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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology that can read your face? Wow, isn't that amazing! I've never heard of anything like it, and i thought no one would ever make anything like this! Also to try and ues it on a classroom of kids? Amazing! To create such technology had to have been super difficult. Although, it didn't seem so impossible for Porf. Thomas Huang and Prof. Nicu Sebe, the creators of the Facial Action Coding System, to create such an amazing computer system!\n\nWhile reading this artical I thought to myself, \"I wonder what it would be like to try and use this technology to read my peers emotions when I ask them if they are okay?\", when I ask them I usually grt the sholder shrug, a sigh, or they just don't answer. But to use this technology and get an answer to the question I ask almost on a daily basis, would be amazing! I bet the teachers would love it too, because they could tell if the students really felt on a lesson, or if they just don't care enough to pay attention to what the teacher is saying.\n\nAlso if we could use this technology say, for example, two students get into a fight and neither one of them will tell how they feel about the situation, we could just use this to read how they feel, then adress the sitiation the way it needs to be. The technology could also be used for things such as theropy, for those who really don't know how to describe their feelings, or just want to be left alone to think. It could also help with seeing how people feel about diffrent situations, and they just don't want to speak up. Or if a student is getting bullied, and they don't want to talk about how they feel about it, read their face.\n\nThis new technology could be a great thing for the future. Using it to try and understand how students feel is a good thing. But also I do feel students have a choice, a choice that means if they want to have their face's read or not. If the student doesn't want their face to be read, then so be it. If the student is willing to have their face read, then so be it.\n\nIn conclusion to this essay, I find it amazing how Prof. Huang and Prof. Sebe were able to create something as amzaing as this! Jus t being able to read the face of a human is hard for people to do, but now with this new technology, we can do so much! Because a picture, in this case a face, can say a thousand words. And we can add even more words to the statement with the new Facial Action Coding System.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everyone has their own opinion or view on certain things. Some people are having this argument or debate you could say on rather we should have driverless cars or not. Other people probably havn't even heard about this new possibility. From my point of view i dont think we should have them and i will give you some reasons why.\n\nFirst, Im going to start with the question that was also asked in paragragh 9. \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault-- the driver or the manufacturer?\" If a sensor fails or any of the technology and someone is injured who is to blame. Another big thing who is getting charged? Who has to pay for the damages of the car and or the person. Also it would be hard on the business as ill explain in my next paragraph.\n\nSecondly, How its going to effect the business or businesses. If there are reports of the driverless cars messing up and injuring people it would be bad for the sales. It says in the passage that BMW joined the \"program\" i guess you can say by adding traffic jam assistants. What if something goes wrong? Then the BMW business will be effected negitively by the bad reports on the cars they are putting out on the streets.\n\nIn conclution, I do not think that the driverless cars should be released and starting on the street. They could be very dangerous if any little thing went wrong. Also there will be many cases fought on the resposibility of the accidents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using Facial Action Coding System or F.A.C.S. is something that could be used in many ways like in the criminal justice area, in identifying what the criminal is thinking during interragation or while they were committing the crime. The technology can also be used in the field of politics, understanding politcians attitudes and emotions towards certain subjects and opinions. But using the technology to read students emotions in a classroom is unneccesary.\n\nThe reasons why I believe that using the technology to understand the other students emotions is unneccesary is because school is not about understanding the emotinos of your classmates, school is about learning and gettig an education to benfeit the future of the students. Another reason why i believe the technology shouldn't be used is because many of the upgrades happening in school now are too complex for some teachers and students now, so i dont see any benefit from it. The possible benefit from using this technology in schools is related to what Dr Huang said in paragraph 6 \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored...Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"\n\nusing the technology to better understand the learning habits of studetns and better explain the lesson and teach the material as it should towards the students, is a possible way for the technology to enter schools around the country but any reason other than that, i do not see it as a benefit, nor neccesary.\n\nUsing F.A.C.S. isn't bad if used correctly, a teacher can just communicate with the class and understand their emotions by talking to them, they dont need technology to understand their students and better their teaching, it would just be a waist of time and money. F.A.C.S. could be used in mulitple and beneficial ways than just idenetifying students emotions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir love To start Narciso much love appreciation parents decision immigrate In paragraph Narciso says There way express gratitude spirit generosity impressed upon early age The purpose author writing strongly show truly greatful Narciso hardships parents endure give better life And also show love Narciso always parents Next author also expresses important family friends Narciso In paragraph two Narciso explains true love family friends Here innocence childhood congregation family friends endless celebrations encompassed formed backdrop life warm home This quote shows immensely immportant family friends involvement life In conclusion author purposfully showed important parents family friends grasp meaning love feels family", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars have been argued and talked about for years. There are many aspects that make the driverless car seem irresistable. However, there are a few concerns about driverless cars that are completely understandable. Driverless cars are a positive asset for this country. These cars will shape our future and change our world for the better. There have been many bumps in the road for the developement of driverless cars. This will not deter the developers though and many people are still working on them today. Not only will they help form our future, they will help improve the present.\n\nCurrently, only a few companies are working on driverless cars. Some of these companies include, General Motors, Google, and BMW. The birth of driverless cars started with special tracks that the cars could drive on. In the late 1950s, General Motors worked on a car that would run on a certain road. This road sent radio signals to the car itself and this is how the car would drive. This supported the idea that we didn't need a smarter car; we needed a smarted road. This system worked incredibly well; however, this idea was too expensive. After the reality of special tracks failed, engineers started working on smarter cars. This created a problem at first because the technology was not yet advanced enough to create driverless cars.\n\nIn 2013, BMW had developed a car that could handle driving up to twenty-five miles per hour. The driver still had to pay attention to drive occasionally and the car wasn't perfect. Google had been working on a car that could drive itself since 2009. In the reading it talks about how the technology to create driverless cars was not there. Sebastian Thrun, founder of the Google Car project mentions, \"There was no way, before 2000, to make something intersting.\" He is refering to the driverless cars. The cars made in 2009 were suprisingly successful. However, the cars were not one hundred percent driverless. The google cars still needed a driver that could take over in certain conditions. This brought up the arguemtn, would people want a driverless car that they had to drive. However, in a few years the technology should be able to make these cars almost completely driverless. The argument of allowing driverless cars is on-going. There are many facts that make using driverless car seem like a good idea\n\nOne of the facts that support the driverless car is that by using driverless cars, we would use half the fuel of today's taxi system. This means we would save more money, and save the planet at the exact same time. The driverless car would have more flexibility than a bus as well. You would call the car to your house and then let it take you wherever you needed to go. A driverless car would allow for shorter travel times because the driver would be able to take breaks. This would result in the driver arriving places quicker. Driverless cars would decrease the amount of crashes as well. These cars would eliminate human error while driving. Stop lights would not be run, and police wouldn't have to chase after cars because they would have to go the speed limit. This would cause the crime rate to go down as well. The last thing needed to have driverless cars on the road is making in legal in more states. A passage from the reading states, \"California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Colimbia have led the country in allowing limited use of semi-autonomous car.\" The cars driven in these states have been relatively sucessful. The rest of the country should use this as an example and consider allowing driverless cars.\n\nDriverless cars are an idea of the future. However, that future is closer than many believe. These cars will limit gas, reduce crime rate, and decrese travel time. Driverless cars are an incredibly brilliant idea for America and soon the whole planet. The technology will soon allow for completely driverless cars. This will improve the world. Driverless cars are a positive asset for this country. Hopefully, driverless cars will be incorporated in daily life soon. In conclusion, instead of stressing out about driving, people will be able to sit back and let the car drive.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever patience I believe patience I think patience something weall need futher You patience fair lunch line teaching dog tricks Im going talk patience fair You patience fair When line rides need patience When getting tickets bradet need patience That one way need patience Now lunch line You need patience We going eat wait I people time didnt patience Thats another way patience Now teaching dog tricks CAPS one need lot patience You cant expect dog know tricks working progress You need slow patience That need patient You need patience fair lunch line teaching dog tricks At fair need patient At school need patience At home need patience That patience important", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The electoral college in many peoples eyes is a good thing but, there is a majority of other people who would much rather have a more direct vote because all though one president got the popular vote among the voters, the electoral votes count differently. One direct vote could count for ten votes or it could count for two votes and most people would rather have their vote count as just their vote. Electoral votes in a lot of peoples minds is just unfair all around. One president could be the favorite among the voters but the electors the president has to back him up with electoral votes could maybe not be as big as another presidents electors and its pretty much, in many peoples eyes, giving the least popular among the people president an easier way to become president.\n\nAdults that vote like knowing that their vote really counts for the person theyre voting for. That is why people would much rather have a direct way of voting than the electoral college, which is taking one vote from one person, and say there are thirty electors in that one slab for the person you voted for, and giving that person thirty votes for the person they want elected. People find this way of voting unfair because they dont like the fact that the person they voted for could get the most popular votes, but the number of electors there are for the person is not very many, so their votes count as less than others do. Many feel that they are being deprived of their right to vote because one person could be voting but they get 10 votes while another peson could be votin and only get 6 and its not equal for all people.\n\nPeople who vote for a president that gets the most popular votes, and they dont win the election, can start big disputes among the way the elections are carried out. When a president wins only the electoral votes and not the popular vote, many dont feel like they are actually their president. Most people would prefer direct voting because it actaully makes everybodys votes count equally and everybody has equality. Winning electoral votes doesnt show that you won because the majority of people wanted you to win, it shows you have many supporters to give you more votes through the electoral college.\n\nDirect voting would be a better way to vote so that everybody felt like their votes really counted towards who they voted for and that they arent getting cheated because one president has more electors supporting them. The electoral college is not based on equality because everybodys votes count differently due to supporters or electors who are pretty much the ones getting the votes. fixing the way people vote and how they vote can change the way some people feel towards the preident no matter who they are. Let the people vote for who they want and not the electors because it would make more people more open to vote than there are now.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story paragraph show Saengs determination Saeng lot misses like home She feels different place still strong Life goes paragraph shows Saeng move The paragraph says in spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test again Spring come nothing stop time The snow melt weather changes The geese fly home hibiscus bloom spring Saeng takes positive look things decides join Sure failed strong willing try If first dont succeed try try Saeng always memories home willing change new sorroundings The concluding paragraph shows Saengs determination succeed survive new world", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you have wonder if you could go to the store with out diving. In the world today technolgie has change and the world as change. In the world today people are scared or don't even want to drive. Most people say it's not possible to get a car to take you places.\n\nWouldn't be great to get a car that drives by its self. Google confounder Sergey Brin has been working to get cars to drive by them self so the driver don't have to drive. Sergey Brin said it would only half the fuel you use today, it will also make sure you will be save and it will tell you when you willl need to take over and drive yourself. People in the world today has been getting into alot of crashes and not following the rules. These cars will be so smart it will tell you when you have to take over it will also tell you when you need gas or other things in your car. These cars will be one of the smartest things you will ever see. Just think how smart your phone is, your car will be twice as smarter than anything in this world. The smart cars will stop you when you are about to hit something. Just think when you are driving and you get scared and don't know what to do the car will push the breaks for you and you don't have to worry about anything.\n\nIf people are worried about the laws the car will take care of it. Most driver today when they drive they do stupid stuff or drive very carful, but what if you get scared and you have no idea what to do. The new car will take care of anything you will ask it to do. Some people are saying whatever if i dont trust it if you don't trust it you will have control of your car still you don't even have to let it do its own thing. People can sill control it and do whatever you want like it was the same car. Mercedes and Benz, Adui, and Nissan plan to have cars drive by them self in 2020. They are still looking to see what all they can do but they think in 2020 that people today don't have to drive there cars anymore.\n\nHow would it be to be able to drive with even touching the car. The world has change so much and it is still changing today. We will just have to wait and see what 2020 brings to us.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everyday, something new is introduced into world. Technology is improving and will continue to improve as the years pass. Wheather it is a new flat screen television, a touchscreen watch, or an even thinner and faster smarphone they will all be introduced at some point or another in the years that are to come. All\n\nof these new inventions are faster, newer, better, and this is what makes them so fascinating. Driverless cars may be the new addition to our already technology-dependent society. Even though the idea of them being implemented sounds fascinating, the development of such cars is not going to have a positive impact of our society. These negative aspects may be disrigarded. Therefore, many of the risks that come with this new invention must be considered.\n\nOne of the most important points that must be considered regarding the addition of driverless cards is that technology in general is not perfect. Many times people tend to become too reliable on technolgy as they hold on to the belief that because everything is planned and computarized that there will be no mistakes and no accidents. To prove that this technology may at some points fail the article metions, \"These smart-road systems worked surprisingly well, but they required massive upgrades to existing roads.\" These cars are still far from achieving perfection and they still need a large amount of upgrades for them to be completely safe.\n\nIn addition, these cars still need human assistance, also proving that they are not completly ready to drive on their own. Car accidents occur every day, many of them are caused because the drivers was distracted, bored, maybe even to the point of almost being asleep. If people are given the opportunity to own a car that dives itself, they are defnitely not going to be paying attention to the road when they are given the opportunity to have their attention somewhere else. The article clearly states, \"This means the human driver must remain alert and be ready to take over when the situation requires.\" Humans, however, love to multitask, and there will never be a hudred percent guarantee that the car will be recieving a human driver's full attention.\n\nFurthermore, these cars will not be abailable to everybody specially with the amount of new technology and upgrades they must include for them to be fully safe and functionable. Each piece in the car has a different cost, in fact the article says, \"something that was simply too expensive to be practical.\" Indeed, these cars will have a definite high price once they are perfectioned. Many people will not be able to afford these types of cars and this may lead to a conflict between the people who will be able to afford them and the people who will not. The higher class in our society who may be able to afford such technology will be clearly distinguished from those who will not and this will lead to a socioeconomic gap between the high class, the middle class, and the low class. This also ties in with the concerns that will be brought up in roads while driving. Will the cars that drive themselves receive the same rights and laws from the cars who do not? Clearly, these cars wil bring up a chain up issues that our society is not ready to deal with.\n\nAll in all, driverless cars will bring up issues and negative results in our society that will eventually present themselves alltogether with the development of such cars. There would be too much to risk, for something that is being introduced just because of how \"fun\" or \"fascinating\" they are, like mentioned in the article. Society will be reimain a safer and sympler environment the way it is now. If these cars are introduced, it would not just be each indivudual life put at risk, but our society and future as a whole.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are no doubt going to be the future of the automotive business, making our roads modernized. Having driverless cars will be a great thing for our future. Once everyone starts driving them there will be less accidents, no more gridlock, and the economy will boom.