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"content": "When you want to do something new ,you go for it. That is what Luke did ,right. The Seagoing cowboy is when you or someone else that helps take care of the animals on a boat , while they are crossing oceans. That is kind of like joining the milatary or the army. You are basically risking your life for other people, some peope you probably don't even know. It can be a lifetime experience.\n\nIt also can be a huge opprtunity. Like Luke couldn't say no to for trying something new after he was done with school. He was also at a young age. Starting early. After you are done with trying something new, you will realise that you have done something wonderful.\n\nWhile you are working , you also realise that you are having fun while doing it. You could be working hard and having fun at the same time . Some people think ,if you do something that can take your life, isn't fun. I'm just saying if you like to do something then work hard to acomplish it.\n\nAnd I'm not just saying that you have to do that ,but once you do it, you could have fun by doing it. Just like Luke did. Before finishing school , you should make plans for what you want to do. Dont wait to the last minute to think. Making differences is a good thing, not a bad thing. It seemed like Luke didn't know what Seagoing was, but it was something new so he went on and did it.\n\nSeagoing can also give you a opprtunity to have fun with animals , if you like them. Luke grew up in farms, so I guess he liked them. He was prepared to work that job. I wouldn't want to do that, because I'm not a big fan about animals. But you like animals, you should try being a Seagoing Cowboy or Cowgirl.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The features setting story gives cyclist determination Since desertSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Narciso Rodriguez mood created author respectful First Narciso s parents courages When Narciso talks parents says My mother father come country courage without knowledge language culture Rodriguez paragraph Narciso gives parents respect deserve describing actions courage Narciso s parents wanted kids better life When Narciso explains parents came United States says They came selflessly many immigrants give children better life even though meant leaving behing families friends careers country loved Rodriguez paragraph When says They came give children better life shows Narciso s parents love kids much could give kids better future deserves great respect Finally Narciso greatful parents When Narciso describes feels towards parents says I always grateful parents love sacrifice Rodriguez paragraph When author says I always grateful shows author thankful parents therefore shows respect All memoir Narciso Rodriguez mood created author respectfulSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The vast majority of the population deems that high department enlistment should ask questions that interest them and sometimes criticize the scholar to improve learning opportunities . Others, however, believe this situation will cost respect and order in the classroom . I will explain this in an essay.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, these days online education is very developing and high school pupils improve their educational knowledge with e-learning. On the internet ,have a lot of online courses and these sources are free and very profitable. For example, enlistment sees a variety of online lessons on the internet in order to learn more about the topics taught by the workforce at an institution and learn about things that their force did not say and they ask about these things and this state create competition between the faculty member and student. Furthermore, positive remarks and suggestions from high seminary recruitment can help educators to design their lessons taking into account the interests and wishes of students.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some people think teenagers are not minded as humans . They can be mainly based on their emotions. And that condition existence disaster of respect. The encouragement of recruitment to criticise crew can result in a markdown of self-esteem and the fear of consequence in the team. The criticism by recruitment can be mainly based on their emotions rather than facts and logical conclusions since teenagers are not mature enough to do this.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, although I believe , criticism is lead to fall of respect and this state create bad atmosphere in the classroom between lecturer and admission.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In today's world, it is believed by some part of a population that it might be better for us to get used to climate change and the life with it rather than spend time trying to change something. I disagree with this opinion and possible arguments will be discussed below.\n\nFirst of all, to begin with, the main reason why this idea is not right is that we have opportunities to intervene and prevent further progression of this tendency. This is because of the fact that not only are there developments in technologies but also scientists and ecologists develop new ways of fighting. Therefore, if we have a chance to change the situation it seems extremely incorrect to ignore the problem. For example, recent research has shown that the introduction of pollution permits in Ukraine has shown outstanding results and pollution was decraesed by 20%.\n\nMoreover, another evidence why people should try to prevent climate change is that it may get extremely worse so the Earth may become uninhabitable. The major reason for such a thought is that climate deteriorates in a geometric progression and without appropriate measures this issue may become inevitable. Hence, the whole process of global climate change may accelerate and we will not be able to slow down it in the future.\n\nEventually, to conclude, I disagree with the opinion that humans just need to find a way t olive with environmental problems, firstly, since there areworking technologies which can at least slow sown the whole process and, secondly, because without intervention the situation may get extremely worse in the nearest future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author concludes story Winter Hibiscus paragraph show Saeng starting over In spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding life starting fresh way Although miss old life grandmother well fine toothed comb She making effort take test By relating test shows ready give loss griefSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The library meant place filled materials different genres types Many us go library looking something particular rather browsing Although materials people need research library considered inapproproate certain audiences still serves useful resource others This include getting information research paper renting movie needs watched school looking certain type book read By taking certain books music movies magazines shelves limiting amount materials people borrow At many schools students asked write research papers What considered valid subject high school research paper include information suitable groups people A student write research paper effects certain drug individual Just student chooses topic mean supports Some adults say information drugs shelves library include material consider graphic student looks material resource educational purpose My freshman year read We also watched movie get better understanding differences time periods There death violence movie along brief flash nudity Many would consider even great literary work movie inappropriate The movie helped us get real life picture things back We mature enough look past graphic scences see movie really If move taken shelf people would nt fully understood story could nt picture Sometimes want good book read Many teens gravitate young adult section includes agerelated material Many books section include works dark graphic theme subjects inappropriate younger children If eliminated books section censored end even less teens read Certain books provide escape teens even help confront deal problems lives If libraries start censoring books end less less readers years go Instead censoring books censor people reading books If parent nt want younger child read certain topic keep away material Libraries put age approval marks certain books permit certain age groups read Authors books punished choose write taking books library No matter person s purpose reading choice kind material book containsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Nowdays technology is almost the base for everything; for medicine, for entertaniment, for research and everyday technology is developing faster and faster.\n\nSince technology has become something for must people, a very essensial tool in order to live, they have decide to create even more things from it to make their lives easier; which this leading them to depend on technology in aspects of their lives like work, doctor, school, amusement, etc.\n\nBut what would happen is technology shuts down one day or even a month? People who depend on technology will be forlorn.\n\nIn relation to the arcticle and the question about technology shuting down, if we use this technolgy called Facial Action Coding System in students to read emotional expressions of students in a classroom, we can have advantage when it comes to understanding and helping the students. But when it comes for technology shuting down then what? Teacher of superiors are not going to be able anymore to guide students by themselves. They would depend on the program to detect how can they act in order to help the classroom.\n\nThis program can be useful but in even more important aspects as reasearch is. For example, that they tell us about how miguel angel created Mona Lisa, with this program they could analyze Mona Lisa's expressions behind the painting.\n\nWe humnas are smart enough to read someone facial expressions and analyze them. The need to crate a program and to waste money that can be used in more important investigations, is not really something required for society in order to develop.\n\nMaybe detecting people's emotions can help the government or they would be the only ones to get a benefit from it, so they can control easily the citizens.\n\nOverall, the creation of technologic programs like this is really not helping schools but research, and the less we depend on technology in order to survive, everyone would be more conected to earth and would use more the riches a country has, rather than creating more tech grabage.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There have always been conflicts about the policy of investing the majority of citizens’ taxes on motivating society to have a healthier lifestyle for future risks, however, others argue that it is vital to support patients who are in serious illnesses. In my perspective, I totally approve of the former promotion and this essay will explain the reasons why. \r\n\r\nThe investment in sustaining residents’ long-term health produces massive impacts on society. First of all, guaranteeing social healths should benefit the nation’s fund due to the reduction in hospitalisations which bring about the decreasing tendency of medical supporting fee and the remaining fund will contribute greatly to the up-gradation of public facilities. For instance, instead of spending a gigantic amount on medication and operations, having prepared hand forward, the country has better possibilities in avoiding crucial diseases as well as enhancements in the revenues donating to communal organizations such as orphanages or nursing houses\r\n\r\nHaving planned scenarios for future cases prevents the country from damages because of unexpected global diseases. Considering healthy lifestyles enhances the community’s immune systems that play important role in inhibiting sickness. This is analogous to the covid 19 pandemic that caused crucial consequences to nations both economic and physical aspects yet a variety of deaths are recorded to happen with patients who have underline illnesses that worsen the situation.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the concentration on these promotions leads to inequality in revenues shared to aid patients who are in need. This rests on the fact that there will be emergencies when hospitals ask for donations from private organizations because of costly treatments. Furthermore, depending on governments’ incentives stop residents from actively creating methods in order to protect their health which in a long run will be harmful individually.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, despite the reliance on governments’ policies and insufficient expenses I absolutely agree with the statement that politicians should focus on citizens’ current situations that will be advantageous to the nation’s development in the future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood author trying create sense hope family happiness Hope family helped others letting temporarily stay got back feet provided hope extended family Family cause last paragraph explaining tiny apartment learned definition family welcoming refugees celebrating first birthdays loving careing enviroment Finally I think happiness explaining grateful parents coming america give better life also paragraph two explaining home environment filled cooking music factors happiness These moods author trying showSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "\" I cant believe that the face was made by real life aliens its unbelievable! \" Jim said\n\n\" Dont tell me you believe that the fae was made by aliens. \" i said\n\n\" Actually yes i do. I believe aliens are truly real and don't care what anyone says. \" Jim said\n\n\" Jim there is no such thing as aliens maybe they may be real, but we have no sign or evidence that aliens are truly real. You watch to many Sci-Fi movies jim you need to lay them off for a while. \" I said\n\n\" Well if you think aliens don't exist then tell me prove to me how the the face was made then. \" Jim said\n\n\" Ok i will let me just go and get the picture. \"\n\nI said\n\nIn my head i am thinking jim is nuts there is no way an alien had made the face.\n\n\" I'm telling you jim aliens did not create this. \" I said\n\n\" If aliens didn't creat this explain to me why or how this was probably formed from the picture. \" Jim said\n\nI look at jim right in the eye and was glad to show him with confidence that i was right and he was wrong.\n\n\" Look jim in 1998 when Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team flew over cyndonia for the first time Michael and his team to ten pictures sharper than then the ones that the viking's photos took. When we all saw the photos it revealed a natural landform and no alien monument. \" I said\n\n\" I still don\"t believe you. \" Jim said\n\n\" So you want to me to explain more? \" I said\n\n\" Go right ahead. \" Jim said\n\n\" Garvin said that it reminded him of the Middle Butte in the Snakes River Plain of Idaho. Thats a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars. \" I said\n\n\" Well i guess you have a point there, but that doesn't change the fact that i believe in aliens. \" Jim said\n\n\" Ok you can believe in whatever you want, but i was just simply telling you what we told to other people that also believed it was made by aliens. \" i saidSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In this article, I am against the development of driverless cars. This article has many negative aspects of driverless cars. I am against driverless cars because the cost of making them is expensive, the driverless cars could make the driver very bored, and it would be a hazard if there are malfunctions with the machine. Those reasons support my position on being against driverless cars.\n\nI am against the development of driverless cars because they are expensive. I believe they are expensive because they would have to upgrade the roads, make the car smarter, and all of the machinery the companies need to build a driverless car. The article states, \"They required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was simply too expensive to be practical.\" Also to make the driverless car companies will need to make the car smarter and add many machines to the car. The article states, \"Manufacturers turned to smarter cars—but how much smarter did the cars need to be? For starters, they needed a whole lot of sensors.\" That quote means to upgrade the car, there would be many machines used, such as sensors.\n\nAnother reason why I am against the development of driverless cars is they could make drivers in the car very bored. They could make the driver really bored because the article states, \"This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires.\" That quote means that human drivers would have to sit there and wait until there is an alert for the human driver to take over. Also this article also shows us that human drivers will get bored, \"Wouldn’t drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?\" Those quotes show us that human drivers could get bored being in a driverless car.\n\nMy last reason why I am against the development of driverless cars is that they could have malfunctions. The development of driverless cars could lead to malfunctions on the road. The driving laws might need to be changed because of these driverless cars. In the article it states, \"New laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident.\" Also, \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault—the driver or the manufacturer?\" Those quote mean that there would be new laws needed for driverless car just in case a driverless car has a malfunction.\n\nThose were reasons why I am against the development of driverless cars. The cost, the drivers being bored, and the hazards that the driverless cars can bring. That is why there should not be driverless cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the article\"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" autonomous cars are being developed by car companies across the world. Most companies believe that these self-driving cars will be a good influence on the world, however I disagree. I am aganist the development of these cars because of the copius amount of money it will use and the unessecary addition of new driving laws.\n\nIn the 1950's, a company created a car that could run on a special track whose usage developed as the years went on. Researchers have found that, \"These smart-road systems worked suprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was simply too expensive to be pratical.