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[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the modern era, robots are doing a lot of work. Some individuals believe that robots are significant for humankind's future development. Others think that robots have minor effects on society. In my point of view, robots have replaced development. The following paragraph will discuss you. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, using a robot makes many plus. First, we can do our work very easily and quickly without pressure. For example, nowadays, many companies use this. Because that replaces people's workplace. So, we can do the work with small employees. Moreover, they still wrote coding robots doing their work. That can do the job repeartly without bore. And can also control and change human. So business people more likely robots work. I read many research report. That includes robots' work can make more profit for business companies. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, using the robots creates some minus. One, robot usage will decrease humans' skills development and experience. Also, reduce work opportunities.So that will increase unemployment levels. After using robots, many people go to another country to work. Poor people are facing many problems about this. It can create a lot of distances with poor and rich people. It makes bad in our society. And many students are going to wrong way. Because robots replace their work life. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, increasing technology affects good and bad. We will use a good way, So we wo not go a negative way. We will develop all our skills. That can help our future life. do not waste our time. We will provide time to our future development. That will give many chances.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using technology to read student's emotional expressions is a positive thing that would benefit science and the classroom. FACs has the ability to change life in general, but its use in the classroom would be extraordinary. The incorporation of FACs into schools would change school as we know it and progress the future of education in America.\n\nBy using technology to read student's emotions we would be able to make sure that students are involved with the lessons that are being taught. With computer monitors being hooked up to FACs the computer itself would be able to scan students emotions. \" 'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored' says Dr. Huang\" (D'Alto, paragraph 6). This means that the computer could change the lesson on its own accord and the student would not be taken away from the immersion of the lesson and would not miss out on any information. This would definitely benefit grades and the amount of knowledge that students would retain, but what if staying involved is not the problem? If a student is just confused on the material the FACs system has an answer for that as well.\n\nUsing the FACs system in the classroom we would be able to make sure that no student is left behind. If the FACs system was implemented into school technology then students level of confusion could be monitored. The lesson would then be changed in order to deal with the student's level of confusion. Dr. Huang says, \" 'A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored.' \" He then goes on to say that \" ' it could modify the lesson, like am effective human instructor' \" (D'Alto, paragraph 6). This would personalize education and keep students from falling behind. Each student would have their own lesson planned developed and would be able to understand the material that is being presented to them. The benefits of using FACs in the classroom will not only reach school walls.\n\nIf FACs became a part of the average cirriculum, then the FACs system would go on to help create new technology and advancements in science. Immediate growth of the FACs system would most likely be used in entertainment. Dr. Huang says \"The same technology can make computer-animated faces more expressive-for video games or video surgery\" (D'Alto, paragraph 6). This also stretches to many other forms of entertainment like movies and tv shows. The equipment used in FACs can also tell if someone is being truthful in thier expressions. FACs would grow if used and develop even greater technology, and it would help the subjects previously listed even more.\n\nThere is no doubt that technology like FACs would need some getting used to and it would be costly, but the benefits of the system not only to school and education, but to life in general, would most definitely outweigh any drawbacks. School productivity and student knowledge would double and no student would have to worry about their level of knowledge becoming a problem. The FACs system is a no brainer when it comes to the question of if we should or should not incorporate it into our lives. It is a step towards the future. The only question is, \"Is the world ready?\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In excerpt The Mooring Mast By Marcia Amidon Lsted builders empire state building faced several obstacles attempt allow dirigibles dock One obstacles faced fact lack suitable landing area The dirigibles thought able anchor mooring mast refueling service however another obstacle way nature That greatest obstacle The wind top building always shifting violent air currents The builders afraid back ship would swivel around around mooring mast With said came conclusion would dangling high pedestrians street neither practical safe In order safe came another obstacle The entire building would modified strengthened dollars worth investment Lastly already stood law airships flying low urban areas With obstacles faced never opened public", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Recently it has been a debatable question whether we should take some actions to address the thorny problems on the decreasing diversity of plants and animals, which are caused by human behaviours. In my view, although people’s activities have a diverse impact on abundant species, there are still some practical measures to maintain and improve plants and animals species.\r\n\r\nSome people assert that it is too late to tackle this issue. In other words, it is impossible that plants and animals can recover even with the assistance of modern advanced technologies. For instance, a great number of wildlife’s were killed by hunters in some parts of the world especially in Africa within recent 200 years, which enables people to make money from animals’ skins and bones. Meanwhile, numerous wild animals have been endangered or died out. More importantly, it is extremely tough for biologists to research and find a method to recover old species without genes.\r\n\r\nHowever, in most cases, people are strong advocates that we are supposed to take actions to improve this situation as soon as possible. Furthermore, nature will renew gradually by itself if there is no interruption by human beings; hence, new species will be created which are more adapted to the brand new environment. For example, nowadays an increasing number of natural reserves are established by a variety of countries in the world. Local governments have enacted laws about the protection of wildlife including both plants and animals. With the great effort by the folks, the situations have been changed when it comes to 21st century.\r\n\r\nIn a word, there is no doubt that people damaged the diversity of plants and animals due to the lack of awareness in the past; however, people can save the rest of species as much as they want with the effective ways.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A new technologic advancement for reading emotional expressions of students would be a nice thing to have. Not all kids learn the same way as others do. When a kid is sitting in class and is struggling there might be something wrong but usually nobody asks to see if they can help.\n\nEvery kid has those days where they don't want to be at school and they are not in a very good mood. Teachers will be able to look at them ask whats wrong and then try to make the lesson a little different and easier to understand. When kids are better able to understand they will retain the information a lot easier and it will help them later on when they need to go back and remember what they have been taught.\n\nHaving computers that can recognize your facial expressions to help you learn would be a nice thing to have. In the world we live in today, there is technology everywhere you look and everywhere you go. In the school district I am in, every kid has their own MacBook and so we are always using technology for our school work. If the computers we used would be able to help us learn easier by telling our facial expressions then I feel like it would be a nice thing to have to help us learn and to succede in life.\n\nNot just certain schools, but most schools around the world use electronics and computers. When you use the computer and get frustrated it would be nice if it could change the content of what you are doing to help you better understand what you are doing so you can learn it easier. With facial recognition with emotions would make it nice for the user and also make it a better learning tool for everyone to use.\n\nEveryone has sat down at a computer and been frustrated on what they were doing but this could lower the frustration and make things easier for everyone. I do feel like this would be a nice thing to have in schools and that it would help kids and teachers out and that everyone would see a change in learning.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The dry desert like setting would affect cyclist could easily become dehydrated sun loss water sweat The cyclist states I eased past trying keep balance dehydrated state Rough Road Ahead The man badly dehydrated determination moves The terrain went flat short rolling hills The road abandoned along town passed hoping get water The man goes say I toiled point tumbleweeds crossed path ridiculously large snake really look like diamond back blocked majority pavement front Rough Road Ahead The setting obviosly desert like dry hot dusty This would definately affect body sweating causes dehydration due water loss In conclusion cyclist greately affected setting", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A reason to join the sea going program is boecose it took two weeks to cross the\n\nAtlantic ocean from the estern coats of the united states and a month to het to china. caring for animals during the crossing kept luke busy. they had to be fed and waterd two or three times a day. bales of hay and bags of oats had to br pulled up from the lower hold of the ship. stalls had to be canceld. luke also found time to have fun on board,especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. the cow boys played base ball and volleyball games in the empty holds where animals had been housed. table-tennis tornaments,fencing boxing,reading whittling,and games also helped pass the time. but beaing a seagoing cowboy was mutch more then an adventure for luke bombber. it opend up the worldto him. im greatfull for the opportunity he sais . it made me more aware of peaple of other coutries and there needs. and thet aware ness stayed with him leading his famlly to host a number of internashional students and exchange visitors for many years. it whas1945,world war 11 was over in eroup, and meny countrys were left in ruins. to help these countries recover there food supplies, animals and more,44 nashions joind toghether to form UNRRA(the united nasions relef and rehabilitashions administrashions). UNRRA hired sea going cow boys to take care of the horses, young cows and mule that were shiped overseas. luke and don sighned up.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports his idea by pointing out the risks and challenges the scientists,researchers and astronomos could have by going to Venus and trying to get just a little sample of rock,or something else they see it cold be intersting to study and investigate more about it like what it is?,what can be used for?,is it dangerous for humanity?.The idea of going to Venus it's not gonna be esay but if they do it,this can be a good chance for humanity to learn new things they thought they never could think about or even see. Many scientist consider Venus as a planet like Earth in terms of density and size.\n\nIn the article says \"If or sister planet is so inhospitable,why are scientist even discussing further visists to it's surface? Astronomers are fascinated by Venus because it may well one have been the Earth-like planet in our solar system\",if Venus is like Earth it can be a chance for us to visit a new planet. In the process of preparing everything they need to make that travel ,scientist may have fail in what they were working on. Trying to know more about other planets in particular Venus can also be a good thing like what if in some years Earth is no longer sustainbility for the humans and we need another place to live Venus might be a good option,since scientist have take time and get to know more about how are the conditons in Venus and set how humans can survive it can be great.\n\nIn conclusion the use of events that had happen the author could support his opinion about the subject. Having curiosity to know more things and to search more deeo into it's good people can take their imagination beyond they thought it's impossible,traveling to outer space and see what things are there can be awesome.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent decades, global warming has been receiving a great deal of media attention around the world. Although the idea of co-existence with climate change appears pausible, people should find out some feasible solutions to combat climate change instead of accepting it in the long run. There are a number of reasons explaining for the co-existence with global warming. First, since it is believed that natural disasters are unavoidable, trying to resist them is hopeless. For example, Japan is particularly susceptible to earthquakes ,or some Asian countries get hit the most by typhoons due to their geographical location, thus combating global warming is in vain. Second, the expense of space projects is extremely high ,which discourages people from investing it to prevent climate changes. In fact, some people suggest that government funding should be diverted toward improving the living standard of ordinary people in lieu of investing in space projects, which means they accept to live with global warming. However, it’s human’s duty to find out practical approaches to prevent climate changes because of it negative impacts. First, climate changes is largely shaped by human’s activities rather than the nature itself. If people don’s take responsibility for what they have been doing to environment, natural disasters will get closer to them, causing a big loss on human life such as global warming or frequent typhoons,... Second, natural disasters occurring in a long run will wipe out biologic diversity including human being. Therefore, people need to act now to stop global warming. In conclusion, people should find out other practical approaches to prevent climate change. By considering all substantial effects of climate change on human life, everybody will find out the ways as well as be highly aware of protecting environment.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear leader local newspaper I heard strange misconception computers ruining society I one think terribly made thought To begin internet provided home desktop computers teach us lot world around us Additionally whole fact contacting others around globe well whole fun world explore makes computers enjoyable Finally thousands jobs around world either based work computers Due computers without doubt beneficial society The first reason I need clearly point computer holds tons information ca nt found anywhere else While books republished updates occur world anything internet updated almost instantly beneficial students school projects subjects like subsequently people could actually go school via online schools colleges Whilst regular colleges could cost around thousands dollars order get online colleges much rather cheap affordable anyone Also due high amounts information online schools seem growing obsolete computers typically hold information obtained regular school year Because computers definately beneficial society To build internet provided computers bring loads pleasure use wisely Because growing population use computers companies tend make computer shoes usually attracts viewers thousands day This makes television seem obsolete well Another major thing software comes computer almost everyday allowing many things done users Software typically includes games movies music Finally since staying touch others good thing chatting others across globe easy durable allowing distant relatives come contact via various chat programs Due computers bring loads fun users thus beneficial society Lastly due rising demand computers companies typically rely computers jobs Since internet population growing companies allow people fill applications send resumes order apply job said company Also jobs done online using computer Many jobs days typically banks rely using internet time actually based internet Because workers finish job easily one place instead around going boring looking building boring job With reason nt anyone else see computers beneficial society With reasons I hope see computers beneficial society Education become whole lot easier thanks internet If education seek use internet fun bored Finally jobs completed even easier makes workers responsible So leader paper really along everyone else think computers waste time life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In 1976, NASA discovered a land formation that looks like a face and since then it has become a national icon. Conspiracy theorists think that we at NASA are hiding something. They think it was created by aliens. We know that it wasn't though because after all we're the experts here. If we were hiding something, why wouldn't we release it to make more money? We have technology and the smarts to prove people wrong that think it was created by an alien. The conspiracy theorists are wrong.\n\nAs better technology is developed and our images take on a higher resolution we have proof that the \"Face on Mars\" is just a land formation with an odd shadow. In 1976, we first discovered the \"Face on Mars\" using the Viking 1, but we couldnt really tell what it was because the resolution wasn't that good. Then in 1998, the technology developed over the span of 22 years, the resolution became better, and we could sort of tell what it was. Then in 2001, we really discovered what it was because the technology was way bettter and we could see a 3D image of it. As technology developed we could really start to tell that it was in fact a mesa. Proving that the people were wrong and that they don't have as advanced technology as we do.\n\nThe conspiracy theorists were once again wrong. They just look off of the images NASA puts out and think of the most bizzare theory and release it. When we had the MGS fly over Cydonia (where the \"Face on Mars\" is located) on April 5, 1998, he snapped pictures and really discovered it wasn't an alien formation. Then, many people disagreed with our logic again and said that since it was a cloudy time in April '98 on mars, that the alien markings were hidden by haze. We then went for a second run on April 8, 2001, \"a cloudless summer day\" and captured the photo using the the camera's maximum resolution, and still didn't see any alien markings. They were yet again wrong and this proves that it isn't an alien formation.\n\nIn the end, the picture really shows a Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa. These landforms are much like the ones we see on Earth. They're common on almost every planet. What Garvin says is completely true, \"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho. These formations are just another land formation. The people who thought they were alien markings are just trying to get attention.\n\nAfter all, we at NASA have always had the best technology to look into space and at other planets. People have tried to prove us wrong and we always come out on top of things. We've proven them wrong with images, other formations on Earth that are equivalent to formations on Mars, and the knowledge that we have. The people shouldn't question it because if it really was an alien marking we'd share it with the public. These theories that it's an alien marking are wrong and we've proven this.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Each year more people are killed by driving accidents then the combined deaths of murder and accidents involved with firearms.