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"content": "When they got on Mars they realized that it looked like a human face and they wanted to know if it was left by an alien or something. In order for the face to be created by aliens we would have to know that they exist. We would have to actually know that aliens made the face on Mars, we would have to have evidence that they exist. In order to know that the face is a natural landform we would have to do a lot of research stating that maybe something or someone made the face. Scientist would have to make sure that it is a face and not something else. Scientist figured that is was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, the unusual shadows made it look like an Egyptiazn Pharaoh. They would have to do research to see if aliens left it there or if its something that someone or something left on Mars. In order to find out if it's a face they would have to make conclusions about what it may be. They figured that it did not have anything to do with aliens but they were not sure if it was true or not they wanted to know if alien marking were hidden by haze.",
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"content": "We need to keep a better enviroment if we want to live in a more healty world. one of the best was is to limit car uasge. There are many advantages of limiting car usage for people. A coulpe of examples are the air an world would not be as polluted more then it already is, and this could improve the satfy for other people.\n\nBy wanting to live in a more healty place we need to keep the air clean, that is one of are biggest problems with useing cars all the time. One way there are trying to accomplush this is by makeing homes an cities denser, so that its would be better for walikng or biking riding. making these homes more compact there would be molre accesibletily to public transportation. which would leave more space for better walk was . By doing this we are reducing car use an saveing the air a little at a time ,to imp[rove this world.\n\nAnother advantage woulod be that with less cars running around the streets would be way satfier. With generation being that more kids are starting to drive everyone esle is more at risk with there satfy. \"different things are convering which suggest thta we are witnessing a long-term cultral shift\" mean that we can still feel connected to other peolpe without driving. So we dont need to be driving around all the time it would be in all of are best interst to limit driving cars.\n\nin conclusion i feel that limiting driveeing would help all of us in the long run into liveing in a better an safer wold. Tat if we take care of will keep us safe by living here.",
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"content": "Libraries remove book shelves someone nt like finds offensive If group people interested book want read like telling new person Then another student decided nt like book nt want anyone else reading becuase find offensive I honestly believe nt taking shelves I think would different everyone found book offensive s one two people complaining I nt think take ruin everybody else It s book students know s nt mean directed towards I think overlook If playing music dacing around fun thats good Now cussing talking drugs sort things song nt play school system around someone religious kind thing like think sort things They might want around much Show respect play something everyone fun So libary type music monitored checks Movies something look Movies already ratings kind helps people check make sure movie would safe watch If getting movies libary I would think would already watched adult make sure watched student child I wouldnt want little sibblings watching something nt need see hear You watch magazines You want magazine going interesting clean Kids know bad good still teenagers You nt want kids seeing nudity cussing drugs magazine If I walk library see kind things magazine I would suggest take shelves I would suggest kids healthy thought things I would nt want thinking anything bad like saw magazine I m looking safety Libraries always need advice They need always eye things make sure everything clean everyone look read watch I m glad safety ideas kids I hope everyone eye kind things I know I I ever children I would want around something understand know nothing bad harmful So thanks libraries eye things like",
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"content": "The mood described auther warm full happiness In memoir auther talks importance family Which always brings comforting feeling He Shared born twofamily blondbrick building Ironbound section Newark New jersey matter lived lived The mood get read memoir mixed Of way describes parents life life home When says innocence Childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed formed backdrop life warm home talking close matters read feel comfort happiness joy compassion feels toward life parent everyone around",
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"content": "It has been subject to debate that whether museums play a greater role in education or entertainment.In my opinion it seems to be both of them acceptable in same pathway as enjoyment or educational.\r\n\r\nfirstly ,a great conviction can be made by indicating the range of facilities they offer for joy.A good illustration of this they exhibit their value cultural artistic and scientific artifacts in attractive way supporting sound commentaries with headset to use.nevertheless museums play a pivotal role in entertaining all people in spite of age gap with depicting statues imaginary beings and items which show roots of human civilisation.for instance tools which has used for hunting in \"stone age\".\r\n\r\nnobody deny that facilitating sound resources for educational purpose are a great opportunity who do research. anybody can absorb knowledge on ancient history which are portraying powerful strength of our ancestors.Certain museums are fully equipped with electronic access of information and trained staff for guidance.\r\n\r\nto sum up by balance approach towards both of above views it can be easily made a sound environment for education and entertainment.",
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"content": "Hello I writing today concerns views cencorship library First I think music play listen little graphic I know music played deprive feelings others Music meaning instead blood killing better things life Second I would like talk books libraries I think want adult type material section adults reading sould like also able read Next I would like talk inapropriate magazines libraries feature Some magazines show little much people go libraryMost magazines show adult teen certain ageI believe make section ages age group Finally I would like get movies let people check Libraies graphic selection movies easily reach young children Children need know types things Libraries need learn surroundings continue In conclution I believe everyone right library I feel everyone nt right everything libraries hold Bad things create bad minds learn stay influencesLibraries need change ways selections make things sucessful thier behalf",
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"content": "dear senator,\n\nI have come to a conclusion on how I think the president and his candidates should be voted for. In one hand we've got the Electoral College, and the election by popular vote. These two thing have been around for hundreds of years but you've got to know if you prefer one or the other. So which one works better? Why do you prefer this one over the other?\n\nThe Electoral College, electors meeting and voting for our president and vice president. This electoral college consist of 538 electors that vote to for our president. I myself dont think this is a very sensable thing. Because when you think you're voting for the president you are actually voting for a state of electors who will in turn vote for the president not you. Why should there be a select few people out of the billions of people who live in america to vote for the president while we just sit and wait for the results. To only have their opinions voiced. Does'nt seem like a very fair way to elect someone who will be changing our country. This is a winner-take-all-system.\n\nElection by popular vote, this means you and I will be voting for the president and his cabinet ourselves. That we will have a say in who we want to change or even fix our country. Although the person we vote for may not win, we still got a say in what we believe would have made our counrty a better place. Although the Electoral College might give a more clear winner, if we know that our vote will actually have an effect in the election we might pay more attention to the election and vote more wisely. Knowing that we have voiced our preference rather than knowing maybe one single electoral vote might have set the election.\n\nNow there are some benefits if the Electoral College. In the case of having a precise vote on who gets to be president is one. Also maybe the fact that you voted fo the people who will be electing the president in a way is just the same. However this does notmean that it is better than you just voting yourself. Because those are onlyabout the two thing that are evn remotely good about the Electoral College.\n\nSo when you decide who you want to be president think of how you would like your vote to be heard. through your own vote or maybe/possibly through anothers vote. I know which system i would choose. Giving that it would give me more voicein the matter. What would you do?",
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"content": "In this day and age, more and more contemporary attention has been placed on the opinion that allocating public money for enhancing a robust lifestyle aiming at staving diseases off is more necessary than allocating it for the treatment of people who are already ill. From my perspective, I subscribe to the former idea. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, by virtue of having a healthy lifestyle, people may reduce medical expenses, saving a great deal of money, therefore, investing public money in promoting a robust one is appropriate and accurate. For instance, if public money is spent on raising inhabitants’ awareness of the adverse health effects of smoking, they will be inclined to avoid using cigarettes and thanks to this, they will be less susceptible to lung cancer, so they can cut down on medical expenses. \r\n\r\nIn addition, the best method to prevent any illness is to develop a healthy lifestyle. This can be explained by the reason that when inhabitants may improve their well-being or have a good physique, they might build up immunity against many diseases, leading to the possibility that the risks of suffering from many illnesses will be lessened. For instance, the Japanese government has invested public money in running health campaigns to incentivize their residents to have a healthy diet. Thus, nowadays, Japanese people seldom develop diseases that can put them in life-threatening situations. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, with all the reasons mentioned above, I strongly believe that it is better to spend public money on promoting a robust lifestyle in order to prevent illnesses.",
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"content": "Nowadays, more individuals are learning information about the history of the house or place they live in. This trend can be explained for several reasons, such as internet trends and obsessions with history. However, it is not as easy as it seems, so this essay will contain methods to search for relevant data.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, many people have a passion for knowing what happened decades ago with the place they live, so that is why they want to gain information about it. Usually, ambitious youngsters want to enlarge their horizons about their house. As a result, they usually ask many questions about it and force people to think, subsequently creating a community of interested society. Moreover, persons create internet trends that are enhancing day by day, and more and more are becoming interested in that. For instance, the popular left house in Michigan gained a lot of public attention because of the new facts that were found about it because of someone’s interests. \r\n\r\nFurthermore, individuals try to find out the sources or any data associated with that construction, usually, residents can find out the information from social media sources such as YouTube, Instagram, or any other website. Moreover, articles and books that are related to them are one of the best ways, and if it is not available, indigenous citizens would share anything they want to know and can tell some stories related to that property. For example, a castle built in Belgium was unknown until it attracted much attention from local inhabitants, consequently, after some years of investigations from them, they were able to create the whole picture and understand the history of the house. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, the investigations of the history of the houses are usually made by interests of new citizens or younger generations, and they can easily find out any data by asking on social media or residents.",
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"content": "The features setting affect cyclist many ways The cyclist persevered rough terrain caused become weak For example author states looked majority pavement front ceased past tilling keep balance dehydrated state This shows author dehydrated hot kept going even physical obstacle Another thing affected author felt like giving terrain harsh For instance text it didnt really matter I going die birds pick cleary waveng experience outdoor gears This shows author still go even time get tough The text shows exhausted winds eating dies He would dehydrate humidity desert heat In words features setting affected cyclist many ways",
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"content": "Think about a country without cars. You might say thats rediculous but there are many pros to not having a fuel running engine as your transportation all the time. There are some families that dont even own cars. automobiles are the linchpin of suburbs experts say, is a huge impediment to current efforts to drastically to reduce geenhouse gas emissions from tail pipes.\n\nPassanger cars are responsble for more than 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States. There have been efforts in the past two decades to make sities denser, and better for walking, planners are now taking the concept to the suburbs. Basic presets are being compact and more accessible to public transportation, with less space for parking. Stores are placed a walk away, on a main street, rather than in malls along some distant highway.\n\nUsing to many cars for transportation isnt so good for any city, state, country for example France. After days of near record pollution, paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the city. Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of france, after five days of intensifying smog. Most cars run on fuel so diesel fueal was blamed the majority of pollution in the air that cars produced. Delivery companies would complain of lost revanue, the exceptions were only made for plug in cars, hybrids, and cars carrying three or more passengers. Public transit was free of charge.\n\nIts a really good opporunity to take away all the stress and lower are pollution. Cars are great for transportation but the days without cars can be part of an improvement all around the world. parks and sports center can bloom throughout the city, pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up. If we persist with using car transportation as a resource less it will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the enviornment, since transportation is the second largest source of America emissions.",
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"content": "In today's modern society, the development of the manufacturing industry helps the production of consumer products increase in quality and quantity. However, This can lead to some negative consequences for the natural environment. This essay will examine some adverse effects of the increase in the production of consumer goods and then offer some measures to improve this situation.\n\n There are many problems resulting from the fact that the number of consumer goods production increases. it means that these factories can discharge directly more emissions and wastes into the natural environment. for instance, some factories will through untreated sewage into rivers to save money and get more profits for factories. that is the reason why more and more rivers are polluted nowadays.\n\n Various measures, nevertheless, can be adopted to tackle the situation that the government should adopt some rule on processed rubish. the authorities can apply a ban on the discharge of untreated sewage and spread propaganda for everyone to know about it.\n\n in conclusion, many reasons can be given to explain why increasing production of consumer goods and different actions can be taken to mitigate the situation.",
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"content": "The author concludes story paragraph When come back Saeng vowed silently spring snow melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test author started story Saeng failed driving test Saeng reminded Hibiscus homeland After Saeng wanted Hibiscus garden flock canada geese flow flew Saeng felt sign comfort vowed started everything If Saeng pass driving test would never found Hibiscus",
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"content": "People have wondered about many things since their existence. These may be examples such as what is the purpose of existence, why are we here, or our history. The topic I want to touch upon in this article is about society's being curious about the past of the homes that they live in.\r\n\r\nWhy do the nations wonder about the past of buildings ? I assume increasing awareness and appreciation of cultural heritage and historical architecture encourages individuals to explore the past of their living spaces. Also, we can ensure that genealogical interest and the desire to understand one's familial past can motivate individuals to research the past of their homes. In addition the growing popularity of renovation and restoration projects, often require knowledge of a building's historical significance and structural integrity.\r\n\r\nA number of humans want to restore their building and make architectural arrangements and changes that will appeal to the eye. So that is why legal and procedural necessities, such as obtaining permits for modifications or understanding property boundaries, may require residents to delve into the past of their living area.\r\n\r\nWith the developing technology and the nation's intrinsic curiosity about the stories and events that their homes have witnessed over the years doing this research on the past of buildings and homes- has become easier. \r\n\r\nNowadays this cultural heritage can be accessible with the technological advancements. In this way, everyone who lives in their own house can research this. All they have to do is just go online and review the archival databases. In this wise, all people will be able to access the information that they need.",
