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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are cominng or are more accidents coming? Would you rather be saft than sorry? There are cars that has been driven more than half a million miles without a crash, but can you truly trust a google car that is driverless? Your on the road and you need to get something out your bag so you put it on driverless mode, and all of a sudden boom u hit another car. What happen you had it on driverless mode an its suppoes to tell you if your getting close to aonther car or an object. Technology doesnt always work.\n\nDriverless car requider massive upgrades,that can be too expensive to be practical. they need lots and lots of sensors,they suppose to have flashing lights on the windshield and other heads up on display but this can all go out in a heartbeat. What if water gets on the seat will that mess up the vibration when it is letting you know your backing up or when your by a dangours object. If technology fails and someone is injured who fault is it, the driver or the manufacturer? tesla has a projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving on a 90 percent of the time. Just think about it would you rather be saft than sorry? Think smart about the road, youself, and other people around you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Unmasking the Face on Mars\n\nThe \"face\" on mars has been a very common or popular story, when 25 years ago viking 1 spacecraft snapped a photo of what looked like a two mile long \"face\" that seemed to be staring back at the camera. Many were suprised and shocked at the sight and many conspiracy theorist belived it was a alien artifact but scientist found and believed it was an martian mesa common enough around Cydonia. It takes the shape of a face but also unusual shadows made it out to look like an egyptian pharoh when mesa's were more commonly found proving the \"face\" theory uncredible.\n\nAt NASA we feel like the \"face\" found on mars is just a natural land mark or a mesa. At NASA we think it is a lava that takes form as an isolated mesa. Although it looks like a face and some theories say it is bona fide evidence of life on mars, we have factual evidence to believe it is a mesa like in the snake river plain in Idaho and also commonly found on Cydonia around where the \"face\" was.\n\nYes, the landmark resebles a face and shadows make out a eyes, nose and mouth shape to also contribute to the illusion that it could be thought of as proof of aliens or alien civilizations on mars but, there is really no for sure credible evidence that could explain and prove it is an 100% acual bona fide face. It is more likely and more proven to be a simple mesa such as some of the mesa landmarks on earth. Along with the people who feel it is an alien artifact some scientist also believed it was indeed an alien artifact also but sadly it is not altough at NASA we wish we could uncover an Alien civilization on Mars.\n\nIn conclusion, this \"face\" is nothing more than a Martian equivilent of a mesa or butte. Although the popular suspition and popularity of it being a \"face on Mars\" it is nothing more than a landform that is also common around the American West. Not only that but, Skeptics and authors felt it would be a good way to attract attention to Mars which could lead to the truth being streched without physicl evidence to back up their theories.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I feel like this would be very useful technology for helping many people in the near future. By having the Facial Action Coding System (FACS) we could tell and understand so much more about the human body that we don't already know about.\n\nThe FACS would help us in learning about how exactly how someone is feeling about something or someone. Say, if they could exactly explain how they are feeling we could use the FACS to figure out their emotions. We could also use it in classroom as paragraph 6 says. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" We would finally have the technology to help people who don't understand or are to shy to ask how to do something in the class. The computer would recognize that facial action and go more in depth to help the people who don't understand. Yes, it would make people lose their jobs and bore the other students who already understand the topic but we're still in the beginning faze of the FACS. By using the system we would become way more advanced and learn how to fix these problems. It just takes time to go over and fix. Imagine if we didn't have facial expressions. We wouldn't understand each other and the world would be bland but we do in face have facial expressions and we use them. We've grown adapted to having such a skill but some people don't know how to tell or just can't tell very well. We now put it into technology to help those people and ourselves!\n\nIn conclusion, I feel like we would benefit from having and using this technology. As I said above, it would help people understand in schooling, emotions, and in life in general. It would be an even better invention if it became more advanced but we have to use the product for that to happen. I fully support the Facial Action Coding System as it would help us in learning many great things about technology and about ourselves.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author of this article has some really good points on how the Facial Action Coding System is useful for the students in the classroom. Even though the computers could tell you how another person is feeling you could also do the same with your closest frineds and family because you kmow them so well. The computers have no idea who you are but they still know what emotion you are feeling just by how the bones in your face are working together.\n\nThe computer will form a 3-D model of the face. All of the 44 major muscles have to work exactly like the human muscles in the model. They have classified six basic emotions such as: happiness, surprise, disgust, anger, sadness, and fear. Most people like to hide their emotions with thier face so people don't know that something is wrong. The computer could see right through that and see exactly what emotion is going on.\n\nIn the classroom students that are shy or don't ask for help often lie to their teacher and tell them that they understand exactly whats goingon and exactly what they're doing. If we had those computers in the classrooms then the teachers could help us more by knowing the truth. The teachers could figure out a better way to teach the lesson so the kids are'nt so confused.\n\nThese computers could change lives but not many people probably see that since it's just another piece of technology. Imagine using this for someone yu are teaching or explaining something to yoou would want them to learn whatever that is you're helping them with would'nt you? But if that person is scared or shy they wouldn't be so easy to tell you that they don't understand. If we used these computers properly and not just as some toy then we could change how education is taught and it not being so difficult to understand so you could recieve better education quality.\n\nTeachers already try their best to help their students but sometimes it's just more difficult than it seems. Children like to give attitude when not understanding something or when they feel like the teacher is judging them because they don't understand something. When it comes to school and work it's alot of stress and focusing but if teachers had a better way to recognize the emotions of their students it'd be easier for them to help them out instead of leaving them there and not understand anything.\n\nI feel as if teachers would like the idea of having one of these computers in their classroom because not only does it benefit their students but it also benefits them by helping their generation out and not letting their students fail but to become successful. So I think that having these in the classroom would be very valuable and helpful for everyone.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "would rather read six books get one recipie would rather look less ten minutes I think computers positive effect people learn places want need minutes talk friends inline Computers good effect people learn places want wish For example wanted wish looked online saw earthquake changed plans said I wanted go I know I searched google figure thatb I go one positive thing computers effect people learn places want visit Computers positive effect people find need minutes For example looking cake recipie looking many cook books find took thru labtop found five minutes computer experts said CAPS rooming thru books books information nead go truxt much computers good effect people talk friends online example said I moved I sad leave bestfriend knod I talk bed sick coudnt go ourside visit friends kelf intouch Computers positive effect people learn places want visit You find need minutes talk friends online remember even computer report said much easier", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Over the past few years,the issue of children's free time has been widely debated. However, some parents think children should spend more time on academics because that is very important for their future.In my opinion, outdoor activities are more crucial to them as I will discuss both sides in the following essay.\r\n\r\nThere is no doubt that studying in lectures is important, because that is one of the basic responsibilities of students. For example, in Taiwan,there is an obligate education policy which means it is compulsory for citizens to abide for 12 years of education from elementary school to high school. Moreover,Some students have to go to cram school after class ,this can put a high pressure on students for their study performance. Furthermore,learning knowledge and skills is vital at a young age,because education can be a factor in future development,and is highly correlated with future success in the eyes of some parents.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand,some parents think exercise is always the priority for their children,due to teenagers growing up very fast in this time period,it is called a” golden time”. After this period, it becomes challenging to influence the physical growth of children,that is the reason why parents should put more emphasis on their health.This includes nutrition, body flexibility, and mental well-being, especially since children may not cope well with excessive academic pressure.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion,studying hard in academics and doing outdoor activities are two essential factors and should not be ignored when children are growing up,provided parents can give more balance on both sides, it could be beneficial to their children.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "cold raining I m wet hour still activity All I wait I m hunting deer hitting new bow I m decent shot good I know patients key deer hunting I wait I see deer yard away shoot patience pays", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This chart represents how many coffees, teas, pastries and sandwiches a coffee shop sells during business days.\nOverall, no matter what time of day coffee was the best-selling beverage. In addition, people bought pastries or sandwiches according to the hours.\nFrom 7:30 to 20:30, people bought more coffees than teasi this coffee shop. In addition, more than double the number of coffees were sold every day. For example between 7:30 and 10:30 only 110 teas were sold for 265 coffees.\nAs far as food is concerned, habits changed with hours. Indeed, in the morning people prefered buying pastries than sandwiches with 275 pastries sold against 50 sandwiches, during the midday break it was the opposite and sandwiches were sold more than sweets with 200 sandwiches sold for 95 pastries. The same pattern repeated itself first in the afternoon were pastries was most seld and again on the evenig sandwiches began the best-selling food.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", the author presents negative aspects of driverless cars saying smart cars are not totally driverless yet and they still need human skills. Also if there was a accident in a smart car then it could be the driver or the manufacturer fault, and lastly that a smart car needs a lot of help. I think smart cars are a negative aspect and should not be dealt with.\n\nSmart cars are even driverless cars yet they still need human help like going through traffic jams and construction work. In the article it said, \"In fact, none of the cars are completely driverless.\" Manufacturers haven't made a car that can drive by itself yet and maybe they never can. However the cars alert the driver when to drive and when to help but smart cars shouldn't have to do that.\n\nA accident could happen while you're in your smart car and it could be your fault or the manufactuer's fault. The driver would think this isn't my fault because I wasn't driving in the first place but it could be anyone fault. According to the article it said,\"Manufacturers are also considering using cameras to watch the drivers are remaining focused on the road.\" That tells you that there is evident if the driver is at fault. However the car could have technical difficulty and it could be the manufactuers fault but thats why they are trying not to have that happen.\n\nSmart cars need a lot of help, and that is with sensors and human skills. In the article it said, \"Special touch sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel.\" That mean the drivers has to hold the wheel if not than the sensors will sense that. However sensors in the cars are a good idea because the car wouldn't know what to do but if they have sensors and still need human help then what's the point of both.\n\nSmart cars are negative aspects because how tired do you have to be to not be able to drive your own self. Smart cars do not know how to drive on their own, there could be a accident and wouldn't know whos fault and smart cars need alot of help. Smart cars would just be better if they were regular old cars and nothing greater", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This natural land form may look like a ancient aliens did it but it was really only a natural occuring thing that happend to look like a face. I have collected evidence to prove to you that it is just a natural landform.\n\nThe mars orbiter camera snapped a picture of the landform ten times sharper than the original viking photo. This reveals a natural landfrom there was no alien monument at all. This supports that it was a landfrom because nasa had a clear picture of it and could really study it and see ehat it was.\n\nWhat the picture really shows is a butte or messa which is just a landform that looks like somthing else. If we compare this to earth we have a lot of these on earth as well. The second picture they took clearly reveals that it is just a land form because you can see the rocks and everything that was on the ground showing it is just a landform.\n\nCritics argue that NASA is trying to hide the thought of aliens and just say its a landform. But NASA wants there to be an alien civilization they just dont have any information to prove it. NASA is not trying to hide anything we have the evedince to back us up and support us that this is just a landform that quensidetally looks like a face on Mars. This \"face\" wasnt a face either it was a rock and the shadows made it look like it has eyes and a mouth.\n\nI have gathered all this imformation up to show you that it is just a landform and not aliens. I hope you changed the way you see about the landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is it possible to make a driverless car the garuntees one hundred percent safetey for the passengers?\n\nThe peoples focus should not be on driverless cars. The idea of a car being able to drive around with us having no control over it should greatly scare everyone. There is no telling if the car will malfunction, breakdown, or have any other problems only a dirver could recongize. We will have control over the vehical, but if any problems occur with it it will still be our fault. A car that could drive itself can cuase many hazardous problems for anyone around it, or possibly boring for the people in it.\n\nThere are laws that are meant to keep people who are allowed to drive cars safe. \"Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passnegers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers,\" says the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming.\" This quote is saying that drivers who are more alert are lesser prone to accidents, and breaking drivng laws. How can a driver be alert if cars drive themsleves in the future? \"Presently, traffic laws are written with the assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times. As a result, in most states it is illegal even to test computer-driven cars.\" It is true that in most states it illegal to test drive cars for safety reasons and concerns. These states are trying to keep the people safe, and do so by not allowing self-driven cars. There are facts that prove that selfdriven cars are not a bad idea, and people have been working on imorving them for years.\n\nSome people are really looking forward into the future where there are driverless cars. Google has been working since 2009 to create such a car that would change the world. Google has been testing out such cars to see what they can do to improve them. \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash,\" accordining to the article 'Driverless Cars Are Coming.' They have even packed the car with sensors to help detect problems. Other companies are also in the race to create the first working driverless car, and some have seen very good success rates. There are others who have seen the negative side of having these cars around.\n\nNow, the driverless cars sound easy to work. People can just lay back and enjoy a peaceful ride. The truth is that that is not completly correct. The article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" states, \"The Google car simply announces when the driver should be prepared to take over.\" That means we still have to be in alert for situations the car can not handle. Who would want to sit in a car having to stare at the road, but not do anything to enjoy the ride? Nobody should have to be subjected to that. These new driverless cars do not sound very dirverless or fun to be in.\n\nCars that can drive themsleves don't sound very safe, or even fun to be in. These cars have been worked on for many years now, and there is no telling when one will be finished. Most states have already passed laws fobidding to even test these cars. So, why should the people be allowed to even drive one? There is a good reason behind this; it is becasue they want to keep us safe. These cars could have problems that we can not detect becasue we are not in control of them.\n\nWe should carefully evalutae these cars before we ever decided to get into one.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, it is true that lots of famous celebrities are known for their glamour and wealth lifestyle rather than for their talents and achievements. While I agree that these celebrities set a bad example for the young generation, I believe that other stars are well known by their significant achievements. \n\nOn the one hand, it is undeniable fact that many famous people become popular by their fancy lifestyle without really working for it. They may have money from their parents or they may have appeared on a reality TV programme by showing their wealth and glamour lifestyle. A good example would be family of Kardashians who are famous for their reality show, which mostly shows their luxuries, party, shopaholic lifestyle. This type of behavior would be a negative influence on young people that success can be achieved easily without working and studying. \n\nOn the other hand, there are many celebrities who are popular for their incredible acts and performance which makes them excellent role model for young people. These people have shown that they worked hard and applied themselves to develop their skills and abilities. They demonstrate to young generation a great effort and determination which are necessary to be truly successful in their field. One of the examples would be a great singer Dimash Kudaibergen, who has become famous for whole world because of his hard work and years of practice. This kind of celebrities can inspire youth to develop their talents through persistent and being diligent to their succeed.\n\nIn conclusion, while there some celebrities have a negative impact on youngers, I believe that there are other celebrities who are examples of hard work and determination and they are a great role model for young people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Over the years technology has developed in both helpful, and unhelpful ways. The use of the Facial Action Coding System (FACS), could have a massive, but positive, impact on the way students learn. The use of this technology could be extremely valuable.