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"content": "Do you think that the the human face looking thing in Cydonia, on Mars, was created by aliens? I do not. I think that it is nothing but a Martian mesa. There is no factual evidence for aliens making this \"monument\", it is familier to us on Earth, and it would not make any sense for it to be hidden from us.\n\nFirst of all, there are no facts to support that aliens created this landform. For example, the theory was based on no evidence or facts. No facts even hint to the landform being created by aliens exept that it kind of resembles a face. And there are plenty of chips, and even grilled cheeses that looks like a person, or even Jesus.\n\nLike having no factual evidence, the landform seen in Cydonia on Mars is somewhat similar to things that us humans on the Earth can see. The landform on Mars is similar to landforms that we have on the Earth today. On our planet, there are many mesas, just like the one found on Mars. And we know that the mesas on our planet are created by natrual events or occurences.\n\nLast of all, it would make absolutly no sense for NASA to be hiding that the landform was created by aliens, wich it wasn't. If it were alien made, NASA would tell us, in order to make money. For example, if NASA figured out that it was created by aliens, they would want to tell us in order to make money to expand the Mars exploration program. But, hiding it, they make less money, because people want to know more about othe life-forms, not a lifeless, rusted planet. (but wateer was recently discovered on Mars)\n\nIn conclusion, the landform on Mars was not created by aliens, but meerly just a natrual landform. This theory has no factual evidence, can be seen on Earth, and does not make any sense. And, though, there will always be people who will always believe that it was created by aliens, you should now believe other-wise.",
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"content": "Most people think that driving is a top priority. There are other ways of getting from place to place. There are many advantages of limiting car usage. For instance, there will be no more pollution, most people stopped driving, and many people will gain plenty of excercise without the use of cars. There are many other positive ways to get around the city instead of driving a car.\n\nThis world already has enough pollution, but with the limitations to car use there won't be. Cars these days give off extra gas that is harmful to the animals, plants, and even people. According to Source 3: Car-free Day Is Spinning Into A Big Hit In Bogota, by Andrew Selsky, \"It was the third straight year cars have been banned with only buses and taxis permitted for the Day Without Cars in this capital city of 7 million. The goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. Violators faced $25 fines.\" This cause is a good way to lower air pollution. For example, many women and some men face the struggle of having breast cancer. On certain days there will be a walk to help cure breast cancer. It won't stop it completely, but it's a great cause to help cure it. According to Source 1: In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars, by Elisabeth Rosenthal, \"Automobiles are the linchpin of suburbs, where middle-class families from Chicago to Shanghai tend to make their homes. And that, experts say, is a huge impediment to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes.\" The efforts are strong and with more people being included will help make the air pollution lower to a better percentage. For example, when people are sick they have to take medicine in order to get better. This world and the atmosphere will become a better place to live if more people get involved with the limited auto use.\n\nDriving isn't in the number one spot on things-to-do anymore. Most people stopped driving in America. According Source 4: The End Of Car Culture by Elisabeth Rosenthal, \"Recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less, and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by.\" The change in fewer people getting a car will also be a good way to stop traffic in the cities. For instance, if someone brings in chocolate cupcakes, but no one except one person likes chocolate, then they would take more for them. Same with the road; less people on the road the more room for people who want to or need to drive to some place. Also in Source 4, \"As of April 2013, the number of miles driven per person was nearly 9 percent below the peak and equal to where the country was in January 1995.\" A lot of people can't afford cars or even think they are a waste of money. For example, no one would buy something that they don't nessecarily need. People would take the money and use it for something more important. There are many advantages of limiting car usage. When people stop driving, that means there wouldn't be a lot of people on the road. There will be more space for people that have emergencies or important business errands, or people that just want to drive.\n\nWithout many cars around due to limited auto usage, people will have the advantage to excercise. There are many people that are overweight and need help to fix it. According to Source 3: Car-free Day Is Spinning Into A Big Hit In Bogota, by Andrew Selsky, \"In a program that's set to spread to other countries, millions of Colombians hiked, biked, and skated to work during a car-free day yesterday.\" Without cars for a limited time would be a great idea to take control and work out. It helps people live a healthier life style and build muscle. For instance, some kids are forced out of the house for atleast an hour of play time and get on track to become healthy. Not just children should be doing this, but also adults. Although when someone needs to get to some place, taking a car would be quicker, but having no cars has advantages too. Some people might complain and be too lazy to go ride a bike to the store, but as a result in the end, the person on the bike will be in better shape than the person in the car. There is nothing wrong in staying fit when there isn't an option in driving a car somewhere.\n\nThere are other ways of getting from place to place. There are many advantages of limiting car usage. For instance, there will be no more pollution, most people stopped driving, and many people will gain plenty of excercise without the use of cars. There are many other positive ways to get around the city instead of driving a car.",
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"content": "Hello everyone. Today I will write an Argumentive Writing Prompt to tell you why you shoud join the Seagoing Cowboys program. Also I will talk about a Boy/Man named Luke Bomberger. And how he became one and what he had to do just to become a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nOne day right out of the blue Luke didnt know his life was going to change right after highschool. He thought this because in 1945 the World War ll was over in Europe, and many contries were left in ruins. But to help these contries with their food and supplies, you would have to be a Seagoing Cowboy. So Luke desided to sign up. But you would have to take care of horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas.\n\nLuke just turen 18 yrs old before arriving in Greece. Luke had mafe a lot of trips too. He got to go to Venice, Italy, and a city with streets of water. But what he was looking forward to seeing was Europe, and China. But the most of all seeing the Acropolis in Greece was specail to him. And his wish will soon come true because he stiil has to travel a lot to help all the people ansd save them with there supplises an dfood.\n\nIt took to weeks to cross the Antlantic. But taking care of the animals with the feeding, the bathing, and the holding, plus keeping an eye on them kept luke busy so he can keep his mind off of it. It was even really hard for luke because he had to feed them and bath them three times a day.\n\nLuke really had this going good cause as a little boy he helped out on his Aunt Katie's farm. So he was actually prepared for this today. But the thing he wasn't for was the the dangers in the sea and at the Sea.\n\nThe best part for Luke was that he had his own job. His job was to look after the animals and serve them. Luke thought it was good for him to finally do somehting.\n\nOne rainy night as luke was doing his hourly job the captain came out to check on everything. As he was doing that he slipped and slid falling on the side of the boat. Luke was so scared because he saw something in the water. It was pointy and sharp. Thats when the captain fell right on top of it. The captain couldn't work for a couple of days then because he broke his ribs.\n\nPass the time almost every five or ten mineutes the team went to go check on the captain to if he was o.k. It takes them for ever to come back. So pass that time Luke had something in mind. He had enough time to play games and dally around. He had so much fun. Even some of the team stay out and played games to. They got to play baseball and volleyball. They played Table- tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, and whittleing.\n\nSo now you know what it takes to be a Seagoing Cowboy hope you join. And remember youll gat to have fun.",
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"content": "It's often said that most people tend to kick off a career after graduate: however, they continue to be rather controversial because they pursue to study in high-education. This essay will discuss the debate and give a concluding view.\n On the one hand, opponents of having a degree say that solicits for an appointment can be owned independent and autonomy skill without a breadwinner. This is because the number of employees, who conceivably improve employability in the long run, has been surging to effect a branch of the economy and private organization. The point to evidence from high development countries (such as Los Angeles) youngest workers lead to the highest academic achievement in the state sector. Moreover, If you enlist for a job, they say, you will assimilate knowledge for society such as group work and self-sufficiently.\n On the other hand, a supporter of the idea claims that tertiary education gives a chance for a course. The example can be seen that it is impossible to become a doctor without having a relevant degree. Its almost universally accept that third level learning has access to more and better job opportunities and they tend to earn higher salaries than those with fewer qualification. Therefore you acquire to learn theories or skill and gain knowledge of how to be successful in the field that you choose. For example, in the UK, some individual companies, where a desire to based on their academic background would be higher triumphal rather than employees.\n In conclusion, it seems advisable that tertiary education can be a helpful part of a pupil's career and education: besides, it might surge of their future progression.",
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"content": "Driverless cars are something we've envisioned and witnessed before in entertainment shows or movies. However realistically these cars are not something I would want in our every day lives. Many reasons contribute to my thoughts on this, some being that they will be very expensive, unsafe, and pointless for the driver.\n\nThese automated cars that can drive due to sensors, and 360 cameras with special high tech features all combine into one pricey vehicle. Buying such cars will not only empty our wallets but lead to annual cleanings, repairs, and more if a peice of technology gets damaged. As mentioned in the article, \"Dubbed LIDAR it uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the cars surroudings.\" The amount of money it would take to replace or refurnish this particular part would cost thousands if not hundreds of dollars. It creates an image so it can mimic the skill of a human at the wheel, without it the car is no longer driverless. Paying large amounts of money for a car that can drive itself and may even be unsafe anyways is a waste.\n\nThis leads into my second main point as to why these cars should not be supported. They are unsafe for both the people in the car and other drivers on the road. \"Traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. As a result, in most states it is illegal even to test driven cars.\" This exerpt from the article alone proves that if various states are not comfortable with 100% computer driven cars that they should not be used or be on the road in the first place. Many computers or robots make mistakes, if one small malfuction were to occur during a trip, it could cause serious injuries or fatalities to people on the road and the car itself. Driverless cars should not be trusted to handle everyday commutes to jobs or other places because they are unsafe.\n\nWith new cars that can drive themselves it lacks for the younger generations to learn how to drive in the first place. Teenagers or young adults will not have the tendancy to take drivers ed courses because it is assumed that the car will handle all situations. However, all drivers should have basic knowledge when on the road. Driverless cars will lessen the amount of real driving with the upcoming generations.\n\nLastly, in the article it mentions that drivers must always be alert even with driverless cars. \"...all are designated to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires.\" If the driver is required to sit in the vehicle and do nothing but stare at the road ahead, it is pointless to have the car drive itself when it should naturally be able to handle driving on its own. Not only will the driver be bored, they will also have the urge to take over instead. This completely defeats the point of having a driverless car if the driver is left with the same job.\n\nTechnologies are advancing and with so many different things being invented or modified we tend to forget that some things should just remain the same. Not only for the safety of others but for the knowledge of others that will soon be driving like the rest. Driverless cars should not be allowed merely because it cannot truly mimic and take control of unexpected situations like a human can.",
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"content": "Do you think that a computer in a classroom that could read your expressions help you in school? No right? That's what I thought too until I realized 1 major thing. Once I realized it I completely changed my mind about the situation.\n\nThere are a couple ways that this could be valuable but one stood out to me the most and really made me believe that it really could help. Imagine you're sitting in a classroom trying to get work done and then your mind wanders, you get bored and start to daydream. Then your computer notices that and keeps you on task by changing the lesson by making it more interesting and more to your taste. The text states in paragraph 6\n\n\"A classroom computer can recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson like an effective human insructor.\" If all schools had this option Im sure that graduation rates, the number of intelligent kids, and school participation ect. will go up by a significant amount.\n\nThese were most of my reasons as to why I believe in the Facial Action Coding System. So yes I know it will be valuable.I know that it wll help students learn more. The real question is what do you think about all of this?",
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"content": "The negative aspects of driverless cars are that some people in those cars are not aware of there surroundings.Also the people sometimes dont check the whole car , then there might be some problems with the car, so they might not know how to work a the car , for they didn't look it over yet.So the driver has to remain alert so they'll know when the car need there assistants in the future.So, now they should know what it feels like to be behind the wheel of a driverless car....\n\nSome positive aspects of the driverless car is that they will have alerts or signals to help the driver know when to take over or to help, in dangerous situations like\n\nwork zones, accidents, and or bad traffic.What also needs to get watched out for, is the people who just dont look\n\nboth ways, who just walk across the street without looking both ways, when crossing the street.Also my position on this driveless car thing is that if they wanted it to work they would be more aware and be more careful on the streets when your driving.Also that nobody should drive for you, if you cant drive yourself places.Most laws suggest that driving laws focus on keeping drivers, pedestrians safety , passagers and lawmakers safety for all harm on the outside.\n\nI think as a teenage student they shouldn't have driveless cars, for do you know how many drunk teenage drivers we get, or other types of drugs people get into now a days?We cant have people driving in the condition there in .So i want them to re-think everything about this driveless car thing. For people who\n\nare abusing the fact that they could have a nice time, only if they paid attention to the road more often.",
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"content": "Dear weekly The new millenium brought new wave technology Computers main invention likely everyone uses The computers teach us great things learning vacation spot far country The computer allows us talk friends family away even home Also typing computer teaches us hand eye coordination help us things The computer surely great invention Have ever wanted go vacation somewhere overseas Well computer great source learning places The effects could significant One day one might want go bahamas finds new location even In addition computer benefits students well Students usually projects places world computer main source intelligence When I essay I always use computer first Recently grandmother moved I talk phone Although computer I actually see screen The webcam allows see grandma The computer allows keep touch friends family see regular bases For example twitter keeps touch friends high school The computer also send emails friends family say hello every Sports require great deal hand eye coordination The computer makes better By looking screen typing gives boost handeye coordination two things A sport requires lot While ball air must focus holding stick correct position Although handeye coordination mainly taught powers computer To conclude I would like say computer great source intellegence It also allows keep touch high school friends far away family Finally computer teaches handeye coordination The computer important piece technology",
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"content": "The author should continue studying Venus despite the dangers it presents. because in the text it talks about how they had to stop studying Venus since the spacecraft would not survive more than a few hours.\n\nWhat they know about Venus is how thick its atomosphere is 97 percent carbon dioxide, and its challenging are the clouds of sulfuric acid. The planets surface the average surface is 90 times much more then on earth. And it has the hottest temperature in the solar system even if Mercury is the cloest its not as hot as Venus.\n\nSince no spacecraft survived the landing more than a few hours. They would stop because it wouldn't survive. It explains why they haven't got a spacecraft to stay at Venus. And what I would have to guess on why they didn't survive is probadly because how intense Venus really is. Now by intense I mean how strong the planet really is. Now more then 3 decades Venus has not had a spacecraft there. They haven't gave up. But they're trying to find a way.\n\nNASA is working on other ways to study Venus. NASA thought about sending humans to study Venus. But the conditiond of venus makes it hard, because they have to orbit the planet and they cannot take samples like rock or gas. The only thing they could get to study Venus are images.\n\nI still think the author should continue on studying Venus despite the dangers it presents.",
