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[ "thumb regarding when to use the existing brand, and when to make up", "traditional publishers force you to remove brands?](https://writing.stackexchange.com/questions/36744/will-traditional-publishers-force-you-to-remove-brands) I would probably not want to", "if they're rich, or Volkswagen Beetles if they're ...
[ "a mysterious new creature which fell from the heavens in a fire ball", "true answer, does provide some excellent advice for anyone else with a similar", "to design has expanded beyond the confines of my fantasy world. There are", "on outside the little fantasy world. Would this be a problem? Would my", ...
[ "is still a planning phase, though, and I can already see it would", "I won't become the next Oda Eiichiro, let alone Tolkien. Therefore, primarily for", "characters (which would take ridiculously much time at the current pacing), I'd like", "however, is that for irrelevant reasons, some of the locations visi...
[ "I currently commute by bus (not train) so there isn't exactly a table", "or find things quickly on a phone. Does a portable computer exist that", "on a phone, as I wanted to make the most of the daily", "isn't as strong for editing as it's not easy to highlight and remove", "a table or other surface I coul...
[ "by sentence, in two texts that might be organized and structured very differently.", "synchronize them forth and back, probably with me in the loop confirming each", "to integrate some of those changes. Of course this is a tedious process,", "some smaller publications such as papers. The work is in parallel....
[ "and red pills I usually had in my system. Heavy enough, that the", "my skin irritated my senses enough to hold sleep at bay. Slowly >", "Heavy enough, that the > moment I opened my eyes, my body wanted", "again. The urge > to sleep was strong, but the scratchy texture of", "the feeling of being disconnecte...
[ "am not looking for unsupported opinion; I'd like to see data, research, personal", "often have trouble deciding whether (or how often) to take breaks from writing,", "unsupported opinion; I'd like to see data, research, personal experience, or well-regarded advice", "eliminate anything distracting me from th...
[ "(and have enjoyed) reading about. I don't have any statistics for this claim,", "I don't have any statistics for this claim, but I'm fairly certain that", "subset of dystopian fiction (one where the protagonist suffers heavy losses), and the", "that their authors enjoy reading. My Question: Should I wr...
[ "story on Wattpad that is quite similar to my story. The Wattpad story", "Jersey, after a gap of three years. He has a large family, namely", "feels attracted to her. Now, Sophie secretly used to love Pedez before he", "goes with two of his male friends. They feel attracted towards each other.", "different....
[ "(If this is classed as too-broad or should be put in a different", "you'll recall the line \"No resurrections this time\" being said in the scene", "and just as ways for the writer to prolong their story if they're", "to be resurrected later on in the series. They can be quite effective", "around the theme...
[ "God himself, because of the use of the indefinite article and lower-case \"g\",", "referring to God himself, because of the use of the indefinite article and", "if that's okay, there are other sentences in the story, like: > >", "Even if that's okay, there are other sentences in the story, like: >", "ear, ...
[ "to depict the character as an expert, but I don't have any knowledge/experience", "but I don't have any knowledge/experience of what it is like to be", "articulate about what has happened. I want to depict the character as an", "in short, is: **how do I write a character who is an expert", "to life. Also, ...
[ "this results in him ending up in a maze that takes him thousands", "and the reader to deal with. Are there any prose examples of this", "end the story in a way that describes the infinite time scale of", "takes him thousands of years to escape from. Once he makes it out,", "he is going to end up in hell an...
[ "few actual sentences from my thesis: > > Other XML tags for visual", "especially this part: > > Please note that when submitting essays or theses", "be defined. For example: using the > tag the model can be graphically", "no university specific recommendations for it afaik and other thesis in my department",...
[ "for more books by the same author. So, my question is: what techniques", "by the same author. So, my question is: what techniques exist for crafting", "question is not about cliff-hangers or sequels - just a solid, fulfilling, well-rounded", "warm glow that they immediately search for more books by the s...
[ "where to travel south, in real life he would reach Berwick castle but", "Wisconsin so I don’t want to switch from not real to real. (Sorry", "It’s important to me that it’s set in the real world because the", "there. It’s important to me that it’s set in the real world because", "is making a story in the m...
[ "to go, but I'd like some guidance in getting it all started when", "like some guidance in getting it all started when the reader knows nothing", "like I have everything except the first chapter; once the story is underway", "reader knows nothing at all. What does the reader need to know to", "into it (with...