\n\nThe author, Nick D' Alto, expresses how people use different facial muscles to show different emotions. The software of this program can depict weither or not a smile is genuine. The different muscles used to produce a real smile, are different than when a person puts on a fake smile (paragraph 7 and 8).\n\nA teacher can spend a whole class period trying to decide if his/ her students, actually understand. Everyone uses the same muscles for a confused expression, it just depends on how the expression is worn. If the FACS were to be installed onto their learning devices, it could depict a confused student faster and alert the teacher. It gets students the help they need, more efficiently.\n\nIn paragraph four, D' Alto tells how Dr. Huang observed, \"facial expressions are universal.\" As mentioned before, everyone may look similar when feeling a certain way. It just depends on how much they show the emotion. Yes, your friend could look upset, or behave a certain way, and you'd know instantly. What if it was a stranger? Could you decode how they feel, as easily as for your friend?\n\nAlthough it can be argued, that it's easy to point out an unhappy person, it actually isn't. That person can wear any expression they want, no matter how fake it is. Use of facial detecting software could help better point out those people. Using this technology in classrooms could be extremely effective, and valuable. It could improve the way students learn, as well as improve grades. The Facial Action Coding System is the technology students, and people in general, could benefit from in their everyday lives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many obstacles builders Empire State Building faced attempting allow dirigibles dock The man came plan Al Smith saw opportunity add mooring mast top building Which would allow dirigibles anchor several hours refueling service let passengers But came lots work And could nt simply drop mooring mast top building The architects make plans going set mooring mast In story says Once architects designed mooring mast made changes existing plans building s skeleton construction proceeded planned When building framed th floor roof completed framing mooring mast could take place The mast also skeleton steel clad stainless steel glass windows", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What is the square root of 100,012? You might not know, but your computer does. Infact your computer knows a lot, but one thing it doesnt know is how to detect feelings. Why is there a camera on your computer? Who knows? Lets put that camera to use! As we know computers tend to be used more often. I agree with the idea of allowing computers to identify what mood the user is in and adjusting accordingly. I agree with this because technology is advancing, normal computers can't compete with this upgrade, and computer ads tend to be annoying.\n\nMona Lisa, the subject of a wonderful painting. A painting which appears she is smiling in. Smiling as if she is happy? How can we be sure that she is happy? Is it as simple as looking at the picture? In paragraph 4 is tells us that \"Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements\". How can a camera identify how a person is feeling? Simple, technology is improving and computers are being updated.\n\nComputers truly are fascinating, but as asked in Paragraph 2 \"Can a computer recognize the subtle facial movements we humans use to express how we feel?\". These new computers can detect movement of one or more muscles in the face. The computer will then categorize the movement into one of these 6 categories happiness,suprise,anger,disgust,fear,and sadness. But then \"Boom\" and ad pops up, arent ads just annoying.\n\nAds, ads, ads all on the screen. How could you get rid of irrelevant ads? Well with this new software your compter will be able to detect is you are satified with your ads or not. If you appear happy when an ad pops up, your computer will discontinue to show the ad and replace it with another one. If a satisfying look appears on your face after and ad appears, your computer will continue to show ads that satisfy the user.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Coleslaw CAPS s get wake said standing blanket wrapped around I brushing grass pillow Disappointment rushing I actually wanted see meteor shower CAPS coming I asked looking old friend new light CAPS said gave look pure anger All us supposed bed ten It week five We made new friends met new people I help disabled children hit cute guys worked As I walked camper return sleeping bags I could nt help feel mad That third time rude nt understand problem It could jealousy nt like My mind going thousand miles minute I knew going We reached trailer opened squeaky door laying couch pajamas Her daughter safely tucked away bed CAPS girls exclaimed CAPS s CAPS field watching shower real friends I said making air quotations fingers rolled eyes gripped pillow blankets CAPS sleep tonight CAPS said CAPS lock door behind We walked trailer locked door As plopped beds made chocolate milk CAPS ladies started handing us glass full brim delicious milk I want know good gossip Why everyone mad CAPS mad daughter likes said shrugging taking long draw drink CAPS I said CAPS part long story So yesterday I talking know cute coreguy nodded CAPS I told conversation I I told stupid joke pity laughed said that s cool I excited laughing jumping That nt sound mean stated CAPS went tell nt never like said thinks stupid feels sorry I almost shouting I mean loud I agreed head scream furiously loves We gon na get married someday I decoded words heart I slammed palm chest pretended cry Then I could nt help laugh All three us laughing hysterically faked passion CAPS right skits said gasping fits laughter Suddenly stopped laughing said I want coleslaw Random I could go coleslaw right shrugged I could go right I said smiling Instantly new laughter erupted everyone I thought much humor story would lose every time retold future Some I knew I could nt justice deserved The laughter started settle We sipped milk quietly thinking As looked window see walking way across field With groan I got unlock door CAPS said turn light Anyone hate year old daughter nt need I flicked light made way bed got door tried handle When found locked softly knocked door Then waited We stuck faces pillows muffle uncontrollably laughing Giving walked away gravel We burst laughing unable control Looking clock gasped morning would starting hours It time get sleep went bed I said goodnights rolled The trailer went quiet Laying I thought happiness created us I knew would mad worth I learned That I found happiness makes someone mad s fault Be happy enjoy life Anger bred joy others So It beats alternative nt", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, a great deal of attention has been paid to community operation. Some people opine that it is important to involve teenagers to the local community and give them an unpaid work. I strongly agree with this because this benefits both youngsters and society.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, there are two merits for the younger generations. Firstly, they are able to get work experience. There are important things that youngsters need to know other than school subjects. For instance, communication skill is vital at a workplace. Volunteer works in the community provide teenagers opportunities to learn how to communicate with seniors in life. In addition, this enhances school studies at the same time. Since youngsters engage works in society, this help to understand social structures.\r\n\r\nOn top of that, society also receives merits. At first, teenagers can animate society. For instance, they often clean up a town and plant trees and flowers in Japan. This makes the atmosphere of society better and brighter. In addition to this, adults are able to widen their perspectives thanks to the younger generation. In general, the younger generation has the flexible way of thinking, and they catch information faster than adults. Giving seniors an opportunity to get in touch with teenagers, they can learn new things and refresh their way of thinking.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, I reiterate my complete agreement with this topic for two reasons. This is because teenagers are able to learn important skills such as communication and social structures, and enhance school learnings, and the society is animated by them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In paragraph I explaining features setting affected cyclist One affect uneven bumpy roads trying cycle If flat wouldnt really aware cause bumpy roads look rocks holes road Another affect hills He put energy hills flat Those reasons explain features setting affect cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting authors shortcut effected performance strength tremendously whether hills heat barren landscape three took toll Joe Kurmaskie Not lack water depleted energy well Flat road repalced short rolling hills The hills tough thing pass since Joe drained energy He overcame exhaustion building came views I wiped sweat eyes make sure wasnt mirage tried get excited I believed last burst energy I manouvered hill The authour overcame problems ne faced even though difficult He seems written piece exaggrate important keep going want give Winston churchill said success final failure fatal courage takes continues counts I believe agrees", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Every day, we all wake up and instantly start to calculate how the day will most likely go. Much of this calculation revolves around the people that surround us constantly, like our family and our friends, who have the most impact on our behaviors and moods. We take a quick look at their faces and their body language, and can make a pretty close assumption as to what that person is feeling, what thoughts they are having, and how they will feed off of other people's moods as well. It's pretty easy to decipher many of these things without a problem, but sometimes, especially when an emotion is mixed, it's a little harder to calculate. Now, technology has been formed to help us find out what others are really feeling, even if they are hiding it. In many situations, this software could be useful. Some settings, not so much.\n\nIn a public schooling atmosphere, mood is pretty much what makes or breaks how a class will go. If the students are sad or the teacher is moody, the class might be that much more of burden to deal with all the negativity. If a class is particularly boring, and the students are tired, the class might go on for ages. Plus, some material might be confusing for some students, and this will make the class much harder as well to understand and pass. As people, we tend to subconsiously figure out this kind of information as soon as possible, in order to better guess how they should behave. We do it so often, we as a people have gotten pretty good at this. So how useful would this technoogy be in this particular situation? Not very, since in a clasroom setting it is fairly easy to tell when a student is confused or bored. Now, there are other situations, some even still withing the guidelines of 'school', in which this technology would be used more often.\n\nOnline schooling is an ever-growing web of ideas and people, and is almost always a good experience to have even if they dont stick with it. However, the social aspect of school is forgotten as well as the face-to-face contact with teachers that is useful in situations like confusion, boredness, or even sickness. This technology would be especially useful for this type of setting, since it can give teachers an insight on what their students are feeling about the material that they are teaching. It can help them shape their curriculum to better fit that student's needs, and therefore give a better and long-lasting impact on that student's grades, and possibly even future. It could be an integrated part of the website or a type of software that is highly reccomended or required to download. Even aside from all of that, there are even more uses for this software outside of the school setting.\n\nIn therapy sessions, or even interrogations, this kind of technology could be even more useful. In therapy, the people that go have most likely gotten very good at concealing their emotions, and doing things like fake smiling. This kind of technology could help the therapist better understand when something like this happens, and therefore help the patient get better faster, and to a higher degree. Interrogations, often done to help gain information that the prisoner most liekly does not wish to give. This technology could better read the facial expressions in details that we normally cannot decipher ourselves, and therefore better know when a person is lying or witholding information, and also help people know when they gave all the info they know.\n\nA public school setting is most likely not the best way to use this programming, especially since it has so many other incredibly helpful uses that would be much more beneficial to many things. Its obvious when someone is happy, excited, overly sad, or losing their temper. bot expressions like boredness, disgust, fear, and pride are hard to figure in small doses. This new technology will be used in a variety of ways, but how many of those will actually we beneficial?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper I believe use computer horrorable thing people world I think nt exercise enjoy great outdoors good time family friends When computer exercising body This problem exercising thing stop life span could greatly shorten nt stop children grow larger healthy So children care internet healthy expert said PERCENT children school today pounds grades average pounds less grades computer craze stop kids continue go side get fun Smart parensts wanting children fun back yard children inside side get vitimans sun The experts said CAPS children stop going computers never see true beauty outdoors see nature thing children need Interacting friends family important everyone Because one family member health problem go hospital one never talk One year I found great grandmother died cancer I idea cancer And I wish I hospital But nt never talked Do nt let kind thing happen talk fun friends family So see use computers horrorable life end sooner children get fat drift apart friends family So nt let happen anyone else Tell everyone", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The graph illustrates the amount of air pollution from different causes in China, the U.S., Japan, and Australia in 2021. Overall, China had the highest level of air pollution from industrial activity, transport and electricity generation, while Australia had the lowest level of air pollution. The main cause of air pollution in Japan was industry, and that of USA came from transport.\nIndustrial activity in China produced air pollution the most at 80 PPM, followed by transport at 70 PPM. Electricity generated air pollution the least in the country, but it was still higher than other three countries (just below 60 PPM). However, Australia, generated air pollution from the three activities at just below 20 PPM.\nAmerica produced air pollution from transport (at just under 60 PPM), followed by electricity generation (at just over 30 PPM), and industry at just under 30 PPM. Japan's air pollution came from industrial activities (at above 40 PPM), followed by transport, which was at 30 PPM, and electricity at 15 PPM.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Based excerpt builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles allow dirigibles dock The main problem safety When front masted building back would move around Another big problem dirigibles filled hydrogen highly flammable Also illegal airships fly low urban areas Another obstacle dirigible could get close enough building wind", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The line chart compared the percentage of people unemployed in Australian rural and urban areas in 2012. Overall, the two kinds of areas presented the opposite trends through the four quarters, with the number in urban areas rising and that of rural areas declining.\nUrban areas witnessed a considerable fluctuation throughout the whole timeframe. At the start of the first quater, unemployment rate in urban areas started low at slightly over 2%. The percentage climbed steadily and reached its first peak at the end of the second season at about 4%. However, it dropped to the start point again during the third, and continued to rise after that, closing the year at another new record at nearly 5%.\nOn the other hand, rural areas demonstrated a more consistent change. Beginning significantly higher than urban areas at around 6.5%, its unemployment rate dropped to only 4.5% after the first two seasons. Although there were some fluctuations, the gap between rural and urban areas gradually narrowed down. The final unemployment rate for rural areas was 5%, decreasing by 1.5% compared to the start.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The old saying one never judge book s cover comes litteral meaning particular subject Every mind among world extremely different every book One person look upon certain subject offensive others point view However personal opinion books suggestive references language placed sections marked mature clearly labeled warning contents lieing pages With billion different points views residing world books select find inappropriate people removed Every person life story rough experiences Life s journey brings bumps road scare someone deeply change life forever While reading book viewer skim across passage brings horrible experiences swelling back For one relive trauma struggled get nt right another read situation similar particular person s life journey could possibly grant understanding compassion victim I believe victims abuse matter degree read subject book thought reading leisure However books taken shelves people endure struggle able grasp better understanding person Books mature mind monitored placed upon shelf reach child yet handle topic At young age I selected book I thought ghost story Mid way I came understanding book truly young girl age raped As sixth grader I horrified I yet exposed danger world I mature enough handle subject For weeks I walked halls scaared I might fate girl story I read Books mature topics seperated younger childeren description book leave child emotional scares Labeling books clearly suggestive content book contain would help issue tremendously If books clearly labeled contain offensive words comments horrifying situations reader become offended less likely chance grab material If children still developing level maturity come across book mentions inappropriate subjects better understanding view By simply pressing label book states concerns found within pages save world alot harm If books begin fly shelves offensive topics wo nt many books left read Every person takes different look story says every age group comprehends message passages give differently By monitoring labeling books book worms able make quick decision whether material think want read So conclusion nt take away wanders reading enjoy traveling imagination books let know exactly see mosey unknown pages new adventure", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, there are many big cities that contain a place to live such as an apartment. Only government is able to figure out the problem with the housing deficit and I strongly agree with the given statement.\r\n\r\n In this situation, the government can make the decision to encourage citizens to live in rural areas. They should run an order to motivate the people a campaign on social media to tell about its advantages and to motivate the people to move from megapolis to the countryside. For, example China's authorities ran a campaign on their own social media to encourage local individuals to live in a small towns. This step was work significantly. \r\n\r\n Moreover, the authority of the country should also give attention to unusable land and invest some billion amounts of cash in order to build new houses out of the city. For example in the country where I am living, there are so many territories that are out of use and are able to thrive by the minister of the country. As result, they will increase people who are fascinated by living out of the city.\r\n\r\n To conclude, I believe that the problem with the shortage of housing can be tackled only by government steps such as making residents more conscious to live in rural and also get acceptable places which are unusable today. It is the most ideal way to deal with this issue", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is a general perceived fallacy that occupations are increasingly being substituted by artificially intelligent robots .While it is probable that all jobs that requires automation will be done by robots, it is improbable that jobs that needs human touch will be taken over. This essay will discuss why some jobs will still have human contact.