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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driveless cars seems alittle iffy when you first hear about them, its alot of what ifs what apply to this up coming new way of transportation and technogly. Driveless cars is somethin pretty foriegn to the poeple so it could be alot of people not complett on bored or trusting of these new smart cars. Alothiugh there are some what-ifs I am completlt on bored with these new driveless cars, already the car industry has improved drastically, with GPS, seat warmers, the car warning you to stop when getting to close to an object and the list goes on endlessly but having a complety driveless car would be amazing. These driveless cars could save money on the country, give people the comfort of relaxation while driving.\n\nDriveless cars could impact this countries probably in ways I dont even know yet but one that I'm forsure on is it definitly gives everyone even the elleged driver the comfort and relaxation that all the other passageers are getting. Soemtimes families and people take long trios to different states to vist or for any practical reason and the driver most likely is driving for hours straight on end without stopping, surly they get tired. So if these drivless cares really did become a reality then the comform and relaxtion would be for everyone in the car, it would make the driving experience\n\nand traveling experiece something to basicaly look forward too.\n\nRight now cars are uberly expensive all around for gas, the car itself and any extra things or work you might need doen to it so picture the car rate being cut in half because not so many people wanna buy cars beacuse tyou can just call up a drivless car and use that. Our country in my opinion would greatly advance and progress from these drivelwss cars. Also the oils we use for gas has alot to do with alot of the environmental issues so we use driveless cars get more popeple to stop buying there own and then we instanly cut the gas percentage in half.\n\nLastly driveless cars is a real big advance and huge thing that would be created by the United States, we start making them and the cars actually work and are managable then other countires would start becoming interested. By the time all these other countries become interested we would be making and selling to all types of other countries and maske billions off of that. Thats when our county could finally start to dig itself out of all these debts and the use some for other purposes. The money we would be getting to sell these luxury cars to other countires would be off the market we could even upgrade alot of our mayjor cities or just help the people in our country that are less fortionate.\n\nWith this being said my opinion on driveless cars is clear and I definitly support and encourage our ciunrty to give it as serious push and try torwards it for all we know this could be the future to bigger and better things. Although alot of people see the cons in driveless cars and let them overcome the good they juust need to seriously realize all the good that could actully come of it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The best solution to solve the world's environmental issues is to raise the price of fuel for motos and other private rovers. I strongly agree with this idea because people will select other transportation methods such as electric cars and public transportation.\r\n\r\nElectric cars have brought several positive advantages compared to ordinary fuel cars. It is undeniable that if governments are increasing fuel prices in their country then people will choose to buy electric cars instead of using patrol vehicles because they can save a large amount of money . In the US, for example , many people are choosing electric vehicles because they do not need to worry about maintenance fees and petrol costs.As a result , the government also can reduce fuel consumption within the country.\r\n\r\nSelecting public transportation can also be another option when authorities increase fuel rates.Undoubtedly, public transportation like trains and buses can carry a large number of people in cities .Consequently, that can reduce air pollution in residential areas. \r\n\r\nTo conclude , increasing fuel prices for private vehicles can enable to use of electric cars and public transportation. I also believe this way can solve our environmental issues like air pollution in residential areas.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are smart cars that are able to drive with little to no help from the driver. This means the car is able to use gas and brakes by its self, while also steering itself. The idea of driverless cars is great for countless reasons. They are helping with less crashes, they can still alert drivers for danger ahead, and can have a better response to dangers from skids or rollovers.\n\nDriverless cars are able to steer, use gas, and use brakes by themselves. That can help less crashes by stopping drivers who are incapable to drive from driving. This means drunk drivers, drivers who fall asleep, and drivers who aren't paying attention can't cause any accidents that would and can be prevented by not letting them control the car fully. Drivers in those situations don't have to worry about who will take them home or about any problems that might have occured if it were them driving.\n\nNot only can the cars drive by themselves, they can also alert drivers if it needs help. The car is filled with sensors; it makes sure the driver is always alert and has their hands on the wheel. The driver will be alerted by their chair vibrating, flashing lights, or different displays. This means the driver will be alerted if there's any danger. For example, if the car was backing up into something, it would alert the driver to check it out and take over just incase somebody were to get hurt.\n\nIf something were to happen during the drive, the car has antilock brakes. Antilock brakes allow the car to detect danger in the speed of the car. If there was a skid or rollovers, the car would be able to apply the brakes on the wheels and control the power of the engine itself. This is a much better response than a driver would have seeing as they don't have control of the engine itself.\n\nAlthough driverless cars can help reduce the risk of accidents, other people believe the technology isn't safe enough for roads. The technology can fail at any moment and a crash or accident can occur. The cars are still in progress, meaning there is still a chance for a new upgrade in the system itself. The manufactures can create a system that will stop the car automatically if there is any type of problem with the car or technology.\n\nDriverless cars are able to prevent accidents from happening by driving with no driver, alert the driver of any danger ahead, and even apply brakes and reduce the engine power if needed. This means the car is able to prevent drunk driving, texting and driving, and even accidents that involve the driver falling asleep at the wheel. That can cause the numbers of car accidents to reduce by a huge number. Even if technology were to fail, it's still a work in progress meaning there's still a chance the car will get better each time it's being made or tested.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am against the devopment of driverless cars because they are not completely driverless, driving would get boring, it is expensive and illegal.\n\nI am against the devopment of driverless cars because they are not completely driverless. For the most part, these cars are able to brake, steer, and accelerate, but they are not completely driverless. The car requires the owner to be alert for when the car slips up and needs guidence in situations such as navigating through work zones, driving around accidents, and also turning in and pulling out of driveways.\n\nI am against the development of driverless cars because driving would get boring. I personally would not want to wait my turn to drive while having to be alert for when I would need to take over. I do not think that would be very much fun to drive.\n\nI am against the development of driverless cars because driverless cars are expensive and illegal in most states. The radar device alone costs two hundred million dollars. Even though California, Nevada, Florida, and District of Columbia have led the country in allowing limited use of semi-autonomous cars, in most states this is illegal.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A number of persons believe that youngsters ought to do unsalaried jobs in their locality during their spare time, with the view that it would be of great use to them and the society. In my opinion, I believe that volunteering jobs is necessary.(pls add your ideas in your introduction)\r\n\r\nThere are several reasons why doing jobs without pay in the society is important. To start with, it makes them more knowledgeable in fields other then their regular school activities. This is to say that (remove this)such jobs exposes them to areas their school curriculum does not cover. For instance, participating in the planting of trees in the environment exposes young people more to the practical aspect of agriculture. Secondly, it gives then opportunity to meet and interact with new people from different walks of life. In other words, community services breeds exposure.✅✅\r\n\r\nFurthermore, free works in the society prepare teens for later life. This is because, they may have gained more experience and learnt more of interpersonal relationship, hence getting a job later in life and carrying out team work approach in their job will be easier for them. Lastly, it helps to keep them busy during their spare times, preventing them from engaging in harmful or delinquent behaviour in the society. In other words, crime rate is reduced within that region. For example, a child that volunteers in his locality during his free periods rarely have the luxury of time to identify with drug dealers or criminals in his community.✅✅\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, many persons opined that the young ones should make use of their less busy time in doing voluntary works in their vicinity, that it would not only be profitable to them but also to the society, and I strongly agree to this.(rephrase your conclusion)\r\n\r\nYou tried\r\n\r\nIt was an interesting one\r\n\r\nKudos \r\n\r\nHowever, try to include your ideas in your introduction and conclusion \r\n\r\nPls learn how to write conclusion \r\n\r\nChiazor", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People using computers good way talk distant relatives friends learn keyboarding skills research faraway places First wonder ful technology computers amazing They surf web milliseconds This benefits people research paper china many search engines let surf web blazing fast speed little time could information needed Scientists say computerusers fast internet reccommend firsttime buyers The computer I use unique computer customizable liking I like playing games editing videos I got outstanding graphics car outstanding speeds rendering videos This let play games edit videos gb hard drive capable storing programs projects future use Doing many things computer really help handeye coordination In fact computer say using computer type quicker could Thats good number average person woh types could write I I type big minutes typing Computers big part life I still time things family friends The last thing computers help us people chatting friends websites like facebook myspace They let share friends needed could chat far away friends relatives This helps nt talked cousin check talk things I causing graduated college teaching gets together webchat helpful nt seen years wanted see He also able send us pictures helped missed face So blazing fast speed chatting distant relatives These key factors show us fun computers still time family friends", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Advertising is gaining more popularity in the marketing of products and services. While advertisements are considered to be advantageous, They can have numerous negative influences.\r\n\r\nIt is questionable that advertisements bring many benefits to human life. By expanding the scale of advertisements in almost kinds of mass media, This sector is likely to generate a diversity of employment opportunities. In other words, it provides occupation for artists, copywriter in designing logos for advertisements. Another advantage is that advertisement may enable message involved in products to reach potential customers, which help businesses sell more products. In addition, thanks to advertisements, consumer can be kept informed about newly launched products. For examples, people living in remote areas can approach and know information about technological devices through commercial channels on TV,therefore they can have much more shopping choice, which leads to contributing to the enhancement of their standard and comforts of living.\r\n\r\nHowever, Advertising could cause several disadvantages for customers. Although a large number of products are advertised in public media, they do not ensure about the quality, As a result, customers can experience the feeling of confusion about items, making more have troubles selecting on their taste. in addition, Since organizations have to pay a huge money on advertisements, the cost of items would increase sharply. Consumer have to pay more money to buy these products. Finally, advertisements trigger people to purchase items that they don’t really need. Apple corporation is a typical example, by using marketing and advertising campaigns, they have a great influence on the spending habit, younger people are willing pay a large money to own the lasted version of smart phone although their old phone function well.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, based on above mentioned explanations, individuals may gain both considerable benefits and drawback through the growing prevalence of advertisement.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph Winter Hibiscus takes us back things happened story Saeng failed test In spring hibiscus budding Saeng realized many things thought strange almost familiar The calls snow geese almost familiar The snow melting tell spring Some things might happen result spring coming might past test Her mother proud Also Saeng start become customed new country new surrounding stopremenising life back Vietnam", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After reading this article, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" I believe that being able to detect and know how to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable and could be useful for many. Using technology to know whether an individual is upset, happy, mad, etc. could be used as an improvement on our daily lives. According to the article, they tested this new technology on the famous Leonardo Da Vinci's Mona Lisa painting and defined that \"she was 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\" The outcomes from this new technology system could actually be legit and can tell us what people feel. This new sofware can also help the people that are to afriad to express their feelings or don't know how to .\n\nSense there are some individuals who hid their feelings and aren't that easy to read their emotions by just looking at their facial expressions, by using this system you could read and even track their face movments and even their mixed emotions also. For instance, as stated in the passage \"Even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression\".\"Using imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa.\" This new software can help those who have a \"neutral face\" and show no emotion.\n\nFacial expressions aren't always going to reveal how an individual is actually feeling or what emotions he is going through inside. For example, in the article it indicates that the Mona Lisa is \"9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry\", even though in the painting she looks 100 percent happy. This software will read off your emotions no matter what face expression you are making. Many of us can use this software to figure out what others are feeling when they are to scared to tell others how they feel. For instance, if someone is feeling really upset and has a neutral face and you can't tell that they are upset, you can't help them unless you know how they are feeling.\n\nIn conculsion, I believe that This new software \"Facial Action Coding\" that helps reveal human emotions by using technology cn be valuable and useful for certain people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students is valuable. It is valuable because in this passage \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" in paragraph six it gives the example of computers more specefically classroom computers and what could be possible for education some years down the road to improve students learning. In paragraph six we get evidence from \"Dr. Huang\" telling us how this could possibly be like a good human instructor like a teacher. The evidence proving this comes from \"Dr. Huang\" himself he says \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" basically \"Dr. Huang\" is saying of course down the road in the future a classroom computer can recognize students emotion and make constant changes to the students lesson on the computer to make a effective lesson like an actual human teacher. Thus proving that this technology to read a students expressions in a classroom is valuable.\n\nAnother example proving that the use of this technology to read a students expressions in the classroom is valuable because in education there is alot of classes and alot of technology classes you can chose from one of the many technology based classes is Web Design. Again in paragraph six we could see a huge increase in technology more specfically animated faces. For instance in paragraph six we get evidence of how the same technology can make computer animated faces alot more expressive. Here is evidence \"The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive-\" again proving how this technology to read the emotions of students in class is actually valuable.\n\nAnother piece of evidence proving this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because in fact there are colleges out there that do offer video game based classes this could be another advantage. It is an advantage because video games are technology and since colleges are offering classes based on videogames this could really increase the learning atmosphere for each and everyone of those students who take that course. A piece of evidence would also again be found in paragraph six where it states \"The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive- for videogames\". This is proving that this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom or a videogame course in this case is valuable.\n\nAnother piece of evidence is how we first found this technology back in paragraph one the very end of it we get some background information on how this technology was found. We get the evidence that this sofware is the latest discovery from \"Prof. Thomas Huang\"\n\nof \"Beckman Institute for Advanced Science\" at the \"University of Amsterdam\". Just knowing that Professor Thomas Huang may not be a student but is teaching this software to his students in classroom is for sure valuable. We even get this really nice piece of evidence\n\n\"Dr. Huang and his colleague are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate\". This is saying Huang and his colleague are making this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in classrooms is valuable.\n\nIn conclusion the use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is super valuable from videogames, professors to classroom computers and even just improving being able to read facial expressions is important because after all most of the human communication is nonverbal meaning not talking it is just simply \"emotional communication\". Also it says in the very begining that this new revolutionary software has promising applications for a good ammount of industries. Proving that the use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable thus improving the already flourshing education of all the students who take grasp of this. Leading on to a brighter and better future for everyone in the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A new era has finally begun; the era of driverless cars. For many years televison and movies have fasinated with cars that could drive themselves. Driverless cars have just been in television and movies because they have simpily become impractical. Engineers are continuing to run into roadblocks with this termendous new idea, which makes driverless cars more and more dificult to create. There are many different types of technology that must come together to create this masterpiece, but with this technology many problems still arive. In conclusion, I still believe that these new cars are the future of vehicle transportation, because of the desire for driverless cars and evolving technology.\n\nNowadays, people are becoming more lazy. Many years ago, people had to walk where they wanted to go, but this day of age has brought about many different and new types of transportation. This has brought us to the driverless car. Many people would love to simpily get in there cars, type in there destination, and then wait until there car arives where they desire. This would also create less accidents since the new technology has prove to be quicker than a human response. In todays society, gas prices are rising quickly, but driverless cars could possible use less than half of today's taxi system.\n\nTechnology has come a long, long way since the making of the first motorized vehicle. All kinds of new parts and designs have been created and it shows how far we have come. Today, there are new senors and GPS stuff that make the creation of a driverless car less impractical. Although engineers have been coming to roadblocks, new technology will eventually work its way around it. Technology has almost caught up to this amazing new invention and when it does, a new era will begin.\n\nFor so long we have dreamed about this new invention. Eventually nobody will be driving at all. Maybe our children will not know the defination of a driver because they will never have to drive. The driverless car has truly marked the new era.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This time I patient going doctor It two days I doctor My mom told I needed three shots I never liked shots hurt make fill sleepy I usally never patients time I I one day I doctor I experience people patient its easy Today doctors appointment I scared When I walked clinic I always fill sick tired My mom go sign name I fill sicker I worry many shots I get My doctor call I terrified mom always told dont hurt dont look So I went back doctor office doctor told get scale I really gave hearing test eye test I asked I get shots said yet I might When I got finish hearing test I finish I scared nothing When I got home I learn two lessons one worry anything I learn patients This I patient going doctor", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "On the I-STEP+ I was given the passage of \"Driverless Cars Are Coming.\" While reading this passage the author gave me great positive and negative aspects on the topic of driverless car. Driverless cars are can decrease the rate in accidents, it keeps the driver alert, and assist the driver on parking and other difficult task.