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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear senator,\n\nMany people argue that the electoral system is unfair to the voters but it's actually the opposite of that. I mean for starters most voters are easily manipulated and indecicive, If we choose the vote by popularity method it'll cause more of a problem then what we have now, and lastly not many people actually care for voting.\n\n\"The mob is stupid\". This is what my 7th grade civics people told everyone. People are easily tricked. Just got a nazi germany for example. People belived in his philosophy and led to Germanys down fall. Anybody could appeal to anybodys needs. All you have to say is what the people want to hear. How you conduct yourself and how you talk is all you need to make some one on your side or to catch a vote. The electoral system is basically a back up defense in this type of a situation.\n\nIn addition, a \"popular vote wins\" election it'll cause' way more chaos than you could imagine. Like during the 2012 election obama only recieved 51.3% of votes. Can you belive that? Just 1.3% short was the opponent and you actually belive not only the people but Mitt Romney would accept his loss? He'd obviously demand for a recount and possibly even be calling so and so for being corrupt and it would be a wild two months if not four years .\n\nLastly, many people do not care for voting which not only decreases the number to manipulate makes it harder for an election to be one sided. About half of americas population actually vote on elections which actually increases the odds of tight races.\n\nTo wrap this up i belive the electoral system should be kept not only does it safeguard against the manipulation of the people it also helps keep elections smooth and run properly and prevents chaos.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think books music movies magazines etc removed shelves found offensive The reason I say little children willing read grown books types naked pictures words thats child vocabulary Then pic bad habbits use knowing words actually means Then I think music edited somer music cursing talking things young minded child children nt hear The music something children suppose listen things age group Next I believe movies censored days letting children watch every anything want Things doesnt control language CAPS I believe sahow needs blocked really say exclusive things show alot childern watch repeat every thing hear see show Finally magazines I say magazines neaked girls men covers pages magazines shows way much put things magazines look real actually I think etc used needed research homework children use enternet watch exclusive things listen bad things Inconclusion All together I think limit everything listen watch Because children pick everything hear see", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes ending I take test again meaning things going going happen next time peperd Saeng difficult time moving another country getting comfortable place mother suports go throught winter hibiscus bought symbol represent selfs text winter Hibiscus Minfong Ho shows biscus bougth wrost time went throug winter hibiscus nand last paragraph story express when snows melt geese return hibiscus budding thinking feature saeng vowed silently spring She cant wait winter waiting spring come", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When I universal studios I waiting long lines get rides I patient It take I never got mad impatient My dad I line dragon rollercoaster close next started raining lightning A lot people left ended front line We waited another hour two never stoped We forgot mom brothers left I patient whole time We went got line one new rides got since new line long We waited quit We eventually got ride realized wait worth went", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is no denying the fact that a number of employers consider focusing on social skills more than academic qualifications. \n\nOn the first hand , nowadays , several companies are searching for workers who had quite perfect cleverness in social abilities , while they expect that it is more significant than the person who had academic qualities . However , choosing a person with this kind of skills may return the company with fine results for it is own good. For example : if the employee got some social skills , he will be able to help his company to improve in being more famous and well noun in society . Farther more, raising the name of any company by using social skills could find and locate a superior position better than the other rivals in the business world. \n\nMeanwhile , on the other hand , others are more believers in the opposite side , they consider that academic qualification is more worthy than social skills , it might be an ability besides the first . However, companies normally need someone to do a specific job so that must be done by an expert person depending on the requirements such as the architect , no one else can do his work even if he got social skills .\n\nIn conclusion, after a careful analysis of both points of view, I am more agreeable with focusing on academic abilities because being someone experienced in any speciality is harder than getting expertise in social skills . Even more , in my opinion , each company approximately will be needed to have a worker with the helpful skills of society and somebody else expert in special academic quality.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Home The Blueprints Lives talks fashion designers life mood created author After parents imigrated Cuba Narciso greatful I always grateful parents love sacrifice para six Narciso believes Cuban heritage lot coming neighborhood full Spanish Cuban Italian imigrants All considered family He grateful life friends family support family given His parents shown lives teachings basis life Narciso greatful coming bringing old home Cuba new home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The reason why the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents is because of how interesting it is to examin when you are close to the planet itself. Essentially when thinking of traveling from and beyond, we should not be limited by dangers or even the doubts of such exploration, buy we should expand and exceed to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation that comes from exploring such subtances in space. The true reason for us to examine Venus is for the innovation and progress in science that comes from it and how Venus is the closet planet to have identical features as earth.\n\nEven if our sister planets are out of the question for examination due to dangerous conditions, astronomers are fascinated by Venus since it has the potential to be the most Earth-like planet in our entire solar system. The text states that, \"The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" This quote indicates that Venus has similar features to what Earth has; therefore, Venus is the nearest option when looking at planets that are similar to Earth and also the consideration that we have a pretty long time frame for space travel. There aren't many options for a safe and scientifically mission, so this is our best option for porductive wise for us in the space enviroment of exploring. This is one solid reason for the author to say that the trip to Venus would be a worthy pursuit, but would have dangers to it, but we will be able to expand our innovation in the science world.\n\nNASA has a plan to allow scientist to go to Venus with a blimp-like vechile which whould hover 30 feet above the Venusian landscape letting them examine the features of Venus. The quote provides, \"At thirthy-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth.\" The quote indicates that the scientists may feel toasty with that 170 degrees of Fahrenheit on them, but the pressure that is psuhed on the would be the equivalent of the sea level which is on Earth. Overall, these are not the easiest conditions, but it is survivable for humanss to live and stay productive in the task at hand. This is another solid reason for the scientist to travel to Venus and to expand there knowledge and space innovation as well, even with hazardous conditions that are presented during there examination.\n\nBy having the will and courage to travel and observe the features of this planet, which has the potential to be similar to the planet that we live on, Earth, we are able to expand our thoughts and innovation of space and able to progress in our space knowledge as a whole. Even though there will be dangers that are presented during the journey, you will be protected by science itself, with its blimps from NASA or the will for observation in comparing Earth and Venus's features. Overall, it is a worthy pursuit to examine and observe the potential to be the identical planet to Earth from its features.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I cant imagine a life or a point in time where in the future people could be driving driverless cars. Can you? I thinks its okay if some people who need help driving uses them or might own one, but for everyone? Not exactly how I see the world becoming better for everyone because of that. The world evolves in many ways with transportation already now in numerous ways. The bike lanes are everywhere, people run, walk, or jog places, theres Uber thats now pretty big. But why a driverless car? So now people can become so lazy they barley have to drive? From the age where your remembering to be in a car you cant wait to be the next person to be able to drive thats somehing I & many others agree shouldnt be taken away.\n\nA driverless car seems very possible within the next few years but I dont see any reasoning behind the fact that we dont need it. Maybe for older folks who have trouble or someone having so much money for one they just get one for the fact that they want to say that they have it. Also technicaly it's not even a \"driverless\" car. You still have to be awake, aware, & control it through tough spots like a car crash, & road work.\n\nIf your in a age where your getting a permit or you already have one dont you think when you was younger, before all that, that you couldnt wait to get your car & licaens. You would think of driving somewhere with someone if you prefer that out to eat or to a store littlle things that make you feel like you accomplished something. You'd miss it right? So why have a company tell you dont have that excitment for being a legal driver & showing you can do things, & share thier dream of just being able to sit in the car for however long with who ever your with just to sit there?\n\nEvolution is a big thing to be apart of in this generation but its really simple to do if you have that idea. If its big enough to turn people's heads to whatever your idea may be then you have this platform of doing so. Changing the way people now get around is a big industry. There's always compatition & there is always going to be better. Wouldnt you rather have to drive to all the places you go yourself or would you just sit in the car doing nothing waiting for your turn to drive? I would love to be able to drive now & I will be able to soon. Nothing is better than the feeling of doing it yourslef.\n\nSo dont waste thousands of dollars of your hard earn money on something you can just do yourself. There's no reason in investing in that. They're simplilar solutions to this problem than you think. So think back now can you imagine just being lazy sitting in your car waiting for your turn. I know i cant & I know I definetly wont be.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke's Point Of Veiw\n\n\"Come on! Please join with me!\" I begged. \"It will be so much fun!\"\n\n\"No. I don't want to. It seems boring.\" Sam said.\n\n\"Don and I are doing it. Wouldn't you want to help someone in need?\" I said.\n\n\"How about this, I will talk it over wiht my parents and see what they think, then I will make the final decision. Ok?\" he explained.\n\n\"Ok. Meet me at the Big Tree tomorrow at 3.\" The we bothed walked off.\n\nI really hoped that Sam would agree.\n\nWe would be like the three muskateers! I thought.\n\nDon, Sam, and I have been best friends since I could remember. DOn had already been my neighbor, so when Sam moved in a couple houses down we decided to start being friend swith him. I'm glad we did.\n\nDon and I have been apart of the UNRRA for a while now, and we were home for a brake. Our only mission while being home is to try and get people to join. We already got a couple, but we needed more. There is always work to be done on the ship.\n\n\"Hi Mom.\" I said walking into the kitchen. \"Dinner smells good.\"\n\n\"Good. How was your day?\" she asked. \"Anybody new recruited?\"\n\n\"Still working on Sam. He said he would tell me his final answer tomorrow.\" I told her.\n\nWe ate dinner and then cleaned the dishes off.\n\n\"Mom, is it ok if i go back out to town?\" I asked.\n\n\"Sure. Just be back before dark.\"\n\nI went to the common area because there is normally still a lot of people ther at this time eating, playing with animals, or little kids running around. I walked into the common and sure enough, people were there.\n\nAs I was walking, I felt a tap on my back.\n\n\"Looks like we had the same idea, Luke!\" It was Don.\n\n\"Yeah! So glad you're here. Have you gotten anyone?\" I asked.\n\n\"Yeah actually. Those men sitting over there talking.\" He pointed to 3 men chatting on a bench.\n\n\"Good job!\" I congradulated him. \"Sam and I are meeting at the Big Tree tomorrow for his final decision. He said he was going to talk it over with his parents tonight.\"\n\n\"Oh good. Let's go get some more people.\" he replied.\n\n\"Hello.\" I said to a man around my age petting his dog. \"I'm with the UNRRA group, the \"Seagoing Cowboys\" and I was wondering if you are interested in it.\"\n\n\"Hello, and sure. Tell me about it.\" he said, with a kind smile.\n\n\"What UNRRA stands for is the United Nations Relief and Rehabilition Administration and what we do is carry animals on ships to different places. FOr example, we went to Greece and unloaded there. We carry horses, young cows, and mules. We also have spare time on the ship. We do table tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, readong, whittling, and we can play volleyball and baseball.\" I explained.\n\n\"That sounds very exiting!\" Where do I sign up?\" he askeed.\n\nI handed him a paper. \"Put your adress, first and last name, and age on here. We leave in a week to head bak c out, so in a couple of days someone will show up and say if you are drafted or not.\"\n\n\"Thanks!\" He said after signing the paper.\n\nIt was getting dark, so Don and I decided to head home together. We talked about small things like where we might go nest, how long we will continue doing this, and we also talked about other jobs we might want.\n\nI got home and went to my room. It was a long day, so I went to bed shortly after.\n\nI woke up to the sun peering into my room through the window. The house already smelled like blueberry muffins.\n\n\"Good moring, sweetie.\" my mom greeted.\n\n\" Good morning, Mom. Muffins smell good.\" I said.\n\n\"Eat up.\" She put a plate in front of me with 2 muffins. I devoured them pretty quickly.\n\nAt 3 I am meeting Sam for his decison. I hope he decides to do it.\" I said.\n\n\"Me too. It would be fun for the three of you.\"\n\nA little later I took the papers of all the people I have gotten to my boss. He lived right in town. It took me about 10 minutes to get there.\n\nI knocked on his door.\n\n\"Hello Luke!\" he said.\n\n\"Hey Mr. Kyle. I brought you some more papers of people.\" I told him.\n\n\"Great!\" I will look through them right now actually.\" he exclaimed.\n\n\"I might have one more later today also.\" I said, getting exited.\n\n\"Wonderful. COme back and let me know, alright? he smiled.\n\n\"Will do.\" I walked back to the sidewalk.\n\nI went to the library, the market, and the barn just to kill time. It eventually became 3, so I walked to the Big Tree. Sam was already there.\n\n\"Hey Sam!\" I Greeted him.\n\n\"I'll do it!\" he exclaimed.\n\n\"Really?\" I asked.\n\n\"Yeah.\" he replied.\n\n\"Great!\" Let's go to Mr. Kyle.\" I said.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \" Driveless Cars Are Coming,\" gave me supportive facts about the idea of driveless cars. I am against the development of these cars. Reason why I am against this development is because of the negative aspects of the safety issues, purpose, and the law.\n\n\"If traffic laws change, new law will be needed in order to cover liability in case of an accident.\" the author pointed out a good point that has to be made before these development of these cars hit the roads. \"If technology fails then who responsiblity is it the drivers or the manufacter,\" driveless cars would bring a downfall of the company if technology fails and more accidents occur and more law suites would be against them.\n\nDrivers wouldn't be more aware of thier surroundings anymore instead of paying close attention to the roads just in case your car glitches they will be distracted by thier phones instead or maybe puting on make up. Texting and driving is the most deadly distraction there is when it comes to driving , with the driveless cars that gives them a little lead way to do so and not paying attention to the roads.\n\nWhat is the purpose of a driveless car? \"Why would anyone want a driveless car that still needs a driver?' If manufacters want to make this devlopment by improving the technology world these questions have to be anwser. How are these cars impacting the world besides half of the payment on fuel. \"Some manufactures hope to do that by bringing in- car entertainment,\" driving is suppose to be serious many lives are at danger each day because of a vehicle weather your in the car, outside a vehicle, or even beside it anything can happen in matter of seconds if drivers don't have controll or even paying atttention.\n\nRoad conditions such as construction or even bad weather I wouldn't want my car on cruise mode I would full control in case the roads are slick. If these driveless cars have great sensors like they say it would be a good idead but other than that I don't think it will be a safe idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is no doubt that people are becoming interested in discovering places they in. This information can be gathered by many ways which would be discussed in this essay.\r\n\r\nThe main reason for finding information is financial security as more and more people try to buy an apartment for a property. It’s very important to know what is the history of that place, as some factors may contribute to increase or decline of the cost, like murder, stealing and other criminal actions. On the other hand, if this place was owned by a celebrity or the district has a unique history or breathtaking view, the price may go up. \r\n\r\nThere are many ways how this kind of information can be found. First and foremost, is looking for a data in the Internet. There could be some articles in the local e-magazines, publications on the Facebook or other media sources. The Youtube platform also may suggest some videos which contains the information needed. \r\n\r\nThe other source is meeting the local people which live there for a long period of time. It could also be possible to go to the local shop and ask the people about the district they live in and possible myths that could be taken into account.