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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We driving My uncle lived since always came house going new house I excited going one problem ten hour drive My parents woke morning leaving I felt tired I looked clock said six thirty am I knew nt bringing lot food things went get packed van took longer seemed like would last My dad said would leave around seven thirty hour planned We got packed onthe road It hour I fell asleep back seat We made stop hour I woke After got back bother watched movie portable dvd player We kept driving I knew would take I kept patience fell asleep time When got great Their house mountain I fan visiting walked around town went stores I fun seeing uncle aunt This time I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Censorship It s word everyone heard people truly know means effects In past books censured rulers leaders thought material harmful How could say knew best people What gave right decide people could could read In today s society still deal censorship issues There still people believe libraries need censor books Censorship wrong Books magazines movies music etc removed shelves certain people find offensive Everyone different tastes food every part lives well No one person right say one genre better another Censorship wrong limits people read watch listen Censorship allowed limits people read Some people like mysteries others like read romantic books If allow people censor read say book everyone like If libraries censored every book might offend someone else would books left anyone read For example certain religious books might offend people religions mean take shelves If would take away religious books one offended Then one would able find books religion one would benefit Similarly censorship limits people watch If removed every movie even one tiny part offended someone else would movies left world Every movie going something someone love someone hate If focus person hates get rid movies based people hate people love movies suffer People love horror movies probably hate comedies This mean need get rid comedies people dislike It means people nt like type movie nt watch In exact way censorship keeps people enjoying type music love We ca nt censor music everyone different types genres like If take away one kind music take away every kind music It fair say censor one genre music people dislike find offensive people truly enjoy listening type music It would unfair people unfair unfair everybody People would even offended case There always unhappy people world We result censoring books movies music libraries places try make people happy Censorship libraries limits people enjoy It makes people would like items censored mad We result We allow people pick like If person want read something allowed If want watch certain movie listen certain song let The slim margin people dislike people enjoy avoid reading watching listening We ca nt take something away people love someone unhappy", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This powerful sentence demonstrates themes story Saeng determined try comforted symbol homeland This sentence shows plant done Saengs spirit shows symbol helps heal The sentence able wrap story demonstrates importance hibiscus In story describes plant friend remmeder homeland Once sees plant bloom shell know take test The paragraph great conclusion passage summarizes everything hibiscus meant Saeng", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Decreased Driving\n\nIn the past, the act of driving was a mandatory ability to possess, but as time progresses, the use of personal cars is declining. The decrease of drivers can be attributed to several events, one such event being the large quantity of greenhouse gas emissions caused by vehicles, especially cars. With society shifting to become less car centered, communities are adjusting accordingly, becoming more compressed to enable walking to ones workplace or a store. Additionally, the lowered use of cars results in a greater usage of more physical methods of transit, such as riding a bike or skating to a destination while saving the money that would have been spent on maintaining a car.\n\nPollution is an important issue on a global scale, having the potential to drastically impact the lives of both humans and other life forms. A large amount of pollution brings negative health effects upon most living creatures, making it essential to reduce pollution levels for the betterment of the environment. Some may think that cars don't have a large influence on pollution, but \"passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States,\" (Rosenthal Paragraph 5). Automobiles are responsible for a large portion of greenhouse gasses, as \"transportation is the second largest source of America's emissions, just behind power plants,\" (Rosenthal Paragraph 34). The enormous amount of pollution in some areas of the world even resulted in temporary bans of personal vehicles to reduce the smog, and at one point \"Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city,\" (Duffer Paragraph 10). As a result of this temporary ban in the previously smog filled city of Paris, \"Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France,\" (Duffer paragraph 14).\n\nIn order for society to shift away from the use of personal vehicles, distances between destinations must be reduced. There are experimental communities to test the effects of more compact cities, the most drastic being a Vauban, Germany, a suburb without cars. \"Vauban, home to 5,500 residents within a rectangular square mile, may be the most advanced experiment in low-car suburban life,\" (Rosenthal paragraph 6). These compacted cities have homes and stores placed close to one another, eliminating the necessity for a car or other vehicle. \"In this new approach, stores are placed a walk away, on a main street, rather than in malls along some distant highway,\" (Rosenthal paragraph 6). Life within a smaller community saves the residents a lot of time which would have otherwise been spent on lengthy commutes. Additionally, through living in a less spread out society, people are more connected to one another, better learning their neighbors who are closer, while developing a deeper feeling of a community, by living in a close-knit zone. This reduction or even elimination of personal vehicle usage would enable more funds to be put toward public transport or pavement, as opposed to the current setup where \"80 percent of appropriations have by law gone to highways and only 20 percent to other transport,\" (Rosenthal paragraph 9).\n\nNot only does the reduction of car use have environmental, time, and societal benefits, but there are also health as well as economic benefits to be wrought from avoiding car use. When not using a personal vehicle for transportation, other methods must be applied to reach a destination. Among these methods there are choices of public transportation, riding a bike, hiking, skating, and more. By not taking a vehicle and instead commuting by foot or bike, the commuters health improves as a result of the exercise. Many claim that traveling by other methods than a car reduces stress, one such testamony coming from businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza: \"'It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,'\" (Selsky paragraph 24).\n\nIn addition to health benefits, there are also economic benefits, as there is no need to maintain a car when one is not in use.\n\nIn conclusion, there are various benefits to not using a car. These benefits range from improving the condition of the environment thorugh reducing pollution, as well as saving money for those not", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story saying statement author want feel like character book determined The ator trying put across statement saying get try The character giving get test eve though hard", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why is it that Venus would be a worthy pursuit and great place to discover more new information is that it would bring more information on how and what kind of life existed in Venus. Venus is the second closest planet to almost the same size as Earth. No aircraft has landed on Venus becuase it is a challenging planet to land on. Mars and Venus are almost a like and diffrent. Scientist want to sudy and examine more. The scientist want to study it in a safe way\n\nScenietist know that Venus has a thick atmosphere at 97 percent carbon dioxide covers Venus. The temperature that Venus planet has is very hot. It's temperatures rise up to 800 degree Fahrenheit. It has an atmospheric pressure 90 times heavier on our own planet.\n\nIn conclusion, Venus would be a great planet to research becuase of its atmospheric pressure. Also, its the second most a like size close to Earth's size. Venus is very hot and has over 800 degree Fahrenheit. Venus has a very diffrent surface compared to the other Solar plantets. Its conditions make it hard for humans to survive.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I dont think the facial action coding sytem is worth all the trouble of designing. It can supposibly detect emotional expressions from facial recognition. But what if that person really isnt that emotion? Many people can just fake being happy by smiling or they can act like their sad just by putting on a fake face. You can only truely know how they are really feeling by the way they act, or if you know this person very well. Why let a computer tell you that your sibling or somebody is actually moderatlely happy when they may be really depressed but doesnt want to show it. Instead of the computer scanning faces, why not have something that takes time to observe the way people act and feel. Theres no guarantee that Mona Lisa was 83 percent happy. What if she was just smiling for the painting? Theres no way a computer can solve peoples emotions like that. It would take way more work and progress to accuratly see how a person feels. And until something of the sort is designed, we should stick to the people who help with the people having problems with emotions and can tell whats wrong with them, like therapists or in some cases doctors. Anyone can just say theyre happy, and all they have to do is smile. Thats all it takes to fool an expensive computer thats honestly worthless. I think this is a human problem that technology cant really help out with that much. Emotions are a human problem that needs to be dealt and helped with human to human, not human to machine.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear senator Im arguing in favor of keeping the Electoral collage. It has come to my attencion that people want to change it to election by popular vote for the president of U.S. I think that we should keep the Electoral College because it makes more sense and is easier for you guys to count the votes. It is more orginized by level of the voting people lie president, vice president ect.\n\nThe Electoral vote consists of 538 electors. The most votes that are needed for being elected for president are 270 votes. Each candidate running for president has his own group of electors. The are generally chisen by the candidate political party so is fare. So Im sure that you are going to consider this and read it because some people dont thhink about it. Some dont know how it works and vote for a new one because it sound better but is not.\n\nI just want to make sure people are inform with. That they read this and tthink about it. This is only held every 4 years on the tuesday after the first monday of november. So you might not want to make a big mistake making this decision. People might think that this is not that big of a deal but it is. This very important for the president and the government. This only happens Every 4 year so you got to wait a long time.\n\nI am very imform about this and making a change will only make thinks worse. People are not going to get use to doing another way or they are gonna get confuse with the old one. It going to be a caus if you change it. I just want to make thing better not worse. So you maybe want to consider this more and think about for days and analyist real good. Thank you for your time and hope you make a good decision.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever wanted to help people during war without joining the military well you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. The Seagoing Cowboys program is where you get on a boat with other people and go to far places to get animals.\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys program is a good way to help other country so there country's people can survive after war and other causes. On the Seagoing Cowboys program you can meet new people, and see new places and structures. You can also take animals from one country to another to give one country animals so they can make food so they all don't starve. You can also help make peoples lives better after war and acomplish great things. Just like Luke Bomberger who was just a average town boy then he joined the Seagoing Cowboys program because his friend then he became a hero.\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys program was created by the UNRRA (the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration). The UNRRA was created during World War 2 in 1945 to help country's effected by World War 2 by destruction. The UNRRA helps by getting soldiers to help fight. They also search for food and animals. The Seagoing Cowboys program helps by getting horses,young cows, and mules. The Seagoing Cowboys program headed to Greece with a cargo of 335 and enough hay and oats to feed them.\n\nJoining the Seagoing Cowboy is a good idea if you want to help country's just like Luke Bombberger did by brining animals you can see different places and meet new people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Computers great They much family ca nt live without computer many local town For computers place fun different applications But also used researching anything imagine I also think tha computer important businessmen job My favorite part computer applications like many These apps great talk friends nt cellphone talk friends live another state Easily favorite application I get talk friends look pictures see dating many endless possibilities You also play download games onto computer It s always fun things computer enjoy research time The second thing computer research Researching fun boring however look But researching educational I asked mother year old yearold yearlold said The important thing computer researching Its s fun enjoyable importantly educational The best thing researching endless amounts websitees information us look enjoy People work jobs mostly ones computer lot ar researching working People work th ones basically computer Businessmen designers etc The computers mostly used workers email My father always computer checking emails typing something boss even talking video conference There endless possibilities workers foe computers jobs Computers opinion theyare one best things created They best ahve amazing apps fun But also provide educational opportunity research And great people jobs I nt think person live without one technological beauties", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many high school students take break and start working in any particular field before beginning of their further studies. Some of them travel to places to make themselves feel relaxed and others start working to support their family by financially.What are the advantages or disadvantages of this, which will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs. \r\n\r\nIn high school, there are many students who belong to different families and financial backgrounds. For those who belongs to rich families do not worry about anything but for those who doesn't sound financially well always willing to work after high school vacation and support their family. By doing this, they start getting matured and make their decision wisely. Apart from that, they gain certain experiences as well which can help them in their future and also gain some information about subjects or fields for their future studies. \r\n\r\nHowever, taking break between studies is not at all a good idea. Because it can affect on studies as well as many students might loose thier interest in study. For instance, people tend to loose their skills by taking break in their daily activities and same goes for students as well because continuity is the only key which can make anyone skilled and composed. Moreover, students leave high school at very early age when they are 15 to 16 years old and that age is the period where students should study well and shape their career in a good way which can lead them to the successful future.\r\n\r\nTo summarise, taking break and work after high school can give life learnig experience but it also can reflect on your future studies which can lead many students in wrong way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people think the face is a natural landform.Well to straighten this out here are some facts on why its not aliens and why its a natural land form. It was made from a lava dome and not from aliens. If you look at the pictures from 1976 to 2001 you will see how the face from 1976 has changed to look like it has been made into a lava dome. so the picture in 2001 is not a face but it is a lava doe. Nasa wishes there was an ancient civilization on mars but there never was any ancient civilization ever found on mars at all. When you go all thinking that there is aliens on mars think of this. Were any marking found on mars besides the face? Were any discoveries made on mars that look like there was some sort of man made things or not man made things? or were any discoveries of aliens found on mars to this day insted of back in the 20th centurary cause some things can be a hoax or just made to make people believe that there are aliens or lofe forms on mars. Lava domes are the lava or magma found in earth\n\nthat had burted up to the surface or it had been there my a meteor shower or something that had hit mars or bursted through the surface on mars.Try doing reasearch on the face and see if there is anything relating to aliens put in the artical you find or if there was any lava on mars or in mars like found on Earth. When someone says there are aliens on mars try to give them examples or reasons why there are no life forms on mars or anything in particular because some things are made by meteors or something that goes through the galaxy that could have hit mars and the projectile could have made the face or something that went through our galaxy hit it possibly. And made the face but noone knows for sure what made the facfe or if a lifeform made the face on mars but just think of what could have made the face on mars if it wasnt a life form or anything just think or search later in the Future on what it is something like that. When something or someone says that is was a lifeform that made the face on mars ask them if they had any news that aliens were found or discoverd on mars and go from there. When you find reasearch or facts on mars read the whole list of facts and think about mars and read to see of any life forms or aliens were discovers cause nasa can hide anything from the life on Earth or the civilians all around the world untill someone sends out a link or have leaked out the information about aliens or somethng like that cause if aliens are real then we will all know after that the face was made by somesort of life form found on mars. but if there is no leak or anything realating to aliens found on mars then no one will think aliens or whateverf made the face seen in the pictures. When someone saysthe ace was mae by aliens just think if they were right or wrong cause if they say they are real then tell them the facts on why they are not real and why the face is a natural land form and not a human or life form making.