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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "For a while now, driverless cars have a been a debated topic. People everywhere have varying opinions on the use of driverless cars. Some argue that it is an unsafe way of transportation, while others say it's a much easier, more efficent way of getting where you need to go. I personally believe that driverless cars are just as safe as your average non-driverless car and should be allowed.\n\nAs stated in \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\", the cars can steer, accelerate, and brake all by themsleves, just as a human could. When in need of human assistance, in bad traffic, arround accidents, or around construction zones, the car's seat will vibrate, have lights flash, other headlight displays, or even announce that the driver needs to prepare to take control of the car. The cars have sensors that require the human driver be alert and watching the road at all times, which would prevent accidents, proving it to be just as safe as a non-driverless car, if not more. Not only is it just as safe, it is far more efficent. The sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and even reduce power from the engine, which allows response and control better than a human driver could ever portray driving. The sensors also detect and respond to dangerous spurs, such as out-of-control skids or rollovers. Once again, portraying how safe the driverless cars really are. More advancements in the sensors are leading to cars that can handle more and more various driving tasks on their own.\n\nDriverless cars are an extremely safe way of getting places on a daily basis. From their special alerts to their sensors that have \"drivers\" aware at all times to their more efficent way of breaking and reducing wear and tear on your engine, how could anyone think a non-driverless car could be any better? I bet if we all had a driverless car, driving would be a less-dreaded, much safer way of getting where you need to go!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You want opinion effects computers people Well I believe computers help people educate people computers people relie It s time decide agree computers positive effects people Do agree computers help people Say example question noone home answer Why Of course re going get school project Surely ll need information library closed And nt Simple reasearch computer Do nt agree computers help people I remember one time I entered contest I needed lost I remembered I put computer Computers relied people Just think Almost jobs world relie technology computer For example job It would kind hard keep track much trash thrown every year without computer surely banks use computers To keep track everyone s allowance money situations Let s forget lawyers There lawyers incart use computer type every word said They turn words short keep people saying Did without computers ever half million jobs world would fail Some people would agree online games educational For example That game teaches words probably never seen And nt forget That game improves counting numbers Last least would That game sharpens skill exercises brain Strategy come handy surely see games educational In conclusion I agree effects computers people positive Because computers help people reliable educate people It s never agree computers positive effects people", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "So obviously by reading the title in this excerpt, you can infer that this whole passasge is about Venus. How close, conditions there, and other basic backround knowledge. Why would the author want to include this? Because this excerpt is about the possibility and dangers of exploring Venus up close and personal. The author, in this passage, provides good detail, and opinion, causing me to agree with said author that Venus should be explored.\n\nLike I said in the intro he starts of by painting a picture in your mind about what scientists at NASA are dealing with here. First, he gives you some relatable information about it. That to the normal human looking up at the sky, it's just a very bright star that's actually a very close planet. Then he proceeds to provide on some technical facts about condidtions. He says, \" A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus...On the planet's surface, temperature average over 800 degrees Farenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet.\"\n\nTo persuade someone something this big, you have to give reasons for them to care. Good ones too. So the author did just that. He explains many reasons why a mission to Venus whether it be manned or unmanned should be sent to Venus. He claims that the reward outweighs the risk. Do keep in mind this is a planet at an of average 800 degrees Farenheit. Well he explains that the planet might've once been like our home. That a variety of creatures must've once called Venus home. There is convience in the fact that it is very close and space travel is very long and that it's surface has some barren natural structures and valleys similar to that of the Arizona and Nevada region.\n\nHe also gives ways or really one way to go about doing this. In the passage he reminds the reader that the surface temperature is an average 800 degrees. He also needs you to remember about the atmosphere containing acid-like forms melting metal in minutes. Basically, the surface is the no-no zone. So how do you do it? He mentions the idea of having an aircraft vehicle, sort of like a blimp to go ahead and stay up in the air avoiding the hellish conditions of the ground. There is still some risk but overall a lot safer. He also gives the idea of fully mechanical machines to calculate as it takes steel metal longer to melt. All the while making you confident in the idea of an mission to Venus with these ways or concepts in mind for the sake of science.\n\nSo in conclusion if the author's goal was to persuade me, he definitaly persuaded me. He provides evidence to convince you there is a way, he convinces you that there is something to be had in Venus, while also telling you to beware as it could go wrong in a lot of ways for us.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hello everyone I am Luke the Seagoing Cowboy. Today. I think it will be a great opportunity for you too by joining the Seagoing Cowboys program. And here let me tell you why.\n\nI started with a help of my friend because I had no choice. He introduced me after the world war II where people still live in the ruins and are starving. It was a good thing for me back then because I had no hope. And that is how it started.\n\nWhen i joined the program it was hard definaty it a job after all my main purpose was to go of to the seas to another country and help poeple in needs. Through that I was able to go to alot of places, but moving wasent a easy job. I had time when I broke my ribs and could not even work for our crew and that is not all the tides in the oceans are strong very strong and if you were the night watcher too bad. I turned 18 when i was in way to Greece. I was able to be darte d for military service and they said to countine my military service. I also admit but it was a great oppertunity for me. There is also a fun side. When all the cattles were gone our crew was able to stay and play games like vollyball tabletennis,boardgames and lot more it is definatly worth it do ing hard work for all that. You could also tour the citys I visited the Acropolis,the Gondola ride in Venice,excavaded castle in Crete,Panama Canal an the way to China. So now lets go to the actuall reasons why you should join the program:\n\n1. You can tour big places while you are there. That is one of the big reasons I joined the program 2. You can really be aware of waht is going on. I saw th ruins and it was really bad horrible all houses colasped...\n\n3. You can help people in need and are starving for food even though they did not do any thing wrong. I felt really pitty for them beacase the war has not started because of them and they are starvng well for no reason.\n\nI really think that you guys should join the program,ofcourse there are though times, but seeing people get satisfied by my work and visting places for free it is definatly worth at least trying out for this program. This program changed my life it might change yours too.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this day and age, with the advent of modern society, there has become increasingly social evils. It, therefore, has been debatable while in several countries, they firmly believe that imprisonment is the best effective solution to lawbreakers, others think that it will be a good solution to educate offenders. According to my knowledge, I totally agree with the former view.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there is a wide range of compelling reasons to account for this. One evident strength is that prisons are important places that play a significant role in making sure social security. In prisons, there is a host of policemen who assumes the responsibility of capturing criminals and giving out some reasonable punishments to punish them. Especially for dangerous lawbreakers such as rapists or murders have to receive the death penalty or be sentenced to jail for a long time to warn them. In other words, If a nation doesn’t have imprisonment for those committing felonies, there will be thousands of people are able to be killed annually. Take Vietnam as a good example, thanks to enacting life imprisonment, the number of crimes declined considerably.\r\n\r\nAdditionally, there also have good education programmes which the authorities enact to guarantee that prisoners have a keen knowledge of social life and perceive what is morally right or wrong to steer clear of offending the crime down the road. Furthermore, they also sharpen some important skills and have vocational training to help them to remake their lives. In fact, they could make a living to alleviate the financial burden for their families. Contrarily, if they are just received wonderful education after committing the crime, they could not have the hands-on knowledge to find a job.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, Although it offers lots of noticeable benefits when adopting better education for crimes, I firmly believe that it will be surely a great idea to send out criminals into prison and imprisonment is also the most popular solution for criminals.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology is the most important part of our lives today.Through technolgy humans have created robots whcih is very important for the development of our future ahead as our lives our getting busier we need extra help for our parents and household work vice versa few people thinks the inventions of robots are dangerous because we will forget the value of humans.In my opinion i believe rrobots have negative impacts of our community in terms of jobs and health.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, the robots are everywhere and do help us with our daily chores like house cleaning and other esstienal jobs in our lives for example now robots serves in the restaurants and self billing counters and taking jobs of lots of young candidates who need jobs as an career.And also it has a vey negative impacts on health as growing techlonogy of robots will make humans lazy and unmoviitated.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, robotics are very important for humans in comming years as everything is controlled by AI systems our goverment, finances an d defense they work faster then humans in terms of gathering information and data.\r\n\r\nIn the conclusion, robots are importants for our future for the development in confidential securities and dangerous because we will not value human talent anymore with developing technology. In my opnion i believe the robots can take over humans intelligence very faster.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you like helping animals and taking them to safe places?Well thats what we do,we take the horses, Young Cows, Mule and other animals that were shipped overseas and take care of them. You can be hurt, worn out, tired,and even afraid but it still dosen't mater because think of how afraid the animals are before peple like us helped them out.\n\nDo you want to become a seagoing cowboy? Well I bet your like what's a seagoing cowboy. If you participate to be a\n\nSeagoing Cowboy then you get to explore the world, help others, create memories and get an amazing once in a lifetime oppourtunity.Or you can be like Luke and have a friend convince you or even join with you.\n\nYou could be going on vacation but also taking tasks all around the world. For instince say you have to check on the animals every hour, well on your freetime you could be exploring. Being a seagoing Cowboy can be risky but your doing a good deed and at least you tried. In paragraph 7 Luke got hurt but did that stop him from helping? No he jus waited to he was all better and went back at it.\n\nThink about Luke he had two jobs and left to help the UNRRA with Don. Just remember your not choosen to do this you have to have the courage and sign up yourself. Yes , your taking a risk to lose your life, family, and childhood but the animals dont. You have to have patients, time, and love animals. n\n\nWell now that you know what a Seagoing Cowboy is and what we do, maybe you should think about becoming one. It's not really a hard job, its actually entertaining and shocking. If you do sign up and participate you could learn new places and animals. You get to ride the waves, take care of animals, learn new things and meet new people. Think about it and spread the word with your spouse or even family and friends", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Hobbies are recreational activities that are pursued away from one's school or work. They are meant to be an escape from the mundane and a way of keeping people sane and happy. Unfortunately, they have become almost a luxury in today's fast-paced world.\nSeveral reasons can account for this massive decrease in the pursuit of hobbies. One such reason is the fact that hobbies require time and money which are two very dear resources in today's world. Social sophistication and technological advancements have brought about changes in hobbies. What used to be called hobbies in the past are now considered obsolete and the new ones, including video games and virtual reality require financial commitment in their pursuit. Even if one has the money to pursue such, he or she would have to set aside time in his or her busy schedule to enjoy those hobbies. It is therefore no wonder that most people found to pursue hobbies today are either wealthy youth or comfortable pensioners.\nSecondly, lack of interest may be an important factor why people devote little to no time to hobbies. Most of the educated lot are taught from a tender age only to concentrate on their studies in order to secure a comfortable future for themselves. Such children are discouraged from enjoying anything away from anything extracurricular and therefore grow into hobby-less adults who work all day and do nothing else otherwise. This is seen in a lot of Ghanaian homes where doing anything other than studying after school is deemed a taboo. Consequently, many grow into adults with little humour or mirth.\nMoreover, many people get exhausted with school or work, which have become extremely intensive nowadays, as compared to the more laid back past. After a tiring day, most people like to crawl into their beds to catch a night-long rest only to return to their busy life the next day.\nThis lack of hobby pursuit, though understandable, does the individual and society more harm than good. Many individuals today are being treated for one mental health or another. Hobbies are a good way to relax and destress through leisure and can go a long way to improve mental health. Its absence will only wreak havoc for the society, which will only consist of tired and apathetic individuals who could not care less about each other and their surroundings.\nIn conclusion, it is important, albeit difficult, to pay attention to hobbies in order to improve the health and psyche of the individual and society as a whole. More effort should be geared at encouraging hobbies at school and at the work place.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think author concludes story paragraph represents saengs decision try overcome obstacles way It used instead saying I try next spring show diction show goal decision different way example It says Almost reluctantly realized many things thought strange become quiet repetition season upon season almost familiar now At first geese flying sky new shes use Maybe author making reference geese since familiar driving test pass like got use familiar geese Since family came Vietnam shes adjusting changes life circumstances But Saeng seemed determined survive overcome The paragraph saying simply shell take test next spring author put paragraph show diction emphasizing geese representing learning something new hibiscus something familiar It overtones point story give survive", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear State Senate,\n\nThe Electoral College is insane. There should not be an Electoral College, the vote should be by popular vote for the presidents. People feel less important when they know that there vote does not go to the entire 538 votes. If you are in a democratic state, like Texas, but are republican, then your vote is not going to matter because the votes are just going to go to the democratic president. When looking back in 2000, Gore had more popular votes, yet he lost the election because of the Electoral College. Thats insane that he lost, because more people wanted him to be presidents, yet that is not how the Electoral College works.\n\nWith the swing states, they can really hurt one of the presidents. Lets say Florida, for example, is very close in which president is going to be voted for. That is 29 votes just from that state! If you eliminate the Electoral College, it will be more balanced and that will not make or break one of the presidents. The presidents do not bother with the states that they know they are going to lose, and they do not even visit those states. If we eliminate the Electoral College, then everyone will get to hear from the presidents, and that could give them several extra thousand votes.\n\nAlso, the less populated states, like Wisconsin with only 3 votes, feel like they are not important toward the overall votes. If there was no Electoral College, then there 500,000 votes would be a huge boost toward either president. When voting for president, the voters do not even vote for the president! They vote for the state of electors who vote for the president. Who knows if the electors will lie and represent the Democrats or Republicans and then vote for the other side.\n\nFinally, I leave you with my last reason of why we should get rid of the Electoral College. More people in the United States want a popular vote instead. Even Richard Nixon, Jimmy Carter, and Bob Dole think we should. 60% of the United States would prefer a direct election!!! That is a direct message to you that we need to get rid of the Electoral College and start using a popular vote!\n\nI hope you consider these changes to the voting system, as I have listed some of the best reasons. The majority of the country would like to see these changes take affect, not just me. I appreciate the consideration, thank you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author was talking about all off the crazy thing that venus has in common with planet earth, but it would be highly dangerous to go. When the author talks about all of the bad conditions that venus has its makes you really think how hard it would be to get to the hot lava planet. What the author is trying to get you to see is that venus has a lot of dangerous conditions, but that the scientists know how hard that would be.\n\nThe author starts off with putting details of venus in our head by saying things like, \"A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus\" and \"On the planets surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit\". By this the author is trying to tell you how hard it would be for man-kind to be in physical contact with venus. The author is putting physical details in our head about this planet.\n\nAfter the author starts talking about that he states the question \"why are scientists even discussing further visits to its surface\"? The author ask this to us thinking about whats the point if there is nothing speaical its just a hot rock. Wrong, the author states how venus was just like earth it had it valleys it had its water it had everything earth has. It would be very good to know that if anything happen to earth we always have a back up planet to go to.\n\nThe last thing that the author was trying to do was talk about how The National Aeronautics and Space Administration(NASA) has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. When I read that it kinda got me excitied i was thinking we might get to see mars wow thats cool. The author states that \"imagines a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the Venusian landscape\".\n\nIn conclusion what the author is trying to get the reader to do would be make all of the reader think about how cool it would be to be able to go to a \"earth like planet\". How he uses the details and the things they learned from NASA kinda gets you exicited about what will come in the future. So the author was giving us all of these reasoning about how dangerous it would be but it woukd be very good to know.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars can be a bad thing and a good thing for the world. Driverless cars would be a bad idea when it comes to the saftey of people. Driverless cars could also be a good thing for the econmy and earth.\n\nDriverless cars would not be such a good idea just because you dont really know if the technology is actually gonna work and be safe for people. Most technology if not all technology have probles sometimes. Just think of a car driving its self down the road and all of the sudden something goes wrong with the car and the car causes and accident where a few poeple got hurt or die. If something like this happens whos fault is it? The person in the vehicle or the people who desighned the vehicle?\n\nWe've been creating computer driven cars that also have a feature that the driver in the vehivle can take over and control the vehivle at any time. Apple reciently is making a car that drives its self but can also be driven by a person controling the vehicle. In my opinion thats ten times safer than a car that drives on it own. Most newer cars these days have features like Antilock breaking systems or sencors that make a vehicle back into an area or parking spot on its own. Ford Reacenlty came out with a truck that back itself up to hook onto a traler insted of the driver having to do it. During this period of the truck hooking to a traler by its self the driver has an option to use that feature or do it manualy.