\n\nBy and by, all jobs will ultimately be replaced by robots. In the contemporary world, significant companies are turning towards automation, because it is less expensive than recruiting a human and training them. For instance, In Japan the nurses are replaced by robots this leads to savings in salaries and other trivial expenses. Moreover, the banks are also automated where all the clerical work is being done by robots. This in turn, makes the process simple and hassle free .For above mentioned reasons, a job that requires unskilled work will be replaced by robots in the near future.\n\nOn the other hand, there will still be some jobs in the future which cannot be replaced by Robots. This is because by nature it is not possible for them to replace human workforce. To illustrate, the jobs which require human touch such as: Teaching, Consultation, Charity and Acting to name but a few. Linked to above this would create impediments for Robots to achieve behavioral accuracy.\n\nTo recapitulate, In future, it is highly likely that robots will replace human workforce. Clerical jobs will be taken over by robots. However, jobs that require human contact will do exist. Finally, limited number of jobs will prevail in a modern technological world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article, the author states that, while Venus may be extreamly dangerous, studying Venus would be a worthy persuit for scientists. In paragraph 3 of the article the author describes the many dangers on Venus and how those dangers would effect attempts to study it's surface, these dangers include an atmosphere that is almost 97 percent carbon diocide, clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venuses atmosphere, a surface temperature of over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and an atmosheric pressure level that is 90 times greater than here on Earth. While the author clearly explains the dangers of Venus, in paragraph 4 he states reasons of why Venus should be studied. In his reasons he states that Venuses surface is a lot like Earths, with valleys, mountains, and craters. The author also states that some scientists believe Venus, at one point of time, may have been able to support various forms of life like our Earth,\n\nIn paragraphs 5, 6, and 7 the author explains scientists theories on how to send humans to study Venus without having to worry about the ground level dangers. One of these theories consists of having the scientists float 30 or so miles above Venuses surface and studying the planet from there. While this theory keeps the scientist safe from Venuses harsh conditions it also provides them with very limited information about Venuses surface, provided that most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere rendering photography and videography records of Venuses surface useless. While this theory seems unable to work out, that doesn't stop scientist from thinking of more ways to study Earths \"twin\".\n\nIn the final paragraph of the article the author states that studying Venus will not only allow us to learn more about the planet itself, but it is likely to lead us to discover newer ways to conquer the harsh enviroments of other planets and continue to learn more about the vast universe we live in.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Personally, I think that \"driverless\" cars are and would be extremely dangerous. They can't react to quick events as fast as a human can. They aren't even fully \"driverless\" to begin with, a person in the car would still have to be ready at all times in the occasion that something happens. The company or companies technology operating the car to drive automatically could malfunction and or crash at any given time while a person or people are in the vehicle. The main reasons why I don't support driverless cars are because they create an unsafe area and passengers could get too disracted on phones or devices.\n\nThe first reason why I don't support driverless cars are because they create an unsafe area for people. I say this because if Google or another company was supporting that over a car, if wouldn't be able to adapt to an area if an accident or something of that nature happpened. Weather might play an important factor on why this system may not be at it's best performance level.\n\nThe final reason why I don't support driverless cars is because passengers may become distracted on their phones or devices. There might be a situation that require them to take over and they might be on their phone, thus causing an accident. There might also be other features in the car that require the passenger to take over and they will still be on their phone or device, which could cause a traffic jam.\n\nAs you can see, driverless cars are not all that safe, they could be the cause of major deaths and other things. They might be too costly and the wheather might play a huge role on how good these products work. Even though they are considered \"driverless\", there are going to be a lot of times where the passenger has to take over.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Based on the many differences of positive and negative comments towards the use of driverless cars, I wish to pick neither side in the disscusion.\n\nI believe there are many reasons that driverless cars should take over the roads, but a handfull of reasons that driverless cars on our roads today would lead to dissaster.\n\nTo start off, there was a point made in paragraph one, where the author tells us that new smart cars or driverless cars would use half of the gas as todays taxis.\n\nWith this, there could be many things that move in a positive direction.\n\nFor example, if cars are running on half of the ammount of fuel that todays taxis use, then there is no doubt about the air polution in our cities and other countries being limmitted.\n\nFor years people have been trying to find ways to limit the air polution around us for future generations.\n\nThey want their kids to grow up in a health environment.\n\nHere is one way to accomplish those disires.\n\nHowever, if people want to start driving driverless cars, then the roads could become a lot more dangerous.\n\nYes there may be a decrease in the possibility for human error, but do people really trust computers, that break, to do a better job at a human job, than a human?\n\nOne of the big \"no's\" in using driverless cars is the cost.\n\nAs mentioned in paragraph three, the first step was seeing if modifying the roads would be a better option.\n\nIn my opinion, altering the roads to be formed into some kind of track would be the right way to go.\n\nThere is less of an opourtunity for collisions to happen if cars are on a track that has a certain path.\n\nHowever, this is not an option because of the money.\n\nIt was said that \"These smart-road systems worked surprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was simply too expensive to be practical.\"\n\nAlso, if smart-cars were to be made a universal product allowed on the roads, how much would they cost?\n\nWho is to say they arent just as outrageously priced as the roads.\n\nThe author mentions almost everything about these driverless cars in his paper, except the cost of them.\n\nWith my experience I am driven to believe that the reasoning for this is the cars are so expensive that nobody would buy them anyways.\n\nYou could read the whole paper and then see the price and you wouldn't care if the cars drove themselves because you wouldn't be able to afford it anyways.\n\n\"Why would anyone want a driverless car that still needs a driver?\"\n\nThis sentence from paragraph eight is the basis for all driverless cars.\n\nSupposedly, the car, when needing to get through tough places or navigate around construction, will alert the driver either by a vibrating seat or simply a voice command.\n\nSure this could be great!\n\nYou could let your car drive you around while you sit in the seat and text your friend or eat some food, but when doing so you are still putting yourself under a hunge risk.\n\nIf your car needs you to take over and your hands are covered in katchup and mustard from a hot dog you just ate and youre on youre phone and not paying attention, you are going to have a hard time reacting.\n\nWhere as if you were just driving the car, youre reaction time will be very fast and you will know what is oing on before it happens.\n\nIf youre in a driverless car and it swerves, you may grab the wheel, but have no idea where you are on the road or anything because you were too buys eating your hotdog and texting.\n\nI believe that there are both good things and bad things that could come from having driverless cars.\n\nFor every good aspect of them, there is one equally as bad.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports the idea that exploring Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it shows. In paragraph 2 the supports his claim by informing us that \"Venus is sometimes right around the corner-in space terms- humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world\". Although no spacecrat survived the landing for more than a couple hours. This adds on to why in Paragraph 3 that, \"on the pantes surface, tempatres average over 800 degrees Farhrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet\". Another reason in paragraph 3 is that \"Venus has the hottest surface tempatre o any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun\".\n\nThe author then supports his reasoning of Venus being worthy of exploring with an idea by NASA in paragraph 5 that despite the hostile planet conditions of the surface \"Venus would llow scientst to float above the fray\". the author explains to us a vehicle that will be able to hover 30 or so miles above Venus's hostile conditions. he also explains it as \"just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendl ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. Even though tempatures would still be around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, the pressure would be similar to those at sea level of Earth, supported by solar energy. Altough the author does bring up insight that the vehicle will only have imited information, and it is just another challenge that many researcher are working on to innovate.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is denying the fact that the main purpose of hobbies is arguable. The truth is that avocation used to be a vital part of every individual's life routine but the question is why most people become do not spend their time doing their hobbies and what the effect of it on the individual and society.\nWhile it is held belief that the avocation is needed time, but lifestyle become different for many people these days,they feel should be working almost of their time to can provide the primary needs for themselves or for children, because everything become expensive. So They spend most of their energy during work by the site for a long period in their office , so after they back home just need to relax and sleep.\nOn one hand, The most important one is the invasion of technology in our lives. Most people spend hours on cell phones, chatting, online shopping and generally surfing various websites such as Twitter and Fakebook. eat away most of the precious time that can be spent doing some healthy activity.\nTherefore, it is having an adverse effect on the individual and society. The health problem increased a few years ago , especially heart diseases, diabetes and depression, community have become more distant from each other , and lack of feel peace in most of the people .\nIn conclusion , avocation is a healthy source to make the public more creative and have good health , where they can lose a lot of stress and develop their skills in a different field , away from work or other routine problems. But quite doing that led to many issues that the people found difficult to deal with it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Humans have been able to show facial emotion and expressions since our existince, but are we now going to be able to read emotions to tell if they are genuine or not. Will this have a negative or psotive affect in society and will it change how we precieve one another? Will we view one another as truthful if they prove it through a (FACS).\n\nIn a classroom students will get confused and often have trouble on the material. The negitive impacts this will have on students is minor, although this technology could help letting teachers know how their emotionally feeling, they still dont know whats the matter, for example say the student is confused, they know the student is confused, but they don't know why, and in most cases thats the difficult to find out. In addition to that the long term affects it could have on the classroom, one student could differ from another students emotion of classroom matieral, then it'll be difficult to determine what can help them both.\n\nAs for the positive side of this new technology, this could change the way we view school, we would only do whats true and learn on what we express as right. If everybody knew exactly how we felt everyday, it would be okay because we could seek help individually, there wouldn't be any forced emotions becasuse we already know what you feel. This technology is groundbreaking and could really change our school system.\n\nWhen it all comes down to is it valuable, i would have to agree. If there is a chance that a computer can know how we feel and our emotion, we would eleminate a lot of fear from out lives. Say a kid was getting bullied, and he/she is going through this everyday and hides it behind a smile, we would be able to know that she is going through things and he/she could use some support. Also we could determine the intellegence of classrooms and how well each student understands the lessons taught in the classroom.\n\nIf this technology were to go into classrooms today, will students really see each other the same after knowing how they truly feel. Or will they build of it and use the technology to help them get better more understandable education. Only time has the answer, and i am just excited as you to find out the truth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you want a computer reading and programming your face to see how you're feeling? I don't think that it is okay to read other peoples emotions because it's a violation to privacy and people don't want to be asked what is wrong. Parents wouldn't want the school's classrooms to see what their kids' emotions were. It's not fair to the kids and it wouldn't be fair for the parents as well.\n\nFirst thing is that the computer can model your face in 3-D. Nobody would want their kids being modeled by a computer on how they're feeling emotionally because that is none of the researchers business. In some classrooms, they want to see if the student is bored or surprised being given homework or something they dont want to do. We shouldn't have this at schools because no one would want it.\n\nIf a student in given something that they don't like, the computers can test that and that would indicate what they were feeling. The computers and researchers can find out if you're sad or mad about something just by talking or showing them something. It's not a good idea because if they're sad about something, people would know and some people don't want to tell them what's wrong.\n\nThe computer can indicate if someone is actually smiling or faking one just by their facial muscles. Certain muscles in your face can sho if you're actually happy/smiling about something and the researchers wants to know that. If you aren't actually smiling about something, they would want to know that and why you're faking it. That's why we shouldn't have computer models indicating the emotions.\n\nHiding emotions is okay for people who don't want to show them. If we have computer do a 3-D model of your face, people wouldn't be able to hide them anymore. Being tired or bored can show the computers why and then they would do smething about it. This is why we shouldn't be having computer doing 3-D models.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because what if you wan't to joke around with a friend you don't know if they're sad. If they're sad then you can make them laugh. It would be great if classrooms had this technology because in paragraph 6 sentence 5 it says \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\", it could show the teachers how to help the students learn the subject without making them bored or confused. In paragraph 6 sentence 6 it says \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\", what it's trying to say is that it could make the lesson more interesting than what a human normally would do.\n\nMy first reason to why classrooms should have the technology to read students emotions is because the technology can tell you how the student is feeling. The technology has six basic emotions and they are happiness, surprise anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. In paragraph 4 sentence 3 it says \"The software can even identify mixed emotions.\"\n\nMy second reason is that the technology even told us the emotions of Mona Lisa. You're probably asking \"how if Mona Lisa is just a painting?\" well that's what I said. In paragraph 4 sentence 3 it says \"using video imagery, the emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa\". In paragraph 8 sentence 3 it says \"to an expert, faces don't lie; these muscles clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politician or celebrity isn't being truthful.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face is just a natural landform. The reason why I think the face is just apart of the natural landform\n\nis because we have yet to see any other life form on another planet. Some landforms just form weirdly like the landform on mars did. The landform is not the only weird landform we have discoverd on another planet.\n\nIn the article it says the landform was a huge rock formation. Rocks are Hard to connect to eachother you need tools. It also says in the article that the face was an illusion. Illusions the eye to make something seem like something different. The article says these landforms are common they have been found on earth to.\n\nYou can belive that the landform was created by aliens but the infromation from the article proves that it wasnt. In my opinion the landform on mars is a normal ground deformation its common.\n\nPeople think the landform is normal and some people think it was created by aliens. Either opinion there is proof that the land form on mars is normal or natural.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days, customers are often attacked by competing companies in a way that they might be under pressure to choose a service from one company over another. Many are affected by the advertisement that they buy something that they do not really need. Being critical and having strong ideas might help to reduce the impact of aggressive marketing campaigns.\n\nIt is hard to disagree that commercials may create an illusion that some services or some goods are absolutely a must for any modern and successful person. They sell the image of being popular and loved as soon as consumer buy their products. Not many can resist such a temptation. Thus, most likely people are strongly affected by advertisements when make a choice. For example, many customers buy iPhones just because it is popular and famous, and they would like to be famous as well.\n\nNevertheless, there are some methods to decrease the influence of such marketing. First of all, it is to educate people about the economy, marketing strategies and their impact and develop critical minds. Everyone should always ask themselves whether they really need that product and why they want this particular brand. Secondly, conscious consumption is what should be taught to every human being. Being reasonable in their shopping habits and getting some time to know a little bit more about suggested services and products, their quality and way of use and not forgetting about their effect on ecology will help to make the right decision on their own. \n\nIn conclusion, even if the public's image of services and goods may seriously affect the level of their consumption, and many people might be persuaded to buy and use them, there are still ways to sever such an influence by educating potential customers and providing more information about what is being sold.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "So when Luke came back to China he saw even more homeless people than before. So he thought he would have to make a change to that.\n\nSo when he was setting up a program for conviencing people to help the homeless Don tried to call and have him come to America and and Luke said, \"Don, I can't I have to help the people in China because I see little kids and grown people starving on the street and that hurts me.\" So then when he had it set up a lot of people came to support it and Luke convienced a lot of people, but also a lot of people not to help. So the applications to sign up there was a fee of ten dollars to help with the grocceries and that was why even more people did not join him.