and continues teaching the same unappetizing lesson. With an algorithm that would be able to analyze the way a students is reponding to a lesson, however, the teacher would be able to alter the lesson to engage his students. Most students do not tell their teacher that they are not interested in what is being taught, but as D'Alto explains, \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication\" (D'Alto 6). Analyzing the nonverbal actions of the student help give an accurate representation of what the way a student responds to the information being taught. Teachers have tried doing evaluations to learn the way the students feel, but these are unreliable and often take up unnecessary time. With technology that allows the teacher to know how the students feel automatically, it would save time for both the teacher and the student, as well as let the teacher respond to any issues much more quickly than with an evaluation.\n\nIn conclusion, implementing technology that would allow the teacher to know exactly how the student responds to a lesson being given would be valuable. This process could potentially allow the teacher to alter a lesson in a way that it becomes more engaging, and it would also eliminate the need for inaccurate teacher evaluations that waste time. The changes that come with technology will be beneficial to classrooms everywhere, and could potentially fix the long lasting problem of students becoming unintersted in a lesson or a class.",
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"content": "Driverless cars seem impoosible right? Well they are not. Since 2009 Google has had driverless cars. Although they have restrictions these cars can drive on their own. Once Google figures out how to fix all the issues we should be set. We will have driverless cars in no time.\n\nIn movies and telivision shows you would see flying or driverless cars, but we never thought they would actually become a real\n\nthing. At first they did not create driverless cars, they created smater roads. General Motors created a track that had a eletrical cable in it. This cable sent radio signals to a reciver at the front end of a car. Even though this was a great idea it would be way to expencive to make all the roads this way. The smarter road was not what we needed.\n\nIf we could not have smater roads, why not have smarter cars? These cars would need an abundance of senors on it. Google's Toyota Prius is a great example of this. It has sensors near the wheels, on the roof, a GPS, and many more sensors that are needed to make this car driverless. Alll those things together are needed for the car to copy the skills of a human driver.\n\nDriverless cars are begining to come together. They can handle most things a human can in the car. They car steer, accelerate, and brake without any humans help, but when it comes to work zones or accidents the car needs help.\n\nThe driverless cars are built with things to alert the driver when it needs them to take over. Such as vinerating seats, flashing lights in the mirrors, also cameras so the car can make sure you are paying attention. Although these cars have come a long way the still need a couple tweeks.\n\nOne big issue the driverless manufactures have is the law. In some states they are making it illegal for them to test their driverless cars. A couple of states,California, Nevada,Florida, and district of columbia, have allowed the manufactures to test the driverless cars there. The law believes the only safe car is when a driver has control one-hundred percent of the time. They have question like, Who's at fault if the car and another person get into an accident? These are all reasonable things people\n\nhave to think about.\n\nI belive driverless cars would be an amazing thing. People would get around so much easier. There may also not be as many accidents from stupid drivers. Although I would love a driverless car, the manufactures have a long way to go with perfecting them. There is no doubt in my mind that driverless cars are coming.",
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"content": "The author presents both positive and negative aspects of driverless cars. Sergey Brin envisions a future with a pulbic transportation system where fleets of driverless cars form a public-transport taxi system. Television and movies have been fascinated with cars that could drive by themselves. Google has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions. I would be against the development of driverless cars because it would be expensive, would need more improve technology, and would need to make new laws for driverless cars.\n\nDriverless cars can drive by themselves without a driver. It would fundamentally change the world. You can travel without handling the wheel at all.There are alot of technology that will help the car be driverless. In movies the criverless cars have been driven more than half a million miles without crashing. The founder of the Google Car project believes that the technology can make driverless taxi cabss to take them whereever they desire.\n\nIt would be to expensive to make the driverless cars come true. With the technology on the car, it would have cost a lot of money. The radar for the cars cost two hundred million dollars if theer are no sensors, no computers, and no mapping. There are sensors that helps control the car. The combination of all the sensors would be necessary fro the driverless car to mimic the skills of a human at the wheel. It would be expensive because of all the technology that the driverless cars needs for it to drive on its own.\n\nIt would need more improve technology to function the driverless car. Google's modifed Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS reciever, and an inertial motion sensor to mimic a human at the wheel. You could build smart-roads systems, but they will require massive upgrades to the existing roads. Automakers used speed sensors at the wheel in the creation of the antilock brakes. It would take that much technology to make the driverless car to work.\n\nIt would need new laws to keep the driver safe. The lawmakers would try to make laws that are safe for for drivers, passengers, and pedestrains safe. The lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alerted drivers. Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in conmtrol at all times. Most states say it is illegal to even test computer-driven cars. If the traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liabiblity in case of an accident.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars are not safe to drive and risk the driver in danger.It takes lots of technology to control a driverless car.I do not agree with driverless cars because they are expensive, they would need more improve technology, and they would need to make more laws that would make the citizens safe. Some people said that it is possible to make driverless cars in hte future. I think that if we made driverless cars, we would not be sure that everyone will be safe.",