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"content": "Whether social media has more advantages or drawbacks has always been a heated discussion.Social applications has been popular these years, as with people's dependence on smart phones, ipads as well as laptops.Users in no matter ages use social apps to get in cloth with their friends and family memebers.At the same time,social media such as Youtube can always ensure that we keep in touch with the latest news.Some say that technology benefits us ,others suggests that it ruins our normal life more or less. In the upcoming paragraphs I will discuss both sides and give my own idea.\r\n\r\nThink about the days without intelligent divices,people used telephone to communicate with each other if they got one,which cost a lot of money compared to the internet we relay on today. And if we want to get to know what happened today , we can only expect on tomorrow's newspaper and tv news lately.As for now,we can get to know what is happen now through so many live shows given by government channels or even citizens themselves,everyone can open his own channels to share their opinions and feelings .We can use lots of social media tools to share our happiness and sorrow with family members , friends or even strangers from the world.\r\n\r\nOthers may suggest that,the cons weights more than pros . Social media takes up the majority of our free time.We do not spend as much time on studying and communicating with our loved ones as before.Every now and then,it will come up news that teenagers dropped out from school because of addicted to online games .The time with online friends ruined the relationship with real family and pals . A part of internet users may even be cheated by others through onilne chatting.\r\n\r\nFrom my perspective,I believe that though social media can bring us some confusion about the way we live and take up too much time that can be spent on realife,the benefits and convinence it brings have definitely ensure us to live a more better life.We use less time and money get to know the world.Consumers spent less on purchasing goods from in and abroad stores.Studens are able to learn online at home and chat with their classmates and teachers during the tough time caused by covid-19. All in all, I suggest that social media brings the world more advantages.",
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"content": "The electoral college system has been part of America for many years. At times, this system has proved to be a good thing for our country, but in most times, it has not. I am in favor of changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United States. I am in favor of changing to a popular vote because of the unfairness, faulty aspects, and electors in the electoral college.\n\nTo begin, the electoral college is fair in some ways, but mostly not. One may understandably say that \"The Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no canidate recieves a majority of the votes cast\" (Posner, 22). The electoral college has proved to be a balance to the political weight of the large states, but regardless of the size of the state, it should be a citizen right to vote directly for their president. \"Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the \"swing\" states\" (Plumer, 13). This quote shows the unfairness to the voters, those in the smaller/more insignificant states don't even matter because of the electoral college! When voting, citizens also become confused with the electors, and potentially vote for their opposing party. Not only is the electoral college unfair for the voters, but for the presidental canidates as well. We as citizens vote for electors whom we must entrust to vote for the party's nominee. This trust is rarely betrayed, but \"...it is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral bote will not win the national popular vote\" (Posner, 16). In 2000, the election with Al Gore and George Bush, Gore won the popular vote, but did not win the electoral vote. The people wanted Gore to be the president, but he did not win, due to the unfairness of the ellectoral college.\n\nAnother reason I am in favor for the popular vote, is because of the faulty aspects of the electoral college system. A counterargument may be that the electoral college has held our country together, making the voting system a lot easier. But in my opinion this is not true. With popular vote, the citizens would just vote for the president, and whichever canidate recieves the most votes would win. But in the case of the electoral college, states cast only one vote for the entire state! \".. the single representative from Wyoming representing 500,000 voters, would have as much say as the 55 representatives from California\" (Plumer, 12). The reason this is such a big deal is because, let's say that 10,000 people voted in Wyoming. 5,001 were republicans, and 4,999 were democrats. The electoral college would pick the elector representing the republican candidate. Thus, Wyoming's vote goes to the republican canidate. Without the ellectoral college though, those 4,999 votes would count, and would go toward helping the desired canidate win. Voting is an individual effort, and the electoral college does not allow for this.\n\nAs well as this fault, another fault is the fact that the electors could be anyone. \"They can be anyone not holding public office... Can voters control whom their electors vote for? Not always\" (Plumer, 10). Although in most cases the electors vote for the correct party, an elector still may not be trustworthy, or loyal. They may even be bias and vote for a different candidate. The electors do not campaign. Only the presidental canidates do. When we vote for the president, we are actually voting for the electors. Voters normally know little, to nothing about the electors. This makes for an even faultier voting experience.\n\nTo conclude, electoral colleges are not the way the voting system should be. With popular voting, there will be an assurance that the right candidate will win, the unfair ways of the ellectoral college will be diminished, and there will no longer be any faulty aspects of the voting system. Citizens vote to be heard, and with the electoral college, the people aren't heard as loud as they should be. Voting is a right and priveledge of an American citizien, and popular voting will ensure this right.",
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"content": "The author tries to explain about how Venus has evolve in the passed couple of years. It also says that Venus would be the Earth's twin only because is the most closest planet from Earth. It also says that Venus' atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater than what we had experience on our own planet Earth. Even NASA is working on studing Venus alot more. They simplified electronics made of silicon, also carbibe has been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus. Huh? are you saying this is kind of boring well no.\n\nit's basaclly about mechanicla parts that can be made more resistant to pressure,heat, and other force. (As it says on paragraph 7) Our government is making as much work as they can becasue that want matters. Wait no venus is what matters because Venus is the next Earth. that's the 13 reason why ;) the government is focasing alot on venus. And I agree we should all agree becasue we are all a nation we breath the same air, evn tho we won't be breathing any air on Venus.\n\nBut things can get better as time goes by. I believe on the planet earth I think we should all appressiate what we have not what we get. because that could make you unhappy.",
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"content": "Do you get nagged on for not driving your car or even trying to ride a bike somwewhere because its not convenient for another party? Well these places are doing it to keep people safe and less toxicated and polluted.\n\nLots of places today are becoming polluted by smog. Which can be limited by not letting people with certain liscense plates drive on certain days or even not allow them to drive for a weeks time. Also making public transportation free for the time being will help them say okay i'll give my car up.\n\nAnother reason to give up your cars is because it will cause less accidents less problems and less deaths. Furthermore the counties/states which you live might also recognize you for your perserverance in this act.\n\nFinally the last reason to give up your vehicle is that it will give you less stress from having to repair it from so much use and you wont have to replace it so often. Another reason is because it will save you money and you definetly want more money right who doesnt. you also might get more dates because they see you as a more conservative person so there is your best reason.\n\nIn conclusion, taking cars off the road for cetain days or even a week at a time may give you less smog more money and less stress. In the long run you might also score a girlfriend that you might soon marry and have a much happier life in general.",
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"content": "The advancements technology developed much become comenly known us normal house hold use every day work home schools bussneses become comen used item everyday life Emails researching questions world around us It required almost every job application school every thing It s complete age Computers every day thing email thats something I dont worry also used file tax return Also used make reports people Computers also become comen used thing school use reports studies home work Also buiseness use comunicate corprat uses wide stance technoligy rec got whole bunch apples Last Computers required jobs going list state schools military defence jobs missles A thier satlelite communication shut dwn comunications cell phones one plaines twin towers nitro atrack tracking truck gose rest I know computers classifieded And computers needed society use every day thier comenly used requirded",
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"content": "The \"Face on Mars\" is a landform seen in photographs of the surface of Mars. Some people believe that this landform is proof that alien life exists and that this landform was created by said aliens. However, there is plenty of information to disprove this. This information is found in the article, \"Unmasking the Face on Mars.\"\n\nThe article, \"Unmasking the Face on Mars,\" states, \"Some people think that the Face is bona fide evidence of life on Mars- evidence that NASA would rather hide, say some conspiracy theorists. Meanwhile, defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars.\" This statement suggests that NASA would have no reason to hide evidence of alien life, as this would benefit NASA greatly. If NASA had discovered evidence of alien life, NASA would have presented it as such.\n\nLater on, photographs were taken of the landform once again. However, the camera had to \"peer through whispy clouds to see the Face.\" Because of this, some skeptics believed that alien markings were hidden by the haze, which is shown in the quote, \"Perhaps, said skeptics, alien markings were hidden by the haze.\" In response to this, another picture was taken on a cloudless day, showing that the Face was nothing more than a natural land form.\n\nThis landform is similar to some of the landforms on Earth, as shown by the quote, \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the American West.\" Another quote to prove that the Face is similar to formations on Earth is, \"It reminds me most of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho...That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\" This suggests that the Face could have been formed much in the same way as the Earth formation mentioned in the quote.\n\nThe fact that, in the photographs of the fornation, there is no evidence to prove alien life is also a factor to consider. A quote by Garvin shows why this is an important peice of information to consider. \"As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size...So, if there were any objets in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!\" This proves that because no evidence of alien life can be seen in the pictures, means that there is none. In these pictures, claims Garvin, you could discern objects easily and tell what they are. If so, NASA can easily confirm that this land formation is natural and that there is no evidence of alien life.\n\nThus, the Face on Mars is a natural land formation. If it was evidence of alien life, NASA would have presented the information as such. NASA would have then pursued the lead that proved alien life exsisted by attempting to find this alien life or more evidence to prove that alien life exsisted. NASA would have beneiftted greatly if the Face had been created by alien life forms. This formation is also very similar to some land formations found on Earth. If such formations are found natrually on Earth, could they not also be found naturally on other planets? This land formation on Mars is natrual, as similar land formations are found naturally on Earth and NASA finding proof of alien life would have benefitted them greatly. If these things are true, then the Face on Mars is a land form that occurred naturally, and we, the people of Earth, have yet to find evidence that alien life exsists in our univserse.",
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"content": "I think it would be a good idea for other people to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. I have done this program many times. The program is a lot of fun on the way back after unloading all the animals. Also this program allowed me to experience adventures and visit unique places.\n\nI have done this program many times. I was 18 befor arriving at Greese and that meant I could be drafted for military service. When my draft board learned I was on a cattle-boat trip they said to just keep doing that as my service. By the time I was discharged I had made nine trips, the most of any Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys program is a lot of fun on the way back after unloading all the animals. After unloading the animals we would play baseball and volleyball where the animals had been held. We had table-tennis tournaments,fencing,boxing,and more this all helped pass the time. Games we played also helped pass the time.\n\nThe program allowed me to experience adventures and visit unique places. I had the benefit of seeing Europe and China. Though seeing Europe and China was awesome, seeing the Acropolis in Greece felt very special to me. Taking a gondola ride in Venice,Italy,a street of water was also felt very special to me. I also toured an exavted castle in Crete and marveled at the panama Canal on my way to China. I had time to go on adventures and visit enteresting places in this program with the spare time I had.\n\nI think it would be a great idea for other people to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program for these reasons. I have done this program many times. The Seagoing Cowboys program is a lot of fun. This program allowed me to experience adventures and visit unique places. I had a great time in this program and I know from experience that you will too if you participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program.",
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"content": "The purpose ending Author show hibiscus gives Saeng A good sense comfort compared At beginning story It Was like little confidence And forced call strange place home And emptied strive sees A familiar face brings back memories She happiest Having something Around special Around All time make feel At home like use found confort Hibiscus So rests garden constantly grow All seasons She reminder old home good felt except new memories",
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"content": "\"Imagine being able to detect exactly how other people are feeling, even when they are trying to hide their emotions.\" Now that these professors have created this technology, it really shows how far a long our pragress has come with technology. Facial expressions are used everyday from sarcasm, to joy, to anger, to curiousity, you name it! Some expressions, for example the Mona Lisa, display multiple emotions at the same time. How could we possibly figure out how to computerize how to figure out how a person is feeling? The result is amazing!\n\nIn this article they use the Mona Lisa as an example of how it works, the writer says that the program showed that the Mona Lisa was \"83% happy, 9% disguisted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry\". This new software just completely analized a face inside a painting! I for one think that amazing and extremely fascinating. We all have friends that walk around with a big smile on their face almost every day, therefore when you see them and they are still smiling, but it doesn't look right, you know something is wrong, but you don't know why, or how. Imagine being able to figure it out, just by figuring out what is different with the muscles you really can't see. The three instructions that are used in this article are \"Raise your lips at the corners of your mouth.\", \"Then squint your eyes, to produce wrinkling (\"crow's-feet\")\" and \"Holding that, raise the outer parts of your cheek up, toward your eyes.\" this, of course makes you smile and shows happiness. There are fake smiles and people can act mad, and sometimes it is hard to tell the difference between real and fake emotions. But what if that could help us in school?\n\nWe ALL get bored in school. No matter who you are, where you come from, if you have straight A's, or you are flunking every class. Throughout the entire time you are in school from Preschool, to Senior year, you are going to eventually get bored. You may also get annoyed, or mad, or anxiety, school brings out the best and worst in everybody. Have you ever been in class doing an assignment and you just lose your concentration and you start \"Staring off into outerspace\" now, I know this doesn't mean that you are actually looking for Jupiter, but it gets really boring when you are doing something you have no interest in. What if computers could change that? What if some day somebody from some random university with nothing better to do, decides to try to invent something to make school more interesting? What if that isn't the only thing this person creates but only uses one new software to do it? Guess what? We are living in the future, where computers can now tell your emotions and can alter your assignments to make them more entertaining. In the story the writer quotes yet another writer that says \"A classroom computer could recognize when the student is becoming confused or bored,\" and then continues saying \" Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective himan instructor.\" and that is what makes this so amazing. I don't know if it is because I, as a student, find a lot of online work boring, or if it really is something extremely amazing, I think it is both. But\n\nwould say that this is an amazing discovery that will impact us for the better.\n\nNow that I have showed you my side of the arguement, I hope you can now agree that this new discovery truly is amazing! I really do feel as if this could do a lot of good in the future and I really hope more useful technology like this comes out. The fact that a painting that is so old, can be scanned by the newest computers and get all the emotions read out loud is simply astounding and I can't believe it is actually real. This is all because of the simplest muscles in your face that you use everyday to display multiple emotions, sometimes multiple at once. Wether you are trying to hide your emotions or if you are ready to embrace them, this computer is about to change the world. How do you feel about this new software? Do you think it is good or bad? Would you use it if you could? Either way, I believe that it is about to change the world in a major way. If this software were to scan my face right now, there would be a lot of emotions, confusion, curiousity, happiness, boredom, exhaustion, and probably more. Don't you think that is cool? How could you noth think that is fascinating? Is it going to end up making robots take over the world? Possibly. I still think that robots taking over the world would be pretty cool, as long as they aren't water proof we could just splash water on them if they got out of hand. For now I am just gonna go find my own emotions.",
