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[ "release into society after their sentenced term. The callousness of the researchers and", "given no sympathy or mercy from staff, who see them as easily replaceable", "designed facilities to be studied. This research usually requires prisoners, referred to as", "be protected under human rights laws, or even ...
[ "characters. Some might argue that it's impossible to completely avoid personality tropes because", "characters with that sort of personality in other works and wanted to try", "personality. The character was explicitly not supposed to be a shallow stereotype of", "familiar. I have also been struggling with g...
[ "I cannot make comparisons to other letters. At the same time, they are", "number of permutations each. One of my viewpoint characters is learning this system", "my viewpoint characters is learning this system of writing for the first time,", "add images in-line, but what strategies can I use to describe such...
[ "I really be using \"ok\" in professional writing, like a book or novel?", "wrote the very first word of the very first chapter of the very", "OK? Which one is correct to use in a professional setting, and if", "of the very first chapter of the very first book, and that is,", "one is correct to use in a pro...
[ "it to my younger sister for her feedback (my sister's seven, the targeted", "sister for her feedback (my sister's seven, the targeted age range is 8-12),", "seven, the targeted age range is 8-12), she said it was very easy", "for her feedback (my sister's seven, the targeted age range is 8-12), she", "and ...
[ "struggle with making introductions and conclusions. * How can I write a good", "I write a good hook that attracts my readers? * How can I", "that attracts my readers? * How can I conclude effectively at the end", "conclusions. * How can I write a good hook that attracts my readers?", "I always struggle wit...
[ "Would the word and be omitted before the last item in either of", "American beech (50), tuliptree (125), white ash (221), sugar maple (80), red maple", "(180), sweet birch (250), and eastern hemlock (314) > > > > >", "tree-ring counts for species sampled are as follows: American beech (50), tuliptree...
[ "Sensory embellishments (Thursday was sunny // In the winter, a faint pine scent", "this be too taboo? Would publishers / readers be reluctant to read 100", "hundreds of sentences in an attempt to achieve a more organic exposition. Inside", "* No main characters will be introduced * There would be some random...
[ "of the dreams was quite Lovecraftian. Some are concerned with my breaking the", "quite Lovecraftian. Some are concerned with my breaking the law and being on", "for information on this drug will be ignored. This is a necessary and", "inspiration from their dreams? Is this a recognized 'technique'? --- \\**Sp...
[ "would be correct in this context. Since both so and as could work,", "to read it over, they suggested that I use so instead of as.", "> > \"Although both of my parents have bachelor’s degrees now, they were", "instead of as. I looked it up, and I found that generally negative", "employed when I w...
[ "too harsh I mean it offends or hurts them in some way and", "there's about thirty miscellaneous spelling/minor plot errors, plus a page of feedback on", "in my mind. How harsh is too harsh when reviewing/critiquing? By too harsh", "well as a bit of overall feedback and advice for moving forward. I", "i...
[ "He has to make a lot of deals, take plenty of gambles and", "'normal' people around, per see. However, whilst creating the plot, world, and characters,", "the more I'm thinking his character is coming across this way. How do", "his character is coming across this way. How do I refrain from making", "sympat...
[ "chapters feel like they have 500 characters while 1 chapter should become 3000", "characters while 1 chapter should become 3000 - 5000 words. Is there a", "story in which I'm a ghost and buried in a graveyard and then", "could expand it? My chapters feel like they have 500 characters while 1", "book and I ...
[ "abbreviations. Do experts agree with this? Looking forward to getting a reply soon.", "childhood that an ampersand is not supposed to be used in a formal", "is not supposed to be used in a formal context and it is", "in a formal context and it is best suitable between abbreviations.** Do experts", ...
[ "For example, if one might describe themselves as an \"occasional writer;\" or, identifies", "example, if one might describe themselves as an \"occasional writer;\" or, identifies as", "themselves as an \"occasional writer;\" or, identifies as a writer, yet only \"writes", "describe themselves as an \"occasio...
[ "book. It wasn't a consistent process and as such, it has many inconsistencies", "a cohesive whole? I am happy to rewrite the whole thing, but how", "I put the scenes together into a cohesive whole? I am happy to", "scenes. How can I put the scenes together into a cohesive whole? I", "How can I put the scen...