\n\nSo when he saw a lot of people without forms he stopped everybody and had a long speech about helping the poor and imagine if you were in their shoes and telling them they didn't want to be like that. So then almost all the people clapped and then walked in and got a form and asked him where to start. He said,\" Just if you see a homeless person, help him out. So then after he rode his boat to America and helped Don out he came back to China to see how his SeaGoing Cowboys program was going.\n\nWhen he came to China he was very happy of how everybody had a house and job and nobody was starving. So he set up a meeting and thanked everybody who supported that program and told them they did a wonderful job and he almost cired of how much he was happy.\n\nSo when he rode his boat back to his home town he told Don and Luke's family about what happened and they said they should do that in America and they did and it worked out just as great as China. His program became national because how good it was and he said it was all the people who helped out he said, \"What I love about it was that they didn't have to do but how they did, it just makes me warm inside and very happy.\" So just seeing homeless people on the street made and making a program had this much of a bennifit. Luke felted great about what he did.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir happy It showing kinds memories family one house As says memoir I never forget parents turned simple house home It s saying house house nt mean much people anyone go But home live grow memories s better place", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being able to detect other peoples and even your own feelings when you want to just by looking into a computer to detect whether you are happy,sad or angry is unique. But if you are not willing to share or show that information at a public place it would not be. Especially when your surrounded by your own classmates and one of classmates accidentally sees what the technology detects on you or someone else.\n\nI personally think the use of this technology to determine what your mood is pointless in a classroom full of students. I mean what would be valuable about it? Besides detecting your mood. Students come to class just to learn, be creative and open their mind to knowledge. The Facial Action Coding System would be more of a distraction to kids they would not be worried about the right things.\n\nAlso some students would not take it seriously they would just play around when it comes to this just by making faces into the computer. And inviting their friends to come along and do it with them. Which would be a huge distraction to to both the students themselves and the students that are actually trying to learn. When it comes to stuff like this students would just use it as a toy and will not actually use it for what it is for or see the bigger picture for it. The authority would be very angry once students are playing with it and not paying attention.\n\nThe Facial Acting Coding System could possibly start some problems with students and their classmates. For example say their is a student sitting down in front of the technology and it detects the student is angry and sad. What if they are other classmates watching what it detects and ask the student \"Whats wrong why are angry?\". The other student would not want to tell him because it is probably something personal they would like to keep to themselves and not share with others. This will cause the other classmate to go around and tell everyone that the student was angry and sad. It might possibly cause chaos.\n\nTherefore these examples show perfect evidence on why this technology should not be available in a classroom. It can cause a lot of problems, playing around and just an unecessary distraction to not one but many. And possibly it may not even be accurate in some cases.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, parents prefer sending their children to same-sex or mixed-sex schools. Some of them say that if children go to single-sex schools, it will affect their future lives negatively.\r\n\r\nWhile I concede that going to single-sex schools has some advantages for both girls and boys, I am mostly of the opinion that children should go to co-educational schools. \r\n\r\nIn the contemporary era, parents want to create a relaxed environment for their children. Most \r\n\r\nBoys and girls feel safe with the same gender. That’s why people send their children to same-sex schools. On the other hand, gender stereotyping is rarely found in single-sex schools. Accordingly, there is no sex comparison among the pupils. Compared with co-educational schools, there is less bullying in the single-sex schools.\r\n\r\nIn comparison to these schools, the co-educational system has more advantages than a single-sex system. Free interaction with each other can help children live in society confidently and without hesitation. Co-education also increases the possibility of communication skill improvement. Mixed-gender education may decrease negative thinking about the opposite gender. Co-education can help boost gender equality.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, people make a choice between single-sex or mixed-gender education. To my mind, mixed-gender education has more positive effect on children's lives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A reason to join the sea going program is boecose it took two weeks to cross the\n\nAtlantic ocean from the estern coats of the united states and a month to het to china. caring for animals during the crossing kept luke busy. they had to be fed and waterd two or three times a day. bales of hay and bags of oats had to br pulled up from the lower hold of the ship. stalls had to be canceld. luke also found time to have fun on board,especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. the cow boys played base ball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. table-tennis tornaments,fencing boxing,reading whittling,and games also helped pass the time. but beaing a seagoing cowboy was mutch more then an adventure for luke bombber. it opend up the worldto him. im greatfull for the opportunity he sais . it made me more aware of peaple of other coutries and there needs. and thet aware ness stayed with him leading his famlly to host a number of internashional students and exchange visitors for many years. it whas1945,world war 11 was over in eroup, and meny countrys were left in ruins. to help these countries recover there food supplies, animals and more,44 nashions joind toghether to form UNRRA(the united nasions relef and rehabilitashions administrashions). UNRRA hired sea going cow boys to take care of the horses, young cows and mule that were shiped overseas. luke and don sighned up.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the( pargraph 5) it states that humans preform this same impressive \"calculation evey day. They think technology is very comeplacated. Da vinci likes how his software is simliar to the one he had. Mona really likes the technology it brings a smile to her face beause how the computer can do imagine a co,eputer knows when your happy or sad. It makes everyone happy in the story how fun and cool techonolgy is it makes them really happy.\n\nMona states that imagine being able to detect exactly how others people are feeling even when they are trying to hide their emotions. (line 1 ) Mona says shes 83% happpy about it,9% disgusted,6% fearful about how the technology works. Mona likes the technology but sometimes it gets to confusing it makes her mad when it doesnt work right for her. in (line 5) vinci computer is kinda similar to monas but moans makes her really mad when it doesnt really work. It all depends on how you update your computers put in sofware into it to keep it going and running fast. (line 1) The software is the latest innovation from prof.\n\nFor people not having computers and technology its hard for them to understand it and catch onto is really quick and as old as they are its very impressing they know to work on it. The computer reconginzes the subtle facical movments we humans use to express on how we feel. Experts always know how to work and do the big things with the compurts its hard for people that dont know how to work with them. Humans express on all the techonlogy and how it procseeds. Its always good to have a good working computer that is updated and has the good sofware.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This article tells us the technology of facial and emotion recognitions. Everyday we may walk around with expressions on our faces that shows how we feel or what you want to show others what you're feeling. Other times we put on a happy face but on the inside we're actually pretty sad. Dr. Paul is the creator fo FACS (Facial Action Coding System). I am for this new way of knowing someone's emotions just looking at a picture and especially through paintings.\n\nDr. Paul is the creator of FACS. He was able to identify variety of emotions in one picture or painting. Eckman have found the basic emotions such as happy, surprise, angery, disgusted, fear, and saddness. They were also able to identify mixed feelings. Some examples of knowing what one person might be thinking. When a person raises their eyebrows they are showing that they are surprise. When a person shows that they are angry their eyebrows point inward and eyes are focused intently at someone else. When we are with our friends we are able to know what they are thinking or feeling most of the time. We know when they are happy, sad, or even excited, this technology allows us to look into it deeper. Unlike our PC computers at home, it doesn't have that advance technology that can read our expressions. In the article is says that they would write dome simple codings to different emotions. In an environment like school it would be interesting to use this type of technology among the students. FACS would help the teachers to identify which students are paying attention and who are bored just using this.\n\nIn the painting of Mona Lisa they were able to figure that there was 83 percent happy, 9 percent disguished, 6 fearful, and 2 percent anger. This technoloy can be helpful in many ways. It calculates emotions through movements in a picture and varies in different emotions, and are able to calculate mixed feelings. Some students go through some hard times and others may not see the things they are going through just looking at their faces. Some students are able to show the opposite emotion of what they are feeling to guard themselves and not be seen as vulnerable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To begin, driverless cars have many more postives than negatives. Driveless cars really can be the future because of the way they are being developed and the advancement of technology. Many movies and TV shows have been facisnated with drvieless cars in the 1950s and 1980s but technology did not permit the creation of these cars because many things were needed for driveless cars to be safe and actually work. Driveless cars may alarm several people as dangerous or unreliable, but with new advances with technology and new laws driveless cars can be just as safe or better than cars the need humans to drive them.\n\nNext, Driveless cars have come and are still coming long way. Google in 2009 had cars the could drive independently but needed to be under specific conditions. The cars google created did not crash for half a million miles but they were not truly driveless. As time has progressed driveless cars can be safely created. Driveless cars are created with amazing censors, and video cameras to help detect danger and mimic the skills of a human driver. The sensors in the cars are capable of as stated before detecting danger, but also causing the car to apply brakes and reduce the power of the engine.\n\nFurthermore, Another postitive that driveless cars display are as follows; keeping the human alert so that if assistance is needed the human can assist and prevent dangerous accidents from happening. Even with driveless cars humans still should remain alert and focused in case something happens. General Motors even developed driver seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in danger of backing up into something. The driveless cars may not seem completly drive less but they really are, but even if the cars are completly driveless people should still pay attention and focus on the road.\n\nMost importantly, the biggest concern is the safety of these cars and the fact that they don't appear to be completly driveless. Some manufactures appear to be working on that issue, many believe they will be able to solve the problem of the cars not fully being driveless and being safe.\n\nThis can be done by using heads-up displays which is a positive because it keeps the driver alert and is a safety feature and safety is a big concern. Laws have not changed and many laws believe that in order to keep drivers, and pedestrians safe would be to have alert drivers. These cars are a benefit and are just as safe as a human driving a car. With advancements in technology these cars will be safer than normal human driven cars. I support driveless cars one hundred percent and belive they eventually will be completly safe to drive\n\nIn conlusion, Driveless cars have many negative and postive aspects, but so does human driven cars. Just because a human is driving the car that does not mean they are focused and that an accident can not happen. Driveless cars with advancements in technology are prospering and proving\n\nthat they are safe and will eventually meet the requirements people have. These cars are taking awhile to develope but once they get done they will be just as safe or even safer than human driven cars. Driveless cars have sensors and videos camera that aid in their ability to perform their actions. Driveless care provide safety by alerting the humans of dangers and being able to apply brakes when needed. Driveless cars are the future and by 2020 will be just as safe as driving a regular car that requires human assistance. Driveless cars should be permitted by law because they are capable of being safe and getting the job done correctly.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In numerous nations, individuals are increasingly caring about searching for the historical records of their accommodations. As a consequence, it is believed that there are many causes such as safety and security made them keen on this matter.\r\n\r\nTo embark , a category of residents asserts that it is paramount to discover the history of their houses. In other words, if they ask the historical records, they will prevent any unexpected incidents like earthquakes. An eminent example of this is Japan which is well-known for natural disasters. Therefore, what can be said is that citizens should have all details about themselves, and how to protect their lives additionally their money.\r\n\r\nMoreover, many people are convinced that to get information about their homes. Firstly, locals can ask old neighbours in the neighbourhood about the background of the building. Secondly, they may return to the governmental records which will help them to know the roots of the land before the buildings are built and environmental predictions. Finally, internet research. However, most of them are fake and unreliable resources.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, after this essay has manifested the two points mentioned above, it can be witnessed that full knowledge story about homes, flats, and buildings. It is beneficial for the residents to ban any problems, whether environmental or financial.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggest that studyng venus is a studying venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers it presentes, Thay found venus is the closets planet to earth in term of density and size ,venus is something right around the corner. and also '' venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system'' that mean venus havae differents weather,climate. venus planet is so inhospitable, like no body can live there.\n\nhas one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study venus, venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way.\n\nthe radiation would not exceed earth levels. that was to hurd for them but survible for humans. ''rendering standard forms of phography and videography ineffective''.that show many rearchers are working to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of venus.\n\nThe nasa is working on other approaches to studying venus,the chaos of venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions.''but tend be more delicate when it comes to extreme physical conditions'' that show they neede be carefully in the extreme physical condition.By comparison systems that can be made more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces,\n\nThe earth and leyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but they will should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation, like generation about something importants for example venus was probably covered largely with oceans.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" supports both the negavtive side as well as the positive points to a real life driverless car. The author made it fair game to choose either the pro side or con side of driverless cars, however, I have chosen pro driverless cars. just think about how much easier life would be with a driverless car. Most of the things people get pulled over for would be eliminated due to a driverless car.\n\nFor example, drinking and drtiving. People would have full liberty to drink and drive, since they wouldn't be the one driving in the first place. this is also very helpful in a money sense, too. While people now, may have to leave their car at a party and pay for an uber to get bach home. This ensures they will have a ride home even if they are drunk and they wont have to pay an uber to go back to where they left theior car, or pay an uber or taxi\n\nto even go home in the first place, their own car will simply\n\nbe able to take them to and fro.\n\nAnd this simple fact leads to my next point. MAny people drive home while intoxicated, like my middle school principal Mr. Johns, just bvecuase they dont want to have to ask for a ride home or have to pay money to get home. Perhaps if my principal Mr. Johns had a driverless car he wouldn't have had to get fired and apologize to our whole school. Well, there's just another example, hmm maybe if he ha d a driverless car his career wouldn't have had to go through that, I guess we'll never know as long as driverless cars aren't around.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the passage \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" study Venus can be very helpful but is very dangerous. I believe that even though it is dangerous we have to explore to see what else is out there. The possiblities could be endless and we have to know for sure what is on Venus.\n\nExploring Venus can open up many doors for the people of earth and should be explored sooner than later. Venus is very simliar to earth such as size and occasionally closest planet to earth at times. Landing on Venus is very hard because an aircraft has not survived longer than just a few hours on the surface and they have always been unmanned. The author states, \"Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us\"(Challenge 2). This evidence shows how the autor knows in past studies have failed but that should not stop more missions because of what possiblities can occur. Everyone can say these things but it is very hard to do. Venus is one of the most dangerous planets for humans or spacrafts to visit. The author also states, \"On the plantes's surface, tempetures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own panet\"(Challenge 3). This evidence is not to show that we can not visit Venus jsut to show how there are many dangerous things on the planet that will make it difficult for humans to visit.\n\nVenus size and postion near the sun such as earth's give humans ideas that Venus could have well been an Earth-like planet. Venus has many similar qualites with Earth such as valleys, moutains, and craters. In the passage the author states, \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth\"(Challenge 4). This evidence shows how there could have been life on Venus long ago or could still have some sort of life. Knowing the information we have and the possibility of other life on Venus only means it must be explored. Making a return to Venus is no doubt a option in the future and very well could happen sooner than later. The author also states, \"The Value of returning to Venus seems indisputable, but what are the options for making such a mission both safe and scientifically productive?(Challenge 4). The returning to Venus is very much benefital to Earth, it is just the matter of making the trip safe and productive at the same time.