\n\nDriverless cars can desrease the rate of accidents on the road. say for instance an abult\n\nis on the phone and wants to text his or her friend he or she can do so\n\nbecause the car is driving its self. Driverless cars will keep people out of harms way by driving its self. The amazing driverlsess car may need a human to help steer it when t is in danger but the car will be able to notify the driver when there is a problem or when there is an accident up ahead.\n\nAnother reason why I think that people finish the process of the driverless car because it keeps the driver aware and alert to the\n\nroad. The car knows how to accelerate, steer, and break. the driver only have to steer the car when there are goinhg through a work zones and arround aaccidents.Other than that the driverless car is ready for the road ahead. If there is an accident then the driver will be notified to take controll of the car. Other companies other than google has come up with some rather interesting ways to alarm the driver. Some seat vibrate others are just simply announced.\n\nThe last reaso why the creators of the driverless car should continue the prossess is because it help poeople with diffficult task. A person may not be the best parelle park. The driverless car is there to help. Some people may no be the best of driver but the driverless car will hepl them be able to ride on the road.\n\nI personally think that the driverless car make a positive impact on out community. it will even make a big impact on out world. Driverless cars an decrease the acciddent rate, assist drivers, and help the driver with difficult task", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "On May 24, 2001 something strange happened on Mars. NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft circled the planet, looking for possible landing sites for Viking 2, when it captured a human face lurking on the ground of Mars. An enormous head seemed to stare back at the cameras from Cydonia. The NASA scientists soon found out it was not an alien marking. The Face is just a natural landform called a Martian mesa.\n\nTo begin, The Face natural landform is not the only Martian mesa in Cydonia. This region of Mars is actually quite common for having these weird Martian mesas. This mesa was different from the others with \"unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh(2).\" This information led to the research of an ancient civilization on Mars. The research found that there was not an ancient civilization, although many people wish their would have been.\n\nSince many people wanted to find an ancient civilization, conspiracy theorists hoped to prove NASA wrong. The theorists began to throw false accusations at NASA including, \"Some people think the Face is a bona fide evidence of life on Mars-evidence that NASA would rather hide, say conspiracy theorists(5).\" NASA defenders stated that they wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars and that they would not lie. NASA flew over Cydonia once again and snapped a picture ten times sharper than the originial Viking photos. The picture proved that it was just a natural landform. This didn't stop the conspiracy theorists from pushing forward.\n\nTo conclude, the theorists believed that since there was a haze on Mars when they took the photo, that the haze could potentially hide ancient Martian markings. This kept NASA pushing harder into their research. \"Neverless, on April 8, 2001- a cloudless summer day in Cydonia- Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look(10).\" NASA rolled the spacecraft to center the Face in the field of view. They took a picture with extraordinary resolution. If anyone could see anything they could see it. NASA concluded that the Face was equivalent to a butte or mesa- landforms commonly found in the American West.\n\nThe Face is just a natural landform called a Martian mesa. The trips NASA took around Mars prove that the Face is a natural landform commonly found in Cydonia. The Face is a giant rock plated with shadows for eyes, nose, and a mouth. Consiracy theorists still may believe that their was an ancient cicilization, but NASA indeed showed them wrong. The Face will always remain a great landform discovery on Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that we sould study Venus despit the dangers it present. Because in the artical The Challenge Of Exploring Venus the author said the Venus is often referred to as Earths twin. Also that Venus is the closes plant to Erath interms of densit and size and ocasionally the closest in distace too.\n\nBut it could be very dangerous because A think atmospher of alomost 97percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acidin Venis's atmospere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degees Faherhit and the atmospheric\n\npressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own plant. These conditons are far more exterme thn anything humans encouter on Earth. Such environment wound crush even a submarine accustomed to diing to the deepest prts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. Venous alsohas the hotest surface teperture of any plant in our solar system,even though Nercury is closer to our sun.\n\nLong ago Venus may well once have been the most Earth like plant in oursolar system.Venus was probably cvered largelywith oceans and could have supported variors forms of life, just like Earth. The plant has\n\na surface\n\nof rocky sediment and includes\n\nfailar featires such as valleys, mountains,and craters.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In rough road ahead Do exceed posted speed limit features setting affect cyclist Many visual features create deserted area thats hott head For example paragraph five use alot adjectives describe abandon place Words like ramshackle rusty Also often lack water brung made us think hott California desert must Also heat made cyclist belive seeing miracle saw Welchs fruit juice factory The choice visual words story words describe affected cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I nt think take book donated us first placeAlso I dont think take helps us learn people went lifetimeLook try live life would another persons shoesTry see come life styleIm big reader anything wants I get one book catches eye sounds good read I look good I would take read long time I want know happens next bookSo I keep reading reading like middle story teacher makes stop readingI would read long takes right book meI like kinds books sports sad emotional booksI like reading loud helps understand little bit better", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever heard of the face on Mars? Well if you have do you think its was made by alien life or it is just a natural landform. I think it is a natural landform because there has been no signs of life on Mars. Also we have spacecrafts taking pictures on Mars so if there we would know about it. This is why I think it is a natural landform.\n\nSo if you think that this \" Face\" was created by alien life then you are wrong because I can tell you that there are no life on Mars what so ever. We know this because we have spacecrafts flying around Mars taking pictures every second of everyday of every year. This is why it is just a natural landform.\n\nIt looks like a normal rock on Earth just with a face that was created by the way it was formed. This is one reason that it is a natural landform.\n\nAnother reason that is a natural landform is because my good buddy Garvin says that \" What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa landforms common around the American West. It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\" Which is a lava dome that takes the shape of an isolated mesa around the same height as the face on Mars. Im am telling this because land masses can form anywhere and look like anything. That is another reason it is a landform.\n\nMy last reason it is just a landform that you can find anywhere is that the first photo was taken in 1976, back then we didnt have the technology we have now. In 1976 we had a camera that had the range of 43 meters per pixel, which is not good. Now in 2001 we had a camera that had 1.56 meters per pixel which is the best at the moment. The picture in 1976 does look like a face but in the picture in 2001 it looks like a normal rock with a lot of cracks in it. That is my last reason of how it is a natural landform.\n\nThose were my reasons to try and convince you that the rock on Mars is just a natural landform. My reasons were that there has been no signs of life on Mars. My second reason was that it looks like every other rock i have seen on this Earth. And my last reason is that we have a lot better technology then we did back in 1976. You can believe what you want to believe but it is just a normal rock like anything else.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Driverless cars seem to be unsafe and dangerous. I think that due to the reasons they have provided in the article the driverless car will cause many promblems in the near future. My opinion is that I am not at all for the driverless cars. I am not\n\nfor the driverless cars for many reasons.\n\nThe first reason is because the driverless car is not actually driverless. The driverless car still needs someone to operate the car in certain situations. In the article it said, \"Google cars aren't truely driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues such as navigating through roadwork or accidents.\" This is the first reason I would not oppose for driverless cars.\n\nThe second reason I would not oppose the driverless car is because of the chance of a traffic law changing. In the article it said, \"Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liabillity in the case of an accident.\" This meaning that if a traffic law changes it could result in injury,death, or more money. This is another reason I would not choose the driverless car.\n\nThe Last reason why I am not for the driverless car is because it's too expensive. In the article it mentioned, \"These smart-road systems worked surprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was simply too expensive to be practical. Therefore, not only are they too expensive but they would need massive upgrades. The car would result in a lot of money. Therefore this is why I would not choose the driverless car.\n\nI do not see the driverless car being a saffe and interesting idea. The car is too expensive, needs an operater still, and could result in injury if a traffic law changes. I am not for the driverless car for many reasons.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some might thing cars are essential to life, but other might think they don't need them at all. Limiting car use is a good thing because it limits the amount of fog, it reduces traffic jams and crashes, and people seem to be more family oriented. i believe that limiting car usage is a very helpful thing and a great idea.\n\nWe all know how badly cars gases are are and that without those harmful gasses there wouldn't be much fog. now imagine if this happened here in America. In Paris they band driving due to the near record pollution. They did this so they could have a day where the air would clear out and there wouldn't be that much fog. Some might think this is an excellent idea, but some might say its a very lousiness idea. Limiting car usage actually helps because your limiting how much of those harmful gases you put in the air. They tried this for a certain amount of time in Paris and that do you know! The smog cleared up enough for the ruling French party to rescind the ban for driving your cars. Now this is just one of the many great things limiting car usage has on our planet.\n\nSomething else similar to what they did in Paris happened in Colombia. They limited the car usage for one day to free up some of the congestion that they had in the capital (Bogota). This is also a great idea because people don't have to worry about crash crashing, people getting ran over, or kids getting hit by cars. People don't have to worry about a lot of harsh things, so they live a somewhat stress less life. In Bogota they are also making new parks for people because without cars you don't need to drive to parks you can just walk. People when they walk tend to have conversations with the people around them so they tend to have a more social and all in all better lifestyle. This could also help in places like New York or other very congested cities. Without all those cars filling up the roads with all there horrible gases, New York would have a very clean breathable air. Another thing is that they wouldn't have many traffic jams and/or many people getting in car crashes.\n\nOne of the most important reasons why limiting car usage is an advantage is because people are more family oriented. Studies have shown that when people don't have cars they fell like they don't have and debts and fell somewhat free. This will make a person more loving and more interested in family time. Also people tend to walk more and carpool, so this causes them to car pool or walk in groups and they do all of that with their own family. In Germany the citizens say life without a car is great. One citizen said how his life was so tense when he had a car and now without a car he is mush happier. Also America the percentage of drives have gone down by a lot. This is because people are unemployed, they don't have money to buy a car, or they simply don't want to be tense and have a car.\n\nLimiting car usage is a great ting and i believe people should at least try to make it happen. It helps reunite family's, clear the amount of fog, and it reduces car jams and accidents. Some people might think its not a very good idea but some might think it is. So people should at least try to see what happens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper The question everyone asking computers benfit society I believe computers dont cant get exercise youre always computers really hard enjoy nature Another reason comuters nt benefit society nt interacting friends family hopfully I encouraged use computers much go fun family If always computer going get exercise proven half united states weight Exercising important using computer knowing could something use know better would nt Interacting poeple important meet new people might learn shy make much friends like true taht oyu make new friends computer meeting person Also make friends internet nt know stalker murderer I urge go meet new people internet knowing better using computer poeple like would nt Yes play games computer would ebtter play fmaily To answer question everyone asking I believe computers nt benefit society hopfully I encouraged believe", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "NASA has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus, because they want to find a solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus. What is their solution? Their solution is trying to imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape, they are wanting to prove that if their jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude that can fly over many storms then a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way.\n\nThey want to find the safest way possible so they can send people up to Venus since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. They have to find the right vehicle to get sent up to Venus because there is high pressure and heat that is like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes. Most people would just want to stay out of this and move on but astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\n\nThey are desperate to find a way to get this right and to actually be known for this. Going to Venus is not a easy task and researches have to take a lot of time into this. Most people are probably thinking why is it taking so long, well each previous mission was unmanned and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing like I said early, then this is an issue that leads up to why a spacecraft has not touched down on Venus. This is a very big deal and they just want to find the right research and the right system so they can go visit Venus successfully.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The bar chart describes the global statistical investigation of employment rates, which was conducted across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005. The information involves three categories; countries, the difference of years and gender. Overall, the countries can be categorised into two groups. One presents the gender equality for a job opportunity and the other does not. Sadly, the tendency of gender discrimination in the latter case has not changed between 1995 and 2005, while the mean employment rates have been continuously increasing.\nFirstly, more gender-equal countries are Switzerland, UK and USA. The percentages for employment in 1995 for males are 65% in Switzerland, 55% in UK and 59% in USA. Similarly, those of females are 56%, 51% and 46%, respectively. After a decade, all of these numbers increased by 10% on average. Even though a slight difference is observed in terms of gender, the decrement on females kept within 10% of all three countries.\nOn the contrary, gender-unequal countries are Oceanian nations such as Australia and New Zealand except Iceland. Nevertheless, men had been provided as a high job occasion as or more than the gender-equal countries, females had not been received more than half of their opportunity. No data is shown that the difference between gender in these countries is lower than 25%.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I do feel that this would be helpfull in a lot of classes. Not all the students understand the lesson all the time so they just dont do the work, but with this tool in the class room the computer would see that the student is not understanding and will change the lesson so thst eveyone gets it and is on task doing there work.\n\nI dont feel that this should be used for anything else but to read students emotional expressions in class. This is helpful to the teacher aswell because not all the time do they see the ones that are not understanding what is going on because as long as most of the students are getting the esson they don't see the one's who are not. Most students who dont understand the work will not say anything and just sit there and look like they know what is going on but don't. So this will be good for picking them out so that they can get all the help they need. This is also good for when a teacher might feel like noone gets the work because of how the class looks even though they all understand it they just dont look like it the computer would let the teacher know that everyone is fine with the work and understands it.\n\nIn conclusion i do feel that this new technology would be good for all schools and that it would be a big help.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "About venus challenge\n\nPeople called venusa a \" Every stry\"; because it the brigtest light in the night sky. make it esay tp spot it in sky but the name is misleding it a venus is a planet. Venus is are second planent from the sun. So venus is the second hottes planent of the earth.so peopele really live on it. venus is over 800 degrees and fahrenheuil on the surface of venus. Some people say venus is earth twin beacuse venus is closest and it densith and size. beacuse of venus is closest to the sun it speed is little fast then earth.\n\nsome people wnat to exlporing venus. while venus is simlpe to seen from the distant but safe vantage pount of the eart, it has proved a very challenging place to eamine more closely. so many thing are happand to venus but what know about if can put pepleo on the planet. what are the challenging we can do want venus. people have sent spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped wprld\n\nbeacuse it no spacecraft well survived the landin for more than a few hours. make it hard to get on venus beacuse of the speed and get on time.\n\nvenus have geolog and weather prsent. make erupting volcanoes powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes; then earth have. venus is anymose like earth it have mountains, craters and valleys like earth have.\n\nwe need to closets to venus to get researchers of venus like rock, gas, and anything. the NASA are try to sending humans to study venus. NASA is try to approaches to studying veuns.now we get better in life will time past. we need more thing to get to venus and do lot of on venus. we need to better the challlenge of venus", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "For long people remember books banned various reasons Whether time war religious restriction always viewed negative thing therefore different today Though bit less extreme books content movies music magazines removed library shelves based someone else s opinion It right able obtain information theses materials offer No material ever removed public library based censorship Some argue certain material offensive groups people judge another feels Material written made show feelings author want thier feelings knowledge portrayed The author merely taking advantage freedom speech It responsibility public use information receive It still piece history recorded reason Religion always hot point comes censorship constitution Freedom religion includes interpret study religions Most holy books writings Many express religion means music culture It right public able access material There rare situations restrictions need upheld merely based age This however nt restrict public offers parents right censor information children able get ahold An age limit specific types material could added cases sexual content vulgar images distrubing content unsuitable children This way information never censored completely It never right tell people know It part structure country allow information shared freely Censorhip materials never answer Although age restrictions answer younger citizens materials nt taken away public Whatever called book banning censorship negative thing part public library systems", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One day way school I went pick friend told new game called call duty world war kept talking dose online last class day sat said I cant wait go home play new game I said cool said start complaining I wait one hour I told patient wait said right its like its going anywhere I play anytime told wana come play went house prayed game I told remember always patent till time", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you like helping people while having fun? If you do then I've just the right job for you. This wonderful job is called the UNRRA. There are many reasons why you should join the UNRRA to be a seagoing Cowboys. Some in which include trips, hanging out, ETC. Today we are going to be going over or covering if you will some of the reasons that you should join the seagoing cowboys in the UNRRA.\n\nFirst of all many people say that you whould nothing out of this organization, but you really get a lot of things out of this organization. One reason you should join the seagoing cowboys is you get many trips around the world. For example, in \" A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves\" Luke said that he got to go all around the world like: China, Europe, Greece, ETC. You actuall get to go all over the world.