[ "given. 3. It is required that a, b, and (depending on a and", "that a, b, and, depending on a and b, c is given. 2.", "is required that a, b, and, depending on a and b, c is", "for a scientific publication: 1. It is required that a, b, and, depending", "2. It is required that a, b, and - depending on a and...
[ "special things about him is his dialogue. He speaks usually out of annoyance,", "have an intelligent character. He's basically there just for comic relief, but also", "I'm not quite sure how to do that. I tried using more complicating", "but it just doesn't sound right and out of place. Every time I", "to ...
[ "is clear that character A has a simplistic understanding of character B, and", "character A has a simplistic understanding of character B, and therefore character A's", "understanding of character B, and therefore character A's assessment of character B as", "a simplistic understanding of character B, and th...
[ "and creates conflict for themselves are they a protagonist, an antagonist, or both?", "to stop themselves and creates conflict for themselves are they a protagonist, an", "seeks to stop themselves and creates conflict for themselves are they a protagonist,", "stop themselves and creates conflict for themselv...
[ "of the novel, would it be proper in the mind of an editor", "novel, what is the proper way in US English to refer to a", "the proper way in US English to refer to a group by the", "so, they start referring to themselves as the \"Hacker\\_Masters.\" In the text of", "to refer to a group by the character's s...
[ "to be for the paperback version rather than ebook because you can normally", "wave of reviewing before I publish, there's gonna be a lot of people", "free. So, is there a way to get a dozen or so 'free", "I publish, there's gonna be a lot of people who help. I know", "of the book, preferably for free. So, ...
[ "write about aside from asking and answering questions of the competition. Should I", "feel that my writing is very poor. I can't find events to write", "about aside from asking and answering questions of the competition. Should I just", "I feel that my writing is very poor. I can't find events to", "find e...
[ "just to simply remove the female characters, but that cripples the story. Male", "image search the title with your kids and will likely run into something.", "mean to lecture, but taking characters people poured their time and energy into", "story. Male and female characters offer dynamics into a story. Any ...
[ "person, and Cgras is always a bit hyped up and excited. And as", "a book, and in my book, I have a habit to name every", "excited. And as for KumaZd's friend group, they all have names directly meaning", "should I avoid doing this and just choose names randomly like a normal", "writing a book, and in my bo...
[ "(knowing that it's not my mother tongue), but I'm always haunted by thoughts", "since I can't find a partner to proofread or edit my writing. How", "of rejection by readers which makes me hesitate to publish my work and", "sometimes makes me stop writing, especially since I can't find a partner to", "to pu...
[ "I would like to use flashbacks in my novel. I am not sure", "would like to use flashbacks in my novel. I am not sure when", "to place them - in the middle of a chapter, at the end", "own. What are the advantages and common usages for flashbacks that I can", "place them - in the middle of a chapter, at the ...
[ "of a story. The really big issue is that an author is generally", "characters because I've never dated or romantically interacted with someone. Or writing about", "I kind of dislike people in general. What I lack is a visceral", "I just taught myself to stop feeling. I work in a job that", "with. My enti...
[ "third-person narrative, and while she is notified of the male character's job, she", "he is. She simply takes a wild guess that he is eighteen at", "is eighteen-years-old. I am not sure how to refer to him - boy", "the male character's job, she doesn't know how old he is. She simply", "The male character i...
[ "will work. I'm leaning toward the idea of the same conflict happening, just", "to squeeze my little fiction story into real events and still make sense.", "wars between the French and British, are taking place. But, after doing research,", "looking to be difficult to squeeze my little fiction story into ...
[ "words mean or assume the reader will figure it out from the information", "then Lola and her mami had lived with her abuela. Lola loved her", "mami had lived with her abuela. Lola loved her abuelita, she was her", "to explain what the words mean or assume the reader will figure it", "familiar language (e.g...
[ "a cliché of sorts and I should avoid it. However, this event is", "or a bomb exploding, etc. to hook the reader. I feel like I", "first chapter was a plane crashing, a car chase, or a bomb exploding,", "to avoid being cliché](https://writing.stackexchange.com/questions/20916/trying-to-avoid-being-clich%C3%...
[ "suddenly implied he was beyond a regular human at that point without fully", "the limitations should be. * Hard to kill, with some weak point, like", "**How should I tread the story to not make it boring for the", "slowly transforming into a non-human being. Which makes him invulnerable... Or at least", "h...
