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"content": "Cars are a basic need for people today we use them to go from point A to point B in the fastest way posible. But one must ask themselves \"do i really need the car?\", \"would i be better off without one?\", how do you tell people that what they have depended on for movement could be hurting them. I believe that cars should have a limited usage in cities because cars affect our efforts to reduce greenhouse gas, they cause smog to form around cities, and cause us to move through life at the fastest pase posible. A limited car usage would change the way we see the world its beauty, its adventersm, and we would be able to save the world from our distruction.\n\nThere is a community in Germany called Vauban where people have given up their cars. 70% of Vauban's families do not own cars, 57% sold their cars just to move to Vauban, \"When I had a car I was always tense, I'm much hapier this way,\" media trainer and mother of two Heidrun Walter says in the artical \"In German Subuerb, Life Goes On Without Cars,\". Also the artical states that passenger cars are responsible for 12% of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe, and responsible for up to 50% in the United States. Vauban houses up to 5,500 resident within a rectangular square mile, which makes it posibly the most advanced experiment in low-car suburban life, stores are placed just a short walk away so that no car is needed.\n\nSmog; a thick layer of black fog that hurts your lungs and can even kill you. Paris had to ban driving due to smog , cars with even numbered license plates would not be allowed to drive one day and the following day cars with odd numbered license plates would not be allowed to drive. 4,000 drivers were fined according to Reuters and 27 people had their cars impounded due to their reaction to the fine. This statement from the artical \"Paris bans driving due to smog,\" show that cars are responsible for a gas that can kill people, and that people dont respond well to being told what to do. In one week the ban was lifted because the smog had cleared enough but not all the way, just a week of limited car usage cleared the skys imagin what a year of it would do.\n\nCars have us going the fastest we can and people have started to live that way through life. In Bogota they have a day free of cars every years like its a holiday. People left their keys on the counter and insted hiked, biked, skated and took the bus. Even in the rain people didnt use their cars, \" The rain hasnt stopped people from participating,\" says Bogata Mayor Antanas Mockus. Businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza says \" Its a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\". The quotes from the artical \" Car free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota,\" show that with out cars people feel realeved of stress and are able to have a good time.\n\nIn conclusion limited car usage would help us presurve the world and create a enviroment that could help people aswell. Cars are one of the most used products in the world people might not want to give up their cars but eventually might have to. Smog and greenhouse gas are caused by car overuseage and hurt the enviroment and people. Limited car usage is posably the only answer to helping the world live longer aside from buying a hybrid car.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In today's modern world, advancement in technology development has provided many ways to marketers of promoting their products and services to the public. For example, Tv ads, and online ads on video streaming websites, these ads are cluttered everywhere which in my opinion ultimately leads to a negative impact on behaviour and our mindset.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, the advertiser usually promotes consumerism, which anchors on buying frequently. we are always told to buy new clothes, and stay trendy, or we won't look cool without buying the latest iPhone. These advertisements create a habit that negatively affects individual financial status. moreover, they use stereotypes, through advertising, they create a feeling toward how a certain group of people should look like. For example, beauty creams tailored towards women, try to project the white colour of a woman as superior to the other colour, and women must accept this projection that the media portrays and consider this as having higher status. \r\n\r\nAdditionally, mind cluttering everywhere you see you may find an advertisement. In current times people desire to make their life as simple as possible, but due to this factor, we ultimately process thousands of information daily. Furthermore, with misleading details, companies often make products look amazing through their advertising design and stories. But it doesn't perform as described in the ads most of the time. Additionally, adverts generally create low self-esteem by manipulating thoughts and by persuading you to buy products that will make you happy.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, in my opinion, advertising deteriorates our mental health and sometimes gives us an unprecedented daily lifestyle dent. As most people are blindly following the trends without thinking about their consequences.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear State Senate,\n\nI feel that the way we, the people, vote today is very unfair. We should change the voting to popular vote for the president of the United States. The majority of people don't care about voting for the next United States prsident because they don't get to chose who will win. The people that get to vote for one's state might not think about what what the remaining others would want.\n\nIn source one, this section tells the reader what an electoral college is and how it works. Paragraph two sums up what this system is, \"The Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for president and vice president, and the counting if the electoral votes by Congress.\" Basically what this paragraph was saying is that the people dont get to directly say who they want as president. The people of a state get to vote for who they want, but it is ultimately up to the state electors on who will get the vote from that particular state. There could be a ton of people voting for one president, and then there might be less votes for a president who may be even better. Ultimately what this system comes down to is the people don't vote for their next president. They are selecting a name that might not do anything to their country.\n\nSource two talks about the electoral college and how the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong. In paragraph nine, the text says, \"... according to a Gallup poll in 2000, taken shortly after Al Gore- thanks to the quirks of the electoral college- won the popular vote but lost presidency, over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now.\" The electoral college is responsible for picking electors, who can go behind the peoples back and chose the president nobody wanted. This system or process is a total disaster. Paragraph thirteen states, \"At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the 'swing' states.\n\nParagrapgh twenty-three, \"It can be argued that the electoral college method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state- Democrates in Texas, for example, or Republicans in California.\" If these people were to vote by the system we have now, their vote would have no effect. This leads to the people living in these states to not vote. They don't even pay attention to the campaign anymore. They know that they won't do anything to the votes or who will become president. They couldn't care less.\n\nWe should get rid of the electoral college all together. This system is not working for a lot of people and this is why many people dont care enough to vote anymore. There are people that vote for our state. Why should the people care? If we switched to popular vote, our country might participate in picking who the next president of the United States will be. When people have a voice, they will use it as much as they possibly can.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author probably used last paragraph show time next year going take The author writes paragraph show failed test geese going away winter hibiscus bloomingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Obviously there are different opinions of how this \"illusion\" of this face on Mars was formed. Think about it if aliens are real why would they even build this human face? Okay so a few movies come out and aliens are\n\ntrying to take over the world and they want Earth! If this theory is logical explain why in all these decades that aliens haven't took over Earth?Not only have they not taken over Earth we don't have proof that aliens made this structure,but we do have proof that a landform on Mars just formed over time and just happened to make the shape of a human face.\n\nSo in May of 2001 scientist came across a landform with the features of a human face and the citizens of the world decided that aliens formed the landform...SO what ! We have hard proof that the rock just formed .We have no proff that aliens formed the landform. We know that scientist flew over Cydonia (where the structure is located) and snapped several shots and found nothing concerning aliens. They also gave use an example wich was the landform in the \"middle of Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho\" wich is on Earth ,so if it is true that aliens built the landform on Mars then they had to build the land form in the Snake River of Idaho. Wich is ridiculous! Because if they did build the landform in Idaho they would have tried to destroy, and.or invade Earth.\n\nOverall i feel like things just happen like mountains forms on thier own and pot holes, canyons and waterfalls. Why can't this \"Face on Mars\" just be a landform that just happened to creativly form a \"Face on Mars?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "My opinion on driverless cars is; If you are too lazy to drive a car, than you shouldn't own a car. I feel as though people who don't want to drive their car themself, are extremely lazy. I would understand if you just got back from a business trip; or been at work 12+ hours, But if you dont work at all, and dont even bother putting in the effort to drive your own car; you dont deserve a car.\n\nI feel that a car where a driver does not have to do anything is also dangerous on many aspects. A car can easily have electronic malfunctions. It can lose control o it's speed, lose the breaks, or even crash. There are so many things that can possibly go wrong! I wouldn't put anyone i know, or care about in a car that drives itself.\n\nI also feel like this would be a great idea! If you are just so lazy that you need a car to drive itself, then get one! I feel like, if you are a cop, or paramedic, or any person who is very busy, and cant concentrate on the road and help do your job, then a car that drives itself would be a great idea. But with great opportunities comes great risk.\n\nIn my concusion, I have decided, that the 'Driverless cars' are very dangerous. Many things can go wrong, for example your car could be going a certain mph and a car infront of you could be speeding up and slowing down, then suddenly stomp on their breaks, and it will take time for you car to process it. By the time your car realizes it; you'll be dead!\n\nIf you are a mother, and you have your kids in the back and they're arguing you can just turn around a scold them and not worry about if you need to keep your hands on the wheel. So, with this idea, I am still undecided about the driverless car.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Some believe that humans should accept the climate change problem and should try to live with this situation, on the contrary, others think it would be better if we understand it and take action to prevent its impacts. While I accept finding a way to stay with it, I believe that it would be better if we can prevent it in advance by being aware of our lifestyles in order to provide a quality of life for us and the coming generations.\n\nFirst and foremost, climate change is the main problem that humans have faced recently for several decades and it does affect our life beings, while a growing number of research has confirmed that human activity is one of the main causes contributing to this change. Regarding the negative effects of this situation, it is essential for us to take action to avoid further devasting effects of climate change such as losing biodiversity and extinction of existed species. There are simple methods that we can apply to cope with this problem instead of neglecting it. For example, most countries nowadays try to promote clean energy by replacing fossil energy and also encourage domestic businesses to maintain their Carbon emission. These measures can help to secure the future for the younger generation to live in this world peacefully. Consequently, preventing climate change by changing our individual activities is a must and turns out to be the most effective way towards this significant situation.\n\nOn the other hand, some people tend to believe that humans should learn to live with climate change. This might be because they prefer to accept nature's outcomes as the best solution since it is hard to prevent the natural phenomenon. Thus, we should take risks on climate change and find other ways to survive. As a result, some technology has been invented to help humans in order to support the changing lifestyles. For instance, there are some innovations established to fight against those effects of climate change such as the system warning for tsunamis and earthquakes as well as drought climate detection for crop protection. With a help of advanced technology, we could possibly stabilize our long lives towards the severe weather condition.\n\nNonetheless, I partially disagree with the view that we should ignore those changes in weather, but instead, we should be aware of our lifestyles since it is one of the main causes driving an increase in temperature around the world. Trying to live with climate change should always be the value that we keep in mind, but it is not because we intend to do nothing to protect our nature, conversely, we as humans, need to awake and try to prevent it as much as we can to ensure a better place for the next generations.\n\nIn conclusion, I am convinced that climate change could be prevented by changing our lifestyles and raising awareness among us. However, in my opinion, it is a necessity to live and learn from the failures that we have made to nature in order to sustain this world effectively.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear newspaper In opinion I believe kids adults spend enough computers I see benefits ways keeps away halwe outdoors excersizing It also effect eyes later life People go search engines little half site s results fuke And people go computers easier yet caught pladurizing big thing community Those ideas I nt worry details go along ideas People need fresh air excersize body enjoy outdoors You stuff get computer And instead searching places online go visit You get fresh air excersize experience And experience pass teh real ohter people get hot fake stuff For example search online pictures food But take visit get really last food Would rather sitting chair staring computer fun outdoors visiting places never seen You never get learn anything pudurizing plus get get clicked But think little maybe experience writing tool learn That also kids lazy outside things re inside used becausethey computer time I guest I also agree using computers give skills going places nt give Like also need skills mainley handeye coordination typing long papers collage skills get life It s like chain reaction type computer lot good handeye coordination good handeye coordination good school goes And end successful Another benefit computers sales people buying computers helps economy I guess I agree opinion stay strong using computers So wether computer dont I prefer get one get bum excersizing visit topical islands always visitSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Many early school droppers have become successful in later in their life. Obviously some factors play a significant role in their failure in academics as well as success in the adulthood. This essay will discuss two primary causes for the each.\n First of all, teachers' are the first factor with demotivating children from attending educational institutions and securing great achievements. In other words, lack of training to handle students with learning difficulties, which leads children are poorly treated by educators. Eventually, learners unable to co- up with the school environment, resulting drop from schools entirely. By contrast, if they had supported effectively to overcome their weakest area in order to perform excellently, they would have completed their school education properly.\n\nHowever, many these school droppers turn to be either world renowned business man or scientist. The interesting fact is that, they all chased dream instead of sticking to acquire formal education. Albert Einstein, who had no formal education since his teacher point out that he was not a good student, but his mother's constant encouragement and motivation, he had focused on the which he liked. Eventually, due to his hard work and perseverance, he contributed to science abundantly. Under no circumstances are children insulted or avoided when they are unable to perform up to the level. Similarly, family is a key element which can influence child's intelligence by providing emotional support and motivate them continuously until they achieve something great.\nBy way of conclusion, even though, some students unable to complete their formal education, they have reached better positions when they grow old. This is because family support and hard work. It is predicted that, educational institutions need to be cared those who under perform in classes.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Over the past few decades, talk regarding car pollution and usefulness has become common. Several people believe that the neglegence of cars is beneficial to the world, while others hold the belief that automobiles are a necessary part of daily life. Living in a world without cars can be very beneficial on many levels. Many entities benefit as a result of the use of other forms of transportation. The explanations of the help and drawbacks of a car-free society will be examined in this essay.\n\nCar free land helps the environment to a vast extent. In many countries, automobile emission is the leading cause of air pollution that in return can harm the environment. This form of pollution is especially eminent in densely populated cities where public transport is unavailable. \"After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the global city,\" as found in source 2, demonstrates the already global initiatives being taken by the governments of particular nations. Many pro-car arguments will contend that factories cause more pollution than cars, but they fail to consider how many countries' economies depend on factory goods while car usage can be replaced with alternatives that are better for the prosperity of the planet.\n\nMany new alternatives to cars have been created. From source 3, \"The goal is to promote alternative transportation.\" Many forms of transportation, be it public or private should be made available to residents of nations. Metros, hybrid power buses, and monorails can be implemented in cities where pollution from smog is a problem, as they pollute in negligible amounts if at all. Private solutions can be viable for people who prefer a more calm approach to saving the world. Hybrid cars are now becoming more widespread and available for almost the same price as regular gas emission vehicles. Hybrids are powered mainly on electricity and batteries, and do not give off harmful carbon monoxide that destroys the ozone layer.\n\nThe purchasing rate of cars has already decreased. As demonstrated in source 4, \"If the pattern [of the decrease in car purchases] persists...it will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment.\" Here it is evident that the switch to more \"eco-friendly\" solutions to transportation are naturally and calmly happening. Ergo, the people of many states and countries have already taken the initiative to make the change, but it is also now up to the government to implement public transportation for the portion of the population that cannot afford their own form of travel. This initiative has been taken in cities like Paris, New York, San Francisco, and Moscow.\n\nAs truly mentioned in the first source, \"[People] have given up their cars.