\n\nMany of these deaths and associated accidents are caused by driver error such as reckless driving, speeding, texting while driving, and driving under the influence. As a result, many traffic regulations, such as the institution of specific rules of the road, police enforcement of safe and sober driving, and required safety features, such as airbags and seat-belts, have helped to reduce accidents and mortality rates on the road. Yet, these mortality rates are still high due to the human trait of being able to fail due to biological reasons (fatigue, anger) and psychological and cognitive reasons (driving under the influence due to a false belief that \"alchohol does not affect me that badly\" or that \"I do not need a seat-belt, I likely will not get into an accident). Henceforth, the addition of automated driving systems into cars are of extreme benefit due to their ability to negate these human tendencies and traits as well as adding a degree of redunency to driving.\n\nFirst off, automated driving systems are usefully as they can negate the negative effects of human biology such as fatigue and rage. As demonstrated on paragraph seven, the article explains how care manufacturers are considereing the implementation of cameras which can monitor drivers. While the article implies that these cameras are to be use to detec whether or not the driver is even looking at the road, it is not wistful thinking to believe that this technology can be improved apon to detect facial features (such as opening and closing of the eyes, swaying of the head) to detect fatigue or other features (angry expression) to detect drivers who are tired or experiencing road rage. The car from this point could take measures, such as suggesting the driver to stop at a gas station to get coffee or to pull over to calm down, and thus prevent the driver letting his or her biological symptoms affect his or her ability to drive safely.\n\nAdditionally, these automated cars can also be used to stop drivers from preforming reckless things while driving due to their stupity, ignorance, or inmaturism, by forcing the driver to comply with driving law in or for he or she to driving. One example of this forced compliance could be that an automated car could demand a breathilizer test to be preformed in conjuction with the use of a key in order to start up the car, ensuring that only sober drivers can operate a vehicle. Additionally, the car can also perform a similar action by requireing the driver and passengers (which could be detected by sensors and cameras) to have their seatbelts on before driving. Finally, a car can either force a driver to pull over if it detects that the driver is driving recklessly or alert athorities so that they can stop the driver before he or she has the chance to hurt someone else. Henceforth, the computer systems in car can help a driver not to cause an accident by either their physical and/or cognitive state or by their irresponsibility.\n\nFinally, automated cars increase safety due to the concept of redundency. Since there are two capable operators in the vehicles, (that being the human driver and the car itself) one can take over in case the other fails, such as the car taking over if the driver falls asleep or the driver taking control if one sensors has a malfunction. This redunency improves safety as both systems have to fail instead of just one in order for an accident to occur. This redundency is why commercial aircraft have an extremely low likelyhood of failure, as the plane has both human redundency (two pilots in case one becomes incapacitated) and mechanical redendency (auto-pilot kicks in if both pilots become temporarily unable to address all the issues occuring in flight as well as back up systems in case something like electronics or pneumatics fail).\n\nHenceforth, through a combination of redundency and the ability to help drivers protect themselfs from their own faults, whether they be physical, emoutional, or mental, the automation of cars will make the act of driving a much safer endeavor. While some may state that automated cars can never reach the intuition and agility of a natural driver, automated systems should and would not replace human drivers but instead suplement them as in the case with commercial aircraft. Henceforth, when the risks and the benefits of automation in driving are weighed, one can come to the conclusion that automation is driving will inevitably make the endeavor much safer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "What race What religion What taught Almost anything like could considered offensive So types things taken libraries No types things everywhere You ca nt get away Today find many offensive television shows commercials For example commercials gum woman people might consider offensive You might ask CAPS well might person diesease ca nt get clean feeling always bad breath That person might take offense commercials Another example might television shows like Some races get offended types things Does really mean get rid though People everywhere somehow offended something world nt perfect Even take types offensive material libraries could still seen So whats point If tried take like everywhere world everything would crazy There thing perfect world I believe people would go crazy For example movie CAPS main character finds town suppose resemble The perfect society In town first everything nice everyone perfect ca nt stand leaves The best thing let materials stick around nothing get gone everywhere else Also help kids learn keep locked knowing anything far going get life So things go away What think", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Do you think the Face on Mars is a natural land form? Do you think it was made by ancients civilization? Or do u think it made by anliens? Well thats what were here to find out. Lets start out with the three photos from 1976, 1998, 2001 sha'll we.\n\nThe picture from 1976 shows a similar face close to a human face. But since the definition on the photo is as good as it is today with modern technology it gives us the allushen of the land looking like a face because of the different heights. The other reason you can tell its not from aliens is by the way the face rounds off at the end when it touches the ground. Also from the photo from 76 is that each pixel is about 43 meters and thats just per pixel.\n\nThe picture from 1998 is a little better than the 1976 photobut its still not good enough. Its pretty clear that u can see that is not a face because of how disrupted the ground looks compared to the 1976 photo. In the 1998 photo from Viking 2, you can still see the resemblements of the face just not as much as you could in the picture from Viking 1 in 76.\n\nOkay now to the last picture. The photo from 2001 is a lot better than the 76 and the photo from 98. In 2001 the photo was so high definition it show the elevation and the parts of the land or the mesa was risen from the ground. You can tell the differents because it looks like the mesa is on a type of plate like contential plates that the Earth has and that are constantly moving around today. All of these facts I found tell me thats its just a uniquelly shape mesa landform.\n\nI thought the Face on Mars was just a land form. Using the information I got from the passage and all of the details I found, it tells me aliens did not make this face. Who knows they probably did and it been destroyed over the many many centries that mars has been around in this solar system. Do you still think its was formed by an acient civilization or aliens? Do you still think it was a natural land form? Thats what I found out about Marses popular Face.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" is writes mostly in favor of driverless cars but adds some valid points as to why these cars may not be the best decision. I believe that the latter opinion is the logical stance. If completely driverless cars were to exsist in the furture the human race would lose one more skill due to technology. On top of this loss of skill there runs the risk of computer malfuntion within the car, legal issues if and when these cars get into an accident, and people attempting to hack the cars' computer system in an attempt to kill someone.\n\nIf these are created into exsistence then people will no longer posses the abilily to drive their own car. While this may seem like a good thing these cars will not be able to do everything a human typically can do in avoiding an accident. When a situation occurs that there may be an accident there may be an opportunity for the \"driver\" to take over. Unfortunatly, this will be pointless because these \"drivers\" will no longer know how to control their own cars.\n\nFurthermore, if and when this accident happens, who will take the blame for its cause. Will it be the drivers fault, the car's fault, or the manufacturers fault?\n\nThis is a point that is brought up in paragraph 9, \"Still, even if traffic laws change, new laws will be needed in order to cover liability in the case of an accident. If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault -the driver or the manufacturer?\" A whole new set of laws will be needed in order to accomadate this new type of car. Even if new laws are created for these cars and it is made easier to have someone take the blame for an accident how will anyone know if it is truly their fault?\n\nBesides the loss of skill and the legal issues for if and when these cars malfuntion, there is also an issue of these cars being easily hacked. It is getting easier and easier for people to acces sensitve information with everything thing being placed online and creating these cars is just adding another thing to be hacked. It is a very real possiblies that someone may hack into a world leaders car and try to crash it in an attempt at an assination. If this does happen the public would no longer be able to feel safe in even our cars and would be at the mercy of these online hackers.\n\nI believe that, while having driverless cars would be an amazing feat in humankind's technological advancement, there are too many risks involved if these cars are created. We would be losing another skill to technology, computers malfunction on occasion and when one of these car's computer malfuntions and causes a crash who will take the balme, and people with these cars will be putting there lives in the hands of these compurters and the people with the skill to hack and control these computers. It is too dangerous to have these cars and have everyone using them.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "If you ever get the oppurtunity to go across the sea to help others then I would say heck yeah, because I love to help others and I think it would be fun to see all the cool places that you travel to help others in your free time.\n\nYou should join the program because if you like to be with animals and you like to help others get back on their feet then I suggest to you to say yes if get the oppurtunity. You should also say yes if you've always wanted to go across the sea's. Luke got to go to Rome,Europe,and China. Even though it took about two weeks to cross the Atlantic from the Eastern United States to China I am pretty sure that it was worth it. You can also have alot of fun on board, especially on return trips after the animals had been unloaded. The cowboys played baseball and volleyball gamesin the empty holds where the animals had been housed. Table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing,reading,whittling, and games also helped pass the time on board.\n\nI think it would be fun to do this because you would get to help others, be with animals, have fun on board, and see really cool places. I would say yes would you?", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist runs water trying traverse terrain In setting desert California riding bike I travelling high deserts California The word high means hills would make journey even difficult The hills appeared later story cyclist said flat road replaced short rolling hills When speaker says replaced trying show change terrain another feature setting tumbleweed crosses hills tumbleweeds crossed path The tumbleweeds made remember desert tumbleweeds associated desert brought thought dying picked apart birds", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In world many things around children tried take materials away would take made entertainment Many adults say world changed much time younger Well nt something People need stop complaining everything something Adults eliminate amount materials children take home If walk store days would find something would want children watch see listen I believe people best seperate materials family oriented materials Sometimes enough children still getting addicted materials early age These children share friends children start things Many materials movies music negative ideas teach children things need know learn The material talks drugs parties drinking even need radio station television channel young child would listen Our adults need also learn good children learn listen things keep children away much possible Like author said everyone able take something shelves would anything left We always going things want children see start eliminate The others eliminate continue keep shelves places kept children nt go I believe towns cities better job keeping children away rated movies negative songs different books talk adult things The children future world If s watching thinking look good future There many things stop children watching listening learning negative things life Keep children away materials better world", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The concept of driverless cars coming soon is no suprise. People can already pull off astounding feats like building huge cities and making people fly with the technology humanity already has. To be against the concept of new inventions like the driverless car is like going against a hurricane. Technology will constantly advance regardless of how people feel about its achievements. What is a driverless car compared to what we have already created?\n\nSmart cars will make life exceptionally easier for the average person. The equipment required to make such a car is becoming cheaper and more commonplace every day. Sebastian Thrun himself said that a radar before the year 2000 costed two hundred million dollars. Today a person can buy similar tech for about thirty dollars at Radio Shack. Not only are smart cars becoming more viable as a normal vehicle replacement, they are becoming even more proficient than humans at their job. Google's modified Toyota Prius constantly updates its surroundings with a 360 degree 3D laser map. Some can even sense imminent collisions and apply the brakes much faster than any human could. Before too long automated cars will be safer than even the most alert driver.\n\nDriverless cars are definitely taking over. While most people are wary about such concepts now, in about twelve years these new inventions will take the world by storm. Before too long driver's licenses will be obselete all together. What the world needs is a progressive, accepting way of thinking. Holding on to old suspicions will only keep the world in the dark ages. Humanity needs to bolstier forward, not lag behind. Driverless cars are just one milestone in an endless technological journey fueled by human ingenuity.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I think it would be very useful in classrooms. Like the article said, the computer would be able to tell if the strudent was confused. Or it could tell any other emotions the student was feeling to make sure they were getting it.\n\nThe technology seems like it would be very expensive though. That is one downside to it. It seems kind of crazy to think about computers reading emotions. Another thing is sometimes people may not want their emotions read. This technology could be used for many things outside the classroom though.\n\nI am not sure if I would want this in the classroom or at a job yet. I may need to learn more about it first or think about it some more. It seems like a very helpful and promising idea for the future though. I am curious to see how long this technology takes to get to the classrooms and other places that may need it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author concludes paragraph show hibiscus flower profoundly implanted Saengs life gave new found courage strength For example way home failing drivers test Saeng sees flower says I felt shock recognition intense almost visceral This shows deep concentration Saeng hibiscus connection guide tough times Saeng subsequently flower shop identified flower childhood She realizes old home flowers Saeng used connection past increase courage adapting knew life Another example text states She realized many things thought strange become almost familiar now Saeng comes realization listening mother talk hibiscus flower normally survived old home would able survive She understood would able think things like big would strange anymore It way hibiscus tree offers Saeng support courage even strength", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "People get up everyday and most likely always have some place to go. They wonder how their going to get to their destination and the first thing that comes to mind is by car. They never seem to sit down and think,\" Do I really have to drive my car to get to where I need to be today?\" If they sat down and thought these things out and found other ways to get to where they need to be without their car,they'll see how much it would help the environment around them. Not only for themselves but for other indivisuals as well.\n\nCutting down on driving could decrease much of the pollution that's being emitted into the air. Pollution is not only bad for the air but it causes other destruction too that can interfere with personal activity and property. In source 1 it says,\" Automobiles are the linchpin of suburbs, where middle-class families from Chicago to Shanghai tend to make their homes. . . Passenger cars are responsible for 12 percent of green house gas emissions in Europe. . . and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United States.\" By this ocurring it makes it harder for people to enjoy their surroundings.\n\nFurther more, limiting car usage deosn't only help with how the environment is affected but also by lowering the number of traffic. Traffic is one of the most hazardous thing a person can come in contact with. It can cause a horrible crash or even take someones life. To solve problems like that leave your car at home and either walk, jog, bike (ect) to where you need to be. In source 3 it says \" . . . Millions of columbians hiked, biked, skated, or took buses to work during a car-free day yesterday, leaving the streets of the capitol city eerily devoid of traffic jams.\" If it's possible, it would make more sence to just leave your car at home , it a benefit for you and others on the road.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \" Making Mona Lisa Smile,\" the author starts off by saying the percentage of the different effects Mona Lisa has in her smile. He states that she's 83 percent happy , 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. The use of the new technology called \" The facial action Coding System'' in my opinion does not tell you how your honestly feelings. There is no way the computer can see the way you are feeling , just by smiling at the screen does not mean that you are happy. People smile at the screen all the time and has different feelings. Weather the computer can determain how you feel the only person how actually knows how you feel is you and yourself only. A computer can not recognize the subtle facial movements we humans use to express how we feel. There is no way the computer will let you know how you feel , the article is basically saying that just be smiling or looking at the computer it can determine how you are feeling. Once getting to paragraph 3 it starts saying how the facial Action Coding System works they start off by telling us how the process begings, \" the process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face: all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles.\" From that sentance in the article it is basacilly saying how the computer has a 3-D sensor on it, and when placing your head infront of it it will scan your muscles and from there determine the way you are feeling. As humans we perform this same impressive \"calculation\" everyday. It is hard for a person to determine how ypu are feeling with just facial expressions , for example I could have a smile on my face but inside I could be feeling sad or mad and only I would know no one else. So the 3-D sensor they have on the computer to determine the way you are feeling is not true , a computer can never determine the way you are feeling it can never say that you are 5 percent happy and 90 percent sad , it does not work like that. Only you and you only know the way you are feeling and thats it. So no a computer can not determine the way you are feeling it can not determine the percent of nothing only you know how you feel and nothing else knows how you feel.