[ "the problem where I have to assign human actions to subjects that, when", "Consider the following examples: 1. Science helps us understand nature. (can science perform", "to writing sentences like those below, I feel like every sentence will be", "company perform actions such as seeking and promoting?) I k...
[ "I remind him of the setting each time my character leaves his appartment?", "during a hard winter: streets are covered with snow, the wind is blowing,", "behind in a closed pub and later suffers from cold in the streets", "in a closed pub and later suffers from cold in the streets on", "first scene. My cha...
[ "previously raged in his room - knocking things over) --- INT. JOE’S ROOM", "of shots for this? (context- Joe previously raged in his room - knocking", "the alarm clock, pauses, decides to set it. Falls into bed. --- Is", "mean, I guess it’s jumping time a little bit... sort of? Is it", "little bit... sort ...
[ "From my limited research, it seems that screenwriters make quite a bit more", "at all, but as I get closer to talking to publishers, I've found", "a better option. From my limited research, it seems that screenwriters make quite", "is it to transition from novel writing to screen writing?** A detail of", "...
[ "offend the movie theatres. Hence, I would like to reword it to show", "sentence: > > Nowadays to reach the mass audience, you don't have to", "ways of distributing a movie to the audience that taking the movie theatre", "such as > live video streams. > > > The point of this", "you don't have to rely on > t...
[ "a section that details the tech of the setting and gives separate sections", "wanting to wait until I could see my universe in a clearer lens", "cosmically recent phenomena). In my setting bible, I have formatted my setting into", "or by relevance. Civilizations and Cultures The civilizations and culture...
[ "more \"progressive\" version of [Blackwatch](http://villains.wikia.com/wiki/Blackwatch)) in [conflict with](http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/GreyAndGrayMorality) parasitized humanoids, who seek to", "fictional work and won't care what happens next, lose interest or want all", "is dedicated to [unleas...
[ "of novels as a (sometimes fictional) narrator telling me a historical story. I", "find it quite strange and I'm almost imagining someone sat in the room", "and a couple of pages in I realised that the entire book is", "I find it very jarring. I've always thought of novels as a (sometimes", "the 1st person ...
[ "goal is a dynamic detective story where the outcome is undecided. Essentially, all", "(per act).** After a few scenes, the novel sees which branch the reader", "mystery with 3 subplots ------------------------- I'm writing a branching mystery novel. It's more", "branch the reader has discovered more of, and ...
[ "with Chinese tones and sometimes the grammar, leading to misunderstandings. If the entire", "has trouble with Chinese tones and sometimes the grammar, leading to misunderstandings. If", "languages? Okay, what if something happens, and the main character makes a comment", "However, what about non-Latin-based ...
[ "a mild sexualization of the girl, due to the addition of \"prominent cleavage\".", "the addition of \"prominent cleavage\". The reason I added this was to illustrate", "with a prominent cleavage, leather bands running up her arms and nails painted", "running up her arms and nails painted black. > > > In my",...
[ "with our writing? Can you suggest a writing tool that might help us", "we are based in different locations, how can we go on with our", "write collaborative a book, but since we are based in different locations, how", "of people who want to write collaborative a book, but since we are", "writing? Can you s...
[ "Mici from [Starship Troopers](http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Literature/StarshipTroopers) gives his face a [powered](http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/PoweredArmor?from=Main.PowerArmor) [brofist](http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/CruelAndUnusualDeath)). However, there should", "descripti...
[ "I'm trying to write a story with characters that I already designed long", "bit, but I cannot come up with an interesting plot. What do you", "ago and also have planned the world for them a bit, but I", "come up with an interesting plot. What do you suggest I can do", "also have planned the world for them ...
[ "apply to logic, physics, science, etc? The Hijrp Potfeq series has been a", "works, without losing myself and my readers? Is there a simpler way to", "detail, and that means I have to research some crazy things. It takes", "logic, physics, science, etc? The Hijrp Potfeq series has been a major hit,", "read...
[ "sickness, but that's just a situation, something the girls need to deal with.", "We are used to stories being about conflict. There can be an antagonist,", "that friend or save the friend from \"normal humans\" - nothing of that", "that could be resolved? How does one write without a conflict to drive", "e...