\n\nIn this passage it talks about BMW having a car with a feature called Traffic Jam Assistance witch is that the car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 mph, and it also has special touch sencors to make sure the driver keeps ahold of the steering wheele and is alert during this time.\n\nAs of right now I dont belive we have and cars that copletely drive them selfs, but alot of newer cars these days have features that can help assist you in stituations when needed. Some cars stop on there own if your getting to close to another vehicle and the driver is not paying attention. Those are the type of vehivles we need. We dont need cars that can drive themselfs that coud have something go wrong with the car and cause a reck or endager lifes. Even in some states it is illegal to test computer driven cars. I wonder why? It's probably becase they might not be sucha good idea.\n\nNow there are positives to drivelss cars. People would save money by not having to buy or use there cars when they have cars that can drive them around. The driveless cars would be good on gas so money would be saved on gas. Also not using much gas is good for our enviorment because it would be less polution to the earth if everyone started switching to using driveless cars. I think there are more negatives in this situation then positives.\n\nTo sum all of this up Im not sure if drivless cars are sucha good idea or ever will be a good idea untill later in the future after the technology has been tested for many of years and advanced to the fullest to where it has the capability of hadling a driveless car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever been able to imagine a time where cars could drive themselves? If they were manufactured would they be safe? The manufacturers say that they are safe. They haven't figured out how to program ways to get around traffic jams or constructon cites. If or when you get a driverless car you might still have to do a little bit of driving. BMW announced the development of \"Trafic Jam Assistant (TJA).\"\n\nThe car could handle speeds of up to 25 mph.\n\nWhen you have to take the wheel of the car, Googles car will simply anounce that you need to take over. Some other options on the subject are over heard displays and windsheild lights. Would these ideas be safe? Well these diusplays can be turned off which would be something not readily available to people who text and drive. This way the in-car system is actually a safety feature. Safety is a big concern.\n\nA big car company, Tesla, has projected a 2016 realese for a car capable of driving autopilot 90 percent of the time. Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan planned to have cars out in 2020 that can completely drive themselves. Hopefully they will be safe. Almost all driving laws strive to keep drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe. California, Nevada, Florids, and the District of Columbia lead the country in computer driven cars.\n\nWould the computer driven car be a good idea? They cost more money for what, so you dont have to put your foot on the brake and petals? It would be just as safe as you driving a car. I dont think that computer driven cars would be economically efficiant.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars may take over regular cars one day. If driverless cars come about I wonder how people would react. Would they all like them, would they not like them, or would some like them and some don't I just wonder. I'd vote for driverless cars. This is because it makes driving easier for new drivers and they will have less to worry about and it will make them feel comfortable than getting yelled at by their parents or drivers ed instructor.\n\nFirst, driverless cars would be a big help in the world today. This is because new drivers would be able to drive so much easier. Instead of having to worry about a crash they could possibly cause, they would be able to depend on the car to take control of the situation and keep them safe from the crash. When driving is all over people will feel more comfortable with being in a driverless care that will keep them safe and keep the car under control.\n\nSecond, some people in the world don't even drive. So they ride buses, bikes, or trains wherever they go. Having a driverless car that will drive for someone will boost their confidence up. Not only will they trust in cars and want to buy one but they will actually ride in a car and feel comfortable and confident inside it. People that don't feel comfortable or confident will be up lifted by having the car do all the work and won't have to worry about crashing or getting into a accident.\n\nFinal, when new drivers finally come along and start driving they will feel relieved of being yelled at by their parents or instuctors. Instead of being screamed and yelled at such as \"GO LEFT!, TURN RIGHT AT THIS STOP SIGN!, STOP!, TURN IN YOUR LANE NOT SOMEONE ELSE'S LANE! or STAY ON YOUR SIDE!.\" The driverless car will make all your life so much more unstressful. It would make you stop at a stop light and it would make your lane changes and turns.\n\nI like the fact of having a driverless car. If driverless cars were available one day I'd vote and buy one. They will help people with their confidence of being inside a car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever thought to yourself if driverless cars are real. Not just some cool editing onto a movie.Driverless cars are actual a thing that has been invented. But it is still being changed from glitches and adding new things to make them better. Driverless cars are pretty cool to think about. Imagin a vehicle that takes you places just bye typing you destination. Sounds like a game. But like all things their are bad things that could happen. To these driverless cars their is still going to be needed a person behind the steering wheel, to be ready in any moment that something may accure to take over the cars functioning. These are my thoughts on the driver less cars.\n\nI myself think that driverless cars are not good for my own saftey and other peoples safety. Besides normal automatic or shift gear cars are way better and more fun. Onto driverless cars youll have to be seated and be ready at any moment anything happens the car will give the car onto your hands. What if when that happens I am not awear of whats going on. I end up crashing onto someone else or something. Then i'll probably get the bill for the damaging. Doesn't seem right to me. But yet car companies such as Marcedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have the releasing of these cars by 2020. By that time our technology will be more advance then how it is today.\n\nMaybe till then i'll change my opinios about these cars.\n\nDriverless will take over regular cars some day. but intill them im staying with my shift gear vehicl. Like i said driverless cars may sound cool to think of and to own, but their are many updates to be made. Untill they make a full self operational car that will steer itself to a destination with 0% problems. What do you think of these driverless cars. Would you trade in or give up nor,al cars for these new ones. Make your choice wisly. Untill they have those cars have fun with you normal car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, people are inclined to know the history of the zone they live in. In some parts of the world, this curiosity is not restricted to the town or country but also includes their house. In this essay, I am going to give reasons why the history of houses has been searched and how people can accumulate data about it.\r\n\r\nFirst and foremost, houses are valuable property, so for purchasing or renting a house a large amount of money has to be paid. Since various natural disasters such as floods, earthquakes and storms can happen annually, by knowing about the past of a building people can be aware of the infrastructure and strength of the place they live in. For instance, earthquakes happen frequently in Japan hence, Japanese engineers have to construct buildings which can remain against this disaster, and the tenant or shoppers should be informed about it\r\n\r\nMany people due to the psychological effects are acquisitive to know the history of their accommodation. For many people, it is highly important to get positive energy from their house. Therefore, if a crime happened in a site and someone is killed, it cannot be a favourable place to live. A good example of this would be prisons. In some areas, the governments decide to sell the building prisons so it will not be a good place to live for these people even though they will be re-decorated.\r\n\r\nThere are numerous ways to gather data about old buildings. Asking from old local people and neighbours besides, looking in the local library can be the best method to get information. However, the modern way is surfing the Internet which may be really useful.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there is no doubt that knowing the past of a property can help people to establish a powerful bond. Personally, I think you can get positive feedback from your home if you know before you people have lived there happily and safely.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People’s opinions differ as to whether pupils should be taught how to paint and draw pictures at schools. While there are certain benefits in gaining this skill, I do not believe this should be a mandatory course for all children.\r\n\r\nThere are various reasons why people believe that pupils should learn paint and draw pictures during their school lives. Firstly, it might be the reason that learning the skill to paint could become a hobby for children, so they could benefit from this in the rest of their lives. For example, permissive parents are criticised to allow their children to play computer games for a long time, which is harmful for their health such as the common eyesight problem among young people. Children with a hobby like painting and drawing will undoubtedly help them spend their spare time in a more meaningful way, where they can draw different pictures and sell them, raising money for charities. As a result, this will have a positive effect on them.\r\n\r\nIn spite of the benefits mentioned above, I think that it is totally unnecessary for all children to attend these classes. Painting and drawing lessons for children who are not interested in them could be detrimental in their self-development where they would feel that they were forced, leading to demotivational emotions. Furthermore, a society needs more variable allocations for different roles in the future such as plumbers, engineers, doctors and teachers. Not every child wants to be a painter or artist in future, thus it would be pointless for them to learn this. Instead, their time devoting on painting and drawing could be better spent in the subjects where they are keen to learn. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I believe children should only encourage to learn to draw and paint if they are interested in these lessons.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "While it is true that watching TV affects children, it is difficult to determine whether it is the content of the programs or the length of time spent watching them that has a more significant impact on children. It seems to me that although the amount of time does affect youngsters, it is the content of the programs that has a more marked influence on them. On the one hand , the consequences of watching TV for long periods of time can be deleterious. Firstly , the longer children are exposed to TV programs, the more likely it is for them to become addicted to watching television. When children become over-reliant on television for entertainment, they might neglect engagement in outdoor activities. This may result in a sedentary lifestyle that is highly detrimental to their physical health. More importantly , excessive TV watching impairs children’s communication abilities, so they find it hard to play or live in harmony with others. As a result , children would feel discouraged from having real interactions with people around them if they spent a huge amount of time in front of the screen, which may hinder their development of social skills. On the other hand , it is the broadcasted images that have the most direct effects on young viewers. Firstly , in most countries the majority of TV shows present glamorized depictions of inappropriate materials such as violence, drug abuse or casual sex, thus youngsters may adopt unhealthy habits and improper behavior. For example , they might fall under the impression that the use of alcoholic drinks is fashionable without being aware of the health risks they carry and later end up consuming these substances. Besides , in our modern consumer society, commercials also affect how children behave. Unwary young viewers could be easily swayed by captivating advertisements for junk food or video games, productswhose target audience includes children, and so may pester their parents to buy these goods impulsively. In conclusion , although both factors have their own implications, I believe the element with more considerable impacts on children is the content. Hence , parental involvement is essential in controlling children’s TV viewing habits and in shaping a child’s values to help them enter adult life with a healthy mind", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Newspaper I writing letter behalf busy people country We come conclusion need want need computers life First need communicate people Second need computers research school work Lastly us kids need computers type essays prompts papers class Communication important everyday life For instance I grandma lives I get see twice year person Throughout entire year I video chat computer whole lot easier flying Without computers video chat grandma I communication one two times year Using computer communication extremly helpful allows many things without travelling like video chatting Another reason computers neccessity reseach easier Many kids nowadays much homework spend internet For I I The internet quick way get reseach Plus research I found accurate book library Computers absolutly needed kids load homework projects need researched Thinks time kids type essays prompts unimaginable Just I type english essay fluently paragraph Final grade I type computer Typing things computer cames school also whole dad frequently typing also typing essays company Many things nowadays order perfect written computer get result hoping In conclusion computers modern devices going live Computers provide great communication everyone around even across country Also make research school become lot efficent Finally computers type papers essays faster Computers neccessity living", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "REMOVING BOOKS FROM THE LIBRARY BECAUSE THEY ARE OFFENSIVE IS A GOOD IDEA I DO NOT AGREE BECAUSE THE BOOKS SHOULD NOT BE GONE FOR GOOD THERE SHOULD BE AGE LIMITS ON BOOKS BOOKS THAT ARE OFFENSIVE SHOULD BE ONLY ALLOWED TO ADULTS OR A CERTAIN AGE GROUP THIS WILL HELP WITH CHILDREN NOT BEING SCARED TO HELP KEEP HISTORY AROUND AND FREEDOM OF SPEECH BY MAKING AS AGE LIMIT ON CERTAIN BOOKS WE CAN KEEP CHILDREN INACENT AND PURE WITH BOOKS SUCH AS DATE KIDS OR UNDER SHOULD NOT READ THAT BOOK AND UNDER ARE STILL NIEVE LITTLE KIDS DO NOT KNOW ABOUT SEX OR EVEN PREMARRITAL SEX WITH AND IS GIRLFRIEND HAVING SEX EVERY OTHER CHAPTER ITS VERY INAPPORITE FOR A CHILD TO READ ALSO WITH ALL THE TORTURE PARTS IT WOULD SCARE A LITTLE BOYGIRL OUT OF HISHER MIND WHEN GETTING RID OF OFFENSIVE BOOKS WE REMOVE HISTORY THINK ABOUT WHERE WE WOULD BE IF ANNE FRANK DID NOT WRITE HER DIARY WE WOULD NOT KNOW HOW BAD HILTER REALLY WAS WE COULD ONLY ASSUME WITH GETTING RID OF BOOKS CAUSE THEY ARE OFFENSIVE IS A RIDICULOUS REASON BOOKS ARE ONLY OFFENSIVE TO SENATIVE PEOPLE BOOKS KEEP HISTORY ALIVE THINK WHAT ARE WE WITHOUT HISTORY FINALLY FREEDOM OF SPEECH IS WHY THEY SHOULD SAY AUTHORS HAVE THE RIGHT TO WRITE WHAT THEY WANT IF THE READER DOES NOT LIKE IT AND FINDS IT OFFENSIVE THEN THEY SHOULD NOT READ IT IF SHAKE SPEARE WAS TOLD HE COULD NOT WRITE HIS STORIES WE WOULD NOT HAVE THE TRAGETY OF ROMEO AND JULIET SO MANY BOOKS WOULD BE LOST IF SOMEONE COULD WRITE BECAUSE IT WAS OFFENSIVE BOOK THAT ARE TOO OFFENSIVE OR INAPORITE FOR A CHILD TO READ THERE SHOULD BE A AGE LIMIT ON IT IF WE GET RID OF CERTAIN BOOKS WE GET RID OF CERTAIN HISTORY AS WELL GETTING RID OF THOSE BOOKS TELLS A NEXT COMING AUTHOR THAT FREEDOM OF SPEECH DOES NOT MATTER TO OFFENCIVENESS SO KEEP THE BOOKS AROUND ITS ONLY WORDS", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is argued that authorities should take steps to change citizens’ lifestyles. While some populations intend that everybody should have responsibilities for their choice in life, I believe in the positive regulation the local authorities usher in.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, living your own life has a variety of positive in an individual’s life sector. A first noticeable point is that once people can do what they like, they will work more effectively. To explain, when individuals find their passion in the workplace, they will devote full of energies to the companies, thereby boosting economic development. Furthermore, being able to choose a lifestyle that is suitable for yourself will reduce stress and enhance people’s health. For example, some individuals play sports to improve their body strength, while others maintain weight by engaging in a healthy diet. Even these kinds of activities may have negative effects such as being injured or becoming too skinny.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, the merits of choosing their own way of life cannot overshadow the vital role of the intervention of the state. The primary reason is that by enacting laws regard to control societies, the ministry can lead the country through the economic crisis. For instance, after becoming an independent country, Singapore's authorities offered many regulations to develop such as one family just having one offspring or asking folk to live together in houses built by the government, as a result, Singapore has become a world financial centre. In addition, with their responsibility, the state should encourage citizens to raise their awareness of society. To illustrate, the government should make residents to be involved in social activities to connect crowds together or local authorities can mitigate public who smoke in public areas by punishing them strictly. Therefore, it can prevent humans from serious diseases in the future.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while there are strong arguments that personal decision has more benefit, I believe that concerned authorities always give appropriate choices for their residents.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "For many years some NASA workers have been trying to find life on Mars. But their search has bee unsuccessful. No matter what they tried ,they could not find anything that could brng life. But no matter what they would not stop trying.\n\nAfter so many years one of NASA's spacecrafts captured a picture of what some people say looked like a face. NASA tought that they had finally found life on mars. But after some reacherch they figured that it wasn't a face' that it was a landform. But some people weren't satisfied.\n\nScientists believed that the Face was an alien artifact. They also said that it looked lake a head of an Egyptian Pharoh because of an unusual shadow. But before they thought it was a Pharoh, they figured that it was just another Mratian mesa.\n\nBut then the scientists finally figured out that the picture actually shows a Martian equivalent of a butte or messa. After that some people believed what they wanted. But some believed that it was a landform. A guy named Garvin, said that it reminded him most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\n\nThat it was a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa, about the same height as the Face on Mars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" describes many of the issues in the debate of driverless cars. There are both advantages and disadvantages to adopting this new technology. Based on this article, driverless cars should continue being developed because they have potential to be safer and cheaper than cars with human drivers.\n\nIncreased safety is one of the strongest advantages of self-driving cars. Google's self-driving cars have never crashed in more than five hundred thousand miles. While the article does not give a number for comparison, most would know that few humans possess such a clean driving record. Even if the cars are more expensive, they promote general welfare by protecting passengers.\n\nCurrently, these \"driverless cars\" still require drivers, which highlights another strength of driverless cars: they do not sacrifice the benefits of cars driven by humans. If the car is in a situation too complex for its computer, a human can always take over. However, regular cars do not have the advantage of being able to use a computer to solve traffic situations too complec for humans. For example, a human probably could not quickly simplify the following math expression: ln(334^6). On the other hand, a computer could solve it nearly instantly. The driver and computer work together in current driverless cars, leading to increased safety.\n\nA potential issue with driverless cars is the cost, but driverless cars will actually become cheaper than human driven cars. Sergy Brin predicts driverless cars will \"use half the fuel of today's taxis.\" Fuel can be expensive, but driverless cars use less fuel. Also, since driverless cars are safer, they crash less, meaning that they need to be replaced less often. Eventually, driverless cars will no longer be much more expensive than regualar cars, as Sebastian Thrun decribes how radar previously was incredibly expensive but now can be affored by anyone.\n\nThe greatest weakness of driverless cars is that they are illegal in most states. Still, this disadvantage is only a temporary issue. No polititian could have created laws for automobiles in the 1700's, but now, as mentioned in this article, there are numerous complex laws for cars. These laws must have taken time and effort to create. If regular cars could become legal with time, driverless cars will also become legal.\n\nDriverless cars are a new technology, but these cars are already safer than cars with human drivers. Development should continue, since prices will eventually fall, allowing many people to transport themselves safely compared to current cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that driveless cars could how some benefit for people, but I feel as though it would do more harm than good.