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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You may have heard of the \"Evening Star\", but this is actually a planet. Venus has been studied for many years. But becausse of the extreme temperatures, high pressures, and many more dangers, it has kept us from knowing more about it. The author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers, very well.\n\nFirst of all, the author gives details of how Venus is similar to Earth. In Paragraph 2, the author states, \"Often referred to as Earth's 'twin,' Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too.\" Later in Paragraph 4, the author goes on to say, \"Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" These both show that Venus is a worthy pursuit. Since Venus is so close and similar to Earth, this could potentially be a new planet that could substain life. This shows how the author is well supporting that Venus could be worthy despite the dangers by showing a benefit of studying it. In Paragraph 8, the author develops that same idea even better. They stated, \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likey lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" This shows that the author thinks that knowledge and new insight can be gained by pursuing Venus. The author also shows how researchers need to get up and close to Venus. Paragrpah 6 says that peering form a ships or hoveing the planet cannot give full insight on ground conditions because light cannot penetrate through the dense atmosphere. Researchers are also not able to get samples of sediments from the ground of they are up above. This goes to show that the author thinks missions and studies made on the ground should be done. That demonstrates how well the author is supporting his/her belief that Venus is a worhty pursuit by demonstrating all the benefits that come from studying the planet.\n\nIn conclusion, the author supports the idea that studying venus is a worhty pursuit very well, by showing earth and Venus are similar, and showing the knowledge we would gain from it. By showing how Earth and Venus are similar, this is suggesting that Venus could have advancements and substain life like Earth. Both of these are great advancements to humans and therefore supports the author's idea that studying Venus is worhty despite its' dangers.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You say the mountan on mars was put there by aliens? First of all you can see the picture clearly a mountan. You think a strange looking mountan on mars was atimaticly put there by aliens?\n\nEven if this is true, how do you exsplain the mountans on earth. Did aliens put those there no. Do you know who did? God did thats who.\n\nGod made each and every planet by hand. God made us with the ability to do things like this and he has acounted for all the changes we have mat to the planet.\n\nYes it dose look like a face. God has a sence of humer and he probibly put that there to make you freak out about aliens.\n\nThis is why I think you are wrong. It may very well be a alien artifact but it is very unlikley. But please feel free to tell me your reasoning behind why you think it is aliens.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College is outdated, unfair, and irrational and should be motifyed and uptated so it is more fair to voters and the rest of the citizens.\n\nThe Founding Fathers created it during the Constitution as a compromise. This meaning it was made and disigned for when it was needed. It did help the way presidents were voted for then,but its not suted for the population and other ways it has changed and is different in this time period. Over 60% of voters would prefer a new and direct election rather than the system that we have now.\n\nUnder the Electoral College we the people vote for electors, anyone not holding public office, who are chosen depending of the state by either state conventions, state party's central committee, or presidential canidates themselves. While voters are supposed to control who the electer votes for, sometimes they can make a mistake and vote for the wrong canidate. Its not very ofthen that mistakes like these happen, but they do occur. If a mistake like this was to happen the wrong canidate would be voted for that the people didn't choose, resulting in the posibility that a canidate we didnt vote for could and has the possibility if winning.\n\nSomething simmailar to this that happened back in 1960 was the biggest election crisis of the century. Segregationists, who favored separation based on race, in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors who opposed John F. Kennedy so the popular vote would not have been given to Kennedy and he would noyhave won.\n\nIn defense of the Electoral College it was very helpful when it was needed at fisrt, but now it's in the wrong time period. It exceeded Obama's share of the popular vote when he received a 61.7% of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 perecent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney in 2012.\n\nIn conclusion the Electoral College should beb changed so we have a new and improved way for the people to vote fairly for who they want.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the chalenge of Exploring Vemus, the author suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the it represent. Because Venus Is the brithtest planet in the night time Venus is the second planet, It Is the closes planet in Earth in term of density and size, and closest in distance too. EArth Mars and Venus, our other closest planetary neighbor,orbit sun diffrent speeds.Sotime we are closer to Mars some other time we closer to venus.vaenus is the hotes planet each prevouis mission was unmanned, no spacraft survived the landing for more than a few hours, naot a single spaceship has touched down.\n\nAt thirthy-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would stil toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but ait pressure would be close to that level on heart. solar power would be plantiful, and radiation would not exceed earth levels.\n\nIn the chalen of explorin Venus many reseachers are working on innovatation that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to there work of knoledge of Venus and by usingme chanical computer.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electorial Collage is the establishment of letting congress vote on whom the president should be with the addition of who the individuals of America elected. Though the Electorial College is not fair for individuals because, who they have elected are not really being accounted because congress takes vote determining who the next president would be. The change from the Electorial College would be more favorable by the citzens in Florida even in the country because it gives more of a comfort knowing that the election is a 50/50.\n\nIn the state of Florida there are many retiries and elders who have moved from all over the country to join our warm weather, many of them have a lot of political views on the leader of our country so it would be best if they had the chioce and knowledge of knowing that their votes would be accounted for, they would not having to worry if it would be fair or not. Though there are also some retiries that do not care at all about any of this mumbo jumbo and would rather just relax in the sun. Though if there wasn't election based on popularity then the elders would not have the benefits they would like such as more retirement funds, or better health care benefits.\n\nElection by popularity should especially be approved in all states because each states should have the abitlity to vote for who they want instead of living in hope for who they they want to win. Also the small states may be outruled by the votes from larger states such as California, Florida and Texas. The \"winner take all\" system isn't really a reliable way to determine the leader of our nation.\n\nBack in 2000 there was a disaster factor which involved the Electorial College and it is known to be one of the biggest election crisis of the century which shot hate to the democratic electors because John F. Kennedy was opposed by the electors but he still won by popular vote. The Electoril;a Collge is very confusing because the time being wasted to elect a president is rather lost waiting in line to just check down a name on a piece of paper.\n\nMany states have yet to make it on the list of votes so it is very unfair and outdated to be using in the time that we live in. It can be arugued on if the Electorial College should stay or go. It's more favorable if it was abolished.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The introduction of the venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger is because itis nearest by the sun and venus can covered the largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life. venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size sometime Venus is right around the corner is space terms.\n\nThe planets surface temperature average over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmosperic pressure is 90 time greater than what e experience on our own plant. the venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solor system if the venus is closet to the sun it gonna be reallly hot for the world.\n\nThe conclusion, the planet of the solor system our travels on earth and beyond shoukd not be limited by danger and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of the imagination and innovation sometime its gonna be danger by the planet and sometime its gonna other thing.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article the challege of exploring Venus. The author provides a claim and a counter claim to his article on why Venus should be explored. The author brings up many good points in his claim and couterclaim on the pro's and con's of inhabiting venus. Overall the author is for exploring and inhabiting Venus he brings up many good points and ways why and how we should explore Venus. Venus would a very dangrous place bur could open oppurtunities and new homes for people.\n\nVenus is a very hot planet that has extreme presssure. Under these circumstances it may seem unhabatible and very dangerous, overall the author brings up a point on how nasa is finding a way to make it safe for people. \"NASAs possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray.\"\"Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape.\"\"Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way.\"\" At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth.\"Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels.\"\"Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" NASA provides a way of living on nasa with blimps that would stay away from the clouds and the storms, and the extreme heat. These conditions would not be the greatest but they would work and could be a way people live on Venus.\n\nA issue concerning Venus is its extreme heat destroring are modern electronics and making them unusable after a certain peroid. But the author provides a way that NASA is using to to use computers under such circumstances they provide that we we can use computers in Venus and that is by using old computers form the 40's and using silicon carbide.\"For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venuss surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\"\"Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers. These devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War II.\"\"The thought of computers existing in those days may sound shocking, but these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all.\" Using these types of technology can be used in Venus and can still provide calculations for people. If NASA works harder on the silicon carbide they can provide a much better piece of technolgy thst can work faster and survive longer on Venus so modern tech could still be used on Venus.\n\nIn conclusion habatating Venus would be a rough and long process of making the right equipment, maken the travel and carring so much needed for the journey all ways this process is very dangeorous to the workers and a very long journey. But overall Scientist are looking for planets to habitate and Venus could a choice down the road. The journey would be rough but is should not scare us and make us think the journey is to hard. Putting people on venus would be amazing and could open up other oppurtunities down the road that could make us do the unimagnible.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I hate weddings I love people get married I hate ceremonies Theyre boring Especially long weddings take like two hours people standing nothing Im patient person thats probably I hate long wedding Now one long story patience Do go I moaned mother CAPS wedding its important CAPS I surrender I put new dress got car The wedding wapin It usually takes hour get time Our family quarter way gets major traffic jam CAPS sister yelled I kept quiet Finally traffic jam cleared dramatic event shot The road go closed So much taking short way We entered town next When got call grandma CAPS mom answered CAPS The ceremony ended CAPS Thats bad Were Has reception yet CAPS Im sure youll make time CAPS Thats good CAPS reached reception I happy even I hate weddings CAPS mom asked arrvied home CAPS I asked I guess I even car ride kind CAPS You tend patient type CAPS I said I proudSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think people should join the Seagoing Cowboys. You get to do so many amazing things. I have a lot of fun doing it myself and I think everyone else can too! I have had great new adventures in this program. I think people should join the Seagoing Cowboys because it helps out others (including animals), you get to go new places with new people, and because it is a great opportunity.\n\nMy first reason on why people should join the Seagoing Cowboys is because it can help out people in need.\"UNRRA hired \"Seagoing Cowboys\" to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas.\" That is one example that the program lets us help, not only just the people but also the animals too. I also found \"They got their seaman's papers and boarded the SS Charles W. Wooster, headed for Greece- with a cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them.\" That is one reason why people should join this program.\n\nAnother reason people should join this program is because you get to go new places in the world, for example I went to Greece! \"Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China.\" Also another piece of evidence is \"So was taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy; a city with streets of water.\" This is another example of why new people should join the Seagoing Cowboys.\n\nAn example is because it is a great opportunity for people. You get to do so many new things with new people. \" But being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger.\" Being a Seagoing Cowboy is an eye opening experience for me. I also found in the text is states\n\n\"It opened the world to him. \"I'm grateful for the opportunity,\" he says.\" This program is a great experience and adventure. I know I couldn't pass down the opportunity once it was handed to me. The article says \"Luke couldn't say no. He knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime.\"\n\nThese are just a couple reasons why I think people should join the Seagoing Cowboys. It can help others and animals. It is a great time you will have with people and with all the new places you can see and explore. I had fun with this program and I think a lot of otherr people can too. So once again this is why I think people should join the Seagoing Cowboys.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Earning a high paycheck, in this contemporary era, is a dream of everyone. It is believed by a few individuals that leaders of big giant companies have high income unlike other employees, which is quintessential while others assert that it is unjustifiable.This essay will discuss not only both views, but also reasons to justify the former view as more fruitful. \n\nCommencing with pre-eminent favourable aspects of maximum earnings of higher management in an organisation. The first tenable etiology is that salary is decided on the basis as the higher authority is responsible to set the vision and take crucial decisions. As top-tier officials not only possess the talent to work on visionary tasks such as managing different projects, hiring the right candidate, but also show the greatest contribution to run the company, by dint of which higher salaries are bestowed to them by the authority. In I.T companies, for instance, 90% of directors are achieving extremely high salaries because they have remarkable qualities to make it done; Therefore, owing to the pivotal role in a firm , it is imperative to impart high wages to chief executives. \n\nOn the other hand, certain people think that it is not justifiable to provide a 10 times higher salary to the manager, senior officials. The main reason for this thought is the employee's mindset. In other words, a regular professional, who works much harder and even do extra hours for the success of the organization, feels demotivated as they do not obtain higher salaries. \n\nIn conclusion, albeit a regular employee feels demotivated by seeing the disparity in salary structure, top-level employees possess unique qualities to run the company smoothly, which is essential to be successful in the market.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story show saeng wont give It possible adapt try love whats around Saeng struggled get II failed test couldnt say at home shows insecurity lonleiness new world around saying try spring gives reader hope adapt love surroundings She goes expirence today old life comparing one living simalarities try spring means decided go give new place chanceSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author's idea of studying Venus is dangerous. Despite the dangers and conditions of Venus, his idea of sending people close by Venus to study and collect data about the planet is very important for the study of space. But it could be capable to learn just more about Venus in short range of the planet orbit.\n\nVenus was referred as Earth \"twin\" because the proximity between Earth and Venus are near. In paragraph 2, scientist found evidence that Venus was once can support of life just like Earth. There were some features in the planet surface that can recognize as Earth such as \"valleys, mountains, and craters\". That is why the author wants to know more of Venus, to study and learn how Venuse used to be like from before.(Paragraph 2)\n\nThe idea of studying Venus from the inside through it's atmosphere is very dangerous, because, in the present, Venus \"thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide,\" it's tempature of \"over 800 degrees Faherenheit,\" and the great atpomspheric presure that is greater than Earth, isn't capable for a high tech machine as NASA's rover cannot undergo those conditions. If it did, it would crushed in to a flat or squeshed object, and the metal that is made would liquidfy because of the high heat of Venus. (paragraph 4)\n\nThose are the risk and dangours that scientists and engineers have to know to cunstruct and find a machine that is capable to go into the harsh eviornment of Venus. NASA idea of sending people to study could be possible. In paragraph 5, \"NASA's possible solution to hostle conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray.\" In other words, NASA's solution of instead of sending aircrafts to Venus, they'll send them into Venus orbit, just float on top of the cloads. That is a good idea, but that dosen't allow scientists to collect samples from the surface of the planet. Scientist from NASA is working on materials to make electronics and testing it in a simulation of Venus conditions that \"lasted for three weeks,\" this silicon type material can help on a development on creating a more resistant towards Venus's condition. Working an a secound project, in paragraph 7, scientist try to find a way to turn delicate mordern computers to machines that is \"made more to pressure, heat, and other forces,\" like the divices that were used on the 1940s during World War ll.