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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The environment affected cyclist violently story do exceed posted speed limit It seems harsh conditions cycling California worn kid took faulty directions older people one stop The heat lack water supply made boy dehydrated It says essay The water bottles contained tantalizing sips Wide rings dried sweat circled shirt growing realization I could drop heat stroke georgus day June simply I listend gentlemen explains simply exhausted become due miles cycling beating sun total lack water due absence towns He came point almost dying heat exhausgen faulty directions old people Next time better make sure keep extra water stick map directions", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are no longer just a facination of the human mind. In todays world, more and more people are funding and creating automomous vehicles. The advancements in technology and human understanding have come together to soon bring us the driverless car. The idea of a car without human assistance is ghostly, yet very interesting. I believe that human driven cars will soon be a thing of the past, and that the development of these new vehicles will be the new normal.\n\nVehicles without human drivers is the next big thing in society. Already, automakers have created cars that need human assistance when in dangerous situations. These vehicles will provide saftey, comfort, and cleanliness to a world that needs it. Everyone's main goal is to stay safe when they are on the road. With these new vehicles, no one will have to worry about all of the dangers presented today. The cars will brake, accelerate and drive wherever the driver desires. Without all of the stress of long trips, people will be able to rest and be alert for whatever is thrown their way. No one will have to intervene unless absolutely necessary. Many car companies and other organizations have decided to fund a driverless car. I beieve that it is the right thing to do, and that all will benefit from the experience. At some point, many will realize that computers are smarter than humans in many ways. Even though many think that the computers will have internal failure and create issues, I do not think that is the case. Companies involved in this new technology will test the product far before the release of any of their final product. The last thing they want is to have a disaster of driverless car failure. The fact that people support these ideas rather than oppose them shows that the majority of the population will want these vehicles on the street. The advancements that are currently being made and the support of the public make a point. Completely driverless cars will be here soon, and it is only a matter of time before everyone is introduced.\n\nAutonomous cars are soon to be here, and soon everyone will recognize the new technology rolling around the streets. The acknowlegement of this accomplishment is astounding to all that try to understand it. This is the new normal, and it is sure to go on for years to come. Everyone will want to see a car that no one has to drive. This is how far technology and understanding has gotten people. Never in anyone's wildest dreams did they think of a car without a human behind the wheel. Now, people do not have to try to believe it. They are going to have to accept and understand that it is happening.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Facial action coding system is the future of reading emotions. I think that using this technology in classrooms would be very valuable. We could find what the students like. We could get everyones opinion easier. We could have unweighted test, kids wouldnt need to change their answers based on their friends. So i think that using this facial action coding system would be good for the school.\n\nUsing this system could help us learn what students like. For example if they play a series of ads we could moniter their facial expressions after each ad. Also we could find what the students like to read about, for example if the kids are reading some text they may smile when they think its good. Using this system would help alot to figure our students out.\n\nUsing this system woud also help us get information easier. we could get kids to use it but like alot of them at the same time and it would be easier than just having you question them one by one. The system would be more efficient and effective. They can record the data and run it in a chart to find what kids refer in a larger scale but it would be fater and more accurate than questioning them one by one without the system. The system would help out the school by letting them do this much faster.\n\nIf schools used the system then kids wouldnt have to lie. kids wouldnt really be able to lie cause the system can recongnize wha they are thinking and how they are feeling. Kids wouldnt change their answer becasue of what theryre friends picked. They cant really change their facial expressons at first. you react how you react You react how you feel.\n\nIn conclusion I think that using this system at schools would really help the school. it would help the students, it would help everyone. Students could be honest and it would be alot more accuarte. so system is a yes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Over the past decades, environmental problems have never failed to draw public attention and provoke debates. Although the severity and urgency of addressing environmental problems properly are hardly arguable, the issue as to whether governments should deal with these issues with higher price of fuels or not remains controversial. From my own perspective, I consider this approach is ineffective. Firstly, it is important to recognize that although the occurrence of positive outcome towards environment is almost inevitable, the final result may not be as expected for long. Some may hold optimistic attitude that this particular approach would be the effect on limiting the number of cars and thereby reducing the amount of environment-damaging gas emission. This argument could be true to some extent. However, they should take into account the fact that since the cost of public transport would also be affected, resistance in people with the need of travel seems to be inevitable, hence the impossibility of achieving the desired goal. Therefore, increasing fuel prices will not make any significant changes. Secondly, it is equally important to recognize that there is evidence that waste gas from cars is not the leading cause of air pollution. The opponents may argue that the combustion of fossil fuels by cars is the main producer of carbon dioxide. Nevertheless, they are ignorant of the fact that the chef culprit is the discharge of pollutants into the atmosphere due to the rapidly growing manufacturing industry. Governments could better handle this problem if they could increase control over industrial waste-discharge and adopt more environmental friendly materials and production equipment. For example, wind and tidal power in the Netherlands, nuclear power in Japan and solar power in the United States have all proven their efficiency in energy production. This example indicates that other solutions could be employed in other parts of the world to minimize the global dependence on fossil fuel. In conclusion, under no circumstances should increasing the price of fuels be taken as the best solution to environmental issues, as it has neglected both the reaction of consumers and the root cause of the problem as mentioned above.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To whom it may concern, I have recently been enlightened on what Electoral College is all about. According to \"What Is the Electoral college?\" Electoral college is a compromise between election of the president by a vote in congress and the election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens. It consists of the selection of the electors, the meeting of the electors where they vote for President and Vice President, and the counting of the electoral votes by Congress. As quoted also from \"What Is the Electoral College?\" by the Office of the Federal Register.\n\nFirst of all, the Electoral College should be kept because no, one region has the ability to elect a president. A certain region can gather all it's people to favorite one of the candidates, but it still won't be enough to reach a biased conclusion in the final election. The candidates also cannot count on one of their favorite states or rven regions for them to win because, with only regional or state appeal, it will become unlikely for them to be a successful president.\n\nIn addition, having The Electoral College will ensure that the larger states can't overrule the smaller state based on population. It balances the weight of more populated states to smaller populated states. This is good because now, the smaller populated states will feel that they actually have power in the Election process instead of feeling left out due to a larger population. This is also significant because now the candidates won't aim their campaigning only towards the higher populated states. They will go all around the country trying to emphasize their importance in winning the campaign.\n\nIn conclusion, the obvious solution here is to keep using the Electoral College process. It not only ensures that one state or region does not have enough votes alone to sway the election, it allows the smaller populated states to have just as big of a say in the election as the larger states. The procedure of using The Electoral college has been around for quite a while now and it's clear why. It is the most beneficial way of ensuring that the right candidate will get into office, based off of the right terms.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The latest technology called the FACS or Facial Action Coding System detects the emotional state of kids or adults. This technology is a leading way to help students out in a classroom or a work environment. This technology is supposedly able to help find the emotions of a human and how they feel by recognizing their facial features and muscles.\n\nThis new technology FACS, known as the Facial Action Coding System reads the facial features and the way humans use their muscles in their faces to recognize their emotional state, whether they be happy, sad etc. This new technology would not benefit our society today for the reason that we have careers and jobs in understanding humans emotional state, the time, money and effort spent in learning this would all be replaced by a robot or new technology, this causes jobs to be lost and people that spent their lives and money learning this career are out of a job because of a technology. FACS is good in a way to survey an area of people but not a necessity to the world today.\n\nAlthough reading a students emotional state in a classroom is a good benefit and way to figure out whether or not that student needs more help or is the reason he/she are a disturbance in class or failing in a classroom. I believe it is a good thing to have at a school because kids today hide their emotions, and avoid socialization because of their emotional state, and if we have that today in our classrooms we could help kids grades rise, fights lessen, and even could stop bullying with knowing that a kid is in fear, why is he/she in fear? or a kid is sad? etc. These things help us understand what to do in order to keep the school safe and student happy in the classroom.\n\nIf the FACS is able to read students emotions and detect if that human is sad, happy etc. then yes this technology would be a great resource in the classroom or school today because of so many things happening over the world teachers and their staff should be able to use this technology to undestand their students emotions in order to help them in a classroom and figure out how to help them in academics for a better future. The article in this passage talks about how the FACS can even adress emotional views from a picture that dated back to the era when Da Vinci was painting, and this even could give us what emotion the Mona Lisa out out and how Da Vinci used facial features to depict emotion in his paintings, this could bring out the views of people back in the 1800s or even earlier.\n\nThough I am not for this technology for the fact that we do not need a machine or computer telling us what state of emotion were in, it could be a great use in the school board today with all the violence and cyber communication that happens. The only good reason to bring this computer or technology into the public is in our classrooms to keep the students in a good school environment so that they can succeed and continue with grades that meet the highest standards so that they can have an education to look upon when they apply for a job, for that is the only reason this could even be worth the money.\n\nOverall the technology or FACS, is a good learning tool for our school board and classrooms today, but only for the student body this could work tremendous and help our society. If there was a way to create a facial recognition system that could help our society and our criminals today and understand how they think then there is a chance that this could go farther in our world. Overall this new technology is not a good source or worth the money to put out to the public, I say this because as our world gets older and our generation furthers themselves, it is too easy to see the emotional state of human beings, we do not need a computer to say it understands better than the human body that gets study everyday.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The development of driverless cars has come a long way since the first concept back in the late 1950's when General Motors expiremented with smart roads. Many automobile companies are now working on cars that do not need a driver, and can maneuver like the cars we use today. These driverless cars will be safer, more efficient, and better for the environment. The development of these cars could revolutionize the world for the better.\n\nIf cars are eventually able to drive themselves, people's lives will become much easier and safer. People will have the ability to relax and enjoy a stress free drive to their destination. Drunk drivers will also be taken off the roads in a way, because they will not be behind the wheel controlling the vehicle. Texting and driving will become a thing of the past because people will now have the ability to do what they want, when they want; as the car will be able to drive itself. The safety these cars bring to the world is something we could never come close to if we continued to allow humans to drive, and human error to unfold.\n\nDriverless cars have the ability to increase the efficiency today's cars already have that people waste. No longer will you deal with people on their phones not realizing there is a green light, because the car will go automatically. No longer will you deal with the old grandma who is driving ten miles per hour under the speed limit, because her car will be going faster. No longer will you deal with teenagers doing burnouts at stoplights, because the cars will accelerate safely once the green light is given. Driverless cars will take human inefficiency off of the roads.\n\nThese driverless cars not only will take away any lack of efficiency humans have, but also will be better for the environment. With modern advancements in cars and engines, we are quickly headed towards cars that get well over 40, 50, and even 60 miles per gallon. The more we advance through time, the better these engines will get. Eventually, we will have cars that may not need to run on gasoline, but electricity instead. If we match up highly fuel efficient vehicles and take away the danger and inefficiency humans bring to driving, transportation can be changed forever and be much safer, cleaner, and less stressful.\n\nPeople who oppose driverless cars mostly point towards the fact that we should not trust the technology. However, how should we trust the human body and mind, which has so often led to car accidents and deaths. People also point out that it would be boring just sitting there with nothing to do. But, if the car is driving itself that gives people the opportunity to do whatever they feel like doing while on the road.\n\nDriverless cars have a long way to go before they are the number one mode of transportation. However, we should keep working on them because they just might change the world for the better.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the passage \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" explains why the exploration of Venus is a worthy pursuit even though there are dangers. As stated in the article Venus which is reffered to as Earth's \"Twin\" would be most suitable for life on another planet. There are risks of taking the exploration to Venus such as a successful landing and and harsh tempatures, but if you look at the upside of potential life on a new planet the pros out weigh the cons on the oppurtunity to explore Venus.\n\nThe author supports the idea of exploring Venus for potential life by explaining how Venus is the \"Most Earth-like in our solor system.\" Signs of water on Venyss from long ago could have supported many forms of life on Venus. The passage also says \"Today, Veneus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth.\" which shows the simililarities to the planets. Which also ties into how Venus is the closest planet to Earth with the features it has.\n\nThe other side to why we should continue our exploration on to Venus is because we have the technology in today's world that is advanced enough to get to Venus. NASA has shown they have the technology to last on the surface of the earth for 3 weeks which is a great start to exploring the surface of the planet. NASA also came up with the idea of \"Allowing scientist who go to Venus to float above the fray.\" which means the scientist would be in Venus but they wouldn't be on the surface. That would allow the scientists to get a a bird's eye view of what Venus is like.\n\nWith strong evidence like how closely Venus is related to Earth and the technology we have on Earth to get us to Venus the author is able to make a good arguement and support the exploration of Venus. The Pros such as a new potential of life, and the exploration of a new planet out weigh the cons which are cost and, the danger of landing on Venus.\n\nTherefore the support the author used, makes the exploration of Venus a claim that has evidence behind it to support his idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"What it that? How did it get there? Will we be attacked by marshans?\" Yes, these are the questions that a lot of people asked NASA when they found an interesting photo on Mars. The picture is supposedly a \"face\", but to astronomers, it is just a rock formation.\n\nHundereds of people think that there was a human head on Mars, but from what astronomers had to say about it, it was the truth. In 1976, NASA got their first look at the \"face\" on Mars. A couple days later NASA relased the image of the \"face\" to the public the caption was simple as it states in the text, \"huge rock formation...which resembles a human head...formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" After that, it was a pop icon, attracting people into learning more about this planet.\n\nThe \"Face on Mars\" became very popular when it came to scaring humans. According to the text it states \"It has starred in a Hollywood film, appeared in books, magazines, radio talk shows-- even haunted grocery store checkout lines for 25 years!\" In films, as always, Hollywood would \"tweak\" the truth to have more people come and see the movie. This was partly the cause of people believing that there is life on mars. However, astronomers are saying that there could have been life on Mars because, of dry river and lake beds on the surface of The Red Planet. Still, that does not prove that there were marshans.\n\nAstronomers are still trying to convince people that there is not life on Mars. According to the text it states \"What the picture actually shows ins the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa--landforms common around the American West.\" This is showing what it really looks like. Besides, from background knowledge it is not possible for a human to live on Mars. There is no oxygen for us to breathe, no water, and no food. Nothing.\n\nTechnology has advanced in the past 25 years, showing us clearer pictures in space. This is incuding the \"face\" on Mars. It will forever be a mystery, but from what astronomers have said it will always be a rock formation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine having a bad day, and no one knows whats wrong with you or why you are mad, you friends and family are trying to look at you and figure out whether your mad, frustrated or worse, but because you've been hiding your emotions all day they can't seem to realize why. The day is over and they finally realize that you are mad based on your facial expressions and how you've been acting lately, but had they been using the Facial Action Coding System they would've known before hand.\n\nI believe that the Facial Action Coding System is a brillant idea and should be used for everyday purposes. Not only can it read and detect your emotions, but it can also give you an result of how your feeling for any occasinal day even if your hiding your emotions. \"Using video imagery, the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements-in a real face or in the painted face of Mona Lisa.\" This detail shows how efficient this can be for many people and students as well.\n\nTo be aware of the feelings that different people have everyday, the Facial Action Coding System will have to do accurate calculations to determine whether a person is having a bad day or not. Some of these calculations can determine and even find new information about a person as well. \"By weighting the different units, the software can even identify mixed emotions (as in da Vinci's masterpiece). Each expression is compared against a neutral face (showing no emotion).