\n\nLike it says in paragraph 9 what if the technology fails and someone gets injured, who is at fault, the driver or the manufacturer. People may never have reason to learn how to drive a car manually. The passage says we are grow closer to the destination every day, but maybe we should never get there maybe some things should never be invented. New laws will be needed in order to cover liability in case of an accident. In most states it is illegal even to test these cars. Only four states allow this just in caes this doesn't work out.\n\nMy final conclusion is that these cars should not be aloud on the road. Having said that it wont stop people from trying to invent them. They will probably be too expensive for the average person to buy anyway. But it might be good for some people just be careful.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus, often referred to as Earth's sister planet, is a very Earth-like, but harsh place. The atmosphere itself is made up of 97 percent carbon dioxide. The clouds contain highly corrosive sulfric acid. On top of all of that the temperatures reach 800 degrees Fehrenheit on average, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greeater than that of Earth's. Despite all of these dangerous elements, Venus should still be studied. The author of this passage thinks that studying Venus is a good idea, but doesn't give enough information to back it up.\n\nThe author of this passage thinks Venus being studied is a good idea, but at some points it is hard to tell. They do a good job of listing facts and what Venus is like. The author makes many claims that it would be a great idea, but doesn't do a good job on backing them up, making it hard to tell if they are for Venus being studied or against it. They bring up the point that NASA is working on an idea that would allow humans to survey Venus, a blimp-like spacecraft would carry them and the researchers could have a view of the ground. They then go on to say that this idea would be dangerous. They had previously stated that the atmosperic pressure is 90 times greater than Earth's and that submarines that had been built for the lowest depths of our oceans would be crushed instantly. If this is true, then wouldn't the spacecraft be crushed as well? The author counters this point before even stating it. It makes it difficult to believe that they support the idea of exploring Venus or not.\n\nThey also point out that the temperatures average 800 degrees Fahrenhiet, and would easily melt most metals. In the case of the blimp the hull that holds the reseachers would have to be metal to be able to withstand the weight of them. The author also fails to give examples of what metals those temperatures can melt. With that being said, what metals would the reseachers be able to use for the hull? If the metal melts at this temperature the researcher will die, but even if it doesn't metal melt who's to say that it won't get too hot and cause the researchers to overheat? There are many variables that play into this and the author fails to point them out.\n\nThe author's second note of Venus was the clouds that contain highly corrosive sulfuric acid. If the clouds were to release this acid wouldn't the acid eat through the blimp? What could the reseachers use to prevent the acid from eating through the blimp? Once again the author fails to tell us what could be done. They also state that there are frequent lightning storms. If the blimp gets hit by these storms, there isn't much that can protect the researchers at that point. Whether it be the lightning storms or the acid rain the blimp would not be able to withstand either one of them and it would go down easily.\n\nIn conclusion the author does a poor job of supporting the idea of researching and exploring Venus. They fail to provide enough evidence to show that it would be a good idea. The author gives the reader plenty of facts about Venus, but then those facts completely counter the idea that we should explore Venus. Making their claim of the exploration of Venus being a good thing, hard to agree with. If more claims with facts to back up the statement the author gave were given it would be more clear the author is for the exploration and it would be easier to agree with them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People all over the world would love to travel to Venus; to learn new things about the planet, and what it actually looks like, but it is very dangerous. Venus may be very cool looking and theres so much to learn about it; things you might of not of known. It may be to impossible to tavel to this planet, there are to many dangerous things that happen and it would not be safe. In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author supports their idea of studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author gives so much information about Venus and the dangers, and to study it than to visit the planet is safer.\n\nEven though Venus looks very cool looking and fun to learn about, well it is, but it would not be safe to travel to Venus. The author in this article gives a lot of information about venus such as, the goods and the bads, and why and why not one should travel to that planet. In the aticle \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author states, \"Also notable, Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in our solar system.\" Venus is dangerous, it is very hot and has the hottest surface out of all the planets. The author supports their suggestion by putting out there the fact of how hot Venus is, and that studying Venus is a worthly pursuit.\n\nVenus looks very cool and most people wish they could travel there, but it wouldn't be such a good idea. Venus is very dangerou in many ways and you wouldn't be able to be by it in a spaceship, it's far from fun to visit. Studying Venus gives you a lot more information then to visit and might be able to make it back. In the article \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" the author suggests that studying Venus is a worthly pursuit despite the dangers it presents. The author supports their idea by giving information about Venus and the dangers that it has.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This \"Face on Mars\" should'nt be a big deal, I mean its only a natrual landform why do we need to keep going back and take pictures of it because you and other people think that it was created by aliens. The\"Face on Mars\" was not created by the aliens and if it was wouldn't that mean that they were trying to reach out at us, if the aliens were trying to reach out to us dont u think they would of done it a while back and if so have a better plan then putting a face on mars.\n\nWhen NASA unveiled the image for all too see the caption note they put said \"huge rock formation....which resembles a human head...formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and a mouth.\" Even NASA didnt thing much of it other than it was a huge rock formation that was on mars. If NASA thought that it was a formation created by aliens they wouldnt of ever let the \"Face on Mars\" star in Hollywood films, appear in books, magazines, radio talk shows, and even haunted grocery store check out lines for over 25 years!\n\nSome people think the Face is bona fide evidence of life on mars- evidence that NASA would rather hide, Just like people say that their keeping Area 51 a secret.\n\nIf it was really evidence of life on Mars then they would of hidden it like you guys say they do with Area 51.\n\nThe people who went out and took another look at Mars because people said that it was cloudy and that perhaps alien markings were hidden by haze said that\n\n\"As a rule of thumb, you can dicern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size,\" they went on by saying. \"So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were.\" What they found out is that the picture actually shows a Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa-LANDFORMS common around the American West. I hope all of this proves my point to you that the \"Face on Mars\" was just a natrual landform and not a marking created by aliens.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars is a good change. This is the kind of change we need, because cars are our main transportation. Right now cars are not helping the economy and planet. Cars are causing global warming and the gases prices are so expensive. People are also in danger because of car accidents. Driverless cars will help us solve many of our problems.\n\nDriverless Cars has many pros to it. Driverless cars would not be all driverless for public transportation. There would still be a driver for pulling in and pulling out of places and being alert when there are accidents. It alert the driver if they are in any danger, and it gets the driver to places faster. If they were all driverless with no driver in the front, then alot of people will being losing their jobs. They aren't going to make driverless cars totally driverless though. Driverless cars are a good idea because it uses less fuel which is somewhat helping the planet, and it is more flexible than a bus. The gas prices might go down and there will be less people getting hurt or killed in accidents.\n\nI do see a future in driverless cars. There are so many good reasons to have them why shouldn't we make them. I hope that they keep a person driving too, because if they got rid of the front driver many people will lose their jobs. The driverless cars have a good future and will help the world and the people in many ways.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "One time I pacient I went cousin I baby sit cousin room pack cause making back My cousin handful sometimes always gets way But I pacient waited til trip away I didnt complain til I got home til mom Me cousin got lots fights vacation But I still love I pacient cousin even maybe wanted I knew mom proud I remember went walk pond find alligators But wanted go packI knew I give considering hes immature But I went flow went pack That time I pacient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is believed that the international trade and cultural exchange between nations brings significant benefits for each side, while some others think that the tendency causes the loss of their traditional and cultural values. In my opinion, the advantages of this phenomenon overshadow the disadntages.\r\n\r\nThere are a number of reasons why some people believed that developing business and cultural cooperation has an adverse impact on their national identities. First, the globalisation poses a serious threat to traditional and culture value of a nation. This can be explained by the fact that multinational corporations often use their national image and culture to advertise their items, which trigger curiously potential customers that come from overseas. For example, younger generation in Viet Nam tends to imitate lifestyle and fashion of Korean due to the influence of commercial channels, which poses many challenges for nations on how to maintain their nation identities.\r\n\r\nHowever, In my opinion, I believed that the positive outcomes of this tendency are immense. First, Multinational companies create a wide range of job opportunities for local people, which help improve their living standard and boost the local economy. For instance, Apple company has provided thousands of jobs for workers in Viet Nam, Which help them avoid the risk of unemployment and live more comfortably. Second, International commerce and cultural exchange are considered as a golden chance for local companies to flourish in the global market. This means that, In order to compete with international companies, local companies have to be more creative and innovative, they also have much more opportunities to approach new technology and modern machines from other countries. A a result, they can product higher quality and cheaper items, which help them become more competitive with multinational companies. Finally, this trend gives people the chance to explore and understand deeply the culture of other countries. In fact, working in the multinational corporations, A person would expose different cultures and languages from their colleagues who come from other nations.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, although this tendency poses challenges for countries on how to prevent the negative influene of foreign culture, In my opinion, the cultural and businees cooperation brings considerably economical and social benefits for nations", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The \"face on Mars\" is not a face at all. The shadows cause this landformation to appear to have a mouth, nose, and eyes. In the 2001 photo it was summer, so there was no shadows to cast the facial features as in the 1976 photo. If Nasa really discovered life on Mars they would tell the public because it would be a huge discovery. These conspiracy theorists say aliens are so smart, well if they are so smart why haven't they contacted us.\n\nWhy would these oh so genious aliens waste time on making this face? I'll tell you why, because they dont exist it was just a Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa. The people of Nasa have done as much as they can with this natural landformation. They took another photo in 1998 after the first photo because they wanted to prove it wasn't aliens.\n\nThe photo in 2001 proved that it was not an alien creation. These theorists say all these things that make Nasa seem so protective and amke it seem like they hide information. If Nasa were hiding information why would they release the photo in the first place. If it were alien markings and they knew about it why take two more photos, to prove the theorists were wrong. One day they will land on Mars, and Nasa will prove to us that there are no ancient life forms there. When they land and prove us wrong the conspiracy theorists will stay say they are lying.\n\nThe theorists love to make people believe what they want because it's all about the best conspiracy. If one were to have the better conspiracy they would knock their compition out of the way. They make money on how many subscribers they get and the better the conspiracy, the more subscribers.\n\nSome poeple will always doubt what Nasa really searches for. They don't understand that Nasa is not in it for personal gain. They are searching for answers for answers about our universe and if there was alien life forms Nasa would tell the people with so much joy and wonder. One day we will know the truth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using cars has become a big part in our everyday lives. Cars can be really convenient when traveling, or driving a long way to work or school, but they also come with disadvantages, such as the gas your car burns off can pollute the air, and cause issues like smog. Less cars means less traffic, which leads to less accidents. We've become so reliant on cars that we dont really get out much and walk or bike, which could lead to things like obesity and other medical problems. Limiting car usage has many advantages that could help the environment, and ourselves.\n\nAir pollution is probably one of the main disadvantages that come with cars. The gas that your car burns, releases harmful chemicals that can cause environmental problems, like smog for example. That's not good, especially for people who have health problems, such as ahsma. I know from personal experience that my little sister has bad ahsma, and sometimes she finds it hard to breathe if she walks into a room where someone has smoked in even hours before. Image how the smog would affect other people like that. Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air a bit. The smog cleared quite a bit just within a few days with the ban. They even recorded that due to the ban, there was a 60 percent congestion drop.\n\nAs stated in the last paragragh, due to the driving ban in Paris there was a huge drop in traffic. With less traffic, comes less possibility of multiple accidents a day happening. Less people would lose their lives, or be faced with huge insurance and medical bills. One time, my dad got into an accident on the way to work. He was fine, but the car wasn't. His insurance went sky high, and the expences to repair the car was unbelievable, and it was really difficult for him, financially, to pay for everything after the wreck. Limiting car usage, in my opinion, would be a really good thing for people.\n\nWith vehicles, we don't really have the need to walk or ride a bike anymore, because wherever we need to get to, we can just drive there. Excersise, to me, is really important. Walking, jogging, biking, ect. are good things to help keep things, such as our blood sugar in check. My uncle recently was having really high blood sugar levels and it was causing him to lose vision, and making him nausious. He went to the doctor about it and they informed him that it was so high because he doesn't get any excersise ot physical activities, he just sits on his couch all day, or when he needs to go somewhere, he drives. Medical issues like that could be prevented, especially if there was a limited car usage to where people would have to walk or bike to their destination.\n\nI believe that with limiting car usage comes with plenty of advantages, a few being less air pollution, less accidents, and less obesity and health problems.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driven by the advances in artificial intelligence, the use of robot technology has been widely spread on many occasions. While advocates believe that it marks social progress and will gain popularity in future, others are concerned that this kind of machine may make human-beings get into terrible trouble. From my perspective, it brings more good than harm.\r\n\r\nAutomation in manufacturing can significantly increase efficiency and improve productivity. The amount of work an automatic machine can finish in a day is perhaps 100 times as much as a person’s workload. Arduous and repetitive work ranging from the transportation of goods to the operation of assembly can be done automatically, so humans have more time to do creative work and enjoy leisure activities. In addition, the application of robotics can reduce workers' exposure to various hazards that cause damage to health or pose a risk of injury or death. For instance, in case of a gas blast, robotic counterparts can be sent to the scene of the explosion to carry out dangerous tasks. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there is no doubt that robots may have the potential to generate negative impacts on us. For one thing, it may cause rising unemployment because manpower will be replaced by automatic machines in the workplace, which are not only cost-effective but require nothing but energy. This may upend industrialisation as a whole, widening the gap between the rich and poor. Another concern is that someday robotic machines might equip themselves with high intelligence, thus ruling the world and enslaving humans. However, robots will be unable to become the ruler on Earth just as what some sci-fi movies portray, because have no soul, meaning that the lack of creation and critical thinking restrain them from taking charge of the world. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, pressured by the shortage of manual labour and propelled by technological development, robots will play a crucial role in the future, which, although they may pose multifaceted risks to our society, should not obscure the benefits of automation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Evaluating Expressions is Effective\n\nI believe that the Facial Action Coding System would be beneficial to read students' emotional expressions.\n\nHaving the capability to detect students' emotions through computers can have many positive outcomes, such as promoting ads, increasing learning comprehension, and graphic design improvements.\n\nThe use of this technology having the abililty to read one's emotions, can be valuable in the fact that it can promote ads more efficiently.\n\nIn paragraph 6, they say, \"For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\"\n\nThis phrase prevails how if the computer can detect your emotions, it can also detect how you feel about a promotion.\n\nThis will help sell more products for companies, and help buyers get information on what they are actually interested in.\n\nThis new software will also come in handy in increasing learning comprehension.\n\nIt states in paragraph 6 that Dr. Huang says, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.\n\nThen it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\"\n\nThis statement makes logical sense, in the fact that a student may be able to understand his or her work better if a Facial Action Coding System computer is available.\n\nThis could possibly increase literacy rates, simply due to the fact that a computer can detect facial expressions.\n\nAnother reason that these new devices are beneficial is because they can improve graphic designing.\n\nThis makes video games, video surgery, graphic models, and other animated subjects more realistic.\n\nDr. Huang also states, \"Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication, so computers need to undertand that, too.\"\n\nAlthough the technology can be very valuable in the classroom, it can have a downside, however.\n\nHaving Facial Action Coding System computers can result in miscommunications.\n\nParagraph 3 states, \"Eckman has classified six basic emotions--happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness.\"\n\nA student learning a lesson on a computer may have a frown on their face because they are having a bad day.\n\nThe computer may pick up this emotion, and mistake it for not understanding what is being taught.\n\nAll technology is capable of having mishaps.\n\nThis new device may not be guaranteed to be 100% accurate at all times.\n\nOverall, the value of using this technology to read students' emotional expressions can be unbelievably useful.\n\nThe pros of using this new software, tremendously outweigh the cons.\n\nI believe that students having this resource would create positive outcomes in the long run.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author reveals that, in the near future, automatic cars that remain capable of running without a human driver are very possible. Although the author presents some negatives of these driverless cars, the positives most definitely overtake the negatives. Driverless cars are an amazing, technologically advanced, useful invention than any user would benefit greatly from. Every type of user, whether it be someone who uses itonce a month or every day, would benefit from attaining a driverless, automatic car. They are coming soon, in the very near future, and there are many good things that society should look forward to whenever they become a reality.