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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am full on for driverless cars because it would be a benefit to our world.In the passage it lists many details about how driverless cars would and can\n\nfunction.Today Google has modified a Toyota Prius and it uses position estimating sensors on the left rear wheel,a rotating sensor on the roof,video camera on the rearview mirror,four automotive radar sensrs,a GPS reciever, and an inertial motion sensor.The combinatioin of all of this technology being modified to cars is necessary for the driverless car to mimic the skill of a human being at the wheel of the car.\n\nHaving Driverless cars could benefit us tremendously and keep us safe at the same time.They already have cars that can detect and respond to the danger of out of control skids or rollovers.With this kind of tech it can basically reduce most accidents.Driverless cars have sensors that can apply brakes on individual wheels ad reduce power from the engine,allowing a better outcome and can control more than a human being could manage.With just a little bit of improvements done to Driverless cars the sensors, computer hardware, and software,driving would be safer and could also lead cars to handle more and more driving tasks on their own.\n\nSebastion Thrun founder of the Google Car project said \"There was no way, before 2000, to make something interesting.The sensors weren't there, the computers weren't there and mapping wasn't there.Radar was on a device on a hilltop that cost two hundred million dollars.It wasn't something you could buy at Radio Shack\" Let alone companies are striving to perfect the best Driverless car there can be.In 2013,BMW had announced their development of the \"Traffic Jam Assistant\". The car they created can handle driving functions at speed up to 25 mph.The wheel of the car has touch sensors that make sure that the driver is handling the wheel.Today cars can steer,accelerate, and brake themselves so why not make it so we humans have to do a thing.\n\nOptions are being considered like having flashing lights on the windshield and other heads-up displays.While the Driver watches the road the car can watch the driver. Dr.Werner Huber, a BMW project manager driver said,\"We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way.\"In some states like California,Nevada,Florida, and the District of Columbia said to had led the country in limiting some use of semi-autonomous cars,some manufacturers believe that if more states soon follow\n\ncars can be proved more reliably safe.\n\nA\n\ncompany names Tesla has said to projected a 2016 release for a car to be capable of driving on its own meaning on autopilot 90 percent of the time.Cars like Merceded Benz,Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars created that can be able to drive themselves by year 2020.Soon we can start going out and not have to drive as much and enjoy ourselves more.With Driverless cars and technology getting us to point A and point B all in just a matter of years will be a piece of cake.With technology moving at a good rate Driverless cars will be the future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The general public debates whether children should be taught to compete or to cooperate to become more helpful adults. This essay will demonstrate that teaching the sense of cooperation is the correct way to raise a child, so she will be more useful because it instigates kindness, which makes a healthier individual and a more inclusive society, thus, creating a healthier community.\nAlthough we live in a very competitive world, the constant race for power, a better position corrode the sense of being kind. Every person around becomes a foe, an adversary to be defeated. One may feel entitled to do anything to reach their goals. This behavior will, eventually, change ones personality, making her anxious, depressed if the goals are not achieved or even less prone to comply to the social contract, which results in a more threatening individual than a collaborative one.\nA healthy and cooperative society organizes itself around what we call social contract, that is, what we can do or cannot do to not harm the others. This value has to be taught since the very beginning of a person's life; as children have a more open mind; as a consequence of that, one can work on behalf of the society creating a safe space and more inclusive community, where anyone can be contribute, regardless of one's abilities, therefore be useful, in different levels.\nIn conclusion, I believe that if we want and expect a collaborative community, we need to teach children to be capable to work as a team.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The technology to read people emotional expressions is valuable. The six basic emotions are happiness,surprise,anger,disgust,fear,and sadness. It associates each characteristic movements of facial muscles. Its good to have a technology that actually can tell whats their emotions. Telling whats their emotions is good for us because we can be there for them when they feeling down.\n\nEach expression is compared against a neutral face that shows no emotion. You can tell how someone is feeling simply by looking at their face. Most of us have trouble at describing each facial trait that conveys happy,worried,etc. Human anatomy is to help the painting to facial muscles precisely to convey specific emotions. A classroom computer could recongize when somebody is becoming bored or confused.\n\nThey could indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one. Moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions but can even help to produce them. Feeling someone else's emotional state may happen because we unconsciously imitate another person's facial expressions. To whoever did this type of technology we wouldn't know people faces that can reveal so much of their emotions.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you wanted to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program before? Well, you should join the program because you can see different parts all over the world, it can be one in a lifetime expericence for you. You can help other people who are in danger or in the need of your help.\n\nFirst, you should join the program because it can be alot of fun for you. You can meet new friends and you can have a job. One of the jobs could be a night watch man. You can go out at night and see if anyone or anything has escaped from the boat. You get to travel on a huge boat, too. Now that is a double bonus for you.\n\nSecondly, you should go because you can help other people. Somewhere, other people who need your help. Helping other people can be good for you.\n\nI mean like you can change into a really nice percon or a whole new person. God will be very proud of you if you help other people, he loves that! Pretend you were needing help and someone helped you, you could be that person, too.\n\nFinally, You get to travel all around the world. You can explore new places and have fun doing it. You get to travel on a huge boat called the SS Charles W. Wooster. It's a really noce boat to travel on. You can to new places all around the world and you can take pictures or even right it down in a journal.\n\nYou should join the Seagoing Cowboys program because you can have a blast of a time, you can help other people who need your help, and you can also travel around the world. Luke Bomberger joined the program and had a great time, you can too. Come join the Seagoing Cowboys program, it can change your life!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When building Empire State Building architects engineers faced many problems The first problem reconstructing buildings framework This done order building able undergo great amounts wind pressure stress dirigible The next problem workers encountered wind currents The wind strong tip building dirigible docked mooring mast would rotating around depending wind currents The final problem architects faced law dirigible s height There already existing law stated airships could fly low urban areas These obstacles many faced building team Empire State BuildingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Should NASA Go to Venus?\n\nOur Solar System, Earth, Space. Many astronomers want to get more information on our Solar System and the planets on it. For example, Venus. NASA should not make ann exploration to study on Venus because of the risks and the affects it could have on humans.\n\nIn the article,\"The Challenge of exploring Venus\", it states the interest NASA has on Earth's \"twin\" Venus. However many of the condtions on Venus are very different from our home, Earth: Venus has the hottest surface tempature of any planet in our sola system,\" (Paragraph 3). With hot conditons many risks can arise.\n\nWell, What about Humans? As in the last Paragraph Venus' condtions are not very safe. NASA knows the risks that could play out, but they believe it can work: ''NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scienetists to float about the fray,\"(Paragraph 5). With the right technology, the risk of Venus's hot and rocky could be elminated, with a few \"minor\" problems.\n\nWith NASA's possible \"sollution\" to explore Venus, it would eliminate some problems but the overall condtions would make it hard for humans. This is seen in Paragraph 3,\"Tempatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit...these conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth\". Even with NASA's sollution,the heat and the enviorment would not prevent that much harm with this sollution.\n\nSome people might say that even with the condtions being risky, it is still survivable: \"Not easy condtions, but survivable,\"(Paragraph 5). However Venus's weather and condtions can be very unpredictable. It would put peoples lives in danger not knowing what to predict. If NASA does have a sollution will it be able to be ready for unpredictable weather and conditions:\" additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface,\"(Paragraph 3).\n\nHowever some people might add that there are conditions on Venus that humans could survive, like solar power and less radation,(Paragraph 5). These things would be somewhat \"okay\" condtions for humans, with NASA's sollution in place.\n\nBut overall a trip to Venus would cause many risks and problems due to the conditions and affects they would have on humans. Therefore, sciencetists should not study Venus with the dangers present.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit cyclist trying get Yosemite National Park He followed short cut old men gave instead taking longer route These old men clue realy talking cyclist ended taking path obstacles When cyclist need water ran several rusty pumps No water would come pumps choice keep going water As moved forwad travels said Flat roads replaced short rolling hills water much strength left face rolling hills choice The cyclist go miles seeing anyone anything There noone sight building car structure kind His troubles finally came end getting directions another man fish campSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face on Mars is just a natural landform because it states in the text that the only reason the rock looks like a face is because it has shadows from the sun, and in this case the shadows give the \"face\" eyes, mouth, and a nose.\n\nYes even though there have sightings of UFO's or ( Unidentified Flying Object) the conspiracy theorists say that this face is an alien artifact but it states that the only reason why they say it is a feace is so more people are attracted to Mars.\n\nThe landform int a real face because if you compare the \"face\" to an Earth rock in that shape they would look the same, until you add some light from the sun causing shadows, and it would include the facial parts of any human man or woman.\n\nAs you see from paragraph 3 you will see that it states in the last sentence \" The author's reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars.\" Although, it did the scientist thought that tehy have accomplished something huge by tricking people into thinking it was a huge head.\n\nIn my conclusion, these are the reasones that the natural landform is not a face.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Climate change is an ever-rising issue in this world due to the various effects that may be occurred. Instead of mitigating this problem, some people argue that it would be better if individuals could deal with it. This essay will show my greater tendency to prioritize climate solutions over living in such a situation. \n\nOne of the fundamental reasons why this world’s problem should be prevented is because its effects are daunting. There have been numerous examples of this issue, but the most noticeable one is natural disasters where some areas of the world continuously suffer from floods. Despite this appeal, climate change also results in the increase of the earth’s temperature. As an example, 2023 becomes the world’s warmest temperature in ever recorded history. Therefore, providing valuable solutions might be the best action to avoid the aforementioned circumstances. \n\nFurthermore, preparing for long-term effects could be better than living with the situation because the longer it happens, the more negative impacts will occur, meaning that avoiding climate change will stop severe effects. This has been promoted to the public by green parties about how to tackle the problem by creating a green lifestyle because they want to stop the spread of bad impacts of this problem. By campaigning for this, people will be conscious of amending the way they act in order to mitigate the issue. Indeed, figuring out the new approach to live with it is undeniably important, but preventing climate change will always win over it. \n\nTo conclude, although trying to accept climate change in humans’ lives, nothing can be more beneficial and fruitful than preventing it, because , in the future, the next generation might live peacefully and will not encounter the same problem.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Parents always strive to give best education to their child, hence send him to the best educational institute. They also have now been given option, in many countries, to choose the school system for their offspring as co-educational or same-sex. However, it is of the view that single-sex school has detrimental effects on child`s personality which are reflected later on in life and I am in consummate accord with this stance.\r\n\r\nSingle-sex school students are unable to communicate with opposite gender which does not only have a negative impact on their professional career but their personal life also stays disturbed. This is because of the fact that their personality-grooming age in school was spend with alike and they never got a chance to refine their skills to talk to the opposite sex. Many such examples can be seen where men/women are uncomfortable in joint meetings and gatherings and are unable to express their viewpoint, which however are fully confident and competent in same-gender talks.\r\n\r\nSingle-sex schools also create a sense of discrimination amongst sexes and hence raise the issues of feminism and male dominance. Each gender considers itself superior of the other, as both of them are unable to understand the feelings, emotions and greatness of the other. Consequently, this damages the basic nucleus of the family structure as the main criteria of marriage gets missing which is respect. Furthermore, society suffers because of the unhappy family atmosphere and increase number of rates of broken marriages.\r\n\r\nIn my view-point, every child should be given a chance to interact with his opposite gender. This helps him in understanding the other half population of the world, which is although completely different from him but is integral part of his life. Separating the two genders in their naïve age will create a communication gap between the two and hence will create an unhealthy society.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir happy warm The author talks grateful Narciso Rodriguez Narciso also loves home grew He also talks people live near loves like family His parents good cooks taught Narciso rich culinary skills love cooking still today His mood loving caring family adores mood created author memoirSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "guardians have to uplift juveniles to utilise leisure time on academic study instead of spending more time on sports activities, in my opinion, I agree with the given statement up to a great extent because with the help of physical activity adolescence can learn new skills to survive in society as well as children will develop their personality however study is the key route for success in life\nTo begin with, parents mein motivate their children to spend less time on academic learning and inspire them about physical health because Juvenile gain their weight due to sedentary lifestyle and less communicate with folks that leads to wheat health but with the help of sports activities adolescence can improve their interpersonal skill to survive in society moreover physical activity provides an opportunity to juvenile and make their body strong which allow children to do the task for a long period of time and benefit for their growth for example as per the survey of World health organisation those juveniles who have better health they perform well in every task with the help of physical exercise \r\n\r\non the contrary , the study is the basic need for juveniles and it is very necessary for the upcoming phase of life as well as with the help of education children are able to learn the moral ethics of life and enhance the knowledge as per the survey conducted by the education department in the Delhi adolescence chat list March who spend more time on cricket \r\n\r\nto conclude, education plays a vital role to get success in life but I believe that spending more time on physical activity will police the skills of juvenile and least water good health leads toward a good healthSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A highly controversial issue today relates to whether spending long time to arrive at work and institutions of education affect people negatively or not. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view and then explain why I believe the arguments for the side effects are stronger.\r\n\r\nThere are people who argue that the disadvantages of traveling long distances considerably outweigh its benefits. The main reason for believing this is that the amount of time to arrive in the destination could be used in many useful ways, such as having breakfast with family or running in the park. It is also possible to say that spending a long time into the transportation could increase the level of stress and bring diseases. To illustrate, the feeling of anxiety when you arrive at work late due to the heavy traffic.