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"content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worhty pursuit despite the dangers it presents by explaining to the reader about how dangerous it is and how man kind hasn't been able to explor it using spacerafts to land on Venus. In the text in paragraph two it explains that \"Humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped worls...each mission was unmanned...no spacecraft survived the landing for than a few hours.\"this eplains that exploring venus is a dangerous missin that man kind will do anything it takes to be able to explore it.\n\nThe author supports his idea of exploring venus by giving reasons on why it is good to explore it and by giving reasons on how hard it is to explore venus without good use of technology and understandment on the planet,in paragraph two the author explains on how no spacecraft has survived on venus for more then a few hours, on paragraph four the author explains that \"if our sister planet is inhospitable...why do scientists discuss further visits to its surface...Astronomers are fascinated by venus because it once have been the most earth like planet in our sloar system.\" this is an explination on that exploring venus is dangerous but it may help us learn more about if there was another earth before us.\n\nIn the text the author claims that venus could have been a earth-like planet of the solar system long ago reaserchers or scientists and astronomers are fascinated by venus and wanting to explore venus do to the fact that it seems there was human life in venus long ago, in paragraph four the author explains that \"Long ago, venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life.\" this is and example of what scientists would like to explore about venus to discover or learn that it could be possible that venus was once earth before ours.\n\nThroughout the whole article the author explains and gives many reasons on why exploring venus is a good idea on the fact that we could learn from it, The author also states on how venus is dangerous to explore because we dont have the right technology to be save enough to land on it. even though venus is every dangerous to go to and explore with the right technology we could learn things we have not discovered about our planet, exploring a planet that could have been like ours a long time ago could give us many more things to learn about and discover.",
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"content": "While some individuals postulate that hosting monumental sporting tournaments, such as the World Cup, amounts to a misuse of national resources, others assert that these events can meaningfully enrich a nation's profile. In this discourse, I shall explore both perspectives, culminating in my own considered viewpoint.\n\nAt the outset, there exists a cohort who contend that the financial allocations for grand sporting spectacles often eclipse pressing societal needs. For instance, Brazil's significant investment in the 2016 World Cup offers a sobering narrative. The nation embarked on erecting sophisticated stadiums; however, post-tournament, venues such as the Arena da Amazonia languished in underutilization. Simultaneously, a large fraction of the generated revenue was appropriated by international organizations, leaving Brazil grappling with subsequent financial burdens. Therefore, countries might, in their zeal, inadvertently sideline immediate and pivotal needs.\n\nConversely, numerous nations have gleaned considerable advantages from orchestrating such large-scale competitions. Beyond mere economic augmentation, these showcases offer a platform to amplify a country's resilience and technological acumen. As a case in point, the 2021 Olympics in Japan, despite prevailing trepidations, rejuvenated its tourism industry and spotlighted Japan's innovative prowess. Metropolises like Tokyo experienced an influx of international aficionados, leading to a tangible boost in local commerce. Such tournaments, therefore, can cast far-reaching positive ripples across a nation's socio-economic landscape.\n\nIn deliberation, I posit that the commitment to hosting international sporting spectacles should emanate from a judicious assessment of a country's prevailing challenges juxtaposed against prospective dividends. In situations where nations confront acute challenges such as public health crises, their energies and resources should be judiciously redirected. Yet, for those with a resilient economic foundation and a cogent strategic vision, such international showcases present lucrative opportunities.\n\nIn conclusion, while hosting large sporting gatherings has its allure, nations must decide with caution, factoring in their own unique challenges and potential gains. Drawing from instances like Brazil and Japan, the varied outcomes are evident. It is, therefore, clear that each nation should tailor its decision based on its unique context. Looking ahead, it's anticipated that countries will evaluate such undertakings with increasing prudence, ensuring citizen welfare remains at the forefront.",
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"content": "It has been discussed whether the primary purpose of museums is to enjoy or to educate. In this essay, I will discuss both notions and explain why I believe the latter is more right. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, there are educational merits associated with most museums. Firstly, historical museums, which display a range of historical arts, including pictures, sculptures, and videos, are historically informative and well-visualised to visitors, especially the youth. For example, many school trips for students are arranged to visit museums once in a while to learn about historical events with high-quality demonstrations from the tour instructors. In addition, local citizens and tourists can learn about the culture, activities, or lifestyle of cities when visiting the city museum displaying documentary audio and movies.\r\n\r\nHowever, I deem that more visitors would prefer to enjoy the arts than educate themselves while attending any exhibition. It is because artistic products take years to build and complete. While you may learn a new idea and perspective, the majority will benefit more by enjoying the creativity of those than by trying to learn and mimic them. It could be, for instance, a picture of an uncommon genre like juxtaposition or a mechanical art that applies scientific mechanism. Museums, hence, should be the places for tourists to witness outstanding and magnificent exhibitions they have never seen before.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, with the aforementioned, despite the educational benefits, the artwork has more entertaining and relaxing aspects associated with it. Therefore, visitors should spend their time at museums to enjoy the superb exhibitions.",
