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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars have helped people over the years, but has it helped the enviorment or your heath. When driving a car, the car releases gases that can effect the air around us. There are advantages of limiting the use of cars, like a heathier enviroment and a heathier body.\n\nOne advantage of limiting the use of cars is a heathier enviroment. When you are driving a car the gas in the car, is let out into the air. The gas that gose in the air can effect the air and plants around us, as it can turn to toxic. As the source Elisabeth Rosenthal explains, 50 percent of the greenhouse gases are caused by car-intensive areas in the United States. The gas from are cars are not just effecting are air, there effecting are greenhouse to. The source Robert Duffer tells us, how paris banded using cars after days of near-record pollution to clear the air. After days of no cars the air was clear again. As you can tell, limmiting car uses will help the enviroment alot.\n\nForthermore, Another advantage of limiting the use of cars is a heathier body. Instead of just siting in a car you can ride a bike,walk or roller skate. Also all those gases from the car wont be going in your body, effecting your insides. As the source Andrew Selsky explains, in Colombia on free car day the people hicked,skated and bicked to get where they need to go, instead of using a car. Without a car to take you places you will get exercie, which will give you power and engery for your body. A normal person should also exercise for 30 mintes a day. Also as Carlos Arturo Plaza tells us without a car you have less stress and are able to relax more. Cars can cause people alot of stress, and a alot of stress is not good for your body. Limiting the use of cars has a great effect on your heath.\n\nConslusion, Limiting the use of cars will have the advantages of a heathier enviroment and a heathier body. The enviroment and your body is a big thing in your life, so you would want to do whatever possible to keep it heathy. So instead of talking the car try to walk or ride a bike next time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" the author uses both positve and negative aspects of driverless cars. With time, technology has advanced and helped our society in many ways. Although being able to text your friends and having new ways to treat ill patients is nice to have, you have no choice but to wonder \"Can everything be advanced to something better or is it best to stick with what we are accustomed to?\". Driverless cars should not be developed.\n\nDriverless cars can not completely drive on their own. The article states that humans behind the wheel of a driverless car must stay alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires. Drivers could forget to pay attention because they're focused on something else or even worse, fall asleep. Therefore, the idea of having a \"driverless\" car is simply not safe enough to actually be a normal form of transportation.\n\nAlong with that, legally, if an accident were to occur, there is not a side that can be faulted. An accident can easily be blamed on the manufacturers, which leads back to the question of their existence, or the driver for potentially not being aware of what was happening with their vehicle.\n\nThe fact that these cars can't one-hundred percent drive themselves make you wonder who would actually invest in them. Most would probably believe that you would be better invested in a normal car and simply driving themselves.\n\nWith this being such a controversial topic, there's no clear answer as to where funds and grants would come from. Some may be for the production of the vehicle while others may be against it because of safety issues or just the fact that the money of citizens could be used in other benificial projects.\n\nThe article informs you that some cars read positive and negative polarity as messages in binary code. Binary code is also a main factor to a computer. With that being said, just like computers, the driverless cars could possibly be hacked and lead to a different location than what was originally planned.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars should not be developed. Driverless don't completely drive themselves and could not only lead to accidents but also no one wanting to invest in them. They also could be hacked and lead to even bigger problems. Ideally, it is best to stick with what we are accustomed to: cars that require a full-time driver.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obstacles builders go allow dirigibles dock electrical winch By tying mast The wind pressure Need open field weighed back lead wieghts Try tie building illiogal cou nt Because force ful winds also could nt tie building The dirilage mooring equiment never stalled either Dirilgables passengers quietly dissappeared nt become transportantion instead given away airplanes", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many advantages to not driving or not owning a car at all. Though i have a vehicle and do drive it the world could be a much better place if people did not use their cars so much. In this passage i will be telling you some advantages of not driving so often. So lets get started.\n\nThe first advantage i am gong to talk about has to do with pollution. The exhaust from our vehicles is terrible for the atmosphere and creates smog. one major occurance of pollution from cars afecting the atmosphere occured in Paris where tehy had to enforce a partial driving ban to clear the air. There have been many other cases of this same thing being caused by cars so too much driving can and will harm the atmosphere.\n\nAnother advantage to not driving so often is that it saves money. Not driving so often saves money in many ways one being that you dont have to pay for gas as often. Also if you never buy a car in the first place you will not have a car payment every month or an insurance payment. So save yourself some money and stop driving everywhere.\n\nThe last advantage of not driving so often that i am going to tell you about is that you will not be as stressed. Driving can put alot of stress on a person one way of doing so is road rage. Road rage can be causd by many things such as people driving to slow or not paying attenion to other drivers around them. Some people also get stressed when they are drivin somewhere they have never been before.\n\nSo all together driving less often can help stop pollution, save you money, and cause you less stress. Driving to much is a bad thing for us and the environment. So when possible walk, ride a bike, or carpool to get where you need to go.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe author concludes story paragraph author wants express reader Saeng comforted hibiscus willing give test another try She open minded situation In beginning story Saeng upset annoyed failing drivers test For example the tearstains daughters cheeks puffy eyes II failed test Saeng said mother Obviously upset disappointed The author didnt want end story sad unsatisfying ending Saeng changes attitude test end story For example when come back Saeng vowed silently spring snow melts geese return hibiscus budding I take test again I believe attitude memorys mother country soothes also mother In conclusion author ended story teach reader lesson let change occur time heal", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Has anyone ever stopped thought negative aspects censoring book Many people different beliefs take offense books show negativity ideas When people offended book first idea comes mind try get book shelves censoring libraries I think book offends certain group people simply read Why people get chance read good book offends someone else Banning books would go country stands How different would make us started censoring books libraries like countries governments final say read Imagine life would like books found offensive stripped shelves would nothing left anyone find something offensive book I understand sometimes things written books really disturbing offensive doesnt give anyone right take shelves Censoring books short term answer long term problem I believe always resort censoring books become less creative society There many people actually want read book never get chance censored library Books censored usually books help ones imagination Would want live world people void creativity", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "m-beleve or not belive e- some people tend to base things on opinions instead of real facts like how people might say ' well how can you be so sure that aliens didn't make the face ' my rebundal would be 'the image first apperared on jpl website revealing ... a natural landform there was no landform . there was no alien monument after all.\n\nl- i can connect this by simply looking at the picture and back couple years and to now how scientist reported no life for is on mars you will be boiled to death because it's also no oxygen so how can an alien create a face when no life form have been found yet.\n\ncon- in concluision i want to to say dont always go with assuptions they never always go the way you planned and also dont belive a tall tell ask the person if they have real science based facts if they check out then believe or not belive.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author says that exploring and studing venus is worth because it ould represnet another plate where humans coud live but the conditions to go there are very dangeuous. Venus is actually one of the cloest to earth because it had everything earth does such as mounaisnand stiff . Bujt thre are several challenges to go there first of all the weather is 800 degress farenhight . We in earth are closer to mars in distitance . A spaceship hasn't toucehd venus in more than threee decates and scientist are working on ways to get our robots to go there and do some reachers and for the robots to actually last there since the temperatues arevery high . Venus has the hottest surface than any other lanet in our solar system. Venus has errupting volcanos and earthquakes and has lighting strickers frequently . My concution is that they should at least wait until they have really good technology andactually send a space shift of something similar so they can take studyines on venus and see if humans could last there of wha tother ersources they might have .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College, its something that can change the amount of votes someone has rapidly depending on how many he or she has recieved. For some it is something that can help you, and for others its a nightmare. Most people would say it is something to be aware about and the rest dont care about it.\n\nTo start off, The Electoral College is not a physical builiding or place, its a process that the founding fathers established in the Constitution as a compromise between elections of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens. Most people belive that this process should be eliminated, some of those protesters are or were very important people, for example Bob Dole, he once said \"\n\nThe Electoral College is unfair, outdated, and irrational.\n\n\"\n\nSecondly, If someone is in the Electoral College and vote for who they want for President, really they dont vote for them, according to \"The Indefensible Electoral College\" by Bradford Plumer, the people on the Electoral College actually \"vote not for the President, but for a slate of electors, who in return elect the president.\" Thats messed up! They barley have any control on who they vote for. What if the electors dont vote for who the voters expect to win? Actually, this incedent has happend before in Hawaii in 1960 with two electors, \"faithless\" electors have occasionally refused to vote for their party's candidate and cast a deciding vote for whomever they please.\n\nNext, The Elecotral College is widley regarded as an anachronism. According to \"In Defense of The Electoral College\" by Richard A. Posner, \"\n\nthe advocates of this position are correct in arguing that the Electoral College method is not democratic in a modern sense...\n\n\". It is the electors who elect the president, not the people. When people are voting for a presidential candidate, they're actually voting for a slate of electors. Its is truley unfair for that to happen because the electors can betray the presidential nominee and cast their vote for the opposing nominee.\n\nFinally, It is entirely possible for the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote. It is very rare for something like that to occur. According to \"In Defense of The Electoral College\" by Richard A. Posner, \"\n\nIt happend in 2000, when Gore had more popular votes than Bush, yet fewer electoral votes...\"\n\n.A tie in the nationwide electoral votes is possible because the total number of votes, which is 538, is an even number, but it is highly unlikely.\n\nOverall, The Electoral College should be removed, because when the electors cast their vote, they dont really take part in the vote, it really is the slate. Sure, it can add more votes than the nominee actually has, but it is an unfair, outdated, and irrational procces that should no longer be in the Constisution.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I personally am against this development of cars. I feel as if we already have very smart drivers and this will only cause chaos.We do not need driverless cars now or ever.We will also lose our taxi drivers, leaving them unemployed.\n\nAs a child I always imagined myself getting my drivers licence. If we were to get driverless cars then there willl be no point to getting one becuase the car will be doing all the work. We will not have any expirience driving and will forget how to if we dont ever get a chance to drive it.\n\nDriverless cars will cause a panic. We will never be certain if the car is functioning correctly and will doubt whether we are safe or not. How can we be so sure the car will not malfuntion and crash? Thats the thing, we cant be sure and will always be doubtful of what may happen. In passage 7 it states \" But all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills.\" By telling us this it is saying that the car is still unable to do all task that a normal human can do\n\nWhy go through all this trouble when we aleady have humans who can drive perfectly safe. We will be wasting millions and millions of pointless dollars on something that we were taught how to do. Not to mention that if the car fails there can be goverment problems from people who want to sue becuase maybe the car wasnt working corrctly\n\nOverall This is not a smart idea. Not only will you waste millions but lose family time teachig your kid how to drive. If these haven't worked before, what makes them thing this will work this time? Technology is an amazing thing but it is taking over and its taking it over quickly. We can not let technology run our lifes. Just think of it like this, if your kid was in those cars, would you feel safe for him or her?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I need a car! why wont you get me a car? all of my friends have cars but me, why won't you get me a car! I scream at my mother almost everyday, trying to inform her of buying me a car, but she always change the subject by saying,\"look at this population, look at all these people briving, we dont need one more trying to distroy are cities\". I always ues to think in my head what is this lady talkng about, I only asked for a car. But as I start to look into life i start to understand that the most importanat things are sometimes the things that effect us the most, like for exmaple a car...\n\nTo begin with, in source 1, it states that passnger cars are responible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in europe... and up to 50 percent in some car- intensive areas in the Untied State. It also states in source 4 that, Amercia passed peak driving. Now if us Americans could limit driving everday and pick up are bicycles now and then, I belive problems like tracffic jams, and car accidents would be less. I also belive that the air we breath would be much more better for us. In source 3, it says that millions of colombians hiked, skated or took buses to work and doing this lefted the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams. Mr. Goldberg, said in source 1 that, \"how much you drive is as important as wheather you have a hybird, I put this in my essay because I feel as if, Mr. goldberg is saying that cars are like a burrden and that sometimes putting then bown wont hurt. Like for example one time my mother asked me to go out with her and i said yes, and as we are leaving the house i see that she lefted her car keys so I, took them for her and when we was out side i told her how are we supose to get in the car if you dont have your key? and she said \" we are walking\" I had a smile on my faces to know that my mother was trying to make a biffrents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are and will be useful for mankind. These self driving cars have been tested since 2009 and they are still driving accident free. The cars are really advanced and are the future of the world. They have all types of technology on them that help them drive like a human without a human. There are sensors on the car that can prevent someone in it from crashing or getting into an worse accident. Those against the development of these cars might say that these cars still need a driver and one can easily get bored in the car waiting for the car to hand over itself. Sure these cars still need a driver, but that's not all of the time only in work zones or around accidents. The driverless cars are very special vehicles that will not only bring the future to us, but also keep us people safe.\n\nDriverless cars - as the article discusses - are still being tested today. It has been seven years since they have started testing these cars, and they haven't gotten into any accidents. The cars have driven over half a million miles in real traffic situations without having any problems. These cars can drive almost anywhere during any time of the day without having problems. Sometimes we humans have problems while driving and put ourselves in the way of danger. Some people eat while they're driving, some are calling, texting, and they also might be intoxicated. These cars don't have the issues that people have because they can't. They can drive just as well as humans can without any type of distractions.\n\nThese cars are the types of vehicles we would see in movies, read about in books, or dream to have. There is no doubt that one day in the future everyone in the world will own a car like this. Many car manufacturers like Tesla, Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to create these types of cars. Tesla wants to release one this year that can drive ninety percent of the time itself. The other companies plan to release self driving cars in four years or less. Not only are these companies making these cars, but will be adding their own additional features. The cars may have different types of entertainment inside the car like apps that you can play on, movies you can watch, music you can listen to, or even some kind of special food making feature. These additions may seem unrealistic now, but in a few years they could be the talk of the century.