[ "same time there's so much information I want to convey. Does anybody have", "I also don't want to throw too much at the reader, but at", "important, but I see it as an opportunity to show the world building", "and landscape is unlike our own. However, the characters who are traveling just", "and I was wond...
[ "death as a \"person\" is something that follows me through my whole writing", "story (something like \"taking out the pressure of the scene\") or can death", "as a person be a serious part of the story? This is the", "the scene\") or can death as a person be a serious part of", "is not known to me. The tho...
[ "say about the redraft phase. He explains his working method. 1. Write with", "and correcting typos etc. and then sending out and I've always felt that", "a drawer for a few weeks. Once I pull it out what practical", "Once I pull it out what practical steps should I carry out (beyond", "working method. 1. W...
[ "The screen name is: ArgyleMan29 Like this? JACK: Online I’m ArgyleManTwentyNine. Or JACK:", "correct - especially because this is one of the first lines in the", "one of the first lines in the script. The screen name is: ArgyleMan29", "this? JACK: Online I’m ArgyleManTwentyNine. Or JACK: Online I’m Argyle Ma...
[ "genre-savy. How do I ratchet down reader expectations within an existing genre? ~", "That doesn't actually solve my issue that this genre (with which admittedly I", "(Maybe it's just media I grew up with. He fits that era and", "cyborg partner who is hunting a serialkiller\"…. It honestly feels like the whol...
[ "human beings in general? This slightly physical difference of characters between the alien", "human will increase the potential for me to write various stories of how", "This slightly physical difference of characters between the alien and human will increase", "use? or their more advanced aspects compared t...
[ "a lot of books and it's quite likely that the way I write", "struck me today that one method of becoming a great writer could be", "influenced by other authors. My question is therefore: what's the best way of", "other authors. My question is therefore: what's the best way of making sure", "voice.' So ...
[ "shriek, something like \"AHHHHH!\" or \"AAAAH!\". However, I don't really want to use", "like \"AHHHHH!\" or \"AAAAH!\". However, I don't really want to use all caps", "something like \"AHHHHH!\" or \"AAAAH!\". However, I don't really want to use all", "use all caps and repeated letters. Does anyone know any...
[ "to their troubles through their reading. I’d much rather do this than suggest", "Given the wide number of books in this area it seems most appropriate", "a reading list at the end. Are their any ramifications of characters reading", "of books in this area it seems most appropriate to have characters discover...
[ "\"Breaking Bad\"). Furthermore, because he is pursuing a noble cause, I don't want", "along with the wounded character on his journey despite him wanting to travel", "pretty grumpy fellow. What's more, the character he's traveling with has a hybristophilia", "them wounded and not fully cognizant](https://wri...
[ "it describes writing about an issue in society. I'm a bit unsure of", "where it describes writing about an issue in society. I'm a bit unsure", "about exactly how to write such a poem, other than to write it", "proceed because the assignment doesn't describe much about exactly how to write such", "society....
[ "I'm not sure how to do that, and I'm not even really sure", "I'm thinking of building the story as focusing on several characters who each", "to do that, and I'm not even really sure what I'm trying to", "first began, I was much more militantly atheist than I am now, and", "I was much more militantly athei...
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[ "collapse come about etc) in my own book, but I'm afraid of borrowing", "it basically becomes stealing his concept, or perhaps worse, fan fiction. To be", "really want to explore this theme further (rediscovering old technology, how did the", "To be clear the only element I want to keep is the theme", "come...
[ "it to be somewhat challenging. Question is then: what's the difference between the", "up other than to say that I've tried putting my poems to music", "somewhat challenging. Question is then: what's the difference between the skillsets needed to", "is then: **what's the difference between the skillsets n...
[ "fast-forwards, and most importantly, is the main focus, instead of an everlasting flashback", "I, and if yes, how should I make such prolonged training arc, without", "flashbacks. They show us a piece of information about the world or a", "Only real problem here is the lack of real danger. The mentor's techn...
[ "information that tells us why the character has turned out to be a", "**what innovative ways are available to deliver background information without preventing the reader", "thrills. The scene fades, the noise ends and then we are seeing a", "The scene fades, the noise ends and then we are seeing a child", ...
