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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The globalized world has become more interconnected than ever before in every way especially illness and disease have become globalized problems. In my opinion, we should focus on these problems with our governments but also we need to realize what we are doing about environmental pollution problems. \r\n\r\nAlmost all governments around the World are trying to find better solutions for environmental pollution and housing problems. This is the correct way to prevent illness and disease. Furthermore, at the same time goverments are avoiding implementation of solved problems. The best example of this is The Kyoto protocol. There are so many solved problems about environmental pollution in the protocol. But some countries do not implement it even though they accepted it, also some countries have given up protocol. Every government needs protocols like the Kyoto Protocol to solve environmental pollution problems. Moreover, the governments should support the building of liveable houses rather than government buildings. In poor countries, like my own country, huge government buildings have been built and they are not necessary. Governments should realize that the quality of life is much more important than other problems. People will have a better chance to decrease illness and disease if they solve pollution and housing issues.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, people should realize that the quality of their lives is dependent on themselves. If people want a better quality house, they should demand more from their local authorities. For example, people may question how their taxes are spent and they may want different resources such as long term loans for house problems. Also, If people want a higher quality of life, they should keep going to develop their own solution for environmental problems. These solutions may be small but the impact will be huge. For example, recycle, using public transport, respect to nature, walking for short distances. These help to become healthy and also make the environment better. Therefore will have a better chance to prevent illness and disease.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, people and their governments or local authorities have to focus more on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems together so they can prevent illness and disease.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "AHH Oh hi name Im going tell I waited something sweet Ok I heard awesome scary place called Me friends mine plan So far ordinary shower dressed school Today going parents house online see opens CAPS found two days new location open It near parlor road So cheak nearby read screaming like baby gets bottle tooken away Today day road realize many people would When got least people waiting sat line every minutes line decreased people Then finally half waiting It luck people patient enough wait respectful Then use rest room walk across street could came back ended top waited another By time done crying wet pants I didnt anything CAPS one heck night never would happened patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the use of technology to read emotion shouldnt be us . When you think about it tech plays a huge role in society today.\n\nOne day its going to get to the point where we dont need to even rely on talking to eachother undertand eachother and, so with that addng a emotion reader to the picture how would you know how to interact with people.\n\nPictuere this, if you was to so happen to know that some one is mad or sad would you still go talk to them. who really knows but, someone might be the person you consider to be your bestfriend who's like aw man my freinds is sad I don't know if i want to deal with him/her today let me just try to movuner around him/her.\n\nWhen you think about it just like in paragraph 7 after the instruction it say how can you tell from a guwien face emotion from a fake one what if the mechine is faulty one day\n\nwill never know if that person conveying that emotion plus some emotion have double meaning to it when people cry it dosen't mean that thier always sad the why could be having tears of joy.\n\nAll i'm saying as future step we shouldnt be so dependant on what new techmology has instore for us because sometime the best thing can be your worst nightmare.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Beautiful Time\n\nThe sea is a beautiful blue place. Who doesn't like the sea? In a story about a cowboy who road the waves he well, rode the waves, Luke was a seagoing cowboy. If I had a chance I would be a seagoing cowgirl. The job involves great animals, lots of unique places, and it is very fun.\n\nFirst, it has great animals. On the trip\n\nLuke had at least 335 horses to feed, who doesn't love horses? The animals also keep you busy if your bored and they give you company. For animals it isn't that bad that they only have to be checked on every hour. I believe that animals are good company and entertainers.\n\nNext, you can see lots of unique places. On your trip, you get to see Europe and China. You also get to run into The Panama Canal and get a good view of the scenery. The best part you get to take a gondola ride in Venice,Italy. This shows that not only you get animals you get lots of unique plaves to go to.\n\nLast, you get to have lots of fun. When the holds that hold the animals are empty you get to play baseball and volleyball in them. You can also have tournments of table-tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, and more. You can also have tournments on reading, and whittling you also get to play games to pass time.\n\nTo conclude, a seagoing cowboy involves great animals, unique places, and lots of fun. So work as a seagoing cowboy or cowgirl because no matter what, you will always have a great and beautiful time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "According to this the technology giving is this passage tells students that they can read your emotions by FACS computer software. They say can read people emotion such as- happiness, sadness, anger, disgust, fear, and surprise. thier process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like a human muscles. As giving the Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computer can do. A example they give us for a happy and sad description is, if you smile when a web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different. This technology can also occur towards video games also for example , The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive-- for video games or video surgery. Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication. This passage also lets you know that, your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would i buy a drivless car? Well, in my opinion and how I feel about these \"driveless cars\" I would not buy one; nor drive one. Why would you want a drivless car when your the driver and you want to drive and\n\nhave a car drive for you? I know the car doesn't drive for you literally, but it does most things that drivers need to know and do at serious times.\n\nHonestly, I bet people only get a driveless car because three things. One, the driver is lazy or he just really doesn't like to drive. Two, people think its cool and it cost alot of money so they buy it and show off there smart car. Three, the driver that has a driveless car, isn't the best driver. Everyone would want one because of those three reasons, I mean yeah it would be cool to have a car that can do most of the things in the car for you but why? Thats like having someone else drive for you. Would you want a driveless car if you wanted to drive?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are becoming a concept that is not out of this world. Some say these cars could come as early as 2016. It has often been dreamed about since these cars are seen in many movies and television shows. Telsa, Mercedes Benz, Audi, and Nissan are trying to make this dream a reality. Driverless care are a positive thing.\n\nThese cars are able to \"mimic the skill of a human at the wheel\" which will make accidents less likely for people who are not in their right mind. Since people would not have to drive for themsleves it will greatly reduce stress for some drivers. If these cars were in control the person would be more relaxed and less likely to get stressed, then panic and make a movement that could cause an accident. Whenever people are drinking, although it may not reduce all risk like at car accidents or constructions sights, it will greatly help because the car is acting like a human driver. When a person is driving and they have a medical problem that causes them to be unable to control the car the car will be able to greatly reduce the risk of them being in an accident.\n\nThese cars would come with sensors that could notify the car and driver when almost any kind of danger was possibe. One of these sensors is a position estimating sensor that could tell you how close you are getting to other objects which would reduce the chances of you doing things like switching lanes and accidentally hitting a car in the lane. There is also a video camera that would be able to tell you if you were about to back into something. These driverless cars would also contain a GPS so you would always e taken to the right place by your car. Perhaps the most important though is the antilock brakes. These breaks \"can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone\".\n\nAlthough these cars can steer, brake and do many other things on their own you still need to stay awake for places where car accidents and construction work is going on, so they made a sensor for that too. Every company is designong their car \"to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills\". GM will vibrate the driver sheet when their is danger. Google cars will anounce that the driver needs to begi driving and some consider flashing lights at the driver to notify them. These are all possbilities that will most likely be able to wake up a driver who has fallin asleep even though he or she is not supposed to.\n\nPeople argue that these cars are not safe to be driven on the roads. They say that there is a chance that drivers will remain asleep even when these cars try to notify them that they need to take control and it will cause accidents. They also argue that often robots mess up and that is completely possible in a driverless car to. It is also not logical for everyone to have to buy a new car. Some states even still have these driverless cars band.\n\nDriverless cars are becoming a vision of the near future. They will help keep drivers safe when they are not in their right mind, they will have sensors to warn drivers of upcoming dangers and they will be able to wake a driver from asleep. Driverless cars are a ositive thing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There much censorship occurs world Music radio television shows internet censored In todays society library forgotten wonder making secluded world The library place one s mind explore discover much wants The library place restricted discovery like televsion internet censorship libraries nonexistant People learn books books happy endings sad endings gruesome endings able provide lessons reader Many say history repeats Therefore history taught schools bad events occurred history prevented This books library shelves When reading book reader able experience lifes characters living characters Through experiences characters reader gets observe things done wrong right character without acually living experience By end book reader knew views life try make mistakes characters book A major fear among parents inappropriate language scenes described books To blatantly honest foul language inappopriate doings world It much better discovered gradually reading maybe couple life experiences thrown ones face one moment The censoring occurs radio television fine someone wants improve reading able read whatever feel A library place wonderous learning censorship restricts ones learning Through reading one able experience life without consequences experienceing life All books able learned opportunity learned", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe the Face on Mars is actually a natural landform. Even though the face does resemble something created by aliens, I still think that it is natural. I will show you why I believe that this is just a landform, and not a face created by aliens.\n\nI believe the Face is a natural landform because scientists believe that the face resembles landforms around the American West. One scientist said that it reminds him of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. Also, the scientist added that its a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face.\n\nScientists can be wrong sometimes though. However, scientists work on their research really hard, so I believe that they know what are doing and seeing. For example, scientists say that you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size, so we can see what the face is, a natural butte or mesa.\n\nIn the article, it states that on April 5, 1998, Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia and snapped a photo ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. The image revealed that the face was just a landform, and no alien monument at all. The monument does look like aliens made it, but this fact just shows that the Face is fake and is actually is indeed a mesa.\n\nThis tells you why I believe that the Face is fake and is actually a basic landform. Even though the Face does look like aliens made it, it is more likely that it is a natural land form. These facts prove that the Face is not alien made.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Overtime technology has been growing more and more , affecting all of us in both good and bad ways. Many have abrupted our minds and cause issues because some appliances arent necessary or they are not ment for some particular people.\n\nIn the story \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", it tells us important information that new made auto cars are useful for us and what bad effects might come amoung us. I believe that this story is a negative impact because, when making new things such as \"technology\", it may or may not be dangerous. Things arent usually what they seem according to everybody. You might see it as a whole life changer but what some people question is, \" Is this necessary for me?\" or \" Is this safe for me and my family?\".\n\nThe cars we use now, are somewhat we call it \"perfect\" and if we use higher standard advancements of our cars, would we really rely on it? What are we capable of when using a driveless car? To me, a driveless car compares to sitting. Sitting is just another way of being lazy just like using a driveless car when you dont need to do anything but just sit there and enjoy the road.\n\nWhats so great about driving a driveless car anyways ? Sitting there and watching the roads are no fun. How would people who like the speed and heart-pacing condtion when racing feel about this ? It would be a boring ride for me because you are not doing anything but just sit there. Yeah, there would be chances for you to be on your phone, or eating your meal rith there, or sleeping. But do we rely on such advance technology so much that we depend on it and avoid the dangerous cause?\n\nDo we think that our children and family's are safe in a vechile that doesnt need you to drive and only drives by itself are safe enough ? Do you think this new car would be capable of rainy conditions and and snow conditions ? Yes, in the story it tells us that there would be objects just like in an ordinary car would have for you to use be in there just in case of emergencies, but why get an advance car when there are some similar alliance between the both of them? Why waist money on something that is the same? Think of how it would be with you just sitting there instaed of enjoying the road.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As builder s dream Empire State building grew larger modifications needed make To begin needed research engineer safe practical way dirigible dock This soon done help navy government research The next struggle structure building Adding mast added weight dirigibles engine room top sky scraper would effect frame In order building structurely sound frame modified withstand added stress Even research modifications docking system never put place The strong shifting winds Empire State Building would allow blimp actually dock safely idea soon let go Safety wind two challenges builders could come", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on driverless cars is that I am against it. Autonomous cars still need the driver to be focused on the road. The driver must always be ready to take control of the car in any situation. I feel like autonomous cars give a false sense of safety when it comes to driving one of these autonomous cars. The cars arent fully autonomous they still require the driver to have his hands on the wheel in case he has to overtake the controls.\n\nOne reason I am against it is because no road that we drive on is fully predictable, so the cars wont know what to do when some situations arise. Most people who buy autonomous cars think they dont have to focus on the road and just leave it all to the car. Thats false, thats what makes these cars dangerous in a sense. \" The can steer, accelerate, and break themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skill,\" this is the reason I am against it. There may be a time that the driver needs to take over and steer the car out of danger, but since the driver had a false sense of security, he/she wont have time to react. They wouldnt have time to react because they might've been doing something else in the driver seat thinking that the car will steer itself. This is why drivers should always be in full control of the car at all times, because no road is predictable and it requires fast human skills if any situation arises.\n\nThere might be safety precautions that can try to prevent you from falling asleep at the wheel. This wont help at all in my opinion. Since the driver isnt doing anything, they will feel tired and bored and close their eyes and sleep. If they're really tired they wont hear the warning signs about work zones or any other warning in that matter. Everyone is different, some people are light sleepers and others are heavy. \"GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object.\" This will fail in some occasions. Say you're a heavy sleeper, and you dont feel the vibrations, and you crash into an object. Will that be your fault or the manufactorers fault for giving you a false sense of safety? Does the vibration have a setting to make it vibrate violently to wake the driver up? Does the vibration start happening at different distances depending on the speed of the car? Also how does one know the reaction time of a driver? These are the test they need to do to know how to make these cars safer. The reaction time of a person woken up from sleep is really slow compared to someone who is fully awake. Also how does the car recognize that a danger is going to happen.\n\nIn conclusion this is why I think autonomous cars is not good for the people. Its not safe for the driver who is moving at high speeds down the highway with a false sense of safety. Its not safe for pedestrians who cross streets not knowing if a human is controlling the car or not. Streets will never be predictable and the computers on the car will go off of predictability. Yes there will always be a traffic hazard everywhere you go, and the car might not know what to do and its up to you to get yourself and the car out of harms way. This wont happen if you're asleep at the wheel thinking the car will do it itself and you wont have to do a thing. I feel like if a person is wanting to buy a autonomous car, they will have to take courses on how to correctly use the controls and also what to do when theres an emergency ahead. They will have to know the fundimental things like dont fall asleep on the wheel, always be focused and looking for potentional hazards ahead. Always put your hands on the wheel whenever the car tells you to. Also the main thing they should focus on is to never trust the car to get you from one place to another without your assistance along the way. Thats why in think autonomous cars a negative thing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One big milestone in a person's teenage years is when they have to take a driver's test to get their license. Many people often become stressed behind the wheel during the driver's test because they are afraid of making mistakes. The people of our generation are just as nervous about these test as our older generations but what if that were to change in the future? What if, instead of driving cars where we have to be driving one hundred percent of the time, there were cars out there that allowed the car to do the driving for us? Many companies have been working on the idea of \"driverless cars\" in hopes that they will reshape the whole concept of driving. However, that does not mean they are a good thing. Driverless cars should not be used in the future because they could take away the focus of the driver, the future generation wouldn't know about driving basics, and they are illegal in some states.