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"content": "The obstacles builders empire State Building faced lack suitable landing area They allow dirigibles anchor several hours refuel service let passengers Also Dirigibles docked means winch thats faced dockSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The towns terrain Welchs Grape Juice factory parts setting affect cyclist This place might thriving little spot one time say last world war describes cyclist but morning fit traditional definition ghost town The town intensifies cyclist feeling doubt increasing At part really regretting taking old guy s advice taking shortcut Not two miles next section ride I noticed terrain changing reveals cyclist The cyclist already worried doubtful terrain making worse mirrors town cyclist stopped earlier make feeling doubt increase The cyclist exclaims By looks it Welchs Grape Juice Factory The cyclist gets excited sees gets great feeling hope So throughout whole story setting cyclist affects mood giving doubt also giving hopeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The article \"Marking Mona Lisa Smile\" by Nick D' Alto is a good article talking about how the system called Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. I believe this system is great for a student in a classroom. The system will help a teacher by telling weather or not a kid likes something. Another way the system is valuable is because the system can tell if a person like an ad on the computer or not. The system will read your facial expressions to tell weather you are happy, surprised, angry, disgusted, scared, or sad.\n\nThe first way the Facial Action Coding System is helpful is by telling the\n\nteacher weather or not a kid likes something. Each facial expression is different from every person. For example, if a kid is reading a book on the computer. The computer will read the kid facial expressiones to tell the teacher weather he or she likes the book or not. The computer will send different percentages to the teacher on how the kid feels about the book. If the student does not like the book, the teacher could help the student by giving he or she another book to read. This system can also be helpful for companys that play videos. When someone watches a video and an ad comes on, the system can tell weather or not they like the ad or the person dislike the ad. If the person disliked the ad, the company that plays the videos and ads can play a different ad that the person may like more. I do believe this system will be valuable for the human world. The system will give percentage on how the person feel about something. The system will tell weather he or she shows happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, or sadness.\n\nProf. Thomas Huang, of the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois has a awesome idea of a system that read people facial expressions. This system will be valuable in the world. It can help in the classroom of school or outside of school. The Facial Action Coding System will tell if a\n\nperson is happy, angry, scared, sad, surprised, or disgusted. Every person has a different facial expressions. This sytem will help tell if they are what their facial expressions say they are.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Have you ever wanted to visit alot of unique places aruond the world and see animals like horses or sheep. Well I want to go to Barcelona in Spain. Well if you do then you would want to join the Seagoing Cowboys club because the club has animals, and takes you around the world to see unique places like Eroupe or Greece, and takes you on a cattle boat mayby you can also see dalphins or even sharks (if you could see the sharks.) First, the club has animals. You can feed the animals and pet them a little I infer that animals are nice. Second. For example the trip takes you to China, or Europe, you can aslo mayby buy a suvenire from those places. I infer that travling is fun. Thirdley, the trip is on a cattle boat witch means you may be able to see a dolphin or mayby even a shark. You can also learn how to mayby fish. You can feed the animals, and go to uniqe places, or go for the first time on a cattle boat. Inifer that there are a lot of dolphins. This trip is well for me sounds exiting and I acually want to pet a goat again. This trip can make you have the expirience of a lifetime, so if you like all theese things the you got to sign in to the club!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "alright i dont understand why we took one of are planets and made it a star like thta was really stuoid and its cool how we can see mars ass a star and its sorda red star looking i dindt know we went to venus thats cool i wanna go therer i just dont wanna burn to death or freez to death in any planet our planet is kool enough earth is epic it has so meany beautyful venus has alot of simaleraties and its has rokky plases like earth thuis loooks like a peragrah and its was really easy i like how this computer person is reading to me sorry yall im hella slow so hope yall can forgive me for not taking this sereus and caring enought about it i just dont know why i have to right so much like this is alot of work i cant imagine doing this ass a job or fotr funSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There many obstacles builders Empire State Building faced trying allow dirigibles land One weight zeppelin tied building would put immense pressure framework pressure even would reached foundation The cost reworking frame work make safer would Another obstacle public expectations The Building supposed change travel forever beautiful magnificent structure Surely pressure build tallest tower world got These expectations unreal people nt know enough understand safety risk involvedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Unmasking the Face\n\nThe face on Mars was really not a face on mars. Some people say it is a face but I believe it is just a formation on the planet. They have taken 3 pictures and 2 of them prove it is a mesa on Mars. The proof of that is that they have taken pictures in 1998,2001, and have compared it to a landform in the USA. People who believe it is created by aliens suely hasn't seen all the evidence behind \"The Face.\"\n\nFirst of all, when people saw the face in 1976 they couldnt have had o believe an aliens as making it. How could have there have been a person on Cydonia or an alien. That is why they went back to Mars to prove some scientists' theories wrong. On April 5, 1998 the Mars Global Surveyor had flew over Cydonia for the first time. The surveyor had a picture that was ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Some people were not satisfied because it was cloudy on the Red Planet. They said that the alien marking were hidden by blaze. Compaing the picture of 1998, it certailey looks more like a regular rock on a surface. They went back four years later on a less cloudy day to still prove the believers wrong.\n\nOn a cloudless day the Mars Global Surveyor took away a piece of evidence of aliens in space. On April 8, 2001, four years later than the last visit to Cydonia, the surveyor captured the photo much better than all pictures and proved tha the face was a natural platform. Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in he best 1976 Viking photo. The photos were astonishing and made the face be un masked.\n\nJim Garvin, a chief scientist, said that \"It reminds me most pf Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. Thats a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the ame height as the Face on Mars.\" They are comaparing it to landforms on Earth! How much more evidence can you ask for.\n\nThe face on mars has been a fraud for being an alien landform. All the evidenc shos all the people and my friend that the \"Face\" is not real and just a landform accordin to a ver clear picture and an explanation from Jim Garvin.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In attempting allow dirigibles dock builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles Safety huge issue Foreign derigibles often used hydrogen gas stay aloft highly flammable A fire posed dangerous threat densely populated area New York City Another great obstacle turbulent wind elevation mooring mast would prevented dirigible staying one place This would make extremely difficult passengers safely board exit zeppelin One way solve problem would weigh blimp lead weights also dangerous practice weights could fall ground crush passing Although mooring mast theory useful idea neither safe practicalSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless Cars Are the Future\n\nEver been inside of a driverless car, do you want to? Driverless cars are now starting to emerge. Driverless cars are cars that do not need the assistance of a driver. Many companies and places have come up with the idea but yet to sucessfully have one that functions indepentdently. Driverless cars I believe are a great idea. But some people disagree with the idea. I believe that driverless cars are a good idea because I think that there will be less car accidents.\n\nOne reason I believe that driverless cars are good idea is because I think that they will prevent less accidents. They would prevent less accidents because they could control speed limits and such things. As said in the article, the Google Cars have been driven over half a million miles without a crash. This means that their technology is so far up to date that it can navigate through so many obstacals. But also mentioned in the article, Google Cars aren't truly driverless.\n\nSome people have come to the assumption that Driverless Cars are dumb. Why you ask? The reason is becasue what if two people who are driving these \"driverless cars\" get into an accident, is it the owners fault or the manufactures fault? Also another reson why people may not like the idea id because all of the roads would have to redone. That would cost a fortune. The reason all the roads would have to be redone is because, some if not most of the cars, they would require a electrically controlled field of magnets to keep these driverless cars on the roads.\n\nAnother reason why people would disagree is because they think that having driverless car would increase the risk of having an accident or being in one. The reason is because all of these younger teens who are just getting their licences, they will think \" oh yeah this car can just drive itself i dont need to do anything,\" and once that happens the next thing you know they are either going to end up in a hospital or in an accident.\n\nI don't really care weither people get or have a driverless car, yes it would cool but there would just be some many problems. Most people either choose to like the driverless cars or they choose to hate them, but me, I'm in the middle I don't really care honestly.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You all should join the Seagoing Cowboys group because in paragraph nine it says that being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luke, it opened up the world to him. Paragraph nine also states that Luke said \"It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\" If you were to join the Seagoing Cowboys you would be sure to highly to enjoy it! Here are a few reasons about why you might reconsider your thoughts.\n\nLuke was just an ordinary boy who was working two jobs. In paragraph one it states that Luke's friend Don Reist invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. Paragraph one also stated that Luke couldn't pass up the offer becasue it was an opportunity of a lifetime. In paragraph two it states that Luke and Don signed up to be apart of the Seagoing Cowboys. Because of Luke and Don signing up for the Seagoing Cowboys they got many opportunities to cross the seas.\n\nAnother reason why some of you should join the Seagoing Cowboys is because you could be a small-town boy or girl like Luke in paragraph five, and expirience many amazing opportunities if you just take the chance and say yes. If youn think that all you will do is stay on a boat and go somewhere and then leave, then get back on the boat and do the same thing you are wrong. In paragraph five Luke states \"Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China.\" To a lot of people that is really cool because a lot of people woud love to vist China and Europe and have a great time.\n\nLast but not least, you should join the Seagoing Cowboys because you would be surrounded with a ton of great people. In paragraph eight it states that Luke found time to have fun on board. It also states that the cowboys played baseball and volleyball games so it will be sure that you will have fun! But only if you join the Seagoing Cowboys because if you don't you will miss out on a lot of fun things other than just work. Joining the Seagoing Cowboys is something you don't want to miss out on so you better come and sign up now!\n\nThat is why I think you should join the Seagoing Cowboys because it is a very big opportunity of a lifetime, something some people wouldn't want to miss out on. The Seagoing Cowboys want you to join and they don't want you to think thatb you are just doing work they want you to also have fun!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I feel like it would be a great idea to have Driverless Cars. Why? It'll prevent people from crashing into others and risking their lives and also it'll decrease chances of trafic on express ways. And marketing would sky rocket. Many people would love to travel places but they'll get lazy to drive, but if they have a car that can drive itself then it would make it better on the humans life aswell.\n\nMany people also agree on how bad it is. Honestly it does have some flaws and miss happs. One of them are getting sent to a different location. Just like G.P.S., you type in your address and sometimes it sends you somewhere you didn't want to go. A Driverless Car is like a driving G.P.S., it could also have a malfunctioning problem it could put your life at risk and others.\n\nAt the end of the day technology will have a lot of malfunctioning problems and a Driverless Car will be one of them. So be smart and purchase one at your own risk.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I m really sick head really hurts moment write paper please take easy Any source literature someone s creation imaginiation taken whatever direction choose taken The creation art form writing would nothing less lonesome trash floating winding streets censored almost like watching television kids want stay late watch new horror movie way movie way scary plus shows nudity If movie appropriate children let watch In library though mother might always preread books So maybe assume responsibility read book choose read book depending mother would feel course The thought censorship libraries quite ridiculous Of course I would like see childrens section books right sections Have explicit books one side library non side The main point people make use library old enough choose book liking mother accompanyingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "What do is your position on driverless cars they ask.\n\nNo, driverless cars should not be aloud.\n\nYes, they might make life easier but also more dangerous.\n\nDriveless cars are all based on sensors, camera, receivers, and computers.\n\nI think they should not be aloud to be on the road because of the dangers in today world.\n\nYou got the computers in these cars, whats holding back the terrious from hacking them?\n\nThey could upload cars with software that could make them drive off a cliff or into the sea.\n\nLet alone the computers can't be relide on.\n\nWhat if they short out and there is a big crash?\n\nWill you be aloud to fight agenst the makers and have them pay for everything?\n\nIn my theroy we should not have them in this world.\n\nAre techonogly is advaning at an alarming rate and no good can come from that.\n\nWe will all be come fat people laying around this earth, sucking up all the oxyen and died.\n\nWe need to slow the technogly rate down and let the people catch up now.\n\nIm 15 years old and I can't get the hang of some of this techonogly.\n\nWhat do you think will happen to all these older people?\n\nIf we get driveless cars they won't know how to work them, they will be so lost and will probably stay home and walk places.\n\nThese cars are just bad news and its only going to get worse.\n\nHistory will repeat it's self once again.\n\nWhen the Titanic first made it's showing and it was so advaced in technogoly that everyone on that ship felt safe until it crashed and sunk.\n\nI don't want a tragety in my life time were technogoly got to far ahead.\n\nSo no i don't think this is a good idea, it may seem like it at the moment but in time it will all fall, it will all fail in this world and there is millions of billions of dollars out the doors.\n\nThe products they are using to make these cars all gone we only got so many in this world lets us them right.\n\nBy 2020 I don't want to see these cars driving around by them self beacuse is just going to hit us where it hurts.\n\nDriveless cars are just not a good idea for us yet.\n\nWe need to let the people catch up with the technogoly.\n\nGive it another 15 years and this world should be ready to have them.\n\nThank you for reading this agurement I hope it opened up your mind to think alittle more about this.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author says that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. I can find the author saying this in paragraph two in the last sentence. It says \"Numerous factor contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenge planet for humans to study\". The author suppports this idea by making its differences with Earth, how it might be somewhat similar to Earth, and saying how its risk to venus are more of challenges.\n\nThe first way the author supports their idea is by comparing it to Earth. In the article, paragraph three, they say \"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our planet.\" In this quote he explains and compares how and why it is dangerous to visit Venus becuase it is \"far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth\" , in paragrap three. This is one way the author supports their idea.\n\nA second way the author supports their idea is by makng an almost similarity description of Venus with Earth. Also in the article, paragraph four, the author says \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" In this quote the author gives a reason to why Venus can be a worthy visit. It later on describes it on some things it may have had long time ago that is just like \"Earth-like\" as said in the article.\n\nA third way the author supports their idea is by saying how Venus has 'challenges\". In the article, paragraph six, the author says \"Therefore, scientist seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risk. Or maybe we sould think of them as challenges.\" In this quote the author is giving a reason to how it can be a worthy and dangerous visit to Venus. I believe the quote describes it as both dangeros and worthy because some challenges ca be hard to work with where some people just struggle with them. I believe it can be worthy because some people like to take challenges and discover new things to what they might find. This is how the aunthor supports their idea.\n\nIn the end, paragraph eight, the author says \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" This is how the author supports there idea by giving reasons to how Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presenentsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Do you think going through extreme dangers just to study Venus is worth it? Venus is sometimes called the the Evening Star. Venus is one of the brightest points of light in the sky. Why would scientist wanted to explore and study another planet when they haven't even completely explore the planet where they live on?\n\nFirst of all, Venus is the second planet from our son, while Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved to be a very challenging place to examine closely. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size. Venus has a very dangerous atmosphere and surface. Venus condituion are highly dangerous its impossible for human to even get close to its atmosphere.\n\nSecondly, given the facts that Venus has such critical living condition considering its surface temperature reach over 800 degrees Fahrenheit and has clouds of higly corrosive sulfric acid. Why would scientist still want to explore Venus. Our current technology will not let us enter Venus atmosphere. Even if astronauts manage to bypass Venus atmosphere how would they even get to the ground, Venus surface temperatures are extremely high. It's impossible for humans to get Venus surface.\n\nLastly, instead of wasting resources on exploring new planets and trying to get to their surface, why don't scientists waste those resources in exploring and discovering more of our own planet. More than half of our planet is filled with water, and we haven't explore a big part of it.\n\nThere must be a lot of new materials and resources out there ready to be explored but scientist are wasting resources on trying to explore a planet. Why don't scientist try to solve the problem with global warming. Those resources scientist are using trying to explore a new planet cab be used to solve problems here on planet Earth.\n\nIn conclusion, that's why I don't think going through extreme dangers and risk just to only study a planet where its not posibble to live in is worth it. Let's use our resources to solve problems here on planet Earth instead of using them for trying to explore planets.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Here are some reasons people should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. You get to move cattle,travel places,help people.\n\nTraveling would be fun and here are some reasons why. Places, you could go to asia and see their art, or Europe and meet the people. Food, you could try exotic things like goat or fresh Polish sausge. People, you could meet new people and hang out with your new best german buddy eating goat.\n\nMoving cattle would be fun ecpecially if you grew up doing it just like Luke did. You could get smarter by doing this you would know how much of what to give a horse or a cow for feed, and you would know how to clean a stall. If you ever retired you could go into cattle from this experience.\n\nIf you did this you could have the experience of traveling and cattle but the best one would be knowing you helped all those people stay alive milk and meat from the cows meat from the goat. everyone would love you for giving them food and milk to eat and drink to keep them alive.