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"content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez describes loving family creates appreiative loving homey comforting mood reader The author thanks parents kind loving actions It makes reader feel admiration towards parents author trying create sense appreciation gratitude towards parents In paragraph author explains appreciation parents But reality s way express gratitude spirit generosity impressed early age demonstration Important friends family really The author also trying create comforting mood When explains atmosphere home trying create homey mood Here innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed formed backdrop life warm home CAPS This quote comforting adds homey mood The author also trying create loving mood sense explaining caring acts parents In paragraph author describes generous parents My parents always kept arms door open many people I always grateful parents love sacrifice CAPS This shows generosity parents author trying create loving mood develops grateful comforting caring moodSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Although some people believe that the aim of museums is to entertain people and give them joy, others say that museums should be educational. In my opinion, a museum should be both entertaining and educational.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, it is said that museums should be entertaining. This is because if museums put emphasis on entertainment, many families may be encouraged to spend their free time by going to museums rather than doing a useless activity like watching TV. For example, holding some games in museums can be an effective way to attract visitors, and bring joy to them. However, emphasizing on education can turn museums to a boring place, as a result of which this monotony may put the public off going to exhibitions. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, others hold the view that museums should be educational. Firstly, because these places should broaden visitors’ horizons about their local culture and history. By following this way, it is highly unlikely for a country’s culture and background to be forgotten as museums act as reminder and help visitors to remember the history and customs of their community. For instance, putting some paintings about the ancestors of a country on display can help local people to remember parts of their history. Secondly, since museums are open to the public of all age groups they should take advantage of this opportunity and educate visitors so as to solve many problems. For instance, environmental issues can be addressed if people are taught how to reuse their stuff. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion. I believe that museums should put emphasis on both entertainment and education, in this way while people can enjoy travelling to exhibitions, they can be provided with useful information.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Based on the predictions of old movies, the cars of the future are way overdue. Flying cars should have begun littering the sky years ago. Though cars have not yet progressed enough to fly, they have made amazing progress in other areas. The concept of driverless cars may seem like something one could only imagine, it may soon become a reality. Several car companies are working to produce a car that can drive itself. Judging by the progress that has been made so far, these cars will be safe, feul efficient, and available soon.\n\nDriverless cars have shown to be a lot safer than cars with human drivers. The self-driving cars that Google has made have driven over half a million miles without crashing; however, the law does not yet agree with these vehicles. Very few states so much as allow these cars to be tested within their borders. The fear is understandable; these cars have not been proven to be 100% safe, but no car is 100% safe. Any car with a human driver is automatically in danger, because humans are not always reliable. there are thousands of deaths each year due to people texting while driving, driving under the influence of drugs or alcohol, and falling asleep at the wheel. Even if the driverless car had accidents, it would most likely have much fewer accidents than cars with human drivers would.\n\nThese driverless cars would be fuel efficient. Fuel efficiency is a big concern, partially because of the cost. Although gas prices are lower in this area now, they have gotten up to almost five dollars at times. Paying for gas can get very expensive, and this is due to the decreasing supply of fossil fuels. Since fuel is not something people have been able to cheaply manufacture, the world relies on a source that cannot replenish itself and is thus running low.The driverless cars will use almost half of the fuel of most regular cars. This would cut down on the expense and the pollution caused by fossil fuels.\n\nThese cars are not yet available; however, they will be soon. Since the 1950s, automakers have been working on ways to make a car that does not need a human driver. Many methods have been used, including cables and magnetic tracks. Since modifying the road was too expensive, the idea quickly changed to modifying the cars themselves. Modifying the cars to be able to function without a driver was not an easy task; many different types of sensors had to be placed all over the cars. One of the biggest issues with making cars completely driverless is dealing with issues such as navigating through worksites and accidents. The cars still require humans to take over during those situations. Many different car companies have come up with different ways to alert the driver when a situation arises that the car alone cannot handle.\n\nDriverless cars are no longer limited to one's imagination. Though they require some more work, they have already made outstanding progress. Within years, these cars could be available everywhere. These cars will be safe, feul efficient, and available soon.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Due to the current ever-growing of businesses, living needs and other numerous reasons, people are more and more paying attention to minor details like the past, the history and side stories of the accommodation they are currently living in. The research methods and the causes for this curiosity will be discussed in the following paragraph.\r\n\r\nIn my point of view, superstition is the origin of this inquisitiveness. In some Asia countries, namely, China and Vietnam, the majority of people living in which demand to know as much as possible about the root of the building which they tend to buy or presently settling in because they assume its current location, the previous decoration or its narrative whether is appropriate for the owner. Real estate brokers in Vietnam are the prime examples, they have a wide of knowledge in feng shui, they introduce their products with an attractive speech related to that field like career development, relationship improvement and luck. Instead of complicated and superstitious occasions like oriental persons, the Westerners have a simpler story, they only need some adequate information like the house’s disputation status, future improvement plans from the previous owner and legality.\r\n\r\nAs a matter of fact, there are various approaches to investigate these things. First of all, the easiest method is asking the previous owner or the nearby neighbours directly. In addition, another way to identify the historical background of one object is that we can clarify them throughout the Internet. If there are some doubtful stories that were hidden then I ensure the vital information is available on the Internet.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there is a lot of benefits to inquiring about the history of where we will and are living in order to settle down our lives comfortably. A checked and clear background of one living location is the most fundamental idea and it is encouraged to execute every relocation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Well Im patient Im middle patience waiting juss sitting someon dont like One time I little I patient My mom wants say couple seconds I would say But I got older I patient Like I patient teachers peers parents times I still unpatient side I try get unpatient sometimes juss happens I love someone talk times I cant talk Im unpatient My friends really good first though time dont mom really patient dad maybe get I dont really talk dad though although Im unpatient Im really going funny I lot friends Im outgoing sometimes I get trouble Im outgoing blown side I love talking fun maybe I patient would fun I working patience I think I much better I maybe I get patient I get better school I know I try hardest patience defortment In conclusion I need patience patiuence thing I defiatly workSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I am for the development of these cars because they can change how so many things can be done today in society. The cars could be able to take packages or important items or documents for miles. The driverless cars can be escorts or help people that don't know how to drive get around much faster than they usually do.\n\nThe cars can help get an accurate position in parallel parking so people don't get harmed or damage other vehicles in the process. There can still be some downside to the whole process though,the cars could have a misfunction and go out in the middle of traffic or wreck into another car or pedestrian on the sidewalk. The could stop functioning while delivering something and the receiver will never get what they're supposed to.\n\nMany people would agree and disagree on this concept,but most of them wouldn't experience it for themsleves so they wouldn't know what its capable of. People could stll be in the vehicle while they aren't controlling it,so while that happens,they can be texting,eating,talking,or possibly sleeping. The idea of driverless cars could be horrifying or magnificent if the way you think of it makes it. People will have their own opinions but once they experience it their opinions could change at a moments notice.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The idea of driverless cars sounds pretty amazing right?\n\nDriving in a car and not having to lift a muscle sounds like the life to live. Being rode around all day,not even when you have to pick your kids up from school or practice. Lavish right?\n\n'\n\nNow what if I told you,you had to be alerted when you have to pull in somewhere, dealing with traffic issues,road blocks, pedestrians, and most importantly,pot holes! Nobody want's to be going 60 on the freeway and unexpectedly rise out of there seat's because of a pot hole launched them into the air! Think about all the little animal's thats in the road that won't be avoided due to the \"Driverless car\".\n\n'\n\nHeres another reason driverless cars aren't worth waiting for. Remember how fun driving looked to you as a kid? How you just couldn't wait to get out of the backseat and into the driver seat? Even the passenger seat at that! Now what will we tell our kids when they want to drive,and the streets are filled with driverless car's. It could probably put alot of kids out of the dream job as a NASCAR racer too.\n\n'\n\nTo be real,and completley honest. Driveless cars should just be in \"Television and movies\" like quoted in the second paragraph. They aren't the safest way to travel. There are so many variables that could change in the street that would completley catch the car off guard! I think that we should just keep it to the hands on steering wheel. It maybe old fashioned,but I gurantee you'll miss every pot hole and squirrel without it!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "IN Katherine Paterson I read article newspaper yesterday offensive books library I agree article Some books music movies magazines public libraries offensive normal peopleThere also somw books normal offensive people Everyone views ideas everythingThe people freedom speech true every mouth got something differrent say There books movies children read watch children still child library read watch listen anything You depend librarian people library tooThe librarian probably things like arranging books checking books making library card helping someone find book In point view library diferent sections different kinds movies books magazines person assigned every section This way children would able go older people s section If books found offensive everyone people write letter president help remove books libraryYoursSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft took photos of Mars, as many as they could for their sister ship Viking 2. It spotted a likeness of a human face, it was nearly 2 miles long from a reigon of Mars called Cydonia. The appereance of this supposible face caused a lot of suprise from NASA and common people. Scientists thought nothing of it as a face only a possible Martian mesa. Some thought of this creation on Mars as a face others thought of it just as a landmark on the planet.\n\nThe face got a alot of publicity from the people that thought it was real and also the people who didnt. In my opinion I would like to think of it as a artifact of the other possible beings but I cant bring myself to think that it's real. \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the American West.\" Now I can believe that, even though I often dream of far off places and creatures like the vampires in Lost Boys or the Goblin King I can't bring myself to believe that that is a artifact.\n\nScience most of the time has a solution to what things are while some think it's a thing of signifigance like another race of space people it's not, it's just a rock formation that happened and will happen again. The world endlessly enjoys tricking us with things like this, aliens, vampires, werewolves, sea monsters, and zombies. They are all in the same boat even they don't always seem like they are. The face is a hoax but that doesn't mean aliens don't exist. It means we need to expand our horizons, make our technology better, have brighter imaginations, support those with different yet logical ideas, and find out what the universe and planet hold hidden from us. Some of the best things are things we can't see after all.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Who all is tired of practically falling asleep at the computer during an assignment? Drifting off and on is something children learn early in their childhood due to the endless work on the computers that is supposed to help them read, spell, do math, and a ton more. This is a tough problem everyday people deal with, whether it is at work, school, or even at home doing some type of training. Thankfully, there is now a solution to all of that falling asleep nonsense. Solving this problem can help a large amount of people, that is why there is an intelligent new technology everybody should take advantage of.\n\nThe article, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" by Nick D'Alto talks about a new edition to computers that can read your emotions called FACS. FACS stands for (Facial Action Coding System). This software was invented by a scientist named Thomas Huang, also known as Dr. Huang. The article even explains how the process comes about, \"The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles.\" (D'Alto 3). The text is explaining that there is a coding inside of the computer of a face with no emotion! The face mirrors you and calculates the muscles in your face to tell your emotions!\n\nSay goodbye to falling asleep at your computer! One of the best reasons for this coding software is to help students to not fall asleep in school at the computer. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Says Dr. Huang. This is important because most students find themselves drifting off during an article or a big test. They get done reading the text and don't remember what they read because of the tiring school work they set out to do. The article says, \"' Then it could motify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.' The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive for video games or video surgery. 'Most human communication is nonverble, including emotional communication.' notes Dr. Huang.\" (D'Alto 6). In other words, motifying the lesson can help to make the assignment more interactive and hooking to the student.\n\nIn conclusion, students are finally able to have something that helps them to pay better attention. Using FACS can improve your childs grades, learning environment, and the confidence they have about their school work. FACS will help people all over the world have more productive days.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think features setting affected cyclist terrain Flat road replaced short rolling hills shows warm trobled change terrain He also fells alone I toiled point tumbleweed crossed path also Though ghost town Summer time rattled around dry honeycombs detorating brain felt slowly dying He also though losing sun great impact wiped face make sure seeing mirage But hopes author also wants us hope keep going even though things dont look good keep moving foward never look back alway s positive take advanage surrounding This message author tries giveSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Laughter I ve always one laughs lot It take much effort bust laughing fit topic nt even need funny I m type nervous laugh though I think laugh fits well I quiet like laugh I always get little embarrassed laugh gets louder usual The weather lately cold snow falling I itching good warm swimming weather This past weekend boyfriend I went mountains play deep snow After hours snow headed back mountain go house use hot tubObviously cold fair weather girl wanted go somewhere warm First stopped house could grab swim suite I recently ordered line dying use We left clothes back room ran cold get hot tub back patio The hot water felt good relaxed body ice tense muscles We hot tub forty five minutes noticed hungry Since gotten warmed decided sounded good We jumped hot tub ran back room dry get clothes I gotten dried started put jeans back When I put first leg jeans I feeling I going fall Sure enough I got second leg half way side I lost balance tripped huge exercise machine fell hard butt I started busting laughing along I bit embarrassed least nt hurt bad After I gotten walked around minutes butt started hurt kept making jokes falling even though pretty funny I tried laugh He facing conversation done talking turned towards door leave hit head square exact exercise machine I tripped minutes Instantly I bent laughing I could move I laughing hard It looked like hurt hit head nice red bump eye He nt find nearly funny I walked door Still laughing hysterically I tried follow door hard move laughing much My stomach hurting laughing finally started subside Still little giggle left I walked pickup wait talking dad When I turned around see coming I started laughing seeing walking pick The look face seen laughing priceless I could imagine I looked ridiculous sitting pickup laughing hysterically Laughter one things world free Everybody s laugh unique change due situation There many different laughs person nervous happy giddy If people share laugh bring together Through world laughter universal sign happiness People age race religion share laugh Over laughter great feelingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Transportation have been evolved in the last fifty years, from bullock carts to bicycles to cars and buses. During this period, usage of bicycle is minimised despite the health benefits.In this essay, I will look firstly on the reasons and then highlight how to encourage the usage with appropriate examples.