\r\n\r\nBuying a property is a very responsible process which brings people financial stability and support and knowing the history would be essential for the future money investment. There are several sources which help find information about the building: Internet, local people and shops.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To whomever concern almost everyone Computers make easier find certain places using search engines also way communication I believe people using computers benifit society scientists use computers every day make plans send ship space keep progress experiment Computers help people stay organized A lot teens kids use computers shop stay touch friends Some people belive people spend much time computers That true also remember society When people spend less time exercising enjoying nature interacting family friends personal choice Its like obliged", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, parents sending their children to school have to stand in front of the difficult decision if a single-sex or co-educational instance is a better option. Many people argue about what choice they should make. In my view, a single-sex school brings more negatives to student's future life, such as poorer social skills and following gender role stereotypes.\r\n\r\nPrimary education years are fundamental in the development of children's personalities. If pupils are separate from opposite-sex colleagues, they would have trouble creating interactions. Consequently, that led straight to insecurities with personal relations. Basic social skills required in early education years allow youngsters to build meaningful friendships and romantic relationships as well. For example, higher education level students, after years of separation from people of equal age but different sex, have trouble cooperating with others.\r\n\r\nThe separation of girls and boys contributes to the promotion of gender-related stereotypes and sexism. Prohibition of exposure to the opposite sex segregates students from each other, which shows children that it is the correct behaviour. As boys and girls spend time apart and do not learn from each other or about them, negative stereotypes are reinforced. Research showed, that separated children of the opposite sex frequently play and hold traditional stereotypical gender views.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, parents should be conscious of the negatives that single-sex educational places provide. One of the most important is a lack of communication skills, which is essential in future life. Another considerably valuable possibility is the promotion of children's gender-type stereotypes, which could be socially inappropriate.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After I read the passage I think Luke really wanted to do something good for the world or in other words, help others in need. If Luke wanted to tell someone to join the Seagoing Cowboys then he would want to in include the feeling he felt after seeing how much better people started doing after they helped them. He would probibaly also include that when they were done transporting the animals they got to go sight seeing and he would tell the person he ws trying to convince to join the Seagoing Cowboys that he got to go to/see Europe and China, he got to see Acropolis in Greece, he also would say he got to take a gondola ride in Vinice, Italy, with streets of water, and he also got to tour an excacated castle in Crete. I think Luke would have a great attitude and he would want more people to meet. Luke was very good at seeing hope for everything and he had good reasons on why someone should join the Seagoing Cowboys.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author gives us a lot of reasons that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\n\nThe first good reason he gaves us is Venus have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. He also explain us why, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Eart . He is saying \"just like Earth\", this is very importat sice knowing Venus has some caracteristics in commun with our planet it makes us easier to think and prove this planet could be a possibily fos us in the future.\n\nThe author keeps supporting his idea of studying Venus with some more examples that both of them have like valleys, mountains and craters, and this is a good reason because since the more things in commun they have the more probablities there are for us with Venus. He also recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit, which means we really need to study this planet if we\n\nwant to get this goal.\n\nIn conclussion the author supports the idea with many good reasons, and all of them are very important for us because this planet could mabybe be a possibility for us in the future or at least gives us some clues sice it has a lot of things in commun with the Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued that increasing fuel costs for personal vehicles would be the most optimal solution to today’s environmental issues. To a certain extent, I agree with this idea given that it would discourage people from using such means of transport. However, other more serious problems should still be addressed.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, one clear result of rising fuel prices is that people would be more reluctant to pay for them. Since it is common for motorcycles nowadays to have gas tanks that need to be filled up every other day, the higher price tag means constant refuelling is rather unsustainable, which is essentially the case for most people. Consequently, they will be likely to turn to other more affordable means of transport such as buses or bicycles, which release significantly fewer amounts of emission. This will have an enormously positive effect on the overall air quality and help with this particular aspect of the environment.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, as much as some would become hesitant when fuel cost rises, others who can afford it would still prioritize comfort and convenience over environmental causes. This is especially prevalent among car owners. Having spent a fortune on their vehicle, they would then find it extremely difficult to give it up. Moreover, there are more severe problems that directly worsen the environment on a larger scale, namely toxic waste from factories dumped into rivers and streams as well as uncontrolled deforestation from individuals to reap personal gains. It is, therefore, vital that we shift our focus to these matters to ensure an overall better outcome for the environment.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I partly agree with the notion that it is best to make fuel costs more expensive to reduce personal vehicles used to tackle environmental issues. Yet, at the same time, actions should be taken against other problems that have a more considerable impact on this matter.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\"\n\nI have a couple of reasons why it is worthy pursuit and a few reasons why it isn't a worth pursuit, but I will stick to the reaons why it is a worthy pursuit. There are many reasons and challenges of leaving our own planet to go visit and explore another planet, but with the right midset and will power anything is possible.\n\nA couple of reasons why it would be a worthy pursuit to go to Venus is because it could show us what Earth will look like if we keep abusing our planet. The reason I say this is because in paragraph 3 it states that the atmosphere is 97% carbon dioxide. This really popped out to me because people on Earth are saying global warming and the main reason of that is carbon dioxide from cars. Another reason this would be a worthy pursuit is that scientist can study the planet with their own eyes. The reason that would bepossible is that because NASA had an idea that we have a blimp like object be about 30 miles or so above the ground and scientist would be able to study what a planet like our own cold end up like.\n\nIn conclusion, if this decision was up to me I would find a way to send scientist to Venus to study it. I also feel like this would help make a change in the way we live our lives to help prevent something like this to happen to our own planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It certainly cannot be denied that men and women are different in term of their references and capabilities. Therefore, some jobs are better done by men done by men and others by women. I definitely agree with this situation. The reasons of this are twofold. \r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, it is vitally important that nowadays, there are various types of jobs. Some of them are better done by men that construction, miner. Opposing to this other jobs are well done by women. For instance, taking care of children at kinder-gardens or like babysitters. Women cannot do difficult, hard works and men cannot do work that belong to the women. It is my belief that everyone should do work that are suitable for themselves. \r\n\r\nSecondly and more importantly there are some jobs that cannot be imagine them without men or women. One of them is professional artist. Another this kind of job is singer. We cannot imagine these occupations without men or ladies. Moreover, government need both genders of workers. Ladies necessary to clean, cooking as employeers. Of course, ladies cannot be butcher or construction worker, however, some women work as skilled-craftsman by force. This is a sorrowful situation of the world. Furthermore, our country try to multiply our homeland with workers such as businessmen and employeers. \r\n\r\nBy way of my conclusion, I believe that this issue is likely to become even more important in the future as border between countries become increasingly blurred. It, therefore, demands out further consideration.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I patient person I hate waiting anything everything I complain difficulties others I play volleyball team school There girls team completely kill patience Am sure girls team feel way This girls pretty nice people volleyball In practice one girls nt even try She even sad going shop practices would attitude driving mane Another girl trys pretty hard shes boring controlling thinks knows absolutely everything know volleyball I think made one hand years playing volleyball thinks every time She rarely serve underland n crying loud This hot girl oh god I nt even know begin much patience goes She probably wast player team shes broke pinky finger could even worse considering nt played three weeks But since s still part team goes games diccers us trys act cool fails miserably It actually kind funny Now I knew girls hard quite bit practice I know wont happen overnight But I guess I ll put keep many patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\", the author supports the idea of finding a way to explore and study Venus despite the challenges that would need to be overcome. The author supports this idea very well by noting and explaining possible solutions and explaining how succeeding can be scientifically productive.\n\nIn paragraph 3, the author explains the many factors that makes Venus an inhospitable planet and then explains the scientific value of being able to explore it in paragraph 4. This is done to show the extent of the challenges and the rewards of exploring Venus and how the scientific value would be worth overcoming the challenges.\n\nOn paragraph 5, the author then explains an idea from NASA on how exploring Venus can be possibly done. The author also explains possible technologies that can be used in Venus's harsh conditions on paragraph 7. Paragraphs 5 and 7 are used support the idea further by giving possible solutions explaining how exploring Venus can be potentially done sometime in the future.\n\nIn conclusion, the author supports the idea of exploring Venus very well by explaining the benefits of doing so and giving evidence that exploring Venus can be eventually possible in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This essay states some very good points on how maybe computers can tell how you feel but,\n\nI do not think that there is any value in using technology to read students emotional expressions. Yes, the article states \"nine percent disgusted, six percent fearful, and two percent angry\" which could be somewhat accurate but you can't tell how the person is feeling inside.\n\nThe article says that making a smile or a happy face could make you happy, but many people become more unhappy the longer they pretend to be happy. I do not believe that the reason we become happy or sad while watching a film is because of the actors facial expressions. Yes, it helps us understand what is going on in the film, but it is not what gets us so \"into it\".\n\nThe article also says that a classroom computer can detect whether you are bored or confused, but what if the student was just thinking about chores they have to do once they get home, or what's for lunch. You can't one hundered percent know how a person feels just by looking at their face. There are so many people that are happy, and are having a great day that just look angry.\n\nLastly, I'm sure the experiments described in this essay could be correct to some degree. Some people may be actually happy or mad, and the computer could detect that, but I do not believe that it could be correct one hundered percent of the time. Da Vinci has nothing to do with technology we have today, he made beautiful artwork that we admire today.\n\nSo in conclusion, I do not believe the information in this passage is fully correct. There is a lot of information and percentages that seem knowledgeable, but i do not agree with it. I could go to one of these computers, and I am pretty sure that it would not accurately show my emotions. Teachers don't need to try to know how every student feels at all times, so no, this technology is not valueable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face on mars was first found by the spacecraft called Viking one and was cirling mars when it found the face. alot of people belive it is a real artifact. NASA has took more pictures to prove that it is infact not an artifact. People belive there just covering it up so pople wont know about it. But that is not true it would benifit NASA if it were an true artifact.\n\nThe face on mars is just a lndform because of the pictures we took we could not see and form of building structure. one thing that brings me to this conclusion is the rocks and shadows made it look and seem very real. The text states \"...formed by shadows...\". Tv and other things are what is drawing the attention to the matter andthey are whats broadcasting to the world that it is real. The text states \" It starred in a hollywood film , appeared in books , magazines, radio talk shows...\"\n\nThis brings me to the conclusion that infact it is not real but was made real by televison and other things. People just dontt wanna listen to the since behind it. If it where in fact real it would benifit NASA.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author claims is good it tells us that there are things we know that scientist are trying to fix, but there are things we do not know that scientists may need to know so that people can land on venus. The danger of this planet is how hot the surface gets. The heat there can melt like everything and any metal. The high of 800 degrees fahrenheit, No humans could live in those conditions.\n\nThe author gives us things that are useful and things scientists can study. Th e reason I think they made this passage was they are trying to put mankind on this planet which sounds impossible. Why do you think we live on earth, because its are temperature we can handle and things we can use in everyday life, we need water food and shelter. going to venus where its that hot, there would be no water whitch they think there was an ocean on venus. There would be no food, nothing can survive 800 degrees weather. The NASA thinks they can figure this out, but I really do not think they will. We landed on the moon, not hot as venus and we do not\n\nknow what is on the moon. NASA are trying to get some detail by flying over venus and getting as close as we can. They want to get the most intel so they can land. They say venus has familiar features such as valleys, moutains, and craters. The weather there can cause things like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequency lightning strikes. If we can get a house or shack on this planet it has a high chance of getting destroyed. we have no clue what else can be on this island, something we have never seen before, or had aclue it would ever exists here.\n\nThe best thing is to stay on earth as we are supposed to and live here and stop risking peoples lives by going to a place where there is hardly no way to survive. I was born on earth and I will stay on earth as long as I live. planets are there for a reason but we don't know what reason they are there for all that NASA can is study thing and hopefully land on these planets and try to build mankind.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Mr. Senator,\n\nThe peope of American should let their voice be heard. Why should we rely on the electoral college to pick our prisendent? In fact if you're going to rely on the electoral college to pick our next president why let civilized American citizens vote? I would say it is time for a change and let the American people's voice be heard. It seems as if the passage is more in favor of elections based on the electoral college votes. The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. At the most basic level,the electoral college is unfair to voters because it's a winners takes all system. The electoral colllege consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect your president. The elctoral college is anachronism and it's time we should be open minded and look in to the future and rely on the Americans votes we should not rely on 538 people to vote for the millions of people we have in America. Even if we had a combination of the popular vote with elctoral college that would make it more fair than just having the electoral college pick the president they want in office. Instead of relying on this piece of history lets rely on bring cheap clothes,food,and gas prices back.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is one of the brightest stars in the solar system and is consitered to be the \"second sun\". It is almost as dense as earth and is said to be called \"earths twin\". The planet has been studied very closely even though we are miles and miles away. The planet is almost impossible to land on. Every spaceship that has landed has crashed or dissapeared. The atmosphere is so dense taking a regular iphone there would melt entering each layer of the atmophere.\n\nThe most challenging point to venus is it's atmospheric pressure which is ninety times greater then earth and has the ground tempurature eight hundred degrees fairenheit. Scientists have seeen many volcanos and lightning outbursts very close in intrevals of time on Venus which can make landing and space travel difficult. NASA says orbiting, \"At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth.\" Which means the ground would \"liquify metal\".