\n\nDriverless cars seemed to be such a futuristic idea until automobile companies began creating automatic systems within cars. Although these cars still require a human driver, they are very close to getting to the point where a driver is not necessary. In the article, the author states that cars already made, \"...alert the driver to take over when pulling in and out of driveways or dealing with complicated traffic issues, such as navigating through roadwork or accidents.\" This statement reveals that although the automatic components are very useful and beneficial, the cars still, at this point, require a driver. However, sensors that have been advanced within the last ten years can almost individually run the car. The author states that even though the progress of sensors that can lock the brakes, accelarate the vehicle, and steer the car has been very substantial, \"Further improvements in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more and more driving tasks on their own.\" By stating this, the author opens readers up to the fact that different sensors are being created in order to complete the different tasks and skills that driving requires. Soon enough, within only some years, a few companies have stated that they believe they will have a completely driverless car completed by the year 2020. These completely automatic cars will help and assist users by allowing for better transportation and accounting for more accurate driving techniques.\n\nThe invention of these driverless cars will not only assist users of the technological advancement, but will also help to save the environment. The cars that Google cofounder Sergey Brin, \"forsees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus.\" When the author states this fact, readers can understand that these driverless cars would ultimately change the entire world. By using less fuel, there are less toxic fumes going into the air. Currently, air pollution is a large issue in today's society as a whole. If these driverless cars are invented in the short time that they are predicted to arrive, the world could take a complete turn towards a better ecosystem.\n\nUltimately, driverless cars seem to be a very positive oncoming invention. As they are already more than halfway towards becoming an actual item, many companies are working extremely hard to bring this idea fully to life. The benefits of more efficient public transportation and easier assistance remain very important and useful to the people of today's society. The fact that these public transportation driverless cars would be better for the ecosystem and allow for less air pollution is yet another reason in which they would benefit greatly everyone and the entire world, in the long run. Driverless cars are not something that people should be afraid of; they are simply just technology being taken to the next level. As many people, such as Sergey Brin, foresee, driverless cars would benefit and take over many daily tasks, help the environment, and solve issues for public transportation.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In modern society, most people believe that money is as important and indispensable as water. As a result, in many countries, people talk more and more about money, such as how much they earn or pay for things in everyday conversation).\nThis phenomenon, I think is a negative development. And I have three reasons for this:\n1. Inner hypocrisy;\n2. Lack of confidence in oneself;\n3. Thinking and vision.\nFirst of all, the inner hypocrisy. Many young people like to talk to their friends about how much they earn and how many expensive things they buy. At the college reunion, everyone should introduce himself or herself. For example, what kind of work he or she is doing now; Recently bought a house and a car somewhere, and then has to recommend it to others. The core purpose is to say \"I've made millions in just a few years and bought a house and a car.\" Although they look nice on the outside, they are empty inside. Therefore, the inner hypocrisy is because they are empty in their heart and have nothing else to compare with others. They can use the money to make up for and satisfy their inner emptiness, and only in others can they find their sense of existence, recognition, and attention to themselves.\nSecondly, I am not confident in myself. Many elderly people like to chat about their children while playing cards under the community pavilion. For example: if your child is married; How much does your child earn in a month; Did your child buy you anything expensive? If you answer in the negative, you will be looked down upon, even saying, \"Your children are working such long hours for so little money and they don't buy you anything nice.\" These people often talk about it because they are not confident in themselves and they know that their children are inferior in abilities and other aspects. In other words, they are uncertain and reckless. So they like to show off in front of each other and want to prove themselves and their ability to each other.\nFinally, the thinking and vision are not high. Every country or place has different classes of people, such as those living in rural China and; Paternal (they all lived in the past); on the surface look good in every way, but only after material things. Because they think money is the most important, money can do a lot of things, and only money can give them a sense of security. As can be seen from this, a person's circle of friends and living environment can determine a person's thinking and vision, so, only if your surroundings are positive, can attract more positive people like you.\nIn a word, if a person always talks about money, it shows that he is hypocritical inside, not confident in himself, thinking and vision are not high. So. Be sure to constantly improve your thinking and vision, constantly improve your ability in all aspects, and even keep positive at all times, so that not only can attract more people like you, but also your future life will be better.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nick D'Alto certainly makes readers think when he mentions using FACS (Facial Action Coding Systems) in a classroom environment. Such an idea is actually quite plausible, since FACS could recognize boredom or confusion and react by providing a more interactive or detailed lesson plan for teachers, and could help students be more interested in the activities as well as help then understand why they are doing them.\n\nIf FACS is something that could help students learn and keep them from getting frustrated and dropping out or giving up, then that is something students deserve. Using FACS could help classes cover more content and better understand and retain that content by telling teachers when a student understands, so they can move on to the next lesson instead of staying on the same one. Similarly, FACS could tell when the students are enjoying the classes, which means they will remember the information better by being able to reference a fun activity.\n\nFor the above reasons, FACS can be highly useful once integrated into a school environment. The idea of a program that helps students enjoy learning by analyzing 44 major facial muscles could be the beginning of a new world for students.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you want to hear a story? so i was at work cause im a scientist an me in my friend had an agrument about what happen to mars about the facemark.\n\nThe agrument started because we were talking talking about it an he said that a alien put it there i said impossible. So he got mad at me i said state your reason why you think a alien put it there. He responed that he dont know i said you have to know something but then he saw an picture and he said the picture look like alien heads.\n\nThen i gave him my response he said why you don't think it's aliens i told him i don't belive and aliens. He said thats not a good enough reason because i did not state facts so i told him the reason why i dont belive aliens are real beacuse i never heard one i never saw one with my own eyes and i also said the face dont look nothing like a alien. The argument kept going on because he said i dont know what a alien look like so you dont.\n\nLast, we came together an said we dont know cause we kept arguing about how was a alien and how it was not a alien. He did not like my response when i said i dont know how they look how they sound thats why i said it was not a alien. It also kept going cause i did not like his response he did give me details or nothing. He just told me he look up a picture that look like alien thats why we came together and said we don't know.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Everyday technology is advancing, and everday more and more students are not taking school serious becuase they can't focus or they just don't want to pay attention. With the invention of the Facial Action Coding System in classrooms across the world today, it would make students want to interact even more. But there are flaws. Things go wrong with technology all the time. Sometimes it's too expensive, or the computers don't work, right and it would stop a lot of face to face interacton around the classroom.\n\nWith the Facial Acting Coding System, more students would pay attention because, the system could tell how they feel about things and how to make them better, and happier. But with all good things about the system there are still bad things too. For some schools it would be way too exppensive. Most schools wouldn't be able to afford it, and if they did something could still malfunction and go wrong. Even if they did afford it, the system would still be expensive and hard to fix.\n\n\"Imagine a computer that knows when you're happy or sad\". Although it sounds like a good idea, it doesn't always work out the way it should. Technology is always breaking and malfunctioning, and needing to be fixed in some way. Technology is reliable in the classroom, but when it comes to new technology who is going to fix it? They would need experts around all the time and they can get expensive to pay for as well.\n\nInteraction is a big part in the way students and develop and grow. With the new technology being brought in, students would sit infront of a computer all day and would not interact with a lot of people. That is raising students in an unhealthy environment.\n\nAs technology grows, so do we. But some forms of technology should not cross paths with things. Like the way we raise our students.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever thought of being part of the great union of the Seagoing Cowboys? There are many reasons to be one, like the fact that you have intereaction with livestock, get to visit unique places, sail the oceans, and much more.\n\nSeagoing Cowboys are people who sign up to the UNRRA. The UNRRA is the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration. It is 44 nations joined together to help the countries in need from being left in the ruins after World War II. Being a Seagoing Cowboy also counts as a military service.\n\nWhile being a Seagoing Cowboy you get to take care of all of the livestock that is getting shipped across the ocean from one country to another. The animals have to be fed and watered two or three times a day. The animals need to be fed either hay or bags of oats, and every once in a while their stalls need to be cleaned.\n\nOne of the best things you get to do is sightseeing. You could get to have many trips and see many cool things. We do a lot of sailing on the Atlantic and Pacific Ocean. In total I've been on the Atlantic 16 times and the Pacific twice. Don't even get me started on the unbelievable cattle-boat trips. For a small-town bot like i was it was incredible. I got to visit the Acropolis in Greece, sightsee in Europe, touran excavated castle in Crete, ride a gondola in Venice, and marvel at the Panama Canal on my way to China.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy isn't just about the travel and sightseeing. We still had fun on board, especially on the return trips when the animals had been uploaded and their stalls were empty. We would enjoy playing baseball, volleyball, table-tennis games. We would also play fencing and boxing matches. Last but not least we enjoyed reading, whittling, and other small games to pass the time.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy was not only fun for me, but it also opened up the world in a whole different perspective. It also made me more aware of other countries problems and needs. With that experience my family was a host to a number of international students, and exchange visitors or many years.\n\nI loved my experience as being a Seagoing Cowboy, and I hope you will too. Welcome aboard future Seagoing Cowboy!", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Based understanding story I think author concludes story paragraph emphize happened well gate back get readler thinking build te excitement question well though head reading pessage self capture reader attention following upto wondering survive able adapt lifestyle use also see test ability see able survive different types season know matter face life alway obstacles head", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Has a class or subject in school ever been difficult? Everyone has experienced a moment where they just can not figure out a subject or course they are taking. This can happen for many reasons. Maybe it is because of their teacher, their environment, or their lack of resources. The possibilities are endless. With the Facial Action Coding System, teachers will be able to tell when students are confused or bored in class. This is a great thing for education, because if we are able to engage students into the lesson and to understand the material, then we are doing our jobs as education administrators. Although using this technology in the classroom may cost money, the impact it will have on education is definitely valuable for engaging students and allowing them to understand material.\n\nFirst off, engaging students in school can sometimes be challenging. For example, teachers may have a problem engaging students on a Monday morning right after a large break. With the Facial Action Coding System, teachers will be able to engage students easily. If students are able to be engaged in what they are learning, they will be able to learn more of the material. In paragraph six of the article \"Making Mona Lisa Smile\", we see this same point brought up when Dr. Huang says, \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" By being able to change the lesson to be more engaging to students in a short amount of time, the Facial Action Coding System allows students to learn more material in a deeper way.\n\nSecondly, we all know that we understand things much more when we are engaged in them. By providing students with something like the Facial Action Coding System, we are allowing students to understand topics better and easier. This will be a huge plus to our education system. By providing students with an effective way of learning, the number of students going to college will increase. As noted in the article in paragraph six, \"most human communication is nonverbal\". By allowing computers to encode human emotions, teachers will be available to recognize when a student is lost and help that particular student understand the material.\n\nNow, all of this technology will cost some money. As noted at the start of paragraph seven, \"Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used to decode Mona Lisa's smile.\" This means that the cost of this program will be expensive. Eventhough this technology is expensive, we should still consdier it for our students. By allowing students to become more engaged and to learn material easier, we are allowing their future to become brighter and filled with even more success. By installing this technology in classrooms, we will also be able to save money on teacher payroll. As stated in paragraph six, the technology is \"like an effective human instructor\". This will save the school money in the long-run and allow students to enjoy their education.\n\nAlthough using this technology in the classroom may cost money, the impact it will have on education is definitely valuable for engaging students and allowing them to understand material. Allowing students to understand material will brigthen the future of these students. As we go on thinking about this idea, we should not think about the cost, rather we should think about how we are changing the lives of the students using the technology. Therefore, the Facial Action Coding System is valuable in the classroom.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What I think mood story really soft explainable since explains people immigrated country live basically get better life And certainly They happy ther home happy amazing educational options That I would say mood story", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever woken up on the wrong side of the bed and your whole day is ruined? As a high school student this happens a lot for me and most of the time I try to make my day better by putting on a happy face. By putting on a happy face it allows me to keep how I am feeling a secret from the rest of my classmates. In my opinion the new Facial Action Coding System is not valuable in classrooms.\n\nFor this coding system to work it has to go through a process of steps to detect how a person is feeling. As it says in the text, \" Your home PC can't handle the complex algorithms used...\" suggesting that you would need a whole new comeputer that can handle the algorithms. To have this technology in every classroom would be expensive and very complicated. Plus one day if the technology goes bad, to fix it you would have to hire someone who knows what they are doing, which would be a waste of money that could be used for other classroom materials.\n\nHave you ever met someone that is really good at hiding their feelings? Let me tell you that it takes talent and not everyone can do it. If you are that good at hiding your feelings then there is probably a good reason behide that, no one should be able to take that away from you. Students don't want to go to school and worry about some coding system telling everyone your sad. Some students like to keep their home life and school life seprate. They come to school and restart their day, but what if one day they can't start fresh at school because their dog just died. The student comes to school really upset but doesn't want to talk about it, then the new coding device decides to interupt the class and tell everyone that this student is upset. No one wants this kind of embrassment.\n\nAs for that, in a classroom there is many students that learn in many different ways. If a human teacher can't make all the kids happy and not bored all the time, what makes you think this new system can? Dr. Huang, of the Beckman Institute for Advanced Science at the University of Illnois, predicts that \"a classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored...then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" Even then it could not do this for every single student in the classroom.\n\nTherefore I do not think the facial action coding system would be valuable to have in classrooms.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Other people should join the Seagoing Cowboys for many reasons.One of the many reasons are it would be an adventure if you joined the Seagoing Cowboys and its an experience you could learn so much.You could learn about horses because if you join the Seagoing Cowboys you get to feed the horses and clean and learn about them and you can also see many diiferent unique places like Europe or China and also see Greece. From my point of veiw Greece was a special place.Another thing that you can do is you can have fun on the boat. You could play table tennis,fencing,boxing,reading,or whittling. All those games help pass the time from being on the ship.Also, it was a grateful oppertunity to be a Seagoing Cowboy. There are a great deal of perks to being a Seagoing Cowboy. Being a Seagoing Cowboy can help you learn many different task it teaches others a lot of things they don't know how to do. Thats why I think it's a good idea to be a Sea Cowboy because it will teach you many things that you might not know how to do and you would have a great deal of fun and many experiences.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe driverless cars are an extremely bad idea. They have many defaults, and could never be absolutely percise. Although there have been some types of cars that aren't completely driverless they have cruise control, warning signs for rear views, and other things, they arent a great idea. If we go into a time era where we have driverless cars the world would be a completely different place.\n\nThe roads would also have to be renewed, costing a lot of money that we don't quite have. These cars would cause a tremendous accident making google completely responsible for injurys, defaults, and engineering issues. The speed limit on highways can vary from 30-65, and driverless cars can only handle 20,\n\n25 at the most.\n\nMany people may support this idea because they would rather not waste their energy on steering, and also wouldn't have to have directions or problems with shifting gears. Driverless cars are a good in some situations though. For an example, if someone was exhausted as they were driving and the fell asleep at the wheel, the car sends a vibration, or a signal to attempt and wake or alert the driver. if the driver then does not wake up, then the car should automatically pull to the side of the road and shut down, alerting authorities as it does so.\n\nDriverless cares are still a danger to our society though. If any piece of equipment were to have a default, many things could happen, or go wrong. This is why I believe we should not support the idea of driverless cares.