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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Based excerpt obstacles builders Empire State Building faced One obstacles lack suitable landing area The second obstacle order thousandfoot dirigible moored top building would spend sixty thousand dollars accommodate new station Another obstacle dirigibles could moor Empire State Building due existing law airships flying low urban areas There three obstacles made hard dirigibles take future That air planes", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Have ever noticed different society today even ten years ago That s computers Yes true computer give us advantages like messaging information also take away greater aspects life staying fit enjoying nature spending time family friends Without life would horribly unbeneficial While surfing web fun proven unhealthy person spend two half hours computer every month would see sudden increase gain And kept behavior could gain one third initial body weight medical help provided say specialist obesity Also computer users snack online increases weight gain even Unfortunately spend alot time computer usually okay exercising either Instead outing half hour computer time play dog take jog try aerobics computer lovers usually stay front screen That s bad causes health problems maybe even generations Nature ignored ever recall time trails runs overrun people CAPS says They re overrun woods Those harder act rid people But s live trails fuller nature lovers numbers Because today s new technologies especially computers beauty nature almost completely passed Some worry fade entirely instead trying maintain s left well let Hopefully though next generation people reconize horrible mistakes Doctors people alike seeing computers affect family life How often eat dinner whole family When nt time At computer That s I thought When computers technologies available much less chance actually interact family friends mrs grade teacher noticed family spent less time together ever family member got laptop believes pulling family apart Do As conclude computers awful influence society people take time stay fit nature completely ignored Family interaction rates poor Whaat fix problem Just set little time aside daily observe aspects life This way life computers beneficial", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Florida senator,\n\nI am writing to you today to address what everyone is talking about which is in fact the Electoral College. It has been that topic widely talked about so i decided to research what it actually means and why it causes contreversy. People have viewed the Electoral College as an anachronism and they argue it should be overruled by popular vote but it is a very strong way to select electors and it wouldn't be in use at the moment if it wasn't the right way. According to Bradford Plumer, the single best argument against the Electoral College is what is known as the disaster factor. After reading \"What Is the Electoral College?\" by the Office of the Federal Register, it provided me with information like how it was established by the founding fathers in the Constitution. The founding fathers are very respected individuals mainly because they were of very great intelligence, so that proves how they came up with something professional.\n\nThough it may seem that the abundance of people are in favor of changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United States, there are people like I who believe and wish for the best like how keeping the Electoral College is the way to go. In 2000, a dispute over the outcome of an Electoral College vote happened but it's less likely than a dispute over the popular vote. I agree with Richard A. Posner that it avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast, I am not the only one who agrees because the facts also prove him right. With being a senator or anyone in office comes alot of pressure, Yet luckily with the Electoral College comes reduction of that pressure. It provides a clear winner when there are times of crisis like for example a run-off election.\n\nThe states with a larger capacity (the large states) receive more electoral votes , that is why people argue that it may seem unfair that some states get more participation in the election than others but it is actually very fair since there is more people in that state. I personally believe that the people who argue about the votes are those in the smaller states who feel they dont get the right to vote, it may look unfair but if all states got the same amount of electoral votes given than not everyone in the larger states would get a saying. Also, that is not mentioning the Swing States which are the ones who focus on the \"toss-up\" states. With that pressure the toss-up states are more likely to pay attention the campaign and are the most thoughtful voters and that just proves they deserve to get a majority of votes given.\n\nConsidering it may look like changing the election to popular vote may be the right option because it has many small reasons, it is better to have 5 strong reasons than a million unimportant ones to keep something very important. So I congratulate you and the people in office for keeping an open mind of what \"we the people\" have to say but also for knowing that what is in place now is right and should stay this way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obstacles builders Empire State Building faced architects made Empire State Building dirigibles The architects put thousandfoot dirigible top building held cable tether The dirigible s go wind pressure eleven hundred feet The frame Empire State Building strong cost sixty thousand dollars modification made building s framework The architects changed design made something new The architects difficult obstacles building Empire State Building make dirigibles", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The electoral college system is better than the popular vote system because every citizen should have a say in who is running the country they are living in. Also, if not everyone has a say in who their president is there would probably be claims of discrimination towards the government for not letting those people vote. There would,as well, not be a standard that could be set that everyone agrees on because the people excluded would not accept it. Popular vote hasnt worked in the past and it wont work now either.\n\nIf we chose the popular vote system it would never work out because there would always be people,mostly the ones excluded from voting, that would disagree with the system in general and the standard set on who can or can't vote. For example,in colonial times only white men who owned land could vote and I am sure that the african americans and the women and even the white men who didn't own land were not too happy with that standard. Of course if we had the popular vote system today,the standard would definitely have to be changed but the people who are excluded wouldn't like the system at all.\n\nIn the electoral college system everyone who would like to gets a say in who is running their country and pretty much nobody has a problem with it. It is also much easier to count the vote's of 586 votes from the electoral college than like half a billion from cictizens in america. Another two reasons that the electoral colege system is better than the popular vote system.\n\nIn the colonial times there were slaves and only 1 out of every 4 votes from slaves counted and that was very discriminative but it was how it was back then but think,if we adopt the popular vote system, what would happen if only white and black people could vote or only white men. There would be udder chaos in America and there would be wrongful deaths and crimes. I would get mad too if i was put in a spot where i was not allowed to vote but some people would take it to the extreme and it probably wouldn't stop until the standard was amended.\n\nIn conclusion, the popular vote system is all around a bad idea and it would cause nothing but bad times. Keep the voting system the same because everyone seem's to like it so dont fix it if it's not broken. That is why we should not change or fix the voting system in America.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear state senator i would like to argue the Electoral college, wheather to keep it or changing the election by popular vote for the president of the united states. Honestley i would like to get rid of it because there are so many things wrong with it, even the best-liad defenses are wrong because our vote does not really count the popular vote could be voting for one of the president while the representative that represents us could choose to vote for the other president if he wanted. Over 60 percent of voters would prefer a straight up election to the kind we have now. For example take in consideration what happened the year 2000 when Al Gore was going against George. W Bush, Al Gore had won the popular vote which means that everybody wanted Al Gore to be president. But George. W Bush won the whole election because of the Electoral College. Under the Electoral College system the voters are not voting for the president, but for a slate elctors,they decide who the president is. Which if you think about it its un american because this is a free country and a democracy and if we are not realy picking but just mearley helping decide who is president in a democracythen yeah my opinion is that its un american. What most worries the people is the prospect of the tie in the elctoral college which in that case the votes will be sent to the House of Representatives where they choose the president which if you think about its bad because lets say that the HR is being governed by Republicans and you the voter is a Democrat, which way do you think the HR is going to go, Republicans right, and how would that make you feel, not very pleassent i assume. The Electoral College is a prcess not a place which means we can demolish it without getting people hurtthats why i propose that we crush the Electoral College hopefully all the information i've put in this letter has pursuaded you to help out your country.\n\nsincearly PROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I feel that the author of the story \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" identifiy that Facial Coding Systems enables computers to identify humans emotions becuase i feel that technology do read the students emotions and i think it is vauable because you would never know what is going on with a student if you dont know what there emotion is .\n\nThe only reason why i feel that way because i feel that if if they didnt know the emotions they wouldnt know if we are nad or sad like in the text it says \" when your looking a mirrior you raise your lips at the corners of your mouth \" which makes you seem mad , So i feel that if technology didnt know what our mood was then theres no point of it .\n\nOther reasons why i think the Facial Coding System should know our emotions because when they ask a question i feel that you should show emotion in the question they ask like things like why you feel that way , when you felt that way , & when will you change your feeling about the way you feel .\n\nIn the text it says that humans perform a impressive calculatiion everyday i see that because when you say or do something the author feels that way because you wouldnt know when you read something you have emotion and that can change the way you feel about everything .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Would you ever see yourself driving a ''Driverless Car?'' The Driverless Car offers many helpful features to keep drivers safe. A driverless car could make road trips a bit more relaxing for you and your family.The cars have been tested by test dummies no need to worry.\n\nThe Driverless car offers many features. One of the manu features the car offers is sensors. Although sensors have been around for many years, they have came back new and improved. The new sensors will alert you when your vehicile is in danger. The car is able to apply the brakes, reduce power from the engine and allow better repsones and control more than any human could. That's not all the car can do! The car can assit in very heavy traffic. Although with all the features of a driverless car, the cars are not completely driverless. For thoe who enjoy driving can turn off these controls and use them only when they are convient.\n\nMy opionion on the \"Driverless Car\" is the cars could be very helpful in reducing the number of accidents. Also the car culd make long drives enjoyable and less stressful. The cars might even help save money on gas by being electric or fuel efficient. Lastly the cars could be the next big thing to help make our world more green.\n\nTry the new ''Driverless Car\" you might find many things that help make your everyday driving experiences better. These cars could be the next big thing!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "BEGINNING: I think its true because some computers now have facial scan recognition but they cost a arm and a leg to buy but i dont think its worth it to buy a computer that cost a arm and a leg because if something goes wrong with the computer their will be no refunds but their should be refunds because they could probably sell u a broken or damaged computer.\n\nNext: do think it would be a good idea to make a computer thats u can only access with your face because now a days people tend to steal stuff that doesnt belong to them like for example i had a friend who tried to steal my headphones one day but i had officer force her to give them back but when she gave them back the were broke.\n\nConclusion: i think that mona lisa probably was a hard picture to face scan because there were so many differnt copys of the original paintning but im pretty sure the real painting is in a museum heavinly gauarded by people with heavy artilllery and grenades and army men with truck but inconclusion if your a great painter do your best because one day u might a famouse painter like Leanardo da Vinci or bettter", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The driverless cars are coming. This is the most greatest news ever. For technology and cars lovers and especially lazy people this is. But not just does people everyone generally. The world will love to nver have to drive a car again.\n\nI am for the aspects of driveless cars. They are many reasons for my decision. In paragraph 1, cofounder of Google Sergey Brin states that he believe such cars would fundementally change the world. And Google has had cars that drive indepedantly since 2009. In paragraph 2, it says \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\" Which means that the car actually works. I honestly doubt that a human can drive half a million miles without a single crash. But these developements for self driving cars was also back in the day. For example, in the late 1950s General Motors did radio signals. That read the posotive and negative polarity as messages in binary code. It also worked supringly well. Since the late 1950s to now we are still using sensors. Google and many other company's have modified and develloped automotive sensors. In the newer models of cars we have cameras that assist us. We have raidar signal and GPS receivers. These developments and new technology are catching up and will go further.\n\nFor now law is the major issue but soon they will be new laws added. These new laws will support this great new modern technology. In paragraph 10 it states \"Automakers are continuing their work on the assumption that problems ahead will be solved.\" and also the final sentence \"But we ggrow closer to the destination everyday.\" And that is true, this is a great ideas and technology that we can't just let pass by us. Driverless cars are the futurtre and they are coming.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Arguably, it is commented that entities trading in a specific region should not only be focused on profiting. However, they should care for the local communities. Personally, I strongly agree with the view since enterprises have responsibilities to develop neighbourhoods. Although this development is highly criticised by managers. This essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide anecdotal evidence to prove the arguments. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, businesses are accountable for the local district advancement. In other words, once they are exploring raw materials, lands or other sorts of goods or services inward communities they should bear their expenses. For instance, a Mozambique's company, Mozal is devoted to aluminium exploitation in the Beluluane area, once it is making money through the raw material of this small area, the enterprise builds schools, roadways, and employs the local youth. As a result, both are the greater winners, the local folk and the company. It is the overriding reason for high develop small lands in Spain. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, shareholders regard social responsibility as financial resources consuming. Because of the escalated quantity of resources utilized in social activities, the owners of these institutions criticise the development. 60% of business institutions are found it a hardship to help societies where they operate to exemplify. It is pointed out by the new research carried out by the University of Southampton. Hence, there are soared conflicts between the businesses owners and communities. Moreover, It is the prime purpose for the shortfall in an agreement between woodcutters and the African crowd.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, notwithstanding the lack of support from the shareholders of businesses, these explorers should collaborate and help the local livings owing to the fact that they lately depend on the local resources. Therefore, I still strongly agree with the statement. I would go as far as to say, the local regime instils stricter measures to protect throng interests.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper editor I think computers everyone First learn places around world click Also communicate friends family Finally makes life much easier Here reasons get computer family First learn things nt even know real instant You learn ancient civilizations different cultures different recipes tonights dinner get help school work also If need learn type If need learn multiplication table type show matter seconds The internet searching types things Secondly talk family members friends internet Ive heard lot people saying people need spend time family So computer talk someone evrywhere else Its like pen pal nt waste money buying envelopes stamps send letter computers cost lot many worth You almost evrything computer Lastly get computer makes life much easier Instead going library getting cook book type dinner recipies chicken Your computer come hundreds different ways make chicken dinner You tell friend cant party Also teaches homework buy computer life would relaxing In conclusion buy computer If learn many things Its like book everything every need want know This computers good reasonable amount time", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Smog. Gas. Pollution. Many countries dont allow for people to have cars because they destroy the air that they are breathing. People and animals become sick from there being an abundance of pollution in the air that they are breathing. Another factor that can be taken into consideration is that it can reduce the amount of traffic jams as well. Do you think that the community that you live is effected by the pollution from cars.