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, others believe that commiting a long time has some advantages. It is often argued that it is a precious self-time. People often have this opinion because, for somebody, this is the most relaxing time of the day. A second point is that individuals could use this moment to execute a second task simultaneously and acquire knowledgment. For example, listening to a podcast or audiobook.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe both arguments have their merits. On balance, however, I feel that travelling long distances to work or study could bring negatives effects in a short period of time. This is because after a period of time some individuals could starting to wander why they still spend their precious hours in transport and not in another better optionSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When dad inline kencer hauck adventures I wait patiently get The line massive many people us shocking many line roller coaster waited seemed like hours minutes got closer getting hard patient Finally got ride ride insane waiting minutes seemed like hours rewardedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The advantage of limiting car usage is beneficial to helping the enviroment, improvement in America and citizens. Which all lead a happier healthier life, and may also improve our realtionship with other country's around the world.\n\nHowever, even though their are many different advantages to limiting car usage, one of the most important one is helping the enviroment. The amount of green house gas emission is unbelievable, \"and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States\" compared to \"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emmison in Europe\". Citizens if we limit our car usage our surronding's would be a healthier place. \"as she walked verdant streets where the swish of bicycles and the chatter pf wandering children drown out the occasional distant motor\". With cars not being allowed in this community, it create's a safer enviroment for their community. \"pedestrians, bicycle, private cars, commmercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety\" which are more examples of helping th enviroment.\n\nFurthermore, another advantage of limiting car usage is improvement of social and also awarness of other transportation. \"\"All of our development since World War II has been centered on the car, and that will have to change.\" said David Goldberg, and official of Transportation for America, a fast growinh coaltion of hundreds of groups in the United States... who are promotiong new communities that are less dependent on cars.\" with new kinds of transportation we could get places quicker and improver our lives. Their are many other places doing car free day which seems to be helping, they put rules in place like getting fined oif you use your car. Those country's have seen results. If we do this in America we can see many new results too. \"The turnout was large, despite gray clouds that dumped occasional rain showers on Bogste. \"The rain hasn't stopped people from particapting\" with this kind of determination it can help build character in citizens.\n\nConcludingly, their are many if not thousands of advantages to limiting car usage, you just have to be a willing particapant. As a citizen of America ask yourself, do you want to improve the world your living in by just taking a very simple step of limiting car usage.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hi name mason m writing wether take books self etc People differnt views differnt things Books books give differnt form lerning differnt peopleI personal nt learn books well I internet tv books nice every great Eeryone like sit read good book every Music nt really teach anything relaxs differnt ways Some people might learn listening music m one peole It influnce get movited say getting ready football game want get hyped well music get hyped game When sit watch movie I learn cause patien sit watch learn people differnt ways learning best way watch movies They get stright point nt waste time telling stuff alredy know Magazines helpful short artcicles get stright point I like magazines movies Even though magazines give helpful information ones help alot So I think music taken shelves nt really teach alot books movies magazine help certian point It people decide wether music taken shelves one person cause music might help people differnt ways one way many waysSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine library looking book read son daughter runs holding magazine questionable nature What A library inapporiate items shelves Censoring libraries something protect family Libraries censored way everyone enjoy The first reason I thing libraries censored children go Children curious always attracted things colorful different An example I baby sister She wanted go zoo instead museum said I want see animals boring statue I see anytime around town showing children want see different things go library see items anything worry The first time see something questionable nature would want new The second reason libraries censored sometimes items library put right place Say wanted watch movie sounded really good checked library went home put find movie thought What rented movie party guests Would embarrass Well something like happened cousin got She embarrassed weeks happened All embarrassment could prevented libraries censored The third reason libraries censored sometimes seeing certain material library rather offensive Would offended seeing something like I know I would I would want anyone offended like When I little I went mall grandmother We trying buy new pair jeans I got offended salesperson said I looked fat jeans I picked I know like offended people take peoples feeling account offend While people thing inapporite material fine library I believe find places Think family much love Think censor libraries cause Do want responsible anything help Try find ways get stricter laws censoring librariesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What if there is a time where driverless cars are the new thing? It may be good or it may be bad. There are many reasons that tell us why.\n\nThere are some bad perks to having a driverless car. Most modern day things we have now sometimes have complications. What if the car catches on fire from the electronics that are on the car? Like the sensors or the engine? That'll probably inflict harm on the driver or others in the car or other cars around it. The sensors might stop working one day. Someone could be driving their car, wanting to text someone, so they turn on the self driving mode but what they don't know is the sensors aren't working. If they arent working then that person will most likely end up crashing into another car or driving off the road.\n\nAnother bad thing about having driverless cars is our roads. Most roads aren't redone and they have a lot of issues. There could be glass in the middle of the road and your driverles car might not be able to sense that there's any there so if you run over that glass then your tire might pop and be ruined. Sometimes there could be a callapsed road or bridge. If your car couldn't pick that up with its sensors than you can fall off that road or bridge.\n\nThere are many great perks to having a driverless car. Some drivers drop their drinks in their laps. What if they're already late to meeting up with someone or late to work and they don't have any time to stop and wipe it up? A driverless car can help that. That driver can turn on the self driving mode and they can clean up their mess without having to stop! It could also help people with the texting and driving situation. A lot of teens text and drive and usually their faces are stuck in their phones instead of paying attention to the road. They can set the self driving mode on while they text and by doing that, there could be less killings from texting and driving.\n\nDriverless cars may be the furture. It may be what's best for our generation or it may set some problems. The future lies ahead.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What are your thoughts on the Facial Action Coding System? I think it is an amazing idea. This could help students and people all over the globe. It could help teachers get the lesson to the students. This could be a revolutionary tool of our era.\n\nFirst, I'm going to talk aboout how this could help people around the world, especially students. If a student is confused by something while they are online the FACS tool could pick this up and help them understand it better. In the passage it says \"it could modify the lesson like an effective human instructor.\" This could help the students get a better grade in the class. If someone is trying to find something on the interent and they have a disgusted look on their face the FACS could then try to help them find what they are looking for. This would be very beneficial to people all over the world.\n\nNext, I will talk about how the FACS tool could help teachers. Sometimes if a student is feeling sad the teahcer cannot tell because the student will just fake that nothing is wrong. If the classroom computers, or a school computer, had the FACS program on it the teacher could then see if the student was sad or not. This could also help the teacher because they can find out what their class is struggling with and they can help them work through it. This could lead to higher percentage of students passing the course and maybe even a higher graduation percentage. These are just some ways that a teacher could benefit from the FACS program.\n\nThird, I will talk\n\nabout what the creation of this tool could mean for our era. With all the new facial recognition devices it seems about right for this kind of tool to be on the horizon. Phones now can unlock just by showing ones face. We have made humungous strides in the technology part sof society and I think this could be another one if this applied to computers around the globe. This could benefit everyone. It would not matter how old or how young you are. It could help both young and elder people understand different concepts that may have trouble with.\n\nIn Conclusion, I think that the FACS tool is an amzing idea.I would love to see this tool on all computers one day. This tool could help anyone do anything that they can dream of. Being a student in some honors classes I know that some of the content can be very difficult and the FACS tool can help each and everyone of us understand it. This could help me in some classes that I might not be the best student or understand the best in. Life and school can be hard but I think this tool could make them both a little bit easier.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Regarding the suggestions that governments should offord the tuition subsidies to cover the cost of full classes, I could only partially agree due to various drawbacks derived from policies as such.\nTo begin with, higher educational levels is essential for young individuals in poor families reverse their situation, not only for themselves but for their families. In this case, governments have obligations to ensure the right of them to pursue higher education without the financial concerns. For example many university students nowadays have more than one part-time jobs since they need to support themselves financially, which left no time for them to concentrate on studies.\nOn the other hand, despite free ethic education could benefit a great number of students in need, the huge costs to maintain a functional educational institution should not be overlooked, by removing tuition fee in universities completely, it could derives various downsides, including lower quality of education and slower progresses of local constructions and developments caused by the shortage of budgets. Take the UK as an example, private schools are able to provide more educational materiols and professional educators, compared to public schools, which have high tendency classes, and outdated teaching equipments.\nTo summerrise, in my perspective, the right for students to study in universities is crucial, since it could not only cultivates talents who are able to contribute to societies, but allows them to bring their families out of poverty. However, people should not be ignoranced for the negative affects derived from removing tuition fee entirely, such as poor quality of teaching. Therefore, I could only partially agree with such opinions.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are positive and negative effects of driverless cars. At the moment there seem to be more negative than positive effects. I think driverless cars shouldn't be developed.\n\nOne of the ideas for making driverless cars was to also make special roads for the cars to drive on. The roads had electrical cables that sent signals to the car. This worked but it would cost a lot of money to change all the roads. The company would spend more money building special roads than it costs to make driverless cars.\n\nAnother negative effect of driverless cars is that the driver still needs to be alert and ready to drive. Driverless cars can steer and brake by themselves, but drivers have to be ready to drive if there is construction or an accident on the road. If the driver isn't paying attention they will not know when they need to drive.\n\nThe final negative effect about driverless cars is the driving laws. Driving laws are about keeping people safe and the driver being alert at all times. If driverless cars are created, then new laws have to be made. One of the current driving laws is that the driver is at fault if there is an accident. Driverless cars won't be driven by humans. So if there is an accident, who will be responsible?\n\nDriverless cars can be possible, but farther into the future. There are many problems that come from driverless cars. Manufacturers and automakers need to solve the problems before they make more driverless cars. That's why I don't think driverless cars should be developed.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke boomerger had no ideas that his hole life would change very soon after his high school graduation he was looking for a job for his graduation. then he was working for a 2 part time job in the grocery store and the bank. and when his friend ask hem to go to his cattle boat but luke said he can't stay of the boat of a lifetime. in 1945 it was a cold war it was all over europe. and all other countries were left in ruins to help those other countries recorvered their food supplies and all the animals are other ones 44 nations joined in to help together form the (The United Nations relief and rehabillitation. and the cattle boat trips were an unbelievable for a small town boy. he say besides helping people i haf the side benefit of seeing europe is very great and i can see China and Japan city were everything ate and we can see acropolis in greece was the most special thing i ever seen. when luke turned 18 years old he stared arrving ate greece and luke got on a cattle boat.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying venus is indeed dangerous but it does have a lot of fasinating things to learn about. Venus is a planet that has a lot of unanswered questions, and exploring it might give us those answers. Dangers are all over the world might as well take risks and find out what is going on in Venus.\n\nTo start, venus sounds really intresting and amazing by all those things that we read aboout the planet itself. Studying venus could bring us a lot of oppurtunities. In the story in paragraph 4 it says\" Astronomers are fascinated by venus because it may have once have been the most Earth-like planet in out soslar system.\" this shows that Venus has been like Earth in the past and it could still be.\n\nSecondly Venus has been set to be really dangerous because it can have \"Erupting valcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking land on its surface.\" But without actually going up to venus and finding out what it really has thats all just talk. For sure Venus can be dangerous but is it really a planet not a person can walk on? In paragraph 4 it say \"Venus was probably largely filled with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth.\" If venus once may have had life and ocean on it Their may have a chance of still being able to have that.\n\nLastly Venus has very of intresting things to it. In paragraph 8 in the first sentence it says \"Striving to meet the challenge by venus has a value, not only because of the insight gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will like lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" This is telling me the enough people have so much Curiosity on the planet that one day people will actually want to know what is going on with it and will want answers. Yes the author is right Venus brings up a lot of dangers to it like acid or heat capable of melting tin, But NASA is working on other approaches to studying venus. But all of the dangers are going to be worth it once People figure out all these amazing things about Venus.\n\nIn conclusion I do think that Venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers it presents. I hope you can read this and think that Venus would be an amazing planet to explore and find out good things about. It could have it's dangers but what you get out if it will all and up being worth it because of how much Venus\n\nwas so Earth-like, and how much good things can come out of it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Materials books music magazines etc removed shelves found offensive It s public library Not many people would like find something seems hurt harm way Libraries people come expected enjoy something whether book movie magazine When people come looking good information something look forward finding good tips let Example something possibly someone racist That s dissapointment Noone walk find something offenses It s fair Now parents children Would like child going library allowed look wherever little heart desires come upon porn anything would bad influence I highly doubt Unless nt care kid reads days ones want child good education well understand statement It s fair ones go library expected satisfied instead let It good could make community look bad Libraries help people information fun facts around good resources So please put bad books music magazines etc awaySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper I strongly think computers rather looking computer I strongly think could cause serious damage eyes My opinion computers I nt think nt get enough exercise You would sit looking computer day You would probley get fat course year You would like couch potato My next opinion wo nt able get house see beautiful nature Like trees flowers wild life animals If nt go outside fresh air My last opinion computer We wo nt able hang friends family You wont able see big family Or small still small Well opinion s computersSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars can be very useful,but can be disruptive in many ways. Cars containing no driver can be dangerous on many occasions. The person using the vehical will be on alert for anything that will dissrupt the car and in the cars path. Many things can go wrong in simple ways no one will be able fix and/or do much about the problem caused by the car.