\n\nFirst of all, they could take away the focus of some drivers. As these driverless cars are being invented, they allow drivers to meerly sit back in the drivers seat and enjoy the road. Sitting for thirty minutes in a car will not be enough to satisfy the boredom of some people. There are people out there who can not deal with sitting in one place for a few minutes and have to do something to keep them busy. Therefore, their focus could easily move to something else other than the road, like a fellow passenger or at the scenery around them. Driverless cars are not entirely driverless. As said in the article, \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires.\" What if the driver is not prepared to take over when the situation requires? These new cars may have features of notifying an individual when they need to take over but if they are not ready because they were focused on something else, then the results could be disastirous. This is why it takes away focus from drivers.\n\nNext, the future generation would not know about driving basics. Many teenagers today have to take drivers ed classes as they attempt to obtain a license from the BMV. But what would future generation drivers have to go through for their driving exams if we have driverless cars. As stated before, driverless cars aren't entirely driverless. The newer generations still have to learn to basics of driving even if they will be driving in a driverless car in the future. If this does not happen, then they could be in trouble if their driverless cars malfunction or they are forced to drive a regular car instead. The future generations will probably not know about the driving basics because they will think they are too far advanced for it. For example, not many people know how to drive \"stick\" or even know what that means even though it was vital for driving long ago. If someone were to enter a car that needed that kind of function, they would not know what to do. And the same thing applies to future generations if they would not know the driving basics.\n\nFinally, these vehicles are against the law in some states. According to the article, \"Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control ata all times. As a result, in most states it is illegal even to test computer-driven cars.\" With the government concerned about the safety of a driver behind the wheel, they will not allow driverless cars on the roads. The safety of the people is more important than to advancement of technology. Until the driverless cars have been updated to the time where they are safe for everyone, there is no way that driverless cars will be seen on the roads with regular cars for quite some time. This is why driverless vehicles are against the law in some states.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars should not be used in the future because they take away the driver's focus, the future generations need to learn about the driving basics that we use today, and it is illegal to use computer-driven cars. Of course, in the future, new technology will arise to give people more mobility and ways of transportation but that will not happen until everyone is safe. Many individuals are in car crashes every year from lack of focus on the road. Driverless cars can add to this problem just like any other and until we have to tools necessary to ensure they safety of the people using driverless cars, there is no way that they will be seen among the streets.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I thnk censorship libraries quite abominomal I think censorship parents decide children watch I think something found offensive nt watch s simple If nt want children watch anything offensive rude nt let What I think offensive something removed shelves I think kids though yung kids perhaps able watch listen want I think certain things people find offensive offensive kind people It offensive someone else nt take particular movie song librariesA good example would book To A It banned unbanned many school libraries vulgar words references rape think unfair wether like children definatly hear rude offensive things anyways I think books movies music curse words part life adults curse And taking things away library taking away adults well kids It parents decide kids hear things time I also believe using offensive remarks another part history Take To A instance back time common black people talk slang common men curse mad That people Taking things shelves protect adolescents hearing I think rights hear want parents rights enough let I think songs words bleeped radio pointless teenager know say anyway I think books banned wise thing makes kids want hear word usual Basically rights hear read things Taking away things rights taking away freedom free If parents nt want children read hear things need supervise read listen It doesntt make snese single particular book song like singling songs books", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Climate change represents a major threat to our life on Earth. Some people argue that we need to accept it rather than try to stop it. I completely disagree with this statement as I believe that we still have time to tackle this issue by considering governments and individual contribution to it and reduce the human impact on Earth's climate.\n\nWith regards to governments, I think that there are various measures that governments can take to prevent, or at least mitigate, climate change. Firstly, governments could introduce laws to limit the carbon dioxide emission that leads to global warming. They should impose 'green taxes' on drivers, airline companies, and other pollutants so that they are encouraged to invest in renewable energy production from water, wind and solar power. Although energy will be produced at higher costs, but this will help to reduce pollutants in the air and clean the surroundings. Furthermore, governments should speed up afforestation by planting more trees as they help to reduce the carbon dioxide level in air and clean the atmosphere. Hence governments and big businesses can help in various ways to reduce the impact of climate change on the Earth.\n\nAs for individuals, they can also play a vital role in preventing effects of climate change. For instance, we should use recycled products for our daily use, as plastic causes hazardous effects on the environment. I think we should use paper bags instead of plastic bags. This is because plastic causes harmful effects on Earth, especially in the oceans as it is not easily decomposed, and impact aquatic species badly. In addition to this, we can also try to limit our contribution to climate change by becoming energy efficient, by flying less, using bicycles and public transports. Therefore, individuals should also be encouraged to help in mitigating effects of climate change as they are effective.\n\nIn conclusion, it is my firm belief that if governments and individuals come together, we can address the problem of climate change, instead of trying to find ways to live with it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The \"Does the Electoral College Work?\" document expains all the functions of the electoral college and how it works. Allthough some people might think the Electoral College is useful some people think it is outdated and perfer to do away with it.\n\nThe Electoral College is a process that has been used for hundereds of years and was established by the founding fathers in the Constitution. Seeing as it was created when the Constitution was makes the process seem very old. A direct election would make a better election. Paragraph ten states that \"Under the electoral college system, voters do not vote for president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president\". This makes the electoral college unfair to voters, making it as if their vote does not count.\n\nAnother key point is not even knowing who your electors are. Paragraph ten asks a series of questions like, \"Who are the electors?\", \"Who picks the electors in the first place?\", or \"Can voters control whom their electors vote for?\". Also stated in paragraph ten, voters sometimes could get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate. The American people would be much more justified if there was no electoral college and they knew who they were voting for.\n\nOn the contrary, the electoral college has some admirable features. one example is that no region has enough electoral votes to elect a president, states paragraph nineteen. Which paragraph nineteen also states is a desirable result due to the fact that a president with only regional appeal is unlikely to be successful.\n\nAllthough the electoral college does have desirable traits and appealing affects, it is an oudated and old method of electing our president. Every single American able to vote should have a vote that counts and is clear as to whom that vote is going twords.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wonder if someone is lieing?! Well their is a new technology software that can decode how other people are feeling. Using this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. Since it can let you know when someone is lieing, or needs help from the teacher when its afraid to ask, also when someone has worries about something.\n\n\"The Facial Action Coding System enables comuters to identify human emotions.\" This system can be very useful for school class rooms since it can detect when someone is lieing. Because the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; with all 44 major mucles in the model move like human mucles.\n\nThat \"classify the six basic emotions like happiness, surprise, anger, fear, and sadness, which then assosiats with each characteristic movement of the facial muscles.\"\n\nOr it can let you know when it needs help and he/she is a afraid to ask. Its like when you look at someone and see that they are sad or happy. It can detect an espression like that. \"Now imagine a computer that knows when your having trouble.\"\n\nThe most important thing is letting your teacher how you are feeling, she can help you out when you are worrying. \"The facial expression for each emotion are universal, even though individuals often show a varying degrees of expression.\" In a why in which you can help express them. That's why Facial Action Coding Systems sould be used to read emotional expressions in classrooms.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What I belive certain material allowed shelf The time takes author write book long It could passion write would want take away Every person opinion allowed freedom Material libraries sorted age group long material fitted age group shouldnt problem There many books people want children read books actually help children learn For example book think boring could actually interesting another person There many opinions world many differnt kinds books If took away book certain material shelf could help child Yes could bad words beliefs could help someone If person loner likes selves could learn character s mistake book Many children days getting bullied pick nt want tell adult If book read person bullied maybe would encourage tell teacher Yes I agree every material something another person like There couple books I approve I know connected child world Every person grow conditions material could teach You stop think writer would want someone throw hard work trash Every time big rally author writing certain belief negative thoughts No one stops thinks someone else family All care family Even author s family embarassed rally one stops thinks family feel Think opinion anyone care think That person bring someone s opinion let say believe paper How would like someone threw belief opinion trush If rally material library next time think judge Would want someone judging belief opinion", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Did know libraries contain books movies music magazines etc Yes They ever need something research project go But something like keep going I think books music movies magazines etc removed shelves found offensive I think something offends keep going That something might offend could helpful others So know ever see something nt like library walk away It could helpful others If things offend would next person learn They wo nt Do nt think self think others situation also", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you be against or with the development of these cars? To me , I would be against the development of these cars. The only reason I say that is because the google cofounder Sergey Brin envision a future with a public transportation system where fleets of driverless carms form a public-transport taxi system. He believes such cars would fundamentally change the world.\n\nDriverless cars seems like a bad idea but what if something happens. None of the cars developed so far are completely driverless. The cars can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves but the driver has to still be aware and ready to take over when the situation occurs just like the passage says in paragraph 7 lines 5-10. In paragraph 9, the passage is basically talking about the traffic laws . Most laws about driving basically focused on making sure the drivers, pedestrians, and passagers are safe. If traffic laws ever change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault ? The driver or the manufacturer? That is a good question. To me I feel as if the driver because if the driver is not aware of what is going on around them, then its their responsibility to take care of what they did .\n\nIn 2013, BMW announced the development of \"Traffic Jam Assistant\". I feel as if everybody should read and understand the announcement. To me , I feel as if driverless cares is agood idea just make sure your aware. As a young adult I am now, for me i wouldn't get a driverless car because I wouldn't want to be waiting for my turn to drive.The in-car system is actually a safety feature, and safety is a big concern.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars aren't such a good idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "First of all how does this even look like a face? I can understand if you think the picture from nineteen-seventy six looks like a face,all you need is a little imagination for that picture. Also how can you believe that it was created by aliens? Even if there were other life forms besides us , they are most likely billions of light years away. Scientist have not found proof of aliens on mars. They have not seen or photographed any to back your statement.\n\nThe Image you see here is just a landform. In two thousand one they captured\n\na picture of the \"Face\" in higher quality reavealing that it was not some alien structure. The picture shows that the \"Face\" is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landfroms that are common around the American West. One sceintist named Garvy said \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\" Which Garvy said means \"That's a lava dome that takes the from of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\" Scientist have proven that this is just a landfrom.\n\nIn conclusion, the \"Face\" on Mars is just some landfrom. Not created by aliens or any other from of life. The landfrom is the Martian equivelant to a butte or mesa which are common around the American West. There is not any proof of alien species, so it is innacurate to say that the Face on Mars was created by aliens. There are pictures that prove that this is just a landform. Scientist also have proven this is just a landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The ability for a computer to be able to detect emotion by the twitch of a muscle is incredible and seems almost impossible.\n\nFor a computer to detect percentages of emotions, such as with the Mona Lisa (who is supposedly 83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry), is even more impressive.\n\nThis type of break-through technology can be very useful in the near future to help in the medical field or the law field, but in a classroom?\n\nThere is no value in using this technology in the classroom to calculate the emotions that students are feeling. Not only is it an unnecessary cost added to the already minute educational budget, but it is also an invasion of privacy.\n\nThe budget for education in America is absurdly small and it won't be going up any time soon.\n\nThis would mean an increase on taxes which no one would like.\n\nAnyone that has been in a school knows the quality of the computers.\n\nThey are cheap, slow, and just overall trashy.\n\nThe fact that schools can't afford to get better computers shows a lot about the budget.\n\nMost people have a computer that performs much better than the school computers.\n\nThe author says ,\"Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode the Mona Lisa's smile\" (D'Alto 7).\n\nThis would mean that not only would schools need to purchase brand new computers that have the high capility to run these algorithms, but you would also need to purchase the software which can actually do the facial decoding.\n\nThis would be an outrageous cost because of the limited avaliability of this technology to the public.\n\nIt simply wouldn't be possible to include this epic technology in classrooms.\n\nWhile the having the actually money to acquire the new computers and software is already a huge problem in itself, the privacy of students is an even bigger one.\n\nIn order to detect emotions on someone or something's face, you would need a camera.\n\nHypothetically even if we did have the budget to get all the required technology, we would still need to have a camera capturing every movement of student.\n\nDr. Huang claims, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\" (D'Alto 6).\n\nIn order for the computer to recognize when a student is becoming confused, the camera must be turned on a filming the student work.\n\nThis footage would then be sent to the software where it would then thoroughly analyze the little movements and twitches of the student's face.\n\nThis itself is a very serious invasion of privacy, not to mention the possibility of the software being hacked and footage being retrieved from the cameras.\n\nThe whole operation of installing and using this software is a law suit waiting to happen.\n\nTechnology is incredible and can be use in a variety of different, effective ways.\n\nDr. Huang's innovation of a computer that can actually detect the facial emotions of a person is absolutely surreal.\n\nIt seems almost futuristic.\n\nWhen this technology is used in an appropriate setting (like a hospital or a court room) the possibilties are endless.\n\nIf used in a school where the software would be recording and taking pictures of students and thoroughly analyzing these images, it is not only a blow to the education budget and to our wallets, but it is a serious invasion of privacy and a lawsuit waiting to happen.\n\nFor use in a school, the negatives heavily outweigh the positives so for now, we should just let our teachers do the lesson modifying.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, governments are trying their best approach to improve safety. While some groups said that there should be strict punishments for offences and that is the only option to enhance road safety. I totally agree with this statement because this will teach them a valuable lesson and also let them understand the importance of their and someone's life.\r\n\r\nFirstly, as said by someone that punishments are necessary to let someone obey the rules and because that the only way they can learn the valuable lesson. This is the best way to let them understand that money power doesn't matter if the government decide to stop an accident and increase the safety of people. For example, The UK government implemented a law that if any crosses the decided limit they have to face consequences which basically start from the minimal amount of charges to the death penalty this is all because they want to stop this and enhance road safety. So with ,that they fear to cross the limit which was implemented by the officials.