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[ "scenes and violent scenes before but they always seemed .. very weird .", "give me some advice on writing an scenes that include violence ? Any", "character is getting physically abused by her father . I tried writing fight", "tried writing fight scenes and violent scenes before but they always seemed ..", ...
[ "specific word for a very specific feeling, and have had zero luck other", "something too. It's very hard to describe, but I'm really hoping to emulate", "you feel...well, what I've said above is the best I can describe it.", "a reference to this. I'm hoping to invoke this particular emotion in a", "sensati...
[ "more references to how \"anime\" this was: > > Your anime tier seven", "> > Your anime tier seven year old still has short arms, so", "air, throw, and then be thrown backwards and land on her feet where", "> And then, scrolling through answer and comments, I noticed a few more", "I read the following quest...
[ "my problems. So, what are you guys' thoughts? Edit: By narcissistic psychopath, I", "pas, usually her fault, sometimes not). * Her narcissism is sometimes outright humorous", "for others rather than strictly a solution to my problems. So, what are", "have on how to write a compelling psychopathic protago...
[ "1950s. This poet passed away in 2005. How to attribute this in my", "actual poet, even though novel shows that fictional character penned it herself. Would", "poet, even though novel shows that fictional character penned it herself. Would a", "composed by someone in India, likely 1950s. This poet passed away...
[ "lying to the readers. I want to know if this is bad where", "were convinced of was wrong. However looking back it doesn't make any sense", "is the case and nothing leads us to believe otherwise which is no", "perspective you are following be wrong and usually gives a reasonable explanation why.", "and make...
[ "assuming writing only about characters who have negative familial experiences would become one-note", "you don't have any positive relationships with relatives yourself to draw from. I'm", "have any positive relationships with relatives yourself to draw from. I'm assuming writing", "from. I'm assuming writin...
[ "sounded as if they were coming from the back bedroom, so she then", "I steer away from doing this so often as I write in 3rd", "room, but there was no sight of a single soul around. She walked", "person fiction? Here is an example: > > RizaMe took off her shoes,", "How can I steer away from doing this so o...
[ "know what to do to bring myself back to writing. Even if my", "my brain is constantly working. The standard solution would be to read more,", "multiple ideas on how to entirely change the plot of my book and", "a full time pre-med student in university isn't exactly helping either. I don't", "into a comple...
[ "clarification, please. 1. I believe the punctuation of a one-word sentence of dialogue", "punctuation of a one-word sentence of dialogue is italicized if alone on a", "I know CMOS 17 section 6.2 says, \"All punctuation marks should appear in", "alone on a line. Is that correct? \"Yikes!\" --or-- \"Yikes!...
[ "to be a large portfolio in that how many unpublished books ready for", "large portfolio in that how many unpublished books ready for an agent is", "ready for an agent is considered large or small? I have about five", "have about five THOROUGHLY REVIEWED novels within the Christian fiction genre. They are", ...
[ "want to live that emotion, not write about it. But the paradox is", "other poet, I feel they are great because it feels like they have", "very excited about it, and proud, and shared it among all my friends.", "is happiness or sorrow or anything, I just want to live that emotion,", "if you aren't fully liv...
[ "explain breathing when it's really cold outside and you can see your breath?", "one explain breathing when it's really cold outside and you can see your", "and you can see your breath? I just can't find a good way", "see your breath? I just can't find a good way to word it.", "when it's really cold outside...
[ "their friends. My next novel is about a twelve year old boy who", "tested in being damned to the Inferno. This is Christian fiction inspired by", "called, the Adversary (or the Devil) and are caught up in the Adversary's", "up in the Adversary's quest to take control of Sheol. My last one", "age) is really...
[ "This would really pull the reader into the environment. When and how often", "foreign words and put the translations in parentheses. I also have glossary at", "main character has small conversations in a non-English language. This would really pull", "conversations in a non-English language. This would reall...
[ "wondering if that is correct at all and can't seem to find any", "that a reader who comes across your book, or say a library carrying", "series for example, it tells you it's a series in the actual book", "come across information regarding ISSN numbers, but from what I gather, this is", "this is not for a ...
[ "solitude and to be mindful (I actually imaging scenes in my head before", "head before writing), how can I do this? Also, if you tell someone", "Also, if you tell someone you are writing, it may jinx the whole", "you are writing for the first time). Any guidelines would be much appreciated.", "to be mindfu...