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": ".\n\nThe Electoral College is a very contreversial topic when it comes to electing a president. Many people think it's a system that works fine, while others think it's a complete disaster. When it comes down to it, the Electoral College is a compromise between electing a president through congress and electing president by popular vote. In the past the Electoral College has caused problems in presidential elections and it can easily cause more problems that are much more severe than what we've seen in the past. America is all about democracy, so why don't the citizens get complete control by being able to elect their president directly?  It's about time that the government finds a system that works better and gets rid of the Electoral College once and for all.\n\nThe Elecotral College has many flaws, a major one being that voters don't actually vote for their president, they vote for electors, and the elctors are the ones who elect the president. You may ask yourself, \"What's wrong with this? One way or another we're still choosing the candidate we want.\" While that is somewhat true, the system has many kinks that need to be fixed causing errors in the process. One example of this is the \"winner takes all\" rule.  An excerpt from \"The Indefensible Electoral College\" says \"... the electoral college is unfair to voters. Becuase of the winner take all system in each state, candidiates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the \"swing\" states\". At a basic level, this means candidates will only focus on some states, and giving up on others. In fact, the same article also says \"During the 2000 campaign 17 states didn't see the candidates at all...\" The facts prove it it, the Electoral College is a flawed, and unfair system, and it needs to be dealt with.\n\nAnother huge problem with the Electoral College is called \"the disaster factor\". According to Bradford Plumer, \" The American poeple should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the system allows for much worse.\" Plumer then explains how in Louisiana the legislature almost replaced the democratic candidates with some who opposed John F. Kennedy so that the popular vote wouldn't go to him, but rather someone else. This is a fine example of how corrupt this system can become if someone actually manages to pull something like this off. Other problems like a state sending two slates of electors to congress, or a tie in the electoral vote can happen, and there are some solutions to these problems, but why even go through them when a new system can be created  altogether?\n\nPeople like Richard A. Posner argue that we should keep the Electoral college. Posner believes that the Electoral College balances the weight between big and small states. The Electoral College gives big states less electoral votes and smaller states more to balance things out. I don't see this as balancing anything. Now the smaller states have an advantage over the bigger states, so you still have the same problem you began with. Posner also argues that voters in toss up states are more likely to pay attention to campaigns, but Plumer clearly contradicts this in his article. He states \"  ... seventeen states didn't see the campaign at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't see a single campaign ad.\"  The proof is irrefutable, the Electoral College has it's loop holes which seem fairly easy to get through. The system is outdated, it's time for a new system to take its spot.\n\nI stand my ground when I say the Electoral College should ber abolished. The people should have full control over the election of our president, and even if that's not possible, the system is very corrupt. While some still agrue that the Electoral College is working fine, the proof shows it isn't. It either needs to be renewed or replaced altogether.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a very intriguing and thought provoking concept that manufacturers and society have toyed with for decades. The possibility of reducing the risk of human error is very tempting and a reason for why many people are in supports of having driverless cars. Although, not everyone shares the same opinion regarding cars that don't require human control. I do not think that completely driverless cars are the best way to go because of the high risk of a computer error, but minimal human interaction could possibly be very beneficial.\n\nMany companies such as BMW and Google have been working on developing driverless cars. While these cars have had some success on the road, there are some situations where a human driver is needed to take control of the situation. One example of this is a construction zone. Cars can have a radar and know how the road twists and turns, but in construction zones that is all thrown out the window. There are usually new boundaries created by traffic cones that the sensors on the car might not be able to connect.\n\nEven though I am opposed to cars that are completely driverless, I do think that the integration of this technology can be highly beneficial in some areas of driving. One place that I feel like computer-assisted driving can help is when a person is backing up. Often times it is hard to see everything and it can be very easy to hit something or someone while reversing in a car. A computer that generates three dimensional images of the car's surroundings, such as the LIDAR system used by Google, could assist drivers by helping them see things that they previously weren't able to see. I also think that an automatic brake that is activated when the car is dangerously close to an object would be beneficial as well.\n\nWhile there are risks and rewards to a driverless car, I feel like the risk of a computer error is a great one that could cost money and lives. Driver assistance, including cameras for backing up and an automatic brake to help prevent wrecks, is something that I would be open to in the future. We could soon be seeing these driverless cars on the road as many companies plan to have models out in the next five or six years, but I doubt they will be completely driverless.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper Computers positive effect people With computer could many things They provide plenty information communication even entertainment The reason find unhealthy negative people abuse computertime Ever used popular website wwgooglecom Sites like many great need information Your practically type word automatically hundreds thousands links containing information word choose How could much knowledge named unhealthy negative effect people Computers dictionaries references translators encyclopedias even history pages hold massive informatiion So go ahead expand knowledge If log onto one famous wellused social networking websites find new way communicate friends family Equipped tools various settings keep safe find longlost friends outoftouch family members instantly catch Again many people abuse websites putting harmful words inappropriate things problem easily solved report website manager adult You know safe online computer negative object If know use right ll enjoy messages family instant messages friends There wide variety entertainment computer From videosharing websites like wwwyoutubecom gaming websites like wwwonemorelevelcom These sites provide games many videos even learning aids There sites purchase music ang movies even clothes furniature Many stores online websites wher purchase items shipped front door How could possibly regroup Also video games specially created computer buy installed isntant entetainment I mean nt like play games shop without go trouble finding time go I know aunts So see computers nt negative unless abuse computertime waste countless hours reason You need limit Without s plain weird spending day computer So fun Learn communicate entertain youself", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the modern world, among the number of issues people have to deal with, the historical topic is one of them and along with it arises something more specific – there are more people, in some areas, are becoming concerned on researching about the past of the house or building they live in. Within the scope of this writing, some causes are discussed and from then the ways to look for information are mentioned.\r\n\r\nAs the beginning part of the discussion, the reasons are worth mentioning initially. Firstly, we can see that nowadays, culture plays an important role in human lives. It means, the more societies develop, the more people tend to appreciate ancient values. To illustrate, some old villas that were built in Da Lat city of Vietnam in the Indochina period were bought with a lot of money, even they are more expensive than modern houses. Secondly, finding out about the history of the house or building helps people learn about design styles. Through this result, more and more people want to show their knowledge to other people. Finally, most Asian people believe in the spirituality of a building. In detail, directions and constructions of rooms, as well as the history of a house,history of a residence can affect to owner’s life. For example, in some countries, it is wildly believed that people will meet numerous unlucky and difficulties if they live in a building that had some detrimental problems in the past such as accidents, illness, divorce…\r\n\r\nResearching the history of the house or building, in some cases, is not simple. However, there are some steps for people to do. One recommendation is that they can chat with the previous owners of the building or receive advice from neighbours. Furthermore, there are forums or social groups on the Internet for people to get information about real estate. Thus, it is logical that we can share the story and discuss it in forums to collect more knowledge. In addition , a look further into this problem is that people can look for instruction from books, newspapers or experts.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, some reasons for the issue can be identified and there are some ways for people to know about the history of constructions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood author creates memoir gratitude The author grateful parents sacrificed For example came United States Cuba without clue customs language The authors parent s left behind careers families friends better life baby The author s parents let people stay home could get back feet The authors gratitude clearly shown paragraph six says I always grateful parents love sacrifice The author clearly states grateful parents given The author also says thinks parents courageous thing could ever done", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting story Do exceed posted speed limit affect author big way The features setting there one sight building car structure kind The fact nothing around made author lose hope trust After author saw old juice factory felt like something happening favor Then saw abandoned lost hope He shows loss hope talks hes going die He shows hes lost trust old men talks never accepting advice oldtimers havent left porches since Carter office In conclusion features directions given lose hope surviving", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist road could damaged could lot hills One example pg with luck Id hit bump lodge one throat This explains conditions road could dangerous That condition road affective", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars is not a very bright idea because something with the car could go wrong, people are always gonna be cautious when it comes to what could happen, and I just don't think people would buy the car for multiple reasons.\n\nTo me, driverless cars would be pointless because, with how technology is now-a-days, you never know what could go wrong with a car that runs on its own. Its just doesn't sound like a good idea to me and I'm pretty sure other people are thinking the same thing.\n\nI never think for oly myself, I think for the people around me as well and I honestly don't think people would buy a driverless car. Like I said before there are so many things that could go wrong witth a car that can drive itself. Parents aren't going to buy their teenager a car that drives itself because they're going to want to drive, you know? It's just a lot to think about before you actually make something and I think the creator didn't really think this through like he/she should've.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you really want your children living in a world covered in smog and crouded streets? It is shown that all of our development sense World War II has been centered on the car and this really needs to chang.\n\nFirst off studies show that passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in europe.. And those number are 4 times higher in America, the land that you are raising your children in has the highest amount of greenhouse gases on the planet right now. If we could just do what the people in Paris did we can easily fight this smog epidemc. In Paris the put a law out were people with even-numbered license plates had to leave their cars at home or the would face a $31 dollar fine. then they carried out the rule the next day for people with odd-numbered license plates. This rule cut down the congestion by almost 60 percent in the capital. And after five days of this new act the smog over paris finally left.\n\nAlso in Colombia they have a program that is some what like paris whish is having a huge turnout. Many people are saying that the car free day \"is a good way to take away stress and lower air pollution\". The funny part is that this event is spreading troughout the neighboring countries. This day without cars is part of an improvement campaign that began in the mid-1990s. and it has seen the construction of 118 miles of bike paths, which is the most amount in all Latin American city's. SO why is it takening the U.S so long to jump into this program?\n\nThe final thing we need to talk about is that even though fewer and fewer people are getting their licenses its still not enough. And even though the researchers say that \"America is past its love affair with cars\" its still not enough. To truely make a change people like you and me need to get up and actually do something. Even if we can't get the goverment or state to pass it. We as a community can put our own no car days into action and just start walking.\n\nNow that you know the risks about this rising epidemic known as smog how do you feel about the way the world is looking? And how esay it would be to just fix what we have be doing such a thing as walking. But truley is this a world you want to raise your children in?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Live attenuated refers to a microorganism that is still alive but has underwent serial transmission in environments has been created via genetic modification.\n\nIn order to trigger an immunological response, live vaccinations must multiply. The principles governing the timing and spacing of live vaccines are influenced by the several conditions that can prevent replication.\n\nCertain vaccinations (such the Jynneos Smallpox/Monkeypox vaccine) are referred to as \"live attenuated.\"\n\n3. A mother brings her 14 month old son in for his vaccinations. He receives a measles (rubeola) vaccine. The following day the mother calls back and says that the vaccine gave her son measles. He has a low grade fever (37.5 tympanic), a mild rash, the injection site is slightly erythematous and tender, and he is a little fussier than usual. What should the advanced practice nurse say to the mother? Include all pertinent parent/patient teaching.\n\nChildren can experience moderate side effects following immunizations, such as soreness at the injection site, a rash, or a fever. These common reactions will fade fast.\n\nApply a cool, wet cloth to minimize redness, discomfort, and/or swelling at the injection site to treat moderate vaccination responses. \n\nUse a cool sponge to lower fever. \n\nUse painkillers other than aspirin.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Students are gravitating towards academic courses in the hopes of gaining a good-paying job after graduation.In actuality, graduate fresher experience hardship to find a job in their respective field and many struggle to find work according to their graduation level.This is attributable to a scarcity of practical knowledge and a competitive market environment. According to my perspective, the aforementioned issues arise from an obsolete education system that needs to be upgraded.\r\n\r\nPrimarily , the conventional university focuses more on theoretical courses, which has an impact on scholar’s fundamental skills and functional expertise. And as a result, graduates face difficulties in finding work. For instance, skills of soldering and wiring are required for electrical field jobs.This is never learnt through university’s exams and theory courses.Practicals are required for this expertise in order to gain a strong grasp. Second, freshmen must enrol in courses according to future opportunities and prospective market requirements; they must not choose courses based on the preferences of other candidates, nor should they choose degrees in order to build a strong resume. If all graduates go into the same field, market competition will increase, and more students will be unemployed and will not be able to find assignments in their fields.\r\n\r\nDevelopment in the education system of higher degrees can minimize a plethora of issues ,on the contrary it requires partnership or collaboration between companies,colleges and government. To begin, the company's responsibilities include mentioning ability and expertise for specific job roles. Following that, colleges must improve or update their course work, as well as include factual activities to help students into their functional skills. Lastly, the authority needs to regulate market demand and student ratio in each curriculum. This will help to avoid overcrowded candidates in the placement pool.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, in order to change the current state of the education system, universities and the government must act accordingly to meet the task requirements of freshmen. More practicality can be added to institute courses. While the ministry must regulate the student’s proportion in each degree based on market situation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One obstacle builders faced attempting allow dirigibles dock Empire State Building lack suitable landing area New York City full buildings lot flat ground land dirigible The builders second obstacle could nt find way get mooring mast top building The builders would need make stronger building frame mast could safely top building without adding stress frame Another obstacle builders faced nature The wind top building unpredictable strong times The back dirigible would move wind even tied building The last reason law would nt allow dirigibles fly low urban area Therefore dirigibles could nt dock Empire State Building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Holy Avacadoes! A new computer software has just come out, and it is designed to insure that this software can recognize our emotions, feelings, and best of all... FACIAL EXPRESSIONS! You may think this is a good idea, or maybe even a bad idea. Never the less this was not intended to be a quote \"AS SEEN ON TV\" commercial promoting a computer software for $19.99. It may be a good piece of technology, and a smart way to see things from another perspective. While many may argue that using technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom, is valuable. This may be the best idea I have ever heard of, espcially in an age where people are using facial recongnition to recognize who is coming in and out of the schools, and people can track others medical histories, and so on, and so forth. Classrooms should be more reliable when it comes down to facial recogntion, and cyberbulling.