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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is worthy place to study but dangerous. The reaosn in doing theis is because of the challenge there is. trying to study something with out going for yourself. that is pretty hard to do. One you have the biuld something that will either help your or something that can with so the temputure of Venus. Two the distance of getting there and back. Gotta have something to hold that uch fuel to go there and come home. if a human is going you need to have a food stock for them to last\n\nof the Planet.\n\nJust like when they sent a robot to the planet it had to out a material tthat can withstand the planet itself., But that only lasted two weeks. Now they are try to go for longer the two weeks.\n\nIn Conclusion i know that tcan do it its just going to take some time for it to happen.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke's point of view is really unique.Its unique because of how he likes to be a seagoing cowboy and and crring for other animals and watching out for them when they are on the boat and makes sure that neither one of them falls off the boat,and i'm pretty sure that slipping off that ladder and cracking his ribs really hurt a lot when he did that.and the way he took time off from his jobs just to go all the way to Europe with his friend was probably worth it even if he did crack his ribs,i just bet he had a wonderful adventure with his friend Don.Having a good time is what its all about even when you hurt yourself or about to fall off board,the adventure and having fun is what it's all about.And in the story it was giving description about what there was to do on the boat,it was saying how they were entertaining themselves like playing baseball,volleyball,table-tennis,fencing ,boxing,reading,whittling,and games that helped them pass the time.and when it said it opended up the world to him,and then he said he was greatful for the opportunity,and that awareness stayed with him,leading his hamily to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued that juvenile offenders should be given punishment as well as a grown person. In my opinion, to some extent I do not agree with that. \r\n\r\nFirst of all, anybody deserves a second chance too and especially teenages who are not mature enough and lack life experience. They have to learn a lot of lessons about life through society, law and others. Moreover, I suppose that young offenders might copy the behaviour of adults. Therefore, I think we should have more useful punishment for them. For instance, we can force them to work in the community unpaid or give them to a juvenile education center to teach them more life skills in society. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, however, it is true that juvenile offenders who are really dangerous should receive heavy punishment and should be separated from society. Because other young people might be impacted by them. For example, Young mudders who should be completely eliminated from society. Furthermore, those who are still given clemency of law may be re-offend and this is dangerous for people and society.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe that young convicts should not receive a penalty as adults do.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this day and age, children are required to study a great deal of subjects at school. Although some believe that studying art is a waste of time for children at institutions, others support that it is mandatory for them to learn art. In this essay, I will examine both views and explain why I think it is necessary to include art education at school.\r\n\r\nThere are two main reasons why a number of people think it was a waste of time. Firstly, students should spend their time on practical subjects such as sciences and languages. By doing so, they can sharpen their skills for future workplaces. Secondly, artworks are too complicated for children to understand. Most of the students find it difficult to interpret the symbolism of the post-impressionism paintings. Owing to a lack of life experience, they usually fail to integrate their viewpoints into the masterpieces. If they find it boring, it will only cost their invaluable time for nothing.\r\n\r\nWhereas it shows that learning art is hard and seems useless for kids, there are precise values that they can obtain through studying art. The most prominent one is understanding history. Thanks to collectors who preserved thousands of art pieces, students not only can experience what living in the Middle Ages looked like by looking at oil paintings, but also learn from others’ experiences and interpretations of wars, disasters, and historical events. Moreover, they can also improve self-awareness by knowing their own preferences. The more artwork they learn, the better self they will understand.\r\n\r\nArt is an abstract subject that people hold different views on whether it should be a mandatory subject for children to study. By carefully assessing both views, I wholeheartedly believe that art is an invaluable subject for students at school.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driveless Cars Are Coming,\" television and movies have long been fascinated with cars that can drive themselves. If they had driveless cars it wouldnt be safe. Google cars aren't truly driveless.\n\nMany futurist believed the key to developing self driving cars. I truly believe that self driving cars wouldnt work. If your car drives its self around on its own theres no telling what can happen. It can speed up to the speed that its not supposed to be and someone could get hurt really bad.\n\nDiverless cars might sound about right to some people but it reall doesnt to me. I think its better for people to drive their own car with their own two hands other than the car driving itself. Anything bad can go wrong no matter how great it might sound to you.Its already bad enough that its illegal to test computer driven cars in most states. What if the driverless cars dosen't move with traffic there could be all types of car wrecks .And thats why I dont think driverless cars is good for people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are the future of safer driving. They can benefit not only the drivers, but they can also benefit the enviroment around them. Driverless cars could fundamentally change the world. The development of driverless cars means that driving can be smarter and safer.\n\nImprovements in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more driving tasks on their own. With growing technology, driverless cars could have many features that improve the safety of the car and the driver. This allows for a better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\n\nIn 2013, BMW announced the development of \"Traffic Jam Assistant\". Driverless cars could handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph. This could result to better and safer driving in traffic jams or heavy traffic. Also, special touch sensors make sure that the driver keeps hold of the wheel. This necessitates the car being ready to quickly get the driver's attention whenever a problem occurs.\n\nGM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object. The Google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over. This keeps drivers aware to proceed with caution and to drive with safety around objects.\n\nThe development of driverless cars means that driving can be smarter and safer. These cars can make a safer driving enviroment for the driver and for other drivers as well. Continuous growth in driverless technology can lead not just to smarter cars, but it can also lead to smarter roads. In conclusion, driverless cars can benefit driving by make it safer, better, and smarter.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe we should support the development of the driveless cars. As time evolves, our surrounding evolves as well; such as our clothings, cultural beliefs, advancements in technologies, education, and many more. If we could make changes to those things, why can't we do the same for cars. I believe this should be the risk we're willing to take.\n\nFirst of all, the author of the article has mentioned that these cars would use half the fuel of today's which means killing less trees. This plays a major role in saving our planet. We have been using abundant amount of fuels which are extremely bad for our future as well as now. By using less fuel, we will be less likely to experience tragical conditions such as global warming, and other natural disasters. Also, he has mentioned that driveless cars offer far more flexibility.\n\nMy second reason why we should support the developemnt of driverless cars is due to lesser risk of getting into car accidents. The article has mentioned that although Google cars aren't truly driverless, they have driven more than half a million miles without a crash. This indicate that with further advancments made to the cars, the less likely we'd face car crashs and other tragical accidents. We wouldn't have to face these problems as much as we're facing them now.\n\nMy last reason relates to car accidents and human risks. The advancements they made onto these cars suggest the lower risk of everything. The heads-up displays, use of multiple sensors, LIDAR, and further advancements. BMV states that 70% to 90% of the times why we get into car accidents are due to human risks. Human risks include drunk driving, disobeying traffic laws, underage or unpermitted driver, texting while driving and such. But, with the driveless cars and it's advancements, we are lowering the risk of facing those kind of problems.\n\nAs you can see why I believe we should support the developments of these driveless cars for multiple reasons. By using half the fuel of which we use today, we're saving our planet and it's resources, which will eventually lead to lower risks of global warming and such. Next, the driveless cars will assure that we will face less car accidents due to it's high technologies and advancments. Lastly, driverless cars will decrease the risk of human risks and will lead to higher and further more advancements in technologies.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir happy The author happy Where use live left move made feel like home instead looking back thinking place could ever take real home The author positive memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Seagoing Cowboys is the best thing I have ever done. You get to go to many places like China, or Greece, or maybe even Italy. These places are the best places even though they look like small countries on the map they are really huge places in person. But enough about what I did when I was a Seagoing Cowboy. I'm trying to get you to join. Sure it may be hard work but you can still have fun and visit different countires. Maybe you and your friend can both become a Seagoing Cowboy. Alot of people can join maybe a dozen people can join and the people you don't know you can become friends with them. If you become a Segoing Cowboy I bet anybody no matter the gender can be a great Seagoing Cowboy. You should join I set the new record for visiting nine different countries and I want to see if you can beat that. You might just might be able to learn to speak a different language and you can test your friends to see which language you are speaking. In plus you get to hang out with animals like horses, or cows, or mules. You also get to work for UNRRA which is a great federation. But you have to have a college degree to become a Seagoing Cowboy or you can never join. Make sure to get good grades in highschool as well that way the UNRRA knows that your right for the job. If you become a Seagoing Cowboy than you would be able to explore the world go to the Atlantic Ocean, Pacific Ocean, and many more. The reason I'm trying to get you to join is because their is alot of people that died in the war. You can help people in the war by becoming a Seagoing Cowboy that way you are the best person in the world and you can have a good mind and say \"I helped people in the war and I'm proud.\" Join the Seagoing Cowboys I know it might sound like a ridicoulus name but if it helps people than be proud of being a... Seagoing Cowboy! Help other people and make good in the world. But you dont have to become a Seagoing Cowboy you can do many other jobs to help people in the war. But I'm just saying becoming a Seagoing Cowboy is the best job I've had.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people believe that having a population with a mixture of nationalities makes countries more interesting and helps them to develop faster. In my opinion, people from different nationalities have their own points of view, therefore each of them provide different perspectives to make a country more developed.\nPeople who lives in a country with one nationality generally do not want other people from different countries to migrate their countries. The reason for this kind of thought is about safety of their countries. Moreover, they do not want to employ people who migrated. Therefore, these countries become more and more isolated from other ones. In this globalization area, a country which has just a one way of thinking, do not have oppurtinity to develop and becoma a interest to different nationalities.\nOn the other hand countries with multinational populations have mixture of cultures. Each of the people provides a different tradition of their own nationality. These traditions may become a way of entertainment to attract tourists. Due to the tourism being a source of income, it is one of the development sources of a country.\nIn addition, nowadays, there are lots of countries who lets knowledagble employees from other nationalities to work in their countries. These high skilled workers can be positioned in the places in need. Their ideas can be valued. If a country support them, they can be the new face of the development.\nIn conclusion, a country always needs development. Development can be achieved through innovation and lots of ideas. I believe that having a mixed population with different nationalites is a one way to do it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood memoir Narciso Rodriguez happy grateful In ph Narciso s parents gave leave Cuba come children could better life Narciso grateful could nt express thank words ph In ph also states really grateful parent s love sacrifice The reason happy I think family loves Even though re different cultures came together would nt happened parents nt immigrated That I think mood happy truely grateful", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Exploration of Venus\n\nIn the article ¨The Challenge of Exploring Venus¨ the author explains that the idea that studying Venus is a good challenge even with the dangers. The author starts off by explaining that Venus is the closest relative of Earth in size and density. And How Venus was most likely covered in bodies of water and may have had a form of life at one point this is because of the several features it has on its surface and in its atmosphere.\n\nIn the first paragraph the text states ¨Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size.¨ meaning that this is Earth´s closest relative in our solar system. Also in paragraph four the text states ¨Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.¨ This piece of text explains why the claim that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit because, since we predict that venus may have had oceans on it water is needed for life. And the exploration of Venus may lead to other forms of life that may live on Venus or may have lived on Venus.\n\nThe 3rd paragraph in the article explains how Venus´ atmosphere and conditions on its surface are extreme when compared to that of Earth´s surface and atmosphere´s conditions. The conditions of Venus´ surface are inhabitable to the people who live on Earth. Venus´ atmosphere is composed of clouds of sulfuric acid which is highly corrorsive and its atmospheric pressure 90 times greater that what we have on Earth. As well as its surface which has tempuratures averaging at over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. These conditions are proven in paragraph 3 stating ¨A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent\n\ncarbon dioxide...¨ The text also states ¨On the planet´s surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.¨ This proves that Venus does have some dangers we should be concerned about when pursuing the planet´s exploration.\n\nMany people are fascinated by Venus because it has some planetary features that are shared by Earth such as, mountains, valleys, and craters. This is due to the Venus´ surface having rocky sediment, volcanoes, and earthquakes. These claims are supported by the text in paragraphs 3 and 4. Starting with the claim of its features in the text stating ¨The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.¨ The 3rd paragraph states ¨Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes...¨These pieces of text prove that Venus does infact have some features that earth shares. This proves that Venus is closely related to Earth and fascinates\n\npeople when they think that there is a planet that shares the volcanoes and earthquakes that we do.\n\nVenus is a very interesting planet when you think about how closely it is related\n\nto the planet that we inhabit. We share common features with Venus such as its volcanoes and its sedimentary surface. The planet may have had bodies of water on its which means that it may have inhabited life at one point. This inference may lead to the discovery of other life in the solar system one day. Venus does have some dangerous such as its immense ammount of pressure and heat but that should not detur us from exploring it. The planet is still a worthy challenge for us to explore.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Did you know driverless car coming? Imagine driverless cars no one drives them no more. Sensing the world can read positive and negative back. \"Within 10 years. . . sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels.\" Driving or Assisting? BMW announced the development \"Traffic Jam Assistant.\" \"The car can handle driving functions. . . car can steer, accelerate, and break themselves.\" Waiting on the law. \"Driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers. . . traffic laws are writtten with the assumption.\n\nFirst, Driverless cars are coming. Just \"Imagine a time in the future when no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore?\" Cars are coming more and more better in the world. \"Google has had a car that could drive independently under specfic conditions since 2009.\" Pulling in and out of driveways. . . has been a promblem.\" Googgle cars aren't truly driverless; they still alert driver to take over.\"\n\nSensing the World! \"Looking at witch companies are making computer-driven cars.\" \"For example, in the late 1950s, General Motors created a concept car that could run on special test tracks.\" \"Engineers at Berkeley tried something similar, but they used magnets with alternating polarity.\" \"Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel. . . a videl camera mounted near the rearview mirror.\" Driverless cars are coming.\n\nThrid,\n\nDriving or Assisting?\n\nBMW announced the development \"Traffic Jam Assistant.\" \"The car can handle driving functions. . . car can steer, accelerate, and break themselves. A car can handle driving functions up to speeds at 25 mph. A car also van steer themselves where the car wants. \"GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object.\"\n\nFinally, Waiting on the law. Waiting on the law. \"Driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers. . . traffic laws are writtten with the assumption. \"Tesla has a projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time.\" Audi, Nissan, and Mercedes-Benz plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020.\n\nIn the coulstion, dtiverless cars are coming have fun now or dont have fun at all. Go down to Toyota and get a new car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In words patience com quiet And hyper annoying Patience controling And rude disrespectful others", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is worthy of being explored because we all deserve to know about Venus. Even though most of probably will never get to go to Venus it is still really cool to learn about it. What if we didn't know about any of our planets? What if we never sent a man to the moon? We wouldn't be sitting in class today learming about the diffrents between Mars and Neptune. To me it is very important that we learn about our planets and the diffrent things that make them unique. The author is very passtionet about this topic as he states \" Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiositry will likely lead us into many equally intinidating human curiosity\". I know that was alot but, that passege shows how much the author cares about this topic. He says the human curiosity will adventualy get the best of us. Can you imagine if knowbody took the risk and went to outerspace anyway. I'm sure that they were aware of all the dangers that may acure. Life is hard and sometimes you have to take risks even if its dangerous. Now, im not saying that everything is always going to go as planned. I mean there has been people that took off for space and the spaceship blew up and I'm sure that they had big plans on how the trip was going to go. I'm sure they were not excpecting that. Sometimes you just have to take risks. The author says that \"peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmousphere\". He is saying that looking at Venus from a safe place you may never learn anything more about it. \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\". Wow, this doesnt just apply to Venus and exploring it this applys to life in general. \" You should not be limited by dangers but expanded to meet the very edges\". He is saying that if you do not take a risk how will you ever know what else is out there. Fear is a lier and we should not let it get in the way of our lives. I know there is million things that could possibly go wrong. Instead of thinking about a million things that could go wrong why dont they start coming up with a million reasons for things to go right? These scientists are smart and I'm sure that they can come up with some ways to avoid these problems. \"By faling to prepare your are preparing to fail\". That is a quote that my teacher would always tell us in class. I think that this quote applys to the passage because if your not prepared then you will fail. So, instead of being afraid of all the dangers that are out there prepare your self for the worst so you wont have it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke's point of view would be that he thought it was a great experiance and thinks that other people should join as well. Luke said that his time there was amazing you got to work with animals during a few weeks through a whole month. Another thing they did was do whatever they wanted on the way back to pick up the next load of animals.