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"content": "Technology has come a long way throughout the years. Technology has helped humans in many ways such as with work, studying, entertainment, etc. Technology has come so far that technology now has the ability to read peoples emotions. A new software, the \"Facial Action Coding System,\" is the new technology that is able to tell peoples emotions. This technology has many benefits that it should be allowed in schools. Therefore, the Facial Action Coding System would be valuable and should be allowed to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is able to read six basic emotions. These emotions are happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. The article, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" explains how this new technology works. It states, \"The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an \"action unit.\" The technology works by making a model of a persons face and all 44 major muscles must be able to move like a human. In addition to, the text also states that, \"For example, your frontalis pars lateralis muscle (above your eyes) raises your eyebrow when you're surprised; your orbicularis oris (around your mouth) tightens your lips to show anger.\" Therefore, the technology is able to read basic emotions humans have.\n\nIn a classroom, however, using the technology will be very helpful. For example, people are able to tell what another person is feeling due to the facial expressions seen on their face. However, people are able to lie about how they really feel, including students. The technology is able to sense when someone is confused. According to Dr. Huang, in the article he states, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" Therefore, if a student is feeling confused, the teacher will be able to be sure that the child is confused and be able to aid the student.\n\nThe technology can even be able to help students if they don't understand a certain lesson. According to Dr. Huang, after he informed that the technology is able to read when a student is feeling confused or bored, he says, \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" Every student learns differently and understand things in different way. Some students may not like how their instructor teaches and will need to seek help someway. The technology will be able to assist the student the way the student wishes to be assisted.\n\nStudents could really use this valuable tecnhology to aid them to success. Whether the student is bored or confused, students can count on technology to support them. Having technology that can read peoples emotions is insane. However, it is able to do many terrific things with students across the world. Therefore, the Facial Action Coding System should be allowed in a classroom to read students emotional expressions.",
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"content": "Certain materials books movies magazines comics offensive certain people When look comic see writer comic said something offensive seem offensive offensive anyone else Certain pictures writings seem full knowledge vibrance completely something else someone elses eyes How many humans inhabit world today About billion researchers say If think every one billion minds thinks differently If librarian takes away knowledge find vibrant like taking away person s ability learn In world today many teenagers young adults becoming involved What teenager reads magazine article could spark whole new reason help world For know magazine could gotten young adult scientist one step closer finding cure cancer How could take away Again magazine could offensive person cancer doctor treats cancer offended cancer cured Or doctor successfully say cancer body gone away If take everything away could possibly offensive people might well take books movies magazines comics away ever created Once something offensive would offensive another person billion minds think alike If reading materials taken away found offensive ability learn grow humans might well taken away well",
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"content": "The mood created memoir Narciso Rodriguez grateful cheery tone As Narciso talks parents Cuban background tradition tone tell proud happy heritage Also paragraphs talks highly parents made house home grateful parents The mood makes think color yellow sun happiness warmth Narciso Rodriguez great job setting cheery mood memoir",
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"content": "Have you ever wanted to do something special and epic? I have just the right thing for you. You should join the seagoing Cowboys program. In this article I will explain how incredible the veiws were , the countries and states i went in, how we helped people, and the fun activities that we had.\n\nFor my first detailS\n\ni will explain how magestic and unbelievable the cattle-boat trips were, and the countrys\n\nand states were. Although it is a honor to help people I really enjoyed the cattle-boat trips. I really enjoyed seeing Europe and China. When I went to Acropolis in Greece I felt like i was in paradise.The trip was so special, but so were the others. I also toured an excavated castel in Crete and whent to Panama Canal on my way to China.\n\nFor my final to detail I will explain how I helped the animals. I always had my hands full with the animals I still loved them and took cared of them. I had tto feed them and make sure they are watered two or three times a day. Soon I had gotten promoted to being a nightmen where I would always check on the animals.One day i had slipped backwards down a ladder I was hurt really bad but I was fortunate and happy to live.After a while I was back on the job.\n\nTo conclude, everything that I have shared with you is to help you know and get a idea of how the Seagoing Cowboys program was. I hope you will join , set new records , and have a awsome adventure like I did.",
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"content": "Driverless cars aren't always so great\n\nMy position in driverless cars is that I'm opposing them.\n\nEven though Google cofounder Sergey Brin can, I'm not ready to put my life nor my family's life on the line even after years and years of people testing them and making the driverless cars 100% safe.\n\nElectronics always mess up somewhere down the road, even 100% safe, so why trust a driverless car when it could mess up and put your whole family's life on the line.\n\nIn the text it say's that \"Driver's need to stay alerted at all times\" but why if this car is 100% safe, aren't we aloud to sit and talk to are family while we are on the move.\n\nThe text also stats that \"If there is a wreck who's going to be the blame, the owner of the driverless car or the manufacturer\" so why buy it if you might be the one to blame and not the manufacturer who made this 100% safe driverless car.\n\nMy points go to prove why I'm sticking to a car I can personally drive and not a car that's still not 100% safe on the road yet.\n\nSo I ask you, would you like to move on with the rest of the world and put your life and other people's lives at risk every day with a driverless car or a car that you can drive and help keep others safe.\n\nStay safe and go against the flow sometimes, could be for the best.",
