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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I'm against driverless cars and trucks. I'm against driverless cars on the road because everyone woud have to buy the car at the same time or this wouldn't work.\n\nThis wouldn't work because the first half of people who get the driverless car will be safer. But then the half that doesn't have the smart car will run to the smart car and we are still back to square one. As it says in the story \"sensors are nothing new.\" Sensors are always going to fail there is no way to stop technolgy from failing on point in time. Everything is too new. When one of the parts need replaced on these smart cars its going to cost a fourtne to fix. You already see how with all the technolgy in our cars now its getting to expensive to fix. The problem is the flaw is that they are going to have to keep updating cars and maps in the cars so the car to know the fastest way to the destination. Also if there is unexpected road work it will be try to go right threw the road work and i dont see that working.\n\nThe next problem i invision is that all the laws will have to be changed to meet the critera of the car. This will in a way force the people who dont want to buy a smart car to have to buy one. As stated in paragraph 9 the car are not reliable enough for the laws to get changed.\n\nThis is not a safe idea at all because there will always be that one parent that who will program there car to do something for the child and they will expect the car to get to that destination safely. But the risk of a malfunction is very great. The parent doesn't see the risk until it is too late and the child is either hit by another motorist or the car malfunctions and the kid runs into something and the car has gotten wrecked. I also don't feel like it should be the manufacturers fault for the stupidity of the parent.\n\nAnother problem is that if a person wants to stop at some where or at a gas station for a snack or for a restroom break they can't. They can't because the car was only programed to go to that certain place. So in other words you would have to go to the destination then turn right around and go to the gas station or store.\n\nAs of right now i still think that humans are way more reliable than technolgy. I feel like there will always be accidents. There is no way of stopping people from running in to each other at least once in the cars lifetime. You need alot more research fome me to go along with the idea of having smarter cars. So that is why I think that car should not be smarter yet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Claim: This story is really about how many people studying about Mona Lisa and how the way her mood is.\n\nEvidence: Lots of people try to figure out her history on her emotions. Someone uses a 3d computer and he figures out that she has 6 other emotions of herself.\n\nIntro: Some people try to study her history from back in the day because of why she dosent smile that often and why is she always angry.\n\nBody: Some people perform an impressive calculation on her feelings by the look of her face.\n\nConclusion: The whole story is about why people wonder why Mona Lisa never smiles that often. People uses lots of technology to try to figure out the way her mood was before she had 6 different emotions someone calls the person who knows lots of history about the story. Then they figure out that she did finaly smile during a painting class. By the look of her face the first time that someone notist lots of people were impressed it raised your eyebrows when you where surprised. Her smile really did change some back story about her first mood.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should go to the Seagoing Cowboys program. You should go there, because you get to see all over the world. For xample that shows you get to go all over the world is that, Luke went to China, the Atlanic Ocean, and the United States of America. Another example is that you get to go with your friends sometimes to trips on a boat, like when Luke went to Europe with Don. Also Luke went to go to different Countries and States, that's way more fun other then just saying in one country and state.\n\nYou should also go to Seagoing Cowboys program, because you get to see different animals and plants, that where unloaded on the boat from different states and countries. Maybe if you went to this program you would get to see different animals and plants from different States and Countries. Plus Luke crossed the Atlantic and Pacific twice to help people affected by World War ll. Sometime these program can be fun,and sometimes it can show you lessons ,and sometimes you just have to help people that doesn't have a life like you.\n\nIn conclusion, this shows why some kids for example Luke went to the Seagoing Cowboys program. These kids went to this program, because it is fun and exciting. This program is an opporunity of a lifetime, it gives you a ton of fun and excitment, and it can help you learn and get better in school, and education.\n\nDo you think the Seagoing Cpwboys program is fun, and would you go to the Seagoing Cowboys program?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After I graduated high school I would work two part time jobs. I would work at a grocery store and a bank when Don needed me to. It's 1945 we recieved our orders to report to New Orleans. We arrived August 14th a quite warm day actualy. We got our seaman's papers and then me and Don borded the SS Charles W. Wooster, then headed off to Greece. I had turned 18 before arriving in greece, which ment I could be drafted for military service. When my draft bord learned that I was on a cattle-boat trip they told me to just keep doing that for my service. By the time I was discharged in 1947, I had made nine trips-- the most trips any Seagoing cowboy has made. The cattle boat trips were an unbeliveable oppertunity for a small town boy like me. Besides helping people, I had the side benifit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acroplolis in greece was something special. So was taking a gondala ride in Venice, Italy, a city with sreets of water. I also toured an excivated castle in crete and I marveled at the Panama Canal on my way to China. It took about two weeks to get to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the Estern part of the United States and a month to get to China . Taking care of the animals kept me busy, all of the animals had to be fed and watered two or three times a day. Helping out on my aunt Katie's farm as a boy prepared me for hard work, but not for the dangers at sea. I also learned to have fun on board. We played baseball and vollyball in the empty holds were the animals were held. But being a Sea cowboy was much more than an adventure for me. I'm greatful for the opportunity. It made me more aware of people in other countries and their needs .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke is a cow boy from the farm and he has two jobs. He works at the bank and the grocery store. When his old friend , Don Reist, invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat he could not say no. It was an oppertunity of a life time he left. He was helping other animals each and every animal that was hurt in every war that was going on.\n\nLuke recived orders from to go to New Orleans. he did as he was told so he went to New Orleans and helped to take care of th animals as he was told.\n\nThier was many reasons why he joined but when he was eight teen he was alowed to join the army. When he told abuot his jurney here they said '' you just keep doing your service in helping out animals. '' It was a big honar for him to help animals he went all over the world to help animals.\n\nHe new that this was the best dission he ever made in his whole life. One reason he joined is that he was helping animals and felt like he was a hero to the animals like saving people after big events. He was proud of helping animals and loved to be with them till they get back home safe and soud.\n\nLuke was always on an ocean and he went all over the world helping animals. He was always doing something with animals till he slipped and broke his ribs but he would always helping animals even if he was hurt.\n\nAnother reason you should join is an adventure waiting fo you. It will open the world to you like it opened the world for Luke and he was grateful for that. You will learn the needs for other countries and it will stick to you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To me driverless cars would the a really good idea for the future. But there are some ups and downs to having driveless cars.\n\nOn the good side, people could just order a taxi online and you could put in where you want to go then have a place to pay inside the taxi. Also, you could just park the taxi's on the street and they can just wait to be used by someone. But on the other side someone could try to get out of the taxi without paying the price of the ride. A soulution to that would be the doors stay locked until the amount needed is payed.\n\nLike it stated in the article it is going to be difficult to make a driverless car. It says that because smart car have to be operated by a human in a construction zone. So if someone can find a way to get around that then driverless cars would be the biggest new trend of the future. But until then we are stuck with the same old cas that we use today.\n\nTo get over this hump people are going to have to strive for greatness in order to achieve greatness. In conclusion, driverless car in my opinon would be one off the greatest things to happen to mankind.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars,the thing that all teenagers want when they turn sixteen. Driving gives a sense of freedom, but it comes with a price. Diving automotives pollutes the air with greenhouse gases. Cities like Paris, Vauban, and Bogota have some serious problems with pollution. Thats why we should limit vehicle usage.\n\nVauban, Germany is doing it wrong, by living in a \"car-free\" envirorment. The citizens that live here forbidden to own a car, driveway, and a home garage. There is a glimpse of light to all of you that love driving or need to drive to work. In this city, if somebody wanted to own an automotive they would have to pay an additional 40,000 dollars and live at the edge of the city limit. Pollution might be serious but you should just limit the commute to work so citizens don't have to drive so much. Think about it, if you force people that have cars to live on the city limit, but they might work in the middle of the city. I don't see the solution in that.\n\nParis, France, the city of love, is also the leading city in Europe of smog. \"passenger cars cause 12% of greenhouse gases in Europe.\" (Rosenthal 5).Paris is not so bad in book compare to Vauban. Paris has assigned certain days for the drivers to drive. On one day, even license plates will drive and the odds with drive the following day. There are precausions that they take if a odd driver drives on an even day. The drive will be fined 22 euros (that is 31 american dollars).There is nothing wrong with this plan exept if some one with an odd license plate has an emergency, and needs to take care of it posthaste.\n\nSmog is not a good thing at all, and won't decrease until we do some thing about it. that a 'car-free\" day and bike to where ever you need to go. This our planet and we should take car of it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author of the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" thinks that it is smart to pursue the study of the planet because it is close to Earth, it would give us worthy information about it's physical composition, and the plans being created to explore the planet are valid and reasonable. In the article, the writer shows us how closely Earth and Venus are related. The author uses evidence such as, \"Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too.\" This not only gives us a size comparison, but also a distance comparison between the two, causing us to want to study the planet too. Also, the author also uses the fact, \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system,\" which leads us to further our belief on how the planets are so similar.\n\nIn addition to being closely related to Earth, the author also believes that studying Venus would give us valuable information on the planet, and what it has to offer. The author throws out examples like, \"samples of rock, gas, or anything else.\" Even though the author is saying that getting these samples would be dificult to recieve from a distance, he/she is still using these examples as evidence to make us want to explore the surface of Venus.\n\nFinally, the author believes the plans that are being created to study Venus are reasonable and valid. He/she uses the evidence, \"NASAs possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray.\" The author uses this to give us insight on one of the plans NASA is creating, and why it is worth investigating. In paragraph five, the author uses the comparison, \"Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms.\" This text is talking about how the shuttle NASA would use would be able to dodge some of the dangers of of the planet. The author believes that this could work, and thinks that it is a compelling reason to further our investigation on the planet Venus.\n\nFor the reasons that Venus close to our planet, it would give us worthy information about it's physical composition, and the plans being created to explore the planet are valid and reasonable, the author believes that exploring the surface of the planet Venus is a worthy pursuit.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting story effected cycles becuse sub earbs could stoped got water plot middle desert could keep rolling hoping find water For example go miles get next town get water desert hills could made time", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Wouldn't you want to be a cowboy who rode the waves? We call them the \"Seagoing Cowboys.\" If you said no, I think I can change your mind!\n\nDon't you care about horses, young cows, and mules? These poor animals need your help! Just sign up, so that you can feed them, bath them, and make sure they get plenty of rest. It must've been a long trip for them when they were being shipped overseas. Maybe some of them got seasick!\n\nHaven't you ever dreamed of traveling the world? You get to go everywhere when your a Seagoing Cowboy! You can find beautiful views of sunrises, and sunsets. Imagine the amazing photos you could take. You can get some good selfies, too!\n\nThis job dousn't just give you the sence of adventure. It dousn't just give you the sence for caring for animals. It really makes you think about what's happening around the globe. It shows you the feelings of others. It makes you aware of what some countries need.\n\nIf you are a kind fellow, this is the job for you. If you need money, well of course you need this job. You may even save lives with this job.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe the Face is a natural landform because shadows were giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and a mouth. There was no actual face, just shadows and a roundly shaped rock formation.\n\nThe face had become a huge pop sensation, starring in magazines, books and tv shows. Very few people actually believed it was an alien artifact, though taking pictures of it became a huge priority. It was only claimed to be an alien artificat to benefit the taxpayers and for NASA to earn more money. April 2001, Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look. Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 photo. What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West.\n\nThe fact wasn't an alien artifact, nor did many believe it was. It was simply a natural formation with well placed shadows. This is why I, and many others, believe this was a natural formation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever memorable time laughed hard friends family Well I know I several times friends family I love times laugh hard stomach starts aching really bad First one recent memorable laughing moments I spent mom I nt see often So moment meant lot imagine The last time came see older brother I went bowling She brought friend well My brother I nt bowled long time knew would still beat It turns mom beat though We lot great laughs actually I think first time I nt sore loser Although I m still sure beat would ball lane sideways would go right middle When moments like look back help hard times s really inspirational All really great laughs day shared mom Another memorable laughing moment spent dad brother Every awhile dad brother I sit living room talk several different things good bad They mom school animals three compassion sports These talks always mean lot never spend much time together We nt get spend much time together brother always school kind sport dad always work These conversations several effects sometimes sad times make feel better things There many laughable moments living room One thing always like laugh way dad always says album For reason thinks add another front spells alblum My brother I enjoy making fun moments like laugh That one many things love laugh Sometimes laughter important part someones life For someone edge upset saying something little make smile laugh makes difference world Laughter great way make people feel loved excepted also great way put people back track re I know smiles laughing makes feel much better inside I hope great laughing moments spent people love care", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My personal opinion on driverless cars is that they should not be the new transporation in the world. As they had said in the passage, there are many good things and many bad things about driverless cars. Yes, they may not cost as much on gas but they still need a human's attention. For the most part, they are automatic but they cannot assure you a human's safety one-hundred percent. I understand that there are many things in the world that seem like the safest place to be, but nothing and no one can assure your safety one-hundred percent.\n\nPersonally my thought is that people are starting to become lazy with all of the new technology that has been invented. What the world has right now is more than what a human really needs. Yes, we can get to destinations faster and more efficientally but why can we not focus on people in other parts of the world that really need help. We could start to focus on ways to get cleaner water to people in Africa or preserve animals habitats so there isn't any more endangered species.\n\nThe human race has become very selfish in the past twenty years or so. We seem to only care about improving things for ourselves. Driverless cars are not the future, saving the planet and the people around us is. Driverless cars may fundamentally change the world but think about it in the next one-hundred years.\n\nUntil we find a way to completely assure someone's safety, driverless cars should not make any appearance in any type of media.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "No books etc moved anybody interested Someone could come library looking items ca nt find library removed First reason removing books library unless new books etc coming Everyone different materials books stuff That s I say remove items People might come library looking book want If person find might complain take bussiness else Then library could start losing bussiness Second library start losing bussines might forced close downThen library close people come often wo nt place study work nothing What people nt transportation able get another library The owner library lose money close everyone nt computer s books home They come research rent books Third people go library peace quiet library place Little children go library looking books etc ca nt find book want might start crying If start crying people working disturbed Then person people disturbed might leave never come back thats money lost Students school s might book looking come library library nt student wo nt book In conclusion reason examples I nt believe books etc taken library Someone really interested items come library search ca nt find", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I don't think that they should make the cars, because like they said in the article who's going to want to wait their turn? It would be different if the cars actually drove by themselfs through traffic, but they don't so I don't think they should be made. Some people like driving so the people making the cars would be taking away something that other people like to do. I don't think that it would be very safe, because what if the car got in to a crash and the car just kept going. I think that we should just stick to the cars we have to drive. This world doesn't need anymore technology. It's changing and it's not changing in a good way. People will become lazy and not want to drive anywhere. I just don't want this world to be lazy. The cars dont have to be that fancy if you have something to drive thats awsome, but we dont really need them to drive themself's. It's a stupid idea and I don't think that it should happen ever in life. Cars that drive themselfs are going to be very expensive and everybody's gonna want one, but some people can't have them because they dont have money like that. Somepeople would try to steal them or hurt people just to get one. I think that these cars are going to start alot more crime. So no, i dont think that the driverless cars should be made it's a bad idea. I just dont want this world to get any worse than it already is. That's why I think that driverless cars shouldn't be made.