\n\nThere have been many ideas to make the trip to Venus safe and more productive. NASA has come out with many ideas to help astronouts have safe ways to gather data on Venus. In the passage the author states, \"Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vechicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way\"(Challenge 5). This could improve the trip by keeping everyone on board safe and get a good view of the plant. The plane would not be affected and they could gather the date they need to make the trip more successful the next time. The author also states, \"Solar power would be plentiful, and radition would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans\"(Challenge 5). The humans would still have to be careful of conditions even though they are survivable they are still harsh. The tempertures would be around 170 degrees Fahrenheit which is very toasty but humans can have gear built enough to survive in.\n\nA succesful trip to Venus could change all of space travel foever. The possoblities are endless and I believe that Venus was once like Earth but changed over time. Venus can be next step in figuring out are surroundings in space and if ther eis life anywhere else!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe author ended story test big part Saengs life part tradition", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Throughout the years, technology has improved greatly. It has gone from big bulky phones, to small compact phones, from giant room-sized computers, to computers that fit on your lap. So, why can it not go from cars the rely on people, to cars that literally drive themselves. The idea is really not that far out and it would help improve a lot of things. Cars that drive themselves would improve how convient cars are, how safe cars are, and technology in general.\n\nIf cars were to be able to drive themselves, the world would be such a convient place to live. Just imagine getting in a car, turning it on, and just letting it drive itself through all the twists and turns the road may trow at it. A person would still have to pay attention while on the road, but it for sure would take some stress off the driver. Think about a car at a stoplight, the light is red and suddenly it turns green so the car takes off, at the last second a car runs the light that just turned red. In today's time, the car that ran the red light would drill into the car that had the green light, but if cars drove themselves, people would not have to worry about other people speeding and even if there was almost a wreck, if the car drives itself, it could apply the breaks before anything happened. This would intern take stress off of some drivers and allow them to relax while on the road. Some people say that a car that drives itself would make the world even lazier than it already is. This statement may be somewhat true, but no completely true because the driver would still have to pay some attention to the road. However; this is not the only thing driveless cars would help.\n\nIf cars could drive themselves, the world would be a much safer place. There would no longer be worry of people speeding or doing something else stupid that endangers someone else. If cars could drive themselves, people would no longer have to worry about drunk drives or people texting as much because the driver would no longer be in complete control of the car. This would not take all the worry out of course because the driver still has to pay attention, but it would help greatly. People may say that having driveless cars would make the roads more dangerous because less people pay attention, but once again this is not comepletely true. One thing this passage states is that even though the cars drive themselves, they still make sure the driver is paying attention to the road by using cameras. Safety is very important these days, but it is not the only thing that driveless cars would help with.\n\nIf people could make a car that could drive itself, where do the possiblities end. A driveless car would only open more pathways open up. If people in today's day and age have the intelligence to design a car that could drive itself what else could people do. They could find a cure for many diseases or even design a bike that could drive itself. The possiblities are endless.\n\nPeople have made great strides over the years towards making a car that drives itself. There would be many benefits to this if it were to be done. It would improve how convient cars are, it would help improve safety for people, and it would help technology in general take a step forward. No matter how many negative things people come up with for drivless cars, there is always a positive thing that out weighs it. Please, lets take the danger out of driving.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars seem very intriguing to have in the world. The thought of not having to drive when you do not feel like it. It would make our world much more luxurious, but it might not be the safest.\n\nMachines and computers mess up all the time. They malfunction and have to be fixed. Us, as humans, have a better perception of the world, because we can makeour own choices. Computers are programed to do a certain thing. They do not have that consciousness to decide right from wrong, and that could provide safety hazards. Driving is already dangerous with us controlling the car, but with a computer it might be worse. I believe that we should have computer assistance when we drive.\n\nHumans should drive still, but the computer, or car shoukd be there to assist us with driving safely. The computer to human ratio should be fifty to fifty. Even though this would helpful, we would have to consider the expenses. We would have to add sensors to most cars, which will put a pretty unique debt money-wise. We might even have to upgrade the roads to have sensors. This might be worth it though. We will never know until we experience it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the passage that we are presented with the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit by telling us of the similaraties between it and the earth. Venus is of a similar size and distance wise is not very far from us at all. No spacecraft has ever had any human pilots on it due to the fact that the spacefrafts never last very long once they land of the planet. The planet's stmosphere is made up of 97% of carbon dioxide and corrosive sulfuric acid. The temperature of the planet of on average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the atomspheric pressure is almost 90 times greater than our own.\n\nLong ago Venus was proably covered by oceans and may have supported various formes of life similar to those of earth. It has similar geological features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. Due to its close proximity it may be the nearest option for a planetary visit. NASA in particular would like to send humans to study the planet. They thing that if they have the space craft hover about 30 miles above the planets surface they may be able to avoid the brunt of the problems. The temperature would still be about 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Most of the people throughout the world are interesting in searching on history of the place they live because of intelligence and they concern that they should be aware of it. In this situation, they are capable of finding out deeds and talking with inhabitants. In this essay, I am going to discuss problems.\r\n\r\nAs a whole, human beings should be aware of the place they live in because nations are more intelligent nowadays. They might have many legitimate requirements. Furthermore, some are enthusiastic about those kinds of findings as they need to learn their children about the history of accommodation. For instance, when it is going to enrolling a child on a school, it is necessary to have proof of living place; whenever kids are asking about ancient times, it is necessary to have information of the past.\r\n\r\nPeople could be able to find out historical information on where they live by deeds and inhabitant citizens because they are the most relevant and well-known factors which can be trusted.\r\n\r\nFor example, even though there are neighbours and compeers surrounded by, it is impossible to get relevant data on a land accurately without a deed. That is how we are able to find the history of the place or house we live in.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I agree that all the people should be aware of ancient data on where we live by various sources described above clearly.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Did you know the face on mars is and always has been a natural land formation and nothing more so. Even though people think the face is bona fide evidence of life on mars it is actualy a Butte, land forms that are common in american west. The face on mars is not eny type of ancent martion civalization land mark and has been proven, by NASA, to be a natural land formation.\n\nThe face on mars is thing more but a land formtion known as butte. In April 5, 1998 Global Surveyor took pictures of the Face and had raviled a natural land formation. thn again in April 8, 2001 an even more clearer shot af the face was taken again for to prove it was only a land formation and was then proven to a butte, land formations that are coomon in the American West.\n\nPeople that belive that the face is profe of a national land mark are only seeing what they belive from films, books, magazines, and radio talk shows. normaly these people don't have the means to acually inspect the face and aren't acual scientist and astronimasts that make a living from studying it. Don't take the fact from a person how only talks about what he wants it to but a person who atualy knows what they are talking about.\n\nThe face has been proven to be a natural land formation in 199, but people still belive it's an anchent martion civalization. The picture that was taken in 1998 was taken on a foggy day on mars so people still think it could be a profe to life on mars. In 2001 another picture that was not fogged was tooken and put an end to the entire fuss.\n\nTake the facts from the people that studyed the face and don't listen to thoughs who don't know what they are talking about. The face is and always has been a butte.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars used to seem like an impossible idea, but now these dreams are bcoming a reality. Driverless cars are an innovative technology and should be developed because of how helpful they are.\n\nIn the article, it says that driverless cars are forseen to \"use half the fuel of today's taxis.\" In a world where everyone is clamoring to find alternative fuel sources, driverless cars would help tremendously. Cutting back on using up nonrenewable resources would be both cost effective and environmentally friendly. Even though it may cost more money to develop these new cars, using less fuel is one easy way to make up for that cost.\n\nUsing autonomous cars takes out the factor of human error in driving. With driverless cars, there would be no such thing as drunk driving or texting and driving. You would not hear about devastating accidents because someone was distracted while driving.\n\nWhile completely driverless cars are a close possibility, there will be large debate over their development and, fortunately, there is time for that. However, driverless cars are beneficial to the environment, cost effective, and even safer with the right technology and therefore should be both developed and used.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System is valuable because , there has never been a software that can tell how a person is feeling and it can also recognize emotions, there is also six basic emotions. Also, have you ever wanted to know how Mona Lisa was feeling in the painting \"Mona Lisa\" by Leonardo da Vinci? Well I am going to tell you how she was feeling in this essay. I am also going to tell you why I think FACS is valuable.\n\nIn paragraph 1 it says \"Dr. Haung and his colleague experts are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate.\" there has never been a software that tells how a person is feeling or the persons emotions , or even if they are faking. Until now. The software is the latest innovation from Prof. Thomas Haung, of the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois.\n\nParagraph 3 says there is 6 basic emotions that Eckman has classified. They are happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear and sadness. The software can even identify mixed emotions. The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face. All of the 44 major muscles must move like human muscles.\n\nLast but not least, I am going to tell you how Mona Lisa was feeling in the painting \"Mona Lisa\" by Leonardo da Vinci. The top paragraph of the article says how Mona Lisa was feeling, it says \"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. This software shows you how much FACS can do, or what a computer can do.\n\nFinally, I think FACS is valuable because it could make a lot of money and no one has even done this before. I think it will become very successful because I think people will find this interesting and neat to learn about. People have always wanted to know what she feels like and if she's sad or happy, and the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" finally tells people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people assume that studying at university or college is the best way to a successful career, while others think that getting a job straight after graduating from high school is a better choice. This writer will show the point of view in this essay.\n\nOn the one hand, studying at a university or college has a variety of benefits for students. They will have degrees and knowledge after graduating. It leads to the increase of job opportunities to get a well-paid job. Moreover, spending four years at university or college helps students improve their presentation skills and their confidence.\n\nOn the other hand, entering the workforce right after high school bring a host of advantages to students. Firstly, they do not need to take four years in university or college and during that time, they will have leisure time to take care of their self and family. Not only that, the students who choose to work will be provided with more life experiences and these things might help their careers in the future. For example, Bill Gates one of the richest men in the world, dropped out of Harvard University to pursue both his talent and desire in the computer science field.\n\nTo conclude, learning at university and college brings many advantages back to students such as developing the opportunities of finding a high-quality job and earning more knowledge. However, I trust that getting a job right after school gives students more free time and it is better.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The empire state building high air NUM ft problems building moves s air something weighting around heavy fiftythousand pounds maybe building might rip big windstorm The dock sounded like good idea would need winch would put big clamps building secure balloon dirigible dock refuel In paragraph building s architectural office said The yet unsolved problems mooring airships fixed mast height made desirable postpone later date final installation landing gear If Irving ever decides put blimp make air station make new technology Who know s future could cars fly air balloons attached buildings", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article, Driverless Cars are coming, both aspects of these cars are presented, whether you are for them or against them is another opinion, but I think that these cars wont't seem as nice as they say in the article.\n\nIn the article, paragraph two, it states that Google has made cars that could drive on their own since 2009, but they still haven't made them completely driverless. But have they tested these cars with everything that a human driver has to get through daily? More than likely no. It says nothing like that in the\n\narticle at all. Why does this matter? Human drivers have to be alert at all times for anything. They have to pay attention to what they are doing on the road, people on the side walks, cars around them, street signs, traffic lights, weather, even animals crossing the road, and much more. Are these cars going to be able to do all that as a human would? Maybe, but then again, maybe not. If you think about it, they said that some states won't allow them to test drive these cars because of the safety of others. What if the car decides that the driver need to take over, but the driver is destracted, even if the car gets their attention, and the driver looses control and causes an accident. Will the car know what to do in an accident? In paragraph seven, it says that the car can't drive by itself and needs the driver to take over when they come to work zones and other accidents. With these cars, the people driving them are probably not going to pay as much attention as they really need and as much as we think that they really will, and this may cause problems within itself. These cars could start to form bad habits for humans as drivers.\n\nMaking these cars avaliable to humans could cause more problems than help. We have to think of the safety of the people around the car and about the people that are going to be in the car. If the car malfunctions, what will happen to the people around and in the car? These cars could be considered more of a danger to people more than helping the people. We need to worry more about how it will affect people just as much as how it will help them too. If it does more harm than good, what is the point of making the car in the first place.\n\nIn paragraph nine, it talks about how laws will need to be changed for these cars. What will this mean for the people that don't own these cars? Will they still have to follow the rules of the road today, or will they have to now have to follow the rules that were made for the other cars? Not everyone will be able to get one of these cars staight off the market as soon as they come out, we will still have some of the same cars that we have today later, and won't be able to get rid of all these cars fast enough that are drove on the roads today.\n\nNext, who are they trying to sell these cars too? Are they selling them to the people that have more money, or are they also going to try and sell them to middle class and lower class people? How expensive are these cars going to be for us to drive, or by in that matter? Will people with larger families be able to by one that is big enough for their entire family, or will they have to buy mulitple just so that their family can do something together?\n\nIn conclusion, I honestly think having these cars could just be another idea that is wasted because it will only benefit a few people and\n\nnot everyone. These cars could be a safety hazard to others on the streets and sidewalks if the car maulfuntions, and even can harm the people inside of the car. I think that we need to worry about the safety and efficiency of the car more than what it can do for the people in the future. We should worry about what will happen to the people now, more than what it will be like in the future. Either way, I think that this isn't the greatest idea ever, and that it shouldn't be allowed unless it will help more people and not just a few here and there.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars may be one of the biggest debates for the future. Of course, they have their pros and cons but will we really need smart cars for the future? Sure, driverless cars sound cool, expensive and helpful but can we honesly know that they're safe?\n\nIn paragraph 9 it talks about the laws and that they were put in place to ensure that everyone will be safe on the road. But what is technology fails and someone gets injured? Do they recieve the justice they deserve or is it their fault? These questions remain unasnwered because if driverless cars are thrown out into the world, well, we're going to need new laws.\n\nIn my opinion I don't think the luxury of driverless cars are worth the risk, people could get hurt or worst, they could die. In paragraph 7 it says that the human driver must remain alert at all times. Most people wouldn't want to have to worry if their car might spin out of control or run into an accident because they weren't ''alert''. This can cause major problems for the developers as they can be taken to court over the complaints or angry hurt victims.\n\nI also believe that we don't need smart cars. Our normal driving community works just fine and we don't need the hassel of adding in smart cars. That will potentially bring more accidents and could make the roads more unsafe. Regular cars ensure that most drivers are alert and ready for anything out there on the road, and I believe its best we keep it that way.