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"content": "The author describes how a new technology called the \"Facial Action Coding System\" enables computers to identify human emotions.\n\nAccording to some new computer software that can recongnize emotions. The famous painting Mona Lisa is that she's eighty three percent happy, nine percne disgusted, six percent fearful, and finally two percent angry.\n\nProf. Thomas Huang, of the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois, is working in collaboration with Prof. Nicu Sebe of the University of Amseterdam. Dr. Huang and his colleague are experts at developing better way for humans and computers to communicate.\n\nThe process begins when the computer constructs a three-D computer model of te face; all forty four major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an \"action unit\". Afterwards Dr. Huang relies on the work of psychologists, such as Dr. Paul Eckman, creator of FACS (Facial Action Coding System). Echman has classified six basic emotions, happiness, surprise, anger, digust, fear, and sadness. Then he associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles.\n\nFor example your frontalies pars lateralies muscle which is above your eyes, raises your eyebrows when you're surprised; your orbicularis oris the muscle around your mosth tighten your lips to show that you are angry.\n\nIn the End of it all these Profs. are trying to invent something that could be useful when it comes to photos and pictures. For example if someone who doesn't like to smile but the photographer who is taking a picture of them wants them to then you can take their photo then transfer it into this computer to make them smile in the way that you want them to smile. This is a very smart idea of these guys who are making this computer because it might just be successful in the near future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In guessing means winter spring whatever harder grow garden Also mabe challenge sort make garden grow time year So I would assume thats talkingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "scientist wanna learn more about the planet venus to see how it is and if it really is the closest planet to earth there is in this solar system.\n\nThe planet Venus is a difficult planet to search because earth has sent multiple missions for it unmanned because no spacecraft survied the landing more than a few hours. A spaceship has not touched down into Venus in more than three decades. The reason why its hard is because venus atmosphere is very thick, its 97% carbon dioxide. Also the clouds of venus have sulfuric acid in venus atmosphere. The average temperature in venus is usually 800 degrees Fahrenheit. the pressure of the atmosphere is 90 times greater than what we have in our own planet, that type of pressure could crush anything.\n\nthe reason they wanna know more about venus is because astronomers wanna learn more about the planet. the reason they are so curious is because its the closest earth like planet in our solar system. They say that long ago venus had an ocean and could have had various forms of life in it. the way astronomers wanna learn more about it is by using a blimp like vehicle that hovers around 30 miles floating above the venus landscape. But most forms of like cannot penetrate venus thick atmosphere.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood love getherness Every one community would help one In passage said It closeknit community honest hardworking immigrants extended hand people neciraraly kind clearly need That tells help love anyone race like part family That mood story portraiseSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There time I patient whole day It eve meaning I woke I ate breakfast brush teeth I got shower By I would probably ask mom times I could open one present day I hadn CAPS ask yet I string playing play station mom called I open door usual cat right door I shut door hop cat get stairs yell food He sewried stairs right canter As I start walking stairs I hear So I start running stairs fast I could knowing two year old brothers coming They meet counter ask CAPS many times ask open present CAPS I said They looked like seen ghost After lunch I ran friend house across street play basketball About hour later finish game take bike ride got back minutes later I done watch take shower went bed My mom woke heat stairs soon I saw present I scream And time I patient whole daySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear Local Newspaper Are spending precious time computer On computer probably wasting every second searching playing games You shoud nt spend alot time computer wash away brain You shoud nt go computers long time instead exercising enjoying nature interacting people First spending much time computer good exercising On computers ca nt jog fat gain eating food By jogging instead going computer lose weight see real world world behind computer screen Nevertheless computers fun go like playing addicting games nt better play real sport like soccer In soccer use mind alot much better sitting laying around dazed computer screen long period time Do nt love playing outdoor games Like playing tag hiding go seek nt fun playing addicting game computer screen For I think That reasons I think exercise stare computer screen Secondly nt computer long amount time instead enjoying nature Nature beautiful refreshing unlike computer Yeah I know computers offer alot offer fresh air outside warm breeze land living animals earth I nt think neither Instead going computer raining play pets nt put raincoat umbrella go outside Especially outside enjoying nature go swim bring annoying little siblings park There often use going computer More importantly nt go computer better Interacting living people person On computer talking people going computer chatting people impossible read someones expression So get computer hang family friends Get fun conversation debate Make new friends mall discovering new trail park Do anything interact computer see typed words writing back Get self world nt interact people world computer screen In conclusion nt spend precious time computer It nt nessasary spend time computer could exrcising enjoying nature interacting people I strongly beleive people outside computer So waiting get computer take hikeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There many obstacles workers face building Empire State Building making structure tallest world making serve greater purpose building stableDesigning building tallest structure world quite architect Al Smith building taller foot tall Chrysler Building The Chrysler building originally feet Empire State building planned feet But architect Chrysler Building revealed spire placed top Chrysler Building s height shot feet feet taller Empire State The competition begunWhen Al Smith constructing piece fit top skyscraping building wanted spire dome pyramid put add desired feet paragraph wanted something would truly awe people With popularity blimps dirigibles rise Smith decided would create docking station top building Although great deal effort frustration proved task impossible The main reason much margin error chance want taken crowded city The tip still added though put Empire State Building feet feet taller Chrysler BuildingThe building seems face elements The monstrous structure withstand high winds Most building weather proof problem top It designed look almost like rocketship four wings s base Lined steel th structure still holds today Most challenges faced crew building magnificent structure seemed impossible created building set build And still tallest world daySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Do you like going on fun adventures, saving lifes and vistiting many unique places? Well if you join or participate the Seagoing Cowboys program you will get to go to so many places like different countries,and castles. Not only that, But save lives in different countries. You will miss out on so many fun adventures and other peoples lifes and countries if you don't join the program.\n\nIf you join the program then you will have so much fun with all the different places and adventures. One of the people who come here, named Luke has been to so many beautiful places. Luke has made nine trips, more than any member in the Seagoing Cowboys. Luke has toured an excavated castle in Crete and went to the Panama canal on his way to China.\n\nIf it wasn't for Luke's friend, Don Reist,he would have never been a member and he would have never seen any of these places that he has been to. Luke knew it was an oppurtunity of a lifetime. At the time Luke joined, World war 2 was over in Europe. Many countries were ruined and needed help, so Don and Luke joined to go on a mission to go to other countries that were ruined to help the countries recover their food supplies,animals,and more.\n\n\"The cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy,\" he says. Luke has gotten hurt for other people, because he knew that what was going on in their lifes,are far worse than his. He has traveled alot and seen alot that has happend in other countries, and they need more people to save them.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger. \"I'm grateful for the opportunity,\" he says. \"It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\" That awareness stayed with him throughout his life. He lead his family and international students and exchanged visitors for many years. You can join this program and save lifes of other people in different countries,and visit countries and places just like Luke Bomberger and Don Reist.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In these modern times, school education has become very diverse and people have now started to advocate the importance of international news as a part of the curriculum. I agree with this point and actually believe that this can make our upcoming generation more informed on current affairs. In this essay, I intend to discuss the pros and cons associated with adding this subject to the course outline for secondary school students.\r\n\r\nThe proponents of the former opinion suggest that the adoption of international education as a subject for secondary school students can be very helpful, as It can provide the students with insights into the economical, social and political aspects of the different countries of the world. This will help our young generation to make better decisions in life. Such as, choosing their political representatives in the future and forming their opinions on the current affairs around them.\r\n\r\nThe people of the latter opine believe that the sociopolitical landscape of the world is constantly changing and rapidly evolving. Therefore, the international news we teach today will become a history lesson in the future. They also believe that the world is facing very difficult times right now and teaching these hardships in the classrooms will only traumatise our young generation and will not cause any good.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe that the road to a better-informed youth starts in the classroom. The ideas that inspire and educate our young ones today will equip them in making better decisions in the future. Hence, the significance of introducing international news as a subject is extremely high.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The title story Narciso Rodriguez The authro Narciso Rodriguez The mood I think story author gave pretty good The author knew excited knew excited good story The author put explition marks author happy sad So I think good story I like The mood went rightSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Home The Lives author creates mood story First mood This author uses family members struggles find definition family Also author shares specific information family like Also mood seems thankful The author continueously thanks parents recalls past time wonderful family friends The author also makes mood thankful Narciso Rodriguez saying I never forget parents turned simple house home Narciso never forget parents turned simple old house home In memoir Narciso Rodriguez author creates mood storySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "One obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock Empire State Building strengthen frame building The stress dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation nearly eleven hundred feet paragraph If building strengthen stress force would collapse building Another obstacle faced perfection docking dirigibles modifying s safety Most dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable paragraph If dirigible destroyed fire downtown New York I guarantee really serious hazardous accident Downtown New York densely populated destroyed dirigible downtown New York puts danger passengers dirigible pedestrians downtown Other two obstacles explained nature another obstacle Empire State Building Strong winds affect Building even dirigible The winds Top building constantly shifting due violent air currents paragraph Violent winds could force back dirigible swivel around mooring mast A swiveling ship pedestrians close safe The law enforces airships could fly low urban areas Flying low urban areas puts pedestrians passengers state danger The dirigible could blown wind blow onto sharp spire buildings area These obstacles faced docking dirigible successfullySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "On the argument of self driving cars i disagree that we should have them for mulitiple reasons one there not relible to drive by themselves for a long period of time without running into a accident or a place they cant manuver in by themselves that require human capabilities in order to continue on the path making self driving cars self driving / human driven cars because it requires both the machine and the human in order for it to work and some of these so called self driving cars can only drive on certain tracks like the google car could only drive on a electromagnectic radio wave track that sent the car scripts of where to turn and how fast to drive these radio waves wont be avaliable on normal rodes or highways so why invent the self driving call at all if it requries special tracks to run on and back to the point\n\nof that the self driving car still needs the driver in order to function so why buy it at all if your still going to end up driving in the end you might aswell drive the whole way by yourself without the computer insted of having it constatly remind you that you need to take over your car because our computer can not navigate though this area seems like a waste of money to me but thats beside the point the point is these cars can be extreamly unsafe they have only tested the cars on bare test rodes they never had a live test with the cars on human driven rodes with other drivers so there is no way of knowing that your self driving car can navigate with human trafic it may crash into other cars because it is completly used to going a certain speed on a certain track with no cars on it and what if people behind you dident know you had a self driving car honking there horns at you to speed up on the highway in the fast lane these cars can hear human activity they only know how to get from point A to point B in the best way possible ending my argument self driving cars are not only unsafe from not being tested on active rodes but they also still require the driver in order to fuction in some areas concluding that self driving cars are just generally a giant messup waiting to happen with lots of crashes and emergency reports but who is really at fault here the human for buying the self driving car or the machine for not doing its job correctly we all know the correct answer the human for being dumb enough to put his life in the hands of a machine these self driving cars should all be dissasembled and never used in real human trafic its just a bad idea to put a machine on a active rode with other humans indangering there lives also not only the driver that bought the car in the first place and thought it was a good idea because he was lazy and dident feel like driving that day before i conclude this one more thing how much do these cars cost exactly thousands millions its not like ever ordinary person could afford one anyways only very rich and supid people will by these cars but we dont know how much they cost we just know that they are going to be pretty expensive i mean its a car that drives itself anyways self driving cars bad idea i dont know why google even thought of them in the first place they made them for very lazy people or people who dont know how to drive either way it will all end in disaster or tears or even death but thats just me and my argument my opinion a lot of people would want this car sure but how good of and idea is it to purchase one on a active rode and crash because thy computer failed or the computer can mess up make a mistake and not even take you to the place you intended to go i mean its madness clouser.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Venus is worth studying, you never no when we would poosibly need a new planet.\n\nThe author is trying to explain what it is like on venus how hot it is and how much it is different from earth but also have a few things they have in common like they are really close in size. Only a few aircrafts landed on Venus but were destroyed in the matter of a few hours. Venus has a surface temperature of over 800 f .Venus has an thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets. To top it off are clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus atmosphere. NASA is working on approaches to study venus safely, NASA is using the weather that Venus would have agains a silicon carbide container and lasted for 3 weeks in the chamber.\n\nSo that is why it would be a great idea to learn more about our galaxy.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Do like I like Maybe maybe What offensive compared varies ends Why Everyone point view You agree others care There many includes religious beliefs independence experimenting Religious beliefs important would agree Certain material world maybe offensive kind Such gay rights This apply everyone else accepting For ones accept tell open minded Unlike rebels going state mind I believe important go along religious beliefs Independence assume already Whether music movies magazines etc offensive others effects Why It know right wrong So non sense things caught attention Should take control get rid No It bother You take independent Experimenting self contained As simple It likey people arewere influence I siutation I m known crazy child family My dad would always lecture careful I hang I m As teenager I let words pass I always youngest people I hung Was I ever influence Yes Did I ever get hurt No I say I experimented life Does hurt observe experiment bad It usually varies Religious beliefs disrespectful To independence one control Experimenting choice What offensive I state mindSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I ve recently read letter Katherine Paterson censorship libraries This opinion expressed words I feel whole topic I ve reading ever since I hit first grade To honest I could nt tell names well I ca nt remember I d like think s I horrible memory truth unappealing unmemorable books In aspects books could considered waste life Back I guess I read I nothing better horrible read books want I stopped reading books around seventh grade every book I picked seemed extremely boring would take first one hundred pages actually something decent happen Luckily light end tunnel Every come across book changes life Not literally feels way time feel These books I remember These lifechanging books things would interest anyone picks Unfortunately things would viewed innappropriate select audience For example one book talk murder viewed highly offensive person whose mother murdered whereas book could viewed piece art someone escaped terribleness death Apparently gotten point people would books censored removed libraries completely I stand idle longer Books go long drawnout process shelfready They need written read selected published For books take years To completely alienate books extremely unfair time put If nt like books nt read It s simple If s enough reason think way book child getting raped fighting overcome could serve inspiration rape victims Or book someone s parents dying could help child situation overcome grief All books serve purpose remain staunch shelves local book stores regardless methods used Even nt appeal could completely different experience someone else halfway across world Let books serve purposeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Actually, Charity is a very preciously subject to be discussed. \n\n\nFirstly, Charity brings less gap in the poor and rich and builds the relationship between them. Secondly, it reduces enmity between two categories of people. Thirdly, the crime rate will be reduced. Charity is a humanitarian behaviour. We have to in cultivate this habit and sense of responsibility in the children, since their early childhood. This need to be taught in the schools, starting from kindergarten and to be taught by parents at home. Thus children will become more generous towards poor. The Lord has created people with different financial back grounds, to test the rich, whether rich will help the poor or not?.