\n\nThe driverless cars might just be the most advanced vehicle created since the Industrial Revolution. The cars have all types of tech on them that helps them get around town like a person. These cars have oodles of sensors on them. These sensors help the car identify it's location, and see all the vehicles in it's viscinity, and most important of all drive properly. These sensors can also help prevent accidents before they occur. If one was to fall asleep while driving and the car swerves the sensors will help the car from hitting anything. All this technology in and on the car will help people, not just the driver in the car but the people around the car as well. Those who oppose against these cars might ask what the point of the \"driverless\" car was if it stil needed a driver and discuss how boring it would be to be in that car. These cars can drive by themselves since companies have tested that already. The cars may need a driver in case of getting around incidents or road work,but people don't come across these problems on a daily basis. Sure one might feel bored wating for their turn to drive, but that's why car manufacturing companies will add additional features to entertain you. So instead of feeling like you have to wait you can enjoy yourself while trying to get to your destination.\n\nThese cars are truly amazing vehicles that have been seen driving correctly no different than a person, possible even better than some. The cars are advanced and can drive really well. They have all types of technology that help it steer through traffic or zoom down the higway. They may not yet be completely driverless, but there is no doubt that more advanced technology will be added. The cars will stop people from getting in accidents, receiveng injuries, or even dying while driving. The cars are always looking out for the human, they may later even be given the name \"man's best friend\". These cars are the future of the world so go out there and tell your friends and family about what kind of world they should expect in the upcoming years.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the Facial Action Coding System is a good software improvement because people don't always tell whats going on with their life, even if sombody ask them what is wrong with them, they just don't want to talk about it.\n\nThis new software will make things more easier for people who try to determine wether the person is happy, mad, disgusted, sad or disappointment. But it also will make other people uncomfortable, those who have problems or they just don't want to talk about it, they might feel ashamed, furios or emberrass and will cause low selfsteem in their lives. In the picture in the right about Mona Lisa, according to the Facial Action Coding System she is 83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% fearful and 2% angry, maybe she never talk about how she felt when the picture was took and people just say she was happy and she wasn't happy at all . in conclusion, these new technology will make people understand more how other feels and people will be able to understand and konw more about that person's life and why they feel like that, and just making things up that are not true.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think they should go by popular vote ! beacuse it gives people a chance to vote for the right thing or what they think is right .\n\nSo thats a popular vote for kennedy would not have actually gone to kennedy .\n\nIt happend in 2000, when gore had more popular votes than bush yet fewer electoral votes, but that was the first time since 1888.\n\nobama recevied 61.7 percent of the popular votes cast for him and romney .... Because almost all states award electoral votes on a winner-take-all basis, even a very slight plurality in a state creates a landslide electoral-vote victory in that state. A tie in the nationwide electoral vote is possible because the total number of votes-538-is an even number, but it is highly unlikely ....\n\nnixon in 1986 and clinton in 1992 both had only a 43 percent plurality of the popular votes, while winning a majority in the elections .\n\nthere is pressure for run-off elections when no candidate wins a majority of the vote cast;that pressure, which would greatly complicate the presidential election process, is reduced by the electroral college, which invariably produces a clear winner....\n\nknowing their vote will have no effect ,they have less incentive to pay attention to the campaign than they would have if the president were picked by popular vote ...!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe current way materials censored removed works continue While everyone dislike particular novel book libraries remove every book person dislikes Katherine Paterson said When book appears controversial point majority people disapprove book usually taken shelves The possibility children see offensve material appears unlikely Most public libraries put offensive material near childrens books At local library section offensive obscene books one place To acquire books must parents permission years age It unlikely child would ever see materials question Numerous people find materials offensive must also remember time place story originated racial slurs one considers time place novel slurs normal time Someone frustrated novel written years ago something offensive todays standards While I believe part libraries censor remove materials restrictions set place keep extremely harmful materials libraries For instance libraries dirty magazines movies shelves If high majority people want particular material banned hard ignore When book vulgar people begin protest book questions whether book remain library shelves When high percentage people join cause banned Censoring removing materials libraries remains hot topic today I believe current system place censor remove books job continue If people disapprove particular material book remains shelves uncensored When lot people begin protest material high probability banned With process every book racial slur questionable scene removed ones truly deserve removed", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez distinct mood family caring set The first way mood set passionate Cuban music home cooked meals Rodriguez writes passionate Cuban music filled air mixing aromas kitchen p This quote exentuates mood family music food thier nationality gives feeling comfort The comfort family mood family Another way mood family portrayed size house Rodriguez writes I born simple house situated two family blondebrick building p This adds mood family living small house means lot time spent family This also adds cozy feel environment Finaly mood family contributed close family lives Rodriguez writes My aunts Bertha Juanita cousins Arnold Maria Rosemary also live nearby p Family living nearby contributes mood family exentuntes number family members exentuates mood family Based memoir Narciso Rodriguez strong mood family expressed", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I was once asked to write a letter about keeping the Electoral College or changing to election by popular vote. My Opinion is that they need to change Electoral College. The three reasons why they should keep it is because, its not fair,it dosen't waste a lot of time,the electoral votes given to each state.\n\nTo Begin with, Electoral Voting seems very easy. Electoral College consists of 538 electors. They need a majority of 270 electoral votes to elect the prsident. But their a lot of things wrong with the electoral college too. Over 60 percent of voters would perfer a direct election. And voters vote not for the president,but for the slate of electors, who select the president. The Electoral college is unfair to voters. Becasue of the winner take all system, the candidates dont spend much time in the states they know they dont have a chance of winning. This is one of the reasons why they should change Electoral college.\n\nTo Briefly Continue, The Electoral College isn't a good system to use in my opinion. But the System dosent waste a lot of time. This is probaly the only reason they still use it today. All they do is go state by state seeing the candidates group of electors votes. This process takes about 3 to 4 Hours to see what candidate won to be the president of the United States Of America. The President election is held every 4 years, on the tuesday after the first monday in November. But this is another reason why the Electoral collge system needs to be changed to popular vote.\n\nLast But Not Least, The electoral votes given to each state sucks. Its not fair Texas gets 38 electoral but New York only gets 3. Way more people live in New york Than Texas. If they used election by popular vote everyone has the choice to pick which candidate they want to be president. And The elctoral college is widely regarded as an anachronism. Its hard for a democratic to win it. The Electors that elect for president not the people. This is another why this needs to be change.\n\nTo brieflty conclude, the system needs to be changed. its not fair to have and electoral voting system. the people dont get to vote for the candidate they want to win. These are some of the reasons why the system needs to be changed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are innovating more and more as time goes on. Developers have created several new driverless cars in the past decade. No cars have yet been invented that are completely driverless, but models do exist in which the automatic car system does retain most of the control. Driverless cars, in my opinion, have the potential of creating many issues for the drivers and their safety, as well as for the manufacturers too. Driverless cars honestly do more good than bad for their users. I believe that driverless cars should not be used in most if not any instances due to the conflict they can cause, the safety hazards they can create, and the problems/strains the technology used may possess.\n\nTo begin, I believe that driverless cars have the potential of causing major conflicts. For example, if the technology used to operare the car glitches, or causes the car to wreck or become damaged, conflict most likely will arise amongst the driver and the car manufacturer. If the driver is injured, who's to blame? Imagine all of the tedious and numerous lawsuits that will emerge in instances like these or similar to these. No technology is perfect, and some of these driverless cars are bound to make mistakes, small or fatal. The users of these cars are clearly put at risk for some pretty serious accidents and/or injuries by relying on these cars to drive them around for the majority of the time, espcially if they are using the car to help them get somewhere in instances of drunkeness, tardiness, or health emergencies. Driverless cars can cause countless types of conflicts along with the ones described; would drivers really want to put themselves at this much risk just for the sake of driving less?\n\nTo continue, driverless cars create numerous safety hazards for not only the driver, but as well as the manufacurers and other drivers on the road. Relying on technology to drive you around is potentially dangerous for the passengers. Even if the car does notify you when you need to step in and drive, would you still fully rely on it for the rest of your driving? As I previously mentioned, techonology is never perfect, and it could glitch out at any moment. What if you are in an instance where you absolutely cannot drive and you were relying on the car to help you out with that, when suddenly the car glitches and is unable to drive you? Crashes can happen in these instances, risking the safety of the car's passengers and also other drivers on the road. Not to mention, the manufacturers would then face the blame of these accidents. Even people testing the cars face great chances of these risks. Driverless cars cause a surplus of safety hazards, so is it really worth it to put yourself in those types of situations in the first place?\n\nTo contribute to this argument against driverless cars, I'd also like to add that driverless cars may possess technology that may have certain types of problems and/or strains. These cars may have been tested for safety and maybe even reliability at first, but how can the manufacturers and drivers really ensure that the technology these cars operate on will remain spotless for the remainder of its use? The answer is simple, they can't. No technology is ever one hundred percent reliable in any instance ever. No technology is ever one hundred percent perfect either, but if it's your car, that's a whole other story. As I said previously in this argument, these driverless cars are bound to glitch at one point or another for some of its users. These cars have a fairly high risk of these instances occurring. Most drivers probably would not want to rely on this technology to drive them, especially in times of their greatest needs of transportation. The technology used to operate these cars has the potential of glitching or having great errors. The risk of this is too great for some, including myself.\n\nIn conclusion, I am against the use of driverless cars. Although the article provided tried its best to illustrate the pros of these vehicles, I do not agree. The cons of these cars definitely outway the given pros. There are too many risks that come along with driving these cars. No matter how much these cars have and will advance, there is too much of a risk with using them, as well as relying on them in any instances, even in times of desperation or need. Regular driving will always be\n\nmore reliable as well as probably more safe too. Driverless cars should not be used in most if not any instances because of the conflict they can cause, the safety hazards they can create, and the problems/strains the technology used may possess.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As stated in source two, Al Gore won the popular vote when running for president against Bush, but lost the presidency by getting less votes from the electoral college. The American people were given a chance to vote but were overruled by the votes of the electoral college. Saying that, i believe the electoral college should be elliminated and the presidency should be determined by popular vote.\n\nWhen citizens go to vote for president, they arent really voting for president. They are voting for that canidates electors in the electoral college. Americans should be able to directly vote for who they want to be president. By switching to popular vote only and abolishing electoral college, citizens have more of a say in there own country, rather than eveything going to a slate of electors who have the power to overrule the popular vote.\n\nAlthough it may have some upsides, such as helping with very close elections, it is regarded as an anachronism. It is non-democratic and i believe it is unfair. The canidate who recieves the most popular vote should be garintied to win.\n\nAll in all, in agreement with source two, the electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. It would better the voting system if we went to only popular vote and illiminated the electoral college.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Certain materials books music magizines etc never removed certain person group people find offensive The authors books right stated freedom say wish within context individual wrighting Also certain materials people find offensive little offensiveness many people enjoy book movie Finally many books shelves many libraries end amount things considered offensive allow certain knowledge writer reader well If something stated important document one set standard living set laws nation parchment lack better term taken utmost respect dignity Several great leaders first president decided freedom press viable asset new growing country This simple fact alone hold enough levity allow materials matter offensive published also enjoyed people It simple freedom causes books published even written matter offensive Certain materials person group people find offensive offensive everyone No matter religion ethnicity moral values hold offensive mean offensive everyone Many people world serve nations military ones used fight battles history book could hold one example everyone world holds morals ideas others tensions always arise That said also holds true way certain people percieve literature art would hate art would hate however neither right condone keep eyes world Many times literature gets removed true meaning shown anyone This disheartening several reasons one whatever human race could ve learned piece lost forever Many books could teach older generations leave legacy generations come Others teach future generations change world simply working hard best These best portrayed books sometimes removed shelves hard lessons graphic words used Is censorship libraries ok No Not All works literature allowed read enjoyed author also young old ages races religions The longer allow materials removed shelves libraries less chance giving future generations learn possibly", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "studying venus could lead to more scientific break throughs. studying this hot plantet is not a bad idea as long as it is done right and safley. it was as close to earth as it could be and could may as well had life on this planet so studing the planet is not a bad idea at all.\n\nthe national aeronautics and space adminstation has already found diffrent ways to study the planet venus more clearly. if this could actully be done studying the planet would have a big effect on the tole of science and other forms of are solar system. the text states venus would allow scientists to float above the fray imagine a blimp like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling venusian landscape. this shows what could be done to studying this planet and what is could do for scients scientist have found many diffrent ways to study the planet. by using siple electronics mad of silicon that can last weeks in the chaos of venus's surface. this could make the studying of a new planet possible one day and sometime in the future venus may be studyed in alott better way.\n\nalthogh there are many things that goes against exploring venus the dangors or even expensis. If one day in are future we could have the tecnollogay and the expensis that traviling to venus one day is not impossiple.\n\ntraving to venus is not a bad idea in many ways it could be good for use to see and find out more about are solar system and if there is or was other life on diffrent planets.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock First architects could simply drop mooring mast top Empire State Building s flat roof A thousandfoot dirigible moored top building held single cable tether would add stress buildings frame To prevent steel frame Empire State Building would modified strengthened accommodate new situation Secondly dirigibles outside used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable The owners realized one hydrogen dirigibles catch fire like Hindenburg Lakehurst accident could much worse taken place densely populated areas downtown New York The greatest obstacle builders faced violent air currents dirigible tethered The back ship would swivel around mooring mast due winds using lead weights weight back would dangling pedestrians would neither practical safe The mooring mast Empire State Building destined never fulfill purpose reasons apparent ever constructed", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One day mother going store go pick big brother basketball practice got wasnt outside mother calling phone phone wasnt answering mother keep calling mother said going wait get thats I call patience", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" the author described how a new technology called the Facial Action Coding Systems enables computers to identify human emotions.\n\nThis technology could be used to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom, but should it be used in classrooms?