\n\nCars with no drivers can and may be banned in different places of the United states. Some states contains a limit for driverless cars. Cars relating to the Google car will be a danger to many people,no one may see the problem if something of that car does not function correctly. Adding Entertainment inside of the vehical can cause many problems aswell. This will cause wreckage on roads and or unsafe usage of the vehical.\n\nDriverless cars may have many uses ffor things such as going to work or going to places far and wide. But there can be consiquences if the driver or the programer does not use the the system of driverless car properly. Many disfuctions and dissruption can occur and soon no one will be able to fix and/or stop what inventor of the driverless car has created.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think mood created speaker gratitude I think parents unwittingly passed rich culinary skills love cooking still today I eternally grateful This shows appreciates parents passing cooking skills Another example Narciso thankful I always grateful parents love sacrifice gave jobs working laboratory chemical engineering make life better This shows speaker creating tone gratefulnessSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Process or Place? This is a question you need to ask yourself. Yes, in my opinion, Electoral College is a good idea.\n\nIn the cases of having an Electoral College there are some up sides of this and some down sides. In an Electoral College it restores some of the weight in political balance. It also required a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal.\n\nWhen an Electoral College restores th balance in some large states its a good thing. It states in this article that, \" The popular vote was very close in Flordia, nevertheless Obama, who won that vote, got 29 electoral votes.\" This is stating that the large states votes becomes one.\n\nAlso, when this talks about how it requirs a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal is also a good thing. it says in this passage,\" No region has enough electoral votes to elect a president.\" Again this is saying that none of our votes get uncounted for, we are all counted as one.\n\nSome might say that they dont know where their votes are going to but when you think about they are all going to the same place in one factor.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a good invention to have because they can prevent night crashes. Many car crashes occur when a person is tired or drunk. This car will take care of your driving if you're drunk or in a bad situation when you can't drive such as, being pregnant and alone.\n\nFirst of all, let's say you are on a road trip with your family, its really late at night, your kids are asleep and you're really trying to stay awake. You remember you own a driverless car so you know you can sleep for a bit and if the car needs your assitance, you will be notified in some soart of way. For example, it will shake your seat, or even make a noice and alert you.\n\nDriverless cars will help pregnant women when they have no one else with them and they're going into labor. Since pregnant women can't drive , especially if they are about to have a baby, it is a good help for them to have a driverless car. Mostly because they would not have to assit much on the driving part and they can just tell the car where to go if they have a GPS in them.\n\nThese type of cars can be a positive huge help in the future whenever you are drunk driving or pregnant. They will prevent crashes and keep pedestrians safe.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The time went time went went This arrangements trucks It I tracker wheel drive jeep When started head back mountain let drive ca nt see well night wears glasses eye sights good Well following mountain finally got pavement going pretty fast road narrow curving road first time ever She went go around really sharp corner got two wheels flipped right front slam brakes would nt run So shut truck run fast could helped truck turn back around go help hes already top truckHe looks ans says CAPS look truck tried many times roll never able god damn So started laughing got chain back truck pulled back Then really quite farted started laugh Well found got hole radiator pull back house seemed like longest drive ever truck weighs way mine pull home wheel drive cant go thirty wheel drive stuff break So finally get house dad comes side saw truck really pissed gave truck graduation present messed Then finally cooled cause said one hurt glad went house ate dinner went bed So moral story careful things happen unexpectedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "By quote author explaining Saeng eventually ready test When geese return re ready return From migration hibiscus budding ready turn beautiful flower Saeng believes spring since flower geese ready readySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days, environmental issues have received a lot of attention from the public. While some people believe that citizens should be looking for solutions to live with climate change rather than mitigate it, I partly agree with this argument.\n\nOn the one hand, encouraging preventative measures to deal with climate change has a large role to play in today's world for many reasons. Firstly, because of the rising level of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere, people's health is being adversely affected, leading to the fact that medical services are gradually becoming burdened with patients having respiratory diseases. If prevention is not continuously taken into consideration in the long run, global communities may face the threat of lacking health care systems for regional medical demands. Secondly, governments have allocated fundings to get to grips with the issue for decades; therefore, their endeavours in preserving the planet would be pointless if this would not continue to happen.\n\nOn the other hand, despite the aforementioned reasons for which climate change should be fought against, it is no doubt that people have spent millions of dollars on reversing the catastrophic effects of it. Some obvious successes are recently reported, such as the ozone layers have been covered. Be that as it may, there is nothing to stop the pollutants from factories and human activities. For example, according to recent statistic reports, pollution levels are increasing at a deteriorating rate, which can be seen as blurry fogs in some countries, such as China or Vietnam. This, as a result, would not only require further fundings from organizations to build filtering equipment for local residents, but also urge them to pay more taxes.\n\nIn conclusion, although there are different opinions about whether we should be complacent about the current environmental issues or eliminate them, I believe that we should both learn how to protect ourselves from the harmful gases released into the atmosphere and set up long-term schemes for future improvements.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Sports, be it any kind, has an impact on children's education. Sports keep children healthier,happier and mentally sustained. The intensity of this impact depends upon different factors. But, anything which is over-done also has its negative consequences. So, we can say that competitive sports have both advantages and disadvantages regarding a child's educational career.\r\n\r\nNow, let us look at an example of a student, who is studying full-time and is not involved in any kind of sport. This kind of student often finds it difficult to socialize and is isolated from the rest of the world. After assessing his situation, one might find that his natural tendencies of communicating with other people have declined. \r\n\r\nConsider another one, for instance, a student who is just focusing on competitive sports all the time. The obvious result would be, his results will start to fall behind. He will not have knowledge about different subject matters and automatically will face problems in his career and job. \r\n\r\nSo, what should be the median of both these situations?. People arguing that competitive sports are important for keeping a child on his track, to make his life healthier, are right to some extent. While, other people arguing that it has negative impacts, are also right as well. But, it all comes down to balance. If a student knows how to balance education and sports, side-by-side, he will not only succeed in his career-oriented life, but also, will excel mentally and physically.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I disagree with article, \"Driverless Cars Are Coming' because I believe that this world still needs humans to keep the focus and drive safetly. I believe this because most of the time it's us wanting to go some place. Also there the law still thinks humans driving is the safest way to drive . Lastly,because humans would still have to be alert and ready to respond if something happened while the car was driving.\n\nI think that the idea of a driverless car defeats the purpuse of having a car and getting your lisence if the car drives for you. In the article, it states that,\"Sensors are nothing new ,of course.\" No sensors aren't new, but I don't think a computer has the power to completely drive on it's own without wrecks or injuries. The article also states,\"Such cars would fundamentally change the world.\" I agree with this but I do not agree it would be for the better, thousands of taxi and bus drivers would be without jobs.\n\nSecondly, I believe that the the government is right by would be flexible if the car was a good idea and it could've already been a law. In the article, it states that,\" Most driving laws\n\nfocus on keeping driver, passengers ,and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers. I believe that if we want to ensure our safety, we have to bring it upon ourselves to ensure it. The text also states,\" Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of a accident. If there was a accident with the new automobile, who would be in charge of the damages or injuries?\n\nLastly, I believe that we still can't rely on the car to do everything that we want, when we want it to. In the text it states,\" They still alert the drivers to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues.\" What is the point of a \"driveless\" car if you still have to take over when it gets too tough for the car to handle by it's self? The article also reads,\" The track was embedded with an electical cable that sent radio signals to a reciever on the front end of the car.\" and \" The smart-road system works surprisingly well, but required massive upgrades to exsisting roads, something that was simply too exspensive to be practical.\" If the eletrical cables went out in the road after spending millions on a multiple cables nation-wide, the prices would be too much to even bear.\n\nIn conclusion, the Driverless Car is simply too much to handle for Ameica. The idea is a good one but the car can't handle all of the sensors on it's own. I don't think that the government will budge, with the fact that a human is the safest and most efficient way to drive a car. Last, I don't think relying on technology is acceptable when it's very complicated and more importantly, the exspense of the new technology. This is why I disagree with the \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" is not actually going to be introduced to America and the world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Exploring Venus would be a worthly study because it is the second plant from the sun and it's referred to being like Earth's \"twin\". According to paragraph (2), They say that Venus long ago had largely oceans and could've supported life such as earth.\n\nYes, there maybe danger but that shouldn't stop us from inventing something that we could possibly fly to see how it could be if we sent life to another plant. It's so much like Earth because the plant has surface of rockysediments and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\n\nThe National Aerunautics and Space Administrations (NASA) is thinking about sending humans to study Venus. \"Venus would allow scientist to float above the fray.\" They said imagine if we could fly our jet airplanes at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, then a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. \"Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" Nasa is also working on toher approaches such as some simplified electronics made of silicon cardide to have tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and are having it to last about three wekks to see how the conditions would be.\n\nThey also said that there is another project such as looking back to old technology called (mechanical computers.)\" If they were used in WWII then why shouldn't we be able to use them now?\" they say. The thought of having them here is still a shock but these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all. Having to use a cell phone or tablet to acid or heat is capable of melting the tin. But in comparison, using the mechancial parts can be made more resisant to pressure, heat, and other stronger forces.\n\nWanting to study Venus has value but not only because of the gain on the plant itseld but also because us humans are curious and would like to travel and see how life would be. Our travles to Venus are expanded to Imagation and Curiosity.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator,\n\nI think that we should change over to election by popular vote. I thinks that because in the Electoral College the voters dont vote on the president, but instead they vote on the electors who then vote for the president. \"It's official: the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. \"The advocates of this position are correct in arguing that the Electoral College method is not democratic in a modern sense....it is the electors who elect the president, not the people. There are five reasons for getting rid of the Electoral College despite its lack of democratic pedigree; all are preactical, not liberal or conservative reasons. Some people disagree though they think that we should stick with the electoral college. They think its a good way to do the voting because they get to choose the electors who will choose our president. Inconclusion, I think that we should do election by popular vote because then the voters get to choose the president.\n\nSincerly,\n\nBritneySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wondered what is the closest planet to earth? Well if you did here is your answer! Now if you look up in the sky with a mircoscope at night you might see something very very bright. This bright thing that you see in the sky, sometimes you might wonder what it is. This bright thing is a whole other planet that is right next to the amazing earth. This planet is called \"Venus\". Now Venus might not be as known as Mars, Jupiter, extc... But if you don't really know Venus is the closest to Earth. In this article the author also talks about how important it is for us to study the importants of Venus and our near by planets. The author mostly talks about Venus in this article though. Although he only talks about Venus he has some very important stuff to say about it. In this article the author says a lot of important stuff that we can learn and he distruped to us correctly. One example of what the author said to make it important for us to learn about Venus is \"tempatures averge around 800 degress,Fahrenheit in Venus, that is 90 times more than what we have on earth'' (Challenge of Exploring Venus). I think this is an important quote because, since now we are getting more advanced in technollogy we are always traveling planets and seeing new things in inner Earth and out in the space. I think that this quote was important because he tells us to be ready for how hot it is down in Venus, than what we have here in dear Earth. Another example is \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most like planet to Earth\" (Challenge of Exploring Venus). I think this example is another quote because if we again are ever going to need to go to Venus we are educated about it. In this quote the article says that it is the most likeable to our earth. So it may have a lot of similar things that we do on earth. Like trees and other stuff that we might need on a day to day basis to survive. A final example of why we need to learn about Venus is \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by danger and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\" (Challenge of Exploring Venus). This is another example of why we need to learn about other planets and Venus. This example shows us that wht if something happens to our Earth we know what to do. This is a good example because if something happens to earth, we can always have a backup plan. In conclusion I think that it is important to learn about other planets in the world. In this situation I think it is more important to learn about Venus. It is more important to learn about Venus because it is the most similar to earth and is the most easiest to learn. But I also think that it is important to learn about Venus because we shouldn't limit our selfs not to. It is very important to learn about the world and outer space.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In some cases, children thrive in school so there is no reason to consider any alternatives. In other cases, children have such a bad time at school or for whatever reasons, home education becomes a necessity. In fact, there is an upward trend for parents who want to let their children study at home instead of regular school education. This essay looks at some of the pros and cons of the home education, but from my perspective its drawbacks outweigh the benefits may it bring.