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driving a car has always been a very risky moment. The moment a human grabs a hold of the wheel, they are putting their lives, as well as all others around them, at risk. That is why when driving, a human must be fully aware and cautious about their driving. However, if we put this risk into the hands of a computer, it could lead to great disasters.\n\nWhen a human drives it is well known that they are not allowed to be texting, drinking, or distracted. However, with a machine taking over the wheel this is allowing humans to be reckless while driving. With a person no longer having the burden of everyones lives they will no longer be as precautious while driving. This would mean that there would be an increase in texting and driving, as well as drinking and driving. Then, when the machine requires the person to drive, the person will be distracted, or not in the right conditions to drive.\n\nAnother problem would be the price of the cars. While only some people would be able to afford the car, not all citizens would be driving smart cars. Technology is meant to improve and calculate solutions to problems, however technology can not predict as well as a human can. If a reckless person is driving a regular car and makes a turn without turning on their turning signals, the smart car would not be able to predict it in time, and could lead to a major collision. From a major collision, the biggest problem would be finding out who is at fault, the car or the driver. Car companies have millions of dollars and some of the best lawyers, so when it would come down to court, most likely the driver would have to face the consequences.\n\nAlso, technology has its flaws. Eventually the car sensors and chips would have a malfunction, what would happen if the brake sensor fails while driving? This would lead to deaths at the hands of a small chip that had a small error.\n\nFor all these reasons is why i believe that investing into a smart car future is investining into great disasters. Machines were meant to help make our lives easier, however could they be trusted with our lives? I believe it's best we leave this a question than to find out through the loss of an innocent life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Environmental pollution is a major threat that society is confronting now. Some are of the opinion that raising the price of fuel of cars and other vehicles will help. They believe that this move would prevent people from buying and using cars, which will minimize the hazardous effects on pollution. I think this idea is baseless. There are many other practical solutions to the problem. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain why this is not an effective move and outline the alternatives.\r\n\r\nPrimarily, increasing the cost of fuel has dangerous consequences. Transportation costs will increase, which means the prices of essential commodities will increase. The value of the rupee will start depreciating, which is of grave concern. There are several alternative measures that could be taken rather than increasing fuel costs. For instance, biodiesel, a renewable fuel made from vegetable oils and animal fats, could be advocated. Electric cars are another option. Fuel from hydrogen, natural gas, propane, or liquefied petroleum gas are also effective fuel alternatives. All these emit low levels of gases into the atmosphere.\r\n\r\nIncrease in fuel prices is a sign of a weak economy. Banks may increase lending rates. It is an indirect tax burden on the citizens of the country. It is an indirect hint of our situation to the global community, and we may be forced to yield to interests of superior powers. The cost of living will increase. As a result, businesses will cut down costs which will lead to an economic recession.\r\n\r\nEven though it is true that we have to reduce using cars that pollute the environment, resorting to alternative sources of energy is more of a win-win situation.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, raising fuel costs will not solve environmental problems. Instead, awareness of alternate sources of petrol should be created, and people should be encouraged to use them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author explains that studying Venus is a worthy approach despite the dangers. The author impressively supports that the mission to Venus is worth it despite the dangers that might come with it. In the article he provides examples, uses a credible source, and also views the other side. By doing these things it made his point credible and also stronger to the reader.\n\nIn the article he provides the example of a floating car above venus to show that a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the conditions but it would provide little sight. He uses to example to illustrate what it would be like to avoid the conditionsby showing this is what the would have to do. He also provides examples to an alternative by saying that there could be electronics to avoid the risks. By providing both of these examples it gives the reader some relateable examples to get an insight into his point.\n\nNASA is a world wide administration that has credibility over the course of its govern. By providing examples of what NASA is doing to show that it should be done, then if NASA is working on it then it makes his point credible. He quotes NASA'S approches on studying Venus so that it can avoid the risks to show that it is possible to explore Venus without the risks. A NASA solution would be that a person could float above the fray. They also have considered sending electronices so it is possible. He saying that it might be difficult but it is attainable. This supports the claim that he supports his claim impresively because he uses sources.\n\nIn most arguments the person views the other side so that they can provide an alternative to what they are saying. He uses cons such as no mission has had a man, 97% of carbon dioxide blankets Venus, the temperature is 90 times greater than Earth, and that it could crash a submarine. But then he says that Venus has benefits to that out way the dangers. The benfits include: it is the brightest point, it is close to Earth compared to other space travels, long ago it could support life, and it will expand the edges of imagination and innovation. He provides benefits to out weigh the cons of exploring Venus. He does a great job of explaining why exploring Venus has value and can provides insight to other counter arguments that might rise from others opionions. This is why he does an impressive job supporting his argument.\n\nIn conclusion, the author provided points in the argument to make the opinion more credible and also stronger to the reader. In the article the author provided examples, a wide known credible source, and viewed the other side. He impressively supported his opinon that the mission to Venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers. Without his evidence to suppport his opinion the article would have not had such an impact on the reader. This is why he did an impressive job supporting his idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Rough Road Ahead features setting affect cyclist many ways One way setting affects cyclist desert cyclist drank water For example text states I hitting water bottles pretty regularly I traveling high deserts California June You drink water desert forest If go cycling aware settings around affect", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wondered what your emotions were like in an old picture.\n\nThis article states that the monalisa was tested to see how happy, disgusted, fearful, and angry.\n\nThis new technology could be useful but not all that tactical.\n\nThis new technology is mostly likely not very expensive but it is not very useful if it can only be used as an emotion finder.\n\nI believe that this technology for the emotion dectected is basically useless and a waste of money.\n\nThis technology to detect emotion is quite weird to spend money on what humans can find out.\n\nIf you look at a picture then you should be able to see what emotions they are feeling.\n\nThe information that humans could gather would not be as precise as the computers but maybe it would be more accurate.\n\nThere are a couple good reasons why you should have this new technology.\n\nthis because because of how it decifered the emotions of the monalisa very accuratly.\n\nSuch as the 83% happy,9% disgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry.\n\nThis information could not be desifered by a human eye.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that this technology is a waste of money and the idea of it should be thrown away.\n\nThis is because while someone was wasting their time on a emotion detecter they could have been spending that time on something like better computers or faster computers.\n\nThey could have done something better than waste their time and resources on something that humans can do for this technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face on mars is a rock formation. No aliens made it. We have seen it and belive that it is just a mesa. And we dont want to freak people out. Some people are against nasa and sa that it is aliens. Here is why\n\nIn 1976 are satilite the viking 1 was orbiting mars and takeing pictures of the planet. When we looked at them we noticed this one. A picture of a face on mars. When we noticed it eas just a mesa in the face. When some people herad about it they thoght it was aliens who made that. We then told them that it was just a mesa that when the shadows hit it it made it look like a face. And that nasa's budget wish there was an ancient civleization on mars. Ther is some like this one in the west. ONe is the middle butte in the snake river plain of Idaho. Some people say that nasa is hideing that there is life on mars and they say there is not.\n\nSo that is why we are telling people that it is a mesa. We don't want them to freak out that aliens excicst when they do not . We also wish there was an acient civilization on mars. In conclusion it s just a rock formation. That was there for a long time that shadows made us think it was a face.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars have many positives and negatives, but are they beneficial? In my opinon diverless cars can be a very good thing, driverless cars are built for saftey. This means that there is a potential for less deaths or injurries caused by reckless driving or drivers. For instance, if a man went to a bar and got intoxicated and was unable to drive, but had a driverless car he now does not have to drive drunk. This could save lives aswell as save the intoxicated man from also death or inprisonment.\n\nWhile those are the positives there are still some negatives. One of which being, Driverless cars would not be as skillful as human drivers such as in paragraph 7. If the driverless car had an unattentive passenger and needed a driver to manover a construction zone, this could cause death or injury, aswell as controversy over who is at fault for the collision. This could save many people's lives. But, with the release of driverless cars possibly reducing accidents, what would this mean for insurance companies and thier clients?\n\nDriverless cars can help many people stay safe but could harm the economy. Would the added saftey be worth taking the sentimental value of driving? As a highschool student I have been looking forward to driving since elementary school along with many others like me. Therefor, driverless cars could also take away the fun in driving, as read in paragraph 8.\n\nWith all of the positives and negative shown this really comes down to individual opinion. Will the consumers jump on the train called change or meerly cling to the present. So there is no clear answer for the question, are driverless cars benifical, at this time. We must wait for the future to truly see what the future in these cars may hold.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A boy named luke that graduated for high school and had worked two part time jobs in a grocery store . His friend had ask him if he wanted to go to Europe on a cattle boat ,luke said yes he said he couldnt have said no beacuse he doesnt like saying no to people. And he also said that it was a oportunity of a lifetime. It was 1945, world war ll was over in Europe, and many countries were left in runis . And too hope that those familys recover on food and animals. Then there were sign ups for a UNRRA Seagoing Cowboy and so Luke and Don sign up for it .In August 14,1945 ,'' Luke said , the day the Pacific war ended.'' they got their seaman's paper and boarded the SS Charles W. Wooster , headed for Greece- with a cargo of 335 ho rsees plus enough hay and oats feed them . L uke turned 18 before arriving in Greeece , which meant he he could be draft ed gfor military service.\n\nWhen my draft board learned that i was on a cattle- boat trip , they h ad told me to just keep doing t hat for my service . 'by the time he was discharged in 1947 , Luke had mde trips - the mast of any saegoing cowboy. The cattle boat trip were an unbelivable oppportunity fo ra smalll towm boy,; he said , besides helping people , I had the side benefit of seein of seeeing Eurpe and China.\n\nThen time past and Luke found time to hhave fun on board , especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded . The cowboys played baseball and they aslo had played volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournament, facing , boxing, reading , whittling , and games als help pass the time . But being a Seagoing Cowboys was much more than an adventure for Luke Bomberger. it opened up the world to Luke e. '' i'm grateful for the opportunity'', he says . its made me more aware of people of other counties and their needs.'' And that aareness stays with him leading his familly to host a number of international students and exchange wisitersfor many years.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood happy beacuse family immigrated That parents loved cook He loved smell kitchen There family sometimes cooks visit eat The auther past unhappy needed put racism", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many planets in the solar system, but none like the planet Venus. Venus is a very different from the rest in many ways from the highly corrosive sulfuric acid in the atmosphere to the temperature on the planet. I find this very interesting, but i dont think venus is worth the pursuit because all the dangers it holds.\n\nVenus is said to be Earths twin because of how alike they are. They both contain earthquakes, lightning and erupting volcano. This is interesting because i dont think there is any other planet that contain the same contents as these two. But then you have temperatures that are 800 degree Farenheit which seems very dangerous meaning it can probably melt almost anything. The author states \"Venus has the hottest surface tempurature of any planet in our solar system\". . This shows that venus can be really dangerous studying. But then it should be studied. Its been said that long ago Venus was much alike Earth. It had oceans and\n\nprobably supported life forms. This shows it may be habital for humans to live there.\n\nIn the end, Venus is a very dangerous planet to be studying. It has many dangerous capabilities due to its very hostile environment. But its worth studying every bit because it could be survivable for humans.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The autor\n\nsupports the idea really good by giving facts about the past and present and he is actully explaning the danger of going to venus really are and why it is so difficult to go their . He was also explaning how mars and venus rotate around the sun and how sometimes mars is actually closer to earth then venus but then venus is closer to earth . He gives information about venus ,and how their is acid all around venus . he also explanes why we see it so close to us and why we sometimes call it our twin. and explanes the temperature and how it can get to 800 fahrenheit . And also talks about it being part of us long time ago and how it also has ''rocky sediments it also has valleys mountains . NASA is also planning on taking people to visit and explore venus but the exteme temperature dosnt led us we had send some experiments NASA made but none of them can last more than a day .Just one lasted three weeks in harsh conditions . He also explanes how in the past mechanical computures played a big roll in world war 2 they made calculations using gears . he also tells us that human curiosity is going to lead us to find new thinks travel to new plasses and know more about our solar system and of our own planet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Mr. Senator,\n\nOur foundig fathers established the Electoral College in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens. Voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who turn to elect the president. The Electoral College regarded as people that seem to belong to the past and not in the present. The Electoral College is unfair to voters. Candidates don't spend time in the states they know they have no chance of winning.\n\nI believe that if anyone should have a good argument for putting the fate of the presidency in the hands of a few swing voters, they have yet to make it in this world.\n\nThe most worrying is the result of a tie in the electoral vote. In that case, the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives. We as Americans have the right to vote and yet the Electoral College still has its defenders. Voters expect another close election, in which the popular vote winner could again lose the presidency.\n\nThe Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal. No region has enough electoral votes to elect a president. A larger state gets more attention from presidential candidates in a campaign that a small state does. Just because most other things are equal they favor larger states. The Electoral College's method of selecting the president turns off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state.\n\n60% of Americans agree that the Electoral College should be abolished. The Electoral college is unfair, outdated, cruel, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. Bob Dole was right when he said \"Abolish the Electoral College.\"\n\nSincerely,\n\nJohn Smith", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face of mars is a discovery of the centary because our spacecrart from nasa captured a strange object from 1976- 2001. Since then nasa has been doing more and more research on this strange object on mars. We took a clear photo of the object and it appeard to be a face, looking straight at our spacecraft.\n\nScientists figured that the face had unusual shadows that made it look, like an Egyption pharaoh. A few days later NASA wanted to unveil the image for the whole world to see, they exlained the face of mars on movies, tv shows, magazines, and radio talk shows. People thought that the foce of mars was created by an alien space craft or an alien ship has crash land on to, mars to make ith look like a face. NASA is wishing that there could be an ancient civilization on mars, that NASA dosn't know about.