\n\nSince Venus is one of the closest planets we could possibly travel too. NASA has been experimenting and planning. NASA has been planning to bring back the mechanical computer from World War Two, to bring into space because of its dense steel and metals. Some may contemplate Venus is just a rock planet and empty. Scientist have discovered that Venus has has earth's features like, \"rocks, craters, valleys, and mountains\". Even though Venus is far away and is very dangerous our society is curious and will grow until the journey to Venus and back is accomplished.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "All around the world, cars have influence our lives for the good or for the bad. Whether that is getting people to their jobs or getting into an accident. Cars have altered our lives and are doing it constantly. Although for a century cars have benefited humans greatly, cars have negative effects and banning cars can help decrease the pollution all over the world, it saves the little resoucers the planet has, and car accidents will occure less.\n\nTo elaborate more, countries all over the world are trying new ways to decrease the air pollution as much as possible, whether that is banning cars or restricting them. In Vauban, German cars are restricted and if you have a car it is very expensive to use. In Vauban, 70 percent of families do not have cars, and inorder to move in to the town 57 percent sold their cars. The idea of resticted areas are getting big ,and for Vuaban has 5,500 residents, that shows that people like the idea and will support it. People in the town have claim to enjoy it alot and are happier. In Paris, France their idea to help low the pollutin in the air was to have specific licenses plats restricted on certain days of the week. France had very bad smog and within 5 days the smog decrease 60 percent. In Bogota, Columbia they had similar goals as other countries like Germany. Carlos Arturo Plaza said,\"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution.\" In Europe cars make up 12 percent of the greenhouse gas and air pollution. In the United States Americans are driving less and the pollution in the air is decreaseing, benefiting the enviroment. Throughout the world, countries are tring to help the world, by decreasing the pollution.\n\nMoreover, throughout the century cars have been using non renewable resoucers and now that alot of the people have cars, it has taken a toll on the enviroment. The world has only so much resoucers and once its gone it is gone, it takes time for them to come back and it willl not be in our life time. Using these resoucers have a negative effect they emit carbon in to the atmosphere creating greenhouse gas, that is bad. saving the resoucers and not using them can help with keeping the atmopshere cleaner.\n\nNow people are banning and restricting cars for various reasons, but one reason is that for the past century cars have killed alot of people. It is one of the top reasons for deaths in the United States and possibly in the world. If banning cars can save thousands of lifes why not do it. Banning cars or restricting cars means less cars which can result to less car accidents. Having less accidents results to less people getting hurt and potenially dying. Less cars can also mean that the goverment does have to focuse on roads and stuff like that ,but can focuse on improving the safty of the people on the sidewalks or at playgrounds. the funds can go to better causes.\n\nThe world we live has changed enormously and now inorder to save the plant and the people in it, we must make changes as a society, inorder to live long and healthy. Banning cars might be one of the many choices we must make inorder to live. Banning cars can help decrease the greenhouse gases, conserve the resoucers, and less people will die from car accidents. Who knows cars may be a thing in the past int he next decade or two.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Another important perspective is the economy because around healthy lifestyle is related to daily consume in this way they focus their brands to a pecific target with status differentiation. Nowadays to be a vegan requires a lot of money because the supplements or vitamins has been found by others opposite to meet. Another reason behind is the connection between morally and physical that enforcement to practice yoga and keep a style of life through vegan ‘brands \r\n\r\nFor instance, countries with rich economies, as a Germany, UK and USA are increasing de number of veganism in the las twenty years. A social effect is that just a few economies have the monopoly of the discuss of veganism as well as are having morality support.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Someone takes a selfie, and sends it to their friend trying to make it seem like they are completely happy with no problems at all. However, what if you were able to tell if your friend is really happy or not? There is a facial coding system that can identify other's emotions. The use of this technolgy to read emotional expressions is valuable because, it can recognize facial movements to see how other's feel, the computer can make faces seem more expressive, and it also teaches you more about your smile and whether it is genuine or forced.\n\nIt has been shown that Mona Lisa was about 83% happy when the picture was taken, it shows that it was mostly a happy smile. There are usually ablout six different kinds of emotions, such as,\"happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness\". This shows that there many emotions that could be discovered by just a simple picture. As an example, your eyebrows are usually raised when your are surprised or your lips would be tightened to show anger. The software would usually have mixed emotion, and it is usually compared to a nuetral face that shows no emotion. We humans are actually able to do the same thing, just by the look/expression on their face. Some specific artists such as, da Vinci studied human anatomy to help them paint specific emotions with facial emotions.\n\nComputers are capable of doing many different things that not even humans can do. One very important thing is creating different expressions for others. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This was said by Dr. Huang, and it was normally used to make even animated faces more expressive. It is true that most human communication is nonverbal, and some computers may need to understand that too. There are some simple instructions that encode different emotions, this was also used to create Mona Lisa's smile.\n\nThis system teaches you more about your smile and whether it is forced or not. There is certain muscular action units that indicate the difference between both smiles. For the real smile which is called \"zygomatic major\" which are actually muscles that begin at your cheek bones, it would lift the corners of your mouth. However for the false smile, the mouth would be stretched out sideways and it would ues the zygomatic major and the risorius. To many exerts they know that it is true thatfaces tell the truth and when a celebrity takes a selfie with a false smile, it is usually a sign that it they are not being truthful. There is an important theory of emotion that expresses and produces emotions.\n\nFacial action coding systems can be used for very useful things. This this technology is extemely valuable because, it is able to recognize how others feel by facial movements, more expressive faces can be made with these computers, it shows the difference between genuine smiles and forced smiles.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting essay Rough Road Ahead Do exeed Posted Speed limit affect cyclist cruel manner The old man say towns going functioning towns To make cyclist feel hopeless setting puts California day June extremely hot puts unexpected twists A cruel thing add essay read The Speed limit mph I water depleting mph This lowers cyclists confidence making seem worried Another cruel thing author adding welchs Grape Juice factory abandoned A sandblasted picture young boy pouring refreshing glass juice mouth totally causing lose hope left These features setting cruel", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do mother bisy time If For reason I like travel every One day went place I forgot name I patient Being patient kind hard really dont nothing took like I happy left I wasnt say things like come hurry taking long hungry ready leave things like", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that today, people tend to give birth when they are older than their previous generation. This trend has several negative and positive effects on their daily life.\nOn the one hand, there are several disadvantages for those who want to have children in their later age. First, moms could suffer from many serious health problems when they give birth late. Those who are older than 35 of age has the higher rate of death because their hormone levels are not suitable for giving birth which lead to medical accidents. Second, boys or girls whose their mother is older than 35 also tend to suffer from many problems. For example, it is easier to have pneumonia for children from those mothers because the preterm birth rate of this group of mothers is higher.\nOn the other hand, I am on the side with those who believe that there are more benefits to having children when they are older. Firstly, people could prepare a better foundation for their children. Raising a boy or a girl is a job which needs both much effort, money and time. Therefore, many people decide to work hard and earn much money they can because it could build a more solid infrastructure for their children. Secondly, it is important for children to have both their parents during their process of growing up. The rate of crime in terms of teenagers, who grow up without mother or father, is higher than those who live with parents. Thus, the decisions such as having marriage or giving birth are crucial when the younger tend to decide quickly.\nIn conclusion, it is still controversy for this trend because of the positive and negative effects mentioned above.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Saeng feels place new home new country She vows silently year take test She vows year used new home new country start enjoy life The author concluded paragraph girl Saeng hopefully enjoy new home year used happens new country Saeng feels place wants wait tries retake test The author concludes story paragraph made vow hopefully keep vow make happen", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We Shouldn't Have These New Driverless Cars\n\nWho still wants to learn how to drive cars? Alot of people do. If we replace the old cars with the new cars people will have a hard time trying to get used to it. Lots of people are going to ask themselves why they bought a car that still has to be driven by a human.We should just keep the cars that we have now. We should focus more on making our cars earth friendly.\n\nLots of adults and teens want to learn how to drive a car. They've\n\nwaited years\n\nfor the opportunity to drive one. With these new cars their dreams will be ruined. Yes they'll get a car and enjoy it but it won't be the same as having a normal car. It would also cause more teen to be on their phones while driving these new cars. also wiht the vibrater in the seats that activates when a person is needed to drive the car could cause the human to be frightened and lose control of the car.\n\nAnother problem with these new cars is that people will have a hard time getting used to it. Most modern day car drivers will have to foreget how to drive a old car and adapt to these new cars. Every time they wake up to go to work or go somewhere else they'll think that they're still driving the old car that they used to have. They might even end up breaking the car or doing something that will mess with the car. It will also cost a fortune just to repair the car if it was were to be damaged.\n\nIf they are driverless, why do they still need to be driven by humans. Most people will ask themeselve why did they buy this car if it does't do what its supposed to. They'll think they have just wasted their money on something that isn't what all of the ads and all of the commercials said they were. Lots of people will think that they have just been lied to.\n\nFinally, i dont really think that the new cars that Google cofounder Sergy Brin has come up with really have an impact on our society. it will still be the same as it is now. We should just stick with the old cars and work on the old cars and make them more earth friendly, because no one wants to waste their money on something that is pretty much what they already have. We also don't want people to be frustrated with the way the new cars would work.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people think that adolescents ought to need to do free community job in their leisure time because it helps not only teenagers but also the community as well . I totally agree with this notion that because it helps to get an invaluable training to the teenagers and free access to primary supply to poor people. This essay will explain why youngster involved in voluntary task in their free present , followed by a reasoned conclusion. \r\n\r\nFirstly , neighborhood works help younger people to receive the greatest work experience from it . After completing school or tertiary education and in their free time do some unpaid job because this is Avery good platform for getting ample knowledge as well as a good experience. Also , they learn many worthwhile skills such as community, interpersonal, time management and so on which helps to get the best job in their future . Furthermore, ,currently employers demand not only a high quality but also some skills in employee's CV . For example , fresh graduate doctors start to do practice in the rural area for some time in order to achieve knowledge and experience about how to deal with patients in real-life situations. However, the Government should provide a stipend and small incentives to volunteers as motivation for them to work more and efficiently .\r\n\r\nAnother benefit to the community itself . Poor people can access free primary services like education and health services from professionals. In other words , people who live below the poverty line , they are already struggling to earn money for fulfilling basic necessities like food , cloth and shelter . Therefore, they do not invest their remuneration in a child' s education and health . If a professional doctor provides free medicines and diagnosis without taking any charge from them , it will more benefits to poor and needy individuals. Moreover, these services has great benefits for the nation's development. For instance, graduate teachers provide free education to poor children in primary and secondary schools so that poor children get free access to it . thisDespite , some rural people hesitate to take free services without any particular reasons . \r\n\r\nTo conclude , I strongly agree with free community work by teenagers because it gives valuable work experience and knowledge of their field and the community can get free services from experts such as education or health services and so on . I recommend that the government start to take the initial step towards this .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Hey Gary, did you read the draft of \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" that NASA sent us?\" I asked my friend who I work with in editing NASA's articles. \"Yes I centainly did! And I think that the Face on Mars is clearly an alien artifact.\" he replied. \"What makes you say that? There's not much evidence to prove that theory and I did not expect that from you Gary, you're such a logical person! Cleary you should think an alien made artifact is not logicly science! Right?\" I asked. \"Well... what do you think?\" Gary asked daringly. \"Sure, let me try to change your mind!\" I shot back.\n\n\"The first picture of the Face was taken in 1976 when cameras and technologys were not that advanced yet. And the article says that a \"huge rock formation...which resembles a human head...formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" The article states that it was formed by shadows which gave the illusion of the face.\n\nBut people began to think that it was an alien sculpture. So on 1998, NASA\n\nsent MGS to the Red Planet to take a better shot of the Face, the picture revealed a natural landform of Mars. But people like you, Gary, weren't convinced because it was winter where the Face was located so the alean markings were hidden.\n\nThen in April 8, 2001, MGS flew to Mars on a cloudless day to get a better look at the Face. The camera the team used was a high reselution camerica, each picture spaned 1.56 meters. So if there were any alien like artifacts, it would have appeared in the picture. But it actually showed landforms that were common around western America.\"\n\n\"So what do you think now?\" I asked after my speech. \"Hmmmm, maybe you're right for once. You've stated your prespective reasonably. I never expected such a logical and scientific answer from you\" He said. \"Well thank you.\" I replied. \"No, thank you.\" He said. \"Because of your explenation, I will think of other interesting facts differently.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Winter Hibiscus teenage girl Saeng family moved united states Vietnam Saeng walking home failing driver s test passes familiar plant She goes florist shop purchase plant She arrives home tells mother failed test course mother upset makes dinner plant winter hibiscus end story Saeng thinks when come back spring snow melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test again I think Saeng says retake test spring feels confident happy comfortable plant mother nt mad She feels everything going ok retake test spring life blooming", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I patient whey going lunch I staning paient got lunch avir patient wan got lunch I time wen fraed patient wan water fouten get water gris cam water fauten get water He watet patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear opinion computers good I think help people need People also also contact people All computers helpful always something negative someone uses Computers help teachers students employees parents They nt always helping Computers also used amusement Games music videos always internet Contacting people also great reason computers nt bad People always email business friends Myspace websites people contact others Having computer nt always bad When story newspaper come hand written You also use computer work Computers nt always bad People learn limit time They always positive affect people need something Information anything always internet Computers used decades I think used many many Back people used computers mostly work Now people ages use different kinds things", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many reasons of why we should all join the program of UNNRA. There are many other possible ways to get people to join, and I will show you a few.\n\nOne possible reason is that many people care and love our pets and animals of the world, and we can all help them out more by joining the UNNRA team. You can give them shelter, and food. Another reason why we should join is to explore the world and make it a better place. When you join the UNNRA team, you can visit other countries and help them out with hunger and shelter too. Another possible reason is that if you join, you can be known as a famous helper, caring with animals and people. The best thing is knowlege, so if you join, you can visit other countries and learn things you never know about unique places. Some people like to have something to work for in life, such as goals. If you sign up for this team, you can consider yourself working for a goal to celebrate in your life.