\n\nDue to the huge influx of cash that the automotive business industry would get our economy might possibly pull itself from the grave and make us be able to abolish our debt.\n\nAll throughout history our goal has been to better our way of life by creating new technology for safety reasons and for ease of life. The automotive industry is not exempt from this, throughout history we have been making changes to vehicles so that we may go faster while being safer. One of the ways we do this is with the revolutionary technology of sensors which allow the computers in our vehicles to sense and see things that humans can not. Sensors have gone a long way since they have been invented; at first they were just used to let a computer see things, now they can predict a head on collision or when your going to lose traction on ice. So why not just let them control the car indefinately if they are able to brake, drive, and regain control of the vehicle even better than a human can. This is why there should be driverless cars at some point in our future, hopefully sooner rather than later.\n\nThe one thing holding us back from being able to discover what driverless vehicles are like is the laws that we have set in place so that a vehicle is only safe when their is a human in it driving. What they don't consider when they makes these laws is that if everyone had a driverless car then they would all be programed to drive correctly and in sync without ever needing to worry about trusting another driver or knowing when your turn is at a intersection. The vehicles would be able to sense if the other vehicles are there and be able to decided exactly what they are spose to do without the emotions like trust and doubt clouding its judgement.\n\nDriverless cars is the future of modern technology and the future of road safety. There will be no more gridlock due to sensors and computers talking to eachother. There will be no more worrying about what speed to drive in snow or if it is too icy. The vehicles would be able to tell us all of this and compute it even better than a human could. With how fast our technology including sensors has come since 2000 driverless cars could be right around the corner and be safer, faster, and more. Driverless vehicles are our future and it is a good one.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless car`s In my opinion are a pretty smart idea for the people who lke to be on there phone while driving and risk theres and others life . Or a person who drinking and can get home safely cause he dont have to drive because the smart car will drive for him to get home. The smart car`s can lower the rate of deaths because of drunk drivers and people who text and drive . The smart car can also help with drives who slowly fall asleep at the wheel so they can take it easy but not fall asleep while driving because if the smart car is driving, but the human driver still has to be alert at all times because they may come across a road that takes human skill driving to go through like work site`s, accident`s,etc . In a negative way they can be a bad idea because what if there is a mechanical malfunction with the car itself like a problem that the owner of the car couldnt fix by hand because it had to be done by machines or experts then you wouldnt have a car for the time being . A driverless car still has to have human supervision because basically the human drivier still has to watch the road and watch for pedestrians , animals , and other objects or things going into the road . The smart car has positive and negative things towards it we dont know for sure if we should bring them into the world until the technology becomes even to where they can fix the negative things about them", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One day friend line We ran line wait half hour till got But good thing patient After ride got line WOW What line I think line least hour half got But know really patient The", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "These days, the media’s transcending prosperity would promote influencers to be able to approach many audiences and become their inspiration. Nonetheless, it is believed that these celebrities should not become role models for current generations because property and glamour are the foundations for their popularity. From my perspective, this opinion is completely unreasonable. I will explain my viewpoint in the following paragraphs. \n\nPerhaps for many, this opinion is quite convincing because of several seasons. First, property and fame will be sustainable motivations for off-spring to learn and practice more. To be specific, famous singers or actresses occasionally use social media to update their life which is said to be lavish with overpriced clothes or watches. When teenagers who are main users of the internet community see these KOL’s posts, they will be stimulated to find ways such as learning acting or singing to enjoy a glamorous lifestyle. Second, it does not matter how much money celebrities have, it is the purpose of their money that matters. In fact, there are an ample number of inspirers who possess a great fortune but they utilize this property to help poor people instead of a spending spree. For instance, Ha Anh Tuan, who earned lots of capital through his singing talent, donated most of his finances to help people affected by the calamity. \n\nHowever, the above arguments are insufficient to overshadow the pitfalls of said matter. In its simplest, society will lack talents for research and origination which are the basis for development. From past to present, valuable inventions such as the Internet are important underpins to help humans have a more convenient life while songs or films are only for entertainment. Sadly, Vietnamese singers and models receive more money than most researchers, discouraging young individuals from doing scientific research. Additionally, possessions and popularity are only provisional while knowledge and skills will help humans forever. In reality, Edison, who invented electric light in the 19th century, is still well-known today but most people are unable to name a famous singer of that century. \n\n In conclusion, this issue would promote young people to try hard every day and the abundance of money of these celebrities will help those in need. However, I still protest this opinion because it prevents the evolution of society and these assets or reputation are unstable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "During time many obstacles came play architects building dirigible dock land top Empire State building The builders face situations weather conditions dock The Empire State building high The winds top building constantly shifting due violent air currents The weather conditions occurring high ft building made difficult dirigibles dock making outcome unsafe Builders also face reality existing law airships flying low urban areas law taking action made illegal dirigible even attempt landing docks The main concern obstacles builders constructing landing dock would strong winds would occur The winds powerfull strong blimp would face sharp spires buildings area would puncture dirigible s shell This obstacle weather huge struggle architects making dock dirigibles unsuccessful The obstacles faced constructed dock came outcome dirigibles given away airplanes", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In our century how technology develop, is a very debated topic who divides opinions.Some of us think that this technology has a big impact over our life, while others think that there are some drawbacks in this.In my opinion we have to keep a balance betwen what is modern and sistematic and what is traditional .\r\n\r\nNowadays, more and more peolpe become dependent of technology, children and adults have phones and others gatgets in their home.This is not a bad thing if we do not forget to spend time in free space and do not let that this divices acaparate our time.Some parents use this kind of device to entertain their children, for example the scientists invented a robot called Alexa who is capable to tell stories to children or to interact to a person.I believe that a parent can not be repace by a robot and we have to look after aur children and to try to spend time with them.Many children became addicted by this divices and that cam lead to some disfunctions in their behaviour.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand we have to accept that our society is in continuous develeopment and that robots have their place. For example in medical area there are many robots who help medical personal in their job, we can use robots to in many areas in fabrics, kitchens.Depsite the related negative impacts ,I think that we can find positive effects in using robots in our day life.\r\n\r\nTaking everything into consideration ,I believe that the positive effects of using Robots in our societies overweight the negative effects with one conditions to keep a balance and not let that this kind of device to acaparate our real life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the last ,decades so many people think that teenagers should be work unpaid jobs in their leisure time for the community. They believe if they do that, their development will be affected well. On the other hand, there are several humans who do not think that way. They say ; ‘just a waste of time'. However, I believe free jobs are essential for either young ones or the community for main reasons \r\n\r\nThe first reason is that if individuals work for the community, they become more social and responsible person. Moreover, their relationships are much better among other peers and others. Furthermore, it also affects their communication skills. They easily deal with how talk to stranger person and also approach. Last two decades a lot of young people suffer from lack of communication ability that’s why this is the best way.\r\n\r\nThe second reason is working skills. Nowadays young folks have a serious problem which is the unemployment complication. Several suicides happened last five years owing to this problem and this situation growing sharply. However, if they worked for society at early age, they gain business skills easily that’s why they never suffer from unemployment problems in their further life. There are a few governments that know case and they push their adolescence for free society jobs.\r\n\r\nAll things considered, unpaid works are important for both young people and society. It is essential for their communication and working skills. The governments ought to know this and they should support it through advertisements and educational programs and Parents should encourage their children for this statement.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the near future manufactures of cars are going to make driveless cars. There are arguments going about whether that is a good or bad idea. I think it's a good idea because driveless cars have already been on the road for almost 7 years, the amount of sensors put on the car equal what its like with a human driver, and they have safety features.\n\nIn 2009 Google made the first driveless cars, that was almost 7 years ago. The Google cars drove over 500,000 miles without any wrecks. If you think about how many advancements have been made in seven years, you can only imagine how safe the cars are now.\n\nOn driveless cars the manufactures put a great amount of technology on it equaling what its like with a human driver. Attatched to the car they have a lot of sensors, video cameras, GPS systems, and a laser that makes a 3D image of the car's surroundings at all times. All of the technology attactched to the car can only guarantee nothing but a good driveless driving experince.\n\nLast but not least, the driveless cars are safe! The cars can steer, accelerate, and brake on its own but in a risky or dangerous situation you will drive. For example, if there is a roadblock or construction the car will notify you to drive. Manufactures have worked on different ways to notify the person. In the Google car, it will annonce to you but in other cars you are notified by lights on your windsheild or vibrating seats.\n\nAll in all, I think driveless cars will be a great thing to have in life. It can make the task of driving a lot easier and I hope manufactures release them for people to use in the near future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It was an oppurtunity of a lifetime. There was so much to do, learn, and see. \" When my draft board learned that I was on a cattle-boat trip, they told me to just keep doing that for my service.\" There are many wonderful benefits of participating in the Seagoing Cowboys program.\n\nEveryone should participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. There is so much to see, and learn. A cattle-boat trip was an unbelievable oppurtunity for a small-town boy like me. I had the side benefits of seeing Europe and China, we also saw Acropolis in Venice, Italy, a city with street of water. I toured the an excavating castle in Crete and marveled at the Panama Cnal on his way to China.\n\nI could have possibly been drafted earlier then I was. \"When my draft board learnd thta was on a cattle-boat trip, they told me to just keep doing what I was doing for my service. Many apposing sides may argue that joining the Seagoing Cowboys is a rediciolus, idea. I disagree when people say there is a danger of joing the Seagoing Cowboys.\n\nTo conclude there are sentimental memories in joining the Seagoing Cowboys,and many values. There are great lessons to learn things to see.\n\nThe oppurtunity is something you will not want to miss out on. The amazing feeling you get from joining is nothing that you will ever believe until you join.\n\nThere are many new friends, fun, enjoyable sights, and lessons to learn.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Once I airport We coming home After got plane go customs There two people working citizens The line long After half hour half way line There lot waiting lot whining finally made Of course thanked us patience passport stamped way next flight", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It another warm muggy best friend decided go friend house As soon walked three mile walk get house realizes forgot phone charger house We nt want walk way back house ride either none us license yet parents nt home So start brainstorm get back house retrieve cell phone charger suddenly We heard loud bang come backyard old rugged shed back dark corner yard I go check see noise open shed one dirt bikes fallen I pull dirt bike old spiderweb infested shed got lightbulb heads suddenly looked idea smart figure ride dirt bike three mils back house main roads fine tells idea says bad idea mom home nt want us getting trouble phone charger repeatedly tells us put dirt bikes back next thing know bike front testing around neighbor hood I tell since one dirt bike take ill follow bike next thing know side side riding dirt bike bike busiest road town pitch black outside PERSON go ill meet yell takes road mph im yards behind suddenly I see white figure start creep driveway cant quite make When suddenly see flashing red blue lights try warn shout PERSON yet far away hear since pitch black outside lights light whole street tries loose going side road match charger cop car It s hands I bike back jeremys house get run scene crime see whats happening keep distance act like nt know cop cuffs standing behind cop car cop goes back car write ticket I see shadows street light throw something bushs Since nt dirt bike could nt ride cop calls tow truck take bike cop gives ride home tickets As soon leave scene I go check see threw bush s chew minor grab next day home parents work I bring chew starts tel us mom punished suddenly heard garage door start open mom home work hand chew I run backyard fence tells tell many people nt want everyone knowing already talk town", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Congestionwas down 60% in the capital of france after five days of intensifying smog\" (duffer par.14). have you ever thought how bad cars are for this planet?\n\n\"Its a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air polution\"(plaza par.24). I think it is a good idea to banned cars for a few days. This is my opinion because if we take cars away then people will see how much more clear the air is, how much easier it is to breath, what good excersie it is for you, it will open some peoples minds about how the enviroment works and how bad cars are for our economy. \"These people are generating a revolutionary change and this is crossing borders\"(riera par.26). It is good because there is so much fog and pollution in the air that it is bad for society and how it is bad for us and the planet that we live on.\n\n\"amaeicas love affair with its vehicles seems to be cooling. when ajusting to the population growth\" (rosenthal par.32).people are realizing that their love with their cars isnt as big as their love for their own life and for their friends and familys lives.\"as of april 2013, the number of miles driven per person was nearly 9% below the peak and equal to where the country was in january 1995. Part of the explanation certainly lines in the recession, because cash-strapper amaericans could not afford new cars, and the unemployed werent going to work anyway\"(rosenthal par.32). people now a days dont have enough money to by a car for themselves because there arent enough jobs for all the people becayuse of the big population growth of america.\n\npeople are using technology to talk to people, and this means that people dont have to drive as often to go talk to someone. \"demographic shifts in the driving population suggest that the trend may accelerste. there hasa been a large drop in the percentage of 16- to 39-year-olds gettin a license\"(sivak par.38). younger people dont really want to drive to places if they can just talk to people on the phone. some people of this society are lazy because they dont want to get up and go places when they have their phones, but sometimes its for a good reason even if they dont know it they are not polluting the air as much as they would be if they drove to their friends/familys house.\n\nhow do you feel about how cars are affecting this planet and the way it works. these ideas and actions people are taking are going around the globe and it is saving the earth one day at a time with one little idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People are impacted a lot by media including newspapers in terms of how they view and perceive the situations they read. I will discuss the reasons for this and why I believe it is rather a neutral situation. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, the public tends to depend on the information they received and trust it undoubtedly. The newspaper does not only contain the real content of the circumstances like name, age or the place of the incident but also how it feels about the occurrence. For example, the editor might put his personal emotion or notion or even hidden words behind the story. Thus, those individuals reading the news could easily have common feelings with the writer and conformed to those ideas. Moreover, the more they consume the information, the more they trust the sources and views of the information. The social will get used to receiving information from the same sources and are likely to have the exact feelings and opinions. For instance, if you support the current Thai prime minister, you will always get the news praising him for doing his best for the country and is against the pro-democracy group. \r\n\r\nI personally view this as a neutral situation as it truly depends on the sources and origin of the news. If they are proof-checking the data and do not try to persuade or mislead the readers or viewers that is rather a positive situation. However, there are publishers or writers who might be supported by some political groups, therefore they might overly support that particular party and hugely affect the viewers' stances. This could be a negative situation. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the effects of the newspaper are entirely based on the contents and the perceptions shown. If it is misleading or way too persuasive, I view it negatively. However, when it provides truth, it is rather a positive incident.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This story time I patient A time I patient I food store waiting food I ordered food took olday give I waited patient Other people still give mine I went outside told granddad give food I told kept asking taking long So I went back food store asked taking long said its coming second Then I set food store I looked friends coming food store So started talking waiting patient food Their names My name I born I raised city oit I patient I get angry I waited So called name said food ready Then I got food told friends Im go home I left Thats story time I patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article Making Mona Lisa Smile by Nick D'Alto, we as readers are told that there is new technology that can read emotions. This technology, created by Professor Nicu Sebe of the University of Amsterdam and Doctor Huang of the Beckman Institute, can detect and read human emotions. With this technology, they are hoping to make computers smarter.