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Seagoing Cowboys\n\nHave you ever heard of a Seagoing Cowboy? When I was young my friend and I were offered a chance to join the UNRRA, \" the United Nations Relief and Rehabilitation Administration.\" I knew it was an \"opportunity of a lifetime.\"\n\nThey hired us to help with carrying war animals across the seas. We had tons of fun times, and we hope you can will consider becoming a Seagoing Cowboy too.\n\nFirst, we got to help many and different kinds of people. We would help\n\nprepare the animals for them and get them ready to go to war. The animals also provided food for countries that needed help through hard times\n\nSecond, we would get to see amazing and very unique views. We had the privilige of taking a gondola ride through Venice, Italy. We also saw the Panama Canal and and a castle in Crete on our way traveling to China.\n\nThirdly, we had all kinds of fun and games onboard. We would play games in the stalls when the animals were gone. We played baseball, vollleyball, table tennis, and many other games to help pass the time.\n\nIn the end, I learned my job wasn't meant for adventures. It was an opportunity to explore the world and the people that came with it along with their needs.I was glad we had a chance to help everyone that we could.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Even though people are very busy with their jobs as well as studies, they may experience a longer commute time.some people state that travelling long distances for work or study brings negative effects on them while others hold the opposite idea.In my point of view, it depends on the outcome of one's career commitment.In this essay, both views will be analysed to draw a conclusion.\r\n\r\nOn one hand, most people struggle to make their goals realistic despite the challenges they face.For example , as good parenthood, people try to take their children to school in cities rather than in countryside in order to provide them a student-friendly environment and better facilities for education.Also, people immigrate to town areas for services like supermarkets, health care, shopping complexes and public libraries regardless of time they consume to reach and return.Moreover, individuals who concerned about their careers,always try to identify more trends than issues in their job field and promotions as well.As a result,though the public spend long duration in travelling,they receive better outcome for their commitment in return.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand,longer commute times cause more stress in people.For instance, if somone faces a traffic jam on the way to his job, he mentally struggles with the time taken to reach the work place.This causes him an emotional damage.As well, when returning home, everybody wishes to arrive early to their destination and women reschedule the rest of the day for house hold dutoes and plans for tomorrow. If it takes much time to travel, people may get tired easily and fed-up with household activities.This is an emotional burden.\r\n\r\nTo sum up, apart from the mental disturbances, most of the public manage all those tasks enthusiastically to achieve their goals.Therefore, long commute times do not always negatively impact the community. However, if the distribution of resources takes place with equal strength across society and if globalization positively affects rural areas as well, a better tomorrow will emerge.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The use of technology to read students' expresions is good. It could help students focus in school, and help teachers help student with subjects they don't understand.\n\nWhen students are aware they're not paying attention in a subject they try to pay more attention or at least make it seem like they are. The text states \"According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion,moving your facial muscles not only express emotions, but also may even help produce them.\" This shows that even pretending to focus just by showing it in your face might also help you focu on what going on.\n\nTeachers can aslo benefit from this technology a well. when they teach a class they can look over the students emotions and see what the teachers can do different to make the students understand or pay attention. The text states \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" This shows that the computer can show information about a students emotion which would help the teachers create better lesson plans.\n\nSome may argue saying this would be an invasion of a students privacy and that it would be unfair to the student. It would better to make each student sign a contract that would want to have their emotions monitored and have those who wouldn't want to could just not sign the contract.\n\nIn conclusion the use of technology to read student's expressions would be valuable because it could help students pay attention, and help teachers help the students.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My reasons to join the Seagoing Cowboys are listed below. You should join and meet new people you never knew about. It would be a great story to tell kids. You would feel good about helping people and be happy that when they have children it was because you had saved the parents of the kids.\n\nYou should join the Seagoing Cowboys because it is an oppurtunity of a lifetime and can change many peoples mind. You will get to see things you never get to see. Everyone can be able to help people in trouble and meet other people different from you.\n\nIf you join the Seagoing Cowboys you will know new things and learn new skills. You can also teach them your language and learn theirs. You will also be able to do things that you never done before.\n\nWhen you join and go on trips, you can do cool things to use as a conversation starter. You can also learn stories and legends from around the world and tell it to your hometown. You can make people envious and make them wanna go the trip as well. You can also speak of things you never thought of doing and did it.\n\nSo in the end, you have learned about why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys from Luke's side. I talked about how it is an oppurtunity of a lifetime,how you can learn new things,and how you can talk about your amazing trip and incounter with people. This would be an amazing oppurtunity. Saving people like that with no pay is good thing to do.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "\"Luke Bomberger crossed the Atlantic Ocean 16 times and the Pacific Ocean twice to help people affected by World War 2.\" This sentence from the passage indicates that people can be very helpful to those in need. If you are a helpful person, you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program. It allows teen boys or men to visit places such as Greece, it also allows them to, most importantly, help those in need.\n\nBeing a Seagoing Cowboy is a great oppurtunity to see places you have never seen before. Luke Bomberger got to experience Europe and China. If you would like to visit amazing places around the world or you like helping people, join the Seagoing Cowboys. In the passage it says \"Luke also found time to have fun on board.\" This portion of the passage states that if you are a Seagoing Cowboy, your whole journey won't be just work.\n\nThe evidence from the first and second paragraph give reasoning on what a great chance it will be if you join the Seagoing Cowboys. I hope that I have persuaded you to be a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nIf I did good luck on your journey.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "To you, a car may mean no more than just getting from point A to point B. Cars play a much bigger impact than it may seem. They affect not only the person driving, but the people around it. They also have a negative impact on the greenhouse gases. So riding a bicycle to work one day, won't just be good for you, it will also be good for the enviroment around you.\n\nCars have become a universal item. A lot of people have them, but no really gives them much thought. There are a few places that have spent the time and really developed ways to keep a community clean without the hazardous fumes coming from the car exhaust. For example, Vauban, Germany has developed a system where cars are banned. The only place you can keep your car is on the outskirts of town in designated garages. Due to this, most people dont even have a car, and have chosen to sell it before moving in. In Bogota, Columbia they had a developed a day free of cars where anyone that drove a car would have to pay a fine. According to the governer it was a amazing thing and everyone was participating in it. This also helped get some the nasty gases that they produce away.\n\nCars give of hazardous gases threw their exhaust. These gases will rise and get caught in the ozone. Which impacts the enviroment greatly in more ways than one. It can cause the air your breathing to be toxic. It also is one of the main reasons for \"Global Warming\". Paris learned this the hard when they reached a record level pollution. They decided they had no choice but to ban half the cars one day and ban the other half the next day. After this the congestion was down 60%, proving that it has helped greatly. Just imagine if one day instead of driving you could ride a bike and help change the eviroment.\n\nPlaces have tried to develop ways to reduce the levels or gases. Some have been very succesful, for example, in Bogota and Vauban they have found creative ways to help. The question is whether or not cars should be done with all together. To that i'd have to say no, cars play a big part in getting to work on time or traveling. Taking cars away would mean taking away family trips and other fun things to do with cars. The real answer to the question is that cars should not become so much of a necessity. There should be ways for people to get around better without the use of cars. Now what that might be, the future has yet to tell.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is an incontestable fact that children's conduct frequently generates a great deal of heated debate.Children's conduct will be controlled by what they see on TV is supported by few , while the opposite school of thought suggest that it is influenced by the duration of time spent on TV.This essay deals with this controversial topic from a different perspective with justified illustrations in the upcoming paragraphs. Personally , I am in a favour of the former view.\r\n\r\nConvincing arguments can be made that children's attitude is impacted more by what they watch.To commence with, Children who watch educational videos like English grammar or Math on TV will have more understanding of the subjects. In other words , people are moulded by what they watch . It will improve their thinking capacity in their respective fields . Therefore, their analytical skills can be fostered and it will improve their problem-solving skills. For instance, when a student is given a question to solve during class hours or any exam,practice made through watching videos will help in solving the questions. As a result , students will benefit more if they learn it earlier . Apart from this , Moral videos can be shown to them since they are the future generation who will take forward the country.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, watching videos have few distractions like the time they spend on it. Natural children's behaviour tends to have more physical activities. by making them watch videos it will curb the physical activity and they will become lazy, Which will have an impact on their health. Although this has posed a serious menace to the attitude of the Children , certain solutions can be put in place to tackle this issue.\r\n\r\nIn Conclusion, In this day and age with the advancement , technology it is inescapable to watch TV children and its impact on their nature due to many factors . Any technology must be used to our advantage keeping in my mind that We should the technology and not vice-versa. Children can watch TV but parents should decide on what they watch.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author supports the claim very well. The author says many ways how studying Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. For example, paragraph 5 states \"NASA has one particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study venus. imagine a blimp-like veichle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape. Just as our jet planes travel at a higher altitude to fly over many storms, a veichle hovering over Venus would avoid the unfriendly ground conditions by staying up and out of their way.\"\n\nIt also states in paragraph 5, \"But the air pressure would be close to that of sea level on Earth. Solar power would be plentiful, and radiation would not exceed Earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\"\n\nIt finally states in paragraph 8, \"Not only because of the insight to be gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors.\"", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Technology to read emotional expressions of a students could be very vaulable. This would make students life in the classroom easier. There would be so many advantages for to this. It would know what that student is feeling and it could help change that.\n\nIf a student was sad then the computer woud know and it could help make a diffirence.\n\nSome students might not want to do work if and not learn if they are sad and this could change that and put a smile on thier face. The author says, \" if you smile when a Web ad appears on your screen, a similar ad might follow. But if you frown, the next ad will be different.\" This could make the student have a better time in the classroom.\n\nA student might be super confused and not know anything about what they are doing or they might just not understand the question, well this technology could help that. It says, \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored, then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor.\" This means if the main teachor is telling someone else in a classroom how to do a problem but other people might also be struggling then the computer could help them and see their their emotion and it would change the question to try and make it more understandable.\n\nThe technology of this could help so many students and classrooms. So much more things could be learned in classrooms with out kids getting bored. It could help students in the classrooms get through so much more. Teachers wouldn't have to be trying to hurry and help the people that dont understand out and having the other people wait. This technology could be very valuable.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Art has been one of the greatest concerns at school that parents paying attention to in recent years. While some people argue that art is an important sense for a child, other believe that youngsters do not need to spend their time to study this accountable. In this essay, both these opinions will be reviewed before my opinion is put forward.\r\n\r\nPeople who believe that teenagers need to know about art often give two main reasons. Firstly, this subject helps your infant have creativity. When they are a kid, in the minds of children, they have a lot of creative images. Art has them develop their brain more about thinking and brainstorming. Secondly, art help teenagers can talk their story through a picture, which acts as a bridge preventing them from talking with their parents. Sometimes, in life, maybe everyone has a story too difficult to talk about with somebody. So, if you feel uncomfortable when you talk directly, you can find art to help you to solve problems.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, other people think that their youth do not spend their life studying art for some reason. First and foremost, some minors spend all their space draw, they forget many subjects in their school. Maybe this reason makes their score decreased, this means, their parents avoid them drawing, because they are afraid their sons become an unintelligent student in their eye teacher. In addition, some parents thought that craft can not bring anything beneficial for their child. Because, nowadays, the world is developing very fast, everyone focuses on the technologies to develop. So their parents want them to stop the waste of time in art, and start learning about technology to develop themself.\r\n\r\nWhile many parents suggest that art is a truly essential subject, others believe that art is a waste of time and effort for students. In my opinion, art is essential and worth the time and effort for students, and, hopefully people should think positively and encourage their children to learn drawing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Cars are becoming a must in today's society. In some places, people live and survive without a motorized vehical. People don't have to stop using cars altogether, but should be able to limit themselves to save of world from pollution creating a better environment to live in.\n\nSome people don't understand the severity of pollution and how much cars contribute to that. Pollution is said to become Earths demise, whith cars producing and letting out so much smog, it seems as if the Earths demise could be near. According to Robert Duffer, Paris has \"enfored a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city.\" This evidence of Paris giving a partial ban shows how detrimental cars can have on Earth environment. Further examination reveals, a situtation where Bogota has even issued a \" car-free day\" stated by Andrew Selsky. This source shows us that with even one day without using a car could be a useful plan for all places. People of today don't need to not use their cars, just use their cars either less per day or per week.\n\nAlthough some may say, we need cars to get to work or to go to the grocery store, they can always just use public transportation. Buses are already running even if you are in a car so why not use them instead of polluting the air even more. In Bogota, when they have their car-free day, most people either \"hiked\",\"biked\", \"skated\" or \"took buses\" as a mean of transportation. More evidence shows a senario where the Environmental Protection Agency is encouraging a \"car reduced\" community, stated by Elisabeth Rosenthal. Resources such as this one shows that if the United States Evironmental Protection Agency is concerned about our pollution rate why shouldn't we? If we cut down on our use of cars, pollution rate can drop extremley down causing a better living environment.\n\nWhen you stop to think why cars have become so prevelant, there is no exact reasoning. If we don't even know our exact reasoning for having a car, in a case that we can't rely on buses or our own two legs to provided why are we risking the safty of our Earth in order to use them? Cars aren't the slighest bit the problem, how and how often we use them is becoming the problem, if we limit our use of cars our advantage would be the single best thing in live, happiness and peace of life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author of \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\" said \" Numerous factor constibute to Venu's reputation as a challenging planet for humans to study, despite it's proximity to us.\" One of the reasons why the author said that is more than three decades ago not one single spaceship has touched down on Venus. No spacecraft survived the landing for more than a few hours. It has proved a very challenging place to examine more closely.\n\nSome facts about Venus is that sometimes it's called the \"Evening Star\". Venus is one of the brightest point of light in the night sky. Venus is the second planet from the sun. Its often referred to as Earth's \"twin\". It's the closest planet to Earth interms of density and size and tye closest in distance too.\n\nAs people may think Venus is just a normal planet that spacecrafts can go to and explor the planet, but thats wrong. On the planet's surface, temperature average over 800 degrees Fahrenheit, and the atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what people in Earth experience. The conditions are far more extreme than anything humans encounter on Earth. The National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has particularly compelling idea for sending humans to study Venus. Many researchers are working on innovations that would allow our machines to last long enough to contribute meaningfully to our knowledge of Venus.