\n\nOne reason why it should is very simple. This technology ,as stated by Dr. Huang in paragraph 6, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" This would eliminate the struggle of feedback for a teacher. Teachers do not know exactly how a student feels about the lesson because, \"most human communication is nonverbal.\" The computers would be able to tell the teacher whether or not the students are understanding the lesson.\n\nAnother reason why it would be valuable for these computers in classes is that teachers would be able to eliminate the struggle of having to believe students, even though \"humans perform this same impressive calculation every day.\" But the reason it is so hard for the teacher is that,\" most of us would have touble describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc.\" An example of this would be a student said that they had not been able to do their homework because someone in their family died. Without the computer, the teacher has to make a decision whether or not to let them turn it in late which can be hard and is just a small example. With this technology teachers would be able to tell whether they are lying or not. The reason the student could get away with it, if this technology was not being used, would be that they could sound serious about it and they could have a serious look on their face because \"most human communication is nonverbal.\" These computers could tell if that person is actually lying by calculating \"muscle clues.\"\n\nThe last reason is about safety of students and faculty of schools. If classrooms were to have this technology I'm sure people with depression and other serious issues would be able to get the help they need. The computers would be able to tell \"the percentage\" if someone is severely sad or very angry. This would ensure that people that work or study in schools are so much safer than without the technology.\n\nHowever, this technology is still slightly new and probably expensive. Schools may not have enough money to purchase one or more of these computers. Even though it seems to work very well it still can be fooled. The reason for this is that,\" according to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotions, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but may even help produce them.\" Also the technology only has \"six basic emotions,\" which may not be enough.\n\nIn conclusion, this technology would be very valuable to schools and classrooms even if there are some set-backs. Even though it may be expensive now maybe one day all schools could use this technology. This technology would save lifes and minds of students and teachers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The bar graph illustrates the percentage of unemployed graduates between the ages 20-24, respectively, and in a two-year period (2008 and 2009). It also makes a distinction between male and female.\nOverall, the highest number of unemployed people was in October, 2009. Male population reached more than 20% percent, while unemployment in women remained under 15% (though this number is still high compared to other months). On the other hand, the lowest percentage of unemployed people can be found both in April and July, 2008 (around 5%). Also, there are two more months in which the numbers of unemployment appear to be the same (January and April 2009).\nThe other months and numbers of unemployment included in the bar chart are not significantly high or low compared to the ones analyzed above. The percentages vary between the minimum (5%) and the maximum(25%). Moreover, I would like to highlight the fact that male unemployment is always higher than the female one, probably, due to several reasons.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Florida Senators,\n\nThe Electoral College is an unfair process. With multiple presidents winning the popular vote and losing their presidency, it is nondemocratic. Myself, along with many other people across the state, believe that elections should be based on popular vote rather than the decisions of 538 electors. Although the Electoral College has its advantages, I believe that a majority vote by the people of the United States would be more accurate as well as fair.\n\nThe Electoral College is a winner-takes-all system, meaning that candidates spend lots of time campaigning in the \"swing\" states rather than others. In 2000, seventeen states didn't even get to see the candidates. This means that almost 34% of voters didn't get a real feel for who they will be casting their votes for. Even though presidents should focus their time on big states with larger populations, it is unfair to the smaller states who don't get any visits from their candidates.\n\nWith the Electoral College system, voters vote for a slate of electors, rather than the presidents themselves. This means that when you cast your vote for Barack Obama ,for example, you are not voting for him. you are actually voting for a certain number of electors who contribute to the candidate's electoral votes. Electors can be anyone not in public office and they are usually chosen by the state. This is a corrupt system because the electors could be anyone, and change their ideas to not reflect the views of the people. In 1960, Louisiana legislature segregationists almost replaced all of the Democratic electors electors with new Kennedy-opposing electors. The errors and problems in this system could be much greater, and goverment officials must be monitoring it at all times.\n\nIn the event of an Electoral College tie, the president election decision would be given to the House of Representatives, and the vice-president decision to the Senate. This doesn't seem too terribly bad, but one representative from Wyoming would be representing 500,000 voters, and would have as much say as the 55 representatives representing 35 million people inhabiting California. This is not fair because of the widespread views of people in each state. There cannot be one candidate that the whole state agrees on, as people's ideas differ across the states.\n\nThere are many reasons to keep, as well as dispose of the Electoral College. The negatives outweigh the positives and a popular vote would be more democratic. We are supposed to be a democracy, and democracies thrive on the views of the people instead of electors.\n\nSincerely,\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think author concludes story paragraph suggest strength come flowers come able take test", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many countries in the world have a vast gap between the low income and high income of the employee in the different companies and different sectors of the economy. Some people think that is a positive indication for the country can consider this as unfavourable. So there are some factors that we can analyze in both views.\r\n\r\nMany people work in different jobs and receive different salaries and incomes, and it differs from education, graduation, grades in school, and many more factors. The people that earn high salaries have a better standard of living, and less financial stress wears people with low income have to manage it properly and have more financial burden. Also, the high-income people have much more motivation through their hard work and as there are more motivate the work even harder which indeed will help the economy by creating more jobs, improves their skills and increases the amount of money spent in a country which as an increase in GDP. Even further, children will be more motivated to have good grades and effort in school in order to achieve the people who receive high salaries. In the first point of view, the people who have a high salary also contributes to more income taxes that benefit the countries economy. The amount of income taxes depends on the amount of income, so the higher is the income of the employee the higher is the value of income tax. This is also very good for the economy because high disposable income makes consumers spend more money on goods and service.\r\nOn the other way, many people believe that the government should control the salaries and limit the income people can earn. If the government did a table with limiting the highest amount of income most probable that the high income and the low-income gap would be reduced and this benefit the lower salaries, we can also see as a social point of view. For example, we can see in the society we have people with the same graduation but receive less income than others in that work in the same sector. This provokes social inequality and demotivation in the workplace. In my personal view, the government should increase the minimum wage and, at the same time, limit the maximum salary to prevent being vastly different income from people that earn little and earn a lot. Also, it is right from this perspective but wrong from another such as if a person has worked so hard to get to an excellent high salary job and then they have a limit which for their effort and performance might below then they might be upset and unfair to them. Also, this decrease in the gap can have more benefits such as the poverty rate will decrease because the poor will have a better source of income and secondly due to higher income for the poor they may be able to afford a proper education that later in life will help them get a job, this affects the country as there will be more productive workers.\r\n\r\nTherefore all of the points of view and perspectives should take a significant role in the decision. The government may have to consider if it is fair or not any adjustments to the salaries and minimum wage law that will profoundly affect lives in the population and the economy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you know what the challenge of Exploring Venus is? Well venus is the second planet from our sun. Venus distance but safe vantage point of Earth has very challenging place to examine more closely. They also often called Venus as the Earth's Twin. Let's see what The Challenge of Exploring Venus is all about.\n\nFirst of all,\n\nEarth, Venus , Mars are like neighbor that orbits the sun at different speeds. The differences in speed that we are closer to Mars than other times to Venus. Venus is sometimes right around the corner in space terms. Humans has numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud -draped world. Since no spacecraft survived the landing for more tha a few hours.\n\nSecondly, The thick atmosphere is almost 97% of carbon dioxide that blankets Venus. The more challenging are the clouds of highly sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. The planet's temps are average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than our own planet. The conditions on Earth are far more extreme than anything humans encounter.\n\nThirdly,\n\nNASA has one particularly compelling ideas to send humans to study Venus. NASA's solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus allow scientist to float above the fray. Researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance. Many researchers are working on innovations that allows our machines to last long enough to knowledge Venus. NASA is working on other approaches to study Venus.\n\nIn a conclusion, Do you know what the challenge of Exploring Venus is? Well, Earth, Venus , Mars are like neighbor that orbits the sun at different speeds. The thick atmosphere is almost 97% of carbon dioxide that blankets Venus. NASA has one particularly compelling ideas to send humans to study Venus. So however, I just exploring about Venus so I think I past the challenge.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We climbed rental car waving goodbye realitives drive back airport I cant believe airport opening earlier day called us Exclaimed CAPS I cant either I mean all Were Man quick As rolled airport smelling strafoam smell checked bags CAPS explained clerk CAPS sorry according full told us chessy smile CAPS called saying empty seats invited us exchange CAPS sorry wouldnt fair gave away rightful owned another chessy smile CAPS orginal back like What I going seven hours First brother I races escelators Then took shuttle bus everywhere By I knew place inside Soon time leave suddenly speaker came deylayed hour half really Luckly took extotic restraunt Beautiful restraunt soon time leave Please dont get delayed It wasnt I felt happy finally left sad I learned great lesson patience Its hard impossible", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story winter Hibiscus Minfong Ho character Saeng many obstacles overcome In end story Saeng vows winter take test I think author ends story like foreshadow future Saeng It seems like author trying say Saeng taking time adjust new lifestyle focus things takes test It also shows Saeng lot courage complete failed The perserverance Saeng shows help overcome many things new country In text Saeng s mother starts dig hole says let help mother This shows love towards mother care plant represents pastime So end story adding vow good way show Saengs commitment", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir greatful For example parents shared cooking duties unwittingly passed rich Culinary Skills love cooking still today eternally greatful That loves follow parents goals loves much In addition always greatful parents love sacrifice often told courageous letting people home loves strength perseverance thanked repeatedly But reality way express gratitude spirit generosity pressed upon early age knows important family friends", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "They should make driverless cars because they can go more than half of millions of miles without crashing, announces the driver when he should take over and drive, and it has developed the drivers seat to vibrate when it has to watch out because the car is getting near something and might crash.\n\nThe cars can go over millions of mile without crashing and it's driving by itself and that is really good. When people buy these and decide to go on trips it comes in handy if they get tired of driving, so they can automaticall let the car drive by itself. When there are people injured and can barely drive, they'll have the car and would barely have to drive and they can now go to places they need to go too. If a person wants to drive normally they can turn off the driveless and can end up driving to where ever they want.\n\nA good thing about the driveless cars is that it let's you know right away when you have to take over if it detects an accident torwards where you are going. As well as that it has sensor that a human driver is in control at all times.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author ends story saying when come back Saeng vowed silently spring snow melts geese return hibiscus budding I take test again chooses end like show change mood throughout story When gets home mother noticed tear staie daughters cheeks puffy eyes Saeng felt sad place beginning story end felt happy optimistic", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" it talks about how you can figure out peoples emotion through this software.I believe that is a smart invention because what if your friends sad but then says their not sad,wouldnt you want your friend to be happy.And through this software you can figure out is people are sad,happy,and or any kind of emotion.\n\nThis is a good invetion for classrooms because if you think about it,you wouldnt want a student to be sad or mad because then all there is in the school is a negative energy.School is a place where you should be happy with your friends,and with the emotion recongition software you would always know what you,your friends and maybe also teachers are feeling that day.In the article it says\"You can probably tell how a friend is feeling by the look on their face\" which is true you dont need the emotion recongition all the time,you can just look at their face to see if their happy or not.\n\nAll in all it is a good that they made the emotion reconition because i believe it would bring more happiness so we wont have no negativity in the world by unhappy people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents because it may well once have been the mosth Earth-like planet in our solar system as the author says. The author also says that Venus was probably covered with oceans. It may also have some different forms of life. Venus can have some of the\n\nfeatures that Earth has such as surface of rocky, sediment, valleys, mountains and also craters. Venus can be our nearest option for a planetary visit.\n\nAs I was reading the article the author was giving evidence that long ago Venus had some features like the ones I mentioned in paragraph one. Venus still has a few of those features but now it is hard to see those features due to the terrible conditions on venus. The author says \"venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system\" and\n\nwith those conditions is very hard for a human to survive.NASA is working on creating some importan strategies for humans to be able to go to Venus without a big complication.\n\nVenus is an amazing planet. It may be hard for humans to get close to it\n\nbut with all the information that we are learning is going to help us prepared for Venus conditions. Venus is an incredible planet due to its unique qualities. Venus is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky as the article said.\n\nAs I was reading this amazing article I learned a lot of things about Venus and its conditions. I also learned that is hard for human to get a chance to go visit Venus but is not impossible either. In the future humans will be able to visit Venus because it will be survivable for humans. Venus is an incredible planet that everyone should learn about. Its interesting to learn new things about our solar system.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is an undeniable fact that adolescents are affected by watching television shows. Certainly, the child's behaviour changes can be associated with the television content that is believed by many individuals. However, others argue that spending a length of time while watching tv programs is a major factor in their growth. This essay will discuss why the content of the program is taking considerable concern for all in the below paragraph.\nThere are numbers of valid arguments against television channel which is represented that what offsprings watch on television influence their nurture. To commence with, child age may be considered as a vulnerable age, because this is a stage of life where individuals are motivated from their surrounding actions, and they, perhaps, liking to do with actual, without knowing its consequences. Thus, if children watch the television shows, where evil is represented as a superior, it would be motivated to pursue the same task in their vicinity. By contrast, if adolescents are addicted to seeing regional programs or other informative television shows, it would help them to learn good manners and surge their general knowledge respectively. For instance, research was carried out in schools revealed that 75% of children who have good manners, respect for teachers, sincere in class, and intelligence, they have controlled of their parents in selecting program contents, including cartoons and other entertainment programs.\nOn the other hand, there are a various reasons why the length of time spent watching television programs that has negative effects on the development of children both about physically and psychologically. Firstly, children are exposed to excess radiant flashes of light, this could cause serious damage to eyes, and sometimes temporary blindness if they watch excessively. Secondly, utilising, numbers of hours in front of the television which can increase the health risk at a child age. Obesity, headache and visual impairment at a young age are the main health problems of using a TV for a long period of time. Finally, if a young one spends time to do another activity such as reading, physical exercise and other sports rather than watching television which would help them for a healthy lifestyle.