\n\nThe creators of the face reader want to use their technology to make computers better. They want to put it in video games to show more complex emotions, or websites to help with better ad revenue. But the best, smartest, and most practical use would be in the classroom. These days, more and more children are dropping out of school. They're bored and don't care about a good education. But if we could make learning fun again, then overall our economy would stabalize. Their would be more kids/adults with more jobs, we could create more technology, we could better the future. But only with the help of the face reader technology. Imagine this, you are 10 years old, doing online work at school. But you're tired of the work and just want to go home already! The computer would pick up on this emotion, and automatically adapt to something that would fit your entertainment style. It would change again and again until you were ready to learn. This technology could give kids the extra push to want to learn. With more people learning we would have no need for computers to do work, we humans could do it all and better. Meaning more jobs, more money, and overall a more stable economy. Less kids would be in summer school, giving them a longer, more enjoyable break, meaning they would be willing to learn on the first day of school. Kids would want to learn, and thats a win by itself.\n\nThere for, it would be the best idea to apply this technology to a classroom. We need the kids of the future to be brighter, smarter, and more adaptible to survive as a species.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The facal reconition is not a good idea because then if you are relaxed the computer might think you are mad or upset. The best thing for this program is to not usit for school computers but for phones. having emotion reconition is not the best idea.\n\nThe reasson it would not be a good idea is because in paragraph 4 \"using video imagry,the new emotion-recogonition softwhere tracks your facial movements...\". This could lead to malfunctions with the computer and why would we need to be told our emotion if we already know what our emotion is.\n\nalso the money you would need to buy the specal computer and the softwhere could get really exspencive.\n\nThe money factors in because in paragraph 7 \" your home PC cant handle the complex algorithms used to decode mona lisa's smile\". The amount of money you would have to spend for a new computer would be a lot and from what it sounds like it is a computer that people cant even carry around with them. What if the computer has a bunch of malfunctions too then what all that money was wasted o something that doesnt even work.\n\nPeople would also have to worrie about others trying to hack the computer even if there is a fire wall to protect it. Schools shouldnt have the emotion reconition in there classes because the teacher would know if a student was confused and didnt know how to do the homework because they would ask for help.\n\nInconclusion the emotion reconition is not a good idea because poeple dont want to carry around a computer just to know what their emotion is. People know what there emotion is with out the special computer. The facial recogonition is just a bad idea.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The face on mars is just a natural landform. Only facts of it show that its just a mesa. And yet conspiracy theorist think that NASA is still covering up alien life.\n\nThe natural landform on mars is located in the Cydonia region of mars is proven to be a mesa by NASA scientist. The first picture of the face made everyone believe it was a face due to unusual shadows. another picture of it made it clear that it was a mesa like on Earth.\n\nConspiracy theorist belive that the face is evidence of alien civillation that nasa would rather hide. The \"Face on Mars\" became a pop icon. The Face starred in a hollywood film and apeared in other media wich may of led to people beliving that the Face was from aliens. In 2001 many people where disapointed when NASA uploaded new photos of the Face proving that it was a mesa or butte.\n\nEvery photo was different but with each new photo the Face was still proven to be a mesa much to everyones disapointment. Not everyone should make acusations without the facts.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although possibly offending people materials libraries could possibly considered offensive actually good keep around If people find materials libraries offensive getting upset lack censorship within library itsself rethink situation consider offensive materials left within libraries could considered appropriate IF viewer ready experience If person want exposed things libraries could considered offensive altogether avoid materials If parents find materials within libraries offensive monitor children visiting library The mateirals could considered offensive actually good educational media person could learn If within libraries increases then books left shelf us libraries remain Some books movies number things found within libraries bieng labeled innapropriate These materials educational however removed libraries altogether materials found crude vulgar adultlike younger ages Parents monitor children library let stumble upon something would want see yet If something labeled innappropriate children view parents parents responsibility make sure thier child stumble upon Much considered innapropriate needing cencoroship libraries day actually hold educational value meaning There books movies based true stories taken place could announced parents not appropriate viewed children However mean libraries remove material shelves parents think necessarily agree would appropriate child read see It parents resposibility see child check would consider innappropriate Much things within libraries might considered innappropriate children hold good eduactional value removed shelves library simply parents find age appropriate children libraries remain want see read stories movies without buy If parents want make big deal libraries hold materials appropriate children either altogether go library monitor children closely bring along library visit I found I visit library I look source knowledge pooled one place written created thousands authors took time lives create If going remove books movies libraries I think would taking away rights people materials SHOULD provided library libraries remain today people enjoy within even labeled innappropriate parents", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Children's behaviour is part of kids learning, and parents have a responsibility to pay attention to their kids, be cautious to observant and do the right things. From my point of view that I agree with punishing their heir by their own parents, but it should in conditions. \r\n\r\nThe action of children mostly come from mimetic vision, which watches surrounding people, teaching from home or school and copying from online media. Accordingly, the duties of parents must have to talk in terms and teach in primary, about what to do in daily life, including imposing conditions when there misbehave. Should impose the conditions with reasoning with their child, if they act mistake in sometimes, parents will warning. But they are doing a mistake several times, and must have infliction in each case. All of the above, in ,terms do not harm children, should be talked about the reasons before and after punishment, to explain the reason why have punished. Punishment at the present time has plenty of definitions from teaching discipline to aggressive torture, in terms of teaching discipline can consult with a kids' psychologist to suggest how to punish in the right way. Moreover, aggressive torture is abusing a child, affecting them mentally and physically, from their acting and wording. The acting of parents conducts the behaviour of children in the future.\r\n\r\nIn my opinion, I prefer to agree with punishing kids if their break the rules, in terms of no abusing and having a consult before inflicting, that does not affect them mentally and physically.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke signed up for the program just to experience what the journey would be like and his friend asked him then they would have to ride with different kinds of animals like horses. Luke made nine trips and was brave to make that choice. But lukes friend decided to invite luke on this trip so luke was pretty glad that his friend invited him. then luke and his friend were asked to take care of horses,young cows,and mules.\n\nLuke then decided to take his traveling a whole new level especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. Luke decided to play games on board like basball,volleyball,table tennis he was also fencing,boxing,reading,and whittling. well being a seagoing cowboy was much more than an adventure for luke bomberger. Luke had so much fun being a seagoing cowboy. and leading his family hosts a number of international students and exchange vistors for many and many years so when people bring up seagoing cowboys they can remenber that it is a jorney. The lesson in this story is that \"you never know whats going to happen if you take a risk\".", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Earth is geting really closely to Mars,Venus. The Earth is right next thoes to plants. Also the plant Mars,Venus are on the side of plant Earth. The plant Venus is sometimes call \"Evening Star,\" that is one of the brightest points of light in the night time.\n\nThe Plant Earth might have a twin plant venus and Plant Venus is also closest\n\nto the Earth. Both of the Pants don't have the same size. Mars have other planetart neighbor like the sun at different speeds. the different speeds means that there closer to mars and different times to venus.\" These differences in speed mean that sometimes we are closer to Mars and other timees to Venus.\"2\n\nNASA have one of the 3 \"particularly compelling\" there idea is to send humans to sutdy in the plants venus. NASA might solutisits to the hostile conditions on the surface. Think about blimp like vehichle hoveering 30 or more then miles. That's\n\nwhat \"The Challenge of Exploring venus\" is about.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author gives good reasons on why we should explore Venus. He/she describes the environmental hazards of the planet in order to explain to us on how NASA can explore and research it more. The author gives reasons on why we should take the risk to explore Venus such as it being closest to Earth, has potential for an earth-like atmoshphere, and can be a good use of planetary visit in the future.\n\nAccording to the article, Venus is the the closest planet to earth after Mars; but that is depending on where we are when orbiting around the solar system. \"Often referred to as Earths twin, Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, and occasionally the closest in distance too\"(Venus 2). This part of the article is what describes the fact that it is similar to Earth. The planet is our neighbor, which makes it easier so that we wouldn't have to use tons of time, energy, and money on something that is too many light years away.\n\nThe author gives info on how Venus may have some Earth-like features which would be good so that we can use it as a secondary planet if something goes horribly wrong with Earth somehow. Venus has been reported to have similar structures such as valleys, mountains, craters, and even potential ocean life. The planet even has weather and similar natural disasters like Earth such as volcanoes, earthquakes, and even lightning stikes. \"Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface\"(Venus 3). These are just some of the reasons the author gives on what potential Venus could have.\n\nFinally, the author thinks that Venus would be a good backup planet to Earth, but it would be difficult to claim the land as ours and so that we could live there without any type of circumstances. The author also gives reasons on why it would be difficult to explore and find a way to live on this planet. But, it would give NASA a challenge on figuring out on what type of innovations they can make up. The author says on paragraph 5,\"NASAs possible solution to the hostile conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray. Imagine a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. Just as our jet airplanes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way\"(Venus 5). These reasons alone can convince the reader that exploring and studying this planet would be worth the hard work and effort put into the inventions. The author could have given some reasons on why another planet to live would be worth THAT much work, but they did a good job otherwise.\n\nThe author has given good reasons and claims that made his or her's article convcing for the most part. They had evidence that can convince us and give us high hopes on what NASA could benifit from. The author wants us to explore Venus because it is closest to Earth, has potential for an earth-like atmoshphere, and can be a good use of planetary visit in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some experts believe that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens anymore satisfied.\n\n In general, there are a lot of transforms in citizens ' lives. We may have more crimes and cue-side all over the town. Firstly , all world people has a different life and properties than other. This could affect poor people for having water, food, cloth, education and more other important essentials. Secondly, there will be more homeless for example in the USA some youth just live in there own car, in the reason, they do not have enough money to buy the house, however, they just buy the car and ran out of money. So they just go anywhere they like, sleep in there car and do not have any home. While, poor people cannot do anything because there changes just for rich people and there will be more poor people than past.\n\n On the other hand, some people think the opposite. They think that they might afford their own money. The reason is that there can be a bad financial conditions in the country. People in that country should be satisfied about any changes by the government or any additional increase for the economiceconomis wealth. Citizens think that there country is alreadycountry already rich, so any additional increase just be the leftover for them.\n\n Overall, a lot of changes are being right now and the changed about the social level of rich and poor will be more clear than ever.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood created author memoir described many ways Here points consider First mood author I think greatfulness For example I currently grateful Which I adore day second mood author appreciation For example I never forget parents turned simple house home I think another mood author definitely love I kno talks love family friends alot For example I never forget house s gracious neighbor hood many things I learned love In conclusion authors moods described many different ways", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Let me tell you why i think \"Driverless Cars Are Coming Soon\" is\n\nbecause its not safe for everyone. I have three reason ehy this should not happen.Some of the reason is Traffic problems,option of smarter roads, and Laws.\n\nOne of the reason why i think \"Driverless Cars\", is a bad idea to have these types of cars. Because what if you in in traffic issues and you getting tried or you drop your cell phone and you put on the Driverless button. And it was a car accident in front of you and you didnt know it. The car can't turn by it self, it can only stay in the stright line. For example, \"Dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents. This is why i think the driverless car should not be envited.\n\nThe second reason is electruaty.I say this beacuse your car is build up with alot of power and liquid and gas and many more.For example, \"Dubbed LIDAR, it uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the car's surroundings.\" I pick this because this is just to much stuff to put in one car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In essay author added many features could picked cyclist jouney One feature water supply running short This shows exactly hot much drinking Another feature would rusty old pipe bad water This shows town abanodoned years water supply wasnt drinking The essay shows hand hot weather lack supplies sense direction", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senator,\n\nI am in favor of keeping the Electoral College or changing it to election by popular vote for the president of the United States. The Electoral College consists of 538 electors. It is very rare that the winner of the electoral vote will not win the national popular vote.\n\nThe U.S Chamber of Commerce and some others agreed to abolishing the electoral college. Because of the quirks of the electoral college, won the popular vote but the electoral college still has its defenders. The electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in return elect the president. Although the electoral vote may be unfair to voters it gives the president a better chance of winning the election. There is a dispute over the outcome of an Electoral Colege vote but not likely for the popular vote. For this is because the winning candidates share of the Electoral vote exceeds it's share of the popular vote. For exemple, Obama received 61.7 percent of the electoral vote compared to 51.3 percent of popular votes for him and Romney, in the 2012's election.\n\nThe Electoral college requires a presidential candidate to have a trans-regional appeal. If you are a regional favorite, as Romney was in the South, there is no need to campaign big in those states becuase no region has enough electoral votes to elect president. Therefore, Romney gains no electoral votes by increasing his popularity in states he knows he will win. It can be argued that the Electoral College method of selecting the president may turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state but, have a less incentive to pay attention to the campaign than they would have if the president were picked by popular vote. Voters in presidential elections are people who want to express a polital preference rather than people who think that a single vote may decide an election.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "New technological developement could be used to tell how your friends are feeling. A computer was program was made to pick apart pieces of a person's face to tell how they feel. This invention has many possible industrial, and practical applications. I believe that this technology has many great, potential uses, but in a classroom, or any educational setting, this technology is essentially pointless and potentially harmful to learning.\n\nMuch is seen by the creators in the possibilities with this software. According to Dr. Huang, as an effective, human instructor would do, the computer would modify the lesson if it recognizes that a student is seen to be bored or confused with a lesson. In my opinion, if that is all that this software has to offer, then there is no reason that it should be in a classroom. The goal here is to create an environment increases learning, but with this invention, I think that it will do otherwise. This is because once the technology is developed and in use, there will be a revolution in how schools will be run. Eventually, schools will want robots running the education system. For now, an intelligent software is mostly likely going to be better than the average teacher; a huge reason why tech will begin to be developed towards reworking how kids are taught. With that, there will be a huge loss of teachers' jobs. Not only that, if robots were to completely replace human teachers, the whole education system would collapse. What would it be like if kids in class had a stone cold and lifeless robot set up a study plan for them? There would be no interest. Engaging a student is the best way to get them to learn, but if teachers were to have robots try to do that for them, then the drive to learn would most likely be diminished; after all, the goal here is to engage the student to increase their performance.\n\nImplementing this educational innovation would be found to have no use, and quite possibly have huge negative effects. With the goal of wanting to better the students' education, this technology will eventually do the opposite in helping a student engage in learning. Replacing humans with computer programs is not the ideal way to improve the education system, as it will destroy a students will to learn. In the end, if having an intelligent, lifeless, and mindless teacher still seems ideal, then what will become of the kids that have been learned from them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The two illustrations descrive the floor plans of strudent accomodation. It is a comparison between 2010 and current. The building expanded slightly be increasing the number of student-bedroom, adding an en-suite room to one of the student rooms, and the carpark being provided.