\n\nAs what the author wrote, all the reason and evidence explains that Venus is a really dangerous planet for people to land on the planet and study it without surviving.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Well I think author concludes story sentence maybe Saeng likes spring concentrate better favorite flower thinks relates life", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience lead rewards brown bear learned line get autograph He might frustrated stayed calm looked forward meeting One day seen headline newspaper He put machine opened newspaper holder grad one jammed He went gas station tell people hit top bell nobody came PERSON trying patient possible He went different store got newspaper The favorite star PERSON going town Can hurried buggle town seen line long He excited see got line hour got autographs done This going long day got hot dog soda sidewalle food business pm PERSON still last person line patience went quite bit At people including He finally got crew notified patience contest They told gets see concert gets phone number wins date He happy kept patient fife hours blow knew would never forgot moment Also ended boyfriend That learned patience pay end", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke had no idea that his life would change so soon after his high school graduation. He was working two part-time jobs in agrocey store and a bank when his friend Don invited him to go to Europe on a cattle boat. Luke couldn't say no.\n\nIn 1945, World War 2 was over in Europe,and manu countries were left ruins. To help these countries recover their food and supplies,animals, and more, 44 nations joined together to help the nation they are called the Seagoing Cowboys to take care of the horses, young cows, and mules that were shiped overseas.\n\nBy the time he was discharged in 1947,Luke had made nine trips-the most of any Seagoing Cowboy. I had the side benifit of seeing Europe and China. But seeing the Acroplis in Greece was special,he says. So taking a gondola ride in Venice,Italy,a city with streets of water. A cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them.\n\nIt took two weeks to cross the Atlantic Ocean from the eatern coast of the United States and a month to get to china. Caring for animals during the crossings kept Luke busy. They fed the animals three times a day water,bales of hay,and bags of oats. Stalls had to be cleaned.\n\nBeing a Seagoing cow was much more than an adventure for Luke. It opened up the world to him. \"Im grateful for the opportunity,\"he says. It made him more aware of people of other countries and their needs.\n\nIn conclusion Luke had the best time of his life being a Seagoing Cowboy he didn't no his life would change so soon after his high school graduation. In 1945 world war 2 made places get ruined so he decied to go to Seagoing Cowboys. He help animals like horses,young cows,and mules too. He had so much to do but he did it and yes it was hard but he did what he was suppossed to do. A Seagoing Cow boy was more than an adventure for Luke. It opened the world up to him. He is gratefull of the opportunity.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many materials libraries offcensive certain people I nt think taken shelves I believe put different section library Almost every thing life offends someone one way another It little blonde jokes major saying something someone s sexuallity I know little kids wouldnt understand types things parents ca nt keep kids hidden away forever If someone says something someone else I believe s wrong I mean think many blonde jokes A lot blondes I know nt take jokes seriously One good friends natural blonde probably smartest blonde I ever met Whenever hears blonde joke laughs say something funny go Probably one major things people get offended politics someones sexuallity Politics create huge problems people nt think something one way governer turns around says something someone else take way serious Many people different dont like suppose like always offended someone shape form It s like parents keep us away forever Little kids become teenagers teenagers young adults eventually become adults People learn deal different struggles life So conclusion parent nt want expose child things thing offensive good people like learn things people find offensive create problems I believe leaving books movies magazines shelves seperate area library nt bad idea Think take books away people want learn different things want know people get offended would nt feel offended took away", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the artical \"The Challenge of Exploring Venus\", the author supports the idea of exporing Venus dispite the dangers none clearly. The author gives some good point on both ideas, of visiting it and giving up on it. In the artical it states \" Beyond high pressure and heat, Venusian geology and wether present additional impediments like erupting volcanoes, powerful earthquakes, and frequent lighting strikes to probes seeking land on its surface\" (paragraph 3). This shows that the author is worried about the conditions we do have to over come to go, but this sounds like a point were he doesn't want us to try to go. The artical also states \" The value of returning to Venus seems indisputable...\" (paragraph 4). This also shows that he has his dought about studing Venus. The artical also states \" ...reserachers cannot take samples of rock, gas, or anything else, from a distance\" (paragraph 6).This shows that he does want us to be able to study Venus, but we cannot get close enough to its surface to study it. Finally the artical states \"... some simplified electronics made od silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulationf the chaos fo Venus's surface adnn have lasted for three weeks in such conditions\"(paragraph 7). In conclusion, The author shows hope and dought about us going and studing Venus, but he does think we will be able to do it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I do NOT agree with driverless cars. Driverless cars would be the cause of a more structured driving enviroment, yet think about when the cars glitch. Then your screwed because youd have no control unless the car gave you control.\n\nWhat if your trying to turn on a new road that doesnt excist to the car and it takes you some where else? I see driverless cars to function just about as good as a realy cheap GPS. Not haveing all the roads in the memory card, not good at sensory adjustments, and to top it all the artical states \"if the TECHNOLOGY fails, who is fault, the driver or manufacturer?\" i dont even think thats a serious question beacuse if i get into an accident because of the CARS moufuntion, then i better not be considered at fault. With there millions of dallars though, theyd turn into around on you and make you look like the bad person, so why risk it?\n\nAnother reason i dont agree with driverless cars are because, it says the car cant drive under ALOT of sercumstances, so whats the point in buying it if youv got to be the one driving the whole time pretty much anyway.?\n\nMay not be good reasons to you, but those are my reasons.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Although art is recognized as a versatile subject around the world, there are people who think that it is an important subject for children at school, others argue that it is a waste of their time. I agree with the former argument that art is impeccable for holistic mind growth in children.\nOn the one hand, it is often argued that there is no tangible benefit of studying art. This is because there are very limited career prospects for people who study art. For example, people with a qualification in the arts often find it difficult to secure a job which is permanent and well paid. In contrast, people with a credential in other disciplines such as business, engineering or medicine, conveniently find jobs which are not only permanent and well paid but also highly recognized in the society. \nOn the other hand, I would disagree that since art is a useless subject because it does not offer a well awarded career. Teaching art at school level is essential for a holistic mind growth in children. Art allows children to not only explore their creativity, but also enable them to express their ideas and emotions. This not only improves their communication skills but also enhances their emotional quotient which helps them substantially later in their future careers.\nIn conclusion, while other people’s opinions may vary, I think that art plays an inevitable role in the overall mindset development of children which helps them to enhance their communication skills and emotional quotient for their future challenges. Therefore, art should be taught to children at school.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In this world many people or students were being suicide and some people they just don't have hope. Many people are facing many different kind of difficulties and sadness. For instance some people might be upset because they don't have families and can be because they are not as smart as other people in school. Some people are facing difficulties while other are living happily. But we people don't know how other people feel and we don't understand each other how we feel inside of our heart.\n\nFirst,using this technology to read students' emotional expressions is valuable. The reason why i think it is good is because sometimes some students are not as smart as other students and some students are afraid to ask question that they don't understand and afraid to discuss with their teacher. But if we use this technology to read students' emotional expression in class, it would be really useful thing and meaningful for students. it would make students even better and smarter. As we can see in the articles it says\"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored\" If all teachers use the computer that knows students' feelings that would also help/make student to improve and develope their knowledge. Second,some students keep skipping class it can be because since they don't understand the lessons that they learn, they feel bored and stress and they behave bad in class so it makes them want to skip class so that they can stay away from stressness. But if teachers use technology that can read studens' emotional expression so that teacher would know which student doesn't understand and confused the lessons and teacher can explain those who didn't understand after school or during their lessons. Finally if they keep using this technology,one teacher can change a thousand studens' bad behavor and mind.\n\nIn conclusion,making useful things for those who feel hopeless and helpless are one of precious thing in our lives. Even though we all are came from different countries we have similarities things in some ways like how we face difficulties and that thing makes us one.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever wondered movie rented library younger nt today This due censorship Libraries censor certain books believe inappropriate young children Should censorship allowed libraries Everyone opinion I I believe allowed Censoring books allows libraries withhold books movies magazines music children quite mature enough handle contents within material rather curse words movie book music nudity shown magazines fighting shown video game Young children look role models someone follow therefore likely going repeat hear see Some children quite mature enough understand s alway okay repeat hear words inapporopriate young children Maybe saw movie man woman solved problem fighting young child take message wrong way try solve one problem fighting I believe age limit set certain types materials Children age watching movies rated There reason rating Just child allowed rentcheck whatever material nt mean could nt check maybe go home watchlistenreadplay If nt seem violentgraphic child allow watch movie read book play game That choice library nt want blamed year old coming home cursing fighting My sister took neice library rent movie childrens movie sister thought nothing harmful would come one scenes arguing fighting neice began arguing sister hitting sister nt pleased allowed movie childrens floor library Censorship wonderful thing libraries Maturity level children quite high enough seewatchlistenplay certain materials Not censorship allowed enforced I believe libraries censorship library", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "venus is the second planet in our solar system. This is the closer planet to the sun before earth, wich is the third one. this planet has many interesthing things like any other planet in our universe, many interesting things to explore, many interesting things to know about it. we can explore many\n\nthings. For example we can know about his temperature, weather, and if there is life in it.\n\nThe author's idea is well supported since he tells the differents things that venus have. He tells how dangerous Venus is, if humanity is able to live there, or what is the temperature in it. he gives details about how some types of experiments that the (NASA) did. He talks about how the (NASA) created a technological thing created with silicon, to see what was the reaction to the planet, or how long was going to be able to still working. the machine lasted for 3 weeks in good conditions. but the (NASA) didn't have enough, they wanted to send people to Venus so they could investigate what else does this planet would have.\n\n\"The national Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) has one particularry idea for sending human to tudy venus. to study the hostiles conditions of the surface.\n\nVenus has a lot of dangerous things such as tornados, radiation, highest temperatures, bad weather etc. the NASA things that even with that it can be survivable for humans. \"solar power would be plentiful and radiation would not exceed earth levels. Not easy conditions, but survivable for humans.\" humans have a lot of curiosity to explore things, no matter what it is or what is the effect.\n\nHumanity doesn't have limited imaginations. and technology just keeps getting better wich helps humanity to do things that we cant do by our self, or together. That's why technology is very\n\nimportant in our future, because is what we would need always no matter what we do technology is alway going to help us in one, or many ways. this is what has helped humanity with the investigation of venus and what dangerous things it has.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "From the known history of the humanity, many sports or activities have been done to enjoy ourselfs, keeping in shape, or spent time. Grown up people should be free to do any kind of sports or activities by their will unless they are not hurting anyone else except theirselfs.\nSome people think when a citizen hurt his/herself, tax payers need to pay for the health care fees, and it should not be consern for the tax payers since they are paying only for fundamental situations. This point of view is not matching with the freedom. Yes, there might be a fee for tax payers, yet freedom should be above on all fees. While some people prefers less dangerous activities, others can be interested in more dangerous activities, as well.\nGovernments can have some precautions to make citizens' life better. Yet, they should not involve such things like banning sports since it is the preference of the people which dealing with the dangerous sports. Some people could want to make more unique or exciting sports, and it is quite natural. Banning such kind of activities can be considered as limiting people's freedom.\nSince most of the people living together for a quite time in a society, people should pay respect on each others preferences, unless it is not interesting other people's personal area. As a calm and relax person, I am not intend to make dangerous sports or activities. However, I do not think that I have the right or power to say other people what should they do or not, and vice versa.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There fish named live around archipelago dangerous place fish could nt slow quickly Luckily legendary many codscanth specif float slowly Yesterday caught two fish gave wife Today fish desert absolutely despises Using patience waits something jump Suddenly sees big chunk meat something shiny At far away grab though went home wife The next day went current saw floating meat lunged started chewing something stabbed started pulling fiercly heard snap When tugged fell current finnaly free also realized current felt pretty nice ate couple fish slept When woke saw big ugly fish standing two fins could nt breath snapped one fins fish died", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The driverless car are new phenomenon to the car industry. The driverless car would seem more effective than driving at all to what the passage says. The time isn't right for driverless cars yet due to all the uprising issues of safety and lawmaking. A driverless car would be boring in some aspects to the driver who own that type of said car.\n\nLegislation in our governments are slow compared to technology's ever growing knowlegde and devolopment. For instance, the \"cyberbullying\" laws that will take a long while before it will pass because of the fact that technology is much much faster than the law. It would be good for our economy in our current world we live in.\n\nThe driver and the car are the two most important things to operating a car. So would the driver have to pay for the repairs or would the car company pay for it? Since the car is driverless, it should be the car company that would have to pay for the expenses of an accident would ensue. Hackers could cause havoc if they learned how the control the computorized system of the driverless car.\n\nThere are good aspect to a driverless car and there mostly bad reasons for a driverless car to be legal across the U.S. for now. I think just driving a normal car would be better off due to the fact that its a conventional concept to drive in general. The driverless car would not be the way to go for our future until these risk and challenges are aprehended.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Car usage in the world is high. People use their cars to get anywhere and everywhere. Even it is down the street to the store. Some countries however are taking a stand and putting a limit on car usage. Too much car usage can cause smog and greenhouse gas emissions. If you are one of those people who disagree with the limit of car usage, maybe you would be okay with having a \"car-free day\" like the city of Bogota, Columbia has.\n\nAmerica's greenhouse gas emissions are high compared to Europe's. America's greenhouse gas emissions is up to 50 percent. Un-like Europe's which is at a small 12 percent. This however, is because of \"smart planning.\" Smart planning is where you seperate suburban life from auto use, as a component of a movement, which is called smart planning.\n\nVauban, Germany has figured out a way to reduce the use of cars. \"Street parking, driveways and home garages are generally forbidden in this experimental new district,\"\n\nstates Elisabeth Rosenthal. 70 percent of Vauban's families do not own cars. 57 percent of these people sold their cars to move to this new experimental district.\n\nPeople in this new district have said things such a,\n\n\"When I had a car I was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\"\n\nThe feedback from this is so far so good. The people who are running this new concept have made sure that stores were very close, therefore people don't have to take highways to get to the mall.\n\nIn Paris, France cars were not being used for a day.\n\n\"After days near-record pollution, Paris enforced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city,\"\n\nstates Robert Duffer. The smog in Paris was thick and intense because of the cars. Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog.\n\n\"On Monday motorists with even-numbered license plates were ordered to leave their cars at home or suffer a 22-euro fine ($31). THe same would apply to odd-numbered plates the following day,\"\n\nstates Robert Duffer.\n\nParis was doing their best to limit the smog in their city and the only way of doing it successfully was to limit the car usage for the week.\n\nIn Bogota, Columbia they have a car-free day every year. Their only way of transportation is hiking, biking, skating, or taking buses. This limits traffic jams in the city for people who commute to work. Andrew Selsky says,\n\n\"It was the third straight year cars have been banned with only buses and taxis permitted for the Day Without Cars in this capital city of 7 million. The goal to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog. Violators faced a $25 fine.