\" Smarter roads required too much money to develop and lead to the creation of smart cars. Smart cars have a lot of beneficiary components, but are not completly self-driving. This idea of self-driven cars is too complex to create; even the \"smartest\" cars with the latest and high technology cannot be fully self-driven. The money used for these unrealistic cars can be used for other important things in the buisness world and in the real world. Better cars that require driving should be developed or the money should go to the governement to fund other things. Overall, the large sums of money being drawn to create self-driven cars is a negative development.\n\nIf self-driven cars are created, many new lawsuits will be filed regarding the new cars. The biggest question that will stand will be, \"if the techonology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer?\" Autonomous cars will bound to have accidents and if the car is driving, lawyers will not know who to blame and take charges. if a person was not driving the car and it crashed but was stil inside, would that person be charged? Unnecessary actions that the government does not have time for will have to be taken- new laws regarding the creation of self-driving cars will be made so that parties will not be at fault. Laws containg the legality of accidents and the questionable safety of the car. The \"human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when situation requires\" which goes aganist a self-driven car, the car has to be the one to be ready to drive and do what humans would do when driving. This raises questions on whether people can truly be safe inside a self-driven car.\n\nIn conclusion, the development of self-driving cars is a negative addition for the world because of the copius amounts of money needed and the addition of new driving laws.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I don't think they should do the Facial Action Coding System. It would be wrong most of the time. Humans have a lot of emotions and I don't it can read all of them.\n\nMost humans have \"trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried and etc.\" If humans can barely read expresses on a friends face, why do we have a machine doing it. That machine would cost a pretty penny just to read your emotions. All humans probably only have a desk computer.\n\nThe 3D computer would be a waste of time. \"Humans perform this same impressive \"calculation\" every day\". You can tell when your going to mad, happy. The emotions just a random times or at the right time.\n\nThe 3D computers has\" algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile.\" Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms.\" There are so much tech just to read you're emotions.\n\nThe 3D computer is just a waste of space and time. Humans have \"calculations\" every day. Your home PC wouldn't be able to handle the codes for the system. Humans have a lot of emotions every day it would be hard for the computer to read.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the modern society, people’s work clothes have attracted much concern.Some people hold the view that the style of the staff should not be paid attention to by the manager on the grounds that the work productivity is of importance. Personally, I believe the way they dress completely depends on the type of their company or job.\r\nOn the one hand, formal clothes are suitable for profesional jobs as well as in disciplined settings. Several certain jobs such as lawyer, doctor, teacher and even sales people require people dress up smartly and courteously which undoutedly boost confidence and work efficiency.For example, when wearing white blouse in the hospital, doctors may be more aware of the value of their work in order to try their best to fulfill their duty. Futhermore, should they wear smart clothes, they will be respectful towards others, which affects social interaction and be enormously significant to those face-to-face jobs, especially marketing or receptionist.\r\nOn the other hand, there are remarkable reasons why a multitude of individuals hold the notion that using formal clothes is unnecessary. First of all, clothings are not reflective of the worker’s own performance or their ability. For instance, technological company like Google and Facebook are well-known for their relaxed dress codes because they aim to create an informal, exciting and creative environment; consequently, they produce sophisticated and convenient products despite casual clothes. Secondly, informal clothes are oustanding choices for not only sedentary work styles but also active employess. Loose clothes help relax their muscles, bring comfort and their actions will not be limited.\r\nIn conclusion, although clothing does not reflex one’s ability to work, the style of people should be appropriate for their jobs. While in professional setting formal clothes increase people’s self-confidence together with the work productivity and show respect to other people, casual clothes make the staff relaxed and also be convenient for moving employees.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I am against driverless cars because if something goes wrong you cannot control it only the car can. I will say reading from the article the driverless cars can be beneficial. Althought testing driverless vehicles is illegal in most states. Also driverless cars will need a lot more work done on them before they will every be legal to drive.\n\nThe pros about driverless cars are they have automatic antilock brakes. Also driverless cars can handle driving functions up to 25 mph. Another pro about driverless cars is they can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves.\n\nThe negatives about a driverless car is drivers would get bored waiting for their turn waiting to drive. Also you have to drive if traffic gets to heavy, or navigating through work zones. Also there would\n\nhave to be more traffic laws if this happened. Also there are many problems with driverless cars that manufactures are working on.\n\nLastly I am against driverless cars because they are almost just like a regular car. The car drives for you, but you have to drive when traffic gets heavy. Also there is traffic almost everyday when you are traveling. Also driverless cars have have just as many positives as negative so there is really no pinty of driverless cars.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There many obstacles builders Empire State building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock One obstacle lot dirigibles outside use hydrogen helium The problem hydrogen highly flammable German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire Lakehurst New Jersey May owners Empire State building realized much worse accident could taken place densley populated area downtown New York City imagine tragic chaotic would Another obstacle builders faced nature The winds top building constantly shifting violent air currents That would ve meant dirigibles could got swept back In conclusion several obstacles builders Empire State building faced attempting allow dirigibles dockSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Some today contend that high school students should have greater latitude to critique and question their teachers, despite the risks this presents for classroom management. I am strongly in agreement as this enables the ideal classroom environment.\r\n\r\nCritics of this shift in mentality point out that the teacher position requires respect. A teacher who is consistently being interrupted by students will not be able to lecture and assign and mark homework well. Many students might exploit a rule that encourages questions in order to intentionally derail lessons and undermine the teacher. There is also the possibility that the negative attitude of some students will create general unrest that is not conducive to learning. However, I would argue that the appearance of respect, when in reality most students question their teachers in private, holds little actual value beyond preserving unwarranted pride.\r\n\r\nMoreover, the free discussion of ideas is essential to the best learning. Students who are sitting quietly and feigning interest in class are likely to become less motivated. On the other hand, if a class is studying a work of literature or an event in history, students will engage more fully in lessons given the opportunity to ask questions. By asking questions, even if these queries are loosely defined as criticisms of what is being taught, they will suddenly have a reason to learn and the lesson will become more memorable for all students. The questions might also lead the class to novel insights as long as the teacher is confident enough to embark on collaborative explorations.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although certain educational institutions fear that questions may undermine teachers, they in fact are the foundation of a positive learning environment. Schools should embrace academic rigour in all its forms.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I believe that Aliens have created that face on Mars. I believe this because how else would that landform would have gotten there? I think that aliens are stereotypical and that they are real and are not real it really depends on your opinion.\n\nFirst of all there is no other way that the land form would have gotten there. Humans would have had to go to mars to put that there,but as we all know humans have not been to Mars. People\n\nwould have had to travel there and that would take years and some of the people would not last that long on a spaceship.\n\nSecond of all That would be a very dangerous trip for that long into space. NASA would never send someone up yo space for that long just to build a face on Mars. Aliens would have special powers to help them build the sculpture fastly so that the humans wouldnt see them because they don't want us to know they exist.\n\nAnd to conclude this all up Aliens may or may not exist we will never know for sure. We will probably never see one but we may find signs of them exist on different planets.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Now a day's myriad people inculcated of to know the history of there houses there lives in. Along with they acclimatized some researches to find the past of the building. This essay is going to write about the reasons, which things are involve the assist to research amalgomate with some relevant examples.\r\n\r\nSome coutries, folk are keen to find the history of house, which included several reasons behind that one. The first and foremost thing is to understand the what culture they had, which civilization they inculcated in the past. If the building belongs to past 100 or 150 years ago, which type of bulidings contain some history. For a prime illusrtation, Indian people are do this type the experiments in their dilapidated buildings. Due to this, they found myriad valuable things like stones, jewels along with some precious coins and some diamonds also they found. Moreover, another reason is some people are ardor to get that type valuable things, because of the reason also they doing research.\r\n\r\nOn otherhand,several things are participated to do research. To embark with, some valuable books, which written how to find some miserable things. They written proper guidance to follow. Another one is the archaeology department they do methodical way, which is facil for them to do \r\n\r\nthis type of research.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it can be seen that to know the history of the building or house they live in , which contains so much beneficial for them to \r\n\r\nlive future. The prominent thing is advanced technology they found easily the history of the house. It enhances their living standards \r\n\r\nbetter.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "What would you do without car usage? Is there such thing as too much or too little car usage? Many residents or travelers are nearby thier destination and don't nessesaraly need a car to get there. Although, for other's they may need to use a car becasue of extended distance. Limiting car usage has many advantages. For example, in Vauban, Germany streets are completely \"car free\". According to the article \" 70% of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57% sold car's to move here\". Families and friends are much active with each other and can spend more quality time outside of school and work.\n\nWhen there is less car usage more public transportation will be available to thoose who need it more importantly. Also there would be less polution with the gas and air. \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution\", said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza. Due to the smog that was in France, car's was banned. \"Public transit was free of charge from Friday to Monday\", according to the BBC. Fuel is also a great impact. Do you ever feel like you just work hard for nothing? Money is being wasted on gas, car materials, and car details much more then the things it really needs to be spent on.\n\nLimiting car usage could mean less accidents. Less accidents means less deaths and injuries. Driving could be risky especially in crowdy places with people and other cars. Limiting cars could also mean people getting to know diffrent places often and not just the places they are used to going. Parks and sports centers also have had bloomed throughout the city; uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions have dramtically cut traffic; and new resturants and upscale shoppung districts have cropped up. Families are more engaged together and work together to make it to thier destination.\n\nIn conclusion, Do you feel as if car polution should be limited becasue of all the advatages. Limiting car usage has it advantages and disadvatages. Many things could possibly happen. According to The end of Car Culture article, \"pedestrian, bicycle, private cars, commercial and public transportations traffic are woven into a connected network to save time, conserve recources, lower emissions and improve saftey\". The Mobile World Congress is looking for more saftey ways to transport and get to yout destintation when needed. Due to limiting car-usage families and friends can now spend quality time while getting to thier locations, you can go to your nearby places, you could save more money of gas and car details, and also you could prevent less accidents if possible.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Smart cars can be very helpful in many ways. But, they can also be bad in many different ways as well. These smart cars are good and bad in ways we might not understand. Smart cars are bad because they can't drive into or out of a driveway, they can't go around construction sites or vehicle accidents, they also give the option for the driver to not pay attention to the road.\n\nDriving in and out of a driveway shouldn't be so difficult for a smart car. It is impossible for a smart car to do just that. In the article it states\" They still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways.\"\n\nThe creaters of these type of cars should make it where smart cars can do anything. Driverless cars dont make sense of a smart car at all.\n\nConstruction sites and vehicle accidents are all around the city or town you live in. Do you want to be notified by a smart car, when to take over the wheel? Smart cars should be able to drive around sites and accidents, but no they can't. In the excerpt it states \" They still alert the driver to take over when dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents.\" We want the cars to do everything, so we don't have to. And then there is another problem with these smart cars.\n\nSmart cars allow us to not pay any attention the road ahead of us. These cars want to driver to be fully alert of what is going on outside of the car. In the article it states \" Such displays can be turned off insantly when the driver needs to take over.\" But, when the car drives for us there is no point of paying any attention to the road. Then this causes accidents that they can't drive through. Now we have hospital bills to pay just becasue we wasn't paying any attention to the street or road in front of our faces.\n\nSmart cars are not so smart after all. Why do we have to take over the wheel in certain situations? If they were so smart, don't you think they would be able to do what we want them to do. There is no point of buying these expensive cars if they don't do what we expect them to. Smart cars should be able to drive in and out of driveways, go around construction sites and vehicle accidents, and do everything so the driver doesn't have to take over.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The features setting greatly affect cyclist setting hot rough terrain tired thirsty The cyclist said over one long crippling hill building came view He means needed water much hill big needed water Also says Summertime rattled around dry honey combs deteriorating brain It summer time riding keep mind thirst hums song summertime He wants show heat overtake body Also says At point tumble weeds crossed path ridiculously large snake He saying terrain deadly snake passed He needed show objections could overcome anything As see setting greatly affected cyclistSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood memoir happyness friendship glory example My parents always always kept arms door open many people considered family knowing would us A feeling friendship honesty closeknit community honest hardworking immigrants extended hand people necessarily kind clearly need mood memoirSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood created author memoir love caring thankfulness I say really appriciates parents done In says I always grateful parents love sacrifice admiration strength perseverance I ve thanked repeatedly Also close knit community honest hardworking immigrants extended hand people necessarily kind really need This shows Narciso family trust people community thankful mood Because know would never anything hurt In last says I learned real definition family I never forget parents turned simple house home This shows thankful loving caring parents Narciso proud parents let people stay need to This moods created author memoirSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In 2050, or the next 27 years, technology will be changing classrooms, and students will be not attending in the classroom. In contrast, some groups of people argue that this action is not true ,and students will be studying in the school. However, I surely agree that students will study online more than study in schools in the future, and I will explain why I believe that education will be changing. \r\n\r\nFirst of all, many colleges are using new innovations such as Google Classroom, Google Meet and Zoom in their schools, and these programs are very useful for them. For example, when COVID-19 was happening, many students could study from their homes. In addition, many academic tutors have used online programs to teach their lessons. For example, some researchers said that the education centre will prefer to buy new online material for their center and they have trained their teacher about online learning, and the number of people who will study online is increasing every year. Thus, I totally agree 100 percent that if technology increases, studying style will be changed. \r\n\r\nSecondly, online education is very popular now, and parents think that if their children study in their home, it will be better in school because they can control their kids and learn with them. For example, I am seeing that most of the people who send children to school are declining. So, I think that it is a trend for a new generation.