\nIn 2010, there were three student-bedrooms, currently, the location of those rooms remains the same. However, an en-suite room was added to the room located right at the end of the main entrance. Also, two more rooms were added to the building. The fourth room is located where livingroom used to be located back in 2010, and the fifth one on the left side of the fourth room. The livingroom does not exist in the current building. Also the area where the fifth student-room was built used to be a garden.\nThe location and the size of the bathroom and kitchen/social area remains the same between 2010 and now. Outside the building, on the south side, the car parking area was provided.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether a route to a successful career is trough college or going to work straight after school. I think university education can provide a better chance to a successful future.\n\nThe primary factor we need to take into consideration is that having a college degree opens up more opportunities to higher paying jobs. Most positions that pay higher require a more advanced skill set. Universities teach their students one niche of said skills and people who graduate have a better understanding of a specific subject than those who only graduated school. The second benefit of attending college is finding like-minded people who can inspire or provide beneficial connections. Being around individuals who have similar priorities, experiences and goals can inspire to be your best self and dig deeper into the subject if your liking. These people seek a similar future so they can share what research they have done and what people they have encountered that might help you along the journey. Going to university will open up higher paying job opportunities and expose you to inspiring compatible people.\n\nHowever, going to college takes at least four years from your life that you could have spent working and building up your career. Most jobs don’t want to hire people without any work experience to important positions. Starting to work straight after graduating school will give you more time to build your portfolio and gain experience in your desired field.\n\nIt’s a personal choice weather you want to study in a university or find a job straight after school. Both options have their benefits. Going to college can increase your chances of landing a better position after graduating, but not going to university you can aim to the higher positions using your working experience.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe mood memoir happy athor talking first friend land loards daghter great cooking music home greatful parents moving america celibrations people everybody naborhood friends much loved family What unhappy", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The concept of the automobile in the early 1900s was enough to make others pursue the dream of having one. As car dealerships made better looking, faster, high performance cars, the more people wanted them. After World War II when cars became inexpensive, more and more people had them. But it's also becoming an issue. Recently, that trend is going down.\n\nTo begin, the car industry has been at an all time high. We're making cars so fuel efficient, it almost seems impossible. We even have hybrid cars, which run on electric and fuel (respectively). But with all of the cars out there, especially in the US, the pollution in nations and our own cities are at an all time high. China's air pollution is the worst in the world. Nations have been taking the initiative to partially ban car use for a few days. Paris for instance, banned motorists with even-numbered license plates from using their vehicles, switching to odd-numbered the following day.\n\nFurthermore, we have Bogota, Colombia who took a different approach to the rising air pollution. Instead of what Paris did, they banned automobile use in general, for one day. Buses and taxis still ran, but private vehicles did not. This seeminly little feat over time has done wonders on the city. More and more cities, including nations, are beginning this practice.\n\nTo sum things up, we see that there are advantages (and of course disadvantages) to limiting car use. Companies may lose money if they transport items. But as a whole, it's only a few days. Or even one day, that no one drives a vehicle. It's a perfect time to ride a bike, and lower air pollution in a city.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With urbanisation, the population in the cities is growing fast and so is the housing crisis, which brings along with it lots of other problems. Some argue that only government is the appropriate authority to deal with this rising problem. I strongly agree with this argument as the government can solve this growing issue by various steps, such as restricting the new landed residential housing by encouraging vertical apartment buildings and gradually expanding the city.\n\nFirst and foremost, the government is the only appropriate authority to resolve this housing crisis issue by discouraging the building of new landed houses and encouraging vertical multi-storey apartment living with proper planning and infrastructure to deal with this space crunch. For example, Singapore and Hong Kong are the cities on an island, they have proven to solve this crisis for their citizens by vertically building thousands of high-floor flats. These cities have proved to have the best infrastructure for their ever-growing population by building multi-story apartments rather than new houses, which has resulted in economically affordable housing for their citizens in big cities. Further, to help the situation government can extend highways to help commuters access the city easily. This high level of planning can only be done by the government to help solve the accommodation shortages for their citizenry.\n\nSecondly, the government can help this situation by expanding the cities and creating more residential properties on the outskirts of the city. In the Noida, for instance, a fast-growing city in India, the housing development board has continuously helped accommodate the growing population by building more residential properties on the outskirts of the city which eventually became part of the city and built metros and highways for commuters to make the city easily accessible. Hence, this helped in controlling growing cramping and accommodation problems for their locals. \n\nIn conclusion, it is clear that government has a big role to play as an ultimate authority by taking appropriate measures to create highly planned inner-by city development and well-designed infrastructure to accommodate the growing needs of their citizens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some people argue that museums ought to be a place for recreational purposes, while others argue that museums ought to be used solely for educating people. Museums can be used to attract tourists which will benefit the country in the end as it can flourish the economy. In contrast, museums are imperative to educate the public about their art, history and culture. In my opinion, museums should be used for both educational and entertainment purposes.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, museums attract numerous tourists from all around the globe. From an economic perspective, museums generate job opportunities in the market and contribute to the growth of the local economy because of tourists, which will benefit the nation in the end. A museum where people could enjoy and entertain attracts more people than other museums. There are museums where it is not only about history or art, such as the kimchi museum in South Korea and the chocolate museum in Belgium. Hence, since these museums are quite popular among international tourists, museums should be a place to entertain people. \r\n\r\nOn the contrary, museums play a crucial role in educating the public about art, history, science, culture among others. Moreover, it is imperative for educating future generations about their history, culture and roots. Thus, museums are undoubtedly a huge source of knowledge, so it ought to be solely used for educational purposes.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, museums and entertainment purpose both for educational and entertainment purposes. From an economic point of view, enjoyable museums attract a significant number of tourists which will eventually benefit the country, while it is also a huge source of knowledge and plays an important role in educating people about art, history and culture.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article, \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", the author Nick D'Alto explains a new technology coming about at the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illinois. This new piece of technology is call the Facial Action Coding System. This technology is a software that allows computers to read exact facial expressions and emotions of humans. Technology like the Facial Action Coding System has multiple uses in the world, especially classrooms. The Facial Action Coding system is technology of the future that will be essential to a more personalized learning environment in our current education systems.\n\nThe article explains one instance in how the Facial Action Coding System can be used in the classroom. Dr. Huang explains how the computer can monitor students on a computer to see if the student looks bored or confused. Having the computer understand a persons non-verbal communication can act almost as a more personalized and, \"effective human instructor\". The computer recognizing the student's expression can modify the lesson by explaining or staying on a certain page longer until the students facial expression looks like he or she understands the material at hand. The computer could also advance the lesson quicker if the student shows sign of understanding the lesson. This could make for a better and much more effective learning experience for all students. The computer can monitor facial expressions so that every student can learn and understand new material at a speed that is optimized for every student. This optimized learning experience can lead to faster learning of certain material.\n\nAnother way that the Facial Action Coding System can be used in the classroom is to detect how students are feeling when they are learning on a computer. Detecting certain emotions can help make school more interesing for certain students and can provide a better atmosphere for students around them. For example, if a student uses the computer often enough, the Facial Action Coding System will be able the students emotions well enough to make learning new material in school to be an overall more enjoyable experience. Students tend to preform much better in material that they enjoy learning. Because the system is able to detect what internet ads students prefer, it can translate to learning certain material. This system is able to calculate what learning techniques and styles a student doesn't like so it will provide an experience so that a student will be more interested in certain subjects. This system might even go as far as to recognize students emotions of how they feel towards certain subjects to be able to help pick a career that is best suietd for any student.\n\nThe Facial Action Coding system is essential to the futurre learning and education of all students. This new technology system has multiple benefits to being used in the classroom and no negative effects. The system will provide a more optimized learning experience for all students that will help students learn new material, and provide learning techniques that students prefer. This system will make education a more enjoyable experience for students to provide endless benefits. The system has no negative effect and will do nothing but benefit students. The Facial Action Coding System is the future of essential tools in education.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "On May 24, 1976, NASA's Viking one spacecraft was circling mars. It took many photos of landing sites for its sister ship Viking two. As viking one took pictures, it came across a pecuiliar formation on the surface of the planet. The formation seemed to be an enormouse head similar to that of a humans. The scientist figured it was just another Martioan mesa, that was commonly spread throught the surface of Mars.\n\nConspiracy theorists think that it is bona fide evidence that there is life on Mars. Defenders of the NASA budget wish there was an acncient civilization on Mars. And so on April 5, 1998 another Mars global surveyor flew over and took a picture ten times sharper than the original photos. This led the the scientist to conclude and reveal that the face was just a natural land form and that it wasn't an alien monument at all.\n\nSome people were not happy. The face on Mars is located at 41 degrees north of the martian latitude where it was winter in April 1998. This was a coudy time of year on Mars. They had said that the camera the pictures had been taken with had to peer through clouds to see the Face. They believed that the alien markings were hidden by the haze at the time.\n\nOn April 8, 2001, there was a cloudles day on Mars. The surveyor drew close for another picture. They said they increased the image quality to take the best picture they had taken of the face. They added that in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixle size you could see things like airplains, egyptian-style pyramids, or even small shacks.\n\nThis showed people that it was the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa, which are landforms common around the American West. This showed that the conspiracy theorists had been proven wrong. Since NASA actually researches theier data to learn more about it and they make hypothesize, it shows that they have a lot of since in saying that theorists are wrong. Theorist just make theories and they don't have anything to back them up if someone were to arugue about the subject. Conspiracy theorists are not always wrong but in this case they are.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting essay didnt really help author journey There many structures way Either towns said a ghost town couldnt reassured author things going way It also hot journey The author says traveling deserts California June Deserts hot places June summer hottest month extremely hot humid must taken toll never really saw anything reassuring last town reached bait store So setting definitely affected confidence energy levels", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "University is the best place where a student can nurture their thoughts and become bright shining stars.Some people argue that university education is now not at all considered as a premium one for a student ,but on the other hand side most people believe that an academy is a place where we learn our life and its value.In this essay, I will analyse both viewpoints and sum up in a conclusion.\r\n\r\nAcademic life is always considered as one of the beautiful and memorable ones among all the life seasons of humans.We conquer our ambition and all the important life decisions are happening during that period of time,perhaps most of the critical ones.The place where get our life long friends and teachers with whom we spent most of our time ,after Parents this two category of people always have a crucial role in our lives.University is a place where we study a lot of things rather than from books and that is called experience , which is required for a successful career and life as well.\r\n\r\nEven though when we think about the other side of the coin ,tremendous advancement in technology helped to make growth easier , so as with the studies as well. The knowledge we can acquire from the internet is limitless, the lecturers happening in the classroom are all from that itself .So if we have a keen interest to know about something internet surfing itself is the best teacher.Moreover, the tuition fee that is needed for doing graduation or professional degree is much so it will always force the students to end up in low budget learning .\r\n\r\nTo conclude , we can gather every single knowledge through the internet and will have several online platforms to get a detailed lecture on every topic for a student. However, this advancement in technology will not help us to create good relationships and bonding which contributes to the development of the interpersonal skills of a human being which in turn helps them to be successful in their life and career.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Every single person beliefs disbeliefs comes books music anything life matter What bad vulgar book opinion bad others opinionated views Everyone views book music movies magazines That s censorship good public place like library Does mean re saying ca nt like want like listen want lisetn watch want watch home No censoring public places like librarys say video stores helping fight lot trouble concerns could happen future Then censoring movies music books magazines library could also bad thing Not everyone going like things interested movies books At time though ca nt censor every single thing someone nt like By removing something one parent complaint child watching reading book thought vulgar giving right parent complains child It s librarys responsibility watch everyones child make sure watch read parents want Kids kids ll want By censoring taking things shelfs librarys preventing watching movie nt seeing reading book re supposed reading Censoring librarys like censoring words movies s stopping child hearing learing vulgar language Children day age hear vulgar words school movies television What word offensive really mean person Everyone opinion whats offensive whats Like said everyone opinions views life everything You ca nt remove everything shelfs one parent nt think s right child children seeing looking listening We freedom look want listen kind music feel like listening By taking things shelfs maybe people like oppose others taking right away citizen Censoring things like sex scenes movies maybe vulgar language music alright opinion Taking books shelf nt like way written nt like person wrote nt like kind language author decided use nt alright re pushing limit one Books teach kids things everyday books give children imagination By taking books shelfs think re hurting childs ability grow Censoring good bad thing It could hurt children could help ability grow Censoring things good thing like said everything vulgar language censored vulgar scences Sometimes order grow live world children need read see things people books movies", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This article is talking about the the planetary neighbors of the Earth. on this article explains how others planets move around the sun and the earth,how are thir differences between the speed of this planets. Also explains why the humans never visit this planets, and how are their enviorment.\n\nVenus, somethimes called the \"Evenig Star\" is the closest planet to Earth. this planets have differents such as, the size between their, the speed that they move around the sun, this speed mean tht sometimes we are closer to Mars and other times to Venus.\n\nThe big question here is, why humans never visited this planets in more l tha three decades. Each previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, no since no spacecraft survived the landing for more that a few hours. Numerous factors contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite its proximity to us.\n\nA thick atmosphere of almost 97% carbon dioxide blankets Venus. On the planet's surface temperatures average oner 800 degrees Fathrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet. Also notable, Venus has the hottest sufrace temperature of any planet of solar system, wheather present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, and powerful earthquakes.\n\nThe National Aeronautics Space Administration (NASA) has one particulary idea for sending humans to study Venus, Venus would aviod the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up andout of their way, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahrenheit. No easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\n\nHowever, Venus can provide only limited insinght on ground conditions because most forms on light cannot penetrate the dense atmosphere. Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.\n\nFor now humans can't go to explore others planes as Venus, but I think with the step of the time, humans are going to envolving more on their technologies. Something that everyone know clearly, both planets as Mars and Venus have a lot of differences between our planet. Can humans can go to others planes in next close years?