\"\n\nBecause of this the city has more walk ways and bike paths. Parks and sports centers also have bloomed throughout the city; uneven pitted sidewalks have been replaced by broad, smooth sidewalkd; rush-hour restrictions have dramatically cut traffic; and new restaurants and upscale shopping districts have cropped up. All in all a car-free day is very benifically to this city of Bogota.\n\nThere are some advantages of limitation of cars. Smog is reduced and so is greeenhouse gas emissions. The air will be cleaner and more pure and people will be happier because they won't have to deal with the frustration of driving. We can all use just one day of no driving, for a better cleaner earth and a happier you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many land features affected cyclist trip First desert greatly affects water deserts There also snake could bit kiiled As road well paved obviously abandoned years made cycling much harder And juice factory taunted making remember need water well pump cold water instead pumped hot gross water", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "More than any time in our society, people are seeking to know about the history behind the place where they are living. The purpose of this essay is to discuss the possible reasons why I believe such an event is occurring and inform possible sources where people can find such a information. The main reason why I think this tendency is happening these days is because people are buying old houses rather than new ones. Due to this fact they are interested in finding the history of the places before purchasing it. In addition, when people are renewing their house, they are learning about its history in order to keep the main elements based on the original intentions when the place was built. To illustrate this, many architects are creating designs that integrate old elements of construction, such as portals and rustic stairs, with modern tendencies, as it has been a crescent request among clients. One of the major sources to find out about the history of a particular building or house is online. This might require specific information about previous owners or even when the place was constructed. Alternatively, there may also be a file with information about the place on the city council. However, historical facts might have not been attached to the file, only geographical information. For example, the city must keep the dimensions and other information of houses and buildings in the city to calculate taxes paid by the citizens. In conclusion, the majority of people searching information about their buildings and houses is with the aim of knowing any important historical fact before acquiring it, as well as, with the objective of maintaining the main elements of the place in case they decide to change it. People are mostly likely to obtain such pieces of information from the internet or on their own city council.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The Seagoing Cowboys are boys are poeple who help others out. When countries fall they're there to pick them right back up. There are three reasons why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys. The reasons are one its a good way to help out others, two its a good opportunity to see the world, and three you are litterally saving people lifes and dont even know it yet.\n\nReason one is becasue the job is just a really nice way to help out those around you. You can help the enviroment by replacing animals and even buildings. You help out the poeple that werent as lucky as you. Some people could be suffering out there in the cold, but you helped them rebuild their houses,and rebuild their lifes. Poeple will be greatful for your kindness.\n\nAnother thing i noticed was that It gives you a good oddortunity to see the world. Luke\n\nGot to see a bunch of beatiful things on his way to other countries. He Got to see things from New Orleans. To China. He got to see things you wouldnt normaly see just going through your normal life. You have the chance to see stunning things if you were a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nLast but not least. The Last thing i noticed was that you are litterally saving poeple's life. Poeple could be out their starving and you could be the one to fix it. Some poeple would rather just care for their own family, but you have to power to give poeple food. They will have homes to sleep in becasue of you. Poeple will be snuggled in beds at night becasue you choose or not if you want to be a Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nSome poeple may think that it would take away their time, but what are you really losing. All your doing is helping poeple out? Is that not enough? u", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Many things involve settings affect things In Do exceed posted speed limit Joe Kurmaskie cyclist affected setting travels Yosemite National park The water bottles contained tantalizing sips Wide rings dried sweat circled shirt growing realization I could drop heatstroke gorgeous day kurmaskie The sertting day affecting much hard continue He tired almost sick heat The settings place hurting cycleist wants go home away heat The setting place effects cyclist much", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The environmental deterioration and home issues are probably the main crisis of this contemporary life. Few individuals believe that the only way to cure illness and disease is that Government should take steps to curb environmental as well as household infection. To rationalize, I certainly agree with this given statement to a large extent. However, my inclinations will be explained further.\n First and foremost argument is that government should ban the vehicles which fumes in a large number. This is because, It causes pollution and it leads to the ozone layer depletion. The other one is that the smockstcks and the powerhouse industry should be situated out of the cities. To add to this, the emission of the smokestack is lethal to health for people who are living near to the smokestack industry. Thus, it should be far away from the urban areas. As patient of asthma and other disease will become less.\n There are several fruitful solutions to tackle environmental issues. To begin with, the Government should try to grow as much as trees near the polluted avenues. However, the trees will reduce the carbon dioxide. Thus, people can inhale pure oxygen. By this, the worry of illness will start becoming in less number. For instance, Good air is the best way to transform your health diseases. To add to this, some environmental events and workshops should be organised free of charge by the Government. Because, Tntrested people will deliberately take part in this kind of event, from this; they will inspire more and become aware of how to save the environment. Individually, they will take a part to try how to save the planet.\n To summarise, environmental as well as house pollution is the severe calamity of this generation. Furthermore, the Government should curb this issue of growing more and more trees among the deforested area.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "With all of this new technology brewing in out society today, I believe that the emotional expressions reader should be used in every classroom and even in some professions. This technology could change they way of learning for all kids allowing them to stay on topic and be happy. When you have someone that is to shy or embarresed to speak up about their feelings in a classroom, this technology would be the perfect thing to have to make sure everyone is happy and if not then they should be able to express why. I believe that the Facial Action Coding System should be installed in all classrooms for educational purposes and emotional purposes.\n\nEducation is argueabilly the most important thing a school can offer. Teachers and school officials are always looking for another way to bump up education for students and this is the way to do it. This new technology identifies human emotions and can change your learning style on your computer depending on how you are feeling. For example Dr. Huang said \" A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored. Then it could modify the lesson, like an effective human instructor\"(D'Alto 6). This would allow students to learn the way the want to without having to worry about how a teacher is teaching the subject.\n\nAnother large part about school is the emotional side. Most all of the kids today are so worried about the way they look or what people think about them that many of these kids stack way to much pressure on their lives. Thats why I believe this technology could play a huge role in having postive emotions. When kids are in class worried about something this technology will track that data and can let someone know like a guidance consular. Kids who are way to worried or fearful will be able to talk the guidance consular about their problems without being shy or embarrased. This could prevent suicides in the future from kids just being able to talk about the data with a guidance consular without feeling the need to initate a conversation with them.\n\nTechnology and inovations like this only come around once in every couple of years and we need to take advantage of it. Us as a school, state, or even a country need to consider this as a possible type of technology to install in computers at school for the emotional and educational reasons. Many smart kids struggle in school because the way a teacher is explaining something that it might be just to hard for them to understand, or they just have to much on their mind that is needed to be talked about. This technology is inovational and needs to be used sooner then later to improve the academic ability of all of our kids in school.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Mr. Senator,\n\nI am fed up with the electoral college. The system allows for so much disaster to occur. It isn't strict at all and it allows a varity of things to happen that wouldn't end well. The people deserve to make the decisions. Because the electoral college systems has so many holes and problems with it.\n\nOne of the best arguments against the electoral college is what we call the disaster factor. One big example of the disaster factor is the 2000 year election. In this election Al Gore had more votes than George Bush, but still lost by 5 votes because of the electoral college. In 1960, segregationists in Louisiana almost succeeded in replacing the democratic electors who oppose John F. Kennedy. If they succeeded and the popular vote went to Kennedy, it would not have actually gone to Kennedy. (\"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses are wrong\" Plumer)\n\nSecond off, one of the most worrying things is if there is a tie in the electoral vote. If that happens the election vote would be given to the House of Representatives, where the state delegations vote for the president. The vice president vote is given to the senate. Each state only casts one vote which insures that 55 million voters and 500,000 have the same power. Given the size of those numbers, and that people in those states may vote one party for president and one party for congress, the House's decision could hardly reflect on the peoples choice. We have come pretty close to this happening too, in 1976 a tie would have occurred if 5,559 voters in Ohio and 3,687 voters in Hawaii had voted differently. (\"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses are wrong\" Plumer)\n\nThere is a few reasons that opposing opioninated people use to justify wanting to keep the Electoral College around. One of them is that the president has to appeal to multiple regions. A candidate can not just be a favor of the south and get elected, he has to campaign and be desirable to all the regions. This is good because a president that was popular in just one region would not be successful, because everyone else in the other regions would feel like they do not regard their interests. Unfortuanitly this is solved by popular vote, since it is by individual not by state. Other votes in other states balance them out. (\"In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the president\" Poser)\n\nThe Electoral College has many reasons for it and against it. But I strongly feel that we should get rid of it for the reasons shown above. From the \"Disaster factor\" to the threat of a electoral tie. Of course other people feel differerent and have different opinions but I feel like popular vote is for the best. Thank your for taking the time to listen to my opinions.\n\nThank you,\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In recent years, the amount of food that is thrown away uneaten has increased, achieving a great deal of media attention. Given that food waste has far-reaching effects, both nationally and globally, identifying the reasons behind it is key to finding the solutions.\n\nThere is a number of reasons why a large amount of food are wasted around the world. First, since most of the food is meat and vegetables, which are perishable, there are always best-before dates or expiries labelling on them. This means that if people don't consume them quickly enough, foods will be no longer edible and they will have to discard them as a result. Second, the way humans prepare or produce food also contributes to food waste. For instance, if a dish in a restaurant or at home is not delicious because of bad cooking or preparation, people will be more likely to throw them away.\n\nNevertheless, there are many actionable solutions to address this issue. Even if food scraps are inedible for humans, they can still be donated to farmers who can use them for livestock or animal feed. This would not only benefit the agriculture industry but also mitigate the environmental burden. In addition, food waste can also be used to compost or produce renewable energy. For example, technological advancements today allow humans to turn oil and fat into biodiesel fuel that is not only lower cost but also environmentally friendly.\n\nIn conclusion, although food waste can cause a whole host of other problems, each individual can take steps to solve this issue if they are aware that they all have the power to do it.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Facial Action Coding System is a new piece of technology that can help students and companies worldwide. Using this technology can benefit many. This technology is vaulabe to everyone and is a step towrd the future.\n\nThe author describes a new technology called Facial Action Coding System (FACS), as a way to identify human emotions. The way FACS works is a computer constructs a 3-D computer model of a face. It can move all 44 major muscles of the face like human muscles in correspondence with emotion. FACS has six basic emotions such as, happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness.\n\nEach emotion is chracterized with the facial\n\nmuscles according to paragraph 3. According to Dr.Huang in paragraph 4, facial expressions are universal, even though some indidviduals show varying degrees of expression. Scientists use algorithms to calculate emotion in people. These different algorithms can be useful to all.\n\nStudents should use this technology to read emotional expressions. This technology can benefit fine arts students greatly. Theatre kids can use this technology to define their character more and use the correct expressions and emotions. Art students can analyze art with this technology and create more similar to it. Some students who prefer science can also use this. AMny facial expressions move muscles in our face and anatomy students can use this to figure out how the face creates expressions. This technology is valuable to students and should be available to them.\n\nIn conclusion, FACS technology is very beneficial. It can be useful to students and is very valuable. Adults want kids to succeed and technology is the way to help us. Technology is easily available to us and can help us later in life with the right skills and development.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have you ever thought of the advantages of limiting your car usage? Do you even know what driving does to the enviroment? Limiting the amount of times you use your vehicle will reduce the pollution in the world.\n\nTo begin with, In 'Source 2: Paris bans driving due to smog' by Robert Duffer, it is stated on lines 14-16 that \"congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intensifying smog\" explaining that without cars, the amount of \"congestion\" in other words pollution will decrease rapidly. The popular use of cars and motorcycles have forced France to ban driving to clear the smog in their city. Pollution in this city has obviously grown over the years, by reducing the use of these machines has helped the enviroment.\n\nIn Addition, 'Source 3: Car-free day is spinning into a big hit in Bogota' by Andrew Selsky records that there is a day banning vehicle use as well know as the Day Without Cars in Bogota, Colombia, with an exception of buses and taxis. Selsky wrote \"The goal is to promote alternative transportation and reduce smog.\" With this city of 7 million, the rate of pollution will decrease throughout the years, even with one out of 365 days of not driving.\n\nLastly, 'Source 1: In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars by Elisabeth Rosenthal, It is explained that the \"Residents of [Vauban,Germany] this upsca;e community are suburban pioneers...they have given up their cars.\" Rosenthal notes that many families are happier without vehicles.\n\nIn Conclusion, limiting the usage of cars and vehicles will decrease the amount of air pollution in the world. These 3 sources all gave examples of scenarios without cars and motorcycles, how people have made things work and how pollution has reduced since then.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Luke who was just a regular person in the world but during world war ll lukes life changed. His friend conviced him to being a \"Seagoing Cowboy\" And when Luke took the invite and he knew it was an opportunity of a lifetime.\n\nIt was 1945, World War ll was over in Europe, and many countries were left in ruins. To help these countries recover their food supplies, animals, and more, 44 nations joined together to form UNRRA (the United States Relief and Rehabilitation Administration). UNRRA hired \"Seagoing Cowboys\" to take care of the hores,young cows,and mules that were shipped overseas. Luke and Don signed up.\n\nThey received their orders to report to New Orleans. \"We arrived August 14, \" Luke says, \" the day the Pacific war ended. \" With a cargo of 335 horses plus enough hay and oats to feed them.\n\nLuke turned 18 before arriving in Greece, which meant he could be drafted for military service. \"When my draft board learned that I was on a cattle-boat trip, they told me to just keep doing that for my service. \" By the time he was discharged in 1947, Luke had made nine trips_ the most of any Seagoing Cowboy.\n\n\"The cattle-boat trips were an unbelievable opportunity for a small-town boy, \" he says. \"Besides helping people, I had the side benefit of seing Europe and China. But seeing the Acropolis", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" the author states both positive and negative aspects for driverless cars. It tell you about tells you about all the grater thing that they can do and even the not so greater outcomes that can come from a driverless car.\n\nMy position with driverless cars is that I think they will be a great idea because it gives humans a better chance at looking out for thing that might potically can get them into a car accident. \" The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on idividual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better repsonse and control than a human driver could manage alone.\" The driverless cars can protect you than you can protect yourself and anyone else in the car with you. The driverless car can even handle any driving functions up to the speeds of 25mph. The cars are designed to let the driver know when there is accident ahead of when there is road constrution going on so it tells the humans to take control because the car knows that it can't do it by itself. \" They can steer, accelerate, and brake themselves,but all are esigned to notify the driver when the road ahead requries human skills,... navigating through work zones and aroung accidents.\" The car can a geart thing that happens to the world.\n\nThe driveless car has been around for as couple of years. Even in 2016 we have cars that brakes if you get to close to a car and that won't turn on the radio if seatbelt in not buckled up. \" Tesla has projected a 2016 release for a car capable of dring on autopilot 90 percent of the time.