[ "make the other character just tell those to my protagonist) The information is", "questions? Or should I use a different method to reveal those facts? (e.g.", "(e.g. make the other character just tell those to my protagonist) The information", "because she hasn't known anyone besides her grandmother and cous...
[ "that a daily diary is pretty much the same thing as a letter", "said that a daily diary is pretty much the same thing as a", "same thing as a letter to a friend, except; it begins with \"Dear", "as a letter to a friend, except; it begins with \"Dear diary\" instead", "teacher once said that a daily diary i...
[ "How can I make it clear to the reader what is happening without", "refer to him as \"Amox\", \"an actor\" and \"a man\". It feels like", "man and an actor. I'm describing a long dialogue of him and another", "describing a long dialogue of him and another person. I need to specify", "can I make it clear to ...
[ "the middle of the film walks into a bright room. How do you", "the true allegorical meaning of the film? What about the scene where the", "other elements of the movie from impacting this allegorical symbolism? Let's say the", "to prevent other elements from an allegorical film from being misinterpreted? Let'...
[ "The question basically explains it all. How should I write thought? Should I", "while and I decided today I would finally ask so there it is.", "should I write thought? Should I use quotations? Italization? Or should I just", "should I just leave it be? This question has been bugging me for", "I write thou...
[ "> > Instead of introducing that action is coming, then describing the action–take", "on my writing, but I'd never heard of this transition words thing, so", "a result, it fell over. > > > But others seem to have", "But others seem to have [the opposite opinion about whether to use them](https://kidlit.com/av...
[ "reader whether our hero is under the water looking up or on the", "sea. I need a word that can be used in both situations, because", "if you are, say, under the sea, that would be the surface of", "thought of heavens but there is a lot of religious meaning attached to", "the reader whether our hero is unde...
[ "hero is a young woman who is forcibly recruited into his mafia and", "villain is a powerful crime-boss. The hero is a young woman who is", "be taken in by the police, but I don't want the hero to", "reason for that. Is it considered bad writing if my hero isn't the", "an escape. In the end, I want to have ...
[ "grammar so much? For example when someone makes errors concerning mixed tenses does", "about grammar so much? For example when someone makes errors concerning mixed tenses", "so much? For example when someone makes errors concerning mixed tenses does that", "example when someone makes errors concerning mixed...
[ "dialogue, strange noises, etc. By the end of the story, it's not even", "changing names slightly? The reason I ask is because I feel the horror", "name of the game and certain gameplay within it, or would I have", "new setting for the conflict for main character and evil entity. Would I", "and evil entity....
[ "he recovers, making him remember what lead him there. Would that make it", "story that focuses on two main characters. The story was supposed to start", "story takes place through his interactions with the people around him. Then something", "fantasy story that focuses on two main characters. The story was s...
[ "part in the above example... it feels like the voice isn't properly captured.", "yeah? part in the above example... it feels like the voice isn't properly", "tall — he tried to look me in the eyes, but I kept", "> Dipis walked towards, and stopped close to me — he was tall", "to focus on. > > > “You walk...
[ "> > or > > \"We did and saw and explored and went...\"", "an educational trip, should I say > > \"We explore that, we do", "event that does not need a long description? Or this would be considered", "and we take pictures...\" > > > or > > \"We did and", "using the present simple, should I switch to the pas...
[ "she broke. The antagonist gives the protagonist a clear shot to kill them", "for breaking the protagonist's heart, and feels she doesn't deserve to win. Therefore,", "and to NOT let guilt destroy her. I thought about her consuming a", "groups etc. which ever harmed her, therefore helping her gain empathy f...
[ "that past tense narration. It states that the event happened a year ago,", "he had stepped into a convenience store was a year ago. > >", "stepped into a convenience store was a year ago. > > > This", "ago. > > > This is past tense narration. The bolded part is", "is talking about the past with...
[ "19 during the time I was supposed to market my novels last year.", "gain sales because it's not a new release anymore? * As a reader", "plan is to self-publish more novels this year and advertise the old novels", "Will my marketing for my previously published books be harder to gain sales", "not a new rele...
[ "view point characters I just want to make sure that my chapters aren't", "person and so far every time I switch between view point characters use", "a chapter that I think would be a perfect time to switch view", "an occasional 700 word chapter going to throw off the flow of the", "on average 3500 word...