[ "my readers. I'd hate to think that, to understand what I write, my", "much in my more creative fiction. When I get going, I include slang", "get going, I include slang words and phrases that sound fascinating and are", "instead. Question: **what resources exist to enable writers of jargon-filled prose to tem...
[ "where the camera will follow a character giving the impression you have their", "and feelings of many of the characters, most of which aren't the protagonist.", "no specific reason to say out loud, \"blah blah blah... the murder, *which", "writing the thoughts of either character? 1 Apologies if I am mixing ...
[ "tells me writers state of mind, or certain effects that a writer has", "mind, or certain effects that a writer has tried to create for a", "Like, what are the things that tells me writers state of mind, or", "piece of writing? Like, what are the things that tells me writers state", "the piece of writing? L...
[ "cultures; my question is, **how can I write a male-dominated culture without implicitly", "inequality. I just want to accurately portray that type of culture, warts and", "I just want to accurately portray that type of culture, warts and all,", "a story focusing on that inequality. I just want to accurately ...
[ "maximise my chances of winning. So my question is: what are the specific", "fiction?', but I want to be more specific here. I'm trying to get", "a piece of my flash-fiction in one of the many competitions I see", "what are the specific writing techniques that can be used to make a", "can I write good f...
[ "distance from \"normal\" society and the protracted warfare on his psyche. Trouble is,", "as they should. They stand out and feel deliberately inserted rather than being", "clean language, almost comically clean, and as the plot progresses and the situation", "language in my day-to-day. At all. To the point ...
[ "difference between method and algorithm? Can a method be computed into an algorithm?", "please let me know the difference between method and algorithm? Can a method", "between method and algorithm? Can a method be computed into an algorithm? Can", "Can a method be computed into an algorithm? Can an algorithm...
[ "express certain things or thought processes. For example a character breaking eye contact,", "I often think of little hints or gestures, to express certain things or", "I think of a scene, I often think of little hints or gestures,", "it to show and sometimes the interplay of gestures and facial features are...
[ "general fiction; with 3 important twists that follow one by one at the", "added that it’s a general fiction so that the answers apply easier, also", "the ‘journey’ of the characters - is this a good strategy? I added", "I added that it’s a general fiction so that the answers apply easier,", "3 important tw...
[ "want to kill anyone off, I just want to get them injured, like", "to keep this X gets injured during a fight cliche as fresh as", "part, magnetically levitated [trauma plates](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Trauma_plate), long engagement distances and hyper-advanced, widely available medicine*).", "as possi...
[ "only small groups (that might vote for each other) around 5~10 people. Will", "school magazine. But how about letting students vote which article to put in", "not official (at least compared to those outside) and it's much like students'", "magazine rather than school's magazine. Is it possible to pass down ...
[ "better to mention as little repetition of events as possible? Or can it", "> > or, > > \"I drew my hand back and gave three", "to have a character duplicate previous events and have them mentioned by the", "hand back and gave three sharp knocks on the wood. I > received", "knocking, but in only one is the ...
[ "different one. How do I execute this tone shift without it feeling awkward?", "the repurposed enchantment and illusion spells, from the D&D 5e System Reference Documents,", "say, we establish the story as a light-hearted, over-the-top fantasy deconstruction, with humor", "typically established within the...
[ "under no circumstance am I saying that this would make for a good", "would I go about writing a thesis statement that includes everything?* I can’t", "> > > The First Amendment > > > Religions in the United", "my prompts and topics, more complex. In the above example, I might have", "I were righting about,...
[ "choosing the characters, you then get to follow a story path involving people", "this is just a side project I'm doing for free. Does anyone know", "I'm looking for other places I can set it up, where it is", "looking for other places I can set it up, where it is more", "places I can set it up, where it is...
[ "at the end of the day Dumbledore, Picard, Gandalf, and Yoda are fictional", "motivation, and emotion each of her characters felt during the seven books and", "author. Literary critiques aside she's made millions of pounds from her writing. But", "arguments to justify their actions. There seems to be some kin...
[ "of frisson when the narrator dies or is there always going to be", "narrative without the story being either A. a ghost story or B. a", "character who ultimately dies within the narrative without the story being either A.", "a moment of frisson when the narrator dies or is there always going", "dies or is ...