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"content": "There are argumentative conceptions heating up a debate over the fact that human activities have a negative effect on plant and animal species. While some claim that it is too late to do anything, the opposite makes a statement that we should take action immediately to revamp the situation. \r\n\r\nObviously, there is a large number of reasonable reasons to demonstrate the conception that we are too late in securing flora and fauna sorts of species from people's reckless occupations. In this day and age, along with urban-sprawl and overpopulation is the phenomenon of swarming lands, which gives rise to the ever-growing demand for open areas to live. As a consequence, in recent years, deforestation has taken place horrendously all over the world due to greed for lands and woods to consume. Those destructions on a mass scale cause loss of habitats for plants and animals in wildlife, put them at risk, and more significantly is pushing numerous classifications of species on the brink of extinction. For instance, the clearest evidence is panda species in China, which has been recorded in the Red Book with an alarming threat of extinction, is a victim of severe deforestation. Hence, great quantities of people believe that it is too late to save plant and animal species from humans’ harmful activities.\r\n\r\nWhile the grave sequels of human disadvantageous activities on flora and fauna species are widely acknowledged, the remedies to amend these issues still linger. Notwithstanding the traumatic truth that innumerable forests are terribly damaged, which drags on pushing a great number of plants and animals on the edge of extinction, we can still fix it and we have to take effectual action at this time. Conservation areas ought to be constructed as soon as possible to create sheltered environments for plants and animals, especially species in jeopardy. In particular, in Vietnam, Cuc Phuong National Park was set up under the state’s supervision and is now home for a good deal of endangered plants and animals. Thus, we should take effective action immediately to secure plant and animal species.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, humans’ wounding activities have a greatly miserable impact on flora and fauna species, yet, it is not too late to redress and refine the problem.",
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"content": "Our planet is changing everyday. Some changes are natural, but some are caused by human. Luckily, nowadays people start to think how to protect the earth. And there are some individuals who believe that the high price of fuel can help to resolve the environmental issues. In the following paragraph, I will highlight why I partially agree with this point of view, and with what I disagree.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, I would like to say that increasing the petrol price can solve to some extent one of the problems in the environment. I strongly agree that it can decrease the level of exhaust fumes from the vehicles because people start to look for alternative cheaper energy. Hence, electro cars could be very popular and might be less cost, therefore, they emit less harmful pollutants in the air. For example, there are some places in Japan, where most of people use electro mobiles and the level of air polution is lower than in the other cities. Also, if the fuel price is up, people can use an alternative sources of energy. For instance, solar power and wind energy can be commonly used because they are much cheaper. \r\n\r\nBut on the other hand, I definitely disagree that this can solve all environmental problems. There are a lot of other human activities which influence on nature. For example, there are a lot of places in the world where individuals pollute their cities by disposing the garbage on the streets and fields, accorgingly, the toxic rubbish destroys the ecosystem and contaminates the soil. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I would like to say that nowadays mankind can face the global disaster. However, some people try to find the solution for protecting the environment and propose to increase the petrol price. I agree that this can push individuals using the alternative energy. Moreover, I believe that human action harms nature and everyone needs to be responsible for their activities.",
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"content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock strictly hard architects drop mooring mast top Empire Building held single cable tether would add stress buildings frame Many dilemmas complications builders faced Over sixty thousand dollars worth modifications made buildings frame work",
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"content": "The Face, made by aliens or just a natural landform? The Face, believe it, is just a natural landform on Mars. Why, the Face, is a natural landform is because, for one we do have images of this landform, the Face is also like a natural landform we have here on earth, and if there was an ancient alien civilization on Mars it would benifit NASA, so why think we're hiding anything? Maybe there was once aliens, but the facts just don't prove that to be true, therefore it is indeed just a natural landform.\n\nWe do have many images of the Face. The very first one that was taken in 1976 does indeed look like a face, but over the years wtith new technology it doesn't look like a face anymore. Now you may say that it's because of erosion and blah blah, but it's not. It has always been just a mesa which is very common on Mars, \"New high-resolution images and 3D altimetry from NASAs Mars Global Survey spacecraft reveal the Face on Mars for what it really is: A mesa.\" With our better technology it clearly shows that it is indeed not a face, therefore maybe you should stop believing it is.\n\nThe Face, is like one of the natural landforms we have here on earth. These natural landforms are natural occuring lava dome that took the form of an isolated mesa and they look about the same as the many that are on Mars. \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesalandforms common around the American West. It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho, says Garvin. Thats a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars. All in all, Garvin is a real, bona fide scientist, so why not believe him?\n\nIf that still didn't convince you then this might. Simply if there was ever life on any other planet in our solar system we, NASA, would highly benifit from it. We would be able to study them and learn everything about them. So why would we hide it? Well we could if they, the aliens, didn't feel very comfortable with us telling everyone about them wanting to go see our leader and what-not. \"Some people think the Face is bona fide evidence of life on Marsevidence that NASA would rather hide, say conspiracy theorists. Meanwhile, defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars.\" Yes we could be hiding it from you for their sake not ours, so before you think that we're hiding things from you for us think about the aliens too.\n\nSure maybe we're all wrong and in the end you were right and there were once alien life forms on Mars, but that simply can't be true. The things we have; the images, an example of one here on earth, and the realization that if there were ever life forms on Mars it would benifit NASA and everyone else on Earth. So if you would please take your skeptical specticals off and realize that not everything you think is right is right, because maybe you're wrong. Who knows though there could be aliens out there on Mars hiding or maybe they're watching us as you read this.",
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"content": "I do like the thought of driverless cars. I like it because I would not have to learn how to drive to get to where I want to go. There are a lot of positives about the driverless car like less gas and less crashes. There are some bad things about the cars too. Mostly the fact that you dont drive the car and it can't take you on the back roads.\n\nIn my mind I'm thinking that I would not want a car like that. I would not want a car like that because I would like to learn to dive. The good thing is for the people that don't want to learn to drive can get a car like that. I like the thought of this car because there will be less crashes and more responsible diriveing. One other bad thing about the car is if you fall asleep it might not be able to wake you up.\n\nA bad thing is it can't pull into your drive way and it can't stop a traffic light. It's good the car can read that there are roadblocks ahead. In a way it bad because it cant go around it. It's also bad that it can't read there is a crash on the roads. Google needs to fix the problem it has before making the car.\n\nIt's good and bad that the car runs on a computer. Good because it car perdict all the thing ahead in the road. Bad because\n\nthe computer can't pick up the back roads on thegoogle maps. So, it can't take you home if you live in the country. If google gets the back roads on their maps, or if you can program it to take you that way the cars might work better.\n\nI know I would not want a driverless car that still needs a driver. Most people would probly fall asleep in this car. So, it's a good thing they have a way to keep you awake and alert. It is also a good thing that when the car need a person to take over that it shuts of the entertainment. Other wise people would probly crash more not paying attion to the road.",
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"content": "The graphs provided show the use of speed cameras as well as quantitative data on accidents that occurred on the roads of the city of Melbourne between 2002 and 2005.\nOverall, there was a drammatic increase in the use of speed cameras over the four-year period. In contrast, the number of accidents and deaths, generally, flactuated over the period. However, there was a remarakable difference between percentages of accidents and deaths that occurred during the four-year period.\nWith regard to the speed-camera use, it is evident that the increase was huge over the four-year period, moving from just above 25 speed cameras in 2002 to almost 150 in 2005, about six times as much. However, a steady increase between 2002 and 2004 was recorded, rising from about 25 in 2002 to about 40 in 2003 and just above 50 in 2004. A major change was between 2004 and 2005, an increase from about 70 to just below 150.\nThere was, however, a fluctuation on the percentage of accidents and deaths on the Melbourne roads. Deaths stayed below 0 per cent from 2002 to 2004 and rose between 2003 and 2004 and further went down in 2005. Accidents also fluctuated, moving between 3 pecent and just below 4 per cent between 2002 and 2005. However, unlike deaths,accidents rose further between 2004 and 2005, reaching almost 4 per cent.",
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"content": "The \"Face on Mars\" was discovered May 24th, 2001. It was discovered when a spacecraft was cirlcing mars and spotted something that looked like a human face. This is where the name \"The Face on Mars\" comes from. Some people think it was from aleins, other think it was just a natural land form.\n\nIf i were a scientist at NASA and I had to convince them that the \" Face on Mars\" was not created by aliens i would simply say that there is no evidence that shows aliens where around.\n\nThe arictle \" Unmasking the Face on Mars\" states that on April 5th, 1998 Micheal Milan and his Mars Orbiter Camera team tookphotographs of the object which clearly revealed that the \" face \" was a natural landform.\n\nAlthough people werent satified with the therory that the \"Face on Mars\"is just a natural landform, it is the only conclusion that really makes sense. If aliens made this the spacecraft orbiting mars would have been able to see them. And another thing there would have been signs to prove aliens made this landmark, but there isnt. All of this leads me to believe that the\" Face on Mars\" isjust a natural landform.",
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"content": "Issues related to recruiting people are frequently discussed these days. It is argued that job applicants' social skills are more important than their academic qualifications. I firmly agree with this viewpoint because of the importance of cooperating and managing skills.\n\nThe first reason to consider is that getting one task to be done requires many kinds of knowledge from different people. This means that we usually work as a group in our office then collaboration skills are extremely necessary for us. For instance, in the athletic club playing as a team always looks for rookies who are considerably dedicated team members more than only have personal techniques. \n\nAn additional point is that if there are a large number of works that need to be done at the time, managing skills are the most essential abilities in this case. In other words, people who are excellent at communication tend to get the job done more faster and easier than those who are not. To exemplify, an architect who can properly manage to distribute tasks to junior designers or draftsmen can hold more than two or three projects at the same time compared with a lack of management talent architect. \n\n \n\nAll things considered, I am of the opinion that social skills including participation and administering are moderately important than their academic qualifications. therefore, universities' resumes and curriculum vitae are also significant because they refer to the status of student's responsibilities. Thus, we should balance these prerequisites at a high level of standard.",
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"content": "People hold contradictory opinions regarding governmental funding for holding sports events. Critics decry it as an inefficient allocation, and state that other essential infrastructures deserve this monetary aid, however, others think in contrast. I will discourse on either side in this essay, and state my opinion.\n\nOpponents of international sports state that it is a wastage of resources, particularly for developing countries. Because poverty alleviation and other substructures should be the utmost priorities for any authority. Such important issues are likely to be dilapidated if a huge sum of money is disbursed on sporting events, such as cricket or the football world cup. By eliminating poverty, nations grow as a whole and more mouths can be fed than before, unlike when the government prefers to spend money on sports. Furthermore, a mass gathering of people at sports ground can further cause problems for the state to tackle as the crowd can be vulnerable to safety threats, and providing security to the audience can be exorbitant too. Hence, funding on big sports events is less essential than alleviating poverty which may have longer-lasting impacts.\n\nNevertheless, others believe hosting Olympic games between different nations relaxes political tension and builds rapport among diverse ethnic groups. Folks from around the world gather for a shared viewing experience and to root for their teams. For example, in the PSL Cricket tournament in Pakistan, people from around the country were on the same page irrespective of their cultural background. Besides, the government generated hefty revenue by selling sports match tickets to the audience, which is another productive impact of hosting such events. To illustrate this, various countries struggle to take the honour of congregating cricket world cups in their homeland to support local markets to merchandise their products during these matches, such as hotels are fully booked on match days. Therefore, it can be said that conducting such sports is worth spending financial resources on them.\n\nTo conclude, although other crucial issues require governments' attention and funding, yet I believe the significance of sports tournaments can not be neglected. It is irrefutable that people from around the globe tend to partake in sporting events and develop harmony with each other. Besides that, governments further generate capital in turn.",
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"content": "Hey im Luke im sure you read about me or atleast know a little about me. Im not here to say thank you but im really thankful though. Im here to say you should join the Seagoing Program. When i was seventeen and i joined the program. I did it for my country but then i found out that i can get pleasure from it too you get to take care of animals but if you are like me and used to taking care of animals you wont care about that.\n\nYou should join the Seagoing Coboys program because you can see amazing things if you read the biography then you know that in paragraph 5 I saw an exavated castle in Crete on my way to China. You dont just sit there taking care of horses and other farm animals you also get to play games. I do other things too if you read paragraph 8 of the biography about me then you know that us cowboys found time to have fun on board. W e played baseball and volleyball games in empty holds. Sometimes we even played table-tennis tournaments,fencing,boxing,reading,whittling and other games too.\n\nIm not saying thats its all fun and games because its not. One time I even broke my ribs while on the boat as you can see in paragraph 7. Boats will tip over,sink or they might even rock. That still doesnt stop you from atleast trying to make a difference. You can still make a difference for people.\n\nIn conclusion being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than adventure it also opened up the world for me. You can also help other countries out that are doing worst than you or that are not doing good at all. As you can see in paragraph 9 that I am grateful for my opportunity to be a Seagoing Cowboy. By becoming a Seagoing Cowboy it made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs and because of that awareness my family hosted a number of international students and echange visitors for many years as you can see in paragraph 9 of my biography. Im saying all of this because i want you to join the Seagoing Cowboys program not only to have fun and go on adventures but to change peoples lives in other countries and to open up a new world for yourself.",
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"content": "The Face on Mars is a popular pop icon dating back to 1976 when it was first dicoverd. This face-like landmark has even sparked the minds of conspiracy theorists into believing this is a bona fide sign of aliens or other acient mars civilization. Although it may look like supernatural it has been proven that its nothing more than nature at work.\n\nIn Cydonia, the area in which this landmark was found, it is quite common for Martian Messas to form although in this case the shadows gave this land mark facial like features as mentiond in paragraph 2 of \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\". Paragraph 3 continues to bring this point our by saying \"The caption noted a \"huge rock formation...which resembles a human head...formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and a mouth.\"\n\nIf thats not enough to convince someone that its just a natural landform then paragraph 7 mentions that when Michael Malin and his MOC team snapped a 10x sharper picture of this formation, it appeard on a JPL web site that revealed it to be nothing more than a landform. Afterwards they went back a while later, as mentioned in paragraph 10-11, and took another picture that was even clearer and closer to the point of where if there was anything such as an airplane or shack hidden in this rock, it would be seen. When taking the picture it mentioned in paragraph 12 that it was in fact nothing more than a butte or messa which is a common landform in the American West.\n\nAll of this evidence can prove that it was not anything created by the supernatural but was in fact just a natural landform coincidence.",
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"content": "You want opinion effects computers people Well I believe computers help people educate people computers people relie It s time decide agree computers positive effects people Do agree computers help people Say example question noone home answer Why Of course re going get school project Surely ll need information library closed And nt Simple reasearch computer Do nt agree computers help people I remember one time I entered contest I needed lost I remembered I put computer Computers relied people Just think Almost jobs world relie technology computer For example job It would kind hard keep track much trash thrown every year without computer surely banks use computers To keep track everyone s allowance money situations Let s forget lawyers There lawyers incart use computer type every word said They turn words short keep people saying Did without computers ever half million jobs world would fail Some people would agree online games educational For example That game teaches words probably never seen And nt forget That game improves counting numbers Last least would That game sharpens skill exercises brain Strategy come handy surely see games educational In conclusion I agree effects computers people positive Because computers help people reliable educate people It s never agree computers positive effects people",
