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"content": "A Small number of the public utilise online websites such as facebook to have conversation with friends and some others use the Internet to know more about current announcements. This essay is going to explain how technology benefits us by providing breaking news around the world in seconds at any location, and also how social media fills the gap in long distance relatives.\r\n\r\nPeople are now in a technological period where distance does not matter for sending digital information such as photos and videos. Real time broadcasting is helping countries to reach almost all nations in the world if they want to provide urgent messages. Apps like whatsapp are now a basic need for any smartphone user, through which connecting to other people from any place is now simple. Also services like youtube helps to conway story on their live channels.\r\n\r\nAlthough advancement has brought changes in daily life, this comes with cost. The main problem of technology is there is no one to control things happening on the internet, since tracking of information such as age, location, education and interest of individuals are now done by new generations phones and cookies on websites customers visit. The spread of fake news is now a major concern as it can harm not only the victim of it but the entire circle of his or her friends. \r\n\r\nBy considering this information, although the Internet can sometimes be harmful, use of this modernization can provide a better standard of living for humans. Easy connectivity can save lot of time and energy and thus advantages of technology are considerably more.",
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"content": "Have you ever been in school and not understood, didn't want to do it, or just was bored with your school work. I think mostly everyone in the world has gone throw that and that can affect you in the future, also on and what you have learned in school. I think this new computer sytem can help and change that. One it helps the teacher find better way to teach there students. Two it helps the children learn better. Finally it can be that start of new inventins to help the children work and learn better in school.\n\nThe fist reason why i think this computer system would help in schools is becuse it can help the techer find better way to teach there students. Teacher can get reports on what students emotions are during a lesson to see if there needs to be a change. This can also help let teachers know mostly which students need more help that others. Also with students who are just bored with the lesson and it makes them not want to work. This can be supported by paragraph six\"A classrom computer could reconize when a student is confused r bored\" Dr. Huang predicts\"Then it could modify the lesson, ike an effectiv human instructor.\"\n\nThe second reason why i think this system would be valuable in school is because it helps the kids learn better. One it can chnge the lesson when it sees a child is behind to help them catch up, confused to help them understand better, or bored to make the lesson more enterting to help hem focuse. This idea chan chage so many students lives for the better. This is why i think it would help students learn better.\n\nFinally I think it can help start new ideas to help better school. If this compuer system works it can inventors start to think of new ideas to make school an easier place to learn. This can help people make inventins for even more things like what kinds of foods students should eat to find when a student has something that been bring harm t other students . This is only a few of the many reasons why this cud help start the ideas for new inventions on how to make school better.\n\nIn conclusion i think this computer system i valuable and can make school a etter place. One because it an help teacher. Two it helps children lern better. Lastly it can lead to new ideas to make school better. How do you feel about this new computer system do you thin its valuabel.",
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"content": "There are many people that love driving for the fun of it or for family bonding or even friendly bonding. There are companies that want to start making driverless cars so that we don't have to drive and I don't think that should happen because obesity and laziness is a huge problem in america already, these cars I believe are unsafe, and I don't think the laws will even allow this. Driverless cars should'nt be made and in these paragraphs I will tell you why.\n\nThe first reason I have is that obesity and laziness is already a huge problem in America. I have read many articles and heard many stories on the news about America being obese. If these cars are made this will only add to the problem and I say that because if people don't have to drive anymore then most will go home and sit on the couch to watch some tv. And when doing that they usually have a bite to eat while doing it. When driving you have to walk out to the car, move your foot when your driving, move your hands to steer, and also get out the car and walk to where your going. These are all ways of getting some type of excercise. The world needs it's excercise.\n\nThe second reason I have is that it appears to be unsafe. In the article it states that, \" If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault--- the driver or the manufaturer?