\nOne of the amazing benefits that have to be told is the individual attention and instruction between the parents and their children. May they have more than one child but the attention they give is definitely far more than a teacher with a class of twenty or thirty. With this advantage, the children can easily have a good grasp on the lessons. In addition, if they do not understand anything they can totally ask their parents at any time during day or night. Another benefit is the flexibility on holidays due to the fact that they do not have to follow the schedule all the times and can immediately take a day off whenever they want.\nOn the other hand, home education still has many disadvantages. Firstly, when children stay home schooled, they cannot make friends or have many chances to interact with those at the same age. As a result, home educated children tend to be less sociable and have more difficulties when trying to fit in any communities. Secondly, home education requires a parent to work full-time as an instructor, a teacher and a friend to their children and also, they must have experience in teaching and educating; therefore, this is not for every family. Finally, it may be complex for further application to universities or colleges.\nOverall, it is important to consider the particular situation and the needs of the children to determine the most appropriate method for their education.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We use them everyday, they get us to our destinations, but what would life be without them? What benefits could arise from limiting the usage of cars? According to source 1, \"In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars,\" source 2, \"Paris bans driving due to smog,\" source 3, \"Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota,\" and source 4, \"The End of Car Culture,\" limiting the usage of cars has gained advantages towards traffic, pollution, and the overall community to better benefit the environment.\n\nIn source 1, \"In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars,\" residents of the \"upscale community\" of Vauban, Germany, have become \"suburban pioneers\" and \"have given up their cars.\" Although in many cities around the world it is unimaginable to give up your cars, it has become increasingly beneficial towards the environment and community. It is said to be \"a huge impediment to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes,\" as cars are responsible for \"12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe, and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States.\" Planners are now taking the concept to \"suburbs\" where \"stores are placed a walk away, on a main street, rather than in malls along some distant highways,\" thus making the car-banning residential friendly, and environmentally helpful. Not only will the limiting usage of cars be beneficial towards the community, it will also be beneficial towards your mental health as said by Heidrun Walter who stated \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\"\n\nIn source 2, \"Paris bans driving due to smog,\" residents of Paris are also seeing increasing advantages \"after days of near-record pollution\" when Paris \"enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\" within \"five-days of intensifying smog,\" \"congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France.\" If five-days can have a significant beneficial impact, imagine what a month can do, or a year, or even a decade towards the restoration of the environment.\n\nSimilar to the previous cities in the sources mentioned, Bogota also participates in a \"car-free day\" as stated in source 3, \"Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota,\" where \"millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work,\" \"leaving the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams.\" In this \"Day Without Cars\" campaign, \"the goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog,\" and its goal is being reached. By banning the usage of cars \"it's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\" said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaze. Along with many other advantages such as the \"blooming\" of \"parks and sports centers\" \"throughout the city; uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic; and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up,\" as stated in the article.\n\nLast but not least, in source 4, \"The End of Car Culture,\" \"recent studies\" have shown that \"Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by,\" and \"if this pattern persists... it will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment.\" With a decreasing amount of citizens driving, Bill Ford, executive chairman of the Ford Motor Company, has \"led out a buisness plan\" that will \"create cities in which pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety.\" The decreased usage of cars will have an everlasting positive impact on the environment.\n\nIn conclusion, although living in a world free of cars is a world many of us can never dream of, it has shown to lead to significant advantages towards traffic, pollution, and the overall community, which can be seen in the cities; Vauban, Germany, Paris, France, Bogota, Columbia and the United States -- as stated in the sources \"In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars,\" \"Paris bans driving due to smog,\" \"Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota,\" and \"The End of Car Culture.\" Many of us should no longer dread the banning of cars, but anticipate it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the flourishing development of the world technology system nowadays, the demands of improving living standards are more and more increasing to help people able to enjoy every aspect of life. However, some residents believe that the distance between poverty and wealth can be problematic while others think it can bring positive effects. This essay aims to show the positive of the evolution of technology and also provide some solutions for its drawbacks.\r\n\r\nIt is undeniable that technology brings a huge opportunity for people in their occupations. Today, both poor and rich people take advantage of technology during the working process. They are more enjoyable in working place thanks to the convenience of technology. For example, the head of an organization now can easily manage the performance of their employees as well as their target while the productivity of employees is also grown. Instead of using outdated manufacturing as before, they now approach the convenience of technology, which can boost the working process more effectively. As the result, the rich people now are richer, and the career path of poor people are improving.\r\n\r\nOther than that, the evolution of technology also brings a huge benefit for both wealthy and poverty people in terms of connecting. There are many organizations that now are establishing and using technology to help weak financial people without profit. Every year, there is numerous mass production using technology to produce tons of groceries to rescue the people who suffer from poverty. Therefore, thousands of lives are saved.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the advantages of technology are inevitable that not only provide the more comfortable working condition, but it also connects the world close together to rescue the difficult residents. However, the fear of unemployment now is becoming a hot issue for the unskilled people that make these people can lose their job and becoming poorer. This problem needs the act of governments and businesses to establish more policies in case of training as well as education.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Narciso proud cuban culture He happy become raised Narciso set proud greatful tone memoir He explains family isnt blood relations people love eachother going eachother He told us parents passed cuban culture cooking He also explained parents built home got grow Narciso says proud cuban family works hard earn living Narciso told us proud happy nice home friends family future He told us learned loveSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Once upon time girl named She always dreamed princess Every present got either dress jewelry She loved try dresses She two sisters year older name house old house located woods One day went get mail man tuxedo gave letter looked fancy opened letter read aloud said CAPS invited ball castle pm screamed exitment decided go mall look ball gown She found beatifulgown much money She asked lady front desk way could lower price I helped around store couple days She accepted offer She worked worked hours two days And fonaly patients paid She could take dress home She drove home put dress She hour hurry She put makeup jewelry looked self mirror said I She got car drove castle beautiful way moon hit gold paint got car walked inside castle She walked stairs every one stared It best day life everyone think beautiful She went dance floor danced guys The prince came introduce self turned around fell love couldnt believe prince talked He asked dance They danced night When prince went stage called name went stage He asked marry said yes She become princess Sometimes dreams really come trueSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever imagine a life without your car? I bet not. In there's a city in Germany called Vauban. In this city there's no cars, except for the main thouroughfared, where the tram to downtown Freiburg, and a few streets on one edge of the community. They even ban the owner ship of street parking, driveways and home garages, even by banding all of this you can own a car if you wish, there's a garege along the edge of the development you can by an space for 40,000 along with a home. As a resoult, 70 percent of Vauban's families don not own a cars, and 57 percent sold their cars to live there. \"When i had a car i was always tense. I'm much happier this way,\"Heidrum Walter, media trainer and mother of two, as she walks down the verdant streets.\n\nNot only in in Vauban, Germany but even in Paris, France driving is partialy forvident. But in Paris is ban cause of smogs, ther air was so polluted that they decided that by partialy banding driving it would  help clear the smog. They gave a fine of $31 dollers tio any one driving, some people even had their cars taken away because of they way they reacted to the fine.\n\nIn Bogota, Colombia theres a festivity ones a day that is called car-free day. You may go to work or school in bikes, skateboards, buses, or walking. People who violates this rule will have to pay a fine of $25 dollars. Not even the rain stop this people to enjoy the event even two more cities of colombia join in Cali, Valledupar.\n\nThe U.S.A is were the car culture develop, troughtout the years this fan addiction and love affiar to the cars haven cooling dawn, few cars are bought, geting fewer linces and driving less. The economy is so bad thst there arent that many Americans buying caras and not that many jobs, any ways is not like the unemployed could by a car they don't even have to go to work. But before the downturn the families had two to three cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The terrain cyclist riding big affect The first example riding hills makes much harder For example rider story saw going ride hills olcasly disappointed Another thing affects cyclist smothness road riding In story Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit main character came rough spot road disappointed didnt want ride Another aspect affect cyclists heat Several times story cyclists says tired dehydrated one point thinks going die heatstroke Those effects riders setting himherSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Climate change indeed threatens the existence of humankind and the natural world, but some people argue that we should adapt to the changing. In my opinion, I do not support the latter idea because we still have time to tackle the issue, causing less harm to the Earth.\n\tThe first reason why we have to keep our fighting for our planet is that the verge of extinction would impact on many kinds of creatures. In other words, natural habitats have been dangerously threatened with drought, wildfire, and many animals do not have a place to live or food to eat. For example, in Vietnam, the giraffe was a victim to numerous of temperature change, made them not able to continue due to lack of food and pollution from local factories. Due to the loss of these precious animals, the globe may suffer the lack of biological diversity, and it is hard for us to live on as the environment cannot develop without these animals.\n\tFurthermore, people will take hard lives because of the disaster. It is can be seen that global heating makes the sea level go higher, which means that a lot of cities will have completely covered with water, so they have to shut down. As a result, dwellers will have to immigrate to another area, causing overpopulation. Besides, problems can be also shown as diseases, famine, increased homeless and poverty, and the government cannot always come down with all the issues at once. The price of living with global warming, it is true more horrible and hazardous. \n\tIn conclusion, we have to continue preventing and deciding what is good for the climate, not just let the pollution keep on progress.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After I read this article, I already have my own opnions about this situation. Many people would think that if they do not need to drive everyday, and they do not need to focus on if there are some drangerous things in front of the car, these will make their life become easier. I know it is so great, but every thing has the two sides, there still has something problems about the driverless cars.\n\nNowadays, more and more people are use car to do any things they want. Cars make their life become much\n\nmore easier. So people have an idea about if we have a dirverless cars, what thing will happend, whether or not these cars will bring us more benefits. From my aspect, I disagree wiht it now. Let's imagine, if we go to the very steep mountains, and the zone which have a lot of swamps, whether or not these car can make quick responding in the dangerouse situations. Safty is the most important thing in our life. I think we do not have an ability to produce a very perfect driverless car.\n\nIn the other hand, driving is kind of skill in out life. Many people still interested in drive cars, they like have a competition sometimes. There are some beneficial things about drive car by ourselves. Practicing driving car is kind of way to help us try our best to focus on something. And some people will feel better if they drive cars by themselves, because driverless cars will make them feel like that someone controls their lives, then make them uncomfortable.\n\nFrom the articles, some interesting opinions also sounds like good for us. Such as develop the smarter road, and \" traffic Jam Assistant\". Those are more possible to produce, although some problems still between them.\n\nIf I will choose the way to develop our car, I would not choose Diverless cars. The little personal reason is that I have even drive, so I think it will be funny if I practise more, and become a good diver.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This line graph illustrates the both production and consumption of oil barrels in china. Between 1982 till 2006, it is clear from the line graph that the oil number grow over the years with a significant escalation of oil barrels demands.\naccording to what is shown both production and consumption in 1982 are the same amounts with 2 million barrels per day. Firstly the production is moderately raised to 3 million in 1986. Then they remained in the same quantities till 1994. Then slowly grow to 3.5 million barrels till 2006. Secondly, meanwhile, consumption was stable from 1982 to 1990 with only 2 million barrels. However, the number increased almost double in the year 1994. consequently, since 1994 the relationship between the oil demands and supply began to change differently, due to a dramatic increase in oil consumption compared with production.\nOverall, we could analyze that both production and consumption broke even in the year 1992. However, till the year 2006, the consumption of oil barrels has been doubled to more than 6 million barrels while the production remained the same as from the year 1998.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In 1976 NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling around Mars. They were taking photos of Mars to see where Viking 2, the sister ship of Viking 1 could land. As they were taking pictures around Mars they were shocked to see a face on one of the pictures. Scientists didn't take to much consideration aout the face. Thye thought it was just another Martian mesa.\n\nA few days later they released the picture of the face to the world. Since they released the photo it has become a pop icon. It was showed in Hollywood films, books, magazines, and in radio talks. Some people think it the Face is bona flide evidence that NASA would rather hide, say conspiracy theorists. The people thought they were hiding the fact that life may be on Mars.\n\nOn April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera took some photos that were ten times sharper then the ones in 1976. As Michael Malin was taking photos, the world was anxious to see what would be the outcome of the photos. When the photos came out on a website it showed a landform. There was really no alien monument after all.\n\nThe Face of Mars is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April 1998. It was a cloudy time of year on the Red planet. Not everyone was satisfied that it was just a landform. Some people say that the alien markings were hidden by all the haze. NASA decided to look aagain at Cydonia in 2001.\n\nOn April 8, 2001, a cloudless summer day in Cydonia- Mars Global Surveyor went to take another look at the landform. During that little exibition, Malin's team captured an extraordianry photo using the camera's maximun resolution. Each pixel in 2001 spans 1.5 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo.\n\nThey compared the three photos and came to conclusion that the picture shows the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa, common landforms around the American West. Garvin said it reminds him most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. That is a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa, about the same height as the Face on Mars. Some people are dissapointed that it wasn't a alien artifact, but people still have there hopes that it possibly could be one.