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"content": "The prompt that will be read is my claim for or against the use of the Facial Action System in classrooms. I will be using my opinion and thoughts on this matter. The information that will be provided to me is from \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\". The evidence I use to support my claim will also be coming from the passage. Should the Facial Action Coding Sytem be used in classrooms on students?\n\nAs I read this passage I couldn't help but feeling annoyed by this topic. If the system reads your face how is it getting your emotion? The passage says that the system scans your muceles and gives the feedback of your emotion. Well how can this be pen point accurate if the systems isn't reading someone's thoughts? The system can be easily malipulated by the change of the musceles in your face. Therefore, the system is not giving 100% accurate feedback everytime.\n\nScanning a human's face and giving them feedback of thier emotion is more complex than that. To know somone's emotion 100% accurate you need to know thier thoughts. If there is no way of knowing someone's thoughts then you will never be able to get thier emotion 100% accurate. Meaning this system is just child's play since it can't read thoughts, only can scan the face as it says. To me this can be a fun little game to do with friends but not for problem that is anymore serious than that.\n\nShould the Facial Action Coding Sytem be used in classrooms on students? As I've made my claim I think it shouldn't. One simple reason, this is not a 100% accurate system. If this was a fun activity and the students was told the system could be incorrect, sure, what could it hurt. So, the system can be used but it is irllevant to the classroom.",
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"content": "The author includes sentence end story story showing courage explains getting better showing courage going go back try pass test letting get failed first time",
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"content": "In this massive and fast-paced world, consumerism has led the way people live. As consumption increases, advertisements will make ways to make more money. Many believe that this phenomenon has upset people in many events. Other people believe this has more positive vibes and constructively engaging. In my opinion, sometimes ads help us to decide a thing in a short time but rather be annoyed many times.\r\n\r\nFirstly, many online advertisements sometimes place their boxes in scattered ways on the screen. In my past experience, I often accidentally clicked the ads even if not with my intention because their ad boxes were everywhere on my screen. I were not happy with this action because this slowed my browsing experiments, especially when I were in a hurry. After seconds, I felt really annoyed.\r\n\r\nSecondly, if we talk about online advertisements, the programmers have already set how the advertisements work in a unique way. Google, for instance, its machine learning will know what you are confused about to choosing a red or green dress by saving your historical browser data. Then they will show you advertisements (third-party) for different types of red dresses in the morning and green dresses in the evening. The aim is you will click one of the advertisements shown and they will earn commissions from the third party. Consequently, for this matter, I would say this event is useful and has a positive vibe. \r\n\r\nIn a nutshell, some ads rarely can not be avoided. The more we surf on the internet, the more they will provide us with third-party ads. But instead of placing those ads in questionable ways, they should improve their layout though. Because screen layout will increase user experience and indeed upscale the value of ads.",
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"content": "Positive aspects of driverless cars is that thes cars had driven more than half a million miles without a crash. They also still help alert the drivers to take over when they are pulling in or out of the driveways or when dealing with complicated traffic issues. Such as road constructions or accidents, When building the smart cars they put sensors into the car. For example in the 1980s, the automakers used speed sensors at the wheel in the creation of antilock brakes. Within 10 years, these sensors had become mor advanced to help detcet and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids of rollovers. The sensor cand also help cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\n\nThere has been further improvements in the sensors and computer hardware and software to make the driving safer. It is also leading to the cars that handle more and more driving tasks on their own. All cars are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills. Such as navigating though work zones and around accidents. So this means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires.\n\nI agree with the development of these cars because if you\n\nare an older person driving this car can help you drive. The will help you alert when\n\nthere is a traffic issues or accidents and more. These cars will let you know when you have to take over. So once again if you are an older person or getting old these cars can help you in the near future because automakers are still continuing their work on the assumption that problems ahead will be solved. There is a person name Telso who has projected\n\na 2016 release a car capable of driving on autopolit 90 percent of the time you driving. There are more car brands such as Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan also plan to have their cars drive themselves by 2020. So once more these cars would be helpful for the elder and the people getting older.",
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"content": "Limiting car usage in america would be a great idea! For one it would make some of the pollution go away and for two our government can find ways for more buildings with walking space instead of parking spaces. This way we can have stores in walking distance instead of driving distance and we will be safe by doing so.\n\nBy limiting our car usage we can save the planet from the pollution and saving people as well. In the article '' In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars'' it says that '' cars are responsible for for 50 persent in some car-intensive areas in the United States''. Thats alot!. If we were to limit car usage we could make that number 50 dissapear. It would be alot better for the planet .\n\nWhen people drive cars they dont know the damage they are doing. when we drive cars it causes pollution to exit our car and enter the air. Thats why it would be safer tolimit our car usage. in the article '' In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars'' it says that '' In this new approach, stores are placed a walk away, on a main street rather thanin malls along some distant highway''. this is saying that if we limit our car usage we can walk to the stores rather than waste your time driving to them. I do agree with them.\n\nImportant people like Mr. president Obama are encouraging us to ''chill out'' on car usage. In the article ''the end of car culture '' it states that recent studies suggest that americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer license as each year goes by. This is showing that people do care about their enviornment and want to help. They also support the idea of walking . That goes to show that people are wanting to do something about this pollution. Well lets face it America can use the Exersize!",
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"content": "Due to globalization in many countries, most shops and products become similar. Whilst some people argue this to be a positive development, others think the opposite. Although I acknowledge the benefits of this trend, I strongly believe this to be a negative development. \r\n\r\nThinking in terms of accessibility of international products in the cities, this change benefits individuals since they don't have to travel big distances to buy specific things because everything is found close by. Moreover, having the same international chains around the world, ensures the quality and reliability of the selling items, since they are most likely to be popular among the masses. This ensures greater customer satisfaction. All these things are beneficial for the individuals, however, the impact on the environment as well as the societies should be taken into consideration. \r\n\r\nShipping and delivering tons of products to the shops is harmful to the environment. It would be much beneficial for the natural preservation as well as the local society if the product would be locally produced. Furthermore, having only international big chains means, that most amount of the income is going straight to the big headquarters of the organizations elsewhere and not to the community. Higher prices, and workforce from abroad result in negative changes in the economic stability of countries. There is a high risk of the local crafts and culture being forgotten thus effecting negatively on the cultural heritage, if all the attention and trends are coming from international markets. Therefore, in my opinion, identical shops as well as products cause greater problems in countries. \r\n\r\nIn contrast, despite the obvious appeal of international products on the market everywhere, which benefits in many ways the customer, in my opinion, such change results in the problems of preserving the cultural heritage and crafts of the countries as well as causes economic problems since most of the money goes to international businesses.",
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"content": "many people claim that all job desks will be replaced by this artificial intelligence program. my own view on the matter is the situation depends on the job itself.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, it is true that nowadays many companies compete to make the smartest artificial intelligence in order to be well-known for the project they made. moreover, not all works are able to be done by machines. for example, for people who work for human health, this job apparently needs a real person to check their conditions. thus, until this present time, Doctor parts cannot be taken away and done by artificial intelligence. Although one part of the medical world is being seen as having huge potential for helping doctors to make diagnoses.\r\n\r\non the other hand, artificial intelligence is suited for automatic routine, formulaic which does not require creative thinking or human intuition. restaurant waitress could be a good idea example here. In addition in recent years, a lot of restaurants have used robots to deliver meals to the customers which this part would be an efficient way to serve the buyers. in contrast, chefs in restaurants have to not be replaced due to the skills they have to make the orders.\r\n\r\nTo draw the conclusion, artificial intelligence is great to have a work like humans do. even though, there are still exist the work which has to be done by human intuition. likewise, artificial intelligence and human collaboration could evolve into partnerships where artificial intelligence handles data processing and humans focus on strategy and service. to my way of thinking, the existence of artificial intelligence yet creates a wide range of new jobs.",
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"content": "I am for having technology that can identify human emotions in classrooms. In paragraph 6 it says,\" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts.\"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructure.\"\n\nA computer that is able to modify a lesson if it sees that students are getting bored about a topic would be valuable in classrooms. If this technology can read a students emotion and help change the lesson to make it less confusing, it could help students stay focused in classrooms and be able to learn without getting bored or confused.\n\nThis technology could approve test scores and grades for students who are struggling in school.The only problem about this technolgy is that it will be hard to put on a school computer if a, \"home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile,\"as it states in paragraph 7.If it wasn't complex and a school computer could run it, I think having this type of technology that can help a student understand a topic without getting a student bored about the topic would be great for classrooms.",
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"content": "In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author argues that studying Venus is a worthy pursit. This means that it's a marvouls idea to learn more about Venus. Venus can have many intresting facts if scientists study this planet. Not only can they find out if Venus has life on the planet but, they can find out if it is a good resource for our people on this Earth.\n\nThe article says that we should challenge other humans to exlpore places like Venus because of the human curiosity. This article states \" Venus has value, not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likeley lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\" (paragragh 8 pg.1) This explains that the humas should able to exlpore not just because we want to learn about the planet but because of the human curiosity.\n\nIn conclusion, the author wants people to keep studying planets but for our curiosity. This could also be because we need to explore what is out there in space. We don't know if Venus has life or not so why not explore. Us humans need to know more because there could be a lot of intresting stuff out there in space.",
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"content": "In contemporary society, some schools removed abilities such as cookery, dressmaking, and woodwork because they believe that these subjects should not be learned at school as it is better to learn these from family and peers. Therefore, some think that schools should pay attention to studying academics so that students can succeed and pass examinations. This essay will discuss both sides of the controversial issue, and my opinion will be provided.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, advocates of this proposition believe that it is beneficial for students if institutions focus on curriculums. There is no denying that academic knowledge is important to children to apply for jobs in the future. For example, some positions in a company such as manager, analyst, and executive have to use academic knowledge rather than professional skills. Moreover, when kids learn about physical abilities like woodwork in their free time with their friends or family, they can develop relationships through cooperation. As a result, institutions remove vocational subjects in order to give more time to learn for students.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, those who argue this idea think that schools should not decrease the time the educating vocational curricula. It is obvious that when students exceed focus on academic study, they can get a street which makes it impossible to carry. For instance, when some students do not pass the exam, they may get depressed. Furthermore, some companies need people who have professional abilities.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, schools should not teach capacities like dressmaking but should encourage students to be educated in academic subjects so as to succeed. In my view, I strongly agree with this issue because academic subjects are too easy to find work.",
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"content": "There could many reasons author concludes story paragraph There could many different meanings paragraph could importance story I think author includes say spring comes many reasons take driving test You break paragraph mean many different things I interpreted mean spring comes back new beginning The snow melting away represents hardship faced previous year The geese returning hibiscus budding means also coming back start new year They coming back getting ready start new life It included end show Saeng trying forget failed test She using time prepare next time going take driving test She thinks forgets bad things went previous year She move able pass driving test next time around The author concluded story paragraph show Saeng plans solve problems The way interpret paragraph gives different ideas trying say I think showing new beginning go next year",
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"content": "The idea dirigibles docking mooring mast smart could ve great However builders Empire State Building faced problems trying achieve goal One problem wind forces two strong allow dirigible dock mast The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents Even dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around around mooring mast Another reason safety people Not dirigibles made In countries dirigibles different kinds gases Most dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable Since hydrogen highly flammable builders take consideration safe people would flying dirigible Lastly law aircraft flying close populated area existing law airships flying low urban areas This law would make illegal ship ever tie building even approach area The docking Empire State Building great idea many challenges faced builders",
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"content": "Air polution, no money, and death, Oh my! Everywhere you go there are going to be cars. One of the most helpful and loving inventions of our time, it gets us from place to place in a short amount of time. But is getting to where you need to go faster really worth it? Money, safety, and protection to our environment all play huge roles when it comes to cars. The population of our world grows every year, which means more cars... Which means more air polution, more deaths, more of spending your money.\n\nOwning a car also comes a lot of things. Money for gas, money for parts that stop working, etc. With gas prices up and down all the time, we find ourselves spending way too much money just to fill up our vehicle. You would be amazed at how much more money you would have if you weren't spending on gas and other things your car needs. It also requires no excercise at all, which is really a disadvantage to our health. Imagine what a simple difference can make. If we all walked or biked to where we needed to go, we're doing something great for our bodies and our environment. Not only is it jeopordizing our health, but our own environment's, too! Every single car and every single drive is polluting our air. Do we really want to end up like Beijing, China? As of now, they are known to be one of the most polluted cities in the world. What about safety? Car crashes are one of the most common deaths. Such as two major factors, texting while drving and driving under the influence. No matter what state you're in, when you get behind that wheel you hold a big responsibility. So is putting your life on the line really worth it?\n\nBy limiting car usage, we can make a difference throughout the world. We can lower stress, death rate, air pollution, spendings, and so much more. If ONE day of the Day Without Cars in Columbia made a difference, imagine what a whole year, or years, could make. There are so many better options to get to where you need to go other than cars, such as bikes. So what if you don't get there as fast as you would in a car? The point is, you're still getting there. You're also not putting you and other's lives on the line. Better for the environment, better for others, better for you!",
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"content": "In recent times, couple prefer to start the journey of Parenthood when they are older and matured to carry the responsibilities of parenting, as this is good for the well-being of children since they would have gathered most experience and finance needed in talking care of their kids. Therefore, the advantages supersede the drawbacks. Albeit, giving birth at older age could result in some complications such as neonatal defects, preeclampsia etc which could be detrimental to both maternal and neonatal health.\r\n\r\nAs humans, the more we grow, the more we learn most especially after watching our parents for several years taking care of our younger ones. With this, we must have acquired all the experiences needed in good child upbringing which in turn will shapen this children to the right path in life. This practice equally gave room for parents to save up funds to meet up with any challenges that cut across tuition fees, hospital bills if need be, and other requirements that involve money. With this system, natural family will play it's role, as people won't be able to have much children, since they should likely be close to menopause thereby making them to give birth to number of children they can cater for. Moreso, The parents are emotionally matured and ready for the marriage and birth of their offsprings. Hence, cases of broken marriages that can affect the children's general well-being, also mental issues like pueperal psychosis are reduced if not completely prevented. \r\n\r\nContrarily, older women and children born by this mothers are prone to preemclapsia and neonatal defects respectively, which could lead to serious health issue that required spending all they have laboured for over the years to treat and manage this illnesses.\r\n\r\nConclusively, individual preference is Paramount as regards starting up a family early or late. Nevertheless, the advantages of late parenting is more important when compared with the disadvantages.",