\r\n\r\nSecondly, with the strict penalties may they get the knowledge and understand the meaning of life. This is because they are driving fast because that way they can impress someone but sometimes they may lose own but they may put someone else life in danger too. So if a person or their loved one tell them the importance of life then maybe stop doing that and do safe driving for the betterment of themselves and also for others too. For instance, the officials started holder with advertisements to let people teach the value of life and how much they are worth in this world.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, I strongly agree with this notion because it basically helps them to learn many lessons and also guide in the right path through their loved one than maybe they learn the value of life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People should join the Seagoing Cowboys.\n\nReasons for what i`m saying. The reason people should join the Seagoing Cowboys is so you can help the people in the middle of world war II because they have no shelter, food, or animals and their families\n\nAnother reason is that people should join the Seagoing Cowboys is so you can have a different view to other people and have a different pase to life. Also you can meet different people that you can make friends with and talk to other people about their life and why they joined the Seagoing Cowboys. You could also play games like baseball, and volleyball. You could also play table-tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and game like those while on the seas.\n\nLast reason that you should join the Seagoing Cowboys is so you can have views that you would probally never see. You can also see other cultures and views you wouldnt see on a plane.\n\nEveryone needs to help out one another. They could make new friends that they would have never made before.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the classroom setting, most of the time teachers struggle to understand the ever changing moods and emotions of their students.\n\nThis presents a problem for the education system, as trainer and trainee usually need to see eye to eye for progress to be made.\n\nFortunately for us, technology has improved to the point that computers can describe all the emotions on someone's face.\n\nThe use of technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because a computer will not tire and therefore will be able to calculate emotions in a longer timeframe than humans, it can be more accurate than normal people, and it could actually modify different procedures based on the software's collected data.\n\nFirst and foremost, the use of technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because a computer will not tire and therefore will be able to calculate emotions in a longer timeframe than humans.\n\nIn the article Making Mona LIsa Smile there is a quote that says; \"The software is the latest innovation from Prof. Thomas Huang...(D'alto, 1)\"\n\nThe quote clearly says that the emotion-recognition technology is computer software, and therefore can function for longer amounts of time than a normal human, which makes it valuable.\n\nSecondly, the use of technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because it can be more accurate than normal people.\n\nIn the article called Making Mona Lisa Smile, there is a quote that states; \"Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements...\n\nBy weighing the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions.(D'alto, 4)\"\n\nMost of the time, one can really only make an educated guess at what's on other people's minds.\n\nBut with the use of the emotion-recognition software, one can accurately describe the emotions on one's face, which makes it valuable.\n\nFurthermore he use of technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because it could actually modify different procedures based on the software's collected data.\n\nIn the article called Making Mona Lisa Smile, there is a quote that says; \"A classroom computer [using emotion-recognition software] coul recognize when a stidnet is becoming confused or bored... Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.(D'alto, 6)\"\n\nThe quote explains that the emotion-recognition software has the capability to modify the way is does a task based on the data is collects.\n\nThis alone makes it a very effective instructor, and also very valuable.\n\nIn conclusion, the use of technology to read the emotional expresions of students in a classroom is valuable because it can keep functioning for a long time, it can represent its collected emotion data as numerical values, and it can change how it does things based on this.\n\nThe tech indeed very valuable.\n\nIt could change learning forever.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars has been a controversial subject for about 25 years now. Some people think it was created by aliens, while others think it's a natural landform, as proven.\n\nTo start off, why would scientist lie about a possible life form on a different planet? If they had any evidence or clue there was life form, it would blow up fast. With information becoming so popular more people would take interest in the subject, resulting in more funds. If anything, scientist would want to find new life form.\n\nAlso, there has been a lot of photographic proof of it being a natural landform. There has been different pictures form a handfull of different times, wouldn't you think there would be some kind of evidence at all if it was really made by aliens?\n\nNot only is it more logical to assume it was a natural landform, there is no evidence against it, but evidence to support it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports this idea well and its about studying is Venus is a worthy pursuit. Even if there are some dangers to it they are not as big as to the reasons we should and without fixing the problems on why we can't. There are many reasons to studying Venus and visiting and its because there are possibilities that it could happen. Venus is the most like planet to earth but it'll just take time to get there. And we could go to Venus because it is the planet next to us and closer to the sun but then sometimes we do get closer to Mars depending on how it rotates but Vensu does have the most similarities to Earth.\n\nThe only thing is that we need to have the right spacecraft to make it to Venus and have it last because some don't last that long or they break. No spacraft has ever survived the landing longer than a few hours. But they want to know if the air in that planet is accessible to us to the point where there could possibly be life, or discover new things. Before Venus had was covered with ocean and could support life, but Venus today has some of those features, but are mostly a surface of a rocky sediment. But when wanting to go to Venus comes challenges because not everything is easy to do because the temperature there goes up to 800 degress fahrenhiet and the the atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater than what we expirience and the stuff in Venus are things that our body couldn't handle because we don't handle those type of things in Earth. But the author still wants to believe there could be away and will make sure there will be.\n\nSo i think there could be a chance to go to venus and i thik there should because it would be a good idea to discover new things and make new changes. If it's not now I know it will be later on in the future. The author made good points to why Venus is a worthy persuit dispite of the dangers that come with it. It is also a human curiosity to see what is really inside of Venus. the author says,\" Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limitted by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to me the very edges of imagination and innovation\", and that's why he would want to do things out of his way even if it seems impossible.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Sun amount miles people reasons setting affects cyclist For example sun beating every time cyclist seemed complain hot Also said really didnt seem notice mind affected cyclist Next amount miles cyclist biking affected mentally people kept", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There has been an on-going debate in the last few years about whether parents are supposed to read stories for children. Some people argue that the involvement of parents in story-reading is necessary while the rest believe that children benefit more from forming their own reading habits. From my perspective, it is more beneficial for children to gather information independently. \r\n\r\nWithout doubts, parents play a significant role in early development of children. Generally speaking, story-telling empowers children to become curious. By listening to fairy tales from parents, children can learn about nature and history. They would also generate various questions about society they are living in from these tales, which consequently develops their creativity. Another point worth mentioning is that it takes time and efforts for children to be mature enough to read story books or to understand the contents from TV shows on their own and thus supports from family at an early stage appear to be more important.\r\n\r\nDespite the difficulty for children to acquire information from books and TVs directly at an early age, it is still indispensable to develop the learning skills for them. First of all, reading independently is the best opportunity to form a reading habit for children, and their reading and writing skills can be trained during their independent reading. By contrast, only listening to stories could ultimately lead to the over-reliance on parents and is detrimental to their future study in school. In addition, the stories from parents are prone to be limited to their own knowledge, while tremendous helpful and fresh information, such as stories that can trigger children’s interests in math, can be found in books, which contributes to a more balanced development for them. \r\n\r\nTo put everything into consideration, supports from parents in story-telling promote creativity and curiosity for youngsters. However, not only does independent reading contributes to the writing and reading skills for children, but also it enables children to get access to a wider range of knowledges, which leads to a more balanced development.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why carefull get libary Libaries books knowledge fun rommance action adventure desterbing grusium Kids lot times pick books pornagerfy grusium action This causes kids act different ways They act hyper mean people even children They sneeky things behind parents back Why think need act way cool nt understand makes look ugly So take parents saying days Even take books bad children lot books left Because days books something bad mind So need carefull books put libary books take libary It causes world change fast Now libarys great place kids learn Books teach new things expand knowledge The libary kids reports essays important people come Some kids go get book enjoy From point view libary one favorites places Any books involved count Having books causes imagination come take us adventeres us never get Sometimes books cause things happen families Some causes us nightmares bad behavior If try take books help familes come together also nt take books cause things go wild Because people kids think need books survive world Which really books ect causes mind picture things make us think need Other writing materials even movies cause problems world today Magazines girls much clothes things make boys minds wander Movies even worse picture right front faces I saying magazines movies bad mind also helpful Magazines help us research happening world today They also talk many subjects like cooking room decerating decerate weddings etc Movies help us research also show us happened back Like watching docromentries people happened past We nt need take every movie magazine without So need carefull put libaries It cause us bad behavior bad dreams So help solve problem We take books magazines movies etc really bad mind So help children grow well behavied mature Also one thing books magazines movies good thing use right How know got good book We find right books us following heart instinkes", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can you tell if someone is happy or sad? Using technology to read students facial expressions can help out in so many different ways. A classroom computer can read a students facial expressions, they use facial imagery, humans perform the same calculations every day. These are the things that makes the Facial Action Coding System useful.\n\nA classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming bored or is happy or sad. If you smile when an ad pops up on your screen another similar ad might appear but, if an ad pops up and you frown then it won't have the same ad come up again. Because of this the students would be happier and cheerful. If a student was sad or bored when working on a lesson then it would change the lesson and make it more fun and then it would be more effective. This would make the children learn more and not dread being at school.\n\nUsing video imagery to recognize the facial emotion. This weights the different units of the face so that the software can identify mixed emotions. Because of this they can tell all of the different things the painting was feeling. Every expression is compared against a face that shows no emotion at all. This is so that they can know what to look for in the face and see the differences between a neutral face and a face with mixed emotions.\n\nHumans perform the same calculations every day. Humans can tell if someone is sad or worried etc. by their facial expressions. Because of this we know peoples feelings sometimes. We would have trouble describing exactly what they were feeling just by looking at their face but, thats what the Facial Action Coding System does. This is saying that people can't tell exactly what other people are feeling just by their faces so that what the Facial System does.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding system does so many great things that would help schools and society. It helps with schooling because it could make it more fun, they use video imagery which helps recognize the facial emotion, and humans perform this act every day but, the Facial System helps with expressing the emotion. These all help the world in so many ways.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many advantages to limiting car usage. Theres less green house gasses emmited. It's less money you have to spend on youre car. You dont have to deal with the dangers of drivning on the road.\n\nWhen you dont drive your car as much or not at all and you get others too that makes less carbon gass going into the air. Emmitung less carbon into the air helps the enviorment stay clean and healthy. when you dont emit as much gas you help lessen the impact on global warming.\n\nDriving less can also help your walet too. when your not driving as much you dont have to pay for as muh gas, or none at all if you dont drive any. theres also no need to pay for mantinense or broken or damaged parts if any do break.\n\nIf your not on the road then there are no dangers of driving on the road to worry about. Theres no need to worry about someone hitting you or you hitting someone. When not driving someone who is intoxicated or texting and driving cannot affect you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In process building empire state building architects many obstacles One main obstacle making foundation strong enough Another wind factor They many problems building Empire state buildingIn order dirigibles dock Empire state Building streghten whale foundation If dirigible docked whale building would twist sway Another problem wind wind coming building would spin dirigibles high rates speedEven though faced many obstacles successfully completed Empire State Building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, Environment is populated with bad things and few individuals think that the best way to solve these environmental situations is to rising the prices of gas and oil for use in transportation like cars and buses etc. I disagree with this nation, and I will discuss this in the upcoming fourth paragraphs.\r\n\r\nTo begin with the disagreement, Many experts working on climate issues and searching for valuable solutions such as avoiding transport in the car. To explicated, Technology is advanced day by day and all countries will be developed for helping from the national industries and working on climate change. For instance, In Australian news channels reveal headlines some experts believe the good way to solve environmental matters is to walk by the road themselves and stop travelling in vehicles. Hence, walking is good for health and climate as well and has so many useful benefits in the future.\r\n\r\nTo commence with the agreement, Some poor nations all around the world and climate change will affect this region and always oil rate will be dramatically increased in these countries. To explain, The natural way to avoid air pollution is to cycle during the day such as during working hours and it's beneficial for their community and personal life. For example, The [WHO] World Health Organisation told many massive will be cycling and riding a bike is the best way to solve these kinds of problems. Thus, The international government will be declined the rates of oil and fuel and it's useful for their environment and the public.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, Although many universities will be experimental on the climate as a result it will be developed for all human beings' mental health. Moreover, The solution will be also shown all over the world and when all massive follow these rules it will be useful for the public.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "to my opinion i think that we should not be practiceing to find out a eay if we could use a computure to read our emotional expressions. to my point of view as a student i woldnt like if s computure would look at me nd say oh shes feeling happy. because computers does not have a soul do when i hear that they should have computures to se if they can read emotions well i think thats is redundunt. now as they said in the story paragraph 3 sentence one, they can begin the process when the computure constructs a 3-D computure model f the face; all 44 major musclesin the modela must move like a human muscles. now in other words make a robot that looks exactly like a human and can do human things. i think that why are we trying to make robots to be like human do we serously want another thing on this planet that might ruin it even more. now some people believe that we should have robots to help us etc. but they also say what if they become evil and they go against us and take over the world and kill us all. i think that if they ever make robots and that were to happen then it was all planned because this bings me back to my point. robots dont have souls which means that they cant procces haterate in them. unless they were programed to feel hate but they are sensative so if they actually learn how scientist wants them to learn then i believe that they still wouldnt take over the world unless they were programed to. i think that if a student actually thinks that it would be nice to have the computure read your emotions and you could talk to it and stuff then i feel lik that would seperte our world even moe ut this time is seperate from eachother from our closest friends and family because they would become our friends and they will become our family. i think if you want to end bulling and family problems etc. then is still not a good idea. like i said this still leads to segragation within ourseleves. so if ou ask me do you think that we should make robots to read our emotions. i would just simply say no its to complicated and learn to comunicate with people to fix problems and dont try to be the ruler of evrything cause you will fail and if the world ends ill blame it on you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story Winter Hibiscus sentence come back saeng vowed silently self spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test again The Winter Hibiscus symbolizes fondness place used live Its real one Im mean kind atat still shaky say words home hibiscus buds still fond home adapted better current enviroment The geese returned home means find place call home place one day When finds place find ready take test things normally The author concluded story sentence show Saeng eventually grow new life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The Challange of Exploring Venus,\" the author uses factual evidence to support the fact that exploring Venus is possible but very hard nevertheless. It will take a lot of planning trial and error to finnaly get to Venus. Many conditions that need to be addressed include the emmense heat of \"temperatures avraging over 800 degrees Fahrenheit,\" as the text says. another extreme condition that needs to be addressed is the extreamly large amount of pressure that according to the text \"would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans....\"\n\nThe author states very clearly that in paragraph four that \"If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientist even discussing further visits...\",beacuse \"...Venus...may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" If this holds true this may mean the possibality of life beyond. Because of the extreme conditions, the probe that would be sent to Venus has to be tough and durable enough to las in 800 plus degreee heat, and pressure stronger than the depths of the ocean. Since none of our modern technology is not tough enough than we would have to revirt to older forms of technology like the computers mentioned in paragraph seven stating that \"Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers.\",which were,\"...first envisioned in the 1800s and played an imporntant role in the 1940s during World War II.\"\n\nAs we come closer each day to creating new ways for probes to surive on Venus, we inch closer and closer to making another \"Giant Leap For Mankind.\"(Neil Armstrong)", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affects cyclist cyclist worried finding place water hes getting scared panicing In words hes looking around setting sees like desert buildings The story says I traveling high deserts California June sees panics thinks hes gon na make affects mentally", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think author includes doesnt want leave audience guessing would happen next Then I take test again This quote saying failed test plant never going give spring comes going try I feel though author added give better understanding feels leave homeland come place dont understand flower situation story When thought plants smelt gave old feelings homeland close grandmother She use plants free growing rather seeing pots room grow By seeing got Saeng break cry In conclusion I feel though author added paragraph end understanding let Saeng new place new culture never give test feels passed", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The variations between males and females have been controversial since the beginning of modern societies. This has raised certain questions about sorting jobs, according to gender. Although there are valid arguments to the contrary, I believe that there are suitable jobs for men and other ones for women. The reasons for this are twofold.\n\nFirst of all, it is vitally important to take the physical and emotional nature of men and women into consideration. Firstly, handy jobs are more convenient for males rather than females; since their bodies are more potent and faster, and that would result in finishing work on time. If women were assigned in construction work, the duration needed to accomplish the job would take twice as long. On the other hand, working as a teacher in kindergarten or primary schools seems to be naturally prepared for women, as they are more caring and passionate. Imagine what would happen if a man was doing this job, as they can get angry faster.\n\nSecondly, and even more importantly, some sensitive jobs need specific features, for example being strict and objective, whereas women tend to be more subjective and make decisions according to feelings and emotions. Therefore, they highly likely to be abused by taking advantage of them in such sensitive positions such as the judiciary.\n\nBy way of conclusion, I reaffirm that both men and women have their vital rule in life. To my mind, their role in life has to depend on their body nature and their mental abilities to handle stressful jobs and its consequences.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it presents because they have tried to explore Venus for many years and they can't succed because only they can stay there for a couple of hours before they can't be out on venus anymore however they do have a nickname for Venus it is called the \"Evening Star\" and why they named it that because it is one of the brightest point of light in the night sky but they said that nickname was misleading because Venus was a actual planet in our solar sytem and Venus was simple to see from a distance but it is a safe vantage point from it said that it was proven a very challenging palce to examine more closely but they often reffered Venus as earths twin because Venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size and it is occasionally the closest in distance too. But striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself , but also because human curiosity it will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. And our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. But the reason why Venus is not good to explore because almost 97% of carbon dioxide blankets is covered all over Venus and on the planets surface it is about 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action system ,Detects exactly how other peple are feeling this system has promising applications for a variety of industries. This urguing people that if it is a good idea to put this system to use in classrooms. This systems can extract even the most minimal detal on a paintings. Such as the Mona Lisa from Leonardo da Vinci. And real live people to.\n\nI think that it is a good support the use of this technology to read students emotional expressions. But at the same time they should ask their students before going further. If is okay with them and their privacy because this machine or systems can read or noticed the most little detail in ur face expresions. Or if they are minors they will have to ask their parents or guardians. The founders or workers of this system or company.\n\nThe reoson i state this,Is because it can also benefit the students to learn more about them self and what they need to succed in life. It can also give the researches of this systems new information based on he research gather. From students partipating in the facial system. As the text states that Mona Lisa was 83 percent happy 9 percent disgusted and 6 percent fearful and 2 percent angry. Using the machine.\n\nBy showing they could also see if the students are happy or isgusting with their clases or even their. By saying all of this i think it is a good i dea for this facial device to be use in classrooms.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear people find clicking clacking computers nuscense What nt realize thay helping youths lives making easier could This computers good effect people First computers ar nt bad thing helping people get know better You always see ad s dating websites things like Did know couples meet online Thats lot think would never wer nt computers Second computers provide tremendous amount entertainment There computer games online free I bet almost every kids played game internet Think child could getting trouble nice safe home playing computer You probably thinking computers sound childish infantile Well computers ar nt fun games They provide lot information They useful teens school projects benefit adults many ways It provides information vacations hotels ext Also computers videos things like useful information So see computers ar nt pain They help bring people together provide entertainment useful information Think A computer might save life one day Computers help peoples every day lives could helping", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" the author describes how a new techonology system enables computers to identify emotions. The author makes his claim by stating, \"Imagine being able to detect exactly how other people are feeling, even when they are trying to hide their emotions. New software has been developed that improves accuracy in preciving emotions of others.\" In this essay, I will argue my opinion whether the use of this technology in classrooms is valuable.\n\nI believe that this technology to potentially be used in classrooms to recognise a student's emotional expression is valuable because, in the article the author states that,\"A classroom computer could recognise when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" This simply means that in a case where a student isn't understanding a topic the teacher is trying to teach through an online program the computer could switch up the lesson and make it more intresting for the child. This is an extrordinary idea because, when a student isn't progressing with a lesson the way they should then the computer can make the lesson easily understandable and then grades within a student skyrocket and they become better learners.\n\nWith saying this, a student may need some type of extra boost while getting bored in the classroom while learning a lesson. Therefore, this technology that can detect facial emotions could become a crucial part in better understanding a lesson. These types of technology in the classroom is definely a valuable item for not only teachers, but the students themselves. Furthermore, this facial expression detecting device may be a breakthrough for all schools and education systems due to the learning rates within a childs success.\n\nIn addition to this, the author also makes a claim in paragraph six stating,\"Then it coud modify a lesson, like a human instructor.\" The author simply means that with the technology identifying the facial expressions of a child while learning a lesson the omputercould modify the lesson as if it were the students instructor to help them better understand what is being taught. Not only would the student benifit from these things but, the teacher as well. I believe this because, the teachers may feel more confident with giving a challenging but also helpful lesson to the student, while still giving them the quality education they need. In addition to saying this, I believe that this newly discovered technology could improve schools and classrooms which are definitely extremely valuable within a clasroom's in enviorment due to these factors stated in the previous paragraphs.\n\nIn conclusion,I believe that the new technology is an extremely valuable concept to be installed in classrooms. In the article of \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" the author makes a claim about the technology with saying, \"Imagine being able to detect exactly how other peope are feeling even when they try to hide their emotions.\" this statement says a great deal alone and makes a claim of why these peices of technology should be installed in clasrooms and helps define why they are valuable to classrooms.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \" The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author suggustion that Venus is worth studying has many thoughts in our heads. Is it really worth it? Should we consider it or focus on our planet? Well, the author has many reasons to why we should continue researching it.\n\nA supported reason to the author belief is that it could be a back up plan for us if something were to happen to earth. in the text it says,\" Often referred to as Earth's \"twin,\" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest distance too\" ( paragraph 2). Venus and Earth are very alike, which is a good things. IT would help us humans alot if the popluation kept on growing.\n\nAnother reason is it could help us with futuristic things. Better things than what he whave right now. In the article it stated,\" Venus and Earth are very alike, which is a good things. It would help us humans alot if the popluation kept on growing\" ( paragraph 5). We can find and build different tools to help us reach Venus and to study more about what could be our future planet.\n\nWhile i see the authors mindset on this article, there are many con's to the \"twin\" planet. Its not very survivable land for us to stay and live in. In the text it says,\"\n\nBeyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to porbes seeking to land on its surface. ( paragraph 3). This can cause alot of damage and lots of fear within people if we were to ever live here\n\nThe article over had good reasons to back up the authors reasons to why we should continue looking into this planet.\n\nWe need to consider the pro's and co's to everything. And i think the author is headins a good way bu wanting another planet for us to live in.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves\" Luke joined the program because his friend Don Reist asked him if he wanted to come with.\n\nHe knew it would be a once in a lifetime opprotunity, and because he would go to different countries.\n\nIn paragraph two it said,\"World War II was over in Europe, and many countries were left in ruins.\"\n\nTo help these countries recover 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA to give them food supplies, animals , and more.\n\nThe \"Seagoing Cowboys\" were hired to take care of the animals onboard the ship as they were shipped overseas.\n\nThey also had to clean the animals stalls and give them food and water.\n\nLuke liked doing it so much that he did it many more times.\n\nHe crossed the Atlantic Ocean 16 times and the Pacific Ocean twice to help people affected by World War II.\n\nWhen they were coming back they played games in th eempty stalls to pass the time.\n\nIn conclusion,\n\nI believe that you should join the \"Seagoing Cowboys\" to help the people can be affected by any wars or other things.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. But how can Venus be studied less dangerously? Well, there are some ideas of ways Venus can be studied more safely. This includes using more advanced technologies that won't cause any damage and the materials that won't let these technologies get damaged and how people can explore Venus safely by using safety suits since Venus is inhospitable. If not studied safely, technologies can cause damage and people may get seriously injured if they visit Venus to study this planet.\n\nFirst, an advanced technology should be made. A camera should be added to this technology. If a camera is added to the technology, others can study Venus more easily. This will be like the Rover in Mars. However, it should be made differently since the technology may cause damage if it is built exactly like the Rover.\n\nNext, materials should be added. These materials should be added so that the technology, as mentioned in the second paragraph, won't cause any damage. Therefore, the materials can protect and shield the technology used to study Venus. For example, materials added to the technology can be fireproof. Therefore, there is a higher chance that this technology won't cause any harm or damage.\n\nFinally, others may want to actually study Venus to study the planet. But they can get seriously get injured or even die! So how can the chance of that decrease if others want to visit and study Venus in real life? Well, safety suits that cover the whole body should be made so people are less likely to get seriously hurt. It's like an astronaut's suit, but made differently with safer materials.\n\nIn conclusion, Venus can be studied more safely because of the ideas listed. However, these inventions should be tested before using. These should be tested before using because if they're not tested, the ideas of these inventions may not work as well as thought of. If tested and the invention does not work, changes need to be made in order to work again. If the invention passes the test, it will be ready to be used!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why would we need technology to tell us someones emotions when we know ourselves? No, I don't think that this is valuable because it is basically a machine that does an action that we can do ourselves. It also may not even be as acurate as scientist beleive. Another reason why I beleive that this invention isn't valuable is because I just find it really scary how exact the numbers are that the machine gives even if the numbers aren't correct and how much of interaction is happening between the face and the software.\n\nThe first reason that I beleive that this software isn't valuable is because we don't need a machine to do the job of reading expressions for us when we can do it just fine by ourselves. I know this because in the article they state,\" In fact, we humans perform this same impressive \"calculation\" everyday.\" This shows that we can indeed read emotions of people all by ourselves. I also know this because the text states,\" For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\" This statement is completely true, I know that I can tell when people are upset even if they aren't my friends or someone that I know. Finally, I know this because the text states,\" Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, ect.\" This is true to a point because we may not be able to know when someone is feeling worried or frustrated but we know that something is wrong. That is not a bad thing when we don't know every expression on somoenes face becasue that gives us social experiences with other people to go and ask them what's wrong.\n\nThe second reason that I beleive that this software isn't valuable is because scientists may beleive that this technology is accurate but is it really? I know this because in the text it states,\"Yet Dr. Huang observes that artists such as da Vinci studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotions.\" This right here shows that if the muscles of the face aren't showing enough muscle for an emotion the software might pick up a different emotion. I also know this because the text states that, \"For example, your frontalis pars lateralis muscle(above your eyes) raises your eyebrows when you're suprised; your orbiculars oris (around your mouth) tightens your lips to show anger.\" I disagree with how they are training this software to recognize facial emotion because some people don't make a happy face when they are happy or a sad face when they are sad.\n\nThe last reason that I beleive that this software isn't valuable is because it is really creepy on how exact the number can get and how much interaction there is between the computer and the face. I know this because the text states,\"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\" Wow, to me that is scary. I would never want this software to read my facial expressions. I also know this because the text states, \" Dr. Huang and his colleague are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate.\" Why would people want computers to take over little everyday things that we do? This is creepy how much computers have weasled their way into our everyday lives so easily.\n\nIn conclusion, I beleive that this software isn't valuable because why would we use a machine to do something that we can do by ourselves? Also because the information being received from the software may not even be accurate. Finally, because the software is just really creepy and scary to think about how much human and machine interaction happens daily and how much much we rely on them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars have many good pros to it, but their are also some cons that go along as well. I personally think that driverless cars are a brilliant idea. Of course there are going to be a few flaws in the car because of peoples safety as well as following the rules of the rode all put into one system, but i think with a little time this could be one of the greatest inventions of all time.\n\nSince 2009, Google has had cars that are able to drive independently and smoothly. In paragragh 2, it states \"their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\" That by itself is amazing, it gives the driver a time to rest. The downfall to this though was that the car would still alert you when there was to much traffic or construction for it to navigate around itself. Many futurists believed that they shold develope the roads rather than the car. The cost for this was just way to expensive. In paragraph 4, it explains how Google decided to make their car a little smarter. \"Google's modified Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS reveiver, and an inertial motion sensor.\" All of these improvements are a way to mimic the skills a human would actually have at the wheel. The way all of these imporvements work together is just amazing because its like there is an actual person driving.