\n\nIn conclusion, lets try to keep the roads safer by discontinuing driverless cars. We need the drivers focused and alert at all times, with both hands on the steering wheel to guide the car. If we keep the cars the way they are now, there will be fewer accidents and technology difficulties.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe the ''face'' on mars is a natural land form and was not created by aliens.\"... You can see things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixelsize. So if there were objects such in this picture like airplanes on the gound or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks , you could see what they were,\"(11) said, Jim Garvin, a scientist for NASA's Exploration Program. Showing that is there were any types of alien creations they could be seen through the monitors.\n\nAlso, in 1976 the technologies weren't the same compared to1998 and 2001. The picture in 1976 was blury and hardly visable. As time goes on the picture gets more clear and you can see how it looks more naturaly formed.\n\nLastly, its a natural landform because theres other natural land forms on America that can be compared to the \"face\". \"It reminds me of most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho... that's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated masa about the same height as the Fce on mars,\" says Garvin(12) .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke's point of view is he has 2 part time jobs in p1 they are a grocery store and a bank.\n\nHe also saw many countries in ruins.\n\nThere were 44 notions that joined together to help in p2.\n\nHe had to help take care of all the horses in p2.\n\nLuke diddnt know his life would change so fast that he got a job in p1.\n\nHe had 2 part time jobs and his friend invited him to go to Europe but Luke knew he cuoldn't say no.\n\nThere were many countries in ruins in p2.\n\nThat diddn't have food supplies, and more in p2.\n\nThe countries that were left in ruins were in Europe and the month and year was August 1945 in p2.\n\nIt took 44 nations to help the countries get food supplies, and more back iin p2.\n\nThe nations formed the UNRRA (the United Nations Releif and Rehabilitation) in p2.\n\nUNRRA hired \"Seagoing Cowboys to take care of all the horses in p2.\n\nA Seagoing Cowboy was much than an adventure for Luke Bomberger in p9.\n\nBeing one opened the world to him in p9.\n\nIt made him more aware of people of other countries and their needs in p9.\n\nLeading his family to host a number of international students and exchange visitors for many years in p9.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this day and age, it is believed by some that attending university or college is important to future success while others think that students should go to work after finishing high school. Although getting a job after school can have some merits, I personally believe that choosing a university or college is the better option for students after school.\n\nOn the one hand, there are certain benefits of getting a job after graduating from high school. First, this can save time, four years for university and three years for college. Instead of spending three or four years studying at a college or university, people may achieve a lot in their job. Second, finding a job after leaving school can be financially beneficial. This is mainly because the fee of studying at a university or a college can be very expensive, a lot of money can be saved for other purposes if one does not go to university. Also, having a job can help people to get a stable income.\n\nOn the other hand, it is my firm belief that studying at a university or college is the best route to a successful career. To begin with, students are more likely to get a good job in the future. After finishing university, a degree is provided for learners. That will help learners to get better jobs because most enterprises require a university degree. Moreover, students can have more opportunities to develop themselves if they have a university education. They can accomplish higher education such as a master’s or Ph. D. Besides, it will be possible for them to do research in the field that they are interested in.\n\nIn conclusion, although there are some benefits of getting a job after school, I am firmly convinced that studying at university or college is much more significant.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In 1976, Nasa discovered a mysterious type of landform that seemed to look like a human face. This discovery blew the world's minds. Everyone was under the influence that it was an alien landform, and that these extraterestrial beings created it. This idea was put into civilians minds by \"conspiracy theorists\". 25 years later, this idea was completely dismissed by a new high resolution photograph of the \"face\" which proved it was a mesa or butte, just like the ones we have on Earth.\n\nMany conspiracy theorists still think that it was the aliens and that NASA is just covering it up. There is lots of compeling evidence towards this idea, such as that it was taken twice in a span of 5 months, to make sure that they weren't missing anything. In that span, it still looked like a regular old landform on the red planet. These theorist think it was just a bad time to take these photos, and that it was a bad season or so on the red planet. They also thought that the camera wasn't good enough to see many pixels. \"As a rule of a thumb, yiou can discern things in a digital image 3 times the bigger than the pixel size.\" That sentence states, even if there were extra little shacks, you could see them in the picture, pretty clearly.\n\nIn conclusion, the face on Mars is clearly just a natural landform on the planet. The shadows looming over it at the time and the shape of the mesa, just happened to look like a face. It is just as a landform would be like on Earth.\n\n(I personally think aliens are real)", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Makng Mona Lisa Smile,\" the author descibes how a new technology called Facial Action Codind System (or FACS for short) enables computers to identify human emotions. This new technology can be an amazing way to help society.\n\nOne way that this technology can help us in the class and in our society is, the fact that can determine weather you are happy or upset. \"For example, if you smile when a web ad appears on your screen, a smililar ad might follow. but if you frown, the next ad will be different. A classroom computer could reconize when a student is beconming confused or bored, doctor Huang predicts that if it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor. The same technology can make computer animated faces more expresive-for video games or video surgery\" (Paragraph 6). This infers that, The FACS can help students get more into school by seeing their emotions to tell weather they are bored or not, and if they are bored they could modify the lesson like an effective human instructor.\n\nAnother reason that the FACS would be very help in the class and to society is, The FACS can help us determine each facial trait in a person. \"In fact, we humans preform this same impressive calculation every day. for instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face. Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that the conveys happy, worried etc. Yet Dr. Huang observes the artist such as da Vinci studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles percisely enough to convey specific emotions\" (Paragraph 5). The FACS can help provide emotions that cannot be seen by the naked eye, infering to the example, The FACS is more effective than A human itself in and out of class.\n\nAnother exaple that this technology can help us in the class and in our society is, In paragraph 7 when the instructor was giving examples while looking in the mirroe which were:\n\n1) Raise your lips at the corners of your mouth.\n\n2) Then squint your eyes slightly, to produce wrikling at the corners of your eyes.\n\n3) holding that, raise the outer part of your cheeks up, toward your eyes.\n\nThe instructror had said after the instructions, \"Does your expression in the mirror suggest an emotion?\n\ncan your lab partner recognize which one? In fact, these are instuctions for a face that looks happy. it's all about those muscular actions untits\" (Paragraph 7). After the lecture about the instructions given, \"By the way, Did making a face make you happy? According to the Facial Feedback Theroy of Rmotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may help produce them\" (Paragraph 9). this infers the although they were doing these examples in class, They still put a smile on their face do to the acts of emotions.\n\nTo conclude, The FACS is a great type of technology for the fact that, It can help determine emotions that can't be seen by the naked eye and it's greatly supportive by many circumstances.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The electoral college is a time worn system. Some people hate it, others defend it to their dying breath. The electoral college is no longer a good way to select our nations' leader because the power no longer rests with the people.\n\nThrough the electoral college system, we put our votes into the trust of strangers who may or may not decide to vote how they want and completely disregard our voices. Plus with all of the corruption in government as it is, it wouldn't be the most difficult thing to buy a voter off and potentially change the outcome of the election. Or the electoral college voters could end up clueless or untrustworthy, as Bradford Plumer, Source 2, paragraph 10, points out: \"Can voters always control whom their electors vote for? Not always. Do voters sometimes get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate? Sometimes.\", proving the point that the people are not in control.\n\nGranted there are a few small benefits to the electoral college. It usually prevents the confusion of ties inside states, and, as Source 3, paragragh 20, Richard A. Posner says, \" Voters in toss-up states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaignto really listen to the competing candidatesknowing that they are going to decide the election. They are likely to be the most thoughtful voters, on average, and the most thoughtful voters should be the ones to decide the election.\"\n\nThe problem with the overwhelming power given to the swing states by the electoral college is that it does not represent the American idea: that no one group of people is in control, that everybody has an equal say in the matter. When a state like California votes for a candidate, that candidate immediately has an advantage from the start. And all the people in California who voted for the other candidate are not heard at all.\n\nCorruption is, again, a major problem with most politics, including the electoral college. In 1960, segregationists nearly replaced all of the democratic electoral voters in Louisiana with voters who would instead oppose John F. Kennedy, and potentially cost him the election. But while a small group of people can be bought off and turned to vote against the majority, it is impossible to corrupt the American people. It would also cause candidates to have to pay more attention to the smaller states and the states that the candidate thinks they will win over automatically due to their current party.\n\nThe American people need the power to elect their leader back in their hands again. The electoral college was a good system years ago, but with time comes change.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\"\n\nIn \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus.\" The author makes the claim that the study of Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. In the artical the author informes his or her reader that \"Long ago,Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediments and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\n\n\"In the text the author starts off his senteces with \"Long ago,\" This simply proves \"no spacraft survived the landing for more than a hours,\" which is also stated in the text in paragraph 2. In paragraph 2 the author also states Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us.\" The author is making it clear it want be easy doing research on Venus.\n\nIn the text paragraph 3 states \"A thick atmosphere of alomost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clounds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmoshere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times than what we experience on our own planet.\"\n\nThe author is make his or her point how exploring Venus can be very challenging.\n\nIn the text the author states \"Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though mercury is closer to the sun. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.\"\n\nThe author is making it clear as posible of the danger that comes along with studying Venus's atmosphere. The author states in paragraph 5 \"The National Aeronautics and Space Administration ( NASA) has one particularly compelling ideal for sending humans to study Venus. NASA's possible solution to the Hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientist to float above the fray.\" The author is backing up his or her claim by using a outsiders voice. In this case The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA).\n\nIn the text the author state in paragraph 7 \" NASA is working on other approaches to study Venus.\"Once again the author is using a outsiders voice to state his or her claim. The textes also states in paragraph 7 \" Another project is looking back to an old technology called mechanical computers. These devices were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War ll.\" The author is just interducing some of the project he or she had in mind.\n\nIn the text the author states in paragraph 8 \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has Value not only beacuse of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also beacuse human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and Beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\"\n\nThe author is simply resting his or her claim, based on the suggestion they made to study Venus, and why they think Venus is worthy pursuit the dangers it presents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I disagree with the value of using this technology to read students emotional expression because a picture may be susposed to make you laugh but it only shows what the computer can do.\n\n. Only you know how you are feeling inside and whenever somebody says that they use technology to read students emotional expressions they are not accurate .\n\nThe Mona Lisa picture is intended to make somebody smile but it only shows what the computer can do . The creater of the picture has made more than one picture . You may not see anything in the picture that shows emotion but there is always something in his paintings . The Mona Lisa picture is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted , 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry . She has many emotions not just one .\n\nEven thought you may think the Mona Lisa may be boring it does show emotion but it is hard to find . New computer software has been made to inhance the picture .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this day and age, many parents force their children to concentrate too much on academics. Others oppose that children should spend more time doing kinesthetic activities. Although studying performance at school is of great importance, I strongly advocate parents advise their offspring to engage more in physical exercise.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, people may argue that at the early period of life, there is nothing more essential for students than learning. Focusing on academic training aids them to get higher results at school; as a result, they are prone to get better jobs in the future. For instance, employers de facto tend to choose candidates with more excellent academic profiles. Therefore, it goes without saying why many parents require their offspring to pay full attention to their schooling tasks.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, doing exercise plays a crucial role not only in the physical but in the mental growth of a child. Firstly, regarding physical health, involving in more movement prevents youngsters from having a sedentary lifestyle, which may lead to numerous ailments such as obesity, stroke and coronary heart diseases in their later lives. For example, according to a study from the University of Sydney, if a minor spends too much time sitting at a computer, he will get 50% more chances of getting coronary thrombosis from the age of 40 than their peers who regularly play sports from a tender age. Secondly, participating in sports is also advantageous to form children's cognitive abilities. They are capable of acquiring a sense of community as well as competitive and cooperative abilities. Hence, doing exercise is beneficial for both physical and mental development in childhood.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, despite the fact that in this competitive society, children will enjoy a leg up in many competitions thanks to having better academic results, I believe spending more time joining kinesthetic activities is of great help for every child's well-rounded growth. However, it is better if they can allocate time properly to both studies and sports.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper know child teen age eight seventeen nt live go computer Well myspace facebook aim like online hangout Kids every log nt log unless parent child makes I firmly belive computers major effect people three reasons people nt exersise dont interact others kids smocky sneak research wasnt Online websites games like hipnotysing people making stay hours Most parents belive child computer research hour good however kids would sneak pay online going go website allowed go wasnt Sometimes best thing get fresh air interact others Buth websites make people stay conect two hours dont get fresh air dont interact others Most times people forgot dont know something except computer play much People grow fast think people start eat drink sometimes sleep computer People stay computer eat wont get enought exercise start get fat soon stay computers didnt exercise burn fat How see computers major effect people interacting others enough kids wife sneaky go website wer allowed go thier parents wernt home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Features setting affected cyclist many different waysfor example ask older guts nt left rheir porches since carter office next placewas get water Also middle nowhere It also June weather warm nt lot water", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I can agree and disagree with your statement saying that you think it was created by aliens. It was not the aliens that created the face, because in the article \"Unmasking the Face of Mars\", the author, NASA,and other scientist states that It was noted a \"huge rock formation which resembles a human head formed by shadows giving the ilusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" Plus the authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention\n\nto Mars.\n\nThe article also mentions that The Malin's team captured an extraordinary\n\nphoto using the camera's absolute maximium resolution. Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo. As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size\" Garvin said. \"So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "For many years, people have toyed with the idea that there are and have always been aliens living in the planets around us. Recent discoveries have made it easier for skepitcs to believe in such things. One of these discoveries would be the finding of the face on Mars.\n\nIn 1976, a picture surfaced. In 1998 that picture was retaken in a higher resolution and again in 2001. It raised suspicions the moment it was seen, because scientists thought, like the rest of the world soon would, that this would mean something big; aliens. Soon, though scientists uncovered the heartbreaking truth that the face was none other than a land form.\n\nWhile scientists were positive that no alien life form had any part in the creaton of the face, the public was not so sure. NASA knew the truth, and it was a big let down for them, because it would be to their benefit if there really were aliens on Mars, but many pwople said that NASA was holding back information.\n\nScientist compare the face to other land forms. Jim Garvin even said \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho...That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the face on Mars. Some people still think the face could be an alien landform. Others think there is no possible way it could be a landform.\n\nWhile the face has become very popular, the argument, for some people still stands. NASA is positive that it is only a landform, while skeptics believe there is witheld information. One thing to keep in mind when arguing how the face got there, is that NASA would benefit from aliens, so why would they keep it from us?