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"content": "Have you ever heard of a seagoing Cowboys program? Well if you haven't or even if you have just keep on reading. If you like to help animals thin this is the artical for you. I think you should particapate in the seagoing cowboys program. There are many reasons why you should perticipate in this Seagoing Cowboy program. So just keep on reading to see what those reasons are.\n\nI think you should try it out but if you dont right now you might eant to at least reaserching this and see if you would like to try out this seagoing Cowboys program. I think you need to try seagoing Cowboy program beacause in the passage \"A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves.\" There was a man named Luke Bomberger he loved this program he even experienced going over the Alantic Ocean six-teen times and also went though the Pacific Ocean twice to help people affected by the World War ll. Would you like to experiance that type of fun.\n\nAlso I think you should at least try this beacuse in the passage \"A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves.\" It states in paragraph two that he helped recover their food supplies, animals , and more , forty-four nations joined together to form an UNRRA (the united Nations Relief and Rehabitstion Administation.) That needed to be recoverdfrom desasters.\n\nI also think that you should join the Seagoing Cowboy program because it states that in paragraph six that you care about animals on the way back from safty. Would you like to save a pour animals life? It states that \"Bales of hay and bages of oats had to be pulled up from the lower holds of the ship.\" It also states that they have to clean the stalls. that would mean that the pour animals need your help because they need more people to help them out with the pour animals with feeding them and also cleanding there stalls.\n\nThird of all I think you need to at lest try this is because of paragraph four it states that when he turend eigh-teen that Luck Bomberger was going to try to go to the miitary service, but when they found out that he was on a cattle-boat trip they said that he should just keep doing what he is already doing. That just by doing that it helped alot so he did not need to searve in the milatery.\n\nThis is about how and also why wou schould at least think about going the Seagoing Cowboy program. If you belive that you would want to at least find out more you should partisipate it dose not even have to be that long of your searvice. Would you likek to join now that you have read you have read my convinsing artical on why you should join the Seagoing Coyboy proogram?",
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"content": "The author excellent job creating many moods memoir One moods love Love mood memoir parents took ten people needed somewhere stay know people would thing Another example love says paragraph came selflessly many immigrants give children better life The memoir also makes one feel grateful another mood It author point little house parents everything could give better life It really makes one look back see much parents done",
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"content": "People have different views about the purpose of museums in modern society. While it’s true that museum – as tourist attractions – should be fascinating, I stand by the idea that the main role of the museum is to give knowledge of cultural, religious and historical importance.\n\nOn the one hand, it can be argued that museums should be entertaining and more attractive to the public. Museums are widely considered as important tourist attractions of any cities or countries. However, there’s a common belief that they are too elitist, uninspiring and only encourage educated people to visit. By adding more entertainment values, museums can appeal to a broader audience. Nowadays there is also a wide range of museums which do not have academic purpose; but more light-hearted and humorous theme; for example; chocolate museum in Belgium, kimchi museum in South Korea, museum of Broken Relationships in Croatia or cheese museum in The Netherlands.\n\nOn the other hand, I strongly believe that the main purpose of museums is to educate people as they exhibit collections of interesting objects that hold great cultural or historical values. The aim of any exhibitions is to teach visitors things that they didn’t know before. To achieve that, museums usually offer free guided tours with professional guides or give away brochures, guidebooks, audio tapes that contain detailed information about the exhibitions. By doing that, museums should play an important role in teaching people about history, culture, science and many other aspects of life.\n\nIn conclusion, I think museums, as educational institutions, should offer educative, interesting and enjoyable experiences to visitors.",
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"content": "The author includes story paragraph since Saeng failed drivers test first time hibiscus starts bud represent change life Also Saeng use hibiscus flowers old home Vietnam flower buds could show new home",
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"content": "In story Winter Hibiscus Minfong Ho I think author concludes story paragraph emphasiseS Saeng willing retake test comes back I also think author concludes story paragraph story last paragraph says Almost reluctantly realized many things thought strange become quite repititon season upon season almost farmiliar now This sentence shows slowly getting used new place Also changing mind pLant fact even though still meaning Therefore I think author made good choice ending story paragraph",
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"content": "The advantages of limiting car usages is that it lowers green house gases, less traffic, and a reduction in enviromental problems.\n\nBy lowering green house gases our enviroment will be better. Less lung porblems or other desieses. fresher air and less enviromental problems like global warming. Even smog in Paris or Beijing, even China.\n\nNo traffic to worry about, no lights to stop at for 10 minutes. The only thing that could make you late for work or school would be you walking to slow or taking a transit or subway. Also, people will be fined for parking in the wrong area, making people want to drive less.\n\nA reduction in enviromental problems. Like, global warming or green house gases. less trees would be cut down for parking lots or paved streets.\n\nThe advantages to limiting car usage would be that it lowers green house gases, less traffic, and a reduction in enviromental problems. Such as global arming, green house gases, and smog.",