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People involved design construction Empire State Building faced major obstacles attempting transform idea docking dirigibles reality One biggest complications massive dirigible tied building cable tether stress would put building s frame The builders architects find way allow stress travel foundation building They spent modifying framework From paragraph In paragraph read architects builders worked obstacle storage putting winches control machinery base shaft conical roofSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The structure of planets are different. Some are dead, and very few have life in them. Mars has shadows and a structure of a face in the grounds of it. There was an illusion of eyes, a nose, and mouth. Many believe that aliens did this, but as we take a closer look at the information provided, there is evidence that shows it's just the formation of Mars.\n\nThe photographing of the sight of the face couldn't help with the debate of whether or not the face was made naturally or by aliens. However, when there was a picture taken of the structure of the face for the first time by Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera, stated in the seventh paragraph, the photograph was ten times sharper than the Vikings photo, making the sight more clear for viewers. After the image was uploaded for the first time on a JPL web site, the formation of the face was said to be natural landform, stating that there had been no alien monument after all.\n\nThe day of April 8, 2001, another picture was captured with a digital camera. While viewing any image on a digital camera, you can increase the size of any area from the photo. The picture was being viewed in a larger style on parts of the face, said in the eleventh paragraph. There were no ojects in the image such as planes, shacks, or Egyptian-style pyramids. This had approved the fact that the structured face on Mars was a natural landform.\n\nThe picture of the face on Mars was a Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa, confronted in paragraph twelve. Around the American West, landforms such as the structure of faces are common. The sight of the face on Mars could remind you or seem similar to the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\n\nIf there were to be more of these structural features and appearances around the earth, anyone could say that aliens did this. There are also effects that erosion can give. It can change the formation of many objects. If you take a closer look, and investigate on this, there may be evidence and clues that tell you the formation of an item or object, making the world an unknown creative-like place.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Seagoing Cowboys is fun and I can tell you all about it and it is amizang, it makes you feel good about yourself. You get to meet many people. You have fun when you go Seagoing Cowboy and treat others well.\n\nThere are many reasons you should go Seagoing Cowboys. One cool thing is that you get to see ruins and they are awsome. You will feel good about yourself becuase you do good things for the community around the world. Do you like animals? Well you get to take care of some animals on your way to a place that needs your help. If you thought that was lame well you need to adventure outside a bit more.\n\nThere are many things that can support the things I claim. He said in paragragh 5 that besides he gets to help people in need. Another reason is that it keeps you in shape because you help the animals and it evens says it in paragragh 6. When you help others and your a Seagoing Cowboy you will feel good becuase you helped someone that day and it will be fun. You can't explain how awsome it is and you have lots of fun on these trips.\n\nYou would love being a Seagoing Cowboy. You get to meet others and you get to be the person who wants to make a diffrence. You can tell your friends that you help people. Those who you help won't forget you becuase you helped them when they needed you. You become a hero to those people that you help. Finally Seagoing Cowboys taked care of animals.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In 2009, Google cofounder Sergey Brin was a part of a team that develop what we know as the worlds first \"driverless\" car. Given, this car had to be under specialized conditions in order to function, and needed human guidance when it encountered difficult situations, it still was a huge step in the field of autonomously driving cars. Some people think these feats of technology could be revolutionary, whereas people like myself, believe they belong in science fiction. The question is, are autonomously driven cars a feasible thing in today's society?\n\nMy argument is complicated, but I do believe that these vehicles will hold no place in our society. The only way these cars could be precise enough and safe enough is if they were the only cars on the road, which is a very unrealistic thing to expect. Besides safety and precision, these cars would absolutely shatter our culture, and what we know as the American Dream. The American Dream being, buying a fixer-upper with your father, and working on it form age eight until age sixteen when you can actually drive it. Not even to mention the sheer amount of jobs that this would kill, and stomp the glass that is our economy into smaller and smaller pieces.\n\nFrom a devil's advocate perspective, the idea of these cars are actually quite neat to me. What convinces me these are not the right direction for us to be headed in is the fact that they will be run by computers. Trust me, I do not hate computers by any means, I actually have a passion for them, but the idea of having my life in a computers hands scares me. If you have ever done any computer programming or software development, there is often a phrase that is thrown around and it is, \"The computer will do exactly what you tell it to do.\" Meaning it knows no more than what you teach it. When humans drive, they have a healthy fear of speed and the dangers it brings. They also know that there mistakes could cost other people's lives, and it instills a certain level of fear inside you when you're behind the wheel, knowing that it would be there fault if there happened to be a crash. Computers do not care if they crash, or kill someone, or go to fast, unless we teach them to; which, would take an unrealistic amount of time to do.\n\nThat brings me to my final point, the legality of the things. They simply could not make it in today's society. Someone random could easily hack in, change destination, swerve off the road, etc. Even if a crash was truly the computer's fault, who would be responsible? Google? The Owner? Drivers shouldn't be allowed on the roads unless they can testify in court. Humans can testify, but computers cannot.\n\nIn summary, the idea of autonomously driving cars are neat, but in reality they are just that, a neat novelty. This feat of technology is unrealisticly unsafe, and not a feasible thing for today's society. The effects it will have on our culture, economy, legal system, and most importantly safety, makes these autonomous cars not only unrealistic, but a waste of time and resources to research.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Someone thinks that superstars have a good effect on communities, but some people think that their effect is dangerous. In my opinion, I agree with both ideas about positive and negative ways. In this essay will write about this.\r\n\r\nTo being with, good ways in results of celebrities in our society. First, some children can have a great role model by the actress. For example, many countries use the celebrities like football payer, singer and others to communicate with students and shows them how to succeed in their life. So, I believe that famous people can teach most students in the right ways if they a good folk and students will follow them.Second, many nations are crazy about popular people like music branches and sports teams so, celebrities are very effective in many ways ,therefore,many people a dream to be superstars in the future because they think can earn a lot of money for the job.\r\n\r\nOn other point of view, in the harmful and bad sisutation, some celebrities can be a bad role model to show many person and childern who innocent can imitateSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think certain materials offensive taken shelf depending offensive If offensive rachism prejudice think shouldnt shelfs Also offensive women men taken shelfs People able read listen stuff without offended I think offensive different races yes taken shelfs I think children read would beleieve right races races I think children people able read listen stuff without offending others Also able learn offensive others People reading things offensive could cause problems others It could cause problems libraies also people wanting come back due fact offensive material Then people wanting libraies wont enough service close I also believe masterial offensive womenmen taken shelf The magazines women men offensive alot people look like trash It makes bad impression people Its rude It puts good thoughts peoples heads I believe material read listened offensive taken shelf It cause many problems others It could cause us lose libraies others choose go anymore Things left around offensivce waySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am agianst the development of these cars. I am agianst them because although the development of cars gives drivers more luxury while driving some people may get to the point where they believe that they do not have to have 100% concintration while driving.\n\nIn a part of this article it talks about how BMW provided a new development of the \"Traffic Jam Assistant\" and how it is able to take over the wheel while in traffic, \"The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel.\" This dicription of the new \"Traffic Jam Assistant\" development sounds as if the driver can just relax while the car takes over during a traffic jam and he or she just has to keep their hands on the wheel. However that is not the case because after that the article says, \" In fact, none of the cars developed so far completely driverless. They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires.\" BMW is letting the reader know and understand that the \"Traffic Jam Assistant\" is not a do it all attachment to the car but that it is just a way of alarming the driver of what is going on around him or her.\n\nIn conclusion, some people may understand what BMW is trying to do with this new development. Although there are other people that can misunderstand what BMW is trying to deliver to the people and end up injuring someone or something. What if there was an accident that occured while someone was using the \"Traffic Jam Assistant\" how is he or she going to explain themselves? Are they going to blame it on what they thought the new development was supposed to do or are they going to blame the accident on themselves?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Mooring Mast builders Empire State building faced many obstacles attempts allowing dirigibles transportation future also known blimps dock building The biggest problem figuring make mast workThe main obstacle use mooring mast nature since winds top building constantly shifting strong violent air currents back dirigible would turn around around mast even ll tied mast It said excerpt dirigibles moored open landing fields weighted use lead weights Because would dangling high people would dangerous case falls Also builders control nature making difficultAnother obstacle stress body frame building receive dirigible held single cable tether The wind pressure stress would much building s foundation This solved modifying steel frame Building stronger keep building collapsingThe attempts allowing dirigibles building many obstacles end nothing law airships flying low urban areasSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One time I patient babysit My family friend one year old And I six year old brother I babysit mom boy friend going double date family friends Things great left My brother preschool time gave paper books worksheets I help I thought ok easy read book mom told knows words wont sound every single one I wouldnt work baby wouldnt quit crying dog wouldnt stop barking hate babys cry house crazy started panic What I supposed And I didnt ruin mom plans definetly wanted prove wrong calmed remembered one friends said told patient let dog outside picked baby headed back table brother playing First read book aloud got attention then told andi made game work good Then time came made food liked set baby high chair food gave brother plate turned around trowed plate food everywhere I got mad told patient cleaned mess feed kids put movie feel sleep I quietly cleand house mom friends walked surprised Patence big part life loose temper makes things worseSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, the environmental conditions become worse which impact to the earth and other creatures because of the people unscientific process.A certain number of the public believe that the occasion was delayed already to repatriate the things like old days.This essay will study on this topic as detailed in the following paragraphs and my opinion will be noted in the conclusion.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost,the entire world struggles to live in the weather situation turns as pathetic compared with past decades since the unethical things made by the society for their lives.Moreover,it has been affecting the natural resources deprived as bad.For instance,as per the new survey,the Amazon forest boundaries becoming decrease year by year due to cutting the trees and mining in an unlawful ways.Secondly,the flora and fauna have been losing their habitat since man used these areas to make an inhabited places to live through the machines and other explosive things.Even though, the population is increasing everywhere which doesn't sense to destroy uninhabited lands to survive.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand,a number of the communities debates that it's not an easy task to bring back the pleasant atmosphere in normal way since most of the places seen as dirty than the past days and the healthy resources became unhealthy in these days.For example,In Kerala the rainy season is normally for three months in a calendar year but now it has changed tragically to six to eight months and it causes many problems creating such as floods and landslides for the last couple of years.Several experts still think that it is possible to stop if the government and the families come forward to save the nation by themselves.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, we are already late to take necessary actions to catch the old earth and our gifted resources immediately to avoid abolition of this time and the authorities must take indeed steps and the implementation of the plans to create a good future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It's cool to study different things about our Solar System, but some things in Space can be very dangerous, like trying to examine Venus closer. In the passage, it says, While Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely. I chose this piece of evidence because it talks about studying Venus, on how studying can be a worthing pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\n\nIn the beginning, it talks about Venus can be a very safe planet to research if we are far away from it. But it also says, if we get closer to it, it can be very dangerous since it is one of the hottest planets in our Solar System.\n\nIn the passage provided, it talks about Venus's temperature and it's thick atmosphere. Also talks about not being safe trying to get closer to it because it makes an example saying, \"Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. Temperatures would be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\n\nIn the end, it talks about if you try and visit Venus, it's worth it not just because of insight, but because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our curiosity should lead us to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I support the technology that helps us read students' emotional expressions. Some people might have a friend who is sad and that person doesn't even know. If that person asks them if they are okay, the other might say that they are fine. That one friend might have trouble telling how their friend is really feeling.\n\nAnother reason why it is vauable to have this type of technology is that we can tell when someone has a fake smile. If someone is having a bad day, they will likely hide it a with a smile. The computer will recognize that they are fake smiling and that they are feeling either sad or mad. The computer can indicate a fake smile. A fake smile, the mouth is stretched side ways using the zygomatic major and a diffrent muscle, the risorius. In a real smile, the zygomatic major lift the corners of your mouth.\n\nIt can also indicate when someone is being surprised, the frontalis pars lateralis muscles raises your eyebrows. When someone is angry. the orbicularis oris tightens your lips.\n\nThis technology can make a big difference in the world. It will help out everyone who is concerened about someone they know.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I exerpt Narciso Rodriguez Home The Blueprints lives There specific mood set exerpt I think love example paragraph says I simple house parents welcomed refugees celebrate arrival country I celebrated birthdaysSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Computers tend negative effects people rather positive This true people getting enough exercise people enjoying nature forest lastly world people spend enough time family friends Computer good around house To begin people spending much time computers They negative effect computer getting excercise Think day fat fast food computer eating Obeseity days big concern Staying computer help situation Any concerned person technologically challenged would agree countless ones computer good health country Further people spending much time computers enough beauty nature Many people adults world explored people thankful beautiful still They things wait see Although communication important everyone instead talking computer people make plans family friends This idea also relates back lack exercise naivety people If people go enjoy life forest friends family would nt numerous hours day wasted computer People get butts go Life short sit around day Any intelligent person would realize computer time nt fun family friend time To conclude computers overused recently Instead problems lack sun boring computer talk people got go We live lived fulestSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You ever been with someone that thinks something true but really not. Well I have. And one thing that people think is real is the face on Mars was created by aliens. But clearly the face is natural landform. So today im going to give three reasons why the face on Mars is a natural landform on Mars.