\" This detail shows that even though the computing sysytem might know the person's feelings it still needs to perfrom calculations to prove these results.\n\nWithout the Facial Action Coding System we as people could never excalty calculate and tell the exact mood or feeling a person could be having everyday. These computing systems are the best resources we have to identify the mixed emotions that a person could or may have. These computers could be great tools for teachers to use in the classroom. Such as a student having a bad day, using\n\nthese computers can help a teacher identify whether to help a student or not based on different expressions a student is having. \"For instance, you can probably tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on her face. Of course, most of us would have trouble actually describing each facial trait that conveys happy, worried, etc.\"\n\nLast but not least I truly believe that Facial Action Coding System is valuable in many ways, and can help solve, and face any problems that people could be having everyday, thanks to the Facial Action Coding System.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The idea of having driverless cars is interesting. The thought of not having to worry about the dangers of being on the road, when your car is the one doing all of the work for you. There are many positives to having the driverless car, but there are as many negative as there is positive.\n\nSergey Brin, Google cofounds, envisions a future with a public transportation system. He imagines this system to become a form of a public taxi transport. Brin's idea allows the vehicles to use half the fuel that taxis use today and it offers more flexibility than a bus. Google created a car. Google has had cars that could drive under specific conditions and their cars have driven more than half a million miles without having a crash. Now, ideas of the driverless car were sparked up by the idea in movies. Companies have tried to make the driverless car work, but no one has made a driverless car that doesn't need the assistance of the driver, yet. Companies started to question if it wasn't the car that wasn't making their project work and maybe it was the roads that the cars were driving on. In the late 1950s, General Motors created a car that could only run on a special track that was embedded with electrical cables. The cables sent a radio signal to the front of the car. The smart road system worked exceptionally well, but the upgrade to new roads would simply be too expensive. There are many car manufacturing companies working on the progress of making driverless cars happen, but the cars still need the drivers to be on alert to watch out for pedestrians, other motorists and etc.\n\nOur form of transportation is evolving right before our own eyes and its quite exciting to know that by the time I'm in college, driverless cars won't just be an idea that I thought would have been nearly impossible to accomplish.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are many advantages on limiting the usage of cars in many Country's around the world. For example, the United States, Paris, and even small areas like the German Suburbs. Because of the usage of cars we are starting to get a lot of pollution, and lots of tax money going towrds our roads.\n\nAccording to source 1 \"In German Suburb, Life Goes on Without Cars\" says that \"In Previous bills 80 percent of appropriations have by law gone to highway and only 20 20 percent to other transport.\" Beaucse of this many expect public transport serving suburbs to play a largerrole in a six-year federal transportation bill to be approved sometime this year. also, as found in paragraph 5 \"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 pecent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe . . . anfd up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States.\" there for is causing problrms to our invierment.\n\nParis is also having problems with pollution. From reading \"Paris bans diving due to smog\" by Robert duffer. tells us reads that after days of near-record pollution Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air in the city. And that the congestion was down 60 persent in the capital of France, after five days of smog. In Reading paragraph 17 \"Paris typically has more smog than other European Capitals . . . [Last] week Pairs had 147 micrograms of particulate matter (PM) per cubic meter compared with 114 in brussels and 79.7 in London, Reuters found.\" from reading that you can tell that Pairs has a high level of polloution.\n\nfoud in source 4 \"With all these changes, people who stopped car commuting as a result to the habit.\" Meaning if everyone walked or biked instead of using cars we would be use to it and not depend on them. From the same source in paragraph 36 you can infer that in New York that many people are starting to use bikes insted of cars, as found \"New York's new bike-sharing program and its skyrocketing brige and tunnels tools reflect those new priorities, as do proliferation of car- sharing programs across the nation.\" Then in Paragraph 38 , it tells us that the population suggest that the trend of demographic shifts in driving may accelerate.\n\nFrom reading the sources and adding up all of the information it is vary easy to infer that we would have a lot of advantages if we didnt use cars. we would have less polloution and would be paying less for roadways.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am against the value of using this technology to read students emotional expressions. The technology is something that for a couple of years before has evolve, and it is very advance right now; but it's not 100% dependable because is not perfect. Like the article said, \"people can imitate another person's expression. I don't think that a computer is going to read someone who don't show his feelings. In my opinion it is not dependable and it is unusable.\n\nI'll want to test one of that computers to know if that really works, but like I said, it is not dependeble. The technology is advance but it is hard to believe that a computer can read all your emotions exactly like they are. Dr. Huang said that computers need to understand that most of the human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication. I don't think a computer is going to understand somthing like that.\n\nI'm against because the technology is not 100% dependeble; technology is very useful but not very fiable. Some people can just do fake emotions and the computer is going to read it like normal I think. In my opinion it is not a good idea to use it with students, they just can express theirselfs by talking and telling what they like or what they not.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Who would one blame if they lost a loved one in a driverless car accident? The driver or the company of said car? Would you risk your life and others by using a driverless car? All these questions are what you should be asking yourself before you jump head first at the idea of driverless cars.\n\nIn paragraph seven the author states, \"This means the human driver must remain alert and ready to take over when the situation requires.\" but in today's society being distracted on the road is a big issue. News reports are constantly shown about how drivers were disracted by their smartphones and had an accident due to them not being aware or being able to adjust to that sudden level of awareness so quickly. So how will driverless cars change that level of awareness so quickly? It won't, if anything the driver would be more distracted by smaller things rather than if they were driving the car completly by themselves.\n\nWould you put your life in the hands of a computer? By supporting the idea of driverless cars, you are. The driverless car simply just a computer chip built into your car. Yes, while it might be easier to go on road trips or somewhere you have never been, what would you do if it broke down? (like all computers eventually do) How would you know where to go and what would happen? All these questions are things you should be asking yourself before you put your life, and others, in the hands of a small chip.\n\nThink of how much more expensive repairs would be compared to a regular car. In paragraph three, while explaining about the engineers model from Berkeley, the author claimed, \" These smart-road systems worked surprisingly well, but required massive ugrades to existing roads, something that was simply too expensive to be practical.\" Not only would fixing repairs be expensive but to change roads also? Why would you want to waste money on something you already have that gets the job done for the same thing? Only difference is that its newer.\n\nAsk yourself this, how you you feel \"driving\" a driverless car? Would you become distracted? Do you get distracted in a regular car by your phone? How safe are driverless cars? Driverless cars are not as great as society believes they are, they will probably be better off staying as ideas that we see in comic books or movies about the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph thinks itll bring good luck test When goes back take test shell comfort home land hibiscus plant encourage pass driving test When takes test shell mast pass due comfort home shell used area different homeland In order well test needs something help little confident Having things remind home house lives help lot confident", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In modern life, it is believed that some individuals have different views about the function of museums. In my personal view, building can and should play a role in both educating and entertaining.\r\n\r\n On the one hand first and most important thing , it can be argued that the main role of a museum is to educate.foundation contain and preserve a huge number of historical records and ancient objects, which is used to broaden objects, which is used to broaden society's knowledge of previous events, human history or the world in the future. In this way,hall can play an important role in teaching nation about history, culture,science,technology and many other aspects of life .\r\n\r\n However, many community think that library are tourist attractions and entertaining places.Some institution related to art , nature or technology are exhibiting a great quantity of interesting things that public want to see. In order to attract more visitors and diminish their boredom.For this reason, many salon have taken advantage of advantaged technology to make their exhibitions become vivid.\r\n\r\n To sum up , this essay discussed the main positive and negative sides. In my opinion exhibitions in the museum are appropriate if they are educational because most young public are interested in history.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"making Mona Lisa Smile,\" the author describes how a new technology called the facial action coding system enables computers to identify human emotions. being able to detect exactly how other people are feeling, even when they are hideing their emotion.\n\nIn my opinion we\n\ntechnology can tell your emotions as in paragraph 3 the author stated that \"the process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face, the facial expression for each emotion are universal.\"we humans perform this same caculation every day.for instance,you can probaly tell how a friend is feeling simply by the look on him/her face. so that mean the computer would have to get a visual with the face to determine the emotion of the human.\n\nIn my conclusion in the article \"making Mona Lisa Smile\" the author made an strong argument about how technology can tell humans emotions and how the technogloy has been\n\ncreated to identify the emotions of humans. Also to determine the values of the human faces and new technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is believed by some individuals any additional rise in economic wealth does not make citizens any more satisfied when the nation is already rich. I agree with this argument if the country is rich that is no more impact on their satisfaction.\n\nFirst of all, the country which is fully extended and famous or facilities are wealth development, it is seen that there are no more evaluation and buildings or abstract needed. Because there are a birth and raised by the wealthy, their nation has a restructure before and the authorities who is controlled by the rich country were hard-working before in order to involve the future result. For example, Dubai, they have a rich country and wealthy education centers, and better hospitals here. The reason why Dubai become a wealthy communication in this world depends on good authorities.\n\nFurthermore, people who are richness this is that bring a confident and individual culture. Moreover, the economic increase is a simple phenomenon in this nation and indigenous are not feeling satisfied with it because this is happening to them every single moment. The wealthy nations think the globe has no more rich countries and these people are blind to the improvement of life. Because the tourism who has become a rich country are going to another middle development country or beautiful scenery country. This situation will be continued, there are no longer acknowledge other people such those as Arabia and Africa etc.\n\nIn conclusion, I fully accept that the country which is already rich, they are don’t involve in the additional economic surge", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke wanted everybody, including himself, to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program beacause he wanted to help the countries that they were going to. He wanted to help the countries recover their food supplies, animals and more. There would be 44 nations that would join up together to help the countries in need that they were going to.\n\nIn August 1945, they recived their orders to report to New Orleans. They had 335 horses in the cargo plus enough hay and oats to feed them. It took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eastern coast of the United States and a month to get to China. They were caring for the animals during the crossings. Luke said,\"Besides helping the people, I had the side benefit of seeing Europe and China.\"\n\nYou should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program because there are countries that are in need. What if our countrie didn't have food supplies, or animals, or other things that we need to survive. If we helped their countries when their in need, then they would help our countrie if we were in need. That wouldn't be good if we won't share what we have that they dont have.\n\nIf we don't help the countries that are in need, then we might have another war because they would be angry at the countries that have all the things that they don't have. Also what if there were terrible storms that would wipe out all the people that don't have shelter in that countrie. See we have shelter that would protect us from dangerous storms and we also have money to repair what the storm did. But they dont have any money to buy shelter. They also don't have any food to eat, but we do.\n\nIn conclusion, you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program to help the countries that are in need of. It's not fair if we have something that they don't have and we won't share it. If you don't want to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys progran, then you could also donate some things that you have to the program.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Researchers can not take any kind of rock, gas or any kind of mineral/material on the planet of Venus. Its so toxic 97% of Venus atmosphere is carbon dioxide. Not a single spaceship has landed there in over 3 decades. Spaceships only last around 3-4 hours on the planet before it blows up. Another name for the planet Venus is known as the \" Evening Star. \" The clouds on Venus are full of acid. On Venus the temperature can get to over 800 degrees Fahrenheit. Venus has the hottest surface out of any other planet in the solar system. Venus used to be the most Earth-like planet. It had large bodies of water, creatures, plants and lots of other thing we have today on Earth. Spaceships have to fly 30-40 feet over Venus surface because the ground is so hot/toxic. Temperature would still be 170 degress Fahrenheit over the surface. Researchers are sending technology equipment to Venus to see how long it can last before it gets destroyed. Astronomers always have to be on the look out for anything on Venus, anything at anytime might happen, weather it be good or bad.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author feeling happiness warmthe s talking enjoyed old home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face on mars have to be a alien because back in time they did not have spaceships. If they did have spaceships back in the past we would of already discover it by now. It's probably a alien because it was buried in the ground for so may years that face is actually popping out. They should unburied it to see if it's human or not. If it is they have alot of research to do if not they still have alot have research to do. They should try to see if a body goes with that head. It could be a decovery of a new world. At the end of the article they said \" that's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\" They can also look up any information about mars having a volcanoe. That no one knows about. but if we just know found this it is more likey to be a alien. Because we been going to mars for a long time and it's weird that they just know recover that face. What happen if it's not a alien or human what if its just a rock that turned into a face.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think author adds last paragraph story could use little part Saeng And planning next Also author added paragraph maybe thinking writing second story winter Hibiscus wanted write part could next story It would make wonder take test would pass time snow melts geese return hibiscus budding I think author added paragraph story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My position on the driverless cars is positive. In todays time driving has become a nesesaty. You have to drive to get around anywhere. Acceddents happen and accidents will still happen its not the car its the perso whom is driving. Sould you be hadycapped or sck,or having issues with your sight. The Driverless Cars are a more safe and enviromental transportation system. Think about it it would be more safe for everyone. In the passage it states that they are so safe that their cars have driven half a million miles without a single crash or accident.\n\nin the driverless car it has a rotation mirrorsensor int he roof. avideo camera mounted near the rearview mirror,four automotive radar sensors,a GPS reciever,andan intertail motion sensor all of wich in a regular simple car these delecasies for safty are not nearly mimicated. Now those sensors can respond to out of controlskids or rollovers. the information from the sensors can make the car apply brakes if they are needed o stop. It can also reduce power from the engine,allowing far better response ad control that a ¨huma driver¨ could manage on his own.\n\nI quote the passege ¨while the driver watches the road the car watches the driver¨.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the modern society, people’s work clothes have attracted much concern.Some people hold the view that the style of the staff should not be paid attention to by the manager on the grounds that the work productivity is of importance. Personally, I believe the way they dress completely depends on the type of their company or job.\r\nOn the one hand, formal clothes are suitable for profesional jobs as well as in disciplined settings. Several certain jobs such as lawyer, doctor, teacher and even sales people require people dress up smartly and courteously which undoutedly boost confidence and work efficiency.For example, when wearing white blouse in the hospital, doctors may be more aware of the value of their work in order to try their best to fulfill their duty. Futhermore, should they wear smart clothes, they will be respectful towards others, which affects social interaction and be enormously significant to those face-to-face jobs, especially marketing or receptionist.\r\nOn the other hand, there are remarkable reasons why a multitude of individuals hold the notion that using formal clothes is unnecessary. First of all, clothings are not reflective of the worker’s own performance or their ability. For instance, technological company like Google and Facebook are well-known for their relaxed dress codes because they aim to create an informal, exciting and creative environment; consequently, they produce sophisticated and convenient products despite casual clothes. Secondly, informal clothes are oustanding choices for not only sedentary work styles but also active employess. Loose clothes help relax their muscles, bring comfort and their actions will not be limited.\r\nIn conclusion, although clothing does not reflex one’s ability to work, the style of people should be appropriate for their jobs. While in professional setting formal clothes increase people’s self-confidence together with the work productivity and show respect to other people, casual clothes make the staff relaxed and also be convenient for moving employees.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the information that has been found there's no prove that the Face has been structured by aliens. Scientist have stated that the Face was form by natural causes, others say that they may have found more information about the Face but than what they are saying. The Face was made by natural landform not created by aliens.