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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology reading student´s emotinal expressions\n\nRemember thst one day you were sad ? Just never showed that emotion/ expression so you would not get ask ? Your apperence is never what you actually feel on the inside is it ? That is because face expression hids it all. Now there is a computer system that catches your human emotions.\n\nAccording to some new technonlgy named, Facial Action Coding, this system identifies humans emotions. This technology is not the right way to find students human emotions. Facial Action Coding seems to just identify just your face. A face expression can hid your actual emotion. Systems like this have the chance to not be right. Make believe what this system is all about.\n\nSecondly, the students expression may change during the day. At some point a studnets can feel pressered after a class of even before there next class. These emotion have the accursy to not be the same during a students day. Calculating these emotion, can not be like working on a math problem. Emotions can change in the matter of a second. You just dont know what can happen at any minute that changes your expressions.\n\nLastly, this system would not be good to keep students emotion. It would be better to talk the student face to face, if you ever see or feel like something it going wrong with them. Like the article says you never know how your teacher feel when she is grading your assigment.\n\nI believe the Facial Action Coding should not be used on students. I would rather let a teacher talk face to face with there studnets to see what the situation is all about. Rather then just guessing or coding there face and believe a system like the one that Prof. Thomas Huang invented.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should join the Seagoing Cowboys program because you can be helpful and save lives. While you are helping to save lives you also can be having fun. You would be helping people because sometimes there are natural disasters like hurricanes, tornados, tsunamis, volcano eruptions, and many more. Also, you would be able to help people after wars ended. You can help people that have these problems by bringing them food, water, building materials, and other items that they need for daily living. Helping someone always feels fantastic beause you know that you did the right thing.\n\nBeing over sea for so long with other people would mean that you would most likely end up being friends. With everybody being friends you would be able to have so much fun. Being over sea with a bunch of friends means that you would be really entertained. This would be enteraining because you could keep yourselves entertained by playing table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing, reading, whittling, and games. All of these would pass time. Also, if you have never been on a boat before then you would be able to experience something new! You could argue that being oversea would be to dangerous but here's why your wrong, you would be on a boat that always has someone watching for danger so you would be safe.\n\nJoining the Seagoing Cowboys program would also be very adventurious. You would get to see new places while doing something good for the world. Have you ever wanted to go across the Atlantic Ocean or the Pacific Ocean? If so then you would be able to take a boat across it if you participated in this. So, you should take part in the Seagoing Cowboys program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Outside of Earth is a mystery to mankind. Slowly through the 20th and 21st centuries we have been exploring the space around us. A close neighbor, Mars, is one of the most famous sci-fi planets of all. Movies, books, etc. have been made based on Mars. Martians or even just plain old aliens have been the tall tale of our time, but could a discovery change the argument between aliens being fake or real. The Face on Mars is a turning point for all people. I am a scientist at NASA who strongly believes that the Face is just a landform on Mars surface because over time the picture quality has gotten better and has made the pictures of the Face come out clearer making it easier to see the definition of the shape.\n\nThe first sighting or picture taken of the Face was in 1976. The Viking 1 was circling the planet, snapping photos for possible landing sites for its sister ship Viking 2 when a picture was snapped of what looked like a human face. Regular citizens were shocked at the photo along with scientists. This picture as seen is very blurry. Definition of the landmark is not very clear and with that picture comes many questions; What is this thing? How did it get there? Why is it there? So many questions that no one could answer. So us as humans jumped to the most conclusive answer would could come up with and the answer was that it was made by aliens. NASA quickly turned down the accusation because there was no evidence supporting the idea. In the text the author said, \"Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo.\" This shows how different the picture quality is between 1976 and 2001. Also many people were not satisfied with the picture eighteen long years after the Viking missions ended. So on April 5, 1998 the Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time. Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking pictures. Thousands of people wanted to see another glimpse of the Face maybe even a better one. The image appeared on a JPL web site, revealing a natural landform. After eighteen years of conspiracy it was proven that the Face was a mesa.\n\nIn conclusion the picture from 1998 is how I prove that the Face is just a natural landform. The picture quality has changed dramatically and has put conspiracy theorists in their place. I strongly believe that NASA tried to be on the peoples' side, afterall no one really knew what the Face was at first. As we continue on discovering our universe we will surely come across many inccidents like the Face and maybe one day the outcome won't be the same.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuble because teachers and other students can tell how a student may feel. It is important to know how someone is feeling so they can get counciling if needed, or so they can cheer up others. It's also important to be able to recognize facial expressions and the different types of muscle movements. This new type of technology can also be used to improve school systems. The Facial Action Coding System is of value to use on reading students' emotions.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System can regonize how a student may be feeling. This could be beneficial for teachers and councilors because then they could help the student with any emotional problems they may be having. The technology, \"can even identify mixed emotions\". Mixed emotions can show a mix of happiness and sadness at the same time because people's emotions aren't always clear, and people can appear as something they are not. Facial expressions for each and every emotion are diverse.\n\nRecognizing facial expressions and different muscle movements can help determine how someone is feeling. Instead of, \"we humans perform(ing) this same impressive \"calculation\"\", we humans can use a more reliable source. The Facial Action Coding System can, \"handle the complex algorithms used to decode\". It can, \"indicate the difference between a geniune smile and a forced one.\" Having this in a classroom can tell what students are actually feeling, and we humans wouldn't have to be forced to guess.\n\nThis type of technology can improve how schools work. If, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\", then a teacher or staff member can better help that student or excite the class. Or, \"it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\". The learning process can be made more entertaining and enriching to students.\n\nHaving technology to read students' emotional expressions in school is vauble. It can determine if a student has mixed emotions and needs a councilor, it can calculate how a student honestly feels, and it can improve school systems by giving more attention to those who are troubled or bored. This technological system can be beneficial and vauble.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are our future. In todays world there are many lives lost due to distracted drivers. And I think that implimenting driverless cars can help save lives. In \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", the article talkes about the cons and pros to haveing driverless cars and talkes about how they could have far better response than a human driver.\n\nI am for having driverless cars in our world. We as a society are close to having them. Companys like Google and Tesla are coming out with test cars already. Google's smart car has diven more that half a million miles with out a wreck according ot the article. The cars have so many sensors on them that sometimes can be better than a humans sensors.\n\nAlthough I am for driverless cars, there are current roadblocks. For instance, the laws we have currently are blocking some of the testing on actual roads. Companys like Tesla can only test in the state of California, Nevada, Florida, and in the district of columbia. And what happens if a smart car were to wreck. Is it the person insides falt of the manufacturer's? There is also the cost of these cars. If they are too expensive then they will not be practial. These are just some of the roadblocks that these smart cars are facing.\n\nThere are alot of pros to this topic aswell. What if a person had to get a good ammount of work done but had to get somewhere aswell? The person could get in his smart car and tell it where to go to get his work done. It can also be very safe too. If you have a car with so many sensors on it that it can out perform a humans brain in bad situations then that is a win for the car companys and for the people inside them saving them from a wreck.\n\nSome more major companys plan to have there own consept of an autonomous car. Companys like Nissan, Audi, and Mercedes-Benz and they plan to have them done by the year 2020. We are very close to having these cars available to us. It is smart to think of smart cars as our future. Less accidents then equal less deaths. Less deaths then equals a happier public happiness level and maybe we can then eliminate trafic deaths totaly when these cars come out. So support diverless cars, it might not hurt to try them out.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this graph we can see the relationship between the energy unit in the y axis versus the year in the x axis. We can see from the graph that the U.S. energy's consumption is increasing by the time . In similar way also the U.S. energy's production is also increasing. For example in year 2000 the U. S. production was nearly 74 quadrillion unit while in 1975 the U.S production was nearly 52 quadrillin unit. The same thing is with the U.S. consumption, for example in 2000 the U.S. consumption was approximately 77 quadrillin compared to 1975 which was 54. we can see also in the past the gap between the consumption and production was not that big with time the difference became bigger. If we are comparing the U.S consumption versus the U.S production we can see that the consumption was higher than the production. In 2025 we expect the same trend but with bigger gap between the U.S consumption and production.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One reason to join the UNRRA(the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration) is that you will experience adventures and visit many unique places. Like China, Europe, New Orleans, Acropolis,Greece, Venice, Italy, and an excavated castle in Crete, and marvel at the Panama Canal in China. Luke Bomberger and his friend Don Reist had seen many of these places and many more.\n\nIn August 1945, they received their orders to report to New Orleans. \"We arrived August 14,\" Luke says, \"the day the Pacific war ended.\" They got their seaman's papers and boarded the SS Charles W. Wooster, headed for Greece---with a cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them.\n\nLuke turned 18 before arriving in Greece, which meant he could be drafted for military service. \"When my draft board learned that I was on a cattle---boat trip, they told me to just keep doing that for my service.\"By the time he was discharged in 1947, Luke had made nine trips---the most of any Seagoing Cowboy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Are self-driving car the next advancement in car technology? Self-driving cars are the future of transportation. Self-driving cars can be easier for the driver, safer for the passengers and pedestrians, and make smarter choices for drivers.\n\nSelf-driving cars easier on the drivers. When somebody drivers for long periods of times it puts strain on the eyes and mind. With this strain on the driver they could not be as sharp or fast reacting as they should be while driving. A self-driving car would take the strain off of their eyes and mind keeping them alert and focused when the time to drive comes. Like a GPS the self-driving car could choose the fasted path to when you want to go. The car would recieve information as a GPS or phone would and take the path with the least time spent driving.\n\nThese cars would be able to make smarter choices for drivers. The car would be able to detect crashes or other road hazard and stop or avoid these things.\n\nThe car would also warn the driver when there are hazards ahead that they may not be able to see with their eyes. When an ambulance or police car is coming these cars would know to move out of the way to make room for them before the driver even knows that they are coming.\n\nThese new cars would be safer. If somebody tried to hijack a persons car the car\n\ncould stop or freeze similar to a kill switch so they couldnt steal it. Without the humans driving most of the time there would be no human error such as going too fast or not seeing an animal, human, or an exit. Depending on the terrain the car could judge how fast to go when to brake or where different hazards are in the road that the human could not see.\n\nYes, there are several drawbacks to the car. It could malfunction on the operator and not work how its supposed to. There are many risks to this but there is a risk in anyhting we do. Before the car is realsed to the pulbic there would be many tests it would go through to work out most of the errors in the system. The cost is another factor to consider, but like any new product the price will drop over time and be more affordable to the public.\n\nSelf-driving cars are the future. They are safer for everybody. They have the ability to make smart choices that the driver could not make. They are even easier to use than your traditional car. Overall yes, self-driving cars are good and can be benificial to every day life for drivers and even other people not in the car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you want a teacher trying to guess how you feeling or is this good for students, the short answer NO. There's no way to actually make this happen and plus it would cause trouble or false assumptions in classrooms. This technique would not be valuable in a school. In school you learn, go to your classes, do your work and leave, there is no time to be worried about trying to guess or get a students emotion and find out how their feeling.Putting this type of technology in schools would be useless, waste, money, and could be giving false information on a students feelings.\n\nPutting this technology in a classroom to read expressions of students would be useless. In an organized learning enviornment there would be no time to focus on trying to figure out students emotions. Trying to do this would either take away efficent learning time, homework or studying time, or from the teacher teaching time, so one reason it would be useless is there would be no time to use this technology. Also no student wants a teacher to know everything about them or how they feel or their business. In schools everyone is different and there are so many different emotions flowing so you can't worry about every student and also can't try to keep figuring them out. Sometimes it's best not knowing something. For example if the world blew was to blow up 6 moths from now would it be better for everybody to know or not to know, the answer is not heres why telling the public news like that would stop jobs food sources and our regular everyday economy by eveyone wanting to be with family or doing what they always wanted to do so it would take focus away from important things in life.\n\nAnother reason this is not a good idea is its a big waste of money. Schools now a days do fundraises to raise money and events in the community. Taking away critical money that can go towards making the school a better place, getting better learning equipment, and helping stidents in need or getting better things throughout the building. A school can't afford to blow money on machines or programs trying to help figure the many, many students out. Like stated in the article \" Your home PC cant handle complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lis'a smile\", but they\n\nclaim they can write down simple instructions that can encode different emotions. This can be a flawed system, unless your in ones body or something how could you truly know what one is feeling or expect a simple machine humans created to tell you an emotion in your complex body.\n\nSo this brings me to my third and final reason this could give us false information. Giving computers a job to tell you something about whats inside a humans body and can't be seen is idiotic. People are not some software or program therefor can't be treated as such. There is no 100% way to make sure that this is right. As stated the process goes off of \" weighting the different units\" and \" facial muscles and how they move. Some people have been thought to have been smiling when they're really crying how do you detect that if the muscles are in the way they would be as if smiling. So if you're not that person you don't 100 percent know what they are feeling or going through.\n\nSo overall these are my points of why these programs, machines, software or whatever are not a good idea. Putting this type of technology in schools would be useless, waste, money, and could be giving false information on a students feelings. There is no way to 100 percent figure out a person its impossible. Could you make an educated guess, Yes!\n\nBut no you would never full know or understand unless you are that person.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some feature setting affected cyclist fact running water pumped water said pumped strenght first tar like substance oozed follwed brackish water said water tasted battery acid Also setting cyclist notices terrain change flat road turned short hills follwed snake looked od diamond back", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is believed that building large public spaces is essential for towns and cities. I agree with this statement.\r\n\r\nThe primary reason is that these types of spaces could contribute to interpersonal skills and creativity. It is common to see that public space, such as parks or squares, provides a transition space between home and workplace for people. For example, if people could meet with others frequently, this will create more opportunities for communicating with others from various backgrounds. When we are exposed to different thoughts and behaviours, we will know that such differences are norms and respect them. Therefore, we could learn to stand in other person’s shoes, which can cultivate our empathy, enhancing our social skills. Moreover, when we are instiled with various knowledge, such breadth of knowledge may inspire us to connect unrelated information, contributing to some original ideas. Eventually, our creative thinking skills will be gradually improved.\r\n\r\nAnother reason is related to a healthy perspective. It is undeniable that participating in physical activities is good for health. Since public space contains spaces used for exercising, it could stimulate and attract more people to do physical training like jogging, enhancing their immune system. For example, when an epidemic occurs, they are less likely to be infected than those who rarely work out. Furthermore, except for exercise, such public spaces can offer people spaces to relax, alleviating some mental diseases such as depression caused by a heavy workload.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the public space is crucial as it could benefit people’s social lives and physical and mental health.