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[ "can let the events happen and the characters act for themselves. However, in", "with my stories, and I think it's a bad practice. The story I'm", "at the beginning (but not in an info-dump). Little to no important information", "mind. I only start writing the story at full when I've established enough", "f...
[ "> Me: I have realized that I am a terrible person. > >", "I am writing a first person narrative with a character that is very", "things verbatim. For example, a conversation similar to that which I had with", "> Friend: what? I don't think so. > > Me: Well, I mean,", "be avoided in my writing? ...
[ "part it might not seem a coincidence at all, something I've learned from", "evidence for a fiction not having a coincidental occurring at all ? I", "it [coincidence] part of a well thought through backstory and make it so", "So it is obvious that usually a fiction does have a coincidence but", "posts. ...
[ "know word count isn't everything, but I'm still a bit worried the book", "novel out of it, maybe 80000 words. But at the start of the", "story isn't going to be as long as I had hoped. I'm pretty", "confident that my plot is deep enough, and that I could write a", "For my latest attempt, this time a sci-fi...
[ "IQ does not account for all aspects of high intelligence. However, I am", "naïveté as well, in that part of what drives his kindness, is his", "escape impossible situations. However, this would conflict with his third major character trait:", "in that part of what drives his kindness, is his belief that huma...
[ "ago. I was extremely stressed out from work, and so out of the", "scholarly research. Indeed, I am good at pursuing search strategies: Right now I", "week. Although I have been writing for three years now, I still consider", "healthy. I found this article interesting: \"[The Real Science Of Science Fiction](...
[ "give all that up for higher motives. How do I keep giving guesses", "do I keep giving guesses to the reader without fully revealing the true", "motives. How do I keep giving guesses to the reader without fully revealing", "in the ending chapters. This character can be closely associated with Plutarch Heavens...
[ "ones. My concern is that the rarity of africans in SF will lead", "of africans in SF will lead to [unfortunate implications](http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/UnfortunateImplications) when the readers assume", "by the great queens of East Africa (e.g. [Arawelo](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Arawelo) i...
[ "an ebook and then as a hardcover. What are effective techniques I can", "can use to have it reviewed in appropriate media, such as The Economist,", "self-publish first as an ebook and then as a hardcover. What are effective", "book and will self-publish first as an ebook and then as a hardcover.", "reviewe...
[ "in Microsoft Word format which I would like printed as a book as", "present for someone. It is predominately text with a few black and white", "book in PDF. They have told me to use InDesign, Gimp or Inkspace", "a present for someone. It is predominately text with a few black and", "told me to use InDesign...
[ "Can I use a culture specific dish like sushi and call it sushi", "for professions. if I use that tidbit to create a culture and use", "sushi and call it sushi to describe the cuisine of my fictional culture?", "use a culture specific dish like sushi and call it sushi to describe", "tidbit to create a cultu...
[ "I want: I want a check list or step by step list I", "can use while trying to name my characters. I often have trouble coming", "really help me. Please note that this is different from the \"Choosing a", "often have trouble coming up with original names, especially last names, and this", "from the \"Choosi...
[ "much better at writing and understanding my main character, I've begun to notice", "his pace a little, moving to step by her side. > > >", "the past four months, I've been writing back and forth with a friend", "forth with a friend of mine in a form of roleplay. Depending on", "door for her, **allowing...
[ "time. I was scared.\" > > > Where is the best place to", "and am stuck on where to break paragraphs containing dialogue. I know I", "to start a new paragraph when there is description mixed with dialogue. For", "when a new character speaks, but I'm not sure where to start a", "course. I apologize I didn't ...
[ "than three in a given chapter (because it gets annoying). I thought about", "the main character (Kanéko) doesn't know the words but the untranslated word could", "about multiple languages and had conversations where many native speakers feel that setting", "book to a master plot across multiple novels. That ...
[ "it would be interesting if she figured out 'tricks' to solving each. However,", "love of adventure by exploring old maze-like ruins, and thought it would be", "how do I come up with good puzzles and solutions that the character", "know how to make this work as part of a story. How do", "if she figured out ...
[ "me. > > > * Titanic. Honestly this one probably comes from James", "an attempt to keep Frodo going, says that he thinks he understands the", "because they were holding onto something. > > > Frodo: What are we", "experience. I believe Gut Emotional Appeal - or GEA - can be a", "in the water and slowly f...