\" I know it might not seem like a lot but it is in 2016 alone humans have made \" MercedesBenz, Audi, and Nissan plan to have cars that can drive themselces by 2020.\" That to me a big improvment from just the little things that we have right know. To me cars braking if you get to close to another car is pretty good .\n\nIn conclusion, the driverless car can be very helpful to humans because it helps us stay safer on the roads. Also, the car knows when it's not good enough to help you anymore so it has you take control of it so that it won't get you or anyone else hurt if it can stop or anything else.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, a growing number of people travel around another place, it became trendy. Therefore, some individuals encourage visitors to be \"responsible tourists\" who protect local culture and the environment. However, it exits some people consider that it's difficult to achieve the standard of a \"responsible tourist\". As a result, in the following essay, I will demonstrate my opinion. \r\n\r\nFirst, the local scenic area has no measurement or facility to restrict people from doing certain immoral behaviours. For example, if a person carries many litter and he or she wants to abandon them into a trash can, but there have no trash can so that some people have abandoned rubbish anywhere. Second, it depends on behaviour habit of tourists, some tourists have low quality, they will take away some souvenir like stones, soils etc. Meanwhile, we also carve writing or design on trees or walls. Despite these being insignificant materials, if millions of humans all do that, it leads to enormous destruction.\r\n\r\nMoreover, in order to earn more money, the local scenic area management department has no limitation attract people to visit here, it may change the local environment and culture when increasing people visit these places, it will only be a matter of time when these places are contaminated and eventually ruined. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, if preserving local culture and ecosystem, the state has to improve management for scenic areas, and for individuals, we should control our adverse activity.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the last few decades, a number of ideas and beliefs emerged aiming to improve society and reinforce the relationship between the members of society. Few folks think that volunteer work is one of the great ideas for high school children and society and others itoppose. However, I strongly agree with this notion, which I will explain in the following paragraphs.\r\n\r\nTo commence with, the first and foremost benefit of doing this is it can play a vital role in teaching responsibility and humanity towards the community. By this I mean, when unpaid work is going to be mandatory, they will learn many services such as kindness and helping others. According to an American survey, teenage is the age of growing this kind of inner personality and those youngsters who believe in charity work have a more helping nature than opposite ones. Apart from that, this is not only significant for their inner growth but for their personal growth as well. They can learn soft skills such as communication skills etc. Also, they can gain experience by practicing their knowledge. For example, providing a free coaching to the children can make them excellent in their own studies or for higher exams.\r\n\r\nMoreover, the various types of social activities make environment clean and beautiful. They can understand the value of the important substances such as fossil fuels, water etc. For example, one of our professor always take us to different areas for gardening trees to taech us the importance of trees in our life.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, there is no any doubt that having a compulsory unpaid employement put a burden on youngsters, beside that it has number of pros like they helps us to learn kindness, soft skills, provide better care to our neighbourhood. Thus, I agree with the statement.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is widely acknowledged that compared to seeking a job, attaining tertiary education, such as a bachelor’s degree and a postgraduate certificate after high school, is the most crucial factor driving success. Even though the benefits of immediate-start jobs are undeniable, I strongly agree that everyone should consider enrolling in universities or colleges to have the best preparation for their future. \n\nOn the one hand, many young people prefer working rather than continuing to study due to several employment advantages. Specifically, getting a job is a comprehensive way to help people gain hands-on experience, significantly boosting their confidence and independence. For example, making coffee, cleaning, and delivering are popular jobs attracting thousands of youngsters with restricted skills to apply. These careers provide young adults with opportunities to socialise and expand their networks, which are notably helpful in building up essential soft skills, for instance: communication, time management and leadership. Moreover, being employed positively contributes to financial stability, enabling young people to afford necessities such as accommodation and food. \n\nOn the other hand, I believe that tertiary education is more beneficial for students due to the importance of university degrees in today’s modern world. Higher levels of learning offer a wide range of theoretical and practical knowledge, which are necessary and valuable for some specific professionals. For instance, it is compulsory to have an academic qualification when working as a lawyer, a doctor and a teacher. Additionally, unlike those with a lower level of education attainment, university graduates often receive a higher chance to access a variety of high-paid jobs with further development. An ordinary worker cannot be a restaurant manager without a relevant degree because the position requires a profound understanding of this field, like awareness of nutrition and health and first aids skills, which may only be accomplished at tertiary levels. \n\nIn conclusion, people should contemplate opting for higher education due to various positives that make them a better future.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "So one day I home babysitting little brother It super boring day So go check email I get email boyfriend I got excited talk becuase I got phone taken away I open break email It shocking I wanted cry So I called mom home phone asked best friend could come My mom said yes I called best friend tolled happened asked come By time I crying eyes said yes comeing best friend whole world She always knows say I m upset I waiting long time Her mom always takes forever things She finally gets house gives big hug We always one I always boyfriends dumped felt nice time I nt boyfriends So go room I m still crying I could nt stop It like river fellowing face Being dumped really horriable feeling He best boyfriend ever dmped unlike sitting texting I think texting comforting I nt want say I nt So started talk desided go mall Thats always fun place So ask mom She got home She said I really nt want home anywhere better home time So went back room I crying So started say bad things exboyfriend I knew things nt true really really funny We laughing really hard I starting feel better Yay making stupid exboyfriend jokes Laughter best way make everthing better", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In \"The Challenge of Expliring Venus,\" the author supports the idea that Venus is a worthy pursuit despite the dangers it presents. He does this by showing us the challenges Venus withholds, then gives us solutions to the problems and tells us why we should even explore Venus.\n\nFirst, he provides problems the reader might have with exploring Venus.The main problem presented is Venus' weather conditions. It is stated that \" A thick atmosphere of almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets Venus. Even more challening are the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric ascid in Venus's atmosphere. On the planet's surface, temperatures average over 800 degrees Farenhite, and the atmospheric pressure is over 90 time greater than what we experience on our own planet\".\n\nWith all these problems, it would seem quite unlikely to the reader that humans would be able to effectivly explore Venus. However, the author does provide solutions to these problems. The first solution is \" a blimp-like vehicle hovering 30 or so miles above the roiling Venusian landscape\". Then , the author provides more ideas like \"simplified electronics made of silicon carbide\" or \"old technology called mechanical computers\".\n\nNow that the author has answered questions the reader might have about exploring a place like Venus, he shows why we should explore Venus. The main reason why we should explore Venus is that it will prepare humans for even greater and tougher challenges. The author states, \"Striving to meet the challeng presented by Venus has value, not only because of the insight gained on the planet itself, but also because human curiostity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors\".\n\nIn conclusion, I belive the author does a good job of convincing the audience that Venus is worth exploring. By answering doubts the reader might have, the author is able to easily show that we most likely are able to explore places like Venus. Then the author gives a very strong reason as to why we should explore Venus at the end of his writing.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "It is sometimes argued that some adult literacies should be provided financial aid to educate by the government. In my opinion, we should focus on educating the knowledge to youngsters. \n\n There are several reasons why I would argue against investing more money in uneducated adults. Firstly, adults can fund themselves to go to study, and the government doesn't need to spend more money on this thing. Secondly, most adults just have little time to learn the knowledge at school due to their own work. Thirdly, these people who don't accept well education may have a low tolerance for studying at school all day. The reason is that they usually have free management of their time to do things what they want to do, but at school, the highly intensive work and timetable may make them feel stressed and hard to learn.\n\n Young students who accept well education can contribute to the country. For example, some students will go to outposts, which have poor teaching education resources to impart their knowledge to those young people and provide good quality education resources. And the government should spend more money on those young people who study in remote villages. \n\n In conclusion, I do not believe that there will have many benefits to investing more money in uneducated people by the government.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Our founding fathers creating amendments people One greatest freedom speech Censorship offessive materials unnecessary Books music movies magazines bad messages nudity give anyone right get rid Book burning happened dislike people s writing People right say feel medium Censorship anything makes child immature Book burning horrible action person People used burn sex drugs violence destroys people s dreams theories ideas In book firemen would burn book seen within home Almost ever single book world factual unless nonfiction The firemen novel destroyed bits type false went government That basically means every kind book The causation tragedy every citizen befriended television video games Without books would real sort entertainment Also things read everyday make us fact less books Libraries right censor books Freedom speech around almost since beginning nation Why change Stopping obscene literature reach people stopping writers speaking They already written ideas nobody reads work way ll heard Libraries stop things reaching little kids ears provide knowledge man needs Parents always stopped precious babies watching certain shows movies I knew woman would never allow son watch series use sorcery She believed would try learn witchcraft I found quite ridiculous I heard When kid watches murder mysteries fantasy shows dramas bits nudity different curious After watching kind scenes parent needs sit child talk jus saw The child needs know killing wrong justice good magic dragons nt exist Nudity always considered bad thing penises boobs part human body Kids mature see nt child watch porn Censory always taken wrong way People believe offensive material shown watcher reader bad thoughts learned We get rid obscenity We understanding bad things life Burning books bad way destroy foundations human mind Freedom speech law followed Censorship always good thing children anyone matter", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Ever wonder why we havent really been to Venus, yet? Well now here's ur answer why! In the last paragraph of this story the author says \"Striving to meet the challenge presented by Venus has value, not only because human curiosity will likely lead us into many equally intimidating endeavors. Our travles on earth and beyond should not be limited by dangers and doubts but should be expanded to meet the very edges of imagination and innovation\" which proves my point that the author supports the idea of leaning more about Venus. The author tells us how worthy Venus discovers will be depite all the danger the author has talked about int this story. Venus was Earth twin because Venus was the closet plant to Earth, size and in density. NASA has sent spacecraft to Venus so we could discover the mysteries of Venus but sadly the spacecarft were destroyed and thankfully they were no men in any of the spacecrafts that were destroyed. These are one of the reasons why going to Venus is dangrous. In the seven paragraph it states that \"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus. For example, some simplified electronics made of silicon carbide have been tested in a chamber simulating the chaos of venus's surface and have lasted for three weeks in such conditions. Another project is looking bcak to an old technology in the 1800s\"\n\nYou can see that NASA has been busy studying ways to get an man on Venus despite all the dangers. The author supports this story really well, he/she gave us the why and why not so good job author.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Nowadays, some factors are essential inspirations for people to keep working in a company, such as money. I believe that money is the most important thing in people's life. This essay will outline both advantages and disadvantages.\r\n\r\nTo begin with, several benefits are the key factor that motivates people to keep working for an employer. First, money is essential for everyone to survive in this world since money forces are the main key feature to drive a world's economy.\r\n\r\nFor example, people work seven days a week to receive wages in order to pay loans, insurance, and commodities. Moreover, research from the Tokyo institute in 2015 said, the more you had money, the more quality of life will happen. A good example of this was when you have the money you can visit good private healthcare instead of public healthcare.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, there are some drawbacks for people who stay in the workforce. Some people are working hard as much as they can, not only to receive salaries but also overtime payments. For instance, some citizens in Japan only focus on their job seven days a week, which leads to health problems, consequently, the money that they got is going to be paid to the doctor to cure health problems. Furthermore, in communist countries, money is not the main factor to live in good quality of life. For example, the people of North Korea are equal in every section, which means every Korean won they got needs to pay back the government.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it can be seen that money can motivate people in some countries, but I totally agree that money is essential to living in this world. If people can manage how to work properly without harming their health, it will lead to wealth and good quality of life.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The features setting affect cyclist people around area Taking advice older people open landed place affect cyclist", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Have ever awkward situation lightened mood laughter I many I find laughter makes people comfortable allows person Laughter even help attract positive friendly crowd enjoy funny happy people Laughter work way everyone ways helped I homeschoolers group years ago nt know anyone After walking around girl talked She funny able laugh made comfortable I fun time I fin right person Another time laughter might ve helped I invited birthday party friend I nt seen two years Several others I nt seen long The whole visit awkward I wanted blend I acted like everyone else I d laughed comfortable I would ve person When I first came public school I nervous meet new people kind people would After week people got see personality funny happy laughable person inside clicked lot people That s I m friends people I m friends alike personalities matched Laughter brought good place life Laughter make lot people happy comfortable awkward situations It encourage people show personality attract people like I think world would happier place everyone could laugh", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using FACS to read the emotional state of students in a classroom is a bad idea. I think this because this technology has better uses and if a teacher can't tell if a student is bored or confused, they shouldn't be a teacher.\n\nBeginning with, this technology has better uses. Reading a students facial expression seems like such a waste of so much potential. This technology could be out there in courtrooms detecting if someone is practicing perjury or something similar. This could be in interrogation rooms but not our personal devices.\n\nContinuing with, if a teacher can't tell if a student is bored or confused, they shouldn't be a teacher. It is a teachers duty to know if a child is actually learning and if they don't know then they failed at their jobs. Teachers are who make us and if they can't tell that we aren't learning in a way that is beneficial to us, they don't deserve to be a teacher.\n\nIn conclusion, I think this because this technology has better uses and if a teacher can't tell if a student is bored or confused, they shouldn't be a teacher.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "My opinion would going learn anyways take shelfs No I nt think adult material cencered You know little girl boy hand simple take say CAPS eyes ca nt handle going ask questions start wonder learn stuff school anyways s big deal If I child got personal stuff started asking questions I would simply tell CAPS s mommy daddy thing hide diffrent place I know ca nt find I mean child course parents would yelled going room looking threw stuff would yell got older So nt disaplin children stummbled learn hide stuff better I m saying I would stuff would I need student looking future I opinion Now lets say couple maginzines bed child happens see start looking words might come mean wrong parents fault Like I said I would hide stuff better I nt need kind stuff live happy life I children husband I ll ever need So parents decide protest library stuff children suppose see check room hide stuff wont embarassed one No library whatever want place say get ride stayAs student I stand say No adult material banned library s would adults complaining nt need", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There is a new technology that can read your emotion feeling that is called the \"facial action coding system\". Now I have read an article about that technology and I kind of understand what that technology mean. I think that technology is good for the human becasue example when you have someone in your home that has mentel problems and that person can't talk maybe that person has some problems with taliking so you can use that technology to see how that person feel and what that person need from you. here is another example for the schools, pretent you are a teacher at a school and your school is using the facial action coding technology system in computer, let say your students is using that computer to do school works or maybe serching someting that you tell them to do if they toutch the computer you will know how they feel, are they bored?, are they sad?, do they have a problems with that? or do they want to do your work or not. It depends on how they feel you might change your mind sometimes if they are really in a sad satuations. there might be a lot of kids at school that they don't want to come to school sometimes because they have a problems with their bodies or a problems inside but they still have to come to school for some reason if we that . computer at school we can see how they feel we will know are they feel sad or not sometimes we should give them someday to become happier from sadder school should understand thses kids so everyone will have a happy life with that facial action coding system. They should have sell those computer out by right now because as soon as we have that system more people will become understand another people and they won't hurt to the other person as much as becfore because they will understand a person from inside so i believe they won't hurt each oher not as muvh as now. If that new technology come out people will become less faker than before because they can't hide the truth anymore we will find out if that person is lying or not. If that new txchnology the facial action coding come out there will be alot more happier in the world I believe that the world will become more visiable and we will understand eachother no matter what language we are speaking now we will become a really really big family with that technology. And the last thing is I wish that new technology facial action coding will come out soon.