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"content": "Luke, the man that shipped 335 horses, and enough hay and oats to feed them all. People should sign up to be a Seagoing Cowboys.\n\nThe reason people should sign up is you are helping other nations rebuild them selves. you are helping nations rebuild them selves by rebiulding houses, farms, and shops. You are also helping by sending animals to the other countries, so they can start a farm again. It is also helping people recieve food for their emty stomachs.\n\nIf people don't sign up for the UNRRA the nations will fall to the ground. People will starve, if they survive the harsh cold winter. Did I also mention the harsh cold winter that thousands of people will die from if they you don't help!\n\nWhat you will be doing on the ship is feeding, and wattering the cattle thwo or three times a day. Second is you will also have to keep night watch, and take care of the cattle. Third is you you will be on nine trips stopping at different nations. if it is a rainy day you need to be careful, because you can be injured or killed.\n\nAnother reason you should join is you will be travalong around the world shipping cattle to other nations, and farms. When all the cattle is off the ship you can have set up some equipment to play some storts for example. Volleyball, ping pong turnaments, and much much more. The trip will also open up the world to you, because you helped thousands of people around the world. It will also stay with you making you happie.\n\nIn conclusion all the horses you shipped will make thousands of people happie. It will also rebuild nation, farms families, and cities. The horses will be breeded, and also used for transport. Anyways please sign up to the UNRRA America! Thank you",
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"content": "Do want children bad images head Does everybody deserve read watch anything want I believe strongly materials removed libraries cases Offensive materials business libraries These materials good children offend people look good libraries carry First I believe absolutely reason child see explicit material This material create ambitious young child If child sees magazine containing pornography child think material acceptable The truth child know anything subject receives approval hisher parents I know experience parents would want one children see material extensive time I disturbing experiences One time I young lad I checked horror movie local library knowing movie I made sure parents home I watched After three minutes I terrified The images film stayed head good month Children deserve feeling fear long time Next material library contain certain things offend random people Large public libraries contain music explicit lyrics We society want youth hear nasty words rap songs released In addition music offends many adults well Adults agree reason rap released public place like library Music great art certain people abuse longer good image I observed children listening rap young age likely end turning unsuccessful individual Also specific magazines contain images offensive people society This idea relates first idea I speak Images like blood sometimes offend people generation We need If offensive material banned libraries society would eliminated one problem taking away good world I offended different magazine pictures Someday I kids I never let go certain sections library material Last I want address fact specific libraries carry bad reputation carry material In addition employees definitely go different library without bad music violent movies Most adults want children successful good creative mind think twice going library without censorship certain items I read libraries bad material much less likely attract customers libraries censorship I know I manager public library I would make sure items potential offend people would immediately removed A library definitely want bad gossip go around town bad specific library Censorship necessary libraries flavor food Shelves contain inappropriate books magazines music make number customers drop If think going help libraries I dare go ahead try Everyone opinions I firm believer censorship public private libraries Inappropriate books magazines music destroy good reputation library A library great place libraries without censorship utter disappointment After life get choose way want children act Disturbing materials going bring negative effect minors I hope see amount censorship rise libraries If people see dramatic change ideas discussed",
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"content": "By attempting construct mast Empire State Building builders encountered sorts problems The purpose mast allow dirigibles blimps dock Many problems however effect dirigible In paragraph thirteen line author talks dangers dirigible Most dirigibles used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable Another obstacle location It thought unsafe blimp caught fire would land middle New York City remote cornfield And finally winds changed frequently high It unwise decision dock area dirigible would blown around building",
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"content": "\"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" with the facial action coding system, is a way of a computer being able to read a humans emotions, isnt it kind of weird? technology is progressing more and more everyday, but this isnt something we need, why do we need to read peoples emotions? is it important?\n\nThis program allows other people to invade the privacy of others, i would want someone or something reading my emotions just because, even if who ever is trying to \"read\" your emotions asked for permission its still called personal space, this program to me is kind of useless, maybe there are some ways it could be useful?\n\nIn some cases it can be used for people in the hospital, you know when you go get checked up the doctor normally asks you how you feel, and sometimes you dont know how you feel but the doctor needs to know in order to treat you.\n\nBut in some other cases, it should not be used in schools or in working areas, dont you think that the students will kind of be scared of that? theres no use for it, maybe some people will make use out of it but some people dont want you \"reading\" their emotions at all, and you have to respect that.",
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"content": "This line graph indicates oil production and consumption per day in China from 1982 to 2006. Clearly, the consumption doubled its production in 2006.\nTo begin with, oil consumption started the millions of oil barrels per day for almost two, and remained the same by 1990. But, its consumption suddenly surged to about 3.7 million in 1994. Then, the number of consumption skyrocketed from 1998 and reached a peak of more than 6 million in 2006. Consequently, the consumption tripled, compared with 1982.\nSecondly, the production also commenced the millions of oil barrels per day around two, and increased its production to three million in 1986. In contrast, its production leveled off by 1994. Afterward, the production slightly kept going up and resulted in 3.5 million in 2006. As a result, the oil production increased, compared with 1982. But it is clear that the pace of production is quite slower than consumption.",
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"content": "Do use computer Is one house Well average household owns two computers nt good computers taking valuable time away hobbies nature reallife First computers take time away hobbies friends Some friends spend hours computer day could playing sport hanging Also computers become center lives People ask nt online answer CAPS life nt revolve around computer takes time away nature People dont acknowledge beauty outdoor Now lives orderly need wilderness even helps us appreciate appreciate special planet computer take away Third computers take us away reallife Some people dont know facetoface conversation know communicate email I acknoowledge getting away real life relaxing people dont know side stomp goes letter It oldfashioned believe people put heart something ca nt email In conclusion computers take time away reallife nature hobbies Plus get arthritis hands type much",
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"content": "Some people believe that giving much stricter sentences on traffic offences is the only way to improve road safety. In my opinion, I disagree with this statement as I think there are other effective measures that can also tackle this problem. \nOn the one hand, imposing stricter punishments on traffic law-breakers could be seen as an effective way of road safety. This is because it may deter drivers from violating traffic laws regulations. In fact, some people, especially adults exceed the speed limit, leading to a lot of serious traffic accidents. Therefore, giving many stringent punishments should be enacted. Also, those who drive while intoxicated or using mobile phone deserve to be banned from the road. In recent years, Viet Nam has many heart-breaking traffic accidents due to the lack of awareness of drivers who use too much alcohol. If there are fewer drivers breaking traffic laws, the roads may become safer for all road users. \nOn the other hand, there are other alternative measures which would also be effective. Authorities could, for example, install more surveillance and speed cameras to make potential law-breakers aware of the need to abide by speed limits. This measure is crucial in many cities as a way to keep people committing illegal actions. Another sustainable measure is upgrading the transportation infrastructures mainly because the low-quality state of roads and streets are the factor culprits of the occurrence of numerous traffic accidents. For instance, in Viet Nam, there are many people falling off when their motorbikes go over a big pot-hole. \nIn conclusion, in order to enhance road safety, it is not enough to be tough on traffic crimes by punishing harshly those violating the law. Personally, to achieve the best results, the combination of the aforementioned ideas is the most effective strategy.",
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"content": "Immagrants Cuba usuely undergo tough transitien It took buckets full curage modevation get huge transitien Narciso Rodriguez s famly whent move using family power love It big change one room apartment room apartment Through memoir mood satisfaction love Cuba For example memoir stated many times much Narciso enjoyed Cuban food music treditiens Also satisfaction mood comes Narciso talkes fortunate parents willing take risk moving give better life This showes love parent stronger enything world Another mood relieve example Narciso relieved family made sofly sand This article perfect example family end nomatter",
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"content": "We've been discovering things almost everyday.Until today we discovered these\n\nfaces on NASA.All the scientist around us including myself have been giving ideas of what it was.Some people say it was created by aliens on the Red Planet.\"Nonsense, I say.\"Everybody has thier own opinion.\n\nThen the research began.\"There must have been a degree of surprise among mission controllers back at the Jet Propulsion Lab when the face appeared on thier monitors.\"Everybody were asking what is that on our monitors.\"It looks like faces to me says one of scientist.\"\"A few days later NASA\n\nunveiled the image for all to see.\"Everyone was surprised at what they saw.\"The\n\ncaption noted a \"huge rock formation...which resembles a human head...formed\n\nby shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\"\n\nMe and the other scientist was really engaged at what we were doing.People\n\nnoticed every time they listen to the radio they heard about those same \"faces on mars\".\"The \"Face on Mars\" has since become a pop icon. It started in a Hollywoody film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows-even haunted grocery stores checkout lines for 25 years!\"Some people in the went to go find more evidence to if it was true.\n\n\"Although few scientists\n\nbelieved the Face was an alien artifact, photographing Cydonia became a priority for NASA when Mars Global Surveyor\n\n(MGS) arrived at the Red Planet in Sept. 1997 , eighteen long years after Viking\n\nmissions ended.\"The research was getting intense.\n\nI believe that the Face on Mars were life forms.Telling you that people live on Mars.\"Although few scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact, photographing Cydonia became a priority for NASA when Mars Global Surveyor\n\n(MGS) arrived at Red Planet in Sept.",
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"content": "After reading this artical i feel that using this tecnology is a great way to help student in the classroom or even away. If we used this technology on student the lesson could make them more interactive, help teachers with lesson planes and even give kids more oppitions for school.\n\nIf we were to used this technology on students we could help kids injoy school and even learn more. If we can figure out how the students are reacting to school then we can use that to change it. If the teacher sees a student is bored with the lesson on math but is happy when they are reading, then the teacher could use more word problems. Another way this technology can help the teachers, feed back. If the teachers can get feedback based on the students and how they are feeling then the teachers can change the lesson plan. For example if 75% of the class is confused on the math problems then the teacher knows to work more on math. Another possible way this technology can help is by chage the learning enviorment for students and focuse more one on one. Instead of the student sitting in a classroom all day the student could take their device on the road and have class anywhere and the computer can teach the student. This technology could focuse more one on one as well by factoring in what the student likes and make its own lesson plan. This would be better for the kids because they would be more interative in there school work. For example if a student is 73% happy in Science, 82% bored in English, 79% frustrated with Math, and 90% happy with Social Studies. Then the computer could redesign the lesson so that Math or English had some Science or Social Studies so the student wasnt so frustrated. We know tat this technology can do all of this advanced stuff by the evidence in Dr. Huangs study. Some of the evidence is there testin on Mona LIsa and her exprestions or their studys on the 44 major muscles in your face used for actions.\n\nThis technology could be used in such wonder full ways. Thistechnology can help both on the student and teachers side of lerning. It can help with the teachers lessons, encouragment, and they will be more prepared. It will also help student to learn faster, become interested, and to be interested in learning.",
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"content": "I persanuly love to be a Seagoing cowboy becuase I get to go sightseeing. One time I was so lucky to go on a gondola ride in venice,Italy, a city with streets of water. It was a opportunity of a life time my frend helped me so much with this two. I use to have 2 part time jobs and with don I could have just one job and best part I love it.\n\nI hope that you join becuase it woud be wonderfull to have you. You would be helping horses,young cows, and mules get to go sightseeing when you are done and explore. and thar is a way to pass time, especially on your way home. you can tabel tennis fencing boxing reading games. Its all rilly fun plus it helps time pass no matter what thar will all was be something going on.\n\nBut seagoing cowboys was much more then a adventure. it opened me up to the world to me im gratefull for the opportunity. It made me more aware of people of other countries and their needs. My first mision was to go to greece and i had 335 horses plus. I all so be for ariving i ternd 18 when i got thar the pacific war.\n\nIn conclusion i hope you join and have a good day. Also this is not a joke you need to be focest and willingly help the team if thay need help. If you need help ask if you dont you might endup fired. And be carfull THAR IS WATER you may slip and fall. but i hope you join and help the couse.",
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"content": "In recent times, people are showing interest before buying houses or where they staying because they want to know the backdrop about that ownership. In, the forthcoming essay, I will articulate some reasons as well as also suggest the number of ways how the public collect information as well.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, as a human it is our nature to learn the behind story regarding a place or building because of our curiosity. Before bringing an apartment or villa public is very keen to know the reason for selling or about previous owners and most important but not in the list this place has any connection with historical events or not. For instance , one of my friends who live in Manhattan, wants to buy a house and after , an investigation he learned that this residence was used as a jail in Second World War. Moreover, individuals want to know what kind of materials are used when this building was built due to rise condo collapse accidents.\r\n\r\nHowever, on the other hand, there are several ways to get information about any plot before buying. Firstly, folks can ask their agents about details of their desired residence because they are well informed and professional. Secondly, they can go estate registration office because they have up to date data regarding any land. For example, in Bangladesh , people can get knowledge about any lands, houses or buildings in their tract registry centre. Lastly, technology is advanced now with one tap , a person can get all important information.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, there is no true reason to learn about the history of buildings or apartments and people only do dwellings their past time.",
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"content": "Katherine Paterson author thought book one would want children read taken shelf library If found book public library offensive would want book removed sight public view Personally I would nt I would want book removed book could good learning experience others In essay I explain personal experience I disagree Katherine Paterson In sixth grade I learned find certain book public library using system We find certain books school library using system assignment One books find I found easily I knew looks like But child class never seen life After helping find ask CAPS book important people I nt understand I explained best ability life important She soon found something wanted learn It law states school This others beliefs nonbeliefs If library shelf girl would never learned something important A book offensive people book change person s life forever Katherine Paterson believed books found libraries Unfortunatley people think also One book change person s life book library change another",
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"content": "In today's world, it is believed by some part of a population that it might be better for us to get used to climate change and the life with it rather than spend time trying to change something. I disagree with this opinion and possible arguments will be discussed below.\n\nFirst of all, to begin with, the main reason why this idea is not right is that we have opportunities to intervene and prevent further progression of this tendency. This is because of the fact that not only are there developments in technologies but also scientists and ecologists develop new ways of fighting. Therefore, if we have a chance to change the situation it seems extremely incorrect to ignore the problem. For example, recent research has shown that the introduction of pollution permits in Ukraine has shown outstanding results and pollution was decraesed by 20%.\n\nMoreover, another evidence why people should try to prevent climate change is that it may get extremely worse so the Earth may become uninhabitable. The major reason for such a thought is that climate deteriorates in a geometric progression and without appropriate measures this issue may become inevitable. Hence, the whole process of global climate change may accelerate and we will not be able to slow down it in the future.\n\nEventually, to conclude, I disagree with the opinion that humans just need to find a way t olive with environmental problems, firstly, since there areworking technologies which can at least slow sown the whole process and, secondly, because without intervention the situation may get extremely worse in the nearest future.",