[ "that increasingly, I'm writing sentences in a format (I don't know the technical", "of this) similar to below - > > Coming to a stop at", "name of this) similar to below - > > Coming to a stop", "said. > > > Leading the crowd, he strode through. > > >", "draft of a story, I've found that increasingly, I'm ...
[ "of that on the cutting room floor, I only have 4 chapters worth", "prequel to. What I'm writing must end on a significant down note, and", "I have three POVs. It would be hard to fit this book solidly", "I've finally committed to writing my first novel. I've been listening to things", "of about five of the...
[ "having the main character be called \"Samantha.\" However, she believes her name is", "called \"Samantha.\" However, she believes her name is too generic, so she goes", "the nickname \"Thana.\" My question: Is it bad to have a character name", "name is too generic, so she goes by the nickname \"Thana.\" My q...
[ "> minor characters interact during it ? etc > > > Mind you,", "> Mind you, that this is only for certain scenes (which, I admit,", "to the chapters, even what should be happening in each chapter. I have", "should be happening in each chapter. I have written a rough draft, where", "For e.g. there is a scene...
[ "novel, I am now seeking critiques of my query letter before I submit", "[AQ Connect - Query Critiques](http://agentqueryconnect.com/index.php?/forum/2-aq-connect-query-critiques/) but I don't know how good it is.", "135,000 word novel, I am now seeking critiques of my query letter before", "am now seeking cr...
[ "story? For example: A character named digit in a cyberpunk future or one", "below ground in a dystopian future where people underground are at war with", "above or below ground in a dystopian future where people underground are at", "a character to go with a theme or setting of a novel off-putting", "on a ...
[ "should I do if my story's plot is built around the antagonist being", "the antagonist, unless the antagonist makes a stupid mistake in the \"final battle\"", "a stupid mistake in the \"final battle\" (or the protagonist magically gets super", "strong, and by the end it's clear that the protagonist cannot pos...
[ "Even the X-men has one, the main character that continues even when they", "decided the Avengers have a main character also, it is Captain America. Even", "novel. But, the novel involves multiple characters working as a team who rise", "friend told my my main character is the virus the team is trying", "wh...
[ "that it takes way more than 90 days to do the assignments; they", "say that it takes way more than 90 days to do the assignments;", "join critique groups. I am on a budget, however... I did find a", "Days To Your Novel](https://www.buffalolib.org/vufind/Record/1868545/Reviews)\" by Sarah Domet. It looks prom...
[ "okay to dive on my idea of a long story (a novel) or", "not sure if it is better to first try smaller projects to gain", "start on my concept but am not sure if it is better to", "to first try short stories? I am very excited to start on my", "I am very excited to start on my concept but am not sure", "m...
[ "eldest daughter, Lyrin to become an alchemist where she will one day collect", "she will one day collect a sacred object from each of the islands", "is complete, she sets off on her mission to find these sacred objects,", "each of the islands in order to cast a spell that will brainwash", "In this world, t...
[ "unaccessible to the average population. \"The farmers\" would be the name that people", "word of mouth can only do so much... [No data here] Actual question:", "if inappropriate) > > [...] The first thing to keep in mind is", "somewhat regret choosing \"farmers\" as my fake title, since most peop...
[ "in the past? (Are people reading books less now because they'd rather watch", "past? (Are people reading books less now because they'd rather watch Netflix, or", "lot of people to buy and read a published book than it was", "published book than it was in the past? (Are people reading books less", "harder t...
[ "novel would it be best in third person or first person? I like", "the \"all knowing\" omniscient view that comes with third person. Is there a", "first person, but I also like the \"all knowing\" omniscient view that comes", "wonder if I was to write a novel would it be best in", "author, but I often wonde...
[ "to search for on Google, I was going to add a subtitle. Perhaps", "fiction novel. As well, is there a sort of rule to follow for", "is if this is too long or off-putting for a fiction novel. As", "a fiction novel. As well, is there a sort of rule to follow", "novel. As well, is there a sort of rule to foll...
[ "of the tragedy. I've not heard much about the craft of writing a", "regardless of what type they are. Your heroes do not have to win.", "feel-good tragedy and moreover what elements allow you to have a downer destination", "Juliet 2. The First Law 3. The Departed 4. The Titanic Clearly tragedies", "an oxym...