\n\nWith those ideas, NASA could actually create a divice that can withstand Venus conditions in a long-period of time. The author idea of sending people to Venus could be posible. In if they did, scientist who study Venus with the new divices, they could find than just more astonishing information about Venus, but creating hope for doing the imposible and new technolgy that people around the world can use and find new solutions for doing the impossible, like studying Venus.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I feel shouldnt removed due fact somebody else like movie book music magazine Just becuase might like doesnt mean somebodyout Everything shuld library becuase different people everybody like things The library suppose everything declared take something shelf becuase due fact one couple people dont like something whats displayed people wouldnt right I library looking movie book like want see got mad So ifeel s right fair Everybody right ever read like watch Even though certain books movies chidren touch still feel shouldnt remove anything th shelvesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea that team sports at school are the best way to teach children to cooperate is widely supported. I strongly agree with this view, as team sports, such as basketball and futsal, require players to collaborate and suppress their egos.\r\n\r\nThrough team sports, students learn how to play for their team and improve their ability to understand other players. To win, players must cooperate with one another, and this is not possible if they do not trust each other. For example, in basketball, each player has a unique position and responsibility, and they must support each other to score. They cannot play for themselves if they want to beat their opponents. This approach teaches children to collaborate and work with others, skills that they can apply in other settings, such as schoolwork, work, and building their own business.\r\n\r\nAdditionally, team sports help to reduce children's tendency to focus solely on themselves, a characteristic that is common among young people. In team sports, they must abandon the idea of being the best and focus on the team's goal. For example, if the target is to win a futsal tournament, they must stick to their strategy, which every member of the team must follow. This approach fosters unity and helps children learn to cooperate effectively.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, participating in sports that require more than one person to play is an effective way to build children's collaboration skills. They learn unconsciously how to work as part of a team and how to use their skills to support their teammates. Furthermore, playing team sports makes children happier because of the production of dopamine during the game, making them more receptive to learning cooperation skills.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" pesents a positive and negative aspect about cars in the future. I would choose the negative aspect because having driverless cars by 2020 would be a bad example for teenagers and younger children. Maybe some people would want good looking car, while other people can't afford a driveless car at all. This going to make the driver be on their phone more often and could maybe cause an accident for not taking control of the wheel. In some states diverless cars are illegal to be tested. Most laws are going to change because diverless cars coming soon. It is best to have a better future for our kids than to think about to much technology in this world.\n\nA lot of young adults are going to start driving at a young age and could possibily cause accidents. They might not even pay attention to the road because they think the car has it all in control for them no to look at all. This going to make them be more active on their phones or they might even fall asleep because they have a driveless car. If we have driverless cars by than it would more expensive for people to afford cars like that. People might have money to buy it but not many have enough money to repair the technology they have inside to drive by themselves. This is not a good idea for younger adults growing up seeing those drivless cars out in the streets.\n\nMost driverless cars are not always going to work the technology might fail. So we need to always pay attention to the road because we could cause an accident and don't know if to blame the car or the driver. Even if having sensors of when humans are approaching the car might stop working, so you always have to look out. Thats where the different laws come in and would probably affect a lot of people that can't afford a driveless car. Your going to need to take control of the car if your in a work road or by an accident that occured. In big states diverless cars are illegal because of there traffic and possibily their population. New laws might charge us more for those peopl that were in accidents because of these cars.\n\nHaving diverless cars around younger adults might cause a lot peoples death. Where families are going to start protesting and sewing the car companies. Laws are going to be forced to changed during the years of those cars. We need a better future for the kids not to make them cause any accidents. Thats how they could get in more trouble with the law inforcement. Diverless cars should be banned from young adults under 21.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because this helps the computers know the student's reactions of things. If the computers knows what the student's reaction is, this could help them give the students what they are interested in. By knowing a student's expression, you'll know how they're feeling about a certain lesson. The Facial Action Coding System will have a huge impact on the teachers too. The FACS can identify six basics emotions such as happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System will have a huge impact in the classrooms. If there was a classroom computer that could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, it could notify the lesson, like an effective human instructor. \" Most human communication is nonverbal,including emotional communtions,\"\n\nsays Dr.Huang. He is right because sometimes you don't exactly tell another person how you are really feeling. If the computers knows this, it would be way easier to identify another person's feelings. If a computer knows that you're smiling, it knows you are happy about what you're looking at and the next ad they will give you will be similar. If you frown, it shows that you're not interested, so then the computer will give you a different ad until you are pleased.\n\nIn conclusion, the use of the Facial Action Coding System to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. This will help impact not only the students but also the teachers. This technology will help benefit the students in their work. It helps identify what the student's interest is in and would make it easier for the teachers to give lessons. If there was a student who is not outspoken, the computer will help identify that student's emotions. Having this type of technology is very valuable of knowing what the student's emotional expressions are.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever thought about driverless cars, and how we could one day use them in the real world? Well, if you have they think one day in the future there will be driverless cars. My main thing is will people like it or will people want to drive them around? Honestly, I wouldn't pefer it because I think that driving regular cars are easier. What if something goes wrong with the car, or something then what are you going to do next? Well im going to explain some reasons why I don't really like the idea.\n\nFirst, if I were riding in a drvierless car i'd be so paranoid because I wouldn''t be use to being in a car with no one drving. I wouldn't want to have to worry all the time or think i'm going to crash or something. I think that it is doing to much if when you still have to take over when pulling in and out of driveways. Driving your own car that you drive is much easier I think because your so used to your car and you know you car so you could do it without any problems. if I were in a driverless car i'd probably freak out and jump out or something, but that is just how I feel about the driverless car.\n\nNext, I think that that other people might like driverless car because it seems like you can just sit back and relax while the car is driving. While your sitting you can get on your phone without looking at the road etc. Some people don't like driving all the time either. Some people might think that it's fun, they might think it's safe too because what they've seen. That was some of the reasons that I might think other people might like it.\n\nHowever this was about what I thought about driverless cars, but I still dont think i'd like them. Even though you wont have to drive that much and you can sit back and relax, i'd still be paranoid. Maybe in the future if I where to get in one and text it maybe i'd change my mind. Most people would say something totatally different then me, because of how much fun it sounds like. But, I still wouldn't think its safe.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is commonly believed, that companies should have dress code policy for the employees, whereas some people consider that the quality of employees' work is more important, than the appearance of the employees.\nI think there might be some advantages to have a dress code, but disadvantages overweight benefits in this case.\nFirst of all, dress code policy mandatory for some organisations' workers as it's part of the safety policy. For instance, workers of some scientific or technical labs should wear some specific dresses as their job is with the dangerous chemical elements. The absence of the protecting dress or some details, such as glasses or gloves, might be harmful for the employees. In this case, I believe to have harsh rules for the dress code, is essential.\nTurning to the drawbacks of the dress code, I would mention that it might be uncomfortable and as a result effect on the employees' work quality. For instance, some banks require female employees to wear heels' shoes or male employees to have a tie. This kind of dresses or dress' elements might be not comfortable for the employees and as a result to have a psychological negative impact, such as lack of attention or willingnes to work properly . This will lead to the decrease of the work quality.\nAnother drawback of the dress code, is standartisation, when all employees should wear the company uniform with company logo. In this case, employees do not have opportunity to show their unique appearance and identity as all employees have approximately the same appearance. This might have again it's negative impact on workers' perfomance.\nIn conclusion, there might be some benefits to have a dress code, but most of all I see drawbacks of this policy, as it might effect on the employees' work quality negatively. I recommend that, companies should consider employees opinion as well before puting into practice dress code policy.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Teenagers spend most of their time in school without any contact with real society, and many of them play video games after school. So some people believe that it is beneficial both for the community and teenagers if students are required to do community work in their free time. However, I strongly oppose this idea because I believe teenagers have plenty of better options for their spare time and their work quality can be questioned if they are required to do work after school.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, there are plenty of choices that are much better than community work. For instance, they can develop hobbies, read books, and participate in social activities. They can even do paid part-time jobs if they want to experience what work means. And if work is paid, it can be easily evaluated whether this work is more valuable than playing the piano at home. Unpaid jobs are less valuable than paid ones, and teenagers may even choose other valuable activities rather than paid jobs. In this case, it is hard to say community work is the best choice for teens' free time.\r\n\r\nSecondly, I doubt the quality of mandatory, after-school work from youngsters. I assume most of their work can not meet the standard of the community. To illustrate, homework is one of the things which are mandatory in juveniles' free time. With the apparent benefit and strict supervision, they still can not deliver their work on time. Community work which is far more difficult than homework won't be done to high standards accordingly. Thus required free work from juveniles can hardly help communities to reduce their workload.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, requiring students to participate in unpaid work after school is unwise because students have plenty of better options and the delivery can never meet the standard of the community. Alternatively, the community can open some part-time jobs for teens. In this way, teens will treat the work more seriously and, as a consequence, both will benefit more.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To be for or against the delelopment of driverless cars. There are multiple reasons to be for them but also multiple reasons to be against. Myslef i'm against the whole driverless car. In \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" it talks about the pros and cons of a driverless car.\n\nCons of the driverless cars are common sense you will nees a whole lot of sensors which cost a whole lot of money. The driver would still need to be on alert the whole time while driving. Another thing is what if the car just glitchs and there is not enough time for myself to stop. New laws will be coming some will be changing in case of an accident. What if the technology fails and someone is injured, who is a fault the driver or the manufacturer is the question.\n\nIn conclusion this is my opinion and my position on \"Diverless Cars Are Coming\". I just feel like it is a dangerest issue that the world does not need to worry about.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There thousands books libraries days years ago Books books anyone age able remove type book shelf Books music movies magazines mad interest people enjoy reading Authors publishers pentalized hard work achieved There many people world like different types books But book censorship inside story nt mean human enjoy story I enjoy reading stories romance I m sure censorship inside romance story I prefer romance stories every single romance story censorship libraries removed books shelves I would nt read type book Because I enjoy reading romance I find adults young adults reading romance stories people matureness act censorship It s best ruin stories adults young adults like read censorship inside stories There many people find interesting s based true story would want willing help person based situation Do nt take away chance authors succeed life Let young adults read everything interested I m sure many different people would upset censored stories eliminted shelves librariesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When little watching In junior high seeing kid squirt milk nose But approach high school years stifle giggles suppress outbursts laugh cry reasons ca nt hold back inevitable urge laugh Some say laughing best medicine unfortunately sister I case laughing got us trouble No matter many times lectured someone always found way back one s room purely nosy I remember back summers ago I d seen sister putting bag chocolate mattress There possibility gone I doubt mind still But mattress lifted I beginning reach bed shoved back nearly smashing fingers stood vindictive look eyes two hands placed hips What could I say What could I A shill scream escaped lips I bolted door could unleash wrath upon Up stairs around couch kitchen I ran fast enough Before I could lock bathroom caught ponytail yanked hard I nine year old hair pulling all CAPS beating But lucky harm could done heard scream come investigate Fighting taboo house never stopped us punishments minuscule could hug make stand corner The anger eyes already gone certain significant smile played across lips still trying play strict parent us passed four minutes joke CAPS said one word one meaning s took We exploded roar giggles laughter Although way could known meant disrespect could nt keep silent Boisterous laughs rang hallway loud words inaudible Grabbing hands pulling us towards living room half dragged shaking hard Ten feet apart stood eyes focused ninety degree angle front noses But one look sent another tremor giggles little bodies We could inebriated nt better really two rambunctious kids playing around We reasons laugh Maybe reason simple reading email made laugh hard cried Maybe amateur writing style joke maybe witnessed child s nose spew chocolate milk We things life make us want roll floor slap knees experience s excruciatingly hard hold back letSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often argued that the dress code of employees is not necessary, it is simply because it does not affect the quality of their production. In my point of view, I agree with this opinion, however, it does not also show off the professionalism and respect of staff as well as formal clothes.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, employees do not need to care about clothes when they go to company. Firstly, it will make them more happy and motivated when they wear their favourite attire. Furthermore, they can wear normal dresses, which will make them more comfortable. For example, employees work in a private environment and spend most of their time on a computer or laptop, comfortable clothes are easier to work in and make them more relaxed.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, uniforms play a key role in service industries such as healthcare services or restaurants. Formal wear or uniform shows professionalism and respect for customers and clients will also realize waiters or waitresses faster, thus saving time and effort . Besides, it is fair for staff in the company and it is not indiscriminate poor or rich, so make staff more confident when they trial. Hence, a certain type of job like receptionist requires people to dress properly so it cannot worsen the company’s productivity .\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although one’s clothing preference or dress code at task does not directly influence productivity, its relevance is worth considering depending on the nature of production.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In beginning cyclists journey happy carefree The cyclist comes first deserted town setting isnt described cyclist worried yet After leaving first town cyclist barely noticed heat the cool pines rushing rivers Yosemite name written them The cyclist still high spirits The cyclist begins get thirsty comes upon water pump He attempts get water pump isnt working condition Until point story road mostly flat straight Then cyclist notices road hills At point cyclist water dehydrated After one hill cyclist sees building The building abandoned grape juice factory ironic considering state cyclist The cyclist sucks rocks last resort gives hope living comes upon fish camp He gets water bathroom well The setting story affects cyclist setting changes cyclist moods feelings survival dangerSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everyday technology is advancing, and everday more and more students are not taking school serious becuase they can't focus or they just don't want to pay attention. With the invention of the Facial Action Coding System in classrooms across the world today, it would make students want to interact even more. But there are flaws. Things go wrong with technology all the time. Sometimes it's too expensive, or the computers don't work, right and it would stop a lot of face to face interacton around the classroom.