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"content": "The main topic of this story is that the Electoral College are not making votes fair for other people. So i will tell them what is really going on with the U.S.\n\nTo begin with, I personally think the Electoral College should change because over the years after people voted it seemed they wanted to change it, so they decide to cause a riot around there city, maybe the U.S. Some people do not like how the Electoral Law is set for our U.S. My opinion is that some of the people running for presidents usually get helped, not only by us, but by other members of the Electoral Collage. As you see the evidence is how you turn on the T.V at night and see what is going on with the vote and election. For example Afganiscan, they are destroying there country becuase of how much they dislike our president, because of a unfair vote.\n\nThink about it would any of this happen if the Electoral College made things fair with making people at least vote twice? As you see how other people are getting deeply hurt of what you are doing. Now am not asking you to abuse this opinion just to make people happy, but the main topic of what i am writing you is to think and observe around you. According to everyone else opinion, i am not only speaking for me now, but people are thinking to redo the election. People all country would like to vote for the same president of the U.S i know there are some states that have a president but like im saying, they want to change that.\n\nPeople can see that its up to us to choose who is president, but its not the members of the Electoral College job to add more credit to the person losing or winning. People are dieciding to make plans because they do not get things there way. Just like the riot in paris with the terriots, there had to be a reseason for it. Think about it why would terriots want to kill people? Not only for fun but because of the presidential voting. Every bad thing on the U.S is mainly about voting. Just like people holding up signs on the street to change there election.\n\nAs you can see the Electoral College is really selfish. They tend to pay more attensiion to themselves but not others. They do it for the money and the fact to usually get other people upset. The presidents that the Electoral Collage want to win they win. Its a fact that most presidents win to easy. They win with a plethora of help, not only with the U.S but with the members of the Electoral Collage.\n\nIn Conlusion, the electoral colage has to think about other people. They ned to focus more on the atmoshpere then sitting in one small room thinking about themselves.",
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"content": "The use of Facial Action Coding System is useful and valuable to read the emotional expressions of students because it will benefit and help teachers in classrooms understand what the student is truly feeling and what is going on in their mind.\n\nThis technology system will be \"able to detect exactly how other people are feeling even when they are trying to hide their emotions.\" Many students in class have anxiety of speaking infront of many people, fear of being wrong, and not asking questions when they don't know what is going on. They will know when and how to help students through the help of the system.\n\nAnother reason why Facial Action Coding System will improve classroom environments and the learning skills of all the students is the system will let teachers know when the student is angry because when the \"orbicularis oris (around your mouth) tightens you lips to show anger.\"(3)\n\nIf a student is angry, the system will detect it and the teachers will know as well. Anger can indicate many things in a student. Something may not be okay at home or in their family. The student may have too much going on in their life. When this happens, students tend to hide their emotions and not ask for help, when in reality they do. The system would automatically give intail on the emotion to the teacher so they can offer help, guidance and support to the student and let them know that a teacher is there for them.\n\nStudents would not learn anything if they are too distracted or too tired. If there is a technology to read students' emotional expressions, it would benefit teachers because the system will notice the emotions they might be feeling like \"happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear and saddness...\" (3). If the teacher knows what the students true feelings are, for example boredom, This Facial Action Coding System would help teachers know \"...when a student is becoming confused or bored... then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"(6)\n\nThe use of Facial Action Coding System is valuable because it helps teachers understand the feelings of their students and help their students based on their feelings. This system will improve the learning environment and decrease the levels of stress and anxiety will the help of teachers.",
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"content": "- In the passage \"Driverless Cars are Coming,\" explains how Google cofounder Sergey Brin invented driverless cars for the future. I feel like the safest way to get around is cars with drivers in control. I say that because the passege says 'the car will send an alert to the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents,' but what roadblocks lie ahead for the autonomous car? - Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe and I understand that but would we all be safe with a driverless car? I say no because if there's no driver there's no control and if this world didn't have contol it would be nothing but madness and we don't need that. These \"driverless cars'' aren't safe that's why they're illegal to even test in California, Nevada, Florida, and the district of Columbia. Manufactures believe that more states will follow as soon as the cars are proved more reliably safe.- What if the car gets into an accident and you or someone else is injured? Would you think it's you fault or the manufacturer's fault? -Automakers are still continuing their work on the ''assumption'' that the problems ahead will be solved, but there shouldn't be no problems because they keep testing them right and said the cars can drive more than half a million miles without a crash so why should there be a problem? - The passage also says \"new laws would have to be passed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident.\"\n\nLaws are getting passed everyday like Gay marrage and legallizing marijuana but driverless cars are simply not safe at all and that is my final opinion. Even though the last paragraph of the passage says \"Tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time.\" I feel like that 90 percent is the percentage of danger the car will cause and the other 10 percent is the safest because the driver is in control. This is why I feel driverless cas shouldn't be released in the future.",
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"content": "I dont think books would affend people shelf books maybe shelf hurt ones feelings But also think people beable read want read many people wouldnt read book think would affend There many kinds books book bad affend people books apropriot young kids teens shouldnt even school librarys In public librarys think ok every type book different books different place s like haveing young adalt section adalt children section I think screton books sold book stores like dont think inapropeiout books children book store s They different store certain books And parents monitor children reading take part book helping understand book saying There lots parents dont really care kids read s busness apenioun nt let kids read want Parents child heshe picking book But teen older think would old enough choise want read time age matured enough read understand things much easer",
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"content": "In this modern century, environmental issues have become a crucial and a major concern in today’s society. Increased fuel consumption and industrial countries have made many problems. Some people consider increasing the price of fuel will be the prominent solution. In my opinion, this is right to some extend but I do not agree with this because it may cause some other problems.\r\nFirstly, it is true that raising price will help to reduce the environmental pollution and individuals may use their cars less. But, this wouldn’t be a good solution because approximately everything runs and works with oil energy like transportation system and some industrial instruments. As a result, it will affect the products’ cost or even unnecessary things. Also some people may not overcome the life expenses. Hence, the government, economy will be affected.\r\nSecondly, increasing fuel cost will not just disturb the economy, but also it will cause protest and make people frustrated because they can’t afford the prices. So government should find other solutions for instance, informing society using less oil energy leads to less environmental pollution by advertisements or short explanations on social media and encourage people to use transportation systems instead of their own cars, and use more wind, solar and water energy instead of non-renewable recourses for example for example change some industrial instruments to low energy users.\r\nIn a conclusion, global environmental issues are very important and its problems won’t be solved just by raising petrol prices. I strongly believe that government should seek for more possible options to apply to the society.",
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"content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author suggests that studing Venus is a worth pursuit despite the dangers it presents because the knowledge to be gained is greater than and equal to the risk taken. But technolocial advancements are encouraging the further study of Venus and speeding up the process.\n\nBy teaching us that Venus is often referred to as Earth's \"twin\" and that it is relatively the closest planet to ours in the solar system, the author sees that \"Stiving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because of human curiosity...Our travels should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\" (8). Meaning that the author supports the idea that studying Venus because the risk taken should be seen as a challenge needing to be conquered.\n\nIn Paragraph 7 the author states that \"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus...electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions\"(7). Thus demonstrating that the further studying of Venus is inevitable due to advancements that could decrease the possible risks of pursuing the sudy of Venus and eliminate the dangers.\n\nIn conclusion, the author supports the claim that studying Venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers it presents because the knowledge to be gained is greater than or equal to the risks taken because the author sees it as a challenge rather than a risk, needing to be overcame. In additon, further technological advancements make studying Venus inevitable and is eliminating the problematic dangers that studying Venus presents.",
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"content": "using the techonology of emotionalnally expressions of students in a classrom is valuable because it identfies mona lisa's emotions how one picture can describe her self as calculating emotions. constructs a 3-D computer model of the face. all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human mules. movent one of one or more musles. movent of one or more musles is called an action untit in fact we humans preform this same impressive caluculation every day for instance you can prolly tell a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face of corce most of us would have trouble actully describing each facial trait that conveys happy wooried etc ..... i oberserved that artist such as da vicci studies human anatomy to help them paint facial musles precilely enough to convey specific emotions his new compuer sofftware stores simlar anatomical imformation as electronical code. the mona lisa demostrating is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computer can do. imagine a computer that knows when your happy or sad . by the way, did making a happy face in this experiment also mmake you feel slightly happy ? accoring to the facial feed back therory of emotion moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions but also may even help produce them. whoever thought that amking faces could reveal so much about the science of emotions!",
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"content": "Studying Venus is a dangerous pursuit but could be very helpful for gathering knowledge about the plant and about the solar system. We could learn how Venus works and what the planet could have been like long ago. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of size. It is also the closest planet to Earth and can be seen without any powerful equipment. Venus should be studied in greater detail and can be with the use of the new ideas that NASA is coming up with. I have good reasons why we should attempt to study Venus in closer detail. With new technology we can get closer to the planet, learn how the planet works, and learn what the planet used to be like.\n\nVenus is the hottest planet in our solar system despite Mercury being closer to the sun. What makes Venus so hot is that its atmosphere is 97 percent carbon dioxide, the clouds are made of sulfuric acid, and the temperatures on the surface average of 800 degrees Fahrenheit. Something else that makes this planet dangerous is that the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than Earth. These conditions are to harsh for humans to explore but NASA has a possible solution that would help us get closer to the planet. We could fly a blimp like vehicle 30 miles above the surface. That way we be at about 170 degrees and air pressure that is like what sea level is on Earth. There would be enough solar power and normal levels of radition so that humans would be able to survive these conditions.\n\nGetting closer to the planet could help us to understand more of how the planet works. This planet has many volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and lots of lightning. If we could get a sample of some of the rock on Venus, this could help us better understand these conditions and what has happened to this planet. Long ago Venus could have been like Earth and this could tell us how.\n\nPeople think that a long time ago that Venus maybe used to be like Earth. It was covered in oceans and supported life forms. Venus is alot like Earth because it has a surface made of rocky sediment, valleys, mountains, and craters. Venus is the closest and most like to Earth and I think that we should explore it to learn more of what it used to be like.\n\nVenus is a dangerous and hard planet to study put I think if we can get close enough to it to study than it is worth the risk. Venus is alot like Earth and it would be cool is we could what it was like a long time ago and if it had life forms on it. We would also get to learn how the planet works and why it is so hot. I think that we should explore Venus more and that we should try NASA's blimp idea.",
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"content": "As cyclist travelling Yosemite National Park comes across many features area affects First takes directions old guys dont know anything changes maps never leave porch At first affects positive way thought good shortcut Yosemite However affect later came negative turned shortcut never existed Another feature affected wasted setting desertlike area The heat made harder ride bike also drank lot water This later resulted becoming dehydrated A positive affect found bait shop rehydrated got new directions",
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"content": "Undoubtedly, recently, the phenomenon of climate change and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. I fully agree with this fact that although people can adapt themselves to climate changes, it is better to keep weather circumstances constant. In turn, this essay will discuss why preventing climate remodeling is better than finding a way of living in this situation.\n On the one hand, climate alters can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that the merits of easier living under climate changing conditions, as well as adaptability under this situation, are inextricably bound up. That is to say that people gained the capability to adapt themselves to the present climate within the millions of years, thus they cannot live easily with increased temperature, which happened recently. For instance, in forest countries, several kinds of cancers such as breast, brain, chest and stem cell cancers are extremely rare. \n On the other hand, climate changes might decrease the consequences of life span. Some people declare that consumption of fossil fuels increase the atmospheric pollutants as well as the water temperature causing several damages to the environment. Hence, for preventing climate changes, consumption of fossil fuels must be reduced. As a tangible example, in the recent decade that the water temperature of the world became warmer by up to 2 OC, the rate of fires increased by up to 12%. \n To summarize, some people are of the opinion that modification of climate change can happen easily, while others are opposed to this view. I am sure that preventing climate changes is better than adopting to this situation and enhancement of trees cultivation and reduction of consuming fossil fuels can help people to avoid the climate changes.",
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"content": "We want you to be our next Seagoing cowboy. You are probly thinking what is a Seagoing Cowboy? Well a Seagoing Cowboy is someone who travles the the sea to help others in need.\n\nIt all started in 1945 when World War II was over in Europe, and many countries were in ruins. Thw UNRRA hired Seagoing Cowboys to helped these countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more. Seagoing Cowboys had many jobs such as feeding the animals, cleaning their stables, and also night watchman who cheaks on the animals every hour, so they were very busy. also being a Seagoing Cowboy can be dangorous too. If you were a Seagoing Cowboy then you better be careful because sometimes the deck can get wet or the ship will hit a wave.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy can be an adventure. It could open up the world to you. It can teach you about caring for others and being aware of other peoples needs. Also being a Seagoing Cowboy doesnt mean it will be boring because on board you can play games. They would play baseball ad volleyball in the empty holds where animals had been put in. Seagoing Cowboy would also have table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and other games to past the time.\n\nSo being a Seagoing Cowboy can be an adventure. It also helps people in need and to care for others. You also know what a Seagoing Cowboy is. Do think you can be what it takes to be a Seagoing Cowboy, to take care of animals and help others who need it and also be upon the sea hoing through the Pacific and Atlantic Ocean?",
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"content": "I patent always wait somthing earn I go grouping parents I wat I wait go aunts The worst time wat going camping",
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"content": "It’s true that some people believe that cross-national support is the most effective way to tackle with emergent issues in certain countries. From my perspective, i totally agree with this statement and i will discuss the reasons in the following essay.\r\n\r\nThere are some national problems which is urgent to deal with, such as famine in some undeveloped country. People there are encountered with an extreme scarcity of food, and the widespread malnutrition and death from starving. Most of the reasons comes from inevitable natural weakness, for instance, prolonged flooding, drought, extreme cold, insect infestation and plant disease which can’t be deal with country itself. Hence, in these cases, governments by no means should ask international aid from other developed nations which have major economics, conducive to gaining stable and enormous food source to distribute the dwellers and solve the hunger problems.\r\n\r\nMoreover, government should rely on international cooperation when they face unexpected catastrophes like earthquake, tsunamis, and tornado attack. Those kinds of emergency are overwhelming challenges which insist on international assistance. What’s more, the Russian invasion of Ukraine happened currently is also in count, the political issue which is too complicated to solve alone. The reconstruction plan for the country is needy for international support.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, in my view, it’s true that the international assistance is an effective way in dealing with many of acute problems instead of solving alone.",
