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"content": "It is undeniable that most companies rely on interviews for hiring new employees, but some people believe that this dependence on interviews is wrong and that other alternatives should be preferred as they are better. I believe that interviews are a reliable method, and the other methods cannot be considered more effective.\n\nThere are many reasons why interviews are suitable for hiring new employees. Firstly, through the interview, the recruiters can get an idea about the personality and social skills of the potential employees. In interviews, there is face-to-face interaction, and the candidates have to answer impromptu questions, from which personality traits can be judged. Also, by asking some case study-type questions, employees can judge traits like the ability to handle pressure, confidence and the ability to think outside the box.\n\nIn addition, although there are many other methods for hiring, none of them could be considered superior to interviews. One the other common method is the written test, which is good to judge the theoretical knowledge of the person. However, this method cannot give a good idea about the personality of the candidate. By contrast, through interviews, employers can judge both the knowledge and temperament of the potential employee. Moreover, the written test is fallible to cheating as sometimes candidates can take outside help.\n\nAnother selection process is a group discussion, which is good where a major job requirement is conversational and persuasion skills for instance sales jobs. They are really not suited for technical jobs because these are not customer oriented. On the other hand, interviews hold good for any type of job as the interviewer can frame questions to test the particular skills they require.\n\nTo conclude, I would like to reiterate that the preference for interviews for hiring among employers is justified as interviews have advantages over other commonly adopted methods.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" the author presents facts about how the cars drive themselves, and how a human is still needed for absolute safety. My point of view is that cars that can drive themselves aren't needed.\n\nSome people may agree with driverless cars, but I don't. From what I can tell about driverless cars, is that they don't even fully drive themselves yet. They still require a human at the wheel in order to be able to go around a construction site. The text states\"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation required.\" If it is not a driverless car, than why try to tell people it is. Humans are already driving all over the world, and doing a good job of it.\n\nFrom what I can tell, nobody needs to make a car that can drive itself. They only need to improve cars that we humans drive to make it safer and easier for us. The main reason they are trying to make these driverless cars is because they are trying to prevent accidents. But there is an alternate way of doing that. You can help drivers be more aware of there sorroundings. We have already started doing so by placing cameras on the back of the car for driving backwards. So if manufacturers would just put the camera on the left and right side of the cars than they could help people see past that blind spot. Right now people have to look away from where they are going to see if there is somebody else in the lane next to them. If it just so happens that they are in their blind spot, than they may think that it is safe to switch lanes and end up getting in a crash instead. It's not hard for us to drive ourselves, it just that we need help with some things that are challenging for us.\n\nCars don't need to drive themselves. People just need another way of seeing where they can't see so that they know it is actually safe. Drivers shouldn't need to take over and do what a car can't do. The car should help the human with what they have trouble doing.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Traditions and standards of behaviour have long been integral parts of society, serving as a defining aspect of different nationalities and tribes. Today, there is a rising concern about the significance of those inheritances in modern society. I believe certain traditions should be preserved, while other customs, causing unnecessary burdens, should be eliminated from modern life.\r\n\r\nSome traditional and moral standards play a crucial role in preserving the identity of a nation and serving a good purpose. For example, respect for older people exists in many societies and forms a basis for good social relationships. Another simple example is how people perform a handshake when they meet, which shows the level of politeness and respect for another person. Such gestures and behaviour standards should persist in society because they generally benefit humanity.\r\n\r\nHowever, certain traditions are not worth spending time or money on and do more harm than good. For example, one of the most burdensome customs in the world is Uzbek weddings, which are generally known for a large number of guests invited and overly expensive restaurants where they are held. Uzbeks work almost their entire lifetime to accumulate enough money to organize such weddings for their sons and daughters. These traditions bear little benefit for people, and the amount of time and dedication wasted on them could be spent on more valuable activities.\r\n\r\nIn a nutshell, every nation has custom social norms and traditions which form its identity. But there are also plenty of practices which only exist for demonstrative purposes of power and wealth, which, I believe, do not have a place in contemporary society.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The chart below shows the percentage of ordinary in owned and rented in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.\r\n\r\n The bar chart provides information about the proportion of everyday in owned and rented compromise in England and Wales during the period from 1918 to 2011.\r\n\r\n Overall, it is obvious that the percentage of apartment which were bought increased, whereas the proportion of building rented decreased over the whole period. Moreover, in 1971, the figures for both items stood at the same number.\r\n\r\n In 1918, more everyday renting reconciliation than everyday owning compromise were chosen, approximately 87% and roughly 23%,respectively.Although renting building was more popular than buying box from 1939 to1961,the statistics for both stayed at 50% in 1971.Furthermore, the proportion of renting building was less than the owning building in 1981, 40% and 60%, respectively. During the rest of the period, owning building was more universal than renting building.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Cars polut the environment so a couple governments banned them. the bennifits of banning cars are actually better than some one would think. An advantage to banning cars is less polution, less clutter in the street and a happier life.\n\nLess polution is great especially with all of the machines running now adays. polution causes holes to from in the atmosphere, the atmosphere is what hoilds in the air we breath. The atmosphere also plays a much larger role in our way of life. Ever heard of the word global warmming? Well itws because the earths outside temerature is hotter then what it should be, because there are holes in the ozone layer. The ozone layer is like insulation in your house it keep cold air in on hot summer days. most polution comes from cars alone just because they are used so much byt everyone.\n\nHaving less clutter in the streets is always a good thing. Having less cars will lead to less accidentrs and less fatalities. People will not worry as much and it'll cause less stress. with having less cluttered streets that means more people will be walking by stores and resteruants, which leads to more buisness for store owners.\n\nliving a happy life in very important. I believe that if your not happy then your not living right. Banning cars reducess stress and stress mAKES PEOPLE UN HAPPY AND NOT LIVE LIFE TO THE FULLEST.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "well drivless cas are good but, also bad. They are good beacuse, they can have everyone safe and people wouldnt need to have a drivers license to be driving , incase of emergencys they can just get in the car and go where is needed.It can be bad because it would be putting polices offecers of out of a job becuase they wouldnt take out people for wreckless drving or violating driving laws. Also they are deppending on electronics to get them to place to place which is not very reliable or well on their part , that is my possition on this matter.\n\nMy oppinion is that it's very good, you would save a lot of money on gas and use that for other necesary things, \"The car he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a buss\"(1). it has a \"GPS reciever\"(4). So it knows where to go and well while its driving you can get ready for where ever you may have to go. saves time on getting ready in many ways \" A car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time\"(10). You would'nt get lost becuase of the fact that it has a GPS. The car can sence traffic jams or accidents so maybe thats a positive becuase then you could be more carful before going near it or maybe it can take you a diffrent route. It alerts you just in case you want to know thats also a good things\" flashing lights\n\non the windshield and other heads-up displays\"(7).\n\nIn conclution their are many pros and cons but in my oppinion it's a very well put together idea and i am pretty sure it can work out for the best. Yes people will become more lazy and deppend more on their cars but that is just how our generation is now a days. Deppending on internte, phones and now in the near future our cars. It may wor k out but who knows .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There many obstacles architects never realized building docking station dirigibles One obstacles faced height lack safety arose In German dirigible Hindenburg use highly flammable hydrogen caught fire New Jersey described paragraph thirteen Should happened dirigible docked high New York City airship would plummet ground many New would going day The largest obstacle faced though nature Air currents storms would cause dirigible teathered mooring mast rope swivel around around mooring mast dangling high pedestrians street As pointed paragraph fourteen neither practical say The third obstacle faced preexisting law airships flying low urbanized areas Even tall Empire State Building still impossible legally dock new mooring mast Al Smith s idea finally abandoned due safety nature state lawSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "When author concluded narrative come back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test demonstrates ability overcome obstacles finding comfort time disappointment connection past experiences First demostrates ability overcome obstacles obstacles everyone lives dont choice conquer unlimited So hibiscus flower represents obsticles weather represent time weather stopping flower bloom bloosom Secondly also represent finding comfot time disappointment going obstacle would find disappointment lingering However knows hibiscus coming back awareness obstacles coming back Finally asserts connection past experience trapped world familiar would make alien She capture sense place relate hiatcus flower would eccentric different rest people environment trying adapt way living trying survive world like countrySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "JUST\n\nimagine one day, of limiting the use of cars. It is true that people couldn't reach their destination as quick as they want to; however, there are beneficial advantages for limiting car usage. Such as, citizens having a much better time, less smog interrupting the oxygen, and the community might be better without vehicle culture.\n\nINITIALLY\n\n, one of the auspicious advantages of limiting car usage is citizens having a much better time. To illustrate my point, in Bogota, Columbia, they've launched a campaign in the mid-1990's called the Car-free day. Columbians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during work, leaving the streets of the capital city to ellude the traffic jams. Also in result of the Car-free day campaign, parks and sport centers also have bloomed throughout the city; uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic; and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up.\n\nIN ADDITION\n\n, less smog interrupting the oxygen is another benefit to limiting car usage. To explain my reasoning, Paris has banned the privelage of driving due to smog. Paris typically has more smog than other European capitals. Diesel fuel was blamed, since France has a tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline. Diesel make up 67 percent of vehicles in France, compared to a 53.3 percent average of diesel engines in the rest of western europe, according to Retuters.\n\nFURTHERMORE\n\n, the community might be better without vehicle culture. To explain, President Obama's ambitious goals to curb the united states' greenhouse gas emissions, unveiled last week, will gety a fortuitous assist from an incipient shift in American behavior: recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by.\n\nALL IN ALL\n\n, there can be auspicious advantages to limiting car usage because of citizens having a much better time, less smog interrupting the oxygen, and the community might be better without vehicle culture. Some people may say that cars get you to your destination faster; however, it may be all for the better.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "How you ever been in a traffic jam? Where you find yourself late for work and overly stressed and tensed. This leads many people in thinking of a life without cars, of a place where loud honking and angry people aren't the norm. Well in places like Vauban, Germany peole have decide to smear the lines of the ideal suburban community by banning cars in the district.\n\nThe term \"car free\" zone never got more realistic then the streets of Vauban, where more than 70 percent of people have given up the tradition of owning a car. According to \"In German suburbs, life goes on without cars\" many people see this new way of life extermly effective. \"When I had a car I was always tensed\", states Heidrun Walters. Heidrun is a local from Vauban who found herself happier walking around then being behind a vehicle. Residents in Vauban believe that bicycling and walking are more effective for themselves and the enviroment. This leaves the question on how cars are able to be used in a district like Vauban; where ther are no garages, street parking, or driveways. Even though there are few car owners in the district you can buy a car space for 40,000.\n\nAlthough Vauban bans cars for the sheer annoyance ot them, other places like Paris have a more enviromental issue with cars. In Paris, the amount of smog has became so outrages officials have given ciztens in the parisian streets a temporary ban to help clear the air of pollution. Many drivers felt that this ban was unfair and discouraging, so up to 4,000 ciztens were fined for using there car. Since Ftrance is a Diesel fuel community, researchs are blaming the diesel for the smog problems. Even though the difference for the use of diesel more than gas can be the problem, who to say that the smog will stay gone?\n\nSome countries have taken to this new trend of no cars and make a day out of it. Such as Bogata, Colombia has speard the idea throughout South America- causing milions to travel by walking and using bicycles. The main idea of this program is to promote alternate transportation and reduce fog, says the article \"Car free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogato\". The turnout for this day was so large two other Colombian cities joined in. \"It's a good opptunity to take away stress and lower pollution\", said local businessman Carlos Arturo who joined and rode a two seated bicycle with his wife. The ethusiastic outcome made on lookers from other countries stare with awe.\n\nAmerica, who's ciztens are known for driving expensive cars has begun to broaden it's fews on the ideal Utopia. According to \"The End of Car Culture\", many Americans have been buying less and less cars as the years progress. Some of this new rrefinery stems from the recession, when many people couldn't afford a brand new car. Sociologist believe America is taking a permnant shift in it's cultural stand point. Along with pop cultures help, reseachers believe that it allows people to be more connected without driving to meeting their friends. This only futher shows that the worlds outlook on life has opened to new and intresting ways.\n\nWhether it's giving up cars all together, or having a national day dedicated. People all around the world have began to look at new and improved way of living. Some countries are even becoming inspired by others who have found that a more car conservative life can be better, and places like Paris have seen that without cars their enviroment could be a lot more cleaner and effective.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Do you think it was made by an alien or is it a natural landform? Many people have different opinions some say aliens created it, but others say that is a natural thing. In my opinion I think that it's a natural landform. I have 3 examples, first when the camera captured the picture it wasen't clear enough because there were wispy clouds. Second in the artical it said \"it spotted shadowy likeness of a human face\". Third the artical aslo said \"formed by shadows giving the illusison of eyes, nose, and mouth.\n\nFirst the camera captured the picture, but it wasen't clear enough because when they captured the picture there were wispy cloud which can make it hard to take a picture or to see the picture. This example shows that they might of seen something else such as the face ,but it could be wrong because they captured the picture when there was wispy clouds.\n\nSecond in the artical it said \"it spotted shadowy likeness of a human face\" which can mean that when the picture was captured the camera could have of captured some shadows to which can create an illusion of a face when in reality it could be the showdows. This example shows that the camera captured the shadows which can create and illusion of a face.\n\nThird in the artical it also said that \"formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth. This can mean that people see it in many way's. the picture creates an illusion that can make you think that it's a face with eyes, nose, and mouth. This example shows that the picture wasn't taken right which can cause an illusion, many people see a face, but that's because the picture creates an illusion of a face.\n\nIn conclusion many people have different opinions some say aliens created it, but say is a natural landform. Some people may have counter calims first counter claim is why would NASA lie to us. Second counter claim is that the picture showed a face so it is a face. Third counter claim is that they had a good camera so if it shows it then it is a face. My rebuttals would be that NASA is not lieing about the pictures. Second the picture might create an illusion that makes you think it's a face. Third not all cameras show exactly what you want to take a picture of these are my counter claims and rebuttals and also my example and explanantions.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is argued that teenagers should contribute to the neighborhood through compulsory service when they are free. While some people believe that this can benefit both youngster and the society, I disagree that teenagers should be forced to take the work. Instead, we should encourage youngsters to voluntarily contribute to the community more often. \r\n\r\nOn one hand, compulsory services can be negatively affected their studies. Nowadays, students have tight and busy time schedules. For example, I had at least two exam periods in one semester when I was in high school. It may be difficult for some of the students to spare some time for the work. In this case, adding compulsory services increases students’ burden, causing poor academic results. Although compulsory charity work can force a lot of students to contribute to the community, it certainly becomes a waste of chance if they do not understand the underlying message of doing charity work. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, doing voluntary work should be more encouraged by schools and the community. Firstly, this is better to cultivate students’ motivation to actively participate in the community and even start to develop a sense of belonging to the neighbourhood. This is one of the best learning experiences for them to learn to be responsible like an adult. Secondly, it allows more flexibility for teenagers to choose from. Some of them can pick the work that they can benefit from their career development, such as video-editing or child education, while some of them can utilize the chance to explore their interests and skills. This helps youngsters to gradually develop their confidence and self-esteem. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, teenagers should not be required to do community work. However, it should be replaced by voluntary work to maximize the advantages created for teenagers and the community.