\n\nThe reasons to join are that you get free time to do whatever you want,and also you get to have responsibilites. some responsibilites are that you work with animals and when you do you have to clean them,feed them,and clean their stalls etc. if you like working with animals,don't get sea sick,and aren't careless this could also be the job for you. Also if you\n\nDetails from the article are that Luke had fun and he said it would be an amazing experience and to him it was. He had responsibilites and sometimes had some fun. Although sometimes you can die from being thrown over board by the waves and wind it could be the best experiance for the right people. Luke said that it made him more aware of people of other countries and their needs. He also said that he was grateful for the opportunity. If you were like Luke who helped out with farms this would be an excellent job for you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It cannot be denied that, in the contemporary days problem of housing scarcity is extremely high. It is responsible for many serious outcomes in the community. A single way to tackle out conquering issue is government efforts, is believed by a group of individuals. I agree to the given statement to a large extent and my inclination is explained in the following paragraph. \n\n\nDiscussing about steps should be taken by the centre to eradicate the housing deficit. The most anticipated one is they should encourage citizens to live in the countryside. They should run a campaign on social media and various area of a nation regarding benefits of living in a village in order to, motivate the people to reside there. For instance, in 2015 the authority of the Maharashtra province ran a campaign on twitter and Instagram to encourage local individuals to live in a small town rather than, to reside in large urban. This step was work significantly. \n\n\nMoreover, authority of country should also work to increase the job opportunity in the rural areas as, majority of civilians come across metropolis just four to get an employment. If the government will improve work opportunities in non-developed region, it would be very beneficial. Last but not the least, they should also reduce the amount of text in villages so that, people will more likely to live there. This effort will also create many business options other because, businessman will be encouraged to invest there. \n\n\nOn the other hand, citizens and builders also have to make some efforts to eliminate the following issue. Builders and individual should develop the city in the vertical way. They have to give priority to the skyscrapers and flats. Apartment usually require less space on the land, whereas, bungalows require it more. If a metro grows vertically, then this circumstance should reduce effectiveness. \n\n\nTo conclude, I believe the large extent that the problem of inadequate shelter can be eradicated by government steps such as, making citizens more conscious to live in rural, although to get acceptable results builders have to take responsibility to grow metropolitan vertically. It is the most ideal way to deal with this issue.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator,\n\nAccording to an excerpt titled \"What is the Electoral College?\" by the Office of the Federal Register, the Electoral College is a process established by the founding fathers in the Constitution \"as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens.\"(Source 1.1) This process consists of a selection of 538 electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress with a majority of 270 needed to be elected president. (Source 1.2-3)\n\nThe system of Electoral College is one of much controversy as to what to do with it. Keep it or toss it? 'Tis the question. According to an excerpt of The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong by Bradford Plumer, a Gallup poll taken in 2000, says that over 60% of voters would prefer a direct election to the one we have now. Apparently, the electoral college has failed us throughout the years because of the unfairness it can sometimes have. One example being presidential candidate, Al Gore, who was cheated out of his postion by the electoral college. The electoral college has caused \"close election(s) in which the popular vote winner can again lose the presidency\". (Source 2.9)\n\nOn the contrary, In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President, an excerpt by Richard A. Posner, has a point when it says that when the people vote for the President they're actually voting for a slate of electors, thus each party votes for the electors who are trusted to vote for the right nominee. It says that very rarely has this trust been betrayed, only happening in 2000, when Gore was hijacked of his position, and centuries earlier in 1888. (Source 3.15-16)\n\nSo to keep or toss the Electoral College? 'Tis the question indeed, but the Electoral College has been proven to operate well enough for everyone for the past few centuries since the Constitution was made and the presidents were elected. It was said to fail us in the future but through 44 presidents it has only failed us a few times. Maybe we don't need to see the Electoral College in a black and white, keep it or toss it fashion but think to shape it so the system works better and in favor of the people with fewer kinks.\n\nPlease take this into your humbled consideration dear Senator,\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The government of every nation takes steps for continuous growth and development. Nowadays, people are debating on the topic of the government priority. Some people believe that the top most priority of government is to continue growth of the economy. Whereas, another group of thinkers supports that the government should focus on the less fortunate or poor condition. I would like to discuss both the views in the following paragraphs.\nEconomy is one of the crucial elements of a country. If economic growth increases, it means nation is developing which impacts around the globe. However, Other countries want to make good business with the nation and it also shows that becoming strong nation. It also represent that people of that nation are creating opprounties and hard workers. For intsance, India's economy growth rises every year which helps to make more business other countries. Apart from that , Economy growth reflects developement of infrastructure, technology , education and living status of people. Therefore, economic growth is important.\n On the other hand, people think that government should focus on other poor thing. Firstly, pollution and climate change. In the present, pollution is major problem to every nation. It causes dangerous to human kind as well animal kind. The air pollution is producing diseases which deagrading the health and environement. Secondly, poverty is also a major concern. Due to poverty, people are dieing and not things for survivals. The government should focus on these problems. Foe instance, In india thousands of people are died beacuse of poverty every year. And everyone have right to live\nIn conclusion, The government should have top most priority is economic growth but they also make more efforts to slove the problems. They havee to launch some schemes, rule and regulation for improvement.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "That saying Katherine Paterson said All us think book hope none children children taken shelf I disagree statement I think goverment s choice items taken libraries So need ligitement reason s take books shelf Some people think take books shelf teach kid s history People nt right take away children In statement Katherine made supporting idea taking away kids right learn US history The kids right learn history people want take away Then future generation like Some kid s might even know got continent Parents also nt want us read anything books foul language anything nudity I see theese parents trying They trying protect children fact people going go life ar nt introduced younger age older Some kids right taken away idea get older foul language texts theese books put voice books We nt want coming generations blind real world When I fifth grade I liked read alot I really liked adventure books boxcar children books like One time I went library I picked book haunted house The librarian would let check book texts book apropriate That sort crushed reading spirit I really never wanted go check book So adults want take theese books shelves might stopping generation learning nt learn next generation nt going want read anything learn Theese couple reason take books magazines movies music away us There people reasons want take right away us prepared argument fight right So adults want take book shelf better real good ligitement reason take", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Should Facial Action Coding Systems (FACS) be used to read student's emotions?\n\nThe real question is, do you want your teacher to know if your happy, sad, mad, fustrated, confused, or board?\n\nTo some, the answer is simply yes, the ones who want others to know what ther are feeling are mostlikly a socil-type person.\n\nOn the other hand, its a simple no, if you know somone is gauging your emotions, say you didn't want anyone to know your mad, angery, or sad, would you be afraed to make any exprestion at all, or even go to class.\n\nNowadays, being watched is a normal acurance, but not to the personal level as to your emotions or thoughts.\n\nMany may ask, what good is it to know about how one is feeling, the answer is unclear.\n\nIn paragraph six, the artical tells how helpfull FACS could be to the classroom, but if students should learn anything about real life, its crucial for them to understand, you can't please everyone, as much as you try, you won't.\n\nIf you have walked into a elementery school in just the past year, you will notice some very different souroundings.\n\nSome elementery schools have laptops for every student, which makes it easyer than ever for a teacher to make and publish an assinment.\n\nAs I personly wittnesed my siblings having homework over the weekend, and Fridays, both of which, I never had in elementer school.\n\nTo sum it all up, the more tecnolagy we have dosn't always mean it needs to be implamented in a classroom, just becase we can dosen't mean we should.\n\nNot to mention, who will pay for such a system, our tax dollors?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As a scientist at NASA, I think the face that was captured on Mars is just a natural landform and not something that was created by aliens. When Micahel Malin and his group of Mars Orbiter Camera snapped a photo ten times bigger and clearer than the original viking photos, People were excited and were watiting when the was image was first posted on JPL web site, it revealed.... a natural landform. Yes, there wasn´t any alien statue. It has nothing to do with aliens.\n\nEven after that. People stilll believe that perhaps the real alien monument was hidden by a wind since it was winter in the Red Planet. So, mission controllers are preparing to look again for some real eveidence. They said that it was a real hard work since they don´t pass around that particular alien statue look alike very often.\n\nAs they keep looking, they finally take the picture they wanted to take but it was not a good quality. ¨As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size,¨ explains Garvin. Guess what they found? but before that, he also says that if there are any objects or anything on the planet, they will be able to see it by zooming it. When they actually study about the photo that they have taken, there is no such things as alien monument or anything extraordinary. Garvins expressed his thougts, ¨It reminds me most of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain in Idaho,¨ and added, ¨That´s a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the face on Mars.¨\n\nSo, I hope you understand my point now that you know NASA have studied Mars over and over for a lot and a lot period of times and still, there are no alien discovery. If there are ever any alien discovery or something\n\nextraordinary that NASA have found on Mars, or say any planet. It is most likely that we will want to share it to the public about it. No, we wouldn´t want to keep it a secret because we wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the development of the economy, the past several years have witnessed a social phenomenon that more and more families paying attention to the history of the constructions they currently live in. As far as I’m concerned, there are two main reasons: 1) the first one is about the ages of the properties, which might be so old that the public doubt whether they should be rebuilt in the future. 2) the next concern is whether the surroundings of their houses are suitable for residential or marked as uninhabitable. I would elaborate on the two points in the following paragraphs.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, as for the age of living houses, the “older” the construction is, the riskier for habitants stay in. It is mainly because the quality of bricks would be sharply declined or destroyed with time flying, and then they would be humid or crispy, which depends on the local climate. Not to mention, when facing a storm or a typhoon, constructions with old school structures which are not designated to defend against natural disasters, might be crushed into fragments in a second. How dangerous it can be, no wonder that more and more civilians are becoming interested in finding out about what has happened to the buildings they are living in now.\r\n\r\nSecondly, previously communities were inclined to live in the city centre to enjoy a more convenient and modernized life, so their residential communities were surrounded by shopping malls, hospitals, gyms, restaurants and other social institutions, crowded but animated. On the contrary, an increasing number of people are fond of de-modernized life, and they want to move to somewhere quiet. For example, the number of suburban communities has climbed considerably in Beijing. So this obvious trend illustrates that the surroundings of current apartments are unsuitable to live in. If the public can exploit the original design of the construction, they might have the chance to recommend that the government could help them reconstruct the building itself or plan a new blueprint for the block they are staying in.\r\n\r\nFollowing the former two reasons, civilians could hire professional engineers to check the health conditions of buildings and output a report for the next steps, which could determine whether further reconstructions should be included. Then people could do some research or gather information from the Internet to verify that, whether there are any significant changes in facilities or other infrastructures. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, when people are concentrating on the stories behind the buildings, they are seeking a sense of safety. Whenever it happens, the government should pay attention to this phenomenon, and find respective solutions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I writing letter inform Use computers Computers fun interesting But people spending much time computer opinion spend time interacting people society family friends I also think easy get addicted computer I I person spent time computer nt good You safe computer days dangerous appalling people spend More time computer ther Family Do nt agree Well shoud society family friend important thing You nt spending whole day computer interacting people around Now days see plenty people computer spending time family That nt going Although computer fun interesting people around wisher spend time You think happening much world people school say addicted computer people community say addicted computer Those high numbers nt think This terrible stop going The computer like drug get computer one time going want stay ti everyday day The first time get computer addicted right away I m saying never get computer sure wo nt get addicted happen easily mother always sayed safe computer At first I nt really meant I What ever computer stay saved matter try delete So safe nt put thing computer would want anyone else see Anyone see put safe Kids meeting people nt try meet So watch computer place lie Now understand im coming You agree stand people spend time nt get addicted safe", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One main feature setting affects cyclist heat day If ride bike heat day going use lot water Another factor limited supply water The final factor wrong directions aged men Aged people arent always wrong info Can date", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke is a nice guy who lived in a small-town so he helped the people in Europe because his friend don had told him that after the world war 2 europe and many other countries were left in ruins.Europe was left with nothing so to help these countries had to recover their food supplies,animals,and more, 44 nations had joinned together to form UNRRA [ the united nations relief and rehabiitation administration].\n\nUNRRA hired seagoing cowboys to take care of the horses,young cowboys,and mules that were shipped overseas.\n\nSo lukes friend told him all about it and he told him if he would go to europe of corse luke coudn't say no so luke and don signed up for the seagoing cowboys so they could help europe with all the stuff they needed.In Agust 1945,they received their orders from new orleans.\n\nThey arrived in August 14,luke said that the day the pacificwar ended.they got their seaman's paper and boarded the ss charles w.wooster,and had heeded for greece with cargoof 335 horsesand enough hay and goats to feed them.\n\nEurope was sure geeting helped a hole buch it was geting better and wasn't in ruins that much that was a lot of help it was geeting.luke had turned 18 when he and don had arrived in greece wich meant he would be drafted to military service wich would also he the military with soldiers.\n\nLuke had made nine trips-the most of any seagoing cowboythe cattle-boat trips were unbelievevable opportunity for a samall-town boy\n\nthey wouldn't believe it that he would be able to do that kind of thing, but he was still able to do it and he helped europe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My grandma almost always patient especially teaching something like cook sew One time grandma taught use sewing machine She taught chang color thread helped untangle thread even though took Im best listener took lot patience Another time taught frost sugar cookies I would get invoked either cookie broke frosting lumpy cookie even bottom grandma put complaining I finally frosted didnt break frosting smooth praised even though I probably broken half sugar cookies My grandma also patient I helped make carmol corn many difficult steps one wrong whole batch ruined She let easy stuff mostly bat also let make sauce last batch fun I started go slow instead yealing harry asked politely go little quicker must taken lot patience My grandma also taught bake took amount patience I constantly spilling flour vanilla baking soda anything recipe could dropped I dropped I also never wanted stay clean I I still left half stuff floor My grandma always patient matter I", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Amazing! Venus often referred to as Earth's twin. Venus is the only planet that has a simlairty of Earth, a thick atmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide, and sending humans to study Venus.\n\nVenus is the only planet that has a simlairty of Earth. The size, and density are quite alike. Scientists believe that Venus, \"Could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" Venus has water just like Earth does too. So this tell us that Venus and earth have many things that make them alike.\n\nVenus got a thick atmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide. \"Have clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere.\" This tell us that Venus have much more carbon dioxide then earth has. Venus is much more hotter then Earth. Venus has temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. Venus is some what alike to Earth, but it has many difference to it too.