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" there was an arguement about how it's safe invention to be put out of the road and test drive it and how it's not really a smart idea and people can get hurt while in operations of the driverless car. Even though it may seem like a really cool invention there is a lot of things that can go wrong while in operation of the car. So no, I don't think that driverless cars are a good idea because it may cause accident, we don't know how the technology will react in extreem measures, and the driver may be distracted by everything that is going on behind the weel.\n\nMany, many things can go wrong for example wihle driving the technology in the driverless car can malfunction and cause an accident, or while in operation the driver may not be able to stop the driverless car and also cause an acciedent. Theres a whole bunch of things that can go wrong while uding a diverless car. For example the driver might get distracted in times where the car alrets the driver to take over. The driver may not know how that senerio will play out. More so when the driver isn't paying any attention to the road and what the driverless car is doing. Another example would be that the technolgy might fail under extreem measure like when it's at a 4-qay intersection it may not stop, the car may not relize that it was to stop untill it's too late and an accident is cause, just because the car didn't see what was going on or there may have been a glitch that caused an accident. All of these things that can happne need to be taken into account. Because in all honesty we can't always depend on the new and cool technology that comes out of the years, have of the new technology that come outs, all the the technolgy may have many glitches and maybe no one will notice on time untill it's too late, untill an accident is caused. In the text it stated that \"In fact, none of the cars developed so far are completely driverless. They can steer, accelarate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navagating throughwrok zones and around accidents.\"\n\ni understand that most drivers are alert and ready when it comes to these types of situations, but what about the ones that don't pay a whole lot of attention to the road while they're driving? How are they going to deal with the driverless car malfuntioning or notifying them that they need to take acion when it's needed? I feel that diverless cars will propose a lot more accidents when the car itself get more popular.\n\nIn conclution, i think that driverless cars are a bad idea because it may cause accidents, we don't know how the technology will react in extreem measures, and the driver may be distracted by everything that is going on behind the weel. There is a lot of factors that are involed than it just being a cool invention or a cool thing to be able to drive. There is a lot that goes into making sure that the car is safe for human use and making sure that it won't cause a lot more accidents that are needed. I just feel that it would be a bad idea since the project/invention isn't devleoped all the way. Since they're still unsure of what the outcome is on making this invention become a possiblity for others to experiance.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There's a new car coming out and its called \" The Drivless Car\". This cars is bad for you. The car can handle driving functions at sppeds up to 25 mph. This car can't do alot for you. It also can't help you when your lost but it also can kill people. Driveless car can get out of control, this car is not the ony car that can talk, its more cars that talk to you and take you places.\n\nSo let me tell you a few things about this so called fancy car. First off the Driveless car are bad for you because its alot of sympaths that the car can do. Not only that it have a GPS. You still can get lost with or without a GPS.It come with cameras. You can put a camera in your own car. Plus it's a Google Car. Well other cars can provide the same things, so it dont make this car no better than any other car or good.\n\nThis car drive for you, it can steer. Even tho special touch sensors make sure the drivers keeps hold of the wheel. It can lose controls while doing a turn and can kill a child or a person. It still navigate through work zones and around accident. Even tho in the passage it say while the driver watches the road the car watches the driver. The driver can get into an accident because lets say if a deer was cross the highway and the driver slows down but the car jump back. Then the driver is in trouble for killing the animal and mostly injured at the same time.\n\nI dont think people should buy these smart cars, because sometimes these cars will take over you. you should'nt text or call anyone while driving because if you to loud it destack the driver, but some people think its stay and still put in these cars. Its not good while driving. It will tell you what to text or who to call like a smart phone a do if you press the wrong button.\n\nMost driving law focus on keeping drivers and pedestrians safe, but why make these up to date cars that nobody know how to drive yet. I know I wouldnt because it seem dangerous. Do this car even have good senses? Do this car tells you what you need to do? In my opinion i would tell other people not to get this call neither because you can lose you life and others too.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many libraries many books magzines music movies Some things library inappropiate children So library makes section adult s section children There children library make another library adult s Then I also think take bad things shelf s libraries So children books adult books In libraries I seen either upstairs adult s downstairs kid s They also toy s kids parents want go upstairs kids sit play toy s Then I also think take bad things shelf s Becuase wjat happens kid goes mom dad opens book sees something inappropiate So taken shelve s library someone wants buy go online store buy The people liobrary library take bad magazines music books ect shelf s It bad thing public place aloud The public libraries take inappropriate things shelf s", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir warm lots love The author explains growing environment showed family nt necessarily mean blood relative Everyone neighborhood came together great solidarity friendship Whatever family members went authors home parents would take matter knew situation would welcomed also So always kept arms door wide open people considered family The author also mentioned would always grateful parents love sacrifice important family friends So conclusion mood warm loving learned real meaning family learned love", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While constructing top Empire State Building builders faced many obstacles According excerpt architects could nt drop mooring mast top Empire State Building s roof Also thousandfoot dirigible top building held single cable would add much stress frame The building In order maintain dirigible place would cost money Quoating article The stress The The The dirigibles load wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation Empire State Building would modified strengthened sixty thousand dollars worth modifications The technical financial issues made difficult architects build mooring mast top Empire State Building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "No water rough terran bad infoall reasons boy isnt well I said water dehidrated needs soae water Also could die heat exauston I also said rough terrain could fall get hurt one around help And top took info old people didnt know talking Theas leave examples essay support writing", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I honestly think driverless cars are an excellent idea. They could help drivers out a lot and possibly change transportation forever. There are a couple reasons why I believe driverless cars should happen. The first one is that driverless cars will make it easier to travel long distances. That reason is followed by the fact it'd be easier to drive if you have small children in the vehicle. And the last reason I have on why driverless cars should become popular is that there will be a lot less accidents.\n\nThe first reason I believe driverless cars should become popular is that it could make traveling long distances a lot easier than it always has been. With a driverless car, you wouldn't have to stop and take breaks due to you being tired. This would reduce the time it took to reach your destination. With the car being able to drive itself, you also wouldn't have to stop and sleep. The car could work on getting you to where you'd like to go and you could get back in control after you were well rested. I know these things seem dangerous and impossible, but I'm sure driverless car companies could come up with things to alert you if need be. Vibrating seats or a loud announcement would be good ideas on how to wake a driver if they are needed.\n\nAnother reason I'm convinced driverless cars are great is because it would be a lot easier to drive with small children. While the car is operating itself, you could look back and check on the kids a couple times. If the children were in absolute need of anything, you could take care of it while the car took care of all of you. If, by chance, you're needed to drive while your attention is focused on the children, the car could let you know. Like I said previously, vibrating seats or a loud announcement would work perfectly to get your attention but flashing lights or something like that could work as well.\n\nThe last reason I strongly believe that driverless cars are incredible is that there would be a huge decrease in traffic accidents. The driverless cars will always obey traffic laws, (proper steering, accleration, braking). People won't have to worry about drunk drivers as much either, with the car doing most of the work the driver won't be doing anything really. There's also no possible way for a car to be drunk. The last reason I have on why driverless cars would prevent accidents is that you wouldn't have to worry about bad weather unless the car needed you to navigate. Thick snow, rain, sleet or foggy windshields would no longer be an issue if cars could drive themselves.\n\nI firmly believe in driverless cars changing the ways of transportation for good. Driverless cars can make it easier to travel long distances, uncomplicate driving with small children, and prevent vehicular accidents. Without the complications of driving when it isn't the best choice, transportation will be more simple for everyone.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that fellow citizens should have the advantages to car usage, because not everyone would feel comfortable ridding around in a bus or a train with lots of other people . But then again you have some conflicts with the environment getting all ugly and nasty . Some people are different from others not everyone will want to go the same way meaning . They rather have their own privacy and not be on a bus or a train full of random people that might be sick with a flu or smell really nasty. Thats why 80 percent of transportation has been thruogh highways an only 20 percent to other transportation . Most of the people who intend to use train or buses don't have the right amount of money to purchase a brand new car or even a used one . The cause of that is Taxes or IRS are taking to much from the people who work to hard an theres nothing that can be done too that.\n\nThis is what I don't get about how things are being done to try an save our planet called earth . If you want to try an save some thing an make it better. Don't make a expensive invention an expect people to by it like for examlpe the hybrids or plug-in cars. People can't afford many things in life because money comes an goes without out you evening knowing it . So why try to start something new when its only making more of a mess that inventers are cuasing.\n\nThe way Bogota is going is the best idea that I've ever heard of they couldn't of nailed it any better . They stopped a capital city of 7 millon people from using their cars . An look at the good effects it did, new restaurants where opened an upscale shopping district haved cropped up . The pitted an uneven sidewalks have been fixed an replaced by new smooth sidwalks. Even parks and sports centers haved also bloomed throughout the city, which is good because parents have more time an money to get their kids more actived in to sports an going out to play.\n\nThe last passage explanes what I've been saying less people are buying cars why invent new things . People are going unemployedment an things aren't going to get any better for our country . The governments are asking for to much plus you have taxes an the IRS right behind them waiting to grab your money that you worked hard for . Another thing that I don't get is why the President of the untied states can help other countries but yet can't even of seem to help his own country who is lossing more money as days go by . Whats going on up their in the white house we the people slecet you the president to run our country not others an help benfit us.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports the idea that studying Venus is worthy pursuit despite the dangers because the researchers want to be able to see and study the plant, it also was the closest planet to being Earth-like, and they want to be able to study\n\nVenus' geography.\n\nBecause Venus has always had such a high temperature and a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets, the researchers have been trying to send droids and robots to the planet. But, barely any of the Rovers can make the landing. In the passage it states ' Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft has ever survived the landing for more than a few hours.' it also states 'Not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more then three decades.' This shows because Venus always had been a challenging planet for humans to study.\n\nVenus, sometimes, is called the 'Evening Star' even though it isn't a star. Venus is also referred to as Earth's \"twin\", and it is the closet planet to Earth. In the text it states 'Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.' Venus also seems to have familiar features such as valleys, mountains and craters. This shows because scientist are saying that Venus still has some features that are analogous to Earth, as of today. It is also the nearest option for a planetary visit.\n\nScientist, in the passage, also can't get close enough to Venus to even study it's geography. In the passage it states 'Hovering safely far above the planet can provide only limited insight on ground conditions because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere.'. It also states' Researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else from a distance. But, the researchers would like to do a thorough mission to understand, despite the risks. This shows because they are willing to work on new innovations that would allow their machinges to lat long enough to at least get some knowledge of Venus.\n\nIn conclusion, scientists are trying everything that can, despite the dangers, to try and come up with a mission to take people or rovers to Venus and study it. Maybe get some samples and study the rest of Venus' geography. Then they can decide if it really is a sister to our planet Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The pie charts illustrate the statistical report in the UK about the number of housing owned and rented between 1991 and 2007 which divided into four categories: homeowner, social renting, private renting and social housing.\nIt clearly shown the increasing number of houses over a 16 years period in the UK. Although the growth of home owners was also obviously noted, social renting houses and social housing dropped significantly, but private renting houses remained the same.\nIn 1991, there were a 22 million total number of homes reported and rocketed to 27 million in 2007. When it comes to homeownership, it depicts that there was a 60% of total number of housing, then it suddenly rose by 10% after 16 years. There were two types of renting, the first one is social renting which consisted of 23% in 1991 before it plummeted in 2007 down to 17%. Second one is the private renting houses which remained stable at 11%. Social Housing was remarkably popular during 1991, though it noticeably declined by 4% in 2007.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System is valuable in a classroom to read students' emotional expressions. Every school wants to be able to offer the utmost help to each of their students in order to assist their success in their education, but sometimes schools are clueless when it comes to assistance. As adolescents grow and thrive, they are at the most fluctuating stage of their lives when they are going through grade school, high school, and college. Throughout this time their emotions are heightened and this sometimes makes it harder for teachers to break through to their students; however, with the Facial Action Coding System, teachers might attain a better grip on the situation.\n\nIn school, their are several different types of pupils; some catch on to topics faster than others and some need more of an explaination to understand, but they can only receive the help they need when they speak up for themselves, which some students find difficult to do. \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal\", states Dr. Huang, a professor at the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois. Since each facial expression is universal, then the Facial Action Coding System can know exactly what each student is feeling when they are introduced to new topics, without the students having to say a word. This could ultimately speed up the process of learning.\n\nSince the moment people learned how to say their first word, emotion has been the root of everything that people comprehend. People learn to succeed because they know the devastating defeat of failure and they learn to exceed their expectations because they have had their share in disappointment. In order to make a student truly remember something teachers need to place an emotional connection to that certain topic. The Facial Action Coding System will inform the teachers of the emotional reaction each student has to the lesson; then the teacher can improve their teaching techniques in order for the topic to appeal to each of their students' emotions. If their is no emotional connection to the subject a student is learning then they are most likely memorizing the topic just to pass the class.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding System would be extremely valuable to pupils and teachers. This new innovation in technology could lead to a whole new level of learning and could help schools impact their students in a better way. This system could enable teachers to know exactly what to do in order for them to really teach each one of their students and could change the way adolescents approach their education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Numerous characters deem our conventional educating program will be altered, and students will not be attending in their classroom; in contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm pupils will be studying at school. Besides this, the old educational program will be lasting as usual. I reckon the current model will surely change by the 2050s.\r\n\r\nFirstly, from my perspective, I view the revolution has already started. Thanks to cutting edge of technology, now we have more options to continue the lesson and business. For example, all institutes, universities, and companies stopped working because of coronavirus, rendering people to live under quarantine, but still,my university's teachers have been lecturing their lessons using the internet and social channels including Facebook, Google Meet, and Zoom. Hence, this trend will definitely influence the traditional tutor and students interaction.\r\n\r\nSecondly, this brand new teaching approach is more sustainable and effortless than any method had existed before. As arriving at college and coming back home takes a lot of time, and we usually do not attend class when we ill. However, we can take a course from an academy by using a mobile phone or computer today, which is simple and has no obstacle. For instance, since I began acquiring knowledge from the internet curriculum, I realized that it took fewer hours than taking a tutorial from a class. Thus, I prefer this new trend and presume its enhancement is inevitable. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, from the arguments and examples given, I firmly believe gaining information process will involve in 2050, as adolescents and children are advocating this new internet-based way of informing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of technology indicated in a classroom of students is valuable. It'd be very useful to a teacher. Their job would be easier since they'd comprehend their students better.They'd know more well how to explain everything they need to.