\". This is why I think it is unsafe if the car as some type of disfunction or mishap while on the road with other human controlled cars it could hurt someone really bad or maybe even kill a person. If that happens the world would be very angry at the particular company who is making these cars. So why even put yourself in that prediciment? If the company can't assure that this driverless vehicle won't hurt anyone then they shouldn't be on the road at all.\n\nThe third and last reason I have is that I doubt the laws will even allow this to happen. In the passage it states that, \" Most driving laws focus on keeping drivers, passengers, and pedestrians safe, and lawmakers know that safety is best achieved with alert drivers\". This shows that it would be very difficult to even make these cars without being illegal because it goes against all the laws of driver safety. I think the laws should stay the same and not allow these cars to be on the streets because they can be very dangerous if misatkes were made. You need alert drivers on the road so less crashes happen.\n\nIn Conclusion, I believe that driverless cars shouldnt be on the road because obesity and laziness is already a big problem in America, driverless cars are unsafe, and the laws will not let these cars get on the road anyway because they don't reflect the laws already made. That is why I think driverless cars should not be made or on the road.",
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"content": "Humans are challenging to study about Venus. Venus is an planet which is very close to the Earth. Sometimes, Venus is the closest to the Earth and other time to Mars that is caused by the right around the corner. Before, we have tried to send numerous spacecraft but didn't survive the landing for more than a few hours. Therefore, any single spaceship has never touched on Venus in more than three decades. However, why do we still challenge to the the planet Venus and why is it a challenge?\n\nAs a first reason, Venus has similar points to the earth. There is a possibility that long time ago, oceans had been covering the surface of Venus, and had life like the Earth. On Venus, there are also mountains, valleys, crater as like the earth. What more, Venus is an option of a planetary visit. Air pressure at about thirty miles from Venus would be close to that of sea level on earth which contains that not perfecrt condition, but survivable for humans.\n\nFor a second reason, It is not easy to reach to the Venus. There are not only alike things to each other for Earth and Venus. For example, the temperatures are totally different. Temperatures on the Venus's surface, it is over 800 for average. As the article says, \"The atmospheric pressure is 90 times greater than what we experience on our own planet\"(Par. 3), there is a huge difference between the atmospheric pressure of Earths's and Venus's. At Venus, you will be having high solar power which is plentiful, and radiation is not similar to the Earth.\n\nAs third reason, we haven't even take the samples of the Venus. Researchers haven't collect any samples of rock, gas, or anything else from Venus That could be our challenge. If we could take their samples from there, the research would be easier and helpful. In fact, \"NASA is working on other approaches to studying Venus\"(Par.7). They are using an old technology which is very powerful, flexible, and quick. NASA thinks that those computers will be useful for studying Venus.\n\nAs a conclusion, there are some advantages that human challenge for the other planets. As we are studying other planets, Venus is a good planet for a future of us caused by many reasons. Yet, we are still on our way to know about the Venus, human need to keep looking for the importance of challenge to the Venus.",
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"content": "From my point of view, I agree with encouraging youth to have(do) unpaid work to help local communities, but there is a little proportion of this opinion I don't agree, that is teenagers should be required to do this.\r\n\r\nNowadays, the majority of youngsters grow up in the internet environment, which causes them to have fewer opportunities to take part in realistic social activities than before. If they are willing to help local communities to do some daily work, I think they will improve their social abilities and accumulate practical skills, such as building friendships with other same ages and using office software on computers. These kinds of stuff can be positive effects on their lives.\r\n\r\nAnother point that I want to emphasize is that not all youth should be required for doing this, there are various activities for teenagers to utilize their time, such as advanced learning, physical exercises, or just relaxing with their families during leisure time. What matters is that young people have their own right to choose what kinds of activities they are enjoyed in.\r\n\r\nFrom the view of the other side, what a well-known fact is that the labour costs have become increasingly higher than before while social economics developed. But at the same time, studies show that charities are short of the labour force, for example, the component of old people in the population of our society becomes bigger and bigger, what is the intractable problem is that young people are exhausted from their jobs, which causes they do not have enough energies for taking care of their parents and children. If teenagers could help local charities to take care of the elderly, it will be a powerful positive effect to improve this social problem. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I agree that teenagers who have abilities and wills can devote themselves to unpaid work to help local communities, it's definitely beneficial to both individual teenagers and society , and what I will consistently think is that people can not require all teenagers to do anything that is not written in the law until they are willing to.",