\n\nWith the Facial Acting Coding System, more students would pay attention because, the system could tell how they feel about things and how to make them better, and happier. But with all good things about the system there are still bad things too. For some schools it would be way too exppensive. Most schools wouldn't be able to afford it, and if they did something could still malfunction and go wrong. Even if they did afford it, the system would still be expensive and hard to fix.\n\n\"Imagine a computer that knows when you're happy or sad\". Although it sounds like a good idea, it doesn't always work out the way it should. Technology is always breaking and malfunctioning, and needing to be fixed in some way. Technology is reliable in the classroom, but when it comes to new technology who is going to fix it? They would need experts around all the time and they can get expensive to pay for as well.\n\nInteraction is a big part in the way students and develop and grow. With the new technology being brought in, students would sit infront of a computer all day and would not interact with a lot of people. That is raising students in an unhealthy environment.\n\nAs technology grows, so do we. But some forms of technology should not cross paths with things. Like the way we raise our students.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why Censorship In everyday lives come across many things taken offense Some things might even realize re Everybody nt want children getting wrong things early know eventually happen We teach kids good This goes literary items We need faith kids right I think old enough able read books listen music might offensive I think nt get rid offensive material libraries Now days lot hard work goes music movies books If start getting rid offensive material many people offended The people worked movie wrote book put lot time effort piece They spent countless hours working others get piece publication trying get somone film movie idea I think would wrong outrule peices great literature behind every one person put lot effort material In every book pick today could look find offensive language offensive gestures The detailed book many great facts many people find offensive says wife children This book nt telling believe actually happened story full conspiracy theories You still believe want read book A movie could considered offensive title Ca nt Many people hear title want watch thinking discriminant people instead good movie group people play basketball Many things offensive language nt mean ca nt act like adults read books realize stories They telling believe believe In country today many different ethnic groups many people think differently things In society given right opinion things able like ever want Even though literary might offensive people like reading books like If I look library I could find book offensive material book could still good book Even though disrcimanting I could still love book There always controversy society almost everyone loves Why get rid books people still enjoying everyday Like Katherine Paterson said right take book shelf everyone else If let everybody take books shelves none left We control everything people Taking offensive books library stop people reading decline library usage people slowly stop reading If nt like books library wo nt problem reading I think censorship libraries would idea I think definitely take offensive material librariesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often believed that those who complete higher education find the path to a bright career, however few supports the view to get job immediately after passing school. In my opinion, I strongly agree that finishing studies at university is much more beneficial in the long term.\nCompleting at least graduation is crucial to get a job, because many industries recruit candidates who have at least a graduation degree. In addition to this, university courses are designed in such a way that they help to build competencies required at workplace. In other words, studying at colleges helps to acquire a certain set of skills, such as soft skills and technical skills, and learn pragmatic approaches, which are being used in industries and companies. Lastly, it has been observed that candidates who have master or doctorate degrees are often considered for promotion with handsome salaries, therefore higher educations at colleges are important and beneficial in long terms. \nOn the other hand, some advocate the trend to start working after finishing school. The basic reason behind this is they might get an early experience to help them in near future. However, doing so may distract students’ focus from their studies as earning money can be appealing for them. Another reason, sometimes it is thought that getting a job may help them to learn and manage their finances, which will be helpful later in their life. Although, a study has proven that students who start earning immediately after school often fail to join higher education.\nTo conclude, despite the fact getting a job after school has short term benefits, I believe, it is important for students to finish their higher studies from universities or colleges for their successful and bright future in career.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, there are many courses available to take, from arts that include theatre and music to scientific topics such as mathemathics, physics, chemistry, biology and medicine. There is an evidence that the amount of students willing to learn science subjects is not sufficient. In this essay I will discuss the causes of the issue and the possible effect on society.\nThere are several casues for the fact that students tend to skip science subjects. First, studying science can be hard and exhausting. The complexity of some subjects such as math and physics requires from the student to study many hours at home. Secondly, there are students who do not only find those courses difficult, but also get low marks even after studying long hours. As for chemistry classes, some courses include labratory lessons which may not appeal to some students.\nThe importance of people having knowledge in science is great. The society relies on science on a daily basis. For instance, doctors who study medicine, must know mathematics, biology and chemistry well, because biology is relevant to the patient's body. In addition, doctors prescribe medications so they must know chemistry well. Another example is architects whose job is to plan and design buildings. Without a proper knowledge in physics, they could not plan buildings.\nDiscussing those facts, studying science can be challenging. However, it is vital for the society that students will study science. Without doctors, nurses, scientists and other professions that rely on science, the health of the society might be effected negatively.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood memoir nt change alot Narciso Rodriguez mood happy end says I never forget house gracious neighborhood many things I learned love also says I never forget parents turned simple house home I think Narciso happy The mood mostly calm happy telling courage parents Thats mood author gaveSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Home The Blueprints Lives Narciso Rodriguez mood created Rodriguez remembers home refreshed way remembers parents rich culinary skills love cooking recals passionat Cuban music filled walls home really lets us know great sense community family neiborhood quotes It closeknit community honest hardworking immigrants extended hand people necessarily kind clearly need It sounded like everyone worked together helped There often Someone Staying us temporarily able get back feet writes Narciso says parents came selflessly give children better life Narciso thankful parents imagration Struggle says I always grateful parents love sacrifice Narciso Rodriguez learned real definition family Love carries memories ever goesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The time I One school I walking home friends school knowing I wanted something eat I told friends come rest its fast food restaurant walk place crowded I waited line minutes friends said CAPS man lets go I say Ill meet guys outside alright said A bout minites later turn order I order double stack fries I got free milkshake patience asked kind I said strawberry I didnt pay totally free I went outside told friends I got free said oooooooh thats went homeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars have been a whimsical idea for a long time. Right along with robots, and hoverboards. But now that a real driverless car is in reach, people are wondering if it is really the safest way to go. Only three states and the District of Columbia currently allow even just the testing of somewhat independent cars at this point in time.\n\nDriverless cars are not actually independent. You can't really just sit and read a book and drink tea while your car does all of the work. The driver still needs to be alert, because the car can only steer, accelerate, and brake. With construction zones, traffic jams, pedestrians, accidents, and thousands of other conflicts to watch out for, driverless cars do not seem very reasonable. I think that they could be even more dangerous because a lot of drivers would likely pay less attention to their surroundings if they didn't have to drive. A car being able to accelerate on its own does sound nice, but cruise control can do the same thing for you if you're on a highway, which is probably the main place you'd be using a driverless car.\n\nI can understand why driverless cars can be a good thing, they take up less fuel, and can allow you to relax more. However, It would be a very large and long process to adapt all of the traffic laws to accomodate to driverless cars, and it would take a very long time for manual drivers to fully understand how to safely share\n\nthe road with driverless vehicles as well. In conclusion, driverless cars are a cool idea, but I do not think they are neccesarySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face on Mars is a natural landorm because we have no proof of life on this planet. This picture of the face was taken by NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft. This informatiopn was givin out later to media.Instead of asking questions about this formation the authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attenention to Mars.\n\nBy spreading out this false information people started to believe then other people started to make money out of it through Hollywood film, books, magazines, radio talk shows, also haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years. People think that the face on Mars could be evidence of life there and that NASA is hiding this from everyone else. But defenders of the NASA budget with there was an ancient civilzation on Mars so brefiley speaking that there is no life on Mars. On April 5, 1998 Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time and the team snapped the pictures ten times sharper than the Viking 1.\n\nThousands of anxious web surfers were waiting around for hours to see if the face on Mars was a natural landform or an alien monument. When the pitcure appread it showed that the face on Mars was a natural landform and not an alien monument. People were not satisfied by this so NASA gave it another try and find this face to take an amazing photo was actually a lot of hard work. NASA had to wait till it cleared up because it was cloudy, it has weather like we have around here. They finally took the picture on April 8, 2001 a cloudless summer day in Cydonia.\n\nAfter taking another picture it was easier to look at becasue you can discern things in a digital image three times bigger than the pixel size. Gavin says \" What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalenr of a butte or mesa- landforms common around American West.\"\n\nSo the face on Mars is a natural landform because, \"Thats a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same hieght as the Face on Mars.\" \"It reminds me most of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,\" says Garvin. So the face on Mars is a natural landform and not an alien monument.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When I grade I put mible set I went put mible set bruck went park I wate shag went ice making I hart line people got ther pard munem axyer went ice starting day went back house build mible mirne art way went house plade outside inside houseSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Contemporarily, with the aid of modern technologies, there are many people who believe by spending time on visual artificial entertainment will bring more benefit to youth people, while some other people have the opposite value. In my opinion, children should interact with their friends instead of relying too much on technology.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, we considered two positive impacts for children watching and playing video games. Firstly, this activity will improve their creativity in terms of problem-solving skills. For example, playing adventure games like mario bross, encourages youth people to evade the enemy and make some alternate possible moves to reach the base. Indirectly this experience will be used in real-life situations, so the children become more resilient to face the problems. Not only enlarging creativity but also practicing good teamwork, playing games , especially with two tag teams will elevate our children's capability to become sharper. Those kinds of abilities will bring useful effects for our children to face real problems.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some people believe that frequently playing video games, will bring addiction habit to playing continuously and make people become lazy. Instead of using their time for studying, while the young generation has acknowledged games, they prefer to spend their time on them. It will affect their habit and following the consequences, the majority of children will get bad marks on their exams. Not only reduce the capability of our children but also will worsen their eye's health because they spent the whole day on the screen. In the long-term approach, neither playing games nor watching videos will bring more drawbacks to a child's life.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, artificial visual entertainment brings both positive and negative ways, and children should spend their time doing other physical activities.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The (face) is a figure spotted on the red planet called cydonia. The first image of this discovery was taken in 1976. Its called the face because it appears to have eyes, mouth, and nose facial features. When word of this spread, it seemed to be very popular. After doing some research on the face on mars, it was confirmed as nothing but land forms. Not everyone believed that it was just a landform, people and scientist did believe that it was an alien artifact.\n\nI say its not an alien artifact because in the photo in 2001 one has very little resemblance of a face or head. If you look hard enough you can see the rigid parts of these landforms. Im not saying that there's no such thing as life on other planets, but after revealing that it's nothing but a natural form of land on from the planet, it can't be an alien artifact of some kind. Many other planets may have features such as this.\n\nScientist figured out its nothing more than a butte or mesa. If you ever become an astronaut, you can go and see yourself. Ther will still be people who may believe that the goverment is hiding something or keeping secret, there always will be mysteries, but this mystery has been solved.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir love happiness self lessness The memoir emphasized mood love author mentioned It I learned true defonition family I never forget house gracious neighbor hood many things I learned love The mood exerpt love explains much cared family neighbors There many exerpts memoir gave mood selfless ness As They came self lessly many immigrants give children better life even though meant leaving behind families friends careers country love This indacates selflessness explaining left behind jobs family friends give children best The overall mood story happy explained happiness struggle courage good outcome beloved memoriesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Cowboy Who Rode he Waves Essay\n\nIntoduction\n\nLuke had turned 18 before he arrived in Greece, he said\" I could be drafted for military services\" ( paragraph 4). It took Luke to get across the Atlantic Ocean eastern coast of the United States 2 weeks, and 1 month to get to China. Luke had made a least 9 trips, more than any Seagoing cowboy. By the time it was 1947 Luke had helped people he said \" Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China\" ( paragraph 5). Luke had visited Venice,Italy he rode a gondola because the streets were water. He also \" took a tour in a excavated castle in Crete, and the Panama Canalon his way to China\" (paragraph 5).\n\nReasons A few reasons why you should to join the program that Luke is in because 1: he is a night watchman. That seems exicting because he gets to watch over the animal.2: he got to to visit a whole lot of places like Venice, Europe, China, and the Panama Canal. 3: he was on a boat so he got to visit the places like Europe and China. The last reason is to keep himself busy is caring for the animals during th crossing.\n\nBody What Luke likes about being Seagoing Cowboys is he metioned that this would be an opportunity of a lifetime. When he first got on the boat he was exicted to visit the coolest places. The First one he visited was Greece that was the place they headed first. Then it was Europe that was where the boat was headed toward. Venice it is last he said \" So was taking a godola ride in Venice, Italy, acity with streets of water.\n\nConclusion They are so manythings that Luke learned that ws really acurate of being a night watchman. Like helping people benefit of seeing Europe and China. Going through new expirence places like Europe, China, Veince,Italy. I am sure he probably visited more but, who knows. Luke learned that they'res a lot to handle of being a military watchman. The opportunity of a lifetime if he didn't take who knows of what could've happened to his life after he took the opportunity I am also sure he said hello to my New Life.