\n\nOn the negative side of all these things, there are still some major things wrong with this car. The cost for all of these things to happen is very expensive. Just because the car is able to do everything on its own does not mean that no car crashes are going to happen. The car does not understand what to do if a car is coming right at it , or it could easily have a malfunction. If a crash were to take place in one of these cars who would be to blame? With how high-tech these cars have become, something could easily go wrong.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that overall Driverless Cars could be the next big thing. They not only save money for people, but they also make peoples lives alot easier. With a little more time put into the car as well as a close inspection of it for anything that could go wrong, this car could affect people in a very positive way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do remember first day grade Everyone awkwardly excitedly standing waiting seating arrangement You middle school jidders everything happening fast I remember I went school middle school years teacher She type teacher strict came sat class If nt like someone would probably sit thinking two would magically become friends I standing corner best friend course hoping would seated next After finally got seating arrangements seated together I sat next girl I nt know I friends everyone except I never saw life As class went talked middle school important get good grades prepared high school sat looked liked day dreamed No one really talked anyone still awkward first day thing going looked like girl would rip head said anything I kept mouth shut went first day lecture sudden cracked joke middle speech get attention We started laughing I would say good ice breaker After everyone everyone laughed seemed like everyone loosened bit I started talking joke funny dang stupid From kept talking seemed like cool person I became partners every project always together became best friend days laughter I would say reason I became friends laughter I probably never would talked first place even though I glad I I awesome best friend Middle school scary excpecially first day school That s I think laughter important part someones relationship ca nt get without", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist many ways One way could setting like place lot water cyclist wouldnt worry dehydration Another reason would old men never outside first place none would also happened", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The character seems new found confidence new joy plant reminds home land comforting motovating She says things come back try hard complete test She setting time push As people try", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggest that studying Venus is worth it despite the risk,probably because he thinks that Venus and Earth are similar.Or because he thinks we may find life on Venus then Mars also because Venus is closer to Earth then Mars is.\n\nAccording to the passage the author states that \"Long ago,Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life,just like Earth.\"The texts also states that\"Today Venus still has some features that are analogous to those of Earth.The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys,mountains,and craters.The text also states that \"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus.For example some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus's Surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.\"\n\nThere are also many differences in our planet compared to Venus. For example\"On the planet Venus the surface tempeatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit,and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.The texts also states that \"Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet ir our solar system,even though Mercury is closer to the sun,Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes,powerful earthquakes,frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.\"The text also states that\"the conditions are far more extreme that anything else humans have encountered on Earth,Such an enviornment would crush even a submarine accustomed to driving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals.\"\n\nIn conclusion I personally dont think that its a good idea risking lifes to explore Venus even if it may be Earth's \"Twin\" it's too dangerous and to risk to send people to explore life forms up there,It will also be way to risk if they dont find any kind of life on Venus while they're risking there lifes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The reason i think other people should join the seagoing cowboys is because. The seagoing cowboys is not just for fun. It is to help Europe and the many other countries recover from world war II.So 44 nations join together for the seagoing cowboys. Not only is this trip a adventure its an opportunity to do something good for others. So instead of sitting at home and doing nothing maybe you should come. This trip made me aware of people in other countries that are in need. This one trip will want to make you do more for the homeless and do more for people in need. It took me two weeks to cross the Atlantic ocean if i can do it you can do it to. There is no reason that a short amount of people went you should have went. imagine if you were those people in Europe and the other countries i bet you would want people to come and help you. You cant be a selfish person these people fought for thier countries and whille they were fighting all they had was destroyed. A lot of people died that night what if it was your brother or sister that got shot trying to fight for their country. Thats why you should come with us to the seagoing cowboys.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being a Seagoing Cowboy is an honor and would be a great opportunity for you. A Seagoing Cowboy is a wonderful job to have. You get to go over seas and help out and take care of animals.\n\nI was a small town boy and thought I would never be able to go and see sites like the Panama Canal or take a gondola ride in Venice, Italy. But since I became a Seagoing Cowboy I not only got to do my wonderful job ,but also get to see beautiful world natral wonders while doing it.\n\nWhile being a Seagoing Cowboy I learned what the job was. It was about helping others. A Seagoing Cowboy is the best job in the world for me because of all the opportunities to help people and not only did I get to help peopleI belive I made a difference in their life.\n\nI also had fun while on the sea. I got to bond with people and begin new friendships. We mostly had fun on theway back since all the animals were picked up andwe didn't have to water, feed, and watch them. We liked to play fun games like volleyball and baseball games in the empty rooms were the animals used to stay. It's also fun to have table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling and games for fun too.\n\nBut being a Seagoing Cowboy is more then an adventure it helps you come aware of the people who truly need help. Being a Seagoing Cowboy also opens your eyes as well as heart to the other people around you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Scientists are striving to meet the challenge of exploring the dangerous planet of Venus. Scientist believe that long ago Venus may have supported various forms of life. Looking up at Venus from Earth is a safe distance to visualize the planet since it is very challenging to examine it more closely. The author suggest that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. These dangers include the enviroment, but it is worthy pursuit becuase it part of human curiosity, and innovation.\n\nThe atmosphere of Venus is very harmful since it is coated by a thick blankets of carbon dioxide, almost 97 percent of the atmosphere is coated.\"Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere\"(paragraph 3).\n\nThe temperature are also extreme on Venus. The average temperatures are over 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the pressure is 90 time greater that what we experience on earth. This pressure can crush a submarine. The temperature can liquefy many metals. Venus has eurpting volcanoes, earthquakes, and lightning strikes. Venus is now an inhospital to any form of life.\n\nHuman curiosity drives scientist eagerly to explore this planet despite of the many danger is upholds. Many scientist believe that Venus could have a been able to support life long time ago. \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans.\" (paragraph 4). Scientists also believe that Venus can be be our nearest option for a planetary visit. NASA has an idea for sending humans to study Venus. Many forms of light cannot penatrate the dense atmosphere so we cannot takepictures, nor can they take rock,gas, or anything else.\n\nLanding and exploring Venus can lead to innovation for humans. NASA is looking for more solution to be able to study Venus. They are testing out old technology so they can combine it with new technology like the computer. These experiences can innovate many other technology so that we can explore venus. In paragraph 7 it states tha \"these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all \".\n\nIn conclusion there are many challenges that make things difficult to explore Venus. There is a purpose to explore Venus. NASA is trying to still pursuit solutions to these challenges so that human might actually have a chance to explore this dangerous but amazing planet. So when you look up at the \"Evening Star\" just think about the fasicnating planet that once might have supported life but also remind yourself that this is now a hostile planet that scientist hope that someday they can explore.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Driverless cars\" seemed like a thing of the future. But right now is the future. Multiple companies have developed the \"driverless car\". The driverless car is benificial for the future of drivers because they have sensors that stop certain functions of the car to ensure that the driver remain safe. The \"driverless cars\" also have in-car safety systems that protect the driver.\n\nIn these new \"futuristic\" cars there are special sensors that can protect the driver from harm. From the article, \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", it is written, \"The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels...allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone\". Drivers will be able to stay safe because of the cars new sensors. These sensors are beneficial to the driving community because they have a \"far better response\" than human drivers and the sensors will provide safety for the driver and the car.\n\nAnother cool feature of these \"futuristic\" cars is the in-car safety system. The article, \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", writes, \"the in-car system is actually a safety feature, and safety is a big concern\". This in-car system will play a huge role in the safety of drivers because it is a feature that is designed to do so (if it weren't it wouldn't be called a SAFEty feature!)\n\nThese new cars of the \"future\" should be in our own! These \"not so new\" \"driverless cars\" would play a huge role in the safety of many drviers and potentially save numerous lives. With the safety sensors and the in-car safety feature drivers would rest easy and let the car \"take the wheel\".", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, people are arguing whether an ideal lifestyle should be a stable one or should it include a wide ranges of changes.In my opinion, whether changes are needed should be determined the of you are at.Apparently, are favorable the development of young people, in to their careers. Primarily, an abundant experience in varieties of jobs enables the young to master a broad range of techniques and skills, leading to significant edge over counterparts in the competition for employment. Meanwhile, trying various roles in life and work provides wide of lifestyles for the young in the future. Only after this comparison can they realize what the real goals of their .However, other than frequent changes, the elderly who have undergone all these challenges may pursue a steady lifestyle. For the elders, concentration on their favorite activities would give rise to a sense of enjoyment and security, which is helpful to physical and psychological health. Due to a stable life, the elderly are less exposed to stress, leading to a decrease in adrenal hormones and resulting in their well-.Furthermore, degeneration of mental and physical function would make the elderly unlikely to adapt to external changes, causing and , which are not contributing to their health.Above all, it is unlikely to describe the changes in life with a positive or negative term. Accommodation for personal needs and goals is more important than the changes themselves.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everyday new technology advancements are being made. Driverless cars are something that when I think of the future that is what I would have always expected to see. But, I honestly never thought it would happen. I am fascinated by the idea of driverless cars, although I do not think it is a good idea. I feel that driverless cars would do more harm than good. Yes, there are both pros and cons to the driverless cars, but the cons out weight the pros. Driving is an expirence that helps us grow as people explore the world.\n\nDriving is something many people use to express themselves. For example race car drivers, they do not just all of the sudden go pro and decide that is what they want to do with their lives, they have driving experience and find a love for it. Driving for some people gives a sense of freedom and independence, to be able to go where they want, when they want, and not have to depend on someone else to take them where they need to go. With driverless cars our society would feel like we were all in a confined space controlled by technology, never to be let out.\n\nWrecks are still bound to happen. No technology can be so perfect that nothing could go wrong, and when it does go wrong it is the manufacturers fault, not the person in the cars fault. So anytime something were to go wrong with a driverless car there would be a lawsuit, about what the companies did wrong. If the person in the car in harmed it would be the companies fault and that is just more trouble we would constantly have to deal with.\n\nToday our society already struggles with laziness and obesity. I feel that technology is mostly to blame for that. Technology can do almost anything for us now. Driverless cars are just another thing for us to not do for ourselves. It is going to get to the point where we do absolutely nothing. The internet can almost thing for us. We need to be able to freely drive on our own, so we can explore the world around us, that god created, instead of letting our man made technology do all the exploring for us.\n\nDriverless cars are another thing for technology to do for us. Driving is an expirence that helps us grow and explore the world around us. Driving gives people a sense of freedom and independence. We need to be able to do things on our own, so that we are not just confined what authorites give us. Driverless cars will wreck just as normal cars do, and when they do it is not the person in the cars fault, it is the manufacturers. But, who is the one hurt? Overall I believe that driverless cars are another step into a society only controlled by the limits of technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Currently, the money spent has always been the topic of interest. While some claim that money invested in developing technology to discover space is not justified, the opposite makes a statement that there are more tremendous benefits to spending this money. I consider myself an advocate of this statement that the government should invest this money in other aspects.\r\n\r\nThere are a wealth of reasons why it is not necessary to spend money to explore space. Not all countries can afford to fund this aspect. Because the money spent on this program is prohibitively exorbitant and can not be used for other purposes. Moreover, this also pollutes the environment when the emissions in experiments are released into the air. As a result, this money should be used to find methods to restore the environment to save our planet.\r\n\r\nMoreover, there is a myriad of ways to fund this money more rationally such as investing in education. It is undeniable that education is the backbone industry of the nation. A lot of students do not have enough financial abilities to get access to school. So this money can change their student life so that they can have the opportunity to broaden their horizons.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although there are some redeeming features in space exploration, the environmental problem and poverty to go to school are more necessary.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Change is an inevitable factor and it affected almost all areas including education sector. Modern education system mainly promoted aptitude based study rather than the conventional method. As per the opinion of a faction of people, tertiary study is mandatory for the better future of students and others are opposed to this view. As per their argument, students can choose their career after their secondary education. This essay analyses both aspects and state personal opinion.\nOn the one hand, Most of the professional jobs requires specialisation in their studies like doctor, architect and so on. So students need to take graduation and specialisation in that fields. In global view, companies recruiting candidates on the basis of their graduation. So in order to get lucrative job, students would prefer college study. In addition to that, each and every educational qualification increases the knowledge level of a person. As higher as someone study, his knowledge increases that much as well. \nOn the other hand, some students who prefer vocational education in secondary schools and they choose to work immediately after their studies. Early joining of school leavers in jobs give a chance to expert in that job compared to graduates. Moreover, if students start to work in in their young age, they will manage the money wisely. Most of the skilled labourers are only completed their education and started their work immediately.\nTo recapitulate, graduates and secondary school leavers are useful to the society in one way or another. Professional jobs demands and specialisation in the field and skilled job fields accommodate vocational school leavers. Students should choose the level of education based on their passion and preference.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face of Mars was discovered by one of NASA's Viking spacecraft in 1976. It has been discused that it was created by living organims, called aliens, or that it is just a natural landform of the planet. Although both answer could be true, the reasonable one is the fact that the Face of Mars is just a landform.\n\nIn 1998, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team took a picture of what is called the Face of Mars. According to the text, \"Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Later on in the text it is stated that, \"When the image first appeared on JPL web site, revealing... a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all\". This passage shows that when the first picture was taken, the technology was not as develloped as it is now. The scientific world has taken a big step toward technology and this new science has given scientists more information toward the solar system that were unknown before.\n\nNevertheless, after this research people were still not satiesfied with the fact that the Face of Mars is just a landform. They believed that the picture was not taken at the right place.\n\nScientists were determied to prove them wrong. So, they engage into a new study. It is stated that on April 8, 2001, Mars Global Suveyor took another look to the planet Mars. According to the text, \"We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the Field of view,\" said Garvin. \"Malin's team captured an extraorinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution.\" Each pixels in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo.\", this quote shows that the scientists of this research took careful attention to their research to make sure they would obtain correct facts. Later on in the texts, it is explain that what came out of the picture was just a landform like the ones we can find on Earth. For instance, the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\n\nIn conclusion, even though it might be hard for some people to believe the Face of Mars is just a landforms, all the studies scientists have done shows that it is just a landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars seem like a dream come true to many people. Although they do sound useful, there are numerous problems still to be worked out. Driverless cars are better for getting from place to place, but are still not completely driverless, and cause contraversy with laws.\n\nParagraph one states that Sergey Brin, google cofounder, \"foresees cars that would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus.\" Fuel is a very costly thing for the common man who likes to go places. If the car takes half the fuel of today's taxis, that is less money spent on fuel. Fumes that hurt the earth's Ozone layer would also not be as prominent. Since the cars would be more flexible than busses, they would be able to get around faster and more efficiently.\n\nHowever, driverless cars are still not completely \"driverless\". Paragraph seven states that in 2013 BMW came out with a car that can steer, accelerate, and brake itself, but still notify humans when they need to take over. Safety hazards are at hand when you have humans who are goofing off doing something else and not paying attention to the road or signals the car gives off.\n\nFurthermore, the widespread use of the driverless car would cause much contraversy with certain laws. Driving laws are made now with the idea that a human is making a concious decision to drive and put their safety, as well as others', on the line. So, it is obvious who is to blame whenever a wreck happens. With these new smart cars, who would take the blame? Would it be the manufactorer or the person in the car at the time? New laws will need to be made to ensure safety among humans.\n\nIn conclusion, I do not think we are ready for driverless cars just yet. Driverless cars are better for getting around, but cause contraversy with laws and still are not completely driverless.The negative possibilites at the time seem to outweigh the positives. With more development, I think that the driverless cars will be close at hand in the foreseeable future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is believed by some that our lives have become more perplex with technologic items and we can simplify these situations without technology. I mostly disagree with this statement because the main aim technological developments are for people to facilitate their lives and the absence of technologic items, our burden would have more heavy against duties and nature.\r\n\r\nFirstly, opposite the view of statement, technology has been developing for weakening and reducing people’s responsibility in life. Although, adaptation to new innovations is a compulsive process for some, these developments have been made for assisting to solve individuals’ issues in every part of their lives. To illustrate that, smart phones have become a considerable assistance of our duties such as communication, calculation and exploration for information. People can figure out their many transitions easily by these items. Apart from this, vehicles such as cars, buses and trucks have taken an important role to ease transportation and civilization. Thus, these improvements are relieving our standards rather than being complex.\r\n\r\nSecondly, without these technologies, people’s circumstances would not be better than the recent because individuals’ workload would increase. In case of closing some systems and items, people should do their automated works. For example, refrigerators are not work for freezing and people maintain their foods in conventional ways. In addition, people may deprive from communication such as watching television and calling their relatives. In short, without technologies, people would be in trouble in terms of dealing out their work and communication.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, causes and examples can be multiplied with this statement. Although some technologies create bewildering problems in their first times, in my opinion, they facilitate our lives in their each advancement and without them, our lives would become more complex. 45 dk.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A \"car free\" community has many advantages. They will reduce the amount of greenhouse gases. They will also help you save more money by not having to pay for a car, and if you do, you can park it in a garage for $40,000. This will also expand other transportation and will have a new six-year federal transportation bill. There is no disadvantages for having a \"car-free\" community. Many countries and cities are participating in limiting car usage to make the air better and cleaner.\n\nFirst, and most important, is that reducing cars also reduces the greenhouse gas emmision. People that participate in this are most likely doing it to make the air we breath better. In some over-populated cities, the amount of smog is crazy. After just one day without some cars, the amount of smog dissapeared. London had the idea for even-numbered license plates to be banned to drive one day, even though some people still used their cars. So more than half the cars are still on the road, and it reduced smog so much, they didn't even need to ban the odd numbered cars. This is the most important reason why people are limiting car usage.\n\nNext, if you live in a car free community, you will never have to pay for your car. You can sell it to make more money becuase you will never have to use it. This is much better than owning a car and having to park it in a garage for $40,000. If you ever need to take the bus, you will have the money. With the extra money you can buy a bike also. The stores will be walking distances, so there is no need for a car. I think this is a great idea for not only a better community, but it would help people socialize with neighbors and it saves money while doing it. After World War II, the cities would start reconstructing around the car, but now that is beggining to change in Vauban, Germany.\n\nLast, the cities are trying to expand public transportation, such as taxis and buses. It would promote these and play a much larger role in a new six-year federal transportation bill. In previous bills, 80 percent of appropriations have gone to highways by law and 20 percent have gone to other transportation. If the city bans cars, you can either walk, skate, bike, or ride the bus or taxi. In America, the amount of cars being bought and license plates being bought are decreasing since 1995. President Obama has an ambitious goal on which he unvieled last week and he wants to get rid of green house gas emmisions.\n\nIn conclusion, I think you would agree that limiting car usage has its advantages. It reduces greenhouse gases and also smog. After one day, Paris was clear of gas and smog in the air. The gas gets caught under the atmosphere and is dangerous. Limiting car usage also will help you save money because you no longer will have a car to pay for. Also, it would boost other forms of transportation, such as buses and taxis. This is a great idea to limit cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often argued that Actions from the government are the only way that solve the housing shortage issues in big cities. However, there are many other circumstances which would affect the housing market, I believe actions from the leadership find a faster solution for accommodation-related issues.\n\nOn the one hand, Authoritative steps can prevent the housing crisis in metropolitan areas since action from them needs to be followed by everyone. Moreover, By introducing residential beneficial schemes the government should make entry into the housing market to construct homes which creates a strike that balances supply and demand in the houses. On top of that, People elected entities should be vigilant to deal with any unprecedented or unexpected fluctuations in housing prices.\n\nFor example, In Hyderabad, Since, most of the housing market is controlled by the government, we hardly see any terrible crisis in the market.\n\nOn the other hand, As it is considerably dependent on the global market and due to several factors the crisis can take birth. Because of the higher interest rates and less purchasing power people are more hesitant to buy a house or build a house which may cause a shortage in supply. Only making blame on the government does not help in rectifying the housing crisis.\n\nTo conclude, though I agree If the government starts introducing housing-beneficial schemes which make the housing crisis less severe, Still, I believe, It can also experience vulnerability due to terrible global economic conditions and many other factors.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Will driveless cars be able to avoid collisions? Will the car alerts actually go off when needed? Today, futurist are planning to make driving \"safer\", as they say. They plan to make driveless cars that'll take the driver where ever they need to go, without the human driving the car. A feature they have though is the car will send an alert throughout the car that'll require the human to take over in certain situations. Also if the car gets into an accident the person to blame will be a big question.\n\nThe alerts that the driveless cars have will alert the driver so that they can start naviagting the car themselves. The car will announce to the driver when that has to be done. The driver will have to take over when they are pulling in or out of driveways and when the traffic is bad (roadwork/accidents). I don't approve of this alert because a driver can fall asleep behind a wheel of a driveless car and when the alert comes, they may not hear it. Also, if there is a drunk driver and they have to ride past a roadwork or accident, and they get the alert. They may not be focused enough to be able to navigate the car and riding passed an accident or roadwork, while drunk isn't good. The alert might not go off when it needs to and that'll effect where ever the car is heading and when it needs the human to navigate. \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault---the driver or the manufacturer?\" p.9; this means that if the car fails to alert the driver or sense what it needs to, the car can get into an accident. But who would have to take the blame? That is why driveless cars shouldn't be a new technology because if something goes wrong and an accident occurs the person to blame is the question, that might create conflict.\n\nOverall, driveless cars might be a improvement for safety in the future. But there are still a lot of questions about the safety and the technology of it all. If driveless cars become something in the future the safety of it has to be very secure and protective. The alerts might not go off, the sensors may not sense the things it needs too, and who would have to take the balme if the car gets into an accident? These are all reasons to why driveless cars shouldn't be considered a more safer way of driving.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting huge affect cyclist One affect lack water area dessert Also lack people area didnt help cyclist The hills road made tougher cyclist drashed little energy left Also sun beating made body warm making harder focus trying", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, most people consider that the pupils need to some subjective science topic so that they should learn it and they have to pass their exam. The school only provide to this experience that's why if they want acquire some talent such as cooking, dressmaking or art subject then they should learn from their parent or relatives. However, on the other hand some people think about this sitiation is not correct because school should be educational roof and tutors must teach about nut only science topics but also they should teach some skills how can they do. This essay sugggests that the second view is closest to the truth but other side is not to be ignored. The discussion follows below.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, many pupils have been studying in school for five years, sometimes their parents working and many times their mother and father can not find a enough time for rasing their child. Furthermore, These children can not learn about some skills from their parents and they do not have any opportunities than this school. The individual who dont know any skills or basic life requirement such as cooking, houseworking or dressmaking they wouldn't be qualified in the future life. For instance, according to an American psychologist, the someone who can not earn some simple life experience they do not exactly succeed in any area. \r\n\r\nSecondly, many people want to academic success and passing examinations and they claim that it can be if teachers teach about only this topics. Lots of the people exert the greatest motivation to children's growth and they send their children to prospering school. Additionally, this parents believe that the schools should focus on science, quality and quantity topics, they consider if they want to some skills for their children then they can enroll the pupils in art or lifelong education centre. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, no one wants a negative education for their children or themselves, but some want to focus only on science and academics, while others want to acquire the skills needed for life. Although both views are right, I think it is necessary to learn life skills at school.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As the years goes by, we get more advanced technology. Technology has helped out the world in a various amount of ways. Things are now easier and more convient for people. Technology has became more advanced in a huge way. Even though it has already been advanced, their are still people working on other developments and more advancements. For example, driverless cars are being worked on right now. Driverless cars are a big deal, they could ultimatley change the world. These cars would be a great idea because it saves fuel, it can help people save money, and it gives more oppurtunities for people.\n\nOver the years people have found resources for technology, running cars, etc. These resources/fossil fuels have become very helpful but they are starting to be overused. The worlds population is growing and as it grows these resources, more specifically fuel, are being used up very quickly. The driverless cars are capable of saving fuel. Fuel tends to be expensive and that money used for fuel adds up quickly. Saving that money is another good effect for people. In the text is explains that these cars could cut half the fuel use of todays taxis. Driverless cars save fuel and are ultimatley give off more positive aspects than an actual taxi and bus. Taxis can often use up a lot of fuel and cost a lot of money. Also, buses are often limited to where they can go and how fast they can get to places. Driverless cars eliminate both of these problems.\n\nIf driverless cars were permitted, it could change a lot for someome. Once a driverless car is in the hands of someone, there would be no need to purchase a vehicle. It is no secret that vehicles can be expensive. Trucks and cars often take a lot of money away from people when they really need it for something else. Also, vehicles can often lead to a lot of problems. For example, it is common for trucks and cars to have problems. These problems lead to losing more money because people have to take them to get fixed, there is no way around that. Driverless cars do not require anyone to buy their own vehicle, so that eliminates all of those problems.\n\nIt is obvious that driverless cars are a huge deal. This development can lead to great things and oppurtunities. Many restrictions lay of young people because they are not able to drive yet because of them not being old enough, not passing their driving test, their parents not allowing them to ride with someone, etc. Parents are often busy and it is hard for people to rides to places. Driverless cars make it easier for people of all ages to get where they need to go. Another example is the elderly. The elderly are often not very steady when it comes to driving and they are not permitted to drive. With this new advancement, they could get to where they needed, it would be especially good for emergencies. Driverless cars could be one of the biggest break throughs yet. This advance in technology can lead to bigger, better things. Other things can branch from this one idea and it is capable of leading to other oppurtunities for people.\n\nIt is no doubt that technology has advanced majorly in the last couple hundred of years. This technology is still being experimented with and ideas are still coming into play to help the world out. These changes could and have ultimatley change the the world. Although there are some negative aspects, as there are in every situation, the positive aspects out weigh all the bad things could possibly come from driverless cars. Reducing fuel usage, saving money, and granting more oppurtunities for the people is an extreme accomplishment, and these are not the only good things that can come from this advancement. From this one accomplishment, other great ideas, etc. can come from it. Driverless cars are the first step in changing the way our world works.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obstacles builders faced mooring mast winds gases used non CAPS dirigibles The wind problem high dirigibles back would swivle around mooring mast The gases used problem country zeppelins used hydrogen highly flammable would bad zeppelin went flames densely populated New York", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of the Facial Action Coding System is valuable because in the artical it states \" For instance , you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on their face. Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that convets happy , worried, ect.\" This is saying a \"friend\" or someone that is close to you. If a new teacher has a student that is\n\nnot having a good day in the class room and its destracting the other students from learning that student could be scaned to see what emotion they have. Teachers could use this technology for teaching has well, in most science classes the students would have to be taught about the human body , The Facial Action Coding System helps show the various muscles that are moving in your face when you show a certain emotion.\"Meanwhile , muscles called orbicularis oculi pars palpabraeus make crow's feet around your eyes\".\n\nThis special technology can help set a certain mood.If a teacher has a morning class and their students a usually still sleepy, that teacher could use the \"While looking in the mirror\" method in class and have the students answer questions such has,\"by the way did making a happy face in this experiment also make you feel slightly happy?\".\" According to the Faical Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only express emotions , but also may even help produce them.\" Drama teachers could use this has a improve game to help their student get a little more into character. \"A renowned drama coach, Constanin Stanislavsky, had his actors carefully reprduce smiling and frowning as a way of creating these emotions on stage.\"\n\nFor the students that want to create their wn gaming business could benifit this has well. The Facial Action Coding System could help make computer animated faces have more expression.\"The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive- for video games..\".If this technology is used in classrooms it could help students stay more focused by seeing their emotions. \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confussed or bored,\" when most students become confused they most likely will not raise their hand and ask a question because they may be to scared to do so. If a teacher is absent and students can't comprehend what the lession plan is about they could use the technology to help better explain.\"Then it could modify the lesson, like and effective human instructor.\" I beleive that the Facial Action Coding System Would be very effective to student in certian classrooms.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The time I patients little brothers I baby sitting wouldnt lison sister I relaxed got floor played went well", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face on Mars is real. You can tell by the pics that they are real. But me as a scientist I beilve that it is a natural landform. In the pics the older versions looks more beilveable ,because, it is not as clear as the other pictures. On the newer virsions of pictures they are more clear it actully looks like a face.