\n\nThe face wasn't stuctured by aliens so therefore was made by natural landform. NASA has plenty of evidence that the Face was form naturally, for example that it hasn't really been discovered that aliens actually exsist. Throught the years of 1976 and 2001 there were pictures of the face not yet comepletely form so therefore scientist think it took 25 years to form comepletely. Others may say that NASA has more information than what they are telling us. For instants in the article \"Unmasking the Face on Mars,\" in paragraph 5 it states that \"evidence that NASA would rather hide.\" I argue that the Face wasn't created by aliens but from natural landforms.\n\nNatural landforms, created by aliens no one will actually really know what they think. I think it was naturally formed not created by aliens there really is no real evidence about it created by aliens. There could be thousand possibilites that it was form naturally or created by aliens. There are plenty reasons to believe that it was natural causes but not as much as it being created by aliens, after all who doesn't love a good mystery.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The creation of \"smart cars\" is new and exciting, but is it safe? Multiple car companies are working on cars that drive themselves. Tesla claimes that they will release a car capable of driving on autopilot 90% of the time by 2016. Also Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020.\n\nGoogle has had cars that have been on the road independently since 2009. Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash, so far. Google cars arn't truly independent, they are required to have a person in the car to take the wheel in case of simply pulling in or out of a driveway or complicated traffic issues.\n\nIn most states it is illegal to even test the computer driven cars. California, Nevada, Florida, and the Dristrict of Columbia have led the country in allowing the use of semi-autonomous cars. It should be illegal in most states, because it is dangerous. If one of these \"smart cars\"\n\nwere to crash who is responsible? The driver,the car company, or the state? New laws will be needed to cover liability incase of an accident, in these states before the cars are tested.\n\nAll of these \"smart cars\" that have been created, and are on the road still need a person in the car. Why would someone want a driverless car that needs someone in it? All these big name car companies are claming to have these \"driverless cars\" soon, but how safe is it going to be for states, and pedestrians on the streets? If these \"smart cars\" are created, states need to make sure that the cars are 100% safe for everyone.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology has become more and more advanced over the years. it's used in schools, works, homes, and pretty much where ever you go. It is a very useful source for many reasons and for all ages. My only question is when do we know we are taking technology too far?\n\nIt hasn't been long since devics like smart phones and touch screen computers that can talk back to you have been invented. These things have grown to be popular in many generations including old and young. Finger prints, facial recognition and even voice recognition are existing in many of these things. In my opinion, I feel like those things take a little to much information from us. However, even more is being taken from us now. Thanks to a new computer software, emotions can be recognized as well.\n\nIt is said that this software could be used in school and probably even in your own home. It can detexct how you eel as you look at the screen of your computer, changing ads or showing similar ones. it could also catch if you seem confused or bored which could modify and change up what you're doing or learning for a better understanding or to catch the intrest of the user. This is a problem however.\n\nFirstly, many may belive this digs into one's \"personal life\" far to much. Who would want to have there emotions called out and detected evertime they use their computer? Though it would be someone's choice to use the software, the software would make them very dependable. not learning or possibly even forgetting that they are capable of doing things on their own online without depending on a software to show them what they want\n\nto see.\n\nSecondly, if this software were to be used in schools, it would make students becoming more dependable on a computer and less dependable on the teacher. If a student doesn't understand what's on the screen infront of them, they should be getting help from a teacher, not a switch up on a computer. It is a teacher's job to help students, and if an enotion regoconition app does anything for a student looking at a screen, that takes the job of the teacher away. Maybe teachers would appreciate the software, but they shouldn't.\n\nLastly, imagine you are looking at your screen and it changes because it detected that you were confused even though you weren't. Well, you're probably confused now. Even if there was a pop up that asked you something along the lines, \"You look confused, would you like us to modify this for you?\" even if you weren't confused at all, that would get pretty annoying. It is just something I don't think my or any geeration should have.\n\nPersonally, I prefer my good ole' computer without the software. I know that if I had it, it would make me more lazy and probably even gift me with a bad attitude and personality by making me believe I deserve to get what I want in the easiest way possible. I know that's what it would do to other people my age. I will never believe this software should be accepted in schools or even homes.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is a common belief in today’s world that technology makes our lives more and more complicated, and it had better be removed. Although I accept the former opinion, I believe that the latter is untrue. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, nowadays, most people use social media such as Facebook, Instagram, Tiktok,.... for entertaining and networking purposes. Besides various compliments that people get from those sites, they also receive a lot of negative judgements about their bodies, lifestyles and behaviors that make them sad or even depressed. For another reason, we are living in a world which lacks connection between people, most of our relationships are through social media, resulting in a lack of thorough understanding of the true personality of each. Therefore, several arguments appear and make our lives very complicated. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, despite the drawbacks which technology brings us, life without it will be even more terrible. Firstly, technology makes our lives more convenient, it saves us a huge amount of time. For example, in the past, if we had wanted 100 copies of a document, we would have had to write that document 100 times, but now, a print assists us, it can generate an unlimited number of copies that you want. Secondly, technology contributes to our learning process and it is also one of the top reasons why people are getting more and more intelligent. Today, just by sitting in front of a computer’s screen, we can easily access worldwide knowledge on the Internet, and becoming a master in our favorite areas has never been so easy. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, in spite of the fact that technology triggers detrimental effects in our lives sometimes, I strongly believe that a life without it will be such a disaster.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The facial action coding can be used in good ways and in bad ways. It can also be all up in peoples personal bussiness and maybe people don want that and dont want you knowing all about their life.\n\nThe technology is getting too advanced and people are starting to feel uncomfortable because they cant hide any secrets or any feelings that they have because the technology is getting so advanced that one day someone will make sonething that can read your mind or etc. This machine can only be valuable on some occasions like when someone says that they want you to know their emotions and how they are feeling then they will tell you theirelves you dont need a machine to do it.\n\nBecuase then you will be all in their business and people dont like that. They want their personal space and they want their thoughts to be kept to theirselves without the whole world knowing or people knwoing what is wrong with them and what their thoughts are. This machine does not need to be bulit because people can just tell you how they feel you dont have to go make a machine to knwo.\n\nIf they wanted you to know then they can tell you theirselve.\n\nPeople can use this machine uncontrolbaly and it could get out of hand and share more things then it was suppose to and that could make people feel uncomfortable and not so happy. Also if other people found out your secrets and things they can get spreaded and start rumors and other things that can be bad for you.\n\nI would not want this machine in my life because i dont want people reading everything that i have and everyday because its my buiness and if i want to share it then i will. I want to keep everything to myself and not let anything get spreaded around and make my life worst or bad because of it. If you want people to have good lives then you dont need these kind of things in the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "That of trasportation is a question that have troubled all the people over the world, whatever it is the city or town in which they live. In the last years people used to relying on the private car to move around. . Although the possible reasons that persuaded people to use private cars, the problems that rise from their excessive use, such us traffic and pollution, are harsh consequences to be accepted. I think that an improvement of public trasportation and to incentive the use of ecological means of trasport like bicycle should be possible solution to those issues.\nCars are considered the most confortable mean of trasport. In particular, if you have to move in a big cities like Milan. Indeed, means of trasports sometimes are late or full and also more unsafe. If you are a woman, for example, the use of public trasportation in some part of Italy is not safe mostly during the night hours. Another problem is that of comfort. If people use their car they can go whethever they want, when they want. If they have to spend more time in a place, they have not to be worried about the last bus they had to take to come back home.\nHowever, over-reliance of cars cause at least two big problmes: traffic and pollution. On the one hand, the problem of traffic will produce other issues such as anxiety and irritation. Indeed, if you have to go work in the morning and you live in a city like Rome you have to consider at least one hour spent in the traffic. Pollution is surely the most severe issue. Indeed, if all the people used to take a private car, then it is easely imaginable how much cars and fuel can be consumed daily. The two problems are linked, I want to underline, indeed, the noise pollution that derives from an intense traffic. It should be considered dangerous both for persons and animals.\nTwo possible solutions to the problem of the over-reliance on cars are the following. Firstly, public trasportation should be improved. Indeed, if bus and tram were more safe and more confortable, then people would be more tent by their use. At least, they will solve the problem of traffic. On the other hand, I see the echologycal means of transport like bycicle as the new border to pass in order to save the world from pollution. One possible suggestion would be that of make cheaper the bycicle and also to give an economic subsidy to those people who decide to help the planet using them.\nIn conclusion, I believe that the the use of private cars, because of the problems that it causes, should be discouraged. Two possible solutions rely on the improvement of public trasportation and on the incentive can be given to those using non-polluting means of trasport", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Researchers have indicated that a number of criminals descend from a low education class. Several people argue that the optimal solution to decrease the crime rate effectively is to offer lawbreakers with a high-quality education in jail, so they will improve their career prospects after being released from a prison sentence. I partly agree with this measure, as it is not the best method of reducing crime.\n Admittedly, education in prison may bring some advantage for offenders. Initially, this education can provide prisoners with the work skills that are essential when they reintegrate back into society. They are likely to strengthen their job prospects and may earn a living without intention to do a crime after leaving prison. Also, education shows that the wrongdoers could realize the value of themselves for the community. Instead of discriminating behaviour with criminal, they are still appreciated by the resident and society. As a result, they will try to become a better person and may then discourage many others from living without crime.\nHowever, I still believe that there are other practical solutions to minimize the rate of crime. The first solution is that the government need to enact several strict laws for people turning to crime. With severe punishments such as more extended imprisonment, the resident will be deterred from acting criminal in public. The second measure is another educational method that may have a more robust and more long-lasting impact on the reduction of crime. It is a crime education for young people at school, which assist students in acquiring the necessary knowledge about illegal behaviours and crime prevention. This measure is unequivocal a more sustainable crime-fighting solution than education for criminals. \nTo conclude, although educating prisoners to have several positive aspects, I firmly hold the view that there are more effective measures to reduce crime such as crime education at school and strict punishments for criminals.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Through the development of driverless cars, there are many postive or negative aspects that can be contributed to their manufacturing. Overall, I beleive that with these developments and engineering that has gone into the manfucaturing of driverless cars, we have improved the safety of regular automotive vehicles and the standards that safety should be set at. While the development of accessories that are created for safety are commonly used in these driverless car, these safety measures can be used in development of everyday vehicles.\n\nWhen creating the idea of driverless cars, many furutrists have come upon the idea that we do not need smarter cars; we need smarter roads. The development of roadways that General Motors and engineers at Berkeley tried to use were incredibly advanced. The roadways at General Motors provided the invention of an electrical cable that was to be embedded in the track, this would send radio signals to a receiver that was on the front end of the car. The engineers at Berkeley used magnets that had alternating polarity. With this new-found developments, these people created smart-road systems that worked incredibly efficently. With these developments that were made, the realization that smarter roadways may not be the correct option, but smarter cars truly hold the future. This lead to a new wave of developmental ideas.\n\nWith the development of smarter cars, automakers had come upon the manufacturing of accessories that would help everyday cars. While smart cars really do need an abundance of sensors, often times regular cars can be improved with these added. With the development of anti-lock brakes, the sensors were able to exhibit a better response and control compared to that of a human driver. The development of smarter cars has lead to furthering the improvements in sensors and the computer software and hardware that makes driving safer.\n\nIn 2013, BMW had annouced the devlopment od \"Traffic Jam Assistant.\" This vehicle was able to drive partially by itself, but int he event of work zones and accidents, it needed the assistance of human drivers. Soon, automotive companies realized that it was a necessity to have a way for a car to gain a driver's attention. Some of these companies had seat that would vibrate, an announcement system, and flashing lights on the windshield and other displays. Through this abrupt realization, manufacturers have begun the merging of these concepts into everyday vehicles.\n\nThrough the creation of driverless cars, we have made everyday cars safer and more reliable. They are now less liekly to cause accidents. If we further the development of driverless cars, who knows where the roadways will be in twenty years? We could have the ubiquitous use of driverless cars, perhaps they could become further assimilated, maybe laws will change for safer roadways. Perhaps our everyday cars will be the safest as can be. We really don't know, but so far, the develp,ent of driverless cars has seemingly revolutionized the automaking world and planted a new seed in everyone's minds about the future which only we can change.\n\nIn conclusion, because of the devlopment of driverless cars, we have made roadways safer with the creation that have come about through their manufacturing. Without the thought of using driverless cars and making vehicles and roadways smarter, there would be a lack of development in the technological safety of vehicles. There would be far more accidents because of the lack of ability to brake, which has been stopped since of the perfection of anti-lock brakes, and there would be a lack of ability for driver's to remain focused on the roadways without the development of vibrating seats in order to gain a driver's attention when they are veering off the road. They have truly revolutionized the car manking industry and the future that we will hold.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Globalisation can be witnessed in every sector of this world. Thus, the majority of retailer inlets from various countries trade in similar commodities. There is always a conflicting view regarding this similarity among the purchasers. This essay shed light upon. Ramification and benefits for customers along with my perspective.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost. Is it advantageous for allocating more alternatives to consumers? Of course yes. More specifically, if particular item is available I different brand, then buyers can compare their features, cost and durability. Ultimately, they can buy suitable product for themselves. For instance Iphone company is trading almost in every corner of Earth and its sale is noticably higher than other products accessible in market. It is due to its more feasible functions. Since, this practice is possible with import export of commodities and it also strengthen the bond between nations.\r\n\r\nIn contrast, there are several inevitable consequences of selling same items at various shops in distinct continents. It may have menace impact in the local identity of product. These goods loose their authenticity because companies commence to make duplicates of these products and hence, the customers become victim of fraud. To epitome, most of local shops in India sell cosmetic at cheap rates under the famous brand MaC. But, their items are none other than duplicates of original ones. Hence, the potential frauds lead to in favour international products in most of regions. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, there are several benefits and limitations of globalisation in trade market, but still the advantages of it outweigh its disadvantages because, it sender enormous choices to the purchasers.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As the human population grows these new heads have new ideas of how to better the world we live in. We are driven by technology. Electronics are extremely powerful. Do they distract us from what is really happening on the outside? Or, do they keep us informed with all the events hitting socail medias like a tsunami? Technology just continues growing more and more, that now there are driveless cars being composed. I believe these may be exteremly effective.\n\nDriveless cars are our furture. In fact they have already manufactured plenty of cars that are now semi-driverless. I say this because a lot of these cars have sensors or vibrations that notify the driver when they are needed to maneuver the car around certain issues that may occur. However, if one is simply sitting in a car awaiting their turn to participate in this action they may get bored or fall asleep or perhaps even think themselves into another place. Which is why if we are going to have driverless cars they should be all the way independent. We have enough knowledge and technology for such a car. It is only a matter fo time before this goal is acheived.\n\nAlthough one may argue that these may be dangerous or that it is ridiculous to sit in a car that drives itself I believe that this innovation can change our lives forever in a positive way. For example, as stated in paragraph 5 of this article, \" The infromation from the sensors can cause the car to apply breaks on indivual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\" Due to the car having a well set of highly advanced sensors the car will react to whatever may come its way in a professional orderly manner. Also the passenegrs within these vehicles do not have to resist the urge to pay attention to their cellular devices or other electronics.