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Katherine stated everyone right take book shelf would nt books left I think saying many people think book innappropriate another persons eye book could also appropriate Censorship big deal noadays Nobody wants young children read drugs andor violence I many opinions upon issue First I state I think books movies whatever taken shelf The books movies magazines ect taken shelf innappropriate The books movies innappropriate drugs sex violence many things young children nt subject watching reading I know I parent I would want young child reading violent murder gangs The thing censorship peoples choice read innappropriate book watch innappropriate movie As kid growing I nt really care reading anyways books best sometimes ones violence Also even thought book innappropriate child still say reading This next thought comes You think kids mature The kids mature hobby read books style left read taken shelf This goes parents If book house child could easily pick read What book stores libraries movie stores put age limit books movies I know rated movies age limit explicit books think age limit They could also maybe even get letter note parent concent children could get book magazine Maybe parent even come get book movie child The libraries book stores movie stores could also easily put warning side cover show book innappropriate What children read two people child parent If parent nt care child reading watching innappropriate movie problem Therefore I think order withhold buying selling books option obtain innappropriate ones I feel even though material explicit kids parent s concent option check buy mostly anything Afterall book violence drugs sex children still reading always goodSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think author concludes story paragraph When come back Saeng vowed silently iN spring wheN melt geese RetuRN hibiscus budding I take test again means author kinda like meaning life That mess okay try betterSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is venus not safe but survivable for human life? This is the main question scientist are asking themselves. What are other ways scientist are are approaching for Venus? What is on Venus that scientist find so valuable that they will risk there live for to find out? These are the questions the ( NASA ) is wondering about traveling to venus.\n\nVenus is the hottest next to the sun the atmosphere is not easy living conditions but is bareable for human life. The text states, NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientist to float aboe the fray. The author states, at thirty-plus miles above the suface, temperatures would still be toasty at around170 degres Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to the sea level on earth. The text lastly states solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed earth levels,the conditons are not easy, but is survivable fo humans. The text lastly states, a vehicle can hover over venus far better then a human can and avoid the unfriendly ground conditons. This states why venus is not safe for human life but survivable to withstand.\n\nWhat scintist find so valuable on venus is the variouse form of life and the land that is inhabiting on it. The texts states, Astronomers are facinated by Venus because it may well pnce have been the most Easrth like planet in our solar system. The author states, Long ago Venus was probably covered largly with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. The text lastly states, The planet has suface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys mountains and craters. This concludes why scientist find Venus so valuable to sacrfice human life to travel to Venus.\n\nThe other ways that scientist are approaching for venus is by using technolgy the can withstan the velocity of Venus. The author states, For example, some simplified electroics made of silicon carbide have been tested on a chamber stimulating the chaos of Venus suface. The texts states, modern computers are enormously powerful, flexible, and quick, but tend to be more delictate when it comes to extreme physical conditions. The author lastly states, By comparison technolgy can be more resistant to pressure,heat,and other forces. This shows the many other ways scientist have thought about other then using human life to research about planet earth\n\nThis concludes about are physical human life on venus is safe or not. This states also why is so important on Venus that they would sacrife human life to travel there in the first place. There also show the Idea's that scientist had thought about traveling to venus. Quote to the passge \" Or travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by danger and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imaginations and innovations. This all shows in the essay Why Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the daners it presents in the passage.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As a scientist I had to discusss the overall topic about extraterrestrials and the creation of the face on Mars giving the mosts reasonable and lucid -something clearly shown- ideas. There is many reasons why this \"face\" was not made by aliens. As a scientist I had to explain some evidence that would show what this \"face\" is classified as. Also I had to show the main ideaology on these speculations or conspiracies that \"know\" what NASA is doing. My main job as scientist is to observe, study, and explain many mysteries but I had to use clearly expressed qualifications for the face to be created by aliens.\n\nFor my first reasoning on this topic I had to discuss this person how this landform is classified as mesa or butte which occurs normally in many environments. Like Garvin said in paragraph 12 in Unmasking the Face of Mars, \"It reminds me most of Midlle Buttle in the Snake River Plain of Idaho...\" showing how this type of landform isn't really rare or unique to find. Could this be something created by aliens, too? Well of course not because a mesa can be locationalized in many parts of the hemisphere of Earth around the globe!\n\nAfter showing the person what this is exactly, I needed to explain how these landforms are ACTUALLY formed. In paragraph 12 of Unmasking the Face on Mars like Garvin said, that the mesa called Middle Buttle in the Snake River on Earth is actually a lava dome that take the form of an insolated mesa that is about the same height as the Face on Mars. Proving that these mesa landforms are not as unique as anyone could think as vividly as possible and are actually formed naturally on Earth. This is acutally scientifically proven by research done over the years on many mesa landforms in Earth.\n\nAnother type of reasoning this \"face\" is not made by aliens is proven by photographs tooked by probes above Mars's atmosphere showing clear images of this landform in which gives another reason that this landform is not even a face. First of all this \"face\" was taken by Voyager 1 on 1976 making this photo not revelant for the accusations made by this person. Best of all, the Voyager 1 had a poor quality camera with 43 meters per pixel making the image pixelated and not advance enough for high definition quality compared to the 2001 image tooken by MGS which had 1.56 meter per pixel giving it better quality and rendering of the landform. Also, the more revelant and sufficient evidence contrast to the unrevelant photo for the idea of the \"face,\" shows that the \"face\" is a normal mesa instead of the physical view of a \"face\" on the surface of Mars's rusted iron soil shown by Voyager 1.\n\nThough my reasonings are supported with evidence and proof, the person may accuse me saying that NASA is hiding alien civilization from the public peers and have the alien technology used for goverment power as said so by many conspiracy theorists. Well I'm not going to lie, defenders of the NASA budget actually WISH there was an ancient civiliztion on Mars. This proves that NASA would show the public, due to the fact that it will help fund NASA with more public support and would make NASA use that money funded for more research and expeditions.\n\nSo in conclusion, there are many proven reason why the \"face\" on mars is not made by aliens. Since the mesa landform is not unique and there are plenty here on Earth, since there are also many types of evidence and research done on how these lanforms are made, and since there are also details shown more easily through the revelant photos from MGS showing the \"face\" to be just your average mesa. Also that after all this time, defenders of the NASA budget actually hope for ancient civilization on Mars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Just patient lucie said I done soon How soon soon Awile I done fileing papers hour I take park hour long time Just go watch tv I dont want leave alone I get done I wont take park ok So whent placed vidow games little sister awhile made pizza friend school come asked sister wanted go park mom So asked lucie could go park ryan said yes back five oclock great time ryans mom got ice cream learned patient importantSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are coming.\n\nIs that a good thing or bad?\n\nIts an good thing.\n\nDIverless cars are going to be beneficial to us human beings.\n\nDriverless cars have been used before, have sensors, and most importantly safetly features.\n\nSuch cars would fundamentally change the world.\n\nDriverless cars have been put to the test.\n\nDriverless cars have driven more than hald a million miles without a crash.\n\nThey arent truly driverless yet.\n\nThe car alerts the driver when he needs to take over to pull in and out of driveways.\n\nThe car also alerts the driver when theres complicated traffic issues, like navigation through roadwork or accidents.\n\nDriverless cars arent fully driverless now but some day they will be.\n\nDriverless cars will have many sensors.\n\nGoogle's modified Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof,\n\na cideo camera mounted near the rearview mirror,\n\nfour automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor.\n\nAll these things is necessary for the driverless car to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel.\n\nThe sensors have become more advanced to detect and respond to the dangers of out-of-control skids or rollovers.\n\nThe information from the sensors can cause the car to apply breaks on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine,\n\nallowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\n\nThese sensors are going to be a key factor to the driverless car.\n\nThe most important feature for the driverless car would be safety.\n\nSafety is very important.\n\nIn 2013, BMW announced the development of \"Traffic Jam Assistant.\"\n\nWhich basically means the cars could steer, accelerate, and break themselves, but are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills.\n\nDriverless cars would notifily the driver to navigate through work zones and arounf accidents.\n\nThe human should remain alert at all times and be ready to take the wheel at any time.\n\nGeneral Motors have developed a driver's seat that vibrates when the the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object.\n\nAnother option would be flasing lights on the windshield.\n\nManufactors are also considering using cameras to watch that drivers are remaining focused on the road.\n\nWhile the driver watches the road, the car watches the road.\n\nAll these safety features will be important to the driverless car.\n\nDriverless cars are coming.\n\nIs that a good thing?\n\nOf course it is, Driverless cars arent fully finished yet but have a bright future.\n\nThey have shown so much in the few years.\n\nWe (humans) have tested them out.\n\nWe added sensors to help make the car smarter.\n\nWe are also making the driverless car safe as possible.\n\nDriverless cars are going to be a great addition to the future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology to read emotions is a pretty amazing invention. This type of technology can be very valuable it can be used in schools or anywhere that it can go to read peoples emotion to see how they are feeling. It can also be used it a mental hospital to see how the patients really feel and see if their is a better way to help them. To use it on the Mona Lisa makes sense because whenever you go to a museum and you see the painting and you wonder if she is mad, happy, sad, you cant really tell but with this invention a few clicks of buttons you can find out whatever emotions Mona Lisa was feeling in that painting.\n\nWhen you lift your lips to the corner of your mouth and you squint your eyes people may seem you are anger, maybe you are, but you can also be just fooling around and joking, with this technology you can see what they are feeling there would be no more guessing on what the person your talking to is feeling. Unless this is a huge machine you can pull it out evrywhere and it can be used witha push of a button. It can even recognize a fake smile.\n\nAccording to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them. Whoever thought that making faces would reveal so much about the science\n\nof emotions.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Potential employees' abilities regarding communication, kindness, and responsibility have become the bone of contention, and they are more valued than their knowledge about the field. Personally, I totally disagree with the aforementioned statement, as people tend to believe that the more a worker knows about his job, the more beneficial it will be. \n\nTo commence, a company might acquire fair competition which seems to be the factor of the rise if the educational degree of a person there is decently assessed when they apply for a job. Undoubtedly, when there are multiple applicants for one position in the workplace, appeared questions in the work can be solved by them in distinctive ways.Therefore, employers who consider higher qualifications as a vital aspect may provide an opportunity for the creativity of subordinates. A good case in point is an experiment by Samsung, where considerable figures of the growth rate were demonstrated by branches that accepted more educated individuals.\n\nAdditionally, remote occupations are jeopardising the social capabilities of people, since in conditions where communication with others is regarded as unnecessary, only those who would perform greatly owing to their skills will be targeted by managers. The recent coronavirus pandemic showcased that working at a distance appears to be widespread, hence, intelligence is going to come out on top among requirements of any work field. For instance, a list of qualities mandatory to possess published by an international enterprise namely \"Tesla\" illustrated that does extent of qualification play the most essential role in applications.\n\nTo conclude, it may be stated that the level of competitiveness of the labour field and the future uselessness of social abilities are what distinguish smart minds showing greater importance to them.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Sea Cowboys, If you like helping people and love animals this is the job for you. This program helps people in need and animals in need. Joining the Sea Cowboys can help make a diffrent in peoples lives.\n\nThis job a hard job, They need people that are tough and can handle a lot of things. Sometimes the seas were rough and it is hard not to get sea sick. There is a time to have fun on board and there is a time to be reponsible and work hard.\n\nBeing a sea cowboy is a very good oppertundity, You can travle around the world and can explore new things. After you become a sea cowboy you will have lot of responceabilty and will be more aware of your surondings and be grateful for what you have because some people dont have those things.\n\nIf you worked as a farmer or worked with animals you should join the sea cowboys. You can make a diffrence.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that use of technology like this in classrooms could be a dangerous prospect. Many things could go wrong with technology like this and could have some major consequences.\n\nFirst teachers could end up losing their jobs. All of this stems from what has happened in history. Take factories as an example, factories used to be full of people making and producing everything, but the recent surges in robotic workers has left many without jobs that would have otherwise been a great livlihood. This same thing could very well happen to teachers with little to no warning.\n\nSecond off there are people that are affraid to have cameras or video monitors on their children because they are known to have been hacked into and can lead to crimes including kidnapping and robbery. Adding this sort of computor facial recognition software could increase hackability of a schools network or technology. Sometimes hacks can go undetected for days or weeks at a time and once you find out it has been happening it is suddenly too late.\n\nFinaly it would be a huge change for everyone that is currently enroled in pulic schools. Once you reach students above grade 4 it could be a struggle to get them on a different \"type\" of learning such as a computor program that can mold the lesson to a persons emotions. You also lose a sort of connection to the teacher. Most people remember certain teachers for certain reasons, whether they were funny, told stories, truly cared about students, or were just overall a great teacher, but all of this would be lost because no computor at this point has TRUE intelligence, some may mimic actions of intelligent life but none has achived it yet.\n\nAdding this sort of program to schools could be extremely dangerous in many ways. People would be at risk for losing jobs, school-wide hacks, and a true emotional and phisical loss.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using driverless cars is not a good idea because cars are already dangerous as it is. To being using driverless cars as a form of transportation would be like trusting a machine with one's life. The pros of driverless cars are many, but the cons are just as plentiful. Driverless cars \"would fundamentally change the world,\" however, they could just as easily ruin it (1).\n\nDriverless cars are helpful because they do most of what true drivers hate to do. They drive. Such cars have the ability to \"handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph\" (7). The cars are also able to steer, accelerate, and stop. Driverless cars would \"offer far more felxibility\" and \"use half the fuel of today's taxis\" (1). Driverless cars can even drive several miles without any issues, but there is a lot that the cars cannot do on their own. The cars are not even completely driverless. A driver would jump for joy at the thought of a car that supposedly drives itself because that would mean relaxation for the driver, but is it truly all that relaxing?\n\nDriverless cars can \"steer, accelerate, and brake themselves\" but they still require human skills. A driverless car would not actually mean no driving because the whole time a person is being driven, he or she must have his or her hands on the wheel. There are \"special touch sensors\" that \"make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel\" (7). Driverless cars must not mean texting and driving becomes legal after all. Humans must stay alert while in driverless cars because accidents can still happen. The cars cannot navigate through construction sites or around accidents. Another issue with driverless cars is that they cannot pull in or out of driveways. Pulling out of a driveway or lot is typically the first action that a driver takes, and pulling in is typically the last action that a driver takes. If the trip has to start and end with the driver, what is the point of stopping just for the duration of the drive? \"Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver\" (8)?\n\nDriving laws focus on keeping people in, or around, cars safe, but \"safety is best achieved with alert drivers.\" The idea of driverless cars will automatically have drivers imagining everything that they could get done if they do not have to worry about operating the vehicle. There are sensors in driverless cars, but sensors will not stop people from doing what they want to do. Current driving laws do not even prevent people from doing what they want to do. If people cannot prevent accidents from happening, a machine will not be able to prevent accidents from happening.\n\nDriverless cars can only be used once drivers learn how to operate cars. Cars are already not safe because of manufacturing errors and operator errors, so it is not smart to put the entire responsibility on a machine. When an accident occurs, \"who is at fault--the driver or the manufacturer\" (9)? The blame cannot be put on the car, but can it be put on the operator?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine being able to sit back and let your car take the wheel. It sounds great right? But what if the car was being driven by a computer imagine all of the possible things that could go wrong. Driving your car rather than having a computer drive your car is the best way to go. Driving your own car puts your own life in your own hands.