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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Instead of having the Elcetoral College you should change it to the popular votes because the people vote for who they want as president not for who will be put in as president. It should be all about the people and what they want and who they want as the leader of the country not who the Electoral College puts in the office. Also the Electoral College is a process not a place but their are people that run the Electoral College and they put in who they want and not who the people want.\n\nThe counting of the electoral votes is done by Congress. Also the Electoral College consists of 538 electors. \"In Texas, for instance, and wanted to vote for John Kerry, youd vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electors pledged to Kerry.\" The votes would go to be electoral votes instead of what the people. Someone can be voted in to office by the peoples vote but it has to be that the other person might get in by the electoral votes instead of the individual votes.\n\nThe electoral vote overrule the peoples votes. For example \"Obama received 61.7 precent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percentof the popular votes cast for him and Romney.\" It just is not fair for the people to vote for who they want as president and the Electoral College puts who they want in instead who people want in office. The people want who they want not who you put in office. In the state of Florida there are 29 electoral votes, Texas there are 38, California has 55.\n\nThese are reasons why the Electoral College should be changed to the election of the popular votes. It is only fair to do that instead of having it as someone that the people did not want in office. The electoral votes do not have to be there they just have them to put who Congress want in office. They do not care about the people they care about themselves.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can we actually \" calculate\" emotions like math homework? And how can a computer recognize the subtle facial movments we humans use to express how we feel? I think if we had technoligy like this to see emotional expressions if students that would sovle a lot of problems. It tells someone how they are feeling without using words. Yes I do think it's valuable but at the same time I dont agree with it because theres such a thing called privcy and I dont with anyone wants to be read like a book because if the world sees us all as the same no one would be special. At the same time no one can tell you how your feeling beside ourself and I don't think a computer could tell the full story. I know thats not all the feelings in mona Lisa's face, there ahs to be more to it, there always is. Dr. Huang relies on the work of psychologists but what if they are wrong? We don't know for sure, we just relie on people who tell us what we want to believe and we have no choice but to believe them. There is more to emotions then just happiness, suprise,anger,disgust,fear, and sadness. What about curiosity, passion, stress, guilt, excitment and etc but you get the point.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. He basically means there is some good factors, but also some bad factors about exploring Venus. Like Venus' dangerous enviorment is a huge obstacle for people. But if you look around that, it is also the most Earth-like planet in the solar system which can be extremely beneficial for the future.\n\nIn the article it talks about the dangers of Venus' enviorment and why it's so difficult for people to travel and study there. In paragraph 3 it states, \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus.\" And that is so unbelievably dangerous that people wouldn't even be able to breathe there. But it's not even the most dangerous thing about Venus' enviorment. They have clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid, temperatures of an average 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and an atmospheric pressue 90 times greater than what we have on Earth. You wouldn't be able to touch the surface of the planet. It would be outrageous for people to want to travel there. But besides the bad things, and reading about Venus, I can see why people would want to go, too.\n\nYeah Venus is a very dangerous planet, but people are still amused at what it can possibly provide for our future. The text states, \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" Not only is Venus so similar to earth, but it used to be a lot different than what it is now. Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supposrted various life forms, like Eath. And also like Earth, it has some similar features like valleys, mountains, and craters. The planet is also know for being the futures next planetary visit.\n\nSo Venus has numbers of pros and cons to it. But if you're ever up to the task of actually exploring Venus, you probably won't be sorry. And I think that the author did a great job at explaining why exploring Venus can be so dangerous but in the end beautiful. So Venus doesn't only have horrific features, it also has beautiful terrain and could one day be the new Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the face wasn't formed by aliens. The text says, its a rock formatio.. which resembles a human head. . . formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" Another reason is that thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeard on a JPL web site, revealing . . . a naturallandform. There was no alien monument after all. The text states that in paragraph #7. i personaly thiink that the face wasn't formed by aliens because they arn't seen by any web surfers. I think that it was formed by rocks. The text says,\" As a rule of thumb,you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the size,\" he added\" so, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptians-style pyramids ro even small shacks, you could see what they were!\" The text says that in paragraph #11. Lastly the text says,\" What the picture actually shows is the Martian of a butte or mesa landform common around the American West. Thats a lava dome that takes the form of a isolatedd mesa about the same height as the face on mars. The text says that in paragraph #12. That is why I dont think that the face was formed by aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My argumentative essay to convice someone that the Face is just a natural landform my reseason is because ''scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa'',''a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all,'' and lastly ''the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a buttle or mesa.\n\n''I got these three facts for Paragraph 2, 7, and 12. Supporting these details for the story is in pargraph 7 it says that ''Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing ...\n\nA NATURAL LANDFORM.'' Although paragraph 5 is just to get it popular in Hollywood because it says ''It appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows, and even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years.''some evidence from the article to support my claims was ''What the picture ACTUALLY shows is the Martian equivalent of a buttle or mesa - landforms common around the\n\nAmerican West.'' In paragraph 6 a FEW scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact, photographing Cydonia became a prority for NASA when Mars Global Surveyor (MGS).''\n\nIn conclusion I know that this a natural landform and the could have be a freak accident or something. If this was the case, then there would much more of these Faces in outerspace and not just on Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author included paragraph show much girl missed Vietnam When girl saw hibiscus brought back memories Vietnam Seeing hibiscus allows find comfort So paragraph show United States different Vietnam Since United States changing seasons allows girl get use United States The plant always look good United States provides The author states Almost reluctantly realized many things thought strange become quiet repetition season upon season almost familiar now This quote shows girl getting use United States How always remember Vietnam finds things United States remind Vietnam In conclusion paragraph used show much girl missed Vietnam finds comfort within United States", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is the face on Mars an alien artifact of just a natural landform? So far we have no real proof that aliens even exist. Also in 1998 the JPL website revealed that it was just a natural landform and not made by aliens. Also NASA would be just as excited to reveal that another life form has been found, that wouldn't be a kept secret.\n\nSo far we have no real proof that aliens exist. If there were aliens wouldn't we know by now? There are lots of alien conspiracies but nothing that proves aliens exist. UFO spottings are just the same. You may think theres an alien in there but whos to say its not just a flying frisbee. And the crop circles how do you know the farmer doesn't just like to have a nice looking crop.\n\nLots of people believe in aliens but what are they basing these beliefs from, one blurry picture? We can say there may be evidence of aliens but no proof.\n\nWhen the next Mars Global Surveyor flew over we got an even better picture. Lots of people were anxious to find out what the story behind this face was. Later theJPL website revealed something that shocked, relieved, saddened, and angered the people. The website had said that there was no alien artifact just a natural land form. How after all of that can you still think there are aliens? Well some people still believe. There are all kinds of things people think that show us there are aliens. But just about every one of them is some kind of misunderstanding.\n\nIf we had found aliens we would be eager to share our discovery not try to hide it. People say that NASA is just trying to make us think there are no aliens. The truth is we wish we had found them. It would have been much more exciting to find aliens than some sort of natural landform. Some people think that this is evidence that we are trying to hide our discoveries. I really do wish that we had found aliens. Talk about a pay raise! But, there is still no strong evidence of aliens.\n\nI think by now it is safe to say that aliens don't exist. So far we just have no real proof of aliens. Not to mention that JPL already confirmed that the face was just a natural landform. Also theres that part about how we would benifit even more for finding aliens. People can still have their conspiracies but that can't change the facts. THERE ARE NO ALIENS!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When reading memoir makes feel something The feeling feel sort sorrow When feel makes think live way It also shows care people Who deal lifestyle goodness sake nice people dont nasty could affect", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Robots will soon be reading our faces and will take over the world! That's ridiculous, of course that isn't going to happen! But, there are new machines and programs that are said to be able to read and identify facial expressions. Using technology to read facial expressions and moods is a very good idea because the program will help with detecting moods of emotions of people who are in trouble with the law, it will help teachers know when their students are engaged or not, and it can help with people who may be emotionally unstable.\n\nLie detectors have been around for awhile now, but who's to say that these emotion detector programs won't help aswell. Figuring out the emotions of someone who is lying or telling the truth can help with figuring out more detail that is within the story. For example, if a person is arrested for supposedly robbing a bank, and then it is later learned from a lie detector that they were tellling the truth, you would just let them go. But, with the facial expression program you can test to also see if they're nervous, scared and even angry, and be able to see if they are maybe covering for someone or know more about the situation. The program will be able to help with crimes that have been harder to solve because they'll have more emotional insight on the person, and will be able to get inside their head more.\n\nSince the beginning of time, teachers have tried to keep their students engaged and interested in what they're working on and teaching. “A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,” and \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" Because the teachers will be able to tell a students emotions, they will be able to change the lesson in order to help them grow and learn more. This will make better teachers and better students, aswell as better people and workers.\n\nMental health is a huge struggle for teens aswell as adults and the older generation. Not many people talk about their real moods or feelings, and this facial expression program could be just the fix for that. \"They even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one.\" Many people instead of showing their true emotions, plaster on a fake smile and go about their day. The facial expression program will be able to detect fake smiles and other facial movements that can indicate someone's emotions and help doctors and teachers realize the true emotions of their students or patients. This program will be able to notify teachers and doctors, when students/patients are depressed, suicidal, angry, and hurt. The program could also help psychologists pin point certain topics and conversations that they should speak about with their client, so that they will be able to help them more than they already do. This program could help many teens and adults who are emotionally unstable by getting them the proper care that they need, by figuring out their emotions and feelings.\n\nAll in all, the facial expression program is very helpful and something we as a country should seriously consider. The program is very versatile and could be used in many situations where the feelings and emotions of someone are needed. The program will be beneficial to the country because you will have more honesty within the law regarding crimes, teachers will be able to keep students engaged and help them more efficently, and it will be able to help a lot of people who are emotionally unstable and are in need of help. Do you believe this is something that are country should consider?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that the face of Mars is just a natural landform because there is no such thing as aliens living upon us. Another reason is that Mars could've got hit by an astroid that came from the Astroid Belt, or maybe could've had a volcanic eruption. I know this because in the passage from the article it said, \"Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing.... a natural land form.\"\n\nAnother passage form the article says, \"what the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa--landforms common around the American West.\" I believe that Mars had signs of life, and water in the passed, but now Mars has changed and is still changing over time. Mars does not have water anymore, but theories show thats there might some signs of living on Mars. And that is why I believe that the image of the face on Mars is just a natural landform!!!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that driveless cars are great because for example say if your on the road and your hands start to get tired you can relax and let your car do all the driving and driveless cars can also be good for people with arthoritist or people who have bad hands regardless of the causes.\n\nI think driveless cars are good because if your on the road and your hands start to get tired the car can do all of the work until you feel like driving again but you still have to be cautious and be aware of what your cars are doing. The car to me sounds great because in the story it quotes \" The combination of all this input is necessary for the driveless car to mimic the skill of a human at the wheel. So basically if you have a driveless car and your not holding the wheel the car would still drive perfect do to it having the skill that make the car drive like a human is\n\nbehind the wheel. These cars also have problems you have to be ready and grab the wheel if your car lights blink indicating that you are about to hit someone or something.\n\nDriveless cars would also be good for people to have arthoritist because if the car drives it's self the person behind the wheel wouldn't really have to do anything only when the time comes. The story indicates that the people in the car entertainment are trying to make driveless cars fun because i know if someone just sitting in there cars doing nothing but listening to music they would get bored but i also know people with arthoritist would love these cars because they will not have to use there hands they could just sit back and listen to music. Driveless cars can be perfect for many people of all kinds and they can help in the society.\n\nDriveless cars can also be great for people that wants to have fun\n\nif they dont feel like driving. For example i dont recommend this but for people that drink and drive driveless cars can be a little bit better and prevent them from getting into a car accident. In the passage it states that this car has many alerts like the windshield wipers they flash if your about to crash or the seats shake so this is why this car is perfect.\n\nIn conclusion now you know why i think driveless cars are perfect because they are good for the roads and good for people with arthoritist.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although driverless cars seem unfathomable today, it is likely that they'll be present in the near future. The article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" describes how we see autonomous features in many of the cars that exist presently and advanced development is already underway to fully automate all cars. Based on what I've read in this article, I believe that driverless cars should be available for practical uses because it would be the next chapter in modern automobile history, their safety advantages, and their ability to improve the effiency of society.\n\nCars have been progressing and advancing ever since they were created in the early twentieth century. As stated in the article, the gradual improvements of\n\ncomputer hardware and sensors have made cars safer and easier to drive. The advances that allowed automakers to utilize speed sensors in the creation of antilock brakes are leading to the many advantages that would be seen in autonomous vehicles. Cars that are able to drive themselves make perfect sense considering the technological advances we see in many of modern society's aspects. Driverless cars would just be the correct and next step toward in the history of the automobile.\n\nNot only would fully autonomous cars be historic, they would be much safer than any of today's vehicles. We see features of a driverless car in many of today's automobiles. They'd be similar to the BMW's \"Traffic Jam Assistant\" or how drivers' seats in GM cars vibrate when there is danger of backing into objects. Although the cars that include these features cannot fully take over for the driver, they're sort of what to expect when we actually see fully autonomous cars. The human brain simply cannot calculate and formulate a plan as quick as a computer can. Driverless cars would prevent human mishaps error, drastically improving safety. Surely, autonomous cars will decrease the accident rates among drivers.\n\nDriverless cars would also bring about a more efficient society. According to the article, fully autonomous cars would be able to reduce gas consumption and improve public transportation. They'd be as simple as calling for a taxi, but they'd be without the hassle of bus or subway stations. These vehicles would also be as individual as one would prefer, preventing any unwanted intereaction with other humans. Instead of being crammed on a bus with people you don't know, you could have the peace of mind by yourself in a driverless car.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars would be great for society. Autonomous cars would be a logical next step in the automobile's history. They're much safer than any of today's cars, and much more efficient. Driverless cars would make the world a safer and better place to work and live.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you like the car you drive now? Pretty soon you might want an upgrade. Would you consider driving what they call a \"Driveless Car\"? Bewildered at the thought of this invention, i think driveless cars are a bad idea. In my opinion, I feel as if this car would cost a fortune and would only be used my the rich to brag.\n\nDriving a manual car has issues but just think of a car that can drive itself. Your basically in a computer system. What is going to happen if you have a malfunction? Who will be blamed for this mistake? I feel that you will worry less if you have a basic vehicle.\n\nIn the article \" Driveless Cars Are Coming\" its says that in some states, it is illegal to even test computer-driven cars. Theses states seem to care about their society. They have laws about safety. The laws focus's on keeping anyone in a vehicle or in contact with a vehicle safe.