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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Rolling hills open terran hgh desertsall features setting affect cyclist First Rolling Hills could take energy cyclist travel miles end The open terrain leads beating sun also puts pressure cyclist Lastly high deserts would affect cyclist pedal mles end rough dry terrain putting strain overall", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think features setting affect cyclist greatly First I think weather conditions affect I think passage says I could drop heatstroke Meaning really hot Also l think fact water left affecting says passage l eased past trying keep balance dehydrated state This big affect hes thirsty Also l think fact nothing around affecting I think passage says cars I think things affect", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on driveless cars, would be that the negative aspects is that the car would be that the car could have a few minor mess ups and that if the car wasnt being controled by a human then the people in the car would be helpess if there was somthing to go wrong wit the car. The postive effects of having a car that you can drive without actually driving iot would be that that would cut down on driven and driving, texting and driving , and also being on the phone while driving you can multitalk in the car while you drive, There would cut down on the death rate of car acciccents of that nature because people wouldnt need to be focused about whats going on around them if they had a driveless car that could drive them around without having to take any precautions. But the position that i think is better for drivless cars would be that they are more of a negative effect even tho it has lots of pros but becuase they dnt allow the person driving to have any control over the car itself when there behind the wheel. Another thing why i think its a negative thing to have is because have a mind of there own they run on othr things that power them to function and once again they could have a defect on the car that could cause it to go wrong and start to mess up in traffic and could end badly for the family or person that has to drive that car.These were all my reasons why i stand by the negative effect more than the postive things it can provide for people now a days.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "At First narrator Do Exceed Posted Speed limit energetic enthusiastic journey Yosemite national Park After getting helpful advice short cuts cyclist sets adventure First thing encounter ghost town The gentlemen taken advice assured booming prosperous town This set first wave doubt cyclist mind Then lack water began They travelling high desserts California June slowly running water Flat road soon replaced short rolling hills increased cyclist state deliriousness After dissapointments cyclist decides hope going die The reader partly drawn believing end cyclist All disappointments set stage end cyclist cant stop reading find happensIf werent hopelessness setting wouldnt care", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a social expectation that all teenagers should be forced to do unpaid work to improve the local community, which can enhance the well-being of both individuals and society. Personally, I do think participating in voluntary work in the local community should be justified because of several reasons. \r\n\r\nIt is undeniable that unpaid work can provide young people with a valuable opportunity to cultivate their skills. In fact, to achieve daily tasks involved in community work, teenagers need to communicate with plenty of clients who have diverse backgrounds and character traits, adjust their negative emotions brought about by stressful situations, and reflect on what they can do to improve their services. These activities all require comprehensive skills such as critical thinking, resilience, self-care, and empathy. Therefore, it could be a predictable outcome that teenagers who regularly train themselves through these activities are more likely to be competent compared to their peers. In this sense, the advantages of community work outweigh the drawbacks. \r\n\r\nAs for society, unpaid community work may contribute to the declining rates of juvenile delinquency and therefore more stable social order. I reckon the reason why youth crimes are still existing in our society is the lack of citizenship education among teenagers. However, voluntary community work would be an efficient pedagogical tool to gradually educate teenagers on the sense of social responsibility. This means that the more teenagers engage in volunteering work, the more likely they are to commit offences or threaten public safety. Consequently, social stability can be improved due to community work. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I strongly support the proposal that requires teenagers to participate in unpaid community work. Not only can they acquire various skills from daily practices, but also can prevent the youth from committing crimes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The bus flew around tightly wound corners Beyond windows farmland rocky bluffs peaceful rivers streamed past Exhausted fourteen hour flight I barely knew time The things keeping awake jolting bus I barely knew gossiping quietly We going visit live group high school students affectionately referred I met partner Everything I knew life family I learned maybe ten maybe short messages Communication going problematic mother started teaching I turned two I nowhere near fluent I selfconscience uncomfortable around native speakers decent family spoke Finally bus drove narrow cobbled streets It pulled plaza packed people The doors hissed open filed crowd standing tiptoes search new families All around people chattered mix parents waited somewhere middle I slowly wove way towards Brigitte host mother grabbed hug CAPS gehts war dein How How flight I faltered CAPS war sehr langalso ich bin ein bisschen muede The flight long I m little tired took arm led uphill towards school welcome dinner held She explained CAPS excited meet small never get tourists We get exchange students every year stomach filled jitterysick feeling nervous anticipation Normally making friends easy time different I minimally understood language culture people surrounding The long flight evident sleepless bags eyes greasy knotted hair jetlagged brain wondered I would get along people Would I fit able slip life without many hitches snags We passed antiquated street dusky tunnellike entryway After turns emerged open courtyard An array food covered several tables scent grilling bratwurst wafted air CAPS hungry You something eat We much food told I grabbed plate placed roll strawberries sausage I anxious really hungry steered towards worn table wooden benches friends already enjoying dinner beers She introduced I perched stiffly edge seat talked excitedly questioning life As loosened began joke sometimes sometimes Some teased accent It nt mean teasing nt trying malicious light funny So I laughed In moment I seemed fit better people I sometimes understood I less foreigner new friend Relaxing I allowed laugh mistakes really enjoy someplace entirely new", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Physical strength is the vital role of success in sport while other people think that mentally strong is much more important in the competitive sports. In my opinion, both are correct and to be able to strong people would do more exercises in their long life.\nOn the one hand, people are more willing to suceess in the race of their games and sometimes failed. For the reasons of that they never thought that which would be the answer is that physically strength would give them to succeed in their pace of games and other sports they choice. For example, the more they do exercises before entering the match, the body will strong enough till the end of the contest. Then the succeed will come next of grasp.\nOn the other hand, the mental strength would be the main strength and sources of succeed which is the beginning point of the contest. Not even enough the exercises of mind, people would not get the immense advances of win. It means that people's minds might to be whatever they lose in the math, they can get it and stand up right their pace. As long as they get this point of action into their mind, I believed that they are eagle to strong enough to be ready to their games and other atheletics. Moreover, when they practice before entering the space of match, the embedded mind would be the main sources of mental strength too. It gives them to the progress of steps and the successful way until the end of the sports.\nTo wrap up, people should do more exercies and it will give them mentally and physically strong that I think. By doing both, the successful winner will become next and they will get a success in their tournament and will become a good competitior in the near future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I wouldnt go up there to see it or to go on its planet i would send a drone or omething and study the fed the drone give me.THE only reason ill go up there if they give me a strong enough suit to visit and suplys to visit it. in the story they say itss temperature is hot around 170 degrees fahrenheit its not a easy condition to liv in. They say the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than we experience these conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on earth venusian geology and weather prsent additional impediments like erupting volcanoes and powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.\n\na thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus. even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus atmosphere. on the planets surface tempeatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit.I think that is a person try to visit venus without the nessary tools they will die from the atmosphere weather and clouds. more importantly researchers cannot take samples of rock gas or anything else from distance. solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed earth levls not easy conditions but survivable for humans.Nasa possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of venus would allow scientists to float above fray.The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar feaures such as valleys montains and craters.\n\nIt would be a bad idea to visit the planet.I say that because of all the tuff weather of how hot it is and the lightning. They should just leave that planet alone until they have\n\nall the tools to visit the planet. I think if they visit the planet now they would more likely die from the heat and atmospher around the panet and the clouds around it. They would probably last a couple of hours before they die they should just stick with the research they have now and leave the planet alone.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued that youngsters ought to do free social work in their leisure time which might benefit both teenagers and community. I am in complete favor of the above statement and I will give my stance with relative examples in the upcoming paragraphs.\r\n\r\nTo commence with the first and foremost point to support my opinion is that it helps to built social relationships with strong base. In other words, children are encouraged by their parents and oldest to do social work for free which further help in the development of moral values in the individual and teaches them the lessons like caring and sharing for others. As an illustration, during recent pandemic, many different age groups came forward to help each other to cope with this problem, but the main centre of attraction were children who stole everyone's heart by serving to the communities with their small hands. Thus, help done by teenagers has positive effect on community as well as on children themselves which promote healthy social bonding.\r\n\r\nMoreover, the other reason is that it helps in the community development. To put it in another way, creative mind of young generation put many interesting ideas into actions which ultimately benefit the overall development of the society by various means. For instance, competitions could be held to paint the old walls of building or other vacant places which in turn, give a chance to teenagers to show the creativity and on the other hand it would enhance the beauty of the community. As a result, unpaid help by teenagers serve community to maintain its images. Furthermore, it enhances children to develop humanity in them by serving the needy people of community and make them responsible citizens of society in future.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that encouraging teenagers for doing unpaid work will strengthen the social liabilities and additionally promote humanity among teenagers and helps in the beautification of the community.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The advantages of limiting car usage is less accidents,different types of transportation(lots of traffic),less chemicals in the atmosphere,less fines,tickets,etc. You'll have to worry about,There are lots of different types of transportation that can keep you from driving.\n\nFirst of all,if there was less car usage there would be less car accidents going on in the world. Over 1000 people die from car accidents. Drunk driving,speeding,texting and driving,etc. That is the number one reason why limiting car usage is important. Lifes wouldn't be endanger of loosing their lifes and putting other peoples life endanger.\n\nSecond of all,\"CHEMICALS!\" There are alot of chemicals from different types of cars flowing throught the air. Making people sick ,killing things,causing people to go to the hospital,diiferent types of types of things go on when chemicals are polluted into the air. Coming from trucks,cars,trucks,different types of vehicles produces types of chemicals out of their cars.\n\nNext,\"FINES,TICKETS,ETC.!\" Everybody hates getting tickets and fines,having to go to court. They have to go to court by certain days pay the tickets off by this day nobody likes that at all. You wouldn't have to pay for parking.\n\nTo the conclusion,there are lots of different types of transportation. Buses,taxi's,plane's,train's. There are lots of different things you can get on when you need to go go somewhere. Some are free,and some are not you have to pay to get where you wanna go. Depending on where your going and at what time. So you wouldn't have to drive anywhere.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" doesn't support the idea of studying Venus well as it lacks with detail, and they don't go in depth with the pros of exploring this inhabitated plant and how it would benifit us in doing so.\n\nIn the article we are introduced to Venus and given a glimpse of our background history with them. The author also includes infromation of the planet's atmosphere and how it's a challenging factor for us when attempting to reach its suface, the huge difference that seperates us from them. When given information of past travels, we are informed that \"Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades,\" (TCEV). With this alone there is already doubt engendered in the reader's mind because of how long it has been since we last attempted to reach such grounds and how even then spacecrafts weren't durable when they did make it. \"Each previous mission was unmanned\" due to the circumstances they were met with yet when further reading is made we are told that NASA wants to send humans to Venus. This only adds to the concerns of the reader in manifesting alien-like areas.\n\nThen we are explained of possible ways NASA is already planning to approach Venus and how they are already working, or at least contemplaiting, ways to last longer in Earth's 'Twin Sister'. We are given a jot down of how things are being tested and what it is they are trying to overcome in order to create something durable that will hold longer than a few hours. The only reason we are given for this is that \"Astronomers are facinated by Venus because it may well once been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system,\" (TCEV). The author doesn't even clarify how this is impactful to our society today. What is there to gain from a planet that \"may well once been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system?\" In that sentence alone there is still some uneasiness since it's not sure or confirmed that Venus was once like Earth.\n\nTherefore, this is why the author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" doesn't support the idea of studying Venus very clearly. The lack of pros and benifits to our planet adding to the pot of cons and uncertainty that was instead made from reading this article. Surely they did a splendid job in guiding us through possible ways that'll help in exploring the harsh environments and listing final encounters we have had before, but no information was straightforward when it came as to why we should invest time in going to Venus when such dangerous challenges are in front of us.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face was just a natural landform made by butte or mesa which were landforms common around around the American West. I know this because it says in the article \" As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel, \"So if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were.\n\nEven though many scientists thought the Face was a alien artifact, photographing Cydonia became a priority for NASA when Mars Global Surveyor arrived at the Red Planet. People may have thought the Face was bona fide evidence of life on Mars evidence the NASA would rather hide.\n\nThe face was just a huge rock formation which looked as to be a human head. The head was formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose and mouth. Scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa common enough around Cydonia.\n\nAn those are the many reasons why I think it was not created by aliens but created by natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worth pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author describes the harsh reality of the planet Venus by explaining the enviorment and atmosphere of the planet. However, he then uses facts, past experiments, examples and the possible solutions, to the issues presented, to explain why exploring Venus is beneficial.\n\nIn the beginning of this writing, the author discusses the relations between Earth and Venus by stating, \"Often reffered to as Earth's \"twin,\" Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too.\" The author then mentions important issues of Venus' harmful enviorment: 97% is carbon dioxide, the clouds are highly corrosive sulfuric acid, it can reach up to 800 degrees, the pressure is 90 times greater than Earths, erupting volcanoes, poweverful earthquakes and frequent lightning strikes.\n\nEven though these issues are very important, the author explains why scientists are very interested in Venus by stating , \"Astonomers are facinated by Venus because it may well once been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered laregly with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" The author then discusses how Venus has mountains, valleys and craters just like Earth. By giving examples how it was so similar to Earth, and certain features that are still similar, it shows why scientist are interested. By the author using facts and examples from the past, the author backs up their claim of why exploring Venus is a benifit.\n\nNear the end of the authors writing, they discuss how scientist are trying to work with the major issues of exploring Venus. The writing says, \"NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientist float above the fray.\" Even though the author says the tempature would be 170 degrees, the air pressure would be similar to sea levels on Earth which is survivable for humans. By the author showing that it is possible for human survival, they show another benfit of exploring.\n\nBy the author claiming that studying Venus is a worth pursuit despite the dangers it presents, they sucessfully explain why they feel this way. The author uses facts, past experiments, examples and possible solutions for the presented issues on Venus to show why exporloring it, would indeed, be beneficial.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As a result of the technological advancements in recent years, people all over the world are exposed to the global market and many multi-national brands are formed who are expanding the global coverage of their products. So, the world is converging almost into a single entity at a steady pace due to these. In my opinion, there are both advantages and disadvantages to some extent.\r\n\r\nNowadays, people can buy any product without getting restricted to the country they living-in. For example, online stores to buy various household products, clothes, and even vehicles are emerging. And also enormous multi-national brands are establishing their presence in every part of the world such as Coca-cola, Nike, Addidas and Puma. Due to this, anyone could experience high-quality products from anywhere in the world which was not possible previously. In addition to that, every country will be positioned in an equivalent place that might stop educated peweople from migrating from their motherland for searching for better opportunities.\r\n\r\nHowever, this might be detrimental for some local product industries who now have to compete with global leaders of their segment. To illustrate, local footwear companies have to face Nike, beverage companies might need to challenge the marketing power of Coca-cola which might not be a fair battle. Consequently, many local manufacturing companies might find it difficult and the economy of the country will have a negative impact in future. Moreover, people will see much variety in the products as only a few options might be left due to this.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, several positives and some negatives are there with this trend. I believe, people getting equivalent opportunities should not be avoided. It is better to allow some companies to enter the local market while supporting the local industries by including some tax schemes for international products.