\n\nFirst, what if a student was mad because they got irritated that they didn't understand anything...but they also don't want to ask for help? If the teacher realizes, he/szhe would be more patient/flexible and try to help. Not yell and embarass them or anything. The student wouln't get such a low score because of the effort that was given.\n\nThen, a student's grandma, etc. could've died, or that person could be the victim olf a bully. That person would be extremely sad.It just plainly wouldn't be their day. Also, they would'nt like to get bugged in their feelings moments. A teacher noticing could prevent terrible things like suicide.\n\nNext, a student can also be a little too hype. They could get seperated from their friends for focus. Plus the teacher could even blame someone else for them being talkative. Less conflict would evolve. In paragraph 1 for example, it gave us the exact percentage of each emotion felt by the Mona Lisa.\n\nFinally, I conclude this technology can help us read others better. We'd save all the questions w'd make. Time is valuable, and so are our peers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I disagree with the belief that the face on mars was created by aliens. I disagree because A team called the MOC proved to us that the face is just a natural landform by taking a picture ten times clearer than the original one. I understand that some might say it was a very cloudy day when they took the pictures, but the team took pictures a couple of years later and proved the same thing ,again.\n\nThe face on mars is just a natural landform. I believe it is just a natural landform because, when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time in 1998. The team MOC took a picture ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. Although, some people still say it was cloudy and perhaps the alien markings were hidden by haze. It is still possible that they had gotten some very clear photos. On Apirl 8, 2001, on a cloudless day in Cydonia Mars Global Surveror went in for a second look. They used a camera with absolute maximum resolution . For example, \" Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 Viking photo.\"\n\nIn conclusion, the face on Mars is just a natural landform. The pictures show landforms common around American west. The team have proved over and over again that the face on mars was not created by aliens. The cameras over the years have improved and the photographs became clearer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Source 1; What is the electoral collage?\n\nThe electoral collage is a process, not a place. The electoral collage process consists of the selection of the meeting of the electors where they vote for president and vice president and the counting of the electoral of the electoral votes by congress. The electoral collage consists of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. The Congressional delegation one for each member in the house of representives plus two for senators. The 23rd Amendment of the constiton the district of columbia is allocated 3 electors and treated like a state for purposes of the electoral collage. Each candiddate running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors. The electors are generally chosen by the candidate's political party but state has his or her own group of electors. The electors are chosen by political party. The state law vary on how the electors are selected and their responsibilities. The presindential election are held every four years. After the president election the governor prepares a Certifiate of Ascertainment.\n\nSource 2; The indefensible electoral college; why even the best laid defenses of the system are wrong.\n\nUnder the electoral collage system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors who in turn elect the president. If you live in Texas and vote for a slate of 34 Democratic electores pledged to kerry would get 34 electoral votes. On the off-chance that those electora won the statewide election they would go to Congress and Kerry would get 34 votes. The single best argument against the electoral collage is what we might call the disaster factor. The American people are lucky that 2000 fiasco was the biggest eleection crsis in a century. Back in 1960 segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with the new electors who would oppose John F Kenney. He was a great learder.\n\nSource 3; in dedense of the electoral college; five reasons the keep out despised method of choosing the president.\n\nThe number collage is widely regared as an anachronism a non- democratic method of selecting a president that ought to be overruled. The advocates of this position are correct in arguing that the electoral college method is not democrtic in a modern sense. When you vote for a president candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors. There are five reasons for reatining the Elctoral college despite its lack of democratic pedigree all are practical reason not liberal or conservative reason. In 2012 election for example Obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes. The electoral college requires a president candidate to have trans- regional appeal. The winner takes all method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates as we saw in 2012 election to focus their campagign efforts on the toss up states.\n\nAfter many years of no one has changed anything else about the election camagign or anything. I think its time to do that. Lets put a girl in the office she can do just as good as a men.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood author Narciso Rodriguez creates memoir apreciative thankful tone In memoir expressing thankful parents moving give better life He shows apreciation selfless brave deeds At one point memoir says parents much courageous thing could ever done He tells parents let know brave thinks", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Facial Action Coding System,can read peoples expressions.\n\nShould this technology be used in classrooms to detect the emotins of the students?\n\nThis technology should not be used to detect the emotions of students. The article stated that this tech, could be used to detect when a student is getting tired or bored of the lesson. This would then allow the computer to liven the lesson up, as the text states directly, \"Then it could modify the lesson,like an effective human instructor.\" This line makes it seem like it(the FACS technology) would replace teachers in the classroom.\n\nTeaches do not need technology to tell if their students are bored, as the text says, people just know what the emotions of others are. The teacher would know when, and how to modify the lesson to keep their students interested, and engaged. Would we know what the technology would do to modify the lesson? Would the students just be able to be angry at the lessons until the computer just stops giving the student lessons? Using this tech is not an alternative to having a real person tell how you feel. The teacher can help you feel better because they know how you really feel, because they have empathy. The computer can tell how you feel, but it does not what it is like to feel, so in the end it can't really help.\n\nShould the FACS tech be used in the classroom? No, because the students need a teacher to help them feel better when they are frustrated or sad, not a computer that can only try and make them happy. It also seem sthat they want this tech, to replace our teachers,which would hurt the students more than it would help them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that some people contend that economic growth is the only solution to the global problems of hunger and poverty. Others, however, argue for an end to economic growth in order to conserve our environment. I agree completely with this second view.\n\nThose who see economic growth alone as the sole cure for the tragedy of world hunger and poverty propose one major argument. Only the growth of the economies of the developing countries will provide the poor with the wealth to afford the basic necessities of life. The profits made by corporations who are responsible for this economic growth will trickle down in the form of financial benefits to be enjoyed by the starving and needy. This view has justified the age of imperialism and the destruction of the livelihood of millions in the name of progress.\n\n\n \nOn the other hand, there are countless examples to support the opposing view that economic growth results in environmental destruction. Firstly, this is true for developing countries, where lowland rainforests have been cleared and unsustainable agricultural practices introduced to produce cash crops, often for export. Secondly, it is also true for\n\ndeveloped economies. For example, the continued use of fossil fuels, which provide the energy for growing industrialisation, is causing global warming. This is leading to a rise in sea levels, which will eventually make tens of millions of poor people in Bangladesh homeless.\n\nIn conclusion, economic growth which is not sustainable must be stopped. If it is not based on meeting human needs rather than generating profits, such growth will only create more poverty and lead to more hunger in the world by destroying natural resources.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Computers positive effect people Thanks computers people arnt active much enjoying nature interacting family friends One reason true people exercising re busy playing computers People gaining weight already problem unnecissary technology There plenty sports could done soccer baseball football many People seemed manage fine without computers lot active Another reason computers nt positive effect people nt go enjoy nature People spend much time looking beautiful place animals could easily go explore around outside Take walk forest local park even beach ll see loads animals Not mention immense amount different plants flowers never noticed right behind home No computers people could quickly start enjoying nature often Thirdly reason computers ar nt positive people re interacting people Some people busy facebook myspace emailing Sometimes ar nt even talking believed dangerous unhealthy also Whats wrong giving someone far away call You actually hear voice know line Its rediculous people email friend thats street It would much simpler healthier walk house The two chat take walk play game sit infront screen whole day Computers make interacting people person lot difficult With computers people active enough nt enjoy nature often interact others much They simply positive effect people You also agree let computers stay perfessionals", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the modern world, there are a few issues more important than global climate change which has been speeding up during the last few decades. There are some people who may think that mankind should find a way to deal with this emerging issue rather than fight against it. In my opinion, this view seems insensible and immoral, which I will explain further.\n\nFirst of all, in light of the negative natural disasters, not only human beings but also many animal species could face debilitating consequences. While humans can protect themselves with the help of their scientific and technological advances, other living species are largely vulnerable to famine, loss of natural habitat or even extinction. For example, due to global warming, many polar animals, namely polar bears are suffering a great loss and ultimately death as they largely depend on the polar cap to find food and shelter. Therefore, even if humans could find an alternative way to survive the catastrophe, there can be no chance for some of these vulnerable species. \n\nMoreover, even if the present generation could withhold the challenges of climate change, it will likely become harder and harder for future generations. This is because, if the current situation should continue for several decades, it would become more difficult for future generations to tolerate the aftermath. Therefore, it seems immoral and selfish to offer such hardships for the forthcoming. \n\nOn the other hand, there are some arguments stating that people should learn to live with the challenging aspects of global warming and other climate change instead of trying to prevent it. However, it should be well noted that temperature shifts and their consequences should be prevented and avoided at all costs.\n\nIn conclusion, the prevention of climate change and global warming crisis should be well addressed and attempted by our current generation as it can help not only mankind, but many other living species and our future generations as well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Sport is the main reason for the different changes in modern reality. Some people believe that more important to spend capital on propagation a healthy lifestyle than for people who have some illness.I totally disagree with that statement because of human's rights and unusefulness of opposite suggestion.In this essay, I shall the reasons for the topic further.\r\n\r\nFirstly, nowadays in the community,all people have the opportunity to get treatment from medicine sphere. It is the fundamental requirement which the government have to satisfy for citizens.Also,the activity as do not give chance for treatment is an unmoral and egoistic.That is why doctors and nurses save individuals' lives every day without break time . For instance, It is impossible that a person will never ill if he lives a healthy behaviour.Every person at least one time get ill during all journey.\r\n\r\nSecondly, promoting a healthy lifestyle is unuseful. The reason for that is the fact that no one has a limitless life. Everyday many people die due to suddenly occasions such as natural disaster, cars collision and so on. For example, the body loves sport ,eat only fresh and useful food, however,he has cancer. Nevertheless,that information he can not enjoy life again as past because society made an incorrect decision.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, I believe that spend money for treatment is more necessary than for making a healthy behaviour common. The cause for that is an idea that life is an invaluable thing which a person can not buy or sell. Therefore everyone has the opportunity to take medical help.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" the author gives many good reasons as to why driverless cars are the next big thing. Driverless cars will have driver alert features to them but the question is will they function correctly and not fail us causing an even bigger mitsake? According to cofounder Sergey Brin drdiverless cars are the next big thing for the future. It is no longer flying cars it is now driverless cars. Brin is a believer that a driverless car will fundamently change the world. As exciting and wonderful a driverless car sounds its is not a good idea. Technology brings many new wonders and fasinations, but the technology that will be used for a driverless car will eventually fail the driver.\n\nA driverless car seems very intresting and many good ideas and opinions are being published to the public but will the true story about driverless cars ever make it through to the public? No because the manufactuer will always find something good to say about the car whenever the public says something negative. A driverless car will be another mistake to our generation of new ideas. The author of the article said in paragraph 7, \" They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills. \" Then later it also stated, \" This means the human driver must remain alert. \" The human driver needs to remain alert at all times because we will never know when the driverless car will need human assistance. Leading to the fact the already the car hasnt been made but they already know that the car will need human skills at times. Already the cars technology cannot be trusted. As the human driver you will get distracted or may fall asleep. You may not even know the car is going to need assistance at times and before you know it your at risk for a crash the driverless car haas caused. Drivers will also rely to much on their car because they will thik it is so up to date on technology that it wont fail the driver. The human driver may go out to a party one night and get drunk. The human driver won't care because the car will take them back home safe and sound as they were told. Will it really though? Along the way the technology may stop working and before you know it the drunk driver will be behind the wheel not only putting himself in danger but everybody else on the road.\n\nSome other issues with the car may also occur. For example the driver alert functions may stop working out of nowhere. In the acrticle it stated, \" GM has devloped driver's seats that vibrate when the vehicle is in dnager. \" The vibrating chair may stop functioning correctly and the driver will not know. The driver may not also know how to properly use it and may put the car in a mode that isnt supposed to be in at the moment. Who still reads the instructions? That is a very low number and many people just jump straight into using the object. Drivers will be to excited and they will just jump into the roads and not know how to properly use it. They will have to read the instructions while on the road and then what will happen? The driver may come up with a situation where the car needs human assistance and the driver won't know what is happening and they will start to freak out and just get themselves and the car all worked up. The driverless car will bring up accident rates higher. One of the many rates we as a country are trying to minimize as much as possible.\n\nIf the driverless car was to crash and cause a death to somebody who is just walking down the street or in another car, who will be most likely blamed for the cause it won't be the manufacturers. It will be the human drivers fault and be charged with many things that maybe wasnt evenn the drivers fault. For example the cars technology might fail, technology will not always be up to date, then the car goes out of countrol and the driver may not know what to do then the driver will have all the issues on his hands.\n\nThere are planty more reasons as to why a driverless car will just be another mistake of our generationbut those are a few. Would you want to put your child or somebody you love out in the roads risking somebody to put them in danger just because the human driver does not know how to use a driverless car? We as a country are trying to bring down death rates and a driverless car will just make the rates higher. Rates as in accident rates and death rates. Rates that we should be trying to minimize as much as possible. Driverless cars should not be part of our generations future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Peoples emotions can be hard to detect most times. Personally, my friends have gotten very good at faking emotions. Detecting how someone really feels in nearly impossible for the human brain. For example, in the article it states that the Mona Lisa is, \"83% happy, 9% disgusted, 6% fearful, and 2% angry.\" Being able to detect all of those emotions in just looking or talking to someone just isn't as easy as it seems. Thats why they came up with \"the Facial Action Coding System.\" This system has been developed to improve the accuracy in perceiving ones emotions.\n\nFrst, the way this system will work is when the computer constructs a 3-D compter model of a face. The computer will be able to detect the emotion of a person when they see the muscles in their face. To be able to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom will be very benificiary when it comes to how they feel about the thing the school is teaching them. If we continue to advance in technology like we have, then using the computers for lessons will be able to detect weather the child is interested or not. The article states that, \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becomming confused or bored.\" That way when a child is confused, for those who are too scared to ask for help, the teacher could be alerted and try their best to help the child or maybe even change lessons.\n\nSecondly, the computer system could also be very helpful in a school because of teenage kids and their problems. If a student is feeling very down, then the computer could detect that and try to get help for them. In the world today there are many kids who suffer from depression and anxiety, sometimes school can be too much for them. Therefore, when doing school work if the computer can detect the sadness or overwhelming confusion causing their anxiety to rise it could help them out a lot. The article states that, \"In the real smile, the zygomatic major lift the corners of your mouth, while a fake smile the mouth is stretched sideways, using zygomatic major and a different muscle, the risorius.\" This would help the computer detect kids from being actually happy, or just faking it for everyone else.