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"content": "The significant growth of consumer products manufacturing has led to more detrimental effects on the natural environment. I believe that there are several root causes and solutions to address this issue will be proposed. \n\nTo begin with, the consumerism culture of today’s society has caused more harm to wildlife habitats for two main reasons, including the industrial emission from the production process and packaging waste from the goods disposal. Wastes and pollutants discharged from the manufacturing process are unavoidable by-products. In fact, factory machines are generally powered by fossil fuels, for this reason, carbon-dioxide will be released which might severely pollute the surrounding air. Furthermore, product packaging assembled from plastic and paper needs a longer time to degrade naturally. As a result, it could end up contaminating the oceans, rivers, lakes, and what is even more dangerous is the fact that it could seriously endanger the inhabitants when the waste is accidentally swallowed.\n\nSeveral actions should be prompted in order to mitigate the problem. Firstly, the government should take a bold move to impose a stricter law on sustainable manufacturing process and waste-management. To do so, the government can regulate the use of renewable energies to replace fossil fuels as well as encourage the utilization of low-energy-consumption machines. Secondly, to reduce unnecessary waste from product packaging, the consumer goods companies need to use an eco-friendly material which is considerably more compostable, for example, packaging made from plant-based resources such as corn and wheat straw.\n\nTo sum up, waste caused by the production of consumer goods is unavoidable, therefore comprehensive actions from the government and companies are needed to alleviate the problems immediately in order to conserve and protect the natural environment.",
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"content": "In memoir mood author The author Cuba lives modest threeroom apartment That big coming oneroom apartment The author says turn little space cuban home One reason house always filled love friends family also parents says came country courage also says I always parents love sacrifice The author loves parents done including turning simple house home mood created author memoir",
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"content": "Luke wanted to join the Seagoing Cowboys program because he knew it would be an opportunity of a lifetime. When Luke went he would be helping horses, young cows, and mules being shipped over seas to a new locatation he had to help gather suplies, animals and many other things supplies to help out things that had gone wrong also 44 nations joined together to help them out.\n\nIn one of Luke's trips there had been more then 335 plus enough hay to feed all of them. By time Luke had turned 18 he had arrived in Greece which meant he could go into the military service. When Luke had been discharged he had maken more then nine trips, that is the most any Seagoing Cowboy has ever gone in this service. It took the Seagoing Cowboys two weeks to cross the Alantic Ocean from the United States, and on top of it took them a month to get to China.\n\nWhen Luke was younger he used to help out on his Aunt Katie's farm, this helped him to learn his hardworking skills but never trained him for the dangers at sea. He had decided that helping out in the Seagoing Cowboys and all of the animals, and food services was worth all the help that him and his pals had given. It was real rainy one night after making his hourly check up on the horses to report to the captain when he had slipped down a slippery ladder ship cracking some of his ribs so then he couldn't do his job for a couple of days.\n\nLuke also had a lot of fun on board with all of his friends. When the animals had been unloaded they played baseball, volleyball, fencing, table tennis and a lot more sports and game. Luke said that being a Seagoing Cowboy was way much more then an adventure he had opened up the world for Luke. He was very grateful for his jouney, it mad him more aware of the other countries and there needs.\n\nLuke had learned everything from helping out animals to teamwork. Luke thought seen that helping other countries is fun but you do have to learn teamwork and much more. When he had broken some of his ribs he had to stop working his job for a while. When he got back on the job he was feeling very happy for what he had just accomplished for the world.",
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"content": "After World War II countries around the world were left in ruins. To help countries recover 44 nations banded together and created UNRRA. Also known as the United Nation Relif and Rehabilitation Administration. UNRRA hired \"Seagoing Cowboys\" to take care of animals shipped overseas to help those fallen nations. While some people think it is a bad idea to go over seas and be a \"Seagoing Cowboy\" it is a great opportunity to help other nations.\n\nNot only do they help people the cowboys have fun aboard the ship. They don't concider it a boring job. On return ships after the animals were unloaded the cowboys played tabel tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, and whittling to name just a few. The cowboys also have a side benifit of being able to sight see. They go to Venice, Italy and can take a gondola ride. See many gothic castles, or Churches in England. See the Panama Canal. You can go see China.\n\nAs stated before helping people is an other benift. You deliver people cows, mules, horses. While the animals were most likely eaten of killed during the war you can deliver a new calf and its mom to a places were all the animals were lost. Although you might be always busy, you get to feed animals, take care of animals, and see overjoyed faces of people when you bring in mules, cows, and horses.\n\nEven with the World War II over there is still many threats. Starvation, overcrowding, more wars, and many other threats. Although in those nations these cowboys were able to stomp out Starvation for a bit. Serve your nation in the United Nation Relif and Rehabilition Administration. While helping the UNRRA and becoming a \"Seagoing cowboy is very important for your nation and other nations it is also a great opportunity for anybody to help.",
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"content": "In excerpt called The Mooring Mast obstacles builders Empire State building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock One obstacle nature That wind top Empire State changing lot due bad weather The blimp would moving around even tied challenge safety Most dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable That safe blimp caught fire building floors could burn Also downtown New York densely populated place That obstacles Empire State building faced creating docking area blimps",
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"content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author is giving us all this information on venus. Venus is the closest planet earth in trems of density and size, and venus is the secound planet from the sun. Venus of course has more powerful weather then we do here at earth so that why they say that it is possible that venus was like earth with water and living thng years ago. They have eruoting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, frequent lighting. Venus has the hottes surface temperature of any other planet even thuogh Mercury is the closest planet to the sun.\n\nResearchers cannot take samples of rocks, gas, or anything else, from a distance. They may want to test more thing further in to venus but at some piont they cant take any of it cuased of the effect that can cuase or danger they can be in, o that way the wat to make stronger machines to go out to Venus so that they could make more invistigacion on in\n\nVenus.\n\nNasa is working to get more studing of venus if possible, they had some simpliied electronics that lasted for 3 weeks. They are lokking for simething stronger that last more then 3 weeks so that they can get more studing on Venus.",
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"content": "A time l parcint doctor tick tock The clock went around around It boring started say abc s forwards back yards every time doctor came call l sat sat nothing I tride fall asleep work l tried wach tv thing Finally two hours called",
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"content": "Driverless cars are the next piece of technology that will advance our society. Everyday scientists and engineers create new ideas and tech that improve our everyday lives. Many companies have took on the task to create this new driverless car with no flaws and many tests are done every day so that there is no problem in this life changing vechicle. A driverless care is a privelage to have to and use and until they are fully functional without any accident they will not be released to the public.\n\nI think that a driverless car is a great and innovative idea that will be soon be possible. Car companies have already created cars that have different technology that improve the safety of the passengers inside the vehicle. Many things like radar, safety cameras, and motion sensors have been put into these newer made vehicles. And this technology is very advanced and efficent to the millions of cars on the road each day. The creation of a driverless car is an intense experiment that will take many years to perfect. And these cars will have many useful items that will increase the value of the car. A car will then have many new devices like antilock brakes, driver assistance, radar, and Dubbed LIDAR. These advancments will increase the safety of the driver and that is a great thing to have in a vehicle. Driverless cars are a great thing but only when they are fully functional and operating with no flaws. These cars will change the game in how we get around everyday to work, school, or where ever a person needs to go.\n\nGoogle has been testing a driverles vehicle since 2009, and they have already driven half a million milles without a crash. Even though they are not fully driverless because a driver is alerted to take over when pulling in and out of drivewars or dealing with complicated traffic issues, these cars can still do alot on their own. And in 2013 MBW announced the development of \"Traffic Jam Assistant\" where the car can handle driving function at speeds at 25 mph and special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel. A BMW project manager driver stated \"We have to interpret the driving fun in a new way\". And these manufacturers wants to do that by bringing in car entertainment and information systems that use head up displays. Which is a great idea in a driverless car.\n\nDriverless cars are a great idea and very benefical to our world. They will improve the way we travel and transport things. A car was created so that we could get to one place to another a lot quicker and a driverless car is made so that a driver can get into a car without paying a ton of money and just get a ride to wherever they need to go. And although these cars have driven half a million miles on their own they obviously will still need to be tested for a couple more years until they will be released to the public. This creation of a driverless car will be a huge impact to our nations history and will be a great accomplishment.",
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"content": "Robot is one of people’s developments which are recently becoming a hot topic. An artificial intelligence robot can do almost every work by the data. Because of this ability, some people say that the intelligence robot will do all jobs in the future. But the others say it will not. Therefore, in this essay, I will discuss about this topic.\r\n\r\n First, artificial intelligence robot is more efficient than human. AIBO mainly work with the input data, so it is more authentic than people. Also, it has a fast judgment. In other words, it judges the situation or the problem immediately by using the system. For example, there is an AIBO is calculating the mathematical problems. It solves the problem by finding out the example of the problem in several data which are input in it. Thus, some people say AIBO will do all jobs in the future.\r\n\r\n Second, some think AIBO has no ability to create. AIBO’s thinking is limited with the information in their system. As a result, it cannot find a solution to a problem that it never met before. Moreover, AIBO has no feelings. It can copy people’s emotions and instincts, however, it has no ability to understand and feel it. For instance, some jobs such as writer who needs to explain the emotional exchanges between the characters are hard to explain well by robot. Therefore, I think artificial intelligence robot does not have ability to develop.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, artificial intelligence robot is a great invention of human. It has advantage of more efficient than people with accumulate thinking and expedite judgment. However, jobs like writer and scientist who has to understand well human’s feeling and find out new things cannot be done by AIBO. Accordingly, I disagree that AIBO will do every job in the future.",
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"content": "For decades, people have wondered if humans and computers could communicate. But how can we communicate if the technology itself does not have a conscious self? If it is possible, is it beneficial in any way? Professor Thomas Huang and Prof. Nicu Sebe have been working on ways for people to communicate with computers by making it possible for computers to read our emotions. Teamed with Dr. Paul Eckman, these scientist believe they have the answer to those very questions- the Facial Action Coding System.\n\nDoctor Paul Eckman, a psychologist, classified six basic emotions- happiness, suprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. He then linked those emotions with their characteristic facial muscle movements. Dr. Huang then imputed those basic characteristics into a computer. By \"using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements,\" making the computer able to \"read\" your emotions by comparing it to a neutral face. Dr. Huang suggests that artists like da Vinci were able to paint and convey specific emotions by studying human anatomy. He states that the \"new computer software stores similar anatomical information as an electronic code.\" Depending on which muscles you use and how you use them when you smile, one can determine if you have a genuine or fake smile. \"According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them.\" The feeling of empathy often may occur because \"we unconsciously imitate another person's facial expressions.\" This system could be useful in a classroom when a student is becoming bored or tired. If this happens, the computer could then adapt to what the child needs, making it more interesting.\n\nTherefore, the use of computers reading people's emotions is a beneficial thing. Not only would it help in the classroom, but it would also help in everyday life.",
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"content": "The following essay is an analaysis of the artice \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus.\" and an evaluation of the points that the article brings up. The article describes dangers of visting our neighbour planet venus and ideas of how it could be done.\n\nThe author does a great job to describe venus as the Earth's \"twin\", but also as a dangerous planet that is not made for us. He brings up that no spacecraft has survived a landing for more than a few hours, that the atmosphere is 97% carbon doixide, that there are clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid, that the plantes surface has an average temperature of 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and that the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater as it is on the Earth. All these points convinced me that Venus is a planet that is not made for us to be on. Even if he brings up points why we should still go there it seems to me like it would make no common sense. He says that Venus once looked just like the Earth, but for me it doesn't matter how it once looked like because then we would first go into time traveling and that is not what this article is about. The author also brings up that there could be a survivable soulution by having a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 miles above the landscapre. I don't think that this is a good idea, because it would take so much work and money just to see things that we can see without a human being there. He mentions that it probably wouldn't even help the scientists that much because we wouldn't be able to take samples of anything or even inspect the ground conditions. So I think that idea is a waste of money and unless there is a really good reason or something specific to look for we shouldn't do it. The author then mentions that researchers are looking for innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute knowledge over Venus. I think that is a good think to do but it can not be an option to send a human up there, because as long as you only send machines it is just money that you send up there, but with all the dangers it is stupid to send a human to Venus. He closes his article with the statement that we have to strive for new knowlegde beyond our Earth and I do agree with that but we have to look out what the dangers are and sometimes things are not possible, because we are very limited compared to the power of the universe.\n\nSo I think that we should keep looking for new innovations that can help us explore the universe but we have to accept that we are very small in a big universe and that not everything is possible for us because we are limited, while the universe is not.",
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"content": "Imagine having the chance to live on a planet that was not the Earth. It would be a whole new world to travel and explore. The author provides many details about how studying Venus would be beneficial for scientists.\n\nStudying Venus would help educate the scientists about whether or not human life could survive there. The author explains, \"Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for human\" (paragraph 5). From this, one could infer that from extensive research and experiments, scientists could dictate if living on Venus is a brilliant idea. The reason why scientists are looking at Venus is because it resembles Earth in more ways than one. In paragraph 4 it states, \"...Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth\" (The Challenge of Exploring Venus). This expresses how similar Venus once was to Earth, and how they have similar features, such as, valleys, mountains, and craters.\n\nTaking the time to do research on Venus would be a splendid idea so that scientists could decide whether or not it is safe for humans to travel or live there. If scientists never tried to explore the other planets because it was too dangerous then they are not at their full potential.",
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"content": "Architects builders faced several obstacles attempting build empire state building allow dirigibles dock One obstacle faced S keeping safe environment Dirigibles fueled hydrogen prone destroyed fire One example paragraph German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire Lakehurst New Jersey Another major obstacle high wind speeds violent air currents These made dangerous back ship would swung around mooring mast Lastly another obstacle faced law In paragraph says existing law airships flying low urban areas This law would keep dirigibles able ever dock even fly general area All obstacles could overcome end mooring mast successful",
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"content": "The time I patient Because go city pick something took minutes Then way back took another minutes trips boring But I patient also morning I patient brother taking shower I wanted I patient takes like minutes chocolate milk mom gon na make patient make",
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"content": "Dear I strongly believe computers positive effects people society My reasons learn find new information anything able talk people faraway computers teach skills use future I like elaborate reasons First going internet search sites help learn find information anything want On internet even ask questions probably answered You even use information computer report statistics show people reports find facts internet Google yahoo search sites helped children become intrested learning Also using computer ables talk people faraway places friends seen You even webcam people I remember weeks ago best friend moved florida webchat everyday Talking online even lower telephone bills Chatting online nt lost anything telephone charges country calls cost Computers let talk best buddy save money Last least computers teach skills applied later life Today many jobs due using computer technology getting mom advanced Before know know work computer Also probably need computer college Proffesor even stated every single kid courses sort computer In college take notes assignments Using computers help make life easier As see believe computers help people society greatly My reasons learn find information anything able talk people faraway computer skills help life Technology advancing going use computer sooner later",