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obstacals problems never really solved caused problems wind", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everyone preference works literature books magazines movies music Different types works literature significant person If everyone right completely remove one piece work displeases works would remain Therefore I believe materials books music movies magazines removed public libraries public places Everyone unique ideas necesities preferences A years ago I classmate different ideas myriad people religious persecution He hated idea mixing people different religions one place He wrote paper containing ideas world function terms religion He tried publish succeed work considered offensive Even though I disagree ideas I think work rejected There could people world agree thoughts would interested read There could even ideas paper could ve helped countries solve various problems I believe unfair paper rejected People different necesities based accomplish For example I reading book last girl project racism She went library search book apartheid could nt find anything She asked librarian librarian told books considered offensive local library would search elsewhere I believe unjust girl anywhere else go get information project She ve right access information needed project prevent failing Another reason books removed simply everyone unique preferences In world books certain people would enjoy others Literature abled used purpose entertainment convenience If I go library I would find many selections correspond ideal novel magazine Every person right If people start removing materials offensive nothing shelves would remain one person would right access materials desire In world diversity exists everywhere People always want need desire different things Works literature one If people begin eliminate offensive materials based everyone s frustration displeasures books remain public shelves Therefore materials books music movies magazines never removed public places These things necessities world", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System would be a good thing for students to use in the classroom. Outside of the classroom as well. Not only is it good for class work, but it is good for video games or video surgery.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System could recognize if a student is getting confused and alter the course. So many students using computers for school aren't getting the full potential out of their computers. They stay confused and move on hoping they don't fall behind evryone else. Dr. Huang says, \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communicaton. So computars need to understand that, too.\"\n\nOnce again I say that the Facial Action Coding System would be a good thing to use in the classroom. Not only would it help students, but the same technology could be used for video games to make faces more expressive. Or to use with video surgey. The possibilities are endless with all the new technology coming out.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think left alone way put way reason They might know reason thats think person might get mad mess cause dont like way offensive people Other reasons people gon na home watch online tv gon na make difference It goiing make one difference", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After reading this controversial essay on Electoral College and how it affects other and our \"American People\" I feel personally a bit ashamed at our own country that we allow all this nonsense to have happened. In my opinion I would want too ban the choice of Electoral College, because first off we're looking way too deep into our system of voting, is it really necessary too compare our states number of votes with another's just to possibly get noticed? Why dont we take things into our own hands and not count on voting for some stranger to do the work for us.\n\nIn one of they many paragraphs I had read, it simply stated \"The Electoral College is widely regarded as an anachronism, a non-democratic method of selecting a president that out to be (overruled)\" that doesnt sound like everyone here in America is fully williing too agree to all of this, and I wouldn't blame them. I don't understand why we cant just vote directly for the president ourselves! I mean after all, he is going too be our leader. I just would never put that type of a big decision in somebody else's hands who I don't even know at all, and especially if I know its not completely certain that whomever I had put my vote in for is at a 50/50 chance of winnning as it is.\n\nIf there is already an apparent list of five reasons all about retaining the Electoral College because of its democratic pedigree, just is another reason as too why I'm against this kind of voting system. With having the first reason listed as being \"Certainty of Outcome\" should really make the person reading that question themselves on if they're making a right decision or not. You would have too go through a lot of trouble and paperwork as it is whenever voting for someone, At least I would like too know that I'm not basically giving my one vote away for technically someone else to do it for me.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My opinion on driverless cars is that it is a good thing for everyone. If we had a public- transport taxi system, we wouldn't have to use as much fuel if it goes the way Sergey Brin envisions this. In 2009 Google had them independent under specific conditions. These cares have been driven up to half a million miles without a crash. These cars would change everyones daily function in a positive way.\n\nGoogle has also modified Toyota Prius to use position- estimating sensors, rotating sensors on the roof, video cameras mounted near rearview mirrors,there is alot of technology in this car but there is something way more important in this car. It is a spinning sensor on the roof, Dubbed LIDAR, it uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the cars surroundings and you could use that if the car was driverless. You could do this to see where to have the car go if it is auto.\n\nIn 2013, BMW announced the development of Traffic Jam Assistant. The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 Mph, but special sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel. These can steer acurate and break themselves, this is a machanic that driverless cares will have to have. Tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving- Driverless 90 percent of the time. Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan have plans to have cars to drive themselves by 2020.\n\nDriverless cars will help tramendasley with everyday people that need to go somewhere but cant drive, teens without a license, elderly people who cant drive anymore many people. When this gets here I hope i can test this out for myself because it would be a positive side to everything driving. By 2020 many car brands will have this in there hands and everyone elses hands.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think the Facial Action Coding System to identify human emotions is not a good idea because some people might be keeping things from other people that might make them sad, mad, or disgusted about someone and then there will be a problem with those people. But also this could be a good thing because it could help with what people are going though in there life. And this could help cuicide problems for alot of places.\n\nThis might be a bad thing because it could cause conversy with people and might split people apart from there family, friends, or co-workers. For an example if two people are in a relationship and if one person is disgusted, mad, or sad and the other might ask what they are disgust, mad or sad at the other personor something. And because they did Mona Lisa it doesn't give an good example and it only shows the positive side and if did this on a high school student like they want to it might show more of a negitive responsed.\n\nBut in other terms this could be a good thing for some people because it could help people with what they are going though in there life. This could also possible lower the number's of cuicide percent for some places and mostly for people. It could lower places cuicide rates by if they mad, disgusted or sad people could ask what they are though and maby get that thing of there cheat could be a good thing for them. \"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and2 percent angry\" this shows that it does indeed work and if were going to do it a different person or painting you will get different percent's that will better understand what some people might be going though in life.\n\nI truely think this could be made for good reasons if used right and not for only student but people all around the world s we could see what is going on someother places. But if it used to much it could start some bad things with student, familys, and co-workes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do think books movies music etc moved found offensive I ca nt choose understandable Therefore I well dicuss feel essay I experience topic Well lets get started I could go ways But first I well discuss way I disagree removing offensive things Material instersting many people mght instersting I mean everyone able listen read things loved enjoy And I could really careless people loved read listen Someday might come enjoy things would nt every think would It s simply I mean I love romance scary books someone else might dislike Noone tell anyone like dislike I agree away When people make big deal somethings kind gets nerves like mom telling make sure room clean time I agree something maybe offensive someone nt want children One time I library looking book really seemed good read But lady told I nt read much But right went main desk started complaining I like Are serious I nt want rude I told calmly CAPS worried I reading replied book reviling I showed book called CAPS We ended agruement I still checked book I knew I would love I They put things aside think well offensive let people ask things So people wo nt make big deal Just keep peace give everyone want Well I m done Hope understand sides agruement Just remember agree disagreeOr like ca nt choice understands sides It s decision noone make change love enjoy read listen But I ca nt pick aside either way understandable", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many people who believe that taking interviews is not the finest way to assess the appropriate candidate for any job. There are other ways that determine the quality of a candidate for that role. This essay will discuss why interviews are significant for many professional jobs.\r\n\r\nFirstly, In every country the first process of ,hiring is taking an interview of professionals for job positions in every organisation such as private or industrial. In my private ,firms interviewers check the candidate's communication and knowledge through interviews so they can hire that person on basis of his skills. Moreover, this is the best medium to know about the person's ability for a position that an organisation gives him for his knowledge. Therefore, the suitability of a candidate depends on their knowledge or communication skills.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, most labour jobs do not require an interview because these jobs are based on daily wages so it's difficult to interview them on a dailly basis. There is no doubt that interview is one of the significant processes to hire a great Scientist , Programmer or Doctor but in a labour ,market it's not necessary to interview them.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, the vast majority of professional jobs required a complete process to hire a multi talent skilled person , so there is a much need for interviews for these positions without that no one can get skills knowledge about these candidates.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face found on May 24, 2001 is formed by a natural landform. At the begninng of the article 'Unmasking the Face on Mars\" it states, New high-resolution images and 3D altimertry from NASA's Mars Global Survery spacecarrt reveal the Face on Mars for what it really is: A mesa. This sentece is telling the reader the truth right then and there. The face infact is formed by a natural landform, a mesa which are landforms common around the American West. In paragraph 2 it tells us, the readers, that scientists figured the face was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia but only had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptain Pharaoh. In paragraph 8 it gives a reasonn on why maybe the alien markings showed up on the face. The camera that took the photograph of the face had to peer through a wispy cloud to see the face. Perhaps the alien figures had been caused by the cloudy surface. In paragraph 6 Jim Garvin, chief scientist for NASA's Mars Exploration Program said, \" We felt this was important to taxpayers. We photographed the Face as soon as we could get a good shot at it.\" Jim was still trying to get the truth to the people after 18 years long of the Viking mission ended. Althoug targeting Cydonia was not easy, on April 5, 1998 Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team from Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia flew and took a picture ten times sharper than the orginal Viking photos. Soon the image showed up on a JPL wed site, revealing what the truth was a natural landform that caused the face to appear on Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea of driverless cars is a good one. If the cars are correctly managed and the time is put into them to perfect the skills needed to drive safely, they could be a major advantage to maybe the next generation.\n\nThe driverless automobiles would need to be worked to perfection so that no accidents are even possible. The text states \"Google's modified Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor.\" This information indicates that the time has already been put into the driverless cars to make them safe and able to drive on their own, and it is only 2016. These cars aren't even predicted to be usable in everyday life until 2020.\n\nIf the cars are already becoming greatly useful and safe, who knows where they could be in 4 or maybe 3 years. These cars also have \"Antilock brakes and driver assistance,\" plus \"'Traffic Jam Assistant.'\" This shows that the cars are being worked to perfection and one of the major problems that was pointed out, traffic jams and construction sites, is already being solved.\n\nThere is no large reason to be against driverless cars, because they have everything we need. It will give us more time in the day to get things done and can take us to our destinations quicker. The GPS system will be an advantage because sometimes the GPS can be tricky to navigate, and finding some roads can be difficult to do. With the smartcar GPS, we wouldn't have to worry as much about those issues.\n\nThe driverless cars pose a great idea and can be very useful to drivers in the future. They have many things we need and can have many advantages such as avoiding accidents and taking us to where we need to go. The little work that these cars need could be done way before 2020, hence the fact we already have so much work on them done by 2016. Therefore, the driverless cars should continue to be developed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit affect cyclist greatly In cyclists opinion things began pretty well He positive attitude states with strong legs smile face As man moves comes fort sorts To sight troubling Though troubling still confidence could continue Next noticed changes terrain He explained Flat road replaced short rolling hills This means would peddle harder greater force order get hills The weather cyclist running water The possibility heatstroke came mind There one sight building car structure kind told man His mind entered state sad hopeless thoughts persevered cycled At point thirsty felt death near He said I going die birds would pick clean As kept going spotted old guy sight He regained hope moved ahead The features story affected cyclist physically mentally Physically tired worn A like horrible state mentally becoming negative pessamistic travel The setting s features interfered cyclist s physical mental state", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There could be many explanations for this mystircal face, although, the face could have just been created by the planet when formed, or it could have been made by something unexplainable. How do you think the face was formed?\n\nThe face is more than likely just another natural land form, just like here on earth, we have natural land forms that look like living animals or plants. The likely hood of the face being unatural is very slim. Being that the face had not changed for 25 years, it could mean that this is just a land form that has existed since the planets beginning.\n\nThe face is similar to a natural land form here on Earth, in the Snake River Plane of Idaho. The face shows that it is possible for it to be anything, it could be alien made, but it is highly unlikely. There has not really been any true evidence that aliens exist.\n\nSkeptics may believe that the face could be more proof that aliens exist in outer space. Which could very well be, but there is still no strong evidence that it is true, we could be the only living planet in space.\n\nConcluding the face is extremely likely to be just a natural formation that the planet had when it was developing. There is also no completely proof that it is alien proof, and making a face on a planet would not be the best way to comunicate with humans.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As student public school libraries I many students access censored extent With library censored I feel public library Why censorship conflict need discussion every book found shelf part history every author good enough get published able book shelf While school libraries already censored age group I feel public libraries censored plain reason gaurdian also library control find age appropriate If disliking book problem put back Find something common towards interest Some things considered inappropriate many things time person limits While someone dislike teen magazine effects youth another find inspiring If every person found way rate things according taste would nothing left shelves Katherine Paterson expressed quote When enter public library divided sections according interest age author ect When enter school library done according fiction nonfiction author Censorship amoung public libraries needed Adults students childeren go public library So case would censor library goes ages I feel yes school library contain content school library But public library public Hints name In conclusion even censorship done public libraries libraries would used less already Some content public libraries ca nt found school libraries also adults would nt able find content needed interests jobs even schooling So fact things seem innappropriate certain age groups help someone completely different age group", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Robots, one of the modern technologies that has been the topic of discussion by many people lately. One of the topics for the discussion is the impact robots will have on society. The following essay will discuss the pros and cons as well as my point of view.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, robots have several benefits. As an example, robots can help human work and could reduce the productions expense. As a result, it can increase the job effectiveness and help massive productions.\r\n\r\nMany others, however, are opposed and believed that robots are dangerous and have negative effects on society. For example, if the amount of company who used robots as substitute to human work are massive, it can increase the number of unemployed people. As a result, it can increase the chance of another casualties, such as criminality because of the large number of unemployed people.\r\n\r\nNot only that, before using robot as an option to help someone work, they should take a consideration whether their work suitable for using robots or not, because not all work is suitable using robots. As an example, for several arts industry that need detailed work.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while the benefits of robots, particularly the effectiveness and saves production expenses, robots can be a tool to help people do their work. However, there are some negative impacts too, such as the increased number of criminality cases and not too detailed work. Nevertheless, in my opinion, as long as we use it wisely, we could prevent and lessen the negative impact of using robots.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While cars are not yet completely driverless, the current measures ensuring the entertainment, safety, and almost constant leisure of the passenger provide a bright outlook for the future. Driverless cars are coming. Passengers barely have to intervene at the moment, and with the passage of time, the technology needed to make completely driverless cars will come. With cars already capable of 90% autonomy, it is not difficult to imagine completely autonomous cars, and considering the safety of said cars, it is unlikely that the law will maintain non-intervention on the matter.\n\nMany wonder why anyone would want to drive a driverless car that still requires a driver, but the technology ensures that cars are neigh on completely driverless and also allow the passenger more entertainment while she/he is not driving. In-car entertainment in the form of Pandora is already installed in cars, as well as in-car texting. However, these displays turn off instantly when the driver needs to take over. This is not as easily possible with drivers trying to text with cell phones. The in-car system is thus both a safety measure and an entertainment provider.\n\nAdmittedly, cars are not yet completely driverless, but they are nearly so and it is not far fetched to believe that cars will become completely driverless in the future. The 2013 BMW \"Traffic Jam Assistant\" can handle speeds up to 25 mph, while also ensuring the driver keeps hold of the wheel and is able and ready to takeover should the situation require it. The cars can steer, accelerate and brake themselves, but they notify the driver when the road requires their skills. This begot the necessity of quickly gaining the driver's attention for just this problem. Cameras can watch to ensure drivers focus on the road and other technology also serves to ensure the driver's attention is on the road and can easily be caught.