\n\nSoon enough cars will be in charge of what happens while they are in motion. Car rides will be simply a time where you sit, enjoy your surroundings, or even get lost in your thoughts untili you have reached your desired destination. People are constantly looking for innovations, ways to improve society. Anything is possible with the type of technology we have available to us. Driverless cars are only a level up in this game of life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Road safety has become a measure concern these days. Whether rigorous penalties would be the most effective way to deter driving offences, is a very controversial issue. Although, I second that the implementation of harsher punishments could be the best solution for hindering the road accident, there are other methods which should be applied by the government for making people conscious about road safety.\n\nFirst and foremost, the implementation of rigid rules regarding road safety proved to be fruitful. For example, in Vietnam, the citizens are punished for not wearing a helmet from $20 to $40.Fearing for this penalty, people never put off their helmet during driving. Moreover, if the government does not make that hard laws for the would-be offenders, it is possible that the law breakers would conveniently break the law. For instance, in Singapore, before 1980, the government did not impose any law regarding road casualties, which had caused many lives meaningless for their families and society. When the authority saw this, they started new rules and regulations which were the most effective in the long run.\n\nSimilarly, people have started to think about more measures that should be taken to minimize road injuries of death, regardless of the implementation of various types of law. The most effective one could be that the government should heighten people’s awareness by the media. This, eventually, could help people to understand not only the bad impact of not abiding by rules such as wearing a helmet at the time of driving, maintaining traffic signals, but it also makes people conscious about their lives. The other measure is that encouraging people to use the public transport such as bus, train, et Cetra.\nIn conclusion, while it is true that rigorous penalties are the key to impede road accidents, raising people’s consciousness and encouraging people to use public transports, in my opinion, could also be the best methods.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In The Mooring Mast builders Empire State Building faced obstacles trying allow dirigibles dock These obstacles took precaution safety nature law The first obstacle one safety Most dirigibles outside United States use hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable Owners Empire State Building realized dirigible destroyed fire would cause huge accident Also accident would devastating d take place densely populated area downtown New York In addition winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents These would cause back ship swivel around mooring mast Dirigibles moored open fields use weights weighed Yet ca nt used top Empire State Building d dangling walking pedestrians dangerous Lastly major obstacle faced attempting allow dirigibles dock building existing law airships fly low urban areas would make illegal ship tie building even approach area Overall obstacles faced trying allow dirigibles dock Empire State Building lead disappearance idea altogether", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The reason why the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursit despite the dangers it presents is the way the NASA did it. They did it with human curiosity. \"This will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\" Another cause is that they used modern computers that are enormously powerful, flexible, and quick. They are handy-dandy when computers shrive with this project because it can tell us what they have learn or study about the things of life about Venus and not only that, but to use other devices that can react well like a phone, ipad, ipod, tablet or any other device and compare them to other great systems with physical and mechincal parts to the force. And by the force.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People nowadays are living much longer.\nWith the discovering of new medicine and with the innovation in the medical field, the life expectancy of a person skyrocketed over the last decade.\nSome people might think that the consequence of this phenomenon should be the fact that the age at which people retire from work ought to be raised considerably.\nI don't agree with this idea.\nRather than involving the life expectancy of a person, we should consider the job itself.\nIs it tiring? Does it require a person to be able to react immediately to a potential problem?\nIf the job is tiring I think that it would be better for a person to retire. If you end up being worn out every day because your job is very exhausting the life expectancy should not be the fact that decides if you have or not the right to retire.\nThe question ought to be: Is the person physically and mentally able to cope with the work?\nThe older you get the slower you become. This is another pivotal factor that should be taken into account when deciding the retirement age of a person.\nThe ability to react to dangerous events keeps the working environment under control.\nLet's imagine a carpenter working on the construction of a new building.\nWhat if a wall suddenly falls? Does an elderly person react faster than a younger worker?\nI am an optimistic person but I would stick to my guns in this scenario betting on the younger person.\nI would like to wrap up this essay by saying that I could have thought of many more reasons that explain why the age at which people retire from work should not be based entirely on the fact that people are living longer.\nOf course, this can not be ignored but basing this decision only on this fact it is seen by me as a poor approach.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While recruiting a new employee, the employer should pay more attention to their personal qualities, rather than qualifications and experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.Recent decades have witnessed a burgeoning growth of numerous industries; therefore, recruiting the right person for the position is crucial to the development of enterprises. But how do we determine if a person is the best fit? Advocates of conventional recruitment methods opine that this candidate must have sufficient experience and qualifications needed for that job. Nevertheless, some people argue that candidates’ personal qualities cannot be ignored. In my view, both components are of equal importance.To begin with, the conventional approach of checking potential workers’ qualifications via their resumes, LinkedIn profiles, issued qualifications and certifications from authorised organisations is vital. Apparently, whenever we submit a job application, we are always required to attach a CV while a cover letter is optional. Without a decent qualification, even if that candidate’s personal characteristics are suitable, the enterprise will need to carry out lots of skill trainings eventually.On the other hand, occasionally during an interview some HR officers ignore the significance of assessing how candidates’ individual qualities can fit in the company. Employers should assess not only candidates’ qualifications but also their enabling skills, ethics and value propositions. The more an employee’s personal qualities fit in a company’s culture and values, the more he or she is motivated to contribute to that company’s vision. KPMG is a great example of evaluating candidates’ personal qualifications and skills by utilising a game-based assessment process, followed by a video interview. This methodology enables a comprehensive assessment, and is embraced by many companies nowadays.To summarise, employers should assess both personal characteristics and formal qualifications when recruiting people as each of these elements has its own vital contribution to make in talent-seeking enterprises.This response covers the topic well. The writer’s position is clearly expressed and supported by an example, the use of paragraphing makes this essay organised and easy to follow. Linking words are used appropriately. The use of complex sentences and advanced vocabulary is impressive. Overall, this essay is likely to score Band 8 in IELTS.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You should join the the seagoing cowboy program because its an opportunity to see many things and experince the world, also while working with animals, that is if you like playing with animals.\n\nYou get to see places such as Europe, China, Venice, and Italy. The only downsides are if u get sea sick this isnt the job for you cause it will be a two week trip from the eastern coast of the United States to china. If you worked on a farm when you where younger or even now this job is great cause youll be experinced and know what to hdo. If you think it'll be boring on the boat think again cause you can play games such as baseball, volleyball and, table tennis when the animal where out of the ship but on the way when you have the animals it might be a bit boring at times but its still worth it.\n\nThis will open up the world for you and be an exciting adventure. Everytime you go you will see something diffrent. Since your on the ship when cargo is beign delivered in the city you can take tours and stuff before you go back to the ship to go home and hopefully do it again.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Removing certain materials shelves libraries way go No matter offensive might many ways solve problem I believe certain materials books music movies magazines etc removed libraries offensive First many people different opinions offensive For example many people different intrests others Some people like certain kinds books movies others For instance one favorite types movies watch comedy On hand many friends mine love watch horror movies This something change Everyone going preference want read listen watch Why would take things away people actually enjoy There ways solve problem I believe solve problem seperating certain materials others library For example something thought offensive placed others like These materials removed completely Mothers often worried children picking things library think offensive If materials seperated others problem Certain materials removed completly library All need remove materials library many people different interests In conclusion I believe materials removed libraries offensive", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although some agree that it is the responsibility of the government to take care of older people and support them when they retire, others believe that a retired person must save enough while working to fund their retirement. I agree with the latter view, as it would be beneficial for both the government as well as the young population.\n\nOn the one hand, it is thought that an individual should support himself or herself at the time of retirement from its saving because it would be beneficial for the higher authorities. In many nations, the government needs to make some provision from its budget for an elderly retired people in order to take care of them. If the retired person has their own saving so as to support him or her after retirement, there will be less burden on the government for taking care of the retired individual. Moreover, the higher authorities would concentrate more on other important aspects for the development of its nation such as the construction of roads, dams, bridges, hospitals and schools. Thus, for the benefits of governments, one retired person must support himself or herself after retirement.\n\nOn the other hand, funding for its retirement from the saving of fund during working by an individual would bring benefits to the youth. To elaborate, in developing countries the higher authorities charge higher income tax rates to their citizens than those in developed countries. Therefore, each individual has to pay more income tax from its earning in order to support the retired people. In contrast, if elderly retired people supported themselves from their saving after the retirement, the younger population would be paying less income tax from their savings as the government would not be taking care of the retired people. Hence, the retired people must support themselves from their saving.\n\nIn conclusion, if an older-retired person supports from its saving after retirement, not only will there be less burden on the government for taking care of them, but also the youth will be less income tax from its salary for supporting them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Educating adolescents is essential in some countries. but, educating seniors in life who does not know how to read or write is also important and the state should invest money on this. This essay strongly disagrees with this statement because they already have experience in living their life and reduce youngsters from dropping out of college as they don't have money to pay.\n\nThe first reason is adults might already found a way to earn money and understood how to live their life without any educational knowledge. This proves that, it might not be so important for them even though they don't study. Moreover, as they already found their way learning a new skill might not be a drastic change in their life. For example, The Indian government introduced night schools for elders, who really understood basics of education. However, many people stated that they did not find chance of implementing it in their work.\n\nThe second main reason if there is no support for youngsters' education there are high chance of discontinuing as they cannot afford fees. This is because the more money the government invest for elder people, the less they have for teenagers. Hence the government cannot satisfy all poor students. For instance, The Indian government is trying to remove education reimbursement for students as there is no budget to allocate and they have already promoted free education for elders.\n\nTo conclude, In many countries education for adolescents is on the top list. but, educating elders and investing on their education by the government is not important as providing education for young people because seniors in age have experience and already framed their careers and helping poor students will reduce the dropout rate as their families cannot afford education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Education is one of the most crucial parts of people's lives. Some people are firm believers in getting higher education before working. Others, however, have shown intense devotion to getting a job. This essay will discuss both points of views and explain my opinion.\n\nThe first and most obvious one is gaining specific knowledge. There are many professions requiring specific academics such as doctor, lawyer and accountant which the school did not have in a syllabus. Thus, these kinds of curriculum have to be learned in the colledge. Moreover, the difference between university and school is self-study. The rationale behind this is that students have to do research by themselves by data-gathering and synthesising sources.\n\nOn the other hand, some people believe in direct working. This is an account of the more they work the more soft-skill they get, so these people will have more experience in working compared to the one in the same age. A great example for this can be seen that artists do not require a college diploma or entrepreneurs can learn by trying and making a lot of mistakes.\n\nIn conclusion, there are several benefits both in future study and going straight to work. From my perspective, working or internship before learning at university is the best solution. This is an account of ensuring the passion that they have to spend less of their life. According to research from a local university, it indicates that more than 40 percent of learners are not satisfied with their faculty leading to lack of passion to study. However, the students who have internships before learning are eager to learn and tend to be successful in their future life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "source 1: what is the electoral collage?\n\nby the office of the federal register\n\nThe electoral college is a proccess,not a place. The founding established it in the U.S. constitution as a compromise between election of the president and the congress and the election of the president by a polpular vote of qualified citizens.(\n\nparagraph, 1 sentance, 1).\n\nThe electoral college consists of 538 electors a majority of 270 electors votes are required and is reqiured to elect the president(paragraph 3 sentance 1). So i belive that electoral college should be at most the most effecient way of electing a president because they have to persude the electorates to be on their side in order to get elected. Wich is much harder to do that pursudeing the people there for giving us a good honest president than one that will lie or try to hurt the public in any way because, i belive if their are officials going to vote for our nations president they will be much more careful of their decision,putting our nation in better hands.\n\nsource 3: in defenceof the electoral collage:five reasons to keep our method of choosing the president by Richard A. Posner reason 1:\n\nCertainty Of Outcome\n\nDispute over the out come is possible-it happend in 2000- but its less likely than a dispute between popular vote. the reson is that winnning candidate's share of electoral collage invariably exeeds his share of the popular vote.\n\nreason 2\n\n:\n\nEveryone's President\n\nThe electoral college requirs canadates to have trans-regional appeal. no region has enough electoral votes to elect a president. So a solid regional such as Mitt Romneywas in the south,has so innocently favored for he gain electoral vote by increasing his plurality in those states and if done he know he'll win.\n\nreason 3\n\n:\n\nSwing States\n\nThe winner takes all method of awarding electoral votes induces the canidates-as we saw in [2012's] election- to focus their campaign efforts on the toss up states. Voters in toss up states are more likeley to pay close attention to the campeign to really listen to the competeing canidates knowing that they are going to decide the election. They are likeley to be on the most thoughtful votes, on average(and futher reason they will have recived the most information and attention from the canidates), and the most thoughtful voters should be the one to decide the election.\n\nreason 4\n\n:\n\nBig States\n\nThe electoral college restores some of the weight in the political balance that large states have (by population) lose by virtue of the mal-apportionmentof the senate decreed in the constitution. The popular vote was very close in Florida [2012] never the less obama, who won that vote got 29 electoral votes. A victory by the same margin in woyming would net the winner got 3 electoral votes.\n\nreason 5\n\n:\n\nAvoid Run-Off Elections\n\nThe electoral college avoids run-off elections wich no canindate recives a majority of the votes cast. For example , Nixion in 1968 and Clinton both had only 43% plurality of the popular votes, while winning a majority in the electoral college. There is pressure for run-off elections when no canidate wins a majority of the votes cast; that pressure,wichwould greatly complicate the presidential election processes.\n\nSo you see that is is easier and less complex to do an electoral vote instead of a popular vote. Thats why i think it is manditory that we keep the electoral collage because it is a more orginized system that prevents some of the problems we see today.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recently new technology has advanced at an absurd rate with phenomenal results. The tasks that these new materials and ideas can perform are a gateway to new discoveries. Inventions such as latest innovation with computers and their ability to detect honest facial emotions.\n\nIn the first passage the author introduces Prof. Thomas Huang and Prof. Nicu Sebe as they collaborate to deploy an elite communication system to illuminate the realtionship between computers and humans. In the text, the author explains the functions of the new computerized model of how the emotion facial indicator acts. In paragraph 3, he says, \"Movement of one or more musclees is called an \"action unit\".\" He specifies the different controls of how the computer navigates through the coding of facial features and muscle movements. The author then mentions Dr.Huang's perception of his new technology when in the text it says,\"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal,\". \"even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression\". Dr. Huang talks about how his computer enginnering works and the capabilities it possesses. In the passage, the auhtor says,\"Yet Dr. Huangobserves that artists such as da Vinci studied human anatomy to help them paint facial muscles precisly enough to convey specific emotions.\". This could have interested and motivated Dr. Huang to use modern resources to use da Vinci's technique and find the emotions from facial recognition.\n\nThe author mentions an example in the text explaining how a web cam could help students in school. In the passage, it reads,\"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts. \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This puts another idea of the table for helping students who often find a specific subject boring or difficult to overcome that obstacle with a simple facial recogntion. This technology could help save students who struggle with schoolwork and manipulate the task to be a more understandable one.\n\nIn summary, using this advanced computer system can help individuals feel better, in the last parapgraph the author mentions, \"By the way, did making a happy face in this experiment make you feel happy? According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, movjng your facial muscles not only express emotions, but also may even help produce them.\". This is the technology that could be put to good use in order to maybe even help people feel beter when using it in different activities. The task that these new materials and ideas can perform are a gateway to new discoveries.