\n\nIn conclusion those are the reasons why people should become Seagoing Cowboys. It would benefit you and those people who need food and water.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In \" The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author makes Venus seem cool to explore. But he also makes it extremley clear how it's so dangerous to go to the planet. He states that not one single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades. Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proxiity to us.\n\nSome details that the author gave us on why Venus is dangerous are; Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting stirkes to probes seeking to land on its surface. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system. A thick atmospher of almsot 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of higly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface the temeperatures are over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. Now Venus is a worthy pursuit because Venus may have been the most Earth-like planet in our solor system. Long ago Venus was coverd by oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth today. The planet still has some features that are similiar to those on Earth. Venus has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and creaters.\n\nAs written\n\nabove I have stated all the facts that the auhtor gave us on why Venus is so dangerous to explore. I've also stated the facts on why the astronomers are fascinated by Venus and why they want to do more reserch on the planet. Venus can sometmes be our nearest option for a plaentry visit.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Would you like someone to be able to read your emotions? Reading someone's emotions ican help you know that they need some help. Here are some reasons why it is good to be able to read emotions.\n\nReading the emotions of someone is amazing and should be used. In the article, Dr. Huang stated, \"The facial expresions for each emotion are universal, even though individuals often show varing degrees of expression.\" This shows why it is important to know how people feel when they are being taught something they don't understand.\n\nReading a person's emotions can be complicated when you're with a friend. The article states, \" She's (The Mona Lisa) 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\" This says that when The Mona Lisa was painted, she had 4 different emotions. When your with friends, it is unclear how they feel.\n\nThis research shows why it is necesary to read the emotions of somebody to know how they feel. This face reading software can help people who need help but can't tell others how they feel. Using software to read friends emotions can show you when they need your help.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\"the author suggests that studying planet Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangerous it presents. Since Venus is the closet planet to Earth in terms of density and size, the distance are similar too. This planet has different speeds. Though, humans have sent many spacecrafts to this dangerous land. Each mission was unmanned sicne no spacecraft ever survived the landing for a few hours.\n\nSome dangerous this planet planet presents are, the atmosphere is thick and is almost 97 percent of carbon dioxide. The clouds are highly corrosive sulfuric acid in the atmosphere and the conditions are more extreme than human encounter in Earth. \"Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solor system, even though Mercury is closeer to our Sun\"(Paragraph 3). It has so much heat and pressure and the weather presents additional dangerous which are, erupting volcanoes,powerful earthquakes, and excesive amount of lighting strikes.\n\nThis dangerous can really affect humans and humans won't really be able to survive in that planet. Scientists believe Venus was once covered largely wiht oceans and could of supported forms of life. Since scientists are now able to knwo more about technology and ivent new spacecrafts. We now have new information of the Planet Venus. Now, we know it's surface is rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\n\nIn conclusion, I think the more we learn the more we can be able to experience more things and have more knwoledge. Technology has been playin a big part of this situations and expriences. The more technology advances the more we will be able to exprience more.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "This technology is very valuable to the class room. This program can change the way teachers aproch teaching. This program can help teachers to determain if a student is ready to move on to a higher level of learning. The FACS enables us to open a window into a new classroom.\n\nThis computer has the capability to read a persons emotions in real time. So in the middle of class most of the students get bord. This program can notify the teacher so he or she can change up the lesson plan for the next day. The program can also read confusion. One of the biggest worries of the teacher is that the student is just not getting it. The program can show that this spacific student is not getting the asignment or the task. Then the teacher can sit down with that student and celarify there confution.\n\nThe FACS can identify the diffrence between a genuine smile and a forced smile. Say a teacher is reavaluating there leson plan and wants to know what the students are acutally finding interesting or liking. This program can read the indavidule mucles in the face. The teacher can see if a student is lieing or not by using the program. Useing the program to tell if a student is lieing or not can not only save the child from harming him self but also keep him from harming others.\n\nFACS can read six basic emotions. The ability to read these emotions are endless. This program reads the muslces of the face to find the emotion that is being protraed by the student. The code rcognises the facial muscles movements and asigns emotions to those jesturs. Knowing that the program can detect the smallest expretions can help a teacher identify wheather or not a student is ready to move on to the next level of learning or are they not ready for the next level. Being able to tell if a student is ready can alow the teacher to help them on the next step of the journy.\n\nThe FACS program has opened a window to the posobilities of a whole new way of learning. Its ability to read confusion and bordum can help better understand what the student is thinking. The ability to determin the difrence of a genuine and fake smile can keeo kids away from bad behavior. This program can not only change the schools but make them benifical to everyone.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock One important issue Mooring Mast According The architects could simply drop mooring mast top Empire State Building s flat roof paragraph Another problem would dirigible s load The stress dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation para One main things architects forgot take consideration buildings frame The steel frame Empire State Building would modified strengthened accommodate new situation para The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dockSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear senator,\n\nI think the Electoral College should be brought down and let the popular vote decide who the president of the United States will be.\n\nFirst of all, I believe the popular vote should be kept and the Electoral College brought down. I think this because what if some people dont agree with the opinion of others. For example, lets say two people are running too be president of the United States. People vote and everything but then its up too the 538 electors. Then the 538 electors choose who they want as their president, 270 electoral votes is required to elect the President, as weeks go by, the new President is one of the two people that ran too be President was elected. Some people are happy and some people are mad because they put their vote in and they voted on the other person but that other person won and now they are angry.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Artificial intelligence is believed to take over most of the jobs done by humans in the future. While most unskilled jobs will eventually be taken over by robots, replacing humans in the jobs that require human contact is unlikely. This essay will discuss why eventually only a handful of jobs will be carried out by people.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, robots may replace humans only in specific jobs where human skills are not required. Many companies are replacing people with artificially intelligent devices which are cost-effective as compared to hiring and training staff to carry out easy tasks. Moreover, these robots perform these jobs with more precision and productively which will eradicate the challenge of human error and the time taken to complete a job. To cite an example, supermarkets have replaced cashiers and stock checkers with bots which cost way less than employees. Furthermore, these bots can work around the clock and do not need any days off. For these reasons, jobs that do not require human involvement will be replaced by artificially intelligent robots. \r\n\r\nConversely, robots will not be able to replace jobs that require a human touch. The human capacity to perform certain jobs is much more than machines and robots will never be able to achieve that capacity. Some examples of these specific tasks are massage, education, health and social work. For example, machines can not replace doctors as it is impossible for machines to carry out an operation. These tasks can be carried out by specialists with high skills and can not be matched by bots. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, while some people agree that human employees will be replaced by machines, others believe that they will not be able to replace certain skills. In my opinion, artificially intelligent machines might replace human workers to a large extent, but it is impossible to match the human capacity to perform high-skill jobs.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author included both the negatives and positives that computer-driven cars have to offer. I support the development of these self driven cars. Many are againts the development of computer-driven cars because they believe that they offer more negatives than positive but in reality it brings positive change and is safe, Google has been testing cars that drive themselve independenty since 2009 and they have driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\n\nComputer-driven cars is becoming an idea thats easier to achieve as each day passes and it is a great thing, these cars will use half the fuel of todays taxis and cut down pollution, will be more reliable than regular cars, and decrease car accidents\n\nOnly half the fuel of todays taxis is what a computer-driven car will be using. The amount of money one will save due to driverless cars is major. Computer-driven cars will reduce the ammount of feul used, not only benifiting ones pocket but also decreasing pollution. Global warming is a serious problem that is getting bigger and bigger each year. No computer-driven cars will not get rid of global warming but yes they will cut down on the carbon monoxide pollution that is emmited into the atmosphere by transportation, slowing down the growing problem of global warming.\n\nComputer-driven cars will be more reliable than buses and faster than regular cars. Running late to an appointment and any kind of meeting will cease to be a reaccuring thing. Computer-driven cars would be able to take anyone anywhere in a safe and fast way, GPS and the advancment of sensors will allow the selfdriven vehicle to find the fastest route to any destination and find a way around any obstacle that it faces. The computer-driven car wil have advanced technology that will give it the ability to see more than driver and find safe solutions to problems.\n\nThe amount of car accidents will drasticly change, decreasing because the self driven vehicle will always be alert and attentive unlike many human drivers. Imprvements in sensors , computer hardware, and software will give the self driven vehicle more control in accidents reducing harm that could be done to drivers. Computer-driven cars will inform the owner if something is wrong with the vehicle preventing any accidents ahead of time. Computer-driven cars will take anyone incapable or not in good condition to drive safely to the destination that they desire. If one is hurt or intoxicated the computer-driven car is what they will need help from, decreasing many car accidents that occur for many reasons.\n\nThe develpment of driverless cars is a great thing that is becoming easier to achieve and will fundamentally change the world. These cars will reduce money spent on fuel, having and ecomomical effect on the world. They will also reduce the amount of carbon monoxide pollution that goes into the air that people breath, being more healty for humans and the world. Computer-driven cars will be more reliable and safer than regular cars saving many lives. The developmen of driverless cars should be supported by all.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "To use this in a classroom may not be useful, because the use of a electronic teacher would be ignored constantly there would be no actual learning going on. however the use of it in the principals office or counselors office could be very useful.\n\nWhen a student goes into the consoulers office, the consouler may not know completely what the student is feeling. But with this technology it would make it easier to help students in need by showing the counselour what they were feeling. Allowing them to adjust thier approach based on that.\n\nIt would also be a big help in the principles office. When a unruley student gets sent down the principle would be able to tell if the student was just having a bad day, or needed disciplne for being rude for no reason in class.\n\nAll in all, the technology would be useless in a classroom setting, based on the lack of a authority figuer. But places where one on one conversations take place.Such as the principles office or counselors office. This would make talking to students about there problems much easier than trying to geuss as teachers and school staff do now.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Can you imagine a time in the future when no one buys cars because no one need them anymore? Well google cofounder has a future. Your gonna be sensing the world, driving or assiting, or waiting on the law with this envision of driveless cars.\n\nFirstly, Sensing the world many futurists believed the key to developing self-driving cars someday for smarter roads. In the late 1950s, General motors created a concept car that runs on a special track. The track was embedded with an electrical cable that sent radio signals to the front end of the car. The smart road systems worked well but required massive upgrades. Dubbed LIDAR is necessary for driveless car to mimic the skill of the human wheel.\n\nSecondly, Antilock brakes and driver assitance seem a long way from the dream of calling a driverless cab to take us wherever we desire. In 2013, BMW announced the development of \"traffic Jam Assistant\". The Traffic Jam\n\nAssistant allow the car to handle driving functions up to 25 mph, but special touch sensore requires driver to keep hold of the wheel. The car can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves.\n\nMost of all, most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe. In most states it is illegal to even test computer driven cars. Manufactures believe that more states will follow as soon as the cars proved more reliably safe. Telsa has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving an autopilot 90 percent of thr time\n\nInconclusion, many futurists believed the key to developing self-driving cars someday wasn't so much smarter cars as smarter roads. Also antilock brakes and driver assistance still seem a long way from the dream of calling a driverless cab to take us wherever we desire. Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Did you know venus surface,tempertures average over eight hundred degrees fahrenheit,and the atmospheric pressure is ninety times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\n\nThe author supports the idea that studying the planet venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers because earth should not be limited by the dangers of exploring and expanding the human eye.\n\nAs the curiosity of the human's eye wanting to figure out what new discoverys they can go to and end up in.\n\nThe authors explanation of trying to make this challenge a reality and striving to see whats on the other side because human curiosity will likely lead us into many other explorations that are imagination can hold.\n\nIn the article of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" they state that atronomers are fascinated by venus because it may well once have been the most earth-like planet in our solar system. In paragraph 4 their theory of venus was that it was covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life'just like earth. Also showing that today venus has various features that are similar to earth like the rocky sediment,valleys,mountains,and even craters. furthermore explaining that our closest option to visiting another planet similar to earth would most likely be venus.\n\nIn the article of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the National Aeronaustics and Space Administration which is NASA is working on approaches of studying venus with electronics made of silicon carbide and have them tested in a chamber simualting the chaos of Venus's surface. In paragraph 7 they talk about how using old technolgy that was being used in World war two would be better to discover venus than using are previous technolgy because the shocking part about old technology was that they make calculations by using gears and levers and would not require any electricity. They also state that even if modern computars are enormously powerful,flexable,and quick they can not with stand the physical conditions of venus. Explaining the authors idea of them wanting to discover and expand their curosity and many more adventures that it can lead too.\n\nThe authors idea is explained threw out the article how astronomers and pioneers should continue to explore and continue to strive on thinking what's on the other side. As they show and represent that they are using there old technolgy to try to reach the impossable to make it possable but also using venus as a place if needed to be used as a nearest option for a planetary visit. This is what striving and hunger of human curiosity can lead us too an could lead human's to many more adventures.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I would understand why you would think that aliens created the Face on Mars. As you may know that on Earth there are a lot of natural landform places, for example there is Snake River Plain of Idaho, thats like a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars. Later on we found out that the shadows make the Face of Mars look like an Egyptian Pharaoh, this then made some people change there minds on them thinking that there could indeed be an ancient civilization, but like stated before it is more likly to be a natural landform because of the planetes charaterists.\n\nThe Snake River Plain of Idaho is one of many of Earth natural land forms. Through out the time the land started to change which then led to it becoming a lava dome looking form. The Face of Mars looks like an Egypiton Pharaoh because it was around April when the photos were took and around that time on Mars it gets really cloudy, the cloud coul have interfered with the camera.\n\nThe Face on Mars is a natural land form because on all the photos that were taken non of them show sings of live on Mars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Nowadays, many people enjoy playing the video game on the computer or the game console. While some people believe that video game has some negative effects, some people argue that playing the video game can be harmless fun. Personally, I partly think the disadvantages of video game outweigh the advantages.\n\nOn the one hand, video games can be beneficial in some ways, entertaining and educational. Firstly, Gamers spend some time on virtual worlds which are always exciting and engaging. After a daily commute, for instance, people playing the video game and relaxing could release them from real-life work pressure. For an educational perspective, some RPG games are designed based on real historical backgrounds, such as Creed of Assassin and Dynasty Warriors. Lots of history knowledge could be learned while people are enjoying it. Furthermore, some research has been shown that some of the puzzle game encourage logical thinking, and helps the development of the brain.\n\nOn the other hand, there are some serious drawbacks of video games that we can’t ignore. Gaming can be highly addictive, and online games in particular, because the developers are constantly giving scores, new virtual equipment, targets and rewards to keep gamers playing it. These types of games usually luring people to spend money on it, to get better scores， weapons and equipments. Besides, many children and teens now spend hours on the game each day to get higher levels or scores than their friends. This addiction could effect on their sleep problem, homework, and most worst result is failed on the school exam. \n\nIn conclusion, although video games have its only benefits in some ways, it seems to me that the potential dangers are more significant than the advantage.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I strongly believe that the use the Facial Action Coding System in a classroom can be very valuable to a students education. I believe that students often get bored very easily and as a student if a lession is making you bored then you are more likely to not learn anything and not be able to recall any of the information obtained.\n\nIn school on an average day a student can have about 7 clases where in each class he or she is learning something new every single day,and that doesn't include the days when there is a lot more information to learn than normal. As a student you're taught daily and expected to remember and to recall all the information you've learned, sometimes more; and often it can be very overwhelming and sressful espically if you're taking notes and studying and it just isn't working.