\n\nHowever, the lack of traffic laws concerning driverless cars currently decreases the spread of use of the driverless car. Currently, traffic laws operate under the belief that human drivers are safer than robotic ones, but the safety measures in cars prove that said cars warrant laws to be made about them. They are not as unsafe as human drivers, and in fact can be safer because they make texting and driving more impossible. There is no longer reason for the law to call driverless cars unsafe, and it is imperative that they make laws concerning them.\n\nAutomakers continue to tweak current driverless cars under the correct assumption currently face are surmountable. It is already 2016 and Tesla cars can drive on autopilot 90% of the time. Thanks to the fact that driverless cars can already drive on autopilot 90% of the time, the only hindrance to the growth of use of driverless cars is the lack of laws concerning said cars. However, because the cars can be mostly autonomous and are quite safe, it is likely that laws will soon be made to cover driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Over the past few years, the standard of living of people has improved significantly. These days, as individuals prefer to use their private vehicles, it often leads to heavy traffic on roads. This is a common issue in most cities all over the world. This essay will elucidate the reasons for this problem and the possible solutions in the forthcoming paragraphs. \r\n\r\nWell, one of the reasons for this trend is to park anywhere on the roads. Since the rules and regulations in most cities are people-friendly, citizens take undue advantage of this and feel free to halt their vehicles as per their choices. This usually leads to traffic on roads because it prevents other cars to move smoothly. Moreover, because the conditions of public transportation are not up to the mark, people who can afford to use their cars for travelling purposes do not compromise. For instance, in remote areas where local public commute facilities have not improved, most localities prefer to traveller by two or four-wheelers. As a result, the high volume of personal vehicles leads to jams.\r\n\r\nHaving said that, in order to avoid traffic problems, the law-making bodies must impose strict rules so that people avoid parking wherever they want. This will ensure that there are no roadblocks and vehicles can move around freely. Further, if the conditions of local transportation are improved, people would be willing to travel by them. For example, when the Mumbai metro started, many office-goers began travelling by it rather than using their own cars. This helped the town to reduce the number of personal vehicles on roads and resolved the issue of traffic jams.\r\n\r\nTo summarise, even though the number of vehicle owners is increasing day by day, they can be encouraged to park only at the relevant spots and to use public modes of transportation as much as possible so that jams can be avoided.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this modern society, after finishing high school, teenagers often wonder whether they ought to continue their education or get a job. While many people believe that keeping with further education is the best way to succeed in life, others claim that working right after leaving school is the best option.\n\n On the one hand, starting working straight after graduation may be beneficial for several reasons. First and foremost, by working, young people are able to start earning money as soon as possible. As a result, they will be mature enough, and be able to live independently with their own income. Secondly, \n\na person who decides to look for a job rather than pursuing higher education may have a chance to obtain more real experience and practical skills. This will lead them to progress more quickly in their chosen profession.\n\n On the other hand, some people argue that it is more beneficial for young people to continue their studies after high school. Firstly, a college education prepares students to meet the academic qualifications, which most employers require nowadays. Consequently, university graduates may have an opportunity to apply for their favourite jobs with higher salaries than those without qualifications. Secondly, in today modern world, the job market is increasingly competitive than ever, having an academic degree may be advantageous for young people in many ways since hundreds of people chase one position in an organization. For example, in many countries, workers who graduated from university with a prestigious degree will definitely get a high paying job with a quality environment.\n\n In conclusion, I will hold a strong conviction that both working right after leaving school and pursuing higher-level studies each has its own unique merits.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It has been pointed out that a huge number of work that people did in the past has been taken over by technology. In my opinion, this trend leads to two benefits for manufacturers and factories, however, it is also devastatingly detrimental for individuals who did those jobs before machines. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, when machinery is used to produce items, it not only brings more profits to manufacturers but also increases the quality of products. Although companies have to invest a significant amount of money to purchase and update their facilities, as long as machines are set up and can replace labour completely, factories do not need to pay most of the labour fees in the long run, which is the biggest part of the expense. As precision instruments are controlled by intelligent computer systems, fewer mistakes can be made, thus the quality of goods is guaranteed. For instance, most investors whose companies in China have utilized machines to produce their goods say that apart from enhancing the products’ quality, machines also help them to save a massive percentage of money which is the workers’ salary. Be careful of overusing cohesive devices – every sentence should not begin with a cohesive device.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the significant drawback is that those who worked in industries were made redundant by such technology, which causes their lives to become unstable and uneasy. In order to earn their livelihood, those unemployed people have to spend a period of time finding other jobs or receiving further training, thus resulting in their lives becoming difficult. For instance, some of the locals in China who were hired by factories present that as their tasks have been replaced by machinery thoroughly, it is extremely tough for them to find a lucrative job with their current abilities. So, they have to change their occupations, and even need to receive further education, thus creating excessive hardships in their lives. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the development of machinery is beneficial for manufacturers, but the downside for former workers should be considered.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"In the United States, the Environmental Protection Agency is promoting \"car reduced\" communities, and legislators are starting to act, if cautiously\". Car redution helps the environment more than what people think it would. \"President Obama's ambitious goals to curb the United States' greenhouse gas emissions, unveiled last week, will get a fortuitos assist from an incipient shift in America behavior:recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by\". Not having a car is better for you and the environment because not only would you be excercising by walking but there will be less pollution in the economy. Cars waste to much gas and have a lot of unnecessary waste in them that could end up to be one day global warming and kill of all the good air we breath in now. People should look in to not having a car and start walking, biking, skating and do more than what they use to do when they had a car.\n\nParis, Germany, United States, New York, Colombia and many other places are starting be more car free because they heard what cars can do to the environment. According the text \" in Colombia has a program that they started that spreads to other countries, millions of Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day the other day, leaving the streets of the capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams\". The more and more people hear about this program the more people will get into the habbit of not havng a car or not using a car to go everywhere they have to go to. \"If the patterns persists and many sociologists believe it will- it will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment, since transportation is the second largest source pf America's emissions, just behinfd power plants\".\n\nMost people who are involved in the program see a huge difference in their community like the streets are cleaner, there are no traffic jams, the streets are safer, and there's less pollution in the air. As we all know that cars are sometimes important to us to get to where we need to get but is it really that important to us to have a car not really because if we would stop being lazy and just get up from our couches and walk, bike, or skate to where we needed to go we'll see that having a car is not as important as we used to think. In Colombia two other citizens joined the event and found that \"these people are generating a revolutionary change, and this is crossing broders\". So really one program can change the whole world if people just joined and saw for them selves what a huge impact it can be on others.\n\nMore parks and sports centers have bloomed throughout the city and there are more smooth sidewalks and restrictions have dramatically cut traffic. \"Different things are converging which suggest that we are witnessing a long-term cultural shift\". New York also started there own program which is this biking-sharing program and it's skyrocketed bridge and the tunnel tools reflect those new priorities, and of course a proiferation of car-sharing program across the nation. In some cities you have to take a car like in San Francisco because everything is so far away and you can not walk to where you need to go it will take forever to get there walking which is understandable. But in other cities or places were everything is close to you then there's no point of taking a car instead of walking to the place you need to go to. Cars waste a lot of gas which means that gas prices go up way to much because of the usahe of cars instead of biking, skating, or walking. You get more done when your walking, biking, or skating because you are less worried about running out of gas or having to push the car to the nearest gas station.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The technogy that there using it looks wonderful explain every single details how the techonology works and how the testing are. It explain that they make a machine that can read face and pictures just like the Mona Lisa face, they describe that\n\nMona lisa have 83 percent happy , 9 percent disgusting, 6 percent fearful and 2 percent angry. They explain this just because of a software computer read Mona Lisa face.\n\nThe coumputers are very smart at this time but a computer that reads face is a little bit complicated because they can do almost everything that a human wants but reading face is not so hard. Using technology to read emotions expressions of students in classroom is not so good because students can read faces too. A lot of people can read faces even if your mad or not people can see emotional in other faces .\n\nThe process of the software computer begin when the computer constructus a 3-D computer model of the face. it explain that thhe computer jus move muscle and the way faces move like in paragraph 3 describe \" all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles. Movement of one or more muscles is called an action unit \". this mean that they read the muscle in the face to explain what motion humans do.\n\nReading faces is not so hard you can see people if they are happy,angry or sad is not so hard if see someone laughing you can tell that the person is happy or something make happy that person, like in the artticle say \" In fact, we humas perform this same impressive \" calculation \" every day . For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face.\" this mean that most people can show feelings on their face. Of course some people have trouble to describe faces because some people doesn't show feelings and other do.\n\nHow people feel it depends on them. most people are happy and others sad but every single people can be happy it depends on them not in other persons. The people that are always happy are the ones who thinks positive the ones that love their self a machine can read their faces but the machine doesn't know that humans can change their mind in less than an minute we can be happy and then we can be sad for a sad news but for the computer it will take time to know when human change emotions because it has to read I again the whole face , compare to us the human can see fast when other person get sad. like a quote it say \"The Mona Lisa desmonstrate ir really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computer can do\". this mean that the computer is smart it can read faces .\n\nThe technology is good for in some reason but reading faces too easy for human and humans doens't need a computer to tell hom the other person is feeling becuase humans can read faces too. their is no reason that human need a computer to tell them when ever a person is sad or happy. Humans can just look at their faces just to see of they are happy or sad.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local Newspaper I think computers good effect people My first reason people college far away home like sister family talks computer Also many people email tells sales grocery stores clothing stors saves people money using cupons Statistics state grownups use computer night feel awake My second reason someone going vacation moving go internet find going safe nice school learn place see looks like also find colleges see nice see small school alot kids go school etc My third final reason people use computer hand eye coordination gets better typing moving fingers geting feeling use geting faster typing Also siting moving fingers using brain Scholastic kids states kids use computer use keyboark brings points conclusion I dont think computer bad effect done reading thise I hope agree", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea of driveless cars seems to be very unsafe. Though the idea would be an industrial breakthrough for 2020, there are still lots of worries to be had.\n\nOne reason that driveless cars should not be supported is because they are not proven to be 100% safe. Every machine has a glitch, and a glitch from a driveless car could cause an accident or an injury. Who's to say for sure that the computer will know when to stop just at the right moment. For example, when driving down a busy street there are lots of other drivers. Some may not be as skilled as others. At anytime, there could be a distracted or intoxicated driver who swerves infront of you. The human instinct would tell us to turn into the other lane. Unfortunately the computer's mind might just stopthe entire car causing a chain accident of crashing cars.\n\nOther than safety, another issue with the invention may be the usage of gas and battery life. With so many features added to the vehicle, there would probably be a bigger chance of the car battery burning out. Yes, turning off the car does refresh the battery life, but the battery could possibly die during someone's ride. The same scenerio goes with gas. A self driving car will not pull over to the nearest gas station once it's on E. Also, a distracted rider, who could be asleep the entire time, would most likely not notice the amount of gas left. If the car runs out of gas or battery life, the car will stop leaving someone straned. The only way to avoid this situation would be to alert the rider itself, probably with a tone. Though it may help, there's still no garuntee that all people will be able to hear it.\n\nBesides gas battery life and safety, bad roads may also be a problem. Every person who's ever driven a car has atleast seen a pot hole, or a large hole in the street. Sometimes they can be really big and hard to avoid which just causes most drivers to go around them. Once again, a computer cannot think like an actual driver. The consequence of this would be the driveless car running straight into the hole. The hole's aren't usually deep enough to cause an injury, but they could but lots of wear on someone's tires. The tire could burst or in extreme cases become jammed, which could also leave someone stranded. The computer of a driveless car may not have enough artificial intelligence to avoid these hazards.\n\nIn conclusion, with a driveless car there are lots of worries to be had. People who choose to risk their lives in this hazardous vehicle should think twice. The safest thing in someone's life is their own self mind. Saftey cannot rely on technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although driverless cars have both positive and negative aspects my postion on rather they should or should'nt become a reality is that driverless cars should'nt become a reality. The reason that even as they are develping driverless cars now they can not be tuely driverless. Also the manufactors of the car car didn't nescerly want smart cars they wanted smarter roads. Another reason is that they have only been able to engernieer parts of a driverless car that still need human assistance. Lastly there are still major concerns for the passagers of the driverless cars.\n\nEven though driverless car parts have been put in to newer car models the cars are still mainly controled by drivers. for example in 2013 BMW announced their \"traffic jam assistant\" , but the car only could stop the car if it was 25mph or lower meaning the driver would have to try to stop on their on. another example is that in the 1980's automakers sed speed sensors at the wheels in creation of the antilock brakes, but it tok them ten years to perfect them. whose to say that if the release the self driving car to eraly it won't cause many acidents.\n\nIn the 1950's Gerneral motors created a concept car that could run on a special track leading to to thought of smart roads. The trought of smart car was an accident because they knew smart roads was'nt possible. the automaker didnt think cars could get much smarter and didn't know how much smart they need to be. the idea was later pick up in 2009 because the knew that it was no way it could happen before the 2000's.\n\nthey have a big pogress on the devolpment of the driverless car but is thought to be known that they could never be tuely driverless. the driverles car made in 2009 is said to be driverless but is not because is is alway a drriver in the car that has to pull into an out od driveways and parking lots. Also the driver is to to always remain alert because they may have to take over incase of technological falier or emergency. so that is let people know that it can fail at any time.\n\nThere is also the big safey corncern and legal side of the driverless car. the law beleive that the saest car is one driven and controlled by a human. Most states won't even allow the testing of theses cars. Another issue is who", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My arguement is against driveless cars. I dont feel safe with the car operating everything and with all of the hiccups that we already have with non driveless cars I dont think it'd be a good idea.\n\nI like to drive. I dont want a driverless vehicle. I still want to be in control of the car. I dont just want to get in the vehicle and tell it where to go. I understand in some of the ways that we could benefit from it but I feel as if we should have a choice. We shouldnt just be told that everything is going to driverless technology. The manufactureres should make it possible for the driver to drive the vehicle if they want to and have the option to select driverless or autopilot if they so choose to.\n\nIf somebody gets in a crash with a driverless car who's fault would it be; the driver or the manufacturer? If an individual owns a driverless car would they still get parking tickets or car wrecks? Would there be any legal violations that the owner would be fined for or would it be penalized to the company. Im not sure on where I stand about this perticular subject. If the owner is using the driverless technology and something happens I dont believe that the owner should be penalized for it. I think that the company that manufactured it and assessed it should be penalized and cover all the costs because it was their technology that failed the customer. I dont think it'd be right if the customer is already spending a bunch of money on their product and if it malfuctions and something goes wrong and the company doesnt have any responsibility.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea of driverless cars is a horrible idea, that basically someone pitching the idea that we would need someone to walk for us. I mean drving a car your self isn't that much, you sit down while driving. I mean it may sound cool to some people but personal i don't think it would be a good idea. There is alot to think about when wanting this idea to work out for the best. The best thing i think would be to just not try to make driverless cars happen, things should just stay the same.\n\nSo the first idea I wanna pitch to show you it is a bad idea is that in the story it says that \"the car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph, but special touch sensors make sure the drive keeps ahold of the car\". I mean that is ridiculous because with these driverless cars what if the driver is busy doing something and something goes wrong to where the car can't drive itself. The car will end up crashing and nothing good will happen because these people are getting told that they will be safe but end up crashing. I know that it isn't fully developed yet but still there are so many things that can go wrong.\n\nIn paragraph 8 the questions, \" Why would anyone want driverless\n\ncar that still needs a driver? Wouldn't driver get bored waiting for their turn to drive?