\nTo sum up, although spending enormous time on television program has various health issues, there would be outweighed by program content in the long term. In my opinion, parents should be controlling children habits and guide them to select appropriate content of the program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People of all age groups easily get fantasized by seeing the lucrative lifestyle of celebrities. There is no ambiguity that glamorous, rich celebrities are bad examples for young generation, who worship them as idols. \nTo begin with, actors or actresses focus much on introducing new fashion and lifestyle trends, which eventually become regular practices for young people. Teenagers have a tendency of distraction and start worshiping the celebrities for their fancy trends. In India, celebrities, mostly young ones have lifestyle which includes use of drugs, smoking, alcohol and speeding cars, young generation people try to imitate their style. Celebrities mostly start on trends using social media, which is nowadays, a most impactful platform, because of which, young people start following that trends and get obsessed with it. A Vape challenge got viral on social media with of two hours of posting it online by a famous celebrity in India, which lead to increased use of vape by young people and hence, became a trend. \nOn the other hand, some actors really cared about the society and promote themselves as social workers. Aksay Kumar is a right example to cite here, he is known for his acting and support to social causes, which he try to bring in attention in most of his movies. Some celebrities promotes sports, fitness clubs, yoga and healthier life style, which can results in the benefit of youth.\nTo sum up, a celebrity has a moral responsibility towards his fans who become intimidated by their glamour or lifestyle. Celebrities must become role models for young generation, promoting health and fitness not glamour.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Excitement desperation selfpitty feelings cyclist setting He really excited get Yosemite park peacefulness He said the cool pines rushing rivers Yosemite calling name He wanted get hot He started getting desperate water drank hot water hole I tried drop two tasted like battery acid He running water got desperate He started selfpitty self sometimes life cruel feeling pitty long way go still These feeling cyclist setting", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wondered about space travel? Maybe even on planets that might be closer than it seems? What if it was one of them in The Milkyway Galaxy? You might be thinking about Mars but you may think too yourself \"We've already explored alot of Mars.\" But what if I told you that Venus is the planet we are talking about visting? The author in the article, \" The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" agrees with exploring one of our planetary neighbors Venus. It's conciderd Earth's 'twin', We have tecnology that can help us explore the planet, and that studying Venuses atmosphere atmosphere can help us lern more abut our sister planet.\n\nVenus is known for being one of Earth's \"twins\". Venus is known for it's density and size that is quite similar to Earth's. \"Astronomers are facinatedby Venus beacuse it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probaly covered largely with oceans and could have supported forms of life, just like Earth.\" (Paragraph 4, Challenges of Exploring Venus). Astromomers are saying that venus is very similar to Earth, by its size and that in the past Venus might have had life forms on it and that might be a good reason why it would be a good reason to explore Venus.\n\nAnother reason why exploring Venus would be a good idea is that we have the proper tecnology to go and explore our sister planet. \"NASA has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to go study Venus. NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientist to float above the fray... blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the rolling Venusian landscape.\" (Paragraph Five, The Challenge of Exploring Venus). With the tecnology to be able to fly over Venus and using a blimp to help humans fly over the harsh conditions of Venuses surface. So we have the right tecnology to fly over Venus and safely get humans from Earth to our sister planet Is another reason why we should start exploring Venus.\n\nA final reason why we should explore Venus is that we know about Venuses weather and condisons are harsh and we know how to help explore the planet. \" a thick atmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide and clouds are highly containing sulfuric acid... Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like errupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting stricks to probes seeking land on it's surface.\" ( Paragraph 3, The Challenge of Exploring Venus). Scinetist are discovering Venuses waether like conditions and the planet's conditions. With knowing these we can make tecmology that can help us explore the planet. And we can study these weather conditions and learn more about our sister planet.\n\nSo traveling to Venus is a good idea to travel to Venus even though the conditions on the planet are not so welcoming and the resaoning for traveling there is that, the planet is Earth's \"twin, we have the correct tecnology to travel there and we know a lot of the planet's atmosphere and how we can take that to help make human travel safe to get from Earth to venusand how we can help humans survive the conditions that come along with Venus. Traveling to venus would also futher our minds on how our neghboring planets are. Do you think that traveling to Venus would help humanity as a whole?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, the typical teaching method are no longer related to the present student condition and problem. The teachers will slowly leave the traditional way and make a comprehensive change in 2050. I strongly agree and will explain the reason for further. \r\n\r\nAs we know, the teacher used to gathered all of the student into one room. The number of the student is on the range 10-30 people in one class. Taught by only a teacher, all of the student are given the same treatment. However, they will not get the same result from each individual because of their different condition. Those who have a high enthusiasm for learning will get a better result at examination rather than the ones who are not interested at all. It will be the biggest challenge for the teachers if they wouldn't improve their teaching method. Moreover, with the presence of the technology and instant entertainment make the student attention are easily get distracted and zoned out. \r\n\r\nFor these reasons, The teachers will completely leave the old way which no longer relatable. They will make different psychological approach for each of individuals before start learning an make an adjustment based on the interest and ability to process the information. Technology are also the main media for teaching, so it will more attractive and the information will be given thoroughly and evenly. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I agree that the traditional teaching method will slowly left behind and completely change by new and more advance in 2050.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Making mona lisa smile agian was the main topic detail in the story. For one reason it would have to be when they painted a picture of her for acomplishing the process of the model of a great model she smiled for that picture. So that is why that gave her own picture of herself and the computer model picture is a little bit better than the orignal one. The computer model has better details in the picture and it also tightens her lips for the picture. More reason is that they express the emotion of her picture in paragraph 2. In paragraph 7 the experts for the picture tell Mona Lisa how to pose for the picture in the first sentence. Paragraph 8 explains Mona being truthful and smiling in the last sentence. Inside Paragraph 4 it is telling about how the expression of the real face is inside the art of Mona Lisa.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supported well his idea.Starting by saying that \"Venus is sometimes right around the corner in space, humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud\".\n\n\"Each previous mission was unmanned and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours\".\n\n\"Not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades\".Venus is a challenging planet for humans to study because a thick atmosphere is almost 97 percent of carbon diocde.\n\nAnother reason it is challenging is because of the clouds are sulfuric acid in Venus atmosphere.However it's even more challenging in the text it says, thefahrenheit and atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater then out planet, the conditions are far more worse then our planet Earth.\n\nAnother reason Venus is dangers to study is because Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, Venus erupting has volcanoes,powerful earthquakes and lighting strikes.Another reason Venus is dangers to study because it has a surface of rocky.\n\nThats why I say that studying Venus is dangers because you do not know what is in there or what would happen when you land there.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper people would agree computers useful help ability learn faw away place They also allow people talk people online Lastly computers importat people work many reasons I believe computers benefit society Do know computers give people ability learn faw away places Sometimes people dont know want leave country With computer organize Somoe people like family like go visit familys places example mom told going trip go visit family told already got tickets computer I happy went I saw beautiful Some people like see new beautiful places Such even Let tell computers allow people talk people online Most people myspace allows kids age keep touch Also facebook people probly havent seen long time exsample one time I looking aroung facebook found old bestfriend I happy cause moved I thought would never talk I positive everyone world yahoo could find people really quikck talk Would belive many jobs responsibilities require computer Such scientists computers else wouldnt able invient great things make Also secretaries asign dates bosses exsample secretary doctor able give change appointments Lastly students go school importantly collage computers wont able homework Most people would agree computers positive affect people reasons give ability learn faw away places allow people talk people online Computers important people work", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The planet, Venus, has the potential for being a great place to visit and for sending people there, too. While it has some dangerous conditions, scientists have come up with a solution to oversee the planets atmosphere. According to NASA, \"the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray.\" \"At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth.\" This information shows that it is possible for people to, not live on Venus, but live above it without being harmed.\n\nAstronomers have been studying Venus for a long time and they believe that the planet once had life on it. It makes even more sense for this to be true as Venus is one of the closest planets to the Earth. According to the author, \"Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" Not only that, but it has a large rocky surface with hills, mountains, and valleys. With all of the advanced technology we have in todays world, scientists can also find several ways to reduce the pressure and harsh conditions. This makes it even more safe to study further into the planet itself.\n\nThere are many ways we could think of to make sure that Venus is a safe and reliable planet, but many people still wonder of this amazing idea. If NASA can send people to the moon and send a machine on Mars, than who says we can't do the same with this gas planet? This discovery could be a great change to the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To begin, do you ever wonder how it is to be treaveling all over the world.Have you ever wondered how cool or different it could be at different states or countries.Well if you read \" A Cowboy Who Rode the Waves\" you could probably be interested at how China, Mexico,Japan,Columbia, any where in the world looks like, working on a cattle boat\n\ncould be an opportunity to travel all over the world for free.Working on a cattle boat could mean having a chance to look at places, things and all the stuff you didn't know about existed in the world.Also working on a cattle boat could be acbig chane to learn more about new cultures, new foods and all sorts of things.\n\nFor this paragraph I will exclaim the benifits of working on a cattle boat could be.First, you could learn new places you've never seen just like Luke has during his visit to Greece.Second, you could study a lot of things that luke has seen in \"Venice,Italy like the water streets\".Third, you could take a visit to like a museum to see an excavated place in China.Last, you could take a lot of tours like Luke did in the Panama Canal for fun.\n\nTo begin, being a worker on a cattle boat mean you have to ship a lot of different types of animals to different countries.FIrst, to do so it takes about two weeks to get from one place across the Atlantic ocean to another place.Second,that means you will have to water each animal at least two to three times a day, and you are to feed them as well.Third, tha tmean you will have plenty of hay and oats' to feed the animals for thelong ride across the Atlantic ocean or they will starve of hunger.Last, if you were to sign up to be a cattle bo;at worker you ar e going to explore a lot of unkown places yo uhave ever seen.\n\nTo exclaim these two paragraphs', what this story is trying to tell is that working on a cattle boat is going to be fun.First, in the passage it said that Luke went to a excavation tour sight, and he visited a place where the streets are all water.Third, in this passage it said that luke had to take care of the animals by watering them three times a day and to feed them.Fourth, in the passage it said that luke had to take care of the animals for about teo weeks to cross the Atlantic ocean in two weeks.Last, being a cattle boat worker means having a lot of patients and fun.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir nice tone gives feeling reader helps understand feeling author putting words The mood full happeness expressed fond memories author It also mood deep satisfaction helped author give point He gave information house neighbor hood To add personal touch The mood based happenings house", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator,\n\nEvery four years, citizens of the United States ages eighteen and up, gather at local voting locations to elect the President, our government leader. From Washington to Obama we have always elected our leaders as such. The Constitution has given us our way to vote- the Electoral College. This process, of course, consists of our 538 electors, the place where they meet to vote, and the counting of said votes. But how effective is this process? Honestly, I believe the Electoral College should be diminished.\n\nStatistics show that direct voting is preferred by the majority of the citizens in the U.S.. According to a poll taken in 2000, 60% of voters would rather direct voting over the current system. With the current \"\n\nwinner-take-all\n\n\" concept in most all states except Maine and Nebraska, many people find that even if 45% of all the votes in the state are for one party, all of the votes go to the opposition. Citizens may as well not even vote under this standard if they wont even be represented.\n\nAlthough not one vote will decide an election if we had direct voting, many single votes can. Take the 1.4 out of 3 million people in California who voted one way and got all their votes thrown the other because of the other 1.6 million people. With that 1.4 million, mixed with tons of thousands of voters, one party may actually win the election rather then the canidate who would have won with the Electoral College process. For example, in 2000, George W. Bush won the election and most of the Electoral College votes. However ,\n\nAl Gore got the most individual votes. How can that be fair at all?\n\nWhen \"we the people\" vote for the president, we are not actually doing what we have come to believe. In reality, we are actually voting for representatives called\n\nElectors to vote for the canidate. These electors cast their vote depending on the votes that we (you and I), cast. These electors that we choose are generally very trustworthy and reliable, being the reasons we choose these government officials to elect our government leaders. Sadly, however, not everybody is who they say they are, as we all have flaws and sins; occasionally one of these electors will be unfaithful and vote for the canidate they deem fit, instead of who we have chosen ourselves. Although this is rare, the possibilities would be negated completely if we simply had direct, individual voting.\n\nTo wrap up, I vote that we abolish the Electoral College and allow the citizens of the United States to vote for ourselves. It would make the majorty of the U.S. happier, it will make us better represented, and we will be directly electing our own government officials. I believe that we should amend the old ways and evolve and adapt to newer, better ways, as we always have in the past.\n\nThank you,\n\nJerica", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting effected cyclist The setting desert California making VERY hot outside The hills hard climb dangers around poisonous snakes Not terrain hard move around path thickest CAPS weeds crossed path ridiculously large snake This made harder cyclist reach destination", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever thought about participating in the Seagoing Cowboys program? It's every fun, it allowed me to go on adventures and vist unique places like Greece, Venice, Italy, and I even toured an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal on my way to China. There are also others things to do besides go to different places when you participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. Even though you get free time there is also work to do. When my friend Don Reist invited me to go to Europe on a cattle boat I just couldn't say no, I knew it was going to be an opportunity of a lifetime. Let me give you some reason on why you should join.\n\nLike i said before there are others things you have to do when participating in the Seagoing Cowboys program. One thing is you have to take care animals. Everytime I found it fun taking care of the animals, especially on when I returned from trips and the animals had been unloaded. There were different types of animals on board like horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped oversea. Once there was even a cargo with 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them.\n\nMy next reason is you also get to play games on the ship. The cowboys and I played baseball, volleyball games, table-tennis, fencing, boxing, reading, and whittling. These games helped us pass time when we didnt have work to do. Sometimes we would even play games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. We would even have different types of tournaments.