\n\nOne example on how classrooms should be using facial recognition especially with students, can be shown on paragraph #7 whenever the author mentions that home computers can't always rely on facial recongiton, but that school computers can and should. \"Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile. But we can write down some simple instructions that \"encode\" different emotions.\" As this paragraph is shown to readers, the author is trying to mention a point that home computers can be slow, and may not recognize faces easily, and that right there can lead to stalkers, and hacking occuring as well. Not only that but school computers can get hacked too, but with facial recogonition, they can stop that from happening.\n\nAnother example on how classrooms should use facial expressions especially with students is displayed fully in paragraph #5 when the author states that quote the \"calculation\" to recognize faces is so complex now that you can recognize everyone's face on a computer no matter if you mention there name. \"For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look at her face.\" This shows us the readers that we can identify peoples faces, on either a computer, or in person. It can be very useful for counslers because they can identify who this person, or people are walking into there offices.\n\nFinally, the last example on how classrooms should use computer facial recognition especially with students, can be traced to paragraph #9 they claim that quote \"(Putting on a happy face\" actually works!) this shows us the readers that whenever the computers try to recognize your face, they can also see how you were feeling, whether it was happy, sad, or even emotion. And pictures can be a good recource to identify a cas, or in the case a student.\n\nIn conclusion these examples I showed were good whenever it came down to finding out what students are in where, but it can help not only in a classroom, but aslo in the world of law enforcement, and our phones. But if you use it incorrectly, you may have serious trouble in your hands.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, concentration issues are increasing in students. There are various reasons behind that such as hard curriculum, harsh schedule, mischievous behavior. I will discuss cause in detail and some solution. \r\n\r\nThere is no doubt that young kids paying less attention at school. The main cause is strict curriculum, for instance, school have more practical subjects than art and paintings. Today, most of institutions just focus on technological, scientific, and mathematical program, which make the more tough, there seem no space or time for artwork and game period. Moreover, today children have the all-day tight time table like seven to eight hours at school, after that they have fully packed homework which they have to finish in the evening, therefore they don’t get time play at home. This makes them start avoiding study and do other activities such as play games, watch movies or TV. They prefer more fun and hilarious moments because it is their childhood. \r\n\r\nThere are some effective solutions to resolve this issue. Schools should add some other creative activities in curriculum, some games and outdoor activities which make them more active, so they can give more time to study. Along with, teachers should divide the homework of subjects into weekdays, for example Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday half subjects, Thursday, Friday and Saturday half subject; by this they can get Sunday free for fun and relax. However, parents should provide more emotional support to their young ones and help them in their homework, projects and assignments. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although this is necessary to have knowledge about world but other activities also play a vital role in younger’s life because he/she feel more relax after these leisure activities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author In memoir good mood knows parents moved Cuba give better life My young parents created traditional Cuban home There trying give life would Cuba better And unselfish family moved let grow good community And say All cultures came together great solidarity makes feel good segrigation stoped people hang others different places Family always first matter even dont understand always first creating happy good mood people reading family", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Narciso Rodriguez s memoir creates overall mood love compassion family shows strength family Narcisco explains parents love cooking willingness let people instilled great sense family nothing blood realative Also memior shows people facing hardships Narciso explains neighborhood family overcame racism together This sets mood love eachother Lastly memior shows love sacrifice Narciso explains parents struggled personally financially move But Narciso s parents still showed love From parents Narciso learned love admires parents", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" some people say it's worth to study Venus is a worthy to pursuit despite the dangers it presents. Exploring Venus would be a great and exciting adventure, to find new things and learn more on what's beyond the Earth. Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our system.\n\nVenus might be just some other Earth like planet, but we do not know what the danger could do to us, is it worth it? Yes, because we humans were born to explore and find out new ways to live a good and entertained life. We keep our blogs updated everyday, is a new day. Humans, cannot obtain life on Venus because of the conditions are far more extreme than on Earth. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth, this planet has a rokcy surface and includes some familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\n\nNASA are trying to approache Venus, without any warm if tha's possible then we could have another planet to explore. Striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us in the many equally intimidating endeavors. Though we travels far and explored far, we still need to continue on to our very edges of our imagination and innovation. Nature will let us determind if we can continue our journey, the universe will let us if we can or not. Continueing on studying Venus would be the greatest project that has ever been created on history.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is undoubtedly the case that the urban areas are suffering from high volume traffic congestion. There are many arguments for this problem and plenty of solutions to mitigate this issue. In this essay, I will discuss the criterion and also highlight some solutions that should be taken by the government authorities.\r\n\r\nThe very first step is to find out the argument behind a wide range of gridlock. In brief, there are several reasons for the rising traffic jams. Firstly, one of the major causes is overpopulation of the city areas. Most of the offices and factories are situated in urban areas which is why job opportunities are comparatively higher in the towns than in rural areas. For this instance, most of the village people migrate to the city space for the sake of getting a job. Secondly, cars are now more affordable for massive consumers. Most of the job holders are trying to reach the office by the car without any co-passenger except the driver , therefore, roads are blocked with cars in office hours and cause serious movement issues. Thirdly, the roads and lanes are not well constructed. The unorganized roads are a great reason for high-rise traffic.\r\n\r\nTo solve this critical problem the government should take some necessary steps. Some of the factories should be shifted to different rural areas therefore, many people will also shift to those areas for their job purposes. The tax rate on cars should be increased. If the tax rate is high then it will not be so easy to maintain the cost of a car and there will be fewer cars on the road. Eco-friendly vehicles like bicycles can be used for easy transportation instead of cars. Finally, the authorities should construct the road in a proper way and develop separate lanes for trucks and buses. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, traffic jams can be caused by many reasons. If the government and general people work in a proper way to solve this problem then it is possible to get rid of this high volume of traffic.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the artical \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" it talks about how a new form of technology that can read human emotions was used to read the emotions of the Mona Lisa could be used to read other human emotions. Dr. Huang, from Beckman institute worked on the computer with other scientis. the computer was programed to read the expresions of humans by first making a 3D model of the face, along with all 44 major muscels in the face too.\n\nHow this would be valuable in the classroom. well it argues in ther artical how if this technology was available in all classrooms that this would ba able to help students learn in their own way or how the computer would be able to recognize the emotions that the student is expressing and would be able to change or modify the lesson for the sudent. if this sort of technology was available it would change the whole outlook on how we learn and change the whole outlook on the classroom. it would give students a better chance of learning and help how they learn,it would make each lesson personal to each student.\n\nIf this form of technology was made available then they major impact that it would have on schools and on students would be so grand that it would cahnge the face of learning. so therefor i do belive that the use of this technology is valuable in a classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is common nowadays in the early 20s technologies are getting bigger. The digital world is easy to access anywhere, anytime by everyone without the exception of children. Some society think that spending time on television and video games has some advantages, In my opinion spending time on games and TV sacrifices every moment with the most important people in your life.\r\n\r\nIt is widely believed that video games and television are a great source of entertainment to cope with boredom. They also help people wind down and relax after a stressful day at work. Moreover, many video games require kids to analyze complex situations and make informed decisions to advance in the game outcome stimulate their critical thinking encourage their creativity and boost their problem-solving skills.\r\n\r\nThere is no denying that, Digital entertainment causes addiction. Another special consideration in this case is that kids who are addicted, end up playing video games and electronic media for multiple hours at a stretch without taking a break except for something necessary. As a result children only spend limited time interacting with their friends and family in a real atmosphere, it is affected to their quality and quantity of social skills. That’s why parents have an important role to put limits on their child’s gaming. \r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nTo conclude, there are equal advantages and disadvantages to kids wasting time on electronic accessories. They can be beneficial to their creativity and problem-solving skills. However, from my perspective individuals addicted to video can lack their social skills.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are controversial debates about whether spending time watching television is suitable for kids or not. Some believe watching tv programs aids in shaping a minor's developmental process as he/she ages, while the other group assumes it's not effective and the cons side is heavier than the pros.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, It is believed that offspring who watch TV programs, tend to be more obese than others when they grow up. This is due to their habit formation during childhood, Sitting in front of an LCD and not having physical activity. Another reason which made these groups of people against TV is that there are fewer age-limited animations and movies for kids nowadays, Which could lead to early puberty in those kids. Moreover, Juniors who are constantly watching TV while being too close to the screen, is proven to have eyesight problem in teen ages.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, Advocates of the discussed theory, which is my own opinion on the subject, believe that all mentioned effects of watching TV, could be prevented by parents, if there is controlled and limited time during the day when a kid is allowed to watch their favourite cartoon. It's not only safe and enjoyable for the kid, But also prompt their mental and social skills growth, by being familiar with social greetings and different culture and it will help to shape a personality feature named \"acceptance\". Hence, adding physical activity during the day could prevent obesity. Furthermore, children who grow up watching TV can perform social interactions more easily, during a process called \"modelling\". It is obtained through ages of observation of educational programs on TV.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there are different rationales among parents on TV watching habits in children. While it could prompt the modelling and acceptance of mental processes and behaviours, it couldCorrespondingly cause eye-related conditions in the long term and it is up to parents to choose between options.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is sometiimes called the \"Evening Star\" is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. However, Venus is actually is a palnet. Examining Venus is very challenging because of its thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide around it. Even like this the scientists are trying to came close to Venus became Venus may well once have been the most Earlth-like planet in our solar system. We, the humans should pay a vist to our sister planet.\n\nVenus is second planet to the sun but it is the hottest planet in our solar system because \"beyondhight pressure and heat,Venusian geology and weather present additional impediment like erupting volcanoes,powerful earthquakes and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface\". These are a few reasons why we can't get close to Venus, even though we want to.\n\nThe National aeronautics and Space Administration(NASA) is trying to send humans on to Venus. The scientists can peering Venus from far above the planet using ship orbiting and hovering safely can only give the insight of ground on Venus. This is not enough for scientists to really learn what is going on on Venus because they can not get a samples of rock,gas and anything else from a distance.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Traffic congestion is a major concern in metropolitan cities and towns. It increase the time cost of travellers to go to different destinations. However, most urban areas have not yet had the solution to solve this traffic problem.\r\n\r\nThe popularise phenomenon of car ownership increase the number of cars sharply in these two decades. Lower manufacture cost of producing a car allows the general public to buy a private car at a cheaper price. With the increase of accessibility of private vehicles, more workers tend to drive their cars to work and send their children to school. Consequently, the highways and roads in urban districts are over-burden that they cannot handle such high volume of traffic. Traffic congestion then happens more frequently that the travelling time cost increases.\r\n\r\nThe deteriorating situation of road congestion urges the government to control the rising number of vehicles. The authority should increase the tax of automobile ownership to reduce the accessibility and affordability of cars. Meanwhile, encouragement on taking public transport such as underground and bus can alleviate the traffic burden especially in the peak hours. Besides, the government can subsidise the public transport to provide a better price of travelling fees to increase the financial incentives of the general public to give up buying a private car. Not only do the price of purchasing a car rise, but also the public transportation fee decline, the traffic problem can be solved.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, traffic jam is becoming more serious in the places all around the world because of the large-scale production of private cars. The governments in different nations should take control on the car ownership to prevent further deterioration of transportation problems.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez mood warm inviting It home family Some examples mentioen kitchen heart home Cuban music playing time The memoir also conveys sense family author often mentions large amounts family friends would often visiting He also mentions rarely time staying home got back feet The mood memoir warming family", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear years computers gotten faster smaller smarter advances led mankind know advancing effects come non profitable youth computer world Some common effects computers people mostly children preventing kids play outside tbe active computers prevent people using immagination also waste time Everyday child across america use old exuse mom im facebook im report infact nt even started hours ago goofing around line ask self happen thirty years ago parents grew thrilled outside thire assignments compleated They could wait get flaming red bike go play ball joey Kids days becoming less active egar play outside f people blame obbisity genetics probbly blamed computers sucking children Because kids never want leave side beloved computer go outside using less less immagination parents tell storys would watch one new episode favorite show whole week kids neighborhood would take roles act see every day generation No one imaginn thing new friends make fun move onto wii five minuets later play smashing ballons game Computers time average kid spend four hours computer falling around purpose Wasting time could improving homework walking dog time bring donated good source effective times say computers generation dose mean generation must lazy unimmaginitive care time put towards Most people say offer nine year old play computer oh say go outside You would ignorant think would go play People want move forward make compromise", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To keep the Electoral College, or to switch to election by popular vote for the President of the United States, anyone can see the right answer is to keep the Electoral College, despite it not being the most democratic choice around. Many see it as being a waste of time, seeing as how they truly can't vote for the President they want. Yet most still can't see that the Electoral College is not the most easiest thing to get rid of. It has been with them ever since their Founding Fathers established it along with the Constitution.\n\nKeeping the Electoral Colllege is best for the US, even if it isn't that fair to the people. But first, what is the Electoral College anyways? Well, the Electoral College is not an actual college, its actually a process. The Founding Fathers made it as \"a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress, and election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens\", as stated in paragraph one of the article, lines 3-6. A somewhat tedious task to get voted for a whole entire country, but it gets the job done.