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And yes, I've had", "the longest time, so I'm more familiar with that, and besides, science fiction", "the same animals as our world). The nations aren't the same for one.", "world. Let me give some details. Its a superhero setting. I know, its", "but I'm not asking for a critique on my conworld. I'm asking how", "for the longest time, so I'm more familiar with that, and besides, science", "people with fantastic powers wearing spandex running around. But the names of the", "for your average reader. I've never heard of a case of someone making", "an energy sword he can reshape into whatever he needs, kinda like the", "normally don't see in fantasy (one for instance has an energy sword he", "really trying to do that. I just wanted to put more serious thought", "dated after a while. Not that all characters are magic, but you often", "something new? I don't see why you don't see entirely fictional worlds based", "sense, and I'm not really trying to do that. I just wanted to", "don't see why you don't see entirely fictional worlds based off of time", "fictional conworld full of people with a more or less modern technology level.", "people have cars and jets and computers, but without it being set in", "a completely fictional conworld full of people with a more or less modern", "Magic isn't really that rare. Pretty much every superhero team has a magic", "spandex running around. But the names of the nations and cities and cultures", "world, superhumans aren't new. Imagine if fictional characters like Hercules and Dorsin weren't", "and you in general you see A LOT of characters who have powers", "a weird world full of magic, modern technology, superheroes, people in full plate", "full plate armor with weird abilities, and names that people wouldn't recognize. Am", "and names that people wouldn't recognize. Am I trying too hard to create", "what the technique is called, but its a technique where you create something", "I'm asking how people would receive such a thing as a constructed world", "and the history books were litered with characters like them, and there was", "fiction in your more typical superhero story. And yes, I've had some people", "any more advanced than us. Even if I do feel tempted to include", "superhero story. And yes, I've had some people suggest I should do some", "modern technology, superheroes, people in full plate armor with weird abilities, and names", "your average reader. I've never heard of a case of someone making a", "reality? I would like to do this, but I'm afraid of what kind", "own modern world. Let me give some details. Its a superhero setting. I", "a critique of this (its still a work in progress anyway), I was", "can reshape into whatever he needs, kinda like the Green Lanterns), but knights", "had some people suggest I should do some research into urban fantasy. Anyway,", "weird things that you normally don't see in fantasy (one for instance has", "has an energy sword he can reshape into whatever he needs, kinda like", "in general you see A LOT of characters who have powers based in", "how people would receive such a thing as a constructed world not based", "aren't even the same. Even the religions and cultures that reside in this", "give some details. Its a superhero setting. I know, its impossible to make", "ends up looking dated after a while. Not that all characters are magic,", "level. The closest you see are worlds that are just 'our world, except", "would like to do this, but I'm afraid of what kind of reception", "of the different 'ages' of comics that you often see. In my world,", "technology level. 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[ "natural people, who have the contradictions and inconsistencies inseparable from humanity. The great", "caricatures. The first has never lived, and the second never will. The real", "charming. So, I want to convey very important opinions, but without becoming the", "written equivalent of [Better Days](http://badwebcomicswiki.shoutwiki.com/wiki/Better_Days) or Captain PSA's “If It’s Doomsday, This Must", "to enforce what they are pleased to call \"moral truths,\" cease to be", "the idea of killing off Mao Tse-tung with Zyklon B (a pesticide) is", "PSA's “If It’s Doomsday, This Must Be Belfast”* episode. *Tips and important thing", "IMPORTANT OPINIONS\". > > The novelists who endeavor to enforce what they are", "first has never lived, and the second never will. The real artist produces", "neither. In his pages, you will find individuals, natural people, who have the", "inseparable from humanity. The great artists \"hold the mirror up to nature,\" and", "inconsistencies inseparable from humanity. The great artists \"hold the mirror up to nature,\"", "humanity. The great artists \"hold the mirror up to nature,\" and this mirror", "his pages, you will find individuals, natural people, who have the contradictions and", "\"moral truths,\" cease to be artists. They create two kinds of characters --", "and it's the [If the Emperor had a Text-to-Speech Device](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pcYrTCGKyrU), which basically consists", "It’s Doomsday, This Must Be Belfast” episode. *Tips and important thing to keep", "be good whilst having VERY IMPORTANT OPINIONS, and it's the [If the Emperor", "the mirror up to nature,\" and this mirror reflects with absolute accuracy. >", "has never lived, and the second never will. The real artist produces neither.", "will. The real artist produces neither. In his pages, you will find individuals,", "Device](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pcYrTCGKyrU), which basically consists of [a Corpse Emperor](https://1d4chan.org/wiki/God-Emperor_of_Mankind) complaining about stuff to a", "the \"VERY IMPORTANT OPINIONS\". > > The novelists who endeavor to enforce what", "a place for reviews of bad webcomics, there's a common phrase: the \"VERY", "common phrase: the \"VERY IMPORTANT OPINIONS\". > > The novelists who endeavor to", "only know one web series, that managed to be good whilst having VERY", "to be good whilst having VERY IMPORTANT OPINIONS, and it's the [If the", "Wiki](http://badwebcomicswiki.shoutwiki.com/wiki/Main_Page), a place for reviews of bad webcomics, there's a common phrase: the", "Webcomics Wiki](http://badwebcomicswiki.shoutwiki.com/wiki/Main_Page), a place for reviews of bad webcomics, there's a common phrase:", "the Emperor had a Text-to-Speech Device](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pcYrTCGKyrU), which basically consists of [a Corpse Emperor](https://1d4chan.org/wiki/God-Emperor_of_Mankind)", "heart, but the idea of killing off Mao Tse-tung with Zyklon B (a", "Mef Tajnur from the bottom of my heart, but the idea of killing", "lived, and the second never will. 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