\n\nDays later web surfers have provine that the was no alien monument after all I claim that there is no face on mars. I beleive that there are shadows, on mars that make it look like a face i argue that there was no, alien monument on mars that it is just a illusion caused from the shadows on mars. this face on mars could just be another Martian mesa which are usually common enough in cydonia. Nasa has put the illusion of the face on mars to attract human to, attract attention to mars and just see what NASA has discovered.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Al Smith announced Empire State Building would reach new height ft December His plan build mooring mast top building make equiped modern travel The bulders faced three main obstacles trying allow dirigibles dock The first obstacle safety Most dirigibles outside used hydrogen highly flamable When Hindenburg destroyed fire owners Empire State Building became worried much worse accident would occur New YorkThe second greatest obstacle nature The winds top building constantly shifted would cause back dirigible swivel around mast The way solve problem lead weights This practical safeThe final obstacle law airships flying low urban areas This made illegal dirigibles tie buildingIn conclusion three main obstacles builders faced safety nature law", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Art is not only painting and sculpting, it is much more than that. It could be music, dancing, acting or could even be writing or presenting and much more than that.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion it is important at schools to have it as an essential to discover childeren's talents and skills, which is very improtant. When a talent or a skill is discovered in early ages it is always easier to develop it, therefore, the talent will grow with the child and become something professional he does.\r\n\r\nAs a suggestion, I believe that art in schools should be divided to many subjects and each kid should be tested on which subject is suiting him the most. For example, teachers should expose all youngsters to all art subjects and pay good attention to each one's skill or talent and help them to discover more about themselves.\r\n\r\nSchools are not only for learning academic subjects, they are also for learning new skills and talents and being able to communicate with others and discover more about yourself as a person. Also, having a hobby or an actibity beside studying is very imporant because when you feel yourself achieving and successful in something you love it gives you a great push to be successful in other things you do in life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are coming. They might be reality in a few years maybe a few months. That is a scary thing to think about. Yes the cars provide help to drives, but they also have a few problems that take over the positive qualities.\n\nThe cars can be good. For example, in paragraph two, Goolges cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash. That is amazing. A car can driven that long by driving itself. Another good thing is in paragraph one, how the cars would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus. if the cars use half the fuel of today's taxis, then their is more money to pave new roads, make better buildings, or develop a plan that helps every one in need.\n\nThis idea of driverless cars has been around for a while. Google only made that idea a reality just a few years ago. There has been inventions that made the driverless cars closer to a reality. \"In the 1980s, automakers used speed sensors at the wheel in the creation of antilock brack,\" (paragraph 5). Ten years later, those sensors had develop into a more advanced, which aloud it to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids and rollovers. If those sensors are in the driverless car that google made, then they might save some lives.\n\nEven though, the driverless cars have good qualities, it haves some okay ones. For example, in paragraph seven, how it takls about the special touch sensors make suyre the drive keeps hold of the wheel. What if the drive is asleep becuase they passout or just tired and their hands fall out the wheel, how will the sensors work then? What if the car is approaching a work zone or it is around any accident and the drive is passed out, will the car brake itself or will is just keep driving. lets save the car brakes itself to fast and the driver bangs his or her head against the wheel, the drive could get a concussion, or even worst, die. If the car keeps driving, it could drive to fast and rare-end that car infront of it or hint one of the workers. Then who would take the blame the drive who passed out or the driverless car. The driver did not know he or she was going to pass out.\n\nDriverless cars are coming. Yes, the cars have good qualities that mkae then safe. for example, the seats vibrate when the car is in danger of backing into an object (paragraph seven). Although, like everything else in this world, it has a few mistakes and question that have been answered yet. I am not for driverless cars becasue of the question that still have no answers. I am the type of person who thinks of the \"what ifs\", mostly the bad what ifs instead of the good. So, I can make up questions that have not been thought of nor answered. Driverless car are coming. We already have the technology for them, someone, like Google, just has to put the technology and the idea together to make the product.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my opinion, driverless cars are a big mistake. People will become careless while \"driving\", there will be more accidents due to computer malfunctions, and these cars will cost a lot more money in the long run. There is no real responsibility or accountability on the drivers part if there were to be an accident. I believe that these cars should not be sold to the public until more research and tests are done on the subject.\n\nDriverless cars will cause people to become more careless and less attentive when they are in the car. They will not be focused on the road just in case their is a malfuntion or problem with the systems that control the car. These cars will make people think that they should not be held accountable if they are in an accident, however, this is not the case. The owner of the driverless car should be held accountable in an accident simply because there is no person in control of the vehicle. There are no real positive effects to the driverless car.\n\nDue to the driverless cars having more computers and systems than normal cars, there will be many more accidents due to computer malfunctions. This is unavoidable. Because of the computers being in control of the car, the person \"driving\" the driverless car in an accident will most likely be held responsible. Due to this, and many other reasons, the driverless car is more of a hassle than it is truely worth.\n\nThe driverless car will not only make careless drivers and cause more accidents, it will also be very costly for the owner. The car will most likely cost a large sum of money to buy initially. Then the owner will have to pay for extra upkeep on the car compared to a normal car. If the owner were ever to get in an accident due to a computer malfuntion, the perso will have to take the blame for the accident, as well as pay for their own medical help. All in all the driverless car does not seem like a very wise purchase.\n\nIn my opinion driverless cars are not only costly, they also create careless drivers, and will most likely cause more accidents. There is no real positive effect to these cars. I do not belive that they should be legalized or sold to the public until there are more studdies and work done on them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everybody's got a car, right? Having a car to many is either required, out of convenience, or even as a status symbol. What if I told you that cars are becoming becoming a burden to the rest of the world. The negative aspects of everybody owning a car have now taken a physical position amongst the world's issues. Not everybody has realized it yet but there are several cities in other countries that are choosing to take on the issues head on. Let me tell you a bit about a couple of them that I have found to have taken the most drastic of steps and by the end of this, I intend for you to have chosen a side to stand with on the issues that lie ahead.\n\nFirst off, we have VAUBAN, Germany. According to Source 1, the city has made it outright difficult to own a car here. You would be hard-pressed to find anywhere to park as the city has made street parking, driveways, and home garages illegal. You are able to own an automobile but you must go out of your way to drive to a garage at the edge of the district or pay up to $40,000 for a parking space. The city is trying to make its citizens less dependent on automobiles by designing the whole district to be easily accesible through alternative means of transport and by foot. Their example must be getting our attention because the Environmental Protection Agency is also promoting \"car reduced\" communities. Are we looking at the future of suburban environments?\n\nNext, we have Paris, France. Recently, according to Source 2, the city of France has put a restriction on the amount of cars driving in its streets to reduce their monstrous smog levels. The plan was to have cars with even numbered license plates drive only a particular day and have the cars with odd numbered license plates drive on another day. The plan worked and because of this decision smog levels that leveled near the ones present in Beijing, China which is said to be one of the most polluted in the world have gone down to a reasonable level and they are no longer living in such toxic conditions. Maybe the rest of the world can adopt a similar plan when the need arises.\n\nLastly, we have Bogota the capital of Columbia. According to Source 3, in Bogota, there is a program in place that banned all motor transportation except for public transit and taxis for a day. In a city of seven milion the need for transportation is pretty high but the citizens who participated managed without a hitch by using other means of tranportation such as by bicycle. This event is part of a long campaign designed to promote smog reduction and alternative means of transport. The campaign has also seen the construction of 118 miles of bicycle paths throughout the city. The city's culture has had no major trouble adapting to the change and places of commerce and recreation have begun to crop up to facilitate the change of pace.\n\nAll of this change is beginning to affect our own country as the government is taking notes from the success of these campaigns happening in other countries. According to Source four, studies show that we are seeing a reduction in the ammount of people buying automobiles and earning drivers licences. Is this because of choice or is it because of Americans not having access to enough money to buy new cars? According to the author of this article, Elisabeth Rosenthal, we are seeing the end of the Car Culture. With this thought in mind, which side will you stand with when it is time to decide our future?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because you will know how the students emotions for that day, if the student is bored with an assignment and finally the computer can fix the assignment to bring the students attention back in. This software was created by profesor Thomas Huang and colabrated with profesor Nicu Sebe. They tested this software out on the painting Mona Lisa. You may be wondering how is this\n\nall done by a computer. The software compares your face to a straight face that is programmed into the computer. This straigh face contains the fourty-four major muscles in the human face. This software can also help teachers know how to approach the student each and everyday.\n\nWith teachers being able to know how a student is feeling each day is a huge deal. No child or adult will have the same emotion everyday in their life. In paragraph six, it states that \"Most human communication is nonverbal.\" Most of the time when someone is upset or something is bothering them, they will not talk to someone about it due to them wanting to keep it privite. Also if the teacher can find that something is going on with the student not knowing, the teacher will know how to approach that student without making them more irritable or just simple make them unease. This software can also make a student more intrested in an atticle if they were to get bored.\n\nStudents all over the world seem to get bored with an assignment at one point in a school day. Well this software can make changes to the online assignment. For exaomple in paragraph six, it states the software can detect if a student is getting confused or bored with the assignment. When being able to find out if students are getting bored or confused, the teacher can make adjustments for them and help them out. Bring students attention to school is a big deal. With that, the software then an make the video or whatever assignment they are working on more of a video game.\n\nThere are many softwares that are out there that make learning more fun for students and adults. But there are some that are boring to others. This facial emotion software can make things not so boring. This software has abilities to detect if you are bored or just simply confused. Then the software will help you out by making it more fun or understandable. For example,if you are watching a video about surgery amd you are getting bored, the software will make it like a video game to bring your attention back into the video.\n\nUsing technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because you will know how the students emtions for that day, if the student is bored with an assignment and finally the computer can fix the assignment to bring the students attention back in. The software can change a childs day and help teacher know how to interact with that particular person. But it is sad to say if you want this on your home computer, it can not happen becuase basic computers can not support the software.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One day uncle took point go roller The line long waited least hours Time went slowly finally got After went thrill took hour half", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some scientists say this face on mars was created by aliens. Other scientist say this face was created by a \"natural landform\". Maybe how the rock was laying the shadows could of made the eyes, nose, and mouth? It could be another \"Martian mesa\"? It was kind of hard to find good clues about this face. There are so many ways this rock or face could of been created!\n\nHere are some clues why aliens didn't make this face. There were no other alien markings anywhere else. No other strange faces were found on this planet. Scientists think its just another \"Martian mesa it was common enough around Cydonia\". They believe its just a shadow that strangly made a face. From all these types of clues there is no real evidece that it could of been an alien.\n\nLater though scientist kept going back to the face. \"Web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing . . . a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\" This just proved that there were no aliens involved with this face. Scientists had a great camera that took very good detailed pictures. They started to look at the Face very carefully.\n\nAfter doing a lot of research. Studying the face so many times and also going back to get more pictures. Checking the latest updated web site that had the face picture. Scientist proved that it was just a \"Martian equivalent off a butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West. Even though it was a lot of hard work they were glad to finally figure out what that face was. \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho,\" says Garvin.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Whereas the construction of parks and squares in cities and towns makes them more conducive places for residents, I disagree that all cities should be the same standard and their backgrounds should be taken into account. \r\n\r\nIt is clear that public spaces provide rooms for urban residents to unwind and rewind. Instead of being surrounded by concrete jungles, residents could have some spaces in the park to release their stress and recharge their batteries. For instance, after completing a laborious task, they can take a stroll or jog in the park, while enjoying the natural scenery. This allows them to temporarily forget about their hectic workload. In contrast, if there are not enough outdoor public spaces for residents, many of them will be overstressed by their work. \r\n\r\nHowever, I argue that not all cities and towns should construct outdoor public areas as there are more priorities that require governments’ attention. Other issues like education disparity, unemployment and poverty are directly linked to the quality of life of the residents. Therefore, governments of cities that are plagued by these issues should address these issues first before allocating funds to build more public areas. India, for example, some of its cities are impoverished and millions of its people are living below the poverty line. For these cities, before governments could lift their people out of poverty, they should not spend their budget on building public spaces like parks and gardens.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although outdoor public areas are crucial in urban areas as it offers a place for inhabitors to relax, I believe that not all cities should spend their funds on constructing public spaces, they should concentrate on ameliorating the life of their residents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever thought about driverless cars? Well I have, to many things can go wrong. One is the car does not have eyes. It would also be boring just wacthing the road. Many people would fall asleep instanted of being ready to drive when the driverless car can't. So I strongly disagree with driverless cars world wide.\n\nFirst of all, the car can not see, it only has senors. As it states in the text, .... \"they need a whole lot of senors.\" For example, lets say a bird flys past the front senor the car is automuclly going to slam on the brakes. If a human decides to drive that day, it is going to run into the back of the driverless car.\n\nSecondly, it takes all the joy away from turning 16 and getting your liecense. For many kids, like me I can not wait till I can drive by myslef. Just thinking about makes me happy, and also not needing to ask for rides anymore that will be great for most kids.\n\nLastly, As it states in the story, \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themsleves, but all are desinged to notify the driver when the road ahead requries human skills.\" All that I am getting at, is that prople can fall asleep and not wake up when the car needs the driver to.\n\nThese are my reasons way the diverless car is a bad idea in eyes. Hopefully you can take these reason and not contiue with driverless cars. Thank you for reading my statements and have a great day.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The bar charts show the amount of music albums purchased by British people with different age range and sexes. Three different types of music are in focus namely pop, rock and classical music.\nOverall, we can see that people between 25-34 has the highest purchasing power, standing over 31 per cent in pop, 29 per cent in rock, and 17 per cent in classical music. Meanwhile male listeners and British in the age of 16-24 also contribute greatly in pop and rock music, with approximately 28 and 31 per cent and 30 and 32 per cent respectively. female is considered a moderate consumer, accounted for 29, 25, and 7 per cent in pop, rock and classical music respectively.\nPeople between 35-44 seems to share demand between pop and rock rather than classical, yet also can be seen having the least interests in buying music albums, with less than 20 per cent in overall. Surprisingly, despite having the least consumption in pop and rock music, with 10 per cent and less, the elderly of over 45+ is more into classical music which contributes over 20 per cent.\nTo sum up, pop and rock music are seen as the most popular music ganre among people in the age from 16 to 44, both male and female. Meanwhile, classical music is mostly listened by people who are 45 and above. Though, the trend of people in the 25-34 consuming more of classical music can be expected more.