\n\nThe Electoral College system has been reported as \"unfair, outdated, and irrational.\" (paragraph 14, lines 1 and 2). Most of what that statement does say is true, it is pretty unfair to the people who want to vote for their president, it's extremely outdated and needs an update fast, and its pretty irrational at times. Yet does that mean it can be bad? No, not really. As stated in paragraph 16, lines 1-3; \"Each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee (and that trust is rarely betrayed)\". The statment means that basically each slate chooses some electors that go with the popular vote, and they are shipped off to go and submit the votes and the electoral votes, where the task they are given is rarely betrayed, or not done. Yet, the word 'rarely' still sticks, and not many can just simply deny that it is not there. The rest of the statment in paragraph 16 continues onto lines 4-6, \"[;however,] it is entirely possible that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote.\" So in simple terms, you can get the electoral vote which can put you ahead, but you won't win with just that under your belt. The people still matter, and their vote can still count against you.\n\nFinally, let's get explaining \"Why should we keep the Electoral College.\" There are easily 5 reasons for retaining it. The 5 reason why we should keep it, are as follows:\n\n1)Certainty of Outcome; certainty of outcome basically states that anything can happen, but anything bad won't neccesarily always happen. Let's take paragraph 18 for example, which talks about this reason. It states in lines 16-19, \"A tie in the nationwide electoral vote is possible because the total number of votes-538- is an even number, but is highly unlikely...\" Anything can happen, even a tie.\n\n2)Everyone's President is as it states. The President is everyone's , not just the people in the south, north, or anywhere in the United States. If anyone just simply appealed to a certain region in the US, the other regions would feel as if \"the new president will have no regard for their interests, that he really isn't their president\" (paragraph 19, last line).\n\n3)Swing States, the main practice of the Electoral College. The higher the state has with electoral votes, the more likely the canidate will be able to win. However, \"Voters in toss-up states are more likely to play close attention to the campaign-to really listen to the competing canidates-knowing that they going to decide the election\" (paragraph 20, lines 4-8). This means that they will not be easily be persuaded.\n\n4)Big States, as some can guess from the phrase, 'Bigger is better', that phrase truly shines here. the bigger states, such as California or Texas, have higher electoral votes than some of the smaller states, such as New Jersey or Rhode Island. As it states in paragraph 21, lines 9-12, \"So, other things being equal, a large state gets more attention from presidential canidates in a campaign than a small state does...\"\n\n5)Avoid Run-off Elections, where \"The Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no canidates receives a majority of the votes cast.\" (paragraph 22, lines 1-3) That means that the Electoral College tries to make sure that their is no tie.\n\nThose are the reasons why the Electoral College should not be abolished. Surely someone can put up a counter argument to make this small article to shame, but in the end its truly all of the matter of opinions, where no ones is truly \"the best\" or \"true\". This is simply the opinion of many in the US.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students is a good idea. Some students want there emtions to them selfs and want to know there emitons. ''She's 82 percent happy. 9 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\" This new technology can calculate your emtions like math. Also using ''video imagery, the new emtion-recognition software tracks these facial movments - in a real face or in the painrted face of Mona Lisa.'' It can define the emotion of a real human and in a painting. There technology is very intresting they construct a 3-D computer model to the face. instead of humans trying to find out calculations them selfs they can use the new technology. Humans can perform the same way as the new technology even tho they are gonna have to estimate the percentigs. Also can tell when children or students are tired or bored or falling as sleep so then the technolgy '' could modity the lesson, like and effective human instructor. The same technology can make computers-animated faces more expressive- for video games or video surgery.'' so it can keep the students on track and still learn on there school lessons and wont get behind. Whoever thought that making faces could reveal so much about the science of emtions. Students can change there face exprishions but the new technolgy can tell that not there real expertion. The new use of this technology to read the emtional expersions of students is a good idea. The technology will be a helpful thing in the near future for all of the school to keep the studetns on track and wont get lost on there lessons. this new technolgy wlll help students alot.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "More people use computers love computers place far news Computers good everyone world Know one live computers There s others dat nt like computer nothing I know s family friends computers write others like myspace u could friend everywhere family s But computers spending many times computers", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast wanted allow dirigibles dock Empire State building refueling services let passengers However builders Empire State Building went many obstacles allow happen The architects engineers Empire State Building consulted experts taking tours equipment mooring operations Lakehurst New Jersey NUM They meet experts analyze going successful idea The mooring mast Empire State Building destined never fulfill s purpose reasons apparent ever constructed the greatest obstacle successful use mooring mast nature s Another obstacle builders deal nature winds strong therefore idea docking dirigibles Empire State Building successful", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the danger on been the hotest planet in our solar system. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, Venus has a thick atmosphere and even their clouds are of highly corrosive silfuric acid in Venus's. NASA studies Venus just to see, what a other planet have in commun with the Earth.\n\nNASA hve been looking for another project as the old technology called mechanical computers. They want to use this mechanical computers because it makes calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all. Also, they having think abut the Modern computers because they are enormously powerful, flexuble and quick, but the tend to be more dicate when it comes to extrem physical conditions.\n\nVenus has really hick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets, Nasa knows this because they tried the most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective.\n\nThe Ntional Aeronautics and Space Administration( NASA) has one particulary compellin idea by sending humans to study Venus and set their life on risk. As the humans that MASA idea tried to sent them to study Venus will not kill them because Solar power would be plentiful, and radiarion would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\n\nMany researchers are working on innovations that allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus. The study challenge that the NASA realized presented That Venus has VAlue, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, there is an increasing number of people who are keen on exploring the origin of their current accommodation. There are several causes behind this trend, which is approached in different ways.\r\n\r\nFirstly, one of the deep-rooted causes for this phenomenon is that knowing the history of where they are living enables them to understand the value they are having. For example, being aware of the current land as the result of competing between two regions in which many soldiers sacrificed may help residents to protect and maintain carefully, so as not to take it for granted. Secondly, having historical knowledge of one’s house makes them feel proud of this. Especially, if the house has an extended story, it could be added value in some acquisition deal. Finally, another reason for this tendency is that it could be a story or a legend to tell to the next generation.\r\n\r\nWhen it comes to researching methods, one of the most effective ways is searching on the Internet. Thanks to the development of technology, the Internet plays an important role in fulfilling all necessary information for human life. For instance, just by one click, everything they need is shown apparently. Also, people could be able to ask either the broker, the previous house-owner or eventually its neighbourhood before buying a house to know clearly about its history. Last but not least, books and newspapers are also considered to be critically important for carrying out this research.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there are many means to explore one’s interest or broaden one’s horizon about where they reside. Of course these actions stem from certain purposes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In my way of seing things would be like saying that if automakers are continuing with there job on the assumption of the problem s that they be having problems ahead would be solved because most people are scared to know what's coming up in the future perhaps maybe saying that you want to get projected on 2017 year and their own company have not be successful yet to be doing so many focusing on the drivers. I mean it's their fault that they want to text for example and then the green light turns red and your to busy on the phone or whatever it might be you could crash the car and not having a drivers license would cost alot of consequences that you don't want to have and especially seing your kids grow and they looking at you of how depressed and disaapointed you are with them later you your going to be ending up in jail and your kids probably don't want to see that. And another good point is that driving assisting is really good for you because theres alot of good people in a cab sometimes and you want to be drive like that where ever\n\nyou want to go at and i mean thats good sometimes theres traffic but that means you have to wait or whatever instead of having a bunch of friends in a car and be saying hurry up or e.t.c and your rushing to get in a certain way or to get somewhere your being late at like its better to be more positive then negative thats why this world of cars have alot of drama with their pantings and having so much money to biuy a car every 2 years cars need to stop modeling.\n\nOn modeling on paragraph six and seven they talk about certain things I was talking about and having low speed on there cars once in for all because there' s so much things that people might certainly do racing the cars with them and having no fear of anything what if one day a person having so much cups to drink and he isnt even realizing of how much hes doing to the people dangerous stuffs like oh my gosh. manufacturers believe that more states will follow as soon as the cars are proved more reliably safe with their techniques or whatever its really something that you shouldnt be doing depending on the situation of the companies bringing cars to the owners and sell them for big money and taking more advantage of the cars because some poeple do past the line selling cars over millions of dollars and the original price was who knows what but less then that so cars need to stop growing in this population no more inventing cars and everyone well be good and less drama i think everyone would of be happy of not having any issues of cars now days .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A society is made up of both men and women and schools act as building blocks of any civililised society. Often what we learn at school conscioulsy and sub consciously goes with us long way . In many countries , parents have the choice to send their kids to same sex schools or co-educational schools.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this this world, we do not know what the future holds. However far as manufacturing, the topic of discussion is driverless cars. Google cofounder of Sergy Brin evisions a future with a public transportation system where fleets of driverless cars from a public transport taxi system. Driverless cars may actually be made in the future. Driverless cars are extremly dangerous and shouldnt even be talked about or thought about any longer.\n\nDriverless cars are dangerous because they could loose control and crash. Lots of people could be injured or die from this uncontrolled car. The manufactures could make a mistake when making the car or worse, they could forget to put the brakes in the car. What good is a car without any brakes? They could forget to put in the acceleration. Driverless cars are not fit for the road at all. They also arent fit for the highway.\n\nIn paragraph 9, the first sentence states, \"Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe\". The laws wouldnt be keeping none of us safe if driverless cars were made legal. The car could loose its sense of direction and take you in the middle of nowhere. How would you get back home? How would you get to a phone? Theres no way these cars should be made legal anywhere on the globe.\n\nIf you were to get hurt in one of these cars, no one would give you the attention you deserve. Nobody would be on your side at all. Car manufacturers would tell you its your fault. In paragraph 9 it talk about the trafic laws changing. Traffic laws should stay just how they are. They should not change anything. Do they not want us to be safe?\n\nThe future holds no precautions for the U.S. This idea is outrageous to think about. Nobody should ever be put in danger when getting into their car. By making driverless cars, manufacturers are putting us in lots of danger. I object completly on the idea of making driverless cars anywhere in the U.S. You should feel the same.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author finished story when come back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melts geese return hibiscus budding I take test again The reason conclusion important Saeng feel home When hibiscus buds wiil remind home comfort feels peace home better test", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The war has affected the lives of hundreds maybe even thousands of people. I think we should help those people in need if you are with me sign up to be a seagoing cowboy. A seagoing cowboy is someone who takes care of animals that are shipped over sea. Then brings them to the people that need help since the war ruined their food supply or cattle.\n\nIt is kinda hard to care for the animals but its not to much of a challenge. I used to help out on my aunts farm all the time and that gave me some experience. It also is a little disgusting to clean the stalls the first time but I pulled through it and eventually I got used to it. My favorite part has to be traveling when i get some free time its fun to go sight seeing.\n\nAs a seagoing cowboy you go all around the world and visit amazing places but there are sad moments aswell. When I found out that people other than me are being affected by the war and some are suffering worse, that opened up my eyes. I thought to myself thats why I joined the seagoing cowboys after all not just because I wanted to see the world but also to help people in need.\n\nLastly being a seagoing cowboy isnt just an adventure its much more. Its part of our future. We need to help everyone in the world through this hard time. Being a seagoing cowboy will help do that. Please consider the offer and sign up.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear senator of Florida\n\nThe Electoral College should not be kept in the system because. One, the electoral college are the people chosen by the candidate that are running for president and are made of House of Representatives and Senate. The electoral college votes for the president based on what the people from the state vote on. \" Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president , but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president.\" so in other words you may vote for someone but it's all upon the electors to discide who wins the election. another thing that is wrong with the electoral college is we don't was vote for our electors. At the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to the voters. becuse of the winner-take- all sytem in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they knjow they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the \"swing\" states. Over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind of election we have now. the people believe that we should have the power to discide who we choose as our president not the electoral college.\n\ntheir is some upsides to the electoral college system. \"In the winner-take-all method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates- as we saw in [2012's] election-to focus their campaign efforts on the toss-up states. . . . Voters in toss-up states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign.... the more likely to be more thoughtful voters favoring the people of the state.\" And in the bigger states the electoral college therew are more electoral votes due to the amount of people in the states and in this case more votes equal higher of a chance of the person you picked to become president.\n\nyes there might be an upsid eto having an electoral college but the risks out weigh the benefits. And so in the end i believe that we shoudn't have an electoral college i believe that the people should vote for themselfs.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The advantages of limiting car usage are very simple. For one, the amount of polution would drop.\n\nThe amount of polution would drop mayorly because with everyone driving cars there would be more polution but if we change that make people not use cars at all the polution rate would drop. The passage states, \"...Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe...and up to 50 percent... in the United States.\"\n\nLimiting the amount of car usage would help by not causing smog clouds throughout cities. Paris, France in puting a ban on driving due to smog. If people drive there they would be fined of 22-euro thats like $31. Smog makes it hard to breathe because its like if you're breathing polution and thats not good for people. As source 2 states, \"cold nights and warm days caused the warmer layer of air to trap car emissions.\" that means that the car emissions stay trapped here and cant get out so what happens the we breathe that in all that smog and polution goes into our lungs and such.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke boomerger had no ideas that his hole life would change very soon after his high school graduation he was looking for a job for his graduation. then he was working for a 2 part time job in the grocery store and the bank. and when his friend ask hem to go to his cattle boat but luke said he can't stay of the boat of a lifetime. in 1945 it was a cold war it was all over europe. and all other countries were left in ruins to help those other countries recorvered their food supplies and all the animals are other ones 44 nations joined in to help together form the (The United Nations relief and rehabillitation. and the cattle boat trips were an unbelievable for a small town boy. he say besides helping people i haf the side benefit of seeing europe is very great and i can see China and Japan city were everything ate and we can see acropolis in greece was the most special thing i ever seen. when luke turned 18 years old he stared arrving ate greece and luke got on a cattle boat.