[ "the inhuman monster trying to eat him would be perceived as bad. I", "entirely on the man vs. beast narrative where the protagonist attempts to escape", "unstoppable, bloodthirsty creature for roughly 15 pages. From the first word to the", "I really assume that readers will care about my protagonist simply b...
[ "one discussed in [How to prevent seeming like a Marty Stu-ish villain is", "kind of antagonist, my question is **how can such a \"genius\" be defeated?", "making him suddenly act like an idiot - out of character compared to", "the antagonist miss a glaring problem they should have seen, making him suddenly",...
[ "bad.\" > > Metaphor: \"Oh come on, he's such a plushie heart, I", "analogy, if that's shoddy you fail. What I can't figure out is what", "accurate. **How to know if my analogy is as weak as my will", "the key is somewhere in the analogy, if that's shoddy you fail. What", "mood with a bad one and make y...
[ "specific questions? Not vague and broad ones like \"how SWATs work in general\",", "a prolonged hostage situation is a very rare occurrence, particularly in my little", "serious situations are handled in any modern country. I've tried asking on Quora", "There are plenty of cops there, but they don't respond....
[ "wish to keep hidden. The first is the series' deuteragonist, who is heavily", "of Hveðrungr, until he reveals himself towards the end of the series and", "identities I wish to keep hidden. The first is the series' deuteragonist, who", "have no real way to justify why characters featured these flashbacks [w...
[ "is a refugee from another country. She comes to the protagonist, and they", "everything using described gestures, broken grammar and disconnected words - as it would", "from another country. She comes to the protagonist, and they have a couple", "character who is a refugee from another country. She comes to ...
[ "Psychopaths like this are sometimes hard to take seriously because most bad guys", "most bad guys believe they are doing the right thing. The most compelling", "cost. Psychopaths like this are sometimes hard to take seriously because most bad", "have a villain who is more or less a complete monster. She has"...
[ "to a friend he's protective of. When he was beating up the people", "In general, **how do you write an authentic emotional experience for a character", "make him always hold back in a fight. But I don't know what", "almost killed one of them by breaking his rib cage. I wanted this", "he was young he was st...
[ "You start learning and using your powers in the upper school which is", "school also has math, science, history, and english. The characters learn about something", "school for wizards. The school also has math, science, history, and english. The", "when you are lying, one can move objects with their minds, ...
[ "within a week! (With detailed comments on each story.) Clarkesworld is another example.", "few people reading and yet they respond within two days! So why do", "only a few people reading and yet they respond within two days! So", "a week! (With detailed comments on each story.) Clarkesworld is another exampl...
[ "this edit isn't meant to invalidate any of the (interesting, good) answers below,", "to blood or cliched monsters, in a setting in nature of hunter/hunted? EDIT:", "(interesting, good) answers below, I do think I caused a bit of confusion.", "think I caused a bit of confusion. By \"setting in nature of hunte...
[ "see poetry and art and word-based graffiti on the sides of prominent buildings", "it's often inspiring and sometimes wonderful to see this. A couple of examples", "I apply (assuming I were wanting to do this in your part of", "on the sides of prominent buildings and it's often inspiring and sometimes wonderf...
[ "to myself, my protagonist potentially has too many goals. He's isn't a likeable", "better, more mature, less horrible person. Is this too much? Or does it", "to keep reader interest, I would like them to become invested in his", "a better, more mature, less horrible person. Is this too much? Or does", ...
[ "since 95% of him was all about how bad he was. **It's logical", "him a jerk, for undisclosed reasons (DRAMA), but make the reader (and the", "sure, you can tweak his death and how the other characters react to", "and how the other characters react to it, later on, but it's still", "jerk/annoyance for 95% o...
[ "shouldn't leap too boldly into that unknown territory. So, to assist me in", "how nice it would be to give up my staid life as a", "to myself that there are surely drawbacks to that path and that I", "surely drawbacks to that path and that I shouldn't leap too boldly into", "myself how nice it would be to ...
[ "choice, so as not to create this jarring effect? That is, what makes", "terms of word choice, so as not to create this jarring effect? That", "not OK? I'm not talking here of modern concepts, like rockets (as discussed", "say \"no spoilers\", etc. I am somewhat confused by this: a boy in", "by a beta reade...
[ "she can tell that I, as the writer, am building the sentences in", "A friend of mine, who is fluent in both English and in my", "in my native language, read my book. One of the points in her", "Grivmaz error or language errors. She is just saying that she can tell", "that she can tell that I, as the writer...
