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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It goes without saying that in recent years there has been a proliferation of voluntary organizations which are set out to prompt individuals’ contributions to the society. With regard to this trend, an array of people propose that schools should integrate voluntary work into the graduation requirements. From my viewpoint,unpaid services are definitely in students’ interest, however, students should be encouraged instead of being compelled. \nTo commence with, it is indubitable that volunteerism helps students bolster their social skills and widen the scope of their knowledge, which will stand them in good stead when applying for a permanent job. Undertaking a period of unpaid work is a golden chance for students to collaborate with an assortment of people from all social backgrounds, together with whom they can share their experiences and understandings. For example, my aunt, who is a qualified nurse, attributes her success to the valuable experiences that she gained when working in the local hospital in the role of a candy striper. In her words, without those years of volunteering, her achievements would be far from what she accomplishes today.\nMoreover, it is worth bearing in mind that through volunteer service, students will be better cognizant of the meaningfulness of life and therefore, be more grateful for what they have. As a matter of fact, children nowadays tend to have whatever they want at their fingertips, which renders their demands even more unreasonable. A voluntary trip to the poverty-stricken areas, which give them a chance to meet destitute children, will make them realize that what they take for granted is what other people yearn for. For instance, one of my cousins, Linh, used to be an exigent child due to the indulging way of upbringing her parents use. However, once time she took part in a voluntary organization aiming at underprivileged children . After the time there, it dawned on her that she was blessed with nutritional meals and expensive clothes while many other children weren’t and since then, she has appreciated her life more. \nDespite the aforementioned benefits, mandatory services may also be counterproductive in the absence of students’ willingness. Out of disinclination, they may try to shirk their duties or do them unenthusiastically. Therefore, rather than compel students to join voluntary organizations, schools should induce them by showing the significance of their commitment to the local community. And if possible, students should be spoilt for choice so that they can choose the activities that are congruous with their abilities and hobbies. \nIn conclusion, voluntary work is indeed advantageous to both students themselves and the society. However, to obtain the optimal results, students’ willingness should be guaranteed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I heard lot people spending much time computers less time exercising enjoying nature interacting family friends In opinion I think know compouter helps school homework projects talking family far away finding new friends My first reason keep computers help school homework projects This top reason really helpful useful need also computer working go friends house use computers done save hardrive print school s computers My segond reason keeps computer talking family Without computer ca nt communicate family In opinion computers helpful cummnicate family If phone working also use computer communicate family My third reason communicating find new friends without going meet communicate communicate family throught computer even running late send message computer In opinion I think computer really good way communicate family I know people say spend much time computers addicting good school work like projects assignments also people said opinion keep computers see whats person Its school work talk family I know people spend much time computers people In opinion get rid computers good school work talking family I think get rid computers", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Education is the fundamental building block for children’s development. With the growth of technology, people have adopted different types of ways to educate their children. Some people prefer to teach their kids at home . However，others think that attending students to the school department is a better choice. I believe that the merits of schooling outweigh the drawbacks.\r\n\r\n On the one hand, Home-schooling can teach children with free time. Parents could adjust the speed of learning progress through their children performance. For example, when kids are good at certain subjects, their parents could consider that they can accelerate this schedule of the subjects or put less time into this area in order to learn weaker points. Therefore, they would spend time effectively and get an average excellent score. In addition, home-teaching is more suitable for the kids who are not mentally strong, thus this way could protect them far away from bullying at school.\r\n\r\n On the other hand, schooling is an important element for the growth of students. These kinds of educational systems teach children how to cooperate with others and communicate with their classmates. This is because communication and managerial skills are essential at work in the future. Moreover, there are a variety of students in the institutions and every class is a collectivity. Therefore, children would know that they should help each other and share items with their classmates and friends. Finally, education institutions could provide advanced resources and well-trained teachers. So they could have a better education at the academy.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, it can be seen that both viewpoints have their own merits. But I think sending offspring to university is more beneficial than home-schooling. This is because school can help socialise children.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Leonardo Da Vinci was one of the greatest reniassance painters of the time. His study of the human anatomy allowed him to create pictures that captured the humna state. On of his most well known paintings is the \"Mona Lisa\". The Mona Lisa is a women that has sort of complacent facial features. She doesn't really look happy or sad. This was the popular thought up until a new technology was created. This technology is called the Facial Action Coding System. This technology is able to deduce what emotion a person is feeling. It is able to do this whothout the person even showing an obvious emotion. This technology can also be implenmented in many spheres of life, including in the classroom. The use of this technology to read the expressions of students in a learning envionement can help students learn more efffectivly by allowing for immediate feedback from a student allowing for the quick shift of a lesson plan, and being able to help and support students emotionally.\n\nThis technology can help get immediate feedback from students. In almost all class rooms nation wide there is a similar routine. Learn something, practice it for homework and then see if a student is understanding it by taking a quiz over it. While this may be effective, it can be imporved ten fold with the Facial Action Coding System. The technology could understand emotion of students in present time. A teacher wouldn't have to wait to give out a quiz to see if students were having issues. They could teach the subject and then immediatly know if students are having difficulty unerstanding it. Dr. Huang, the creator of FACS, states that \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\". If teachers are able to recieve this information, their teaching would become more effective. Teachers could change lesson plans in order to fit the needs of the students, and give extra support and help to those children that are still struggling. FACS can also help excite studnets about learning. This is important because no matter how much a teacher trys to help a student, the studnet will not imporve in anything if thet do not want to learn. If computers are able to read if studnets are excited or bored by a lesson, teachers would add visuals and what not to make it more intersesting to a student. This would make them want to learn, not them being required to learn. totality, the ability to be able to percieve students emotions would help students academically by allowing teachers to change lesson plans that allow for more excitment and understand in classrooms.\n\nTo continue, the FACS technology would help students be more emotionally stable. While school is a vaulable place to learn new information and facts, it is really a place for children to grow and become more independent and better human beings. While grades matter, the emotional and pyschological health of a student is far more valuable. The FACS technology could act as an army of school counselers. High School and Middle School students tend not to share their emotions, even with their parents. FACS could idntify students that are emotionally troubled, have depression, contemplate self harm or even have mental illness. Once students like these are identified then counselers and social workers could step in, allowing for students to be helped. Right now students that struggle with these issues do not share their feelings. They do not get help and carry on like they are fine. While many may turn out to be okay, even one taking their own life or somebody's else, is too much. While FACS may not be able to help or eliminate all signs of emotional distress, it can surely make a difference. Another benfit of using FACS is that it reads emotoins silently. Students don't have to potray a certain emotion for the technology to understand what they are really feeling. If a studnet is asked how they are, they probably give a surface level, I am fine, answer. The technology reads through that completely, eliminating awkard one on one conversatoins with conselers, and allowing for all students to be reached.\n\nWhile there are many positives to this technology some might argue that computers cannot actually calculate human emotion. They argue that human emotion is not somehting that can or should be understood because it would ruin the entirety of feeling certain ways. However, while some arguements may be warranted, many are based off of falsehoods. To begin, emotion can be understood on a scientific level. Emotion is in the brain, not the heart. The way the FACS understands emoion is simple. It maps out a 3-D model of the face, looks at the shape and positoin of all the muscles, then it associates the different facial movements with differet emotion. For example, your orbicularis oris (muscles around your mouth) tighten your lips to show when you are angry. It even works when a person it trying to mask emotions. During a fake smile, the zygomatic major stretches the mouth sidways, while in a real smile the zygomatic major lifts the corners of the mouth. These examples can show how science IS able to understand emotoin, probaly better than most humans. Arguments that use that falshood, that science is unable to understand emotion, is completly false.\n\nIn conclusion, the ability to read the actual emotion and reactions of students in class rooms is extremely valuable because it allows for greater understanding and excitment of a subject, along with the ability to help students be emotionally stable. If this technology is implemented into schools, studnets will overall do better, feel better and make a brighter world for tomorrow. FACS is something revolutionary that hopefully all of us can learn somthing from.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The looming threat of climate change and its effect on our planet and our ways of life is a recognized topic in the modern world. Experts have different perspectives regarding how to cope with this issue. Some state that it should be mitigated even at great costs, others believe that humans should be flexible enough to accept it and change their methods of living. I agree with the former point of view and I think climate change can be considered as one of the hardest challenges of our existence as a specie. In this essay, I will try to illustrate my reasons and draw a conclusion based on them.\n\nOn the one hand, it is short-sighted to assume that climate change is only going to affect human beings. For instance, the rising temperatures have decreased the number of glaciers and ice caps at the north pole, destroying the habitats of numerous animals such as polar bears to the extent that most of them are now considered highly threatened. Therefore, since we are solely responsible for this phenomenon, we should take action to stop it and simply altering our life will be cruel to countless other living being on this blue pale dot.\n\nMoreover, the changes that climate change will bring to the geopolitical situation have the potential to lead to wars, famines, and other humanitarian disasters. For example, one of the most agreed-upon consequences of a developed greenhouse climate regime is the change in the patterns of rainfalls to more extreme conditions. Certain areas will start to experience much more rainfall, while others will undergo decades of dry spells. Consequently, governments might go to war in order to gather the required resources of their states. I believe this is a catastrophe for a specie that has flourished on this planet for aeons. \n\nTo summarize, climate change not only affects us in various ways such as wars and famines, but also endangers the life of other living creatures. Thus, accepting the unforeseeable circumstances of a planet with higher temperatures while it can be avoided does not appear to be an acceptable path. I think that preventing climate change should be a top priority for any governmental body and new rules must be legislated to curb this issue.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is often argued, that when employers pay a bonus to the people who work for them as a recognition for their commitment to the company this action can be an incentive for the people involved, while for others have an opposite effect. This essay will examine advantages and disadvantages for this type of management and consider different methods to encourage people to work hard.\nFirst of all, I strongly believe that when business practise recognised employers work with a financial reward the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of this action. Despite the fact that only a partial amount of employees receive it, this has a positive impact among people that get the bonus, because their hard work is recognised, but also stimulates other to commit more for the company in order to achieve the same recognition. As a result, this management system is beneficial among all the employers. However, I think that this is not the only way to encourage people to work hard. In addition to the economic support, companies can improve the employees performance allowing flexible time or with additional time off. For instance, in my office when we work in for a deadline to issue a project, the directors always allow people that have been involved in the project to get free time. Despite, we work really hard the idea of getting holiday bonus encourage people to work as much as they can and they are aware that all this effort will be recognised.\nIn conclusion, I believe that financial rewards is a strong and effective method of management and has positive impact for all the employers,. However, there are others recognitions that can be really appreciate by employees, such has holidays bonus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding system enables computers to identify human emotions. Meaning the computer would detect your feelings at that moment. What if they were to use this technology to read students' emotional expressions?\n\nUsing technology to read students' emotional expressions is a good idea. Reading students' emotional expressions can let you know how they are feeling. It gives you an apportunity to help a student. It gives you a reason to talk to the student and help them get through whatever they are feeling. If they are in school and you see that they are bored or aren't paying attention, talk to them.\n\nDr. Eckman is the creator of FACS (Facial Action Cosing System).\n\nHappiness, suprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness are six basic emotions Dr. Eckman has classified. Then, associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles. For example, your muscle obove your eyes raises your eyebrows when you're suprised and your muscles around your mouth tightnes your lips to show anger.\n\nUsing video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks facial movements, in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa. The software can even identify mixed emotions. Each expression is campared againts a neutral face. The Mona Lisa demonstration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computer can do.\n\nThey can even indicate the difference between a genuine smile and a forced one. To an expert, faces don't lie, these muscle clues are sometimes used to spot when a \"smiling\" politician or celebrity isn't being truthful.\n\nAccording to Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muslces not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them. If you make a happy face, it could possibly put you in a happier mood. The Facial Action Coding System should at least be tried out to see if it helps deal with students' emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Venus, The Earth's twin.''\n\nby STUDENT_NAME\n\nOn this proyect am going to talk about ''the earths twin'' Venus, i am going to tell some important things about why venus is a worthy pursuit of despite the dangers.\n\nvenus is one of the bringhtes points of light in the night ski, venus is the second planet next to the sun. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and ocasionaly the closest in distance too.\n\nVenus has some different things caompared to Earth, the atmosphere is almost of 97 porcent carbon dioxideblankets, the clouds has a highly corrosive sufuric acid. On the planet's surface temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit, and the atmospheric presure is 90 times greather than the Earth.\n\nVenus is the most Earth-like planet on our solar system, venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth. the planet has a surface of rocky sediments and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and caters.\n\nThe NASA has one particular compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus, NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of venus would allow scientistics to float above the fray. At thirty-plus miles above surface, temperatures would still be teastyat around 700 degrees fahrenheit, but the air presure will be at sea level.\n\nOn conclusion venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers because if a human would not can touch because of the danges that are the clouds amd the really hot weater that this planet has.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many reasons why limiting your car usage is good. One of the leading advantages is less pollution. Also, it'll bring you closer with your community. It also leads into less traffic jams and no rush-hours.\n\nPollution is a big problem in many countries, the U.S.A being one of them. By not driving your car and not releasing your fumes into the air helps to bring less pollution. \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\" said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza. \"Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog..\" When you don't drive your car it not only makes you exercise but filters the air you breathe in by not putting deadly toxins in it.\n\nWhile not driving your car it brings out the magnificence in your town, because you won't just be looking at it through a car window. \"Parks and sports centers also have bloomed throughout the city; uneven, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalks\" Without the use of your car it makes the cities less denser and better for walking. Many cities who have not been using their cars have brought their stores a walk away instead of being on a highway that isn't accessible by walking.\n\nOne of the most difficult things about driving is traffic jams, being stuck in one place for a long time and you can't do anything about it.\n\nAll in all, without driving our planet and us would be healthier.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Establishing a large public place outdoors such as parks and town squares seems only reasonable for those wealthier municipalities able to upgrade their image, but such a proposal in my opinion might not be applicable to other cities and towns. This essay will present some reasons to support my argument. \r\n\r\nOne of the main ideas that some towns believe building such grand public spaces is for the pursuit of tourism. The city planners, often at the behest of developers and greedy construction interests will attempt to invest in these improvement schemes in the hopes of luring visitors and potential new residents. This often seems to be a shortsighted choice for imaginary economics with no guarantee that out of town visitors will in fact come and see the finish project. Granted, there may also be some minor benefits for local residents such as being able to practice in an expansive area and being able to socialize in a varied context in terms of new acquaintances in an open environment. Truthfully, most of these places are often abandoned and neglected. \r\n\r\nNext not all towns and cities are capable of transforming their public areas into such massive single use developments. To be more specific, the cost of establishing a gigantic public space is high. While local governments should consider the potential revenue from tourism, ultimately they need to focus on staying within their budgets for any public project. If the investment is far more than what could be afforded, then creating a huge garden or public square of some kind would only end up as an unfinished project. This came at the cost of rooting up many of the older residents at a higher payout from the taxpayers and left many of the plans on the drawing board as the majority of these construction plots simply ran out of city financing to be completed. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I would continue to argue that this desire to improve a town or city by building a large public square or park may in fact be much more costly than expected compared to the little return in potential tourist revenue simply because the tourism market has shifted and these old ways of attracting people to a city are no longer valid.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people heard about the amazing viking 1 photo from 1976 tooken by NASA. You might have seen it it when it first happened or it has also been in many movies. The question that everyone is truly asking was, is it made by aliens or is it just a natural landform? Well, it is just a natural landform. It was very common around Cydonia, scientist have proven it, and scientist have checked and done so much research over it many times.\n\nFirst off, it was common around Cydonia. That shows that this is just another thing that we thought that might have a special kind of touch to it, but really it was just done all by itself. In the text it says \"Scientist figured it was just another Martian Mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh.\"(2) This is showing it might look a little different than normal but it is very common. The scientist are showing how they are just like any other Martian Mesa just a little different shapement. Everyone is just wanting it to have a different outcome than what it was.\n\nAlso, scientist have shown their facts to the world. They are trying to prove to people that it is just a natural, common landform. In the text it said \"Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first apprearedon a JPL web site, revealing... a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\"(7) This scientificaly proven that there was no alien landform it was all natural.\n\nLastly, scientist have checked their research and the face many times. They have used different cameras to take pictures of it. They have gotten many angles. They also have taken multiple pictures of the object. They studied each photo carefully. In the text it says \"Mission contollers prepared to look again.\"(9) It also says \"Nevertheless, on April 8, 2001- a cloudless summer day in Cydonia- Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look.\" (10) This is explaining how the scientist didn't just go one time and just take that as an answer. No, they went multiple times. Then, they also made the picture \"3 times bigger than pixel size\"(11) to look at the photo better and bigger.\n\nMany people might say that this is very uncommon to happen in space. However, that is not true. Scientist say that it is actually very common around Cydonia. In the article it states \"scientist figiures it was just another Martian Mesa, common enough around Cydonia\"(2) This is showing how they are common around Cydonia and that there were no aliens involved.\n\nThat is how come it would be considered a natural made landform. It was very common in the Cydonia, so it was not unusual to have a landform like that. Scientist have proven it, they showed it to a bunch of web surfers. They also have checked over it many times, with different equimpment, angles, etc. Do you really think that there are another spieces roaming Mars?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper Have ever wondered get somewhere nt map near thing near Well I saying go search want go Computers helpful every one s daily life many facts interesting things trying figure someone lives s easy go google type someones s adress go The also good ever thought one friends special someone havent seen like really long time miss well problem mostley computers sort camera could video chat chat regular enternet That helpful even though could go phone call s better online havent seen want see picture could send sort chat page email It much better mailing one picture mail takes days mail come could faster way line video chat better The also helpful one day want go dont know weather going well could go put tv see many communications cant really see move weather days fast On could type weather one week tell could look long want stay could see whole week without screen fast image light light s dark The helpful People say good get go walk outside nature I agree people children get exercising walking around house going outside going shopping Computers helpful nice another thing say one day online looking clothes shoes want buy dont want go mall half hour away live could buy online shipped house dont even lift fingure They also good like dictionary dont know spell word type best way corrects spelling tells word also computers pictures everything want see something looks like type shows facts I given I hope agree computers helpful nice safe", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Climate change is an ever-rising issue in this world due to the various effects that may be occurred. Instead of mitigating this problem, some people argue that it would be better if individuals could deal with it. This essay will show my greater tendency to prioritize climate solutions over living in such a situation. \n\nOne of the fundamental reasons why this world’s problem should be prevented is because its effects are daunting. There have been numerous examples of this issue, but the most noticeable one is natural disasters where some areas of the world continuously suffer from floods. Despite this appeal, climate change also results in the increase of the earth’s temperature. As an example, 2023 becomes the world’s warmest temperature in ever recorded history. Therefore, providing valuable solutions might be the best action to avoid the aforementioned circumstances. \n\nFurthermore, preparing for long-term effects could be better than living with the situation because the longer it happens, the more negative impacts will occur, meaning that avoiding climate change will stop severe effects. This has been promoted to the public by green parties about how to tackle the problem by creating a green lifestyle because they want to stop the spread of bad impacts of this problem. By campaigning for this, people will be conscious of amending the way they act in order to mitigate the issue. Indeed, figuring out the new approach to live with it is undeniably important, but preventing climate change will always win over it. \n\nTo conclude, although trying to accept climate change in humans’ lives, nothing can be more beneficial and fruitful than preventing it, because , in the future, the next generation might live peacefully and will not encounter the same problem.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir many moods expressed I think mood expressed happiness Narciso described us matter happened family close friends would always feel sense belonging This gave everyone mentioned story great reason happy feel good In conclusion strongest mood story happiness", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir together This mood created saying parents created traditional cuban home New Jersey Also said parents always kept open arms door I think ment willing let people stay help hard time Also said everyone neighborhood despite customs came together friendship", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Libraries center learning They provide kinds different information So take offensive material Even internet knowing source people depended libarary research I think things taken library Public libraries always good censory put shelves anyway As Katherine Paterson said All us think book hope none children children taken shelf But I right remove book shelf work I abhor also exactly right everyone else And books left shelf us saying everybody certain opinion take offense different things Therefore anyone could right take book shelf found offensive would nt books shelves If would travel back time internet invented would problem whether take certain books shelf That s depended For example research entertainment People today spoiled We go right little screen type anything want know find mintues sometimes even seconds People nt even leave house go buy latest movie came order internet even rent If people worried library nt worry explicit junk internet Sometimes people ca nt see right front Everytime I go library look books find something read I rarely find book s worth questioning Libraries typically wholesome corporations good censory let shelves They ve always certain age group sections usually people kids always stick age groups Every book I choosen I ve read cover cover In conclusion libraries around ever Their material provides research appropriate entertainment ages No matter ever internet always dependable libraries", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recent decades have witnessed a staggering number of students who graduated from universities find difficulties in seeking a job related to their profession. Undoubtedly, there are various reasons behind the scenario. In this essay, I will explain the reasons as well as the solutions in order to combat this issue.\r\n\r\nFirst and all, numerous graduates are not fond of their chosen subjects. Often enough, enrolling in universities requires plenty of criteria, including academic results and achievements in extra-curricular activities. In this sense, countless students select a profession that can fit their marks, instead of showing strong interest in that particular aspect. For instance, my high school friend chose Professional Accounting as her degree major, despite the fact that she was never interested in accounting and auditing at all. Since there were fewer entry requirements for students, my friend made her decision on having an accounting degree. \r\n\r\nSecondly, an interesting subject does not imply an auspicious career path. For instance, the University of Hong Kong conducted a survey amongst high school students about the subjects they would be pleased to engage. The findings illustrated that the students loved Chinese History, Home Economics and Art which enhanced their sense of achievement. It is widely acknowledged that job positions in relation to these professions are declining. As a result, graduates are facing an unprecedented challenge to find relevant job openings.\r\n\r\nIn order to resolve the mentioned problems, parents ought to explain to their offspring about the career development of each profession. In essence, parents' guidance plays a pivotal role in influencing the decision-making of the students. Additionally, schools are encouraged to offer more internship opportunities for their students to gain real-life working experience. Unsurprisingly, students who participated in internships tend to have a better insight into their future careers, and this could test whether the young ones are suitable for certain careers. \r\n\r\nTo summarise, young adults often make incorrect decisions about their career paths due to lacking experience or guidance. If society desire to alleviate this situation, cooperation between parents and schools is of utmost importance.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Through excerpt The Mooring Mast learned builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock summit building Some obstacles builders faced enginering challenge builders faced challenge Empire State Building going able support weight long aircrafts We learned paragraph author states A thousandfoot dirigible moored top building would add stress buildings frame To overcome problem The steel frame Empire State Building would modified strengthened NUM It later said modifications would cost sixty thousand dollars Another problem builders faced safe docking blimp would highly populated area In paragraph learned dirigibles made hydrogen highly flammable After German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire Lakehurst New Jersey The owners Empire State Building realized much worse accident could taken place densely populated area downtown New York All excerpt The Mooring Mast learned builders Empire State Building face many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock peak building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe computers positive effect people They teach handeye coordination give people ability learn faraway places people even allow people talk online people All things good use computers need computers Do think computers positive effect negative effect After hear might want agree computers positive effect Computers positive effect many ways example school work talk get information From different websites If computers use would probably use books We would get information books much would get computer We probably would know much nt ofr computers The reason computers positive effect work eyes typing exercising hands That proves handeye coordination We learn places nt live like Had earthquake went websites You get learn certain place want go vacation You get learn famous people know go computer look celebrity Computer something people use talk people keep contact Now others We use talk friend family Some family friends live far away places use computer talk If email teachers people work might email handle business You even get work students school way learn different activities You even play games computer You explore nature computer I think computer great way learn talk others Do want child learn Do want child fun So tell think Computers positive effect", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir author creates sort grateful appreciative mood Throughout memoir Narciso repeats grateful courageous parents For example first sentences paragraph My mother father come country courage without knowledge language culture They came selflessly many immigrants give children better life even though meant leaving behind thier families friends careers country loved shows grateful parents give better life I would feel grateful For parents done Narciso felt", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the modern life, teenagers have difficulty to choose between finding a job and attending the university or college. Although, there are many advantages of working after high school, I believe that continuing the college or university is the better option for students. \n\nThere are several reasons people choose finding job is the better choice. Firstly, after completing the high school, teenagers are enough 18 years old, they are able to earn money on their own and be independent without parent’s financial supports. In fact, many students in Europe tend to find a job after high school. Secondly, the teenagers have a thought that studying at the university or college is not crucial for them, so they want to get a job or start up with their own career. For example, Bill Gate or Mark Zuckerberg has not graduated any university or college, however, they are owning many giant companies over the world. \n\nOn the other hand, I strongly believe that students would gain more advantages if students keep their studying. In fact, doctors, teachers, … are not allowed to work in the hospitals, school if they do not have the high academic qualifications. Besides, for many high-paying jobs always need vital requirements. Job market is more competitive and a bachelor’s degree or master’s degree in your resumé can be a huge advantage compared to other applicants. Employers would prefer a person who has an adequate amount of knowledge to work efficiently with less training time. \n\nIt seems to me that students with higher academic background are likely to be more successful in pursuing their dream jobs.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The topic of driverless cars is something that has been talked about and thought of since the 1950's, but the pieces have never been fully put together. Driverless cars are not a good idea because of the ability for faulty accuse in an accident, vehicles are not truly driverless, and the privacy of the driver.\n\nAccidents happen all the time and it is usually fairly easy to see who is at fault in the situation. That completely changes with Driverless cars. If they were to be manufactured and put on the road so many new laws would have to be made and old laws would have to be changed in order to cover liability in an accident. Technology does not always work out how its supposed to, no matter how hard the manufacturers want it to, so if something were to happen to the cars technology and an accident occured who would be at fault - the driver or it's manufacturer?\n\nDriverless cars are not real. In order for a car to be completely driverless there should not be a driver in the front seat. With \"Driverless\" cars an alert driver has to take over when pulling in or pulling out of driveways or dealing with traffic issues. That is the complete opposite of what drivers want. Drivers do not want to deal with the traffic issues or the navigation through accidents, that is what most people hate about driving. So why would they want those to be their only priorities when driving? They don't.\n\nSo much of everyones lives today are always being watched ; most people want to get as much privacy as they can in their day-to-day lives. By using cameras in order to watch if the driver is paying attention or not is safe, but also an invasion of privacy. It is understandable why manufactuers would want to have the cameras, safety reasons, but really in all actuality the cameras and sensors would become something drivers become accustomed to and they will completely ignore it all together.\n\nDriverless cars may be a thing of the future but it all comes down to the buyers. If drivers don't want to worry about whether or not their gonna be at fault in a accident, if they actually have to drive, or if they want their personal lives invaded ; they most likely won't buy the car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars would be a very beneficial invention. Driverless cars have many ways they can help us. They can help with fuel conservation, reduce accidents, and make driving not such a monotonous task.\n\nFirst, driverless cars would keep our fuel resource for a little bit longer. Fuel is a non-renewable resource, which means it will be depleted one day. Driverless cars would use half the fuel of some of the modern forms of transportation. As the text states, \"The cars he forsees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus.\" This piece of the text shows how important these cars could be in saving us fuel.\n\nNext, driverless cars would also reduce the number of accidents, which is a major problem with driver-required cars. According to the text, \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash\". This piece of the text shows that Google's driverless cars have been very safe and have went half of a million miles without even one crash! This shows that driverless cars are safer than driver-required cars.\n\nFinally, driverless cars would also make the driving experience more fun, rather than a tedious, boring task. Manufacturers claim that they will make the experience fun and not let the driver get bored while not doing anything. The text states, \"Some manufacturers hope to do that by bringing in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays.\" This statement shows that the companies plan to bring some sort of entertainment to the cars, so that you will not become bored while sitting in the car.\n\nPeople that are against the driverless cars might argue that driverless cars are not safe because the people do not have control over them. That statement would not be true, because the driverless cars would be programmed to alert the driver when they are required to take over. People may also argue that there may be conflicts between individuals and car manufacturers. That is not true as well, because it depends on the situation. If the driver is driving while there is an accident, then it is the driver's fault. If there is an accident while the driver is not driving, then it is the manufacturer's fault.\n\nUltimately, driverless cars have more benefits than reprocussions. They help with fuel conservation, reduce the number of accidents, and keep people entertained. What is there not to love about these cars?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars, in my opinion, are a great idea. They are safe and convinient. \"They still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents.\"\n\nThis means that the human driver still have to pay attention to the road no matter what. If anything were to happen to the functions of the car by accident, the driver can take over at any time.\n\nHuman drivers have been known to get very tired while driving long distances leading them to falling alsleep. This has caused major accidents on highways and other areas where a lot of cars are around eachother at the same time. According to the article drivless cars \"can steer, accelerate, and break themselves,\". If something ,like falling asleep behind the wheel, were to occur, the driverless car would know what do to. If the were to need hands on driving with the human, the drivless car is \"ready to quickly get the driver's attention,\" perhaps waking them up, \"whenever a problem occurs.\"\n\nAnother good idea about the drivless car is the fact that it is being thought about to install in-car entertainment. This gives the human driver something to do instead of accidentally falling alseep like i expressed in the second paragraph. \"Such displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over,\" is a very good idea because it is safe and cofuses them back on the road when they need to pay attention.\n\nThe in-car entertainment system is all about safety which is another reason why this car is such a good idea.\n\nEvery idea is good about making the driverless car accesible for everyone to use. It is very safe and even though it is \"driverless\" it is still hands on and makes sure that it gets you where you need to go safely and efficiently.