\n\nSome people are sick of staying home all day, doing your daily chores of work, but if you sign up, you won't have to do daily boring work like you always do. If you join, you can consider this as a job, but also a adventurous job, that you can have fun doing, with a smile on your face, showing you care. So hop on over to the UNNRA team, and sign up. You can make a difference in this world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everywhere I go always seems something small big considered offensive Because offensive things often censorship public places It acceptable view nonnoncensored materials disgression privacy acceptable public I believe censorship necessary libraries wide range audiences public materials opinions certain people Libraries considered public places wide range audiences Whether children teens adults elders things inappropriate accessible certain people This directed mainly children however Like quote mentioned All us think book hope none children children taken shelf put offensive books libraries Censorship block inappropriate parts books movies music magazines order make materials suitable age groups Because libraries considered public places materials considered public property Everyone right materials However every library book magazine movie could searching due fact contain profanity inappropriate content Some people censorship libraries often censorship bookstores movie stores music libraries etc If desire certain noncensored material go purchase That way material longer public rather whatever choose We live world everyone voices opinion freely punished Libraries targeted toward every age group censorship allows everything appropriate everyone Certain parents allow children read certain books view certain movies listen certain music opinion parenting Some parents hand allow children partake inappropriate materials perfectly fine parenting children However libraries right introduce inappropriate things lives children decision parents gaurdians In conclusion censorship allowed libraries widerange audience public materials strong opinions people Everyone deserves read watch listen whatever choose everyone deserves around inappropriate things public places Not everyone happy everyone appropriate", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In some cases i believe that the Facial Action Coding System is valuable like when people go to counseling in school the people in their can tell what's worng. Dr. Paul Eckmon made the FACS to scan for the six basic emotion happines, surpise, disgust, fear, and sadness.The machice has been programmed to read facial expressions like frontail pars lateralis muscle is for suprise.So if you have a friend that is hard to read like you want to know if their mad or not you can use the FACS. This machine could help people that make are for facial muscles precise enough to convey specific emotions.\n\nMy claim is that i am for the FACS and why is to tell peopls emotion and help by talking to them. For example people who don't express their emotion in front of people, but are hurting on the inside. Another example is when some have depression and you go to the doctor and the doctor use the FACS to see how sad. Also if you are feeling other emotions but don't know it the machine could tell what percentage of how you feel like is the Mona Lisa she was 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, 2 percent angry and 83 percent happy.\n\nThis technology could also be used to make computer animated faces more expressive like for video games or video surgery.\n\nIn conclusion the FACS is very helpful because most human communcation is non-verbal, including emotional communication. So computers need to understand that. You could also learn human emotions, but according to the facial feedback theory of emotion, expressing emotion may even help produce them. even a drama coach had his actors reproduce smiling and frowning as a way of creating emotions on stage. SO whoever thought that making faces could reveal so much about science of emotion.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obstacles builders faced attempting allow dirigibles dock Empire State Building could simply drop mooring mast top Empire State Building Is would added much stress frame Empire State Building could caused collapse period time So steel frame Empire State Building modified strengthened accomade new situation said excerpt After builders completed framing Empire State Building eightyfifth floor time framing rooftop create area mooring mast would placed After workers completed framing rooftop build mooring mast builders faced challenge framing mooring mass The builders framed mooring mast skeleton steel The builders faced challenges attempt allow derilibles dock Empire State Building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In begining story young cyclist sets long journy Yosemite national park Along ride meets old confident men They tell new rout wich was slice away hours ride setting excedingly hot He supposed encounter thriving towns along way first baren ghost town next water the flavor battery acid came abanded welches grape juice factory The author navigated trying setting reached baite shop The advice gives readers stick guns dont let old timers try change mind", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As i read the article \" Driverless Cars Are Coming \" i think its would be a great idea for future. As a driver myself driving may sleepyness if driving for a long time so i best believe that \" Driverless Cars \" are a great a idea for some of us drivers on the road. For examples in paragraph 2 its said \" In reality , Google has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions since 2009. Their cars have driven more than half million miles without a crash.\n\nThat was a good way of saying about driverless cars. But they not really driverless cars in one of the paragraphs its said \" Google cars aren't truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents.\" Now that really telling me there i can't trust the computer to take over and drive for me. I best off driving the car myself if the computer can't handle stuff like backing out or in , or\n\nparking the car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Seagoing Cowboys program started after World War Two ended in Europe. The program gives young cows, horses, and mules to the countries that got destroyed in the war. They put the young cows, horses, and mules on ships then sent them to different countries.\n\nI had two different part-time jobs and when my friend told me about this opportunity to join the Seagoing Cowboys I thought it was a once in a lifetime opportunity.\n\nI joined the Seagoing Cowboys on the day that the war in the Pacific ended.\n\nMy very first trip was to Greece. The ships had cows and horses on them. The Sea Cowboys had to feed them twice a day, clean out their stalls, and give them fresh water to drink. There was another job to be done on ths ship there was the night watchman. The night watchmen had to check in on the animals every hour then report it to the captain. This job can be very dangerous at times because one rainy night I went to tell the captain and slid down the ladder and almost went overboard into the dark, churning ocean. A small piece of metal saved my life. I was okay but I did have two broken ribs.\n\nI Luke did the most trips of any Seagoing Cowboy. I did sixteen across the Atlantic Ocean and two across the Pacific Ocean. I would want people to join the Seagoing Cowboys because when you are at the country that you are helping you get to visit many tourist attractions. When I was in Greece I got to see the Acropolis. The Acropolis is an ancient structure built in ancient times. I got to ride in a gondola in Venice, Italy. I toured an excavated castle in Crete. I also marveled at the Panama Canal on his way back from China.\n\nOn return trips after the animals were dropped off the men had fun. They had baseball and volleyball games in empty stalls, they also had table tennis tournements, along with boxing tournements. I also found time to have fun reading, whittling, and other fun games to pass the time at sea.\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys would be a great way to help out others in need. I had a very amazing experience as a Seagoing Cowboy. I would want other young boys to have the same experience as I did when I joined the seagoing cowboys.\n\nLuke says in the article, \" I'm grateful for the opportunity. It made me more aware of other people and countries' needs. Luke kept helping other people in need even after his adventure as a Seagoing Cowboy by leading his family to home a couple of international students and exchange families for many years. Luke had a great experience as a Seagoing Cowboy and he would want you to have the same experience as he did. Join the Seagoing Cowboys and help other people in need all around the world. Help the whole enire world by giving other people the things they need to survive. Luke did not notice how lucky he was until he joined the Seagoing Cowboys. Luke and others of those who served other people on the Seagoing Cowboys boats will have the right to say that they made a difference in this world. Luke would want you to make a difference. Join the Seagoing Cowboys today to make a difference in the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People all over the world would love to travel to Venus; to learn new things about the planet, and what it actually looks like, but it is very dangerous. Venus may be very cool looking and theres so much to learn about it; things you might of not of known. It may be to impossible to tavel to this planet, there are to many dangerous things that happen and it would not be safe. In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author supports their idea of studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author gives so much information about Venus and the dangers, and to study it than to visit the planet is safer.\n\nEven though Venus looks very cool looking and fun to learn about, well it is, but it would not be safe to travel to Venus. The author in this article gives a lot of information about venus such as, the goods and the bads, and why and why not one should travel to that planet. In the aticle \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author states, \"Also notable, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system.\" Venus is dangerous, it is very hot and has the hottest surface out of all the planets. The author supports their suggestion by putting out there the fact of how hot Venus is, and that studying Venus is a worthly pursuit.\n\nVenus looks very cool and most people wish they could travel there, but it wouldn't be such a good idea. Venus is very dangerou in many ways and you wouldn't be able to be by it in a spaceship, it's far from fun to visit. Studying Venus gives you a lot more information then to visit and might be able to make it back. In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthly pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author supports their idea by giving information about Venus and the dangers that it has.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the current scenario, where most of the spare time is utilised on accessing mobile phones and playing video games, society believes that children must get involved in community work for free. However, some are in disagreement with it. This essay will discuss both views.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, youngsters should involve themselves in serving society without any charge at the early stage of life in their extra hours, by doing so, this will create a positive attitude towards the community which will be beneficial for both teenagers and society. They should be able to learn, how to respect and value each other and help others whether by money or through any other means. For instance, community work like, spending some hours with infants at orphanages and sharing their learnings with those infants. This will create a positive vibe and attitude towards helping others.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, this will channelise their extra time towards a good cause. Instead of seating idle and playing video games, their energy will be utilised in helping others. For example, in countries like India, where a huge amount of the population is in poverty and illiterate, youngsters can contribute by giving tuition to poor Kids. Hence, they should take part in such initiatives so that our community can grow equally.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some believe that they should spend much available time doing extra studies. Although focusing on studies is important, if they were not taught how to serve society and contribute to the community, then values like sharing, helping, respect, etc. will not get developed among individuals. To illustrate, in Bollywood, youngsters of some actors get involved in harmful habits like drugs, fighting, etc. Most of them are not aware of social values, they do not seem to be respecting others like reporters, fans, drivers, etc.\r\n\r\nIn the conclusion, in my opinion, children should be encouraged to take participate in social services, so that they would be able to learn that, if we do something for others we always get good things in return.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the artical they are talking about how they came out with this new prgram. In this program it is able to read people facial feature by there actions they were able to get the Mona Lisa's in the artical they said that she was more happy then mad she was sad and angry or other things. I agree with this to have a machine that will tell your emotion this wouldnt just be helpful for students it would also be helpful for stuednts because if they have something wrong and they dont know what is they can just go to the machine they could just get there face examed and then they would have resluts. it would help counlsers alot to because not everyone can tell when someone is either mad or upset. Also it wouldn't just be helpful for schools it'd be helpful for police station so when they are questioning they can ditect if they are lying or not another thing is it wouldn't just be a small accomplishment to move on into the future life it'd be a goal for them to have multiple if these computures in places where they will need them at and places where others will use them for good. A bad thing about this computer would be for teachers if they were to upload a lesson to it and they were to have everything planned out they would either have to try to keep students on the same track as others and others for them to no get lost or confused with what they will be learning during there leasons when it detects on of them being bored. After all the reading i did think it'd be a good idea because it wouldn't just help one person it wouldnt help multible people who need counsling or for people who don't know how to feel or what to say. So this computer wouldn't just make an impact in one person but maybe world wide.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This new technology is vialating personal space. if someone wanted oyu to know how they were feeling they would tell you themsleves not have some new technology do it for them. It is not valuable in a classroom. It may hurt people more than it could help them because some people don't like sharing what they're feeling or they don't want other people knowing how they feel because they might feel like they are gonna be judged by those people.\n\nThis technology is quite irrelvant to actual people because it's not really helping people. If someone came up with a way to stop bullying in schools then that would be usful this is just some thing someone came up with to see what people are feeling. It's really not anyone's buisness about what other people are feeling. People may feel like this technology is just another way for people to stalk them or try to make accusations of things that aren't true about them.\n\nIt says in the passage that most human communication is nonverbal including emotional communication and that computers need to understand that too like that's saying that they are gonna put something in our computers that will read our emotions and some poeple may not be okay with that. People have privacy for a reason not for some stupid mind reading technology to come along and invade that privacy. The guy who invented this didn't really think this through on how much it could hurt a person or how much it could actually change a persons life.\n\nHonestly don't understand this world today like why would you invent something that could destroy someones life or make them feel uncomfortable around other people because you don't know what they could do. Like they're are more serious issues in this other than worrying about what people are feeling. People are dying because stupid peopel are shooting up schools yet theres this guy who's more worried about what people are feeling. That's honestly so messed up.\n\nI understand it's important to know what people are feeling but inventing a new software to tell you how people are feeling isn't the right thing to do. Some people may think that this new software may increase the suicide rate because it's invading their space and they may not like people knowing what they are feeling. This software could lead to more cyberbullying.\n\nThis is my argument of why I think this technology is not valuable to a classroom. People need to worry about the more serious things in this world not how people are feeling, yes that matters to but if someone wants you to know how they are feeling then they'll tell you not having some new tecnology thing tell you. The things people do with technology these days really surprise me because why worry about inventing new stuff when they're are more serious matters to worry about.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The laws have changed. We now have days where we cannot use our cars for the day. We can only get around using buses, a local taxi, bikes, walk etc,. Would this benefit us or would it not? Some cities and countries around the world are banning cars. Instead they would like to use public transportation, a biciylce, or maybe your own two feet to get around. I believe that this topic is reasonable and I agree.\n\nThe United States is considering this law of not having to use our cars for a day or two each week so we can get out in the fresh air or try out some new transportation for personal knowledge of more ways to get around. The paper, The End of Car Culture, states that \"recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by.\" Assuming, we are already shifting into a lifestyle of not having a car for a day or two. To me, this would benefit the country because of our high obesity rate. If more people ride their bikes to places or walk places, this will give them more exercise opportunities and help them lose weight in a more constructive way. Just riding your bike or walking a mile to the grocery store a day can definitely help someone out.