\n\nOur world evolves around technology. We will have a lot more technological issues to differentiate about . For example, I seen, in the news that they where making shoes that dont need to be tied up anymore. All you do is press a button. All we do is press buttons all day long.\n\nIn the article, it explains the possibilities that this car could do. It says \" They can steer, accelerate, and brake themsevles, but all are desinged to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. Why? The driver can do all these things themsleves.\n\nDriveless cars are not a good idea. Drivers are perfectly fine driving in a basic car. So, I am against this invention all the way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The given diagrams provide an illustration of a modern landfill for household wastes. Overall, a typical landfill is a man-made hole dug on a solid, two-layer base in which household refuse is kept and toxic liquids are removed from the landfill by the use of a system of pipes.\nThe construction of a landfill commences when a large hole is dug out of a site with natural rock underneath. The bottom of the hole is thereafter covered with a layer of clay and another layer of unspecified synthetic substance. A drainage tank which is a box-shaped compartment dug through the two aforementioned layers and a set of drainage pipes are also installed.\nWhen used, the landfill is filled up with household waste, with the leachate being extracted and eventually flowing out of the site in liners. Once the rubbish has been converted into a mud-like compound, the landfill is sealed with clay, and gases that are emitted as a result of the conversion is eventually pumped out to an unspecified zone", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Narciso Rodriguez Home The blueprints Lives shared feelings traditions Love shared family growing upNarciso dad cuban shared cuban traditions eachother warm welcoming eachother people Narciso s family generous people shared everyone kind eachother lived traditional emphasized mood memoir The love meaning family", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We find things offensive wether book magazine movie cd tv show newspaper article Libraries hold items somepeople want remove items think offensive would right If everyone went library took everything thought offensive shelves would nothing left Maybe writers cut things innapropriate racist things include foul language Then many people would offended would problems letting children pick books Although writers fault It readers Some people stop taking everything seriously would worry things like children reading Yes adult things innapropriate children s adults Children selection books movies And parents need realize maybe take kids childrens section All types entertainment categorized age people start paying attention If parents started watching kids would worrying reading watching something That parents taking care children people good job If book read something want child read probably something read older worry get age And maybe would ok read old enough realize right wrong Parents always control children And chance pick book parents never wanted read see different way mother father learn valuable lesson", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I felt thrill body We seconds opening I wait minutes go space mountain I wish I couldve cut people line I knew I wait When I got I knew worth A end day I beged go one ride Again I wait minutes go The ride showed boring history Then end gave us screen picked future showed funny cartoon faces", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear come concern many people debating whether computers benefit society Some people think computers lives many people I disagree say I think computers benefits society ways bring people together offer many websites research topic let people shop home One way computers help us bring people together using internet Many families live close relatives making hard see But internet people use social networking sites facebook myspace keep touch one another Distant relatives talk share picture one another keep touch Also internet help bring couple together potentially lead marriages How times seen harmony commercial claim brought two singles together make happy couple Another way computers help today s society offer many places conduct research certain topic There many search engines internet lead numerous websites help find need know Also researching topic computer much easier compared going library reading books When using books research topic need find right book read whole thing least find re looking But internet type re looking click go Lastly computers let shop online lead better shopping experience By shopping online skip long lines retail stores means less time walking get product For example many people rush stores early huge sales CAPS A person could left waiting line hours get product Why wait outside long could buy product comfort home get product delivered right house Also many websites offer special deals shopping online even money In conclusion I think computers benefit society three ways bring people together offer many websites research topic let people shop home A world without computers would much different world live today", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The bar graph provides information regarding the average hours of uncompensated work done weekly by men and women in marriage. The data are categorised by the number of children that they have.\nOverall, it is clearly observed that as the number of children increases, so is the average of unpaid working hours per week for married women. However, the time spent in these hours of their male counterparts are stable. It is also seen that the females have more hours of uncompensated labour than the males.\nIn detail, those females with 3 or more children have worked 60 hours per week without pay, which is by far the highest average hour compared to the other categories. The amount of time they spent with this type of work diminishes as the number of children becomes fewer; married females with 1 to 2 children have 10 hours less and those without children have 30 hours weekly.\nIn regard with the type of gender, married males have lesser average hours of unpaid jobs than married females. The maried men have only less than 20 hours per week spent on this job, which is apporoximately just a half of the time spent in women with children. Moreover, the time spent for married men did not alter in the different given categories.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article, the author suggests that despite Venus' inhospitable conditions, it is a very good idea to explore and descover more about it. He supports that with developing technology, it would not be impossible, just a complicated engineering challenge. The author supports that if the correct methods and technolohies were developed, humans might be able to visit and even live on Venus.\n\nThe author's main reason for claiming that exploring Venus is worthwhile is because Venus is often referred to as Earth's \"twin\", and for good reason. It once had lakes and oceans that could have supported life. Even though those are gone, it still has similar landforms (mountains, valleys, etc.) and it's surface is made of rocky sediment, similar to Earth's. It is aslo often the closest planet to Earth, trading out with Mars every so often.\n\nIn summary, the author's reasons for supporting the exploration of Venus are that Venus is often the closest planet to ours, it sports a similar geography and other planetary characteristics, and that it might be possible for humans to one day visit and live on Venus, which might be a good thing with the current rate of our population growth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is irrefutable true that art has always been an important subject for ages. Where some individuals consider it vital for children while others think it is not necessary at all. In my opinion, arts should be included in the curriculum as it helps children develop skills which will serve them in their future.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, teaching fine arts at the school level will aid children to develop skills such as picturing their ideas and thoughts. As young children are unable to express their feelings, they will get a chance to do this through drawings. For example, if a doctor needs to diagnose a child's certain mental condition, he gives him a piece of paper and usually diagnoses the problem by looking at the way he draws things. Therefore, such activities should be taught to children at a younger age.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, many individuals think that teaching arts is nothing but a waste of time. It is mainly due to the reason that nowadays artists are paid very less which doesn't fulfil their needs. Therefore, they look for other jobs in fields such as banking, business etc. Because they get highly paid in other sectors, therefore they prefer studying other subjects rather than the arts. This further leads to a parent who doesn't want their children to go for higher studies in arts. This problem can be minimised if artists get paid properly. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, studying arts plays an important role in bringing out the best in children. Therefore, the art subject should be promoted and be given enough funding so that it can easily be studied and adopted as a profession.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often argued that it's not wise to prevent climate change and we must think of ways to be compatible with it. I completely disagree with this idea and I believe it's much easier to prevent global warming from getting worse, and also we cannot afford its consequences.\n\nTo begin with, dealing with global warming results is much harder, while it's easier, and more achievable to take some simple yet fundamental steps. Air pollution is one of the main factors in global warming, and to be more specific, carbon dioxide produced as a result of fossil fuels, plays a major role in this pollution. Governments can significantly reduce CO2 production by applying extra tax on fossil fuel-based cars and encourage people to purchase electric vehicles. Also, people can be a great help in this situation, by making simple changes in their everyday life. For instance, they can commute to work by bicycle instead of taking a cab or worse, riding their own car.\n\nFurthermore, the consequences of prolonged and worsened global temperature rise are expensive, and it's too difficult to tackle. One of the first things that can occur as a result of it, is poles Ice melt, resulting in increased sea water level. This can cause lots of cities to sink, and many lives will be lost. For example, recent research shows that if the world's temperature keeps rising at the current speed, the city of Bangkok in Thailand will go underwater by 2030. One more reason to argue is mass extinctions that could happen as a complication of global warming. Lots of species are at risk of extinction at this very moment, such as polar bears and penguins living in Antarctica.\n\nIn conclusion, I strongly believe that it's better to take steps to mitigate the world's temperature rising, because it's a lot easier to do so and we won't have to deal with its consequences.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, people show more tendency to have a tour to other lands around the world. From my perspective, this advance has both positive and negative aspects.\r\n\r\nFirstly, by virtue of airplane improvement and development, any destination abroad is accessible with affordable cost and lowest time. In addition, these days, holiday destinations have many advertisements and promotions to attract tourist globally; is that, the number of people choosing foreign countries has been increased significantly instead of local ones. \r\n\r\nAnother reason for travel tendency to other countries is the people’s high demand of studying, working and living overseas these days generally. Not only there are many parents taking peril to support their children to study abroad, but also there are many teachers encouraging students to pursue their targets in other lands. Thanks to the global process, many hurdles such as culture, language and frontier have been narrowed and leads to society’s enthusiasm in travelling to other countries.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion, the reasons described above should be seen as a process with both advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, holidaymaking provide high rate of wealth which promotes tourism industry dramatically. Furthermore, it boosts competition in jobs, culture adoption and conventions homogenization, which raise development in many social aspects. On the other hand, it will undermine rare languages and small cultures since many people attempt to adopt popular things.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I strongly agree that travel abroad is necessary incentive, which can cause positive and negative effects for aforementioned reasons.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In libraries bunch books music movies magazines etc let general public check This topic censorship libraries diffitcult one everyone different views things life Certain materials libraries remove shevles found offensive someone Being library lots choices see check In library someone comes arcoss book movie seems offensive That someone look way library general public It seems harse person material library library The materials offensive people could special place library comitdate everyone Libraries right censor type material seems offensive community This right community strongly agrees local libraries If whole community disagree library certain material community say Yes books libraries offensive group people mean take material library Our country say everyone right free speech banned books thats offensive countries around might books libraries There thick line certain type material library offensive Someone right book seems offensive person whole community says book offensive yes The libraries community choices offensive book self If offensive everyone shelf Censorship diffitcult topic agured", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The aouthor idea might sound or be a little bit carzy. The author however is not wrong, because Venus was once like the earth, still has features like the earth, and it is the nearst option for planetary visit. So let me explain and make the aouthor's idea a little bit less crazy.\n\nEven thought Venus has a thicker atmosphere and is almost 97 percent corbond dioxide blackets according to paragraph 3. It was once earth like. it was proably coverd in large oceans. venus also might of supported various forms of life just like earth like is says in paragraph 4. Maybe one day it will be like earth again.\n\nVenus might have the \"hottest surface temperture of any plant in our solar system\" (paragraph 3), erupting volcanoes and powerful earthquakes. But it still has features like earth. venus has rocky sediment. It also has mountains and craters like it states in paragraph 4. The might be the reason why they call it earth's \"twin\" like it says in paragraph 2.\n\n\"Venus is the closest planet to eartyh in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too\". This might be an advantage for NASA. It might be productive but ithas to be safe too. NASA discribe this trip like \"blimp-like\"(paragraph 5). NASA is already studying and planing for the trip. It they trip might be short comparec to other planets but NASA want to make it as safe as possible.\n\nIn conculsion, the authors idea might sound a bit bazzar, but it is not a bad idea. Since the planet a while ago was like earth, still looks like earth, and it is the closest to earth. So maybe in a couple of years NASA might finale make a plantery vist.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The issue of climate change was always debatable and has become more controversial. Many people claim that people have more responsibility to fight climate change, while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, we should work more to fight against climate change to be more rational. This essay will elaborate on both points of view of this issue and thus lead to a logical conclusion.\r\n\r\nThere are myriad reasons that will further explain this argument. Still, the most predominant one stems from the fact that the environment has significant influences on our wellbeing, and hurting the earth means hurting ourselves. The Covid-19 pandemic has vividly demonstrated this. The virus can spread due to our poaching of wild primates' nature. As a result, many countries took damaging blows to their economies and the life of their citizen. Furthermore, many prominent business chains do not have to spend significant money on carbon emissions. In that situation, if citizens do not raise their voices against pollution, the government does not follow the legislation to protect the environment.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some others believe that global warming is most appealing for economic practices. Poor communities are unable to afford environment-friendly methods of production. For example, from 2020, The tech- giant company Apple did not provide charging adapters with iPhones upon purchase. Because they have avoided mining a significant amount of materials from the earth and conserved copper, zinc, and many metals used for manufacturing a charging adapter, this decision by the technology giant had caused a furore among buyers. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that people use lots of fossil fuels for their everyday work, detrimental to the environment.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, according to the arguments mentioned above, I feel that to save our planet and secure our next generation, scientists, policymakers, social workers, and the government should take several steps to overcome the situation and make the world a better place.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Unpaid society jobs should be mandatory for teenagers during their free hours to ensure both teenagers as well as communities are getting benefitted. I completely agree with the opinion as while doing so, these children will learn and gain invaluable experience, further, it will give them a sense of happiness and achievement by helping others.\r\n\r\nFirstly, learning starts at a very young age and if this can help and serve the nation that would be an achievement. Even though books gives them knowledge, they are not getting enough exposure to learn about society and its problem. While helping the needy, they will not only learn practical aspects of life at a very young age but also will give them real-world experience. For example, young kids give free classes to poor kids and help them to achieve success in life.\r\n\r\nSecondly, helping people in need gives young children a sense of achievement and happiness. Because these teenagers don't get opportunities in school, helping during community work will help them realize their good work. Since they are enthusiastic and fast learners, can be a good medium to share new technologies with older people. For ,instance young children help older ones learn new gadgets such as iPad or use an app on phones.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, in my view, although paid tasks can be lucrative, young ones should not be focussing on the money but rather the achievements and experience they can get while working free for community work. Schools, along with the support of parents should encourage these young generations to start helping the nation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Ever since their invention, cars have been a very important part of the modern society. Everywhere you look there is someone driving to work, or shopping, or going to a doctor's appointment. These are all advantages to  having a car, but if you look closer you can see how these cars may be doing more harm than help. Air pollution is the problem most people see, however cars also keep people from face to face contact when you pass someone on the road, and you can't overlook the extravagant cost of having a car. These are the points of intrest for many scientists, sociologists, and general people all over the world.\n\nAir pollution, the bane of existance for every health and nature lover, is a massive problem that is getting way out of control. In an article by Elisabeth Rosenthal, she explains that passenger  cars are responsible for twelve percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe and up to fifty percent in some parts of the United States! If you reduce the amount of cars on the roads, it would lower those numbers drastically. For example, in Paris, they banned certain cars from driving on certain days. The result was astonishing! Street congestion alone went down by seventy percent.