[ "novel. The setting is in another part of the world, nearly 100 years", "historical novel. The setting is in another part of the world, nearly 100", "of this fictional novel. What is the best way to include some maps", "The setting is in another part of the world, nearly 100 years ago.", "would wish to make...
[ "In the context of \"Fundamental essence\", what is the fundamental essence of Luku", "maybe the concept of Conflict, which I'm comfortable with, will sound divergent from", "to another which I'm quite familiar: Star Wars. So, the story is different", "an unweeded garden, That grows to seed; things rank and g...
[ "larger documents from small chunks of text as a shoddy attempt at single-source", "what the company is currently doing. I wouldn't be able to pitch it", "I've thought of using Dxovgo or WordPress but they're too radically different from", "to Flare - except we probably can't afford Flare. Aside from simple s...
[ "feel comfortable representing Christian fiction. I have four unpublished and thoroughly reviewed novels", "suitable literary agents for three years that feel comfortable representing Christian fiction. I", "would to publish them one-by-one. I was wondering if anybody can assist me", "wondering if anybody can...
[ "interesting; does that theory have to be cited in the story. I don't", "in certain research papers, there are certain theories that have to be cited,", "research papers, there are certain theories that have to be cited, but for", "cited in the story. I don't think I've seen this happen, but I'd", "certain ...
[ "my family. They said that they were proud and that they would support", "my school work and focus on getting into college. I don't want to", "but I want to tell them that I'm really doing this and make", "I want to tell them that I'm really doing this and make sure", "and make sure they believe me. How can...
[ "about why the repeated use of short sentences is read quickly when there's", "the repeated use of short sentences is read quickly when there's a period", "sentence that should make the reader stop for a second or two every", "is read quickly when there's a period at the end of every sentence", "that should...
[ "am told it is convoluted due to the chaining of dependent clauses. Is", "when I show others a long sentence I have written, I am told", "I show others a long sentence I have written, I am told it", "tacking on modifiers and dependent clauses to a sentence without making it convoluted?", "due to the chainin...
[ "DC properties is inevitable, so how does one navigate this? Or do I", "sounds like Superman and Batman with other names\" I go \"Well it's based", "I have been debating writing a story idea I have had swimming in", "social bubble have. I know it's not a novel story in the sense", "done before and will be d...
[ "write about them. How to move past the sadness and write about ill-fated", "sad. I am identifying with my characters to develop and write about them.", "How to move past the sadness and write about ill-fated characters. Remember, you", "about them. How to move past the sadness and write about ill-fated chara...
[ "acceptable as a description may not cut it for readers for the novel", "currently writing a scene with members of government, navy and a religious organization.", "person so what I find acceptable as a description may not cut it", "organization. There's going to be about six people key (besides approx. 50-10...
[ "way they are accented. I am wondering if there is a compendium that", "``` legend double ember ``` And these words have iambic rhythm (u/): ```", "the poet to sound out various words aloud and decide where the stresses", "for various types of rhythm for me to draw from when writing in", "For example, the f...
[ "a grand daughter, but my novel says this King has a grand daughter.", "real-life King never had a grand daughter, but my novel says this King", "happened. For instance, what if a real-life King never had a grand daughter,", "Singh](http://www.sikhhistory.in/en/princess-ada-irene-helen-benyl-duleep-singh-daug...
[ "the ongoing efforts to reduce close personal contact with others due to COVID-19,", "contact with others due to COVID-19, I am seeking suggestions for the best", "calls for everyone. What about sharing or editing/reviewing written work among the group?", "What about sharing or editing/reviewing written work ...
[ "to publisher? By the way, I plan to give complete manuscript to publisher", "people have short attention spans, hence I use many short paragraphs, rather than", "short attention spans, hence I use many short paragraphs, rather than large blocks", "I use many short paragraphs, rather than large blocks of para...
[ "research about author earnings but most of the articles I've found is about", "can I reasonably expect to earn off my first book? I have did", "off my first book? I have did some research about author earnings but", "articles I've found is about those who decide to self-publish their books. If", "about aut...
[ "about this and tell me. What happens if I do this?* or should", "I say Q 5: What’s the use of this ... method. I mean", "I am making a tutorial video on a programming language. During the video", "a ...? or should I say Q 4: What if you want to", "...? --- Q 5: *What’s the use of this ... m...