[ "manipulative sort of protagonist, one who enjoys mind games, blackmail, systematically destroying people", "should write her such that an audience would connect with her - how", "blackmail, systematically destroying people who've wronged her, that sort of thing. I personally", "this manner be sympathetic rat...
[ "I've always wondered. You've probably noticed that in some newspapers or books, the", "first few words of a chapter/story are bolded or capitalized, similar to [initials](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Initial).", "Something I've always wondered. You've probably noticed that in some newspapers or books,", "th...
[ "Is it at the number of subplots? Perhaps the types of things the", "which subplots I need to create? Looking at answers about subplots on this", "the types of things the plots are about? How do you know when", "want too many sideroads, because then the main road becomes obsolete. It's no", "subplots ...
[ "sketches seem to end in interruptions that are callbacks to earlier premises. Portlandia", "times-- trying on Fedoras in the store, arguing with someone about superhero canon,", "a comedy sketch, to be acted out or shot on video. I have", "it? What happens next, which indicates that the \"story\" is over, an...
[ "and hypnosis to be introduced but) I'd like it to be something usable", "decide to challenge that entity instead of following it's plans. My question is,", "head while considering what seems to be a vaguely insane idea, puts the", "his head, looks up - because for some reason he believes I am", "he actuall...
[ "it is a surprise? As a follow-up: Does a reader feel smart or", "should I withhold key elements to guarantee it is a surprise? As a", "astute readers could predict the twist if they stopped and mulled it over", "a follow-up: Does a reader feel smart or robbed if they can see", "Does a reader feel smart or ...
[ "he inadvertently created. > > > I was told it is a cliché", "despite all attempts at a resolution and the mouse occasionally wins. Is it", "was told it is a cliché and you shouldn't use idioms in query", "is an impasse despite all attempts at a resolution and the mouse occasionally", "you shouldn't use idi...
[ "a question regarding the legality of using a real museum and real artifacts", "criminal gang who steal well-known artefacts from a UK museum. I have contacted", "using a real museum and real artifacts in my Heist book which is", "them if they would grant permission, or point me in the direction of", ...
[ "the prices and currencies are different for each of these countries. Barnes &", "with 4 different EAN 5 price barcodes, or is it ok if the", "price is just in one currency, let's say in £, and the other", "in it (EAN 5) on the backside of the cover. What should I", "accept this? Btw: I'm distributing the b...
[ "never expects to make it to the very top, which would be a", "top, which would be a daunting task for any advertising executive, never mind", "true? If so, what are ways to develop the characters of these two", "the man's lack of confidence are self-evident, but go into their backgrounds to", "in developin...
[ "a character in a story that plays no significant role, and only appears", "good tips or ways to describe a character in a story that plays", "that particular moment in the chapter and never again for the rest of", "in a story that plays no significant role, and only appears for that", "describe a character...
[ "since i am not a certified doctor with enough knowledge about the human", "specific when it comes to symptoms or medication and its side effects. I", "human body but i do want to be specific when it comes to", "when it comes to symptoms or medication and its side effects. I also", "should effect her daily ...
[ "if the bookstore does not want the book in their stock, because of", "still available in a book store if a customer requests it, even if", "of 45% and costs £10.99, does a book store sell this book if", "in their stock, because of the conditions above? Do they order a copy", "a book store if a customer req...
[ "an important role, I know, but they had been exposed to both cultures", "but speak one more than the other, so if they travel to a", "mix up the grammar once or twice, but is that it? Culture plays", "different countries. They know both languages very well but speak one more than", "both languages sometime...
[ "but these scenes are not always in their point of view. Is it", "plot. How to insert the translation of the other language without ruining the", "the text? I've seen people put a translation between braces () or adding", "are not always in their point of view. Is it useless to try", "indirect ways like the...
[ "hard time focusing and writing properly. My editor said my article hardly read", "in High School. I was labeled as a visual learner. Currently I'm writing", "writing articles for websites but having a hard time focusing and writing properly.", "said my article hardly read well but I'm a well spoken person an...
[ "a fictional city in the piece. But, my problem with naming concerns finding", "fictional city in the piece. But, my problem with naming concerns finding names", "don't want the readers to associate the real place with the fictional one?", "have already decided to use a fictional city in the piece. But, my", ...