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The mood memoir life Narciso Rodriguez mostly bonds parents everyone around got tough times In states neighborhood cultures came together great solidarity friendship And immigrants extended helping hands people kind needed helping hand The author says community many different cultures came together help racism tough times He says family nt related blood close heart", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "A world without an ozone. People walking place to place. No electricity. There is no fossil fuel. These are some potential, yet dramatic, long run effects of the growing car usage since the early 1950's. Limiting this could cause a better environment, more nonrenuable energy, and safer environments.\n\nThis new idea of limited car usage could improve our environment. The ozone layer is being depleted and many believe it is due to the fossil fuels being burned by cars, trains, planes, and many other types of things. If everyone did not use their car for just a few days a month, then imagine how great the atmosphere would turn out. Some people such as Heidrun Walter, a new member of a \"carless\" community says that, he is much happier this way.\n\nAs many of you may know, the nonrenuable energy source, also known as fossil fuels, is slowly but surely running out. Like stated before, if we were to just not use vehicles a few days out of every month, then these recouces may slowly start to build back up. We definetly would not be using as much. There is a town in Germany that does not allow car parking on the street and the usage of a vehicle is very limited. It is said that there is only the occasional distant motor sound. Imagine how much money they spend on gas. That was sarcasm.\n\nFinally, we all know how worried everyone is about getting in a car accident, or being hit by a car, or getting 'T-boned.\" Imagine being able to walk knowing in peace that there would be no accidents. Children would be able to roam the streets. The town wouldn't be as spaced out because things have to be within walking distance. IT would all be apart of something called \"smart planning.\"\n\nIt would be wonderful not having to worry about danger or ozone being depleted. Knowing that a energy souce would always be around would be nice too. Everyone could agree that this is a glorious idea and the turn of a new leaf, the start of a new world. A more safe and stable world. So keep them in the garage and grab that bike you bought three years ago. Start peddling.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The president is our leader. And you don't want some people picking who your next leader is gonna be. I think we should change to the popular vote because in the Electoral college you don\"t get to vote for your president and it's unfair to voters. How do we know who we're voting for if we vote for somebody else to vote for us. Just let the people vote for who they want.\n\nIn the Electoral college you don't vote for the president, you vote for somebody to vote for you. What if he decides to pick the other competitor? You wouldn't know. In the popular vote you get to vote yourself. Bradford Plumer says ''Under the electoral college system, voters vote not for the president, but for a slate of electors, who in turn elect the president.'' [Source 2, Paragraph 10] I wouldn't want somebody voting for me. I'd rather do it by the popular vote and vote myself. It's not even fair for the people.\n\nIt's not fair at all. Even Bradford Plumer agrees with me. He says ''It's official: The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational.'' [Source 2, Paragraph 14] He also says ''...the electoral college is unfair to voters. Because of the winner-take-all system in each state, candidates don't spend time in states they know they have no chance of winning...'' [source 2, Paragraph 13] That's not fair at all. They only go to states they know they're going to win.\n\nSome people may say that they trust the slate of electors. Richard A. Posner says ''...each party selects a slate of electors trusted to vote for the party's nominee (and that trust is rarely betrayed)...'' They 'rarely' betray the president's votes. It really does matter if its just once in a while because when they betray the votes that prsident has to stay for four years. I wouldn't trust them with my vote. They could betray them just like that. And we could be stuck with the wrong prsident that nobody wanted.\n\nI wouldn't trust the electoral college. I would trust in my own vote. I'm not going to let someone else vote for me. They might pick the wrong president. Its just not fair to the people, to give there vote to someone else. This goverment is by the people for the people. By the people. That means we should vote oursleves. Not give our vote to some people that can turn their back on you in a heartbeat.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience waiting thing Like say new shoes becoming two weeks instead paceing around worrying time walk around like honnel For example hunting sit wait deer come If inpatient would go look Sometimes lot people got inpatient something become mean Being patient understanding taking long time something You herdteif dont come come supposed This one tim I appointment mom I wait five oclock And never got mad little board This one time friend mine waiting dad didnt come home", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The new technology called the Facial Action Coding Sysytem that enables computers to identitfy human emotions is a geat idea. I am all for the new technology. I plenty of reasons why.\n\nOne reason the new technology is a good idea is so you can tell wheather a child is bored or no in school. In the text it states,'' A classroom computer can recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,'' Dr Huang predicts. Also in the text is states,'' The same technology can make a computer-animated faces more expressive for video games and video surgey.\n\nSecond reason the technology is a good idea is because the computer can can tell how your feeling one day and how your feeling the next day. In the text it states,'' The computer has six basic emotions- happiness, suprise, anger,disgust, fear, and sadness, and then associated each with characteristic movements of the facial muscles. Also in the text it states,'' For example , your frontails pars lateralis muscle ( above your eyes) raises your eyebrows when your suprised; your orbicularis oris (around your mouth) tightens your lips to show anger. The technology system has diffrent emotions.\n\nFinally a third reason why the technology is a good idea is because it helps produce your face expressions. In the text it states,'' According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emtion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them. For example; coach Constantin stanislavsky, had his actors carefully reproduce smiling and frowning as a way of creating these emotions on stage.\n\nThe new technology is a great idea because One it can tell wheather a child is confused or bored, Two the technology can tell what face expression and how your feeling one day or the next, and finally Three the new technology helps produce your face expressions.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "This passage is about a germany mom from the suburban pioneers where the commuting executives have gone before they given up their cars street parking , driveways also home garages are generally forbidden in this experimental new district on the outskirts for freiburg near the french and swiss borders vaubans streets are completely car free the main thoroughfare where the tram to downtown freiburg runs the few streets on one edge of the community ownership is allowed there are only two places to a larger park with alot of money you can buy a space with 40,000, with a home on the side. Vauban completed in 2006 is an example of a growing trend in rurope the united states and elsewhere to separte suburban life from auto use as a compnent of a movement called planning smart all of our development since world war ii has been centered on the car and that will have to change the guy david said of the transportation for america a fast growing coalition of hundreds of groups coaliton of hundreds of groups in the united states who are promoting new communities that are less dependent on cars thye said about the hybrid and things like that. In the united states the environmental protection agency is promoting car reduced communities and legislators are starting to act if cautiously many experts public transport serving suburbs to play a much larger role in a new six year federal transportation bill to be approved this year mr goldberg said previous bills 80 percent of appropriations have 20 percetnt to other transport. Diesel fuel was blamed since france has tax policy that favors diesel over gasoline make up to 67 percent of vehicles in france compared to a 53.3 percent average of diesel engines in the rest of western furope according to reuters", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 1.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "There many resaons taking book movie anything else shelves wrong If violent sexual see nt shelves reader nt like book movie nt read watch find something else If everyone took book shelf nt like would read everyone book two nt like think offensive Every book ca nt perfect person Everyone veiws books wether like dislike If book nt looking put back stop reading There many people say If nt like nt listen They excaclly right something ca nt stand listen read anyway thats going make mad Then going complain shelfs say bad nt shelves anymore That starts things people saying offensive People know like nt like something nt like nt listen read It comes common sence We need start using That means like country music nt listen hard rock rap nt like nt listen Because listen like stuff shevles people listen s bad puting bad thought teenager s heads If eveyone sticks like nt worry stuff eveyone fine", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I patient present It almost I kept asking presents mom kept saying getting closer closer I kept asking mom said patient get nt worry course I hard time patient Final I could nt wait I I went bed I asked said The come I went school I happy today I got present s I got home mom waiting cake present said That tryed patient", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Driverless Cars Are Coming, the idea of having a car that takes me where i want to go is awesome, imagining that i can go places without having to be in control. The Driverless cars are so exiting because the risk of injury is lower due to the cars ability to accelerate and brake by itself and all the motion sensory. For years TV shows and movies have gave a vivid idea of what we could have with futuristic cars.\n\nThese cars have been around for years but none are actually driverless the car still must have an alert human inside, there are obsticles that can not be robotically driven through. The human has to be awake and still be able to operate a regular functioning car. Motion sensor will stop alot of car accidents; detection and the ability to stop without the pressing of a brake. A lot of people would be able to travel more often, driving is the most dangerous mode of transpotation so putting all the trust into a computer that is programed to keep people safe is a great way to insure less traffic accidents.\n\nTexting and driving is a big problem in todays society and is a major cause of car fatalities if we have driverless cars we will not have to try to stop the texting and driving, because of the attraction to cellular devices we have developed over the years it is hard to put the phones down; we\n\nhave tried to make laws to prevent it and majority of us still do it, with these cars we can embrace our love for our hand held bundels of joy.\n\nLaws that have been made in the past are going to become irrelevent to our futuristic selves, they were made to protect people from the dangers of the roads and other drivers. Laws assumption that the only safe car has a human driver in control at all times, as a result in most state it is illegal to use computer driven cars. If an accident were to occur the fault would lie on the human operater because the car would have let him know ahead of time to take over the car,if the chose not or did not react fast enough or in the right way it is thier fault.Driverless cars are the future and are bound to happen, whether now or later the big jump will benefit to our\n\nhuman population. The saftey and effientcy will increase as we progress in the world and develope bigger and better things. Driverless cars are coming.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In short story Rough Road Ahead Do Not Exceed Speed Limit cyclist travels extreme climate tough terrain nearly end life get destination After getting outdated directions elderly locals protagonist sets journey Yosemite National Park Soon thereafter cyclist notices something amiss The first town locals said hed find deserted And twenty miles journey cyclist needs refill water supply The water pump the flavor battery acid With next town miles away cyclist struggles conserve water make Even things get worse As traveling high deserts California June flat road replaced short rolling hills tell exceed speed limit waterdepleting eventually even sips water cyclist finds spot fill water knowing strike better days better directions", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 6.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear U.S Senate,\n\nI think that we should abolish electoral colleges because over 60 percent of voters wants to do a direct vote. With the electoral college you cant do so because you have to vote for slate electors. This year people already expect a close election in which the popular vote winner can again lose. This electoral college is unfair to voters because of the winner take all system in every state. The candidates on focus on the \"swing\" states. The electoral college is, unfair, outdated, and irrational. So\n\nWE, US, YOU, should abolish this electoral college and let we the people vote how we want to vote. Maybe just maybe the president we want to win so badly because we feel like he can can change up things for the better might actually win. If you take a survey over half of the states will tell you that we need to go back to the way we use to vote.\n\nSincerely,\n\nPROPER_NAME", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Housing shortages in large cities have become a serious issue, leading some to believe that only the government can provide a solution. I disagree with this statement as I believe that even if the government may have a primary role in solving this issue, others can also contribute significantly to tackling the situation.\r\n\r\nIt is true that governmental action is essential to resolving the shortage of houses in major cities. One way in which this is achieved is through legislation and policy-making, whereby the government can implement measures to increase the supply of affordable housing. For instance, they can enact zoning laws to encourage development and finance the construction of affordable homes. Additionally, the government has the legal power to ensure fair practices in the housing market and promote responsible development. For instance, they can levy higher taxes on the ownership of multiple properties, which discourages such practices and thus leaves more affordable houses for lower-income residents.\r\n\r\nNevertheless, I believe that the complexity of the housing crisis necessitates collaboration among multiple stakeholders, particularly private entities and nonprofit organizations. Regarding the former, the private sector has resources that can be mobilized to facilitate the construction of affordable housing projects. Thus, with appropriate incentives such as tax breaks or expedited permit processes, the government can involve private corporations in the construction and management of affordable housing units. Nonprofit organizations and community groups also have a significant role in mitigating the housing situation. The reason is that they possess a deep understanding of local needs and can properly advocate for marginalized populations. This can be done by connecting vulnerable communities with financial backers and philanthropists who are willing to make substantial contributions to the building of a shelter for those at risk of homelessness.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, while the government may play a central role in tackling housing shortages in large urban areas, I disagree with the view that no other parties can contribute. In my opinion, the lack of housing for citizens can only be effectively addressed with collective efforts that involve private companies and community organizations.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Dear Senator,\n\nThe debate regarding the necessity of the Electoral College and it's validity has aroused some tension among the citizens of America, and the government as well. This process is not only used to decide the President of our nation, but to ensure the equality of the voting. By establishing our county as a democracy, we made a promise to maintain a systematic balance between the government and it's people. Without the existence of the Electoral College, where would this balace be? The Electoral College is the basis upon which our country is built, and is vital to uphold the balance and equality between government and people.\n\nThe Electoral College has many benefits towards the nation that many people are unaware of. For example, in order to do well, a candidate must have connections nation-wide. In source 3, line 19, it states \"The Electoral College requires a presidential candidate to have trans-regional appeal.\" This means that no candidate is guaranteed a win if they only appeal to one area or region. This creates an overall balance throughout the nation, and makes sure only a portion of the country doesn't have all the power. Also, this allows the people to have a clear understanding of who they're voting for, and what this means.\n\nEquality is key, and without this equality, where would our nation be? By continuing the use of the Electoral College, we have decided to be the best we can be. It says in Source 1, line 1 \"The Electoral College is a process, not a place. The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compromise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and the election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens.\" This provides valid information to support the necessary balance of people and government.\n\nThe Electoral College also produces a winner inarguably qualified due to the amount of votes received. This is clearly described in Source 3, line 22, \"The Electoral College avoids the problem of elections in which no candidate receives a majority of the votes cast.\" Due to the use of this process, the election of a President can be efficient and simple. The President can now be\n\nSome may argue that this process does not clearly represent the people or their votes. This is because some may vote for a \"slate of electors\" as opposed to the president. However, this belief can be decidedly rejected due to the lack of valid evidence to support the claim. How are voters expected to vote fairly if they are not given the support to do so?\n\nOverall, it can be declared that the Electoral College plays a vital role in maintaining the internal balance of our nation that the citizens inhabiting it are so reliant on. Choosing to reject this process would be deciding to injure our nation, its future, and its people.