\n\nThird, the computer system could help with kids who struggle with anger. Maybe school makes them angry, or they struggle with the work. With the school fights in the past, and future, i belive this would help detect how kids feel. The computer could watch what the child proceeds to look up on the internet, while also detecting how the child feels. This way, if a child shows signs of harm to themselves or to others, the computer could inform the school and try to give help to the kid. I believe this would only improve the safety of schools while also offering help to the ones that need it.\n\nFourth, I believe the computer system could help those of us who tend to get very bored or tired. This way when a child is bored or tired the teacher has a way of fixing the problems, or doing more interesting ideas to help you stay focused. Personally, i tend to get very bored when school comes up to topic, so if my teacher had a way of making it interesting for me that would be awesome! I also tend to get very tired so if my teacher is alerted of a child getting sleepy, we could do exercise or stretches to help wake us up.\n\nThis computer system would help school coorporations tremendlously because of all the problems kids go through. I believe that every school computer should have this sytem, because i think the techers could have a chance to keep children interested and awake. This could possibly improve attendance and graduation percetages. Getting a kid engaged and interested can be very difficult but i belive this stystem would help a lot! As the article states, \" Whoever thought that making faces could reveal so much about the science of emotions!\" Truly amazing and helpful!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the contemporary era, the world has been experiencing several environmental issues including climate change. To overcome these issues some people believe that rising fuel prices will assist to overcome prevailing issues. I partially believe, that increasing fuel prices somehow help to reduce environmental issues, yet it will have grave effects on the economic condition of the world.\r\n\r\n To begin with, increasing fuel prices will consequently affect the usage of it, people would be more inclined towards other several methods which require less fuel consumption, and this would result in the reduced pollution. Moreover, a scientist would be encouraged to invent more sustainable technologies which do not require fuel. For instance, the government would allocate more resources to research and technologies so that scientists would come up with more environmental-friendly technologies.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the cost of petroleum and other energy resources has the potential to build global recession and demolish global peace severely, because there are several public and private sectors including transportation energy generation sector and industrial production run operations on oil. Therefore, increasing oil prices will affect the cost of production which would result in an increase in Inflation. To illustrate this with an example, Pakistan is a developing country and has fewer resources to allocate to technologies. However, most of the sectors rely on fuel. Thus, a slight change in the petroleum charges a result brings a huge change in the overall cost of the products consequently, resulting in inflation.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, the rising cost of fuel has both beneficial and negative outcomes for people. however, given that detrimental implications take precedence over positive ramifications. I believe that increasing the fuel cost only developed and economically stable countries can afford,otherwise individuals of the nation have to suffer from being deprived of amenities of daily life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The unpredictable progress of society brings several notable notions with them which are interconvertible the rising tendency of education is one of them, many people claim that studying in universities is a great career option, while, others reject this notion. To this, the essay will further elaborate on both views and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.\n\nWithout any qualms, education is a key to \n\nsuccess which means, education plays a vital role in a student's life. Studying in college and university has the majority of career options which has benefits for their upcoming future. For example, After getting Degree people to have options for jobs like teacher, doctor, engineer and so on. Thus, it is only possible if people have master's degrees from college.\n\nOn the other school of thought, getting a job after completing school never goes full life. In addition, people just complete their today's needs by doing small jobs . For instance, people who worked in malls or factories cannot do the same job after 10 years because the owner changed their duty every year. Therefore, after a few ,years people do nothing \n\nIn conclusion, although, it is a long period of time to continue studies at universities it has a secure future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are lots of benifits in both party of sports which is group sports and individual sports. Many argue that one is better than another. By analyzing my personal experience, both side advantages and disadvanteges will be discussed.\nHealth, the main factor that make people doing the sport in some extent. Many sports help body to increase the metabolism and keep our figure look slim. For example, like swiming, the sport is well-known for beauty body buidling, many reaserch show that water pressure form muscle into more dynamic beautiful shape than any other sport regardless of safty issues which part of events were practice in open water.\nCompare to swiming, a group sport like soccer game need 22 players participate into the field. Average soccer player have very powerful core strenth, in order to compete in this match, soccer player need to wear certain protection to prevent from injury such as foot pad to reduce the impact from side kick from other players and ankel protector. Undoubtly, soccer players have most strong body among many sports. However, they are the group of people most likely get injuryed more frequently.\nSport also can build trust and friendship between people. In this aspect, both individual sports and group sports are proven that partipating in group games or competing with another player on a 1v1 match can increase the improvement of sportsmanship between people. Like olympic motto, \"stonger, faster and higher\", a good sport can bring people together and compete each other in a fair and friendly enviornment. However, individual sport may get boring faster than group sports due to lack of competition.\nIn conclusion, neither group sports nor individual sports are perfect in every aspects. It is important to found a sport suit for each individual personal interest. All kinds of sports always carry benifits with dangerous if people do not do it well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is no doubt that we need to stick to a healthy lifestyle, which helps us stay mentally and physically strong. And the question of whether to establish laws that balance our diet or to leave this decision to society is extremely topical today. I tend to feel that law is one of the strongest ways of making public control their ratio. \r\n\r\nFirstly, I do accept that giving freedom can help the population to acquire healthier eating habits by themselves, moreover, they would probably follow them willingly without severity. As it is said “the Forbidden fruit is always sweet”. But on the other hand, the poorness of diversity and availability could be seen as well. Having a lack of expensive nutritious food society will rather choose fast semi-finished products. Besides, there is a possibility of having strong allergies for some individuals, as a result nut or citrus allergic will not get enough vitamins and healthy fats for their body.\r\n\r\nTurning to another viewpoint, most people are law-abiding and it could be a great possibility for the government to improve that sphere among their inhabitants. A good illustration of this is Norway, where junk food in both public and state schools is forbidden. That law helps parents not to worry about their children’s ratios during the day. Above all, the aforementioned availability will probably raise and in contrast obesity in society will instantly decline. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, I do understand the opposing view, which is that health is a matter of personal choice. Nevertheless, I suggest that the pushy method is the quickest and easiest way to achieve public health within a country. Notably, though, I think that needs to be a gradual process, based on careful support rather than sudden demanding law.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the advent of new technological innovations, the majority of human job roles are becoming replaced by machines at a significant rate. This trend may potentially enhance the productivity and efficiency in the final output, but may also involve some significant drawbacks.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, the industrial, fast moving consumer goods and many other sectors have adapted robots and machines in prodcutions. This has proven to be successfull as these technologies have improved productivity and efficiency of tasks done by machines compared to humans. In addition, automated technology might potentially reduce errors that could be high with the involvement of a man. For example, Japanese organizations firmly believe in using automation in manufacturing where scientific research has proven that machines could improve prodcutivity by 80% compared to humans. Therefore. it is evident that automated technology could provide myraid of benefits. \r\n\r\nDespite the obvious advantages, replacing human job roles with modern technological innovations might cause severe drawbacks. Firstly, this would severely hit the job market where individuals will be challenged to find suitable occupations. A prime example, in the UK, due to emergence of Covid-19 many supermarkets have installed automated machines replacing cashiers resulting to increase unemployment rate in the country. Secondly, when all aspects get machinized, people tend to be physicaly inactive causing potential health issues. For instance, stress and anxiety owing to lack of jobs and inactive lifestyle as a result of automation. Hence, the drawbacks are clear. \r\n\r\nIn my view. I strongly believe that we should strike a balance between what need to be automated and what should not. Although, machines and robot technology would improve productivity and efficiency to a certain level, customer service related occupations need to be man oriented as machines cannot replace the personal touch. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, automated technology replacing humans would certainly create drawbacks and benefits. However, as humans, it is imparative to understand the extent this can be executed as longterm results might be disadvantagous.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How would you feel if you pulled up to a stoplight, and the person next to you was in the front seat, but wasn't driving? It would seem odd at first, but unfortuantely, there is a very good chance that that is the way things could be in the near future. Personally, I do not think that driverless cars should be invented. However, there are people that think that being able to go somewhere in a car without having to actually drive it would be a great idea. Driverless cars are not a good idea, because the cars may be more expensive since they are driverless, there could be malfunctions since the car would be made of new technology, and the people in the car would have to know when to be paying attention, in case of an emergency.\n\nThe first negative effect of having driverless cars, is the fact that the cars would probably be more expensive. Since the technology to make the cars would be expensive, the cars might be expensive themselves. If the cars are too expensive, no one would want to buy them unless they had a lot of money. Also, if not enough people are buying the cars, they might have to get discontinued eventually. If the cars had to get discontinued, everyone who already had one of those cars would be in hot water, becuase car repair people would not be able to fix their cars. This now leads me into my second reason why driverless cars should not be made.\n\nWhat if the car has malfunctions? If there isn't an actual person driving the car, they won't be able to control the speed. The person will just have to trust the car to drive itself, and hope that it doesn't mess up, and accidently over accelerate and cause an accident. If the car did mess up while driving and caused an accident, someone would have to figure out whose fault it is. The article \"Driverless Cars are Coming,\" made a good point by mentioning that if there is an accidnet, whose fault would it be - the driver or the company who made the car? There would defintiely be a big legal case to arise considering that the \"driver\" isn't technically driving the car.\n\nThe final reason that driverless cars should not be made, is because people would have to be able to learn to control the car. However, a positive thing about having driverless cars is that people would not need to take drivers ed anymore, but with a driverless car, you would still have to learn the ways of road. You would still need to be paying attention on the road. Just because your car would be driverless, doesn't mean that everyone's car would be driverless. For instance, if a wreck occured and you weren't paying attention in your driverless car, you wouldn't know whose fault it was, or if there was a way you could have stopped the wreck from happening. Going back to the text, the article mentions in paragraph seven that \"This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires.\"\n\nTo conclude, driverless cars should not be created. Driverless cars is a situation where the bad outweighs the good. There might be some positives to having a driverless car, but driverless cars seems to risky. With accidents happening, because people are not paying attention to their driverless car is not something I want to be involved in. Driverless cars are not the best idea, because they could possibly be more expensive than our regular cars, they could possibly have malfunctions to put the \"driver\" and others at risk, and the \"driver\" may not have to take drivers ed, but they would have to learn how to work their new car, which means that they would need to be paying attention. A driverless car is not something that I would invest in, but I could see them becoming popular in the near future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College is a way of deciding the President by having an amount of electors for each state. And the President that gets the most votes wins all [In most states] the electoral votes. Elecoral college is a great way to decide the President because having every one decide the President from popular votes is not fair because most people vote for what they hear from other people and if the others are voting for a President they are going to get more than one vote from one person. so having the Electoral College is the more fair way of deciding the votes.\n\nPeople that are chosen are more cnoledgable and smarter to vote than people that vote just to say that they voted without looking and knowing why they voted for that President and not for the other. Because in the passage it says \"It is entierly possible that the winner of the electroal vote will not win the national popular votes\" and that suggests the point of this essay.\n\nThe Electoral College foucese more on all states than the popular votes. because big states like (Florida, texes, etc) have way more people than other states so if a state has 15 electoral votes and a diffrent state had 11 when the first state has double the amount of people in the second state. so that means that the President has to focuse on all the states so no state feels that their votes don't matter.\n\nThat is why the U.S should keep the Electeral College to decide the president because its a smarter and a better way to decide who is going to rule this country.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In opinion I agree benefits society The reasons support decision lots buisnesses use computers work fast food resturants use computers schools use computers Computers needed reasons My first reason buisneses use computers work Workers use computers designing filing peoples names type papers essays People designing industry nt use paper pencil anymore use designing softwares work Instead filing cabinet people workers use computers put patients clients workers Computers hold information files cabinets People also type papers essays work For example news reporters write report type company order get publish If workers buesness need use computers file type design clothes games My second reason fast food resrurants even resturants use computers instead using cash registers For example use technology type peoples orders amount pay Back used use cash registers order get money need click button locked using computers Every resturant least touch screen computer use So resturants need computers survive world My third reason schools need computers students teachers write reports file students name grades Students classes write reports projects even class work Teachers need computers file students name grades information instead using cabinet Teachers also use computers make homework pages need print stuff word So schools use need computers students teachers use In conclusion I agree computers benefit society buisnesses need work design file fast food resturants take peoples orders use schools students teachers use So thats benefits society", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although adding mooring mast top Empire State building clever idea multiple problems concerns accommodate new feature For example even cable fastened strong enough one thousandfoot dirigible would add stress buildings frame causing building grow weaker much quicker without In addition alter dirigibles large effect building would neccssary dirigible s weight wind pressure transmitted way building s foundation nearly impossible considering distance feet large factor building futuristic structure Sixty thousand dollars collected see better support building s structure", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author strongly explains why the exploration of Venus is a worthy pursuit despite of the dangers and challenges it presents.\n\nVenus is occasionally the closest planet in distance to Earth. Also, its geological composition, density and size, are very similar to Earth. These similarities between Venus and Earth are attracting astronauts and NASA to further explore this planet so more information can be found and analyzed.\n\nAs stated by the author, one major challenge of exploring Venus is that its environmental dangers and challenges make it difficult even for spacecrafts to land. \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide\", \"sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere\", temperatures \"over 800 degrees Farenheit\" and atmospheric pressure being \"90 times greater\" are just some factors that make landing a spacecraft on Venus difficult. Spacecrafts that have been sent to Venus have so far been unmanned since no spacecraft has survived landing for more than a few hours.\n\nDespite several dangers preventing a spacecraft form landing, astronomers are fascinated by Venus's environment as it is believed to have supported forms of life in the past. It even has similar geological features compared to Earth such as valleys, mountains, and craters and was probably covered largely with oceans.These fascinating features call for further exploration which is halted by such difficult challenges and dangers to humans.\n\nIn preparation for the future, NASA has created possible solutions which may allow spacecrafts to land on Venus and survive for a couple weeks. The possible solutions being analyzed are designed to avoid unfriendly ground conditions by hovering above the planet. These conditions above the ground are bearable with the right technology, but not survivable for humans. This great challenge is what attracts humans to further explore the planet so they can learn more about its fascinating environment, geological features, and possibly gain more scientific explanation for the unsolved mysteries in science. The author states how obtaining information from Venus may be difficult due to its ground conditions \"because most forms of light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere, rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective.\" Therefore, sending spacecrafts to Venus may have no use since it will be unable to gather pictures and videos. Furthermore, the passage states that, \"researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance.\" If researchers are not able to land the spacecraft, or the spacecraft cannot survive the dangerous ground conditions, then no samples will be gathered for testing.\n\nThe author very clearly explains how humans are struggling to send spacecrafts to Venus and how its dangers and challenges are unbearable. Althought the author shows strong desire to explore Venus and learn more about it, the author does not fully explain the benefits of exploring Venus and how gathering new information from Venus will benefit humankind despite the challenges and dangers faced.\n\nThe author does express his fascination and determination to explore Venus when he says, \"Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" The author sucessfully communicates his hopes of overcoming the dangers and challenges by showing how technology is providing solutions, but there are not as many incentives described. Hence, the author describes the dangers of exploring Venus, but doesn't prove that studying Venus is such a worthy pursuit since the passage has a greater focus on the dangers rather than the outcomes if the challenges are overcome successfully.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars, everyone needs a car. So they can transport there selfs to and from where ever they need to go.\n\nCars should not drive them selfs, even though that would be a good idea most people like me wouldnt go for it. yes it has been proven That less wrecks are caused. But if your like me youd want control over your car no matter what. It could mess up and wreck you into a tree you'd never be able to tell if you were about to wreck because you didnt have control.\n\nDo i think its a good idea ? Yes and no. would I ride in a car that had control over its self ? No.\n\nI think the smarter roads is a way better idea. But there is a down fall to that. It would take way to long to cover the world in \"smarter roads.\" We dont have time to wait. people should just drive responable or don't drive at all!\n\nI also think that they should just make a car or truck that tells you when your going off the road or someting like that maybe it would help prevent wrecks.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "On Earth our scientists have always been trying to be successful with landing on other planets within our solar system. The want to one day be successful without any casualties or lost lives. The author of this article feels that Venus is their next best shot. It has been stated that Earth's astronomers are intreged by Venus\"s Earth-like structure. Scientists have also been working on a mission to collect things like rocks and soil from the grounds of Venus. NASA has also been talking about an ol technology they used a long time ago. All of these ideas all present a risk but scientists are willing to take them.\n\nThere are rumors that say that Venus is a lot like Earth. Structure wise.\n\nThe text says, \" The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familier features such as valleys, mountians, and craters.\" All of those features are things we see here on Earth. Our scientists think that all of these features appear on Venus. They are lead also to believe that Venus was once made of many oceans. These oceans also could lead you to believe that there were also different forms of life on Venus.\n\nScientists are so eger to get on Venus they have been trying to construct a mission to travel there. This mission would consist of them collecting samples of things on Venus. the article syas, \" More importantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else from a distance.\" That is them saying they need to be able to get up close and get the real samples thet need. This trip could result in some casualties bu they are willing to take the risk.\n\nNASA has been looking back trying to find a way to ge their technology on Venus. they found an old technology called mechanical computers. they were made back in the 1800s and were used during World War II. The article says, \" The thought of computers existing in those days may sound shocking, but these devices make calculations by using gears and levers and do not require electronics at all.\" these devices can help them be able to get their technology onto Venus.\n\nAll of these risks are dangerous and risky, but the author feels that it is worthy of them pursuing the risk. they feel that they have they technology they need. They also are so passionate about the idea of it that they are willing to take the risk of sending people to the planet to collect samples. The author believes that Venus is worhty enough to take the riskand doesn't seem like he is one to back down. Alll of these ideas present a\n\nrisk but Scientists are willing to take them and that's what they are going to do.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are some arguments that the parents should take some responsibility for their children's actions and they should receive the punishment for the same. I disagree with the statement, as no parent would encourage their kids to be criminals, and it would be completely unfair to their other ones. \r\n\r\nEvery parent in the world would like their kids to be successful and want good for them, no matter how bad things they had done in their life or suffered difficulties. In addition to this, parents do their job to get a good education for their young ones as well as motivate them not to repeat their mistakes. However, kids these days become a part of the bad company and do not listen to them and commit crimes, therefore, schools should keep an eye on each kid's behaviour and report to their parents to stop these incidents for the sake of everyone. \r\n\r\nAnother reason not to punish the parents are for their other kids, as it would be completely unfair to other siblings. In that case, they will be punished for things which they have not even done as well as it would create a negative impact on their upbringing. Furthermore, if one kid would be punished it will become a lesson for the 2nd child and society not to commit any unlawful act ever again. Additionally, if the community punished the parents then children will be raised in foster homes and most of the kids raised there mostly become violent and criminal. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, parents should not be penalised as they motivate their little ones to do the best things for themself and not to break the law and become a criminal. As well as it will become a bad example for society and their other kids.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter helps many situations throughout life When angry sad nervous even mourning Laughing good times old friend realizing situation nt scary sad really quite hilarious Many times throughout life things happened made someway another upset people close always helped making laugh Realizing whatever happening bad I thought Which made look positive lighthearted side things A specific situation happened I nine years old In school kids time another say something hurtful without thinking While parents teach children better seems nature make thoughtless observations times hurting others drawing attention flaws I sitting class working art project There three kids group talking knows many years ago But boy starts talking weight tough muscular yes eight nine years old thought cool So turns says CAPS shape fat This crushed I suppose reply I tried act nt bother I went finish art project I could help hear repeating head evil words stung My eyes started tear soon drop water appeared paper I could hold back tears I waiting bell ring I could get terrible place go home people smarter say things like boy As I got bus I already feeling emotions rising surface Starting bawl mom opened door She exclaimed CAPS s matter happened tears I relayed terrible scene She felt bad asked boys name I told She began laugh say That chubby kid buck teeth oh honey nt let bother nt shape I started laugh realizing buck teeth The tears stopped coming eyes I really realized whole situation He thoughtless bragging statement even true I fat Laughing made feel better realize silly Laughter really help realize nt bad I still little embarrassed I Laughing also got mind said Of course even though said thoughtless comment I would said thoughtless commend flaws But laughing buck teeth made feel better Laughing also made see I making big deal little situation also", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "For me I'm againts with this technology because you can't just show others what they feel because some people may not like to show their feelings with others. Sometimes technology makes mistakes too technology is not always right. Can technology actully calculate emotions like math homework? I don't think so because not because they are showing sad emotion it doesn't mean that they are sad. The new technology might sometimes wrong.\n\nDoes expression in the mirror suggest an emotion? of course you can tell what emotion what others is showing in the mirror. Can computer tell what emotion does a person is showing by just looking at it of course not. Can technology indicate the difference between a genuine smile and forced one. I don't think computer can detect a fake smile because it didn't say that the new technology can tell if a person is showing fake smile or real smile. whoever thought that making making faces could reveal so much about the science of emotion.\n\nTo an expert, faces don't lie, these muscular clues are sometimes used to spot when a smiling politician or celebrity isn't being truthful. Other people can tell other people faces if they are not being truthful. I know that technology can solve anything but we made them we program them thats why technology can detect our emotions, that means that technology is not the one who is telling our emotion its humans.\n\nUsing this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is not right because this emotion is private for other people. technology should stay away from other peoples business. It's not right for the technologies to just go and detect other students emotion. Students have the right of privacy for their own self. We should not use this technology. For some people they are ashame of their to share their emotion with other people.\n\nTechnology should give privacy for the students. Even though Scientist proved that they could detect someone's emotion. We know that technology is important but we have to use it in a right use not using technology just to detect the students emotions. I can tell that mona lisa smile is fake because she didn't show her teeth and she don't have a big smile.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The thing that i am against in \"Driveless CArs Are Coming,\" is why would someone think of something that unsafe for human kind.But what if the technology fail and someone get hurt or gets killed. Who is there to blame cause no one is driving the car? So who do me blame? The car? To me i dont think they should be invented at all because the car can have a bad malfuntion and someone can get hurt.Someone could die just by some little thing going wrong with the car. So but on the other hand it has some good things about it too even though i wouldnt perfur for anyone to have one. When your under the influence you have a safe way to get from where your at to home.With out anyone or anything being damaged or hurt or broken. Or what if you have an important call when your driving and you look off the road while your talk there is someone still in controll of the car when your not. Someone is still there helping you driving. But at the same time im still againts it and i dont think it will be that safe for anyone at time cause bad things happen with car now we have one thats driving for us than something can happen and everyone in the car dies. So this \"Driverless Car\" should have never been thought of being made because it not safe very dangeous.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Seagoing Cowboys program, is an opportunity of a lifetime. After World War II was over many countries were left in ruins. So the UNRRA made a program to help these contries called the ¨ Seagoing Cowboys \". We take care of animals that will be shipped overseas. Also helping people by giving food and also seeing Europe, China, and Acropolis in Greece. You can also find time to have fun on board playing a veritiy of games after unloading the animals.\n\nIn the text it states, ¨ It was 1945 , World War II was over in Europe, and many countries were left in ruins. UNRRA hired ¨Seagoing Cowboys¨ to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shipped overseas.¨\n\nText also stated that, ¨ Besides helpling people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special. Luke also found time to have fun on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. The cowboys played baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed.¨\n\nParticipating in the Seagoing Cowboys program allows you to experience adventures and visit many unique places. But being a Seagoing Cowboy is much more than an adventure, it can open up a new world for you. Its a grateful opportunity to take. It can make you more aware of people of other countries and their needs. So sign up today, from a fellow Seagoing Cowboy, Luke Bomberger.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that driverless cars should be accepted. Theses cars arent really much dangerous. The cars can since when its in danger so it sends vibration to the seats and also, has blinking lights. They also, state that drivers have to stay alert and they have cameras to make sure that the driver is paying attention so, furthermost these cars should be acceptable. I also,think that the driverless cars are a bad idea because everyone isnt as alert as others.\n\nIf the car has to pull into the driveways and out of them this is very safe you will be focused on paying attention to your surroundings. If your not paying attention to your surroundings others would be alert of whats going on due to your lights blinking. Alll of these things makes it really safe to drive a driveless cars. When your backing into something the car will alert you and your seat will vibrate that is really getting you more alert. The car also announces when its time for your part so people will be notified that its there time to take the will.\n\nThere's also some bad about driverless cars. What if a person who buys a driverless car is death and cant hear? What if someone who buys a driverless car cannot feel? Those are some negative affects. What if someone getsinto the car not knowing that you will have to know how to drive and get into a car wreck beacuse they dont know whats going on? These cars can really be a positive and negative affect on peoples lives.\n\nI personally think\n\nthat the person who buys a driverless car should have a drivers license and be aware of whats going on. I think that everyone with this car should be tested with the car also so people can know whats going on in the cars and when your not paying attention. These cars can really change hidtory and be a positive impact on peoples lives and also negative depending on how you treat your authority with this car. I think this car should be a privledge.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What go library In earlier times libraries used place went study They computers go look work educational book library Is truly people libraries people look vulgar books magazines movies A library meant place go work peace helpful resource educational books But go library tempted look books nt looking Instead could computer whole time playing games sort The possibilites endless People could go library check magazine movie book pornagrophy drugs achlocol worse Is really want kid accidently pick library Presonally I witnessed little kid pick porn magazine library mom grab fast chance look magazine The library used treat young kids accidently looking materials happening library The music one could listen also bad child could listen Then want keep listening Yes world huge impact put library drugs sex scandals achlocol seem teenagers intereseted point young life But library community building stopping one coming easily getting vuglar things The thoughts youth completely swayed watch read listen And needs controled Women children find materials offensive These materials need censored right Libraries safe place people go study get book tempted look something looking Many people find offensive Yes end libraries great place people use libraries right reasons materials need censored libraries", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In our rather futuristic society for a number of reasons people are getting more interested in the past of their hometowns. With the help of rapidly ameliorating technology their desire to learn about the history can be easily put into life. But what are the roots of such eagerness? First of all, the hectic lifestyle that we all experience nowadays does not leave any space for calmness and peace in our souls, so most of the people - especially adolescence - are struggling with finding their feet, whilst having a broad spectrum of knowledge about the world around really gives a feeling of confidence in the impermanence of life. In addition to this, it is said that being aware of the past you can change the future. Consequently, if people want to live a better life in more comfortable environment, they have to explore the history of their homes in order not to repeat past mistakes. For this aims we are lucky to have multiple tools to carry out research into the subject. Despite libraries being considered as an old-fashioned and not necessarily convinient approach of learning, there are actually quite a few books and magazines which are not available online but which are extremely helpful when it comes to the local interests. News, photos, articles and interviews with different people published in old magazines indeed provide with a clear image of past events. Brousing the internet forums is also a great idea to find new information and make friend with mutual objectives. Putting everything into a nutshell, learning about the history of your place not only builds a sense of confidence but also might have a big impact on our future way of life,", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some individuals' opinions that doubtlessly artificial intelligent machines take over all jobs from humans. Personally, I think that cutting edge technologies have already reduced manpower in several sectors and inevitably AI technologies will reign all sectors regardless of job types. The aim of this essay is to discuss the argument and it will explain by using relevant examples.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, it is important to bear in mind that the failure rate which is made by humans can be reduced with artificially intelligent robots. In this way, the standardization of products can be provided and this means that factories and industry are able to produce their product at a standard level of quality. Furthermore, there is no doubt that AI robots can make the same process in a shorter time and more accurately when compared to manpower. For instance, AI robots have started to be used in surgeries and as a consequence of it, human mistakes can be declined and also the reliability of operation had increased. \r\n\r\nSecondly, breakthrough innovations in the machine learning field show that these technologies can be used in every area, even the arts. Many people thought that machines and AI would never generate art and craft works 20 years ago. Contrary to this belief, people have shown that everything is possible with the development of AI and they have been starting to think about why it can not be replaced with all jobs in the future. For example, with the GAN technologies, new paintings and artworks can be produced by using deep neural networks. Consequently, this revolution showed that machine learning and artificial intelligence technologies can be replaced with all jobs in the future, even the unpredictable ones such as painting, writing poems and novels. \r\n\r\nTo summarize, although plenty of individuals thought that AI and machine learning technologies can not be used for many purposes such as arts and crafts, artificial intelligent developments showed that everything can be possible in the computer ages. Especially, it should be considered that the ratio of human mistakes can be reduced and also more efficient production processes can be provided by the AI machines hence, doubtlessly artificially intelligent robots will take over all kinds of jobs in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Road safety is a more essential and concerning matter. Therefore, a substantial proportion of individuals think that the only way to enhance welfare is to make inflexible rules and regulations because carelessness while driving can lead to severe accidents. I partially agree with the given statement. Well-being has several other alternative ways to counter this problem.