\n\nWith driving your own car you can make all of the choices keeping yourself in only the danger you put yourself in. Nobody wants a computer to put them into danger that they would not put themselves in. Now some people would say that with the computer driven car it could make better choices then a normal human, but with the computer car you are risking putting your life in a computers virtual hands.\n\nHuman driving puts yourself in a responsible place and it teaches you responsibility over your actions. With computer driving if it wrecks you automatically blame the computer and you will not take responsiblity over the actions. This is not a good habbit to get in because as teennagers when first being able to drive if you are aloud to blame any small thing on the computer system it will become a habbit to always blame something else even though it might be your part. People might say that with computer driving it would have less accidents, but it is not proven that a computer driver will not have misfunctions.\n\nWith human driving your fate is in your own hands you are not putting your life into someone else's hands and deffintley not a computers. With the computers there is too many chances for it to have a bad function and mess up. Also with the computer drivers you still have to be up and alert for any circumstances where you might have to take over so you might as well just take over the wheel all together. With computer driving it puts people in risk of falling asleep behind the wheel which would mean if it came to a point where they needed to take over they would not be able to. People would say it would be relaxing to be able to just sit and be droven for, but you could get a little too relaxed.\n\nWith human driving it puts everything into your hands it does not allow a computer to lead to your death or injury. Human drivers can be a little reckless but you have no way in telling when a computer driver will have a misfunction. Driving your car rather than having a computer drive your car is the best way to go. Do not be the one to put your life in a computers virtual hands.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars should not be developed into an actual invention. For their are many negative reasons why they shouldnt be. A driverless car is a pointless waste of time.\n\nFor a driverless car to be driver less it must not have a driver. Well according to paragraph 7 it states,\" In fact, none of the cars developed so far are completely driverless. They can steer, accelerate, and brake themeselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents, this must mean the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requres.\" Why develope driverless cars that still need driver? Secondly, in paragraph for the list the gear mounted on the car. \" Google's modified Toyota Prius uses position-\n\nestimiating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview miror, four auto motive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor. The most important bit of technolopgy in this syster is the spinning sensor on the roof. Dubbed LIDAR.\" A regular car requires simple parts at times such as a spark plug or a new battery perhaps some oil. If every car was to be replaced by driverless cars, who would have to pay for replacement parts the owner or the manufactuer. I guarantee you none of those parts are remotely cheap. Currently out of the various models of driverless cars one with potential was started by engineers at Berkeley, but their model requires roads to be updated as well with magnets to alternate polarity. That would be alright but it would be an unpractical amount of money that taxes wouldn't help pay for much.\n\nSo in conclusion, due to the fact of the lawful consequences in case of an accident, high cost replacement parts and the unpractical amount of money for the updating of roads for driverless cars doesnt seem all the much worth it in the long run. Plus is it really safe to let computers drive a potentially deadly vehicle.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear newspaper editor I recently heard people think computers negative effect people Well think computers positive effect people I think computers positive effect people helps make learning countries easier Also helps people talk people different countries Another reason helps people learn different cultures religions traditions The reason peope think computers negative effect people people spending time computer spending time family Also people use computer use exercise machines bicycles scooters Now know positive negative effects computers Which side choose one computers one computers I would choose one computersSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author says that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers, the most convincing thing is that the astronomers are highly fascinated by Venus because it was once most likely as the planet Earth in our solar system. Astronomers and scientists have discovered that Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and also could have had various forms of life, just as Earth does now, which probably gives them hope that may be now too, it can be lived on the planet Venus.\n\nAccording to the research, it has been found that Venus still has some features that are similar to those on Earth as well it also has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains and craters. It has some really great dangers like high pressure and heat, erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes and frequent lightning strikes, but as the author also said that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit which he probably concludes from the statements of the scientists and astronomers, the scientists think that Venus can be nearest option for a planetary visit and can be a good space travel as well. Therefore, if somehow they get successful in proving that there is a hope that life can be found on planet Venus, it will be worth it despite all the dangers it presents right now.\n\nThe National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one compelling idea of sending humans to explore and study Venus. As the weather of Venus is not likely for a human to survive, the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Scientists also have discovered that at thirty - plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. NASA is working really hard to study Venus, for an example they have been testing some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide in a chamber simulating the chaos Venus's surface and it has also been lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\n\nThe efforts made by scientists and all the dangers astronomers will be probably facing will be worth it if they will be able to find that Venus has likely conditions of a person's survival.\n\nHowever, from all the information provided by the author, we can conclude that Venus doesn't have easy conditions but it can be possible that by studying about Venus, someday scientists can discover if it is possible for humans to survive on Venus. The challenge to find life on Venus can be hard and might have dangers but studying and exploring Venus is a worthy pursuit.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many today are so concerned with driving safely. There are so many things that could go wrong while behind the wheel. But can having a machine drive you around that you have little control over be less hazardous? No doubt cars that have an automatic driving system will be less work to do on our part but is that really safe? Well, what is teh definition of being safe? Safe is what you feel when you are out of harms way. When you feel as though nothing can hurt you. Like there is absolutley anything that could even slightly put you inthe way of harm. But if your driving in general, do you think you are safe? No because anything could happen. So what makes you think that \"driving\" a self-automated car would make you feel much more safe? Would you not feel as if you are purposely putting yourself in the way of harm?\n\nAs many say we can not change the roads but we can change the cars and make them smarter, hence the name smart cars. These cars come with many sensors within and outside of the car, including a sensor on the roof. Not only are there sensors but there is also a camera near the rearview mirror. All of the technology put into the making of this car is sure to make you want to but it. Not only that but haveing the latest technology like this in your car will also make you feel safe. There are also laser beams that update a 3-D model of the car and what it is surrounded by. As much as there are many sensors in these cars to make it safe there are still some things that can go wrong.\n\nThere are some cons to this car as well as pros. For example, what if some of the sensors begin to malfunction? This can cause an accident in the case that you are not even aware that some or one of your cars sensors have stopped functioning correctly or just all together stopped working. But another big concern is who's fault will it be if some fancy technology in our smart cars malfunction and its begins to cause accidents? As much as we may feel safe, there is always a chance that something is not right.\n\nBut lets not look at all the bad, what about the good? Smart cars are created to steer, speed up and even brake with no help from a human. So does this car require any human assistance? Yes, but only when trying to get through construction areas and other accidents that may have occured. How will someone know when to take over? Well, the car can make the drivers seat vibrate, there willtouch sensors that will make sure that the driver stays focused even if they may not really be driving.\n\nWith this information we may ask ourselves: \"Are smart cars really safe?\" The answer is opinion based and we all decide for ourselves. We are all given the choice to put our lives in the path of death and we are all given the choice to remove any injurous obstacles from our paths. No one can make the decision for you. Before \"driving\" one of these \"smart cars\" many should look at the pros and the cons and do much research to determine wheather he or she believes that tehse cars are safe.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying Venus would be a worhty pursuit despite the dangers because it would provide great information and it is very unique. Venus is like no other planet; but if it is so dangerous, why do scientists want to find out more about it? Astronomers are interested in Venus because there is a possibility that Venus was the most Earth-like planet in the solar system years ago.\n\nTo start off, even though Venus is very dangerous, exploring it would provide a lot of intreging information. With an atmosphere of nearly 97 percent carbon dioxide and 800 degrees Fahrenheit, scientists are already trying to find out more, but they are not sure how, without having to be on the rocky yet toxic surface. \"Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape\"(5). If NASA can put the blimp tactic in motion, scientists can start getting a much more magnified look at the mysterious planet. Even if the danger is extremely high, one scientist one of these days eventually is going to try to explore and find out more amazing facts and imformation about Venus. So why wait now?\n\nIn addition, exploring Venus would be worth it because of it's uniqueness. If any group of scientists were to go on a safe trip to observe the Evening Star it will probably be the most memorable day of their lives. Because there is nothing like Venus.\n\n\"Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us\"(2). This shows that scientits have already attempted to learn more about the mystery planet, but haven't been very succesful. These scientists need to take flight. The only way that they will be able to get as close as possible and get the most accurate and approximate information is by being inside an aircraft hovering above the gasous planet. If the practices are completely correctly and safely and all of the precautions are met, there shouldn't be a problem with trained professionals to take on the unique ball of gas.\n\nIn conclusion, Venus is a mysterious planet that needs some research to figure out all of the different functions it has. And it's purpose for our world and solar system, because if it didn't have a purpose, it would't be in our galaxy. Studying Venus is definetly worth the risk because there is so much information that scientists could use to their advantage and to truly see how unique this planet really is.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why books people enjoy read removed library shelves That ludacris There many alternatives take certain books shelves completely We seen heard books inapropriate certain audiences It understandable young children read associated kind materials books magazines poems movies songs It totally unnecessary children reading explicit material possible us prevent One way libraries throughout nation prevent making complete different libraries explicit materials located total opposite side library children s materials I know libraries tend opposite corners library dedicated adult materials childrens materials strict rules kids adult section Another idea parental permission child s library card telling librarian child checks book library get book For example maybe childs parents allow himher get materials children s section library therefore child wants material different area library get unless hisher parents telling librarian child allowed get I know child could nt something parents made feel upset look back realize wanted They wanted child long possble They knew reading listening inapropriate materials growing way fast I know understand wanted To conclude lets keep filthy books magazines away younger kids I nt want see get banned libraries taken libraries I want see parents stepping parents letting young children exposed kind thing It nt libraries faults people s children exposed explicit material s parent s fault letting happenSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "World war II was the start of development centering cars but; in the recent years the popularity as well as the traffice has gone down because of limiting car usage which have lots of advantages. Limiting the use of cars advantages are less air pollution and new communities\n\nInitially, less car usage means less carbon emissions which leads to less air pollution. For example, Elisabeth Rosenthal author of \" The End of Car Culture\" wrote \"If the pattern persists and many sociologists believe it will it will have beneficial implications for carbon emmisions and the enviorment since transportation is the second largets source of America's emmisions...\". Limiting the use of cars will have a really big benefit on the enviorment by stopping more emmisions from damaging the O-zone layer. For example in Bogota, Colombia they have a day called \"Day Without Cars\" and Carlos Arturo Plaza a businessman who lives ther says \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution.\" from \"Car-free day is spinning into big hit in Bogota\" written by Andrew Selsky. People living there have seen the benefits of the limits on cars and thinks it's a really good thing for their cityand not even rain can stop people from participating says Bogota Mayor Antanas Mockus.\n\nAdditionally, these limititations have created new communities by building places that are very easy to get to. For example, Elisabeth Rosenthal author of \"In Germany Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars\" wrote \"In this new approach, stores are placed a walk away on a main street, Rather than in malls along some distant highway.\" With the new approach of limithing car usage things are built closer making many things accessible to everyone. For example, Andrew Selsky the author of \"Car-free day is spinning into big hit in Bogota\" wrote \"Parks and sports centers also have bloomed throughout the city uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by smooth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions dramatically cut traffic; and new restraunts and upscale shopping districts have cropped up.\". With the changes of accessibility buissness owners have to come where the money is making everything more accessible and creating new things in the area. Building things closer attracts more people which means more homes being built and more families enoying the community.\n\nClearly, the advantages of limiting car usage is amazing because it means less air pollution and new communities. Limitations on car usage will benefit us and the world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper Technology really fascinating thing life Take computer example check information online give people ability learn far away places people even allow people communicate This absolutely benefits society Well makes life lot easier faster people Do nt agree Do ever forget homework time something start end Well always checks information online ever forget So task get ready early For example need know time movie starts movie theatre check online Also forget steps something project homework check online So whenever student forgets check online instead coming tomorrow school saying CAPS I nt know CAPS I forgot ever wan na travel places knew nothing place Or much would cost Or ever wanted learn famous person example Instead going library reading books learn something go online There millions millions websites places people Therefore makes much easier learn certain place person thing The computer really helpful useful Plus plan vacation place sure enough money checking price online So wo nt worry wont enough money got ever want communicate friends day long without wasting minutes In fact communicate multiple friends computer For example chat rooms reach hundreds people Therefore wo nt much trouble trying communicate friends time computer phone Also communicate people around world This includes family members relatives etc live side Plus seen awhile nt talked webcam video chat Keeping contact important people friends good thing The effects computers people really something thank god You check information something ever forget You ability learn people places easily communicate family friendsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concluded story come back Saeng vowed silently spring snow melts geese return hibiscus budding I take test Saeng believes hibiscus survive hard times adapt changes survive also Saeng icoms even though moved United States different strong enough survive Failing drivers test dosent mean incapable anything trying fresh start like hibiscusSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In Nick D'Alto's article, Making Mona Lisa Smile, the value for technology is absurd, because in certain situations everyone should not be exposed to the emotions of others. For example, emotions are extremely personal and sometimes it is not technically appropriate to showcase every emotion you are feeling. A student or teacher could be going through something personal, that needs to be left out of the workplace and school. Success at school or work in general depends on how you engage in those specific tasks at hand, so the emotions the computer is claiming you are having should not interfere with specific things outside of your personal life. Detecting emotions should be left out of serious, and professional environments such as work or school. Lastly, the computer is only trained to detect the movement of the muscles in your face. But your face may not always match the feeling of emotion inside, so this may not be the most appropriate device to truly rely on.