\" The thing we don't need anyone who likes the idea of driverless cars because drivnig now is perfectly fine. The isn't many problems that can't be solved now. But the second question they should be bored and focusing on the road not to be entertained at all. The quote \" some manufactures hope to do that by bringing in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up . Why in the world would you need to be entertained by a game you should be watching the road. The right there says we don't need driverless cars just so they can add some games in the car.\n\nThe whole paragraph nine tells that there are some states that have it illegal to have computer systemed cars. I mean if some states have it illegal that should tell you right there it is a bad idea. The system in the computer could break down and you would be screwed. Then also someone could hack into your system or something because it is all on the computer.\n\nThe whole thing with driverless cars is a dumb idea, and they should not go any futher with the idea. The ways cars run now is perfectly fine, and it is not to much work to drive a car. The whole idea should be locked in a closet and never to be brought up again.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "During attemp building docking station dirigibles top Empire State Building many obstacles made idea less less possible One huge problem due building s foundation A swinging blimp thousand feet length top building would add huge amount stress This meant extra money would need dumped strengthening foundation framework order support huge zeppelin mooring mast Since building tops feet altitude fierce air currents rip top building This caused impossible docking conditions blimp could hit building pop Due flammability hydrogen dangerous eruption could wreck havoc densely populated city Refering Hindenburg explosion Lakehurst The owners Empire State Building realized much worse accident could taken place densely populated area Due mainly safety reasons Docking station dirigibles never built", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Young people in some countries are encouraged to take one gap year to work or travel abroad between their high school and university studies. This essay will discuss both of the benefits and drawbacks of the experiences of one year adventure in foreign countries for young people.\nTo start with, there are several advantages to this adventure abroad. Firstly, young people can meet people from different cultures, beliefs, and ages, and broaden their thoughts and experiences of the world. For instance, they may have cultural shock and reflect their own views and values about life and the world. In this way, they may become more open-minded and tolerant of different people and cultures. Secondly, they can make friends with people in other countries and broaden their social networks. This can become long-term friendships and they can gain a global perspective of the world. This is not only beneficial for themselves, but it can also benefit their societies and countries in long run as well.\nHowever, there are also potential drawbacks to this journey. First and foremost, they can encounter some dangerous situations, such as being scammed, robbed, and even physically harmed. Numerous reports in the media about unfortunate cases that young people in foreign countries being kidnapped, forced to consume or sell drugs, and even being killed. It could be dangerous for them if they meet local gangster bands and have no one to rescue them. Therefore, it is essential that young people take precautions to keep their safety while abroad.\nTo sum up, although there are potential risks in the one-year journey, the advantages of broadening their horizons of thoughts, becoming open-minded, and experiences of forming new friendships with people in other countries could outweigh the disadvantages if the young people take measures for their safety while abroad.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In opinion I think computers good affect people I think millions people use computers everyday The affects people get learn things easier There millions job sites would something learning About collage students go online challenge If collage student collage online would see family wo nt hassle get collage would easier concentrate self learning Also even make stone popular learning different language learn computer My second reason talk About daily Online phone also cool even talk give I know facebook give nt get think would good chore free So conclusion I think good effects people use cpu Also everyone uses cpu still enjoy nature talk thier family So nt cpu get one fun stuff like", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator,\n\nThe Electoral College that was established by the founding fathers in the Contitution is important to all of us. Every candidate that is running for President in each state has its own group of electors that the political party of the candidate chose. I am however, not in favor of keeping the Electoral College but to change it to be an election by popular vote for the president of the United States, the reason being that it is unfair to the voters and outdated.\n\nThe Electoral College is unfair to it's voters. If the candidate has more electoral votes than popular votes then they have a higher chance of winning. \"Al Gore won the popular vote but lost the presidency, over 60 percent of voters would prewfer a direct election to the kind we have now\" (Plumer, Paragraph 9). The president is the leader of the United States and if most of our country votes on a candidate they think suites the best but the other candidate wins, that would make many voters dissapointed. \"Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning\" (Plumer, Paragraph 13). Every vote counts, and the candidate that gets the most popular votes deserves the win.\n\nSince our founding fathers established the Electoral College it shows that it is outdated. \"The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational\" (Plumer, Paragraph 14). This is the twenty-first century, and we need to make our elections more modernized to where every voter is happy. A voter should not vote for an elector and hope that the candidate wins but be able to vote for the candidate itself. Even though there are many people against the Electoral College, it still has its defenders. \"This year voters can expect another close election in which the popular vote winner could again lose the presidency\" (Plumer, Paragraph 9). As there are people who believe that whatever our founding fathers established we need to keep our tradition going and not change a single thing, but maybe it's time for a change. \"Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than poeple who thing that single vote may decide an election\" (Posner, Paragraph 23).\n\n\"It's hard to say this, but Bob Dole was right: Abolish the electoral college\" (Plumer, Paragraph 14)! The voters think the Electoral College is unfair and outdated. People vote for a candidate but the outcome is not what they were expecting. The candidates that get the most popular votes deserve to win!\n\nSincerely,\n\nDissapointed voter", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do remember last time locked something computer Many people use Computers everyone agrees benefits society Those support trances technology believe computer positive effect people I support computers help writing locking information provide communication One reason I support computers help writing You tell I greatest hand writing To help I type almost papers Computers also help people spelling gramar There even systems let say something appear screen This one reason I support computers Next computers benifical information provide computers would need go libary find around ten books might even looking Now find hundreds articals topic minutes The amount information un imageinable I think computers great technology information provide Finally I believe computer benifit us comunication One term communication came recently website let s sent messages friend share picture videos many things Email let s send letters people via internet instantly I could go forever forms comunication internet This last reason I support computers Computers great benifit society They help writing communication everyone could benifit form computers", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are positive and negative aspects of a driverless car. Some people might love the idea on the other hand other people might not. I believe driverless cars are the future, and there going to come up with some very smart cars in the near future.\n\nI believe that driverles cars are a genius idea because you can do anything while the car is driving. Well of course not everything you don't want to be sleeping and the car crashes onto something because it doesn't detect it. Many people run late in the morning on there way to work or school or wherever they might go and maybe didn't have time for breakfest or didn't finish getting ready\n\nI believe that you can do that stuff while the car is in motion. Even though you need a driver there in the car \"Tesla is going to release a car capable of driving on autopilot ninety percent of the time\" which means you'll only be driving that ten percent which isn't alot. Yes I do believe the safety of one another is very important but I think the manufactures wouldn't release a car if they knew it wasn't capable of doing the things that the manufactures promised. I am all for driverless cars but safety is very important to me but just like the article says \" the road to truly autonomous cars stretches ahead of us, we grow to the destination every day\".", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "They call venus the \"Evening Star\" which sounds like a beautiful name for a planet but it's actually one of the most dangerous and hardest planet to discover that's closet to earth because of how the wheather over there could change in a constant flash and the temperture could go up to 800 degrees, NASA has been trying for over 3 decades to study Venus because NASA has been sending ships and shuttles to the planet but it would always be destroyed, and the author supports in studying Venus because the author could see that NASA could make a break through and get a ship to Venus and they have been trying for over 3 decades and he also supports that studying Venus is good because he wrote a article of what NASA has been doing and let people know facts about Venus.\n\nVenus is earths next door planet neighbor which is cool but it's one planet that has almost has the same resliance shape and density wise and Venus is a planet\n\nthat has \"almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets\" that cover the whole planet basically and \"Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere\" and which it means that this is why NASA is having trouble reaching out to venus sending out a ship to go explore but it cannot survive the conditions and the constant pressure of Venus is 90 times greater than our planet and the planet could even go over 800 degrees Fahhrenheit which no human could survive that heat.\n\nNASA has been having trouble trying to explore Venus not because of the distance but because of the conditions of Venus are over the charts no human or machine could survive for hours because they would either get burned of the 800 degrees of th planet or of the pressure that is 90 times of earths pressure but NASA has been trying to study Venus now for quite some time for over 3 decades now which is a long time but NASA has not given up because they have been batting to study because of the conditions Venus has and why does NASA want to study these hard condtions? maybe so us humans could be prepared for any crazy conditon weather or any climax that comes to earth or to help migrate to a new planet and see if us humans can go out and live in a whole new planet I would say NASA is doing a great job not giving up and still trying to figure out ways how to staudy the planet and get access to the inside and have ships explore the planet.\n\nThe author very well supports the idea of studying venus for many reasons like migrating to a new planet, new resources for earth, closest planet to earth, and because of the outstanding conditions Venus has and the author supports\n\nNASA very much giving facts and detailed facts about how long NASA has been trying to study and explore Venus for quite some time and the author wrote a article about \"The Challenges of Exploring Venus\" stating facts and giving you his opinion about exploring Venus can do.\n\nSo this article has many facts about Venus becuase of the author very well supporting the idea of why we should still study Venus no matter the condition and which I also want to give a little bit of my opinion that I also agree with the author that we should still try to go study and explore the planet Venus and help support Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author is definetley fond of studying Venus and different ways to get there. The author goes into detail on how Venus is a very different but at the same time similar to Earth's atmosphere. The problem is that there has not been a single succesful mission to Venus, which means scientists have no concrete evidence that humans can survive there.\n\nThe author stated, \"More importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anyhting else, from a distance\"(6). This is very important because if the scientists can not take samples then no one will be able to figure out if humans could actually survive on Venus. The sooner scientists get to test the surface of Venus, the sooner humans will find out if they are able to live on Venus in the future. Venus is similar to Earth for a few reassons for example, \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth\"(4). This quote is discussing that Venus was once the most Earth like planet because they both had very similar atmospheres and features. As the quote mentioned Venus was covered largely with oceans, Earth is 70% + covered in ocean. If signs of life on Earth are possible from having many oceans it is logical to predict that Venus had life in it's oceans at one time.\n\nIn conclusion, It is still a problem that there has not been one succesful mission to Venus, resulting in scientists having no concrete evidence that humans could survive on Venus in the future. Once there is an invention that allows scientists to get to Venus's surface and take samples. It will be a quick process from there to find out if humans can survive on Venus's atmosphere. The fact that scientists have found that Venus once had a lot of space covered in oceans. This can help one predict that there was also some living organisms on Venus's surface. If the conditions are still the same scientists could test the area to figure out if it would be possible for humans to live there in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article it talks a lot about emotional expressions and how the new software can tell if you mad or upset or happy or not. Technology can not read the emotional expessions of students in a classroom is valuable.\n\nIn the Making Mona Lisa Smile story they talk a lot about how the new software technology called the Facial Action Coding System. Tthey talk about how when somebody is upset or bored the new software technology would realize that you would be upset. In the Making Mona Lisa Smile story they also talked about how your facail expression. Your facial expressions would tell a lot more then what you would say like if your were to be mad or anything and you say that your not your face would say different. In the text it states that \"then it could modify the lesson , like an effective human instructor.\"\n\nIn the Making Mona Lisa Smile", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent years, the phenomenon of vending similar but popular items is happening constantly while some people consider that would be more drawbacks. Nevertheless, I strongly agree with the above statement, and I will further emphasize my position in the following essay.\r\n\r\nAs for the first point, vendors prefer to sell the most popular but the same products in their stores may because persuading famous products in the world is most people’s choice which can make them connect to the world and exhibit the rewards of endeavors from hard-working to friends. For example, my cousin had been trading the unique filed items as his business and earning less revenue to support his family’s basic costs, but when he decided to adjust the variety of products, the profit increased as soon as he wished. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some seller regard that may result in a negative trend if there are too many similar items in the same area, buyers would not be attracted to come into their shops but do the window shopping. For instance, my sister delights in wandering in the mall and comparing the price of her favorite items in different stores in order to save more budget for her standard of living which may lead businessmen to decrease the value as vicious competition to obtain more income.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, we can say businessmen have been doing their best for their clients, However, some refuse to upgrade their commerce style which is quite alarming. From my perspective, although it is a sophisticated subject, as a client, I believe that it would be an informed choice for selling the same goods which not only provide us with more options for the price but also prevent us spend unnecessary costs in our foreseeable future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars\n\nHave you ever seen a landmark that looks like something else? In 1976 a Mars roover named Viking 1 spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face. This just hapened to be huge rocks together looking like a face. NASA named this the \"Face on Mars.\" The \"Face on Mars\" has become a pop icon. It has appeared in a Hollywood film, books, magazines, radio talk shows, and even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years! The Face is not a natural landform because it looks exactly like a face, its on Mars which could be an alien, and many roovers have seen the Face when they go to Mars.\n\nThe Face is not a natural landform because it looks exactly like a face. How can we not know that it is not an alien. NASA people can't go up to Mars to look at it face-to-face. Roovers can only take pictures of it. Mars is too far away that NASA can't send people up there to make sure it is an alien. There isn't any oxygen up there so people could breathe.\n\nThe Face is on Mars, which could be an alien. People have always thought that there were aliens on Mars. This time there actually could be one on Mars. Life on Mars could be a real thing. Mars is a eird place because it is red, unlike Earth which is mostly blue and green.\n\nThe Face is a natural landform because NASA has proven that there can't be any life form on Mars. There is nothing that they would be able to eat to stay alive. The planet is red and there isn't any water or anything to drink for them to survive. There is no possible way for any life form to survive on Mars.\n\nThere is a natural landform on Mars that looks like a face because huge rocks were fromed together looking like a face. This is all nature, there is no way that aliens could live on this planet. Natural landforms all around the universe. Mountains and hills are all over Earth. Nature takes control of everything that is alive. The Face is a natural landform and not some kind of alien.\n\nThe\"Face on Mars\" is a natural landform because aliens can't live on a planet without anything to survive, natural ladforms are all over the universe, and the Face is just huge rocks formed together looking like a face. I strongly believe that this is not an alien, and that this is a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I personally think that we should work to achieve the goal of driverless cars. If we were to have driverless cars, there would be far less traffic accidents. There would be no reason to need to get a speeding ticket and it would save the mojourity of people a significate amount of money. Like it said in the passage it would half the fuel needed. I agree with their argument accept for the fact that the passage stated that it should be only puplic transportation.\n\nThe fact that google has a car that is opperated by a computer most of the time shows that we are well on our way to achiving the goal of driverless vehicals. Even though there are times that you have to drive yourself, it is very close.\n\nThe problem with having autonomous vehicals is that they would not have the same capibalities as a person. The are times that ther are paths or roads are not able to be driven except by a person. If the road is badly damaged, you can't drive normally or you will have the risk of damaging your car and needing alot of money to repair it.\n\nIn conclusion, I think that we should further advance towards the goal of driverless vehicals but keep the availabillty to give the driver a choice if they want to drive themselves.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a relentless controversy about whether charity organizations should prioritize citizens of their countries rather than other places or not. From my point of view, financial assistance should be given to in-need people, regardless of geographical barriers.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, some who object to the idea of supporting impoverished people worldwide have their own justifications. First, it cannot be denied that a large amount of money donation comes from local people or overseas nationals, therefore, the government should give aid to needy compatriots. For example, with the catastrophic consequences that Storm Goni left, a major volume of remittances from overseas Vietnamese to the country to remedy these problems, therefore, it would be used for locals who were disastrously affected by the typhoon. Moreover, the authorities should give support to their dwellers in far-flung areas to improve their life quality as well as promote the local economy.