\n\nWhile the pollution goes up, the amount of face to face contact of people goes down. Someone in a car could pass someone else on the highway without knowing that that was someone that they haven't seen in months or even years! Without cars the main way of transportation would be walking and/or biking. When walking and biking you have the ability to talk to people . That person you haven't seen in forever can see you and strike up a conversation. Someone who has had a bad morning can have the opportunity to let out some steam instead of  going to work angry and upset.\n\nSomething you absolutely can't avoid about cars is the cost. Between the car's cost itself, the insurance every month, the cost of repairs, and the constantly rising gas prices, many people can barely afford it. Without all of those costs, most people could have more money for their home, groceries, education, and many other things.\n\nYou can already see the improvements. In 2012, a study showed that driving by younger people decreased by twenty-three percent between 2001 and 2009. Another study showed that there has been a large drop in the percentage of sixteen to thirty nine year olds  getting a license. These are the steps we need to take, this is the path to a better, healthier planet as well as the people on that planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A Facial Action Coding System would be very helpful or valuable if used in class rooms. A person studying this system and peoples reactions to it could learn a lot about subjects.Knowing emotional expressions is very important if the program could give many busineses and institutions whether on state or national scale an edge on future employees or busincess partners.\n\nOn school grounds this would be very helpful for manay reasons. One reason would be the facial action coding system could tell an observer or teacher whether a class does or does not like an actvity they're doing. Another reason for this system to be inputted into school areas is to possibly give hints to what a student wants implemnted. If a student is upset in the cafeteria along with others staring at the food, and the system shows like 23% sadness or anger, one could predict a food change is needed. The author proves this by telling of Dr Huang's work.\n\nDr Huang, the creator of the facial action coding system, tells the reader about many adifferent things it can do. He brings up an example that starts with. \"...if you smile when a web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow.\" The excat opposite would happen if you frowned. If this was implemented everywhere the computer could know exacrlty what you like seeeing and what you dislike. That information could effect many different areas of your perosnal life.\n\nin the articlce the facial action coding system is decribed as a different combination or version of the famous \" Da Vinci Code\". Dr. Huang says \" A classrom computer could recognize when a student is beoming confused or bored\" which scould help administrators figure out what and how to keep students working thier best. Te computer could change or modify the current lessson being worked on maybe even a little better than a teacher.This \"Da Vinci Code\" could possibly be world changing in all areas in and out the classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Happiness, Surprise, anger, disgut, fear and sadness, Humans use emotions to\n\nexpress and describe how they feel, and it is because the muscular actions units. You can tell when someone is happy or if someone is angry, when you are happy your body make your lips raise at the corners of your mouth but when you are angry your muscles around your mouth tightens, but why is important to know about humans emotions?\n\nThere is a new software\n\ncalled \" The Facial Action Coding System\" and this software makes easy to understand the emotions of others, and this is all becuase of the innovation from Prof.Thomas HUang and Prof.Nicu Sebe, they have a goal to make humans and computers to communicate in a better way.\n\nThe procces starts with a computer that models in 3-D the muscles of\n\nthe face, they use only the 44 major muscles, and in the six classfied emotions something different happens, it can also be called \" actio units\" and it is when there is one or more movements in your face. \" The facial expressions for each emotion are universal\" - Dr.huang, and by this he means that even though everyone is different, we all do almost the same emotions when we are surprise or when we are mad, and in some of them are easier to recognize and in\n\nsome others in not that easy, you can tell how is your sister feeling just by looking at her face or if you want to ask for a favor the first thing you do is to look at their face, becuase if they show a emtion of being angry is better to ask another time, but in some others cases you can not tell how is that person feeling just by looking at her face, because some people express their emotions more than others and for this kinf od people the new software is really helpfull, everyday, we look at other persons emtions every day and maybe sometimes we don't even realize it, in some cases another persons emotions can change yours for example is you are really tired or sad and you see one person that it is super happy it can change your mood to a happy one.\n\nI think that is it really smart to use the techonology for something good and this is one of them by reading students emotional expresions, it can help teachers to be better by knowing which type of lessons are confuse or bored and like this teachers can change it or make it better for students,sometimes some students are afraid to speak or say somethn infront of the class, when they have a question or they just do not understand, but with this software teachers can improve and by this students can also improve, \" Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication\" notes from Drr. Huang, so even if we try to figure out the emotions of someone we can't some of them keep them really well inside, this software makes it easy, i think they should use it in every school to help students that have to stay after school of pay tons of money for tutoring because maybe is it not that they do not understand, is it that the way some students learn in different, they do not learn the same ways, but with this kind of information the teachers can make it easier for everyone.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People agree if adolescents may do some volunteering activities in their free time, those will give some opportunities for them like looking forward for jobs, creating networking, helping each other, and many more. Besides for the teenagers, these activities can help communities for searching volunteers too.\r\n\r\nAdolescents will have free time than any age group so that they have opportunities for exploring something new. Some volunteering activities like charities, help old people in their home, do some school activities may improve their skills for humanism. Then, Involved in activities such as volunteering may help them for using their free time. On the other hand, when teenagers do something in this work, it can create good relationship between people who embroiled in this work. Finally, young people will get a chance for searching jobs. \r\n\r\nFor the community itself, it may help for arranging the budget when the activity held. For example, budget for paying people who take action in this activity can be reduced. Then, Community should not worry about people who will help or involved in the activity. The group should only focus to the main goal that can help or give the benefit to each other.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, this relationship can give the benefit for the society, the teenagers and community itself. Not only for them, but also for someone who really needs their help like old people, disable people, and so on. Young people usually have great power and competent skills for helping in this projects. So this society really improve humanism aspects in this world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are the future! \"Google has had cars that could drive idependently since 2009. Thier cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash, but so far , Google cars aern't truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when dealing with complicated traffic issues.'' Driverless cars have been around for a while now; even though they are not fully developed they are becoming more and more relavent and it's time to imbrace that. Imbrace that they may even help prevent any sort of crash in the future. While also getting people to thier destinations fast and saftely.\n\nThere are still problems to face even in the light of things. For example.\n\n\"Most driving laws focus on keeping drivier, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers. Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. As a result, in most states t is illegal even to test computer driven cars.\" There are still many strides to take in acheving driverless cars on rode but as soon has those obsticles are tackled everyone will be much happier. With saftey has the main concern the laws that will be made for these driverless cars will insure that the utmost care and concern for health take precident. As soon\n\nhas the laws have been made the states wil also be more open the idea of a drverless car on thier streets.\n\nHas stated earlier there are still a few problems with the idea of driverless cars but they are really close to frution. Possibly even on the cusp on perfection. \"In fact, none of the cars developed so far are completly driverless. They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the rode ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires.\"\n\nAll of that simply means driverless cars are not 100 percent driverless but they very very close. If they can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves thats half the battle and the rest will follow in suite with time.\n\n\"Google's modified Toyota Prius uses postion-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotatng sensor on the roof, a video camera mountedd near the rearview mirrior, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS reciver, and an inertial motion sensor. The most impportant bit of technology in this system is the spinn sensor on the roof. Dubbed LIDAR, it uses laser beams to form a constanctly uppdating 3-D model of the car's surrondings.\" The technology is there for the drverless cars to start becoming a real prossiblity in the near future. They may even fully take over and allow for a much more easy going experinces while driving. And also allow for beyond human level control of the ride.\n\n\" Telsa has prjected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on the autopilot 90 percent of the time. Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plam to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020. The rode to the truly autonomous car stretches on ahead of us. but we grow closer to the destination everyday.\" Fully driverless cars really are in the near future. There are small little pushes that still must be made but right around the corner of those is a paradise of safe relaxing transportation for all to use. With driverless cars the future will be a bright one. And saftey while driving will no longer be a concern.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people might think that the face on Mars was created by aliens and many others might think that it is just a natural landform.\n\nThere is no proof for any of the rumors.\n\nPeople have had clues about them.\n\nSome say that it looks like an Egypitan Pharaoph, others say it looks like a river from Idaho.\n\nThe face has become so popular that it was starred in movies, magazines, books and talk shows.\n\nIt was so popular because it was unusual.\n\nNASA knew once they showed the public the picture they would attract more attention to the planet Mars.\n\nThe Mars Orbiter Camera team flew over Cydonia and took a picture that came out more clear than the first picture that NASA took.\n\nTo get the picture was hard work.\n\nThey usually do not pass over Cydonia very often.\n\nThere is a spacecraft that will fly over the location and scan it like a fax machine.\n\nThe picture of the face may mean different things to people and some may have different opinions about it.\n\nOne person said it looked like a mesa formed by lava.\n\nIf NASA done more research about the face in Cydonia they might be able to figure out what it is and what caused it.\n\nUnitl someone says what it really is, it will just be a big mystery.\n\nYou can spot the head shaped figure from two miles away.\n\nPhotographing the landform became important to NASA and the Mars Global Surveyor.\n\nThey also felt that it was important for taxpayers.\n\nNo matter how cloudy or hard it was to see and capture the face, they still made it work.\n\nThe crew in the Mars Global Surveyor said there were alien markings that were hidden.\n\nWhen Malin's team tried again to find another photo they went on a cloudless day and used the maximum resolution and got another picture.\n\nWhen they used the maximum resolution you could see things that were even on the ground such as planes or pyramids.\n\nThey also stated that the landform was almost the same as a butte.\n\nThe landorms were common around the American West.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the midst of this technology driven-global world,most of the manpower is replaced by artificially intelligent robots.Some believe that as time goes all of the manpower work will be replaced by artificially intelligent robots.In my opinion,not all the tasks can be done by this type of robot,however most of the works they can manage.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, as everyone knows that we are living in the 21st century.where technology has a significant role in the day to day life,to make our daily chores easier.Admittedly,robots doing a great job even in the medical field.Nowadays,most medical surgeries are done by robots which are called robotic surgery.For instance,even in my medical practice life, I have witnessed the same.Robotic surgery is done for renal stone removal.The result of this robotic surgery is much higher than the manual one.The success rate is high and complications are less.At the same time,even for the space study, scientists sending robots to space.In addition to this, the agricultural sector is also handled by robots.For example,previously hundreds of labours were working in this agricultural field,whereas now only one robot or such type of machine has taken over the work from labours.As a result,time can be saved with much more benefits.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand,police officers and advocates activity may not be done by the robots.For court procedures, there should be direct questioning as well as cross-questioning depends upon victims or criminals statements , these all can't be managed by robots.Artificial intelligent robots are tuned with some programmes so they can not be always active,they will be needed some recharge or reactivations,hence we can not use them on a day to day basis for all-purpose.\r\n\r\nTo conclude,Artificially intelligent robots can do most of the tasks with some limitations, but they cannot do all of the works which humans can do.After all ,it is a man-made machine only,we cannot substitute it for all-purpose for what humans can do.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars can indead be a scary, or harmful thing. When you are in a car, you would want all the control you can get not little, half or none. Or it can be relaxing and intersting.. if nothing goes wrong.\n\nDriverless cars offer very little control from a human, which can also be an issue, or a nervous thing with some people or many people. Even newer cars today require less of a human handling type deal.\n\nDriverless cars can be a dangerous thing, when you have none of the\n\ncontrol of what your car may do next it could be a scary thing.\"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves..\". A driverless car that can \"brake itself\" could be very dangerous. For instance what happens if you come to a stop light\\sign and the car doesnt break, something goes wrong in the sensors and it keeps going. \"if technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer?\". This is one burning question that manufactuers have to face when\n\ndealing with driverless cars.If the senors or the automatic brakes, accelerate system decides one day it just does not\n\nwant to drive itself any more, and the human driver is not able to get back in control, who is at fault, the human driver, or the manufacturer?. The driver should not have to be worried about this happening, especially if they are new drivers, new teenage drivers not to mention the nervous cautious drivers.(heads up display) \"Such displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over- something not available to dirvers trying to text with a cell phone\". This is where danger comes in. If you are in your driverless car and some people might think that the car is in control i do not need to steer or break anytime soon, or at all i will just check my messages.If this happens and the \" heads up display\" does not give any type of heads up and the sensors or the automatic driving system instantly stops.. it is an accident waiting to happen.\n\nAlthough driverless cars may sound new and exciting to be able to have. There is always downsides of it that dealerhsips fail to explain, which is a recipe for something bad. Driverless cars need alot more work, and saftey hazards checked out before any one sets foot inside it. Saftey is key on the roads of a city, there should always be a car to match that saftey.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are coming faster than expected. They say there is one that is being relased this year. If this is the case it will be driverless about 90 percent of the time. The only time the driver will need to drive is around road work and accidents. The first completly driverless car is estimated to be relased around 2020. I think that the driverless cars will do wonders to the world.\n\nThe reason i think that driverless cars will be a good thing is there could be less accidents around the world. The main reason we have wrecks is because its mostly the person driving the car not paying attention. Driverless cars will always have a eye on the road so if it senses danger its going to go cautiously and warn you of the danger.\n\nAnother reason i think Driverless cars are a good idea is it will save more fuel in the long run. Driverless cars will more than likley run on a battery and or solor power to run. That also means that they will cause a lot less poulution in the atmosphere.\n\nThe last reason i think driverless cars will be a hit is it will be fun to use them. Just think if we can have driverless cars what else we could put in them. They could have bulit in WIFI, coffe makers, and we can even make them self starting. Just think of the endless possiblities that could happen.\n\nThose are the reason i think we should continue to devlop driverless cars. Less accidents, higher fuel savings, and the endless possiblites that come with it. If you dont think we should devolp dirverless cars read this and im sure it will change your mind on the matter at hand.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Drivless cars are coming! Google cofounder Sergey Brin envisions a future with a public transportation system. He envisions fleets of diverless cars form a public-transport system. He believe such cars would fundamentally change the world. Although everything seems good, there are some bad things about these cars too. Questions like who would be responsible if they crash, what happends when dealing with complicated traffic or road construction. Driveless cars is it really a good thing?\n\nDriveless cars may act all good but are theu really? Driveless cars would put way too many jobs out the window, taxi services, truck driving services, limo services they would all lose their jobs. Everyone would be out of work. They would all get replaced by technology. We would have a big unemployment rate. How do you know they might not malfunction and crash, you are putting your live and everyone in the cars life on the line too. The cars can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but still need human skills.\n\nTraffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. Many states will not test computer-driven cars for saftey reasons. If the technology fails and somoeone is injured, who is at fault? The car, the car should have the newest technology to drive anywhere and to be safe. Releases for a car capable of driving on autopiolet 90 percent of the time. What happends to the other 10? These cars arent safe.\n\nDriverless cars good or bad thing? Cars without drivers is a bad thing. So many things can go wrong the technology can fail anything. This is why we have laws to say it is only safe for a human driver to be drivng at all times. People who make them will need a lot of responsiblity to make these cars not have any problems so they don't ruin lives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Im against to what they are using to see kids if they are mad or sad about anything. That is not good to see what are kids emotional expressions the kids don't want any one to know why they are sad or mad about. Thats why Mona Lisa keeps a smile on her face because she doesn't want anyone to know she mad or sad about something that she doesn't want to tell anyone about what is happing. What if you are having a bad day at school or work or at home and you dont want anyone to know waht is happing so you keep a smile on your'e face. Its a computer software that can recognize emotions.