\n\nThe most important and my last reason is that while in the Seagoing Cowboys we had to help different people with things. We had to help them with animals, food, and we had to help on the ship. There were many things we had to do on the ship like be watchmen, check the animals every hour, and make an hourly report to the captain. There is a lot of work you have to put in into being a Seagoing Cowboys even if you do get hurt. But it will be all worth it in the end.\n\nI hope you decide to become a Seagoing Cowboy. It was very fun for me, so if i had fun being one then I feel like you will to. You will have a lot of fun trust me.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Limited car usage has plenty of advantages. A few examples of advantages that come from limited car usage are lessining the amount of gases polluting the air, also it would create a friendly and neighborly enviorment, and a large amount of money would be saved.\n\nTo limit car usage has huge benefits; we can lessen the gasses that are polluted, lessening smog. It may not sound like something that effects your everyday life, but it does. Smog and air pollution are a problem, and a threat to our safety and well being. As of right now it is'nt a life or death situation, but if car usage continues to be a huge part of the world, all the air pollution from all the years of driving are going to get so bad people, and the earths atmosphere will be extremly affected by it. Think about your kids future, would you really want them to live in a world consumed by air pollution, and emission gasses, and smog.. To give an example, \"passneger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in europe.. and up to 50 percent in some car intensive areas in the united states\" (rosenthal). That just showing how much car usage affects air pollution and the air we breath everyday. Just decreasing the amount of car usage can reduce the smog, and air pollution in cities and towns.\n\nAdditionally, the less cars are used the more people and neighbors would intteract. If a majority of a town just lessened the amount they go out using a car, they would walk, or ride bikes, or take busses, etc.. imagine your town, and families and their kids taking a walk somewhere, or people riding their bicycles to their destination, everyone could meet their neighbors and talk. Overall, cities and towns and suburben areas would generally become just a friendly enviorment. Most people want to live in a place in which they feel safe and neighborly. Teenagers and families would get more excersise then the normal. Due to having to walk, and ride bikes or other things they would be getting out of the house more instead of sitting in a car then going and sitting some place then going back home and sitting around again, they would get the needed physical activity to stay some what healthy. \"Millions of columbians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car free day\"(selsky). That is amazing, and it is so good for people to get out and do things like that. Lessening car usage could completly change neighborhoods and towns and citiies.\n\nFinally, Cars in the united states are highly expensive, and not everyone has thousands of dollars around to get the car they want/need. \"Cash strapped americans could not afford new cars\"(Rosenthal). Just an example that cars are not cheap and a lot of people spend money they do not have on cars. In addition to buying the car, gas must be provided, depending on the car and the amount of gas it uses up, that can be pretty expensive. Insurance is another cost, everyone has to have insurance to be able to drive and own a car, thats a monthly fee coming out of our pockets. Limiting car usage could save a lot of money, it would leave extra money every day, week or month to go out and eat once in a while, or to buy other necisities. Just about everyone wants to have a little extra money, but with a car thats frequently used can use up almost 200 to 400 dollars each month. Riding a bike, or skateboarding or just simply walking is completly free.\n\nAdvantages in limited car usage are, The decrease in gas pollution and smog, it could create friendlier neighborhoods and towns, and lastly thousands of people would save a lot of money.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Venus often referred to as Earth's \"twin.\" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size.\"\n\nThere are a lot of things about Venus that i would have never known about.\n\nVenus does seem very beautiful and amazing to see, they even call it the \"evening star\" it has to be beautiful! Although is seems very beautiful, it is very challenging to look more cloesly. Venus is occasionally the closest in distance. Earth, Venus, and Mars orbit the sun at different speeds. \"Humans have sent numerous spacecrafts to land on this cloud-draped world\". Sadly no sacecraft survived the landing.\n\nWhile Venus is very beautiful it is always very dangerous. The atmopshere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide. Even more dangerously are the clouds of highlu corrosive sulfuric acid in the atmosphere. \"On the planets surface the temperatures average is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit.\" which means we could never survive on Venus. The envirorment would crush a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of the ocean. Venus has the hottest surface temperature in of any other planet in our solar system.\n\nWhile the National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has been tryng search ideas for us to study Venus is possible! \"Imagine a blim-like vehicle hovering over 30 or so miles above the rolling Venusian landscape. Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way.\" It is possible for us to go to Venus but what about how hot it gets? well \"at thirty plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at about 170 degrees fahrenheit but the air pressure would be so close to that of sea level on earth.\" It would not be easy but it isn't impossible.\n\nI think the aurthor is right. Venus has a lot of facts about itself. It is a very worthy thing to learn about. It is also very dangerous but if you are into our solar system i think Venus would be a very awesome planet to learn about.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock One obstacle faced reconstruct building add mast The steel frame Empire State Building would modified strengthened accommidate new situation mast obstacle face Also face safety requirements Was destined never fulfill purpose reasons apparent ever constructed After figured could go wrong docked dirigibles original purpose mast able fulfilled Another obstacle face testing plan dock dirigibles US Navy dirigible Los Angeles approached mooring mast could get close enough tie The dirigible failed attempt idea docking dirigibles disappeared late s The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Believe it or not there are ways people may be harming the environment without actually knowing it. If you really think about it though there are many ways you can help prevent harm to the environment. One of them is limiting car usage. The advantages to giving limits to this could be very helpful to restoring our world.\n\nA city in Germany has gone the extra mile to solve problems due to car use. What the residents of Vauban, an upscale suburban community have done is, they have all given up their cars. Street parking, driveways, and garages are not allowed. The only way to park is to buy a parking spot along with your home for $40,000. Because of this movement 70 percent of families there do not own cars and 57 percent sold theirs to move to Vauban. A media trainer and mother of two said that when she had a car she was always tense but now is much happier. This no car movement is called \"smart planning\". A reason it started is because studies have shown that passanger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in europe and up to 50 percent in america. The basic ideas from Vauban are being adopted around the world attempting to make suburbs more compact with less space for parking. Now in the US many agencies are promoting car reduced communities. Also legislators are starting to act. Many say public transport in suburbs will play a much larger role in a new 6 year federal transportation bill to be approved this year. More suburbs like this one could change the world.\n\nIn Paris there had been days of near-record pollution. To help clear the city's air Paris enforced a partial driving ban. Monday, moterists with even numbered liscence plates were forced to leave their cars at home or pay a $31 fine. Rejecting the fine resulted in having your car impounded. As a result 60 percent of congestion was down in France's capitol. The smog due to car usage was cleared enough on monday to rescind the ban for odd numbered plates the next day. In Columbia a similar day is taken place every year. A car free day where people hiked, biked, skated and took buses to work instead of driving their cars. If you violated this you would be fined $25. Even in rainy weather people participated just to help lower stress and air pollution. This campaign has sparked a revolution. It has also created the construction of 118 miles of bike paths, parks, and sports centers. It has caused the replacement of pitted sidewalks with broad smooth ones, cut traffic, and new resturants and upscale shopping districts have appeared. If every country had a day like this we could make a unbelievable difference.\n\nAccording to recent studies Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less, and getting fewer liscences each year. Even though America has basically been the birthplace of cars and is one of the world's prime car cultures its love seems to be cooling down. The number of miles driven in the US peaked in 2005 and steadily declined in the years following. In april 2009 the number of miles driven per person was 9 percent below its peak and equal to where it was in 1995. Part of the problem has most definitely been recession but as the economy recovers the decrease in driving has not changed. According to a research proffessor at University Of Michigan car ownership per household started to lower two to three years before the downturn. If this trend persists it will have benificial implications for carbon emmissions and the environment. One of the things causing this is the internet which allows people to feel more connected to eachother without driving to meet friends. Also people car-pooling and biking have helped. There has been a large drop in peoples age 16-20 getting their liscence. They organize summer jobs and their social lives around where they can walk or take public transportation, or carpool. Between 2001 and 2009 driving by young people decreased 23 percent. All of this helps conserve resources, lower emissions, and improve safety.\n\nIn conclusion there are many advantages to limiting car usage. Many communities have taken part of this trend and it is rapidly being recognized around the world. Taking part in this helps the community and environment. Anyone can do it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The topic of driverless cars is highly debabated today, and will continue to be in the near future. Each side has many pros and cons that they can bring to the table but I believe that there is one argument that is bettere than the other. I believe that driverless cars would not serve a significant purpose in our society today for many reasons.\n\nThe name driverless goes to tell that a human would not need to operate the vehicle. This is not true, in fact driverless cars can not yet function without a human behind the wheel. These cars cannot handle driving in things like road construction or avoiding an accident. These cars can drive on the roads if traffic is not a big issue, or if there is not any construction or detours that need to be taken, but if you live in an area where these things are common, it would simply not be wroth your money to purchase one of these vehicles.\n\nAnother reason that i do not support driverless cars is that driving one of these cars could cause more accidents than there are right now. if the operator of the car is not paying attention to their surroundings, and the car cannot handle a certain situation an accident is almost certain to happen. Also, in the case of an accident that is caused by the technology, who is at fault, the driver or the car manufacturer? New laws wouold have to be implemented to solve daunting issues like these. Things like insurance companies would have to also adapt to these new cars hitting the road by devising new policies for the people that own a technologically advanced car like these.\n\nAnother reason that i am against driverless cars is that these cars could potentially take away thousands of jobs. If driverless cars can replace taxi drivers, thousands of people will be put out of work. These cars may be good for long road trips, but they are not as good as navigating big city traffic as a human is. Humans can make quick decsions and may be able to avoid these accidents. Plus, there is often road work being done, and can stretch on for miles, and humans can handle route changes and detours better than technology.\n\nThese are many reasons that humans are better suited to drive cars. Technology will continue to advance, and will get smarter, but will it be safe enough to use without someone overseeing it to make sure that no mistakes happen? This is why I believe that humans should continue to drive cars, and not technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist traveling hot place hot time year didnt much water In text says I traveling high desserts California June The deserts always hot June hot month The cyclist getting thirsty quicker heat wasnt able drink much limited water", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story parapraph ties together I think author uses also say spring pass test I really like part says spring snows melt I like explains wants puts mind", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many rason why I believe that the face on Mars was created from landforms. There are a few rocks around it that are about the same which led me to believe that it could be a combination of rocks together. There are a few crators around the face on mars as well. The meteroid could have hit a rock on mars and given it that shape.\n\nAs the paragraph stated the illusion of the face might just be caused by shadows. The brain of a human being sometimes puts an image and makes you see what you want to see. The face got chipped and started to lose its figures as years went on. If an intelligent life form made it, they would have used something to prevent that.\n\nThere has never been any real evidence of life on mars besides bacteria that had formed and was recently discovered. Water has not exicted on mars for millions of years ago.The only scientific explenation for that is that mountains formed it and its an illusion from the mind of a human being which was creasted by the shadow of the mesa or buttle.\n\nThere are on going reasons why the face was created by landfoms and not by aliens. The face could be a combination of rocks, an illusion created by the human mind, a impact that shaped a rock. Those are some of the reasons why I believe that the creation of te face was scientific and not alien made.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The way settings affect cyclist crucel First cyclist took directions someone left thier porch decades So accepted directions used problems occurred One main problem cyclist lack water supply Also cyclist incounters snakes Another directions way longer go thought Also arrived journey found deserted town So conclusion cyclest uses directions", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the increasing population in cities,noise pollution has been one of the important causes of concern.This essay presents the advantages and disadvantages of the strict laws that are made to control noise pollution.\nNoise pollution affects different groups of people in various ways.The increasing noise in recent days has led to increasing problems of hearing impairment in people in today's society.Also,the noise pollution has a devastating affects on the heart patients and it has been affecting people who are working and studying in various ways.By implementing strict rules like imposing heavy fines on vehicles honking unnecessarily and filing a case on the noise caused by the public gatherings like rallies,the above problems can be addressed.For example, recent studies have shown that the cities having less noise pollution have been leading better life when compared to those with noise pollution.\nHowever,implementing strict laws on noise caused by a person also has some disadvantages.Firstly,different religions have different kinds of festivals which cause a lot of noise.For instance,diwali,one of the most celebrated festivals in India,is celebrated by firing crackers causing a lot of noise is affected by implementing these laws.Secondly,most of the people with religious beliefs will have a bad impact by these rules.To give an example,the prayers in masjids are made with loud noise so that it can reach a large group of people living in the area.\nTo conclude,implemeting strict rules like fines and filing a case on the people causing noise pollution have a good impact on the health of the society and increasing the efficiency of work where as the festivals and the religious centres have a negative impact by these laws.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today's era, most students look forward to enrolling in professional courses at universities. However, some believe that authorities should encourage teenagers to take vocational courses as there is a huge shortage of professionals like electricians and plumbers. In my opinion, while there is a scarcity of such workers and the government should make special arrangements for prospective learners, certain other factors should also be considered.\nDue to the insufficient work possibilities after completing vocational courses and extremely low wages, scholars are forced to take loans at high interest from banks to attend university programmes. An average adult has to pay more than 70,000 USD yearly for a typical professional course at a university, and most children are unable to accumulate sufficient funds in time, which forces them to borrow this amount from banks. The job market for plumbing and electrical work is highly unregulated, which leads to the exploitation of such workers by the established brands, further distressing the people. Some regulations should be established for these markets to decrease the risk factor for workers.\nOn the other hand, due to the continuing increase in our population, the demand for doctors, engineers, and professors is also rising. In recent years, governments from all over the world have reported the widening gap between the number of professionals available per 1000 people. For example, in India, there is only 1 doctor available per 50 people in urban areas, and the number is even more concerning in rural areas, where the figure of patients climbs even further.\nIn my opinion, authorities and universities should work together towards introducing scholarships and other benefits not only for learners of professional courses but also for peoples of vocational courses. Furthermore, better and more wages for plumbers and electricians could also be established to attract more students.