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Their is many differnt ways this could not be made by a alein. One big reason is that this hasnt only happend once this has happend before when one of are satalights were circling the earth taking images. But it was just somthing that looked like a face because of the shadows reflecting on to it.And plus we have never found life on mars so why would they just come there to create this face. Like all the rocks around the face they look the same so it would just have to be a rock that was formed in that way. Like this story I read it says that it could just be a landform common around the American West. And it also said that \"huge rock formation . . . which resembles a human head . . . formed by shadows giving it a illusion of an eyes,mouth, and nose.\" So there is many different illusions and this one just happend to be a face.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this essay Im going to be explainig about the advantage of limiting car usage. First of all a man says that when he had a car he was always tense. Now he says his more happier with out a car. Cras are good in some ways but bad in other ways because cars contaminate the air with the smoke. Their good because they take you places faster and more comftorble. But many European cities are not permiting cars, and they say is good for them. They live better now.\"All of our development since world war II has been centered on the car, and that will have to change,\" said David Goldberge.\n\nIn the United States, the Enviromental Protection Agency is promoting \"car reduce\" communities, and legislators are starting to act, if cautiously. I think that the United States should take reducing cars in consideration, too see how it goes. After five-days of intensifying smog... The smog rivaled Beijing, China wich is know as one of the most polluted cities in the world. So imagen what it would do in the United States. In Bogota, Colombia a program that set to spread to the others countries million of Colombians hiked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car free day. Leaving the streets of this capital city eerily devoid of traffic jams. It was the third year that they been doing this. The goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. For the first time other colimbian cities joined the event. We should have a Car-Free day here in the United states to see how it goes.\n\nAmerican behavior: recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by. Maybe these means people are getting over about the car fever. People should vote to have a car-free day. It would be good people would be less tens, they would get more excercise and pollution would dropp. This would be good for you and for me.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author ends story paragraph wants reader feel like going accomplish something hibiscus geese An example accomplishing something hibiscus author mentions grandmother use spend time together things together grandmother would hair put hibiscus flower Also geese sing accomplishment sees sky flying south survive cold winter months warm place", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People walk surface planet sometimes feel need something banned atleast get dirt make people think less It way world works comes something ca nt stand even bother exactly going get If someone took time make deserve right view I agree censorship world Local libraries nice place go books movies information How good resource people everything gone especially considering worlds greatest books ever written ones targeted censorship I believe Katherine Paterson valuable point saying Then books left shelf us true People nt stop one something gone continue hunting things hate lead people suffering able enjoy things want When I younger I remember going library time movies books I personally got actually see book removed censorship although I fully understand I felt I read I would get grounded Which also good kids nt scared read something We live place freedom speech yet right seems fading away There s still ways see censorship affects libraries though actually reading cases tried ban books Although fail banned right world unpredictable In school many times kids got chance read case case people trying get best books banned Which funny books books fun read school year So nt make sense take shelves Reading keeps us informed past even future Then books left people wish keep sort decency I would imagine comes making easy choice like would choose right one Saying censorship Reading keeps us strong entertained know past likely repeat unless books gone", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Should driverless cars actually exist? They are some good and bad times about driverless cars. Also some things that are the same and different about the cars and people. Should the cars the driverless cars happen? My thoughts may make you go for or against the idea.\n\nThe good things about the driverless cars is that the cars will drive them selves in a safe speed and the cars would use half as much gas than taxis use, that would good for the enviroment and for the people. The smoke and gas from the cars wont harm the atmosphere or the ozone layer, also effecting the greenhouse effect. This helps humans so they dont have to spend so much money on gas and are able to buy more important things or things they just want. Another good thing is that it'll reduces accidents and drunk driivers.\n\nThe bad things sound worser than good, maybe because they are. The driverless cars would stop accidents caused by people, such as drunk drivers, but the driver would still be drunk or sense he or she doesn't need to drive will drink more and cause problems for their health or family. Of course people get in accidents to avoid things, such as animals, people, or objescts like ice, will the driverless car know how to react? The most the car can do is stop, what good will that do if the car was on ice. People might start thinking they dont need to focus on the task at hand, so they would start texting or eating, something that would distract them and when the car needs your helps and you aren't ready what happens. People might start using thge driverless cars for a worst purpose, such as gangs, the driver can shoot without worrying about driving, crime would go up.\n\nHow would laws change, can people be younger than 16 to drive now, do you need to know how to drive, should you know what signs mean or what lines mean or do. What about texting and driving or drinking and driving, would that be allowed now sense the car drives for it self. Do the passangers have to wear a seat belt. Whose fault would be for an accident, yours or the company of the car. If you would injuired because car turned to early or late, was it the fault of the car or you, what if you hit a person because car turned and didnt see the person to know to stop and kills or injurys that person. Would people or car be the fault of things.\n\nThe driverless car may seem like an amazing or smart idea, it really isn't manying things could go wrong and isn't much benefit but gas. The driverless car seems like a lazy persons way of not driving, or a drunk to drink more, or a teen to text. The risk is high and benifits are low.The driverless car should not be thing till the person is as smart as the car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "According to one study , it is shown that in developed countries people are assumed to live more than before .in my opinion, this situation has both disadvantages and advantages that depend on how they use their lifetimes and it has some drawbacks. Namely, people have to deal with more difficulties and sadness in living , and society forces them with more problems in taking care of elderly individuals . However, this has some advantages that will be discussed in the following essay.\r\n\r\nIt is expected that the life expectancy of individuals raises and it has some disadvantages. Initially, if the length of life were more, humans would face more difficulties in their lives, because living is full of sadnesses and socially and family problems . For ,example a 90-year-old one is likely to see the death of a family member that has a high level of stress. Additionally, society must provide some facilities for the elderly that need a high budget, thus more than 70 years of individuals force more costs on the government. For instance, they need medicine , hospitals, social services ,etc. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, when ones live more than 80 year old , it has some benefits . For instance, they have more opportunities for being happy, because they have more time in their lives, thus if they used their life correctly they would have more opportunities to be successful. For instance, 80 years old is enough time to spend on learning useful skills and taking benefit of them . \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the advantages and disadvantages of living longer are equal and depend on how people use their lives, in addition to how government manage this situation .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local news paper In oppinion I think makes compiuters make times added compiuters There law people go exercise use compiuters finally I think childrens use compiuter less adult fee health reasons first oppinion I think makes compiuters make timers added compiuters time tha amount tim people take depending like one playing game spend hours playin instead diffrent activity Also like person home work start getting carried away taking time going slow ends finishing bad second oppinion I think makes compiuters law people go exersise use compiuter big percentage amount people obeast everyone sits sits compiuters starts eat playing games watching videos hours dont take break go outside third final oppinion I think makes compiuters childrens use compiuter less adults health reason s kids always looking compiuters eyes always getting red start able see well used end need glasses abetter perpscription glasses Also becaus kids usually going chatting sites start talk people dont know end getting raped kidnapped person went talked hours So local news paper make change society childrens Because I would", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this twenty-first century, I suggest that the schools must take more initiative on creating pupils with better employment skills and good basic skills as citizens compared to their personal advantages. By doing so, the nation receives a hardworking generation as well as wipes out the selfish mindset of the people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I writing letter give opinion computer use In opinion I think people use rely computers much Wether research project talking friends even answers homework Everyday millions people computer hours straight Moving fingers doesnt count exercise wastes energy Many people I know would die nt computer friends made need homework These type people need taught get things done withou technology day might fail Some students rely technology work orthey fail These children need taught ways things Like hanging friends reading book even homework Since students rely computers much always Every day people I know go home jump rest day They never anything like going outside sports Many kids type athletic sport Obessity huge problem numbers keep increasing drasticlly Everyone thinks beging caused bad eating habbits thats half People overusing computer also big problem Children around stuck computers day checking message seting pictures While children comptuer dont even think chow CAPS This comptuer usage problem beging become bigdeal obessity hold much people rely basically everything So need first people stop befor forms bad This could huge problem future So lets start cut usage time", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While the Face on Mars does look like a face, there is no way possible that it could be an alien artifact. Research, advance in technology, quotes from scientists, and actual evidence proves that this is just a natural landform on Mars. Mars has had plenty of speculation on this, yet all the answers have come back that it is impossible. No, there is not a lot of evidence, but there is enough to show that this is just a mesa.\n\nWhen scientist first found the Face, it was already speculated to be a mesa. This was because of the place where it was located, Cydonia. Cydonia is known for having many mesas in its area. This one just happened to have shadows on it appearing like a face. Let us not forget that the Face was found in 1978. That is when space travel was still a new for the world. Technology was not that advanced as it is today. The last picture was taken in 2001, which was twenty years later after the first photograph was taken. Spacecraft and photos had improved twice as much.\n\nEven though technology has improved we still cannot tell whether it is an alien or not. We must go off of facts. Scientist Jim Garvin stated that,\"As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size. So, id there were objects in the picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could not see what they were!\" This shows that the Face could not even of been seen. So, it is impossible that it was an alien artifact.\n\nMesas and buttes are very common on Mars. Especially in Cydonia. Technology has improved and there is no way we could see a face from that size. \"That's a lave dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face of Mars,\" said Garvin. Research and results have proven that the Face is just a landform like any other on earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many positive ideas to the driverless cars of the future. Not having to drive, uses less gas and oil, and less crashes. Even though these are all good points to make about the driverless car, autonomously driving cars will not bring the driverless function untill the technology is available. If these driverless abilities malfuntion, people will get hurt with no idea if it was a driver or the computer had an issue. Alse, There will always have to be a driver alert for these cars to make the right decisions if there were to be crashes or construction sites.\n\nThe self driving vehicles of the future have many sensors and radars. This technology is not cheap in the current years. Yes, there is better technology than the year of 2000, but it will not be cheap to convert or buy a vehicle with all the sensors and laser beam radars. Companies will have to invest loads of money into this technology for it to become affordable. Maybe the company wants to spend that money but others will most likely not want to invest lots of money into driverless cars.\n\nif the driverless car is put into production, the switching period will take many years for it to catch onto. There will be a mix of driverless cars and driver depedant cars. Like before, some companies will take longer to produce driverless cars than others. With this mix in cars that can drive themselves and cannot, there will be issues of liability with these issues. For example, if there were to be a crash with a driverless car and a regular car, who would know who was at fault? The driverless car will blame the manufacture and cause many unneeded court cases.\n\nThe cars today that have driverless like capabilities will need driver support. It is highly unlikey in the next year or so that they make a magical car that can drive itself through a constructionzone or a pileup on the freeway. There will need to be an alert driver to guide the car through these caution zones. There will need to be a huge leap in technology for that to happen and to fit this technology to everyday people's cars. This will cause the manufacture large sums of money for the production of this tech.\n\nDriverless cars will indeed become reality. This may happen in 10 years or 50. The only thing to worry about this becomeing reality is the testing and the transition. Testing will happen on closed or maybe open streets. Also, the mix betweeen driverless cars and driver cars will bring the biggest problems in terms of liability. Untill this technology becomes readily available for consumer cars for an understandable price, there will always be a driver in the car having to steer for tricky situations and road hazzards.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever thought about what your life would be like without a car? May of us can't even seem to grasp the concpet. So many America's are too dependant on their vehicles but, other places across the world such as; Germany, Paris, and Bogota have began working on this new concept. I strongly support the idea of no car usuage, just think of the benefits that could come from it, conservation of rescourses, lowered pollution, improved safety, and just think of all the money you would save without a car. The possiblities are endless.\n\nPollution and bad air are problems we face all around the world, and cars have much to do with it. \"If the pattern persists- and many sociologists believe it will- it will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the enviroment\" (Source 4: The end of Car Culture). Intense pollution and bad health are problems that are faced all around the world, imagine the positive effects we would see not only in our enviroments but in our own selves if we stop car usage. We need to protect the world we live it by keeping it clean, also keep ourselves healthy in order for survival.\n\nMany families lose loved ones every year due to vehicle related accidents, cars and traffic have a good percentages of deaths each year. \"Congestion was down 60 percent in the capitol of France, after five-days\" (Source 2: Paris bans driving due to smog). Congestions has to do with traffic, adults complain every day about traffic and how dangerous it is. \"It's a good was to take away stress\" (Source 3: Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota). We spend a lot of our lives streesing over many things, why add the stress of traffic and wrecks? We have many more important things to spend our time worrying about, we shouldn't stress over something that we can live without. Taking away vehicles would wipe out stress, traffic, and many deaths a year.\n\nFinancal problems aren't a forgein subject. Almost everyone can recall a time in their life either when they were facing the problems themself or heard about a close friend or family memeber going through a tough time. \"All of our develpoment since World War 2 has been centered on the car, and that will have to change\" (Source 1: In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars). Not only people but countries have been guilty of putting cars infront of other neccessities. Many young adults will base their finances around a car of their choice when we all know their are far more imporant bills to be paid. Also, with taking away the centering of cars we have time to face and solve more imporant issues. Taking out cars would give people a chance to get their priorities straight.\n\nThis is why I strongly support the idea of no cars, I see nothing but positive results that would come and many other would agree. Improved safety, lowered pollution, improved safety, and money savings are just the beginning. I understand most can't imagine life without their vehicle but change isn't always a bad thing, especially when there's many factors at stake.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I would think that in the future driverless cars would be bad to have. The bad thing about driverless cars would be that it would take away from the human nature rights. When you are young and are a teenager all you are thinking about when you turn sixteen,\n\nwhen driving would be so fun. If you take that away having a machine do you work it would defeat the purpose of the anticipaton on driving when you turn sixteen. There are good sides to that also like if your drinking you can have the car drive you so you don't harm others. Another one is if you are old an you can't really drive you can have the car help you on that to.\n\nThere are many instances where you could use a driverless car that are good in some ways and also bad if other ways. Anyone could use that driverless car and it might be easier on other people. Although we see so many thing that the machines are doing over man. The machines are taking peoples jobs and we the people are lacking the education that the machines are doing for us. We I think should know the importance of driving a car. I think it is a good thing for everyone to use so the american society wont get even more lazy.\n\nI think that the use of driverless cars are good and bad for some instances.The good reason would be that if you are drunk in some instaces you would have a car that could drive you to your house and your wouldn't harm yourself or the chance of harming others. If you have a car that can drive by itself that would be good for that reason. Another reason would\n\nbe that when you are old in age that you could have the car drive itself and you would be able to go places without worrying about you capability of being able to drive yourself.\n\nAs you can tell there are good and bad effect to if we are able to have a driverless car. It might help on some instances but most of the majority you dont need a driverless car. That's why we make taxis and bus'es we use the transportation of other people instead of your own so really in all affect you don't need a automatic car driving. That would be my oppinion on drving cars the good and the bad.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe there should not be a driveless car,becuase cars are not humans, the driveless car can have many problems that may occure overtime, and the driveless car can be dangerous for young chidlerns and may lead to death.\n\nI believe there should not be a driveless car,becuase cars are not humans, the driveless car can have many problems that may occure overtime, but to Sergey Brin he says \" without the option of smarter roads, maufactures turned to smaters cars.\"\n\nDrivless Cars can not be smater than humans,becuase cars are not humans,and cars do not have a heart beat. These manufacturies tries, to solve a main problem that is accuring toay, but does not mean it is\n\nfixs. The driveless cars are not humans and will never be.