\r\n\r\nTo start with, in most of the countries urban roads remain the same and it is almost congested with private and public vehicles,therefore no space for bicycle riders, also putting cyclist on risk.Recently road and safety NGO released statistics on the road accidents highlighting cyclist is the most vulnerable to hit and run cases.The other reason,per-capita income has increased,influencing layman for choosing two or four wheeler instead of a bicycle. Nowadays, having two or four wheeler is acting as a status symbol,neglecting health benefits by using bicycles.\r\n\r\nTo increase the usage of bicycle, first,separate cyclelane need to create which is well connected with the city centres and other important places with shortest route, away from the main roads.This will give immense security to cyclists.Second,the government initiative is needed where buyers can purchase bicycles on the subsidised rate along with the tax relief.Third, health policies should be interlinked with the usage of the pedal bikes.For example, leading insurance organisation comes with the incentive plans, wherein users can get loyalty points for every kilometre ride by the bicycle but pedal bikes should have a GPS tracker.Fourth, the government should increase the taxes on buying the motorcycles or cars.For example, in Denmark there are heavy taxes on the vehicles which discourage buyers, as a result the preferred mode of commuting through pedal bikes,highest in the world.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, stating the reasons followed by the ways to increase the bicycle usage, people have to understand the benefits and the consequences of sedentary lifestyle.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think the development of the driveless cars are a great idea. These cars will help everyone and everything. I agree with the driverless cars and think they would be a good addition to the technology in this world. If we allow the driverless cars it would help out the ecosystem, save money, and be a lot safer for everyone.\n\nThe driverless cars allow us to drive around without using up a ton of gas. In paragraph 1, they say this car will use half of the fuel we are using now a days. that would help out the ecosystem a lot. It would cause the air to be better. The air now is pollutioned. It is very unhealthy for us. These cars would let us breath in fresh air. The enviornment and ecosystem are things that should matter to everyone. The Earth is a place in which we live on. With the way we are taking care of it now it won't be here for much longer. It's very unsafe for us.\n\nThe cars we are driving now are unsafe too. When you have people fully incontrol of the car, you never know what they are going to do next. People are unpredictable. You could easily make a mistake while you are driving and it could cause you to crash. When you crash there is a chance you will get seriously hurt. With the driveless cars, you won't get into an accident because the are always looking at the road. In paragraph 8, they explain how safe the driveless car can acually be. They can have TV's in the driveless cars but if the driver has to take conrol they will turn the TV off for the time being. When you are fully in control of a car you don't have this option. Some people will drive and text and will get into multiple accidents. This driveless car can be a lot safer for you and a lot safer for other people that are on the road.\n\nHaving driveless cars will also save us a ton of money. People spend so much money year on car insurance, gas, and even fixing up your car from a recent accident. All of that money is now yours if you get a driveless car. If will save not only people money, but the government money too. They won't have to spend so much money on cars and accidents.\n\nDriveless cars are the future. They improve the ecosystem and environment, they keep us safe, and save us money. When you are looking into buying a car those are some of the main things you think about. Driveless cars were created for the society we have created.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "One time I use patience driving It minivan mom dad baby sister NUM months aunt We van hours By time got hotel ocklock time I tired patient Im patient person mom proud great I baby crying stuck one place hours It difficult outcome greatSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" does a good job supporting the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit, despite the dangers. The author uses interesting and good facts/ information regarding this topic.\n\nThe author tells us all the bad stuff about Venus that makes it \"inhospitable\" and says that it would be a very dangerous and risky mission. He tells us that humans can not handle the atmosphere of Venus. He gives us all the bad news and then lightens up and gives us the good news.\n\nIn the exerpt the author informs us that we can make it work if we float above the fray. The excerpt then tells us to imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. A vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. Still, being so far above the surface the conditions are still not easy but they're survivable for humans.\n\nSince we would have to hover over the surface, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else from a distance. But to understand Venus we would have to be up close and personal despite the risks. The author tells us that many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus. NASA is also working on other approaches to studying Venus. They are looking into and testing different technology that can withstand the harshness of Venus's surface.\n\nIn the end the author concludes that \"striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. I think the author did a good job on supporting his claim with good evidence and facts.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The face is not created by aliens because It is just a shadow that forms a human face (eyes,nose,and mouth) It is not a face it just looks like it.it is not created by aliens it is just a shadow from the sun that can make it look like a face.do not be alarmed and think that aliens are taking over the universe it is just a shadow that foms into a face at 41 from the sun degree angle.\n\nWhat the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or a mesa-landforms common around the American Wes.\"It reminds me most of middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,\"\n\nImagine if you were sleeping and you see a shadow in you're hallway and you think it is a ghost or an intruder.it was just a coat rack from your coat it might seem what it is but it really is not a ghost just like this face on Mars it might look like a face but it is really not a face it is just a shadow from a 41 degree angle.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Hot alone water reasons features setting affect cyclist It hot cyclist riding This makes cyclist feel worried getting dehydrated The cyclist alone nothing sight If anything happened one help The cyclist little water conserve order stay active energy With little water hard stay hydrated Hot alone water reasons features setting affect cyclistSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Is the use of a Facial Action Coding System valuable in classroom setting? My argument would claim yes it is and heres why.\n\nThe F.A.C.S is a powerful machine that can make a classroom alot easier to teach if every teacher had one because th classroom could get boring at times but the teacher wouldn't know it was unless they had this tool because at times they are just trying to do their job and dont pay attention enough to know that they are boring the class.\n\nThink about a setting of second grade students they are energized and happy to be at school but you hae to keep there attention or else they might goof around and not learn anything. The first thing a teacher would assume of a child of that age is goofing off is that their a bad child but thats not the case they are just bored and are trying to find something more entertaing to do. The teacher cant just tell that the child is bored though because their young faces cant appear bored their full of energy, but if the teacher had this extraordinary computer in their room they can look at it and say ok i have to make this lesson more exciting instead of telling the parrents of the child because their not going to learn that way they are going to have fun weather you tell them to or not.\n\nlets give one more example though to show this invention is more usefull then just for a class of little kids. look at a high school setting teens wont always show their emotions so you have to figure out on your own and if you cant then your going to have a hard time.\n\nA frustrating class is the worst in highschool and sometimes when half the students get the lesson and half dont you dont know weather to move on or to help the machine can show the teacher that the students are getting frustated and angry so the teacher can eaisly see and say ok less take this lesson slow or turn it into a game because children\n\ncan remember things easier if they associate it with something fun because they will want to do it again.\n\nIn conclusion the Facial Action Coding System is valuable in the classroom because it can give the teacher a little more information on how to teach their class because it will show how the students are feeling as they are teaching the class and if they need to change up the way they teach or not.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Why should technology be able to read emotional expressions? Some people probaley thing it's a good thing others probley don't. With the technology we have today they have been able to figure out how to read emotions on the computer. It's a bad thing because people should be able to open up to you, they shouldn't be afraid that they feel a way that they didn't want you to know, and it's not right.\n\nPeople should be able to open up without a computer telling them how they feel. According to the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", \"According to the facial Feedback Theory of Emooion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them.\" In this quote it shows that it can read your emotions but that some people can't open up, but ones that can might be hiding something. But what if they didn't want them to know and that computer just told them.\n\nAlso, people shouldn't be afraid to open us but with the computes they might be afraid to open up. According to the article,\"Eckman has classified six bacis emotions happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness and then associated each with characteristics movements of the facial muscles.\" In this guote it shows that The computer can tell those emotions but if someone is afraid to show they are sad but the computer can tell you are faking. Then you will have to open up but what is you don't feel safe and that's why you haven't opened up.\n\nFinally, the computers reading your emotions making you open up even if you didn't want to is not right. Yes, if the computer can tell your sad and upset about something and you are not okay that could save you life but you are scared. According to this article, \"For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\" A friend will open up to you don't need a computer to tell you how you feel. What happens if the computer is wrong? Then your family and friend might think you are sad but you really aren't then what happens. The computer can be wrong not everyone is the same.\n\nIt's a bad thing because people should be able to open up to you, they shouldn't be afraid that they feel a way that they didn't want you to know, and it's not right. People don't need a compute to tell people the way they feel and their family. You might not feel safe to open up to a family member but the computer tells them then they know. The computer can be wrong and tell you feel sad but you really don't. Open up to the people you can don't let a computer tell you how you feel.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Al Smith engineers faced many obsticles attempting allow dirigibles dock Empire State Building One obsticle faced dirigibles used hydrogen hydrogen flammable chemical could led Empire State Building burning killing millions Another obsticle faced mother nature In height like ft theire incredible winds blowing someone even unexpected blow dirigible building causing fatal Findly law prohibites dirigible flying low urban areas therefore would illegal building faced many obstacle got end would extremly unsafe go mastSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood created author memoir loving caring heartwarming The memoir loving mood author talks friends family important loved ones In selection said congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed form backdrop life home Also author creates caring mood throughout story parents For example My parents always kept arms door open I always grateful parents The author also creates heartwarming mood memoir said I never forget parents turned simple house home These moods created author memoirSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear imagine world would without computers Our daily lives would dull boring without new technology Computers help society various activities would impossible nt computers They give us ability learn home connect people give source entertainment From reasons lives easy convenient people strive accomplish The ability average person learn greatly increased It gone able go school various ways increase intelligence computer Programs teaches people speak language available computer These programs like going school accesible public To help public ways gain college degrees online Even go school computer still help excel work sources research available computer like web computer great place fun However people still think computers good They claim gaining hand computer gives people website help lose weightThey also say people nt enjoying nature even though ways appreciate computer Lastly stated dont To conclude computers greatly benefit us good New technology good thing keep expanding gaining ability conncet people fun computer helps general public Please think said buy computerSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think use computers good things present day I think people use research stay touch friends family music These things adults kids need like read I explain important My first reason I think computers good thing good source research specific topic Kids use internet class projects Adults use computer look certain food resipe If need help something computer allways Some people even use computer job Computers help lot things Another reason computers big help stay touch friends family A great thing use computer web cam With see talk people lillte camray even far away You also go myspace face book Theare two websites used post pictures talk chosen friend It good way people get know A similar thing instant messaging You use talk friends many line Do nt stop reading thing My last reason computer sutch great thing mutch music computer You use computer listen music put music ipod player Some people use computer make music You get progrem make heats put together make kind song music great thing age groups love That I think haveing computer positive thing You researching say touch friends family lot music There mutch thease thing computer good I nt think world would without computersSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "\"You should give it all you got,\" said my dad when we was fixing a car. After he told me that, i tried my best and put all my effort i had and we got the job done. That's what the scientists should do, give it all they got, even if its too much. But we should focus more on the resources, the twin earth, and life.\n\nIt said that Mars, our closest neighbor, was once like our planet, Earth. But now its all rocky, it has no living resources; the only close thing that we now have is that it has valleys, mountians, and craters. So we would have to bring all our resources and animals to survive until we could find a place to put our plants and animals and grow some more. It shouldn't take long for us to build a greenhouse and put all of our foods and plants and grow more.\n\nIf Mars used to be so similar to Earth at one point, why is it so different now. We could just make suits to live in Mars if that is the only way to survive there.Mars was probably like Earth long time ago when Earth was all volcanic and had no living things, but now it does and Mars doesn't. I think if we live there for awhile, we can probably change things up and make it a living place, without having us wear a suit.\n\nIf we sent astronouts up there and they die, that's not going to be good. NASA won't send people up there and we won'tt be able to find a second home to live if Earth's weather climate keeps changing, making it a little hard for us to survive in these crazy weather. That wouldn't be good for our life. the only way to change the way we are living is if we stop using whatever is hurting Earth.\n\nTherefore, i don't think its a good idea to try and investigate Mars, if the objects we send there don't even last long.So there won't be a chance for us beings to live there a day.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In emtions there are different ways you can tell if a person is happy or sad but you have you ever thought you could be everyone of them at once. I feel like you cant know for certian what people are feeling becasue people only know what they truly feel. There are ways you cant tell for examples by there facial muscles. You can tell the differenece from a real smile or a fake smile. For a guniene smile you will seee that the cheeck bones lift up the corner of your mouth. If its a fake smile your face streaches sideways. You can also tell by taking a test of a computer. You can immaute other peoples emotions. For example if your showing empthly for someone. I feel like a person can feel a lot of different emotions and that may not be the true one but you can try to figure it out by doing these things. It has helped me learn how to figure of people emotions better and especially when you take a pic with them.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The time I patient long ago It day boredom waiting I went candy store buy candy I wanted lorry pop The man told hold getting candy It minutes brought candy I patient enough wait candy There another day like It cernical I end line waiting get ride There man arguing life gaurd instructer letting ride He arguing half hour S patient waiting stop I complane argue man wasting timeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood memoir one greatfulness This auothor Narciso Rodriguez says I always greatful parents love sacrifice In quote saying straigh feels grateful You also tell implying loves parents Another quote supports main idea The author says There way express gratitude In quote like last one author saying directly feels greatful In conlcusion author uses effective techniques trap reader mood greatfulSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In World War 2, I was asked if I wanted to join thew UNRRA to become a seagoing cowboy. I believe that you and others should join because you maybe be helping your country and other countries. Also if you join it will help you in the long run by getting you special offers from other army groups and countries. If you could join would you, why or why not? I really think you should join because it is a really fun experince.