\n\nBut the only thing that can make that worse is being bored because then you have zero motivation to actually learn anything or to even try; which can make an already rough school day ten times more stressful and difficult. If you're so bored that you fall asleep then that is even worse because instead of being able to recall even the slightes bit of information you can't recall anything.\n\nNow if a computer saw you were bored and spiced up the lession so make it more intresting well that is a different story. If you're throughly entertained and interested then you are able to learn and recall so much more information because you were actually paying attention and maybe even having fun while learning! It opens so many doors for new possibilities from a bland boring history lession to a history lession that has you begging for so much more intresting informations making tests and assignments so much easier simply because you were entertained while learning the lession.\n\nI strongly believe that the Facial Action Coding system should be implimitted into classrooms all across America and even the world. It takes a tough task and simplifies it and makes it entertaining.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "These days, some people believe that teenagers should perform unpaid work in their spare time for the benefit of society. I strongly agree with the notion that it is necessary to engage them in voluntary work as this will both benefit the community and the children on a personal and social level.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, adolescents who take part in unpaid work will gain a sense of responsibility towards the community. When they are involved with the public and community, they develop a sense of responsibility and pride. Doing good deeds and performing selfless acts will teach them awareness of other people’s circumstances as well as gratitude for what they have versus what other people might have or experience. In New York, the Centre for Troubled Youth uses community service to rehabilitate the children and achieve great success in doing so. These youngsters are then reintroduced to society and go on to become model citizens because they developed an appreciation for their milieu. \r\n\r\n Furthermore, unpaid work can help children expand their social cycle and soft skills. When they participate in a non-rewarded job, they will learn other myriad skills such as leadership, teamwork, communication skills and how to handle difficult situations. For instance, recent research conducted in Russia has revealed that juveniles who had taken part in voluntary work are more sociable, energetic, and respectful to others. Compared to teenagers that do not participate, who was more introverted, idle, listless and were often in trouble socially, with their parents and even with the law.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, youngsters should do unpaid community work to aid in their development and learning. This way they will become better members of society once they grow older and will have a bigger appreciation for their circumstances and environment. It could only benefit them in the long run.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Seagoing Cowboys, which included Luke Bomberger, had helped many people due to the effect of the Word War II. The Cowboys were known to help others, beat records from past Seagoing Cowboys, and meeting new people.\n\nThe Cowboys were a huge help after Word War II. They joined with 43 other nations to form UNRRA (The United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administratation), which was to help countries recover animals, food suplies, and more. The UNRRA also hired the \"Seagoing Cowboys\" to take care of the young cows, mules, and horses that were shipped overseas.\n\nWhen joining any club or, for example, the \"Seagoing Cowboys\", records are to be broken. When Luke was 18, he had made nine trips, which was the most any Cowboy has made. This was a big acomplishment for him, because it showed everybody what he could do.\n\nEntering a club is a chance to meet new people. For example, when all the animals were unloaded, it was time to bring out your game side. Luke and the cowboys would play baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where the animals had been housed.\n\nJoining the Seagoing Cowboys is a wonderful experience, because you have the oppertunity to see new places, help others in need, and of course meet new people. The cowboys are more than just Seagoing Cowboys, their people helping people.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There is no prof that and alien could have done that. If they think that they need to have prof that they are right. I might not have evidence that an alien could or couldn't have done that. But I know that if an alien did that there would have been life on Mars and we could or would have known by now. Here is my evidence to what I think about this situation.\n\nLike i said if an alien did this we would have know by now. In various researches they have said and wrote that this is a natural cause. I actually do have prof and evidence about my opinion. On April 5,1998 they took a picture, it was ten times sharper than other pictures they took in the past. Although I get it that lots of people want it to be true that an alien did that, but with what prof?\n\nI also see why you all think this. Many of you think that there are alien markings hidden by haze. But I think this is wrong, because they again took another picture and again it showed nothing of alien like. All that was in the picture was a big landform that is also common in the United States. Like i've said this is just natural occuring stuff.\n\nThis happens on earth because of lava when it gets cooled. The same thing happend on Mars. There is absoultly nothing to lie about or freak out about. Even if they wanted to have an alien to have done that they know that there would have been signs of life on Mars, and because there wasn't many people that think that there were actually aliens they didn't have a choice but to agree with us. So this is my opinion on what I think of the Face on Mars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There many books music movies magazines people find offensive Some people even believe things taken shelves I believe books music movies magazines taken shelves completely Not everyone finds things offensive taken shelves people agree First people different views find offensive Not everyone find things offensive want books song removed With people always different views difficult take books music movies magazines shelves everyone Just one person agree said movie book mean every single person wants movie book removed If one person found favorite book offensive I would want taken shelves completely Equally important every book song movie magazine someone finds offensive taken shelve would many books movies songs magazines left Author Katherine Paterson said But I right remove book shelfthat work I abhorthen also exactly right everyone else And books left shelf us saying every single book offends someone taken shelves would books anyone read People find different things offensive everyone took things shelves would none left anyone Finally someone finds book offensive read When someone finds book movie song magazine offensive nt need watch read Instead taking shelves person could read Not everyone finds books offensive taking shelves could upset many people When someone finds something offensive could avoid instead getting removed upsetting people If someone offened one favorite books I would prefere avoid reading instead taking shelves I read Some people find many books songs movies magazines offensive They would like things removed shelves permenatly I however believe things removed Taking shelves could make people happy could also upset even Not everyone finds things offensive taken shelves people agreeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I believe that this would be very valuable in classrooms because using this in more classrooms would be more active and enthusiastic. This would be very benificial to every classroom becuase the technology would make kids more engaged with the class and if the technology really can help then why stop it. The reason this would be good is because it states i paragraph 6 that \"A class room computer could reconize when a student is becoming confused or bored\", Dr huang predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This could possibly make kids want to contineau to college and so forth and even allow more oppertunities for later learning technology.\n\nThis technology would be helpful to teachers because they wouldnt have to try as hard to keep everybody focused and mind driven. This could help because in paragraph 6 sentence 7 that \"the same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive- for video games or video surgery. This would help drastically for video surgery because the computer would sence that your nervous and not ready to do the video surgery. I believe this is a good way to test a medical student because you would be able to see if they are nervous or totally calm with wha they are doing.\n\nThis could go beyond school and help even help painters get that perfect face but maybe they dont know what emotions they want to portray in the picture. This would help painters because they could see what kind of emotion the person they are trying to draw has and could possibly show them what percent of emotion they have in there face. This would be benificial because not only for painters and such but even for the public such as public news paper because sometimes there is unthought out things such as emotional times for good or for worse.\n\nThere is just one problem that could come up in the future of having this technology. In paragraph 1 sentence 1 it states out \"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful and 2 percent angry.\" Technology could not be this percise and acurate to say the EXACT number of ehat emotion your feeling. Some people just have a mean look on there face, and some have a face of always happy. Ather than that there probably wouldnt be any other problems because technology would be getting better by the year.\n\nIn conclusion i truly believe that this could take schools and other buisnesses a long way with the technology that is being told to us today. Other than the unexact percent number this will be will be a base emotion cauculation for schools, painters, and maybe for the public.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood author created happy All people story happy sadSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I believe censorship necessary If kids world grew listening hardcore gangster rap watching porn would shiftless violent leaders tomorrow It s inmportant held back offensive outlets order grow mentally healthy adults However censorship go far When comes removing author s work public library altogether crossed line With given us founding fathers given us birth duty express opinion I submit crime remove hardwork authors artists shelves Of course first point argument comes mind defend postion fact given legal right express oursleves amendment The writers aware freedom creativity held back people That law still exists used many times defend people arguing keep work words ideas world As far I know taking form media book entertainment away general public would illegal Still even point made convinced allowed say want A man name comes mind asked censorship media musician composer writer public speaker human activist I think many people believe bit wild deranged convincing argument known firm athiest secular humanist one believes nothing important physical human body gave argument I m giving I m catholic spoke censorship saying way judge artists work nt even listened fully If someone convincing passionate could feel way nt even believe everyone see human race whether believe given right creation revealed In cases s necessary needed people show ideas public even list goes These people although different worlds different times different people avid believers humans Imagine said I nt think people want hear I ll stop let someone else take little bit Do think world would amazing intergrated place The point never know great lifechanging someone s point view could Whether s leading civil movement attempting bring peace world needs censorship might one thing stopping people seeing influential person need In fact called share ideas It s duty make sure people see world view view poor homeless man single mother five kid elementary school rebellious teenager The world might ready change needs Who s right judge artist s work Some call call man others call government It s hard getting work acknowledged someone let alone whole nation However nt mean give Censorship public places crime law nature inaliable s job go world create new oneSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think that the use of the technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is extremely valuable. The reason why the use of this technology would be very valuable is becuase,imagine a computer that knows when your're happy or sad. For example , if you smile when a web ad appears on your screen .a simliar ad might follow. But of you frown, the next ad will be different.\n\nFirst, She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. No that's not your science teacher, grading your latest lad assignment. It's the subject of leonardo da vinci's renaissance painting, Mona Lisa- at least according to some newsoftware that can recognize emotions. Imagine if \"A classroom could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. uang predicts. \" then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" The same technology can make computer- animated facs more expressive-for video games or video surgery.\n\nSecond,\"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,\" notes Dr. Huang. \"So computers need to understand that, too.\" Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile. But we can write down some simple instructions that \"encode\" different emotions. Eckman has classified six basic emotions- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness- and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facialc muscles.\n\nThird, \"The facial expression for each emotion are universal,\" observes Dr. Huang, \" even though individuals often show varying degrees of expressions\"(like not smiling as broadly). Using video imagery, the new emotion - recognition software tracks theese facial movements- ina real face or on the painted face of Mona Lisa. By weighting the different units, the software can even identitfy mixed emotions(as in da Vinci's master piece). Each expression is compared against a neutral face (showing no emotion).\n\nIn conlusion, the use of this technology is very, no extremely important in shcools because it can give the teachers and the principles and idea how to get the students to learn better on what is being taught. The technology can also give the teachers and idea of who is bored or tired, or even who is having a bad, or fantastic day.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author concludes story paragraph wants hope future seeing hibiscus budding spring Saeng waiting It gives hope able pass test This showed says hibiscus budding I take test CAPS winter Saeng hopes improve hibiscus buds know time try Saeng sees spring new beginning So means time overcme obstadeI think obstade test might cry thinks old life Vietnam When accomplishes growing like hibiscusSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author concludes paragraph give sense hope growth The flower represents Saengs homelard makes feel comforted It connects emotions reminds way The growth flourishing hibiscus corresponds flourish Saeng When blooms true piece home able take test The story overcoming obstacles adjusting change The visual nearly lyrical expression blooming hibiscus makes reward result struggles seem much beautifulSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The article \" Making Mona Lisa Smile\", In the text it describes how new techonology called the Facial Action Coding System can enable to identify human emotions and it's not rignt that people can use a machine to know if your happy,sad, or angry at someone that the person personnal feelings and people have no right to know what thier feeling about something.\n\nIn a lot of ways I disagree on this new facial coding because it's not others people' s businesse to know how other's feel about what their doing. I am sure others would feel unconfertable knwoing that other people around know how you feel all the time. Somethimes when you feel alone or sadness and you don't want others to know because your not ready to tell them what's been going on and because of the Facial Action Coding System people would feel like they don't have their own personal space to think about themselfs and knowing how they feel about something.\n\nIn some ideas I agree with the article is when in the article it said \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" I agree on that statement; to use this new technology for educational purposes as long as no student or teacher abusses it to know what are others feeling about you or something else. It also a good idea to use it when someoone is really depressed about something and if you feel something is gonna happen to the person and you can tell an adult to help with the problem. Is not right for someone else to know your feelings, people have no right to know what someone else is feeling because people can take advangen of someones feelings and use it agaisnt them and can hurt someone for ever and maybe it can affect someone's life in the future.\n\nAt the end people still have no business to mess or know how someone feels becuase that's the other person personal feeling but at some point the Facial Action Coding System can be useful in school because it can detect if someone is confused or having trouble understanding the assignment or chapter their going through. The article \" Making Mona Lisa Smile \" has a lot bad points but in some statements they were right.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Everyone has heard of the planet callled Venus. Which is the second planet from the sun and it is also\n\nfamous for the beauty it has which other planets don't. For that reasons many researchers have tried to study Venus but none have accomplished to do so. The challenges the scientists face might means to end their life but it's worth it. The planet Venus, which is also known as our planet Earth's \"twin\" is the closest to us\n\nyet far.\n\nIt\n\nonce was like our planet Earth, mostly might have been covered with water but as time passed by it became rocky which shows the features of valley, moutains, and craters. According to the article, \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valley, mountains, and craters.\"\n\nThe researchers have failed stay long in the planet\n\nto study it\n\ndue to the temperatures, which is over 800 degrees and atmospheric pressure it has. The suface of the planet is so hot that it is like volcanoes erupting, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes which make the people who wants to study the planet unable to enter the planet safely.\n\nThe National Aeronautics and Space Administrations (NASA) is looking for ways to study the planet. The NASA has an idea to send humans to study the planet Venus by looking for a good conditions on the surface of Venus which will allowed them to study the surface of it. It might not be easy for them but at least they will be able to survive. It would be hard for them to take things from the planet such as rock, gas, or other things as a sample to study so they would have to take the risk.\n\nIt is worth for them to study the planet Venus because\n\nit has value and they can gain the planet. Also they will know what it is to be like in the planet. The article stated, \" Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidation endeavors.\"\n\nTaking the risk to study the planet might means that they can finally know what it is like tobe in there in Venus and see things in there as well as bringing it into our planet Earth. It is worth taking the risk.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The age at which parents should have babies has been always arising opposing views toward this matter. Some would claim that having large gap in age between parents and offspring can be beneficial because of the financial security and emotion stability whereas others would argue that this case has several drawbacks due to lower fertility rate and life span. This essay will discuss why this phenomenon is advantageous despite its minor downside. \r\n\r\nOne of the greatest disadvantages of having children at a younger age is that these parents would not be able to have more babies because their fertility rate decreases as they age. This certainly can have long term health consequences such as depressions, premature birth and lower weight of new-born. A study made by the Health Organization suggested that the majority of parents whose age above 38 have only one child. Furthermore, older parents are worried that they will not live long to see their children growing up, which means that their children might get shocked if they lose one of their parents. As result, it might create negative ramification on both their later life and exposing their children to a terrible experience.\r\n\r\nConversely, having new babies later in life helps fathers and mothers to be emotionally prepared to nurture their children with love and support because they have enough time to spend with them. A research made by Oxford University found that mothers who finish their education and have a better career have been able to balance between their responsibilities at work and at home, which has assisted them to care more about their offspring. Another advantage of this situation, financial stability has facilitated the mission of taking care of children without worrying about meeting their needs. This certainly one of the major factors that facilitate to establish a friendly and healthy environment for raising a child. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, giving birth at an older age is far better than at a younger age because it enables parents to give adequate attention and care to their children.