[ "to paper. **So, as the title of this post suggests: is it possible", "taken seriously by their audience come across as ham-fisted and end up hamstringing", "was to survive as comedic relief given the story's dark tone, yet she", "bad Abridged series, stuff which TeamFourStar or Something Witty Entertainment ...
[ "How was Tcoklef Kubdihk able to make a film that could be interpreted", "could be interpreted in so many ways? Is there a technique that allows", "in so many ways? Is there a technique that allows you to make", "Is there a technique that allows you to make a film that can", "many different ways? *The Shini...
[ "persuade, concerning a particular subject or theme. But for a long time, I", "multiple purposes, and whether it could have primary and secondary purposes, and whether", "particular subject or theme. But for a long time, I wondered whether a", "describe, or persuade, concerning a particular subject or theme. ...
[ "understanding should you have of Quantum Physics to write a hard science fiction", "of Quantum Physics to write a hard science fiction novel? And how should", "have of Quantum Physics to write a hard science fiction novel? And how", "should you have of Quantum Physics to write a hard science fiction novel?",...
[ "but we need more of a visual tool that will allow us to", "a structure, for example: (topic, character traits) > suggestion > voting > assignment", "writing, but I need a platform to be able to plan a book", "we need more of a visual tool that will allow us to look", "visual tool that will allow us to look...
[ "how can you say that a land is desolate without using the word", "do, but how can you say that a land is desolate without using", "but how can you say that a land is desolate without using the", "without using the word desolate, lonely or any synonym? Is there a way", "is what people say poet advise you to...
[ "Time). The background, the events and the races within the story are very", "fictional character within a video game universe (for example TloZ Ocarine of Time).", "(for example TloZ Ocarine of Time). The background, the events and the races", "deals with a fictional character within a video game universe (f...
[ "better. I feel like the first series of examples are more professional. But", "there was > something that bothered Qurgon. > 4. Emmer hadn't changed much.", "same paragraphs, including internal thoughts: > > 1. He wasn't going with total", "speak about him more often? Unless…’* > 4. *‘He hasn’t changed much ...
[ "it possible to be signed up to a publisher but to also self", "Is it possible to be signed up to a publisher but to also", "to a publisher but to also self publish? I am currently working with", "publisher but to also self publish? I am currently working with a publisher", "but in the future I would quite ...
[ "pages. I want to make clear I'm not asking of how to extending", "don't want to put any new events. While comparing my text to professional", "produce way less text for the same amount of action. I suspect it", "take 50 same pages. I want to make clear I'm not asking of", "of the hero's morning * hero come...
[ "the text meant to be a strange mix of Young Adult and erotica.", "appear. > > > I will send the revision to my friend and", "I have used words such as \"mounds\" (breasts), \"flower\" (vagina) and \"rod\" (penis).", "English-speaking friends from a rough translation. I need softer words to replace \"vagina\"...
[ "use the word \"coloured\" in it, but I wasn't sure if it would", "going to use the word \"coloured\" in it, but I wasn't sure if", "I was going to use the word \"coloured\" in it, but I wasn't", "if it would be offensive or not. For context, it was a word", "paper on Aparthied and I was going to use the wo...
[ "> My colleague is quite opposed to using all caps, they perceived it", "the all caps is common practice and the preferred way to emphasise in", "a legal notice to a user interface, or in a data file for", "and the preferred way to emphasise in legal notices, i.e. instead of more", "want to include a legal ...
[ "rules for this. Also, if these kinds of phrases are acceptable, is there", "if there are any established rules for this. Also, if these kinds of", "established rules for this. Also, if these kinds of phrases are acceptable, is", "helping to proofread a friend's novel manuscript and I cannot find the answer",...
[ "can be really draining for me because I'm not into it like he", "him, but I also want to help him understand that this is *his", "aspects of his new book ideas and the worlds that he's creating. I'm", "him while also helping him to find balance where writing isn't taking over", "ideas and the worlds that h...
[ "The topic is \"Can tigers be kept in zoos?\", as they have less", "\"Can tigers be kept in zoos?\", as they have less space in zoos", "The scenario is to write a hook for an argumentative essay. The topic", "tigers be kept in zoos?\", as they have less space in zoos compared", "less space in zoos compared ...