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Laughter indeed important part anyone s day For whatever reason humans like laugh like make others laugh well But reminds funny story There time I take writing test In fact test much like one In fact one I write one four topics Unfortunately four vague could possibly made picking one rather challenging After staring screen good fifteen minutes I began silently laugh situation I write one four things single one even remotely interesting For reason I found problematic situation amusing I kind weird way But hit one four topics laughter write laughing irony situation Yes I tell true story time I laughed I used delightful vagueness advantage The topic state laugh actually audible one state kind laugh I figured silent laugh irony would well audible laugh something silly So I topic To make things even amusing I wrote laughing fact I write laughing I began laugh silly task I carrying However I began worry whoever grading things find amusing I would perhaps hurt grade But possibility served make situation even ironic consequently amusing You think I easily amused I must say well yeah I kind I find almost anything amusing I find beauty laughter It abstract every person experiences differently Some people find simple things considerably amusing others easily amused These differences part interacting people enjoyable As I said humans like laugh like make people laugh us And regardless way interpret laughter s abstract form ve got admit s kind funny", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear A resent concern built among experts computers negitive affects society I agree Computers ease life teach faraway places people finaly chat others I belive computers benifit society As previously mentioned computers ease hassels life With computers able plan life output This program ables enter data places go reminds time done event With program never forget go Also computer able gather information extreamly high speeds Supose research project school types cars enter cars get millions results save much time going librery finding book This take Finally couputer handy programs special needs people wright New programs word special function called voice commands This lets person wright blindness disability speek computer wants wright In istant pop screen Computer ease peples lifes jarasticly Besides esing lifes computers teach far away places people pictures computer give one first hand acount far away place like Insead reading see Acording time magazine person sees place learn reading encyclopedia As well pictures blogs give people idea person lives regular day place feel This another first hand acount place Finally ebooks internet give large amount information Ebooks books internet format These books inclued encyclopedias give statistics pores events far place For example planning trip learn eat get entertained learn far places people computers Lastly computers talk people around world talk friends Have ever moved wanted talk friend previously lived Now esily video chat Not ownly talk someone see remember years ago I moved I mised friends video chted As well talking friends one bussness meating around world traval town For example company wanted make trading agreement another company could click mouse This save time money travaling Also talk others online get feel happened For example weeks ago video chated many people undersand bad conditions earth quake You talk people ease computer availible In conclusion I believe computer benifical society They ease life teach people far away places people live alow people talk others Computers open doors world Computers help society great deal", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I really don't know that much about smart cars but they've been keeping people safe for a while now.\n\nSince 2009 google has been making smart cars that can drive partially by themselves in the right conditions.\n\nEven though the car can drive itself, it still needs a person in the drivers seat to help the car with pulling in and out of drive ways, and to help it get through complicated traffic.\n\nBMW made a car in 2013 that had sensors to make sure that the driver keeps their hands on the steering wheel at all times.\n\nThe car can steer,accelerate, and brake on their own but they still have to notify the driver when there is something in the road that it cant get around.\n\nAlthough it sounds like a waste of money to buy a smart car they will keep you safe while inside of it.\n\nTesla wants to release a car that can drive by itself 90% of the time while the peron drives the other 10% they say it will be released sometime this year.\n\nAll they are is a car with a lot of sensors but they will keep you and your family safe, as long as your ready to take over the wheele when there is an accident or when the car notifies you.\n\nCar's that can drive themselves are a good idea but they should let you drive most of the time instead of the computer doing it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Alot of ignorant theorists claim that us, NASA, is purposely editing these photos and spewting lies to the general public to hide evidence of alien civilization. One of these people is this man, named Billy Bob. Billy Bob claims that a few blurred photos immediately mean that there used to be civilization on Mars. So, how about you guys help me convince that Billy Bob here, is wrong. So let's get started!!!!\n\nSo once upon a time, in 1976, we sent an MGS to take photos of Mars. One of these said photos, with our technology at the time, blurred different parts and shadows of a Martian butte or mesa to look like a face. A few days later, we, \"Unveiled the image for all to see\". We reasoned that this human-esque photo was going to enchant the public and attract attention to Mars, which it ineed did!!!\n\nThe \"Face of Mars\" has appeared in various forms of media for twenty-five years. Some think it immediately proves an ancient civilization on Mars. There are many here at NASA that wish it was true, but alas it isn't. Few of us believe in the Face. Years after, with a ten times sharper camera, we got a great shot of it, revealing it to be a natural landform.\n\nBut the problem is that many conspiracy theorists still try to bring in people to their rediculous false theory using either a)No evidence to support their claim or\n\nb)Extremely bad evidence that has no sense to it, such as; The theory saying that we are trying to hide the ancient civilization of Mars to somehow benefit us. How rediculous is that?!?! First of all, how, in what way, would that benefit us? Second of all, wouldn't it benefit us if it was a civilization? Because with active evidence of aliens, the government would most likely fund a great expedition to Mars to either examine the remnants of this old civilization, or to see if they are still there, to perhaps set up peaceful relations with this new alien race of sentient lifeforms.\n\nNow, there are many other theories to somehow suggest that the Face is real, but the simple debunking of that one should be able to prove that the Face isn't even a face, but a simple natural landform that got blurred with old technology. Plus, not only that, but I doubt that anyone wants this type of \"rant\" to go on any longer. So, I'd say that Billy Bob has learned the truth, wouldn't you?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "ever wondered what it would be like to have a car that drives by itself well, in the near future you might just find out. there are several companies trying to make autnomous cars but they have hit sume tuff spots like laws that provide safty for other people. in text the law says that the only safe car is one with a responsible human behind the wheel. the thing is that if we are to believe that these cars are for safty than we have to think about all the things that go wrong in everyday driving. then to make sure its one hundred percent safe the government would basically have to force everyone to buy these so called smart cars.\n\nthese companies are trying to make something for mostly lazy people. driving isnt that hard of thing to do if you know how to do it. the companies only want to make money thats our economy so, no matter how much these cars seem to good or worth while remember that something can always go wrong which yes, is true with anything but its rediculous that because you find driving boring or dont have the skill nessesary to do something the car can do for you'd buy a car that is just there so you'll give more money to a company that will out source your job to people in china because it's cheaper.\n\nso in conclusion you should see that smart cars yes could help but if you dont drive reponsibly you shouldn't be on the road in the first place. Dont buy things because it seems easier look at all the things these car dont provide protection from. its just more hipster junk to deal with in the justice system. So before you buy that sweet new car that can drive itself should make sure you're not the one getting hurt , because you might just find out.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I do not think that the technology to read the emotional expressions of a student in a classroom is valuable because the coast is proably astronomical, how people feel inside is personal information, and it might not even be completely correct.\n\nFacial Action Coding System is a new technology that is still in trial and error. You can not use the program on just any computer which means you have to buy special software to be able to use it. Not only would you have to buy the software to use it you would also have to buy the computer program, and because its still not completely finished you would be buying something that could crash which means you're pouring your money into something that might not even function properly.\n\nYour emotions are personal and sometimes you dont want everyone to know how you feel. With the Facial Action Coding System you would be able to know how everyone feels. That seems like an invasion of space and unfair to those who do not want their business out in the open for everyone to know. if schools did end up having this program i think there should be rules and guidelines to prevent invasion of privacy like you can only test picture of peoples faces who consent.\n\nThere is no solid proof that the Facial Action Coding System is always correct. in the passage they never said wether or not they had a testing trial to prove the acuracy of this program. If the passage provided information on how they tested it on people and the results came back correct that would make it more desirable, but there isnt anything in the passage that shows that we can trust this software program.\n\nI do not believe that this program would be valuable for students in a classroom, the price is more then likely out of budget and there is no proof that this program is even reliable. The program doesnt seem like it would help with very many subjects in school and there is still no proof of it working.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever noticed that there are so many vehicles on the road? Well, imagine a place without cars on the road, or even in the neighborhood! That sounds impossible right? Well in Vauban, Germany it isn't. They walk the streets without that loud roar of an engine, or the smell of fumes. You may ask, why would you not want cars on the road?\n\nTo begin with, Vehicles are giant sized moving objects with a lot of fuel spewing out. In article 1 it quotes; \"Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of greenhouse gas emissions in Europe . . . and up to 50 percent in some car sensitive areas in the United States.\" That is an astonishing percent vehicles cause to make greenhouse gas! Is all that greenhouse gas worth to just simply move faster to where you need to be? Is your time being faster worth your life being shorter?\n\nHave you ever heard of Smog? It's a funny word yes, but it's sickening clouds that it causes aren't anything to laugh about. Smog causes fuel clouds that can contaminate you with deadly fuels or even make you sick. In source 2 it says; They even had to out law people from driving in Paris, due to the smog clouds it built. Almost 4,000 drivers were fined, and many had their cars impounded due to their reactions. It's maybe not a bad thing to have your head in the clouds, but it's a terrible thing to have your fuel in the clouds.\n\nFurthermore, Not driving a car or using transportation not only reduces smog, but it can help reduce body fat and obesity. Driving is a fast way to get to places but it's a even faster way to death. So many accidents happen each year, and so many lives have been taken due to driving. Not driving reduces deaths and obesity by a lot! Many of the problems people have today are due to obesity. Making it hard for them to work or even move because it's a hassle to carry all that weight around. Is your life living fast worth your life ending short?\n\nIn conclusion, sometimes vehicles aren't the best way to get to places. Sure it's the fastest but it's a double edged sword. You wanna live life fast, your gonna die fast. Live it slow and conservative you'll live longer. Vehicles are a pollution to our earth, and many causes of deaths. Is that drive worth putting everyone elses lives at risk?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Al Smith former governor New York brilliant idea make empire state building tallest building world He would put mooring mast top dirigibles top dirigibles could let passengers But plan many The stress dirigible s load wind pressure would transmitted way buildings foundation This problem mast placed building would destroy Another problem dirigibles outside United States use hydrogen Hydrogen flamable gas would put whole section city underneath Zeppelin risk The third Reason existing law prevented airships flying low urban areas", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Venus was called \"Evening Star\", because its one of the brightes points of light in the night sky. Since Venus is a planet, the nickname has been misleading. Venus is the second planet from our sun, and its the closest planet to Earth. Venus has more than three decades that any single spaceship has touched down on Venus, since there's no spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus, for more challenging are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in Venus's atmosphere. Venus has the hottest surface temperature of any planet in the solar system, even though Mercury is closer to our sun. Since Venus is hotter than the other planets, people can not live there for high pressure and heat. Venusian geology and weather present additional impediments like, erupting vocanos, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lightning strikes to probes seeking to land on its surface. Long time ago Venus was probably covered largely with oceans and could have supported various forms of life, just like Earth.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affected cyclist ways The first cool forested road set Since rote easy felt confident started end wrong direction Another factor rode desert The cyclist becoming dehydrated whats little water could find tasted like battery acid These factors affected cyclist giving false hope nearly lead death", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Is Right Is right censorship libraries This question could answered two different opinions Some people want censorship items public areas On hand people like read type material This opinionated topic In opinion libraries places I go find book read research listen music rent movies relax looking magazine Libraries puble areas everyone going agree Everyone favorite book genre I believe unjustiful take away censorship libraries ones favorite genre Why libraries need limit choice noone else For example many parents would love clothes stores would ban holes jeans revealing The stores nt They ban holes jeans many teenage girls like holes jeans American going band capris I like There different favorites likes dislikes opinions A great resolution dissagreement catorigizing By putting censorshiped books movies magazines music one area decrease arguments topic people like censorship libraries together area Where people want censorship libraries around This quick easy fix There reason take away ones favorite genre someone nt like If true world nothing everyone likes one certain thing For instance I like blue aeropostale shirts Pink favorite My friend likes blue shirts hates pink shirts We write manager get rid shirt color like This nonbenifical either us one like got one like This nonsense There nothing left store Pople charge easily sort material store library make fit communities likings Getting rid material answer Catorigizing fix needs put action immediatly", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever though about being a seaging coyboy? I have and I think everyone should be a seagoing coyboy. There are many resons I think everyone should be a seagoing coyboy. I am going to tell you about how this program will let you experience many amazing adventures. I am also going to tell you about how you get to visit many unique places.\n\nThe SeaGoing Coyboys program will let you experience many amazing adventures. In August 1995, we recived our orders to report to New Orleans. We arrived August 14. The day the Pacific war ended. We got our seaman's papers and boarded the SS Charles W.Wooster, headed for Greece-with cargo of three hundred thirty-five horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them.\n\nThe Seagoing Coyboys program also lets you visit many unique places. Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seeing Eroupe and China. But seeing the Acropolis in Greece was special. So was taking a gondola ride in Vinice, Italy, a city of streets and water. I also toured an exavated castle in Crete and marvled at the Panama Canal on my way to china.\n\nThose the reasons I think you should be a seagoing coyboy. This program will let you exerience many amazing adventures. You get to visit many unique adventures. You should consiter being a seagoing coyboy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Mistaken Face\n\nNASA is a space program in the U.S. It has been for quite some time now. NASA has sent numerous things into space but one in specific has caused a great deal of curiosity through out the world. In 1976, a NASA spacecraft, Viking 1, took pictures of Mars and something unusual happened. A face apeared in a picture. At first NASA thought of the possibility of it being a foreign life form. But that possibility was stopped when scientists found out that it was just another Martian Mesa. A common landform on Mars. When the pictures were released to the public, many thought that NASA was lying, especially conspiracy theorists. They thought that NASA didn't want the public to know about an alien life form. That was very irrational.\n\nMany people don't like the idea of space exploration because they say it's a waste of money. If NASA encountered foreign life forms, it would only be benefitial to tell the public because then NASA would gain popolarity and skeptism of the program would decrease. Many people would be curios about it and would want to know more about the race. Therefore NASA would have a better reputation and be more popular because of their discovery.\n\nSecondly,technology has changed significantly since 1978. The original picture looks more like the face than any other one because of the old technology. In 1998, the picture looks more detailed. In 2001, it looks even more detailed. In 1976 the camera that took the photo only captured 43 meters per pixel making it much less definated compared to the picture taken in 2001 that captured 1.56 meters per pixel. This technology makes it less of a face.\n\nFinally, because of the newer and more advanced technology, NASA's scientists could look further in to the so called alien face. After studying it, the scientists concluded that the \"face\" was a mesa. A mesa isnt't only found on Mars. It can also be found on Earth. There is one in the Snake River Plain of Idaho and it even has the same height as the Face on Mars. The \"face\" is more of a natural landform than anything.\n\nNew technoogy, comparable lndforms, and the explanation of how alien races would benefit NASA helped the space program prove conspiricy theorists and the public wrong. All of these supports are hard evidence that the face was a mesa in disguise. Although the finding of an alien race would be revolutionary, it's safe to say that the \"face\" isn't the discovery of one. We'll just have to wait until the future to encounter a race that isn't our own.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. The software is the latest innovation from Prof. A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them. By weighting the different units of emotion,the software can even identify mixed emotions.\n\nA classroom computer could recongnize when a student is becoming confused or bored. For example, if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown the next will be different. Adding this software to computers could not only help students learn but help others gain information because their liking what they see. “Most human communication is nonverbal, including emotional communication,” notes Dr. Huang. “So computers need to understand that, too.”\n\nAccording to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them. Empathy may occur because we unconsciously imitate another's facial expressions. In a false smile, the mouth is stretched sideways using a different muscle, which is sometimes spotted in celebrities.\n\nBy weighting the different units, the software can identify mixed emotions. Every expression is compared to a face showing no emotion. Even though everyone shows different degrees of expression the new emotion-recognition software tracks these facial movements.\n\nI can conclude that Facial Action Coding System enables computers to identify human emotions. Such as a computer recognizing when someone is bored or dislikes something they see. The software can also identify mixed emotions. Last but not least moving our facial muscles expresses emotion,but also produces them. Is Facial Action Coding System the next big thing?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I guess says wants take test confetebel around flowers plants greens", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In theory a self driving car is a great idea, but in reality it is an accident waiting to happen. Self driving cars have many flaws to them. I beleive the development of these cars should no longer continue.\n\nThe self driving cars are never self driving, they still require the passenger to be there when it does not know what to do. The artical says \" The car can read the positive and negative polarity as messages in binary code.\" This means that someone can send a wrong message through a computer, causing an accident. The death rate from car accident could rise with the development of the self driving car. Whith hearing that would you trust your child to be in that car?\n\nPeople who agree to continue the development of these cars have many of theair own opinions. They say that the sensors on the car help make it safer.\n\nThey also might say that its a lot less stressful for the driver. The accepters of this product may also say that all safty measures are taken care of.\n\nThere are many things wrong with many of the statements above. The sensors on the car can go bad, how will the person know before its to late? How is a self driving car less stressful for the driver? If anything they would have to pay more attention to the road to make sure the car was working correctly. The safty procations of these vehicals rely on the driver noiticing the car is speakinging to it or that the seat is vibrating. Sometimes people do not feel my phone vibrate in their pocket or hear if for that matter, how are we suppoded to trust a car to alert you if we can not trust our phones.