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, from the argument and given examples, I firmly believe that the education style will be changing in 2050 because of new model technology ,and the attitude of a new generation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "One day I pachent started I raket leves I going get paid work well I going get day I whanted vary second I pachiontoSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I say we dont need driverless cars cause we already have to many accidents when we have drivers.\n\nIf one thing goes wrong when there is no driver it could be deadly cause unlike when your driving you can swerve out the way if a car is coming from the side fast, but if there no driver then that means the car isnt able to change directions fast enough to get out the way.\n\nYou could also argue that it would be more safe to have driverless car, say u were drunk and u couldnt drive you could easily get in the car and it would drive by itself but there would be many downsides tothat. The car sometimes has the driver take over and it wouldnt be good to have the driver take over when he or she is drunk.\n\nIt says in paragraph 7 that the driverless cars arent completley driverless. \"But all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents\" that dont really make sense to me because why would u have a car that is \"driverless\" but still have to pay attention to the road and keep your hands on the wheel.\n\nI say that we dont make driverless cars because they are very exspensive and dangerous if someone were to get in a crash they are most likey going to sue the company for a lot of money.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think having a Facial Action Coding System in a classroom is very valuable. There are many positive outcomes to having it in the room with the children. It can help stusdent counselers for a school with this technology. It can help just about all the students in a school. I think this would be a very useful thing for a classroom.\n\nHow can it help in a classroom? Lets say a teacher noticed a student that was having a bad day or looked down in general. The teacher would then send them to a computer to use the Facial Action Coding System to help see how the student is feeling. The teacher can then send the student to a counseler to discuss how the student is feeling using the technology on the computer.\n\nIn paragraph 6, it said that the computer could recognize when a student is bored or confused with a lesson. If a student the best day, the computer would recognize it and the student can be helped out with his or her situation. Thats when the student would be sent to talk to someone about whats going on with them.\n\nIn couclusion, I strongly think that having a Facial Action Coding System in a classroom would be very useful. It can make a teacher and student counselers job 10 times easier. It may cost the school some money for the technology but it would be toatally worth it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Luke thought you would like to go to the Seagoing Cowboys program. You travel around the world. It will be cool to see differnet things. You could help the cowboys the all the animals. I think you will have a great time. Hope you have a great time joining the Seagoing Cowboys!\n\nYou ride on a boat to the places you go. The cattle-boat trips are an unbelieveable opportunity. Helping people is good. You take alot of tips and do lot of cool things. Just try it out and se if you like it. There are some roles you play to help people with things. People lost thier things becuase of World War 2.\n\nFinally I think you will have a good time. If I know I like it, you will to. Go and have a great time. Go travel around the world. Go and see things you maybe never saw before. You will have a great experiance. It will change your life.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The world with years has been changing rapidly; therefore, new habits should replace old ones because of uselessness. Inasmuch as I think old behavior is a basement for new, so I cannot agree with the topic statement.\r\nThus, people cannot decline the fact that some rituals and traditions irrelevant at the present. For the instance, a pagan belief or guidance by signs of nature. Moreover, some behaviors become useless in a tendency developing of new technology. For example, to write a letter by a feather or to harvest by hands. However, all these old fashion behaviors return for the time being in modified form, so as in the past pagan priests pray to the Gods of nature today increase quantity people are doing the same but labeled it the belief of Sun or other titles. Moreover, in spite of new technology, harvesting by hands practice in many countries and provide enhance of people’s health. \r\nFor the time being, modern world has trend banned old traditions because acquires new. However, around the world, many old celebrates combine with new one, and old traditions a little adapted to a new reality do not forget. For example, the New Year or the Christmas in Ukraine has old fashion traditions and modern one. Moreover, all new ways of behavior have in their root old; therefore, people cannot ignore or forget archaic habits because it builds their new style of life. Furthermore, at the present, many countries keep or renew old villages or castles for demonstrating an old way of life and it increase popularity among people.\r\nIn conclusion, I disagree with worthless and uselessness customs and traditional ways of behavior because of they our roots and foundation of local culture.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Being able to go on Venus would be great thing but we can not do that. This author explains how it might be done. Do you ever wonder if there is a planet out there just like earth? Venus could be that planet, the only problem is we cannot land on it. In paragraph 2 the author states \" offten refered to as Earth's twin, Venus is the clostest planet to Earth in terms of density and size and occasionaly the closest in distance.\"those are some facts about Venus and Earth. in paragraph two it also states \" humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world . Each previous mission was unmanned, and for a good reason, since no spacecraft survided the landing for more than a few hours.\" The author explains how they have tried sending spacecrafts up too venus but have not worked very good. The author goes on very well too expalin how it would be very hard and how it would be bery hot and hard conditions too land there.\n\nThe author brings up something from nasa that could work and he agrees on, in paragraph 5 it states \" The National Aeronautics and Space Administration has one particulary compelling idea for semdimg humans to study Venus. NASAs possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. How this paragraph makes the author better is because he is researching it and comparing it too his idea. This idea would not be easy buy if it can work there is a chance we can still study venus and one day have humans land on it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "If something offensive found library taken shelves Some people might look question instantly say yes Others might think anything item move along I disagree believe item remove Instead I believe item removed stay shelves As child I always gone child s section library find book I steared clear grownup area So mother found offensive item shelves would make sure I nt see I believe parent watches child sees would nt worry seeing something offensive However let s say adult sees item feels removed Shehe right remove item someone else item exactly looking The world live many offensive things see everyday newspapers programs billboards etc someone come along take away would nothing left one persons interests This little bit everything libraries If offensive book bad someone nt like feels need remove nt thinking people might like I always heard saying If everybody liked thing would boring world I find completely true If everybody liked thing let anybody enters library remove offensive item However happens authors wo nt want keep writing books singers wo nt want find someone keeps removing work On note people wo nt want go library know wo nt find want someone took I disagree ones feel item removed someone book might perfect I believe book magazine stay shelf someone intent read If person walks feels book offensive need realize someone else might walk away I sure people would find choice books offensive bad would like remove shelves However I would stop going library happened This I feel books staySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The setting story affected cyclist The setting takes place June It hot cyclist getting dehydrated You imagine hot got said wiped sweat eyes make sure wasnt mirage It also sounded story felt like two hundred degrees sun beatingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author concludes story like show emphasisSaeng vowed teach everything lives hope adaptation She means everything returns proves survive She take drivers test The author also wants prove people need faith theirselves You need get used surroundings This author concluded waySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" The author presents both positive and negative aspects of driverless cars. Using the details, I believe that driverless cars could be a good idea. They could malfunction and cause an very bad car accident, they aren't realiable because in some states they arent allowed to test car that run alone, and it would be animosity between the citizens and manufacturers.\n\nFirst and formost one reason I believe that the car would be an bad idea today is because the makings of the so called \"driverless\" cars could happen to have a glitch in the system and break. For emaple, In the article it states \"These smart-road systems worked surprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was simply too expensive to be practical\". This quote states with before making that cars they would have to fix and upgrade things, but they are making these smart cars without doing so. In taking that action the car could stop working whenever which wouldn't be safe for us espically with the major highways and intersections we have on busy streets.\n\nAnother reason the driverless cars would not be safe for us, is because you can't depend on them to function properly. In the text it states, \"Presently traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. As a result, in most sates it is illegal even to test computer driven cars, Calidornia, Nevada, Flordia, and the district of columbia have led the country in allowing limited use of semi-autonomous cars\". In this quote it shows that not many states in the U.S. truely believe that these cars are safe itself. You can tell because they don't test the cars and without tests the cars it is no true evidence that they're safe it drive in.\n\nLastly, I believe the driverless cars aren't safe is because it would cause drama and animosity between the citizens and manufacturers. For example the article quotes \" If the techology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?\" This part of the article shows that when an accident ocurrs with the \"driverless\" cars the court of law, policie officers, or the makers of the model won't know who to put the blame on for the cause. That is a bad idea because also in the text it states, \" Such displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over\". I took this quote into consideration because it could be an very bad incident and the driver blames the incident on the car but the investigators wouldn't know who to put the blame on. Either the driver becasuse they could have turned the funtion off before the incident happened and they were in control the whole time, or the manufacturers because theu driver may have tried to turn the function off to take control of the car but it malfunctioned which causes it to stop working.\n\nThese are my reasons on why to not use driverless cars and keep the nice ones we have. The models that we drive in today work well and may have bad functions, but they are functions that can be fixed in an auto shop. Or the parts of the car can be found in an autopart store.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "As technology advances in a very constant and remarkable fasion, many new innovations begin to reveal themselves. While we still might be waiting for the next flying car or teleporter, several smaller, yet very significant, inventions have presented themselves. An example of this is a computer software that is able to identify and recognize emotions. Profesor Thomas Huang from the Beckman Institute for Advance Science at the Univeristy of Illinois created this software in hopes of changing the world for the better, but is it really that great? Among the several other practical uses, Huang says that the use of this technology in the classroom can be the most important. Overall the use of emotional recognition has the potential to be useful due to the ability to change the lesson based on mood, and alter mood based on the current your current status, but overall would not be 100% effective due to the spiratic qualities of humans.\n\nDr. Huang, the inventor of the emotional recognition, claims there could be huge advancements in the education system due to his new technology. In a time of computer screens, video games, and the newest iphone students have trouble beign lectured for six hours a day. Dr. Huang's main goal is to put a computer with the lesson plans and his software in front of a computer so that it can do the teaching, effectivly. If a student begins to get bored and their zygomatic major muscles begin to relax and visibly show the boredom setting in, Dr Huang's computer software would be able to recognize and alter the lesson to be more engaging to the student. This would easily work for many other situations, if a student is sad the lesson could use brighter colors and better diction to create an enviorment where the student is not distracted and wants to learn. Nick D'Alto describes a situation where a student becomes very confused and does not know what they are doing and how to do it, but with the use of Dr Huang's technology the lesson could be changed and break down to easier steps to correctly compensate for the confusion.\n\nOverall, the use of Dr. Huang's software to change a lesson would be very useful in improving the learning enviorment for the students who will go on to create equally as innovative new mechanism in the future.\n\nSecondly, the software can be used to help change the mood of a student in order to boost morale as well as create an enviorment where the student wants to learn. In this day and age there are so many things for a student to be passionate about, such as: sports, video games, friends, and so much more. This is very good in the sense of passion but ultimately takes away from the desire to learn and become successful in school. Often times a student comes into school with the worst mood possible, hating every second of it, but Dr. Huang could change things up. For example if a student comes into school angry Dr. Huang's facial coding system would be able to create an enviorment where the lesson becomes more like a game for the student to play and enjoy while at the same time learning the content.\n\nIf a student comes into school depressed, it could be the job of the system to recognize this, notify someone, and help them be happy.\n\nDr. Huang's invention creates a short cut in seeing how someone feels through science. At times people are too afraid to ask ,\"Are you okay?\". The use of this software can go straight to the aiding of someone without even having to think twice. In the end, emotions create roadblocks for students to learn and the use of Dr. Huang's technolgy can identify and help break them down so that a kid can be a normanl kid again.\n\nAlthough Dr. Huang's software is extremly useful, things can often be a little more complicate than what technology can actually be good for. While the identifying of emotions is very useful, the actual action of neutralizing them can be beyond the machine. For example, if a student is crying their eyes out with no sign of stopping, I am pretty sure a change in the lesson will not help calm that student. If a student is so mad that they just want to break the computer and storm off, no change in the lessons music, colors, or diction is going to be able to fix that. In general an actual human is what each student needs to be there for them. The warmth of a hug or simple hand on the shoulder can change the outlook on a students entire emotional status. The fact that an actual teacher cares is more than enough to allow the teacher to keep teaching. Overall Dr. Huangs software is incredibly useful to identify emotional change but really can not help deal with most situations like a teacher would.\n\nIn conclusion Dr. Huang's software holds its value in it's ability to read emotions and alter the lesson as well as alter the mood of a student in need, but is very limited in how it can help a student get through their troubles. The use of Dr. Huang's technolgy in the classroom will definately lead to advances in student comprehension but for the many individuals that need more than a computer for sypathy, the program most likely will not work.