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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In some parts of the world, an increasing number of people are curious about the history of the house or apartments they are now living in. This essay will discuss why people are interested in history and how they can find out about that.\r\n\r\nThere may be several reasons why histories of buildings are becoming interesting for people nowadays. First of all, in this modern world, people love to observe and learn new things because it makes them excited in some ways. The second reason could be that people want to know about the mysteries that might have happened in where they are living. For example, people are intentionally renting a haunted house in order to experience things they are not expected of or find out whether ghosts really exist.\r\n\r\nIf people are enthusiastic about researching the hidden story of the buildings, they can take steps to achieve it. Firstly, they can contact the landlord and ask about it. Then they can trace who originally owned that house and have a conversation with the initial owners. In addition, they can find out more about the building by looking at the details such as design and architecture. As an example, people can know when a particular building was built or how old the building is, by paying attention to what types of bricks or styles are used.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, it is a good thing that a majority of people are eager to learn about the historical knowledge of the building they are living in. There may be personal reasons why they are interested in this and they can research by simply asking their landlord or just looking at the design of the building.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author saying that many people are very interested in discovering Venus because it's very similar to Earth. But this planet is also a challenging place to examine closely. With thick atmosphere, high temperatures, and the atmospheric pressure is greater than Earth, no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. That making it difficult for humans to discover it.\n\nThe author supports the idea of how studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers is pretty well. Because he had good evidences and details answering the questions. The text states,\"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiousity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" This shows how well the author supported the ideas about studying Venus.\n\nVenus is a dangerous place for humans to visit and examine. But it's worth once you tried it. Many people are interested in Venus and wanted to study more about it in the future. The author did a good passage to supported his ideas about Venus. With many helpful evidences and details.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile' it talks about how you can tell a students emotion from a new technology called the Facial Action Coding. Would you want a computer reading your face? or knowing how you feel? I actually don't think that is necessary. Why? because some people want all their feelings to be kept to themselevs, does'nt want the computer or the teacher knowing what's going on with them, or is'nt even comfortable with even letting a computer tell your emotions. I know I would'nt because technology is too much and can make up so many things about you.\n\nFirst reason, why I feel that technology shouldnt be used in a classroom to tell how you feel because some people want to keep all of their emotions to themselves. Nobody wants technology to show them the percentage of how they feel, to make them maybe more upset then what they are. If a student is more angry than happy the teacher might start asking questions wondering why. The student didnt want anyone to know. Its like the technology would be taking over the students space.\n\nSecond, a teacher should'nt know personally why a student is feeling a type of way. Unless the student is willing to tell the teacher. Instead, of being forced to be told bc the technology is telling your emotions and how you feel. The computer constructs a 3-D model of your face, all 44 major muscles in the model must move like the human muscles. The Facial Action coding is all in your body controlling your emotions.\n\nLast reason, I think why it shouldn't be used or is'nt valuable is not being comfortable with the Facial Action Coding knowing their emotions. The creator Dr. Paul Eckaman, came up with six basic emotins. The different emotions he came up with is happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. Also, each characteristic movement of the facial muscles. Technolgy reading how I feel, but definitly not in a classroom it is not the time or place to see how someone feels.\n\nIn conclusion, so basically I feel like you should'nt have to d it in a classroom. Maybe if you are outside of school, in a doctor office it'll be more comfortable. In class using the technology of Facial Action Coding is not where you should use it, it isnt valuable in a classroom. Eventhough, you could tell how someone feels by looking at their face sometimes, does'nt mean you use technology to see all your emotions. So, I disagree with is being used in classrooms.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper Computers humongous positive effect people I support advances technology It s nt finsing information books writing everything hand anymore Life gotten easier everyone Everyone use computer communication friends family We able learn things quicker using computers Working citizens use computers help important jobs Everything done computers Computers serve great source communication Having account allows chat people world It s much easier talk someone online long periods time wo nt pay phane minutes Even chats avaibale computer users Having allows video chat someone It makes feel like thay actually room If close friend moved across country ways communicate would helpful You cant accounts without computer therefore need computers Computers made generation intelligent We easily look facts anything computer Now s something re curious look google In past would nt feel like looking book waid forget Kids could get help homework online shy ask another person At point time could even take online college courses Being able go college home really come handy people Computers help us education Adults go work everyday really need use computers people working medicine field use computers keep track patients Now use computers organize lesson plans print reminders students Scientists use computers research things ecperiments Engineers use programs computers help design going build Computers wvwn allow ti advertise small business company whole entire world Computers really positive effect jobs society good thing economy Computers benifit us physically mentally socially Certain computer games improve hand eye cordination We learn many things computers They really make us intelligent Computers give us way communicate long distance friends family Websites like even give adulsts chance find soulmate online The positive effects computers people infinite need learn take grantedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursit despit the dangers, he presents this by giving insite on the planet.Saying that Venus is \"the second palnet from our sun.\" This makes it much more challanging. The author begins to explain the planets dangers telling us that it has a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide, an even bigger challange are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid. The planets temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and its pressure is 90 times greater than what our planet experiences.\n\nThe author mentions how facinated scientists and astronomers because it may well have been the most earth-like planet in our solar system. They even say long ago \"Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth today. It's even said that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for space travel.\n\nNASA has been compelling ideas for sending humans to study Venus. Their hostie conditions on the surface will allow scientists to float above the fray. The author is saying a vehical that hovers over Venus would avoid the harsh ground conditions. These would not be easy conditons, but humans would be able to survive.\n\nUnfortantly, a ship hovering would only provid limited insight on the ground conditions, renduring photoraphy and videography. Most importantly researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance. So scientists would need to get up close and personal with despite the risks.\n\nThe author supports this passage by telling the reader all about Venus and how dangerous it is, but dispite the conditions we are still trying to find ways to get there. Scientists are working really hard to figure out ways to send humans there without being harmed by the conditions.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile.\" The author describes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions, Which could be a good idea for students in school.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System could come in handy in many ways. If a student is at school and they are watching a video online where a person is trying to describe something or inform them of something and they are confused and the computer notices it, it could show them to another website that could help them understand it better. It could also inform a teacher that a student needs help. Another reason this would be a good idea is if a student isnt having a good day and they are upset and the computer recognizes it, then the computer could transfer them to a page that could cheer them up and put a smile on there face, which could help them get through the school day. It could also send a signal to a teacher that could lead to help from them. Another reason i suggest this tool is if a student gets very upset about something and the computer notices it, then it could help a teacher get a councelor if the student is having problems at home or with other people in the classrooms. The Facial Action Coding System could also come to help for students who might be suffering from depression and no one noticed the computer could help.\n\nTherefore I think that using the Facial Action Coding System in classrooms is a good idea becasue it could lead to some positive outcomes.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is a trep of a liveftime. It can take you on a trip arond the wold. If you like fram anmals you wolud like this tripe on a Cattle boat.\n\nIf you are a caring person you would like this tripe.\n\nYou would be helping ather countries recover ther food supples and animals.\n\nYou can see many things incoieding Italy.\n\nCity with streets of water and ivein an castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal. If i could go I would go to Italy and see the city of Rome. If you are a sae going cowboy you schud go ahad and triy this. It is hard to be on a ship for a wil but if you are willing to halp we will esated.\n\nIt is the trip of a life time so you shoud go on the cattle baot.\n\nThe cattle boat trips were an unbeliveble opportunning.\n\nThis is a trip you can not refus.\n\nThe cowboys played games on the cattl boat like base ball and volleyball games.\n\nnumber of famles halp spred a ware nes to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everyone has at less had one car in there life time no matter how yes it was or how old or ragidy it was it was a car that was poluting our air and giving off greenhouse gas. Now I would now what i whould do with out my car but then again there are some berifits or advantages you would have if you didnt own a car.\n\nWe can start off on now much money you would save if you did have a car. Think about gas is about what $2.99 now right? Or lets just say your driving minding your own bessnious and some edeit rams in the back of your new Nisson 2015 car and oh lord i dont think you want to talk about how high you insurents would go up. People in Vaudan and in most of France don't even have cars 70 percent to be exact. Now its not like a law that they can't have veicals just alot of people choose not to have one. How ever if you do own a car you will have pertty much no where to put it. Street parking,driveways and home garages are actally forbidden in some areas. If you still really really want your car you have only two places to put it. One in a large parking garage at the edge of the development or two you can buy a space for $40,000 along with a home. If you never had a car you wouldn't have to spend all that money on gas,insurents,getting your car repaired/fixed,and a parking spot. That's why 57 percent of people sold there car when they moved to Vauba.\n\nThe biggest advantage you would have if you didnt own a car is that you will be giving back to mother earth. Cars are responsible for 12 perect of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe and 50 percent in some car intensive areas in the United States. Cars can also be more stress then there worth having. \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,\" said Heidrun Walter. What do you think scards you the most when your dive? Getting in a car crash and seriousaly injuring yourself or worse die on inpacked right? Why don't you save the stress and the fear. Just give up you car. I know what your think what if i work far away etc? Just take the bus or better yet ride a bike to where ever you need to go or walk get some exercise and brake a little sweat. Or just take one day that we all not us own cars to just see how life would be. That's how BOGOTA got started in Colombia. They have been going it for 3 straight years. There are 7 million cizins people walked,hiked,and even skated. The only vehicals that where permitted where buses and taxis and if it rained it didn't stop them participating. Why can't we do that just for one day? If everyone just took one day that using cars I think i would make a big change.\n\nThere are many advantages we all would have if we all didn't have a car but I know it will take time for all of us to make that disitoin but hopful its soom before its to late for us and for the world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today’s society, many detailed crime descriptions flood newspapers and TV. In my opinion, although the dissemination could lead to negative influences on society, an outright ban on this kind of information should not be imposed on mass media altogether. \r\n\r\n It is beyond doubt that massive descriptions of crimes in detail can have negative influences on society. Firstly, this can be detrimental to children's growth. This is because the details of crime normally carry numerous questionable contents, including bloodiness and violence, and are considerably widespread through mass media like newspapers and TV on a repetitive basis, which have adverse impacts on children’s growth in a long run. Secondly, the broad exposure of crime descriptions in mass media may potentially result in youth crime. This is because that teenagers might be vulnerable to imitate negative behaviors from what they have seen from media. For example, the popularity of a series of gangster movies titled “Gu Huozai” caused many teenagers to imitate the plots of the movie, becoming gang members to do many illegal things such as theft and robbery. Therefore, crime details in mass media do have bad consequences on our society.\r\n\r\nHowever, taking into account the aforementioned viewpoints does not necessarily yield an absolute conclusion that this kind of information should be forbidden in media for all. Acknowledging the latest criminal means through newspapers and TV could warn people to be precautionary, as a large number of people get information from the platform of media. So appropriate dissemination must be allowed. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is undeniable that detailed crime descriptions in mass media may have bad effects on society. However, it does not inherently guarantee an indisputable view that we should restrict such information altogether.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What patience Patience means understanding tolerant A patient person experiences difficulties without complaining people impatient days Patience like waiting For example traffic jam long line maybe wait turn something Patience one best qualities someone could Every year people become impatient want people hurry move faster need gain patience taking deep breaths calming I think world would peaceful everybody patience would conflict happened day everybodies lives would perfectSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Home The Blueprints lives Narciso Rodriguez creates powerful mood reader First right bat I felt love thoughtfulness I still felt throughout story They came selflessly many immigrants give children better life even though meant leaving behind families friends careers country loved This made think parents immediately My father gave career mother gave family give brothers better life This feeling without words I ca nt describe level gratefulness I feel Narciso Secondly admiration I shared Narciso She described parents well enough put shoes I ve often told admiration strength perseverance thanked repeatedly What parents incredible something learn From Narciso s story I got sense admiration greatfulness connection I believe moods created throughout storySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While the bar chart provides information about the revenue of five different exporting items in 2015 and in 2016, the table depicts the variations of the proportion in five categories from 2015 and 2016.\r\n\r\n Generally speaking, it is obvious that the export of petroleum products earned the most in both 2015 and 2016.Moreover,textiles increased the most during the period.\r\n\r\n With regard to export earnings,petroleum products stood at the highest point in both 2015 and 2016, 60 billion and approximately 61 billion ,respectively. Nevertheless,textiles remained at the lowest in both years, roughly 25 billion and approximately 30 billion , respectively. Furthermore,more engineered goods were exported and earned in 2016 than in 2015, whereas there was less income in 2016 than in 2015 for gems and jewellery. Meanwhile, agricultural products stayed at almost the same number in 2015 and 2016, at approximately 30 billion.\r\n\r\n In terms of the table, when there was a 15.24% increase in textiles, gems and jewellery decreased the most by 5.18%. Meanwhile, there were slight rises in petroleum products and agricultural products,3% and 0.18%,respectively. Furthermore,the percentage of increase in engineered was 8.5%.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear computers big part society They advance technology positive effects However computers negative effects people They take away diminish time interacting family seeing world First computers negative effect people diminish time People caught computers desire starts fall According survey person spending hours computer week roughly hours day increase cholesterol slowly deterioating muscles Computers distract people needs says CAPS person needs one two hours physical activity day people get amount The leading cause low number technology says CAPS computers take away motivation time people need vital computers taking away society People nt bad negative effect computers Second computers negative effect people deteriorate interaction family people say computers take away family time reports Family This good especially since person needs least hours interacting family assured healthy mental state Children directly affected computer use family settings When computer time starts eat time also cuts communication something extremeley important graving children family bonds relationship ruined wal It affects interacting family puts hates family bonds computers haved negative effect people Lastly computers negative effect people takes away people using world When re computer seems like entire world computer screen But This effecting people negatively people use computers stocking average hours day notedly become withdrawn unaware world says physcologynet The cure Traveling even talking walks enjoy nature help People aware world live They make important descions children even country staring computer screen wont help It especially effect children next generation knowledge clear view world people keep negative habits computer usage In conclusion computers negative effects people They diminish bad increases need increases It cuts family interaction destroying family relationships bonds mention communication Finally takes away people seeing world something actually important affects people s desicion making well future generations People need realize bad effects majorly decrease computer usageSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "No one knows what the future holds and we never will.\n\nGoogle cofounder, Sergey Brin, has developed something that people have always wanted to, but have never accomplished.\n\nAccording to resources, Google has had cars that can drive independently, under specific conditions, since 2009.\n\nNow, in everyone's head is \"Oh I can fall asleep behind the wheel with no worries at all\", this is not true.\n\nEven though the car can drive itself it still gives the driver alerts to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues.\n\nSo with that being said, will driverless cars be around in the future?\n\nThis argumentative essay will be about the positive aspects of driverless cars because even though it has flaws, with the technology that is present today manufactuers will defientely find a way to fix every last one of them.\n\nAlmost everyday human beings come in contact with reckless drivers.\n\nReckless drivers are a danger to the rode, but what if sensors were put on cars to make them stop at the time they are suppose to.\n\nWell, senors back in the 1980s could probably never do that, but now in the present they are way more advanced than ever.\n\nSensors detect and respond to the danger of ridiculous skids or rollovers causin the sensors to apply brakes on the individual wheels of the car and reduce the power from the engine.\n\nThis will have a better response on things than a human being driver could do by themselves.\n\nSafety is defientely a big concern in this world so manufacturers do have to take extra precautions when making this product.\n\nThings are still be remanufactured as the days pass, but these driverless cars are not really driverless so to speak.\n\nDrivers will still have to pay attention to the road in case of any danger that the car can not simply do by itself.\n\nThe car does give signals like vibrating seats or annoucing over a speaker.\n\nThat might sound boring so Dr. Werner Huber, a BMW prohect manager driver, is trying to interpret the driving fun in a new way.\n\nSome manufacturers want to discuss possible car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays.\n\nThis would help with texting and driving, so with that being said this is actually a safety feature.\n\nPeople purchasing the driverless vehicles have many different questions, as expected, but with the amazing progress that manufacturers are having there will be none.\n\nEvery safety hazard is put into play with making this vehicle, even the enivornment.\n\nIf they can achieve all the needs of drivers then there will be less public transportation and instead a driverless car public transportation taxi system.\n\nGoogles cars have driven more than half a milion miles without a crash which means the accident rate would certainly decrease.\n\nWith the way everything is looking, as far as safety wise, driverless cars could be a possiblity in the future.\n\nTo conclude this argument on why the world should invest in driverless cars lets go back and look at all the positive aspects.\n\nFirst the sensors, then the dereasing of texting and driving rate, and last the enivornmental aspect of it all.\n\nAutomakers are continuing to solve some minor problems that occur over time as they test these babies out.\n\nIt is said that Tesla has projected a 2016 car release with the car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time.\n\nMercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to release cars by the year 2020.\n\nWill driverless cars make a huge sucess in the future and will they stay around if they do?\n\nWe have to see what the future holds.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After reading \"The challenge of exploreing venus\" i belive that it is a very interesting idea. Scientists want to exlpore futherer and learn more about this mysterious planet that in ways is very similar to earth. There are many problems though such as venuses voilet and trechorous weather, many probes they send dont last a few days due to such harsh conditions.\n\nVenus is a very strange planet, it is so similar to earth but also very different. It is belived to have at one point been covered in noting but vast oceans which may have held aquatic life just like the ones on earth. Venus also contains valleys,mountians, canyons all very much like earth.\n\nTo send humans to explore venus would be impossible due to the fact there atmoussphere is made up of nothing but charbon monoxide and there is lots of sulfhric acid which would burn humans. The best way of exploration is by probe which can go places humans can not.\n\nIn conclusion exploreing venus would be a great scientific discovery and would make history. But are the risks really worth it? thats up to everyone else, our travels into space shouldnt be limited but sometimes they ned to be.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced obstacles safety nature law attempt allow dirigibles dock The issue safety became apparent dirigibles made outside made highly flammable hydrogen rather helium To risk destruction one atop bustling city would devastating Nature became problem futile attempt builders With Violent air currents dirigible would swivel around even tied mooring mast Finally law obstacle builders Existing legislation banned airships flying low urban areas meaning dirigibles would way landing atop urban building obstacles safety nature law hindered attempt allowing dirigibles land Empire State BuildingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people believe that internet access creates problems. There are several possible reasons why it can happen.Firstly, some data may be unverifiable. For example, they search for a data, there would be lots of choices that would appear on the screen. They would not be sure if the information they are reading is accurate. Some sources may even have outdated . Secondly, some sites may be unreliable. For instance, people sign up on one site that sells goods online. The goods would be paid for by a credit card, but the purchaser would not receive anything. And finally, not everything is available through the net. When my friend had tried to research for some pictures of 18th century paintings, he did not find any results. Then he was told by his teacher that they would only be available in the library.Others believe that the Internet is very useful and these are the justifications. Firstly, it is hard to get the same data, that is available through the Internet by other means. For example, if the directory information could not give me the accurate address and contact number of a place I to visit, I normally check that information on the Internet. In just one click, I would get all the details of that company. Secondly, research becomes more comprehensive. For instance, I do not have to buy lots of reading materials to complete my research. Most of the needed information can be found if I have Internet access. And finally, data is easily compared and contrasted. researched a study about overweight children a decade ago and at presentwas able to finish his research in just one day, as compared to a week if he would not use the Internet.In conclusion, let me reiterate that the Internet plays a big role in our life, because it makes data retrieval and comparison easier.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", the author states that a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. The author also states that this techonology can be useful in classrooms. Dr. Huang states that using this technology could \"modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\". But does that make this technology really that useful in classrooms? I say no.\n\nIf this technology would work in classrooms like Dr. Huang says it would, it would be terrible. Obviously just like every technology, there are ways to trick it though this one seems extremly easy. Dr. Huang states that if it detects that a student is becoming confused or bored, it could modify the lesson. It is very easy to fake being bored or confused. For example, say a student is doing math homework and the computer detects that the student is confused but the student is just faking it. The student would be getting spoonfed the answer! Students need to figure out how to do problems without too much help and that is why we have teachers. My next reason is that when these students are being taught that being bored or confused willl alter what they are doing to be more fun or help you, their minds will be programmed that way. For eample, if a student that has used this technology gets an job and he has to do something boring, he will think that if he is bored everything will change and it will beome more fun. This, obviously is not the case. The worker will still have to do the task. Students will not be trained to do boring or confusing things without help.\n\nMy next reason is already a huge problem for schools today and that is money. Schools already waste hundreds of thousands of dollars on technology such as computers. Also, schools have to pay teachers and get lots of food. If this technology was able to be used in schools, students would either move to a different school that has this brand new useful technology, or the school will go bankrupt and close. Noticing how advanced and useful this technology is, it would not be cheap. Especially when the author even states that \"your home PC can't handle the complex algarithms\". This means schools would have to get powerful enough computers to run this stuff. This, of course, would be very expensive noticing how many kids are sometimes in one school.\n\nIn conclusion shipping this new technology to schools would be catastrophic. It would be extremly expensive. It would be very easy to trick, and will not prepare students for real life. Bringing this technology would not be smart and would instead be devastating. Schools across the USA would quickly run out of money and close down while schools that cannot afford this technology would quickly lose stundents.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article it talks about the face of Mon Lisa. Many of people have wondered and thought what Mona was feeling or was trying to express. Will now they came out with a new software were it recgonizes and tell the experssions of ones face. To me I don't like the idea of the software, it can be subatage to someones art. In parapgraph one in the beginning of the sentnce it gives you bunch of facial expressions that Mona is giving. The software indicates several expressions that she is making. In paragraph 3 says when the process begins, the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face. They recognize the the muscles and what the face is expressing.\n\nTo me this software of a cheat cheat to art. Art is meant to be looked at, to be studied and to make you more intrested in the art. You can have a millions of questions about an art piece the cool thing about the Mona Lisa is that it is a very famous painting, why because it was unique, people wondering for many years to see if she is smiling or no or what she's is expressing. in paragraph 5 says,\"We humans perform this same impressive \"calculation\" every day.\" Which is a good thing becuase we learn more about the face and how they make it with expressions.\n\nA software shouldn't be able to tell what they're expressing it just makes you not observe the photo anymore as much, because now that they may know what she's expressing she won't have the much popular attention to it like it did before. Says in paragraph 6,\"The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows how much this computer can do.\" Really it even says imagine a computer knowing when your happy or sad, to me thats just invasion to a person, you can always tell you how you are feeling and many just decide to keep them to themselves.\n\nMany people have their way of expressing themselves and sometimes you can be curious of how they're feeling. Which is good because the more you look at something you study it and you put piece and piece together until you solve it. Look at pragraph 7, it gives you something to do while your looking in the mirror, to make a face expression, and the face they told you to make was smiling. It's showing how easily you can describe someone face just by describing the face and the muscle form. It's not always good for everyone to know what you're face is expressing because thats just dull. It's not important for people to know, which will just make you more curious of you. Just as long as you know what your feeling, and thats what I think the artist that did this painting was trying to achieve.\n\nThis is my opinion on the software. I think that it is useless. It really is something that is happening now in this world is that technology is taking over us and what we do. We barley use our brains to study or read over something because we use the internet for that. We don't play outside or even try to look at new things in the world because were distacted by our phones or the tv. Most people are barley active and decide just to lay around and look at a screen. Now this is another thing less for a person to worry about, and slowly things that we are capable of doing by ourselves and using our head wouldn't be neccary because there's a sofware to that for us. Artist express themselves in art and they want people to figure it out and admire their painting, not a software to tell us. We become intelligent more each day if we use our head and take time to think about and thats something that is good for the people.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author writes about the idea of exploring Venus. The author mentions many obstacles, that make the exploration of Venus hard, but he also talks about why it is important for us to explore the planet.\n\nOne of the most important reasons, to explore Venus, is the fact that Venus could once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. The author writes\n\n\"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life\". The author also brings out the fact, that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit.\n\nIn Paragraph 8 the author writes about how exploring the planet would not just be for the information, but to feed the curiosity that humans naturally have. According to the authors opinion, if we can defeat the problem that is exploring Venus, we will be more confident and innovative facing equally intimidating endeavors in the future. The author expresses his opinion about exploring by saying\n\n\"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expnded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\"\n\nSo in Paragraph 4, when the author says \"The value of returning to Venus seems indisputable\" he means that the insight we would gain and the satisfaction of feeding our curiosity makes Venus a worthy pursuit despite the dangers. I truly hope,that the challenge of exploring Venus will be defeated, because it could possibly change the way we see our World.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus,sometimes called the \"Evening star,\" is one of the brighest points of light in the night sky. however the nickname is misleading since venus is actually a planet.\n\nVenus has proved itself to be a very challenging place to examine. Despite the challenges we have to take risks to examine the planet Venus because Venus is referred to as Earth's \"twin\", Earth is the closest planet to Venus in density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too. Earth,Venus and mars orbit the sun at different speeds. Venus has the the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mecury is closer to our sun. Astronomers are facinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.Sometimes Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for planetry visit, a crucial considration given the long time frames of space travel. Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of venus.\n\nWorking hard to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value because human curiosity will lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "studies conducted past years show people ages spend free time computers This becoming problem state country Computers consuming lives everyone An anonymous source claims use computer contact old friends A study shows phone usage gone adults teens would prefer email instant message friend This results sitting front computer screen waiting responce student says I go computer twice week dont use much I d rather fun friends rather holed room people believe way social really nt It s sitting front screen talking people even know well When sit computer chair start emailing away nt physical exercise The movement people normally get go bathroom Then right back chair making minimal movements people sit front computer end obese nt burn calories Since nt relesase many endorphins nt happy If got went outdoors physical exercise would fit happy Often teenagers feel powerful using computer They find easier disobey rules parents set Teens also find easier bully children via internet social networks students middle confess target malicious bullying online confess bullied definitely nt want bullied facebook myspace everything profile peers see Teens limited time computer nt anything regret future Therefore adults teens aware using computer fine nt use luxury way find information quickly contact friend foreign country This generation needs reminded whole life nt spent computer Probably less minutes day spent checking email instant messaging friend Then go outdoors spend time friends familySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think that the the human face looking thing in Cydonia, on Mars, was created by aliens? I do not. I think that it is nothing but a Martian mesa. There is no factual evidence for aliens making this \"monument\", it is familier to us on Earth, and it would not make any sense for it to be hidden from us.\n\nFirst of all, there are no facts to support that aliens created this landform. For example, the theory was based on no evidence or facts. No facts even hint to the landform being created by aliens exept that it kind of resembles a face. And there are plenty of chips, and even grilled cheeses that looks like a person, or even Jesus.\n\nLike having no factual evidence, the landform seen in Cydonia on Mars is somewhat similar to things that us humans on the Earth can see. The landform on Mars is similar to landforms that we have on the Earth today. On our planet, there are many mesas, just like the one found on Mars. And we know that the mesas on our planet are created by natrual events or occurences.\n\nLast of all, it would make absolutly no sense for NASA to be hiding that the landform was created by aliens, wich it wasn't. If it were alien made, NASA would tell us, in order to make money. For example, if NASA figured out that it was created by aliens, they would want to tell us in order to make money to expand the Mars exploration program. But, hiding it, they make less money, because people want to know more about othe life-forms, not a lifeless, rusted planet. (but wateer was recently discovered on Mars)\n\nIn conclusion, the landform on Mars was not created by aliens, but meerly just a natrual landform. This theory has no factual evidence, can be seen on Earth, and does not make any sense. And, though, there will always be people who will always believe that it was created by aliens, you should now believe other-wise.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke really liked his job as a sea going cowboy.In the passage you can tell he likes his job very much.There were 335 horses on that boat plus all the oat's to feed them for the trip.Can you imagen having to load all that.That must have been alot of work to have to get all the oat's up from the bottom of the ladder. But don't get me wrong he had lot's of time to do stuff like games .\n\nIn the passage it even say's he had a tennis tournemt.He must had really liked it because he rode the trip 9 times.One night they put him as the night watch and he slide down the ladder but luckly there was a pice of metal hanging out and his shirt got stuck on it so that kind of helped the fall a little.But don't think he didn't get hurt cause he did he had a couple broken rib's so he couldn't work any more that week.He could have also been put in the war but since he was already a seagoing cowboy they let him keep doing his job insted of putting him in the war.that was preaty nice of them to let him keep his job.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on driverless cars are that they are pointless. If a person to lazy to drive take a bus,taxi,subway. If a person isnt a good driver then this doesnt apply to them because they shouldnt have a liscense. Details that support my postion are legal troubles, like when the author says \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault the driver or the manufacturer.\" You see humans have a mind so they can actually think and be held accountable if they were to make a mistake(If they were taught how to drive properly) a computer is programed to do what it does. All of its thoughts have been written for it already so that means that it can only deal with prefabricated situations what if there was a pressing situation that the computer was not programed for and someone ends up losing there life over a computers choice. See a human would be able to handle the situation without being preprogramed its because we acually have a mind and our thoughts are acually thoughts and not lines and lines of commands.\n\nAnother detail that supports my position is \"in fact, none of the cars devloped so far are completely driverless...all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills.\" I dont see the point in a computer driving car if it still requires a human on hand if you to lazy or not a good driver(as said before) there are other alternitives to driving and most of the time those alternitives are just other humans that drive you but you see they are living breathing thinking beings and can adapt and be held responseable a computer cannot. Alot of times while driving a small choice can make a diffence in if someone lives or dies or is injured and from personal expearinces all computers have glitches no matter how good the programer not everything can be planned for but even the stuff they plan for will inevitably have bugs. Im just saying if you are going to make a computer car it better be able to drive my dog to the park and back without me because the only way I will think a computer car is safe and bug-less is if it is good enough to drive without me.\n\nSo in conclusion I think computer cars are pointless because there are plenty of alternitives if you dont like driving and I think computers by design are just not good enough to make human desicions. And who would buy a car for the sole purpose of not driving it. The EndSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Florida State Senator,\n\nWe should work to abolish electoral collage, not just you and me but everyone in Florida and even in the united states. It is unfair to the great hardworking people of our comunity, what? Now they don't have a say so in who's running their country. This is all due to the fact that voters are not voting for a president any more they are voting for electors who then get to vote on our president. To me its not fair for anyone not us not you and not the president.\n\nThis electoral collage has been going on sence the founding fathers establisted it a long time ago. Which is saying a lot now that we have'nt tried to change it just like we have changed everything else they had set in stone a long time ago. To me it is just unfair, the people who live and breath in this \"great\" country don't even get to say who will manage them and make this country better.\n\nThe thing that doesn't make sence to me, probably because I can not vote yet, is the fact of we are going into the voting complexes (churches or schools) to vote on the president of the United States. But, insted they are actually just voting far a slate of electors who actualy get to vote on the president. It realy grinds my gears, so to speek it isnt giving us freadom in the most free country in the world it is taking away our civil rights as citizens to vote. The other thing that I don't like about the electoral collage is how their is an even number of electors. At least if they are going to keep the electoral collage they should have an odd number, just so their can't be a tie.\n\nThe electoral collage is unconstitutional and should be taken out of the system asap. It takes away our civil librities to make this country ours. As citizens of the united states we need to work to get it abolished and only then will we truely have a great union. So, what do you say Mr senator do you want to be in this same place 25 or 30 years down the road, or do you want to fight the good fight to stick up for what we as Americans beleave in?\n\nSencerly, PROPER_NAMESCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author states idea First take test cant pass first time able pass For example story Saeng could pass test could let take see pass Second could ask help use book study For example help pass lot easier study hard enough That I think statement meansSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author ofWinter Hibiscus uses paragraph conclude story symbol saengs future Winter Hibiscus symbol saeng many reasons For one saeng plant Vietnam struggle survive thrive new world Saeng promises plant thrives spring shall retaking drivers test This symbol future extremely important story live ming fon Ho author Winter Hibiscus chose end vital symbolSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "At first terrain fine confident But reached first town looked like one ghoust towns movies The next town didnt come told would The terrain desert water miles But stayed determind And made water thoughSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is certainly believed that kids who started high school have ample amount of free time, which can be used to spend some time on public service, and I completely agree. Would like to discuss the following examples to understand better.\r\n\r\nAfter kids finished secondary education, they certainly get the eligibility of working outside alone, which can help to learn more about society. They also have ample amounts of leisure time, and they should try to spend on keeping the environment clean. They are aware of their neighbourhood, and if they spend a few hours of time per week picking the garbage along the pedestrian paths, cleaning up in the local community is a good sign to inspire other masses in that area. It will also be their career to the social impact of environmental cleanliness and show their interest in encouraging others to maintain our surroundings beautifully.\r\n\r\nAnother point, young people have more courage by nature, they can speak, and work with lots of energy. They should leverage sometime to help old generation people who spent life in old age homes. Old masses always love kids' speeches and their activities. So, if they spare a couple of hours regularly to teach about upcoming tools and technologies which are useful on a daily basis, it is great to help old age people when they go outside to visit hospitals, purchase regular needs equipped with the latest devices can help understand about their uses very easily. This also helps teenagers in their future of how to lead the old generation and next generations with examples and put their career into the greater stage. \r\n\r\nIn my opinion, the young generations are the backbone of the country's growth, and encouraging them to involve in such social, and communal activities is an intelligent path forward for their career as well as other generationsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Several features setting affected cyclist time year desert land lack civilization lack resources especially water rugged characteristics land The cyclist traveling summer time hottest time year He also traveling deserts create even hotter climate I traveling high deserts California June quote selection tells us If traveling example comfortable Throughout trip author come desert civilization He runs deserted factory miles land without people The fact traveling desert terrain also helps us realize water scarce He trouble finding place get water This made trip extra hard discouraging I going die says As travels farther land also becomes harder travel Flat road replaced short rolling hills characteristic setting like others negatively affects cyclist making journey harderSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Limiting the amount of driving allowed and having car-free cities can have several benefits by reducing the amount of air pollution and traffic jams. Some disadvantages of having car-free cities are time management and paying fines to drive. Greenhouse gasses can be reduced by limiting driving in cities and having car free cities. About 50 percent of greenhouse gasses are from passenger cars in some cities in the United States and 12 percent in Europe. There were about 80 micrograms of particulate per cubic meter in London and 114 in Brussels. Paris has the most air pollution with 147 micrograms per cubic meter.\n\nParis has 67 percent of its vehicles run on diesel fuel, which is blamed for most of the air pollution. The rest of Western Europe has an average of 53.3 percent of vehcicles fueled by diesel. Car emissions are traped from the warm air caused by cold nights and warm days. A partial ban was created in Paris for driving to reducce the amount of pollution. Drivers with even number license plates could drive on certain days and odd number plates would drive on other days. After only five days the air pollution was down by 60 percent. In Bogota there are car free days and 118 miles of bicycle paths were constructed and the amount of traffic jams during rush hour were down by almost half.\n\nLimiting driving will lower the amount of traffic and it made several people happier. Most public transportation was free on weekends. When driving was not allowed, people would be walking and riding bikes. Most people in car free cities enjoyed the sound of children instead of hearing the sound of motors all of the time. Public transportation was allowed every day and it reduced the amount of traffic with having fewer cars on the streets and roads.\n\nWhen driving on days then it's not allowed the drivers have to pay fines. In Paris drivers with even number license plates would drive on certain days andodd numbers drive on the other days. If someone is driving on the wrong day there is a fine of 22 euors or 31 dollars for each day that they drive when they can't. In bogota there is a 25 dollar fine for driving on car free days. Time management is another problem when someone can't drive their car. Going to work would take longer when walking, riding a bike or using the public transportation.\n\nhaving car free cities and limitin driving can be good for reducing the amount of air pollution and the amount of traffic out on the roads. Some people feel happier when they live in a car free city because they feel like they have less stress but some people dont like paying fines when they are driving their car on certain days.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are so many reasons why people don't want to participate in the Seagoing Cowboy program. Maby because they think that they might fail at it or maby they just planly don't want to participate. Well I think you should. You get to visite many amazing places. You also actualy are helping others. And if you do paticipate you get to go an advture and just by participating it might open up the world to you and learn new things.\n\nYou can visite many paces. In the text it said that Luke went to Europe and China. In the text it Luke Siad \"Seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special,\" and that show that he had a good time and saw some thing new. He also explaind \"Takeing the godola ride in Venice, Italy,\" and aviasly that ment he had a lot of fun. In the text it also said that \"Luke Bomberger crossed the Atlantic Ocean 16 times and the pacifice Ocean twice to help in the Wars. In the text it said that when they were on the boat and theydid what they were to do witch that is rair scince they have to take care of the animals they find some thing fun to do so they don't get board. One of the games that they played was volleyball. They made that balls out of stuff they found around the boat. In the text it siad \"Hepls pass the time.\n\nI think from reading this people should participate it the Seagoing Cowboy program. I think it would an amazing epereance to gome thing you didn't know you had an iterest in and find that you did. I would love to do the program. I want to see new places that i have never seen and at the same time I am helping others at the same time. Maby people think it is an opertunity just to see other places but that is only a fraction on what all this is realy about. I just have one question for you. Would you participate in the program.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The challenge of Exploring Venus\" The author suggests that studying Venus should be pursued, despite the dangers it brings. After evaluating the passage I do not believe that the author supports this idea well. In multiple paragraphs he states that Venus has a harsh enviorment, makes collecting information from venus seem impossible, and does not give enough evidence as to why we should explore Venus and the knowledge that could be gained.\n\nIn paragraph two and three the author explains why there is not much information on venus and how harsh the enviorment is. In the second paragraph, the authors tells the readers, although Venus is the most similar in size and density and sometimes in distance, we have not sent a spacecraft to Venus in over three decades. He then goes on to explain that no spacecraft has survived the landing for more than a couple hours because of its extreme enviorment. By making giving the audience this information in the second paragraph, it already gives Venus a bad reputation.\n\nIn paragraph three, the authors goes into detail as to why no spacecraft has survived the landing and why humans could not possibly go there. He starts off by saying how the atmosphere is 97% carbon dioxide, talks of the sulfuric acid clouds that also inhibit the planet, the extreme temperatures that average over 800 degrees Farenheit, and atmospheric pressure which is 90 times greater than ours on Earth. It would crush a submarine adept to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans on Earth. With all of this information, he makes Venus sound impossible to explore and gather information on.\n\nThe author then uses paragraph four to give the readers a reason as to why scientists are still interested in Venus. The author states that Venus could have been similar to Earth in its earlier years. Scienstists say that it was probably covered in oceans and could have supported life. another great facot is that Venus is still the nearest option for a planetary visit. But in paragraph 5 and the six the author starts to talk about safe options for humans to go there. The author uses evidence from NASA as to what we could do; use a blimp like vehicle or a ship that hovers about 30 miles above the Venusian landscape. However viewing venus from above would not give NASA any insight on what is going on below. The reason the author gives the reader as to why we should explore Venus does not seem interesting enough and the only safe way we could get to venus once again, makes collecting information seem unlikely.\n\nOverall, the author does not give a compelling argument as to why we should explore Venus more. All of the information he provides only seems to be disputed by other facts. The whole article makes Venus out to be an impossible planet to truly explore and accquire information on until we have better technology or Venus's enviorment changes.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a new technology called \"Facial Action Coding System\" that allows a computer system to read humans emotions by their expressions. This new advanced technology isn't valuable in a classroom enviroment. In a classroom it depends on the reason, and the student for this technology to be used. This system in a classroom can be taken advantage, and not used correctly.\n\nThe \"Facial Action Coding System\" being used in a class isn't very valuable, unless a student is always sad, and not doing well in school. No one wants everyone knowing their personal issues. In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" (by Nick D' Alto) it states \" The facial expresstions for each emotion are universal,\" observes Dr. Huang, \"even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression\" (para 4). Dr. Huang is saying that there is several emotions, even though people show expressions very little or not very much. Explaing that not everyone shows too much emotion, because some people might be to their selves. But even if a person is more to their selves the system can still read you're emotions even if you aren't really showing any. In the article it explains how the software can recognize the expressions. In the article it states \" By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions (as in da Vinci's master piece). Each expression is compared against a neutral face (showing no emotion)\" (para 4). In this qoute it explains the process of the new technology \"Facial Action Coding\".\n\nSome people won't want their expressions read by people they don't really know.\n\nThey also might not even want to talk about thier personal issues, because they just don't want to stress about it or because they don't want people judging them. This system can be taken advantage of for the wrong reasons in a classroom, and not be valuable. If this system is used in a class room it has to be for the correct reasons and not just because you think someone is always \"mad\" or \"sad\", and it might not always be the case. It has to be because you want to help a student, because they might be going through a rough patch in life and need someone to talk to. But if this new system is used to help someone, it should be in private; where no one is around.\n\nIn conclusion, the new technology \" Facial Action Coding System\" is not valuable in a classroom. This new system shouldn't be used by students/teachers unless they have a teachers permission and only for a reasonable case. It shouldn't be used a lot, specially in a class room full of students.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this essay the author supports well the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author presents us wih many advantages there is to furthure exploring venus. Venus is the closest planet to the Earth in terms of density and size, and on some occasions the closest in distance to. Venus may very well have been the most Earth- like planet in our solar system due to its very familar forms and possibly long ago could have had the same features and asspects that Earth has today. There have been many rising ideas that could help with a more thorough study of Venus. These are some of the ideas that the author presented us with in this article.\n\nTo begin with the author explained how similar Venus is to Earth. Although Venus is the planet closest to Earth in terms of desity and size it has been very difficult for us to study the planet. A thich atmospherte of almsot 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. What has been even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. Here the authos has been giving us specific ideas on why the Venus us so hard to study. But the autgor has presented us with a very important detail. Venus is sometimes right around the corner from Earth in space terms, which can be our neartest point for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel.\n\nNot only does the author give those deatils but also explains how Venus could have one been very silimar to Earth in many asspects. The author says that\n\nVenus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. The author also includes existing facts. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features suck as valleys, mountains, and craters.\n\nThe author also presents us with some possible ways to fix the prbelem of bein able to study Venus. The idea is that NASA has a possible solution that would allow scientists to float above the fray. Being able to float 30 or so miles above the planet could avoid the unfrienly conditions but they would be survivable for humans. There are also other ideas given by the author like simplified electronics made of silicon carbide that has been able to survivie in the conditions for 3 weeks. And mechanical computers. All of these could give the opportunity to better study Venus.\n\nIn conclusion the author has presented us with sufficiant details that suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit. Not only because it could be a great scientific study and make us more knowledgable. But the author says human curuiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. The authors is saying that being able to study Venus which is the planet most similar to Earth could benefit us becasue one day Earth as we know it could chnage and could become as dangerous as Venus is to humans now. Knowing more about Venus could help us prevent futhure harm to the Earth and ourselves.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A back mom decided send camp When I heard I pretty upset I would nt know anyone Before camp started I I could let mom let go After I knew I would nt get way I knew I camp When I got place taking us camp nt lot people When I got camp I wrong lot people I nt know It extremely scary late go home Walking cabin nerve racking I nt know would cabin Meeting girls cabin awkward mainly nt know secondly counselor weird Right meeting counselor made us play game Playing first strangers strange started laughing We played laughed hours hours time lunch Lunch girls scary since muh fun playing still nt really know When lunch first thing play laughed fun started get know All played silly little game giggled laughed came along second camp us almost become friend laughing playing We played much first called CAPS instead Like things got tired went separate ways free time Everyone agreed free time boring played Laughing laughing till stomachs hurt laughing hard I think us really became friends We become thick thieves couple days everything together We talked swam played tennis importantly laughed together Camp I expected way better All girls cabin become friends fast strange people realy kind weird become best friends couple days Camp flying us knew almost Things good one us got sick I one ended sick horrible I stayed bed missing everything going Even worse I almost lost voice laying bed without laughing friends fun torture camp fastly approaching I could stay bed relief I could talk The rest camp I could bed enjoying camp When time ending evening arriving cabin party Our party much fun even though stay inside cabin We ate treats saved concession stand treats counselor brought It almost go bed soon leaving There one thing one game We played hour another counselor come tell us quiet Looking back first year camp I always remember us became friends We still talk every year camp still play That year camp I think one favorite memories became friends playing laughing togetherSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think you sould go on a few cattle-boat rides ,because when I went on a few of them, I liked it. I got to see a lot of things most people had never seen their entier life.