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "One day ordering dress pair shoe But ordering said I Part legible yet arrive would Rosy saidno thank I know arrive said The next months dress The magazine company called said we sorry late arrival dress offer charge thank patiences ordered two dresses arrived next day still happySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Are driverless cars good for the future or the destruction of it? I believe that driverless cars are dangerous to human lives because of how technology can fail, How technology has no reguard, and how it can be hard to use.\n\nThe first reason why the driverless car is dangerous is because of how it can fail. If I am driving I sure don't want to have the technology to fail and cause me to kill a person. For example what if the car never told me that I had to start driving and it went through a construction site and killed some of the workers. There would be blood on my hands!\n\nThe second reason why the driverless car is not safe is because it has no reguard for any thing. It is not like a living human that cares about the surroundings and can think to change course if need be. It may not think that a baby passing on the road is a big enough concern to try and stop. It states this in the passage \"most driving laws focus on keeping driver, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that saftey is best achieved with alert drivers. Which goes along with what i am conveying.\n\nThe third reason why the driverless car is not safe is because of how hard it is to use for some people. I bring this point up because the old people in our society should be served first. They can hardly use Windows 8. Trying to teach them how to use a car that is way more advanced than Windows 8, would be terrible. They would not be able to know when the car is driving and when they should be driving.\n\nThose three reasons are why the driverless car is not safe. It might malfunction, It has no reguard, some people might not know how to use it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I believe that we should change the system to \"election by popular vote\". If we were to change the way we elect our president im sure citizens would be more pleased with the over all outcome. People vote on who they think is best fit to represent them and give them the best over all outcome. When using the \"electoral college\" you are not voting for the president but you are voting for a state of electors. It would be easier to simply allow presidents to get the popular vote in order to make the election more fair all around. The \"electoral college\" is unfair to voters because of the winner-take-all system. It is time to change our voting methods because the \"electoral college\" system is outdated, irrational, and unfair to citizens.\n\nWhen people place their vote they belive they are putting in a vote for the president they choose, not for a slate of electors. The \"electoral college\" is a very non-democratic way of selecting your president. In a way the government is deceiving their citizens by the way our voting method is set up. When people vote they feel a sense of independence because they are allowed to choose who they would like to represent them in congress. But instead once they place their vote it goes to electors rather than a simple vote towards the one they selected. If you were to change the way people's votes were counted it would be easier and faster to elect a president and get him into office to fix world-wide problems.\n\nIn all three articles at least one section has made it clear on their opinion to abolish the electoral college. Figures such as Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, and even the U.S. Chamber of Commerce have agreed on abolishing the electoral college. When voting for president you are voting for a slate of electors, but do we even know who these supposed electors are! Are votes are being manipulated and we are not even aware of who is doing it. If we can not vote for are president without going through electors we should be able to vote for the electors who are voting for are president. It is only fair that we have some say in everything that is going on. When votes are being placed we should be informed of all that is going on.\n\nIf you were to vote for your favorite tv show but your vote had to go through twenty different people all with different opinions you would be frustrated. Now imagine that scenario but with something extremely more significant than a televison show, the president. You are trusting possibly the next four years of your life with strangers in which you have never heard of before. It would only be fair if we could simply change the system to popular vote rather than electoral college.\n\nIf you switch to popular vote more people would be more likely to vote because they could have more confidence about their vote. They would feel free to make their own decision and trust it would not be tampered with by a stranger. People deserve a fair vote and with the popular vote that is what you are giving them. Because every living being deserves equality. Changing the system would not only be helpful for citizens but helpful for the congress. Instead of having random members of congress choose the president they can work on serious issues around the world. They can stop worrying about foolishness and do their jobs.\n\nIn conclusion changing the way people vote is easier for everybody. It saves time for electors and it gives people a chance to see who they are really voting for. Presidents would have to go to each state and appeal to them in order to get a vote. I belive that is what we need. They would be required to actually work for a position in office rather than speaking on whjat they are going to do and paying someone else to elect them. We should have faith in our president and know who we are voting for before we cast our vote. This system seems more fair and more modern to the twenty first century. This is a system most Americans would agree with. So to end my argument I simply say think before you act and truly try to do whats right.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Two summers ago I went We drive hours straight I mostly sat back seat listened player boring car ride On way I looked licence plates different states We half way stopped dunkin donuts early sister I got donuts hot chocolate Then got whole bunch little booths show passport got And finally We stayed nights Then rode hours go When got patience paid And thats time I patientSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "This paragraph tells careful roadsThis also talks aware ofThere many things could happenYou take control roadSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There is alot of advantages to limiting cars. Is there disadvantages? Yes, there is, but limiting cars can also be dangerous, well because the Law Enforcements needs cars and so does the Fire Department or even hospitals. The Law Enforement needs cars to catch criminals faster, and the Fire Departments need cars so they can save us from fires and to save cats from trees, how do they even climb up there? who knows, and the hospital needs them to save patients or to get them to the hospital faster so doctors can save them, but i personally think its a great idea to have limited cars.\n\nFirst of all alot of people would lose their jobs due to limited cars, such as mechanics, car dealers, etc. mechanics will go out of business because of no business and so will the car dealers, and if cars dealers dont sell many cars, the company might go out of business too, but its good because they might think of building better cars like the hybrid so we wont have much pollution or wont have to use natural gas. In the suburbs of Germany 70 percent of Vauban's families dont own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move there. \"when i had a car i was always tense. Im much happier this way,\" said Heidrun Walter a resident in the suburb.\n\nAnother advantage is that it is much more peaceful and quiet. \"the swish of bicycles and the chatter of wandering children drown out the occasional distant motor\" this sentence from the \"Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars\" explains that it is very peaceful because theres no noise, no pollution and much more healthier people because they ride bikes everywhere and walk alot, and theres no pollution so theres probably people who dont have breath in nasty air of cars. Even the Environmental Protection Agency is promoting \"car reduced\" communities, and legislators are even starting to do the same.\n\nPeople that have no cars most likely walk alot and ride bikes, or even run, well because of that the amount of stress people have is probably very low, because of low stress people are happier, and thats because excersize relieves stress and even reduce headaches or other health problems. Even the death rate will go decrease because there will less car accidents, and car accidents are the numer one reason of death and the United States. In Bogota they were in their third year where cars were banned but only buses and taxis were permitted for the Day Without Cars in this capital city of 7 million. Their goal is to promote alternative tranportation to reduce nasty smog and violators faced a $25 fines, the turnout of this was large, despite the gray clouds that dumped occasional rain showers. \"The rain hasnt stopped people from participating,\" said the Mayor of Bogota\n\nIn conclusion the advantages of limited cars are great and the people of Car-less cities or areas are much happier without them, people are healthier, less stressed and even have less health problem due to it, but who will save the cats from climbing trees? maybe they wont climb it because of no pollution or scary car noises.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Wow! What a surpise, a new breakthrough of technology. This technology is known as the Facial Action Coing System. This system identifies human emotions. In this essay I will tell you why I think that this system is valuable. There are three main reasons why it is in such of value to us. One, it can help bring the truth out in people. Two, it can people get help if they always come to class with a sadness emotion on their face. Third, is that it can help with lessons being taught.\n\nFirst, which is bringing the truth out of people. Now, I think this is valuable, not just to the classroom, but in the real world. This valuable in the classroom because it can identify whether a student is lying or telling the truth to his or her teacher at the time. This is essential because it goes along with my reason of that this technology helps with the lesson. This can help interpret if the student or students, are lying if you say if they know what is going on, and not confused.\n\nSecondly, is that you will be able tell if a student or students are upset or not. I feel like this is important because it can be hard for the student(s) to concentrate on the lesson if they are too busy thinking about why they are upset. With the right attitude the teacher can help the student(s) get their education. Another reason why this is important because it can save lives of people that suffering from depression. This can help lower the amount of deaths in a year because it can help recognize that a student may need some psychological help. For example, in the passage it says,\"...the software can identify mixed emotions.\"This is important because it can tell what you are feeling inside. The teacher can maybe help the people cheer up and get on with the day's lesson.\n\nThird, is that it can help with the lesson. Now this is very essential because it can help determine if the students are confused or bored. This is important because some students may be afraid to be one of the only ones to be confused of the subject. This is something o be recognized because it o decide to continue with the lesson or to move on to a different one of interest. As said in the passage,\"A classroom computer could recognize when a studetn is bored or confused.\"Also said,\"Then, it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"These quotes help get my point across because it shows that it can help recognize if the student is in a place of boredom or dispair.\n\nIn conclusion, the Facial Action Coding System is valuable in classrooms because it can help makes the teacher's job easier. Which can also help the students by, it recognizing if somone is being truthful , to help notice if a student may be upset for some odd reason, and that it can help the teacher know if the lesson that they previously just did needs some more work, or if he or she can move forward on to a different lesson.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Social issues related to celebrities' influence on young people have been widely discussed among people over centuries. It is hard to deny that celebrities set a positive model to personal appearance, and such a fact leads impressionable people to generate the opinion that famous people are a good example for young people. However, such a statement suffers from both logical and factual fallacies, and it should be examined meticulously. As far as materialism, personal development and appearance are concerned, I strongly hold that celebrities set a bad example to the young.\n\nFirst and foremost, wealthy superstars make young people too materialistic, as the young tend to believe that money is everything. To be more specific, most of famous people are promoted for their wealth on TV, such as big houses, sports cars and luxury items they bought, and they look like shiny and proud of what they possess. As a result, young people would buy what luxury things their idols buy, though they could not afford these things, which may put a heavy burden on their families' financial situation and make them pursue materialism.\n\nFurthermore, the fact that being more famous for glamour and wealth than achievements of famous people damages one's personal development indicates that this may be a bad role for the young.Take the case of one of my classmates, who indulges a beautiful idol and spends a lot of money on her albums. As a consequence, he seldom works hard in his study and failed in the college entrance examination, which put an obstacle on his development in the future. Had it not been for wasting time and money on the celebrities, my classmate would never have become failable on his study.\n\nNevertheless, a voice arises that glamorous people on TV make young children be aware of their appearance, and this is a positive trend. Ironically, the young people, especially those who lacks self-discipline, would waste much of their time on dressing and making up themselves like movie stars, which can be otherwise used in studying or something useful. What's worse, they are likely to tidy up their appearance at a young age because of the admiration for the pretty look of celebrities. Therefore, celebrities are more famous for their charm than achievements would make young people conscious of their appearance too much.\n\nIn a nutshell, I maintain that as far as materialism, personal development and appearance are concerned, I strongly hold that being more famous for beauty and wealth than for achievements of celebrities sets a bad example to the young. Admittedly, as my favourite quote from James Madison goes, as long as the reason of man continues to fallible, different opinions will be formed, and some people may oppose me. However, I believe they will compromise after being exposed to my article.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I am personally against the idea of driverless cars. Some people are already dangerous behind the wheel as it is. I don't think a computer would do any better behind the wheel. Dirverless cars can be very dangerous and I think people would be better off not being lazy and driving themselves where ever they needed to go.\n\nOne reason that I am against driverless cars is that they are not 100% driverless. There are still issues that the car can't handle on it's own and will require the driver to take over. Driverless cars can be very dangerous because if the car would ever require the driver, and it fails to alert the driver in time, there could be fatal consequences. Drunk drivers could also try to take advantage of the fact that the car would be driverless and have the car drive itself. But if he driver were to be too drunk to take over, it could casue a very bad accident.\n\nAnother reason that I am against driverless cars is that they would be compter dependent and would run on it's own. And every skilled programmer or hacker would know that you would be able to hack the computer driven car to do what ever they wanted it to. Hackers can already hack a lot of vehicles as it is, they can send codes to a smart vehicle to unlock and even start the car without owning or having the key to the car. There are way too many dangerous things that could possibly happen with that to list. Hackers could change the course of the vehicle to any given location, they could make the car crash itslef, and they could make the car failt to alert the driver and every one would blame either the driver or the car.\n\nOne final reason that I am against driverless cars is that people today are already lazy enough as it is. We don't need computers taking over our lives. People are becoming more and more dependent on technology causing them to be lazier. One example that has already been made is in the Movie Wall-E where everyone was in floating chairs that were controlled so no one would ever have to walk again, making them even lazier and very obese.\n\nI am really against driverless cars and I think that they would do way more harm than good no matter how much time, effort, and improvements they have made on it. I think we are better off just driving ourselves where ever we needed to go and that we should be less dependent on technology istead of being completley dependent on it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear Senator,\n\nI believe that we should let our nation's President be chosen by popular vote. The Electoral College is a wondeful idea don't get me wrong, but it seems as if with the Electoral College, the candidates running for U.S. President are just getting free votes and could defy the will of the people.\n\nWhen a candidate runs for office, aka Presidency, it means that he also has to choose his electors, but sometimes the state picks them. The electors can be anyone not holding public office. So when a voter wants to vote for their choice of candidate, they would have to send their vote for a group of Democratic or Republican electors that are pledged to your candidate. If your candidate won the statewide election, then they would go to Congress and your candidate would get however many electoral votes that he recieved from winning. \"The single best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor,\" according to Source 2. \"Back in 1960, segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy, (so a popular vote for Kennedy would not have actually gone to Kennedy.)\", according to Source 2. Some electors occasionally refused to vote for their candidate and wanted to instead vote for some who they actually want to vote for. Another worrying factor is if the Electoral College had a tie. If that were to happen, then the election would be given to the House Of Representatives, and then the state delegations vote on the president, and the Senate would choose the Vice-President.\n\nBy the electors defying the will of the people, then the wrong President could be elected into office. If a majority of state voters wanted a candidate to be President, but the electors thought differently, then they could be unfaithful and vote for whoever they wanted to. Where would we be then? \"Most states have a \"winner-take all\" system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate,\" according to Source 1. Some states, like Maine and Nebraska each have some type of \"proportional representation\". The reason I believe that we should have a popular vote is because you never know with the Electoral College. One minute they could be voting the way they should be, and the next they could be going against the will of the people and the state overall.\n\nOverall, I think it we should rely more on ourselves than the Electoral College. It was a fantastic idea, but the electors could change their mind in a split second and who knows who could be going into office instead of the President we actually need and want to run our nation for the next four or more years.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The face is a natural landform that looks like a face because of shadows.The region it was found in is the Martian equivalent of the American West.The first photo of the face was in 1976 we have better technology now.The newest photo is in digital image is three times bigger than the pixel size.\n\nThe newest photo in digital image is three times bigger than the pixal size so anything that should not be there we would have seen.The region it is in because it is like the American West it has a lot of mesas and this is just another mesa.The technology we had in 1976 was bad compared to what we have now so a shadow in 1976 would make the mesa look like it has eyes,nose, and a mouth.It looks like the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho which is about the same height as the face.\n\nTechnology has come so far since 1976 we could take another photo and we would see that it is a mesa nothing else just that.We have the technology to land on Mars we could land on the planet and see the face up close to uncover the truth about it but we have a photo that proves it is a mesa.The face was found in 1976 with shadows on it here on Earth a shadow can make us think something or someone is there but really is not there it is just a lamp.Mars has so many landforms that look like ones here on Earth,so it would make sense that we see a mesa with a unusual form it could have been made by underground lava like some of the mountions here on Earth.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock ware extrem comeone obstacles builders trying make building self could handle stress dirigibles tied building wind pulling swaying back forth wind direction changesAlso low dirigibles flying buildings The important gases inside dirigible flamible would devistation people New York CitySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "These days, apart from having an income, founders also carry a number of duties for society. I fully agree with the statement, as once an employer starts a new business, he takes obligations to the people he hires. Besides, founders have no choice as a matter of fact a heavy load of social needs lies on their shoulders.