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "From the crammed streets of New York City, to the tourist-filled city of Paris, cars have been the means of transportation around the globe ever since their creation. The reliance on cars has been an issue too great to ignore, as the environment becomes more polluted and the streets become more dangerous. We must shed light on the dark tunnel that has been blinding our judgement to a brighter future, where pollution is limited and our streets are clean. That future can only be seen with limiting car usage. Therefore, limiting car usage would be advantageous because it would better the environment and it would create a better lifestyle around the world.\n\nFirst, limiting car usage would be advantageous because it would better the environment. With global warming increasing by the day, any step to reduce pollution and greenhouse gases should be taken, limiting car usage is an essential tool to head in that direction. As a Elisabeth Rosenthal from the New York Times expounded: \"Passanger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States.\" Clearly cars are extremely harmful to the environment. However there is hope, because once car usage is limited these high numbers can be mitigated everywhere. In fact, in Paris, as Robert Duffer from the Chicago Tribune reported, policies to lower car usage have been taken and have actually worked! In France's capital \"motorists with even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine. The same would apply to odd-numbered plates the following day.\" In hopes to reduce carbon emmissions and save the environment, Paris's prayers were answered as the smog cleared enough for the government to remove the ban for odd-numbered plates. Clearly, the pollution reduced due to one factor--limiting car usage. If actions around the world are initiated similar to Paris's plan, then a better environmental future is inevitable. The environmental benefits of reducing car usage are endless. After all we only have one planet, cars should not be the machines to dictate our environmental future.\n\nMoreover, limiting car usage is benefitial because it would create a better lifestyle around the world. Reliance on cars has shaped modern society into a dependent state on oil. However, once that oil runs out, what type of lifestyle will people turn to? Limiting car usage provides this answer through a healthy lifestyle before this day arises. For example, In Bogota, Colombia, as Andrew Selsky from the Seattle Times put it: \"the construction of 118 miles of bicycle paths\" had been built within Bogota after years of limiting cars. People are shifting their reliance on cars and turning them into productive means of transportation. In fact, rush hour restrictions cut traffic and has led to a rise in parks and shopping districts in Bogota, according to Mr Selsky. Even Carlos Arturo Plaza a businessman in Bogota enthusiastically exclaimed: \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress...\" as he rode a two seat bicycle with his wife. However, Bogota is not the only place where limiting car usage has been gaining support, the Mobile World Congress has been engaged too! Bill Ford, the executive chairman of the Ford Motor Company laid out his plan where he envisioned a \"world in which personal vehicle ownership is impractical or undesriable,\" (Rosenthal). He believed that \"partnering with the telecommunications industry to create cities in which pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emission and improve safety\" (Rosenthal). If people around the globe are willing to support this movement, especially a chairman for one of the world's largest automotive companies, and partake in this new lifestyle, then limiting car usage must be the way to go. This new lifestyle of riding bikes, walking, and taking public transportation, will mold the traditional transportation mediums, into a more safe and secure one if citizens support this advantageous movement.\n\nIt is time the citizens of planet Earth envision the streets of Beijing and the historic city of London, not as images of pollution and car-reliant places, but as clean and healthy ones. The advantages of limiting car usage makes this dream a reality, because this policy betters the environment and creates a better lifestyle around the world. Hopefully word spreads quickly, and everyone, everywhere, knows of the advantages of limiting car usage, because only then, will our future be a bright one.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Many people believe that a rock formation on mars would look like a structure created by aliens. Through out the years cameras have become more complex leaving the 1976 picture easy to fall in a false light.\n\nNASA states that the rock formation was formed by shadows giving the illusions of eyes, nose, and mouth. The formation would easily fool any alien enthusiest who looks for ridiculious objects to say it was made by aliens. The project ended because of lack of money they used to take picture of rocks, rocks? That money could have gone to finding a cure for aids or cancer but we had to waste all our money on rocks, rocks? Twenty-five years of this nonsense and were still trying to find something that is not there. Why do you think every country hates us.\n\nRock formations are common on every planet so why did we spend all this time on one?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There are many advantages of limiting car usage. It affects your mental health. It effects your environment. It effects people and companies economically, too. These articles provide a lot of information, and I'm going to use examples from the text to show you.\n\nFirst, limiting car usage affects peoples' mental health. Most people say it makes them happier using different modes of transportation.\n\n\"\"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,\" said Heidrun Walter, a media trainer and mother of two,...\"\n\nThis is an example from the 1st article, 'In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars\" written by Elizabeth Rosenthal.\n\n\"\"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\" said buisnessman Carlos Arturo Plaza as he rode a two-seat bicycle with his wife.\"\n\nHere's another example, from 'Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota' written by Andrew Selsky. Although some people are mad having to use a bus or a train with other people, it's a good stress reliever not having to drive all the time and not having to deal with the road rage.\n\nSecond, limiting car usage effects the environment. Cars give off gas that's not good for the Earth. The gas from the cars creates smog in some parts of the world.\n\n\"Paris typically has more smog than any other European capitals...\"\n\nIn that quote from 'Paris bans driving due to smog' written by Robert Duffer, it shows that the smog is having an affect of them. Safety is also something that would be increased if we limited car usage.\n\n\"\"Pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial, and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety.\"\"\n\nWith less cars around, people would be less likely to get hit. Right now, many people die every day from a car accident or a hit and run. If we lessen the amount of cars on the road, we'd also improve road rage and traffic flow.\n\nFinally, limiting the amount of car usage would effect people and companies economically. People wouldn't have to pay for gas as much as they would have to. It would help out public transportation companies, like the company that runs the Lynx busses or 'the Line' in Chicago. It would cause a decline in auto-insurance companies and car companies that sell the cars.\n\n\"...companies like Ford and Mercedes are already rebranding themselves \"mobility\" companies with a broader product range beyond the personal vehicle.\"\n\nThis quote from the article 'The End of Car Culture' by Elisabeth Rosenthal, shows that car companies are trying to stay ahead of their competition. They're trying to appeal to people who prefer bikes or buses rather than a personal vehicle.\n\n\"...recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by.\"\n\nIn this quote from the same passege, it shows that we're already nearing this goal. Car usage is already being limited by the newer generations of people who care about the planet and find it easier to bike or use public transportation.\n\nIn conclusion, limiting the usage of cars would help a lot. I think that helping the environment would really be good for us as people. Limiting the usage of cars would make it safer to walk around and bike outside, even drive. It helps people economically even though it hurts certain companies economically. It also helps us mentally by helping us be less stressful and calming down more easily. It would reduce road race as well as certain stress all-together.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author concludes story paragraph tell reader Saeng going take test The author wants tell reader fail test know wrong shes going correct For example Saeng said then I take test again Saeng feel sorry fail simple test wants retake test snow meltsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the artical \"Making Mona Lisa Smile.\" the author describes how this new techology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify humans emotion. This technology is valuable in a classroom to read emotional expressions because, It wolud make the lesson we do on the computer more intresting, it could help us know how people are felling in that exact time and, it could give us more of an explanation on older pictures so we can understand the picture a little bit better.\n\nFirst of all, the Facial Action coding system would be valuable in a classroom today because, it would make the lesson we do on the computer more intresting. What this means is that insead of a teacher just giving out a lesson that half the class wont even like, the Facial Action Coding system would elinonate that because it get our emotions and give each indiviual person a lesson that fits them the best.\"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"\n\nSeconltly, the Facial Action Coding System would be valuable in a classrom today because, it could help peolpe know how people are felling in the exact time or the picture kind of like we were there in the moment. Ok, if someone took a picture and put it on facebook or something you wouldnt know how there felling you would just know what they wanted you to feel. Just because someone is smiling that doesnt mean they are happy, it just means they are smiling, but with the Facial Action Coding System we would know how the person is actualy felling\n\nThirldy, the Facial Action Coding System wpuld be valuable in a classrom today because, it could give us more of an explanation on older pictures so we can understand the picture a little bit better. So just like the \"Mona Lisa\" the Facial Action Coding System helped us understand how she was felling a the time of the picture.\n\nTo sum this all up, The Facial Action Coding System is valuable in a classroom to read emotional expressions because, It wolud make the lesson we do on the computer more intresting, it could help us know how people are felling in that exact time and, it could give us more of an explanation on older pictures so we can understand the picture a little bit better.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars would be good for people. I think this for many good reasons. One is because some people get tired behind the wheel sometimes. Two it would stop drunk driving. And three its giving people a break. I gave the reasons why i think its a good idea, now im gonna explain my point.\n\nMy first point is\n\nthat some people get tired behind the wheel. A tired person behind the wheel is not good. They could end up falling asleep, and them falling asleep could cause a crash. Nobody wants to be in a crash. It says in the second pargarph, \"their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash\".... Thats more then enough time for people to get to their destintation without falling asleep. Thats just the first reason.\n\nWe have lots of drunk drivers in the world. With driverless cars drunk drivers wouldnt have to drive. And with them not driving no one would get hurt and the wont in up in jail. Im not saying that its good for them to be getting in a car drunk im saying that they wouldnt have to drive. They wouldnt have to cause crashes cause their intoxicated. We would have less DUIs in the world with this car.\n\nLast its giving lots of people a break. I know most people dont like to drive and they wont a break. Its helping them. You will till have to set in driver sit to pay attention but its still giving them a break. So over all i just thinks its a good idea.\n\nWith this you would keep tired people from behind wheel, drunk people from behind wheel, and you giving people a break. So its a good idea to me. Just my opinion.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "People have different views about their attitude towards robots. While some people argue that robots are detrimental to human’s society, I believe that human’s development can benefit from the proper use of robots.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, I can understand the view taken by many people that robots may be harmful to humans. Firstly, job opportunities, particularly in manufacturing, may be occupied by robots, and this is likely to result in a higher level of unemployment. For example, robots can be seen as a perfect replacement for workers in the assembly line because of their high efficiency and low cost of maintenance. Secondly, an increasing number of road accidents caused by robots or artificial intelligence have been witnessed in recent years, and the safety of the wide use of robots is still under debate. Finally, criminals or terrorists may operate terror attacks remotely using robots with bombs inside, which is a serious threat to humans’ safety.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I would argue that robots will be vital for our future if we use them under proper guidance. They can also play an important role in doing dangerous jobs for humans, including searching for people in a collapsed building after an earthquake, and opponents of robots will feel differently if a member of their families is saved in this kind of circumstances by them. Another key consideration when judging the effects robots have on society would be its wide use in space projects. For example, robots allow scientists to collect rock species and operate scientific analyses on Mars, which is important for our understanding in terms of space. Furthermore, governments should introduce laws to regulate the proper use of robots for both corporations and individuals, and any kind of illegal use will be strictly punished.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe that under proper regulations, the benefit of robots far outweigh their drawbacks and they are crucial for the future development of mankind.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Nowadays, many communities want to know and have much historical information about the house or building they stay in. This essay will outline the reason for this case and ways people can research it in detail.\r\n\r\n First of all, from my point of view, curiosity is one of the habits that most humans have. We always want to discover new stuff and have detail about a curious thing. In this case, it has many benefits rather than drawbacks, such as making sure that their habitation is safe enough for their living. If they find some crime news, they can be more careful or migrate to a safer zone. At the same time, if they find that this zone is not poorly mentioned, they would suggest their acquaintance stay in it without guilt. In addition, having much knowledge about the area where they live, help new-comer to know about cultures. They will understand what acts they should do or do not. In some areas, there have their specific cultures. Without having their historical knowledge or having friends who lived in these areas, we cannot know by observing their surroundings.\r\n\r\n In terms of researching, the resident could use various ways to research those stuff. First, they can serve the internet, and that is the easiest way. These days, most people can access the internet. We can write about things we know on blogs or websites. On the other hand, we can ask someone to answer our questions on these blogs or websites. Moreover, there is a location to collect accurate historical information, such as a museum and local library.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, the reasons as I mentioned before, finding out about the history of the residence where we live is a possibility. People have more awareness than in the past. If they could make sure that things they do or selects are correct, they would do. However, in my opinion, we should have a consideration before confidently believe in everything.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driving at times can be a really big issue to deal with. There are so many thing that can go wrong, a crash, then increase in insurence, you might even get your license taken away after that. When you don't drive, the world is an open book just waiting to be read. Walking or riding bikes can relieve stress and make you more fit and in shape. The gasses that come from cars are just aweful for the environment, and there would be such a largly reduced number in traffic jams if pleople would just get off the road. Once your on the road, anything can happen. It's dangerous, i sometimes even wonder if i really want a license.\n\nWhen you drive there are so many traffic jams. The idea of never having to worry about traffic again is intriguing. Why worry about having to rush through traffic just to get to work on time, when instead you can simply manage your time correctly and walk at the pace you are comfortable with. Traffic jams cause accidents that put peoples lives at risk. In the article, ''Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Botoga'' by Andrew Selsky, he states, ''...millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated, or took buses to work during a car-free day...leaving the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams''. The car-free day in Colombia is working to perfection to promote alternative transportation, i don't see why we dont have this in the United States.\n\nDrivig causes stress and tension and that's never good. A stressed driver is a dangerous driver, when you're stressed you become more careless and less aware of your surroundings and that is very dangerous as a driver it leads to wreckless driving and accidents. Being without a car relieves this stress for many people. In the article, ''In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars'' by Elisabeth Rosenthal, a quote from the article states, ''When i had a car i was always tense. I'm much happier this way,'' said Heidrun Walter. This shows that cars are a lot to handle and that most people just believe it is too much stress for one person to deal with.\n\nThe smog and pollution caused by all the cars that are on the road these days is another reason why it is best to stay off the road. In the article, ''Paris bans driving due to smog'' by Robert Duffer, he says, ''[The smog] rivaled Beijing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world''. The cities ban on cars on the road shows a serious concern in the saftey of the people because of all the smog that driving has caused.\n\nSome people might argue that cars would be faster, but if you take a car you are going to be mor at risk of an accident, you're going to be polluting the air, and you'll only be stressing yourself out in the process. I strongly suggest that America does something to change our ways, because if we don't, we'll end up like Beijing and Paris with an extremly high pollution rate.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I believe driverless cars could be very benefitial to our society for several reasons. First, driverless cars are good for the economy. Second, they could be safer than human driven cars. And third, we have all this technology today so why not use it to benefit our society.\n\nMy first reason is driverless cars are eco friendly. In the passage, the author mentions that selfdriven cars use half as much fuel as today's taxies and are much more flexible than buses. These cars would save our air because they would be letting off less toxic fumes and you wouldn't have to pay as much for gas.\n\nMy second reason is that driverless cars could potentially be much safer than human driven cars. In the passage, the author lists many improvements to the driverless car that prove they are safe. The selfdriven car can steer, brake, and accelerate on its own. The front seat will vibrate to alert the person sitting in the drivers seat that there is something behind them and they might hit that object. For this reason, these cars are safe not only for the passengers, but also the pedestrians around the car. The driverless car has many built in sensors that will let the driver know if there is danger ahead or, perhaps, someone crossing the street.\n\nMy final reason is that we have the technology and the means to produce these cars so why not use them for our own good? The auther mentions in this article that Google has modified the Toyota Prius by positioning several sensors throughout their driverless car. There are sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted on th rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS reciever, and an internal motion sensor. All this technology in a car is incredible, but what really amazes me is the spining sensor on the roof. This sensors is constantly making 3-D models of the car's surroundings. All this is used to make it seem as though there is a human driver at the wheel. I feel like if Google can use all this to produce a some-what self driven car, we surely can not be too far away from a completly autopiolet vehicle and we should be using the technology we have to do so.