\n\nI have multiple reasons why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys of the UNRRA. One reason you should join is that you could sightseeing while you are picking up the animals from the country ar in or on the way to other countries. Another reason you should join this program is when you turn 18 you could join other military services and other projects like this one. The thrid reason is the you get work with animals such as young cows, mules ,and horses. Final reason is that when you ngo from country to counrty you will go relaxz and have fun with your mates and you could final read that book you been wanting to read. Those are my reason why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nAfter all of these reasons would you want join the program. I am telling you it will do you some good later on in your life and you will love going aroundthe wolrd and explore. Oh and did I forget to teel you that you have you do an hourly check on the animals and you get to feed them. After all The trips you will be very grateful for the experince and opportunity to go acroos the world. Lastly You can do so much fun stuff on board after you are return from trips by doing stuff like fencing, boxing, table-ennis matches. and ithers games and activies. JOIN THE SEAGOING COWBOYS PROGRAM!!!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "They NASA have problem becuase they think a face I was find in mars is create by alien people.Thiy face in internet,movies,magazine,and books I want to ask to people a sure is create by aliens becuase they are story people read for he child they alien do piramid o help hilter in second war.\n\nSOCIAL MEDIA people check old her social media why the people check web pages? do you none da is true?are you sure?Is not photochop?why? in this world people think old is true mayor in web pages they are not true.\n\nALIENS to much people think aliens are true\n\nyes are\n\ntrue aliens is base name is area 51,they have aliens one aliens crash in new mexico in old world they are aliens flying is like U.S.A thinking aliens are theorists I going to say something U.S.A have aliens in area 51 and he killing aliens for experiment.\n\nMARS you can life in mars I think is landform becuase have more big volcan in old galaxy is can land form are robots in mars working getting rocks and another things.\n\nCONCLUSION I thing U.S.A is getting peplo a think aliens are bad want to kill peolpe that is not true and yes is landforming is more landforming mars and NASA none are life in mars about is landforming.What aliens want to say to people?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I work better I feel environment I think goes cycling mountain fresh air worries mind cycling become fun like climates easy even fresh air fine trees environment makes feel better cyclist environment plays vital roleSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Luke didnt know what was going to happen after high school graduation. He was working at a grocery store and a bank(part time).His friend invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. He didnt want to say no and he knew this will be an opportunity of a lifetime. He joined the program he wanted to do something together w/ his friend. He wanted to joined the program because he to try something new why he had the chance.\n\nHe signed up to be a Seagoing Cowboy. Being a Seagoing Cowboy,you have to take care of animals such as, horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas. Luke didnt want to just work for a grocery store and a bank, he wanted to do something else like being a Seagoing Cowboy. Would you like to keep working at a grocery store and bank? I wouldn't because, I would want to try the opportunity that is offered and see what will happen.\n\nLuke had to make alot of trips to get to where he was getting to. He made 9 trips. People thought that it was unbelievable opportunity for a smalltown boy. He says that he had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. He thinks the Acropolis in Greece was special. Luke also tuored an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In 1976, Viking 1 snapped a photo of what looked to be a Egyptian Pharaoh. A few days later NASA released the picture to the public. The \"Face on Mars\" became a pop icon. It starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows, and even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years! Some people still believe that the \"Face on Mars\" is the work of aliens. I believe the \"Face on Mars\" is not the work of aliens, but a natural landform.\n\nThe article gives good evidence that the \"Face on Mars\" is just another weird natural landform on Mars. In paragraph 5, conspiracy theorists claim the \"Face on Mars\" is bona fide evidence of life on Mars and evidence that NASA would rather hide. In paragraph 3, NASA unveiled the image for all to see in 1976. The caption noted, \"a huge rock formation...which resembles the shape of a human head...formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" The authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars; which it certainly did just that. The authors of the article wanted to attract attention towards Mars and NASA even claimed that it was a huge rock formation in the caption. Later, stating that shadows gave the huge rock formation the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth. On April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Micheal Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times shaper and clearer than the original Viking photos. The picture taken in April of 1998, would most likely not have shadows to give illusions of the face, nose, and mouth. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing...a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all. NASA again stating and proving that the \"Face on Mars\" was just another out of place natural landform on Mars. On April 8, 2001, a cloudless summer day in Cydonia, Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look. \"We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view,\" said Garvin. \"Marlin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maxium resolution.\" Here again we can see NASA trying to prove that the \"Face on Mars\" in still just a weird natural landform on Mars. Someone who stills believes that the \"Face on Mars\" is the work of aliens might say something like this. The \"Face on Mars\" is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April 1998-a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet. The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face. Perhaps alien markings were by haze, skeptics claim. However, that was back in April of 1998, and the most recent photo taken was back in 2001. The photo taken in April 2001, the weather was perfect-a cloudless summer day in Cydonia. The photo taken that year still looks like a natural landform on Mars.\n\nThe excellent reasons stated above prove yet again that the so called \"Face on Mars\" is just a natural landform. NASA has clearly proven that the \"Face on Mars\" is just another strange landform on Mars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is stated by some people that pushing the learning wheel to the top depends on students' assessment to their instructors, whereas others emphasize that respecting teachers is a priority to the teaching-learning process.I firmly approbate the latter camp.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost,criticising lecturers will lead to various problems such as messy classes and a lack of respect. That is to say, if students do not admire and honour their monitor,they will not be able to learn any subject by them. For example, learners in upper grades can not learn math,science and artificial intteligience at school if the teacher does not have class-mangement or he/she can not make students listen or follow up with the lesson. Thus, accepting rude comments will lead to out-of-control tutition as well as desortation of respectable image of teacher. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, evaluting teachers could be one aspect of teaching ,yet it should be taken as a holistic evaluation containg parts such as: parents,administration and students.Moreover,this evalution should be conducted professionally and without any bias criterian .The most impotant point is to deal with criticisim as a factor to motivalte teacher not as a mean of offense and humilitation. For instance, principles may attend demo-presentation and scofold teachers to overcome any difficulty or deficiency tactfully and kindly as well, focusing on positive features first. Thus the teacher will feel comfortable,consequently,this will lead to more productivity.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The features setting effected cyclist many ways The setting verry hot lot hills The cyclist riding hills day took lot energy saw building thought could help said last burst energy maneuvered hill By saying showed setting contained lot hillsy effected taking energy That setting effected cyclistSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "This essay cenorship libarys well nt alot stuff tv like comedy centreal alot channels music cenorship blanks ruin beats rythem lyrics The cenorship ruins song goes makes people mad like certain song want listen get computer Websites get listen alot Movies nt ethier parents pick didnt want kids watch hear things dont pick tell kids go rooms Books repeat cenorship adults want read That aint fair cause kids Kids smart know read nt read TV shows best thing ever alot shows thats funny awesome thriller alot But gets Here example plays alot good movies since block words parts movie really dont make sense watch parts really haved seen go rent buy To see movie Am right All saying cenorship ruins alot tv shows movies music nobody wants It s ruins enteriment people sad see cause actors music writers writers alot speanded alot time fans work When familys Well end essaySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There are some big conversations and conspiracys. The Face on Mars is one of the many conspiracied theories. Though some say it is an alien landform or a natural land form. Either way I think it is a natural landformation.\n\nPeople many have a strong theory, but it many not always make sence. The Face on Mars is a total natural landformation. NASA's scientist have not found any signs of aliens on the planet Mars. The article states that not many scientists believe that there was an alien artifacts on Mars. Scientists also say that it is hard to track Cydonia and to get a clear image on the face.\n\nThe face has to be a natural landformation because most of the wierd landforms on Earth may look like ancient aliens did it but it was not. Scientists have not proved that aliens are real and that all wierdly amazing artifacts are from them. Aliens are not real although there are shows about them being real, but those are all conspiracies. The conspiracies may look real and sound real but they are just trying to get people's attention to hear them out and to convice them that aliens are real.\n\nScientists say that our minds are tagated to find faces in objects. We see all kinds of shapes in the cloudy skys because our minds are trained to do that. The Face on Mars is just one of the many things that we can find a face in a natural landformation. The article states that the landforms are also common near the American West on Earth. Garvin says \"It reminds me mosr of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. That is a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\"\n\nIn conclusion, there are big conversations about the Face on Mars. Some many think it is an ancient alien formation, but others say it is a natural landformation. Scientist have a hard time tracking down Cydonia and also taking pictures of the face. Aliens have not been proven to be out in outerspace, so therefore it cannot be an alien formation. This Face on Mars is an natural formation because there are similar landformation on Earth near the American West and also in Idaho. Whether it is an alien formation or a natural one I am saying that the Face on Mars is just another natural fanominon.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is reasonable that the mask shown up on Mars' surface is not an alien. In order for a creature to live somewhere it has to be the right environment. As the artice \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" said the creature or \"alien mask \" was very large. Planet Mars is not nearly big enough to have creatures with the head size of a whole mile to fit. Just think your body is much more bigger than your head. A head that steratches two miles ear to ear in a very large head, just imagine how large the body would be!\n\nOver time land can begin to crak or break. Something could have been going on inside Mars' crust ,for instece here on Earth we have earthquakes, that could have happened on Mars. It has been said that it is common for figures to start to appear from a region in Mars called Cydonia. Not all of the figures have the apperace of a human face but dont you think if it were an alien it woukd have looked very differant than a human? It has been scintifictly proven that aleins don't exsist.\n\nFor Things\n\nto apperar on Mars' surface is normal as it was stated in the article \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\". Therefore I do not know what makes people think an alien has just magicaly apperared on the face of Mars. For thousandes of years scientist have invented ways to look at planets, take pictures of them, even get a little sample of the planet. With that being said scientist have checked Mars inside and out up and down and after many years of reaserch and testing they have still never spotted a alien. If the figure would be an alien Mars would'nt\n\nbe fit to provide a home for a whole community of them the planet would be much to small.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I am going to tell you reasons why you should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nOn the other hand I will also tell you why it is important to join the program.\n\nThough it is not like a regular fun camp you go to.\n\nIt is a camp where you help others.\n\nIn the article it said \"It was 1945, World War II was over in Europe, and many countries were left ruins.\"\n\nThe article also said \"To help those countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more, 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA (the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration).\n\nI will now give you reasons why you should participate in this program.\n\nOne reason to join the program is you are able to help so many countries, people, and even soliders that fought in the war.\n\nAnother reason is you don`t just help people you get to see different places.\n\nYou can also tour the city or wherever you are at when you have free time.\n\nAlso one other reason is the program opens up your eyes to many different things.\n\nLuke said \" It opened the world up to him.\"\n\nLuke also said that \" It made him more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\"\n\nAnd those are my reasons why you should join the program.\n\nI hope you choose to join the program.\n\nIf i were you i deffinetaly would join it.\n\nThough I learned something from this.\n\nI learned that it is good to help others.\n\nThe world does not revelve around you.\n\nWell that`s it for now until next time.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think peolpe should got to the Seagoinh Cowbboys camp because It seems like Luke had fun. At first he didn't know after High-School graduation everything was going to change working two jobs at the bank and the grocery-store. When his friend asked him to come along he knew It was a chance to have a little fun, and get away from work. It would probably be a good idea to go to the camp because to have something fun to do once in a while.\n\nIf you went you would probably go and do lots of things you' ve never done before. Like for example when Luke went to the Acropolis in Greece, taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, acity with streets of water. Also he toured a excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal onhis way to China. Maybe you'd want to do something cool like that one day. Plus if your a animal person this should definetly be your thing because the animals would keep you busy sometimes. The animals had to be fed and watered three times a day. Plus Luke also found time to have fun on board (play games) after the animals were unloaded. Games like baseball, volleyball, and boxing It also helped pass the time If you were bored.\n\nThis could be a dream in a lifetime for you to go places you've never been and do things you've done It's not just taking care of animals It's also an adventure.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "This is obvious that playing video games have good and bad effects which I think the pros of children playing video games outweigh the cons. Different aspects are exist in this article.\r\n\r\nFirstly , children are more likely to play computer games instead of sending time with their friends or families . This may lead to variety of problems. For instance , the kids might become anty-socialized by not being in touch with the other people . Furthermore, physical problem should be considered as well . Such as , backache,headache and leg problems. Thus, we can not deny the side effects of playing video games.\r\n\r\nHowever, there are several reasons why i think spending time playin computer games can be beneficial for kids and school children. For example, There are array of different educational games that can be played by younger individuals. Such as, math games, English learning games and so on. Thus, There are benefits in playing some specific categories of computer games.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, With the discussion of pros and cons on previous paragraphs, I agree with the latter and believe that this could play important roll in children development.