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The development of technological devices has an in-deep impacts in our modern life. This is believed to be widen the disparity between the weathy and the poor, whereas others think is against. I also agree with those who consider that this gap is the causes of technology.\r\n\r\nGranted, there are powerful reasons to make life more convinient and fulfilled for those who own the electronic equipment. Firstly, the lastest invention like smart phone encourages people who can catch up with the information via internet or Wi-fi. For instance, the director or the blue-color worker have been the same way to check daily duties througout the email or social networks such as Zalo or Twitter. Another reason is that the internet which is widely free in public departures to create people to broaden knowledge whenever they set up. Both students who raised in the less conditional family as well as the rich kids can register the online course with the reasonable fee.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, I also believe that the drawbacks of these innovations in the specific fields. Obviously, it can be seen in medical treatment which has the high-cost expenduture in the same decease like cancer or hopeless case. Therefore, the people who can afford the hospital fees may have been cured with the expensive drug and costly caretakes. In contrast, the people without money, who worry about the need for day-to-day life cost, how can they pick up their mind about these issues. The other problem is that these devices are producted by many brands with a plenty of prices from low to high. Its qualities are associated with its cost. For example, BMW car which is compared with KIA Morning car, that is not pratical. \r\n\r\nIn summary, I would argue that the advantages of this improvement, although this can brigde the gap between the rich folk and the poor. However, that can lead to the wide distance in community because of this frequency separation in each products.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Increasing the cost of fuel to decrease environmental pollution is a popular idea in many countries. In my opinion, while higher fuel costs may have certain effects, there are numerous methods to improve the environment. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there are certain reasons why increasing the cost of fuel is beneficial. First, this may help reduce air pollution from vehicles. This is mainly because if the cost of fuel rises, people will use fewer personal vehicles. As a result, emissions from vehicles may decrease. For example, during the Covid-19 pandemic, people rarely use vehicles, so air pollution is significantly reduced. Second, the amount of pollution from many factories may fall. The main reason is that when the price of fuels increases, many factories will use different power sources which are environmentally friendly such as solar energy or wind power.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the government should adopt other methods to resolve environmental issues. To begin with, investing in public transport may be an effective way. When the public transport system is developed and modern, more people will use public transport. Therefore, the problem of air pollution may be lessened. Moreover, planting new forests and protecting current ones also help protect the environment. Every year, trees absorb a large amount of carbon dioxide and release oxygen into the environment. Also, the air may be fresh and conditioned by trees. Therefore, people should exploit forests rationally and prevent forest fires. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although increasing the cost of fuel has a lot of benefits, the government should care about different factors affecting the environment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Winter Hibiscus Minfong Ho author ends story paragraph show meaningful flower Saeng The text stated CAPS garden Saeng dig hole carefully lowered winter Hibiscus This shows reader meaningful Saeng plant garden Also conclusion statement help reader understand affection new country Also conclusion paragraph shows comfort time disappointment In story said Its flowers nt pretty s strong enough make cold months winter hibiscus This also shows connection Saeng flower helps everything", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Emotions are the buildings within a city. Without emotions humans woulnd not be what they are supposed to be. People show emotions usually theough Tone, experssions, and body language. These signs help other now how that person is feeling in the current situation. Dr. Huang at the Beckman Institute has created software which can read human experssions on the face and then give them variables. Some see the new software as usable in a classroom enviroment, saying it will help modify lessons based on student emotions shown in the class. The biggest problems with this software is that it cant tell if emotions are because of the lesson, it cant tell what students would prefer, and it cant judge situations' as well as a human Instructor can. These problems make the use of this software in classrooms as unessecary and flawd, as human teachers are a cheaper and stable alternative.\n\nOne of the major points made by the article is that the program could help change lessons, by using the children emotions as indicators. This idea is flawed. Children and especiallt teenagers have to deal with more than just school lessons on a daily basis. Emotions of these children could be caused by events that happened in the past or even events that happen in the future. Lets say most of the children in class just got back from rescess and are now tired. The computer program might read this as the children are very bored by the lesson, when in reality they are trying to relax. This context is something a program cant be easily coded for. Context is important for humans to see. If a Human sees his friend after a funeral they both intended and looks tired, then that person could inferance it was because of the funeral. Unfortuantely a computer will not understand this and percieve this as Boredom caused by the lesson instead. School is one of the most emotional enviroment a person will have ot live through and a computer program does not understand this.\n\nChildren do not learn all at the same pace, and many learn from different ways. Some children learn better by lisinging to a lesson audio, some learn better by seeing whats being taught in reality, sme just learn better by reading it straight out of a book. These different variations of learning can not be analysed by facial recongnition. Teachers are supposed to learn what the strengths and weaknessses are of each student, so that they can build there lessons around thoughs streagths and leave out the weaknesses. The FACS program can not tell how students learn just their reactions. This will create problems between the progrman and the students. If a student feels like the program is intentionaly picking things the student cant do, then they will give up trying to work with the program which could hurt those childrens' future. The program itslef can not tell what an alternative would be by facial features. Just because a student seems bored dosent mean that want to be more hands on, maybe it means that student want's to see what the textbook has to say. Reality serves, that a program making a lucky guess wont help improve how students feel about their lessosn's.\n\nHumans now how to teach Humans. Humans have taught each other everything since the dawn of all. Recently this questioning of 'can robots and computers do it better\" has become more popular. Now children are learning through computers at a alarming rate, and this has become popular because of the pain of emotions in learning. The same thing that this program reads, drives young people from learning with other, because they dont want to deal with the emotional enviroment of schools. FACS itslef cant help students be more involved with students it can only be a minor tool used. But even then it will not work as intended. Things happen and a progam cant be used for learning. Teachers are trained and educated in how to teach others. They can see human emotions because they are Human, they dont need computer programes for that. As computers become more important in how people learn about their world. They must be used as a tool and not a teacher itself. No program can replace what thousand of years has already proved. That Humans can teach Humans.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In society today us humans often have trouble with reading another person's emotions, we tend to think the person is happy when they're truly mad. Prof. Thomas Huang, of the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois, has made a computer software with a feature able to scan one's face and present its facial expressions. Although this idea may seem like a technological breakthrough, think of the pros and the cons. The disadvantages out-weigh the benefits in this idea, thinking you know one's emotions because of a machine created by imperfect humans does not mean it is one hundred percent correct.\n\nComputers will never be humans, they will never have the human qualities we have. Thomas says \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" (D'Alto 6). What if the student isnt really bored like the machine thinks? The machine will make a false adjustment that could do the complete opposite of what the kids wanted. Some deceitful kids could out-smart the machine and fake boredom all the time to make the machine adjust and change everything. Not only that, different kids won't have the same emotion. If half the class is bored and half is having fun, what will the machine do then?\n\nAlthough Thomas thinks he knows every expression and how to get anyone's true expressions, he is mistaken. All humans have different shapes, sizes, colors, and abilities. This machine will never be able to guess true emotions. Humans express things in totally opposite ways. Altough Mona Lise looks happy in the picture, she could really be faking it. The only correct way to know one's true emotions is not by calculating percentages with a machine, its by expressing your feelings to one another. I can see what's going on in this world, we rely and dwell on technology. As a planet we really do not have enough good quality human interactions, so why improve communication between people and computers as thomas says. Humans are constantly competing and at war, adding this technology will just be giving humans excuses and false assumptions. We should start on using technology to improve human interactions instead of using technology to improve our human interactions.\n\nBasing a decision off of an imperfect machine will get you nowhere but making false assumptions and incorrect decisions. Not everyone is the same, nor will they ever be. Expressing your true feelings through words is better than a machine thinking someone feels a certain way. Also, not everyone feels the same way and this machine will cause trouble if a person purposely changes a way they look. This idea will never work because us humans are not all nice people. Men and women need to work on communicating with other humans and not technology. Countries are at war and some people are worrying about creating technology to better computer and human communication. Differences, deception, irresponsibility and disrespectfulness amongst humans are why this idea of reading one's emotions will never work and will constantly make errors leading to a downfall in our society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We ve heard songs radio censored constant beeps bad words ve seen shows movies way Books magazines censored way either blocking offensive language replacing letters astrics Numerous amounts people see harm support others think big deal eventually people going end seeing bad things anyway If author musician director would nt want work seen published originally written Most people would get angry work edited They want work heard sometimes editing disrespectful things cause message understood clear would certain words This also cause original message completely missed work could end meaning something totally different originally supposed mean However another question arises If parent would want kids see inappropriate scenes movies hear harsh words music Most would want strongly encourage editing things children young hear understand Eventually though kids going faced things In conclusion cenorship ignored Children going end hearing bad words seeing inappropriate things reading offensive passages books magazines Censoring things mess original message brought attention anger many authors musicians There loads harsh things world impossible edit", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With urbanisation, the population in cities is growing fast and so is the housing crisis, which brings along many other problems. Some argue that only government is the appropriate authority to deal with this rising problem. I strongly agree with this argument as governments can solve this growing issue by various steps, such as restricting new landed residential housing by encouraging vertical apartment buildings and gradually expanding cities.\n\nFirst and foremost, the government is the right party to resolve this housing crisis issue by discouraging the building of new landed houses and encouraging vertical multi-storey apartment living with proper planning and infrastructure to deal with this space crunch. For example, Singapore and Hong Kong are cities on islands and they have proven to solve this crisis for their citizens by vertically building thousands of high-floor flats. These cities have proved to incorporate the best infrastructure for their ever-growing population by building multi-story apartments rather than new houses, which has resulted in economically affordable housing for their citizens in big cities. Further, to help the situation, the government can extend highways to help commuters access the cities in a country easily. This high level of planning can only be done by the government to help solve accommodation shortages for their citizenry.\n\nSecondly, the government can help this situation by expanding cities and creating more residential properties on the outskirts of cities. In Noida, for instance, a fast-growing city in India, the housing development board has continuously helped accommodate the growing population by building more residential properties on the outskirts of the city which eventually became part of it and built metros and highways for commuters to make it easily accessible. Hence, this helped in controlling growing cramping and accommodation problems for their locals. \n\nIn conclusion, it is clear that the government has a big role to play as an ultimate authority by taking appropriate measures to create highly planned inner-by city development and well-designed infrastructure to accommodate the growing needs of their citizens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Natrual land forms are all over earth some looking like common things or objects they of course happen natrualy. So that means other planets have natrual landforms that look like a thing or object such as a face. Nasa has taken scans and pictures using the camera's absolute maximum resolution. Meaning they have gotten a full survey of the whole area looking if there was any sign of life that could have created the Mars face. But none were found meaning there is no alien civilization on Mars. It doesn't have to be created by aliens and it probably wasn't but its not wrong to imagine how it was created. But to just know the truth that it is a natrual landform intead of an alien monument. If it was an old alien monument Nasa wouldn't try to cover it up. They would be trying to get funds for taking more trips to actually find more stuff about the mars face instead of taking differnt scans and pictures. This does now say that there are no aliens or any civilization on mars or we would know by now about them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this concurrent world, it is undoubtedly true that children should learn art subject in their school. While, some people believe that learning art subject is a waste of time and money. This essay is in support of former opinion and shall discuss both sides of arguments with reliable illustration before presenting a logical conclusion.\r\nLately, education gives people knowledge and skills. All subjects are highly important for students and they always try to learn all subjects. These days, art is an essential subject at school because, some students are not interested in studying and they can’t get good marks appropriately, those children learn art in their school time. Learning art is necessary for students because of some reasons. Firstly, art subject including drawing, music, animation, graphics, artistic design, and computer. When children fill bored that time, they should listen some music and make some paintings on natural beauty. Art is much needed for their Physical growth and the can learn practical life skills such as: teamwork, planning and generate new ideas. Such creative and artistic activities are good and beneficial for students.\r\nMoreover, learning art is not a waste of money but it’s a needed for students because some students don’t have some skills such as: patients, creativity and many more. If, they learn art than they easily express their love and emotions for their parents by creating a birthday card and some homemade gifts using their creativity. They get relaxation from such creative and artistic activities. Sometimes, some children are interested in make natural beauty paintings so, they should always focus on their paintings and also they make their bright future. \r\nHowever, art is an unnecessary for students because some parents don’t have more money therefore, their children are studying in big school and their parents pay higher fees than school also teach art such as : music and drawing classes, that's a bad thing and also some parents do hard work and pay higher fees in their child’s school but their children might be wasting their parents money and time. Some children are not interested in art therefore, their class teachers forced to attend art classes. So, children waste their important time in art and they can’t get good result.\r\nTo conclude, art is important for the child’s growth and they easily learn new important skills and they also make a bright future. So, schools should provide art classes and students always attend art classes and learn new life skills.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Architects builders working building docking platform top Empire State Building dirigibles faced many obstacles The first problem builders came across possibility building s framework potentially strong enough support dirigible s weight It said paragraph nine stress dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation risky Another obstacle builder s came across nature dirigibles used hydrogen rather helium feared winds top building would intensely violent destroyed flammable gas The next obstacle builders faced public safety There existing law airships flying low urban areas dirigibles could approach dock area sake citizens New York All problems eventually led idea using mooring mast shelved", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars are not the most important thing in our lives. Although cars are helpful, not having one can help you a lot in the long run. Having a car causes so much stress worrying about the traffic if you're going to be late for work or school, gas prices are not as low as people would like. If you had to walk everywhere or ride your bike, you could be getting a lot of exercise from it. People think having a car is so important but they dont see the positive side to it.\n\nMany people stress out if they are not going to make it to work on time because of traffic, I know that I dont make it to school on time because of all the traffic trying to get into my school is horrible. Instead of stressing out, you can just go on a calm walk or bike ride to your destination. In the article written by, Elisabeth Rosenthal, there is a quote from Heidrun Walter saying, \"when I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way,\" because they had banned cars in his city. You can always find an alternative way of getting to where you need to go. If someone has a meeting to go to, they can always use the alternative of the Internet if they cant get their in time or the weather is not the best. Instead of stressing out about driving, you can walk to your destination and save money from not paying for gas.