\n\nThe importance of keeping emotions personal, and not oversharing with people around you is extremely important. Most students are usually adolescents and they sometimes have a hard time expressing and controlling their emotions. So having a device eager to showcase their feelings can be dangerous and insensitive. Eckman has already begun to classify specific emotions including; \"anger, fear, disgust, and sadness,\" (D'Alto, Paragraph 3). The negative emotions should not be shared! A computer should not illustrate how you are feeling on the inside to others. This can awaken a lot of frustrated, and haphazard behavior among teens if something is constantly around proclaimming it understands how everyone is feeling. D'Alto also states, \"associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles.\" (Paragraph 3). The muscles in the face should not be studied by a computer, and they should not be able to invade the privacy of the muscle movement in someones face. Also, some may argue that their face does not always match what they are feeling, so that leaves alot of room for confusion, and flaws on the systems part. It's untraditional, and orthodox, and an invasion of mental privacy.\n\nEveryone is different, whether life is amazing or terrible, someone should not be able to be read or determine how you are feeling by what a computer says about their face. Some teachers or students could be dealing some serious, and personal things that should not find their way into the workplace or school. But, if this device is constantly procclaiming a student or teacher is sad or upset about something personal it is completely unneccessary. Students should not know the personal lives of their teachers or vise versa. This is an ambigous invasion of privacy, and could potentially even amount to a crime or disservice to some people. D'Alto questions the reader, \"Imagine a computer that knows when you're happy or sad.\" (D'Alto, Paragraph 6). This only has limited benefits and could cause immense problems in relation to others knowing personal things relating to your emotions. The specific boundaries it crosses especially if you are not well acquainted with the people constantly around you is alarming. D'Alto claims again, \"Can your lab partner recognize which one?\" (D'Alto, Paragraph 7). There should be absolutely no valid reason, why someone you may not know should be able to, and have the capacity to read your emotions from looking at you. In schools, sometimes in relation to this specific example, students are not acquainted with their lab partners or the people around them. So this would be like giving a stranger a clear look, and picture into another persons mind! It would be like being allowed to read the mind of others around you. This specific example is horrible in attempt to promote their product, and scares the consumers with the thought of others starring into their souls.\n\nTechnology has never been a reliable thing, it has never lived up to its name and full potential when people truly want it to. The thought of a computer having this amount of control is excessive, and unrealistic. In Paragraph 7, D'Alto states, \"Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile,\" (D'Alto, Paragraph 7). If our PC's cannot handle the Mona Lisa, how will they have the capacity to decode our real life, actively changing faces? Can the creators of this system not see their flaws? D'Alto continues to suggest, \"His new computer software stores similar anatomical information as electric code.\" (D'Alto, Paragraph 5). This passage is inferring to the reader that the only logical way a computer can read information is through and electrical code. Humans do not produce emotions through an electrical code, so it is not logical to expect their emotions to be read to through an emotional code.\n\nAll in all, the idea was ambitious, but it defintely was not original or rationally thought out. The thought of a computer reading into personal emotions, attempting to decode issues that are too personal to be brought into school and work, and essentially incorrectly interpret emotions is absurd. This whole idea invades the privacy of the people in society, and is a very touchy subject that should not be programmed into a computer.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear The computer blinked life image blonde haired girl filled screen It easy find life thanks actual girl explaining Going library would nt filled one priceless information human interection Computers nessessity life soceity wishes grow expand They supported teach hand eye coordination give people ability learn faraway places allow people talk others online Firstly computers help teach hand eye coordination Handeye coordination useful ability usod excel sports In recent survey kids felt hand eye coordination improves computer use Even simple thing like tying build skill Famous neurologist stated article last week CAPS computer strength When computer automatically process eyes see command hands hand eye coordination improve people sports baseball basketball If someone wa nt become better sports d need turn computer Once people become better sports re likely play become healthy In reality computers help exercising instead decreasing Additionaly computers allow people access information faraway places people If someone wanted reasearch d need type search would presented would link forever search countless things Also ability learn cultures make peole peole cultures understand others something Increase tolerance people Computers resourceful tool help people every different aspect life Lastly computer technology allow people chat Computer chat video chat help different nations Bring good terms places help us understand story comes something happend people go computer ask actual citizen take matter Also video chat online conversation cut expensive phone bills No one wants pay economy Another good point acess family members scaresly visit It help connect within family Oviously computers useful aid todays era advancements push world foreward better place Computers help people help teach handeye coordination give people bility learn faraway places people allow people talk online others Think world computers technologicall advancements The world would sectored unified contact people scare information even The internet like thousands librarys put together Nobody would know much nations news would travel slower Is kind palce want people liveSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article i will show you how we shouldn't let danger and doubts get in the way of what we should go do and research. We can study venus even with the danger that we might get hurt or injured but that will have to be tested. That is why we have technology so we can explore these type of things without geting hurt or injured. He or she whoever wrote this article agrees heavily that e should explore more crazy places that we haven't been. We jus cirling around earth finding the same things when we can goto another planet and figure all about the life that used to live there or already does. In the article it says\"Our travels on earth and beyond should not be lmited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\". This shows that we should stop being scared go explore more stuff and be advetures courages something differnt.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Around the world, it is usually decided by parents whether to send their children to single gender school or a mixed gender school. It is understood by many that studying in a single sex school has tremendous negative impact on a young child’s life when they have grown up. I completely agree with this side of the argument. In this essay I will discuss the problems faced by both male and female students.\n\nFirstly, one major drawback faced by the boys having studied in a single gender school is uneasiness while communicating with the opposite gender. They find it difficult to open up and communicate with girls. This often leads to a lot of trouble in their later years. They face severe mental pressure when they enter institutions and colleges as they often feel left out.\n\nGirls from same sex schools also face difficulties. They feel less confident when they pass out from schools and join universities which have people from both the genders. As they have never interacted with males, they often feel dominated by the large number of men in college or workplace. They prefer being isolated or surrounded by the same gender members, which does not contribute to a healthy workplace.\n\nTo sum up, I believe that studying in a single sex school does not prepare students for the real world. Children of such schools encounter a lot of problems in life in the areas of communication and confidence, compared to the ones studying in co-educational schoolsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this modern world, film industry plays an important role. As we know celebrities are good looking and much more attractive. so most of the youngsters are following them in a bad manner. I agree with this statement and discuss my points in following paragraphs.\n\nTo begin with, everyone is like to watch movies either it is action or comedy. Filmstars are just play role in movies. Our youngsters think differently most of them dreaming to be a celebrity that is not a bad idea but this a not good when youngsters just focus on movies. Adults try to copy their style likewise, celebrities always wear expensive clothes and jewellery to attract people as well as to maintain a symbol most of the youngsters try to copy their style and that is very expansive. Normal people can't afford it. Furthermore, celebrities give a bad influence on teenagers towards fights, drugs. These days teens become more aggressive because of the movies. Those things are not good for youth.\n\nMoreover, i noticed our teens adopt a bad habits such as smoking and drinking because of celebrities. They try to copy their idols those things are not good for their future. For personally biggest example is mine. I smoked first time when i was 18 years old i smoked my favourite Bollywood star smokes a lot in that movie. So i smoked but the thing is that there are so many others who did same like me. Now i realized that is a really very bad thing.\n\noverall, all we know youth is strongest pillar of nation, somehow it a government responsibility to banned such movies that show violence and other drug activities.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Most countries around the world share the same global problem; air pollution. Cities like in Germany, France, and America suffer with air pollution. All this smog comes from the cars people drive on a daily basis. But now, people have decided to make a change to that. All around the world, cities have been banning the use of cars or just taking a day off from them. Doing this has made a huge change to how these people treat their air.\n\nIn\n\nSource: 1 , it explains a new suburban lifestyle the residents had adapted to. Most of them have been giving up their cars for good. In Vauban, Germany, it is generally forbidden to have any driveways or home garages. Owning a car is still allowed, but the only places to park them would be large and expensive garage spaces. As a result, about 70 percent of families in Vauban do not own cars and 57 percent sold a car to move there. This experiment, completed in 2006, became a growing trend in Europe, the United States and other countries. This movement was called \"\n\nsmart planning\n\n\". In the U.S., the Environmental Protection Agency is promoting \"\n\ncar reduced\n\n\" communities. Many experts expect public transport to be serving the suburbs a much larger role in the new transportaion bill to be approved.\n\nIn the cities of Paris, a partial driving ban has been enforced to try and clear up the polluted air of the global city. Cars with even-numbered plates were ordered to be left at home or owners would have to pay a 22-euro fine ($31). The next day, odd-numbered plates would be applyed the same way. By this time almost 4,000 drivers were fined. After five days of intense smog from congestion, the smog rivaled Beijing, China, which is known to be the most polluted cities in the world. In France, deisel fuel was to blame. Deisels make up 67 percent of the vehicles in France, as stated in\n\nSource: 2 paragraph 16 .\n\nAn event that was set to spread to other countries lead to Colombians hiking, biking, taking buses or walking. In Bogota, Columbia, the\n\nDay Without Cars has been set to promote alternative transportation. It was the third straight year of this event in the city of 7 million. Violaters of this day had to face a $25 fine. Referring to\n\nSource: 2, paragraph 27 , this improvement campaign started in Bogota in the mid-1900s. Now, park and sports centers have been built and newer, smoother sidewalks have been created to influence this movement.\n\nPlaces all around the world are joining this revolutionary movement so save the planet. More and more cities are reducing the use of vehicles to decrease the amount of smog and other air pollutants so the air that we share cannot be contaminated.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story say going grow season chang She new country failed drivers test She feels hibiscus reminds back home In story mother says Ive seen kind blooming along lake strong enough make winter I think Saeng relate flower make winter tha make new countrySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people believe that adolescents have to take part in an unpaid work to support the neighborhood in their leisure time. Young adults can gain a lot of skills as well as cater their community. But from my perspective I don’t totally agree with this idea because of couple of reasons below: \nFirstly, most of high school students are very busy with their study at school. They attend all classes almost every day in the week. Many teenagers feel overwhelming with their homework and examinations each semester. Therefore, they should be urging play some sports to improve health or hang out with peers in their free time.\nSecondly, forcing people do unpaid work without their willingness is not fail in our society. Specially, for young adult - our future generation. It leads to serious consequences such as they can feel demotivate and cannot complete their task properly. Moreover, it can affect their perspective they may not don’t keen on social activities when they grow up. \nOn the other hand, I reckon adolescents should getting involved in local community activities to cater their neighborhood. It is a good way to learn how to get and give. Besides that, a lot of skills and good characteristic will be developed.\nAll in all, I don’t agree that all teenagers have to be a volunteer in the community in their spare time without their pressure event thought both government and each individual gain huge of beneficial form this work.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In 1976, a remarkable natural landform was discovered on Mars, a land form known now as, The Face. Scientist have debated on whether The Face is a natural landform or created by an ancient civilization on Mars. I believe this is really just a natural landform, and the reason I believe this is because of recent evidence. Reasons why I support this are, in 1976 picture quality wasn't as advanced as it is today and, this rock formation is similar to ones that occur on Earth.\n\nThe Face, a huge rock formation, at nearly two miles long. This face like formation is also known as Cydonia. Cydonia in the mid 70's was thought to be a strange landform built by aliens. Although, really it's like any other naturally occuring landform on Earth. According to the artical \"Unmasking the Face on Mars,\" \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West.\" In the new updated picture of The Face, it is clearly seen as a land formation, not done by aliens.\n\nThen in 1976 picture of Cydonia was not as advanced as it is today. In the 2001 pictures, \"Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 photo.\" This quote from paragraph 10 explains that, the picture power was very noticable different in the photograph from 1976 than 2001. This means that the pictures from 1976 are not reliable because of the poor pixel quality. Proving that The Face is just a natural landform.\n\nOn April 5th, 1998 the Mars Global Surveyor traveled to Mars and flew over Cydonia for the first time. These photos were said to be \"...ten times sharper than the original Viking photos,\" according to the artical.\n\nSo on that day in 1998 people tuned in to find out the real truth. A quote from paragraph 7 in the artical states, \"Thousands of anxious web surfers were waitng when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing...a natural landform.\" In the end, it turns out that there was really no alien monuments.\n\nIn conclusion, my claim is that The Face is just a naturally occuring landform. First, are Earth landforms that are similar, called mesas. Next, pictures took in 1976, are outdated and have poor pixel quality. Lastly, since April 5th, 1998 there are pictures proving that The Face is just a natural landform. Therefore making my claim true, The Face on Mars is nothing but a natural landform.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Teens are the important assets of a nation; thereby inculcate free social services to the community could shape their future in an effective way and mould them a better citizens. I totally agree with the aforementioned statement for the following reasons explained in the following paragraphs.\r\n\r\nThe first and foremost benefit is that adolescents start understanding the importance and value of a society in which they live. In other words, when the habit of offering social services to the older ones is instilled since the teenage, they would start interacting with seniors and can imbibe invaluable information from seniors' experience. Therefore, juveniles would act more responsible and mature by watching and analysing aged peoples' behaviour. For instance, the environment where we live in affects us in numerous way, so the habit of connecting our seniors is ingrained in them and in future it would become their habit that would be a win-win situation for our younger and old ones.\r\n\r\nSecondly, the free time that juveniles could invest in shaping themselves as a good and humble person could be wasted by roaming here and there. Hence, providing free social services to older citizens them to manage their free-time in a good way. Nevertheless, even in future, the society could get enormous benefits from them, and our seniors would never feel lonely or depressed as their teens are looking after them when they have spare time from their studies.\r\n\r\nTo conclude then, this phenomenon would creat a win-win situation for both teens and aged people; teens can polish and modify their behaviour by following and interacting their seniors while aged people also get a chance to engage with their future generation and less likely to feel isolated and depressed.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless should not be used under any condition. Driverless cars are careless, imperfected, and unreliable. We should never risk ourselves or others just because we are lazy and dont wanna drive. If we left everything to these driverless cars many pepole could die. Driverless cars should not be allowed on the streets.\n\nTo begin, Driverless are carless. Driverless cars can not stay allert like a human can. In the passage it states, \"They can steer, accerlate, and break themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills\". This shows that a Driverless cars just does not have what it takes to be out on the road. If a kid ran in the middle of the street, unsuspectingly, the car would not have time for the human to take over and the kid would be severly injured or worse. It just is not worth the risk.