\n\n\nBecause of the above 3 points we have discussed, we need Charity Organizations to help the poor. This is really a great organization for the financial and social balance of the society. In case of tax payers, when they pay money to charity centres, their tax will be reduced. Thus, less burden for the Governments in case of taking care of the poor. Generally, Governments also promote, these organizations by promoting taxpayers, to give amount to charity centres/organizations. \n\n\nFinally, to conclude, Whom to pay charity is a second crucial point to be discussed. Firstly, we have to start with the same community, close relatives, friends and neighbours. Secondly, in case if we have surplus amount obviously, further we have to extend to help all. For example, we have some countries in the world, they are very rich. They have surplus amount after their nationals got all the required amenities also. Those countries definitely ought to help other poor countries also.\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\n\nComing to the point who should be benifittedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There is no life on mars that is known of. If you dont believe me, stay a while so I can tell you why I say this.\n\nThis occurence is a one in a million type of thing to see. This occurence was a Martian mesa, common enough around the Cydonia. On April '98- a cloudy time appeared on the Red Planet. The camera on MGS, had to peer through wispy cloud to see the face.\n\nOn April 8, 2001, A cloudless summer day in Cydonia, the Mars Global Surveyor drew in close enough for another look. \"We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees on the cent the Face in the field of view,\" Malins team captured a extraordinary photo. This photo actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa - landforms common around the American West.\n\nIf you are still a firm believer, you do that, and if not I hope I have helped you with this passage. If you have questions, I would gladly answer them.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Researchers have shown that the tendency of people to commit a crime is the result of lacking education. It is asserted that educating criminals during the time they are imprisoned is the prime solution to reduce the increasing crime rates. While I claim that this method is beneficial to a certain extent, I believe that there are several better ways to tackle the problem.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, I admit that educating convicts is a rational option in terms of reducing the number of people getting involved in illegal activities. The primary reason is that education provides prisoners with essential vocational knowledge and training, consequently enabling them to get a job after returning to the community. Those acknowledged skills assist them in earning a living to pay for their living fees and look after themselves as well as their families, preventing them from relapsing into illegal acts, stealing or pickpocketing, for example. Moreover, should prisoners be educated thoroughly, it is feasible that they are aware of their faulty actions and look forward to embarking on their lives again. Therefore, there is a likelihood of recidivism being reduced. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I contend that the given solution is not comprehensive in today’s society as it only benefits those who have already committed a crime. In addition, bringing criminology into academic programs for the youth is considered more advantageous. To be more specific, the future crime rate can effectively be prevented by imparting the drawbacks of committing a crime to students and admonishing them not to be involved in those illegal acts. Furthermore, besides criminals getting a low level of education, there has been a significant number of white-collar inmates, such as lawyers or businessmen, who pursue tertiary education. Thus, there is no point in providing them with in-prison teaching. Instead, imposing extended and stricter punishments has a long-lasting impact on ensuring that they won’t make the same mistakes and also deterring people from thinking of carrying out a crime. \r\n\r\nIn brief, while educating offenders during their time in prison has several advantages, I recommend governors highlight the need of having crime education as a part of academic programs and implementing harsh punishments in an attempt to decrease the number of criminals.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood created author memoir happy mood The author s parents gave everything come soon child They could better education verry greatful The author loved home great times It favorite place whole world talks home great detail The author great family memories kitchen Cuban music scent Cuban food The author s mood gratefull It parents moving Cuba It also happy great times The author would probably want relive times I want relive times childhoodSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The purpose of this passage is to convince the reader into why we should visit and learn about Venus. The author did a very good job of explaining the reasons on why Venus is the closest planet to Earth , however he did leave out a few important ideas. The author failed to mention cost, reason, and a plan to actually get to Venus. A trip to Venus has a lot of reprecussions that the author didn't explain.\n\nThe author failed to bring up cost on why we should explore Venus. He did so purposely because the astrinomical cost of making a trip to Venus is far greater than our need of another planet. The obstacles scientists and astronauts have to overcome sound very expensive. In the text it states that Venus's average surface temperature is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and that atmospheric pressure on Venus is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These 2 obstacles, around a 700 degree temperature increase and 90 times greater pressure than on Earth would require a lot of funds to overcome these problems.\n\nThe author talked about how Venus compares to Earth but never addressed why there is a need to compare the two planets. He did mention that Venus is Earth's twin and Venus could have provided life in the past, but he didn't talk about why we should be so concerned with Venus. According to the text efforts to travel to Venus were made, but never came close to working. The text states that no spacecraft successfully landed on Venus for more than a few hours. If we tried to travel to Venus and it didn't come close to working, why continue with this mission that seems impossible.\n\nIn the passage, the author talked about Venus and compared it to Earth. He talked about a few ways we have tried to explore Venus, but they didn't seem to work. He never talked about a possible plan to either live through the harsh conditions, or get rid of them. The text states that the author thinks that insight to another planet will benefit humans even though we have a .1% chance to live there. The author still wants to make a trip to Venus even though the dangers strongly outweigh the benefits.\n\nBased on the information in the passage, I do not think we should even consider going to Venus. The immense cost, the lack of reasoning, and the failure of a plan in place leads to my conclusion that Venus is not a planet for us to worry about. The author is dreaming too big for reality, and leaving out crucial answers needed for a journey of this magnitude. The author backed up his points very well, but left out the main points of this discussion.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Features setting affect Features affect cyclist water help saftey Id read sucking stones helps take mind thirsty allowing spit circulate This quote desperate need water saying sucks rock drink spit The rough terrain abandoned road old men sent date made unable ask directions even know travelling correctly Along road meets snake Being far away civilization gotten bit would one help save dyeing side road Also heatstroke water help Safty help water factors contribute features effect cyclistSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Many students these days find it increasingly difficult to pay attention during lessons. In my opinion, this is partly a natural reaction that has been exacerbater by technology and the solutions lie in school reform.\r\n\r\nStudents struggle to stay engaged both due to a natural predisposition and the pervasive impact of screen time. Students throughout history have always wanted to escape their school lessons. This is because learning is difficult and provides little pleasure itself relative to both passive and active pastimes like hanging out with friends, watching TV, listening to music, or playing sports. Moreover, the advent of the ubiquitous internet era and portable devices such as smartphones has had an exponential effect on attention spans and diversionary priorities. Most students today are addicted to short videos and posts on social media networks and therefore struggle to follow the intricate arguments of lengthy lectures and extended readings.\r\n\r\nOn a small scale, individuals can remedy these problems through sheer willpower but for broader change schools must play an active role. The most immediate fix would be to ban phones. This is difficult since phones serve practical purposes such as allowing students to call their parents or book a ride home, but they could be taken at the beginning of the day and returned when school finishes. Another step schools could take would be to modernise the curriculum and account for reduced attention spans. Lessons could be shorter and could include more interactivity in order to stimulate learning. rather than the passive learning environment that has led to daydreaming students for generations.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although this trend is likely an irreversible part of human nature and progress, schools can implement changes. to curb its effects. It is important for parents and governments to be supportive of such reforms as well.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless cars are an upcoming topic of the next generation. Driverless cars are being developed each and every day and are in the process of being updated. Even as Google cofounder believes, \"these vehicles will fundamentally change the world\". These cars will help us advance not just in technology, but in transportation as well. The driverless cars are more than likely a good idea for the people and their environment.\n\nFirst, the driverless cars have the ability to drive itself and also allow people to drive too. With the car being able to drive itself, the person will as well when there are upcoming problems in the road or even when they want to drive. The good side about that is that the drivers will more than likely not get bored on the road just as Dr. Werner Hubert states. The ability to drive will help drivers get through to their destination when there's problems ahead. The car will also help the driver get to their destination quicker than ever before.\n\nSecond, driverless cars are a very good idea to all the reckless and new drivers. The driverless cars have certain abilities that will help maintain the drivers safety and health. The Google car will help people with things such as steering, accelerating, and even braking. The car has automated senses to help driver with upcoming cautions or work zones. A pro for having a driverless car is that the cars driver seat vibrates when your about to back up into an object that you may not be able to see.\n\nFinally, the driverless cars help the driver maintain sturdy on driving with the usage of sensors. Sensors relay throughout the car and get the drivers attention when upcoming road blockings are in the way or even when the driver needs to take over due to upcoming construction sites. The sensors show on the dash, windshield, and other \"heads-up\" displays. With the usage of the sensors being eye level it will catch the drivers attention and ensure the driver a safer route and drive. The car will also use cameras to ensure the driver is watchingf the road. The car will also watch the driver and make sure the driver is driving safely.\n\nIn conclusion, the driverless cars will change the world as we see it. The driverless cars allow the ability to drive itself and allow the person behind the wheel to drive as well. Also, the driverless cars will help with all the upcoming drivers and reckless drivers. The car even substain a sturdy drive with the usage of sensors to help the drivers to acknowledge upcoming blockages and construction sites. Just as I told you, the driverless cars will help the world we live in today and ensure you to be not just a better driver but also a happier one.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The features setting Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit Joe Kurmaskie show day goes cyclist becomes tired wornout long ride rough terrain trying find way back home saw buildings hill said With I believed last burst energy I maneuvered hill kurmakie After rider gets home says goingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Since the discovery of the Face on Mars, many people have separated in opinions about it. Some think it was a structure created by aliens, but others know it is a natural landform. The structure in fact, is a naturally occuring landform. The structure is a natural formation on Mars because in 1988, when Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team took a picture ten times sharper than the other Viking photos, the pictures revealed a natural landfom. In 2001, a photo was taken it could be seen exactly what the photo was of and the Face can be compared to other earthly landforms.\n\nOn April 5, 1998, Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time and Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture of the Face that was ten times clearer than any of the original Viking photos. This image was long-waited for by thousands of web surfers and when the image was first revealed on a JPL website, the photo showed a natural landform. No alien monument was in sight. The photo had to have clearly been of a rock of some sort on Mars.\n\nThe discovery that was made in 1998 did not satisfy everyone. However, on April 8, 2001, it was a cloudless day in Cydonia. It was the perfect time for the Mars Global Surveyor to take a second look at the Face on Mars. An extraordinary photo was captured when the spacecraft was rolled 25 degrees to center the Face in the field view of the camera. The camera took a photo in its absolute maximum resolution. The picture was so clear that it could discern things in a digital image that was 3 times bigger than its pixel size. In fact, the photo was so extraordinary, that if there objects in the picture such as airplanes, Egyptian-style pyramids, or even small shacks that may have supposedly belonged to aliens, they would've been seen. There were no such shacks in sight.\n\nTo further prove that aliens do not exist, the picture from 2001 shows that there were landforms on earth similar to the Face around the American West. One individial claims that Face reminds them of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. There is also \"a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\n\nAliens do not exist becuase of the evidence listed. In 1998, a photo was taken that assisted in showing that the Face on Mars naturally occured on the Mars land. Another picture taken in 2001 further proved the discovery in 1998. Also, the Face on Mars can be compared to several naturally occuring landforms on earth that proved that Face could not have been built by aliens. No life has been found outside of earth and most likely won't be anytime soon.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "One day fair I patient I wanted ride bumper cars So I got line There people front I knew I patient So I waited line turn They let people time took get turn Then turn I wanted go friends let people got front us Then minutes turn picked car fun That s time I patientSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "happened using books films simple entertainment Why cautious children pick shelf Society today changed way viewed sources entertainment Books viewed skepticism harmless movies magazines full material one reading watching Music used beautiful form art turn radio hear Mindless spewing words linked together curses garbage Should libraries use caution renting something someone nt using material harmless entertainment There young girl fourteen fifteen loved read listen music She bright shy used books friends Each day walked library new story dive One day came across book top shelf fiction section The book looked used spine badly split several pages nearly detached She reached book intrigued flipped pages Her innocent naive mind caught hold world nt know After reading book filled guilt It nt good book book laced harmful message This young girl pure simple knew things one age know So nt warning sort The difference writing something offensive offensive writer usually nt intend hurtful rude The author likely intended peice literature enjoyed clear playful attitude However comparison writing something offensive offensive far different When read something book magazine disturbs put throw away No one forcing read material Yet real question children How keep safe offensive literature And music Or movies Remember old black white films How matter plot storyline two leading roles somehow fall love end The ending title fills screen two actors share kiss screen goes black Mind still movies happy endings positive message films Some biggest blockbusters either violence form racism andor sexual content Personally going movies see new action movie looks thrilling entertaining fun fun stop After guy first scene brutally murdered Or two lovers share special bond kept private And happens movie released checked library young boy wants fun sleepover friends How keep sorts material away Libraries use major caution priting labels place books movies magazines etc Librarians make sure book child hands safe read age level Also check ratings movies make available certain age group Parents also use caution letting child go movies friends Make sure see something fun positive message Should libraries take certain material shelves I nt think However careful read watch might please Use internet source find reviews books magazines see well rated decide whether intriguing read amazing film Have fun carefulSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The landform is clearly not from ancient origin in the enhanced picture of the mesa. It is way too cold for life to exist on Mars or civilization to thrive. Mars has no food, no water, and the climate is harsh most of the time.