\" This is the first step to a world that is pleasant to the environment all around the world, as the health of plants, animals, and even humans is dependent on the air around them. Not only is public transport becoming more and more evident in select cities, but personal electric vehicles are opportune as well. This is a new age and people should take advantage of it. Smartphones, laptops, and other technological feats are neat, but in order to be able to enjoy those luxuries, we need to be able to appreciate our Earth and treat it with respect by becoming a car-free world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In short story Narciso Rodriguez The Blueprints Our Lives mood short story grateful reasonable In story man named Narciso Rodriguez twentyseven years old migrated Cuba parents come United States When came live one bedroom apt could afford nothing else But Narciso greatful Even though nowhere work places bigger pay So little pay feed family Narciso greatful paragraph says They struggle personally finanacially braving harsh northern winters settle given timeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The technoligy I dont think will be able to read the expressions from the people in my classroom because i dont that there is such a technolighy like this because it sounds almost impossible to evr make something liike this because it was back then and back then there was not anyhting like this or even untill this day there is nothing like it\n\nThen if there was ever something like this technoligy i dont think it will work very well considering that every one is in school and mostly when anybody is in school they are usually bummed out about being in school and i think the machine will read mixed emotions and the computer or the device will read everyones emotions wrongs because like they say id in the first paragragh how she had mixed emotions I think that that is pretty crazy to have for just one person because\n\nI dnt think just one person can ever hve that many emotions even if was a cartoon or a painting\n\nLastly i dont think that everybody in my school will allow the emotion reader decide there amotions because like me I will not feel comfortable with one of those readers lie many other people in my classroom will be comfortable with that reader to decde or find out there emotions because the reader might get the wrong emotion and people might start making fun of other peoples emotions and there might be a big argument with the reader and somebody might get mad because that is not how they are feeling and people might get mad because the reader might say something about somebodys buisness and people might get embarassed about what other people might think about ther hidden emotions.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "As we all know, recruitment is a continuous process that has been evolving over the past years. Nowadays, selection of qualified applicants is a tedious job which involves a considerable amount of time and effort. It has been stated that wealthy countries must allow experienced and intelligent employees from impoverished countries to secure a job in an affluent nation. I completely agree with this statement. In this essay, reasons and examples will be discussed further.\nRecruitment mainly involves identification of potential applicants, screening, interviewing and hiring candidates for a particular organization. It may seem a daunting task for those working in human resources. With the advent of technology, the process is simplified, faster and more convenient. Mostly, email is used for applying and sending the credentials abroad, chances of getting hired is often possible. For instance, many immigrants from Asia, which belongs to developing countries are able to successfully obtain an employment in North America with the help of social media platforms. Also, with their valuable experience and rewarding career in the past, they were able to practice their profession in newly industralized countries.\nIt is beneficial for them to accept skilled workers from economically poor countries to fill in the vacancies in labor market. For instance, a highly respected nurse who earned her bachelor's degree back home decided to work overseas as a healthcare aide eventhough she's overqualified for the position while waiting for her credential evaluation and license. This scenario depicts that rich countries benefit and utilize this person's ability to contribute significantly in the economy.\nIn addition, job recruitment is advantageous for the country since talents and skills of the people from developing countries has been internationally recognized, thereby giving a sense of pride and honor. Moreover, hiring of people overseas should be a fair procedure that takes into consideration the most indispensable requirement which is skills and knowledge, not merely based on the worker's country of origin. However, there are also drawbacks associated from recruitment of foreign workers which include increasing costs, loss of cultural ties and conflict of interest.\nFrom my perspective, I am in favor of hiring people from third world countries since majority of these people has the expertise, achievements and excellent communication skills which are desirable attributes of an employee. With enough manpower, it will address the staffing crisis and labor shortage in rich countries.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In some countries, an increasing number of people are expressing a strong interest in discovering the history and heritage of the houses or buildings they reside in. This curiosity is driven by various reasons, and researching a building's past has become a captivating pursuit for many. While some individuals rely on internet resources for their investigations, others prefer more traditional methods, such as visiting government departments and local archives, to delve into the origins of their homes.\r\n\r\nThe significance of home as a place of great importance in a person's life cannot be underestimated. This emotional attachment often fuels the desire to learn more about its history. Whether ancient or modern, every building holds a story waiting to be unveiled. For example, homes that once housed historical figures during crucial periods may now be occupied by ordinary citizens, and discovering the lineage of such houses offers a unique insight into their historical fabric.\r\n\r\nIn today's digital age, people have turned to the internet as a valuable resource for historical research. However, in some cases, the specific historical details of residential properties may not be extensively documented online. Consequently, individuals often complement their online searches by visiting local authorities and government departments responsible for housing and urban planning. For instance, in countries like Spain, dedicated departments have been established to provide comprehensive historical information about buildings, enabling people to gain a deeper understanding of their house's past and its significance.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the contemporary fascination with the history of houses and buildings is driven by a desire to establish a closer connection with the past and to appreciate the cultural and architectural value of these structures. People are increasingly engaging in research endeavors, utilizing both modern technology and traditional methods to uncover the origins and significance of their homes. The exploration of a building's history not only imparts a profound sense of pride and belonging to its inhabitants but also contributes to preserving and celebrating the rich heritage embedded within these architectural wonders.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "By ending story way author short story winter Hibiscus author provides sympathetic understanding reader seang struggle live another country sadness wishing back home I think author attempting end story strong feeling strong note Saeng s personality draw reader back read For example repeating statement test saying I take test author gives us understanding Saeng given lets reader know stand live strongSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Limiting car usage nowadays is very well for the enviroment. Not using cars so much lowers polution, and is a great way for humans to start interacting with one-another again.\n\nThe \"Car-Free cities\" started in the suburbs of Germany. Almost everyone completely gave up their cars. P2 L1-2 states that stret parking and drivewats and home garages are generally forbidden. If you are not completely car-free you pay $40,000 to buy space to park you car(s) along with a home.\n\nStatistics say that 70 percent of families d not own cars anymore, and 57 percent actually sold their cars to move to Germany. Heidrun Wlter stated \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way\".\n\nIn Paris, due to near-record pollution, they enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\n\nOn certain days motorists with even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a $31 fine. the other days same rules apply to odd-numbered license plate owners.\n\nThe more cities that start doing a ban on driving cars' or use more enviroment healthy cars are helping reduce pollution and other toxins in the air. p43 states that the Ford company is already making changes to their cars/trucks to make them more enviromentally safe.\n\nThe rate of Kids and aduts between the ages of 16-39 getting their licenes and permits have dropped drastically within the past few years. With communication the computers and telephones, teens and alduts feel connected by talking on these devices and don't feel the need as much to drive to go see a friend and find it easier to stay intouch.\n\nIn Bogota, Colombia millians of people hike, bike, skate or took buses to work durin a car-free day. It was the third year that cars have been banned with only buses and taxis permitted for the Day Wihout Cars in the city. The turnout was large, despite the occasional rain they ecieved, that didnt stop the colombians for doing what they did. \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution\" said Carlos Arturo Plaza. Two other Colobian cities, Cali and Valledupar, joined the Day Without Cars event. The citites are generation a revolutionary change in the world.\n\nParks and sports centers have bloomed throught the city, sidewalks have been repaired and rush-hour has been cut.\n\nThe United states' has realized a drastic change in driving. Fewer people are getting their licenses. as of 2013, the number of miles driven per person was nearly 9 percent below the peak and equal to where the country was in 1995 (P32 L9-12).SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "People seem to believe, that the face on Mars, has to do with aliens. But that is wrong.\n\nThe \"Face on Mars\" is one of the most popular things about space. It has been featured on a Hollywood production, Its been seen in books, and it has even been the talk, on a Radio talk show.\n\nNASA is also the talk when someone brings up the \"Face on Mars\" topic, because people believe that NASA is hiding something from them. NASA has also been angry to saying \" Defenders of the NASA budget wish there was acient civilliation on Mars\".\n\nBut how could NASA know if there are aliens there or not?\n\nThe very first picture of the \"Face of Mars\" was taken in 1976. They came back two decades later, in 1998, and took another picture. Three years later, they came back a third time, and took a one last and final picture.\n\nLooking at these three photographs, you can see a natural affect happening. On the first picture, it simply looks like four small hills on a rectangular canvas. In the second photograph, the light affect was blocking half of the picture, so you could barely see anything. On the third picture, you cant even see anything but cracks in the ground.\n\nI can however, see what some people are talking about, when they say that the \"Face on Mars\" looks a little fishy, can you really just jump to conclusuon. I think a person with a delusional mind, saw one thing, and wanted to turn it into something it wasn't. People are just so fed up on aliens and the supernatural, they can't seem to just look at the more simple side of things.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "A group of public argue that young children should serve a community free of cost in their leisure time, which helps to carry out fruitful results for both of them. I strongly support that view of people because doing social tasks will not only help teenagers and chance to explore skills but also provides helping hands to people.\r\n\r\nBeing engaed in social working, give mentally and physically satisfation to juveniles. In their busy lifestyle, they don’t have time for extra curriculum activities, get more depressed. But working on community task give a chance to them to divert their energy in a good way which helps to reduce their depression. For example :- a study carried out by a university in the United States in which get results that adolescents who serve for community for 10 hours are less likely to feel depressed as compared to those who do not work volunteer.\r\n\r\nLikewise, doing volunteer work with youngsters give aid to society for a better living environment. Many organizations effort for the improvements of structure and environmental conditions of the society which leads a people to obtain the superior quality of living style. like:-In India a campaign was started by the Indian Prime Minister with unpaid workers in which they sweep roads and planted herbaceous trees on the sides of roads to overcome air pollution which ultimately benefits local crowd.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I think, volunteer work is two-sided benefits, so during step forward for public work by juveniles utilize their energy in a positive direction and individuals get welfare in society.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood created author Narciso Rodriguez calm loving creates mood explaining loving family new friendships overall welcoming feelingTo begin paragraph Narciso Rodriguez states Here innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed formed backdrop life warm home This quote creates calm loving mood explains author enjoyed childhood loved family loved back complements family way raised first sentence paragraph also creating common loving moodNext end paragraph Narciso Rodriguez explains love feels towards friends states All cultures came together great solidarity friendship shows love towards friends beginning paragraph Showing love towards friends creates calm loving moodLastly calm loving mood also created overall welcoming feeling In paragraph author welcomes reader past speaking childhood home loved Also last sentence paragraph four explains people parents help stating My parents always kept arms door open many people considered family knowing would us This quote explains welcoming people people creating mood Explaining loving family new friendships overall welcoming feeling create calm loving mood created authorSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The builders empire state building faced multiple problems idea building would used forThe first problem builders came buildings frame A thousand foot dirigible top building held one cable would cause much stress buildings frame load dirigible wind would go buildings foundation much far The building would modified costing sixty thousand dollars modifications The architects made changes building fit needs But architects re presented problem The mast building would cause problems spotted architects way befor construction biggest problem safety issues dirigible outside country used hydrogen wich highly flammable There already exsplosion one New York could muchSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I really don't think that aliens could have done this. actually i could give you a few reasons why and reason one, that just sounds crazy. Aliens dont exsit.\n\nIt's just a natural land form. There are all kinds of dents and holes on these planets. Besides the natural landforms are common enough around Cydonia. \"in the article it states, \"Thousands of anxious web surfers were wating when the image first appeared on the JPL web site, revealing...a natural landform. There was no alien mounment after all.\" Reason two is landforms are common around the American west. The test even states, \"What the picture actually shows is the Martail equivalent of a butte or mesa-landfors common around the American West.\" Finally reason 3. If ypu look at the pictures long enough, the longer \"the face\" has been there there more it transfors into a dent and looks nothing like a face.\n\nI believe its a landform and hopefully these reasons help you beive it too. The scienctists proved has the facts that it is a landform and not a alien face.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "From reading the passage, \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" I disagree from the idea of creating a car that will transport people without the need of a driver.\n\nWhy I strongly disagree with the thought of this idea is simply because something bad could go very wrong. Have you asked yourself, \"what if a car was built wrong?\" In that case, the car wouldn't work right and no one would even know. Just because it was designed to go from one destination to the next doesn't mean something could go wrong. Then the passengers in the car could get severely hurt. Passengers wouldn't be able to take over the car and avoid an accident. When reading the passage, the narrator talks about cars and how cars need the driver just in case there's an incident on the road, and only the driver would know how to get around that.\n\nThis is one out of many reasons why i think driverless cars shouldn't be created.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear Florida senator,\n\nI argue you in favor of keeping the electoral college in florida. i think it's a easier and better process than popular vote. It seems like to me it would take forever to count all the votes and add them up in all 50 states. our government counts all the votes up anyway but they count them by just it's own state. I feel like everyones voice is getting heard because it counts your vote but it's your states that votes.\n\nThe one problem I have with the electoral college is that some states are worth more votes than other states, which in my eyes is alittle unfair but it's our goverment. As florida we have 29 voter points and it's very useful to the running president that they gain our state. maybe if I was in the other states that have like 2 votes for the electoral college, then maybe I would be alittle upset and I would most likely not like the electoral college. It goes by the population of the states which makes sense because we don't want a small state choosing the president. It makes a real good point that the staes don't have the same amount of points, because if a state for example has 2,000 people and the other has 3,000 people, then the bigger population state should have the more electoral points.\n\nIf it wasnt for electoral college we wouldn't of had the great presidents we've had like for example John F. Kenndy. John lost by popular vote but won by electoral college. That is our great history and what if the electoral college saved us from a terrible president because not most of them tell the truth and are two faced. But i think electoral college is a great thing for us now and in the future.\n\nWell thats our government and wether we like it or not their not going to change it. If it wasnt for congress and our government, America wouldn't be the same and were thankful for that. I just want to let you know senator that I like and agree with the electoral college . Keep up with all the good work Sir I know we can count on you .\n\nFrom,\n\nPROPER_NAMESCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear Senator,\n\nI, STUDENT_NAME, am in favor of changing our democacy to popular vote. Electoral college does no good to our society. It's out of date, it's irrational, everybody in this case has a great chance of becoming president. That is no good, we do not need idiots running our country. Election by popular vote is the best way to go. You will have a certain outcome and votes will be fairly made. It benefits everybody. More than half of our population wants you guys to make the switch.\n\nThe electoral college is not an up to date voting method. Our founduing fathers made it many years ago while writing the constitution. It is a long process of nonsense that has no advantages to us, the people. By popular vote, it's faster, simpler, and better. Popular vote is basically a group of qualified citizens voting for the president. Popular vote is the best way for people to directly voice their opinions by picking the president of their choice. If we use the Electoral college, the electors of our state may not deliever it properly.\n\nOver 60 percent of voters prefer direct elections. Government officials such as Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, the U.S. Chamber of Commerce, and others all thought we should abolish the electoral college. Many things are wrong with the electoral college, we don't directly vote for the president but for the slate of electors, who eventually vote for the president. It in no way benefits the people, they have no control over who the electors pick. In many cases, people have decided to not even vote because there was no hope.