\nIn conclusion, favourable policies should be implemented for qualified workers to attract more potential learners by the government, as well as lower tution fees for university attendees.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One day I decided go friend house When I went cleaned pool ran dad chasing around booger finger This one days laughed ever We started day laying bad watching movie tiny I ca nt really remember movie nt really matter since busy talking totally random things After movie went living room watch bob nt cable room At time I knee injury took minute get comfortable I got situated couch sat next Her dad came minutes later booger index finger He threatened give booger lip puts booger lip I got tried run away I knew I nt get away would really put lip done hurt really bad putting much pressure knee I hoped fast I could one leg I hid closet I could hear background laughter dads footsteps I waited closet like minutes got I could tell coast clear I went back living room I laughed whole thing After stopped laughing decided go outside clean pool mood swimming pool winter really nasty tat poles dirt slimy green stuff parasites knows else I would nt surprised fish We got started scooping water buckets We nt notice tad poles We nt want throw yard rest water knew would dry die So every time scooped bucket full water would go get put little saved tad poles scooping water took half hours went house looked pool cleaner soap We could nt find went got shampoo We poured shampoo bottom pool started scrubbing That taking long nt fun got brilliant idea put shampoo clothes slide around I slipped dozen times It hard stay feet We laughed hard I almost peed I could nt go inside I soaked I soap body After pool spick span scoop soap water All took hours really laughed lot mom came home work happy cleaned meant nt After grandpa came get said goodbyes I went home thought one funnest days life Over I think day I laughed ever", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Most people have oponions that the most essential thing for achieving success in any field such as art and sport is natural talent. Other people disagree with this statement and believe that everybody in their early ages can become a professional sportsmen or artist if they are exellently taught. From my point of view, this is an extrimely controversial topic. I honestly believe that children who are interested in the subject they learn and who have natural abilities for some fields can become more successful than those who just encouraged by adults. In this essay, I will discuss both points of view and then give my review to the issue.\nOn the one hand, children who have talents from their births can become advanced in the chosen area because they have natural willingness and abilities to succeed in this field. Those youngsters can spend hours without any interraption in the process of making and creating something. By doing this, they improve their abilities and boost their skills, which become more adcanced in each step. Additionally, they are very involve in their studies without stimulation from others that their achievements are inevitable. For example, my son who is three years old enjoy painting and I always notice some improvements in his paintings, that means that he improve his skills in daily basis.\nOn the other hand, children who do not have talents or nutural abilities for great achievements in any field can be encouraged by adult professionals, who can educate as well as motivate them. For example, when I was a child, I was impressed by music teacher who played the piano in the kindergaten which I visited. After her wonderful performance, I asked my mother to register my for my education in the music school, which was close to our home. So, I was quite motivated to fullfill my dream in getting musical background, that is why I studed hard every day during seven years. I am not only become a musician and got my certificate with exellent marks, but I also won some musical competitions. So, willingness to become successful in chosen field is essential issue.\nIn conclusion, children who have talents and natural abilities for achievements in any field are easely can become successful because they do not need additional motivation from adults, whereas children who found the sphere which they interested in even without talent can improve their skill by allocating more hours and investing more energy for implementing their dream.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Humans tend to think of only the present and not the future. We sometimes only focus on immediate comforts and don't think about how are decisions now will affect our kids and grandkids in the future. Yes, cars are amazing right now. They give us a kind of freedom that is unparalled. But at the same time they hurt the enviroment which hurts not just our future but our present also. Imagine not having a car. I can hear all the gasp now but really think about it. Not having to worry about spending half your paycheck on gas. Yes gas prices are down but for how long. Without cars you also won't have to worry about spending hundreds of dollars to fix it up when it breaks down. But best of all, not having a car will definetly have positive effects on your enviroment.\n\nI have lost count on how many times my father has complained and stressed out about gas prices and the amount of money it takes to fix up his car when it breaks down. Admitedly gas prices are down. Lower than they've been in a while. But how long will that last before its back to $3.50 for a gallon of gas. And I am sure you could find something better to do with $400 than spend it fixing a transmission. Whatever that is. Not having a car releases stress. Soccer moms are the last person you would expect to give up there cars but in Vauban, Germany, a car free town that is exactly what heidrun Walter has done. She is a media trainer and a mother of two and she said \"when I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way\". If she can do it we can do it.\n\nA lot of towns and cities are doing things like car free day. Which is where for that whole day everybody walks or uses their bikes and the only motor vehicles on the road are buses and taxis. In Paris, the smog level was so high, higher than Beinjin, China, that authorities banned the used of car on the roads for a while in an effort to reduce the smog level. People who didn't follow the ban were fined 33 dollars. In Bogota, Columbia though it was more of a choice for the people to give up their cars. \"Millions of Columbians hiked, biked, skated ot took buses to work during a car-free day yesteday, leaving the streets of capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams.\" said Andrew Selsky of the Seattle times. This is a program that is being spread to other contries. The goal of this program is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. Although there was gray clouds let loose rain showers now and then it did not stop the huge amount of participants. After three years two other Colombian cities joined the event. The mayor of Asuncion, Paraguay said \"There people are generating a revolutionary change and this is crossing borders\".", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars impose major safety concerns for citizens on the road. The article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" goes into detail about one of the latest projects automotive companies are working on: self driving cars. Giving the readers insight on both the positives and the negatives of these automobiles, though the negatives seem to outweigh the positives in my opinion.\n\nIn paragraph seven the article brings the readers attention to the numerous amounts of sensors that companies use for these cars. This would mean that the car would be able to sense incoming cars or objects around it. That being said, it also brings up a lot of concerns. Things go wrong all the time for regular cars such as the air bag not working, the brakes giving out, and malfunctions that cause them to shut down altogether. So, if these things happen to regular cars, what's keeping them from happening to self-driving cars?\n\nThe text states that the passengers will be notified if anything goes wrong, but what if they aren't? That could possibly leave the passengers completely unaware of an impending problem. Whether that problem be a construction zone, heavy traffic, an object in the way, or even another driver. This would leave the passengers completely vulnerable to an accident.\n\nThere is also another problem with the \"self-driving\" cars, they are not completely self driving. It is said that in these cars there either has to be a driver\n\nready to take the wheel at all times in case of an emergency or they have to have their eyes on the road and their hands on the wheel at all times. This would mean that even in the self-driving cars there are many situations in which the passengers will still have to drive.\n\nSelf driving cars involve way to many risks that can be detrimental to the lives of the passengers and the people around them. I agree that in theory they do seem interesting but in reality it doesn't seem possible to have a fully functioning, safe self-driving car. Self-driving cars are one of those projects where the current risks are too drastic to ignore.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time I patient I counted I didnt count ten I counted boatload coins consisting pennies nickles dimes quarters It took two hours finish counting money felt like eternity Counting bunch coins wont change world takes lot patience accomplish I still remeber moment I finished counting money I proud l couldnt think l could make l admit impatient person Patience important nothing would ever finished without I dont think Ill able count coins like say Patience virtue", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Climate Change is becoming an ultimately heated topic among nations. While it is believed by some people that preventing such a threat to the environment is essential, others think we should just adapt to it.This essay will argue why it's totally preposterous to think that our environment could survive global warming or other climate related disasters without doing anything to prevent that.\nDespite the major risks, it is believed that controlling the earth's temperature is beyond our power. Because it is connected to many other factors none of which can be stopped or even predicted. For instance, ocean levels are rising when volcanic eruptions occur which makes the temperature of the water much more higher. Therefore, climate change is not necessarily something we can always prevent.\nIn contrast, scientists and environmental experts endeavor new approaches to face the fact that the universe is much more heated than ever. They believe so because many attempts have been tried already with great success. For example, Japan performs experimental trials each year and tests the effects of such experiments on the environment.It is for these reasons, it would be logical to think a lot can be done to protect the environment from the rising heat.\nIn conclusion, it sounds really easier to just find a way to deal with the detrimental effects of the heated atmosphere instead of preventing them. This essay argued why this is extremely inaccurate. In my opinion, ignoring the problem without trying to solve it is totally unacceptable and only makes it worse.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today, I will be discussing why to join the Seagoing Cowboys program and participate in the program. This essay will talk about how you can visit many different places and how it can change your life. Those are my 2 main points that I will be discussing in this essay.\n\nThis paragraph will discuss on how you can visit places and learn things. This is great opportunity to go visit unique places. First, when you go and visit you can go learn new things and you can see the world the world better. Secondly, it can make you change the way you see the world. You can also experience new adventures. If you were to go see Acropolis it would suprise you and traveling can probably give you experience to the world. This paragraph was about how you visit places and about how you can learn things.\n\nThis paragraph will talk about how it can change your life. In the passage, it says it opened up the world to him and that it was great opportunity. If you were to join the program it would make see the world better and change your life. It can help treat the world better and you can help people. Helping is big part on changing your life. It can make you more aware of people in need that need help. This paragraph was about how it can change your life.\n\nIn conclusion, those are the reasons I think you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. The reasons were on how you can visit places and on how it can change your life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In these days, healthy proportion of people choose to get along the world. I believe that, the reason for this is high living standarts and this could be negative because of increasing numbers of migrants.\r\n\r\n It is obvious that, nowadays more and more people try to possess flourishing future and for the most parts they will find it in foreign countries. Because in some countries, there are many organisations which would subsidize new comers with money or houses. This can be seen in countries which of their population is less and not equal to their territory. This kind of places are attracting for migrants and they consider it as if this is optimum choice. They are highly likely to be employed to make money for survival of their family. The recently adopted rule in Russian Federation attracted more people to there. According to this, if the migrant family is becoming to expand by giving birth to child, government autorities give them funds.\r\n\r\n However, this could cause to some problematic issues, for instance there will be millions of illegal migrants. Wellcoming country gives them exact period of time peple can stay there. When the time is expired they should leave or extend the period. For the most cases people do their work by illegal ways . Moreover, they may commit a crime to find money to make ends meet. After this, conflicts can be increased among the city dwellers. Due to this borders of countries will probably be closed for short- time to avoid such migrants. Korean government have faced with the very problem in 2012 with China. According to this, Korea postponed flights of January month to China due to, illegalities of Chinese poeple.\r\n\r\n To conclude, travelling can be good idea to know about new cultures and nations. However, those people who travel around the world should not do out-of-law doings.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast Marcia Amidon Lsted many obstacles builders faced attempting allow dirigibles dock One reason safety Paragraph excerpts explains Most dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable It shows us accident happen mast densely populated area like downtown New York accident could get ugly Another reason nature Paragraph explains winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents This another safety issue dirigibles would dangling high pedestrians street A third obstacle existing law airships flying low urban areas As see obstacles builders faced", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think for the election for presidency its should be counted on the popular vote. Why I think it should be on the popular vote is because it should count on what the people vote on,not on the electoral college. We should be the people to have the vote on the president and not just a piece of it. Plus the electoral colleges don't even vote on the president,they vote on a slate for the electors who then vote for president.\n\nvoting should be on the popular vote now because the electoral colleges are not even voting on the president they're voting on the electors who vote for president. When if there was a direct vote we would then be voting just for the president. Yes sometimes we would vote someone else for president by accident ,but not as much as the electoral college does.\n\nthats why I think we should have a direct vote instead of having the electoral colleges voting for us pretty much. It just sounds like it would woork better if the people voted for president and not the people voinng for elctors who then vote for the president.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The time went time went went This arrangements trucks It I tracker wheel drive jeep When started head back mountain let drive ca nt see well night wears glasses eye sights good Well following mountain finally got pavement going pretty fast road narrow curving road first time ever She went go around really sharp corner got two wheels flipped right front slam brakes would nt run So shut truck run fast could helped truck turn back around go help hes already top truckHe looks ans says CAPS look truck tried many times roll never able god damn So started laughing got chain back truck pulled back Then really quite farted started laugh Well found got hole radiator pull back house seemed like longest drive ever truck weighs way mine pull home wheel drive cant go thirty wheel drive stuff break So finally get house dad comes side saw truck really pissed gave truck graduation present messed Then finally cooled cause said one hurt glad went house ate dinner went bed So moral story careful things happen unexpected", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patient help got life If You nt patient wo nt know go next future uncle patient face month He running muck phone call Finally someone yelled patient call He bid us patient hardest thing He dined could nt call next day He said ended forgetting He said trying patient could waiting patient America s next They add would call got They soon phone mug A woman nicely said MONTH I speak sanders please uncle replied yes I month family kept telling patient So I nt anymore You keep practicing Someone else call details much hung upon phone I m happiest days lives uncle lot Really kept ground patient He told us hard worked great ending Here s future advice Always I mean always patient Your going get anywhere life nt Patient important life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that volunteer work could be beneficial not only on a personal level, but also on a social level. However, I do not agree that all young people should be forced to devote their leisure time to such unpaid work.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion, young people should be given the opportunity to become a volunteer in their local community. The task of schools, the media and even the government is to encourage young people to gain experience in volunteering, rather than pushing them to do the work as an obligation. They could, for example, tell young people that through such work they may come to realise more of their own value and may see more possibilities for their future. Some of the experiences may serve as inspiration for their lifelong career path. Forcing people to do anything against their will is against the values of a free and fair society, therefore young people always have the right to make decisions.\r\n\r\nMeanwhile, I would suggest that the local community should do something more or less in return, such as holding a small celebration, preparing some handmade gifts and writing a letter. Those events are a great way to express gratitude on behalf of the community and the youngsters will be aware that their active participation in this unpaid work is meaningful. Through their work, they can help others to make a difference, even if it is a small one.