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"content": "Luck had no idea when he granduationed high school he had two part time job's one at a grocery store and at a bank his friend.\n\nDon invited him to Europe on a cattle boat luck could not say no it was a an opportunity of a lifetime. It was World War 2 and it was over Europe it was left in ruin's. Europe needed help for food and water and animals so they hired the Seagoing Cow boy's Luck and Don signed up they got food and water and other things they need. Thay would get 335 horses plus enough hay\n\nand oat to feed them. the cattle boat trip was a super a\n\nopportunity for a small town boy. they went to Greece,venice,Italy,and to china. they had to feed the animals three times a day and stals had to be cleand.He had to wach the animals\n\nand feed them he fell the slipery ladder and hit a peas of metal stoped him felling overbord.He had fun on the boat when they unloded they played baseball and volly ball. He was happy that he got the job.",
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"content": "Twenty five years ago something funny happened around Mars.\n\nNASAs Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet, snapping photos of possible landing sites for its sister ship Viking 2, when it spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face.\n\nThey call it \"The Face.\"\n\nThe Face is very interesting.\n\nMany people could have different opinions about how the Face could have gotten on Mars or how it was made.\n\nYour opinion could be that either aliens created the Face or it is just a natural landform, but you would need to have reasons to back up why you believe so.\n\nAliens have been believed to be real, but others do not think so.\n\nThere is no real proof yet, but many scientists and other people are still trying to find clues and details about aliens on other planets.\n\nThis leads some to believe that if aliens are real, that they could have created the Face.\n\nHow could aliens create something as complex and interesting as the Face?\n\nAliens could not be that smart.\n\nTo think about it being a natural landform, it is pretty complex, but it may just be the way that we are looking at it and are seeing it.\n\nThe way we see the Face all depends on the way you are looking at it.\n\nScientists have named it \"The Face\" because that is what it looks like, but maybe if someone else looks at it, they would not even see \"The Face\" at all.\n\nThey may see something completely different.\n\nIf you think that aliens created \"The Face\" first see if there is anything else that aliens may have been thought to create or where they came from.\n\nIf there is no proof to aliens, then how could they have created something?\n\nAnd so on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing ... a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\n\nWhat the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesalandforms common around the American West.\n\nIt almost reminds scientists of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\n\nThats a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\n\nIf these are actually landforms that are naturally formed on Earth, then \"The Face\" is certainly a natural landform itself.",
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"content": "It is hard to deny that some people get success due to luck and such a phenomenon leads some impressionable people to generate the idea that people achieve their aims is mostly owing to luck. However, such an opinion needs to be scrutinized meticulously before a conclusion can be reached. As far as lots of experiences in the reality are concerned. I strongly disagree with this view, and I believe that hard-working is the key to getting success.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, I accept that luck can make a part of the effect to being successful. Because achieving aims is not a simple thing and it needs various conditions including luck. For example, Mr Wart Disney cannot create the classic image of Mickey Mouse if the small grey mouse was not jumped on his desk. Similarly, many innovations were made accidentally such as the theory of gravity. However, if those people do not notice the details in life or they do not have strong academic backgrounds and practical skills, they would not achieve such success. And that is the reason why the figure for genius is just a few people. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, luck is not an essential factor in success. People can achieve their goals through paying numerous time and energy. For instance, a famous pianist lose his arms unfortunately, but he try to use his feet to play the piano and finally he did it. Compare to healthy and talented people, he is very unlucky but he still becomes a top pianist. As a result, he proved that everyone can achieve their goal with big efforts.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, in my view, luck is not the deciding factor to achieve one's goal. As long as paying, we can gain.",
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"content": "There has been a mixed opinion on whether government should take care of old people by providing financial support after they retire or they should take care of themselves. I strongly feel that governments need to take care of the elderly people in their old age. \n\nElderly people are the pillars of the society who has led their lives in shaping the future of the country. During their working years individuals have a lot on their plate to take care of like providing for the family, taking care of their parents, providing for children’s' education and etc. In addition to this, every person pays taxes as their part to develop the society. In few countries people almost pay 30% of their income as taxes to the government. \n\nIt is the governments' responsibility to take care of their citizens at their old age. With many responsibilities on their heads, few individuals may fail fund for their retirement. In such cases governments can lend their hands to such people who have worked hard their entire lives so that they can retire peacefully. The governments can take initiatives to help these people by establishing nursing homes, providing retirement funds to employees and etc. \n\nIn conclusion, I strongly believe that all the governments should start initiatives to provide financial support to old people after they retire. This gives an assurance to the individuals regarding their retirement. This a positive development towards the economy of any country. Such agendas make the countries more sustainable in terms of people welfare.",