\n\nWe all know that gas prices are high and out of our budget. They've reached four dollars, that's insane! Why would anyone want to spend that money if they don't have to. There is a simple solution on saving your money that you waste on gas, and that is walking or riding your bike. Some people can afford the prices of gas but others are struggling in the economy but are to lazy to walk, nobody wants to get exercise so they drive everywhere.\n\nBanning cars on the street is a good way to help people get exercise. If they know they can't drive, they would obviously walk or take a bike because they have places to be. It would be an effective way to get people to stop being lazy and helping their health. Some people would probably get frustrated because they have to walk everywhere but it's only helping them.\n\nWalking or riding a bike is a good opportunity to realize the beauty of life without stressing out over bad drivers or traffic, saving money, and getting exercise. Most people would think banning cars on the street is a good idea for those few reasons. I know that it is super effective although some people may not see it until it actually changes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I talk view computers help people many people say kids adults spending much time My first views subject computers becoming advanced time goes These past years computer company s making enormous strides allowing people allmost everything This good bad A computer tool good feature home It great people small business easily go online update somthing yoou want changed store designing colorful posters put windows store increase business catch peoples eye You also able book flights weeks even months even go airfort This good busy travel lot You go website called go anywhere vin world zoom landmark great Computers also improve hand eye coordination type Typing important skill master good typer things much efficient would paper Some even memorize key board even look Computers also great communication relatives far away another state even country easily talk online service use talk person These things computer On hand many say people spending much time computers getting outside execise spending enough time family I agree case ways I know friends average six hours day computers much also parents become busy work computers spending time kids Some kids became addicted computers might become unhealthy become obease sitting much something happen I hope learned little bit good bad computers important computer much important feature used correctly", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today's market, many corporations emphasize their use of recent technologies and methods to produce innovative goods. While the efficiency of these new products may not always be absolute, this essay contends that they generally prove more effective than older counterparts, a trend driven by both consumer preferences and societal benefits.\r\n\r\nTo begin, consumers inherently gravitate towards new products, believing them to offer superior results compared to outdated alternatives. For instance, the recent launch of Versace's Sunscreen in January 2024 exemplifies this trend. Marketed as not only harmless but also capable of protecting the skin against harmful sun emissions, this product likely incorporates the latest advancements in technology and production methods.\r\n\r\nMoreover, the relentless pursuit of innovation by businesses deserves commendation, particularly when aimed at societal advancement rather than solely economic gains. Pharmaceutical companies worldwide are actively exploring new methods to develop more effective treatments for debilitating illnesses like cancer and osteoporosis. The commitment of these companies to leveraging innovation for enhanced efficiency in treating various ailments is both admirable and beneficial to society.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while the prevalence of deceptive advertisements may pose challenges, the overall trend suggests that humanity stands to benefit from the continued advancement of new products. By prioritizing innovation and societal well-being, businesses can contribute to a future where the adoption of novel technologies and methods leads to tangible improvements in our lives", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit setting affects story much many reasons First summer hot Also desert west warm climate already Third civilization shortcut follows way author get water replenish body This features setting affect cyclist story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many things that can help using FACS (Facial Action Coding System) invention. This new software can help you identify the emotions a person was going through in a picture. This invention can also be seen as bad, some people might not want to be seen with there emotions or looked at diiferently with those emotions. So is this a good invention, or not?\n\nThe new software on the computer is called FACS or Facial Action Coding System. Where it basically reads your face through a picture, and it uses the \"44 major muscles in your face\" to identify what emotions you are feeling. This invention can be good because of theropy if a kid is depressed all the theropist has to do is scan his face and see what his emotions are.\n\nThis software is not all good, there are aspects of the FACS that can be rather imprudent on a persons privacy.\n\nFor example if someone takes a picture of a person without consent they can see what emotions they are feeling. There is also that is a person can change how their results end up as, for example if you smile while taking the picture for the test it will show happiness as one of the emotions if you are sad.\n\nIn conclusion there are both positives and negatives towards the Facial Action Coding System. From helping people in theropy, to stalking a stranger, or faking your emotions for better results.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Should one's taxes go towards funding useless and pointless projects? Most people agree that it is awful when their taxes go into unnecessary and meaningless projects. This is exactly what they are getting with the attempts at exploring Venus. The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy persuit despite the dangers it presents; however, they do not adequately give reasons as to why the exporation of Venus is viable. The author fails to give reasoning as to how studying Venus benefits humanity, how research is progressing, or why Venus is a better choice than other planets.\n\nThe author of this article does not give adequate reasoning as to why studying this planet is prouctive for humanity. Throughout the article, the author claims that scientists want to study the planet because it is most like Earth density wise. While it is most like Earth's density, it is not like Earth in so many ways. Venus is a lot more dangerous and deadly when compared to Earth. It has thick, poisonus gas clouds. It also has a bailing surface. While in the past it was much like Earth, currently is is much different. The similarities between Venus and Earth are very few, and that makes Venus less desirable to study. The author also does not give examples of how examining the rocks, liquids, or metals could progress humanity.\n\nThe author does not contribute any major discoveries for the Venus projects. There are several examples in the article where the author states a new idea that scientists have for getting to Venus. However, most of these ideas are not solid enough. There has not been enough of a technological breakthrough for NASA to fund another trip to Venus. The text states, \"...not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.\" This reinstates the point that, while there have been ideas, none of them are solid enough for a trip to Venus. If no signifigant progress has been made in 3 decades, why should NASA continue to fund the project?\n\nThe article does not make a claim as to why Venus is a better choice than any other planet. In the second paragraph, the author states numorous challenges to exploring Venus, but he does not list the disadvantages to studying a planet like Mars. According to the article, both of the planets are fairly close to Earth. At some points, Mars is even closer than Venus. This would make it easier to travel to Mars. It also does not appear as if Mars has even close to the same difficulties that Venus has, making it a safer option. It would also mean that Mars has a higher chance at colonization.\n\nWhile this article provides many examples on why we should study Venus despite it's challenges, it does not do so in an adequate way. There are many glaring problems and reasonings that are just not addressed in this article. The author does not back up why the planet is so important, it's worth to humanity, or the scientific breakthoughs that warrent the project continuing. Due to those reasons, the author does not thouroughly support their idea that Venus is worthy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea of driverless cars would be really cool but at the same time it would be pretty reckless. Anything can happen to the car you could have an accident, and it could lead to death. But at the same time it would be cool to not have to drive on your own. You would have more time to multi-task in the car.\n\nFirst reason the whole idea of growing up is, getting a job and learning how to drive. As a teenager you want to learn how to drive, so you can have more freedom to go where you want and when you want. With driverless cars you won't be able to have that experience. In majority I believe teens do want to learn how to do something on their own, like learning how to drive. Teenagers want to go places without always having their parents drop them or pick them up from places, they want freedom.\n\nBut with freedom comes responsibility which is really important for a teen's parents. A parent wants their teen to obtain responsibility for their actions. For example: a teen is learning how to drive and his father is teaching him how. That teen will learn how to follow instructions, which can help him in school and later in life. Another example is: lets say a teen has already gotten his/her drivers license and now he can drive on his own account. This teen can help around the house and go grocery shopping when his parents are too busy to go out. This teaches teenagers responsibility that they need to know later.\n\nLastly no one knows for a fact that these driverless cars can really work. Yes, you can test them and they might work at that place in time but that doesn't always guarantee that it won't happen ever. Somebody can be driving and perhaps the car doesn't respond on time and it crashes into another car. You can get into serious accidents, and who is to blame for that? Would it be your fault or would it be the companies fault, there really isn't a way to know.\n\nIn conclusion I believe that driverless cars would not be such a great idea because, anything can happen and you never know. There could be accidents or deaths. Someone learning how to drive may not have the experience of learning how to. Driverless cars would be cool but it can also be pretty lazy, you can get lazy and distracted easily, and not concentrate on the road ahead of you. We will just have to wait and see if in 2020 we will have driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local Newspaper I believe computers great help society I explain thoughts ideas I hope agree reading For starters I would like say first subject communication computers allow us talk everyday folks folks around world There many ways talk text speech webcam like talk hundreds communication cients servers online usually always able someone Secondly I would like say computers great way creation On computer program design presentations documents drawings maps graphs almost anything put mind virtually made You gather information servers websites create learn lot everyday computer I fisned There reading book sites web This gives opprotunity web searcher vast ammount information allow learn alot every day life Finaly I would like say computers wide range entertennent There many choose like videos movies games anything suitable user users computer On game user talk friends game CAPS example online game These kinds games skyrocket entertennent lovers vast ammount enjoyment endure Another type entertennent videos people watch videos movies video website database thousands millions videos movies Whatever user wants text click away The last type entertennent allow user daily life take friends family relatives To sum I would like tell Local news paper agree computers good thing society Please reread pick right", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is believed by some that trading activities between nations should not be restricted by the government. Although I understand that people are worried about the unfairness it may bring, I reckon sometimes government controls are essential and there is no other choice.\r\n\r\nPeople who agree with the statement support the free economy, which is a concept agreed upon by most countries nowadays, that there should not be any restriction by the authorities on the market. The trading activities are solely based on demand and supply, which would naturally lead to equilibrium. However, if the government put its hands in the market, people aware that it might cause unfairness because policies would never benefit or burden every stakeholder. \r\n\r\nNevertheless, I believe some regulations on exports are necessary in some cases. If a country failed on a commitment between nations, sanctions could be an effective way of punishment. Take the carbon emission goals among some countries as an example, a country would be much more motivated to monitor industrial activities to meet the target if they will have to bear the severe economic losses brought by a sanction of goods. On top of that, government intervention in international trade is necessary to stabilize the currency value and local economy. The competition between America and China is a typical example. America had tried to ban various types of merchandise from China because the cheap products are overflowing into America, which caused a significant decrease in the value of the American dollar and unemployment in the society. There is no other way than national involvement to solve these problems. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, restrictions on exports of goods contradicted the idea of a free economy but it is inevitable in some situations when it comes to cooperation between different countries and when the trades between countries are imbalanced.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal, while on the other hand, there is some people think that other typs of progress like military, envirement,education..etc, are equally important for a country.\nBefore we start discuss both these views. we have to know the meaning of the economic, you dear reader might know the general meaning but do you have any idea about what is the deep meaning of the economic. lets take a short tour.\nWhen someone says \"economic\" he often means any thing realted to money, banks, industries, big companies, anything that making money its under economic, even when you are a tourist in somewhere in whole world you making the economic in the country that you live in for a few days go up.\nGoverements argue that economic is very important than other for a list of reasons, lets know about some of them.\n- They think if everything is related to economy then it most be more important than anything els.\n- As the economy is almost ruling everything. so if they focous on the country's economy any other problem will be solved directly.\nNow we know governments opinion, shall we beagan to look at the oposite view?\n- People who take the other side, think that when the government works only on the economy, the education and the other important things will be going down.\n- when the other thing going down the economy will not be survaivd either.\nOver all the, and to show you my own view. i think government should work on economy and the other in equal way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The bar charts illustrate five different methods of how the Republic of Korea, Sweden, and the UK deal with waste products. The five methods are recycling, underground, incineration, chemical treatment, and dumping at sea.\noverall, recycling is way more in Korea while underground dumping took first place in both Sweden and the UK.\nFirst, Morethan two third of the waste is recycled in Korea while incineration is more than half in Sweden. Korea dumps 22% under the ground and incinerated less than 10%. Sweden, on the other hand, recycled a quarter of its waste but incinerated a fifth of the garbage.\nSecond, the UK dumps most of its waste under the ground incinerating only 2%. Chemical treatment and dumping at sea both share 8% of the UK's waste product.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Houses are the place that people live which is meaningful for them. Some of the people take interest on realize the story or history of the houses where people live in. In my opinion, there are some reasons for people to figure out the history of their home with some methods. \r\n\r\n Most of human have a sense of belonging of where they from or where they begin. Similar to people learning history of hometown or country, people are curious about everything close to them. Due to houses are the place that people start up and come from, so people willing to spent time on understand the detail of their home. To be more specific, it is common to see there were lots of impolite architect are building the house with shoddy work and use inferior materials. It actually affected a lot to safety of living which is pretty important to notice about. In order to have satisfied place to live, it is necessary for people to understand how the building come from. \r\n\r\nTo obtain the information of the house must ask someone who take part in the manufacture of the house without doubt. While the house was building, parents or architect are the person who make lots of decision and choice on the shape or elements of the house, no one is clear than they of this. If the house where people live in is a symbolic building of the city, it is more easily to figure out the process and story of the building form public organization or websites on internet. \r\n\r\n\tHouses are meaningful for most of people. People are interested in the place that they lived in are normal phenomenon, some basic methods help them to understand the details of the building.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local Newspaper I think computers exellent benefit people First family friends communicate far distance Secondly typing computer gives people good hand eye cordnation Thirdly give people ability learn faraway places Lastly gives student chance research topic learning Well think Researcher said almost family s live faraway eachother computers give ability familys communicate wether aim webcam chat Also familys live faraway use computer comunicate Hand eye cordination people type without looking people really slow Typing computer give great hand eye cordination Good hand eye cordination could used many things For example playing sports even simple task like throwing something trash Lastly ever wanted learn place faraway live ever researched topic school Well I Computer give people ability learn places faraway For example third grade I research hammer head sharks Do nt teacher always ask student look word topic computer As I said I think computers benifit people I hope three reasons contacting family friend hand eye cordnation lastly researching made think good thing Thank taking time read I say I hope take concideration", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this day and age, as the more consumer goods are manufactured, the more damage has been inflicted on the environment. This essay will discuss some of the main reasons that cause this problem such as discharging the factory wastes to the environment and increasing the usage of single-use materials which are harmful to nature. As for some solutions to this problem, imposing strict laws related to discharging wastes and promoting the use of echo-friendlier materials can be mentioned.