\n\nIf there are greater chances of everybody being president, not only is there a fool running the country,he isn't going to worry about your interests or needs. If your own president won't help your interests, potential voters may be turned off. Isn't that horrible, to feel that our president isn't our president? Knowing that our vote will have less of an efect, we won't want to vote. Voters in presedential elections are people who have something to say and actually want to express themselves. They are not the people who don't care and just vote to vote.\n\nYou and the rest of the senate should consider this very deeply. It isn't just benefiting the people, but congress, the whole senate; and most importantly, the president. It will make us a better nation and one as a whole. I hope you take this into great consideration and make the change. The only way to get back the peoples trust and votes is by taking baby steps. This is one great step and good things may come out of this.\n\nSincerely,\n\nPROPER_NAMESCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon obstacles builders Empire State Building faced allow dirigibles dock One example one paragraph existing law airships flying low urban areas This law would make illegal ship ever tie building even approach areaSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Facial Action Coding System can be valuable in a classroom setting for multiple reasons.It can help the shy students who are afraid to say they don't understand the material being taught. It can benefit the teachers in multiple ways. It can also benefit the school system in many ways as well.\n\nIt can help shy students becuase if they don't understand the material being taught, they don't have to sit there and get bad grades on the material they're being taught. The FACS can identify the emotion of they don't understand and it can notify the teacher. \"Then it could modify the lesson to help the kid understand, like an effective human instructor.\" It can help teachers because instead of the shy kids getting bad grades and making others think that you aren't teaching well, now you would know what confuses the students and you could modify it to help the students understand. It can help a school system because now that your teachers are getting notifications wen students don't understand something, they're modifying the lesson so that it's easier to understand for the students. When the students are understanding it is bringing their grade up and when most of the students have nice grades, the school system will look great. \"If you smile when a web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad may follow.\" \"If you frown, the next ad will be different from the one that made you frown.\"\n\nIn conclusion, Facs would be beneficial to students andmany more things. It can help teachers by changingtheir lesson so other students can understand it properly. It can help shy students so that they don't have to feel embarrased to say they don't understand the material being taught. It can help school systems look better because most students will be getting better grades and that can make you look better as a whole.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Have ever patience I believe patience I think patience something weall need futher You patience fair lunch line teaching dog tricks Im going talk patience fair You patience fair When line rides need patience When getting tickets bradet need patience That one way need patience Now lunch line You need patience We going eat wait I people time didnt patience Thats another way patience Now teaching dog tricks CAPS one need lot patience You cant expect dog know tricks working progress You need slow patience That need patient You need patience fair lunch line teaching dog tricks At fair need patient At school need patience At home need patience That patience importantSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Limiting car usuage would help the world In so many ways. First of all, there wouldn't be that much people getting hurt from car crashes. Also cars were affecting France by letting out to much smog. Cold nights and warm days had affected the warmer layer of air to trap emissions. If you limit car usage then you wouldn't have that problem.\n\nAnother advantage would be that you wouldn't be Inhaling as much polluted air If cars were limited. Polluted air Isn't good to Inhale and also will mess with people allergies so that would definitely be a big advantage. If car usage Is limited, more people would be active. That would help with people's health and decrease the number of lazy people we have In this world.\n\nPlus If another advantage would be that beneficial Implications for carbon emissions and the environment. It would definitely help with that since car transportation Is the second largest source of America's emission. Carbon emissions play a pretty big role to so benefiting that would be fantastic. Limiting car usage would also help you save money by not having to repair your car. You won't have to take It to get checked by a mechanic every three months. You would be saving thousands of dollars If you limited car usage.\n\nThe day without cars Is the day that Bogota has seen the construction of 118 miles of bicycle paths, the most of any Latin American city, according to Mockus, the city's mayor. Also the parks and sports centers have bloomed through the city. Pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks. Another advantage Is that rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic. New restaurants and upscale shopping districts have Increased.\n\nThere would be many advantages of limiting car usage. People will find a type of way to benefit themselves from it. It would also be way much better air we Inhale If cars are limited. Saves money that people could be using on more Important things. Limiting car usage would be great.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear I student I hear people think good use computers others think waist time Well I good reasons computers good technology One reason book places want go sights want see This good way use computer track route even print map go hiking hows excersing Another reason computers good use online chats Let s say family member lives way computer want talk costs talk email This good way use computer stay updated going family members Another reason learning You learn many different cultures You learn different people live life ther cultures My last reason This great way use computer keep updated lafest things like earthquake hati hurricane breaking story Or storm headey way In conclusion using computer great ways used sure people put bad sights use right way good source technologySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Home The Blueprints Our Lives one mood I think The mood I think author trying make people feel happiness There lot examples make think One example I think best last sentence I never forget parents turned simple house home I think best example happiness even though nt live biggest house still happy That I think mood created authorSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Nowadays, some people are of the opinion that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. I am totally in support of this decision to find a way to maintain an equilibrium with our climatic conditions. This would afford us the opportunity to plan ahead of any Unknown circumstances caused by the atmospheric condition and ensure a clean, safer, and more conducive environment.\n\nFirstly, the knowledge of the atmospheric conditions prevents the occurrence of perilous situations that can destroy the environment such as flood, tsunami, hurricanes etc. For instance, a better knowledge of the weather forecast will ensure we plan our movement in situations of unexpected heavy rainfall . I was able to stay indoor during the recent heavy downpour due to the earlier information obtained from the weather forecast site which prevented me from being caught in the Flood.\n\nFurthermore, having adequate climatic knowledge makes the environment safer and more conducive to live for people. We are able to ensure a good drainage system is put in place by every occupants of a building through proper road planning. This saved my building from the recent flood that happened last week as majority of the houses in the south west area were been flooded as there were no proper layout for drainage.\n\nIn conclusion, making preparations to live with the effect of change in weather conditions will go a long way to make the country a safer and more conducive place for people to dwell in.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In my opinion i feel like the use of technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is not valuable. I think its not a good idea of technology reading our emotions. Some people do have hard time showing their feelings but its either because they are hurt or scared. Others just show their feelings and emotions. Those are the kind of people that have been hurt but still move on with their lifes. Might take them a couple of days, weeks, months or maybe even years. This generation has changed there is a lot of technology now days. Us as humans we do what we like and work on what we like to do he express our emotions on what we do.\n\nOn the other hand using technology is kind of a good idea for people that have trouble showing their feelings and emotions are the kind of people that would us technology. These kind of people that are scared to show their emotions would get this so they could get a little help to try to show their emotions. But for another reason the same people that have hard time showing their emotions are the one who would probably not use technology.\n\nFor example using technology to show the Mone Lisa painting emotions would be 83 percent happy, 9 percent disguste, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. All of that doesnt sound right why not just express what you feel your emotions, Just be yourselfs.\n\nOn the other hand another reason why people are scared to show their emotions and feelings is because the care about what other people think about them. That is one thing people should not care about do whatever makes you happy making good decisions. But happy is what everyone needs to be we only live once and why not spend it with the ones we love and that make us happy,SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Hello guys I am going to tell you a story about a boy named Luke Bomberger.\n\nHe was a boy that just graduated from high school.\n\nHe had two part-time jobs, in a grocery store and at a bank.\n\nHis friend Don Reist invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat.\n\nLuke could not say no, he knew it was a opporunity of a lifetime.\n\nLuke was a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nA Seagoing Cowboy is a person that looks after people,feeds the animals, gets the bales of hay and bags of oats, and cleans the stalls.\n\nLuke was 18 so that meant he could be drafted for military service. They were going to see places like China and Europe.\n\nIt took two weeks to cross the Atlantic oceon from the east coast of the Unites States of America and a month to get to China.\n\nLuke helped his Aunt Katie on her farm so he had to get prepared for hard work.\n\nOn the second trip Luke was a night watchman.\n\nA night watchman was a job to check on the animals every hour.\n\nLuke found out a way to have fun on board.\n\nHe played baseball, volleyball, and table tennis.with the other Cowboys.\n\nLuke said that being a Seagoing Cowboy is more than just an adventure.\n\nIt opened up the world for him.\n\nWell that is my story about Luke Bomburger.\n\nHope it was a good one!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Although humans have long acknowledged the impacts of their actions on flora and fauna systems, they still continue destroying them. And it is still a controversial issue whether it is better to find solutions for this urgent problem or let it be as it is already too late. In this essay, I will examine both viewpoints; however, I strongly believe that \"late is better than never\" and advocate finding ways to fix mistakes.\r\n\r\nSome people have stopped hoping to change the circumstance that many species of vegetation and animals have died out and more will become extinct in the foreseeable future. Humanity has influenced biodiversity so badly that nature finds it so hard to recover. For example, when ones are in need of land for cultivation or construction, they cut down trees and cement the soil, resulting in changes in the natural habitat. Consequently, many species of plants and animals can not survive.\r\n\r\nNevertheless, there is still a chance for us to err the mistakes provided that practical methods are put into action immediately. The prerequisite solution is the authorities had better set strict regulations protecting our nature such as ceasing deforestation and overexploitation. Nothing is more obvious than the example of overfishing which prevents fish from reproducing in time; as a consequence, they become extinct. Last but not least, more campaigns to enlighten every citizen's perceptions should be put into practice. Hopefully, when everyone is conscious of the danger of their actions on the common ecosystem, they will find ways to limit them. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, despite the fact that it is rather late to take action on protecting plants and animals, I suppose effective accounts can help reverse the situation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate whether advertising is entertaining or aggravating, it has no effect on customers’ decisions when they go shopping. While this statement is valid to some extent, I would contend that it has certain influences on consumer’s choice.\r\n\r\nWithout a shadow of a doubt, there are numerous factors that influence a purchase besides promoting, especially the price of the product. It cannot be denied that if a customer's financial resources are insufficient, no matter how much advertising is given, they will choose not to buy the merchandise. For example, Foreo facial cleanser has not truly convinced users to buy it because of its prohibitive price, despite being widely advertised and receiving positive reviews for the quality and effectiveness. Hence, the buying choice may not be influenced by advertising.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, consumer’s behavior is somewhat influenced by advertising. In this fast - paced world, coming across ads is a daily occurrence. Therefore, by using advertisements, the enterprise’s item can catch consumers’ eyes and make them have a snap decision to purchase. For instance, thanks to the cooperation with KOLs and running ads on the tiktok platform, Tingoan has attracted numerous customers and their revenue increased significantly. Hence, advertising has an immeasurable power of impact on shoppers’ choices of goods.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, advertising can both attract customers to buy a product, but it is not enough to make them make a purchase decision. However, it has a large contribution to promote the purchase decision of customers.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast faced problems One problem dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted All way Buildings foundation CAPS The Had modify strengthen building Accommodate new situation The dirigible big could even ancker Back roof The Had A time trying figure How dirigibles would land Because wind pilot could even controll dirigible The Had put another Sixty thousand Dollars modifications Al Smith one thought Idea He realized would nt work finish constructing But Dirigibles could dockSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The common phrase knowledge power accurately paints situation hand Through censorship libraries meant allow free access mediarelated materials take away opportunity people empower knowledge The reasons censoring media libraries numerous include limited unconstitutionality censorship lack proper definition offensive contradiction censorship poses core library The first blatant reason allowing censorship materials libraries unconstitutionality matter Freedom speech freedom press protected constitution upon country founded Censorship said materials effectively undermine rights Authors illustrators journalists slew individuals compose materials available libraries exercising right free speech works They constitutionally protected things say Notice right free speech right free speech long one offended The freedom press means share ideas concepts world They utilizing free speech means press Censoring library materials would limiting means artists share ideas citizens This would clear failure uphold rights citizens For reason censor libraries The constitutional concept equality man plays situation well There adequate legal definition offend People could offended something serious personal attack beliefs personal entity something light personal distaste certain mindsets ideas So men equal would respect offense taken people degrees This leaves every single work art whether book movie magazine form provided libraries open fickle definition offensive vulnerable personal feelings every individual If said offense taken individuals works able mark work offensive thus make open removal libraries effectively allowing citizens undermine rights citizens This something allowed libraries The final core issue essence censorship versus essence library Censorship meant create politically correct nonoffensive environment limitation exposure materials Libraries however meant allow public access works stretch challenge knowledge beliefs notions ideas held people works others Censorship implemented without clash essence library s purpose If censorship enacted library could provide new information someone else like taught A library could provide works challenge stretch individual beliefs someone offended means stretching occurred Preconceived notions could defeated presence factual knowledge someone like truth In ways many library s core ideals purpose could upheld induction system censorship All see censorship could hope destroy system libraries abide The constitutional rights citizens would infringed upon fickle nature humans lack definition offensive would allow people undermine rights others essence library really would ravaged We rights employ system censorshipSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear local newspaper I think spending much time computer bad One reasons Exercising People outside jogging working enjoying nature Also socializing friend Now second reason spending time fromily Being family important fun go Also re good socialize home place Sometimes socializing people computer good people socialicing friends family easier sitting chair typing bunch works explaining convosation And last finall reason active People active s fun socialicing people playing sports It keeps healthy Also active healthen lungs heart For example football keeps legs strong built And basketball keeps quick always running It s good active gives healthier stronger shape body So I think spending lot time computer badSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "On 1976, Viking 1 took a picture of Mars with a similar likeness of a human face. When NASA decided to show the public the photo of the Face on Mars, many conspiracies were made. Some said that the face proved that there were alien lifeforms on Mars, and that NASA did not want the public to know about it. There is a scientific answer to explain the Face on Mars, though, and aliens are not the answer.\n\nA more clear photo of the Face was posted on the JPL web site on April 5, 1998. According to the article, \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\", the photo was taken by Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC). They took a picture that was ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. This photo revealed to be merely a natural landform. People still weren't satisfied, though. The article reads, \"The Face on Mars is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April '98-a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet. The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face.\"\n\nSkeptics said that the alien markings were hidden by the clouds and haze. To finally prove it was just a natural landform, NASA made another trip to take an even clearer photo of the Face. This picture was taken on April 8, 2001. Mars was cloudless and summer at the time, so no haze would be \"hidden by haze\". Paragraph 10 wrote, \"Each pixel in the 2001 image span 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo.\" This meant the picture was clear, there were no haze, and there would be no reason to complain. There simply was not any alien lifeform.