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"content": "There is a tremendously controversial perspective heating debate over the ever-increasing well-known commercial activities in this day and age. While this phenomenon has both pros and cons, I would contend that its merits may outweigh its demerits\r\n\r\nWithout a shadow of a doubt, marketing plays a paramount significant role in daily life for the time being because it can help a wealth of people know and purchase decent products which they need via advertising videos on social media or television. Hence more and more corporations invest in marketing practices in order to promote their commodities. For example, there is an eclectic mix of firms that use the advertising services of Youtube such as Grammarly application’s corporations so inhabitants could be recommended a lot of intriguing things while watching Youtube like this application. As a consequence, companies and consumers put a premium on advertising activities. \r\n\r\nWhile the redeeming features of advertisement are widely acknowledged, its counterpart still lingers. Nowadays, some people are not interested in marketing activities because they believe it is comparatively annoying and spoils their mood. For instance, when they are watching some blockbusters or interesting vlogs on Youtube, advertising videos suddenly emerge and they have to wait for the end of these videos, which makes them feel unhappy and uncomfortable. As a result, promotion activities bring an undesirable impact on users. \r\n\r\nTo summarize, the rapid advancement of using advertisements have either advantages or disadvantages. However, I would contend that it would do more good than harm.",
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"content": "Patience mean lot things It mean understanding mean tolerant Being patient also mean dont complain Like ask someone get something say get certain amount days If dont get day said would expecting shouldnt get mad You also paitient wait something If getting new pair shoes way get ordered You start complain takes long time You able wait without getting angry dont yet Being patient mean things If things tell patient That patient means",
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"content": "The bar graph illustrates how many women and men attended drama, painting, sculpture and language courses in 2009 at an adult education centre while the pie chart provides data in regard to the ages of the course takers.\nOverall, most women than men attended drama, painting and language courses and sculpture reported in general, the less number of people enrolled. Overall, people aged 50 or over participate to the indicated evening courses while people under 20 are the minority.\nAccording to the bar graph, only 10 men attend drama classes while for women the number double up. The painting course shows a slight difference between the number of men and women participating, above 20 for men and 30 for women. The language course report on average the highest number of people enrolled, 20 men and 40 women. Sculpure has the lowest number of attandences.\nThe pie chart illustrates that mostly people aged 50 or over attended those evening courses, 42% respectively. to follow, 26% of the enrolled people are aged between 40 and 49 years old. A slight difference of percentage there's among people aged 30-39 and 20-29, 16% and 11% respectively, Only the 5% of the people is aged under 20.",
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"content": "Children are the nation builders. As everyone can see future of the society in the children.Nowadays, it is mostly seen that they have more roles to perform as compare with the past. One school of thought that the benefits outweigh the pitfalls,however others have different opinion. Both sides will be discussed in following paragraphs.\r\n\r\nTo commencing with the pros of this trends, with the more responsibility the child become mature and disciplined. They acquire the problem-solving skills,maturity, effective decision making and many more. As most commonly said that empty mind is devils workshop, so that's why if more responsibilities will be incurred on youth, they will grow well and become multi-talented. They get oriented with their goals and get directions in time to achieve them.New learning helps in sharpens the minds of the youngsters.Therefore , for more better society and disciplined enviornment that sounds necessary.\r\n\r\non the other hand, there are some cons of this, as longs as it has many advantages but it destroys the innocense and snatches the most enjoyable age time from them.They become mature before the time and make busy their schedule in works. This lead to reduces the life expentancy rate, more stress which leads to motality , morbidity. This happens because which time they needs to spend with their friend with free mind, at that time they get responisilities and live the materialistic life.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, it is good to become a responsible person but happiness is also matters. The balance is required because the child age time is the only time, if ends up with happiness that would become the most rememberable part of life until death.Happening is the key for healthy life.",
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"content": "Although our \"twin planet\" has extremely intense conditions, it provides an impeccable opportunity to gather new information and make new discoveries. Although Venus is very similar to earth in size and density, it has some immense differences making it extremely difficult to further explore the planet.\n\nThroughout time, attempts to explore Venus have been attempted. Although few of them turned out succesful, learning experiences were taken away from the trials. A number of things contribute to the dangers surrounding the large planet. The corrosive acid and sky rocketing temperatures make it impossible for any human to get into close proximity with the surface. However, these dangers do not stop the extreme curiosity of scientists. The author claims that venus was once the most earth like planet in the solor system. This sparked the curiosity of scientists, because now there was so much information to learn, but no way to learn it. The close proximity from Venus to earth made it our nearest planetary visit. Venus was sitting right there with abundant information and discoveries, but was impossible to explore. Luckily, discoveries have made it possible to come into closer contact with the planet.\n\nAlthough science is the fuel to the fire, exploring venus is more than just for scientific purposes. Finding new ways to overcome what some may call the impossible says a lot about the human race. Dangers and set backs should not limit the things we are capable of accomplishing, but push us to overcome whatever is in the way. Finding a way around the dangers of venus will not only have a huge impact on the scientists of the world, but also prove what hard work and determination can achieve.",
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"content": "I think that the auther did a good job writtening this artivcle because he use good detail to catch the reader and to think a little more about planet venus the auther is sau that ( In space term- human have seat numerous of spacecraft to land on this clound-draped world. Each pervies mission was unmanned, and for good reason, sice no spacraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. May that is the issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on venus in more than three deacades) say the auther in the artivcle.\n\nThe auther also say in the artivcle (that the atmospher of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. Even more challenging are in the clouds of the highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venis atmosphere. He said the on the planet's surface temperatures average over 800 degerees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 time greater than what we experience on our own planet.) Also the conditions are far more extree than anything humans encounter on the earth; such as environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deppest parts of our ocean and would liquefy many metals. Also notable, venus has the hottest surface temperature of any plantes in our solar system even though mercury is closer to ur sun.\n\nBeyond high pressure and heat, venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like eruping volcanoes powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. Astronmers are fascinated by venus because it may well once have been the most earth-like planet in our solar system. Still today venus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth. The planet venus hasa surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains and craters. Furthermore , recall that venus can sometime be our nerest option for a planetary visit, a crucal consideration given the long time frames of space travel.\n\nI like this article because it was fun to learn somthing new and that the article and the author was good at laying out his article and also putting in detail and fact what he new about venus it was super easly to do the question. I think that the auther supports the idea vey good in the article because he lay it out for you and that he/she give out fact to supports the reader and to help out a little.",
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"content": "In ¨Challenge of Exploring Venus,¨ the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author makess it very obvious that he has a bias opinion on whether or not we should explore Venus despite the dangers it presents. We see in Paragraph 8 a statement made by the author that exhibits his feelings on the matter. ¨Striving to invent the challenge presented by Venus has value. only beacause of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travel on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation¨, this shows the author thinks that we should not let the dangers and set backs prevent us from exploring our universe and discorvering more about Venus.\n\nAnother example of the authors opinion is the statement made in paragraph 6, ¨Therefore scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks.¨ The author makes it obvious that he thinks we should not focus on the risks and dangers but to go explore the planet. This article shows us that the priviledge of studying and observing a planet far exceeds the dangers of what might happen if we do.",
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"content": "In some nations, the interest in the origin of the living place has increased. In this essay, I will explain the reasons behind this attraction and then I will note various procedures, which residents can use to find out about the past.\r\n\r\nPeople are attracted to the history of their habitats for two main reasons. First, some individuals are interested in the past to see how their surrounding areas have been transformed. Besides, digging the ancient mysteries will bring enjoyment for them and it is their habit to behave like that. For instance, my uncle knew everything about his home since he loved to read about history and the past. More importantly, there may be some financial benefit in knowing about the past of a place. In this state, individuals may find some antiquities tools, which can be sold for thousands of dollars. For example, the old house of my grandmother was sold to an archaeologist and then he conducted a massive destruction and found numerous aged coins.\r\n\r\nIn order to learn about the history of a place, individuals can dig into the internet and they also need to ask local residents, who have lived there for a long period. The Internet has a great amount of information including old maps and pictures, which can be used to determine the way people used to live there. Moreover, old people are filled with precious information, which can not be found on the Internet. As a result, a concise interview with them can enlighten us about the process of transformation. For example, I have read a book about ancient Greece. In the book, the writer used a lot of Internet-based pictures, while he used some oral data from the old public to connect evidence with each other.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the main reasons for the attraction towards the history of living places come from the individuals’ self-interest and the financial purpose behind it. People also can gain this information from the Internet and old neighborhood, who have lived there for a long time.",
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"content": "The article Making Mona Lisa smile by Nick D'Alto refers to a new piece of technology that allows people to see exactly how others feel, or react in certian situations. The device was created by Dr. Huang and measures facial muscle moments then associates them with emotions. The device has proven to be succesful at reading emotions of real people and portrait paintings. Using this piece of technology in the classroom would be beneifical for all parties involved.\n\nStudents experience a wide range of emotions during the average school day. The new tool could be used to indentify all of them. Starting with analysis of how students are feeling right when they walk in the door. This would be helpful to the school because it would allow them to identify students that need help as suggested by Dr. Huang. Eliminating the need for teachers to ask students for questions. Teachers would know exactly when students had a question, because he or she was making a face of confusion.\n\nThe emotion reading computer could also tell guidence councilers how children are really feeling about their current situation. Allowing for a deeper more pesonal conversation that would create a better enviroment for healing the students emotions.\n\nAnother, way that the machine could be helpful is that it could help teachers interven before students brawl. Instead of fighting the machine would assist those in charge by seeing the issue before it becomes one. According to Nick D'Alto the machince currently searches for the emotions, anger, surprise, happiness,disgust,fear,and sadness. Technology continues to make advances everyday and this machine would be able toe search for more emotions everyday.\n\nStudents require a vivid and visually entertianing lesson, with the new technology this is possible. Dr Huang believs that the machine could search for the emotion of boredom and then suddenly change the way the students recieve the message based on their attentiveness. This would be more useful because some teachers do not change they way they present the information. Technology with the ability to adapt to the needs of the students is important and another reason why it shoul dbe incorperated into school systems.\n\nOthers argure that the technology could be bad for schools. Some poeple believe that it would be a waste of the public's time to invest in something that can already be done by a person. Dr. Huang himself compared the compter to something similar to what humans would do when looking at emoitions of others. It would take jobs away from the area replacing teachers. These all may be true, but sometimes people missread emotions. Teacher can not teach and think about how ever childs emotions at the same time, this new technology would help teachers.\n\nThis computer could most definatley be benifical to schools, because of its ability to identfy emotions. The machine could help notify teachers of confused studnets, help guidence councilers identify the true meaning of how students feel, and finally help staff stop situations before they can come up. All togther these reasons show that this technology is needed in schools on a global scale. The combination of both school and technology is the future and this is definately something that will be incorperated soon.",
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"content": "Do you think driveless cars are dangerous if so why? I think driveless cars are a better oppournity for drivers to get around easier, sensor and safer! The driver could get around easier instead using brake when stop or either steer the wheel when its hard to turn. In the text it says \" They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents\". Drivless cars could help you through difficult times even if you drive past road rage!\n\nDriverless cars technology is a good idea I think because it has an sensor! It tracks what your feeling or what you could detect while your in the car driving In the text it says \"Fruther improvements in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on their own.\" The idea of having the a sensor sense you when your in danger or need of help if your car breaks down is another postive impact of driverless car. The sensor contains deep inside the car for example the creation of the speeding of antilock brakes. Smarter manufacturers turned to smarter cars because not only the speed of the brakes but the engine can be reduce power and allowing for better response and control than a human druver could manage alone.\n\nDriverless cars as can detected whether your in danger or not! Safety is important if you have an automated car driving you! Who knows what the case maybe? In the text it says \" GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object.\" Referring when the vehicle sense another car been touch the car automate is going to be aware something is wrong. The google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over other options under consideration are flashing lights on the windshield and other heads-up displays. Driverless cars manuafacturers are aslo safer because inside the car while the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver!\n\nThe manufactures is driverless cars is not only a good service of work with making cars but different oppournities could be with just testing out how things would be different with someone controlling the car! Its like the car knows where to take the driver as soon as someone sit in the driver seat. The smart idea of the gps of the car is a good motive for the driver just have to seat back and relax! The driverless car still alert the driver to take over when pulling or may pulling out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues. Autonomous car is a good way with not dealing with car wrecks or even navigating through roadwork.\n\nAnother impressive thing is the law depend on the driver to always mistakes or either just going over the speed limit! That is never the case with driverless car As stated above safety is acheived witht he alerted driver. Presently, the law thinks assumption of the driverless car is safe car human in control at all times. The law still change the laws, will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident.",
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"content": "In recent days, a topic has aroused heated debate in society about whether modern technology has made life more complicated. Some people think that if we don't use technology, our life might be easier and simpler. In my opinion, this is a complete pipe dream.\r\n\r\nTechnology is certainly not the real reason for complicating human life, but it is the most effective way to make it less complicated. For those who view technological improvement in a misunderstood way, the emergence of various high-tech products has made our lives unnecessarily complicated, and we have to spend time learning new technologies. Our brains make it impossible for us to do things easily, but we are confused by appearances and blame it all on the development of technology. Human civilization forces our lives to be complicated. No matter how technologically developed we are, we have to deal with overpopulation, resource shortages, or environmental pressures and figure out ways to solve them.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, we are now so used to relying on modern technology that I can't imagine how we and our descendants would struggle in a world without modern transportation, tall buildings, or communication apps. Despite their flaws, they are the most suitable solutions ever conceived of for all the current problems that human beings face while going through an increasing population society.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is humanity and global development that compel our lives to become more complex, while technology suffers the fate of simplifying them. Therefore, reducing our reliance on technology in order to achieve an unrealistically simple life is unreasonable.",