[ "online form). I have not heard back from the editor with a decision.", "editor with a decision. I want to submit the link of the draft", "have not heard back from the editor with a decision. I want to", "of the draft article to a different publication. How do I withdraw the", "new to Medium and submitted a...
[ "Mio smirked, her eyebrows drooped. > > > Mio smirked with drooped eyebrows.", "> > > Is there any difference between the two (semantically or stylistically", "Is there any difference between the two (semantically or stylistically speaking)? Or they", "smirked with drooped eyebrows. > > > Is there...
[ "succeed in achieving the style that I want. Is this because I'm not", "write. But I seem to get tired after writing only a little, though", "don't like writing rough drafts, preferring to edit as I write. But I", "this because I'm not accustomed to writing so much? What should I do?", "as I write. But I se...
[ "get in said \"addiction\". The idea of an addictive magical item sounds kinda", "though, and the more that you play it, the deeper you get in", "otherwise, it's a completely normal kalimba. Is this too cliche, or should I", "(this world has multiple moons); otherwise, it's a completely normal kalimba. Is thi...
[ "that my writing muscles are in need of being exercised. Is this true?", "Many times, when attempting writing, I find the task of writing down my", "in need of being exercised. Is this true? Many times, when attempting writing,", "I find the task of writing down my main ideas to be challenging", "of writing...
[ "is there other ways to use metaphors that I am somehow not aware", "are other ways of using metaphors aside using it to describe something visually", "other ways of using metaphors aside using it to describe something visually similar?", "I am somehow not aware of yet? I can't think of other ways", "someho...
[ "want to call it, I managed to sandwich a good chunk of chapters", "and extend the conversation into another day but I just can't find a", "and in my plotting/planning/drafting/whatever you want to call it, I managed to sandwich", "or reflecting on things. What I don't want is for someone to be", "all jamme...
[ "if it evokes other interpretations or associations for you, I'd welcome them. This", "side too, and I am not looking just for literal interpretations only, if", "one can interpret it as if you are actually living in a dream,", "other interpretations or associations for you, I'd welcome them. This might event...
[ "real companies - bricks, bikes, food, real estate, etc. But more relevant to", "been used for ages for fictional purposes - not just as a company", "long in the tooth. Even to me (not a boomer but definitely not", "companies - bricks, bikes, food, real estate, etc. But more relevant to this", "food, real e...
[ "pattern for a formal letter to close the correspondence with the name of", "close the correspondence with the name of the correspondent. But, sometimes people write", "name and other information in the body of the letter, as we must", "letter only use appropriate pronouns (I, we, us, and 'the party of the", ...
[ "that covered. This isn't a whole new world rather than a new landmass", "novel and I can't figure out whether I am able to reference an", "amount of words (about 24) that one is able to directly quote before", "story with a happy ending\" by Erun Yoiyer I know there is a", "with quotes from other artists, ...
[ "evoking language and words never heard in the past. So how does one", "heard in the past. So how does one advance to the level by", "never heard in the past. So how does one advance to the level", "many is thought evoking language and words never heard in the past. So", "language and words never heard in t...
[ "The best example of what I mean would be that documenting by \"feature\"", "what they do and when to use them. When documenting by \"process\", then", "that goes through all the reports in the system and what they do", "of \"process\" (i.e. accomplishing specific business tasks) or \"features\" (i.e. the dif...
[ "complexity of the character, but feeling as if they had rarely spent any", "sounds like a lot, it's truly really difficult to repress and character and", "novellas, you have 100-250 pages or so to make your reader see the", "the reader invested in the characters. It's really easy to make your character", "...
[ "should read their drafts aloud, in order to hear any flaws in the", "the sound of their writing. But after I've done this, how should I", "change in my draft? The choice of words, the order of words, the", "which says that writers should read their drafts aloud, in order to hear", "words economically. But ...
[ "to thought in the same sentence, and that it ought to be split", "sure how to define a complete thought. Can someone please define it for", "ought to be split into multiple sentences. Although I'd like to correct this", "like to correct this problem, I'm not sure how to define a complete", "thought in the ...
[ "literature such as guidebooks, comic books, tie-in novels, and novelisations penned by other", "in adopting is similar to what the comic book series Watchmen does, which", "later on. Another solution that I’ve seen writers use to get around this", "information and getting confused later on. Another solutio...