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe The \"Face on Mars\" is just a natural landform, also noted and observed as a huge rock formation which resembles a human head, because it was formed by shadows only giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth. It was common enough around Cydonia.\n\nI believe The \"Face on Mars\" is just a natural landforms because there are no proven facts about alien life even exists yet.It could be just another natural landform from rock formation.\n\nAlthough, people who believe that the Face on Mars is an alien artifact might say that The Face is bona fide evidence of life on mars- evidence NASA would rather hide.\n\nHowever, this attraction was put to the test, April 5, 1998 when Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the orinal Viking photos, the picture that answered it all, when the image first appeared on a JPL web revealing it was just another natural landform.There was no alien monument after all.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe The \"Face on Mars\" is just a natural landform. as it has been stated and proven to be just another natural landform, it is a fact.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A portion of communities argue that the most important thing kids should learn from education institutes is how to become fine residents and workers. However , others think that it has more advantages for the person. I partially agree with the statement, because I believe two of them are complimentary. \r\n\r\nFirstly, School is a place where children cultivate good habits. Such as manner,and sense of time. Furthermore, kids also learn cooperation and communication in school. The abilities above are the basis of being a good resident and efficient employee, however, they can also advantage individuals in their career lives. For instance, a worker who has a better attitude and always finishes the task on time is more likely to be promoted than others who don’t. Also, teamwork allows individuals to bring their diverse perspectives to problem-solving, which in turn increases their success at arriving at solutions more efficiently and effectively. As a result, we can see that while being a good citizen and worker, the resident can also get benefits. \r\n\r\nMoreover, a study from the National Taiwan University shows that the education level is disproportionate to the crime rate.Furthermore, as time changes, finding an individual's interest is becoming more and more important in education.The youth no longer be taught that getting good scores is the only way the be successful in their future life. The educators started to help children search for their passion, instead of telling them what to do is the best. For instance, Taiwan’s high school students not only take normal classes like math, Chinese, and science, but the clubs after school are taken seriously nowadays. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, formal school help students lay a foundation for becoming a good person in the world, meanwhile, it plays an important role in guiding children to find their own passion.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Rough Road Ahead features setting affect cyclist many ways One way setting affects cyclist desert cyclist drank water For example text states I hitting water bottles pretty regularly I traveling high deserts California June You drink water desert forest If go cycling aware settings around affect", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is a serious problem that there is an inadequate number of students who tend to select science as their major subject in universities in many countries. In my view, students may think that studying science has not a good career path. Also, this issue may deeply affect the international state of a country.\nThe main reason why people do not think to study science is that they may see science as something unpractical, and potentially, they are hard to find a job when they graduate. Students are generally afraid that there is no employment opportunity after they graduate from university. Unlike engineering and business management, in which fields employers provide plenty of vocational positions for graduated students because there are lots of companies activating in these fields and universities may provide some practical training courses and internships. Students studying science have a relatively narrow way to walk, and may just be scientists. Moreover, although a successful scientist can get a massive bonus from some prizes, it is too hard to accomplish and is more likely to fail. Therefore, Students will avoid taking those risks and choose other subjects that are relatively stable and easy to find a job.\nThis trend will eventually decrease the state of a country. Developing science can provide a strong and firm foundation for a country to establish a healthy and prosperous community. If there are not enough scientists, the whole scientific ability will decrease. Not only will the government pay extra money to other foreign countries to buy the required technology such as military equipment, but the public needs to spend more time and pay more effort to maintain the international standard production rate of a country. It is extremely dangerous that a nation easily suffers from a financial crisis and, finally, it influences the living standard of its citizens and causes damage to its financial systems.\nIn summary, while science is regarded as a \"useless\" subject because of its narrow career path and low success rate, it is vital that the economic systems would be affected if a country develop without scientists.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on driverless cars is, I believe they are very dangerous and should not be used by anybody. Although they may be nice when you don't want to drive somewhere but need to go, I do not believe this is something Americans should be taking up for various reasons.\n\nFirst off, I do not think self-driving cars are very safe. If I were to be in a self driving car, I would not be able to relax and trust the car to do the driving, because i'd fear it hitting something causing an accident or just stopping in the middle of the road. Even if the car had automatic stop and auto break systems, I would still have to be very causious and keep my eyes on the road, which is similar to driving a car, so why not save the anxiousness and drive? I believe Americans are getting more and more lazy, therefore they want a self driving car instead of just driving themselves. I think that driving yourself and making sure you are safe, is much better of an idea than putting you're trust in a computerized car. Many questions come to mind when I think about self driving cars.\n\nA question that comes to mind while thinking of driverless cars is, whose fault is it if an accident is caused? Would you blame yourself for the accident or the cars since it was driving? Many problems would arise when dealing with this. For example, if the car industry blames the accident on the person, the person could sue the car company stating that it was the car in control, therefore not being the persons fault, it would be the cars. On the other hand, car industries could argue that the person should've been paying attention to the road, and not putting in their full trust with the car.\n\nIn conclusion, there is a lot to think about when dealing with driverless cars, whoses fault accidents would be, what the new age limit for driving would be, and also whether or not to put you're trust into these cars. Many problems and conflicts would occur, therefore I believe the people should stick to driving the cars. How hard is it to drive a car by ourselves, do we really need the help, or are we just too lazy to want to drive places? Although I admit it would be nice to not have to drive when going on long distance trips, I dont think i'd be able to trust the car to drive for me, and I wouldn't be able to relax when dealing with a self-driving car, even if it had been tested multiple times. I don't think i'll ever be switching to a self-driving car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the auhtor did not make enough evidence and information on why it would be of great value to explore our twin planet, Venus. Most the article was relaying challenges, or risks, as some might say, and probable solutions to those risks. The part in the article on why it would be of great value to study Venus does not give us a lot of reason why.\n\nFor most of the articel the author was giving was reasons why there unmanned missons to visit and why a single spaceship has not touched down on Venus in more than three decades. One reason as he explain was Venus's atmosphere. Another was the enivornment of our neighboring planet Venus.\n\nMostly the other part of the article was soltuions to Venus's challenges. He talk about how NASA had an idea to use an blimp-like trasnportation to avoid Venus's harsh enivorment. He also explained NASA's othe plan to use mechanical computers some modern technology wouldn't burn up and melt due to Venus very humid temperatures.\n\nAt the end of the article, in the last paragraph, is where the author briefly gave he reason for why studying Venus would be a good idea. He brings up recieveing insight on the planet. Also he brings up the hunger human curiosity and that it will lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\n\nBased on the information explained in this essay, the reason is now known why the author did not do a good job supporting why explorating Venus would be of great value. He mainly just explains the challenges and solutions to explore Venus. Hardly anything is say on why the value of studying Venus would be of great use.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The public figures act as role models for teenagers and `influence their life in several ways. The youth get mesmerised by the popularity and wealth of cabrerites. I withstand the idea that some of the famous people indulge in flaunting their possessions and looks to gain publicity however there are some people who use their fame to inspire youth.\n\nTo begin with, there are influential figures whose actions or representations can adversely impact today’s new generation because the teenagers follow them blindly. These people convey the message of being rich and beautiful is the ultimate success of growth. For instance, the entertainment industry put a lot of emphasis on good looks which promote body shaming in society. Many youngsters follow diet plans to attain ideal body shape which resulted in eating disorders and low self-esteem.\n\nOn the contrary, there are people who show the right path to teens by setting an example of hard work, persistence and intelligence for coming generations. These kinds of people have high values in their personal domains which reflects in their work too. To illustrate, the Bollywood actor Akshay Kumar is a determined, hardworking and disciplined person who mostly do make movies on social subjects such as woman’s rights to access better sanitation; third gender rights to reduce the impacts of social stigmas.\n\nTo sum up, in my opinion, celebrities can influence teens in both ways positively as well as negatively. It is the moral responsibility of influencers to utilise their power to give the right direction to their followers and try to make difference in others life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Based ON excerpt builders faced A problems building Empire State Building One problem actually docking Zeppelin s dirigibles The wind vicious ft Air Another problem buiders faced saftey Since dirigibles outside US used hydrogen rather helium A fire saftey issue This occurred After German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed Fire Lakehurst New Jersey ON may", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" a writer states that scientists are trying to study the planet Venus. In his article, he claims that while it is very risky, it may be worth it in the end. he also gives details about how dangerous it really is, and what the planet might have been at one point in time.\n\nIn the second paragraph, The writer claims that Venus is referred to as Earth's \"twin''. But the only evidence he gives to back up this claim is that \"Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of desnity and size.\" but in reality, Earth and Venus are very differnet. Earth is much safer in terms of temperature, pressure, and gas compaired to Venus. Venus has a blanket of gas that covers it that is, \"almost 97 percent carbon dioxide.\" Plus, on its surface, \"temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit.\" with the level of carbon dioxide and the ragging heat that it has, nothing is safe for long on Venus, especially humans. He does state that several spacecrafts have attempted to land on Venus, and only lasted a few hours, but he doesnt state what happened to them. most people would guess that they just melted entirely because of the extreme heat, which is most likely what happened, but we don't know for sure.\n\nNot only is high temperatures and extreme pressures an issue, he also states that there are volcanoes and major earthquakes that happen, plus lightning is constant as well. But there is no context to whether or not scientists are trying to figure out what causes the the powerful earthquakes to happen, or why lightning strikes frequently happen. He also states that, \"Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life.\" But there is nothing that follows it that claims what happened or could have happened to cause high pressures, high temperatures, and a high level of carbon dioxide to form.\n\nWhile scientists believe that Venus was at one point like earth, there are some facts that show that it has the looks of earth in some ways. the writer says that Venus, \"has a surface of rocky sediments and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" These features are exactly what earth has as well. But there could be more than what meets the eye. In parapgraph six, the writer says that,\" peering a Venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions becuase most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere.\" This issue puts a damper on scientists ability to study the planet. But thats just it, what are scientists trying to study. The article says,\"Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.'' Which is great they are working on that, but what are they trying to collect, find, or explore.\n\nOverall, the article is good, but there needs to be more detail in what is happening. they need information on what scientists are specifically trying to study, what they are looking for, and more detail on how they are progressing in studying Venus. With more details about what they are trying to find, it would be easier to evaluate whether or not the scientist efforts are really worth it, or just a waste of time. A planet that is inhabitable by humans or anything living is already a risk as is.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One of the brightest points of light in the night sky is the \"Evening Star' which is also a close planet to us called Venus. Venus might seem harmless and pretty from a distance but when you get close it can be really dangerous. The conditions of Venus are hazardous to us. In fact we have had past missions that were never recorded becuase not a single mission succeded. However, NASA is trying to come up with technology that can survive these conditions so we can study Venus.\n\nThe closest planet to Earth in density, size, and sometimes distance also is, in fact, Venus. It was even once may have been known as the most Earth-like planet in our solar system. Venus and Earth has come similar features such as rocky sediment, valleys, mountains, and craters. However, Venus isn't all that pretty. There are some really big dangers when coming in contact with this planet. Venus has almost a 97 percent carbon dioxide blanket that covers the planet. The fluffy clouds are really just sulfuric acid in the atmosphere on Venus. The temperature on Venus is an average of 800 degrees Farenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience here on Earth. Because of these harsh conditions the several missions to Venus were remain unknown because no spacecraft was able to survuve the landing for more than a few hours leading to us not being able to collect samples of the materials on Venus's surface.\n\nDespite the harsh conditions and the unsuccessful missions, we could still be able to study Venus. A possible solution to the conditions is to have the scientists float above the surface on the planet. Another way, is to have a vehicle instead of a person hover over the surface. NASA is working on new approaches to study Venus. They make devices such as electronics made of silicon carbide and test it in a chamber that resembles the same conditions as Venus. When comparing systems that use mechanical parts than modern electronics, the mechanical parts an be made to where they are more resistant to the forces on Venus such as pressure and heat.\n\nInstead of looking at all the flaws in studying Venus, there are still some major components that can lead us to studying it. Even though Venus has harsh conditions that humans are not able to survive on, there are still technological avdvances that could lead us to exploring or living on the planet. Most scientists are curious of new things even if they can not physically study it in which the, \"Human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" such as Venus. The conditions of Venus will not stop scientists or researchers from trying to gather more and more information of Venus. The study of Venus could be an oppertunity to a whole new world. There are ways and technological ways that will allow humans to live on Venus but it just has not been discovered yet.\n\nVenus is a harmful planet with dangerous conditions. However, with developing technology we figure out ways to study the planet. Studying Venus is a worthy pursuit because one day our population could be living on it. Even though there are dangers, there is no way in studying more about Venus if we never try to come up with ways to safely research it. Venus could be our next planet. To find out if it is then more research and risks will need to come into affect.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless Cars\n\nAs we all know the future up head is very bright to this generation, we have major changes coming and they have positive affects and also negative. Today I'm on the positive side of this idea just becuase young people could really benifit from the driverless car. Teens 17 and up would prevent from many wrecks because of the driverless google car.\n\nWhy do I go with the positive side of this arguement ? It's becuase I want a safer enviroment and less wreckless driving on our streets. Manufactures are doijng all they can to build a safer car for these senerios and we need to admire the job they are doing no matter the outcome may be. For the better of driverless cars putting sensors into the car so that it could warn you of upcoming conditions on the road is a better way of staying safe and letting you know ahead of time.