\n\nLuke turned 18 before arriving in Greece, which meant he could be drafted for military service. \"When my draft board leaned that I was on a cattle-boat trip, they told me to just keep doing that for my service.\" By the timehee was discharged in 1947, Luke had made nine trips (the most of any seagoing Cowboy).\n\n\"The cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy,\" Luke says. \"Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing Acropolis in Greece was special,\" he says. \"So was taking a gondla ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets made of water.\" Luke also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on his way to China.\n\nI also found time to have fun on board, especially on retrun trips after the animals had been unloaded. The cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been held. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time.\n\nThat is the reason I want you to go on a cattle-boat trip. And help work for the other people in the world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Public health has become an increasingly pressing issue in the modern world, with many populations facing rising rates of obesity, diabetes, and other diet-related diseases. This has led to a debate as to whether governments should establish nutrition and food choice laws for the betterment of public health or if it solely falls on individuals to make wise choices. In my view, everyone should take ownership of their diet and assume responsibility for their health because it is the right choice.\r\n\r\nThe argument for government-imposed nutrition and food choice laws is that they could help prevent people from making unhealthy choices which could lead to more serious illnesses down the line. For example, government regulations could limit the amount of sugar or fats allowed in food products, especially those marketed to children, and impose taxes on unhealthy snacks like chips and candy bars. This approach would also benefit those who lack the knowledge about healthy food, necessary to make informed decisions. By providing clear guidelines on what foods are healthy, and by taxing the unhealthy options higher, the government would steer individuals away from unhealthy options.\r\n\r\nHowever, there are also some valid arguments against governmental intervention. These types of regulations infringe upon individuals’ right to choose what they put in their bodies. After all, everyone should be free to make lifestyle choices for themselves. Additionally, there may not be enough evidence to suggest that overly restrictive regulations would have beneficial effects on public health outcomes in the long run. Since people’s love of unhealthy food is often considered an addiction, it is unlikely that a higher price or other warnings would be enough to deter individuals from purchasing unhealthy food items.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while there can certainly be benefits associated with implementing nutrition and food choice laws at a governmental level, ultimately it should still come down to personal choice and responsibility as far as one’s diet is concerned. Governments should instead focus on providing citizens with better nutrition education, so that they can make better-informed decisions about what they consume. This way, they can receive the information they need while still having autonomy over their own diets and lifestyles.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear The say people spending much time foucusing computer homework getting fresh air outside I say people Computers giant step new technology For example use computer research school communicate friends online give children time learn far away places people If research paper school checked books subject paper suddenly relized forgot one important books You race back library find closed Computers come handy You google book find online copy book make grade paper Also possibly trouble math homework home alone That computers So easily go teachers website would explanation specific lesson Children commonicate friends extent Such homework question talk fun Without friends children would knowhere Statistics show children permitted talk friends school stay drugs promote stronger education grades The internet created heck It invented people communicate childeren reaserch fun exploring well For example learning far away places people culture exploring animals even online shopping availble These necessities people access Without computers would know important news needed information needed specific moment Computers future yes I repertative computers lives communication shopping learning purposes teaching research places animals people culture Also email purposes get important news around everyone applicable This continue forward computers technology future So people keep computers important stepping stone needed growth moving onto future technology Plus would want good computer gameSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While reading the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" I'll admit that the idea of a driverless car was cool, but it concerns me about our upcoming future. As I got to the end of the reading my thoughts were more near the negtive side than the positive side. I mean the world today is and always will be coming up with newer things, but I personally feel that we are taking, \"The sky is our only limit,\" a little too far.\n\nIn the artical, Dr. Werner Huber, a BMW project manager driver admits,\" We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way.\" Today almost everywhere you go, you happen to hear about people texting and driving, which produces the trama of an innocent life being taken away because of some little thing that distracts a majority of us today. How are we supposed to introduce this \"fun new way of driving\", when there are people who aren't even responsible to drive on the road the right way? Some may say, \"Well that's another good reason for driverless cars!\", but in reality, it's not.\n\nAlso a question that is stated in the artical is,\"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacture?\" that question right there is also a major scare to a lot of us in society. On a day to day basis, we are dealing with wars in third world countries, people dying because of hunger, a new disease that can wipe out any country, and so many more things that an everyday individual doesn't even know about or think about. Introducing a driverless car, will only add to that stress and drama. Most people would say that it's another bad idea that car manucturers have pitched.\n\nFinally I'd like to say, It may sound like I'm bashing this entire idea, but really I'm just thinking about it realistically. Another statement that supports my argument is that television and movies have long been fascinated with the cars that could drive themselves. Another projection that many could inturprut the wrong way, especially new drivers. Teens today see crazy things done in movies and/or television shows and go and say,\"Well if that actor can do it, so can I!\" If they see a driverless car, who knows what's going to happen.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars aren't the best idea. Throughout the entire artical there are roadblocks and warning signs that show, diverless cars are simpily a pleasure and not a neccesity. Therefore the idea of driverless cars isn't so great.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting greatly impacted cyclist First setting middle story empty place get water This filled cyclist doubt despair heshe thought would die The setting also made cyclist thirsty extreme heat Finally cyclist filled regret regretted listening old men cyclist didnt make heshe wanted goSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think driveless cars are kind of a issue but again i don't think it is becuase it would kinda be difficult or weird for a car to be driving by itself with you in you wouldnt be that used to it as if you were driving it your self. It would be difficult for me because im not used to it at all. I think it would be awkward to drive without steering or driving car yourself. What if you fall asleep while the car is going by itself it would be so weird because you will feel so awkward for it to be going by itself. It would be awesome because its somehting new in the world so everyone will want to test it out around the world. I bet most people are tired of driving by there selves anyway. I would most definetly try it out if it were to happen in Anderson, IN or somewhere near close by. I hope it does happen soon so i can get new car. Whoever get this car in the future please be safe becuase you never know what could happen in this world with a car like that.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Venus are not safe, there are the reasion why the NASA are challenging the Venus. The author idea was that studing the planet Venus are to know everything about this planet and show how bad it could be. There are none of the single spaceship has touched down on Venus. There are somthing wrong in the Venus or somthing bad about it.\n\nIn the Venus's atmosphere there are the clouds of highly corrosive acid. A thick atmospher of the Venus are almost 97 percent carben dioxide and on this planet surface its was 800 degrees. The Venus has erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes. In this peace of evidence in the artical it's shows whats it like in the Venus and how danger its can be or whats it like.\n\nThe temperatures of Venus its around 170 degrees Fahrenheit thats means it hotter in the Venus. There are another ways thats the spaceship can be safely its cam be far above the planet not to close to the planets. In this artical the scientists and the researchers how to figer out how to get close to the Venus and the also study about the Venus.\n\nThe challenge of Exploring Venus can be dangrause to be there: its can be hotter, the weather, or maybe the tempertuer. The way the Venus can be is like earth; the people say that the Venus and Earth could be alike. In the artical the author support his idea was the Venus is harder to exploring and in earth its like easer, but the earth can had bad weather like Venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast shows easy making dirigibles safe docking stationA struggle faced time dirigibles countries made hydrogen highly flammable This meant exposed fire would instantly catch fire world s populated cityAnother problem faced amount wind top Empire building With wind hard pilots dirigibles steer The wind would toss around pilots couldnt take hands geersThese two many struggles pilots architects face docking dirigibles mastSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One day earth alien race came They called CAPS They wanted thing called balls would summon would grant wish strong fighters stop But strong already dead trained king others waiting Finally came beat crud The earth savedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "At present, aerial range of congestion is the greatest problem in a number of cities as well as towns throughout the Universe. However, this essay will discuss the reasons behind this rush also the possible solutions.\r\n\r\nFirstly, one of the biggest reasons behind huge traffic jams is unprofessional drivers who don't bother to maintain the traffic rules. Secondly, traffic polices are responsible for this irritating situation as they are failed to do their duty properly. Thirdly, narrow roads in busy places are also accountable for this inconvenience. Furthermore, ignorance of this problem of government can't be denied. In contrast, less amount of zebra crossings and over-bridges is another cause behind this. Moreover, a number of shops can be seen on the footpaths for which people can't use the roads properly, as a result, they have to take another way which may create a traffic jam.\r\n\r\nHowever, there can be several solutions to cope with this problem. Firstly, the government has to make the rules and regulations of traffic jams very strict. Secondly, those who will not follow these rules have to give a huge amount of fines. Thirdly, traffic policies have to be more aware to control this issue. In addition, roads should be wider at least in the rush cities and towns. Again, the transportation system should change like in Delhi after the starting of the Delhi metro rail, congestion has reduced too much. Moreover, more and more zebra crossings and over-bridges need to build in these sectors. Furthermore, the small shops which captured the footpaths have to be removed must, if people want to deal with this traffic jam.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, traffic jam is a problem which can easily sort out, if the community and government want to give them a try.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Our actions in Present time are product of the Past. It also concerns the Judge sphere. But sometimes laws and jury has no access to the information from defectant's background. Some peple - including lawyers - believe the accused person's past is very important. I completely argee with it and in this essay I will support my piont of view with some arguments.\nFirstly, without knowing defectant's past, he could to throw everyone off the scent. Persons who are being accused of the crime usually try to soften their sentence. Tey are capable to lie about many things to avoid the prison.\nSecondly, the defectant can have criminal record in past, so with having access to accused's background the point about this could help in researching the dicision of the case. For this part, is also possible to mention than criminal persons could intentionally go to the prison for some common case such as steeling somebody's property, to avoid of punishment of anything more serious and horrible like murdering or unlegal human trafickking. and in thhis moment the defectant's past is mostly important than ever!\nAnothe reason why I agree with a jury should be given all the past facts are cases when the accused peron where slandered and because of missing few background details an innocent man might be convicted. In other words, in reason of unawarenes can interfere with judgement.\nOn the other hand, any personal problems cannot be presented as strong argument for acquittal of a crime.\nIn conclusion, having no access to the accused person's past facts is a big problem. Personally, I support the idea th change practice in a law and jury for them to should be given all the background information to prevent wrong researching their dicision about any case.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Not everyone has the luxury of owning a car. But cars are not the only means that can get us from point A to point B. In fact, having limited usage of cars is an advantage to society, our own good, and also the environment. In the twenty-first centruy, it may seem that possessing a car is a vital aspect of living, however, that is not always the case.\n\nTo began with, having a limited amount of cars on the roads means a less amount of car emission that stays in the air. Carbon emissions from cars are responsible from around 50% of the greenhouse gases in the United States alone (Source 1). If we were to limit our car usage, it is very likely for that percentage to go down. Taking the account that cars are the second most item that pollutes the air, it would be a dramatic change for the environment to be a cleaner and heathier place to live (Source 4).\n\nAdditionally, if we were to use our cars less and relie on public transportation, we would be able to help the economy. Using individual cars does not help anyone economically. In the other had, riding subways, buses, taxis, and other public transportation will allow the public economy to rise, which in turn allows the government to recieve extra money that could benefit the local city. Taking the desicion to not use cars promotes alternative ways to get to the final destination in mind (Source 3). It also lets parks to be used more often than before and sidewalks become wider and safer. Moreover, the less cars that are on the street, the less traffic jams, car crashes, and time that is wasted sitting in a car wishing to be somewhere else (Source 3).\n\nFuthermore, if more people were to walk or bike on the side walks, they would be able to enjoy the natural nature that they cannot fully appreciate when they are zooming pass it in their cars at fifty miles per hour. Also, getting the chance to actaully look at what the local city has to offer helps little businesses to become successful. Not using cars can also be included in our daily excersise that we are all supposed to be doing. Instead of being lazy and using cars to take us to places, we can all use that extra mile or so to help improve our health. Getting out in the open and getting some fresh air will also be beneficial to one's health by allieviating them from bad thoughts and \"it is a good opportunity to take away stress\" (Source 3). Getting away from the busy life that includes cars is extremely advantageous to humans' health and the city they live in.\n\nMuch has changed throughout history. Nothing ever stays the same, so maybe it's the time to change the amount of car usage. This era is a time period where there are many technological inovations that allow humans from all across the world to stay in touch without leaving their couch. There has been a noticeable decrease in the amount of miles that have been driven since 2005 (Source 4). This is a positive step foward to a better future for the generations to come for less cars on the road means there wil be less pollutions entering the atomsphere, more opportunities for businesses, and incouraging individuals to make healthier choices.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Most of the citizens believe that, all countries should focus on producing more materials or items in their prime targets. Although some others think that, it is not a suitable target. I strongly agree with the idea of production and I will explain, why it is in this essay.\nFirst of all, countries should have a strong economy to survive and meet their citizen’s expectations. And for the strong economy, they should produce new materials and do more researches to create new products and goods. So, governments should open new fabrics and research labs for the related sectors in order to create a big economy for their future. For example, they can give the opportunity to invent their own electronic vehicle in the country and this will allow everyone to buy it cheaper and easily instead of buying from other countries. Which is a best example of the importance of the new products.\nOn the other hand, some people believe that tourism and entertainment have big impact on the country’s economy. For example, even though Dubai is half desert nation, the government create a big tourism sector all over the world that everyone heard about the country’s name. Although, there are not any factories to produce materials or goods, but there are many entertainment actions such as Img world, legoland and many more inside the country. And these are working very well and taking attention of the other people for tourism purposes.\nIn conclusion, governments should give effort to produce and develop new products and goods for the country’s future. Although, they can also use the other opportunities to create a well economy for their people, such as tourism and the other sectors. But, in my opinion, they should have goals for more production and creation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People are in a debate, of whether having a vast number of television channels will not affect the standard of programs or not. One of the massive technological investigation was television, which has been a popular source of entertainment among humans regardless of any age barrier. Many TV channels can be detrimental to the audiences since it can mitigate the standard of the programs conducted. The pros and cons of this opinion will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.\r\n\r\nFirstly, nowadays we can find many numbers of television channels unlike in the past however, every channel has almost the same programs presented in their own way to their fans, So they have their own fan-base. Contrastly, it would have been an ideal work if they can have one channel and try to make the programs to shine brighter with good ideas, presenters, and so on as an example, Discovery channel is the most prevalent documentary channel that was ever known but now there are many now, but they lack the standardization of that channel.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, having many tv channels has boosted the chances of entertainment for the audiences not only that it has given a broader range of job opportunities for many presenters, since having few tv channels will narrow down this path. However, there should be a competition between TV channels, so that they will try to overcome another by putting their maximum effort into it. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, it is a known fact that many are a hindrance to life unlike less, hence the quality of Television programs would be more visible when they are enriched with high resources and dedication. Besides all these factors considered it is wise thinking to have a limited number of Television channels.