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"content": "Not a single spacecraft has touched down on Venus in more than three decades! Have you ever wonder why we know so little about Venus and more about Mars? Well one of the reasons why not a single spacecraft has landed on Venus is becaiuse it has a thick tmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Whicn resulted on the spacecraft survinving the landing for more than a few hours.\n\nThere's a few scientists and people who believe that the studing of Venus is a worthy pursuit depite the kind of dangers it might cause. the athour sopports his idea that studing Venus is worthy when he said that striving to meet the chanllenge that is prensented by Venus it has value, not just because of the insight to be gained. But also because human's curiosity will likely lead us into many equally as statend in (pragraph 7)\n\nIn conlusion, we should study Venus more because it will help us learn new information. Also because it's a like earth a lot they both have same density and size. And it's also the closest distance to Earth, but most importantly we should study it because it might make us discover something new like a creature pobrably and might be able to discover new rocks. If scientist do decide to send a spacecraft to Venus it might take decades to do that find out about Venus or find a way to make the landing last longer. All in all the Author has good suporting details about his idea that im sure will happen because as human beings we are alwasy cuorius about new things.",
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"content": "Why drive when you can use many other alternatives ! There are many reasons why the citizens in my town and all across the world should limit car use. Three really good reasons are, to limit pollution, to lower stress, healthier life style.\n\nMy first reason for thinking that we should limit are car usage because it is a very big cause of pollution. In the article written by Elisabeth Rosenthal she states \"Passenger cars are resposible for up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States\" Pollution is a very serious is that could easily be stop or reduced. Its also can be as simple as walking to your destination, car pooling, or even taking the bus. In the citie of Paris in France to help to reduce the smog and pollution they banned driving even numbered license plates from driving on one day and banned odd numbers on the next, Alternating every other day. Enough smog and pollution cleared one of the following days that the lifted the ban on odd numbered plates they were allowed to drive. These all always very easy ways to help stop pollution.\n\nThe second the reason why I thinking that we should limit our car use is if were to use them less it could lower our stress levels. The citie of Bogota, Colombia have day in which no one use a car for the whole day unless its public transportation or a taxis. One citizen claimed during car free day that \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution\" Another citizen who lives in a community where the streets are completly \"car-free\" says \"When i had a car i was always tense. I'm much happier this way,\". If the citizens of the world were to cut down on the use of air polluting vechiles it could also not only less polluted place but also more calm and less stressed out people.\n\nMy final reason for agreeing with idea of limiting car usage is if we drive less we could all lead healthier lifestyles. Imagine how many calories you can burn by walking to corner store or taking a bike to your nearest walmart. The health benefits are endless. If you think about it sitting in the car barley moving to do anything you dont loose any calories at all. So why not walk, run, or jog instead.\n\nIn conclusion i think it would be best for all us to cut down the use of driving. My three reason are, to limit pollution, to lower stress, healthier life style. This would benefit not only us but to future generations of the world.",
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"content": "Dear Florida senator,\n\nI strongly agree of keeping the Electoral College for the use of the congress' approval for the newly President of 2016. The Electoral College has a lengthy process, but can come in good use of determining the new President. Citizens vote for the electors and the electors decide who's best for the country. Even though, there are claims about the Electoral College not being fair for the people, I still defend it because it has it's good factors, like Run-off Elections,the requirement that a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal for the people, and the resoring weight of the eletoral number by population.\n\nAs so you know, the Electoral College is a process of the selction of the electors, then the gathering of electors to vote for the president and vice president. Finally, the electoral votes by the Congress. When the electors pick the president, they look at their background, such as, what school they attend, what they studied, where they were born, etc. They pick someone they trust to do the job. When there is a Run-off Election, the House Of Representatives picks the president. I personally think this is a good thing because they picked the person who would do best in the job by gathering everyone's vote to decide it. Because no country could have two presidents with two vice presidents. Some may say it's unjustice or not fair because the House Of Representatives decides the whole election. There is also the fact that when determining the winner, they both look at the popular votes and the electoral votes, and they see who got the most electoral votes and they win the election.\n\nThe Electoral College puts it simple, because they choose someone with a region where they most likely get the most electoral votes. For example, Romney was in the South region, and he knows he wouldn't have to do much there because of that was where he was currently from. Now lets compare that to someone that was in the area around North Dakota. He would most likely not win that many votes since it's only three electoral numbers. So the Electoral College gives a chance for the president they chose to win because of where they used to be located in order to get the most popular and electoral votes.\n\nThe Electoral College restores and reduces some of the weight of the electoral by its population. Smalls states aren't widely noticed by the president because they feel like they should concentrated in the big states because of there electoral votes. Still, small states tend to make it easier for them because they look at if the state was either Republican or Democrac during the past years and they take note of that. They know they'll win in those states, even though they are small numbers, every inch of it counts to help them win the title of President.\n\nTherefore, Mister Sentor, I agree in keeping the Electoral Vote because of it's reasonable factors that can help the president win. Popular vote doesn't tell anything because the people would know nothing about the president or what he accomplished. It should be kept because it has been used for many years now and has been useful for every president to win.\n\nTo Whom I Name,\n\nV.",
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"content": "Is the new trend of driveless cars really more important that yours and your families lives? If you said no, then you understand that driveless cars could be a bad idea in the future and even now. Driveless cars are unsafe for roads and people, they could malfunction, and making laws for accidents and people under the influence would be a problem..\n\nFirstly, driveless cars are unsafe for road and people. For example, in paragraph 7 it states, \"But all are designed to notify the driver when roas ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\" If the person driving the driveless cars is not paying attention, then anyone working could be hit by the car or the drive could be in a fatal accident. When people are walking in the middle of the road and the driver isn't paying attention or is sleeping than that person walking could get hit and injuried.\n\nSecond reason is driveless cars could malfunction on the road. For example, in paragraph 4 it states, \"Toyota Prius uses position-estimating sensors on the left rear wheel, a rotating sensor on the roof, a video camera mounted near the rearview mirror, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS reciever, and an inertial motion sensor.\" The driveless car has alot of sensors and cameras, and if they aren't checked, they could unwire, break, and malfunction. If the sensors on the car don't function correctly then the car could crash into another car, people, and buildings. The inertial motion sensor is the most important and if that breaks or is unwired that the car could cause serious damage to the person, people around them.\n\nFinally, laws for accidents and people under the influence can be difficult to make. Some people may say that the laws would be like if the person would be handling the car. Laws would be easy to make but then who gets to go to court and pay for the accident. For example, in paragraph 9 it states, \"Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. If the technology fails and someone is injuried, who is at fault- the driver of the manufacturer?\" If there is a law about keeping an able body perosn in the car at all times, then if the car breaks or becomes undrivable and wrecks into somebody, then the manufacturer is at fault but if the person is drunk and the car breaks down then whose fault it is could be a huge trouble for everyone involved.\n\nIn conclusion, driveless cars are unsafe because they could hit someone if they the person is not paying attention in a work site or near an accident. Driveless cars could malfunction and kill, or injure the person, and people near by. Driveless cars are difficult to make laws for because it would be hard to tell if the person is to blame or the manufacturer.",
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"content": "The author explains venus very well. he describes the atmospher on the planet and the tempreratures on the planet as well. it would be very difficulet to land there because it is very hot. i have seen images from the planet and the ground is very valcanic looking and you cant see very well cause of the atmospher. The planet gets very hot during the day and very cold there during the night as well. its kinda neet to look up at night on planet earth and see all the stars and planets out there. I have seen venus a couple of times and the author is right it is very bright. The reason we cant land their the author sates that it has sulfiric asid for the atmospher and the author is right. A prob was sent there and it only lasted a few hours. The author done a good job at studying veuns and its a good idea to pursuit it.",
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"content": "Being a part of the Seagoing Cowboys was a great experience. I had no idea that it would be as much fun as it turned out to be. For me, this opportuninty meant being able to witness extraordinary places, while being able to help others. For others and yourself it could mean just the same.\n\nI had a great deal of fun on my trip. It gave me an opportunity to see many countries that I may not have seen on any other basis, such as Venice, Italy as well as parts of China, Europe, and Greece. I also chose to spend my off time playing sports and games whenever the chance came along. Your down time; however, would be entirely up to you though, but these are some unique places and things to consider exploring.\n\nMy down time was not the most important part of the trip though. It also gave me an opportuntiy to aid others as well as animals, who's homes where left in ruins. After getting this chance to so something more in my life, I knew that this was a great thing that I had invested my time into.\n\nExtensively, I would recomend this as a career path to any who are interested. The years that I was a Seagoing Cowboy, were a great few years in my life. I am very proud of the choice that I had made to do it. This choice changed my life in most every aspect. It opened my eyes to the world and could do the same for you.",
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"content": "Smart cars that can drive themselves would be man's next best innovation. Although the idea of not having to drive anymore seems great,\n\nthere will be a lot of knew rules enforced due to these car's certain aspects. Some of these reasons include safety, money, and legal terms. All these subjects will have to be taken into consideration for this innovation. In my point point of view I consider these cars a waste of time, and money.\n\nFirst of all, the reason we want driveless cars is so that we drivers don't have to worry about the road. This will never happen, as drivers we are enforced to take precautions while driving, if our car malfunctions it will be up to us to take care of things. I quote \"Why would anyone want a driveless car that still needs a driver? Wouldn't drivers get bored waiting for their turn to drive?\"\n\nHaving to keep attention to the road sort of takes away the fascination of driveless cars.\n\nAnother thing that can kill our excitement for these cars is the cost. Imagine how much technology must be involved within making these cars. Would it even be worth our time and effort to make these cars a reality? So much research and investigation has been put within this project, but will it be worth it? I rather people waste their money on other research than self driven cars.\n\nWe also have to talk about legal terms here. Many states don't consider it safe to test computer-driven cars. If many of these states consider this than there may be a reason behind that. These laws are put up to enforce in order to keep our community safe. If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault- the driver or the manufacturer? See these are complicated questions that we will need to be forced to order out if these cars become a thing. The only thing these cars will bring is more trouble. There will need to be laws and restrictions enforced within this innovation. Many people will have to educated themselves in the handling of these cars. For me innovations are things that come easy, and are picked up easy. Cars are still a controversial subject even after being with us for quite some time now. With people driving under the consumption of alcohol, or texting and driving, how do we expect them to educate themselves with such machinery. So if we let machine take over, I don't believe this will help fix our wreckless drivers any better.\n\nThe aspect of innvations is something new that chnages our lifes. Yes, this would be an innovation, but would it be for the greater good? If we put all the aspects together, we can conclude that overall this project will be a long hard bumpy road. Many people don't like to stick around so often with such things, so the idea of this innovation becoming a thing is still off. It is great to think that we won't have to drive long hours, but we as owners of such machines will always have to be paying attention. These cars shouldn't take the driver's safety regiment away, people should not have to slack off whne it comes to safety. It is why I believe these cars won't bring any good. They will make people forget to pay attention, thus causing more probelms.",
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"content": "People computer something good cool Why cool cool computer help everything I reasons The first reasons school homework work project something like computer help lot Because computer sign internet go google web side The second reason computer help house example You big problem car something like You go computer see pieces car The thrid reason computer cool time make everything thing We go web facilitate life Now realize work homework project ideas writting book chat information print picture ect And architect make proper work house see computer cool But people use computer bad thing example pornography something bad cool appropiate people The computer something fabolous super genius My opinion computer help lot something like need life No live life something Something see family webcam This fabolous nt used webcam something bad learn thing nt know I think reason used computer good thing Appraise computer Please",
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"content": "The builders Empire State Building faced obstacles attempting allow dirigibles dock Some obstacles easy solutions really hard solveOne obstacle dirigible top building hold cable tether would cause stress building s frame In order solve problem needed make modifications would cost around six thousand dollars This nt problem law prohibited airships flying low urban areas This law made illegal get close area even try get tie building Adding difficult obstacle architects faced nature problem hard solve also hard controlAll obstacles faced lead give wait see later technology could finally make dream come true",
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"content": "Dear know people today use computer necessary reasons true fact computer help keeping touch friends getting latest news even gives map access Let tell important facts computer Of course friends different cities andor states Instead charging phone bill many people keep touch via email Email high tech super easY All need friends email adress send anything friendly hello pictures family Teens love chat friends re able get know better computer Sites facebook certainly popular generation teens The fun messages makes everything great Keep mind avaiible ways get touch friends see computer great Everytime I log onto computer I m able see latest news updates I remember going seeing something pop favorite band breaking Thanks computer I got read I extremely glad I d seen I nt I would nt got see last concert While I understand computer healthiest activity definaltly great news source everyone reads news whether political celeberties Knowledge s currently happening country exercise equally important therefore I d first support computer possitive effect people today Have ever lost Maybe nt write correct directions could nt remember Next time bok directions computer helpful could really save hastle There re many websites maps print map quest much easier clearer way understand exactly need go In opinion help much would right idea go cheer today Imagine places could go getting map online Keep mind one many great things computer Now know posotives computer remember could benefit Being able chat friends one best Do nt forget hearing latest news finally never get lost print map There s doubt mind computer possative effect every one The time get pick computer",