\r\n\r\nTo commence with, the administration can either make strict constitutions or punish because they cannot do both commodities. Videlicet, when they make laws to tackle road accidents, but it is extremely hard to follow natives. On the other hand, when the authorities are making inflexible punishment. They cannot improve the economy in the correct way. For example, more than two-fifths of natives are died every year due to the usage of smartphones while driving. The fatality rate has massively risen. Thus, governments should take some useful action as compared to make guidelines. It is extremely brutal for the population because it is a sudden stop.\r\n\r\nIn addition, the fact cannot be denied that several individuals are not well-educated. They do not have proper information regarding harmlessness. For instance, the department of education in the USA revealed that more than one-fifth of inhabitants are not educated, but they should consider or buy cars or bicycles even when it has the proper skill to drive a car. Nevertheless, they have less information regarding regulations. As a result, education is an essential part of an individual's life and leadership should give free coaching to control the mortality rate.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, unquestionably, when the authority makes strict laws or punishments natives cannot follow the right way. They need to provide higher and quality education to residents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Emotions are a daily part of our days because they express who someone is right through them. Technology is advancing day by day, it is taking over the world and it's not taking a break. In my humble oppinion it\n\nis valuable that the use of technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is vauable because by looking you can't normaly ever tell how someone feels.\n\nHowever it can get a little creppy, once in a while. I personally belive that this is accurate information. As stated in line 1 of paragrah 1 \"She's 83 percent happy. 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful and 2 percent angry\" The computer constructs a 3-D model of the face including all of the 44 major muscles that the face includes. Eckman has classfied six basic emotion just like in the movie inside out, happiness, joy, fear, surprise, anger, disgust and ssdness.\n\nin conclusion emotions are big part of our lives and in this prompt It's cool to see how far technology's come and is advancing eveyday and I think it's certainly valuable to read emotionsal expressions of students in a classroom as we can never understand what someone is going through.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People in the present day want to check the information about the accommodation where they live in. Most of the reasons they search for it are concerned with the safety issue and previous tenants by finding out from their neighbours or internet. \r\n\r\nThere are many factors for people to be curious about their home. First of all, they are worried about the quality of the building structures because of unexpected earthquakes or disasters. So they have to enquire about the construction company of that place whether they are reliable or not when they develop this area of this building. Moreover, family members also ask for some information about the security system of that building to prevent thieves and criminals due to their safety. Another point for them to look for is the previous dwellers of that place whether they are good or not, avoiding being haunted by the deceased tenants if they suicide themselves or not. In addition, it is also important to have good neighbours if they live for a long time there. For example, it would not pleasant to live where the surroundings are noisy and not coming from well-behaved families. Therefore it is very necessary to know the situation of their living environment. \r\n\r\nWhen they do so to check for the surrounding, they have to surf from the internet about the company that has erected this area. So this is one of the ways that they can get much information about it while tracking on the internet. However, they cannot believe everything from the website, so they have to clarify with their neighbours or friends who are experts in the housing business. Meanwhile, they can trace some data about the previous tenants or people living next doors by asking the administration office or some staff working there \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is popular among the communities to enquire their home place for the sake of safety issue and environment condition by searching for the facts from the internet or neighbours.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Spending all this money and time on something pointless as driverless cars is useless. Why do it? Why invent something that will most likely have the same result as the first invention? Why keep doing something that for years hasn't been achived yet? Just why?\n\nIn the article \"Driverless Cars Are Comming\" in paragraph 2 it says \"...Google has had cars that could drive independetly under specific conditions since 2009.\" Its 2016 and they are still working on this concept of \"driverless cars\".\n\nIn the article in paragraph 9 it talks about what if there is a traffic incident with the smart car involved, who's at fault the driver or the car. Well if this smart car is made to be a DRIVERLESS car isn't the manufacturers particly at fault. Humans 'cause' traffic incidents and if we have these smart cars they will most likely 'cause' traffic incidents as well.\n\nIf we keep on going trying to create something that hasn't in many many years been achived why still go on with it. Why waste money. Time. Material. Change the idea of \"Driverless Cars\".", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper I writing letter saying I think bad idea make kids stay computers teach kids something good homework relax Well computers teaches kids lof things like handeye coordination If kids want work computers older learn new work There also websites show move yor hands using computer Well kids come school always homework need comptuer could nt use computers would hard kids homework So go school class tells teacher dont computers going So I get school I long day I go home homework go computer listen music relax If guy take computers away every one would grumpy time That I think keep computers exercise much We get enuf school carry heveay books around", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The evolution of cars have mostly been focussed towards design and fuel efficientcy for many years, rather than a way to have a car that helps the driver drive. Cars are a big part of Many people's lives so it would make sense to improve on the machine thats most people use daily. The safty of this technology may scare some people at first nomous but the car compnay will assure the safety of the consumers. This innovative technology may not be accepted at first, but many experts already projected a time when this will be seen as common.\n\nThese cars can help with accedent prevention because the LIDAR tecnology can react quicker than humans can. Another example of this car showing more safety is that it will stay to the regulate speed instead of going over it. Not only does this work for safety but it can also be more efficient by going on the fastest route with its built in GPS.\n\nAlthough the benefits are there, people will continue to be scared of this technology. This technology was not possible in the past, so many people weren't aware of it. This could be the reason why some are against the idea of autonomous cars.\n\nMost people do not like change and this could be the reason why some are against this idea of a self driving car. Even though some people are resistant to change at first, many time they will give in and in turn, like the change. People may be scared of deciding who is at fault for an accedent, but the technology malfunctioning is just unlikely. Google has shown this by sending their own autonomous car that had gotton into only one accedent. That one accedent may sound scarey, but it wasn't the autonomous car's fault. Human error is many times more likely than the technology failing and the law will insure that the companies include safety features with the car\n\nAlthough this new idea may be frightening at first, many experts already project a time when this technology will be common. Many people may not like this concept and many will simply not have it. Having this available for public use does not mean that everyone has to get one of these cars, it is just better for people who do want them. Once the safety measure are shown to be profficient enough, there will be no reason to not have this technology on the streets.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Since the announcement of community work , many prominent changes have occurred. Which had affected all kinds of aspects , like environmental changes , ethical changes and even climate changes . It is agreed that teenagers are part of community work, However it's not acceptable to force them . This essay tends to explore two primary changes such as society's thoughts as well as the nature of teenagers \r\n\r\nFrom fourteen to eighteen years old generally teenagers , they have rogue behaviour. This brings that they obey as good as other ages . In addition , forcing teenagers to do community work may have a lot of negative consequences. In fact , some parents won't let it happens . So does the public . ,Furthermore unpaid community work may end up being in a tough situation .\r\n\r\nThe nature of teenagers is quite complicated . There is a fact that says : many teenagers want to discover the world around them like a baby . Rather than being restricted . It brings the fact that forcing them to do something or anything will break their souls and restricts their mind .\r\n\r\nTo sum up all the things mentioned above , unpaid community work is fine for those who are doing it as a volunteer. However , forcing teenagers for unpaid community work is quite unethical. In addition it's symbolizing slavery .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A school of thought has a perception that all the jobs will be done by robots in the future. In my opinion, however, the speculation is not completely true. Although the major laborious work shall be done by robots, the jobs where human intelligence and human skills are required can never be replaced by machines. This essay will discuss why not all jobs can be done with artificial intelligence.\nAlthough, many companies are going to make systems automated, and buying most efficient and smart machines to get the jobs done to eradicate human errors. In England, for example, almost all security guards have been replaced by hi-tech security systems. Moreover, almost in all over the world, conventional banking systems have been upgraded and ATMs have been installed for cash deposit and withdrawal, the major benefit of ATMs is that they serve their purpose twenty-four hours, seven days a week without breaks. Therefore, due to the clear advantages of artificial intelligence and foreseeable accuracy and efficiency, many jobs will be taken by machines from humans in the future. \nAs per my speculations, a variety of jobs will still be done by humans only, because it is impossible to completely vanish humans to develop the world. Jobs like teaching, research work, engineering, and architectural planning are just a few examples of jobs which cannot be performed by machines. For instance, the machines work on predefined algorithms installed in it, therefore, a machine can never perform a task which is not defined in its algorithm. This limitation simply indicates that a robot is made to perform a certain task and cannot play smartly if needed to perform some out of the scope job.\nAt last, although many of the jobs where not much pondering is required will be done by robots. This will be economical for companies, and humans will be safe to do physically hard work. On the other hand, however, certain jobs can never be done by machines and humans will always supersede machines to be on the dominant point. Humans will be driving machines and will use it for their own sake.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In metropolitan cities, the shortage of accommodation is turning into a severe burden for citizens and some are of the opinion that this issue can be tackled solely by the actions of a government. I completely agree with this argument and I will fortify my view in the following paragraphs. \r\n\r\nOne reason why I believe the government can deal with this problem is that it holds the right to imply new rules and policies and there are some sounding rules which would be logical to introduce. For example, if they apply a rule regarding the encouragement of the construction of high-rise buildings and prohibition of the old landed houses, more people can dwell in flats and this results in a considerable amount of land saving. In contrast, if the authority would not take such a precaution, there wouldn't be enough space for the forthcoming citizens. \r\n\r\nAnother outstanding solution would be enticing people, who live in the rural areas, away from migrating to big cities. In order to maintain this, power owners should convince or force factories and companies in relocating their businesses to these outskirts. By doing that, new job opportunities can be created for those who are desperately looking for ways to migrate with the hope of finding a job. As a result, local people might convince away from moving. For instance, in Istanbul, many big financial companies moved their headquarters to different cities and this significantly reduced the rate of migration to Istanbul.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the shortage in housing evidently creates a crisis among the citizens of big cities, and I think, the role of government is essential due to their right to change laws in the ways of solving this crisis.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author ends story conclusion show passionate connecting life United States life Vietnam bringing together somehow In story talks misses home still trying adapt new life away home knew saeng says failed test wants take means wants show survive United States without disappointing mother When saeng spent plant mom disbelief Saeng knows hard survive When conclusion says I take test shows Saeng willing try make United States Vietnam proving make better life family working hard While still keeping trditions Vietnam alive Saeng simply wanted make new home feel like Vietnam buying plant knew mother would like", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While building Empire state building people go obstacle way want They wanted Dirigibles able landbord Empire state building One obstacles use New York City lack suitable landing area The obstacle good one The use Dirigibles mooring mast successful", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Have ever found thinking computer wishing I heard looking see computers negitive positive effects society I feel negative effect less time exercising littele time family friends s easy became addicted Exercising important thing healthy body mind hard enough time finding time So instead free time exercise probably facebook Also maintenance computer take away time exercising Just computer got virus I get fixed took ever That time I fixed could valiuble exercising time Another key point look obesity We moving setting staring computer hours time I love spend time friends family I mean nt right Computers away kids well facebook instant eating nice meal thier family My always told stays stupid things friend Now wkids easy We never social parents I feel important spend time family never find going lose Addiction serious matter addicted computer Our generation dependant computers For example car You plug ells go What happens braker You know idea go never learned read map computer brakes You send better mail kids typing instead writing skill would lost would learn As see addition laughing matter Once I must streach negative affect computers", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars were bound to be coming soon. Can you even imagine a time in the future where you don't have to drive your own car? As time aged so did our technology by getting more vast and advanged. I am very against the new development of these new cars because I think they're not safe at all. A human should alsway have to drive on their own because anything couple happen. One minutue with your eyes off the road, a sensor being read wrong, alerts not going off like supposed too, or even the wrong alert going off. There are even many differen't laws that were pasted in different states to not allow driverless cars. You just never know what could go wrong and you'll simply have no control over what happens.\n\nDriverless cars sound like a pretty cool idea right? Just think about it a driverless car? No way right?\n\nYou don't have to be contol over the wheel at all times. You can just sit back and let the car do what it's supposed to do. Eating breakfast on the way to work in the moring instead of wasting time at home. There countless amazing reason why this would sound like a marveless idea but then again you have to sit back and think about you and everyone else around you saftey.\n\nTechnology will always need a humans help for anything. Think about your phone wouldn't opperate without you assistance, computer, even a stero the list goes on and on. Think about your car driving by itself, what if you take your eyes off the wheel for about thirty senconds thinking your okay to grab something out the back seet real quick. Then something with the car went wrong? The you most likly would be ending up in an accident. Just for taking your eyes off the road for juts thirty senconds. Think about back into the stories it says to get the driver's attention quickly is to vibrate the drivers seat or flashing lights on the windshield to alert the driver but what if the driver doesn't have a quick respond like right away? Then boom, you crash and now you want to blame the manufactoring company. It woul just be better if you were awear on what's going on, on your own.\n\nTechnology isn't always perfect like just like humans, they tend to malfunction here and there. Looking back into the stories it talks about sensors being out on the cars. Have it ever came across your mind if a sensor read wrong? For expample, your pulling out of a parking spot and your car doesn't alert you fast enough that there is a car coming and the other car isn't paying attention. Now whose fault would that be? You'd blame the manufactoring company even if it was probaly your fault. It would just be a better idea to not put yourself in that situation.\n\nPeople in other states are still waiting for the law to be passed like California, Nevada, Flordia, and many more. They're not even allowed to do test driving and stuff like we do everywhere else that's legal. They made it illegal for a very good reason and I believe it should stay that way. There are too many poeple on the road driving everyday and they would like to feel safe. They don't want something going wrong with the cars and accident everyday. They're doing fine with regular cars now, just be better off if everyone stayed that way.\n\nYou always have to be thinking about the poeple around you instead of just yourself. The car might be driving smart but poeple drive like idots. Think hard about your safety before getting these cars. There not a one hundred percent guarentee. Yeah the cars sound like a really good idea and a fun new way of driving but it coould be really danergous as well. Therefore, you have to put your saftey and anyone elses safety first. Better safe than sorry like they people always say. We were doing fine without all this technology before and I think we can keep that going. We're doing fine with the cars we have now.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features settings effects cyclist many reasons dehydration road cause bike stop working Since lack water dessert seems guy could get dehydrated easily The intense heat cause The road riding cause tires pop", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To begin with, the Electoral College should be kept. It's a important process to be able to select the electors and the meeting of the electors where they vote for the President and Vice President. One's of the many reason they should keep the Electoral College is because the voters want to express their political preference. Also, it helps choose your state's electors when you vote. Lastly, voters won't get confused about the electors when they vote for the candidate with this process, they wont.