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, I believe that responsibilities have already been fulfilled by opening new vacations, hiring new employees with reasonable wages, providing health insurance for contract holders and even booking membership in a gym for personnel. Moreover, there is a widespread tendency among businessmen to do charity once or twice a month. For example, in Armenia doing a charity reduces taxes with an amount of applied charity. This is a kind of motivation to involve businesses to help homeless people and people in need.\r\n\r\nSecond, from my perspective, this matter is accomplished by the government with the help of gathering taxes. Taxes were created to collect money from entrepreneurs to meet the needs of society. Business holders already carry the burden of responsibilities which is mandatory for anyone. For instance, in many countries retirement is covered by the budget of paid taxes.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, indeed making money is the main purpose of most businesses. However, undoubtedly they allocate a fifth of their income to social needs, such as paying salaries and maternity leaves, doing charities, and providing insurance and other bonuses. That is why I consider that companies have as significant importance on their social responsibilities as they do on their financial goals.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I believe people nt like certain book movie able tell library itme removed library The library allow people use library take away things offensive customers Some parents come library children let children go look books used let I kid If children adult supervision wander adult reading section could look something bad They could also buy magazine looks perfectly fine outside offensive images inside When I ten years old family I went vacation We watching baseball game commercial break one night We fliping channels wating game come We watching television offensive image came televison children s eyes shoud nt see That occurance happened I parents wanted see That image adult image meant adults childrens eyes see well Libraries think puting books magazines shelves They might making little bit money effecting childs life negative way Things like could happen library also children young wo nt always know childs book adult magazine Children also might ask parents music case music might look fine outside cursing bad things inside This reason items library offensive people removed libraries If people go library nt like something shelves able ask library take item shelve The libray might everytime taking items shelves would make libraries enjoyable safe children If library nt take items shelve could effect business negative way The library take items regular visitors library ask The library shoud nt listen someone visited library times The library listen customers visit library often I think offensive images people visit library taken shelves removed library The library listen customers could effect business becasue could effect lives children positive negative waySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Citizens of the united states should participate in the \"Seagoing Cowboys\" program. First off they are sending animals such as horses, young cows, and mules to the coutries that were debistated from world war 2. Also they get the benfit of seeing Europe and China. Last they are serving for the orginazation of UNRRA. And this people is why you should join the \"Seagoing Cowboys\" program.\n\nTo support the reason that they get the benifit of seeing Europe and China. They see most of Europe. They see most of China too. And they see what most ordinary people don't get to. This shows why people should join the \"Seagoing Cowboys\" program.\n\nAnd to support the reason that your serving for the orginazation of UNRRA. They are part of the UNRRA . The UNRRA stands for (the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration). And so they are helping the debistated countries of Europe and China from world war 2.\n\nLast to support the reason that they are helping others in need of animals from the debistation of world war 2. They are giving people animals. They are also giving people their needs. And from those animals they are getting people the products they need.\n\nAnd I see why people do not want to join the program. maybe they want to stay with their families, or they get sea sick, or the fact that they just don't like animals.\n\nIn conclusion this is why people need to join the \"Seagoing Cowboys\" program. Like I said, they are sending animals to the countries that were debistated from world war 2. They also get the benifet of seeing Europe and China. They are also serving for the orginazation of the UNRRA. Now I recomend you should join the \"Seagoing Cowboys\" program.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Today we already have so many technical advances, and technology is in everyday lives. This technical advance is one of the best one's in our day and age. Schools and so many buisness incooperate technology in our lessons and tests and just everday task, that technology is taking over. I think that the FACS would be a great idea to have within schools because it would be a great benefit to those students that may have harder times learning. I believe this new technology could make a difference for the greater good.\n\nIf the FACS machine was incooperated into todays schools, it would be one of the greatest accomplishments. Students who struggle, like IED students, could maybe enjoy their everyday lessons. In the writing it says that the FACS machine would be able to recognize that a student is becoming confused or bored. When this occurs, the FACS machine would be able to change the lesson and make it a better fit for the person to understand.\n\nThis technology wouldn't only help the needed students, it could help the students that maybe have a little patience problem staying focused at the task at hand. It also may help the kids feel more enjoyed to come to school because they can learn at their on rate and pace. If the FACS were to help student like this, schools may have higher percentages with test and other important task they fulfill.\n\nI think this machine would help the teachers connect more with their students as well. If certain teachers let their students work with technology like this, this would help the teachers learn how every student is different and how they learn. It would also help the teacher learn how to teach better and more suitable to make sure their students succeed and understand things in real life.\n\nThe FACS could also help create confidence and self-esteem in certain people who think lower of themselves and who feel alone. If the FACS can understand your emotions, it could maybe help you feel better about yourself by maybe helping you link up to somebody else who has similar emotions so you could have somebody to maybe talk to.\n\nOne reason I would think not to have the FACS machine in schools, is that it may be distracting to some students. Also, it may feel intrusive to some students because they may not want their emotions told. And for the easily distracted kids, it could hurt their grades and cause their focus to be on something else like how that the FACS machine can do the ads by determining emotions on them, they might get distrated by this.\n\nIn all seriousness though, I do think that the FACS machine would be a great enhancement within the schools. I think this because even with the few cons and repurcussions it may have, I think that the pros outweigh the negativities. I think the FACS machine will be more beneficial then destructive.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Have you ever seen somthing, but it was not really what you thought it was? I'am a scientist at NASA, and i am trying to explain that the face that everyone saw on the planet Mars was not created by aliens. It was created by naturel landform. There are many clues that the face was created by natural landform. Also many people can disagree with me, but I will prove to you that it was not created by aliens.\n\nMany people thought that the face was created by aliens because at the time they did not have much eveadince of it was real or not. They thought that unusal shadows made it look like an Egyptin Pharaoh. We then showed people the pictures of the so what called face. It became a big hit everywhere, and people loved it. Some people thought it led to maybe living things being there. It then became an acient civlazation on mars.\n\nIn about April 5, 1998 they sent another ship out to take more adavnced pictures. These fine pictures would be much sharper, and they would capture more evedince. 1,000s of people waited to see what the fastinting pictures would bring a new. It revealed a natural landform and there came to be no alien monument after all. Many people were disapointed. They wanted to belive that it was real. Well, I am here to tell you that it is not real.\n\nAs you can tell there was a lot of dispute going on. Some people did not want to belive that it was not real. They wanted to keep trying. They then wanted to take a second look. The poeple wanted to make sure that we did not miss anything. We had an extraordinary photo that had pixel spans that were 1.56 meters. That was much better compared to1976 when the yfirst took the picturses.\n\nWhat the picture actually showed was land forms that were common around the Amercian West.\n\nNow do you see why the face was not created by aliens. Yes, maybe at one point in time it seemed like it could of been real, but all in the end it was not. It just took a little explaning and evidence over the photographs. In my opoion it would have been pretty amazing to of been that way. I guess some things just do not happen like that, and maybe some things happen for a reason. With my helpful eveidence and my clues I hope that you now understand why the face was not created by aliens, but why it was created by the natrual landforms.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Even though technology is a huge part of the world today to help with certain problem and can be really helpful to people. The author describes the FACS or Facial Action Coding System as a technology to shows a recognition to facial movement. In today's society we know that its alot of emotions being shown throughout the world no matter what's the case is. For example, emotions are hidden by certain people or even people that don't show emotions at all. To support my claim is that no matter if parents or anybody tells them something they will not show any type of emotion any type of way, so they use equipment or something such as the FACS technology program.\n\nThe author says that from using the FACS experiment that it will make you feel sightly happy. In my opinion that is not true because that when you are down or upset you wouldn't want to do a experiment just to make you feel happy because you would think the experiment was nonsense. The author also provided us with is that if you raises your eyebrowns when your suprises and around your mouth tightens your lips to show anger is true because the FACS could shows and tell your emotion at anytime and any place.\n\nWhen looking at the Mona Lisa painting it was sucessful and was one of Leonardo da Vinci's biggest accomplishment was the painting of Mona Lisa. Some of the new comptuer software that can recognize emotions, It was sucessful because the software is the latest innovation from Professor Thomas Huang of the Beckman Institute for Advance Science at the University of Illinois with collaboration with Professor Nicu Sebe Of the University of Amsterdam.\n\nComparing school computer and FACS is that school computer can recognize if a students is bored , or even confused about a problem there doing on a website such as Mindplay, Khan Academy , Carnige Learning, and etc. The FACS is extermely helpful and useful is because the FACS materials can be expressive for video games or video surgery. It can also help with human communication that aew nonverbal including emotional communtication. By according to Dr. Huang notes he says \" So computers need to understand that too.\".\n\nYour home computer or work computer cannot modify Mona Lisa smile. To support my claim is in pargraph 7 it says \" Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile. \" But you can write down some simple instructions that \"encode\" the different emotions.\n\nThe author says in Pargraph 9 us that the FACS can give you happy face that it can acutally be useful.\n\nIt can be false because a fake smile is when you mouth widen alittle bit with no teeth showing , and when using the FACS it can probably not show it.\n\nThe FACS technology can be very helpful for counselor, teachers , deans, doctors and even more. When someone is mentally challenge or mentally disabled the counsleor can uses the FACS to identify the mental person emotions. It can be helpful with teachers and deans is to identify the different or emotion the child has. For examples, say a child is got bully in the cafeteria for his lunch money and he just walks out the cafeteria with a frown on his face and he doesn't want to show his emotion toward the dean and/or teacher so thats when they can used the FACS technology to figure out there emotions.\n\nThe FACS is very helpful for humans that performs the same impressive \"calculation\" everyday. Of course, most of us can probably tell how a friend is feeling by the look of there face , you can probably tell by the look of there faces when they are happy, sad, worried that why Lenardo da Vinci made the Mona Lisa picture and his crew from making the FACS technology. The author is giving us the mood of encouraging because without the FACS technology then we would never know how people feel when it comes down to the people that don't show emotions.\n\nIn conclusion , FACS is very useful in many different sceranio. If it wasnt for the FACS technology then we wouldn't know how kids,adults,students,teachers and etc feel. Another thing is that the FACS technology is very helpful because that it can tell if a student is bored , and/or even tired. While a regular computer can tell if the student is bored. I would reccomend this in schools,hostipals, doctors office , or even in the dentist area.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The existance of driverless cars will probably turn out to be a major problem.\n\nThe legal systems already have enough to worry about with all of the violence and Isis, without having to worry about making laws to protect the car companys.\n\n\"Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident.\"\n\nTherefore I believe we should not try to promote the use of self-autonomous cars.\n\nThe idea of providing a personal AI to each and every car would be extremely expensive, as thats the only way to provide a safe, reliable, full-proof way to make the cars able to drive themselves.\n\nThat being said, we still haven't perfected a single AI.\n\nJust the thought that they could use satellites to provide coverage to every self-autonomous car is ridiculous.\n\nAs well as the fact that they will probably fail which will result in mass injury.\n\n\"Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in it at all times.\"\n\nThis is why I think that it would not be a good idea to have self-autonomous cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I believe that driverless are something that should continue being developed. Sometimes risks must be taken in order to advance in deptartments such as transportation. I believe that if we allow this to continue, it could lead to great advancements in transportation and will lead to making long distance travel much easier and much more safe. I'd like to ask anyone who is against the development of driverless cars this simple question: \"Can you imagine a world where there are no car accidents caused by tired drivers or by people who are texting while driving?\"\n\nSome might say that these cars are currently too unsafe to test. I personally disagree with that idea, as it sets a bad example for future experiments. Cars themselves would not exist if they had not been tested by someone brave enough to try them. Neil Armstrong would never have set his foot on the moon if he had not been brave enough to test the rocket that had been built for his crew. If we are too afraid to try something, even if it isn't as grandiose as stepping foot on a heavenly body, then what will that be saying to the ambitious young engineers that would like to build a rocket to send the brave young astronauts to Mars? We cannot sacrifice scientific advancement for the sake of safety.\n\nTo say that the cars being currently tested are unsafe is seemingly an exaggeration in itself. For example, cars with the \"Traffic Jam Assistant\" have sensors equipped in the steering wheel to assure that the driver has both hands on the wheel at all times while the car's autopilot is in progress, assuring that the driver can take control at any time. This is actually something that is already quite common in airplanes. Would people who argue against these cars be afraid when a pilot puts their airplane on autopilot as well? If not, then I don't quite see why someone would be so afraid of these cars.\n\nTo say that these cars are too radical to test is just not true. These cars are driven by computers when not being driven by their human passengers. Computers are capable of doing calculations in a matter of seconds that humans might take hours to do. Some might contend that computers can make mistakes. I must rebuttle that humans make mistakes far more often than computers ever do.\n\nStopping development onthese cars would be detrimental to not only progress in the field of transportation, but in the field of scientific advancement as a whole. We cannot continue to fight new ideas simply because they could possibly be unsafe. Mankind did not reach the top of the food chain by running away from the unknown; We reached the top by running toward the unknown.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think that the face on mars is just a nautral landform because the text states that few scientists believed it was an alien artifact. Also, the passage says that on April 5, 1998 when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time and the team snapped a picture, revealing that it was just a landform. Even though the team did this, people still beleive that it was a face. The Face of Marshad become a very big thing for pop culture. It was on TV, was in books, and on the radio.\n\nWe see things in everyday life like clouds. They remind us of animals, objects, maybe even memories. I cannot make a conclusion and say that cloud is a bunny and think that one day a bunny was in the cloud and it's face started to form. It is based on your perspective. To me, it looks like a natural landform on Mars but maybe to other people it looks like some type of ancient face. If people think it is an ancient face then people are going to ask questions then it creates an even bigger mystery. This was just coencidence. So, that is why I think that the creation on Mars is just a natural landform.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "To get things cleared up I want to say that the face on Mars is infact just a natural landform. Now at first you might not believe me but by the end of this, hopefully, you will know that I am correct. Ok first things first I am going to give you evidence.Before let me just say NASA is a very very skilled and expierenced research facility there is, so you can count on what they say is going to be true. Anyways,now scientists have said it is just a rock that resembles a human head. They have also said it is just about giving out the allusion of eyes,nose,and a mouth. Some people started talking and arguing that it was that the alien markings from the rock face were probably just covered up by the fog that was there or that the camera just couldn't get the clear picture of it. So we prepared to look again. One summer day on April 8, 2001 there were no clouds and\n\nwe got close. We used maximum resolution to get that picture. If there were any traces of aliens or items nearby giving such evidence that there were aliens there, then we would've saw it! When you look at the picture what you really see is a buttle or a mesa. Experts, researches, and scientists all confirm that it is just a natural landform. So from the evidence given and all the claims from people you can't neccesarily say that it is something alien. I hope that from what was written down here helps you to know and understand that mars doesn't have aliens and what looked like a face created by aliens really was just caused by nature itself!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Throughout the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\", the author provides quite a bit of evidence towards why human exploration of Venus should take place again. The author suggest that sending a human out to study Venus is risky, but it is worth trying to get more information about Venus itself.\n\nIn the beginning of the article, the author focuses on why he thinks that it is worth the risk of sending someone out to Venus despite the risks. The authors reasoning is that it is \"Earth's 'twin'\". He further goes on to explain how Venus might have been \"covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth\". The author does an adequate job of explaining that they want humans to explore Venus because it is so similar to Earth that they want to understand why. The author does provide enough evidence to support the idea of Earth and Venus being sister planets.\n\nTowards the middle of the article, the author starts explaining the statistics of Venus and how it is now non-sustainable for living organisms. The author is providing a lot of evidence that would steer people away from wanting to send someone out to Venus to get killed. The author could try to use different evidence rather than stating how \"these conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth\" and that the heat mixed with the pressure \"would liquify many metals\". So far we have seen how the author has provided a lot of evidence on reasons that it would not be the least bit safe for any lliving organism to go and study up close to Venus.