[ "Person A was blind to it because of how much he cared about", "A and B are part of are trying to find out what's going", "not even considering the chance that Person B could have actually hated him", "that, but I don't want to make it too complicated. I just want", "I've run into a problem concerning the m...
[ "My problem is that (e.g.) the scenery is left / the destination point", "is left / the destination point is arrived at too quickly. This doesn't", "intend to later expand and stitch them together into a science fiction novel.", "less asks for a new chapter. Many times I could expand them as", "that the sto...
[ "backwards from it and have it collapse. * Gervravo finds the lasagne sheets,", "in a single continious wide shot.)* Are there any existing conventions about how", "is quite noisily searching in the cupboard for some lasagne sheets. Each of", "cupboard for some lasagne sheets. Each of these things play out in...
[ "it's ancient Greece or ancient China, speaks English. However, this series was aimed", "series was aimed at little kids, and when you're writing for an older", "rhyming riddles and 'lost prophecies' from other worlds, would the story instantly lose", "and when you're writing for an older audience, do you *ha...
[ "my head. “When you love someone, nothing that person does is boring.” >", "to me.\"** What's usually better\\* in fiction? The original version of the passage", "person does is boring.” > > > I could have written the bolded**", "me about his day.” > > > Mrs. Saeki gawked at me behind", "ceiling fan...
[ "influences what happens to them, or more plainly: How class influences the situations", "been stuck on my conclusion for a while and would appreciate some help.", "how I stated this? I've been stuck on my conclusion for a while", "and higher income inequality in the world today? Would it depend on how", ...
[ "he is stronger? Why does some guy have magical ability and the other", "Why does some guy have magical ability and the other guy doesn’t? How", "there an explanation needed as to why he is stronger? Why does some", "characters power is stronger compared to others, is there an explanation needed as", "Just ...
[ "feelings are or express their feelings in one keyword that delivers fantasy. Thanks", "are or express their feelings in one keyword that delivers fantasy. Thanks in", "who will see this post could tell me what their feelings are or", "could make anyone feel fantasy. it will be better if every one who", "be...
[ "to think them up. Anyway what would you people suggest me to incorporate", "even though a succinct alternative is clearly there but I fail to think", "to have this problem where I know a lot of words but can't", "I write, some everyday phrase or idiom comes to my mind first or", "alternative is clearly the...
[ "I include graphic description even if I'm a bit of a beginner when", "that? The character doesn't kill (though that's because they think death is too", "character be especially if they are one of the \"good guys\"? So, due", "that come out in specific situations: they are more than lovely when it", "(thoug...
[ "out what is the appropriate thing to say in the conversation. Could you", "is the appropriate thing to say in the conversation. Could you please help?", "problem figuring out what is the appropriate thing to say in the conversation.", "a problem figuring out what is the appropriate thing to say in the", "W...
[ "I write about all three life events in one book or should I", "going to describe 3 very important life events. Now, should I write about", "should I write about all three life events in one book or should", "I am going to describe 3 very important life events. Now, should I", "started writing my autobiogra...
[ "they will own the copyright to the illustrations. Is this something that should", "am a first time author looking to publish a children's book which I", "publish a children's book which I need to have illustrated. I have a", "vanity publisher, and they have offered to produce the illustrations. The contract ...
[ "advance her own welfare. When the good aliens adopt Bob as a tool", "pessimistic and grim-dark-ish, because the bad aliens are unimaginably strong and seemingly infinitely", "a character who does not actively seek attention, but is still vain and", "aliens' society is not what most modern readers would consi...
[ "an application, that would allow me to collect these aphorisms as single \"files\"", "export them to printable formats like docx, odt, pdf, ... I am aware,", "To cut it short, since I keep on producing and am now also", "to find a better way to collect these bits. In practice I am", "I have been writing ap...
[ "and tragedy give me negative results when my stories are read and is", "writing about things like suicide, self-harm, and tragedy give me negative results when", "results when my stories are read and is it best just to avoid", "when my stories are read and is it best just to avoid these", "things like suic...
[ "stories on hold because either I am not able to post them at", "they are incomplete and do not plan to finish them anytime soon. When", "a month or two, or do I look for inspiration and continue writing?", "google docs folder for a month or two, or do I look for", "it comes to the second scenario, what do ...