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"content": "For shadowing future reference continus behavoirall reasons last paragraph Well shadowing telling something says going future She telling plants future refrencing plans future keeping behavior says something next year I said continus behavior She said when come back Saeng vowed silently spring shows melt geese return hibiscus buddin I take test So For shadowing future reference continus behaviors good reasons I thing says good three things best describe said said snow going next year",
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"content": "The most serious issue that many countries face is the harmful consequences of human activity on plant and animal species. However, some say it is too late to change the situation, while others believe we may improve it through practical actions. In my opinion, individuals should recognise the gravity of the situation and work tirelessly to find a solution.\r\n\r\nSome people believe that it is too late to protect the environment or animals. Around the world, the economy is growing. That suggests that many countries are focusing on the rate of economic growth while ignoring the destruction of the environment. As a result, they believe that doing nothing is pointless. Because people burned trees to expand cities, the solid has become sand in several Chinese cities, for example. In addition, the population in these cities is rapidly increasing, while vegetation and animals are rapidly declining.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, some people think that we can control and affect the environment in which we live. The reason for this is that as technology advances, we will be able to find more ways to conserve plants and animals. Furthermore, everyone recognizes the need of preserving the environment.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, biodiversity is a highly significant topic that most scientists are studying. It is our responsibility to keep the health balance of the chin of food. So we should explore various methods to safeguard plants and animals because we can live without them. Some industrialised countries, for example, have introduced rules to safeguard the environment and urge individuals to learn how to avoid destroying it. This is the more prudent method of instilling hope in people.\r\n\r\nTo summarise, environmental protection is one of the most important things that everyone should undertake. Although it will not be simple, we must do it one step at a time.",
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"content": "I do support the idea of the facial action coding system in schools, because some students are very shy and they don't ask questions in front of the classroom they don't want the attention. I think it would be a good idea if the facial action coding system was used only for those who choose to be watched by it. Most students probably wouldn't approve of the idea because they might feel strange having something watching them all day while they work, I know I said that I approve of the system but I know I wouldn't want it watching me all day while I worked. It would only be for those who have a problem with asking for help, this way teachers will know if it's time to step in and start helping the student.\n\nWhen it said in paragraph six that students using the computer would get bored or confused then the lessons will change so they are more entertaining or easier to do because of the facial action coding system. Having the facial action coding sytem change lessons on a computer for students is similair to what I said but with a different way of using it. I was trying to say that if a student is taking a test on paper and is getting confused there would be a way for the facial action coding system to alert teachers, and then those teachers could go help the student but how would they do it. Maybe if there was way to set it up like a projector so that it could scan the whole room full of students.\n\nSo I am not sure if this would actually make it into schools it seems like very expensive equipment, plus students would probably feel uncomfortable having it watch them. Although I am sure it would be helpful for students who are too shy to ask questions. Since it could already watch sudents facial expressions while their on the computer then it could possibly be made into something that watches the whole class.",
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"content": "Have you ever been in your car and thought I wish my car could drive by its self? Well you must have a fairy godmother because your wish just came true. They have started to design driverless cars now, they are very efficient. They are a lot easier to drive as well. Driverless cars make everyones life easier and they need to be manufactured.\n\nThese driverless cars can actually limit your risk of having an accident. The cars have a sensor and they sense when an object is too close. The author shows this by \"Those sensors had become moe advanced to detect and respond to the danger of out-of-control skids or rollovers.\" This shows how these cars can better keep not just you but also your family safe. These cars also have auto brakes which can better prevent collisions. The author gives examples of this in \" Can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine.\" This shows how the car can prevent accidents from happening.\n\nOn top of that these driverless cars are a lot easier to handle or control. On way they are easier is by being able to navigate through work zones by itself. the author shows this in this excerpt \" They can steer...\" This shows that they can steer by themselves. Another way is by going around accidents. The author states that the veichle will be able to go around a proplem it faces.\n\nIf that's not enough to convince you its a good idea then they also make drivers more alert when they're on the road. One way they do this is by quickly getting the drivers attention when there is an issue. Another way it make driver more alert is by having driver seats that vibrate to alert the driver. The author shows this by \"GM has developed driver's seat that vibrate when the veichle is in danger of backing into an object.\" This shows that drivers will stay alert even if they are not driving.\n\nThese cars are very useful in every day life. They help you have less accidents so less money you need to pay on your insurance. Also, they are very easy to handle or function. Driverless cars also make you as a driver more alert to prevent injury to you or your car. Driverless cars can make everyones life easir and need to be manufactured.",
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"content": "The importance of international trade which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this movement has sparked controversy over its potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate on both the positive & negative effects of this direction & thus will lead to a logical conclusion.\r\n\r\nThere are myriad reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stem from the fact that international trade has increased exponentially in the last 2 decades due to technological advancement and brand establishments. Big brands like Zara, Gucci and Prada have their presence across the globe. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that Due to globalization, it has become convenient for buyers to buy products of international brands in their own country Needless to say, all these merits stand in good stead.\r\n\r\nHowever, there are some pitfalls that negate this arguments & which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this direction but one of the most alarming one is that there is no diversity in designs. Similar designs can be found in different countries. Besides, countries lack the authenticity of their local products as they are available or listed on platforms like amazon which allows sellers to sell products internationally Hence, it is apparent why many are against this tendency.\r\n\r\nAccording to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach a conclusion that the benefits of global business are instrumental indeed. In my opinion, its potential drawback should not be overlooked either.",
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"content": "Culture history two important aspects world Liraries placs house things enjoyment visit This believe libraries censor materials Learning always key aspect living libraies offer people freely How one take freedom away another Not things world history perfect occured ideal way However subjects slavery controversial topics must known These horrible happenings offend erased past Learning natural humans yet always try fight It right hide truth Some people easily offended But true question who say offensive There people believe discussing christian religion offnsive others believe type homosexuality also Yet still others whose believes directly contradict Libraries must maintain types material becuase purpose hold knowledge people want know How make better decisions future recognize occured past Removing information library offensive essentially depriving people solutions problems All aspects culture history preserved know came mistakes made plan fix new ones History never control man In conclusion libraries censor materials What happened past changed altered fit ideal visions And deprive future generations information could potentially useful We must never forget people came Our knowledge ability learn greatest asset must treasured",
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"content": "The face was not created by an alien. Although Few scientist believed the face was created by an alien there was no alien monument after all.\n\nAt first no scientist was sure what the face could be or what it was created by. It could've been one thing or another. It took them a lot to get a good picture of the face.\n\nAccording to the article \"Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the image first appeared on a JPL web site, reavealing . . . a natural landform.\"\n\nThis shows that the face was a natural landform and wasn't created by aliens.\n\nThe mission controllers perpared to look again but it isn't east to spot the Cydonia. In the passage what the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa landform common around the American West.\n\nIn conclusion the face was not created by an alien. The face is a natural landform. To be exact the face is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa landform. These landforms are common around the American West.",