\n\nWithout any sign of alien lifeform, NASA concluded that the picture showed the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa. These landforms are common on some places on Earth. Jim Garvin said, \"'It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\" This proved that not only were there no alien lifeform, but Mars had some features that resembled Earth. The pictures taken all showed signs of natural landforms, and the first one looked like a face probably because of the shadows.\n\nFinally, the conspiracy theorists have a flawed theory. Why would NASA cover up proof of alien lifeforms if that evidence could benefit them? In the article it reads, \"Some people think the Face is bona fide evidence of life on Mars-evidence that NASA would rather hide, say conspiracy theorists. Meanwhile, defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars.\" This proves that if there were civilization on Mars, NASA's budget would benefit from the findings. Also, NASA is the one who shared the picture of the Face, if they were trying to hide the evidence, they wouldn't share it to the world.\n\nTo sum it all up, the Face is just a natural landform. This fact is backed up with hard evidence, while the conspiracy of aliens on Mars is a flawed theory made of guesses. Photos of the Face show no signs of life and only cracks of a planet. Maybe there is life on Mars, but that theory needs lots of proof and evidence for it to be a true fact.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The first time I learned patience I I mom said would play I wanted bad wanit get I I waited waited waited figured its whole month nothing happend I mad I didnt anything went wal mart bought play I happy Later I asked xbox stirl seven mom said wait I waited months still nothing months nothing months nothing I angry whole year passed I got I awsome I got room I got xbox older awesomeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the metropolitan cities, there has been a surge in traffic. The people face enormous problems due to an increase in the automobiles on the roads. This essay will illustrate the reasons for the disturbing growth in traffic congestion, and in addition to that, it will shed light on the solutions to avoid it in subsequent paragraphs.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, the predominant reason for unprecedented growth in traffic is flexible rules. To illustrate this view, cities like New Delhi and Bangalore have recorded the highest number of traffic penalties in the last three years and yet, these cities charge the bare minimum in road fines. Moreover, another critical reason that yields humongous traffic is overpopulation. Overpopulation leads to mismanagement and consequently, that results in inexorable chaos.\r\n\r\nIn order to manage a huge volume of automobiles on the road, the government should come up with stringent rules. For instance, the Gulf countries have imposed exorbitant fines pertaining to breaking traffic rules. This ensures the citizens of the country avoid breaking rules. Lastly, the concerning bodies should promote public transport in the nation. In addition to that, there should be a limitation on the usage of private vehicles. To exemplify, the Chief Minister of Delhi introduced an Odd-Even policy that allowed only odd and even car numbers to run on alternate days respectively. This resulted in bringing down the traffic.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, the unexpected growth in traffic congestion is due to lenient rules and overpopulation. To manage the chaos on roads, the governing bodies should impose adamant traffic rules and exorbitant penalties.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", it describes how this new technology called the \"Facial Action Coding System\" can identify human emotions and how it's is a very useful piece of technology. I have to agree, this new technology can be very helpful to many people.\n\nFor example, in paragraph six line six to eight it says \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" (Dr. Huang predicts). \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\". This not only can know how students are feeling about a certain lesson or problem in class, but can also ajust it's way of learning to a way that is best understandable for the students. Once sadisfied, and the computer reads that the student is \"happy\" with it, they'll finally be able to learn more and get a lot of their work done. Not only is this a really spectacular piece of technology, but a very useful one at that.\n\nReads a persons emotions, modified lessons to fit a student's understanding; once satisfied or \"feeling happy\" with it, a student can then work easier along with getting a lot more work done. I mean, does this not sound very useful and benificial to many people, to many students. This new piece of technology is going to help many students, and I for one would love to use the \"Facial Action Coding System\".SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In my opinion I'm kinda half and half on exploring Venus, the \"Evening Star.\" I think it would be a great idea yet kinda bad. Why? Well let me tell you why I'm half and half. Think about all the lives we would lose. We could make prototypes of the shuttle and keep sending them until we get it right.\n\nBut what if they get perfect results from a protoype? And build the shuttle the same exact way. Then send it up with people in it. But something happens to the shuttle. Like catches on fire or blows up when it hits Venus's surface or atmosphere. Very risky. This is why I say it's a bad idea.\n\nBut wait! I think it's a good idea too. Let me tell you why. We've only been to the moon and I think it would be nice to explore a new planet. They just need to make a Special rover or robot that could with stand any climate. Like made out of tough materials.\n\nThey could make that blimp like vehicle said in paragraph 5. Drop the rover in a pod down to explore the tough climate of Venus. Once they do that they could explore with the rover and gather samples from the planet. Whe nthey study the samples, scientist will send people to explore.\n\nSo that is why i'm kind of half and half about exploring Venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think cars should still be famous in the future so we could make new cars. such as cars floating in the air or cars that can drive on there own and drive us anywhere we want to go or cars that we could call in so we wouldn't to use our sell phones all the time. Or cars like the BMW could be upgraded for the future. And cars that have special sensers so the human driver can remain alert. And cars that can drive on its own and warn us if were going to have accidents. And google cars that can have fast WiFi and tv's so people wont get boared.\n\nThen one day they could come out with cars that can always givbe you a heads up and always tell you about the weather and hoiw nice it is outside. Then if one of the drivers ask about the nearest place they could go out to eat or a park they could go to to have reunion of just to chill. then they could have cars that could drive you to defferent states like Navada, California. Florida, or District of columbia. And when something is wrong with the car it could worn the driver that its low on gas or something. Next the car could have Anti lock breaks when ever the owner gets in the car or if the car is going to be stolen the car could shut down or warn the sranger to get out of the car.\n\nNext the car could have any station on it like country,rap, Hip Hop, or just any kind of music people like. Next they envent a new BMW that could speed up to 100 mph and then when you wake up in the morning the car could already have your coffee for you in the morning just in case you might forget. Then they could come out with a nother car called the Hyper BMW wich is the greatest car that has ever been anvinted. And in 2020 they would have cars that woulod have been huvering around and taking us every where. Finelly when they make the car they could test out the cars by using laser beams to test drive the cars that drive on there own and then when the car is ready it could be solled.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The raugher road gets determination beginning towards end mind set it didnt matter going die this took toll hard go He realyed didnt want die way kept eventually leading civilisationSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Well so many people are doing research on all planets,stars,and galaxy's.Venus is the first target to focus on and no doubt about it.When people are talking about venus it seems like it's just a regular planet to set foot on.It's really not a safe planet to live on actually it's really hot and because of that it's a little close to the sun that's why it makes it hotter.It could be a chance we might be there some day.\n\nI want to go to venus and explore the things it has there.First I have to wear a special kind of outfit to able to be there.Regular clothes would not work and you need oxygen to breath as well because there is no air at all on venus.Nasa sent probes there to observe the hot planet and the plan went well.Probes gathered researched and brought items back to earth which are rocks and dirt.\n\nKeep in mind that there is so much to know about venus and things that we still don't know.Venus will always be around and later on we might be able to go there.Humans try to make life there if possible or not,we are hoping if we can.We have to use our minds and think straight,hard enough,and to give our answer.We might never know only god knows what.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Do you believe in aliens? If so, what is your evidence? In \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\", conspiracy theorists believe in 1976 the Viking snapped a photo of an alien face on Mars. In 1998, Mars Global Surveyor re-took the photo of the Face with sharper cameras. The Face on Mars is a natural landform that appeared as an Egyptian Pharaoh.\n\nCydonia, or Red Planet, revealed unusal shawdows which made the Face look like an Egyptian Pharaoah. The MOC team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Vikings photo. After released on the JPL web site, the photo revealed a natural landform. Later in 2001, the Mars Global Surveyor took another trip to Cydonia on a cloudless summer day. They snapped an extraordinary photo using the camera's maximum pixel use. The picture later revealed a Martian equivalent of a butte.\n\nAfter all of the photos being investigated, the photos revealed a landform shaped like a Face. NASA proved to conspriacy theorists that they were not hiding anything about the Face on Mars. The MOC team also proved that the photos did not show any evidence of an alien face on Mars. Finally, the MGS, NASA, and the MOC teams all revealed the photos to the public on the JPL web site for the public to view and leave there opinion on the Face on Mars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Saeng dissappointed failing drivers test also upset missing home Vietnam Walking home spots little piece Vietnam right united states She buy beautiful winter hibiscus saebba remind past The end story combines two different countries cultures almost worlds life When says when come back referring geese To geese symbolize life life became accustom The hibiscus also symbol life It symbol life past VietnamIt brings back memories buying plant like getting little piece home When hibiscus budding attempt test When little piece home gets bigger try When stable culture get still firm grasp readySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In story cyclist iS greatly affected features setting For example setting thing miles Just ghost towns makes imposible find water Also its desert like setting adding thirst Another example hills made even thirsty It June California must pretty hot also town water seemed desorted Another example state put tongue Its trick lets survive alot effectively Therefore settings affected journey made wish didnt take old mans adviceSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "\"When the car of destiny was released it was a bomb, and all the critics said that the G was done. The sun had set and the chapter had closed but one thing they did not know about was the G would rise again just like the pheonix, the G will rise again.\"- Tenacious G\n\nWith a strong upcoming of the future, many car company have been working on cars that can help the economy grow into a huge future. Google being one of the biggest company's to make a car that can do this. This is my opinion about it.\n\nAs of right now the driverless car is still needed to be worked on. It can only go 25 miles per hour and still need humans to be aware of what is going on. If a human is not paying attention there will be an accident waiting to happen. I believe driverless cars should not be illegal in any state and I think this will greatly help towards the future. I understand the pros and cons of this and I think there are more pros to this than cons. So I think we really should allow this to happen but not to take over the full car game.\n\nGoogle is a big enough industry to fund something like this. But a lot of states illegalized it but we all know the country is known for making things that shouldn't be illegal illegal. I hope Google continues to fight the system and get stronger so this could be something new. I believe that Google can fight back and push for this to happen.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Facial Action Coding System reading emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable on a personal standpoint and a learning standpoint. It allows us to be more flexible as to a lesson or even towards each other on a personal relationship. Also the FACS is another opportunity as students, to grow as a scholor and a person.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is valuable on a personal standpoint because it allows us to look into people. The FACS can help one clarify if another is in need of help and is just putting on a face, \"For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face. Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc.\" This gives us an example of a situation of a friend not being able to tell exactly how the other is doing, \"Yet Dr. Huang observes that artists such as da Vinci studied human anatomy to help th epaint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotions. His new computer software stores similar anatomical information as electronic code.\" This explains that the computer can pin-point certain muscle movements to determine their emotion better than we can.\n\nThe FACS is valuable on a learning standpoint becuase it is more flexible to how we want to learn. The FACS could chnage the lesson based on our emotions and feeling as seen in lines, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr. Huang predicts, 'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This allows studnets the opportunity to shift a lesson into what better fits each of us so we can stay interested and focused on a subject. If a student becomes disinterested in a subject, the computer will recognize it and shift the lesson into something that will get the student's attention and keep them focused. Allowing students to stay on track of their learning and not fall behind.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is a valuable asset towards the growth of learning and as a person. Allowing a lesson to shift into one that will keep the student's attention so they would not fall behind. Also allowing us to tell whether or not someone is okay or having a bad day by pin-pointing facial muscle movements and positions. The FACS is going to be a pathway for growth and going to be important and an essential part of our lives in the near future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In recent years, improvement and immense expansion of supermarkets, including convenience stores often takes place of the local business. Some people are concerned that their own local businesses will be taken by large companies. Although it is understandable to feel scared, and anxious, I disagree with this idea. People always need to adjust the issue flexibly. I would like to share examples and ideas in Japanese society.\nTo begin with, the majority of society is based on capitalist society. This means that people who run their own businesses are always competitive with competitors. This means that large companies are more beneficial to provide more convenient and high-quality services with affordable finance and ideas. For example, Japanese convenience stores are monopolized by three companies. These companies' stores are ubiquitous around Japan and they provide literary convenient services. Customers can buy magazines, underwear, and some special products, such as instant noodles which are featured by famous noodle restaurants. Customers can always buy the same products around Japan. Therefore, it must be difficult for local convenience stores to fight against large companies.\nSecondly, this phenomenon is not necessarily cause a negative effect on local businesses and communities. As I mentioned above, it will cause more convenient to local people. Furthermore, the people who used to run the local convenience store will be able to run the large companies' convenience stores as franchised stores by taking advantage of their own experience. Furthermore, running some stores and companies, instead of running only one company is getting standard for entrepreneurs because they can prepare for the fast-paced society. The more they can constantly increase their profit , the more options have on whether they should compensate for a deficit sales figure in a store or company. Furthermore, they can just terminate the company and focus on the profitable company. By doing this process, they can survive in the competitive society.\nIn conclusion, it is unpredictable which industries and services suddenly emerge and take place of their own business. Therefore, people always need to keep up with this fast-paced society.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The technology that was created to identify human emotions is valuable for students in a classroom and their teacheres. Sometimes humans have trouble figuring out how others are feeling by looking at their face but this device will help them know how they feel. It could become a project in a class that is learning about human emotions and they can do a test on a painting and one of the classmates and write similarities and differences. The device is intended to bring a smile to your face when you hear about it so you don't have to work so hard on trying to tell what your friends emotions are. So say your on your phone and an ad pops up and it makes you smile the device would register that and more ads like that will come up everytime but it you frowned when seen the ad then the device won't put anymore ads like that on your device. The device can even identify mixed emotions like it did in Da Vinci's painting Mona Lisa. Dr. Paul Eckman had classified six basic emotions happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness which is all programmed into the device. The reason why it woudl help a teacher would be because they may not know how to react with a student if they didn't know how they were feelings if their facial expressions weren't showing very well. So if they had the device they can use it to determine how the kid is doing and nothing bad would happen. It is even a better way for students and teachers to communicate better with electronic devices since they are on a rise throughout school districts. All of these descriptions are reasons why kids at school would love them and valuable to student and the teacher.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "A time I patient I twelth birthday All friends exept one wanted keep playing So We desited go walk dogs dinner open presints When done opend presints I excited see That time I patient I proud friends wanted first Pluss end I got lot exiting stuff I relized wating friends wanted first great idea Im pretty schure great timeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Isn't it crazy that a face on Mars would be created by aliens? NASA sure seems to think it is. Many sciensts have discovered it's a natural landform.\n\nThe face on Mars is indeed a natural landfom. NASA has had the Mars Global Survayor fly over Cydonia and take pictures to prove it, as Jim Garvin has said,\"We photographed the Face as soon as we could get a good shot of it.\"\n\nMany people will say that the face on Mars was created by previous creatures living there. The planet humans live on, Earth, even has landforms that humans didnt make that just happen to look like faces, As Garvin says,\"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\" The face on Mars is nothing but land that has been formed in the shape of a face.\n\nThe face on Mars has been proven to be a landform. They have taken pictures, the scientists have studied it, and all these studies have proved that the face is just land. In conclusion, sometimes things aren't as they seem.