\n\nSecond is that you get to hang out with people you might not know, and who knows you might make a friend, meet your new best friend or even find that perfect someone for you. If you do meet someone then you would be able to hang out a lot. You could have your first date with that perfect someone in a different contry. How cool whould that be! If you don't believe me you can go back to thee text and look in paragraph 5. If I recall it says that he was able to go see many touring spots, and had a lot more free time then you think.\n\nSpeaking of touring that brings me to my next point you are able to go sight seeing and touring. You can go to many places in China and Europe. For example, If you are in Europe and you are close or near Italy you can go and see the leaning tower of piza. For lunch you can go and get some delisous Italian pizza. Now to me that sounds like the perfect day.\n\nOthers might argue by saying that all of this is too expensive and it cost a lot of money. What the people that say this don't see is that the organization pays for most of the cost. Sometimes I bet you that the people that go on this trip don't even spend a dime or a penny.\n\nIn coclusion as you can see by all of the evidence I have showed that there is no doubt in the world that you should not join this organization UNRRA to become a seagoing cowboy. To me all of this kind of sounds fun like a vacation. It doesn't sound like a job at all it sounds refreshing to be able to be at work while doing soomething that seems like fun and a vacation. In conclusion judging by everything I have stated I think that you should join the seagoing cowboys. I know that I will join the seagoing cowboys, will you join?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Well first authur feels happy exsited also feels sad cause moving In born In time met friend Babysitter first friend lived stairs alot family members wen moved mom dad took people need home Just get back feet wants see grandparents cant leave But told mom dad always grateful love sacrifice often told much courageous thing could ever done also often told admiration strength perseverance andt thanked", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People have been dreaming of driverless cars for a long time now. Not having to do anything but sit there and relax, but is it always safe? Just because there is enchanced technology that makes people lives easier, that doesn't always necessariy mean it's safe. There are positives and negatives having driverless cars. Driverless cars would be a great pleasure to have. Just remember it does have it's downsides.\n\nDriverless cars would make majority of people's dreams come true. Not only will people not have to drive as much anymore but it also makes their lives a whole lot easier. A lot of people are probably wondering how they could possibly just sit there in their car doing nothing as this car takes them to their destination. In paragraph 2, Google studies show, \"They still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents.\" The driver is still aware of everything that the car is doing. It alerts them to let them know what is going on and keeps the driver aware of their surroundings better than the driver do alone. If something does happen the driver always has the choice to take over or not.\n\nDriverless cars use sensors to help the vehicle move and prevent accidents. With technological sensors, the car would have better view on the road rather than the driver itself. Their sensors are so enhanced that it replicates the human skill of driver. Some cars now actually use sensors to hep the driver. As stated in paragraph 4, \"Google's modified Tayota Prius uses position-estimating\n\nsensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and a inertial motion sensor.\" All these sensors to keep the car and passagers safe. The more sensors there are the more alert the car is from any danger. This helps the car see more than the human ability of seeing.\n\nThe idea of driverless cars seems so well to not have a downside. There is always a catch when it comes to things like these. Sensors and alerts on a car may seem helpful but what happens if something goes wrong and that person gets into an accident? Technology isn't always perfect. There are glitches and with glitches things could go terribly wrong. In paragraph 9 it states that, \"New laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer?\" There is a really good chance that this could happen. Are people really going to risk this?\n\nThere are pros and cons to having driverless cars. It could either make people's lives easier or risk it. It all depends on the person whether they are going to get the car or not. Even though driverless cars will help an individual, it could also go wrong.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I evaluate my claim to support how well the author supports his idea that \"studing Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers\"\n\nusing envidence from the article Venus is the second planet from our sun, is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the clost in distance too.\n\nVenus, sometimes called the \"Evening Star\" is one of the brightest point of light in the night sky, numerous factors contribute to Venu's reputation as a challenging planet for humas to study, despiste its proximity to us.\n\nHumans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud raped world, Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours, in the atmosphere almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus, temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, but also astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth like planet in our solar system, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth and can sometimes be our nearst option for a planetary visit.\n\nStriving to meet the change presented by Venus has value also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors, solar power would be pletiful and radiation would not exceedEarth levels, Not easy conditions, but survivable for humas, should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Electoral college has helped in many ways. Many people have suggested keeping the electoral college or changing to election by popular vote for the president of United States. I believe that changing to election by popular vote for the president would be best bescause first the more people who vote its easier to determine who would become president and because it will aviod any problems having to choose for president. Changing the election by popular vote can change things in the united states.\n\nNow a days alot of things have helped the electoral college but in other cases it has not . Changing to election by popular vote can help by choosing the winner and still having its defenders. Also it may help by when they need to find out the winner they know exactly who it is . They can get their election faster and quicker by changing the election vote to the most popular vote for the united states. People still suggest that keeping the electoral college would be better but chnging it to popular vote would be the best option .\n\nPresidents and electors have had trouble with the eletoral college when having to elect for president of the united states . If changing it to popular vote for president it will sviod any troubles and problems when electing the president . They will still have senators and still have enough votes to choose and elect the president and have no problem at all. Like people may think yes , electoral college should stay and should not be changed to popular vote in electing the president but i think that is best . Everyne has their own opinion in matters like this but in this case i think whats best to change the electoral college .\n\nIn conclusion to this everything is always done for the better and i think that changing the elcetors to popular vote for the president would be easier and less problems for alot of people. Making change is better and helps others. Especially if its changing for the elections and having to do with the president . Everything is better if you choose to elect the president by most votes it creates better things and makes life so much easier .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many obsticles process building process build mooring mast The designers think re way around themIt easily known could nt go top start construction There acomidations made The exerpt describes The stress dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted way buildings foundation CAPS Just adding would upset buildings structure foundationSafety concern People realized bad idea something highly flammable dirigible Most dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium CAPS After recent fires noticed dangerous idea wasControl issue city rather open feild back ship would swivle around mooring mast CAPS That nt going tofly people It would almost imposible keep people loading Designers face lot problems constructing buildings case mooring mast nt ment", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created The The memoir soothing I explains Narciso parents house The passage also explains many friends Narciso grateful heritage help set good mood", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A couple of people thinks that living without technology is easy-going while the involvement of the latest equipment in our life makes it hard. I disagree that simple way is the only solution and this essay will discuss how machinery has made our life easier.\r\n\r\nIn the early days, everyone lives their life without any luxury because of the non-availability of facilities. To explain further, people travel miles and miles on foot due to unavailability of any means of transport, as well as people use to live without smartphones, as a result , in case of any emergency they were not able to contact their family members. Furthermore, ladies perform their regular household chores manually, such as mopping, blending spices or cooking food on coals. All the above illustrations clearly state that life was not easy at an early age and people suffer and work hard more than the present generation. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, continuous science research has shadowed all the globe with its latest advancements and providing feasibility and ease in everyday life, to elaborate, latest and fastest means of transport system make individuals life easy as one can travel without any hassle. Smartphones connect people in a glimpse and easiest mode to receive all the latest news around the world. Along with that, the latest electronic equipment makes lives heaven, for example, vacuums, electric blenders, coffee machines, electric stoves and whatnot. Although, it makes the nation lazy and less physical activity is performed by every individual which raises several health concerns. \r\n\r\nTo conclude , I agree that advanced automation makes everything so easy that you can do anything at your fingertips, however , a person should not depend on these gadgets entirely as this can cause severe health concerns in the long run for future generations. Everyone should balance their routine accordingly and also perform some tasks manually to keep themselves more active.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a great new form of technology to help society, but can also contain many negative aspects.\n\nThere are many positives such as the benefit of not having to actually drive and being transported from place to place.\n\nThe negatives of this however can be that they may cause many accidents, there not fully functional, and they do not work one hundred percent of the time.\n\nThe postives to having a self driving car are that you would not have to drive the car.\n\nIt would be much more convienient to have a car that could take you places without having to stress about driving to a place in a certain time.\n\nWith the technology that would be provided in a self driving car, it would be extremely likely that there would be a minimal amount of traffic.\n\nAlso there would be almost no car crashes, according to google, and it would use half of the gas we use in our cars.\n\nHowever I personally don't see how a self driving car would be any different than a normal form of public transportation such as a subway.\n\nThe are also many negatives of having a self driving car.\n\nSo far in our advances of self driving cars, there are not many that could fully drive someone from one place to another.\n\nTherefore the car would have to alert the driver to drive the car which could put them under a stressful situation and possibly cause an accident.\n\nAnother issue that I believe people would have is putting enough trust in a self driving vehicle.\n\nMost people would probably not trust a computer software with their life.\n\nAlso many people like to drive, such as myself, and I feel that a self driving car would be useless to me.\n\nI would not trust a car to drive me that had possible computer glitches and was not totally reliable.\n\nThere are many positives and negatives to using a self driving car.\n\nTo me it seems that the negatives outweigh the positives.\n\nThere are just too many things that could go wrong with a self driving car in this time.\n\nI would not use one of these cars if i was given the chance.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days, the environmental crisis has been become more and more concerned as the evidence of climate change attributed to a drastic rise in greenhouse gases emission, which one of the main causes is burning fossil fuel to serve the need of plethora of cars. As the effort to reduce the anthropogenic, it may be a promising strategy to increase the cost of fuel. As being a car user, I absolutely dismiss with this plan according to the following reasons, and this essay will purpose the better alternative solutions for amelioration. \r\n\r\nFirst of all, the drawbacks of augmentation in cost of fuel is escalating the economic. Due to increased daily payment, people try to save their money, instead of spending it with accessories, dilicious foods, or new clothes. As the result, the restarants, stores, and niches markets face the difficulty to make an income. Secondly, depression can be an impact of the high fuel cost. When citizens can not afford for the expensive fuel price, they need to sell their cars because they do not have enough money for paying. Therefore, a surge in fuel cost can bring about the adversity.\r\n\r\nThere are solutions, which are more effective than increased fuel's cost in term of environmental friendly, and can improve the well-being too. Firstly, in order to reduce enormous amount of harmful gases released from tremendous cars, government should give priority to improving the compentency of cars, which should be eco friendly. For example, the electricity comsuming cars, without releasing Carbon dioxide should be promoted and sold in the cheaper price than fuel consuming cars to lure people turn to use it. Secondly, public transport should be developed to be more convenient and more comfortable. Consequently, people turn to use it, and reduce to use the private cars, eventually the disastrous gases will be definitely decreased.\r\n\r\nIn summary, although imposing higher cost of gasoline can reduce the use of car, it is not the best method because it contributes to the economic collaspe, and being stressed among people. Moreover, there are more promising strategies compared to increasing gasoline prices such as eco friendly cars, and developing public transport.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Exploring Venus some people think that we should explore Venus because Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of Density and size and the closest in distance too. Some people call it the ''Evening Star,'' and is one of the brightest point in the night and even a simple person stargazer can spot it. Also, in our solar system Venus is the second planet from our sun. Since, Venus is simple to see from the distant and safe it has proved to be a very challenging place to examine more closely.\n\nEarth, Venus, and Mars is our other planetary neighbor, and orbits the sun at different speeds.The difference in speed mean it that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus. Venus is sometimes closer in space terms humans hace sent multiple spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world.\n\nScientists are even discussing further visits to its surface. Astronomers are amazed by Venus because it has once been the mos earth-like planet in our solar system. While ago Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and may have supported various forms of life.To this day Venus still has some features that are probably analogous to those on earth. Venus has a surface of rocky sediment and includes famaliar features such as valleys, mountains,and craters.\n\nNASA is planning on working in other ways to study venus in parapgraph it states there ideas \" For exmple some simplified electroncis made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such condition''.Also they have another idea of using old technology in parapgraph 7 '' Another project is looking back to an old technology called computers these devices were first envisoned in the 1800s and played an important role the 1940s during world war two''. The thrill challenges by Venus has value not only the insight to be gained on the plante itself but also human curiosity.\n\nVenus is the closest planet to earth in terms of the density and size and some people call it the evening star and brightest in the night sky. Scientist want to explore on Venus and have curiosity whats on the planet Venus .Also scientist have other ways to explore and find out about the planet Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "According to defenders of NASA if their was an ancint civilization on Mars NASA would benifit from it financialy. \" NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars.\" Also there is no evidence or traces of a Ancient civilization on Mars. Also NASA has no reason to try to cover up any civilization that we may not know about because they will be benifiting from that with more tax money from the government.\n\nThe reasons why NASA would not want to cover or hide an ancient civilization on Mars up is because they would clearly benifit from the sitiuation. \" Defenders of the\n\nNASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars.\" Also part of the reason they even made this picture avalible to the public is to bring attention to mars. \" The authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars.\" If they wanted to cover this \"Face\" on Mars up there would have never been a photo releasead to the public so every one can look at and study.\n\nAfter all of that information about NASA and how they would benifit from a ancint civilization on. Mars there is no absalutly no reason NASA would cover this up if they were going to benifit from the possibility of an. Ancient civilization on a planet that does not even have life today.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do we really need all of this technology? Yeah sure its nice to play video games at time, but what happened to going outside and hanging with your friends? I personaly dont think we need to have these high tech computers that tells us how we feel or others feel.\n\nWhen I was a child i loved playing outside we never had computers or tv, but now a day's these children have iphones, ipads, computer, and tv's. But we need to leave emotions for them to figure out. In the passage it states, \" She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent digusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry\" (1). These children dont need to know the exact percentages of there feelings, they need to figure out what they feel along the way.\n\nChildren around the world are learning about what happiness, sadness, and maybe even anger are. Some of them have been through a world full of hurt, some may have no idea what any of it is. In this passage it says, \" Eckman has classified six basic emotions-happinedd, suprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness-and them associated each with characteristic movements or the facial muscles\"(3). These are all great characterists to know about how someone feels about you or how you feel but these children are going to learn how to do this. We just need to let them be children and have fun without so much technology. When I was in school we still used hard books to read out of now everything is on the computer, and we learned all of our emotions by ourselves and so will these children.\n\nThese children read books all the time in classrooms thet can look at the characters faces and see how they feel and maybe the book will tell them this character is happy or this character is sad, and they can tell the difference between it. In this passage it states, \" In face, we humans perform this same impressive \"calculation\" every day. For instance, you can proabably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face\"(5). This passage tells us that we dont need these computers to tell us how we feel or our friends feel we can simply tell and sometimes our friends will tell us how they feel or they will simply ask we are ok.\n\nIn conclusion, I think computers in classrooms is a bad idea. Each and every one of these children are capable of reading each other and knowing how they feel, or maybe they will learn but you have to learn everything so they just need to be children for now.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People have been noticing that artificial intelligence robots will probably be able to take over human’s place in different jobs. This event is most likely to happen with jobs that don´t require complex solutions, while humans force will still be needed for some intellectual focused activities. This essay will discuss why most jobs will be carried out by machines, but some of them will keep relying on humans. \r\n\r\nIn the future, most menial jobs will eventually be done by robots because human skills are easily replaced by artificial intelligence in certain basic activities. The development of modernized software will help machines learn different types of human tasks, and companies will prefer to use these machines instead of humans, because it will probably be cheaper and faster, increasing their production and profitability. For instance, many companies worldwide have already been using artificial intelligence for customer service, solving their client’s problems through online chat bot. This is less expansive for companies, since the artificial intelligence can work unstoppable, and the machines will also treat all the related complaints in the same way, which may increase solution rates and client’s satisfaction. For these reasons, basic jobs that can be automatized will most likely be replaced by machine and artificial intelligence.