\n\nLater on in the article, the author starts venturing over to the ways it would possibly be safe for someone to go visit Venus. The author suggests a \"blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above\" Venus' surface. He goes on to tell the statistics of how \"the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth\". These are not the safest conditions but the author makes sure to provide the fact that they are \"survivable for humans\". The author has a great idea with a lot of evidence to back him up but there is not enough evidence. He does not state how they are planning on getting material off the surface of Venus while also keeping the humans safe and under sustainable living conditions.\n\nThe author provides a paragraph on how they plan to bring electronics close to Venus without having the metal liquify. In the parahraph, the author states that they would use something called mechanical computers. Mechanical computers are something that was \"first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War II\". These are made up of silison carbide and would last 3 weeks in the conditions of Venus without getting destroyed. This would allow communication between Earth and the persons that are possibly in the blimp-like vehicle hovering above Venus in order to get orders and directions from The National Aeronautics and Space Administration.\n\nIn the end, the author includes adequate evidence as to how they plan on getting in sight of Venus, why they want to study it, how they would communicate from Venus to Earth, and the difference of pressure and temperature. The author could go on and provide more support for how the humans would be living out in space and how they would survive within those living requirements that are hardly met.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I dont think driverless cars should ever be used in the future. I just don't think they're necessary. I think things should stay the way they are, there would be many problems with a driverless car, and would people be able to even afford them?\n\nYes, driverless cars sound really amazing, but I think the cars we have today will be just fine. With normal cars, there are many crashes. I feel like with driverless cars there would be a problem if somebody gets in a crash, because then they will blame their car and they would be able to get away with something that was actually their fault. Maybe it would be difficult for cops to figure out who did the crash since its a driverless car and many technical difficulties could happen. The article even says that if theres an accident, whos fault will it be? The driver or the manufacturer? With a normal car, it would be obvious who crashed the car and why. The cops won't have as much trouble finding out who crashed. I just don't think driverless cars are necessary at all. We should just keep the normal cars that we have today.\n\nA lot of technical difficulties happen everyday with computers, phones, laptops, and a lot of other technology.\n\nSince it says in the article that the cars would be computer-driven, i feel like a lot of technical difficulties will happen. The car wont always\n\nbe perfect and not have problems. What if a technical difficulty happens and the car runs over a pedestrian and kills the person? It could happen with a lot of these driverless cars and maybe the person in the car could become traumitized from seeing the dead pedestrian or become depressed from feeling like it's his/her fault. Also, maybe the car can kill the people inside of it by accidentally running into a tree, a river or lake, a building, and many other things that could seriously injure or kill the people inside of the car. Many technical difficulties could happen, which would make driverless cars not be used anymore. If we dont use them in the future, maybe many lives could be saved. I dont think the driverless car willl be perfect, technical difficulties could definitely happen.\n\nIf driverless cars do ever happen, I feel like they would be really expensive. Not many people would be able to afford them. Since a lot of people wouldnt be able to afford them, i dont think many would be bought. So might as well not sell them. Also, I feel like if something from the car breaks on accident in a crash or something, it would be very expensive to replace the broken parts. I think people should just save they're money for something else and not buy these cars. They would be way too expensive.\n\nI dont think driverless cars should be used in the future. Things should just stay the way they are, there would be many problems with a driverless car, and people wouldnt be able to afford them.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "A time without cars would be a very interesting idea, but now that almost everyone has a car some people think that it would be hard to seperate from them. So instead of completely sepereateing from them lets try to limit thier usage. Think of all the benifits not just for you for everyone. Most cars pollute the air we breath, things would be different because think of all the money you could save by not having to buy gas or another car, and also think of how lazy cars have made people today cities would improve if people just walked instead of driving to and from work.\n\nWe all know how unhealthy cars can be to the envirorment, but did you know it could get so bad it could really hurt people. according to Robert duffer paris had to place a ban on half of the cars because they had so much smog in thier city. \"On monday motorists with even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine\" (Robert Duffer). he also said that diesel fuel was blamed and that it is worse than the normal gasoline. once a majority of the people had stayed off the roads for a while the smog eventually cleared up. So once agian this shows how harmful cars can be to an enviroment.\n\nThe reason america is having a drop in driven miles in the past years is that with the unemployment rate high and most americans can't afford cars. the article by Elisabeth Rosenthal has showed that since 2005 the number of miles driven has decreased and that the explanation of the recesssion is because of \"cash-strapped americans could not afford new cars\" (Elisabeth Rosenthal). Another statistic from the passage was that \"the rates of car ownership per household and per person started to come down two to three yeas before the downturn\"(Elisabeth Rosenthal). Even most middle class people have working cars some struggle to pay thier car payments and with the cost of gas high too they could really have a hard time.\n\nMany people belive that the car is one of the main reasons that people today are as lazy as they are. just think if their were no cars everyone would get exersize by walking too and from work or the store. In Bogota Columbia parks and sports centers have bloomed throughout the city. Just because they have something called a car free day this major event has inspired new bike paths and sidewalks throughout the city. and that was only a day out of the year and most of the people gladly participated. this was the third straight year of this event but it still goes on even when the rain is coming down people still want to be apart of events without cars.\n\nUnfortunatly most people would only see the bad side of things if anyone tried to completley get rid of cars forever. But there are always a good side of things with anything including the car. The problems of polution, the expenses of the things you need to have to keep a car running or with you, and the fact that it help stop the laziness of some countrys and help make them look new.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Imagine traveling at sea, seeing beautiful sight, and helping people around the world while doing so. Sounds like a dream job, but it can be more than just a dream. You can become a Seagoing Cowboy, like me. It's not that hard of a job, you feel enjoyed from helping people, and you get to witness beautiful sight. This is a job you have to concider trying.\n\nMy first reason, has to do with the kind of work we do. After countrys go through war, their city's are usually left in ruins. We are here to fix that. In paragraph it says, \"To help these countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more, 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA (the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitations).\" Us, seagoing cowboys, bring food, cattle/farm animals, and more to help other countries. The job of seagoing cowboys is to tend/ care for these animals. On the boat we feed, wash, and nuture the animals. In paragragh 2 it says, \"UNRRA hired \"Seagoing\n\nCowboys\" to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas.\"\n\nSecondly, if you could only imagine the feeling we get after helping out these stuggling countries. You could only possibably find out after becoming a Seagoing Cowyboy. It has to be one of the best feelings I've ever felt. In paragraph 4 it says, \"Luke turnes 18 before arriving in Greece, which meant he could be drafted for military service. When my draft board learned that I was on a cattle-boat trip, they told me to just keep doing that for my service.\"\n\nFInally, it's not all just work, we have some fun, too. On our way back, we have some free time. The cattle has already been dropped off so we only have to care for ourselves. We see some amazing sights we missed on the way there and we have some games we could play. It says in paragraph 8, \"The cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. Table-tennis touraments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also passed time.\"\n\nTo sum up my thoughts, this is an amazing job to have. You meet so many new people and just have a wonderful time. We don't do incredably difficult work, we feel amazing after doing it, we see amazing things, and have a lot of fun. This job has changed my life, it is truely an amazing expeirence. In the future, I hope to see more people participating and becoming Seagoing Cowboys. I might even see you.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars are a safer, more practicle way to drive in the future. It allows consumers to spend less money on gas because these cars use less fuel. It gives drivers a chance to be more productive, rather than spending hours driving everyday. Whenever the cars are completely finished, they will be much safer than today's cars and will help prevent accidents.The development of these new driverless cars will make the future a better place.\n\nThe driverless cars require about half the amount of fuel that today's cars do. The amount of money spent on gas has been a very controversial subject for many years. It would save consumers gas money everyday which will allow them to spend their money on more important needs. Drivers would not have to feel conscious about wasting as much gas, therefore driving the new cars would be a more flexible option than having to take the bus. These cars would allow people to save money and give better options to their transportation needs.\n\nWith the new technology that these improved cars provide, people would have more time to be doing something else. Some people spend hours driving everyday, and it would give them a chance to get other things done while being in the car. People would be much more productive with this new technology due to the extra time it allows a person to have. It also helps drivers be more social because they can spend their time interacting with the people around them instead of focusing on the road the entire time. Driverless cars help prevent wasting time and encourages productivity.\n\nAnother positive aspect of the driverless cars is that they will be a lot more safe. At this point in the developmental process, the founders have not fixed all the kinks in the car's ability to drive on its own, but they are working toward improving the car until it has reached its full potential. The car will have advanced sensors that can detect danger and respond quickly. When the car is completed, it will help prevent car accidents because of this better response to urgencies that a human does not have. Humans also can be tired and unfocused, which would not be a problem for a car that can think on its own. The amount of safety that this car provides is marvelous and it could change society's safety forever.\n\nOn the contrary, this new car does have its negative aspects. The \"driverless cars\" do still need a driver to be alert in case of road construction or other driver's accidents. In most states, it is illegal to test these computer-driven cars. Even if it becomes legal in more states in the future, new laws would have to be made to cover liability in case of accidents caused by these new cars. However, the negative aspects are a lot less impacting than the positive aspects for these cars.\n\nDriverless cars would change our nation for the better. It would allow humans to save money and live a more convenient life. It would give people a chance to spend more time doing or thinking about something else and not always have to be paying attention to what is going on with the environment around them. Lastly, it will prevent dangers that people encounter on a daily basis while driving. Driverless cars will be a technology that will positively impact people's lives everyday.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "This author has included a lot of information on why we should visit Venus. Yes I think we could visit Venus as the author said. He put in a lot of detail and a lot of thinking into this article. The author had a solution on how we could get there and how we would survive some of the conditions that are on Venus. He/she has an idea on how the mission would go.\n\nThe author stated that we could go to the top of Venus because we are less likley to die due to the fact that the heat is very intense on this planet. It also says that we don't really have to land, but just to hover about 30 miles or so above the ground so we don't get burnt up. Another solution the author put out is, that the people that are visiting could use some equipment similar to the stuff they had back in the 1940s during WWII. The author said the equipment would not be destroyed like the modern things that we have like computers, radars, and other things that are in a spacecraft.\n\nVenus can sometimes be the planet that is the nearest towards us, so it could probably be a short trip to be going there rather than going to Mars. Also the author states that Venus could have been once a habital planet a long time ago. More details are that the fact Venus is Earths twin. He/she stated that it is the closet planet to our planets size with the same density and size. That is a good statement by the author.\n\nApparently NASA is working on how to get to Venus via spacecraft. The author also states that NASA is making their electronics out of this \"silicon carbide\" material. Apparently they put it in a chamber with conditions similar to Venus and it lasted for about 3 weeks. We can conclude that this is a good material, but in my opinion I don't know if that's a lot of time because, they might need to study a lot of things that are on this devil planet.\n\nI think that we could make it to Venus and survive a potential death. We could some day walk on Venus if we had the right materials for a spacesuit and a helmet. The author once again stated that there is a spot for us go on so we don't get completely burnt up in the process. We just need to find or create something that could be resistant to the heat that is on Venus. I like the idea of going to Venus because it seems impossible, but really anything could happen if we had the right people and protection for this mission.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There has been an ever increasing use of technology, children are spending more time on television, video and computer games. It's often argued that this is a positive phenomenon while others disagree and think it will make children pay less attention to study. This essay agrees that spending time on electronic devices are an advantage to children. This essay will discuss both points of view.\n\nIt's clear that electronic devices not only gives children a better way to entertain themselves, but also have a huge benefit to children. Wikipedia is a good example, children can learn whatever they want to learn on Wikipedia with very convenient operation by just typing what they want to know, and also video games, children can learn other countries' languages, practice reflexs, some school also uses video games to teach their students too.\n\nBut, many disagree and feel that electronic devices deprives children, they think children may addicted to video games or watching televisions. Addicted to video games are not alarmist, it is a compulsive mental health disorder that can cause severe damage in one's life, such as suffer from sleep deprivation, and also not paying attention to their school works. I disagree this opinion, because with teacher's and parent's teach, childs will know to alternate studies with electronic devices, helps them to study better.\n\nIn conclusion, while the benefits of electronic devices, especially internets, , allow students to tap in to limitless sources of information, some still think that people should be wary of children spent their time on electronic devices. However, as long as we are careful to keep in mind the importance of leading children to alternate their time correctly, the benefits are clearly positive.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "\" All of our development since World War 2 has been centered on the car...\" Now and days alot of countries are limiting car usage to go into a day of free car day, which basically means that no one is allowed to drive their motor running cars for a day. If they disobey the law they will be charge a fine. Its like a when a police officer stops you for passing a red light or for speeding on a no speeding zone. Still these countries are getting advantages over these days because there will be less smog, less traffic, and more people buying bicycles rather than a expensive car.\n\n\" Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog.\" one of the advantages for limiting car use is there will be less smog to deal with in the air. this can harm not only us but our environment we live in, which is the air we breath. In france they decide to do a car ban day. The result of this event was that the \" Cold nights and warm days caused the warmer layer of air to trap car emissions\". If someone was brave enough to drive a car than they will be fined 22-euro which is $31.\n\n\" Almost 4,000 drivers were fined according to Reuters, people had their cars impounded for thier reaction to the fine\". Less traffic was on the streets due this ban of cars, which allowed the people with bicycles to go on the streets and ride them. In Bogota,Colombia they also did this ban but they gained more advantages over limiting car usage, only buses and taxis were permitted to drive on the streets. their goal was to promote alternative transportation. Due to this event, parks and sports centers were packed throughout the city, and pitted sidewalks have been replaced by smooth sidewalks for the skateboards and bikes.\n\n\" What most intrigues me is that rates of car ownerships per household and per person started to come down two to three years before downturn said Micheal Sivak\". As a result of car ban people have stop buying cars which is atrocius for car companies but at the same time there is a up side to this also and is that people will now walk or ride bicycles to get to where they need. Which also leads to people being more atlethic and less people being obese or overweight.\n\nThese countries are gaining alot because of these car ban which is good for removing these dark clouds in the air, less traffic, and people riding bicycles rather than cars. Its obviusly that some people think that this rule is selfish or not needed but its helps more than you think it does. And some people are just mad because of what they are getting charged or fine for driving in the streets even though you can't due to the law.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Facial Action Coding system. It can read almost any face, and tell weither what emotion you have having. You could use this for many diffrent things such as; busting a crimanal, telling if a person around you acully is happy around you, or even if someone is lying to you. But one other important thing this technology can be used for is school.\n\nLets say you were at school and you were getting bullied or you werent having a good day. You are trying to hide your emotions but your quiet good at it. But the moment you sit down at a computer, it scans your face and it says that you are sad/depressed. The moment the computer reads your face it can alert the teacher and it can tell if the student is enjoying or disliking the class or school in general. Then, when the teacher knows his/her emoiton, he could ask the student why they are feeling this way and if they need to talk. It could make the students feel special and that they dont need to hide there emotions from people and can feel totally comfortable expressing themselves.\n\nEven with that sanificant factor of helping children out with there emotions, there is also some cons about have this system. Facial Action Coding System could almost make the parents a bit worried about there children and be wondering would it could be doing. What if foreigner parties start to hack the system. There could be major problems such as; knowing who you are, having your facial ID, and a chance of getting captured. Some parents are really strict with their children not letting them show there face to a camera just because they are aware of the dangers that could happen.\n\nAnother con is that the system could malfunction. Since is sends the information and emotion to teacher/parents the teacher could get worried and ask why this student has this emotion but little do they know that there was wrong information sent. Lets say the student his sitting as his desk and the system scanned his face over a multitude of facial moment and it says your sad, but on the inside you are acually fairly happy. Then the teacher could ask you why he or she is sad, and would try to help him out. But little do they know is that he really happy and something went wrong with the system. It would be pointless, there would be no advantage in having this. It would take time out of your day and there could be a whole ordeal about weither your sad or happy.\n\nBut also the Facial Action Coding System could help us find out is is someone has cheated on a test, or is mad at another student. It can prevent many of dangerous thing from happening in the school such as a school shooting for example. If a student was angry 24/7 at school it could aller and worry the teachers that something drastic could happen and a gun could be pulled out. But you can prevent that from happening with the Facial Coding System, you could see that the student is mad all the time and the teachers could reach out and help the student before something drastic happens.