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In this contemporary world, the rationale of museums has been changed among people recently. While some individuals believe that museums should be a place for entertainment, others think that museums should target educational purposes instead. Both views will be discussed in this essay.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, those who support the view of enrollment fun in museums want to attract more people to pay museums a visit and enjoy their time there. The visitors such as tourists and youngsters are the group targets for this purpose. \r\n\r\nFor example, Dubai had opened a museum in EXPO 2021 that displayed the history in form of videos played on huge screens and attractive audios explanation. Thus, the visitors would more attentive and entertained by learning useful information about the country's history.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, other individuals who said museums should be a place of education only are probably students or teachers because they take history subject to their heart and want people to educate the seriousness of it. For instance, archaeologists and researchers visit museums to discuss and clarify confusions about ancient life or examine a fossil to conclude information. These people like to keep the serious and educational theme at the museums. Hence, visitors will realize the importance of history and appreciate it.\r\n\r\nIn summary, there are some people who prefer to enrol some fun in the museums, while others think it is better to keep it as an educational place. I am of the view that the museums should have a touch of enjoyment so the society will come frequently to enjoy their time there.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars are an advance in technology, even though they are not fully self automatic yet .Driverless cars may not be fully driverless yet but in the future it is possible. Even if people dont like the idea of it its still going to happen. Driverless cars are not going to be any good for our generation.\n\nDriving is something that you will need your full attention for even if the car is self driven it can still screw up. I don't personally see the point of somthing that is not going to help anyone. Chances are that there will be more accidents and more people will be injured or even die because all technology malfunctions at one point or another and there is no stopping that. Technology is a good thing when it is helping people. Times are changing and no one can stop it. In paragraph 9 it says who will be responsible if the car happens to mess up the manufacturer or the driver.\n\nThink to yourself who would you hold responsible. Knowing that all technology malfunctions,not to mention the car would be overly priced just for it to be able to drive without a driver and sense things. Most people like being aware if their surroungings. What if the car stoped and the driverless addition stoped working .You would already be used to not driving and over all forget how to do it. You wouldn't be aware of where you are because you were to busy doing other things then to know your surroundings.\n\nKnowing how to drive makes things easier on you. Technology is not always a good thing. Technology doesn't always work out the way you want it too its easy to look something up and the internet not give you what you want or what's true would you trust your care taking you to where ever? It's easy saying something is better because it has technology incorperated but is that really true.\n\nSome things are better left with out all the added gadgets and I belive a car is one of those things. A car is more reliable when you personaly are controling it. You know where you are going and I think if they want to make additions to are car make tires that don't go flat or make the car fix its self. Knowing how to get places yourself will make things so much easier on you. If your tire goes flat your car can not take you to the nearest area to call someone or get help.\n\nMy opinon over all driverless cars help no one. They make nothing easier and will not be affordale for the average person. They will malfunction more then a regular car and make accidents more common.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There is a tremendously controversial perspective heating debate over the ever-increasing well-known commercial activities in this day and age. While this phenomenon has both pros and cons, I would contend that its merits may outweigh its demerits\r\n\r\nWithout a shadow of a doubt, marketing plays a paramount significant role in daily life for the time being because it can help a wealth of people know and purchase decent products which they need via advertising videos on social media or television. Hence more and more corporations invest in marketing practices in order to promote their commodities. For example, there is an eclectic mix of firms that use the advertising services of Youtube such as Grammarly application’s corporations so inhabitants could be recommended a lot of intriguing things while watching Youtube like this application. As a consequence, companies and consumers put a premium on advertising activities. \r\n\r\nWhile the redeeming features of advertisement are widely acknowledged, its counterpart still lingers. Nowadays, some people are not interested in marketing activities because they believe it is comparatively annoying and spoils their mood. For instance, when they are watching some blockbusters or interesting vlogs on Youtube, advertising videos suddenly emerge and they have to wait for the end of these videos, which makes them feel unhappy and uncomfortable. As a result, promotion activities bring an undesirable impact on users. \r\n\r\nTo summarize, the rapid advancement of using advertisements have either advantages or disadvantages. However, I would contend that it would do more good than harm.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Theres diffrent ways you can show your emotion or how you feel. Why would you need a system to show how you you feel ?\n\nYou dont need a system to show you how you you feel becuase what if it tell you the wrong stuff, if it dont work right, what if it break on you and you dont know it?\n\nNobdy need a sytem to show there emotions. How would you know if they dont want to show it. Not everybody what to express they feeling. Sometimes they want to keep it to they self . If they wanted to express they self im pretty sure they would of went to the family doctor or something.\n\nThe system go through a long proces so that mean it go start from the bottom and make it way up. Would´nt that feel weird if you had a mechiane going through your face? Let´s say it was like a carmea or something then that would be better but it a whole macheine working you. It? really not that deep when you can just say how you feel. It really that easy just say it becuase who want to sit though that?\n\nMona LIsa says ¨ät least according to some new computer software that can recognize emotions¨ Lies. Ther no computer that can¨t recognzie how you feel and if it is it´s fake. Half of the stuff on the web now is fake like it just be uo there to jus t for attitiention. That why people look in books now days becuase they can atleast belive them. Don´t belive everthing off the internet it not all real.\n\nTheres diffrent ways you can show how you feel. You dont always need a system to tell you expression. Sometime only you and yourself need to know how you personaly feel at times nobody else.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There six billion people world That means six billion different personalities opinons distinct people It would virtually impossible remove aspects media could found offensive almost everyone offended something Some media found offensive others likely something author feels passionate author could offended opinon rejected Now internet accessible almost places world Media used found shelves displayed online never permanently removed public view It s illogical think removing materials libraries would prevent different groups people offended media There big difference awareness offensiveness Some books magazines might intent explain type culture raise awareness subject However definite line reaches offensiveness easily crossed authors across globe So authors best interest take account people writing It s important avoid stereotypes hurtful There already plenty offensive literature world find restrict would irrational If person offended something someone wrote avoid reading However give authors power target group writing offend specifically This twosided subject It strictly controlled censoring libraries also hands authors readers everywhere Authors media producers take people consideration put efforts raising awareness instead offending In regards readers across globe keep mind author might target avoid conflict avoiding material It right means target offend group people piece literature however practice done remvoing materials shelves wo nt stop exploited Libraries already decreasing severly reveleance world All new technology hurt likely ever become prominent reasources like internet againWith mind much would censoring libraries really help offended groups world Most likely would even notice change Everyone right opinon share important keep feelings others mind well The world overflowing different media many people access writers producers need think outside putting shelvesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Vincenta walking one day saw friend CAPS Said PERSON know call replied CAPSshentay PERSON mami told sec beans get Would PERSON asked cee eachothers backs I go Bye said ran walked house knocked door answer walked old house Abandoned I know Ill dug hole planted beans minutes later still waiting CAPS yelled walking soul angered CAPS screaming boy You gon na wake papi exclaimed CAPS stupid beans dont grown replied CAPS want see beans Go bed theyll told CAPS I staying Eizel support one havent heard CAPS guy CAPS see later And strolled The next day walked oh god yelled woke couldnt belive saw The bean stalked ran two story house You stink CAPS cavd sudden woke It dream CAPS looked CAPS still nothing A day later still waiting hungry tired came PERSON doesnt know Well please come inside forget seeds CAPS screamed Youre going anger CAPS Go away screamed CAPS I and stomped Two waiting finally popped One alive lasted minutes died The car bolt bone bugs putting inside air Then asked Was worth ceeyesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I agree with the author suggests that studying is Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents becasue first reason it is a good thing to study about a different planet, second in the past nobody know that Venus is a planet, third it might be danger, but it is something that we should be studying about.\n\nFirst reason it is a good things to study about a different planet because if we all just studying about Earth it will be getting boring, and we won't know anything about the other planet. According to the text \" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size.\" When I read this quote I was already excited to learn about Venus. As we study something different the more we are become smart.\n\nSecodn reason, in the past nobody know that Venus is a planet because they thought Venus was one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. According to the text \" Venus, sometimes called the \" Evening Star\". They are having thought about Venus like because they haven't never see Venus or study about the Venus. This is the reason why I agree with the author suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\n\nThird reason, it might be danger, but it is something that we should be studying because the more we learn something new tge more we are getting smart. According to the text it say \" In our solar system, venus is the second planet from our sun\". I knew nobody can't go near the sun because we will be already melt if we go near to the sun. The Venus is the second planet from the sun, and it is danger. Even though we can't go up there and look what it is look like because it is danger, but we should at least study about it at school.\n\nIn conclusion, I agree with the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it presents because it is a good things to study about a different planet, in the past nobody know that Venus is a planet, it might be danger, but it is something that we should be studying about. These three reason are important because in future we can teach our kids about Venus so that they won't be suprised when they found out that Venus is a planet and it is the second planet from the sun.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The use of this technology in a classroom is valuable to read the emotional expression of students when he/she steps into the classroom to know what exactly is they're facial emotion representing.\n\nThis new sofeware called Facial Action Coding System is proven to read six basic facial emotions such as, happiness, surprised, anger, disgust, fear, and saddness. The sofeware is like math it can calculate you all your forty-four major facial muscles and calculate your emotion. For like example , if you raise both of you eye brows it most likley means that your facial expression is showing that your suprised to hear or see something.\n\nI think that this sofeware is a pretty nice technology that can be usefull if your a teacher, rehabilatation center helper. For a teacher it can be a good technology to use at school so you can know more about the kids facial expression. It'll become a great technology for a rehabilatation center ,for veteran solders the have gone through a lot and are hiding other extra emotions.\n\nThomas Huang , of the Beckman Institute for Advance Sience at the University of Amsterdam did a great sofeware that will become very usefull to many places. It will help many people as well to know what extra emotions they are hiding that the sofeware can find for them.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I am against the \"Driverless Cars.\" The reason why I'm against this is because it's dangerous. That is what I'm seeing when I read the passage.\n\nIn paragraph nine it states how most states computer driven cars are illegal. This is showing that it's common knowledge to see how dangerous it is for a computer to operate a car. Then there is a question at the end asking, \"who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?\" This is the questioning for the injuries of a person from technology fails with the cars. \"who is at fault?\" More than likely the manufacturer.\n\nAlthough this device may be very helpful and it may be a possibilty to better the world, I thing we should wait a little longer until our technology advances to go any further with that project. It's too risky and it shouldn't be offered to the public just yet. However, I believe the cars could succeed in the future. It is a great possibility.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "you should join the ''Seagoing Cowboys Program''. You should join the program because it is a wonderful opertunity to see some amazing sites, interact with a lot of animals, and have a lot of fun during free time.\n\nOne reason you should join the ''Seagoing Cowboys Program'' is because all of the amazing sites. When I was part of the ''Seagoing Cowboys Program'' I had the opertunity to see a lot of amazing sites. I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special,. So was taking a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water. I also toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on my way to China.\n\nAnother reason you should join the ''Seagoing Cowboys Program'' is because all of the great times we have during free time on the boat. There is a lot of free time on board exspecially during the return trips after the animals have been unloaded. We played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time.\n\nYou also get to interact with a lot of animals. While you are sailing It takes about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to China. Caring for the animals during the crossings keeps you busy. They have to be fed and watered two or three times a day. Bales of hay and bags of oats had to be pulled up from the lower holds of the ship. Stalls have to be cleaned. Although it is a lot of work, when you are doing these things with the animals it forms a bond between you and the animal.\n\nThere are some reasons why you should join the ''Seagoing cowboys Program''. I hope you will take the oppertunity to atleast look into the ''Seagoing Cowboys Program''.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The features setting affected cyclist made simplist challenges The back water snake path examplesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood author Narciso Rodriguez always proud culture mom dad For example paragraph two talks lived said Passionate Cuban music I adore day My parents shared cooking duties unwittingly passed rich culinary skills love cooking still today I eternally grateful In story always excepted anything kind always wanted see parents smile And positive honest And even talked community It closeknit community honest hardworking immigrants extended hand people necessarily kind clearly need And Narciso also said It warmth kitchen humble house Cuban feast always filled air scent music life loveSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Today cars is one of the leading causes of greenhouse gas emissions in the world. Limiting car usage would be very benificial for today and future generations.\n\nTo start off there is many advantages to limit car use. One example would be \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution.\" In Bogota, Colombia they have a car free day every year. A lot of people participate in it and some enjoy it. With that day it lowers car mission and shows people that cars aren't nessary to have. Another example would be, \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" Without cars people are happier and aren't as stressed as they would be if they still had a car.\n\nNext life can go on without cars. One example would be \"Vauban, Germany- Residents of this upscale community are suburban pionners: they have given up their cars.\" In this community there is little to no parking spaces. The community is tightly packed together so that it is better to walk places. Not only are their car free suburbas but cars are on a decline. An Example would be, \"Recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and gettiong fewer licenses as each year goes by.\" Even in America cars are starting to decline. Teens and young adults aren't getting their licenses and dont have to get it as a priority.