\n\nThrough out this campaign to have self driving cars it seems there is no one out there that wants to ask the hard questions, everybody thinks it is a great idea because it is new. Will this product be safe, we dont know, but it doesnt look promissing. In conclusion i do not beleive we should continue the devlopment for self driving cars.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear There lots talk arguments computers wether benefits society I belive benefit society One reson communicate others Another reson many things computers even world wide web Haveing computers always handy You talk web chat friends This one time online I found old friend I havened seen five years Whenever I come home school I ll go computer talk friends The computers great place make plans catch buddies My next reson benifit society much It s like home amusment park The internet wonderfull thing either home work play games even I ll sit two three hours play game But still exercise daily yes computers get addicting always good go outside exersise Many people say population computer check email go computer every ten minutes yes heathy dissition In conclution I belive computers indeed benifical I stated many resons They great communication friends also infinint amount things So nt computer go get one They worth wild", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In attempt make Empire State Building higher Chrysler Building builders ran obstacles trying allow dirigibles dock thereOne obstacle safety reasons Dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen helium Hydrogen flammable causing builders realize accident like German dirigible destroyed fire New Jersey would worse happen populated area downtown New York Known one greatest obstacles attempting use mooring mast nature If dirigible tethered mooring mast back would move around around due winds top buildingThe practical obstacle builders faced law An existing law airships flying low urban areas Having tie dirigible building would illegal But years passed idea using mooring mast died leaving obstacles face", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Thaithor did a decent job in supporing his idea about studying Venus is the first paragraph is talking about how Venus is also known as the Evenin star he is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky . Is also sayig that Venus is in our solar system, one example from the text is that venus is the seconf planet from our sun .\n\nanother example is that venus could give you a lot of information about earth and it has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely .\n\nVenus however is the closest planet ot earth in terms of dentisy and size the author is supporting he's ideas pretty good he's giving a lots of detail and he is also making them understant what his talking about. The author has a lot of information about venus and the author is giving detail in every single paragraph he wrote .\n\nIn the 3rd paragraph is talking about a thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blanket venus. The author is saying that on the planet's surface, temperature average over 800 degrees and the atmosphere pressure is 90 times grater than what we experience .\n\nas a conclusion NASA is working on toehr aproaches to studying venus in my opinion he did a really great job because he is not only talking about venus he is also talking about how it can change the world and the authos is giving a lots of information . in every paragraph he talked about how venus can make a change in the world and how NASA was trying to do that .", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The setting calm peaceful started riding bike He smiling legs strong As hit town saw ramshackled shed rusty pumps corral begun troubled bc running water As flat rodes replaced wI short rolling hills became even troubled When saw building became happy found run sad thirsty tired When finally saw old man told map became little happier bc going get Yosemite As setting became worse mood became worse bc less less water felt hopeless But saw man became happy bc map going help", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "For years people have been wondering if there is life outside of Earth. There has been many movies, stories, and television shows that try to illustrate how civilizations outside of Earth will be like. Although these forms of media are very interesting and are entertaining, they tend to give people crazy ideas in their heads. One example of how crazy people can get is what happened when a satellite took a picture of Mars that had a landmass that shared the likeness of a human face. Most smart people knew it was a coincidence, but crazy conspiratists believe it was made by aliens. When you check your facts, compare Face to actual landforms on Earth, and see the picture of the Face in the highest resolution the answer is clear. The Face is just a lifeform that just happens to look like a face.\n\nFirst of all, before I start explaning the scientific reasons why the Face is just a natural lifeform, think critically. If there was an alien civilization on Earth, and there is other life, wouldn't it have been found by now? If there was an alien civilization, there probably would be more evidence lying around, not just one coincidentally shaped structure on Mars. Countless rovers, space telescopes, and cameras have been through Mars and other planets, yet nothing has been found that proves that aliens have been through there.\n\nWhen you look at how the landform of the Face is shaped, it looks similiar to something commonly seen on Earth. It looks like a butte or a mesa, landforms that are commonly seen around the American West. The chief scientist for NASA's Mars Exploration Program, Jim Garvin, says that \"It (The Face) reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho... That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\" Mesas are natural occuring. If they can occur naturally on Earth, they can occur naturally on Mars.\n\nIn April 8, 2001 on a clear summer day, the Mars Global Surveyor took a picture of the Face to once and for all prove that their are no alien markings on it. A picture was taken previously on 1998, but it was a cloudy day, and skeptics believed that the haze was hiding something. They used the Surveyor's highest resolution posible, which scanned 1.56 meters a pixel, compared to the 43 meters per pixel that the 1976 Viking photo that started it all took. When the picture was taken, it did not show anything suspicious, in fact it looked like \"the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa\". If the highest camera resolution on the Mars Global Surveyor can't see anything that will prove that Face is anything but a natural landform, nothing will.\n\nAlthough there are many good pieces of evidence pointing to the fact that Face is just a natural landform, the craziest conspirators are still not convinced. They believe that NASA is trying to hide information of evidence of life on earth. To that I would say, why would they do that? NASA is a company that depends on the government, tax payers, and generous donors. Proving that their is life elsewhere would increase their budgets, and more people would be interested in funding NASA. In fact, the whole reason NASA unveiled the image was to engage the public and attract attention to Mars. Proving that life was on Mars would help them more them harm them, why would they hold it back.\n\n\"The Face on Mars\", a landform that looks coincidentally like a face, is just that. The fact that it looked like a face is purely coincidental, and an interesting way to attract attention to Mars. Of course, people being people, they believed that the landform was more to that. When you check your facts, compare the Face to landforms on Earth, and see the picture in the highest resolution possible, it is obvious that no aliens took part in this landform. Although there has been no proof know, who knows if something might be found that proves that alien life exists.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This piece is about why scientist should explore Venus. The author supported his or her claim of exploring Venus well. The author provides evidence to counter Venus's harsh conditions.\n\nThe author gives many reasons why Venus is a dangerous planet. For example, the author says that there is a thick atmosphere that is 97 percent carbon dioxide, not only that but the clouds are highly corrosive with sulfuric acid. The surface temperature is over 800 degrees Fahrenheit and the pressure is 90 times that of Earth's. The author also mentions that the geology and weather is chaotic as well. The author manages to give some evidence for each of the dangers of Venus. He or she states that scientists can hover thirty-some miles above the surface to avoid geological and most weather hazards. It is also said that hovering up high will decrease the temperature down to about 170 degrees Fahrenheit and the pressure to Earth's sea level. This gives the idea that a human survivng on Venus is not easy but possible. The author gives that fact that NASA is currently working on electronics that can withstand Venus's surface, and the longest it has lasted is three weeks, so scientists can gather artifacts from Venus and study them.\n\nThe author provides evidence in that scientists are currently working to combat Venus's harsh conditions. The evidence present shows that it is possible to counter the planet's harsh conditions and also how close the humans are to being able to explore Venus.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars have always been known for their efficiency, and speed at which they bring their driver to his or her desired destination. Although, many people are aware of the causes of driving and the negative effects of a car, most never look at the possibilities. They don't know what they are being deprived of due to the simple, solvable problem of driving cars. As countries of the world experience a cultural shift in their daily lives, people are becoming aware of the significant advantages of limited car usage, including lower emissions, increased physical activity, and decreased stress, which in turn would increase overall pleasure.\n\nWith a change in one's daily life, the linear relationship between car usage and carbon emmissions, means that as car usage decreases so does pollution. In \"The End of Car Culture,\" Elisabeth Rosenthal comments on the scientific opinion regarding this cause and effect relationship in America: \"If the pattern persists-and many sociologists believe it will-it will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment.\" Cars are a large contributor to the increasing amount of waste and toxins that make one's air water polluted. Therefore, with a drop in the usage of cars, people and land will be become healthier and cleaner. Emissions are also a problem in Europe where the \"Day Without Cars\" was used to promote \"alternative transportation\" in order to reduce \"smog.\"(Selsky) Cars are often used get to specific places such as work or school. So why would two people drive two seperate cars if they're going to the same place? By using public transportation such as a bus or subway, one is killing two birds with one stone by using a smaller amount of gas and fossil fuels to delivery two people to their desired locations, a smarter and cleaner choice.\n\nThe limit on car usage has also caused an increase of physical activities within a society. The lack of cars has created the desire for outdoor involvement as Andrew Selsky suggests in \"Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota\" when he informs people of the \"improvement caimpaign in Bogota\" that has enouraged the \"construction of 118 miles of bicycle paths.\" Since space is no longer needed for the creation of parking lots, people now have ample room to create the resources needed for activities such as bike riding. Just having things such as trails visible to the public, motivates people to be active. The possibilities of physical activity areas are also encouraged by a change in the transportation bill. In current years, a drastic \"80% has gone to highways\" whereas only \"20% went to other transport.\"(Rosenthal) With a decrease in the demand for cars and similiar ways of private transportation, there won't be a need for large highways. Since more money is now available to be used elsewhere, oppurtunities for parks and sports centers are opening up.\n\nAlthough many may not be aware, a decrease in cars also brings a decrease in stress. This is even hinted at by \"Businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza\" when he says \"'It's a good oppurtunity to take away stress...\"(Selsky) Although people depend on cars for quick transportation, it can become a hastle when traffic comes into play. It also costs people lots of money when it comes to paying for gas, so an overall reduction of cars would fix all problems regarding stress. As a result of the reduction in car usage, several \"new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up,\" as Andrew Selsky informs the public in \"Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota.\" With an increase of space to build malls and social places, people have a better chance of staying relaxed and stress-free. Not only do these places enourage relaxation, but they provide a place for one to spend time with friends and family.\n\nFrom driving hazardous and waste-producing cars to saving money, riding bikes, and hanging with friends at the mall, limiting car usage not only creates a healthier community but provides people with oppurtunities to be better. All around the world people are working to change their daily habits that have created the dirty world one lives in today. Limiting car usage creates an overall happier environment to live in and an endless amount of possibilities.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless cars are becoming a reality in the world. They are a great way for drivers to relax, and hold conversations on a road trip without worrying about wreaking the car. I believe that the driverless care is a revolutionary idea for the modern age. In my essay I will talk about why the driverless car is a great idea, what are some of the things drivers can do if they get the driverless car, and why I believe that the driverless car is the future of the world.\n\nI believe that the driverless car as a revolutionary idea becasue of how awesome it is. Now that there is a driverless car this could be the opening of a door for other things such as pilotless planes, or driverless boats. This idea can change the way transportation is for the future of the world. Most people would really love the idea of not having to drive unless there is something like a hazard that would require human interaction. This is how I think this idea Is revolutionary.\n\nSecondly I believe that the plan is a great idea. I say this because with the driverless car road trips can become more fun. If a group of friends wants to\n\ntravle from Indianapolis to Dallas No one would love to be the driver for that trip.\n\nThis idea would mean the driver would only have to drive in an emergency situation like a wreak, or construction. The driver can sit back, and become a passenger like his friends. This is why I believe that the driverless car is a great idea.\n\nFinally, Imagine all of the things that someone could do with a driverless car. Say that someone is late for work, and has not brushed their hair, or brushed their teeth yet, The driverless car can give them the time to do that on the go while not risking being any more late to work. If someone is texting, and driving there would be less wreaks, because the car would be driving itself. This car opens up alot of opprotunities to be the grandfather for future technoligies, like cars that can drive drunk drivers home, or takies that drive themselves. People may say this car is dangerous, and might cause more wreaks. I say that with this car comes more opprotunities for the transportation world to advance one more step foward.\n\nIn conclusion,I believe that the driverless car is the next big thing on the market. The driverless car can do alot more than the modern automobile can do. I believe that it is the most revolutionary idea, I believe that it is a good idea, and I believe that it will be the future of transportation. This is what I believe is good about the driverless car.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many people believe laughter important relationship Many people believe laughter important part relationship I also agree thoughts I came I speak time I started going school I practiced saying name age I came I go school Next day I walked school I could see everyone looking It pretty scary I looked back one girl walked towards CAPS name girl said CAPS name I m I nt really speak I said started laughing hard CAPS CAPS accent said s really cute I laughed back looked really nice smiles became friends quickly She first friend ever I always thought making new friends hard laughter made much easier used", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My opinion on driverless cars is that it is a good thing for everyone. If we had a public- transport taxi system, we wouldn't have to use as much fuel if it goes the way Sergey Brin envisions this. In 2009 Google had them independent under specific conditions. These cares have been driven up to half a million miles without a crash. These cars would change everyones daily function in a positive way.\n\nGoogle has also modified Toyota Prius to use position- estimating sensors, rotating sensors on the roof, video cameras mounted near rearview mirrors,there is alot of technology in this car but there is something way more important in this car. It is a spinning sensor on the roof, Dubbed LIDAR, it uses laser beams to form a constantly updating 3-D model of the cars surroundings and you could use that if the car was driverless. You could do this to see where to have the car go if it is auto.\n\nIn 2013, BMW announced the development of Traffic Jam Assistant. The car can handle driving functions at speeds up to 25 Mph, but special sensors make sure the driver keeps hold of the wheel. These can steer acurate and break themselves, this is a machanic that driverless cares will have to have. Tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of driving- Driverless 90 percent of the time. Mercedes-Benz, Audi, and Nissan have plans to have cars to drive themselves by 2020.\n\nDriverless cars will help tramendasley with everyday people that need to go somewhere but cant drive, teens without a license, elderly people who cant drive anymore many people. When this gets here I hope i can test this out for myself because it would be a positive side to everything driving. By 2020 many car brands will have this in there hands and everyone elses hands.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The limiting of car usage will have a major impact on society and the life span of planet Earth. The effects of the usage of automobiles has increased the changes in natural resources to reduce and produce much more slow. Limiting the usage of vehicles can asist society with forming a shift in American Behavior and safety.\n\nVehicle usage has taken a nose-dive in the past centry. From the loss of jobs, to the decrease in income, down to the death of thousands. Because of the health risk many places have set a ban on driving privlages such as Paris. According to the resource, \"After days of near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\" Oftenly, those who refused to respectfuly contribute to the ban were forced to pay a fine of $31.00 in United States money for not obeying the City's instructions. The pollution rate has slowly decreased as society continuously starts to decrease the mass usage of vehicles. As to sociologist, \"If the pattern persists- and many sociologist believe it will-it will have beneficial implications for cabon emissions and the enivronment...\" These implications have been studied by many to figure out the real reason car industires do not rebrand themselfs as \"mobility\". The companies that have taken the leap to stop pollution have allowed society to make a enormous U-turn in the way the government controls pollution evacuation.\n\nThe safety of society has also taken a major leap in success. Mimi Sheller, a sociology professor at Drexel University states \"\"Different things are converging which suggest that we are witnessing a long-term cultural shift,\"\". other ways, such as speaking to friends electronically can also have an impact of the car usage. Not meeting up with friends and wasting gasoline (or diesel fuel) is the most common way to stop pollution and its hazzardous complications. Also, \"With all these changes, people wo stopped car commuting as a result of the recession may find less reason to resume the habit....\" thus, causing a sudden shift in the way pollution is being created. Reflecting on other major causes of a global shift such as the nations popultion dencity.\n\nIn summation, the limiting of car usage has many advantages. Limiting the usage of vehicles can asist society with forming a shift in American Behavior and safety. Do you want to risk the possibility of ending the worlds greatest issue?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Boom! Your teacher just asked how you are feeling and you smile and say \"I'm just fine.\"\n\nThen your computer reads the way your muscles moved while talking to your teacher and realizes that your are bored and not interested. So the software in your computer can tell how you feel. A professer from the Beckham Institute for Advanced Science at the Universit of Illinois has created a software that can read your emotions. The way the software can do this is by seeing how the muscles in your face move. This would be very useful in a class room setting, lets see why.\n\nIn the painting of the Mona Lisa the software said she was 83 percent happy, this is judged by her eyes and the form of her smile. The software would help in a class room setting by letting the teacher know that the students are bored or not paying attention. This could also allow the teacher to get those students who aren't paying attention involved. The value of this is unmatchable and could help in a multitude of ways.\n\nThe way the software works is by seeing how each individual muscle moves and where it moves too. For example if you move your lips up and make your eyes squint the software will reconigize a smile, which would indicate happiness. A normal at home PC could not run this software, although the researchers are trying to make it a more condensed process.