\n\nTo start off, many districts are forbidding people have cars. In places near French and Swiss boreders, citizens are forbidden from parking on streets, driveways, and home garages. Citizens say that they feel less tense and happier without having their car. Source 1 states that \" Vauban is seperating surburban life from auto use as a component of \"smart-planning.\" In Elisabeth Rosenthal's passage it says that \"Passenger cars are responisble for 12%(percent) of greenhouse gass emissions in Europe..... and up to 50% in some car-intensive areas in the United States. In Europe forbidding car use it is drastically reducing greenhouse gas emissions from tailpipes. Over the past couple of decades, maybe even centries we have been centered around the automobile that has effected out health and daily lives because of the increase of pollution.\n\nAlso, the streets in Europe are not as crowded as the streets in the United States. Paris, more smog than any other European capital, has began to enforce a partial banning of cars to help clear the cities air. Cars that run off of diesel gas tend to create more pollution than cars that run off of regular gas. Sixty-five percent(%) of France's vehicles are fueled with diesel gas. By limiting the usage of these cars they will be contributing to the decrease of gas in the air. The increase of pollution has created a solution to help and decrease polluted air by making plug-in cars, hybrids, and cars that are able to transport more than one person at a time. Records and studies show that Beijing,China is one of the many polluted cities in the world.\n\nAnother fact that is an advantage of limited car usage is little to no traffic jams. In Colombian millions have began the day without cars where they use alternative forms of transpotation such as walking, biking, skating, and riding buses. \"Day with out Cars\" has promoted the use of alternative forms of transportation and smog reduction. Since adults children and teens have reduced the limit of car usage the Mayor of Mockus has began the construction process of an 118 miles of bicycle paths, new parks, sidewalk, restaurants, and upscale shopping districts have been created for them to go to on their free time.\n\nMany people have began to not be as interested in driving because gas prices, as well as pollution. Their are many advantages to not limiting the usage of the automobile. It has reduced the amount of money that we spend, pollution and much more is also has helped us notice that there are alternatives to driving a car such as walking, riding the bus, and bike riding. You are also able to interact more with friends because the topic of car pooling has became very important and noticable.  Those are just a hand full of ideas and ways that limiting the usage of cars is effective.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear town southing ton Computers town important instance For banks computers almost every job We need computers life CAPS make use lazy forget full makes us busy The situation someone online lazy teenager playing games But reason kids dont want go exercise run around family see everyday But want talk friends make plans talk play togeather If someone ignoring family becomeing lazy choice sit around nothing And I agree people becomeing weight I think people consider workout hour lifting running week And CAPS right I think news paper post adds gyms maybe lower faty meter town think people neglecting families people work less go home see families As teens I think parents need set rules like hours play day hours CAPS listen take game away day two might get spend time mad get outside atleast somehting active watching playing video games day Also I know expieriance becouse I teanager I always go outside run around parents take games away s homeworld Please take advise happy caring family always stay togeather active always sitting computer stressing work playing videos games", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People should do the Seagoing Cowboys program because just like I have been in it there are a lot of great things to do out there in the sea. I started out when I graduated in high school when my friend told me if I wanted to go to a trip to Europe. When I accepted to go to this trip to Europe I went to a \"Seagoing Cowboy\" program where I got to take care of animals like young cows, horses, and mules. This helped me how to take better care for animals.\n\nBesides helping all the animals that I could I went on many trips as well. One of the trips that I went to was to China, and also went to a gondola ride to Venice, Italy, and a city with big streets of water. I even toured to an excavated castle in Crete, and even marveled at the Panama Canal when I was headed to a trip to China.\n\nWhen I was crossing to the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States\n\nit took two weeks and a Month to get to China. While I was waiting to get to China I got busy because I had to feed the animals and watered two or three times a day. I had to check up on them every hour and report to the captain. When the animals got unloaded I had some time to play baseball and volleyball games in the empty holds where the animals had lived. After last that I was happy to go to the trips that I went to and helped me with things I will do in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think it will be boring becuase you would be to that same place many times. Plus you would see nothing but water. Most likley the boat will smell like a barn full of anamils. Then you would also have to lift all that straw and bags of oat around the boat. You would have to clean up after them. I have 2 cats and I have to clean up after them and lift the bags of cat food. Boy let me you it is a hard job. But the worse part of taking care of my cats is when they get sick all over the floor.\n\nSo I dont really see why taking care of 100 some horses would be fun. unless you like horses. Then you would be working on the boat durring a war. that would be dangeras. Plus you would never be home to see your familay unless they came with you. But that probly wouldnt be allowed.\n\nWhat if you get sea sick? Or a horse gets sick and spreds it around to the other horses? What if the boat springs a leak? A lot of lives will be at risk. Plus what if an animal that you are alergic to comes on the ship? What if the engine breaks and you cant move? Or you run out of food? What would you do? or if the lights quit working while your in the fog or its nigh, and your right in the middle of an ice berg feild? that would be a very rogh time. Or if some one needs medical attention what would you do? or if the caption got sickand it spreded around to the other crew members?\n\nthat would be a verytough time. Plus there would be noone to feed the horses becus evrey one would be to weak.\n\nI sure wouldnt Want a job like that!!!!!!!!!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the story, \"The Challenge of Explouring Venus\" the author suggest studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. Researches cannot take samples of stuff so they need to get up close and personal to understand the planet. Insight will be gained on the planet. NASA is working on other approaches to study Venus. Our travels here on earth and beyond should not be limmited by dangers and doubts.\n\nResearchers can not take samples so we need to get up close to study venus. we cant study venus from a distance so we need to get people there to get the things back so we can do our research.The text says,\"Reaerchers can not take samples of rock, gas, or anything else from a distance\" This proves that we can not take anything to research so we need to go and take it so we can learn more about the planet and the things on it. Our travels here on earth and beyond should not be limmited by dangers and doubts.\n\nInsight will be gained on the planet. We will gain insight on the planet so we will know more. The text states,\"Striving to meet challenges presented by venus has value.\" This means we will go through a challenge and it will be hard but it has value to it. Our travels here on earth and beyond should not be limmited by dangers and doubts.\n\nNASA is working on approaches to study venus. NASA is trying to come up with something that will help us study venus. The text states, \"Some simplified electronics mad of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus's surface.\" This proves that testing is going on for things so eventually we can study venus, Our travels here on earth and beyond should not be limmited by dangers and doubts\n\nIn the story, \"The Challenge of Explouring Venus\" the author suggest studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. Researches cannot take samples of stuff so they need to get up close and personal to understand the planet. Insight will be gained on the planet. NASA is working on other approaches to study Venus. Our travels here on earth and beyond should not be limmited by dangers and doubts.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear editors I planning taking trip I found directions within second using computer Computers great people friendly pieces equipment technology evolves people beginning rely computers entertainment Some people disagree many outdoor activities healthy sitting around computer day socializing greatoutdoors sports Familiar great program socializing many stronger dangers Did know anybody view profile contains personal info You nt always chat online Call friend hang maybe local movie theatre Many people I agree think seeing movie pals alot entertaining playing online chess virtual game friend fan movies No problem go walk bike ride walk dog riding bike There many park What amazing place spend vacation camp outs bikes day wonderful part nature best part park anywhere world Camp weekend place become closer family friends Hiking popular part parks performed ages go spend weekend great outdoors Not looking computer screen Soccer baseball basketball lacrosse These come many fun sports Out yes certainly fun healthy Every town I know sport fields many kids adults ages use also great way make friends Get know person internet Daily exercise fun beats fun computer What waiting Stop reading article go meet new friends Visit local park play sport fun If I name everything use computer would nt fit entire newspaper So go explore", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I do not agree that the face on Mars was made by aliens for a couple of reasons. The reason one because nobody has found life on Mars Only samples that they can never find to be true. Another reason for my disagreement is because even if there were some aliens that made that face the government wouldn't leak that information to the public because that is something they would call classified just to keep everybody from going insane. I also disagree because in paragragh seven when they flew over Cydonia for the first time on April 5,1998 they said that there was no alien monument after all. From my understanding what the last paragrah is saying is it is just a landform not created by aliens just made by land such as dirt,dust,mud or whatever is on that planet. Also in the three pictures that look like they are changing every year they took the pictures so maybe Mars has storms which causes the dirt or dust to shift or move around I mean u wouldn't say the aliens know what time the scientist take the pictures so the change the look of the face that would be outragoues. The last reason for me thinking that the face is a landform and it was not created by aliens is because it clearly states in the reading that they found out it was just a \"messa brutte\" which is a landform so that gives the answer right there. This is why I degree with whoever says that aliens formed the face on Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think its is a good idea to limit car usage? Well i do and the reason for that is because more people now a days just have completely stop caring about the enviornment. I say this because more and more people are getting these big trucks and they are not realizing that when that truck starts it is letting out bad gases that harms our atmosphear.\n\nI read that people are now getting fines in Columbia because of there cars and right now i think that's a good idea. I say this because people are just down right lazy and they need to get up and go exercise, they could just go walk or even ride a bike to where they have to go, it's really not that hard.\n\nNext I read that president Obama has abitious goals to curb the united states greenhouse gas emission. I know that it will work out because I read that peopel think that america is pass the car age or what ever and that more and more people are starting to do whats right and start walking and riding bikes.\n\nNow I have also read that Car compinies are suffering from that one day without cars thing because i think they fear that people might love the day without cars so much,that they just might stop buying them. Car componies are also suffering because I read that more and more people are becoming unemployed or they just cant affored it so they take alternet ways to get to where they have to go and they just dont worry about it.\n\nThese are some of the reasons why i think it is a good idea that we should limit the usage in this world because there are so many pro's and cons on why its a good/bad idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being a seagoing cowboy might be the best thing to join into. You get to travel around the world. You also get to a tour around the country your at. If you decide to join the seagoing Cowboys you get to have fun with your fello cowboys. These are some reasons why you should join the seagoing cowboys.\n\nThe program helps countries torn by World War II by bringing them cattle,horses,ect. Once they get there,They give the animals to citizens who need food to keep going. So after they're done,They get to sightsee the countries famous architectures and religious temples or churches,ect. Done with all their jobs,the cowboys go back to the ship and play some games and sports.\n\nWhat was once the cattle and horse stables was now a tennis court. You can see cowyboys enjoying their free time and playing baseball and volleyball. They also chat with each other. They get home to their families and get rest for their next trip. In conclusion,Being a seagoing cowboy is on of the best programs to pretisipate in.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People’s opinions differ, as to whether or not competitive sports effect on the education of adolescents while others think it can affect negatively. Although there are some strong arguments in favor of bad influence, I still believe that it can be beneficial for the child.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, competitive sports motivate youngsters to train harder, to dedicate more quality time to the sport that they are into, to follow healthy way of life, to eat healthy food, to avoid bad habits, stick to the regime and many other things that they need to follow in order to be competitive and win. As the victory is the main goal. In many cases young people are ready to sacrifice even their free time in order to get the best results on some championships. In addition, the game reduce stress, banish different emotional problems as it is a good way to distract from one’s daily problems. Furthermore, playing in teams, helps to develop team-building skills, communication skills, to get more friends with common interests and be more productive at school as all the important areas of life are in balance.\r\n\r\nIn a marked contrast, people who opt for negative sides of competitive sports claim that lose provokes in teenagers, depression, self-hate and even attempts to commit suicide. As a great solutions to this problem is to have different phycological sessions, where professionals will share some tips how to handle these type of feelings and invite different sports players to share their experiences of tackling the feelings of fail.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while some claim that competitive sports can undermine confidence of youngsters when they fail, I strongly believe that playing sports have more advantages than disadvantages, it helps to develop the minors not only athletically but also helping hem to understand and value the competition and even if they fail, they feel they have achieved something, or they have overcome something developing them in better versions of themselves.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper people proud courageous country Computers mode simply difficult situations typing finding keeping record financial statuses Despite main uses many citizens using computer neccessary result loss living healthy social life exercisem spending line fellow people indicating family friends result please read understand computers became hand relay message readers One much life exercise due modern computers exercise key healthy life Personally I know least poor young children school victim cruel disease known obesity The reason dese children quite simplethey use forget natural bounderies using something Practically every day foor heart children begin computers second home moment fall asleep outrageous number hours vital exercise therefore allows bodies adopt habits children sleep eat computer This upselling manor foor kids enables others pick fat yet ca nt fight back ever thus use computers result weight child exercise power muscle depend Another reason whay computers thinking youth less medicine usage Everyday I chose walk school breathly sounds type wheather day I hope I spending time friend family yet ones people abuse see importance Around two years ago I computer nonstop playing video games sorts computerreleased activities every day constantly year I came home computer began I This resulted loosing time I mosue Furthermore I needed contact friends I rather speaking person Over line family friends grow electronic device called computer luckily nothing like however I hope see side computer loosing family friends possibly In conclusion guarantee information Hopefully paper newspaper demand column computer loose valuable time exercise nature family friends Thank letter I article relative subject", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people believe that luxury and prosperity are the dominant factors that bring people a meteoric rise to fame nowadays rather than their own talents and success, which leads to the negative effects on youngsters. I totally agree with this viewpoint. \n\nFor a variety of reasons, wealthy people would not necessarily be the talented or outstanding people. Firstly, they may be born in a rich family and they tend to be dependent on the financial support of their parents. For instance, in Viet Nam there have been some successful businessmen who may pass their billion dollar businesses to their sons or daughters when their children are still young. Which may lead to the luxury ways of living that their sons or daughters have even their children may not be talented. Thereby, their sons or daughters tend to be famous with richness brought from them. Secondly, people may use beauty or commit crimes to have a luxurious life. For example, the models or beautiful girls may have sensitive and close relationships with millionaires to have financial support from them. Drug dealers who have not been arrested may have a huge sum of money from illegal activities to have wealth. They may become famous with super cars or super villas without any achievements.