[ "in it, there are different types of them such as mountain nymphs and", "to use Nymphs in it, there are different types of them such as", "I want to use Nymphs in it, there are different types of them", "there are different types of them such as mountain nymphs and sea nymphs.", "I'm researching about diffe...
[ "there to be a story of a villain on a rampage only told", "villain on a rampage only told in his perspective and his victims? Near", "stand up against him. I was thinking it might work since you won't", "to the heroes, now dead, but again, he's a villain. So, my question", "the heroes, now dead, but again,...
[ "periods) * JPG, TIFF, GIF, PNG (uppercase, no periods) * .jpg, .tiff, .gif,", "\"The platform will be able to process multiple image formats such as...\" ", "such as...\" jpg, tiff, gif, png (lowercase, no periods) * JPG, TIFF,", "various examples of data types. When stating the data type file extension, ...
[ "\"beep beep beep\" is seen by everyone in movies. The problem is that", "is that someone told me that I go too sentimental in scenes like", "too sentimental in scenes like these while writing. How can I write hospital", "me that I go too sentimental in scenes like these while writing. How", "hospital bed a...
[ "I want to describe this action. How should I describe this action? [![enter", "want to describe this action. How should I describe this action? [![enter image", "describe this action. How should I describe this action? [![enter image description here](https://i.stack.imgur.com/kmkQP.gif)](https://i.stack.imgur...
[ "marriage to follow her dreams. I want to add another story of her", "from her forced marriage to follow her dreams. I want to add another", "point where the main character is seen to be with her cousin in", "with her cousin in the difficult situations. Should I do this? Should I", "difficult situations. Sh...
[ "a character is locked in a cell for about two week’s time. This", "a cell for about two week’s time. This is a medieval setting. For", "is, I have no idea how he would pee and such. I find", "to think about, and I don’t think it’s relevant to the narrative to", "lazy, but I really don’t want to confront th...
[ "> > A woman walks into the room, looks at me and says,", "> > A woman walks into the room, looks at the man, says", "Perhaps a clean break in narrative? > > I look around the room,", "perhaps attempting to blend the two? > > I look around the room,", "woman walks into the room, looks at the man, says \"com...
[ "and had completely missed what their ethnicity was and that this was why", "find a tasteful way to describe the color of their skin and start", "level of cultural awareness of a reader, and so certain aspects of a", "convey a character's race/ethnicity clearly (while hopefully steering clear of stereotypes) ...
[ "> > > it just didn't feel right with the type of person", "tends to think things through. The one who had the blame wrongly pinned", "her. The one who had pinned the blame is traditionally a level-headed, rational", "vehicle for about 10 minutes and had sustained heavy damage. A few of", "of the accident o...
[ "a way that looks professional without removing the \"audio\" information of how the", "> > The question is how do you write no in a way", "an actor, how long and loud the actor should sound like when he", "way that looks professional without removing the \"audio\" information of how the \"no\"", "write no ...
[ "narrator/character is talking to themselves in a sane way. For example, to demonstrate", "translate over otherwise. However, the challenge I'm having is that indirect thought is", "those reactions/feelings. I would like any thoughts (indirect or direct) of the narrator/character", "would become voice-over in...
[ "like an idiot). I can't use the cliche of them bickering because they", "seem to have some chemistry together, writing later scenes for them they seem", "because that's not the kind of relationship they have. I think this is", "written in third-person limited, so it's not possible to give the reader a", "m...
[ "TV series, talks to the camera, is that 3rd person or another technical", "notice too. They talk to the camera to convey their thoughts to the", "3rd person or another technical term for the point of view? It's often", "to the viewer. I can see it as the equivalent of the thought", "too. They talk to the c...
[ "in place of the one discussed). There will be a web of episodes", "kind of relationship), and also the electric lamp made the combustion-based lamps mostly", "A simple example to show this, starting with four possible episodes: Let's say", "use of a wick, so I might also need an episode to explain", "more ...
[ "mixed tribal heritage. This detribalized population only exists, however, because of a policy", "is a massive wealth and technology gap between the cities and rural tribes.", "settlers from elsewhere and are based mostly on Zulu, Mongolian, and Maori cultures", "as mostly \"the bad guys\" make it look li...
[ "say about it, so, **what are some tips for writing dialogue when you", "of these characters are very well-rounded and important, and most make an appearance", "thought my favorite character was dead, and of course, they all have something", "people and it all comes out choppy and disorganized. These nine, im...