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recent years have witnessed a debate about whether investing in encouraging people to stay healthy should be given more importance than saving the ill. While many patients are in demand of support from the government and community, I hold the belief that preventing illness should be prioritized over curing.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, it is a big challenge for the poor to resolve their \bhealth issues when living on a tight budget. This is the reason why there is a need for financial aid from the public. For instance, many children who are new-born have to deal with physical disabilities but their parents cannot afford to find proper treatment. As a consequence, in a real sense, a lot of fund-raising campaigns from not-for-profit organizations operate to implement the mission of bringing a better life for the unlucky.\r\n\r\nNevertheless, for a variety of reasons, it would be wrong if the emphasis is placed mostly on the treatment. Instead, promoting healthy lifestyles will be of great significance in declining the illness. To begin with, many patients fall into a certain disease as a result of lacking knowledge and not being health-conscious. Hence, there should be propaganda programs to alert people about the consequences of unhealthy lifestyles as well as how to stay away from dangerous illnesses. To illustrate, during the Covid-19 period, the Vietnamese medical authority implemented numerous communication campaigns to convey 5K regulations in order to raise people's awareness about how to stay safe during this pandemic, which brought a profound effect at that time. Furthermore, encouraging a healthy lifestyle has a perennial impact on society. If most of the population has focused on health issues, thus, has better physical and mental well-being, the budget investing in treatment can be spent on other urgent problems like poverty or education.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, although providing treatment support is necessary, I do believe that preventing is better than curing diseases. Therefore, there is a need to plough ahead with social projects to establish healthy living habits.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Face On Mar's\n\nHave you ever heard a face that is on Mar's. See there is a face on Mar's that has been there for 25 years. Reseachers have came a cross it when they were doing study of the planenet called Mar's. The NASA took a picture of the face but the reaseaches really couldn't see it. This took place in 1976.\n\nThis Face looked like a human face. Reaseaches was amazed how this face popped up on mar's. The face was talked about all around the world. It was in magazines, books, and radio talk showes. This face on mar's was amazing at time. It started out in Hollywood and started to spread around.\n\nThe face on mar's started to die out of it's fame. Then reaseaches came a cross it again but this time flew over it and took a photo of it again. This time the reaseaches could see a little more deatail of the face. This took place in 1998. The NASA say they flew over it for the first time.\n\nReaseachers study on it really hard but thire mission faulted again. Everyone says that they think it was from alliens. Even a few reaseachers say they think it was from alliens. It was hard for them to see if it was from alliens or not.\n\nThe reaseachers mission started up again and they had more tecnlogy and to see the face way better. So this time they took a photo and sent it to NASA. they had really good detail now. They found out what it was and it didn't come frome alliens. they took the picture back in 2001. the picture showed a Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Final:\n\nI find I am against driverless cars because it's too risky to try out on the road. No car will ever be completely self-sufficient, which means humans must pay attention, but i believe even with all the alerts it won't be enough. We humans are unpredictable meaning who knows if we will be able to stay focused enough to know if when we need to take over. Google has had a self-drivng car since 2009, but has not been on sale yet, because it had some problems. I feel this will continue to go on, Tesla says they will have a self-driving car out this year, but I feel it will be pushed back because of some \"minor\" problems.\n\nSome car companies are using vibrations or telling people directly when to take over, but it's still too unreliable. I also agree that people will get bored waiting for their turn to drive. To pass the time, some companies are planning on adding in-car entertainment. This is a huge distraction and could probably lead to a crash. There are still some key issues that need to be worked out like, if the technology fails and someone's injured, who's at fault.\n\nAutomakers are continuing their work on the assumption that these problems will be resolved, but what if they're not! It's too much of a risk to just assume that these problems will be fixed. i also believe we shouldn't be wasting our time right now on driverless cars, when we have bigger car problems going on currently. We need to create cars that have cameras, so then people can get caught being on their phones. We need cars that are more fuel efficient because our air isn't getting any cleaner, and people aren't going to stop driving. Having a driverless car is a luxury and is extremely not necessary right now at all!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I thinck for the emotional things of the technology is kind of more advanced like every moment they do something different they always have to make a digital and some other people don't really get about the digital things they get lose really easlly and for some other people is more likely an easy thing to do but not always because it has their difficulties and they are challenging so they have to do it right or they will mess up the photo, and theirs a conclusion about this and is kind of creepy that now computer can easlly detect the movement of our facil guess what they mean like emotions and other things that's on our faces but i think it helps people to understand how things work and how our selfs are doing if their mad, sad, happy etc. there is better ways for humans and computers to communicate not only by facial recognizing, all the software of all the people are different and computers softwarre is just way different then humans it just takes time to figure this out quickly. things can actually change from good to sometimes bad and it's not the way to show their expresion that has been having by the other kind of people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What is the electoral college? The electoral college is a process , not a place . If i would have to argue in favor of keeping the Electoral college or changing to election by popular vote for the president of the united states , I would have to agree with keeping the Electoral college. I would agree because the Electoral college consists of 538 electors , a majority of 270 is required to elect presidents , and i think that it is a fair amount of people who are required to vote.\n\nThis Electoral College process consists of the selection of the electors , the meeting where they vote for President and Vice president , and the counting of the electoral votes by congress . These votes are very important because with those votes you are making a very important choice by voting for the president and vice president , it should not stop because you could make a difference with just one vote you never know and you would not want just anybody as your president , right ? These electotral votes should not stop .\n\nThis election is held every four years on the tuesday after the first Monday in November . If we make a vote for our candidate we are actually voting for our canditate electors , very important. After the presidential election your governor prepares what they call \" Certificate of Ascertainment \" , what is that ? it is listing all of the candidates who ran for President in your state along with the names of their respective electors it is so important because it shows which electors will represent your state at the meeting of the electors in December year . The Certificates of Ascertainments are sent to the congres and the National Archives as part of the official records of the presidential election .\n\nBradford wrote \" The indefensible Electoral college : Why even the best laid defenses of the system are wrong \" . It talks about how some people prefer a direct election to the kind we have now .and how this year voters can expect another close election in which the popular vote winner could again lose the presidency , yet the the electoral college still has defenders . This shows electoral colllege is good because it still has its defenders.\n\nIt says at the most basic level , the electoral college is unfair to voters because of the winner-take-all sysrem in each state . Some voters do feel like electoral college is unfair but others do not , they should do electoral college because of all the reasons i just gave wether some people like it or not . They should not abolish electoral college.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe author concludes story paragraph showing hibiscus inspires gives comfort person could try For example Saeng failed drivers test disappointed On way home saw hibiscus went florist shop try buy Saeng took peddle plant held tightly closed eyes The plant reminded real home vietnam loved The hibuscus became form comfort Saeng since failed drivers test even though plant one home By author ending story Saeng saying wait hibiscus starts budding take test shows hibiscus helps overcome obstacles life helps get hardships faces", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can books music movies materials perfect everyone Everyone oppinion beliefs materials good acceptable human minds All world young kids young adults adults reading books magazines listening music watching movies Those hobbies people enjoy Everyone reads different kind books whether mystery romance bible based books people read Removing books magazines materials shelves library leads unsuccessful empty library When people come search book read search think enjoy If enjoy one thing another person might They might find book offensive mean everyone else offensive book well Taking book leaves person would enjoy book stuck searching another book Everyone different everyone story like books Magazines like books meant enjoyed I believe magazines might appropriate people But nt mean take shelf It means person simply read Magazines made people enjoy s many different kinds They want fit magazine personally individual Music number one entertainment people enjoy There reason many different genres The music industry try best sort music taste Just one song stuff nt like nt mean delete song everyone Music used many different ways It relaxes pumps used parties events many things All songs different use however want To band music someone nt like changes music forever There would music listen People able watch movies want That s ratings movies What acceptable teenagers acceptful young kids That s watch If people banned movies thought inapropriate There would rented movie stores theaters success movie production industry Everyone know kind movies like watch like leave movies people enjoy No books magazines movies music perfect everyone Materials bring different kind subjects stories everyone Each materials brings enjoyment different people To band materials believe inappropriate leave shelves empty What kind library", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Much attention has been drawn to the extent of damage inflicted on the ecosystem by the manufacturing industry. Taking account of the enormous demand for consumer goods in the current market, I suspect the prime cause of the problem lies in the production system itself. From a personal perspective, the best course of action to solve the issue is therefore to explore alternative materials or more eco-friendly manufacturing techniques.\n\nTo bring the shortcomings of the production process into sharp focus, it is worth looking at the chemical by-products of the process. Most industrialists labour under a misapprehension that unrestrained economic growth can be achieved without damaging the environment. However, in practice, as more goods are produced, not only has more carbon dioxide being emitted to the air, but more cleaning agents have also leaked into water sources. Moreover, single-use products, most of which are non-biodegradable plastics, have been introduced to accommodate customers’ ever-increasing demands. Discarded easily and being able to remain as wastes for thousands of years, these plastic products find their way into the ocean and threaten marine fauna.\n\nTaking those points into consideration, a plausible solution should be striving towards the usage of more environmentally friendly materials. For instance, Starbucks chains have opted for paper or bamboo straws, as well as cups, as a substitution for plastics. If the initial investment and the maintenance cost of the alternatives are high, which oftentimes are the case, governmental promotion, such as tax breaks or financial incentives can go a long way towards developing more sustainable production practices. Businesses making use of renewable sources of energy, for example, can be subsidized by taxpayers, in contrast with those that use nonrenewable sources. \n\nIn conclusion, the manufacturing sector has taken its toll on the environment due to the concomitant hazardous substances that are subsequently disposed of after the production process. In an attempt to address this issue, going green should be practiced by both the companies and the governments.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How would you like to join the Seagoing Cowboys,I think you sould join the Seagoing Cowboys because you get to go all around the world. you can also have lots of fun.\n\nFirst I think you should join Seagoing Cowboys bacause you can go all around\n\nthe world. For example, the subtitle states \"Luke Bomberger had been over the alantic ocean sixteen times and the pacific two times. Another example says in paragraph 4 that when he was discharged in 1947, Luke Bomberger had already made nine trips that was more than any Seagoing Cowboy. Luke was only eighteen when he first went to Greece.\n\nLastly, I think you should join because you can have lots of fun with your friends. In paragraph 8 the text talkes about how they had fun after unloading animals off the boat. They did thing such as playing table tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and more. Also games helped pass the time.\n\nI think these paragraphs should have inspired and persuaded you to join the Seagoing Cowboys program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", the author uses examples and explains that their is a science in smiling and that we can improve teaching, and make school more enjoyable for kids by just reading their face. This machine can do a lot and help the school system a lot like when the machine reads that a child is bored it will make the lesson more exciting, if it reads that the child is confused, it could explain the information in a different way, or it could even help us vote in the future.\n\nThe machine could do wonders for our education by making school more enjoyable by reading kids faces and if they are bored then making it more expressive and spice it up. In the passage it says, \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is confused or bored.... then it could modify the lesson like an effective human instructor\" (Paragraph 6). No kid wants to be bored during a lesson, but with this system you literally cannot be bored and this could help with test performance and academics in a whole. When someone is not bored during a lesson it makes it a lot more enjoyable because they actually want to undertand the information and do not want it to end. If this system ever gets implemented it could be revolutionary.\n\nThe system can make kids less confused because if the machine reads that a child is confused, it could explain the same information in a different way to make them understand it more. The passage says, \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication\" (Paragraph 6). This quote explains that not all the time people share their emotions out loud and do not express their feelings. When someone is really confused on a lesson, they sometimes do not ask questions because they are too scared to. With this machine they would not have to ask any questions because the machine could just read your face and explain it in a different way. This system really could change the way school works forever.\n\nThe machine could help us vote in the future because it could tell us if the politician is genuine or not. In the passage it says, \" To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a 'smiling' politician or celebrity is not being truthful\" (Paragraph 8) This quote shows that in the future we could even tell if our favorite celebrity or if our next president is really genuine, or they just smile for the cameras.This is relevant in the classroom because nowadays kids are really worried about our country's leader, and that could be distracting for kids when they are in the classroom. If we know we have the best person for the job kids would not beas nervous. The way someone smiles can show who they really are, if they are a good person they will only smile when they are happy and not to make it seem like they like what they are doing. This machine could even help our country deciding the best possible president which would strengthen our country as a whole and not make kids even more stressed.\n\nOverall from the article the \" Facial Action Coding System\" is doing so much more good than bad. As we all know this world is becoming more and more paperless and using this system could really change the way we look at school today. Everyone learns in different ways and the facial reader could benefit everyone in their own way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are those who argue that when a nation is already rich, any additional growth in its economy will not make its citizens more gratified. However. I completely do not coincide with the same view.\n\nTo begin with, the nation's economic growth will open a vast of work opportunities to people in the working community as it attracts more local and foreign investors. For instance, a famous shoe company will open a branch in a particular country. Therefore, it needs high numbers of employees to fill vacant and available job positions. Consequently, more people will get more chances and opportunities to be employed and some might even get promoted. Hence, more job opportunities mean more satisfaction for the citizen of a country. \n\nIn addition, by having growth in the economy, people in the community will push themselves more to work together. As they can see the positive outcome of their camaraderie with each other. Study shows that if residents in a community or country are harmoniously working together, not only do they get a sense of companionship but also a more harmonious relationship. Hence, they feel more gratified and more encouraged to work with each other. Since they not only get personal benefits out of it but as well as they can help their economy to grow.\n\nTo conclude, a country's growing economy may pose great work opportunities and job vacancies within a nation. As local and foreign investors will be enticed to open a branch of their product in a certain country. On top of that, it can be a ladder to success for the residents as well. As they can be promoted to a higher positions. Furthermore, there are studies that showed that people in a nation can be stirred up more to form a harmonious relationship with each other as they can see the great benefit of it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the past children used to have more responsibilities in comparison with the current situations. Some have the idea that it has more benefits than what is occurring nowadays. From my point of view, the given responsibilities should be limited to what a child can handle.\r\n\r\nHaving more responsibilities can prepare children for life. Due to the numerous duties that kids may be in charge of, life skills are encouraged and developed in a more effective way. Being influenced by the experience gained, the children are wiser to take appropriate measures to solve any issue imposed . In Japan, the education system promotes being responsible by encouraging the students to clean their school as part of their daily routines. Children who are used to taking more responsibilities can act more accurately in life.