\n\nSpeaking of helping things out, how about the environment? The article, Paris band driving due to smog, states that \"After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\" Robert Duffer also states that Paris uses Mondays to be deicated ro even-numbered license plates are ordered to leave their cars at home and the next day odd-numbered license plates were ordered to keep their cars home. The diesel fuel in Paris was hurting the environment so that is why they banned cars. Here in the United States I believe that the car pollution is also hurting our environment. Riding bikes and walking places is a good activity for everyone to do.\n\nMost of us, except the 2% of people in America, have trouble with money. Riding bikes around and walking to a friends house or to the store, would definitely help our money situations. Not having a car two days a week means we do not have to get gas as much, which would save us money. Using a taxi would be useful too but, not as much becuase the money adds up also. Not using cars can completely help our community and country in so many ways.\n\nBanning cars for a day or two sounds like a fantastic idea. Being able to go out and get fresh air and get some exercise would be great for our country. Less pollutions, less money and more constructive activities for getting around to places. All sounds like a good idea to me. Let's see if the United States takes action.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood memoir strong Sometimes mood sad They came selflessly many immigrants give children better life even though meant leaving behind families friends careers country loved They struggled personally financially The barriers work strong high And parents accept might able find kind jobs deserved In memoir mood also happy times Growing enviorment instilled great sense family nothing blood relative The author Narciso Rodriguez creates many moods memoir creates happy sad many memoir ends happily I never forget parents turned simple house home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In Narciso s memoir I feel joy I feel joy Narciso s parents able survive They came without knowledge language culture immigrant families get feet right away within year went room apartment room appartmentJoy came mind also welcoming arms family People today losing jobs homes nobody go Rodriguez family place go Countless extaded family members came went often someone staying us temporarily able get back feet My parents always kept arms door open many people considered family knowing would us", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think we should keep the electoral collage beacause it has worked this long for us so we know its gonna work so why not keeep it going. It keeps a steady stream when it comes time to vote because aslong as someone had 270 votes you know thats who will get picked. so why try changing that and have a whole new system put in and then not know what to do when it comes time to vote. And what if the new system dosent work, what if the new way of the voting process messes with the tallys and they come out wrong and no one will get picked, unlike the other way when u know everything will come out right and u know that we will have a president. I think its fair that they have it set at 270 for voting that way everyone havs a chance to vote instead of it being so low that only a few people get to vote before they shut it down because they have reached there number of tallys that they need. So if they change the number of tallys that a president needs to become president that will be stupid and people will act out on it because they wont think its right, and because the people who didnt vote will not like the fact that they didnt get to put there vote f in before they stoped the voting and because they meet the number that they needed. Its a vote why do they need to title it as a the vote of a president or a popular vote of a president. Why not just vote for there just electors instead of saying vote for your candidate when really you are just voting for the electors. If you are voting for a certin thing there is no reason that u have to re-word it just to vote, if you are voting for something do it the right way instead of changing stuff and making it seem one way when really its the other way. Why should the electoral get just as much as the winning presindent? They are not doing as much as the president and who is helping him out.. so they should not get the same reword.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many advantages on limiting the usage of cars in many Country's around the world. For example, the United States, Paris, and even small areas like the German Suburbs. Because of the usage of cars we are starting to get a lot of pollution, and lots of tax money going towrds our roads.\n\nAccording to source 1 \"In German Suburb, Life Goes on Without Cars\" says that \"In Previous bills 80 percent of appropriations have by law gone to highway and only 20 20 percent to other transport.\" Beaucse of this many expect public transport serving suburbs to play a largerrole in a six-year federal transportation bill to be approved sometime this year. also, as found in paragraph 5 \"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 pecent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe . . . anfd up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States.\" there for is causing problrms to our invierment.\n\nParis is also having problems with pollution. From reading \"Paris bans diving due to smog\" by Robert duffer. tells us reads that after days of near-record pollution Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air in the city. And that the congestion was down 60 persent in the capital of France, after five days of smog. In Reading paragraph 17 \"Paris typically has more smog than other European Capitals . . . [Last] week Pairs had 147 micrograms of particulate matter (PM) per cubic meter compared with 114 in brussels and 79.7 in London, Reuters found.\" from reading that you can tell that Pairs has a high level of polloution.\n\nfoud in source 4 \"With all these changes, people who stopped car commuting as a result to the habit.\" Meaning if everyone walked or biked instead of using cars we would be use to it and not depend on them. From the same source in paragraph 36 you can infer that in New York that many people are starting to use bikes insted of cars, as found \"New York's new bike-sharing program and its skyrocketing brige and tunnels tools reflect those new priorities, as do proliferation of car- sharing programs across the nation.\" Then in Paragraph 38 , it tells us that the population suggest that the trend of demographic shifts in driving may accelerate.\n\nFrom reading the sources and adding up all of the information it is vary easy to infer that we would have a lot of advantages if we didnt use cars. we would have less polloution and would be paying less for roadways.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people adhere to the opinion that governments should financially support arts and other related activities and programmes. They feel that art enormously influences the society by transforming point of views, instilling values and interpreting experiences. Moreover, they also think that it significantly affects the fundamental sense of self.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, they argue that arts preserve history by reminiscing an experience in a particular time and place. This can be evidenced by the massive number of paintings, sculptures, songs, literary works and other crafts, which are frequently considered as the repository of the collective memory of a society. Additionally, some researchers conducted a study of the relationship between the arts and the brain. They discovered that visual art observations had constructive effects on the personal lives of the nursing home-bound elders. In addition to this, arts can be an important key in a community's economic development. To illustrate, the arts and cultural industries provide employments, attract investors and stimulate local economies through tourism, consumer purchases and tax revenues. \r\n\r\nConversely, in spite of the contributions of arts in the society, I believe that national funds should be focusing more on health and education sectors. Without a doubt, a nation can only be sustained if its citizens are well-educated and holistically healthy and fit. For instance, with the tremendous global modernization, people of various nationalities should be globally competitive enough to catch up with vast technological innovations, which are being used by large companies; so as to strengthen their workforce. Another example would be the fact that, currently, countries all over the world are in a race to purchase millions of vaccines for a particular viral disease. For this reason, governments are now allocating billions of dollars to have their vulnerable citizens vaccinated as soon as possible. Ultimately, with sufficient subsidization on health and education, societies can have lower crime rates, better overall health and civic involvement.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, arts are indeed a noteworthy representation of a country, which also aid in economic development. However, I believe that in order to enhance everyone's quality of life, create a more civilized and safer community and provide comfort others could not obtain, health care and educational systems must be financially sustained and prioritize over the others.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent times, decisions are taken by some individuals to bear children at maturity. I strongly believe that the demerits outweigh the merits as these can lead to terrible health conditions for the woman around labour as well as stigmatization in our society. These will be further explained in the essay.\r\n\r\nTo begin, having offspring in old age can lead to health complications during birth. As life progresses the human body depreciates, thereby causing loss of function or reductions in the activities of the body. However having children by an aged individual can make the woman come down with severe complications like eclampsia, uterine rupture, fibroid and bleeding during and after partum which can eventually lead to death. All these can be averted if decisions are taken to give birth early. For example, about a decade ago, a woman of 44 years had her first pregnancy and put to bed after several months but unfortunately came down with a complication after delivery. Furthermore, the society we live in and relatives expect more from a newly married coupllatteey can be tagged as barren due to the delay in bearing offsprings.\r\n\r\nHowever, conceiving when matured comes with its own merit. This creates enough time to plan for the future especially financially. Couples have sufficient periods to plan for their upcoming wards. Plenty of ideas and ample knowledge are gathered to apply after having a children. Also , adequate income is acquired for the family as well.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion , the decision to wait till old age before bearing children is of great disadvantage compared to the advantages.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Flave ever dictor Well brother sister l dictor s enportment miss school When got packed people So sat bown wait We wait three half hour I started get unpatience hungry l told mom l hungry everyone agreed So mom went food court go get us sum Pizza water When done pizza waited nother three hours I started get angry could hours Finily nerse said kimderly mom stand said So I got unpatient I yelled said CAPS term waiting long time l ca nt wait mom finily come I said sorry rude behavor When l sat start wait second tern That patience important", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some may say right now, at the start of 2015, the whole world is at a peak for technology, cars, and advancements. Some are saying differently. In this day and age, many countries, also can't afford any more pollution than they already have, due to how many vehicles there are on the road. Some cities have even stopped using cars all together, and have been very sucessful. All of these reasons help further prove the point of how limiting car usage could really be an advantage in today's society.\n\nAre the peak of vehicles in the United States over? In the past, people predicted flying cars for 2015, but no one predicted a downfall in vehicles all together. Elisabeth Rosenthal states, \"the number of miles driven in the United States peaked in 2005 and dropped steadily after... As of April 2013, the number of miles driven per person was nearly 9 percent below the peak and equal to where the contry was in January 1995.\" So overall, less driving seems to becoming a trend.\n\nPollution caused by the gas of cars is a huge issue in today's society. Some cities are finally taking action. \"Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city\" (Robert Duffer). Few may argue with this, saying that these sort of bans are not fair, delvery companies aren't able to work, or a some may argue about the fine of 31 dollars you're charged if your vehicle is on the road is riduculous. But, \"the smog cleared enough Monday for the ruling french party to rescind the ban\"(Robert Duffer).", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays , after completing senior secondary education , students go for travel or to work for a duration of time rather than going to their further studies directly . There are several benefits and disbenefits to taking a break after school . \r\n\r\nSeveral advantages are there to study after taking a gap, the first and foremost advantage , more creativity, knowledge and seriousness about what they want to do next . For instance , even though they are totally indulged in their education for many years when they have a break , they have no stress on their mind and spend a quantity of their time . Although they grab more knowledge and have to think freely about their carrier , when the pupil just goes for course after completing the school then they do not have much time to think about their subjects and interests . Moreover , they have experience . Nevertheless , they go for work , they get a good experience and have a chance to learn well about it practically .\r\n\r\nThere is a lot of disadvantage also , some students do not return back to their course . For example , they are doing a job or job they like as its earning is good and work is good , they do not like to come back because they are happy with it . In addition , although they lose the chance to be expert in that field , however they do their studies then they have a degree and can make a career in a big company , now they can only do a task on a small scale .\r\n\r\nIn conclusion , however , the student can have an experience of a job , they can not be able to expert in a particular career . Every coin has two sides , a positive and a negative , same is followed by having a gap in school and university education", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Builders Empire State Building faced obstacles trying allow dirigibles dock safety weather policies One obvious issues safety docking Blimps run hydrogen highly flammable If something happen refueling dirigible could potentially cause extreme harm densely populated area underneath Another stumping factor weather high altitudes At feet ground wind constantly changing directions violent air currents high Also proved difficult tie blimp since winds strong dirigible could get close enough building One last obstacle apparent law made stating airships could fly low urban areas This made mooring dock illegal used made captains blimps aware low close many buildings makes challenging dangerous dock dirigibles", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming, \" represents both positive and negative views on the topic of driverless cars. However, driverless cars can benefit society. Driverless cars can benefit society because they are more efficient, they prevent people from purposely driving recklessly, and they have built it safety response.\n\nOne way driverless cars can benefit society is they are potentially more efficient. For example, in paragraph 1, Google cofounder Sergy Brin explains his idea of driverless cars being the new public transportation system. The new driverless vehicles that would replace buses and taxis would use less fuel, and have more flexibility. This would be helpful with today's busy and fast moving society.\n\nAnother way driverless cars can benefit society is they can prevent people from purposely driving recklessly. For example, people who take driving lightly are a threat to other drivers, as well as pedestrains. Paragraph 7 talks about how driverless cars can control themselves, but needs human skills in order to drive through contruction or accident sites. Driverless cars minimalize the amount of time people are in control of the car, which can potentially lower accident rates.\n\nFinally, driverless cars can benefit society because they have built in safety responses. In Paragraph 5, the author explains the use of sensors on driverless cars. Driverless cars with sensor technology can respond to danger around the car faster than a human can respond to the issue, as well as detect danger before the driver does. The sensors also control the car's brake system and engine, which allows better control if the car was about to be in an accident. With sensor technology and its response system, roads will eventually become safer for everyone.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars can benefit and better society. They can help keep roads safer, and can potentially be more efficient than the average car today.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author explains how Venus is a a planet that is sometimes called the \"Evening Star.\" Venus is the second planet from our sun but is safe vantage point from earth so the earth doesn't get too hot from the sun and Venus. Others say that Venus is the sun's twin because they are both close to earth and are both warm/hot planets. A thick atmosphere of alomst 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus and the clouds of highly corrosive sulfric acid is in Venus's atmosphere.\n\nVenus has very extreme conditions that humans can't handle if we land on the planet. Plus Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any other planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun than Venus is. NASA has one particulalry compelling idea for sending humans to go and study Venus. Most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standards forms photography and vidography ineffective.\n\nNASA is working on other approches to studyign Venus such as simplified electronics mode of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. Venus is an amazing planet that us humans want to get to know more about. The planet has so many hidden features such as it's super hot ground and crazy atmosphere. But NASA is working on a way for humans to go study the planet and be able to live through the conditons that the planet has.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Has anyone ever noticed that face shaped rock in Mars? Well back in 1976, some NASA Vikings saw a rock in Mars. They were all talking about it and wanted to know what it was. They told a few people and scientists. They came to a conclusion and made some guesses about what it was. Some said it was an alien's face and some said it was a man's face. It is now 2001, and the argument is currently still going on. Now I'm going to tell you from my perspective whats going on now.