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Here are a few reasons why you should join the seagoing cowboy.\n\nWhy you should join if you join you help the world and its places recover. What I mean by that is at the time world war 2 ended. And different countrys including us were left in ruins. Along with helping the world reshape you can visit places you never been before. Meet new people but do forget the the world isn't always fun it's still a dangarous job but don' let that drag you down.\n\nAccording to luke it does take some geting used to in paragraph 7 luke fell down a latter when it was raining. He cracked some ribs and nearly fell from the boat. But don't get scared being a seagoing cowboy isn't all work. There are time when you can relax and play sports. In the room were you'd carry animals in.\n\nBut in the end it up to you do you wnat to take that small risk and be a seagoing cowboy or not.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Adolescence is the crucial stage of interpersonal development and learning social skills. During teenage, the young brain should be occupied with positive thoughts to be an integral part of the local community. Subsequently, some people thought that if teenagers serve the local non-profit organisation in their spare time without any financial benefits, it will benefit not only the society but teenagers as well. Indeed, I do support the above view and will discuss in detail the significant impact of teenagers’ active participation in social services.\r\n\r\nWhile working with experienced social workers who are dealing with sparking social issues on daily basis, the teens will gain confidence to deal with unexpected trials in their own lives in the future. For instance, if a youth always blames his parents for not providing his luxury items but when he starts volunteering work in the local homeless teen project, only then he would realize how same-aged youngsters are facing hardship for shelter and food due to their family crisis. It is well said that Juveniles’ emotions and experiences are permanently imposed on their brain throughout their life. Specifically , directing these emotions and the learning stage towards social connection will be fertile in the future.\r\n\r\nUndoubtedly, the local community centres are always seeking the support of juveniles as they are full of energy and active aspiration. For example, due to disability or illness, some seniors cannot avail of some services from the local authorities, but minors should come forward to help them with gardening, social activities, and medical transportation. Specifically, teenagers’ new innovative ideas bring enormous development to the local community centres. For example, most families are disadvantaged financially, emotionally, and psychologically,consequently, they are unaware of the recent technological developments. Teens help them how to use new technology while using mobile phones and computers and how to use social media to communicate with their families and authorities.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I do understand that other activities are important for teenagers but at least a few days or hours should be spent to serving the local people. A family is part of a society which leads to a city, a state and a nation. Hence, The youngsters are the strongest pillar to built not only the local social services sectors but a strong nation as well.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The diagrams illustrate the ages and the amount of people of different genders who took part in a variety of evening programs at an educational center in a certain year.\nIt is conspicuous that there were remarkable differences in the categories of courses that men and women chose. To be more specific, the largest difference could be seen in the language course where the numbers of males and females were 20 and 40 respectively. Then it was followed by the data in drama where the number of women was 20 while the number of men was 10. The opposite could be seen in the figures of two genders in the sculpture course where the amount of men outnumbered that of women, being at 10 and about 6 separately.\nAs for the divergent age groups who joined these courses, people who aged 50 or over consisted the largest proportion with its figure at 42%. Next came the data of individuals aged at 40-49 being at 26%. The resemblance could be found in the percentages of people in the age groups of 30-39 and 20-29, which accounted for 16% and 11% separately. On the contrary, the smallest data could be seen in the age group of aged under 20, which only comprised 5%.\nTo sum up, the amount of women who preferred the language course far exceeded that of men while the number of men outnumbered women in the sculpture course. Besides, people who aged over 50 liked attending the evening courses.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "pollution, that which is increasing rapidly, is the most threatening issue the world faces today. In this 21th century this is a major issues a high volume of traffic but first of all we need to undersand what is leading to such an issues there some several steps which can be taken to tackle this problem which i will examine in this further essay. \r\n\r\nTo Commence with, Firstly, the main issue is that all over the world the high number of vehicle who people are use to their transportation and that is why traffic is a is big problem. In addisionally, this issue is Create a noise pollution and also air polluction which is affecte people body and Meantal heath who are live that rush area. For example, A policman Spend a whole day in polluted area as a result he or she feel a stress all day and also creat a some health problem because of air polluction.\r\n\r\nTo slove this problem, People are avoid to use a high volume Vehicals and replace it to electrical cars. Secondly, most of the people use their own car or bike to go thier work place. Instead of, they can use transport facility. On the other word, In one particular area their so many people are Updown daily in their own car so instead of they can use bus or train or taxi as a result It will help to reduce traffic problem.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, despite of own car or bike, bicycle and walking prefere most when going in a short distance which is helpful to reduce noise and are pollution.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "They say that Learning never stops. We learn till our last breath and it is actually responsible to improve our character, It defines what kind of human being we would be. And now we can see there’s lot of improvement in learning experience. We have seen evolution from Nature classroom to Google classrooms. Electronic classes where children sit at their home and learn various things where teaches plays vital role. It has been revolution at every stage in this process and now students are encourage to evaluate and criticize their teachers, while others feel that it can disturb the discipline in the classroom. Teachers are considered to be another parents who gives valuable lessons to child. There has been a time when all mistakes of teachers were acceptable and unquestionable where teachers were considered to be dictator and students were following the instructions given by their mentor. Nowdays this process has been changed drastically and now students has liberty to judge their teachers and give them feedback which in my perception should be limited at some extent because there are number of mischievous children in the classroom who can portray wrong image of the authority and can disturb the environment of study. In my opinion there should be transparency in the process where we can validate the on going process like cameras or recordings. In this way authorities can track their own performance and make changes rather than giving power to developing minds. Also we can practice gaining feedback from students with limited resources like google feedback forms. To conclude would like to say both aspects are beneficial if one is true to himself/herself in order to judge an experienced person and authorities should limit with boundaries for power they are providing to students.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In building gets competitive He wants construct biggest building New York City When construction going wanted add top hat mast would able drop people directly building But problem consult allow Irving let Al know building nt going done time mast That s Empire State building faced contractionSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In conclusion Winter Hibiscus Saeng notes retake driving test spring snow melt sand geese returnThe spring events occur along annual budding winter hibiscus Her family moved Vietnam bought winter hibiscus plant remind childhood When blooms retake driving test body bring hope new beginning life citizenSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Ever wondered how your peers feel like but don't know, well now you do! Due to new technology by Dr. Paul Eckman, you can now tell how someone is feeling. But is this new technology useful? And is it reliable? Well let me inform you about it.\n\nIs this new technology FACS (Facial Action Coding System) actually useful? Yes it is, what if \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\", well as stated in paragraph 6, the computer \"... could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This technology could contribute to the teacher, in multiple ways.\n\nWell according to Dr Eckman, he has programmed the system to classify \"six basic emotions- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness...\" These six basic emotions are then \"associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles\". These muscles are Frontalis pars lateralis (above your eyes) which raise your eyebrows when you're surprised; your orbicularis oris (around your mouth) tightens your lips to show anger.\n\nWell now that you no about this new technology, you might be able to figure out how someone is feeling, just by the facial expressions that they show. And yes it is useful, and actually reliable.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Recently, the natural resources risen dramatically across the world due to population growth. Some people state that we enough resources. However, there are some individuals who disagree with this opinion. In this essay, the issues behind this phenomenon will be examined.On the one hand, some people state that if will continue to we cannot have a comfortable life because natural resources are limited. According to a if this situation will continue, the petrol will in 2050. Moreover, it is widely said that the will increase. This will make the amount of natural .On the other hand, there are some individuals who disagree with above-mentioned perception. The natural resources will technology. For example, the of technology such as cars a positive impact the society. By using this, we can the consumption of natural resources. Eventually, we will not need natural fuel. In my opinion, of natural is , I think the loss of it a negative impact the society because won’t have a comfortable life any more.In conclusion, I agree with the idea that there is no longer enough natural resources to sustain this situation. In order to our life, the governments countries should tackle this issue.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Some individuals argue that the current technology has been increasing the growing disparity between the wealthy and the poor. Meanwhile, others believe that technology can narrow the income inequality. This essay intends to analyze both views. I, however, side with the latter view.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there are various reasons why people think that technology can enlarge the gap between the rich and the poor. To begin with, some technological discoveries and devices are merely for the affluent because of financial matters. For instance, there are several methods of treatments related to chronic diseases or cancers which have required the extremely expensive cost of drugs and medical services. There is no doubt that poor people can not afford them. Furthermore, some cutting-edge technologies have been applied to create machines which have a purpose to replace the labor force and optimize the operation cost. As a result, the profit of rich owners will gradually increase, while the poor will lose their jobs and become poorer. In fact, there is not a gradual increase in the real wages in developed nations during the past few decades. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, those have the firm belief that technology provides numerous benefits for poor people who can reduce the gap between them and rich people. Firstly, Through information on social networks or online newspapers, poor people who are stuck in extremely difficult situations, can get the prompt help from charity organizations, governments to increase their life standards and have better educations. Technology also is one of the most effective platforms to help authorities solve issues about the lack of electricity, pure water and skilled workers in the countryside. I do believe that technology is not the main reason for increasing the gap between rich people and poor people. The real reason for this issue is the lack of regulations about how to use technology equality, not only serve for the elites. For example, there should be a fixed affordable price for all life-saving medicines or latest medical technologies to help people also use modern medical treatments without falling into poverty after taking dangerous diseases. \r\n\r\nIn short, Technology can provide a significant value to decrease the gap between the rich and the poor. In fact, The way people using technology is a main cause for increasing the gap between different social classes.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Will I patiently waiting little sister arrive farthers day morning I exicted Im patient person came hard sit still Waiting turn hold hard arms must amazing feeling life its always hard leave shes calling name its like I want cry I dont always get come home little girl saying name I love every minute I I always patiently wait see hard know I meanSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The advantages of limiting car usage is a good idea because this way it will take away stress and lower air pollution and make the global city clean and fresh. Also this will promote alternative transportation and will reduce smog and will save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety in the communities.\n\nIn source 2 by Robert Duffer: Paris bans driving due to smog is important because after the day of pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air in the city. For example, in paragraph 14 said \"Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France after five days of intensifying smog..... The smog rivaled Beijing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world\" what this mean is that if the cold came and there are warmer days this can caused the layer in the air to trap the car emissions, which then will create pollution. If we stop the used of car driving this will help the environment around us.\n\nIn source 3 by Andrew Selsky: Car- free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota, is important because there is a program that is set to spread to other countries around the world, millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated or even take buses to work during an car free day. For exmaple, in paragraph 21 said \" It was the third straight year cars have been banned with only buses and taxis permitted for the Day Without Cars in this capital city of 7 million\" what this mean is that during the third straight years cars are banned and only buses are allowed this can promote alternative transportation and will reduce smog in the long run.\n\nIn source 4 by Elisabeth Rosenthal: The End of Car Culture is important because if socialogists believe it will have a beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment. For example in paragraph 43 said \"Pedestrain, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety\" what this mean is that if cars are no longer being used this can make the environment a better places because there are no pollution, no taffic and the environment is clean.\n\nIn advances, the advantages of limiting cars usage is a good idea because there will be no pollution in the air, there will be no traffic jams everyday. Also, Connected the network this can save us time, conserve resources, lower emissions and will improve the safety around the world and will reduce smog.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Us citizens have advantages of limiting car usage. We have advantages because in Freiburg \"street parking, driveways and home garages are generally forbidden in this experimental new district on the outskirts of Freiburg.\" This phrase basically talks about how the people in that district don't have any car/driving privleges. Unlike in the United States the people in that district can only park their automobiles in a large garage at the edge of the development,where the person that buys the space spends $40,000, along with a home. I mean if i lived their i would be carless too. Also Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and a mother of two said \"when I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\"Not having a car makes the people so much happier because they dont have to spend thousands of dollars to park their car.\n\nIn the United States we are lucky to be able to drive because in Paris, after days of near -record pollution they enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. The United States knows that we are polluting the air but they still give us the right ot drive what we pay for.\"On Monday motorists with even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31). The same would apply to odd-numbered plates the following day.\"In the United States we are lucky to be able to drive our car anyday and everyday.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Have you ever wanted to sail across the ocean. If so become a Seagoing Cowboy. First of all you get paid money for sailing. Secod if you like animal you can tme with them. Lastly, you can make new fried compations and more. Does this sound fun . This is why you should sigh up to be a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nIf you become a Seagoing Cowboy you can get paid for sailing. If\n\nyou like boats then this is the job for you. You could repair broken boats. Also you could be the captin of the ship. You could be a person that cleans up after the animals.Lastly you could just watch the animals . I would want this job would you.\n\nIf that does not interest you the do it for the animals. Again all you have to do is watch animals. This job will be fun if you make it you. You could feed the animals. You can love the animals. You also could befriend an an animal. I dont know what you do. But it is up to you.\n\nLastly you ca make a friend. You can be friend with the person you sleep with. You could be frieds with the captin or the person who watches the animals at night. You could be friend with a animal. It your choice in who pick. This is the last reson you should become a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nI hope you want this job. You could make friend with anyone. Also you can take care of animals. Lastly you can get paid for sailing.This job could help the world. This is why you should sigh up now.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Good Morning Alabama Studio\n\n\"Hello and welcome to Good Morning Alabama I'm Russel Terrier\" says Russel.\n\n\"And I'm Brittany Spaniel and we're here with sea cowboy Luke Bomberger say hi honey\" says Brittany.\n\n\"How you do\" says Luke as he tilts his hat.\n\n\"Now Luke I think we're all wondering what it's like being a seagoing cowboy\" says Russel.\n\n\"Yes do tell doll\" says Brittany.\n\n\"Well I mean it can be hard at some points taking care of all them animals and scooping bunearu all day but I love it\" says Luke.\n\n\"Well sounds interesting well I mean not the poo part, but you know the rest\" says Brittany.\n\n\"Yeah, did you get to see any interesting things while you we're at sea\" says Russel.\n\n\"Well yeah I mean the job did have some good sides to it\" says Luke.\n\n\"Like what\" says Brittany.\n\n\"Well I got to ride a gondola in Venice, see a excavated castle in Crete, and I got to see the Panama Canal\" says Luke.\n\n\"Well that sounds great!\" says Russel.\n\n\"It really was amazing to see everything and be able to have fun on board the ship even though some of us got sea sick\" says Luke.\n\n\"Oh wow what type of games\" says Brittany as she flips her hair.\n\n\"Oh Brittany don't go budding into everything he does\" says Russel.\n\n\"It's ok, We just played some simple games like table-tennis, fencing, and boxing just to past the time\" says Luke.\n\n\"Sounds like fun\" says Brittany.\n\n\"It really was a great experience\" says Luke.