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I concur with the view of giving financial assistance to in-need people, despite their geographical locations. First, it helps the government build up a harmonious and mutually beneficial relationship with other countries. This collaboration enables the recipient country to reach its potential while the benefactor can enjoy certain trade benefits. Furthermore, evidently, people in underdeveloped nations suffer from more pressing issues than their counterparts in developed ones, as a result, they need support from global organizations to overcome the problems such as hungry or illiteracy.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is understandable that individuals have their own perception, however, I am firmly convinced that the main purpose of charity funds should be to assist needy people, no matter where they live.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Polluted environment is an ongoing dilemma in the modern world these days and it is conspicuous to see that increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. Tackling this issue is challenging, especially given the speed of social change and the pressure of modern life. Therefore, this essay will explicate some key reasons why environment is polluted and will suggest a range of possible measures that can be taken to improve/change the situation and highlight probable knock-on effects of polluted environment. \n\nA wide range of reasons can be put forward to elaborate why the environmental pollution caused by produce consumer goods. Perhaps, one can definitely assert that lot of companies did not treat the drainage properly. The industrial waste of a monosodium glutamate factory called Ajinomoto can be taken as an example. To demonstrate, because the modern drainage was not installed by this company, and they threw all the industrial waste into the water causing water pollution in this area. Thus, it is no surprise to see that there is rise in producing consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment.\n\nImprovements to polluted environment can be achieved in a variety of ways, strict management of dischargement is one of the most favourable and note-worthy choice. To elaborate, government should be controlled strictly and only allow which company to have environmental protection standards so they never can throw their trash which are harmful to the environment into the atmosphere. This can improve the situation by controlling the amount of industrial waste to environment and encouraging recycle waste. Thus, while there can be other steps to be taken, this can be considered to be a good start towards declining the damage to the natural environment caused by manufacturing consumer goods.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars can be undeniably dangerous, but they have the ability to be safe as well.\n\nWith the developement of autonomous vehicles there are less drunk driving accidents and less reckless driving accidents.\n\nWith more and more teenagers learning to drive and getting their license the number of reckless driving accidents from teens have skyrocketed over the last five years.\n\nAs well as the increased risk of drunk drivers, which is always a problem but even with those risks taken care of; the car itself has some serious safety issues and economic issues.\n\nWith the American economy always fluctuating from good to bad this new developement could end up causing a huge disadvantage in some of our lower class citizen workers.\n\n\"...a future with a public transportation system where fleets of driverless cars form a public-transport taxi system\"(1).\n\nHowever with that in mind the ammount of low income jobs, such as the taxi drivers, would end up erraticated would be to large to count and more americans could quite possibly fall below the poverty line once again.\n\nAlso the article states that right now there is no such thing as a driverless car but a driver assitence car.\n\nThese cars can drive by themselves 90% of the time, except in special circumstances like road construction and accidents.\n\nWith cars like this they still require an aware driver at all times and the car needs a way a communicating with the driver when to take over.\n\n\"GM has developed driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in daanger of backing into an object.\n\nOther options under consideration are flashing lights on the windshield and other heads-up displays\"(7).\n\nHowever with these warning systems in place they should help the driver but instead these warnings could scare the driver.\n\nWhat if a drunk man was in the drivers seat because his car can drive on its own so he believed it was safe, but he is told to take over by his vibrating chair.\n\nWIth that man not being in his right state of mind in a special situation, such as a cinstruction zone or accident where you are suppose to be extra careful can cause more harm then good.\n\nFinally there is the problem of eventually if there is an accident with a driverless car because the systems failed, who would be at fault the passenger in the car or the manufacturers.\n\nThat is the question everyone is asking for when these autonomous cars are used in our everyday lives.\n\nNow autonomous cars have both their advantages and their disadvantages but they are the future wether we like it or not.\n\nThe future is full of improvement adn failures; and however this one comes out, and improvement or failure, it is still being aimed for to improve our future.\n\nThe autonomous car is ineveitable for our future, however don't be afraid but instead be prepared for the outcome whether it be good or bad.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Voting. Voting is a pretty big deal that only comes around so many years. And with voting the citizens of the U.S. have a voice. And also the voting method in which the president is elected by popular votes is just fine and it should be the only way people vote for their president. No one else should vote for them. The people have the right to choose who ever they want. And no one has the right to vote for any other person but them. The popular is just fine because first of all the popular vote for president method is more fair than the electoral college voting method. Secondly, the popular vote for president is less complicated, where as the electoral college can cause complications and problems.\n\nTo start off, the popular vote for president is more fair than the electoral college. First, there really is no way of cheating in the popular vote method because people vote once for whom ever they want to be president out of the people elected and then the president is chosen that way. The popular votes method is more fair because candidates spend a little time in every if not majority of the states, depending on how much time they have. But as stated in the article written by Bradford Plumer in the electoral college voting method \"candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the \"swing\" states.\" That is not fair every state should be able to see the candidates who are going to be serving the country and see what they are like and how they can help the country. And this has happened before where the candidates didn't even bother showing up in some of the states. One example would be as stated in the article By Bradford Plumer \"during the 2000 campaign, seventeeen states didn't see the candidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad.\" Now how on earth can people vote for their new president if they have absoloutley no idea of what the president is capable of doing to help or even hurt the country.\n\nNext, the popular vote for president is less complicated, unlike the electoral college where complications, problems, and just a big mess could happen. With the popular vote it is pretty straight forward and simple. The people vote for whom ever they want to be their next president and serve the country, the votes get counted up and whoever has the most votes gets to be the new president. But with the electoral college if a tie had occured as stated in the article written by Bradford Plumer \"the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, where state delegations vote on the president.(The Senate would choose the vice-president.) Because each state casts only one vote, the single from Wyoming, representing 500,000 voters, would have as much say as the 55 representatives from California, who represent 35 million voters.\" Now that sure seems to be complicated. Just one vote represents 500,000 or 35 million voters. The popular vote method is a lot more simple it doesn't require all of these steps. With the popular vote everyone votes and the majority of the votes is the winner, as simple as that. It doesn't require going to the representatives who vote for themselves and a whole bunch of other people as well.\n\nIn conclusion, the popular vote method is better because it is more fair. It gives people a voice to choose for whom ever they want not what anybody else wants. Also, the popular vote method is a whole lot less complicated than the electoral college. Where if there is a tie the representatives vote for themselves and are also representing thousands of other people who may or may not want that specific candidate to be president. So voting is no joke it is serious and it shouldn't be taken as a joke either. Every person should have a voice they should be able to vote for who ever they desire. No one else should be able to vote for them, not even the representatives. Voting is no joke.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Education plays an integral role in curating and shaping a child and thus building the nation. A set of individuals are inclined to the view of obtaining a proper bachelors and masters degrees for a better future, while a group of thinkers support the idea of taking practical work experience immediately after school. Both views have their own pros and cons. In this essay, I will justify my standpoint after analysing both sides of the argument.\n\nExamining the former view, the primary argument supporters put forward is the necessity of going through a proper specialization from the universities. Firstly, the student learns more about his career interests and gains deep insight by attending school. Additionally, he is unknown to the various opportunities awaiting in the future. For example, college and university courses have a properly curated curriculum that refines the learner's strength and imparts time to dive into deep insight. \n\nOn the flip side, certain thinkers believe to get a job right after completing an institute. The reason they mention is the vitality of training in the industry. It is imperative for everyone to get practical proficiency and getting used to the organization work patterns. For instance, a student with advanced information but no working knowledge will not be able to handle the task pressure, live client and the project experience. In addition, the costs of higher education can be a burden for the parents. Indeed, going through a severe industry task can mould the teenager in the proper direction of career.\n\nTo conclude, although I see a point in getting training experience after school, I believe it cannot give complete justice to the youth and higher education from the institute is essential. I stand with the former view that a teenager is unknown to the hidden knowledge treasures awaiting him at the tender age and it is appropriate to grasp the opportunity of educating looking at today's fast-paced world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars have always seemed to be a necessity to people, but did you know just how bad cars can be? There are plenty of other modes of transportation you could choose from besides a car. Limiting car usage has plenty of advantages!\n\nOne advantage to limiting car usage is it improves safety. Safety in a community is what we all strive for and by taking this step, we can improve people's saftey immensely. By having less cars on the road, there is a lesser chance for fatal accidents to occur. As well, you will improve your own safety by not getting into a car as much. It will lower your chance of getting into a fatal accident yourself. If you choose an alternate mode to transportation, you may also just increase your mood. In Elisabeth Rosenthal's article of \"In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars\", a man named Heidrun Walter said that \"when I had a car I was always tense, I'm much happier this way (without a car to drive). Driving can lead to a negative mood, but mix that with danger and the results could get terrible.\n\nAnother advantage to limiting car usage is by not using your car, you can save money. Let's face it, cars are an expensive thing to keep running. It costs you money each time you go to refill your gas, costs money every time you have to go in to see a mechanic, it costs money to wash your car, and don't forget about buying the car (or a new one if your current one has too many problems). Now with that in mind, just think about how much money one can save by not using the car as often as one does now. By not using your car, you can save yourself money and time.\n\nMore importantly, by limiting your car usage you can help reduce the emission into our atmosphere. As said in Elisabeth Rosenthal's article 'The End of Car Culture', \"transportation is the second largests source of America's emissions, just behind power plants\". By using a car daily, we emit a massive amount of carbon and other terrible gases into the atmosphere. Mixing those elements into our atmosphere can lead to smog and a destroyed atmosphere. Paris had to ban car usage for a few days just to clear out the global air arund them due to days of near-record pollution. We can save our environment, just by going the extra mile and choosing a different mode of trasportation.\n\nBy limiting car usage in our communities, it can lead to a healthier, happier, and safer community (as well as a money saver for all of us). It's understandable when you are to go a lengthy distance to use a car. Daily travels are usually close by, maybe try walking or taking the bus to your location. You may never know just how much you may like using that mode of transportation rather than driving your own car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being a Seagoing Cowboy sounds like fun. You should be one because you would be able to go places you've never been to before, see things you've never seen before, and transport horses. They are fun to ride. You could see the Eifel tower. You could go to Europe. You want to be a Seagoing Cowboy because you could ride horses, go places you've never been before, and see things you've never seen before.\n\nYou should be a Seagoing Cowboy because you could ride the horses to the place they have to go. You would have fun riding them. Horses are fun to ride. You could even watch after the horses. They stay in their pen because they wouldnt try to runn away because you would be in the ocean.\n\nYou could go places you've never seen before. You could go to Venice, Italy and ride on the strees of water. You could go to Greece and bo whatever you want. You could do what ever you want to while your away on one of the trips. You could even sneak your spouce on there and celebrate your aniversery.\n\nYou could see things you've never seen before. You could see the Eifle tower and the Great Wall of China. They have a lot of history you could find out about. They are very important to the people who live there. There are more but I can't say them all it would ruine the surprize.\n\nSo there You have it, all the good things about being a Seagoing Cowboy. They all sound like fun and hope you could be one. If you know somewhere that you like you could go you could either fly there or you could be a Seagoing Cowboy. Trust me being a Seagoing Cowboy if way funner then you think. So thats pretty much it it is really really fun being a Seagoing Cowboy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My poisiton for against or for driverless cars is for. I believe that if the technology works and it workks good. There will be less car accidents witch will lead to less deaths. Tesla projected that a 2016 realeas for a car is that on autopilot its drives with a great 90 percent witch means that it is improving. Other car dealers are said to have a driverless car by as soon as 2020. I can see how someone could go against the idea but if it wokrs then there will be safer roads and also as i said earlier there willbe less car accident which will lead to less deaths witch is great. I know at the beginning not alot of people will be able to afford these cars so there is that. I know it is going to cost alot of money to legally drive these cars in all 50 states but once the cars are 100 percent autopilot drivable the world will be alot safer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The age difference between parents and their children has been a topic of debate. Some argue that greater differences in age can be more beneficial than smaller ones. In this essay, we will examine the advantages and disadvantages of varying age gaps between parents and children and discuss whether the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.\r\n\r\nOne potential advantage of a greater age difference between parents and children is the wealth of experience and wisdom that older parents bring to their child's upbringing. They may have a more stable financial situation and be better prepared for the responsibilities of parenthood. This can create a secure and nurturing environment for the child's development.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, older parents may have a more patient and understanding approach to parenting, which can contribute to a child's emotional well-being. The experience gained over the years can help them make informed decisions and offer valuable guidance.\r\n\r\nHowever, there are also disadvantages to consider. A significant age gap can result in a generation gap, leading to potential differences in values, beliefs, and interests. Communication may become challenging, as the generations may struggle to relate to each other.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while greater age differences between parents and children can offer some advantages in terms of experience and stability, the disadvantages related to potential generation gaps and health issues should not be overlooked. Whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages largely depends on individual circumstances. Effective communication, understanding, and support within the family can mitigate many of the challenges associated with age differences between parents and children.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this artice the author discusses the obstacles that we face when we try to explore Venus and why we should explore Venus. At the end the author states \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiousity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" He does a very god job of supporting his idea by building his case using knowledge about the challenges of exploring Venus, and then he uses that knowledge to show us advancements that are helping us face those challenges.\n\nThe author uses the first two paragraphs to introduce us to the planet Venus with facts that seem unnecessary, but help develop a sense of what the planet Venus is like. The author does this by using facts such as \"Venus, sometimes called the \"evening star,\" is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky, making it simple for even an amateur stargazer to spot it.\" In that sentence, he showed us that the planet Venus is bright which he later uses in one of his points that are used to justify why exploring Venus is a worthy pursuit.\n\nIn third paragraph he then discusses the challenges of inhabiting Venus. The author tells us that \"Venus has the hotest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system,\", \"the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet\", and \" Venusian geology and weather present additional impedements like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.\" These challenges are used in later parts of the article to show how scientists today are trying overcome these challenges using modern technology.\n\nNow that the author has set himself up to be able to support his thesis of why it is a good idea to explore Venus using scientific evidence. The author states \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiousity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" The challenges and characteristic that he used in the first half of the article are used to show how modern technology has helped us to try and overcome those challenges. When scientists were presented with the challenge of keping objects at the surface of Venus because of the heat. They overcame that by using simplified electronics made of silicon carbide. These electronics were able to withstand Venus like temperatures for up to three weeks. Scientists are also making electronics that are better at withstanding heat, pressure, and ther forces better than electronics right now. These examples show how challenges such as exploring Venus help us as a race to push ourselves and our limitations to be able to survive the harshest conditions that we can meet.\n\nThis article was put together well.The information was organized to first present the reader with the subject, then it would discuss the challenges that we face with the subject, it then showed how we are overcoming the challenges that we face, which finally led into the main point that the author wanted us to understand. The author knew how to organize his article to support his claims well and to let the reader understand what they are reading.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"All of our development since World War II has been centered around the car, and that will have to change,\" said David Goldberg, an official of Transportation for America. David Goldberg says this in means of trying to decrease car usage, such as in Vauban, Germany. Car usage after World War II continued increasing for a long period of time until 2005 in the United States the number of miles driven started to decrease. In the year 2013, the miles driven in the United States decreased nearly 9% since 2005 and was equal to the amount of miles driven in 1995. Throughout the whole world people have been experiencing problems with air pollution and due to that many have been trying to decrease the usage of cars in different ways to slow this air pollution.