\n\nWell the first reason the face on Mars is just natural landform because people have checked back since to see more evidence. For example on April 5,1998 Mars Global Surveyorflew over Cydionia. Michale Malin and his Mars Obiter Camera team took a picture ten imes better than the viking photos. Than they put the picture on the web whene revealing a natural landform. No alien monument after all but even after that people still wasn't satisfied enough so sooner or later they did it again.\n\nSo on April 8, 2001 Mars Global Surveyor went close to Mars for a second look . They rolled the spacecraft25 degrees to the center of the face in the field of veiw. Then Malin team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera maximum resolution. Each pixel in 2001 image spans 1.56 meters compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best1976 viking photo. You can see in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixek size. So if thats the case if there was any objects like spaceships on the ground or egyptian style pyramids or even small shacks we could see what they are.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming.\" it talks about how its expected to have cars that drive theirselves very soon. Humanity has always dreamed of seeing self driven cars or flying cars. It has been portrayed in movies and television shows, but is it really a safe thing for humans? In the artice the author presents both positive and negative aspects of driverless cars. Driverless cars should not be developed because, they do not really drive on their own, people would get bored of these driverless cars, and new laws would have to be developed.\n\nThere really is no such thing as a \"Driverless Car\". In the article it states that in 2013 BMW announced that they developed something called \"Traffic Jam Assistant\", which means that the car can manage driving itself to speeds up to 25 mph. Except they can't really continue driving theirselves all the time. The author states that \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" If the car is still notifiying the driver to take charge at times then the care isn't really a driverless car. The author also says \"This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires. This necessitates the car being ready to quickly get the drivers attention\". A driverless car should not have to get the drivers attention if it is suppose to drive by itself, the driver should be able to remain safe and calm in a driverless car.\n\nAnother reason why driverless cars should not be developed is because people would get bored of not being able to drive their own car. Yes the driverless car would relieve a lot of the stress that you get knowing you have to drive but not driving at all seems boring. In the article it says \"'The psychological aspects of automation are really a challenge,' admits Dr.Werner Huber, a BMW project manages driver. 'We have to interpret the driving in a new fun way.'\" This shows that even the ones manufacturing the driverless cars beleive it would be boring for people to not drive all the time.\n\nNext reason to why driverless cars are not good for being developed is because new laws would have to be developed. The development of new laws is not easy and according to laws now its only safe when an a actual person is driving the car. In the article it states that \"traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. As a result, in most states it is illegal even to test computer driven cars.\" This shows that if driverless cars are developed then new laws would have to be developed and some laws would have to be changed too. It is possible that it could change safety laws aswell.\n\nIn conclusion driverless cars should not be developed because, they do not really drive on their own, people would get bored of these driverless cars, and new laws would have to be developed. Although it sounds like a fun thing the outcome of driverless cars is never known. These autonomous cars could change the world in a negative way. The old fashion driving we all know wouldn't be the same.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face? Created by Aliens or just a landmark?\n\nDid you beieve that the \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" was just created by aliens. NASA has given us many reasons to believe what they say, and not many reasons for us not believe them. I am a NASA researcher and I'm telling you why the \"Face\" is actually just a landmark.\n\nThere are many reasons why the \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" is a natural land form. The first reason is that NASA took three different pictures, one picture was in 1976 in the picture you can't really see anything. Scientists just thought it was another Matian mesa. At this time the cameras weren't very 3D like. So how do we know it's an actual face?\n\nThe seacond reason it is a landform is because NASA\n\nsent another crew to take more pictures of the \"face.\" The crew took ten pictures that were sharper than the first one in 1976. In this picture you start to see something appear. They even say \"when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing... a natural landform. People were not very happy when they heard it wasn't a alien monument.\n\nAnother reason is that they thought alien markings were being hazed. So, when they went back it was a cloudless summer. In the text they say \"Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo. That is a huge difference from 1976. What the picture shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or messa.\n\nIf you really think about it though, how come they jumped to conclusions so fast? In the passage it says it would be a good way to engage the public to Mars. Wouldn't it just attract more people to NASA to though?\n\nIn many ways there are more reasons to why this \"Face\" is more of a landmark than anything. From the different years they took the years, to the landmarks being hazed. You could probably think of a lot of questions to ask NASA about the photos and what the scientists are saying, but until you go up to Mars we will only know what they are telling us. Which is that the \"face\" is a mesa. They clearly say many times in the passage for people to believe that they are not trying to trick you.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face is just a natural landform it is not made from aliens so if you thank it is made by aliens you are wrong. The scientist at NASA is wrong about it being made by alienes so if you thank it is made from alienes you are stiud.\n\nIt has it all in the story of unmacking the face on marsread it and you will see it is just a natural landform. It just look a lot a like a face and so I don't know how is got made or nuthing but all I can say it is prettly cool.\n\nSo I guess that you want to know when it started out well it all started back in 1976 is when they took. The first pichture and thay have three of the face now. One was in 1976 and one was in 1998 and the last one was in 2001 and so I don't know if they have anymore or not.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I'm telling you it's not!!! The Face is only a mesa. They have pictures as proof .The Face is just a landformation an alien race did not make it.\n\nThe Face is a plain old mesa. The reason it looks like a face is because of unusal shadows. Then NASA used a high resoultion camera and saw it was just a landformation. Also Cydonia is an area with mesas.\n\nThey have multiple pictures of the Face. They releasaed them to the public saying it was a landformation. If it wasn't they wouldn't have told the public. Also in the pictures you can see that it's not a face.\n\nOthers say that the Face was made by aliens. They say that the photos weren't clear enough and that NASA is trying to hide the ancient alien civiliazation. However, they took much more clear photos . Also if there was an ancient alien civilization NASA would be happy and would tell the world because it would benefit them.\n\nThe Face is just a mesa not created by aliens. They have photogenic proof. The Face is just a natural landformation. I'm telling you it was not made by aliens!!!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe unnecessary remove items shelves offensive reasons I feel way several reasons three particular First book movie magazine someone plans reading removing item let customer Second many solutions try taking item away Last customers accept decisions business decides make First book movie magazine someone plans reading removing item let customer People come libraries look re interested entertain types literation library types people everyone nt think alike Everytime item removed shelf unsatisfied customer Second many solutions try taking item away Libraries always type organization In order offend anyone items divided categories inside sections This solution prevent anyone seeing something offends If nt help librarians post sign stating type objects inside front door everyone knows enter Last customers accept decisions business decides make A customers needs wants met times unless customer trying run business If particular library chooses certain types items know readers like one else involve theirself If I owned library I would upset customer removed book shelf would interfering business In conclusion I beleve unnecessary remove items shelves three reasons First book movie magazine someone plans reading Second many solutions try taking item away Last customers accept decisions business decides make I believe I expressed opinion fullest Although people disagree way I feel I m sticking defintly would nt books left us items removed offensive reasonsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire States Building encoutered many obstacles attempt allow blimps dock building The engineers realized start even could get blimp docked would put additional stress buildings structure fix reinforce entire building In addition docking blimp dangerous It could easily destroyed like HindenburgSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people are argued about all teenagers should commence for society without paying. While teenagers have the right to take a rest in their spare time, I still agree that they should become a volunteer sometimes.\r\n\r\nThere are some reasons that teenagers should not be required to do unpaid work in their free time. One reason is most young people want to hang out with friends at the weekend. It is reasonable for them to accompany their friends or partners. Because they pursue to have unforgettable memories in their youth, preventing them from missing out on their adolescence. Additionally, they should not clean the local community or service others without paying them money. Parents or teachers should give them some incentives to encourage teenagers to have motivation to do the same things next time.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, teenagers can find some insufficiencies in their neighbourhoods and try to improve them. Since different generations have different points of view, local councillors can take their ideas to make society better. Furthermore, it is essential for teenagers to realize that the environment needs everyone’s help to maintain neatly. For example, many schools promote the schemes that students should have to clean the local community after school. This not only can make the community have a clean appearance but also can let students attend community affairs. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, teenagers still can do whatever they want in their free time, while they should contribute some positive things to society before they hang out with friends.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist The cyclist running water intense heat the high deserts California June The tumbleweeds cross path add desperation Not features setting affect cyclist physically dehydrating heat also mentally The cyclist encounters rolling hills tumbleweeds rattle snakes ghost towns All make cyclist start give hope In conclusion features setting affect cyclist physically mentallySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Usage of cars has been decreasing due to the effects it can have on the environment and the opinions of the public. Driving has had a major impact on the atmosphere due to it's polluting effects. Smog covers highly populated cities where driving is just another way of carrying out everyday-life. Though transportation by car has been a huge help in economic progress, it still comes with a price.\n\nIf we had no cars there would be less deaths, decreased enviromental instability, and shorter use for our limited amount of fuel. Texting/drinking and driving are some of the biggest causes of death in vehicles. The number of deaths caused by texting or drinking when driving has skyrocketed over the years. These areas where driving is prohibited are probably very safe places and the number of deaths brought about by driving are most likely little to none.\n\nBut life without cars can pose for some serious problems. Yes, it may cause fewer deaths and decrease pollution. But, it will also bring about issues such as; limited transportation of goods, infestation of the homeless (not a joke), and many inexperienced drivers when they are needed. In war, mobile transportation by car or truck is often needed. If people who can't drive are appointed to tasks such as driving, they won't be much help and could make things worse. Yes, they could be taught but time is not everlasting.\n\nBut all negatives aside, the suburban areas of the world could become much safer places without cars. No kids would get accidentily ran-over when their ball rolls into the street and the try to retrieve it. It would just be a much safer environment. Teens have no interest in learning to drive nowadays because they're either too lazy, or they see the effects it has on the world. of course trains and emergency transportation will be needed though. But regular cars and vehicles aren't a neccessary attribute to everyday life.\n\nIn conclusion, cars that don't serve a neccessary purpose aren't needed. What are the cars that do? Those vehicles would be firetrucks, ambulances, and other emergency vehicles. But cars ment for our own personal transportation can be left out of the picture. Now if only we could do the same about drugs...SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I agree that this technology is hepful, I believe it can help a lot of different people in many ways. I believe that this could be helpful because some kids/adults go through hard times and turn to death as an option. Many others may not agree with this technology because they don't want help nor do they want their emotions being able to be detected. This type of technology could help others in a various amount of ways. Here are some examples, a kid at home could be upset and the parents will never know because they don't pay attention to their childs emotions.\n\nThe parents would be required to do an everyday scan so they are aware of their childs emotions. Some parents could find out how their kids really feel and get them help. This technology could keep the suicide rate from uprising.\n\nDoctors could use this in their offices to help patients. Especially infants, infants can't state how they feel. The doctor could scan the babies face and see their emotion.\n\n\" Eckman has classified six basic emotions- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness.\"\n\nThose six emotions detectors could be very helpful. Who knows they might even come up with more emotions to detect. This could help large amounts of people. So I agree with this technology.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Facial Action Coding System is a system that is able to detect emotion. Its able to look at the 3-D image of your face and find out your emotion through the wrinkle and muscle placements. This system will be able to detect these six emotions happiness, suprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness.\n\nI think having this system in class would be of value. This system being able to detect emotions could help teachers understand if someone in class is being troubled. Whether that be sad or bored it could give teachers information to help them through it. It could help teachers find out a problem the student doesnt want to tell them. Giving teachers this system overall will help in school and may even improve students grades. Why I say that is if teachers know if a student is not paying attention or is sad they can help fix that problem so students can focus in class.\n\nIf teachers are able to get this system it should be used in all schools and classrooms, because I think it would be very beneficial. Beneficial to the school teachers and students. It could help destroy that communication barrier between teachers and students.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars are going out of style. In Vauban, Germany, cars are not owned, save the occasional one that can be afforded; Paris,France banned certain cars from driving certain days; Bogota, Columbia has a car-free day; and America is seeing a decrease in their car sales. The reason behind it: smog and greenhouse gas emmissions. The reduction of car use has helped these things immensely in more ways than one.\n\n\"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emmissions in Europe...and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States,\" says experts in Elisabeth Rosenthal's\n\n\"In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars.\"\n\nEurope, the United States and other places are starting a movement called \"smart planning.\" It is a plan to seperate suburban life from auto useage. There has been efforts these past two decades to make cities better suited for walking. In Vauban, 70 percent of families do not even own cars, they walk everywhere. It is similar in Bogota, where the people ride bikes and hike to work whether it is in the shining sun or in the downpour of rain. Even here in America, driving has decreased. In 2013, studies show that the numbers of miles driven was nearly equal to the numbers from 1995. The percentage of people under the age of 40 getting their license has dropped 23 percent between the years 2001 and 2009 according to Rosenthal's article\n\n\"The End of Car Culture.\"\n\nLast year, Paris had to enforce a ban to clear the smog from the city; many people got fined for ignoring it. Five days after enacting the ban, congestion went down 60 percent. In Bogota, less streets were being built while more and more sidewalks and bicycle paths (118 miles worth) were under construction. President Barak Obama has made plans to cease the greenhouse emmissions and, with the recent changes in transportation use, his plans could work. As stated in Rosenthal's first article \"The Environmental Protection Agency is promoting 'car reduced' communities and legislators are starting to act.