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Human beings unusual Okay re weird There many people world including way like get others like us nt strange enough still nt like matter likes us Just thinking We always using relationships assist understanding s gamble even relationships Face facts risk much relying others give ability build us break us Our major goals youngsters find people like us I think might even span later times life From experiences I know two key points knowing person build us trust kindness Finding builders traits easy understanding bring joy A person give joy simply kind want whole swarm friends nt exactly best way It s kindness bad way make friends s s fastest method If builder kind course would become friend time order immediately know friend see one make laugh Laughter makes us enjoy time friends s golden rule book book And laughter I made experience class better class extremely stressful Every day either speaking assignment paperwork class really slow Why slow It slow could hardly get one set instructions without group speaking finding way disturb class A good example would one class project As usual instructions slow I boiling point Today seemed different though despite usual annoyance single student asked repeat instructions fact seemed understand immediately started working I followed action The assignment group three four people create script using vocabulary learned supplied booklet took whole class period everyone went home work The next day returned definitely interesting one The teacher kinds strange props lined us apparently going audience act script job read loud My group first entertain finally selected volunteers actors Tiffany I sat back classroom ready read script sure actors would deliver Our play success By end first sentence everyone giggling As moved next play laughter grew louder Students really enjoying people volunteered preform difficult choose actors Even I classroomsnob enjoying The plays fun random play would send everyone hysterics I easily remember one groups making laugh hard sides aching tears lined lids almost impossible breathe This project definitely best one I ever participated It s moments like build strong unity classroom enjoyed people around us enjoyed I use angery classmates I taken suprise one day Enjoying plays much I look entertaining group students rather annoyance I seen No longer people strangers hallway family It really amazing something simple laughter change ones outlook othersSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "By the present, there have been many concerns about the environment negatively affected to by human activities, and one of them is the consumer goods manufacturing. It is essential to argue how this manufacturing has negative impact to the environment and what should be done to restrict this impact. \n\nTo begin with, consumer goods companies are responsible for the pollution. They try their best to reduce expenses to maximize profits. Because dealing with production waste is extravagant for many companies, they decide to skip this activity and emit them into the environment. There are many consequences of this decision to the environment. The majority of companies use fossil fuels as the main energy source and several toxic gases such as carbon dioxide, nitrogen oxide and sulfur dioxide are emitted into the air. Because of them, air quality can decrease, impacting to photosynthesis of plants and respiration of animals. In addition, many studies indicate that the three aforementioned gases are the main cause of greenhouse effect, resulting in global warming and climate change. Another concerning consequence is the gases can result in acid rain, destroying many species in nature. As regard to water, it can be affected by liquid waste from factories, including wastewater, sludge, oil and grease. Water species can die due to these pollutants or have to migrate to other habitats. To reduce these consequences, government should impose taxation on contaminating activities of companies and taxes should be as high as possible. By this way, factories have to consider whether not dealing with waste is still beneficial for them. If companies keep this behavior, they can face strict tax punishments, which can make their products exorbitant and affect to their profit.\n\nHowever, companies are not the only factor of environmental problems. Consumers are also the accomplice in the matter. Nowadays, there is a tendency among them that they use disposable goods instead of durable goods. For instance, customers are more likely to use plastic-wrapped paper cups, not conventional plastic, glass or porcelain mugs just because they want to use once only and then throw into trash bins. The trend is also apparent in using plates, people prefer the plastic-wrapped paper, not the typical plastic or the porcelain. Consequently, landfills will have to receive a great amount of garbage of disposable goods. The problem is the majority of these goods are made of materials which are usually difficult to decompose in short periods and toxic when incinerated. Therefore, people are likely to keep garbage in landfills. It is certain that land can get contaminated due to the consumption behavior of modern society. To restrict land pollution, government should impose taxes on disposable goods. Due to taxation, these goods’ costs increase and consumers are more likely to restrict using them. By this solution, the amount of waste from disposable goods can decline. \n\nIn conclusion, the production of consumer goods impacts to the natural environment through companies, by waste, and customers, by using disposable goods. To reduce these negative effects, governments should impose taxes on waste and disposable goods. Due to taxation, companies and consumers have to think again about the possible benefits and losses they have, indirectly reducing their influence on the environment.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Luke Bomberger, a member of the Seagoing Cowboys program, had a fun time while helping locations in ruins after wars. Luke got to have an amazing time helping people in need. The benefits of joining the Seagoing Cowboys program include helping other countries in need, a lot of free time with amazing experiences, and meeting new people that he worked with and the people that he helped recover. First, I will talk about how becoming a Seagoing Cowboy would not only benefit you but also benefit other people in countries that had been damaged from the wars.\n\nThe main reason Luke had joined the Seagoing Cowboys program was to help other people that lived in countries that had been involved in the wars. Luke joined the program to help them recover and Luke had said \"It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\" Luke had been talking about the Seagoing Cowboys program. Luke's family also hosted many international students and exchange visitors for many years. Luke learned about the current situation in other countries while on the trip while he was helping other people at the same. Secondly, I will talk about how Luke got a lot of free time and got to go to many places such as Greece.\n\nThe rides were not quick because the Seagoing Cowboys had to cross oceans. It took two weeks to a month to get to their desired destination. Luke was often kept busy with the animals to care for but when they were returning, he got a lot of time that he could spend with the other people on board or visit locations. Luke got to see the Acropolis in Greece, ride a gondola in Italy, tour a castle in Crete, and visit the Panama Canal in China. Luke also often did activities with the other men on board such as play sports in the space they had after unloading the animals. Luke was grateful for the opportunity of becoming a Seagoing Cowboy. Next, I will talk about how Luke got to meet new people.\n\nLuke had just been invited by his friend, Don Reist, to go on a cattle ship so he didn't know many people on the ship. Luke got to meet the other Seagoing Cowboys during the acitivities onboard the cattle ship. Luke also got to meet new people in the locations he visited. Luke got to travel the world and meet new people from different places. It exposed Luke to the needs of countries and that was one thing Luke learned while being a Seagoing Cowboy. Finally, I will discuss why it would be a good idea to become a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nBecoming a Seagoing Cowboy had been hard work but it also had many benefits. Luke not only helped others but learned something about other people in other countries. Luke had many benefits from joining the program such as helping other people in different countries, having a fun time with other people, and meeting new people. in conclusion, becoming a Seagoing Cowboy could benefit anybody.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "This article show us many emotions that each person have, and how our face expressed emotions by any situation. Also explain the most common emotions that each person used more, they are happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear and sadness. One example of this article is the art of Leonardo da Vinci's \"Mona Lisa\" that explain the Mona Lisa have many emotions this is comproved by a software that show the Mona Lisa has some differents emotions. Scientifics of the University os Illinois. They are working in collaboration with another scientifics and anothers Universitys about if we can calculate emotions and all this process begin about muscles. Movement of body and movement of all the muscles this means that we are sad or happy or actually fear we can note or show to someone else. IN this article the example the how we can calculate our emotions is about the face's muscles if you are suprised the most common movement is raises your eyebrows or a smile when you are happy or also tightens your lips when you are angry. We have a lot of expresions that helps us how we feel or how exprese our emotions. This is important because we should know each person it is different and show how many people expresed their emotions by differents ways.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Facial Action Coding System should be used in the classroom. It could be a valuable piece of technology. Students do not oftenly get to use new technology and this would be a great thing to use in the classroom. This system could be very helpful in the fine arts, science, and math classes.\n\nScience classes could use FACS(Facial Action Coding System). Teachers could create lab experiments using FACS. This could be highly educational and exciting for the students. Even medical students could use the system. This technology can make computer faces more expressive for video surgery which would help the students. It would make the surgery more realistic. Science could definitely benefit by implementing this.\n\nAnother area of study that would gain from using FACS is mathematics. Students would be tasked with calculatating the percentages of emotions in paintings, movies, and even calcuate the emotions of each other. In FACS, the system recognizes happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. Students could be tasked with calculating how much of an emotion there is. This can be a fun way to calculate statistics and could be very interesting.\n\nThe area of study that would benefit the most from this is the fine arts. If a student was trying to convey an emotion in a painting, they could use FACS to give them a picture of what the face would look like. Plays could also use this technology. For example a drama coach named Constantin Stanislavsky had his actors reproduce smiling and frowning as a way of creating those emotions on stage. This could technology could be vital to the future generation of actors who could recreate more realistic emotions. Facial Action Coding System could be so valuable to acting in the future.\n\nFacial Action Coding System could actually be valuable in every area of school. A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming bored or confused, so it could change the lesson to better suit that student. FACS is a great piece of technology and should be used in classrooms for students to enjoy.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "one reason i think that the face is just natural landform is because it says that viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet snapping photos of possible landing sites for its sister ship. viking 2, when it spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face. scientists figured it was just another martain mesa, common enought around cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like and egyptaian pharaoh.\n\nIn the article it says that The \"Face on Mars\" has become a pop icon. The face icon statted in a hollywood film appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years! Most people belive that face was an alien artifact, photographing cydonia became a priority for NASA when mars global surveyor (MGS)arrived in red planet sept. 1997.\n\nThe face on Mars is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April. Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 viking photo. So if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or egyptian style pyramids or even small shacks you could see what they were!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Throughout riders long journey setting greatly affected For example hot weather caused drink majority water suply making dehydrated tired If weather cool would lasted much longerSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "People have widely different views on whether the news has no connection to our daily life and sometimes people would lose track of time when they read the newspaper or watch the news program. Personally, I completely disagree with this statement because the advantages of news as well as newspapers bring countless benefits for people.\r\n\r\nIt is true that news is a better source for people to keep abreast of the latest information both local and overseas. As the proliferation of technological devices and the advancement of satellites, which facilitates the public to keep up with the hot debate with high speed and precision. In addition, another reason is that people can acquire knowledge from the news. For example, in Vietnam the news programs broadcasted on TV channels are an indispensable part of Vietnamese daily life. This not only allows people to have a deeper insight into the national economy but also they can seize information about Covid-19 around the world. As a result, with vivid pictures along with the figure for the pandemic, people would seem to be aware of how dangerous the disease and they should protect themselves to prevent it from occurring.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, news connects people closer to the community. When they have profound knowledge about the news they can make new friends based on having things in common like sports-minded, business-minded, which strengthens relationships in their neighbourhoods. This phenomenon also could lead to drive society modifications, and more interaction between humans.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe that news is integral to advanced life so that we should not marginalize it. Although social media networking sites sometimes cover mostly bad news, I predict in the future news will be taken into account before publishing so as to most people enable to access mainstream information.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You may think that the Face on Mars was created by aliens. That is not true. The Face is just a natural ladform. There is a lot of evidence to support my argument. Like it is simply just a mesa, the photo Malin took, and there are many similar landforms around the American West. Certainly it wasn't created by aliens!\n\nIt is just a mesa. First, Martian mesas were common. They were very common around Cydonia as said in the article. Second, it did look like a face. That is because of the unusual shadows that formed to look kind of like an Egyptian Pharaoh. Third, it gives an illusion. The illusion is of eyes, a nose, and a mouth. These are the reasons that shows that the Face is a Martian mesa.\n\nMichael Malin's photo shows that it is a landform. First, Malin's photo was taken ten times sharper. It lets it have a more clear image. Second, people think that the alien markings were hidden by haze. Though on the second picture it still doesn't show any sign of alien markings. Third, on April 8, 2001 another photo was taken. That day it was a cloudless summer day. Malin's tame captured a fantastic photo. It still didn't show that the Face was created by aliens. The photos that Malin and his team took were very useful.\n\nIt is similar to the world in a way. Using photos of the Face they would be able to see if there was any sign of life. Like small homes, or shacks. Second, it is defenitly equivalent to a butte or mesa. There is so much information to prove that. Third, it has landforms in common around the American West. Gavin stated 'It remids me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. It is similar in a way to America.\n\nNow you know the reasons why the Face on Mars was not created by aliens. There is so mush evidence to prove it. Like my examples which are it is actually a mesa, Michael's photo shows no signs of aliens markings or their homes, and the Face is similar to some landforms in the American West. There is a lot more evidence to prove that the Face on Mars is not a creation by aliens, but a normal Martian landform.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted many obstacles builders stumble across Many people would hard time creating docs dirigibles Empire State Building One major obstacle builders The one obstacle expanded use New York City lack suitable landing area Another obstacle could come across dirigibles could take long fuel could cause jam dirigibles Even though huge obstacle managed get way found way actually use dirigibles without types problemsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the article the author writes about the possiblity of the exploration of Venus and how it can contribute to scientific studies. He uses many detail from reliable sources like the National Aeronautics and Space Administration for example. The author seems like a very reliable source to listen to about the exploration of venus.\n\nThe author explains to us the danger of Venus exploration by talking about the tempature,atmospheric pressure, constant storms and volcanos. The author then explains to us the readers NASA plans of sending a blimp like vehicle that can fly over Venus without the threat of ground conditions of the planet. He tells us the benefits of such a expedition like it would further understanding of the planet that we dont know much about.\n\nIn conclusion of all the danger the author tells us that it is possible to explore from a distance even though it will be difficult and challenging it possible and he shows us exploring Venus could be very valuable to the human race and could contribute to further space exploration.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Some individuals argue that addressing with global warming is not effective way.They recommend that it would be better if we look for new methods to live with this situation.I completely disagree with this statement.\n\nFirst and foremost,climate changing is not inevitable.We can tackle with this concern.It is true that we have a lot of opportunities in order to alleviate it.If we do not combat,we will confront with several problems in immidiate future.As temperature rises,glaciers will also melt in Antractica.Consequently,sea and ocean level iwth increase,in turn,several cities will be like this.That is why everyone should know the responsibility with regard to the climate changing.\n\nFurhtermore,it is also irrefutable that altering in temperature affects people negatively.The hottest countries such as Saudi Arabia and Qatar will have more unbearable heat weather conditions.Human organism adaptation process to high and low temperatures will cause diseases.Moreover,engineering field will suffer more hot boiling weather conditions.This is due to the majority equipments were produced according to the certain specifications.They are unable to work under 60 or 70 degree celcius.Therefore,as long as we have chance to compete global warming,we should not surrender.\n\nTo conclude,although some people have argument to find way in order to live with climate,I entirely disagree with this notion because of the above-mentioned reasons.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The idea of driverless cars have been around for decades. It seemed so impossible in the past without the technology that we have today. Google and other corporations have developed computerized cars that needs little to no driver to operate it.The smart car can steer, accelerate, and brake itself. The human drivers within the cars don't have to be as alert with the smart car than the traditional car.\n\nThe smart car only needs assistance navigating when there's road work or accidents ahead. The car will notify the driver of the obstacles ahead, but if the driver doesn't take notice quick enough there could be serious injuries. Driving laws are made by lawmakers who know that safety is achieved by alert drivers. In most states, computer-driven cars are illegal. Lawmakers believe that smart cars are a hazard because the human driver isn't very alert, which could cause accidents. Though there are many positive aspects of \"driverless\" cars, there are too many negative ones that go against the driving laws.