\n\nThe mentioned prosperity and fame seem to have bad effects on young people. For one thing, they may consider being rich at all costs will make them to be celebrities. For example, young girls tend to take care of their appearance, have rich boyfriends, prostitute rather than studying or learning at school which may lead to the deterioration of morale. For the other thing, people tend to behave and learn from their celebrities, and when they celebrities behave badly because of the insufficient education and lack of acknowledgment, this may result in social evils in society of youngsters.\n\nIn conclusion, there have been a great number of ways to become rich and famous, young people should take the talent as well as the ability of celebrities as the first priority to have the right idols.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I friend well best friend know grade grade said said move So moved would call like two time week I would always answer talk three hours I always remember Until one day came called kind busy people house One mom friend calls I told CAPS best friend hold someone calling said okay I left phone bed still phone I went living room moms friend said get glass water moms five friends said thing I went got water After mom said go take trash I went put scarf took trash like mins I waiting When I took trash best friend said stay outside play little bit I forget friend phone I stayed outside min said I got go back inside I ment sat sof moms friends house talking I sat talking laughing playing watching tv After two hours half I watching tv I tell I forgetting I knew I forget something I didnt know I get I walk around whole telling I forget I get room I talking I seen phone bed I picked said I forgot I said hello see still even I feeling didnt She told kept waiting longest time ever I told wow patient I would never wait long She come youre best friend I would wait forever continued talking", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This essay agrees on the need of that governments should pay full course fees for students who want to study in universities, but always under one premise: those students should have demonstrated their capability to comply with university studies successfully.\nThere are countries, for example Scandinavian countries, where their government helps students by giving them specific students' loans. These loans have special characteristics such as long loan terms and low interest rates. It is not for free, but at least a higher number of students can have access to upgrade their studies.\nAnd in many other European countries university fees are not large, so most of the students can access to bachelor studies. What it's not easy is having the needed qualification you need to access to the specific university study you want.\nIf we talk in worlwide terms, university studies are limited to wealthy people.\nIn fact I read only a couple of weeks ago that only a 17% of worlds' population have university studies. There is a contradiction between developped and non developped countries. As an example, in most countries in Europe we have too many university students. Actually they cannot find a job easily at their own country and sometimes they emigrate to another country in Europe or outside Europe. Furthermore vocational workers such as plumbers, waiters or receptionists can't be found, there no unemployment in vocational work!.\nThe opposite happens in non developped countries. As university studies have large fees, almost nobody can access to them, and vocational workers suffer unemployment, so they need to emigrate to other countries to find jobs.\nTo summarize, I believe fees should not be an obstacle to study in a university. The obstable should be your previous califications.\nEducation and Health, as much as a country can hold them, should be available for all population, poor and wealthy, with non differentiation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This story chicken hand fox time patient Let set scene clung scourge sends chicken hound mother boiled They supposed killed thrown ditch But chicken hound blached When awoke realized situation knew would wait dark get wall waited although insects snowded Finally cover night came rolled mud prevent blood loss began journey That chicken hound patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Can you imagine a time in the fututre wheen on one buy cars because no one needs them anymore? I can imagine a world when car's do all the driving. The world would be much safer and driving would become much easier. Imagine a day when you won't have to worry about driving ever again. Driving would become easier to trucker's, drunks, and you.\n\nTrucker's are one of America's finest ways to transport good and foods all over our country. Most of these trucker drive non-stop once they get on the road. Some of them get into accidents because they got so tired on the road that they just pass out. Imagine the trucker's real tired and all he had to do was push a button that would make the car drive by itself. Not only would that save time ,but it would also save lives.\n\nMost drivers died in car accident because either their drunk or they got hit by a drunk driver. Most of these drunken driver are to hung over to care what happens to themselves and others. They get in the car thinking their sobber egnouh to get home but, they never do get home because they got hit a tree or run into a simitruck. Wait ,this could all be avoided if all they had to do was push a simple button and say their address or house. This could invention could save million lives a year.\n\nNow, most importantly you. Your late for work and theirs people blowing up your phone and your baby's crying. Don't you wish that your car could just drive itself for a minute? Well your in luck because we already have some car's like this. In the future these cars well be much more advance than we could ever think.\n\nNow we still have a long way to go with the driveless cars. And it's not going to be easy either stated in pargraph nine.Most of these cars will have to understand how to drive when theres a accident ahead or when there construtions. But just like what pargraph ten said,\"we grow closer to our destinations everyday.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "studies conducted past years show people ages spend free time computers This becoming problem state country Computers consuming lives everyone An anonymous source claims use computer contact old friends A study shows phone usage gone adults teens would prefer email instant message friend This results sitting front computer screen waiting responce student says I go computer twice week dont use much I d rather fun friends rather holed room people believe way social really nt It s sitting front screen talking people even know well When sit computer chair start emailing away nt physical exercise The movement people normally get go bathroom Then right back chair making minimal movements people sit front computer end obese nt burn calories Since nt relesase many endorphins nt happy If got went outdoors physical exercise would fit happy Often teenagers feel powerful using computer They find easier disobey rules parents set Teens also find easier bully children via internet social networks students middle confess target malicious bullying online confess bullied definitely nt want bullied facebook myspace everything profile peers see Teens limited time computer nt anything regret future Therefore adults teens aware using computer fine nt use luxury way find information quickly contact friend foreign country This generation needs reminded whole life nt spent computer Probably less minutes day spent checking email instant messaging friend Then go outdoors spend time friends family", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are coming and are being developed faster than one can expect. But are they truly here to stay and are they really trustworthy to be released to the public? Theres many ups and downs to this type of topic since many agree driverless cars are here to stay. But in all reality driverless cars would be a bad and dangerous development, since one cant always trust technology no matter how advance they say they are or how safe they can be. They always have their flaws.\n\nTo begin with, technology has never been perfected no matter how good and reliable they say they are. Technology always tend to have their glitches and tend to stop working right after a period of time or alot of stress. So imagine your driving down a road and your car starts to glitch out, but one cant do nothing about it because the car is turning and accalerating on its own.\n\nYou know how scary and terrifying that would be especially if you had your family and kids. Yea that a no for me, I'd pass.\n\nAnother reason is, that driverless cars would still need the assistance of a driver, since they won't be able to tell if there has been changes in the route or if there is a road block in the road ahead. So that would mean the driver would have to just sit there and wait for his turn to take the steering wheel. Which I'd say it would be very boring and the driver would adventually forget and that can lead to many accidents. Since the car wouldn't be able to know what to do and it would just keep on driving and Bam! their goes ur car and possibly your life. And I'm not ready to die for a car that was suppose to be \"driverless\" but still need a driver to steer its way around obsticles.\n\nSo inconclusion, I believe that \"driverless\" cars are dangerous and should be kept away from the public and should not be release until there perfected. Since there is many ups to driverless cars but I pesonally would stick to my old broken\n\ndown car before putting my trust on a smart car. But are you willing to take the chance and let the car take the wheel?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist ways Early essay syclist states enjoyed serenity earlysummer evening lively conversation old codgers The cyclist enjoying atmosphere mood changed quickly doubt nt listen collection oldtimers havent left confines porches since Carter office depleting water source quickly became cause concern Doubt soon followed saw sign Gary Wilbers Fish camp able get drink bathroom foucets followed satisfaction promised right d always stick good map future", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hello, This is Ruby from scientist at NASA. I wanted to talked about the \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" that it was created by aliens. First of all, I don't think it's a natural landform becasue it just can't be. So, that mean the unmasking was created by an aliens.\n\nFor this argument, I come up with three reasons for that. My first reason is, how can the unmasking face can be natural landform?The answer is, it was created by\n\nan aliens.\"How do you know?\" Even other scientist said\n\nthat the unmasking face was natural landform I still think it's from the an alien. My secod reason is, the unmasking face look like a human face so the point is the aliens might look like human,us. We don't know if it is a natural landform or not. So, it can be but the only reason for that is, it was created by aliens. My last reson about the unmasking face is, natural landform can be but there's no provement for that .\n\nIn conclusion, I wanted to tell you that\n\nthe \"Unmasking the Fcae on Mars\" is created by an aliens. Why? because that's the only way there's an unmasking face. I'm positive that the \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" was created by an aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author closes story paragraph show Saeng willing try Even though right away Saeng wants try see flowers remind home without breaking She tell although mother understanding Saeng let little bit But could You know much wewhat happened mother says feels let mother But Mrs Panouvong expresses glad Saeng got hearing failed Sensing mothers inkling disappointment Saeng wants try", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Manufacturers should continue the development of driverless cars. There are many reasons on why they shoud keep doing this. It would be very beneficial to people all around the world. These cars could eventually be accessable to evryone in the future. This would help people imensely on learing how to drive.\n\nThe continuation of these driverless cars would help people who have a hard time driving. It allows them to be able to drive without worrying, unless there happens to be road construction, complications, etc. The people it would mosty benefit is easily distracted drivers. Being one of these types of drivers isn't good, but with these cars it would make driving easier for them. It would also help the elderly community with driving, because some have troubles with driving regular cars. Driverless cars would allow them to be able to transport themselves places on their own. They would give these elderly people more independence that they would like to have.\n\nDriverless cars would also make the road safer. Although you have to take control of the car with complications on the road, it would keep people from getting into more accidents. The person in the driverless car would be safer and the people around them. With the cars being able to notify the driver of somesort of obstacle in the road it would allow the driver to pay more attention. Being alerted by something would make people pay better attention to their surroundings. This would make the number of car accidents go down, and the number of people injured by these accidents.\n\nThese driverless cars would also help student drivers. They would help them to stay on track when there are obstacles on the road. When it alerts them they would pay better attention to what is ahead of them. We all know that teenagers can get distracted while driving, so these cars would help with them getting into less accidents as well. Driverless cars could help the younger generation of drivers imensely.\n\nDriverless cars could be a huge change in the way people drive. It would allow people who could not drive before to drive just like everyone else. There would be less accidents with these cars, and people would be much more safer. They would help student drivers/learning dirvers to help them pay better attention to the road . The alerts they give people would help everyone keep their eyes on the road, and less accidents. Manufacturers should keep further developing driverless cars for the benefit of all people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Electoral College is a process, not a place. The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens. The Electoral college process consits of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for the President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes byCongress. The Electoral College consits of 538 electors. A majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the President.\n\nUnder the electoral college system, voters vote not for thePresident, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the President. The single best argument against the electoral college is what we might call the disaster factor. The American people should consider themselves lucky that the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisis in a century; the system allows much worse. Considering thst the state legislatures are technically responsible for picking electors, end that those electors could always defy the will of the people. Back in 1960, segregationists in the Louisiana legislature nearly succeeded in replacing the Democratic electors with new electors who would oppose John F. Kennedy. (So that a popular vote for Kennedy wouldn't have actually gone to Kennedy.)\n\nAt the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning, focusing only on the tight races in the \"swing\" states. It's offical: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The best arguments in favor of it are mostly assertions without much basis in reality. And the argument against direct elections are spurious at best. It's hard to say this, but Bob Dole was right: \"Abolish the electoral college!\"\n\nAbolishing the Electoral college should be the right thing to do.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood Narciso Rodriguez much throughout whole excerpt In story mood whole time calm relaxed Narciso talks family much loves done It says story Growing enviroment instilled great sense family nothing blood relative much throughout story mood Another mood created author gratefulness thankfulness Narciso thankful parents selflessness In story Narciso says I always grateful parents love sacrifice The way talks parents ends making reader thankful Narciso Rodriguez creates happy moods us way writes love family cares much", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hi! Thanks for reading by Artical! I hope you like it! In this artical i will sow you reasons to join the Seagoing Cowboys program. It is a very good program and you should join!\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys program is a progam where you have to take horses ALL over the world. It could be France, Germany, or even Africa! I know some reasons that might get you to want to join the Seagoing Cowboys. First, you get to see many places! They can be very buitiful, or very nasty. The mystery is what i like about that reason. Second, you can help people in need, like people in africa need food and you can help them get it and you can help plant crops and ots of other stuff! Last, Just HORSES! Who doesn't like horses?! You can take care of them, and you can feed them, and you can pet them, and all sorts of stuff! You also get extra time and you can play games!\n\nThanks for coming all ths way! I hope you cn get time to read some more about this stuff. If you want to join this than YAY! If you don't want to join it, (No Comment) Lol thanks for readinng. See ya 'Round the sea!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Since the 1900's cars have been an integral part of our lives. It seems everyone has one nowadays. But this overuse of cars is starting to have a negative effect on our enviroment and is causing mass traffic jams that put cities on halt. We as a society must start limiting our car usage to help save our enviroment and to stop traffic jams that do not let the city run smoothly.