\n\nFactories use raw materials to manufacture any type of goods that are needed for the people. Producing always has some wastes and as production is increased, there will be more swages and toxic wastes released in nature. These chemical by-products from manufacturing can harm both marine and terrestrial animals and also can be harmful to any kind of plant and tree. The increase in demand and usage of single-use goods is another reason for this problem. These days, most people struggle with hectic life routines which lead them to prefer using single-use material as a time-saving choice in different situations. For instance, if someone wants to throw a party, he or she will choose to use disposable tableware rather than cutlery. Despite the short lifespan of these products, they will remain as wastes in nature for hundreds of years which may lead earth to a huge landfill and put all species in danger.\n\nThat said, certain measures could be taken to decrease the harm to the environment while the manufacturing of goods is increasing. First, governments should impose strict laws for factories related to the ways in which wastes are discharged. For instance, if the wastes of a factory are more than a defined and acceptable one, they should be punished and be forced to pay for the loss. Second, manufacturers should make eco-friendlier goods and also encourage people to use these types of products. As a good step toward this solution, Starbucks has made reusable paper and bamboo mugs that are used instead of plastic ones. \n\nAll things considered, recently, there are some works done by humans which cause harm to the nature, such as increasing the amount of consumer goods production. This essay discussed two main reasons for this problem, which included how wastes were abandoned in nature and the increase in the usage of single-use materials. Also, as for solutions to this problem, having laws for how to dispose the factory sewage and encouraging society to use the organic materials were suggested.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author s mood grateful good mood throughout memoir The author loved everything memory s For example love cooking still today I eternally gratefu The author shows good mood saying eternally grateful His mood also appreciative For example They came selflessly many immigrants give children better life even though meant leaving behind families The author thankful appreciative parents came United States Cuba He thanked many times The author also shows gratefulness end passage For example I always grateful parents love sacrifice The authors parents bought house big enough family mood grateful due parents Lastly authors mood thankful For example It I learned real definition family The author shows learns family thankful parents That s authors mood", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Should non-profit organization support anybody around the world who needs help, or to local people only? It is a highly debatable question. While some people choose their own country’s citizens, I believe that the charity organization should support anyperson who needs attention without being worried about their location.\r\n\r\nThe opponent side of donation to all people may be argued on the based of the assumption that the charity fund can be used to provide extra facilies to their local community. In other words, Instead of spending money on other countries, it can be used to construct different leisure facilities. For example, playgrounds, which will provide enough space for children to play in the current congested city areas. Another benefit is that charity sponsharship can be utilised to build a future fund to use in any critical situation for instance, Tsunami. Thus, whenever one country requires huge fund to save life of their people in such circumstances, saved fund in the past can be useful.\r\n\r\nOn the other side, I believe, the kindness of supporting to needy people from around the globe by non-profit organizations can be beneficial in a number of ways. Firstly, to improve the relation between different countries. As, thesedays, negative environment among various nations has been created by politics, such afforts can be helpful to decrease long-term impact. The next benefit is to stop any pandemic diesease entering into own nation. Because of possiblity of several viruses can be easily transmited from person to person, it is important to reduce its effect by helping to the global level.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, Instead of asking any non-profit firm to cover only the native country by reserving the fund or extra facilities, in my opinion, they should consider the importance of relations among various countries and any long term issues.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am both for and against the \"Driveress Cars.\" Driverless cars can be both good and bad at the same time. Good reasons are you wouldn't have to do that much work on driving the car. But bad reasons are that you can take over at any minute because you might be coming onto a constuction area or someone has wrecked. They are good because they still alert the drivers to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complication traffic, as said before (constuction). When it comes down to actually picking a side of against or for the car. I would have to go with against the driverless cars. Honestly, these cars can cause so much more wreaks then actually driving yourself. It might make things easier but it wouldn't be easy once you start driving the cars. It might look easy by reading about it but it could be so much diffrent.\n\nPositive aspects of the driverless cars would include all the sensors the car has in it to tell you whether or not something is popping up. The sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on wheels and can reduce the power from the engine creaing much better control a human driver can make. But is that is? Driverless cars aren't all the good. There are negative aspects of this car as well. The cars can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all cars are designed to notify the driver when the road requires human skills. Like, navigating through work areas, or around accidents. Which can be a negative aspect of it too.\n\nMore negative aspects are that the driver must pay attention to everything and anyhting at all times. The driver must stay alert while driving the \"Driverless Cars\" and be ready to take over when the situation gets to bad to where to car isn't able to do it itslef. Which can lead to mulitple wreaks. Would you rather be safe while driving a car on your own, or having to be worried all the time because you have to stay alert when driving the Driverless Cars? Your choice. If you want to stay safe and not have to worry as much. The cars thay run on gas, and the cars you can steer yourself is the way to go.\n\nEither way you can get into wreaks but that's not the point. My position on the driverless cars doesn't phase me. I don't think they are a big deal, the cars have both positive and negative aspects of it. I wouldn't want to drive in something that makes me worried all the time, or even drive something that I have to take over. \"While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver.\" When I read that it seems kind of iffy like that doesn't sound safe. I don't really think these cars would change the world exactly. It would make some difference but not a whole lot.\n\nDriverless cars cane seem good. But you can't look at all the good the car has you have to take a look at all the negative thing the car has as well. Every car will have something wrong with it and when you always have to be on the lookout for other drivers because you'll have to take over the car itself, that doesn't sound safe for anyone. When someone gets in a car wreak for instance, and you're driving the driverless car, when the person driving on the road in front of you gets in a wreak. You won't have time to stop, the driverless car doesn't know any better. Meaning right at that split second, you'll have to take over and make a decision fast. But your car can't act fast because you're not the one actually driving the car, it's driving by itself. So therefore, you'll get in a wreak also because you can't act fast enough. You're movements, and motions are quick enough. But you see, if you were in a normal car that you have to steer youself, you would be fine because you can stomp on the break pedal fast and be able to stop in time because you are alert. Driverless cars aren't safe. Take a minute to think about it and notice all the negative aspects of driving the driverless car. Once you take a minute and look at all the negative things, you'll realize how bad dirverless cars are. Drirverless cars are not safe; therefore, I am against them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez From Home The Blueprints Our lives author created many moods One mood Friendship parents kept arms open anyone needed help every neighbor hade They came together fun even different backrounds You hade make many Friends could help live healthy life Another mood created calm In house Passionate Cuban music air smelled traditionally Cuban This family Cuban wanted keep traditions make better environment The last mood harsh sacrifice Parents give lot like family friends job move And got start fresh take jobs could Find His parents life hard tried make good could For son It hard got great job", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is not valuable beacuse i don't think the technology can tell how someone is feelings 100 percent correct. Technology can't read humans minds nor humans face so i think the use of this technology is not valuable to read the emotional expressions of students. It won't be good for some people who want a private life feelings if the technology is showing how they feel every time they get happy or sad.\n\nTechnology are always not smart,technology can hurt humans too they're not always helpful. Just because you enjoy using it does'nt mean others do. I think that this technology to read emotional expressions of humans is bad to use well it's my oppion i don't know about others people but im pretty sure they'll agree with me.\n\nWhat if this technology brng harm to some people,its not a good idea to read people feelings some might like it but some might hate you. So i don't think this technology is valuable. It might be helpful to read students's emotional expressions but what if the students dont want that like they want they private feelings,they don't want to share with anyone only themself or maybe friends. Who want someone to going around and use technology to see what they feelings? Nobody.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Human is easily affected by outside factor and is curious about what relates to themselves. That’s the reason in recent years, there are many people are trying to explore the events happening in their living house past few years. \r\n\r\nFirst, the rising of TV shows, especially documentaries about the house with a special event which involves the war, the spirit story or famous person cause the curiosity of the owner house. In addition, nowadays, people prefer buying the old house which is transferred through many owners than the newly built house. The people start to follow the show and track the history in their place which not only makes them satisfy their wondering but also makes them feel safe to continuously live in this house or building. For example, the HBO TV show “Finding Ghost” create a wave of people who believe they are also living with spiritous power in their house, then people tried to contact the “ghost hunter” whom main characters in the shows to help them catch all wandered spirit or they will ask their neighbour who is living a long time in this area.\r\n\r\nIn addition, the exploration about their own house brings to people the certain knowledge and help them easily in re-construct or sell the house with the price they expect without waste money to the estate agency. It is quite a popular trending around the young owner, who want to change the house style with low cost and the only choice is doing re-construction by themselves. They need to understand the way their house was built and what the previous owner did with the house structure to help them have an effective strategy. It also saves them the cost to hire an external human resource. The information is normally accessed through the website about housing or the previous owners.\r\n\r\nThe interesting about the historical housing where people live to bring to people certain information and makes them feel more comfortable when living in their own homes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir proud happy matter One example mood showned excerpt family moves new apartment The narrator says My young parents created traditional Cuban home Passionate music filled air Here innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed formed backdrop life warm home This shows families proudenest cuban even though nt forget cuban traditional life food music They happy life You always proud explained excerpt", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Growing up as a kid having a teacher to teach isn't anymore normal than having a pencil to write with. Thinking about my children having a computer instead of a teacher seems less traditional and in my opinion less affective. With humans teaching humans, we are able to tell when something isn't right because we can relate to each others feelings and their standings on the topic. With a computer that isn't really an option.\n\nFor example, Nick D'Alto mentioned how the computer could calculate the Mona Lisa and show what percentage of feelings she is having. Another example given is when D'Alto mentions how it can be used to show whenever politicians and/or performers are not being truthful when they are speaking to the audience. Nick says that \"Dr. Huang's emotion algorithms are a different sort of Da Vinci Code.\" Nick is mentioning how the computer is able to read art and painted faces and if it continues, maybe our faces.\n\nConsidering that a computer showing us when somebody is feeling an emotion other than happiness may be good, I think we should be more focused on doing it ourselves and not using a machine for easy to use capabilities. Since the computer scans the faces muscles which isn't something people are really looking after when having a conversation on somebody's opinion.\n\nHowever, the computer provides great possibilities in the modern to future world. For example, when we made the lie detector test for obviously showing if someone is lying while answering a series of questions was a huge breakthrough. This computer could bring an even bigger outcome since it is reading mouth eye and other face muscles. \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal.\" Dr. Huang is trying to give the point that each emotion can be seen at a different way just slightly everytime. Who knows where this computer process could lead us to or what we can do with it.\n\nNone the less, in the classroom a teacher can teach best because that teacher knows not every student is the same. You can ask any parent of 2 or more children and they will confirm that claim. On the political and celebrity standpoint, this could reel out some unknown hintings toward how they really feel. In the end, we have a long way to come as a species and we have a long road also behind us.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on the arguement is, no, we shouldn't have self driving smart cars. The only reason we would have self driving cars, is to please the wants of drivers now days. People would get worse, and lazier at driving from lack of experiance. The self driving cars are not fully functional either. The cars need to be equipped with hundreds of sensors, and maps that would cost a great chunk of your money too. So, by the time Your finished with the making of the car, it would not even be worth it financially. The self driving car would be a mistake if it does get street legality.\n\nThere is no need for self driving cars, unless the people want that luxiory. The is not a fuction that the self driving car can preform that, us as humans, can not do ourselfs. The technology that we have in modern day cars, is almost as far advanced that we need to go, with the exception of fuel efficienty. The manufactures say that the dr0iver should stay alert at all times when they are in a self driving car in case of an emergency, but if we all have self driving cars and are not constantly testing ourselfs on our driving abilities, then how do we know that, when the time comes that you need to take over, that your diving abilities will be good enough?\n\nThe self driving cars are also still in the making of being, self drived. For a nessary self diving car, it needs a plethera of sensors and receivers. By the time manufactures do get all of this jammed into a small compact car, the price would be so outrageous, that is wouldn't be worth your money. So, in the making of the self driving car, it would be easier and cheaper to buy a manual car.\n\nThe cars themself would be financially irrlogical to produce. An estimate price to buy a brand new, compact car, is about $35,000. Thats just for the car itself. The sensors and receivers that the pland to put on the car, would skyrocket the price of an adverage compact car. Not only that, but im assuming that the cost of labor to make those cars, would also bring up the price. At the end of the day, your paying an extra $10,000 just so you dont have to touch the wheel. Your brain may say yes, but your pocketbook is saying no.\n\nThose are the reasons why self driving cars sould not be allowed to be legalized on the streets in the United States. Not only would they cost more, but they could also Make your driving skills get worse. America should just stay with the tradititonal manual driving cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is commonly implied that guaranteeing primary school education remains free would augment access to education. Some have proposed that this would be a particularly effectual solution to poverty. I completely agree with this suggestion and in the subsequent paragraphs, I will delineate why the assured provision of free primary education will alleviate poverty.\r\n\r\nFirstly, financial constraints deter several students from continuing their education. Therefore, making the government sponsor elementary schooling would assist in curtailing the school drop-out rates. It would also provide a solution to child labour and delinquency. Furthermore, research shows that developing countries suffer from alarming rates of unemployment. So, providing free primary education could not only empower the students to get better jobs but also open up several job opportunities in the education sector, thereby reducing joblessness.\r\n\r\nSecondly, providing schooling would enable individuals to acquire skills and training they would not otherwise receive. This would later help them gain better jobs and become efficacious, well-rounded citizens of the country. Providing free education would help individuals have a more promising outlook on their future and promote a positive attitude towards society. This would also encourage them to work towards reducing social problems such as poverty. Access to education also provides the assurance of an economically secure future, which would also eliminate poverty.\r\n\r\nHowever, one could disagree with the aforementioned points stating that there would be a considerable increase in taxation to provide free education to all, which may add to poverty rather than solve it. Additionally, schools might be overcrowded, which would affect the quality of education, thus further impacting the students’ job prospects. Finally, the provision of free education with only limited jobs may only increase competition and job insecurity, adding to deprivation.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe that providing free elementary education free of charge can offer a long-term solution to developing economies because it may abate the problem of relinquishing their chance at a better future while also aiding children to hone and acquire a range of new skills and abilities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "By reading this article I would be in no doubt certain that using FACS (Facial Action Coding Systme) for the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. It could keep the attention of the students inside a classroom.