\n\nIn addition, Driverless cars are not advanced enough. Driverless cars may have sensors and take extra steps in safty but technology just is not there. The pasage says, \"Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020\". In the future we may have the power we need to have driverless cars, but in this time now we do not. Many states even have laws that will not allow driverless cars to even be tested in that states.\n\nFinally, They are not reliable. All technology has flaws and that can not be helped. The passage even states, \"If technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver ot the owner?\". This is a good point, The car technology may seem flawless, but many factors come into play with something this big. The car may have a maulfunction that no one could have predicted, and many pepole could be injured or killed. This driverless car just is not reliable enough to risk the lives of innocent.\n\nDriverless cars are a very nice idea and would be helpful, However driverless cars just are not safe. These driverless cars are careless, imperfected, and unreliable. Many factors play in even ones we can not fully predict when it comes to technology. Its not worth the risk of pepole getting hurt just because we get lazy and do not want to drive. Theres no way to avoid it; its just safer to relie on ourselves instead of a robot.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir caring loving The author explains throughout memoir Parents caring loved help others He says parents always kept arms doors open many people considered family He explains parents left great jobs friends family cuba children would better life The author says parents helped discover real meaning familySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should join the seagoing cowboys. A seagoing cowboy is where you go over seas and take care of animals to help a country. A reason you should go to the sea going cowboys is that it's not only going to another county, but you can see nastional monuments and explore fun places. Luke Bomberger said that you will have an amazing time there. He also said that it was more than an adventure it was opening up the world to him. Luke Bomberger said that it's way more exiting than the job he had. He said that he got to see the acropolis in greece and he got to marvle at the panama Canal on his way to china. It might take awile on the trip there but you'll get to see amazing creatures and outstanding vews. Being a seagoing cowboy is one of the most fun things you will ever do in your whole entire life. I promise you will have the best time of your lives.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars have been a huge advancement in technology in the past 100 years. Although they make traveling much easier, cars are a big reason for economical displeasure. Limiting car usage can help us in many ways. It will reduce pollution, more building space, and death rates will decrease.\n\nInitially, limited car usage can play a major factor in pollution for the world. In \"Paris Bans driving due to smog,\" it says that 147 micrograms of particulated matter was fount in London. This is causing sickness and illness in alot of countries. If we would reduce car usage there would be alot less smog and greenhouse gases in the air that we breathe every day. Who wants to live in a cloud of dust?\n\nMore so, cars are congesting the roads and towns of almost every city. In France they had a day where they didnt allow you to drive your vehicle a certain day, and the congestion rate was down 60%. With less vehicles on the road, it gives more space for buildings to be built. Parks and sport centers will be built, giving more kids the chance to grown up being healthy and fit. As you can see limiting car usage can help in more ways than you thought. Also the less cars being bought and made, the more money we can have to better the lives of the sick and poor in the world. to use the money for events in the world aswell. The jobs that would become available to people for building more bicycles and sidewalks would increase tremendously.\n\nTherefore, the limitation of car usage will drastically change the rate of death in America and throughout the world. A study shows that driving by young people has decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009. If there are less people on the road then there will be less devastating fatalities on the road. The road is a path to your next door, not soppose to be the last path that you take. I dont want to be remembered as a statistic in this world, so less people driving and more people living is a great thing. Maybe we can see more good news than bad news whenever we turn the television on on sunday mornings after all.\n\nIn conclusion, The reduced limitation on car usage in the world can drastically improve our pollution problem, help with more buildings, and the death rate. Now let me ask you, if you had to choose wheither to drive that Mustang or to walk. After reading this passage, which would you choose? Like i said, i dont want to be remembered as a statistic.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would being in a driveless car be fun? yes, but its also dangerous. Let me tell you why. Say you had a bad day or something and you just want to get rid of the pain and your only coping skill is drinking,\n\nbut you don't want to drink at home. So you drink in the car. why? because for one you don't like drinking in front of your children an why not drink in the car it gives you silence from all the loud noise the kids be making at home & you don't have to drive because the car drives itself. Okay so you stop by the liquor store and buy some 1800 remy and vodka. Now you in the car slowly drinking your problems away, temporarily though because everybody knows alcohol & drugs is not a permanent solution, But you in the car drinking and the more you drink the stronger the urge of wanting to kill your gets. You won't stop because you feel like you can drown the feelings in alcohol but out of no where you hit a big 18 wheel semi and you die. Moral of the story is if that car wouldn't have never been driveless that person probably would still be alive and at home with his kids, But since he wasn't trying to show his children bad habits and he bought that new driveless car. He felt like he was safe enough but you can never be to safe. remember that.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think mood story gratefull I think story says Narciso thank parents love sacrificeAlso story Narciso says parents turned simple house home Which means kind selflessAnd says warmth kitchen humble house cuban feast always filled air scent music life loveSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted explains Empire State buildings past construction led tallest building United States Although buider Al Smith many obstacles faced hardest one attempting allow dirigibles dock One obstacles allowing dirigibles anchor several hours refueling service let passengers Another obstacle letting dirigibles dock need place tie mast It stated Dirigibles docked means electric winch haulled line front ship tied mast Lsted This problem body mast could swing alot breeze Although many obstacles Al Smith worked way around procceded finish Empire State building corage take obstaclesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The challenge of exploring venus is is that the atmospheric pressure is over 90 time greater then what we have here then what we ever will have here on earth. The normal temperatures on venus is about 800. The most we every get here is about some where in the 100s if you go to venus you will cook like your diner would. And there is way to much mercury on the plant. The plant havs a rocky surface. It has valleys and mountanins. It is kinda like earth.\n\nNASA has an idea thst they want to send people up to go and study the plant but not put then not the plant cause you can't land on it. They want them to fly above it and study it. And see what they can learn about it and see about it. But still being that far away from the plant it would be 170. The air pressurse would be sea level on earth. They would be hovering about 30 miles above it. It would not be easy for them them but it still be survivable for humans.\n\nNASA is working on a study on Venus with a diffrent approaches. One example is the silicon carbide that have been test in chambers. The have looked back at old technology. One called mechanical computers they where frist made in the 1800s. But they frist played a role in the 1940s.\n\nThey are looking for stuff that will give them more power. Modern computer are more powerful, flexible and quick. They need it to suroivoiur the heat of Venus. because it is not use to that much heat.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author ends story likes readers understant theme Which always start mistake made For example saeng failed herb driving test took toll try spring I guess figures renewed ll betterSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" a writer states that scientists are trying to study the planet Venus. In his article, he claims that while it is very risky, it may be worth it in the end. he also gives details about how dangerous it really is, and what the planet might have been at one point in time.\n\nIn the second paragraph, The writer claims that Venus is referred to as Earth's \"twin''. But the only evidence he gives to back up this claim is that \"Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of desnity and size.\" but in reality, Earth and Venus are very differnet. Earth is much safer in terms of temperature, pressure, and gas compaired to Venus. Venus has a blanket of gas that covers it that is, \"almost 97 percent carbon dioxide.\" Plus, on its surface, \"temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit.\" with the level of carbon dioxide and the ragging heat that it has, nothing is safe for long on Venus, especially humans. He does state that several spacecrafts have attempted to land on Venus, and only lasted a few hours, but he doesnt state what happened to them. most people would guess that they just melted entirely because of the extreme heat, which is most likely what happened, but we don't know for sure.\n\nNot only is high temperatures and extreme pressures an issue, he also states that there are volcanoes and major earthquakes that happen, plus lightning is constant as well. But there is no context to whether or not scientists are trying to figure out what causes the the powerful earthquakes to happen, or why lightning strikes frequently happen. He also states that, \"Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life.\" But there is nothing that follows it that claims what happened or could have happened to cause high pressures, high temperatures, and a high level of carbon dioxide to form.\n\nWhile scientists believe that Venus was at one point like earth, there are some facts that show that it has the looks of earth in some ways. the writer says that Venus, \"has a surface of rocky sediments and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" These features are exactly what earth has as well. But there could be more than what meets the eye. In parapgraph six, the writer says that,\" peering a Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions becuase most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere.\" This issue puts a damper on scientists ability to study the planet. But thats just it, what are scientists trying to study. The article says,\"Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.'' Which is great they are working on that, but what are they trying to collect, find, or explore.\n\nOverall, the article is good, but there needs to be more detail in what is happening. they need information on what scientists are specifically trying to study, what they are looking for, and more detail on how they are progressing in studying Venus. With more details about what they are trying to find, it would be easier to evaluate whether or not the scientist efforts are really worth it, or just a waste of time. A planet that is inhabitable by humans or anything living is already a risk as is.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article, \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" there are several given arguments to support whether the development on these cars are positive or negative. In my opinion, I think that the development of this futuristic concept is more negative and outweighs much of the positives.\n\nBeginning with paragraph two, it states that Google has had cars that could drive independently under specific directions since 2009. I have one question regaurding that statement and that is, if these cars have been around for seven years already, why are they not the main source of transportation yet? The only answer to that is that these cars are not the most efficient way of transportation. In paragraph three, the author states that the \"smart-road system\", the only way for these driverless cars to travel, would require massive upgrades to existing roads. If we are being practical, it would not be possible for every road to be rebuilt so that it is sustainable for these driverless cars to operate on. In addition to that, how would we travel in the meantime while the roads are being rebuilt? It is simply not practical to do that with our busy societies today.\n\nIn paragraph four, it states that manufacturers soon realized that the development of smarter roads weren't going to be possible, so they turned to smarter cars. Although this is a little more realistic, there are still several flaws in this idea. Technology is not always a reliable source, and that is exactly what these manufactureres are doing-trusting technology. They're trusting these sensors in the cars to drive and operate smoothly without any human assistance. No matter how high-tech these cars are, there is always a chance of risk. You might argue that humans driving have just as high of a risk, but if you look at paragraph seven, it mentions that although these cars do not need human assistance, the driverless cars can not detect crashes or road construction like humans can. They have installed a warning system that lets humans know when they need to take over, which means that the humans must stay alert of the driving at all times. I think that this defeats the purpose of having a \"driverless car\" if you have to be prepared to take over once your vehical is headed towards something unfamiliar. In paragraph seven, it also mentions that the cars will have cameras built in to watch the driver to make sure that they are paying attention to the road at all times. Yes, this is safer, but again, it defeats the purpose of having a car that doesn't require a driver.\n\nWith that said, in paragraph eight, the author says that sitting in a driverless car, not having anything to do, could get boring so they are planning on programming entertainment sources in the car. In my opinion, I think that if the driver is supposed to be paying attention to the road, then the sources of entertainment in the car could potentially be a distraction to the driver and take their attention away from the road.\n\nAlthough there are a few positives to these \"driverless cars\", such as saving fuel, the negatives outweigh the postivies. I believe that our society is safer and better off with normal functioning vehicals than getting into a car that comes with more possible risks.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The question of how people consume news in the digital age is a subject of ongoing debate. While some argue that newspapers remain the most effective medium, others contend that alternative sources provide a more efficient way to stay informed. In my view, each platform has its own merits, and a combination of sources is likely the most comprehensive approach.\r\n\r\nAdvocates of newspapers emphasize their longstanding role as reliable purveyors of information. Print journalism has a tradition of upholding rigorous editorial standards, ensuring that readers receive well-researched and balanced reporting. Moreover, newspapers offer an in-depth analysis of current events, allowing readers to delve into complex issues and explore various perspectives. This depth of coverage is often lacking in other media forms.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, proponents of alternative media argue that platforms like online news websites, podcasts, and social media offer immediacy and a broader range of viewpoints. With real-time updates and multimedia elements, these platforms provide a dynamic and interactive way to engage with news. Additionally, social media allows for the rapid dissemination of information, enabling stories to reach a global audience within seconds.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion, the most effective approach involves a judicious combination of both traditional and alternative news sources. Newspapers, with their rigorous editorial standards and in-depth reporting, offer a solid foundation for understanding complex issues. Meanwhile, alternative media provides the speed and diversity of perspectives necessary to keep up with the fast-paced nature of contemporary news.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while newspapers continue to serve as a cornerstone of reliable journalism, alternative media platforms offer unique advantages in terms of immediacy and diversity of viewpoints. A balanced consumption of news from various sources allows individuals to stay well-informed in today's rapidly evolving information landscape.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people think the face is a natural landform.Well to straighten this out here are some facts on why its not aliens and why its a natural land form. It was made from a lava dome and not from aliens. If you look at the pictures from 1976 to 2001 you will see how the face from 1976 has changed to look like it has been made into a lava dome. so the picture in 2001 is not a face but it is a lava doe. Nasa wishes there was an ancient civilization on mars but there never was any ancient civilization ever found on mars at all. When you go all thinking that there is aliens on mars think of this. Were any marking found on mars besides the face? Were any discoveries made on mars that look like there was some sort of man made things or not man made things? or were any discoveries of aliens found on mars to this day insted of back in the 20th centurary cause some things can be a hoax or just made to make people believe that there are aliens or lofe forms on mars. Lava domes are the lava or magma found in earth\n\nthat had burted up to the surface or it had been there my a meteor shower or something that had hit mars or bursted through the surface on mars.Try doing reasearch on the face and see if there is anything relating to aliens put in the artical you find or if there was any lava on mars or in mars like found on Earth. When someone says there are aliens on mars try to give them examples or reasons why there are no life forms on mars or anything in particular because some things are made by meteors or something that goes through the galaxy that could have hit mars and the projectile could have made the face or something that went through our galaxy hit it possibly. And made the face but noone knows for sure what made the facfe or if a lifeform made the face on mars but just think of what could have made the face on mars if it wasnt a life form or anything just think or search later in the Future on what it is something like that. When something or someone says that is was a lifeform that made the face on mars ask them if they had any news that aliens were found or discoverd on mars and go from there. When you find reasearch or facts on mars read the whole list of facts and think about mars and read to see of any life forms or aliens were discovers cause nasa can hide anything from the life on Earth or the civilians all around the world untill someone sends out a link or have leaked out the information about aliens or somethng like that cause if aliens are real then we will all know after that the face was made by somesort of life form found on mars. but if there is no leak or anything realating to aliens found on mars then no one will think aliens or whateverf made the face seen in the pictures. When someone saysthe ace was mae by aliens just think if they were right or wrong cause if they say they are real then tell them the facts on why they are not real and why the face is a natural land form and not a human or life form making.