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, young people should be given the opportunity to experience more through volunteering, and the community can do something to show their appreciation. And for young people, this should never be compulsory.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the author supports his ideas very well because, he tells why its important to study venus and why it is the worthy pursuit despite the dangers. The author also says ¨venuse is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size¨.They have aslo sent numerous spacecrafts and have done previouse missions. The pervious missions was unmanned. There has not been a spaceship that has touched venuse and why, the author said that gthe reason that spaceship or has not landed was becuse it would not last mor than just a few hours. The author supports the idea that studying venus is worthy pursuit despit the dangers, because know that i read the story icould see why. Venus might be dangers to go to and explore but by making spacecrafts and more andmakeing experiment it probably would not be so dangerous to send spacecraft or maybe a spaceshit to try it out again.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a controversial dispute about whether the punishment for teenage and mature criminals should be identical. From my point of view about life, I partly agree with this debate.\r\n\r\nTo commence with, imposing punishments on adult citizens is necessary because this purpose will form an orderly society. Therefore, the safety of residents will be protected because of the regulations. However, regarding immature wrongdoers, governments should consider these penalties carefully before applying them. Since many scientific studies, juvenile delinquents have a deficiency in perception, meaning their ability to discriminate between good and wrong manners is not yet shaped. Consequently, they cannot control their behaviours or might not rein in their eutrophic emotions. Therefore, authorities should impose another mild discipline on them. For example, when young people scribble on the wall at the supermarket, police officers could take them to serve the community instead of jailing them.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, offenders related to serious crimes should be punished regardless of their age. Youthful violators are increasing for many reasons, like playing violent video games, then they can generate savage crimes, such as killing massive numbers of people. Therefore, governments should apply the severest punishment, called the death penalty, to dangerous murderers, whether they are under 18 years old. It means that the existence of cruel delinquents will be discarded from society. Hence, the safety of the citizens will be maintained. Moreover, this strict discipline can help governments inhibit juvenile lawbreakers from savagely and illegally misbehaving.\r\n\r\nTo summarize everything stated, punishing immature violators and adults by using similar regulations based on their extent of guilt.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A long standing debate that has been an issue of contention is whether or not advertisements can strongly influence people's decision on a particular product or service. To support this, a lot of people purchase things not because they have strong convictions but rather because of the level of exposure and awareness available . Again, the opposing side believes that an individual's perception of something stands irrespective of any possible external influence.\r\n\r\nMany people are patronising companies not because they know their goods or services are good, but because of the level of publicity that such companies have set in motion. As far as the purpose of the advertising sector is concerned, in sensitizing viewers of anything, the more contact had with such content, the more likely it is that notions and ideas are sold to consumers at the expense of their right to discern. This is why many companies like Indomie, are making huge profits from catchy jingles and children are forcing their parents to eat only Indomie not because it is particularly good for them, but only because they often come in contact with phrases like \"Indomie good for you\".\r\n\r\nIt is not easy to force people into having an idea of something if they already have their own views. Once an individual sees that something works and the other does not, then nothing in the world can change such perception as they have the conviction that only what they believe is true . If someone decides that MTN is better than GLO and they have tested and seen this to be a fact, no level of publicity can change this ideology.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion , while it is true that buyers focus on buying things they are aware of as opposed to things they are sure of and a formed perception can never be changed, I think advertising influences people's awareness of a product but the decision to do something or not remains an autonomous right.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I patient every even year I get I buying I cant buy coming I half patient seen longer I keen getting excited Every day patient sometimes I cant wait get school I play Im always trying patient its one holiday another one gets exiting Every kid tries patient one hard thing How Im patient I act like nopthing exciting even comimg", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If America were to limit car usage I'm sure that weight problems would lesson, as well as the smog. The envirnment would also be healthier, streets would be safer for children to play in. There would also be less car accidents that happenn because of careless drivers. Americans would have more money as well since gas prices have been going up so much in the past year.\n\nIf you have a truck in America, what do you think your gas is doing to the envirnment? Wll, in France they use diesel fuel instead of gasoline, which means 67% of their vehicles is diesel. Car traffic in France was 60%, after five days of intensifying smog, and where do you think that smog came from? Deisel! cold nights and warm days caused the warmer layer of air to trap car emissioms. Paris typicaly has more smog than other European capitals, last week Paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter per cubic meter compared with 114 in Brussels and 79.7 in London.\n\nIn Bogota, Columbia- a program that's set to spread to the other countries, millions of Columbians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day yesterday, leaving the streets deviod of traffic jams. The day without cars is part of an important campaign that began in Bogota in the mid-1990s. I believe that people in America should do something like that.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the increase in artificially intelligent ,robots the number of human jobs has declined significantly. It is often argued that robots will conduct all the work eventually, while some people object to this because there will be certain particular tasks which cannot be performed by robots. This essay will discuss why human jobs will be taken over by robots, indeed.\r\n\r\nIn the coming days, Robots with artificial intelligence will overtake humans and perform all work which humans are performing now. The consistency and reliability of machines in comparison to humans in just unmatchable. For example, the resilience of robots to do work persistently is much higher than that of human beings. Moreover, there are numerous jobs which are unreachable to humans and can easily be conducted by robots. For instance, going out of the world and researching the universe. As a result of this undeniable capacity, there is no reason why human jobs won't be replaced by computers in the coming days.\r\n\r\nHowever, some people are rejecting the fact that of human replacement and they still believe that there are numerous tasks which cannot be operated only by programming machines. Without acknowledging the growth of technology these people do the advocacy objecting to machine power. Nowadays, even the crucial sectors of human existence like health and education are also been mechanised.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, human forces are drastically overtaken by Artificial intelligence. Though there are some countable jobs which only humans can do, In my opinion, there is only a limited time before robots will completely replace human jobs in spite of human intelligence.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.Venus is the second planet from our sun. A thick atmosphere of about 97 percent of carbon dioxide covers Venus. Venus also has some features that are simular to those on\n\nEarth. Chaos of Venus's surface have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation. Peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditons because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective. The planet Venus has\n\na surface rocky sediment and includes famliliar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. Venus is often referred to as Earths twin Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occastionally the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closestin distance.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think certain materials books music movies magazines etc removed shelves found offensive People enjoy books offensive language content people love feel engery tone writer I personal love offensive langauge everything censored would feel like everything dull fake Your cheating feel wow body Now look censor Your cheating felt dull got cheated probably thought ten different thing would said differently uncensored If parent nt want child reading seeing try teach keep child away Instead removing move section library The section warn kids parent getting parent nt want exposed reality means area libraries usually divided section ask local libraries divide adult children books section libraries tell", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recently a\n\nViking 1 spacecraft spotted a a resemblance to a human face on Mars.The occurance ,on May 24, 2001, is said to be extraterrestrial and an ancient martian structure. Even though we still don't know about the place and time this was found, I think that the face is just a coincidential natural landform. Here are my reasons for why the \"Face on Mars\" is a natural landform and not an ancient civilization's doing.\n\nFirst of all, everything on Mars is taken granted to be extraterrestrial or taken to be some martian conspiracy. Although it might help the NASA budget I still therefore agree that this is not an alien structure. On a JPL website there was no alien monument found, but a natural formation. After all the formation could be an illusion making out eyes, a nose, and mouth by the shadows.\n\nMany comparisons were also made from NASA that supported the idea of the formation being naturally made. A scientist named Jim Garvin said that the landforms looked like common landforms on Earth such as buttes or mesas. Garvin said that it reminded him most of the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. These human references can be the key to not mistaking\n\nnatural formations to be alien formations. Even if this formation truly is an alien formation, the we may be the ones wrong about this topic.\n\nAnother reasons to support this topic is that it may be just a huge rock formation. Along with the illusion of the facial features of the \"Face on Mars\" this may be another good misunderstanding. After all on Mars there are many rock formations.\n\nNow, you might be saying that this could help NASA's budget and exploration. Sure there are many reasons this could contribute to the budget and exploration, but that is only if this was an alien formation. Also you may say that these type of formations are not too common. This may be true, but what about all of the other conspiracies that arose from martian formations. The assumption of saying that something is martian or not is really getting too old.\n\nThese are my reasons for the \"Face on Mars\" being a natural formation. Although my assumption may not be true, I still think the arguement was a well\n\ndebateable topic. I think that the face formation on mars is a natural landform rather than an alien/ extraterrestrial formation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "think Is really nt care like And parents want remove books shelf believe certain material book music movies magazing remove shelves Also dont think book ever really hurt anyone I mean book dose really matter Next saying becuse dont really would get offensive stuff like argument And also stuff kids shouldnt know put stuff adult section place find easy They nt put stuff think children never know kids section Matter fats nt know remove stuff like movie Becuse trying block form kids see really dumb Beause moive children watch And parents going let children watch movies movie see ages Unless parents allowe itAnd goes music I nt know bad music libraryI nt see rap stuff librarylike raps stuff like itSo thought arguments", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It another warm muggy best friend decided go friend house As soon walked three mile walk get house realizes forgot phone charger house We nt want walk way back house ride either none us license yet parents nt home So start brainstorm get back house retrieve cell phone charger suddenly We heard loud bang come backyard old rugged shed back dark corner yard I go check see noise open shed one dirt bikes fallen I pull dirt bike old spiderweb infested shed got lightbulb heads suddenly looked idea smart figure ride dirt bike three mils back house main roads fine tells idea says bad idea mom home nt want us getting trouble phone charger repeatedly tells us put dirt bikes back next thing know bike front testing around neighbor hood I tell since one dirt bike take ill follow bike next thing know side side riding dirt bike bike busiest road town pitch black outside PERSON go ill meet yell takes road mph im yards behind suddenly I see white figure start creep driveway cant quite make When suddenly see flashing red blue lights try warn shout PERSON yet far away hear since pitch black outside lights light whole street tries loose going side road match charger cop car It s hands I bike back jeremys house get run scene crime see whats happening keep distance act like nt know cop cuffs standing behind cop car cop goes back car write ticket I see shadows street light throw something bushs Since nt dirt bike could nt ride cop calls tow truck take bike cop gives ride home tickets As soon leave scene I go check see threw bush s chew minor grab next day home parents work I bring chew starts tel us mom punished suddenly heard garage door start open mom home work hand chew I run backyard fence tells tell many people nt want everyone knowing already talk town", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In The Mast builders Empire State Building faced numerous obstacles The largest obstacle faced safety dirigibles comming outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen flammable Another obstacle nature Winds constantly shiffting caused violent air currents Another obstacle law airships flying low urban areas The builders relized hazards They facing dropped idea using moorning mast dirigibles passengers", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued that artificial intelligentce and robots will overtake all the humen's responsibility in nearly future.However, I believe there are some duties that can't be done by AI.\r\n\r\nFirsly, There is noticeable improvement in robots and now they play centeral role in our industry life . This objects help us in most factories and productions. For example , several machins are used in car factories which do a variety of duties.Thus, this provide economical benefits to compony such as less salary payment , no insurance needed and so on. Secondly, a robot can do several tasks at the same time in less amount of time which is more usefull and quicker than ManPower.\r\n\r\nHowever, in my perspective, there are some jobs that cannot be done by artificial intelligence . This means some feilds need humen's brain attention on them .For instance, in medical feild a professional doctors are needed to observe the process . Of course in some surgeries robots are used but they are operated by a specialist surgouns . Then, it comes to political matters which goverments need to consulte and make the right desicions which i do not think that artificial intelligents are capeable of .Also the duties regarding to economy is more likely to be done by humen rather that robots because the economic situation should be predicted in order to make right decisions.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, robots and artificial inteligence have brought noticeable outcome by doing some physical responsibilities but in my view, they cannot respond to the demand of all kind of jobs.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter one joyous things experience world Everyone relate s one would say nt enjoy laughing It s human nature want need connected people social beings laughter best way connect people There negativity laughing unless laughing rude comment general people laughing would say re good time People build relationships around experiences people example dating On first date s expected important factor two people fun laughing Other wise separate left thoughts impression could make break relationship That s first impression important When two people reminiscing date remember smiling laughing likely positive memory experience want hang Think experience ever another person If remember first time met felt afterward way felt could tell lot relationship went Meeting new people s difficult ask anyone start conversation someone new usually tell make laugh It s universal term anyone This past month basketball season started I playing whole different team I last year Only half girls team last year still I make connection girls younger I nt yet gotten know I start think new girls I already made connections I m good friends laughter Everyday get closer closer find ways laugh court No matter difficult practice get never become exhausted someone making laugh Laughter needed life make livable Think If could never laugh would fun life Image life like detention time never able let loose relax good time No one would want People would go insane laughter calms people mellows It helps create people s personalities affect others well Laughter like ripple water starts one single person expands touching anyone near Laughing contagious like mid brings joy people touch Laughter s foundation happiness", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In some nations, increasingly people are becoming interested in searching about the history of the homes or building they live in. There are several reasons why looking about the history of the house is becoming more common among people, and there are differents ways can helps people to research about their house or buliding information. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, there are a various reasons why individuals are becoming more interested in finding out about the house their live in. The primary reasons is related safety rules. To illustrate, some people are desrie to makes improvments in their house, and then they should know about the previous construction materials of their accommodations. For example, some people want to build a new floors or sports facilities in their house. Consequently, people want to ensuring their houses after this redevelopments do not collapse. Curiosity is another reason why people are becoming more interested in order to search about their homes. This is due to the fact that, houses tell us about people who live in this house in the past through .Futhermore, architecture style gives people to learn about cultures.