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think they should keep the Electoral college because what's the need of changing it if it was the same way back in the day. I could be wrong but i also think many things shouldn't change like trying something different whether it's new or not. many things shouldn't change just because it feels right or it may help with your problems because 9 times out of 10 it may go all wrong when you try it but all worked out in your head perfectly. The electoral college consists of the electors where they vote for president and vice president and the counting of the electoral votes by congress. the electoral college consists of 538 electors but a majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president. And in my own personal opinion i think there's absoulutely nothing wrong with the electoral college i think it gives good advice and helps motivates you. the winner take all method of awarding electoral votes induces the candidates to focus their campaign efforts on the toss-up states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaign. I sometimes think many people are aganist electoral college because the way it seperates the votes and only half will be required to go to the election and be seen. And others may have their opinions on this but it's ok to have your own opinion also different opinions don't hurt nobody it's just that different people believe in different things.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Establishing a large public place outdoors such as parks and town squares seems only reasonable for those wealthier municipalities able to upgrade their image, but such a proposal in my opinion might not be applicable to other cities and towns. This essay will present some reasons to support my argument. \r\n\r\nOne of the main ideas that some towns believe building such grand public spaces is for the pursuit of tourism. The city planners, often at the behest of developers and greedy construction interests will attempt to invest in these improvement schemes in the hopes of luring visitors and potential new residents. This often seems to be a shortsighted choice for imaginary economics with no guarantee that out of town visitors will in fact come and see the finish project. Granted, there may also be some minor benefits for local residents such as being able to practice in an expansive area and being able to socialize in a varied context in terms of new acquaintances in an open environment. Truthfully, most of these places are often abandoned and neglected. \r\n\r\nNext not all towns and cities are capable of transforming their public areas into such massive single use developments. To be more specific, the cost of establishing a gigantic public space is high. While local governments should consider the potential revenue from tourism, ultimately they need to focus on staying within their budgets for any public project. If the investment is far more than what could be afforded, then creating a huge garden or public square of some kind would only end up as an unfinished project. This came at the cost of rooting up many of the older residents at a higher payout from the taxpayers and left many of the plans on the drawing board as the majority of these construction plots simply ran out of city financing to be completed. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I would continue to argue that this desire to improve a town or city by building a large public square or park may in fact be much more costly than expected compared to the little return in potential tourist revenue simply because the tourism market has shifted and these old ways of attracting people to a city are no longer valid.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One school of thought holds that most of one’s success is attributable to a stroke of luck. While I accept that this perception is somewhat justifiable, I disagree that people can be successful without hard work and consistency.\r\n\r\nIt would be imprudent to downplay the role of luck in achieving one’s goals. Although not concretely helping individuals achieve their aims, luck has a colossal impact on their possibility of becoming a successful person. For example, if Kobe Bryant had been born in the same period of time with Michael Jordan, it would have been much more difficult for him to become the best player of the NBA of his time because he would have had to compete with a person who may be better than him at their best, making it more challenging for him to gain as much as success as he did. This is a powerful testament to the influence of fortune on one’s accomplishment.\r\n\r\nHowever, I am of the opinion that prosperity only can be earned by those who are determined and industrious due to a host of compelling reasons. One rationale is that success requires a plethora of high-valued skills, which can only be attained through a process of hard working. For instance, IELTS learners can develop their English skills only by constantly using it on a daily basis. Another justification is that the right mindset also plays an integral part in the path of earning prosperity. This is because it would help one to be able to elucidate their priorities and the right things to do in order to achieve their goals, thereby saving them time of chasing useless objectives\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while acknowledging the considerable impact of fortune, I would contend that success only comes to those who are hardworking and patient.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the contemporary epoch,there is irrefutable debate among folks about part-time jobs for graduates.In certain countries,individuals inspire learners to find part-time employment while others do not advocate for it. I firmly coincide with and withstand the stated notion that it will expose the student in the line of the employment environment.This discourse will further elucidate my assertion in the forthcoming paragraph.\r\n\r\nFirstly,this kind of exposure is very advantagious to the young stars although the society is not really for it.They end up practising what they are taught in lecture rooms as a results the gain experience and get exposure particularly in their area of interest.Moreover,work experience can help them land their dream job because most recruiters prefer to employ individuals with some experience.For example,a research done by kepsa(2020) depicts that 90% of employer prefer to give a job to people who have gone for an internship which help them as they do not take long to adapt to the system.Consequently,it is imperative for school-going people to undertake part-time attachment.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand,this can be detrimental since it can bring some disruption in the study although the student understands and retain more when they practice what they are taught in the classroom.Furthermore ,the scholar is not in a position to prepare for exams or even attend group discussion with others as there are duties allocated to them by the employer.For example,a research done by the University of Nairobi depicts that part-time jobs for finalists make them drop out of school.Therefore,a certain individual does not advise pupils to work as it affects their performance as well as some end up dropping out of the academy\r\n\r\nTo sum up,i would like to restate the perspective that i concur that undergraduates must take part-time jobs to gain relevant experience for the sake of future dream jobs despite others advocating that it will affect the graduate end results.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In middle school dirty muddy science classroom boy named another named cleaning mess made earlier mudball fight For years trying patient twins trying patient twins trying figure could calm DO though Often wondered went though minds got angry When teaching science never understood When wrong things nt know wrong progressed class understanding little But principal said CAPS patient learn eventually months passed believed husband By patient getting angry something wrong grades started picking soon end year plus students passed class On last day school went husbands office She advice worked great principal All replied", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "When limiting the car uses to many of people it helps the world because of all the polution that the cars are letting out. The problem with that is its killing animals, trees and plants, and its messing with the global air.\n\nAlmost 4,000 drivers were fine because people their cars impounded for their reaction to the fine. When having a car it can make you tense. When not driving it saving the trees and air and you dont have loud car noises and dont have to worry about children and aduilts dieing by getting hit with a car.\n\nWhen having a car you have to pay for gas which is alot money and can add up when or if you drive alot. Gas was alot of money and with out gas you cant drive no where so you have to use make money just to be able to go places. Cars that take deisel gas are ruining the worl because it releases alot of polution that killing many of anilmals and trees and people are not going to not use their car if it deisel because they need to get to places. The cars are creating alot of smog.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people believe that the production of driverless cars isn't the best. I'm going to inform you as to why I believe that driverless cars are the best for our near future. Google cofounder Sergey Brin has done a series of tests to prove that driverless vehicles are not a danger to the public but can be very usefull. Not only are the good right now, but they are also improving little by little every day.\n\nFor starters, by having driverless cars, we will be able to decrease the amount of accidents that we have. This will happen by having no one at fault but the technology, and I know that sounds like I'm going against it, but I'm not. Not only does the car have special features that make it stop when it's too close to an object but if that fails then who's to blame? Right now we have drivers who are falling asleep at the wheel due to being tired, coming home from work late, and/or going out to parties. Driverless cars will help with this. They have a special feature in the car where if the car feels that the person needs to take over, they will vibrate the seat and even flash the windsheld, (although they're working on the windsheld) this will help keep the driver awake and reduce the amount of accidents we have.\n\nHaving driverless cars will also help decrease the amount of air polution we have due to factories and the amount of cars that polute the air.\n\nIt says in the passage that \"The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus.\" By Sergey stating this, he's saying that we would reduce the amount of air polution. Not only is it reducing the amount of air polution but it's also far more comfortable than a bus.\n\nDriverless cars will be an increasing business once it's not illegal in every state. This will happen because who wouldn't want a driverless car? This business will sky rocket due to the amount of people who would want a driverless car. This comes back to helping the economy. By having people buy driverless cars, this will drastically help the economy.\n\nMany people don't like to be supervised while driving, but having a driverless car, this is a special feature. Not only will it help the driver back out of drive ways, or parking lots, but it will also help identify who was at fault if there were ever an accident. It also helps with no texting and driving, because the car will not allow it. Once the car feels that it needs the drivers attention towards the road, the seat will vibrate calling the attention of the driver to take over the wheel. Therefore the driver will not be able to text and drive. Not only is this benefical for drivers, it's also helpful for new drivers. Because they are not experienced they are more likely to be in an accident. Which is why the driver may need this feature while driving.\n\nIn conclusion, I believe that driverless vehicles are better for the environment because the positive aspects outweigh the negative ones. Not only will it help the environment it will help the economy. Therefore it will become an increasing production. This is only the beginning of something great. It's improving everyday and will continue to improve.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The table illustrates social and economic indicators in 1994 for four nations (Canada, Japan, Peru and Zaire). Those statistics are taken from the United Nations records. Overall, Japan had the highest annual incomes per person and life expectancy at birth, while Canadian daily calory intake were the highest. Moreover, Canada and Japan had the highest literacy rate.\nLoooking at the economic indicator, Japan annual income per capita stood at 15,760$, which was the highest income among the four nations, and was followed closely by Canada at 11,100$. By comparison, Zaire was the poorest country with an annual salary per capita at 130$. Peruvians were earning 160$ annually.\nTurning to social indicators, Japaneses had the highest life expectancy at birth, being 78 years old, and Canadians had the second highest at 76 years old. People from Zaire and Peru had a limited life expectancy at 47 and 51 years old, respectively. In addition, Canadians are the citizens who ate the greatest amount of daily calories(3326), while people from Zaire ates the least (1749). Finally, Japan and Canada had the highest rate of literacy both at 99%. In contrast, Zaire rate of literacy accounted for only 34%.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From idea building Empire State Building attempting allow dirigibles dock builders faced different obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock Al Smith thought good idea add mooring mast dirigibles could dock several hours However order allow dirigibles dock builders transmit stress dirigible s load wind pressure building s foundation thousandfoot dirigible moored top building could add stress frame building One greatest obstacle builders faced wind nature The strength wind constantly shifting due violent air currents For safety reason dirigibles nt safe mostly used hydrogen hydrogen flammable Another obstacle faced existing law nt allow airships fly low urban areas Irving Clavan said The yet unsolved problems mooring air ships fixed mast height made desirable postpone later date final installation landing gear Due obstacles builders faced idea using mooring mast dirigibles disappeared", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some scientists believe the image was created by aliens, but I believe it is just a natural landform. In the end, the picture actually shows it looking like a butte or mesa -- landforms common around the American West. When uploading pictures, they captioned them formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth. It also appeared on another photo that it was just a natural landform, not an alien monument. There are many examples for this reasoning.\n\nOne example is the very first time they discovered the Face. In the article, it said scientists figured it was just another Martian mesa; they're common around Cydonia, but it had unusual shadows making it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh. In 1998, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team got a picture of the face again. They made sure it was clear so people would believe. As soon as they got the picture, they put it on a JPL website; it revealed the so called alien artifact was just a natural landform. Although, some people did not agree.\n\nMany people were unsatisfied because there was just a landform. Some people did not believe it was a natural landform; Very few scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact, but that still meant some did. When NASA took the picture, they snapped it 10 times sharper than the original. Since it was winter when they took the picture, that meant it was cloudy on the Red Planet. The Face could've been blocked by the wispy clouds. According to the text, skeptics said it could've been alien markings were hidden by haze. Everyone who believed it was made by aliens wanted another picture; they took another picture in 2001 that was even more clear on a cloudless summer day and found out something different.\n\nThey zoomed in closer for another picture; the team captured and extraordinary image using the maxium resolution. That way, no one could say it wasn't clear enough. To be more specific, each pixel spanned 1.56 meters. In the article, Garvin said you can discern digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size, meaning if there were objects ins the picture, you could see every detail to figure out what it was. The picture showed it was the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa; in other words, landforms common around the American West.\n\nEven though some thought the Face was created by aliens, it was proven that it really was just a landform. They were able to justify by the research NASA did. There were some ups and downs, but all of it led to the answer behind the face. It took them 3 tries, but they finally got what they wanted; it was the case of mysterious Face on Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Censorship foul terrifying part society Our lives taken politcal correctness much voices longer Until recently freedom convey thoughts matter thoughts form media But something found offensive way essentially burned Censorship limits freedoms takes away citizens people shields us truths world limits knowledge take well ensuring one day nothing left media The document country lives says people right free speech Censorship actively violently violates right Our country built free speech taken away Our words forced throats never allowed come Censorship ensures opinions heard one s beliefs questioned one assume think Is supposedly guaranteed freedom speech We supposed able say anything want say We know consequences saying certain things supposed allowed say Letting ideas world allows new ideas form Arguements come arguements allow people see ideas nt thought look issues new perspectives We able see world different eyes hear read someone else s opinions And form opinions allowing world rich iddeas knowledge allowing society advance But censorship wants take away us order please everyone But always someone unhappy It s inevitable truth Censorship trying shield us ugliness world In way makes sense We nt want children understand atrocities happen everyday life We nt want knowing s happening behind closed doors However nt allow people open doors never understand world prepared experiences come Learning harsh realities society educates people allowing stop realities well prepared happen For example let s look issue rape Rape horrible thing happens It nasty part reality Rape censored books televsion forms media We walk around pretending rape nt exist But nt accomplish anything That nt get rid rape It still exists And people uneducated issue rape ever stop How rape ever able prevented How someone know expect By censoring rape media ensuring people future generations never learn rape Knowledge rape important ever going stopped Pretending something nt exist nt get rid Censorship supposed protect people nt It hurts people cutting access knowledge We people need knowledge We live knowledge And way obtain knowledge media Censorship takes away pieces knowledge gradually It seem like lot missing time goes gap increase knowledge taken grasp Is fair Is right Is helping us How cutting knowledge ever help It brings us backwards time makes us fear It human nature fear unknown The becomes unknown fear Censorship taking away crucial pieces knowledge must understand get along society This wrong immoral It unfair nothing else We allowed take knowledge exists No good comes hiding Lastly gradual burning knowledge affecting society horrid ways And time goes get worse Censorship based offensiveness If something could offensive disposed However everything exists society could offensive someone Therefore everything everyone censored order fulfill goal censorship This means media kind destroyed No one say anything The world would forced silent All knowledge would taken away Chaos would ensue The people s freedom would completely taken away The freedom know would vaporize right front eyes This future allow censorship continue We allow lives taken censorship Yes people s feelings hurt rid world ideas knowledge purely spare feelings These ideas knowledge important let censorship take away Censorship taking away freedoms slowly stealing away us It also tries shield us reality instead hurts us ensuring never understand world never able stop things censored Censorship affecting society ensuring freedoms taken away All knowledge trashed one able voice opinions A dark future waits us censorship continues Only helping people understand censorship wrong society gain back freedom speech freedom supposedly guaranteed censorship desperately trying take away", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "New and improved technology is starting to show itself more in this generation. Author Nick D'Alto explains a new technology called the \"Facial Action Coding System\". This new system is supposed to code the emotions a person is feeling just by looking at the face. While it may be valueabls to understand a person's emotions, people are entitled to their own feelings, therefore making this new coding not useful and very invasive.