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on driverless cars is that I would like to have cars like this for many resons.\n\nThe first reason is because I wouldn't be a lazy driver. It's not good to be a lazy driver for many resons, mainly because you can not pay attention on the road and be in a bad accedent that can hurt you for the rest of you life. The main thing to do while you drive is to pay attention if you don't it can be something bad for you in the road. Thats one reason why i'd rather have these type of cars.\n\nMy second reason is because, I would be an very goood experienced driver. By everything I know with driving that being a smart driver is being the best driver. My mom is a very good driver thats why when im a car im am very alert. Thats my second reason why I would like to have a driverless car.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Could you imagine a life without a car? Well it seems that many people can. In many cities driving is being ban and officials are putting in place car-free days in order to reduce air pollution emmitted by cars. Communtities are even being built that do not allow cars.\n\nA community in Germany is has been built were it is car-free. Ther is no street parking, driveway, home garages. in this new experinental community car ownership is allowed butyou must park in a large garage at the edge of tcomunity and the car owner must buy a space for $40,000, along with a home. This has now become a growing trend to not uscar and rely on other forms of transportation. Many people feel that this has taken a weight off their shoulders. othr places are adopting the idea of living car free. If this continues it could drastically lower the amount of air polution.\n\nGremany is not the only place making efforts to reduce pollution and cut back on auto-useage. In Paris after near record pollution a partial driving ban was inforce to help clear the air pollution. For a day all the drivers with even numbered license plates were ordered not to drive their cars or be charged with a $31 dollar fine and the next day drivers with odd numbered drivers license were ordered to do the same. After five long dats of smog congestion went down sixty percent. Although delivery companies lost revenue, the temparary ban lowered pollution in paris.\n\nIn Bogota, Colombia car-free day is a huge hit. this would make it the tird year in a row that cars were banned with only busses and taxis permitted to roam the streets. thye goal of this day s to reduce pollution and premote alternative forms of taransportation. The gloomy weather of the day with gray clouds and the occasional poring down of rain didnt stop the citizens of Bogota from hiking, biking, or skating there way from point A to point B. The turnut was huge and created an enthusiastic enviornment for all who joined in.\n\nIn conclusion, the occasional banning of cars, and comunities built were seeing a car would be strnge is an excelant way to reduce pollutin. The air we breath is what keeps us going so we must take drastic measures to ensure our health and keep our air clean.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you drive an driverless car? Even when it crashes would you take the responsibility for it? Well would it be your fault even if you weren't driving it down the road?\n\nIn the future most people think that we would probably more upgraded cars, do you think that the future cars would be more smarter than the cars that are present now? In the passage it said that \"Self-driving car wouldn't be as smart as the present cars here today. A reason why is because in the 1950's the Gereral Motors created a concept car that could run on a special test track. The track was embedded with an electrical cable that sent rasio signals to a receiver on the front end of the car\",\n\nDo you think it's a good idea to spend more money on more futurist cars that might not be more of aprovement with the present cars today? If the General Motors decide on making the cars who's fault would it be if the car crashes when the car was driving by itself? would it be your's or the pople who made the cars. In the passage it also said the self-driving might not be able to handle traffic jam, what if you don't want to drive or cant drive what would you do?\n\nThere are still positive things in driverless cars, for an example if you watn an 20 minute nap and it takes 30 minutes to get to work you can turn on the self-driving button to drive for you the last 10 minutes you'll be up and ready to drive the rest of the way to work. There are also sensors to the cars too, when you come to really close to crashing the auto brakes will help out.\n\nThere are positive and negative things to driving an auto-driving car would you still drive it evevn though it has really bad saftey hazards?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challange of Exploring Venus,\" the author supports' his claims on how it is dangerouse it is taking the risk to explore Venus. The author uses various facts, proven by scientests, to justify his explanation. In this he talks about how ships can hover over the planet but not land on it because it is too dangerous. Venuse is too dangerous to explore.\n\nIn paragraph 2 the author talks about how Venus is very similar to Earth in looks, but is very dangerous on the inside. He says how Venus's size and density is very close to of Earth. But then he says how all the mission was unmanned because of one reason, which was none of them survied for more than few hours. The text states, \"Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survied the landing for more than a few hours.\"\n\nAnother reason that it is dangerous to explore Venus is because it is very hot on the surface and the pressure is too high. The pressure on Venuse is over 90 times higher than here on Earth. The Tempture on Venus in not too less either. It is about 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The author states, \"On the planet's surface, temperatues is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\"\n\nLast reason for why Venus is wanting to be explored more is because we do not have a single sample for its surface. Our ships can hover over the planet and gather data of the atmosphere. But the atmosphere is too thick for light to go through. And as said before, the planet is too hot for a ship to last long enough on its surface. The text states, \"However, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on the ground conditions because most forms of light cannont penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photagraphy and vidography ineffective.\"\n\nIn Conclusion, our neighbor plant or twin planet Venus is too dangerous for several reasons. The heat and pressure on the planet is too much for our space ship and our boby to handle. Not much can be found out about the planet because of its temperatures and its atmosphere unableing us to take pictures of iis surface form safe distance.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood memoir suppost thoughfull happy feelings The author talking past younger He loves past life little full happyness good times family need blood related family All good people got together became family And family came good times Makeing mood happy never able thank Parents enough giving chance live happy life also part mood ThankfulnessSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear oppinon computers people use Think children grow need know use computer school even job It also teaches hand eye cordanation multi tasking The computer also fun easy use I almost positve love use computer dos nt first reason need use computer everyday life For example going job interview ask meny words minuet type need proficant Also school writing asinment due would take time writing typeing All type one time another Aspesaily job need use computer everyday The computer also teaches hand eye cordanation Hand eye cordanation kinda like multi tasking could type talk phone even excircising txting Hand eye cordanation important skill life All need multi task like library need find book talk people Even driving car need multi task stay hand need use one fast brake gas need looking road You must multi task along hand eye cordination Your luck computer teaches last final reason fun easy use I I started uing computer I loved play fun games I never could type I caught fun easy turn Just like math fun larn So like fun lurning thing computer It s never people larn get get good grades Its fun easy lurn use It teaches hand eye cordanation plus multi tasking You absolutly need know use computer school We need computers life always need use computers every single day lives Do nt tell people note brain become unhelthy computer look past Do nt see good uses computersSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There I standing blazing sun I could feel sweat drip face I looked ahead least two hours left standing line roller coaster The silent getting irritable All sudden guy screamed CAPS line started screaming except I didnt want yell would get worked even A hour later everybody chilled Then I looked ahead almost front I wiped face smiled Then I said CAPS hoo looked like I different planet My what mom asked CAPSre almost front I replied Then next go ride When entered ride I fastened seat Next ride took The breeze felt good face When ride ended I said I knew patients would pay off That time I patientsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In contemporary society, the primary purpose of schooling has been under heated debate. Many people hold the view that transforming students into good citizens and workers is the fundamental goal of education rather than concentrating on individual betterment. From my perspective, I agree with the given sentiment and this course of the essay will elaborate carefully to provide the reasons for my personal opinion.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, it is likely universal that a good individual should be useful to certain communities. It means that a well-skilled person might not be defined as a good one if those harms or are unsupportive to society. Therefore, schools in which children's perspectives could be changed officially and openly should mainly focus on educating moral lessons and qualifies alongside particular subjects or skills. Being community-minded, for example, seem to be a necessary characteristic which is needed to be taught by school education, especially in fast-paced life in which there is likely sympathy insufficient. In a nutshell, a community could not be prosperous unless every single citizen is dedicated to bigger purposes.\r\n\r\nHowever, it is indicated that generally moral lessons are unlikely the only target of schooling since the development of societies relies significantly on single and personal innovations. specifically, Throughout the countless year of humankind's life, there was numerous innovative inventions and explorations that were undertaken by genius brains that have been changing human life totally and positively such as America's exploration and invention of the internet and computers, or chronic disease treatments. Therefore, alongside the primary goal, seeking and nurturing individual talents should be taken into consideration in order to create a quality workforce for our community. Seeking talent shows, for example, specific courses, and modern facilities should be provided free for children when they are still in school seats.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, in spite of individualism development in contemporary society schools should play the main role in educating the young generation to turn out useful and well-educated people in their community. Besides, increasing personal betterment is not likely less crucial, however, it does not seem the major purpose of education.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "5 seconds; 5 seconds is all it takes for a driver to make a crucial mistake the could cost you, or another driver's life. Every day, accidents occur that can leave automobile owners disabled or even lifeless. Many car manufacturers have realized this and have already made attemps to fix this issue. The creation known as the \"Smart Car\" is believed to have a better response time, and more control than a human driver could manage themselves. I believe \"smart\" cars are the future to a safer road, , as well as a break while the car does all of the busy work.\n\nAs stated above, Smart Cars are the future to a safer road. A World Reknown Innovator, Google, has made steps towards this since the 2000s. In 2009, they created a car that could drive under it's own control without the use of a foreign imput. Their computer-controlled cars have driven \"more than half a million miles without a crash.\" This new-age technology is all a result of position estimating sensors, a rotating sensor on the roof that has a constant updating 3D model of the car's surroundings, also including more radar sensors scattered all over the car. How's that for safer driving?\n\nThe biggest concern for the legality of the car is whether or not it can meet the requirements of what the law has in place. Many qualifications must be met to have these on the streets. The issue is, who's fault is the accident. The creator or user.\n\nAll of these features sound exciting and you may ask yourself, \"What's the catch?\" In order for proper safety percausions to be in place, the driver is requires to be alert at ALL times. BMW, a leading car manufacturer, announced their creation known as the \"Traffic Jam Assistant,\" in 2013. This car can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves like most smart cars. However, it is required that the driver keeps their hands on the wheel at all times when the car is in motion. Other manufacturers have taken similar steps, such as GM's vibrating seat when the car could be in potential danger while approaching another car, and Google with a heads up display indicator.\n\nTo conclude, safety is the main priority of car manufacturers world-wide, as well as the Law. Through years of innovating, the idea of a car that can ensure safety as well as entertainment, while being street legal, appears to be within grasp. By 2020, many car innovators plan to have the ability to do so. The question now is, how much better can it get?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many advantages of limiting car usage. Elisabeth Rosenthal writes \"In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars\" to show that limiting car usage helps to \"reduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes...\" Their goal is to reduce the amount of greenhouse gases being released into our atmosphere because it is destroying Earth. The gases are destroying the ozone layer drastically, and if this continues Earth will be gone. She also wrote \"The End of Car Culture\" explaining that the number of cars bought has reduced, bu in reality it is a good thing because it reduces the amount of pollution in the air, and money could be used on something more productive. Cars have not been the main priority of in America. People began to carpool, ride bikes, ride the bus, etc. This will \"save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety.\" Additionally, Robert Duffer writes \"Paris bans driving due to fog\" explaining how \"Paris typically has more smog than other European capitals...\" In Paris, many people are using cars, and they release the bad smoke into the atmosphere. By all the gases being combined together, it creates smog which is deadly. It can cause many health problems to humanlife and the nature. Another article to support that it is better off to limit car usage is \"Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota\" by Andrew Selsky. Selsky quotes a business man Carlos Arturo, \"'It's a good oppurtunity to take away stree and lower air pollution.'\" Even citizens agree that it is necessary for people to limit how much they drive because it streeses people out. They don't have to worry about spending a drastic amount of money on gas, or repairing the car. It is easier just to ride a bike which helps you save money, and even get a good execrise. It also limits air pollution because less cars are being driven and not alot of harmful gases are being released. Overall, there are benefits in not having a car.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You go library read books music magazines soon find offensive books I strongly say yes I agree remove books magazines music shelfs offensive people We suppost feel safe reading books listening music reading magazines When I younger I went library time I would get books read look I excited go library excitment went away bad exsperiecnes Remembering names books going come I know I upset book It words I never heard I got confused This could happen many little kids come across bad book really librarys good books badAfter bad experience happened I ignored like go away something Bad books offensive books taken shelfs good never return I feel strongly subject I book warm I love read books able go library find good book thats offinsive I ask library Offensive books music magazines aloud librarys When kids read books listen music want able disappear offensive stuff able There things left libraries offensive books music magazinesIn closing essay I still full curage answer I still say yes remove offensive books music magazines If sister daughter neciece went library found offensive book would say I ask would feelSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars could be the step toward a new world and new gerneration.\n\nThe driverless cars are not always a good thing though, because people feel the freedom of driving and love driving.\n\nPeople also could have driver less taxi cabs, because of that over thousands of people would loose there jobs as a taxi driver.\n\nThere are people who agree with driverless cars, because if they are on a long trip and they have been driving all night and they fall asleep, and with the driverless car they are still safely on there way to there destiantion.\n\ndriverless cars will change the world, but sometimes that is not a good thing.\n\nAs I mentiond before there are tons of taxi and bus drivers across the United States and the world.\n\nNow imagion all of those people who are working to support there family, and now they get fired because the new driverless taxi or driverless bus came out and took them all out of the job.\n\nPeople would not get to experience the freedom of driving.\n\nDriverless cars are not the worst idea of all.\n\nThink of it like this you are handy capped or just at an old age where you should not be driving with the driverless car it helps them get to there destination saftly, or even if you were driving and you were playing with the radio and there was an accident in front of you and the car took over and started driving.\n\nThink of it as the back up plan incase something happens.\n\nMy oppinion on the driverless cars are split I mentioned the good and bad of driverless cars, but if I had to choose I would say I do not want driverless cars.\n\nMy reasoning is I love that feel of freedom, and the feel of the open road.\n\nPeople share a connection with there car weather it be they proposed to someone in it or they had there first kiss in it or it was the first time they went to an amusment park, no mater the case you share a connection with it.\n\nThe invention of driverless cars take away that bond because you are not driving a computer is, so a person's bond with a car is as strong as a person's bond with his or here children or husband or wife.\n\nNothing can beat the connection a person has with there car.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" suggests that Venus is a pursuit worth while to the dangers the planet enviorment presents, and he is right. Venus is known as the Earth's \"twin\" Because of how simliar it is to our planet. The reason why Venus is called Earth's twin is because astronomers are mostly fascinated because as stated in paragraph four, \"once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" The author continues on paragraph four on how\n\nVenus was mostly \"covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth.\" Which hints in where the author is going with this. In paragraph five the author goes on how NASA (The National Aeronautics and Space Administration.) Has a \"compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus.\" By sending a bimp-like vechicle hovering \"30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape.\"\n\nLetting scientists float above the fray and hostile conditions. But even a vechicle hovering above the atmosphere would not be enough because nothing can penetrate the brightness of the light making videography and photography \"ineffective.\" Also scientists can't just take rock samples they would need to get up close. The author then goes on that rather see them as huge risks we should \"think of them as challenges.\" While that the author continues on in paragraph seven that NASA has been working on numerous other approaches that affective for the studying of Venus. They've been testing electroinics made out \"silicon carbide\" Have been tested many times in a chamber simulating \"The chaos of Venus' surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\" Later NASA tested on more older technology dating way back. They are called \"mechanical computers.