\n\nScientists are planning to sent humans to Venus to learn more about Venus. Scientists believes that, \"The surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray.\" To get into Venus is going to be hard because there's a thick hot atmosphere. As in Earth, we don't have a hot thick atmosphere. Witch gives it a more difference.\n\nOverall, there's many things that venus show it's a great planets for people all around the world. It has a simlarity to Earth, it has a thick atmosphere, and scientists are thinking to send humans to learn more about Venus. What other more planets is more alike to Earth?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The line chart shows changes in the percentage of attendance in music concert at one city. The population is divided into five age groups:16-24, 25-44, 45-54, 55-64, and 75 years old and above. \n\nOverall, it is clear that the percentage of attendance in all age group were rose except for percentage of people from 55 to 64 years old. Although the percentage of some age groups were fluctuated, they showed rising trend in general.\n\nLooking at the chart more closely, one can see that the largest age group comprises 16 to 24-year-olds and that it grew steadily from 2010 to 2015, gradually reaching nearly 70 percent. In contrast, the oldest group, made up of people 75 years and over, consistently have the lowest rate of all five age groups. They surged initially, increasing from 10 percent in 2010 to 20 percent by 2011. However, this figure eventually settled into a slow increase, increasing to 20 percent by 2015. It is noteworthy that people from 55 to 64 years old remaind stable during the whole period. The number of the second largest group which comprised of people from 45 to 54 plunged initially, decreased from 52 percent of 2010 to 40 percent by 2011. Yet, this figure eventually bounce back to 50 percent in 2012, and maintained at the same level. The number of people from 25 to 44 years old decreased from 40 percent in 2010 to 30 percent by 2012, which is nearly half of figure in the largest group at the same time, but it ascended to 48 percent in 2015.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It I applied I applied patiently waiting letter addressed From beginning I checked mail box every day Every day I ran drive way I hoped day would day letter would come I afraid passed still letter It like waiting one moment climat movie think main character make move first l eating lunch I thought CAPS day I heard sound mail truck pulling mail bat botted door As I met mail lady smiled everyday sees Every day sees smile fade I check mail one letter address She looks says CAPS day Patience hard thing get I fair share patience", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is the Facial Action Coding System Useful in Classrooms?\n\nWhat if there was a machine capable of not only reconizing, but also understanding feelings via facial expressions? There actually is a machine that could do that. It is called the Facial Action Coding System, or FACS. This technology could be very useful in classrooms, it could reconize the emotions of the students, it could help identify or even prevent certain situations before they even happen by identifying a problem, and it could help give teachers much needed feedback on the class that they wouldn't verbally recieve.\n\nFACS constructs a 3-D model of the face. It takes into account all 44 maajor facial muscles to determine the feelings or emotions of a person. For example, if you raise your forntalis pars lateralis, or the mucles above your eyes, you are displaying surprise. Using this technology in classrooms could help learn the emotions of students and show how they are feeling.\n\nIdentifying emotions in the classroom could be very useful. Students on average sit in classrooms for 6-8 hours a day. Their emotions are still developing and they themselves are still maturing. Sometimes, students may have breakdown or outburst because of various reasons. A student might be stressed out about their grades and begin to preform poorly. Usinng FACS this behavior could be predicted and prevented, letting the teacher know that that student needs a little extra encouragement or more academic assitment. Also, the school enviroment has many variables aside from classrooms alone and that could also cause problems. A student who becomes angry at their classmates has the possibilty of putting them in trouble, It coould either lead to a fight, confrontation, bullying, an other things. Yet, if the problem could be determined becore it could even start, it could help defuse or prevent the situation from escalating resulting in a safer learning enviroment. Considering this FACS could become a very useful additions to the schools as a community.\n\nFACS could not only help the school as a whole, but more specifically, it could help the teachers. Dr. Huang claimes that, \" Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication.\" Using this statement we can recognize that not all information and feedback is being recieved by neither student nor teacher. A teacher's job is to help educate and prepare their students for the future. However, that becomes difficult when a single teacher has to take responsibilty of a large ammount of students. Some students express their concerns and questions but others choose to remain silent. Using FACS a teacher could now determine which students are confused and worried and which students are doing fine. By using this information a teacher could offer additional help for a student that a student wouldn't normally ask for. Knowing where to focus on and which students need help could help a teacher tremendously. It would facilitate a teacher's job and help them teach with greater efficientcy.\n\nFacs would recognize student's emotions, help identify and prevent certain situations before they occur, and it would give teachers feedback on the class that they wouldn't recieve otherwise. FACS would help education by targeting students that are well of and students that need additional help instead of having a teacher assume the whole class is confused or content. FACS is an innovative piece of technoly that could bring forth a new age of education if placed in schools.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Could you imagine everyone in the world driving in a vehicle that could control where and when you go somewhere? I think it would be absolute chaos. I couldn't imagine driving in a vehicle that could take control on it's own, It would be way to skeptical for me. I strongly disagree about driverless cars.\n\nFirst, driverless cars are not 100% durable nor safe. Google cofounder, Sergey Brin, stated that \"General motors created a concept car that would run on a special track\". That track for these driverless cars were embedded with electrical cables that sent radio signals to the front of the car. In reality, no roads have any electrical currents running through them to make any car more secure. It's illegal in many states to even test computor cars because this company hasn't proved their car reliably safe. Driverless cars are in my opinion, not safe.\n\nSecondly, in this whole artical, I didn't hear one thing about the driverless car being able to sense any size animal. Animals cause many accidents or deaths in the U.S. Animals are dangerous when you're driving, and many are unpredictable. This car has lots of little gagets and electronics in it, I think it should at least help you predict or let you know when a animal is approaching.\n\nLastly, weather is another big factor when you're trying to drive safely. Driverless car can't even predict when it's snowing, raining and such. When driving in dangerous weather and areas, it's very important to stay consistant, to stay calm, and to keep focused. Driverless cars dont have any emotions, they're not worried about the persons family waiting at home for them, or if the human in the car dies. Cars with a lot of technology have a better chance of screwing up, or something to go wrong with the vehicle.\n\nTo sum everything up, computor cars cannot be trusted. Driverless cars can't determine when animals are approaching nor can determine the weather or what the roads are like. \"Traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at ALL times\". Computors aren't meant to be in control of our lives or our loved ones lives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood memoir warm happy The author talks parents poor moved United States Cuba He says wonderful life even though family nt lot money All mattered family friends around every day Narciso says parents gave love skill cook still love love Cuban music This memoir basically says Narciso s parents people realized important things life It s fame fortune Its love family spending time together", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that this technology is not vauable because you can tell the emotion on someone's face by just looking at them. \" A renowned drama coach, Constantin Stanislavsky, had his actors carefully reproduce smiling and frowning as a way of creating these emotions on stage\". These actors did not need technology to see their emotion they knew what their emotions already were. With this technology people are able to read your face and see what is wrong, why have this when you alrwady know what face your making and if other people around you know what face your making. In the story it say's \" a computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face\". Why have a machine do this when you can just simply ask what's wrong or why make that face? This machine could be millions of dollars, why spend money on that when you could already see what is wrong with that student. So no I do not think that this technology is valuable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Twenty five years ago something very uncommon happened on our planet Mars. NASA sent a shuttle taht can take pictures of anything, NASA sent the shuttle out into space. The shuttle NASA sent out was called \"Viking 1\". Viking 1 was a shuttle that took (past tence) pictures of plantes. NASA sent the shuttle out to look for possible landing sites for its sister ship Viking 2. As the shuttle taking pictures it spotted a shadowy likeness of a human face. The Human face had a enormous head nearly two miles from end to end. Threw the cameras it seemed to be staring back at the cameras from a region of the Red Planet called Cydonia. Those are some little details about the \"Human Face\".\n\nEven though i'm a scientist at NASA, some of my friends who were also scientist we all agreed it was probably it was just another Martian mesa, they were common around Cydonia, but this one had unsual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh. I was dissusing the \"Face\" with someone who thinks it was created by aliens. I was telling him (John) we unveiled the image for all to see. The caption noted a \"huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose and mouth.\" But now that the word got out people think the Face is bona fide evidence of life on Mars. He was also saying \"Its evidence that evidence that NASA would rather hide.\" Me personally believed the Face was an alien artifact.\n\nAnd so on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, so friends Micheal Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera which we called (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times shaper than the original Viking photos. We were very anxious to see the picture... the picture revealed ... like we said a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\n\nEveryone wasn't satisfied. The Face on Mars is located 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter April '98 which was a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet. The camrea on board MGS had to peer though wispy clouds to see the Face. Perhaps, said skeptics, alien markings were hidden by haze.\n\nSo then I ordered mission controllers to look again. Mars Global Surveyor is a mapping spacecraft that looks straight down and scans teh planet like a fax machine in narrow 2.5 km-wide strips.\n\nApril 8, 2001 coudless summer day in Cydonia Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough fro a second look. They had to roll the Space craft 25 degrees to center the Fce in the field of view. Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best Viking photo. Meaning in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size. So if there we objects in this pictures like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks youll know where they were.\n\nThe picture showed the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa landforms. So they we never alien sights. Even though John never blieved what i said.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People have different views about whether or not large outdoor public outdoor places such assquares and parks are essential to towns and cities. Personally, I strongly believe that these types of outdoor places are necessary for various reasons.\r\n\r\nOne reason for my view is that public outdoor places are good for people’s mental health. These days, people are increasingly isolated from each other, which leads to loneliness and unhappiness. Public outdoor places give people a chance to have more face-to-face interactions and develop a sense of belonging with their community. For instance, when I walk my dog in the park, I’m often able to meet and socialise with other dog owners in my neighbourhood. In addition, a relaxing walk in the park helps us to release stress and refresh our minds. We all need a break from the grey roads and buildings that surround us every day.\r\n\r\nAnother reason for my view is that parks are good for the environment. This is because the trees and plants in parks help absorb greenhouse gases that cause global warming. As research and news reports have shown, global warming is a serious problem because it leads to rising temperatures and sea levels, which in turn cause extreme weather conditions. For example, floods and droughts are becoming more common every year. If there were more parks in the world, then climate change would surely become a smaller threat to humanity.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I support the idea that large public outdoor places such as squares and parks are essential to towns and cities because they benefit people’s mental health and help the environment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One time I lot paitenits I sprined one ice skating I spins trichs everywhere one I land I fell back bone I hurt arm mom surprised I could even stand hard I fell My arm hurting bad So mom rushed help go home The next morning hurting times I go doctors get xrays took two weeks devnlop So I two weeks pain So turns I didnt break arm however I lot pain waiting resualts It took lot paients wait wait wait xrays", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I Computers new technology keeps getting better better It many things like help learn something new see newold friends Even people online education Also lot people like computers games Computers great benifit us useful fun The computer teach us many new exciting things There lot learn Somethings could learn computer places people animals plants food etc I find recipe carmel apples I used computer Some people use computer education There online college online high school Its like new way home schooled Not everyone go big easier use online college Also lets say project need information instead rushing library use computer find There many things computer like visit friends I friends everyone friends either new friends old friends Back computers wanted talk friend would send letter With computer send letter faster Its called email Which type want clicksend friend Not use email use instant messaging An example would aim meebo I moved hear I friends I nt get see much I bet many people issue Well computer see people chat see For instance way see friends like Its easy fun way stay touch friends even family There still computer Another thing play video games They much fun play I talking video games Kids even teens adults love Whenever bored go play online games Or games purchesed play They entertaining fun Even little kids play games Sometimes even play friends online online game I know I get bored I go computer play game called Computers great pently things I taking I hope I convinced I showed computers benifit us people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College is full of debates, but the biggest debate is if they should still have power. They should not stay in power becuase The United States of America is a democracy. Its is easier and more democratic if the candidate won by popular demand. What is a democracy good for if the Electoral college can change their choice of who becomes president. Many of the representatives in the Electoral College are unfair to voters and sometimes cheat the voting system. Would you want that running your countries choices? I dont think so.\n\nThe voters choose a canditate in the electoral college but they can always change their votes. For example, \"Back in 1960, segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy.\" stated in source two. Basically, If you want a republican president to win you would vote for a republican represetative of the electoral college, but thats not always the truth. Voters can not control the mind of a representative, in a few seconds they become of member of the oppsoing sides and thus they have your vote. This is known as unfair use of your vote that can obviously not be taken back.\n\n2000 was the the year many people realized the lies of the electoral college. Bradford Plumer, author of The Indefensible Electoral College states that \"Al Gore . . . won the popular vote but lost the presidency.\" This means that the electoral college is cheating the voting system and lying to their voters. So, do your votes even matter? No, not really. \"Over 60 percent of voters would perfer a direct election to the kind we have now\" said by Plumer. This system we have for voting is basically useless to us and just gives the electoral college more power to run us.\n\nThe Electoral College does have some good reasons its still in power. In source three written by Richard A. Posner, he states that \" . . . the pressure of the presidential election process, is reduced by the Electoral College, which invariably produces a clear winner.\" In other words, when there is a run-off election or tie, the electoral college brings down this pressure making the choice so its quicker to make a choice on who becomes president. Sadly, very few people find the Electoral College useful but they do do a lot of things that help make the elections easier on the voters and putting less pressure on the candidates.\n\nIn the past few years people have realized what the Electoral College actually does. Its is true to believe that they grab our vote and change it last minute. They also can help in the process of the presidential election, but they make the voters confused and get called unfair adn cheaters, which is true. If this country was truely a democracy then the people would have complete ownership on who becomes president not the Electoral College.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why author conclude story paragraph I believe author concluded paragraph tells going future For example story told mom I failed When putting flower hole garden flock geese flying heading south", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Education has a crucial role in everyone's life. Some individuals believe that success in life depends on an academic degree. However, others opine that there are lots of other factors to become successful in life. In my opinion, higher education is essential to acquire achievements. In this essay, we will elaborate on both points of view in the upcoming paragraphs.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, a college degree provide a plethora of opportunities in students' lives. First and foremost, they can fulfil the eligibilities of numerous companies and get a job offer. For instance, the top of the association has some eligibility criteria like BCA, B.Tech and more than 60%, thus, if students have a higher degree, they can take part in any team. Apart from this, the level of study in a degree is very deep which will help in career growth and the chance of getting more opportunities in future. Moreover, scholars tend to earn more salaries than those with less education. As a result, higher qualifications help to become a successful person in life.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are more options to start work after school or diploma. Many young people want to start earning money as soon as possible. In this way, pupils have numerous options for finances. Firstly, students have a choice to admission in some institutions and emphasise on practical knowledge and duration of some courses have only one year after that they can try with different companies according to their skills.This may lead to promotions and a successful career. Secondly, some people have more work experience, soft skills such as leadership skills and other interpersonal skills that will also be beneficial in people's careers as some companies hire based on their confidence level and soft skills and provide scholarships to the students. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, pupils have innumerable opportunities for a career path with the help of a high degree whereas students have also an option to register in less duration courses that will help to gain practical morals. However, I believe that a college degree is most important to become successful in life as set graduation is one of the basic requirements when it comes to recruitment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays attending private schools become a real desire for many parents to ensure their children's future. Although there is a strong belief from others about its negative impact. Both views are considerable and need to discuss in depth.