[ "Novel. A Reporter is interviewing a Centenarian who narrates the story. The Centenarian's", "the story. The Centenarian's hobby is closely related the novel. The throat-clearing also", "is closely related the novel. The throat-clearing also introduces two Characters who are", "novel. The throat-clearing also...
[ "> > > The second in command gets upset when the leader does", "the organisation. > > > The second in command gets upset when the", "procedures. > > > See what I mean at first the writer is", "were adding these > procedures. > > > See what I mean at", "as their second in command and help build up > the orga...
[ "to find out what you can and cannot do? The book is about", "If I wrote a book about how to do something that is legal", "to do something that is legal in some places but illegal in others,", "disclaimer clearly stating that the information in this book may not be legal", "wrote a book about how to do some...
[ "Mama Elena came over to ask Paquita if she was being properly >", "distance and whispered amongst themselves. > > > --- Like Water for Chocolate", "have such wonderful daughters. Such > fascinating conversation!\" > > > Mama Elena", "> > Mama Elena sent Tifi to the kitchen to get something for", "a Nar...
[ "and compound-complex? And how about the following example \"He rang the doorbell and", "rang the doorbell and looked around at the garden.\" Do the 2 actions", "specific scenario. So when do I use simple, complex, compound, and compound-complex? And", "should use for a specific scenario. So when do I use sim...
[ "smile stretched across Grignr's face. > > > The barbarian spun around, his", "arm > thrust forth, sending the steel sword through the chainmail, hilt-deep into", "Eye of Argon, at least the version I used, was originally published in", "caught up to the barbarian, sword raised. > > > \"Only after you", "bu...
[ "know how to add more fluff or detail into them to make them", "of great ideas for stories and such but I never really know how", "ideas for stories and such but I never really know how to add", "readers can read all day and still have more to read. Does anyone", "where readers can read all day and still ha...
[ "want to go.\") Is there a way I can indicate the opposing counsel's", "the disclosures for an upcoming Due Process hearing. (Please note that I'm an", "that you can indicate tone at the beginning of a quotation (e.g. [angry]", "meeting. I've been researching the rules of transcription and I've read that ...
[ "the book Amleth as inspiration for Hamlet; how does one find books that", "one find books that lend themselves well to start as a base when", "play. Is there something I could read to help me work this out?", "How does one come up with original ideas? Hamlet was amazing, but every", "or is a direct copy of...
[ "think there's a recipe for this situation so any advice, ideas, and life", "worldbuilding points, and when that didn't work, I actually summarized them in the", "and probably everyone will send assassins after them. *Second example* In order to", "lose it if you can't guarantee your product (2 strikes an...
[ "aim at becoming a professional writer; in fact, my major concern is my", "to become more and more proficient in English written communication. In order to", "in regards to grammatical rules and usage of slang terms. I also have", "reader to help getting me past my grammatical inaccuracies during my attempts ...
[ "a 60K book in 100 pages, but it looks congested. Was Steven King's", "in 100 pages, but it looks congested. Was Steven King's manuscript also 100", "in 30 pages in MS Word. Font is Times New Roman, 12 pt,", "double-spaced. At this rate, my 90K novel will be about 500 pages. How", "will be about 500 pages. ...
[ "writing in third person, my character is kidnaped and finds out his real", "the end. Do I start referring to him with his real name or", "real name towards the end. Do I start referring to him with his", "I start referring to him with his real name or the name I", "and finds out his real name towards the e...
[ "can ask them if they can help me in some tasks, so that", "writing new articles. I sincerely consider me as being overloaded right now. The", "its importance in their work My questions are: 1. Is this reasonable? 2.", "but probably see its importance in their work My questions are: 1. Is", "good amount of ...
[ "the main story? My initial idea was to introduce this characters childhood in", "initial idea was to introduce this characters childhood in the prologue, giving the", "the remaining part. I have three \"main characters\", with one being more in", "characters yet? My worst problem is: how do I tell, along wit...
[ "to see our vocabulary book. I'm putting this question out here: what is", "days, the subject of vocabulary had not been enforced or rather most students", "putting this question out here: what is the best way one can improve", "vocabulary not until in the final year when our school principal asked to", "qu...