\"The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles\". Imagine seeing your'e friend with a happy face but deep in side they are sad or mad about something that happend that day. Its valuable but at the same time no one wants anyone to know if they are having a bad day. What if someone used it on you too see if you were sad or mad or anything like that. You do not want anyone to know that you are having a bad day or anything that is happing in that day that you want no one to know.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood author created memmoir thankful He thankful parents coming Cuba The opertunties gave better education successful In memmoir thankfull al people helped new country supported family people supoorted Thankfull mood Narciso Rodriguez show d memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being a seagoing cowboy was much more than adventure, for me. I love being able to go out on the sea and have fun will helpping people with there problems make me super happy and I wouldn't have this job if my friend didn't tell me about it. For example (the world war11) I got to go to many places like China, Europe, and Italy.\n\nI was happy to help all this people with there problems and when we got to go on a ship, we had the opportunity to take turns to watch over the animals at night to feed them and to make sure that nothing bad is happening like fighting our the bottom of the ship is being filled up with water.\n\nSo I signed up to watch them and so I got the job. I had to stay up super late to watch them and to I went to tell the captin that every thing was okay and so on my way I slipped on some water and I fell.\n\nI had almost fell overboared but I didn't, thanks to a peice of meatel on the side of the boat and i was happy that I didnt die. I am thankful that I am still alive after breaking my ribs, and slidding down a latter. I soon recovered and was back to the job and so we took all the animals back to were they were.\n\nSo we made a game place were they were. We played a whole bunch of games and we did are ruiten, until we had another jod were we had to go get animals and watch over them. I am thankful to be able to do this job with people who care about me and support me well this job.\n\nI wonder what are next job will be? Will I break another bone in my body? Can I survie another animal watch? Will I survie breaking another bone in my body? I don't know if i can survie another bone in my boby that can be broken?\n\nAfter about a month we get a call to go get some animals and so we went to go get them and I have to say it was a long ride to go to Teaxs and it was close to were my uncle lived and so we got there and there was a huge sand storm and so we had to go get alll the horses, and take them to the sea and then I relized that my uncle had this one horse and it did not like me at all. As we were getting the horses around I seen that horse. The captin asked me if I wanted to watch the animals that week and I said \", Yes I will'. So I was up all night watching all the horses and so I had to feed them. I was feed the one horse that hated me the most and it kicked me right in the neck as I was feeding him. I was out for a really long time and my best friend came down there and found me on the floor \"sleeping\".\n\nHe woke me up and said are you ok and I said yes and so I tried to get up but I couldn't and then I relized that my neck was broken.\n\nSo I was rushed to the hostpital and I had to get a neck brace and let me say that thing was a pain in the my neck. I was sent back to the ship and so I could work so I asked were are all the horses. My best friend said we sent them back. I said okay, I didn't really care about that. At this point I dint care about anything. A few weeks past and I was able to get back to work and I didn't have to wear the neck brace anymore. The captine said\", No more working nights anymore\". I said\", I agree I can't risk breaking another bone in my body\". So I didn't work on nights anymore whitch didn't bother me at all.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think we should have the Facial Action Coding System on all school computers because nine times out of tent the student does not like the assignment that the teacher has assigned and if the Facial Action Coding system could tell that by the expression on the students face it could be really useful. And it could also help the student because if the student does not like the assignment the system could make adjustments to the assignment from the students facial expression so that the student enjoys the assignment. But what if the teacher wants you to do that specific assignment and then all of the Facial Action Coding System changed the assignment half way through or when the student was almost done and the teacher does not beleive the student?\n\nThen the student would get in trouble by his teacher and would not have any proof that he/she was telling the truth. But if they could make adjustments to the system after trying it out in the classroom. Like if a student is almost done with his assignment the system should just unconnect from the assignment once the student is to a certaint point on the assignment so that the teacher or the student does not have to worry about the system changing the assignment halfway through.\n\nOr when the student is almost done. But if the system could detect that the student is confused with the assignment the Facial Action Coding system could send a warning or something to the teacher to let them know when a certain student needs help or. If the student\n\ndoes not know what they are doing. But I think they should atleast try the system out in a classroom for a couple of months and see how it works and make the adjustments that they need to before they make it an official thing.\n\nBecuase if they just put it on every school computer and the system has multiple things wrong with it then no school is going to want it. And then after everyone else hears from the school about it then not many people would want the system on their computer because. They would be afriad that it is always going to mess up what they are doing.\n\nBut if it was up to me yes i think they should put the Facial Action Coding System on school computer becuase. I think it could come in handy more times than one and also a teacher can not always tell when the student is confused or bored of the assignment. So if they could get the Facial Action Coding System working without any problems it could help not only students or teachers out but it could help out the whole world because students are not the only people that get confused about something.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood author creates inthe memoir Narciso Rodriguez Narciso Home The BluePrints Of Our Lives happy loving time Narciso creates mood explains familys troubles friends local neighbors Narcisco explains went Which makes person feel Narciso also creates happy loving mood would say People came Made mostly Spanish Cuban Italian immigrants would come one city would unite help one another They would also consider one big family consists happy loving Those moods author Narciso Rodriguez creates memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Yes believe certain materials book s music movie s magazines etc removed shelves library offensive way Librarian s shouldnt bad stuff shelves libraries offensive people Libraries interesting books good story s read kid books There sexual racial book s movies magazines etc Those thing s found offensive taken shelf little kids go library shouldnt able see thing s check I agree library s wide range different kind book s movies etc everybody taste like But thing s offensive shouldnt shelve s If library s didnt offensive thing s shelf nobody would see arguments It would much easier wouldnt cause problems people wouldnt shelf So would take thing s shelf nobody would see would problem s libraries Adults kids could go library pick wanted without seeing offensive thing s shelves would make much better place enjoy", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars have always been a point of interest as our technology advances. I am for driverless cars because they could make the roads safer.\n\nThese driverless cars are not completely driven by a computer. There are certain times where the person in the car has to take over, like work zones or accidents. However, for the most part, these cars have so many sensors and cameras in them that they can drive without the help of a human driver. This could mean that accidents that happen when the driver is distracted or incapacitated, would never happen. Once our technology advances ever furthur and these cars actualy become driverless, then they could prevent accidents.\n\nCars made by companies like Google or Tesla are not only interested in make a cars driverless, but they want to make a car that would be better for the environment. Google cofounder Sergey Brin envisions a car that \"would use half of the fuel\", and Tesla's focus has been on electric cars. Both of these options reduce or elimate the need for fossil fuels, therefore reducing carbon emmissions and taking better care of our environment.\n\nAlthough there is some serious work to be done to be able to test these cars to improve the cars to be legally considered safe, I think that the reality of driverless cars is not to far away, and that it is a good thing. They could make the road a safer place and help out our environment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many mysteries that are unsolved in the world we live in, which could ignite curiosity in humans. Thus, people will examine things that are more familiar first such as their own places. Numerous countries’ citizens are becoming seriously interested in figuring out the history behind the house or building that they live in. \r\n\r\nVarious reasons could be mentioned in this case. First of all, people cannot resist being curious about their surroundings. It is beneficial to always have a query, since it is one of the top reasons why archeologists and explorers are professional occupations. Those who question are proved to be intelligent and brave as they are passionate to find the answers. Secondly, buildings and houses are mysterious on their own, especially if those are old or used to be abandoned. Such things seemed unrealistic but according to some reports, people believe the house can be haunted by spirits if there were a murder, or was built in cemetery area. Knowing about these factors can help them avoid choosing to live in that house or building.\r\n\r\nExamining an entire tower is not simple, but not impossible. Those who are interested in finding the truth could easily look up the Internet which has almost every essential information; with money, accessing the datas is completely in our hands. In addition, researching by asking the elderly residents who have lived there for a long period is also an effective and traditional way. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there are many different ways to explain why researching the history of the house or building is a trend with some potential approaches to find out the story.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper This world filled electronics These days computer latest hit But even though s popular really best item Many children even adults hooked onto computer It taking away life Four five people year losing interest going outside play That s spend life We want children active healthy couch potato Each day kids getting addicted computer Now every time parent needs punish ground child take away electronics What ever happened grounding going hang friends playing outside Another horrifying conclusion computer us rip apart us loved ones Kids worried CAPS CAPS even trying slay dragon spending time family They would pick computer someone life forever This computer splittling families apart Now families spend time eat dinner together Also rather talking parents problem kids going websites like CAPS CAPScom More people nt enjoy things computer Not many like going enjoying nature Some nt like reading anymore rather play games Some people nt even want pick phone call pizza Also people look jobs nt go newspaper anymore go internet The world revolving around electronics We need end kids grandchildren start getting shape start relying comuter everything Do really wa nt destroy world lose bonding families I say make life better get rid computers", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The ways effects cyclist setting place road shaped riding hills roughness rode There sign said rough road ahead exceed posted speed limit That sign didnt see would speed didnt know speed go cyclist gotten hurt The road made cars speed limit hard", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think there is some good things about the Electroal College but some things I do not agree. Overall I believe that we should change the Electoral College. It takes to much time add all the votes and the persents to see who got the most of the votes. Than the senate and the house of representative talk about is and check if they counting is right. Not every one gets to vote.\n\nMaybe if all people got to vote it will be better and will be ble to find out a better count because each state has so many  electoral votes. The thing I don't like is that not everyone has the right to vote and the should. It should be a freedom to vote after this is a free country. We also have the freedom of speech why can't we have a freedom to vote. I may understand that not all people are from this country but reall who is thatb is what make us different but, if we would understand it well be better for every to vote. That way it will be more fair than having only those that qulify.\n\nAnother thing is that when we vote the add up how mant people voted for this person and how many voted for the other and that n there they decided who won that state. add up the electoral vote but what happens to the other who wanted the other person they get pushed away and it should be like that. Those people should get a say in who the want too not automaticly be part of the one who won that state.\n\nWe should change the way we vote for our persident in the way it will become more equal and not asume it is right. To me the elctoral college just rounds up the vote in the state elector. We should and give everyone a chance too vote of course they would be 18 and older but, aleast to try maybe the outcome well be better and more fair towards to election.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Over the past few decades, the issue of housing shortage in an urban area has been a major concern because an expensive land caused serious problems in society. Although some people claim that only governments can deal with this matter, in my opinion with a combination both of the government and an individual, this problem can be tackled as I will discuss in the following essay. \r\n\r\n\r\nThere is no doubt that governments have the power to establish legislation and subsidies. For example, governments will fine real estate agencies if they overcharge people who buy houses in the city, Therefore, real estate agencies would provide a reasonable price. Furthermore, another thing governments can do is to provide financial supported who buy houses in the city . A good example of this is Taiwan authority share a proportion of money to subsidies people buying a housing in urban areas. As a result, citizens can alleviate the burden of financial concern. \r\n\r\n\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, an ndividual also need to take action in order to deal with this problem. People should try to to find vertical apartments instead of private houses in urban areas. For example, In Singapore, the majority people tend to live in high-rise building so that more people can live in the city. By doing this, the apartments can accommodate more population in the urban area. \r\n\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, despite the fact that state should take more responsibility, from my perspective, a combination of authority and individuals should be coordinated to solve the problems. Provided benefits as well as are encouraged, people to live in urban areas, this phenomenon can be alleviated.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, film stays, pop musicians or sports stars are becoming one of most highest paid jobs. We all at least hread some evidences of this. The big fancy houses, luxury cars or yachts, these are just some of standard equipment. Is this fact good for us? Is this right for our society? Some people rised hot debate on this issue.\nSome of them believe this high payment is wrong. They believe those stars or musicians didn't really improve our society too much. They did creat some arts for our spiritual world. However, those contributions are far behind scientists, politicians, doctors and so on. Sadly, we can not live on the songs, the films. Those arts are great, but they aren't great enough to creat a such big payment gap between other jobs. In my country, my teacher, basically a unknown scientist, only has 700 dollars per month. This is incredible low since famous singer have endless zero behind their payment account.\nHowever, the other side of people think their payment is rightful and I am one of them. I don't really love this fact but it's truth because those unbelievable high payment is the result of the our attention to them. In this digital world, attention means money. That is the new rule of our society so there are nothing wrong. As for those scientists or doctors, some of us even can't remeber them before we need them.\nSo, in my opinion, these payment with uncountable zero are rightful. However, we should rethink of it. Why we spend so much attention on those jods? Why we don't care about other jobs which are means alot for us. That is the thing that we should change.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The advantages in limiting car use is very important.  we would have towrroy as much as we do about drunk drivers or someone dying becasue of car crashes.  We alwys hear on te news about how someone was killed by drunk driving if we limit car usage the deaths of people would be at an all time low.  Also limiting car usage would also mean not as much polution.  we breath in a lot of polution through the day because when trucks drive by all that black smoke goes up into the air that we breath in, that can't be good for our bodies.\n\nAnoter example would be gas, we always complain about how much gas is if we limited cars then we wouldnt have to pay for gas anymore.  To have cars we pay insurance every month if we didnt have cars imagine on how much money we would be saving, on not paying for insurances or gas and other things we need for our cars to be in good shape and safe for us to drive.  Another thing is walking or riding bikes t get to point A to poin B would decrease the chance for obeasty.\n\nI think less crime would happen if we limited cars. For example less peope would be hit, it wouldnt promote drunck driving, it would help the population, and we would have less money problems.  Amerca is in debt so if we limit car usage we could pay off that debt and we would be helping te world at the same time.  By not poluting the air, Our bodies would be in better shape because we would have to walk or ride ikes to get somewhere.\n\nIn conclusion, I think if we limit car usage America would be a better lace to live in.  Not as many deaths, money problems, or polution.  In my essay I listed examples of how it would help the economy and people around the world. The world would be a better place with no cars to worry about.  money would not be an issue for most of us wwe would have one less thing to worry about.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine a world where you get out of bed. Fix your self or your child something to eat, Get ready and walk out of the door. Only not to a car that you youself will be drivin, but a car that will drive you any where you want it too.\n\nThe problem that I have with driverless cars is, that I believe it's another way for humans to be lazy. In todays world we have machines to vacum our floor, and wash our dishes. Now we want cars to drive us places? The world is getting lazy. America is one of the countries with the highest obesity rate, now driving a car has nothing to do with your weight, but it has something to do with your mind. When driving a car you have to be alert. Not only for yourself but for others around you. When I drive my mother always tells me to watch myself and the people around me, because you may be paying attention, but others might not be. When growing up getting and driving a car at 16 is almost every teenagers dream, but how will the future teenagers of the world get that experience if we have driverless vehicles? When I got my license it was a feeling of accomplishment. I had read that long drivers manual forover a month and when I took both of those test I was ready, but with a driverless car will a person even get that feelling? Will they even need a license or even a car of their own?