\n\nI believe driverless cars are of great benefit to our society. They a good for the economy, they are safe for passengers as well as pedestrians, and they use all this technology that we have created and are continuing to create. Within a few years, our world of driving will be comletely changed and I am anxiously awaiting for that day to come.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Following the increase in children's education, parents and teachers argue that the fine craft classes are a crucial lecture or not. Some sets of people disagree that the painting lecture is a waste of both time and money, conversely, others believe the painting will bring various benefits of young children's growth. I personally agree with the latter opinion, and I will write both sides of view.\r\n\r\nIn the first place, some folks think that teaching painting does not an effective way to all children. For instance, some children are indifferent to drawing or creating something, educating craft skills should be considered all young kids' personalities and interests. More specifically, a boy who is not interested in technique class, then he hard to focus on the lecture, compared to other pupils who are eager to learn the drawings. Furthermore, some parents who prioritise practical lesson than potential value argue that students should learn mathematics or science than drawings. They believe that Investing money to practical subjects are more valuable than abstract subjects.\r\n\r\nOn the flip side, some parents and instructors agree with the idea that art is vital to children's development. On top of that, from the perspective of young students, creative activities help to develop their imaginations and creativity. This is because, drawings and creating lead understand another perspective, for example, when give a kid a topic that draw the happiest moments of their parents, the kid will remind his or her memories, and will draw certain moment with imagination. These lectures will help to raise understandings of others'. Secondly, as far as the nature of art is concerned, it leads to express one's thoughts or feedings through artwork. It will help to not mature children, especially, introverted kids who cannot speak their idea without adult's assistants. In this case, teachers or parents will understand more via the kid's artwork, and recognize their feeling than before.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, considering the pupil's development stage and a certain exception case, I strongly believe that the creative activities will play a pivotal role at school. The school and government should pay attention children's fine arts education, and spend more budgets.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is argued that museums are better to become entertainment sites whilst others think that education should be the main aim of museums. For my perspective, both of distraction and education sides shoud be encouraged in museums.\nOn the one hand, museums should be play in the entertainment role for some reasons. Firstly, lots of people are likely to go somewhere in weekends to let their hair down after hard working days. They want to look for a transquil place to contemplate the beauty of life or artworks and museums are such appropriate sites. Secondly, museums are destinations for tourist attractions, where a country may advertise its regional or national culture or history. Therefore, it is necessary to incorporate the interacted activities or funny games into museum trips so that visitors do not feel boring and find it easy to remember the knowledge provided by the guides. \nOn the other hand, museums should teach people about many aspect of life, such as history, science, art, culture and so on. Almost every city in one country possess at least one museum to serve local people and tourists. Hence, professional guides of museums have to either explain visitors whatever about the historical stories or origin of relics attached to locality or distribute to visitors pictures or audio documentary so that they understand well about details of one exhibition. Schools and colleges also usually organise museum trips where pupils or students are more eager to learn or verify the reality through visual sightseeings. \nIn conclusion, it seems to me that learning from the practical observation and combined games is more interesting than tough theorical lessons. For that reason, museums should offer to visitors interesting recreation activities besides the education features.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "To I recently heard people think computers nt benefit society However I disagree First allows children adults learn distant places things Also allows family friends connect family friends And lastly form entertainment day ca nt go outside Some people might agree However I believe computer nt waste thought I think computer benefits society whole world First computer allows children adults learn distant places things People professors historians either highly educated people past discoveries information things everyday That means everyday someone learn something everyday life When I research important person history I learned things I never learned school The computer best way allow people put info ve learned people see gain knowledge endless possibilities everyone owns computer learn You would nt believe things learn computer Also computer allows family friends stay touch family friends far away places If computers someof family moved diffrent There would nt efficient way stay touch The computer allows send email families computer celluar phones The computer best way stay close family even though far away My brother every day I get computer I get home video chat If computer I would nt able chat brother Lastly computer allows form entertainment rainy day Certain software gives people chance create games post online public When I ca nt go outside weather I get computer play video games The games keep company I never play people online multiplayer Some games educational also The games teach different things historySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Based excerpt The Mooring Mast written Marcia Amidon Lsted builders Empire State building faced many obsticles attempting allow dirigibles dock One main problem architects could drop mooring mast top Empire State building s flat roof There needed modifications made make safe dirigible land The biggest obstacle nature Lsted said best paragraph The winds top building constantly shifting due violent currents Even dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around around mooring mast The final problem builders faced even manage figure way put mooring mast still law stating dirigibles illegal land Lsted said paragraph This law would make illegal ship ever tie building even approach area Obviously examples given builders Empire State building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dockSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Nowadays, it is observed that there is an upward trend among the societies in some different areas in the world that they want to realize the story behind their houses. In this essay , I will consider why this is happening and also explores some possible ways to research it.\r\n\r\nthe main reason for this trend could be that , people really keen on finding the identity of their home. What I mean by this is that some people especially younger people prefer to know the value of their home from a historical aspect. For example, in Iran, the majority of houses particularly the old buildings, have a history them behind. As a result, people know the historical value of their house and try to preserve it. Another reason is when you find out about your possession's value, you will try to keep it as a valuable asset. For instance, in some countries, people buy valuable houses which have a story and it could be a fine example of a good investment. Consequently, most people tend to know the history of their home.\r\n\r\nThere are some possible solutions to find about the past of a house. For one, people could go to \r\n\r\nmunicipality of their town as the history of every single house is kept there. For another , most of the community in some cities, especially the small cities, know about the background of the houses. It can lead to an acceptable result for the owners of these homes. Subsequently, people can use these methods and get some ideas about their houses. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, to reiterate there are some reasons for searching the history of some buildings which are the preservation and the financial investment. However, people can use some methods which are asking the people and municipality for more information. Should people consider these ways, they could find more impressive information.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Having technology like this at schools would be really cool.\n\nThe machine will be able to tell our teachers how bored we are at all times while we are at school.\n\nThe idea of a machine like this is crazy something straight out of a movie.\n\nI think schools should for sure get machines like these.\n\nin my opinion having a machine like this at school would be beneficial to the school and the learning.\n\nThe teachers will be able to see how engaged we are or are not to the class and can alter the lesson to be less boring and interesting. For example Dr. Huang predicts \"then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"\n\nHe is saying that this technology can help teachers know when it is time to modify their lesson and make it more pleasurable to best keep the students attention.\n\nMost kids that come to school do not want to be here school is twenty-five percent useful and seventy-five percent useless.\n\nSo trust me students do not want to be here.\n\nSo if there was a way to be able to tell when students are not happy here then this machine will be able to pick that information up and help the school board and schools all around the world to realize we are not doing this whole school thing right. We deserve to be learning useful tools for life not algebra and how to type an essay.\n\nBut this machine will help teachers change there lessons and help us be more engaged and happy and ready to learn.\n\nThe facs machine would definetly have a lot to go through if it wants to make its way to schools, it will be very useful and worth the time and money.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Thaithor did a decent job in supporing his idea about studying Venus is the first paragraph is talking about how Venus is also known as the Evenin star he is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky . Is also sayig that Venus is in our solar system, one example from the text is that venus is the seconf planet from our sun .\n\nanother example is that venus could give you a lot of information about earth and it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely .\n\nVenus however is the closest planet ot earth in terms of dentisy and size the author is supporting he's ideas pretty good he's giving a lots of detail and he is also making them understant what his talking about. The author has a lot of information about venus and the author is giving detail in every single paragraph he wrote .\n\nIn the 3rd paragraph is talking about a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blanket venus. The author is saying that on the planet's surface, temperature average over 800 degrees and the atmosphere pressure is 90 times grater than what we experience .\n\nas a conclusion NASA is working on toehr aproaches to studying venus in my opinion he did a really great job because he is not only talking about venus he is also talking about how it can change the world and the authos is giving a lots of information . in every paragraph he talked about how venus can make a change in the world and how NASA was trying to do that .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Many people argue that affluence and success are mostly achieved by good fortune instead of hard work. In my opinion, I do not agree with this point of view. \r\n\r\nFirstly, achievement and success belong to those who work hard. It is undeniable that Rome was not built in one day and people could not become proficient at something after one night. In order to accomplish any goals, people need to make a lot of efforts that require sufficient trainings and practice. As a result, people could make it to the top due to their determination to practice. A good example for this is Lan Lang, a renowned pianist, he was not born as a prodigy of music. Instead, he is just an ordinary kid and what he has is his passion for piano. It is said that he spent approximately five hours daily to practice piano lessons ranging from scales, chords, tempos, and so on. For this reason, he is now one of the most distinguished pianist in the world.\r\n\r\nSecondly, orientation contributes to a person’s attainment. The reason for this is because whenever people start to set a particular goal, they need to set a clear plan on how they are going to go. In addition, a good orientation might accelerate higher chance of success due to the clear guidance. For instance, a student applying for the schorlaship needs to know which school he is going to study and the school’s requirements. By setting a clear plan, it is very helpful for him to prepare and gradually achieve his target.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, personal goals are only attained by the will to try hard as well as the clear orientation. Therefore, I believe success does not mostly go with luck.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author shows many reasons that Venus should be studied. Some reasons are that Venus is the closest to earth in size and density and they also think that there were forms of life on Venus many thousands of years ago.\n\nPeople often say that Venus is Earth's twin. Venus has many similar features with Earth such as size and density. In paragraph 2 the author says that Earth, Venus, and Mars are very close in distance. When Venus is really close by they send spacecafts up to Venus.\n\nSome say that Venus had life forms many of thousands of years ago. The author say that Venus was probably covered in water just like Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky things like mountains, valleys, an craters. The author also says that Venus can sometimes be the nearest option for a visit.\n\nIn conclusion the author shows some good facts about how we can someday go to Venus because of its earth-like features and its once able to hole life and have oceans.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In s dirigibles considered future transportation Although useful dirigibles issue enough landing area New York City With mind Al Smith saw opportunity Empire State Building would construct mooring mast top building This would allow dirigibles anchor several hours refuel also allow passengers go Adding mooring mast seemed full proof time new construction plan endured many obstaclesThe first obstacle add mooring mast without adding stress building s frame Architects detected stress dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation nearly eleven hundred feet This led second obstacle modifying strengthening steel frame Empire State Building accommodate first obstacle Finally third obstacle expense Modifying building s new frame work would cost sixty thousand dollarsConsequently Al Smith saw great oppertunity Empire State Building faced many obstaclesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Laughter daily part life I m always laughing school home With laughter show many emotions ca nt told words To s also way showing fortunate life I ve numerous occasions laughter solution problem I also agree laughter important part relationship In next paragraphs I going talk laughter affects relationship benefits brings well Approximately three months ago family I decided take trip We planned stay month When I told boyfriend I d gone month right away I saw sadness eyes This truly killed however decision made turning back Our relation tense month We talked times voice different There sadness I knew something wrong Although said everything good I knew sadness due absence After month finally ended time come back I truly excited We arrived I immediately called chance seeing Although knowing I closer made happy anxious We conversed endless hours telling would never far We laughed laughed whole conversation To sound laughter sign happiness priceless The laughter blessing relation From day forward I realized much laughter really affects numerous ways It s brings happiness prosperity life With laugh sadness leaves s happiness jumpsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "What make a person wonder about how the other people feel about them? Imagine being able to know exactly how a person feel and their emotion toward you or other things. Dr. Huang, the prof. of the Beakman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois, have created a way for us to figure people emotion. He created the Facial Action Coding System. Facial Action Coding System is a system that make you understand a person emotion by the muscles in\n\ntheir face. The use of this technology to read emotion is valuable for many reason.The reason are that it will make us understand how our friends are feeling, to make sure the politician or celebrity is being truthful, and it help us with our\n\neveryday life.\n\nThe first reason is that the Facial Action Coding Stystem will help us understand how our friends feel. According to paragraph 5, and line 2, it stated that \" you can probable tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\" There always that friend that doesn't express herself well. If she need help with her life or when she is sad she won't understand how to express these emotion to her friends. This will help the people to understand how they feel and know when they need a shoulder to lean on.\n\nFuthermore, the technology will help the citizen identify whether the politician or the president is being truthful. Paragraph 8, line 4-6, it explain, \" these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politicain or celebrity isn't being truthful.\" If we don't have this type of way to figure out if our politician are worth it, then the world would be a mess. We would never know if that person is very truthful in his or her job. Also it a good way to find that good president that will guide us with real emotion and not a fake one.\n\nThe last reason is that the tecnology will help us with our everyday life. According to\n\nthe last paragraph, it stated that \" moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them.(\"Putting on a\n\nhappy face\" actually work!)\" When we have work or when\n\ngo out it always important to have a happy face. When you look mad and depressed, other people around you will know and they will judge you. Having a happy face will make the other think highly of you. You will be able to get along with your co-worker very well. It to make your life easier and better.\n\nIn conclusion, Facial Action Coding System is valuabe because it allow you to understand your peers emotion, when a politician is being truthful, and help you make many friend. Some may argue that it personal and it not our buisness to know how a person feel. In order to make our world better, everyone should understand each other emotion for it to be easier to communicate. Other will understand and make this world peaceful.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Many people believe that the Face on Mars was created by aliens. I do not believe this claim. I believe that the Face is just a natural landform that was not created by anything but the land itself.\n\nThere are many pieces of evidence proving that the Face is just a natural landform. First, and probably the most obvious, the Face is only seen at a certain angle, due to the shadowing around the landform. In paragraphs one, two, and three the author states numerous times how the \"unusual shadows...made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh.\" In paragraph eight, the author states \"the Face on Mars is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude....\" Second, the first picture of the Face was taken in 1976, meaning that the Face could have been a result of the poor camera quality back then. The scientists at NASA back in 1997 even wanted to take another picture to see if the Face was just a natural landform. When the Mars Global Surveyor took a picture of the same landform in 1998 with improved camera quality, it showed that it was just a natural landform. In 2001, scientists took a third photo proving the Face was just a natural landform. In paragraph 1, the author states \"NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet...when it spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face.\" In paragraph seven, the author states \"...his Mars Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos.\" and \"...anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared... revealing... a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\" In paragraph twelve the author states \"what the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa---landforms common around the American West.\" The Face was also used as a way to entertain the public and shine more light onto Mars. At the end of paragraph three, the author states \"the authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars.\" These claims and evidence to support them are just a few pieces of proof that the Face of Mars is a natural landform.\n\nSome people believe the Face on Mars was made by aliens, and that there is alien life on Mars. In all of the facts stated above, there is proof that the Face is nothing more than a butte or mesa and not created by aliens. Based on the pieces of evidence listed above, I can conclude that the Face is a natural landform and always will be.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Nowadays does everyone rely on cars frequently, and as of late has this practise begun to show its numerous negative effects, of which shall be discussed. The articles presented by Elisabeth Rosenthal, Robbert Duffer, and Andrew Selsky portray the effects of such frequent use of cars and effort many areas are already making to limit car usage; the articles also explore the many benefits of limiting car usage such as reduction of pollution.\n\nSome large and global cities, such as Paris, are known for the substantial amount of pollution present in their air. According to Source 2: \"Paris bans drivin due to smog\", Paris already has more smog than other European capitals in general with one hundred forty-seven micrograms of particulate matter per one cubic metre. In comparison to Brussel's one hundred fourteen micrograms and London's seventy-nine and seven tenths, Paris' pollution is clearly more concentrated. According to Source 4: \"The End of Car Culture\" by Elisabeth Rosenthal, the United States features broad expanses and many suburbs, being one of the places in the world where cars are greatly centred upon by the people. Thus can one imagine the exceptionally negative impact that cars most likely have on the air quality of the urban and suburban areas throughout the United States. Elizabeth Rosenthal's Source 1: \"In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars\" states that the widespread use of automobiles worldwide are one of the greatest obstacles to overcome in the effort to reduce greenhouse gas emissions from automobiles. Twelve percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe are from cars and even up to fifty percent are from cars in the United States. This furthermore leads on to the many benefits that limits on car usage have to offer and the efforts certain areas are making to create these benefits.\n\nSource 1 provides some useful insight efforts on the possibilities and advantages of limiting car use over continuing the mainstream automobile trend. Vauban is a community in Germany near France and Switzerland, on the outskirts of Freiburg. Here is where parking areas in streets, driveways, and home garages are infrequent to find or are outright forbidden. Only two places are available for parking, which are the large garages at the edge of the community, with parking spaces going out for forty thousand dollars. In Vauban, only thirty percent of the population own cars, and fifty-seven percent of people sold their cars in order to move here. Apparently, the lack of automobiles seems to have a calming effect as is professed by Heidrun Walter, who is quoted from Source 1: \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" Source 2 show how Paris had to create a driving ban temporarily due to smog. Car traffic was lowered to sixty percent in Paris after a week of the smog and the ban helped to clear this outbreak so commuting could resume to its regular ways without impediment from the heavy pollution. Andrew Selsky's Source 3: \"Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota\", Bogota of Colombia had a day imposed where cars were banned and only buses and taxis were permitted. This was imposed to support alternative transportation as well as to reduce the amount of smog in the city, similar to the ban Paris has imposed. Although there was rain that same day, it did not stop people from participating, and similar to Heidrun Walter's comment in Source 1, businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza states that \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution.\" The campaign for these Days Without Cars began in the mid-1990s and has resulted in construction of one hundred eighteen bicycle paths and major public work repairs of sidewalks and blooming of parks and sports centers. Restrictions imposed during rush-hour have reduced traffic greatly in a positive way and new shopping districts and restaurants are appearing constantly. Even in the great urban automobile centres of America, vehicle use seems to be reducing, as presented in Source 4. Acording to an analysis by Doug Short, a member of an investment research company called Advisor Perspectives, miles driven in the United States has slowly fallen since 2005; it is apparent that if the pattern continues, carbon emissions and the environment will be positively impacted to a substantial extent. Even Bill Ford, CEO of the Ford Motor Company, has porposed a business plan for a world in which ownership of a vehicle is undesirable, a place where walking, biking, low use of private cars, and public transportation is woven together to conserve resources, decrease emissions, and increase the level of urban safety.\n\nAs shown, such a level of car limitation would be highly beneficial to everyone as a whole. There would be less pollution, driving would be safer, and the urban economy would spring as more people walk or bike to transport themselves. Bill Ford's idea of a world where owning a car is impractical would be highly viable, and the city of Vauban has already begun the move. Areas without choking pollution, congested traffic, and a simpler and more tranquil life overall result from the restriction of car usage.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars are more expensive and require more attention than what they are worth in and of themselves. Driverless cars will be expensive to manufacture, which will be handed to the consumer in that driverless cars will be more expensive than regular cars. Since driverless cars still require an operator to monitor the enviornment, a person might as well just be driving the vehicle.\n\nDriverless cars either require smarter roads, which will be extremely expensive to upgrade current roads and the cost of that would ultimately be handed down to taxpayers, or require expensive engineering which the cost of would be passed down to consumers.\n\nDriverless vehicles still would require an operator which poses several issues. Drivers could become bored, and even if they had entertainment systems build into the car, drivers would then be distracted from the vehicle's environment in the case where the driver needed to take control of the vehicle. Even if the entertainment systems could shut themselves off in a moment's notice, drivers may not be in a state of mind that is prepared to operate a vehicle in an emergency situation.\n\nThe legal challenges facing driverless cars are also not worth fighting. Multitudes of laws would need to be changed in order for driverless cars to be legal. And even if some states legalized driverless cars, then there would be practical issues for consumers. Drivers would not be able to cross state lines if some states legalized driverless cars while others did not. Also, if a driverless car manages to get into an accident, then the quesstion of who would be liable for the accident would pose legal issues. And in the case where one driverless car got into another driverless car, then the law would be especially ambiguous as to who is at fault for such an accident.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars are more expensive, both in the engineering or upgrading of roads, than what the cars themselves are worth. Driverless cars still require a driver for special cases, such as navigating around accidents or a hazordous environment, which would also require that the driver stay alert and aware of the environment. Driverless cars lastly pose multitudes of legal issues, as laws would need to be changed and written in order for driverless cars to become legal. Driverless cars that require a driver are not worth being driverless.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the contemporary epoch,there is irrefutable debate among folks about part-time jobs for graduates.In certain countries,individuals inspire learners to find part-time employment while others do not advocate for it. I firmly coincide with and withstand the stated notion that it will expose the student in the line of the employment environment.This discourse will further elucidate my assertion in the forthcoming paragraph.\r\n\r\nFirstly,this kind of exposure is very advantagious to the young stars although the society is not really for it.They end up practising what they are taught in lecture rooms as a results the gain experience and get exposure particularly in their area of interest.Moreover,work experience can help them land their dream job because most recruiters prefer to employ individuals with some experience.For example,a research done by kepsa(2020) depicts that 90% of employer prefer to give a job to people who have gone for an internship which help them as they do not take long to adapt to the system.Consequently,it is imperative for school-going people to undertake part-time attachment.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand,this can be detrimental since it can bring some disruption in the study although the student understands and retain more when they practice what they are taught in the classroom.Furthermore ,the scholar is not in a position to prepare for exams or even attend group discussion with others as there are duties allocated to them by the employer.For example,a research done by the University of Nairobi depicts that part-time jobs for finalists make them drop out of school.Therefore,a certain individual does not advise pupils to work as it affects their performance as well as some end up dropping out of the academy\r\n\r\nTo sum up,i would like to restate the perspective that i concur that undergraduates must take part-time jobs to gain relevant experience for the sake of future dream jobs despite others advocating that it will affect the graduate end results.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "These days, there is an ongoing debate about people should adapt themselves to live with climate change. It is possible to claim that finding ways to prevent this problem is the better way humans should it conduct. I totally disagree with this option. This essay will examine the reasoning behind my opinion.\n\nTo begin with, Living with environmental problems is a big issue in this world, it affects a way of human's life, our health, transportation. This means that society must find some methods. A clear example of this is there several campaigns which are created by government collaborate with scientists. They trying in order to get rid of it such as giving the information to the population, setting activities for students to learn the cause of the problem. Another thing is, climate change is a started point that will make other problems are following. An illustration for this is first, global warming which cause high temperatures will risk our health like faint, hypertension. Secondly, Carbon emissions will make hard breathing. Eventually. these will bring our species to extinction. \n\nAdditionally, offspring who will raise and be born in this world may spend the rest of their life with the disasters. For instance, poor quality of life, bad weather, lack of skill for education and surviving, famine, water contamination. Consequently, brainstorm has to start today for our next generations.\n\nAt the end of the day, it seems to be that the appropriate thing is humans ough to manage this catastrophe as quick as we can. If we do not find the right ways, human beings will disappear someday.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Some obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigables dock Were things dock dirigible bulding feuling Service get passengers safe possible also Should thought thousand foot dirigible top building might structureThe architects engineers empire State building consulted expert letting people US naval air station take tour equipment mooring mast Which anchor dirigible The passengers dirigible could get walking gang plank open observation platformIn sixty thousand dollers worth modifications made builings foundation And dirigibles couldnt even dockSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Today, technology is advanced enough to create cars that are semi-driverless.\n\nHowever, humans demand more.\n\nPeople want driverless cars for maximum efficiency.\n\nHowever, letting cars drive for themselves is dangerous and the development of driverless cars should be halted.\n\nRobots are quite common today.\n\nSemi-driverless cars are no exception.\n\nHowever, if a car was to become fully driverless, it would be considered a robot.\n\nThe artificial intelligence operating the car would be like a brain, making decisions about where to turn and how fast it needed to go.\n\nOn the surface this seems practical.\n\nNo more drivers would be needed, and robots are more coordinated so driving would become a lot safer.\n\nThis is not true.\n\nInfact, if drivers were to dissappear due to the appearance of driverless cars, there would be even more problems than today.\n\nAccording to the three laws of robotics, robots are not allowed to harm or kill humans.\n\nBecause fully independent artificial intelligence have not yet been developed, this law has not come into play yet.\n\nIf an automatic car was to be developed, then the law would act upon and restrain the robot operating the vehicle.\n\nFor example, if a robot driven car was to crash and kill people in the car, the law would be broken.\n\nIn paragraph 9, the author discusses how if technology fails, both the driver and manufacturer would be to blame.\n\nNow with the driver being the robot, more complications would arise, proving that independent cars are dangerous.\n\nDanger also comes from another place, being other people.\n\nThe robot can prove to be safer, being immune to distractions taking place in the passenger seats.\n\nWithout a human driver, the car is able to be controlled from the outside.\n\nIf a hacker were to take control of a robot operated car, the passengers inside would fall victim to the hacker.\n\nComputer development has shown to be advanced enough for a hacker to easily get access to the movement of a car, including locks, breaks, steering, acceleration, and pretty much anything that the robot would be controlling.\n\nThis danger is already a threat to society today.\n\nSmart cars can be hacked due to them relying on GPS and other wirelessly connected sources.\n\n100% human dependent cars cannot be hacked due to the vehicle being disconnected to outside sources and dangers.\n\nThe final major danger with cars being independent is that despite being an automatic system, its reaction speed is too slow.\n\nIn paragraph 4, LIDAR is explained as a rotating sensor on the roof that uses laser technology to generate 3-D models of the car's surroundings.\n\nThis is all assuming that everything is stationary or slower paced.\n\nIf an animal were to suddenly jump in front of the car, or if a pedestrian was to trip and fall infront of the car, it would crush the obstacle.\n\nDespite being an intelligent piece of equipment, the car's sensors would not be fast enough to calculate the sudden appearance of an obstacle.\n\nThe car's artificial intelligence would need to gather, process and use the data all in a split second.\n\nThis is also assuming that the brakes work well enough and can stop the speeding car in time.\n\nWhoever or whatever was on the street would be crushed before the car had enough time to stop itself.\n\nThis also goes back to the danger of driverless cars killing people, except this time it is a danger to the car's surroundings.\n\nLegal issues woud arise, and the robot would take the blame.\n\nHowever people have the tendency to hurt other humans so the manufacturers would be blamed for not having a better sensor.\n\nThe development of newer sensors and faster computers would increase the cost of the driverless cars and decrease its practicality.\n\nDriverless cars would create many issues and potentially be the number one leading cause of death in developed countries.\n\nThese three points are just some of the dangers of driverless cars.\n\nThe development of this kind of technology is practical but risky.\n\nHowever the development of new automobile and transportation technology will not yield to its dangers.\n\nPeople are willing to sacrifice and explore dangerous things if the outcome is tempting enough.\n\nAdvancements and changes will take place, and soon driverless cars will take to the roads.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is true that there will be a lot of benefits of having driverless cars in the future, utilizing this invention could mean less human error on the roads, having those cars to be used as public transportation could be really convenient since everyone will have access to a form of transportation especially those who do not have a car to begin with, but driverless cars might be too reliable. Although this is all well and good, there are challenges and hurdles driverless cars will have in the community, safety will still be a concern to some people.\n\nIf by any chance driverless cars are widely used and completely implented to our civilization, new laws will be made involving the safety of people when in a driverless car and everyone completely abandoned the concept of driving manually.\n\nNow what if everything else fails and one day the driverless cars stopped working, no one will be able to get to their own destinations with ease, you will also never know when these machines will malfunction since they are completely automatic in terms of driving. Unless the issues are solved and driverless cars are safe and reliable enough, it should not be used by the community yet.\n\nThis technology is still new to us and poeple just started working on driverless cars. We as people should be a bit forgiving, and it is okay to give negative opinions about it. It just means those are the things they need to fix and it could help them improve driverless cars. I agree that a driver should be given an option for drivers to drive and use autopilot by simply giving us a feature of turning it on and off. I still do not have a good feeling of relying to machines completely, machines might be rarely making mistakes but they are far too unpredictable unlike having humans behind the wheel, which again, one of the reasons people have a concern about and requested laws and regulations from the government. In consluion, technology is great but it should not be controlling our way of life on a daily basis too much than necessary.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Watching tv and playing computer games are two of the most important children’s leisure activities. However, whether they bring more harm than good has caused heated debate. My view is that too much time spent on these surely has negative impacts on kids and parents have to sort out the appropriate programs for children and curb these activities.\n\nSince the television viewing and video games requires minimum effort to turn on and off, it can be conducive to laziness. While other outdoor activities could improve both mental and physical strength by burning calories and building muscle, watching tv has nothing to so with these benefits. For example, for those spending watching tv for too long may bear a high risk of obesity and become less muscular fit. That is not to mention that children spend less time interacting with their friends, which may inhibit their social skills such as conversation and interpersonal skill.\n\nMoreover, questionable contents on tv or computer games will result in unexpected implications on impressionable people. For example, many boys like playing computer shooting games including one of the most famous one called CS (counter-strike). While we are calling for world peace, our kids are learning how to use dangerous weapons through this game and get used to pulling the trigger without hesitation, it has been reported that one killer of school shooting in the us used to play computer shooting games in his child- hood.\n\nIn sum, spending too much time on watching the telly and playing computer games is definitely harmful to children. And parents should take time, regardless of how busy their schedule is, to guide and supervise these activies.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "A time I patient I got shots It dad I get shots I sick It still cold outside We went children In beginning I home getting ready go I put orange turtle neck sweater jeans sneakers I didnt want go I lot new games It took us minutes arrive My dad filled information sat In middle start watch television I really bored nothing informercials They us waiting fo hour I start get hungry upset They finally called name In end time get shot The nice lady gave juice Then told I getting shots I got shots took long time I frustrated I got shots left told I would coming back shots I still hungry got In conclusion I patient going get shots The information I got painful getting shots They us wait long time I sad wait happySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The features setting affect cyclist rougher terrain got cyclist strain make For example terrain turned hills cyclist struggle climb hills caused use energy Also terrain flat smooth cyclist less problems making long journey For instance cyclist less strain would tired would drink much water In conclusion features setting affect cyclistSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Physical strength is the vital role of success in sport while other people think that mentally strong is much more important in the competitive sports. In my opinion, both are correct and to be able to strong people would do more exercises in their long life.