\r\n\r\n\tOn the other hand, there are many jobs that require very complex and specialized skills, which can only be acquired with years of study and practice. In my opinion, it does not matter how far humans will be able to get with technology improvements, some specific skills will never be replaced by software and machines. A range of traditional professions are good example of jobs that will not be replaced by artificial intelligence, such as lawyers, psychologists, and doctors. Even though machines can learn specific skills related to such areas, the automatic way they operate will never be able to reach the individual issues or cover all levels of details that a complex problem would require. Imagine that a new disease has been discovered, if doctors did not exist, treatment for this new disease wouldn´t be possible until a new machine learn how to treat them, since it takes time to develop a new artificial intelligence. In other words, humans should not be replaced in sophisticated jobs. \r\n\r\n\tThe society cannot disregard that machines and artificial intelligence are very useful for a variety range of purposes, including jobs. As explained above, in the future humans will be replaced by robots in many basic jobs, and some companies have already been relying on them lately. Even though the introduction of artificial intelligence in the labor environment is a trend worldwide, robots will not be able to replace humans in sophisticated activities that requires intellectual thinking and complex solutions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is a planet closes planet to earth. You can get insight on the Twin planet of Earth that does share most features as earth\n\nand unsafe to go.\n\nGetting insight on the twin planet According to the text,'' Studying for Venus, at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above from a ship orbiting safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most form of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere.\n\nVenus planet share some features like Earth. In the text it states,''\n\nThe planet has a surface of rocky sediment and ncludes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. At thirty-plus miles bove susurface,temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees fahrenheit but the air pressure would be close o sea level on earth. Venus can be the nearest option of a planatary visit. U can learn how hot it is in venus because its very close to the sun .\n\nLearning about a planet that is high risk that gives you true insight on the planet next to us , where you can see in the sky\n\nis an interesting exploration where its likely to be unsafe to visit.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Yes, I support the new computer technolgy \"Facial Action Coding System\".\n\nMost people, including me, have the troubles of becoming bored or confused when doing my school work. If I were to have the \"Facial Action Coding System\", it would help me and many other work more efficient, because in paragraph 6, Dr. Haung said \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming\n\nconfused or bored\" \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" If we had this new technology in our school computers, I believe that many more kids would actually apply themselves because the computer is trying to help and adapt the lesson to the way they could understand. Many kids just drop out or don't even have school as a priority because they don't understand the work their given. This technology also has an efficient way of recognizing our emotions, in paragraph 3, it says the computer constructs a 3-D model of a face including all 44 major muscles that move exactly like human muscles. They associate each emotion to the characteristic movements of the facial muscles. He gives very specific and valid points.\n\nAll in all; the \"Facial Action Coding System\" is going to be very effective. The way it works is so precise. It will help many kids and most likely more students will get diplomas. This new technology will be a huge break thru.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My opinion on if a 'FACS' machine in classrooms would be valuable is a mixed one. In some scenarios I do think that this machine could be useful in making a classroom more enjoyable, but I also don't think it would be useful at the same time. I think it would be useful in making classrooms and lessons more enjoyble for some people, but I also think that it could be a distraction. I think it would make learning easier for some, but more difficult to others. I also believe that it would make teaching a little bit harder.\n\nI feel like having a 'FACS' machine in classrooms could be valuable to some, but not to others. In the article Dr. Huang says 'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\"...'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" I do agree with the\n\nthought that it could make enjoyable, it could help students out, but I think this would only be beneficial to some students. Say I'm confused on one specific thing and the computer modifies the lesson so that I could better understand it, who's to say that the way the lesson gets modified won't be confusing to another student? Just because I understand it now, doesn't mean it will clear it up for Joe.\n\nThe way I see it is that students learn in different ways, one specific way of teaching might make learning something easier for one student, but harder for another. I just think there would be too many different emotions and students for a computer (or teacher even) to modify a lesson so that everyone in the classroom understands it. I think it would be easier if each computer was for every indivisual student, if it was a kind of software that we could download to our own school devices, but just as one computer trying to modify one lesson to help 15+ students, I don't think it would work.\n\nI also think that this kind of thing would be a distraction and disorienting. Maybe I am completely missing the point and Dr. Huang meant it would modify the lessons after class, but if that isn't the case here's my point. I think that if a computer were to modify a lesson everytime a student looked bored or confused, it would be distracting and disorienting. Think about it this way, if you were a student sitting in class trying to listen to what the teacher is teaching and suddenly the lesson changes. I don't mean the whole lesson, not like a powerpoint will completely change after one student gets bored or confused, but I mean it either gets easier or more difficult. Words change and things keep moving back in forth, don't you think that would get a little distracting? Wouldn't it throw you off? Disorientate you?\n\nThis lesson modifiction doesn't neccesarily mean that everyone will get it. Some students find lessons boring because their too easy, other find them boring because they're too hard and they can't comprehend them. Others just won't find themselves interested in the topic, how will the computer fix that? Part of me also belives that a computer would be able to handle it perfectly. That's where my mixed emotions come in, perhaps a computer could make a lesson pefectly. Challenging enough for some students, but not too difficult for others.\n\nIt could possibly make teaching more difficult as well, I don't personally think that a teacher could keep up with all the ways a lesson has been modified. If a lesson gets changed up enough times I'm not sure that a teacher could handle them, especially if it reads a students emotions so frequently. So Billy found it boring and Sandra was confused but Joe was enjoying it but Cher thought it was too easy. How would all of that work? I think it could also be beneficial to teachers, knowing how their students were feeling about thier lessons.\n\nDo you understand what I mean? Not only can I see why this kind of think could be valuable to classrooms, but I also can think of why it wouldn't be. This kind of topic is one that I'm not sure I could answer indefinitly. I just think the pros and cons are too much. My opinion about this kind of thing is just too mixed to say whether or not I think it could be valuable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" is talking about Venus and how similar it is to Earth also that it's the hottest planet in our solar system as well as that we still might not know as much as we think we do. \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors\"(Paragraph 8). The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" thinks that we should be studying Venus because there still might be some things we don't know about Venus also if we do study it we could potentially might explore its surface one day.\n\nSo how the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers, is because he explains in detail why we should be studying Venus. He also explains how we could study Venus surface a safe way and not worry about it's temperature.\"Futhermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel\"(Paragraph 4). The author believes that if we study Venus we could find safe ways to do this and not have to worry about it's temperature and we could explore more of Venus as well as discovering new things.\n\nSo the author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers because in the article, he explains that we could figure out safe ways to go on Venus surface. He also says we shouldn't just stop our curiosity there because we are limited by the dangers as well as doubts.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "So you know that face on mars right? You do, good do you thing that it was made by aliens? You do, well let me tell you something it was not made by aleins it was made by comets they hit mars and they made the face because aliens are not real they are fake, so they coundn't of made them. See the comets hit mars in the right place for it to make a face. I think that it is stuiped that people still think that aliens are real they are not real!\n\nNASA knows that aliens are fake they just want people to think that they are real so they can get more money by spreding rummers that they found a UFO that has crashed in to the earth and the weriod crop cricles that are made into the corn fields, and they make money off of that crap, I think that is stuiped that they get money on that stuff and then there is other people that are trying to find money just to feed themselfs and there childern .\n\nThe face in mars is just a hugh rock that got hit by some comets and the comets hit in just the right places and they made a face in that rock all the other syuff around it got hit to by a comet to so that is why places near the rock are caved in they got hit by a comet.\n\nSo comets made the face in the moon not aliens because remeber aliens are not real they are fake so you can go tell other people this story and one day no one will ever think that aliens created the face in a mars rock.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Hi my name is Michael\". Today im going to be writing about whether the use of technology to read emotional expressions of students in a classroom is a good idea or a bad idea. If it would be helpfull or wastfull in classrooms.\n\nThis emotion detecting technology was invented and created by Prof. Thomas Huang, of the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois. This was originaly used on the famouse panting The Mona Lisa. Showing that she is 83% happy, 9% disguted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry.\n\nThis technology could be used in schools in a good way and a bad way. The good way is to be able to read if some of the students are not happy and then staff could figure out how to make them happy and satisfied. it could also be used to stop fights if it spots someone mad or upset. One last thing it could help was for with anger, it could potentaly find people that are mad and sad all the time. This could help with teen suicide and school shootings, and could help staff identify these posibilites.\n\nsome downfalls to this could be that it would cost alot of money. The programing and everything to do this would take alot of power and a super computer because not any random computer can handle the algurithoms that this proses needs.\n\nAnd that is my essay for how the FACS could be used and the downsides there could be for the technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The graph below illustrates the amount of overseas visitors to three different places ( the coast, the mountains, the lakes ) in a European country between the period 1987 to 2007. The unit used in the graph is thousands\nOverall, the lakes had the lowest amount of visitors in the graph in 1987 by 10 thousand visitors in oppose the coast had the most number of visitors in the graph in 2007 by slightly over 70 thousand visitors. The mountains had the lowest amount of visitors in all the times visitors combined while the coast and the lakes were really close to each other in the overall amount of vistors nearly the same amount of visitors.\nIn the period from 1987 to 1992 The coast had the highest number of visitors by approximately 40 thousand visitors while the lakes had the lowest number of visitors by nearly 10 thousand visitors and the mountains were the middle between them by slightly over 20 thousand visitors.\nIn the period from 1992 to 1997 the coast also was the highest number of visitors by around 40 thousand visitors in meantime the lakes was lower than the mountains it was above 15 by littile and the mountains were above 25 but the lakes suprisingly rocketed and achived the mountains even went more by 30 thousand approximately.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article Making Mona Lisa Smile by Nick D'Alto, we as readers are told that there is new technology that can read emotions. This technology, created by Professor Nicu Sebe of the University of Amsterdam and Doctor Huang of the Beckman Institute, can detect and read human emotions. With this technology, they are hoping to make computers smarter.\n\nThe creators of the face reader want to use their technology to make computers better. They want to put it in video games to show more complex emotions, or websites to help with better ad revenue. But the best, smartest, and most practical use would be in the classroom. These days, more and more children are dropping out of school. They're bored and don't care about a good education. But if we could make learning fun again, then overall our economy would stabalize. Their would be more kids/adults with more jobs, we could create more technology, we could better the future. But only with the help of the face reader technology. Imagine this, you are 10 years old, doing online work at school. But you're tired of the work and just want to go home already! The computer would pick up on this emotion, and automatically adapt to something that would fit your entertainment style. It would change again and again until you were ready to learn. This technology could give kids the extra push to want to learn. With more people learning we would have no need for computers to do work, we humans could do it all and better. Meaning more jobs, more money, and overall a more stable economy. Less kids would be in summer school, giving them a longer, more enjoyable break, meaning they would be willing to learn on the first day of school. Kids would want to learn, and thats a win by itself.\n\nThere for, it would be the best idea to apply this technology to a classroom. We need the kids of the future to be brighter, smarter, and more adaptible to survive as a species.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There time I didnt want patient We family going go common holiday On way highway yards ahead us two nurchaged bath pulled They beside With anger Soon cops came Keep mind waiting behind The cops investigated everything called something minutes later truck came around traffic jam started fixing road I dont know nothing fixed Finally around later let past continued ride", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I like and dislike the idea of driverless cars. Like all ideas this one comes with some pros and cons.\n\nPros, the pros of this is that people can sit back and relax while watching the road. Driverless cars would be very helpful for a lot of people. Driverless cars would be the start to new technology. It would take mankind to a whole new level with the technology that would be used to make driverless cars. This might even start the research for pilotless air planes. Who knows, the world is becoming more advanced as the years progress. So the pros are very good for this idea.\n\nCons, on the other hand there are a lot of cons. If we make driverless cars some people might take this as a way to sleep or to get on there phones. Just because there would be driverless cars doesnt mean you shouldnt pay attention to the\n\nroad. Also if the technology gets so advanced people will lose there jobs because they won't be needed anymore. Taxis drivers will have to find some new work just like truck drivers. If that happens a lot of people will lose there jobs. No one wants to be unemployed. So if this be comes a thing alot of people will suffer from it. Not just the driver but also there family. If there the bread winners in there family, it could ruin there whole life. It could make the family sell there valueable just to keep there house.\n\nSo I like and dislike the idea. But we also got to think of the pros and cons of this idea. Put yourself in the eyes of the taxis drivers or other people who make money driving people around. See how they feel about this idea. Most of all I think people need to take other peoples life into consideration.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I for one am against the manufacturing and widespread use of \"autonomous\" cars. For one, the cars aren't even truly autonomous: a driver is still required to even operate the vehicle. The cars are alos going to be very expensive. Cars are already fairly expensive, but add in infrared and 3-D recognition technology and cars will quickly go from something that is obtainable by anyone to something that is unheard of in the lower middle class and beyond. In addition, the creation of cars in general has already affected the world drastically, especially America. The invention of the automobile put less work on Americans and as a result of that, we've become increasingly lazy. Imagine a car that doesn't even need to be driven, a person simply sitting in it waiting to arrive at their destination, which adds to my other point of the cost: there's a reason that car services are so expensive, which is because they're a luxury. My final point is the risk and resources that would have to come into play with an invention like this.\n\nAs I said before, the price of such an invention would be astronomical. The average brand new car costs around ten thousand dollars. If you add in another eight thousand dollars in scanners and situational recognition systems, then you've almost doubled the price of the car! This is my point when I say that the lower middle class and below would have their hopes dwindling, and do the wealthy upper class really need a new reason to look down on the working class? Even the upper middle class people can't just toss out almost twenty thousand dollars for a car at a moments notice.No, not at all. I personally believet that given the choice between driving and sacrificing a huge sum of money, most people would choose to drive.\n\nMy next point is this: Americans are extremely lazy, in mind and body. Yes, the cars are implanted with warning systems to instruct the driver to take over sontrol of the vehicle, but that's assuming the driver cares enough to react in time. That's assuming the driver is even paying attention to the car itself, let alone the road! One word: texting. Even when people drive the cars, accidents happen because people pay more attention to their phones than the road without reason. Can you imagine if they actually had the freedom to neglect their responsibilities because of a so-called autonomous car? The amount of accidents would rise dramatically, which brings me to my final point.\n\nNow, we all know that new innovations normally come at a cost. That's a given. These cars, however, step over the bounds of being a cost and become a travesty. First of all, these cars still have glitches to work out and companies don't want to take the time to work them out. If these cars are sold to the public, how many lives could possibly be lost because of a simple programming error before the cars are recalled? It would be far too late. Also, I mentioned the cost. Well, that doesn't just come in the loss of life. It is also present in the amount of time and money will be spent on the research, development, and manufacturing of these cars. Far too much money will be spent on something that is both completely unnecessary and a gross misuse of resources.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that \"autonomous\" cars are, for lack of a better word, stupid. Paying more money for less safety and more laziness simply seems counterintuitive to me and my goals. I'd rather have the self assurance of driving my own car and being responsible for what happens to me and my fellow drivers. Not only would I feel safer with myself behind the wheel, but I would feel safer with everyone else behind their own wheels as well. To summarize, \"autonomous\" cars are expensive, dangerous, and unecessary, to say the least.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should join to help and say I helped that country. I think you should because there are things you have and other people don't. I also think that it should almost be a requirement to help people to go to heaven. I think alot of things should because I am like that.\n\nI think a lot about others believe it or not. I love other people and apparently Luke did also. He understands the true meaning of love. He even knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime to help people in Africa,Asia,Haiti, and other places like that he had to understand that time is too valuable and other people give that time away to you to make you a better person and he is using it that way. Not saying this is all good there is downs too. Every rose has its thorns.\n\nIt is a lot of time that people spend with others. It was better for Luke I think because he was a good person. He had a heart of steel to make himself not say no to miss out on people in his family to go help other families. I think that was the best thing to do for anybody. He missed his mom,dad,aunt,brother/sister,nephew/neices,and his other friend to go help other people. Which makes me wonder if he's a Mason.\n\nI know that he had to miss out because that was so much time taken up ,not wasted but taken up. He spent 2 weeks on each trip and then did it 16 more times! Reasons not ot would be. You could die in fog. I'm not sayin I wouldn't go but I wouldn'tlike to have the thought of dying in my brain. I bet more than once or twice he thought of dying and cried.\n\nI know I would go but I wouldn't go 16 times because of the fact. There are sharks,squid,octopi,and plenty of other animals. The oceans are the most unexplored places on earth. People die millions of times a year because of the ocean and I have a high paranoia level so my paranoia would keep me on my toes. I would be so scared at times. There are 60 foot sharks named megalodons and can swallow me whole. There are plesiosaurs confirmed in the pacific. There is a six gilled shark that is 20 feet long. almost all sharks can taste a drop of blood 400 yards away. If they swim underneath a boat with 335 horses and 1 of 335 is bleeding or in labor. (the tissues and blood)I would die. I would probably have a heart attack.\n\nI can't stand my paranoia. My friend was going to let a train go over him to prove he wasn't scared but I put a little paranoia in him because under a train gets hot enough to crystalize a rock and make it look like silver. What would it do to my friend. Back to the water.\n\nPlesiasours started as lizards. Lizards have a third eye. It senses changes in lighting. Ripples and vibrations shift lighted areas. Horses make alot of noise and stomp alot. Stomping causes vibrations.