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"content": "In the current scenario, it is a lively debate that whether communal responsibilities are an indispensable part of business activities besides making a profit. From my perspectives, while it is true that a trade cannot sustain without making money, I completely agree with the opinion that a company needs to develop socially.\r\n\r\nTo embark upon, there is an emphasis on businesses as a major element in the economic growth of a country. A variety of field sectors are the main sources of money which are regarded as the foundation of many other activities in a large number of nations. Take South Korea as a stark example, the employment of trading in complex technological parts in this country constitutes up to around 80% of its economy annually. What is more, by making money, businesses also serve as a large contributor to the betterment of thousands of peoples' lives. In fact, the high salaries offered by businesses enable citizens to get access to better life conditions with cutting-edge items like air conditioners or heaters.\r\n\r\nEntrepreneurs, on the other hand, also have to shoulder various social responsibilities to benefit both themselves and communities. With diverse communal activities, these companies can considerably enhance their image of social-friendly organizations, thus promoting people’s awareness of a high-profile company and boosting their product sales. There are, for example, a myriad of organizations all over the world applying this strategy to increase their income, namely Microsoft which allocates millions of dollars yearly to charity. Furthermore, businesses can also conduct social activities on a large scale, hence contributing to the combating of communal issues effectively. As a case in point, many charities possessed by such well-known entrepreneurs around the world as Google or Microsoft can raise incredibly huge funs of more than a million dollar and send them to aid the miserable on earth.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, from aforementioned reasons, although it is integral for the businesses earn wages, I side with those who think companies also need to accommodate social responsibilities.",
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"content": "This is the the Seagoing Cowboys. They help many people and the Evierment. So here are some information for you about the Seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nI think you should join the Seagoing Cowboys becaues they are a helpful progrem and the will help the invierment arfther distruction and help the animals in are world.\n\nThis program is a perticuler age to join in you can join at 18 and start helping. You can learn a lot from this progrem like work,kindness,and helping.\n\nIn this program you need to be ready for anything and you need to know how to work becaues in this progrem you have to work a lot like Luke, in the story he had to watch animals for a night and he had to feed the animals and give them water, so you need to know how to work.\n\nEven though this program is\n\nlot of work you can still have fun like Luke did in the story he played basedball and volleyball games in the empty holds where the animals have been housed. You can even play boxing and fencing. So if you think this program is a lot of work your right becaues it is, but in this program you still have a lot of fun.\n\nIt tacks a long time to get to the program\n\nbut all you need to do is beleive in your self.\n\nSo this was all the information about the Seagoing Cowboys I hope you like this information about the program and iI hope this program can open up a hole nother wold for you. So I hope you can join this program some day.",
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"content": "Many people think that the \"Face\" is caused by aliens or it's just a natural landform. Which one of these could it be the answer to this mysterys \"Face\"? Now in days most people think that everything in space that might haved popped out is made by aliens but that is not always the answer. I personally think that it's not caused by aliens but there's always going to be people out there still thinking it was created by aliens.\n\nIn 1976 Viking 1 was cirleing around Mars when it took a picture in the region of Mars in Cydonia. It wasn't something that we would expect. It was very surprising, it looked like a face in the photo taken. A few days later NASA released some of the picture they took. Since than the \"Face\" became very popular it even has been in some Hollywood films.\n\nI think that the \"Face\" is caused by the natural landform. Have you ever wonder why Mars is like Earth's twin or sisters well because they are alike. Earth has had natural landform just that in Mars it looks different but it doesn't mean nothing it's still a natural landform. Now I do understand why some people might say that it looks like it has been created by aliens cause it does look like a real face. The nose, eyes and mouth litterly looks like a real face of a person but just cause of that it doesn't mean it was made by aliens.\n\nNow here is my true evidence that will convice people that the \"Face\" wasn't created by aliens. In 1976 was the first photo Viking 1 took. In 1998 another photo was taken later on in 2001 another photo was taken. If you see the pictures it is so obese that the \"Face\" on Mars is a natural landforming. In the pictures the \"Face\" looks like if it was changed over the years.",
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"content": "Something that has been debated about a lot recently, people around the world have different views about to whom the design of newly constructed buildings should be controlled by. Today, I am here to discuss both sides of the matter and at the end will give my own view.\nThe people who believe the design of these buildings should be controlled by governments believe so, because they feel that the governments will design the buildings in a way that is not too flashy and nor to minimalistic. It has been seen may times that buildings built by constructing companies/ the financers turn out to be either very flashy or minimalistic. A great example of this is in India's capital, Delhi, where an originally planned office, had exteriors constructed in a very childish and jazzy manner. A thing to also keep in mind that this was the construction of a private office for the top lawyer in Delhi, Arun Deshmukh. He handed over the design of his office to the constructors feeling they won't do anything immature. 4 years later, however, when he went to see the final result of his much-awaited private office, he was completey bewildered by the sight. Instead of seeing a normal office-like building with normal cement on it's exterior, he saw that his dream office looked the exterior of a night club! Instead of normal cement, the exterior was built with transparent glass, and Mr. Deshmukh's name and designation, written in a florescent like way, was carved out on a 3 metre long glass slab!!\nComing to the people who believe the control of the design should go to the constructors/people who finance the building think so because they feel that not everything should be in the hands of the government. They also feel that since it was their initiative to get that building built, they should have the final say on how it should look like.\nWhen it comes to my opinion, i believe that the control of the design of the building should go to the person/people who first thought of getting it constructed, meaning the people hired architects and did the needful to get an ideal design of the building they want to construct.",