\n\n\"Would you reccomend it to anyone\" says Russel.\n\n\"Yeah, I would it was great to see the amazing things, take care of animals, and still have fun on the way\" says Luke.\n\n\"Well if you keep talking like that I might have to join\" says Brittany.\n\n\"Haha Brittany you wouldn't make it one day with out crying over a chipped nail\" says Russel.\n\n\"Oh that was one time Russel\" says Brittany.\n\nLuke gives them a weird look as they had their little fit. They peered over at him and sat back down.\n\n\"Oh my good heavans I'm sorry we didn't mean to fight\" says Brittany.\n\n\"Oh it's fine we used to fight like that over the one good hammock to sleep on the rest had some holes\" says Luke.\n\n\"Well how did you settle that\" says Russel.\n\n\"We just held a tournament of some sort to decide\" says Luke.\n\n\"Well that seems like fun\" says Brittany.\n\n\"It reall was and we had such a great time out on the sea and getting to help the people\" says Luke.\n\n\"I'm sure it was\" says Russel.\n\n\"And I really hope y'all will join me on our next sea expedition\" says Luke.\n\n\"Well it looks like that is all the time for today\" says Russel.\n\n\"I'm Brittany Spaniel\" says Brittany\n\n\"And I'm Russel Terrier\" says Russel\n\n\"And this is Good Morning Alabama wishing you a happy Monday\" they say together.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars are a negative aspect in the near future. Most people buy a vehicle so they can be in control of where they are going, how fast they're going, etc. Personally i would not prefer a machine taking me places all day. Driverless vehicles may have a technical difficulty which could result in an injury, or worst case scenario, a fatality. Not only is it endangering the operator and surrounding individuals, but also the manufacturer due to reliabilty regulations.\n\nIn reality, driverless cars is a cool topic to think about, but are they completely independent? The answer to that is no, well at least for now. Driverless vehicles use a bunch of different sensors, lasers and computers to figure out which way is which and to understand their surroundings. Although the programming of these smart cars remain quite complex, they still lack the ability to handle situations such as backing out of a drive way, going through construction zones, and what to do if there is an accident ahead. You might be thinking \"So what happens if the vehicle doesnt know what to do?\" If a smart vehicle doesnt know what to do in a situation, it allows you to take over, thus making driverless vehicles not completely driverless. Don't worry though, the vehicle alerts you in multiple ways if there is an issue in which you need to take into consideration, such as blinking lights on the wind shield, the drivers seat vibrates and talking to you through the speakers. The vehicle only pays attention if you pay attention, they have sensors in the steering wheel to make sure you have your hands on the wheel at all times, and a camera above watches you to make sure you keep your eyes on the road.\n\nThe driverless vehicle can also be very dangerous. Almost one hundred percent of the time, machines/computers have some sort of mishap or technical difficulty quite often. Some may be worse than others but most of the time they always malfunction. So why would you want a possible death bound machine taking you to your everyday day errands? Supposedly that is a risk people are willing to take. They should sop with the production completely and stick with the modern day transportaion.\n\nHaving a smart vehicle drive you around all day without having to invest any effort at all would be heaven, but it is just not possible right now. Some time or another the operator will always have to take over because smart cars are unfortunately not smart enough. driverless vehicle is false advertisement. They should be titled \"Assisted smart vehicle\" or something of that sort. If they are going to continue manufacturing these vehicles then they should at least keep them off of the market until they have worked out all of the flaws.\n\nDriverless vehicles are a good idea, but remain a complete disgrace to the world of transportation. Some people actually enojoy driving, and these machines dont allow you to do that. Driverless cars also propose great dangers to everyone in them or around them. Although they can be helpful to some people such as disabled individuals, we should stick with modern day transportation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In 1976 NASA got a blury camera shot which kinda looked like a face. Then they relised that the face on mars needs to be looked at agine. In 1998 NASA sent another ship to look at the face on mars agine. This time it loooked differnt is kinda looks more clearer than the other one. Then when they took back the pictuers of they face they were amazed what had happened to it.\n\nIn 2001 NASA sent more people to get pictures of the face with better camura. When the picuters returned to NASA they were stuned. The face looked so much differnt than the pictuer in 1998 it looked like somthing hit it. Then when the people came back to earth they heard about the news and the picture got released into the public. Then something happened someone leared that it was not a face on mars it's just a rock building.\n\nWhen NASA learned that it was just a rock building they started to loose hope with the face on mars but, something werid happend. When the wired thing happend they wanted to know what happend? When they saw the pictures they noticed that half of the face was smashed. Then they pointed out agine that the face was destryed but it still waan't really a face it was agine a stone builing. Then there was still no hope to find the face in the desert.\n\nAfter that there was the last trip to see if the face on mars was a face or a stone building?\n\nWhen they got to mars they took pictures and tryed to see if they could take a picture of it to close. Then they relesed that it only really was a rock building or thing. When they learned that they stared to give up on the subject and just forget about it. Then when there was only a littel group of people who still think there something on mars they kept on going and never give up.\n\nWhen they got really close to mars they noticed something it looked like a face but they could not be sure. When they got even closer they found the face on mars and they was very happy for themselves. After they came back to earth they told everyone that they found the face on mars. Then people tried to understand what they said beacuse they were told that there was no face on mars. After all that the face on mars is still there this very day and time and people want to see it in person like feet on mars and see the face on marsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The challenge of Exploring Venus is an article about how scientist want to find out new thing about the planet Venus. The Author in this text explain how scientist should explore venus and see what knew things we could find out about the planet. In the text it talks about creating better machines that could stand the heat on the planet enough to where we can transfore that knolegde back to earth. It also talks about the planets past and how it was coverd in water and there where sighns that the planet could stand life on it just like earth. All though Venus would be a good planet to explore the text also say that there is danger all over this planet because of the high heat level that the planet has cause its so close to the sun. There is huge storms with lightning that crashes down to the surface floor witch would make it dangrouse for humens to walk around the planet. To conclude the author does show alot of information in the text and scientise should try and explore the planet venus to find knew things out.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Nowadays, people are turning to be increasingly fascinated in the story of ancient and vintage stuffs such as cars, furniture, and even houses or building. In this essay, the factors that make more and more people interested in searching the history of house will be explored in detail, and the processes to figure out the history will be examined.\r\n\r\nThe first reason why people gain interest in their living is the process of construction. It is very interesting to know that how indegenious people construct this large building without any facility and modern equipment. For example, the process of building huge and beautiful pyramid in Egypt is still obscure as in that period, citizens did not have any trucks to transport the large bricks and did not have cranes to arrange the bricks. Secondly, the movies about predecessors attract the interest of people. To illustrate, Thai drama named Suriyothai, showing the culture and tradition of Thailand in previous of three century. Therefore, people gain interest about ancient building by watching movies and mysterious building process. \r\n\r\nIn order to find out the history of old house or building, there are many methods including search engine on the internet, books or newspapers in national libraries, and asking elderly. the first way is the easiest among three methods as you can search from Google, Google scholar, and Yahoo by typing the key words. Moreover, the national books and newspapers can be promising technique to search the information as some information in old books cannot be searched on the internet. Lastly, asking directly to old people who have been living in that area for many decades is also working methods to get the information. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, due to the interesting building processes and movies, the history of ancient building has been fascinated more and more among individuals. For the people who are eager of it can find the information by searching from the internet, reading books, and asking elder persons.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Community service instils empathy and a sense of responsibility. Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. I believe it has many advantages to offer rather than disadvantages for teenagers.\r\n\r\nVolunteering for community service is a good practice for teenagers it helps them understand various aspects of life and aspire them to be good citizens. These kinds of services develop them emotionally and teach them to counter various difficult situations. Such services are not only beneficial to the teenagers but also helps other members of society for example volunteering in old age home not only makes them benevolent but also gives them the idea of accountability, whereas for elderly people they act as a sense of accompanying and can be the assistance of various kinds. I rather strongly feel community service is a good alternative to spending free time idle and non-productive. Social service also makes teenager self-reliant and prepare them for essential key skills required for then to grow in the society like team building, adjusting with new people and social duty.\r\n\r\nHowever, there is some downside to these services especially for teenagers, since their young minds are extremely impressionable working in a community can expose them to the dark side of society which can be difficult for them to cope. There are chances of exploitation if left unsupervised. In some cases, teenagers lose their focus on their school and studies and fall into bad company. Such all incidents can be avoided if well supervised and worked in a balanced manner. \r\n\r\nIn my ,conclusion unpaid community work is a noble act and should be encouraged in every school. Such practices are idle for the all-around development of young minds and nurture them to be stand up citizens .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think that driverless cars are a very bad idea for many reasons. I do not think that a vehicle moving without anyone in it is a good idea. They sound cool but they wouldn't work well at all.\n\nHave you seen the commercials where a man has a talking car and he says something that aggrevates the car and the car locks it's doors? I think that that would probably end up happening. I think that a vehicle could have malfunctions and end up harming anyone in it because they couldn't get it to stop or get the doors open to jump out. Everyone thinks that more is always great but it isn't. A vehicle is made to be driven by a person. That's something teenagers look forward to. They can't wait to get their permit and license to drive around or go pick out their very first vehicle. No one wants a vehicle that can drive by it's self. I think that if I was a parent I wouldn't want to put my children in a vehicle that ran by itself because I'd have a constant fear that something will happen and they would get injured. Wrecks happen, how would a driverless car know when to stop if an accident had just occured seconds before? How could it stop buy itself? If their had to be a driver in there just incase something would to happen wouldn't it make since for them to just drive anyway? What if they fell asleep and the vibrating seat or the flashing lights didn't wake them up? What would happen then? I\n\nthink that we do need vehicles that take less gas and are bigger but I do not believe that we need cars that run by theirselves. Sometimes with the ways people drive an automatic car sounds like a good idea but you need to think of all the ways that it could be a wrong idea too. Many people will end up buying the car when it comes out because they wanna see what it does and everyone else will be doing it too. But I won't be one of those people. I'd rather drive all night driving somewhere than to fall asleep in my automatic car and not wake up because it stalled and I got wrapped around a tree.\n\nThe driverless car sounds more like a bad idea everytime it goes through my mind. I do not think that it is a good idea. I think that it will make auto accidents be the number one reason for deaths for a very long time. None of the things it includes is a good enough reason for someone to lose their life because their vehicle wouldn't stop on an icy road or multiple other reasons. I think that the manufacturers making these cars are just asking for lawsuits.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Heavy traffic is one of the most serious issues in busy cities such as New York, London and Tokyo. People often waste their time and gasoline just to escape from a traffic jam on holidays. What is worse, the traffic problem prevents an efficient transport of support to the damaged areas after disasters such as an earthquake. In my opinion, this can be attributed to several causes and there are several possible measures to implement.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, our unconscious behaviours often bring about a traffic jam. People tend to drive at a peak time without consideration, which ends up creating long queues for a similar destination. To solve this, the only logical action is to slightly change the time schedule and avoid rush hours. There is no benefit to being in a long tailback. (gridlock/ bottleneck./a town-centre bottleneck/ tailback/ snarl-up) on the way and with a small shift in plans they can. spend less time in traffic and more precious time where they want to be. In fact, some thoughtful people leave their homes in the early hours and spend about half a day at Tokyo Disney Land.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, the delay in road maintenance also creates congestion in countries with various natural disasters such as Japan, or China. Frequent earthquakes make cracks on the road surfaces and require repairs for a while, from which . traffic jams inevitably arise To overcome this situation, constant road checks by authorities can be one solution. They inspect important roads at night and find the possible flaws at an early stage, which diminishes the timespan of repairing. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, traffic problems are mainly caused by unthoughtful actions and road repairs, and the solutions would be optimal private planning or constant road inspection.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Cars will always remain useful and important because it is one of the best ways of transportation and everything is centered around them. Even though they are causing an obsurd amount of pollution. This can be reduced if cities start making changes such as repairing broken hazardous sidewalks, relocating attractions like malls, restaurants and gyms closer to the towns cars would be used drastically less. Some places in the world have already began making these changes and have even went as far as making a whole \"car-free\" day.\n\nIn europe passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions and it will continue to rise unless cars begin to be used less frequently. If every city builds their stores and attractions closer to the communities instead of on the \"outskirts\" of towns then there would be no need to use a car. Everyday an increasing amount of people ride their bikes to their job, out to eat etc. Weather it be for health and excersise or just the preferred mode of transportation it is probably the best alternative to a car due to how quick a bike is.\n\nAn upscale community of about 5,500 residents in Germany has gone ahead and began making remarkable changes toward limiting car use. In this community they have basically made the streets free of cars. Parking in the street, driveways, and home garages are banned you can only park in a parking garage which they have placed around the town or you can buy a space for $40,000 that includes a home of course. People that live in this enviroment actually prefer it and some have even said \"im much happier this way\" as opposed to using cars in the traffic jammed streets all the time.\n\nAnother city which has began to pave the path for future designs is Bogota. Every year for the past 3 years the capitol of Columbia has banned all cars for a day in attempt to promote and popularize alternative of transportation and reduce economic problems like smog. People in the city love this idea and almost all participate rain or shine. Since they have this great idea many parks and sports centers have resulted from it and a lot of sidewalks have been re-paved.\n\nFinally, All people should make an attempt to better their cities and speak out to people who can make it happen. Cars are not the future, they are causing many bad things to happen and should be used much less frequently. Places all over the world are realizing this and are already participating in the reduced use of cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "An Facial Action Coding System is valuable.\n\nCan you imagine an computer that knows when you're happy or sad ? How would you feel?Would you want to test one to see if its valuable ?Do you think its unvaluable and not worth the money?\n\nThe FACS would be valuable when something is wrong with someone but you can't tell.For example , if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, an similar ad might follow.Also, say if you frown, the next ad will be different.Do you think that an system can change and detect the way you feel ? I feel that it possibily can detect the way some people think about things.In the article , it says , \"The facial expressions for each emotipn are universal.\" It has an large effect on an new emotion-recognition software tracks.It also says that each expression is compared against a neutral face. Which means that the face would show no emotion and it would be just an straight face.It would be an good idea because someone can show happiness and be hurt and sad in the inside.I would like to see how an ccomputer software determine my emotion.\n\nNowadays,there is some much technology.Technology does everything us now they're determining human emotions.In fact, humans perform the same impressive \"calculation\" every day.For example,by probably telling how a friens is feeling simply by the look on her face. An Facial Action Coding System is valuable.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In this passaege the aurthour talks about exploring venuse surface and the many challeges that come along with it. The aurthour main focus is how the planet is very simalar to earth in size and density, and some points it is the nearest planet to us in the solar system. These are just some of the reasons that the aurthour belives that venus is a planet worth the dangers if we were to explore it.\n\nThe aurthour dose a good job at making his points on why venus is a planet that could be worth creating technology that can take all of the physical tortue that venus will throw at it. He explane many of the drawbacks and dangers to exploring venus's surface. fro how it has the hottest surface areas of all planets in our solar system, or that it has an extremly high atmosphic pressure that can destroy submeranes ment to withstad presuress from the deepest part of the sea. He talks about these details in depth describing why this is a drawback\n\nThe aurthour also talks about why exploring venus would be good for the human\n\nrace as a hole. Such as points like venus is the nearest planet to earth at certain periods time, or the fact that venus used to be coverd in seas and more than likly\n\nhad the cindition to main tain life and is also alot like the earth.