\n\nI was swimming in a river and I thought about rivers monsters when a log touched my legs I freaked out! I swam as fast as I could screaming \"jeremy wade jeremy wade\"I was out of the water and on my grandpas house boat. I said hit the sand dam. From then and on I never went past clear water.\n\nI don't think about stuff like look down its a log or stuff like that. I almost pee my pants when I see a spider. I think its because of me watching national geographic channel everyday and knowing what every animal does and how it hurts you.\n\nI thought one time a jamaican cockroach could kill me .At the time I was three or four. My finger now was about as long as this cockroach. it stood up and it ran towards me. I was in my moms work and there were alot of animals there so I ran into the pig room. That was the day I figured out my mom would get me a mexican rat. From then on No roach came near me .But my fear is still here.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Alonging with the development of society, families' role, structure and the number of members are changing very fast. Some people put forth the argument that we should study about family history, while others believe that we should concentrate on the present and future generations. This essay will examine both perspectives and propose my opinion about this problem.\r\n\r\nIt is cannot deny that history play an important role in the modern life, including family history. Studying about the past help us to learn form our ancestors archivements and mistake, which can improve our life. It also takes part in the family tradition conservation. For instance, several family in Viet Nam keep the tradition of making potery products, or restore some kinds of arts that their family use to perform in the past. Lastly, family history gives us something to pround of, so it can improve our mood and make us more satisfy with our life. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the concentration on the present and future generations is crucial. From my perspective, this is more significant than study about history. Firstly, history is in the past we cannot change what was happended. However, we can improve the future by our care to education, health and emotion of our children. In fact, in Viet Nam, just a little number of family know clearly about their ancestors further than 5 generations. Due to this reality, we can conclude that study about family does not have much impacts on these days life. Moreover, focus on the development of the next generations bring several benefits to our society. To demonstrate, after the improvement of education in Viet Nam after 1945, we defeated France and America to gain our independence, and the life of people and the economy of our country are also increased. Therefore, focus on the next generations has many advantages in several factors such as economy and life satisfiaction.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe that learing about family history is important. However, focus on the future generation is more significant, because it improve our comunity in many aspects", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Up until now driverless cars were thought to be things only seen in one's imagination and movies. However, with the recent developments in technology it may only be a few years until the first driverless car is released to the public. I truly believe that this technology would help improve the whole driving experience by making it safer, but also allowing the driver to still have fun when he or she drives. Even with some of the problems driverless cars contain, the future would be a much better place with driverless cars owned by everyone.\n\nThe idea of a driverless excites all who hear about it, and the driverless car comes with many benefits that will help the people driving and the enviroment. The designers of driverless cars believe that the amount of fuel used when the car drives will be half of what is used in today's cars. Also the designers were afraid that taking away the driving experience would lessen the amount of joy brought to the driver during the driving experience. The solution to this problem was the idea of in-car entertainment. In-car entertainment would allow the driver to have fun when he or she is not driving, and the system would be automatically shut off when the car required the driver to take over. Finally the cars are currently being developed by many automotive developers, like Tesla, Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan, which have plans to have mostly driverless or driverless cars coming to the people of the world in the very near future.\n\nEven when this type of car becomes a reality there are still some obstacles that the developers of driverless cars will have to get over. The first problem that comes to mind is the cost of the car. With all of this state of the art technology being put in the cars, how will the companies create a cost that allows a wide variety of people to purchase a driverless car. It is also brought up in the story about what will happen if the technology malfunctions and causes an accident. Would the driver or the company that manufactured the car be at fault for the accident? I personally believe that the company would be at fault, and have to at least fix your car and pay for any medical bills. There is also a problem with states having to pass a law to allow the driverless cars in their state, so even if the cars were to be developed not everyone would be able to purchase or use a driverless car in every state.\n\nThere are many ways that the problems the developers have run into can be fixed. To fix the problem of the cost being to high, many companies could chose to wait a few more years until the cost of the technology needed to make a driverless car goes down in price. Also companies could use those years waiting for prices of parts to go down to better their driverless car systems to lower the chance of malfunctions. In the event that a driverless car does get in a wreck the company should have a section on accidents in the driver's manual. Finally if the companies improve the safety of driverless cars, I'm sure that many states would pass laws to allow the vehicles into their states.\n\nOverall driverless cars are a vehicle that can truly help improve the way people live their everyday lives. If the safety of the driverless car is improved then many states and people will enjoy having them in their lives. I do believe that the founder of Goggle, Sergey Brin, will have his dream achieved in the very near future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driving is the primary way of transportation, to get from point A to point B. It's a great way to reduce traveling time, and traffic is almost nonexistent. Some people would say it's better than walking, or riding a bicycle. But what if we limited these polluting vehicles and replaced our transportation for our daily routine? Well, we can. Limiting car usage can help us from lots of city and/or regional pollution. It can improve safety and conserve the resources we already have. Saving even more time is also something all people want to try to accomplish. Limiting the use of cars can help make this world a much better, and more breathable, reusable, and not a time-consuming place.\n\nTo begin with, the answer to why we should limit the use of cars is stated in the form of pure science: pollution. All around the world, from North America to Asia, every continent has a majorly polluted city. Beijing, London, Mexico City, Miami, New York City, you name it! Major cities nowadays are becoming more polluted than ever before, due to gasoline and diesel fuel used in cars today. Overpopulated cities can have too many cars, and too many cars driven can increase the amount of polluted air around us. In document two, the capital of France, Paris, is home to almost ten million people. After days of an almost-broken record amount of pollution intoxicating the city, Paris enforced a driving ban for two days. Cars and motorcycles were forced to be left at home, or a steep fine will be charged. Even though almost 4,000 drivers were fined, congestion in Paris decreased by nearly 60%, after intense smog. Diesel fuel was the culprit to this pollution, due to France's tax policy that favors diesel fuel rather than gasoline. Diesel fuel cars make up about 67% of cars in France, comparing to an average 57% of diesel engines in Western Europe, according to Reuter's. The smog cleared enough on Monday for the French politicians to rescind the ban. In document three, Columbia's capital city, Bogota, had a goal to promote alternatives to personal transportation and reduce the amount of smog throughout the city. Day Without Cars was born, one day every month where cars are not allowed to be driven, or a fine will be charged. The turnout of people was immense, even though rain showers and thunderstorms poured onto the event. Mayor Antanas Mockus stated that the Day Without Cars \"was a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution.\" Parks and sports centers rose from the city streets, and sidewalks have been paved for bicycles and ongoing pedestrians. Limiting car usage is not be a bad thing, considering we need the air we already breathe.\n\nFurthermore, limiting car usage is not a bad solution to the global pollution, and is not a bad solution to improve safety and conserve resources, either. Teenagers all over the world are more prone to accidents than any other age group. Getting your license is great, and driving alone is equally as awesome, but having no regard for safety while driving? Not as awesome as it sounds. For an additional document, it's life itself. Driving on a daily basis takes up gasoline, and lots of it. On average, a normal driver takes up about twenty gallons of gasoline a week, if not, more. Diesel fuel used in pickup trucks and semi-trucks is more expensive, but lasts longer than regular gasoline. Resources have dwindled since the oil spill in the Gulf of Mexico of 2011, and regular Americans are running out of the food for their car. On the safety spectrum, looking out for a street to turn at, for pedestrians, and for people that may cut you off sounds like a blast, but safety and crashes/accidents end up to be a result in many driving situations. Many people consider for driving to be unsafe, due to the statistics of daily crashes on highways, and even intersections, which happen to be the most dangerous place you can have an accident. Those types of people have put a hold on driving, and have caused a decline in the nation's miles driven per person scale, stated in document four. As of April of 2013, the number driven per person went down almost nine percent. Factors to that decline may have been the 2008 stock recession, or the fact that cars got smaller and more expensive. As a result, more people started to walk to work, or buy a bicycle, like they use mainly in Amsterdam in the Netherlands. Safety is becoming a subject that is mainly disregarded by citizens, and resources are becoming less and less, yet the alternatives for driving, such as walking or taking the city bus, are becoming more and more popular.\n\nMoreover, car usage should become more limited because they are other ways, faster and more efficient ways, to get to your destination. Major cities all over the globe have a multitude of ways to transport people from one side of the city to the other. Taking buses, walking, taking the subway, helicopter, taxis, anything! Except a car. Car use in major cities is almost unheard of, as traffic is everywhere in a big city, and overpopulation can cause the traffic, or at least, be the contributing factor of it. People want to get to another place in sixty seconds or less, and driving in that matter never happens. For example, car use in New York City is busy. Of course, being \"the city that never sleeps\", cars are not the best way to get around. Walking or taking the subway underground helps get the people around easier and faster. As expected, a large drop in the percentage of teenagers getting there license has occurred, according to ducment four. New York has a new bike-sharing program, and it's skyrocketing bridge/tunnel tolls reflect those new priorities taking place. Driving by young people decreased significantly between 2001 and 2009. Woven into a connected web to save time, new alternatives to the polluting machines we call cars are slowly backing up into reverse, and disappearing from the category of main transportation.\n\nIn conclusion, limiting car usage is the best option to acheive all of the contributing factors. Pollution hurts cities and their environments, even their people. The air we breathe is more important than the amount of time it takes reach our destination. Safety improvements need to happen to make drivers have common sense and to not run over someone crossing the street. Resources are limited everywhere, and what we'll do after they've been gone? That answer has not been found yet. Saving time is our number-one priority, and we try to beat our records every time we go somewhere, whether it be using the same mode of transportation, or trying out a new one. Next time, be spontaneous for a day, and don't use a car. Try a new way to get to work; taking the subway and watching a new scene come at you every two seconds; or walk to work and admire the time slowing by around you. Breathe the fresh air like never before. Remember: it's not the destination that yiou should look forward to; it's the journey.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "According to the text the challenge of exploring Venus is really worthy for NASA to explore or to know more about because all people know about venus is that Venus is really hot, nobody can go to venus.\n\nThe challenge of exploring venus is a pretty big challenge. Copious factors contribute Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for human to explore. Venus is the closest planet to earth why not find a way to explore it, Human have sent a copious of spacecraft in Venus but none of them survive the landing for more than a couple hours. Which is why we should find a way to get to Venus.\n\nVenus as a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide makes it more challenging. Venus has a temperature of 800 degrees which is really high it's 90 times greater than our planet which make Venus really hot and challenging to explore. Venus condition is far more extreme than any human coud have imagine. If Venus is so inhospitable why is are scientist discussing on further visit to Venus? Maybe it's because it could be the only planet that is like earth, no one knows, which is why we have to know more about Venus no matter what it takes.\n\nNASA has one idea for sending human to study Venus their idea is to fly over 30 or so miles above Venus, which sound like good idea because our pilots do it almost everyday to survive a storm while their flying a plane. More importantly, researchers cannot take a samples of rock or gas or anything else from a distance. Therefore they are trying to find a way to land on venus and take a good look so that they can know a little more about Venus our sister planet. Many of our researchers are working on a big project that would allow are machines last longer on Venus because Venus it's really hot.\n\nThe Challenge of exploring Venus is a big challenge, i think we will find a way to get to venus because if we got a lot of thing we got to know about our sister planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Self driving cars. Everybody wants a car that can drive itself, but is it really practical? Many people say that self driving cars are a thing of the future, while others argue that they should not exist. Autonomous cars are not practical and should not be on the road because they are dangerous, impractical, and boringly monotonous.\n\nSelf driving cars are dangerous because they will not be able to sense or detect danger as wells as humans could. \"Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.\" Cars are not safe under the care of automized vehicles due to the fact that there are too many variables and sporadic possibliltys when driving.\n\nNow other than dangerous, they are also very impractical. Early forms of self driving cars such as \"Traffic Jam Assistant\" are examples of how impractical they are. \"The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph,\" this is a very slow speed and seems almost useless. Along with only going 25 mph self driving cars also require you to keep your hands on the wheel at all times. \"Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver?\".\n\nTo add on to driverless cars being impractical, automated cars would make road trips very boring and dull. \"The psychological aspects of automation are really a challenge,\" admits Dr. Werner Huber, a BMW Project manager driver.\" Taking road trips would be the only thing that comes mind when thinking of why you would need a driverless car, and then even road trips would become very repetitive and bland. \"We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way.\" this shows that autonomous cars would take the fun out of taking road trips.\n\nAll in all, Autonomous cars are not the next big thing and are potentially a huge safety hazard. Driver assistance may be something that could be useful to drivers with impairments but driverless cars is taking it to the next level. Without roads to pair with these cars the use of driverless cars is impractical and not down to earth. So go out there and show your car some appreciation and give it a test drive, completely un-automated.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Do exceed posted speed limit The features setting affect cyclist ways One way harsh conditions desert make need alot water resources This heat exercise dehydrate This evident story drinks water desperate enough try drink old pump black sludge This features setting affected cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author describes why putting a man on the moon seems like a walk in the park compared to the horrendous obstacles preventing humans from pushing the frontier with visiting one of Earth's neighbors, Venus. The thick atmosphere is toxic to us. The clouds of sulfuric acid, the incredibly high temperatures on the planet's surface, and pressure would present challenges to mankind and its technology.\n\nYet, the author sees that mankind cannot be afraid of the risks when the rewards are so great. In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents is supported through Venus' vast similarities to Earth, Venus' proximity to Earth, and the innovation in machines by researchers that could make them work long enough to expand mankind's knowledge on Venus.\n\nThe idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers is supported through Venus' vast similarites to Earth, which is why humans have such interest in this particular planet. The author explains points in Venus' history that have intrigued astronomers, \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largelyt with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, \" (4). Besides having been closer to Earth's \"twin\" many years ago, Venus may be more similar than humans thought, shown through \"The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters,\" (4). Studying Venus could lead to us knowing why this planet is such a far cry from Earth now, and this could provide valuable with how humans interact with their environment. If Venus has such similar features to Earth, like valleys, then there is probably more to discover on Venus' surface. This peculiar connection between this planet and Venus shows how valuable exploration could prove, just as Venus' proximity further supports how worthy of a pursuit Venus is.\n\nThe idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the presented dangers is supported through Venus' proximity. The author conveys the usefulness of having Venus so close, \"Because Venus is sometimes right around the corner-in space terms-humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world,\" (2). Time and distance can be very influential in making groundbreaking decisions, like pursuing the exploration of Venus, as can be seen through, \"...Venus can be sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel,\" (4). Humans love to have everything near by, like schools, work, and more, because of the convenience; the same benefit is seen with Venus. When the planet is close, the fuel needed would not be the same if humans were trying to get to Jupiter. There would be less of a chance of losing them. Time is essential in space, given humans' limited control out there, so proximity makes it that much easier for us to make the bold move. Venus's proximity gives reason to continue working towards exploring Venus, just as the innovations in machines have.\n\nThe idea that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it brings is supported through the innovation in machines that could make the close-up exploration of Venus possible. NASA's advancements for Venus exploration are promising, \"For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such chaos,\" (7). Humans would not be able to use the most advanced technology, but durability is the goal, \"By comparison, systems (mechanical computers that use gears and levers to calculate) that use mechanical parts can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces,\" (7). If humans were to only hover over Venus, the possibilites are limited. Humans and technology have to be as close as possible. Technology that could last for a few weeks is enough to vastly expand our knowledge. Mechanical computers are now obsolete, but in Venus would be a valuable tool, just like the other electonics being made. Researchers have worked tirelessly to continue making Venus exploration a reasonable reality.\n\nIn \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents is supported through Venus' vast similarities to Earth, Venus' proximity to Earth, and the innovation in machines by researchers that could make them work long enough to expand mankind's knowledge on Venus. The idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers is supported through Venus' vast similarites to Earth, which is why humans have such interest in this particular planet. The idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the presented dangers is conveyed through Venus' proximity. The idea that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite its hostile environment is supported through the innovation in machines that could make the close-up exploration of Venus possible. The author believes that sometimes humans cannot let curiosity, imagination, and innovation be trampled by the dangers and doubts. Humans cannot live in fear all the time. The human spirit always demands that humans continue striving towards knowing more.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College is a compromise between the election of the President by electoral votes. This has been around for as long as I can remember. It plays a very big part in our government. Some people want to get rid of it. Others don't. Do you think we should keep the it?