\n\nThe world of cars is changing and the way cities are planned is with it. The reduction of car use will help lower greenhouse gas emissions for the future generations on Earth.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "\"What to do to enhance the health level of the public?\" This question has been a major concern for many. While certain individuals might think that the most effective way to tackle this problem is to increase the number of sports facilities, I generally tend to believe that more efforts should be made.\r\n\r\nSome people believe the increase in facilities would surely lead to an amelioration in general health standards. Principally they opine that the reason for lack of exercise is because of the unavailability of sports apparatus in their neighbourhood, though people could find a way to exercise without equipment. Moreover, the solution has another vital limitation as it might only be attractive to those who are fit and leading a healthy lifestyle, not those who most need it, those who are not motivated to do sport would not be motivated by the opening of a new gym, as the lack of exercise facilities is mostly just one more excuse, after the opening, they'll just make up another story.\r\n\r\nHowever, there are other better measures to increase the general health standards of society. Firstly advertisements would be incredibly efficient to encourage people to acquire a healthy lifestyle, advertisements could be placed ubiquitously encouraging us from time to time. But seen from another point of view education has even more fruitful results, early school education regarding this subject could be essential in the formation of a healthy lifestyle and habits in the future, if this was done beforehand the general health standard would have risen significantly. Meanwhile, a rising tax on alcohol or food with high fat, high sugar or high calories could add points to improve public health.\r\n\r\nTo conclude just focusing on sports facilities is too narrow an approach, it would be more rewarding if society focused widely on various methods, then the possibility of succeeding would certainly be greater.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Challenge of Exploring Venus\n\nThe Venus was about the \" evening star.\"It venus star was the one of brightest point light in the night sky.It was normal for even an amateur stargazer to spot.It venus can give solar system from the sun. Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point if earth, it has proved a very challenging place to examkne more closely.\n\nVenus is the closest planet to earth interm of demsity and size.It look like twin.But Earth and Venus and Mars are some different has speeds at the sun.The different in speed mean that sometime se are closer to Mars and other time to Venus.Because Venus is something right around the coner in spane terms humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on his cloud draped world.\n\nThe other challening are clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere.On that time temperature can average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 time greater than what we experience on our own plans.Venus has the hottest surface temerature of anh plante in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun.Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.\n\nThe National Aeronautic and Space Administration(NASA) has one particulary idea doe sending human to study Venus.It NASA was possible solution surface of cpvenus would allow scientists to float above the fray.The solar power woyld be plentiful, and\n\nradiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.Venus was safely far above the planet czn provide only limited insight on the ground codition.Because ,therefores scientists seeking to conduct a mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks.\n\nThese devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role int he 1940s during World War ll.The systems that can use mechanical part can be made more resistant to pressure, heat and other forces too.By the challening tto meet striving presented by Venvus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the plant itself.If we travle on earth and beyond should not be limited bydanger and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edged of imagination and innovation.The Venus was most likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In essay I telling laughter conflict trust important relationship I good relationship cousin We laugh fight always trust anything We known past year s lives Her name I love anyone else world One thing make us closer laugh others mistakes When one us messes laugh try help problem When one us mess something always first even like person problems Conflict I think something else think important good relationship Me fight time Even littlest stupidest thing s We always find one way fight something If s messing could would completely mess mine life We protect messing lives much We stop really stupid things We strange feeling hurt might hurt someone something Trust something important relationship Trust tell someone anything matter Me everything If want something could go could tell If wanted something could go could tell I could tell anything even going mad I ever really needed I would soon possible We almost never judge something going We person done done well I would trust life I She best friend favorite cousin mom sister everything else Me always laugh mistakes We always type conflict always help one ever reason thing think need good relationship someone like cousin still relationship never able lose matter hard try always sideSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The diagram illustrates the evolution of the horse in terms of their foot structure over a 40 million year period. Overall, the horse's were divided into four stages of development, starting from a period of 40 million years ago until now, with a 10 to 15 million year gap approximation in between.\nTo begin with, 40 million years ago, the Eohippus, which was the first developmental stage of a horse's foot structure was similar to the bone structure of a human's hand. However, they branch out into five toes while travelling on foot. Then, during stage 2 of the horse's foot development, which was 10 million years later, the horse evolved into a Mesohippus. With regards to the structure of its toe, it was reduced from the original five into three. In addition, the middle toe had a larger foot structure compared to other other two.\nNext, 15 million years later, came the evolution of a Merychippus from a Mesohippus. Similarly, the foot structure was identical to the Mesohippus' horse but did not have the middle toe's length significantly longer than the other two. Although the middle toe was thicker than before, it became more even in terms of its length comparison to its other two toes. Finally, the emergence of the final evolution of the horse in modern days. With regards to the foot structure, it no longer branched out into several toes as it used to be, but is shaped like a tree branch with a rounded bases on the bottom of the foot.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood created author memoir happy It symbolizes togetherness coming together family In passage evry one caring open anyone living The child story talks abou greatful parints Their happy family living together one Evry one exsepting one another Over I think mood happySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Art is defined as an expression of showing creativity. It is a medium with which an individual can present his thoughts to society. Poets, writers, composers and painters show us a window to their world of limitless imagination, sometimes realistic and at other times completely unimaginable. The ideas which writers and poets sow onto the minds of people leads to curiosity which further encourages explanation an a scientific approach. \nThus, many people believe that children should be exposed to as much artistic endeavors as possible to create an impression at a young age. This explanation can be substantiated from the proof Michelangelo used to draw sketches and paint them before he could even learn to write. Another example is Leonardo Da Vinci who suffered from dyslexia and hence could not read or write like an ordinary person but could imagine things like helicopter with intricate working models even hundreds of years before they were actually invented.\nOn the other hand, opponents of arts look down upon the trade as a mere form of recreation that lacks substance or any actual contribution to the society. Thus, a sane-minded, rational parent only expects his child to do well in science and mathematics while it may be okay to not to score an \"A+\" in drawing or painting.\nBut, research has proved that all innovators, scientists and inventors were as imaginative as any poet or music composer. Although, their application and approach to imagination might have been different. And all of this starts when you are in school where your thoughts are not limited by external realities and so you can choose to imagine what you want.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Having the Facial Coding Action System to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom would be very valuable. It would be able to show what emotions each student is expressing in a classroom. Being able to know what emotions the students are expressing would be very help towards teachers and the students.\n\nThe teacher will know how engaged a student is in the classroom this this technology. The techer will be able to know each student's emotion and he will be able to do something about. The computer will know when you are feeling bored, sad, angry, or happy. A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, and\n\nthe techer can get him engaged and focused again. It doesn't just have to be in one classroom, it can be in multiple classrooms. With this technology teachers might be able to to help the students get better grades and grasp the material they are learning better by making changes according to their students emotion's or whatever they are feeling.\n\nIn conclusion this technology would not only be very beneficial to the students, but also the techers. This technology will greatly improve the students performance in each classroom and help them be more engaged. The teachers will be able to help the students more and more effiently.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author concludes story like seasons changing finising cycle starting new one Thus I think good way end story like I kinda sets mood feel end storySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger on been the hotest planet in our solar system. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, Venus has a thick atmosphere and even their clouds are of highly corrosive silfuric acid in Venus's. NASA studies Venus just to see, what a other planet have in commun with the Earth.\n\nNASA hve been looking for another project as the old technology called mechanical computers. They want to use this mechanical computers because it makes calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all. Also, they having think abut the Modern computers because they are enormously powerful, flexuble and quick, but the tend to be more dicate when it comes to extrem physical conditions.\n\nVenus has really hick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets, Nasa knows this because they tried the most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective.\n\nThe Ntional Aeronautics and Space Administration( NASA) has one particulary compellin idea by sending humans to study Venus and set their life on risk. As the humans that MASA idea tried to sent them to study Venus will not kill them because Solar power would be plentiful, and radiarion would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\n\nMany researchers are working on innovations that allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus. The study challenge that the NASA realized presented That Venus has VAlue, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Making a profit has long been the top priority of all businesses, yet there has been a growing concern about their corporate social responsibilities. I would argue that companies are obliged to contribute more to society rather than sampling making money. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, I accept that businesses must make money in order to survive in the modern competitive world. It is true that the meaning of the existence of a firm to generate profits for its shareholders and founders maintain operational activities. In fact, production profits after cost deduction, such as rentals, employee payrolls, utilities, taxes would be important to determine company survival. If a company is unable to make profits, it will stop running and go bankrupted, meaning that social obligations become irrelevant. In other words, a company can only make a positive contribution to society if it is in good financial health.\r\n\r\nI believe that besides the sole aim of maximizing profit, companies have a wider role to play in modern society. Firstly, in fact, through their manufacturing process, companies could exploit natural resources and discharge toxic sewage without proper treatment, which might lead to irreversible implications for the environment. As a result, firms should invest in their waste treatment systems to mitigate environmental footprint as well as sponsor environmental protection campaigns of the local authorities, which would ensure the suitable expansion of international companies. Furthermore, instead of taking advantage of accounting loopholes, companies should be committed to contributing to society through the tax system, which would foster local prosperity and well-being in the long run. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe that companies should place as much importance on their social responsibilities as they do on their financial objectives.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "FACS (Facial Action Coding System) is a new way for humans to recognize emotions than ever before. FACS is a new emotion-recognition software that analyzes the slight movements of the muscles in your face to see how you feel. It does this by having each muscle associated with an emotion that allows it to calculate how you feel. As Dr. Huang has stated, \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal.\" The use of FACS in the school classroom can help students by changing what they are learning based on their emotions.\n\nWhen a student starts to show signs of boredom, FACS can help. If a student shows any signs of boredom or confusion in what they are learning, FACS can modify the lesson to fit the students needs. It can be, \"... an effective human instructor.\" Dr. Huang predicts. It can allow the student to be comfortable with what they are learning. It can even help a student learn better if a teacher is'nt available at the time, this can lead to the student not being stressed.\n\nFACS can allow video games or video surgery to show more emotions. If video games or video surgery can show more emotions, it can help a student learn how to idenify them more. If a college student wants to be a surgeon, then recognizing emotions in their patients is key. \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,\" notes Dr. Huang. This can help humans be able to emotionaly communicate better.\n\nIf a student is feeling sad or frustrated with an assignment, then FACS can change that. If a studnet is feeling sad or angry with something, they will not be able to concentrate on their work. FACS\n\ncan help a student feel better by having them do a \"happy face\". The article states that, \"According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them.\" If a student is able to feel happy, then they will be able to work to their full potential.\n\nIn conclusion, the use of FACS in the classroom can helo students learn better. If FACS can influence what a student is learning to make it more appealing, then they would be able to learn it better then when they were bored or confused. Students could also learn how to better recognize them in their games or simulations. The software can even make a student feel better emotionaly and make them feel like they want to learn. All this can lead to better learining environments for students everywhere.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author concludes paragraph like shows going give I vowed silently going take test spring also aiudieres gains old years seeds ezing In conclusion one reason author concludes paragraph likeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author ends passage sentence show order succed one must keep trying Saeng adapt new copiuntry time spends heer time wishing go back homeland The hibiscus reminder starting new adapting society Saeng retry drivers test plant buds starting life cycleSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Think in a world where you can tell someone exact emotion by the expression on there face. Were you can know how to make a person feel better just by looking at them.Well with new facial action coding sytems we can. I beleive that evey one should be able to learn how to read others emotions by their expressions. This techology would be valuable for students in a classroom because the students can see what emotions they give in their facial expression, the students can learn more about each other by expression also the can what triggers that facial expression.\n\nStudents never really by just seeing a smile on a face really means, not knowing if that person is really truly happy or not. Using facial action coding system will allow the students to tell if an other is happy or not in a classroom setting facial action coding system would equipped a student the knowlege to read others emotions. With that skill set the can lend a hand if they see someone is down.\n\nStundents should be tought to see what sets off many expression in a classroom. Also with those expressions the should see if they match up with thier emotions. Knowing this would allow a student to use that skill in knowing others emotions off the expression could lead to what really triggers the emotions. Having facial action coding system would be valuable in a classroom because it would help students uderstand their and other emotions from expressions, the could be able to read most emotions just by the expressions on ones face and the students have a skill set that would help them help others if they know if a preson is feeling bad , sad , angy or not.