\n\nThe aurthou also makes it a poit to discuss the solution to the problem of exploringg mars and which organzation are working to find a solution. such as NASA is working on a material called silicon carbanade that was able to withstand the chaos know as venus surface for up to three weeks. or the idea of using an old technology called mechanical computors wich mainly used gears to claculate math problem rather than digital like modern computers. Inwhich most people would take this as a drawback while he explanes that this would work better due the fact it is quit simply more durable.\n\nThese are the main reasons i belive that the aurthour did a good job. in sheding light on this secnarioSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think this can help and be useful for things because it can recognize emotions through how your bone structure in your face is.\n\nThis could be effective for lots of things like when the police are interrogating soemone the FACS could help tell what they're feeling they can't figure out if he's guilty or not.This would also be very educational by know how people in histroy felt like people in war or art.This excerpt is making Mona Lisa as an example because the machine recognized how she felt when posing for the painting.\n\nNow some people may look at this and not like it which I can understand.Some might say that we need our privacy and don't want a machine getting in our business.These machines would be used in a responsible and effective way like interrogations,learning,therapy,and knowing how your young kid feels.Depression is really common nowadays and if therapists had this they could help depressed people more by knowing how they feel.This could bring down the percent of the world that is depressed or suicidal and could stop suicides and keep more families happy.A great department for this is health when going in to get checked out by the doctor,doctors could find out if or how much pain your in which then could help with what kind of medicine or treatment would be good for you.\n\nSo from what I've read and thought of this system seems very useful in a lot of things and a big one is depression and people who struggle with their feelings.I am totally agreeing with this being effective and can't see a problem with this besides someone wanting their privacy of feelings to themselves,but we wouldn't be using this when people don't want us to.There would be a average amount of people who would dislike this but I think more people will find this problem solving.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Laughter important The last two weeks school I told best news ever My mom told I would flying I excited I nt seen family awhile Even though plane couple times I still scared I never flew going something extremely new Even though I excited scared time I kept thinking seeing everyone family even meeting family members I never seen heard School seemed going slow I anxious When two weeks passed I already bags packed ready go My mom trying cry anyways I walked threw metal detectors long hall way finally I got plane On plane ride I thinking meeting real dad s I thinking whole time I plane I landed pm day I glad I tired My sister picked airport Me sister nt close relationship kind awkward She started talking times younger fun Since I I wanted see lot family members family members already knew I town news travels fast When aunt s seen shock said I grew much I happy one best moments ever I met many people especially family friends amazing I even met moms school friends Days I got text message one sisters I never seen met happy know I town She told dad wanted see spend time together made plans I really nervous time I seen dad I really young That fifteen years ago I really nt know I going say I finally going meet I scared I decided take sister cousin would nt awkward We decided meet grandmas house I nt seen awhile unfortunately nt When dad got I nt know I nt recognize even sister We gave hugs When got house quiet dad could say CAPS I grew much He started talking silly little things I I little girl made us laugh All laugh made cry little If nt laughing relationship dad could nt betterSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars being brought into the world sounds like a dream come true, no more worrying about horrible car accidents, or having the urge to text and drive at the same time, right? Wrong. Having driverless cars may sound like a good idea, but to me they're not. Especially when a persons' fate in being messed with.Plus bringing driverless cars into mind would also bring an even lazier world, and people that work as driving instructors would be out of a job. Having driverless cars will lead to humans becoming lazier than they already are, twice as many car accidents as there were before, and some lots of people around the world wouldn't have a job.\n\nCar accidents can happen anywhere at anytime, and they are not a pretty sight to look at. Most car accidents happen during \" work traffic\" and on the highway. Now think of how many more car accidents would happen if we have \"smart\" cars driving by themselves. The damge would be horrific. In the passage, paragraphs 7-8, they talk mainly about how even though these are computer engineered cars, they still would need human assistance if nessecary. A line from paragraph 7 says \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselevs, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" This sentence showed that even though these are smart cars, humans still have to be alert at all time. But what if the technology in the smart car refuses to provide smart alerts and warnings to the human? This would lead to a huge accident. And since the law doesn't know wheather to blame it on the manufracturer or the driver, its completely pointless to take the risk of putting these cars on the road.\n\nHuman laziness is another reason that we should not have driverless cars. This new idea just gives humans more reasons not to use their brains. Not having car skills, like focusing on the road,and knowing road signs wouldn't be helping our brains develop more. And having driverless cars should just mean that everyone should throw their brains in the trash.\n\nLast but not least, jobs. Alot of people all around the world have the job of being a driving instructor. People get made and make a living for teaching other people how to drive good. If we take learning how to drive, and replace it with a computer just doing all the work, we would have alot of people without a job. And I'm pretty sure there would be a huge controversy about it. Plus, learning how to drive should be a special, and very big part of becoming an adult. If we replace that with technology, then the next generations wouldn't know how it feels to work for you freedom.\n\nBasically, what I'm trying to prove is that bringing driverless cars into this world, would bring more accidents, worldwide laziness, and jobless people. Chaos would be among us. So I do not think we should have driverless cars, beacause it would keep humans really safe, and it would keep the \"tradition\" of learning how to drive a car living on through many generations to come.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Cars are a big thing in our life and we need to get from one place to another. Cars were invented back in the 1800's. The cars are powered by gasoline, but that resource is running low. So in the future we must find a new resource, so that we can transport. Every year cars are gettin newer and have new features like some have wifi in them. People say that driveless cars are a good thing, but some say they are bad. I believe that driveless cars are a good thing because they can decrease the chance of injury's or death, the Traffic Jam Assistant can assist us if we need it, and they keep us safe.\n\nThe first reason why I believe that driveless cars are a good thing is because they decrease the chance of getting injured or being dead. Some cars today are making cars more stronger. They can tell when there's been a crash and how to avoid one. If a road is blocked they can navigate to a new road without crashing. And these are my examples of why driveless cars decrease the chance of getting injured and being dead.\n\nAnother reason why I believe that driveless cars are good is because The Traffic Jam System can assist us if we need it. Like they make sure that were paying attention to the road that we are driving on. They know when we have our hands are on the wheel by using special touch sensors. The seat vibrates when it knows that the car is in danger. And these are my examples of why The Traffic Jam System can assist us.\n\nThe last reason why I believe that driveless cars are good is because they keep us safe. Like when the system is driving and it gets confused they driver can take over and drive. The car company's are trying to find new ways to keep the driver safe. The trucks are being built stronger so that they can break less. The car can cause less fires. And these are my exmples of why they keep us safe.\n\nThere are roads being built right now to test the driveless car so that we can have more evidence if it is safe for the people inside the car. There are laws being made to inform the makers of them to add an automatic brake when it has a person in front. If the driveless system fails then the person can takeover and drive. People say that drivelss cars good, but some say they are bad. I believe that driveless cars are a good thing and we will wait for what the future has for cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Martians on Mars? Many people belive that the \"face\" found on Mars in 1976 was created by martians! Do I agree? No, i do not agree.\n\nFirst, NASA's equipment is the most hight-quality equipment out there. So saying that the equipment they use is creating false information is most definetly wrong.\n\nAlso,if the \"face\" on Mars is suppoesdly made by aliens then why arent we studying the blob next to it? They are almost exactly the same except for the fact that one has an uncanny resemblance of a face.\n\nHowever, is it possible that NASA is saying all of these things to prevent people from thinking that there is infact life on Mars? Yes, of course it is, but NASA researchers have stated that finding life on Mars would help them.\n\nMost importantly, Garvin stated, if there were any UFOs on Mars the camera would most likely pick it up. The same thing applies to pyrimids.\n\nSo do i belive the \"face\" on Mars was created by aliens? No.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program because you will be able to go site seeing in other countries.\n\nYou will also learn how to speak the languages of were you go.\n\nAnother thing you may learn is hours care.\n\nOne more thing that you will learn is what other countries need support in.\n\nOne reason you would want to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program is to have the oppurtunity to go site seeing in other countries.\n\nSome of thoes countries are China, and the United Kingdom.\n\nYou will probibily go to more countries but each of them will be unike.\n\nOne way they will be unike is by their arts and arckitexture.\n\nAnother thing that you will see different in the countries is their fifferent quizines.\n\nYou may also learn how to speak the languages of the countries you go to.\n\nOn the other hand you have already learned the hardest language in the world if you are from America.\n\nThe one thing that makes English the hardest language is because of the homifonnes.\n\nThere is no other language that has words that have more than one meaning for a word.\n\nSo it should be a little easer to learn the countries language.\n\nMost likely if you do join the participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program you will be shipping hourses.\n\nSo you will probibly learn how to take care of the hourses.\n\nOne thing you will learn is how much gran to give the.\n\nAnother thing is when to feed the hourses the grane.\n\nOne other thing you might learn is what the other nations are needing after the war.\n\nThey might need cows for dary and meat.\n\nThey might need sheep for there food and wool. So they might need a lot of stuff after the war.\n\nSo if you joined the participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program you would have a lot of options of learning that you can do.\n\nYou could go see important things about other countrys history.\n\nYou can even lean a nother language.\n\nAlso you will probibly be with horses all the way across the Atlantic ocean.\n\nOne last thing, you can also learn how the other countries need support.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood author memoir happy grateful gratitude I say happy story author said neighborhood despite customs else cultures came together great solidarity friendship I say happy author happy enjoy many friends family come everyday fun another mood grate full author says story I always grateful parents love sacrifice The author says authors parents loved lot went every day trying get money make sure author good life author greatful Now author gratitude things author s parents parents created traditional Cuban home also passed rich culonary skills love cooking I celebrated first birthdays The author gratitude things without things parents would nt todaySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Can you see a driverless car in the future? Google is working on a project. A car that can drive on its own. No one will ever need to buy a car again. There would just be driverless taki's everywhere.\n\nRight now in this time, Google made cars that can drive by its self. These cars has senssors. It can detect if theres an object behind it, infront of it, And on the sides. these cars can drive its self to any location, you would just have to put it in the gps. Google cars aren't truly driverless; the person in the car would have to do it is pull in and out. The longest distence a driverless car has driven was half a million miles without crashing.\n\nEvery automakers is trying to make the best of the best. Making a car that can do everything. A car that dosn't need no one to pull in or out. A car that takes half the fuel that any car would be taking in this present time. A car that can detect people when there inside the car. A car that can travel million's of miles without crashing or breaking down. The best car creation built in history.\n\nAutomakers are continuing their work on the assumption that the problem ahead will be solved. Tesla has a project a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot for 90 percent of the time. Other automakers such as Mercedes-Benz, Audi, And nissan plan to have cars that can drive them self by 2020.\n\nThere will be so much automakers that will try to make a car thats driverless, but the car is going to end up being so expensive that no one will want to but it. Google is trying to make so many cars that can drive its self, park its self, pull out its self and pick anyone up by its self. Google wants to make so many of these cars, Because google dosn't want people to buy cars anymore. All the driverless google cars will be public-transport taxi system. The taxi's will offer far more flexibility than a bus. Google believes such cars would fundamentally change the world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Different shows today are becoming a famous worldwide. Some assume that having various kinds of tv programs is a better option for individuals. However, others think that it can cause a detrimental effect on the standard of television shows . This essay will discuss both views along with my opinion.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, having more channels can give more freedom to select the shows that they want to see . To elaborate, if television contains so many kinds of reality programs it can provide a sense of independence for viewers to choose the programs that they like to watch during different situations. Therefore, it assists the people to get rid of their boredom , and eventually , be more entertained while veiling the show. For example , if a person is feeling bore while watching a cultural program they have the option to change it and watch other channels like sports , and wildlife so that they can be entertained by those shows. Moreover , different shows can also provide several types of details about many topics such as , they can acquire knowledge by watching different shows like sports , culture and traditions., And as a result , they can utilise that knowledge in various circumstances in life.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, increasing number of channels can also lower the quality of different shows . It is obvious that there are so many reality programs today in television with the same content and sometimes people try to hide these themes the show by various kinds of games or drama so that they can increase the GRP rating of their channels. However, those changes can easily recognise by individuals. Therefore , it can lead to boredom in people by viewing the same content , as a result , viewers become less gravitated towards tv plans in their leisure time.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, it is obvious that,rather than visualising one program . I personally recommend including different kinds of shows because it makes viewers more amused and knowledgeable.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Today in the world, are you happy? Happy with how the world is growing up and acting or ashamed on how it is pleading to those who live in it to finally change for the better which isn't happening. Yet some children of mother nature or of the universe do believe that only living off of the non-materialistic ideas in life can help you get farther. However many people take pride in indulging on the sins that used excessively can't get them out of the hole they were forced into. Sterotypical people who contradict themseleves or those whom tend to be hypocrytes for that they don't understand always fail to stand for the better. I believe, that in all honesty, no one should be happy with the location of where they stand in society. Due to how far technology has gotten not even within the past two centuries, it must be stopped as a whole. Now let's actually discuss our main objective to throw out the window. The topic to fully dive into, based upon facts and personal opinions, Can stopping the mechanical reproduction of automobiles truly help the world out?\n\nJust think about it, what are the possibilies that are being entitled within this topic in particular; but most importantly is there any way the upcoming generations can switch everything or everyone around, to change the mindset of all of the billions of people living on the planet to make it up for the better since we all know the way we are heading is not the place we should go? How fast or slow can this idea be put into place? The world we now know is indeed needing to be resureccted based alone on how much harm we have caused within the past few centuries. If you rely on technology too much doesnt that hurt yourself even more in the long run? Strategies or new found plans should be taken into consideration based on the facts presented and dismissed in the past because the way we are living and teaching those those who are newly born, should know that the world around them isn't right anymore, and direly needs help to improve. The society we are now dealing with, needs to play a new game or the world will end in more corruption than originally thought would happen. In all, isn't it good sometimes, to think about what is wrong and what you could do to help out? Now just sit and think to see where your own mind could lead you. Down the path were the world is once again healthy and happy? Or the path of destruction?\n\nThe path of destruction can lead to many implications based on health, or survival of the fittest, based on social status or skills gained in a hard cold world mostly dependent on how or when you grew up, due to how society changes over time. Scientists know based on their own work that the atmosphere can only handle so much pollution until it gives out and the world as we do know, learn, and live with can die. Do you want to see the slow demise of where you live, the place where is the only home known to man of the human species? Seeing death upon the streets due to failing natural health means, does it not actually hurt the heart to see such things? Plus car's do take too much space needed for other necesisties such as more room or storage to live a basic daily life in. Yes we may have the technology to fix natural things artificially but does it make it right to think that it will work? Cars cause pollution, pollution cases for health issues, health issues lead to over crowding at the hospital with disease, work load increases and those who work will tire and then eventually get sick themselves for which the most able to achieve end for this ongoing process could be death. Now do you understand where I might be getting at? Being sick mentally or physically is just the first step into a change in mind where all can go to hell and break loose or done in a good way, could change the future generations to restart where we all began. This is all just the basics of the wrong path imagine what could happen if nothing is done to stop the hurting and resume the healing.