\n\nCars were and still are one of the best inventions man has ever made, so it is understandable why people would have such a hard time letting go of something that is so useful. But one must understand that although the car is useful it is also hurting other things, whether it be inadvertant or not. Cars have always been bad on the enviroment, now so more then ever. According to\n\nIn German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars passenger cars are responsible for 12 % of greeenhouse emissions and up to 50% in some car intensive areas in the United States. This shows that we as a society are one the of the main reasons why are enviroment is crumbling around us. These greenhouse emissions and mass pollution by cars are hurting the enviroment whether we want it to or not. Everybody must take a look at these numbers and see the negative effect they are having on the enviroment and realize that by simply not using a car they can help save the enviroment. Another example of the bad effects cars have on the enviroment can be found in the article\n\nParis bans driving due to smog.\n\nIn the article it talks about how Paris had to enforce a driving ban due to the amount of pollution in the air from cars. The fact that a driving ban had to be implemented to stop pollution is absolutley ridiculous. This alone should show people that refuse to see the negative effects they are having on the enviroment around them that car usage should and must be cut down. By simply cutting down our usage of cars we as people can help save the enviroment. Who would not want to be a part of that?\n\nCars have always been viewed at as the best mode of transportation. Everyone believes that their car can always get them to the place they need the fastest. But what most people do not think about is the mass traffic jams in cities that the usage of cars can cause. If people simply cut down there car usage and try out other forms of transportation it actually could get them to the destination they want the quickest. An example of this can be found in the article\n\nCar-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota.\n\nIn the article it says when they banned cars for the day the huge traffic jams in the city suddenly went away. This allowed people on bikes and buses to actually get around quicker than they usually could with their cars. So by not using cars people actually got around to the places they needed to be due to the lack of traffic jams in the city.\n\nThe amount of cars driven on the road per day has risen to an astronomical number over the years. Although cars may be efficient they also have many harmful effects. Two of the worst are the effect they have on the enviroment and the mass traffic jams they cause. We as a society must recognize that by cutting down our usage of cars we can actually have a positive effect on our enviroment while also allowing ourselves the ability to bring traffic jams to a minimum.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood obvesoly love greatfulness And I exernally greatful The boy young nt quite get big move In United States start lives entirely This means leaving family friends new jobs house put head leaving home give great one son He thankful parents still able keep cuban life alive They nt forget came fromNow I think one moods could sad reason happend What happen never born would ever never found family means That memoir greatfulness love little bit sadness", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The library public place Everyone allowed acces library It supplies everyday people information seeking learn There many different forms information entertainment offered inside libraries Books music movies etc found Since found censorship libraries allowed Genres created reason Certain items different forms There many forms music Classical rock blues examples Since music categorized way need shelves library If certain type music book known offensive certain genre avoided There need even visit section library one knows finds offensive In people given many rights often taken granted The freedom speech one It privilege taken away would tear part The freedom say please also includes singing Certain music shelves library right Just certain group individuals finds type music offensive mean everyone also thinks way For reason genre music sit shelves library Another freedom given people freedom press Anything put onto paper legal Criticizing government fantasising school legal Books offensive many people They persuade one ways unbelievable Like music books many categories Whatever put inside books allowed matter Movies located libraries well They categorized much books music The term judge book s cover true sometimes This also used movies The title moive book tell Certain movies meant seen children rated These ratings help censor things certain extent It illegal library rated movie It illegal however check one child young age Censorship allowed libraries All types genres types entertainment found libraries From books videogames ratings generes If someone offended types entertainment visit section library It illegal certain types music books movies etc inside library As long laws broken problem", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, the public is very excited to know their past and history. It is certainly true that more numbers of persons in some nations are very keen to know about the historical value of the place where they live and grow up. There are many causes of it. I have given my justification below.\r\n\r\nOne of the reasons could be due to maintaining the value of their custom, culture and rituals. In other words, they want to sustain the image of their ancestors in society. Secondly, they need to keep the high integrity, and moral values of the place to show a glimpse to the current generation. As a result, this might help our youngsters to know how this house or building is valuable for them and what is the history behind it. Thirdly, it represents the memory, blessings, goodwills and wishes of elderly people who passed their most of their time in the same house. \r\n\r\nNevertheless, people can research history in various ways. First of all, they can explore past records, and updates and meet the other elderly people who live nearby them. Apart from this, they can access the relevant information through newspapers, community centres or government offices. Furthermore, someone can also visit the nearby municipal corporation department to know the details of the buildings. As per research conducted by a few universities in the world, more than 60% of people are exploring the details of their own houses by contacting the authorities.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, it is a general trend currently going on to get information about the home or place where they live. I agree that these activities will subsequently increase and more and more people will follow the path in order to know their past heritage and relation to the present time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Teenagers spend most of their time in school without any contact with real society, and many of them play video games after school. So some people believe that it is beneficial both for the community and teenagers if students are required to do community work in their free time. However, I strongly oppose this idea because I believe teenagers have plenty of better options for their spare time and their work quality can be questioned if they are required to do work after school.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, there are plenty of choices that are much better than community work. For instance, they can develop hobbies, read books, and participate in social activities. They can even do paid part-time jobs if they want to experience what work means. And if work is paid, it can be easily evaluated whether this work is more valuable than playing the piano at home. Unpaid jobs are less valuable than paid ones, and teenagers may even choose other valuable activities rather than paid jobs. In this case, it is hard to say community work is the best choice for teens' free time.\r\n\r\nSecondly, I doubt the quality of mandatory, after-school work from youngsters. I assume most of their work can not meet the standard of the community. To illustrate, homework is one of the things which are mandatory in juveniles' free time. With the apparent benefit and strict supervision, they still can not deliver their work on time. Community work which is far more difficult than homework won't be done to high standards accordingly. Thus required free work from juveniles can hardly help communities to reduce their workload.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, requiring students to participate in unpaid work after school is unwise because students have plenty of better options and the delivery can never meet the standard of the community. Alternatively, the community can open some part-time jobs for teens. In this way, teens will treat the work more seriously and, as a consequence, both will benefit more.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir Narciso Rodriguez sort excitementhappiness In memoir author states Rawedia Maria Narciso Rodriguez Sr could afford move modest threeroom apartment I would soon call home The author excited happy move Cuba chance grow United States", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke was just a boy who graduaed from high school also he was working a two part prime job at the grocey store. Then they started talking anout the war and what other countries were like.\n\nAlso they were talking about how 44 nations joined together for the united nations relief and rehabilitation administraion.Also to take care of them and\n\nstuff. And\n\nthey were going on alot of trips to different countries to help them with stuff.\n\nIt took them about two weeks to cross the atlantic ocean from the east coast of the united states and a month for them to get to chiina.\n\nThey had to help feed people like three times a day also the ships had to be cleaned out for them to take a trip on it.luke had to help his aunt katie out.also he couldn't work for a couple of days because of his cracked ribs.\n\nThey also found time to have fun on board especially on return trips after animals had been unloaded.\n\nAnd then thye started an table tennis tournaments", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Censorship future kids america Personally read disturbing books also watched grotesque twisted disturbing rated movies Not even talking messed music ive heard far lifetime What comes alot music today sex drugs money violent crimes gangs The movies rating system helps little kids Books one get public library murder rape gang violence horrable reality devilsh deeds world I personally dont kid kid read book bad heard dirty song lyrics watched rated movie would wan na file complaint thats want kid growing With twisted mind vocabulary little punk curse words every ten seconds coming mouth Also wouldnt want kid kissing mom kind stuff coming mouth But needs keep stuff away kids old enough go get like need go see rated movie That always", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper I nt know I understanding correctly honestly thinking advancing technology Quickly rethink worst mistake could ever make computers tech handey coordination also give useful knowledge Lastly computers help us stay close family friends Fisrt people say use computer every day increase knowledge This could ba simple going discovering latest news This ten times easier going waiting news stone want details I took survey students say use thier computer every night read thier social studies science unit computer advances away like learning advances away want Second chrildrens doctor states Computers give children handeye coordination need enhance sports I agree Sports baseball soccser basketball need great deal handeye coordination Without handeye coordination students well end quiting I know I trouble sports long time I would give If teens gave sports wouldt anyining keep fit one would lead hundred kids obesity problem Lastly away advancing computers maens away family friends connectionds Computers offer many sites facebook myspace connect loved ones You also go sype chat video chat Yes maybe computers away time family year Do nt want time You make time limts nt spend whole time computer This way took loved ones would want one crushing oceans child wants talk see grandparents In conclusion I remember talking laughing friends computer sick could cheer Dont take away Keep enhancing computers I advance knowledge increase handeye coordination get see far friends family", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is believed that nowadays students have problems with concentration and paying attention during their studies, because of not reading books and social media apps.However, it can be solved by taking up a reading habit and starting a hobby.\r\n\r\nThe first reason for this problem is pupils spend too much time watching short videos on social media, which leads to a shrinking of attention span.For example, TikTok is one of these apps with an average of 10-15 seconds of videos and scrolling it regularly young people will not be able to focus more than 1 minute on certain things.To solve it, they should find a hobby which they can enjoy instead of sitting on the phone, so they will do their hobby as well as increase their attention span.\r\n\r\nThe second reason why it is common is they usually do not read books.While reading, people focus on letters, words and the meaning of the book, in that way, they are more concentrated than on any other activity. For example, one study from Japan shows that people who regularly read are focused 35% more at work, even under pressure than people who don’t read at all.Parents of students should teach them reading from a young age, so they will not have this problem in the future.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, students are facing a lack of attention problems at school, but taking measures to increase their focus will probably help them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the contemporary era, the existence of advertising has crept into many aspects of daily life. From my perspective, this tendency has raised many disruptive concerns relating to the issues of manipulating public opinion and fostering overshopping.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, the popularity of advertisements can form a negative perspective on daily activities. It is true that the high density of advertisements leads to memorable footage stuck in the audience's minds. This might have the impact of changing their mindset in the long-term whether they are exposed to too many of these advertisements. For example, people watching car advertisements usually recognize that the background of these tends to be decorated in a luxurious way leading to a mindset that only the high-order classes can buy them. Because the target audiences of car sellers are often the high-income people, however, it could be seen that advertisements release in the public eye. Thus, it is understandable that many people hold a belief that owning a car is a represented aspect belonging to the rich community. Nevertheless, it is noticeable that this is a mistrustful idea and stereotype, and many forms of advertisements are manipulating the public to push their sales.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, the high density has not only shifted people’s perspective but also led to detrimental activities. Firstly, many advertisements promoting their items tend to constantly repeat not only on TV and smartphones but also on billboards whether people going out, this would stick in customers’ memories and lead to a feeling of curiosity or fear of missing out. Therefore, trending products are usually hunted and attracted by a plethora of consumers. However, there are a variety of top trending products from several aspects of the market, leading to the customers’ tendency to splash all their money on them. It reckons that this is an expenditure habit and also harms the surrounding environment due to the high demands of producing too many items. Zara, a fashion brand, for example, is a well-known case of fast fashion. This company is usually boycotted because it would like to release a new collection for every new season and overproduct them. Therefore, the consumption is always lower than the production and the leftovers actually contribute to the global garbage dump more seriously.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is true that many advertisements around daily lives have many highlighted negative impacts, including distorting the audiences’ views or breeding overconsumption.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine a woman is late to work and her hair is a mess, she threw random clothees on, and all her work papers are stored in random places in her briefcase. But if she owns a driverless car, the woman could sort out her paper files, fix her hair, and be safe at the same time. Having a driverless car has a positive outlook on itself and the future by providing safety for the drivers that own these driverless cars.\n\nA driveless car has a positive outlook for itself by providing safety features too. In passage 8, it states \"In this way, the in-car system is actually a safety feature, and safety is a big concern.\" This statement explains that the driverless car system does care about the safety of the people who buy it. So if the lady in the story has a regular car, who knows if she will be on time for work, there is a possiblity that she will be, and she will not be ready to go.\n\nYes, the driverless car is said to have a negative outlook, but the positive outlook shines more than the negative outlook does. Driverless cars could help people of the future. Everyone has at least seen a movie with a driverless car in it, like Transformers. In the movie, nothing bad happens to the car, the car just drives by itself and both the driver and the car are safe. In passage 7, the article states \"While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver.\" Which mens while the driver is driving and the car is not driving by itself, the car is still watching the driver to make he or she is safe.\n\nMany reasons the driverless cars are good inventions for the future is because they are reliable. In passage 7, the author states \"They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" This explains how the driverless is safe because when the driver is not driving and the car needs he or she for something, the car will notify the driver.\n\nNow imagine if the woman in the very beginning did not have a driverless car. Who knows, the woman probably have gotten into a car crash because she was running late to work. Unsafe right? Now remeber, if the lady did have a driverless car, she would have been on time for work and she would have been on time for work safely. Owning a driverless car would make the future better because a lot more people would be safe and not get into accidents. To learn more about driverless cars, go on the Google cofounder Sergey Brin's webpage.