\n\nThere is no oxygen on Mars and there is no way to survive without special equipment. If aliens did exist why would they settle for Mars and not Earth. It is most likely just a natural landform that coincidentally looks like a face. Images show that with enhanced graphics the landform looks nothing like a face.\n\nThere are different landforms on Earth that look like faces too. Even if there were ancient structures in Mars they probably were destroyed by the intense storms that happen every day on Mars. Its unlikely that there were aliens that the mesa is from ancient origin considering we don't have proof of aliens yet.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless Cars and Their Risks\n\nThe concept of driverless cars, does not appeal to me whatsoever. I do not agree with the manufactoring of these cars because I do not find the concept of a driverless car to be safe. Trusting technology with something as important as driving, is nothing short of dangerous. Think of it this way, do you know that feeling of when your computer freezes? Or when your television goes out? T.V.'s and computers are some of the basic essentials of technology. They have their bugs, and they do not run flawlessly 24/7. Driverless cars can be the same way too. They can freeze and have their bugs. Are you willing to risk you and your loved ones lives with a driverless car?\n\nI certainly wouldn't and by the end of this eassy, I hope you won't risk it either.\n\nDriverless cars have been fantasized for many years. Google employees such as Sergey Brin and Sebastian Thrun claim that this fantasy is close to becoming a reality. I, for one haven't really heard any news on the matter. Sure, the rumors were there, but I honestly haven't heard of any of these breakthroughs. I don't trust it. I, and many other people want to see true facts and real results. The fantasy of driverless cars clouds people's judgement and so with such little public attention and news coverage, I honestly can see why me and so many others are skeptical of this idea.\n\nStates like California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia, have outlawed these cars. They believe that having a human driver is the safest and smartest way to drive a car. And their right.\n\nTechnology is nothing short of unpredictable, as anything can happen. A phone can shut down, a computer can catch a virus, and a T.V. can blow out. Who knows what a driverless car can do? At least if a car breaks down, the human driver has some degree of control over the matter. To have that control taken away and replaced by a computer program is frightening. A car can be dangerous if in the wrong hands. I don't believe that the hands of a lifeless computer program are a good substitute for a human driver.\n\nAll in all, being replaced by a machine is not a step forward for greatness. I believe that this step is a step towards catastrophe. This can cause tons of deadly crashes, and heart-breaking losses. Even though lots of car accidents today are caused by human drivers, I believe that the amount of car accidents would only go up with the production of driverless cars. Driverless cars are gonna be a disaster. I urge you to agree, as my arguement now comes to a close.\n\nSo, I stand against driverless cars.\n\nDo you?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venes,\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger's it presents because this days most of people are studying on Venus. they are trying to figure it out what is going on. there is lots of things that is very similar to Earth. Venus surface very hot. Mercury is closer to the sun but still Venus surface is hotter. \"In Venus, the atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venes. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\"\n\nIn Venus is more risk than Earth. \"Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. The Scientist are trying to figure out that Human can live in Venus. In the past Venus was mostly like Earth and still there are some features are same as earth like Mountains, Oceans, Rocky sediments. Scientist are also trying to make people travel around Venus. There is lots of planets near around us but the Venus is the most similar to Earth.\n\nI think it is a good idea to study about Venus because the Scientist are saying that there are some chances that Human can live there and there is lots of things are similar like water and mountains. I've heard that Earth is going to explore soon so i think its a good idea to start studying about Venus so Human can Survive. I think if we try to figure it out we can live there. NASA are also studying on Venus to get more information.\n\nPeople also want to know that can people live in Venus or other planets. \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts butb should be expended to meet the very edges of imagination and innvotion.\" The scientist are trying hard to get more details.\n\nFirstly they are sending people to go to Venus and bring them back. How safe is it and how was the experience. They did many experiment like fly jet air plane and many others. they got some good and bad results to people survive and objects. \"Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vechiles hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and of their way. At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth Levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\"SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" does not support the claim that studying venus is a worthy persuit well.\n\nThroughout the article, the authour only gives possible examples of ways to get to venus, or why humans havent done so yet. For example, paragraph 3 is just the author stating why it isnt possible to go to Venus, and in the next paragraph, the only support the author has is, \"astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" the author gives no further details as to how that supports their claim, and instead moves on to talk about the features that might be on the suface of the planet.\n\nIn paragraph 5, the author gives the only plausible way to send humans to Venus, and then, counterintuitively, states every issue with the idea, deeming the previously stated idea of sending humans to mars implausible.\n\nIn conclusion, the author supports the idea of further studying Venus very poorly, and does not have any sort of good ideas to study further on the planet anyway.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Losing a privilege to drive a car is a risk. Some people use cars for there main transportation. In some places you will found countries and nations that dont limits you to drive a car anymore. Those places are Germany, Paris, and Bogota,Columbia. These cities limit the right of driving a car, but the citizens agree in many different ways.\n\nIn Vauban,Germany the citizens are happy that most people dont have cars. The citizens think its an great idea no cars are on the street. They have certain places that you can park if you own a car. There's only two places you can park and those two places are the large garages at the edge of the development, and you have to buy a space for $40,000, along with a new home. There is 70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move there. They think that cars wouldve been to much for them and that since the cars has been gone it has had a big impact in the German society thta has lower the transportation bills 80 percent down by the law.\n\nIn Paris, the cars have been moved off the street due to smog. The smog happened when the pollution started. There was almost 4,000 drivers fined for refusing to follow the orders. Paris has also created a new tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline. The diesel makes up 67 percent of vehicles in France, compared to a 53.3 percent average of diesel engines in the rest of Western Europe, according to Reuters. Paris averages more smog than any other European capitals.'' Last week Paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter per cubic meter compare with 114 in Brussels and 79.7 in London, Reuters found. The Paris people have come to a conclusion that its cars and diesel has effected its community and such more but its the main reasin why paris has the advantages of limiting car usage to the people.\n\nIn Bogota,columbia its a new program that sets to spread to other countries. After the program started Colombians have begin hiking, bike riding, and skating to reduce the traffic jams. Its the third straight year cars have been banned with just taking a bus and only taxis for a day. In the capital of 7 million people the goal is to try and promote an alternative transportation and reduce the smog pollution. The violators will have to face $25 fines.'' It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution, said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza as he rode a two-seat bicycle with his wife. For the first time ,two other colombian cities, Cali and Valledupar, have joined the event. The Municipal authorities from other countries came to Bogota and joined the event. A day without cars is part of an improvement campaign that began in Bogota in the mid 1990s. Parks and sports centers also have bloomed throughout the city.\n\nSince the even, Predsident Barack Obama has accepted the terms of the no car limits and he thinks its a good idea to the citizens.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood warm welcoming It starts beautiful culturally enriched apartment Then talks delicious foods great music But end leaves sadder tone parents leaving make better lifeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There is no denying that art plays a pivotal role in the shaping of creative mindset among children. Some people argue that pupils at school should focus on subjects such as biology and mathematics, while others believe that art subjects also should be included in educational curriculum. In this essay i will explore both views and provide opinion. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand it is clear that learning science subjects like biology, math is significantly important to succeed in adulthood. Furthermore, many people claim that children need to pay attention only on studying subjects which related with technology, science, engeneering or healthcare because they can help to improve professional worth in the job market in future. These people believe that students should not waste time and mental resources on acquiring skills which not lead to get high-paying jobs. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand it is necessary to remember that art teaches adolescents numerous useful skills and abilities namely creativity, problem-solving skill and stress resistance. These skills are crucial too in maturity which help to live fullfilling and happy life. For example according to the latest research found that people who studied at art classes in schools have also high earnings such as those who didnt. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, Undoubtedly subjects which can be useful in the fields like engeneering, medicine and science are crucial. However people should keep in mind the value of art. Art provides with crucial abilities which enhance and broaden mind of children and give them more opportunities to make this world wonderful.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think author ends story paragraph many reasons One reason It leaves knowing Saeng never give tring Another reason something simple flower encourage someone keep going even nothing go Saeng says flower something important working harder encourage keep best The author leaves sentence powerful brings Saeng courageSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood created author memoir happy mood memoir one parents sacraficid child chanced house life time good memoriesSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There is a growing belief among some individuals that teenagers should be obliged to participate in unpaid community work during their leisure time. While this may have some advantages for both teenagers and the community, I believe that it should not be mandatory.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the proponents of mandatory community work argue that it can provide several benefits for teenagers. Firstly, it can help them develop a sense of responsibility and belonging towards their community. Secondly, it can expose them to various social issues and challenges, which can enhance their awareness and understanding of the world around them. Finally, it can provide them with opportunities to acquire new skills and experiences that may be beneficial for their personal and professional growth.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, mandatory community work can also have several positive impacts on the community. For instance, it can address various local issues such as littering, environmental degradation, and poverty. Additionally, it can promote social cohesion and encourage people to work together towards common goals.\r\n\r\nHowever, I believe that teenagers should not be compelled to do community work, as this may have some negative consequences. Firstly, it may lead to resentment and resistance among teenagers, who may view it as a form of forced labor. Secondly, it may undermine the voluntary spirit of community work, which is based on the principle of free will and altruism. Finally, it may divert teenagers' attention and time away from their studies, hobbies, and other interests, which are equally important for their development.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while mandatory community work may have some potential benefits for teenagers and the community, I believe that it should not be imposed on teenagers. Instead, they should be encouraged and motivated to participate in community work voluntarily, based on their interests and aspirations.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I feel as if the making and implementaion of driverless cars will benefit our society greatly. I do not drive personnaly but as someone who ha been picked up,an dropped off endless amount of times i have seen my fair share of the roads. Upon these roads bad drivers and good drivers exist; and they are all humans controling the cars. As humans we are not perfect at all and we have our flaws. An example of one of many flaws is our inability to truly multitask. Texting and driving is something many of us believe we can do but it is the samething that kills numerous amounts of people a year: shown from multiple statistics.\n\nIn my opinion computers are more reliable unlike people. when they are bugged and have malfunctions yes its irratating and complex to fix them, but when there up and running there is no stoping the leaps and bounds they go through just to produce information efforetlesly. yes there will be those who belive that there is too much of risk of putting your lives in the hands of technology but on an everyday basis we do without realizing it. when you think about it everyday you wake due to the sound of your alarm, everyday you wake up to check your phone to stay updated with worldy and local topics, we also check our phones for time. what im trying to state is we wake up because of technology and we go to bed because of technology so why not get to your chosen destination by upgraded technology.\n\nOne of reason I feel so strongly about the idea of having driverless cars is due to the idea of them using half the fuel of todays taxis. this could be so helpful in two ways; one way is it could help everyone finacialy. with the price of fuel always fluxating from high to low, those that do use the driverless taxis would in theory pay less then what they would do now. Also another great reason for driverless cars is there would hopefully be a lesser carborn footprint then what we have been producing. Our abuse of releasing too much co2 has led unpredictable climate change which is having long lasting effects in parts of the united states let alone the globe.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Parents and teachers in many countries are feeling increasingly concerned about the effect of digital devices on vital skills of school-aged children. They are alarmed by the declining ability of young people to read and write and its suspected link to the influence of modern technology, and I wholeheartedly share their view. This essay will outline the reasons to watch out for the consequences of widespread use of computers and mobile phones by our youngsters.Primary school is a very important period when children develop their fine motor skills, which are involved in learning to write. Time spent typing on a mobile phone or a tablet doesn’t contribute to the necessary workout of the small muscles in the hands and fingers of young people. Not only do they get less practice in writing but also fewer opportunities to train in spelling words, since the ‘autocorrect’ and ‘autocomplete’ features use the first few letters to guess the entire word, therefore making it unnecessary for the child to remember and type it correctly. Another companion of unrestrained use of mobile devices is the jargon that is often used in text messages, where words are shortened or distorted. Exposure to ‘texting’ tends to replace the correct words with abbreviations in young minds, causing their spelling accuracy to decline.Reading is another casualty of unrestricted access to smart devices. Video content can be more appealing and immersive for kids and they often are automatically drawn to it instead of books. Reading requires regular practice and needs to become a habit in order to fully develop as a skill; however, it is being perceived as a boring and labourious activity by many youngsters compared to effortless video-watching. Easy and instant access to videos and movies pushes books further down the list of preferences of young audience, and it takes a significant commitment from parents and teachers to ensure that children continue to read books.To sum up, modern technology can be a friend or a foe for young children, depending on the choices adults in their lives make, regulating the amount of screen time and its purpose. Without due care the writing and reading abilities of kids can be harmed by other, more enjoyable activities they can use the devices for.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents by providing why humans should study Venus, providing facts and data about the planet, and providing the approach of safely visiting Venus.