\nOn the one hand, people are more willing to suceess in the race of their games and sometimes failed. For the reasons of that they never thought that which would be the answer is that physically strength would give them to succeed in their pace of games and other sports they choice. For example, the more they do exercises before entering the match, the body will strong enough till the end of the contest. Then the succeed will come next of grasp.\nOn the other hand, the mental strength would be the main strength and sources of succeed which is the beginning point of the contest. Not even enough the exercises of mind, people would not get the immense advances of win. It means that people's minds might to be whatever they lose in the math, they can get it and stand up right their pace. As long as they get this point of action into their mind, I believed that they are eagle to strong enough to be ready to their games and other atheletics. Moreover, when they practice before entering the space of match, the embedded mind would be the main sources of mental strength too. It gives them to the progress of steps and the successful way until the end of the sports.\nTo wrap up, people should do more exercies and it will give them mentally and physically strong that I think. By doing both, the successful winner will become next and they will get a success in their tournament and will become a good competitior in the near future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There are many good resones to join tghe Seagoing Cowboy program.\n\nThis essay will give you good resonses to join the Seagoing Cowboy progam. One resone to join is There are wonderfull sights to sea on the way to your next awsome destination.\n\nAnother benifit of Joining the programe is you get to help people and seeing new places like Europe and China. If your are an animal lover you can spend time with animals taking care of them to re locate them to there new home. And at night you can relax when it is your turn And look at the moon and shining on the water and you can meet new people. Those are fun activities but,that is not all. If you like sports you can play baseball,volleyball. Tablel tennis tournaments,fencing,boxing,reading,even whittling. Improving vocabulary is fun and usefull to know. If you just need to get away for awille to a relaxing place were you can work. It is all there. Do not miss out. As on coyboy or future coyboy can see there are many great resones to join the Seagoing Cowboy Program.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The features setting affect cyclist It hard arrived first town author For example Rough Road Ahead Do Exceed Posted Speed Limit The road author ridding rough example Flat road replaced short rolling hills All road hills rough Than The water bottle contained tontalizing sips doesnt much water That really hardSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Laughter always answer It freezing dark outside The walk home long handle laughter filling air made walk home little faster shorter The cars kept passing stairing could laugh knew making fools ourselfs didnt care one bit The weird voices kept coming mouths crazy dance moves facial exspressions funniest thing us Stupid things people funniest things Becasue I knew laugh usual build friendship live life fullest As I walking back home dreding walk home It seemed like going take two hours long took get really ten minutes away house even It also felt like making anywhere slow walking thinking long walk would Cars kept passing us nt stairing us yet It silent something popped brain I best idea walk would faster I remebered voice god brother like compared even though younger would always It always put smile everyone entertaining This voice I wanted try I attempted We nt even half way home I started yelling radom words cars dark scary voice I sounded controlling Then I bright idea sing deep creepy voice That bad idea also started dance cars started stare us tall thin girl bestfriend loved piercings nt care others thought I really didnt mind thought us either people knew weird Watching dance voice funniest thing I could ever see I never thought something could get funnier wanted try voice When tried voice slipped lips I started bust laughing fell floor After ten minutes almost house felt like stomachs going bust open long hard laughing While I thinking thought CAPS seemed like two minutes get home I knew I would think something got home time would go faster When walked door house mom asked us CAPS guys dancing waling I looked eachother laughed told nt even know fun Laughter thing brings two people closer I think It nt matter make fools know whats fun All matters build relationship together Does nt matter s friends trying get know eachother boyfriendgirlfriend fun messing around It s always good laugh connection person friendship stillSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In most of the nations,biological parents are allowed to decide to send their wards to one-gender institutes or mixed-sex academies.A certain number of individuals believe that pupils learning from single-sex faculties have consequences in future.I partially agrees with this thesis,in my upcoming paragraphs I will discuss both viewpoints and will give my opinion with relevant examples.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand,pupils those are studying in single-sex schools are more into their studies rather than being in relationships.For instance,in a survey cunducted in 2020, single-sex institutes had more percentage of passed students rather than others.Moreover,many wards are not able to present their real role and their ability of asking questions in front of class full of boys and girls due to their shy nature.Last but not least,mostly pupils are being bullied by the opposite genders like boys are tortuted due to their skinny body and girls due to fashion reasons.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand,there are some consequences of sending pupils into one-gender faculties such as they will have lack of confidence while talking to other people in there future because they will face both genders at their workplace. In addition,due to less compition wards will stay at one point and will not do more efforts to increase the percentage.For illustration,according to professors,it can be seen that in normal schools,peers with different genders are co-operating with each other and learning things quickly due to compitition.\r\n\r\nTo conclude,it is clear that there are both pros and cons of sending pupils into one-sex academy because they will not be confident in the future and will have lack of compition.So,guardians should think about both statements before taking any steps for their child's future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is believed that the same punishments should be equally imposed on juvenile delinquency and adult crime. In my opinion, children should be responsible for their crimes, yet according to the severity of their actions, immature criminals should be punished the same as adults or not.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, in the case of petty crimes such as robbery or fighting, I argue that young children should be punished with more lenient sentences. This is because they are too young to be fully aware of what they have done or to control their aggressive emotions. Therefore, instead of being punished in the same way as adults by being sentenced to 1-year imprisonment, youth criminals should be punished with community service. By doing so, they can compensate for their wrong acts as well as be deterred from reoffending.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, in some serious crimes such as murder, I strongly support the view that the same punishments should be imposed on juvenile killers. It is undeniable that this kind of offence is extremely serious and leaves long-term implications for the victims’ family members. Besides, killers pose a threat to the security of society, so they should be sentenced with heavy punishments regardless of their age. For instance, a Vietnamese teenager still received capital punishment due to the inhumane nature of his motives and the way he killed the whole family. In other words, with serious crimes, strict punishments can act as a deterrent against would-be culprits.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I hold a firm belief that the punishments that youth criminals should receive should be based on the severity of the crime. While juvenile offenders who commit some petty crimes should be punished to a lesser degree, serious crimes such as murder should not be reconsidered no matter what age killers are.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "My position on driverless cars is, I believe they are very dangerous and should not be used by anybody. Although they may be nice when you don't want to drive somewhere but need to go, I do not believe this is something Americans should be taking up for various reasons.\n\nFirst off, I do not think self-driving cars are very safe. If I were to be in a self driving car, I would not be able to relax and trust the car to do the driving, because i'd fear it hitting something causing an accident or just stopping in the middle of the road. Even if the car had automatic stop and auto break systems, I would still have to be very causious and keep my eyes on the road, which is similar to driving a car, so why not save the anxiousness and drive? I believe Americans are getting more and more lazy, therefore they want a self driving car instead of just driving themselves. I think that driving yourself and making sure you are safe, is much better of an idea than putting you're trust in a computerized car. Many questions come to mind when I think about self driving cars.\n\nA question that comes to mind while thinking of driverless cars is, whose fault is it if an accident is caused? Would you blame yourself for the accident or the cars since it was driving? Many problems would arise when dealing with this. For example, if the car industry blames the accident on the person, the person could sue the car company stating that it was the car in control, therefore not being the persons fault, it would be the cars. On the other hand, car industries could argue that the person should've been paying attention to the road, and not putting in their full trust with the car.\n\nIn conclusion, there is a lot to think about when dealing with driverless cars, whoses fault accidents would be, what the new age limit for driving would be, and also whether or not to put you're trust into these cars. Many problems and conflicts would occur, therefore I believe the people should stick to driving the cars. How hard is it to drive a car by ourselves, do we really need the help, or are we just too lazy to want to drive places? Although I admit it would be nice to not have to drive when going on long distance trips, I dont think i'd be able to trust the car to drive for me, and I wouldn't be able to relax when dealing with a self-driving car, even if it had been tested multiple times. I don't think i'll ever be switching to a self-driving car.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In my opinion, we dont need cars that drive on there own. A big reason is because people today are already not very smart, and a car that helps them drive will not make things better. they wont learn to do things on there own, and wont beable to teach younger people, they'll just have a car that drives for them.\n\nIf you drive you do it because you like to, or at least when you first started, it's fun to drive. But theres no point if the car drives by it's self. Plus taxes will go up tromendously, vehicles will cost more. By time 2020 comes they'll be so many people rideing bikes to work and home, because they don't make enough money to by a car that was replaced with a self driving vehicle.\n\nAlso we shouldn't give a reason for people to be able to text and drive, as long as they get warned when the car needs the person to take over. A big problem with that is because if the needs the person to take over and the person is in the middle of a text, they'll want to finish that text, or at least see if they can before it's to late, before get to the wheel and driveing.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It first starts out by saying that we said it was an landform.......We went back to takew another picture where it wasent so cloudy adn foggy to prove to you guys there was no alien involed with this. It was all the landform making this face.we hade rolled the spacecraft 25 degress to center the face in the field\n\nviewso we could get an really good look at this.we took another picture in 2001, we hade the image spand 1.56 meters comparerd to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo.\n\nWhat the pictuer actuallu shows is the martian equivalent of a buttel or mesa landfroms common arounf the American West. Which this shows that landforms are often made.We stil think that this is\n\nmade up of landfrom today. There may still be people out there still thinking that it is made up by aliens but it is trully not. we have anlot of proff leading up to the the theory that it was an landform that made this face.\n\nI would just like to end this on an postive note that we have done a lot of sutdy of this and have taken a lot of pictures so just to say this was made by an landformn. I hope i have changed your mind over this becasue i tried my bes. Just remiber that we have taken alot od pictures and study this a lot to finf the rite answr just for you.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear state senator, I am against the decison to keep the\n\nElectoral College one reason because the candidate running for President isnt being voted for their electors are.\n\nI agree it should change to election by popular vote.\n\nI agree with the election by popular vote because as i stated the people do not vote for the candidate they vote for the electors representing the candidate , then in the passage I learned the electors then elect the President , as I was reading i saw a few name s mentioned in favor of , as it was stated Abolishing the electoral college .\n\nAs I read i saw why some might say keep the Electoral College , Al Gore ran for President and won by popular vote thanks to the electoral college , maybe becasue its a by luck situation because it was two parts you had to win as President , they may dont see it as a fault on Electoral College part because it did say he won by popular vote thanks to the electoral college.\n\nBob Dole agree with the choice of abollishing the Electoral College , some says its unfair outdated , and irrational . The decison to keep the Electoral College should is a win or lose situation because as i read i didnt see a lot of proof of people being for the decison on keeping the Electoral College to make the right decison they shSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Nowadays, it is becoming increasingly common that more people are likely to raise economics or even support cultural contact between society as a beneficial development. This trend has caused some controversial opinions, whether others think that many countries will lose their national identities as a result. In this essay, I will elaborate on both sides and then state my position.\r\n\r\nOn the first hand, the reason community state that the benefits in progress economics and transfer of traditional cultures. Is that many merchants import our products that will bring our domestic to get access to the foreigners, if the products serve more for their life, that will make them know and inspired about our strengths in making those products . Take a good example of it is that when reminded about the most enduring and simple automobiles that will make many people remember Japan which country has strength in producing cars. Almost cars are popular in Western Japan vehicles, many famous brands such as Lexus, Toyota, Honda, Mitsubishi, Mazda, Nissan and others else. In addition, China a country that serves a large number of products for the world, is China, the manufacturer in the world. In particular, this country is well-known for technology, over 90% of the phones we use are made in China. Besides, the development of economics also led to more people's access to foreigners as Japan and China a common language that attracts many people to learn because they want to work and get access which developed regions like China and Japan. The matter, the globalization, many newcomers will make our state easy to impart our history, culture, and traditional lifestyle.\r\n\r\nOn the second hand, others hold that their country will lose their national identities, which is a also persuading explanation. In particular, Vietnam's traditional wear of Ao Dai in Vietnam had been changing remarkably and still has been the accession of many modernised clothes from the Western, and until now the designs of Ao Dai have been changing more than in the past to serve the fabulous view and comfortable wearing of the crowd. Because, many public also agree that the origin of Ao Dai is very inconvenient for their work, and their activities every day. And nearly the origin of Ao Dai design had been modernised, besides that, the situation of wearing Ao Dai is close to appearing in women, and it is very rare to see men wear Ao Dai. It cannot be denied that is a great effect on traditions and culture in many countries.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, increasing the development of business and cultural contact is advanced progress or the matter it will affect national value that I think it both vital, both have good faces and bad faces.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Children are the backbone of society and will run everything in future. So, people tend to say that youth should participate in social work without expecting money in return. Because it can nurture their skills and character. I also agree with this notion of youngsters’ dedication to community jobs.\r\n\r\n To begin with, the main reason is, it enhances personality and inner satisfaction. When teenagers start working for society then they interact with people of different cultures, ethnicities and languages etcetera that polish their communication skills. That helped them to be successful among team members. For instance, adolescents exchange words with rural individuals to teach them to send their children to school. Instead of being selfish, adolescents learnt about verbal and non-verbal talk; touch therapy, patience, silence, cooperation and helping others. Meanwhile, serving the human-beings, youngsters inculcate new abilities from an early age.\r\n\r\n In addition to this, teenagers can utilize their free time for productive things. In fact, they can avoid destructive habits such as playing video games or roaming with friends by devoting that time to the needy population. For example, school-going boys can teach illiterates in their spare hours. Likewise, they can donate money as per their capability. However,generally adolescents have less cash but intention matters most. Hence, this can be beneficial for them personally as well.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, community service is advantageous to both societies and to teens as well as an identity builder and a responsible future citizen. Although, this is a good deed it should not be a distraction for them.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Before this, People often focused on higher education but it is only theory and rarely practice. In my opinion , I suppose that countries should invest more financially on skills and occupation coaching for practical work. To some extent I agree with this statement and I have some reasons below. \r\n\r\nFirst of all, mostly, university students have to borrow money from the government to study education. This is a lot of burden and pressure on them. While training school is cheaper, faster and easier looking for jobs. For instance, people who only through about 6 or 8 months to learn about nail medicare, then they can apply for a job immediately. Moreover, Nowadays, nations in the world lack blue-collar workers such as chefs, workers at farms and staff at hotels. Furthermore, those people have an early career without debt, which helps them be happier and helps them save money to set up their families.\r\n\r\nBut everything has pros and cons.Owning a graduate degree has many benefits such as big companies often choose applicants who are completely done at university . Without a university degree there might rarely be chances of promotion in the future and they might receive a lower rate of salary with the same position than those who had graduated. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I strongly believe that states in the world should provide more money for vocational teaching to improve and develop it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear Newspaper like children stay computer time I would nt children even adults wo nt spend time family kids unhealthy lastly get addicted using computer computer language Please keep reading hear ideas To begin children even adults wo nt spend much time family For example people stay computer day wo nt even worry kids remember I read facebook guy game playing nt answer phone tould son got hit car Now news lpaper wa nt son going man s son went I nt think Also kids adults unhealthy exercise A study shown people use internet nt exercise work suffering obeasity cousin always computer doctor tould minimize muchtime hes obeast He weighs pounds due computer time So tell newspaper want kids abease Lastly nowadays kids obsessed computer computer people use computer use computer language school And put internet phone go myspace facebook ect Now newpaper happen wrote computer language article woud nt get fired In conclusion hope took letter concideration kids adults unhealthy kiods obsessed computer lastly wo nt spendtime familySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "technology to read students emotional expression is would be a big help for students. This would be very valuable for students today. Today students dont always talk about the problem that they are going through. This woulf because you would know how a friend is feeling. Teachers today would be able to communicate with students better because they know how you are feeling. A friend will be able to talk to you and help you get through a class. Students today have a problem being able to express themselfs, when going through something in your life it could help you get through things, students dont always know how to get through the rough things that are going on in life. kids will release built up emotions if someone knows what they are going through because they will know thatyou need a friend to talk to. Sometimes a kids dosent always know how they are feeling so if a computer is helpful to tell them how they feel they will be able to communicate with other people. to keep kids from bring upset or depressed it will help because an older adult will be able to talk to the kid and get them through all the things that they are going through.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "if we go to the second planet from the sun the gravity would be more tense and would have different affects on humans. the gravity on venus would pull them down more than earth because it is closer to the sun by two planets away. but we also need to think about the air and the atmosphere because if we just go there then we might die. the air on venus is un supportive to humans and the water is not there or it might be a type of water that if you drink it it will kill you. the storms on venus are acid storms, the rain is acid. so i think the only reason why the author is saying that venus is a challenge is because not only the facts above. but also that the fact is that on the serface, temperetures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit. and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we humans experience on earth. so he also might be saying that it might be a challenge because if we take a rocket, it might be torn apart if we dont have the right mesurements.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is generally acknowledged that, in today's modern cities, the already high and increasing traffic volume is a major concern for most residents. And the demand for a solution is equally on the rise. Then, what are the causes of this, and what actions can be carried out by the town halls to solve this problem?\r\n\r\nFirst of all, let us dive into the main reason leading to this situation, which is the huge immigration that these metropolises have been experiencing during recent decades. Unfortunately, the steep growth of major urban areas was not correctly planned by the administrations, thus an important lack of investment in public infrastructure exists today. Additionally, centralization policies and inadequate communal transportation exacerbate the problem, forcing those who do not live in the city centre to commute by car.\r\n\r\nDespite these challenges, the opinion that raising the investment in bus and metro lines is the most efficient way to deal with this situation is commonly shared by most experts. Several studies carried out by UPC in Barcelona, show that were the unfinished new underground lines working nowadays, Barcelona's car volume would experience a drop of nearly 25%. More than enough to considerably reduce jams that occur during peak hours and significantly grow the overall street flow.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, if major urban areas improved their public transportation budget, they would experience a substantial drop in traffic volume. Given that most of them lack an adequate transport system and citizens are forced to travel by car.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", the author describes a piece of technology that is able to reveal the thruth behind a human emotion. The Facial Action Coding System (FACS) is able to detect the slightest movements in a facial expression, and can accurately tell you what that face conveys, even if the face is only a facade of the true emotions. The author describes a hypothetical situation in the words of Dr. Huang, suggesting that this technology can be applied to classroom computers to make a custom lesson from student to student, depending on their facial expressions through the lesson plan. This could potentially be a very good idea.\n\nIn the modern school system, alot of focus has shifted from quality to quantity. Rather than make sure the student understands the matierial, the teachers adhere to a lesson plan that tells when you must move on, whether the student is ready to or not. Besides that, the lesson plan tells exactly how to teach it. Education has become a one size fits all program, when in reality, each child's brain learns differently. With this computer technology applied to classrooms, the students would still be able to learn at the quick pace needed in the fast-paced classrooms of today, but in a more effective manner. it would customize and bend to the student's needs, and could make for a more effective learning environment.\n\nSecondly, the overall mental state of the students could improve. Too many students in the modern age have built on habits of procrastination and flat out ignoring their work. This is due to the fact that there is nothing fun or interesting about the lessons themselves. Each learning style is different, and with this technology, students have the oppurtunity to have a lesson that can accurately detect if the student understands or not. By hiding true feelings, any person can drive their stress levels up. They can become anxious or even depressed. If the FACS was active in a classroom setting, it would be better able to see whether the student truly undertsands, or if they're just saying they do.\n\nLastly, it could be easier on the teachers, and improve grades and test scores. Grades and test scores reflect as heavily on the students as they do the teachers. If a student is failing, one must wonder; is it the student's fault, or is it the teacher's fault? Is the student simply not paying attention, or does the teacher explain things in a way that makes it difficult to understand? All of these problems could be solved with the help of the FACS. By seeing how each student's computer customizes the lesson, a teacher could be better able to undestand every student's learning style, and could design a lesson plan that fits a larger majority. The student might be more comfortable showing true emotions to a computer than a person. In fact, they might subconciously show more genuine emotions to a teacher with no face. With this in mind, it can be safely assumed that the FACS would gather the most accurate data possible, and would offer an improved idea of how students feel.\n\nOverall, the FACS could be a very useful and effective tool in the classroom. It would be able to detect true emotions, and customize a lesson plan in a way a human simply could not. The human brain is able to be biased and easily fooled, while a computer cannot be swayed. Computers are completely objective, and can only do what the program tells them to. A cold, hard calculating device could be the key to a higher understanding.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Artificially intelligent robots are gradually replacing human workforce.In my opinion,although,there are many technical jobs that can be taken over by robots,it is unlikely that some professions which require human compassion and touch will be eventually carried out only by people.In this essay I will discuss what are the reasons only a few sectors necessitate human involvement.\r\n\r\nRoborts can perform most of the menial works that does not require specific skills and complex details.Many corporate companies and intelligence agencies turn to artificially intelligent devices as they are cost effective and can save a lot of time in training and employing a human.Furthermore, these automated workstations can function without any break and holiday.There is no need for monthly salary and compensation.It is a one-time investment.For example,military intelligence use a lot of robotic equipments which are money and life saving.Because of the aforementioned reasons human resources will have been replaced in many areas of labour.\r\n\r\nHowever ,there are some human jobs can be only done with complex mental tasks.These can be only performed by a highly trained professional.For instance, nursing,medical practice, psychological counsiling and social works.Automated mechienaries cannot achieve the level of perfection needed for this highly sensitive career.\r\n\r\n In conclusion,I believe that robotics could cause a severe umemployment in near future;although, occupations that involve human touch and emotional intelligence can be only done by humanbeings.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author Created memoir remember people family nt live usThe author remember us culture stuffThe author created memoir Narciso talking familySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Using facial recognation to try and exzamin students emoition's is completely immoral. It's an completly obstruction to privacy. Students should be able to feel emotion without having some crepper staring at you through your screen. That's like down right almost brain reading. I don't only think it's bad idea I think that kind of thing should be illegal. Or there should at the very least be a setting to turn it off, kind of like Privavcy mode or something within that collum.\n\nAlso, who's to say how accurate this can a be. A lot of people make a certain expression when thy're feeling the compltete opposite. When I'm doing class work and I'm pretty focused my face goes pretty blank on the face. But that does not mean I'm not happy while I'm working.\n\nI believe Da Vinci was just trying to decode the Mona Lisa to understand her better, thats fine if you're a piece of art. NOT when you're a human being with private emotions!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the \"German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars\", there is a new district that has forbidden street parking, driveways, garages. The residents of this upscale community are suburbans poineers.\n\nIn france, there is one street that has a tram that runs to downtown. The tram is only thing that drives on the road. there are 2 places to park, one is you park at a large garage at the end of the development , two is to buy a space for 40,000 dallors and also a home. 70% of vauban do not own cars and 57% sold there cars. I say they should all have cars and drive on then roads because its easier to get around and faster. they should make deals with everyone because so everyone has a chance to drive.\n\nOn the other hand, they should not use cars because they would have to pay for gas and people would cause accidents and get hurt or killed. Cars can be very dangerous and could brake down or cause your life. They can be expensive and some that you can not afford. Cars can eat your money away just by draveling long distance and always got to check your car before you go anywhere.\n\nIn the end, cars are apart of people lives and every day there will be a car on a road. the united states expanses suburban ideas about the car cultures. Americans are making all sorts of kind of cars and trying to build them more safer and better for the people driving them.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Looking at the factors of being able to visit Venus the author has some great points in the passage due to how dangerous it seems, The author is very correct on even asking why scientists are so drawn to visiting this unexplored planet for good reasons alone. The planet Venus has some pros and also cons. it may well once was a planet just like Earth a long time ago but that we only know. and some pros is that maybe that planet could possibly even help scientists with new possible discoveries.\n\nElon musk is one who is also trying something beyond of what we have ever set our sights on. he is trying to find a way to colonize mars!!, yet we also have plans to visit Venus. The Author also has some very good points on why its so difficult to even get close to the planet at all. When stated \"Each previouse mission was unmanned, and for a good reason\" in paragraph 2 is almost forshadowing the dangers of the plannet Venus.\n\nDue to a very thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide that blanket venus is one of the dangers of the planet, so looking at the factors again on why the Author thinks why Venus is very difficult to set foot on or even get close to, We can just look at the planet from a safe distance. for now.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Venus would be such a hard process to get information on how it is like. Scientist say theirs no way of getting information unless your very close to venus. Nasa has been trying to find ways to study venus.\n\nVenus is the closet planet to the earth, it is usually called the earths twin. Venus has another name for itself such as Evening Star, Venus is one of the brightest lights in the night sky. Venus is challenging the humans to examine more closely, No spacecraft survied the landing no more than a few hours. Their hasn't been a single spaceship that has touched venus in three decades.\n\nVenus, long ago venus was problady covered in large oceans and could of supported various forms of life. The planet venus has a surface of rocky sediment, it includes similiarfeatures such as valleys,moutains, and craters. The temperatures would be very high around 170 fahrenheit, however the conditions up there would not be easy, but survivable for humans.\n\nInconclusion, venus is a very hard planet to get information from, but humans are finding ways to go up there and try to get information. Venus is the closet planet to earth, People now so call it the earths twin.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The setting desert hard setting water help If author would population trait water fountain shade would fine But desert one around hot dry water shade tumbleweeds crossed path CAPS This dicride loneleness one desert help The setting could killed fish camp The setting huge affected authorSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Have you ever thought to yourself,\n\n\"Wow, this lesson is boring.\" You may not need to ever say that again with this new technology. It reads emotions on how people feel through their facial expressions. This is a good idea for helping students' in their classes. It could change a lot. It could even make students' grades to increase!\n\nReading students' emotions could be incredibly important. It could be important because a lot of students don't pay attention in their classes. This is not good because that could put the students' off track with their grades. If students' grades slip, this could result in them to not graduate on time or not graduate at all! Students' should be able to learn lessons and not be irrataed, or borded out by them. They need to make lessons more entertaining.\n\nIn the new technology, Facial Acting Coding System, computers can read human emotions. If they were to convert this over to schools they would be able to read the students' emotions. This could make a great change for their grades. It would be able to read their emotions and tell if the students weren't feeling the lesson. Therefore, they could make the lesson a bit more entertaining. This would allow students to not be as bored and engage in the lessons more.\n\nIf they add Facial Acting Coding System in schools, this would also give a opportunity to engage more with students. It would allow them to also know if that student is sad. This allows the teacher to help the student if help is avaliable with their problem. Students' may go through a crisis while in school, and won't have anyone to talk to because their feelings are isolated. This new technology could realize that the student is sad, which it would then alert the teacher. This allows the teacher to know that he or she is having a hard time, i'll cut him some slack. In the text it says, \"For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\" This quote relates back to the claim because if teachers see that their student is sad they can engage with that student to see what's wrong.\n\nTo conclude, the new technology, Facial Action Coding System, could be really helpful in schools with students'. They can help them ingage in lessons more when they're bored. It can also help students who aren't feeling the best. This new technology could change\n\na lot in schools. Graduation rates will increase. They need to consider putting this new technology in schools.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The features setting affect cyclist many ways The cyclist looked map instead taking old man advise information map He almost died listened old men didnt look map If cyclist car mabey would better luck would going faster bikeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Luke Bomberger had no idea his life would change so soon after his high school graduation. Until his friend Don Reist invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. Luke couldn't say know. He knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime.\n\nThen the UNRRA hired ''Seagoing Cowboys''to take care of the horses,young cows,and mules that were shipped overseas. Luke then says''besides helping people,I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special.\n\nLater on it opened up the world to him .\"I'm grateful for the opportunity,\"he says.\"It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\"And that awareness stayed with him,leading his family to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many yaers.\n\nLuke has a lot of experiences and know how places in China and Europe but Luke's favorite of all was seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special and if you were to join you might see those places to and probobly make and meet new and old friends.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "show absent feels without You see says when come back also says the geese return hibiscus budding Shows feel without feel return carry left last time shown says Then I take test againSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Determined new beginning symbolism reasons I believe author concluded story paragraph She finds new hope buying plant newly determined pass test writes As sees geese flying overhead realizes determination must vows better test next year With new flower feels like shes starting shes able pass test seems important When author write and geese return hibiscus budding I take test shows symbolism By telling flower blooming new buds symbolizes Saeng wanted turn new leaf sort Determined new beginning symbolism reasons I think author concluded story paragraphSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "source 1\n\nThe upscale community are suburban pionners, they have a limit of car driving, there is only two places to park a car if you're the owner, one of them is in a large garage that the owner buys for $40,000, along with the home.\n\nMany percent of the families do not own cars, and other families sold their cars because it was to tense to own one and to expensive, a lot of the families are happier walking and ridding bicyles, but the parents most be very careful with the children.\n\nVauban its a growing trend in Europe and the Unites states.\n\nDavid Goldberg, an important official of transportation in america said that since the World War II alot of the economy was centred in cars, when there is many families that can't afford the money for a car, and all the bills that the law ask for it, and he thinks that needed to change.\n\nsource 2\n\nParis enforced a partial driving time to clear the air of the city, Mondays people with cars or any kind of motor were ordered to not drive, or pay a $31.00 bill, abaut 4000 drivers were fine and agree with that.\n\n60 percent of the capital of france congestion was down after 5 days of intensifying, rivaling Beijing China, that is one of the most polluted cities in the world, Paris has the most smog in Europe, after Brussels and London.\n\nsource 3\n\nBogota, Colombia, millions of people took buses, walked, biked, skated, etc... during a car free day. Its the 3rd time cars have been baned in this city of 7 million people, violators faced a $25.00 bill; the goal of this event is to promote transportation and reduce smog, not eveen the rain stoped poeple from bogota.\n\nits a good way to take away stress and pollution, this event was huge, eveen people from other countries came.\n\nsource 4\n\nPresident Obama have goals to curb the United States greenhouse gas, americans are buying fewer cars, but getting fewer licenses, as each year go by.