\n\nTo start off, pollution from cars has been a large factor of the air pollution today. In the United States, 50 percent of the greenhouse emissions in the United States is caused by passenger cars. Then there is Paris who has been experiencing heavy smog. Recently, it has had days of near-record pollution. Reason for such high levels of smog or air pollution can be attributed to a tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline. Diesel makes up 67% of vehicles in France. Then in the rest of Western Europe 53.3% of the vehicles are diesel.\n\nNext, is how some people attempt to slow the car pollution. The first example of a community trying to decrease the usage of cars is Vauban, Germany. In Vaubaun street parking, driveways, and home garages are generally forbidden. For the most part, Vauban is car free. The only way to use cars in Vauban is to carpool because there is only two places to park in the whole city and they are two large parking garages on the edge of development. Then you have to pay $40,000 to keep a spot. 70% of the people in Vaubaun do not own cars. Anoter example is Paris, who is one of the biggest air pollutants next to Beijing. They have been trying to decrease the smog in their area through slowing the amount of cars on the road. What they did is make it so only cars wih even-numbered license plates could drive one day and odd-numbered license plates the next. Almost 4,000 drivers were fined due to this policy, which showed some reluctance in following the plan. This did not matter though because the smog cleared enough to where the polcy only lasted for one day. Another attempt in lowering the usage of cars was Bogota's car-free day. In this program it is quite obvious that it was just a day of no car usage at all. During this event Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work. Even in the rain people of Bogota participated in this event. Then there is one other case of lowering the usage of cars, which is the natural way, having people just grow away from the car. This is currently happening in the United States, one of if not the largest car users. Like I said earlier since 2005 the usage of cars has decreased. Whether this trend stays in motion or not depends on the idealism of the current and future generations.\n\nTo conclude, the use of cars is creating problems in air pollution and due to this there have been attempt to slow this usage. Then back to what David Goldberg said the development of the car needs to stop being the center of attention. So instead what we have to do is take our attention away from using the car to ways of finding ways to limit the cars use.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, there is a significant upward trend of people overweight. Some sectors of society are in favour of increasing the price of the most caloric food to prevent people from this major problem. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with this idea as the price will not stop from people buying these kinds of comestible. Subsequently, I consider that people need to be better educated in having healthier habits.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, increasing the price of fatty food will not stop people from consuming them. For example, statistics show that the main reason for obesity is anxiety and depression. People that are sad and depressed feel that they really need to eat this kind of food, in which case price will not be precisely a barrier for them as they would pay any amount of money in order to get it to satisfy this negative emotion they feel.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, increasing the price of selected products would be unfair to people who are not obese and that want to enjoy their meals with something fatty. In this case, this would be discriminatory for these people, while the overweight problem would still exist. In other words, increasing the price will not prevent people from obesity as the problem is deeper than just paying a bit more but also will impact negatively on people's pockets who only want to enjoy these comestibles.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, we cannot deny that this tendency of people to increase considerably their weight is a critical problem for societies. However, I completely disagree with the “possible” solution of putting higher prices on fattening foods. Instead of this, I consider that governments should attend to this problem for real through educative chats and programs in schools and other institutions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying the planet know as Venus or sometimes called the \"Evening Star\" would be a great idea because Venus is our closest neighbor other than Mars. Mars orbits the sun at different speeds. While Venus is orbiting the sun like Earth. Venus can most likely be our nearest option for a plenetary visit and live there. Here are three reasons why we should study Venus.\n\nAstronomers are fascinated by Venus becuase it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Present day Venus still has some features that are analogous to tohse on Earth. THe planet has a sureface of rocky areas and includes familliar feature such as valleys, mountains, and craters. NASA is working on a solution to send humans to study Venus.\n\nNASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus like using electronics made of silicon carbide, they have been testing to see how long it can lasts for\n\nand can last up to 3 weeks. Another idea is using old technology called mechanical computers that were developed in the 1800s and were used alot in the 1940s during World War II. The reason why they are using old technology is because these computers can make calculations by using gears and levers and doesn't need electronics at all. Mechanical parts can be made more resistant to heat and other forces such as pressure. Todays computers can won't work on the surface of Venus because of its extreme conditions.\n\nThose are the reasons we should study Venus more than other planets because it can may be our new home in the future. We need to help NASA get to Venus and to start researching. Technology is getting better and better but we may have to ues old fashion computers to help get the job done. Thank you for taking your time reading my essay. I hope we have a bright future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear know every families computer Computers helpful need write essay school comes family vs computer average kid usually pick computer Computers taking away family time exercise privledges time spent school school work PERSON get computer come play CAPS us mom s say childeren least week answer common CAPS childeren ages would rather spend time computer weather s playing games talking friends This issue needs attention Families start spend time together instead hanging front screen My friend little brother always playing games computer Whenever wants play hide go seek always finds way playing play computer Aport spending time family computers take away kids exercise privlidges One example last week snowed I wanted neigbor come outside snowball fight said finish level computer game realy important This proves takes away time outside alone exercise A walk park friends sounds relaxing people except teenagers would rather talk friends using computer instead actualy spending time Lastly time spent staring screen When homework got done I took survey recently among eighth grade results showed people nt homework due spending much time computer In science class boy named never homework I asked one day says talking girlfriend also never homework always something computer time spent family exercise getting done time play outside missing homework assignment alot sacrifice CAPS one level I want help get childeren spend much time computer write artical important issue one newspaper please consider ideas", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "i think driverless cars are a good idea. But before actually sending this out in the road i think it needs to be 100% safe and tested a lot of times. I think this is a good way to evolve in the future as driverless cars are a really good idea so that makes me positive for this idea.\n\n\"In most states its illegal even to test computer driven cars.\" That to me should be illegal things change all the time, everywhere. So why not give this a chance and see where it goes testing something out should not be illegal.\n\nDriverless cars are a great new way to change and enhanse cars for the better. It should not be illegal or looked down on for at least testing in a controlled area. Like everyone says you cant judge a book by its cover. You have to research it and try it out to see if you actually likeit.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "DO I BELIEVE THAT CERTAIN MATERIALS SUCH AS BOOKS MUSIC MOVIES MAGAZINES ETC SHOULD BE REMOVE FROM THE SHELVES IF THEY ARE FOUND OFFESIVE I WOULD HAVE TO SAY NO THE REASONE WHY I STATE THIS BECAUSE THOSE ARE THE BOOKS THAT HELP YOU THROUGH OUT YOUR LIFE THERE ARE RUDE AND HORABLE THINGS OUT IN THE WORLD LIFE IS NOT ALWAYS EASY AND SOME OF THOSE BOOKS WOULD HELP YOU WITH YOUR DESION MAKING NOW THESE ARE THE REASONS WHY I THINK SO FIRST HOW WOULD THE BOOK HELP OTHERS IN THE LONG RUN I THINK IT WOULD BECAUSE SOME BOOKS TALK ABOUT THRE REAL DEAL LIKE HOW TEENAGE GIRL BEING A MOTHER AT A YOUNG AGE OR HOW KIDS DONT FINISH SCHOOL AND NOW THEY ON THE STREET IN JAIL OR WORST BOOKS MATERIALS LIKE THESE MAKE A DIFFERENCE IN SOMEONE LIFE OTHER THAN YOU SO THATS ONE REASON SECONDLY THESE BOOKS IS LIKE A GUIDE TO OTHERS THE REASON WHY I SAY THAT IS BECAUSE IF PEOPLE READ ABOUT VOILENCE AND STUFF THEY WOULD SEE WHAT THEY DONT WANT TO GO THREW LIKE MYSELF FOR EXAMPLE I WAS READING THIS BOOK CALL MY HOOD AND THIS BOOK TALK ABOUT ALOT OF STUFF THAT I HAVE SEEN WITH MY OWN EYES LIKE GANG BANGING SEX DRUGS HOOD FIGHTS ETC THAT HAPPENS IN THE REAL WORLD THIRDLY MANY PEOPLE THAT I KNOW OF DONT REALLY LIKE TO GET ADVISE OR TALK TO OTHER PEOPLE ABOUT THEIR PROMBLEMS AND THEY CAN GET A BOOK OR SOMTHING THAT HAVE THE SAME FEATURES AS WHAT THEY MIGHT BE GOING THREW THOSE BOOKS AND THINGS IS NOT VERY BAD THEY ACTUALLY HELP AND LIKE I SAID BEFORE THEY REALLY NOT BAD THERE LIKE A LITTLE GUIDE TO MANY PEOPLE SO IN CONCLUSION DO I BELIEVE THAT CERTAIN MATERIALS SUCH AS BOOKS MUSIC MAGAZINE ETC SHOULD BE REMOVED FROM THE SHELVES IF THEY ARE FOUND OFFENSIVE ABOSULTLY NOT BECAUSE THOSE BOOK TALKS ABOUT REAL LIFE AND LIFE IS NOT ALWAYS FAIR", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I personally am against the value of using this technology to read students' emotional expressions. I don't believe that reading peoples emotions is something that can ever be perfected, nor do i think it needs to be. I say that because i know a lot of different people have and use different emotions that aren't shown through their facial features, and may not ever be shown.\n\nThe first piece of evidence from the article I have to support my claim is \"Eckman has classified six basic emotions--- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness.\" I understand that there are the basics and most people usually convey the majority of them throughout the day, but i still believe that there are more expressions that cannot be conveyed off of someones face onto a computer screen.\n\nAnother piece of evidence i have to support my claim is \"observes Dr. Huang, 'even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression' (like not smiling as broadly).\" This goes along with my above statement about how humans have more expressions that can in fact be shown. That is one of the big reasons i'm not for this technology and why i don't value it.\n\nOne last example that goes along with the above statements is \"Each expression is compared against a neutral face (showing no emotion). I really disagree and don't like that statement because its pretty much just saying that a neutral face has nothing going on. I would understand and possibly agree if the article had said that it was possibly a mannequin head or something. But, it does not, so im just assuming that its a humans face, and whose to say that face doesnt have a billion emotions happening on the inside?\n\nI do however like the fact that it may help students become more interested in their classroom assignments. I say this because in the texts it states, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,' Dr. Huang predicts. 'Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This is something that could be very useful if students were set out to take a long-running test, or a long assessment they have been given (LIKE THE I-STEP!!)\n\n\"To an expert, faces don't lie\", and \"moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them. ('Putting on a happy face' actually works!) I fully disagree with this statement for a few reasons. One being that faces can, in fact lie. A person can be sad, but still be able to perfect that \"fake smile\" to fool people into thinking that nothing is wrong. I've known many people to do that, and actually be able to fool me. Another reason being that no expert can perfectly read a face based ff of facial expressions.\n\nIn conclusion, I still don't \"value\" this new technology coming up. I don't believe that it is fully, 100% necessary to be something that people use. If you want to know how somebody is feeling, sit down and talk with them. It tends to work if youre patient. If this technology by any chance can take some test to really read someone, i may indeed give it a slight chance. But until then, i will continue to stick by my opinion.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of tecnology that reads facial expressions is an awful idea. It is an insane idea to trust a computer to tell us how we are feeling. I hope that this is not what technology has come to.\n\nThe use of technology to read facial expressions or FACS (Facial Action Coding System) would not work properly for a lot of different reasons. First of all, how are we supposed to trust a machine that we have to call a repair man for every other week to tell us how we feel? Computers are hardly able to run Safari and people think for some reason they can read facial expressions. Second, everyone presents themself differently, therefore a computer would be inaccurate. Many people in the world do not present themselves the same way that they feel inside making FACS unreliable. In Making Mona Lisa Smile, the creators say that it can read a person's face when that person is watching an internet ad for example. Let me tell you a little secret. No one on the face of the earth in their right mind wants something tracking their facial expressions while browsing the internet. Lastly, the excerpt claims that Mona Lisa is 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. Why are we focusing on the percent at which she is happy and not the beauty of Leonardo Da Vinci's painting?\n\nFACS a.k.a Facial Action Coding System is a creative and silly idea, but will just never be able to function properly. Inventors can try all they want, but they will not succeed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author thinks that studying Venus is a worthy but risky pursuit because there are as many precautions as there are benifits. For example, the author states in paragraph 5, \"Not easy conditions, but surviable for humans.\" Venus is one of the most earth like planets in our solar system. There are many people researching and finding new things about Venus and our solar system.\n\nVenus has a very thick atmosphere. There is only about 3 percent oxygen and about 97 percent carbon dioxide. This is a huge hazard considering earth has near the exact opposite. getting to close to this planet can be very dangerous because the average tempeture on the surface is about 800 degrees Fahrenheit.\n\nNASA is continuing to grow and develop new technology to study Venus and other planets as well. In conclusion the author wants the reader to undertand that venus has very harsh conditions but if we use the right gear and materials we can succeed on stuying this planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Evaluating how well the idea of the author was supported; he provided more descriptive reasons to why scientist should not closely study Venus then to why scientist should closely study it. In paragragh 3 the author states, \"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than we experaince on our own planet.\" This detail already states that a maned vessel going to Venus would be danger.\n\nIt is also hard to study from a safer vantage point that is the other option the author talks about. In paragraph 6 he states, \"However peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere,\" This even states that being on Venus is half the problem and that it would be hard to observe to study.\n\nThe idea of the author to study Venus despite the dangers was overshadowed because of the meaning of the text. This was stated in the title it reads,\"The Challenge of Exploring Venus.\" The text was to infasized on the challenge with details that vividly told readers how humans can not survive on Venus and how it melted space crafts. The support of the author is poorly founded when the text is more descripted on the challenges of exploring Venus then the worthy pursuit of studying Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Let me tell you about my life i am a young kid who just grauated from high school who didnt think my life would change this quick. I work two part time jobs trying to make money. The first job i was at was the grocery store. The second job i was at was the bank.\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys program is a program that takes care of horses,young cows and mules. This program giving people lots of good opportunitys in life. If you joined this program u could do lots of differents. You would not just do one thing all the time.\n\nWhen you are on board you can have lots of things to do its not always boring. After all the aniamls have unloaded u can can play lots of games. Like for an example the cowboys played baseball and volleyball. There all way more fun things to do then that.\n\nThink of all the different place they went. For an example they went to Europe,China and Italy. In all those diffrent place they went to it wasnt just a boring trip. Like when they in Italy they got to take a gondola ride.\n\nIn conclusion,there are lots of reasons why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. Just dont join because u were ask to. They give you lots of opportunity in life that you many never get in life. If you join is program im sure you wont be let down.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What would it be like to not have cars in your city? Not having cars in your city can be a great thing, although many people dont like walking places. It can have many advantages if you walk places.\n\nFor example 70 percent of Vaubans families do not own cars and 57 percent sold a car to move there.\"When I had a car i was always tense. Im much happier this way,\" said Heidrun Walter. Experts say, is a huge impediment to current efforts to drastically reduce greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes. Many experts expect public transport serving surburbs to play a much larger role in a new sixyear federal transportation bill to be approved this year. In previous bills, 80 percent of appropriations have by law gone to highways and only 20 percent to other transpport.(source 1)\n\nAlot of the cars can cause bad pollution in the air. After days of near record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city. They were going to fine the citizens a 22 euro fine if they brought there cars out because they were ordered to leave them at home. Almost 4000 drivers were fined. Cold nights and warm days caused the warmer layer of air to trap cars emissions. Diesel fuel was blamed since France has a policy that favors diesel over gasoline. Paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter per cubic meter compared with 114 in Brussels and 79.7 in London.(source 2)\n\nIn conclution limitting car usage has alot of advanteges. One is that people dont feel as much preasure when not driving, and the onther is that cars are very bad for our environment. Limitting car usage could make our world a better place overall.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars would change the world in a lot of different ways. The cars would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus. Google cofounder Sergey Brin envisions a future with a public transportation system where fleets of driverless cars form a public-transport taxi system. He believes such cars would fundamentally change the world. Not very many people could imagine a time like this.\n\nI think having driverless cars could be both a great thing and a bad thing. Why I say that is because the cars could be smart cars and it would give people the oppurtunity to drive a car like this. It may not be such a great idea because the cars might use up so much fuel that it could eventually run out and there wouldn't be any left. But, on the other hand, the miles might be good enough for people. But, it might not work so well the first time driving one of these cars.\n\nSo, in my opinion, I'm in the middle with this idea. The reason for that is because there could be both positive effects and negative effects. My advice for anyone who might be interested in driving one of these cars would be to make sure you check it out first and be sure to drive safely with this type of car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers by explaining what the planet has to offer. The author explain why humans are so interested and drawn toward the planet. He informs the readers how Venus has its up's and down's but is still worth discovering. \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most earth-like planet in our solar system.\" Knowing this information is what is drawing people to make the decision of discovering Venus and its secrets.\n\nThrough out the story the author is telling the readers how Venus is a place worthy to explore no matter how dangerous because of what its was and could be. Venus can be discovered and be a place where humans could survive. The planet also is a place full of secrets that no one can seem to get to. Having something so close and not being able to understand it draws more interest into learning more about Venus\n\ndespie the dangers. \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth.\" This evidence from the passage tells how Venus once was and how people would be encouraged to take their time to explore what could be and what was on this planet that is so close but the information about it is so close.\n\nIn conclusion, the author supports the idea that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers very well. He include why people haven't been able to get much information from the planet to why people keep striving to learn more about the planet. He explained how to study the planet both safe and scientifically productive. \"Furthermore, recall that Venus can sometimes be our nearest option for the planetary visit, a crucial considerstion given the long time frames of space travel. The value of returning to Venus seems indisputable, but what are the options for making such a mission both safe and scientifically productive?\" The author made sure to put his knowing of the planets capablities of what the planet can offer humans in the long run.The planet Venus is a dangerous study but as the author stated \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" Meaning don't let the obstacle of fear and danger get in the way of great exploration.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear senatoris it posible for you to change the electoral college to election by popular vote for the president of the united states because its better.\"Acording to source one, the electoral college consists of 538 electors\".\"A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president\". Thats alot of votes that electoral college needs.\n\nIn source two it says \"over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind we have now\". More people prefer the direct vote because under the electoral college system voters vote for for a slate of electors,who in turn elect the president. acording to the article in reason one.\"In 2012 obama received 61.7 persent of the electoral vote compared to 51.3 percent of popular votes for him and Romeny. because almost all states award electoral college votes on a winner- takes-all basis\".\n\nfor example in reaosn five \"nixon in 1968 and clinton in 1992 both had only a 43 percent plurality of the popular votes,while winning a majority in the electoral college(301 and 370 electoral votes,respectively).alot of people say that electoral college method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candident. people that are in presidental elections are people who want to express a political preference rather than people who think that a singel vote may decide an election.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technoloagy has improved the world, with new technoloagy humans acomplish jobs quicker, but there are some technology that shouldn't be allow to be use by humans. One of the technology is driverless cars. There should not be any driverless cars on the road conserdering the safty of everyone, the moneny that the goverment and taxes needed and the improvement is just not that useful.\n\nGoogle confounder Sergey Brin invented a transportation system that could drive independently under specific conditions. But \"Google cars aren't truly driverless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic isssues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents.\" If the cars still needs human to operate then why even have a driverless car? This improvement of tecnology is useless, improving car to driverless yet still need driver to oprate and drive.\n\nFurtheremore, the driverless cars are computer driven cars, there are no garrenties that the computer will not make any misstake. Even smartphones and GPS these days have problems and makes misstakes. So, there could be a chance that the computer driven cars will make misstakes, rather the misstake will cost a life or more. \"Most driving law focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safty is best achieved with alert drivers.\" The lawmakers know that if a driver is not alert, accedients will happen.\n\nAdding to the point, driverless cars \"read the positive and negative polarity in binary code. These smart-road systems worked surprisingly well, but they require massive upgrades to existing roads, something that was simply too expensive to be practical.\" The money that is need to build these code on roads inorder for driverless car to work better are way to expensive, why waste the moeny on a fancy road when now there are still holes on normal roads?\n\nIn conclusion, humans should not use driverless cars. It is a waste of moeny and investment. While the car is called driverless car, the irony of still needs a driver to operate is just unecerary. Also, for the safty of the drivers, passengers, and pedestrians it is to dangerious to drive a driverless car. The technologys are not perfect. Driverless cars that are controled computers and computers will make misstakes, when is this does happen who is it that to blame? The drive or the computer?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology becomes more and more advanced everyday and the deleopment of cars that drive themselves are an example of that indisputable truth. Though there may be positive aspects that come with the developing driverless cars, I am opposing the idea of a computerized technology taking over my humanity and responsibility of transporting myself from point A to point B.\n\nReasoning for my opposition against the driverless cars starts with the matter of independent technology being not so independent. Technology cannot be fully relied on or atleast not fully enough to put your life in the hands of it, or I should more appropriately say, sensors, of it. In the article, \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", paragraph 7 tells you how the driverless cars can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. What if the drver, for some reason, is not able to become alert at that particular second? What if the alerting vibrating seats or heads-up flashing lights fail to do their most necessary task? That could be the fine line that seperates life or death and determines whether that driver gets to make it to their point B. Also, the idea of cameras to watch the driver to ensure the driver watches the road while the car watches the driver may sound catchy in the panthlet of the driverless car manual but in my opinion, most drivers will feel dehumanized without their respected privacy in their own vehicle. These small aspects of \"independent\" technology with such big necessary tasks are not so reliable which makes them more dependent than independent.\n\nMore reasoning being in terms of law, conflict, and safety added on to the former safety problems caused by the technology. The driving laws are centered around safe drivers, passengers, and pedestrians. In paragraph 9, it states that lawmakers know that safety is best achieved when driving is in the hands of alert drivers. Based on that statement, why would you put driving into the hands, or sensors, of an automated system that could possibly slip up and allow you to become non-alert? In terms of conflict, if an accident were to happen, who do you blame? Is it the alert or non alert driver? Is it the manufacturer that put together the car and gave it its most necessary working sensors or flashing lights? Why cause yourself to waste the time or develop a headache dealing with a computerized car when you can take the human responsibility to drive your own?\n\nIn short, I am strongly against the driverless cars and would never put my life in the hands of that. Technology should not have that much control over your life as to where it can directly be your cause of pain. The technology is simply not that reliable in my opinion. It could cost lives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We enjoy freedom read listen watch like How would feel freedom taken away Some people believe censored books music movies magazines removed libraries I believe right read listen watch whatever choose children talk parents first censored material We know everything okay certain age groups read see listen That mean item removed completely though Instead child talk parent censored item The parent decide child mature enough item Also materials removed libraries completely someone mature enough reading listening seeing chance I remember I middle school I really wanted read novels I saw library My mother believed I read novels age My mother I worked compromise I could read novels approved She said I older I could read novels I wanted I found compromise fair I knew I old enough read novels would still shelf waiting We right read listen watch enjoy younger children age groups monitored That mean need completely remove materials libraries though When children old enough read watch listen materials able go library knowing shelf waiting", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars have been around for many centuries now. Without them transportation no matter where you are in the world would be difficult. The idea of driverless cars have also been around since the 1900's and maybe even earlier. Today we live in a society with amazing quality technology; we could make driverless cars happen. One of the many problems hovering over the idea is how some people won't like it. Even though some may not like it, I believe that driverless cars would be an amazing development.\n\nThe pros and the cons with this subject go head to head. With driverless cars, an accident can be more likely to occur. Even with that idea driverless cars can also become super handy. The article states how the process of the cars are going with saying how they can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves. Another big pro would be how the cars would react if construction was going on, or if a ambulance was passing by.\n\nThere are already cars that warn people when they are too close to a human or object, which could become super handy in the making of the driverless cars. Imagine a scenario where you're running late for work and haven't put any makeup on to make yourself look more presentable and formal. With the driverless car, you don't need to worry about driving and trying to do your makeup at the same time.\n\nWith the idea of accidents occuring many safety hazards can be put in the car to prevent anything from happening. Things could also be put in there to protect the person if anything does happen. The article says how GM created a car where the driver's seats vibrate if they're in danger of hitting something. With the idea evolving it's certain that the creators of the cars will put new features in for the safety of the passenger.\n\nI'm personally all for the idea of driverless cars. It can become very handy in certain situations and can even help you with getting somewhere via gps. If you don't know where you're going, just put the address in and the driverless car will get you there in no time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author story concludes story paragraph basically stating winters coming things going die come back next spring Shes refering plant I think basically keeping track memories left thoughts came mind used senses connect flower Saeng ancious see flower buds next spring new things experience", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My name is Luke Bomberger, and I'm here to tell you why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. If you love farm animals, pretty sights, fun breaks, and rides on the sparkling ocean on nice sunny days, this is definitly the job for you. Of course there are some down sides like storms, but if you take this job seriously, the view of sunup and sundown will make your day very happy!\n\nReason number one is the fact that you get to to take care of all the animals! The types of animals you take care of are: horses, young cows, mules, and more! You'll feed them, give them water, and clean there pens. If that doesn't sound nice to you, reason number two will definitly wake you at least kinda want to join the Seagoing Cowboys program\n\nReason number two was one of my favorites, the beautiful sights! On every trip, we see at the least one beautiful sight. We toured an exavated castle and it was very beautiful.\n\nReason number three is when we arrive on land, people unload the animals while we get to play a bunch of games! We play vollyball, baseball, table-tennis, fencing, boxing and more! If you aren't into thats stuff, you can always do something yourself like reading or whittling.\n\nMy last and final reason is the view of the beautiful ocean. On sunny days when the ocean is calm, you can go on the deck and just look at the way the sun shines on the ocean. Even at night the moon sometimes gives enought light to shine in the ocean, and it makes a very pretty reflection. If I had to describe the beauty two words they would be, very beautiful.\n\nIf being with animals, pretty sights, free time, and the sparking ocean didn't convince you to join the Seagoing Cowboys program, I don't know what else will. To those of you that do join, good luck to you and I hope you have fun.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Proven best major children either desktops laptops type internet access What think Well I computers takeing people time like children letting get work done Also computer letting people talk friend causing bullying Finally also maken parents stressed pay another bill internet Children days come home change log right computer start talking friends lisening music sounds good intell report cards come back see failing half classes I remember friend would go home change eat log right inside computer As days went around end year noticed two problems She getting weight failing classes She noticed getting computer neccesary next mouth half cut time homework started pushed beleave children Proven syber bully children bin syber bullyed bulllied someone All happen children watched get bored pick someone What people ask says well take away I remember I read year old girl new channelscom bullied never This shows children world getting syber bullied moment", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are so many reason why using a car can destroy our community,personally I think using your car less would be a good idea. There are some advantages of limiting car usage,as you know the fume inside the car could give you a lot of problem with heart your lungs when you breathing air. By limiting our car usage we could have a chance of protecting the new generation from the polluted gas that comes out of the cars. In some country many people are happy even they are not using cars to go anywhere example In Germany life goes on without the usage of cars.\n\nAlright look I get that cars are a good transportation device because when your have a long way to go It could be very hard to there and you want to use a car that is acceptable,but like If you have to go somewhere that is 1 mile do you really need a car to get there. You don't have to have a car to have a happy life just look at this little paragraph i have search up.\"As a result,70 percent of Vauban families do not own cars,and 57 percent sold a car to move here.\"When i had a car I was always tense.\"I'm much happier this way,\".\n\nWhen we use cars a lot it cause us to buy a lot of gas that cost a lot of money. A study last year found that driving by young people decreased 23 percent between 2001 and 2009. Many teens and adults died from car accidents it might because they driving to fastor someting else. All that I am trying to say is that cars can be good for the community or it could bad for the community. That is all and why I think it a good thing to have the advantages of limiting car usage.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is proved that sports activities at school help children to learn cooperation and I completely agree with this statement. Nowadays, during high technology times, humans are becoming more unsocial spending most of their time alone. By doing sports activities such as team games or competitions, people could develop their communication skills.\r\n\r\nFirstly, humans are given exceptional skills to speak. Speaking widen humans’ limited borders. Cooperating people creates strong bonds such as families, friendships and partnerships. Childhood is the best time to teach communication skills when human brains are flexible and only start to create neural connections. Doing sport team activities students work as a team following one goal together and everyone is interested to find a relevant approach to make the team win the competition.\r\n\r\nAnother point to consider is that by having sports activities at school students could learn various characteristics. Humans are unique creations and everyone performs differently working as one team. Exploring personalities helps children to learn how to interact with people in the future when they become adults. Socializing inside the families is not enough to learn other individuals. By learning different people's performances through sports games ,for example, children could forecast future situations and find strategies for negotiations and escape conflicts.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, interacting with peers or teachers is an important part of kids’ life. Homo Sapiens would have not survived if he had performed alone. Various projects have been successfully launched thanks to excellent team works. Doing sports activities together is the best way to teach the next generations to cooperate well if we wish them a happy life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is increasingly common that smart machines have been applied in some situations in which normal workers can not touch or accomplish. Therefore, I totally tend to agree such a phenomenon is productive for most labourers, corporations, and countries. \r\n\r\nAdmittedly, utilizing machines may result in some workers losing their jobs, especially those who are semi-literates or illiterates in a short period. While the governments can take various measures –training classes, declining taxes, and so on- to diminish this situation.\r\n\r\nIn terms of individuals, without hard work conditions, it means that they are under good protection and lower threats from uncontrolled weather or disasters. Compared with the last century, miners need to dig raw materials (such as coal, gold, iron, etc. ) via hammers and shovels in the underground, which means they are not only in high-intensity work but also at threat of toxic gas; while today, so many robots and artificial machines are utilized in such dangerous field which dramatically reduces the chance that workers be hurt. In addition, as a company leader, what makes he/she most concerned is investments and profits. It is undeniable that machines can promote efficiency and enduring working during the same workload and limited time; when compared to hundreds of labourers. That is why a number of corporate leaders are fonder of taking revolutions in old product lines with new and reliable technologies. More importantly, applying machines in different fields is a symbol of a modern country, which means a good deal of talented people and perfect industry systems are already paying off.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, artificial machines allow people to get rid of hard work. although utilizing these smart apparatuses may have negative effects on a part group, it can reduce the rate of safety and develop good outcomes in the long term.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The next essay will talk about the reasons behind the need of some people to find out about their own family history.\nI believe in certain young countries as USA for example, it is completely logical to feel the need of getting to know where your roots come from.\nWe have to take into account that in many cases a sector of the USA population only know the nationality or the history of their grandparents, and their grandparents have very few information of their own parents, so the total history of their family is quite sort. I am spanish and lived for one year in the state of Washington with an american family. It was very surprising for me to find out how proud that family was of its european roots. It took me a while to understand their feelings. I needed to put myself into their shoes. To give a live example, my american Dad had even visited the northern part of Norway, close to the Artic Polar Circle to look for a distant cousin he had figured out he had. My american Dad was the happiest person on earth when showing the picture of his cousin and him taking a beer in Norway.\nI believe there are many reasons for someone to dig into history to have a deeper knowledge of his own family. Firstly you may get a better understanding of the behaviours of your closest relatives. Also you can find the reasons behind the colour of your skin or your eyes.\nTo summarise, I strongly believe it is positive to get to know more about your own roots and about your distant relatives to get a better understanding of youself.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,being apart of the voting process is extremely important.It's important,because you are helping by popular vote for the president of the United States.Electoral College helps you get a better understanding of the voting process and the effect that everyone's vote has.However,the Electoral colleges are not a really big help when it comes down to the country.Here is provided information about why they should change election by popular vote.\n\nFirst to start the discussion,Electoral Colleges were estblished by the founding fathers in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president by vote in congress and election of the president by popular vote.The Electoral College is not just a place it's an important process.This college is made of electors.They have meetings where they vote for the president and vice president.The college is consisted of 538 electors.At least 270 electoral votes are required to elect the president.Each candidate that is interested in becoming president in your state has to have his or her own flock of electores.The electors are chosen by the political party ran by the candidate.This college basically provides you with a idea of why it is important to vote. The country's fate rests in the hands of many.