\n\nIn the article the author suggests that humans should study Venus for an amount of reasons. The first reason is becuase Venus is similar to our planet, \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system,\" this quote provides a clear reason of why it should be studied. The author also claimed that NASA said Venus has analogous structures to Earth such as valleys, mountains, and craters. In addition to studying Venus because of the Earth-like structure, Venus should be studied because of the close distance from Earth to Venus. Considering space missions can take an immense amount of time to travel, Venus is a close option for space travel which is a big factor in when contributing to exploration.\n\nSecondly, the author suggests studying Venus is worth the danger by providing facts and data about the planet. Venus is a planet that is harmful to humans and machinery which can have a negative outlook to most, but is encouraging to astronomers. The information first introduced to the reader about Venus is that it aquires a \"thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide\" the statment is helpful because it provides true evidence to scientists about the factors Venus has if they want to study there. The next piece of evidence given is this, \"temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit,\" yet again this statement provides useful evidence to astronomers. The evidence is used for astronomers to have a better understanding when traveling to an unknown planet that can potentially provide danger to those studying.\n\nLastly, the author provides a plan of how they would safely approach visiting Venus. The author wanted to include how they would safetly visit Venus considering the harmful conditions that are present. The first idea the auhtor provided was a plan proposed by NASA which is to send a ship orbiting Venus above ground to ensure the safety of the travelers. With the plan however they would have limited insight on ground conditions which is a main focus when studying the planet. However, they provided another plan which is to send computers that were used in the 1800s to Venus becuase they are \"mechanical computers\" which are not easily injured. Todays computers cannot be used on Venus because they are too fragile to be put through extreme conditions, therfore the proposal of mechanical computers may be the best option and another reason why Venus should be studied.\n\nAltogether, the author suggests that the study of Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents by giving information as to why humans should study Venus, providing adequete facts and data, and providing how humans would safely study the planet. With the given information the study of Venus would not be easy but would be worth the pursuit.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author suggets that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers if presnts because if something happens to earth if we study venus we will know some stuff to do. Like all the needs to stay alive keep breathing and is it even possible. Because if a war happens with the usa and the blow up america we will need somwhere to go. So in order for us to know all of these things we will have to study abot other planets to survive at.\n\nVenus also looks the sefest out of all the other planets. Its shaped like earth close to earth so its in the same atmosphere so it gets the same oxygen. the shape and size is pretty similar so there should be enough romm for people. its close to the sun so we dont know if its safe . it could be safe if the un rotates away from it so people can actually live their.\n\nSince venus is so close to the sun we will have to send someone their to se if it liveable. if we ever decided to move to venus we will have to bring so much stuff and it would take a while. so i dont think everybody will make it before us is destroyed.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "calim: venus explanation\n\nexplanation: they are talking about how close venus is too earth and the speeds beetween the sun and venus when they get close the human been have study a lot about venus and they still they its a good place to live and it can be helpfull bthey even diovered that venus is a vert challenging planet too go the weather are way too extreme for humans\n\nIntrduction: venus would be a good planet to go they even send a spacecraft too check s ince no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours the atmophere has a percent of 97% the conditions are3 far more extreme than aything even tho venus still have value of returning to seems indisputable and venus still haves some features that are analoguus innovations that wpould allow NASA is working on other aproches ro studying they wanna peer venus from a ship orbitiong or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limmisted insght on ground they just wanna diiscover more things or stuff about venus they wanna get more infomation\n\nin conlcusion they want to discover more about venusfor idea for selling humans to study venus venus allow scientiscs to float above the fray they wpould have a lot of benefits from a digffernt earth for humans\n\nthey just want to make a new earh where to go they wanna meet more challenges they have gained a lot woth venusSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Emotional expresions of students in a classroom are valuable because they show what they feel, as well as actons do. It would be awesome if this creations would be created because when a student is bored, their face will change they way of a lesson if needed.\n\nStudens emotions are valuable because they express how we feel, like if friend dies, our face will show that we are sad. If we do great on something, like winning a contest, our face will show that we are happy. Our teenage years are the most important because we have alot of different emotions, that change our lives.\n\nAnother reason that students emotions are valuable is becease we are growing up. Growing up is hard for parents, but it is hard for the kids too, they have to deal with the parents strict rules. Emotions are what makes you, me , and everyone else. Our emotions tell us who we are, what we like, how we feel.\n\nEmotions make character in every circumstance.\n\nThe text states \" For instance, you can tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on their face.\" We have 44 muscles that make us unique, but they all show the same emotion. We can try to hide our emtion, but there will always be one person who can tell what emotions you are really feeling, that person is you, your parents. When you make a certan face, only you know that feeling at the moment.\n\nIf you have real freinds they bring you up when your down, only because they see your emotions.\n\nIn conclusion student emotions are valuable because, emotions make character, they also change lives, they make you, you. and they leave an impact. they show what you feel. They also show if you disagree with something. Those 44 muscles in your face makes you unique, nothing can change that, thats the best part, God made no mistakes, he made you in his image. People try to hide their depression, when they do it gets worse, only because they didn't tell anybody. Your emotions as a student can either make or break you in life when you get older, its all in your face.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear newspaper In opinion I nt think censorship libraries materials books music movies magazines materials Censoring materials library could resolve many problems I nt agree censorship libraries materials many reasons In upcoming paragraphs I explain I diagree libraries censorship lot materials Many libraries world censoring materials I believe libraries alot censoring materials due fact children age eighteen constantly viewing lot explicent content Libraries nt censor materials opinion also nt let age children check kind material ment viewed adults Also computer access offered children adult superior visor near make sure explicent content viewed Censoring libraries could resolve many problems customers getting information need centain material children reading abilities standards also children learning enough getting information need school If things happen prior fact libraries censors materials many libraries get customers Yes people visit libraries wrong reasons people wrong reasons reason gain information Materials library could also found offensive people But s found offensive people could found useful people If something found offensive one person I nt think removed shelves If books materials removed shelves hide much useful information people could gain In conclusion I nt think censorship put materials libraries due fact many information could lost Censorship nt always mean material bad also mean material appropreite viewed read certain age group If library I visit censoring materials I would convince library staff take censoring Censoring always bad s always good either hide alot information us goodSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the aricle \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" the author describes how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding System enables computers to indentify human emotions. Details I found from in the article show that computers can read a persons emotions. It can also tell from a painting or a video. It tells us in the beginging of the paragraph 1 that in the Mona Lisa paiting it shows emotion. According to the new computer software that can read emotions they tested it on paiting. She shows 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 perecent ferful, and 2 percent angry.\n\nI believe this new technology is valuable for our use. It can give us bettter ways to explore and to communicate with computers. It tells us in the artilcle that computers can actually \"calculate\" emotions. It can recognize how a human feels and how humans express themselves. A psychologists, such as Dr. Paul Eckman a creator for FACS constructed a 3-D computer model of a face and all major muscles in the model must move like a human muscle. One or more muscles that move is called a \"action unit\". An example, your pfrontalis pars lateralis muscle (above your eyues) raise your eyuebros when your surprised or shocked .\n\nUsing video imagery, the new emotion-regonition software tracks these facial movements- in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa. Humans perform this same impressice \"calculation\" every day. For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her or his face. I think to read the emotional expressions of students in classroom is impressive. A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. It could also make computer animated faces more clear and expressive for video games video surgery. But also most humans communicate in nonverbal, including emotional communicaton.\n\nI think the use to read the emotional expressions of students is valuable. It can help them in the classroom if there confused or distracted. It could really help a lot more then just students in a classroom. I think it could be used around in daily life maybe at a hostpital or military. This is why i think the Facial Action Coding System and technology is valuable.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The features setting affect cyclist many ways For one lot settings discoured cyclist This place might thriving little spot one time say last world war morning fit traditional definition ghost town As soon cyclist hits town realizes old mens advice might great The dry desert affects cyclist This hot climate makes cyclist extremely thirst hot sweaty Wide rings dried sweat circled shirt growing realization I could drop heatstroke The cyclist s tune sarcastic still concerned health heat lack water The fact nothing living around cyclist also affects Since hes talked old men directions hasnt seen glimpse life buildings anything So definetly discourages cyclist makes lose continue journey In conclusion features setting affect cyclist many waysSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nOn behalf of my right of speech to speak, I think the government shouldn't keep the Electoral College. Because it's a process, without the process of picking out who will be the next president of the United States we would be able too choose a right president, we will choose the light for the people of the United States Of America.\n\nThe presidential election is held every four years, you help choose your states electors when you vote for your President, because you vote for your candidate you are actually voting for your candidates electors. During the election, most states have a \"winner-take-all\" system that deals with all the electors to the presidential candidates. After the presidential election, The governor prepares a \" Certificate of Ascertainment\" listing all of the candidates running for President in your state with name of their respective electors.\n\nThe Electoral College is a process dealing with our founding fathers, whoom which they established it in the constitution as a compomise between the elections of voting for the President in Congress or by popular vote. The Electoral College consist of 538 electors, the majority is 270. Under the 23rd Amendment of te Constitution, the District of Columbia has 3 electos and are treated lke state for a purpose of the Electoral College. In following discussion the word \"state\" also refers to the district of Columbia. Nothing is always good tho, there is always a bad side towards everything. Like in the Electoral College system, voters don't vote for the president but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect for the President. The single argument against the electoral college is what we might call The disaster factor. State legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, those electors may always defy the will of the people.\n\nThey officially say that the electoral collge is unfair because the best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without basis in reality. The arguments against the direct elections are spurious at best. The College is regarded as an anacrinism, a non-democratic metod of selecting a president and to be overruled by declaring the candidate who receives the most popular votes is the winner. The College restores some of the weight in the poligtical balance that large states lose by virtue of te mal-apportion of the senate decreed in the constitution. They restore some of the weight in te political balance that large states by population may lose by virtue.\n\nThe Electoral College avoids te problm of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the voting cast. It can be argued that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate wo nas no hope of carrying their state. Democrats in Texas, for example, or Republicans in California. Knowing their vote will have no effect, they'll have less incentuve to pay attention to he campaign then rather the President being coosen by a popularity of votes.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is Some argued that museums should be built to entertain people,while others believe that their purpose is to educate. As for meIn my opinion, I believe the role of gallery’ role should be educational.\r\n\r\nFirstly, the reason why most people many think it should be an enjoyable place museums are mainly for enjoyment is that they regard it as a photo-taking landmark opportunity. With the development of media fields various media and technology, encourages more vloggers individuals and infleuncersor ‘ups’ visit the imposing signature buildings which help them to produce outstanding photos., as they have the relatively popularity, yMany of these younger people are popular and not interested in the deeper youngsters will ignore the true meanings of the museum and follow their steps, .some of them require museums to build up some spectacular ornaments to have a superior site that good for selfie For example, in China there have been recent petitions online to build or renovate museums to enhance the quality of exhibits for taking selfies with famous works of art and historic artifacts .\r\n\r\nNonetheless, I agree the latter view that which the museums is are to for education educate people. It is respectful that people built up museums is for yearning the past most museums were build for exactly this reason. For example, in Peking, the Palace Museum is the a powerful landmarks of ChinaChinese history. It represents the history of the Ming and Qing dynasty and is regarded as the most educational foundation for people both Chinese and foreign tourists interested in the history of China.no matter is Chinese or the tourists in different colors to know more about the country and the story hidden back. Individuals who come away from such museums can apply their deeper understanding not only to their life but also feel their cultural identity is clearer. Paying the revere is the basic requirement for people their entering the museum as we are facing our ancestors’ story and learn to be grateful and understand why we need to cherish the memory of the dead soldiers.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, people many regard museums as a kind of real-life history book for youngsters and a place we need to protect well. Therefore, I agree believe the museum is to educate people to understand the past and to be grateful for itSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Imagine you're driving down the street. You woke up late, you forgot to make coffee or a bagel, and you had to run out of the door to work. You forgot to call your dad even though its his 78th birthday. You get in you car, take a deep breath, and you sit back and relax as you're driven to work. How is this possible? With a Driverless car. Driverless cars are the future. Driverless cars allow you to relax, work on other things, and it can provide safer transportation. Driverless cars are what we need to be focusing on developing for the future.\n\nYou've had a long day at work and you just don't have the energy to drive home. With the driverless car, you can just put in your adress and you'll be driven home like you're in a taxi. Driverless cars can provide more efficent means of transportation. Instead of taking a taxi to work and having to pay, you can just be driven there by your own car.\n\nYou have a test first period and you forgot to do that study guide that virtually gives you the answers to the test. The only problem is: You have to drive. With the driverless car you can study for that test or get that report done for work. It allows the driver, or should i say passenger, to work on other things, but also requires the person to pay attention. Although the car is smart, it's not smart enough to do everything you can!\n\nYou went out with some friends and you had some fun. Walking to your car is a bad idea and driving is an even worse one. You don't have any money left from a night out on the town, and you don't want to get in a crash with your car. Thats where driverless cars come in. You're a little tipsy, you don't trust your friend to drive you home so you put in your adress to the GPS and you're home safe and sound.\n\nDriverless cars are the future. These cars can reduce the amount of drunk driving accidents, reduce stress on people not having a great day, and it can allow you to relax and enjoy the ride home. A driverless car is the future. This brand new innovation is going to change the way people live.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author concludes story par paragraph She take test spring best She said II failed test Saeng said By failing test doesnt mean end everthing She confidence next time take testSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Imagine a world when all you see is people sitting in their cars and not paying attention to the road ahead of them. That seems very scary to me. I believe that driverless cars are not a good idea or the way to be going for the future. Driverless cars could lead to many fatal accidents and also many injuries.