[ "I can't create this type of conflict is bothering me to no end.", "be for those meddling main characters!* --- Also, using my questions as an", "is just greedy. Note: this would work out if it wouldn't be for", "as I knew it, but Y thinks that X is just greedy. Note:", "MacGuffin from its containment unit,...
[ "article about a cat saving a three-year-old girl's life. What tools or techniques", "a three-year-old girl's life. What tools or techniques can I use to keep", "life. What tools or techniques can I use to keep the reader interested?", "girl's life. What tools or techniques can I use to keep the reader", "c...
[ "plays out in the middle of the novel. Should I write this as", "important scene which actually plays out in the middle of the novel. Should", "first time novelist with writing experience. I have an idea for my novel", "an idea for my novel that begins with an important scene which actually", "Should I writ...
[ "am self-publishing a dog photography book. I have obtained permissions for all subjects", "to get AKC's permission to use an image with their logo. Is this", "I am using has the American Kennel Club (AKC) logo in it. I'm", "don't need to get their permission to use their organization name in the", "(AKC) l...
[ "in her body when the memory gap was closed relatively seamlessly? * What", "the memory gap was closed relatively seamlessly? * What signs could there be", "and her own memories. Memory erasure (or suppression, rather) is a thing in", "to hint at it in a way that makes sense. I asked questions", "unrealisti...
[ "Sci-Fi novel myself. I'm interested in 'hard' (related to the engineering sciences) science", "my question is: **how do I go about researching future technology for a", "However, it strikes me that, despite being Software Developer by trade, I don't", "'hard' (related to the engineering sciences) science fic...
[ "A character in my story is supposed to be falling apart, for many", "people, in a gladiatorial setting, of a similar age. * He already died", "* He's 16 and is killing people, in a gladiatorial setting, of a", "I don't think that's the best way to go about it. **How can", "in my story is supposed to be fal...
[ "time, children speaking among themselves, (as opposed to speaking to an adult,) would", "a specific time (a specific century, or even a specific decade), and to", "How do I mark a person as a \"poor farmer\" without also marking", "setting? Particular mispronunciations and grammatical errors are also period-...
[ "is to provide verisimilitude > and tension release. > > > The gist", "of writing a static scene that provides tension release for the reader but", "tension. But static scenes are not frozen > like paintings. They should never", "how to write a static scene that still moves a story forward. So", "scene th...
[ "her own business and is forced to fight for her life; against a", "defeat the creature but she starts hitting it without tiredness; until she is", "story begins with a woman minding her own business and is forced to", "the character has got courage and survival instincts - if I weren’t to", "she is forced ...
[ "I introduce Kics, the main character. At the time of writing, I thought", "shaped by Kics’s hands. The axe had belonged to him since a young", "for a writer's handbook/source/acclaimed author saying this is either good, okay or bad.", "was Brif, who was his best friend, and the other servants on the", "the...
[ "want to write a chapter where the antagonist beats the protagonist and, well,", "that he rapes her without really writing details about him raping her or", "and I want to write a chapter where the antagonist beats the protagonist", "beats the protagonist and, well, I want to imply that he rapes her", "wher...
[ "fiction. Thing is — I quite like the effect (the space inserted in", "fiction writing?](https://writing.stackexchange.com/questions/6349/when-to-use-the-em-dash-in-fiction-writing). Neil Fein's answer mentions that 'Em dashes are easily edited out,", "part with it unless I'm given an excellent alternative. I'v...
[ "large more than 50 characters has some or other appearance in the story.", "description? Can anyone justify if possible with the citation of already written literature", "short novella**. I want to keep the length of my draft smaller and", "I am not sure of which site this question belongs to: Writing SE...
[ "have been busy, so no progress on that front. I have a list", "but all of them have been busy, so no progress on that front.", "two NaNoWriMos, so it is naturally in need of some heavy editing), but", "find more beta readers and try harder to get them to read it?", "one my most recent novel. Trying is the ...
[ "the rabbit hole I need to know if this minor character first person", "character, from whose point of view the story is being told, becoming the", "avoid a minor character, from whose point of view the story is being", "I get too far down the rabbit hole I need to know if", "view of the reluctant bodyguard...