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"content": "I think that we should use facial recognition in school. There are many possibilities to what we could use the technology for. We can (like the article says) use it to let computers help us when we are confused. It can also help companies to get their ads out there. We can us it in animation\n\nComputers can help us when we are confused by offering help or changing the lesson. If a computer can see if we are confused then everyone will be helped. Students will be able to know how to do what they don't get. Teachers will be able to see what they need to teach better for the whole class.\n\nCompanies can get their ads out there easier based on a person's reaction to the ad. If we smile at an ad we like then the computer will know to give us ads similar to that. If we look upset at an ad then the computer knows we don't want to see it. Finally companiies will have more profit because we see what we like.\n\nAnimators can use actual faces to give emotions to digital ones. It would make watching animated shows much more enjoyable. It would really help the animation industry.\n\nIn conclusion the expression recognition system could greatly helpmm us all. Teachers and students will be able to give/recieve help. The population will see the ads they want to see. And finally animators will be able to make animations more lively.",
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"content": "Book And characters lived happily ever for shut book sad pages were left This third book series absolutely needed fourth In school next day went straight library She opened doors greeted dusty old book smell loved made bee line favorite shelf holding favorite books scanned shelfs quickly noticing book missing She librarian surprised find book checked already She put name waiting list sour name tenth The next day went library book The results were disappointing Her name pretty good one day home sour mood CAPSs wrong mom CAPS I really wanted book already checked My name list could ages people finish CAPS I think learn patience said mom Patience Patience wait something dont complain Take example impatient CAPS Im waiting said CAPS complaning whole lot The next day patient could She go library ask book went whole without complaining Later called office When got found secretary CAPS said CAPSs CAPS book wanted checked acount ready read CAPS you said She couldnt belive She finally got book Moral patience pays especially willing wait",
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"content": "we should go to venus.People dont really care about it because it is a dangours place the surface temperatures average at 800 degrees. but it use to be earth like it had water mountians vallys and all sorts of things.\n\nvenus and earth are twins venus use to have water and stuff so did it have animals maybe.so why should we not try to go.If we could visit one other plaet it would be venus so i think we should keep trying to land on it and keep going we might be able to grow plants and food and make it a planet to live on\n\nvenus is very dangous on average it is 800 degrees there and are bodys cant handle it. the clouds are gas and it would be alot of money to go.we made submerines that would crush in venus from the pressure but they are thinking of new ways so we can go but they will be alot of money and not alot of people would go.but if we could go to a new planet it sure would be cool.",
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"content": "While it is true that watching television affects children's behaviour, there is still a controversy over whether the content of the programs or the length of time spent watching these programs has a more significant influence. Although the amount of time does affect youngsters, I do believe that it is the content that has a more marked significant influence on them.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, watching television for a long period of time does have a detrimental effect on youngsters. Firstly, the longer the children are exposed to television, the more likely it is for them to become addicted to watching television. This might result in their neglecting outdoor activities such as playing football or running, which leads to a sedentary lifestyle that is highly harmful to their physical condition. Secondly, excessive TV watching impairs children’s communication abilities, so they find it hard to play or live in harmony with others. Children would feel discouraged from having real interactions with people around them if they spent too much time in front of the screen, which may hinder their development of social skills.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it is the broadcasted images that have the most direct effect on children. First, in most countries the majority of TV shows present glamorized depictions of inappropriate materials such as violence, drug abuse or casual sex, thus youngsters may adopt unhealthy habits and improper behaviour. For example, they might fall under the impression that the use of alcoholic drinks is fashionable without being aware of the health risks they carry and later end up consuming these substances. Besides, in our modern consumer society, commercials also affect how children behave. Unwary young viewers could be easily swayed by captivating advertisements for junk food or video games, products whose target audience includes children, and so may pester their parents to buy these goods impulsively.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, though both factors have their own implications, I believe the element with the more considerable impact on children is the content. Hence, parental involvement is essential in controlling children’s TV viewing habits and in shaping a child’s values to help them enter adult life with a healthy mind.",
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"content": "Many individuals in the world have advanced technical knowledge. In which mostly social platforms are highly busy with individual contact with family and friends and knowing current affairs. I would accept and stick to the advantages of the concept that outweigh the disadvantages.\r\n\r\nFirstly, apps and websites are widely used to connect people from one end of the world to the other to interact and share information. This interaction satisfies both for personal and the purpose of a person via so-called technology. For instance , office meetings are being arranged in zoom meetings involving its branches in many cities or countries. And a man who works abroad enjoys a real-time conversation with their family via video calling via Instagram or Whatsapp. These technologies have made the far world much closer by chatting , creating posts of one's day in life and saving memories.\r\n\r\nSecondly, there are some disadvantages like malpractices in terms of misuse of personal info, spam, security threats etc., For example, people who have experienced withdrawal directly from their bank accounts online. And some more have also faced digital morphing of their pictures in porn websites which are more sensible. ,Still these kinds of threats are wisely retrieved and kept under control by the cybercrime of the country.This might not be a serious issue when compared to its enormous advantages.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, society highly benefits from the advantages of social websites and apps. It's been immensely helpful in sharing one's feelings as a post , conversation by phone or video call, and also for official wide usage.",
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"content": "There have been many claims about the Face being a sign of intelligent life forms on Mars. The Face is not an extraterestrial artifact. It is just a natural landform. By looking at the images from 1976 and 1998 I can see where someone might mistake it for a humaniod face. The images are a little blurry and because of this you can see what appears to be eyes, a nose and a mouth.\n\nUpon closer inspection of the 2001 image you can see it is just a natural landform such as a mountain that formed from the wind blowing sand over the years. NASA has done scientific research to prove to you that the Face isn't really a face, it's just a mountain that resembles one.\n\nThere have been many claims of extraterestrial life forms on Mars. Most of these claims lack evidence. There may still be life on Mars, but we have yet to gather any real evidence. I assure you that the Face is nothing more than a natural landform that shadows had an effect on to make it appear to resemble a monument. If it wasn't for the high resolution camera that was used to take the 2001 image of the Face, we might still believe it to be an extraterestrial monument.",
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"content": "The Face is a natural landform, and we have proof that shows it such as several pictures taken, one clearer than the next. The brightest photo and the examination of the Face tell us there are no aliens on this planet.\n\nFirstly, when NASA got the first picture, I concede that it looked somewhat alien-like, however, that was a huge misunderstanding. A more closely taken picture shows that it is, in fact, a natural landform. I know this because when the picture was taken, there was no alien monument. Therefore, no aliens, right? But the wispy clouds that were there when this picture was taken, envoke skeptics. A third picture silences them.\n\nSecondly, once the skies above Cydonia (the place on Mars where the face is) are cleared, they go in for the third picture of the face. This picture proves to be the of the best quality. Stated in in the text, it reads, \"Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters per pixel in the best 1976 viking photo.\"\n\nProving this photo to be the most accurate. And when they examine the photo,it shows that the picture shows the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa, common landforms in the American west. Garin then says, \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\"\n\nWith the clearest pictures taken, we can all see that the planet of mars has no aliens, for the Face is a natural landform. Yes, people will believe what they will, but the examinations, and the clear pictures prove that the Face is close to a butte or mesa, common landforms found in the American West.",
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"content": "Venus is called the evening star . It's one the brightest points in the sky . It even makes it simpler to see an amateur stargazer .\n\nVenus is the closest to the\n\nplanet to earth in terms of density and size and occasionally the closest in distance too . The author suggests that studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents .\n\nThe author is completely right because humans curiosity will lead you to many equally intimidating endeavors . The author wanting to do this study is not wrong some people will argue this and say this is not a good idea to put a human being life at risk . Agree to disagree because alot of people wants to know if theres life on many different planest such as Mars , Venus and maybe the dawf planet Pluto and maybe there is . The author supports his ideas with good points although risks are important to consider and its also an important factor in this because we dont want to send people just to die . The author said in paragraph 2 \" Since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours it explains why not a single spaceship has touched down on Venus in more than three decades . \" Which means astronomers dont have very much to live .\n\nA thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus you would have to wear a good good mask to be able to breathe . But theres even more challenging things like the clouds those aren't any type they have a highly corrosive sulfuric acid . These conditions are far way more extreme than anything humans encounter on earth . In paragraph 6 it states that \" researchers cannot take samples of rock gas or anything else from a distance \". So how are we going to know if theres life on planet Venus ? However many researchers are working on innovations that would allow machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus . NASA is also working on some other approaches to studying Venus . For example NASA worked some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide . They have been tested yes in a chamber simulating the chaos of Venus surface and have lasted atleast three weeks in such conditions .\n\nMany ways are being created to do this study . Researchers have made this study easier and easier just a tiny bit . Modern computers are enormously powerful , flexible and quick but there more delicate when it comes to extreme physical conditions\n\nexposing a cell or a phone its capable of melting . In conclusion Venus is a nice planet to do this study on . I'll even study and do some research myself .",
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"content": "Driverless car's? Would there be more accidents or would it take away most of the accident's happening now. How will we know if it is safe or not? Only way to know is by building the driverless car and taking it for a test. Either way, google cofounder Sergey Brin, imagine's a time in the future where no one needs car's.\n\nThe driverless cars in my opinion are no different than any other actual car. They both really have all the same part's, but maybe not all. The driverless car has to have sensors, speed sensors, certain types of brake's, and a video camera on the rearview mirror plus more. These car's are worth so much, but could also cause tons of problem's. Not only for the driverless car, but for the other cars driving, and the people in them.\n\nHowever, the passage says, \"Google has had cars that could drive independently under specific conditions since 2009. These cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash, but as being said, google cars are not truly driverless. These driverless cars still need a person controlling them. Helping them in construction or near wrecks. Sergey Brin believes if these driverless cars can make it through all the trouble; making sure they are save to yourself an to others while driving they will fundamentally change the world.\n\nWith that being said, no one is really worried about how the car may be or look, but if it can follow the laws of keeping others safe. Lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers. Therefore, the smart cars need someone incontroll of them. Making sure if the smart car doesn't sense a pedestrian is crossing the rode, the driver can easily take controll and let the smart car proceed with it's driving. Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselves by 2020.\n\nTo end my conclusion, with all that has been said automakers will continue to search an bulid more interset into these smart cars. Until then safety is what they are aiming for and will take on that challenge of making the smart cars a better and a more saftey car for everyone. All the problems ahead of the automakers will be solved.",
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"content": "I think that this technology would be good thing because, most kids don't share their emotion. If a computer can read how they are feeling, and can help them, it would be amazing. It would also be a little odd, but in the end I think it would be very positive.\n\nComputers already can do a lot of things, such as playing games and looking up stuff on the internet. The text states \"Dr. Huang and his colleage are experts at developing better ways for humans and computers to communicate\". If computers can now read human emotion, this will be the next level in technology.\n\nComputers are very good at being accurate, like solving a math problem, and doing what they are programed to do. The text states \"...the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles\". This shows that the software will be very accurate, and very smart. This software and hardware will help so many kids.\n\nMost human communication is nonverbal, so if we could have a computer that would read our emotions. That would be good for kids that are sad and dont want to talk about thier problems. The computer would help them to be happy. The text states \"So the cumputers need to understand that, too.\" This shows that the computers would understand that it is communicating nonverbaly.\n\nIn conclution, I am for this technology. It would help kids get through their day, and help them become happy. They would also feel like they have a friend, that understands them. This will be the next big level in technology. Even though, it might be a little weird.",
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"content": "His mood author detailed He describes life person tells life family He says describes lives two family blond brick house passionate cuban music There Cuban Italian immagrants racist nt care",
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"content": "I think that the driverless cars should happen, they should pass a law to drive them on the streets. With of these smart phones, smart tv's, why shouldn't we have smarts driveless cars. These driveless cars can help us from causing more accidents, can help run traffic more smoothly. So what if the smart cars might need in active humans here or there, that is why we took driving test. If people don't want to do anything with the driveless car then they can go to the cars that you can drive.\n\nIn the 1980's, automarkes created the antilock brakes. Within 10 years they advances the brakes to detect and respond to any type of danger. Any more improvements can make driving safer even that the cars drive any tasks on their own. The Google cars werr driven more than half a million miles without crashing.\n\nIn 2013, BMW had announced that they developed the \" Traffic Jam Assistant.\" They said that the cars are not developed enough to completely drive themsleves. The cars can steer, accelerate and brake by their self but if the can requires any human skills the car will notify the driver. GM made the driver's seat to vibrate when the car is near danger. Google's car will announce when the driver will be taking over. With all these heads up, there shouldn't be any accidents.\n\nThese driveless cars should not only be allowed to test in the State of California, Nevada, Florida, or even in the District of Columbia. The traffic law is saying that the only safe car allowed on the streets are in control human drivers. they are saying that the driveless cars might cause accidents becuase of a technology fail, humans can also cause acccidents. These cars were made to drive themsleve and to not make any accidents. Now if the car warns the human drive to take over and then they don't, and leads into an accident then that will be on the human drivers fault. The only way it should be the Manufacturer\"s fault is if the car never gave a warning or if it had a technology fail.\n\nThese driveless cars should be going out on the market and allowed to be driven on. The automarkes are countinuing to work on the driveless cars to show the law and people that the driveless cars are safe to drive and safe to drive with. I still think that these cars are good enough to not cause any accidents and to drive as smooth than a control humsn driver.",
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"content": "Are you happy the way you vote today, would you be happy if we were to change the way we vote for president. Because they are thinking to change the electroal vote. I think that we should keep the Electoral College because it has been doing us good for a long time, and if we do change it, it would take a while for us to get used to it.\n\nThe first reason why it think that we shouldnt change the Electoral College is because it has been doing us good for almost 300 years. Let me ask you a question, do you change or fix something thats not broken,Than why change the Electoral College. We have had fair Elections in the pass and we still do, people vote for who they want as president of the united states, and if they get the better half of the votes than they are president. As we saw in 2012 when \"Obama received 61.7 percent of the Electoral votes compared to only 51.3 percent of the popular votes cast for him and Romney....because almost all states award electoral votes on a winner-take-all- basis, even a cery slight popularity in a state creates a landslide electoral vote victory in that state\" which is in source 3.\n\nThe second reason why I think that we should keep the electoral college is because it would take time for us to get used to the new method. Since we vote every 4 years and if we get a new way to vote there will be a few that wont know how to vote the new way and when it comes for it to vote again people will forget how they voted for the president. So if they vote for the person who they actually dont want its not like they can vote again. But as I said earlier its easy to vote with the Electoral College as its a winner takes all. The electoral vote does have a couple flaws that could be changed easily but in all other ways the elctoral vote is the way to go.\n\nAnd thats why I think that we should keep the electoral College because one it hasd been doing us good and it will take us a while to get used to the new voing system.",