\n\nThe new software is created by Dr. Thomas Huang who according to the article is working alongside Prof. Nicu Sebe. According to the passage this new computer system is supposed to develop a way to tell a humans emotions. In the excerpt Dr. Huang claims, “A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,” Dr. Huang predicts. “Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\"(6). The Dr's. claim clearly states that maybe in the future a computer will be running a classroom instead of a human teacher. This claim that he is making does not seem reasonable at all. First of all, the computer system might not be well developed and instead of modifying the lesson it might confuse the student even more. Also it is the responsibilty of the student to ask the teacher is he or she is confused on the subject. Having an actual teacher that studied how to help students would be more of a benefit than having a computer.\n\nNot only would this system take away jobs from teachers, but it also invades the right of a person's or students feelings. For example in the excerpt the author states that humans \"calculate\" the facial expressions on a friend which immediatley tell them how their friend is feeling. Sometimes this calculating is for good but on other occasions it can worsen the other person's day. According to the passage the author asserts that Dr. Huang's computer system is a new and innovative way to calculate a human's emotions. The author also writes about a situation where the computer can help please the human. He writes, \"Imagine a computer that knows when you’re happy or sad. For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different\"(6). This situation could cause mixed reactions from the person watching the ad. For example, what if they were actually thinking about something sad and were not paying attention to the ad, then all of a sudden the computer changes it and now the person feels frustrated. These types of situations are things that the creators should keep in mind.\n\n\"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", states a pretty big claim that a new technology is on the rise which can help evaluate a students expressions. This coding system that Dr. Huang created sounds like a big deal, but the question is will it actually work. The article never states anything about an experimental run, leaving the reader wondering whether this coding system is worth enough to install in a classroom. Instead of creating a computer that reads facial expressions, technology should be created to help with greater necessitous issues. While it is very innovative and smart, it is not an extremely valueable tool to use in classrooms.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "At first gets directions old men thinks fine When gets first town hes tired almost water still thinks Yosemite soon When gets water pump middle desert hes tired thirsty realizes directions old men gave date Hes really happy listening following map When gets fishing place greatful water sink rest old man offers give directions Yosemite thinks use map Throughout story cyclists needs change feeling confident feeling depressed feeling relived", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In story Do Not Exceed posted speed Limit Joe Kurmaskie features setting affect cyclist We tell author writes that road replaced short rolling hills Kurmaskie This tells us cyclist hard ride road The speed limit also affect cyclist When speed limit sign appear character feels life feel cruel kurmaskie It tells us character trying The bad road speed limit sigh effect cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This memoir Narciso Rodriguez creates mood shows Narciso Rodriguez happy proud parents memoir creates mood unity First memoir creates happy mood Here innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed formed backdrop life warm home paragraph Rodriguez happy home families friends celebrations helped form usual life house He happy parents worked hard get New Jersey Rodriguez happy welcoming parents people needed help segregation family friends stayed together Narciso Rodriguez incredibly happy mood Next memoirs mood shows Rodriguez obviously proud hardworking parents My mother father come country courage without knowledge language culture They came selflessly many immigrants give children better life even though meant leaving behind families friends careers country loved paragraph Narciso Rodriguez proud parents giving many things They gave families friends country careers son could live better life They basically start pursuit get good careers Finally mood Narciso Rodriguez brings sense unity Growing environment inspired great sense family nothing blood relative paragraph In Rodriguez s family took people need help nt family During time segregation neighbors families friends stayed united In Narciso Rodriguez The mood created shows Rodriguez happy proud parents memoir shows sense unity", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke would want to persuade people to join this program. This is because he had so much fun on the trip. Luke's point of view gives a very vived idea of what this program is. Luke was given an opprotunity by his friend and couldnt deny it. He had so much fun on this trip, and would like you to try it out. You will help animals, be able to see new places and many other things.\n\nIf you would like to join a cool and fun program, join the \"Sea going Cowboys\". This is a great time for you to meet new people and have a great time. If you like to try something new try the \"Seagoing Cowboys\". No matter what you like or dont like, youre sure to like this program.\n\nBe sure to ask people what they know about it to get an idea. Many people join every year and love it. If you like helping animals and like to see new sights and like traveling \"Seagoing Cowboys\" is for you. Luke tried this program out and loved it. This is all thanks to \"Seagoing Cowboys\".", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am against driverless cars. I have made my decision about this topic. They are the Laws. The laws are stated that the moving veheicle regulation is that there needs to be a driver in the seat at all times. My next point is the safety. Safety is also apart of the law. Safety is required when in the cars, for the drivers they need the consentration. The passengers need to pay attention also and be safe. This world is evolving from old school things to brand new technology. I know people are getting sick and tired of doing and using the same old stuff over and over again. So they came up with this smart car system.\n\nThe laws states all about being protected and following the law of driving. I mean whose going to blame the car when the driverless car ran itno this giant semi truck. Well see the driverless car is basically a car that is a computer. Computers can be overwritten. So the car can also be overwritten and it could do all sorts of bad things. So this passage is telling me that the driverless car is a good idea. I think this idea is a really bad idea to do.\n\nThe safety for a human being or an animal is to be seated at all times while the car is in motion. If we use these driverless cars, it won't know that there is someone or something that is standing up while its in motion. Even if the car got into a wreck, the computer would not work right after that. What if there is new updates on the roads and the car doesn't know about them casue they have not been put on the internet yet. Those passengers might as well say \"hello\" to the hospital then.\n\nI know this world is evolving with new technology and thats great. But there is somethings people have to learn, perhaps to drive a car. I mean I wouldn't want a computer driving me around. Its not going to hurt the computer's feelings, cause its not a living breathing thing. People need to understand that someday their goning to have to grow up and do it on their own.\n\nI am against driverless cars because what if there were new updates on the roads and the cars do not know about them. Driverless cars have a better chance to get into a wreck like a drunk driver would. I know this world is getting new technology and that is fine. But people need to know how to do things on their own.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are a thing of the future. They would be very useful especially if they use less fuel than normal taxis, but in stituations where there is dangerous road conditions, like snowing flooding, and high winds, how will the car react?\n\nWith the weather always chaning will the driverless car be able keep up or will everybody just have to stop what they're doing? The weather influences driving greatly. You have to be able to drive in any condition, thats why driverless car aren't ready. If the driverless car needs someone to take over when theres road work and accidents, the same thing would happen in dangerous driving conditions. The car could not tell that there is ice on the roads. Sometimes cars hydroplane, the smart car would not be albe to right the car but, just spin out and take the impact and put lives in danger. This would increase accidents or even deaths. These cars aren't safe to drive in conditions like these. The smart car isn't smart enough to be driving in different types of weather or situations.\n\nThe car can't adapt to driving condtions, so would it be able to avoid things like pot holes and animals that run out in front of cars? Pot holes occur every where, if one of these driverless cars hits one a blows a tire the passenger could be stranded. The car couldnt have did anything to avoid the pot hole, so its not to safe. Then there are animals that jump out in front of cars last second or even people. The road is always changing and things are always happening, i dont believe the driverless car will be able to function in certain situations. Sensors can only sense so much that certain times if there is no person in the driver seat things can go wrong.\n\nThere are times in traffic that traffic ligths go out and people have to make decisions. The car can not think to stop at a flashing ready light and then yield to oncoming cars. There are situations there a person is the best option. Unless the car can think for it self. The drivrless car is too unpredicatable and can put peoples lives in danger. Accidents occur all the time, i don't believe a driverless car can avoid an ongoing accident. Then there are situations with police, or stolen cars. Would the car give away its owner if they were on the run from the police? How would traffic stops work, would the car be so perfect to not break the law? The car could be harboring fugitives or runways or even kidnapped victims. The car wouldnt be smart enought to know, its going to do what its told and drive.\n\ni dont believe that self driving cars are ready for todays society nor will they ever be. The road is alwasy changing and the car would not be able to keep up.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are going to change the world, one car at a time. They are quickly becoming more safe and secure everyday. Driverless cars do not completely need drivers at the wheel, however, they do need the driver's input from time to time. They have built in safety mechanisms, entertainment, and will soon take over the taxi business, making the world safer one step at a time.\n\nThe reason these cars do not need a driver at the wheel at all times is because they have various sensors all over, watching and making sure where the car is going. That's not saying they are completely perfect though. Right now there's certain situations where they cannot be used without a driver, such as navigating construction and accidents. However, with human input, these cars can do just about anything.\n\nEventually, we will get to the point where a family can go on a long road trip and not have to sacrifice sleep to get to their destination. Not only that, but texting and driving will no longer be extreamly dangerous, as the car will make sure you're safe. Sleeping and texting are just the start of it though, allowing for the \"driver\" to be more versatile, and even being able to be entertained while driving. That's not to say these cars will be perfect, as they won't be. These cars don't need to be perfect, they just need to be better than humans.\n\nBecause of this, soon you will be able to schedule for a car to come pick you up and drive you to where ever you need to be. Taxi cab drivers will have some tough competition in the future. Eventually these cars will take out the taxi driver completely. No more leaving your stuff in some shady taxi driver's car, if you lose something, you can simply look up which car was driven, and pick it up again.\n\nDriverless cars are the future, and will continue to improve and see development for a long time. Safety and security are the car manufacter's main goals, and with all the smart people working on it, these cars will soon outshine taxi drivers, make the drive more entertaining, and keep people safe.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A time I patient yesterday I finished lot people drawing next minutes I patient throuout time wasnt I mightve loud disrupted fellow classmates I started draw color might say instead drawing smiley face I colored boxes math graphing paper make sort lime green purple checker board It took entire time I still done That time I remember I quite patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the contemporary world, the whether should facilities must spent on building new social edifice than restore extant has sparked a heated debate in out society. While many people would argue that town life could be improved only by this action, I contend that this method is distrustful.\r\n\r\nFirst of all, there are myriad negative outcomes which are associated with the notion that create new buildings is much better than renovate existing ones, to expound, if authorities build new construction, it will be much expensive than renovate old building. For instance, in 2017 Astana city hall spent approximately 700 millions dollars to make new cinema, however, renovating past cinema park had been costed only 70 millions. Also, new buildings cut area of the town, it means that land where company can made apartment house, was used to make museum. So, is the near future cons impacts such us rising house prices and homelessness could not be avoided. \r\n\r\nMoving further, if local hall destruct past area buildings, it will be destroy style of the local town or city. For example, Europe governments never demolish their towns style. Manu Europe cities such as Paris, Madrid, Viena, London were constructed many countries ago and now this places are golden treasure of each country which have own style. As I said before, local governing body can innovate exist budlings and made there more better if modern conditions will be added. Moreover if government construct new building where past edifice will disappear? Removing old edifice cost amount of money, thus, it is not effective to do this actions.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, the main reason behind the spent money to build new contractions does not correlate with the modern economic and social systems. In my opinion, there is no doubt that in nowadays there are no better way than recrate exist structures.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Offensive Who truely say book movie music magazine truely offensive There obvious movies completely make fun taunt someone s personal views religion lifestyle book wizarding world really offensive While growing I friend religious Her parents would never let read books At time I nt understand nt able read fantastic books Now I m older I understand parents believe The nothing Make believe imagination suitable thing fpr child read For many families though series nothing different world set free real world Should book many people love adore taken shelves families offended I personally nt think While family loves books movies families nt That lifestyle opinion Everyone opinion took everything world could offend someone would left nothing Movies would boring stories would interesting would music If world based opinions others making everyone happy would music Music way someone release soul The different sounds music based generations My mother s generation based mine So would really happen offensive materials taken shelves public library say The shelves would blank Empty shelves would horrible look Everyone offended something I m offended rape scences movies people believe situations makes movie better My friend s family offended make believe world I believe world another world wizarding world matter fact People believe many different things like many different things I ve never met one person exactly like one I m individual like everyone else things I liked taken shelf someone offended life would boring I would nt things I enjoy In cases offensive things taken shelves I say someone believes shelves", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many students consider working a part-time, during their education to brush-up their finances. Whilst in some places this is encouraged, others would argue that doing so might not be a good idea. This essay will examin both sides of this argument. Generally speaking, it appeares that for most students this may be a good option. \r\n\r\nPart-time jobs allow students to gain an insight into the working world. The transition from student life to working a full-time job is a big jump for some. A part-time job would allow a student to gain an understanding of the working world beforehand. Moreover, this can help students to gain a better understanding of what is expected from them in the future. Another benefit is, that students will recieve a salary. This will help the students in the future, when they will be in charge of managing their own money. As they already have gained experience from working part-time. \r\n\r\nPart-time jobs add create extra stress for already busy students. University can be a very stressful time for many, having addtional responsibilities may be counterproductive. In short, students should focus on their education, rather than working a part-time job. It is essential for a student to perform well during their education, since it will determin their job prospects in the future. \r\n\r\nIn summary, this essay has examined the benefits and drawbacks of working a part-time job as a student. In my opinion, this is decsion that everyone should make for themselves. If a student believes that they can manage both successfully, they should try it. As it can provide good insight into what they will be doing after university.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Wow, I can not believe that somebody would believe in them! There is no way that martians exist and we have no proof. How could martians even know what humans look like if they've never seen us. The face on Mars is just a natural landform.\n\nFirst of all, there is no such thing as aliens. I'm sure somebody just came up with a myth about creatures on other planets or in another galaxy, and it got so out of hand that people started believing it. In the article \"Unmasking the Face on Mars.\" it says \" Meanwhile, defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an ancient civilization on Mars,\" which just goes to show that If there was an ancient civilization on Mars than NASA would probably expose it for publicity.\n\nThere are probably many people that believe that the face was not naturally\n\nmade. Many things could've happened. The landform could've been made by an asteroid, a collision, an explosion, it could've even been there when the planet was created. The article even says, \"Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, revealing... a natural landform. There was no alien monument after all.\" Those 2 sentences alone should've ended the argument about it, but no. Everybody has to be right and nobody can be wrong.\n\nOthers say \" ...a cloudy time of year on the Red Planet. The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the face. Perhaps, said skeptics, alien markings were hidden by haze,\" which is stated in the article. The arguments made by the alien believers have no evidence or proof while the ones made by NASA have much factual information to back them up. and with the greatest come back to their comment about it being hazy is in the article, it says, \"Nevertheless, on April 8,2001-a cloudless summer day in Cydonia-Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look.\" And then it says \"Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution.\" NASA came back with more and even better information that's proven while the alien believers still have no factual information.\n\nIn the end it all comes down to whether or not the landform was alien made or naturally made. There have been many arguments and counter-arguments made, but so far the natural landform is winning the arguments. NASA can explore and keep looking for life on Mars and if they ever did find any than that would pretty much change everything, but until that day. The face is naturally made.\n\nI still can not believe that somebody would believe in alien life! I'm sure it was just an old myth that got out of hand. There are probably many people that believe in the face being alien made.It just ends at, is it natural or not?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In Nick D'Alto's writing of \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" he talks about a computer software, developed by Thomas Huang, that can detect spacific muscle movements in order to identify diffrent emotions. Nick argues that this technology will be revolutionary to many aspects of life, such as education, film and video tech careers, and maybe even politics. I believe that this advancement should not be implamented into a school enviorment for three key reasons, it is an invasion of privacy, it doesn't provide any academic assistance, andI don't respect the idea of robbing next generations the right to interact with an actual human teacher at such a young age. For these three reasons I plan to despute why I disagree with Nick D'Alto about implameting this kind of software into education.