\n\nSafety is a big concern for the \"driverless\" cars. Law makers believe that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. The smart car won't be completely legal until the car can operate itself and avoid hazards as if it has a human operating it. The corporations have yet to develop this car yet, so it is a hazard. One day in the future, maybe cars will be completely autonomous and self driven.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "the aurtor gives a strong reson why we should study venus dispite the dangers if venius. by giving the resons why studing venus will give us a more knowladge of how the world works, and how it will helps us with scientific advancements that are made for the need of using towads studing venus and with thoese advancements will help us learn more about earth itself. As he states in his writing that NASA\n\nis using electronics made from silicon carbide in a chamber simulatng the chaos of venus's surface and he talked about the envision of a computer that made calculations by useing gears and leavels and do not use electronics at all.\n\nso do to the tech they would develope do to needing to help them study venus's surface. would infact help us advance in science as well as technology. which gives us more of an understandment of how the world works.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Think of a clear world, no smog, no pollution, just a beautiful day everyday. Now wouldn't that be nice. What if I told you that you can make it happen? It's as easy as snapping your fingers. This thing you have to do is, drum roll please..... not using your car. I know it sounds crazy right now but let me tell you about all the good that comes out of it, and maybe, just maybe you'll change your mind.\n\nNow as most of you know there is alot of pollution all over Earth, and this pollution is caused by alot of things, but the two main reasons are cars and power plants. Pollution caused by cars affects alot of things including greenhouses. When smoke from a car reaches a greenhouse it produces a gas that negativly affects the enviroment. Your probably thinking that it's no big deal because \"theres not alot of greenhouses\", but that's where your wrong. As Elisabeth Rosaenthal says \" Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States\".\n\nAnother thing that is caused by cars is smog. Robert Duffer, the writer of\n\nParis bans driving due to smog , wrote that \" Paris typically has more smog than other European capital ...[Last] week Paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter (PM) per cubic meter compared with 114 in Brussels and 79.7 in London, Reuters found\". Congestion in France was down 60 percent after almost a week of intensifying smog. They had to stop using cars of course, but it was the only way to get the smog to go down.\n\nNow that we've talked about the bad stuff caused by cars, let's talk about the good that can come out of not using a car as much or not at all. alot of people who participate in not using a car, weather it was for a day or for forever, have said that it reduces alot of stress and air pollution. Lower air pollution makes for more clean and clear air. Which means you get to see the day better than before, and who wouldn't want that. Overall it not only helps you, but it also helps the planet you live on, so give walking a try, you might even find seeing nature around you better than driving by it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "\"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" is a passage about how Venus is the twin of earth. The second planet from the sun but yet the most hottest one of all.The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents becuase it shows us that Venus is important even though its a dangerous place.\n\nThe author's idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit, because Venus is referred to as our Earth's twin. In paragraph 2 it states \"Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too.\" Thus saying that we should learn more about this planet and how Venus functions. It states \"Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel.\" This quote demonstrates how Venus can be a place we live on which the author meant by worthy pursuit.\n\nVenus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it present according to the author. In paragraph 3 it says \"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\" This means that our \"twin\" planet, Venus is way hotter than what we are used too. When the author suggests despite the dangers that means that even though Venus looks like its impossible for man kind to live there is a way and we have to not be worried.\n\nThe reason why the author suggest these things is becuase Venus has similar features to Earth. In paragraph 4 \"The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. This goes to show that Venus isn't that far away from dangerous. Studying Venus can't be so hard. In paragraph 7 it states \"Solar power would be plentiful, and radation would not exceed Earth levels.\" This is showing us that we can learn more about Venus as in some parts does not succeed Earth in like air pressure although it is close.\n\nTo wrap this up, the journey to study Venus as the author suggests will be hard, but its the way you got there. Life is not for eternity we have to grow and push the limits. We can not be scared of dangers but improve on them so when we fall, we get back up and build up till the peek of the sky and pass any limts that stop us even if it's Venus thats what the author suggests in this passage.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Facial action coding system\n\nFacial coding symstems cant find out what every body feeling are because people can fake them. It states in the text \"we could find out what someone feeling are just by looking at the in there face expression\". It aslo state in the text \"we human can perform this same cauculation everyday\". Sceince trying to prove people emotions but us humans can figure that out our self. The facil code can only tell how you feeling by smiling and making faces humans can tell faster if a person is fake smiing or real smiling then what the computer can. Facial code can only detect some feeling like happy, suprised, angry, digusted, fear, and sadness. Think about it sceince is great and improving but so are humans we geting smarter. Imagine this you need a computer to find out some one else emotions. Humans can figure this out our self. Facial coding can only find out certian emotions not all we can find out more emotions then what a computer can, and we know more emotions then what the computer can read. If the facial code work think about how expensive this computer cost we will have to pay to figure out people emotions when we see them and look at them everyday. With computer it states in the text \"most human communication is nonverbal including emotional communication so computer need to under stand that too notes Dr Haung\". It also states you can probably tell how a freind is simply by looking her in the face. With that imformation we dont really need facial coding system to tell how we feeling. Imagine if these computers worked If it did people would be using but not everybody could afford to get those computers. Humans are smart who ever thought of facial coding sytem need more facts, because people can tell how you feel in a matter of seconds when they look at you. Facial code can be a waste of time and money you can just figure it out your self without a computer. Think about this aslo humans can found out more felling then a computer. A person can just tell you a computer cant you have to make faces and a machines have to read them when you can just tell a person how you feel.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Today many people believe that the facts about the history of the building they live in are interesting. As far as I am concerned there are many reasons that somebody may be concerned about this issue one of which can be curiosity and the way that people can research these facts maybe by asking the neighbours or through city counselling offices.\r\n\r\nThere are many reasons which can make history seem appealing to people one of which is the sense of adventure it may hold. In the past humans everywhere tended to look for exploration in different areas of their lives. This awakens a strong curiosity over the matters that can be hidden or are less obvious. On this occasion, the secrets of previous homeowners which you are purchasing or living in are an enigma and may interest anyone. Another reason might be the effect that some people may believe that the past of a place might have in mental ways which may be mostly presented by horror movies. For example, a simple joyful backstory seems to change the way people purchase properties for years in real estate businesses.\r\n\r\nBut how can people reach appropriate results while they are exploring is mostly based on the platforms that are trusted and supervised by the governments like the city council offices or other organizations. Local people also may be able to answer questions about the past of the building and also landlords who held the ownership for years.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, many people are driven by their sense of exploration into the background of their homes, this may be caused by their sense of curiosity or maybe the influence of media or movies, nonetheless, they can be led to the knowledge of the past by the city information centres that are supervised by the governments in any location.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The authors claim is telling us about the chances for people to get to Venus, but at a 50% chance of survival depending on time and when. He claims about how amazing it is to strive for the challenge to get to Venus and study it up close. But the risks can be too much and might lead to many people that try to get to Venus dying. The author states, \"However, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and video ineffective. More importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance. Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks.\" This proves that knowing the risks of people possibly dying, they're going to find a way to get to land on Venus. Knowning that so far they have to be at a distance from the surface, they can't stay there that long because of heat conditions, radiation, and they cannot collect anything to test on, not one little piece of rock. Although, it would be an amazing challenge to accomplish in scientific history and trying to study it closer than what we already got to. So, despite with all of the dangers and risks they would face, it would be amazing to finally complete the challenge and have peopel land on Venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Why We Shouldn't Use FACS Technology in Classroom\n\nFACS technology shouldn't be used in classrooms, and there are several good reasons as to why. Some of the things that people value the most are their money, a good education, and privacy. Implementing FACS technology can disrupt all of these things that people value.\n\nFirst of all, the author of this article, Nick D'Alto, never even mentions the cost of this technology. Seeing as this technology isn't even fully developed yet, it would presumably cost millions of dollars in research to even get a fully developed working product. When new technology comes out, it is usually more expensive then anything else on the market. A school is the last place that should be using its resources for an emotion reading system. Most schools are lacking funding and resources, which is leading to cuts in many music and athletic departments. Another pretty well known fact is that schools spend less money on cafeteria food then JAILS do. If a school is getting additonal funding these are the types of things that they should be spending it on, not useless emotion readers.\n\nThis goes into the second reason, which is effectiveness and practicality. How do we know that what this computer is saying is actually correct. Sometimes, there are some things that advanced technology just cannot solve. A computer may sense a sad or confused look on a student's face, but that doesn't necessarily tell you WHY they are sad or confused. Dr. Huang from the article says that based off of the look on your face, the computer could modify the lesson. First of all, if a teacher is teaching a lesson, it probably wouldn't want a computer modifying what he or she wants to do. A teacher shouldn't modify the whole lesson for the entire class, just because someone has a certain look on their face, for reasons that may not even be school related. Modifying a lesson for students who aren't even struggling could potentiall ruin the way they learn, and how quickly and effectively they learn and understand concepts. If a teacher senses that a certain student is confused or not paying attention, they could always talk to them after class and fix the problem, which is a much more effecient and effective way of doing it.\n\nA third reason that this FACS technology shouldn't be implented is for privacy. While the author does list some useful applications for this technology, such as surgeries and video games, common computers for everday use is not where it should be used. One reason that people fear this advanced technology in their own computers is for privacy. Many students probably don't want a camera in their school laptops constantly scanning their faces to see what kind of emotions they have. Many students would see that as creepy and intrusive, and would probably complain to the adminstration to remove it.\n\nPeople value many things in life, but some of the most important are their money, a good education, and and their privacy. Having this FACS technology in schools can ruin all of these things, which is why using this technology in a classroom is not valuable.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In my opinion im against driverless cars because not everyone is a bad driver , some people woud like to drive there own cars without anybody help or maybe people are causios of what they are doing . Driverless cars could be a good help but then again not everybody needs one . Some might like the driverless car and soe might not because what if the car your in messes up and spins out of control or crashes into something or someone . Then the person in the car wouldnt know what to do or how to react , driverless cars could be a positive thing and a negative like if someone was in a hurry and they needed to fix there hair or clothes while driving the car would come in handy or like i said if the car spins out of control or something , i dont think most people would like the driverless car if you ask me . Driverless cars might even cause more accidents not all cars work the same and one car might fail and cause a accident or someone getting hurt or even killed because of tecnology . i dont think all cars should be driverless some people might like to drive themselvs at there own pace and there own speed .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "As along bike ride city isnt grueling enough author story much worse First climate recipe disaster High deserts California June clearly debilitating factor direct sunlight humidity If cyclist proper gean could hurt three factors Secondly Flat road replaced short rolling hills endurance tested going tolerance energy power climb individual hill Most importantly lack water bottles characteristics harmful Within desert water found nowhere In hot weather water bottles turn warm sunlight water could even evaporate To seems like setting weather perfect combination much harm goodSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Using drivless cars in the future would not a good thing because, it is pointless to have a car that drives itself but still needs the assiant of the driver when the road gets compilcated, and it is a safety issue.\n\nIn paragraph seven it says, \"The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel. In fact, none of the cars developed so far are completely driverless. They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires. This necessitates the car being ready to quickly get the driver's attention whenever a problem occurs.\" With this being said the driverless cars are practicually usueless because there is no need for them to be driverless if the driver still needs to be alert and aware when to take over.\n\nParagraph eight reads, \"We have ti interpret the driving fun in a new way.\" \"Some manufacturers hope to do that by bringing in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays. Such displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over-something not available to drivers trying to text with a cell phone. In this way, the in-car system is actually a safety feautire, and safety is a big concern.\" This means that if the driver is disctracted and the neccasry warning senesors where to be turned off, the driver can end up a terrible accident.\n\nThere for having driveless cars may come with postive perk but the nagitve perks do out top the postive.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Real life rated pretend s If library feels book graphic movie violent music agressive choice remove It true s pointless try censor lives kids teenagersExplicit content around media literature The never ending game shielding generations teenagers children already finished In point time main focus alot movies music books something violent agressive inapproiate explicit The idea removing things library shelves pointless The always violence crime todays world along excessive swares cuss words around It s exceptable parents nt want children reading watching listening something nt would nt approve even kids protected home world sometimes parents wont Libraries public places percent audience would upset frusterated angr books music movies liked longer avalable due cencorship It seem viewing reading listening something violent explicit would effect listener On streets school park places children teens exposed type explicit language attempting cencor reading viewing matterial pointless In experence I grown around people grown listening violent music watching graphic movies explicit material effected I saw first rated movie nine parents give thier kids somewhat age one point trying cencor anything waste time With schools teaching students positives abstinent sexual deseases students likely refrain despite see movies read listen Any child exposed internet could subject kinds inapproite material explicit canotent bad language cuss words disturbing images Real life rated pretend s Trying block explicity violence world endless battle Certain things go line others renactments previews whats really going worldWhy would hinder real world away children teenagers Movies rating music explicit content label people know whats approiate The first sware word child hears probably wasnt song movie probably somewhere real worldSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author of this article uses many valid points and reasonings to support their idea. They refer to Earth and it's compatability to Venus a lot. They also use reasoning about Venus's temperatures and conditions. Although the author uses many disclaimers throughout the article, they still make good claims that studying Venus is worthy, despite the dangers.\n\nIn the second paragraph, the author states \"...Often referred to as Earth's twin, Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too.