\n\nNow I get what the article says about driverless cars use less fuel than a normal one, and \"Driving fun in a new way\".\n\nHaving a driverless car would be pretty cool. Getting into a car and typing in where you want to go and the car just taking you there. Or just telling it what to do due to voice actiivation. But, is driving suppose to be fun? Or a way to get to one place or another. If driving was fun it wouldn't be safe. People would be drag racing throughout the city causing chaos and getting into serious damage.\n\nMoving into a world where technology is becoming more and more relevant is good, but driverless cars..Not so much. It was very innovative,and futuristic, but in my opinion a waste of money, time, and space.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My mom went doctors couple weeks ago school went like didnt leave till So little sister played game entertain ourselfs So watched tv played ipods told stories bored So got boring sit wait sit wait school I thought much left lie dear got fly cut seats But turns someone else asleep Then sudden I feel someone shaking saying lexi tayler my mom called woke ready go mall So went spent rest able day mall And story time I patient sitting doctor", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this technology – oriented society, individuals are bombarded by advertising, therefore it makes people think the advertisement things are quite necessary and useful in their daily life. Consequently, this phenomenon brings some negative influence on human life. In my point, I wholeheartedly agree that with this point of view.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I wholeheartedly agree that advertising is important in individual’s lives. The development of contemporary society nowadays allows the effect to combine visual and audio making advertisements to persuade viewers to feel it is really necessary and mandatory purchases. For instance, floor detergent cleaning is advertised on a lot of social media platforms with the eye-catching effects and attracts viewers that them understand its importance and then they buy it. Anther reason why I agree with the harmful influence of advertising on human life is the children’s erroneous awareness of junk food. The majority of parents are willing to buy some snacks for their children, by contrast, the minority is not. As a result, some children are ashamed, then they will force their parents to buy that because of misconceptions of snacks.\r\n\r\nAdditionally, the appearance of advertising is ubiquitous will also stimulate consumerism. First of all, the daily life of individuals will be interrupted by advertisements. To be specific, when they are watching some of the entertainment shows and it is browing so some people feel it make them uncomfortable and leading to losing interest to continue watching. Especially, some advertising will set the non-realistic of success and beauty standards. The evidence is the appearance of the Iphone, which not only attracts customers due to the function but also the fashion and luxury for consumers. Finally, human’s daily ativities will be changed because of some advertisements on social media platforms.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I do believe that advertising will alter the individual’s awareness and has a negative impact on people’s lives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the increase in the number of visitors to tourist sites, nowadays, It has become a common thing to see used objects and containers thrown around tourist sites. Even worse, some foreigners who come to visit try to brainwash the local people and debunk their culture. Recently, People who have observed this has tried to organize a movement to try to avoid these and be responsible tourist. However, despite their claim, they are yet to get the trust of the public as many people believe it is impossible for every tourist to be responsible. In this essay, I will give my opinion on how hard it is to generalise for large groups of visitors and how it should be claimed and understood instead. \r\n\r\nThere are many visitors who really care and worry about the places they usually go to visit. And they usually come up with innovative ideas on how to improve the system in handling the preservation of culture and environment. For instance, last year 8 Australian tourists who went to visit a historical place in Sudan found the environment around to be in an alarming state. and Immediately after they went back home they were able to raise funds that will be used to clean the surroundings and renovate the historical area. So, although not every tourist is responsible, there are genuine tourists who want to protect the environment they go to visit.\r\n\r\nNeedless to say, however, there is a large swath of people who does things that harm the tourist sites. Some don't care about the objects they use and where they throw them. And others are busy trashing the local culture just because it doesn't align with their way of living or the culture they came from. For instance, during the last world cup people were criticizing Qatar for not allowing similar-gender marriage and trying to impose their own culture.\r\n\r\nTherefore, saying every tourist will be responsible is impractical. But at the same time, we can not generalize the acts of some bad people to every tourist as there are many good tourists who genuinely want to protect the culture and environment. So, the narrative that responsible tourists have started to pay attention to protecting the environment should not be taken literally and it should not be understood negatively. It instead should be encouraged and the people who took the initiative to start the movement should be appreciated as this is how things improve and eventually it might become a norm for every tourist.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Across the globe, a lot of individuals support the idea of allowing high school students to criticize their teachers and also challenge them by asking questions during the classes in order to make develop in academic areas, while some groups of people deem that those kinds of policies will result in losing regulation and honour of the students towards their schoolteachers. In this essay, I will try to go into both sides and provide my own opinion as well.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, those in favour of an expansion of pupils’ power in the classroom have valid reasons to be concerned about the skillsets teachers possess and the educational growth of this generation. It is an undeniable fact that every human being has their own unique character and as a result ,that each student requires a different way of teaching approach. Therefore, the government should introduce special policies upon schools to give certain opportunities for students to give feedback and let their teachers know the side they are lacking in teaching and we can witness enormous progress in the school system. Further and more importantly, if society stuck behind the old methods of schooling over decades and decades of time we might never discover the gifted students who can have a massive influence on society later on. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are many people who would argue that handing power to immature boys and girls over someone’s career is not the right modification in the educational system and incur possible problems on the way too. For instance, some teenagers might grade the teacher incorrectly not just he or she is bad at their job but punishment that was given to them. This will jeopardize one’s career and affect the self-esteem of a teacher. It can be spotted that a feeling of losing a spot can push school teachers to overestimate the student when it comes to marking. Moreover, this policy leads to cross the line between student and teacher and respect for tutors will decline dramatically especially among high school pupils.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I would stress that I support the idea of small changes in the teaching system like those but I think giving suggestions is a definitely a better option rather than criticizing in this way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Readers Some might think people exercise computers They nt act outside enough interact family pets You also think getting enough exerciseWell right I going explain way wrong You things like learn socialize actually become healthy The first thing could learn While internet go learning websites Some thoes websites teach faraway places like many You also learn people cultures Take example could learn culture celebrate Another thing could take online classes trouble school Another thing could computer socialize You might think say computer cant socialize family friends Well There websites like facebook talk family friends Now webcam people When webcam see person talking hear could hear microphone webcam Lastly could go chatrooms like aol instant message talk people sight The last thing become healthy Is surprising yes go onto websites teach day day eat right exercise Websites like esangcom car give might eating schedual right After website could go get need Another thing computer offers handeye coordination While looking screen controling mouse mouse controls go worldwide web Lastly eventually want go outside visiting websites show moments gardens world So hopefully agree computers acctually benift things life I showed learn talk people socialize lastly help health", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"\n\nthe Electoral college have been discovred by our founding fathers in the constitution\"\n\nwhy distroy something that was given to us? over time we have been voting for the Electoral College not the president. I personally think we should be able to vote based on popular vote,\n\nOver years, we voted for the Electoral College it consits of voting for President and Vice President and the counting of the electoral votes by congress, sounds diffict right? well this is how they run things, personally I think we should vote based on popular votes because according to source 2 under \"\n\nwhat's wrong with the electoral college\"\n\nmany people get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate, yikes! not always do we get control whom we vote for , it all depends on the state. We should be equal, Electoral college is unfair to voters. in the same source they state that the electoral college is unfair, outdated and irrational harsh words? but its true.\n\nLets take a look at the present. President Obama who won the vote, got 29 electoral votes since were a large state we get more votes. take a look at map where its shows the breakdown of the number of electoral votes, it shows each state. many small state have less than 5 electoral votes simply because its not huge, but yet again you're voting for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors. Popular votes have many benfits such as equallty and justice's. In source 3:\n\n\"In Defense of the Electoral College:Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the president\"\n\nparagraph 21 popular vote was very close in Florida (2012) .\n\nIt have been said that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off a potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their states. popular votes have a chance and will be picked based on popular vote. In source 3: states that they is no pressure for run-off elections ,It's provided a clear winner , sounds good doesn't it? One single vote can decide an election sounds stressful. Popular votes are bascially stress free and in the Democrats in Texas ,Republicans in california  their vote have no effect they leave it to the popular vote.\n\nIn conclusion, popular votes have such great benfits and had more justice and give better oppourity to those who bascially are in a sticky sitution. Electoral College have so much to do with the voce president and is indirect.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A crazy idea none the other Facial Action Coding Systems are being tested. This opens up so many posibilities for up and coming ideas and inventions to be created and used to beter humand lives.\n\nThe classroom has always been a contraversial thing. For some students it works perfect to be in a room with all there peers studng the same thing, but others can get nerous by the masses of people around them and find it hard to study and focus. Dr. Huang Claims \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored and modify the lesson to better fit the student.\" Great we have now turned the next generation of kids into shadows that do not talk to anyone but there own computer. Do not get me wrong I fully understand being intemidated by your peers and the people around you, but let's behonest nothing will ever be able to beat the human judgement or the intellecual need to actually talk and interact with someone else face to face.\n\nLook at people who get trapped on and island for example, they are cut off from society, ar alone, and lose all human interaction. When they are finally found and rescued to actually fit into there old normal lives it is increditably hard for them because they aren't accustom to it anymore.\n\nIt's been proven kids that are more sociable in high school do better in the work force once they become adults. Is that not what school is all about training The next generationg to help make the world a better place.\n\nOverall I am againist the Facial Action Coding System. People need people no computer will beat an exprenced teacher in the classroom, no computer could motivate a kid who is falling behind like a actually living teacher could. You will never get some real life expirence if you never interact with people therefore I will alway stick with getting up and going to school. Aswell as learning to detect emotions by myself.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Explore the unknown planet Venus with smartness and work. Venus is a worthy pursuit of studying where it have values of discovering new knowledge and the finding more about the planet itself. Scientist could discover the difference between our planet and other planets by atmosphere, geographic, time and speed. That is why Venus is a great challenge to us for humans to study.\n\nFirst, in the text, Venus often referred as Earth's twin since Astronomers thought that Venus used to be a planet with many different life forms. The planet have suface of rocky sediment similar to our valleys, mountains, and craters. The planet might be a survivable place for humans but, not in a good environment.\n\nThe second reason, it is a diffcult challenge. Venus is the hottest planet in the solar system. Venus's thick atmosphere have almost 97 percent carbon dioxide that human can not breath it. They have limited time to breath if they are on planet Venus. It have atmospheic pressure that is ninety times greater than planet Earth. And that's not the only problem, the text say that, \"Even more challengeing are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere.\" These condition are more dangerous than other human could ever encouter on Earth but, the worth of discovery is an enormous value for better technology.\n\nThe third is that researchers could come up with new better technology that can survive longer in worst condition. One of them is computers from modern time, since, they are \"enormously power, flexible, and quick.\" And the other is using a material made for electronics named silicon carbide since silicon can survive on Venus's surface for three weeks. Humans can actually survive on planet Venus but not for very long time.\n\nDiscovering new knowledge with studies of Venus can lead us with equal thought of mind.\n\nThis proves that this have some value from going through dangerous challenge and hardwork. New ways for better survival is a worth to accept. Be always up on your challenge for new discovery.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper opion thig computer used time People use talk friends family online People also use computers home work online And last rason I say computer used fun stuff game play I use computer look teams Now Computers good society people use computers talk friends family This good reson becuase family So I think good way talk An friends good way move talk The reson bad thing people like older men use computer child pornarapy talk younger girls sex thats right Now using computer homework The reson computers good us people use computers homework This good need something history thats good good everything need computer Now computer good society reson computer good fun stuff Computer every game want kid games year old sister goes games match Teenagers play games computer The compter cool I see football team Ho This computer good These opion compter used time peopl use talk frend family online Peope also use computer homework Finally last reson use fun games kids An I check teams", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everyone has dreamed about aliens living on mars at least once in their life. As exciting as it would be to discover living beings on mars, there is no evidnece today that would support that theory. Here at NASA, we have been debating this topic for more than thirty years. The Face could not have been created by aliens because there are no alien markings and there are landforms very similar to the Face here on Earth.\n\nWhen analyzing a digital image, you can dicern things 3 times larger than the actual pixel size. If aliens had created the Face, there would be some kind of marking that the aliens would have made. On our 2001 trip to the big red planet, we used our best cameras with their absolute maximum resolution. The images that we took showed no sign of any martian markings. This proves that aliens could not have created the Face on Mars.\n\nHere on Earth we have many different types of landforms. One of which looks very similar to the Face on Mars. This landform is called a Mesa. These landforms here weren't created by living beings. They were created by natural causes, like erosion. So, since the landforms here weren't made by creatures, why would the landform on Mars have been made by creatures? There is no evidence that proves the Face could have been created by alien life forms.\n\nIn conclusion, although everyone here on Earth would love to discover that the Face was created by aliens, there is no evidence that can prove that theory. There are not any alien markings and there are landforms on Earth that look very similar to the Face on Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think author concludes story saying shows adappting new place It shows isent going give Just like geese dont give flying back forth ever winter spring", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people believe that getting a university education is the most essential key to becoming successful in life. However, the counterparts disagree with this idea and reckon it is no longer work at present. From my point of view, I would go with the latter view as I think a university admission is not all that people should give in their lives, but it is the effort in doing something that will lead them to what they want. In the following paragraphs, both of these views will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, it is true that most people in society prefer to enrol in a university. First of all, other than getting a degree certificate, they believe that a university is the best place for them to gain some skills and wisdom such as communication and management skills, and theoretical knowledge. Furthermore, they think that enrolling in a university would heighten up their educational backgrounds as well as have more opportunities to be hired in a better job position. To exemplify this, there was a piece of news reported that more than 70% of the employees working as managers in different types of companies have completed a bachelor or at least 4 years of university without taking a gap year. It can be said that the qualifications from universities lead to a better spot in society. Hence, they create a pathway to a successful life.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I reckon a university is not everything in humans' lives. It can not determine the values of humans nor the quality of life, especially whether a person will be achieving their life's goals or not. I would say that passion, effort, and experiences are what lead the public to success ,not a degree certificate. Having a higher educational background does not mean a person will accomplish their goals. For instance, Wownam, one of the richest and successful entrepreneurs in Thailand. She was able to earn 100,000,000 baht from selling her own beauty products within the age of 20. Moreover, she did not attend a university but took those times to gain experiences in getting herself involved in a business until she decided to make her own brand, which is still the talk of the town today. Her brand impressed and at the same time amazed society as she has not taken any university's courses. Thus, having no high qualification from an educational institution does not mean a person will be facing a failure in life.