\" and were used during the 1800s and during World War ll. The difference is that this old technology doesn't require eletronics at all. It is mostly geared up by levers and gears. The author goes on in pargraph seven on how modern computers need to be more \"delicate\" when it comes to very extreme weather. The author then goes on and compares how the modern technology wouldn't be able to uphold the phyiscal challenges compared to the mechanical parts which are more effective and more resitant to the heat,pressure, and numberous other forces. By the end, human curiositly would most likely beat the challenges Venus' atomsphere, and many others. Dangers shouldn't limit the imagination many scientists try to make a reality.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I personally believe that driverless cars are a good idea and can be very useful. There are also some major points that are needed to be pointed out before a person purchases or drives one of these cars. I can see people taking advantage of these technologies and abusing the things the car may provide. The buyer should always take into consideration that these car could malfunction and be aware that these cars are not always going to be reliable.\n\nIf the driver were to be carless and text and drive the car could possibly malfunction and you could be putting your life or someone else's life at risk.\n\nManufactors are coming up with new techniques to help alert the driver of any danger that could possibly occur before the incident could even happen. Vibrating seats are providing the driver enough time to stop the car when it is about to run into another object. Flashing lights on the dash board are used to alert the driver if the car thinks they are being distracted from the road. In these cars the manufactors are installing video cameras to watch the driver inside that car and to watch for any danger the driver might encounter outside of the car. GPS are installed to monitor where the car is in case of a crash or if the driver is lost on the road the driver can use it to find there destination. Motion sensors are being put into cars to help the driver drive safely. The motion sensors help the driver know how far away they are from hitting another car or even a person. They are also used to apply brakes when the car is coming to close to another object. They are hoping to soon put in a display where the driverless car system can be shut off when the driver wants to be in control. \"The car read the positive and negative factors in binary code, they functioned surprisingly well but to make the massive upgrades needed would be far to expensive for them to even make it practical.\"\n\nThe main focus that these manufactors have is to keep everyone on the roads safe. Take this into consideration, these cars could possibly change the human way of driving. Each and everyday new technologies are being discovered and giving humans another reason to become more lazy. These developments will eventually come into good use when the time comes, but that is if the people using them will have enough common sense to understand they can not abuse the advantages these cars provide and if they do it could lead into bigger consequenses.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Books pieces art Authors artists Writing form expression In grants freedom expression I think deny anyone freedom I believe books form art removed shelves libraries I understand parents want children seing hearing certain things People want keep children neive want stay innocent The thing understand children need grow They curious They want know They want see world You hide things I believe favorite musician said CAPS covering childrens eyes The world bad place want protect also beautiful There much children normal people would miss took every thing someone said offensive Also question offensive Who decides Where draw line Like Katherine Paterson said soon would books left shelves Because everyone different oppinon People find innocent things offensive If want children reading hearing certain things tell Do ruin people To Different people like different things Something would offensive could well beautiful someone else CAPS mans trash another man s treasure Books music movies art People right express We already censor much I think cencor things takes away original If perticularly like something choice read It choice listen You choose children choose others People right want People right makes happy They right read watch listen makes happy They right create makes happy You right take away someone Books kill people Music kill people They make uncomfortable They even make sick angry harm anyone People make decisions People control actions Books videos art harm people All I believe books music movies forms art romoved shelves There could age limits certain things specific sections adult things I believe choice decide right someone else You shelter children would like You avoid things find offensive But please take away oportunity another A wonderful book lifechanging peice music could taken away someone found offensiveSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that driverless cars are a unique idea and they are very helpful but they can also be not so helpful. According to the article, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. So what is the point of having a driverless car when the vehicle requires a driver at all times for safety reasons.\n\nAccording to Dr. Werner Hubner, a BMW project manager states \"We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way\". The passage informs us that some manufacturers hope to do that by bringing in-car entertaniment and information systems that use heads-up displays. This will hopefully help solve our few issues we have with the driverless cars. The passage also states that \"such displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over - something not available to drivers trying to text with a cell-phone.\"\n\nManufacturers are doing many things to make sure that they have no problems with the driverless cars and they are working to solve any problems thye have with them. According to this article, manufacturers are also considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road. While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver.\" I feel liek it is a great idea that manufacturers are really trying to fix all the problems that we may face with these new driverless cars. It is alwyas important for us to be safe.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today, more and more people are moving toward the urban areas from villages, which causes the population of cities to grow too high. Due to the limited amount of land, many city dwellers have to live in a house with small or no backyards, specifically apartments. The fact that there are more and more high-rise apartment buildings is a result of this phenomenon. In my opinion, this development has two sides, and the below essay will give explanations for my viewpoint.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there are a couple of positive aspects. Firstly, building many apartment buildings helps solve the population problem in big cities. An apartment building can accommodate at least 500 people, whereas a house can not meet that. For instance, in Ho Chi Minh City, apartment buildings have solved the housing problem for 47 per cent of the dwellers. Secondly, living in an apartment helps us avoid noise and air pollution. The health of people who live near streets will be badly affected by emissions and noise from vehicles, on the contrary, those living in apartments will not be affected by traffic.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, those living in apartments will have to pay different fees, such as security, cleaning and parking fees. This increases the cost of living for many families. For example, in Ho Chi Minh City, apartment dwellers have a 30 per cent higher cost of living than homeowners. Furthermore, if you want to open a party with more than 10 people, you must ask permission from the apartment management.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, according to the arguments aforementioned above, more and more people living in a house with small or no outdoor areas is a great development. However, it still has some disadvantages regarding money and comfort.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people think that there are methods which are better than an interview form that seems to be a key method to choose the right employee for a job in big companies. In my view, although an interview enables employers to more precisely understand the soft skills of an interviewee, some tests and exams test the hard skills.\n\nAs for business, the personal characteristics of an individual is a main selecting criterion to choose an employee who has much more prospects. In other words, for many companies are more important soft skills than hard skills because a willing, open-minded human can have high productivity and efficiency despite some knowledge gaps. For this reason, many heads arrange meetings where they strive to understand the inner abilities of a person. Thus, in almost all situations, an interview is a necessary event and a fundamental method .\n\nHowever, some jobs require deep knowledge in a certain field of science or engineering where tests and exams will be more appropriate and essential ways to select the right worker. The former reason is that the workers, while they are creating machines or modelling them on computers, do not have a chance to make a mistake. For instance, the aircraft's engineers have to construct a safe well-developed aeroplane to preserve air accidents. The latter reason is that for scientists workers many soft skills are less important than education and experience. To summarize, for technical specialisations employers have to analyze hard skills.\n\nTo conclude, to choose the best employee the main criteria method depends on a working area. If it is a science or engineering, the heads of companies will prefer to oblige potential workers to pass the exam. If it is a business field, in almost all cases, an interview will be more useful.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can you imagine a time in the near future where no one has to learn how to drive anymore? It is a crazy thought,but it is very possible. Driverless cars has been a hot topic recently. With that being said, I don't like the idea of not having to drive while you're in a car. It does not seem like it should work that way.\n\nCars are made to be drove by someone. Otherwise, it is kind of pointless. Diverless cars do not seem like a safe idea because many people could easily get carried away by this, companies may just try to one-up each other and see who can come out with this invention the fastest not the safest, the car could become overwhelmed and not do it's job, and the most important of them all is what about if there is a car accident that takes place? These are all great possibilities that could happen. In the article, it also states that driving laws all come down to just keeping everyone safe. No one quite knows the full ability these cars have, so it is a very risky topic. If there is a accident, who could be at blame? That could easily be a mess some people may just not be able to get themselves out of. Another example is even though laws can change, does that mean people can change their bad habits while driving? Like texting or calling while driving, talking to others in the car without paying attention, or any other distracting thing drivers do.\n\nIn the end it all comes down to safty reasons and who can prove they have what it takes.There are a lot of unanswered questions to go along with this idea. I don't think that we have what it takes to make such an idea like this work yet.\n\nWe will just have to wait and see where it goes. Until then, I do not agree with driverless cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wondered how someone is feeling emotionally? Do you want to know if they are feeling sad or angry, even if they are smiling? Well according to Professeur Thomas Huang of the Beckman Instutute for Advanced Science, he believes that we can detect human's emotions by a 3-D computer model of the face by observing all of their 44 major muscles. Still, can a computer really be able to detect human emotions just by looking at muscles. I believe that this new technology called the Facial Action Coding System might not be what can actually detect human emotion.\n\nThroughout the article, Dr. Huang refers to muscles for emotions so they can observe how a person is feeling. He states that your \"frontalis pars lateralis muscle raises your eyebrows when you're suprised\" (para. 3). He also relates the orbicularis oris that \"tightens your lips to show anger\" (para.3). What he is saying could be true but people have the ability to control their own expressions, so if someone perfoms one of those expressions, what if they aren't feeling the way they might express?\n\nAnother example Dr. Huang uses is the painting of \"Mona Lisa\". The article states that \"according to some new computer software that could recognize emotions\" (para.1). In the article the introduction asks if the intended reader can imagine detecting how people are feeling, \"even when they are trying to hide their emotions\" (intro para.). Throughout the begining of the article they talk about what if you could dectect someone without even knowing how they are feeling, but as the article progresses, they mostly talk about certain muscles that move when you make a facial expression.\n\nSo which one is it? Can we actually detect someones emotions even if they are expressing an emotion, or can we only tell by looking at their expressions directly? What I'm trying to say is, at the beggining of the article they try to give it a vibe that you can detect emotion even when the person has a different expression, but then later in the article, they ask you to try to experiment by doing different expressions in the mirror by telling you how to do these expressions and saying what emotion you should be feeling. After you make those expressions they ask if doing the expression \"made you feel slighlty happy\" (para.9). It later states that \"moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them\" (para. 9). This sentence says that it may help produce emotions. In other words they still might not know how you are actually feeling a certain emotion after doing an expression.\n\nThis article might explain observations like in a fake smile, \"the mouth is stretched sideways using the zygomantic major\" (para. 8), but expressions can vary on different people. Not all people are the same as others. Just because someone might look different when they express a emotion, doesn't mean that right away that they are expressing a different emotion. Now I know some people might say how accurate technology is, but a computer is a lifeless device that maybe could detect facial expressions, but might not know the true emotion of that person.\n\nThis article to me was pretty confusing. They tried to get you to believe that researchers have found a way to detect emotion, but then talk about how trying different expressions you make as a experiment show the emotion of the person's expression they made. By doing that, they make it seem like they only know how to recognize your emotion just by the certain expressions they want you to make. So can technology really detect someone's emotions if they are trying to express it a different way?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I reason believe computers similar modern technologie breaking world Things computers main cause lacking exercise interaction family friends also possible danger ones mental health The leading cause obecity outrageous amount overweight people fact people spend way much time computers excersizing I recently found average familly one computer sometimes none Nowadays average familly even Furthermore percentage obese peoples sky rocketed since people almost always computer rather exercising like A major reason modern technologie hur nation immence lack communication interaction families Families fightingarguing often spouses getting divorces never get spend time together Studies shown nowadays marages ends divorce Advances technologie astoundingly increased since people computerphonesother separating families everywhere When impubesent children trying grow expand minds sitting computer getting brain nutrition need The students schools today future leaders world Now parents thinking want children well exeed expectation life sitting computer day filling theirheads nonesence Now computers abillity educationally usefull children use way The answer PERCENT time neither adults state I hope agree fact computers causing bad good familes around world People getting amount exercise need nt interacting family enough computers become harmfull mental health future generations If famillies minimize amounts computerdrawn activities I think parents world modify childrens healthSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A 17 year-old that just got out of high school graduation. Name Luke Bomberger has got a change to help people in need for food,shelter,and other things that people need after the World War ll.\n\nThis Aventure started by his friend Don Reist who told him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. Then Luke said YES,\"why would I miss this opportunity of a lifetime.\n\nNow he his join together with his friend Don to the UNRRA,and sign up to be a Seagoing Cowboys. Now he and his friend are the Seagoing Cowboys. Now his job is to take care of the horses,young cows, and mues that were shipped overseas.\n\nAnother thing that Seagoing Cowboys do is to go to other places that were destory over the World War ll. Like China,Europe the Acropolis in Greece,Italy,a city with streets of water,and also an excavated castle in Crete. You can see all them thing. I know because Luke saw them places. When your on a very long trip you can always play baseball,volleyball games,Table-tennis touraments,fencing,boxing,reading,whittling,and other awesome stuff,but baseball,andvolleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed.\n\nSee how much AMAZING thing that you can do. Don't just live a boring life. Go out and do something with your life, be a Seagoing Cowboy.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The reason author concludes paragraph show saeng waiting grow back try test Hibiscus means lot keep trying doesnt want mother disappointed Example wher saeng felt shame mother stared incredulously But could saeng wants mother saeng vowed silently saying promise pass respect nature well eldersSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In The Mooring Mast focuses obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock Laws made impossible original purpose mast An existing law airships flying low urban areas This law made illegal ship ever tie building even approach area Some dirigibles try due wind safety reasons idea dropped The safety human beings took part construction When German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire owners Empire State Building realized much worse accident could taken place densely populated area When dealing countries take account may use safest things Mother Nature funny thing The winds top building constely shifting With wind changing moment s notice hard ship land When building something always prepared obstaclesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the story is about and talks about exploring the dangers on venus. it\n\nis infering us to worn us about going on an unsafe planet. it talks about how venus is very close to earth. earth, venus, and mars, the planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. in speeds it means that sometimes we are closer to mars and other times to venus. the (NASA) means\n\nThe National Aeronautics and Space Administration. has a compelling idea for sending humans to study the planet venus. did you know in the 1800s played an important role in the 1940s during world war ll. imagine exposing a cell phone or tablet to acid or heat that is capable of melting a tin. mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces. to meet the the challenge presented by venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planted itself, but it also is because human curiosity will most likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Undoubtedly, education is crucial for the overall development of humanity. However, the academy provides an atmosphere for learners in the simplest way but the new generation is unable to concentrate at school. This essay will reticulate some of its problems and propose some possible solutions to alleviate this.\r\n\r\nFirstly, the modern Era is of educated people; so education is considered the chief concern among parents as well as the government. The scarcity of education leads to unemployment and reduces the growth of the nation to a huge proportion. Youngsters, who are the future of any country, need to be educated for betterment. They are not able to focus on their studies at institutions because of the old teaching methods. for example, in India majority of states are in a developing situation and lack advanced facilities in all aspects; one of them is the old teaching method of reading books again and again with only theoretical way. old fashion brings Monotony to recruitment.