[ "power of this realm by summoning demons across the barrier. This is done", "humanity's purpose. The other sees them as transcendent life forms to be worshipped", "mustaches and cackle evily throughout the day. Their faith is normalized and they", "with two separate modes of thought. One sect believes that th...
[ "the main character is basically just a shonen protagonist (for example, Son Goku", "to a publisher, and they criticized that the main character is basically just", "Pokemon, etc.) in female form. They're interested in keeping the character female, but", "the character female, but suggested that I should put ...
[ "Until then, how do I refer to him or narrate his dialogues? My", "his name. I have to reveal his name later in the story. Until", "do I refer to him or narrate his dialogues? My story is in", "I am writing a story about a man who doesn't know his past,", "am writing a story about a man who doesn't know his...
[ "and variety? My goal is to improve the way my sentences flow on", "improve the way my sentences flow on the page and to improve the", "is to improve the way my sentences flow on the page and to", "Is there a good book on sentence structure and variety? My goal is", "a good book on sentence structure and va...
[ "war, the enemies have brought hostages, he tells the other MC (who has", "brought hostages, he tells the other MC (who has principles on not taking", "to dwelve more into his personality, but I dont want him to be", "and for the greater good. It's war after all? but doesnt this make", "not around, he order...
[ "like it's just such an overused beginning of stories surrounding similar issues. What", "though by all accounts he's a bit of an unsavory character (albeit as", "a result of his issues), I was considering beginning the story in a", "just such an overused beginning of stories surrounding similar issues. What ...
[ "of characters I’ve spent time creating and developing, but I cannot, for the", "developing, but I cannot, for the life of me, develop an overarching plot.", "cannot, for the life of me, develop an overarching plot. Anyone got any", "plot. Anyone got any techniques or tips on this? I know the question", "go...
[ "are two main characters, but apart from them there are others who also", "the danger will be defeated in the end. There is a good idea", "very late in the story. They are two main characters, but apart from", "There is a good idea I thought can little \"redeem\" this. I have", "a great mountain and waits t...
[ "because I'm so passionate about, a lot of the time I'm very overwhelmed", "Please advise me on what I should do, it's so frustrating. Thank you.", "about and will hopefully be able to publish. But because I'm so passionate", "core plot and the ending is still there. That doesn't change it, it's", "the stor...
[ "traits are meant to be their kindness/high degree of empathy, social awkwardness/obliviousness to", "and in some cases come off as desperate to please them. However, I've", "empathetic behavior. They come across as \"mostly nasty with a kind side\" rather", "this character. They are rather anti-social, shy, ...
[ "copyright them seperatly or can I copyright them all together? And if I", "seperatly or can I copyright them all together? And if I make them", "and want to illustrate it too. So do I have to copyright them", "to copyright them seperatly or can I copyright them all together? And if", "to illustrate it too....
[ "so. I would prefer this variant (#2): > > In this experiment, we", "a technical writer) told me to do so. I would prefer this variant", "measured the performance of our machine using the well-known method B. > >", "method B. > > > B takes the machine, turns it around three", "speaker (but not a technical w...
[ "adult language or should I just put a warning label on the title", "to present my book(s) to a Christian publisher and I was wondering, how", "was wondering, how would I go about censoring adult language or should I", "have to present my book(s) to a Christian publisher and I was wondering,", "Christian pu...
[ "Can anyone shed some light on this and what would sound best to", "destroyed spacecraft. I want to use `wreckage ring` or `ring of wreckage` or", "describe a ring of broken, destroyed spacecraft. I want to use `wreckage ring`", "an interesting word that I'm confused about. I've seen it used in books", "tha...
[ "Yarpres said. I did research <https://www.grammarbook.com/punctuation/quotes.asp> but I'm not understanding the concepts there,", "a week more on the west wall and do your job diligently,’ and", "west wall and do your job diligently,’ and that at the end of", "understanding the concepts there, it's a bit con...
[ "amazed at how much the main character is able to remember in such", "explain the level of accuracy in the narration like a diary, letters, documents,", "the narration like a diary, letters, documents, video or audio recordings. But some", "about events that happen decades ago. I know some books uses tool...
[ "a silly question, I apologize if it's off-topic. --- I've noticed that audiences", "is, how plot twists are foreshadowed and presented, how genres are blended, etc.)", "a bit concerned. Do I stand a chance of succeeding as a published/professional", "a story is structured, how a sequel adds to a story or wor...