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, no doubt that private secondary school is a recent evaluation in the educational process. This is because many wealthy parents are eager to develop their child.s learning skills and levels. Enrolling in private schools would offer a better secure environment ,especially with the strict discipline that most teachers are adopting for their students in those schools. For example, recent local research shows that there is an annual increase in the number of candidates who apply for private schools for many reasons. Consequently, that type of school will attract more students whether they seeking knowledge or grades.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are many drawbacks that face private school students. Firstly, a challenging curriculum could exceed the daily studying hours. Therefore, stress feeling and anxiety affect the student's health negatively and reduce his self-confidence about his academic achievements to ensure the best future opportunities. Secondly, the close environment and small numbers of students will isolate them from their neighbourhood so there is a potential consequence of being anti-social because of the lack of diversity between students in their cultures and background. For instance, there are well-known religious schools in my country where students suffer from isolation.\r\n\r\nFinally, I believe that private school has a great educational opportunity to offer, however, there are many passive impacts that parent has to avoid when choosing between schools.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some societies nowadays have lost their sense of responsibility for the well-being of older family members, preferring to leave their elderly relatives in specialised government establishments. While there is a serious concern about whether certain rules should be imposed on young generations to oblige them to look after their parents, I would argue that it is sufficient for this responsibility to remain at the cultural level.\n\nOn one side, it feels correct that young people should be responsible for supporting their parents and other elderly generations. During their youth, parents put a great effort into providing their children with a good environment in terms of their education, food and healthcare, thus deserving a similar level of care later in life. However, imposing strict rules for the support of older people would break the fundamental concept of democracy. Therefore, countries that create such rules can no longer be counted as democratic.\n\nFurthermore, it will also raise an array of nuances. For example, people who were abandoned in childhood could be sued by their biological parents for lack of attention, which makes this rule unfair. Another problem is that such regulations would make supporting elderly people a burden and a chore rather than the result of personal care. In countries where rules oblige people to look after their elderly family members, natural love between children and parents gradually evaporates, becoming a sense of legal obligation. Thus, it is more appropriate for governments to propagate the feeling of responsibility by means of TV programs or other media sources to preserve a healthy relationship between young and older generations rather than by setting rules.\n\nIn a nutshell, it is true that some moral standards, such as the responsibility to care for elderly people, are fading away from some societies, requiring specific actions to be taken. Nevertheless, I believe such standards should never reach outside the boundaries of culture and become a legal obligation of a citizen.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many types of emotions and if this new technology can help people if they are having a bad day it will help everyone. Students can have all of these types of emotions on a daily bases. If each class had this technology there woudn't be any troubled or angry kids around because they got the help they needed. The future is helping kids to lead a better life.\n\nIn the reading there is evidence that shows that there is a 3-D computer model of the face that can use all 44 major muscles like human muscles so they can see if your having a really good day or a really bad day. This technology would be great for schools so the teacher can tell if he needs to talk with the kid. There are many ways to use this to a teachers aid.\n\nThe second explanation to show that this would be a good thing for the students. If a student is having a bad day he won't be able to learn but with this technology he can learn and still have fun in school with the teacher and his friends. This technology can be used in many forms to make people happy when sad and all different ways.\n\nThere could also be a bad thing with the technology it could mess up and say the wrong feeling when they are already happy. Constantin Stanislavsky was a drama coach and in order to get his actors to reproduce smiles and frowning as a way of creating emotions on stage. It could work to make people have happier lives but it could also go down hill and crash and burn. That guy could become one of the best scientist or he could be found one of the worst just according to this one machine he built. There are many types of ways to succeed and his might we will never know.\n\nAll of these supporting facts show you that u can succeed by just one simple machine to make u happy or sad. Students can be happy or sad even without this machine.Teachers can always make a student much happier by just being nice and helping the student out. There could be a flaw in his machine because it could malfunction and say the kid is angry when he is happy and mess his day up. All of these will support his machine.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke graduated from high school and his life got more complucated. After he graduated he was working two part-time jobs. His freind invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. Luke could not refuse. After that one trip he has gone on six teen other trips. In the mean time of wating to get were he wanted to go he helped out on the ship. He feed and gave water to young houres and cattle.\n\nLuke liked living like that. He liked to be on the move and working wile he was going some were. When he works he gets to see all sortes of beutiful and amazing things. On one trip he went to China and on anuther he went to Greece. He went througth all kinds of rivers, lakes, and ocanes.\n\nIf you are the tip of person that likes to travel this is the purfected jod for you. But if you get sea sike this is a taribble job for you. And all you have to do is feed and give water to hourses and cattle three time a day and after the hourses and cattle get off the boat you can play baseball, vollyball, table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, and you can read.\n\nSo if you like to travle over seas and like to play games. the job is just right for you and you get to go to China and Greece. And if you go to work on the boat remember luke you might just see him. Good luck working and traveling with the UNRRA (the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration.)", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are seeming to become more of a reality than an idea. With todays technology driverless cars would be possible and there are even some right now. Personaly I think driverless cars could be a good idea but there are many complications at the moment. These complications involve mostly law issues like if a driver were to get into an accident, and who would be put at blame.\n\nThrough out history driverlesss car have been made going all the way back to the late 50s. This proves that the technology is availiable and it is possible. I think they could be benefitial to our society because if the driver gets distracted then there would not be a crash because they are not actually driving. The cars today, however still need a driver to be ready to take over in certain conditions. \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents,(Paragraph 7)\". The cars need for assistance would reduce the number of crashes because if the driver didnt take over and the car got stuck there would be a large traffic build up that could lead to injury. The driverless car would remove the risk of human error when tired, distracted or even under the influence. They would also be nearly perefect when it comes to driving because of certain sensors in the vehicle, \"The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone,\"(Paragraph 5). Theses sensors not only make the car safer but they also help the car handle more tasks on their own. \"Further improvements in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more driving tasks on their own,\"(Pragraph 5). Many of the cars that are meant to be driverless will also be using half of the fuel used in cars today. This is also reducing the amount of polution in the world to making it eco freindly as well. The cars can also monitor the driver to be sure that they are paying attention to the road and not texting or sleeping. There have been many developements to make sure the driver is alreted when the car comes up against a road block, \"GM Has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object. The Google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over the car. Other options under consideration are flashing lights on the windshield and other heads-up displays,\" (Paragraph 7). These would be sure that the driver is prepared to take over the car at all times and is not distracted.\n\nIn conclusion driverless cars can greatly benefit the comunity increasing vehicle saftey and being eco freindly. There may be some consequences at the moment but in time they will be sorted out and delt with. The driverless car is one of or if not the safest option for the drivers and pedestrains at this age in time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir happy mood memoir one parents sacraficid child chanced house life time good memories", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many students these days find it increasingly difficult to pay attention during lessons. In my opinion, this is partly a natural reaction that has been exacerbater by technology and the solutions lie in school reform.\r\n\r\nStudents struggle to stay engaged both due to a natural predisposition and the pervasive impact of screen time. Students throughout history have always wanted to escape their school lessons. This is because learning is difficult and provides little pleasure itself relative to both passive and active pastimes like hanging out with friends, watching TV, listening to music, or playing sports. Moreover, the advent of the ubiquitous internet era and portable devices such as smartphones has had an exponential effect on attention spans and diversionary priorities. Most students today are addicted to short videos and posts on social media networks and therefore struggle to follow the intricate arguments of lengthy lectures and extended readings.\r\n\r\nOn a small scale, individuals can remedy these problems through sheer willpower but for broader change schools must play an active role. The most immediate fix would be to ban phones. This is difficult since phones serve practical purposes such as allowing students to call their parents or book a ride home, but they could be taken at the beginning of the day and returned when school finishes. Another step schools could take would be to modernise the curriculum and account for reduced attention spans. Lessons could be shorter and could include more interactivity in order to stimulate learning. rather than the passive learning environment that has led to daydreaming students for generations.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although this trend is likely an irreversible part of human nature and progress, schools can implement changes. to curb its effects. It is important for parents and governments to be supportive of such reforms as well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The driverless car is a great concept but I don't believe that our technology is prepared for it yet. There are too many things that could go wrong and that's if the government even lets these cars out on the road. It would be a really great idea, especially on longer trips like our family trip down to Florida every year for spring break. In reality I just can't see it being that safe and successful.\n\nThe writer talks a little bit about having special roads for these cars and this is just a concept of mere fiction. There is no way we can embed every single one of America's roads with an electrical cable, it's just not a possible thing to do. With America already in so much debt, I can't see how making these roads a reality would actually help the United States in any way.\n\nNow we are going to scratch the smart road thing because we all know that it's ridiculous, and move on to a semi-possible option-smartcars. My first topic here is that machines always malfunction eventually. No matter how well the manufacturer makes them, they will always malfunction in some way or another. I'm sure these cars will cost a fortune, and with that cost no one will want to update them every three years. Not wanting to update these cars puts everyone at risk for malfunctions. Personally I know I'm bad about taking the time to update my phone, so I'd be really bad about updating my car. Whether that be the cars data recognition is worn out or the technology simply isn't up to date, malfunctions will happen.\n\nWhen these malfunctions do happen, who is to blame? The car for not working properly or the person for not updating their car? Technically, it is the cars fault for not stopping and rearending another car, but a car can't pay for the damages. I could see a lot of law suits coming out from this, may it be between individuals in an accident or a customer verses a manufacturer. I think manufacturers should really do themselves a favor and say out of this technology advance. Accidents are already not fun we don't need to add another complicated measure to the process.\n\nWhen I first read about the driverless car I thought it was a great idea, and not until I dug a little deeper into the concept did I realize that there are some things about a driverless car that our society isn't ready for. We don't have the money to help this idea be successful, nor do we have the mindsets of Americans to make it successful. I believe within my lifetime that it could be good to have driverless cars, but for now I can only look at it as a great idea with bad reprecussions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this new age of technology many things kids thought were impossible in the past are growing up and figuring out how their past fantasy can come true. In the future the sky is the limit in what we can acheive with determination and state of the art computer software. A few guys by the name of Prof. Thomas Huang and Prof. Nicu Sebe have taking advantage of state of the art computer software and have added complicated mathmatical algorithms to accuratly perceive the emotions of others. They have acomplished thia amazing feat by using facial expressions of people to determine their emotion. With this technology we can figure of if a student in class in confused so that the teacher can help him/her fully understand the material. Can this system be valuable to student in a classroom?\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System has analyzed the expression of Mona Lisa. The results from the analysis showed that she is 83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry. Some people say that we have found the Da Vinci Code. So this software can construct a 3-D model of a persons face and uses the 44 major muscles in a human face to determine an expression. When a muscle moves it is called an action unit and by using the muscles which have moved compared to a model showing no expression you can differ from it six basic emotions: happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. With these variable you can determine a persons emotion.\n\nHow can this technology be valuable in a place such as a school. What the two professors have explained is that you can put this software on a computer and after a student have been taught a lesson the software can analyze the facial expression of the student and if they are confused the lesson will be explained upon greater and if there is a confident expression the lesson will continue. Another way other than school in which this can be useful is in the advertising business. For example, an advertisment could pop up and based upon you facial expression it would either give you more ads like that or if will change catagories till you facial expression looks like you are interested in the advertisment. So this software is teaching computers about human emotions and how to percieve them.\n\nIn almost every situation with a new idea there is a downside. I can imagine how long this process takes for the computer to figure out how you are feeling takes. So before this will get into class rooms it will have to run in probably less than 30 seconds to be effective. Also this is putting a camera in a computer that can turn itself on and take a picture at any given moment and with that technology it sound like the beginning of a sci-fi film in which computers can figure out what human are thinking through their emotions and kill us all. So that is probably a downside of this idea. Plus who want to be bombarded it advertisment. As mutch potencial this idea has in improving education there ae too many want in which hackers could get into the system, into every computer, into every camera to see what people are doing. Many people speculate in that the government is already watching us through the web cams on our computers but this system could have the possinblity to turn is self on by itself or manualy from an outside source.\n\nThis is truly ground breaking technology to be able to configure the expression of a human being. This is showing the ability that people and computers have to basically be able to do anything. To me this sounds like an good idea to make a ton of money because putting most likely expensive computer software into every type of computer can be a rewarding prize for a company who could have a monopoly over this. Also with many people today thinking that the government is somehow watching us through hidden cameras I don't think that people will like the idea of a camera that can take a picture of you at any moment. It just seems to much like a sci-fi movie where some rich guys decide to give robots even more advanced technology which back-fires and then we have the movie 'Terminator' in real life. In conclusion upon first glance this conputer software could be valuabe to schools but if it is improved upon even more it could have a devastating effect.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In world many things found offensive Everyone opinion offensive Many parents becoming upset think children viewing things Other people upset think libraries offending culture way life This even taken extreme people want censhorship libraries avoid wrong Some people becoming concerned materials libraries They find things offensive Everyone entitled opinion really nothing anyone someone offended The world public place everywhere go something might found offensive The library place study It never intended offend someone bring bad world It simply place inform someone offended see stay away library I library many times none I ever seen anything offensive Everything I ever witnessed library learning research There certain sections library If parent want child seeing something keep child children s section I assure nothing offensive children s section else library would section The owners libraries know going upset people If truly offensive materials library materials would taken Also person complains materials removed could lessen someone else s chance getting materials need One person could think material offensive someone else might want learn If one offended certain material simply must look The library compared big computer One basically find anything Asking library censor materials like asking internet censor It way learning researching would almost impossible censor everything Everyone going offended point life If libraries removed everything could offend someone would materials left People need stop easily offended realize library trying harm anyone There need censorship libraries It simply trying teach people world let enjoy books music movies whatever else one might go library find", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Though story certain like people got dream home How Parents Came country knowing language good edication Still becoming succesful living house Where people learned love best part family near", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "day I patient water park I get water slide thier like people front At time I hot I dont know I ground hot flip flops But I really want get water slide matter So I stand thier patiently get water slide Then I said self better wroth im going ferious But it I gon na pantient I hope I fun ride", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In everyday life people's emotions can affect certain things they are doing, like listening to or watching something. This is also the case in a classroom at school. Typically when a student is portraying positive emotions they will be more interested in the lesson and therefore pay more attention. The opposite goes for negative emotions, if a student is for example sad or worried they will be less interested in the lesson and pay less attention. Now if a teacher were able to detect when a student is portraying negative emotions, which is now possible with the Facial Action Coding System (FACS), that could be very valuable, because it could make the classroom a better and more affective learning environment.