\n\nBy: Alex\n\n:)", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting affects alot cyclist For example city seel rush tired everweled But forest happy bit less stress A setting sets mode also attude story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author happy satisfied family want family done The author appriciate parents done parents immigrated Cuba He dedicates learned cooking manners friendship parents The author admires strenght preseverance thanked repeatedly overall author could better family showed live families accomplish", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, a large number of people tend to buy items such as clothes, cars and other things from reputable companies. The reasons will be discussed in this essay and in my opinion, this trend both has advantages and drawbacks in equal measure.\r\n\r\nThere are several causes of why more and more people prefer owning luxurious products. Firstly, due to the beliefs on personal possession reflecting wealth, personal status and appearance, many people use clothes, accessories from a popular brand. For example, many consumers buy shoes from Nike or Adidas because it helps them to enhance their appearance. Another reasons are that exorbitant-priced products of famous brands are made of expensive materials and unique feature, so they are always high-qualified, highly durable. Using these goods would bring more comfort to the users and also save more money in the long period than massive products.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the increasing number of people buying good items from large enterprises can bring both benefits and disadvantages to the business world. Countries, where famous brand are based on, are more likely to have strong an healthy economy. The US - the home of many famous brands such as Apple or Microsoft, for instance, has been the most powerful economic since the late 20th century when the products of these organizations are not only popular in domestic but also favored in foreign nations. However, the rise in the number of large brand names can lead to the monopoly as they will attempt to dominate and wipe out small rivals to maintain their positions.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the tendency of consuming goods from famous brands comes from people’s perception of personal belongings showing their fortune and the high qualification for those expensive products. This trend has a positive and negative effect on the business market", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I do not believe we should use this on any students because for the fact it reads all of our emotions, which we don't always like to show now. This is one of thr reasons I wouldn't have it, \"The process begins when the computer costructs a 3-D computer model of the face,\" to me that just sounds like something may go wrong for the fact we have the same kind of camrea for the Iphone and people have trouble with that. Another problem for his idea is, \"That facial expressions for each emotion are universal,\" I really don't know about the meaning of this but it doesn't sound good to me either. These to me are just some of the reasons I wouldn't want this arounds school and lastly I would want them in schools because then I believe it will make schools have more bullies if someone had one and they used it. Plus they say that technology is going to take over the world, this just might be another reason for this to may be happen.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Life without cars may seem like a distant dream, but dreams are becoming a reality with new expiremental towns, banning of driving in some cities, and a national day without cars. Cars are causing, in some cases, more and more pollution everywhere. Although we ignore the signs of pollution everyday, we must face the fact that we are polluting our planet, and something needs to be done about it.\n\nVauban, Germany. A little city that has a strange law, to live in this city, you must give up your car or pay $40,000 to park it. As a result, \"70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars, and 57 percent sold their car to move here\" stated Source 1. Heidrun Walter, a mother of two and a media trainer stated, \"When i had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way\". This new form of seperate suburban life from auto use is called \"Smart Planning\". passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissionsin Europe, and up to 50 percent in the United States. With Smart Planning, we can cut back on greenhouse gasses and start to breathe cleaner, healthier air.\n\nAnother example of over pollution problems due to cars is Paris, France. Source Two states, \"After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city\". Congestion was down 60 percent for those five days. The reason there was so much smog in the air was due to the diesel fuel. Diesel fuel is the mail fuel used in France, 67 percent of the people there use it. Another factor could be the climate there. With \"cold nights and warm days caused by the warmer layer of air to trap car emissions\" Stated in Source Two.\n\nEurope isn't the only continent seeing change. Bogota, Colombia was celebrating its 3rd straight year of, Day Without Cars. The Day Without Cars is a banning of cars and only busses and taxis are permitted. Carlos Arturo Plaza stated, \"It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution\". For the first time this year, two more Colombian cities, Cali and Valledupar are taking part in this Day Without Cars.\n\nAmerica too is seeing change with cars. The number of miles driven in the US peaked in 2005, but has been steadily dropping after. As of April 2013, 'the number of miles driven per person was nearly 9 percent below the peak and equal to where the county was in January 1995\", states Source four. Although the drop in car usage will have a benificial effect on the environment, it will have negitave implications for car industries. Ford and Mercedes are already taking steps to rebrand themselves to \"mobility\" companies. Although car companies aren't the only ones changing their ways due to the drop in car usage. New York started a new bike-sharing program and its skyrocketing. They have started building more bike paths and tunnel tolls are reflecting the new priorities.\n\nCars have done enough damage to this earth and its time we fix what we have caused. With all these new eco-friendly and car lacking ideas, we are so close to the isea where we can live without cars taking over our life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This essay will be about the advantages of limiting car usage. On the outskirts of Freiburg near the French and Swiss borders, parking on the street, your driveway, and your home garage are forbidden. In the streets of Vaubans its car free. Except the main throughfare, the tram to downtown. \"As a result, 70 percent of vaubans families do not own cars,and 57 percent sold a car to move here\". The people living here are much happier living here. Heidrun Walter, in the verdant streets the chatter of wandering children drown outh the distant motor.\n\nOn Monday the motorist with the even numberd license plate in Paris were ordred to leave their cars home or they will be fined. 4000 were fined and 27 impounded because of there reaction. Same would aplly to the odd numbers the next day. Paris has enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of global city. Paris has more smog than some European Capitals, because of cold nights and warm days caused the warmer layer of air to trap car pollution. Delivery companies complained of lost product while exceptions were made for plug in cars.\n\nand cars carrying three or more passengers.\n\nBogota, Colombia in a program Bogota colombia in a program set to spread to other countries. Millions of colobians hiked biked skated or took busses to work during a car free day.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the current era, Many individuals are prone to give birth in their older age for various reasons. Personally, If individuals are at an appropriate age to have a baby, negative outcomes would outweigh the advantages.\r\n\r\nFirstly, The main reason for having a baby in an old life in the developed world is in order to provide job security and gain a better lifestyle by generating a bunch of income. Moreover, giving childbirth at a young age not only provides a number of responsibilities to them but also reduces the freedom, which allows them to hang out with their comrades and family. For instance, from the medical surveys, 80% of mothers in an elderly life spend most of their time on hectic work due to lack of income. \r\n\r\nHowever, common abnormalities of childbirth such as Down syndrome, heart problems and other issues as a result of lower nutrition in pregnancy brings the most horrible effect which affects both mother's and offsprings' lifestyle in the short-term and long-term. Furthermore, the ability to take care of offspring at that life significantly decreases as they are too old to carry their offspring and play with them. Most medical research shows that a large number of abnormal children mostly happened in this phenomenon and mothers experienced losing childbirth before giving birth as physical issues. \r\n\r\n In conclusion, Although generating income is a vital reason for some communities, people should be more concerned about this since disadvantages affect either mother or children, which leads to physical and mental issues after give-birth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In opinion computer ars benefit socient reasons I talk wit friends I homework I olner things computer First reasons I talk friends I talk family facebook myspace msn I se family camera msn camera allot help lik family I chat every instead sending pictures videos going visiting Next reasons I homework I write big letter I lot work computer easy Final reason I lot things like find question project", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Student newspaper I think computers I would help us meet new people seeing new places learn new things It would help us meet new people email chat programs It also help us see new places goon internet And look place see It also help us learn new things talk people could give us ideas learn This help us want learn new things talk new people see new places good idea us We benifit s good thing everyone I think computers would help us meet new people seeing new places learn new things This great thing everyone Not people I hope take letter consideration Because help everyone learned new things", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is venus dangerous? \"Let's find out,\" \" Venus is the closest planet to earth in terms of density and size.\" \"Earth,venus,and mars is our planetary neighbors,orbiting at different speeds.\" \"If a spacecraft landed on venus, the spacecraft wouldn't have survived no more than a few hours.\" \"Humans have sent many spacecrafts to venus but none came back or survived.\" Venus's surface temperature average is 8oo degrees fahrenheit,and the atomospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience than our planet.\" \"These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on earth;such an environment would crush even a submarine accustomed to diving to the deepest parts of our oceans and wouldf liquefy many metals.\" \"Also notable Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system and even Mercury is closer to the sun.\" \"Venus was once like Earth planet in our solar system.\" \"Lomg ago Venus was probably most covered largely with oceans and could have supported the forms of life,Venus today has some features that are analogous to those on earth.\" \"Scientist's are sending humans to study Venus,NASA's possible solution to the hostlie conditions on the surface of Venus would allow scientists to float above the fray.\" \"Imagine a blimp like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roling venusian landscape.\" \"A vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying uo abd out of their way.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez creates reflective relaxed mood memories For example use parentheses create voice reader better understand trying say Also reflecting positiely old times feels author right next reader pleasant conversation For example talking landlord s daughter mentions would often grace table presenceFurthermore describing enviroment apartment feels reader sitting wood backed chair listening sweet saranade unamed Cuban singer The smell spices lingers air The smoke stove waters eye s drifts lazily window The sound engines beep horns created low roar bus plays backround The bright reds oranges yellows furniture burn pleasantly eyes This reflective relaxed mood important author get stories across Narciso Rodriguez well", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Suppose family member seen long time dont enough money visit live far Or injured sick nothing decide browse internet actually learn interesting things like new organism scientist found something history ve never known Amazingly computer filled knowledge like You could talk family members nt seen havent got chance see long time You could even know lot new interesting stuff nature history would never known stepping outside And know I ll even tell things I half sister I get see like year two years But way I get interact facebook There also websites people use talk loved ones like twitter myspace yearbook aim skype ect Not talk could webcam chat could also see Alot people use webchat talk old friends While computer could also learn new things Yesterday I computer I got bored random searching min I learned things I never heard like CAPS massacre time teacher went spaceship first time blew teacher Man tragedy If interested nature could learn kinds nature around world Also interested ancient time typing got kinds fascinating things ancient time like city forgetten found I m pretty sure could nt learn kind stuff stepping outside The amazing things computer could Talking family friends nt seen decades learning fascinating things Usually s cool could learn things teacher never new Would want teacher teaching teaching teacher", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the story, \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author give us great information about how worthy it is to study Venus. He also lets us know about the dangers there is by the study.\n\nIn the text it states, \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus... On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than we experience on our planet. These conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth.\" This shows that Venus has conditions that humans could not survive in, thus making it dangerous and almost impossible for humans to study if we can not step foot in it. For example, in the article it is said that, \" Earth previous mission was unmanned, and for good reason, since no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours.\" This quote proves that so far the study of Venus has gave humans dangers.\n\nThe study of Venus is something worthy for astronomers do to the fact that it is the planet that has most similarities to Earth. \"Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well once have been the most Earth-like planet in the solar system. Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.\" A reason it could be important to study Venus is, Venus could be our futute if we are able to make it survivable for humans.\n\nThe author does a well job explaining why it is a good reason to study Venus by giving us information about the planet. The author also tells the audience how NASA and astronomers are working in knowing even more than we already do about the planet. The article also explains the reasons there is danger to the study by giving us specific numbers as I said previously.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Learning laugh vacationing I realized laughter big part lives important factor keep friends families together Not long ago I also discovered laughter relieve stress even helps lose weight I thought pretty interesting My sister hand still quite believe laughter could She thought blown proportion She believed friends nt want hang around something wrong nt enough food house probably parents fault There always one blame whatever happened always bad side everything But going different find nt live live way always alternative The trip something everyone expecting even I actually really excited see cousins rest family Everybody packed things got ready leave got car left air port My aunt already waiting us city airport Everything going great So far When got aunt drove us little town state hour half away airport As getting I noticed sister strange look face seemed somehow confused lost thoughts worried something CAPS s wrong okay look weird I said sounding little sarcastic hoping start conversation CAPS face weird said thing said reached destination As got grandparents house begun see family members already waiting us outside The joy seeing incredible I looked around around saw sister I glad looked happy thought actually enjoying moment I know wrong sudden attitude changes got little playground grandma backyard During time I met new family members saw old familiar faces remembered good also bad memories memories I thought vanished mind already Turns still way back head I tried hide would never come somehow managed get make way thoughts I started feel like monster Suddenly I flash back time came visit couple years ago That s came saw whole scene I felt horrible There little sister playing swings suddenly let go swing felt right mud puddle Every body laughed I laughed I thought funny nt laugh nt cry either got ran inside I never stopped ask okay I nt realize actions affected It fault I knew really sensitive came specific situations I help I nt give comfort support needed big sister never learned laugh keep going That would nice advice give instead laughing Then couple minutes reflection I went apologized looked little confused first realized going This made rest trip lot easier I knew wrong tried best fix problem work self esteem Laughter perfect therapy All needed learn laugh self things go way wanted It hard accomplished goal My sister discovered power laughter learned get back mistakes Life taught us important lesson I m sure one exciting trips ve ever taken memories trip stay us forever", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Local Newspaper computer daily waste life Your computer time take away time spent exercsing enjoying nature distract human nature things communicating also waste tons energy Picture sitting desk talking friends online Take away computer youre sitting thhere burning one calorie exercising one muscle expect fingers think something usefull life Such taking walk enjoying nature That s I thought Nature beautiful So enjoy throug h window next desk obesity problem considered fat would even think spending day simply sitting chair Go gym loose extra body weight Communicating overrated people ca nt express emotions send smily face happy face Communication wih friends cause miss things For example lets say cancelation work place news see cause friend people even laugh loud send friends Plus even go friends house instead laughing youl say Are instead gasping say CAPS I mean come people get really communicate bought one new lights Too bad youre even saving energy computer daily uses amount energy regular light bulbs hours light really saving much money Have nt heard economy bad means alot money means YOU playing online games wasting energy wasting money Someones going work overtime week s I think hair spray cause layer destroyed Computers bad dont good enough reason used They take enjoying nature reduse communication levels mention waste lot energy Therefore point made", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think author concludes story wit ending paragraph story feels comforted plants wants wait weather breaks geese come back take test I think wants wait way comfortable surroundings clear mind best test", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The production of new items and objects have been a well discussed topic recently in our society. Many people explain that the growth of world economy has brought harmful effect in the atmosphere. Nonetheless, others argue that it is necessary the creation of new goods as well as services. In this essay, I am going to analize the issue of new things, and at the end, I will give possible solutions of these problems.\n\nOn one hand, undoubtedly, it is a reality that new goods have helped to increase the air pollution. For example: In the last years, the population has been increasing dramatically. Therefore, we need more products in order to conservate the life quality. As result, we demand more services and items such as clothes, cars, and food thus we produce more pollution along with garbage. Under these circumstances our environment was damaged for the increase of new products. In addition, many animals are dying out for the destruction of their natural ecosystem.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this day and age, advertising is growing so people can see advertisements everywhere. Although this may have many positives, I personally believe that the negatives of this trend are more significant. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, advertising has several beneficial effects. First, advertising is really important for the revenue of the brand. A lot of people may know about the products of a brand from eye-catching advertisements and it may become popular in the market. From that, more and more products will be bought and the revenue of the brand will grow. Second, advertisements can provide consumers with information about various products and services. A lack of information may cause consumers to purchase low-quality products. Therefore, advertisements are very vital in choosing products. For example, among different kinds of cell phones, adverts will allow customers to know which one is suitable for them.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, it is my firm belief that the drawbacks of advertisements are weightier. To begin with, the appearance of too many advertisements may be annoying. This is particularly true when people are enjoying their favourite songs or films. Moreover, there are many brands in the market that use advertisements that are not true about the product. Many people believe those adverts but when they receive the product, it is different from the advertisement. Therefore, a lot of consumers will no longer trust the advertisements and a lot of brands can not use advertisements to promote their products.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although advertisements have a lot of upsides, I am firmly convinced that the downsides are more considerable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I do not think that the author supported his idea to the fullest. He could have just done better because he never made it clear about his descion. there were just too much negatve about going to venus theres are 4 postive things about why we should go to venus. \"solar pwer would be plentiful , and radiation wouldnt exceed earth levels not easy conditions but survivable for humans .\n\nHe supported his argument very few places of the passage. The text states \"The planet has a surface of rocky sediment includes familiar features such as valleys and mountain. He also supported his argument with \"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life . which means that the planet could be inhabitable by humans.\n\nHe made his argument worse by putting all of the dangerous stuff intot the text. The author says \"Humans have sent numerous spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world. Each previous misson was unmanned.\"\n\nWhich means that it has been to difficult to go there for breif periods at a time. \" A thich atmosphere of almoost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets venus.\" Which means that it is very inhabitibal for humans.\n\nIf i had to guess on which side the author would have been for : try and explore the plane or Stop trying because it is too dangerous I would have to say that he is on the stop trying it is too dangerous side. I think this because compared to the postive stuff it says to venus it has a lot of bad facts and good reasons on why we shouldnt go there. in my mind i do not think that he got his point out enough to say he wants us to go to Venus .\n\nIn my opinion Venus is too dnagerous for us to survive there and live there. I think that exploring there is just a waste of money because \" each previous mission has been unmanned and you shouldnt just keep trying. the author believes that there should be money invested into the reseach of venus. I do not agree with him. And i feel as though we as humans should explore some where more inhabitable", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think driverless cars are a good idea? Yes or No? Driverless cars can have positive effects and negative effects. The cars could change the world or they could not end well.\n\nDriverless cars are not a good idea at all.\n\nThe reason is, because the cars really are not fully driverless. if you are in a constrution zone or near an accident the car has you take over. The car isn't full capable of handling driving in a situation like that. The car lets the driver know when they should take over. So the question is \" If the car is driverless how come you have to take over in certain situations\"? Why can't the car handle it all on its own since the car is smart? For the driverless cars to be very smart they need a bunch of sensors.\n\nMy postion on driverless cars is I think they are a bad idea. They can't fully handle all situations. Also if the person behind the wheel is drunk or worse and they come upon a bad accident \" What will they do\"? \" How will they act\"? Since the car can't handle itself and the driver is incoherent I dont think the ending result will be very good at all.\n\nFirst off, the driver of the car must stay alert at all times and be ready to take over if needed. If there is an accident or the wiring or technology fails in the car.\n\n\" Who is blamed\"? \"Do you blame the driver or the maufacturer\"? Even though the traffic laws would be changed, according to the driverless cars there would be new laws put in to cover liability in a situation if there was an accident. Also there are special sensors that make sure the driver keeps his hands on the wheel.\n\nDo you think driverless cars are a good idea? Yes or No? Driverless cars are not a good idea at all. My position on driverless cars is I think they are a bad idea. First off, the driver must stay alert at all times and be ready to take over if needed.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of the the Facial Action Coding System technology in a classroom is valuable. The FACS helps people read the emotional expressions of other people. This is valuable in a classroom because it can let teachers know how students are feeling of the lesson they are being teached and it can help them know how students are feeling in general.\n\nOne reason why the FACS is a great technology in a classroom because it can let teachers know how the students are feeling towards their lesson they are teaching to them. When students are being teached something, they some times show expressions on how they feel but tend to hide them. \"A classroom computer can recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" Dr. Huang predicts. This can help teachers find out why aren't students understanding the subject; they can either be bored or confused. Students are some times scared to ask for help, but teachers knowing when students are confused, he teacher can help them individually. This is a great tool to use when students are failing classes, or having trouble understanding a lesson. Without the FACS many students could be failing their classes due to not knowing what they are doing. It is helpful for teachers to recoginze the students expression towards the subject, so they can figure out if students are confused. Knowing that tecahers can give them extra help.\n\nAnother reason is it can help other people in the classroom figure out how their classmates are feeling. Students aren't always happy and some times have something tough going on with their lifes, they need that little motaviation\n\nto help them feel happy. \"Imagine being able to detect exactly how other people are feeling, even when they are tryingto hide their emotions,\" notes Nick. Some times classmates aren't really feeling happy, they could often have trouble smiling for several reasons. The technology can help others know how they are feeling so they can help other people with their problems they are facing. The FACS is very useful for students who have friends in their class. Friends some times lie about their emotions. The FACS can let them know their emotions and can help them if they show saddness.\n\nIn conclusion the Facial Action Coding System to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable. It is helpful in many ways. It helps teachers know when students are confused and are hvaing trouble understandin the lesson. It also helps classmates know how their friends in the classroom are feeling, by finding out their expression.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is debatable that teens should volunteer during their leisure time. Due to the fact, that volunteering can benefit both teenagers and society. I completely agree with the above statement so I will explain my opinion using examples from the United Kingdom and Sri Lanka. \r\n\r\nYoungsters´ participation in unpaid work influences them positively. I will begin with that involving teenagers in volunteering activities converts them to be good-oriented adults in the future. In addition, taking responsibility for these kinds of helping works capable to teach many qualifications, for instance, leadership, task performance, and being more disciplined. As an example, During the UK school children’s gap year, they often volunteer to take after the elderly who need help. Also, Research confirmed the immense impacts of this on improving the participated candidates’ kindness, caring, patience and humility. \r\n\r\nMoreover, teenagers’ volunteer work can empower the development of the communities. Because of having busy teens will end up reducing the number of crimes, robberies, unethical involvements, and sexual harassment. As a piece of evidence, in 2000, criminal activities and rape cases went down immensely, subsequently, after adopting the idea of encouraging Sri Lanka 10-grade- school students to volunteer throughout summer vacation.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is crystal clear that teenagers’ involvement in unpaid work positively affects them and the community as well. Teenagers often enrich their qualities and experience because of taking part in the volunteer industry. I couldn’t be more agreeable, as I believe that adolescents should participate in different community activities to build their confidence, hence being productive individuals in society.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that we should change to the popular vote for the president of the United States. There are three main reasons why. One, the people are being ruled by this president, don't you think every one should get a say in who they want the president to be. Two, Electoral College is not at all fair. Lastly if you have all the people of the United States vote then the process will be more accurate.\n\nWhen you're about to get a brand new car, what do you do? You take it out for a test drive, and see how it runs, and if you like the design and the features it has. Am I right? Well think, if your about to get a new president, and let me remind you they will be in charge of the way you live, don't you think you want to have a say in wether or not you like him or her? It's just like testing out a new car. You bring your family and take a vote on who likes it. The more votes you have the better, because then you see how many like it and how many don't.\n\nThis Electoral college is not fair at all. It only allows 538 people to get to vote for president. What if the majority of those people wanted a certaint president, and the people that didnt get to vote wanted the other president. Thats not fair. Those people didn't even have a chance. If you weren't apart of the Electoral college how would you feel? Isn't the United States \"The land of the free.\" Then every one should have a say in who their president is going to be.\n\nIf you have every one in the United States vote then the dominant vote will be much more efficent. More people will be satisfied, and less complaints and assinations. Think about it. The popular vote is the way to go. When your doing a science experiment they say to take as many trials as you possibly can because the experimentation results will be much more accurate. Well why wouldn't you do that for something that is going to affect the\n\nENTIRE\n\nUnited States of America.\n\nI hope we make this change. There are so many benefits to the popular vote, why do you think its called the popular vote? The citizens will be satisfied, the process will be much more accurate, and the it will also be fair.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is an argument that according to a few,masses adolescents ought to participate in humanity's efforts by volunteering. In my opinion, I radically agree with this statement because this boosts the curriculum vitae of youngsters not only this also helps the elder crowd.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, the main favourable point for believing is that doing production in the community without money boosts the experience of juveniles. In addition, when teenagers struggle in the consideration of the community they became that person sociable along with that they individually learn management skills and use up this experience when applying for a job. For instance, Delhi Public school, situated in Ambala always set a program for eighth-grade students during summer break in that students have to do any positive task which is for the association and those who perform best and got positive feedback from that group,the students will be awarded. Hence, this also makes enlistment confident.\r\n\r\nMoving on, another worth mentioning reason is that this unpaid civilization proved in the respect of the elder population. Furthermore, the old crowd who live alone in the population far away from their children. Teenagers take a forward step and help the older community by providing them doing their tasks namely, cooking food, and regular health checkups in the clinic. To epitomize, during Covid timing many youths do these types of activities and help older individuals as per The time of India, and these now also use that point in their consideration as well as doing social production also give a sense of satisfaction and security to elders.\r\n\r\nShifting to another aspect, according to another school of thought some do not in assistance from unpaid jobs maybe they think that earning money is much better than volunteering production but this does not make relations strong.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, enhancing knowledge and strong the resume and security of older folk in association by volunteering endeavours in their neighbourhood children are much more beneficial for children and company.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this article they say the dangers of going on venus. they make it to where it is suitable for people to go on they make it to where theyre standing and floating 30 miles in the air . the pressure makes it harder for it to be liveable and the heat . They say its like taking an electronic on a machine chamber and letting it go and get heated and melt. venus has the hottest surface tempeture of any planet because its closer to the sun.they orbit the sun at different speeds which is why density is so high on venus. Humans have sent numerous spacecrafts to land on venus. it didnt seem to work out but they sent humans there and tried to make it live able for them . The humans studied the planet and tried to get it to where it is most comfortable for people to go. they cant send electro devices because it will only damage them. They put them 30 miles in the air so that they wont feel the heat and presure against their bodies. this is the best suitable way for them to make it on the planet venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Ther is a movie about \"Trip to Mars\", in the movie they were talking about mars how they were going to take a trip to mars. They were going to sent 15 men and women to mars. the men and women had diffrent ships so they could focus more. when it was time they went to space but the men and women seprated because they had lost signal with earth. The men did not reach to mars but the women did and they were sad but they just studied the plantet and tryed to contact earth. The next thing i'm going to say won't be like this story but very different. The challange of exporing veus is the differences in speed, carbon dixodie, and trying to study the planet.\n\nOne challange of exploring venus is the differences in speed. One day we are closer to mars but other days we are closer to venus and it could mess up the time an date. \"These differences in speed mean that sometime we are closer to Mars and other times to venus\". Spacecrafts have been sent to venus to check out the planet but cause of the differences in speed we have sent spacecraft to different place. \"Because Venus is sometimes right around the coner--in space terms--humans have sent spacecraft to land on this cloud-draped world\".\n\nAnother challange we have face is the carbon dioxide.\"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dixoide blanket venus\". It is really hard for us to be at that plantet because the carbon dixoide. Another thing that is bad that it has a high\n\nsulfuric acid. On the planet the temperatures are over 800 degreeds Fahrenheit. \"The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet\". Venus not a place to go because it is not good for humans to live or visit here.\n\nLast reason of The challenge of exploring venus is we can't go to close or we could die. Venus is not for human to vist because it is very challenging but we have to try to study the planet. Their are spacecraft hovering saftley around venus because it is very dangreous to land or getting to close to it. \"more imprtantly, researchers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distanse. If they got closer they could probley get a sample but they can't because it is dangreous to get close.\n\nIn conclusion The challange of exporing veus is the differences in speed, carbon dixodie, and trying to study the planet. The author who wrote this did very well explaning how it is challanging to explore venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story When come back Saeng vowed silently spring snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test show try new start When sees flower clerk tells hibiscus The hibiscus brings back memories childhood She takes home shows plant mother Her mother replies You hearing daughter tell much With hibiscus bringing something importance acquires hope By saying start flower bloomed geese returned means try new frash start", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus, it the second planet in the solar system and the closet one to Earth which scientist also calls Venus twin and since Venus is a sister planet to Earth scientist must study the plant but Venus has alot of dangers but Scientist are fascinated by Venus even if its has danger in it present.\n\n\"Long ago, Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like earth. Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes fimilar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters.\" Therefor this is a reason why scientist love to study Venus it just like Earth but without any humans on the planet and it could be an option for a next planet vist.\n\n\"Just as our jet airplanes travel at higher altitude to fly over many storms, a vehicle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendy ground conditions by staying up and out of their way. at thirty-plus miles above the surface, temperatures would still be toasty at around 170 degrees Fahenheit, but the air pressure would be close to that sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivabe for humans.\" So since Venus is like kind of sutable for humans it could be a new Earth in cse if something happen on Earth like a radioactive wave that could kill anybody we can go to Venus and live there dispite the harsh temepature and landing, it has a lot of similaritys of Earth.\n\nOverall Venus is a good planet for living things to live on and good thing for scientist to study over Venus to get some good and bad and theres obaviously bad side of Venus but scientist and many other researchers are trying there best to make a perfect world incase somethng does hapen in the future and we have to evacuate Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People believe that automation can cause risks and have disadvantages for the community, while some think that they are pretty essential to them in future. This is because there have been immense advances in technology. This essay will discuss both sides of a controversial issue, and my opinion will be provided.\r\n\r\nAdvocates of this proposition believe that technological development is an inevitable aspect of human progress, particularly for education which assists students. Nowadays, a number of students use robots to achieve their work. For example, some use them to write essays and they can just produce commands to make it. Moreover, some use artificial intelligence for drawing a picture whether portrait, cartoon, and view.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, those opposed to the idea argue that people who use robots cannot improve their ability because they do not obtain practice, and when they grow up into adults, they are unable to work to be good enough. Furthermore\r\n\r\n, artificial intelligence brings about a decrease in the employment rate. For instance, many companies apply robots to work for them as robotic work is more accurate compared to human actions.