\n\nIn paragraph 6 it mentions why FACS is a good and helpful tool to use inside a classroom. According to Prof. Thomas Huang, of the Beckman Institute for Adanced Science at the Unversity of Illinois, ¨A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,¨ Dr. Haung also goes on and predicts ¨Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.¨ By Dr. Haung telling us this information it shows us that by using FACS our students may pay better attention in class becuase they are not confused nor bored. Another reason why using FACS is important is because it has the potential in increase the students intelligence.\n\nIn conclusion, FACS is a good and helpful advancement in techology that could one day be in schools everywhere. It would make school less boring and could keep the attention of the students inside the classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Mythological stories are becoming popular these days. Family members are concerned about the impact of the place they live in and hence, they always have questions regarding the place they plan to stay. In this essay, I will discuss a few reasons why the history of the location is important.\r\n\r\nEach historical place has many stories linked to them. Past events that occurred in a particular location affect the residents of the current times. The effect can be seen in a physical, psychological or spiritual manner. Sometimes the houses are built in the warzones of ancient times, so some believe that the place can bring a cruel attitude towards life. Namely, if someone has to buy in Hiroshima, then, by understanding the past bomb drop, they will cancel their plans to shift to that place, because this could result in severe health issues.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, there is always the issue of finding a good locality, so that an individual can grow, when surrounded by good personalities. Architects nowadays are planning the structures according to Vastu Shastra; a famous method is used for planning a home, to avoid astrological troubles in life. People also perform spiritual rituals for their well-being while shifting to a new place. In ancient times, it was considered that God stays with us, so whenever we are going to different locations, they should be invited first.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is a good sign to check the background when shifting to a new location, as it could be fruitful not only to understand the neighbours but also to know what that place inherits.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Based on the four sources, car usage should be limited in some way. Smog in Paris and other cities have governments placing restrictions on when and where citizens are allowed to drive their vehicles. A German has a certain city that bans cars and other places, such as Bogota, Columbia, have \"car free days\". These give citizens of nearly every country a thought of why drive when i can walk. Some expert sociologists even believe we are out of our peak car buying years and into one that is less vehicle extemsive and more stress free and relaxed.\n\nIn Paris, smog forced many citizens to stop their driving all together. The pollution was so overwhelming that it rivaled Beijing, one of the most polluted cities on the world (Duffer). Car emissions put Paris' parculate matter scale off of the charts. Pullotion is a serious issue, especially when it affects millions, such as those in Paris. Other places have gone so extreme to ban cars in certain cities. Vauban, Germany have given up their cars to live there. Most citizens agree with Heidrum Walter's words of \"being much happier [without a car]\" (Rosenthal). Her understanding of a life without a vehicle is a crutial turning point in todays society and even limit air pollutions, not unlike those of Paris or Bejing.\n\nExperts say that the United States \"love affair for vehicles seems to be cooling\" (Rosenthal). Many Young citizens aged under 25 seem to have no desire for a drivers license. As of April 13, 2013, the number of miles driven per person were down 9 percent from the peak of car buying sales. We are experiencing a long term cultural shift (Rosenthal) and will likely see dramtic changes in the future. Major cities , like New York and San Fransico, have transit and subway systems put into place for this very reason. More car pooling and public transit seems to be the way to go.\n\nNot only does driving less reduce air pollution, but it decreases unwanted stress in many different situations. Many cities and countries around the globe agree with this and are all headed that direction. Vehicles seem do be on the downhill portion pf their lifespan. Take the initiative and protect our world. Less driving and less pollution reduces stress in even the best of us.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. The new technology is called the Facial Action Coding System, It can read the emotions of actual human beings. \"This new software has promising applications for a variety of industries.\" This new technology is good for reading peoples emotions when you can't quite read then yourself.\n\nImagine there being a computer that could actually read your emmotions. How cool would that be? Well someone actual invented a computer that could do that. It can detect when someone is sad, angry,\n\nscared, surprised, disgust, and happy. In the article it gives an example of how the computer works.\n\nAs an example, the new technology scanned the painting of Mona Lisa. \"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\" As a result the new technology can read emotions that humans can't quite read theirself. \"This software is the latest innovation from Prof. Thomas Huang, of the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois, working in collaboration with Prof. Nicu Sebe of the University of Amsterdam. Dr. Huang and his colleague are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate.\"\n\nThe new technology coulld help people in many ways. It could help theropists detect when somone is unhappy but doesn't want to admit it. It could also help friends to detect when someone is in an emotion that they can't quite read. The new technology could be very helpful if it's used right.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being patient like jungle cat hunting prey It stay perfectly still get prey It patient Then gets wright position patses The cat gets goal patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Businesses have always sought to make a profit, but it is becoming increasingly common to hear people talk about the social obligations that companies have. I completely agree with the idea that business should do more for society than simply make money.\n\nOn the one hand, I accept that businesses must make money in order to survive in a competitive world. It seems logical that the priority of any company should be to cover its running costs, such as employees wages and payments for buildings and utilities. On the top of these costs, companies also need to invest in improvements and innovations if they wish to remain successful. If a company is unable to pay its bills or meet the changing needs of customers, any concerns about social responsibilities become irrelevant. In other words, a company can only make a positive development to society if it is in good financial health.\n\nOn the other hand, companies should not be run with sole aim of maximising profit; they have a wider role to play in society. One social obligation that owners and managers have is to that their employees well, rather than exploiting them. For example, they could pay a “living wage” to ensure that workers gave a good quality of life. I also like the idea that businesses could use portion of their profits to support local charities, environmental projects or educational initiatives. Finally, instead of trying to minimise their tax payments by using accounting loopholes, I believe that company bosses should be happy to contribute to society through tax system.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that companies should place as much importance on their social responsibilities. Nonetheless, financial objectives cannot be denied too. Overall, it is anticipated that trend of social responsibilities is likely to incline in the upcoming future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driving less is a good way to help ourselfs and our enviornment. Peaople are turning to it because it helps with stress to walk,and our cities air is as pulluted.\n\nCars are very harmful to the air and everyone around us cars set out green housae gases that are very harmfiul \"12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe...and up to 50 percent in some car;intensive areas in the united states\" (In German Suburb,life goes on withcars Rosenthal).If the usage of cars are limited traffic jams will happen les the they are \"congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of france\" (Paris bans driving due to smog Duffer).Due to more for the people in Columbia having a no car day and walking threw the cities they put more stores which means more buiness.\n\n\"Americans are buying fewer cars,drving less and getting fewer licenses\" (the end of car culture Rosenthal)the message is getting out for no more greenhouse gases effecting our enviornment. Even young people are getting involed in the no car situtation \"study last year found that driving by young decreased 23 percent 2001 and 2009\" (the end of car culture Rosenthal).The limited use is so affective other countries and its citites are getting involved \"for the first time, two other Colombian citites , Cali and Valledupar joined the event\" (car-free day is spinninh into a big hit in bogota Selsky).\n\nDriving less is a advantage we have to keep things less polluted and greener and not try to mess up the place we live in by using cars. Walking is a very good way to get places no pulltion and more health.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus the second planet on the solar system. Venus has a temperature of 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and its atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our planet. Its atmosphere is made of 97 percent carbon dioxide , the clouds are made of highly corrosive sulfiric acid. If this planet is so inhospitable why does the author think we should keep studying Venus? Well Venus may once had been just like our planet, scientist believe that once Venus was covered largely by with oceans and could have supported various types of life just like the Earth today. The only problem is that the tecnology we have now can't reach the crust of Venus, because it would get destroyed.\n\nThe author of the passage belives that studying Venus worthy pursuit despite its danger, but how can we study a planet that has bad temperatures levels capable of melting tin. NASA has one particular compeiling idea for sending humans to sudy Venus. NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientist to float above the fray. Just like planes travel at hight altitudes to avoid storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions. The author placed this idea in his passage, but theres a set back for this idea the scientist would not be able to study the ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dence atmosphere. More importantly they cannot take any samples of rocks, gas or anything else.\n\nOther ideas that NASA has come up with is, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simultating the chaos of Venus's surface and have lasted three weeks in such conditions. The other idea the author place on this passage is the idea that Old technology called mechanical computers. These devises were first envisioned in the 1800s and played an important role in the 1940s during World War II. These divise use make calculations by using levers and do not require electronics at all. The computers today are powerful, flexible, and quick but tend to be more delicate fo extreme physical conditions. Mechanical parts can be made more resistent to the preassure, heat and other forces. This idea is really helpful makes belive that is worthy of traying to sudy Venus.\n\nStriving to meet the challenges presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to begained on the planet, but because human curiosity will likely lead us into new endeavors. The dangers in the planet should not limit our imagination and innovation, insted it should make us have more ideas and overcome the obstecla paced by the world. Many ideas are been created at this moment, but the ideas that the author has writen on this passage are helpful to make the reader want to sudy Venus even despite ts danger.\n\nAll the evidence Above supports the claim that is worthy to keep studying Venus even if there are many dangers. The author uses many points to descrive how the problems can be solved even if it would take time, but all the insight that we could gain from the planet Venus would help our society more. The author shows that we can make tecnology that can witstand the harsh environment of Venus and gain more information.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is a place in space where astronauts may go to. Venus is has the hottest surface temperture of any planet on the solar system. Venus is the second close planet to the sun because Mercury is the first that is closest to the sun. Venus is sometimes called the Evening Star because it is one of the brightest points of lights in the night sky. Some people may think that that Venus is one of the most dangerous planet in the solar system.\n\nOn the planet surface tempertures can get up to 800 degrees Fahrenheit. The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what weve experience in our own planet. Venus has the hottest temperture of all the planets in our solar system. Venus is the hottest even when Mercury is closest to the sun. Some numerous factors have think that Venus is challenging planet for humans to study.\n\nHumans have sent numerous spacecrafts to land on the cloud-draped world. Each spacecraft they sent was unmanned. Venus is the dangerous because no spacecraft they sent survived the landing for more than a few few hours. Im assuming this is why not a single spaceship touched down in Venus for more than three decades.\n\nNASA is working on other approaches to study Venus. They are running test on the surface because of the chaos that has happened. They are looking back on old technology which was called the mechanical computers. This was evented in the 1800s. The studying that they are having I think that it shouldn't be anymore problems with spacecrafts or anything going to Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I understand people get offended things watch might read nt mean people nt able know one person nt like It s kind matter opinion whether offensive I never really read watched anything completely uncalled On every movie music album produced rate know watching movie nt If movie made somekind offensive parts put rating yes rude language things like So somebody nt read close enough see might something nt like movie nt cause everyone else able see particular movie Personally I nt find books greatest things I sure books magazines tend something rude crude s always horrible If someone thinks book inapproiate readers could tell person charge library maybe letting certain people reading book content You nt throw book shelf one two people thought bad If choosing whether take movies books magazines etc shelfs I would nt I say time things rated someway approved put general store shelfs People simply read details back see s going bother way could offensive nt purchasing If someone complained new cd movie I personally wanted see listen taken shelfs I would upset probley would nt even offened So completely disagree idea movies books music stop sales two three people offended s content", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I excited get first ipad But long line mom kept telling patient I stand quietly Then got closer I could wait Finally got beging line When I got dad said what kind want I told I want big one Therefore got put lot cool songs After went home I listened day Then said stop listing music I put hurs Then time eat dinner After went car ride daddys new car Finally went back home I put away stuff I bought store Then I watched tv ate popcorn Then time go bed That time I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Ok, So some people believe that the \"Unmasking The Face On Mars\" was created by aliens. Crazy right!\n\nWell the Face On Mars is just a natural landform. to back my opinon about this it states in the passage that, \" A spacecraft was circling the planet, snapping photos of possible landings sities for its sister ship Viking 2, when spotted the shadowy likeness of a human face.\" so technicaly thats how the face ofn the mars got there but, thats not it. \"Scientist figured it was another Marthian mesa, common enough around Cydonia.\" Then the huge rock formation it resembled a human head which was formed be the shadows that were giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth. This would be a good way to engage the public and attraction to Mars the authors had thought. Then it began to starr in a Hollywood film, appreaed in books, magazines, radio talk shows and ect. But NASA would rather hide, say conspiracy theorists. but in the mean time defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient cilvilization on mars. but to be dirct the face on Mars was located at 41 degree north martian latitude where it was winter in April. well there is much more to this but this is some of the reasons and facts about how the face on mars was a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir really grateful family nothing blood relative paragraph Also shows grateful family paragraph says I always grateful parents love sacrifice I ve often told much courageous thing I could ever done This shows really happy grateful actually realizes many sacrifices much love", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think this technolgoy to read the emotional expression of students in a classroom is valuable because it wont just help the\n\nteachers and but the students also, by helping us read our friends/peers how they are feeling. It will also helps the teacher know when we are getting uninterested on the subject. Not only that but also its really awsome and interesting to know\n\nhow the process goes.\n\nNicu Sebe of the University of Amsterdam. Dr.Huang and his colleague are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate. The process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles for it to work properly. Eckman has classified six basic emotions, happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness,which then they are associated each with characteristcs movements of the facial muscles. But this technology does not just help with a real face but also in paintings. It even helps you know what the person is\n\nfeeling in the painting.\n\nSome of us can probably know how to tell how your friends are doing just by looking at her facial expression.\n\nOf course, some of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc. Just imagine to know how your friend is feeling, for example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different, and you get to know all this just by your school computers, Dr. Huang predicts. \" Then is could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructure,\" said Dr.Huang. We all have that one friend/friends that when you ask them \" Are you okay?\" they always say \"Im fine,\" and they say it so neutral with no emotions. That's how you know that they are lying and they just dont want to tell you, this is when this Facial Action Coding can come in handy, to just tell you if your friend is okay and just a little irrated thats all. Its like how Dr.Huang said \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication.\"\n\nIn the end I think the new technology \"Facial Action Coding,\" can come in handy once and awhile. Its all about those muscular action units. They even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one.\n\nAccording to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions,but also may even help produce them.