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"content": "The Seagoing Cowboys program helps countries, after World War II, recover their food, animals, and more. I, Luck Bomberger was wondering what to do after high school. I was already working a part time job at a grocery store, and another one at a bank. Then my friend Don Reist offered me a lifetime opputunity to go to Europe on a cattle boat and I said yes. I was very excited to start a new chapter in my life.\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys was hired by the UNRRA to take care of animals such as horses, baby cows, and mules. My friend Don and I just couldn't say no so we sighned up.\n\nHere is some reasons to join the Seagoing Cowboys, we go around the world, and make new friends. We have plenty of freetime to do extra things like tour other countries.\n\nI was 18 before I arrived to Greece. Since I was 18 I could've been drafted to the military, but the military service told me to keep doing what I'm doing. I made nine trips by the time I was discharged. I was very proud of myself because that was the most for any Seagoing Cowboy. It took about two week to cross the Atlanitic Ocean to the eastern coast and then a month to arrive to China.\n\nI was very busy with things on the boat like I had to feed the animals, give them water, and I and to carry hay and a bag of oats to the lower holds of the ship. When I was a kid I helped my Aunti Katie with farming, and it actually paid off for preparing for all the hard work.\n\nEvery trip we get jobs like I was a night watchmen one trip, I was supposed to check on all the animals. We make time for having fun. When we drop of the animals off that was time we have the most fun. We play volleyball or baseball in the place where the animals were kept. We sometimes play board games, we have table tennis tournaments, play fencing, boxing, and we read.\n\nI thought being a Seagoing Cowboy was just an adventure, but it opened the world to me. I saw things that I wouldn't of seen of I didn't take this opportunity. I'm am very grateful for this. I really suggest you to join the Seagoing Cowboys program you won't regret it, I sure didn't.",
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"content": "Information-seeking people are rising in many locations of the globe. It seems this phenomenon is caused by two staple reasons, and a number of research methods are feasible for it.\r\n\r\n On the one hand, people are influenced by plenty of scientific articles which are approachable in the contemporary world. This makes individuals more curious than they used to be. Thus, they are becoming interested in the history of their accommodations. Furthermore, history links people to their past. Providing that people was educated more about the history of their homes, they might have more sense of nostalgia. Sense of nostalgia originates plenty of benefits for people's mental state. Since humans are eager for these kinds of mental benefits, they have started to research concerning the history of their accommodations.\r\n\r\n Turning to feasible research methods of this phenomenon for the public, surveying elderly local neighbors seems as a practicable research method. Elderly people often have a decent amount of leisure time besides their knowledge regarding former residents of establishments. Moreover, people have accessed plenty of various cutting-edge gadgets which could be connected to the internet. The internet has been using for the purpose of different researches. Almost all individuals do have access to the internet, and they could take advantage of the vast amount of information in it to research the history of their accommodations.\r\n\r\n To conclude, in many countries, people's attention is grabbing to the history of their homes. It appears people's desire to know about different subjects is the most significant factor of this phenomenon. Searching on the internet is one of the finest ways to do so.",
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"content": "One time I patient doctor cause I little I doctor I running around give care I guess time mom trust sat ever I went Mind girls around I got embarrased asked mom following replyed cause I dont want running everywhere That I told mom I older Im sorle years old Im muture She said go ahead I went sat next girls talked Thats got start walking around talking I felt little tingle head saying your mom still following I turned around So went snack room sat ate everything I happen look mom sitting third table away us Thats went back elevator original place sat surprise ready That I told girl I would back I sat next mom said was following replied yes I mean I talk came understanding Soon enough turn go see doctor That end story",
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"content": "The mooring mast Empire State Building destined never fulfill purpose reasons safety nature laws The greatest reason safety dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium Hydrogen flammable The German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed Fire Lakehurst New Jersey May This accident could much worse happened densely populated area like downtown New York Nature biggest obsticle get around winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents This would cause back ship swivel around This good would dangling high pedestrians street Finally laws airships flying low urban areas That law would make illegal ship ever tie building even approach area In conclusion three major reasons mooring mast Empire State Building destined never fulfill purpose",