\n\nThe Electoral College balances out the amount of popular votes. If both candidates are tied, we turn to the state electors. The candidate that has the biggest amount of electoral votes wins. One candidate can have more popular votes and very few electoral votes. The popular votes are just for the state electors to decide which they are going to pick. In the end it all goes down to them, The Electoral College,\n\nOn the other hand, some people don't like this idea. The electors are sometimes depend on the state. Other times the state conventions, the presidential candidates, and sometimes the sate party's central committee. Voters think it's unfair. They spend a bunch of time voting for who THEY want, but in the end it comes down to the electors. So in reality it doesn't even matter who the voters choose. They really just choose a slate of electors, who then elect the president,\n\nI think we should get rid of The Electoral College. It's not fair to the people. We waste all our time to vote on a president we want, to only end up voting for the electors. I understand that it does have its good affects, but it just feels like we don't even matter. Where's the freedom?\n\nSome people think we should keep the Electoral College. Others don't. It has it's good things. It has it's bad. I personally feel like we should just get rid of it. What do you think we should do?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I happy I finished school report I nt even need leave house I able talk classmate ask questions online I also managed get information computer I also learned row boat show class crossed river I learned taking online course This one situation computers fantastic effects people everyday situations Local research show planning vocation use internet The reason citizens use internet get information hotel vacation cite That one way makes computers helpful positive devices beacuse makes easier busy get ready trip looking pictures hotel online getting info need Doctor university says computers offer programs allow busy learn new skill currently use software CAPS everyday nt time go join group class learn new skills That computers helpful people love Instead leaving home cooking yoga speaking new language computer home That another reason computers useful vey positive ways Imagine forgetting homework school able A class Well computers forgetful students talk classmate online get homework Or could even use internet go school website find homework print Many students around country forget homework helpful computers fix problems easily Let s recap students adults get information internet projects even vacations Busy nt time leave house take class learn new skill right computer Anyone use internet talk chat online get school work long distance friends That effects computers people nothing positive Now It important computers stay lives helpful learned live must stay This benefits newspaper houses organized computers keeps business running", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter little exactly little You look everyone faint clue anything Now usually parents step They feed love take care importantly teach need know Growing I ve learned need help others One way I find easy help others laughter Laughter nt something effects people around also effects You ask anyone re life anyone ever made difference making laugh Or could made difference making laugh able think time happened Though I know fact someone made difference life making giggle For instance I remember day I felt alone forgotten I felt used betrayed even Growing I knew friends second family They always Though like kids fought end day everything backed normal People say CAPS come I never noticed easy I I little I thought I bad nt matter problems change still hurts fight friends You still days feel horribly alone quite sure One days littlest thing seem cut deepest This day one kind days Now see I young I third grade best friend girl named I nt remember exactly fought I remember felt I remember walking classroom near tears I d dealt cruel whatever said day really hurt I always first classroom I m sure exactly I I always In seat I sat nt move My brain taken little world sorrow That s asked wrong Even child I hated people I nt really know asked I okay embarrassed another reminder I showing weakness people probably nt care Though time different weird way helped I explained teacher happened rush tears details What really made difference everything teacher tried comfort make feel better made laugh Whatever exactly I told response nt make feel better made realize nt big deal I giggled time everyone class I happy At end day back best friends My teacher honestly favor As kid vulnerable You nt look world harsh unforgivable place That s people turn like Its environment grew around I believe I changed small effort That one little joke made realize everything s going get better long run Laughter s important ever since I helped realize effect people Even small age still make difference Since I ve used teacher taught I learned sometimes even could nt make laugh smile happy fact tried really made difference Laughing important changes people matter age", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Numerous people have argued that school should teach a lot of skills in daily life such as cooking, dressmaking, or woodwork, not only focus on academic achievement as well as examinations. In this essay, I will explain why I tend to agree with this statement. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, learning essential subjects like math, biology, and language is most likely the main purpose of every school in this entire world, yet the hope of parents. Based on the statement by UNDP, courses like math, biology, and language are the foundation of children’s part of growing both in analytical thinking and emotional thinking. Moreover, the ability of children to count is because they learn math at school, their communication skill is level up because they learn a language subject at school, and they are aware of the natural environment because they learn it in biology. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, school should be the best place for students to learn everything, including learning hard or soft skills like cooking, dressmaking, and woodwork. This idea could be added in extracurricular activities. Looking at SKY High School in South Korea, this school even has 30 clubs for extracurricular activities. The teachers also believe that the students can be rich by having a lot of skills to help them get accepted in high-ranked universities. Turns out, 60% of students in SKY High School get accepted in top 3 universities in Korea and Global because of some competitions in soft skill and hard skill like cheerleading, computing, and boxing.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, learning cannot be lacking in various subjects only. It is absolutely important to consider theoretical achievement in examinations, but it will be more beneficial if students can master both in academic and non-academic areas.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In 1976 , there was a \"Face\" dicovered on Mars. There is proof that it is there! As of the pictures taken in 1976, 1987, and 2001 .\n\nMany say it has looked like an Egyptian Pharoh. Some agree , and some don't . But whatever it is, it has grabbed the attention of the world !\n\nThe Mars \"Face\" Has become a huge pop icon ! In the story it says, it has starred in Hollywood films, appeared in books and magazines, it has even been on radio talk shows ! Something on a whole different planet , has the humans on Earth excited ! Wouldn't it be cool to see it in real life?\n\nSome people think it's Bona fied evidence of life on Mars ! Although , very few scientist have believed that the face was an alien atrifact . That would be a surprise to all of us ! Even though there have been many theroies of to what it might be , we aren't qutie sure. One day , I'm sure there will be more research done for the \"Face\".\n\nNASA has mentioned that even though there are pictures, they actually don't pass the \"Face\" very often . I wonder what it might look lke from different angles of pictures. The pictures have been taken on different occasions , but sometimes the face is hard to find . Also , there have been slight changes, not surprisingly, because the pictures are years apart ! I can't wait until they take more !\n\nWhat is the pictures actually showing us ? In conclusion , it shows Martain eqivalent to Messa , or Butte . Those are landforms common around the American West . For many people it reminds them of the \"Snake River Plain of Idaho\". What does it remind you of ?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many students go to school with different facial expressions. What if it was possible to know exactly what they were feeling. Well now there is new technology called Facial Action Coding System. I believe that reading emotional expressions with this system will be valuable to schools.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is a computer software that can recognize emotions. This could be really helpful in the classroom. In the passage it says \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This is saying that if the comuter recognizes you are becoming confused or bored it will switch the lesson up so that you are more interactive. This would also help the students so they can stay on track and pass their classes.\n\nIf schools could know what the students are feelings I think that it would be so much easier too teach. I believe that the Facial Action Coding System is needed in schools. It should honestly be used all over the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso talks hard raised immagrant parents getting cruddy jobs low pay home home memories In opinion mood happy joyful based much talks home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When trying to mass produce smart, driverless cars you need stupid people that hate the world to make up some stupid reason as to why you can't possibly have overly used, technological cars.\n\nMy position on driverless cars is I think they are making you seem as though you are not knowlegable enough to drive like a normal human being. \"Without the option of smarter roads, manufacturers turned to smarter carsbut how much smarter did the cars need to be? For starters, they needed a whole lot of sensors.\" They are telling us that we clearly can't make smart roads. Is there actually such thing as a smart road without the use of modern technology to make the roads smart? No. Why are they saying that roads aren't smart? It's not like we can make concrete have a sustainable life to get it an education and to become smarter.\n\nHowever, on how technlogically advanced we are getting we might just have some cars that can drive themselves. That would be pretty awesome in my opinion, but that is also telling us that we need to have fewer brain cells on how to operate a car. \"Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.\" his is telling us that at least one human needs to be in the car at all times to insure that the car doesn't do something stupid. When humans don't need to drive I could see a lot more accidents happening than when we were actually driving and had the knowlege on how to drive and be safe on the roads.\n\nIn conclusion the big car companies are still going to try to be the first ones to make a self driving car. When they do make the first car I want to see the car not get in a wreck within the first month of a teen driving it to change my opinion if they get in more wrecks or not.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is it really worthy to spend a life time just to see Venus? In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author supports the idea of studying venus is a worthy pusuit despite the danger because there's a safe conditions, its not easy to go to Venus and explore but its a worthy timimg and NASA working on making a mechanical computers.\n\nFirst reason of how the author supported his idea of studying venus is worthy by telling the reader about the saftey confitons that are avalible. according to the article it stated \"NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow seientists to float above the fray\" another qoute is \"a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way\" these two quotes are explaing the saftey conditions that are avalible for those who wants to explore Venus.\n\nAnother reason of how the supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers is by explaing its not easy and telling us that peering at Venus provide only limited insight on ground conditions. according to the article the author stated \" however, peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions beacouse most of light cannot penetrate the sense atmosphere, rendering standard froms of photography and videography ineffective\" another quote is \"not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" these two qoute expalined how the author support the idea of the text beacouse he's telling us what it takes and how.\n\nFinally, the author supported the idea of studying Venus is worthy pursuite despit the dangers by telling us about the new invintation of the mechanical computers. According to the text, the author stated \"NASA is working on other approaches to study Venus\" anthoer quote is \"Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers\" these two quotes means that new stuff coming up to make it easier and safer to vist Venus just like the author idea of studying Venus.\n\nIn conclusion, the author supported the idea of studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers by explaining to the reader in the article that there's a safe conditions, its not easy but worthy and finally by telling us about the new invitions to make it easy and safe visit to Venus. so Venus might be a worthy spending time to go see!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Computers days made positive changes every day lives People made beter connections family friends even ability make new ones While social networks great computers also make work extremely easy proffesionallooking They also perfect skill handeye coordination But mind computer truly harmful helpful device Sometimes wonder long lost friends relatives gone Well computer internet access easily contact great social networks I hear time everyone reunions made friends reunited And reuniting friends also make new ones simple click button Is nt making friends reconnecting easy Computers nowadays offer wonderful software make making slideshows projects reports far easier I remember making best friend back grade All take pictures upload laptop added captions pictures We amazing professional job project received A Though I understand process computerusage people hardly find time outdoors technological advance enhance handeye coordination Imagine You re bat baseball game strikes balls count Everyone cheering The pitcher pitches ball wham You swing bat hit homerun Do know skill used hit ball That s right handeye coordination So everyone wondering sort effect computer remember easy work Also think back baseball player You know one hit homerun using handeye coordination But importantly remember easy would contact ones love keep closest The computer positive advance society everyone assured", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What type of face do you have ? Are you like me , Regan , and have\n\na terribly ugly face , or are you like my friend , Paige , who has a beautiful face ? Beautiful , ugly ,\n\nor anthing inbetween , I doubt you have a face mars . The ' face ' on mars is despite popular beilef not an actual face or aliens\n\n, but a natural landform .\n\nI know this because according to ' Unmasking the Face on Mars ' , ' NASA'S Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet , snapping photos of possible landing sites for its sister ship Viking 2 , when it spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face ' This proves its a natural landform and not naturally a real human face or aliens\n\n, because the word '\n\nlikeness' comes from the word ' like ' , for example of if i\n\nsaid ' Mcgary Middle School is like Cedar Hall Community School ', I'm saying Mcgary Middle School is similar to Cedar Hall Community School , not Mcgary Midde School is Cedar Hall Community School . The aticle also states ' There must have been a degreee of suprise among mission controllers back at the Jet Propulsion when the face appeared on their monitors ' proving my point that some people , such as the people at the Jet Propulsion Lab in this instance , thought it to was a face at first . Eventually though , they though it though and ' Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa , common enough around Cydonia , only this one had unusual shawdows that , made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh ' . Later NASA released a photograph of\n\nthis shocking story ' The caption noted '' huge rock formation . . .\n\nwhich resembles a human head\n\n. . . formed by shawdows giving the illusion of eyes , nose and mouth ' the word ' resembles tellls me it was not an actual human's eyes , nose , or mouth , NASA wanted to give attention to the red planet and this most ' certainly did ! ' It has starred in a Hollywood filn , appeared in books , magazines , radio talk shows ----- even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years ! ' 25 years in an exteremly long time it's nearly two times the age I am ! . Some people have supersitions about the face , ' Meanwhile , defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilzation on Mars' probaly to calm all this madness . Photographing the popular face became a priority to NASA ! ' '' We felt this was important to taxpayers , '' explained Jim Garvin , chief scientist for NASA's Mars Exploration Program . , although I higly doubt my mom , a taxpayer , would agree . ' And so on April 5 , 1998 , when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time , Michael Marlin and his Mars Orbiter Camera ( MOC ) team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the orininal Viking photos ' , it was amazing accomplisment ! The extraornidany photo showed us that 'There was no alien monument after all . ' Some were not happy , with this in discovery . ' The Face on Mars is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April\n\n98'\n\n----- a cloudy time of year on the red planet ' A lot of the unhappy people though ,it was too cloudy . ' Perhaps , said skeptics , alein markings were hidden by haze ; So , trying to please the skeptics they tried to take off once again , but isn't easy '' In fact , Its's hard work .'' Mars Global Suveyor is mapping spacecraft that normally looks straight down and scans the planet like a fax machine in narrow 2.5 km - wide strips .' However the proceded ' Nevertheless , on April 8 , 2001 ---- a cloudless summer day in Cydonia ----- Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look ' , and it was amazing ! ' '' Marlins' team captured an extraordinary pciture using the camera's absolute maximun resolution . '' 'Certain to statsify ! The picture was fantabolous ''' As a rule of thumb , you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size ' So you could see verything in fantasic detail !", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that involving students in the educational process has become a new trend.Whilst some individuals accept this notion, others may disagree.I am on the belief that pupils' opinions are quintessential but they may misuse this situation.Therefore ,this essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages,follow by a reasonable conclusion.\r\n\r\nOn one hand,participating educators in developing education can play a crucial role in many ways.They can help their teacher to find out methods which are convenient for them.Moreover,most of these students are expert in computer games ,so they can assist their instructors in designing educational games. For instance,teachers can get benefit from students' ideas,thoughts and in order to enhance the quality of education. Therefore,instructors should put students' opinions into consideration.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand,interfering in the education policy may cause many harms; students may express their views in a rude way.They want to alter the learning into funny situations .To cite an example,many cases have proven that teachers lose their motivation if they receive many bad comments from their students .Thus,what can be said here is that students 'opinions may embarrass their instructors and may bring negative impacts.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion,what can be indicated here is that enhancing the educational process is vital.Not only students can participate in this development but also the whole community.I believe that the role of teachers and students are complementary to each other.Both of them have the same aim .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea of a world where no one would buy a car because no one would need one sounds silly, but it could very well be the way of the future. New things are developing each day and more people are jumping on board with the world of technology. The idea of a driverless car forming a public transportation system is one of the biggest ideas in the technology industry. Being able to create a system of transportation that would elimate the use of other cars is a big step in society and the world we live in today.\n\nThere are many ups and downs to this idea of a driverless car. On the positive side of this idea there would be less pollution in the air and people who have disabilities could get to and from places more easily. But, with these good things also come some negative aspects. The cost of transportation would probably go up, even though the car is driverless there would still probably be a fee to the transportation just like a taxi service. Even though the car would have been tested to make sure it can drive with out wrecking there would still be the fear the car would wreck for the passengers aboard the car so it probably wouldnt be that great of an expierence. Also, the teenagers of the world would be giving up the freedom they have waited there whole life to be able to do, if the world souly depended on the driverless car and no one would buy cars anymore teenagers would not have to oppertunity to drive like they have always wanted.\n\nEven with the new technology of this driverless car there would still be people who would not be on board with it. What about those people? Would they still be able to buy themselves a new car? Or would manufacturers stop selling them altogether and just start making different models of the driverless car. For now in our world it is better to stick with technology we have and wait to introduce a newer and unfamilar form of technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I can remember countless times when I needed to be somewhere, but I had nobody to take me. The future is here, and an era where driveless cars is upon us. As a nondriver, I think this invention would be very useful, it would help busy parents do their duties for them, like picking up a child from school. It also feeds those lazy teenagers as they rarely want to move or do anything that requires activity. I am deffinetly for driverless cars\n\nDriverless cars are not exactly ready to be manufactered because there are some things cars cannot do that the driver would have to do for them. In paragraph 2 it says that cars that exsist today aren fully driverless because they alert you in tricky situations, like pulling in and out of driveways, or dealing with complicated traffic issues. Certainly this is just a minor problem compared to the actual driving part, and is planned to be figured out in the near future.\n\nBMW made an outbreak in 2013 when they announced the deleopment of their ¨Traffic Jam Assistant¨. This vehicle can drive at speeds up to 25 mph, but there are special sensors that make it mandatory for the driver to keep both hands on the wheel at all time. Human drivers must remain alert, which makes it safer for those around them if something were to go wrong. Cars are alerting the drivers by vibrating seats, and light sflashing on the windsheild, catching the attention of the driver.