\n\nFirst of all if FACS was to be used in the classroom it could help teachers and instructors know whether or not a student is telling the truth about something based off of facial features. According to the article FACS can \"even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one.\" This means that if a teacher asks a student if they are doing okay and they smile back and say that everything is fine, even though it is not fine for them, FACS would be able to pick this up and notify the teacher so that they could help the student.\n\nSecondly students already don't like going to school but, when they have to come to school and sit through boring lessons it makes things worse. Now teachers usually try to do their best to make the lectures as fun as possible in order for the students to stay engaged. This sometimes does not work out though and the teacher may not even realize it, but Dr. Huang predicts that FACS \"could recognise when a student is confused or bored.\" With that the teacher could change what they are doing in the lesson to make it more engaging and therefore help students learn better.\n\nSo in conclusion, FACS would be valuable in a classroom environment, because it could help teachers be more affective with their lessons and get students the help they need to succeed at school and later on in life. This new technology is just one of the many new and incredible things technology is capable of and with the continuation of these discoveries we can strive to make the world a more positive, safe and liveable place.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If you wanna travel tons of times and help others you should join the Seagowing Cowboys they help others by providing people food, animals, and more. In the passage it said that fourty-four nations combine to form the UNRRA, also known as the United Nations Relief and Rehabailitation Administration. You should definately join because you are helping others even thogh it might be fun to travel its also a great feeling when you help others. Those are some reasons you should join the Seagoing Cowboys.\n\nAccording to the article Don and Luke signed up to take care of the horses, young cows, and mulesthat were shipped overseas. Luke traveled many times traveling more than any other Seagoing Cowboy at 9 times. He liked traveling but he really like supporting others. For example when Europe was left in ruins as wll as many other countries the Seagoing Cowboys would help them which I can imagine was a tremendes feeling. People will appreciate you more for helping others. Thats another reason you should be a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nIn the story it said that the Seagoing Cowboys went to Greece witha cargo of 335 horses and enough hay and oats to feed them so that they would be healthy which also means that they help the animals too. It also said in the article that being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than a adventure for Luke Bomberger, it opened up the world to him, he even said \"I'm grateful for the opportunity. This is especially a good reason because he even said that it was great which means from his prospective he appreciated the oppotunity.\n\nLuke was thankful to help others maybe you will be too.\n\nThese are some reasons you should join the Seagoing Cowboys you will find it fun and helpful to help others. Maybe you'll find it in your heart that you will help others.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Every day, we all wake up and instantly start to calculate how the day will most likely go. Much of this calculation revolves around the people that surround us constantly, like our family and our friends, who have the most impact on our behaviors and moods. We take a quick look at their faces and their body language, and can make a pretty close assumption as to what that person is feeling, what thoughts they are having, and how they will feed off of other people's moods as well. It's pretty easy to decipher many of these things without a problem, but sometimes, especially when an emotion is mixed, it's a little harder to calculate. Now, technology has been formed to help us find out what others are really feeling, even if they are hiding it. In many situations, this software could be useful. Some settings, not so much.\n\nIn a public schooling atmosphere, mood is pretty much what makes or breaks how a class will go. If the students are sad or the teacher is moody, the class might be that much more of burden to deal with all the negativity. If a class is particularly boring, and the students are tired, the class might go on for ages. Plus, some material might be confusing for some students, and this will make the class much harder as well to understand and pass. As people, we tend to subconsiously figure out this kind of information as soon as possible, in order to better guess how they should behave. We do it so often, we as a people have gotten pretty good at this. So how useful would this technoogy be in this particular situation? Not very, since in a clasroom setting it is fairly easy to tell when a student is confused or bored. Now, there are other situations, some even still withing the guidelines of 'school', in which this technology would be used more often.\n\nOnline schooling is an ever-growing web of ideas and people, and is almost always a good experience to have even if they dont stick with it. However, the social aspect of school is forgotten as well as the face-to-face contact with teachers that is useful in situations like confusion, boredness, or even sickness. This technology would be especially useful for this type of setting, since it can give teachers an insight on what their students are feeling about the material that they are teaching. It can help them shape their curriculum to better fit that student's needs, and therefore give a better and long-lasting impact on that student's grades, and possibly even future. It could be an integrated part of the website or a type of software that is highly reccomended or required to download. Even aside from all of that, there are even more uses for this software outside of the school setting.\n\nIn therapy sessions, or even interrogations, this kind of technology could be even more useful. In therapy, the people that go have most likely gotten very good at concealing their emotions, and doing things like fake smiling. This kind of technology could help the therapist better understand when something like this happens, and therefore help the patient get better faster, and to a higher degree. Interrogations, often done to help gain information that the prisoner most liekly does not wish to give. This technology could better read the facial expressions in details that we normally cannot decipher ourselves, and therefore better know when a person is lying or witholding information, and also help people know when they gave all the info they know.\n\nA public school setting is most likely not the best way to use this programming, especially since it has so many other incredibly helpful uses that would be much more beneficial to many things. Its obvious when someone is happy, excited, overly sad, or losing their temper. bot expressions like boredness, disgust, fear, and pride are hard to figure in small doses. This new technology will be used in a variety of ways, but how many of those will actually we beneficial?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driveless Cars are being seen in the future. This is causing a conflict for people who agree and do not agree. Some people think that it will not be safe. I see where they are coming from. The people that do not want it make good points. There are also people who love the idea of driverless cars. Those people think it is a great idea and think it will be really helpful.\n\nI personally do not like the idea of driverless cars.There are a lot of things that can go wrong. It can also cause problems with transportation speed and also will hold people back from learning how to drive themselves around. The time from leaving to getting where you need to be will be really slow.\n\nPeople will take advantage of not having to drive and that might be a problem. A person could fall asleep while the car was driving itself. The car could alert them that it is there turn to takeover but they could be a heavy sleeper and not wake up. I feel like there will also be a lont more people under the influence in there cars trying to drive because they feel that they will be fine aslong as the car is driving by itself.\n\nTechnology is not perfect. There can be glitches in the system and cause the car to not work properly. With technology there also comes hackers and someone other than the car itself could take control and cause someone to get hurt. It is a very dangerous idea.\n\nThe idead of driveless cars is a really interesting idea. It is also really smart. We do have the technology to do it and make it work. I still think it can cause trouble and will cause trouble if carried out.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars may sound like a good idea. Also they use less gas than a normal car. But will they be clean and easy to use? My opinion on driverless cars are that they shouldn't be legal until they are safe for the environment, People actually pay attention to the road and their surroundings, and the driver actually being able to contol the car at all times.\n\nFirst is the driverless car safe for the environment? Or are the fumes that it lets off just as bad as a regular car or could they be worse? We should try to find a different fuel for the driverless car. Maybe something like a solar powered driverless car. It already has sensor and everything hooked up to it. It wouldn't hurt to add solar panels to the car.\n\nSecondly, how are the companies so sure that the people in the car will pay attention to their surroundings while the car is driving itself? We aren't people are bad as it is now either being occupied by their phone or radio that they don't really focus on the road. If they are sleeping what if the vibrations in the seat are hard enough to wake them up? Or for the Google Cars what if they cant hear the Voice in their sleep? People would abuse not having to pay attention.\n\nLastly, will the driver be in control of the car at all times not just when its in a work zone or near accidents? The driverless can should let people control it anywhere because if the sensors malfunction the driver will then be alredy able to control the car. Instead of causing a wreck by randomly stopping or the car going out of control.\n\nAre they safe for the environment, will people actually pay attention to the road and their surroundings, and will the driver actually being able to contol the car at all times? If the companies can fix all these things they should be able to become legal in many states and people wouldn't think twice about using them. If they wouldn't fix these minor mistakes then they have no right trying to make a car that could possibly be dangerous.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We as people want to explore to new levels that no one has ever been to. Some of those things could be going to Venus. You would be the first person to go, everyone would love you, and you would get so much fame. Here's some things that you don't know about. It's exreamly dangerous and your chances of survival and very slim. By slim I mean next to none.\n\nThe planet is 97% carbon dixoide so we wouldn't be able to breath and you have have to be in a space suit with limited oxygen supply. Next, you wouldn't be able to touch the surface considering that the average temperatures and 800 degress fahrenheit. When you're there you won't be able to collect materails such as rocks, gases, or even anything else because you won't be able to get to there surface and anything you use to try to touch the surface will melt.\n\nWhen you are there you will be experiencing 90 times more atompheric pressure than you would here on earth. It would literally crush you to be present on the surface of Venus. Not to mention you could be the second fatherist away from earth and that'll make it longer to get back to earth than normal. Also, when you are there the planet is rotating faster than it would on earth and make you very sick.\n\nSo, before you decide to make big leaps and explore new places you got to know what you can and can't do. The author from the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" gave me my information and did an amazing job explaining and getting me to understand how harse Venus could really be. You are limited to far heights and it's your choice to find them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a good thing to have at times because they have the technology to make a change for the future. Smart cars have the capabiltiy to sense things that are coming when drivers have their focus on something else. The cars are amazing because they have the an opertunity to change driving in new ways.\n\nWith time computer-driven cars will be better than they already are because with time new ideas will keep coming and they will be put to the test to see if they can make them better. They will make thier ideas for the cars better and keep testing new theories for them like in the article it says\" Sensors are nothing new, of course. In the 1980s, automakers used speed sensors at the wheels in the creation of antilock brackes. Within 10 years, those sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers.\"\n\nDriverless cars are getting better as the years go on and technology improves. Google founder belives that \" technology has finally begun to catch up to the dream\". He belives this because before 2000s nothing was improved enough to make things that we have today like technolgy has grown alot since then to be albe to understand the math that it takes to make sure these cars are going to be able to do the job they are programed to do.\n\nEven though driverless cars are good they still have flaws that are not good like their technology can malfunction and that wouldn't be good for anybody in the car if they don't know what to do. In the article it stated that \"if the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer?\" With this being said it puts things into perspective that probably were but not thought\n\nas much until it was brought up. Also they don't always know what to do in situations like if there are work zones or finding a way around an accident that had occured. One thing that is also put into thought was the money that these automakers and manufacturers are putting into these cars because they are not cheap to build.\n\nDriverless cars are something that will be in the future becuase of the technolgy for cars rapidly growing and manufacturers finding new things all the time. In the article it says that \" the road to the truly autonomous car stretches on ahead of us, but we grow closer to teh destination every day\".\n\nAs time is being put into this more ideas are poping up and more adjustments are being made to make these cars better than the last.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think laughter good relationships When I first got trying make friends One day I class came class room came started talking I started laughing The told liked laugh stared laughing like So I would laugh felt good knowing making fun laugh enjoying She trying get laugh cause thought funny never heard anyone laugh like Everyone different laugh two laughs found funny best day life I know nt laughing Every time hears laugh laughs tries make laugh laugh good time For funny lot s people nt notice people laugh feel good noticed liked wanted good time Most people make fun someone say hurtful things wanted make laugh know nt making fun She thought unique funny haha weird funny like omg love laugh cute funny Now every time sees tries make laugh makes feel good every time new good make people laugh specially directly To honest made feel like people startling like knowing new kid human actual person say wan na people see That s could really ask So opinion yes laughter good relationships shows sense humor actual person inside body bones Another reason shows personalty real self Is nt people want people see people say areAt least s want s never forget class period showed laugh people ill know nt laughing like making fun saying funny That s people want see people The teacher substitute day kept getting mad us laughing could nt help funny That period laughed whole time I laughing peed pants little She made fish faces sounds like pretended monkey tree She laughed I laugh everything make laugh funny took whole period That s much laughing I got going go bathroom got back still sat started making laugh So sat came something pocket poked said We started laughing cause funny wallet I nt get still laughing I stopped I continued still laugh way laughing We laughing stopped time stopped time started laughing cause funnyThe sub came stood us got quit started laughing I think reason laughing dumb stuff I turned around work spinned around would start laughing Then started laughing I started crying I laughing started laughing started laughing At end period I pee bad would nt let go kept making laugh Sometimes laughing reason fun I guss whole belief laughter one best things person Not fun also healthy thing", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you believe in aliens creatinf landforms on planets? Than you might've heard about the Face on Mars being created by aliens. It's possible that it is not created by aliens, there is a possibility that is was created by a naturally. The Face on Mars is a natural landform.\n\nThe Face is a landform that was not created by aliens. Nobody really has evidence that it was created by an aliens. Several people do belive it was created by aliens though. But there is also no scientific research or evidnce that aliens are real. Which all leads up to, \"Is the Face on Mars really made by aliens?\" the answer is no\n\nMicheal Malin and his team snapped a photo of the Face that is ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. In the last sentence, paragraph 7 in the article \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" it states that there is no alien monument after all. This is because the landform was made naturally not by aliens.\n\nThis shows that is is possible for the landform to be made naturally and not by aliens. The landform has no sign that an aliens was around the landform either. Which is why the lanform is natural, not built by some other thing such as an alien.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many things days people find offending many different places magazins books movies cell phones internet even words songs Some people find offending think able remove offending materials self A big thing parents situation child gets ahold I dont want reading What messes childhood Honestly parents dont want young child read things see pictures take places On occasion get ahold sit talk understand something ossiated Also evryone took things self found unoppropiate wouldent anything left read listen watch Alot times one thing someone finds funny could offend another person end For example could find something enjoyable could find extreamly offending It would lead many arguments amoung communites Yet still another reason would work well would good idea If happen kids would grow thinking esay world This world harsh easy times Kids learn alot media As long postive role modles exsplain kids see media wrong take part would need removed If people able communities would alot crime anger would nothing left read watch see kids would live confused life knowing exspect media So ask think", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The automobile is a production commonly used by individuals all over the world. But utilization of this transportation vehicle arouses environmental damage as well as stress. Limiting car usage around the world would be greatly beneficial.\n\nLimiting automobile usage would decrease hazardous rates of air pollution in regions at which cars are commonly driven. The tailpipes of cars release toxins, often produced by the automobile's fuel, that severely pollute the environment once in the air. According to experts, \"passenger cars are responsible for 12% of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe and up to 50%...in the United States\"(Source 1). This amplifies the dangerous impact automobiles have on the environment. Paris, a car-using country, reached extreme levels of smog due to automobile emissions. According to Reuters, \"Paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter per cubic matter compared with 114 in Brussels and 79.7 in London\"(Source 2). Due to this, a ban was made on car usage and the smog eventually cleared. Automobiles' emissions of greenhouse gases are utterly harmful for the environment.\n\nDecreasing the utilization of automobiles would also ease stress levels among the community. In Vauban, Germany, cars are practically forbidden causing the suburb's streets to be free of the persistent humming of a motor. \"When I had a car I was actually tense. I'm much happier this way,\"(Source 1) says Heidrun Walter, a citizen of the car-free city. This illustrates how the loss of automobiles can bring tranquility to a region. Bogota, Columbia hosts the Day Without Cars, a day where the driving of an automobile is not permitted. According to Andrew Selsky, due to this occasion, \"pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks\" and \"rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic\"(Source 3). Lowering the usage of automobiles would relieve individuals of tensity caused by driving.