[ "won't go into any detail because this question isn't about politics, so let's", "elaborating on it with an apolitical reason (the classical [\"then let me be", "that ostracized and made fun of him for no reason. However, those parts", "the nature of the story, which mimics Saturday morning cartoons to a degr...
[ "than live action might diminish it. What other ways to dramatize the delivery", "question does not ask how to build a plot twist, or how to", "be the much wanted answer to a big mystery arc, so I want", "Right before the climax of my scifi fantasy novel, there's a big reveal", "time*, i.e. walking in on th...
[ "that I don't want to slay, and this is definitely a story I", "script and I really, really like it. This is a darling that I", "are other ways for the hero to rise up against whatever they want", "to improve my art/composition/dialogue/etc. skills first, so writing another story first is a", "completely di...
[ "character who will become important later in the series has a line of", "the series has a line of dialogue in the opening scene. However, he", "is a main character? Or should I use his name for the dialogue,", "is, and for the benefit of the script reader, I would prefer to", "main character? Or should I u...
[ "How long should character bios be for a TV treatment? 2-3 sentences? Or", "long should character bios be for a TV treatment? 2-3 sentences? Or 2-3", "should character bios be for a TV treatment? 2-3 sentences? Or 2-3 paragraphs?" ]
[ "Instead, he made up his own ending where the cornered dragon tricks the", "people interact with them. In practice, that means my dragon, despite his above-average-human", "(unless you really rub it in). Thirdly, the villains could use the dragon's", "time, this allows for endearing character moments as well,...
[ "general tendencies favoring the concentric zone and the sector models. There are cheap,", "have a crumbling city that struggles to maintain itself. * Instead of mindless", "like background stories, lore or character bios out of spite, what should I", "for certain tropes and a special way to deal with them. N...
[ "novel..i am stuck at two characters who already have a liking for each", "subtle. . Thanks for your help. Please forgive my not so upto the", "the conversations they have, how they open up telling each other stories of", "or words exchange. The characters are very simple and not agressive and not", "this h...
[ "metric inherently good for the same reason nazis weren't good. Another example, Jaws", "Similarly, saying that more people adhere to X objective metric doesn't make that", "opinion to be bad, and the group itself to be a bunch of", "is good or bad. For instance, let's assume a group of theoretical and", ...
[ "a home on another planet. Now, just under 200 years later, they're a", "Like ICP/USS Pompeii. or ICP/USS Rome or ICP/USS Herculaneum or even ICP/USS Titanic.", "like to name their starships ( both colony and military) after old places", "( both colony and military) after old places of historical meaning from...
[ "a good/alright use of italics or is it weird/wrong? Example: \"The island of", "use italic to emphasize the names of non-fictional human beings when they are", "names of non-fictional human beings when they are important and appear for the", "the text. Is this considered a good/alright use of italics or is i...
[ "to someone abroad to give me some feedback (a native speaker, not that", "stolen from me if I keep sending more chapters. What should I do?", "I feel the urgent necessity of sending my work to someone abroad to", "I am currently writing a fiction novel. I have about 5 finished chapters.", "I have about 5 f...
[ "I write it I might be afraid people won't approve it. I'm scared,", "the second now it's leading up to the kiss. I have a ton", "this pairing from the start and if I can't show them who they", "and some already ship my characters together. Now if I write it I", "started their chemistry with each other on t...
[ "on this for awhile and it most likely will not be published physically.", "physically. But I want to say the name of my middle school/high school.", "want to know if I can do that. I actually went so I", "went so I think it is but I would like a professional opinion", "my middle school/high school. I want ...
[ "short stories, novels, documentaries etc. I used to write a diary as well.", "them during conversation to others. There's no creativity, I also find no interest", "to read short stories, novels, documentaries etc. I used to write a diary", "others. There's no creativity, I also find no interest to read my wr...
[ "seeing this in Science Fiction. My world does include both modern technology (cars,", "this in Science Fiction. My world does include both modern technology (cars, computers)", "the rest of this world), deadly forests, and creatures that live in the", "fictional continent is so I can create a unique worl...
[ "I’ve written the initial couple. It’s not natural, it doesn’t make sense, but", "I can’t see my audience picturing him and her together the same way", "picturing him and her together the same way as I’ve written the initial", "him. I can’t see my audience picturing him and her together the same", "triangle...