\n\nSo I'm a scientist, I'm currently in outerspace with other astronauts. We see what everyone is talking about. It does look like a face. From people's opinion it looks like an alien made the face, a real person, and other exotic ideas. Honestly from my opinion it looks like the natural planet. Of course it looks like a face, but I don't think a man or an alien just came and stuck their face in the planet. Like come on people, let's be real.\n\nIt is now October 24, 2002. Today we go back up into space, we go back in 3 hours. Right now I'm having a conversation with one of the astronauts, John, he thinks an alien made the face. This is what he asks me \"How could you not think that is an alien's face?\" My response: \"Because the face is no where near shaped like an alien's face. There probably is life on that planet, but their face isn't in the planet.\" His response: \"Oh come on, that is totally an alien's face.\" My response: \"Look at the the way the face looks, it doesn't look anything like an alien.\" His response: \" Well if it's not an alien then what do you think it is?\" My response: \"I think that was just naturally formed there.\"\n\nHis response: \"How so?\" My responese: \"Look at the picture, it looks natural. Also, you know all of those big wholes in the earth, they were naturally formed, no one just came an dug that big of a whole in the earth. If so, they would probabbly be stuck inside the whole.\" His response: \"You might be right, but that still doesn't convince me that the face was naturally formed.\" Then I said \"Okay John, how did the alien's face get in the planet? The ground there looks awfully hard. So I don't think it would be possible for anyone or anything to make a face print in it.\"\n\n\"I don't know how, the alien does know.\" Then I said \"Exactly you don't know how it got there. The alien does, if he did it. All I can say for myself is that the alien didn't do it, nor a man. I believe that it was naturally formed. So I'll let you think what you want to think.\" A few hours later, after him thinking about it, he came to the conclusion that maybe it was naturally formed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "father recently lost job It hard It exactly since father job father constantly applying jobs But nt give He kept trying trying Fortunately father job interview san couple weeks going Hopefully get job Thankfully father patient Even though rejected constantly still trys hard get job father I role model amazing level patientence Thank god I someone care patient father Without patience father family could live Well job job I always love father This would true fathers great level patience For main reason dad always heroe number one beloved role model", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wondered why the citizens of a country have the opportunity to voice their opinion in which who they feel should be president. Well i found some information in source 1 that talks about electoral college. Electoral college is not a place but its a process that was found in the constitution as a compromise between election of president by the votes in congress and election oof the president by a popular votes of qualified citizens of the country. I think that they shouldn't change to popular vote in the United States because the electoral college is more fair and plus they don't know the outcome of the election of the popular votes of the prsident of the United States.\n\nI support the electoral college because it allows you to voice your opinions in which who you feel should been president. It's also makes you feel that once you voted that your opinion matters. In source 1 they talk about when the \"Presidential election is held every four years on the Tuesday afterthe first Monday in November.\" also you help choose youir state's electors when you vote for President because when you vote for yor candidate you are actually voting for you candidate's electors. In source 2 they explain it in more details. \"Under the electoral college system, voters votes not for thre president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president.\" They mean that don't matter if you vote for \"John Kerry\" and he's a Democratic and the number of whoever pledge to Kerry would be added on to his votes. thats why i like the electoral college.\n\nBut one the other hand, there saying that they might change it to the election of the popular votes of the president of the United States. I think they should keep using the electoral college because it actually have better benefits or outcomes because you know who you voted for and from what they told you, you believe they can make it happen. There's some states that have a \"winner-take-all\" system that awards all electors to the winning presidential candidate.\n\nBut the bad side about the electoral college is that what happens if thr president you like is a republican but you like the democratic senator? Well i dont know what your going to do then because going to be a problem.\n\nElectoral college is not a place but its a process that was found in the constitution as a compromise between election of president by the votes in congress and election oof the president by a popular votes of qualified citizens of the country. I think that they shouldn't change to popular vote in the United States because the electoral college is more fair and plus they dont know the outcome of the election of the popular votes of the prsident of the United States.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "He ends paragraph cause meaning say would rather take test beautiful conclusion I think The author ends sentence", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It would be a good thing to be able to read people emotions because you never know how someone feels. But what if you have no emotion to a topic? Can it read your emotions then?\n\nThe Facial Coding System detect what your emotions are. The FCS can determine if you are happy, sad, angry, etc.. The ways it can tell is by your 44 major muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an \"action unit.\" Dr. Paul Eckman, a psychologist creator of FACS (Facial Action Coding System). Classify six basic emotions which is associated with characteristic movements of the facial muscles. Even though people show vary degrees of expression such as not smiling it gets compared against a neutral face (showing no emotion) your emotions can still get detected. It's all about the \"action units.\"\n\nSo my questions have been answered. You can still see even with no emotion (a still face) that emotions still get detected. All because of one computer software.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Constructing anything always difficult taksk trying construct worlds tallest building dirigibles able dock even harder The workers modifing Empire State Building nemerous obstacles stood way attempting allow dirigibles dock Empire State Building The obstacle could controll nature The winds said constantly shifting due violent air currents according excerpt wich made difficult dirigibles dock dangerous Also another factor obsticle constructors building The structure building would modified dirigible would add stress building s frame constructors wolud make building support tremendous stress Another obsticle safty dirigibles filled hydrogen extremely flamable dangerous massive population ground These many obstacles faced modifing Empire State Building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports his story very well i think. He knows what he's talking about to be able to wright a story over it. It's something that he's probably always been into in his life! There weremany facts in there i had no idea about. It was just interesting to read about how it was so much different then what is on Earth then it was on Venus. Venus is 90 degrees more hot then what it is here. In that case the heat up there is definaly more powerful then what it is on earth. The author was testing many of different kinda examples to test them. The author has put everything in the right order so that it easyer to understand how it's going. This planet is more so off by it's so that its not so close to I think it would be interesting to read more of his books to see if he's that intot it with those too or it's just that one book that they have!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Since ancient times, people have been moving from one dwelling to another due to various reasons. Some move in as tenants while others as new owners. However, there has been a growing interest in finding out about the past of these houses by these new inhabitants. This essay will discuss their distinctive reasons as well as how they can get hold of that history. \r\n\r\nOne of the factors driving the residents to dig out information on the previous residents could be some found clues from within that raise suspicion and curiosity. For ,example some old buildings, are centuries old, which might be holding untold treasures and secrets. Hence, they have to research more about the past attached to it and those who once lived there. The other push could be that the dwelling might be haunted. This is common in some cultures, in African countries for instance, whereby only a traditional ceremony would be the only remedy for the building to be inhabitable. Lastly, the new occupiers might need to know how the apartment was constructed including the type of material used.\r\n\r\nIn order to satisfy their curiosity and or find answers, the present tenants have to do some intense investigation and get more knowledge about the people who once lived there. They can ask questions that include; whether they owned the house or rented it, the real owners of the house and their occupations, beliefs and most importantly, why they left the home. The best people to ask would be the neighbours, family members or relatives if available. Social media could be handy if getting hold of them physically proves to be difficult. If they are out of reach, the elders of the village could be the right source. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, if circumstances drive new dwellers of a residence or building to research more about the dwelling they live in, neighbours, senior citizens and family members as well as the internet can be good sources of information.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you like\n\nto become a Seagoing Cowboy?\n\nI think you should join the Seagoing Cowboys. It is a great way to help out you city/community, myself in genral I think it woukd be marvelis if more people would join the Seagoing Cowboys. I can't pridict the weather at sea but most likely you will need to beable to with stand the weathers. Also joining the Seagoing Cowboys is a grwat way to show you care about helping out your familys that you are brave and confident in yourself.\n\nNow, I had an opportunity of a life time, being able to become a Seaoging Cowboy. I was 18 before arriving to Greece, I was going to have to be drafted for military service, once they found out I\n\nwas a Seagoing Cowboy they said \"well you can jsut keep doing what your doing out at sea.\"\n\nOn our ship we had many horses and there wasen't many of us therefore our crew could use help from you !\n\nAll of the horses had to be feed and water everyday sometimes three times a day, and on the ship we had 335 horses.\n\nI was so very fourtenit to have a chance to see all diffrent thing around the world. To be exact I saw Euope and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was so special to me. I took a gondols ride in Venice, Italy where they had streets of water. I also toured and excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on\n\nmy way to China.\n\nTo me being a Seagoing Cowboy ment more than just adventure to me it made the world clear and opend up doors. To just be able to have an opportunity like I did was spictacular. There fore if you joined the Seagoing Cowboys you would also be able to have a marvilus adventure at sea. Also have a fun time.\n\nThis shows that it would be a great idea to join the Seagoing Cowboys. You get to see marvelus thing and historic sigts, many of the things I saw.\n\nFor example Venice, Italy had streets of water, you most likly don't see that everyday.\n\nDepinding on how hard you work you will get payed, more worked more payed time. This is why you should joinf Seagoing\n\nCowboys it a fun way to prove your brave.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Educational system is one of the topic that majority look for developing it, because it tuch our kids' success. Furthermore, Enhancement in education sector is one of humans' demand for progress. Nowadays, people think that pupils' opinion is important to help teachers improve their work while others do not agree with this. In my point of view, I strongly disagree with the idea that students can criticis or give their opinion about their teachers. Due to students are not wise enough to juge a teacher, beside that criticism is a huge topic that needs high level of understanding.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, students specially in high schools lack the wisdom that they need to come up with authintic judgement. For instance, kides during this stage of their life are controled with their emotions. Accordingly, they will give their opinion basied on their feeling toward teachers. To be more exact, the general atmosphere that high schools' students feel it is negative one. During high school students tend to enjoy their time and have fun as much as they can instead of taking care of their education. This kind of feeling toward school might effect teachers badly. \r\n\r\nOne more thing, critisim is not an easy topic to tackel. There are many rules we need to follow to come up with reasonable judgement otherwise we might make a big mistake. For example, some universities teach critism as a subject and some time it takes many courses to understand the point behind it. It is very valuable subject if we follow the right rules to critisice someone's work. As I guess high schools' students need a lot of practice first to critisis their teachers. One of the rule is to be profistiohinal and to avoid to be drived by your emotion. \r\n\r\nTo conclued, Education system is essential in our life, So to improve it we need experts who have enough knowledge and experience to give their opinion not to judge teachers. I diagree with the idea of giving the kids in high schools the right to comments or to critisis their teachers. totur is carring an elevated massage to humanity. We should show respect and appreciation to those people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article, I am against the development of driverless cars. This article has many negative aspects of driverless cars. I am against driverless cars because the cost of making them is expensive, the driverless cars could make the driver very bored, and it would be a hazard if there are malfunctions with the machine. Those reasons support my position on being against driverless cars.\n\nI am against the development of driverless cars because they are expensive. I believe they are expensive because they would have to upgrade the roads, make the car smarter, and all of the machinery the companies need to build a driverless car. The article states, \"They required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was simply too expensive to be practical.\" Also to make the driverless car companies will need to make the car smarter and add many machines to the car. The article states, \"Manufacturers turned to smarter cars—but how much smarter did the cars need to be? For starters, they needed a whole lot of sensors.\" That quote means to upgrade the car, there would be many machines used, such as sensors.\n\nAnother reason why I am against the development of driverless cars is they could make drivers in the car very bored. They could make the driver really bored because the article states, \"This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires.\" That quote means that human drivers would have to sit there and wait until there is an alert for the human driver to take over. Also this article also shows us that human drivers will get bored, \"Wouldn’t drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?\" Those quotes show us that human drivers could get bored being in a driverless car.\n\nMy last reason why I am against the development of driverless cars is that they could have malfunctions. The development of driverless cars could lead to malfunctions on the road. The driving laws might need to be changed because of these driverless cars. In the article it states, \"New laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident.\" Also, \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault—the driver or the manufacturer?\" Those quote mean that there would be new laws needed for driverless car just in case a driverless car has a malfunction.\n\nThose were reasons why I am against the development of driverless cars. The cost, the drivers being bored, and the hazards that the driverless cars can bring. That is why there should not be driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist people around area Taking advice older people open landed place affect cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System could cause more issues than it could ever solve. If we used this in classrooms parents and students might get upset because they may not want people knowing there emotions constantly. It could also cause conflict between the student and the teacher. A tecaher might want to confront a student about his or her feelings. This could cause a student to get angry not wanting the teacher to know his or her feelings.\n\nIf this was used then parents may want to take this to court. Some students and parents may not want teahcers to know the students emotional state contsanty. They could make it into a case of infringement on their privacy. Some students try to hide their emotions whether it's because they want to be left alone (which is their choice) or they just want to keep their private life seperate from their school life. The only case the FACS might help would be with bullying. Which still some students may not want this information to be known.\n\nThis FACS may cause conflict between students and teachers. If a teacher was to go and approach a student say after class and try to talk about the students feelings (which some teachers might do) might cause the student to get defensive. Some students only trust certain people they do not want a lot of people to know their emotions. Some students do trust teachers enough to go to said teacher and talk to them about personal problems and emotions. But if this is interaction is started by a teacher they do not turst then some students may get defensive and get angry and lash out.\n\nIn conclusion I do not believe that the FACS should be used in schools. It could cause parents to want to take it to court. It could also cause students to lash out and get defensive. Some students just want to be left alone and dont want their personal life mixing with their school life. The FACS would not help very much in schools i do not think it should be used. The only thing it might be able to help with is bullying and then again many bullying victims would rather not have this infromation be known. In my opinion it would cause more problems than it could ever solve.