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"content": "To patience means ready wait long time something I somewhat patient I delayed airport canceld fun I didnt eat afternoon But I happy I ds The story went vacation disney land It snowing reached airport We hurry check line security When got boarding gat looked board I saw flight delayed ment stay airport I aleast saw going new first I stayed patient Well thats day I stayed patient",
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"content": "Laughter esscense life Without laughter life would meaningless without sense happiness compassion life wouldnt worth living My sister person trust secrets She one makes happy feel My sister I laugh eachother jokes My sister half share everything She makes laugh always need I ll always also Laughter important part life sister I laugh play One day I came bus school could cry As I waited sister s bus arrive tears fell like river flowing The bus appeared sense joy appeared wasnt bus brought joy It sister right away could feel pain noticed tears I could see face love care She asked whats wrong I could hear worry voice My river tears stopped I began speak I could tell everything without trying holding anything back The words flowed mouth need think say I told happened without pause Afterwards told something I ll never forget She said CAPS matter whatever happens I ll always love laughed It sweetest laugh A chorus laughter filled air Nothing people say true I learned laugh",
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"content": "In today's perpetually transforming epoch, bring knowledge regarding ancient buildings has been increasing among people. Thus, in a few nations, more and more masses are becoming concerned about seeking out the historical building where they live. I have given some reasons regarding the above nation and measure for this trend in forthcoming paragraphs. \r\n\r\nTo commence with the reasons side of this phenomenon., first and foremost, getting theory about a past of a resident where we live, gives much-unsolved theory about that particular place. In addition, if any people get learning about their home, they may know many thing regarding their home. For instance, if their place have land of war which occurred in the past, that particular person may become rich person through that, to be clear, ancient things are selling expensive nowadays and if any folk find some ancient equipment on their land by knowing past. So, they are able to earn a bunch of money by selling historical things. Furthermore, some residential areas may suffer from low build quality and if any get proud past about the home. They can able to change their accommodation area. \r\n\r\nTaking into account the side of the measure. Nowadays, the technology has been increased and due to this, many mankind have access of phones and unlimited internet. So, they can bring grasp from YouTube. Even though many channels have historical content in YouTube. Apart from that, our grandparents have a bunch of knowledge about history. So, we can easily get knowledge. And people can also get brief knowledge from written documentaries, TV channel and also from librarian books. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, ancient awareness regarding our homes place can solve many things which we do not know. And online platforms and elders have a great sources for bringing judgment about the history",
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"content": "My time in the Seagoing Cowboys program was interesting and exiting and I would reccomend getting into this program if you like helping people and traveling. When I was in the program I had found time to have fun on board when the animals were unloaded the other Seagoing Cowboys and I could play vollyball games in the empty holds where the animals had been kept.\n\nBesides heIping people I had gotten to experience adventures and visit many unique places these include seeing the Acropolis in Greece, seeing the Panama canal on my way to China.\n\nIt was 1945, when world war 2 was over in Europe but many countries had been left in ruins to help these countries 44 naitions had joined together to form the UNRRA to help countries recover food suplies. And in August 1945 we recieved our seaman's papers and we boarded the SS CHARLES W.WOOSTER.\n\nWe were headed for Greese with a cargo of 355 horses and enough hay to feed them I had turned 18 by the time we got to Grease. When my draft board learned that i was doing service they told me to continue working because this counted as my time in the service. And i got to tour an excavated castle.\n\nSo i would say that my time in the Seagoing Cowboys was worth the time and I hope that you could consider joining the program.",
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"content": "One day went school pretty earlie He went normal day goes star class grade He chated friends star class Then goes hour science lab partners decide partners Half way lab dont know goes teacher interupts another student teacher says ill moment continues bug got step Then later day working work sheet teacher writing principal decided wait done wouldnt get trouble taking much longer expected noved th next problems teach comes back got help conclusion learned two lesson day One get trouble impatient get step Two pollite courtaeous class patiet get reward getting letter citizenship grade Wich day",
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"content": "I time I patient mcap teats I one first ones done I sit quitly read I read book It took hour evrey one finish vary long time read I got board I sat quite people could finish I wouldent disrptintt Thean evry one finshed took batheroom brack",
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"content": "Driving cars can be an easy and better way to go from point A to point B, but there are other ways that you can do that without using gas or money. At times it is better to walk or ride a bike, and there are a few reasons why it is better for you to have limited car use.\n\nCars use up a lot of gas, which means more money you have to spend. There are a lot of people that hate to spend so much money on gas, and it is their choice to drive all around town. It's their money that they're spending. Paris baned driving due to smog. If they catch you driving with an even numbered license plate, then you have to suffer a 22-euro fine. You would be spending more money for driving if you get caught. Sometimes driving a car is not worth the money.\n\nRide your bike around or walk. People can be lazy sometimes. It is healthy for you to get some exercise and gain some energy. If your job or school is only a couple minutes away, then there is no need to drive your car. If you ride a bike or walk you'll get to your destination before you know it.\n\nCar pool with some of your friends. Taking one car to the same destination with a group of people can't be so bad, it's beter than everybody in a group taking their own car. It's just a waste of gas and money. Think about how much you're saving off of a car pool.\n\nWasting gas and spending money is a problem around the world when it comes to driving. Walking around, riding your bike, or car pooling with a group of friends can't hurt you as much as a car can. So next time you want to go from point A to point B, think about what your transportation is going to be.",
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"content": "My argument is against the development of these cars. The arguement is that these cars can be dangerous in many different ways. Who would actually want a car that drives for itself? That's kind of weird and creepy at the same time. If google were to actually make this car would they be responsible for any of the crashes that involve these cars?\n\nTo being my arguement, I would like to say that a driveless car would be the death of many people. For instance the author say's that there will be motion sensors that will tell the car when your hands aren't on the wheel. What happens if those sensors aren't working, that would be the cause of a huge accident. A driveless car would be a cool invention but it's also a life risking invention to.\n\nIn the article the author says \" In most states it is illegal even to test computer driven cars\" that should be one reason to consider not making this car. With this car being invented it would be alot of cautions to consider while driving it. The driver of the car must keep their eyes on the road at all times even if the cart is driving it's self at the moment.\n\nThe dangers of this car are very serious. What if a young mom and her children are heading home from a football game one night, an their driving a driveless car. All of a sudden the cars steering wheel locks up and mom can't take control of the car causing the car to crash into a tree. This is one reason I say this car shouln't be invented, it would cause lots of peoples deaths.\n\nI'm not saying that it's not a genius idea but it's also something you might want to reconsider buliding. This whole driveless car idea is super sweet but there are also young people out there, who go to parties and get super drunk then get behind the wheel. You have to think about all the negative things that could happen with the invention of this car not just the positive.\n\nTo conclude my passage I want to say, that if this car ever does get invented it should be a certain age limit on them. By saying this I mean it should be directed to certainage group. Also the manufactures should make sure that everything in the car is working correctly before selling the car. It would be smart and it would save everyone the worries of losing a loved one to a car thats's driven by a computer.",
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"content": "I think that driverless cars are a good idea because drivers will now be more alert to what they are doing. And it may keep people off of their phones while driving because they have to be alert at all times in order to take the wheel. Also i believe it is a good idea because since it is sensored it will let the driver know when it is too close or is getting to close to something causeing less wrecks.\n\nthe car will also keep drivers off of their phones. since the driver has to stay aware at all times they wont have time to be on their phones. It also is a good idea because if someone doesnt know where to go the car will know and could get them there.\n\nAlso the car breaks its self and steers its self accuratly. The car incase a driver is not fully alert of a problem the car quickly get the drivers attention so the driver is aware.\n\nWhen the car is unable to get through work places or accidents the car will announce that it is ready for the driver to take over. Manufacturers are also considering putting a camera in the car to make sure that drivers are remaining focused on the road at all times.\n\nThe car is going to have a entertainment and information system that use heads-up displays so that the driver doesnt get bored while waiting for their turn to drive. the car is also capable of driving on autopilot 90 pecent of the time. And by 2020 mercedes benz and nissan plan to have cars that fully drive themselves.\n\nSo having a car that is going to keep drivers passengers and pedestrians safe is an absolutly great idea. we will have less acciudents and more people aware of their surroundings. It will also help people who cant see very well be aware of the things around them. That is why i beleive the driverless car is a good idea.",
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"content": "There are many reasons why others should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. They will experience unique adventures, beautiful countries and cities, and will have the chance to care for and grow closer to God's magnificent animals, like I did.\n\nThe first reason to sign up for this program is that they will experience unique adventures. These may include meeting new friends, trying new foods from different culters, spending weeks on the bright blue sea, and roaming around new places. I had a great time seeing and doing all of those things while I was a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nAnother reason to become a Seagoing Cowboy is the ability to discover beautiful new countries and cities. They could see mysterious English castles, eat delicious European foods,sail across long, flowing rivers through France, smell many different plants and animals in Asia, and much more! It would be an experience of a lifetime and all their friends back home would be jealous of their trips.\n\nLast but certainly not least, the new Seagoing Cowboys would have the chance to work with amazing animals! If they love hard-working animals like these, this job is for them. They get to take care and feed these magnificent animals such as horses, cows, donkeys, and mules that would be taken to the countries that are in need which they would be headed to. They can have fun and help others at the same time!\n\nIn conclusion, becoming a Seagoing Cowboy would be tons of fun and knowledgeable, too. I would definitly recomend it. They would have a blast experiencing unique adventures, sightseeing in beautiful countries and cities, and caring for the wonderful animals God put on this earth for us.",
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"content": "the author supports his idea well because there could be fossiles we never even knew exsited on venus and they say that venus is the closest twin to earth so its worth a shot right? honestly we should because what if they discover that venus was like earth and it just changed and killed everything else off and all the oceans and seas evaporated and thats why theres such a thick cloud above it. i honestly think that they should try because what if venus was like earth and there were other types of life forms on there that werent human it could be ground breaking and what if earth is headed to turning out to be like venus. and if we do find fossils and other things to indicate that there was life on venus and it just all died off because of the heat. we could learn how to prevent it happening to earth with future generations.",
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"content": "The dream Empire State Building allow dirigibles dock On top It sounded like great idea builders faced many obstacles trying reach goal dock The first problem faced dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted buildings foundation would nt stress building s frame To sixty thousand dollars worth modifications made A glass chrome nickel steel tower made illuminated inside The building floors Even though hard work building never used docking purposes safety One safety obstacles dirigibles wer highly flamable one caught fire New Jersey owners Empire State building nt want happy highly populated New York City Also another big obstacle caused terrible winds Even though landing sight dirigible could never tied passengers could get Also law stated air craft s ca nt fly low urban areas Through money obstacles builders go make dream possible never achieved",
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"content": "The builders Empire State Building faced difficult circumstances many obstacles task designing brand new Empire State Building accompany new means travel The builder s mission design top Empire State Building accommodate mooring blimps one thousand feet air The first obstacle designing landing area This difficult architecture needed never created even attempted past A second obstacle make sure Empire State Building could withstand stress created blimp Paragraph says The stress dirigibles load wind pressure would transmitted way building s foundation The difficulty obstacle refurbish steel frame Empire State Building took lots time work sixty thousand dollars The greatest obstacles successful mooring nature There violent wind currents top building blimps never stable There many pedestrians moored dirigible dangerous obstacle Lastly pre existing laws airships flying low urban areas posed new problem even successful architecture laws disallowed blimps first place Planes also becoming popular",
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"content": "Scientific developments has improved the life of the people. Some people believe that it created a big gap between wealthy people and poor people While some believe that it reduced the gap. Let us discuss about both the views.\n\nThe variety of technolgy available to people has increased tremendously. Starting with the mobile phones, there exists a huge variety and different brands. Each has its own features and the price of the mobile phone varies on the quality of the technology and the number of features it offers. Though all the mobiles have most of the common features, but the quality of the high end phones cannot be matched with the low cost phones. However, Poor people might not be able to afford this high end phones.\n\nOn the other hand, Scientific improvements paved the way for free calls. Earlier, people used to pay for the incoming calls. Nowadays, the cost of the internet pack is minimal, where it comes with free incoming and outgoing calls which brings the large number of poor people to use mobile phones. Additionally, low cost cars have become possible because of the latest technology. This encourages the people with low income to buy cars. Likewise, Companies are coming up with low cost products to increase their market among middle class people.\n\nTo conclude, a wide variety in techonolgy has definitely contributed in bridging the gap between the rich and the poor, but the quality of the technology that reaches poor should be improved.",
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"content": "The mood created author memoir warm happy one He talking homes friendship neighborhood He creates happy feeling talking home He talks simple house created cuban home His kitchen aromas food filling air The rich skill cooking passed In house innocence childhood The second way creates happy mood talking friendship He talked land lords daughter friend babysitter This led playful warm tone lead grandparents also enjoyed meal house The last way talking neighborhood He talked immigrants neighborhood helped They came hardworking willing The author also wrote family nt need blood Those ways author created happy mood memoir",
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"content": "I think that this technology would be valuable in classrooms to read students expressions.I believe this would be valuable because if you had technology to read facial expressions you would be able to tell if a student was confused, bored or sad. This would be useful because if you could know how a student was feeling then you would be able to help that student in whatwever way they needed help.For example, if a student is confused you can help them with what they are working on and try to help them undertand it better. If a student is bored you can try to make whatever they're doing more interesting. If a student is sad you can try to talk to them about it and try to cheer them up or make them feel better. Some evidence from the article to support this claim states \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" and \"Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" The article also states \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,\" and \"So commputers need to understand that, too.\" In conclusion,this is why i think it would be valuable to have this technology in classrooms around the world.",
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"content": "In story features setting affect cyclist many ways For example desert hot outside Also running water This bad could become dehydrated Another example comes upon building thinks mirage first hes pretty much dehydrated The rough terrain also makes hard pedal already weak lack water In conclusion elements desert affect cyclist way",