\n\nNext,The Electoral college system only allows voters to vote for the slate electors. The president of the United States votes is more important then the slate electors.The president of the United States is the one responsible for the Country.Most people refer to the most common argument between the electoral college as the disater factor.Like for instance if someone wanted to vote for a specific person you would have to vote for a different amount of slate electors also depending where you lived as well.\n\nContinuing,the Electoral college is really regarded as an anachronism aslo known as a non-democratic method of selecting a president. Many people believe that,that should be overruled by declaring the candidate who recieves more popular votes is the winner.Each party selects a slates of electors that is trusted to vote for the nominee that was picked slate electors.Even though the Electoral has a lack of conservative reasons, there are five reasons that people think that should be retained. The first reason is the certainy of outcome,second Everyone's President,third Swing states,fourth Big States,and lastly Avoiding run-off Elections.These 5 things are reasons why people feel that these colleges should stay.\n\nThe conclusion, the president of the United states is chosen by our votes.We have the power to make this country strong,but we also have the power to make this country a train wreck.Voting is really important this can determine the fate of the country.\n\nSincerly,PROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Over recent decades, many countries have been trying to improve their level of culture ,especially for young communities. While there are some disadvantages to spending more pay on the young crowd than adults, I personally believe the benefits are far more.\n\nOn the one hand, many commentators are of the view that there are some advantages to affording to adult information who cannot read and write. From their point of view, if the government effort to educate them, they will be able to do their daily routines they may stay at home all the time because of illiteracy. For instance, paying bills, shopping, and assisting their grandchild with their homework. It is also believed they are motivated to continue life without asking for help from others.\n\nOn the other hand, there are those who subscribe to the view that spending pay on learning for young society has several benefits. They argue that it causes the young crowd, who are educated at highly prestige’s universities, become to professional workforces. As a result, the country, especially in the field of IT, industry, medicine, farming and other options, can be developed by them. It is also believed, when they have become skilled people, they are expected to train other colleagues or other communities. So not only the enhancement of business but also they would be work overtime.\n\nIn my opinion, it should be better to spend funds on the youth public. One significant advantage of our children is their interest in continuing their scholarship to provide their knowledge to the country.\n\nIn conclusion, both spending bills for young and adult crowds can be useful under different circumstances, but I generally prefer to be paid wealth to young folk for information. Working overtime and being motivated are two decisive factors which everyone should consider.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever picked book video music self wondered s well thing younger kids read watch listen I think pluck types books shelf libaray better community kids kids We right voice opion things think nt libaray Books promote sexual activity killing people using taking drugs harmful things nt best kids read listen watch removed libaray shelf Have ever noticed crime rate drug rate went past years These types promotes books videos media If remove videos books media promote kindof behavior would less type crimes going I nt believe would crimes going would remove type media person want like song tv show even book follow promote crime try act like We humans follow actions others weither think Music also plays big roll music containing bad laguage promoting someone take drugs kill people proven play minds Would parent want see kid raised community promotes sex drugs kill people things nt There s music like listen like like rap explain promotes killing likely follow action song mind thinks s self crime kill cause like rap music must okay We community believe abstian selfs kindof behavior nt see many drugs killings sexual activity The bilbe teaches us stay away things promote drugs killing sexual activiy thus nt see much behavoirs home community better lot s us weither want aceppt They live life nt promote behavoirs I know would willing take type media libaray You sit one whole day watch actions act nt act like normal people far drugs stuff like abstain selfs media promotes sex killing drugs Now want help us make community better place kids kids let s remove harmful media libaray promotes sex drugs killing I nt think would want see kid drugs killing people messing lifes nt help removing media Please help us better community kids kids genrations come us", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, people tend to start childbearing at their older ages. \r\n\r\nIn this essay, a broad explanation will be made on the advantages which surpass the disadvantages. \r\n\r\nTo start with,the decision to childbearing is a personal decision between couples because, at the end of the day, they are responsible for the care and raising of these children. \r\n\r\nSo, one of the advantages of having children at a older age is that it gives room for preparedness. A lot of preparation needs to be done physically, psychologically and financially because the presence of a child will definitely change the course of lives of the parents and if necessary preparation is not being made, it will be difficult to properly raise the child which can lead to frustration and mental illness.\r\n\r\nMoreso, an individual without children can focus on other things like his career, personal development and acquisitions of wealth and he is also at liberty to explore the world in diverse ways without the fear of not being available for his offspring and feeling irresponsible over them. Children always crave to their parents' attention so in order to avoid this, a good number of people prefer to have offspring at an older age when they know they have achieved more than average of their set goals and ambitions.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, giving birth at an older age can pose a risk to a woman's health than a younger age and also it can lead to a loss of interest in family affairs as an independent life can be so comforting that it can make a man be uninvolved in the family matters.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, many people place their lives and careers first before the thought of bringing forth children. This is the best way to have a good life and purposeful future because whatever one is not well prepared for, one can easily fail at it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. In our solar system, Venus is the second planet from our sun. While Venus is simple to see from the distant but safe vantage point of Earth, it has proved a very challenging place to exmine more closely. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms os density and size, and occasianally the closest in distance too. Since Venus is the second planet from the sun and the closest planet to Earth, it is interesting and challenging to explor and discover things in Venus.\n\nIn the article it shows the differences of Venus and Earth about\n\nthe temperature. According to ¨The challenge of Exploring Venus¨, in paragraph 3 , ¨Venus is the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our soloar system, even thought Mercury is closer to our sun.¨ This quote shows that Venus is really hot. Everything are not as it seems. Mercury might seems hotter than Venus since it is closer to the sun than Venus but Venus is hotter. According to the article in paragraph 4 it says, ¨Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earh.¨ This quote shows about how Venus was and how Venus is. Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.\n\nStriving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. The author support the ideas by informing and persuading the readers. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In a classroom invorement it can be hard to tell eactually how each one of the students are doing.You cant read everybody and the kids who wont speak up about it cant get the help they need.A way that can help that is this new technoogy called tha Facial Action Coding System it enables computer to read and identify human emotions.Now imagine this in a classroom and how it could chnage it completely.\n\nThis technology could chnage a classroom think about if you had camras in classroom that would run this technology it would read all the kids face and show their emotions.The teacher or adults in the bulding could take this information and use it.They could see if a student dosnt underdtand the subject or maybe they have somting thats going on with them and are to scared to talk about but with this technology the teacher could get the students they help they need.With all this information they get about all there students they could help every student in the bulidng.\n\nThis technolgy could change a lot of things why not let the classroom be one of them.Having this technology in the classroom will not only make better students but also better teachers.This technology will alter classrooms the world is changeing we just need to adpate to it and use eery adavngte we discover with technology useing this technology could help better the world if used in a classroom inveroment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Could this be a total fail? Should we be able to let schools use this device? Could the machine be a waist of time? Should the info provided by the machine lead to somting bigger than just emotions? This divce could either help people or desroy people in its own way: or it could also be a complete fail.\n\nThe use of this device in class rooms would be great in a way;so the teachers could see whats going on with one of there students. On a total other note not every one can express there feelings through facial expresions; even some people tend to portray others emotional states wich leads to imataion. So personally I would not want to have this at my school. For there will be a complete disaster (people can always fake ).\n\nIn the text the writer was talking about \"empathy (the feeling of someone elses emotional state) may happen because we unconsciously imitate other persons facial expreions'(found in paragraph 9).Another example from the text would be we dont neccacerly need a machine to predict others emotuions. In the text it stated that to an expert faces dont lie ;that muscles are a clue .Also that a false smile can be predicted by the facial mucles: in the text it stated that \"the mouth is stretched side ways using zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risourius\".\n\nIn conclusion the machine would not be valuable in a class room. There are many other things to focus on/in class that using the machine would be a complete waist of time. A way students could be checked on instead is by communicting with them or directing them in the correct direction.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Due to state-of-the-art technologies, remote jobs have become prevalent in recent times. Some may argue this offers many advantages just to clerks rather than employers. In my opinion, this method is beneficial for both sides, and I strongly disagree with the statement.\r\n\r\nThere are several reasons why some may consider the positive aspects of working at home only for workers. To begin with, they do not need to pay for commuting to job location as well as no waste of time for any public transportation or traffic jam; thus they tend to earn more than before, in other words, making more money and comforting them. In addition, remote workers will have a healthier lifestyle. Thanks to the extra time that such job conditions provide, they have enough time for exercise and most likely eat more homemade rather than convenience foods. Finally, employees at home will not be monitored as much as they used to when their job was in-person since there is no manager or supervisor. Therefore, there are many advantages for home workers.\r\n\r\nHowever, these online works are beneficial for job owners as well. In this way, employers do not need to pay for resources such as equipment and a huge office building while they are inevitable for in-person jobs. As a result, skipping these costly steps would increase the income. For example, there is no spending on furniture or electricity. Moreover, as employees have better communication with their co-workers due to using computers, they perform more efficiently. This increases the performance, resulting in more satisfaction for customers and consequently, higher revenue and reputation for companies. A real-life example is a company where I work, which since the sales representatives started working online the company’s sales have risen significantly.\r\n\r\nIn my view, as the reasons mentioned, working at home offers vast benefits not only to staff but also to companies and I disagree that only employees take advantage of this style of working.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, despite the fact that many argue that remote jobs do not have positive income for employers and only benefits the staff, as far as I am concerned this is not true. Working through the internet at home has been beneficial for companies’ owners and the workforce.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinion, I do not think that the electoral college should be abolished, but I do agree with some of the points that Mr. Plumer claimed. Mr. Plumer stated, \"The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational.\" While it is somewhat unfair and outdated, the electoral college is needed in a sense of today's society. Everytime someone who is African American is murdered or killed, people always think it's a racial matter. Take a look at the incidents that were going on in Ferguson. Michael Brown, an African American teenager, was shot and killed by an officer, who was a white man. The people of Ferguson were literally rioting in the streets over a matter of a cop defending himself. So if that kind of society were to directly vote for our next president, it would be extremely biased. If another African American were to run for president of the United States, most Blacks would vote for him and say things like, \"If he doesn't win presidency, then this country is racist!\" To me, that's how American society is and that's why we should keep the electoral college.\n\nIn addition, the electoral college is needed to keep balance and fairness among the country. If there was no electoral college, and the votes came straight from the people, there would be problems regarding the states and the population of those states. For example, California would have a huge advantage at deciding who the next president is over a small state like Maryland. The electoral college is meant to keep balance among most, if not all, the states.\n\nAnother reason to keep the electoral college is that it requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal, according to Mr. Posner. He states, \"No region has enough electoral votes to elect a president. If there was no electoral college, the votes would heavily swing one way or the other, because of regional culture. People in the South would generally vote for someone who is white and Republican, where as the North, or states like Florida and California would vote for someone who is democratic, and since race is a exponentially large matter in today's society, people who are African American would vote for the runnning candidate who is African American or of black descent.\n\nA vote straight from the people could work if racial perspective wasn't a huge factor like it has been since the civil rights movement. But right now, this country needs an electoral college because without one, votes would be based on race, state size, and culture.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How well did the author of \"The Chalenge of Exploring Venus\" support and articulate their ideas? The paper was okay at best. I found there was a lack of supporting evidence in some instances, and that they didn't fully articulate the answer of \"why are scientists even discussing furthur visits to its surface\" in paragraph four.\n\nLack of evidence. The author seemed to lack evidence for a few of their claims. In paragraph seven, the author stated that mechanical computers are more durable than electronic ones. They gave no sitation, or evidence. This lead me to question its authenticity, and this arose questions of why it is better or worse. Evidence of why mechanical computers are more durable would have helped to get an idea of what the author was tryig to explain. Understanding what makes them more resistant to heat, or acids, or other forces. Fully explaining your ideas is a fundimental piece of a good essay.\n\nIn this passage the question kept coming up as to why scientists wanted to further explore Venus. In paragraph four the author beggs the same question, but it seems as though they got sidetracked in there responce, and compleatly forgot to explain it. The author states in responce to the question in paragraph four \"Astronomers are facinated by Vens because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" The author then goes on about the similarities between them, but never explain why exactly scientists are interested in further studies. Is it to see if Earth could become a hot sulferic planet like venus, or to figure out more about how life is created under specific conditions? If a question is proposed you need to answer it, otherwise it may discourage the reader from reading more of your work, and leave them confused.\n\nTogether these two things can really effect the product of your essay in a negitive way. These may make your essay look amature, or even just make it a bad essay. Though I enjoyed reading this, and I found it interesting, these thimgs made this essay feel weaker, and had the author included more evidence, or fully articulated their ideas, this essay would have been much better.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood author created memoir happy joyful The author explains lived child vividly air mixed aromas cuban food cuban music author still loves today It seems like good childhood He says parent selfless took refugees home It gives story warm feel like could almost mom dad He make story personal family members explains His parent best could family That mood set", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "No to New Cars\n\nIn the article \"Drvierless Cars Are Coming\" a clear contriversy is whether cars that drive themselves are actually good or if people think they will just cause more difficult problems for the future. I think that driverless cars have more negative aspects and will not be successful in the future of technology. I believe these driverless cars will not be popular because they can not fully drive themselves, not everyone has money to spend on expensive technology or wants to, and the idea of not being in control of your own life and relying on manufactures creations to take you from point A to point B is not comforting.\n\nOne problem that occurs with driverless cars is that they really can'y fully drive themselves, so what is that really accomplishing? According to the article, \"Tesla has projected a 2016 release for\n\na car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time.\" The other 10 percent will be by the operator of the vehicle but it never specifies when that 10 percent will be. At all times the driver will have to be ready to take control over the vehicle and so it doesn't solve the probelm of texting while driving because if you're texting while the 10 percent occurs you're still in danger.\n\nAnother negative aspect of the driverless cars is the price. In paragraph 6 the author states; \"Radar was a device on a hilltop that cost two hundred million dollars. It wasn't something you could buy at Radio Shack.\" This shows that the technolgy needed to make these cars is far too expensive for the average person. In paragraph 10 the author also stated, \" Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020.\" All these car companies listed are luxury cars and so is Tesla who plans to release a car in 2016. Presently you already do not see these luxury cars roaming the streets often so what is different about a luxury car that takes more techonology to drive itself and is likely to cost even more.\n\nAnother problem is not just the cost but if not every car on the road is driverless, then how can you gurantee someone else will not accidently smash your expensive driverless car. Not only does your car have the potential of crashing by itself, but another car without all these expensive radars and sensors can easily break your expensive radars and sensors. When the author says, \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-- the driver or the manufacturer?\" Not only can you injury the person in the car, but the people who are not in the driverless cars could be hurt because they have the right to be on the road just like anyone else. Another example is when the author explains, \"As a result, in most states it is illegal even to test computer-driven cars.\" Many people are scared of the idea of self-driven cars and the states agree as well.\n\nMany people are not new with technology and do not enjoy relying on it and what driverless cars are doing is eliminating the idea of the accomplishment of driving yourself and having the freedom of enjoying the roads. Teenagers look forward to turning 16 and getting their license and driving themselves and feeling like an adult but if they still got driven around by a car instead of their parents, not a lot is different.\n\nIn conclusion, I think driverless cars are more negative than postive because they can not drive themselves, the cost is not affordable or safe, and the privileage of driving would be taken away. I can not see a future where driverless cars occupy the main roads and do not want to see the risks that they can possibly bring as well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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