\r\n\r\nWhereas people think that artificial intelligence causes unpleasant approaches such as learning and being creative, in contrast, many feel that this is an unavoidable situation as such adapt to them. It is my opinion that these negative long-term effects greatly outweigh the short-term benefits that robots can bring to our everyday lives.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I am for the development of driverless cars.\n\nThey would be useful and helpful to all of us.\n\nThe driverless cars would make certain situations less complicated.\n\n\"Their cars have driven more than half a million miles without a crash.\"\n\nAlthough the cars don't do all the work by themselves, they still help in making driving a safer experience.\n\n\"The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\"\n\nThe driverless cars have the potential to be better than humans at driving.\n\nEven though driverless cars have come along way since they were delveloped, they still alert the driver when they need help.\n\n\"All are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills.\"\n\nI think this is safe because technology can go wrong sometimes, so you need to do things yourself too.\n\n\"California, Nevada, Florida, and the District of Columbia have led the country in allowing limited use of semi-autonomous cars; manufacturers believe that more states will follow as soon as the cars are proved more reliably safe.\"\n\nStates are still creating laws to protect others from the accidents that can occure from driverless cars.\n\nNo one has to worry about getting hurt from driverless cars because the law keeps them safe.\n\nOverall, the driverless car would be able to help us out.\n\nWe can still be safe while the development of these cars are happening.\n\nThe driverless cars have the ability to be better at driving than anyone human.\n\nAll the benefits of the driverless car are worth working for.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recruiting new employees can be a long and painful process. Some employers conduct interviews to select new employee. I disagree with the given statement, which says that interview is not a reliable method, and other methods are better. I believe that interview is reliable method, but there are many other methods which are equally good, and the choice is on the recruiters as to which method they find suitable for their need.\n\n \n\nThere are many reasons why interview is preferred by some employers for hiring new employees. Firstly, by the interview the recruiters can get an idea about the personality and social skills of the potential employees. In interviews, there are face-to-face interactions and the candidates have to answer impromptu questions, from which personality traits can be judged. Also, by asking some case study type questions, employees can judge traits like ability to handle pressure, confidence, and ability to think outside the box.\n\n \n\nHowever, there are many other selection methods with varied advantages. One of the common methods is written test. This method is preferred when the focus on judging the theoretical knowledge of the person. Another conventional method is group discussion. This method is good where basic job requirement of the company is conversational skills for instance jobs. Group discussion can be determining the convincing power of an individual. Last but not the least, there can be combination of all three methods like written tests, followed by group discussion and finally interview. This method is the most through of all the methods checking everything from personality traits to knowledge and also communication ability.\n\n \n\nIt is evident that different methods have different advantages and the most method cannot be singled out. It depends upon the situation. For example, interviews asses a person's individual traits better whereas written example in an area. There are shortcomings of every method too for example there is a chance of personal bias interviews. The combination of methods can take too long to select a candidate and may be too expensive to conduct for small companies.\n\n \n\nTo conclude, hiring method depends upon the job and company requirement. In some situations, conducting interviews is more apt, whereas in some situations the other methods may be more advantageous.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this modern day and age, the younger generation often opts for working in other fields instead of agriculture. There are several reasons for this trend and I personally think that it is fundamental to motivate young people to have an occupation related to farming. \r\n\r\nYoung people choose not to work in farming due to certain reasons. To begin with, there are several people who do not want to work outdoors. Those people prefer working in a building in order to experience the fresh atmosphere to staying long hours under the sun’s heat. For instance, in Vietnam, numerous young people opt for applying for white-collar positions instead of being farmers. Moreover, there is not enough land for farming due to the increased use of land for housing. The main reason for this is that the world population is rising at a rapid rate. As a result, when having an empty area of land, people usually construct a house instead of using it for agricultural purposes. \r\n\r\nIt is my firm belief that young people should be inspired to do agricultural work. The first reason is that the demand for food is on the rise. Too many people opting for working in offices means that there may not be enough farmers. As a consequence, there could be a lack of food supplies to provide for the expanding world population. Secondly, the younger generation may create higher productivity. The main reason for this is that they tend to stay updated with the latest techniques and technologies. Thus, they can utilize these cutting-edge technologies in order to boost productivity.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, the reluctance to work outdoors and the decrease in the area of agricultural land could be the two main reasons why young people do not select to be a farmer. However, the younger generation should be encouraged to work in the field of agriculture due to the high demand for food and their ability to apply developed technology.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Some parents or teachers believe that the most effective way for their children to learn how to cooperate with another person is to engage them in team sports at school or attend more team sports activities. In my opinion, I completely agree with the idea and will outline several reasons following in this essay.\r\n\r\nFirstly, participating in team sports at school helps children to improve their communication skills, which is essential for effective cooperation. When children attend team sports, whether it be basketball, football, or volleyball require communication with each other players, that occasion let them aware of how communication skills important because it is the only way to success in the match, they will learn more and more different features that can be used in their conversation through verbal communication, hand signals, body language, or other forms of communication, and by regularly practicing the many forms of communication involved in playing team sports, children are improving their communication skills steadily and they will feel more confident and simply when they need to cooperate with another one in class.\r\n\r\nSecondly, when children take part in team sports at school, they will have more opportunities to exactly know what cooperation means, to learn and explore more effective methods to reach the common goal, which is basic and defined as cooperation. Playing team sports, children are forced to learn how to work together politically and kindly, take me as an example, I am in my school's basketball team, and our coach is extremely focused on drills that train us how to execute certain strategies that require us to cooperate with another member, and by doing so, that let me have recognition and experience the benefits of working together firsthand, which make me a desire and enthusiasm to cooperate with others because by doing so, we will be better and have a sense of belonging.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, team sports help students improve their ability to communicate skills and allow them to experience the benefits of cooperating for the first time, which will inspire them and motivate them to cooperate better with others in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator:\n\nOver the years, people have been disputing over the Electoral College. Some people want it abolished while others want it to stay. The Electoral College is not working and and it needs to be abolished. For many reasons, the Electoral College has not worked. It is unfair to the voters, it causes voters to not vote, and it is unfair to the candidates.\n\nThe Electoral College is unfair to the voters. According to source 2, :\"Voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president.\" The whole point of voting is so that you, along with many people, can decide who will be the next president! Voting for people to elect a president is just not right. It causes voters to not vote because they know that their vote really won't matter. Source 2 also states that candidates don't spend time in small states, \"focusing only on the tight races in the 'swing' states.\" That is causing smaller states like Rhode Island and South Carolina to have less knowledge on the candidates. If I didn't know too much about a candidate, I wouldn't vote at all! Even though people in those states did vote, they might not have known a lot about the candidates and voted for the wrong person.\n\nThe people running for office want to win. Source 3 says that someone could have a higher popular vote but lose the election. Is that fair to the candidate? Winning the popular vote but losing the election? No, it isn't. Winning the popular vote means that more people want you in office. If the majority of America wants a certain person to be the president of their country, that means that the winner of the election would be the majority vote. The Electoral College denys that basic right of Americans by not letting them choose their president. That alone is unfair to the candidates and to the voters.\n\nNow you might be saying that the Electoral College has worked for a very long time and shouldn't be changed. Although the Electoral College has been working for a long time, that is the only thing that America has tried. If America used the popular vote, it could've changed elections. The Electoral College hasn't been working because it is causing more and more voters to stop voting and it is making it where only the majority vote doesn't matter. Citizens of America should have the right to chose the president by majority vote.\n\nIn conclusion, the Electoral College is unfair to the voters, it causes voters to not vote, and it is unfair to the candidates. As an American citizen, you have the right to vote. The Electoral College is taking that away and it needs to be stopped.\n\nSincerely,\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Face on Mars is a natural landform. The reason why it seemed to appear to look like a face is because the spacecraft had to snap the photo through wispy clouds that made it look like an alien artifact from haze. From MGS's 2001 photo on a cloudless day, the \"alien artifact\" appeared to have the resemblance of a butte or mesa. They snapped the photo using the camera's absolute maximum resolution, which spans about 1.56 meters. With that kind of resolution, you could have seen objects like \"airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks.\"\n\nOne reason why the Face is a natural landform is because Mars holds no alien life. NASA has explored Mars before the picture was taken by Viking 1. Another reason why the Face is a natural landform is because Chief scientist Jim Garvin of NASA's Mars Exploration Program even compared it to an actual landform on Earth. He said that it \"reminds me of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain in Idaho. That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face of Mars.\"\n\nIn conclusion, the Face on Mars is just a natural landform. There is no proof pointing towards the theory that the Face was created by an alien civilization. The picture that was taken in 2001 by MGS was taken with absolute maximum resolution, meaning the camera would have picked up any sort of trace of an alien race on the planet. The Face on Mars is, from this point, a natural landform. It is not an alien artifact of any kind.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Since some many years, scientists around the world are trying to expand their exploration projects. After the U.S. could send a man to the space and be able to walk in the Moon, it made other scientists to be facinated with this types of explorations and look for planets to explore. One of those planets is Venus, a planet that according to the author of \"The Challenges of Exploring Venus\", is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it represents. He supports this idea by giving the way that scientists see Venus comparing to us, coditions that are familiar to the Earth ones, and projects that can help humanity to be able to explore Venus.\n\nAt the begining of the article, the author gave a way of how scientists see Venus to support his idea that Venus is a worthy pursuit. In paragraph 2, the authore says \"Often referred to as Earth's 'twin', Venus is the closest planet to Earth in terms of density and size, ad occasionally to the closest in distance too\". This evidence shows that most of the scientists that are related to the space exploration, think that Venus is the Earth's twin because of its shape. This clue shows that Venus has important similarities with our planet that cna hel Venus to support human life.\n\nLater on, the author gave examples of the natural conditions that are equal to the Earth ones. In paragraph 4, the author says \"Today, Venus still has some features that are analogous to those on Earth. The planet has a surface of rocky sediment and includes familiar features such as valleys, mountains, and craters\". By showing this, the author explains that Venus has some factors that are the same ones that the Earth has. All of them are natural so it has a connection to where we are able to explore, and how its conditions can support human explorations.\n\nLastly, the author gave more examples of projects that can help us to survive in Venu's environment. In paragraph 6, the author says \"Many researches are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long nough to contribute meaningfully to our knoledge of venus\". In this part, the author shows that many scientists are tryng to find a way to get more information about Venu's conditions, by doing this, they can be one hundred percent sure that Venus is like Earth's sister.\n\nIn conlusion, the author supports his idea that Venus is a worthy pursuit depite the dangers that it represents by giving a lot of facts and examples of what the scientists and researches have found at this time. He made a great article by giving evidence and supporting them with facts.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this promt I will be writing about Driverless Cars and how I am for the creation of driverless cars. So i will be suggesting and giving my ideas and why I picked this option.\n\nTo me I think if we made driverless cars that would be very interesting and very splendid because if you think about it there are a lot of people in the world who get tired of driving and would like someone else to drive for them for example if your out with you friends having fun and you and your friend or friends are intoxicated and you try to drive home your putting not only your life in danger but your friends as well and that could lead to serious trouble.\n\nNow referring back to what i just said about people getting tired of driving these driverless cars could also help the elderly and people who need assistance that can not drive like if you have a disability say if your blind that driverless car would help very well indeed.\n\nSay if it were me to be in this driverless vehicle i would be a littile scetchy at first because if the car does manufacture and get in a crash whos fault would that be mine or the company that created the car and thats something they would have to be clear about to the world but also if I did not have a license or just for anyone who does not have one that is a major possitive effect because your not eligable to drive so if you had an emergency or had some place to be like a friends or etc. that driverless car is their to help.\n\nNow that I have given you my thoughts on this future invention and how it could effect us the people I hope you agree with what I have written and decide that i have good points so I hope to see myself one day in the future with one of these driverless cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter brings world together way put words When two people laugh together thing special bond made like There way describe connection build relationship Every person hopefully experience bond laughter brings Last I member select lacrosse team I nt know girls The team five practices tournament third practice I still nt talked many girls I shy talk girls seemed friend team At fourth practice stretching circle I made comment one girls laughed We began talking throughout rest practice talked became friends By making laugh I made friend team even excited upcoming tournament The final practice cut short team could create tiedye tshirts wear tournament I sat girl I become friends previous practice friend came sit us concrete We began talking laughing Our shirts tied rubber bands ready put dye onto We laughing making mess multiple colors good time enjoying warm night As finished shirts put sopping wet clothing plastic bags walked parking lot said goodbyes I two friends team could wait leave tournament On I woke meet team park OR We meeting load things three large white vans drive team I crawled van wearing tiedye tshirt see girls looking tired also sporting tiedyed shirts back another girl I sat row ahead Some girls team crammed van way During hour car ride slept laughed told stories After stuck car together long bonded laughter story telling We came different cities schools backgrounds made entertaining car ride At tournament I stuck together We walked around fields ate meals laughed together almost whole time The time apart roomates assigned put room together We worked together team towards common goal winning games making championship All girls team bonded way even us still contact Laughter brought together rest team followed The entire team bonded laughter became comfortable laughing good time Putting girls together entirely different cities could major disaster connected making laugh making positive experience involved Laughter truly shortest distance two people Connecting another human laughter experience everyone unique powerful friendships built laughter last lifetime Laughter makes world little better little brighter united together one", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are some what useful for us because maybe elder people want to go out and they don't have anyone to take them. The teenagers may get bored of just sitting there and not drive, but the older people wont because they could relax. It could be useful either way, maybe some teens would like it because they enjured something, they wouldn't be able to drive now but they could if we had driverless cars. In the passage \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" they said something about putting something in the car to entertain them and making sure they keep their heads up at all times. Just because there is driverless cars coming soon doesn't mean that people can just drive them around whenever they feel like it, its same as being a car when you have control. You still have to watch out and go the speed limit, you can't take it and sleep when it's driving.\n\nOver the past years cars have developed a lot. Now there are cars that you can turn on while you're still in the house, some cars have wifi, you can turn the heat on, and open doors before you get to the car. People want what is new so they can show something off but they don't show off the problems they could have with the car. Now they are making this new thing where a car can drive you around itself without you having to take control? Have they thought about the car accidents that could happen? Or how it could injure someone? This will take more responsibility than what a driver has now.\n\nWould there have to be any test taking for those who want their permit or license? How do you know if they are capable of being in control over those things? Having the cars we have now are good enough. Those who want a driverless cars should still capable of doing the things they do now with a regular car. Senors will still be in the cars, if adding them to the new cars that would make it better for the person and the car.