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"content": "The author gives lots of evidence and resons on this idea throughout the article. The author also gives some facts that really helps supports this idea. There are some really good things that are in the article that gives this claim some meaning. In all, the author did really good with this article and also put some good time into this article too. I enjoyed reading this and learned some interesting facts about Venus.\n\nOne major things that caught my eye was that the author used NASA as some research in his article. He also uses NASA as a resource to help with the support of this idea. NASA is a wide known for space exploration and research for our solor system.\n\nAt the beginning of the article, there is an introduction that gives some intesting facts about Venus. The author also talks about where Venus is in our solor system and how it is related to earth. This is a very good start in the introduction of Venus and what the article is about. In the third paragraph, he talks about what Venus atmosphere is like. There is termperature facts and the air you need to breath is useable. This starts to bring up the question. Is Venus worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents? The fourth paragraph, he talks about the terrain. This starts to bring up the question even more than before. In paragraphs 5-7 NASA is the main idea for those paragraphs. In those paragraphs also NASA research and facts are presented about this topic. The last paragraph has a powerful meaning and a idea that is very strong.\n\nThese facts lead to the evidence is many ways. Facts are what built and help evidence today. There is a lot of evidence that support my claim. Here is a couple of pieces of evidence taht support my claim. The first piece is that the author used NASA. NASA has done a lot of research about this topic. The second piece is that he used lots of facts to convince the reader taht he has put some time into makeing this article. This helps show that the author did really good in presenting the topic and give some really good evidence to back up his article.",
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"content": "Dear State Senator\n\nFeburary 5 , 2015\n\nI would want you to keep The Electoral College the same for its been up to Congress and popular votes from the citizens to elect the President and Vice President all this time. If we change The Electoral College , we might end up having to change a few more things. So far The Electoral College has kept this country great with its voting way for President and Vice President. Changing The Electoral College will break its original way of the Constitutional compromise between the election of President and Congress. The original way is what made this country the way it is today.\n\nSure people argued over The Electoral College in 2000 , but that was 15 years ago. If we change The Electoral College , we could be changing the coountry. It's better for the country that we don't change The Electoral College , plus it would save Cogress , senators , the President , and Vice President time and paper work. Write to you later senator ,\n\nSincerly ,\n\nPROPER_NAME",
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"content": "It is logically impossible for aliens to create what we call The Face. Although we do not know if such life forms exist, it still could not happen. It would take hundreds, or even thousands of lightyears to travel to the Milkyway galaxy. Extra-terrestrials would most likely have the same life-span as us, or slighty shorter/longer. So they probably couldn't survive the whole trip to our galaxy.\n\nEven though no one knows how The Face was made, there are some more possible explanations. Strong winds could have eroded the surface of Mars and carried its contents to another location miles away from where they originally were.\n\nSome lighter winds could have made indents on the flat part, giving it \"facial features.\"\n\nWe have no evidence that truly proves that aliens are real. Many pictures that people show of their \"encounter\" just for attention. Others are just hoaxes. On the other hand, we were not there with those people to know that it wasn't true. Yet the lack of evidence says that they don't exist.\n\nHow would aliens even know what a human face looks like? They probably would have no idea (if they existed, that is). In the passage it says that The Face resembles an Egyptian pharoh. I don't think that aliens could understand what that was and leave an imprint on Mars that resembles a pharoh.\n\nWhat kind of technology would they be using? A large laser? Technology/weapons that advanced don't exist yet, so it could not happen. It would most likely take a very long time since it is nearly two miles long. To be honest, I don't think anyone would have the patience to do that. Not even aliens. It could take months or possibly a year, depending on how detailed it is.",
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"content": "The claim made that despite the danger Venuse holds, it is still worthy of pursuit is very well evaluated. In the passage we read about how dangerous Venus actually is. With temperatures of 800 degrees Fahrenheit, it would be impossible for a human to ever land on this planet. We also learn that the atmospheric pressure of Venus is strong enough to crush a submarine that is capable of diving into the deepest parts of our ocean. Despite these dangers, Venus is still worthy of exploration.\n\nEven though Venus is not the closest plant to the sun, it is the hottest in our solar system. Not only is it a hot planet, it also faces weather conditions that we face here on Earh only extremely stronger. The similar weather conditions aren't just a coincidence. Scientists believe that Venus was once\n\n\"the most Earth-like planet in our solar system.\" Venus is also \"our nearest option for planetary visit\" most of the time. These two factors make Venus worthy of planetary exploation.\n\nWith Venus being \"the most Earth-like planet\" and our closest potential visiting site, the planet holds a lot of interest. This is why NASA has been working on ways that humans would be able to explore the planet in a safe way. This includes then hovering over the planet. Time can only tell what information our sister planet holds.",
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"content": "These days, in several countries, people tend to discover the history of the construction they reside in, for several reasons, the most significant of which may be to make sure about the reputation of the building if a crime had been committed in it or not, especially when the buildings age many years, this possibility might be highly likely. Therefore, the notoriety of their place might drop the market value at the purchase time. The second reason could be due to the stability of the residence. This could cost a lot if they do not assure about that because they may have to pay too much to maintain the building. \r\n\r\n \r\n\r\nConsidering the methods,There are many to reassure about the abovementioned problems. The most convenient one is to ask the locals, particularly the elderly ones since they have been living in the neighbourhood for a long time so that they can be highly reliable sources about the fame of the buildings. Second of which could be, the internet which is usually more reliable and more accessible than the first way. As there is usually news about the notorious incidents in local papers. As far as stability of the buildings goes, they could be checked in the local house department which usually keeps the documents of the construction. Furthermore, former owners can have accountable information about the structure of the buildings. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there may be a lot of logic behind the questioning of place people dwell in, in particular the resistance and reputation of them, Consequently there are many ways to enquire about each including the other habitats in the area or the Internet.",
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"content": "The use of technology to read students' emotions and expressions would not be valuable in a classroom. As a student living in a generation that is becoming dependent on technology, the ability for computers to read our emotions would not only be a waste of our resources but also a detriment to our education systems.\n\nThere are many consequences of using technology to read our facial expressions at school. Distractions are prevalent in a classroom and adding the emotional recognition would only be adding a game for students to play with while the lesson was being taught. According to the article if the student was paying attention, their lesson could be modified based on their facial expression. This may confuse the child or present them with material in a way that has never been taught before. They then would have different information from their peers and teacher. Not only would the customized lesson confuse the student, but it would also promote the selfish lifestyle that other technology is by giving the student exactly what they want when they want it. Our students are growing up in a world where technology is providing them with everything they want, and that has made them needy, spoiled, and reliant. If the emotional recognition technology were implemented, then in the future the child may not be able to sit through a job interview or meeting because it would not be modified for their enjoyment.\n\nIf we were to use technology that reads expressions, we would continue to create people who are not satisfied until everything is catered exactly they way they would like it. The use of technology to read humans' expressions would not be beneficial in a classroom.",
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"content": "Technology has changed the way of news circulation. At the viewpoint, of some, news has no direct impact on people's life and hence, reading the newspaper or watching the news shows, is time wastage, while others are of diverse opinion. In my view, news enables an individual to gain information about the on-goings in the world, while improving their language skills. This, essay will argue against the given statement, and prove the importance of news.\n\n\nFirstly, bulletin provides a person with details of all the prominent political, cultural and economic issues around the earth. Not only, does this assist one in understanding their society better, but also helps in the decision making process about numerous things such as investing money. To cite an example, events such as foreign elections, natural disasters and trade agreements in some parts of the planet, can affect the market in any nation. Therefore, it is essential to be aware of the happenings around the globe before making an investment. In addition to this, newspapers and broadcasters are the only way through which societies can reach their habitats and ask for their involvement, during times of difficulties. For instance, during the floods of 2013, in India, hundreds of news sources depicted the pitiful condition of the nationals, thus raising a huge amount of money.\n\n\nSecondly, newspapers or shows can improve the language skills of the person. It can expand one's vocabulary, while enhancing his reading and listening skills. Furthermore, several newspapers have special columns dedicated to puzzles which can enrich the reader's communication skills. To illustrate this, the 'Times of India', has a weekly page that solely acquaints the community with new words that are recently added to the dictionary.\n\n\nTo conclude, newspapers and programs are the vital organs to stay connected with the happenings in this big world. There are numerous upsides of reading news and hence, in my opinion, it is baseless to say that familiarization with news through news editorials or telecast is nothing useful.",
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"content": "The future of artificially intelligent is highly controversial. Some people assume more and more employees might be replaced by artificially intelligent ones in the future. While it is possible that unskilled jobs might be done by robots, it is highly unlikely that certain occupations, which require human contact will be substituted by machines. This essay will discuss why some specific jobs will rely on humans. \r\n\r\nAt some point, robots will eventually replace most humans’ labour. Firstly, machines are cheaper and more efficient. Accordingly, they do not need breaks, sick leaves, or holidays. For this reason, robots constantly work, and therefore companies make more profit. In many countries around the world cashiers in supermarkets have been already replaced by automatic stations, which work around the clock. For these reasons, jobs, which can be replaced by artificially intelligent will be replaced. \r\n\r\nWhile some human labour can be carried out by robots there are still jobs which require humans. On the one hand, automatic machines must get developed and programmed by human employees. Especially in the medical field, skilled workers are indispensable. For example, nurses who look after the patients as well as therapists help them to recover. Especially, people in need, need people whom they can trust and rely on. Such a relationship will not be able to have with an artificially intelligent robot and therefore, robots will never be able to achieve those social skills.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is most likely that many jobs will be conducted by artificially intelligent robots at some point. Unskilled work will be replaced by robots ,however there are still jobs which only can be performed by human specialists. Overall, the future holds many new unknown, scary and exciting options for us, which will probably make our lives easier.",
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"content": "Computers that can read emotions. People are against it and people are for it. Here are the reasons why these computers should be across the world every where.\n\nThe shcools should invest in laptops that can read your emotions like if you are bored or tired in school to spice up the lesson to make you concentrate more on the assignment like you have your own teacher sitting infornt of you teaching the lesson only to you and no one else has the same lesson. It would help with people who have depression or suicidal thoughts. The computer could read how they feel and then they could seek help and then we wouldnt have to worry about people killing them selfs because we could have a computer to read how they are feeling and save their lives. Computers should just always have them installed and run the test at different times to see how people are feeling on certain days.\n\nIf the therapy office ,counsling ,and or schools invest in these computers they could not only read emotion but tell an adult what is going on and or tell if a child is really sad or really mad or any of the emotions that the humans have. It would be a really good investment to go into school and to counsling offices or therapy to tell if the sesion is working or to get kids from being bored or distracted in school",
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"content": "The table conveys information on the amount of people that came from six different countries in 1975 and 2005. The line graph demonstrates the number of yearly visits to Australia by overseas residents.\nOverall, the total number of people who visited the six countries increased dramatically. The most visited country was Japan in both years (1975 and 2005) while the least visited country in those same years was China. Annual Overseas residents' visits in Australia grew significantly over the period of 30 years.\nIn regards to the table, 3.2 million people came to Japan during 1975. This number was 4 times more in 2005 as it reached 12 million. 500 thousand more people visited china in 2005 than in 1975 (800 thousand and 300 thousand, respectively). The total number of people who visited all six countries was 30.4 million in 2005, compared to 8.8 million in 1975.\nIn 1975, the number of visits by overseas residents was just below 10 million. The greatest growth happened to be between 1985 and 1995, where the number grew by around 9 million. In 2005, the number of overseas residents who came to Australia was slightly above 30 million.",
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"content": "Technology is the future and driverless cars are just one of the many inventions that have and will be made. Overtime, things change and evolve and technology is one of those things. From the invention of the lightbulb, to the implementation of driverless cars, technology will never cease to grow, expand, and develop.\n\nMuch like maunally operated cars, these new driverless cars would provide easy and covinient transportation for people. Though the driverless cars aren't entirely driverless and still alert the passengers when a driver will have to take over, much like auto pilot on a plane, they still assist the driver. The driver must stay alert and attentitive throught the trip in order for the car to work properly; the cars can steer, accelerate, and break themselves but still require human skills when needed.\n\nThe future is very bright for the automobile industry and with it, the future of the driverless car. Not only would the driverless car provide a more convinient and pleasurable driving ecperience, it would also give the automobile industry the technological push it needs in the 21st century.",
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"content": "In the article \"driverless cars Are Coming,\" the author presents both positive and negative aspects of driverles cars. I am strongly for driverless cars because they let you relax at the wheel by driving. Another reason I am for driverless cars it will allow the roads to be safer. The last reason I am for it is they will allow pedestrians to use public transpertation with out there life in risk.\n\nHow will a driverless car let you relax at the wheel. A driverless car will let you relax at the wheel during traffic jams up to speeds of 25 mph. The only thing you would have to do during a traffic jam is keep your hands on the wheel. The car will make you keep your hands on the wheel by using sensors. They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents.\n\nWould anybody have ever thought there would be cars that dang near can drive their selves with out hurting anybody. Well the car designers are getting close. There are sensors on on some of these cars that will allow the car to brake instantly if the car is out of controll skids or roll overs. When these cars come out it will allow them to brake before running off the road. Without the option of smarter roads maufactures turned to smarter cars that can steer them selves.\n\nWorld transportation with out worrying about the driver wrecking. There would not be no worrying if there were driverless cars. The google cofounder forsees these public transpertations using have the fuel that we use tody on cars. he beleives such cars would fundamentally change the world.\n\nSo one day we will not have to risk are lives riding public transpertation if there is no driver. In this article they have shown you why driverless cars are more safer and I have gave you my point of veiw in this essay so whats yours?",