\n\nMy first argument is that technology always seems to fail. When you get a new iPhone, sometimes not everything is right in the phone or something is messed up from the start. If we had driverless cars in the future, technology would be the key function to make the car work. What if the technology failed like what seems to happen many times to iPhone users. I think having driverless cars is putting too much belief and risk into technology. You can never say when a problem would quickly approach or is about to happen, it just happens. If a problem just happened in a driverless car when the driver wasn't paying that much attention to the road, many accidents and fatalities would be on the rise.\n\nIn conclusion, I think the idea of driverless cars are very unique and out there, but as of right now and the technology we have, I could not put my full trust in a driverless car. Today, the technology and sensors needed for a full driverless car seem very unrealistic. Sensors created for the driverless car would be tested many times, but if it fails when it isn't being tested that can cause too much harm for everyone and everything in the world around us. I believe that we should stick with normal human driving for the safety of everyone.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I believe that driverless cars are not a good idea. There are many reasons why driverless cars are not a good idea. First, there would be a problem to how the cars operate. Would the car run on gas? Or does the car have to be charged by electricity? If the car is controled only by machine how would you control the machine. Do you have to press certain buttons? Or is the car voice activated? Secondly, how long does the machine operate good? Imagine one day you are riding in one of the driverless cars. If they move based on voice commands, lets say you give it a location to go to. During your ride the machine stops working out of the random. What are you supposed to do then? Thirdly, who takes \"the blame?\" Driverless cars are based only on technology. Now like every other technology on the face of the earth, it crashes and messes up. In the article it says \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?\" Who is there to take fault in that situation. Lets go back to your imagination. Imagine another day you are driving in one of the driverless cars. Again you would have to give it a location to take you. But during the ride this time the machine continues to work, but it turns left of a bridge. Now this may sound a little crazy but this could surely happen. The injury or death of a human in that situation, who takes the fault? Finaly, if the car is controled only on technology, how long does it last? Would you have to stop every three hours or so and charge it? Would local rest areas on the highway provide an outlet to charge my car? In conclusion, i think the driverless cars are not a good idea. First, does the car run on gas or does the car go based on my voice? Secondly, how long until the machine crashes? Thirdly, who takes the blame? If there happens to be a injury or a death, who takes the blame? Finaly, do i have to charge my car every three house?SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Over exact family want see fireworks local park It time brother visit friends excited hour get I patient I knew l nt mom would happy mood Are wether yet brother mouned CAPS got car I said brother always important I course nt say word way everything said something ride felt longerSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "LaughterI laugh everyday I feel lot different emotions I laughing Some emotions happiness sadness pain I use laughter let emotions seen I laugh I usually feel happy wards en less I crying I hurt When I sad I tend laugh smile lot hide pain I feeling I nt want people see sad time think I playing sad card get attention But laughing smiling actually make everything hurt worse instead making better When I sad tend rely laughter get threw day nt laughter would people asking wrong day would drive crazy When I angry way I laugh friends family member trying make happy I reminiscing fun times iv It makes happy I laugh brightens day I anger I also laugh things people say even tho hurt feelings said I nt want know hurt When I happy I smile laugh Laughter brightens life happy laughMy friends I sit laugh hours nothing My friends I pretty silly times laugh fun good mood makes pretty happy Some things life make laugh nephew family friends All things I talking come mind I think laughter I think every single person needs laughter life happySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In this modern world, there is a new tendency to have children in the family later. While some believe that this contention has more benefits than demerits, others have different beliefs. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages and which of both has more outweigh.\r\n\r\nHaving infants at older age depend on the couple's decision. Most of the time, individuals tend to have a successful career in their early stages of life, and then at ,later they can afford a financially stable life for their children. In order to give a quality life to their successors, it is important to have a stress-free family background. When couples become mature over time, it is rare to have family break-ups and inter-family conflicts. One of the latest research revealed, that, in the USA, Couples who work in the IT industry tend to have their children when they are around 35-40 years old. That report clearly shows that with all the considerable data those parents are the best to raise healthy and well-mannered offspring.\r\n\r\nAlthough the aforementioned positive aspects appear to have great strength, there are also significant negative factors to consider. Foremost, with time, both men and women have genetic degradation which can directly have an impact on a child's genetic defects such as Down's Syndrome and Autism. Although, these elders lack the strength to play with their youngsters, as they have more energy compared to their parents. As an example, if parents are in their 60s, it is difficult to work and understand infants who are in their 20s. The generation gap is the most dangerous factor that can destroy the bond of a family.\r\n\r\nIn sum, given the greater number of negative elements in comparison to the smaller number of positive aspects of having children at older ages, it is reasonable to conclude that, it is more beneficial to conceive offspring at an early stage of life.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I believe that we should study and explore Venus further. I agree with the author about this because I'm interested in ourter space and planets. I'm not just saying this because of my interest, but also because if it's so similar to Eath than let's study it more. They referr Venus as Earth's twin so let's see what makes it it's twin. The passage adds than the atmosphere is different in Venus and we would need to be preapred for that.\n\nGoing and exploring Venus is a risk but sometimes we just have to go in and take that risk. Life is all about taking risks and going for it. We never know what new studies we could find in Venus. Personally I would like to know how Venus has similar feature like Earth but has a totally different atmosphere. It also has earthquackes, volcanoes, and lighting strikes just liek Earth.\n\nI like the idea NASA had that we should send humans to study Venus. For this to happen we would need to have them float above the surface. We wouldn't know if it's safe for them to land on Venus's surface jus yet. The conditions would be the extreme temperature and more. But these conditions are survivable for humans.\n\nAfter reading this passage, we could go study Venus a bit more. They talked about the conditions it would have and, what would we need to do so it can happen. It's possible for this to happen so we might as well go. It's a challenge but not an impossible one. It would be cool to see if sciencist find more discoveries about VenusSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock mainly due structeral safty issues According paragraph A thousand foot dirigible moored top building held single cable tether would add stress building s frame This problem required sixty thousand dollares worth modifications buildings framework Although structural issues problem safety pidestrians created even bigger obstacle buildersMost dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen instead helium created huge fire hazzards When German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire Lakehurst New Jersey May owners Empire State Building realized much worse accident could taken place densely populated area downtown New York paragraph Even though exsisting law airships flying low urban areas prevented dirigibles mooring Empire State Building biggest obstacle nature The dirigibles shells could punctured winds constantly shifting due violent air currentsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "This article is mainly shown to inform readers just how useful exploring Venus can be. The author is quite enthusiastic about this topic and is eager to offer his/her insight on the subject. The author believes that getting a chance to explore Venus is a great benefit, because previous studies have led to scientists speculating that Venus was probably at one point in time just like Earth. Meaning that it probably was suitable for life or once had life, however it is unlike;y that it has any forms of life now.\n\nVenus has too harsh of conditions to be able to support anything. High atmoshperic pressure, High concentration of sulfuric acid in the air, Intense heat all of these factors go into reasoning as to why it is not a good idea to go there unprepared especially when NASA is still working on ways to do so, or maybe they have ( I don't know i haven,t been updated on a topic) anyway even though it is proven to be dangerous it is not impossible. Landing on Venus and gathering data would be an outstanding accomplishment.\n\nThe author clearly wants this to happen and is very interested to see what else the world can achieve. Showing great interest on the topic and overall writing this article in general.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The growing amounts of fast-moving consumer goods production poses harm to the ecosystem. This phenomenon is attributed to the abundant trash of plastic containers and the lack of recycling facilities. To address this issue, the government should force companies to take part in recycling their packaging rubbish. \n\nThe increasing production of consumer goods is related to the public’s demand for those products, thus there will be a pile-up of packaging waste. Most of these items use plastic and they are only used once, then they will directly go to the dustbin. This practice definitely will be harmful because not all countries have sufficient facilities to recycle the garbage. Most of them could not handle all of the trash because the machine capacity could not catch up with the rates of incoming items. The remaining trash unprocessed will end up in the landfill and take decades to decay. CNBC reported that a recycling factory in Singapore could only process a third of all garbage that comes in a day.\n\nTo tackle this predicament, the government should involve the businesses that manufacture those fast-moving consumer products to beef up the recycling program and initiate distributing products in a greener way without exacerbating the current situation. The factories should be responsible for recycling their used package, hence the responsibility of processing garbage not only falls on those public recycling facilities but also the manufacturer. Moreover, companies should implement the alternative of buying items in a more environmentally friendly approach. For instance, Unilever sells their refill detergent at the supermarket, by refilling the old container or people can bring their bottles.\n\nIn conclusion, the destruction of the environment caused by increasing goods consumption is mainly caused by the growing number of waste and insufficient recycling factories’ capacity. This problem can be addressed by the role of the authority to force the companies to be responsible in waste management and impose a more green approach in their distribution strategy.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think that the author forsure has this in the bag when he says that \"Venus is a worthy pursuit, despite the dangers it presents\". Venus is a planet thats pretty close to earth and we know some about that planet but we do not know alot about it. Scientists know that Venus is a large gas planet and that we dont know exactly whats up there when we say \" we dont know what that planets dangers presents to us. sometimes people aso referred to earths \"twin\".\n\nthe Author talsk about how we have made attempst to go to Venus but none have worked. he also has said that, \"its very dangerous to visit a planet that we know little about, but also dont know what things are up there\". he has conducted many reaserches on this planet to try and get some more clues or some more ideas what this planet has in store for us, but its extremly hard. he trys to explain that not only some but most things that we have never seen in our time is way to far out of our way, which could be very dangerous for many people.\n\nNASA has got some very good ideas that some may thing is crazy but it'll work just fine, or i hope it would? but anyways NASA wanst to send a blimp like vehicle to venus with 30 or so humans on it hovering above the landscape of Venus about 30 miles or so just to see what its like and try to get soem evidence and whats actaullly up thre on venus. but some people wouldnt do it some may say its to risky but others say its a risk they would wanna take.the Author is trying to state that he wanst more popel heading up there and that he would wanna see more people go there and he would wanna see more facts and etc from the planet.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "As a child, I dreamed of the future. There has been many movies that were different ideas of what the future of our world could be like. A common idea is the idea of futuristic cars. Cars are a very common way of traveling. They're convienient, and easy to operate. Unfortunately, driving cars does cause a lot of deaths and injuries because there are many accidents that occur. The new idea that is developing is driverless cars, meaning that people do not have to control the car at all times. Many states will not allow driverless cars to be tested, but I think that they could be very beneficial and can do more good than harm to us in the future. Driverless cars should continue to be developed because it will make traveling more convienient, it will save money, and reduce the amount of car accidents.\n\nDriverless cars will make traveling a lot easier and more convienient. When driving to a place that's far away, a lot of times a person has to stop somewhere overnight so they can rest. If they had a driverless car, they can sleep while the car gets them where they need to go. It will cut down the amount of time it takes to get places, which is very helpful. Also, when a person travels on an unfamiliar road it is very easy to make a wrong turn or just go a wrong way. Sometimes, turning around isn't an option for a while which can make it a very stressful and annoying thing. A driverless car would not make those mistakes. The GPS system in them will let them know exactly where to go.\n\nSaving money is something that a lot of people try to do, and driverless cars can help with that. When traveling, you have to stop and stay at a hotel. Hotels can be very expensive, but if someone is too tired to keep driving, they have to stop and stay at one. With a driverless car, a person does not have to stop and stay at a hotel. While you sleep, the car keeps driving. So instead of wasting a huge amount of money on hotel rooms, you can save it for more important things.\n\nSo many people die every year because of car accidents. A big reason why is because people do not pay attention to the road while driving, which is very dangerous. Driverless cars can reduce the amount of car accidents. The car drives itself, and if you do not have to be paying attention to the road all the time, a person could text and do other things while they are in the car. Since the car has sensors and all kinds of different functions, it can brake, accelerate, turn, etc by itself. If everyone's car did all of these things, then the amount of accidents will be reduced because cars will be paying attention to the road at all times. It wil not be distracted by a phone or another person; therefore, there should be far less accidents that occur.\n\nHow could someone possibly be opposed to driverless cars? They could benefit people in so many ways. Although the development of them would be a long and tedious process, it'd be completely worth it. Driverless cars could even save lives. Continuing the development of them could change our world in such a positive way. I think they shoud continue developing driverless cars because it will make traveling more convienient, save people money, and reduce the amount of car accidents.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There are tremendously controversial perspectives heating a debate over the fact that a negative impact on flora and fauna is caused by human activities. While some claim that there is no time to do anything, the opposite make a statement that we still have effective solution to address this problem. Although the former is valid to some extend, I consider myself an advocate of the latter.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nWithout a shadow of a doubt, there are some compelling reasons why it is too late to deal with serious consequences of human actions on plants and animals, especially poaching. In other words, because of an inexorable appetite for parts of body of certain animal species that have health value of human, many animals targeted are on the verge of extinction because of the rapidly increasing hunting rate. For instance, rhino’s horns are thought to bring tremendous benefit for certain severe disease such as cancer. Hence, the extinction of many species of animals caused by human illegal hunting is the reason why people think that there is no method to tackle this problem.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nWhile some dire influences that human have on animals are widely acknowledged, there will be a number of remedies to alleviate this issue. The government has started campaigns to encourage people to boycott animal products and this leads to a decrease in the demands for such products of people and the decline of hunting rate. For example, PETA organization was created to fight the immorality with animals, especially they condemn the act of using animals to make medicine and cosmetics. Thus, there is a wide range of resolution to handle the negative impact that humans have cause to animals.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although the serious consequences for animals caused by humans cannot be denied, there are some effective ways to cope with this problem.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "As we all know that the Electoral College was founded by our founding fathers for this great country. Changing the electoral college to popular vote is an amazing idea because well the people will have a more say so then just voting for an elector. In the three aricles I was given I happen to come a crooss to many reason why the elctoal college should be banned or removed.