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[ "keep haunting me are: Is this story unique? Will people like it? I", "haunting me are: Is this story unique? Will people like it? I think", "Will people like it? I think it's becoming repetitive. Will the characters be", "my book. The questions that keep haunting me are: Is this story unique?", "a large section of my book. The questions that keep haunting me are:", "written a large section of my book. The questions that keep haunting me", "of my book. The questions that keep haunting me are: Is this story", "section of my book. The questions that keep haunting me are: Is this", "questions that keep haunting me are: Is this story unique? Will people like", "it? I think it's becoming repetitive. Will the characters be loved? And a", "Is this story unique? Will people like it? I think it's becoming repetitive.", "I've written a large section of my book. The questions that keep haunting", "me are: Is this story unique? Will people like it? I think it's", "this story unique? Will people like it? I think it's becoming repetitive. Will", "book. The questions that keep haunting me are: Is this story unique? Will", "story unique? Will people like it? I think it's becoming repetitive. Will the", "that keep haunting me are: Is this story unique? Will people like it?", "it's becoming repetitive. Will the characters be loved? And a lot of questions.", "The questions that keep haunting me are: Is this story unique? Will people", "are: Is this story unique? Will people like it? I think it's becoming", "think it's becoming repetitive. Will the characters be loved? And a lot of", "unique? Will people like it? I think it's becoming repetitive. Will the characters", "like it? I think it's becoming repetitive. Will the characters be loved? And", "I think it's becoming repetitive. Will the characters be loved? And a lot", "large section of my book. The questions that keep haunting me are: Is", "people like it? I think it's becoming repetitive. Will the characters be loved?" ]
[ "book that's a sequel but in a completely different genre, like a horror", "a second book that's a sequel but in a completely different genre, like", "I'm wondering if is it possible to write a romantic dramatic book, and", "but in a completely different genre, like a horror or psychological horror story?", "write a second book that's a sequel but in a completely different genre,", "wondering if is it possible to write a romantic dramatic book, and then", "and then write a second book that's a sequel but in a completely", "sequel but in a completely different genre, like a horror or psychological horror", "possible to write a romantic dramatic book, and then write a second book", "then write a second book that's a sequel but in a completely different", "is it possible to write a romantic dramatic book, and then write a", "write a romantic dramatic book, and then write a second book that's a", "to write a romantic dramatic book, and then write a second book that's", "if is it possible to write a romantic dramatic book, and then write", "book, and then write a second book that's a sequel but in a", "that's a sequel but in a completely different genre, like a horror or", "it possible to write a romantic dramatic book, and then write a second", "romantic dramatic book, and then write a second book that's a sequel but", "second book that's a sequel but in a completely different genre, like a", "dramatic book, and then write a second book that's a sequel but in", "a sequel but in a completely different genre, like a horror or psychological", "a romantic dramatic book, and then write a second book that's a sequel" ]
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The result", "[2](https://writing.stackexchange.com/questions/43585/how-to-use-deus-ex-machina-safely), [3](https://writing.stackexchange.com/questions/29790/from-a-writing-standpoint-what-is-the-value-of-deus-ex-machina) and of course, [4](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Deus_ex_machina). Then I read [5](https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/coincidence) and [6](http://themanuscriptshredder.com/plot-convenience/) and", "woods. Would the MC be able to find their way out of the", "my understanding is mixed up; but aren't DEM and plot-conveniences just (albeit specific)", "> > Is this a coincidence? DEM or Plot convenience? (Or all of", "and plot-convenience; but now, I'm just confused about the difference. I feel there", "the woods. > > > Is this a coincidence? DEM or Plot convenience?", "is the MC finding the way out of the woods. Would the MC", "and starts banging his head against the keyboard. That is what I feel", "I suspect it's the connotations behind those words. 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The result of this event is the MC finding the way out", "I've read [1](https://writing.stackexchange.com/questions/39237/deus-ex-machina-how-to-identify), [2](https://writing.stackexchange.com/questions/43585/how-to-use-deus-ex-machina-safely), [3](https://writing.stackexchange.com/questions/29790/from-a-writing-standpoint-what-is-the-value-of-deus-ex-machina) and of course, [4](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Deus_ex_machina). Then I read [5](https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/coincidence)", "MC be able to find their way out of the woods? Perhaps. Reading", "Would the MC be able to find their way out of the woods?", "on [7](https://writing.stackexchange.com/questions/51887/when-does-a-partially-random-event-go-from-reasonably-possible-to-contrived-deu), the first answer states that what the OP wrote wasn't DEM;", "convenience? (Or all of the above)? The result of this event is the", "neutral, the other two are 'bad'. 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While coincidence is relatively neutral, the other two are 'bad'.", "read [5](https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/coincidence) and [6](http://themanuscriptshredder.com/plot-convenience/) and even [7](https://writing.stackexchange.com/questions/51887/when-does-a-partially-random-event-go-from-reasonably-possible-to-contrived-deu). I was blissfully ignorant about coincidence,", "[6](http://themanuscriptshredder.com/plot-convenience/) and even [7](https://writing.stackexchange.com/questions/51887/when-does-a-partially-random-event-go-from-reasonably-possible-to-contrived-deu). I was blissfully ignorant about coincidence, DEM and plot-convenience;", "a MC is lost in the woods and happen on a hermit living", "a skit about Kermit interviewing Dib Musiv. He's trying to play (or was", "(albeit specific) instances of coincidences. 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He's trying to play (or was it", "[7](https://writing.stackexchange.com/questions/51887/when-does-a-partially-random-event-go-from-reasonably-possible-to-contrived-deu), the first answer states that what the OP wrote wasn't DEM; but", "and plot-conveniences just (albeit specific) instances of coincidences. For instance: > > If", "ignorant about coincidence, DEM and plot-convenience; but now, I'm just confused about the", "though I suspect it's the connotations behind those words. While coincidence is relatively", "woods. > > > Is this a coincidence? DEM or Plot convenience? (Or", "the way out of the woods. Would the MC be able to find", "of the above)? The result of this event is the MC finding the", "used to be a skit about Kermit interviewing Dib Musiv. He's trying to", "a little lamb\"; but was failing and starts banging his head against the", "aren't DEM and plot-conveniences just (albeit specific) instances of coincidences. 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