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Some ideas exist that youngsters could contribute their spare time to work volunteering for society. I totally agree with that opinion as there are a lot of young people who consume their time for unhealthy activities. This essay will discuss why teenagers must join with community tasks.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, teenagers have good health and sharp minds to help their communities. To make it clear, this means the age of 15 to 22 years old is regarded as puberty with well-being and creativity. They can learn fast and use their power to assist others. For example, a young teen might spend their time after school to go to a nursing home or hospital and support the staff to run errands. Clearly, the youngster is stronger and smarter than other ages, therefore they should give a hand to people who are living around them. \r\n\r\nAdditionally, these growing people are developing their life skills, thus, it is crucial to volunteer and correct their demerits. Nowadays, there are a bunch of teenagers who prefer spending their leisure time on computer and smartphone without interacting with other people. This shapes their personalities and cognition to be slow and dependable. However, if they go outside and collaborate with others, they definitely pick up on a variety of useful lessons. For instance, a youngster who would like to volunteer for daycare, she probably can gain some skills of taking care of kids and others. Thus, volunteering benefits each individual if they aspire to perfect their moralities. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, contributing effort for the community brings many advantages for young people, and helps them to establish their goals in the future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Studying Venus is worth the pursuit despite the dangers it presents to us because learning more about a planet that we don´t know much about can lead to new discoveries. Discovering something new about a planet could interest a lot of people which could possibly pursuade them into wanting to learn more about Venus. There is more to Venus than we currently know.\n\nIn the article it talks about Venus having lightning strikes which isn´t too common on a planet because not very many were known to have lightning strikes. Trying to learn about the planet Venus would be challenging due to the obsticles it had. Venus has the hottest surface tempature´s which could effect people who try landing on it in ships or sending space probs. The condition´s on Venus are another obsticle that human´s must face when trying to learn more about it.\n\nIn the article scientists have sent hovering ships over the planet so then they wouldn´t have to worry about the terrible conditions that await. Using Hover ships is a good idea in order to learn more about Venus. Scientists have been trying to discover new ways to learn more about the planet.\n\nLearning more about planets that we know to this day is a really smart thing to do.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Based The Mooring Mast written Marcia Amidon Lsted builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock Constructed s Empire State Building originally built exceed height Chrysler Building going stand whopping feet tall What added building s height great mooring mast stood atop building Dirigibles similar balloons gaining popularity aviation world However many issues held back progress project Most issues safety problems One practical reason dirigibles could moor Empire State Building existing law airships flying low urban areas Another reason flammibility ships Most ran hydrogen rather helium Hydrogen flammable ship exploded many civilians passengers would killed In summation safety risks mast Empire State Building could never used original purposeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Author suggests that studying venus in a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents, because he want to make sure that everyone are hetting all the things that were needed.Acooring to the aricle is says that \"Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safetly for above the planet can peovide only limited insight on ground conditions because\n\nmost forms of light cannot penetrare the dense atmoshpere,\" This means that they were still\n\ntrying to figure out and study venus and see what it is, and That's why the other ssupports'.\n\nIn paragraph 7 it seems like NASA has already findout about what is venus, they give us some examples of how venus is like. \"same simplified electronics amde of silicon carbide have been tested in chamber simulating the chao of venys's surface and have lasted for theree weeks in such conditions. So far, they already know that Venus is closed to the sun. basically, what they wan't to know is how venus works. In order to find Venus they use a technologhy called mechanical compuers that were first out in the 1800s and played and important role in the 1940s during war II. Back in the days this electronics didn't need gas or naything else, people used these machines by calculating by using gears, and it did not require electronics at all.\n\nNASA were much worried about people that were sended to study the venus, thats when they can together and had an idea of using technology. they discovered that \" just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground and conditions by staying up and out of their way.\"\n\nthat have been said, Venus were much helpful on earth after they discovered how protected venus was to the people all over the world.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "wants travel traveling fun exciting go people love sometimes go somewhere people know well Every two years choir opportunity go trip together During trips students able work college professors eat tons junk food get away parents great time together It s experience every dreams At beginning year choir director announced would opportunity go I ecstatic going I m extremely introverted person I knew I nt really friends choir I also ca nt walk scared I would left behind store I could nt open doors would go across street corner nt dip street thousands things racing mind I terrified I would separated one friend choir I almost nt go I m really sure mother convinced everything would alright I nothing fear Once arrived split groups see wanted go explore wanted go street one windiest roads world My worst nightmare came true I separated I tried tell nothing would go wrong chaperons would nt leave behind back mind I kept coming conclusion I would alone bunch strangers city I knew nothing Somehow I got bus slowly taking away One girls came sit attempted start conversation That one longest bus rides life When arrived bottom street split yet one group going walk top steep hill going ride one old trolleys top walk hill nt steep I forced go trolley hill steep part sidewalk contained steps since I ca nt walk alternative trolly Several kids went us group A couple hours later getting lost turning several wrong streets found trolley station bought tickets Luckily I managed avoid conversing whole time ride hill enjoyable Some local people smiled us excited riding trolley We saw houses stores ride There six people group time two chaperons four kids Once reached top hill two kids decided really go bathroom one chaperons raced back hill find public restroom This left alone remaining chaperon We walked leasiurly hill talking Every often would ask question I would answer words possible s going walked past group men arguing front store one yelled CAPS Whatcha You goin house We nt really know talking talking kept walking reached end block I simultaneously broke laughter The man talking The rest way hill started coming different weird responses I said man one hilarious last one conversations go eventually got different topics made realize I really many similar traits We loved musicals enjoy reading annoying younger brothers Ever since day I fairly good friends took moment laughed togetherSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Do find books read offensive How music magazines I sure nt I ca nt think someone would offended book chose read If sit back think low amout reasons someone offended book written general public I believe possible books offensive words actions unless directed towards reader intentionally used offend someone book A lot books especially ones history use language actions used time They use show inform things used like time Not often I ever seen authors make book put someone I tend see books explaining things using offensive words show things set tone book Music hand could thought different Many people could take music wrong way A majority offensive problems spawning music come genre rap Rappers tend express throughly often times use offensive language I personally nt get botherd music usually refering life things went Music also good side When get calm collective music tends help people used help people relax Therefore music either way mostly goes person react listen Then magazines Personally I think worst Magazines tend go one way They either put person completely negative towards positive say nothing good One big problem magazines write hear want hear always knowing full story In case high chance offensive towards person group talking Magazines always positive positive harsh negative thing put In regaurds I believe nothing wrong library There always going negatives positives libraries tend stick positive side Plus book looks like might end offensive towards one tell ca nt put stop reading With music get stuff like easily offended nt listen music Libraries give opportunity possibly get something could enjoy There reason someone would able refrain going getting offensive book In saying go either way I nt believe anything worng libraries censorship long use good judgementSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The UNRRA progam is a great progam for people who want to help around the world. Also, if you are into going on trips o different places this is great for you. They travel all around the world helping and they also get to see knew things!\n\nYou should come join because you can help around the world! Many people love to help and around the world and you should try it. On the first time my friend Don and I went on the trip it was great how we could help people after the war. Like how we brought a cago of 335 horses along with enough hay and outs to feed them. We wanted always make sur ethat we cleaned all the mess the war's had left behind.\n\nYou should also come to he program because you have the benifet of visiting all inds of places like Greece, China, Europe, and more. By the time I was discharged in in 1947, I been on nine trips. That is more than any other Seagoing Cowboy. I got to see the Acropolis in Greece and it was ver special. Also, in Crete I toured and excavated a castle. Then at the Panama Canal I marvled.\n\nGoing on the Atantic Ocean was awesome too! I went on it about 16 times in my years of being a Seagoing Cowboy. It took about two wees to cross it from the astern coast of the United States. To get to China it took a month to get there. Caring fro the animals kept me busy as we crossed the seas. They had to be fed two or three times a day. The time I almost wnet overboard was very scary, but I loved doing what I did.\n\nit was very awesome helping around the world, going to all of the those amazin places, and traveling the Atlanic many times. I may have gottenhurt and times were rough, but I wouldn't chane being a Seagoing Cowboy for anthing. I was onne amazin adventure I will never forget.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author believes that studying Venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers it presents. This is how he supports his idea. He thinks that Venus would be a worthy pursuit because it seems like Venus was once very much like earth. Like Earth, Venus seems to have a similar features such as a surface of rocky sediment and other familiarfeatures such as valleys, mountains, and craters(paragragh 4). The author stating all that detail supports his idea because if Venus has similar geological features as Earth, then it might mean that sometime in the far future we might have a chance of actually visiting the planet and learning much more about it and just that chance alone could make Venus a worthy pursuit.\n\nVenus doesnt really have the most welcoming conditions but there may be a solution for that. The author supports his idea very well here because he states that NASA has a possible solution to those harsh conditions. A blimp-like vehicle that floats 30 or so miles above the Venusian landscape, it would be high enough for the tempurature to stay around 170 degree Fahrenheit. Although its still not an easy condition, humans can still survive it(paragragh 5). The author using this to support his idea is very awesome because it gives a solution to one of the reason why we can't really go to Venus. He goes on to talk about how using simplified electronics made up of silicon carbide could be the answer. Scientist tested the electronics in a chamber that simulate a a condition much like how it would be on Venus, it lasted 3 weeks in those conditions(paragragh 7). These all supports his idea very well because it shows that scientists are making progress and might be able to actually make a machine that can survive on Venus long enough to collect rocks and other things that could help scientist learn moreabout the planet. The more the scientist learn about to the planet, the more solution that they can come up with to combat Venus's harsh condition.\n\nLast but not least he states that striving to meet the challenges presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. He also said that our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation(paragragh 8). Him saying this is very well done because he's right, we should not limit ourselves because of fear and doubt. We should get over those fears and doubts so that can we can progress further and maybe one day visit other planets.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Imagine a day where car accidents are no longer one of the top five causes of death for teens. Imagine a world where the main cause of car crashes are not from human error anymore. That is what the world will look like with the use of driverless cars. These smart cars are the way to the future because they can drive for you, they will be safer, and they might possibly allow you to never having to buy a car.\n\nDriverless cars are by far not a new idea. They have been the feature of futuristic sci-fi movies since the start of the era of the automobile. Driverless cars will be able to drive the person in them to their destination. Though they haven't created a car that is completely driverless yet, eventually it will be. Many companies are beginning the process of figuring out how to create cars that can self operate. They do this by adding sensors all over the car. This allows the people within the car to be safe even if there were to be an accident. \"Further improvements in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on their own.\" The future is not going to be the future for much longer.\n\nThe number one cause of an accident involving an automobile is human error. What if you can erase that issue overall? With the increase in sensor technology and computer hardware, accidents will be few and scarce. Google created cars that \"hve driven more than half a milliopn miles without a crash.\" These cars aren't even fully driverless yet and they have proven to be much safer. The roads will be a much safer place for everyone with these near-future cars.\n\nOne of the big possibilities with these cars is that there will be a taxi system full of driveless cars. The end-game for this is that there will be cars that \"use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus.\" Not only that but some people even envision \"a time in the future when no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore.\" The hope that comes from these new cars \"would fundamentally change the world.\"\n\nImagine a world that is safer for everyone. Imagine a place where accidents no longer caused by human error. With the advancement of technology this could possibly come true. Driveless cars is the hope of the future and \"the road top the truly autonomous car stretches on ahead of us, but we grow closer to the destination every day.\"SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear I think children spending much time computer wrong reasons I say young children teenagers want get day instead reaserching things like I three reason s I think going computer wrong reasons instead exercising enjoying nature interacting family friend first reason dangerous sometimes kidnappers chat room second reason taking time away trying learn stuff internet final reason interact influences violence There three reason reason number one I say people spending much time internet dangerous Young teenagers children enter chat room online Most time bad kidnappers lie information meet take away So instead chat room could computer looking daily news searching like This I say internet alway good time nt learning nation second reason I speding much time computer great sometimes taking away come go computer instead homework reading like computer sometimes like learned thats good knowing I could got computer educational games dont reason I concerned people using computer lot final reason I concerned people using computer much internet computer influence violent ways games going yo affects world keep seeing violence things nature frequently I say generation see violence gives image need think cool like book computer look When young teens see violence computer think s cool This final reason I concerned people spending much time computer So one main reasons I say computer always good people spend much timeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I believe that the use of techonology to read student emotional expression is valuable. It be awesome to read somebody's emotions thorugh a machine. it would tell you alot about what a person is feeling and thats important to know. their are many excellent and well reasoned examples of why this technology is valuable.\n\nMy one reason i believe this is valuable technology is if somebody was feeling depressed and was not willing to open up to anybody that individual could do self harm to himself. If they know how that individual was feeling maybe they would have helped he/she. in the passage it says \" a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused and bored\". Then Dr. Huang says\" then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor. This technology could become really usful for many different situations. Thats one of the reasons of why this makes this machine so valuable.