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are many methods people can find information about their houses. The first method asking the pervious owners of the houses about information. The second way, asking people in the neighborhood namely, neighbors, local supermakerts, local libraries. The third way, some websites provide information about the houses. For instance, BBV website gives people in the Saudi Arabia about the materials used in the house, the data of founded the house, the number of owners of the house. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, there are many reason why become more common amoung individuals to search about informations about their houses including, rehabilitation purpose, curiosity, there are many methods to search about this information namely, asking pervious owners of the houses, asking in the neighborhood, online websites.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I remember one day I waiting waiting room doctors office mom I wasnt feeling well We sat talking ten minutes mom said CAPS its already ten minutes I wonder I get go talk doctor I said I dont know lets wait bit longer Mom said So waited sat patiently kids started coming I noticed young older I signed What taking long I wandered Was doctor even today I starred wall looked color Orange Before I knew half hour passed My mom looking watch CAPS its almost CAPS I said flustered annoyed Are gon na sit day I asked Finally question answered nurse said I could finally come back room speak doctor sickness CAPS patient nurse said smilling I smiled back I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When most people think of space programs in the near future, they often think of missions to Mars. However, this is not the only option. Many scientists at NASA are working to create a Venus space program. This research is supported by the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\". The article does this well, by providing factual evidence, deterring counterarguments, and rethinking the problem to be easier to address.\n\nOne of the most important parts of any claim is the evidence. The article fufills this with arguements that Venus is easy to reach. The author states that \"Venus is sometimes right around the corner--in sace terms\" (Venus 2). They also used evidence to address the problem that Venus is inhospitable to humans. on the surface, Venus is about 800 degrees Fahrenheit, but the author points out that a vehicle at a much higher altitude would have a temperature of around 170 degrees Fahrenheit.\n\nThat isn't the only way problems such as this could be averted. The author also includes some NASA research on elecronics and mechanical computers that use no electricity and don't easily break.\n\nAll of these now solved problems have deterred scientists from finding ways to research Venus. The author addresses this as well. They say that \"maybe we should think of them [the problems] as challenges\"(Venus 6). This way of thinking makes getting to Venus seem much more achievable.\n\nWith all of these good traits of an article, the author argued that researching way of going to Venus is a good idea after all. In the end, only time will tell whether humans get to Venus or Mars first.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The line chart shows changes in the percentage of attendance in music concert at one city. The population is divided into five age groups:16-24, 25-44, 45-54, 55-64, and 75 years old and above. \n\nOverall, it is clear that the percentage of attendance in all age group were rose except for percentage of people from 55 to 64 years old. Although the percentage of some age groups were fluctuated, they showed rising trend in general.\n\nLooking at the chart more closely, one can see that the largest age group comprises 16 to 24-year-olds and that it grew steadily from 2010 to 2015, gradually reaching nearly 70 percent. In contrast, the oldest group, made up of people 75 years and over, consistently have the lowest rate of all five age groups. They surged initially, increasing from 10 percent in 2010 to 20 percent by 2011. However, this figure eventually settled into a slow increase, increasing to 20 percent by 2015. It is noteworthy that people from 55 to 64 years old remaind stable during the whole period. The number of the second largest group which comprised of people from 45 to 54 plunged initially, decreased from 52 percent of 2010 to 40 percent by 2011. Yet, this figure eventually bounce back to 50 percent in 2012, and maintained at the same level. The number of people from 25 to 44 years old decreased from 40 percent in 2010 to 30 percent by 2012, which is nearly half of figure in the largest group at the same time, but it ascended to 48 percent in 2015.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Censorship public libraries allowed I believe different veiw points For one books come shelves people like plot series Two million us people like many ways Also reading one things differ One person might read peaceful warmhearted stories people like want something intense able read With us different world Humans different taste food music movies books All people different ways satisfy pleasures book readings books like religons us time freely living reglion without punichment would take away books people love read freely To eyes right It s like taking candy away innocent baby rot s teeth What I mean sure books people offend yet might people offensive persons books baby s teeth nt rotting take candy away Meaning books individal shelf labels People would nt feel offensive finding wrong spot Looking point veiws understand I come We yet books find inside finding books I know many book readers different types tastes No matter friends different To many people would agree So tell censorship public libraries", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The FACS (Facial Action Coding System) machine developed by Dr. Paul Eckman is turning the tides of facial expression recognition. It is able to distinguish individual expressions such as happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness which humans can find hard to do making it vital to being infused into the use of schools. Teachers would be able to learn more of their students and improve on their curriculums in order to satisfy the needs of their students. The FACS machine would be able to tell whether a student is lying, needs emotional support and help, and see whether they understand the lesson or not making the machine essential to school life.\n\nWhen it comes to school, students will not always tell the truth. They may lie about not doing their homework or be untruthful about whether they were involved in a fight. The FACS machine could solve that issue as it is able to determine whether someone is lying or not based on their expression which is stated in the quote,\" To an expert, faces don't lie; these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politician or celebrity isn't being truthful.\" This machine is able to examine the details of one's face to find out if they are lying or not. It examines the key traits of each specific emotion and if they are not meant, that is how it knows whther the truth has been told or not. Students will no longer bee able to weasel their way out of punishment due to their superior lying skills as the FACS machine is able to see through the lies. This is not the only thing this machine can do though for schools.\n\nThis mechanism is able to determine the emotions of a student and see if they need help or not. It can read a total of six emotions with some branches coming off of those emotions. The six emotions are stated in the quote,\" Eckman has classified six basic emotions - happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness - and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles.\" The machine is able to determine whether a student is in distress or not thus telling the teacher to help the student out with the problem that they are facing. The teacher would be able to help the student cope and deal with their emotional sadness or anger and tell them how to deal with it in order to assist them in getting through it. This is not the end though of what this incredible machine can do for a school.\n\nStudents may not understand a lesson and are having troubles getting through it. SInce humans find the task of reading emotions diffficult, a teacher may not be able to see this and help the student out but this machine can deal with that problem too. How the machine deals with this horrible issue is state in the statement,\" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, Dr. Huang predicts. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This quote shows how the FACS mechanism would be able to tell if a student is bored which would signal the teacher to modiffy the lesson in order for it to be better understood. Students would no longer have to complain about not understanding their homework or curriculum. This would allow for better grades and better lives for the students in the future.\n\nIn conclusion, the FACS machine would be essential to the lives of students in a classroom. Teachers would b able to make the experience of school even better than it is already and easier than it is already. No student would have to struggle anymore which is key to the success of a school as everyone would learn greatly and effecttively. The machine would deal with the problems of whether a student is telling the truth or not, whether a student is in need of emotional support or not, and whether a student needs help understanding the curriculum and lesson that they are learning.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Scientists believe Venus is dangers and some think Venus is the \"most earth-like planet in our solar system. Some dangers is \" not a single spaceship has touched down on venus in more than three decades.\" The author makes it clear that there is both good and bad about Venus. Some of the things that readers can notice is that there's a lot of intresting facts about Venus and how little scientist actually know about Venus. Venus is the second planet from the sun and occasionally orbit the sun a different speeds. If Venus is the most earth-like planet then why do scientist find it so hard to find out more about venus. A reason is \"800 degrees fanrecheit atmosphere preseure is 90 times greater.\" Venus is the nearest option for a planetary visit. If \" hostile conditions on surface of venus would allow scientist to float above the fray.\" Many researches are working on innovations that would allow machines to last long enough to contribute knowledge of venus. It would be so cool if scientist and researches could one day come up with an innovation to be able to find more about venus. If venus is actually a second earth-like there can probally be another earth. So yes, venus is worth studying despite the dangers it represents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear The effect computers people positive one I think people spend way much time computers information computers inaccurate still telephones cellphones people use fir communication A majority peoples time spent computer Whether playing games checking even working peoples valuable time getting used This time could used important things friends family outside nature exercising Being computer insteads exercising huge effect people Some people overweight eat exercise My sister works day says ladies work un healthy go computer eat granola bars wich usually healthy If others spent least half hour outside fresh air instead using computer would feel lot better My doctor always used tell brother CAPS play hour day This true I strongly encourage people go outside activity opposed playing computer The computer used lot researching Some information computer helpful never really know information inaccurate At least research using book encyclopedia trust sources What report could use internet would able tell information trustworthy Sure computers also teach handeye coordination playing video games real life need know shoot dragon dodge candy s falling sky This example unneeded information skills keeps people wanting go back computer Another thing computer communicte others When computers nt invented even advanced people happy give one another call Now computers people instant message even skype webcam website What even happened cellphones take", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this global era, global warming brings adverse effects on the climate of the earth across the world. It is assumed by some folks that change in climate impact the lifestyle of individuals while others think weather condition has immensely affected the economy of a country. In my point of view, the financial status of a society is greatly affected by atmospheric conditions.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, in developing countries climate play a vital role in the living style of people. Societies wholly solely depend on environmental situations. It is to say that, people live their lives and celebrate events such as spring festivals to enjoy the weather. For example, in Pakistan's residential structure, dressing cuisine and social gatherings reflect the intensity of the atmosphere which is quite different from residences of European countries. So, climate not only changes the way of life but also changes the dress and foods of societies.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, climate conditions greatly influenced the financial structure of a nation. To be more specific, developing countries rely on agriculture which is directly affected by the weather. If the environment does not dramatically change due to global warming, these nations will easily boost their infrastructure by growing crops and vegetables. For instance, In Pakistan recently heavy rain caused a devastating flood; crops and vegetables are destroyed in huge sectors. So, the flood not only disturbs the agricultural system of the country but the community is also affected by this disaster. \r\n\r\nAdmittedly, individuals depend on natural resources according to climate but the economy of a region strongly affected society. For example, in Saudi Arabia despite having strong weather, its economic growth is stable as compared to developing nations.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, I tend to reiterate although a person’s lifestyle is changed by variations in climate, the effects of economic variations seem to be more significant. Hence, I assert it has greatest the crucial impact on societies.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mooring mast Empire State Building intentionally built dirigible docking Although problem allowing happen questioned time mast s construction safety issues major concern Most dirigibles outside US used hydrogen gas extremely flamable The news German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed flames greatly concerned owners Empire State Building They imagined much worse would dirigible combusted building dense population Downtown New York This caused builders Empire State Building reconsider allowing dirigibles dock s mooring mast", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you like to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program? I think you would love to. You would be able to get to help people and save people, you would also get to travel the world and learn about different cultures. Even though you it might right now seem just like work, work and more work, you also get to have fun.\n\nWhen your a Seagoing Cowboy you get to help people, and save them to. Maybe some of their houses got destroyed, or maybe then don't have enough supplies top trade care of themselves and their loved ones. Well being a Seagoing Cowboy you get to do this for people all around the world. You would definitely be able to meet new people and I think you would have a lot of fun. During 1945 many countries were left in ruins. Wouldn't you love to go help those people find food, find or build a shelter for them, and more? This would be an all around great experience.\n\nIn this experience of a life time you would also be able to travel around the world. Wouldn't traveling around the world seem fund? You be Abel to learn so much, like, maybe a new language, or some new facts that maybe you didn't know about that country. You would be able to learn about cultures and have a new experience. Being able to travel around the world would be amazing. Even through you are still doing work you would still get some free time too. It's now just work.\n\nEven though you will be working most of the time, you can not just work, you have to have fun with it. Like you get to see animals and stay with them on the ship. Like when you have the shift to watch over the animals, you get to see them and check on them. Maybe even pet them. Ther could be all sorts of animals on the ships. Who's knows it a surprise. You also have the opertunity to see different places. When you get to your destination you get to explore or stay on the ship. You will be able to see like Greese, or China. Tidi would ave an awesome experience to me.\n\nSo now do you think that being apart of the Seagoing Cowboys would be fun? You would be able to help people across the country, you would be able to learn about different cultures, and would would get to have fun. This would be an experience that probably no one really has done. You could become a hero by justly helping people. I think that you should join the Seagoing Cowboys. What do you think?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Whether it is on TV, radio or hoardings at the side of the road, advertisements have become a part of our lives. Advertising is a powerful and persuasive medium. Consumers are influenced by advertisements in both positive and negative ways. This essay shall delve into the ways adverts affect the common man and suggest ways to protect people from the negative effects of adverts.\nOn the positive side ads tell us about the new products that are launched in the market. They also tell us about the working of these products. After seeing the ads, consumers can go to the market and select things of their choice. On the other hand, advertisements can cause people to be dissatisfied with what they\nalready gave and make them want more. Being exposed again and again to products which one cannot afford leads to dissatisfaction. Furthermore, not all parents are in the position to afford the goods which the children see advertised and want to possess. This often leads to feelings of inadequacy among them. In addition to this advertisements lead to materialism and people lay too much emphasis on material goods. People are prepared to work long hours or even turn to crime to get these goods.\nThe solution is not simple as advertising has become a very pervasive medium. To begin with, advertisements which make false claims should be banned. Then there should be consumer awareness programmes. Consumers should be warned against too much consumerism. Finally, advertisements for liquor and those ads which show stunts should also be banned.\nTo put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that today we are influenced a lot by adverts, both in positive and negative ways, without adverts we would lose a valuable source of revenue which is used for the benefit of majority. Our lives would be dull without these ads and there is not much that can be done against the consumerism they promote", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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