\n\nOver all I think it would be a great idea to have a system like this in our schools today because some people are really hurting on the inside, and sometimes us humans can not tell weither if the person is sad, mad, or happy. We could prevent self harm with this! We could stop many of things from happening in our schools today. I think every school should start to incorporate this system into there labtops and computers because it could really help a student out. We could make people the outcasts feel important for once. It would make there day knowing the fact that somone cares about them.\n\nWe could help a lot of things we do in school today, it was be a good benefit factor having this system in schools.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I don't think that this system should be allowed in schools, mostly beacuse some people don't want other people to know how they are feeling. Maybe some people do. Even with this technology we don't know if that is the feeling is what the person is truly feeling.\n\nWe should maybe use this in criminal cases. The system would tell us if the defendent is getting scared and is lieing. If we could use this machine this was it would help get the bad people off the streets. Nobody should reject this idea, unless you are the bad guy around town. This system would help us in these cases.\n\nMaybe some theipist would like to have this machine so they can quickly tell what their clients are feeling. I know that it can be hard reading other people's feeling, this would deffinantly take less time in showing the problem with the client. The less time that it would take to see how they are feeling, and the more time how they should feel.\n\nSome places this would help, and maybe I dont see how this would help in schools. For most I dont think this should be here. No matter what I wouldn't use it. I rather have the face to face interactions with other humans and haveing them see how I feel. With the new technology coming out and learning how to read us could be bad. I'm not saying don't use it, but just be careful of how you use the technology.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "That venus is like a sister or most likely like a twin. \" venus is actually a planet. In our solar system, Venus is the second planet from our sun. \" ( prg.1 ). \" often referred to as Earth's \" twin,\" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too.Earth, Venus and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, obit the sun at different speeds.\" ( pr.2 ). thats one of the reason they call say it one of the earth's twin. humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on cloud- drapped worlds to make a mission there.\n\nIt also explains how \" A thick atmosphere of amlost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challening are the clouds of highly corrosive suifuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures averge over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the armoshperic pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditins are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to driving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. Also notable, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solor system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additionals impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to lans on its surface.\" ( prg.3 ). explains why it could be dangress like the weath for us, but \" venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given long time frames of space travel\". ( prg.4 ) . \" NASA's possible solution to the conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float aboove the fray.\" ( prg.5 ) but such as this solution NASA can come up with more other ones only takes time to make sure we actually can be in Venus.\n\n\" However, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard froms of photography and videography ineffective. More importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock,gas, or anything else, from a distance. Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks\". ( prg.6 ). But other than that Venus has value , not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because humans curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimindating endeavors\". ( prg.8 ).SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The features setting affect cyclist One way features affect cyclist summer time harder cyclistSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear local newspaper see population use computer They getting fresh air spending time family friends On hand computer come much use For many people Family lives quite distance away well friends getting touch possibility You also learn far away places like The computer often used projects essays important You learn quite bit computer The computer used many ways One way keep contact Sure go park spend time everybody live close For people relatives even good friends live quite distance computer It great way keep contact You keep everyday updated times For example cousin recently went country college months blog computer keep everybody update stay contact The phone always option To learn far away places great Online learn history specific places You see towns much You even see pictures Maybe one day even get see specific places person How cool would School big thing nowadays Students project project assay essay lot work grow older becomes work computer less weight shoulders With essays type fix mistakes without looking sloppy Projects easy fix messing nt big deal On hand americans ever weight The computer lot Most people come home sit computer rest evening They nt realize big effect computer make person More people exercising Spending time family Computers negative thing positive It helpful could imagine But yet make huge negative effect people It help keep contact people learn far away places even school work Let benificial useSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In today's most developing and rapid-growing world popularity of an online course is an easy and more effective way. A number of humans believed that higher education should be done online, another side some thinks student have to attend college to gain the degree. While this trend is beneficial to some extent, I would argue that it is a more positive side of this.\r\n\r\nFirstly, one convincing argument can be made that online education is a key development in this century. In addition, there are more benefits to gain research from home such as save travelling costs, we were able to get a foreign degree, get more time class at home. Let's take COVID-19, as an example, due to this a human life stops and students are also not able to attend their classes so they prefer to do an online course. Furthermore, this trend is very useful in many ways and students pursue more than one study at the same time.\r\n\r\nHaving said that, it is also undeniable that some subjects need practical study which makes online debate impossible in some way. However, some studies filed needs a certain level of labs or practical room which makes online examination impossible. The best relevant instance is science Universities, whoever studies in that field they need some specific instruments to performs such kind of task. Additionally, that's forces the young generation to go to college and share their ideas with each other.\r\n\r\nThus, it can be concluded that every coin has it's to side, here I will strongly support online study because of the developing technology and student attend more classes in the different filed at the same time.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Some societies nowadays have lost their sense of responsibility for the well-being of older family members, preferring to leave their elderly relatives in specialised government establishments. While there is a serious concern about whether certain rules should be imposed on young generations to oblige them to look after their parents, I would argue that it is sufficient for this responsibility to remain at the cultural level.\n\nOn one side, it feels correct that young people should be responsible for supporting their parents and other elderly generations. During their youth, parents put a great effort into providing their children with a good environment in terms of their education, food and healthcare, thus deserving a similar level of care later in life. However, imposing strict rules for the support of older people would break the fundamental concept of democracy. Therefore, countries that create such rules can no longer be counted as democratic.\n\nFurthermore, it will also raise an array of nuances. For example, people who were abandoned in childhood could be sued by their biological parents for lack of attention, which makes this rule unfair. Another problem is that such regulations would make supporting elderly people a burden and a chore rather than the result of personal care. In countries where rules oblige people to look after their elderly family members, natural love between children and parents gradually evaporates, becoming a sense of legal obligation. Thus, it is more appropriate for governments to propagate the feeling of responsibility by means of TV programs or other media sources to preserve a healthy relationship between young and older generations rather than by setting rules.\n\nIn a nutshell, it is true that some moral standards, such as the responsibility to care for elderly people, are fading away from some societies, requiring specific actions to be taken. Nevertheless, I believe such standards should never reach outside the boundaries of culture and become a legal obligation of a citizen.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "During construction mooring mast atop Empire State Building builders many challenges If put spire top building weight dirigible could destroy The construction team needed go back reinforce entire framework building obstacles way included lowflying aircraft laws difficult weather conditions safety derigible crashed New York For reasons mooring mast doomed startSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "All us think book hope none children children taken shelf But right remove book shelf work abhor also exactly right everyone else And books left shelf us Katherine Paterson said topic book censory library This tricky subject one ever happy All books music movies magiznes etccan considered offensive someone When comes books library sections One child family activity romance etc thoes would cut books children look One time I went I accidently wondered books section I knew I suppost go section marked Books section I would gone Parents need moniter kids look even part library go If child wonders romance section going see kind book librarys fault even fault writer If parent want moniter child looks could set boundries could say Do leave section If mom said would stay around child books The parents could moniter child solve problem Library s need decide kind books going library If library kind books want child see child look book If public library keep thoes books open parents could always go town hall tell mayor librarian towns people rude books If tell people library kind books others stand aginst books If like library shelfs suggest sections books keep watch kids look tell someone something problem What going improve public library going make kids go look books dont want seeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "After reading the article, \"Driverless Cars Are Coming.\", I strongly found myself against the idea of cars becoming driverless. There is a various amount of issues that could arise from this irrational idea. I believe that if driverless cars were to exist as a regular item in our society many problems would occur.\n\nDriverless Cars would cause an endless amount of dangers, failure within companies and manufacturers, as well as the amount of money that would be lost. Electronics that we use today fail all the time, and cause money loss and stress. I believe these cars would have to go through so many failures before actually being safe and useful. Our economy cannot afford to throw millions of dollars away building cars that will be used for hundreds of trial tests, and then thrown away. The failure percentage will be so high for these cars, and will cause so many problems for the manufacturers, people, and the economy alone. Another reason these cars would be a disaster is the danger it will create. In the article it talks about how people would get bored if they were doing none of the driving, which would cause them to fall asleep or to find a distraction like games, or phones. It also says that in tight spaces or traffic the car would need the human to takeover the driving. Concluding these two facts from the article, drivers will get distracted and when needed by the car to takeover they won't be capable of doing so. This is just one reason I found that these cars will put people in dangerous situations. Cars are to dangerous of an electronic to be putting people in, and testing the unknown. My last reason supporting the irrational idea of driverless cars, is the money that would be lost. Currently the united states is in debt by trillions of dollars, and even the idea of this adds onto the amount of money were are behind on. It would cost millions of dollars to build them, replace them, find the required research, and and endless amount of other things. Also, since they are going to be electronically driven, whos fault will it really be if they were to stop functioning? This question will arise in many court cases when manufactures get sued, and will again cost a fortune. This idea will take money out of everyones pockets, and the currently unstable economy does not need that. There are many other reasons to be argued why these cars would be a horrible idea.\n\nIn conclusion to my reasons, this is why I believe if driverless cars were to exist as a regular in our society many problems would occur. The endless amount of money, dangers, and failure accurately describe what this idea would do to our nation. Driverless cars will fail our economy.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is argued that there is no chance for tourists to take responsibility for protecting the environment and culture of host countries. However, I disagree with this view and believe that is a worthy aim that can be achieved in various ways. \r\n\r\nFirstly, everyone should be informed about cultural heritage and its great impact on the environment. They should be more aware of their and childrens' behaviour. For instance, the young generation must be properly educated in order to avoid littering public places with a variety of rubbish such as plastic bottles or residue of food, or touching valuable items like statues, special documents, famous pictures and others. \r\n\r\nMoreover, there should not be promoted cultural differences between both local and international humanity. A bright example of this can be India, where cows are established as sacred animals. Nevertheless, some individuals may bring beef or eat it, breaking Indians' religion. Additionally, there is a rule that people are not allowed to chew gum. Unfortunately, as a result of bad awareness and poor preparation for visiting foreign countries, similar situations occur and the nations change their minds about these individuals. Also, the community of Tangier in Morocco have done a lot of efforts such as recruiting about 70 security agents in all museums of the city and plentiful signs hanging at the main door for giving more details about the story of each building. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, some personalities can not be responsible towards cultural and environmental areas they went to. Although, others claim that it is impossibly to follow all foreign rules. I believe, that with the help of appropriate education the risk of law-breaking and losing the liability, will be minimized totally.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I am with the whole idea of having driverless cars because then it creats more time to get ready in the car because it is really hard to do your hair an drive at the same time. And if you woke up lat eor something then you must get ready in the car, or you will look ugly for the day. I am with the driverless cars and there are many valid reasons why i am, but that reason was just one i made off the top of my head. Another reason i am okay with driverless cars is because it has many assitiance stuff, like sencors when you are to close to an object or another vehical. Another big thing i like about the driverless cars is because it keeps the car driving safley, also another big reason i like the driverless cars is because they would be expencive and not everybody would be able to aford them.\n\nAs i said in my introduction, i really like the sensor function the the driverless cars. I like that function because growing up my mother was never a really great driver so she was involved with alot of car accidents,and most of them are with her rearending a car. Not all off the neccesarly but that is the onlyone i can remeber. That memory is pretty clear to me i dont know why but i remeber it was in her white cadiliack. It was a pretty radcar, but now with the sencors in the car she would hear the beeping and would stop driving because the beeping would scare her. So that is the main reason i like the sensor function.\n\nThe second main reason I agree with the driverless cars is because they would be safe drivers and with safe drivers that means there would be less car crashes, and within less car crashes that means there would be less injured people and that means alot to me because im a generally nice person and i care about other peoples well being. And im sure im not the only one who feels like that. Well hopefully im not the only person who feels like that.\n\nAnd finally the third reason ilike the driverless car idea is because they would be more expencive then most cars, and that means poor people wouldnt be able to buy them and that would make me look better ebcause im not poor and i would be able to buy one of the cars.And as the conceidecd person i am thatwould look really good on my part. And im sure other people with money would also appriciate that they cost so much money because if they were cheap then teenagers with no driving knolage would go out and buy them and then just ruin them and that would be a waste of manufacturing.\n\nSo those are my three reasons that i am down with the whole driverless cars idea. Im going to repeat the reasons that i like the idea, one because the sensors are nice, two because they would be good for our safty because safe driving, and lastly because theyre expencive. Those are all valid reasons in my opinion, and i think and hope that driverless cars are a thing in the near by future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Do you think a programmed computer can actually decipher the emotions of a human being? What about a painting? Can technology deciphering an emotion help our students in their classrom? In today's modern day life technology is used everywhere for everything. Technology seems to excel and expand everyday. We are even up to the point where we have robots working and talking as humans. Even in student classes. Most books are being outdated to computers. Books could be found on line and test can be did online. But could a computer really anayze a student's feelings. The thing is, robots and machines have no emotions. So how would they be able to distinguish a student's emotions, or better yet, a painting's emotions. Even though technology has no emotions, it could decipher a student's emotions through movement of muscles, facial expressions, and emotion recognition software and be very valuable to students in a classroom.\n\nTechnology or computers can recognize an emotion through your muscles. According to paragraph 3, the process of calculating emotions of a human or painting begins with first uploading a 3-D model of the face. The next step would be to compare the picture with muscles, the picture must move like human muscles. After, technology would relie on facial actions through the FACS, or Facial Action Coding System, to figure out facial movements. The FACS has classified six basic emotions and has associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles. With the muscle movement clarrified, the system could connect each facial expression with a movement. And with the new emotion- recgnition sdtware, the software could identify emotions. Thsi could help students in the class by a computer knowing when the student is bored with a lesson or if the student can't concentrate due to tiredness.\n\nAlthough technology can upgrade and use software to decipher's a student's emotions, technology can still be wrong, malfunction, and shutdown on students. A computer is based off of malware, numbers, and software and humans relie on them all the time. Sometimes computers can overwrite or miscalculate signs and give people the wrong expression. The computer can even shutdown completely. But just as a computer could be wrong, so can humans. Humans use calculation everyday. As the example used in paragraph five, we could tell if something is wrong with one of our friends by the look on their face, but most of us would have trouble describing their facial trait.\n\nIn conclusion, technology can decphier a human's emotions and can be valuable in a classroom. As technology upgrades, students could be able to learn more with the help of computers. Teachers would know whether a student is able to understand the lesson all due to a computer. They also would be able to know if a student is bored or just struggling. This is how technology, being able to read emotional expressions of students, can be valuable.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the classroom, most students are very bored and tired.\n\nMany students are not happy with spending the day in school.\n\nTeachers all over the country are collaborating to find things that intrest students.\n\nTechnology is hitting almost every school currently and it is bring kids to school more eager to learn.\n\nNow, there is a computer software system created by Thomas Huang and Nicu Sebe that can detect someones emotions.\n\nThis program detects a persons emotions by looking at how the muscles work.