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"content": "Parents are the first teacher and they always want the best for their children. Although some people argue that parents should be supportive of their children and encourage them to pay more attention on doing physical play instead of studying. I will illustrate the reasons for this statement in the following paragraphs and explain my disagreement.\r\n\r\nFirstly, in today's fast-paced world, not only adults but adolescents find it difficult to spend a few minutes out of their hectic schedule to exercise or to play outside. For example, in this competitive era, juveniles are always studying and after school, they are also attending extra curriculum classes to achieve good grades in school so, they can get enrol in the best university and get a well-paid job in the future. However, they are sacrificing their childhood. \r\n\r\nOn the other hand, guardians should inspire their kids to do physical exercise because obesity is one of the prominent health issues among teenagers. Moreover, they should teach their loved ones to balance their studies and physical activities. Hence, this would help them to develop time-management skills. Nonetheless, some people think that parents should encourage their kids to spend more to work out rather than studying. For instance, if children start to pay more attention towards playing then, maybe they would not perform well in class. Because, education is the major important aspect of being successful, if we have knowledge about any topic we can easily achieve that goal.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, there are some pros and cons of spending more time playing physical games than acquiring knowledge. Therefore, parents should support their child's dream and motivate them to achieve that career in which they are confident and interested. After a thorough analysis of this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of this statement over the positive impacts will be greater because lastly the child's satisfaction matters.",
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"content": "It is undeniable that the presence of spacious public areas, including squares and parks, holds great significance for every urban area. In this essay, I will express my agreement with the claim that all towns and cities should prioritise the provision of ample public spaces for their social, environmental and cultural benefits, leading to a better quality of life for residents and fostering a sense of community.\r\n\r\nFirstly, the establishment of large public spaces promotes social interaction and strengthens community bonds within towns and cities. These areas serve as meeting points for people from diverse backgrounds, allowing them to engage in various activities together. For instance, parks provide a conducive environment for recreational activities, such as picnics, sports, and group exercises, where individuals can interact, socialise, and form lasting connections. Moreover, spares often serve as venues for community events, fostering a sense of togetherness and unity among residents.\r\n\r\nSecondly, the presence of public spaces contributes to the preservation and enhancement of the environment. Parks and squares act as green lungs within urban landscapes, providing areas for vegetation to thrive and improving air quality. Additionally, these spaces mitigate the heat island effect by reducing the ambient temperature and serving as natural cooling systems, thus creating more pleasant microclimates for both residents and visitors.\r\n\r\nFurthermore, large public areas play a crucial role in preserving a city’s cultural heritage and identity. Squares often serve as historical landmarks, showcasing architectural masterpieces and monuments that represent a city’s rich history. Parks can also be designed to reflect the local culture and traditions through the incorporation of indigenous plants, sculptures, or artworks. By preserving and showcasing cultural elements, public spaces contribute to a city’s unique identity and attract tourists, thereby boosting the local economy.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, I firmly agree that making room for public places is of great importance for cities and towns because they foster social interaction, enhance environmental sustainability, and preserve cultural heritage. Therefore, it is essential for urban areas to allocate adequate resources and planning to create and maintain such public spaces, ultimately improving the quality of life for residents and visitors alike.",
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"content": "In story Winter Hibiscus Minfong Ho author ends story When come back spring snow melt geese return hibiscus budding I take test show Saeng ready adapt still needs time Throughout story Saeng struggles overcoming moving home unfamiliar place hundreds miles away However Saeng still isnt ready let go home yet So tries hang old memories everything different When buys familiar plant realizes even different gets angry nit isnt expected However end story realizes different isnt always bad vows try accept new culture nows still take long time ready fully",