\n\nAlthough that is the begining of an era that could happen due to stupidity or greed could you do us all a favor and imagine a realistic dream of what could happen if we dropped technology as a whole? All the metals could be recycled for greater purposes! Cars will lead us to see a whole new or happier society where socializing could be the end of all problems. Our health will be in tip top shape, everyone will finally understand what it could mean to live in harmony. Money not spent on transportation could be saved for greater purposes similar to expenses for your child's college maybe even for the advancement of useful environmentally friendly sciences to be learned or help funded or whichever other purpose you can think of. Yes one bad point is that many jobs could be lost but there is always back up plans that you could create for the worst case scenario. However, otherwise society will be happy and health issues should decrease if many of us chose to instead walk or use a bicycle to our destination, so isnt that a better dream to dream? \"Keep Moving forward\" as stated by Walter Disney, can that dream not be achieved by any means to increase the chances of a world where anything is possible to demand or chase after? Failure doesnt mean to give up but to rather keep trying to improve the ratio of failing to succeding. Cars may be important now, but in an alternate universe, what if they were never invented?\n\nIn conclusion these familes who are giving up their main source of transportation unless required, they are doing the right thing by taking the first step into a new way of life. Giving up cars is giving up the chance to accidentally hurt those by made a bad desicion. Althought depleting these choices of actions will or should decrease if this topic remains to be included as a new trend for a lack of better word majorly helpful to whose with crime records of the possibility of earning. Fighting with reason is better than to not fight at all. If your standing and doing nothing to help the environment around you, then don't you think you should consider the consequences for future generations down the road? Consider both sides of the argument, which is right or which is wrong to proceed with? The happier life versus the hurting of the world? I can only do nothing but act upon myself to show that what is going on is a coincidence merely to the fact that you are here reading my words. Can my words help from afar or not at all can only be determined by yourself.\n\nSo be wise and consider, do you chose left for healing or right for hurting?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Author concludes story paragraph show hope meaning hibiscus Saeng The author also ends story like spring time new beginings everything comes back life starts regrow say snow melts geese return Its saying right time secnd chance It failed test Saeng said She tore leaf shruddy pests shows dying hope hybisus symbolized So thats author ended like bc shows new heqionqrysSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In today's society, people have become more and more dependent on technology. It is everywhere a person goes, whether that be to school, work, and even outside. In some ways, technology is good, but in moderation. For example, it helps with communication between long distances. Although technology has shown no sign of slowing down, it has began to become unrealistic with driverless cars. Companies should not be allowed to continue to develop driverless cars because they are unrealistic, dangerous, and can bring up legal conflcts.\n\nIn the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author makes the driverless cars seem exciting and futuristic, when is actuality, they are unrealistic. The article states that each car needs to have sensors everywhere along the car in order for it to work. The driver also has to remain alert, which makes the car not completely \"driverless.\" Driverless cars are also unrealistic because not everyone wants to manufacture these cars. The article explains how \"it is illegal even to test computer-driven cars\" (\"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" 9).\n\nThis explains that in order for it to work, each car in the world would have to decide whether they want to have driverless cars also and manufacture their cars with this technology. With that being said, driverless cars are unrealistic because each manufacturer would have to agree to driverless cars in order for the sensors to work.\n\nAnother disadvantage of having driverless cars is the safety reasons. Companies today still have not figured out how to prevent safety problems from happening, which is causing companies to be reluctant to produce cars without drivers. The article states, \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents\" (\"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" 7). This explains that even with all of those sensors and the hard work put into the technology provided in a driverless car, they are still not safe. All in all, driverless cars bring up safety considerations since they will not fully be able to drive be itself.\n\nBecause driverless cars are not completely driverless, they can cause accidents to occur. In this case, it would be hard to tell if it was the cars fault for malfunctioning, or the driver's fault for not staying alert. The article states that \"lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with an alert driver,\" hence the multiple states with laws against driverless cars. The article also states, \"Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer?\" (\"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" 9) This explains the rising legal issues that would result from continuing the development of driverless cars.\n\nIn the end, companies should not continue the development of driverless cars because they are unrealistic, result in safety problems, and cause legal issues to form. It is inevitable that technology will continue to develop into amazing wonders, but driverless cars are too unrealistic. They would require functioning sensors at all times and for every car to be driverless. Along with that, they result in safety and legal concerns is accidents occur. With that being said, companies should not continue the development of driverless cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars could be a nice use for transportation but personally I would not purchase a driverless car. There are many reason why I would not purchase a driverless car. For me driving is fun and is time consuming. In my opionon the driverless idea had to be made from a lazy person. In all actuallity, even though the car might drive itself , you will still have to be alert and watch the road for your own safety. Drivers have this thing called a blindspot and to think the car is going to be its own driver has to mean its going to have a blindspot also. You the driver might see things the car might not. Also when driving you dont just drive for yourself...you drive for the person in fornt , back and side of you.\n\nFor example, say your in the driverless car and your on the highway. A young reckless driver comes along doing 95 mph and your doing 75mph. The highway is busy and you doze off beacuse the car drives itself and your thinking your going to be alright. So this driver comes along and decides to cut lanes even though its not enough space. Its a car right behind you and in frotn of you but in the next lane. The young driver cuts lanes and you driverless car first response could be to brake. Once your car brakes the other car that is directly behind did not see the young driver and is not being cautious so once the driverless car brakes they were not alert enough to brake immediatly and slams into the back of your driverless car. Now this whole time your almost sleep so your no where near alert and now your in an accident because you put your safety in the hands of a driverless car. With this same scenario the driverless car could avoid the accident. Say the driver in the driverless car is alert and watching the road even though the car drives itself. The driver sees the young driver doing 95 mph and sees he wants to get in the same lane as the driverless car but there is not enough space to switch lanes so the driver takes over and starts to drive the car manually. The first thing to come to the driverless car drivers mind is to gently brake to let the other cars know to slow down. That way the accident is avoided but all drivers are not the same so the driverless car idea is still not good to me.\n\nCars were made to have a driver. The idea of a driverless car is obserde to me. Like in the passage it asks who would be responsible for the driving laws being broken. That could cause alot of confusion and kaos. So the driverless car thing should have just been left alone.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is a dangers job but so me of them know how to work with it and work their way around it so they don't get hurt at all , and in the text it says that \" Modern computer are enormously powerful,and quick, but tend to be more delicate when it comes to extreme physical conditions \" , that was found in paragarh 7.\n\nThe venus has the hottest surface temperature more then other planet in the solar\n\nit says in the text that \" Venus\n\nhas the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though mercury is closer to our sun\".\n\nBeside all them things the waether\n\nis bad because they have big and powerful earthquakes and scary lightning , and it says that in the text \" Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, amd frequent lightning stikes to probes to land onits surface\",SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Some scientists believe the image was created by aliens, but I believe it is just a natural landform. In the end, the picture actually shows it looking like a butte or mesa -- landforms common around the American West. When uploading pictures, they captioned them formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth. It also appeared on another photo that it was just a natural landform, not an alien monument. There are many examples for this reasoning.\n\nOne example is the very first time they discovered the Face. In the article, it said scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa; they're common around Cydonia, but it had unusual shadows making it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh. In 1998, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team got a picture of the face again. They made sure it was clear so people would believe. As soon as they got the picture, they put it on a JPL website; it revealed the so called alien artifact was just a natural landform. Although, some people did not agree.\n\nMany people were unsatisfied because there was just a landform. Some people did not believe it was a natural landform; Very few scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact, but that still meant some did. When NASA took the picture, they snapped it 10 times sharper than the original. Since it was winter when they took the picture, that meant it was cloudy on the Red Planet. The Face could've been blocked by the wispy clouds. According to the text, skeptics said it could've been alien markings were hidden by haze. Everyone who believed it was made by aliens wanted another picture; they took another picture in 2001 that was even more clear on a cloudless summer day and found out something different.\n\nThey zoomed in closer for another picture; the team captured and extraordinary image using the maxium resolution. That way, no one could say it wasn't clear enough. To be more specific, each pixel spanned 1.56 meters. In the article, Garvin said you can discern digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size, meaning if there were objects ins the picture, you could see every detail to figure out what it was. The picture showed it was the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa; in other words, landforms common around the American West.\n\nEven though some thought the Face was created by aliens, it was proven that it really was just a landform. They were able to justify by the research NASA did. There were some ups and downs, but all of it led to the answer behind the face. It took them 3 tries, but they finally got what they wanted; it was the case of mysterious Face on Mars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Pollution from fossil fuels has plagued the world in recent times and environmentalists have voiced their concern about rising global temperatures. One of the ways to decrease the influence of carbon exhausts is to limit the consumption of gasoline-powered cars and other vehicles. \r\n\r\nOne of the ways to do that is to make fossil fuel cost prohibitive in order to limit the number of vehicles operating with traditional energy. While the proposed solution can address the issue, its impact would be limited. Throughout ,history population still tended to use cars, when gasoline prices rose. Moreover, supply chains are too dependent on gas-powered trucks at the moment, as they don't have a sufficient alternative. Furthermore, aeroplanes are one of the biggest polluters in the world and we do not have a viable substitute on the horizon either.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, investment in new technologies like hydrogen fuel, which has a negligible carbon footprint, will have a more considerable impact. Today Porsche is the main proponent of the above technology and successfully demonstrated that the transition to alternative energy can be achievable. In the end, R&D is always more expensive than a simple price hike, however, the upside is much bigger.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, people calling for increasing the cost of fuel have a point. The proposal can lower the harmful effects of pollution. Yet, a better alternative is to invest in R&D and new technologies which some of the most famous companies are already adopting. So in my opinion, the proposal is not the best as some people think.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the atricle, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" the author describes a new program called the Facial Action Coding System. This new software allows comoputes to identify human emotions such as happiness, sadness, anger, and even fear. The author mentions the use of this program in classrooms. Using this newly invented device in schools would give students a new oportunity to learn based on how they feel.\n\nIf these devices were installed in school computers, they would immediately benefit the students. The device would be able to detect if a student is becoming bored with a lesson. If this is detected, the computer could alter the lesson to make the pupil interested again. If a students is sad, the computer would be able to show a video, picture, or ad that would make the student happy again. If it is detected that the student is becoming confused, the lesson could be changed to help the student better undertand what he or she is trying to learn. There are multiple ways that the computer program could really help the student learn quicker. The pupils will also want to learn, because the lessons will be specified just for them. The computer could become like their best friend.\n\nOn the other hand, using this new computer software could cause problems. The students could become too attatched to the computer. If this happens, the computer could damage their eyes. They will also lack a social life outside of their computer. It is important for children to interact with other kids. If the computers are used for learning, teachers will not be neccesary. The students will prefer learning from their personalized computer and physical teachers will no longer be needed. There will no longer be a need for school buildings, and millions of teachers across the globe will loose their jobs. It is importnt to have a personal relationship with people around you.\n\nIn conclusion, the use of Facial Action Coding System in schools will be very beneficial to students. We will not need teachers to teach our students, and they will enjoy learning. The program will be specific to them, and increase their learning abilities. Students will also be able to take their device anywhere, and constantly learn new things. Without these devices, students are forced to learn evrything the exact same way. No two students are exactly alike, and each one deserves a personalized learning plan.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Do think computer s good Well I There many reasons I think For example possitive effect people teaches handeye coordination allows people talk online people One reason think computers good positive effect people Do nt want happy well computers online fun source And learn lot computer Another reason computers teaches handeye coordinbation Handeye coordination excellent skill need life For example lets say want play baseball handeye coordination trip brake something nt good No good But better handeye coordination probably would nt fallen The reason interact others online You go chat rooms Or go gaming sources interact people And go online dating The computer greet way meet new people share characteristics If already computer fine But nt need get one And I right People nt computer jb people jobs time use computer In conclusion need get computer Why well alot stuff computer For example teach hand eye coordition chat online friends Also gives possitive effectSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "The solar system has many interesting planets and those planets have many interesting landmarks. The Face on Mars just happens to be one of them. The face was found in a region of Mars called Cydonia. I feel as though it is a coincedence that a natural landmark on our neighborring planet looks like a human face. Many people say that The Face on Mars is just a legend, but we have scientifical proof of a face on Mars. The Face on Mars isn't an alien creation, but it is a natural landmark.\n\nThe Face on Mars is a natural landmark. It's a natural landmark because not only has it been there for a long time, but over the years we have found that it is a natural landform not an alien monument(JPL website). Many Hollywood movies have used the term \"that face on Mars,\" but many people think that the face is evidence of life on Mars. Some scientists have compared the face to landmarks in the USA called buttes or a mesa. Many people also say that the face resembles an Egyptian Pharoah.\n\nOn the other hand, some people specifically NASA has used The Face on Mars as a way to show that some things are important for taxpayers to see. Like I mentioned before Hollywood has made many big selling movies about The Face on Mars. Also, many books and magazines have used The Face as a headliner. Some NASA defenders has said that they wish there was some sort of an ancient civilization on Mars to use as a motive.\n\nThe Face on Mars is a cool natural landmark. It was located in Cydonia an area of Mars. The Face isn't a legend at all. There is real scientific proof of a face. The Face on Mars isn't a hoax either. Many people think that it is a legend and a hoax, but it is a real natural landmark. The Face on Mars is not an alien creation, but it is a natural landmark. It deserves some attention.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Have you ever heard somone talk about the \"Face on Mars\" in books, films, tv, or haunted grocery store checkout lines? Well, in 1976, NASA discovered what looked like an Egyptian face on Mar's suface. Many have thought of this to be the work of aleins because the pictures look like there are pyramids and shacks located in the area, but NASA has proven that to be false.\n\nThis Egyptian face was, in fact, not made by aliens like many have believed. The \"Face of Mars\" is actually a lava dome that formed like a butte/mesa roughly the same height as Mar's surface. A butte ot mesa is a landform that is common around the American West. \"Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh.\" (p.2) Therefore the \"face\" we see is shadows casting over the butte/mesa shaped lava dome creating the image of a human face. \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars,\" says Garvin. (p.12)\n\nIn conclusion, the \"Face of Mars\" was not the work of aliens, but only a lava dome at the surface of the Red Planet. There are many who would still disagree, but NASA has researched and proven the \"Face\" was not made by aliens.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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