\n\nThe number of miles driven in the United States peaked in 2005, according to an analysis by Doug short of advisor.\n\npeople between 16 to 39 year olds have been getting license, people between 19 to 21 year olds have not bothered to get drivers license.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In these generations, the public often utilised newspapers to search for truth and understand modern world facts. The newspapers in this modern world have come in digital and physical forms. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the subjects with some examples by demonstrating my understanding.\r\n\r\nFirstly, newspapers are communications tools that are official and trusted by the public. In contrast, people often refer to newspapers to further understand the issues that happened within the community. For instants, public publishers would search for more publications' opinions, with some backup points from the professional before they published their writings in the media, which makes the community solid ideas about what was happening in society. Likewise, this is a trend that people trusted the newspaper rather than social media. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some of the publications have more support or sponsors from some organisations or government parties their intentions might influence by their articles and news published. Hence, in the ,paper they will focus on a certain topic and argue certain issues towards their opposition, some of their arguments are making sense but they are picturing the opposition as the devil and did not critically look at the insight of the issues. As a result, these ideas will influence the reader's ideology towards society.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, newspapers are significantly important towards the community, but as a reader and ,receiver we have to be more crucial in our thought and reflect on the topics that have been published in the media.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars is an amazing idea on my opinion.\n\nI like this invention because the streets will be more safey with the new technology in the car.\n\nThe car also helps the nature because it doesn't use as much gas as a regular car does.\n\nOnce they completely finish modifying the car, it be a good use for transportation.\n\nPeople that drive at night or just coming home from work can be a little tired and it's hard to open theirs eyes and accidents happen.\n\nMy mom is one of those people that work at night and have to drive home really tired and she had a lot of accidents because she can barely open her eyes.\n\nThis driverless cars can really help them go home safely.\n\nThis car can really help the future with its technology from the automatic brakes to sensors of the cars.\n\nThis invention can really save a lot of lifes.\n\nOnce the car is completely finish they should recommend it to everyone the drives a car so less accidents happen and don't have to worry about the accidents will happen.\n\nAlso doesn't have to worry about on car insurance.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Have you ever wondered what students are emotionally expressing? Well now a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System are trying to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom. Do you think the use of this technology is valuable? A new piece of technology is coming out called the Facial Coding System it enables computers to identify human emotions.\n\nA piece of technology that enables computers to identify human emotions is called the Facial Action Coding System. I think the technology is valuble because so that the teachers and students now what each other is feeling. To backup my claim it says in the text \" Most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc.\"\n\nWhich means that the technology is valuble so that you don't have to describe it will tell you.\n\nI think that the techology called the Facial Action Coding System would be valuable because it could help with communication so they know if you are sad, happy, etc. In the text it states that \" Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication.\" Which means that most communication is non talking just by emotion.\n\nFinally, my last reason I think that the new technology called Facial Action Coding System is valuable is because it helps produce your facial muscles. In the text it states \" According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them\". Which means that the technology helps produce your facial muscles.\n\nAll in all the technology called the Facial Action Coding System is valuable in many ways. By the facial muscles, the nonverbal communication, and how the students are feeling. There are also many ways to back it up. The Facial Action Coding System is reading the emotional expressions of students.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I feel that driveless cars are needed for the world it would change the world as we know it. In these cars there are sensors that can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\n\nThese cars are very important because they can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel. The cars can also steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, nut all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\n\nEven though the human driver has to be alert at all times to be ready to take over this necessitates the car being ready to quickly get the drivers attention whenever a problem occurs. Some manufacturers hope to do that by bringing in car entertainment and information systems that use heads up displays such displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over - something not available to drivers trying to text with a cell phone. In this way the car system is actually a safety feature, and safety is a big concern.\n\nSo honestly I feel that dispite some of the flaws that these cars may have it can still keep you safe. Even when you back up your car will let you know if your gonna hit an object such as a car or predestrian.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "American citizens know that the cars driven throughout America is polluting the air. Not just the cars in U.S but cars all around the world. Residents on Vauban in Germany, Paris, Bogota and even the USA cars are reduced from bieng driven or they had been banned to reduce the pollution from the air. They dont want to turn out like China, which is know as one of the most polluted cities in the word. Cars been a very help, but it looks like the end of car culture beacuse less cars that are bieng used less pollution we are causing to the Earth, which mean its better of with out them.\n\nVauban, a women named Heidrun Walter said, \"when i had a car I was always tense. Im much happier this way\". There for one of the advantages of limiting car usage is that losing tense about a car. Also in Vauban,street parking, driveways and home garages generally are forbidden. That mean it take less space for parking, past two decades there was an effort in making cities denser, and better for walking now they can if they limite the usage of cars. It lower emissions and improves saftey, These are some advantages of limiting car usage.\n\nAlmost 4,000 drivers were fine, according to Reuters in Paris. They been fine beacuse Paris had banned driving due to smog. Trying to fix the problem to clear the air of the global city they ordered to leave thier cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31). Less cars mean less warmer climants beacuse cold nights and warm days caused the warmer layer of air to trap car emissions. Benfits would come from less car usage. Now in Bogota there is a car-free day, when u leave cars at home and you cant use them for a whole day. For that day there isn't any traffic because all of the residents are hiking, biking, skating or taking the bus to work. This car-free day reduce smog and if any person violats that day they are going to be fine $25. They said its a good way to take away stress and lower pollution. Municipal authorities from other countries came to Bogota to see the event and were enthusiastic.\n\nPresident Obama's ambitious goals to curb the United states' greenhouse gas emission, unveild last week. Recent studies suggest that the Americans are buying fewer cars. They are driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by. The love of vehicles seems to be cooling. Population growth,the number of miles driven in the Untied States peaked in 2005 and dropped steadily thereafter. Car ownership per household and per person started to come down.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I remember time I patient It cusins house It boring though I also sad lonly thetime I going tell It long ago I cusins house Everyone except There enough four whielers I one left I felt lonly I couldnt believe I bored I All I could woch envy Everyone fun except Everyone screaming joy lafing intill would cry much fun Then dad corner cunies I smile try look like I fun asks I want go I say yes So I I hop four like tomorrow I knew little main thank dad take I could imagen much fun I felt breeze hit face shirt flappin back amazing I wish day would neve end I said screaming joy I lot fun day I never much fun life A lot happen patient Even though I bord beginning worth end time I patientSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "These days, there has been an increase in the number of people delaying their parenthood. Although this trend has a number of benefits, I believe that the drawbacks will be far more significant. \nThere are some reasons why people baulk at the prospect of conceiving children. The first reason is that the cost of raising a child is exorbitant nowadays. Admittedly, most young couples just have meager income, so they will struggle to afford to send children to keep their children well-fed and well-clothed. Delaying pregnancy allows couples to amass wealth; as a result, they will be financially stable before embarking on their parenthood. Another reason is that having children later, people can make the most of their youth. Child-rearing is an onerous responsibility, which can tie people down. In other words, when having babies, couples might spend most of their time taking care of their children, so they will have less time for their hobbies. \nDespite the reasons mentioned above, I do believe that people should consider the drawbacks of this trend. Later childbearing will pose some risks including miscarriage, stillbirth and prematurity. In terms of children, being born premature, they may have to face high risks of birth defects or low birth weight. Apart from that, children born to older parents may be at risk of disorders and diseases, including autism and Down syndrome. In terms of mothers, aged women tend to have more health problems, such as having high blood pressure, which affects negatively on fetus. It also takes mothers longer to recuperate from the labour.\nIn conclusion, while people can decide to delay their parenthood because of some convincing reasons above, I believe that its disadvantages are more considerable. It is therefore important that couples should contemplate doing so.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Hello my name is Jordan and this is my eassy. He had a very well writen \"essay\" that really makes you think of what venus really had on the surface of its extrem and harsh envierment. The fact that they are thinking of send people to that planet is relly mind blowing to me. He also did an amazing job at discribing the dangers of the planet and all of the extrem caonditions on the surface like the volcanos and earthquakes as mention in paragraph three.\n\nAlso how he mentioned how many veachals have been sent to the planet and how they didnt survived the harsh weather for more than a copple hours. It is very intresting how he discribes the way NASA is trying to deal with the challenges.\n\nthe way they have made some progress. such as the silicone carbide electronics that can survive in a simulated or replecated venus up tp 3 weeks are mentioned in paragraph 6. My question is would'nt the silicon melt with the heat on venus that is hotter than mars that is closer to the sun. It is very intresting how they have ideas of how they can have people on venus with the hover crafts that the resurchers would stay on and collect information.\n\nOneday this earth is going to be imposible to live on and we woill have to move to anoher planet or just die off and honestly we have lived for way to long longer than any other type of animal that has ever lived on this earth. we have survived so many things and eras. Many wars have been foght and many men have dies on this eath just fot the sake of defending there country and having the will honor to die with respect. Other animals have gone we have done too much damage to the earth and taken to many animals to extiton and the oceans are extremly poluted many fish are just dying off and peolpe cant seem to know why but the harsh truth is that the wrold is ending and there is no going back now.\n\nHumans hve changed climet pattens and know evey year it seems like the storms are getig stronger and the summers are geting hotter. The winters are taking longer to arive. and longer to leave volcano eruptions are almost common now evry year ut seems like a volcano want to erupt and sometimes it dose other times its just the ash that kills peolpe. What im trying to get at is that we really should'nt be exporing other planets when we dont even know what 98% of our oceans havent even been expored we need to learn how to take care of this planet before we even think about moving on to another planet or we will do the samething. The goverments dont seem to care much about the subject and act like its not happening. In conclution its amazing that we are trying to send men to other planets but not we really shoud'nt no matter how safe or dangeruse it is we need to fix the problems here on earth first.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "While it is often argued by some people that youngsters are more responsible in current era, whereas others take the view that many young people are more attentive in the old days. My opinion is that it is better to hold many responsibilities in nowadays and this essay will discuss about both views.\r\n\r\nOn one side of the argument, there are people who hold the opinion that children grow with less responsibility. The major reason for believing this is that laziness. This is due to they spend more time with the social media such as Facebook, Twitter and Tumbler. Furthermore, it urges them to check their cell phone frequently and this leads to lack of helping others. Another reason is that children's are really careless when they do daily activities. Consequently, this will For example, a child aged between 8 to 12 years is less attentive in their work. \r\n\r\nDespite the above arguments, I hold the position that young people are more responsible. Indeed, one reason why I take this position is that they are focused in the field of education. Since, the education system in the modern era is highly competitive and they were facing many difficulties to study. However, it is my opinion that kids show respect to their elders in the family. As a result, the bonding between both are very strong and brings more happiness in the family. To illustrate, the New York Times publishes an article about the responsibilities of children in younger age, which surge from the year 2019 to 2020.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while both views are commonly held in society, I believe that youngsters show more responsibility. This is because that education is most important and in addition with family bonding. Given this situation, it is recommended that government around the world should think about implementing this form of encouragement through the online media.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Throughout history, advanced technology is what everyone shoots for. However, advanced technology has caused many problems, as it has also been effective.\n\nThere are certain things \"man\" should control themselves; automotives is one. Yes, a assemly line is much more easier than carrying heavy things to where they need to be, but completely removing a person from an object that can easily end a life is not only lazy, but abserb. Us as humans were given one specifc thing that seperates us from everything else; a brain.\n\nAs stated in the prompt, if an accident occurs, who will be held responsible? The driver \"behind the wheel\" or the robot that is controlling the vehicle? The car may have an overide system, but a human will not be able to react quick enough in that split second in the chaos that the robot has created.\n\nThere are, however, certain things robots will thrive in that humans don't. For instance, a \"whiskey throttle\". This is when a human panics and gets a heavy foot, which causes an accident that was not intended. Robots do not panic, therefore, they will not rear-end the car ahead of them.\n\nI am all with saftey, but letting a robot have complete and total control over a car is not one of them. I disagree with driverless cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The war has affected the lives of hundreds maybe even thousands of people. I think we should help those people in need if you are with me sign up to be a seagoing cowboy. A seagoing cowboy is someone who takes care of animals that are shipped over sea. Then brings them to the people that need help since the war ruined their food supply or cattle.\n\nIt is kinda hard to care for the animals but its not to much of a challenge. I used to help out on my aunts farm all the time and that gave me some experience. It also is a little disgusting to clean the stalls the first time but I pulled through it and eventually I got used to it. My favorite part has to be traveling when i get some free time its fun to go sight seeing.\n\nAs a seagoing cowboy you go all around the world and visit amazing places but there are sad moments aswell. When I found out that people other than me are being affected by the war and some are suffering worse, that opened up my eyes. I thought to myself thats why I joined the seagoing cowboys after all not just because I wanted to see the world but also to help people in need.\n\nLastly being a seagoing cowboy isnt just an adventure its much more. Its part of our future. We need to help everyone in the world through this hard time. Being a seagoing cowboy will help do that. Please consider the offer and sign up.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The builders Empire State Building ORGANIZATION many obstacles face building mooring mast dirigibles dock Top winds flammability foreign ships airspace laws hindered production blimp dockVery high New York winds dangerous If blimp tried dock back would whipped around could end harming someone Being high s dangerousMany foreign dirigibles filled hydrogen extremely flammable witnessed Hindenburg When happened owners thought risky things flying highly populated areasThere laws made prohibiting low aircrafts densely populated urban areas could docking d breaking law every time That nt risk owner s wanted takeThe idea mooring mast under thought idea Builders forgot wind flammability Ships airspace laws would end stopping mast s success Now long useless pole topSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I support driverless cars. Driverless cars could make this world a safer place. Driverless cars drive for you if you want it to. If theres a construction area, traffic hold up, or its icey out you can take control of the car. If you ever feel unsafe in the car when you aren't driving you can take control. Its not like these cars are always driving for you. These cars are very impressive.\n\nThese cars would start out very expensive because they are so high tech. It would be hard for some people to afford them. If older people buy these cars it would be better for them. It could drive for them at night if they can't see as well. Or younger people that maybe aren't the best at driving. If your parents don't trust you with your liscense these cars would help. It would make your mom worry a lot less. These cars provide safe driving.\n\nDriverless cars steer for you, the seat vibrates when you might be going into a hazardess area where you need to take control, and it has a GPS reciever. If you have an emergency and need to text someone this car provides safety. It will drive for you when you are texting. Hopefully people won't use this car the wrong way and text all the time because you still need to be aware of what's going on around you.\n\nYou don't need to worry about wrecking your car if this car is driving for you. If you are driving there is still a chance you could wreck it. Driverless cars have motion sensors and other things that make it safe in that range.\n\nSo all in all these cars provide safety. They have so many qualities that make them usable and great cars. This could be one of the best inventions in this world. It could create less crashes, less drunk driving accidents, less texting and driving accidents,and on and on. I hope they make this car to create a better world. It would help people in so many ways. Movies fanticize about driverless cars so why not actually have and use them. Driverless cars are coming no matter what people have to say about them. If you don't agree with them don't buy one, its simple. They say we will have these cars by 2020. Its coming so quick. The destination is almost here.