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"content": "In the informational text \"Driverless Cars Are Coming\" it talks about the issue of driverless cars. I am against this oncoming beast for many reasons. These cars are called smart but can not even navigate out of a drive way! If a driverless car had one malfunction in the computer or sensors it would create hazardous conditions for both the passanger and drivers around it. Also the in car entertainment would distract the driver so if a complicated condition did come up and the driver was disstracted and did not see the alert it would create and accident. Driverless cars are a hazard for all the people on the road.\n\nThe most mondern driverless cars can't even make it out of the driveway without human assistants. In one part of the passage it states \"They still aler the driver to take over when pulling out of the driveway or with dealing complicated traffic issues,\" and the simple fact of the matter is that a computer will never be able to process things and choose the safest way to proceed without the human mind. Complicated conditions arise every day, weather it is wheather, road work, or an accident. The passage states, \"In fact, none of the cars developed so far are completely driverless, \" and if even now with all of the technology and brilliant people we have now we can't make a car that can navigate road work then I don't think we ever will.\n\nAlso the in car entertainment is distracting and the\n\nlaw of today could not acomidate this new tech. In the time that people would be waiting to take over controll they would need something to do and the passage states that, \"Some manufacturers hope to do that by bringing in-car entertainment,\" and that would be distracting. Even with alerts people can become distracted or disintrested enough to ignore them and cause an accident. Then there is the issue of law. The passage asks the same question I do, \"If the technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault, the driver or the manufacturer?\" Also will all people be forced to spend there money on driverless cars and will driverless passangers have special inssurance? This product is not worth the effort it would take to come up and battle with every new law created due to the driverless car.\n\nDriverless cars are simply an impractical product. They will have to put millions more dollars and hours into this project as the newest driverless cars can not even pull out of a driveway. The car will make more distractions and possibley more hazardous conditions for it's passangers and possibley every one on the road. Finally the goverment will have to go through an excruciating project of making hundreds of new laws simply so people can sit in there cars without putting their hands on the wheel! Driverless cars are hazardous for every one on the road.",
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"content": "Dear, State Senator\n\nThe Electoral College is a great process that was created by the founding fathers in the Constitution.\"The founding fathers established it in the Constitution as a compronise between election of the President by a vote in Congress and election of the President by a popular vote of qualified citizens.\" The electoral college consistw of the electors the meeting of the electors of the voting for president and vice president. The electoral college process consists of 538 electors. When you run for president you have to get majority of the 270 electoral votes its required. Every candidate running for president has there own group of electors.\"Each candidate running for president in your state has his or her own group of electors.\" The electors are chosen by the candidate's political party.\n\nWhen the presidential election is over your governor prepares a certificate of ascertainmentits listing all of the candidates who had ran for president in your state. The certicate also says the winning presidential canddidate in your state.\"After the presidential election,your governor prepares a \"certificate of ascertainment\" listing all of the candidates who ran for president in your state along with the names of their respective electors.\"The states certificates of ascertainments are sent to the congress and the national archives.\n\nThe electoral college should be keeping the electoral college because its a very important process of how we choose the president. If we just put our say in the votes some people might feellike htey amde the wrong choose in the voting. And if we just let congress picl our president because thats not fair becuse this is our conutry too adn we should have a say about what the presdent gonna do or what are some of he/she plans to do for our conunty.\"the electoral college is widely regarded as and anachronism a non-democratic method of selecting a president that ougth to be [overruled]by decaring tht candidate who receives the most popular votes the winner.\"\n\nThere a five reasons to keep the electoral college certainty of outcome,everyone's president,swing states,big states and lastly avoid run-off elections. It is possible for a dispute over the outcome of an electoral college vote.\" The reason is that the winning candidate's share of the popular vote.\" A presidential candidate to have transregional appeal.\"This is a desirable result appeal is unlikelu to be a suffessful president\". The electoral college restores some of the weight in the balance the large states lose by virtue.\n\nIn Conclusion the elecoral college should stay becase it makes everthing fair for the electoral candaiets and so citizen of the united states have a chance to ahve a say in what they want as a president.",