\". They are insuring that a helpful reason to research this planet would be because it is similar to earth, and a relative distance away. The author also states that \"Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\". This shows the readers that Venus is worth studying because there may have been life on this planet. Therefore, NASA needs to send researchers to Venus to identify if there is life or not. The author gives another example by referencing Earth-like features to show that thesremay be some form of life or a way of nature, these references include Venus having mountains, valleys, and craters. This validates the authors point well.\n\nThe author also gives ideas on how to help make a possible trip to Venus easier and less dangerous. They talk about using a bump-like vehicle that orbits or hovers about 30 miles above the surface. This vehicle has benefits, and also gives disclaimers. Some benefits would include astronauts being able to explore the land easier, avoiding the \"unfriendly\" ground, and keeping good air pressure. the text states \"however, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safey far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, redndering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective.\" This shows as a disclaimer to give unbiased proof ofnegative effects.\n\nThis article is full of evidence to support the authors idea of studying Venus. The author referred to Earth, recommended ideas, and a technology project used with old computers to support their claim. In conclusion, this article had very well put-together evidence, and proves a point that Venus should be studied despite the dangers.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "All us think book hope none children children taken shelf But I right remove book shelf work I abhor also exactly yhe right everyone else And books left shelf us states Katherine Paterson Books movies world censored removed libraries day day due explicit content I believe books movies magazines removed shelf genuine purpose Explicit objects censored human judgement children s parents right exclude material child s life material useful life someone learn Children everywhere influenced books magazines movies even songs Some people argue harmful materials affecting kids behave act I however believe child superb morals values know right wrong For example child happens see pornography magazine lingering shelf local grocerey store know matter temping buying pornography magazine would wrong From birth parents constantly teaching children right wrong They attempt teach children basics drugs alcohol smoking corrupt health nt matter child sees someone drugs movie hears song teenager getting drunk They influenced using logic infer read listened nt always right thing Everyday children s parents right exclude harmful material child s life After superior figure child s life child always look lead way At local theaters seventeen see rated CAPS movie A lot theaters allow child view rated CAPS movie matter age long parent gardian present Movie theaters feel child s parent would help immensly parent choosing child watch particular movie instead child viewing movie without permission If parent nt want child view raunchy movie simple say NO simple If parent feels movie decent child watch go ahead let watch material Parental agreement always main factor determined whether child could view particular movie read certain provacative book If offensive books movies removed shelf would living structured world one would learn already knew Life possibly become rather boring Although people find books songs offensive others contribute materials A child pick book start reading discover disturbing thoughts never would encountered beyond picking book They would never learned things Reading information like creates move advanced society Adults children becoming smarter day Any parent would agree would love opprotunity arise children become smarter wiser already Songs movies books magazines could provide child Reading escape jungle wild monkies children They use book get away struggles everyday life get lost within lively pages If books censored thrown equates less books child could opprotunity discover I read even classes world allowing students read The The teachers find book inappropriate students This unfair student novel inspiring life changing definitely missing Also movies songs provided one s pure entertainment nt always matter crude A child young adult learn things never thought imaginable provided public materials In conclusion books magaizines movies music one s individual way expressing themself They censored human judgement parents right exclude offensive material child s life material matter crude used learning tool If material removed local libraries almost like authors punished unique Our children wo nt exposed much therefore wo nt learn grow Do really want society prohibit intelectual thinking think certain material offensive ThinkSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Hi I am Luke and I want you to become a Sea Going Cowboy. Yes I know what you are thinking, what is a Sea Going Cowboy. Well let me tell you a little bit about it and lets see if you are interested.\n\nA Sea Going Cowboy works for the UNRRA ( the United Nations Relif and Rehababilitation Administration). What I do is I take care of horses, young cows, and mules that were shiped over seas.\n\nSome of the benifits of my job is that if you are drafted into the army you can use this job for your service credit. One other benifit of my job is that I had the oppourtunity to see Europe, and China. But seeing the Acropolis of Greece was the best. So was taking a gondola ride in Venice,Italy, a city with streets of water. I also was able have a tour of the great castle in Crete. Plus I was astounted at the Panama Canal on my way to China.\n\nOther benifits you might like if you like agriculture would be getting to feed the horses, clean the stalles. and pulling bales of hay and bags of oats from the lower parts of the ships. I definitly liked this part of the job because I grew up helping out on aunt Katie's farm and loved every minute of it.\n\nPlus on your way home with out any responsibility to take care of the animals. you can play games like, basebal,volyball,table tennis,fencing,boxing,reading. and willting. These games also helped pass time on the way back from your journey across the seas.\n\nBut being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than just a adventure for me. This experince made me relize how grateful I am. It also made me aware of people of other countris and their needs. It also opened my eyes up to the world to relize not everything is about me and my little small town, and that there are other peolpe in the world besides me who need help. And that awarenes I was talking about has stayed with me through my whole life. Leading to my family to host a numbe of international students and exchange vistors for many years now. All thanks to my freind Don for persuadeing me to become Seagoing Cowboy.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "With the development of the internet, more and more social media were widely used by human beings. While some people argue that it may bring about some positive impacts, I believe that they are more likely to contribute to negative influences.\r\n\r\nSocial media benefit our daily life. To begin with, without regional restrictions, we are able to keep in touch with other people in different countries. For instance, an innovative social media, which is named LinkedIn, could effectively help job seekers apply for overseas occupations as well as contact foreign human resources specialists from international enterprises. In addition, people can maintain the relationship more easily through a variety of social media. In this fast-paced life, it is common that we cannot always meet our friends and family; whereas this may cause us to become more and more alienated from close people. As a result, social media significantly dissolve regional and time limitations and support us to strengthen bonds with others.\r\n\r\nNevertheless, there are several negative problems that come along with social media. Firstly, without censorship, they may spread illegal and fake news to the public and even harm children. As we know, at a younger age, children are so ignorant and immature that they cannot distinguish between the truth and the fake information on social media. In this context, if juveniles are exposed to violent elements, they may blindly duplicate violent behaviours. Afterwards, it is likely to lead to a rising rate of crime such as school bullying, robbery, and so on. Therefore, social media exert a baneful impact on society.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, despite some contact benefits, social media seem to me that those cause more disadvantages and are harmful to us.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "This machine isnt valuable. it would tell and show how much someone is truly hurting.. and most kids dont want that.. But it also would be a good thing cause it might end suicide..\n\nThe emotions of one kid could realy mess someones way of thinking. becuase you would see a girl with a smile that smiles all the time but is truly not happy. and it really hurts because I do the same thing. i pretened to be happy but on the inside im lossing my mind. cant eat cant sleep. The crap kids go through nowadays is unreal.\n\nI truly wish i could fix how these kids treat one another because then maybe just maybe we might have a kid or kids who use to pretend there smile actually mean it.\n\nThis machine would be a good thing but a bad thing.. Becuase most kids suffer from deppression and they like hiding it or keeping it to themselves.. because most people think talking to somone or medicine will fix everything.. but really all they need is one person not matter how bad shit gets they wont ever leave not matter what happens.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Many companies have been working on driveless cars. Driveless cars are cars that can drive themselevs without a human. I think this isn't a very good idea to continue to work on.\n\nThere are many problems with these driveless cars as the text states \" designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" This basically means the car can not drive on the interstate because there is always a work site or an accident on the interstate. What if the car doesnt notify you that you need to take the wheel and you get into a really bad accident? You must be paying attention at all times and that ruins the whole point of a driveless car.\n\nMany states dont even allow driveless cars as the author stated \" in most states it is illegal even to test computer-driven cars.\" How are we supose to drive these cars if they can't even be tested in our state? If these cars were ever ready to drive by themseleves we would have to wait for the law to pass for every state. It will most likely take a while for all this to actually happen. I feel this is a waste of time and money!\n\nWhat happens if someone does get into an accident in their car? Who is to blame? Do we blame the company that made the car becasue the car wasn't doing its job and it never alerted us to take the wheel? Or do we blame ourself for not paying enough attention? Some may say one or the other but it is a driveless car so I think the company should be blammed and who needs a huge law suit on their hands when they've spent all this money on making these cars?\n\nYes, I will say these are really cool cars and they would be nice to have some day. But I feel like its just a waste for now. It would be nice to be able to just sit with your family or friends and chat all the way to your destention but the world is just not ready for this stuff just yet. The car needs alot of improving and work before we put them on the streets.\n\nThese cars have many problems that really need to be worked on before we put them out onto the road. I feel they are a waste or money, time, and aren't very safe.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit. However, some are not aware of the dangers of exploring Venus. It's so dangerous that NASA wouldn't dare send anyone to Venus with such harsh conditions.\n\nThe reason why exploring Venus is a dangerous thing to do is because of the fact that every spacecraft that was sent to Venus did not survive landing for more than a few hours, luckily for NASA, no one was in that spacecraft. I feel as if these spacecrafts didn't survive because of Venus' daily temperature, which is 800 degrees fahrenheit. Venus even has 97% of carbon dioxide in the air. If that weren't enough, Venus' environment is so Extreme, it could \"crush a submarine accustomed to driving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals.\" All of this states why Venus is a dangerous planet to explore.\n\nVenus has not been explored yet, and it probably never will due to it's conditions. No man can ever experience the harsh and unsafe environment of Venus. The conditions in Venus is not stable enough for humans to explore or survive on. The conditions are even tough for the spacecrafts to handle. This explains why we can't explore Venus anymore.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "People argue that, to gain a successful career, learning at university or college is inevitable. In contrast, other people believe that receiving a job after finishing study at school might be more approachable. From my perspective, I believe both higher education and employment after school can lead to different career paths to achieve success. I will discuss the higher education and job prospects below to support my point of view.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nTo gain a successful career, studying at university and college is the best for the major which is complex and sophisticated such as mathematics, chemistry and physics to achieve success. Those majors mainly focus on developing the previous theories or mysterious problems which require a lot of experiments to examine the data to support the potential theories. In this case, studying at university and college could be a huge opportunity to receive guidance from professors and tutors who have achieved academic success in their field allowing them to work as a team to contribute their own intelligence for those problems. Moreover, with the funds from those institutions, some expensive equipment for experiment purposes is available to assist those problems to process the outcome. Eventually, there’s are much likely to gain a breakthrough while they choose to further study at university and college.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nTo achieve a successful career, working after school is appropriate for some majors which rely highly on the experience such as teacher, translator and commercial management. School can only help to establish a basic framework and provide necessary skills for students to work in those fields after graduation. However, a practical experience allows those skills and knowledge to apply in realistic situations, such as human resources management and high efficient teaching methods, to review and develop the basic framework they learn from school and master their skills at the same time. After the gained experience, they are able to help as many people as they can to gain their own success.\r\n\r\nOverall, I believe that studying sophisticated majors at university and college could be an advantage in terms of difficulties, and I also believe that getting a job straight after school is able for students who choose a skilled major to achieve a successful career.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "As of April 2013 the number of miles driven per person was down 9 percent. So that means people are starting not to drive as much, which is not a bad thing. Actually they're many advantages to limiting car usage. Limiting car usage can actually help the environment, help the emissions, and if we do limit car usage it can make cities denser as well as having some places that don't use cars. Which will be good for the world.\n\nTransportation is really big in America. People drive all the time, were a moving country. So driving and using cars does effect our enviornment. One big thing going on is smog. One country that i can point out is Paris. Paris had so much smog that they enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of global city. \"Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog...\" according to the article Paris bans driving due to smog by Robert Duffer. Paris has more smog than other european capitals. Which is really bad because that can effect us as humans. In Bogota They are doing a program that involves banning cars for a day. The goal was to promote transportation and reduce smog which it did. So limiting car usage can improve safety and make the environment more clean.\n\nLimiting car usage can also have beneficial implications for carbon emissions. If we created cities with pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, it can lower emissions and if the emissions are in good care then the environment will be to, \"since transportation is the second largest source of America's emissions, just behind power plants.\" President Obama has goals to curb the United States greenhouse gas emissions. Experts say\" Is a huge impediment to current eforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes...\" according to the article In German suburb, Life Goes on Without Cars, by Elisabeth Rosenthal she says\" Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United states. So thats pretty bad so if we limit car usage we can help fix that and maybe even have a lower percentage on emissions.\n\nVauban home to 5,500 residents are really taking limitation to cars serious. They may be the most advanced experiement in low-car suburban life. But they are doing really good. Other countries around the world are adopting what they are doing in attempts to make suburbs more compact and more accessible, which is a good thing. Espescially for people that dont use cars, and especially if your trying to make the air more cleaner. According to In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars, \"Vauban, copleted in 2006 is an example of a growing trend in Europe, the United States and elsewhere to seperate suburban life from auto use, as a component of a movement called \" Smart planing\".\" This is a advantage for the world because we need to have someplaces that actually dont use cars. Also Vauban can inspire other countries to do the same. Which will be a advantage.\n\nSo they're are many advantages for limiting car usage. A lot has to do with the environment like it reduces smog and helps emissions which will be better for the world. The biggest advantage for limitation on car usage is pretty much a better world and who wouldnt want to live in a better world. It can also help other places be like Vauban. They don't use cars as much and it works for them, and a lot of people should start doing that. These advantages will really help the world if we do decide to ever limit car usage.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood memoir appreciative The author appreciative culture Cuban descent He shows culinary Skills improved phase change house home His parents greatful great designer learn egknowloge Cuban Skills learned mood life childSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit because us human beings love to study more than our planet . Studying Venus is very risky due to the fact that its the second planet closest to the sun, so our chances are very low to get a something similar to a rover on Venus without it melting or getting destroyed by the atmosphere in paragragh 7 it states that ''modern computers are enormously powerful,flexible and quick, but tend to be more decliate when it comes to extreme phyiscal conditions '' . Venuses atmosphere is almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide blankets and it is very thick . It also averages over 800 Faherenheit that is 90 times greater then what we experience . So if our devices go on Venus it could be destoryed , even if some people volunteer to surf Venuses atmosphere is very dangerous because any of our devices can enterupt Venuses '' daily routine '' putting our people in harms way.