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"content": "I just finished reading the Challenge of Exploring Venus. The Challenge of Exploring Venus explain what is Venus, why is call the \"Evening Star\", and many more. I'll explain how well the author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.\n\nI'll explain the Earth \"twin\". A thick atmosphere. of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus.\n\nI'm also going to explain the NASA the National Aeronautics and Space Administration.\n\nThe Earth \"twin\".\n\nVenus is the closest planet to Earth in the same density and size, and the closest in distance. Venus and Mars those two are orbit the sun at different speeds.\n\nWhich mean that sometime we are closer to Mars and Venus.\n\nEverytime human has a mission to touch the Venus it doesn't work. they sent numerous spacecraft to the land each mission was unmanned. The spacecraft has only survived the landing for more than a few hour.\n\nA thick atmosphere of almost 97 persent carbon dioxide blankets Venus.\n\nThe most challenging about the Venus is that the clouds oh highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere.\n\nVenus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet, even though Mercury is closer to our sun Venus is still the hottes surface. And high pressure, heat, erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes , and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land oon its surface.\n\nThe NASA (the National Aeronautics and Space Administration. The NASA is the idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA is the solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus. That would allow secientisits to float above the fray. If Blimp hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscarpa.\n\njust like our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude. While hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly\n\nground condition byb staying up and out of their way. It not an easy condition , but survivable for humans.\n\nI agree that the author think that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger. Why, because i think that studying Venus would be fun and probably will help you learn something about our solar system. And it really challenging .",
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"content": "Dear Local Newspaper people would agree computers useful help ability learn faw away place They also allow people talk people online Lastly computers importat people work many reasons I believe computers benefit society Do know computers give people ability learn faw away places Sometimes people dont know want leave country With computer organize Somoe people like family like go visit familys places example mom told going trip go visit family told already got tickets computer I happy went I saw beautiful Some people like see new beautiful places Such even Let tell computers allow people talk people online Most people myspace allows kids age keep touch Also facebook people probly havent seen long time exsample one time I looking aroung facebook found old bestfriend I happy cause moved I thought would never talk I positive everyone world yahoo could find people really quikck talk Would belive many jobs responsibilities require computer Such scientists computers else wouldnt able invient great things make Also secretaries asign dates bosses exsample secretary doctor able give change appointments Lastly students go school importantly collage computers wont able homework Most people would agree computers positive affect people reasons give ability learn faw away places allow people talk people online Computers important people work",
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"content": "Presently famous hotshots are more known for their luxurious lifestyle and richness than their talents and performances, which negatively influences the younger person. I entirely agree that famous bigwigs are a bad influence. In the subsequent paragraphs, I shall explain how famous personalities set bad examples for young people. \n\nFirstly, some idols are only famously known for their richness and attractive lifestyle, and often it adversely affects the psyche of the younger breeding. They make you think it is mandatory to look graceful and must buy expensive products. Their acting skills might be mediocre, but they have become a sensation through the public display of their materialistic wealth and charming lifestyle. At times these personalities end up engaging in habits like smoking, excessive drinking, or drugs, which negatively influence the younger civility. \n\nAdditionally, heroes have a harmful effect on the self-esteem of young people. personality commonly display and associate beauty with perfect bodies. When teenagers see that, they want to look like them. While trying to imitate them and grow thin, juveniles develop eating disorders. Also, dissatisfaction among youth with live-like celebrities often leads to seriously negative health consequences. \n\n Besides the fact that certain good heroes like Bill Gates and Ratan Tata inspire adolescents to achieve their goals through hard work and dedication, there are a significant majority of celebrities who are hypocritical. \n\nTo sum up, famous big names do negatively influence the youth through their public display of wealth and unhealthy habits which harm the mental health of the younger generation.",
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"content": "The face is a natural landform that just happened to appear on Mars twenty five years ago. Aliens didnt create it becasue they are not real. They researched more of the face and it turned out that there was no alien monument at all like a few scientists believed was there.\n\nThe face is a butte or a messa, which are landforms common around the American West. It was formed by shadows which gave the face its illusion of the eyes, mouth, and nose. The Mars Global Surveyor does not pass over the face very often which means that it probably disappears since it was formed by shadows. The face first appeared on a JPL web site revealing that is was a natural landform and that there was no alien monument after all.\n\nWhen something new appears that is strange it doesnt mean that a alien made it, it is just another amazing creation that has been put on this earth.",
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"content": "If America were to limit car usage I'm sure that weight problems would lesson, as well as the smog. The envirnment would also be healthier, streets would be safer for children to play in. There would also be less car accidents that happenn because of careless drivers. Americans would have more money as well since gas prices have been going up so much in the past year.\n\nIf you have a truck in America, what do you think your gas is doing to the envirnment? Wll, in France they use diesel fuel instead of gasoline, which means 67% of their vehicles is diesel. Car traffic in France was 60%, after five days of intensifying smog, and where do you think that smog came from? Deisel! cold nights and warm days caused the warmer layer of air to trap car emissioms. Paris typicaly has more smog than other European capitals, last week Paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter per cubic meter compared with 114 in Brussels and 79.7 in London.\n\nIn Bogota, Columbia- a program that's set to spread to the other countries, millions of Columbians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day yesterday, leaving the streets deviod of traffic jams. The day without cars is part of an important campaign that began in Bogota in the mid-1990s. I believe that people in America should do something like that.",
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