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face that I see on Mars to me is definitely an alien. The face is very realistic now that we have amazing cameras. If you don't think that it an alien go write a story of how it isn't.\n\nI think that it is an alien because it has a face we haven't ever see. This could prove that there is a such thing as an alien in this galaxy. It may not of came from Mars but landed face up on Mars and its body was eroded. The face could of been part of an alien that was living here and was the last on Mars. It looks like it could of been there for thousands of years but maybe not. Since this is current we could figure out what it is and have a drone go pick it up. This could lead to many different theories, but I think that It is an alien from another planet.\n\nNow that you know that this face on Mars is an alien you could become a scientist like me and figure it out. I think that in the future we will get a drone on Mars and pick up the face and maybe the body. I hope that you agree with me and find out more facts about the face.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "DEAR, STATE SENATOR\n\nWe should keep the electoral college because we want the people to vote not the house. If the people dont vote how would we know if we are getting what we deserve. Also as the artcle states \"the founding fathers established it in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president by vote in congress and election of the president\". The people should be able to vote because if we dont we are not going to be happy that we didnt get a say in the election.\n\nThe article states the that the eletoral college consist of 538 electors but only a majority of 270 electoral votes is required. Where is the 300 hundred and somthing other votes do they not get counted or do you forget about them because i think that is unreasonable becaues we have more people voting. The article states that \"most states have a \"winner takes all\" i think that this is basically cheating because you should only get what you have. If you get more than what you elected for the other people that you get will possiably turn against you thats why you should only get the people you already have.\n\nIf we let the people votes for who they may want then we would also be helping out the house to deside on who is president. For the people that like politics would like to vote but yes i know that some people arent going to vote,but we should still give are people a chace to vote. in this case i would like to have the electoral college to stay but let the people speak too.\n\nthis is why i would likw to keep the electoral college.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nI understand that there have been some issues regarding whether or not to keep the Electoral college or to change the system to a more simple- election by popular vote. From my understanding, the Electoral College has worked for many years with no issues or roadblocks so to speak that have interfered or had a bias on these decisions. But, from my recent discovery it might not be as well thought out and fair as we thought.\n\nI was just informed that i'm not really voting for the president, i am voting for the official voter that will then, in turn vote for the president(Using their own biases). Since i was not aware of this, i am quite shocked. I'm assuming that this is just something that gets passed by or not looked at very deeply, but i willbe that person that digs down and gets all up in the business of somone other than myself.\n\nThis is offical: The electoral colllege is unfair, oudated and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without a basis in reality. Yes, The electoral college does avoid the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast but, either way the method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state anyways.\n\nThank you for your time,\n\nPROPER_NAMESCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Artificially intelligent robots rather than people will do all of the jobs. While it is possible that artificial robots will perform all types of jobs except robotic technology. Hence this essay will discuss why particularly all of the jobs will undertake robots than human beings.\nIn these days, many jobs are undertaken by artificially intelligent robotic machines. Cumbersome repetitive tasks are difficult for any people, therefore it is better to get it done by robotic machines. For example, all of the work in manufacturing foundries is done by robotic arms without any rest, which lead to maximum profit at large scale in a short span of time. For these reasons, robots will eventually replace almost jobs performed by humans in the upcoming future.\nConversely, artificial robotic machines cannot replace few jobs unless they learn that as well. Human beings only know progressing in robotic technology, which outnumbers the artificial robots. For example, developing new algorithms for making artificial intelligent robots, which shall be developed by expert human beings. Because of that major reason, it is in believing, that artificial robots due to their limited functional capacities will not do those jobs that require human knowledge.\nSome people believe that artificially intelligent robotic machine will perform all of the jobs except those, which require complex level knowledge. All of the repetitive work may be handled by the robots, however, the people will do where the complex development is necessary. In my opinion, I believe that the robotic machines will perform all of the laborious jobs while the expert skilled peoples will do other jobs that require cognitive thinking ability.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir loving caring friends family everyone around example says mom would always keep door open whoever going rough time untill back feet knew would family Also mood thankful since Narciso admires everything s done life s helped s thankful friends care family thanks every oppertunity gets life The mood also shows somthing small turn big inside Narciso done much small place livesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can a computer read your emotions? I am against of having technology to read childrens emotions. One thing is to observer what kind of emotinos are. Learning about how computers can till what emotion the person has. The work eithics that the people into making a comptuer like this.\n\nObsever the emotion behide the person or printing. New software has the power to recognize your emotions. Everyone does the same expression. Can you gmake a face and have you partner guess what emotion you are. As an ad pops up the comupter can read you raction towards the ad if it made you happy or sad, it will change the ad to a different one.\n\nThe learning around the computer. That even need to know emotional commmuniction. That school computers can tell if the child is bored or confused on work. The computer can tell the Mona Lisa that she was happy, disgusted, fearful, and angry. The computer can recogize alone 16 emotions.\n\nThe work eithics of the people that created the comutper to see what emotions we have. Dr. Huang and his partners are developing a even better for humans and computers to communicate. A 3-D computer does 44 majot muscles to see what you are feeling. People are making a comupter to recognatioin to track the emotions on a person face.\n\nDoes a computer read your emotions and yes it does because it is wired. The computer has came a long way and now it is reading emotions. This is how I am against technology reading childrens emotion. The teachers should be watching them and seeing the emotions themselfs. Kids should be able to rise their hand and ask someone for help if they are confused.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It really nt matter I go library get book teacher school makes But library able put whatever want shelf library devided sections kids young adults adults If person nt like sees shelf library nt look check Just one person nt like dont mean someone else dos nt Librarys nt make people look check something nt like people complaining They getting checkout books movies music free unless becomes due So people stop complainging library shelvesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting essay Do exceed posted speed limit affected cyclist negative way The rode thought negatively alot doubt The cyclist confident thought wouldnt make For example cyclist notices nothing sight tone changes There one sight building car structure kind I began breaking ride distances I could see horizon telling I could make far Id fine He seemed unsure little nervous As journey continued cyclist loses hope seems It didnt really matter I going die birds would pick clean leaving expensive outdoor gear diary He see finishing journey rides middle nowhere nothing seen except Rough Road Ahead signsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The electoral colledge is very important. We used it for a long time and still are. The way is smart and is fair. The electoral colledge is very importnant. We should keep the electoral colledge. The states electoral votes are given by population. But its also not fair. Because if you win seven states and then the other candidate wins californa you may not have 55 elctoral votes, but you have 7 states. They should change it to 8 being the minimum electoral votes per state. If you win the three big states you already have 122 electoral votes not including the ones you may win. Some things should change about the electoral colledge. But more things should stay the same. After all that the voting would be a new thing.\n\nThe popular vote makes no sense the electoral colledge is the way to go. The electoral colledge is succesful and has worked greatly. Alot of citizens despite it but it works. Weve almost perfected the goverment system. We all agree to soemthing in it. The only problem we have is citizens not getting the president they want. We do not have a dictatorship and we all vote based on are mindest we have laws that we disagree to. The electoral colledge is the thing to do. It would be a bad choice to change it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued by individuals that people should learn to live without trying to stop climate change. I do agree with the statement, I believe that it is not our control to change the climate in the short term, however, it is possible to change it in the long term. In this essay, I am going to debate how can people contribute to avoiding climate change in the long term. I will also give a suggestion of how people try to live with it.\n\nFirst and foremost, it is commonly known that nowadays we have fewer issues regarding global, climate change due to global warming. Research believe that climate change could have a bad impact on people´s life. To illustrate it, petrol leads to an increase in global warming, the main reason is that it is affected by human´s activities by using transportation which uses petrol such as drive cars, trains and flights, these are the transportations that use a lot of petrol.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist many ways One way cyclist traveling high deserts California June Another affect said story cyclist made town water pump rusted strength worked handle got tarlike substance followed brackish water couldnt drink Also cyclist hitting water bottles regularly Lastly oldtimers said towns would close really far apartSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are controversial perspectives heating a debate over human’s damage to plant and animal species. While some claim that it is too late for any solution, others hold a strong view that some people claim that society should take effective action to solve the problem. While the former is valid to some extent, I would contend that the latter would potentially bring out more positive impacts.\r\n\r\nIt might be late for any action, since the environment has been seriously damaged. Society has tried plenty of environmental projects ,,nevertheless these projects still can not bring out a huge impact. For example, Stripped Project, Greenlife Project and Trash Again are some famous environmental projects in Ha Noi, yet they have not brought out a tremendous change. If society can not find a way to solve environmental problems, it might be too late. Therefore, the point of people who claim that it is late to save the environment is partly right, but it does not mean that the environment is unable to heal.\r\n\r\nWhile it is concluded that it might be late to save the environment, there are a lot of actions that can be taken. Despite the fact that a small change can not help the environment, if everyone makes a pale change, it will be big as a whole. To give an instance, the Earth Hour Project has globally caught the attention, and made society understand the importance of protecting the environment. \r\n\r\nDespite how late society is, everyone still can save the environment, rather than doing nothing. \r\n\r\nTherefore, society should try their best to save the environment, it might be late now, but evidence still speaks up that everyone can fix their mistakes on the Earth.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think the Facial Action Coding is 100 percent valuable and correct? In my personal opinion I say no. I have three reason that can explain why this technology is not valuable. I could be frowning and be happy ,but showing a sign of joy. Don't always trust technology; it sometimes can lead in the wrong way. Im amuse that people are relying on technology to lead them in a direction that could be wrong.\n\nIn the article it said \" For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feelging simply by the look on her face.\" That's very incorrect because many times I'll ask my friend how she is feeling when she looks grumpy. She would say im good with me not knowing that because me thinking her facial expression is saying something different. People ask me all the time whats wrong with me when; I turn out to be just chilling. Some people natural look might just be a mug. I learned that the hard way its so very true.\n\nTrusting technology can give you false information. I remember this time I sprained my foot. I went to the doctor to get in x-ray and the x-ray information was showing that nothing was wrong with it for a period of time. Although, im glad the doctor knew what he was doing ;he then figure out that the inner of my foot was spained. The bone was slightly bent and I needed time to heal it and recover. It sounds like the Facial Action Coding System is like a x-ray machine.\n\nI understand that the Facial Action Coding System is a use of technology. With that being known we can believe that the technology want always be right. You can get stuff off the internet thats not true information, but yet it's a source of technology. Many people just go to get there information off of wikipedia for a research project. You never know if the stuff is true because any one can edit it. So you can compare the Facial Action Coding Sysytem with gettig information off of the internet these are both sources of technology.\n\nIs it a possibility that the Facial Coding System is valuable? Yes but I wouldn't put all of my trust into it. Just because im frowning don't assume that something is wrong with me. Or if someone just has a mug as a look don't think that their mad. It can come back that your wrong. Believeing that everything with technology is true is very false. It a good chance that the technology is off. The Facial Coding Sysytem like a x-ray scanning. Sometimes it can give true information sometimes it can't.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Ever dreamed about visiting a different planet, that is considered Earth's twin? A planet that is very similar to Earth from density to size is called Venus. It is also very close to Earth that it even has it's nickname, \"Evening Star.\" Though Venus is planet Earth's twin it could be very dangers and difficult to analyze the planet, but it won't stop sicentists from that. The occurings of what happens in the planet, and why sicentists wont stop them from exploring Venus.\n\nVenus is the second planet from the Sun. It for sure has different things that planet Earth doesn't exprenice. In Earth no one expreince the temperature,\"over 800 degrees Fahrenheit.\" It would be impossible for humans to even live in such a hot planet. If they do send scientists they will have to be hovering in the air becuase of the extreme temperature. Venus has some similar things that Earth would have very dangerous volcanoes, earthquakes, and lightning that occur. So, why would NASA send sicentists to explore Venus?\n\nThe conditions in Venus is nothing like Earth. Though some people might think there's not reason to go and explore Venus some think there are reasons. The author of this article says that it is wroth going to see Venus and analyze it. \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system,\"(paragraph,4). This text from the article shows that venus was once like earth with similar features. Other evidence from the article comes fgrom paragraph 4,\" ...Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" If it had\n\nsome type of water in the planet now it would be very worthy to visit and even if not now, it could still be worthy becuase it could of in the pass. Even today, Venus has some features that Earth has as well,\"... has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" This helps out to why NASA should really be inspired to visit Venus because of the ability that it could of once been earth.\n\n\"Evening Star\" is the nickname of planet Earth's twin. Though it's just the nickname it's actually the second planet from the Sun in our solar system. It would of been just like Earth and it still has somes features similar to Earth. So, let's investagate Venus for a chance to visit and see planet Earth's twin.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some features setting affect cyclist The hills cyclisit go heat The heat making cyclist sweat alot loosing fluids starts got dyhydrated The hills making work harder getting tiredSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To design mast dirigibles land easy matter architects could plop mooring mast top flat roof The stress thousand foot dirigible would transmit weight wind pressure way foundation To able create mast Empire State building would modified strengthend First architects designed shiny glass chromenickel stainless steel tower would illuminated inside steepedback design imitated overall shapp building This rocket shapped mast would four wings corners aluminum would rise conical roof would house mooring arm For winches control machinery dirigible mooring would placed back machinery Finnally completed existing plans building put placeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Winter Hibiscus Minfong Ho author concludes story paragraph Saeng vowing take test spring Minfong used paragraph means never give even fail first time For example Saeng failed drivers test buying Hibiscus taking deeper things realized shouldnt giveSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 6. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 6. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The cyclist motivated get job done When said eighteen miles road He thought going forever made conserved water last kept going road turned rocky gravel road still kept going harder legs water supplySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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