\n\nThe driveless car can have many problems that may occure overtime, and the driveless car can be dangerous for young chidlerns and maybe lead to death. Do we really need that problem? no we do not want that to happen. The driveless car can have many problems.\n\nThe rotating sensor can stop working, the video camera montion sensors, can stop working also.\n\nWhat if your car is driving by it self. Your put your trust in the car,and close your eyes. BOOM! your in the wreck. Your injured and you had kids in the backseat, crying and scared, Becuase you put more trust in a car when you did not realize the risk your puuting people lives.\n\nWhat if your kid was playing behind your car, and you did not see them there at first. \"This amazing driveless car is suppose to tell you if there an object behind your car, or warn you\" You get into your car, and you start your car up. Put it in Reverse, the sensors fails on you and you hit own kid. The parent would feel like they killed their own child. Parnets would be in trouble with the law and the media would telling false information.The manufactories gets away. Manufactories should not make them anymore. The people are going to likely blame the parnets instead of the driveless car and the manufactoires does not have to deal with that\n\nproblem.\n\nTherefore i\n\nstrongly believe the driveless car should be stop being made in manufactories becuase,cars are not humans, the driveless car can have many problems that may occure overtime, and the driveless car can be dangerous for young chidlerns and may lead to death.\n\n.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many types of emotions and if this new technology can help people if they are having a bad day it will help everyone. Students can have all of these types of emotions on a daily bases. If each class had this technology there woudn't be any troubled or angry kids around because they got the help they needed. The future is helping kids to lead a better life.\n\nIn the reading there is evidence that shows that there is a 3-D computer model of the face that can use all 44 major muscles like human muscles so they can see if your having a really good day or a really bad day. This technology would be great for schools so the teacher can tell if he needs to talk with the kid. There are many ways to use this to a teachers aid.\n\nThe second explanation to show that this would be a good thing for the students. If a student is having a bad day he won't be able to learn but with this technology he can learn and still have fun in school with the teacher and his friends. This technology can be used in many forms to make people happy when sad and all different ways.\n\nThere could also be a bad thing with the technology it could mess up and say the wrong feeling when they are already happy. Constantin Stanislavsky was a drama coach and in order to get his actors to reproduce smiles and frowning as a way of creating emotions on stage. It could work to make people have happier lives but it could also go down hill and crash and burn. That guy could become one of the best scientist or he could be found one of the worst just according to this one machine he built. There are many types of ways to succeed and his might we will never know.\n\nAll of these supporting facts show you that u can succeed by just one simple machine to make u happy or sad. Students can be happy or sad even without this machine.Teachers can always make a student much happier by just being nice and helping the student out. There could be a flaw in his machine because it could malfunction and say the kid is angry when he is happy and mess his day up. All of these will support his machine.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine person comes says CAPS reading Wait I know book That book absolutely offensive How dare read Then imagine snatch book never see This example censorship works If government notices citizens country offensive magazines books movies music right grab away No way right Everybody able decide right wrong watch read hear Nobody exposed anything nt want Also person truley wants find offensive form entertainment find matter legal Therefore I believe trying stop people fruitless action Remember would get listen favorite bedtime story CAPS The Well ca nt read anymore government declared book offensive camels took away Now boring book facts camels fun And I think CAPS authors thing amazing country freedom speech expression Stopping creativity author tough cruel Writing great story near impossible accomplish limitaions could result government censorship If song beautiful sweet contains bad word bad song If censorship would decide appropiate Would decide us Or would get together read aloud books declared inappropiate Personally I would love decide And mature adult I I morals mind choose good bad Perhaps multitude books songs would disappear altogether It possible It incredibly difficult imagine entire country moral opinions entertainment This could cause number entertainment forms eliminated So create standard approve forms entertainment Understanding young fragile children privy forms public entertainment censorship required However I strongly believe limited The censorship used help kids This similar way parent children eat healthy food instead junk growing When kids grown decide food eat Some items I believe censored public commercials children s television shows children s movies The things I many others believe censored profanity violence offensiveness toward race religion gender Later children able chose think acceptable censorship end Total censorship bad Each every citizen right read whatever please And nobody ever try take away Please nt ever let people tell morals", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the age of industrialization and modernization, we are now causing a lot of damage to the environment, which results in a multitude of consequences that we have to put up with. However, it is believed that we need to find a way to live with this phenomenon instead of making effort to alleviate it. In my point of view, it is absolutely an unacceptable idea and this essay is aimed at explaining my opinion.\n\nFirst, climate change is taking place faster and faster, which leads to the disappearance of many endangered species. Unlike human being, other species can not adapt to continously changeable environment, as a result, they are listed as endangered and even extinct after such a short time. For instance, penguins used to be one of the most populated species in the North Pole. Nevertheless, in the last 5 years, the number of them has halved and penguins are now considered to be nearly endangered. If this case remains unchanged, human being are going to be the last one to be swept out of the world for their own destructive activities.\n\nSecond, climate change is exacerbating many forms of pollution in all over the world. Apart from global warming, air pollution, dirt pollution, water pollution are resulted from climate change and doing serious harm to the people's health. The rate of chronic diseases, especially cancer is now at peak in many developing countries, where sees the most dratic climate change. Take Shanghai as an example, the citizens there even have to wear mask or inhaler when walking on the street due to the lethal air pollution there.\n\nIn conclusion, it is a hilarious recommendation to say that we can live in peace with climate change. It is urgent for everyone to come up with solutions to this problem before we become the victims for what we have made.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There ton books world deep meaning sense compasion But books mean hateful affects person reading Censorship taking books movies magazine etc shelves person read watch positive thing In many cases censorship great thing It protects young readers exposed hateful things young age In libraires librarian censor books younger people read awful hurtful things book saying Like books music movies magazines censored Some music catchy beat could get stuck young persons head This cause effect child start act like want become like person song describing Movies also censored When I little parents good job censoring things bad watch age I barly nightmares I never exposed kind writing I child On hand friend s parents best censorship allowed watch read whatever wanted She many nightmares movies books read Now since I older parents starting let watch read censored things In experiences type material I nightmares personly offened books Although censored books great story behind material supports cause dispute different people different beliefs Thousands books censored year Many different religions races people different opinions Libraries need censor books protect iniscent minds young childern", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" is an article that talks about the idea of exploring Venus. In the article, it mentions a plethora of challenges that come along with exploring Venus. The challenges include such things as: 97% carbon dioxide atmosphere, clouds of highly corrosive sulphuric acid, atmospheric pressure greater than that of Earth, and many other things. However, the author still thinks it is a great idea to explore Earth's sister planet. I happen to be one of the few, or many, individuals who think he supports his ideas very well.\n\nAlthough Venus is not the safest place to explore, the author points out ways in which it can be done. He mentions NASA's idea of allowing humans to float above the fray as a way to see what is on Venus. When he says \"above the fray\", he is saying is that we could just place a blimp-like vehicle that hovers about 30 miles above Venus's treachorous landscape. This could work because as the author mentions, jet airplanes fly at a higher altitude in order to avoid dangerous storms. Storms that could knock them out of the sky and send them crashing to the ground.\n\nThe author also points out some interesting caveats that might prevent us from doing anything scientifically productive. They mention how just simply floating above Venus only allows us to see only a limited amount of stuff on the planet. This would be due to the conditions on the planet, such as the atmosphere being too dense to allow light to penetrate it. They also mention how researchers would be incapable of taking samples of things like rock or gas.\n\nLuckily, scientists are working on innovations, possibly groundbreaking, that can help achieve an actually productive exploration of Venus. One such innovation is a simplified electronic that is made of silicon carbide. This is put to test in a chamber that simulates the conditions on Venus. The researchers are also looking back to old mechanical computers, which aren't a whole lot like the computers we have today and are more resistant to extreme conditions. Unlike our computers, these compuers make calculations using gears and levers.\n\nIn conclusion, the author supported his claim well that we can explore Venus despite its dangerous atmosphere. They rightfully point out good technologies that can be used to circumvent the atmospere and still be able to have a productive exploration. An example of such is the old mechanical computer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" wants others to believe that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger it presents. The author supoorted his supported his ideas in very well ways that I will explain to you now.\n\nHe believes that people should study it because they are making more ways for us to get knowledge about it, he also describes how interesting Venus is, and because you gain insight of the planet itself.\n\nNASA is working on a solution for humans to study Venus in a new way. As stated in the article \"Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the rooling Venusian landscape.\"(Paragraph 5). He's saying they are trying to create a vehicle that will let them study mars from above instead of landing on the planet. This supports his idea because this solution that they're creating is, \"survivable for humans\" (paragraph 5).\n\nHe describes many features, interesting feautres about Venus. In the article it states that \"On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit,\" (paragraph 3). This a true fact that might spark the interests of humans to study Venus a bit more. Also he states that \" Venus may have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" (paragraph 4). Who wouldn't want to study a planet that could've possibly had life exsistence since it was so Earth-like.\n\nStudying Venus is a huge challenge. It has proved that in many ways but that's another reason why the author encourages us to study it. He feels as stated in the article, \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" (paragraph 8). Meaning that we should not limit our studies because of danger. His opinion is that we should keep studying, \"to meet the vey edges of our imagination\", (paragraph 8). We shouldn't have to imagine things that we have opportunities to see it real life.\n\nIn conclusion, he made very good points that support his ideas. Maybe one day these ideas will inspire someone to actually study Venus and face the challenges that comes with it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The computer software can recognize the subtle facial movements we human's use to express how we feel? The software is compare to the woman named \"Mona Lisa\" for her description how her feeling. We the humans have different feelings. Dr. Eckman are the creator of Facial Action Coding System has classified six basic emotions: happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. We use the emotions in our everyday in the real life and in the web life. For recreate some emotions Dr. Huang observes that artists such as da Vinci studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisely enough to convey specific emotions. The new computer software stores similar anatomical informetion as electronic code, but Perphaps Dr. Huang's emotions algorithms are a different sort of Da Vinci Code. The Mona lisa demostration is really intended to bring a smile to your face, while it shows just how much this computer can do.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is one of the most closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, it has provide a very challenging place to examine more closely. Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth.\n\nVenus has the hottest surface temperature of temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun. Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional imediments like urupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface.\n\nAstronomers are fascinated by Venus because it mat well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life. Venus still has some features that are analogous, the planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters. Venus can be our nearest option for a planetary visit, a crucial consideration given the long time frames of space travel.\n\nNASA has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. NASA's possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would\n\nallow scientists to float above the fray.\n\nSolar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\n\nMany researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to llast long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus. NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. Some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide hace been tested in chamber simulathing the chaos of Venus's surface.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "State Senator,\n\nIf the slogan of our nation is \"We the people,\" why do we the people not actually get to vote for the president? How can a president win the popular vote but lose the presidency? None of that makes any sense. Our nation needs to abolish the Electoral College and change to election by popular vote for the president of the United States. The system of the Electoral College is irrational, unfair, and not for the citizens.\n\nTo begin, the Electoral College is unfair to voters. \"Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the \"swing\" states.\" (Plumer, paragraph 13). \"Consider that state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people.\" (Plumer, paragraph 11). If the United States is really all about the citizens, then they do not have a good way at showing it. We as citizens live here, and call this nation our home, but yet we can not even elect our own president. The Electoral College is unfair to us as voters.\n\nIn addition, \"The advocates of this position are correct in arguing that the Electoral College method is not democratic in a modern sense... it is the electors who elect the president, not the people. When you vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a state of electors.\" (Posner, paragraph 15). That textual evidence came from a passage in defense of the Electoral College! We the people should have a say! This system is not for us as citizens of the United States, and it is wrong! This is our home so let US pick our president.\n\nFurthermore, \"... and the most thoughful voters should be the ones to decide the election.\" (Posner, paragraph 20). This statement is very true because voters should be thorough when voting, but why should we be? It is not like we need to take our time and compare and contrast the presidential candidates. We are not voting for the president of our choice, so what is the point of being thorough? It is wrong to have this system, and it needs to be changed.\n\nTo conclude, as I have said above, If the slogan of our nation is \"We the people,\" why do we the people not actually get to vote for the president? The system of the Electoral College needs to be abolished. It is not letting us as citizens elect our choice of the president that we want. It is unfair and irrational. I am in favor of changing the system to election by popular vote for the president of the United States.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can a computer read your emotions? I am against of having technology to read childrens emotions. One thing is to observer what kind of emotinos are. Learning about how computers can till what emotion the person has. The work eithics that the people into making a comptuer like this.\n\nObsever the emotion behide the person or printing. New software has the power to recognize your emotions. Everyone does the same expression. Can you gmake a face and have you partner guess what emotion you are. As an ad pops up the comupter can read you raction towards the ad if it made you happy or sad, it will change the ad to a different one.\n\nThe learning around the computer. That even need to know emotional commmuniction. That school computers can tell if the child is bored or confused on work. The computer can tell the Mona Lisa that she was happy, disgusted, fearful, and angry. The computer can recogize alone 16 emotions.\n\nThe work eithics of the people that created the comutper to see what emotions we have. Dr. Huang and his partners are developing a even better for humans and computers to communicate. A 3-D computer does 44 majot muscles to see what you are feeling. People are making a comupter to recognatioin to track the emotions on a person face.\n\nDoes a computer read your emotions and yes it does because it is wired. The computer has came a long way and now it is reading emotions. This is how I am against technology reading childrens emotion. The teachers should be watching them and seeing the emotions themselfs. Kids should be able to rise their hand and ask someone for help if they are confused.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is undeniable that most individuals claim that high school grades should be promoted to say their suggestions and criticisms in order to boost the quality of education in the country. Whereas, others believe that this case will result in destroying the balance between enlistment and educators. However, in my opinion, schoolers should be allowed to offer their own ideas about their cadre' knowledge and ability. In the following paragraphs, I shall discuss both views and explain why it is a must thing. \r\n\r\n On the one hand, schoolers at high schools are not wise ample to attack the lack of educators. As personnel study at the university and attain diploma and so they have enough knowledge to teach recruitment. But, high school grades are in adolescence and so their negative feedback is based on emotional feelings rather than details. Moreover, this phenomenon leads to loss of honour and routine. As a result, the quality of education decrease. Additionally, the dominance may move from mature teams to silly pupils. \r\n\r\n On the other hand, recruitment' criticisms will help personnel to rework. In this way, educators can recognise their topical strengths and weaknesses. Furthermore, positive critical remarks assist tutors to polish their lessons taking into account the enjoyment and recommendation of their pupils. In consequence, this helps to improve schoolers' interests toward gaining knowledge. Also, the bond becomes strong between teachers and students. Students can teachers toward providing educational experiences they truly enjoy. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although there are several negative influences, I believe that students should convey openly their comments.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I personally think that the author supports his idea very well since she/he explained both the dangers of exploring Veuns and also the mysteries that lie within the planet of Venus. In paragraph eight the author wrote \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors\" that chunk of text supports the authors claim and it is a worthy pursuit. I persoanally think that exploriong Venus would be a great idea although it does have it's dangers it would be great getting information from a planet that could have been a second earth to us. There are alot of dangers in going to venus as stated in paragraph two \"no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours\". Also stated in paragraph three \"On the planets surface temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet\" \"such an enviromment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and would liquefy many metals. Also notable, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system\". In conclusion i think we should risk it and explore Venus it would be an amazing discovery and a important part of history.