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the reduction in the number of duties may provide more time for children to play which is fundamental to their mental health. We need to consider more time to play for children, if we want to have healthier children. Having numerous duties is harmful to their mental health as their capacity to handle and deal with many tasks is limited. In Africa, there are many kids deprived of childhood as they have to work like grown-up adults. Play is vital for every child as it brings satisfaction and happiness.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although some have the notion that preparing children for life by giving them different responsibilities is crucial, I think the need to play should considered as the first priority for any child.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are driverless cars really a good idea? I think not for many reasons. First off, driverless cars may require less fuel, but as an overall the cost for the cars to run and be used on roads are simply too much money. Second off, the car would still require the driver to be well aware of the road and ready to take over the vehicle. Finally, the driverless car hasn'thave enough testing or liability for what is to hapopen in a car wreck on car malfunction.\n\nFirst, the car may consume less fuel \"the cars he forsees would use half the fuel of today's taxis\" which is a good benefit, but at the same time it isn't important. For the car to be able to be driven on the road, ex[ensive road changes and modifications would have to be made \"but they required massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was simply too expensive to be practical.\"\n\nIf a driverless car was to be sold and manufactured, what's the purpose? The driver has to still remain aware at all times and must be attent when on the road, disproving the \"driverless car\" \"This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation occurs.\" Also, the car might be loaded with new features to help guarentee safety measures and navigation, but the car still requires the driver to take over when the car comes to a problem such as backing out, traffic jams, or even road construction\n\n\"but allare designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" So with that being said, is all the money and new technology really worth the car driving for small amounts of time when the driver is capable of completing all the tasks listed above?\n\nFinally, the driverless car has been driven over half a million of miles already \"Their cars have been driven more than half a million miles without a crash,\" but what's to say there isn't a malfunction in the produced car in a more intense driving situation? The driverless car can only handle up to twenty five miles an hour, which is five miles slower than the normal speed limit on urban roads which is thirty miles per hour; this means the car would cause you to arrive to your destination slower and possible holding up traffic and causing angry drivers around you to pass at speeds above the posted speed limit. Also, the liability for the cars aren't assured. If traffic laws are changed, laws for the car would have to be too; what's to say the laws do not cover car wrecks with this type of vehicle, who is at fault? \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault---the driver or the manufacturer?\"\n\nAs an overall, my opinion stands with a firm no. The idea of a driverless car would be a great advance on technology, but until all the kinks and problems with the vehicle are worked out I would side with no. In this essay, I proved why the driverlss car would not be a beneficial chance on drivers and the road because of these three reasons: the overall cost for the cars, the intended purpose of the car carries no value as the driver would still be in the same position as he was in a normal car, and the overall safety and liability for owning or opperating this vehicle.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are alot of things that people claim to be created by aliens, in my opinion and maney others aliens are not real.There are alot of arguments like, Then how did the eygpsians build those big pyrimyds,or how are ther crop circles in fields formed\n\n,well i am sure these all have great solutions that we have\n\nacully seen,meaning we have'nt seen aliens, so why acuse them?\n\nI mean for real we blame these things on creatures we have never even see or had phisical contact with ?\n\nI feel this may just be a natural landform created by diffrent presures and wind levels in space. Maybe just like on earth how some of are landforms are formed, like rivers and things\n\nwere formed by glaicers. The human mind takes things it has not seen before and relates\n\nthem to things we are farmiliar with witch in some way allows them to assume the formation on mars\n\n''resembles a human head''.\n\nWitch it dose to all human eyes because, this is what we have seen before and see all the time so thats what we relate it to.\n\nThe day I see one.\n\nThe day I see an alien then maybe I will refer back to the statement\n\n\"it was aliens'' and say the people that belive\n\nin them, were correct, but for now I am going to keep my answer solid with there are no aliens.\n\nAlot of things in this world that we have no answer for I just dont agree with blaming things on aliens its just not a logical exsplination.\n\nMany things in this world are very interesting and we have no exsplination or reasoning for,thats what keeps the mystery in alot of are everyday lifes and, allows people to make money off from the shows they suck us in to .So i feel we should just drop the aliens did this and that intell we acually have incounters that are proven with one. By all means i will except all the thereys then..But not now.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people believe that the level of health and hygiene can improve only by the government`s monitoring such as imposing some policies related to food supply; however, others are in this opinion that personal decision and responsibility have played a vital role in this subject. In my perspective, both the government`s legislation and personal care, are necessary.\n\nOn the one hand, one of the important causes of health problems is the food which people consume. If governments legislate various laws related to this issue the level of problems, which people face during their life, will increase, and life expectancy will be extended. Moreover, by improving the agricultural techniques, the mortality reduction emerges that is because better nutrition will be shared among people. To illustrate, If urban centres start to deliver clean water and remove waste, the dramatic reduction in water and nutrition will be occurring, general personal hygiene grows. So, governments can be a crucial aid for declining in mortality rate and rising in health level.\n\nOn the other hand, people were given advice about what are the causes of disease and how they can prevent infectious disease by caring about personal health, so what they need is to pay attention on little easy subjects such as watching their hand, do not use others brush, and visiting a doctor in every specific period to check up. Furthermore, sports have been one of the necessary fields that decrease the risk of being sick, so provided that one has a regular daily exercise, they will not face difficulty especially when they become old. Thus, without personal-care, public health will not develop.\n\nTo conclude, it is obvious that states are vital aspects to promote health-related items as well as self-attention. In my notion, both self-care and the state-care about the aspects which affect health are equally important, and these hygiene improvements can be more effective if both groups cooperate.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe author concluded story paragraph plant represent determined survive In words hibiscus brings Saeng good luck next driving test winter season uhen hibiscus budding Also reason author concluded sentence show plan future", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People have different views about whether art should become one of important subjects for the youth or not. While many arguments assume that learning about art at school is time consuming, others are on the contradicting view. Personally, I would contend that art should be taught in optional courses.\nOn the one hand, there are some reasons for the idea of removing art classes from school’s schedule. One realistically cogent reason is that art is not an essential skill for life survival. People still can find a job and earn for living without an art talent. In fact, there are not many job opportunities for artists compared with other common sectors, hence, some parents would incline to equip their children with academic knowledge rather than art techniques so that kids’ future would be guaranteed with an easier and brighter career path. Therefore, it is not unreasonable for those who consider that spending time for these subjects is such a waste resulting in their intention of the cancellation.\nOn the other hand, there are some points of view that support the necessary of art courses in school. It can be seen that practicing art activities could develop the young generation’s creativities. Besides, initial art classes could help children explore their passion and ability, thereby gradually germinate and evolve their talent. Moreover, a few hours of learning art could be able to help children relax after other academic subjects.\nHowever, to my mind, although there are both merits and drawbacks of art courses, they should not be completely removed or become an essential subject. I believe some kids enjoy doing art, others might feel uncomfortable. Hence, I would like to suggest that school can make these courses optional. It should depend on the youth to decide to participate in or not.\nIn conclusion, there are pros and cons for spending time for art in school, nevertheless, everyone deserve to freely make their own decision for how they spend in education stage.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A few masses opine that there is no need for news telecast on television or in articles as these are useless and not related to the lives of citizens. I completely disagree with the statement as it plays an important role and the same would be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, there are a plethora of inhabitants, whose morning starts with a cup of tea and by reading the newspaper, they cannot imagine their life without it. Thus, it is crystal clear that news plays a crucial role and it has a plethora of advantages. Initially, weather forecasts are essential as these aware people in advance of climate change and they can take precautions before. For instance, earthquakes, tsunamis, and other disasters are declared before through news telecasts, it could save plenty of lives.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, individuals could read about their favourite topics in the news and keep themselves updated regarding various incidents happening across the world. To put it forth, sports lovers could frequently receive the latest tournament information and their results through game columns of magazines. Despite this, job seekers could search and apply for the latest job openings, consequently, it proves to be a lifesaver for the masses. Lastly, these could be used by detectives to search for old cases and fathom their cases. For example, newspaper cuttings could be used as a vital clue to solve a murder, kidnapping or other mysteries. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, rags are composed of all incidents and variations introduced in society, subsequently, these are frequently liked by the readers, who want to keep themselves up-to-date about their surroundings. Therefore, it is arduous to imagine life without news and it is the most important source to spread information around.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars have always sounded like a briliant idea for public transportation. That is what has always caught my attention for how genius the idea was. Google cars are leading the way to full on driverless cars sometime in the futre, exept for the many rules and regulations that will be needed to be put in place for the safe operation of these vehicles. After further reading, there are some forms of driverless tech are already in use, like anti-lock breakes, BMW's Traffic Jam Assistant, and GM's seats that vibrate when a vehicle is backing up too close to an object. These items are a start to the future of driverless automobiles, but there is still a long way to go. One of the biggest pitfalls that driverless cars face are the states that outlaw the testing or use of driverless cars. Once those challenges are faced, then the future of driverless automobiles can really get going.\n\nanother troublesome point to driverless cars is that the person behind the wheel could forget to pay attention because they are not doing anything and not notice that the car is on manual control and have an accident. And if an accident does occur, who will be to blame, the car or the driver? That is one major point that will need to be settled before any more work can be done.\n\nonce all of the bugs and rules are all worked out, then the process of mass producing self-driving cars has to begin. The price of automated cars is quite high, and the technology is still being developed, which means you could buy a self driving Mercedes-Benz, and two weeks later a more advanced Nissan comes out with even better tracking systems, and your super expensive car is already obsolite.\n\nAnother big deal is the servicing of your car and the self driving system. If a part goes bad, the whole system could go down, and the part to repair it could cost more than the car is worth, which could total the car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System would be a great addition to everyday school life. This computer system can help with several things from elementary school to college. This could also change the way the world works forever. The FACS can easily be an important part of our education society.\n\nThe first and most effective thing FACS would impact is student's attitudes in the classroom. If FACS was active on all of the students computers, it could detect their emotions to influence them to get back on track and focus. It could also simply just keep the concentration going about the lesson being instructed. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr. Huang predicts. 'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\" (D'Alto 6) . This can improve the interaction in class and can also improve many students grades.\n\nIf FACS was implemented into schools, students would feel more involved in the lecture, and pay attention more while being extra alert. Students will also be more knowledegable due to the fact that they are taking in information and really getting to learn about it, instead of just trying to find the answers that will satisfy on a worksheet or test. While feeling more involved, alert, and learning a lesson with full attention, this will impact grades greatly. This will help even more students proceed on into the next step of education, which is college.\n\nFACS would benefit in grade school and would most definitely continue to help students in college. College can get difficult, but FACS could influence to keep students focused when they seem to become overwhelmed by their expressions. If students are impacted by FACS when they are younger and proceed on to college while continuing their education, there then comes a career. FACS will help in high school to get you to a college of your dreams, also best fit for your major. Then in college, it will help you focus and be actively listening and learning about your major to help you find a career that best fits you and your abilities. If everyone could have the opportunity to have the career as what best suits them, they will have an easier life and being more helpful to the people around them.\n\nIf FACS started being used in elementary school, proceeded to middle school, and so on in high school; it will teach students the habit of fully paying attention in class and being active. It will improve grades greatly. It will also help college students stay focused, even when times seem to become difficult. They will also already be influenced to stay active and fully aware of the lesson in class. If a student has well listening skills and is knowledgeable of their major, they will find the best job for theirself. If more people began to find jobs that benefitted them, and they were happy doing it, it would impact more than just students, it would impact the whole world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I woke school started getting ready grabbed stuff walked When I got school I sttarted hanging friends good day far At around hour go lunch I wasnt hungry I wanted go friend wanted eat I waited went outside afterwards When go outside like back walkovers handstands backbends fronthandsprings cartwheels stuff like After bell rang hour recourse I wasnt feeling good I hungry I wanted go home grab something eat still wait till recourse ride bus hour When I finally got home I didnt feel good dad asked whats matter I told I hungery around said wait untill mom gets home mom gets home I wait patiant hours I realized ok wait delicouse dinner would ate something else dinner probly would aten dinner I would ate something else dinner I probly would aten dinner And story examples patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author wrote ending paragraph way many reasons The main reason wanted end story lighter note All throughout story depresing nogistalistic tone made reader yearn past The author wanted put emphisis strong even though enjoy Also author wanted show strength main main character Saeng Even though failed test new strange world still wishes continue pushing foward This adds demension character makes less static dynamic This good story read homesick need something push forward", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a lot of things that cause pollution, but there is one pollution that is imparticular that pertains to these stories and that's air pollution. Air pollution is caused by fossil fuels. So people around the world are cutting car usage to prevent anything bad from happening. The advantages of limiting car usage are less air pollution, more exercies, and little burning of fossil fuels.\n\nIn the article \"In german suburb, life goes on without cars,\" by Elisabeth Rosenthal, it says that in Vauban, Germany the residents have given up their cars. In Vauban they are forbidden to use cars. They made everything close together so tha the residents can be at walking distance. \"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,\" said Heidrun Walter. Heidrun is able to walk to any store because it is so close.\n\nIn the next article it talks about Paris baning driving. Paris ban driving due to smog. They were using diesel oil since Frane has a tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline. Diesel makes up mor than half of France's vehicles. Paris has more smog than other European capitals. In Paris they had to make people with an odd or even numbered plate stop driving. They let the people with the odd numbered plates drive after the smog cleared up.\n\nIn the next article Colombia has their own car-free day. All the people in Colombia are doing outdoor activities that don't involve cars. This is their third straight year that cars are ban. \"There was slight rain, but that did not stop people from particpating,\" said Bogota Mayor Antanas Mockus. For the first time Cali and Valledupar, two Colombian cities joined the event.\n\nIn conclusion, These articles generally talk about how some countries are trying to stop people from polluting the air. The advantages of limiting car usage are less air pollution, more exercies, and little burning of fossil fuels.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obsticles faced In attempting Allow dirigibles needed enough cable It cold Blimp passengers weight Another obstacles How could power wind High In Air Another reason If would Be padestrans At another reason Is Building would Have UP", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author created many feelings memoir First author created warm loving mood I never forget house gracious neighborhood many things I learned love I never forget parents turned simple house home This quote shows much passion behind families love makes feel warm comfortable inside Second feelings author also creates friendly caring Growing environment instilled great sense family nothing blood relative In neighborhood despite customs elsewhere cultures came together great solitary friendship This shows friendship important gives friendly caring feeling reader Lastly author created happy upbeat feeling begining memoir Here innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompass formed backdrop life warm home This quote shows author s family celebrated life created upbeat feelings In conclusion author memoir created many feelings reader", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
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