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"content": "There are many advantages to limiting car usage. These examples include, less stress, cleaner air, and more safety. There is less stress because you are always tense as stated in the first source. There's cleaner air because cars are one of the leading causes to air pollution as said in source two. There's also more safety because streets don't have as much traffic stated on source three and four.\n\nOne benefit of limiting car usage is that there is less stress. There is less stress because when you own a car you may find yourself tense a lot of the time or maybe all of the time. In source one, Hedrium Walter stated that she was always tense with a car and now she is much happier. Bike riding and walking outside can be relieving without the sound of motors, hearing the children play in the park and breathing the fresh air is much better. In source three Carlos Arturo Plaza said that car free day is a good way to take away stress and lower air pollution. This is another instance of someone supporting limiting car usage because there is less stress.\n\nCleaner air is another benefit to limiting car usage. Cars are one of the leading factors to air pollution, this is shown in source two. In source two, it states that congestion was down sixty percent in the capital of France afer five-days of intenstifying smog. This proves that limiting car usage provides cleaner air for the enviroment. With cleaner air, there is a healthier poulation which is a benefit to limiting the usage of vehicles.\n\nThere is more safety with limiting car usage. If car usage is limited, then there aren't as many car accidents and there is less traffic. Less traffic could also lead to public transportation becoming more efficient and faster. The bus would be able to get to places much faster without other cars being in the way wich would be a benefit to limiting car usage.\n\nLimiting car usage would be for the better of the population. It would cause less stress, cleaner air, and more safety. The usage of cars should be limited for the better of man and it should happen everywhere.",
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"content": "Google cofounder Sergey Brin has the idea of driverless cars being a perminate substitue to what we have today. These come a lot of negative sides to that; which include any malfunction the driverless car might have, and the amount of money this car would cost to manufacture. Also if there happened to be an accident the constant fued between the owner of the car and the company as to whoes fault it would be. This essay is to provide you with information as to why driverless cars would not be a good idea.\n\nDriverless cars. Are they actually safe? Driverless cars are not safe. The way a car dives is all in the manner of sensors. In paragraph five the article states \"sensors had become more advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers.\" Meaning sensors are the only thing protecting the person or people in this driverless car. If there was an incident where the sensor did not pick up heavy traffic or road work like they are supposed to (stated in paragraph 7) and there was damage done to the sensors. This oh so great driverless car would not be as great as the manufactures claim it is. This car could spin out of control and damage any amount of sensors needed to alert the liscensed adult in the car if there is something wrong. If the driver is not alerted then whoes fault would it be if there was an accident.?\n\nCar accidents happen everyday. There is always a person who caused this accident to occur. With a driverless car if an accident happened there is always the question of whoes fault it would be. Would if be the owner of the car for not being aware or would it be the car manufactures fault, for having a faulty car. The car manufactures could have broken a sensor whle assembling the car and not have realized it, then selling it to an innocent by-stander. The new owner takes the driverless car out of a ride later that night and the car does not give signal to the owner that there is road work ahead and the owner gets into an accident. Would this be the new owners fault for not paying attention to the road or the car manufactures fault for selling a damaged car, that does not have all the advancements the manufactures claimed it had? If there was an injury who would have to pay for it? The car manufactures or the owner? It is already expensive enough to construct the car, imagine the car manufactures having to pay a hospital bill as well.\n\nPrice. The price of assembling a driverless car is outrageous. The manufacturer would have to buy the sensors needed for the car. Which requires many (stated in paragraph 4). Sensors for items as big as cars are very expensive. The manufacturer then has to buy the type of material they want the car to be made out of. Pay for a lab to do a test drive with and then go back and fix any mistakes they made the first time, but with a brand new car. Repedeately having to buy sensor and the right materials for the car, until the car is how they want it to be. Car dealerships then buy the driverless car; spending a lot more money than it was worth and then sell it to consumers for two timesmore than what they had originally bought it for. If anything happened to the driverless car while you were not paying attention how much would it cost to replace and fix what was damaged?\n\nDriverless cars are dangerous, expensive and pointless. Would you want driverless cars on the same streets as your child? Cars that are only controlled by a computure. Driverless cars are as dangerous as letting a dog drive a taxi. Keeping drivers behind the wheel at all times is an incredbile idea. Driverless cars are a waste of time, money and effort from all of the cosumers involved in buying and manufacturing it. Save your money, and save your life and continue to drive your own car. Do not let a computure take over what was made for humans.",
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"content": "There are controversial notions heating up the debate over the fact that news is not related to people’s lives which means it is considered a time-wasting to follow news through the media. Although this thinking is valid to some extent, I consider myself an opponent of it. \r\n\r\nWithout a shadow of a doubt, there are some reasons to believe that news is not relevant to people's lives. Some people just focus on the field they work in or have a keen interest in, so they do not take other information into account. For instance, if they are artists and do not have any knowledge of finance or the economy, the news of these kinds seems useless for them. Thus, it is understandable why some people think the news has no connection with their life and do not need to know about some news.\r\n\r\nAlthough some news has no advantage in their lives, most of them are so practical and directly connected to their lives. News helps people know what happens around them so they can understand some current circumstances and prepare for them. For example, in the middle of the Corona pandemic, people need to update information about this disease to protect themselves. Therefore, the news is useful and directly linked with people’s lives, so they should update news on a daily basis. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although some news is unessential for some people, most of them have a direct connection to people’S lives, so it is are very necessary for people to update them.",
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"content": "Driverless cars are a huge debatable concept. Some might not see how this would change our world. It would change our world in many important ways, and I'd have to say, these ways are positive. There are so many positive reasons on why this needs to be done, but many could disagree.\n\nDriverless cars would use only half of the fuel compared to todays taxis. Not only would that mean a lower demand for gas, but it would also help out our enviorment! Think about a city, there are many lanes, and tons of traffic. Could you imagine what just one street of traffic releases so much polloution? It's killing our earth slowly, but surely!\n\nAnother good reason for driverless cars are the safety matters. Our technology has progressed so much throughout the years, and is only getting better. It would be a safer deal than now. The text states that Googles driverless cars have more than half a million miles without a crash. That would help our traffic, and our safety. The sensors these creators are making are insanely accurate. But of course, we would still need to be focused on the road. The text states that driverless cars need to be controlled when it comes to backing out of a drive way or going through construction roads, so don't think the world is capable of 100% no driving (yet anyways)..\n\nI really think that this would reduce accidents by a landslide. Think about the distractions drivers face on a day to day basis, if we can find a way to avoid that, we should use it!! Too many lives have been affected by accidents, it's time to put a stop to it.",
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"content": "Being able to read a persons' emotion may be hard, because we human beings are good at hiding things in disguise. Have you ever pondered what other persons' feelings may be when you are talking to them? Well that is what we are here to explain today and express how this technology may or may not be accurate enough to read a persons' inner feelings of a perception about something or someone.\n\nTo know how someone feels without them showing it is a task. Could this technology be the newest cool thing? Let's find out! Right off the bat, this sounds out of a fictional story. You're probably thinking, What? Technology that can detect how someone feels? Let's not get to excited now as we pull out information. A human is a human, they would know how they feel. Technology has more than once showed to fail, but on the good side is that technology has brought us along ways. Not only does technology consist of just \"electronics\" but in our every day to day life.\n\nTrusting technology is risky unless it's been proven otherwie. The only real way to find out whether this technology works is to take do an expirement on a subject. To bring in a random person and try this to put this technology to the test. If this works and thee subject does feel how the Facial Action Coding System in describing , then this may be true that this technology works. Without physically doing an expirement on a random subject, the answer is tossed in the air to whether or not this Coding System actually works.\n\nSince we only know that this has been done on the Mona Lisa and older Famed Pictures, it leans more toward that this technology still has more improvement unless proved otherwise. Being there is so much mistakes in technology, it's a matter of an opinion. With the the information given on this technology, it will remain a mystery to whether or not this tech really works! A person's feelings is only known by them themselves. They are the ony one that \"feels\" what they are they feeling.\n\nWithout the technology being tested on a random subject, the Mona Lisa and older pictures of past human figures can not be fully trusted by the Facial Coding System, only because it has not yet been done in person but rather an older picture. People can trick you into thinking something works, but think again. Many things have yet to be proven in technology. Day by day scientists get better at proving their \"theories\" and forming a (hypothesis) over a particular subject!\n\nWe will see what the future of technology holds as we continue to discover new ways and better advance ways of doing regular day to day things such as \"walking around\" involvment in cars, and a many more things. We learn more everyday and discover new things in which we can put to use.",
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"content": "The first group of people believes that robots positively impact on world’s evolution. Others claim that these “mechanical creatures” can lead to unfavourable consequences. In my opinion, robots’ effect has more advantages than disadvantages.\r\n\r\nIn fact, robots are used in many spheres of our life. For instance, doctors provide difficult surgeries using special machines which can give patients a second life. Moreover, robots can create prosthetics for people with disabilities. Consequently, such a person can feel equal to others. Actually, many people may not realize that robots are a part of our daily lives. For example, there are machines particularly in every company, for instance, in car manufacturers, electronic chains and even in the film industry. They help to develop society in different ways.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are some drawbacks to the implementation of robots in certain areas of life. Firstly, it affects students’ development and education process in a negative way. For example, with the introduction of chat GPT, many teenagers began to use its functions in order to create a presentation, search for some information or do their homework without any attempts to think by themselves. Thus, adolescents become irresponsible and lazy. One more significant downside is that humans may lose their jobs because of replacing them with robots and this can become the cause of unemployment. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I strongly believe that robots are the progressive mechanism of humanity and machines make people's lives much easier. In addition, artificial intelligence can not only do the job for people but also develop their important work skills and imagination. Furthermore, robots will never be able to fully replace humans.",
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"content": "It has been observed that the youth take a gap from the study after finish their schooling instead of getting admission at The University. There are several betterments and detriments for such a viewpoint. Both aspects are elaborated further in the ensuing paragraph.\n\nDiscussing the benefits, the prime reward for travel is that the young guns can learn about the culture. By this,I mean that as student roams around the world during their break, they will learn about different traditions, languages and social skills. Therefore, they gain their approach to adapting new things into their life, become a multilingual person. Moreover, students get practical experience while doing part-time jobs. In other words, the pupil learns about maintaining financial condition, enhances knowledge about businesses as well as find their choice for further study. For example, the admission department from the University of Pennsylvania concluded that the students who get the admission after a gap, their results are exceptional compared to other pupils.\n\nDespite the benefits, there are a few repercussions for such a view. The foremost reason is that students lose momentum. To explain this, the information in their head will fade away after taking a year gap from a finished graduate from high school, as a result, a learner would suffer from getting knowledge from the new curriculum while pursuing their degree education. Furthermore, the gap required precise planning.To elaborate, during this time if they cannot find program and job, He/she might be going through serious issues such as anxiety.\n\nTo sum up, it can be stated that each side has its own advantages and disadvantages. It is a fair idea to take a break to find their own speciality before choosing a course at the university; however, without perfect planning,they might lose focus from their study as well as job.",
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"content": "There is many times when a student sits at a computer doing an assignment that is not the most exciting, but they can not do anything about it. The latest innovation from Professor Thomas Huang, called Facial Action Coding System can read the emotions of a human and can possibly change the way classes are run. This innovation can help some educational problems. The software Facial Action Coding System would be valuable to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom.\n\nThere is certain schools who have days where all their work is online for students and they do not have an actual instructor. With the new software when a student shows a face of confusion, the computer can bring up different ways for the student to be able to understand the work that they are completing. Also, a student might seem bored and is falling asleep, with this software the lesson can be modified as Dr. Huang states in paragraph 6. The modification would help keep the student out of trouble and awake in class. When doing this the student has a better chance of finishing his/her assignment while still being capable of understanding what they are doing.\n\nOften times, teachers will make students do online assignments so they have time to do other things. Depending on the class, there is often times when students have different ways of learning and are at different levels of understanding. The new software can benefit both the teacher and the student by changing up the assignment based on the level a student is at. The emotions that some students show when they do not understand what they are reading is confusion, anger, frustration, or sometimes sadness. When the new software detects those emotions it can change the lesson until the students emotion are calmed. This can all be done without being a disturbance to the teacher.\n\nThe software can benefit many parts of the educational system with the students. It can help students better understand activities online to helping students stay awake during class. The Facial Action Coding System would be very valuable to students in classrooms.",
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"content": "Today i am going to be telling you why you should be a seagoing cowboy\n\nThese are some ways you should be a seagoing cowboy. You git to ride the ships free . You can learn how to take care of animals. You can have fun when you are done unloading the animals like boxing,reading,and fencing there are lots more ways but these are the most common. It will be fun just like the guy luke said in the article. You will be working . You will have to be careful . You will get to know how to take care of horses. It might make you like horses and might make you want to buy a horse. You git free trips and when you are done you can have some free time to git to know the place more . You will git to ride on a ship if its your first time riding on one .\n\nthis is some resones you might want to go be a seagoing cowboy there is lots more stuff but this is the most importent stuff that gives you more facts and that gives you more details but if you want more resones you can go to the article so you can read it for your self and see how like it.",
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"content": "This technology used to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. The reason why this technology is so important is because it can detect a lot of things about faces or pictures of faces people don't know about. To detect a way a person is feeling , there has to be some sort of technology involved. The way the process starts , is by the computer constructing a 3-D computer model of the face. When the computer starts to construct the 3-D computer face model , all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles.\n\nAfter the first process is complete , then the next process starts. Dr. Paul Eckman , the creator of the Facial Action Coding System , has classified six basic emotions of the human face. The six basic emotions are happiness , suprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness. Associated with the emotions , are the muscles that show the emotions. The frontalis pars lateralis muscle shows a suprised emotion. The orbicularis oris muscle shows an anger emotion.\n\nThis new computer software just goes to show what this world is coming to. Everyday in the world , new technology is being designed and constructed everyday to improve the world's society. Without computers and other software , there would be no technology. Technology is needed everywhere a person goes , because without it , a person may not be able to do the things they need to do. That's why different types of technology are needed for certain things.\n\nA valuable reason why the use of this technology is needed to explain to students in a classroom is because the students may be interested in the topic being explained. The topic is important because it may be led on to bigger things in the future. This new technology may be considered one of the greatest things to be brought upon because of how different it is from other technology. Students being explained to about this technology may be concerned about this new technology , and may want to look further into it. This technology being created may lead to something important in the near future.\n\nThe muscular action units in this new software being created , can even determine when someone is putting on a real smile , or when someone is putting on a false smile. This new technology is so important not because of what it can do , but also what it can form. This new technology can go a long way. It can be formed into something even better with time and patience put into it. It takes time for something to grow into a better form. This is why the use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable.",