\n\nBut it is not fake or made by a a human or by an alian. There is no prof that an alian or human made this face. I beilve that this is just a pile of rocks that might look like a face. But evan if this was a face that was made by a human or a alian, NASA would have not shown these pictures. If it was made by a human or an alian it NASA would have kept those pictures.\n\nNASA evan said \"that there was no alien monumanet after all.\" But \"\n\nperaps, SAid skeptics, ailen markings were hiidden by haze.\"\n\nNow if this was true how come it is still there. If it was made it would have fallen down because of the tempatures there. So if wasn't made by a person or by an alian then it would fall.\n\nif it looks like a place on earth it could be possiable that someone made it. But we have no prof that a person went to Mars. They wouldn't make it to Mars, they would most likly die.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent decades, housing scarcity in metropolitan areas has been receiving a great deal of public attention. While some assert that only government has the power to solve this problem, I disagree with this view and I believe that this issue should also be addressed by the private sector.\n On the one hand, The authority’s role in balancing demand and supply in housing is indisputable.First, since the politics has the ultimate right in land management with the huge resources from the national budget from tax collection, the state can build social housing at low prices coupled with the financial package for people with low income to afford their apartments with mortgage loans. Consequently, these actions are able to reduce the lack of housing in the metropolis. Second, local authorities could encourage companies to move their business to rural areas so that suburban dwellers would no longer have to commute to city centre to work, which in turn reduces urban population density.\n On the other hand, private real estate corporations are also a necessary driving force behind the supply of more housing.First, in order to decline the lack of affordable housing, people may opt to live in other cities when the metropolis that they are working becomes crowded. For example, in recent years, a tremendously higher number of people from big cities such as Hanoi capital or Hochiminh city move to Danang city because they believe that they could get better chances to afford houses while still maintaining their living conditions. Second, if individuals only buy houses or lands for the purpose of living, asset bubbles would not happen and real estate companies would be forced to decrease property prices to survive in the market. This means that those cities would become more livable for everyone, not just the super-rich.\n In conclusion, the lack of housing is a complex problem which requires a combination of both the union and individuals provide for the diverse needs of people. By making these solutions, housing problems in major cities will reduce considerably.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"driverless cars are coming,\" the author presents both posotive and negative aspects of driverless cars. I think that their should be driverless cars in the future. The idea of driverless cars are great, and can help save many lives.\n\nRight now without driverless cars their are becoming way to many accidents. More and more people are getting tickets by speeding and or texting while driving. With driverless cars, their will be a lot less accidents when texting. Also since the car is driving for you, it will go the right speed limit. Driverless cars still need some work, but in a couple years it will be fixed. Each generation is becoming smarter and smarter. So if we have started to make the hard part of the driverless car, imagine what we will be able to do in a couple years! Driverless cars can also help with traffic. Driverless cars will discover the fastest way possible to get to the drivers location. The driver will not have to worry about as much. The car takes car of that for them!\n\nDriverless cars can help people from getting injured and making people less stressed. It is a great way for people to get less tickets. It will help the flow of traffic and find the shortest wat possible to get to their location. With newer technology these next couple years, we will be able to make the driverless car safe and fun where everybody will love them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the fast evolving world, the launch of new products has been introduced in the market. People consume more than the usual and they tend to gain weight. This results in obesity.\r\n\r\nObesity is the most dangerous disease that we face in today's world. For example, People become couch potatoes and consume large amount of snacks that is junk foods which contains rich fats while watching tv. Due to lack of exercises and being inactive they are gaining more weight. The solution to this problem is by increasing the price of fattening foods. I disagree with this because increasing the price of a commodity does not bring any changes to this issue. People find comfort in their fast foods while eating so how much ever the price increases they tend to buy it even more as long as their cravings are satisfied.\r\n\r\nPeople should be active in their day to day life. Taking up different activities like hitting the gym, cyclying, doing aerobic exercises, and also swimming will help them lose their fat. People should atleast spend an hour or two do to the activities in their daily life to stay fit and healthy. And also can change their diet plans by consuming less amount of sugar,fat, oil to reduce their cholestrol level. And switch to orgainc foods like greens and vegetables. If they are tempeted to eat fast foods or junk foods they can eat healthy snacks such as museli and grains and can consume chocolates that contains less fat.\r\n\r\nTherefore, in order to reduce their weight, people need to consume 8 glass of water per day and do enough of exercises to stay fit and healthy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Businesses are always want to make good revenue, but it is common nowadays that peoples are expecting them to contribute to society. I strongly agree with the idea that businesses pay back to society than solely aim to make profits.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, companies need to make money to continue their businesses in this competitive era. To clarify, they need to make enough income to cover the expenses of employee salaries, rentals and utilities. Moreover, businesses also require to invest in research and innovations to improve the value of their products/services. If the organization is losing and struggling to cover the costs they may face difficulty participating in social activities or giving a helping hand to the community.\r\n\r\nNevertheless, businesses should not mainly care about making money; they should also try to take responsibility to help society. To illustrate, the company to donate a certain amount of money from their profits back to the community and participate in social activities such as fundraising to support the needs in the local community. In addition, paying the right amount of tax to the government is a way to give back to the community as this budget may use to build the improvement on healthcare systems, educations and infrastructure of the country. Furthermore, the businesses should also care about their staff well beings and helping them to have the standard quality of life by supports. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, I completely agree with the idea that companies put the same efforts to make money and take the social responsibilities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Firstly,we need to discuss about the beautiful strange planet called Venus.Though it sound dangerous in many ways.It's important that we discover new things about the planet Venus.It is so fasinating to know that we can make a friendly surving visit to venus one day.Hopefully it's soon because I would love to know more about our neighbor planet Venus.\n\nsecondly,from the author point of veiw about Venus being great for visitation despite being looked at as a hazardious zone. Well it may be true in a way but making the effort of visting it would'nt hurt a thing. the ways of living on its planet is not wrong because the way it was informed by the author was wonderfully done and by the way it is important to discover new things on an unknown earth neighbor the planet Venus.\n\nThen,finally shown on the passage the author talked about Venus being a challenging stage of any living things .Because it was estimated to be hotter than earth.But the fact that it was known for danger seem less dangerous now.Yes Venus is livable place showing the result of thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide on the blankets of Venus.And it's good for growing crops and the end result is great.and that's why I agree with the author satement.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir mood happy loving house families would welcomed strangers also would welcome His parents loving always kind people would rarely get arguments And family enthusiastic happy family together", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Currently, the money spent has always been the topic of interest. While some claim that money invested in developing technology to discover space is not justified, the opposite makes a statement that there are more tremendous benefits to spending this money. I consider myself an advocate of this statement that the government should invest this money in other aspects.\n\nThere are a wealth of reasons why it is not necessary to spend money to explore space. Not all countries can afford to fund this aspect. Because the money spent on this program is prohibitively exorbitant and can not be used for other purposes. Moreover, this also pollutes the environment when the emissions in experiments are released into the air. As a result, this money should be used to find methods to restore the environment to save our planet.\n\nMoreover, there is a myriad of ways to fund this money more rationally such as investing in education. It is undeniable that education is the backbone industry of the nation. A lot of students do not have enough financial abilities to get access to school. So this money can change their student life so that they can have the opportunity to broaden their horizons.\n\nIn conclusion, although there are some redeeming features in space exploration, the environmental problem and poverty to go to school are more necessary.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are innovative and beneficial however there are many downfalls to this great invention. The author in the article provides positive and negative aspects of driverless cars, however I feel as if the negative aspects greatly outweigh the positives.\n\nDriverless cars have many positives, but the negatives truly take over. As stated in the article in paragraph 9, the author him/herself is not even to sure whether or not an accident with the driverless car would be the drivers or manufacturers fault. This topic would be very controverisal and I feel like if driverless cars were to become a public thing, many arguments would arise and it would be confusing who to blame. For example, if someone gets in a car accident in this driverless car, and passes away, no one is too sure whether the manufacturer or the driver is the one to blame. At the end, one of the sides will be blamed and lawsuits will arise. From this information, I feel like we should stick with the cars we already have so that way if there is an accident, there is significantly less of a chance of being confused on who to blame.\n\nAnother problem with these driverless cars is that it can only offer basic functions like turning and stopping and very slow speeds (25mph top according to the article). The problem with this is if someone wants to drive to Florida from say Indiana with these driverless cars, 25mph at top speed is not really going to get you anywhere in time. However, if somehow in the future the manufacturers somehow figured out how to make it go to higher speeds, I feel like many people would not trust a computer to drive them at 60 mph on the highway. With the cars we have right now, I feel like since the driver is the one in control, he/she can trust him/herself to safely to get their destination.\n\nAnother final issue I see with these driverless cars are drivers ed schools. If driverless cars were put in place instead of people controlled cars, no one would need to learn how to drive anymore. All the people that work at these schools would lose their jobs and the unemployment rate would jump up. Not to mention, how would people earn their permit/license? If the car controlled itself, no one would have the need to earn a permit/license in the first place. Every car would have the same skill level of driving and the driver does not need any skill whatsoever, only money. On top of that, we would not need anymore policemen on the road because the cars would never break the laws since they are not programmed too (I hope). This would cause more jobs to be lost because those people would not be needed anymore.\n\nBecause of all these aspects of driverless cars, I feel as if it is better we just stick with what we have already. The safety of everyone in the car I feel is more important than being comfortable laying down instead of keeping your eyes on the road. These driverless cars do sound cool, however there are many risks to this amazing invention. We should just play it safe, and we should be the ones in control of the car, and not a computer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, the pressing need to provide shelter for the community is a mainstream issue being addressed by the government. However, the capital invested into construction renovation is huge compared with the cost of original housing development. I couldn’t have agreed more that this amount should rather be used for modern expansion alongside transportation routes. Analyzing the need for urbanization and the effect of construction retrofitting will justify it.\n\nFirstly, more than half of the society's population lacks a home in developing countries thereby encouraging human habitation in slums, where they have always been exposed to environmental disasters such as floods, outbreaks of diseases, and insecurities. For instance, urban cities across the world have been experiencing congestion due to overcrowding. Hence, erecting lodges in areas that are yet to be developed will be more advantageous to society.\n\nSecondly, of,course the approach of retrofitting as an alternative to building construction may be cheaper, particularly in the case of smaller projects. Yet, the risk attached to the processes involved could incur more costs. For example, the demolition of structural elements of the existing buildings, if not handled by experts could lead to vehement loss and even death, contrary to the budget. Thus restructuring of housing should best be considered as the last result of expanding housing.\n\nIn a nutshell, the government's record of a large amount for developing readymade houses as against contemporary homes and access roads, calls for the need to consider the option of investment with respect to project size and expertise.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While building Empire State Building Al Smith believed solved problems dirigibles land However building place dirigibles dock proved much harder seemed First balloon would cause much stress building s frame The author states The stress dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation CAPS Also frame would need modified lot money would need spent The author states Over sixty thousand dollars worth modifications made building s framework CAPS It risky invest unsure project Also realized dangerous accidents could populated area The author explains Most dirigibles outside United States used Hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable CAPS If anything happened large part New York could suffered Although plan creating mast dirigibles impressive neither logical financially logical saftey reasons", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People are different some of them like to continue their education on the other hand they believe it is better to have a job after school directly, both said to have an advantage but studying is better for many reasons.\n\nFirst of all, a lot of people prefer studying instead of working early and I am one of them because, we think having a good degree and knowledge lets society respect you , second, when someone has a Certificate easier to find a job in the perfect position with a large salary. Finally, studying is less difficult than working and more fun. For example, a student can study part-time and do what he wants after that. I am a student in college in the morning also I am working as a treader at night.\n\nIn contrast, the public who want to work after graduation from school, In my ,opinion care about money more than a career. In addition, they want to become milliners as fast as they can. My older brother thinks like that but after he long time he itregret. Some of people luck was with them like many people in our world. For instance, Cristiano Ronaldo, Bill Gates, and others. Therefore, they think working is the best way to be successful. However, those who are hardworking and intelligent did not become rich or famous by chance. \n\nIn conclusion, every person has his ambition so, to have a great career there is no specific way, but you have to work hard.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author chose end story paragraph shows Saeng starting adjust new home give You tell still misses homeland reaction seeing hibiscus plant also growing accustomed new home recognizes geese make decision retake driving test based migration patterns", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez Narciso Rodriguez author sets certain mood I think mood created story love My reason thinking story talks parents sacrificed everything move would better life would children Another reason love mood talks even though people spent time nt blood relatives still consider family Lastly I think love theme shows undying gratitude towards parents wonderful childhood making place lived feel like home That I think mood memoir creates love", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although there are many pros and cons that coincide with the development of driverless cars, I believe the cons outweigh the pros. Think of how you would feel if you got a call that your loved one was killed in a car accident with another car that did not even have a driver. That is the same way many other famalies could feel if we put driverless cars on our roads.\n\nThe author of the passage stated that there are so many sensors and buttons that come with the development of a driverless car. Sensors were developed to easily be ignited in order to perform a job more efficiently; however sensors can also cause a great deal of mishap if turned on accidently. Just a fragile touch can set the whole system off! Just like people, every car is not the same. You can easily get a fully developed driverless car, or get a \"bad batch\". An actual person driving is much safer than a driverless car because a person has the alerts and signals of the human brain. The human brain allows humans to be able to think and react to situations in a certain manner, unlike computer technology. Any glitch in the car's technology can transpire, resulting in deaths and many severe infractions! Think about it ... would you rather leave your life in the hands of a person with a brain or a computer sytem?\n\nAs a whole, driverless cars should not even be allowed on our roads.The cars are more harmful than helpful, simply because of the lack of the human brain interactions and the increased risk of failure. The well-being of our people should be the number one priority of not only the driver, but the manufacturer also. The old addage, \"You are in control of your life.\" should be heavily thought about before developing such a hazardous product.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Mr. Senate,\n\nI believe that we should change the Electoral College to election by popular vote for the president of the United States. I think we should change it because it's unfair to voters, you can't trust that the electors will vote for who you want to vote for, and then there is the 'disaster factor'.