\n\nAlthough it would be very helpful and easier for everyone to have a driverless car, it could also be more dangerous. Of course the cars would alert us when we need to take the wheel, but most of the population is involved in their cell phones, what if someone ignores it, or misses the alert of signal? This is why as of now, most states have a law against being able to even test computer-driven cars. Why is everyone slowly relying on technology to do all our work?\n\nCar companies have big plans for the future. In parapgraph 10 it states that Tesla has projected a 2016 reliese for a car capable of driving on autopiolet 90 percent if the time. Other companies such as Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and NIssan plan to have driverless cars in the year 2020. As of now there are litlle glitches in the plans and laws would have to be figured out, as well as the safetly and reliance of the people in the car. The future is upon us and we better be buckled up and ready for the ride, driver or not.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think we should visted other plantes. I feel like this because maybe it will just just other plantes but it might help the eath to. I think we will find things on other that will have the world shocked. I also do think it is worth going to venus to see whats over there are to try to get things back that they will be have something to bring to bring back home. Or also i feel like they should send people over there to see if there is life or others things that might live over there. So I think it is worth to pursiut going to venus even though it might be dangers but I think it will be better when you come back and come back and tell people about how venus is and also your name will last in history evn after you die your name will still be known as the first ever to went to venus. It will also help us on our back history like wars and thing like that. It also help us look back on old technology.\n\nOne reason why I feel like we it is worth going to venus is because we will be able to look back on our old technology. I feel like that will be grate because our world is becoming more about technology everyday so that will be able to help us out an lot. The text states\"Another project is look back to an old technology called mechanical computers\" So go over ther and find this technology it will help us understnad more about back then. So all of the details we don know now we will know\n\nAnother reason why it is worth it is because we will have have good devices that whelped us back in our old wars witch means the device could help us win a big time war. The text states\"these devices wewe first envisoned in the 1800s and palyed an important role in the 1940s during would war 2\" This is important because this mean during wa we will be able to go back and used the things we used to.\n\nSo these are the reason why i feel like it is worth going back to to venus. It will help us out now big time time even though it is old.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author conclude story paragraph come back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese returned hibiscus budding I take test She realize another chance pass test spring blossoms begin garden spring returns", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the technology would be good for classrooms. It would help the teacher to probaly not get into a shouting match or altercations with students. It would also be good for the students know what type mood the teacher is in.\n\nThe technology could solve so many problems in the classroom. The only problem would be when to use the computer. I imagine the compucter isn't little either.So at the begining of class you probaly couldn't just use it. The technology does work though because it read Mona Lisa's face, and the painting is hundreds of years old. Us as humens make the same calculation everyday.Like in paragragh 5 I could tell if one of my friends isn't in the best mood just by how their facial expressions are. It would create less problems for the students and teachers.Like i explained in the intro it could help us students and teachers help each other out, because anybody could be having any type of day.\n\nWe could help other feel better about what's going on in their life, help others if they don't quite understand,etc. The only thing that needs to happen next is to make the technology more portable, and easier to access. Other than that lets make this happen so we evolve as a country, and as the human race.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In all of the science and engineering around the globe this product can be very useful for many human beings. These masterpieces can also be just another old machine that was made for nothing. I do not see many people buying the Facial Action Coding System and believing in its capabilities.\n\nFor most machines designed in the modern day technololgy, they can be very high tech and up to date. After reading the passage \"Making Mona LIsa Smile\" I wonder when this technology was discovered and when it was engineered. Therefore if the Facial Action Coding System was engineered in past decades that machinery could use an update and that update could carry the porgramming needed to discover those inside feelings.\n\nAlthough this inovaltion is very useful in a way there are some flaws. For example most people use their inside expression for their outside expression and show their true emotion. The machinery can also miss inside expressions that are not expressed through emotion. For example for some humans like myself we can feel one way in our heart but show a different way in our attitude.\n\nWhile reading the passage the author strategically described the emotions of Mona Lisa in the first sentence of the article. The author described the painting by Leonardo da Vinci as \"eighty-three precent happy, nine percent disgusted, six percent fearful, and two percent angry.\" This description given by the machinery is very descriptive and full of detail. Let alone how do you get this amount of research from a painting. If anyone can scan a painting and describe the exact feeling shown, then what could come back as information from a human?\n\nWhile all machinery can be very useful in a helpful amount of ways they can also have flaws. Although with the right programming and technology the inovation can overcome its flaws. After reading this passage I believe that the Facial Action Coding System is very useful and can be the next big discovery.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people think technology can change the world or make it better, but sometimes doing things the old-fashioned way works better. Old-Fashioned ways built this country, new technology can be dangerous, and less spending money on new technology can help save money to spend on things people really need are all examples of why technology to read peoples emotions in a classroom is a bad idea. What we really need are good teachers that are willing to teach and make students smarter and more educated. Technology can help becoming more educated, but people really need human interaction with their teachers and peers.\n\nOld-fashioned ways built the country that we love and respect today. The people that got this great country running in the right way didn't need fancy technology to help thim. They used human interaction and hard work. Technology that would read people's emotions might be a good tool but what should really be happening is the teachers shoud reconize things like this and take action. It's a problem that the teachers in today's world don't always reconize that their students aren't following a lesson or are bored and confused. The teachers rely on technology to teach the students, when what the students really need is a good teacher who will interact with them and give them a good lesson that the student will get excited for.\n\nNew technology like the Facial Action Coding System can be very dangerous. There are people these days that have ways to hack into people's computers and stalk them. This system that Dr.Eckman may be a very advanced study and very helpful but there are bad people in this world that take advantage of systems like this. Hackers could easily get into the system and be able to stalk the peoples faces and know what they look like through the FACS. Most parents in this world would want the best safety for their children, and the FACS is not the safest thing parents can give their children.\n\nLess spending on technology like the FACS can give people extra money to spend on things that really matter. If schools in America bought these systems they would be spending large sum of money to get these systems for the students and teachers. Instead, the schools could use the money that they would spend on the FACS and use it for starting new programs in the schools that interest more students. Another thing the schools could use that money for is getting teachers that are excited to come to work everyday and want to teach the students and want the students to get a good education.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is a good idea but it may not be safe for students, it could cost a lot of money that could be used for better things, and old-fashioned ways, unlike high tech days, built this country and the country was running great. There are better ways for people to find out the feelings and expression of students during class. Ways to find that out are having good teachers that try and fill the needs of students who aren't enjoying the lesson or who aren't understanding the lessson. We need to think of better ways to find emotional expressions than to use technology like the Facial Action Coding System.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My name is Kavontae Anderson & i am against these driverless cars. The cars are controlled by technology and basically robots. If you have a driverless car they are going to be focused on one thing, and thats getting you to where you hvae to go. That is not the only thing a good driver should be focused on. When you drive, not only do you have to focus on where you're going, you should focus on the other cars around you because you don't know what kind of drivers are out there. The fancy cars may drive by there self and have cameras but will that stop them from getting into an accident? A car can swerve over so quick and the cameras may not even notice.\n\nWhenever they allow driverless cars in most states, its going to create aot of work for the goverment. You have to create new laws, and you would have to qualify for those laws. The best way to keep it is like we have now. We now have cars that may stop and park on their own, and personally that seems to be enough for me. Why would someone want to spend money on a robot car that just drives on its own? The only things thats doing is just making people wanna text while their car is being operated by something they don't even understand. The first reason people will most likely be in danger is the fact that they are going to feel like they don't have to do anything but just sit there. Whenever you have to just watch the rode it can get boring and you might wanna watch a movie on your phone but if you look down you might get a warning to take contol and something happens before you can even look up. Then whose fault will that be? Thats only going to get the car companies sued because the people who bought the cars are gonna be injured and want to blame the car company for warning them too late.\n\nCars that require drivers are better, they offer more and if you drive somewhere you can go the way you want to unlike the driverless cars, they might take you a longer way than what you want. If you drive by your self YOU can take any short cut that you want. GM has created cars that have seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger. Some people may get scared easily and a vibrating seat when the car is silent and their mind is on something else can create a panic attack, then what happens? The car and the driver can be at risk all because the seat scared them. I think that if you want to have a driverless car you should just call a taxi so you can sit in the back and have someone else drive for you. If they create driverless taxis that will cause alot of people to lose their job and that will make the crimerate to go up because they might find another job and it's gonna make them angry and wanna take their frustration out on other people.\n\nWhen someone buys a driverless car they might have to take a class on that to teach them how to work with the cars operating system and thats doing too much. The point that i am gettin at is that if you need a liscense to drive and they come out with these driverless cars that a waste of your learning skills and people shouldn't even have to go through that if they are going to make you get a driverless car thats so pointless because you should have to have rquirements to operate one, and if they don't have any then i am going to stick with my arguement because self driving is more traditional and that's the way it should be.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear In world today everyone useing computers Computers positive effect people They teach handeye coordination give people ability learn faraway places people even allow people talk online people Today computers like worlds biggest book knowledge everything need know computer You look faraway places zap theres everything need know write front Computers fast easy everyone use Today kids addicted computers everyday There many websites kids teens go like facebook ect websites kids young ten years old chatting friends putting pictures Thers also webchat websites allow use webcame talk people anywhere world Computers great way get touch people Everyone computer home today", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe author concludes paragraph like heshe wanted show important message audience The message author trying get across even though didnt pass test going try Next year Ane example exact quote in spring snow melts geese return hibiscus budding I take test again This I think author concludes story like", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you like to have a robot car? That's what a driverless car basically is. I'm all for the idea of not having to drive anywhere and just ride. If the cars are safe then why not have one? Also if you're not comfortable on that road then you can take control of the car and lastly with a driverless car you can do other things while on the road.\n\nEveryone knows that car wrecks are dangerous and often times lethal. So everyone knows that before automatic cars are released they have to be wreck proof. That can be done by using a lot more sensors and cameras on the car. If you look at Google's automatic car for instance, they have driven it over five-hundred thousand miles and there haven't been any accidents. That shows that it's already pretty safe but I don't think many people would be satisfied with \"pretty safe\". There is still no rush on the automatic car to release either so there many years to further develop and engeneer these cars to perfection.\n\nNext, say you were on a road that you're not used to and it looks kind of dangerous and you don't really trust the automatic car. You can take control of the car and drive it by yourself. When you are driving the car manually the car will still give tips and warnings such as if you're about to back into something or an incoming car. This would be really important for most people because sometimes your insticts tell you you need to drive the car instead of somebody else. This would put a lot of people's minds to ease about automatic cars.\n\nLastly say you're on your way to school and you didn't finish your homework and it's due first period. You could maybe use the time on your way to school to finish that homework. Automatic cars could eliminate the risk of texting and driving which would eliminate more wrecks and accidednts and also save more lives. You could be more engaged in conversations, put on make up, and just scroll through your feed on social media. This would make the roads safer for everyone.\n\nSo, how would you like to have an automatic car? There are so many reasons why I would want to have one. They sure seem quite safe, you can also take control of the car at any time if nessasary, and lastly do some extra things while the car is driving. These automatic cars will be coming in the future and they will be popular.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Yes, many people do think that the \"Face on Mars\" was a monument created by aliens, possibly creating a sign of some sort. However, this is not true. What you think is the \"face\" is actually a natural landform. This natural landform may appear to look like a face, but why?\n\nThe landform looks like a face becuase of the shadows that hit the landform in certain areas. \"... this... had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh (2).\" It makes it look somewhat like a face. \"...a huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth (3).\" Another reason why the landform looks like a face is becuase our eyes, that play tricks on us, may make it seem real that it is a face. Such as illusion that make it appear that the landform looks like a face that is staring up at the camera on Mars. Many poeple, however will still ask for more evidence that the landform is not alien artifact.\n\n\"...Mars Oribiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the origional... photos... when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing... a natural landform. There was no monument at all (7).\" \"What the picture actually shows in the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the American West... That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars (12).\" So the landforms that you are seeing are actually common along the American West. They don't just pop up out of nowhere. They have been seen before. It's not like it is a first thing that scientists are just discovering.\n\nThis evidence proves that there is no alien monument on Mars, it may appear to look like it. But scientists have proved that it is only a natural landform, created naturally, on Mars. Not an alien monument that was created as a sign by aliens on Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you seen the Face on Mars? It was twenty five years ago when NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling Mars and snapped a photo of a landform that looked much like a human face. We, NASA, have noticed many people made conspiracy theories about the Face being made by aliens. We assure you this is not true. NASA wishes that there was an acient civilization on Mars that constructed the Face. The Face is a natural landform.\n\nThe Face is not an alien monument. Eighteen long years after the first mission and the first photograph was taken, Mars Global Surveyor (MGS) arrived at the Red Planet in September, 1997. Chief scientist for NASA's Mars Exploration Program, Jim Garvin explained that we felt this was important to taxpayers, so we photographed the Face as soon as we could get a good shot at it. On April 5, 1998, MGS finally flew over the Face and snapped a photo ten times shaper than the orginal. This photo revealed a natural landform. If aliens did create the Face, there would be other clearer signs of alien work. For example, there would be huts, small shack figures or even Egyptain-style pyramids. Therefore, there was no alien monument after all, but not everyone was satisfied, so in 2001, NASA got another photo of it, much clearer and closer this time. It was still just a natural landform.\n\nNASA went through a lot to get the three photos of the Face. The first one in 1976, the second in 1998, and the third in 2001. These three photos have shown everyone very clearly that the Face on Mars is a natural landform. Some even say it reminds then of a butte or mesa, landforms common around the American West. In conclusion, the Face on Mars is, in fact, a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Should NASA take unneeded dangers to study Venus? I personally think that they should do as many studys that they feel is needed. After reading the passage i learned that ''Venus, sometime called the ''Evening star,'' is one of the brighest points of light in the night sky'' After NASA studyed Venus they discoverd a lot about the planet and how it works and what measurs they would have to take to discover Venus. Venus is also called Earth's ''twin,'' and is also the closest planet to earth based on its size. The Author in paragraph 3 explains some of the dangers of Venus. The atmosphere around venus is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide and that planet has a temputare of approxmitly 800 degrees Fahrenheit. These condishions alone would make it very Dangerious for space men and women to even come close to exploring the planet. That's not even talking about the pressure on the planet, 90 times greater than what we would experience on Earth. After revewing the facts and Danger of trying to explore Venus it would be may to dangerious to even try.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" tries to explain the several complications of sending a mission to Venus. They provide tons of factual evidence about the geography and climate of Venus. They give many good points, but ultimately fail at their task to convince readers that Venus exploration is worth it. Along with a failed point, this author tends to go off on side-tangents that have minimal importance to the story.\n\n\"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" is an article about the positives and negatives of trying to land a spacecraft on Venus. He has a decent build-up into his first point while giving more and more small facts about our second planet. Venus is likely the most similar planet to Earth, with its rocky surface, hills, and mountains, but it has much more limiting factors to deter us from traveling there. It has terrible weather in comparison to Earth, with acidic carbon dioxide filling 97% of the atmosphere and with heats of 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The authors gives plenty of information about this planet, most of it relevant to the topic at hand, and therefore succeeds in teaching you about Venus.\n\nEven after succeeding in information given, the author fails to promote the idea that travel to Venus is worth all the cons. They write about NASA wanting to know as much as possible about one of our closest neighbors, but don't give enough reasons as to why it's worth it. With acidic atmospheres ripping through machinery, technologies don't stand a chance on the Venusian surface. With the science that we have, the most we can hope for is a jet-like expirience, flying several miles above surface so that the pressure doesn't crush us instantly. Venus is additionally prone to constant volcanoes, earthquakes, and storms deadly enough to take out machinery. Given all this information, it seems like the author is trying to deter us from missions to Venus instead of promoting it, as they planned.