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"content": "Censorship removing material deemed inappropriate offensive used means controlling people s thoughts feelings many centuries The used colonies keep colonists loyal crown The used censorship brand propaganda also guidance Censorship still use today way protect children The tells public watch television listen radio Other organizations tell us books read video games play items buy Such organizations I believe pushing freedomloving nations edge totalitarianism As Katherine Paterson stated If I right remove book shelf work I abhor also exactly right everyone else If one person right control buy listen see come nt right control things Where draw line Eventually books movies magazines music video games would deemed offensive inappropriate Culture would slowly wither die lives would become drab essentially useless lack better term I recently read book titled CAPS two periods boy s life childhood family tribal life mother s death capital work includes passages less angelic strict censorship place passages would caused book go unpublished work gave multitude others insight life face changing landscape certainly made realize I life rich family friends comfort All censorship horrid disease slowly infects consumes every part lives If get censor something find offensive nt I thing Some censorship good fact life But ask draw line Where s boundary safety outright police state Censorship fancy term blatant disregard freedom speech guaranteed citizens As famous colonial revolutionary said CAPS liberty death If censorship continues grow libraries grow emptier emptier I shall take death liberty liberty censorship liberty",
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"content": "Dear senator,\n\nI am in favor of getting rid of the Electoral College. First of all, even if a candidate wins the most popular votes, they could still lose the election, which is not fair. Over 60 percent of voters would prefer a direct election to the kind that we have now. The Electoral college is confusing to many, and voters can even get confused about the electors and vote for the wrong candidate.\n\nAlso, there could always be a tie in the electoral vote. If that were to happen then the election would be thrown to the House of Representatives, where people in the state would decide on the president. The electoral college is unfair to voters. Candidates spend time on \"swing\" states and not on the states that they have no chance of winning. According to the Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong article, the electoral college is \"unfair, outdated, and irrational.\"\n\nIn conclusion, the electoral college should be abolished. It is confusing, unfair, irrational, and the many people want it to change. The voting process should depend on the voice of the people, but with the electoral college, some of these voices have been taken.",
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"content": "Imagine walking around with your skull showing. There would be no protection to cover it. The face is what covers it so nobody would see inside your head. The face is just a natural landform.\n\nThere is support that the face is a natural landform. NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet, taking pictures of the landing sites that could be their sister ship Viking 2, when they came up on a shadowy likeness of a human face. A couple days later NASA showed the picture for everyone to see. That's the support that the face is a natural landform.\n\nThere is evidence from the article that support my claims. \"And so on April 5, 1998 when Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time Michael Malin and his MOC took some pictures ten times sharper than the origninal Viking photos. Thousands of anxious web surfers were waiting when the picture first appeared on JPL website, revealing a natural landform. There were no alien monument at all.\" That is edvidence from the article that support my claims.\n\nOthers say the face was created by aliens. Photographing Cydonia became a priority for NASA when Mars Global Surveyor arrived at the red planet in September 1997 eighteen years after the Viking missions ended. However, a picture of the natural landform appeared on the JPL website. Some still didn't believe the face is a natural landform.\n\nThe face is just a natural landform. The face is what covers it so nobody would see inside your head. There would be no protection to cover it.\n\nImagine walking around with your skull showing.",
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"content": "Many individuals believe that people of the youngest generation should spend their free time working in charities as this would be beneficial to both them as well as the communities. I strongly agree with this notion, this essay will discuss how voluntary work helps a teenager to gain experience and it helps them to see themselves as valuable contributor to society. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, working in a community organization will help young individuals to learn new things apart from education. Also, education does not teach how to deal with real-life problems as it can be learned only through experience. Furthermore, working in the real world quickly teaches them certain skills which in future can be used in their resumes. To illustrate, when an individual works for a community they handle a lot of pressure which teaches them how to handle stress and t manage time.\r\n\r\nperhaps even more importantly, when enlistment volunteer themselves to help the community they realise that their actions have a positive impact on the world around them, which helps them grow as a person. Often, the problems in the public seem overwhelming but if students are given a chance to make at least a small change by helping or serving others it will make them responsible whilst contributing to the nation. For example, a survey has found that serving unpaid organizations has helped the nation to increase the literacy rate as people are aware of the roles and responsibilities at a young age itself. \r\n\r\nTo conclude, I totally agree that students should work for unpaid communities not only for the betterment of the world but also, for their personal development. because I believe only working students can improve their skills while significantly creating a positive impact on humanity.",