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"content": "Patience someone patient I understand something Someone teacher The teacher complain helping Along students room When teacher helping sat quietly work The teacher understand I understand work It math We tarning positive negitive intergers My question CAPS order last greatess She replied I asy would like show I said CAPS please So minutes helped In time whole class sat work That one time people patient",
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"content": "Certain people believe that food choices and their citizen's nutrition become one of the habit that needs to rule by the government. Whereas other people tend to argue this should be a freedom of private choice and responsibility. Further explanation regarding the issue will be explain in the essay. \r\n\r\nin one hand, make laws for what people should eat may become interesting. Firstly, one of the advantage is it will be a good solution to avoid malnutrition problems in a country, because if they disobey the rule they will be punish. Therefore, everyone will encourage theirselves to maintain their nutrition. Secondly, meals laws can blurred the wealth level in society. This is because food choices is likely the same both for the poor and the rich. And it is the responsibility for the government to provides suitable needs, especially for the poor. For example, groceries which sell in the market may have the same variety in each store in terms of nutrition laws. Thus, citizen tend to eat similar menus either in a big or small house. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, rules about someone's food preparation may not suitable for every person. Nutrition is something that cannot be the same for everyone. Food choices and need for one person unlikely the same for others by the reason of different body type. Another bad side if meals options become a law is the lack of variety of food and beverage businesses. It is a result from strict food materials according to the laws. To illustrate, there will be no existance of fast food business because this consider as unhealthy. And the bad impacts of this can affect the economic growth of a country. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, people's nutrition and food choices laws may seem as an interesting solution to improve public health. In contrast, it is also can creates negative effects for people within the country.",
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"content": "This worlk is made whit the finality of explain to everybody the importance of The Challenges of Exploring Venus.\n\nThe author says the experiences of the exploring the this planet, her speak about that; Venus is the second planet in our solar system, is the our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds. Each previous mission was unmaneed, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Numerous factors contribute to Venus'ss reputation asa challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us. A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent corbon dioxide blankets Venus. In this planet the conditions are far mor extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth; such an environment would crush ven a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighthing strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.\n\nAn example is imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. Just as our jet airplanes trtavel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over venus would\n\navoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would\n\nnot exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans. NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\n\nThe conclusion is that the experience in the other planet is that in that planet the people can't living because the conditions are very bad for that a humans can survive, being with the weather, not have electricy, and is a very small planet, is a planet that so same the a Star, because sometimes called the \"Evening Star\".",
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"content": "Driverless cars have been imagined and desired for years. But now we are getting good enough technology to actually realize the dream of driverless cars. The subject of driverless cars, like all things, has pros and cons. But when it comes to driving vehicles, safety should be the first concern.\n\nThe article mentions many of the new safety features of driverless cars. Some of these are the sensors that keep the car from hitting objects. Another safety feature is the GM seats that vibrate when the driver is about to back into something. There are many others as well, and these safety features prove that we are close to getting safe, and fully functioning driverless cars.\n\nHowever, there are some concerns about safety in driverless cars.\n\nMany are concerned that the cars will not be able to respond to certain circumstances, like weaving through traffic, getting through an accident, or sliding on ice. There have even been cases of automatic breaking features breaking to quickly. What this means is that sometimes, cars with automattic breaking will break to quickly for the driver behind them to respond. This causes the driver behind to rear end the car with the automattic breaks.\n\nPersonally, I don't think we should use driverless cars, due to safety risk. It is just to soon, and the technology isn't quite good enough yet. However, our technology is improving all the time, and at some point in the near future, it just might be good enough. But untill that time comes, I believe that driverless cars should not be used.",
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"content": "Some people support the opinion that museums should be places to enyoyable. While others think that it suppose to be an education places. In the following paragraphs, both of these viewpionts will be examined in detail.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the museums had several categories in general, which is cloud be an entertainment sources. In addition, these institution also gain more in spects of interested more than academics. For example, some individuals are connot understand about historical in hall. Therefore to be clear to understand the meaning as works shown in those exhibition, an information would illustrate in form of vedio's display, audio, flim and also humans' performance are included as recently. As a result, coming to visit an exhibition is more fun, interesting and easy to unterstood by typical ages.\r\n\r\nOn the others hand, some people still supported that meseum, which is a places to learn in academic knowledge. For instance, most of ancients places have to visited with the properly colthes and respect the place, so fun activies are not allow there. Because there are various stuffs' ancient including tools, fossil, even the pictures in the past. Addition, education while visting in the academic meseums should disregard it.\r\n\r\nTo summarise, it can be emphazised that museums can be places to entertain people with severral form to persent their performance, despite some places are important as education resorces.",
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"content": "Consider this, instead of driving to work everyday why ride a bike or walk there? By not driving in a car you're reducing emmitions that go into the air. But what if the distance is too far or you have no sense of direction? That's okay because what do you have on you twenty-four-seven? You can always use your Iphone for directions. Without the use of cars it can benifit the community and ourselves in multiple ways.\n\nYes, cars and other sources of transportation are great but is doing you and Earth better? Admit it, no. Driving cars increases the smog in your area espcially if you live in Beijing, China.\n\nLimiting the use of cars can reduce the smog (air pollution) \"Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France... [The smog] rivaled Bijing, China, which is know as one of the most polluted cities in the world. (Duffer, Paris bans driving due to smog.) If more people were to participate who knows how much smog/congestion percentage would go down. \"... Colombia... millions of the citizens hiked, biked skated or took buses to work during a car-free day... leaving the streets of the capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams.\" (Selsky, Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota.)\n\nThe decrease in vehicles being bought would result in benificial implications for carbon emissions and the enviroment according to American sociologists.\n\nThough less cars on the road would hurt the car companies like Ford and Mercedes, mobility companies range their products beyond the personal vehicle. \"New York's new bike sharing program and its new skyrocketing bridge and tunnel tolls reflect those new priorities\" (Rosenthal, The end of car culture.)\n\nAlso the use the internet makes people feel better connected than those who drive to see each other. It allows people to communicate by not driving all those extra miles. Other than that, nowadays people car pool or cell phones to get around. so to most, its no big deal these days.",
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"content": "Smart cars are the image of the future we can love or hate them but something we cant over look is the flaws they have. Smart cars can be the exact opposite of smart sometimes expecally when we havent perfected a smart car. Yea some you can plug your ipod into and some give you signals if your getting close to an object. A car that can drive its self is cool but what if not everyone has one, then there could be some problems, if the car short circets on the road and you get hit or hit someone elses car then whos going to pay for the damages you or the manufacturer. so just to get the car fixed you have to get into legal matters with the manufacturer and explain what happened even when you dont know what went wrong. Another reason that the driverless car is flawed is because technology can fail in sertain weather conditions like snow storm or heat waves. Humans can adapt but a smart car cannot we can work a car in a blizzered or a heat wave and be fine but technology can freeze and melt and ruin that smart car. Last of all we cant depend soally on technology, you cant fully control technology we can only control what we do and how we do it. My opinion on technology is that they can be a liabilaty to are society and we should strive for something more useful.",
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"content": "In some countries, the number of young people who are under 15 years old has a significant rise in recent years. In my opinion, this trend would influence the current and future times of these countries both in negative and positive ways.\n\nHaving more young people would bring various impacts on society such as allocation of educational resources and job opportunities. Firstly, if public schools have full enrollment, parents would have to send their children to private schools. This means parents need to pay higher tuition fees than the cost of going to public schools. It could largely increase the economic burdens for children’s families. Secondly, in the coming decades, it might be more challenging for these young people to secure jobs, especially when governments have trouble in offering sufficient job positions.\n\nMeanwhile, a larger population of youth may also bring advantages to the nations. On the one hand, in order to ease the current pressure, governments need to invest more money in infrastructure, including public transportation, sports facilities, and school construction. This could create a better environment for teenagers. On the other hand, the younger generation tends to be energetic and creative, which is a useful source of innovation and evolution for their own countries. Therefore, a nation would be more advanced in the upcoming years by having more youngsters.\n\nIn general, when there are more young citizens who are aged 15 and younger in some nations, it has not only drawbacks but also benefits in the present and future time.",
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"content": "The time I patience I snowbling family Because dad I h ave get wormed get trailar start ride one around get us track I ride hind sled I muc get snow geon go aunt house Ive lot places sleds",
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"content": "Dear Computers great invention They allow many different things They alot positive effects people Computers deal sorts things handeye cordination learning faraway places people talking online anyone Come wonderful world computers Computers super positive effect people They help teach hand eye cordination You look screen without look hand move mouse You see s going looking screen Doing helps everyday skills like playing sports If use eyes hands hit baseball even Computers teach hand eye cordination able two things Would amazing could find recipe go Well You could simple A computer helps people different things It s also easy different culture people places Let s say A computer gives learn something Computers almost everyday They give instance great way talk people You chat people typing Further sites like page post opinions You also friends page see These sites give people chance find old friends Webcam becoming huge sensation Sites like skype let see talk person They allow talk people feel Computers benefit people world doesnt Computers help people physically able learn new things able computers arent taking helping",
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"content": "In book Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit Joe Kurmaskie setting codi California The author went journey",
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"content": "the author suggests that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author suggestion means that its way interesting to study instead of worring about he dangers it could cause. In paragraph 3 it says that the venus are far mor extreme than anything humans encounter on earth such as environment would crush even a submerine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. And he talks about how interesting the venus is. It says venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system even though mercury is closer to our sun. In paragraph 4 the author says that why are scientist even discussing further visits to its surface. In this paragraph he tells us about how dangerouse venus is to our planet. it says various forms of life on earth. Today venus still has some features that are analogous to those on earth. Now the NASA are sending humans to study venus. But in paragraph 5 it says NASAs possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. But however NASA decided to work on other approaches to studying venus. There example is to simplify electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the choas of venus surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions(paragraph 7). And honesty my oppinion i think that it seems dangerouse and interesting at the same time but still risky to study abour or examine",
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"content": "obstacles builders faced allowing dirigibles dock would lack suitable landing area one main obstacles occurred would nature shifting Air Currents constanily shifting back ship constanily shifting",
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"content": "In recent decades, it has been argued that it is beneficial for students to participate in volunteer work after school hours. Although some people suggest that they have to concentrate on studying mandatory subjects such as mathematics, science, and languages to enrol in higher educational institutions in the future I strongly agree with the former view which is they are in need of unpaid social work for human interaction skills.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, since the acquisition of knowledge of fundamental subjects in primary schools has been improving overall aspects of the worldwide economy, numerous human beings have been claiming that they ought to study such subjects during their free time instead of volunteering work. For example, In many Asian countries, most educators force teenagers to acquire high scores for school exams to build a strong workforce for improving the economy of the nations by making them go to private academic institutions after school hours. However, these youngsters who only concentrate on school subjects have shown a lack of communication and social managing skills which results in social isolation. Therefore, to obtain intelligence about how to interact with other individuals, parents and educators should let teenagers join unpaid community work during their free time.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it cannot be denied that children should be required to participate in volunteering exercises to improve and enhance their human interaction abilities. For instance, nowadays, there are a number of opportunities to progress in unpaid social work such as providing assistance in an aged care center or participating in charity programs. It is essential for them to learn how to communicate and manage with others such as seniors or co-workers to collaborate with the society and community. Furthermore, as its process itself is without payment, teenagers can freely join proactive practices in the sectors where they are interested in their future careers without pressure. Thus, due to the benefits of volunteering exercises, a syllabus for community work needs to be covered by educators and governments.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I strongly believe that since unpaid social work during their free time will enhance teenagers' social abilities and provide experiences for their future occupations which are difficult to obtain from mandatory subjects, its advantages cannot be dismissed.",
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"content": "Nowadays tv plays a major role in our life. It is considered by some people that types of a program can affect kids' behaviour.While others believe that amount of time plays more role in their behaviour.Before arriving at my position both the sides of argument will be analyzed further.\r\n\r\n To begin with,why the children get attracted by characters.To answer it, kids are unmatured they do not know what is real and what it reel.They think everything is reality which they watch on the tv.For example,The survey revealed by America that after watching the Harry porter every kids get attached by this movie like eating same foods, wearing same cloths as well as dilogue.Another one is, if pupil watch thriller film on a daily, it can effect on their a daily life.Regarding this they can get more aggressive and rude.For instance,the data was cocluded by London that 70% of kids are aggressive in recent time because of thriller film.\r\n\r\n On the other hand,some think a time can influenced them.It can effectaffect them if they watch the tv an unlimited time it can harm their brain as well as a mental health.To explain it, the kids watch the television for 5 hours without rest they will lost in the reel world they think they are in the movie.Also, it can damage their eyes and heart.For example, Cambridge university has found that if children see television for more than five hours,do not behave like normally in such situations.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, it is true that number of time period can damage the children in many way.I believe that the types of programs are more dangerous for them.As a result these sireas or movies can make aggressive and rude them in normal life.",
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"content": "Being patience someone could bisy better patience person done I going write time someone I know patience Well one morning mom got work came I told mum I really wanned go friends house But mom keept saying wait I wait I My mom wasnt even done still I told I could go working friends house But said I patience till done My dad living work afternoon I idle I told dad could drop friends house could live work So I I went tell But guess said coz already late I looked time yhea already late I dicided patience coz mom almost done dad already leaving I sat watched tv mom done My mum went insid room I got asked done said yes I yelled tackeing I happy I rushed car went I went mom left day I got go friends house patience",
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