\n\nThe final point to take into consideration when reading this article is the authors' side-tangents. Multiple times, the author delves into a side-topic as opposed to continuing on with the topic of Venus exploration. They start off the article with two sentences that have no relation to the story, yet confuse readers. The sentences are about Venus' nickname, the \"Evening Star\", and how even though it is a planet, it is still called this. This is completely irrelevant to exploration, as everyone knows it is a planet, and the \"Evening Star\" name is never mentioned again. Later on in the passage, the author rambles on about World War II-age computers and how they functioned properly even before the digital age. Once more, this is slightly irrelevant and does not contribute to the story at all except to add another paragraph instead of focusing on the specifics of how NASA is using them to help with Venus.\n\nOverall, this article about Venus is less than \"stellar\". The author attempts to prove why Venus missions are a neccesity, but doesn't quite get their point across. They provide great knowledge and information, despite being off-topic occasionally. This article is full of great facts, but the delivery is off and could have potentially been a better read if the author was on the other side of the argument, which has more proof to back it up. All in all, the author does not support their idea the best.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To Whom it may concern ,\n\nYou should keep the Electoral College because it was a fair and easy way of voting.\n\nThe founding fathers established the constitution as a compromise between the election for the president by the vote of congress and the electionof the president by popular vote of citizens.\n\nThe elctoral college process consists of the selection of electors. The meeting where the electors vote for the president and vice president, and counting the electoral votes by congress.\"The District of Columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the electoral college.\"For this reason the word \"state\" also refers to the Distruct of Columbia.\n\nWhat's wrong with electoral college? \" Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president.\" So who picks the electors in the first place? \"It depends in some states. Sometimes state conventions, sometimes the state party's central committee, sometimes the presidential candidates themselves.\"Most voters think the electoral college is unfair.\"The winner-takes-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the \"swing\" states.\"\n\nIn conclusion, I think the Electoral college is fair, but others don't. I guess we wont know unless we vote on it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I agree with the former opinion that sports positively have the strongest character for education cooperation in group and it is based\r\n\r\nFirstly there are multiple things which students need to think about in each scene while playing sports. For example, in volleyball, players are demanded to predict where the ball is flying to while thinking about the strategy of the group and checking where the other players including teammates are at the same time. Moreover, the situation is changing every second. To get more practical experience and situations, it is simple that students can go through deeper and more complex socialize skills by playing sports, therefore, sports are the best way for getting the ability to associate within the group. Additionally, thousand of types of sports are played around the world and the variety of them are countless, it can be part of entertain for them of playing different type of sports.\r\n\r\nHowever, sports do not work for every student, the unkilled students can not have risen their association skill by this way, compared with killed students in sports. For example, Basket ball is one of the famous team sports around the world. It is common in the education platform and it is often played in classes. For the students who like to play basket ball, this is the valuable way to learn working as group, on the other hand the students who do not play well such as scaring balls, afraid of physical attacking and inexperience which are typical negative character of basketball even more sports. They have been losing their opportunities, furthermore, the experience of failure like incorporation with team mates let them believe that they have poor social skills. The sports do not cover with the all students.\r\n\r\nOverall, the sports have more prominent way of teaching how to build themselves in group even though the lacking of conscious to the students who do no prefere sports.Therefore, sports are the most practical way of teaching cooperation to students.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I strongly believe people should join and be a seagoing cowboy. If you like riding at sea and love animals this is a job for you. Have you ever wondered how other countries are? Or ever wnted to go to another country.\n\nWell now you have an opportunity to see lots of other countries.\n\nYou can save peoples lives. In some countries they don't have the food we do. The least we can do is help them get a boost. And some countries need animals so they can have food or transportation. It will give you a good experience. But if you get sea sick, ect. You are not fit for this job. Just think about if you were one of those people, no food, no animals,no transportation. You may think that you could be away from your family and it's a waste of time but think of it this way, there are other families out there just like you, hungry starving. Or could already be dead,lets not let that happen to any more families.\n\nThis is a one in a life time opportunity. You can save alot of lives from hunger. Afterwards once the animals are all unloaded you can have some fun. You can play baseball, volleyball, table tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling,games will make things seem quicker. You can also have a good feeling in your heart for helping others. Think about others, care about others.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everyone assumes that the best way of transportation is by a car. Teenagers dream of getting their license on their sixteenth birthday and maybe even getting a car. Most adults use cars to get to and from work, drive their kids around and do fun activites. But what people don't understand is that there are so many other alternatives that ultimately result in a happier and healthier planet. There are so many downfalls with driving and owning a car that many are now believeing that it is much more reasonable to just not own a car.\n\n\"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way\" (Rosenthal, line 6). Having cars stress people out and people don't even realize this. There are so many responsiblities that come with driving. No one enjoys sitting in long traffic jams. It is annoying and quite bothersome. Everyone gets so frustrated, nevermind the amounts of accidents that lead to injury and death from it all.\n\nIn Colombia there is a day once a year in which cars can not go on the road or they are served with a fine. This effort is to try to bring stress levels down and stop air pollution. \"Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day yesterday, leaving the street of this capital city eerily and devoid of traffic jams\" (Selsky, line 23). This idea promoted excersize and got people out and doing things in the community. The citizens clearly were not against this day or else they wouldn't have been acticve. \"Parks and sports centers also have bloomed throughout the city\" (Selsky, line 28). This just goes to show what driving does. It isolates people. Without all the cars, one is more willing to spend time outside and interacting with other people and since people were out and about more and enjoying the community, the area has gotten more presentable and pleasureable to be in. \"...uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic; and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up.\" (Selsky, line 29). Officals and shop owners are making more of an effort because everyone is more active and caring.\n\nIn Paris, the officals made an effort to try and clean up the cities pollution rates. They assigned a day where even number licensed plates could not be on the road and a day for odd numbered plate cannot be on the road or else they will be fined. \"Congestion was down 60 percent\" (Duffer, 14). If anything, it goes to show that the amount of cars on the road is absurb. 60 percent is more than half, that's a lot of traffic. Paris primarily uses diesel, causeing a lot more pollution in this busy city. \"Paris typically has more smog than other European capitals\" (Duffer, line 17). Paris is a very touristy area and people go in hopes to see a beautiful city. This project went so well that officals planned to continue it. \"The smog cleared enough Monday for the ruling french party to rescind the ban for odd-numbered plates on Tuesday.\" (Duffer, line 19). If officals planned to continue this idea, than it must be benifical in some way. If citizens just made an effort to not drive everywhere, than restrictions would not have to be mad. It's because of the amount of driving that is going on that officals have to get involved.\n\n\"...transportation is the second largest source of America's emissions...\" (Rosenthal, line 37) Motor vehicals cause so much danger to Earth. The amount of pollution is so high and dengerous. It is much easier to prevent than everyone believes. One could simply take the bus, ride a bike, only drive to work and needed places, walk, and even car pool. There are an abundant amount of ways to prevent so much pollution and stress. It's all over the world that this is an issue; Paris, Colombia, the United States, and many other places. \"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe . . . and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States. \" (Rosenthal, line 11). That is a lot. It isn't difficult to help prevent this.\n\nIn the long run, not driving would result in happier people anyways. Cars are so expensive that is would cause less aggravation and economic stress as well as the basic stress of just driving and being in traffic. Society could make the world so much cleaner and safer for the next generations. It starts now. Get a bike or a pair of walking shoes and start getting active in the community. Start making the changes now so it isn't forced by officals later. make the effort and show the next generations how life should be. This could lead to a much happier and healthier life style.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One time I patient I dont want birthday party So mom dad talked So mom I went got play almost games didnt went play dum ones rode go carts twice went bought new video games new dirt biking gloves That time I patient I could something fun", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Natural Landform\n\nHave u every looked up at the clouds and seen all type of figures, shapes and probly even a face? There are many of theories of aliens making\n\nlandforms on but, there is still no sign of life on the Red Plant. The Red Planet\n\nhas a history of 22 years of faces poping up on mars and so far, we have known about every one that has came up. Belivers has always\n\ntalked and angerd the govnerment on letting sectrits out on life on other planets so.... why would the NASA release four pictures of the faces, you be the judge. A theory is like a gess no better yet it is a accurate gess that is basicly right on the trail of being right or true. Most people don't even try to even atempt to belive a conclusion if it has a theory on the title.\n\nScientists all over the world have came up with many ways to prove that there\n\nis no life to proving there is a posibility that a such thing is posible and can accure with proff. The way that scientist can have acurate hypothisises is by flying and scanning the planet with thermale or cooling system that scientist have masterd today. A theory is something that can be true or false by using high studies of reserch but, in most cases there are more likely syfy stories but with real acuranceses in every day life. NASA has released four pictures of the faces so in conclusion NASA has even better proven their self and company to have nothing to hide. NASA no better to let out information that will cause a war or upwarw in todays society.\n\nNASA knows what will happen if serious information about anything war or life related in general gets out to the public or world cause they seen it all and heard it all from day one. I do belive that there is life out there but no where near earth because of the robots, camera, and drowns we have today, we would have been seen something by know. The teloscope that NASA have in there labes to day can see all the way into another dimision to see more planet but can't see millions of miles way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Their are still tons of people that think the mesa on the planet Mars is a face created by aliens. They think this because when NASA took the pictures of it everyone that saw it thought it was a face. Nobody thought it was just a natural landform. When it was just a natural landform called a mesa.\n\nThe reason that it is impossible for that mesa on Mars to actually be a face created by aliens is because the new cameras with a high-resolution picture looks nothing like a face just a landform. The first picture was took way back inn 1976. They didn't have cameras with th picture quality that we have now so the mesa really looks like it could be a face. But then in 1998 they took some more pictures of the face and it still kinda looked like a face but more like a landform. Then they took more pictures in 2001 with a camera that had high-resolution quality and then scientist proved that is was just a normal landform.\n\nBut their still was people that thought it was still a face the some aliens created even though scientist at NASA proved it was a mesa. But for some reason tons of people thought that NASA had something to hide. The mesa that people call the face on Mars has been in movies and newspapers because a lot of conspiracy theorists think that NASA is trying to keep the face a secret because they think nobody should know about even though the pictures prove that is just a normal landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever laughing something someone said began laughing harder joke person whose laugh almost humorous joke Then put good mood funny laughing occurred could world s worst mood Laughter cure almost anything bad mood crying re sad It also help make mood room brighter simply makes awkward moment disappear One bright day called asked I wanted long board get lunch Of course I wanted I m always typical order chocolate malt milkshake croutons ranch I jogged house block long boarded downtown On way I shared I good day far I needed cheered She feeling way When arrived excited get seated could catch others lives eat When walked inside noticed crowded seemed day waited table After getting seated noticed older couple sitting booth behind us kids school booth front us man women across aisle ordered strawberry milkshake burger fries I ordered usual After lady took order left I started telling reasons bad moods She bad mood friend treating right I bad mood friend mad something never happened We quite upset frankly laughing mood When sudden heard sounded like mixture goose s honking donkey s braying We turned around find lady s laughter I looked looked started busting laughing This went minutes straight We could believe sound like could come human s mouth probably loudest laugh I ve ever heard We also loved fact happening public place people around lady setting made fun I continued laugh lady laughing somehow started relieve bad moods started smiling little I could nt stop smiling laughing Laughter unusual way putting people good mood relieving bad moods Regardless laugh normal little chuckle unnatural sound coming someone s mouth laughter brings people together s great way turn awkward moment memorable moment Someone said laughter shortest distance two people person knew talking", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of this technology to read students emotional expressions is not valuable. The software may be incorrect on how a studnet is feeling or it may be a intrution of personal space/information. The software may stop emotional communication for sure and or communication period.\n\nThe software may not always be accuate and be wrong on some parts. As the text states in paragraph 1. \"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\". The way it gives percentages on how someone is feeling doesnt always mean thats what they're really feeling. Also when a software can recognize how a student is feeling it's sometimes a matter of invading personal information and/or thoughts. As the texts states in paragraph 5,\" For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\" connecting to \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\", in paragraph 6. If a student is having issues such as feeling sad or mad about something they should be able to come to a teacher or adult themselves rather than a computer pointing it out. The same technology may be a threat for people to actually connect on a emotional level and nonverbal at all. In paragraph 6, it states, \"The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive-for video games or video surgery.\" connecting to \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,\".\n\nThe creators of the software inlcuded some good examples on why we would need this. In paragraph 1 it states, \"For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on their face. Of course most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc.\". It is true some of us would have trouble reading someone if they were depressed or unhappy. It would be good to have that reassurance to make sure they are okay and prevent something from happening to them. The software would help students in the classroom when they are having trouble undertsading something and the teaher is not around. As in paragraph 6 states, \"A classroom computer could recogize when a student is becoming confused or bored.. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"\n\nOverall I feel the software is not a very good idea, due to lack of communication and accuracy. Although it has some good values in it, it wouldnt be a good way for humans to tell their emotions and communication through one another.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The study of the \"Evening Star\", or Venus, is a worthy pursuit for scientists and astrologists. Three main reasons that one could back up this claim is Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, long ago Venus was \"probably\" covered largely with oceans and could have supported varius forms of life, and the thought of being able to float over venus to study it.\n\nVenus was/is the closest in density and size to Earth. Following up on that claim, Earth and Venus are about the same, disregarding the fact that Venus has a surface temperature of 800 degrees and a carbon dioxide level of 97%.\n\nAstrologists and NASA believed it was a good idea to try and study Mars, even though it was closer to the sun than Venus. This caused for a huge breakthrough in science and finding water on the planet. So why shouldn't NASA try to study Venus, of course it will be hard but it will be worth it in the long run.\n\nVenus was once covered largely in oceans and could probably support various lifeforms in the past. Earth NOW supports various lifeforms and is largely covered in oceans. The study of venus can lead to the discovery of new animals, or even human-like creatures like us. Another reason why it would be a good idea to study the planet Venus is to find out why there is no longer oceans and what happened to the planet to either wipe out the ecosystem or the lifeforms. Venus is still considered to have a surface of rocky sediment, mountains, valleys and craters, just like Earth. Our sister planet is like a twin and with the right equipment NASA and astrologists could figure out a way to study and one day even land on Venus, as they did to mars.\n\nFollowing up on the last claim, NASA believes that witht the right equipment, in the near future they could send humans in a spacecraft to about 30 miles over the surface of Venus. \"tempuratures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar powers would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" This quote alone proves that it is a survivable voyage for astronauts to go to Venus and sit in the atmosphere to study it.\n\nIn conclusion, the author makes it clear that the pursuit to study Venus is a worthy voyage. The author says, \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidation endeavors.\n\nVenus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, long ago Venus was \"probably\" covered largely with oceans and could have supported varius forms of life, and the thought of being able to float over venus to study it are the three main reasons that this is a worth pursuit and could be a great experiment/ discovery for the human race and NASA.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear John Kerry, the senator for the state of Florida we must keep The Electoral College. Why do we need to keep it? we need to keep it because it is an important process that our founding fathers created, that is part of our constitution. Also, it was established as a compromise between election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. The electoral college process deals with peoples selections of the electors. It consists of 538 electors and their has to 270 votes to elect the president. We have a president and vice president without having the electoral college, it would be useless to have all these senators. We have a house of representatives that work extremely hard and it would be rude to get rid of the electoral college and changing elections by popular vote. Leave everything the way its going because the process works awesome and if you mess something up your going to lose your job being the state senator, or your going to get many letters, emails, possibly phone calls of hatred and more. That will not be good for you or your business so my suggestion as a citizen is to not make any changes. Once a statement or rule is in the constitution you cant just take it away or change it that will ruin everything. I mean... its your decision on what you want to do but if I were you I would listen to my opinion strongly. Well that is all I have to say so keep the electoral college and good luck.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist much confidence hes going hes gona get Having water", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The geese flying south winter hibiscus budding normal things Saeng The author wanted conclude story show Saeng felt comfort things acustomed Saeng wanted geese hibiscus feel comfortable taking driving test Saeng still longs home quite feel like fits us The hibiscus gives comfort feeling like home Vietnam Saeng still feels homesick wants things The plants green house along disappointment failing driving test bring emotional state In second last paragraph author talks feeling repetition Saeng seeing v formation Saeng feels winter comfort feeling see hibiscus geese flying overhead It says Saeng arrived nothing familiar Now gets feeling geese plants The author concluding saying Saeng take driving test winter ends good closing gives insight Saeng going", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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