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Raising children is considered a really challenging task. In fact, there are many external factors that could make the process more difficult like social media and society. Hence, it is important to encourage our children to manage their time effectively. There are several useful exercises for children that would increase and enhance their skills. I believe both studying and doing physical exercises are important. In the following, we will discuss the great advantages of both studying and doing physical exercises. \r\n\r\nSpending enough period studying has great advantages for our children. For example, reading about different cultures would open new areas of thinking. Furthermore, reading novels or books is a great opportunity to enhance their language skills. It is no doubt that learning languages has a great role to increase our communication skills. Moreover, keep studying and learn our children to be more patient and committed. Thus, according to the tremendous advantages of reading, I think parents should always encourage children to read more and more. \r\n\r\nThere is no doubt that doing physical exercises has great results. For instance, playing games enhance imagination and creativity. Additionally, playing sports would enhance their health. However, children may prefer doing physical activities rather than studying because it is more exciting and interesting. I think parents should also exploit this option for their children if they did not study enough. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, I believe spending time studying has great benefits thus I totally disagree encourage children to spend less time studying. Parents should encourage their children for enough time for studying as well as doing physical exercises with the same priority.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine being able to go to school and reviewing some documents or just relaxing, you could do this with driverless and autonomous cars. We need driverless cars in the future to help with many things. Driverless cars would help with wrecks and fatal crashes. Drunk drivers would be eliminated, saving other innocent people's lives. Road congestion would be cleared up, allowing for faster commutes. Driverless cars are most definitely a good choice for the future, this is the best choice humans could make for our mode of transportation.\n\nFatal crashes would rapidly go down, the 3-D sensing and mapping of the road ahead by a driverless car is impossible for a human to do. The advancement of the brake system by driverless cars is also something a human could never do while driving. Antilock brakes would increase the safety of a car tremendously. If we allow driverless cars to start commuting for us, it will help mankind in the long run and save many lives.\n\nDriverless cars would be great for reducing human fatigue while driving on the roads, making commuting safer. One of the Google driverless cars could go half a million miles without crashing, I would trust a driverless car before I trusted a human to drive me around. The development of these cars would also eliminate drunk drivers, no more drunk driving and fatal crashes due to human error. The safety of commuting in a driverless car is much higher than when a human is doing the driving, humans can not drive like a programmed computer inside of a car.\n\nDriverless cars would radically change the world for the better. These cars could cut down on fuel emissions and make the environment safer. Faster and smarter commutes would be possible with these types of cars. These cars would be extremely helpful to mankind and the environment, we need to make the switch to these cars immediatley.\n\nWhen we make the switch to driverless and autonomous cars, many lives will be saved and changed. Road congestion will no longer be an issue, everyone will commute much faster and safer. If we do not make the change to driverless cars we are hurting ourselves, these cars could save so many lives. Human error can not compete with the minimal error of a programmed vehicle. Driverless cars would help the environment and cut down on fuel emissions because of smarter and faster commuting. We desperately need to make the switch to driverless and autonomous cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Children are full of emotions, and therefore are confused alot. So it comes as no suprise why some children struggle in school. It is apparent that what schools are doing now isn't helping these children. All teachers are different, they have different points of view, different styles on thow they teach. These opposing views make all teachers different and could confuse their students. With a computer however, there could be meximum proformance. The children would learn better and more than they were before. Computers that read emotions could benifit schools and the nation.\n\nComputers reading emotions could be a huge step in the right direction. Children could easily learn what is going on and if they do not the computer can evaluate that and change what it is doing. Dr. Haung explains \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal, even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression\". The computer knows alot of different facial expressions and therefore can easily and quickly evaluate what the child's problem is, and fix it. The computer knows the students emotions and could easily diagnose problems and help the child to better understand what they are doing.\n\nThe computer could also learn to take disiplenry action to the child. Which if the child has violent tendencies could lead to some major conflict. If the child knows that the ocmputer is expensive he/she is less liekly to hit it. The computer may even be able to stop a bad situations before it even begins by anylising the situation by reading emotion. \"Eckman has classified six basic emotions-happiness, suprise, anger, disgust, fear and sadness\". Anger is one of the emotions the computer can detect and could rush into a situaltion(granted it have some way of getting around) and fix or mediate the problem with facts. For diciplenry action computers would bring grat dicipline to the classroom.\n\nTeachers in the future could be more like operators, if something happens to the computer the teachers could work on or fix the computer. Over time this could lead to the teaching industry dissappearing. Children may not think this is good and there would definently be a lack of emotion from the \"teacher\" in the classroom seeing as it is a computer. But there is too much advantage obver disavantage. All in all teachers would still have jobs but wouldnt be as active. Which would put less stress on teachers, which in turn, would maximise proficiency.\n\nEmotion reading computers would not only benifit schools but the nation as a whole. Computers could read the emotions of each individual child and see chat works and what dosen't. The computers can also mediate arguments and take diciplenry action when needed. And teachers would have a much easier job at managing and teaching the students. Schools around the world need this new state of the art computer system to help read emotions and prepare children for the brightest future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars, good or bad? To me, driverless cars isn't the worse thing ever thought of but it isn't the smartest either. I'm against driverless cars. Technology does fail, who would want to risk that in a car?\n\nToday, people are worried a lot about technology and driving. Having a driverless car could distract anyone because they'd probably get side tracked with all the technology inside the car. It's a waste of money and time. I also feel like it's just being lazy. What's wrong with just driving yourself?\n\nAnother problem with this driverless car is, who is there to blame if there's an accident? There might be some people who fall for the concept \"Driverless\". There would also be constant worries for the driver. Technology does fail, so riding in car that's bound to destruct and/or just fail you'd be worried constantly when all you really wanna do is hop in the car and reach your destination safely.\n\nThe last problem is what's really the point of a driverless car and you have to keep your hands on the wheel and be ready for anything that comes your way, as stated in the story. There's no point of a driverless car unless your lazy and there are taxi's for that matter. Needless to say, a driverless car isn't the best thing to drive. Especially when it's supposed to be driverless.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars are useless. Technology fails, people get distracted by it, and you wouldn't know who to blame if the car was crashed or even destructed, and there's no point of the car what so ever.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When cars were first introduced into society it was the most awestruck phenomenon to occur. There was nothing better than the sight of a person's first car and the feeling of independence that came with it. But now that technology has shorten distances between countries and has made telecommuncation so much more accessible. People should engage in limiting their car usage becuase it betters personal health, improves the enivronment, and leads to economic prosperity while still gaining all the benefits that come from using a car.\n\nWhen the usage of cars is limited it often leads to better health benefits. This is true becuase when people are restricted on their driving it forces them to resort to healthier, more proactive altertnatives. For example, instead of driving somewhere people are now having to get out and walk or ride a bike. This leads to regular exercise without having to think about it and decreases overall stress levels. In the article \"In German Suburb, Life Goes on Without Cars\" Heidrum Walter, a media trainer and mother of two explained, \"When I had a car I was always tense, I'm much happier this way\". Heidrum, a citizen of the Vauban community in which everyone has given up their cars, describes how the non-usage of cars has bettered her life and in turn has actually made her a happier person. In addition, when a high usage of cars is present it creates brutual smog that can perpetuate health issues. In the aricle \"Paris bans driving due to smog\" Robert Duffer states how congestion lead to smog in Beijing in which he states \"Beijing, China is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world\". The impact of this is that when people are more active and choose not to exasterbate their driving usage, it will lead to global decreases in smog and in fat related illnesses such as obesity, high blood plessure, diabetes, and other various things that have plagued the nation and taken the lives of so many people.\n\nLimiting Motor Vehicles usage reduces the amount of carbon emissions and pollution in the air. Cars exert so much greenhouse gas emissions that degrades the air in the environment. In the article \"In German Suburb, Life goes on Without Cars\" Elisabeth Rosenthal gives the analogy that, \"...an increasing number of private cars owned by the burgeoning middles class are choking cities\". Elisabeth Rosenthal further quantifies the extent to which cars have increasing become the culprit of pollution, \"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States\". The impact of this is that when cars are used less often it betters the environment which is what mankind relies on for survival.\n\nAn increase in a healthy workforce and better environmental communities leads to greater economic prosperity. When people choose to drive less it often creates a riple effect. This is true because a healthier workforce is present it leads to more productivity. In addition, a more prosperous environment and less pollution exerted decreases operational costs. As a result Andrew Selsky in his article \"Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota\" explains the various economic effects that less car usage has made, \"Parks and sports centers have bloomed throughout the city.....and new restaurants and upscale shopping distrcits have cropped up\". The impact of this is that with more economic leverage communities are more equipped to invest and strengthen other areas such as education and job creation.\n\nIn conclusion, people should limit their driving and/or car usage because it provides three benefits. First, when people have to resort to proactive alternatives it improves their person health and decreases stress levels. Second, not using cars eliminates all the environmental harms that come from a car such as greenhouse gas emissions. And lastly, when people are more active and the enivronment is no longer depleted, communities experience greater economic longevity.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Alien made of naturally made?\n\nThe so called \"Face on Mars\" is not a face made from aliens.\n\nThe Face is just a rock formation with shadows on it.\n\nThere is no reason to believe that the Face is make by aliens.\n\nThe \"Face on Mars\" is just a Martian mesa.\n\nIn the text is states that \"scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, ony this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh.\"\n\nThat states that they just figured that it was a mesa at the time being.\n\nOn April 5, 1998 they truly found out that it was just a rock formation.\n\nThe information in the text states \"and so on April 5, 1998, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera (MOC) team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on JPL web site, revealing . . . a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\"\n\nNot everyone was satisfied though. \"The Face on Mars is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April '98-a cloudy time of the year on the Red Planet.\n\nThe camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face.\n\nPerhaps, said skeptics, alien markings were hidden by haze.\"\n\nThe people were still thinking that there were aliens that made the Face.\n\nThe mission controllers prepared to look again.\n\n\"On April 8, 2001-a cloudless sumer day in Cydonia-Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look. \"We had to roll the spacecraft 25 degrees to center the Face in the field of view,\" said Garvin.\n\n\"Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum rsolution.\"\n\nEach pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the vest 1976 Viking photo.\"\n\nThey found that the picture was actually shows in the Martian equivalent of a butte or messa.\n\nTherefore, the \"Face on Mars\" is just another rock figure with shadows.\n\nThey have solved the mystery of wether the Face is alien made or naturally made.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people know the negative consequences of smoking. However, hey still continue this behavior. The main reason is that a cigarette has a chemical component which keeps people smoking and a vital solution to reduce smoking in public is to increase the cigarette price.\nWith regard to this issue, Nicotine is one of the chemicals that manufacturers use to produce a cigarette and its effect causes smokers to be addicted to the compound. As a result, even though these people understand the degree of this dangerous product, they are not likely to stop using it. Furthermore, many health organizations have announced research demonstrating that the factor that hugely affects smokers to not be able to resist smoking us not a cigarette, but Nicotine.\nIn order to counteract the situation, perhaps the most effective mitigation is for governments to set the minimum price of a cigarette on markets which is unaffordable for buyers. Consequently, this action possibly decreases the purchasing power of smokers and, subsequently, they tend to discontinue smoking. This is exemplified by the pilot project of Thai government which charge cigarette purchasers ten times higher than the market price in specific areas. After that the authorities conduct public surveys and find that more than 80% of people who used to smoke in the areas quit smoking.\nIn conclusion, people who smoke cannot change this habit due to Nicotine in a cigarette which can be addressed by governmental policy to raise the price of a cigarette with the view to promote citizens to cease smoking and take care of their health instead.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "During attempt allow dirigibles dock top Empire State Building builders faced many obstacles Often times something predicted work whole lot easier actually exactly happened situation As stated excerpt stress dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation nearly eleven hundred feet The steel frame Empire State Building would modified strengthened accommodate new situation For builders quite project took extreme amount time effort Also builders eventually realized huge safety issues new design Most dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable This huge obstacle stood way plan The greatest obstacle successful use mooring mast nature Shifting winds due violent air currents also huge issue All things contributed mooring mast ever becoming successful", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mar's is just a natural landform because, there is no living organism on Mar's . scientist figurged it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shawdo9ws that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh. Some scientist believed the Face was an alien artifact. So as you read you might think there is something living on Mar's but the Face on Mar's is acually is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa---landforms it is common around the American West. A lava dome is the form of the Face on Mar's, \" the lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mar's. To Conclusion, A lava dome is the creation of the Face because Mar's is not a place where you are abl;e to live because if you are not able to plant how would you have food to live and temp. get as high as 100 degrees in the morning and as low as 0 degrees at night also there are very bay storms so i do not know if anyone would be able to live on Mar's.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This argument is based on if you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program or if you should not. I will give you the pros and the cons aout this program. I will also give you information on my experiences on the Seagoning Cowboys program. Lets just hope that you will be impressed.\n\nFirst, you should join this program because it provides ways to experience adventures and visit many unique places. For example, being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure, \"it opened up the world for me\". Another example is that the cowboys played many enjoying games to pass by the time. These two example both show how joining the Seagoing Cowboys program would be a wonderful experience.\n\nIn addition, I feel that the Seagoing Cowboys program could have its bad times. It could be unsafe sometimes like the time I fell off of the ladder and cracked my ribs. Courage is a word to describe this Seagoing Cowboy program, because thats what it takes to be a cowboy. Both of these text examples are giving information on how the Seagoing Cowboy program could be difficult at times.\n\nTo conclude this argument, we have talked about the reasons to join the program and reasons on why it could be bad to join the program. You can join the program based on the information that i gave you. I hope that you will consider joining the program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What do you think of the idea of a specific type of computer being able to read your emotional expressions? Pretty crazy isnt it? Well in the article of \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" the auther points out how this new technolgy called the \" Facial Acting Coding System\" is able to identiy human emotions. This new technolgy \"Facial Action Coding Syetem\" seems to be valuable in classroom with the students when it comes to confusion, being happy or even having mixed emotions.\n\nFirstly, the new technolgy \"Facial Acting Coding System\" is able to identify if a student may be confused. For example, in paragraph 6 it says \" A classroom computer could recognixe when a student is becoming confused or bored...then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" In that part of the pragraph its pointing out how this computer can as well show confusion. Maybe the student could be happy one instant then the other boom their showing a frown and this new invention will know that.\n\nSecondly, this technology can read the emotinal expression of students in a classroom when their happy as well. There maybe a situation when maybe there's no way to know if a kid is going through something. Most kids are pretty quiet and dont know how to show some type of emotion or how to come up to an adult. But for example on paragraph 7 it says \" They even inidicate th edifference between a genuine smile and a forced one. In a real smile, the zygomatic major(muscles that begin at your cheek bones) life the corners of your mouth.\" There are as well kids that are pretty good and smart at hiding things. One of these things could be hiding their real emotions and faking a small little smile, finding an easy way out.\n\nLastly, students in a classroom could be having mixed emotions and their would be no way to know just by looking at them. For instance, on paragraph 4 it says \" By weighing the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions. Each expression is compared against a neutral face.