\" It is predicted that public transportation will become much more popular in the next few years.\n\nCars have polluted so many areas of our world and at this point of time, our world is changing. Less car useage means more money that is not being spent on gas and less pollution to our environment. The executive chairman of Ford Motor Company has a business plan to create cities where \"pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportation traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve resources, lower emissions and improve safety.\" It is beneficial to our new world that it stays intact for the future generations to come.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people have different opinions on this subject, but I'm only going to tell you about mine. What I will be telling you about is the Face that everyone has claimed to see on Mars. It does indeed look like a face, but I don't really think that's the case. I think it has more to do with the Earth than anything else. I think that people have just blown this out of proportion. Does there really have to be an explanation? Can it not just be a natural landform that has no explanation whatsoever?\n\nThe only thing I agree with on this subject is that it does indeed look like a face. But aliens is a little bit of an exaggeration, I don't know what made people want to believe that it is because of aliens but it's just nonsense. I just think it is a part of the Earth that was made differently. There are a lot of other landforms that are part of the Earth that look strange or can't be explained. But that's just the Earth, it has nothing to do with aliens or us humans even. They are just things created that we have no explanation for and most likely we never will. I mean does there really have to be an explanation? Can it no just be part of the Earth? There are many things on this Earth that are strange but that doesn't mean there has to be an explanation.\n\nEveryone has their own opinions on this subject, and they are all different. So I'm just telling you what I think and believe. I don't see how there can be many other landforms that are just as strange and we have no explanation for them. Why does there have to be one for this one? I just think that this is part of the Earth that nobody understands and they don't believe that it is just a part of the Earth. It is just a natural landform and nothing more, especially not aliens. People just need to stop exaggerating this and move on with their lives, it's not a big deal. If we hadn't have found it now we would've found it eventually.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Robots plays an important role in everyones life. Some echelons of society believe that robots are very beneficial for the humans future development ,but others opine that robots are very threaten and put cast an adverse effect on society . This essay will delve into both views along with opinion in upcoming paragraphs.\nWhen it comes to why robots are more beneficial for humans .The prime view is that ,robots can do work in extreme conditions where humans are helpless . For example ,in tsunami robots are used for the help of folks because in those conditions people do not give help . Secondly ,robots speed up the production process and are very efficient in repititive tasks . For instance,leading products that are made in the developed nations like japan are manufactured by the help of intelligent machines . Inspite of this , intelligent machines not only beneficial for multitudes but also for the business employers because these machines can save the time of mortals as well as reduce the payment of labor.\n \nOn the other hand , why robots are dangerous and have negative effects on society . Firstly , robots can increase the rate of unemployment in the future . To examplify ,few robots have already started to teach children at school. others have been working as servants for several families. Moreover, if masses used robots for their all works ,then the health problems will be increased . They are trying to depend on the robots for works quickly. Most of the time humans give wrong command to the robots ,and it can cause big harms because robots does not have any feelings as well as it is not self reacted . It also depends upon the commands.\n\n\nAccording to me, nowadays robots are used in eveey field for working. Robots are well trained to do works in very attractive ways rather than humans . For example, in the harsh environment such as south pole and rainforests that may be full of poisnous insects .People donot works in that arenas because it ensures the lives of mortals.\n\n\nIn conclusion ,once again i would like to reiterate that robots have a more positive effect rather than negatives .The sooner the people understands the pros of artificial machines it is better for them.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" the author decribes a new technology which can be used to accuratly detect a person's emotion even with a plain face.\n\nThis facial coding system is valueable but i feel it has not place being in a classroom because humans can already read emotion, its unneccessary, better alternatives to its use.\n\nThe use of this face coding technology would not be helpful in a classroom setting beccause humans can already read emotions. In paragraph 5 the author notes that humans can read facial as well or even better than machines. So this means a teacher would have no problem reading a student's face in order to make sure their not lost. It wouldnt be intelligent to use a machine to read human emotions when anyone can do the same.\n\nThe use of facial coding systems in the classroom wouldnt be needed as their most likely uneccessary. The cost of one of these sytems would not be cheap, both students and teachers would be better off communicating. So whenever s student is confused they may ask a question or the teacher could ask the class if they understand. As in paragraph 4 the author states that facial expressions are universal, meaning there should be no confusion in understanding the students' feelings toward the work.\n\nClassrooms may not be in need of the facial coding systems but other professions could use its help. Having established how redundant and uneccessary this sytem would be in a classroom system doesnt mean humans make them useless. Animators or special effect designers would greatly benefit from this technology as their audiance appreciates the amount of detail and emotion that can be put into a character that may not even be human.They would also be able to more easily acheive the desired emotion by how accurate the system is by using 44 muscles in the face.\n\nFacial Action Coding System's technology is a very good technological advancement able to accuralty read a pseron's emotions. Although this a great new technology it doesnt belong in a classroom because the majority of people have no problems reading other's emotions, and if there is any confussion communication can clear things up better rather than just a face scan. It can be used more effectivly in an animation or special effects proffession in order to get a desired expression with great precision.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article they talk about the challenges of going to Venus.Some of the challenges are the heat and the pressure and acid in the atmosphere that brakes down metals.I feel that it is woth the risk because if we want to understand the uinevers we need to know everthing about the planets around us.If we cant even know what the cloest planet to us surfes looks like then how will we fiuger out what a planet 200 light years away looks like.In the articel they talk about how we can live 30 miles off the ground of venus in the clouds it is the most earth like part of the planet.If we go back to venus we can better understand how some planets were like earth a very long time ago.If we can unerstand this it will help us find more earth like parts of planets that are far away.Going back can also help us make new hardware for new space flights and deepspcae flights.In conclusion venus might have some challenges keeping us from getting to the ground llike the heat and acid rain and pressure but I feel that it is worth the risk to go back to better help us understand space.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Personally, I can see why society would look against this. I like the idea of bringing this technology into a classroom because it can help a teacher find out when a student is confused while doing activites during school hours. I think this software should only be used for school purposes though. Sometimes teenagers or in this case students, hide their feelings or emotions on purpose. So, this software can make a student really uncomfortable. So back to what I was saying, I think this type of software is helpful in some cases not all. I think the idea of a computer recognizing what our emotion is really cool and a very interesting topic. The fact that such technology can recognize our emotions and go into detail specifically is a well thought of idea. Personally I wouldn't really like the fact that a teacher would be able to tell what my emotion is real or not real. I just think that goes a little over the privacy stage. This type of software could be really expensive in my guess. It would probably cost a fortune! Dr. Huang talks about how this type of software could modify a lesson by a computer telling if we are confused or bored. I can see why Dr. Huang would think that this software could be benefical but I don't think such material should be presented to the students. What if that specific student is going through a hard time and doesn't want others to know? I feel like this argument could go either way and it should.This idea that is presented by Dr. Huang is a really good idea, but personally I just think it's too much.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is crucial to consider the impact that many advertisements from different business competitors have on their customers. This essay will explore some of the issues which have resulted from this effect and propose measures that might address them.\n\nFirstly, one concern about using advertising is that people are tricked into buying things that are not necessary for them. This is beacause they are enticed to catch up with the latest trends, especially from celebrities they have been following. As a result, people squander their hard-earned money, which should have beenpoured into their long-term financial investments, on extravagant commodities. To tackle issue, goverenmets should educate their people aboute the essence of living below their means. In doing so, people will ensure not only do they have a wealthy and perennial future, but they also contribute to reducing waste.\n\nSecondly, another significant issue associated with advertisements is the risk of misled harmful products. The reason for this is that, nowadays, there are a lot of companies which merely chae their benefits recklessly. These businesses try to get their customers to buy their products as much as possible without considering the future repercussions that may occur, which is a real danger in the context of medical supplies. For instance, people could perish due to misusing drugs, but televisions and newspapers today are saturated with abundant strength-boosting pills. This problem could be mitigated by tightening the advertisement regulations to ensure many noxious ads are filtered before they reach and customers.\n\nIn conclusion, advertisements competing businesses have created two problem which are extravagance and detrimental products. However, these issues could be minimized if governments invest effort in improving citizens' knowledge and stiffening advertising regulations.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A lot of arguments can be made after reading the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\". It is actually a very interesting article to read.\n\nA lot of people would actually like the idea of having self driving cars.\n\nMe on the oher hand, not so much.\n\nI completely disagree with the idea of having driverless cars on our roads.\n\nHaving self driving cars seem cool as it is, but they can pose many dangerious threats and safety concerns.\n\nFirst, there's always the possibility of the cars malfunctioning at one point.\n\nThe article says that the cars can accelerate and brake by themselves, but what if that didn't happen because something with the car went wrong?\n\nIt can put\n\ncivilians lives in danger if that were to happen.\n\nSecondly, when the driver is waiting for his or her turn to take control of the car, they could really get bored and lose focus on the road.\n\nSo when the car alerts the driver to take control of the car when the driver isn't paying attention, it could lead to a minor or severe accident.\n\nI know the article said they can put on some sort of entertainment to make sure the driver doesn't become bored, but there's still a possibility of that malfunctioning as well.\n\nIn conclusion, I really disagree with the idea of having driverless cars.\n\nThe idea may seem to captivate many peoples interest, but there are too many risks that come with this idea.\n\nSo to limit the amount of future possible accidents, I would say it's best for our safety to just leave cars the way they are now.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hi my name is Luke and you look like a man that would want to join the Seagoing Cowboys group.\n\nWhy to join, you ask? We travel around the world and here we have a place everyone no matter how big or small you are.\n\nWe travel from Europe to China to alll sorts of places.\n\nWhen we get the time we play baseball and volleyball games.\n\nThis will be the adventure of a lifetime.\n\nWe help the countries that need our help.\n\nMost countries that needed our help were mosly in Europe atfer Wolrd War II.\n\nWe also helped after the Pacific war ended in the United States.\n\nWith you by our side we can accomplish more and more, little by little.\n\nWe individually can work day shifts and night shifts.\n\nWe nurse and take care of animals.\n\nThis is your once in a lifetime oppurtonity to join the Seagoing Cowboys.\n\nSo we firmly ask you to join the Seagoing Cowboys.\n\nWe hope to see you come.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is it not a driveless car severily a lot dangerous than a regular car. I believe that a person might or will lose control of the car. My point is that Google cars might cause more deaths, injuries and crashes.\n\nWhen i say there will be more imjuries is that a person might lose control of his/her car. If there is an accident involving the companies car. It's obvious that the driver will be at fault. My point here is that its actually the companies fault because they didnt constructed a more safer car. Plus, when people smoke or use his/her phone it might cause and accident.\n\nIt will also, be dangerous when a teenager drivers. Those kids will drive while they are drunk and wont even notice that the car stopped driving. When teenagers or probably even adults don't like to listen to nobody. What if they dont put their sit-belt on and they don't have any idea that the car stopped driving what will happen to them. Google cars are the same as regular cars only because Google cars are smarter does not mean they wont cause accidents.\n\nImagine a Google car actually causing more deaths than we already have. We can't have that happening. Many family wouldn't want their kid or grandson dead. Maybe im over exagerating or maybe i'm not. We all want the car accidents to stop, but in reality we are not.\n\nIn conclusion, the company should re-work on the car and make it ten times better than it is now. We want to feel like our kids from the future will not die on a car accident or cause someone else's death.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The image of the head that you see here is not made by aliens. The face is just a natural landfrom. 25 years ago, when NASA's Viking spacecraft was circling a planet snapping photos of its sister ship Viking 2. They spotted a shadowy likeness of a human face. \"An enormous head nearly two miles from end to end seemed to be staring back at the cameras from a region of the Red Planet called Cydonia\", as the passage states.\n\nDays later NASA gave the image to the world so we can all see. As, you see the caption gives a description of what the \"huge rock formation\" looks like. It resembles a human head fromed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth. I really dont think an alien knows what we look like and how to put all our facial features at the right place. Even some scientist think that it was an alien but scientist can be wrong at times.\n\nSome people would probably say that the aliens made this picture so they can get the attention or make people laugh. Or they really think its aliens which is your opinion. But, as you see the face was coming to form in 1976 to 2001. It took years to making it happen so I woulg think it was years of dust to form this kind of face. NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars. So, there was probably a person who died on mars and his head is there and dust is forming on top of it. It was a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet so over the years it could have gotten all the coudy dusty air and built up.\n\nI really dont think this is an alien I feel like its a natural landform. Now, What's your comeback?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I agree with a Facial Action Coding System that is used to identify human emotions.\"The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles.\" With a facial action coding system you could change and make the world a better place,you could get law enforcement to invest in facial action coding system's. \"Eckman,has classified six basic emotions- happiness,surprise,anger,disgust,fear, and sadness-and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles.\" Using this type of technology can actually help a lot,you can stop teen suicides from happening,you can stop school shootings from happening...But what I mean by that is you can help the person out that's feeling grieving,depressed and mad by talking to them about their problems or maybe what's going on at home or anywhere else, you can scan that persons face and see what emotions they're feeling. Overall, I think that this could show people what technology really is about and how we can inspire kidsto do the same,it could keep kids out of trouble and give them motovation to do good things in their community or around the world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Not being able to focus on class is one of the main concerns in the early-age learning journey. From educational perspectives, there are two main reasons which are the mismatched learning styles, and long-term exposure to poor nutrition and lack of sleep. \n\nFirstly, it is irrefutable that we all learn differently, and so do children. Some learn best by seeing, hearing or doing. Therefore, if the teachers only emphasize a specific learning style and apply it to all the children, this can result in a lack of focus and understanding. In this case, the solution is to ask the teachers to observe what are the options that they can choose to engage children in their learning experiences. For example, inquiry-based learning projects can be planned and adapted to search for the right methods. \n\nSecondly, it is sad to state, but, indeed, children cannot focus on their studies simply because they do not get enough sleep or nutrition. In fact, there are circumstances where many children do not have enough recommended sleeping hours or have to skip breakfast to be on time. Consequently, these children do not have energy and become distracted in class. As adults, we need to take our steps to reduce the numbers of children who have physical disadvantages. Government, schools and families have to work together to build up better schedules so children can have more time to sleep. Besides, they also must have free-food programs for poor children to make sure they are full when they study. \n\nIn conclusion, there are many reasons which could lead to the failure of paying attention in the classroom. However, from my perspective, mismatched learning styles and lack of nutrition and sleep are the main causes. Together with families, governments and schools have to work on their policies in teaching methods and free-food programs to support children more.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should join the Seagoing Cowboys program because you can be helpful and save lives. While you are helping to save lives you also can be having fun. You would be helping people because sometimes there are natural disasters like hurricanes, tornados, tsunamis, volcano eruptions, and many more. Also, you would be able to help people after wars ended. You can help people that have these problems by bringing them food, water, building materials, and other items that they need for daily living. Helping someone always feels fantastic beause you know that you did the right thing.\n\nBeing over sea for so long with other people would mean that you would most likely end up being friends. With everybody being friends you would be able to have so much fun. Being over sea with a bunch of friends means that you would be really entertained. This would be enteraining because you could keep yourselves entertained by playing table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games. All of these would pass time. Also, if you have never been on a boat before then you would be able to experience something new! You could argue that being oversea would be to dangerous but here's why your wrong, you would be on a boat that always has someone watching for danger so you would be safe.\n\nJoining the Seagoing Cowboys program would also be very adventurious. You would get to see new places while doing something good for the world. Have you ever wanted to go across the Atlantic Ocean or the Pacific Ocean? If so then you would be able to take a boat across it if you participated in this. So, you should take part in the Seagoing Cowboys program.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever imagined a driverless car? Google cofounder Sergey Brin \"envisions a future with a public transportation system where fleets of driverless cars form a public-transport taxi system.\" I believe that driverless cars are an intellectual idea. Not only do they help prevent crashes, but they also use half as much gas as taxis.\n\nThe Google self driving cars have driven over half a million miles without a single crash. These cars have been around since 2009. Although they are not completely driverless, they are still safer than regular cars. The author states, \"they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents.\" As long as the driver is being attentive, this is a safe way to go. They can also help those who try to text and drive. The author shows this by saying, \"Such displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over—something not available to drivers trying to text with a cell phone. In this way, the in-car system is actually a safety feature, and safety is a big concern.\" If the driver happens to be texting while in a normal car, they will not know when to pay attention to the road. They could be so distracted by their phone that they do not see upcoming traffic. In this situation, the driver could crash into the car in front of them. If they had been driving a driverless car, then the driver would have been alerted of the upcoming traffic, preventing the accident from occuring. These cars are also safer for the environment. The author also states, \"The cars he [Brin] foresees would use half the fuel of today’s taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus.\" These cars would require half of the amount of gas taxis use today. They would also be ready to pick you up whenever it is needed, unlike a bus.\n\nBy the year 2020, you could be riding in a driverless car. Accident rates would decrease tremendously. You would also save a great amount of money that used to be put towards gas for your car. The environment would be cleaner and healthier. Driverless cars are a great idea.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Here are some reasons why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys, You get to visit many places like Greece, Europe, and China. People would also have a fun and relaxing time on the boat. Luke found time time to have fun on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. Cowboys got to play baseball,volleyball games, They also did Table tennis turnoments, writing, fencing,boxing,reading and whittling. It was more than an adventure for Luke too It opened up the world for him. ''It made me aware of people and other contries and their needs.''Luke said. That awarness stayed with him too. It took about two weeks to get there but it will be a very fun trip to go to snd relax,play games and do many fun things like visiting places you have never been to before like,, Anceint Greece, the tempels there and many more fantatic places that you would enjoy plus there is things to do before you get there. You have read about Seagoing Cowboys this was mainley about Luke and what he did it would be a very fun exoeriment too. He does many things before he gets to get across the Atlantic Ocean but it was worth it it would be fun for family and friends “The cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy,” he says. What helps you though before you go you can help yourself by gelping out around a farm becuase there are many animals on board you can prepare yourself for hard work with the animals. You watch the animals clean the animals, and feed the animals too. But you do have to watch out becuase when it gets dark and you cant see when the waves pick up it will push you around and so Luke broke one of his rib cages becuase he was being pushed around so he couldn' work and help out at all.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever thought what a student's emotions are accordding to their facial expression? Apparently, a computer can using FACS ( Facial Action Coding System ). But, some wonder; how is it useful using this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom valuable?\n\nA computer software that can recognize someone's reaction( the FACS ) has been used on Leonardo Da Vinci's Renaissance painting, Mona Lisa. Dr. Paul Eckman,creator of FACS ( Facial Action Coding System), has classified six basic emotions- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. The software uses all 44 major muscles to move human-like muscles in the computer. From there it calculates the percentage of the the person's emotions.\n\nNow will this technoloy be valuable? I, myself, honestly don't see a use of Facial Action Coding System in a classroom, but instead in a nurse or counsiler, or even a school therapist. Some adults need to know a student's emotions for help. A student could be down, but doesn't want to show it or talk about. That's were the FACS comes in to detect the student's emotion and probably saving a student's life. The machine and therapist can also be able to diagnose students with depression, bipolar disorders, etc.\n\nIn conclusion, there is value in using this technology, the Facial Action Coding System, to read students' emotional expressions. Afterall, the machines are saving lifes.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Based excerpt builders Empire State Building faced many problems trying allow dirigibles dock mask One obstacle involved dropping A mooring mask top Empire State Building s flat roof paragraph If done mask would added great amount stress building s foundation As result steel frame Empire State Building would modified strengthened costly Another obstacle use hydrogen rather helium foreign dirigibles Hydrogen highly flammable gas dirigible accidently caught fire great amount damage could caused However greatest obstacle involved harsh wind current top Empire State Building Even dirigible Tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around around paragraph The use lead weights anchor dirigible dangling high pedestrians street neither practical safe paragraph In conclusion building mast Empire State Building architects builders faced many obstaclesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is logically impossible for aliens to create what we call The Face. Although we do not know if such life forms exist, it still could not happen. It would take hundreds, or even thousands of lightyears to travel to the Milkyway galaxy. Extra-terrestrials would most likely have the same life-span as us, or slighty shorter/longer. So they probably couldn't survive the whole trip to our galaxy.\n\nEven though no one knows how The Face was made, there are some more possible explanations. Strong winds could have eroded the surface of Mars and carried its contents to another location miles away from where they originally were.\n\nSome lighter winds could have made indents on the flat part, giving it \"facial features.\"\n\nWe have no evidence that truly proves that aliens are real. Many pictures that people show of their \"encounter\" just for attention. Others are just hoaxes. On the other hand, we were not there with those people to know that it wasn't true. Yet the lack of evidence says that they don't exist.\n\nHow would aliens even know what a human face looks like? They probably would have no idea (if they existed, that is). In the passage it says that The Face resembles an Egyptian pharoh. I don't think that aliens could understand what that was and leave an imprint on Mars that resembles a pharoh.\n\nWhat kind of technology would they be using? A large laser? Technology/weapons that advanced don't exist yet, so it could not happen. It would most likely take a very long time since it is nearly two miles long. To be honest, I don't think anyone would have the patience to do that. Not even aliens. It could take months or possibly a year, depending on how detailed it is.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear newspaper I hear people use computers I think thats awesome people talk online people teach use computer It gives people ability learn faraway places people Computers advanced technology people using I love computer day I always enter talk online example people like talk family member communicate computer Sometimes I talk online cousin I years I dont see So I think talk online using computer important example even grandma talks online family members I think using computer bad benefit helps communication family friends That I think people wrong saying Secondly teach handeye coordination grandma old computer example grandma nice hand eye coordination goes letters ress correct think computers effect people It helps people write better better example I love write I dont need go I write king helps eye hand helps find faraway places people example find ever street want It help find computer people example I project I find information people places The computer really helpful could find pictures places information people I think positive effect people Finally I think computers great benefits society One reason could talk online people teach handeye helps brain sight It helps hand movements reason give people ability learn faraway places people example I project I learn search forensic doctor I search everything computer I think computers help brain think computers advanced technology So I think benefits societySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today s age computers seen everywhere helpful They act information highway connect people together The new advances technology positive effect humans First computers easy way universe information fingertips students say assigned paper project first source use internet The internet fast simple reliable know use said student Children age learning use internets multiple online encyclopidias amagazines newssites resources get information I remember kindergarden computer class d reserch dinnosaurs weather patterns kid friendly websites And middle school use websites like Online date reliable information Moreover I ve seen mom nurse hospital manager use internet videos articles certian procederes ways orginnaize productive hospital The internet great way highway information touch button Furthermore computers used way people stay touch teenagers say talk peers using Its great way us communicate busy schedules ca nt always get together Also parents losing jobs ecconomic downfall kids always moving Last one best friends world moved way I though d never talk I upset say goodbye talk nonstop accually never closer And young people fool around friends adults use social network They connect buissness internet talk future deals problems even use connect old friends nt spoken since college childhood As see internet many positive effects reserch faster connecting old friends computers ar helping everyoneSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think features affect cyclist write bycles need conSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\" The Challenge of Exploring Venus\"\n\nThe author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it presents. The author did a good job this story is pretty intresting. It got my full attention. i belive that there will be a way for human to land on Venus without harm.\n\nVenus is the second plant from the sun.It is also referred to as the Earth's\"twin\".\n\nIt is proven that it is difficult to examine more of the planet. Sometimes we get close to mars and other times to Venus. This is why human have tried t land in Venus because we are close to the planet. In ome way the landing of the spacecraft has only survied fro only a few hours. the austonuts have to come up with a type of metal or use bibranium to make the shuttle suitable for landings.\n\nSInce the atmosphere is think and its a 97 percent of carbon dioxide they NASA workers also have to come up eith a suit that will resist that pressure and the gas of carbon dioxide so the humans have axcess to explore the planet more to the fullest. In paragraph 5 in the last part it says that it IS survivable for humans so the author has done a good job with his ideas.\n\nThe author has many great ideas for trying to come up with good ideas but they could also try to improve the techolagy in which it could help them reach their goal. That way they would be able to get the information that they want and need to know exactly if it is suitable for humans to live and so many other reason. In paragrap 8 says that \" our travels on Earth and beyond should not be LIMITED by dangers but should be expanded to meet the very edgesof imagination and innovation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The settings story affected cyclist throughout story winding roads hills peddling already tough tiring challenging rider little know way roads ten times harder deal And landmarks places insight hard confidence theire nothing keep goingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph show saeng give test example says I take test again It shows wants take test pass Saeng going wait spring comes snow melts take test In beginning box talks taking test Then ends going take testSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "CAPS days diamonds days stone famous melodic words He absolutely right day stony day It began I woke late stayed eleven oclock night order finish homework As I hurriedly pulled sweater head I ran downstairs door school Running dreary gray clouds I suddenly remembered geometry test scheduled today By seventh period geometry class sleep deprivation kicking head pounding Of course day decided cheat test As eyes swept paper third time I sighed stared pointedly paper I simply shifted seat could see test I wanted get point however seemed think I cheating I took reprimands silently went locker After collecting belongings I turned go home A loud ripping noise caught attention I realized groan I torn sweater corner locker Without acknowledging stares peers I turned ran pouring rain Once I reached quiet road I could contain With face turned towards stony sky I shouted I throat felt like sandpaper I never sort emotional breakdown feeling strange alien I hoped one would ever see like I transformed stranger hurt lost Following explosion I trudged slowly home entered house find sister begging macaroni cheese I sighed put pot water stove Maybe cruel fate possibly stupidity either way I ended half pot steaming water spilled front body Granted hot I put stove I could sit cold kitchen floor put head hands cry My sobs sounded like frog croaking I looked suddenly however I felt small hand tapping shoulder CAPS asked tentavely CAPS dog say cat I stared leaking eyes CAPS catastrophe answered A small smile set pink lips started giggling Then I started giggling led uncontrollable laughter It ridiculously humorless joke laughter felt like cold water running painful burns day forced upon There sat giggling little girl messy laughing teenager sitting kitchen floor grey day One little joke one fit laughter transformed entirely stoney day perfect little diamondSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]