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although there are numerous benefits in achieving academic degrees from universities, I would still say that the most crucial part of being successful is to give all our best in everything we do. This is why I opine that the advantages of having passion and inserting a lot of effort are clearly outweighed the benefits of having a university education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Implementation of automation machines has exponentially increased in various workplaces and some individuals believe this can lead to the job replacement for the humans completely. Although most of the jobs that require a set of instructions will be carried out by bots, there are some tasks that can be accomplished economically and will still require manpower. This essay will discuss why only the majority of work will be replaced by artificial intelligence computers.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, operations that require critical thinking and a set of algorithms to perform will require robots. Since they perform on computer programs and the chances of getting the issue are minimal; the time taken to complete delivery is significantly quick. Automobile manufacturing factories in Europe, for example, have different bots and electronic gadgets based on the effort; Like, painting, designing and manufacturing the vehicle and assembling complex parts of the main Engine. For these reasons, a critical business that requires analytical thinking will be replaced by an appliance.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the organization having a low budget will still require human labour. Because installation and maintenance of artificially intelligent devices require huge capital, this can be achieved by hiring skilled labour at minimum cost. For instance, a daily worker who works on keeping the community clean requires less capital compared to floor cleaning bots. Hence, some skilled work still requires human connection and cannot be replaced totally by the android appliance.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the usage of electronic machines has grown in many sectors. performance that requires complicated operations would be substituted by robots; while, the skilled tasks still require humans and gadgets would not be fully replaced. Finally, only the majority of the career will be taken over by high-performance instruments.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Having this technology is very valuable to have used in computers, It will help in may situations. It can help someone calm down or ease on stress. It could help someone with their studies, or even just make someone laugh. overall the use of this technology could go a long way and help in many cases.\n\nFACS (Facial Action Coding System) Can be used for many things, Like helping an in investigation as said in paragraph 8, It states it can see if a politician or a celebrity isn't being thruthful. This being said, You could use the computer and have it ask questions to see if the facial expressions change on an idividual to see if they are lying or not. You can have them verbally answer the questions and as they do so FACS can read the expressions given to see if they show a facial expession of anger, fear, or sadness.\n\nAdvertisers can use this system to help produce income, by generating advertisments that the reader enjoys, FACS can see the facial expression and determine if the person seeing the advertisment likes it or not, if they do like it then the advertisment will change to something they do like, if they enjoy it, it may produce and advertisment that is similar or better suiting to their likeings. as said in paragraph 6. They can use the software to help make you happy and show you pictures or advertisments to brighten up your day due to the software being able to read your facial expressions for sadness.\n\nSchools could really use this software for students who are having trouble in class with studies or homework, the software can read your expression of being confused or not understanding the assignment and make it easier for the student or make it slower so the student can understand it. This is stated in paragraph 6 as well. This will help students pass classes because the program can adapt to the students learning habits and help them throughout the class.\n\nOverall, FACS (Facial Action Coding System) can help in many ways, from keeping criminals of the streets, helping buisnesses get advertisments people like, or even just make your day better. The use of the technology can benefit everyone. Not just students, but anyone in everyday life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Drverless car's are exciting in theory, but not practical in safety. These cars can brake, accelerate, and steer themselves. None of these sound too pleasing to me. But that's O.K. tough because they save on gas. Right? Wrong.\n\nWhile these may seem like good attributes they can be very dangerous. If your car decideds to accelerate on the high way without your permission nor a good reason you will most likely end up in an accident.\n\nIf your car was to brake while you were driving on the highway witha car directly behind you, said car would hit you. Being hit from behind at a high rate of speed can cause you to go through your windsheild. If you are wearing a seatbelt it could sever your head.\n\nA car steering itself cannot be good eaither. What if your ardecides it wants to make a sharp turn druing a red light and it takes into the middle of traffic heading your way?\n\nNone of these possibilities are helpful to human kind. A driverless car may sound good in therory, but it is arisk you have to deiced if you want to take. Since your car will be contollring itself it must run on some type of thechnology. Technology that people can hack into and contol.\n\nThese cars may not be the best idea from my point of view. However, if you wish to have one then so be it. I beg of you though to consider the risks you are taking by getting one. Sure they may save money on gas, but at what price death?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Giving details and information, I think the author explained well the dangers of Venus. He explained the temperatures and how hot it can get there, how it can melt metal things and that it's just not worth living there. But it is worth exploring as in studying it, the rocks and maybe they can find something that could possibly live there. The author supports the idea of studying by saying in paragraph 8 how \"Venus has value\" and how \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limilted by dangers and doubts but she be expanded to meet the very edges or imagination and innovation.\n\nThe author says that it gets over 800 F in Venus, says that it could've been possibly like Earth years ago, where humans can live in. But NASA has to do more studying on rocks and other sediments and onjects on Venus. The author explaines how much carbon dioxide is covering Venus, and I believe carbon dioxide is so good for a planet. The planet isn't very useful to live in since it crushes metalic things, and for example cars, something we need to get around places.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am against driverless cars because they could cause confusion and delay. They can also be one of the most dangerous things that man kind has made. The safety of the cars are a problem.\n\nFirst, there are people in the world that are smart and can hack into almost anything. What if someone hacked you car and was able to control where you car goes? Either they are out to kill you or just mess with you. Hackers like that could have you car crash into something to either kill you or to target somthing else. They could have your car plung straight into a body of water. But there are the hackers that can mess with you. They can keep you car from turning on or even mess with where you want the car to drive to. What if terrorists got a hold of our car systems? I dont think the world needs anymore wars.\n\nNext, what if its not he hackers but the car itself? The car can simply have something wrong with it. The car could probibly have somehting wrong with its technology, and It could malfunction and either kill you or just not work any more. when you are driving and your car suddenly stops driving in the middle of a highway, what would you do?\n\nLastly, \" who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer? You were the one that was driving it you could of done something to the car. But then again, the car company could of made a mistake in the technology resulting in your accident. Each side of the conflict would think that it wasnt there fault, and it could go back and forth in court.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars are not a good idea in the future. All they cause is confusion, danger, and delay. Driverless cars are just another cayotic thing the world has to deal with if it started to become a bother.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Changing our ways on how we use cars for the better? Is it just so happen that people are using there car less than usual? In many places like Germany, Paris, Bogota are changing the ways to use cars. To reduce every little problem cars are causing. Traffic jams, smogs, and reducing greenhouse gas emmisions, people are getting smart about using there cars everyday. Maybe people are tired of using all cars of the time.\n\nWhen people buy car, it gives them alot of freedom knowing they area able to go where ever they're heart desires. Lately people aren't feeling the whole waiting in traffic if theres an accident or just to much cars. Bus rides, trains, taxi are helping reduce this. People can go somewhere without waiting that long just for a little price. In Germany there are new laws where they put a prices to put cars and there is only certian places you can put there cars at. 70% of families in Germany have do not own cars and 57% sold there cars because of this new law? You  would think thats people would complain about having cars and having no place to put them. But many people are accuatly happy that they put this new type of law. Many people prefered to have this happen.\n\nSmogs? what are smogs? smogs are grey clouds that hurt is in ways we dont even know. Cars emmit these deadly gases and we dont know it. Cars arent the only one who emmit they clouds of grey smoke, factories emmit this also. Which is not helping our ecosystem at all. In Paris they had an order to help redude this problem. On mondays motorists with even-numbered liscense plates were ordered to leave their cars at home which on the following day people with odd numbered liscenes plates were doing the same thing if they did not follow this ruling they were have to suffer a thirty one dollar fine. This helped alot with the smog.\n\nPlaces like Germany and Paris arent the only one who are changing the ways. In Bogota they have a car free day which only allows you to take a bicycle, taxi, buses or whatever you want but do not take a car or suffer the rath of fine. Going on for three years now people are saying they enjoy these types of days because everything is more relaxing it reduces stress and air pressure which is a really good thing. Even when it rains it doesn't stop people from participating from this. There is even a 118 mile bicycle path that shows how much people want to change the way they use cars. \"Parks and sports centers also have bloomed throughout the city: uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaces by broad, snooth sidewalks; rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic; and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up.\"\n\nMany sciencetists are believing that the car culture is coming to an end. Cars sales have drop alot. People are taking the bus, taxis, and even trains to avoid traffic. \"What most intrigues me is that rates of car ownership per household and per person started to come down two to three years before the downturn.\" Younges ages don't even drive till the age of 21 or they don't even care till then. They can usually care poll to places like partys, mall and the beach. They don't need a seperate car for each person when they are all going to the same place. Which is feel its a good and bad things. Its good because poeple are caring more that were causing harm to our own home and that they know that they can do all they want together and still have fun. It causes harm to busineses many stores could go out of business.\n\nIt does not matter if we try to stop using cars or not we are always hurting in some other way. Traffic jams, smogs and reducing greenhouse emmisions are just the begining of this all. We can do way more if we put out mind set to it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The phenomenon of schools should provide non-formal curriculums for students has aroused wide concern among various circles. Divergent as people's views on this issue in question may be, I believe that schools should provide an all-rounded education for students.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, only providing a formal subject for students, such as English, Chinese and Mathematics, this in turn reduces the workload on teacher and pupil. To illustrate, in Hong Kong, teachers are usually responsible for multiple subjects. More subjects can only be the stress for the teacher. Moreover, this is the same for students, they already have a lot of curriculums. Additional subject means more homework to them. That homework should not be the only memory of their childhood, and teachers should have enough time to relax and recharge their energy to teach students.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, putting non-formal subjects into schooling means pupils can have an all-rounded education. School should help children grow up and prepare for their future, not just pass the knowledge to them. For example, besides the knowledge, we should teach them how to use it appropriately so that they can grow up healthily. In addition, non-formal subjects may help children develop their creativity. For instance, student use their imagination to draw pictures during art class, this will help them to increase their ability of creative. As a result, they will be a treasure to our society.\r\n\r\nUnder this line of thinking, although there are good arguments in favour of not adding non-formal subjects into formal education, I still believe that teaching all-rounded is necessary for children.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should join the seagoing cowboys. A seagoing cowboy is where you go over seas and take care of animals to help a country. A reason you should go to the sea going cowboys is that it's not only going to another county, but you can see nastional monuments and explore fun places. Luke Bomberger said that you will have an amazing time there. He also said that it was more than an adventure it was opening up the world to him. Luke Bomberger said that it's way more exiting than the job he had. He said that he got to see the acropolis in greece and he got to marvle at the panama Canal on his way to china. It might take awile on the trip there but you'll get to see amazing creatures and outstanding vews. Being a seagoing cowboy is one of the most fun things you will ever do in your whole entire life. I promise you will have the best time of your lives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the story the author presented both sides fairly. He stated the positives and negatives of driverless cars. I belive that driveless cars could soon be a common thing everybody uses.\n\nFirst thing that might be a big problem is that they use radars and those can cost two hundred million dollars, that right there is a down side. One of the positives of the car it can do is that BMW announced the \"Traffic Jam Assistant.\" The car can go as fast as 25 mph, but you have to keep you're hand's on the wheel. The car can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves. It is all design to let the driver know the road ahead requires human skills, such as nabigating through work zones and around accidents. BMW's project manager driver said that it hopes to bring in-car entertainment and information systems. Some of the display can be turned off when the driver must take over. The in-car system is a great safety feature. One of the biggest down fall is the law. The law focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe. They also said that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. Because of this most states, it is illegal to even test computer-driven cars. Some manufactures believe that even more states will follow as soon as the cars are proven more reliably safe. One of the biggest question is that if the technology fails and someone happens to be injured, who fault is it? Is it the driver or the manufacturer? I believe it would be the drivers fault because it was there fault they decide try to have a driveless car. This is one reason many people won't want to buy those type of cars. Even thought it has a big problem it can also be use for good things. Google cofounders said he can foresees they the cars will use half the fuel of today's taxi and is far more flecibiloty than a bus. Everybody wants to save money of gas so everybody would want to own one. He also stated that the cars would change the world. Another good thing is that if you're running late and you don't know that fastest way to get there, you can get you're car to drive you there while the car is taking the fastest way. If you are on a road trip and you been driving for six hours stright, you might get board of driving. So that's when you activate the car to drive by it's self, instead of stopping and taking a break and take long on the trip. If the car is driving when you're taking a break, then you will get to you're desination faster. But that could still be a while before we can do that. Driverless cars have a lot to work on before that can truly happen.\n\nWhat to I think about driverless cars? I believe they can become a everyday thing we use. The only thing few thing stopping use from that is money and the law. Once we can get the more to start making these and we make a driveless-car that can meet the requirements, then we can start pumping out these cars that everbody would want to have. Just by nameing a few thing they could possibly do, is making everybody want to have one.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Advertising is growing, and nowadays we see advertisements everywhere, for example, on TV, online, on billboards and in printed media. While there are several advantages to advertising, I opine that, overall, the drawbacks are more significant.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nAdmittedly, advertising has several benefits. Firstly, advertising is a key part of modern business. A new and high-quality product is produced and put on the market but customers do not know about it. Advertising could introduce that product with some eye-catching images and make it become popular in the market. For example, a new soft drink may struggle to compete with established brands on the market. Therefore, it is necessary to promote it through an advertising campaign targeted at the intended audience. Secondly, without advertising, we would have less choice because consumers may not be aware of less-known brands. If the market has only one or two product types, a monopoly may emerge, and that means increased prices due to reduced competition and inefficiency. When there is competition between many products, consumers have better choice and can benefit from reduced prices. \r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nDespite the positive aspects mentioned above, I believe that the drawbacks of advertising outweigh its potential benefits. To begin with, children can easily be influenced by advertisements. When children watch unrealistic, exaggerated, or provocative advertisements, they could mimic unsafe actions in them, resulting in dangers to their health and well-being. For instance, an old rule of advertising, and media in general, is that sex sells. Many companies use this idea to market their products, leaving a seriously negative effect on how children think. Children of all ages learn to objectify women as a result of the sexually-charged advertisements that are often seen today whether it is on television screens or magazines. In addition, some adverts manipulate people. They aim to persuade people that a product has a certain function or quality, but that function or quality is non-existent in fact. That is misleading, and it is a major problem with advertising. It means consumers buy the wrong products or products that they do not really need.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\n In summary, advertising means better choice and lower prices for consumers, but it also has several disadvantages including the negative influence on children and the pressure on consumers to buy the wrong products or products that they do not need.