\n\nAutomobiles are an excemplary form of transportation but their impact isn't as beneficial for other purposes. Car emissions of greenhouse gases promote global warming and traffic only tenses drivers. Limiting the utilization of these vehicles would decrease if not diminish their negative impacts on the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is widely believed that the uses of the tv, video and computer games might have a positive impact on children. However, some people argue that using these devices might not be beneficial after all. This essay will discuss both these views and will provide my own opinion of the matter. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, these tools can be used to boost brain development in children. It has been scientifically proven that some children can potentially learn topics of different subjects by watching tv. For instance, some tv channels educated kids by showing them programs related to history or geology, thus, helping them become more familiar with it. Secondly, when kids play either video or computer games, they are working out their brain. In other words, some brain' parts need to be active in order to understand the plot and the goal of the game. At the same time, they can acquire new skills. For instance, a study from the University of California showed that kids who played Tetris games can develop better spatial vision in their later life.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, children could be at risk when they spent time using these tools. A lot of parents advocate and refuse their kids to watch tv. They believe that there are many inappropriate tv programs showing adult scenes or people having bad habits that can directly influence kids' behaviours. Moreover, there is a great risk of children becoming dependent on these devices. As a result, they spent countless hours indoors, thus, isolating themselves from family and friends. Lastly, there is a high likelihood of children becoming violent when they spent time playing action games. These games can easily influence their behaviours and in some cases, it can even encourage them to be violent in real life.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, these tools bring a lot of advantages for children, as long as they are used in the right way. In my opinion, there should be limits in the use of these devices in order to avoid kids being negatively impacted. In the future, parents should be more vigilant with their kids, checking upon their habits, especially watching tv and gaming.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "No one can deny that nowadays individuals tend to birth their children at very later ages such as after 30 years old. There are many disadvantages and few advantages I will discuss in the upcoming paragraphs.\r\n\r\nTo begin with the disadvantages, The new generations will be very busy with their work and a huge factor of people will prefer to married after completing their graduation and it has a big gap in their married life. In other words, In the past massive will be married after they finished college degree and it has a good effect on their nations. For example, British news channels reveal headlines today's technology is advancing day by day and many people will be work-hard for their good careers in future but it has forgotten to wed for their partners and it has a impact on their kindergarten growth. Hence, A late married will be not good for anyone and it destroys for newborn baby's health. \r\n\r\nTo commence with the advantages, good jobs opportunities require high qualifications for well-paid work and every individual will dreamof a wealthy lifestyle. To explain, The later married will be born a child not strong and many physical and mental health problems will become in new kids. For instance, In Australian newspapers authority will declare a good childbirth at normal age such as parents age has 20 plus it has a good effect on their children's brain ability. Thus, A powerful child's brain will work for their guardian's personal and young-age activities.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, Although a good career is important in life but a well healthy child will be beneficial for their community. Moreover, older ages married will be not successful in life because they do have not the strong power to make a child.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In these modern times, school education has become very diverse and people have now started to advocate the importance of international news as a part of the curriculum. I agree with this point and actually believe that this can make our upcoming generation more informed on current affairs. In this essay, I intend to discuss the pros and cons associated with adding this subject to the course outline for secondary school students.\r\n\r\nThe proponents of the former opinion suggest that the adoption of international education as a subject for secondary school students can be very helpful, as It can provide the students with insights into the economical, social and political aspects of the different countries of the world. This will help our young generation to make better decisions in life. Such as, choosing their political representatives in the future and forming their opinions on the current affairs around them.\r\n\r\nThe people of the latter opine believe that the sociopolitical landscape of the world is constantly changing and rapidly evolving. Therefore, the international news we teach today will become a history lesson in the future. They also believe that the world is facing very difficult times right now and teaching these hardships in the classrooms will only traumatise our young generation and will not cause any good.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe that the road to a better-informed youth starts in the classroom. The ideas that inspire and educate our young ones today will equip them in making better decisions in the future. Hence, the significance of introducing international news as a subject is extremely high.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The\n\nFace on Mars is just a natural landform. Somple may believe it was created by aliens. But NASA begs to differ on that opinion . They have did years of research to prove it. Such as a clear picture of the face.\n\nThe first clear\n\npicture was taking on Apiril 5, 1998. The second on Apirl 8, 2001. In this argumentative essay I am going to explain the two pictures and what happen with them.\n\nOn the first picture when Mars Global Surveyor Flew over Cydonia Michael Malin and team snapped apicture ten times sharper then the one before. There were thousands of anxious web surfers waiting for the image to appear. When it first appeared on a JPL website it revealed a natural landform. But not all people was ok with that through.\n\nEven through Garvin said \" we just don't pass over the face often\" they did on April 8, 2001. Him and his team captured an extraordinary photo. Also with each pixel in the image spans 1.56 meters compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo. But also in this photo with better pixel it still didn't show anything abnormal. Martian di say it reminds him of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\n\nAfter everthing the Face of Mars is a natural landfom. I stated two examples of how you could know. The information was given by Michael Malin to show and explain that there was nothing there to support the alien theory. There was also a comparsion he shared .The would conclude my argument.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is believed that artificially intelligent robots are progressively substituting humans in the workforce. In my opinion, workers in all menial jobs are more likely to be replaced by AI machines, however, it is very unlikely that this would be the case for the jobs requiring human interactions. This essay will discuss why eventually only some particular jobs are at risk of being redundant.\r\n\r\nIt is argued that machines are gradually replacing low-skilled workers in many industries. Many companies will turn to artificial intelligence, not only because they are obliged to catch up with technology development in order to maintain their credibility in the market, but because it is also less expensive than hiring, training, and employing a human. For example, in some supermarkets machines took over the labour work usually done by humans. For these reasons, jobs that can be replaced with this cutting-edge technology will be replaced.\r\n\r\nConversely, jobs where human contacts play a pivotal role can not be replaced with robots. In other words, there are certain occupations where taking a decision requires considering unpredictable circumstances or events or even the emotions of other people and robots can not be trusted to be in such positions. For instance, surgeons have to adapt continuously to unforeseeable situations during surgeries to ensure the patients' safety which can not be done by programmed robots. Therefore, jobs requiring humans' complex capacities are far from being substituted with developed, automated machines.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is deemed that all jobs will be carried out by artificially intelligent robots in the future. In my point of view, that unskilled labour will eventually be done by machines and automation; however, sophisticated jobs that require specific human skills will not be affected. Ultimately, few human jobs will be safe in this advanced technological world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the recent passages that I have read, I have discovered how people in Germany have started the trend of not driving cars in a certain tow. This trend has sparked new flames in places like Levittown and Scarsdale New York. While that trend has sparked, studies have shown how many people in America have stopped driving and or buying licenses.\n\nIn passage two, I learned that Paris enforced a partial driving ban because of all of the [air] pollution. I can't blame them. With Paris being one of the most beautiful cities in the world, why ruin the air around it. I do believe that Paris may be one of the most visited cities in the world because of the Eiffel Tower.\n\nIf people visit Paris for a structure that tall, I know tht I wouldn' want to come back with the air being as bad as it is. Just think of all the people with asthma living in such polluted air. In Paris, 4,000 people were fined for driving their cars, 27 cars were impounded for the owners reaction to the fine.\n\nIn Bogota, Colombia, a program set out to be a national car-free day. This program was such a succes, they did it three years in a row. The obly vehicle access was taxis and buses in a capitak city of seven million. The turnout was large, despite gray clouds that occasionally dumped rain on Bogota. \"The rain hasn't stopped people from participating\" says Mayor Anatanas Mockus. Surprisingly, two other Colombian cities, Cali and Velledupar, joined the event. \"These people are generating a revolutionary change, and this is crossing borders\" said Enrique Riera.\n\nAll over America, people are starting to stop buying licenses and driving cars simply because they dont care for them. In my own opinion, I feel like Americans rely on motors far too much. We have turned into a nation of laziness. But as I have read, the love affair, or couch affair, with cars is starting to crumble, just like 50% of marriages in America. As I have read, it appears that teenagers stopped worrying about licenses and cars simply for the fact that walking with friends is somewhat \"funner'\n\nWhen it all comes down to it, cars are destroying our ozone, if cars are gone completely, people with breathing problems will be able to breath easier.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "During construction mooring mast atop Empire State Building builders many challenges If put spire top building weight dirigible could destroy The construction team needed go back reinforce entire framework building obstacles way included lowflying aircraft laws difficult weather conditions safety derigible crashed New York For reasons mooring mast doomed start", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the modern society we are living in, minors should learn to collaborate in order to develop a positive attitude toward others and to inculcate confidence. There is a cliche that the most proper way to learn children to cooperate is through sports in school. I partially agree with the viewpoint and I will justify my opinion throughout this essay.\r\n\r\nNowadays, playing sports will help the younger generation to merge with their colleagues, which teaches them to be more sociable and to build discipline. Like for example, varsity players in basketball can build their social skills by dealing with the team members and other players in different competitions, ,moreover they must comply with any practice on time as scheduled by the coach, which makes them more responsible and disciplined person. However, team sports are not the best way to learn how to cooperate, hence there are a lot of school activities equally essential to implant such value.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, most schools have put up different group activities for the students can join if they are not into sports. For instance, music clubs, dancing clubs, acting and theatre and others can also be possible. These kinds of ventures also give chance to the school children the to communicate and show their own potential even not participating in any games. Eventually, they can learn as well to bring out their leadership skills and optimistic view in dealing with their classmates.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, It is said that sport is the best way to participate in school, whereas joining school clubs and group work is also alternative, hence not all pupils love doing sports.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When picking book music movie magazines library s always hard decision like want read one book time Books found offensive interesting plain boring books So would anybody take books shelf offensive When children pick books library want make sure kids books also want check see educational You definitely would nt want little kid getting ahold adult book book found offensive way So adult section kids section When walk library full books huge variety kind books We would lower use going library books takin shelves would nt use going If going find book go library anymore The last reason take books shelfs people afford buy book anywhere obviously come library borrow book So taking books away would limit learning would benificial The reason I would find okay take offensive books anything else shelves childrens sake safety If library s thinking taking offensive books shelves public vote see everyone else thinks If decide take books shelves adult section library Anybody years age older could So make finding book easier nt take offensive books completely away us", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting affected cyclist since California desert June hot dry Which caused get thirsty drink water After almost water gone began get tired since desert isnt one around help dehydrates blacks persevere really push situation wants survive But eventually finds bait shop drink okay", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Censorships libraris would liked cutting worlds air supply It would taking away readers imagintion stoping readers able express mind My veiw censorship libraries would needed Libraries around world good jobs keeping certain books apperpate ages levels By removing certain materials libraries would cause reader attention removed Then readers would demanded leave books alone Then fight books like would need censorships libraries Books made keeping people wondering learning excited By cutting away different materials would stopping people enjoying world minds More take books away population watching television gets higher Then would author actors actress People minds would wondering learning kept excited I remember little girl went library I library looking book I wet big kids side called tried check book The library lady told young showed age level books took book back Then able check book So sating censorships needed libraries That would tking away librarains job So dont take away readrs imagintion", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever felt like you had nothing to your name and you wanted someone to help.\n\nWell if you have then you have something in comen with the Seagoing Cowboys operation.\n\nCowboys help people with nothing.\n\nHow do these people end up with nothing you may ask, well when a country is in a war and their country gets destroid the citizens have nothing at all to go back to but rubble.\n\nThe UNRRA (the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration) gets involved with broken countries by rebiulding.\n\nThey use us Seagoing Cowboys to bring the needed cattle from other countries by boat.\n\nWe travel by sea with hundreds of horses and other needed aniamals.\n\nThey are given the job of feeding the aniamals three times a day as well as giving them water and cleaning the pens.\n\nAlso we are tasked with night watch, in paragraph seven it tells us this can be a dangerous.\n\nBut the danger is worth it when you think of all the joy the days on boat have.\n\nWhen the animals are gone we play games where the cattle were held. Another up side would be that you are not only serving your country but your serving someone else's as well.\n\nThe boat rides to the cattle's destination is worth the our time as well.\n\nThe sight seeing is amazing wherever you go whether it be Itily or China, there are great things you can see.\n\nBy becomeing a Seagoing Cowboy the world has oppend up for me and it could for you to.\n\nIt may be a dangerous job but when you think of the great adventure and glee you will perticapate in, the life of a Sea Cowboy does not realy seem terrible at all.\n\nThe danger is worth it and even if you think you may not be cut out for the job try it because it is a once in a life time opertunity and lets just say they don't come around to often.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Mostly everyone is aware of the so called \"global warming\" and air pollution issues we have going on around the world. Both of those are mainly caused by motor vehicles that we use on a dialey basis. Lately places around the world, like Paris and China, have been trying their very best to limit the percentages of these and the pollutant in the air by banning cars for one or more days and having citizens rely on taxis, buses, walking, bikes, etc.\n\nBecause of this, scientists have already began to prove that the percentage of air pollutant has gone down, not drastically but there is at least 9% less, which is still improvment. Less air pollutant also means healthier citizens, which is what these countries are mainly aiming for in this experiment which they call \"smart planning\". They began this study in cities to make them less denser and better for walking, now they have move their plan over to the suburbs.\n\nIn Paris they banned all vehicles with even number plates for the day and vehicles with odd numbered plates the next. Violators were fined a 22-euro($31) ticket. In Vaubban, Germany they have asked people the gove up cars and the roads a \"car-free\" zone, excpet for the tram and a few of the streets on the edge of the community. They also had large garages down at the egde of the community which were sold for $40,000 along with a house.\n\nStudies have also shown that along with physical health, citizens ahve been happier and more \"stress-free\" when it comes to not driving. one mom in Vauban said it was nice the hear the swish of bicycles and chatter of children instead of the occasional distant motor. America was a step ahead of all these other coummunities though. Their number or cars and liscense that have been given a year has a decreased effincently and is almost the same as it was in 1995.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people use cars to get around every day. It's become a common form of transportation and a way of life. But with this, there are also negative effects of having the widespread use of cars. It pollutes the earth with substances like smog and uses up more resources from the earth that it needs to, taking from the resources later generations may need. There are several benefits to reducing the use of cars, such as a cleaner and less polluted earth, and we as people will start to become smarter about our resources.\n\nThere are several countries where smog is a serious issue, making it warmer than it should be and dimming the area. not only this, it destroys the Earth's atmosphere. There are cities where they hold days where nothing but public transportation is allowed, and people who violate will be fined. Days like these decrease pollution and create a better environment for ours and other generations to come. If cities all around the world took stands such as this and began to have multiple days of no cars or even ban them, the world may become a cleaner and less polluted place, and the atmosphere may not be destoyed as easily. What it seems, is that all it really takes is just some effort from us to make the world a better place.