\n\nThe creator of FACS[ [Facial Action Coding System] Dr. Paul Eckman has \"classified six basic emotions\". The machine can read happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. this type of technology can aid and solve world wide problem. For example what if an individual person or more were having issues with a certain subject at school but dont know how to ask for help. The Computer would make \" 3-D computer model of the face\" and they can anaylze what they might be feeling about the subject. then thats when the help comes.\n\nAnother example is reading different emotions is some how very important. It can be used against people who have commited crime. An example is if a person who murdered somebody and nobody knew if he was being honest or not, the machine can read his emotions and has a better chance to tell if the person is lying or not. It can be used for celebritys and politician as said in the article. This can identify many human being feelings and it doesnt take to much time.\n\nIn conclusion their are still many reasons why i believe this technology is valuable. This type of technology would be nice to have around and would be really usful. It would prevent many accidents and help solve probelms. Techonology like this cant go to waste and should be used to our adavntage. this is my reason why i think this technology is valuable.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The COVID situation has affected businesses worldwide. However, It has become an increasing phenomenon for graduates to secure employment in their chosen field. There are various factors that bring forth this unconventional situation.\r\n\r\nThe 2 main key factors that play a significant role in this scenario. It is quite often that parents of said students decide which profession their children must pursue regardless of its scope and opportunity. Parents tend to completely disregard their children's strengths and capabilities and suggest general professions that the student might not have the passion or aptitude for. For example in India, It is quite stereotypical for biys to become engineers and girls to become doctors.\r\n\r\nSecondly, The increasing population rates have made securing employment quite a challenging task. The cut-off rates for acceptance increases year upon year to ensure only the brightest and best of students avail such opportunities. This leaves out everyone else who missed it by a mark or two.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion I personally believe that government needs to educate parents on deciding their children's fate based on their passion and capabilities whilst making significant changes within the system to ensure harmony between jobs created and graduates available.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Books mean lot people love read Books pictures even poem books Some books shelves libraries They offesive language well pictures They learning books little kids need see I think books removed shevles found offensive Libraries need standards library The books movies music ect needs certain section library little kids go reach A library family place fun zone adults On I went library brother pick book six seven He told wanted get book dinosuars I told get one space aliens reading He read mom everynight would go bed We walking street bolt lighting struck trees ekkkk said ran around We walk library old lady front desk says there huge storm coming We sorta ignore go bussiness picking books I walk stairs childrens section looking around says hey kayla picks naughty magaizine rush snach hands gets scared He ask but sissy I respond I tell pick book come He grabs one way get checked lights go It completely dark CAPS stay calm man says The back lights come go lobby area We sit twenty mins lights back Everything normal go check We get front turn bad magazine found The lady askd I bringing tell bad news childrens section She said oh laid books counter checked We walked front doors way homeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The discussion about whether people should continue to study at university after high school is of great concern to the public. Some people choose to go to work instead of university, but others hold the opposite view. In my opinion, I believe it is a better choose that go to universities or colleges after high school rather than work.\n\nOn one hand, there are several reasons why people prefer to look for a job directly after graduating from high school. The first one is that they can earn money earlier, and their first plot of gold is achieved faster. As a result, it is much easier for them than undergraduates to invest or start their own business. Secondly, young people who decide to work earlier believe that they can gain experience and improve their skills in real work, which helps them to succeed in their career. For instance, it takes at last 2,000 hours apprenticeship to be a registered electrician in New Zealand, so it is obviously better to be an apprentice than studying in university if they want to be a registered electrician in the future. \n\nOn the other hand, what I believe is that university or college gives people significantly more opportunities in terms of a successful career. Firstly, those high-income occupations like dentists, middle wives and lawyers require higher degrees, qualifications and skills, while those who have never attended university or college have no chance to enter these industries. Another important reason is that a higher degree makes us more competitive. There is no doubt that employers prefer those applicants who have a better education background when they face hundreds of applications. \n\nIn conclusion, it seems beneficial to work after high school, but it is absolutely much easier to succeed after getting a higher education.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I was in the NASA working then my partners show me a picture of a face in Mars and they say that it was a alien and i told them that it was a lanfo. My partners told me if i don't belive them to give them profe that is a landform and i will show them that is a landform.I star serching all i cant and my partners ware serching too and they ware giving me things that it was a alien, but i did not give up i didn't sleep for two days because i was serching and i found that the face looks more like a humand not a alien but i think it was a landform because a humen can't have life in Mars.My partners found a little but not to show that it was a alien.I finally conbins that that face that was in Mars it was not a alien it was a landform so my partners help me getnmore information to get to the point of it.The picture that my partners show me it looks like it was someone human.It was the most amazing thing that i had done in the NASA, so i finally was finish with all the serches and one persone of the NASA didn't belive me and he was serching more that it was a alien if i finds something then i was wrong all the time.My partnern that didn't belive me he didn't found nothing then i give hem the serches that i found an he belive now that is a landform, but i still not sure that is a land form it can be something else it can be life in Mars.If i find that is not a landform i will keep serching until i find what is.I was serching for years and i didn't found nothing that show that is not a landform so i was ride that it was a landform.The company that i was working with that was the NASA didn't want to now one to now that it was a face of a alien of human because they they will search and they can find life in Mars and they we have to move only the people who want to.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think the Face On Mars is a natural landform because there are other landforms already like it on Earth, and there are other mesas like it around the Cydonia region. I think if aliens were on Mars I think we might have discovered them by now, but you can never be sure.\n\nThe Face is just formed by conveniently placed shadows. NASA wishes there was life on Mars becase they would benefit from it, so why would they try to cover up something that could get them a lot of popularity and money. Scientists researched this farther and released even better pictures proving it was just a landmass and not an alien artifact. People believe that the clouds could've covered up alien markings but that seems illogical because in 2001 they went back to the face and took more pictures with even higher resolution and found that there were no markings at all, meaning more evidence leaning towards the Face just being a natural landmass and not an alien artifact. It was just a mesa the whole time.\n\nSo there is a lot of evidence leading you to believe that the Face on Mars is merely just a natural landmass called a mesa, combined with shadows gives the mass a facelike texture. Lots of research shows you that the mass is very natural and not made by Aliens.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast numerous obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock One obstacle architects could mooring mast top building dirigible would held single cable tether would add stress building s frame CAPS This would cause building weak frame dirigible s load well wind pressure Then stress would transmitted foundation building As result building s frame modified costing Over sixty thousand dollars CAPS Another obstacle designing mooring mast passengers could brought eightysixth floor baggage ticket areas would located CAPS In order completed builders complete roof Lastly The greatest obstacle successful use moor mast nature CAPS When winds came action top building dirigible would swivel around mast This would cause safety hazard pedestrians street The Mooring Mast supported many reasons obstacles builders face attempting allow dirigible dock Empire State BuildingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Research has proven that lawbreaker receives a small degree of education. Many hold the opinion that the most suitable way to lower criminal offences is by teaching those in jail the skills they need to acquire employment after their release. I agree with this notion to a certain extent.\nFirstly, many people are sent to prison due to crimes such as theft and joining gangs that participate in illegal activities. This is because they did not graduate from school, let alone college, to obtain the tools that they need to make money in an honest way. For instance, 2019 Statistics obtained from prison research revealed that 80% of criminal offences are committed by uneducated individuals who have no other options to put food on their tables except by committing these acts. Therefore, educating these delinquent's during the time that they spent locked up, paves the way for them to receive income without breaking the law. Overall, this leads to a reduction in illegal activities.\n\nHowever, let us not ignore the fact that some lawbreaker is well educated. Which means that a lack of education does not drive the acts they commit, in fact, they are driven by hate. Although they have spent time in prison for their acts, their mentality remains the same, especially if they are part of a cult. In these situations, no amount of knowledge can prevent them from repeating their offences again. For example, people who are part of racist organizations like the KKK, will continue to kill black humans as they believe they are entitled to their cause. Undoubtedly, the application of teaching schemes in \nprisons will not uplift the burden of their crimes once their jail time is up.\nIn conclusion, despite the many wrongdoer's that would refrain from criminal acts, once they are released from captivity, if they were to be taught important working skills, some already posses these skills and continue to cause havoc.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think that the facial expression technolgy would be a waste of time and money in classrooms.\n\nI will tell ou why her in a little bit.\n\nI also think that It would be a waste of time for the person who has to operate the computer.\n\nI say that because they are just taking more time out of class and the schol has to pay sombody to run te computer.\n\nThe school would be wasting so much money on equiptment for it also.\n\nThe computers are problable $2000 alone.\n\nI am not very good with technology until it comes to the monitors in the tractors on our farm butI know enoughto say they are expensive.\n\nThe computers, software, and the technition could possible cost around $100,000 -$200,000 a year depending on how many compters they have and how many peope they have to hire to work the computer.\n\nThe schools would also be wasting time in class just trying to see how sobody feels. In our school we only have 47 minutes in each class and sometime we go over the bell with our leasons.\n\nImagine if we had a computer in evry class to read our emotions, nothing would get done in class.\n\nThere is alaway that one kid in class who has to have a better reading in class so they have to go more than once and have to argue about it.\n\nWith a class of 25 students that could possibly take up all class time.\n\nThis would also cause lots of drama at school too.\n\nJust say you have Little Suisie who everyone likes and wants to be and hangs around.\n\nShe has a boyfriend and has a few secrets deep down inside.\n\nThen one day her boyfriend breaks up with her an they don't tell anyone because she wouldn't want everybody to feel sorry for her.\n\nShe gets to class and she looks happy, but hooks up to the machine and it says 60 percent sad, 30 percent angry and 10 percent happy.\n\nMost people know how high school goes,\n\nIt takes one person to find something out before the whole school knows.\n\nSo in concluson I would say no to these computers being put into a classroom.\n\nIt would not be valueable at all.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Although art is recognized as a versatile subject around the world, there are people who think that it is an important subject for children at school, others argue that it is a waste of their time. I agree with the former argument that art is impeccable for holistic mind growth in children.\nOn the one hand, it is often argued that there is no tangible benefit of studying art. This is because there are very limited career prospects for people who study art. For example, people with a qualification in the arts often find it difficult to secure a job which is permanent and well paid. In contrast, people with a credential in other disciplines such as business, engineering or medicine, conveniently find jobs which are not only permanent and well paid but also highly recognized in the society. \nOn the other hand, I would disagree that since art is a useless subject because it does not offer a well awarded career. Teaching art at school level is essential for a holistic mind growth in children. Art allows children to not only explore their creativity, but also enable them to express their ideas and emotions. This not only improves their communication skills but also enhances their emotional quotient which helps them substantially later in their future careers.\nIn conclusion, while other people’s opinions may vary, I think that art plays an inevitable role in the overall mindset development of children which helps them to enhance their communication skills and emotional quotient for their future challenges. Therefore, art should be taught to children at school.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I am going to tell you why you should be a seagoing cowboy. It is really esay, it's fun, and you have to be brave. I will tell you why it is all of those things.\n\nIt is really easy. What you have to do is get on a boat go to where the tell you to go. Then get the herd on the boat.\n\nLast you take it to where it goses. Then do it all over agin. Plus I did 9 of then.\n\nIt was really fun. You get alot of free time on the boat when you are going to get the cadle. On the way back you have to make sure that the cadle dosenet jump overboard. Plus you get to see alot of things.\n\nYou have t be really brave. If are not brave then you wodent be abole to get on the boat. You have to be brave and keep the cadle onboard. You have to be far away from your freinds and family. You have to be brave and ride on a boat all the away around the world. lastly the boat might crash.\n\nThose are just some things about being a seagoing cowboy. That is why you should be a seagoing cowboy. Maby one day you can be like my.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You have just found out that there is a face on Mars. The only question is; is there a face on Mars? I am here to tell you that there is not a face on the planet Mars. The reason that it is not a \"face\" on Mars is; the time it was taken, that there are butte or mesas on Mars, and the amount of pixles it was taken in.\n\nMy first reason that there is not a face on Mars is; the time it was taken. Back in 1976, which was not a long time ago, but technology has changed inbetween the photographs. Their was new technology, but it was not as advanced as it is in 1998, or 2001. Like the sentence in paragraph 3 stating \" a \"huge rock formation. . . which resembles a human head. . . formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\"\" The statement is saying that it was not face, but a mere illusion given by the shadows.\n\nThe next reason to prove that there is no face on Mars is; There are butte,and mesa on Mars, and on Earth. A butte,and a mesa is a \" lave dome that takes form of an isolated mesa.\"As it says in paragraph 12 also. \" About the same heights as the Face on Mars\" The paragraph is stating that there are objects on Earth like the ones on Mars, but we dont get the reflection of the Sun on Mars, like we do on Earth.\n\nMy last proving that there are is not and never will be a \"face\" on Mars is; The amount of pixles it was taken in and the resolution. As paragraph 10 states \"captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximun resolution.\" The camera in 2001, was more advanced than the one in 1976, but in paragraph10 is also states\" each pixel in the 2001 images spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 photo.\" The camera in 1976 was only 43 meters per pixel, while the one in 2001 has 1.56 meters per pixel, keep in mind that they were at their best resolution, Thats over a 200% decrease in the pixels in a matter of 24 years.