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In many parts across the globe, people are migrating from rural areas to urban areas in search of a better life. However, this rapid migration has led to popluation explosion in cities which seems to put tremendous pressure on available resources. In order to restore normalcy, this movement ought to be reversed and this can be done in a number of ways.\nTo begin with, the most common reason why people move to urban centers from rural areas is the fact that urban areas provide a wide range of opportunities that enable people to live a better life. For instance, all major metropolitan areas in the world provide access to state-of-the-art facilties in healthcare and education. Needless to say, both these aspects are the piilars of a good quality life that every individual desires to live. Unfortunately, as rural areas generally lag far behind in both these aspects, people are forced to migrate to cities. Moreover, urban dwellers are undoubtedly benefitted by advancements in all avenues of inquiry compared to their rural counterparts. This is because of the speed with which urban areas are able to incorporate these advancments into their infrastructure. While it may take a couple of months for a technological innovation to make its way to a village, it is not uncommon to see resdidents of a city making use of that innovation within no time. Thus, it makes perfect sense for people to leave the countryside in order to settle in cities.\nHowever, cities are suffering from a host of problems because of large number of people opting to settle here. Firstly, accomodating a burgeoning population is a grave challenge that grips cities. This can be circumvented by providing villages with the basic facilties essential to support life. This would deter people from migrating to cities. Besides, if attempts are made to integrate rural areas into the mainstream, they would be benefitted by latest technological developments and people would no longer feel the need to move to cities in order to take advantage of those advancements.\nTo conclude, although there are many reasons why individuals are migrating from the countryside into the cities in many parts of the world, if development in rural areas is emphazised upon, this trend could be reversed.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Hoverboards, robots and driverless cars? This is technology we have invented in the new age. We are gifted with the presence of new technology every year and somehow we seem to abuse it or take it for granted. Which is why I believe we should not have driverless cars. We should not have these driverless cars because technology malfunctions all the time and because this technology can be abused. Let's journey into an idea that should remain in a mad scientist's lab.\n\nWe should not have driverless cars because technology malfunctions all the time in present day society. Paragraph 4 of the text talks about LIDAR, a program that keeps the car updated of it's 3-D surroundings. Being a driverless car, what if LIDAR stops working? Does the car sop working altogether? Or does this machine simply keep going with it's routine? This puts the driver in danger, the pedestrians in harm, and in all cases the other drivers on the road. This is a common technological malfunction that can happen to any driverless car anywhere in the world. The text in Paragraph 9 also touches on the same subject of the technology failures. As the text says, \" If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver of the manufacturer?\" This piece of evidence illustrates why a driverless car is dangerous. A simple technological malfunction can happen and it can put the customer at risk, and even the company.\n\nLastly, a driverless car should not be developed because this piece of technology can be abused. We see crimes around the world daily, monthly, and even yearly. We aslo see that these crimes are getting worse and worse over the time period. If we implement a driverless cars, who knows what limits and boundaries these crimes will break. These cars can be used for anything: drive-by shootings, hit and runs, and even kidnapping. Who is the car to say what is morally right and wrong? The car does not know and it may not ever know, which is why it needs to not be developed.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars do not need to be developed in the world. Driverless cars put people at risks with technology malfunctions and can tarnish a company's name with multiple lawsuits against it. Driverless cars also can be abused for multiple things. Society has made many technological advances, but this is one that needs to remain untouched. Maybe this is better for the sake of a company's fortune, or maybe it's better for the people of the world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is believed that lots of pupils are not diligent and assiduous in classes. Although there are different reasons for this case, that can be sorted out by the teachers.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, nowadays, 70 per cent of pupils still in a class has different characteristics. It may be so difficult to be attentive with such strength. Furthermore, it is the responsibility of a teacher to keep or maintain the politeness of a class by understanding their way of thinking. Using a simple and comprehensive manner of teaching can help the students to keep their concentration on classes. However, in such classes, learning by heart are the only ones who benefit from this sort of teaching. For instance, if a professor just read the lesson from PowerPoint without giving any passion, eagerness to students, many children may not be interested in the topic.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, if teachers use an appropriate method such as exploiting a diagram and video on his lesson to explain it, it would help students paying attention properly. Nevertheless, all students can gain knowledge. Secondly, separating students into their groups can mingle with each other during the break and other activities. For example, the World Education System has confirmed that children from different groups can help their friends to promote their studies.\r\n\r\nIn a nutshell, students, although in large numbers, maybe help each other. Also, it provided that the teachers oversee their homework and maintain a great attitude toward the class.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "When building Empire State Building builders faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock From reading excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted stated dirigibles long one thousand feet that four blocks New York City This brought first obstacle land thing They could nt put new york existing law airships flying low urban areas Architects also find way redesign building support weight dirigible The biggest obstecle faced nature The winds top building constantly changing although would tied building back would still swirling nt way fix usually dirigibles weighed cylinder blocks open field would risky populated areaSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "Education is always a controversial topic among individuals, especially primary schooling which is seen as uselessness for students in a group of people’s eyes. While another group of individuals disagree with it, and they believe that knowledge been taught in primary schools is applicable to students. I personally agree that primary education is valuable for children in both building children’s social values and helping them with common sense.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, primary education can teach students basic knowledge which is able to be utilized in their daily life, such as counting and literate. Without these fundamental abilities, people would be difficult to survive in society independently, not mention cashing after higher education in the future. For instance, there is more than ninety per cent of positions required basic literate in the contemporary job market. So illiterates individuals might be hard to find a proper job after growing up. \r\n\r\nFurthermore, schooling can build student’s social values such as respecting and socializing, and these merits are particularly essential to human beings when interacting with others. According to my experience, Chinese students are required to greet their teachers before each class, and they are absolutely not allowed to fight and bully other classmates. Under the regulations, young generations are taught to respects others and politeness which can be utilized in social life, and this can be beneficial to them when making friends or communicate with others.\r\n\r\nHowever, it is not saying that all knowledge in primary education is useful. A recent report shows that nearly thirty per cent of the information in elementary schools will not be used in the following decades. Besides that, it is undeniable that the enormous knowledge we have learnt in the classes has been forgotten after graduation. Hence, it seems crucial to change some curriculum of elementary education to be more practical.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, even though there is some knowledge that might be not practical in real life, overall, I believe that the classes in primary schools are vital to individuals in terms of socialization and common senses.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The facial action coding system for emotions was developed to detect different emotions. It may seem creepy to know everyones emptions but it can benefit teachers. It can even help out people in general to identify different emotions on people. The technology should be used to read students expressions. The technology should be used in school for its uniqueness, lessons, and overall connection to students and teachers.\n\nWith the system, teachers can detect truthfullness in their students. It can help connection with students and their teachers, or even just peers. People can force different faces to convince others to think they are different that how they actually feel. But, with the system you can tell when someone is genuine about a emotion. For example, there are certain muscles that move when someone is truly happy. The muscular units move around, the muscles at the cheek bones lift, and the crow feet around your eyes move.\n\nThe system itsself is highly intelligent, and completely new to our generation. The technology is advanced and had never been created before. The sytem can calculate the percentages of different emotions on people. There are a variety of emotions that it detects such as happiness, surprise, anger, disguist, fear, and sadness. It can even be used for ads to see if someone is interested in a certain thing. If they remain happy, they will show similar ads.\n\nThe coding sytem can be used by teachers for lessons. Students can appear bored and not interested in class. With the sytem, teachers know when they are into and engaged into their learning in the class. The system would detect the facial muscles to recognize them as uninterested. Then, they can adjust the lesson to engage more students and improve their learning overall.\n\nIn conclusion, teachers and schools should utilize this system and work it into their lessons. It has tons of benefits to learning. It is something new and advanced to the society. Also, it can be used to get more students invloved in learning, and ensure excited engaged students. Overall, the coding system can help with lessons, connection, and its uniqueness to society.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "Career is an important part of life since It helps people to gain respect as well as wealth. There are two points of view regarding the best way to have a successful career. Some believe that higher education is the best way while others think experience has a bigger effect. Since both views have valid arguments, it can be ignorant if one of them gets dismissed and because of that, this essay will discuss both.\n\nEducation and experience are two critical factors for a good career. Higher education will help students to learn fundamental science for a job and use them as a source for doing their job. For example, a mechanical engineer learns how a machine works and that knowledge will give him or her the ability to fix them. Although an experienced mechanic can fix machines as well, in case of new and unknown problems, educated mechanics can provide a solution, not experienced ones. On the other hand, studying in college or university will provide a lot of job opportunities for students since a lot of employers demand university degrees these days.\n\nHowever, going to work without higher education can have benefits. Lots of students study majors at university that they will not pursue as a career. So if students get a job right after high school, it will help them to focus on a career and don't waste time. Plus, with more experience than other people their age, they can apply for higher positions at a younger age.\n\nTo sum up, having a successful career is most people's goal and there are two ways to achieve that. Some people think that having experience is the most important factor, so getting a job after high school is the best way to have a good career path. In contrast, some people believe that studying at university is more effective. I believe both of these parameters are important, but having a college degree may raise the possibilities and leads people to better paths.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "Cutting trees, constructing buildings near forests, and pouring polluted water into the ocean harm the environment. Lately, there has been much debate about sustainable protections for plants and animal groups. Some people believe that this problem is irreversible and might not have a comprehensive solution to resolve it. However, many people are convinced that we are still capable of improving this environment by practical actions. It is quite understandable that views on this issue vary greatly. \r\n\r\nPeople who strongly believe that it is useless to offset produced outcomes have content reasons for it. Firstly, it is impossible to avoid doing human activities due to human needs. For instance, the construction of the building for tourism could lead to the extinction of some species, such as turtles and sharks. Secondly, since we already did something harmful environmentally, the effect might be irreversible and cannot return to its original form. Finally, some people may argue that it is possible to find another alternative planet to live on. If this planet is not suitable for humans to live on, we can migrate to other places such as Jupiter. \r\n\r\nDespite the above argument, I support the view that humans still have enough capabilities to improve this condition. As we could see, the situation of our planet is getting better by taking practical actions, and there is always hope to get better. For example, the education of cycling, if our next generation and we actively use recycled materials, these small practices could cause less harm to the environment, including protecting plants and animals from extinction. Through the corporation of multi-nations, they could establish sustainable policies and let citizens follow. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, we cannot deny that both sides are well-grounded. Personally, I agree with the view that the earth still has a chance to get better by our concerted efforts.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Overall Score: 5.0",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "Due to the increasing advancement in technology, jobs doing by people will replace by robots or computers soon. Although this initiative has advantages like machines will be more accurate and less time-consuming. Still, in my opinion, the disadvantages are more worrisome because many people will lose their jobs, and devices are more prone to get down.\n\nOn the one hand, many people believe that computer replacement over humans is more beneficial. They think that robots will do all the work single-handedly with the utmost precision. That will reduce the need for the workforce, and businesses do not have to hire many people. For example, these days, doctors are considering robots to operate complicated surgical procedures where the optimal precision required, like brain surgeries. However, I disagree with this view because robots are the machine and when it can down in the middle of the operation that will lead to a drastic situation which can be challenging to handle.\n\nOn the other hand, in my opinion, machines cannot replace human efforts. If this happens many, people will lose their jobs, which will increase the rate of unemployment in the society. As a result, the economy of the nation will be dramatically affected. For example, In Canada, the number of financial institutions are replacing bank teller with the banking machine; therefore, many unfortunate, people lost their jobs in the last few years. Furthermore, I believe that computers can stop working without any intimation that will create a challenging situation and may take some time to reboot. For instance, in recent years, the most common reason for plane crashes are the computer system went down suddenly.\n\nTo conclude, although computers have many benefits, it shouldn't be replaced over a human because people will lose their jobs, and equipment can stop working without a prior warning.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Overall Score: 4.0",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "All over the world idea's of limiting car usage. In Vauban Germany 70 percent of Vauban's families do not own a car. Heidrum Walter said \"When I had a car I was ALways tense. I'm much happier this way.\" In Paris they ban driving due to smog. Paris made some changes and Paris's congestion was down 60 percent in the capital france. Bogota, Colombia had a huge turnout on free-car day. The goal is to reduce smog violators and promote alternative transportation. Even in America, recent studies show fewer cars are being bought and less driving each year goes by. MIcheal Sivak said \"I think that means something more fundamental is going on.\"\n\nIn Germany residnets in the suburban area are buying fewer cars. In this one community they are completely car free. The community is near the french and swiss borders. The surburban life is being adopted by public transportation with less space for parking and more space for stores and walk ways on main streets.\n\nParis enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. Motorists with odd or even license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home and if they did not listen they would be fined 22-euro ($31 dollars). Diesel fuel was blamed, since france has a tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline. Even though Paris has more smog than any other European capitals. The smog cleared on monday and for the ruling the French party banned odd-numbered plates on Tuesday.\n\nMillions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took the buses to work on free-car day. The goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce their smog aswell. The turnout was large despite the gray clouds and rain. The day still went on has free-car day. Carlos Arturo said \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution and they have done just that.\n\nIn America recent studies show that Americans are buying fewer cars and driving less. This is good and bad. Only because the pollution rate is dropping and that is a good thing but the bad thing is the American car ownerships are losing money. In New York the new bike-sharing program is skyrocketing because of the fewer cars being sold. The end of car culture is coming to an end and the time to change for the better is coming. One step at a time we can fix our mistakes with the pollution we started.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.",
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"content": "Some people hold the opinion that asking teenagers to do community work with no salary when they are available could both have a beneficial influence on teenagers and the community. From my perspective, I totally agree with that opinion and I will give several reasons to support it as follows.\r\n\r\nThere are several reasons why those young generations could receive positive feedback in community work. Firstly, through a volunteer job, they can enrich their free time which may be wasted on some boring issues as usual, and be more resourceful by cultivating some important or daily skills and gaining valuable experiences. Besides, being a volunteer in society, their CV tends to be more plentiful instead of sole, prosaic academic grades, which brings more opportunities to them in university or job enrollment. For example, universities have a higher propensity for candidates with rich experience.\r\n\r\nUndoubtedly, the community itself would be benefited from teenagers’unpaid tasks. It is obvious that it can save a lot of money for the expansion is massive to employ paid adult workers. Society can use the money saved to improve citizens life quality through establishing more fundamental facilities and enhancing the environment. What’s more, the relationships of the neighbours tend to be more closer for most of the community issues are very simple and daily works such as newspaper delivery. The community will solve fewer emotional problems due to the curtailing of the distance between residents’ hearts.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, unsalaried community work done by teenagers will absolutely generate salutary impacts not only on those teenager volunteers and on the community as well.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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