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For example: * Tim Horton's is located predominantly in Canada and the", "that many young people go through in the Western world, played for fish-out-of-water", "worried is that this will get me in legal trouble because it will", "aren't a ton of thing in that part of the U.S. that scream", "state\" rather than just depicting the region as a genetic flyover state with", "states like Utah, Wyoming, and the surrounding regions. These fast food chains are", "empty. * In-N-Out is a similar drive-in burger chain that is primarily located", "that questions regarding the usage of real-life company names [has been brought](https://writing.stackexchange.com/questions/49995/use-of-real-company-name-in-fiction-generic-common-names) [up", "that I've run into that doesn't seem covered by the previous examples. I", "chain. The chain has hundreds of locations, so it's not like I'm making", "the woods after being lost and saw a Tim Horton's, you're probably in", "the author does know what life is like in that state\" rather than", "the region as a genetic flyover state with the numbers filed off. The", "are common along the Pacific Coast. * Taco John's and Arctic Circle are", "and Whataburger, to the point that when I've visited the state the local", "many young people go through in the Western world, played for fish-out-of-water comedy", "in Texas and Oklahoma. Locals in Oklahoma and Texas love eating at Sonic", "in the Western world, played for fish-out-of-water comedy because the character is a", "of their own flaws. What I'm worried is that this will get me", "being lost and saw a Tim Horton's, you're probably in Canada. I have", "[has been brought](https://writing.stackexchange.com/questions/49995/use-of-real-company-name-in-fiction-generic-common-names) [up before](https://writing.stackexchange.com/questions/12369/pros-and-cons-of-using-real-brand-company-names?rq=1), but this is a really weird example that", "of an area and can do a pretty good job of setting the", "chains are often notable parts of the local culture of an area and", "examples. I don't know if this is the case for other countries, but", "a genetic flyover state with the numbers filed off. The issue is I'm", "know that questions regarding the usage of real-life company names [has been brought](https://writing.stackexchange.com/questions/49995/use-of-real-company-name-in-fiction-generic-common-names)", "comedy because the character is a nonhuman being with no social skills. The", "The issue is I'm worried about the legality of the whole thing. The", "real-life company names [has been brought](https://writing.stackexchange.com/questions/49995/use-of-real-company-name-in-fiction-generic-common-names) [up before](https://writing.stackexchange.com/questions/12369/pros-and-cons-of-using-real-brand-company-names?rq=1), but this is a really", "a drive-in burger chain based out of Oklahoma and is primarily found in", "a reference to this fast food franchise to make the setting seem more", "as disparaging to the chain. The chain has hundreds of locations, so it's", "the reference as there aren't a ton of thing in that part of", "run into that doesn't seem covered by the previous examples. I don't know", "just depicting the region as a genetic flyover state with the numbers filed", "a teenage character gets a part-time job working at this fast food restaurant,", "fast food franchise to make the setting seem more authentic: i.e., readers that", "no social skills. The character ends up getting fired, but they're fired because", "very small chain. And the comedy is just generic \"teenager hates being forced", "examples that are virtually unique to the Rocky Mountain states like Utah, Wyoming,", "out of the woods after being lost and saw a Tim Horton's, you're", "popular among Californians. There are a couple of other chains which are common", "primarily found in the American Deep South where the weather is warm enough", "worried about the legality of the whole thing. The idea was that a", "the case for other countries, but in North America in addition to the", "whole thing. The idea was that a teenage character gets a part-time job", "business model to work. Whataburger is a similar chain located primarily in Texas", "different regions of North America apart. I.e., if you wandered out of the", "has hundreds of locations, so it's not like I'm making fun of a", "of Oklahoma and is primarily found in the American Deep South where the", "I have a story set in a particular region of the United States,", "their business model to work. Whataburger is a similar chain located primarily in", "Arctic Circle are two really weird examples that are virtually unique to the", "the setting seem more authentic: i.e., readers that had been to the region", "that doesn't seem covered by the previous examples. I don't know if this", "* In-N-Out is a similar drive-in burger chain that is primarily located in", "as a genetic flyover state with the numbers filed off. The issue is", "the U.S. that scream \"this is set in this state\", but at the", "South where the weather is warm enough for their business model to work." ]
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