\n\nWe all want to know how someone is feeling whether its a friend, family, or even a stranger, we want to help them but we wont know how unless they tell us how they are feeling in the first place. I think the new technology is a good idea it will help us alot but remember sometimes its just as good to know how someone is feeling as it is to not know at all. Dont get carried away of knowing how everybody feels becuase we still need privacy and sometimes we just like to keep our emotions to ourselves. Empathy (feeling someone else's emotional state) may happen because we unconsciously imitata another person's facial expressions. Whoever thought that making faces could reveal so much about the science of emotions!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people choice the trend to eat nutritious food and gain the physical activity routinely. In this essay, I will discuss what the causes people to do this trend, and how the people can do to embrace society to decide healthy food for their daily intake and exercise.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, every people want to avoid the chronic desease in the future by eat healthy food and do sport regularly. Besides genetic factor, the most biggest risk factor people get that deseases because of their lifestyle when they were young. For instance, to prevent ourselves from diabetes mellitus, we have to avoid food or snacks that are much contain of sugar and carbohydrates, and we do jogging at least an hour for twice a week. As a results, in the future people will live healthier without any desease although the getting older. They can still do the same activities like when they were young and live happily with their family.\r\n\r\nIn addition, society realize that healthy life increase their performance in their daily activities. Many researches report that balance nutrition and sport enhance the body metabolism. So it fully support body organs and tissues to produce some energy to the brain and physical activity in the workplace. As a consequence, the people not easy to tired and always have a stamina for their perfomance. Besides, they more creative and to do their best on daily activities. \r\n\r\nFurthermore, to influence more people to decide life healthily, campaigning in the social media is the one of the effective way to promote the benefits to eat healthy food and do exercise. By the simple information and supporting with audio visual in their smartphone, people will attract and curious to follow it. For example, we put information how to read nutrition facts in snack packages correctly in the instagram. Besides, youtube vlogger who concern in sport, make simple video tutorial for burning fat exercise in the home. So, the people have the simple but informative tutorial to choice the healthy way for their life.\r\n\r\nIn sum, people will follow the good trend by eat healthy food and do exrcise regularly. Indeed, it will be increase their good quality of life in health in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author belives thats Venus is a planet worth of studying. Althought it is very impossible to study this planet from the surface level. Venus has a surface temperature of 800 degrees fahrenheit,and the atomspheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. Venus has one of the most hottest surface temperature in the whole solar system. This could explain why it is so hard to have drones on the planets surface.\n\nVenusian geology and weather also present additional challenges like erupting valcanos, powerful earthquakes, and frequenrt lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. Researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance. This most likely caused by the sevear atmospheric temperature or the surface landscape. Reasearchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus. Nasa is working on making machanical computuer so our drones take more damage.\n\nStriving to meet the challenges presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on planet itself, but alson because human curiostity will likely lead us into many equllay intimidating endours. This show that Venus a diffacult planet to get information from, has value to be studied. It shows that our reasearcher have a challenge to take on hand. It also shows\n\nwe can get new ideas on how to explore this planet. So in conclusion the planet of Venus is worth of the study.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The last line included story Winter Hibiscus showed connection Saeng flower Even though Saeng failed driving test first time decides take spring The hibiscus flower like Saeng place make winter spring bud This shows like flower Saeng bud spring retaking driving test Another reason saeng flower used conditions So weather winter months used This shows last line connects girl flower together In conclusion last line used text wrap story connection flower Saeng", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think having self driven cars are going to be dangeres becasue there is alot of problems with cars that you have to drive yourself. Why are they trying to make a car that drives by thereself? It would be cool but its to risk.\n\nIts to risky to have a car drive by its self. Because what if you fall in hard sleep and you get to a work zone. Your going to get in a wreck. Thats putting other people in danger.\n\nWhat if the sensors mess up and just stops working. BOOM wreck right there.\n\nTheres also good reasons for the driveless car. You can play on your phone because you dont have to watch the road. There would be less wrecks because there is alot of wrecks becuase people are playing on there phone and trying to drive at the same time Or you can do you make-up when you are running late to work or a meeting. You also can save gas. If you save gas more money you have.\n\nIf you going on a road trip and you tired just take alittle nap. But they need to put a loud alarm in the car so when you need to drive you will be able to get up and drive when you need to. There would be less people falling asleep behind the wheel and getting in to wrecks.\n\nMy conclusion is that the driveless car is both helpful but dangeres at the same time. But I think there spend to much money on them when they could be working on the cars you have tyo drive yourself because those dont work properly either. There always a problem with them so what makes them think that the driveless car will work better?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "IN THE MEMOIR HOME THE BLUEPRINTS OF OUR LIVES HER MOOD IS LOVE BECAUSE SHE LOVES HER PARENTS FOR ALL THE SACRIFICES THEY MADE JUST SO NARCISCO CAN HAVE A BETTER LIFE FOR EXAMPLE I WILL ALWAYS BE GRATEFUL TO MY PARENTS FOR THEIR LOVE AND SACRIFICE SHE MEANS SHE WILL ALWAYS BE GRATEFUL FOR WHAT HER PARENTS DONE FOR HER IN HER CHILDHOOD TO MAKE HER BECOME WHAT SHE IS NOW ANOTHER EXAMPLE I WILL NEVER FORGET HOW MY PARENTS TURNED THIS SIMPLE HOUSE INTO A HOME SHE MEANS THAT HER PARENTS SACRIFICED TO TURN A ROOM APARTMENT INTO HER HOME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The abitilty to read a student's expressions is very valuable. It could be used to better suit a lesson plan for the students by finding what peaks the student's interest the most, and finding what makes the student lose interest. This information could be used to help teachers and students have a more productive and fun time in the classroom, and make school enjoyable for everyone. The information that can be read off of a students face can be valuable\n\nin a classroom because it can help tailor lesson plans to be more invigorating and fun for students, help techers develop more interactive and fun lesson-plans that can keep the students interested longer, and also detect unusual emotions, or certain expressions a teacher may not be able to see.\n\nThis information that could be read off of a student face can help tailor the lesson plan specifically to that student by showing what that student is interested in. According to Dr Huang in the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" \"most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication\". That means we as humans express how we are feeling through our emotions, with a machine to read our emotional response to something could help suggest things that people show interest in, or not. This information could help a student who wants to be a scientist see what all a scientist does, or what they have done in the past. The information read off of their face during a certain subject's lessonplan could help schools better prepare students for what they will be facing in the future. For instance, if a student who had shown lots of interest in a subject's lesson plans at the beginning of the lesson, but now are showing progressivly less interest, the software could help the teacher or student stay focused on the lesson by introducing an activity or game to help the students apply what they had learned instead of being bored and forgeting everything they were learning.\n\nThis kind of software could also help students and teachers stay engaged longer in subjects. In the article, the program finds all the emotions shown on someones face, It found that Mona Lisa was 83 percent happy, 9 percent discusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.The software could be used to measure how students feel during one subject, versus another. This can help steer students towords classes and careers that will interest and challenge them. The student would be constantly challenged more than they would have going down the normal path, and now instead has their own, specially tailored plan of classes to prepare them individually for their career and interests.\n\nThe software could also be used in situatuions outside of the classroom, such as hallways or public gatherings. It could be used to spot people with possibly the opposite facial or emotional response than other peoplearound the same situation. This could help people better detect possible\n\nissues like deppression earlier and help people with this issue faster. As the article 'Making Mona Lisa Smile' stated, \"Empathy(feeling someone else's emotional state) may happen because we unconsiously imitate another person's facial expressions.\" This means that if one persons emotion differs, there is an issue. The FACS would be able to detect these differences where the person displaying them may not even know. The software would create many possibilities to detect trends and what people may be doing at certain times of day, and better prepare authorities for what they may have to deal with as far as crimes or fires.\n\nThis software can gather lots of valuable information to help the classroom and public become better, safer, and more productive enviroments. The detection of someones expression is everything. From knowing what, how, or why to cheer someone up, to helping prepare people for the future more efficiently. This software Would hold lots of valuable information that we currently would take years to collect and predict. This could possibly help with problems we havent even thought of yet. The information that this software could provide is extremely valuable for the classroom enviroment because of its ability to read expressions. This ability to read expression would help to better tailor lesson plans, career choices, and identify possible social disorders among people who wouldn't even know.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper life without computers Writing articles typewriter hand would surely hassle The question whether computers beneficial society risen media argue people spend less time exercising interacting nature less time family However computers great step forward modern science beneficial communities Computers drastically helped educationally school mention easier way connecting friends family Also computers many different forms entertainment Computers great step forward completely beneficial society Firstly computers helped academically schools home I ca nt even hassle coming home thee assignment writing two essays write hand Wanting get would cause rush resulting bad grade Also think handwriting factor Most kids school nt good handwriting I assuming teachers hard time grading something ca nt read With programs given option different fonts colors bolding pictures symbols Another way computers helped academically schools More teachers using computers help us learn Tests taken computers websites help us research visited program powerpoint used project Computers help lot school helping us learn much Computers also help keeping touch friends family The days short letters replaced long emails pictures attached sent matter seconds whizzing internet arrive friend s screen People save money pictures developed instead stored computer ready print onto boand paper There adveances communication computers made Things cideo chat vchat literally see talk person audio chat talk person made Such easy ways communication motivate people speak family friends stay touch Computers made positive impact community havinf simple ways talk loved ones Computers alos provide fun source entertainment web Websites created play games find people past maybe look funny videos Anything type toolbar instantly transforms page links websites con find details topic relative things one fun website youtube This website lets people upload videos The possibility endless web Another fun website CAPS This website friend people know past interact You post viedos write messages As see entertainment everywhere web The time understand full benefits computers Computers benefit modern day society help academically encourage stay touch family friend provide entertainment We understand computers huge advance science great help also fun", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some individuals frequently put the blame for juvenile delinquency on their parents. Nevertheless, from my perspective, exerting discipline on parents for their children’s wrongdoings is not sensible because every individual is responsible for their own actions.\r\n\r\nIt is undeniable that mothers and fathers must take accountability for their children’s malpractice since they are role models for their offspring from the earliest days of their lives. It could be true that juveniles’ misbehaviours, which violate the law, may stem from the observation of their parents. And since adolescents are acutely sensitive, they can be affected straightforwardly. For example, if parents are offenders who cheat others for money, their children would suppose it as normal and consequently commit the same crime in possible cases in the future.\r\n\r\nDespite the aforementioned arguments, I hold the belief that should not be imposed punishments on their parents when their offspring commit an offence. The first reason can be attributed to individuals’ responsibility for their actions. And each person is a separate individual engaging in a myriad of activities. Hence, it is morally wrong and may foster resentment and ill will toward innocent individuals. Another point worth mentioning is that adolescents are influenced by not only their parents but also other factors such as their peers or anti-social content on the Internet. Frequent exposure to toxic friends at school or violent topics on social media, for example, will be a key factor in illicit behaviours, which could be the potential root of crime-committing activities. Thus, it is reasonable to assume that other parties should share responsibility for children who break the law.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although parents will be at the core of setting examples for their offspring, I am of the opinion that it is unreasonable to accuse them of their children’s dirty deeds because of individual liability for their actions and other influential parties.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In opinion effects computers people good I believe people learn handeye coordination give people ability learn faraway places people even allow people talk people around world Firstly effects computers people good people learn hand eye coordination Handeye coordination good many occations Secondly computers effects people good computers give people ability learn faraway places people important becuase people learn history important figures life Lastly effects people computers good computers allow people talk people around world This usefull people learn customs religious also cultures heritage Allinall I believe computers good effects people learn handeye coordination Computers give people ability learn faraway places people computers even allow people talk people online parts world", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever thought to yourself if driverless cars are real. Not just some cool editing onto a movie.Driverless cars are actual a thing that has been invented. But it is still being changed from glitches and adding new things to make them better. Driverless cars are pretty cool to think about. Imagin a vehicle that takes you places just bye typing you destination. Sounds like a game. But like all things their are bad things that could happen. To these driverless cars their is still going to be needed a person behind the steering wheel, to be ready in any moment that something may accure to take over the cars functioning. These are my thoughts on the driver less cars.\n\nI myself think that driverless cars are not good for my own saftey and other peoples safety. Besides normal automatic or shift gear cars are way better and more fun. Onto driverless cars youll have to be seated and be ready at any moment anything happens the car will give the car onto your hands. What if when that happens I am not awear of whats going on. I end up crashing onto someone else or something. Then i'll probably get the bill for the damaging. Doesn't seem right to me. But yet car companies such as Marcedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have the releasing of these cars by 2020. By that time our technology will be more advance then how it is today.\n\nMaybe till then i'll change my opinios about these cars.\n\nDriverless will take over regular cars some day. but intill them im staying with my shift gear vehicl. Like i said driverless cars may sound cool to think of and to own, but their are many updates to be made. Untill they make a full self operational car that will steer itself to a destination with 0% problems. What do you think of these driverless cars. Would you trade in or give up nor,al cars for these new ones. Make your choice wisly. Untill they have those cars have fun with you normal car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever thought that maybe a president didnt win because of popular votes or electoral college? I have and of course it was unfair.\n\nfirst and foremost, votes come close to almost wins a lot. but in my opinion all wins are fair game. if u lose at something that big then its no one elses falt. you have to be a great leader and thrive hard enough. if not then u shouldnt be able to blame electoral college for it or even popularaity votes.\n\nto keep moving, both votes are supposed to be in your favor. so if u still lose from one or the other you probably just sucked. you have to actually try for president. you cant just expect to win because of elctoral college or popularity. you should plan on an even distribution.\n\nto wrap up, i believe that you can not base a win or lose in electoral college. you shouldnt depend on either but should be able to use both. if you blame your loss on the system then you suck.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting essay affect author one major way dehydration There several features causes author dehydrate First riding throught desert located california This means bent sun constintly beating Also change Flat read Kurmaskie short rolling hills CAPS also affected getting dehydrated This change cased use energy climb hills means used water got thrister faster This features setting affected author essay Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Right start Empire State Building architectural demands posed several obstacles builders especially came building mooring mast dirigibles Initially Empire State Building built inside use mast would add stress buildings frame possibly damage Secondly Empire State Building built densely populated area malfunctions occur Hindenburg many people could killed Another problem posed mooring mast nature Winds top building constantly shifting strong well dirigible mounting building threatened swiveling flying landing The masters architectural era made true mistake planned construction Empire State Building never could reached potential many obvious reasons", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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