\n\nFirst off, the Electoral College is unfair to voters. As Bradford Plumer pointed out in the article, The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong,\"The electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning,focusing only on the tight races in the 'swing' states.\"So basically what he is saying is that if one state already has a lead and the canidate has no chance of winning he isn't going to focus on them. The canidate is only going to focus on the states where he has a chance of swinging the vote towards him(hence the term swing states).For example during the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the canidates at all.\n\nSecond of all, you cant trust that the electors that you vote for are going to vote for the president you want. For example, what if you want to vote for Obama and so you vote for the elector that says he will vote for Obama, but then when its time to vote the elector changes his mind and s/he votes for Romney instead. Now what? You put your trust in one person and s/he didnt vote for who you wanted. Now you might have to wait another four years to have a chance of getting a different president.\n\nLast but not least, one of the single best arguments against the electoral college is what we might call the 'disater factor'. In the article, The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong,it states,\"Consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people. Back in 1960, segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy. In the same vein, 'faithless' electors have occasionally nrefused to vote for their party's candidate and cast a deciding vote for whomever they please.\"\n\nThe oppsong claim states that we should keep the electoral college. Some reasons stated in the article, In Defense of the Electoral COllege: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President,are,\"A dispute over the outcome of an ELectoral College vote is possible-it happened in 2000- but it's less likely than a dispute over the popular vote. The Electoral Colllege requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal. The winner-take-all method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates-as we saw in [2012's] election- to focus their campaign efforts on the tossup states. The elctoral College restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states (by population) lose by virtue of the mal-apportionment of the Senate decreed in the Constitution. The electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What we say matters and shouldnt be taken lightly\n\nAmerica is a country of opppurtunity. And many people come to this country to escape or change their harsh living style. When the founding father created the consitution.\n\nI'm sure that they expected the system to last, and for the citizens to have a say in what happens to our home. but now is our government is denying us our, chance to make a difference in america. Voting.\n\nMany people think that the Electoral college is a place, But it actully is a process. the fonding fathers established it in the constioin as a comprmise between election of the president by a vote in congress and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. But now it is a way for people with a big pocket, to get there say, in who get to be president. In source 2: the readers are told that over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election. What this tells the readers is, americans don't feel like their vote actually counts towards the election anymore.\n\nNow people are starting to wonder, Whats wrong with the Electoral college? The answer to that questions is, under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president. To any american looking at this process happening and knowing their vote doesnt really matter. would feel like an injustise has been done to them, and they are absolutlly right. In the constition it say , That americanshave the freedom to vote, both men and women. so as a citizen of american, WE should be able to choose our president not an elector, from the electoral college.\n\nAs an american the citizens should be able choose who they want for president. It is not only unfair and unjust, that our votes don't have any pull. But it is also going against what our fonding fathers worked so hard to perfect. A naton where the people's words matter. The people who work hard everyday, teaching our children, and protecting our citizens, the people who lay down their lives for this country. The people who support this country , no matter how many injustices are thrown at them. Those people should have the most sway in choosing our president. Not the people who have had to never work a day in there life, or the people who are not grateful for this country. when a person who holds a position in an american government office, is easily paid off, It s time for some new, loyal, and dedicated workers. who work just as hard as the rest of america.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is considered by many individuals that in order to enhance academic level, senior scholars are inspired to give negative feedback to their faculty members. while there are others who think that this can degrade the respect and rules in the teaching room. In this essay, I will look at both side of the argument and give my opinion.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, providing negative comments to the teaching staff would provide a platform for the school authorities to improve the teaching standard. It is a well known fact that mature students when give a nagative comments to thier professors during the lecture sessions in the classrooms to inform about the difficulties in their understanding it would certainly help the teachers to find the latest teaching techniques to ensure their students understand the concept well enough. Although interacting with the staff sometimes becomes tedious due to unavailability of the faculties, schools must bridge the gap. For Instance, Many global universities have become excellence just by analysing the shortcommings in delivering the lecture and working on it. It goes without saying that a well designed channel is necessary to take the education on a higher level.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, negative comments can create a negative impression at teaching premises. No one can deny that many teachers might feel inferior while knowing thier faults and errors during back to back interaction infront of the masses due to self respect and lack of courage. However, it is essential that this process of positive and negative comment is conducted in a professional manner. A good example of this can be seen in China where attrition rate for teachers is much higher in each province due to lack of respect at the workplace. In short, criticising will lead to some form of humilitation for the teachers.\r\n\r\nFinally, in my opinion providing opinions and criticism to professors have their own ups and downs. It is the positive suggestions that can alter the education level and give wings to the students career while this sometimes can be a threat for academicians and institutions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Having a technology device that can read human's emotions shouldn't be necesarily valuable in a classroom filled with students, because calculating emotions shouldn't be a computers job. The student might even be really good at hiding their emotions when they don't want others to worry about them. Computers can always malfunction or something can happen in their software system.\n\nWhy do scientists want to find better ways to help us, humans to better communicate with computers? Advance Science at the University of Illinois has came up with a technlogy that can read or better yet, calculate students emotions. \"..can a computer regonize the subtle facial movements we humans use to express how we feel.\" (Making Mona Lisa Smile) Truth be told, we, meaning ourselves, already know how we feel everyday of our lives. We know when were happy, angry, sad, etc. We don't really need a computer telling us the exact percent how much each emotion we're showing. As stated in the article, \"she's is 83 percent happy, 6 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\" The computer calculated every emotion that was hiding underneath that smile, Mona Lisa had.\n\n\"You can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by look on her face.\" (paragraph 5) Most of us already know what emotion our friend(s) has on. in paragraph eight it says,\"..these muscles cluse are sometimes used..\" They use certain muscles on your face to detect if you are smiling for real and not putting up a fake one. Again going back up to the first quote, most of us know when they are lieing and/or putting up a real smile.\n\nMaking technology that can read emotions isn't valuable in a classroom or anywhere else. We calculate already in our everyday lives, theres no need to narrow the \"calulation\" down into percentages.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My positon on driverless cars is to just be in the car. Driverless cars should already be invented because some people dont drive or dont like to drive. Its just like a taxi but better. Google has cars that drive independently under specific conditions since 2009. Driverless cars should be just like google cars because its lets you know when someone is about to hit your car and has a alert on them when the driver is pulling out the driveway or dealing with complicated traffic issues.\n\nThere thinking about making computer driving cars. There should be a driverless car if you dont know how to drive, it helps out alot. The Google car simply announces when the driver should be prepair to take over. The driverless car is not good to buy because you still need a driver for the car so its bacicly a waste of your money. They should have a car that automaticly drives for you without a driver or nothing.\n\nThe manufacture is at fault because he made the car and its suppost to be a driverless car. Cars by 2020 would be able to drive themselves. The real driverless car is going to be great when it comes out because people really want have to drive at all. We are getting closer to our destination everyday. The gm has developed drivers seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing into an object.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people set their goals to be finish advanced learning at university. Otherwise, some choose to apply for work instead of getting a diploma from college. Pros and cons of early employment will be discussed in this essay briefly. \nStudents that struggle with financial problems tend to stop reaching higher level of academic and enter the workforce after finishing highschool. Working early will help them to be sustainable with their daily purposes like accommodation. Moreover, they can support their family finance and gain more experiences in life, compared to their peers. So that, jumping straight into work after school will help people to avoid some expenses like tuition fee, living costs, which is pretty expensive and instantly make money to afford their lives \nHowever, this seems to be not an ideal choice for numerous people. Recently, it might be difficult to get a job steadily without a degree from university. It is because in today’s society, jobs mostly require technological knowledge or computing skills because of the rapid development. So that, without some specific diplomas, people could only enter labour work like plumber or tailor factory, which has lower wages and maybe worse working environment than intellectual work.\nOverall, joining a job after school is really useful if people want to support their finance problem. Otherwise, it might be a shortage for them from having chances to enter in a better workplace and to have higher salary.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph show Saeng Not going give Throughout story feeling From failed test misses Vietnam So many things throughout mother lives reminds Vietnam She closed eyes breathed deeply Saeng could almost feel light strands grandmothers long gray hair This made imotional see many things reminded Vietnam The author ended like show experience affected", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Equitable access to education can change lives as it provides financial stability and social equity worldwide. It is argued that although the younger population is educated on a priority basis, providing basic education to illiterate adults is of higher importance. Therefore, the higher governing bodies should spare some budget for this purpose. I strongly agree with the latter and believe that adults pass on their traits to their children.\n\nOn the one hand, many would disagree and feel that precedence should be given to younger people and not to grown-ups. Firstly, the youth of this day and age are deemed to be our future. Undoubtedly, if they are not educated , who will carry out all the skilled jobs that require higher institutional admissions? For example ,doctors, engineers, architects and teachers all need to gain a certain level of knowledge and information before they can carry out their job roles. As a result, they feel it is important that they are the main point of focus.\n\nOn the other hand, others think that if adults are not educated , how will they help in teaching their offspring? For instance, children are taught at school. However, when they need help with their homework, coursework or assignments, they will need to turn to their parents for guidance. Consequently, if the parents cannot read or write, it will be the child's loss. Furthermore, studies show that those parents or guardians who have a higher level of qualification , encourage their offspring to follow the same path ultimately, teaching them to take the route of higher education. Hence , it is critical that government allows some of its funds to be spent on uneducated groups of adults so that they can learn basic skills.\n\nTo conclude, education is a gift for those who attain it. I believe that even though the government should continue keeping younger people as the main focus of their educational fund, a small amount should also be spent on educating grown-ups to allow them to become independent. Thus, pass their educational qualities on to their children.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays climate change is inevitable due to global warming. Many argue that we need to take radical actions to avoid erratic weather while others are complacent about it. From my perspective, we need to put in efforts to mitigate this issue before it's exacerbated. I will share my viewpoint in the upcoming paragraphs\n\nTo commence with, the carbon footprint should be monitored across all the nations. In other words, the government officials could impose penalties on the citizens crossing the threshold of carbon limits. Consequently, individuals would consciously change their lifestyles. For instance, for commuting, they may switch from private to public transportation. Thus, this will purge emissions in some quantities and help in tackling extreme weather issues.\n\nFurthermore, schools should focus on environmental studies. To elaborate on this, if adolescents are aware of the rising problems as shared by their teachers about irregular temperature then they will feel responsible towards the environment. For example, a tree plantation drive or a beach clean-up could help teenagers to be accountable. Hence, with their mindful behaviour, preventing climate change will be easier.\n\nTo sum up, we can avert the effects on weather by reducing the release of carbon dioxide gases. The government can impose penalties on those who don't abide by the rules. Also, students need to be involved in this herculean task as they are the future and it's vital for them to learn and overcome this situation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The world of Venus is very rough, and there are lots of hazards we must overcome if we plan on visiting the planet. The whole planet is filled with danger around every corner, and we would need alot of protection if we planed to visit this unknown world. It is a planet very close to Earth, but it is also extremely close to the sun, making it 800 degrees fahrenheit on the planets surface. There is also clouds of corrosive sulfuric acid, and powerfull volcanoes. Which makes the idea of actually stepping foot on the planet impossible.\n\nIf we founded research to go near the planet, and studied Venus from a blimp like aircraft it would help us with reseach of how the world looked up close, but we will never be able to actually take samples of the world, no ground samples or gass samples because its too risky. The idea of a aircraft hovering 30 miles above the planet sounds amazing, and makes u imagine what it would be like, but there would not be much progress due to not being able to take pictures of the planet. The atmosphere of Venus is so thick that light does not travel through it making prictures and videos completely inefective. Even after we get there and see the planet, what then the gass would not let us continue to explore the planet, and without any photos or evidence the public might not even beleave that it took place.\n\nNasa is working on many approaches to study and find ways to reach venus. They have tested the material silicon carbon, in a chamber simulating the conditions we may face on the planets surface. The materials lasted three weeks in the condition, but what if the world of Venus is even worse then the chamber Nasa has built, would humans only have a certain amount of time to study the planet before before there ship and them get dissolved by the planet?\n\nThe author is very smart and knows his facts, but he does not know how dangerouse the planet will be, Nasa should focas on Mars and not a planet so hard for us to travel and discover. We have sent rovers to mars and they have landed and some still work to this day, but every thing Nasa has sent to venus has failed, this is why we should choose the red planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do Exceed posted speed limit tells story learning determination one cyclist bikes deserts California encountering obstacles snakes lack water along way The descriptive features setting greatly affect protagonist along journey The essay takes place early summer As cyclist prepares retire day takes particular note the serenity early summer evening ends day feeling calm The next morning excited rejuvenated ready bike The heat rises day goes midday cyclist begins worry water supply He boldly continues forth reaching new terrain rolling hills Here begins lose hope disappointed seem town hoped find abandoned juice factory The cyclist thinks going die due heat lack hydration gathers strength turn final bend reaches bait shop stop get water finally relieved In conclusion cyclist continues journey California desert change weather one terrain coincide affect cyclists change physical mental strength continue traveling", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus which is sometimes called the \"Evening Star\" is one of the brighest points of light in the night making it simple for evenan amature stargazer to spot. Although,the nickname happens to be misleading because Venus has proved a very changelling place to examine more closely.\n\nOften times , it has been referred to as the \"Earth Twin\" because it is the closet planet to the earth in terms of density and size and occasionally the closet distance to the Earth.\n\nA thich atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. Therefore,making it very changelling to explore the venus. Several attempts has been made to explre the Venus all been abortive because the temperature in the Venus is hot.\n\nI support the author's idea of studyiung the venus is worthyit despite the dangers because the hotness of the Venus has to be proven since it isn't the closet planet to the sun .\n\nAlso,why is it that human are not been able to explore on ever get a closer look at the and why all the space crafts and all other materials sent into the the planet Venus can not surviveafter few hours of landing in the planet.\n\nPeering at the Venus from a ship hovering safely from above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of lights cannot pentrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective. Also researchers cannot take the samples of rock,gas or anything else from a distance which has been difficult for researchers to give a prove of how Venus looks like.\n\nI would conculde that people should face the challenge of exploring the venus not minding the dangers because so many things still has to be known about the planet called Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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