\n\nWould you think it's better that the computerized car could drive, brake, and steer for you ? Even if the human is driving the car under his/ her own power we all need a brake at some point , the driverless car could come into place but you must stay alert to the road at all times for if the car warns you about the upcoming conditions on the road. Not everyone is going to like the driverless car becuase they like to drive themselves and that's most definitley understandable, but to the people that think this would better the world and future you could be going onto the right path.\n\nYou and me both know as the improvment of cars awaits us we would have to set laws for the newcoming of this situation. They want driving to become safe and we all do as well. Keeping drivers , passengers, and pedestrians safe all in one would lead to less deaths from motor vehicles. The next step in getting closer to improving the driverless car is very close and we should be happy about a new change with cars.\n\nNow you think about the importance of driverless cars in the future ! Can you handle this ? Yeah the future is bright for us all and we can prepare what we know is a huge possible change. Due to upgrade technology scientist and inventors have the creativity and knowledge to put something terrific together called driverless cars that google has improved over the years and looking to better them even more this is why I have the positive side of the arguement. Driverless cars would better us and everyone all over the world that gets tired of driving or needs to text or do anything important at the time being in the car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It's argued that Art should be mandadory for children at educational institutes. Against this ideia, There are some who claim that it would be waste of time. This essays is going to disscuss both ideias and choose which one is more resonable.\nArt is a extremaly difficult field to thrive in. The job oportunities are scarce and the wages are lower. For this reason many people think that investing in art as a suject at schools is a waste of time for children who are learning to be able to work and support themselves in the future. For instance, a famous actress in my country said in an interview that she had to study acting without her parents knowing this. They were against her choosing this career because she could not make a living from it.\nChildren are significantly more creative than adults. Studies point that when we were born, our right brain side, which comands artistic and creative skills, is more developed than the left side. Children start to lose their creative strengths as soon as they start to learn exact subject such as Mathematics and Quemistry, which are procesed by the left brain side. If they stop using their right brain side at that early stage, this can lead to a poor innovative thinking in the future. For example, in a recent survey at Melboune university 95% of the IT students, acostumed to deal most of the time with numbers, declared that they are not creative at all.\nAnalysing both sides, it is clear that art is not the easiest filed to have professional success. However, this essay agrees with the view that children should not be deprived of learning art at school because it would help them to keep their creative skills. Eventhough they do not work with art in the future, Creativity is an asset for thinking outside of the box and having flexiblity to either deal with the diverse types of obstacles in their ellected profession or to innovate.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you evr wanted to help take care of animals on a boat, or even go see places that you have never seen before? Well then, you should come join the Seagoing Cowboys program. Thia will allow you take care of animals travel to different places, and trust me I have been on there it is very fun. If you are not persuaded enough let me give you 4 reasons why you should join.\n\nThe UNRRA ( United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration) hired ¨Seagoing Cowboys¨ to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped over seas. Now imagine that, while the animals were over seas the probably got hurt. Wouldn´t you want to help them I know I would. There were night watchmen, his job was to check on all the animals every hour. That sound like alot of work but it´s not.\n\nHere is another reason, besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. I bet you haven´t seen Europe or China. Wouldn´t you like to see there lifestyle there clothes and all the other stuff they have. Probably learn a new language. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special. It really was special all of ther colors were beautiful.\n\nMy last reason is, after we unloaded the animals we had alot of fun. We played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games also helped pass the time. Now that is fun, all the time you were takig the animals back you had to keep an eye on them, but when they were unloaded you would have alot of fun.\n\nBut being a Seagoing Cowboy was much more than an adventure for me. It opened up the world to me. I´m grateful for the opportunity, it mad me aware of people of other countries and their needs. This is why I think you should come and join Seagoing Cowboy program, trust me you will have fun.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock The first obstacle dangerous hydrogen highly flammable filled dirigible dock one densely populated areas time They could let accident happened Lakehurst New Jersey happen New York The owners Empire State building realized much worse accident could taken place densely populated area downtown New York The greatest obstacle due natural causes The winds top building consular shifting due violent air currents The dirigible would able stay steady docking unloading Other ideas solve problem like weights neither practical safe The final obtacle law The practical reason dirigibles could moor Empire State Building existing law airships flying low urban areas As shown It simply impossible dirigibles dock Empire State building natural causes danger law", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Evidently, some workers around the globe are concerned about paying tax( TAXES) for the money they earn and assert that this levy should be avoided. In my opinion, it is essential to pay income tax due to following reasons.\n\nFirst of all, everyone receives many benefits for paying a part of their income. in detail, governments use this revenue to develop and maintain infrastructures and many services, which is inevitable for a good (BETTER) life in the society. This not only includes the(ESSENTIAL) essentials( ESSENTIAL) services such as a state-of-the-art healthcare system , educational institutions, supply of running water and electricity, but also includes facilities for leisure such as parks, stadiums, and so on. Thus paying a proportion salary to (FOR) government is justifiable.\n\nSecondly, governing bodies need to spend a huge amount of money to ensure an effective law and order as well as a strong defence force in the country. Nowadays, almost all countries spend millions of dollars to modernize the police force , which, in turn, reduce the crime in the societies. Similarly , a lion share of revenue use to upgrade the defence forces to avoid attacks from enemy nations. In contrast, peaceful life of people are being disturbed while governments compromise in this areas( AREA). Syria is an epitome for it, since this nation have a weak army and police force and it’s citizens struggle to survive due(TO) terrorism and attack of other countries .This reiterate the importance of paying income tax.\n\nIn conclusion, though a few people rose(RAISE) a concern about paying tax for the income, it is inevitable as this revenue income is essential for the governments to build infrastructures , provide essentials services and to maintain police as well as army forces to keep peace in the country.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that the number of people who are fascinated with collecting information about the history of the buildings or flats that they live in is increasing. There might be some reasons, such as gaining information about that, and some steps should be taken, like using technology or the elderly to realize the past of neighbourhoods or buildings.\r\n\r\nThe first reason why people may be enthusiastic about the history of their flats is that it can give them good information about not only their houses but also the neighbourhood that they live in. For example, when they search about the history of their flat, they might find out some famous people who lived there before and also they might realize some historical event which happened in their neighbourhood such as a civil war or a plot of a movie.\r\n\r\nThe people can choose different ways to understand the history of their buildings and places around their constructions. They can begin to talk with their neighbours who are old enough to know about such places, and they are likely to be full of details. In particular, a lack of technology might help them have better communications over the years and they may collect a lot of events that might happened in the past. In addition, technology can play a significant role in this kind of investigation to give people whatever they ask. For instance, people who are curious about the past of their apartment can search on the Google engine or Chat GPT to give them the information they require if there is any.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, people might like to know about the places where they live, and this information can be provided by technology and people with enough knowledge.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What if you could always tell how someone is feeling? Well now you can! There is a new system of computer coding that reads your facial expressions called FACS, Facial Action Coding System. This new system is mainly used for detecing if someone is lying, or even used in the painting of Mona Lisa. But, this new system could even be used in schools.\n\nThe computer would have online lessons for a student and would be able to track their emotions based on their facial expressions. In the passage it says, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\" If a student were bored with the lesson they were learning about, the lesson would change. Students would be more encouraged to go to school if they got to learn about something they thought was interesting. Kids would have more willpower to go to school and learn.\n\nAnother reason why schools should use this system is because test grades would start to increase. As kids are trying harder on their work because it is something they enjoy, they will start trying harder on tests. Most kids do not give much thought on their work in class which overall leads to bad test grades. If kids told their teachers they were bored with the assignment they were learning, the teacher would not just stop teaching and change to a different topic, but a computer would. The passage says, \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"\n\nHowever, there is a downside to the system. If the computer is doing all the teaching, why would we need teachers? Kids would start to lose the interest in their teachers. As kids enjoy the fun technology of getting to choose their own lesson, they would stop listening to the teachers when they teach about something they think is boring. If everyone is doing their lessons online, there would be no reason to keep teachers, and they would all lose their job.\n\nAlthough there are some flaws to the system, it is a very good idea to the world. It is a very intact source that could help a lot of people. Students would really start trying and would do a lot better in school. This system of technology would be very valuable in the school system.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus is like the non explorable planet. The technology we have in the world today is not good enough to wistand the envirnment of Venus with its extremely harsh conditions. One of the things the is keeping people so interested is that Venus at one time was supposedly the most Earth like planet in our solar system.\n\nWe have tried to explore Venus multiple times but the explorations have been un named because after a few our the spacecrafts broke or quit on us. We think that this is because of Venuses harsh envirnement constisting of acid rain and clouds, the hottest surface temprature in our Milky Way, and the fact that it is so hard to catch the planet when it is close to our planet. \"Also notteble Venus has the hottest surface temprature of any planet in the solar system, even though mercury is the closest to the Sun\". Thats a reason why we cant land and stay there. One of the reasons we believe Venus used to be like Earth is because of its nottable past. \"Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth\".\n\nWe are working on more developed technology as the years go by, but we are still not able tpo land and stay on Venuses surface. We are getting closer but are not ready or prepared to try again yet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I know guys listen things I also know alot people nt really answer prompt give Well I m sorry I able answer prompt either I remember last time I really good within couple years I tell laughter special instead What s special laughter For laughter helps us many ways I talk laughter good health everyone s laughs different even make us Also laughter special I always felt weird feeling head I laughed I think s endorphins produced brain If I hard stomach hurts laughing also burns calories works abs I also think helps three sides health triangle My social life makes people Emotionally laughing makes happy Also physical always funny work friend I think everybody s unique s way I also know sometimes s funny listen people chuckle snort sound like mouse Our laughs another thing makes us us Laughing special people make My friends family I chosen My family makes happy everyday It s special people special Laughing father nothing compared laughing mother Laughing friends never compare laughing significant My life laughter s special It s like chewing piece gum It s whole thing Nothing fun girls night laughing night even going dancing romantic night life Laughter matter life So", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Today I'm going to tell you why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys Program. It's a great program. You learn a lot, and if you going ( whats included in the package is a tour of an excavated castle in Crete and a marvling site of the Panama Canal. I hope I can convince you to join the program. Im going to tell you 3 reasons why you should join. Hope you like it.\n\nThe first reason that I came up with is that if you join you get to see alot in only one trip. What I mean is that if you join you get to sea the ocean, sea and all those wonderful animals that live in the ocean. And if you like animals thats way better. The second reason that I came up with is that if you join you get to visit diffrent places. Like how Luke did he got toured on an excavated castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Canal. He also got to take a gondola ride in Venice, Italy, a city with streets of water. And a lot of othert wonderful things. The last reason is that if you join you get to have a little free time when. You done dilivering the animals. You could play in the area the animals were in like baseball, volleyball, etc. You get to have a lot of fun while your in the trip.\n\nI hope you changed you're mind and sooner or later join our program. I promise you you'll have lots of fun while your in it. So if you can please you the Seagoing Cowboys Program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Space exploration has been a fascination of mankind for multiple centuries now, but has only become a reality in the past 50-60 years. In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author is supporting the idea of space exploration to Venus or our \"sister planet\". However, the author's claims do not make up for a good arguement against all the dangers and risks that are presented.\n\nFirstly, instead of responding to opposing claims with arguements to push their points, they give them to the reader and let's them get to decide what side they fall on. They list factual evidence on the basis of weather, geology, and risks that would take place. Such as, the atmospher of Venus is thick with a nearly 97 percentage od carbon dioxide and the planets clouds are made up of highly corrosive sulfuric acid. Not to mention, the author states that, \"no spaceship survived the landing [on Venus] for more than a few hours\", they share information like that with the readers with no rebuttal, and only carries on to say what NASA has planned. It's a weak strategy to take if they're trying to convice the reader to be open about exploration of Venus.\n\nSecond, the author uses examples and ideas NASA has put out to make reality of the trip to Venus. Although, most people would be more leaning towards rational planning, the way the author describes the progress is once again, weak. They tell the readers of a mission that would carry men, which has never been done before, in a \"blimp- like vehicle\" that would hover 30 miles or so above the surface of Venus. The temperatures are still around 170 degrees farenheit and he claims their \"not easy conditions, but survivable for humans\". In the paragraph after, the author states issues, such as, how no photography or videography would be rendered ineffective and that researchers would not be able to collect samples of rock, gas, or anything else from a distance. They then go on to say, \"Venus would need to get up close and personal despite the risks\". The risks heavly outweigh the pros on this mission.\n\nThird, the risks of this mission would far exceed any benefit that would be gained. Humans believe that Venus may have carried life forms because it was covered by oceans, however, it would not be sutible for any life now. The risks included in this mission would be major ones that anyone could see with a brain. Loss of life, loss of materials, loss of funding, and loss of the risk of something catostrophic are four major risks that will never out way the \"pros\" of exploration and knowledge. The author uses a quote at the end of the page that states, \"our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts...\" is that a reality or just a false reliance to convince others.\n\nFinally, all this information and rebuttal put forth shows that author does not make a strong arguement to support his ideas. The reality of this situation is, is it worth the damage for the things we will \"discover\" if we discover anything at all. This is just another proof that curiosity needs to be grounded before you can make it into a reality.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is widely acknowledged by people that participating in sports at school is the best way to educate children to be cooperative in their daily lives. I personally do not stand for this assumption since nowadays pupils can easily learn it from movies. Besides, the fact that not every child is eager to do activity that needs physical ability like sports should be considered. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, there are plenty of movies which have topics about teamwork and now it is accessible for anyone including children. Besides, they also can learn other soft skill like language without needing a big effort to do it. For instance, an English cartoon movie called Aladin shows how the main actor collaborates with his team to build a castle, and it shows the enjoyment during the process which is also good for children for being calm when it comes to merging with their peers. Therefore, being a cooperative can be done by entertaining them.