\n\nThey want to know who would be responsible for an accident? Well it would be the persons fault. If they aren't looking at the road because they were distracted by something else than that could be bad. They should be able to take control when they see something bad is about to happen.\n\nNow if the driverless cars come with speaking instructions that could make things better because you can tell it what to do. If there is traffic and your vechile is going to fast you should be able to tell it to slow down.\n\nWhether they're or no driverless cars people should always be safe while driving. They should always have their eyes on the road and be able to look to their right and left to make sure it is clear to move over. With this coming out people probably think it will be safer or dangerous. They should put things to entertain them so they can be focused on the road instead of their phones. People should still have to take the driving test with their control.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The conviniance of the cars would be nice, but what if the car malfunctioned and it crashed? Would the car owner be responcible or would the manufacturer? Whould the cars be able to be hacked, like a cell phone or laptop?\n\nHow would the person or people in the car know they are safe?\n\nI would not feel comfertoble having a computer driving me around and deciding if it takes me through a bad naughborhood or if it takes the long way around. \"\"The psycological aspects of automation are really a chalenge,\" admits Dr. Werner Huber, a BMW project manager driver.\" If I were to be put in danger, would that compurter be able to get me out of that danger? I don't think so because, again, it is a programed computer. The car is programed to follow the laws set forth. If going over the speed limit to get away from a person trying to harm me or the people I am with is the way that we stay alive, then that's what needs to be done.\n\nIf the car is programed to go the speed limit, how many police officers would lose their job? There would be no speeding, so there would be no need to have them on the road as much.\n\nWhat would happen if there was a fire? If the vehicls are programed to go the speed limit, how will the fire fighters get to the house on time? If there is an acident, because the person in the car has no control over it, how will the peramedics get to the scene on time?\n\nIf the car doors are locked and there is no way to get out in a crash, there will be more of a chance of people dieing from a car crash than before the cars come out. The officers would have to cut the person out, if that can be done. If the crash is so bad that the person can't be cut out what does that say about cars manufacturer?\n\nIn comclution, I think that having driverless cars could cause more damage than good. Yes, it would be more convinient, but safe I dont think so.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people many different thoughts beliefs Some people believe movie song needs removed others disagree nobody wants things enjoy taken away If book shelf bookstore nt agree thought removed removed taking away someone enjoy book If everyone removed things life nt enjoy would little enjoy For example I personally love horror movies I love thrill get horror movie make jump even though s movie screen I m sure people world think horror movies wrong If people allowed remove forever I many people would sadly dissapointed I also love video games Video games huge part life I know fact people highly disagree content If people could take video games away nt agree would crushed I also aware people worried children watching movies listening songs reading books appropriate I understand parents want children supervised removing books movies songs exactly answer Movies books easily censored Many movies songs language filters movie programs parental options allow parents decide movies want allow children watch Parents also supervise children download music onto ipod phone depending bought books magazine s require parental consent Video games also require parental consent depending rating game We ca nt go around removing everything dont like fair like We live world many different ideas thoughts beliefs need equal right share", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is believed that some people tend to download their affable music songs via the Internet, which causes a negative impact on the music industry. However, others reckon that this activity does not affect the artists. I think that there is a negative impact on musician performances.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, nowadays we see some breaches in terms of illegal downloading of their favorite music songs. This is because there are throngs of people who would like to get music singles with no fee, which causes a detrimental impact on musician’s profit. Consequently, they may lose their inspiration and it can lead to their poor performance with all that entails. I agree that this may have a fruitless effect on not only their future concert tours but in general on their future career. For instance, some popular singers in the UK have left their music industry because they do not get enough motivation and reward from their fans, who do not visit their performances.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are no downsides in the proliferation of downloading their music through websites. This is because they earn a chunk of income sources, which is usually made by singers, such as: concert tours, a bunch of private concerts and shows.Besides, publishing their music on YouTube provides them a tremendous effect and income,where they can earn some money on watching and downloading their songs from it. Conversely, they have a prosperous life without making ends meet. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I reckon that there is a negative result from illegally downloading songs via the Internet. However, there is a neutral effect on them, which can evoke some possible opportunities for their future career like using various sources of income via YouTube channel.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes story promise Saeng made take test come springtime Saeng trouble adapting new home wont give fitting one failure Remembering home never able return painful thoughts Saeng memories help cope loss The hibiscus familiar flowers found comforted reminded home At springtime geese return hibiscus starts blooming Saeng feel ready take test spring represents chance another try new beginning", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear local newspaper I believe much use computer bad affects people People get addicted easily They also use lot electricity And people sit computer day nt exercise These bad affects computers bad without life might little harder Playing computer games online poker sounds fun right Wrong People get addicted everyday Online poker could dangerous I remember seeing show guy addicted He d put credit card information sit play day Before knew debt Once addicted hard stop It s stupid thing get point You sit waste money especially economy way A recent study shows people play online poker addicted within two weeks Other games also addicting There s website called addicting I guess people nt know affects addicted computer family Did know electricity goes computer Thats almost half going one thing I nt think s right pretty much everything done computer In economic chrisis I nt think enery wasted playing computer games We could use energy important things people need If everyone nt need computers communicate everything would nt problem The number computers sold gone since I understand emailing facebook But nt get hand Isnt outside beautiful day great Would nt rather enjoy excercise rather sitting glued computer Obesity huge problem A lot people obese sitting computer excercising I remember I younger everytime I went friends house dad would sitting playing poker games computer He shape lazy His parents later got divorce turned totally different person Most lazy We nt like work nt I would define rather excersise go outside instead computer You live lot healthier re addicted computer And re healthier re happier So conclusion nt control computer bad affects Computers easy get addicted use lot electricity make people fat lazy Do think playing computer games worth losing friends family", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I agree that changing to election by popular vote for the president of the United States would be a better choice than to continue Electoral College. You may ask yourself why. Well, it's not fair to have to pick a random person to do something you should be the one doing. It's like saying you pick your neighbor to clean your house. Your house is still being cleaned, but not by you, instead, a random person you don't even know. Thus, continueing Electoral College is the same because in this case, the elector you pick and don't even know is going to make choices that at the end of the day you might not even agree on and you can't do nothing about it at that point.\n\nDuring Elecoral College voters get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate. This means, there is too many names on the list that you most likely have never even heard in your life, therefore leading you to voting for the wrong candidate. Some electors aren't even faithful, instead of going for their party's candidate, they rather decide voting for whomever they please. Most likely leading to alot of conflict because the candidate is not even on their party and the voters would hate to have to follow someone else's rules, yet again, can't do nothing about it.\n\nVoters would always love to control whom their electors vote for, but this will never happen with Electoral College. The whole point to me for the Electoral College is so that the people voting for the electors won't have any power against anything. So that the government continues to have power over the people. That can be great at some point, but sooner or later will cause confict because some people don't always agree with what the government has to say or do. Therefore, changing to election by popular vote for president of U.S would be much better than to continue Electoral College.\n\nOn the article,\n\n\"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\n\n\". States that \"During the 2000 campaign, seventeen states didn't see the candidates at all, including Rhode Island and South Carolina, and voters in 25 of the largest media markets didn't get to see a single campaign ad.\" Now right there is a perfect example of electors being \"unfair\". Electors want people to keep voting for them so that they can pick the candidates, yet, they always skip the part of showing who the candidates are. There is no why people will randomly guess how their candidates will end up being if they never even hear a few words from them.\n\nIn conclusion, I strongly believe changing to election by popular vote for president of U.S is a wiser decision than to continue Electoral College because it'll be fair to the people who are voting. People will start to get together to try and get to know the candidate, and most likely agree more to the idea than anything else. Mean while, Electoral College is a very unfair system because they have no idea who the elector is going to pick as candidate, and if they pick someone who they don't even know at the end of the day they will be stuck with a total stranger.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "well drivless cas are good but, also bad. They are good beacuse, they can have everyone safe and people wouldnt need to have a drivers license to be driving , incase of emergencys they can just get in the car and go where is needed.It can be bad because it would be putting polices offecers of out of a job becuase they wouldnt take out people for wreckless drving or violating driving laws. Also they are deppending on electronics to get them to place to place which is not very reliable or well on their part , that is my possition on this matter.\n\nMy oppinion is that it's very good, you would save a lot of money on gas and use that for other necesary things, \"The car he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a buss\"(1). it has a \"GPS reciever\"(4). So it knows where to go and well while its driving you can get ready for where ever you may have to go. saves time on getting ready in many ways \" A car capable of driving on autopilot 90 percent of the time\"(10). You would'nt get lost becuase of the fact that it has a GPS. The car can sence traffic jams or accidents so maybe thats a positive becuase then you could be more carful before going near it or maybe it can take you a diffrent route. It alerts you just in case you want to know thats also a good things\" flashing lights\n\non the windshield and other heads-up displays\"(7).\n\nIn conclution their are many pros and cons but in my oppinion it's a very well put together idea and i am pretty sure it can work out for the best. Yes people will become more lazy and deppend more on their cars but that is just how our generation is now a days. Deppending on internte, phones and now in the near future our cars. It may wor k out but who knows .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\" scientist have created a machine called the FACS(Facial Action Coding System) it can take a picture of somone and see what they are feeling. For example the monalisas image was 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. this technology could be very usefull and it could have its downfalls. could using this technolagy on our students be a good idea. I think it would.\n\nspeaking from experiance in being in highschool in the 21st centry I understand that students will have all different opinions and feeling about what they belive. Im in highschool right now so i understand. There are alot of students at my school and its always hard to figure out how they are feeling because they are so good at hiding it. Now, i understand that if they are hiding how they feel then they might not want anybdy to know, but with this technology we could use it to help them that way if we use it on them we could figure out how they are feeling so we could help them with there problems. we could also use this to get more better results on any opinions that are floating around.\n\nWhat i mean is, is if the princable suggests that we should do somthing differently he/she could have everyone come over to the machine and calculate the results on everyones facial expresion towards the new idea. Instead of saying \"she doesnt look to happy about the idea\" we could say \"well it says here that she is 50 percent happy about it and 50 percent disgusted by it\" then we would have some actuall evedince so work with. I know using it to calculate other peoples opinions is allitle cheesy but kids my age are always wanting things to go there way so this could allow that to happen. we could useit to see if kids are actually having fun with the programs that schools have to offer. Theres no point in having a program if kids arent enjoying it.\n\nThis machine could have some bad affects to it though. If kids are feeling really sad and somthing good happens right before they get to the machine then studying them would be pointless. having a machine like this could cost alot of money, and if somone were to break it, that would suck. somekids may not be able to use it if there eyes are sensitive to cameras. And some of them may not want to take a picture in front of it at all.\n\ni understand some students might think reading there facial expressions is an invasion of privacy so i thin it would be best that only a trusted adult read the results. Just because the machine could have some downsides im still for the idea. and nothing is perfect there will always be a way to inhance the machine. I think that if students used this mahine there will be easier ways to help them out.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Participating in the Seagoing Cowboys program was one of my best choices of my life. Being a Seagoing Cowboy has times where you needed to be serious and take your work seriously, but it also has times where you could have a lot of fun. There were many things that you can do when you become a Seagoing Cowboy. You could help take care of animals, serve as a night watchman, etc. There were many things you could have done if you dont like one of the jobs, there is so many new things to experience!\n\nAfter working, the guys and I would play baseball and volleyball games. A good way to just relaxand take it easy after working hard. Others even sometimes had table-tenis tournaments, fencing, reading, games, whittling, and even boxing! The activities were fun and helped pass time. The games were just a way to let loose for a while. Anyone is bound to have fun!\n\nI also learned a few things in my time of being a Seagoing Cowboy. For instance, being a Seagoing Cowboy helped me become more aware of the people in other countries and their needs. Many people out there are struggling to do things for themselves, and their country. So help out! Whenever you get an opertunity to help someone you should take it. It's a great way to help out. Think about what it could do for you, and other people! Don't let this amazing opertunity slip through your fingers. Become a Seagoing Cowboy today! I promise, you won't regret it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article it talked about trying to travel on Venus. I would say to my best opinion one day we will have the technology to travel to Venus and stay their for my then a couple weeks and be able to learn more about Earth's sister planet. What i like a lot about this article it that it makes sure to talk about a lot of similarities it has to earth and as well as s lot of differences it has to earth as well. What I found the most crazy about this was that no robot or anything we sent to\n\nVenus could survive the harsh conditions for more then a few hours.\n\nWhen it comes down to it the aurthor as you can tell heavily supports the thought of traveling to Venus. I support It also because it never hurts to learn new things about someone or something, but I think the thing that is stopping us is the cost that it takes to send something up there and there is no point to just send someone up there to die. What i like about this article is that it talks about a lot of things Venus has in common with earth and a lot of thing Earth and Venus have thats different then each other. Somethings Earth and Venus have in common together is they are both reletivily the same and they are really close to each other in distance. But some differences are is Earth is ble top have life on it and Venus is not because the heat, pressure, and the chemicals in the air.\n\nDispite the want to travel to Venus and figure it out it seems highly unklikely because how dangerous the planet actually is. While traveling to Venus sounds like a really cool to do sometime down the future right now and I know we don't have the money to support a trip that far away even if its supposed to be close by. One of the main reasons I think scientists want to travel to Venus so bad is because they're always trying to learn new things and you can't punish anyone for wanting to expand there knowledge. In the end traveling there right now seems impossible because of the air, pressure and heat would kill any human very shortly afore setting foot of the planet, but i do beleive that one day we will diffinetly be there one day in the future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Adolescence is the age of transition for human beings. Some argue that during this period they should perform unwaged work to benefit their society, while, some others oppose this view. In my prospective, young ones should be allowed to decide whether or not to serve their community without salary during their teenage. There should not be any strict rules for this.\r\n\r\nIt is better to keep youths busy, as it will help them to avoid wasting time on useless activities like playing games on computers or engaging in useless talks. By getting involved in community work, they can build their social network and cognitive skills. For example, helping a specially-abled child might be a daunting task initially, but overtime, it will be a rewarding experience for the youngster and make them more empathetic.\r\n\r\nAlthough community work / voluntary work will help their overall development, their commitment to these activities should be voluntary. Otherwise, there will be larger repercussions. To exemplify, if a youth unwillingly went to help a bedridden patient, the help that he could provide to that sick person will be unsatisfactory. In other words, the person engaging in community service should do so wholeheartedly. Otherwise, the help with benefit neither the provider nor the recipient.\r\n\r\nTo wrap up, it is a good idea for teenagers to engage in community work during their leisure time. Even so, it should be optional and teenagers who have no interest in volunteering should not be forced to do so. This will help to generate a compassionate and caring younger generation who benefit the community.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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