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some countries prefer to single gender school for the education of their pupils. A native of some countries, prefer to send their children to the integrated institutions for their elementary education, because they believe it can affect drastically to their life in the upcoming period. I firmly believe that co-educational institutions are a boon, not only for the healthy future of children, but also for the nation as well.\r\nFirstly, pupils who studied in single sex schools, take huge time to get involved in conversation with the opposite gender, the reason behind is, they never experienced public conversation earlier, therefore, pupils do not feel comfortable to speak publicly and get nervous when they have to ask any question or any favor. Moreover, children who get more comfortable in their own group, sometimes behave in improper way with others as few conversations should remain with close people. Most importantly the context of delivery of words should be accurate and proper; otherwise it could hurt the emotions of others or could leave the person embarrassed. The way of using proper words and gesture could develop by studding together.\r\nFurthermore, students can learn and observe various things from their peer which are having opposite gender by doing healthy competition. This would lead to developing many traits which will enhance their knowledge and experience in a positive way. They will learn the sensitivity of words and acts that is lucrative for their own healthy future. In short, students who studied in co-educational schools are more disciplined and punctual.\r\nIn conclusion, students can have many skilled traits by studding together along with students of different age, religion and gender, which is possible by getting enrolled in integrated schools. That will develop the whole nation with the same environment, otherwise single sex school give a different atmosphere to students on the basis of their gender or sex.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This story time I patient It plane go cruise got ship I excited I thinking much fun I gon na think room would look like going cool new places So got dock wa line I patient waited get another line check passport I patient waited another sticken line It get room keys I patient waited stood little bit done wait would never guess another line So like lines I stood iPod listening music They dad said ready I said ready another line said no look room relax I excited Finally done lines white So I open door special key wait line looked room amazing But bath room little small great I happy final done lines That time I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The builders Empire State Building faced many obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock First lot stress would put building s frame thousand foot dirigible held builders would make many modifications building s framework The steel frame Empire State Building would modified strengthened accommodate new situation safety paramount reason dirigibles nt allowed dock highly flammable gas Hydrogen used dirigibles When German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire Lakehurst New Jersey May owners Empire State Building realized much worse accident could taken place densely populated area downtown New York nature greatest obstacle successful use mooring mast Violent air currents caused shifting winds making dirigible swivel around mooring mast nt safe pedestrians streets In conclusion obstacles made impossible mooring mast Empire State Building fulfill purpose", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper technology advance lives Computers perfect way better way life ways benificial us future generations The use computers alone allow us learn way life places talk people faraway express Computers give us bright future First many people actually worlds population generally stationary line local town city environments This computers helpful give way research places around globe create interest cultures shape opinions discover things places From look different topics wide spread point view In connect ways life philosopher poet state learn discovery others another particularly handy function computers communicate people live far away could nt visit otherwise A study showed actually use computer communication sites like facebook A scientist says humans tend enjoy communication gives sense unity This many companies realizing sites like gaining popularity And true It enjoyable talk email others Without computers could nt possible Lastly computers give us chance express ideas like never Now stars nt made make famous Just ask s voice reached caught attention major record company Now everyone knows name listens music Like wordy folks express blogging opinions About half computer use says computer weekly using blogs videos state one s ideas persuade others think discover thngs discovered Selfexpression important society computers affect people clear computers positive affect people society They allow us learn faraway places communicate others inspire world around us ideas Welcome future", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars is certainly an amzing idea. It has captured the ideas of filmakers and writers around the world. It is a great idea and should be pursued. The reason for this is because it would make the roads safer, and give people more free time.\n\nThe reason this is a great idea is because a driverless car would make the roads much safer. There would be very little room for human error. If all cars were driverless operating under the same systm then they would always be doing the same things, meaning they would never crash into each other. With new technological advances in society, we would be able to create new sensors that could locate the objects around them and drive on the road. The article already list a few of the advances in sensors that can lead to very safe cars.\n\nThis would also give people much more free time. You can do things on the internet within your car that you would not have been able to do otherwise, considering the idea from the article about the heads-up displays. Also if you had a systme driving your car for you, you could travel at much higher speeds. The car would never leave the road because of a jerk of a hand. They would run, completely safe at higher rates of speed, giving people more time to do the things that they need.\n\nThese are just two of many reasons why we should have driverless cars around the world. It would be a huge step in society and technology. We need driverless cars to make the roads safer and to give people more free time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Seagoing Cowboys program is to take care of horses, young cows, and Mules that were shiped over seas. This is nice because you are really going on vacation becauseyou are travling all over the world. You are traviling to places like New Orleans, Greece, China, and the Atlantic ocean. Another good thing about being a Seagoing Cowboy is that you can see great veiws like the Acropolis just like Luke Bomberger\n\nAnother reason why you should be a Seagoing cowboy is because you are helping the animals a lot through a tough time. it is kind of fun because you get to see over 300 horses and all the other animals. This also can be a hard job because you have to watch animals allmost 12 hours a day. Another how it might be hard is because sometimes you might have to be the night Watch man and just watch the animals all night. You will also feed the horses 3 times a day since they eat so much.\n\nA another good reason why you shoulod be a Seagoing Cowboy is because you can also have Fun on your job. You can play sports like Baseball, Voleyball, and table tenis tournaments. All of these sports will pass the time really fast its like your going camping. All of this stuff should really make up your mind that you should sign up to be a cowboy. Think about all this stuff and do your job you will be a terrfic cowboy better than Luke Bomberger.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a deabate wether Electoral College should or shouldn't be alowed. I thing we should keep it because this everyones right to vote. alos it is in the constition.\n\nElectoral Colleges should be abole to vote because it can sway votes \"Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters\". This quote shows that it can sway the voters because they voted for them and theay vote for that person to be the next president.\n\nThe bad thing about Electoral Colleges is if there a run-off election \"The presidentail election process, is reduced by the Electoral College, which invariably produces a clear winner....\" I took it as the Electoral Colleges is the ones to chose the out come of it so why do we vote then if they chose at the end of all of it.\n\nthe last reason Electoral College should be abole to vote is that they dont have all the controle \"A dispute over the outcome of an Electoral College vote is possible-it haqppened in 2000- but it's less likely than a dispute over the popular vote\". This shows that the people can also way the vote the way they want it to go if there is a larg amount of you that agree.\n\nThese are the reasons I thing Electoral College people should be abole to vote. everyone should be abole to vote because it is everyones freedom to vote for what they want.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everybody uses patience sometimes life I use everyday I need basketball There could lot different reasons one would need patient Well I particular My first one people dont pay attention It frusterates When team members goof gets mad She either tell us knock make us run couple laps around gym My first reason leads secondThe second thing urks people dont pay attention get lost club going There lot people take long time catch My second leads thirdMy third somebody new joins team We new people join day season half The newest member team make shot She doesnt put effort There like people actually goodlooking paper I patient If I wasnt I would trouble would mean I would bad sportsmanship I deal put though Over years I learned patience I learned patient Im glad I know else would I Probably teams clubs", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author, has a very good amount of information on why venus is a very worthy persuit and talks about how venus is the \"most Earth like planet\" in our solar sytem. Venus is the closest planet in density and size and is sometimes the closest in distance to Earth. Scientists belived, that venus has been supported by various life forms long ago. The author, talks about how so many projects have been sent to venus and so many have failed to comeback to Earth and also mentions that there are so many factors that contribute to Venus as a challenging planet for humans to study there obviously has to be a reason why it is such a difficult planet to study.\n\nThe author, mentions so many reasons why venus has many dangers that contribute to it and did a good job on telling why it is such a dangerous planet as he mentions Venus is one of the brightest points in the sky, The tempertures average over 800 degress in Fahrenheite, or that Venus has 90 times greater atomic pressure then earth does. Also makes a point that Venus is a very dangerous planet and is trying to tell us that their must be a reason why Venus is so dangerous and thats why he makes a great observation on why Venus is a worthy pursuit.\n\nIn conclussion the author, did a good job on telling why Venus should be continued to be studied. The author, gave many good facts on the planet Also, told that many projects have been sent to Venus but have failed to be brought back to Earth. The author also talked about how venus is one of the only planets in the solar system to possibly have various life forms on the planet and also talks about how challenging of planet is that NASA is working on ways to just get the macines back to Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author did not support the idea that, \"studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents\" very well. They provided more facts than supporting the idea to study Venus. The author uses a lot of references to scientists, astronomers, researchers, or NASA for the study of Venus.\n\nIn paragraph 8, the author did say that \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value\" but they did not provide many facts as to why they think that in earlier paragraphs. Paragraphs 1,2,3,4,5,6, and 7, are all based on information provided by either NASA, astronomers, researchers, and scientists, or facts from previous events but it doesn't support any particular idea. In paragraph 4 the author asks, \"If our sister planet is so inhospitable, why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface?\" and they answer with, \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" That shows that they didn't present any idea or claim referring to the study of Venus or if it is a worthy pursuit to study the planet despite the dangers.\n\nThe author did not support the idea of studying Venus very well. Their article provided more information about the planet rather than supporting a particular claim or idea. Their question in the beginning of paragraph 4 shows that they weren't supporting a claim, they were providing information for the question. It also shows that no idea about studying Venus being a worthy pursuit was presented until the end of the article.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "An increasing number of individuals around the globe,nowadays,are attracted to detecting the associated historical legends with their homes.Therefore,not only some possible radices for such appeals are uttered here but some approaches are also suggested to be utilized for this target.\r\n\r\n One of the most highlighted radices for such aspirations has to do with enhancing residents' knowledge in order to either maintain their homes or even repair them.As a vivid case,an awareness of both:materials and similarly the data regarding the alternations that used to take place can be beneficial.Furthermore,some people are absorbed in mysterious beliefs,hence, they may look for extraordinary phenomena that previously have occurred there,which not only satisfy their adventurous appetite but can also bestow them some wealth.For instance,they have the capability to rent their habitats if others are enthusiastic about the historical incidents that have taken place there.\r\n\r\n Owing to the development of technology,the internet is the first choice of seekers for various issues.To enlighten,not only there is vast information on divergent parts of the world but the feasibility of comparing them is provided as well.To illustrate,the conquered materials that have been exploited in different sites are explained in detail.Moreover,local folks,especially the elderly and likewise building experts,would have ignorable information regarding the erections that exist in their neighbourhood.Namely,they are usually aware of the previous residents of those homes and their life stories or even know which substances were used to build them.\r\n\r\nTo conclude,the internet and also local individuals are the best resources for cumulating some data about old residential sites,such as related histories or the used materials.Thus,humans,who are attracted to these anecdotes due to different factors,like maintaining their houses,can consult them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist greatly There hills rocks snakes buildings people The hills rocks would make much harder stay strong able keep riding The abandoned building people could affect emotionally It would make loose hope determination keep going find destination He think would get seeing deserted town After say It didnt really matter I going die Kurmaskie", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is clear that cars by far is the most popular mean of transportation. However, using cars leads to many problems to society and environment which should be solved by both government and individuals.\nThe foremost problems caused by having more cars is congestion. Instead of travelling by bicycles, public transport or walking, many people use cars to commute to work which is the main cause of traffic jam. For instance, In Hanoi, people spend a lot of time traveling in rush hours because of the traffic which causes low working efficiency and wasting of time resources. Furthermore, Emissions from cars results in environmental problems, especially air pollution. This will effect on people health and lead to some serious diseases such as lung cancer and asthma if they breath in a lot of smoke from cars every day.\nThere are several actions could be taken to decline the car usage. Firstly, government should enact policy to encourage people use other forms of vehicles which are friendly to environment. For example, if more cycling lanes are built, more people would ride a bike to work instead of driving. Secondly, they can increase tax on cars and parking fee as well as develop public transport such as train and bus to decrease the number of people buying private cars. Finally, it is more important to raise people awareness of the problems of having more cars by advertising and having those public to all citizens.\nIn conclusion, massive uses of cars cause many problems but a possible solution can be adapt to prevent bad effects of them on environment and society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper I m going tell positeves negatives The truth computers First going tell positives computers The internet virtual finger tips provides smartest questions questiners In internet every thing easy I mean learn works use keyboard mouse Computers changed years Yes computers popular chatting websites facebook twitter flickr It seems cool yes internet darkside Second dark secret computer So far news reports suicide teenager life reports like girls killing lack Boys killing Yes live world everyone judged Well computers good bad", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It actually powerful last statement Even though failed drivers test realized keep strong patient Soon geese come back snow melt return take test determined pass Saeng bought hibiscus feel back Vietnam felt could fill place heart misses I paid nineteen dollars it She says like disappointed failing test also saying free back vietnam expensive united states A hibiscus flower tropical blooms spring becomes ready give test second try", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The United States has always had people complaining about the Electoral College, and that's exactly what I'm about to do.  I think that the Electoral College was probably a good idea at first, but it's not very helpful for the elections.  The Electoral College, as you know, has people from every state, some states having more on it than others based on the population.  It's not right to have a few people have just as big of a say as hundreds of thousands of people.