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator , I wrote this letter to you to talk about keeping the Electoral College or changing to election by popular vote for the President of the United States. My opinion on this intriguing subject is that we should keep the Electoral Collge , my reasons being that voting by a popular vote can sometimes go wrong and we avoid the Run-Off Elections. When its time to pick a new president very few people research about this president and his slate of electors , they just vote for the most apealling to them , the one that is always out and doing meetings, or brunches , or just having a perfect day with their family . People that research or dig deep to find out who they are really voting for .\n\nLet me start by saying that the ones whom created the Electoral College , where our founding fathers , these men are thought as wise and caring for their country. The reason stated why the Electoral College should be kept because popular voting can go wrong. Yes the popular vote of the Electoral College its worth but maybe not that much.  In Defense of the Electoral College : Five reasons to keep our depised method of choosing the President , it states that \" But each party...win the national popular vote\"(source 3).  Posner is stating that each party picks their electors to be trustworthy , not someone who would do dirty work behind their backs. People go out and vote for our next president and see them running our country , but sometimes people vote for a president for the reasons being that they just want to vote . Its not like the lines outside are not long enough for a person to just go into the voting booth and pick a random president and just leave. People dont actually look behind, search for whom they are votting for .Thats why the Electoral College shouldnt be ruled out , the Electoral College is actually helping out more then we thought. When we least expect it we have a crazy wako running our country , then that would be the time when the people would Notice that they made a huge mistake .\n\nRun-Off elections , sounds like a tedious process. When Run-Off elections occur some people get annoyed , why its a longer process . We get a little bit delayed on finding out on whom the president of the United States is going to be . People want to know who going to be the next president of their country , whos going to try to fix the small little problems the last president left . THose are mainly alll the questions these voters ask. In The Indefensible Electoral College :Why Even the best-laid defenses of the system  are wrong , Bradford states \" At the most basic level...in the \"swing\" states\" (source 2). Bradford claims that the candidates dont spend much time in states that they know wont get plenty of votes. Well true but why would they both of theses candidates are running for president they need to get as many votes they can if they are bad or good . Even though we are technically not being fair with theses states why because the candidiates arent paying so much of the their attention and aren't caring for those states votes . This country runs off on what the people want but sometimes are the people being fair?.\n\nKeeping the Electoral College can be a really good thing do to the fact there are people that do know about choosing a president .It's been stated before that some people dont care at all who the next president is, as lonmg as they fix their problems and they have jobs, and good medicare they are perfectly fine who the president is . The Electoral College is like a helping hand .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The \"face\" on Mars is not an alien monument from a civilaztion on Mars. If it But most people will only believe things with facts that are hard to ignore, so I will prove my claim.\n\nThe \"face\" on Mars has been photographed multiple times. Pictures of it revealed that the \"face\" is in fact shadows on the surface of the planet. Pictures of it are also more detailed than the original in more recent years and show no sign of life on Mars. Even if there was life, the photos prove that the structure is naturally formed and is similar to geographical landmarks on Earth. Also, if any civilization were to make a face in the ground, the would not make one that looks like it appeared naturally.\n\nSigns of life have not yet been discovered and if there are any then they would not know what an egyptian pharoah's face looks like. The skeptics of conspiracy theorists cannot be taken seriously, for they are based on belief and not evidence.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers by saying that it was like Earth, it was probably covered with oceans and it could have supported various life forms. It can be our nearest option for a planetary visit. Also simply because of human curiosity.\n\nThe first reason the author supports the idea of studying Venus is because it used to be like Earth. Venus had many features that Earth has like oceans, valleys, mountains, and craters. I know this because in the text it says \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" This proves that the author would like to study Venus because it used to be like Earth.\n\nAnother reason why the author supports the idea is because we can probably visit Venus. In the article it states \"Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for a planetary visit.\" This shows that the author thinks that once we learn more about Venus we can most likely visit it.\n\nLastly the author supports the idea to study Venus because of human curiosity. In the text he writes \"but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" This shows that the author supports it because human curiosity will cause us to explore Venus. Also because in the text he also wrote \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts.\"\n\nIn conclusion the author supports the idea of studying Venus because it used to be like Earth. Venus had oceans and could have supported various forms of life just like Earth. Also because it could be a nearest option for a planetary visit and because of human curiosity. Lastly, who wouldn't want to explore Venus or even visit it and find out more about its environment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am for the development of these cars. The development of these cars would save our ecosystem drastically. It would be a great way to travel or get transportations. There would also be a decrease in crashes and mistakes drivers make in their daily lifes.\n\nThe devolopment of these cars would be great for the future. It would decrease air pollution and use half the gas we already use tody. This invention would save our enviroment. Crashes and traffic law violations would also decrease. The driverless car would have sensors that build a 3-D model of its surroundings to be aware if there is an oncoming vehicle. It would also know the road system and will follow the traffic laws that are inplaces. Its also a great way to travel, traffic will go much quicker because of the decrease in crashes and other mistakes.\n\nTo conclude, this is great invention to continue to develop. The benefits of faster transportation, less chrashes and trafic violations, and its eco friendly. These reasons giive me good belief this is a great advancement of technology for the better.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is a planet that is very similar to earth because of it's size and density. Just like mars and others planets in the solar system.\n\nVenus is very close to the sun infact it's the second planet from our sun. Lets say 50% of the world doesn't actually knows Venus just because its' not popular. Some young people may know it because they went to school and study the solar system. (NASA) The National Aeronautics and Space Administration has been sending many people to another planet especially Venus this time. Also working on other ways to study more about Venus.\n\nHumans have sent plenty spacecraft to land on the planet. None of them survived the landing. Electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested and old mechanical computer also tested.\n\nScientist aren't getting many ideas on how to learn more about Venus because it's a rocky planet and it includes familiar features like valleys, mountains and craters. Many People describe it as the 'Evening Star\"\n\nbecause it is one of the brightest light in the night sky. Sometimes Earth is closer to Venus and sometimes mars.\n\nVenus is a danger because whoever goes ther doesn't survived getting there or even thinking of coming back home. Also had for any scientist or anybody to learn more about venus. Been a mysterious planet for years and there is nothing we can do about it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hi My name I think computers bad I think yes people play computer much also learn lot things Another reason kids like bullys stop bulling spend time computer stay away stress You also talk friends even video chat Computers teach lot For example computer breaks virus figure problem You also learn read news missing For example also ask questions nt understand people would answer question In moder afoot kids teens even adult computers look things nt understand For example I read along book read word I nt know read around I still nt I would go find words mean Bullys people like street people computers stay computer play games They play hitting games shooting games even board games You even watch fights want What ever want got This good thing one get everyone happy Bullys also go computer relax stay away people hate The computers make relax nt around people tell computer ever want Kids teens adult nt leave house justto talk friend two I said computers hace microcam comminicate others For example dad trying get computer microcam incontact mom brother sister I He get one nt live us He leave go back Another example would one friends move far far away talk microcam even send message back forth So I think computers bad idea bad things I say learn stay good communicate", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Most people nowadays believe that the younger generation should volunteer for free in their spare time, which would benefit society. From my point of view, I agree with this idea for many reasons, as described in the following paragraphs.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, people who work in their spare time for an unpaid wage are responsible for society. It is the community's intention to provide an opportunity to learn time management as well as various experiences, such as how to communicate with diverse people, compassion for one another, and unity to work well together, which are essential parts of becoming a reasonable person. In this regard, if a teenager adds information on their charity work in their leisure time, it will improve their portfolio and make it easier to apply to a famous university in the future. In addition, the community will get quality citizens.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, the teens will have connections with people who work in highly reputable companies, which can help the youngster by providing references and assisting in the search for a prestigious job. Moreover, adolescents who volunteer with a variety of organizations will aid in the discovery of their goals and the development of a path to achieve them because many of these organizations will teach valuable lessons, and then their parents will be proud of them.\r\n\r\nI personally agree with this viewpoint since it seems to me that the advantage of being young is that they can do charity work in their free time. It can benefit them and the city, which outweighs the disadvantages.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using technology to determine someones emotional would't really be as effective as you would think it would be. Technology has proven to be useful for many thing but detecting emotions wouldn't be one of them. A student could just change how they feel repeatedly or changed there facial expression. Changing the lesson to be more entertaining to a bored student may ot work. especially if the student does not care.\n\nThere is also the possibility of the computer breaking down. What if it malfunction and gets the emotion wrong and a student is learning something on he computer. If the computer thinks the student is bored and changes it to something different the student may get confused because they might have actually interested in what they were seeing. Different types of situations like this could happen all the time.\n\nBipolar subjects to this technology also could be affeced if they don't know that there bipolar. If smeone just like making random faces for fun and they do it all the time, that doesn't mean that the faces they make represent who they are. There are people who just look naturally mean or naturally happy. A machine wouldn't be able to determine how someone really feel or what they think.\n\nIn conclusion using this technology to read student's emotional expressions wouldn't work like you think it would. Humans are just to unpredictable. You never know what could happy. Someone who looks bored could just be sad or tired. Someone who is happy could really just look happy or actually be angry with a smile on there face. The only thing that would be able to determine how someone feels is the person themselves.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the globalization world, metropolitans are expanding,therefore, this trend results in many problems for youngsters to stay in this place such as pollution and the higher cost of housing. This essay will give out two prominent solutions to address the question, however, they would require many endeavors.\r\n\r\nThere are many consequences of living in the big cities of young people. One of the most common pollution is air, as vehicles, which are essential things in the urban area , would release exhaust fumes. Furthermore, the increased population acquires more lands, therefore, trees are cut down on large-scale to make houses and urbanized. As a result, it also leads to the fact that air quality becomes poorer due to lack of trees’ photosynthesis.For instance, There have been articles and news articles pointing out that the pollution index in cities is extremely higher than the countryside. Finally, The other consequence is that the cost of houses would become higher. The more developed cities, the more people would want to live in. It indicates a need for accommodation would rise significantly and followed by an increase in house pricing. \r\n\r\nThere are few ways that could be done to deal with these problems. It is of (utmost) importance that governments should shoulder the majority of the burden in addressing global warming. For example, the governments could launch some \\environmental movements or campaigns . They might encourage citizens to plant trees everywhere if possible and raise the community's awareness of recycling waste. The government ought to have the rules in order to make the price of housing lower. For instance, the government might encourage people to live around the city to avoid crowded gatherings in the center by the reduction of public transportation.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, even though the high volume of citizens could lead to the rocket price of housing and the polluted environment, this might be dealt with by planting trees and having laws.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concluded come back Saeng vowed silently spring snow melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test tell reader never give keep trying It also tells us family always ca nt It s beautiful plant dok faeng noi finally said", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author s mood memoir extremely thankful appeciative He said always grateful parents love sacrifices mentions struggles beginning one room apartment affording move three room apartment call home He explains parents started lives entirely needed take whatever work could find They able endure hard times faith struggle would help lead children better times The author much admiration parents strength perseverance He learned true meaning family love He really appreciative lessons generosity important family friends courageous parents taught also become basis life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Trying to detect someones emotions is like playing the game \"Clue\", it's a mystery and very hard to figure out. But what if there was a software that allowed a chance to put the individual infront of a camera and the thought of guessing was no longer an option, because all the answers are sitting on the screen? Professor Thomas Huang from Beckman Institute has created such a software, a software that has the ability to calculate someone's emotions much like in math class. This new software can open doors for the future, and give us new advancements in the classroom, but could it be an end to simply asking if some is okay? Could this be the end to emotional privacy, or simply emotions?\n\nThe new software, the Facial Action Coding System, has many promising attributes and the ability to open new doors for technology and learning environements in the future. It being able to calculate emotions as easily as math problems, could help us decode a lot of the mystery that is the human mind. The process starts wiht a 3-D computer model of the face, and contains information of all the 44 major muscles in a human face and with the help of psychologists, it can classify six emotions and associate them with movements of facial muscles. This type of technology has the ability to be used in a classroom to watch when a student is getting bored or tired to help the teacher better themselves when teaching. Or maybe even help in real world situations when someone goes in front of a jury, or even during interviews for a job. But how accurate is this new software, and how do we know we can rely on it?\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is seemly flawless with many positive outlooks on what is instore for us in the futrue, but has two big questions sitting on its shoulders. How can we rely on this system? And how do we know that this is even an accurate reading? When thinking about someones emotions, one thinks of the individuals emotions as diverse and extremely different from everyone elses. So how can this software accurately read individual emotions around the world? Dr. Huang says \"even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression\", he firmly believes that his new software can identify the most mixed emotions with the use of video imagery and emotion recognition. This however, still does not provide us with a good example of how we can be sure that this is a reliable way to read someones emotions and could potetially ruin human socialization and emotions toward one another.\n\nWhile this new software may seem like the \"next big thing\", there are many ways that this could potentially ruin the human race. Society right now is circling around the phone, it is how we communicate, have a social life, and figure things out. It is in our way of life and we have adapted to the idea of constantly having a phone at our beck and call. So why not add in another way of relying on technology, but this one can help us figure out someones emotions, since simply asking \"Are you okay?\" is too hard and time consuming. Why not just stick them in front of a camera to have it tell them how they are feeling instead of trying to listen to how they feel and talking with one another. This new Facial Action Coding System has the ability to open many new doors, but it could close the door for human socialization.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System is an advancement in technology and has the abilities to open and grow our future. It had the ability to help out in classroom environments and give more support during other real life situations. But with it can come the destruction of human socialization and emotions and make a total mess of how we interact with each other. While trying to figure out someones emotions is very difficult and challenging, it may be better to stick with such ways rather than completly giving up what makes us human and causing a catastrophe in the human world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can imagine difficult life would without computer I I believe computers helpful Computers help us research keep us connected friends family required used The internet easy way research All search want information millions articles click mouse Using internet computer much easier going books looking something That could waste lot time The internet quickly directly answer questions Computers great way keep connected Almost everyone email All type letters ll reaqquainted old friends When call someone ca nt sure busy When using email person recieving email reply howe free time Computers used many Sometimes re even required use Computers organize data keeping documents different files computers also valuable programs could help career Such word Using computer would aid financialy Some might think computers misleading information The internet isnt always honest place By spending minutes doublechecking information websites still spending less time would take find fact book The computer one greatest inventions created It makes research connecting friends easy Use computers life changed better", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear,Mr Senator\n\nMy name is PROPER_NAME, and I am writing to you to say why we should keep the elctoral college. What do you think, should we keep the electoral college? wirte me back and tell me what you think. but any way these are my three reason on why we should keep the electoral college.