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"content": "In \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus,\" the author sugest studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents by giving examples of obsticals presented by the planet and the solution to the problems.The author gives two reasons for an example Venus might have been more inhabbitable then Earth at one point and we are most likely going to find equally intimidating endeavors.\n\nThe author talks a lot about the challenges Venus presents for an example the atmosphere is 97 percent carbon dioxide, clouds are highly corrosive, the average temperatures are over 800 degrees Faharenheit,and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than on Earth. There are many ways to get past these obsticals like a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 miles above the surface. Another option is to use mechanical computers because they are not as delicate and more resistant to pressure,heat,and other forces.\n\nIn conclusion the authors claim that it is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers seems strong and is a good argument.The authors claim is strong because he/she has given reasons for exploring, the counter claim , and proved the counter claim wrong.Lasty it is a good argument because most of the facts from both sides are given and the facts saying its worthy are much stronger.",
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"content": "What an accomplishment, inventing new technology that can read facial expressions. From a smile to a frown, the FACS computer can tell it all. Students should be able to use the FACS computers in class because they will be highly beneficial to their education.\n\nTo start off, students will greatly benefit from the use of the FACS computer because the computers will be great teachers. Since the computer can detect the students feelings, it can alter the lessons in ways the student can benefit from most. Some students are too shy and or nervous to ask questions in class and may go on without fully understanding the lesson taught. Teachers will not sometimes realize when a student is not up to speed with the lesson and need help, but the FACS computer will. By recognizing a student's facial expressions, the computers will teach them in ways they do understand, and by doing so, it willl create a higher chance of understading for the student.\n\nAnother reasons is that it can help students gain a better future. If a student does poorly in school, many troubles may come their way. From getting in trouble with their parents to not passing high school, there are many risks for students when they do not understand what they are being taught. On the contrary, if they do understand, it will result in better grades which can lead to feeling of accomplishment and intelligence and that can highly affect where they end up in their later lives. Most likely than not, better education means a better future. With the help of FACS, we can choose to build a better future for all of humanity.\n\nLast but defintely not least, FACS will help both teachers and students tremendously. The computers can help the teachers get through to the students and help them fully understand the lesson being taught. If a teacher is teaching something that the class does not understand, the computer can take over and do what the teacher cannot do, read the students faces. By doing so, the computer will unlock their emotions until it can read that they're happy with the way it's teaching. Also in benefit for students, they will get to learn in different ways. Both a human and computer teacher will for sure drill in any lesson and help them pass plus.\n\nAlthough some might view FACS in lights of glory, others will think otherwise. In their opinions, students learning from robots instead of human teachers may not be effective and only cause disturbance. They might also believe that teachers and students will slack off because they might take it in as a robot doing everything for them.\n\nTo wrap it all up in a neat little bow, students will highly benefit from using FACS computers so they should be able to have access to them. The FACS computers will pose as great teachers for students, it will help them build a better future, and it will lend a helping hand to both students and teachers. These are the reasons why students should be allowed to use FACS.",
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"content": "Electoral College is where we pick our state elector to choose our president. We as citizen get to help choose our state's electors when we vote. It's a benefit to keep our Electoral College in the government system.\n\nAfter all, Electoral College do have their negatives. In the source \"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid denfenses of the system are wrong\" by Bradford Plumer claims that \"voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors.\" We are not voting for our own president, but choosing an electors for our own state to go on and help us vote for our United States of America's president,but with an Electoral College every state get two Senators and one House of Representatives. Which divide everything equally. Our votes are counted by our population of people. So, the Electoral College shouldn't be change.\n\nMainly, Electoral College help us vote for our president. In the source \"What is the Electoral College\" by the Office of the Federal Register assert that the winner of the president is \"election of the president by a popular vote of qualified citizens.\" The more popular votes our states is given the higher chance that president is going to be elected. \"Majority of 270 electoral votes is required to elect the president\" out of 538 votes for a presidnet to win. With an Electoral College each president have to get at least 270 elector votes from all the 50 states for them to be president.\n\nLastly, Electoral College have no run-off elections. In the source \"In defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President\" by Richard A. Posner mentioned that with no run-offs there wouldn't be any \"complicate the presidential election process.\" There will never be a tie votes between an election. For example, between Nixon and Clinton both got 43 percent popular votes which is a tie and hard to pick, but with an elector vote their votes are 301:370 which is a big difference.\n\nIn summary, Electoral College is a useful system in the government that should be kept in place. It has been used over the years and it would be a pain to change everything now.",
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"content": "If you dont have a car you will reduce greenhouse gas. it will rudeuce accitents. less people willl be fined so tht means more money for you. congestion was down 60 percent so thats good in the capital of france after five days of intensifying smog. cold nights and warms days caused the warmer layer of air to trap car emissions. the united states has a program called the environmental protoction agency is promting car reduced communities and, ligislators are satrting to act.\n\ndisel fuel was blamed since france has a tax poloicy that favors disel over gasoline diseles make up 67 percent of vichles in france compared to a 53.3 percent averqage of desiel engines in the rest of wester europe according to reuters. Delivery companies coplianed of lost revenue while exceptions were made for plug in cars hybrids and the cars carrying three or more passengers. public transit was free of charge from firday to manday according to the bbc.\n\nBogota colombia in a program thats set to spread to other countries millions of colomians hiked biked skated or took buses to work during a car free day yesterday leaving the streets of this capital city eeri",
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"content": "It within obligations human beings dreams want convert reality Al Smith s dream dirigibles land empire state building one I d consider rather erratic There many obstacles proved early fate project failure It apparent early constructions surreal one obstacle expanded life New York City lack suitable landing area paragraph Having dirigibles cruising large city perceivably impossible Al Smith even construction building occurred Safety also something seriously taken consideration since dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable also intertwined laws objects flying low urban area paragraph",
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"content": "How much value would come out of going to Venus? Scientists have tried many times to study Venus. Unfortunatley, they've always come out as failures. People could argue that the effort of studying Venus is useless and ineffective. However, scientists have little to no knowledge of how the planets in our solar system were made. Scientists could have more knowledge of Venus if they found a way to study the planet. The author of the article is right about the exploration of Venus being a worthy pursuit.\n\nThe author of the article does mention how difficult it is to study Venus by bringing up the planet's harsh atmosphere in Paragraph 3. Which further proves his point how valuable it is to study Venus. He also points out that Venus may have been a lot like Earth a long time ago in Paragraph 4. This doesn't just further our understanding of Venus, but it may also give us more information about Earth as well.\n\nIn Paragraph 5, the author mentions NASA's plans on how to study Venus. He does mention that those plans may have challenges fo their own in Paragraph 6. The author pushes to try those plans out in a realistic manner. The author being realistic with the reader, makes the reader want agree with him more.\n\nThe author backs up his suggestion with great evidence, but does it in a realistic way. He realizes how dangerous it is to study, but pushes for it by bringing up how little we know about Venus. The author's suggestion is correct and scientists need to find a way to study Venus.",
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"content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author presents some positive and negative aspects of driverless cars, but that idea of bring cars onto the roads should be allowed and not against the law.\n\nAccording to the text, driverless cars from google are being imporved and developing so that they can reach the goal of one day no one buying cars because people wont need it. Sergey Brin envisions a future with a public transportation system where fleets of driverless cars form a public-transport taxi system.\n\nOne of the benifits of having driverless cars one day in the future would be going to places far without getting lost. People sometimes when they are in a hurry or trying to find their destination to where they are going is getting lost. Not every one in this world knows where every place is at and how to get to them, but GPS receivers within the car can help them get there and staying on track without getting lost.\n\nOn the other hand, some if not many people would think that driverless cars should not be put on the roads due to the fact that they can maufunction at anytime and at any place. First, most people probably wound't want to still drive if in any case being told to drive due to cautions on the roads. Second, in most states its illegal even to test and drive computer-driven cars. But also in some states they do allow but limited use of semi-autonomour cars. However, people would be happy even if they didnt like the idea of driverless cars on the roads because they could enjoy their rides where ever they are going to.\n\nOne day in the future there will be cars that will be driving themselves after the passenger puts in all the correct details about where he or she is going to. The author wants to see a day when there will be driverless cars on the roads, which could happen at anytime when they get improved.",
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"content": "The modern car is a major travel source in which millions of people rely on daily. The issue with this is the struggle of being stopped at lights or being in a traffic jam. The quintessential point here is that greenhouse gases will be lowered in mass amounts if we limit our car usage. Varying countries are supportive of having car free environments/areas. Some being Germany, France, Columbia, and the U.S.\n\nElisabeth Rosenthal describes a community in Germany. Each owner of a house in the neighborhood is allowed to own a car but has to pay a fee of $40,000 to receive a spot. In this neighborhood of Vauban, there is no need for a car because stores are located next to the neighborhood which is \"Placed a walk away\" and is very efficient. \"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse emmisions in Europe...\" Vauban is in an attempt to lower these numbers because the thought of owning a car here is \"frowned upon\" because all essential stores are in walking distance.\n\nThe city of Paris was suffering from a smog epidemic and had to enforce a no driving ban. \"Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog...\" The French people that were usually driving were not here, so roads and major highways freed up which allows for more free room. The smog also was depleting due to a decrease of car usage.\n\nColumbia is using a yearly plan for a car-free day which brings open streets to the city of Bogota. The advantage of this limited car usage is the promotion of alternate transportation and reduction of smog. \"It's a good opppurtunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\" said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza in Source three. When it comes to mind, driving can make a day more stressful which hinders work performance. The outstanding responces from this event brought \"Two other Colombian cities, Cali and Valledupar...\" into the event. \"Parks and sport centers also have bloomed throughout the city...\" The community of Bogota took a chance to bring their lives closer by incorporating new businesses into a walkable distance from neighborhoods.\n\nAccording to research, \"Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licences as each year goes by...\" this also provides less Greenhouse gas effects on the environment. A main factor in reducing traffic jams/greenhouse gases is the new plans that bring hope to those who are skeptical about switching over to car-free. \"New york's new bike-sharing program and its skyrocketing bridge and tunnel tolls...\" Biking is an excellent alternative to driving because it is fast and efficient. Another plan was provided by the Moblie World Congress, \"Barcelona, Spain, Bill Ford, executive chairman of the Ford Motor Company, laid out a business plan for a world in which personal vehicle ownership is impractical...\" As stated, big motor vehicle companies are trying to reduce the practicality of owning a car as soociety turns its head towards a car-free environment.\n\nCars are a very fast port of transportation but carry a burden of bad factors. Pollution has increased over the times in which cars have been overused and is the leading cause for an increase in Greenhouse gases. If we limit our car usage, we can create an almost free pollution zone and free up much needed space for other activites than miles upon miles of driving roads.",
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"content": "I'm against the development of driverless cars. I believe that driverless cars will become a problem to society if they're released nation-wide for public use. Also, I think these computer-driven cars will have many issues with them. Just like the article states in paragraph 9, \"..., who is at fault, the driver or the manufacturer.\" This would become a big issue with driverless cars.\n\nWhat happens if your on a busy highway, your driving in your computer-driven car, and all of a sudden your car shuts down because of technical problems? What do you do then? Issues like this can cause major problems, accidents, and maybe even death with these driverless cars. In the text it states, \"...more states will follow as soon as the cars are proved more reliably safe.\" Even if this is possible, how do even know for sure that these cars won't have technical problems with them even if they're proved 'reliably safe'? If you fixed these technical problems with the cars, I believe more would pop up endlessly. Right now we already have problems with car wreck. Drinking and driving, texting and driving, and etc. Adding driverless cars into the mix of all these other problems is just causing more death, and injuries throughout the United States.\n\nWho is to blame if you were to get into an accident in a driverless car? Was it the driver or the manufacturer? This would cause great controversy throughout our nation. If you were to get into an accident with these cars I believe that it would the manufacturer's fault. In order to have these computer-driven cars they need to be flawless. Although, that will never happen because nothing is perfect. So why throw a flawed computer-driven car into the streets and highways when you know that these computers will functionally mess up?\n\nThese are my reasons why I am against the production of driverless cars. There are too many problems that can cause harm to people with this type of technology. It would also cause too much controversy, and court-issues over who's fault it would be if somebody was to get into a wreck with a computer-driven car. This is why these cars should never be in development or use nationwide, or even worldwide.",
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"content": "The discussion about whether or not advertisement has a significant influence on people in terms of making decisions raises a thorny question in today's complex society. Although there are good arguments in favour of people claiming there is no real impact, I strongly believe that human's decision-making process can be affected by advertising.\r\n\r\nThere are several reasons why a decision-making process could not be driven by advertisement. The main cause is that people are already aware of the purpose of the advertisement company. Therefore, most people consider that they try to sell their own product or others' goods. In other words, they just want to tempt us to buy something by using fake advertising, so many people know this and dont do the shopping by going to the physical store or online. For example, energy drinks being displayed on TV are claimed to give energy to people truly, but it is totally wrong. And most of us know that it does not have any influence on people.\r\n\r\nDespite the above arguments, I tend to believe that advertising is created in order to affect people's decisions before being made. It can be argued that promotions showed frequently on TV could probably permeate into peoples' subconscious. Thus, companies are paying a whopping amount of money to make people buy their commodities. It is obvious that governments are also using advertising to make a demand for any kind of product. For instance, they can advertise a machine which is fuelled by charcoal, as a result, this product can be bought by people and the demand for charcoal will be increased automatically. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, despite some facts that show there is little or no impact in the view of people's decision-making process, I am inclined to believe that advertising can be absorbed by our mind and can have a great influence on decisions made by us.",
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