\r\n\r\nfurthermore, mostly in all schools in India still use an old method of teaching \"beat and teach\". Lack of confidence among students feels anxiety to attend the institution. To tackle this issue and create enthusiasm in toddlers, modernisation in teaching is necessary and it will arouse the productivity of students and teachers as well. Not only the corporate sector but also the regime should provide an exotic experience with up-to-date technology.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, modern learning and teaching methods are alluring and appealing which creates zeal between learners and teachers and help to reduce the dilemma to focus on studies.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The modern world dreams of many whimsical ideas that one day might be attainable. One of these dreams that is becoming a reality is the idea of driverless cars. Driverless cars are safer, cheaper, and allow more flexibility than modern cars.\n\nNew cars nowdays are expensive, with driverless cars there would be no need for a personal car because the driverless cars would form a public-transportation system. Also, driverless cars would cut fuel requirements in half due to their precise steering and breaking systems. The self-driven cars would remove the flaws that people make in driving further reducing wear-and-tear costs. Driverless cars are a step in the direction of cost free transportation.\n\nDriverless cars are not only cost effective, but they are also very safe. They showcase many safety options that optimize the safety of those in the car and those in other cars. They will be able to sense and react to disasters much better than people do. The information relayed from the sensors better adapts the car to make the best possible decision whereas if a human would go by the fight or flight instinct and possibly hurt themselves or others.\n\nDriverless cars are not only safer and cheaper than modern day cars, but they offer more flexibilty than them aswell. The idea that a car does not need a driver will enable the person in the drivers seat to do other things such as reading or doing thier homework. BMW is working on an assisted driving program named \"Traffic Jam Assistant\" that will enable the driver to do other activities while the car is driving itself and when the time comes that the car cannot overcome the obstacle that it has encountered, it will notify the driver to take control of it. The car company Tesla is working on a vehicle that is planned to be released in the year 2016 that is capable of driving on its own ninety percent of the time. These improvements are groundbreaking and will better the future.\n\nThe driverless cars of the future will better the world because they are cheaper, safer, and more flexible than modern cars. The possibilities that driverless cars bring are indefinite and are soon becoming a reality. The dreams of the past are becoming a reality in the present.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that driveless cars would be alot more convenint if you dont feel like driving or if you just want to be lazy, but way to much stress. what if your an elder and you have no clue how to work the car. I feel the more we keep upgrading to electronics the easier it is for something to go wrong. You never truely know when or if your vehicle could malfunction. What if your on the auto ban and your going 120mph and your vehivle just stops? if you are going about 120mph then other people are going 120mph if not more. you could get rear ended and going as fast as 120mph that would defintely kill you.\n\nEveryone only thinks of the idea of having a driveless car like \"oh my that has to be so cool and awedome i wont even have to do anything\". wrong you still have to pay attention and be there for when roads are getting worked on so you can navigate your way through it. the even tell us in the passage \"they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out if driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating theough roadwork or accidents\" there not all as great as what people make them out to be.\n\nIf we stick to the basic do it your self then we know we can control it beacause we would feel comfortable and we would know the basics. Maybe im wrong maybe it would work and be more simple for people, But think about would you ever truely trust a car that can drive it's self?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days it is firmly believed that the most efficient method to teach children in schools how to work together is through team sports. This essay disagrees with the statement since some young students might not enjoy playing sports and because team sports can raise competitiveness amongst children, hence having a negative impact on their friendly relationships.\nFirst of all, although it is vital for a children to play sports and keep fit, not everyone is keen on football, rugby and volleyball. Instead, some young students prefer spending their leisure time on other activities such as joining a chorus group or teathre lessons. These activities can encourage cooperation and make children get along with each other, as well. On the other hand, forcing children to play something they doesn't feel comfortable in can make them withdraw from the team game, which would make them feel excluded.\nIn addition, teams sports do not always promote cooperation among players. In some cases, inequities or particularly ambitious behaviours can lead to violent competitiveness, instead. It is generally thought that sport is an extremely selective environment, in fact you need to exercise daily in order to keep fit. If obese children took part in those team sports as well, they could feel isolated because they do not own the perfect body to perform well.\nIn conclusion, although team sports are a great method to teach children how to get along with each other, there are various activities which can encourage cooperation among children, as well. Therefore, it is considerably significant for a school to embrace diversity and make children play with what they really like, instead of forcing them to do something they feel they don't belong.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This one day I something I didnt want I didnt I couldnt go go movies When I aunt house I clean house I didnt want told house clean come back home I one When I went point everybody went scary high sky ride take shoes got something eat The next day everybody wolk heat hotel went home ate breakfast I didnt wont ride uncle four wheeler hill started push I knee pads elbow pads gloves When I got grandma house I didnt know every body help I dint want mum made help nobody went outside play football good game cause I look window whole game I didnt patient cause I wasnt Wow watching football game window childs run door I done wallSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When thinking about whether their children should be taught by teachers at school or educated themselves at home, most parents probably fall somewhere into two extremes. On the one side is the approach taken by most ordinary parents, who have made great endeavours to send their children to the most prominent schools. \n\nOn the other is the view expressed by an increasing number of writers, film stars and artists that the normal education system is unsuitable for their children and its necessity and value are yet to be confirmed. From my perspective, parental education itself could not take the place of school. \n\nIt is widely admitted that some parents are already the best teachers in certain areas, such as music, painting, writing and vice versa. For those parents, they tend to find what the normal school taught is useless and even harmful to their children's development. However, they overlook two facts. \n\nFor one thing, besides being a place for learning, school also functions as a communication center where various views and comments are equally expressed and exchanged, which parents could not easily replace. After all, an artist or a writer that has already made prominent contributions to one area is more likely to be biased when it comes to opposite voices unless they do not have faith in what they are working on. Nevertheless, a child needs to weigh in diversified facts in their perspective rather than replicate what their parents think. \n\nFor another, children could also benefit from school life even if nothing was learned. At school, peers gather together and they gradually learn to cooperate and communicate efficiently with each other. Furthermore, witnessing children with different personality or even from various cultures, they figure out the importance of embracing differences and finally the colorful world. \n\nAll in all, missing the opportunity of school results in loss of diversity and failure to acquire interpersonal skills. Hence, its disadvantages far outweigh the advantages.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus, sometimes called the “Evening Star,” is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot.However, the nickname is misleading because Venus is actually a planet.Venus is the second planet from our sun, and it has proved a very challenging place to make us examine more closely.\n\nVenus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density,size, and occasionally the closest in distance.Because Venus is sometimes right around the corner, humans have sent numerous spacecrafts to land on Venus.However, each mission was unmanned.The reason why it was unmanned is because no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.It may explain why not a single spaceship has landed on Venus in more than three decades.\n\nThese are the reasons why studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers.First, long ago, Venus was probably covered with oceans and could have supported so many forms of life, just like Earth.Second, Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, considering the long time frames of space\n\ntravel.\n\nThe National Aeronautics and Space Administration(NASA) has one great idea for sending humans to study Venus.Their possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray.At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of a sea level on Earth.Solar power would be plentiful, and the radiation would not exceed Earth levels.It is not easy conditions, but it is survivable for us humans.\n\nHowever,peering at Venus from a ship orbiting safely far above the planet could provide only limited insight on ground conditions.Researchers cannot take samples of rock,gas, or anything else, from a distance.Therefore, scientists that are seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus,they would need to get up close, despite the risks.\n\nNASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus.Some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating Venus's surface and lasted for three weeks.Another project is an old technology called 'mechanical computers'.These devices make calculations by using gears and levers and don't require electronics at all.Systems that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure,heat, and other forces.\n\nHuman curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.Our travels on Earth and other planets should not stop us by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet wonderful edges of imagination and innovation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many today feel that the home no longer plays the largest role in child development. In my opinion, though outside factors have become increasingly invasive, family life is still more influential.\r\n\r\nThose who believe children these days are largely shaped by the outside world often focus on the expanding importance of technology. Decades ago, it was more common for families to engage in conversation throughout the day, at dinner, and during holidays. Today, each family member might be more engaged with their smartphone, tablet, or laptop. For example, children now have constant access to streaming video sites like YouTube. Instead of watching cartoons for an hour a day on television, they can watch shows all day long, both in and outside the home. The result is that kids often find niche channels and parents have a difficult time monitoring and keeping up with the appropriacy of their interests and influences.\r\n\r\nNonetheless, family life remains the heart of early psychological development. Children are unlikely to have much access to new technology in their early years when researchers say the majority of personality formation occurs. If parents are strict, unforgiving and withhold their love then children begin to either turn inwards feeling rejected or strive compulsively for their parent’s esteem. These early, learned behaviours will manifest themselves in progressively more unhealthy behaviours and evolve as the child matures. Conversely, a child who is loved unconditionally but given honest feedback from their parents has a much greater chance of becoming a well-adjusted adult with strong role models to imitate.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, despite the ubiquity of technology today, family is the key catalyst in early development. Regardless of changes in society, parents will continue to be the main influence for their children in the foreseeable future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The concept of selfdriving cars is something often fantacized about in media and amongst individuals themselves. Although this piece of technology, whilst seemingly far away, is now becoming more science than fiction. Google has been working with extreme effort to produce some of the worlds first self driving cars, and they're quickly approaching their goal. This may be great news to some, but to others this is a warning of an automated automoblie catastrophe. This essay is being written to prove to those people that self-driving cars are a beautiful innovation which the modern world definitely needs.\n\nSergey Brin, cofounder of Google, explains that the driverless cars of the future would use half of the gas that today's taxis use. With the threat of global warming starting to become apparent, fuel consumption is definitely a primary concern with that issue. If global warming doesn't concern anyone, surely paying for 50% less gas is quite a plus then. Another bonus to these cars is that they provide a more comfortable, quiet, and personal experience of travel, rather than any public transportation available. Also, considering that the car would drive itself, this allows the driver to accomplish other tasks like sending email or calling family. Now, some people may be questioning the cars' ability to drive, especially in unusual situations. It's a given that these cars wont originally be flawless, and that they'll need some help along the way. That's why all of these cars go to certain measures to keep the driver attentive of the road incase human assistance is needed. Infact, the cars may eventually have displays that will render cellphones useless because the cars themselves can be used to text, call, etc., thus making them safer than a normal car.\n\nIn conclusion, self-driving cars are the way of the future, and they will benefit the realm of transportation in a countless number of ways. Whilst the cars aren't flawless yet, that is no reason to quickly dismiss them as science fiction. If given a proper chance to prove their value, this innovation will change the world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We are in 2018, the world of science, the world of technology. our world today are different from the past. we have a car, and manything that will elp our life easier. Our descendants try so hard to develop our world to make it like today. As we know our techonology can do a lot of thing today. They can cook food, drive a car, clean thhe house or being a doctor. They even can tell our emotion that what are our feeling now. But is it a bad or a good thing that they can tell our emotions?\n\nThe techonology today is around us. We use it more than we think. But if it 's good so It always bad. Like you know everyrhing is not perfect. Now a day they have new sofeware that can tell our emotions. It can tell she's 23 % happy, 7% bored or anything. This project has been developed by Dr.Huand and his colleague. They think it's a betterways for humans and comupters to communicate.\n\nThe new technology sound amazing and useable but if the human are picture. I think it's impossible to use it to the stidents in a classroom. That's true that computer can tell our emotion by looking at our face. But it doesn't mean it's our true feeling. We are a human. We have many a million emotions in our minds. Even ourself sometime don't know our feeling. We even can smile but inside is angry or cry but inside is happy.\n\nThe idea to use this technology to read the emotional experssions of students in a claasrom is vauable is unuseable. As this essay say the computer will read the students feeling and if they get bored? The computer will tell the techer to chang the lesson? I don't think the teacher will do that or even they do that is it the trus feeling of all the students or just one person. We are a human and we have a million emotion inside that even ourselves can't tell whst is our feelings or emotions. So I don't thing this technology is ready for the real world and it don't have to use to the students in the classroom. the student come to school to study even they get bored. It doesn't mean they will pay attention to anything else and don't study.\n\nThe technology now a day, everything give good and bad things to us. We just have to use it in the right way. That true that we have the new technology that can read our emotions. But it doesn't mean it will tell our truth emotion. Because It read our emotion by our face but we feel it from inside. We are the human. If you can't tell our emotion so every technology in this world can't tell our emotion too. So this technology isn't a bad thing but we just can't use it to tell our feeling now.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "mood happy greatful grateful family together mom dad open house culture He happy life better thae would stayed Cuba That moodSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When laugh habit cause What causes laughing Is even thing cause laughter I m sure get scientist s opinion would given indepth technical explanation cause laughter mean laughing simply message sent brain required muscles Certainly The true cause said done cause brain send message required muscles physically make person laugh So makes people laugh A funny joke senseless action misunderstanding anything Without doubt one thing makes people laugh delightful time friend two older sister I unknowingly went adventure We headed visit best friends happened almost completely identical sister I personality like like Now whenever four us got together telling kind humorous insane memories would go home knew hanging together failed brighten days put smile faces This particular day I desperate need s full attention uplifting spirits She I going rough patch friends schools oddly enough friendship issues someone named nt even go school discussion sets parents agreed pick pick well meet somewhere take minds antagonizing situations suffering We decided meet house When pulled drive way I could feel body filled excitement emotion trapped inside kind storage container inside small hold contents held inside Before car engine completely turned seat belt I halfway car door I slammed shut body slithered way free ran door To surprise unlocked I pushed open obnoxiously yelling I m heeeeeeeereeeeeeee cry laughter filled room I hugged one tight squeeze almost I next move planned immediately began chattering incidents occured day took seat couch All could heard CAPS I tell happened today I ca nt believe said said I like says CAPS taken life dramaridden teen straight movies Things going normally would dwelling close I dining room locatated far end couch I sat still completely involved similar freshmanyearofhigh school worlds They completely immersed conversations old memories d together All sudden shouts CAPS I baked brownies guard intejection fell laughter although time making way toward kitchen search said brownies When arrived sat pan brownies middle counter uncovered gave us napkin brownie sat top We stood together leaning tile counters enjoying brownies company one another Suddenly dull moment one saying anything As fill silence timer ran blurted PERSON wear wig lives us laughed hard moment fell ground leaning upon support keep falling I completely doubled trying desperately keep sip milk I taken inside mouth Minutes creeped still laughing offkey remark To day I remenise upon afternoon laughter shared upon us best friendsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am for the idea of driverless cars. It will cost a lot. In the future life will go more smoothly. With the way technology is advancing, and at the speed it is, driverless cars could more than likely be seen im my lifetime.\n\nFewer accidents would be a major benefit. For instance, there are billions of people on Earth. Most of those are able to drive. With driverless cars, a person could change on the way to school, work, etc. If a person is intoxicated and attempting to go to a destination by vehicle, they'll get there safer than if they drove themselves. Also, no-one would have to go through all that work of getting their driver's liscence.