\n\nFirst of all, the Electoral College came to be because the founding fathers needed a compomise to set their differences aside to find out a way to elect the president and now that technology and human development has changed and every thing is changing why cant we change the way we elect our president. The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. To win the presidential election you have to get 270 electoral vote. The article \"T\n\nhe Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defense of the system are wrong\n\n\" it says that \" the electoral colege is unfair to voters. Because of the winner take-all sustem in each state, candidate don't spend time in states they know the have no chance of winning. this qoute means to say that the candidates dont take the time to go to place they dont think they're going to win over but thats the problem just because the other candidate has tht state one the people in the state could probably gradually go for the other candidate values or moral. \" Its official: The electoral college is unfair and outdated and irrational\". this quote means that we as American Citizen we need to improve our voting system ou with the old and in with the new.\n\nsecond of all, their are many reason why th electoral college should change o popular voting. Well one reason why that they should change it is because \"under the electoral system, voters vote not for he president but, for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president.\" this quote means that instead of voting for the president your actually voting for the people who are going to vote for them. When people go voting I would think that they would want to actually vote for Barack Obama but instead your actually not. That system needs to be banned if thats suppose to be a good way to vote well then it needs to be changed because if he U.S. is for the people and by the people well then the \"people\" should have a more wider range of who gets to be the president of the United States then just someone else voting for them.\n\nTo conclude the system for the electoral college should be changed and it needs to be changed. The elctoral college is a unfair and not the right way to do things and as a U.S. citizen changing it wiil make it easier for me to have a say so in who gets elected for the president o the United States.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "At end essay Winter Hibiscus Ho ends positive manner When come back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test again The reason I think author decided put show Saeng felt country So country spring take test country reminds original country spring Which makes feel like home least take test Thats author put sentence end essaySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The development of these cars is a good idea because the cars would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer more flexibility than a bus. Most of these cars can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves but are also designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills.\n\nGoogle cofounder Sergey Brin stated in the first paragraph \"The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis.\" This means this car would save lots and lots of fuels when it comes to spending money on fuel for this car. Who wouldn't like saving money on fuel, right?\n\nAlso, in paragraph 1 Sergey Brin stated \"... and offer more flexibity than a bus.\" Buses now a days don't offer as much service as we need them too. Buses only stop on streets but we need them to stop by each block. This is why i believe the development of these cars is a good idea.\n\nMost of these cars can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves but all cars re-designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills. For example on paragraph 2 it says \"Google cars aren't truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents.\" This means the google cars will still have to have human assistance when needed.\n\nThe development of these cars is a good idea because the cars would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer more flexibility than a bus. Most of these cars can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead required human skills.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The concept docking mast Empire State Building met failure variety reasons One major problems directly downtown area New York City densely populated After Hindenburg fire New Jersey owners realized much worse accident could taken place densely populated area The second major obstacle controlling dirigible often violent winds top tower It practice time control back dirigible lead weights civilian area neither practical safe Another important reason builders faced obstacles already existing law prohibited lowflying aircraft cities Despite two dirigibles approached mooring mast neither managed allow passengers disembark idea quietly dropped There many obstacles succeedSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Is the \"Face on Mars\" real or not real? Some may argue against this, but I feel that there isn't enough proof to conclude that the \"Face on Mars\" is real. There are many reasons behind this statement. The original picture was taken during the cloudy Martian winter and the photography business has improved so much since then that the new image are proof that there is no face. I feel that the \"Face on Mars\" in not actually an alien-made structure because The original picture, which is what started the theory of Mars having a \"face\", was taken during the very cloudy Martian winter, the photographs taken of the \"face\" have changed a lot over time, and the newest 2001 image has basically proven the \"Face on Mars\" not to be real.\n\nFirst off, the original picture of the \"Face on Mars\" was taken during the Martian winter which was very cloudy at the time. The photograph had obviously had to have been different than the actual so-called \"face\" because of this. If you were to try taking a picture when it is very foggy outside, would you be able to get a clear picture? No, you would barely be able to tell what the photograph was supposed to be of. Imagine taking that same photo from several hundred yards away. The picture would be even worse than before.\n\nSecondly, the photograpy business has changed a lot from 1976 to 2001. One of the most well known atributes of a camera is its pixel size. The more pixels you have in a certain area, the better the photograph. The original image from 1976 had pixels that were 43 meters per pixel for the photo. 25 years later, during 2001, the new photograph taken of the \"Face on Mars\" had pixels that were nearly 30 times smaller than the original. This image's pixels were 1.56 meters per pixel.\n\nFinally the most recent photo of the \"Face on Mars\" has basically proven the theory of the \"Face on Mars\" to be unreasonable. Afterall, the new image shows that valleys and craters in this structure. You can now tell that what was thought to be the eyes, nose, and mouth of the \"Face on Mars\" are just mere indentions on the structure. The \"Face\" really looks nothing like an actual human face. There just simply isn't enough proof in the new photograph to logically think that the \"Face\" is alien made.\n\nAs I said at the beginning of this explanation, there is still a lot that can be argued about. The fact that this structure os probably at least several thousand years old plays a huge factor in the theory. Mars's winds and stroms could have possibly worn away the details on the \"face\". Also, the valleys and craters could have come because of an earthquake or some other natural event. This is an argument that may last forever.\n\nAll in all, there is simply not enough proof to make the conclusion that the \"Face on Mars\" is alien-made. The time period has changed. The photography has changed. In fact, NASA wishes that there was enough proof to call this alien-made, but they think that there just isn't enough yet. This may truely be a mystery that will never be solved.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Facial Action Coding System is an undeniably amazing invention. A machine that can detect human emotions via even the slightest of facial movements could have very promising future results in fields such as criminal and political investigation, as well as settings such as that of a therapist. However, this is not a technology that needs to be within the schooling system. There would be little to no use for this technology within the classroom, the data could be unreliable or misleading, dangerous to some students, and it could very well remove the human element of communicaiton between students and even teachers.\n\nFirst, we can start with the extremely limited use for this technology within the regular classroom. One major issue seen from the start is that for this technology to be implemented school-wide, schools would need to be able to provide computers to all students and computers. While some schools may be able to afford that, others simply cannot. Then there is the issue of use past the novelty of it within class. The only real cases where this could be used as a learning tool are when students are looking into psycology or criminal investigation. In these cases, yes, it could be a valueable tool in helping students get a head start on reading facial features to find the truth. However these are ever-increasingly rare examples, with many students today not showing very much interest in these fields.\n\nSecondly, trying to use this to tell the emotions of every student could be unreliable or even minorly dangerous to students. The many different facial features of humans today can create an enormously wide range of expressions to mean different things. This opens up possiblity for the machine to mistake certain looks for emotions that aren't really there, creating a false report. Everybody knowing the emotions of others could also be a gateway to possibly increased bullying in schools. While it would be a nice belief that students want to help one another, especially when one is upset or sad, that simply isn't the world we live in today. Students still bully those below them and those that have things like times of major sadness or anger. If another student can always see this, it can create a target for the student who is upset or sad, furthering the unhealthy state via the other student bullying them and/or pushing towards more intense versions of these feelings.\n\nAdditionally, a student may not necessarily want others to know what they are feeling all of the time. Students have a wide array of different home situations in which different events may be happening to cause many different emotions. However many times a student doesn't like to disclose this information, and would rather deal with it on their own accord. While it is nice to offer help to others that are feeling ways other than mostly happy, some students become more upset or unstable when this is done. Some simply need to work through things on their own and with those close to them, not everyone around them.\n\nLastly, but most importantly, this could be removing the human element of in-person communication. It is part of being human to read other's emotions and help when you can. Having a machine tell you when someone is upset or angry or disgusted would just make this offering impersonal. If you offer help to someone only after having the program read their emotions, it creates less sympathy and more of an automated response, effectively making the human act as a program as well. True care towards another human should come from the heart, not the machine saying you should care. The article states that \"we humans perfom this same impressive 'calculation' every day.\", and goes on to say that you can most likely tell how a friend is feeling by looking at their face. As students, it is important to be able to learn to read features like this and their meanings when they are younger to have for the rest of their lives rather than relying on a machine to make the correct calculations for them. The article also states a quote from Dr. Huang: \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication. So computers need to understand that, too.\" In all fairness, I do believe Dr. Huang is right about this. It can be massively important in certain respects for the machine to be able to know how a person is feeling and whether they are telling the truth. However a person using this to find the emotions of another while in a classroom is simply unnecessary.\n\nIn all, the program is not a bad idea or invention, not in the slightest. It shows great promise and can be of use to those within fields where finding a lie is of great importance. In terms of schooling however, it has a higher chance of doing more harm than good. It would have little to no use in the classroom itself, it could give false information on how students are feeling, encourage bullying and isolation of certain students, and it could remove the learned human element of communication from this young age. It is a case of a fascinating technology, but an unneeded one for standard schooling.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Dear local newspaper Some people starting belive computers effecting people also side people would stay day get edictded want nuthing day First reason computers effecting people people would study day people get homw school wry go right computer They would stay night computer nthe next day Another reasons computer effecting people edictded freind plus think computer things final reason computer people siting computer So reasons stay edictded anythingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The development of driverless cars are becoming better each year and somepeople should like it.It is alot better because people won't get in a wreck as much as they did when they driver cars with the driver taking over.Like it says in paragraph 2 Toyota Prius are being made with motion sensors, cars are really developing well now but back in the late 1950s General motars created a concept car that had a special track.\n\nFirst and Foremost cars are a being built better with driverless because the people trying to make them are with Google and other companys.They make them better by \"Improving their brakes and acceleration, and also navigationg through works zones,\" as it says in paragraph 7.\n\nAlthrough it cost a lot of money to make these driverless cars they come in handy.Say if people tried to go a road trip they accidently fall asleep the car can take over.It is like having auto driver but they can only reach up to 25 mph its not slow and not very fast.\n\nThird of all it is a good thing by having a driverless car because people will know whos breaking into their cars because of the people that are making them are now installing camreas. These cars are really good for the so called\n\n\"Alert Driver\" they make sure they do not text and drive, and also to make it safer for pedestrians.\n\nIn conclusion the development of driverless cars are becoming better each year and some people should like it.They make it safer for everyone.The cars of the future are going to be better than cars have ever been.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In memoir actually two main moods The first mood prominant mood joy happyness Because throught memoir reader learns writers family greatfull writer family An example writer wrote I always greatful parents love sacrifice But joy mood memoir though memoir mostly positive things reader still remember memoir Meaning written Narciso Rodriguez passed away Therefor sadness also mood memoir In end joyfull mood sort covers depressing one really get sense writer coming reader consider moodsSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Sitting in a classroom for hours on end, face in a screen, listening to your teacher lecture can get very boring very fast. It is not uncommon for students to fall asleep, daydream, zone off, or simply play games on their computer becasue of shear boredom. With the Facial Action Coding System (FACS), however, it is possible to scan a students face and tell what emotions they are experienceing. But is this valuable in a classroom? I believe that the FACS could be an extremely useful tool to use in the classroom.\n\nThe FACS was developed by Dr. Paul Eckman. The whole point of the system is to scan a person's face to see what emotions they are feeling. The entire process begins when the computer creates a three-demensional model of the face and all 44 muscles in the model must move like a human would. The movement of one or more mussles is called an \"action unit.\" Specific mussles in the face result in expressions that express a certain emotion that a person could be feeling. Dr. Eckman has classified six different emotions - happiness, sadness, anger, suprise, fear, and disgust. All of these emotions are associated with specific mussle movements on your face. For example, the orbicularis oris (around the mouth) tightens your lips when you feel anger. FACS can detect facial movemnts in both a real human face or a painting such as the Mona Lisa.\n\nWhile this technology is remarkable, how valuable is it to use in the real world? Personaly, I believe that this technology could be utulized in a classroom enviroment. Teachers could easily tell what emotions their students are feeling. As Dr. Huang predicts, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" Often, when a teacher asks if students understand the topic or are interested in the topic, the students will say \"yes\" to move on to the next topic. With the FACS, however, the teacher could tell be the emotions the students are feeling if they need to change their teaching style, go over the topic again, or start to do something more interesting. This technology could change the atmosphere of school in a way so teachers could teach topics/teach in a way that interests students and keeps them engaged.\n\nIn conclusion, technology is becoming more and more advanced as time moves on. Technology such as the FACS is becoming more common in our moern world. FACS would be a perfect adition to schools as it is very beneficial to both students and teachers.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Unprecedented rise in technology has given birth to paramount artificial intelligence machines. Some group of people believe that these robots play a vital role in development of the society. Whereas, other thought of individuals has opposite thinking. I intend to discuss both the views with my opinion in subsequent paragraphs. \r\nOn one hand, the advocates of the former notion claim that the artificial intelligence machines assist in more production in minimal time. Indeed, they believe they cannot force Labour to do more as it is against the law. Infact, they think it is better to buy robots, which further save their capital and hence help them in gaining more profits in less time. To cite an example, it is oftenly found that human gets ill very quickly if they have given more work, owing to that they need break to cover up their health properly, factories are suffering a lot. Hence, robots can be very beneficial in this stage, as they can work without taking the break. Moving towards another key factor is safety. Many of the industrial and research places use robots for there heavy works, which can be very dangerous if performed by the human beings. To illustrate, if a person lost his life due to work can never be brought back, where if something happens to machine made robot than it will be very easy to rectify. \r\nOn the other hand, who support the latter notion are of the view that giving priority to robots can bring unemployment. It is generally seen that due to robots the quantity of work force is decreasing dramatically. For example, earlier there use to be one machine in plant and they need 10 persons to operate that, whereas now its totally opposite as now they have 10 machines and they need only one person to manage that. Consequently, people are getting replaced. Furthermore, they believe the artificial machines work on programming, which can be dangerous if it is programmed against the humans. \r\nAccording to me, I believe robots had helped us in many things, which had never been possible without them like satellite. Its very arduous for a human being to remain in the space but we had made that possible with the help of robots. Moreover, I think there may be some decrease in workforce due to robots but still robots are in place to help them in their life. \r\nTo recapitulate, although robots are like double edged sword, which can act dangerous for humans on some stage, yet it can be more beneficial if it properly managed properly.