\n\nIn paragragh 4 it states that astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may once most Earth-like planet in our solar system . Also, the planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys , mountains , and craters . In paragragh 2 Venus is also referred as Earth's '' twin '', Venus is the closest planet to Earth in erms of density and size , and occasionally the closest to distance too , so it would be a good story if we found a safer way to study venus . In paragragh 8 the author states that , \" striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value , not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself , but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors .''\n\nVenus has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely but challenges like that make it real easy to study other planets if we accomplish our first task . In paragragh 2 it states that ,''each previous mission was unnamed ,and for a good reason , since no spacecraft survied the landing for more than a few hours.''So we do have some research that is unknow to us for good reasons so if continue too keep running test and mission and fix our mistakes Venus can be very easy and safe to study .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars are coming. They are so dangerous to a human an his/her families life. Driverless cars would be ok if the technitions knew what they were doing.\n\nMy position on these diving cars is nowhere. Humans can drive cars fine. Yea we get tired of driving because we are always on the road. Also, driverless cars aint all driverless anyways cause they tell you to take over if they're in complicated traffic or in roadworks. Like what if the person in the driver seat falls asleep and the car needs it to take over will it cause a wreak?\n\nLetting google make the driverless cars is outrageous you told have like toyota, ford, chevy, or maybe even pontiac but google they shouldnt have the right tot be able to build a car let alone a diverless car. Google makes alot of money as it is they are just trying to make more money with this car but i dont think anybody should buy it cause if it messes up and you wreak they will think its the person who is in the driver seats fault.\n\nI mean making it isnt as bad of an idea but i dont think noone will buy it because of the technical difficulties it could have. Like you could wreak and blow up and google would of thought it was the person driving at that giving point, but they wouldnt know who was driving because it was on auto pilot and the driver fell asleep and crashed and blew up.\n\nThe special track that they have for the driverless cars should be were they are only aloud to be. So, you dont cause no accidents in the middle of the city with a car that blew up because of technical difficulties. I think google should just stay with the internet blogs cause they make enough money as it in being the first page when you click the internet broswer. they shouldnt be building a car cause if the do and something happens to them when they are sold to people and the mess up people could come back and sue thm because its not like a orginal car with a motor no its a car with computers evrywhere in it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is true that the number of people who are fascinated with collecting information about the history of the buildings or flats that they live in is increasing. There might be some reasons, such as gaining information about that, and some steps should be taken, like using technology or the elderly to realize the past of neighbourhoods or buildings.\r\n\r\nThe first reason why people may be enthusiastic about the history of their flats is that it can give them good information about not only their houses but also the neighbourhood that they live in. For example, when they search about the history of their flat, they might find out some famous people who lived there before and also they might realize some historical event which happened in their neighbourhood such as a civil war or a plot of a movie.\r\n\r\nThe people can choose different ways to understand the history of their buildings and places around their constructions. They can begin to talk with their neighbours who are old enough to know about such places, and they are likely to be full of details. In particular, a lack of technology might help them have better communications over the years and they may collect a lot of events that might happened in the past. In addition, technology can play a significant role in this kind of investigation to give people whatever they ask. For instance, people who are curious about the past of their apartment can search on the Google engine or Chat GPT to give them the information they require if there is any.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, people might like to know about the places where they live, and this information can be provided by technology and people with enough knowledge.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Have you ever wondered what it is like on Venus? Studying Venus, could be deadly. Humans can not withstand the temperatures and atmospheric pressure that comes with studying Venus up close. However, putting in the effort to figure out how to make it safe is worth it. We should be trying to study Venus, because NASA is already exploring the different ways we could safely research this planet. We should study Venus despite all of the dangers it presents.\n\nWe should study Venus because NASA is already looking at different ways we could safely look into the planet and its environment. \"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\" There is technology that could take on the dangers and last up to 21 days. NASA could continue trying to develop this technology, so that it could last longer. But what would all of that be for? Would all of those hard working scientists have put so much time, effort, and work into figuring this out, just so they could be pushed aside and recieve no compensation for their work? We should study Venus because scientists have been working to develop technology that can live in such conditions.\n\nStudying Venus could be very dangerous for humans. But it could open up a whole new door for researchers and help us to better our understanding of the universe in which we exist. If scientists are already working on it, why should we not follow through? We should study Venus in spite of all of the risks because scientists are already working on making it safely possible.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear Newspaper know lot people days constintly computer many people think its problem Well know computer helpful many ways learning entertainment even weight That hundreds different things The computer help get contact realitives nt seen long time Or maybe health problems go online see wrong I remember mom getting really dizzy sick doctor told everything fine wase nt So mom checked wrong computer found disease went back doctors figured really medicine In opinion computer best inventions made It used many things also purchase items computer So I hope agree opinion support use computer sSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author concludes story paragraph show Saengs outlook future It fitting conclusion drawing numerous elements story shows Saeng grown Saeng refers When snows melt geese return hibiscus budding In phrase shows growing acceptance even affection new homeland The geese familiar Saeng despite thinking strange before The hibiscus piece past adapted fit current situation Saengs vow take test again spring When snows melt etc This shows despite losing much home grandmother way life Saeng still determined make best situation She plans passing driving test come spring matter The concluding paragraph fitting way wrap story It thrends Saengs past present entwined displays attitude towards future With optimistic words final paragraph nearly ties mood optimism amidst regret The authors wording well doneSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted builders Empire State building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock The first obstical make building taller Chrysler Building overcame desion add top hat building They accomidate new situation new modifications done dirigible would add stress buildings frame since steel frame building could stand load wind pressure would transmitt nearly feet The biggest obstacles led fate mast fact since dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen flammable could accidents taking place downtown New York Nature greatest obstacle though constant shifing winds The dirigibles could weighted back lead weights dangling high pedestrians street safe practical There also law airships flying low urban areas These obsticals builders faced attempt allow dirigibles dock Empire State buildingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Studying Venus was more rather a hard task for explorer's to do. Not only what is contained in the planet but its features and its structure was very dangerous. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size. It being the 'shinning star' explorers might have thought knowing more aboutit in a closer distance would be much educative for them.\n\nVenus being the closest planet to the sun it is assumed to be pretty hot and that answers why its' called the 'shinning star' and also why it can be seen and good distance from any point on earth. The tempertaure in there is \"average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmopheric pressureis 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\"This information that they gave out here shows how dangerious it is to be out there especially at an environment our earthly body is not used to.\n\nThe studies of Venus have shown that even explorers are scared to venture ou there and have no choice but to look formachines to help them look out there and know how its like on Venus. THe danger that is out in Venus is not going to begiven up on and they are gooing to find other ways to go to Venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is argued that the lack of accommodations in metropolitans can result in serious impacts and in order to tackle those problems, government action is the only choice. In my opinion, I totally agree with the statement for the following reasons. \n\nTo start with, many people suppose that individuals can offer aid by creating and setting up their own houses which are fully attached with amenities. However, I believe this is a short-sighted view. To make this clear, a person can afford the money to purchase or even construct a shelter to live in but they can not guarantee the quality of the materials for the structures. For instance, in 2019, a family consisting of 5 members in a small village of Hokkaido - Japan managed to create a house made of bricks and woods on their own. Even though it was well-designed with plenty of decorations and furniture, eventually the house collapsed and took away the lives of the whole family. Due to their deaths, the police found out that the system of their house was not strong enough to handle and resulting in a tragedy. Thus, there is a high risky chance to deal with this problem alone.\n\nOn the other hand, I strongly believe that the solutions to this issue could be undertaken by the government. The authorities always prior the safety of citizens first so they often provide the basic facilities for them. To address this, many high-rise blocks, skyscrapers,...etc which solve people’s housing have been completed. One of the best examples of this would be in the USA, the government has witnessed the booming population and responded to the inhabitants by devising plans to make buildings that could house people. Additionally, those buildings can ease the traffic for the commuters and facilitate the community’s lives but also the most important thing is that still remains the quality of the structures. Besides, by resolving all the housing issues, more and more people will definitely move in from the urban areas to seek opportunities. Therefore, it is likely to be beneficial for the dwellers through the action of the government. \n\nIn conclusion, after the aforementioned reasons, it is no doubt that the government can ensure the quality of people’s housing and surely can enhance it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The problems builders empire state building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock issues safety As said paragraph winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents Also said paragraph would lead weights dangling pedestrians street one problem faced existing law airships flying low urban areasSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I like the idea of driverless cars but I dont think its something we should bring into the world. It isnt one hundered percent safe and I feel it would be to expensive.\n\nFirst off, safety. Safety is probobly one of my main concerns. We all know that electronic devises bug out all the time. Lets say you have a very important meeting and your alarm on your phone doesnt go off. What does that cost you? Maybe your job or punisment for missing that meeting. Now imagion that instead of you phone its your car. Now instead of your job your life.\n\nSecondly, money. Are economy isnt the best. So where would we get all this money for something that isnt completely nessasary. The writer states that not only would it take money for the sensors and the cars but also road. These \"Smart Road\" would need to be installed before any cars are even released. That takes time and money we dont have.\n\nIs this really a good idea? The passage says, \"Television and movies have long been fascinated with cars that could drive themselves.\" I was aware that you arnt suppost to do things you see on t. v. Is this really what America is developing in its free time? We could be improving society. Cancer is something we have been working on for years and now there going to put time and money into something that we dont need.\n\nWhat is the price range of these new cars? Will these new \"Smartcars\" be the same as a regular car? When they format the road will regular cars not use the roads? Will the poor and middle class be able to even drive if they cant affored a new Smartcar? These are questions that need anwsers if this idea will ever come into affect.\n\nThis is my take on these \"Smartcars\". It sounds like a good idea but is raises to many questions and doesnt answer enough. All of these reasons are why I think Smartcars should stay in the movies.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "First Do believe certain materials books music magazined etc remove shelves found offensive thats question ask ever life Why beacuse many people read read stuff listen stuff might like first saw question answer self That people think way world would boring answer question saying books remove music remove shelves beacause tlike thing thing In first place I know many different kind thing people beacause love dont kind things beacause really dont like dont care This answering question removing books music magazines shelves even article book music etc say s offensive people reason remove stuff There thing enjoy things emjoy reading listening looking etc people dont like hate In second place beacause dont like something people stop things stop buying thing NO case care ever right If good person wants someone future dont care care beacause ll need person book future ever falling In conclusion article I think people remove thing library even found offensive people thing help life really want getting hurt offensive writting little peace paper Hope latter help think change decision case hope make right decision would affect anyone general Thank taking time ready I really think removing articles librariesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The conspiracy about aliens has been starting to go too far. An isolated mesa was found on Mars, but when its picture was taken, it looked like a face. The conspiracy theorists have been thinking that that's the proof that there's life on Mars, but they're wrong. The picture was taken in 2001, which means it was very detailed, so it would've been obvious if there were any tombs or buildings surrounding the mesa. Also, it only looks like a face because of it shadows. The shadows actually shape it into a face. Finally, if it was actually a sign for alien life, it would've profited NASA, so there wouldn't be a point in hiding the \"truth\" that the conspiracy theorists believe. These all show that the Face is just an ordinary rock.\n\nThe last picture of the Face was taken in 2001. This was a very detailed picture, even for being taken so long ago. Each pixel in the image was equal to 1.56 meters in real life. This means that any other nearby buildings or tombs would've been seen near the rock. There weren't any buildings or any sign of actual alien life nearby, so the picture at least proved that the Face wasn't a sign from the aliens, but just a rock.\n\nThe only reason that the Face looks so much like a face is because of the shadows. Without the shadows, the Face might just look like an ordinary rock on mars. The shadows themself give the illusion of the rock having eyes, a nose, and a mouth. Those shadows are the only reason that the Face IS\n\nthe Face.\n\nWithout those shadows, the Face wouldn't be so famous. Nobody would have probably ever known or cared about it.\n\nThe conspiracy theorists and many people in general probably think that NASA is hiding the fact that aliens are real, so they're lying about the Face and just saying that it's a landform, when they think it's a sign that aliens exist. That's not true. NASA is a company that needs money like all the rest. They know that telling people that aliens were real would profit them a lot, so they wouldn't just hide the fact that the Face was an alien artifact if it was one. NASA probably wishes that they had found an ancient cililization on Mars, just for the profit.\n\nThe theorists are wrong about the Face being an ancient artifact. The latest picture of the Face is so detailed, that any ancient civilizations nearby would be visible. Also, the Face is only the Face because the rock has shadows along it that makes it look like it has eyes, a nose, and a mouth. Finally, NASA would proabably like to find an ancient civilization on Mars, just so that they could profit from finding something related to alien life. They wouldn't just hide the truth if they could gain money from it. Therefore, theorists should just realize that facts are facts, and that if NASA finds an ancient civilization on Mars, they'll tell everyone.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Yes, I do think it's a good idea for computers to read students emotions. I think it's a good idea because some students might have suicidal thoughts or might be suffering from abuse. It's always good to know what students are going through when they are sad. Alot of students dosen't like to show emotions or tell anyone about it. This Facial Action Coding system can prevent suicide.\n\nEveryone will not think this program is safe, and is envading privacy.\n\nBut, this system can save suicidal people from all over the world. Prof. Thomas, Prof. Nicu, and Prof. Huang and his colleague are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate. Emotions can be solved like math equations with this program.