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Being patient hard I hate waiting For things days come mail packages people anything Patience requires effort dont I really never patient I dont know many people either There mom claims patient shes I think one least favorite phrases be patient I tence get frustrated inpatient When waiting call someone I tempted call hundred times I patent I want wich never I want I dont realize I impatient three seconds done writing page time isnt yet", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "During this article i gathered a bunch of information and during this essay i will be sharing my thoughts on the topic with you. Should this new software be put in classrooms to provide a better learning experience?\n\nThere are many reasons why it should be but also some reasons why it shouldn't be.\n\nShould this new software be put in classrooms? I think yes, there are many reasons that it would be very beneifical to the learning experiecne that we are getting\n\nand with this i think that we can only go up. If a student is stuggling in a subject but is too embarresed to raise his/her hand or say something to the teacher then this software will detect that and send you the results in a matter of secondsso that the students can get the help he needs right away . Another reason why i think that is will going to be very helpful is to make it so that kids will be more focused and paying more attention because it will detect the thought and feelings of that student. The final and most important reason that will will help that it can detect false emotions. During the passage it states \" The software can even indicate the difference between a genuine smille and a forced one.\" This could help in the classroom because if the teacher is saying something and a few students may really understand but the other 90% of the class doesn't understand. Then the teacher could get this people together and help them understand the lesson better.\n\nI as the reader don't see one downside to this because all of the reasons that they would put it in the classrooms are all very helpful ,and even if there was a couple reasons i am very confident the good\n\nwould out weight the bad by a landslide. So yes i am for the software to be put in the classrooms because it will only help us and not hurt us. It will be very helpful to all teachers that want to know how there students really feel ,and how they can help them the best they can.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Living Laughter I nt remember exactly I laughing All I remember vividly mind look grandfathers face He smile always wore times joy It wide warm grin would shine way every often As I laughed uncontrollably many years ago shined happiness love long I never forget single wrinkle grin My called way keeping peace happiness everything No matter bad things within family would always make things right No one could get angry one could stay sad smiled That s kind guy big part family gatherings like one That family s soon passed away When I look back realize important I see perfect everyone It happy memories great big happy grin shining I giggled away card game When kicked early morning weather already proving spectacular Every one family high spirits ready enjoy family My favorite activity every family event play favorite games everyone Our family specific games tradition family gatherings One favorites called Now one many games good playing He rarely ever lost game would finish playing least So everyone assembled house I convinced cousin play We went spare room starting dealing cards About half hour later still playing ones surprise winning It food ready halfway game either cousin said something I thought funniest thing tiny year old ears ever heard I began laugh My family thoroughly entertained laughter could keep smiles laughter tucked away without bursting giggles bad mine It seemed senseless laughing created instant joy family including smile one greatest things little eyes looked childhood It something imaginary yet colorful vivid front I would worship smile like I seeing first solar eclipse I never quite understood young age fascinating smile I understand smile showed true wholesome unbreakable joy His smile nt come often knew something good happening No one knew I certainly could imagine I would spend Everything perfect increasingly happy seemed crime end life time joy Although I I choose would perfect My single memory laughing happy I ca nt think better way spend bit time completely satisfied card game laughter smiles Laughter funny thing It unique every person range kind humor pure happiness Laughter brings hope times doubt never fails make someone smile Someone somewhere started quote says CAPS Laugh Love I believe three words combine together act separately sum perfect life anyone willing true meaningful definition words Laughter brings smiles happiness humor love Love brings us together strive happy love truly My grandfather loved every one family friends made priority keeping happy He lived life best way I believe anyone could ever He died life full love happiness importantly special gift laughter", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "I believe libraries cencorship Some books magazines movies removed grouped age From experiences reading seeing people read books I believe removed influence violence sexual activity drug use Young children exposed things yet First I think books contain violence removed I believe children easiest people influence I also believe violence worst thing influenced Violence books influence killing Fighting killing good No young child able check full shooting fighting The book make kids think thats right thing able check Being influenced violence make commit crimes Reading book worth going jail Next I believe sexual activity material removed libraries Sexual activity exposed children time start learning For example young girl reading teen pregnacy problem The reader think suppsed wrong Books magazines containing sexually explicit words able viewed young children Those thing influence kids things even thinking You atleast sort adult section Finally drug use issued books kids children read watch anything talking drugs positive way Unless saying drugs using children read Drugs make people things right mind nt want Children say drugs books influencing opposite In coclusion I believe need censorship libraries need censorship viloence drug use Also becuse sexual activity many things", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "In the article \"Driverless Cars Are Coming,\" the author presents both positive and negative aspects of driverless cars. Sergey Brin, the Google cofounder, sees i a time in the future where no one will no longer need a car. In the article, the narrator uses concession to argue both negative and positive point of views.\n\nDriverless cars may not be a good idea after all. Driving a driverless car can come with a lot of complications. The price of a driverless car would cause you an arm and a led due to the fact that it has to come with many different technologies inside of it just for it to be driverless. Video cameras, four automotive radar sensors, a GPS receiver, and an inertial motion sensor are some of the technologies that the car would include. Although, being able to finally text and drive without much worry would be a great thing, it still can cause an accident. The driverless car wouldn't be 100% driverless because anything can happen while driving. The manufactering can glitch and while you're on your phone texting and not paying attention to the road, you wouldn't be able to notice in time and get into an accident. Will the accident be your fault or the manufacturers fault? If the car is not 100% driverless and something goes wrong you would still then have to pay attention to the road because you never know when it's going to be your turn to kick in and have to drive.\n\nThe development of driverless cars will be a bad idea. A car that comes with many different technology devices will also come with a price. You may want to text and drive, but protecting your life is far more important than sending a text. Driverless cars that are operated by technology can come with glitches and can glitch while you are driving and if you're not alert then you could cause an accident and cause a life. Overall, you would have to deal with the problem of not knowing if the accident is your fault or the manufacturers fault.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Patience im helping others problems story im going describe patience Patience willing sit help someone problems I lot patience cause I sit time help people problem One day old school girl difficult problems home When came school crying I went go ask wrong She saying way doesnt want home mom dont let go nowhere always stay home watch two brothers So I sat day let feel like one talk life As sit talked seemed feel much better felt like true friend In conclusion I really felt like I patience since day forward I sat let people tell problems", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The adantages of limiting your car useage is sgood becauce it brings down pollution in the air. As a result 70 pecent of Vauban's familes do not own cars, and 57 percent sold a car to move here. \"when i had a car i was always tense. I'm much happier this way,\" said Heidrun Walter,a median trainer and a mother of two. 12 percent of green house gas emissions in Europe... and up to 50 percent in some car-intensive areas in the United Staes. Beijing,China, which is known as one of the most polluted cites in the world. Millions of Colmbians hicked, biked, skated or took buses to work during a car-free day yesterday, leaving the streets of this capital city eerfilydevoid of traffic jams. People particapated in the event when it was raining. Two other Colombian cities, Cali and Valledupar, joined the event. \"Its a good opportunity to take away stress and lower air pollution,\" said businessman Carlos Arturo Plaza as he rode a two-seat bicycle with his wife. The day without cars is part of an improvement campaign that began in the Bogta in the mid-1900s. Its has seen the construction of 118 miles of bicycle paths, the most of any Latin American city, according to Mockus, the city's mayor. We should try to decrease pollution by riding bike, skating, walikng more then using our cars to get us somewhere. Accoridnig to the article '' All of our development since world war II has been centered on the car, and that will have to change'', said David Goldberg, am offical of Transportation for America, a fast growing coalition of hunders of grouos in the United States ... who are prmoting new communities that are less dependent on cars. Goldberg added \" how much you drive is as important as wether you have a hybird.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Teenagers are the most valuable asset of any country because they have more free time for contributing to society. Though the idea of using them in social work is good, millennials of the current teenage generation do not perform well under the mandate of regulatory bodies. In my perception, I do not agree with the statement because, despite having some advantages, there are plenty of disadvantages that could result from forcing them. \r\n\r\nThe energetic, explorative, and creative youth can introduce and implement innovative solutions to social problems. Working with the common man in the streets, they will gain first-hand experience, which would build empathy towards the general public. Statistics show that people who have undergone a 2-year post-study voluntary service in the forces have a higher employability rate and lower crime rate. Therefore, one might think that compulsory unpaid community work will benefit the individual and society.\r\n\r\nThough we have seen benefits in past generations, the current generation of teens is different; they value their freedom and seek a purpose for all their actions. So, rather than a mandated job, which will demotivate and build frustration, it is of utmost importance to attract them to community services. Non-profit organizations, clubs, and societies can do a lot and enable them to contribute to society while spending time on an area of their interest. In addition, introducing a framework that could add merit to those who have worked without getting paid may make them feel good about their contributions, even after decades.\r\n\r\nIn summary, I have highlighted the benefits and drawbacks of mandatory unpaid work for teenagers. In my opinion, if we implement systems to facilitate and encourage the youth toward social services, we will get the best results. In conclusion, I disagree with forcing teenagers to work for free and recommend motivating them to volunteer.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "After reading the article \"Unmasking the Face on Mars\" I had someone come up to me and say, \" Sir I believe that it was aliens who put the face there\". After that comment this person had me thinking, I didn't believe what he said was true. After I considered it I had a long talk with this young man, here were my arguments. If there were aliens and they put the face there, dont you think they would've came to earth already, Mars atmosphere is too strong for an so called alien or human to be on there, and also the face just could be a natural landform made from weather changes. In the next few paragraphs I will explain my points.\n\nFirst, why would there be aliens and why would they pick mars, just to make a face. If there were aliens don't you think they would've came to earth already where every resource is. See the rumor of aliens has been spreading like wildfire for years, because of so called UFO sightings; and no evidence has been found so why would a lie like aliens come to a planet to make just a face. People make up stupid reasons for non reasonable things such as aliens. The definition of alien means a person coming from another country, when did it start to become a ugly looking creature coming from a different galaxy to invade and plant faces on planets.\n\nSecond, Mars atmosphere is too strong for any living thing to be on it, not just that, space period! The air in Mars has to many chemicals and gases for anything to dwell there, also the atmosphere can crush you. How would you have enough time to do anything there, in that enviroment. They should just call Mars the Death Planet.\n\nLast but not least, The face could just be a natural landform from the planet's extreme weather. Mars has very extreme weather, it has volcanoes everywhere, tornados almost everyday, and earthquakes. All three of those things could result in the face. You cant always expect it's aliens or something fictional.\n\nIn conclusion everybody has their opinions about everything. I got the guy to eventually change his mind. Don't always think the impossible things, think facts. These creatures could be real they could not have been real, the world will never know. Thank you.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 3.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "The author passage ends story statements creates curiosity Thi creates curiosity writing spring geese returnSpring beginning many creatures earth therefore Saeng trying start must wait spring The hibiscus reinforces feeling new beginningin year new bad grow like second chance Saeng waits spring knows every thing else creates new life Saeng must wait till get new beginning", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 4.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "Using technology to know expressions of students in a classroom is wrong because the one experiment which Dr. Huang did was on a painting was different and doing it on students is a different thing because it can really affect them in wrong ways. By knowing their emotional expression means playing with their feelings and that could make an huge impact on a students life and in these past mosern years there has never been an technlogical experiment done on a Human or a Student. So I think that it shoud not be done on students because they are the future and playing with them is not a good thing to do and it an also make an huge impact on them because knowing their expressions means knowing them and what they think and but by doing that the students won't even trust themselves on anything and that could it even hurt the students for their life and would be hard for them to come back.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 2.0", "role": "assistant" } ]
[ { "content": "You are an assistant that give overall scores to students essays. You are given a score from 0 to 10. The higher the score, the better the essay. Please give a score from 0 to 10. Just give the score. Do not give any explanation or justification. Do not say anything else. Just give the score.", "role": "system" }, { "content": "For decades, society has put a major emphasis on transportation in order to center themselves around cars and ways to upgrade them. However, it is this frame of that mind that has created issues for modern society. If there were limitations put on the usage of cars, then those rules would help maintain the environment, save car owners money, and create a feeling of bliss and serenity that has disappeared since the mass production of cars. So unless change is brought upon society, then people will be passing up on benefits that would better the whole world.\n\nScientist have long realized that cars are a major cause to the pollution brought into society. From the waste produced while turning precious oil into gasoline, to the engines in millions of cars simultaneously burning gas. It is for this reason that limiting the use of cars would assist in saving and maintaining the environment. According to Robert Duffer, the author of the article \"Paris Bans Driving Due to Somg\", \"Congestion was down 60 percent in the capital of France, after five-days of intesifying smog.\" What is also noteworthy is that this experiment by France officials was only in place for a matter of days. So after having smog that repotedly rivaled Beijing, China, the smog capital of the world, the smog that inhabited France was more than cut in half. If this can work in such a large scale like France, then it isn't unreasonable to believe that this same process can be done in other major regions. Saving the environment has become a priority around the world in recent years, and the idea of limiting the usage of cars could help to achieve that goal.\n\nAside from the fact that the limitation of cars can save the environment, it can also save car owners money. When a person stops at a gas station to fill up their car, they can expect to spend between twenty and fifty dollars. However, if cars were to become less relevant, then this money can be used to fund other important aspects of a persons life. While this might seem far-fetched, according to Doug Short of Advisor Perspectives, \"the number of miles driven in the United States peaked in 2005 and dropped steadily thereafter.\" This analysis helps to justify the fact that cars can eventually become less relevant and thus save people money. Also, money would be saved on not having to repair and maintain a car, or having to buy a car in general. This alone can save a car-owning household thousands of dollars each year.\n\nSaving the environment and money are always an obvious choice when explaining the benefits of limiting car usage, but another benefit would be obtaining bliss and serenity around the globe. Since the mass producion of cars, cities are always filled with the irritating sounds of a lively road. This has left many people to enjoy their walks, not to the sounds of children laughing and people conversing, but to the beeping and screeching of cars. However, in a city in Germany called Vauban, officials have successfully created a peaceful city that relies on walking and public transportation instead of cars. According to Heiden Walter, a media trainer and citizen in Vauban, \"When I had a car i was always tense. I'm much happier this way.\" This quote goes to show that the citizens don't feeled resticted, but released from their reliance on cars. So although it may seem difficult, putting limitations on cars can create a happier populants.\n\nPutting a limitation on the use of cars would not be a punishment like some would see it, but a way to better society. This limitation would help save and maintain the environment, save car owners money, and create bliss and serenity amongst people. As modern society continues to push forward and develop the next wave of advancements, putting limitations on the use of cars should be seen as a serious inquiry to leaders around the world.", "role": "user" }, { "content": "Overall Score: 5.0", "role": "assistant" } ]

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