[ "happily ever after etc.) I wonder if it would be possible to re-create", "that it will be difficult to see consistently comprehensible actions from such a", "character I describe is in fact reflective of somebody I know in real", "justification for these behaviours, and that they don't see these actions to b...
[ "or [here](http://rads.stackoverflow.com/amzn/click/1405149078)). Is what I stated really true in science fiction in general,", "subgenre of science fiction known as philosophical science fiction (see [here](http://schwitzsplinters.blogspot.co.uk/2014/09/philosophical-sf-science-fiction.html) or [here](http://rad...
[ "it change the writing process? Any suggestions on the various dictation software available?", "How does it change the writing process? Any suggestions on the various dictation", "does it change the writing process? Any suggestions on the various dictation software" ]
[ "the message that I want to send across. Akin to Beauty and the", "Beast's \"Don't judge a book by its cover\" theme, or \"Opposites attract.\" I", "Akin to Beauty and the Beast's \"Don't judge a book by its cover\"", "cover\" theme, or \"Opposites attract.\" I have a story I am trying to", "I just wanted t...
[ "floor and an unknown entity is poking them can be written like: >", "Or like: > > She felt a poke in her shoulder. > >", "to see or interpret what's going on around them, I find myself constantly", "interpret what's going on around them, I find myself constantly describing things either", "every other sent...
[ "other? Aliases are a go, but as society grow numerous also does the", "Aliases are a go, but as society grow numerous also does the necessity", "aren't given names when born, instead they are given serial numbers that also", "the world are all clones of each other. Man and woman. They aren't", "given names...
[ "approximately 22 years old. \"Carly\", Young Girl - approximately 8 years old. Obviously,", "language, to simulate the way a child sees the world. Examples These are", "dad to answer. > > > So, the actual question could be phrased", "one Mom and one Dad\"** - that I believe almost all children fe...
[ "the plot won't be developed, or won't be focused enough, causing it to", "of people - both on this site and elsewhere - that your first", "that the wording will be bad? The story won't convey the message or", "that the plot won't be developed, or won't be focused enough, causing it", "draft will be terribl...
[ "writing. The story should consist of five parts, etc. To my untrained writing", "my untrained writing brain this seems to stifle creativity, and enforce a science-like", "One thing that's strange to me is that there seem to be \"rules\"", "this? Must I adhere to the formula? What are the consequences, if I",...
[ "While an unreliable narrator is someone who is deceiving the reader (or possibly", "happened, but does not fully understand the implications, which the reader does understand.", "but does not fully understand the implications, which the reader does understand. Is", "fully understand the implications, which t...
[ "write my first Fantasy novel. But there's one question that always bugs me.", "But there's one question that always bugs me. If I were to have", "in my first few books, can I have a non-fictional setting later on", "of course I would have a fictional name for it. So if I", "if I have a non-fictional place ...
[ "encased in a silver alloy talks basically by allowing magic to move to", "certain wavelengths of sound, and use the 'Cracked' font. They also sometimes speak", "silver alloy talks basically by allowing magic to move to seep into the", "wavelengths of sound, and use the 'Cracked' font. They also sometimes spe...
[ "her wish is fulfilled her POV ends. The middle chapters (20,000 words) are", "issue? If so, what can I do to fix it? Note: the man", "fulfilled her POV ends. The middle chapters (20,000 words) are seen from the", "are told from the eyes of a girl who wants to die in", "his POV ends. The last chapters (20,0...
[ "of the sentence but I have also seen an ellipsis used as well,", "hyphen at the end of the sentence but I have also seen an", "that actually be shown in dialog? I have seen some use a hyphen", "sentence but I have also seen an ellipsis used as well, but which", "in dialog? I have seen some use a hyphen at ...
[ "of the fiction novel is \"Shorter of Breath\" -- a reference to a", "accept this profanation!”\" How much of this should I remove / change /", "“‘Corporation games!' 'Listen to the radio!’ How long will we have to accept", "from history by attacking the band members in 1985. The band name and", "this city\...
[ "faint of heart. Like, how would I describe shaky legs without being so", "the faint of heart. Like, how would I describe shaky legs without being", "you witnessed something not for the faint of heart. Like, how would I", "heat of a situation. Perhaps you witnessed something not for the faint of", "not for ...