\n\nMy first reason is on why we should keep the electoral college is because, there is a reason on why it is there in the first place. Im not that smart but im pretty sure the founding fathers knew what they were doing when they started the electoral college. it is there because it helps pick who is president and vice president. I mean sure we do help by voting but there job is to pick the best one, by compareing statistics.\n\nMy  second reason for why we should keep the electoral college is because the people arent always right. Yes i said that the people arent always right, take for instance the George Bush we messed up big time by electing him, look what happened to the economy, but that is what we get by letting the peple pick. Im not saying that we dont know how to make a right descion but can we please let the professionals do what they do best.\n\nMy third and final reason is that they do elect fairly  the bigger thye state you have the mor represenatives you recive, states like California,texas,wyoming,ect which means the bigger the state the more people sre going to live in that stae which would also mean that you would have more represenatives. i know that your saying how is that fair if just because you a bigger state you get more represenatives? well as i said in the last sentace it is because of population. because of population to even out the votes you would have to have more represenatives.\n\nThose were my top three reasons on why we should keep the electoral college. I hop that you agree with my reasons on why we should keep the electoral college.\n\nYours truley\n\nPROPER_NAME\n\n(ps write me back and let me know your thoughts on why or why not we shold keep the electoral college", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A years ago mom sister sub shop dinner Whal line waighting sandwiches severl inches shoter time said taller I stratend said I still taller Then stoud tiptoes making taller said taller stuck toung I stoud tiptoes makimg taller stuck toung The funny part cute guy standing behind looked like I sticking toung He amused look face like looking cute little kid I quickly stuck toung back mouth returned normal hight I tolled mom going find place sit Once found place sit I toled abought guy standing behind laughed really funny still joke", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face Was Created by Landform\n\nThe Face, a well known landmark on the planet of Mars, is a landmark that has caused NASA a lot of debate. The debate is \"Was The Face created by aliens, or was it created by natural landform?\". This has caused NASA and many scientists to have problems, because there are a few scientists that believe that The Face was created by aliens.\n\nThe Face was originally discover in 1976, by the photographers aboard NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft. In the picture taken in 1976, you can clearly see a face in the landform. But in the picture taken in 1998, the atmosphere was extremely cloudy, so if there was any indention in Mars's base, you couldn't see it because of the clouds. Because of this, scientists went out on another attempt to capture a good image of The Fcae on Mars, and they succeeded.\n\nThe picture that was taken in 2001 clearly showed that The Face was no longer there, which lead scientists to believe that it was a combination of natural landform and the shadows casted from the sun's rays that made that particular spot look like", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This story time I patient I years old It gorgeous day outside The best part birthday All sudden I brainstorm I going try ride bike training wheels So I ran inside fast little feet would let go I went front door I yelled CAPS quickly I something tell you CAPS buddy screeched ran stairs CAPS I yelled CAPS coming CAPS sweety got ta somewhere son wants us must important it CAPS mum meet outside CAPS outside ok CAPS lets go ran outside wait time I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Against Driverless Car\n\nI think that driverless car can be dangers, people can become lazier, and they don't seem as safe and smart as they sound. This is why i think the driverless car are not a great manufacture.\n\nDiverless cars can be dangers because they are not safety reliable. In paragragh nine. It says that \"manufactures believe that more states will follow as soon as the cars are proved more reliably safe.\" This is saying that there are not truely safe to get a driverless car. Only California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbias allows to have this types of cars. Why? Because there are not safe. The driver should be able to rely on the car. But , it seem that the car is not even reliable.\n\nBy the developement of these car and technology people can become even lazier. We the people are just gone far with technology. We have become Lazier and with the driverless car even more. The articles says that the driverless car would do everything for you but exept when human skills are require. This technology help people become lazier.\n\nThe driverless car are not as safe and smart as they sound. So, In paragragh seven it says that \" they can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are disigned to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work sones and around accidents.\" I think that it should be the other way around. Most people dont know how to react so quickly druing an accident. I think that a car should be smarter if it where to prevent accident instead of letting the driver take control druing an accident.\n\nThis is why im against driverless cars because they can be a danger, people can become lazier, and they are not as safe and smart as they sound.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is considered that making pupils ideal citizens and enabling them for employment is the prime intention of educational institutions disregarding personal objectives. In my perspective, social and vocational skills directly or indirectly provide learners with something for their advancement, there is no need to incorporate anything extra.\r\n\r\nUndoubtedly, schooling is the foundation of a sensible and responsible personality. As virtues such as loyalty, sympathy and empathy if instilled at a tender age have more prospects of staying till the end, it is important to teach those skills following guided learning at school. When these characteristics become a part of one's behaviour, it benefits the individual as well to survive in society. To illustrate, well-behaved people would attract the attention of others and everyone would want to establish a cordial relationship with them, which in return would give them psychological contentment protecting them from ailments such as depression, anxiety and bipolar. Hence, it is of utmost importance to make children good citizens instead of focusing on personal advantage.\r\n\r\nAnother central goal of schools is to generate a workforce. Since parents enrol their children to secure their careers, preparing them for being breadwinner appears significant too. If learning centres instead of focusing on generating employees, start providing subjective privileges, not only school-goers but the society also has to suffer a great loss. This means there would be a scarcity of eligible hands bringing suffering for both employment seekers and employers. A corroboration of this could be taken from the article published in “the Hindu” that suggested, although there are vacancies in numerous multinational companies, the underlying rationale behind unemployment in developing nations is the lack of suitable candidates. Had these countries added vocational training to the curriculum, such issue may not stem.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, I reiterate that the very first motive of educational institutions is limited to making children ideal dwellers and employees for certain reasons which benefit them autonomously, therefore, no attention is required for individual profit.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The shelf object holds many types diffierent materials movies books magazines music Its media entertainment But everyone likes media one materials offensive towards foriegn children Censorship libraries could get little graphic Yes movies music want libraries A library place study learning educational purposes There entertainment things nature Sometimes could little fun part people would like take children show something help minds focus school By rated movies dirty music adult books magzines taken shelves One day I state library looking shelves book people As I reading book said mean offensive things people I thought book takken shelves forever never seen It shocked someone would put book public library let foreign others read After people read people They second thoughts started get angey disliking theses things offensive comments made Magazines movies taken shelves catagories opinion poeple different countries way live That could sad someone could really went everything movie ever magzines says Another reason censorship control titles materials If child looks adult film happens child wouldnt think thats little offensive I know I would There way I want child watching violet movie We think children people come form different countries comes public libraries If censorship observed carfully could make foriegners angry make children become violet reckless films shelves people come country would never come back picked book might thought int interesting turns offensive opinion Censorship imprtant libraries shelves", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Censorship librarys could useful children young people nt see parents nt want see In kids section kid s books In adult section adult books Those sections keep children reading seeing things parents nt want seeing But parent could bring kids sections find books without leaving child unattended Completely taking books library offensive good thing It takes away certain literature people might like reading But also makes people want censored uptight I big reader I librarys many times I never actually saw material bad I thought needed taken If though make alternative section books music movies magazines people think put For example albums contain offensive language topics CAPS stickers It s simple enough see stickers put alternative section library People like want listen easily go section pick Books always reviews people tell The library staff could put books alternative section Movies always ratings staff could put anything rated shelves Now I ve never seen bad magazine library I m sure would never magazines CAPS ORGANIZATION People would nt need worry magazines experience That solution Make alternative section offensive material library instead taking completely That takes away lot literature people like material You could nt take away movie classics like CAPS CAPS Those movies put highest best film lists Yes rated nt take away fact great movies Do nt take material Just make new section", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a view, that adolescents need to do work without payment in their leisure time and this affects the community and young people in a positive way. I would agree that, because a lot of teenage can develop social skills like compassion and empathy in dealing with other humans and this is helpful for their further way of life in private and professional situations.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, it is important to acknowledge that a vital number of teenagers don't know what they make in their leisure time. They waste a lot of days with cruel computer games or committing acts of violence instead of practising some kinds of sports such as swimming or football. Considering the increasing number of crimes by juveniles it seems to be useful that it is better, when they participate in charitable work as well such as caring for the elderly or working for environmental protection. As a result, they learning they learn more about tolerance and charity.\r\n\r\nThat said, a concern of the community should be for younger people to take away from the street and give them meaningful activities. The local community benefits from the younger people in two ways. On the one ,hand they need staff for healthcare at this time and compensate for different staff gaps, ,additionally acts of violence caused by teenagers lead to damage to local facilities and society needs to pay for this harm with higher taxes, for example. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although individual teenagers don't get money for their work, society and adolescents benefit from charitable work. The civilization has more staff for retirement homes and younger people have a meaningful task.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the rapid development of globalization in the past decades, many countries get profits due to the increasingly strong bonding through the intensive interaction with others. The environmental protection and economy have equally benefited from such international cooperation under the background in major regions.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, it is commonly known that environmental problems have a heavy toll on the well-being of the whole society. Thus,applying global cooperation can unite more countries and clear the responsibilities of each in preventing detrimental pollution. A great case in point is that the developed countries can support many high-tech devices and professional experts in the developing regions to tackle the environmental problems that can not be solved by limited local technology and lacking of biologists and chemists and so on.What is more, a great number of extinction species can also be rescued by the international organisations when they face detrimentally killing result of the lagging traditions in specific areas.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the international connection allows entrepreneurs to extend their businesses out of the country, which could make rational use of different resources to help the economic development on both sides.For example, many western companies set up factories in Asia since there are more low-price labour forces and some factories were set in the original source of goods in order to reduce the transportation cost. What is more,one more beneficial fact caused by international cooperation is that the foreign businesses also create many job opportunities for local citizens in some developing countries where the industrial development is primitive and inferior.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion,from my perspective, the expansion of global interaction enhances the relationship among the countries, which can lead to many positive results including earth protection and financial stimulation", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of the Facial Action Coding System would be a useful piece of technology to read the emotional expressions on the faces of students. The Facial Coding System allows computers to read actual human emotions. This would be helpful for figuring out if a students needs help, users of the technology could know someone else's emotions even if they try to hide it, and people would have more empathy towards others just by knowing their emotions.\n\nWhen a professor is teaching, he or she cannot tell whether students understand a topic. In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" by Nick D'Alto, Dr Huang explains how \"a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" (qtd. by Huang). If a computer can show how students are feeling than teachers will know if their teaching styles are working to keep students attentive or when students need more help. This new technology can allow teachers to assist more students.D'Alto also explains that with this new technology we would be able to tell how a peer is feeling if they do not want to talk (D'Alto). Sometimes our friends are feeling a certain way and we cannot be exactly sure why. By using the Facial Action Coding System, we can have a better understanding of how someone is feeling and what they are going through. In the article, D'Alto states, \"Empathy may happen because we unconsciously imitate another person's facial expressions\" (D'Alto). Many times people do not know how others are feeling. If others could know their emotions then empathy would be more likely to happen. Empathy is putting yourself in someone else's place and feeling what they are going through emotionally. If more people could show empathy then society would all around be a better place.\n\nSome may say that a computer cannot read a human's true emotions. But D'alto explains how \"the process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles\" (D'alto). The Facial Action Coding System is built to process every little part the face. The computer does not just provide you with basic emotions. It gives you a more in depth analysis of the user's emotions which proves that a computer has the correct technology to be able to examine a person's face and know their emotions.\n\nThis new technology is useful in many ways by allowing teachers to know how students feel after or during a lesson, to identify how a person is feeling even if they do not want to talk, and it also can allow people to have more empathy towards others. In conclusion, the Facial Action Coding System is a valuable piece of technology to read a students' emotional expression.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "An increasing number of criminals have done by children and teenagers in some regions of the world. The main causes of this problem are the lack of parents’ attention and living with so-called bad environments. Several solutions should be implemented to punish them.\r\n\r\nFirstly, parents are working so hard in the office resulting lack of attentiveness to their sweet ones. In the development of children, once they do not feel the love of adults, the children tend to do crime for the sake of getting attention. For instance, fighting each other or stealing in a supermarket as a prerequisite to enter a gangster that they think can engage the love of a family. Secondly, it is mainly because of living surrounded by unsupported environments. Fighting and verbal abuse have been affected their thoughts which enable them to think and live positively in society.\r\n\r\nThere are two possible solutions to punish the youngers. One way is through physical punishment by sending to children prison. This is intended to do the rehabilitation and teach them moral and ethical behaviour. When they come back to the community, they will have such positive insights as well as new skills that hopefully help them to live in a society. Another way is by giving the love and attention of parents to them. By loving them unconditionally, it would affect the children’s psychology that they are loved. In this manner, feeling supportive parents would make them more precious.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, the main causes of the problem are lack of attention and effected by bad environments. However, the criminal numbers could be decreased by punishing children with physical reinforcement and giving them parents’ attachment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I would like tell computers helpful society today Have ever needed know something state place brought nig news needed get Were turn I know book computer Without going get info I think computers benefitial society help learn could tell sign activities People interact others different countries states continents Next computer could benefit society Computers could help us learn searching research paper even expanding general knowledge For instance today class I going look info seat belts buses Without computers class I could nt get done without computers If books would nt enough give us would mean would share With sharing kids hogged books long time allowing kid get info needed paper would lead civil dispute classroom two With computers enough kid class And computers could help gaining general knowledge quicker With gaining general knowledge become smarter Next computer help set activities Computers could help go sign activities like baseball football basketball gym With help computers nt waste time going gym signing could home Maybe s waiting list enter You would ve known signed online For instance little brother plays baseball parents signed online All take place sign show I live town others sihn register pay All could ve done online like parents didnt understanding computers could helpful society able gain knowledge able sign activities Do see need everyday life get around Computers benefitial new coming society", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]