\r\n\r\nOn the same hand, not every children feels comfortable to do an activity related to exercise, and it is non-negligible for parents to support them. According to BBC this summer, 6 out of 10 pupils do not enjoy activity-related sports and they prefer to spend their time playing dolls, especially for females. Not to mention, playing dolls with peers could also be a potential way to improve their ability in terms of collaborating. Hence, It becomes clear that sports should be an optional way to get those soft skills.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, it is clear that the ability of pupils to work with their peers can be improved by watching an educational TV series, and doing certain games with their friends.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am against the self driving car because it can crash and it would be you fault. And it isn't even a self driving car because the driver still has to pur their hands on the wheel most of the time. It can't drive itself the driver has to keep their hands on the wheel almost all of the time.\n\nIf you get in an accident and someone is injured it is your fault. The car won't even be made until 2020. The car will only drive itself 90 percent of the time. Some states won't even allow them to make self driving cars because they are to dangerous. Like Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia. The only safe car is one with a human behind the wheel.\n\nDrivers would get bored just sitting there. The car can only go 25mph without a human's assisstance. Human drivers have to stay more alert than ever with the car. None of the cars they make will ever be completely driverless.\n\nThe cars have to alert you before they back up into something. Nobody wants a driverless car that you have to drive.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Studying at university or college is the best way to be successful in career is a common belief among some individuals. However, some other people believe that getting a job straight from school is the better option. This essay shall discuss the view points of both the sides and argue that starting career after finishing university or college has more benefits in the long run.\n\nFirstly, going to an academic institute makes a person aware of the society, available options, and his/her own strengths. Person get to learn more in the academic environment and becomes best judge of his/her own path in life. However, it is also a well known fact that it is quite expensive to study in universities these days. One has to have financial resources to spend to earn the degree of choice. Also, a white collar jobs, with more salary, can only be obtained with the college or university degree. So, one needs to invest early to reap the benefits of formal education and comfortable life later.\n\nOn the other hand, some other people argue that getting a job right after the school has its own merits. No initial investment is required for the education and one can start earning bread and butter right away from school. I would argue that it is a short term benefit as one cannot expect an increase in salary without proper education in any field. There would be no rise in life or career in this career trajectory.\n\nTo conclude, I would say that the formal education is very imperative for every individual to rise in career. One can follow the short path by passing the formal education, but person cannot go far in career this way. So, the best route to a successful career can only be achieved by university or college.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The human kind have a pressing problem called environmental degradations. It is of utmost importance to find a effective comprehensive solution. There are a number of ways to restrict frevolent behaviours of citizens and most of the people are suggesting to raise the price of energy, such as fuel. In my opinion, such a movement is a partial solution not a long-term and cost-effective one, hence, I partially agree with this viewpoint. \r\n\r\nFuel is a necessary ingredient for human's daily needs. Hence, raising fuel price will in turn raise cost of other necessities, for instance, food price, transportation cost etc. , fostering an unrest in society. The citizens will turn up against each other and cultivate a battle field to meet necessary regular means. The authorities must foster a solution which is long-term and cost-effective for such a acute problem. Considering the fact that rising fuel price would definitely restrict citizens' carelessness over fuel usage and regulate these activities. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, raising awareness among citizens about fuel usage and disastrous ramifications of environmental problem will cultivate understanding in the people and they will comply with any means of regulations to prevent the ultimatum. Hence, the government must schedule various campaigns to spread awareness and necessary knowledge of the ways , this problem could be prevented and, fostering peach and harmony among people. A concerted action by taking different measures towards preventing such a problem is long-term effective solution. \r\n\r\nIt is wise to conclude that, increasing fuel price is a parital solution towards environmental problem like global warming, pollution etc. . The concerted action of the government by raising awareness and the citizens' restricting their mindless activities are the comprehensive way to solve such a crucial matter.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The many obstacle s builder s Empire State Building face attempt allow docking dirigible s There way architects could drop mooring mast top building s smooth roof If thousand foot dirigible overshadowed top building one cable tether stress building s frame would added instantly Stress dirigible s load wind pressure would need transmitted way building s foundation Another obstacle builder s building s steel frame would strengthened accommodate new design The greatest obstacle launching new design nature Architects would needed consider constant shifting winds due violent air currents Even dirigible tied mooring mast back ship would unsturdy The fact design would dangling pedestrians street would worry architects concern population Architects also deal law airships traveling low urban areas This law would state forbidden right one tether large ship bulding even approach area Although attempts dirigible s reach bulding entire idea dropped much architects despite", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this globalisation era, educational institute play an vital role in every student life. Some echelons of the society opines that eductional institute waste the time of the children because they teach extra things to the students while others think that its very fruitful for pupils to learn everything in school . I firmly agree with the former statement and i will discuss both views in the upcoming paragraphs.\r\n\r\n To begin with, teachers waste a lot time to teach extra things to the pupils because some time children have no interest in extra curriculum activities. For instance, some school compulsory the music subject in school but some students are not interested in singing. So, it creates burden on the student . Moreover, the syllabus are very tough due to more competition in these days and students have no time to do extra things because they concentrate only the main subjects . Furthermore, some school provides extra things for only money and some its not beneficial for stundent . Its only motive to gain money not provide education.\r\n\r\n On the other hand, sometimes other activities have many beneficial for students . First is that , they gain a more knowledge about the other curriculum activities and it will help in future. For instance, they learn dance in school and may it help to win the any dance competition . Additionally, they lean new skills such as cooperative and competitive. And its very helpful when they will doing job . They also learn communication skills in schools . So ,its very good source for students to learn extra things in school and sometimes they helpful in future.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I retraite that institution waste the time of student by teach extra things because school motives only to gain money and it creates burden on the students.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Maybe sense I think books removed extent The reason becasue books magazine stuff informative They help wtih certain questions They always answer need look back see type generation But also reasons things offense others People take aspect next level getting hurt I think maybe certain books magazines removed They tend damage others hurt poeple The sense nautre ask store remove books magazine The store take books shelf one person offended book If take every offensive book shelf learn mistakes taken peoples lives They maybe think would good idea books shelf younger adults could learn mature items parents want terach They think right thinking showing sexual offenive stuff You want kids others see sexuality see world becoming Also I see would want take stuff shelves They like see think truth offensive see sexual mental illness people Certain books stay shelf book books human body hid human body know human body So books magazines stay shelf If want look naked provakadive stuff go sex store Do put books public show sexually side humanbeings The magazines learn enjoyment You go different store enjoyment But take stuff offensive others means would take items People could get offenive looking like poeple magazine That could offend would take shelf Not would becasue book learning envoirment ofen That also could go sexual magaizes Yes sex good would want teach ounger kids fast You would want teach sexual introcourse magazine I know books tapes incouraging sex mainly talking adults As far music tapes go I think types removed That enjoyment people liek relax sorta stuff I mean I buy tapes music othe people They enjoy take else would put You think younger generations The older generations lived happy violent life But teenagers certain places hard They need make living street They need something listen This offensive music listen sure music horrible music isnt days If music instersed would take shelves People make living listeing music cerating others It wonderful thing really makes world go around Making stores stands take music newspapers would disappointment see wonderful thing go hole hurt others If go back music drugs well nobody ever problem Maybe people nt problem becaseu grew around Just like grown rap sexual musice We teenagers teenager You know would listeing beetles song wouod drugs sex getting high The beetles sang stuff singers sing Generations change enivorment change way grew You try make better take lot power The generations tough wont let You might well stop trying take grew away us Nobody trying take away music would take away Its something want take away s somthing want look back see much generations changed one another", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Despite knowing the importance of environment conservation for a long time, human activities have been damaging the earth we live. It is believed by some, increase the price of petrol and other fuels for vehicles is the best method to tackle environmental problems while some others have an opposite opinion. Nevertheless, in this essay, I totally disagree with the former view, reasons would be explained in the proceeding paragraphs. \nIt is accredited that vehicles are one of the unavoidable needs of the present day, whether it for transportation of goods or commutation. If the cost of petrol and diesel increase, it will definitely affect the price of all daily commodities. For instance, many middle-class families' budget, they have a fixed income, may be damaged due to this. As such, a hike in the cost of fuel is not the ultimate solution, hence it has a detrimental effect on not only the productivity but also the economy of the countries.\nOn the flip side, effective measures to be taken to reduce the use of vehicles by creating awareness and promote green protocol. If employees in a company pool their cars, it would reduce both traffic congestion and fuel consumption. Sweden has a perfect carpooling system is the best example of this. Over and above, every individual should take a necessary step to protect the environment since different valuable species are vanishing. Safeguarding can be done by reuse, recycle, and reduce the utilization of natural resources.\nTo recapitulate, having gone through various aspects, the rise of vehicle fuels has a negative impact on the economy. Environmental problems can be tackled by creating proper awareness and reduce the use of natural resources. It is hoped that future generation will take fruitful action to conserve the ecosystem.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driveless cars i see coming up in the future , because they say Audi , Benz and Nissan will have made a driverless car by 2020 . Which is awsome cause now days teens are dying because they wanna text and drive at the same time , but at the same time i seen a new thing were you cqan put your phone at eye level so you can pay attention to the road and your phone. The negative part i see is General Motors has been trying to make a car that can run a speical track since 1950s the track was embedded with\n\nan electrical cable that sent radio signals to a receiver on the front end of the , engineers at bekeley tired something similar but they used magnets with alternating polarity but that still hasnt worked ig. creating this arguments has me thinking twice bout a driverless car cause what bout some people perfer drivinig they wounldnt buy this car they would buy a car you drive onn your own nd how would you teach someone how to drive when the car drives by its self it dosnt make alot of since by as far as they makeing buses nd taxi that self drive thats a wonderful idea casue you wounldnt have to talk to no one just a quite ride to were every you going.\n\nto drive a smart car they would have to be smart roads all around the city but would a regular car work on a smart road idk ?????? But smart cars has manufactuers so how much smarter would they have to be like they would need alot of sensors o the breaks , tires ,sterring wheel, all wheels all around the car thats my arugment bout driverless cars i just wanna persude to that driverless cars should not be sumitted to be in the future of 2020 ........", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The graph describes the amount of medals earned by several countries during the Olympic games. Overall, it is evident that one country has won many more medals than the remaining nations. Additionally, 9 out of 12 countries are European countries.\nThe United States is the leading nation, accumulating around 2.400 medals. Among this number, the figure shows that the country has earned almost 1000 gold medals, followed by 600 silver medals, and 500 bronze medals. The second country presented in the graph is the Soviet Union, although it is not clear if the aforementioned nation also includes medals won by Russia and the Russian Olympic Committee. In sum, the Soviet Union accumulates a total number of 1000 medals, 400 of which are gold medals, followed by 250 silver and bronze medals.\nThe remaining countries of the graph are still far from the United States and the Soviet Union. Together, the United Kingdom, France, and Germany add up a total number of 1800 medals. Let's bear in mind that only the United States has earned a greater number of medals than these three countries together.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless Cars. The idea and fantasy of many futuristic fanatics out there. When one would think of diverless cars, they may think of a flying car or a talking car that does everything for one. This idea comes from the many movies and books out there that like to predict the future, and quite frankly should stay in the movies only. The idea of driverless cars should continue being make believe simply because there are a lot more cons than pros.\n\nThe fact that driverless cars are in the making as we speak is crazy and scary. They are simply not safe, imagine not having control over the car and it going haywire and crashing. This idea is apparently suppose to lessen the amount of accidents that go on in the world, but in reality it may be the cause for many more People in this day and age are not mature, they are not mature enough to handle a driverless car. they would most likely take advantage of it, for example this may give people more of a reason to get drunk and high mor because they arent the ones driving. Anything can go wrong and a driverless car in the hands of a drunk is not a very great idea. The article was very broad when it came to the safety precaution and features to this driverless cars. If what the article said was true about the driver having to take over if something was to happen, then what if the driver was drunk or not in their right mind? A crash would happen.\n\nIn the article, it talked about all the sensors and cameras they would include in this unbelieable car not willing to mention how much it would cost. With all these fancy sensors and cameras, the price has got to be real expensive. With driverless cars and regular cars all driving on the same road, something is bound to go wrong. The upside to a driverless car is if they get all the problems and precautions figured out in the near dear future, just like the article stated, it could change the world. If one wanted to go on a long road trip, they wouldnt have to worry about driving the whole way. According to article gas wouldnt be needed as much so the prices would go down, but the world is not there yet not even close.\n\nDriverless cars could be an amazing devllopment in the future but not in this lifetime. The world that inhabits the people of the world today is not mature and ready yet for this kind of devlopment. The world has bigger problems that needs to be sorted out before dirverless cars cars can even become a thing in the future. It could a great devlopment for the world but we have a long way to go yet.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Over the past century, science and technology have developed unprecedentedly and changed every aspect of people’s lives. Some people suggest a simple lifestyle without using modern technology. From my perspective, technology brings about higher efficiency and convenience, even though it poses confusion and disorder in some circumstances.\n\nThe benefits of modern technology are multiple. There is no denying the fact that computer technology has significantly improved the productivity of society. Owing to the proliferation and the widespread use of the Internet, people gain more access to information or knowledge than ever before, which will enrich their horizons. In lieu of attending the library, people can acquire the information they need with the click of a mouse. In addition, emails and mobile phones enable people to stay in touch with their business partners and friends far more conveniently and efficiency, compared with the old way of going to the post office and meeting up with others in person.\n\nOn the other hand, some people show their concern that modern technology leads to more complexity and inconvenience. For instance, a plethora of information on the Internet is questionable content. People spend most of their time surfing the Net, chatting on the web and deleting junk emails, which is a waste of time, thereby obtaining nothing from these meaningless activities.\n\nIn spite of the voice that against the application of technology, I am confident to say that a better future of mankind lies with the development of science and technology. It is vital to be aware of the negative impacts of technology, but returning to the simple life without technology is by no means a solution.