\n\nI read from \"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\" and learned that in 2000, Al Gore won the popular vote from the people, but then lost the election because the Electoral College voted against him.  That means that the president was not picked based on who the people of this country wanted, but who only a small amount of people wanted.  How does that make any sense at all? There's no way to defend that.  If it's OUR country, WE should be the ones voting for who we want to lead us, not a couple of people who think they're more important than the rest of the population that votes.\n\nWhat happens if there's a tie in the Electoral College?  We're going to take it to the House of Representatives?  That means ONE person will be representing their whole entire state's vote.  How safe is that?  I'm sure if it comes down to it and we have to do that, there's going to be a lot of people who aren't happy.  It doesn't even make sense to have one person have as much say as their whole state put together.\n\nThere are some good things about the Electoral College, though. I admit the Electoral College would be good when the people's votes are close or maybe even tie, but how often is that going to happen?  I think it's also smart that when you vote for who you want to be president, you also vote for their electors.  That's much better than having to vote for a president and the electors separately.  It'd be much easier though if we got rid of electors all together.\n\nIt's kind of like when you're at a crossroads.  You and someone else get there at the same time.  They're to your right, so they have the right of way and can go first.  It doesn't matter that you got there at the same exact time, or even if you're going somewhere more important than where they're going.  It's like that with the election.  The Electoral College and the state may both be voting, but the Electoral College has the \"right of way\" and has more importance over us, whether they care who they're voting for or not.\n\nThe Electoral College was made a long time ago by people that some will argue were a lot smarter than us, but as times change, so should rules.  I don't think it was a dumb idea, it seems smart as a whole, but I just don't think when you actually put it in use it's fair.  When you cast your vote, you want it to mean something, but if someone else exactly like you happens to be one of the electors for the College and votes for someone else, their vote is a lot more important.\n\nThere's a lot to be said about the Electoral College... Both good and bad, but in the end there isn't much anyone who is normal and whose vote barely counts for anything can do.  We can say how bad it is however much we want.  We can throw at you facts upon facts about how unnecessary or unfair the Electoral College is.  In the end, it's up to the government to decide what will happen, as it always has been.\n\nTo sum it all up, the Electoral College isn't a smart way to help decide who should be president. This is the United States of America, it's for the people and made by the people, so why on Earth should they not be able to be the only ones to pick who will run them as a country?\n\nPlease take into consideration everything I have said.  Thank you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There time I went We driving long line traffic wait So waited bridge It night coming true We got hungry We really didnt compliments But long time got pork So deciding roller coaster go We decided go We looked line hr wait We got line brother companing lot Again nightmare coming true So dad I fine line Actually didnt take long I thought would After wait got roller coaster We laughing scared time The coaster I sad But worth three hour wait Later day rode first ever built standing coaster I scared wait hours long And brother dying wait But wait felt like hour long I scared coaster But I loved It lot fum ride roller coasters We left It long day The end", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the story \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" with the idea of it, a driverless car, I disagree with the idea if a human would have to take control of the wheel in multiple situtations.\n\nIn paragraph 7, it says \"this necessitates the car being ready to quickly get the driver's attention whenever a problem occurs.\" It being driverless means the car should be able to handle the proble, not the person driving. Having the Google Car tell you when the should be prepared is okay, but it is a google driverless car, it should be able to be prepared.\n\nIf the car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 it should be able to handle the speed of 40 either way. The car is a car, and it should work like it has a person behind the whell instead of hesitiating to go past 25.\n\nFuthermore, google being a driverless car, why would there be any cameras in it? It's driverless, the drivers eyes shouldn't have to be focuses on the car what so ever. The car should be able to remain focused while it is being used.\n\nGoogles driverless cars should not be a thing. There needs to always be a driver due to all the kinks and things that would needed to be worked out. No one should be worried about dying once they get into a driverless car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I know the author supports the idea of going to Venus as a good idea because in paragraph 5 he talks about how the conditions of Venus on machines is bad for the metal but for humans that it has survivable conditions.Not only in this paragrph but also in paragraph 7 it says the metals that would burn, melt or break on Venus,and he suggests to just make the materials stronger to resist pressure,heat,and other forces. Also in paragraph 8 says \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidatig endeavors.\" Its basically saying that we might as well go to Venus and try to get as much information as possible even though it will be hard.\n\nI used this evidence because it shows what the author thinks about studying Venus and all the harming things that Venus has. It also show what the author thinks they could upgrade to visit and study Venus better. Also I just think those were solid points on what the author thinks about sudying and exploring Venus.\n\nIn conclusion the author thinks that exploring and studying Venus is\n\ngood idea even with all the challenges Venus has. Which I agree on.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When I years old mom use unpatient time got annoyed But one day going take shower people kept going got patient I got I saw hide As I peeked end end still standing almost falling asleep still patience Another stepped bathroom I quickly went said CAPS excuse mom coming shes waiting So I woke mom mom mom wake go take shower woke took shower came ahh kind feel good better The end", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author uses a lot of clear evidence to discribe how the scientists are tring to study Venus. Also, the author discribes the dangers of doing so. The author also tells us what the problems are with studing Venus. The real question is, is it really worth it?\n\nOne of the biggest problems with exploring Venus is that Venuses aptnosphere is 97 percent carbon dioxide and the timperatures average over 800 degrees. Another problem is that the atmosphere pressure is 90 times greater than here on earth. Also Venus is some times mistaken for a star because the plannet is so bright.\n\nAt one point Venus would have had features just like earth and have water surounding it. Venus is also known as the the twin to earth because they are so similar in features. NASA would send shipes into space and go to Venus but they could never lang on Venus. They haven't had a succesful space travel to Venus in 30 years. NASA is thinking about sending a blimp like craft to venus and have it hover over Venus at like 30 miles off the ground. Even at 30 miles off the ground the tempurtures will be around 170 Fahrenheit.\n\nWith what the passage states it is safe to say that there are a lot of dangers NASA would have to address before they launch another space ship to Venus. But also there are a lot of possibilities that NASA has when they launch the space ship to Venus. NASA can be the ones who discovered Venus, also they could learn more about Venus and why it lost all its earth like features.\n\nIn conclusion, the idea of learning more about Venus is a great opportunity to learn more about the planets around us. Also, learning about how Venus lost the Earth like features is a good way to learn about our planet and how to keep Earth from becoming that way. This idea of risking everything to go and explore Venus is a great opprtunity for us at earth to learn about how other planets like ours were destroyed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Not only is this new technolgy for reading facial expressions wierd but it also a waste of money. We do not need this in our classrooms you can easily tell when a kid is mad,happy bored or sad. Everyone already knows how to tell how someone feels, it is something we lean from our parents. No classroom needs this teacher can or at least should know how to tell how a kid is feeling and doesnt need a computer to tell them this infromation.\n\nWe have become to relient of computers and electronics. This would make things worse. People today already are addictid and rely on electornics for everyday things. Having this in a classroom will only make this or future genorations lazier than they already are.\n\nAlthough this could be useful it most likely will not be useful instead the oppsite. Classrooms should be electronics and technolgy free so students can learn. Teachers should teach not give websites or say\"google it\" so putting facial reading computers in classrooms are a terrible idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recently, in many parts of the world, parents prefer to get admission of their kids in either single-sex schools or co-educational schools. However, while I believe that sending preschoolers to one-gender schools will have drawbacks later when they grow up, I do not agree that kindergartners should be refrained from studying in the co-schooling system at all.\r\n\r\nAlthough, studying in a single-gender institute also has its merits. Pupils are usually prevented from being involved in inappropriate practices. For example, boys and girls divert their attention from studies and start relationships at an early stage of their lives where they should rather be focused on setting their future goals; some juveniles choose to sell drugs, and mostly young males compel female teenagers to do that with them. Therefore, single-gender colleges save teens from all such activities, and consequently, they become more disciplined and devoted to building a bright future.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, depriving the younglings of the co-educational system also proves to be disadvantageous later in their lives because they lack confidence and are not able to build strong interpersonal communications skills. For instance, a survey was conducted on women who went to one-sex institutes throughout their lives, it was found that they had difficulty coping with men at the workplace, especially when they have male bosses that also restricted their chance of promotion; moreover, they also reported bullying and harassment from the male co-workers. Hence, parents must choose mixed-gender educational institutes in order for their youngsters to enhance excellent people skills.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, nevertheless, single-sex academies are beneficial for kids in terms of discipline only, it also prevents schoolers from developing good communication skills and building confidence later in life. Lastly, in my overall opinion, people should learn to have a vigilant check on their children’s activities in the dual-gender institutes rather than simply taking away their rights to study in a mixed environment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, trading businesses are made throughout the world resulting from the increased globalization. Consequently, employees are requested to have a variety of knowledge in their jobs due to remain a highly competitive capabilities in labour markets over the world. Parents have much struggles on the arrangement regarding additional classes out of school to their children in order to gain the competitive advantages in their future career. This eassy attempts to find out the main considerations on this.\nThere is no doubt that school curriculum largely focuses on academic studies, including physical, Maths and organic chemistry etc., Those subjects are designed to connect with learning in a higher education. It is reasonable to say that this curriculum may not enable the teenagers to gain various knowledeges aspects of digital world and our planet. Learning in extra classes out of syllabus is an opportunity for them to really discover what they may be passionate about and in turn, help them develop new skills that may come in handy for a future occupation that is related.\nOn the other hand, it is not difficult to notice a lot of parents forcing their children into learning something that does not interest them. Sometimes, the intensive courses are arranged by parents to their children study at the weekends. As a result, it could lead to undesired results or even negative impacts on the parent-child relationship, so maybe it's best for children to figure it out on their own sometimes.\nMy take on this is that younsters are extremely inquisitive and energetic, consequently, it's really the prime time of their life to explore and learn new things. Studying in classes outside the syllabus are good intention, but children are forced to learn what their parents love to only. This not only ruins the parent-child relationship but also may results in children's resistance to learning.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir soft compassionate The reason I would describe mood soft compassionate When Narciso Rodriguez describes growing parents cuba never mentioned anything hated family living cuba yet describes loved growing child example says Growing environment instilled great sense family nothing blood relative This shows related blood doesnt mean family Another reason I would describe mood authour soft compassionate end memoir Narciso Rodriguez says I never forget parents turned simple house home In conclusion ways I would describe mood created author soft compassionate", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There mood created author memoirOne way mood created explaining warm life narrator s house created Here innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed form backdrop life warm home CAPS This helps create mood memoir explaining narrator grew upAnother way mood created showing caring selfless narrator s parents I never forget parents turned simple house home CAPS This gave memoir light happy moodA third way mood created showing friendly everyone In neighborhood despite customs everywhere cultures came together great solidarity friendship The narrator explained friendly open everybody neighborhood one anotherAs see author memoir created late mood memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story way quote says get another try something Many authors end stories diff way makes reader wants go sequal next story I really adds twist ending Also another reason author would end like want work imagination picture happens next Using effective know happened It make reader wonder fails succeeds next time around", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Without any ,doubt society is divided into two groups as per the distinct mindsets of different people. Therefore, this has become a debate able issue whether to make a successful career an individual should study at university or college, or they should immediately find employment right after completing school. This essay will not only shed light on both the perceptions but also my point of view will be elaborated in the conclusion\n\nOn one side of the argument there are people who argue that the benefits of studying at university or college considerably outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason for believing this is while doing higher education students mind become more broaden, for example when I was in a school, I studied many computer courses but I only gained the basic understanding of the subjects because schools don’t teach core concepts they just provide basic knowledge to the students which is not enough for them to become a successful person in this modern technological world, On the other hand when I attended the university I got more understanding because of the practical knowledge that I got from there as the university prepares students to be more hands-on rather than just providing theoretical information, for instance, according to recent research conducted by googling it is observed that 80% of universities don’t teach only theoretical knowledge of the subjects but side-by-side also teach practical understanding, so that students should be ready to crack any job interview and get the job which they wanted \n\nOn the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposing case it is often argued that students should start the jobs straight after finishing their initial education people often have this opinion because they think that they would become more responsible and would have more practical knowledge as compared to those who directly enrol themselves in higher education. To exemplify it one of my friends was doing a job right after finishing school, he was doing a job in the automobile industry and was earning a good amount of money apart from that he also paid his complete education fee on his own he didn’t take a single penny from his parents, his father always say that I am proud of my son that how responsible he was during his early age of life, secondly he got admission in the engineering university and was doing automobile engineering and he always scored good marks in every subject not only that he also got the job right after completing his degree because he already had a decent amount of experience in this industry he did not found the job, job found him, hence it is also suggested that students should start the job after completing his or her school \n\nAs we have seen that there are no easy answers to these questions. On balance ,however, I believe that individuals should complete their higher education first rather than doing any kind of employment", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The study the ability of humans to read subatle changesin facial expressions, thast they appiled reverse correlation technique to reveal visual features that mediate understanding of emotion expressed by the face. Suprising finding were that (1) the noise added to test face image had profound effect on the facail expression and (2) in most every istance the new expression was meaningful.