[ "the image of a \"noble savage\" barbarian who seems to be repulsed by", "That's a fair point. Though Springtime for Hitler and anything made by Qel", "people like it. That's a fair point. Though Springtime for Hitler and anything", "first-hand wasn't a problem. You see, when I had the image of a", "wea...
[ "the scenes and the background of the pace and situation. I have been", "characters - some of whom can be also used in the ensemble. There", "keep on track or lessen the impact and depth of the scenes by", "individual characteristics , although they are really townspeople and such. They create a", "They are...
[ "know that I was half-Irish?” > > > “You are an odd creature.", "read this little gem: > > “B-but that’s impossible! I’ve never even heard", "would make the likes of Guojgu Lecav or Ehren Kruger burst out in", "forget rather than incomprehensible drivel or vapid, \"witty\" quips akin to those written", "Doe...
[ "he is okay. > > > I think this is not good since", "I'm telling and not showing. I also would like to say that English", "native language so if you find another problem please don't go hard on", "> > I think this is not good since I'm telling and not", "a question? The only thing that comes to my mind is >...
[ "brief initial part, it feels like poetry. I mean, the minotaur's original name,", "initial part, it feels like poetry. I mean, the minotaur's original name, Asterius,", "which born the minotaur. Now, according to what I read, the minotaur wasn't", "of that stuff is violating my Hays code, assuming they go un...
[ "if this could work, as Im an aspiring writer and i'm looking for", "an aspiring writer and i'm looking for a way to make my book", "Im an aspiring writer and i'm looking for a way to make my", "exposition of my characters background,In a dream sequence could I use third person", "a dream sequence could I u...
[ "I know I can say: > > I'm proud of many small and", "> Middle Eastern female, I’m very proud of. > > > I know", "proud of many small and big changes that I made in my life.", "preposition at the end of sentence? In the context of writing a statement", "made many small and big improvements in my life that a...
[ "of the relationship between the two characters and to a lesser degree their", "fantasy is hard to define and arbitrary even compared to most literary genres.", "romance is key to the story, there's very little of the typical \"they", "to define and arbitrary even compared to most literary genres. As other pe...
[ "rocked. Arms crossed, knees drawn up, holding, holding on, this motion, unlike a", "> > > > “And so we beat on, boats against the current,", "essays, are you allowed to write incomplete sentences that make the sentences and", "“There is a loneliness that can be rocked. Arms crossed, knees drawn up,", "lone...
[ "never written a sex scene nor had sex. I don't want it to", "be too detailed, and I prefer no talking, just describing how it was.", "I feel like it would be right to include a sex scene. Both", "would be right to include a sex scene. Both characters are male, and", "I can handle a post-sex scene, I just r...
[ "M.'s seemingly useless ability, The Hermit, can be used to interact with ancient", "that and knock him out. The two place him into an elevator, going", "help her, has no prejudice towards her kind, and happily assists her with", "plus she grew up in a bunker-turned-city, which was a constant reminder of", ...
[ "commensurate with innate capacity, but that a > considerable element of the unpredictable", "short piece made such a large impact on my writing. Question -------- Can", "word where a short one will do. * If it is possible to", "self-review, I found that my writing does not have enough substance. This was", ...
[ "that she was talking about how much she liked the food, but given", "this is difficult but let's call it 40-60% with outliers in either direction.", "main approaches I use, but both seem to have real disadvantages. Any ideas?", "opinion) a distancing effect that makes this hard to manage for more than", "t...
[ "flying half a ship, but it feels weaker for the reasons I stated", "to the other characters, seeing Horus fall out of the sky from afar,", "Then we cut to the other characters, seeing Horus fall out of the", "42, and shoots at Horus for 10 seconds. Using the average rate of", "pause the book at the right f...
[ "book doesn't really define what that is. When do I spell out numbers", "topics\" but looking at the style guide, I am not so sure. The", "I must spell it out for all numbers less than ten? What if", "and bases their style on Associated Press (AP) style. In one of these", "in bulleted lists? Is it true that...
[ "own teammates are scared of him. Yet, I don't want to disgust the", "on the emotions, and the reactions, rather than the description of the injury.", "the injury. My problem comes with one of my villains, Best Dad. His", "His entire persona is as a performance artist in gore. You can't take", "him. Yet, I ...