\n\nThis program should be put in all computers over the world to help you with school work also. This new technology can also help you with your work like a teacher. If the computer reads that you are stressed then it could explain the question to you better or help you. This new technology program can change the world.\n\nI beleive that this program will spread on others and used by millions if this new technology is approved. This can be big help with teachers also. It could help them releive stress and give them advice or take a day off because of stress levels. It could improve humans and make them stress free.\n\nMy incoclusion is that this program can help everyone with their problems and stressful moments. I think it's a good idea to read emotions and can prevent suicide. There is not a doubt in my mind that will make me change my final answer. Your face dosen't lie and this program will be able to tell it like a polygraph.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The bar chart respectively illustrates the percentage of Australian people who were living in urban, rural and town among those who were born in and outside this country in 1995 and 2010.\nIn general, in these two years, the proportion of people living in cities had an increase, no matter where they were born. In contrast, the proportion of people living in other two places both had a decrease.\nAt the beginning, the figure of the percentage of city citizens all had a significant increase. For those who were borned in Australia, its number grew from about 50% in 1995 to over 60% in 2010, while for those who were borned outside Australia, there was a 20% increase. Meanwhile, in any given year, the percentage of people who were borned abroad lived in cities was higher.\nSecondly, for those who lived in town, its proportion went down no matter in which year and where peple were borned. But for thoes who lived in rural areas, it is totally different. Although for those had the same birth place, its proportion also went down, the percentage of people who were borned abroad lived in rural areas is higher than that of those who were borned in this country in 1995, yet it is opposite in 2010.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I am a scientist at NASA that is discussing the \"face\" on mars. I will be explaining how the \"face\" is a land form. By sharing my information about this isue i will tell you just that.\n\nFirst off, how could it be a martions drawing. There is no plant life on mars as of rite now that we know of, which means so far as we know it is not possible for any type of life. That explains how it could not be made by martians. Also why and how would a martion build a face so big. It just does not make any since that a martian did this.\n\nNext, why it is a landform. There are many landforms that are weird here in America, and there is also landforms all around the whole Earth. Many of them look like something we can relate to like a snake a turtle a human... So if there are landforms on earth dont you think landforms are on mars to? Of course! why not? It's just unique that the landform on Mars looks like a human face. Also if there was martians and they were trying to get our attention dont you think we would have saw one by now?\n\nFinaly, why you should listen to me. You should listen to me because i am a member of NASA and i've been dealing with all of this stuff that were talking about and people who say martians did this have no relation with NASA and have never worked with anything to relate to this landform. One last thing is that everyone working at NASA says the same thing i say, that the \"face\" is just a landform.\n\nTo sum all this up the \"face\" on mars is a landform but others would like to beleive it's a martian sculpture. Which every one that works at NASA says it's a landform and they are all the ones working on the planet and taking pictures.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driveless cars may seem productive and helpful. Driveless cars use technology for safety, seem easier for people, and watch out for drivers on the road but what if the technology isn't working properly? What if the smart car shuts down or crashes due to glitches in the technology? A persons life are in the hands of a automobile basically. With that being said, I am against these type of cars.\n\nI believe that people have to be reliable and responsible when it comes to driving not a car. We shouldn't let a car take control. These cars may have sensors, cameras, voice control, and ect but when accidents happen can the car still be in control? No, the car ask for drivers to take control. Anything can happen on roads and cars don't have the instinct to get around everyday obstacles. I believe people need to focus while driving, learn their surroundings, open their eyes to mishaps on roads. Cars don't have the ability to be aware of danger like human beings do. I feel as if more accidents may occur if driverless cars are used.\n\nIn paragraph 9, it states, \"Traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.\" I agree with this statement strongly. How do we know driverless cars are reliable? Drivers may become careless in a driveless car. They may believe the car is in control but the car may make one mistake and suddenly, someones life could be taken away. Both the manufacturers and the driver is now at fault. In my opinion, driverless cars are very dangerous. The concept of these cars are high tech but anything can happen. Technology may fail and people could be injured or even die. These smart cars aren't so smart.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Celebrities are known and popular figure in society and it is seen on many occasions that media disclosed their private life to attract the viewers. However, I believe celebrity chooses name and fame and always want to be in limelight, but every individual has the right to protect his or her personal life.\nTo begin with, indeed, it’s true that the key aim of bigwig is to attract the attention of the public and be the centre of discussion. Popularity is directly linked to their monetary benefit and it decides their impact on society or country. It is observed in many instances that big guns are engaged in doing abnormal activities like posting sultry images on social media, making derogatory remarks against political leaders and revealing ill stuff from their wardrobe and they put all these efforts just to be in public eye. Media houses are also given priority to such flaming news and they keep on showing to their viewers as a headline which in turn increase their rating and add more revenue to their business.\nHowever, every human wants to put a barrier in their special life and no one wants to make it public. Many celebrities are well known because their jobs put them in the spotlight like singer, actor, actress, sportsmen and many more. They should be allowed to relax, sit and enjoy with their loving ones. Being followed by paparazzi can be sometimes scary or deadly if heavy weight gets chased in their car. Take an example of Lady Diana, there was a speculation about her death that she died because she was stalked by media personnel and in the process of running away from them, her car met fatal accident.\n\nTo conclude, every entity wants some sort of personal space and it shall be respected. Broadcasting companies must evaluate the news from all corners before making it public.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars were bound to be coming soon. Can you even imagine a time in the future where you don't have to drive your own car? As time aged so did our technology by getting more vast and advanged. I am very against the new development of these new cars because I think they're not safe at all. A human should alsway have to drive on their own because anything couple happen. One minutue with your eyes off the road, a sensor being read wrong, alerts not going off like supposed too, or even the wrong alert going off. There are even many differen't laws that were pasted in different states to not allow driverless cars. You just never know what could go wrong and you'll simply have no control over what happens.\n\nDriverless cars sound like a pretty cool idea right? Just think about it a driverless car? No way right?\n\nYou don't have to be contol over the wheel at all times. You can just sit back and let the car do what it's supposed to do. Eating breakfast on the way to work in the moring instead of wasting time at home. There countless amazing reason why this would sound like a marveless idea but then again you have to sit back and think about you and everyone else around you saftey.\n\nTechnology will always need a humans help for anything. Think about your phone wouldn't opperate without you assistance, computer, even a stero the list goes on and on. Think about your car driving by itself, what if you take your eyes off the wheel for about thirty senconds thinking your okay to grab something out the back seet real quick. Then something with the car went wrong? The you most likly would be ending up in an accident. Just for taking your eyes off the road for juts thirty senconds. Think about back into the stories it says to get the driver's attention quickly is to vibrate the drivers seat or flashing lights on the windshield to alert the driver but what if the driver doesn't have a quick respond like right away? Then boom, you crash and now you want to blame the manufactoring company. It woul just be better if you were awear on what's going on, on your own.\n\nTechnology isn't always perfect like just like humans, they tend to malfunction here and there. Looking back into the stories it talks about sensors being out on the cars. Have it ever came across your mind if a sensor read wrong? For expample, your pulling out of a parking spot and your car doesn't alert you fast enough that there is a car coming and the other car isn't paying attention. Now whose fault would that be? You'd blame the manufactoring company even if it was probaly your fault. It would just be a better idea to not put yourself in that situation.\n\nPeople in other states are still waiting for the law to be passed like California, Nevada, Flordia, and many more. They're not even allowed to do test driving and stuff like we do everywhere else that's legal. They made it illegal for a very good reason and I believe it should stay that way. There are too many poeple on the road driving everyday and they would like to feel safe. They don't want something going wrong with the cars and accident everyday. They're doing fine with regular cars now, just be better off if everyone stayed that way.\n\nYou always have to be thinking about the poeple around you instead of just yourself. The car might be driving smart but poeple drive like idots. Think hard about your safety before getting these cars. There not a one hundred percent guarentee. Yeah the cars sound like a really good idea and a fun new way of driving but it coould be really danergous as well. Therefore, you have to put your saftey and anyone elses safety first. Better safe than sorry like they people always say. We were doing fine without all this technology before and I think we can keep that going. We're doing fine with the cars we have now.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There many ways mood created author memoir One way mood created author memoir author s past memories An example passionate Cuban music I adored day filled air This supports idea mood created author memoir culture music came author s memories mood Another way mood created author memoir author s opinions memories An example paragraph I eternally grateful This supports idea mood created author memoir author expressed opinions way set moodSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The benefits of visiting and studying Venus outweigh the dangers and risks of Earth's sister planet. According to the author, Earth and Venus have many similarites which makes scientists believ that Venus was once a habitable planet. \"Often referred to as Earth’s “twin,” Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too...Venus...may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel.\"\n\nThe author talks about ways that NASA is trying to make to visit and study Venus in a safe way. For example, \"Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. At thirty-plus miles above them surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\"SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author supports their idea very well. The story is very convincing to start off. The authornmakes sure to mention a lot of evidence to back up his/her statements. The author mentions a lot of facts with another fact to prove it is true. The author did good with trying to get their point across because of all the points they made to back up his statement.\n\nThe reason I think the author did good is because the author seemed to know what they were talking about.\n\nThe author mentions how Venus is most alike to Earth. Also that is just one of the many statements the author makes. The author had also used other statements to compare to why we could go to Venus. The author even gave their own idea on what think is possible. The author uses plenty of facts to help his idea and what he/she is trying to say. The author even says how NASA is working on approachesto study Venus and that helps make the essay even better. The author does not see his idea as a risk and more as a challenge. The author seeing it as a challenge shows he confidence in his idea. The author also uses how Venus has so many things alike with earth that it should be explored.\n\nSo all in all the author made a good essay and did well supporting his idea. The author was consistent with his/her idea.\n\nThe author made sure to use important facts to support their idea. The author was well rounded and did not seemed biased with their idea and was very convincing with what they said.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Nowadays, as consumer goods are produced at high scale, more damage has been inflicted on the environment. There are two primary reasons such as, chemical by products and mass manufacture of disposable goods out of many, which need remediation at individual as well as government level. \n\nFirst of all, the increase in the production of buyer products harms the planet a way that chemical by-product from the manufacturing process and the mass production of disposable goods. As more goods are produced, more toxic wastes and emissions are released from factories into nature. Water resources are contaminated, and the air is severely polluted, which results in the death of many marine and terrestrial animals. Also, to accommodate buyer's requirements, more single-use products are introduced, most of which are non-biodegradable. Though having a short lifespan, these products can remain as wastes for thousands of years, turning our planet into a huge landfill and posing a threat to living habitats of all creatures.\n\nActions must be taken to minimize the negative impact on the climate arising from the increasing amount of user goods. First companies should promote the use of eco-friendly materials. For example, giant coffee chain Starbucks has recently replaced plastic straws with reusable alternatives made of paper or bamboo. In addition, many governments are also encouraging the development of more sustainable manufacturing processes. For example, many states in India giving tax relief for industries using renewable energy.\n\nIn conclusion, increased number of shopper products and chemical released by industries are principal reasons. To address this issue, the government and industrialist join hands together to make production, climate friendly by switching to greener materials.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There are different views about whether the purpose of museums should be enjoyment or education. What I suggest is these places should try to enhance people’s knowledge by different means of entertainments.\r\n\r\nOne of the main targets of museums is to educate people. If It was not the case, what is the different between museums and playgrounds? museums are built to give us information about variety of phenomenon. However, I personally think if they only focus on education, they will have less visitors. Their visitors will be only limited to high school or university students who are interested in the related subjects in the museums. By having less audience, museums cannot afford their expenditure and will be closed soon. Therefore, the purpose, which was educating people, could not be accomplished at all.\r\n\r\nMuseums can add some entertaining sections to their services or mixing educational agendas with some fun activities. For instance, museum can provide some video games which are related to their studies or some rooms which history is being taught while people are doing board games. When museums try to be amusing, for all aged and people with distinct educational backgrounds, there will be more audiences and therefore, more people are educated by a short visit to a museum. They will make more profit and there will be more investment on museum’s facilities.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I suggest although it is very important for museums to fulfill educational purposes, they should also focus on being amusing for their visitors, so their existence is guaranteed.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Overall Score: 4.0",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "Technology that reads students' emotional expressions should absolutely be used. This technology would make it possible for a computer to know how a student is feeling during an assignment, which could help with advances in later work.\n\nConfusion, boredom, anger, whatever a student is feeling during an assignment a computer can pick that up. In paragragh six,Dr. Haug states,\"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This could change lots of things. If a computer notices a student getting bored from an assignment, perhaps they can make the next assignment more interesting. When a student is bored during an assignment, they tend to not be completely focus or to not do the work. With this technology computers could prevent students from getting bored during assignments, which could result in more students doing their work. This technology could also help students when they are confused or don't understand something in the lesson, by modifying the lesson, which could be needed for many students.\n\nIn the article aslo states, \"If you smile when a web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown,the next ad will be different.\" This could change alot for students that have any type of social media. Social media could become much more popular using this type of technology. Students will see things they like, thus pleasing them. Then, they will begin to like social media even more and maybe even encourage others to join.\n\nThis new technology could change alot for students and even students with life on social media. Students would do much better in school if this technology were to be used in schools. Assignments turned in on time would become more effecient, students would pay attention to their work instead of dozing off, and students would not be as confused and have more help with their assignments. While students will also grow to love social media much more, resulting in more money for the distributers of social media. This technology could be a win for students and social media.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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