\n\nFirst, I disagree with Nicks idea because its an invation of privacy. Imagen that you were in elementary school again and this tech was installed. You would go through the day with this unconfortable sensation that you are constantly being watched but whats even worse is that your thaughts are also being monetered. imagen your children in this situation. This would then lead on to teaching them that they shoulden't produce thaughts or emotions on there own even if they were negative thaughts.\n\nSecond, I disagree because there is no academic assistance that this technolagy would assists students there for it is not nessasary. This tech dosen't provides instructions or academic reasoning it just reads emotions.\n\nThird, I don't agree with D'Alto's claim because I don't respect the idea of robbing next generations the right to interact with an actual human teachers. If we allowed this tech we would deprive human contact from kids at such a young age. Because kids brains are like sponges at such a young age we shove so much information at such a young age that if we take human conntact away they would become socialy deprived of that connection to humans so thats why I believe we should not implament this tech into education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author suggests that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangerouse conditions it shows us and how it affects our science today. He are some facts and details about the planet venus.\n\nVenus is called the evening star and it is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky but some scientist want to get even closer to the planet to explore it but because no spacecraft has actually landed on the planet it makes it very challenging for humans to study it. It is 97 percent carbon dioxide and it is over 800 degrees fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we would have expected on our planet.\n\nSo in conclusion this gives us great detail about the planet venus and what it is about and how it can help us discover many other planets along the way thank you for listening to me talk about the planet venus it is one great planet other than our planet earth and lets not forget about mars to.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is debatable whether first world countries increase in economic growth makes a difference to its citizens. I completely disagree with this statement and in this essay, I will support my opinion with relevant examples.\n\nWhen a rich nation continues to grow it offers more benefits to its constituents. It gives more opportunity for the underprivileged. The government can provide more support to the community. Furthermore they can allocate more funds on education, housing and so much more. This will result to the construction of more building and establishments such as, hospitals and schools. Tax might be lowered in view of the fact that the nation is wealthy.\n\nFor example giving free education or sponsorship program during college. In turn the citizen who was given the opportunity to study can give back to its community by serving the country for instance for 2 years, depending on the agreement between the government and the student.\n\nIn addition government can provide more free healthcare services to the people. Having a wealthy coffer is an advantage. In times of unforeseen calamity in the future the government can easily respond. Covid--19 is the recent example, even the richest of the nations was not prepared for this event and experience lack of hospitals and nurses. But, due to the fact that they have the money. They can easily assemble researchers to combat these disease, unlike the other nations who are poor that need to wait for the wealthy nations to provide assistance.\n\nIn conclusion, the citizen will feel satisfied when they see that their economic growth is increasing. \n\nThey can have a more up to date healthcare system and received a free education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A new technology called the facial action coding system enables computers to identify human emotion. The creation of this technology has made it possible to to identify the emotion of the mona lisa, in paragraph one it says, ' shes 83 percent\n\nhappy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\" these are percentages accumulated after using the mona lisa to test out the new technology piece.\n\nLots of things go into this to figure out the emotions in the picture. in paragraph two it states,\" Dr. Huang and his colleague are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate.\" With that that has made it easier to communicate with computers, this is valuable to classrooms because everyday we are introduced to new technology. As we grow as a society we learn to use the advances of techology to our advantage everyday.\n\nWe as humans use this calculation everyday regardless of having the facial coding system. in paragraph 5 it says, \" we humans perform this same impressive \" calculation\" everyday.\"\n\nIn paragraph 6 it states, \"for example if you smile when a wed ad appears on yur screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different\" with this sort of technology it will keep children engaged in their school work, and keep them focus because since the system can tell emotions it could be sort of comforting to know something is paying attention and will keep the students engaged in their work.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,being apart of the voting process is extremely important.It's important,because you are helping by popular vote for the president of the United States.Electoral College helps you get a better understanding of the voting process and the effect that everyone's vote has.However,the Electoral colleges are not a really big help when it comes down to the country.Here is provided information about why they should change election by popular vote.\n\nFirst to start the discussion,Electoral Colleges were estblished by the founding fathers in the constitution as a compromise between election of the president by vote in congress and election of the president by popular vote.The Electoral College is not just a place it's an important process.This college is made of electors.They have meetings where they vote for the president and vice president.The college is consisted of 538 electors.At least 270 electoral votes are required to elect the president.Each candidate that is interested in becoming president in your state has to have his or her own flock of electores.The electors are chosen by the political party ran by the candidate.This college basically provides you with a idea of why it is important to vote. The country's fate rests in the hands of many.\n\nNext,The Electoral college system only allows voters to vote for the slate electors. The president of the United States votes is more important then the slate electors.The president of the United States is the one responsible for the Country.Most people refer to the most common argument between the electoral college as the disater factor.Like for instance if someone wanted to vote for a specific person you would have to vote for a different amount of slate electors also depending where you lived as well.\n\nContinuing,the Electoral college is really regarded as an anachronism aslo known as a non-democratic method of selecting a president. Many people believe that,that should be overruled by declaring the candidate who recieves more popular votes is the winner.Each party selects a slates of electors that is trusted to vote for the nominee that was picked slate electors.Even though the Electoral has a lack of conservative reasons, there are five reasons that people think that should be retained. The first reason is the certainy of outcome,second Everyone's President,third Swing states,fourth Big States,and lastly Avoiding run-off Elections.These 5 things are reasons why people feel that these colleges should stay.\n\nThe conclusion, the president of the United states is chosen by our votes.We have the power to make this country strong,but we also have the power to make this country a train wreck.Voting is really important this can determine the fate of the country.\n\nSincerly,PROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Electoral College is unfair because If you only have a couple of Democratic electors than the vote that everyone in Ohio , Alaska , South Carolina , is pointless and would only count for a couple of votes.\n\nThe fact that Electors can refuse to vote for a president and the party their on what the people picked that elector for is ridiculous, because the Elector could just pick the President on the Republican side.\n\nElectoral Vote can be easily\n\nManipulated by the state legislature by \"replacing the Democratic electors with electors who would oppose the President.\n\nIf a candidate only went to a place that has a lot of electoral votes and he knew those people were gonna pick for the Democrats then he basically has a huge advantage, and if the Republican candidate got a bunch of other states with 3-6 electoral votes then it gonna take him alot more states to catch up to the Democrat who only need California to boost him up\n\nTremendously .\n\nThe 3 states a candidate needs most to win is\n\nCalifornia\n\nTexas\n\nFlorida\n\nIf the Democrats got those 3 states by 122 electoral votes.\n\nThe winner-takes-all rule is horrible , it should be however many votes that candidate had so if Mitt Romney had the most electoral votes in California it shouldn't mean that he wins all the electoral votes it should just mean that he gets the 33 votes and Obama gets the other 22 votes.\n\nIm in favor of either taking out Electoral votes or just making adjustments to it , so it's more fair for the people that are voting.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author somewhat supports the idea Venus is worthy of exploring despite all dangers. Our author thoroughly explains all of the dangers to expect in Venus, but fails to include much reason as to why we should explore it. The main purpose of this article is to explain the dangers.\n\nThe main reason to explore Venus, according to the author, was it's possibilty that it was once like Earth. In paragraph 4, the author explains, \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" They further explain that it could've supported life, and still shares some aspects of Earth like mountains and craters.\n\nHowever, why would this be worth the risks and dangers that humans would face trying to explore it? The author fails to explain how this could be beneficial to us on Earth. The author then goes on to tell of possible solutions to get a better study from Venus. But, none of them seem effective. In paragraph 6 the article states \"researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance.\" It is evident that the current methods of studying Venus would prove unproductive.\n\nDespite the possibilities of exploring Venus, they all have very big risks and dangers. The article states that the conditions of Venus are far too extreme for any humans on Earth. Why risk lives of people to just maybe learn a thing or two about Venus? The article responds that the \"human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" But, fails to further explain how or why this would be useful.\n\nIn conclusion, the author fails to support why exploring Venus outweighs the dangers. The article does not go into much detail. Many questions are left unanswered such as, what kind of information would we get out of this? Why is this worth risking lives and money? Although the possibility of learning about life on other planets would be extraordinary, the dangers of losing human lives and expenses should be a factor in deciding if its worth it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Join the Seagoing Cowboys\n\nHello its Luke. I was wondering if you would like to join the seagoing cowboys. I enjoy it very much. You can make a difference in so many peoples lives. The seagoing cowboys are a group of people who help others during the war. We take and bring things overseas.\n\nIf you join the cowboys then you will get to go to different places.You will be able to meet new people, some of the people you meet are excellent mentors and friends. While on the cowboys you may be able to go places you will never get the chance to go again.Also the cowboys do what they do for a great cause. We help so many people. The cowboys all started because of the 44 nations who joined together to create the UNRRA. The UNRRA stands for ( The United Nations\n\nRelief and Rehabilitation Administration).The UNRRA hired \"Seagoing Cowboys\" to take care of the horses, young cows ,and mules that were shipped overseas. Besides helping people you can get the side benefit of seeing and adventuring the place town or city your in.\n\nThere are many good reasons to join the Seagoing Cowboys. It is a great thing to be a apart of. Other then helping people you get many benefits. So if you have a good heart and like helping people this may be the job for you.I will look forward to seeing you join the Seagoing Cowboys.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper I computers benefit society anyway Yes computers great way learn things world people worry right front Being computer time gives less time exercising sight enjoying nature gives less time interacting family friends Computers nt benefit everyone gives less time exercising When people nt exercise busy always something else less important would always tired You wo nt want anything sit around nothing calls laziness would go weak without exercise You wouldnt strength eat lift anything calls bone go weak would nt get calories calcium vitamins body needs strong You would gain weight calls shape Since body exercise weight fat stays Being computer nt help enjoy nature way supposed You never see world You always miss fun activities people start talking much fun re going wish And always stuck house going get boring s nothing fun If re always computer cell time never interact family friends That mostly always important computers always always going You miss fun important occasions family re addicted computer And friends stop re hanging Computers really nt benefit everyday people miss greater things life You miss exercising nature especially family friends Then going wish spent time instead computer going see great time would want great time", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper men women write everyday living I would like write rection computers They teach faraway places help build handeye coordination let talk online Computers part everyday life needs told First computer let learn faraway places without leaving rooms One mom s friends They decide move nt like computer nt look laws saying I ll find I got CAPS find laws nt find enough cause cause arrested multiple times first years A monthes last arrest came back could deal laws buetifull country arrests accidents nt know laws Ten minutes computer searching laws could kept Next comptures improve handeye coordination From survey children spend time computers better tennis baseball others gym teacher says CAPS kids spend time compture weak need get exerciseDear local newpaper local newspaper power say feel effects computers give people I believe computers give great effects people teaches handeye coordination gives people ability learn far away places allows talk people In people agree idea computers Firstly using computers teaches people handeye coordination For example grandmother told knows use hands eyes well using computer This types researches information day long In computers designed help eyes hands focus Secondly computers lot interesting information faraway places quotes I always use computers work helps learn many new things lets wife I search details trip want go people agree stated However people say computers give wrong information many times find wonderful website never lie Thirly use computers let talk online video chat friends family world How benefits seen relatives ages buy ticket visit video chat It gotten people much closer see world whole different way instead wasting cell phone minutes go buy laptop computer camera video chat Lastly taking people active peoples life important In conclusion great eye coordination able research faraway places always allowed video chat talk family online I want tell whole world computers useful people use everyday without problem Lastly best feeling ever make everyone smile knowing believe spending time computer teach lot From many students greater handeye cooridination enjoy good like tennis professor human body states Technology helps handeye Many use computers others greater games along lines This shows handeye exercise linked computer Furthermore computers help talk people When child goes college still able email famlies talk Talking others computers makes world go round World business need computers contact eachother decuss plans move toward economicly Lastly computers useful useful They teach faraway places improve handeye coordnation let talk people article made show pros computers people experience wonders", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is endemic that a large number of children become offenders all around the world. More violence content in media and the lack of correct guidance from parents are to be blame for this situation, and the government should carry out policies to help juvenile delinquents reintegrate into society. \n\nTeenagers are particularly susceptible to violence in media content, and they might copycat antisocial behavior if their parents neglect their emotional wellbeing. For instance, television sometimes encourages aggressive or even violent behavior among young people, children who are exposed to those programs would tend to resort to violence when they face problems. In addition, parents pay more attention on physical condition instead of psychological situation. This is particular the case for single parents, who have to resume child-care responsibility while being occupied with a full-time job. It is difficult for them to watch closely of their kids, and prevent them from being violent at the first place. \n\nTo deter a rising juvenile delinquency, the authorities should create a sound rehabilitation system in order to reform young offenders and make them become contributing members to society. To be specific, teenagers who commit trivial crimes such as pocket-picking could have a chance to retrain in facility, and hopefully they could find an employment after they re-enter the society. By the contrast, severe criminals ought to be sentenced to prison regardless their ages because they need to pay for what they have caused to victims. At the same time, they should retrain and understand the correct moral before the release in case of being a reoffender. \n\nIn conclusion, an increase exposure to violent media content and parental neglect are two contributors to a crime wave of teenage criminals. The government should give penalty properly and take actions to reintegrate those teenagers into society when they are free.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I don't think that driverless cars should be a thing. Driverless cars come with many pros as shown in the passage but also with many cons, also shown in the passage. Driverless cars should only be allowed to an extent. Yes having these kindds of vehicles is nice and all, but they come with many more complications than solutions. Cars dont really have the thinking skills of a human. Cars can sense objects to stop or move around the object, but what if that malfunctions in a fatal situations. Like a kid accidentally walks behind a car as its in reverse to pull out of a driveway and the car doesnt sense them in time. It could also have an impact on how we live. People may think that having smarter cars makes life easier and they get used to not doing much and become even lazier. Causing a growth in how many people in the world are obese. This could just be me overthinking things, but it is a possibility. In conclusion, yes Driverless cars should be a thing, but to an extent where in an important or fatal situation, the driver could take back control of the vehile in time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With the development of human society, there are plenty of crowds who are attracted by discovering the past behind the houses or building they live in. There are two main reasons accounting for this phenomenon, which can hopefully provide several effective explanations.\r\n\r\nThere are two main causes for this situation. First, it is a pleasure for the community to notice the story behind their houses. The human society is undergoing a huge increase in recent years. As a result, there is only a little chance for an apartment to have a long past. The finding process is more like finding treasures and the result in various, which can offer a sense of adventure. This can bring joy to the public. Second, it can make an extra value for the house. The history behind a house, for instance, a celebrity used to live here or some event that happened can bring extra cultural value. Thus, the house owners can rent or sell the house to people interested in this and gain more benefit in financial part.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the most effective way to notice the history of the house is by using the internet. Internet technic has become the database of daily usage. Therefore, people can check the information by typing a few words and clicking the button, which is very convenient and quick. Furthermore, people can ask their elder neighbours. Sometimes, the elderly may live in a constant place for a long period, they may have some event that occurred before which is little known.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, extra income and a sense of the unknown is the main motivation of people and asking people living nearby and searching on the internet are the two methods people can research.