[ "I have a plot of a mystery/thriller, and I want to start writing", "want to start writing a novel. What should be the minimum length of", "to start writing a novel. What should be the minimum length of a", "writing a novel. What should be the minimum length of a novel so", "What should be the minimum lengt...
[ "the main character is not aware of, focusing on other character's side of", "advised by a teacher to rethink the first person, because 'it's very limited'", "a novel where my original idea was to use first person narrative in", "me a particular example and/or pros and cons in general? Thank you all!", "I'd...
[ "sight words for certain ages? If so, do these standards keep you from", "there are certain sight words for children depending on age and grade. Are", "example, I know there are certain sight words for children depending on age", "a certain sight words for certain ages? If so, do these standards keep", "the...
[ "fun out of actually writing it. Is there anything else I should plan", "and I've outlined the plot. I want to do this planning to keep", "have started writing a novel. I've done some character questionnaires for my main", "don't want to plan too much so that it takes the fun out", "done some character ques...
[ "for publishing or are there any agencies that publish/encourage budding short story writers?", "have a collection of short stories. I want to publish them. I need", "stories. I want to publish them. I need help in this. Should I", "I need help in this. Should I pay for publishing or are there", "help in th...
[ "The choices they make will have a massive impact on those relationships, especially", "with several characters with preexisting romantic relationships. The choices they make will have", "with preexisting romantic relationships. The choices they make will have a massive impact", "feel the punch of the ending ...
[ "a book via Google Books. According to the MLA style, part of citing", "just \"Google\"?* Google Books is the main site for the books, yet Google", "online source includes giving the \"overall website\". *Would I say \"Google Books\" or", "style. One of my sources is a book via Google Books. According to", ...
[ "ended up more confused than before - KJV, NIV, NAB... every website seems", "to have a different opinion. What I want is to quote passages from", "Pulp Fiction). What bible version should I quote from? I've done some research", "the bible in something I'm writing (think the famous passage in Pulp Fiction).",...
[ "> > With the whole world viciously fighting against them, these three teenagers", "throughout the series. For example: > > With the whole world viciously fighting", "introduction a few paragraphs long at the beginning of every book explaining the", "end up being a bit lost as to what is going on. Because", ...
[ "there any specific pitfalls (e.g. discounting) that I should be aware of? Thanks", "the final stages of packaging the book and would like to start arranging", "would like to start arranging pre-orders to help with the first week \"bump\".", "week \"bump\". How far in advance should I allow the pre-order opti...
[ "writers, why, and how it affects potential readers when deciding whether or not", "amount of short chapters or a smaller amount of long chapters. I want", "on to make them longer or shorter. It's more about grouping an already", "amount of long chapters. I want to know which option works better for", "or l...
[ "where I have seen it. The event doesn't have the gravity that I", "their situation and is in constant pain while being possessed. The demon has", "another person. The victim was captured and subjected to this against their will,", "it should, and the person usually goes back to living a normal life", "bind...
[ "those who want to be healers, one for those who want to care", "animals, etc.). There are also some evil covens who wish to spread their", "covens, each with different mission statements (there is one for those who want", "which is set in a fantasy world and involves guilds instead. How can", "want to care...
[ "flow. But that is only a secondary problem, since I'm mainly concerned with", "writing process: almost every day that I write, I write in \"bursts\" of", "this. However, I'm trying to improve a particular aspect of my writing process:", "and then kind of get \"stuck in my head\" about what to write.", ...
[ "chapters where I don't know what to write in them. I need to", "a chapter outline for the novel series I'm writing, and I have a", "to write in them. I need to do something quickly, because I've started", "few 'blank' chapters where I don't know what to write in them. I", "I've started writing the first bo...
[ "bullied by a secondary character. I'd like to dissect the emotions and reactions", "The protagonist has difficulty with his emotions and social coping mechanisms, and is", "any published works I could read which does a good job of this", "mechanisms, and is being bullied by a secondary character. I'd like to...
[ "you want the reader to believe the opposite of the truth, when the", "scene is followed up with one from the brother's point of view. The", "I need to make the reader think the brother has betrayed the sister,", "his sister. During the scene, it is impossible to show that the brother", "betrayed the sister...