\n\nAll 44 major muscles in the mode must move like human muslces. Movemment of one or more mucles is called an \"action unit\" Then Dr. Pual Eckam, creator of (FACS) Ekman has classified six basic emotions- happeniess, suprise, anger, disgust, feat and sadness. In the text it states,\"The soft wear is the latest innovatiobn from Prof. Thomas Huang, of the Beckman Institiute for Advance Science at the University of\n\nIllinois.\" Dr. Huag and colleague are experts at developing better ways fo humans and computers to communicate. The faical expressions for each emotion are univeral, observers Dr. Huang, even thought individuals often show varying degrees of expression (like smiling broadly). Using video imagery, the new emotion-recqizing softwear facture these movements.\n\nThe study the ability of humans to read subatle changesin facial expressions, thast they appiled reverse correlation technique to reveal visual features that mediate understanding of emotion expressed by the face. The process begins whwne the computer constructs a 3-D comupter Model.\n\nThe study the ability of humans to read subatle changesin facial expressions, thast they appiled reverse correlation technique to reveal visual features that mediate understanding of emotion expressed by the face. Facial expression not only expresses emtions but also even help reproduce them. The thought of making faces could reveal so much about the science of emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you wanted to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program before? Well, you should join the program because you can see different parts all over the world, it can be one in a lifetime expericence for you. You can help other people who are in danger or in the need of your help.\n\nFirst, you should join the program because it can be alot of fun for you. You can meet new friends and you can have a job. One of the jobs could be a night watch man. You can go out at night and see if anyone or anything has escaped from the boat. You get to travel on a huge boat, too. Now that is a double bonus for you.\n\nSecondly, you should go because you can help other people. Somewhere, other people who need your help. Helping other people can be good for you.\n\nI mean like you can change into a really nice percon or a whole new person. God will be very proud of you if you help other people, he loves that! Pretend you were needing help and someone helped you, you could be that person, too.\n\nFinally, You get to travel all around the world. You can explore new places and have fun doing it. You get to travel on a huge boat called the SS Charles W. Wooster. It's a really noce boat to travel on. You can to new places all around the world and you can take pictures or even right it down in a journal.\n\nYou should join the Seagoing Cowboys program because you can have a blast of a time, you can help other people who need your help, and you can also travel around the world. Luke Bomberger joined the program and had a great time, you can too. Come join the Seagoing Cowboys program, it can change your life!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There has been a tendency in the demand for accommodations background data from Residents. the forthcoming paragraphs will examine the reasons for this trend, and recommend some practical methods to research this.\r\n\r\n Presumably, the major reason associating with this occurrence stem from people's natural Instinct to know about their Residences. That is to say, history would have effect on both the sense of belonging and the sense of attachment duo in part to curiosity. As a result, having satisfied this sense, dwells are able to elaborate their identity to their roots in a complex yet unconscious process. Moreover, as a tangible procedure, they desire to be aware of any accident for structure. Checking possible incidences, for instance, whether a crime has occurred or a natural disaster like earthquake put both reputation and fortification of the building at jeopardy. Perhaps, if they had known what they are confronting, they would have left the place for significant options. These reasons vividly elaborate people's consist passion about their settlements.\r\n\r\n The obvious method is descriptive approach which culminate with comprehensive information. In other words, asking for brief interview from those who had been living in that neighborhood for considerable period of time could transmit overall vision. Old people, in this case, would be suitable choice for instance, even though their statement might be manipulated by time. Besides, if the building was old, there is certain document in local library as people were used to collect information in those places. The combination these ways not only could it ensure the authenticity of information, but also could it be used for future planning. Therefore, individuals could easily peruse their research based of what has mentioned clearly.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, in Contemporary epoches people are more integrated by history of their buildings because of various reasons, such as there instinct attitude, and their safety. Also, there are a couple of ways they can follow to collect data about that, ranging from getting people's opinions or referring on documents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "young boy bladder squirrel waiting line bathroom super said patience something good always comes patient So waited turn middle line behind five people head six people doin peepee dance He learn polite school let six people go ahead Ten minutes later entered bathroom found one hundred dollar bill floor knew finders keepers polite took learned polite patient right thing plus rewards sometimes", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez author s mood happiness He explains greatful parents home I always grateful parents love sacrifice The author also shows taught things parents happy He thinks family friends important For reasons author created mood happiness memoir", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever hurd are know about are solar system and whats all in it ? Are solar system is made up of alot of things such ass oher planets ,stars ,l arg rocks,and different galexys . Out of all the plantes Earth is the 3rd planet away from the sun .\n\nVenus has its ups and downs and what I mean about this is that venus has good reasons why people shold go study it . Some bad reasons is that Are planets traval at different speeds .\n\nAnd on previous mission no spacecraft have ever survived on the planet for more than a few hours . Something else that is very bad for you is that its atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide and on the surface of the planet temperature reach up to 800 degrees Fahrenheit . Some good things about Venus is that it is cloest planet to Earth in terms of density and size and sometimes close in distance .\n\njust like how earth is now Venus was once coverd largely with oceans and could have supported life forms .\n\nAlso Venus had a surace that is rocky sediment with valleys mountains and craters .\n\nIn conclusion Venus has its ups and downs but I do believe that it is worth studing despite the dangers that come with it . Also i do believe that we should send spacesrafts up there what are mre durable then the other ones that was sent there a long time ago because of the new tecnology that we have . I think that its possable that we could come up with more samples of different items .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Self driving cars are gettiong closer to our generation as time passes. In my opinion self driving cars can be an amazing improvement to both our lives and society. You have less crashes, better programming and software in the car, and more family time. If one thing's sure is that with our technology combined with the future's techonolgy self-driven cars are a reality waiting to happen.\n\nFirst of all you can have less crashes with self driving cars. Most accidents are originated by humans texting while driving, keeping your eyes of the road for family discussions or simply falling asleep on the wheel. In paragraph one it says, \"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\" This refers to Google\" semi self-driven car. It's not fully capable of driving alone, but it had no carshes. Also in the story says it was since 2009. That's about seven years ago. With all the technology we have now our future seems brighter and self-driven cars seem a dream we are soon going to be able to accomplish.\n\nNow a days engineers are taking cars to a whole other step. Cars have good software installed for predicting gas and oil leaks and parking backwards. Also on a Volkswagen Jetta 2016 if you're not paying attention it can break while about to rear end another car. These are all great programming and software changes. Later on we can eventually get software that will be able to make the car keep an eye on the road. It can have sensors that alert weather cars are coming from either right or left direction so it can stop. Also sensors by the tires that could eventually monitor the ground surface around it make sure there's no holes or other hazards. Car proggraming is gradually improving, and with all the technology we have now and the one we'll have in the future we will be able to have self driving cars in about\n\nthe next fifty years.\n\nCrashes occur when arguing with family members, getting distracted while talking to them, or simply just trying to socialize while you drive. These cars are improvements to daily life\n\nand reuniting families. On a road trip you have teenagers on their phones while the kids scream in the back and parents concentrate on the road. there's no time to talk, so by the car driving itself you can surely talk to your family on a family trip or any occasion you drive. Phones won't interrupt and your family could be close once again. Maybe this is a long shot, but with cars driving themselves this could also just be something waiting to happen. Self driving cars will be usefull in the future, and family time will be very good to have on that long roadtrip.\n\nAs our generation advances self-driven cars seem to be closer and closer to us. Cars will be an improvent to our lives and society. Cars will be able to prevent most crashes, and they will also have better programing and software that will be usefull on the road. Families will also be able to have more time together. We are looking at a bright automtive future with improvements waiting to happen.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To most, driverless cars sound like a thing of the future. Something that could never be introduced now, with the technology we have currently. But to a select few people at Google and major car companies, driverless cars are an idea that has been around a long time, and will hopefully stay around a long time in to the future. Driverless cars may sound cool, but the risks, danger, and cost outweigh the positive attributes the idea has.\n\nDriverless cars are vehicles that can operate on the road without a human controlling them. This idea has been around for a while, and throughout the years different companies and scientists have been experimenting with these types of vehicles. So far, these cars have only been able to drive on thier own on specific conditions. Google has had driverless cars since 2009, but these vehicles were only able to operate with no driver on specfic roadways. They weren't able to turn on to driveways or work through traffic without a driver. The amount of research it would take to make a car that could operate fully on its own would be staggering. The amoutnt of money would be outrageous. There can't be a well-functioning driverless car that can operate on ordinary roadways unless there is a large budget and research fund, two things that are very hard to come by in our economy.\n\nResearchers have begun to figure out that the way to improve driverless cars may not lie in the car itself, it may lie in the roadways. In the late 1950s, General Motors experimented with a driverless car that ran on a special track embedded with electrical cables. These cables sent radio signals to a reciever on the front of the car and had the power to control the vehicle. Since then, smarter roads have been tested many times, and they have worked well. But, these roads would be extremely expensive and to put electrical cables in all roadways would take a large amount of time.\n\nWithout smart roads as a main option, companies have been forced to go back to the car and attempt to make changes to better the functions of the car and the safety without spending too much money. This has proved almost impossible. BMW has announced development of a car that has special touch sensors so that the vehicle can steer, accelerate, and brake by themselves, but notify the driver when the road requires human skills. Other companies have followed suit, putting special sensors that allow the car to do some things on its own, but alert the driver whenever they are needed. None of these developments are truly driverless cars, but they are going in the more modern direction. But, these cars do have a downside. If a driver did get hurt while using one of these vehicles, who would be to blame? The car company or the person in the car? Technically the person is supposed to be ready to drive at any time, but any accident could also be the car's fault. The safety danger and these complications with the law overshadow the convience of the touch sensors in these cars.\n\nDriverless cars seem like a convienent and modern alternative to regular cars. But in reality, the money it would take to implement smart roads or make a better functioning driverless car is outrageous. The risk of danger and not knowing who is at fault in a crash are also factors that prove that regular cars are the better option. Driverless cars may be the better option someday in the future when our technology improves, but these special vehicles are not the right choice now.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article, \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the narrator tells us why NASA is struggling so much to explore the planet of Venus, what's so hard about it, and what their plan is.\n\nThe author believes that studying Venus is a \"worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents.\" The author supports his idea very well by proving many good points and using factual evidence.\n\nThe author supports his idea by proving good points and using evidence. You can tell he is sincere about this and would like for the scientists to try and further explore Venus and its commodoties. For example, in paragraph 8, he talks about how our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts. This is a very reasonable statement, and proves that he actually has a reason to want Venus to be explored. Also in paragraph 8, the author says, \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" This quote supports the authors idea because he is giving an ethical reason about why he wants scientists to create the technology to be able to put humans on Venus. He is explaining to the readers why he wants this to take place, and by giving his opinion, it automatically supports him and his idea.\n\nThe author does many things to help support his idea throughout this article. He is very opinionated about why he wants there to be people on Venus. The author support his idea very well by proving many good points and using factual evidence.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Home The Blueprints Our Lives wonderfull memoir tells home truly It loveing careing mood shows thing Love author Narciso Rodriguez likes home He talks grew parents took people needed support helped Going talk parents cared come get good education better life This something takes couragous person person loves cares wants best others Because family sets mood love careness", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether the best way to a successful career is. It is better to gain knowledge in university or it is better to start job right after high school. In this essay, I will explain both possessions and I am going to tell my belief about this discussion.\n\nThe primary factor we need to take into consideration is that in today's society there is like a rule that if you want a successful career, you must graduate from university. Right after school, it is almost impossible to get a job. This is because a person needs specific basics and knowledge in order to start working in any particular profession. Therefore, the employer always requires that you have completed certain studies at a university or college, this is the modern norm. It is true that in university people don’t get real job experience, but those education institutions prepare and lay the foundations for your future work activities, which is very important. In contrast, some others may claim that you don’t need a bachelor or master’s degree to reach a successful career. The knowledge that is acquired at universities is usually not that useful at work, because it is simply not needed. It is obvious that you will not start with the highest positions only after you are employed. Everything happens gradually, step by step, and everything becomes understandable, and you will learn many new things through a job that would not be taught at the university.\n\nHaving considered both views, I think it is necessary to graduate from an educational institution and get a degree. College or university are those places where the value of the human person is raised.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "At present time, there have been many intelligent robots that can be able to work as same as humans do. Although, some might say that people are into and can be more practical, some argue that a smart invention is totally accurate. I strongly believe that we should intrigate between humankind and robots because both of them have its pros and cons. This essay will explore the benefits and some drawbacks in following paragraphs.\r\n\r\nAs nowadays there are a number of artificial intelligent robots involve in many industries for a few advantages. One of these is they provide more accurate and precise processing than human. For example, there is a medical robotic machine which helps pharmacist to prepare the tablets for their patients and the medical errors are rarely found when compared to providing medicine without helping of intelligent machanical inventions.\r\n\r\nIn contrast, a person can do some task better than a robotic invention, such as cooking in the high class restaurant as the fantastic meals need to be done by a sophisticated chief who can put and test the best ingradient in a hot pot for their customers. Nevertheless, a worker need to get paid for their insurance and other welfares while a robot does not need anythings like humans do.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, there are advantages and disadvantages both of these of them. A company should wisely make a dicision before choosing and consider which one is more worth or they can apply both of them in order to make more profits. Moreover, the most crucial is they can afford it. I believe that the organizations could earn more income if they opt a smart option.