\n\nWith this idea of driverless cars, there would be alot of money, and time put into this techhological advancement. I think manufacturer's like Google would be able to make this happen. We have already made baby steps with warnings from the car, small driving funtions and sensors.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars are a good idea, and i feel they will be on the market in the not too distant future. With more research, time, money, and the right people together on this, a new luxary will be brought into the world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Polluted environment is an ongoing dilemma in the modern world these days and it is conspicuous to see that increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. Tackling this issue is challenging, especially given the speed of social change and the pressure of modern life. Therefore, this essay will explicate some key reasons why environment is polluted and will suggest a range of possible measures that can be taken to improve/change the situation and highlight probable knock-on effects of polluted environment. \n\nA wide range of reasons can be put forward to elaborate why the environmental pollution caused by produce consumer goods. Perhaps, one can definitely assert that lot of companies did not treat the drainage properly. The industrial waste of a monosodium glutamate factory called Ajinomoto can be taken as an example. To demonstrate, because the modern drainage was not installed by this company, and they threw all the industrial waste into the water causing water pollution in this area. Thus, it is no surprise to see that there is rise in producing consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment.\n\nImprovements to polluted environment can be achieved in a variety of ways, strict management of dischargement is one of the most favourable and note-worthy choice. To elaborate, government should be controlled strictly and only allow which company to have environmental protection standards so they never can throw their trash which are harmful to the environment into the atmosphere. This can improve the situation by controlling the amount of industrial waste to environment and encouraging recycle waste. Thus, while there can be other steps to be taken, this can be considered to be a good start towards declining the damage to the natural environment caused by manufacturing consumer goods.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If car usage is limited like it is in Vauban we would have malls on a walk away off a main street and not by distant highways. New communities that are less dependent on cars are being developed. The EPA in the US is promoting \"car reduced\" communities and legislators are starting to act cautiously.\n\nIn Paris they have such a high population which is near record they enforced a partial driving ban to let the air clear up.\n\nOn Monday people with even numbered license plates were ordered to leave their car at home or suffer a 22 euro fine in American currency $31 and the next it applied for the odd numbered license plates. 4,000 drivers suffered the fine and 27 had their vehicals impounded for the way they reacted to getting the fine. Because so many people live in Beijing China and use vehicals it became known as one of the worlds most polluted cities would you want that happening to your city. Due to the warm days and cold nights the car emmisions were trapped in the air. Diesel fuel was blamed for the pollution.\n\nIn Colombia a program was set that one day was to be car free and they would use other modes of transportation such as buses, bikes, etc... it was the 3rd straight year in a row they did it and people who refused faced $25 fines. A businessman named Carlos Arturo Plazza states that \"it`s a good opportunity to take stress away and lower air pillution.\" and for the first time ever 2 more citties in Colombia joined the event. Municipal authorities from other countries came to Bogota and were enthusiastic to see the event. This campign began in Bogota in the mid 1990s. Which has lead to the developement of 118 miles of bike paths in Bogota. Also parks and sports centers bloomed throughout the city and new upscale shopping districts as well.\n\nFinally in the US president Obama had goals to curb the US` greenhouse gas emissions were unveild. Recent studies in America show that fewer Americans are buying cars and get fewer licenses as each year goes by. The US having broad expanses and suburban ideals had long been on of the world`s prime car cultures. It`s the birth place of the first ever model T in Detroit. The rate of car ownerships per household and per person slowly began to decrease withing 3 years. If the patteren persists and many beleve it will it will have benificial implications for the US` carbon emissions and the environment. transportation is the 2nd largest source behind power plants. It would have a negative implication for the car industry. ther has been a large drop in percentage of 16-39 years old getting their licenses.\n\nThese are some reasons why people should limit their car usage so we can keep the positive trend in the car for our enviroment and make breathing healthier to people and lower our pollution. So keep it up and our enviroment will start to recover from the years of pollution we have caused.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you ever wonder how your student is doing in the classroom, or if they actually get what the teacher is teaching them? Well now you can thanks to the new technology called \"the Facial Action Coding System\", which detects facial emotions. I feel that we need this technology in our schools to help students actually get what they are being taught. This new technology can detect weather the child is into what they are learning or if they are bored and can change the subject depending on his or her's emotion.\n\nNot every student has the same intrests, for example on kid might love football while his bestfriend loves horseback riding. This is the same thing as school subjects, and how students learn way different. We need this new technology in schools to help kids learn in the way they want to learn it. This is now possible because of \"the Facial Action Coding System\".\n\nIn the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" the Facical Action Coding System was able to detect emotions on the Mona Lisa painting. Mona lisa was 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful and 2 percent angry. How does it know all this? With a 3-D structure of the face the model of the face the 44 muscles of the face must move like human muscles. This information is in paragraph 3. After the computer has scanned the model they rely on a psychologist to figure out the rest based on the expression of the face.\n\nAlot of things can be detected by facial expressions, and it can help us understand why people act they way they do or feel the way they do. Like i said as for students if it can detect wether they are happy or bored with the lesson it can also change the question that doesnt make them bored so they actually like learning.\n\nThis is why i think all schools need the Facial Action Coding System because it can help students learn more in the classroom without having to learn about stuff they arent really into. This technology also gives them a chance to learn subjects in the way they understand learning it. Hopefully one day the new technology the Facial Action Coding System will be in schools helping students learn they way they need to. We have the technology we might as well take advantage of it!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In order laugh happy I happy I made mistakes The mistakes I ve made dissapointed anything else I could think I sit room I nt want actions My life perfect I brothers parents love life Now I look back nothing worth taking away The laughs I m missing right hurts I could home even school right Instead I m without laughs brothers parents love Trying put smile face even though I know I m happy My life one best lives could asked actions I ruined Every moment I got beautiful babygirl words love I cherished time I wait laugh I get fourty five minutes hour half every day talk family deffinently hurts could imagine talk phone barely hear threw kills Knowing everything I ve done effected family Alot effects brothers though I know nt understand hopefully one day hearing little brother phone crying ca nt see It hurts inside even writing right makes want break tears I almost fell like could front kids My family main priority get I gon na make sure get back track family So I laughs I want In I would never guessed I d I m I get home I m gon na put smile brothers face parents I see girl I m gon na go give biggest smoochie boo kiss life ll cry laughSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Ageing is one of the inevitable difficult parts of life which must be experienced by every human being in the world. Due to the advancement of the medical field, life expectancy has been raised gradually in many countries in the world including developing countries. But unfortunately, caring for the elderly population is becoming a huge problem in every corner of the globe. \n\nwhen people are getting old, they tend to develop non-communicable diseases such as diabetes, hypertension and heart disease. Moreover, ageing will lead to memory impairment and they become dependent on others not only for their physical needs but also for psychological support as well as finance. Actually, the young generation of each family should care about the senior citizens of their family. However, in this modern world, most seniors are neglected by their offspring due to several reasons. \n\nMany decades ago, there was a thick bond among blood relations which connected each member in many aspects. people lived in extended families rather than nuclear households. This strong bond protected the geriatric population very well. \n\nIn contrast, nowadays, households are scattered and each member acts individually. Parents and grandparents are not spending adequate time with their children and grandchildren due to the busy schedules of their jobs. Therefore, the relationship is split which pushes the senior citizens to a bizarre living in the latter part of life. Most of the ageing population is looked after by elders' homes or community centres. \n\nSome people still believe that the youngsters of each generation should take responsibility to look after their seniors and legislation should be made to ensure the safety of seniors. However, it carries a lot of pros and cons. \n\nBut I believe that making good relationships among family members will teach the younger generation how to care for their parents and grandparents rather than making rules.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think that a computer in a classroom that could read your expressions help you in school? No right? That's what I thought too until I realized 1 major thing. Once I realized it I completely changed my mind about the situation.\n\nThere are a couple ways that this could be valuable but one stood out to me the most and really made me believe that it really could help. Imagine you're sitting in a classroom trying to get work done and then your mind wanders, you get bored and start to daydream. Then your computer notices that and keeps you on task by changing the lesson by making it more interesting and more to your taste. The text states in paragraph 6\n\n\"A classroom computer can recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson like an effective human insructor.\" If all schools had this option Im sure that graduation rates, the number of intelligent kids, and school participation ect. will go up by a significant amount.\n\nThese were most of my reasons as to why I believe in the Facial Action Coding System. So yes I know it will be valuable.I know that it wll help students learn more. The real question is what do you think about all of this?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is commonly believed by certain individuals that artificial intelligence robots are gradually substituting humans in jobs. While many laborious jobs may eventually be done by robots, jobs that would involve human interactions would not likely be carried out be machines. This essay will discuss why some jobs would not eventually be done by artificially intelligent robots in the future.\nRobots may likely replace labour these days, in jobs that require less human effort and delicateness. A lot of corporations would rather choose robots as they have higher efficiency and improve productivity thereby increasing turnover rate. This yields more profit in the long run. For example, a huge multinational in India, has began to employ the use of machines in their production line, as was reported in the times newspaper, it is said to have doubled their production hence an increase in share value and profit. For these reasons, these low efforts jobs would likely be replaced by robots.\nNotwithstanding, some human jibs cannot be replaced by robots, as these jobs require a certain amount of human relations which machines cannot provide. Machines, despite their sophistication, would never be able to achieve and interpret emotions and circumstances which has taken the human race many centuries to master. For example, in the health sector where empathy is important would not likely be understood by artificial intelligence. All in all, it goes without reason that these kind of jobs would not be properly served by machines.\nArtificial intelligent robots are progressively replacing humans in the workforce. Even though, menial jobs may be substituted by machines, jobs requiring the human touch could never be done with artificial intelligence. Ultimately, only few human jobs would survive this age of technological advancements.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A new technology called the Facial Action Coding System (FACS) enables computers to identify human emotions. Now the question that I think most of us are wondering is can this new technology be useful in a classroom full of students to read their facial expressions.\n\nThis sounds great to most how we can have the ability to read anyone's facial expressions. But would it be useful for students in a classroom? If you said yes then you are correct! The way it works is there is a computer that constucts a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. The movements of these muscles will determine what emotions the person is having. There is six basic emotions such as happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. Keep in mind that all emotions are universal, but not as broadly as others in degree of expression.\n\nBack to the question of how it is useful in a classroom full of students. Imagine we are in classroom, and you're the teacher. You've been aware that there has been some rumors around that a kid in your class has been bullying the new student that you recieved. But you don't know how true this is, so you thought that it would be a great idea to set these two children next to eachother for the new seating chart. Because you could see if there will be a reaction from the students.Here is where the Facial Action Coding System comes into place. It is reading that the new kid is sad and frightened. He has sad eyes and is forcing himself not to say a word because he is nervous. Now you most definitely now that there is a problem and you can address it. Now anyone who has a counter example let me tell you that most kids who are afraid will not come to you because they don't know if they will get in trouble. Using the Facial Action Coding System will guarantee your suspicions about the student whether in a good or bad situation.\n\nThe FACS will surely find itself good use in your classroom full of students. It is a great idea in itself to have the ability to read anyone's expression to figure out the emotion they trying to hide or convey. This is whole-heartedly amazing that making faces could reveal so much about the science of emotions.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator,\n\nWhat do you think about descarding electorial voting?,do you feel that it would be best to keep it this way,or do you think there should be a change? What you think i dont know. But\n\nIn my opinion i recomend that the electorial voting should not be changed.\n\nOne of my main reasons for this is electorial voting has mostlikely been going on for decades,and why would you deside to change this now? This act could possibly throw some important things off track. For example if you were to go fourth with this act you could possibly risk people selecting the wrong president and his electors,which then could risk people to lose there jobs,homes,end up homeless,etc this could be avoided if you keep things how they are and not end up messing things up changing electoral voting.\n\nRichard Nixon,Jimmy Carter,and Bob Dole feel differently with my reason,they all feel that you should abolishe the electoral voting,they thaat sence Al Gore lost the presedency but won the popular vote they think that people are being cheated out of there vote and its not fair. I disagree with them because the senators have a say in who is going to win the election and be president all at the end,so why worry.\n\nIn conclusion people should not worry about what happens with the House Of Represintative,or the election,i'd tell folks to leave that up to the senator to decide because there people like us,and im sure they wouldent want someone causing trouble in presedency.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Television and movies often fantasize the luxory of what it would be like to have smart cars to drive themselves. Though, have we put much thought to why driverless cars should not be a common automobile for this time in age.\n\nGoogle has had cars that can drive themselves up to an extent since 2009. They have driven over half a million miles without crashing but sadly enough, they were not truly driverless. The cars can only drive driverless when there is no driveway to back out of or no roadwork or accidents on the road, they otherwise will alert the driver. (P.2)\n\nSmart cars need numerous amounts of special technology to drive themselves on the road. In 2013 Google had a Toyota Prius to call thier own. The Toyota Prius had position-estimating sensors on the rear wheel, a rotating censor on the roof, and a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror. Plus four automotive radar sensors, a GPS reciever, and an internal motion sensor. All just for one car to drive on the road. (P. 3)\n\nIn 2013, BMW announced \"Traffic Jam Assistant.\" The car that can withold driving abilities at 25 mph but still needed a driver to hold the steering wheel. Though the cars could steer, brake, and accelerate themselves, the cars were designed for notifying the driver. Humans were needed whenever there were human tasks on the road that could not be handled by the smart car themselves. (P.7)\n\nIn the ninth paragraph the author made a very valid point. What if the smart technology were to fail and someone gets hurt? Who will be at fault for the accident? The manufacturer of this smart car or the so called \"driver\" of the driverless car? What liabilities will there be to cover the damage?\n\nOne thing all of these paragraphs have in common is the fact that human drivers are still needed at the wheel when sitting in a \"driverless car\" in case of accidents on the road or roadwork. I do howver, believe that driverless cars will be great in the future. I believe they will be a fantastic new technology to help better and improve our society. Though, I do not think we, as a whole, are ready for this kind of smart technological automobiles to drive us or our loved ones on the road, yet.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people assume that studying at university or college is the best way to a successful career, while others think that getting a job straight after graduating from high school is a better choice. This writer will show the point of view in this essay.\n\nOn the one hand, studying at a university or college has a variety of benefits for students. They will have degrees and knowledge after graduating. It leads to the increase of job opportunities to get a well-paid job. Moreover, spending four years at university or college helps students improve their presentation skills and their confidence.\n\nOn the other hand, entering the workforce right after high school bring a host of advantages to students. Firstly, they do not need to take four years in university or college and during that time, they will have leisure time to take care of their self and family. Not only that, the students who choose to work will be provided with more life experiences and these things might help their careers in the future. For example, Bill Gates one of the richest men in the world, dropped out of Harvard University to pursue both his talent and desire in the computer science field.\n\nTo conclude, learning at university and college brings many advantages back to students such as developing the opportunities of finding a high-quality job and earning more knowledge. However, I trust that getting a job right after school gives students more free time and it is better.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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