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As the author mention that there is different risks to live in Venus.\n\nThe author uses explicit evidence to support that \"Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it represent.\n\nNo spacecraft has touch venus and will be difficult for the resistence of the spacecraft. The inner surface of venus and the tempeture will be tough. It will be a difficult task to live in venus.\n\nAs a spacecraft aproches to the land in Venus will be difficult and also the resistence of the spacecraft won't be good as aproching to land in Venus.\n\nThe author show us that there hasn't land a spacecraft in decades, \"since no spacecraft survided the landing for more than a few hours.\"\n\nThis tell us that when the spacecraft is aproching to the surface of Venus it will destroy trying to decend to the atmosphere, because of the tempeture of Venus. Also this could happen because there is no space fo the aircraft to land. This is why \"not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.\"\n\nThe scientist can't find a solution for this spacecraft land of Venus.\n\nBut NASA is working on a experiment to have better electronics in the spacecrafts.\n\nThe surface of\n\nVenus and tempeture are to high and it can't be a good idea to have people in this conditions.\n\nThe conditions of Venus are to high because, it has a high tempeture and it has a high high percent of carbon dioxide.\n\n\"A thick atmosphere almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus\"\n\nThis make a humen live in Venus more difficult and also it won't be able to survive in this conditions. Also the tempeture that Venus has it doesn't have it any other planet \"tempeture average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit.\" While the scientist are trying to find a way to get the radiation of the solar to have more energy.\n\nIt will be difficult to make a new home in Venus because of its not easy conditions.\n\nThey have differerent contions in Venus, \"erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.\"\n\nThe tenesion of living in Venus is really high because, if you made a hiome close to a volcanoe and it erupt; there will be a lot of lifes dead.\n\nAlso when you trying to make a new home it will be more difficult becuase of the hottest surface tempetures.\n\nBut there are some parts of Venus that can help you.\n\n\"The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters,\" this tell us that Venus can be good place to live.\n\nIn conclusion the studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the darger it represent. Because of the spacecraft aproching the surface of venus can have an impact and also it can have a dangerly caused. Also, because of the tempeture and conditions that Venus has. The high percentage of Carbon dioxide and also the high tempeture and being the only planet that has the highest tempeture.\n\nAnd the last is Living in Venus it will be difficult life.\n\nScientist will make something to be able to start a new life in Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Participating in being a Seagoing Cowboys is actually really fun. It can open so much opportunities. Also it is a good way for you to learn and have fun. The program is really rewarding in different ways.\n\nThe program can teach you so much in different ways. It can teach you life skills. You might need it for another job. Maybe you need to know something about your job and thanks to you trying to be a Segoing Cowboy you know about it already. This program can help a lot in life.\n\nThere is much things you can see. You can take that knowledge with you. Put to good use to .\n\nThis program can teach you things that u never would think about. It can teach you a lot but don't even know it.\n\nSeagoing Cowboys program just awesome. It does so much for people who might not even realizes it . You are\n\nbeing hands on experienced. That is a lot better than just being told about or how to do it.the program is just good all the way around.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a contentious controversial argument today over whether to use public sports facilities or not . In societies, there is a topic about facilities which are used for sports activity and some public believe that these products are not useful while other groups think using these facilities can help them keep themselves on shape. In this essay, I am going to talk about this issue and give my own opinion.\r\n\r\n The main reason why citizens like these sport facilities, because they can sport whenever they want without paying money .Moreover, they can do sport in their free time . For example, they can sport before they want to go to their job or even at night , so it can have lots of effect on their health.\r\n\r\n Another group do not support these amenities,since they believe these products are wasting money because some of them are not designed by professionals ,therefore, people can find physical problems by using them . Furthermore, these instruments may not be hygienic ,as all the citizens can touch them and use them and in this way, some diseases can become epidemic in the society . For instance, in the Corona pandemic, all the parks or public places were closed to reduce the connection of people .\r\n\r\n In conclusion, although governments try to increase the facilities of society to provide more convenience for citizens , in my opinion , producing sports instruments can be harmful to the public and they should use them with professional coaches.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many customs and traditional ways of behaviors in my country but as compared to the past these behaviours are no longer relevant to the modern life and no worth keeping. I disagree with this statement.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, customs and traditions are helpful to connect with the ancestors and old ones , these attitudes also helps population to believe in god. For instance, if a person believes in procedure and tradition the person will celebrate so many festivals that happen in their country. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, Traditional and habit behaviour can also become addictive and society believe in them without thinking as there are many rituals, traditions and customs which are not good and folk trust these behaviour blindly which might be harmful to them.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion, modern life has become more attentive and aware full of customs and rituals as they first think if these behaviour are necessary and not harmful to them.There are many customs and traditional behaviour that requires so much expense which might not be necessary.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, no modern life has not for about custom and traditional behaviour but their a way of seeing things have changed and people think traditional and custom behaviours are no longer relevant to modern life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We have a program called The Seagoing Cowboys program. We need more participants to join. We have this program beacause after World War ll, many cities were left in ruins. To help then recover everything that they had lost, 44 nations gathered together to help them recover their ffod supplies, animals, and more. We need more helpers to join and help out. These people have been through a lot. This program may also be a great expirence for you! You will travel around the world to help these people in need. Many nations join together to help thses people and i think that you should too! We will let you know when your missions are, and everything you need to know. If you would like to join please do so. If this happened to you and to others I bet these people would to the same for you. We are here to help eachother. Lets make these people happy! You will be traveling on a ship, to carry what they need. One will keep watch at night,and will feed the animals. You might also have fun, because after the animals are unloaded, the cowboys played baseball and volleyball games where they held the animals in. There was table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped the time go by. It is more than an adventure, it opens you up to the world. Please think about it and join to help these people in need!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today's modern era, some people argue that students should be allowed to make recommendations and even criticize their teachers.While others think that it could lead to losing discipline and respect in the classroom, I personally believe that it is better for educators to give comments to their teachers.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there are two main reasons why this idea would lead to a lack of respect and discipline. The first reason is that most students are too immature to objectively evaluate their teachers, which would lead to completely emotional evaluations without fairness. For example, teachers normally reprimand and punish naughty students when they stray, but given the chance to evaluate, these students would use it to get back at their teachers. In addition, many students will judge their teachers' work as poor because teachers are strict. The second one is that when there are enormous comments, a classroom would be chaos. Because opinions vary from student to student, it would be impractical to choose a teaching way that can be suitable and satisfy all people.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I believe that making comments to educators is beneficial for education. Firstly, if pupils are allowed to give feedback to their teachers, educators would identify their strengths and weaknesses. This can help them improve their pedagogical skills and have good syllabuses in the future. Secondly, feedback is good for pupils, because it makes them feel fully engaged in their education. In fact, the level of comprehension of them depends on the way teachers implement, not on the content of the lesson. For instance, if students are slow, it might be ineffective for teachers teaching to fast. Therefore, giving feedback can help them completely understand their lessons.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although making comments in classrooms might lead to disrespect, I believe that it brings many advantages outweighing drawbacks for educational quality.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars in my opinoin\n\nthey are not safe it doesnt matter if the people who makes them say they are to me they are not. That is crazy to let your car drive itself. you could end up getting on your phone while the car is moving but you donet think nothing of it. By the car being able to move by itself you could think well i can get on my phone and everything will be ok. But that is not always true that car could just stop at any moment and you could hit something or someone. Who will be responsible for you or the people who made the car. You might feel is if they mad the car they are responsible but that is not true because nine times out of ten the car lot made the buyer sign wavier. That is not always fair though you just got the car to look good in and you get in a wreck and hve to pay. Driving those cars will always have your life at risk and that is not how anyone should want to drive at risk. Having one of those cars are not good to me i would stay aware just to make sure nothing would happen. But since that is a driverless car people think oh i shouldnt have to worry about anything. Driving one of these cars is not a good fit and is not safe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars are seen and used every day. You most likely drove in a car or rode in one coming to school or work. But these little motors are harming us little by little by damaging the environment. So what are the advantages of Limiting car usage?\n\nI believe that limiting car usage is an important factor nowadays. Driving causes pollution which in fact harms our environment(14). Paris actually banned driving for a couple of days due to smog , which is a type of pollution. Paris motorists would have to pay a fine of 22-euros or $31 just to drive there cars(11). Paris has more smog than other European capitals(17). After all of this hard work of limiting car use, the smog actually cleared and people did not have to pay to drive anymore(19). Is limiting car usage helpful?\n\n(\"Paris bans driving due to smog\" by Robert Duffer)\n\nNow what if we stop driving all together? According to this artical \"In German Suburbs, life goes on without cars\" by Elisabeth Rosenthal, The Residents of Vauban have given up their cars(1). Matter of fact the people of Vauban dont really drive at all but instead people use trams and other forms of transportations(2). By doing this you can be on the environments side instead of fighting it. ( \"In German Suburbs, life goes on without cars\" by Elisabeth Rosenthal)\n\nHow about a whole day of not using your car? Well that is currently happening in the city of Bogota , Colombia. Imagine all your friends and family riding bikes ,skating ,and even jogging to work or school. wouldn't that be cool?(20) \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution\" Said Businessman Carlos Artura (24). Even other cities joined with the event . Now we have to bring this even to the United States. (\"Car-Free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota\" By Andrew Selsky\n\nI belive that Limiting car use is a great advantage. We have Countrys making days that Avoids driving. \"Car-Free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota\" By Andrew Selsky .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, the development of media technology has brought us plenty of entertainment. Some famous people blame about paparazzi for hunting them. While some argue it is right. Personally, I can only agree partly with the issues and this essay will explore more about the above problems.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nFirst, we will discuss the negatives. Standing in the people's perspective who witnessed tragedies when their beloved members are depressed causes affected by netizens. In fact, plenty of famous individuals have been affected by mental issues so badly by negative words on the Internet. For instance, in recent years, some miss or models who are not careful in their words, do not receive the support of everybody. In addition, a multitude of netizens blamed her, which made her become depressed and even get crowd syndromes. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, we will discuss the positives. Standing in the perspective of celebrities who were paparazzi welcome and hunting them, they feel very happy and looking forward to that .This can be seen, in plenty of famous people who are very happy when someone talks about them which helps them viral more and more. For example, a multitude of celebrities have over or viral behaviours on the internet. They are so happy when the population talks about them. Moreover, they can make a lot of income from this fame. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the hunting of paparazzi is positive or negative it depends on the perspective of each individual. We should have the right choices when reading news about them. That goes hand in hand, with the government should have sustainable, suitable policies that have the purpose of creating a society better and better.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Censorship helps prevent people viewing listening read disturbing images ideas certain age groups But case libraries books would taken shelves And books taken shelves books stores would thrown well Books essential part life They great ideas thoughts expressed amazing pieces word art People think books libraries censored fools These people want keep children safe understandable time hurting people decision decided put forth Authors hurt work censored People enjoy reading books wanted censored would longer able read books It mainly choice person avoid books truely find offensive They go way try censor would eventually might cause everyone people think could find book censored And happens would books shelves The government take notice ban books worse remove books forever like happened Over books good thing They gives us inspiration help us pull life thoughts expressed It choice avoid books upset people think", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The story \"Challenge of exloring Venus\" is like when we went to moon, and now we are shooting for the stars in this universe for an example \"Venus\". \"The 3 facts are The \"Evening star\" Venus is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky.\" The other fact is that Venus is the closest like planet earth, that is why it is called Earth's \"twin\". The last fact is that Venus has 97 percent carbon dioxide on the planet.\n\n\"Venus, is sometimes called the \"Evening Star\" is one of the brightest points of light in the sky\". \"However, Venus the nickname is misleading since Venus is actually a plant\". The author is trying to tell us that Venus is a plant that has alot of people have been mislead on how Venus is a star or a planet, and how Venus is so close to the sun. Like Venus is the second plant from the sun.\" While Venus does might be easy to get there to some people, the author does talk about how it will still be very hard no matter what. like how the author talks about how an \"amateur stargazer can spot Venus on most days.\" Humans are not wanting to see it in the sky by to really look at it but the auther explains that \"it has been proven a very challenging place to examine more closely these days.\n\nVenus, often referred to as the Earth's \"twin,\" because \"Venus is the clostest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distace too.\" The auther explains that \"Earth, Venus, and Mars are our planetary neighbors.\" and \"how humans s have sent numerous spacecraft to land on the cloud-draped world.\" Venus also have some cons also because, \"no spacecraft survived the landing for more then a few hours.\" The auther explains that it could be deadly for humans to try to land on the planet Venus, and how \"it has been taking humans more then three decades\" to study and land on Venus. The other many reason way there are \"Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challening planet for humans to study, despite proxmity to us, as the author explain to us in the story.\n\nThe study of Venus has been look at by NASA for many years, \"They have been thinking about sending humans to study Venus\" The auther explain's the plain that \"NASA many have possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus that would allow scientists to float above the fray.\" The reason why it is so hard to get to venus or get on the suface is because, \"most of the time jet planes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms\". Flying to venus, over Venus, or flying on venus surface humans would have to deal with the \"unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way.\" The aother thing that the auther talks about,\n\nthat it is \"thirty-pluns miles above the surface, that the tempatures would still be nice and toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to sea level on Earth. This explain that Venus is close to earth, but it is not fully like earth the way we like it today.