\n\nStarting of with, some people might argue that one vote won't affect the voting and that it does not express your political preference. However, in source three by Richard A. Posner paragraph twenty three states \"Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a political preference.\" People who vote in elections are people who want a change to be made. They give their vote for the strongest and most confident candidate. They don't get mistaken in whom they've voted for.\n\nTo continue, Every given time there is a presidential election which is our responsibility to vote in and help choose our state electors. In source one by the Office of the Federal Register says \"You help choose your state's electores when you vote for President\" When we decide who our vote goes to we usually help choose our states electores when we vote for President and when we vote for our candidate we are also voting for our candidate's electors which most people will agrue is the right way to go.\n\nLast but not least, many people would argue that voters get confused and vote for the wrong candidate. In source two by Bradfor Plumer says \"...voters sometimes get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate.\" However, it has been proven that mostly everyone does choose for the right candidate! They choose the candidate they see the post potential and confidence in and the one that is going to make the changes they want and need.\n\nTo conclude, Electoral College should be kept. Multiple people will agree to this as well. This isin't just a place its a process that people agree to do! This makes us able to elect the most confident candidate that is going to make a powerful change. There are many reason the Electoral College should be kept. Startin of with, the voters and how they want to express their political prefence. Also, it helps us choose our state's electors when we vote. Lastly, voters won't get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate with this process. This is a long process but at the end of the day is worth it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story way show Saeng determined undividual It symbolic geese return take test left failed The snow melting hibiscus budding show spring spring usually start fresh new begininig The last paragraph like symbol starting fresh Saeng upset failing test She said II failed test By stuttering shows upset Since upset giving time takes test good The author ended story paragraph show Saeng strong fresh new start", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author story creates mood help really emphasize point story Narciso Rodriguez explains parents immigrated Cuba try find new jobs start new lives Rodriguez also explains learned call neighbors family Italian Cuban Spanish cultures came together great solidarity friendship tells door always open newfound family always seated around table Rodriguez really fantastic job creating pleasant mood memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock One obstacle architects faced building s frame They needed design landing area dirigible landed would nt add much stress building s frame Another problem stress load wind pressure In paragraph author says The stress dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation nearly eleven hundred feet dirigible s load wind s pressure significant problem Finally builders figured needed make various adjustments also strengthen building s steel frame sixty thousand dollars worth modifications made lot money Those obstacles architects Empire State Building faced trying allow dirigibles dock", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "presidents are elected every four years. Some presidents make changes some presidents don't, society strongly believes any president elected should make good changes. Any citizen from any state want's the president elected to make a difference, thats clearly one of the presidens duites. Presidents sometimes do not compensate for the mistakes they make that they're not supposed to make. Citizens votes should be the votes counted for electing presidents and not couted for electing electors.\n\nTo begin with, most presidnets elected most of the time make no difference and citizens are not content. Presidents have many duties to complete and of them is to make changes and make the world a better place for all citizens. in the article \"In defense of the electoral college: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the president\" by Richard A. Posner he states \"when you vote for a presidential candidate you're actually voting for a slate of electors\" what the author clearly states is that society is not voting for a presidential candidate but for a slate of electors. This is why most of the time society is not content with the president chosen and bad changes are made. Citizens are the ones who live in this country so they should be the one's who's votes are counted for electing presidents so that they do not suffer the next four years.\n\nTo continue, some presidential candidates intentions to society are harmful and do not help them in anyway possible. Presidents intentions while on their four years of being presidents are supposed to help society and make their life easier and not worse. In the article \"The Indefensible Electoral Collage: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\" by Bradford Plumer he states \"can voters control whom their electors vote for? Not always. Do voters sometimes get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate? Somtimes.\" this quote shows that not only is society not voting for the presidential candidate they are in favor of but they cant even control who their electors vote for sometimes. Citizens in anyway possible can not vote for the presidential candidate they are in favor of so that means society will not be content for four years and changes will be made that will make their lifes harder and some priveliges will be taken away if the presidents intentions are not helpful. Society will be living in hell in other words.\n\nfurthermore,", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus,is it a safe place to pursuit? Venus is the second plant from the Sun in our\n\nsolor system. Venus is a red hot and danger planet. Venus from afar look like planet where humans would not be able to survive on. Venus does not seem like a place we would want to pursuit.\n\nVenus is not worthy be pursuited. Venus has a lot of danger,even though the auther stated Not easy conditions but survivable for humans. Venus has thick atomsphere made up of carbon dioxide,without special gear the air is poison to us.\n\nThe surface of Venus as an average of 800 degrees. How do humans survive that heat. Venus has a lot of dangers on its surface. The atmospheric presure is 90 time greater then Earth. Imagine the impact it would have on a human. So far Venus does sound survivablti.\n\nSciencesist are trying find a way to land spacecrafts on Venus but have failed so far.\n\nAuther also states the air pressure would about sea level on Earth. Sciecenist\n\nhave only limited in sight to Venus. If scienist only have limit insight of the plant,then how do we really know whats on the surface of the firey plant I think sciecentos should stop using small spaceraft to try to land on Venus because it has't work so why not try a different method. Even technolgy can stand the harsh temperature of the blazling planet.\n\nTherefore I think we shouldn't pursuit Venus because of the dangers. The risks are trying to land are to high,with limit insight not being able to see its surface. Though the auther stated is survivable for human but as you read it seem the more dangers there are on Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "How feel favorite book taken shelves school public library I along many students find discouraging distastrous I believe censorship affect books shelves Otherwise demolished love reading crushed individuality separated population born Like beloved series many books series taken libraries collections due people society finding offensive In case world witchcraft story blooms religious beliefs therefore individuals within religion campaign books banned Fortunately none libraries I visit eclectic collections banned series I strong thirst literature I All books potential pull student wonderful world reading like taking away books likely spark interest start firework creativity affect generation futures If censorhip allowed say could censored Who final judge books banned It come power willing enough take This struggle top possibility seperating people apart like political parties Disagreements could turn debates could turn fights It concluded people stubborn beliefs someone choose everyone allowed believe wrong For instance like forcing believe vegetarian commanding meat longer eaten woman taking away men s voting rights Censorship lead disrespect s opinions disrespect never beneficial thing Each every person different opinion offensive censor books censor individual mentality Without person s unique thoughts beliefs world become similiarly vapid dull Differences beliefs adds variety population makes person special additionally free thought right people If someone limit mental literary stimulants world amount creativity individuality decrease To conclude censorship disrespect individuality personal beliefs overall joy reading good book Just one might believe story says mean piece literature forbidden No one forced read books grace hundreds shelves library someone offended simply read So feel favorite book gone libraries Disrespected That I feel", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "the author supports this idea by proofing you how is vemus is a worthy pursuit the dangers it presents by because vunus is the closest plant to earth terns of density and size plus venus is also can be called \"Evening star\", however , peering at venus from a ship orbiting or hovering safely far above the planet can provibe only\n\nlimited insigh on ground conditions because most forms of a light can penetrate the den atmosphere , rendering standard forms of photography and videography ineffective . striving to meet the challenge presented by venus has value , not only because of the insight to be gained on the plant itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many eqully intimidating endeavors , Our travels on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meetthe very edges of imagination and innvation.( a thocll atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon sioxide blankets venus.)", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One of the efficient ways to solve the problem with global warming the cost of fuel for automobile and motor vehicle should grow. In my opinion, the price of motor oil will not clear up the situation.\r\n\r\nGovernment should do more changes to decrease environmental issues.\r\n\r\n The increased price for gas will not stop customers from buying it. The pricefor fuel gets higher every year. However, drivers of cars and any other transportations still purchase it. For example, last year when prices for petrol incread almost types its price individuals did not gave up on their vehicles and started using bicycles instead. They still bought if because they need an individual transport.\r\n\r\n Government should provide better solutions to lower global warming issues. They need to popularize electro cars that only use electric energy. this types of cars will make people environmentaly friendly. Nowadays almost every car brend produce their own electro vehicle. In addition, some countries in Europe actually use this opportunity to make air cleaner.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I want to say that increased prices will not solve the problem, it will not stop people from buying petrol. Different actions should be taken to battle this issue. Moreover, government can make a big impact on this.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article that I just read the author wrote about how venus is very similar to earh and how humans can maybe one day live on that planet. The author talks about the time NASA has tried putting a robot up there but has fialed and how the technolgy back then could have laste a longer time but had lacked the information. And how technology has advanced and is more powerful but is more fragile. And the article points out a good statement on how us as a human race should take those chances of risk and discover new places. Venus is the very similar to earth in the article it says \" venus has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters\". And they say that venus problably at one point had oceans and could've had various forms of life. In paragraph eight the author says \" insight to be gained on the planet itself but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors\". Meaning that if we don't oush oursleves to go further we might not know what our limit is. And we wouldn't know what venus would be like or other planets. I think that this article really supports his idea on pushing forward and discovering new places.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever fear falling cliff mountain I I actually experience It gotten bus I grabbed gear storage bus headed slopes strapped boots went lift catch chair I friends three us joined snowboard team school year The three us caught chair top run The air crisp snow fresh blanket powder We excited go ride perfect As went run old usual every I talked friends suggested time went new trails They agreed went new area It good trail many jumps lot powder It seemed like perfect area board We enjoyed much But realized coming end trail getting little narrow suddenly drop right front us I shifted board sideways I stop nt help It patch ice hit use I could nt stop I fell braced impact I thinking I seriously injured rocks But luckily board first hit rock showering cool sparks lighting I slid snow couple feet trying stop As I came stop I looked back wondering I survived I worried friends would stopped time We could nt believe happened I learned lesson always scope area first go I luckily hurt I could seriously injured", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever offended movie book song magazine Did choice whether watched andor read item The question seems intrest people items offensive taken shelves I nt think I sure could ask anyone ever offended movie book magazine could give example I doubt ever watched movie obviously nt bad If something offends nt read watch If nt want kids watching something nt let You make desicion No one making watch read I know I watched movie two I probably nt I ve even read books best I choose read No one forced act Some ask CAPS school If teacher assigns book read child feel comfortable take teacher They understanding possibly give child different book They might even explain class read book children need exposed type literature There always going offensive books movies If take books library offended someone one point time probably would nt much library left The shelves would bare You choice read watch something If offensive nt watch Everyone different views book movie It offensive next person might really good show I nt think offensive books magazines music movies taken shelves", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine a point in time in the future where there could be driverless and flying cars. People have always for a long time thought that this could maybe never be possible. Google cofounder Sergey Brin begs to differ. He believes that their may be a start towards driverless cars.\n\nSergey Brin imagines a future where numerous amounts of driverless car could form a public-transport taxi system. He believes that this could one day become a reality. Driverless car production should still continue over the next several years. Although driverless cars have drove over 500 miles without crashing, there are still setbacks. Driverless car would still have to alert the driver while backing out of driveways and navigating themselves through road issues such at construction zones and accidents with other drivers. Driverless car so far can drive, turn, and brake, but there are still somethings that the driver would still have to do.\n\nAlthough the production of driverless cars is still just underway, there is still much more to be done. In the future, driverless cars may be available to everyone someday. There is still a long way to go, but we are getting closer to achieving this everyday.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are lot of countries in the world who are using great amount of money on advertisements of their teams. I agree that they should start spending money on children sport activities in that way they will start the encouragement of early stages in their life towards games.\n\nto start with childres sports , children now a days are spending more amount of time in online games rather than offline games . this is effecting their heath coinditions also. in order to overcome this one countries should start using money on childern sports activities . take an example of china , using money on children at an early for their sporting activites. this is very useful in childhood, because so many of them are deciding their future goals at an early age, like participating in some games such as swimming,running,cricket and many more to list out.\n\non the other hand many nations spend their most economy on people who are representing their country worldwide.it is good upto some extent , when they achieve something it would bring fame to the nation.but some are misusing it by promoting some advertisements.this may lead to some dissatisfaction among some people around the world.take an example of some favourite player giving suggestion of using some worst brand for its usage.everyone is benefited from them except the users who used showed some disaggrement.\n\nin conclusion, government should start spending their amount on children sport activities when compared with other thing named spending money on sport competitors.because if we spend money on the first purpose it would bring great future to the childs.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face on Mars is nothing but a natural landform. Contrary to popular belief, it is just a rock formation that coincidentally looks like a face. Scientists figure it is just another Martian mesa, which is common around Cydonia.\n\nThe scientists at NASA made it a priority to obtain a clear photo of the face on Mars, due to the unlikely possibility that it is in fact, an alien artifact, for which they wanted a clear answer. When Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia, it snapped a photo, much clearer than the one obtained by the Viking. When the photo surfaced online, it proved to be nothing but a natural landform. However, some people were not satisfied with this discovery. Conspiracy theorists began to theorize that there were alien markings hidden by haze, which caused for another search to get an even clearer picture, which was not easy. The photo obtained on April 8, 2001 was a phenomenal photo, which proved the face on mars to be a mesa, nothing but a happy accident, you could say. Conspiract theorists also believe that NASA is hiding evidence from the general public, which is absurd. A discovery like that of an ancient alien civilization on Mars would benefit NASA.\n\nSo in conclusion, the face on Mars is something much like the Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho, just a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is true that in the advent techlonogy ages, more and more people are known for flashy and glamourous lifestyles. While these celebrities will affact to teenagers wrongly. I believe that other influencers can be a outstanding role model.\n\nFirstly, some celebrities are popular in social media by their famer rather than their achievements and those give a bad example to young people. Some influencers usually show off their stuffs , cars of famous brand on Facebook or Instagram, and their easy life without working. As a result, teenagers take care on the appreance, the spots in the media than school work. Furthmore, few creators who have a thousand of follwers post dangerous experiences or toxic topics on Youtube.Those can be affact to both the emotion and physic of impressionable teens.\n\nOn the other hand, many talented people are famous for the ditermation in their filed. There are a lot of Acsticals, Singers, Althetes get the successful careers by application and ambition. These people send to positive message to young people about hard working. For example, BTS, a notiable boy group from Korean, by peforming the brightly song, they motivate young to be confident and love yourself. Bacause they had the struggling in the past and now become famous group through the ditermation and no give up, they become positive role model.\n\nIn conclution, in the digital ages, it is seem easily to become well-known people and young people may have the non-true prespective anout them. However, there alway are talented people getting their succession by hard work and they may motivate to others.