\n\nWith the banning of car use comes the knowledge of how much of our resources we have wasted on them. We may start to realize what we have done to the earth, and in turn, ourselves. It is an extreme pollution to the earth, destroying the atmosphere and depleting the metals and materials used to make and drive these cars. With the reduction of the use of cars comes the fact that we will no longer destroy the earth with gasoline and diesel fuel, but instead try to keeo if clean and preserve what we still have left.\n\nSo, if we try to reduce the usage of cars worldwide, we will stop the massive polution we have created and will gain the knowledge of what we have done, instead of living in blissful ignorance. There is something we can learn with this. Without cars, smog would almost not be caused by us, and we as a race will no longer destroy our home.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many advantages to limiting car usage, for exmple, it lowers the amount of emmisons present in the atmosphere which can lead to a better planet. All around the world people have started using cars less and less because of the problems they cause, such as polution and traffic, and have started moving to a better idea of society where everyone lives in a closer area with stores and jobs within walking distance. The life of cars is ending but our life is just getting better.\n\nSince the times of World War 2, people have had the idea of spread-out homes and private garages but with new times come new ideas, new ideas of closer centered, compact cities. These new cities would have most shops and businesses in close quarters with housing to reduce the need for automobiles and have walking as a more reliable mode of transportation as well as a small amount of public transportation to assist with the more lengthy distances between home and work. In this new approach stores are placed closer to home along walkways rather than in malls along highways in the distance. This would reduce the space needed for the shopping centers as well due to the fact that they would no longer need large parking lots for all the vehicles that were once needed to commute to and fro.\n\nEmissions and greenhouse gases have been a problem in modern society due to the fact that almost everyone has an automobile. This has been creating a large amount of stress on the enviroment and can lead to problems in the near future. Because of these problems, many enviomental agencies have started regulating car usage to try to keep the enviroment safe. Some of the ways they are doing this include promoting \"car reduced\" communities, which rely more on public transportation serving the suburbs than personal transportation. This helps to cut down on traffic and in turn the amount of emissions produced by cars on the road. Another way to prevent this is to ban the act of driving all together. Paris has done this in the past to combat the amount of smog accumulating in their city by banning the driving of certain license plate numbers which reduced the amount of traffic and emissions.\n\nCar free cities are also very popular. an example of this is Bogota, Columbia. They have had cars banned for the last three years, minus buses and taxis. The goal of this project was to promote alternate means of transportation and reduce smog. This has created over 118 miles in bicycle paths as well as broad smooth sidewalks. The amount has traffic has also been cut in half during rush-hour thanks to new restrictions. New retaurants and upscale shopping has also come up all around the area. The amount of smag has also been reduced significantly and air quality has made a huge jump.\n\nOverall, the age of the car is coming to an end, but it is making our life better and easier. Hopefully these new restrictions and ideas will help us to reduce smog, cut down on traffic and produce a better, more stress-free, lifestyle. Then, maybe we can all become \"Urban /k/ommandos\" someday. The term \"Urban /k/ommando\" is trademark of the /k/ Branch of 4Chan. org and is not to be used by any parties who do not assume the responsibilities of carrying this title.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using technology is a good way to help other in a classroom that are suffering. Technology is a important part of everday lives each expression is compared against a neutral face showing no emotions. This can determine if someone needs help in the class. Technology is very valueable it helps us daily and we don't even know it.\n\nThe use of technology to read expressions in a students face in classroom is valueable because like the article stated \"a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored during the lesson. So the use of technology to read the emotional expressions of studetns in a classroom can be valueable. It can help teachers with students it can either tell the teacher if the student is liking the subject or wether he or she is bored. It can also help with communication is can help students communicate more with their classmates. So yes i think that technology is a valuebale way to read students expressions\n\nThe use of technology to read emotional expressions is a good way to understand other people better i love this idea. It can help lot's of people out in the future especially teachers it can help them know if there lesson was boring or interesting. So that's\n\nwhy i think some teacher would love to see this form of technology at our schools it can really help the school out.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this present-day world, it has to be said that a younger leader is better than an older one;however, most organizations have geriatric higher authorities.In this golden digital era, the younger generation has the ability to handle technology rather than dotage people;although, the aged generation have life experience.I agree with the theme and the essay will enunciate this notion in detail with appropriate instances.\r\n\r\nTo commence with, it is indeed an irrefutable fact that technology has been changing day by day and younger people are updating more advancements than older people.For instance, a study was conducted by scholars of Harvard University about the speed of learning technology in dotage and younger adults.The result shows about 80% of youngsters learn technology fast rather than old age people.\r\n\r\nTo continue, it is paramount to consider health instead of experience.Younger people are healthier than old age because during old age, the chances to get health issues are more and there are chances to get Alzheimers and dementia that horribly affect your ideas.For instance, a survey was conducted by IIT,Mumbai about", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, as more consumer goods are manufactured, more damage has been inflicted to the environment. I will outline several reasons for this and put forward some measures to this issue. \n\nFirst of all, the increase in the production of consumer products harms the environment in two ways: the chemical by-products from the manufacturing process and the mass production of disposable goods. As more goods are produced, more toxic wastes and emissions are released from factories into nature. Water sources are contaminated, and the air is severely polluted, which results in the deaths of many marine and terrestrial animals. Also, to accommodate customers’ ever-increasing demands, more single-use products are introduced, most of which are non-biodegradable. Though having a short lifespan, these products can remain as wastes for thousands of years, turning our planet into a huge landfill and posing a threat to the living habitats of all creatures. \n\nActions must be taken as soon as possible to minimize the negative impacts on environment arising from the increasing amount of consumer goods. First, companies should promote the use of eco-friendlier materials. For example, the giant coffee chain Starbucks has recently replaced plastic straws with reusable alternatives made of materials like paper or bamboo. In addition, many governments are also encouraging the development of more sustainable manufacturing processes. For instance, many states in the U.S offer tax breaks and incentives for businesses using renewable energy, and some firms are even allowed to purchase green energy at cheaper prices than traditional fossil fuels. \n\nIn conclusion, there are two main reasons why the environment is severely impacted by the increase in production of consumer goods. To address this issue, governments and companies must join hands to make the production lines more environmentally friendly by switching to greener materials.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, in some ,nations the use of guns has become common. People have different views on keeping weapons at home. While some assert that citizens should be allowed to keep a firearm in their homes, I personally side with those who maintain that this issue is not a good idea.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, some hold the idea that people should be allowed to have a gun in their accommodation because the amount of crime in their society is high. In some ,countries the statistics of robbery are increasing and citizens do not feel safe as well as they have to have a handgun against such crimes for saving themselves and their family from such a potential danger. For example, last week a famous French soccer player was able to use his personal weapon to force some robbers, who had forcibly attacked his house, to run away. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, 2 reasons may well explain why others believe that ordinary men and women should not be permitted to keep a shotgun on their properties. Firstly, many buy a warm firearm with the excuse of protecting themselves but use it for illegal purposes. For instance, since the legalization of weapon ownership, the number of shootings in American schools has multiplied. Another example is that some people hunt animals and birds with these weapons which have caused serious damage to the environment. Secondly, there are many gun-related injuries, or even murders in the worst-case scenario, reported every day due to a lack of enough skills while using or cleaning a handgun. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although some say families must have firearms in their lodging, I strongly feel that to decrease the shooting rates and protection of living creatures, governments should not allow their nations to keep a firearm at home.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Keep Remove Every year books significance literature taken shelves local libraries classrooms And although books contain writing offensive still shaped culture today Along books many movies magazines also taken shelves offensive material Just materials contain offensive content give people right make reach deprive public enjoy So right remove offensive material libraries Absolutely Many people enjoy books magazines movies nature In reality likely hurting library s business anything types materials culture People nt want read s happening animal shelter across street They want read s going hottest trends seasons All removing materials hurt library s popularity amount customers attract Artists write love feel How someone tell author book writing graphic offensive That chose write That expresses writing By frowning upon books magazines songs certain offensive content officials diminish creativity uniqueness authors If certain author artist really great original idea new song book worried carried libraries little offensive obviously author artist going write book song By removing offensive books songs movies public robbed creative imaginitive writing All removal offensive books magazines movies songs harmful public libraries Generations never even hear The uses racial terms So would put situation Keep remove", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many are of the opinion that the primary role of schools is to create good citizens, instead of simply working towards individual betterment. In my opinion, schools should aim to elevate the individual, not impose conformity.\r\n\r\nThose in favour of this statement argue the value of a well-functioning society. As the world develops and there are advances in medicine, safety, working conditions, and so on it is easy to forget that this level of comfort requires sacrifices for the common good. Individuals must work at companies to stimulate the economy and the public must have a basic sense of community in order to live peaceably with one’s neighbours. School is where this education can begin. Teachers can explicitly and implicitly guide students to socially beneficial behaviours and educate them well enough to establish a viable future career.\r\n\r\nHowever, I would argue that focusing on the individual will accomplish the goals detailed above but also be mentally healthier. Students who are taught to share, work well in teams, and develop their talents will contribute to society as a byproduct of pursuing their own seemingly selfish interests. Moreover, there may be times when the focus on society will come at the cost of the mental health of individuals. For instance, students who are taught to withhold their personal viewpoints in school, as is common in many authoritarian nations, may harbour resentment and not feel they can fully express themselves in a free environment. Psychological research has shown that the key to healthy growth is feeling safe to express oneself without fear of reprisals and repercussions.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although there is a valid argument in favour of social stability, schools should aim to produce healthy, industrious individuals. Naturally, these goals are not mutually exclusive and the overlap should be emphasized.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Self-Driving Cars are Amazing, But too Risky\n\nI believe that self-driving cars would be pretty amazing technology. But when it comes down to it, how trustworthy are they? Considering the fact that you're leaving your safety to a computer. What problems could arise? A few problems for a self driving car are that it could have a malfunction, it could cost more too repair, and who do you blame on a crash if it were to happen?\n\nYour car could easily have a malfunction. Maybe the gps could take you to the wrong location and you're in a hurry. Maybe it could not drive how it's supposed to. It could go to the other side or the road or run off the road. A self-driving car could possibly cause crashes. This goes back with leaving your safety, your children's safety, your family's safety with a computer.\n\nA self-driving car could cost more to repair than a normal car. These cars would have to all have built-in gps systems, sensors to know what's around them, and sensors to know if there is something on the windshield. Since normal cars have drivers to manually do all this stuff, it only makes sense for all this to be very expensive. Extra parts that are not in a normal car could cost more to replace since they are not in as high demand.\n\nWho do you blame on a crash if it happens? Nobody will know for sure. Is it the other drivers fault or is it the maufacturer of the self-driving car's fault? These are all major if questions. Also, if you are injured in a crash, who will be around to call the ambulance if you're alone and unable to get to a phone? These cars just seem too dangerous and too risky to trust.\n\nA few problems for a self driving car are that it could have a malfunction, it could cost more too repair, and who do you blame on a crash if it were to happen? The idea seems great, but also scary. I do not believe these cars should be manufactured mostly because of safety issues. there are just too many to be able to trust the car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author tries to explain about how Venus has evolve in the passed couple of years. It also says that Venus would be the Earth's twin only because is the most closest planet from Earth. It also says that Venus' atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater than what we had experience on our own planet Earth. Even NASA is working on studing Venus alot more. They simplified electronics made of silicon, also carbibe has been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus. Huh? are you saying this is kind of boring well no.\n\nit's basaclly about mechanicla parts that can be made more resistant to pressure,heat, and other force. (As it says on paragraph 7) Our government is making as much work as they can becasue that want matters. Wait no venus is what matters because Venus is the next Earth. that's the 13 reason why ;) the government is focasing alot on venus. And I agree we should all agree becasue we are all a nation we breath the same air, evn tho we won't be breathing any air on Venus.\n\nBut things can get better as time goes by. I believe on the planet earth I think we should all appressiate what we have not what we get. because that could make you unhappy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Various technological advancements have been made in past couple decades that have turned the human life around. Many of which have been for the better of humanity. It does not come as a surprise to discover a new software with the ability to read human emotions has been developed. This new software, called thr Facial Action Coding System, utilizes all 44 major muscles in the human face to interpret emotions. Many have argued whether this software is valuable in reading the emotional expressions of students in a classroom. In my opinion, this software would be incredibly valuable in classrooms all around the world. The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom allows teachers to understand how the students feel about their lesson plans, aids the teachers in adjusting how they teach in order to benefit the students' education, and will eventually bring change to school systems for the better.\n\nThe use of this technology will allow teachers to understand how the students feel about their lesson plans. No matter how clever a teacher's lesson plan can be, it all comes down to whether their teaching strategies benefit the students or not. As a teacher, it is difficult to attempt to understand how the students' feel about they way you teach. If this technology became available to teachers, they would be able to gain a better understanding of their students emotions, strengths, and weaknesses. Dr. Huang, proffessor at the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois, argues \"'Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication...So computers need to understand that, too.'\" Just like Dr. Huang explains, the majority of human communication is nonverbal. For this reason, teachers are not aware of how their students are feeling most of the time. If this new software was utilized in a classroom, the program could interpret the students' emotions, therefore producing helpful feedback for the teacher. To sum up, utilizing this form of technology will help teachers better understand how the students feel about their lesson plans.\n\nWhen teachers are aware of how their students feel, their lesson plans and the way they teach will change as an effect. If a certain teaching style shows students are not enjoying the class, the teacher will then adjust his/her lessons in order to better capture their students' attention. When explaining how his technology works, Dr. Huang predicts, \"'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored...Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.'\" Similar to what Dr. Huang describes, I believe being aware of the students' emotions can be extremely helpful in schools and to teachers. Modifying lesson plans can inspire students to stay on task, work hard on the work they are given, and enjoy the learning process. Allowing this new technology to be available in classrooms aids the teachers in adjusting how they teach in order to benefit the students' education.\n\nThis new software could potentially bring new change to whole school systems. If the program finds that a school's learning environment is what is hurting the students' education, new change could come about. Learning how students' truly feel about the school's environment could also result in school officials to feel empathy. Empathy, the ability to feel someone else's emotional state, can happen when we \"unconsciously imitate another person's facial expressions.\" (paragraph 9) School officials could study the muscles involved in creating emotions and then spend time with the students in the school they help run. In other words, school officials would have the ability to feel empathy for the students, therefore bringing forth new change in the school systems. This new technology with the capability to read emotions will eventually bring change to school systems for the better.\n\nTo conclude, the Facial Action Coding System, is a brand new technology that can read the emotional expressions of students. Many have claimed this new software could be potentially utilized to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom. On the other hands, many others believe the ability of this technology is not valuable. In my opinion, this software would be incredibly valuable in classrooms all around the world. The use of this new software allows teachers to understand how the students feel about their lesson plans, aids the teachers in adjusting how they teach in order to benefit the students' education, and will eventually bring change to school systems for the better. Next time you come across a new technological advancements, think about how it will benefit the people around you. If it is something that could be very helpful, support it and help it succeed so positive change can begin to happen.