\" This technolgy can even identify mixed emotions a person is having. This can be very useful in a classroom when it comes to helping a student out. The student could be even scared to ask for help but instead the help could come to the kid from an adult through this invention.\n\nIn conclusion, the idea of having something new like this technology can be pretty scary at first. Well for sure its always scary the first time but people get used to it not all but many. Bu the idea of having this new technolgy seems pretty interesting and valuable to have in a classroom to be able to help out even more. In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" this new technolgy called, \"Facial Acting Coding System\" that is able to read students emotional expressions can be a valuable source in a classroom with students to identify their emotion such as being confused, happy or is actually having mixed emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What I think mood story really soft explainable since explains people immigrated country live basically get better life And certainly They happy ther home happy amazing educational options That I would say mood story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am for the driverless car. I feel that these cars could make life easier. Lets think about some of the things that come with the car though. The car has features that are mind blowing. Some of those features are sensors for surroundings and a vibration of the seat etc. Also this car is almost self-driving, you hardly have to even touch the steering wheel. Also it could help you dramatically. This car makes a long trip a easy and fast one like your destination is right around the corner.\n\nFirst, the sensors are important for the car. Auto makers used sensors at the wheels in the creation of antilock brakes. But within 10 years those sensors has become more advanced to detect and help you respond to danger. The sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce the power of the engine, allowing a better control of the car than a human driver could handle. Also the sensors could be used for your surroundings. When there is traffic and the car cant handle it, it sends you a message to take the wheel. This could prevent accidnets by alot.\n\nNext, this car a practically self-driving. This car can handle driving functions up to 25 miles per hour. The car also has special touch features to make sure if there is an emergency that you can take hold of the wheel. It can steer, accelerate, and brake all by themselves. But again the driver has to remain alert because the car may notify he/she when they need to regain control of the vehicle. Some of the notifications are heads up displays, vibration of the seat, or a sound.\n\nThis car could actually help you out alot. Say your a person who cant multi task very well. Its raining outside and you cant direct your hand to the windshield wipers nozzle while keeping your eyes on the road. See now thats where the driverless car come in. While the car is driving and its raining outside and the windows get really wet, you can simply turn the winshield wipers on hassle free. This car could make you life alot easier.\n\nAs a conclusion I have provided reason why I am for the driverless car. It has sensors to help me out on the road, its pratically self driving, and it could make my life alot easier. There are many other great reasons why I am for this car, but there was simply not enough space. Now I have one question, why wouldnt you buy it?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The aurthor suggested studying Venus is worthy but it does come with a lot of dangerous things. The author knows that venus isn't really the safest to be in and knows the danger it has but it's also the closest planet to earth. They call Venus and earth twins becuase they have same density, size, and occasionally the closest in distance too.\"Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its prximity to us\". People in NASA take a lot of time and a lot of risks in outer space but it also helps learn and understand the Earth and some parts outer space.\n\n\"At thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit, but the air pressure would be close to sea level on earth. Solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans\". NASA is still studying Venus, have some simplified electronics and are being tested.\" Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades\".\n\nThey create new things to help us travel and explore to get their safe. Earth is very different to the other planets of course so that's why we need the right materials to do the experiment and the right people. NASA needs people that are highly trained and went to school to study and knows everyhting. Also someone who has been working in simliar type of things so like experience so we can continuing studing Venus. Venus is worthy to study for ,the author says dispite the dangers becasue everyone knows theirs going to be dangerous things but it's worth to keep studying for and learning and putting technology on Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Young people make the decision to spend more free time doing volunteer community work, instead of playing computer games and watching movies on the smartphone. I deeply agree that this kind of activities can definitely help adolescences collect many skills, knowledges and experiences.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, teenagers can help local communities do many volunteer activities as they are energetic and willing to learn communication skills and gain valuable experiences. In the nursing home, young people can read books, talk about news and walk with elderly people, assist the disabled people pushing wheelchairs. Therefore, they should give a hand to the others who are living around them.\r\n\r\nAdditionally, There are many juveniles who prefer spending their leisure time on computers and smartphones without face to face interacting with others. This kind of behavior may impair teenagers’ psychological health, including unsociability and indifference. When they grow up and earn a living, they may not able to adapt society and to fulfill their potentials. In contrast, doing volunteer works for the neighborhood will allow youngsters to confront different people and learning how to get along with them, to encounter different issues and gain knowledges and skills to address them. As as result, It is a positive benefit for teenagers to do unpaid community works.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, Contributing effort for the community brings many advantages to young people, and helps them to establish their goals in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today we are surrounded by advertisements all over the place. We see them in newspapers, Television, the Internet and on the walls. Additionally, as every day new organizations are coming into the competition so, customers tend to be influenced by them. \n\nI strongly feel that consumers are influenced by whatever they see. In addition to ,this it is said that human beings are greatly influenced by whatever they see and hear on daily basis. In order to influence the public companies present advertisements in such a way that it inspires them to use them. For ,instance in the promotion of cars actors drive the car at a speed of 120 km per hour which attract youngsters to buy that car. \n\nHowever, there are some products which are presented to the general public such as fast foods and cold drinks which are not good for their health. In addition to this producers ask big actors to act in the bulletin so, that they can attract a lot more people to buy it. For, example big film stars act in the bulletin of Pizza and burgers which influence young children to eat them. \n\nAccording to my view if we want to save future generations from the bad influence of ads then authorities need to make some laws so, that they don't affect the lives of innocent citizens. In the I will conclude by saying that although the majority of the companies will keep on making the ads and posters it is our responsibility to buy those things which are good for us and refuse the other things.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today’s modern society, it can be difficult for students to pay attention or concentrate on lessons at school. The reasons for this are diverse, and thus it requires suitable approaches for children to tackle this problem. \n\nTo begin with, there are certain reasons why children are unable to concentrate on learning at school. First, technological advancement is one of the main reasons. Nowadays, most children have smartphones or computers to study and entertain. This is due to the fact that their parents are so busy with their work, so they cannot help their children to learn at home. Consequently, students can learn on the internet with video records and apps, which are more interesting than theoretical knowledge at school. Second, teenagers have to study long hours every day. Apart from studying at school, they must go to extra classes for many subjects such as math, literature or English. As a consequence, they cannot have a break to rest so they cannot pay full attention to all subjects at school.\n\nTo tackle this issue, some measures can be adopted. To begin with, teachers at school should make the lessons diverse for children to increase their interests. For instance, more activities and experiments should be included such as visiting the museum about history after finishing a lesson in this subject. Moreover, parents could help their children to organize a more reasonable timetable for studying. Therefore, students can pay attention and concentrate on subjects at school. Besides, if they have more time, they could develop their aptitude and find out their favourite subject.\n\nIn conclusion, there are many culprits of distracting children such as technological advancements and a hectic studying schedule, and their teachers and parents can have a lot of methods to solve this problem.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think books music movies magazines anything thats offensive took shelves lil kids read books dont need hear reed offensive things But time peope wan na hear reed things like area librarie materials like kinds libraries offensive books movies magazines reasons take offensive materials shelves could racist offening certin things people nt wan na see reed white people hating black people black people hating white people type racist things It shouldnt alounded hurt someones feelings I observations reading books school librarie came acrossed words offensive like books use word nigger since im black s offensive know saying still say kinda touches way Im sayin offensive towards people way could like said instead offensive books shelves one area materials like could found stead material childeren people get offened The last thing wan na talk childeren people dont wan na see nasty things books kid wouldnt want childeren c nasty things could offensive books also talk drugs people dont wan na hear read people also wan na see read things like like older people diffent point views things thats one area libraries materials like In conclustion think hear take say material thats books music magazines offensive anybody race could offened see read place libraries", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author of The Challenge of Exploring Venus suggested to study venus is a worthy pursuit despite it condtions and or dangerous risks. I think the author thinks studying Venus is worthy based of the author saying in Paragragh five althought it is 170° F(Fahrenheit) it may be difficultt condtions, but it still survivable for humans.\n\nMore evidence of it being worthy of studying is in Paragragh seven saying NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. From one of there examples, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venuss surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions, meaning it is possible to find research. Research is our only way of getting data proven in Paragragh six stating \"researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance. Therefore, scientists seeking to conduct a thorough mission to understand Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks\".\n\nAnd my final piece of evidance stating it is worthy of studying Venus is in Paragragh's six and eight \"peering at Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective. Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A great many people belive that the Cydonia mesa is created by extra-terrestrial life forms or 'aliens'. While this is a very popular opnion that appears through out the media, such as books, magazines, and talk shows, it doesen't seem to have the scientific proof the back it up. The Cydonia mesa was created though natural means and there were cerntainly no aliens involved.\n\nSome people might say that NASA would want to cover the mesa up if it was created by aliens, which make no economic sense. If extra-terrestrial life was found, NASA would get sizeable grants from the goverment to continue with the space exploration program. NASA decribed this as a \"huge rock formation...which resembles a human head...formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose and mouth\". There was no mention of aliens.\n\nMany imaging devices were sent to find out wether the Cydonia mesa was in fact an alien artifact. Their names were the Mars Global Surveyor and Mars Orbiter Camrea, each one better than the last. Better camreas, better crews, and everyone was trying to figure out this strange land mass. This was hard, because it takes a long time to line up a camera perfectly with an orbiting, spinning planet.\n\nFinally on April 5th of 1998 Mars Global Surveyor flew over the mesa and snapped a picture. No aliens to be seen anywhere. Still, people weren't satisfied. They protesteted that the picture was taken in cloudly weather and thats why there were no extra-terrestials.\n\nOn April 8th of 2001, a cloudless, summer day, they flew over again and snapped a picture. In this picture it was crystal clear it was just a mesa. There were no signs of alien life and nobody was able to dispute it.\n\nThere was not one thing on that planet that even remotly pointed to the idea of extra-terrestrials on Mars. Even if there was, NASA would report it as soon as possible for financial gain. The money they would get to keep looking would be sizeable. So they decided to look, and they sent up many camreas to get photos. All those photos proved one thing. The Cydonia mesa was created though natural means and there were cerntainly no aliens involved.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" is an article about trying to explore Venus and the obstacles that need to be overcome. It starts first by telling the reader some information about Venus, such as that Venus is similar to Earth in density and size (paragraph 2). Then goes on to say a few challenges like the earthquakes and temperature. However, I don't think the author supports the idea of studying Venus though it is dangerous.\n\nFirst, the author doesn't give any information on what we could get out of studying Venus. In paragraph 4 in the last sentence the article speaks as if it will later talk of the productiveness of the mission, however the author says in paragraph 8,\"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidation endeavors.\" The quote doesn't say any physical reward that could help anybody. Knowledge is pointless if it cannot be used, which the knowledge from or of Venus is pointless becuase it can't be used.\n\nThe author also speaks of the challenges but doesn't solve them well. Firstly, the challenges they spoke of include a mostly carbon dioxide atmosphere, sulfuric acid in the atmosphere, an 800 degree surface, atmospheric pressure is 90 times stronger than Earth's (The author says it's enough to crush a submarine.), liquefy many metals, erupting volcanoes, earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes.\n\nThe first solution the author speaks of is from NASA and is a blimp-like vehicle as he put it, and would be about 30 miles above the surface to escape the ground conditions. The issue is it's still pretty hot at 170 degrees Fahrenheit and still doesn't have access to new information due to light not being able to go through the atmosphere. The next solution was eletronics made from silicon carbide that have done well in similutions of Venus's surface, however it has only been done with simple electronics, which they probably need bulkier electronics to be useful to gather information and send it from Venus's surface. Then the last idea of a solution was a mechanical computer, which is a machine doing the calculations through gears and levers (paragraph 7). The proble with using the machine is since there is no electronics, how will they recieve information from it?\n\nDue to the lack of quality of solutions and the little explanation of reward for studying Venus the author doesn't support the idea that studying Venus is worth it though the dangers. The only reward being the gaining of knowledge is pointless if we can't apply that knowledge, and conditions on Earth are definetly not as bad as Venus. Lastly, the solutions don't work well enough to be useful. Such as the blimp, it's useless to get close and not gather any information from the planet. Therefore, the author has little support that is beneficial in supporting the pursuit of studying Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local Newspaper Some people say computers negative affects family friend others say computers important aspect society I would agree second group people Computers help students research information need school People talk friends things like facebook write rough draft computer save go back make final changes draft final I elaborate following three paragraphs Computers quick easy way look information school project paper I understand people thinking computers take away family time would book A book would probably take time get less information For example book could multiple people read entire thing get two sentences information Another reason computer reasearch quicker go one page get information gotten information page still need click another link If people nt computers would go library spend time looking Is worth use time People talk friends facebook Some people say computers distract friends really help talk friends What vacation tired seeing talking family ve non stop week miss friends All id turn computer intent link Chat rooms also help meet people age next town enywhere country They even became new best friend When write paper want write go back write times Theres much simpler way s called computer You write first draft inordre get final copy reread make changes nessecary Computers also help kids spell better All hit button", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars nowadays are a big part of our lifes, they take us to where we need to go and help us go to far away places. Even though cars are important in our lifes, there are alot of advantages to limited car usage. Some places such as VAUBAN, Germany have given up their cars. \"Car ownership is allowed, but there are only two places to park--large garages at the edge of the development, where car-owner buys a space, for $40,000, along with a home.\" This results in less people owning or having cars and reducing green house gas emissions from tailpipes. \"Passangers cars are responsible for 12 percent of green house gass emmissions in Europe... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States\" (source 1). Private ownership of cars are slowly choking our cities, if we limit our car usage little by little it may have a huge effect in our ecosystem.\n\nIn continuation, there have been situations where the air pollution got so bad that they had to ban driving so they could clear the air. For example in Paris, \"after days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of global city\"(source 2). The drivers were fined a 22-euro fine if they did not leave their cars at home. In the end the smog cleared and the French party recinded the ban for odd-numbered plates. This is one of the many examples that proves that just by having less cars driving around it eventually changes the way the atmosphere looks and cleans the atmosphere a little.\n\nSmog is a sign of high air pollution, it indicates that the air is not healthy and this can be harmful to our enviroment. \"It was the third straight year cars have been banned with only buses and taxis permitted for the Day Without Cars in this capital city of 7 million. The goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog.\" As indicated in the passage(source 3), \"Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota\", just one day without cars can reduce smog imagine if we go weeks without a huge number of cars driving around. This idea might sound crazy to some people but it has suprisingly helped the enviroment. This however is not the only advantage of reducing car usage. Some other advantages are that if we go to our jobs in a bike everyday or just go for a walk instead of a drive we are also being more productive and active, hence making us healthier.\n\nAlthough some people might find leaving their cars behind is a bad idea, studies have shown that people who do so gets used to the idea and find less reason to resume the habit of car commuting. For example instead of driving to the beach we should ride our bikes or take public busses to get there. Without cars we learn to appreciate the beauty of nature more and notice things about the place were we live that we have never seen before. I have came to notice that when you are driving you really dont notice things because you are to busy focusing on the road, but when u have a walk around your neighborhood or anywhere for that matter you see things you have never noticed before and you leaarn to appreciate nature more. The idea of leaving our cars behind is hard for some people, but if you think about the effect it will have on the enviroment it is worth it.