\n\nThe story of the \"Challenge of exloring Venus\" is like when we went to moon, and now we are shooting for the stars in this universe \"The 3 facts are The \"Evening star\" Venus is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky.\" The seconed fact is that Venus is the closest like planet to earth, that is why it is called Earth's \"twin\". The last fact is that Venus has 97 percent carbon dioxide on the planet. The auther explains that no matter what Earth and Venus are very close in some forms and in other forms not even close but in the end they are still both planets. Like what the author said, \"Our travel on Earth and beyound should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The \"Unmasking the Face on mars\" was journaled when they sent a drone out into space to take pictures of Planet Mars. When they were on expidition they found a face like thing in the ground luckily the drone was able to get a picture and it was a face embeded in the ground. Some people believe that it is an alien but we will never know.\n\nAfter this broke headlines people started making movies and all, including the newpapers, T.V broadcastings and all. This continued all the way up till 2001. They still monitor the unmasking of the face, it slowly is starting to reveal itself.\n\nWhat could this face be? Is it an alien or once a human being? Well we won't be finding out maybe for another decade or so, But it;s weird how it was there an nobody knew it was there till there was an expidition for it. Some people as if Planet Earth was created by aliens or not. Truth is we will never know until we keep going on expiditions to keep learning more about the planets.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Facial action coding system is the future of reading emotions. I think that using this technology in classrooms would be very valuable. We could find what the students like. We could get everyones opinion easier. We could have unweighted test, kids wouldnt need to change their answers based on their friends. So i think that using this facial action coding system would be good for the school.\n\nUsing this system could help us learn what students like. For example if they play a series of ads we could moniter their facial expressions after each ad. Also we could find what the students like to read about, for example if the kids are reading some text they may smile when they think its good. Using this system would help alot to figure our students out.\n\nUsing this system woud also help us get information easier. we could get kids to use it but like alot of them at the same time and it would be easier than just having you question them one by one. The system would be more efficient and effective. They can record the data and run it in a chart to find what kids refer in a larger scale but it would be fater and more accurate than questioning them one by one without the system. The system would help out the school by letting them do this much faster.\n\nIf schools used the system then kids wouldnt have to lie. kids wouldnt really be able to lie cause the system can recongnize wha they are thinking and how they are feeling. Kids wouldnt change their answer becasue of what theryre friends picked. They cant really change their facial expressons at first. you react how you react You react how you feel.\n\nIn conclusion I think that using this system at schools would really help the school. it would help the students, it would help everyone. Students could be honest and it would be alot more accuarte. so system is a yes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This drawing illustrates how mobile phones developed. Overall, a contemporary mobile phone is smaller, lighter and it has a lot of functions including its display and buttons, compared to an early mobile phone.\nThe contemporary mobile phone is much smaller and lighter than the early mobile phone. The width of the former is 40mm, and the height is 90mm. On the contrary, the width of the latter was 50mm, and the height was 130mm. In addition, the weight of new one is a 70g which is almost a half of the weight of the old one.\nSupprisingly, the new gadget has a lot of functions. The old phone had a black/white display and few buttons. However, the new one has a full-colour display by which users can watch the beautiful pictures. In additon to this, it has a camera with video capability and useful keyboard and buttons by which users can send an e-mail, and play th Internat and games.\nThese are main changes between an early mobile phone and a contemporary mobile phone.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Whereas some individuals believe that some detrimental impression would be imposed on scions by watching Tv,others are of the notion that its associated advantages surpass in various aspects.Nevertheless,in my point of view,its affirmative effects shadow the unwanted offspring in different approaches.However,different aspects are uttered here.\r\n\r\n One of the most highlighted effects of watching Tv has to do with the enhancement of users' knowledge that will occur in various realms.For instance,not only people's political and social awareness but their biological and even historical information also would soar drastically owing to the professional programmes that are broadcasted.Furthermore,juveniles would be deterred from getting involved with devastating activities.As a vivid case,when they are entertained by controlled media that is released on screens,neither the adequate opportunity nor enough energy would remain for them to allocate to destroying functions,such as delinquency.\r\n\r\n On the other hand,both psychological and physical problems are probable for them to encounter if spend the whole of their leisure time pursuing movies.To enlighten,exercising as a vital activity for balancing both hormones and body metabolisms would be abandoned after a while,hence obesity conquers them as the main radix behind the majority of diseases,like cardiovascular drawbacks.Moreover,the attempts that used to have taken place for their breeding may be collapsed if they are exposed to inappropriate data.To illustrate,Tv has the responsibility for enhancing the knowledge of folks of divergent ages and similarly genders,therefore,some of them can be adverse for toddlers or even youngsters,either sexual or political news that usually targets the elderly as a transparent case.\r\n\r\n To conclude,although some side effects in either realm, psychological or physical aspects,can be experienced by the young,to me,it would be eradicated if appropriate supervising be considered by their parents for prohibiting them from violence for example.Thus, its favourable side triumphs while individuals follow fruitful programmes that are provided for their ages to broaden their horizons about the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recently, it is common for people to upload knowledge to the cloud rather than to memorise them in print media, which had been popular in the past. Despite there are some dangers of losing information due to technical issues, I believe that the benefits of unlimited storage capacity and easy accessibility far outweigh any drawbacks.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the main disadvantage of uploading everything to the Internet is the risk of losing information. If there is a cyber attack or a technical error, online content will disappear, and there is no feasible remedy to fix this problem. This would never happen if the information were stored in printed material, which was used widely in the past. For example, Conestoga College recently reported a cyber-attack on its e-library, which resulted in losing most of the scientific research in the chemistry department. However, I believe that technical problems can be prevented by using cybersecurity services from reputable companies to protect the data of individuals and organizations.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I believe that the benefits of this trend are much more significant. In the past, people faced difficulties finding information because they had to read many books in a library or school. They also experienced the challenge of finding places to keep valued books because of the large number of them. In this era, people can store whatever they want in clouds or virtual spaces, which are not only inexpensive but also allow them to have unlimited capacity. Moreover, they also can easily access any knowledge with a click of a mouse, which is faster and more convenient than before. For example, OneDrive allows users to upload up to 500 GB to their accounts at only 10 US dollars annually, and they can download these files in less than 5 minutes.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there is a drawback to using the Internet as an alternative storage solution regarding the risk of technical issues. However, it seemed to me that its advantages far outstrip this drawback in terms of the larger storage ability and the convenience of obtaining information.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt Narciso Rodriguez Narciso Rodriguez several ways author created mood For instance author states family Cuba able move modest apartment The authors states originally Cuba could afford move modest apartment I would soon call home NUM This quote shows authors parents wanted give good life They moving Another example occurs author describes kitchen heart house like even though New Jersey house still feels like cuba The author says Passionate Cuban music I adore filled air mixing aromas kitchen NUM This quote demonstrates authors family made sure still knew cuba like The authors parents wanted show sides world cuba Last author says grateful parents way grew The author says I learned real definition family I learned love NUM This quote shows author learned important skills life Thanks family knows love treat everyone respect Clearly many ways author created mood excerpt", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Empire State Building s docking zone magnificent novel idea first concieved difficult implement Al Smith spearheaded operation anxious complete Since enough time devoted researching risk s structure dock plan mount top Empire State Building already failure Before construction even began trouble started brew The building could nt withstand stress foot long dirigible The shock building would transmitted tremendous pressure foundation So roof would redone order structurally sound After many months dollars creation landing dock could begin Life precious landing dock volatile dangerous used The architects overlooked fact foreign ones made hydrogen helium Hydrogen extremely Flammable In Hindenburg constructed using hydrogen caught aflame killed hundreds There even law stating aircraft could suspended close urban area The idea ostentatious showy rushed precautions taken account The obstacles faced docking station much finally plan erect abandoned", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Here's an intresting topic no one has ever heard about Seagoing Cowboys. Seagoing Cowboys are people who help with wars whenever they get hurt and they also travel with the citizens in the war that is currently going on. In this essay we are going to talk about how Luke Bomberger made a successful job at being a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nHere are some reasons why you should be thinking about Seagoing Cowboys. First, they help people in many ways like if it includes helping the wounded people or traveling with the people that fight for our country. Second, they help with food, shelter, and clothes. Thrid, Seagoing Cowboys get to make buddies all around the world on an estimate there are like 44 nations joined to help these people that participate in World War ll. All of this evidence was found in p2 in A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves.\n\nNow it's time to come to a wrap. Seagoing cowboys help people if their in a war, or need some support like it's going to be okay, or your parents are delighted that you decided to help citizens. For your family, world you would risk your life JUST to help the world now that is a real hero!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article, \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the narrator tells us why NASA is struggling so much to explore the planet of Venus, what's so hard about it, and what their plan is.\n\nThe author believes that studying Venus is a \"worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\" The author supports his idea very well by proving many good points and using factual evidence.\n\nThe author supports his idea by proving good points and using evidence. You can tell he is sincere about this and would like for the scientists to try and further explore Venus and its commodoties. For example, in paragraph 8, he talks about how our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts. This is a very reasonable statement, and proves that he actually has a reason to want Venus to be explored. Also in paragraph 8, the author says, \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" This quote supports the authors idea because he is giving an ethical reason about why he wants scientists to create the technology to be able to put humans on Venus. He is explaining to the readers why he wants this to take place, and by giving his opinion, it automatically supports him and his idea.\n\nThe author does many things to help support his idea throughout this article. He is very opinionated about why he wants there to be people on Venus. The author support his idea very well by proving many good points and using factual evidence.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I patient person An example games For games wait weeks months For others might wait years I done", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People without occupations are increasing; hence, people suppose that children solely need to study until high school. From my perspective, I am totally against this viewpoint and will elaborate on some reasons to justify this stance.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, the primary rationale would appear to be better growth. That is to say, when children possess more opportunities to access education, they can develop all aspects of their mental and physical health. It means that they can study some subjects, typically math, gymnastics, and science. Therefore, they can boost their brains to acquire new information and have sufficient knowledge for working in the future and enhance their major competence with top-notch initiatives.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, another motive relates to higher soft skills. To be more specific, they not only broaden their horizons but also receive a variety of meaningful lessons and experiences pertaining to strange situations. Moreover, if they are taught for a longer time, they will meet some practical behaviours and then know how to apply their expertise to solve difficult circumstances. As a result, they know the ways to go through ups and downs as well as obstacles. For example, they are educated in good communication abilities to team up with their peers in order to obtain the best results in their work. From that, young generations effortlessly implement these things for their career later and reach their summit of professions. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it would be logical to conclude that giving up going to high school should be rejected by virtue of better growth and higher soft skills. In fact, higher education should be advocated because of its numerous merits for future work.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate whether it is crucial to do research into family background or concentrating the present and next generations is necessary. While each has its own merits, I would contend that it is optimal to combine both mentioned factors.\r\n\r\nWithout a shadow of a doubt, it is essential to investigate family trees in order to enhance people's understanding of their ancestors' cultures. To be specific, understanding traditional habits enables people to have a good understanding of their own identity and pass it down through generations. In Vietnam, for example, when the Lunar New Year arrives, a steady stream of adults take their toddlers to churches near their homes to offer incense and provide children with family history. Hence, having a good understanding of the family history is of paramount significant. \r\n\r\nWhile the importance of studying the history of family is widely acknowledged, it is unfair if focusing on the younger generations is ignored. To be particular, the offspring are the ones who will follow in the footsteps of their ancestors in the future. In Vietnam, for example, there are numerous families who own a private corporation and prolific businesses. As a result, their descendants will be able to carry on the family's traditional vocation. As a result, focusing on the younger generations is also critical, as they will carry the entire family's career in the future.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, although looking back to family background plays a paramount significant role in providing cultural tradition for everyone, laying stress on the young is of essence as they will carry the future career of a family.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Winter Hibiscus end story author writes come back Saeng vowed silently In spring snow melt geese return hibiscus Is budding I take test The reason author said Is Is trying tell readers get right back If fell Is harm trying When spring birds nt flying south promise take drive s test After failing driver test Saeng buys flower florIst remInded Vietnam She takes home put garden Told mother fail Saeng s mother understand told maybe next time In conclusion author write last paragraph moral never give keep trying accomplish goals life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If someone looking offensive book going find whether s collecting dust library shelf brand new book store The goes offensive magazine movie Removing offensive items library shelves cause people searching items look elsewhere Different people different opinions offensive offensive The example controversial book many people believed offensive religious beliefs While many people found The offensive others enjoyed story If book removed libraries people found offensive others really enjoyed book would able read Another reason libraries remove offensive items shelves likely entire book magazine movie etc offensive whole way Even movie one offensive scene rest movie could great story many people would benefit seeing It idea book magazine There offensive chapters one two offensive articles rarely find book movie magazine offensive whole way Of course still offensive items would bad younger kids see even one two offensive scenes chapters article There easier solutions problem remove items shelves completely One solution problem could libraries put age limits certain items younger kids ca nt check materials innapropriate But importantly would job parents monitor kids reading watching listening Removing offensive books magazines music movies shelves libraries would cause problems complaints I think good idea leave material library shelves caution library users read risk", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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