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of fuel gradually has the worst impact on environmental issues. Some people believe that increasing the price of fuel for vehicles can bedecreasing the impact on the natural surroundings in the future. Even though there are people who are declined, in this paper, I will partially agree with this solution.\r\n\r\nIncreasing the price of oil for vehicles can cause harm for society. Especially the impact on the economy. For instance, the cost of commodities and transportation will be as costly as the cost of fuel. The public would have difficulty fulfilling their basic needs and maybe increase the percentage of poverty in the country. However, this phenomenon might be impactful for the middle down society instead of the wealthy community. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, with regards to the price of oil increasing, users of thefuel energy will decrease. Nevertheless, thescientists will then invent thealternative energy to replace theoil. For instance, biogas energy which is made from organic waste and a fuel made from plants or vegetable materials. Those fuels are anenvironmentally friendly and can be accepted by society. In addition, theinventors will be finding energy efficient vehicles in the future. And Tesla is a good example of this, namely Elon Musk designing an electric car charged by energy from electricity or a solar panel.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe this decision will be better for the environment as well as human beings and I wholeheartedly support this argument, even though some people will feel the enormous impact in the first phase. Better solutions are invented to replace the use of oil.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The hiking traffic congestion is a growing concern for many cities nowadays. The main reasons for this includes, decreased use of public transport and a lack of alternative means of travelling or mass transit projects. There are various measures that can prove effective in this regard.\r\n\r\nThe unpopularity of public transportation is one of the main reasons that is causing traffic jams and transportation problems in various metropolitan cities of the world. Either non-availability or substandard public transport encourages public to use their personal vehicles that results in traffic issues, particularly during peak hours. A lack in alternative transportation infrastructure like the underground subways, trams and trains are yet another contributory factor that is proving insufficient for growing population causing a considerable choking of the roads.\r\n\r\nThere are various steps that can be taken at both the government and individual level to fight this growing issue. Firstly, perhaps the most instantaneous results can be sought if the government encourages people to use public transport by making it more comfortable, convenient and cost effective. In other words, if the quality public transportation is made available to the citizens that is parallel to their personal cars in comfort, yet at a lower cost, can encourage people to prefer using public transport. For example, the public in the European countries prefers to use public transport rather than using one of their own because it is equally good and more affordable.\r\n\r\n Secondly, another factor that can be of great value in the long term, is to minimize the traffic congestion is by constructing newer transportation infrastructure. Since cities are expanding due to urbanization, it has resulted in the shrinkage of roads that are not enough to meet the transport requirement of a relatively bigger population. Hence there is a need to build alternate roads, ring roads, subways or rail tracks to divert the influx and avoid traffic jams. For instance, the construction of a new ring road around Lahore, the provincial capital of Punjab, Pakistan has resulted in negligible transport issues that used to be a big problem in the past.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, encouraging public transportation and constructing the alternative transportation methods are the few solutions that can help in solving the growing issue of traffic congestion. It is therefore suggested that the authorities should focus on taking these measures in order to combat the traffic problems effectively.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There was a man who's life was about to change.\n\nThat mans name was Luke Bomberger.\n\nLuke bomberger had a friend who helped him out, sugesting seagoing cowboys to him. That is when it all begin for Luke bomberger.\n\nLukes friend asked him to go to Europe on a cattle boat.\n\nLuke said he could not turn down that opportunity.\n\nIt could start Lukes whole currire just to go to Europe.\n\nIt did start Lukes currire.\n\nIt started him becomeing a seagoing cowboy.\n\nLuke bomberger and his friend road down on the cattle-boat.\n\n\"The cattle-boat trip was unbelievable opportunity for a small town boy,\" he says.\n\nLuke toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China.\n\nIt took a little while to cross the Atlantic Ocean from eastern cost of United States and a month to get to China.\n\nLuke was busey because of the aniamls during the cossing.\n\nThe animals had to be fed two or three times a day.\n\nLuke bomberger found something just by a friend asking him to come with.\n\nDo not let a huge opportunity go down the dran just because you don't want to.\n\nSo what are you going to do when somebody gives you a opportunity.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I always wished I could go back time relive childhood Knowing time I happiest time I living life purpose plans Looking little cousins brother I see joy laughter silliness I see innocent soft faces idea understanding going around As I watch slowly grow unusual habits I find back year A little girl school yet runs grandmother s yard mid day She flops pig tails back forth hiding hands size trousers one eye closed slightly opened watching older sister run around looking place hide CAPS nine eight seven CAPS sister yells behind one giant oak treesI giggle little start CAPS four three two I slow dramatically ONE like rocket I blast front porch arms spread side making engine noises pretended I pilot CAPS lock Mayday mayday CRASH I tackle sister ground I remember look mothers face lay rolling around grass laughing I closed eyes reopened find It days tragic happening Everyone met grandma s house always kids one room adults I playing small ball pit two youngest cousins noticed small hole wall CAPS look demandedI took deep breath asked CAPS I yelled The little hole gave us vision happening room next us held parents old people straight looks serious tones I let little ones look nt find interesting I would nt give another chance see I pushed way All three us looking something small We kept giggling talking We minutes knowing uncle watching us least minutes He motioned adults see One one noticing amount people next room decreasing Soon nt sight CAPS go We panickedLight quite laughing going behind us looked toward looked I looked time turned around saw everyone smiling laughing taking pictures us We stood still red faces soon started pointing fingers gave us crazy idea spying After like day family everyone living room food kitchen warm hugs kisses grandma people pinching cheeks big smiles long loud laughs I see friends shaking hands kids yelling screaming people telling re loved ones I love I look feet blink eye I m back I raise head shoulders see I m grandmas living room babysitting kids I m sixteen year I nt believe one day I nt laugh Of course I ca nt laugh comes seriousness laughing part humoryouth When someone tells joke think funny nt stand say funny laugh Everyone knows take step back laugh I always wished I could go back time relive childhood Knowing time I happiest time I living life purpose plans I desire impress anybody I lived childhood well I think I sit back look everything I done laugh", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Riding in a Car With No Driver!\n\nImagine how cool it would be to be able to get in your car and go to your destination without even having to drive. Sounds crazy doesn't it! Most people would be like \"yes, this is a great idea!\" but they don't take in consideration the dangers of this \"driverless\" car. The car can only do so much but certain human skills are needed while driving. Therefore, the safest way to drive a car is with a human in control at all times.\n\nMost people would question themselves how the car really works. Well the answer is, sensors. According to \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", the driverlesss car has sensors on the left rear wheel, a roating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirrow, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an internal motion sensor. It also has an antilock sensor so the car will be able to know when to break and what not. The driverless car can reach up to 25 mph at the most. These qualities can drive a car but is it really considered a \"safe\" car?\n\nWhat do you do when you reach a point where there are accidents and work zone areas? Of course the car is technologically smart enough to drive itself, but there are certain situations that require human skills to be able to navigate the car. According to the BMW company, the driverless car has \"alerts\" that notifies the driver when to take over. For example, the driver's seat vibrates to notify the driver when the vehicle is backing into an object and flashing lights on the windshield notify a heads-up display. These alerts are somewhat helpful to the driver to let them know when to take over but is it still safe to drive it, be a passenger in the car, or be one of the surrounding cars or pedestrians around the car?\n\nIf the car was really safe wouldn't it be popular now and used everywhere around the world? The traffic law says that the only safe car has a human driver in control and alert of its surroundings at all times. In most states it's illegal to even test computer-driven cars. Imagine you are in a rush to work and are already 10 minutes late. The Driverless Car can only go up to 25 mph. That's not even the speed limit for most streets. Only a human would be able to drive faster and in full control. Let's hypothetically say that one of those driverless cars were to get in an accident. Who's fault would it be? The driver or the manufacturer of the car? Most people would argue that it's the driver's fault for not being cautious but isn't that what the whole point of the car is for? To be able to drive in any circumstances. The driver can't control the car itself, the driver is only there when needed. The safest way to drive a car is with a human in control at all times. Only a human has the skills of knowing its every surrounding and will be cautious enough to know what to do in certain situations.\n\nA driverless car may sound cool and all but it's not the safest way to get around town. There are certain situations that require human skills like knowing how to drive on the interstate, driving around work zone areas, or through accidents. Even busy streets are a big thing! The best way to maintain everyone safe is to have a driver in control of the vehicle at all times. I mean, would you still want to get in a driverless car after knowing what the consequences could be?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the cowboy was in the army and fighted really hard for his country luke had no idea his life was chaging so soon 44 natioins joined the army we sald\n\noverseas world war 2 in\n\neurope the cattle\n\nbaots trip were univaylbled the most of anybody going over cowboys\n\nluke turned 18 before he travled to greece luke has travled nine times over\n\nthe sea being farm cowboy is nothing like water cowboy bc farm cow boy u do nothiuing besides farm water cowboy you travel u go to war u help the whole world u leave your family to go help the whole world and u can go and never come back u never know it could be like that bc farm cowboys just\n\ndrive tractors and feed animals and grow planets and water cowboys is for big boy because u have to go to the army and go to war you have to seal overs seas farm cowboys do nothinfg like water cowboys water cowboys when u are saling overs\n\nseas and somebody can shot you can't run u are in water but if\n\nyou are on land\n\nyou can run as fast as posible and over seas is not good at all trust me.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This writing piece I pacient get fanominall bowl My grandparents picked brother I house go get cold stone I never gone cold stone friends said good So I asked grandparents could go I amped When arrived destination line huge It shaped like snake The sign said NUM minutes waitI disiported I leave I saw The peanut butter It staring right face I I talked grandparents said could stay When finally got front line I orderd peanut butter It time send taste buds vacation It fantastic It smooth I thinking self I glad I pacient envoy amazing That time I pacient go get fanominall bowl", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The society is built upon by the contribution from men and women both. Some would argue that, while shortlisting job aspirants, we should consider their genders first. According to my personal opinion, I could not agree with the idea of proponents as talent and personal traits should be given utmost priority.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, behind the successful completion of jobs, the human brains are solely responsible, no matter whatever sex they belong to. To simplify, to achieve something, only talent and knowledge on that specific matter are needed. For an example, when ISRO successfully sends a spacecraft to the Moon, that will only be possible for a group of researchers and scientists who work day and night irrespective of being male or female. Furthermore, it is even observed that, what some orthodox people consider only as a man's job, that is completed by a woman more efficiently.\r\n\r\nMoreover, some jobs require certain characteristic traits and fierce determination rather than being a boy or a girl. To elaborate, to enter into an organization, often the job seekers are needed to undergo with some exams or trainings and if we make that gender specific, then the competition's standard will decrease and many talented people will not have even an opportunity to prove themselves. For an example, according to a social study conducted by The Oxford University last year, it is proved that in many cases women competitors are more strong willed and determined than her male counterpart and by including every eligible candidates for an exam despite of being male or female, the competition standard will also increase and that can also help to obtain appropriate candiates for a specific job.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, the eligibility of someone should be determined by his or her merit and personality rather than sex. I would suggest, that government should make necessary campaigns to make all kinds of candidates more enthusiastic in applying for new opportunities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinion, I'm against these type of cars. Yes, there are a lot of positives about them, but that doesn't mean they are completely safe and will help humanity.\n\nI can foresee these cars becoming a huge issue. One of those issues I can see happening is that these cars, yeah, they seem safe. Are they really safe though? It seems to me like these cars would get in accidents very easy and could severly hurt someone. Lets say you aren't paying attention to the road, imagine if someone swerves in front of you and its so fast your car doesn't pick up on it. You could end up in a sever accident and possible pass away from lack of paying attention.\n\nAnother issue I have with these cars being produced is that it would take away from tradition. Whats even the point of going through driver's ed when you can have an automatic car that does everything for you? It's a right of passage to get your first car and learn how to drive it. It gives you a sense of accomplishment. I wouldn't feel very proud of myself if my car just drove itself.\n\nThese are my biggest two problems with these cars being made, and I have more. These cars aren't going to help society they would end up simply destroying it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting effects cyclist desert water doesnt know going The old men porch gave wrong directions lost desert The cyclist find power keep moving finds help along way He finds another old man offer directions says map", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A future where I won't have to pay 100 perent of my attention on the road sounds great. One of the reasons are if I have to make important calls, I can talk to the person without having to multi-task. My second reason is that more gas will be saved, saving drivers money. The third reason is the smarter cars would alert drivers in case of emergencies, which I believe is fantastic and significant. I agree with Srgey Brin, saying that such cars would change the world. It would be like living in a movie that has self driven cars, except even better!\n\nIn the future, if smarter cars do take over the world, teenagers would not get in trouble anymore for calling or texting as much as today. One can talk to the person without having to multi-task because a research found that when one does more than one activity at a time, they lose focus to one and put more focus to another. According to the article, the Google cars aren't truly driveless. They alert the driver with complicating traffic issues. That is better than having to pay close attention to the road when you have significant things to do. The car itself alerts the driver, how great is that?\n\nToday, so many drivers, adults and teens, spend a lot of their money on their cars, depending on what kind of car they have. According to the article, the smarter cars would use half the fuel of today's taxis. If the gas of taxis went down, the taxi drivers would charge less, saving people money. For people who cannot afford cars today, they spend quite a lot of money on taxis, especially if they have to go somewhere far. Google has had cars that drive by itself, and they haven't had any crashes so far. The fewer the accident, the more money being saved and who doesn't like saving money?\n\nWIth smarter cards, people do not have to put all of their focus on the road. What's great about the smarter car is that when it arrives at a stop where it faces\n\ntraffic problem, it alerts the driver, according to the article. Many people today pay attention to the road and their phones. If something is about to happen, they do not get alerted. If they get into an accident, it just happens. However with the smarter car, before the accident happens, the driver would be alerted so that they can make a movement. According to the article, lawmkaers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers.\n\nI would not have to put all of my attention on the road. If I have to make important calls, I can without having to hold the steering wheel. With today's gas price, many people's money are spent. With the smarter car, it will save half of the fuel being used today. Being alerted before a tragic happens is awesome. With smarter cars, if the driver is arriving to a working condition road or accidents, the drivers will be safely alerted. Few problems may arise. However, the world is improving in technology and engineering so the issue will be solved. If the world can send a person to the moon, how hard will it be to fix a car issue?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Social media has become a huge part of our lives. Constant evolution has certainly curtailed its drawbacks. Since then we are now able to catch up with our near and dears one's and get current affairs from possibly anywhere across the globe. So, I think the advantages of technology certainly outweigh the disadvantages. Further, this essay will be supporting my views regarding the same. \r\n\r\nMedia has given us the power to know and chat with any person, who may be living far away with just a simple tap. Consequently, this has opened new doors to knowing different kinds of people and understanding their cultures, traditions and many other things about them. This could be beneficial to an individual who is quite reserved to himself, helping overcome fears. For instance, one of my friends, use to chat with this girl, who was living around 500 kilometres away from him. Because of his very nature and hectic work schedule his social group was quite small. So, whenever he had leisure time he spent time chatting with this girl which helped him to become more jolly. \r\n\r\nIn this hustle and bustle work culture, it is really difficult to manage and get the latest news. So, technology finally came to the rescue and now we could get notifications about pretty much anything that's happening in the world. This way we remain in touch with the latest events and trends. For instance, earlier the duration between an event and delivery of the message was nearly 2-3 days, but now this duration is reduced significantly and now we get to have the news almost instantly after the commencement.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, few individuals use media for news events, while others for being in touch with the person. So, the usage of television has certainly proved to be far more fruitful than its disadvantages.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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