\n\nSo the software could be helpful inside of a classroom setting and could help keep students on task and allow teacher to know when the students are not on task. Many problems could be solved with this software. Dr. Huang has made a big impact on the side of emotional feelings and being able to judge if somebody is happy or sad,", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "We need to stop having electoral colleges its unfair and really out of date most poeple dont even see a campaighn with electoral votes. If we were to change to popular voting then we could have everyone involved in the voting and it would be fair voting and desisions for everyone who is involved. When your in a electoral vote you are not voting for a president but for a slate of electors.\n\nIt is not fair for state legislatures to pick our electors thats why we had the big fiasco back in 2000. The government basically has full control over the who really gets the win of the vote if we stay in the elactoral vote system they have free reighn on what electors to send to congress on whom ever they agree with. In a electoral vote bigger states gets the most attention from presedental campaighns and a smaller state wouldnt get any attention at all to the campaighn In electoral votes they have toss up states which are states that will pay the campaighn very close attention which basically means they choose who wins because their known as thoughtful voters.\n\nThe reason we should do away with the electoral system and out in the popular system is because it is alot more easy to get involved with and you have control over whose president and the elevtors not the government. We have the right to pick our presedints and congress so we should do it right and in a fair way.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Imagine being stuck in traffic again for the fifth time this week. You glance at the time and you see that you're running late for work again. Cars can cause alot of problems like for example, people get into many car crashes that kill many innocent children or bystanders, the traffic jams always take hours to clear up, and the exhaust in the tail pipe is polluting the air. There are many advantages to limiting car usage. The advantages are there will be more people on bikes and walking to place to place, less traffic, and less pollution in the air.\n\nAlthough cars may come in handy they can be a real pain to have. Like for insatance paying car insurance every month, paying for gas, and paying for your car if anything breakes and needs a new part If the car usage was limited there will be more people on bikes and walking. This is good for the residents because they are spending less money and they are getting excersise from this. In Vauban, Germany the residents there have given up their cars. 70% of Vauban's families do not own cars (Rosenthal, 3). There only transportation there is a tram that runs though Freiburg (Rosenthal, 2). This helps residents there get to place to place eaiser.\n\nAlso with the car limitations there will be a whole lot less traffic on the roads. For example in Paris, France they made even numbered license plates residents leave their cars at home, then the next day odd numbered license plate residents (Duffer, 11). Even though they tried to ban the cars there were 40,000 drivers fined due to driving their cars (Duffer, 12). Also when this rule was put into place there was less traffic in the capital of France. The traffic went down by 60% (Duffer, 14).\n\nMost importantly there will be less pollution in the air. Residents in cars dont really know how much pollution is put into the air when they drive. The exhaust from the tail pipe of a car is causing a huge defect in this earth's greenhouse effect. In france the pollution was so bad there was smog in the air from all the cars (Duffer, 14). The smog in France was as bad as the world's most polluted cities in the world, Beijing, China (Duffer, 14). Also in Bogota, Colombia there was really bad smog, but after the car limitation there was a huge decrease in the smog (Selsky, 21).\n\nIn conclusion, there are many advantages in car limitation. The advantages are there will be more people on bikes and walking to place to place, less traffic, and less pollution in the air. With less cars this will help our earth big time because the greenhouse effect will stop getting car exhaust pumped through there. Also we may fine alternate ways to replace gas and oil to make this world healthier.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think that the use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students is real. I say this because if you look into the computer and have a emotion on your face it will tell you what facial expression you are showing. For example if your looking mean then the computer will think that your angry at this moment. Just how people can look at you and tell how your feeling the new technology can do it to. If the new technology did not work to descibe people's expression then the computer would not do anything, computers are a smart technology and can do lots of things.\n\nIt is a good idea to read the emotional expressions of students because computers know how your feeling once you look into it. To figure out how your feeling the computer will take a 3-d picture model of your face. The new technology could only tell six emotions which are happiness,surprise,anger,disgust,fear,and sadness.\n\nThe expressions people make are very universal. The new technology cannot describe how your feeling if your not showing no emotion. If you smile while ads come on the computer while assume that your demonstrating the mona lisa facial expression because your smiling and thats what they or she wanted you to do. They wanted to bring a smile on your face.\n\nLast but not least i think that the use of this technology to read the emotional expressions of students is real. I say this because if you look into the computer and have a emotion on your face it will tell you what facial expression you are showing. For example if your looking mean the computer will think that your angry at this moment. Just how people can look at you and tell how your feeling the new technolgy can do it to. If the new technology did not work to descibe people's expression then the computer would not do anything, computers are a smart technology and can do anything.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The reason we have not got to Venus yet is because all of the dangers that are stopping us from getting there there are many reasons but the main reasons is because it is to hot to land on the surface even tho is is not the closest to then sun it is the hottest planet. So since it is the hottest planest we cant get close to it with out us burning to death. So we cant land there so we willhave to find a way to grt as close as possible without dieing. Another reason it the amount of pressure on the planet is so strong that it would crsuh a submarine that is made for going and being able to stay at a high pressurer and not crush or break but if it where to go to venus it wiuld be crudh like a person crushing a peice of paper. We think we have found a way to get close to it we could use a blimb type of system and stay 30 miles above the planet. The temputrue would still be 170 degrees and thats still hot but if used solor power from the sun it should stay nice and cool inside the blimb. The last reason is our tecnology is not strong enugh to stand the heat it would melt and then there was no point of going to take like pictures and it would kinda be a waste of money so we need tecnology that would help then stay cool and not melt because if we were to go now the temputre is so hot that it would melt ten adn melt just like butter or ice on a hot summer day. So there are meany reasosns that we cant go there yet but if the tecnology gets better and better evry year like it has been we will be able to not just go look at the planet byt to get to go on it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood memoir appreciative grateful The mood memoir appreciate grateful author looking back parents turned three room appartment home I know paragraph author writes I never forget parents turned simple house home This supports mood memoir author grateful parents teaching home really Also mood memoir appreciative grateful author tells community family I know paragraph author writes In neighborhood despite customs elsewhere cultures came together great solidarity friendship This supports mood memoir authors appreciative atmosphere place grew Another reason mood memoir appreciative grateful author understands parents hardships I know paragraph author writes I always grateful parents love sacrifice This supports mood memoir author appreciates fact parents gave much make better life The mood memoir shown many ways", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The facial action coding system is a computer system where it can actually tell how you're really feeling instead of just looking at your face when you're smiling and say oh, you're happy no it actually looks beyond that and can tell you hgow you're feeling.\n\nI think the coding system could actually be helpful or valuable in the classroom . The text states that a classroom computer could recognize when the student is becoming bored or confused.\" If a student is on lets say like ixl ( a math website) and is stuck on a problem like they are confused the system could actually break it down and help them with the problem.\n\nThe facial coding system could actually be valuable to about almost anyone . IT could maybe replace therapists and or guidance counselors because the computer could read how theyre feeling and make them feel happy if theyre sad . It could very well ask them questions on how their day was or by simply giving them a compliment . I would keep testing it to make sure it wont mess up or make the users mad enough to where they break it or get mad at it and throw it down because what you want to do is make them happy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What one day took trip library came across book offensive Would ask taken shelf ignore Every year tons visit libraries search good book threw act observations personal appeal Everyone different choose types books d like read comes offensive nonoffensive material Being teen ve experience visiting library things come across offensive easily others like many choose ignore Reasons ignoring rather simple everyone different takes things ve gathered since birth ll personal life experiences Because everyone different life experiences comes different views offends Personal experiences ve library race seeing books relate days slavery offensive But book black panther organization maybe offensive someone else So mean taken shelf offensive people Books diffent tones weither life politics worldly issues make different people feel different ways I ve observed plenty times someone feels uplifted reading book Where someone else reads thing feels terrible Take magazine instance one reader could look like beautiful women magazine feel great While maybe overweight reader could read magazine feel like beautiful self worthy women magazine That overweight women could feel offended women feels amazing simple reason nt taken shelves due different views offends nt Everyone reads books due liking relates If book magazine movie comes across offensive reader probably wo nt pick find When come across material library offensive wo nt read Although picked books nt come across offensive reading material come find offensive In response simply returned book chose another one If walked library saw book offensive would nt ask taken shelf would simply ignore Everyone different views offense s much except ignore If case book offend someone taken library due would real need library", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "technology continues become enhanced percentage americans use computers americans children ages Most teens use computer interact friends social sites spend good chunck home playing online games But teens ones constantly facing cyber bullying put dangers way talking people nt even know To prevent issues I say put limit use technology Social sites facebook growing alarming rate More teens would rather computer outside playing tag swingset I facebook s prevented getting exercise becaose s almost like d rather talking friends going jog It bothers really one question I always risk I stop I ve going runs studying spending time family There s ways reasons stop attached technology nt know get message spread Other affects social sites exercise computers online gaming also big issue Many kids mostly boys I see school absolutely loving online gaming But people actually benefits life website owners These games educational s good spend couple hours time So generally s waste More important things done time like studying homework Just think could even hangout friends doring time rather sharing monitor Although computer gaming big reason kids go computer bullying huge factor along stranger danger chats If re someone s bullied constantly school think able go home spend time computer amazing bulling came along Cyber bullying lead child working getting fights school even worse someone s like taken nt think worth living Limited computer use parental control would really help prevent Computer usage ups downs point safety health education one main issues face modern technology I d like hear letter newspaper read Please get back thoughts issue within next three days email", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affected cyclist negative way He desert dry hot I traveling high deserts California June Kurmaskie Also temperature hot made every thing around hot brackish water faling somewhere neighborhood two hundred degrees Kurmaskie Since desert escape sun The text states The sun beginning beat down Kurmaskie The cyclist alone road none around either passed one could help growing realization I could drop heatstroke gorgous day June Kurmaskie About forty miles pedal I arrived first town morning fit traditional definition ghost town Kurmaskie Thesettings cyclist riding nt good ones negativly affected causing dehydrated tiredin end", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the classroom you get bored of one subject and your teacher just doesnt be quite and your tired of that subject. If you were on your computer you wouldnt have that problem because with the new advanced software it would be able to recognize your bored so it would change the subject. This could be a very effective equipment for a person that cant go to school or someone that does online school. It could really change or make a diffrence how people learn and what to do to make people learn better.\n\nThis could help someone out a lot when they are in home schooled and they get bored or are getting tired of that subject the software could read his facial expression and change what subject they are on. In the text it says \" they can tell when somone is happy, surprised, angry,disgusted, scared, or sad.\" This could help a lot because sometimes people wont be ahving the best of days and then you could tell what was wrong with just a picture of there face during that time.\n\nThis is why I think the software that reads your expresion would be good in the classroom. Instead of wondering what is wrong with a kid when he or she is doing his or hers work just read there facial expertion and understand maybe they arent having the best of days. Also when your online and your taking a course online it can tell when you get bored so the technology can change the course your on so it wont be as boring because you would switch it up every now and then. This tool could help out a lot in the classroom expeience but aslong as its not always looking through your camarea because that could be going through our privacy.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There are tremendous controversial notions heating up a debate over the budget allocation of the governors. While some hold a claim that money devoted to technology development for outer space exploration is not well spent, others act as an advocate for other effective methods to use that amount of money. In my opinion, investment spared on both fields are reasonably justified and it is optimal to strategically allocate national coffers on both mentioned aspects. \r\n\r\nWithout a shadow of a doubt, cashing in to prosper top-notch devices which can serve the universe exploration is of the essence due to several reasons. The Earth is currently slowly damaged by the reckless activities of humans. By investing in the advanced machinery, the government and scientists may stand a chance of finding another inhabitable planet to serve as a backup plan if the Earth is in extreme danger, which can prevent the possibility of human extinction. For example, NASA has splurged a huge amount of budget to invent a modern robot called “Mars 2020” to figure out whether Mars can be a human-friendly planet in the future or not. For this reason, it is of necessity for the authorities to spend money on developing high-tech for universe exploration. \r\n\r\nWhile the redeeming features of investing in machines are widely acknowledged, this money can be well spent in other more realistic facets, namely education, which can have more direct influences on human’s life. In fact, schooling is a prerequisite for every student who wants to land a bright job in the future. However, not everyone can afford this learning journey due to the prohibitive exorbitant tuition. By investing in education, the governors can address this dire problem, which can assure anyone to have an equal opportunity to get employed. Germany can be cited as a respective country that applies tuition abolition for all its citizens. By doing so, it can guarantee the educational level and future employability for every student. Hence, cashing in education can be seen as more practical and impactful. \r\n\r\nTo sum up, sparing money on either advanced machinery to discover the universe or other backbone industries like education is vital for the prosperity of one nation. Hence, it is best for the authorities to allocate their budget efficiently to cover the costs for both fields.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In short story Winter Hibiscus Minfong Ho teenage girl fails driving test vows take spring The story ended like show girl new beginning For example When come back Saeng vowed silently spring When snows melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test again HO The hibiscus makes feel though connected homeland So hibiscus budding starting new beginning feels able This story ends like", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In opinion I believe anyone choice children age group chooses read It general public say right wrong When society says every single child allowed read certain book listen certain song found offensive people There laws restricting person view There level media appropriate mean go away completely Some reasons society sensor everything fact everone offended everything parent child say right wrong lastly individuality comprimised choices limited When someone gets offeneded media neccessarily mean another person also offended When I like video book type content someone else content censorded opinion way enjoy I know personally I would want someone take away favorite book child could read Content public always unsafe read someone else s views Just like I believe people believe I see valued others remain censored topic Books considered inappropriate decided censoreship parents young child Decisions like left group people opposite views Whe children growing taught values know today parents teach society full people different kinds opinions There saying author says all us think book hope none children children taken shelf means would power remove book content shelf like would books left I believ saying I also believe many others well Individualaity one person differnt traits feelings another human We choices books read musice listen individuality When people start thnk allowed remove certain song book want people see everyone one would song enjoy traits make differnt one likes song If us left earth something enjoyed one else also enjoyed thing would pretty boring I learned experience person something different bad thing actually good thing cases Also experience I learned boom longer shelf someone removed good feeling I would want happen books world It good thing practice art understading open mind comes certain material another person happens enjoy In future I find book book I would want children read I let topic go remember everyone opinions So conclusion I want let everyone know books seen inappropriate offensive one person seen good thing another", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The technology that read the students emotional expressions is valuable. My reasons is that it can make you better in school. Secondly it can also keep you in a better mood more often. Lastly it will jusy make you feel better.\n\nFirst, it can make you better in school I say this because in the passage it says that when you are in school it can read your expressions. This will be a good things because it says when you are reading on your computer in school it can detect weather you are happy or sad. If your said then the computer will let you read more happier things if it knows your expressions. In the passage it also says that if a ad comes on that you like and it detects that you are samiling and thibgs like that, then it will play more ads like thatg just to keep you in a better mood.\n\nSecondly, it can keep you in a better mood on a regular basis. This will be a good thing because things like you stress level and things like that will be down. Also you will be healthier because being mad all the time and stressing is not good for you and it can also kill you. In the passage it says that when people tell you to put on a happy face when you do it this will put you into a better mood then what you was in before. It will also put everyone else in a better mood thats around you.\n\nLastly, it will just make you feel better. In the article it tells us how our face can really tell how you feel. It says how you wrinkles on your face will show when you are in a slightly bad mood or a all the way bad mood. It says that smailing parcialy can relly help your whole mood when you are upset or angry. The muscles begin at your cheeks bone that start all of these expresiions.\n\nIn conclusuion the technology that read the students emotional expressions is valuable. My reasons is that it can make you better in school. Secondly it can also keep you in a better mood more often. Lastly it will jusy make you feel better.