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Computers little effect people In fact computers help us lot They help us find medical research tell weather cancer The computers people think machines sit room used often purpose People use sometimes entertainment research There nt kind computers There bigger advanced computers scientist use every day computers effect us good way Most time people playing games music kids bopard They use little often I anly play rainy days I ca nt go outside play Humans use computers mainly makes life simpler easier make life simpler like example instead handwriting report type intead searching everywhere book go straight information One last example want stay updated favorite sport team nt go game go web site In opinion I say computers effect us good reason I m sports fan I play lot sports I use computer offer fun research It dose nt effect It dose nt effect I still exercise play friends often like everyday There reason people ca nt use computers quite often Computers nt positive effect sometime nt negitive effect sometime either I exercise enjoy nature interact friends family I also use computer often Experts nt concerned people using computers much", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The obstacles builders Empire State Building faced due addition mooring mast First architects modify steel frame Empire state building The architects knew large mooring mass could simply placed building flat roof Marcia Amidon Lsted explains tha A thousandfoot dirigible moored top building held single cable tether would add stress building frame CAPS Because building needed adapt situation spent modify framework Another obstacle builders Empire State Building face safety issues new mooring mast These concerns safety arrose incident Hindenburg German dirigible destroyed fir Lakehurst New Jersey Because US used hydrogen rather helium risks higher Helium flammable Lsted writes owners Empire State realized much worse accident could taken place densely populated area downtown New York Lsted The Empire State Building impractical location airship dock Finally late s certain mooring mass would fulfill purpose dirigibles given way airplanes", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood article stunning explaining parents good explaining raised well gives people thought good especially fun friends familyThe author set good mood towards readers article people like read something would make happy story made feel good self family like family heor article", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This picture on the right shows more and more detail as the years go by. It starts to get more and more focused when the cameras improve. This is one of the reasons why it can't be aliens.\n\nAs you see, throught the years, the world has devolped better technology. We've made better cameras and have found out a way to make things even more clear. In 1976, the picture appears blurry. It doesnt look focused on it at all. So what I am trying to say is, that this could not have been clear at first and that they didn't know what they were seeing at first. It could have been there the whole time.\n\nThe texts states what the picture actually shows. It says, \"what the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-- landforms common around the American West.\" This is a landform. Garivn states that it reminds him most of Middle Butte in the Snake RIver Plain of Idaho. People have seen this types of landforms on Earth too, and there is no aliens on Earth. they have said it's a lava dome that takes form of an isolated mesa.\n\nIn the text, it says that scientists figured it was just another Martin mesa. They even said it was common around that area, Cydonia. The only thing that was different was, that it had shadows around it. That is completly normal for shadows to appear.\n\nAccording to the research I have learned, I believe that this was not made by aliens. I believe, that this is a landform. There is no scienitifict proof that an alien had decided to make this. There is no actual evidence.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think driverless cars is safer than non-driverless cars? Some people think that driverless cars ae better and others don't,but I know that driverless cars are better. There are a huge amout of reasons why driverless cars are better but I am going to name a few.\n\nOne reason driverless cars are better is because the smart cars will have the new technology. Paragraph 4 states, \"Google's modified Toyota Pruis uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel,a rotating sensor on the roof,a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror,four automotive radar sensors,a GPS receiver,and an inertial motion sensor. The most important bit of technology in this system is the spinning sensor on the roof. Dubbed LIDAR,it uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surroundings.\"All of the new technology allows the driverless are to copy the skill of a human at the wheel. The non-driverless cars doesn't really have all of this newer technology.\n\nAnother reason driverless cars are safer because within 10 years the sensors will become more complex and advanced. The sensors on the car will be able find and respond to the dangerous situations,such as rollovers or skids. Accoring to paragraph 5,\"Within 10 years,those sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers. The information for the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine,allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\"More improvements to the sensors and computer hardware not only make driving safer but it could make the car handle more driving task by itself.\n\nDriveless cars do has its fault too. You can't even test out a driverless car or computer driven car in most states,according to the passage. In California,Nevada,Florida. and the District of Columbia have led the country in allowing limited use of semi-autonomous cars,as stated in paragraph 9. the government still need to make new traffic laws for the driverless cars too. For example,if the driverless car is crashing by itself and someone gets injured who is responsible for the injuries.\n\nIn conclusion,driverless cars is the better and safer car because they will have sensors on them and the new technology. With the driverless cars the driver can just relax and let the driverless car do the work. The driverless car will be way more advanced than any other non-driverless car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay Rough road ahead exeed posted speed limit author continually depressed features landscape passes At first passes ghost town enough water sight doesnt bothe But next thing sees rundown old shed rusted water pump troubles running water Then sees huge snake help mood snake blocking path passes abandoned Welchs Grape Juice factory despairs never find water The setting features serve dissappoint depress cyclist quest find water", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of technology is becoming majorly innovative as we go on the 21st century. In this article we learn about aa new \"Tool\" about face recongition acoording to the new software developed by Thomas Huang a professor at the unniversity of illinois. In the reeading this software claims to be a new sort of \"Da vinci code \" for face recongition. What this new technology does is it recongizes your emotions just by looking into your face, The tool would be able to tell how happy ,sad ,mad etc. you are. They do this by catching the movements of our face muscles to know what is going on in our emotions. Prof. Huang believes that this might be the next huge thing and can help us in our daily lives such as for example-video surgery, video games, classroom computer. The use of this technology for me for students in a classroom me being on in partciular i believe is not the most needed tool or necessary if we're being honest here. In the article it begins to state that we may use this in a classroom. I state that if a child in the classroom has a confusion or question they would ask for themselves that they are having trouble. I think that the facial recongition might be a little to personal for the students for example, They might be having a troubling day and they might get called out for being out of zone just because the facial emotons he portrays. I believe that this computer device software doesnt really have a life changing meaning to it. This might help some people if they want to know how someone feels, We are humans though will a computer really tell someone how were truly feelings inside . I think our eyes are as real or as close as it gets. What do you get having a whole software just to tell you or let you know what you already can see. Technology like this can be cool but if we really want to change the world we need to take charge and make better innovative ideas. What ever happened to verbal communication for others, This will take apart just another piece of communication we have eft towards each other by the way this 21st century is being held, All im saying is that is this tool truly necessary? With that having in mind i can get it predicting how someone can use this for other pruposes as such for video games or computer softwares so they can have a much surreal facial development for them. If we want this all over the US then it will not only be expensive but a waste of time. In the article it was stated that \" Most human communication is non verbal, including emotional communication ,so computers need to understand that too\" we get that we are getting used to so much advancements for us because the use of technology but seriously where does this get us ? us as humnas have such more deeper emotions than \"sad\" \"mad\" thats just surface hitting from what we actually feel and seem to show throughout our faces and body language. This is going to take away from what we can communiate with someone and try to make them feel better ,humans arent computers so we also need to understand that and stop trying to incooperate every single litle thing of technology i our lives when we dont need it despertly. In Conclusion i feel like this article from the perspective of prof.Huang can make me realize how maybe this can help game software development for a more real life like experience, But it doesnt take away how i feel that there is no such than better than our human instict when it comes to these things and we need to have more communications skills if this even becomes an ' Issue\" rather than ruining it and making this computer read how we \"feel\". Computer technologies are not humans they might help us in other things,but it should never replace our instincts.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many car manufacturers are currently trying to produce a safe and workable car that can be driven by technology. These types of driverless cars would definitely be revolutionary in our society and to most a very useful and helpful product. When you look at it, it seems like a great idea to not have to drive manually all of the time, but is this really the best way to go about driving?\n\nI believe that driverless cars are useful, but not the best idea. There is nothing stronger than a human's reaction, instinct,\n\nand response to a situation. Even if there are sensors that are helping to drive the car without a person at the wheel, there is no guarentee of safety that can come from these machines. If there were to be a need for a stop on the side of the road, or a need to move over for emergency vehicles, would the \"smart\" car know how to react to this? It is said in paragraph 9 that as a result of these uncertain safety regulations four different states have made it illegal to test these types of cars. This can be looked at as four states realizing the risk of driverless cars and doing something to stop it from happening. However, you could look at it from the other side of the curve, and see that there are some pretty sweet benefits to having a driverless car.\n\nAlthough they are slower at making decisions, driverless cars could also be helpful in situations where your screaming and kicking children need your attention. They could also be useful if you have an important call from work or a serious call from your child's school, or something of that sort, and you need to answer it without being distracted from the road. When in these situations, the car could take over driving for you long enough for you to take care of the event. The car should be able to hold it steady long enough for the driver to complete their need and come back to focus on driving.\n\nDriverless cars might be nice and provide lots of great opportunities for drivers in these situations, but considering overall safety, a human driver will be smarter about how to keep control over the car. Also, the cost is a big part of this too. If the cost of making driverless cars is way too high then is it really worth doing this for our economy when we are already struggling as a country? With our current transportation system, most people can get from point A to point B with no trouble except for an occasional breakdown if you are unlucky. Paying all of that money to replace working products with ones that promote laziness is not the ideal way to go about transportation.\n\nThis topic can be viewed in a many number of ways, but I believe that driverless cars are not something that should be invested in. If we want our transportation system to be better, we should focus on improving our current mode, not creating a new one to make it more convenient. If you agree with this, write a letter to the government or to the manufacturers of these cars and tell them to not pass laws in favor of this or to stop producing them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear I aganist people using computers But I thought I decided aganist using computers For reasons safety stop education sites appropriate see I know many people think come using computer safe Well eventhough talking someone person computer computer safe The reason time would thats thirty like I use ages kids age man one myspace like thirty like us knowing comes myspace put another picture young start thinking meet something happend For example friend myspace talking fourtyone year old met know age rapped Not everybody true computer Education important even adults children Bieng computer going bring education going brings The reason threw come home school put hookbag eat straight myspace instead studying reading homework Eventhough websites help learn myspace read messages look people comments Like example I would go instead learning new I bieng learning new information Learning brings achievement computer brings succeeding There much I say sites thats appropriate I say watch see myspace cause might something suppose raped went Be careful", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Stepping foot in venus would be a wrong idea without many research of how to do that. I think that the author used enough information to support the idea of Venus being a dangerous site. The author uses information to prove that Venus is a dangerous site by giving description,making observations,and doing research.\n\nThe author uses research information by proving that venus is a dangerous site .Text evidence that supports this is in the text it says,\"Maybe this issue explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades.\"This shows that the author explains from studies that no one ever step foot into Venus .\"Another piece of evidence that supports that the author uses research information to prove that Venus is in the text in paragraph 3 it says,\"On the planet's surface ,temperatures average over 800 degrees farenheit ,and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\"This shows that the author is trying to talk about how hot the planet venus is and it can hurt us humans to be there,because nowhere in Earth is as hot as Venus.\n\nThe author also uses description to prove that Venus is a dangerous planet. The author does that by talking about the weather ,and observations that they found. Text vidence that supports this is in the text it says,\"Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes ,powerful earthquakes ,and frequent lightning strikes to probe seeking to land on it's surface.\"This shows that the author is proving the fact that the weather in Venus is more severe than any other planet in the solar system. Another piece of evidence that supports that is in the text it says,\"Modern computers are enormously powerful ,flexible ,and quick ,but tend to be more delicate when it comes to extreme physical conditions.\"This shows that the author gave a point by finding out about observations of how powerful ,well-advanced technology can not survive in a place like Venus.\n\nThis is why I think the author used an abundant amount of information to prove that Venus is a dangerous planet that people can study ,because of it's geological study of weather,and it's conditions .This shows that the author proved his/her point that Venus is the most dangerous planet that people could explore .The author does this by giving information,making observations,and giving description to help the reader understand how dangerous this planet is .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars has been a pop icon for years. Many people believe that the Face on Mars is made by aliens. The Face on Mars is a natural landform and was not created by aliens. The evidence that proves this is true is there is another landform just like it on Earth and there are detailed pictures that show it is just a natural landform.\n\nThe first evidence that shows it is just a landform is the fact that there is another natural landform like that on Earth. The picture shows an equivalent to a butte or messa, which is a landform that is common around the American West. The text says, \"'It reminds me of the most Middle Butte in the Snake Plain of Idaho,'...about the same height as the Face on Mars.'\"\n\nThis quote is giving a clear example of someone saying that the Face is like a natural landform on Earth. If it is like something that is made on Earth naturally, that means it could probably made naturally on Mars too. There is another great piece of evidence showing that it is a natrual landform.\n\nAnother piece of evidence that proves the Face is a natural landform is that there are detailed pictures that show it is all natural. In 2001 NASA could take pictures with each pixel thats spans 1.56 metes, which is very detailed for the technology we have. The text says, \"'Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution.'\" This example goes to show that NASA took a picture using the best resolution they had on their cameras to show and see the fact that it is not alien made and is all naturally made.\n\nMany people believe the Face on Mars is made by aliens but that is not true at all. The Face is just a natural landform. The evidence that goes to prove it is the fact that there is another landform just like it on Earth and there are detailed pictures that show it is just a natural landform.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]