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "remembers child hood fondly memoir home New Jersey He creates setting many people relate general feel family heritage The tone memoir nostalgic recalls hard work parents people considers family food music Rodriguez recounts childhood many people would telling readers grateful parents warm welcoming home seemed Even time segregation US numerous people different cultures formed community Rodriguez s home This place Rodriguez describes welcoming exactly mood memoir welcoming The author recreates welcoming warm musical home reader visit enjoySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Imagine taking an online lesson, slowly becoming more and more bored, then suddenly without any warning, your entire lesson dynamic switches to become more fun. Such was the intent of Professor Thomas Huang from the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois. Prof. Huang created a computer program that can detect emotion in a human through a facial recognition simulator. Essentially, this program can \"read\" someone's emotion based on the small hints our faces give away when we react to something. However, this system could be problematic.\n\nFirstly, using computers to detect emotions could be problematic in the sense that computers can't necessarily understand human emotion. Although small triggers in our faces could give emotion away, these don't always inherently dictate our mood. For instance, in doing any assignment, one may come across as bored in their facial expression, which is normal. This doesn't necessarly mean that a student needs a new way of learning, it could be a combination of environmental factors that have nothing to do with an assignment itself. Therefore, switching the lesson plan may only confuse a student further or cause anger. Should a computer read an emotion wrong, the student would be the one that suffers, which is why technology is not always trustworthy on something that is human instinct.\n\nFurthermore, the value of a student's emotion in a classroom, although important, doesn't automatically mean the student should be tended to immediately. We, as humans, need to learn how to balance our emotions and handle them effectively in a workplace, which school prepares us for. However, if our school computer reads our emotions constantly, it could cause us to have a warped sense of the real world. As adults, we will not be \"babied\" everytime our feelings are hurt, and therefore we shouldn't be taught that we will be. Admittedly, there is a line where intervention may be appropriate in regards to one's emotion, however that's what we rely on friends and family for. If we trust our computer as our confidant, we may grow to lack human connection later in life.\n\nOne may argue that computers detecting emotion may be a good thing. This could detect early signs of depression or anxiety, and therefore we could take precautions against such things. A computer could be handy when a student is too scared to speak up about being bullied or speak up about something happening at home. Again, though, we can't rely on computers to do everything for us. Our communication skills are dying out at an alarming rate due to new technology; in result we don't use them as we should. Children and especially teenagers are quickly learning that devices can do anything for them; therefore adding another innate human quality to that could be harmful to one's sense of humanity.\n\nIn conclusion, although helpful in many fields and practices, this system is not valuable in school. This system admittedly has it's perks, however the flaws definitely outweigh them. It is necessary that we keep means of communication alive, and we give children real, human resources to discuss their feelings. If humans rely on electronics to deal with emotions, we may just turn into electronics ourselves.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "It is not a secret that we are all influenced by environmental pollution and housing problems nowadays. Therefore, there has been so much discussion revolving around the issue of whether government ought to concentrate on improving these issues to contribute to reducing the rate of human beings who are suffering from illness. The reasons why I partially agree will be provided in this essay.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, I opine that these complicated harmful problems will be only solved by administrations and they have potential effects on us. As our planet is becoming more toxic, a variety of unheard diseases have been identified in the modern society. Not only that, houses in urban areas are tuning into more sacrifice presences because a multitude of citizens want to move to these areas. If we have to escape from these phenomenons, the only thing we are able to rely is the authority. For instance, executives can increase the number of jobs in the countrysides to prevent housing crisis. In addition, they have power to control or limit the overwhelming use of chemical substances. That is why I cannot disagree with the statement.\r\n\r\nNevertheless, individuals should put effort and energy to keep themselves from diseases as well. These troubles are not only related to environments but also a considerable number of factors exist. Among them, personal lifestyles have the most major effect. For example, a person who has consumed loads of stimulatively sugary or salty food is more likely to have diabetes and heart disease than a human who has had meals healthily according to the study. Thus, I totally believe that every single person's trying is needed as well.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I admit that the administration's control has to be involved to advance the places where we live in as it is the only institute that is holding a key. Despite the fact, we will not be able to observe changes if we don't alter ourselves first because the way behave influences greatly.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The mood memoir pleasent talks nice childhood She talks selfless parents Also mood set parents help people get back feet Also talking people would eat dinner family She also tells family nt exactly blood relatives people cared like family Also way Narciso told pleasant toneSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Setting depends go move The town hills helped cyclist The hills didnt The cyclist got bad idea aditude saw towns upset mad didnt want die yet though He going two He said wouldnt trust old men anymore They didnt know talking How trust even first placeSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Imagine having a hard day at work and your extremely tired. It almost time to leave work, but your way to tired to drive home. Luckly for you have a driverless car to take you home, intstead of causing a accident by you being too tired to drive. Driverless cars are a new invention waiting to be explored. These cars will help the world. Driverless cars can help society thrive and help the world become a better environment for people to live in.\n\nDriverless cars are something that can help the world become better. It can take some relief off the driver and help them relax, but still be attentive. By having these cars can help decrease the amount of accidents that happen every year. It can help decrease pollution in the air. \"... use half fuel of today's taxis and offer far more\n\nflexibility than a bus\"(1). This shows that this car is healthier and more advantance in\n\nits own way. Although this car can drive itself it will still need\n\npeoples attention spand. \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themeselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents\"(7). This demonstrates that a person would still be in charge of the car, but when they do not want to they do not have to. The driverless cars will only get better from here and be able to function soon. \"Tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time\"(10). You only need to have 10 percent of control if needed.\n\nDriverless cars are efficiently better for everyone. They need less gas than a taxi and will notify you when there is something bad ahead. These cars can help people with driving and to help them understand everything that comes along with driving.They will be use tremendously and carefully by people . This can help us began the new era into the future.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In today's modern world, We could see that people are depleting natural resources like plants and animals in the name of modernization. Some people think that we have only less possibility of chances of restoring our planet and also, there are other contradictory thoughts as well among people. We will discuss both views in the following paragraphs.\r\n\r\nIndustrialization is one of the extensive reasons for exploiting trees and animals. Most of the industries are located in rural areas and also they spoil the water sources nearby by releasing toxic chemicals in them. As a result of this, It affects the animals while it drinks this contaminated water and in addition, The trees and plants are also affected by the chemical gases which are sent out of these industries. Factories are the major source of economic growth and the government will not consider restricting them. For instance, we see temperatures are very high nowadays when compared to older days. \r\n\r\nOn the flip side, There are several environmentalists in society who join with NGO's to reverse the unfair treatment of our natural resources and also they have been working towards educating safe alternate ways to release factory wastes. In this way, we can gain our water resources and any damage to our green coverage can be protected.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I would like to pen down my opinion that we have come a long way from the high chance of fixing our economy to fewer chances. ,However as we see a major transformation in the technology space, we can use find ways to identify the problems which are more concerning and also try fixing them first hand. This will slowly revive our planet earth and its resources.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The Facial Action Coding System is pretty spectacular in my opinion because I love technology it is the biggest thing that evr made history , now we have have technology to where it can idenify human emotion's now that is something huge .If a computer can recognize human emotion's then keep it around because with that type of technology we can tell when people are upset or rapidly angry or you can tell when someone is disgusted with something or somoene . As it states in the text \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored \" , understanding this information we can tell when students and workers aren't doing their assignments , so dicipline shouldn't be a problem when it comes to find out a someone isn't doing their work . This facial detector has got to be the most luxurious thing ever to be invented , technology is to advanced in this generation and that is a good thing .SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "There number things affected cyclists travel First old town wasnt real water could drink So water going thirsty Also its middle June California its hot size going wear pretty quickly Another thing affected cyclist steep hills go For example says Over one long crippling hill hes saying hills hard Those features affected cyclist storySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "They'res ton of advantages of limiting cars usage. For example, walking, hiking, biking, and for the younger crowd skate. Turns out if we were to do this we would'nt be alone! Communities all around the world try to alter driving cars. People in BOGOTA, Columbia. Even VAUBAN, Germany. In Germany people have given up on cars and street parking, driveways and home garages are not allowed, according to \"\n\nIn German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars\n\n\" By Elisabeth Rosenthal.\n\nIn BOGOTA, Columbia, cars are banned leaving only buses and taxis which are permitted for the Day Without Cars in the capital city of seven million. In There city, their goal is to slim down the usage of cars with even a twenty-five dollar fine if caught. They've been doing it for about three years, according to \"\n\nCar-Free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota\n\n\" By Andrew Selsky.\n\nIf people all around the world can do it, I'm sure ours can too.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Do ever fell like going expload Do ever want say something nt said make things worse Well s l felt story Little brothers sisters make mad l want expload The story starts brother got work complaining sick walking home hiself l going surprize walking home l passed high school l heard name called I looked around l heard name called voice keep called l stoped sister friend came behind stopped said I didnt want walk get urself keep walking savanah keep switching scooter got slower slower slower two people riding stoped pressed power reset button began go called said didnt see already said hes friend house mom coming get We turned around two minutes later scooter died keep holding power rest button nothing happened l ran home get bike sweet running face none stop legs numb soon l got house legs colapest l got put shorts grabed bike ran door savanah already party store questioned asked CAPS take long I told happened pushed savanah rode handle bars In l thinking long took get mad l came l thought l going espload scooter died put bike scooter away walked door droped The lesson learned dont something unless foresure happening I learned hard way I m never goingSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Nowadays, environmental crisis as a result of fuel combustion by cars and other vehicles are on the rise. This has given rise to the fervid question ' can an increase in price of gasoline for cars and other vehicle really mitigate this problem'?. Certain individuals opine that one way to ameliorate enviromental issue is to hike price of premium motor spirit. Personally, I totally cannot give credence to the advocates of that school of thought. \n\nUndoubtedly, enviromental problem caused by combustion of fuel by cars and other vehicles are much but I totally cannot agree that to mitigate it, price of gasoline should be hiked due to the following reasons. First and foremost, it will lead to an increase in goods and services. If fuel price are increased, it would result to hardship due to increase in goods and services of transportation cost. For example, in 2018, Nigeria gasoline price rose to 187 per litre and this caused an inflation on goods and services. In general, a rise in petrol price will increase prices of goods and services.\n\nConsequently, it will increase poverty due to inflation cause by fuel price hike. To elucidate, when there is an inflation on prices of goods and services, people cannot be able to afford their basic needs such as food and shelter. For instance, in Venezuela poverty rate has surged to 39% due to petrol pump price hike. Unless there is price reduction of premium motor spirit in Venezuela, her poverty rate will not reduce. On the whole, when gasoline for cars and other vehicles surges, poverty rate also increases.\n\nTo recapitulate, petrol and other fuels utilized by vehicles have caused enviromental menace however, an increase in price is not the way to mitigate this problem because it will lead to inflation in price of goods and services and poverty. I reiterate my stand that I totally donot believe in that school thought.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I am for the development of driverless cars. In the article, more good than harm comes from these cars. It can make driving safer and easier on the people. There are few problems, and the problems that exist can be fixed with the advancement of technology. In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author uses deatil to describe why smart cars, or cars that don't necessitate a driver, are a good thing.\n\nIf driver less cars become a thing then the earth becomes cleaner. In paragraph one the author states, \"The cars he forsees would use half the fuel of today's taxi system.\" Making smart cars the smarter option for more reasons than just transportation. Also in paragraph 8 the author tells the reader that BMW is trying to make driving fun. The author explains, \"Some manufacturers hope to do that by bringin in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads up displays.\" This means that driving wouldn't become boring, but actually more enjoyable than it already is. Driverless cars are just the way to go.\n\nIn pargraphs 9 and 10 the author discusses the traffic laws that may need to be put in place, if these cars become a popular thing. And yes, with the development of these cars there does come some problems and situations, but the advantages truly do outway the negatives. If driverless car do become a thing, and their technology truly is advanced, then multiple car related incidents would stop happening. Drunk driving would cease, because the cars either wouldn't let the driver drive, or the driver wouldn't have to and the car would do it for them. Also car crashes may slow down. If cars run by themsleves then when with other cars they'll become unifomr and not run into eachother. Driverless cars are safer and more reliable than normal cars.\n\nSmart/Driverless cars are safer and more reliable than regular cars. They provide less chance of human error like car accidents and drunkness. Plus they would be more entertaining than normal cars. n the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author uses deatil to describe why smart cars, or cars that don't necessitate a driver, are a good thing. That is why the development of smart cars is a good thing.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Many people are getting more interested in establishing about the history of structures they stay in because of things like insecurity, availability of resources. They can always find out from existing tenants or talking to friends. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, the public tend to find out whether there have been cases of crime in places they reside in. Some specific residential buildings within a certain neighbourhood might have been experiencing theft cases and muggings since the management has not employed guards, or there are no security features like CCTVs; therefore, it is paramount for them to get to know about such incidences. Eastlands, for example, in Nairobi is not a good place to live in as there are many cases of insecurity. In addition to the above, they also want to understand if the house receives adequate water supply throughout the week. Nairobi is a city, for instance, that faces water shortages, so in most cases, there is water rationing; however, some buildings get steady water supply. \r\n\r\nFriends living within a particular neighbourhood can provide information that someone might be looking for regarding a certain building. This is because they may gather it from either their workmates or neighbors. They know where there are issues like water problems or crime. Hence, it is crucial getting in touch with them. Another source of information is from existing tenants, and they will be truthful as compared to caretakers or property managers. In most cases, tenants have nothing to lose and some might be planning to move out, so they will definitely open up in case there are challenges they are facing. \r\n\r\nIn summary, people undertake research about the building they reside in as a result of various factors such as insecurity, resources availability. Friends and tenants are always good in giving such data.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Hey you should join UNRRA and be a sea cowboy. If you always wanted to be in the navy and travel around the world and you want to work on a farm well this is the job for you. Also for the ones who want to serve in the war and doesn't want to be shot at well then this would a good job for thoes people who are 18 and older can join us and see the world instead of just seeing part of it.\n\nThis is how I got started with UNRRA one of my friends came up to me during a regular work day and at the time I was working my shift at the bank and getting ready to go home when my best friend John came up to me and told me about what he was about to do and told me you can't get draffted in the war if I do this. When he said it in volved going around the world thats when I couldn't say no to him. Thats a one in a life time experince to me. So my next words were yes and then he told me the company name is UNRRA and told me I was going to be a sea cowboy herding cattle around the world for countries that just got done with war. I got my first letter a week after that and told me wich port and ship I was asinged to was the first exciting thang for me in a while so I went down to where the ship was. I was the first one to get on the ship thats when everybody else got on the ship the loaded the cattle on bored thats when we set sail for greece. I had to feed the animals and the experince wasn't the first time for that the first time for me was when I was a kid and worked for my aunt on her farm. Thats when I worked with animals for the first time. any ways I only got injured once and it was when it was night and stormy I was getting ready to report to captain how the animals were doing when I was climbing up the lader and I sliped I would've went over bored but then somthing sharp caugth me on the rail of the ship. So that is when I took my last ship ride around the world.\n\nIts truely something fun and its hard work to do but that is my experince with being a ship cowboy I geuss this wraps up every thing with the story.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "2000 was when the 21 centuery began. Since then we have came so far. From airplanes going at faster speed, more advanced phones, more relable machines. What is next? Our technlogy is slowly advanceing every day. With new products coming out each day. What if we could create driveless cars? It might seem like a wild dreams, but we're all a little mad here. Phones seem like a crazy idea when first created. What about driverless cars? Creating these car would help stopping car crashes, would have less popultion, and could save moeny in the future. Let's build these driverless cars for a better future.\n\nBuilding these cars can save drivers, passengers, and pedestrians. The car send vibration signlas to the driver throught the car when put in danger. A specail touch sensore also will make sure that the driver's has there hands on the wheel at all times. A system can also be add to the car that can trun off devices when the driver needs to take actions. The number of car crashes in still high. What if we could stop this? We might be able to with this car.\n\nBuilding these cars can cause less poplution. When these cars are made bus, trains, and taxis can be removed and replaced with these cars. The poplution that is cause can be reduced with these driverless cars. With these less cars will be on the road and less poplution will be made. With global wraming still high and the damage that has already been made with these cars it can stop it from rising.\n\nBuild these cars can also save the goverment money. Yes, money will have to be put into this project to create and test, but looking at the postive side of this. Less car will have to be made. Less mateirals will be need to buy from expores. Less gas will need to be bought. The moeny that is saved can be put in to help our economy and improving it.\n\nHaving a future will driverless cars? Doesn't that sound amazing? Cars the can save more lifes, cars that can save our planet, cars that can save moeny. Our future might be a little bit better if we had these cars. The 21 century promised new technolgies it time we created it. Driverless cars might be our first step to going into a more futurist era. We'll never know what the future has instored for us.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "You elgible check book says libranian You young book To censorship laws libraries needed The common people liberty check ever please The people make censorship laws pleased young people actually want read Books music movies magazines etc censorship Everyonee takes things differently said mature others If want play game read book allowed The person picks product know know handle material Therefore held accountable actions Isnt legal laws carried If sort content found offensive still shouldnt removed shelves Something seem offensive one person someone else find interesting For example newspaper talks specific athlete say things tha offends fans They people fans himher find ammusing remove post people dont like Someone like book music movie magazine dont inconvience people Interest vary teen like type books adult Censorship laws wont let teen read book likes hisher age unfair It new day age things changed Cencorship laws wiped completly If find book offensive way shape form dont read Nobody forcing read specific book libraries filled numerous amount books There book enjoy In conclusion certain material shouldnt removed shelves found offensive Some peoople like aterial There shouldnt censorship laws libraries That unfair unjust people Its new time age things different People age able check book pleaseSCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" The author talks about new technology in classrooms. The author talks about how computers can pick up the percentage of what ever you feel. They use this on Mona Lisa and get eighty three percent happy, nine percent digusted, six percent fearful, and two percent angry.\n\nDr Thomas Huang is one of the masterminds behind this computer that can read your expresion. The process of the computer reading your facial expression starts with a computer model of a face showing all forty four majour muscles in the face. Dr Huang and other profesionalls assosiate each expresion with a feeling. The machine can also pick up false smiles.\n\nThe goal of this computer is for teachers to be able to see when the kids are bored or not paying attention in class. The computer reading the expressions of the kids faces will then be able to modify the lesson in order to keep the kids attention. I think this would be a very affective tool becuase it will always keep the kids attention, and they wont be bored or confused during class.\n\nThe author talks about how making a certain face can actually make you feel that expression. The phrase put on a happy face actually works. Moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but it helps produce emotions.\n\nDr Huang talks about how humans understand each others facial expressions, so computers should too. I dont neccaserily agree with this but if i could use this computer in class I would probobly understand lessons a whole lot easier.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Many people believed that the Face on Mars was proof that aliens created this. But it's just a land formation and nothing else.\n\nIn the Viking photo, there was a landform that looked like a face. This picture was shown to the general public to see in 1976. At this time, the picture had an image span of 43 meters each pixel. This caused the photo to be more blurry and unconclusive for NASA to decide if it was a real alien monument. In 2001, the MGS was able to take photo of the face. This Picture had an image span of 1.56 meters, thus creating a much more clearer photo. And what they saw was just a landform. This pictures was so much clearer that IF there was alien life on this planet, we could see their homes and shacks or etc. But we didn't.\n\nSo that is why all these theories of aliens creating this face is just science fiction. But this face it just a landform that we can all see.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Today's cars are driven by people and the cars we use today run on gasoline that pollutes the air we breathe. We've thought of a way to improve today's driving skills and to use a little less gasoline to power the cars we use by creating driverless cars. Needing more information on this topic? I'll be glad to tell you!\n\nYou may not think much of it when the topic is cars. Teenagers thinking that it's a way to escape their families, elderly thinking it's a way to get shopping done, and children in a spaceship or on an adventure. But for car creators and designers it's much more than that. They spend their time improving cars, inspecting cars, and testing cars. Recently they've come up with an idea that may seem crazy but could actually help the earth and the streets.\n\nThis idea is known as the driverless car, the driverless car let's the driver relax but is still aware of what's happening. The driver actually gets a bit of a break until the driver is needed for assisstance that the car cannot do. The car is limited to a certain amount of things such as automatically driving. The driver st5ill needs to be aware because the car cannot slow and obviously the car needs to be stopped when there is construction work.\n\nThe driverless car has the default of still needing a drivers assisstance but the bright side is that it's a little bit more environmentally friendly. It uses only half of what today's cars use and can drive further than today's cars. I say when they do get this car to its absolute perfection I think maybe we should switch to using them that is if they do make the cut for a releasing.\n\nAlthough these cars seem like pretty great cars there are still some improving to be done. The driverless car is a working progress that may or may not be a good idea. I do like the sound of less gas to help the environment. Let's hope they make it through the testing process!SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Driverless Cars are a big jump in the world, because in the world alot of people do alot of things in their car than just driving. So with that being said I would like to see driverless cars in the future that would be a very great idea. There are several reasons why this would be a great invention, because you have to think about when kids wanna go out places and their parents do not feel like driving places they would not need them to if there were driverless cars the car could go by itself. Another reason could be people would not have to catch buses anymore they could just get in their driverless car .\n\nHaving driverless cars would save people alot of time to do things they want such as catching up on work or doing work while the car drives for you. Another reason is you would not have to worry about putting yourself in danger because of trying to complete a task while driving.\n\nIn conclusion I think driverless cars would be a great help to the world as we all know it.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "I think driverless cars would be a good thing to add to our future. So far it sounds very reliable. It can do many things such as it can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves. I really think this would be a good invention, especially for the teens who recently became a driver. It can help prevent more accident. And causes people to be more aware of their surroundings.\n\nThe driverless cars can do many things. It has special touch sensors that makes sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel. It vibrates when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object. It also notify when the driver need to take over. And the best part is that it has cameras watches the driver, while the driver watches the road.\n\nThere are few negatives that come with the driveless car. Such as that it needs help to navigate through work zones and accidents. Which is not that bad, because it alreadys alert you when you need to take over. So you have some time to get prepared. And if technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer? It depends on the situation. For example, If the car is alerting you to take over and you're not paying attention. Then that would be your fault. It also sensor for you to keep your hand on the wheel. Or the people in the car with you could've been distracting you. Another example is that you buy the car and some of the sensors are not working. Like the one that is suppose to tell you that there is something behind you. Or the heads-up display is not working. Then that would be the manufacturer fault. They gave you a non-proper working car. Which if you have waranty on the car, you can get a new one that works properly.There are many different situations where is could have been the driver's fault or the manufacturer fault.\n\nThere are many negative and positive things to say about the driverless. So far i think the positive out weigh the negative. I think once they are done with the test, it would be a great smart car. I believe it would lower the car accident rates. Here are just some of the reason i think the driverless car are a good inventions. I think we have a bright future ahead of us.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "venus is in a solar planet their is no life just a evening star they say its bright and you can look\n\nat it in the sky when you have the chance to see it. sometimes its right in the corner of outer space and the plane has no human life or vegtagion no trees no life nothing only brightnes and hot the red planet is very ordanary and very beutifull at the same time.not\n\nany human has steped inside venus. researchers say that the planet may not be possibli to be make human go theri since its very hot and coud just burn.\n\nthey say that venus use too look like earth with oceans and trees maby life too. i think the planet might looked like earth and because we see dried up water in the planet they think the planet might have cause something with the water and might gone under the planet maby. nasa is working on venus for more studiyng they want to know how the water dried up and what caused it to dry up. chemicals might have gone in the water and done something to the water and messed it up.\n\nmaby the preassure might have done something with it or other forces. we shoudl expand and visit other planets and go explore and see what they are like. i woul like to go to jupiter one day and visit it and just jump and play and just chek the planet out and see what thing might had happend to it i guess the planets in our solar sistem ares trange but the planest might be dangerous too but who knws maby the planet might hvae somehting new or maby life that just hides around and we dont know it\n\n.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "The author concludes story saying shows confent self pass test could take know pass test set mother talk made feel good confent retake test know could pass test I think author concludes saying end storySCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it represents because as we experience temperatures averaging to 800 degress fahrenheit and the atmoshperic pressure is greater than ours on earth makes it difficult to studying ot discover new things about our planets.\n\nSome conditions on Venus would liquefy metals . Long ago we would call it Earth-like because scientists think Venus was covered with large areas of water.\n\nAs NASA is working to find a solution to get to Venus without us melting or not being able to survive , they've made some simplified electronics made from silicon that have been tested on Venus's surface.\n\nScientists should strive to create something to help them explore Venus how they perfer to .\n\nThere is so much about our solar system or even our own plant even have yet to discover . Dispite of the challenges it might bring or take on we can expand ourself to be endeavors and come up with solutions to deal with the issues we might come across.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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"content": "Is the Face on Mars real, or is it just an illusion? What is your opinion on what you think the Face of Mars really is? Nobody is for certain what the Face of Mars really is. But, after this argument I think I can change your mind. So sit back and enjoy the ride!\n\nFirst, the Face of Mars is a landform that people have different opinions about. That is ok, but I want to convince you that it wasn't created by aliens. NASA has sent the spacecraft \"Viking\" out three times to go and get information about this landform. After they return from their trip, they come back with pictures and more information. NASA believes that the Face on Mars shows that there could have been some ancient civilization on that planet.\n\nSecond, the \"Viking\" has brought back three pictures and they keep getting better and better. Ther first picture was a little blurry, it was kind of hard to get a good read on it to tell what it actually is. Then, the next picure is even better, you can start to see more of the face NASA is describing. Next, is the last picture this picture has an amazing image, it isn't blurry and it has better quality to show what the face actually looks like. Also, this last picture helps us get an even better understanig on the \"face.\"\n\nThird, there are people out there that think it is a lanform created be aliens. That could be, but I don't think it is and neither does NASA. This landform is similar to ones here on Earth, some even in America. The pictures actually show the Matian equivalent of a butte or mesa. \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,\" says Garvin.\n\nFinally, the point of all of this is to try to convince someone this was not created by aliens. This promt states valid information to tell you what the professionals think from NASA. The pictures for me is enough to look at and determine if I think that it was created by aliens or not. It is just an opinion thing, this promt might make people change their way of thinking it might not. Whatever you want to believe in is fine, but just always have room in you to change your mind.SCORE THIS ESSAY 0 TO 6. 6 IS THE BEST, 0 IS THE WORST",
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