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The dessert environment huge effects cyclist He drinking water regularly would running Not realizing would refills pump giving tarlike substance said text With lack water dehydration beginning hit poor man An effect dehydration poor balance would useful pass ridiculously large snake seen A finale effect would mirages could loose judgement This man double checked eyes coming view building wipping sweat eyes make sure wasnt mirage Through toughest desser obsticles character able take short cut survive heat dehydration animals dessert", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many reasons in which a person may have the good point of view on the driverless car and the bad ones. There are many good features that are included in this car that just makes someone want to get one. One of these features include all the safety concerns that these big companies have insured to really prtoect the people, and this is a huge positive side on the driverless cars. I say this because there are families and kids and parents dont want anything happening to thier children. Also the fact that the car has sensers according to the article that shows a 3-D model of the car and its surroundings, which is updated constantly.\n\nThen, comes the fact that these drivers may get bored since the car is doing all the work. The solution to this is to add fun features according to Dr. Werner. These fun features include bring in car entertainment and information systems, yet turns off when thendriver needs to be alert. Its like being in a cab. This car is compared to a cap because you can call the car whenever you need it, and on the brighter size it uses way less fuel.\n\nAlthough the diverless cars come with many upsides it does has its downfalls. One major concern is the question, \"if the technology fails and someone is injured, who's at fault.\" This makes the assumptions tomthe traffic laws by saying,\"The only safe car has a human driver in control at all times.\" As the result of this arguement many states have mase it illegal to even test drive these computer-driven cars.\n\nAnother downside is why have a driverless car when the driver has to stay alert. This leaves to the concern of the publics saftey because the fact that the driver may not respond to the alert fast enough or what if the driver is texting. The solution to this problem according the BMW is bringing in seats that vibrate when the driver needs to be alert. Also projecting flashing lights on the windshield when the driver has to be alert.\n\nEven though the new driverless car sounds fun and exciting to even get one, but there is many postitive sides and negative sides. Therefore many features that are yet to come still need furthur testing. This testing might include test driving and also many saftey test that is a major concern in any manufacturing company. We the people will just have to see what the on going years brings us and what Mercedes Benz, Audi, and nissan brings us in 2020.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Steep mountains rolling roads jagged rocks reasons setting affected towards cyclist Well cyclist needs know going happen For example Rough Rough Do exceed posted speed limit This setting lead lot changes So yes setting reveals lot I guess describes cyclist react also So yes I think settings affect cyclist whole story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph shown several reasons First author needs conclude story without leaving questions readers mind happens This achieved incorperating geese hibiscus drivers test last paragraph Next last paragraph adds theme perseverance story The main character driven take drivers test memories Vietnam lastly adds character saying take test shown realistic overconsistent These ways last paragraph enhances story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The future holds a lot in store for us but it might be happening sooner than what we thought.Google cofounder Sergey Brin is creating a way to make google driveress cars safe. People don't really know how they should or are going to establish the rules for these cars if they become popular. Google's driverless cars are pushing it farther and farther every time they test the cars out on the road. With these driverless cars google wants to go out on the edge and eventually create a taxi service with these cars.\n\nI am against this because their are so many factors that play a huge role in people's lives. Other drivers may not want to go out on the road knowing that their lives may be at sake if the car has a malfunction. Google's self driving car can make a mistake and not let the perosn sitting in the drivers seat aware of wrecks on the road and take over driving. People may fall asleep while they are in the drivers seat and not be aware of what is happening to the car or what is around them. If the car wrecks then who will\n\nbe at fault for the accident.\n\nGoogle needs to think this through a little bit more on how they will test\n\nthe car and think of other people's safety. I won't be out on the road if the car gets popular out on the highways and backroads. In a couple years I think that this will become more common in many states or even countries. I hope that people don't take advantage of them and just fall asleep at the wheel just because it is a self driving car. The future still awaits for the google driverless car to come out on more roads.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are always even sometimes patient If normal But everyone patient It help long run I f I patient would would little bit fasier Like brother instint bathroom use could wait finish That saving argueing its patient I say thing like Im patient would lie I far Not saying its easy try", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In personal opinon I think books things nt want read think offensive stay It s like person offended read Say library see book think offends You think self book removed library think offensive think peoples shoes Just becaus think book offensive nt mean everyone else think That age groups grade levels set kid likes picture books get stuck book curse words things meant adults Same concept movies magazines music etc Take example I walking library I saw book called I thought looks like stupid book I would nt want read I think throw book away Now lets think sound fair Maybe kids favorite book comes next day gone What lets say go look favorite book find someone found offensive someone nt like much threw away Does nt seem fair In conclusion think removing books offensive people nt like I think leave nt remove based personal opinon", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "They book libary called CAPS ever read might cry When basment eat floor eat brothers thow even eat warms beet thell haves booes body dad broke arm two form dad mom fighting much brothers cant tock brother called cops cops came gone two years latter brother got adopined new mom dad good even thow six brother five sisters got long good live afther relly mam dad died", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, people living in buildings which can be several thousands years. Our generation live after many significant and wondering events that can happened in our houses. Human is a creature that interesting in such things, so it is predictable situation when community starting research it.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, it was caused by watching different films and tv shows. There is a common belief that from television people learning about mystical and unrealistic things. Take for example, when somebody watches film about his town and hears about strange and daunting situation he will immediately start finding any information about it. This is mainly, because of people that under the control of TV and they believe in everything that they hear or see.\r\n\r\nAt the same time, those who believe in it, starting their research. In 21st century, people have a numerous of opportunities to know about history of their place of living. For instance, somebody can find information from their relatives or from past owners of house, frequently these people will know an unusual stories about construction. In addition, there is a plenty materials in internet which can tell you valuable facts.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, this situation proves to us the considerable affect on humans brain from getting information from watching variety of materials on TV. Nevertheless, it is great that people interested in knowing the history of place where they live. Finally, for looking for this facts, people have to spend a lot of their time and energy for completing it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Facial Action Coding System is where you can identify human emotions. This device could help drawings or paintings in so many ways and one of those ways is so the artist knows exactly what kind of mood the person they are drawing are in. Mona Lisa is in a pretty good mood but shes not just happy. She has some other emotions that a lot of people have no clue about. If more people was to know it would make this painting more interesting than it alreaty is. More people need to start using Facial Action Coding System.\n\nPaintings could mean a lot more if people knew about the Facial Action Coding System process. If you dont know how to exactly tell what kind of mood someone is in then the facial system would work. Also, if you are trying to explain the mood your painting is in then you was most likly in the same mood when you started it. More painters paintings could explain its self with this system. The mood of your work is important because if the painting is sad or upset then your paintings gonna be really dark in color but if the painting is happy then the colors are most likly gonna be bright colors.\n\nHave you ever seen one of your friends faces when they were mad but didnt wanna tell anyone or talk to anyone? Im sure you knew exactally what mood they was in when you first saw them. You can tell what kind of mood someone is in when you look at them its not that hard. If someone has a straight face and not really paying attention to anyone then there not in the best mood but if they are smiling, talking, and making jokes then usually they are in a pretty good mood. But not always some people are really good at hiding there emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While building Empire State Building Al Smith believed solved problems dirigibles land However building place dirigibles dock proved much harder seemed First balloon would cause much stress building s frame The author states The stress dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation CAPS Also frame would need modified lot money would need spent The author states Over sixty thousand dollars worth modifications made building s framework CAPS It risky invest unsure project Also realized dangerous accidents could populated area The author explains Most dirigibles outside United States used Hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable CAPS If anything happened large part New York could suffered Although plan creating mast dirigibles impressive neither logical financially logical saftey reasons", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Did you know in the last 3 decades nobody had a space ship touch Venus? Venus is one of the hottest planets in the world. Its also dangerous that nobody been up there in a long time. I feel like venus is really dangerous sand you should not go up there.\n\nVenus is one of the hottest planets in the world. In the story it states \"On the planet’s surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\"(3) Just to think of touching this supper hot planet. It is 90 times greater than what we have ever experience on our planet. Also in the text it states \"Also notable, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun.\"(3) I always thought that if you are closer to the sun than you will be hotter. In this case its weird because Mercury is closer to the sun but Venus is still hotter than Mercury.\n\nSomeone has not been up to Venus in the last 3 decades. In the text it states \"Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.\"(2) This is crazy that someone would even want to go on a planet that is like hell. The temperatures up there is 800 degrees Fahrenheit. Also the text states \"Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.\"(2) If people have not been up on Venus more than a couple hours it must be dangerous. I mean if I took my time to make it up there I would be staying for a little bit.\n\nVenus is the cloest planet to the earth. In the text it states \"Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too.\"(2) More people should be stepping on the planet of Venus but it shows how dangrous it is to step on Venus. More people step on the earth because its not as hot but Venus is really hot. Also in the text it states \"Earth, Venus, and Mars, our other planetary neighbor, orbit the sun at different speeds.\"(2)\n\nSo the planets are really close to each ither but Venus is one of the dangerous ones.\n\nIf I where you I wouldnt go up to Venus you might get hurt. Venus\n\nis a really hot planet, it is not even far away, a person has not been on Venus for the last 3 decades. Its a bad idea to touch a foot on Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Well setting lil boy bike meets old man man toke short cut So took dis road I guess something went wrong", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why would scientist want to travel to one of the most hostile planets in the solar system? The author of \"The Challenge of Exporing Venus\" explains by listing the reasons why we should, listing the challenges, and saying possible solutions to those challenges.\n\nSo, why should we explore one of the solar systems most hostile planet? Well, the author explains that, at times, Venus is the closest planet to Earth. It is considered to be Earth's twin, because both planets have similar density and size. It also could have been the most Earth-like planet in the solar system. It has similar features geography such as valleys, mountains, and craters; scientists believe that, long ago, Venus was covered in huge oceans and could possibly support life.\n\nThis planet, that used to support life, is now hostile. The author tells the reader that the atmosphere of Venus is 97 percent carbon dioxide, has sulfiric acid, and has an atmospheric pressure 90 times greater than Earth's. The surface also has it's problems. The surface averages over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. There are also erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning striking the surface.\n\nThe best solution for these problems is a blimp-like vehicle. This vehicle would orbit 30 miles above Venus. It would avoid all of the surface's challenges. It would be cooler at about 170 degrees Fahrenheit. The atmospheric pressure would be equal to Earth's sea level. This blimp would be solar powered and could possibly have simplified electronics made of silicone carbide. The author adds that simplified electronis will not be the only technology onboard, there is a chance that mechanical computers could make a comeback, as they are more resistant to pressure, heat, and other forces.\n\nThe challenges scientists face have solutions, and the solutions can help scientists make new discoveries of a planet that remains unexplored. The author has explained why we should explore Venus, despite how dangerous the mission would be. They give the reader reasons why we should, such as possible life forms, and the author has more pros than cons. They also says solutions to the cons that scientists face.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Business and cultural coperation among nations had been rose dramatically. It is often argued that this is a positive development, whilst others disagree and believe it will lead to adverse ramifications. This essay agrees that the growht business and cultural contact internationally is benificial to people, and portrays both sides of this argument along with my own prespective. \r\n\r\nOn one side of the controversial there are people who argue that it will raise in cooperation and cultural when joint with other foreign countries which can leads to considerable advantage circumstances. The main reason fro believing this is that if certain company have a partnership with other aboard firms, which means that it will enable them to obtain more opportunity. To illustrate, when some of them have increase in revenue and profit, so they will have a chance to accomplished and outrace their rivals. Not those aforementioned factors, but also gaining favourable for an idividual in order to acquire new knowledge from cultural diversity. For instance, when a labourer from Japan work with British company, they will have more flexible in time and lesser pressure of job from a superviser. Therefore, there are numerous noteworthy merit of it which both entrepreneurs and employeers might benefits from.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it is also possible to make opposing case even though those provided advantages in various aspects. It is often argued that this may bring detrimental impacts which influences the vanish of nation uniqueness. People often have this viewpoint because cooperating with other working culture may results in cultural assimilation. For example, when two different personnels works together which may leads to mixing in culture results in confusion. Despite this, human interaction is still manageable through the working atmosphere, and this essay disagrees that cooperating internationally will cause one dissapearing of their roots culture.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I strongly believe neither argument demonstrates the drawbacks entirely. While, joining with international company allow business to success and enhance, some still feel that people should be wary of this new phenomenon which people may loss their culture. However, as long as we carefully consider the impaortance of our home culture, benefits of it are clearly positive.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars might sound awesome but at the same time they can be dangerous. I say they can be dangerous because even if the car has more nice details to it, there might still be a fail on the car. Driverless cars shouldn't exsist.\n\nIn the article it says that cars will be smarter, but the real question is will they really work well being smart? Driverless cars will be real expensive, also it will take a long time to create them. If driverless cars are to be used by everyone, it won't be good at all because not everyone can offord it, it might sound cool but it can also be dangerous. These cars won't be as smart as we want them to be. A driver will always be needed to conduct the car. The article aslo says that the laws to driving will change when these cars come to exsist. As much as we would like to not drive anymore and just let the car do all the work without our help, its not a great idea to have these cars around. We cant always trust on them, the roads won't be the sameas they are now. Driverless cars will make a huge change in driving and also, on the streets.\n\nMy overall opinion is to get these cars. Like I said at first they sound cool, but you can't always trust the car. As much as I would like to get it cause it sounds cool, I will not get as driverless car. I'd rather have an ugly looking car that i know I won't have much trouble on, than to get a smart car that I dont know if anything can go wrong. They can exsist but I say that they shouldn't make everyone get a driverless car, unless they want one.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]