\n\nAn example of this progam is when the author describes Mona Lisa and says \"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry\".\n\nTechnology should be used to read the emotional expressions of students during class becasue it will help teachers find ways to make education exciting for students.\n\nAlthough sometimes people can read someones emotions, it is not possible every time.\n\nA student could act like they are enjoying school when they are really not.\n\nin some cases, students may not be sad because they are at school but becasue something is happeing to them outside of school.\n\nIn paragraph eight, the author says \"Meanwhile, muscles called orbicularis oculi pars palpabraeus make crow's-feet around your eyes .\n\nBut in a false smile the mouth is stretched sideways using the zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorius.\"\n\nThis is an example of how sometimes people can not read someones emotions.\n\nAlso, the program would allow a teacher to change his or her lesson plans due to how students enjoy the teaching style.\n\n\"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or board,\n\nDr Huang predicts.\n\nThen it could modify the lesson like an effective human instructor.\"\n\nMany students do not use words to express how they feel about something so this is a way to find out if they enjoy the teaching style or not.\n\nIf schools are able to get technology that detects emotions, it will help with how they need to organize the day and how to make it more fun for students to learn.\n\nThis will lead to an increase in passing and graduation rates.\n\nIt is very imortant to educate students becasue the students today will be leaders in the future society.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "This article is mostly about NASA and it's discovery of the face on Mars they believe that the face had a human form, but they figured out that it was just another Martian mesa. NASA thought it had unsual shadows to make it look like a Egyption Pharaoh, a few days later after the discovery Nasa unvieled the image for all to see. It starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows- even haunted grocery checkout lines for 25 years-some people think the Face is a bona fide evidence of life on Mars-evidence that NASA would rather hide.\n\nAlthough few scientists believed the face was an alien artifact, and so on April 5, 1998, when MGS flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his MOC team snapped a picture of the face. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL we site, revealing ...a natural lndform. There was no alien monument after all. Mission controllers prepared to look again.\n\nNevertheless, on April 8, 2001, MGS drew close enough for a second look and got a much better photo of the Viking photo. What the picture shows is the Martian equivalent of butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West. There are mant reasons why the face could have been made by aliens or if it was made by something else most likely it was aliens in my poinion, but we need proof to be able to determine if it was or not.\n\nThe article is just saying that there could be alien life out there, because there is so much that is undiscovered an things we do not know about, so it is possible that it was aliens or if it was something else think about it what do you think about all this?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Some people say that what children watch influence their behaviour Pandit other believe the amount of time they spend on television influence their behaviour most discuss both view and give your opinion\n behaviour is the way which persons are respond to particular situation or email it depend on person to person because it change according to sitmule. It depends on person to person because it change according to situations comma various adult are influenced by others habit and some are change their by watching TV or mobile phone I discuss both view in details .\nfirst, majority of individuals think that teenagers are influenced by what the see. married children's are changed their habits according to their friends like , in school the youngest will try to be like elders one they will try to adopt their habits like violent behaviour. in the other hand children change their behaviour due to what they see in their homes for examples comma if they watch conflict between their parents children are changed their actions and they can learn abusive language some time parents use abusive words in their conflicts .\nfurthermore, television also impact on adults behaviour. they can easily influenced what they can see and hear on television many toddlers are watching too much TV E and their impact on their eating habits comma now a days the most of the adult could be disconnected with their natural environment and physical habits, set as playing with their peers comma bonding with families. in spite of this variance teenagers are learn it behaviour like ok stalling doing violent behaviour with their peers and other due to watching too much TV. for example they watch action and violent movies try to behave like that. in addition to comma Noida news channel or great impact on children behaviour like the given news on terrorist attacks again and again.\n\n in conclusion comma I recapitulate my views that television influence the behaviour of child parents . parents teach their children to watch those program which gain the knowledge and increase the education level of the children.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Ah, the electoral college. Don't you just\n\nLOVE\n\nhow irrelevent, unfair, and confusing it is? In fact, it is so without flaw, that in 2000, Al Gore won the popular vote, but he lost the presidency (Source 2). Some people say that the electoral college is an anachronism, but some people disagree. Those people are wrong. The electoral college was irritating in the 1960's, and it's irritating now. You should side with Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, and the Chamber of Commerce (Source 2), and abolish the electoral college.\n\nFirst, and most importantly, the electoral college is unfair to voters . Most states in the electoral college is based on a \"winner take all\" system; if the candidate gets the majority of votes in that state, that candidate gets the electors (Source 1). This means most candidates focus in on the states they know that they have a chance of winning, and focus on going after \"swing states\" (Source 2). If a candidate was to get the majority in Texas, Florida, and California, the three biggest swing states, the candidate would have 122 electoral votes, almost half of the 270 votes necessary to win (Sources 1 and 3). Voters for the electoral college say that people in the swing states are going to pay closer attention to the campaign and become more thoughtful voters (Source 3), but should 10% of the nation decide who runs your country?!\n\nThe second virus causing the electoral college to convulse and bite its tongue in half is what happens in the event of a tie. If this is to occurr, then state delegates in the House of Represenatatives decide the President (Source 2). Each state only casts one vote, so the representative from Rhode Island would have just as much to say as the 55 representatives from the state of California (Source 1 and 2). Not only that, but a majority of people vote one party for president and another for Congress (Source 3). There are 538 possible votes in the electoral college (Source 1), so it isn't impossible for a tie to happen. In 1976, if 5,559 voters from Ohio and 3,687 voters in Hawaii had switched candidates, there would have been a tie (Source 2).\n\nAnd finally, the last thing that makes the electoral college as relevant as a new wheel for your horse and buggy is that, it's mind-bogglingly confusing. The electoral college is run by humans, so we must account for human error. The electors are just people chosen by the candidate who don't hold a seat in government (Sources 1 and 2). In 1960, a group of racists in Louisiana almost replaced Democratic electors with ones who would oppose John F. Kennedy, and he would have lost the election (Source 2). In Hawaii, also in 1960, two slates of electors were sent (Source 3). Faithless electors have refused to vote for their party's candidate and cast a deciding vote for anyone else (Source 2).\n\nIn conclusion, the electoral college is literally pointless. It's unfair and confusing. If America had decided on a majority rules electoral system, and not this pile of trash, we would still have all the same presidents we did before. Well, except Al Gore.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "A mood memoir would redeaming It would redeaming mood talks strugles like immagrent poor It also talks community going strugles come together help The author also mentions parents sacrificed lot help acomplish become today Since tradteties help author lead success would redeaming moodSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The builders empire State building faced alot obstacles One problem landed getting area people get make platform bigger also When dirigibles landed needed fuel would couple hours stoppedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Imagine person comes says CAPS reading Wait I know book That book absolutely offensive How dare read Then imagine snatch book never see This example censorship works If government notices citizens country offensive magazines books movies music right grab away No way right Everybody able decide right wrong watch read hear Nobody exposed anything nt want Also person truley wants find offensive form entertainment find matter legal Therefore I believe trying stop people fruitless action Remember would get listen favorite bedtime story CAPS The Well ca nt read anymore government declared book offensive camels took away Now boring book facts camels fun And I think CAPS authors thing amazing country freedom speech expression Stopping creativity author tough cruel Writing great story near impossible accomplish limitaions could result government censorship If song beautiful sweet contains bad word bad song If censorship would decide appropiate Would decide us Or would get together read aloud books declared inappropiate Personally I would love decide And mature adult I I morals mind choose good bad Perhaps multitude books songs would disappear altogether It possible It incredibly difficult imagine entire country moral opinions entertainment This could cause number entertainment forms eliminated So create standard approve forms entertainment Understanding young fragile children privy forms public entertainment censorship required However I strongly believe limited The censorship used help kids This similar way parent children eat healthy food instead junk growing When kids grown decide food eat Some items I believe censored public commercials children s television shows children s movies The things I many others believe censored profanity violence offensiveness toward race religion gender Later children able chose think acceptable censorship end Total censorship bad Each every citizen right read whatever please And nobody ever try take away Please nt ever let people tell moralsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the artical \" Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" It talks about an intracit software that is able to detect the emotions of someone just by their facial exspression. For instance they used Mona Lisa, they were able to detect she was 83 percent happy, 9 percent discusted, and 2 percent angry. This software could be the begining of a whole new era. We could implament this into shools, webcams, security cameras and much more! We could use this to make more money and make people more happier in general.\n\nI beleive if we evole this around a classroom atmostphere it could better the students of america. We could detect if a student isnt likeing a subjest, loving a subject, or just doesnt care. This program could work if we installed a camera in the fron of a classroom, Every student should be looking toward the front of the room anyways and should focus on the teacher. She could then look at the software on her computer and see if she needs to teach the material diffrently or with more inthusiasm\n\nIf she sees she is teaching something and most of the kids are unhappy, she could implement more activites change the tone of her voice, or even change the subject and come back onther day This software could be valuable for our future generation and make things easier to see what teachers need to change, or what the students should change. Overall this would benifit the shools of America and could make the educaion apect much more respectable.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is considered by some people that the best way to secure a good job is being a university graduate. However, others argue that starting work after school is a better option. From my perspective, deciding to work is beneficial in the field of business, whereas completing university coursework is the most useful in an academic career. \nOn the one hand, it is attractive to find work after school according to some people because they will have the opportunity to gain hands-on experience related to their chosen profession and acquire top soft skills such as time management, leadership, and flexibility. This results in promotions and a successful career. For example, not only has the job market been increasingly becoming competitive, but there is also an overwhelming number of applicants for one position in a company. Therefore, it is commonly believed by some people that learning key soft skills that can be valuable to a company and having relevant experience in that line of work can put one ahead of the game when applying for the position. \nOn the other hand, some people think that it is more advantageous to pursue higher education after school. Since obtaining a university certificate is an indicator of perseverance, passion, and intelligence needed to study a degree course for three or four years, a university degree is a convincing proof of the competence of the applicants. As a result, most employers will be more impressed by candidates who have qualifications from a university than those with fewer qualifications, which in turn leads university graduates not only to better job opportunities but also to higher incomes. \nIn conclusion, even though people may vary in their opinions, I think that being a successful career requires the relevant background either in tertiary education or work experience depending on the type of work and field.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear state senator of Florida ,\n\nI beleive that we should get rid of the Electoral College. It may have been good and all back in the old days, but the Electoral College does not many voters the passion to vote today. We should abolish the Electoral College beacuse it will encourage more people to vote and it is on the brink of catastrophe.\n\nTo begin with, if we get rid of the Electoral College it will encourage more people to vote for Presidident. For example, as seen in the article, Republicans in California realize that their vote does not matter because Democrats tend to dominate in that state. The same can be said for Democrats in Texas who beleive their vote does not matter because Republicans dominate in that state. However, if the U.S had a popular vote, voters may think that there vote may mean more and will be encouraged to go out and vote for the President.\n\nOn the other hand, you may argue that the Electoral College helps America have a better President beacuse in order to win you must do so in all regions of the country. For example, Mitt Romney won pretty much the whole south region back in 2012 but did not become President because he did not gather enough Electoral Votes. Barack Obama had a more widspread tally of votes. But he counter to that he did win California which gave him 55 extra votes.\n\nSecondly, the Electoral College is on the brink of a amjor catastrophe and must be changed before it happens. In paragrah 12, you see that just 5,559 votes that voted the opposite canidate would have made it a tie. That would be chaos. Because then the Electors of the Electoral College can then basically choose whoever they for President and not by what the people want.\n\nIn conclusion, we should abolish the Electoral College in order to encourage more people to vote and to stop a catastrophe that is bound to happen soon. Acorrding to a Gallup poll done in 2000, over 60% over the American people would rather have a popular vote. This just prooves that the Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and irrational.\n\nFrom your friend,\n\nAdam SolisSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I whole heartedly believe driverless cars are becoming the future and I can agree with that but its just not that simple. The author raises a great point in saying that the drivers and the car need to work together as a team instead a car just taking the riens of driving. Thats anti-fun and not enjoyable. Additionaly you can see some other flaws as well\n\nWhat will road conditions do to this self drivin cars. If a situation arises that requires a human driver and the car is driving its self or worse the human can even control the car. What could occur then? A car accident is not uncommen in these situations.\n\nThe law however is even bigger of an issue! the law states that self driven cars are illegal in some states! The law either needs to be updated or the car manufactures will need to find a way to get around this. As in stands today in this day and age, Self driving cars are STILL a thing of the future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The face on Mars is nothing but a Martian equivalent of a butte or a mesa. Martian mesas are common enough around Cydonia. So it wouldnt have been surprising if it was just an ordinary mesa. In1976, Viking 1 saw the mesa and thought it looked like a face. But scientists found out that it was just a martian mesa.\n\nOn April 5, 1998 a Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time. Michael Malin and his Orbiter Camera took a picture of the Mesa that looked like face. The picture was ten times better than the picture that the Viking 1 took. They found out that it was just a natural landform and that it wasnt an alien monument at all. Yet with all the proof some people did not believe that it wasnt just a regular Mars mesa due to that it was a cloudy year on Mars. So on April 8, 2001 it was a cloudless summer day in Cydonia and the Global Mars Surveyor got a second chance to look at the butte. The surveyor took a photo using its cameras absolute maximum resolution. The picture showed that it was just a Martian equivalent of a butte or a messa.\n\nNevertheless we found out that it was an ordinary martian mesa that looked like a face due to shadows. It was never an alien monument but was an ordinary mesa. So the the face on mars was never an alien monument but a nutural landform.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "After graduating from school, students have a dilemma, which is whether they should pursue higher education or look for a job in order to have successful career life. While two of these career paths have many advantages , I believe that getting academic qualifications before going to work is the best.\n\nOn the one hand, studying in universities brings us various benefits, that many choose to have a better career. Firstly, it gives students great opportunities to gain academic knowledge, which is the basis for career development. The courses and curriculums at university teach students the basic knowledge and therefore they gain a deeper insight into the fields they major in. This knowledge would play a vital role in helping students do their jobs better at the workplace. Secondly, students graduating from university would be officially qualified by academic organization institutes, thus, they would have more chances to get high-paying and position jobs than those who do not have university degrees. It is common that companies would consider candidates background knowledge as their top priority when hiring employees. \n\nOn the other hand, students gain a variety of benefits when having a job instead of pursuing an academic path. The first benefit is they would have more time to improve their practical skills, which are crucial for their jobs, they spend at least 4 years more than their peers, training and learn from their colleagues, work environment and their own experience. That would give them a higher chance to succeed in their career. A salesperson would have much more time to concentrate fully on building up relationships with customers and improve social skills , for example, rather than wasting four years at university to learn too many irrelevant courses. The second benefit is they will be likely independent and able to overcome difficulties better than the other groups. Students starting their jobs earlier have to deal with many problems, for example, covering their expenses, earning a living, without supports from families , coping with stress at work. By means of these experiences, they become more mature and will-experienced, which is also primary for their success at the workplace.\n\nIn conclusion, individuals have their own decisions when choosing a career path, whether having a job earlier or gaining qualifications in the academic world, in my opinion, the former has more positive aspects.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars can have a positive aspect on society. Driveless cars can improve the risk of injuring someone . Also driveless cars can improve the risk of car accidents. Also driveless cars can make sure you go the correct speed. Driveless cars can decrease the rate of car accidents.\n\nI feel that driveless cars will have a positive aspect on society because, it can improve drunk driving accidents. Also texting while driving will not be an issue because the car will drive it's self. Driveless cars can make sure you drive appropriatly so you will not get pulled over by an police officer. Driveless cars can allow you to do things you cant do while driving such as ;texting, eating, and talking on the phone.\n\nI feel that Driveless cars would be a positive aspect to society. Driveless cars can keep our world safe. Also driveless cars can improve car accidents. Driveless cars can make jobs that requir you to drive easier. Driveless cars should be made so it can make a change to our world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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