\n\nIn conclusion, science has came a long way from the original picture, and the scientist worked hard to prove that there was no life \"face\" on the planet. I have done my part of trying to covince you that there is no life, but the final question will be; Will you believe me or not?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I thinks author concludes story given paragraph show similar hibiscus geese First geese hibiscus goal survive winters Geese fly south winter stay warm This similar Saeng worse thing moved different environment must adapt Also Saeng must experience winter along hibiscus The hibiscus needs tobe strong overcome winter shows Saeng like hibiscus needs strong overcome test If hibiscus overcome its test winter survive cangnerSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The reason author wrote conclusion paragraph show Saeng looking forward brighter future Saeng hoping see geese remind homeland see wants pass driving In story I feel though Saeng sentimental person I think reason author wrote conclusion paragraphSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "This article is about a computer than can get facial expressions down to an exact science and even percents of what people are feeling. The Mona lisa is a very hard painting to read what is happening or how she is feeling but this computer solved it. She is 83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry. This computer solved something no one has known but Leonardo da Vinci himself. I think this kind of techknowledgy is amazing and fasinating. A classroom computer could tell when a kid is bored or confused. This could help teacher tell when to chnage their teaching style. It could also tell when school fights are about to happen, but lets stick with the positive impacts of this computer. If you have a kid that is mentally chanlenged or slow this could tell what they truly get and what they need help with more. I know in our school we have fast learners who are super smart and slow learners who are super smart as well and get frusterated whenthey get behind trying to keep up with the fast learners and the teachers cant tell when that happens. It could make lessons more effective. If you have to look up the internet how to make a happy face. You need this. It will tell you if you need less fear, more happines, or even less anger in your life. Humans can recognize some of the facial expressions but to get it down to a percent is amazing. This techknowledgy could be used all around the world. It would be used with criminals to help see if they are lying or not to nust him/her for what they did. It could be used with suicidal people to keep them away from those thought and even taking their own life. One of the biggest ones it could be used in the military to see if people are menatlly healthey enough to do this kind of work. Or even somehow be transformed to find schoolshooters and/or bombers at events by reading there faces. This has the potential to save lots of lives if it was formed into something like that. This tech could be at the top of the list for some of the best ever created by man kind, and its all thanks to one man Prof. Thomas Huang, of the Beckman Institute for advanced Science at the University of Amsterdam. These men specialize in human and computer comunication. And they have made something amazing.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Face on Mars: Alien Artifact or Natural Landform\n\nDo you believe aliens created \"The Face\" on Mars? Well, there's a great debate going on between scientists and conspiracy theorists to determine if its a natural landform or possibly made by aliens on Mars. To prove that its not an alien artifact we are going to talk about the April 5, 1998 photograph, the location of the Face, and the April 8, 2001 photograph.\n\nThe April 5, 1998 photograph is what really got everyone thinking. The Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team went back to the Face to get a closer shot 10x sharper to see if the Face was actually real. I think going back was a idea because you dont want to go around telling everyone you seen a face when thats not exactly what they saw in the picture. Turns out when they go back to get a better shot they realize it was just a natural landform!\n\nNext, the location of the Face is 41 degrees north martian latitude, WHERE IT WAS WINTER. Meaning the cold temperatures could of just made an allusion of a face when we first saw it in 1998. I know the conspiracy theorists would say that the MOC team didnt take the picture accurately cause how the first time we see a face and now we dont, Well the scientist waited 3 years to go back so if it was really a \"Face\" it would of still been there.\n\nLastly, since people still werent convinced scientist went back a 3rd time with an even better camera just to make sure on a cloudless summer day in Cydonia. Malin's team said they were so close that even if it was a tiny shack on the ground you could still see it. It turns out that it is actually the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa like landforms we have in the US.\n\nI know everyone will have a different opinion on everything and its natural to disagree but scientist have all the facts. Conspiracy theorist probably still thinks NASA is hiding something from us but what else can you hide when you see all the photo's and they gave all the facts to us and even went back a third time while it was summer in Cydonia to see if we get a different result from the photo they took in the winter time. Well, what do you believe? Is it a natural landform or a alien artifact?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In some countries, there is a proliferation of people are gaining momentum in searching about the past story of the house or building they stay. This essay will explain why and how people doing so.\r\n\r\nTo start with the first reason, people want to know about the quality and safety of their home. For example: people will find details for the property quality especially the construction builder, materials used to build the house and also the architecture structural in order to avoid deleterious consequence in the future such as building collapse. The second reason is to look up on the Chinese geomancy of the house location and direction. For instance, people want to live in a place that suit themselves which they believe that the house can give them better fortune. Last but not least, the third reason is knowing the legacy of the ownership status, so as to prevent the occurrence of unnecessary lawsuit problems.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, there are ways that people are able to access the history of their living place. One of the viral way is browsing on internet, this is a vital tool to explore all relevant information about the premise. Some people may be able to request from their local council or even ask the neighbors living in the neighbourhood.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, it is commonly believed that knowing the place you stay is much needed because I personally will be hunting what is the past history of my house and let myself living peacefully in my own shelter.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear I think computers negative affect us How many people acess camputer daily america many people go least hour That means people cant exercise wasting many posibility physical sound good Think everything done write letter I got got materials sit back After In done writing put materials away put letter mailbox walk way back Well I Now think write email sitdown move fingers Do see difference instead getting good walk friends house talk himer Did know literally computer Instead around add anything computer gives away information information lead everthing wouldbe gone All go online Believe phisically get hurt computer long thing computer happened grandpa wood chair day get ardthritis muscle thing thSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "A time I patient I went doctors When I went doctors checkup appointment didnt get called till I wait long time Finally got doctors room nurse blood pressure I wait another mins actuall doctor By time doctor actually came I got flue shot swine flue shot When I done I ready go home Thats time I patientSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I recall famous madican named prefering stunt took enourmous amounts pateints courage named CAPS In Time The madichian stay block ice days hours The great madichian sweater He consiled ice open public magnificent madichian said I could bearly hear anything He waited hours like falling abyiss bottomless pit Until final seconds ended The madichian finally free And aliveSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Al Smith s dream airships dock atop Empire Building Was cut short bitter reality The idea failed parially due impracticality docking foot balloon filled flamable gas city building The mere size glimpse astounding created many problems Firstly The wind atop skyscrapper great inconsitent It extremely difficult dock building seen Los Angeles tried dock The balloon unable dock due potential damage could cause surrounding city The blimps also kept afloat Hydrogen due chemical nature extremly flamable Blimps exploded past Hindenburg Engineers knew similar accident occurred Empire state Building substantial damage would done city building These impracticalities combined use airplanes rather blimps gaurenteed blimps would ever docked Empire State BuildingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "On May 24, 1976, NASA's Viking one spacecraft was circling mars. It took many photos of landing sites for its sister ship Viking two. As viking one took pictures, it came across a pecuiliar formation on the surface of the planet. The formation seemed to be an enormouse head similar to that of a humans. The scientist figured it was just another Martioan mesa, that was commonly spread throught the surface of Mars.\n\nConspiracy theorists think that it is bona fide evidence that there is life on Mars. Defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an acncient civilization on Mars. And so on April 5, 1998 another Mars global surveyor flew over and took a picture ten times sharper than the original photos. This led the the scientist to conclude and reveal that the face was just a natural land form and that it wasn't an alien monument at all.\n\nSome people were not happy. The face on Mars is located at 41 degrees north of the martian latitude where it was winter in April 1998. This was a coudy time of year on Mars. They had said that the camera the pictures had been taken with had to peer through clouds to see the Face. They believed that the alien markings were hidden by the haze at the time.\n\nOn April 8, 2001, there was a cloudles day on Mars. The surveyor drew close for another picture. They said they increased the image quality to take the best picture they had taken of the face. They added that in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixle size you could see things like airplains, egyptian-style pyramids, or even small shacks.\n\nThis showed people that it was the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa, which are landforms common around the American West. This showed that the conspiracy theorists had been proven wrong. Since NASA actually researches theier data to learn more about it and they make hypothesize, it shows that they have a lot of since in saying that theorists are wrong. Theorist just make theories and they don't have anything to back them up if someone were to arugue about the subject. Conspiracy theorists are not always wrong but in this case they are.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Issues related to volunteer work to be done by the youth for the neighborhood are being discussed these days. Growing concerns are becoming heated questions among the community that leisure part of the day for today’s generations should be spent by doing charity work for the society. While this view is rubbished by some critics who oppose it. The dissertation accedes with the given statement. Both the views have their logic to support their opinion which will be discussed in this dissertation before coming to any conclusion.\r\n\r\nAs far as the matter is concerned, I would like to stamp the mark on this view by stating that helping society in free hours by the teenagers has a remarkable impact on the people. The first and foremost point that strikes my mind is that the younger generation learns how to become responsible citizens by adding their efforts into the community. Another noteworthy notion that caters attention is that they become more social which help them in developing mental and social wellbeing. This can be explained precisely by citing an example of a survey which showed a comparison between students who spent their extra o'clock volunteering in social work with children who engage themselves in activities like playing video games and gossiping. The results concluded that teenagers who spent their time doing something for the locality had a better social and helping attitude whereas the others had a conservative attitude.\r\n\r\nAs every matter has two aspects, another matter of this aspect deals with its opposite side. Some population are in the favor of not supporting their children to do anything during their free for the association because they believe it’s a waste of moments and ,instead this point can be utilized in learning something new as an extracurricular activity.\r\n\r\nAfter cogitating on a great deal of thought and discussion the conclusion to be drawn here is that everything has its own significant value especially regarding the folk’s viewpoint of teenagers working for free towards the betterment of the society. All we require is to have an optimistic approach and a ppositive attitude so that we can help in building a better world for the future generation.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "People think useing computers good thing I think alot people country speak different languages computers teach insted person speaks language This people lives even alot people use computers work Kids also use internet things facebook myspace gmail alot web pages I also use internet much anymore I used go gaming pages like even cupcoffee I dont go anymore much I xbox live thing internet also comes talk friends Some friends fo computer dont get exercise alot friends go play alot sports getting fat time So people world basically computer everyone I think country write big pay check poor country get computers come speak language ship computers countrys dont buy crappy computers Also computer buy webcam already placed computer talk friends even show made something like So I think computers best thing ever invented everSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Venus is like earth, but long ago it was it had some life but not a lot, big masses of oceans. But some of the features are analogus to like what we have on earth. For instace it has a surface of rocky sediment, and includes familiar features such a valleys, mountains, and craters. Today we recall venus as our \"twin\", because venus is the clost in size and density, and close in distance too. It is also recalled as the \"evening star\",Because venus is one of our brightest points of light in the night sky, the name is sometimes misleading knowing that venus is actually a planet.\n\nVenus can also be a dangerous visting spot for NASA to go to or even humans. Venus has a 97% carbon dioxide atmosphere, making it hard for a human being to breathe. Whats even more challenging is that the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. The planets surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what earth experiences. The conditions for venus are far more extreme than anything that a human would encounter on earth. An enviornment would crush a submarine accustomed to diving into the deepest parts of our ocean and liqufey many metals.\n\nSister planet has the hottest surface temperature of all the other planets on the solar system, even though mercury is the planet right next to the sun. Through the high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earth quakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. Scientists also stated that at thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be warm and the temperature of 170 degrees fahrenheit. But the air pressure would still be close to the sea level on earth. More importantly, researchers cannot take any samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance. Therfore, scientists seeking a conduct a thorough mission to understand venus would need to get up close and personal risks.\n\nThrought out the story its was describing about venus and how it had life on it way before human life was made. Also described the dangers about walking, touching, getting close to the planet venus. The story was also about How venus is our \"twin\" or \"sister planet\" and the \"Evening Star\", describing how they got those nicknames. Also about how NASA how some of their electronics could have been tested on venus's surface, and how devices played an important role in the 1940s during World War Two.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "'' The Face on Mars '' is just an natural landform because when we first got the image there were shadows around the face on the image. Which resembles just bumpy and holy its just an natural landform. Then, that's when we made the picture sharper that it was before so the people can really tell what it is.\n\nThat's when the next day the NASA posted the picture on their web site page called the JPL ,just to reveal that the face was not an alien artifact that it was an natural landform. Thats when they got some people who were mad that it wasn't an alien artifact. Perhaps alien markings were hidden by haze. Like in paragraph 9, some mission controllers prepared to look again. Thats when I was like ''no'' theres no reason to send out another spacecraft just to say that its just and natural landform.\n\nIn conclusion, \"It's not easy to target.\" \"In fact its hard work.\" We just dont see faces very often. Thats when the picture of the landform got many comments like the ''were just not satsified that the image is just an natural landform.\" Its just that some people just want to make money from making up any thing like saying its an alien artifact. Some people just needs the wait and see if its really real or its just an natural thing that happens.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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