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "CENSORSHIP paper Do I believe certain materials book music movies magazines ect removed shelves found offensivemy opinion one wants write magazines book okay giveing opinion know people say believe fight want censorship fight every one one Some materials like music movies magazines need censor kids go libraries kids like grade maybe smaller We need clean libraries thigs kids old enough see hearLibraries place study read good book maybe magazine censor bad languge bad pictures This offensive parents beacuse talk color another person bad language offen goverment People nt actittud stop bad songs contain censorship see somepeople write say peolpe nt actittud say want think need people like point fingers say thats bad guy enswer good done clean libraies Censorship small fight removeding bad contains shelves call make city good place live help libraries help today change future tomorrow make differens", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "New York said city never sleeps The people New York always awake rushing streets When fourterm governor Al Smith wanted put mooring mast top Empire State Building people New York many concerns Along people constructing building These concerns consisted laws saftey constructionIf mooring mast built law d worry would flying airships low urban areas This law would make illegal ship ever tie building even come close area Another major worry safety These dirigibles contained highly flammable hydrogen If dirigible caught fire New York City damage could tragic The construction mast question never planned making prior starting projectOverall mooring mast top Empire State Building never really destined created Too many factors obstacles way idea creating mooring mast began", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There one sight building car structure kind This adaodoness makes hard cycleist frot hope threes get water I could drop heat strote gorgeous day June hes desert June little water around one make s desperate since hes adaodoned", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Throughout the years, technology has improved greatly. It has gone from big bulky phones, to small compact phones, from giant room-sized computers, to computers that fit on your lap. So, why can it not go from cars the rely on people, to cars that literally drive themselves. The idea is really not that far out and it would help improve a lot of things. Cars that drive themselves would improve how convient cars are, how safe cars are, and technology in general.\n\nIf cars were to be able to drive themselves, the world would be such a convient place to live. Just imagine getting in a car, turning it on, and just letting it drive itself through all the twists and turns the road may trow at it. A person would still have to pay attention while on the road, but it for sure would take some stress off the driver. Think about a car at a stoplight, the light is red and suddenly it turns green so the car takes off, at the last second a car runs the light that just turned red. In today's time, the car that ran the red light would drill into the car that had the green light, but if cars drove themselves, people would not have to worry about other people speeding and even if there was almost a wreck, if the car drives itself, it could apply the breaks before anything happened. This would intern take stress off of some drivers and allow them to relax while on the road. Some people say that a car that drives itself would make the world even lazier than it already is. This statement may be somewhat true, but no completely true because the driver would still have to pay some attention to the road. However; this is not the only thing driveless cars would help.\n\nIf cars could drive themselves, the world would be a much safer place. There would no longer be worry of people speeding or doing something else stupid that endangers someone else. If cars could drive themselves, people would no longer have to worry about drunk drives or people texting as much because the driver would no longer be in complete control of the car. This would not take all the worry out of course because the driver still has to pay attention, but it would help greatly. People may say that having driveless cars would make the roads more dangerous because less people pay attention, but once again this is not comepletely true. One thing this passage states is that even though the cars drive themselves, they still make sure the driver is paying attention to the road by using cameras. Safety is very important these days, but it is not the only thing that driveless cars would help with.\n\nIf people could make a car that could drive itself, where do the possiblities end. A driveless car would only open more pathways open up. If people in today's day and age have the intelligence to design a car that could drive itself what else could people do. They could find a cure for many diseases or even design a bike that could drive itself. The possiblities are endless.\n\nPeople have made great strides over the years towards making a car that drives itself. There would be many benefits to this if it were to be done. It would improve how convient cars are, it would help improve safety for people, and it would help technology in general take a step forward. No matter how many negative things people come up with for drivless cars, there is always a positive thing that out weighs it. Please, lets take the danger out of driving.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article the author trlls how a new technolgy called the Facisl Action Coding System that identify human emotions. The software is used to \"calculate emotions\". They can caculate six basic emotions \"happiness, suprise. anger,disgust,fear, and sadness\". It can tell all of thoes things by your face movements and how you talk. Anyonw can tell if you are sad and dont want to be bothered so it shows emotion but if you \"put on a happy face\" it could accully make you very happy.\n\nThe tecnology could help the student becuase it tells them whenthey are looking bored or sleepy. Dr. Huang is predicing that the tecnology could have a \"effective human instructor\" the tecnogly is very smart it could also make computer animated faces more expressive for video games or video surgery. In the passage they gave an example of a real face painted of \"Mona Lisa\" becuase in the picture she has a stright face and she shows \"no emotion\". But it is also made to put a smile on your face.\n\nThe computer model of the face technology has to have a 3D face model and has to have \"all 44 muscles in the model must move like human muscles\". Humans \"preform the same impressive calcualtion everday\". everybody had diferent facal expressions.\n\nIn conclusion the use of technology to read the emotional expressions of the students in the classroom is valialbe becuase they all need to know how there emotions are and how they are looking in a classroom or jsut on the daily basic. And they can also see what emotional are meaning at that tiem when they didnt. It aslo tells if someone has a real smile and a fake one.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood memoir adventorous In memoir showed Narciso s parent s relatives moved At first Narciso lived furnished oneroom apartment could afford move modest threeroom apartment soon Narciso s home Narciso born Ironbound section Newark New Jersey Narciso grew family Family nothing blood relative Narciso always greatful loving parents", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting huge effect cyclist There point story ran water ad remembered old guys sworn next town eighteen miles rode He tired ad dehydrated thought could make along road So started two miles later terrain changed outlook entire journey Flat road replaced short rolling hills Sometimes life cruel hills took lot highway Before terrain change rider positive thinks easily I could make But terrain change looses hope almost dont make It didnt really matter I going die birds would pick clean It obvious read terrain becomes tough huge negative effect cycilists", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The better the development of digital technology, the more games, and television programs are produced. Besides some advantageous programs, people are worried about their violent content can damage society seriously by increasing the criminal rate and ruining the young generation. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, other people including me strongly believe that these innovations can positively change the behavior of people. On one hand, TV programs and computer games which contain brutal content are usually believed to be the cause of some people committing crimes. Those programs usually contain bloodstained scenes, and violent action; therefore, many people can be influenced and redo what they saw. For example, combat in an action movie can lead people, especially children to imitate and cause a fight in real life. More important, because some countries have bad censorship, children can easy to access and be affected by spoiled content. Most violent programs and games are censored content that has an age restriction for adults only; however, by the internet insecurity, this content is considered ubiquitous, therefore many teenagers can access them before being coincidently negatively affected. \r\n\r\nIn contrast, I believe many characters in this category are exemplary, so people can learn their good characteristics. Several violent scenes on TV and in games are related to reality.; therefore, many people tend to sympathize with the circumstance of the involved characters. For example, after watching “John Wick” – a movie related to the assassination and brutal fights, many people sympathize with the main character when he loses everything related to his dead wife; therefore, people understand the agony of losing their relatives. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I strongly believed that violent games can change people’s behavior in a positive way besides having some mentioned bad effects that many people have considered.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Winter Hibiscus I think author concludes story when come back Saeng vowed silently spring snow melt geese return hibiscus dudding I take test again made Saeng feel hibiscus restart make new flowers Saeng Therefore thats author added quet end story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Why books viewed offensive If inapropriate keep putting books magazines movies big one music world Let tell people unfortunatly grown time many nonoffensive shows But shows books movies played today inapropriate younger viewers cartoons least good cartoon like ect cartoons I used watch taught faded away With cartoons supposed good children show thing deadly sins They show without explaning anything help child life We take books shelves make directors quit directing rappers quit rapping make pornoghraphy stop restrict point It always weather blackmarket adult storesThankfully ways around letting children watch shows Restrictions television make offencive books magazines library n restricted area one enter without years old There lot say music It offensive I born raised old fasion country music unfortunatly country music gone dogs Sorry say change music started begining hippies While hopped brought life new So years going away All hope children turn radio tuned crap say CAPS sound like good music With pornoghraphic magazines around since prime It going stop whatever All block lives We try keep childrens eyes help always known world I think move things another part library adults get done library Then move onto music shows Remember always try keep reach children We ca nt stop try keep eyes With power CAN doneFAILURE", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Having a driverless car can come with it's pros and cons, just like everything else. The positive side of having 'driverless cars' you wont have to drive the car yourself. The nagative side of having driverless cars are possibly getting into a car crash, and getting a driverless car could cost much more money than just geting a regular car.\n\nWell, let's start with the pros of having a driverless car. One of the pros are that you won't have to drive the car yourself. I'm pretty sure that people with their licenses or with their permants, probably get tired of driving and it probably gets boring also. Now we have the cons of driverless cars. Cons of driverless cars are that people can possibly get into a car crash, and driverless cars probably cost much more money than regular cars. If anyone with a driverless car, were to get into a car crash, who fault would it be? The person in the drivers seat ot the company's? Nobody would know. Now with the money situation, i'm not sure if it would cost way much more money than a regular car or not but if it does lots of people may not be able to afford it.\n\nIn conclusion, I feel as if having a driverless car would not the best of ideas. I hope that now whoever would want to buy a driveless car indentifies the pros and cons of having a driveless car, and makes the decision that they feel is the best decision for them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is becoming increasingly more common for traffic jams to happen in some cities all around the world. The following essay will throw light on the principal reasons and bring out the number of methods in which this problem can be tackled. \r\n\r\nOne of the most prominent explanations for this viral phenomenon is the lack of work opportunities in certain areas. To be more specific, immigrants move from smaller cities to big cities for their profession and therefore major towns are often crowded. As a result, the number of cars used by both citizens and immigrants is overloaded on the road, which leads to congestion. What is more, the obvious factor that leads to a bottleneck is the refusal of using public transportation. Public transportation is a solution presented by the government but most individuals ignore it for their own desire. Some people want a more convenient experience on the road by using private transportation while others take a fancy to prove themself rich and capable of affording luxury cars, hence, increasing the number of participating transports on the clogged road. \r\n\r\nTherefore, in order to resolve the above problems, it is urgently recommended that youngsters should be encouraged by the government’s fund to start up their own business in small towns, which is providing butter and bread for other individuals. As a result, no one needs to migrate or transport to other cities for work and this could surely reduce the number of cars in metropolitans. In addition, states must work on ground level infrastructure to improve the quality of public buses, trains,etc. For instance, after the grand opening of the new elevated train in Hanoi, 20% of the transportation has been cut off according to the transportation ministry. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the lack of workplace and the ignorance of utilizing public transportation have always been well-known justifications for this routine. However, this problem can be tackled by the arrival of high-quality community transportation and the support of the states for young generations to become entrepreneurs.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The word laughter mean smile something nice happened someone even thank many people means action sound laughing For many people felling get inside laugh felling happiness The sense felling good inside meaning ones happy life balance life For word laughter means happy felling something good life For instance couple get married need sense laughter life s enjoy companies It early morning I extremely exited leave day I going go visit grandmothers grandfathers aunts uncle cousins I seen eight years I remember morning I felt sense happiness sadness timeI leave two months half I going miss family friends time I felt happy exited go That morning arrived air port I ride first airplane As I tried find seat big line people finding seats well I sat buckled self seat looked window place My stomach turning circles round round I felling roller coaster take really fast The next thing I knew plane moving I got kinda scared time I excited During flight I felt sense laughter soul memories childhood turning emotions laughter tears made fell good I never felt The idea seeing family friend captivate hear emotions As arrived airport emotions turning circles back forth We two flights left get destinations I getting tired sleepy legs arm s hurt bad felt like caring two big bags potatoes side leg arms We decided go eat place walked around see could find eat found pizza huts The next thing I knew one hour next flight agreed head next flight As arrived gate people already going hallway get plane hurried Three hours past buy landed destination I felt sense laughter inside waited ride home feeling I got someone token something gave back I started cry moment time I laughing We arrived late afternoon grandparents house I looked I felt happy inside happy well decided spend grandparents house nobody gone sleep every one busy talking catching The next day every one tired sleepy happy full laughter inside We spent mouth half family members I seen felt happy sense laughter inside Everyone incredible time catching family friend We get things wanted best part time I family friends The word laughter mean best thing happens makes fell good inside even memories think alone sad memories make laugh fell good Other people say laughter felling get laugh laughter best felling world happy In part life laughter important element whole life still great part life Over many generations people used benefits laughter life s instance many famous non famous people important people non important Many people say happy going die knowing happy People really enjoy moments spend special someone", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Empire State Building designed tallest building World Al Smith s plans make taller new Chrysler Building tall spire added top Empire State Building going come second To overcome first obstace building tower Smith decided change idea tower add spire mooring mast dirigibles Using tower anchor dirigible balloons zeppelins Smith added another feet tower But continue plan Smith face obstacle supporting floating blimp feet ground Smith entire building frame modified strengthened building finished Smith s final obstacle one could nt control weather The winds top building harsh dirigible idea scrapped Al Smith s tower made world s tallest building", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The technology of being able to find out a persons emotions is interesting but not valuable. The technology is not valuable because a human can already tell another humans emotions without having to use technology, the computer cant comfort the human if he is upset, plus this technology could lead to technology becoming smarter than humans which then they could take over the world.\n\nHumans are wired to be able to tell the emotions of another person. Humans dont even have to see the actions of a person before they know the emotion they are expressing on thier face. The reason we already know how they feel is because we do the same faces so we can relate to the way they feel and or look. Our brain makes connections better than a computer can when it comes to emotions, since a computer does not have emotions.\n\nA computer does not have emotions, and if it does it is programed, therfore they are fake. Even if a computer can tell the muscles used in the face it doesnt make the computer correct about the mood they are in. The author tells us that you can make your muscles in your face move.This means you may be able to fake emotions to the computer which would give inacurate results, or the results could just be inacurate all togeather\n\nThe technological advantage of computers being able to read emotions can be dangerous. Machines with \"personalities\" could use the emotion scanning technology to their advantage. They could do so by decieving us into doing bad things. Machines could also use the information given to copy our facial expressions. If they copy our facial expressions the robots could communicate on a wholenother level.\n\nIn conclusion the technology to read emotions through facial expressions would not be valuable to students. Since humans can already know the emotions another person is expressing, the computer detecting the emotion cant change it, and machines may be able to use it to thier advantage in the future the technology is not valuable to students in a classroom. This technology is not valuable to anyone at all and should be destroyed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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