\n\nIn conclusion, car-free cities might sound like a joke to some people but it is helping out in clensing our enviroment increasingly. As indicated in the passage, \"The End Of Car Culture\", \"If the pattern persists--and many sociologists believe it will--it will have beneficial implications for carbon emmissions and the enviroment, since transportation is the second largest source of Americas emissions, just behind power plants.\" We are responsible for how our enviroment is going to look like in the future years, wouldnt it be better for it to look like a beautiful clear sunny day or a foggy grey fuss? Quiting a habit like driving is very hard but the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays,an increasing number of people are concerned about the rapid growth of the robotics industry.However,whether the development of robotics industry would bring the possible adverse impacts has cause heated debate recently.Personally I agree more with that robots are more on the side of liberating humanity from monotonous jobs and unleashing our creativity。\r\n\r\nFirst，it is obvious that the vision of the modern world where human play a important role of the creators，and artificial intelligence will construct machines to implement these creations.One of the benefits that robots free workers from repetitive and tedious job and allowed them have enough time for their creativity work and innovation.Especially in industry where robot can replace a number of people to do the same things just like people do ,which release the productivity and increase efficiency.Additionally,in a daily life context,more and more advanced robot has adopted in the healthcare,assisting surgery to success and helping disabled and senior people improve their life style.\r\n\r\nMoreover，that is not to say that the development of robot would not cause negative effort for our daily life.In contrast，the high speed growth of robots approach to be an versatile machines that often complete quickly with precise and ask for no perks such as insurance and paid time off，leading to they increase more competition than human beings in some occupations.For instance，\r\n\r\nAssembly line in the automobile industry has shown that the shift from human labor to machine can yield high product efficiency.\r\n\r\n In conclusion，as with any revolution technology，robot will give rise to some negative effects including increase employment pressure.But renewable development and choice then come.Therefore,I believe robot will play important role in the human’s future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author winter Hibiscus Minfong Ho ended story way show theme starting Her mother adds theme starting saying Its flowers arent pretty its strong enough make winter Thats matters Her words metaphor family starting lives pretty survive matters Her words soothe daughters worries starting ore Also budding hibiscus could considered asymbol rebirth since dying growing seasonsThe family dying family family However even though died family meqan lost heritage author end talking flower like Saeng", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In today's fast-changing world, it has become essential that children receive education at the best school, and then help them become good citizens and workers. However, many believe that the school helps a little when it comes to the benefits that they receive as individuals.\r\n\r\nThese days, academic institutes not only focus on children education but also emphasise the children's upbringing. As parents are not getting enough time for their children, they rely on the schools which can teach them the values, which helps their kids to become good human beings and workers eventually. Academy also teaches students social etiquette, which they may not learn at home. Also, kids get engaged in a lot of future-ready sessions, such as career orientation, life-saving skills, etc. If these skills are taught at a very early age, it creates wonders when the child grows up. Similarly, students also need to learn moral values, in order to become good citizens, and what could be the better place than a school for this.\r\n\r\nHowever, there are few people who say that institutes are overburdening pupils. They feel young age is the best era for kids to enjoy their life in doing what they like, rather than forcing huge responsibilities on their head. As per them, the academy wastes a lot of precious moments of children in the activities, which are not required at a young age.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion, children need to learn the essential skills that can help them become future-ready. Today, a lot of schools design their curriculum in a way that can help them become a good citizen. Hence, I do not agree with the point that it does not benefit them as individuals.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the rising number of environmental issues , many suggest that increasing the prices of vehicles and car fuels will help save the escalating situation , I totally agree that this solution will contribute positively as it will force people to replace their fuel-working vehicles with electric ones or rely on public transportation and also it's known that around the world nations that provide cheap fuel prices suffer with environmental hardships the most.\r\n\r\nTo begin with , a surge in the prices of fuel can lead to pleasant outcomes , if it were to occur in a particular nation people will start to think about alternatives that could be more environmentally safe , for instance , the government of Norway , is known for its harsh taxation policies against fuel products , therefore , the number of electric cars sold in the country is one of the most worldwide .\r\n\r\nIn addition , countries that have low gas prices are said to be the most polluted , moreover , people in these states heavily depend on fuel-based cars , for example , Saudi Arabia has one of the cheapest gasoline prices in the world , given that fact , almost everyone ones a car ran by it , furthermore , it's one of the most polluted places according to the Air Quality Index , however ,in recent years the Saudi government has been funding public transportation and making it cheap and accessible for everyone , and this based on other countries experiences , will surely be a positive development for the surroundings .\r\n\r\nTo sum up , increasing the prices of fuel products is an effective way to reduce pollution, as it will make individuals seek other means of transport , on the contrary , it's evident that doing the opposite and declining the prices can be very harmful and have a lot of serious consequences.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There has been a controversy about whether museums should be enjoyable or educational. I think museums can be entertaining and educational, and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.\r\n\r\nFirst, they serve as a recorder of history. As we know, there are hundreds and thousands of all sorts of museums around the world; some are national museums that have the most precious antiques; some are new museums, such as technical museums. However, all of them play a similar role, which is recording history; hence, visitors can understand the progress of history by visiting these museums. Take The Palace Museum as an example. It is famous for its valuable antiques, which record the development of Chinese history, and they can open visitors' eyes. \r\n\r\nSecond, the content of particular museums is appealing. It's expected that different museums serve different purposes; some are historical museums, and some are new media museums. Take me as an example. I have been to a technical museum in Berlin, and it was an eye-opener for me. It didn't only teach people scientific knowledge; it was also an entertaining place. For example, there was a kids' club exclusively for kids. During the weekend, parents can take their children to this museum; kids can play in the kids' club, and parents can enjoy the artwork here. \r\n\r\nIn my opinion, museums can serve these two purposes. For instance, I have read an article about a museum which held a treasure hunt activity while they were having an exhibition about Pharaohs. This museum was popular during that period of time because children could participate in that engrossing activity, and adults could enjoy the breath-taking antiques. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe museums can be entertaining and educational.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this period of globalisation, technology has developed, particularly a robot. A robot will be needed for industrial worldwide and daily activities. Another belief is that robots will affect people to become lazy. This essay will compare and contrast both opinions, and my opinion, which is in favour of the latter view and will be discussed in a sensible conclusion.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, robots greatly benefit our lives, especially in the industrial field. In this circumstance, the robot plays an essential role in helping people in the factory, so people do not need to redo any activities or other work that pose a fatal risk to their survival. For instance, individuals can do strenuous activities with minimal security and high risk. As a result, it has been undertaken in several industries so that each factory will use a robot in their work process.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, people held another viewpoint that robots could make people idle. In other words, many humans' roles have been replaced, and robots do everything. For example, in the future, when people want to eat something, they give orders to their robots and let the robots do their work. As a result, people become both lazy and fat, even paralysed due to lack of activity, and in my opinion, it is sensible for our lives.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, although people have to think more adequately, robots provide benefits for industrial and daily activities or conversely. However, it will depend upon the people's mindsets and which view they favour.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Saeng said tree bought starts budding take test She means without plant feel like taking test She plant whole life She also thinks without plant Saeng means since shes plant like whole life thinks needs I dont think really needs I guess comforts", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir author creates lots moods First author creates mood makes want cry While kind Love mood Narciso loves home s grew cherished Also Narciso graceful got chance grow Finally s happy Cuban culture good caring parents The author good moods", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Allot people say laughter big part relationship agree allot people nt always laugh every relationship laughter big component make someones day greatest day ever There always someone bad time school home place see someone like always cheer like saying something nice even saying something like hope good day give smile put bad thing avoiding laughing aside made day sharing smile laughter Allot people need someone go going hard situation problem going cant go alone home even school need someone talk share feelings shoulder cry always makes someone feel good letting pain inner self others need make someone going hard time smile laugh always something healthy relationship way offer person pain sad e healing This reminds true story know One time girl elementary school happy girl shared laughter happiness others someone anyone could go problem needed someone talk one nicest girl school everyone liked tended always show love respect others always seemed life perfect worries full joy child family course parents would always give wanted least s thought It came school except girl never missed day school strange every person must sick s thought except missed another day another another starting think moved away probably never coming back next week showed happy see missed girl except something different nt nt laughing smiling anymore lost sparkle made different I thought wrong finally found gone mom past away sad nt know say happy one day another nt mom anymore thought parents nt share happiness share others right back gong hardest time life That s happy sharing happiness others always greatest thing someone never know kind things going need someone make smile laugh", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How would you feel if a teacher knew how you were feeling? Woul you feel uncomfortable? Or would you feel annoyed? Today technology is able to do that. They plan on using it during class to detect weither a student is confused or bored. If they used a technology to see if im confuse, annoyed, or bored I will not like it.\n\nIt does sound nice to a teacher to tell if a student is confused because they can help them, but if the teacher calls them during class the student will also feel embarass. Some students will be going through stuff and if they dont want talk about it and you ask them how their doing it will make them even more upset or really uncomfortable. In the article it says, \"Eckman has classified six basic emotions-happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness-and then associated each characteristic movements of the facial muscles.\" What if therre is more emotions? How will they calculate that? Everybody is different how they know if some is happy but their actually upset. Everybody makes different faces when their happy, scare, and etc.\n\nIn conclusion, i feel like this idea is not a good plan. When im at school i want to feel comfortable, and if somes annoys me then it's okay for me to know im annoyed not the teacher business. Everyone gets bored at one point, I bet 80% wake up saying, \"I dont want to go toschool, it's boring.\" Plus what if these calculations are wrong, technology always a bug or something so why should we rely on a technology to tell us how we are feeling? I dont want nobody else to know if im upset or not it's my business.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This technologuy is evolutionary. Our personality defines who we are as a human being. The use of Facial Action Coding system in classroom is valuable. The first reason is keeping us from holding in our pain and sadness inside. The second reason is teachers learning to adapt to our emotions and learn new ways to teach us and help us understand better. The last reason is understanding how other feel brings us closer to them and helps prevent many disasters.\n\nTo begin with using the technology which helps us detects other emotions in the classroom helps us tromendously. In the article the author explain\"For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face\" that is true but just by simply looking at them and seeing how they feel doesn't help us understand who they are. If the technology helps us get to the next level of understanding peoples emotion in the classroom, it would help us connect with them even further. Teachers can help us learn things more efficently if they know how we feel about certain subjects. They can adapt to our learning styles and helps us learn in the way that's easiest for us.\n\nThe second reason why this evolutinary technology can benefit us in classrooms is teachers and friends in our classroom could prevent many things from understanding the pattern of our emotions and how to counteract and help us. In the article it says\"Eckman has classified six basic emotions—happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness\" if he has classified that much already just imagine how many lives we can save if we keep developing and reconfigurating the machine, this technology can change our lives and human civillazation forever. Lets put it in a senario: your friend is looking all down and gloomy coming into the classroom but the machine tells you exaclty how he/she is feeling from there you and the teacher can adapt to her/his emotion and help your friend cheer up. That way your leting them know that you are there for them.\n\nThe last reason is this tecnology can helps us prevent suicide, school shooting and many things in the classroom. Studies shows that suicides are caused mostly of bulling. In the article the author stated\"By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions\" If the technology can do they much why are we not using it to help prevent many disasters in the classroom? If we can detec how a student is feeling and detect that he/she is at the end of his/her rope we can step in and help to prevent horrifing events. Suicide happens when a student feels like theres noone in the world that undertsand them and their pain. They feel lonely and helpless but if we have technology like that in our classroom we can imedeaitly help them and prevent those terrible events. School shooting often happens when a student is picked on or being bullied every single day of their lives but if we know how they feel, we can slove the problem and prevent many deaths. We are in desprate need of technology like that in our classrooms.\n\nIn conclusion I do beleive Facial Action Coding system in classrooms are valuable. The technology can help us prevent disasters events. It could help teacher connect and learn our styles of learning and adapt. We as students can connect with eachother on a deeper level and understand eachother more. The last reason is this technology can prevent us from keeping our pain, sadness to our self. This technology is evolutionary and it can save lives, helps us to become more succesful and change not only schools but also the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Zroom! Cars have been developing for hundreds of years all over the world. They have become very dangerous to the environment and there are many advantages to limiting the use of them.\n\nThere is only so much space on earth and alot of it is taken up by parking. No matter where you go there will always be parking spots on the fertile ground that we need to preserve. Garages, street parking, and driveways not only house vehicles but they also take up valuable space! By limiting the use of cars we can cut back on the land wasted to house them.\n\nAnother important advantage to limiting car use is that it will save you money! Everyday we hear about a new car that just came on the market but the price only keeps on increasing. No one wants a cheap car that they are embaresseed to be seen in and many pay vigorously for new upgrades. The biggest expense is gas, which you will have to pay for almost everyday as the price keeps rising.\n\nFinally, car usage is extremely bad for the environment. Paris is in days of near-record pollution and its become so bad that they had to enforce a partial driving ban to clear the air. Every time you start your car smog comes out of your exhaust polluting the air. After awhile it falls back to the ground and sticks so when it rains the roads become very slick which is a major hazard.\n\nIn conclusion, we should all limit the use of cars. Although its ok to use them in moderation; they are still space consuming, expensive, and bad for the environment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You know people say school fun place day Well would agree I m school I would laugh day long see friend name We would fun day long three us classes two classes still laughing halls class rooms times people nt know I always loved coming school last year year much fun moved I nt know lives left good old days fun sucks going schools still coming school us two us self hardly fun class without days I remember first came school look like girls class got know became best friends next day though would like new kid school stuff got know well would hang etcher teacher back seventh grade would hang The thing always love would turn anyone bad day turn really good day would always things like days felling blue would try make feel would get mad us nt needed us I felt bad friends friends post matter The next day would nt remember going yesterday would nt remember much really mad someone one time one classes much class much people painting painting bulletin board colors white brown kinda got place panted hand haft brown side white got paper using let dry paint work good go yo next class The next day class almost thing kinda got grand sink sops descender draw little something draw heart name name pen heart paint In next class laughing rest day even got sister laugh us even funny ate lot candy candy makes us laughter time days days I ll remember time I always laughing time always find something laugh talk Out times laugh fun ones friend would lots fun glue holding us together I think us together always laughing every scent day No matter nt would laugh time This one would say like time one classes would time fifth two girls four boys guy teacher would almost anything class would anything would get us troble", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It cannot be denied that, in the contemporary days problem of housing scarcity is extremely high. It is responsible for many serious outcomes in the community. A single way to tackle out conquering issue is government efforts, is believed by a group of individuals. I agree to the given statement to a large extent and my inclination is explained in the following paragraph. \n\n\nDiscussing about steps should be taken by the centre to eradicate the housing deficit. The most anticipated one is they should encourage citizens to live in the countryside. They should run a campaign on social media and various area of a nation regarding benefits of living in a village in order to, motivate the people to reside there. For instance, in 2015 the authority of the Maharashtra province ran a campaign on twitter and Instagram to encourage local individuals to live in a small town rather than, to reside in large urban. This step was work significantly. \n\n\nMoreover, authority of country should also work to increase the job opportunity in the rural areas as, majority of civilians come across metropolis just four to get an employment. If the government will improve work opportunities in non-developed region, it would be very beneficial. Last but not the least, they should also reduce the amount of text in villages so that, people will more likely to live there. This effort will also create many business options other because, businessman will be encouraged to invest there. \n\n\nOn the other hand, citizens and builders also have to make some efforts to eliminate the following issue. Builders and individual should develop the city in the vertical way. They have to give priority to the skyscrapers and flats. Apartment usually require less space on the land, whereas, bungalows require it more. If a metro grows vertically, then this circumstance should reduce effectiveness. \n\n\nTo conclude, I believe the large extent that the problem of inadequate shelter can be eradicated by government steps such as, making citizens more conscious to live in rural, although to get acceptable results builders have to take responsibility to grow metropolitan vertically. It is the most ideal way to deal with this issue.