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "You've been waitng for six months now and today is finally the day you take your driver's test. You are beyond excited because you finally get to drive without your parents. There is something so exciting about being behind the wheel because you are the only one in control. Being able to drive your own car car feels awesome. Driverless cars do not get you that same feeling as if you were in complete control. I am against the development of driverless cars, because the driver isn't in control, technology screws up, and who's to blame in the scene of an accident?\n\nThere is something so satisfying about being able to drive your own car. Knowing you are in complete control can be a little scary.\n\nBeing the person in control can make you more responsible and aware of your surroundings. Driverless cars are not like that, even though they can alert you when there is complicated traffic, you could still doze off or be in the middle of watching a movie. When Google can make cars completely driverless what is the point of \"keeping your eyes on the road\" if the car is already doing that for you.\n\nTechnolgy today is very impressive and has come a long way, but still isn't as perfect as the human senses. If you are \"driving\" down the road in a driverless car and you fall asleep. All of a sudden the car crashes because dirt flew into one of the sensors. If you were actually driving the car you would have been able to avoid this situation and been aware of the surroundings. There will always be glitches in technolgy and something could always go wrong.\n\nIn case of an accident who is to blame, the company or the person in the car?\n\nWell it is a driverless car, right?, so the driver should be able to do things that normaly can't be done when driving. The company of the driverless car might say it was the drivers fault becasue they were asleep or texting. In general there will be conflict between who's fault it was. In reality if it was a normal car it would have been the driver's fault.\n\nDriverless cars wouldn't be able to give you the thrill of being behind the wheel, technolgy is not perfect, and in the event of an accident who is to blame. Driverless cars really show how developed technolgy has become. When it comes to safety, we already have drunk drivers so the roads don't need driverless cars getting into accidents as well.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Needless to say, we are witnessing an alarming trend of car over-usage. Starting from small towns to the metropolises, they are all full of an excessive number of vehicles on their roads. This essay will highlight the reasons for this modern-day issue along with would-be solutions. \r\n\r\nNobody would argue with the fact that at the present day any consumer endeavours to obtain anautomobile by taking credit. Some individuals might consider this fact as a virtue, ,,however it exacerbates the situation on the roads. Moreover, there are various families where almost every member possesses a car inasmuch as many of them have a hectic lifestyle. Not only is it convenient to travel to work, but it is also considered to be prestigious.\r\n\r\nHowever, the government in concert with local authorities can arrive at the solution by imposing heavy taxes on petrol. Consequently, most families would be confined to having one automobile for the whole family. Beyond any doubt, it will reduce the number of cars, and as a knock-off effect, decrease the amount of traffic congestion. In addition, in order to find an alternative , the option most avid drivers would consider switching to a bicycle, which certainly ensures the lack of potentially appalling traffic.\r\n\r\nIn summary, undoubtedly, today it has become trendy and necessary to own a personal vehicle. Therefore, the government is obligated to reduce traffic with the aid of either levying heavy taxes or supplying citizens with adequate road conditions in order to boost bicycle users among people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"You can live in your car, but you can't drive your house.\" This is a quote my teacher used to tell me as advise for the future. This was a way of saving money if you had to choose between paying rent or paying your car bills if you were in this situation. However, what he did not realize is its more useful to use less of your car.\n\nUsing less of your car improves the enviroment. Using less will reduce the pollution in the air that we breathe in. When we reduce our car use we reduce the amount of resources like fossil fuels and nonreuseable resources. When we use cars and create pollution we also create a smog, but when we stop using cars we can clear the smog. In paris, they banned car use for a certain amount of time and it reduced the amount of smog. In fact, in the article\n\nParis Bans Driving Due to Smog , it says \"The smog cleared enough Monday for the ruling French party to rescind the ban for odd-numbered plates on Tuesday.\"\n\nAnother thing that reduces is your payments for your car. How can you pay for a car if you don't have one? The answer is you don't. Without a car you don't have to pay car payments or repair payments. You also don't have to worry about getting fines or looking for parking spaces. In the article\n\nIn German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars , it reads \"Car ownership is allowed, but there are only two places to park- large garages at the edge of the develpment, where a car-owner buys a space, for $40,000, along with a home.\"\n\nIf you are not already worried with you car payments, you would be worried about your children's safety. Accidents happen all the time from cars. And if you're not in an accident you could be the one with a car breakdown on your way to work. Now you may say, I need a car because I have to drive to work or drop my kids at school. Than here is a solution, in the article\n\nThe End of Car Culture it says, \"Likewise the rise in cellphones and car-pooling apps has fascilitated more flexible commuting arrangements, including the evolution of shared van services for getting to work.\"\n\nMy teacher's quote about paying for cars is more useful than paying rent is incorrect. Using less of your car is an advantage to improving the environment, spending less money, and increasing safety in the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Based auther mood created author happy sad I sead mood created auther happy lived comfortable made thier neighborhood mostly Spanish Cuban italian immigrants time rasism segregation lived home peaceful sad thing NARCISO RODRIGUEZ learned love definition family love saed would never parents turn house simple home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear senator,\n\nGetting ride of the Electoral College would change so many things. We the people vote for who we want as a president. It should be that the person with the most votes wins. We the people should have a say in who runs our country. I mean we do because we get to vote and all but even if we do vote the Electoral College votes diffrently. Just becasue they and you are in higher power shouldnt mean that you get to pick everything that happends to this country. Yes, I understand that there are really stupid people in this world who make stupid dicisons but we should at least get a vote on like new laws or building something new in town. If we had votes on things like getting stuff torwn down and building new things it would change atol of places. But becauser of the Electoral College we dont have a final say in anything. During the presidency electon one of the candidates will win by the votes of the people but lose beacuse the votes of the Electoral College. That is not right. When the people vote for something or someone they should be able to have a final say in what happends. Say your voting for a new ice cream flavor, well say there is 20 regular people voting and there is 5 from th e\"electoral college\". Say 13 of you like the new flavor but the other 7 dont like it. Wouldnt you think the 13 should win? But the 5 electoral people still have to vote, and 3 of them vote against the new flavor so there is no new flavor. Wouldnt you be mad if you and the other 12 people who wanted the new flavor didnt win because of higher people above you said no? i know i would. Im giving you all these reasons why the electoral college isnt fair because it needs to change.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The authors sugestion that studying venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents and how he supported his claim shows his enthusiasm in the topic of exploring venus.This is supported in how he says its a worthy pursuit, how human curitostity will lead to equally dangerous endeavors, and the fascination astronomers have with venus.\n\nWhen the author's how human curiosity lead to dangerous endeavors is shown in paragraph 3 stating that the atmosphere is covered in highly corrosive sulfuric acid clouds.\n\nAnother example is how exploration in venus is a worthy pursuit is in paragraph 2 stating \"... contribute to Venus's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite it's proximity to us.\" shows the challenge in studying venus.\n\nLastly the astronimers fascination with venus is stemed from the fact venus has features simalor to earth.The author states that \"The planet has a suface of rocky sediment...features such as valleys, mountains, and crators.\" show the simalaritis are still there.\n\nIn conclusion his idea has a multitued of support in his artical.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars have been popular and widely used ever since they were invented. They offer a fast and efficient form of transportation across both long and short distances. In this aspect, cars may appear extremely beneficiary and useful in everyday life, but there are always downsides to great inventions, especially the invention of the car. More and more people from all around the world are realizing the harms that car usage brings and are beginning to abandon their cars altogether. The most apparent reason as to why cars are damaging is because of the great amount of greenhouses gases they emit into the atmosphere. They also bring about pollution and smog with them. Finally, and maybe surprisingly to some, people are actually happier without these pollution monsters.\n\nTo start, cars expel shocking amounts of greenhouses gases from their tailpipes. By limiting usage of these automobiles, the amount of green house gases can be significantly reduced. According to the source,\n\nIn German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars, cars produce up to 12 percent of the greenhouse gas emissions in places like Europe, but an eyepopping 50 percent in the United States where there is heavy car usage. This is a lot of noxious gas that is being put into the atmosphere, and poses a serious harm to the people living in these cities. Greenhouse gases are an especially maleficient form of pollution because greenhouse gases tend to trap heat and other types of pollution from escaping the atmosphere, leaving filth in the air that are then absorbed by the lungs, \"choking cities (Rosenthal 8).\" This is without a doubt a serious problem, but it can be corrected simply by not driving as frequently. According to\n\nThe End of Car Culture,\n\n\"But America's love affair with it vehicles seems to be cooling...If the pattern persists-and many sociologists believe it will-it will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment, since transportation is the second largest source of America's emissions, just behind power plants (Rosenthal 32-34).\" Simply by reducing car usage, these harmful toxins can be removed from the atmosphere.\n\nPollution is another quite obvious reason to why restricting car usage is benefical. Cars release other toxins and gases as well that contribute greatly to pollution and smog.\n\nParis bans driving due to smog tells the story of how driving had to be banned for days because of the worst pollution the city has ever seen. According to this passage, \"Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog...[Last] week Paris had 147 micrograms of particulate matter (PM) per cubic meter compared with 144 in Brussels and 79.7 in London, Reuters found (Duffer 14-17).\" This is a ton of particulate matter that will be all breathed in by the people there if they are not removed. Paris, Brussels, and London are not only the cities plagued by this pollution from cars as \"[The smog] rivaled Beijing, China, which is known as one of the most polluted cities in the world (Duffer 14).\" Smog from pollution negatively effects many aspects of life, but the worst was that \"Cold nights and warm days caused the warmer layer of air to trap car emissions (Duffer 14).\" This phenomenon forces the people to breathe these particles into their lungs. Pollution is a terrible occurence that tags along with car usage, but by simply banning cars with even-numbered licnese plates off the road for one day, the smog greatly lightened in severity, enough for the city of Paris to lift the ban. No one wants pollution in their city, and simply by cutting back on car usage, pollution can be greatly reduced for the benefit of the people.\n\nFinally, and most surprisingly, people are actually happier and less stressed without these modern horses. Heidrum Walter, a mother who lives in the city of Vauban Germany, a community devoid of cars, says in the passage,\n\nSuburb, Life Goes On Without Cars , \"'When I had a car I was tense. I'm much happier this way (Rosenthal 3).'\" Carlos Arturo Plaza, a man in Bogota, Colombia, also commented during Bogota's Day Without Cars, (in the source,\n\nCar-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota\n\n) \"'It's a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution (Selsky 24).'\" This may seen a little puzzling at first as to why people would not enjoy fast and convenient transportation, but then the answer becomes pretty obvious. Without cars, parks, sport centers, and other outdoor recreational places have started to pop up more amd more on the streets of cities once bustling with cars. The roads are much less congested and new shops and food centers have appeared as well. Limiting cars pleases people in many different aspects of their life.\n\nCars may appear to be helpful at times, but in reality, citizens are better off without these transportation machines. Not only do they greatly pollute the air and cause smog, they also spew out noxious greenhouse gases that cause more damage to the society as a whole. Finally, and probably most importantly, the citizens themselves enjoy life better when these cars are out of them. Although this doesn't mean cars should stop being manufactored altogether, people should think twice before jumping in their car next time.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The \"Face\" on Mars that is shown in \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" is nothing but a natural landform. The first picture of it was taken by the Viking 1, while it was looking for possible landing spots for its sister ship, the Viking 2. It seems to look like that of a face sculpted onto an Egyptian Pharohs sarcophagous.\n\nFirst, Mars has no possible substantial atmosphere for growing food, living things, or running water. some have described it as a bare wasteland. humans could not possibly survive without very good gear, so why would there be a human face carved into the surface of Mars. Also, we are the closest planet to Mars, and we have not figured out a way to get to Mars yet, so how could other beings get there first? Also, why would anyone or anything carve a human face? We have never seen any aliens, why or where could they have seen us?\n\nSecond, when the Viking 1 first passed over the \"Face\", they said, \"Scientists figured it was just another Martian Mesa...\" Which is logical. The people who said that what they saw is a natural landform are scientists. The theorists who think that it is an alien monument are just mostly common people. Most with no degrees, while the scientists have many. Also, in the article it says, \".. Just another Martian Mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharoh.\" These people state that mesas are common there, why should this one be any different donia became except maybe a strange angle of light, casting human-like shadows. This is just one of those coincidences that we should make fun of, and take advantage of, because that is what NASA did. They used it to make funds like a movie, some magazines, and books.\n\nThird, after all the theorists and movies NASA decides to visit the \"Face\" again. \"Photographing Cydonia became a priority for Nasa when Mars Global Surveyor arrived at the Red Planet.\" When they passed over Cydonia they snapped a picture, ten times sharper than the original Viking photos. These pictures revealed nothing but a natural landform. But not everybody was satisfied, they claimed that because of the harsh Martian winter, the pictures were unclear since the team had to snap pictures through clouds. So \"...on April 8, 2001-- a cloudless summer day in Cydonia--Mars Global Surveyor drew close enough for a second look.\" This picture also revealed nothing but a landform.\n\nThrough all this, all thes efacts, these mission, these pictures, we know that there is NOT a human-like face on Mars", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Did you know that 25 years from May 24,2001 a weird shaped face was spotted on Mars.Some say that it was alien life, but I beieve that it was just a misunderstanding.I believe this because weird landforms shape on the face of Earth, there are weather effects on Mars to cause this erosion,and the picture they took in 1976 had clouds and fog in the way so there was a blurr and you could not even tell what the mysterious figure.\n\nAnything can pop up out of any type of weathering.There is weather on Mars and the weather there could have made an annoynomous figure that obviously looked like a face. There are many explanitions for what happened such as the picture being tooken of of content.\n\nThe picture was tooken not on land, but in the air over clouds and fog. So it could have really been somehing diffeerent under the fog and clouds.\n\nIn conclusion,The landform was nothing but a landform that was coveredin clouds and fog that was tooken out of content.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "As citizens, we trust our country to do what is best for us. As the statement \"by the people, for the people,\" is commonly used among our government. We hope that this is true. That is why the electoral college should remain a part of how we vote, in order to keep our society fair and in favor of the people.\n\nAs it says in \"Source 3: In defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President,\" it states that \" The Electoral College restores some of the weight in the political balance.\" With this being said, it allows us to know that we can trust our states to be equally represented. Just because the larger states normally get more attention, they are both represented equally. This allowing the votes to be fair and equal.\n\nThe electoral college is the reason that run-off elections are avoid. As they produce a clear winner instead of no candidate winning the majority of the votes. run-off election cause the election to become much more complicated than it already is. Also \"The electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have a transregional appeal.\" This allows election to be in favor of everyone. Though not everyone may be pleased with the person or their views, it allows the mojority to be on board with one person.\n\nWhen a president is chosen, it is to allow are country to have a successful leader. Which is why we must trust that what our founding father's put in place is in our favor, and is what should remain as part of our government. The Electoral College may seem \"unfair, outdated, and irrational\" to some people, it is what keeps the election successful and fair", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe that the landform was naturally created. My biggest reason for beliving this is because we do not have any strong evidence that aliens exist or existed on Mars. I also don't believe that this is a sign that aliens were on the planet because there is a strong chance that this is just a landform that happened to look like a human face.\n\nI do not belive that the formation is a human face. I do not believe this for many reasons but my biggest reason for believing this is just a feature on the land is that we don't have any solid evidence that there were aliens on te planet or existed period. People have tried to prove that there were aliens in space but no one has actually came up with hard evidence to show that ther may have been.\n\nMy next reason for not believing that this landform is a human face or was made by aliens that lived on Mars id because it could just have been by chance that the landform looked like a face. There are lots of monumental landforms that are unique. Some landforms just resemble different things because of werther conditions where they are and some just have been altered to look like that.\n\nThe article states that NASA has seen many unique and interesting landforms. There is no reason to believe that this is an exception. It may just be another landform that NASA only decided to reveal to the public to make money off of. The passage even states that it was the fact that they did not have a good camera affected what they saw.\n\nIn conclusion, I still do not believe thatlandform was caused by alien activity or was a human face. I believe it was just another unique landform that was made popular by the public and their suspence about aliens and foreign creatures.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of FACS in the classroom is a great idea as it can help students lear at their own pace and they can enjoy what they are learning.\n\nHaving FACS in classroom could help education of young students significantly. It could tell if the student understands a lesson or is confused by it or cant figure it out, as stated in paragraph six \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, Then it could modify the lesson, like an effecrive human instructor.\" The computer could help the student with the problem and continue to give the student problems that he or she understands. By having FACS in schools there would not be as many human teachers needed to work beacuse the computer could teach the classes. If the computer helps the students with their work and the students understand everything then people could become a lot smarter.\n\nIn conclusion there are many good ideas that prove that a FACS computer should be in a classroom. This new technology is great for the future of education and can help mankind in the long run.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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