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This setting effects cyclist One hot dry California desert heat It making hot thirsty making low water The hot desert heat made water like substance could drink well The water bottle containe tentalizing sips enough quench thirst The hot heat would make birds pick drys examples make hard reader take old timers advice It made realice time comes wisely youth make silly mistakes The heat made trip inner soul survive That ho setting effects cyclest", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author presents both negative and positive aspects for the driveless cars. I think that there are positive and also negative aspects for the driveless cars. In the story, the author states that google cofounder sergey brin imagines a time in the future when no one buys cars because no one needs them anymore. He envisions a future with a public transportation system where fleets of driveless cars form a public transportation taxi system. He believes such cars would fundamentally change the world.\n\nThere are positive and negative aspects for the driveless cars. Some of the positive aspects are how the driveless cars would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus. Google has had driveless cars that could drive themselves under specific conditions since 2009. Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\n\nBut these driveless cars also have some negative aspects about them. Google has had cars that could drive independently under specfic conditions since 2009. When it says specific conditions I'm thinking that it can't really drive it's self all the way. Google cars aren't truly driveless; they still alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents. So what roadblocks lie ahead for the autonomous car?\n\nDriveless cars may not be a good aspect for the future because the driveless cars are not really driveless after all. When the driveless car is driving itself sooner or later the driver would have to take over and start to drive their selfs.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting hot dry desert This setting effected making dehidarted hot It hard go fourther knew keep going Also land barin ething around Clearlier setting effected biker", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "First, driving a car is more convenient and comfortable than cycling. Therefore, when going to workplaces or hanging out with friends, the car is a reasonable choice. The other reason for this point is when compared with vehicles like cars or motorbikes; cycling is not time effective. For instance, with the same distance, it would take drivers double or triple faster than bicycle riders.\r\n\r\nIt is also true that riding bikes becoming increasingly popular in some urban areas. Due to exhaust fumes from cars, which may have a devastating effect on the planet and lead to global warming, cycling might be expected to cut down emissions. Also, Riding a bike is essential for health not only maintain a healthy body but also reduce the risk of some diseases such as cancer, diabetes and heart diseases.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, these points have both pros and cons depends on the urban citizen view. In my opinion, although there are several benefits of driving a car, I would argue that cycling is a greater choice and it should be encouraged by the urban authorities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driveless cars are both a positive and a negative idea, in many ways.\n\nI strongly believe that driveless cars would be a bad idea. Why? more like why not. People may say that driveless cars can be a smarter way to drive but so can yourself if you're staying alert.\n\nThis passage states numerous ideas as of why its positve, but the negative stuc out to be a little more.\n\nThe author stated how diferent car manufactors are coming up with ways to make sure the driver is always alert, ehichi i thinknjust add even more distractions, such as a light up wind sheild or even a vibrating seat.\n\nDrivers, as of now, usually text and drive while driving on their own, what might change that while not having to drive they're still going to be paying attention to the road.\n\nMost drivers wouldn't listen to the computer car system and try and make it seem like they're alert at all times..\n\nAlso, a big problem i think can arrise from ths is the fact that if a accident were to take place, who would we blame? Technology messes up daily, but so do every day drivers. It would be horrible if your driveless cars system broke down in the middle of the highway and their wouldn't be really much to do.\n\nThe author also states how if sa drier ever gets impatient, theyd bring in more eentertainment and, that itself would be another huge distraction off the road.\n\nTherefor, i do not think drivless cars would be a good idea for most places.\n\nA lot of problems may arrise and back fire on both the driver and the manufactor. Unless a manufactor found it to be one of the sfafests ways of comunication then it shoudln't be allowed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars could be a good thing, I totally agree with them. People wouldnt get into as many recks and the other person couldnt really blame it on them for crashing. As shown on TV and in movies they look really cool. These cars would use half the fuel they use now and are far more flexible than buses. Even though they would need a lot of work to accomplish and a lot of time, they could really work out.\n\nDriverless cars would need a lot of sensors, cameras, GPS, etc. I would imagine they would cost a lot of money because that is a lot of electronic things put into one car to make it amazing. Although some cars already have sensors in them, they still dont cost as much as everything else that needs to be put into them. They could help the drivers out more than they can manage alone. There would be less recks, less cops on duty and less money paid to the state.\n\nAntilock brakes and driver assistance still seem a long way from the driverless cars, but technology is so far now that it is starting to catch up to reality. GM has developed seats that vibrate when your about to be in danger. In some cars we have now, the camera beeps when we are too close to someone or something. To me that helps out with a lot of people who are too short to see or dont pay attention. It tells you when you need to take over and put your hands on the wheel. Even though they're called \"Driverless Cars\" you still need to be paying attention and not texting and driving because it might not work like you think it does. You still could crash or hit someone or something. Don't take your eyes off the road!\n\nI totally agree with the Driverless Cars, they could set us high up and keep us safe! The human driver should have control the whole time they are driving, and should pay attention. Who knows if the sensors really work? We've been working to get cars like this for a really long time and will hopefully have them by 2020.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "First, the author begin talking about Venus, the things we should know, but the challenge place is to examine more closely. Also the author says that is referred to as Eart's \"twin\", and is very similar in size and, is ogaerur planetary neighbor, the thick atmosphere, the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system, our sister planet is so inhospitable.\n\nThen, the author talks about the thick atmosphere and\n\nthat is more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere.Also talks about our planet surface, and atmospheric avarege over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, fainly they says that these conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth.He says that are not esasy conditions but the NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. And also Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.\n\nLast the author is ending with a refection, they says that is a challenge go to Venus, and how this option is value,and he also says how human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors, last how our imagination and innovation are doing us exploring the Earth and the moon. \"Striving to meet the challege presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travels on Earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Advertisements have become an inescapable part of people’s daily lives. While the positives they have on us are pronounced, I believe the negatives of adverts also should not be overlooked.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the accelerated growth development of the advertising industry has produced generated economies of scale the economic effect of scale that benefits both advertisers distributors and suppliers of products and services. First, it has forged a reliable and sustainable revenue stream that ad companies rely on to expand businesses. As a result of the increasing public recognition and varied distribution formats, the value chain of the industry has become more fragile but organized on the back of more specific occupations that emerged. Second, producers benefit from the high penetration rate of the advertisements by monetizing the public attention to real purchases of their goods and services.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nHowever, I would argue that, from a societal perspective, there are several problems caused by the widespread advertisements waiting to be addressed. First of all, given its fundamental target of helping clients make profits, many ad videos and articles we see on the market are aiming to pursue people a lavish lifestyle, which could cause additional financial pressure on families. On top of this, the propaganda of abundant consumption costs much of the social purse since it conveys an idea of excessive buying that rests on over-production, which leads to a massive waste of resources and energy, in turn, deepens the negative impact on our planet Earth.\r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, though the wide use of advertising tools to present companies’ brands indeed has created huge economic benefits, I am all for that people should start rising awareness of the drawbacks it can bring to societies and individuals.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are some who think that people on their childhood ought to require to do community work without profit on their free time. This could bring advantages to teenagers also for the community. I believe and agree that having young people in the work force at early stage it could bring many advantages for them and the community.\r\n\r\nFirstly, give the opportunity to young people to be part of the workforce at early stage it brings many positiveness for their future helping them to develop skills and find a passion, for example having programs in which they could develop soft skills like carpentry or landscaping. They not only will help the community as well they help themself to find their passions. in addition, because it is not under any economic interest it becomes even more interested.\r\n\r\nSecondly the community will be indirectly benefited as well the local council. because they will be receiving totally free labourer, for example if you have apprentices totally free in the building are it could reduce the budget in employees that could be used in another sectors, such as, education or developing infrastructure like hospitals or roads. In additional as effect of have young people working they will not have time to expend on the street doing vandalism.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, both, young people and the community will be benefit from having unpaid work. Further more young people will find their passions and develop useful skills and the community will have a broad budget to spend in different areas.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Traveling outside of our planet ,we call Earth, seems bizarre. Unless NASA sends a couple astronauts out to the moon, traveling to any other planet is not something a person would be used to hearing everyday. Imagine going to a planet where it is surrounded by a carbon dioxide atmosphere and a corrosive sulfuric acid atmosphere combined. While it only gets up to a little over 100 degrees in many places aorund the world in the summer, this planet gets over 800 degreees Fahrenheit year round. Obviously, it seems impossible to live there without dying immediately. But, isn't that why we have spacecrafts to go off and do missions? Many spacecrafts only make it a few hours when sent to this planet, making it nearly impossible. Surprisingly enough, this planet is known as Venus. Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density, size and distance, which makes sense why so many scientists and employees at NASA are so interested in studying Venus.\n\nVenus is known as Earth's sister planet. Earth being very similar to Venus, Venus is extremely different in ways it is hard for a human being to imagine. But, once upon a time, Venus was more Earth-like than ever before. It was covered in large oceans with a suitable way for forms of life to live there. Today, Venus has some similarities, such as a surface of rocky sediment and has valleys, mountains, and craters. Being so similar to Earth, scientists decided to take up on diving deeper in the world of Venus. Venus has an incredible amount of dnager, which is why NASA has options for making the mission safe but also scientifically productive.\n\nOne of several options would be to send humans to study Venus floating above the fray. With this option, the humans would be able to survive, but still have to go through 170 degree temperatures. An obvious disadvantage to floating above the fray would be the distance barrier. It is very hard to collect samples of rock, gas, or photos from that far of a distance. Rendering standard forms of photograph and videography become ineffective because floating from such a distance provides limited insight.\n\nThe right but more difficult path to take would be figuring out a way to reach ground level on Venus. Not impossible, researchers are working on innovations that would let the machines last long enough to contribute meaningfully to get more knowledge on Venus. Some of the simplified electronics are made of silicon carbid and have also been tested in some of the extreme dangers that Venus has. A second similar machine would have been similar to mechanical computers used base in the 1940s during World War II. These type of devices make calculations by using gears and levers without the need of electronics. Today's modern technology would be fragile to be able to sustain any type of conditions in Venus, although it is way easier and faster to use modern day technology for this specific challenge.\n\nHaving danger limit the human brain is one of the \"easier said than done\" situations. After a while, humans will become to curious and will want to know more about Venus and about all of the dangers that come with it. There is no other way to figure these things out other than figuring out a way to see all of it for ourselves. Using our curiousity, researchers and those who work at NASA might be able to create new innovations or ways to see all of the dangers that are within the scary planet of Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, the Internet has a strong impact on every aspect of people. As a result, education is also developed and many people believe that the current system of both teachers and students in the classroom will no longer exist by the year 2050. From my perspective, I totally disagree with this idea.\nOn the one hand, it is not effective for students to study new method.Firstly, there are two kinds of students: lazy and hard-working. If you are a industrious student, you are extremely active in your studying , you always know how to study better. Otherwise, others can not do the same things, they will overlook and their results will go down because noone control them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars should not even be advertised in car stores because they sound dangerous. People may think driverless cars sound cool in all, but in reality; what if someone's driverless crashes? Then that person would not think their driverlesss car is so cool then.\n\nDriverless cars are just like other cars around the world except that driverless cars do not have drivers inside them. Driverless cars also have sensors like regular cars as stated in paragraph 5 so that is nothing new to anybody or anything. Driverless cars look basically like regular ordinary car which makes not very interesting to people who are looking to buy them.\n\nDriverless cars are also very dangerous and can cause serious problems to humans on this earth. As stated in paragraph 8, The psychological aspects of automation are really a challenge, Driverless cars can cause so much trouble in people's lves. They can also cause confusion when it comes to having an accident with another driver because as stateed in paragraph 9, \"Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at faultthe driver or the manufacturer?\" If someone gets into a car accident; they will not even know who's fault it would if somebody got severely injured because the driver would have no control at all over the vehicle so in my opinion driverless cars should not be advertised in car shops.\n\nIn conclusion, whether that driverless cars are dangerous or that they can cause problems; they should not be sold to anybody because they would be nothing but trouble and pain.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "No I belive certain materials removed I belive people able freedom speech I also belive somebody something mind able say I ways tell peolple mean say say whay mean Now younger kids getting ahold magazines movies inpropriate material yes censored nt placed places younger kids get", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Banning cars from the centre of various cities around the world has been a strategy to reduce pollution and encourage people to use public transport. It has had various positive effects for both individuals and for society as a whole.Banning cars from the centre of cities seems to be a very positive development. Fewer cars on the road means less pollution and fewer fossil fuel resources being used up. Although the effect on resources might be relatively negligible, it can create a newer way of thinking regarding the dynamics of transport within cities and this could be the most important benefit to society. Some people working in the centre of these cities may complain about inconvenience, but many would agree that this is a small price to pay.A reduction in the reliance of people on private vehicles is likely to encourage them to use public transport or even bicycles. Using public transport, especially the types that run on clean sources of power, will significantly raise air quality levels in cities, which will of course benefit everyone. The clean air could even further encourage the use of bicycles, which would in turn promote more healthy lifestyles and less obesity. This would contribute on an individual level to people’s well-being and a better and longer life, and on a societal level, it would lessen the strain on public health resources. Governments could encourage this by creating more bicycle lanes to make cycling easier and safer.In conclusion, it is clear that banning cars from the centre of cities is significantly beneficial. Better health and ecology, as well as improvement in longevity and well-being can benefit individuals and the entire society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke had two part time jobs. When his buddy took him on a bout ride his futchure chaged. They were going to Europe there for world war to had just ended. but they had no idea what was ahead of them.\n\nWhen Luke got to europe the place was in ruins and many other contries were in ruins to. So Europe had Luke his friend and some cowboys go to greece with cattle horses and donkeys. When arriving in greece Luke was 18 years old so it made him scared that was going to get put in the army. But stay as a sea cowboy for suplise was needed badly.\n\nThe reson you should be a seagoing cowboy is one you can bring suplise to people like animals. Two its good to trave and can a once in a life time chance. And three is because you could really injoy it. And doing with friends and famly can be fun. pluse you get a great view of the sea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Mr. Senator , I agree you should keep the Electoral College because it a has a major impact who gets elected .\n\nThe Electoral College consists of 538 electors . A majority of 270 electoral vote is required to elect the president , and that helps the election move more swiffer which helps the people give more time to think , adjust , and prepare because most states have \"winner-takes-all\" they can have for time , unless they just rush it also that includes republicans and democrats . For example In 2012's election Obama recieved 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to only 51.3 percent of popular votes cast for him and Romney because almost all states award electoral votes on a winner-take-all basis even a slight plurality in a state creates a landslide electoral-vote victory in the state . Also they say that the citizens are voting not for the president , but for the slate of elector , who is turn elect the president . Eventhough though that is true and they do vote for a slate most of the time each party selects a slate of electors trust to vote for the parties nominee and that trust is rarely betrayed . I think they are doing a good job cause there has been no complaning , also statistics , maps , and facts shows who recieved the most popular votes . So you cant say they're cheating or treating people or doing it unfairly . Additionally people are glad well most people are glad who they picked because they're on their side , and plus majority rules and they will just have to pay the price if they mess up .\n\nSo I think you and they are doing a good job and shold keep the Electoral College .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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