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are you ever afraid to drive in fear of an accident? Did you know that 100% of car acciddents are caused by human drivers. Driverless cars are soon going to become a reality in our world as Google and many other car companys are making driverless cars. Driverless cars seem to be a very good idea to me because of how they can get you where you need to go as you relax and not worry about focusing too hard, allow you to not have to carefully monitor other drivers, and how they allow a human to take control as the human desires.\n\nFirst, Driverless cars would be able to get you where you need to go without having to focus too hard on driving. \"Google has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions since 2009. Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\" Here, the passage talks about how reliable driverless cars can be. Being able to rely on the car to focus on the driving for you can be a huge relief when under a lot of stress while driving.\n\nSecondly, I think driverless cars are a good idea because of how you don't have to carefully monitor the driving of others. Your driverless car will tell you when someone is driving recklessly and allows you to take control of the car at any moment you would like. \"This necessitates the car being ready to quickly get the driver's attention whenever a problem occurs.\" The passage talks about how driverless cars will be able to notify the human in the car of any problem that might require a human driver.\n\nThirdly, I think driverless cars are a good idea because the human is able to drive whenever they want. It isn't as if you are forced to let the car drive itself. I believe that this is a great feature for people who love to drive as they can drive as they wish. \"Some manufacturers hope to do that by bringing in-car entertainment and information systems that use heads-up displays. Such displays can be turned off instantly when the driver needs to take over.\" The passage states that the driver could take over whenever they feel like it and enjoy in-car entertainment when not wanting to drive.\n\nFinally, Driverless cars are a very good idea because they allow you to take focus off the road and put it elsewhere, not have to focus on other drivers, and have the ability to choose to drive and not drive whenever you feel like it. Driverless cars are most likely going to be in our world very soon. I believe that it will be a great experience for everyone.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I don't think that studying Venus i a worthy pursuit because in the article it states that \"humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud draped world,since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours\"meanong no space craft has survied for more than a couple of hours. The article also states that \"numerous factors contribute to venu's reutation as a challenging planet for humans to study\"meaning its already a hard planet to study. The plant is also almost 97% carbon dioxide blankets venus. Venus is also a very hot place,in the article it states that \"temperatures average over 800 degrees fahrenheit and a atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet\". The article also says that \"these conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on earth\" meaning that the tempertures are way too extreme for us humans. Humans arnt even going to live there so what is the point of pursuing studying venus. i don't think that it is a good idea to study venus because there is far to dangers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article \"Making mona Lisa Smile\" I learned about a new type of software that can recognize a persons emotions. this process is based on all 44 differnt muscles in our faces. The software scans your face and sees what muscles are moving and how, based on the emotion you are feeling. This is a huge step in technology and I feel could be both very instrumental and not for our future use of computers at the same time. We use computers constantly nowadays, we are always on them, and we do need them to grasp certain concepts, like emotions better, but I feel this new software might be invasive to a lot of people.\n\nMy opionion on this technology is that it is amazing and very useful. one point brought up in the passage was using the software for students to see how they are grasping a lesson. It would be very helpful for my laptop to know when I was frustrated and be able to help me, or better explain my lesson to me. I also see its use in videogames, having better computer-animated faces could be very useful and cool in a videogame. I also believe that this software can be used in videogames to see when youre struggleing with or enjoying differnt parts of the game.\n\nThis software is very invasive though. im not very keen on the idea of my computer watching me and scaning my face constantly. I think the idea of using the facial recognition to see which kinds of web ads I'd like to see is too much. I know most people are already bothered by the fact that our cameras on our phones and computers are already recording us, but the idea that they are scanning our faces and seeng our emotions will make many people uncomfortable.\n\nAnother reason to not use this technology is that it is one step closer to making artificial inteligence comonplace, which I personaly don't thinkl we should do. We can not control our technology if it gets out of hand, and giving our computers all the information we can about emotions, how to create them ,and recognizing them is a bad idea.\n\nIn conclusion, I think using this software in small amounts could be very useful. though stated in the article, could be challenging to use on our everyday computers and phones because they can not handle the complex algorithms used. This new advancement is definitely a step foreward with education and how we learn, but may be a step backward with privacy. I feel thast many students will appriciate the technology and welcome it. Only time can tell how this becomes a part of our lives. I do hope it will be a miniscule one.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can driverless cars take over the world? Driverless cars are coming, and google cofounder Sergey Brin beileves it would fundamentally change the world.\n\nDriverless cars can be useful to the world , but all technology has its flaws. The question is if the technology fails and someone gets injured. Who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer. Also these driverless cars are not that driverless. Some features of the rode the driver has to take controll of the car. The driver can fall asleep waiting on their turn to drive.\n\nDriverless cars sound awsome and unique, but they can also be dangerous. Still even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in case of an accident. In some states its illegal to even test computer driven cars.\n\nIn conclusion driverless cars are not 100% safe. Also there not 100% driverless either. Laws will change as technology gets more functional and liable. , but we grow closer to our destination every day.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir love kindness welcome This true author uses adjectives passionate warm humble simple describe family lives surrounded kind people loving ambience Also author describes family always welcomed others home received similar kindness back This describes consider everyone family Narciso believes love finally author explains extremely grateful parents love sacrifice states thanked repeatedly This also shows Narciso wrote memoirs full love especially parents dictated mood piece", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a great innovation in the car industry. The new driverless cars will make driving more enjoyable, more fuel efficient, and make driving safer.\n\nOne main advantage about a driverless car is the stress of driving will go away. No more will people have to deal with other people riding their tail, speeding, and not abiding by the laws of the road.\n\nAnother reason is fuel consumption. The future looks good for mother earth, when driverless cars are invented they are thought to use only half the fuel the normal everyday car would guzzle up. This is a major positive with the prices of fuel rising and in more demand than ever.\n\nThey will also make driving safer by eliminated humans from the equation. People are amazing at a lot of things but driving isn't always one of them. By letting the person sit back and relacks while their car does the driving, this automatically eliminates the human factors of: being tired, undecisive on what to do, or not very good at driving. Eliminating this will make car crash rates go way down.\n\nSome people think driverless car are to dangerous and raise questions like,\" if the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-the driver or the manufacturer? \" This is an example of one of the many questions being raised but the technoloy failing and someone getting hurt, is no different than the brakes failing and someone getting hurt. And most all driveless car have the ability to let the human take the wheel if the car is in trouble.\n\nDriverless cars are a great innovation in the car industry. The new driverless cars will make driving safer, more fuel efficient, and more enjoyable for driver but until they officially release one no one can says if they are a magnificent idea or down right terrible idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System, or FACS, is a very important innovation in the computer-science world. Is it a good thing that can be a gigantic leap for technlogy in the classrooms, or is it a bad thing that could be a hold up for all new innovations in the school enviroment? Here's my take on it.\n\nI think that this technology should be used in the classroom enviroment, but with moderation. FACS could be extreamly useful for teachers to see how their students are enjoying the presentations or lectures and also how the retention rate is of what they are teaching. With FACS giving accurate readings on how students feel about whatever is happening that day, we could have a way better education on our hands in this country. In the article, Dr. Huang predicts that with this technology, it could modify the lesson being given like a human instructor. He also mentions that if a Web ad appears on the screen and you smile, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown when that ad shows up, the next ad will be different. Obviously this technology is very very far into the future and if it would come to the schools, it would not happen for a very long time; but this is still a very cool concept. There are some things though that this could backfire on. One of those being that if a camera or 3d sensor is watching you for a long period of time, that would make it easy for someone to hack into, steal personal information, and take unwarented pictures of you. Only then will we have to put trust into the developers and enginerers who make this technology mainstream, that they can secure it enough so people can't get fed on students information.\n\nOverall I think this is a great idea. With the amount of advancments in the computer realm of things over the last couple of years, FACS is for sure a possibility. This could truly change the way that us as students learn and process. As long as it is designed and developed right, this will be amazing (if it ever does come out to the public).", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I believe computers positive affect people use Because teach hand eye coordination give us ability learn far away people places allow us chat online people first reason I think computers positive affect people teach hand eye coordination For example need use handeye coordination skills type letters This helps us increase Hand eye coordination helps us think letters typing letters keyboard push Also type long passages increase hand eye coordination becaue get used wrighting long paragraphs become familiar letters keyboard speed increases means get work done shorter time Believe free hospital took survey showed people type essays instead wrighting hand greater hand eye coordination skill Computers also allow us learn far away people places For example computers make easier reaserch far away people places Useing computer help us understand learn people places withought trip library Also computers allow us us info recent events around world Also computers make faster reserch topics looking book big libraries stressfull mention dificult Also informat computer never checked availible like library books Lastly information right fingerries never leave youre house last reason computers allwo us chat online people This help us allows us talk friends family around world Also helps us talk parents theyre away re camping trip Chating computer great way make friends people dont know block people dont want talking So sence controll friendships youre friends Computers greatist advance technology sence wheel helped many people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recently, there has been a contentious polemic about whether people should stave atmospheric conditions off or live with them. From my perspective, climate transition is a natural activity of Terra that should be embraced rather than controlled. In the following paragraphs, I will postulate some judgments bolstering my view.\n\nTo begin with, the originality of climate variation itself is based on the natural way of Mother Nature to preserve its richness. There must be devout reasons for every seasonal shift in terms of how the environment and natural resources will adapt. For instance, several crops rely on rainy seasons to produce fruits. On the contrary, a plethora of vegetation's growth phases rely on the autumn season. These are merely the illustrations of plantations, yet, imagine a myriad of creatures relying on the weather rhythms such as animals, birds, beaches, or even fungi and bacteria.\n\nConsequently, societies have unconsciously adapted to it since countless centuries ago as humans depend on natural resources to make a living. Take the example of rainy seasons that help farmers cultivate their crops and, subsequently, be able to feed their households. On the other hand, it is undeniable that the rainy season can become a setback to running an event for some organizers or even flood disasters if it drops excessively. Perhaps, previous examples of detrimental ramifications are the underlying considerations on why some communities aspire to control the weather. Nevertheless, technological advancement has enabled experts to forecast the weather and disseminate the projection overtly through our mobile phones.\n\nIn conclusion, the origin of each season is a paramount blessing from Mother Nature for its creations and society as every climate is meticulously designed for specific causes. Therefore, I strongly oppose the proponents who want to deter this natural rhythm. At the end of the day, we humans should find avenues to make the most out of it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph Saeng waiting winter time After winter time Saeng going take test plants flower Saeng really like hibicus nt want die winter time", "role": "user" }, { "content": "2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There has been a controversy about the existence of large outdoor public spaces, such as parks or squares. Some say it's necessary to have these spaces in cities; some have the opposite opinions. I think having large outdoor public spaces is vital, and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs. \r\n\r\nFirst, parks can lessen our pressure. It's expected that due to technological development, we tend to have a heavier workload, and our working time is elongated; in other words, we may have to spend more time and energy on our jobs. Therefore, our living standards can be dampened, and it might stimulate the sales of tobacco and alcohol companies in order to release the pressure. At this point, the existence of parks can lessen our stress to a large extent; the smell and sound of plants and animals in parks exert a positive influence on our emotions. \r\n\r\nSecond, expanding our social circles. It's commonplace that big events always take place in large outdoor public spaces, like squares. Hence, when a city has these spaces, which can provide good opportunities to meet new people and make new friends. For example, when a concert takes place in a square, it can attract its fans to come. In this case, you can find people who have the same interests as you in the concert; and as a result, you can extend your social circle. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, large outdoor public spaces have some disadvantages as well. For instance, they constantly require a large amount of space in cities. As we know, to build large outdoor public spaces, the government has to draw an area exclusively for them; thus, such a situation can force the surrounding communities to move, and brings about housing insufficiency on account of these large outdoor public spaces. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe the merits of public spaces outstrip their demerits.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology over the few centuries have helped improve human life expectancy, living conditions, transportation, and applainces that have made life easier for us humans. The use of the Facial Action Coding System will be a plus for mankind to improve teaching and mental studies for not just kids, but the world. although the FACS wont be able to exactly determine the human emotion 100 percent, Dr. Huang explains how the system creates a 3D model of the face with all 44 major muscles to determine a precisive answer and how it would provide the needed help for the student or elder. The FACS sounds amazing but, Dr.huang states that he relies on the work of psychologists to use the data from the system and further give an exact emotion.\n\nAs the author states''can we actually calculate emotions like math homework?''\n\nthe universe of emotions can vary per individual. Dr. huang further explains how the FACS also uses video imagery to measure the different units on a real face or even the painted face of Mona Lisa. As the author states that this technology would use a electronic code it would not be able to be supported by modern pcs but, some basic codes can be implemented.\n\nDr.Huang predicts that a simple classroom computer can be used to help the student understand a certain problem and assist the student wiether the student is feeling confused or bored. not only can the FACS can be used for human needs but can also improve the computer animated faces for video games or educational simulations. The endless possiblities and potienal the FACS has is great. even the little things such as pop up ads can change due to your emotion states the author.\n\nThe power of this system can also be used to detect wiether a smiling politician or big name are really being truthful or lieing. Education, work assistance, and human health can be improved if we implement it worldwide. ulitmatly helping mankind", "role": "user" }, { "content": "3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is new technology out there that helps people understand what others are feeling. This may not always be right. Sometimes it could miss read what people are feeling. This technology could miss read, not fully understand, and miscalculate things.\n\nThis new technology could miss read what people are feeling. This technology could think that one person is happy when really they aren't. Many people can fake what they are feeling such as actors and actresses. Actors carefully reproduce smiling and frowning as a way of creating these emotions on stage( paragraph 9 line 6 to7). When actors do this it actually helps them feel the emotion they are acting out. This is why the new technology may get some things wrong. Not everyones face shows how they truely are feeling and it may never fully show what one is feeling.\n\nIt may not always fully understand what one is feeling because people are so good at hidding what they feel. Lots of people have trouble showing their true feelings because they may not want to be made fun of. Also they don't want to get hurt by others for what they truely feel. If people are hidding what they are feeling and showing a different facial expression then it would be really hard for this technology to accuratly read someones emotions. Which in turn would make it hard for this to have an accurate outcome.\n\nIt would always miscalculate how one would truely feel. Not everything works the way it was made to work. Some thinks may malfunction and have to be thrown away. Some things cant read things the right way. What is someone was happy and it read it as them being sad or even angry. We would know that it wasnt working right.\n\nSo if the technology miss reads how people feel. If it doesn't fully understand what one is feeling. Also if it is miscalculating how one truely feels then this would not be the greatest thing to use to tell how one is truely feeling. So most people would say that this wouldn't be such a great thing to have to read hoe one feels.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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