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"content": "Many features carlifonian desert influenced cyclist rideGhost towns rolling hills dangerous snakes influenced cyclists experience shortcut yoseniteThe Ghost towns along journey syndized world desrting ride offering help water supply place cool dowdnThe road sign warning rough terrain another barrier bike ride get dehydration reach goal yoseniteThe diamondback rattlesnate caused additional horror cyclist s ride hell He manuever around serpent unstable dehydrationAll features cyclist s riding setting affected ride yosenite",
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"content": "It is a horrendous truth, that rapid growth in manufacturing of goods affects the environment drastically. There are a plethora of reasons, why this product manufacturing causing the issues, such as deforestation for construction, goods-producing factories generate toxic fumes and polluted water into the rivers, but nevertheless,there are some considerable solutions of this misfortune like, plant more trees and limit the working time for factories.\n\nTo begin with, the significant cause of damage is cutting down trees for the construction of new colonies because of the growth in population and personal preferences. Although, people are in need of more houses, so the companies continually clearing land. Additionally, There are a lot of industries in every city, those are creating pollution while manufacturing process, for example, soap and chemical producer farms mix their dirty water into natural rivers and smoke from chimnies pollute the climate.\n\nFurthermore, if there are problems associated with the production of consumer goods than there are several solutions, for instance, planting more trees is one of the best ways to mitigate the obstacle. However, cutting down trees could cause more serious problems, but still,nations should plant more trees to protect the atmosphere. Second, the government should restrict the working hours and limit production, so companies could make the required stuff. Moreover, factories have no limit restrictions on them, that's why they produce more products for their profits. \n\nIn conclusion, even though raise in the manufacture industries cause complications for the natural surroundings, but therefore, some possible steps would make a difference to prevent the damage from industries.",
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"content": "Dear Senator,\n\nI think that you should help change the way we vote. In my opinion, its complete nonsense that this \"Electoral College\" process is used. If there are citizens who want a good president, and the Congress wants different, it's pretty obvious that the citizens are going to be beyond disappointed that someone different was chosen.\n\nFirst off, I suggest that some states stop using the \"winner-takes-all\" system. I think that process is outrageous. Do you really think this process is choosing the right person to run our country? Just because the Congress likes this system, doesn't mean we, the people of the United States, preferably enjoy it.\n\nNext, I believe that we should be able to choose our electors, because some people in the government make mistakes. Sometimes people are wrong about other people. Each state only casts one vote, so we better make the best out of it, right?\n\nAlso, there is a few reasons why this process is good. One reason why is because if there wasn't this secure system, it would probably be total chaos. Another reason is that this system helps choose which president will do the better for the United States.\n\nOverall I think that this a bad process, and I think they should change this.",
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"content": "I think the face is just a natural landform. I think the face is just a natural landform because a shadow can appear and make the rock look like it has a face, scientist have no proof that aliens excist, and the camera can't always take a good shot of the face.\n\nFirst, the face is just a landform because a shadow coulod have appeared and make the rock look like it has a face. In paragraph 2 it say only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh. This indicates that the shadow on the rock can make unusual apperance. Also in paragraph 2 it says Scientist figured it was just another Matian mesa, common enough around Cyndonia. This also indicates that things like this are usually happening.\n\nNext, the face is just a landform because scientist have no proof that aliens excist. If aliens doesn't excist then aliens couldn't have mad the face on mars. In paragraph 6 it says few scientist believed that the face was alien articraft. Indicating that aliens are not proven to be real.\n\nFinally, the face is just a landform because the camera doesn't always take a good shot of the face. In paragraph 8 it say's that the camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see th Face. This indicates that the camera might not have got a good shot of the face. In paragraph 9 it say's \"It's not easy to target Cyndonia,\" says Garvin. In paragraph 8 it also says \"We just don't pass over the face very often.\n\nBased on the evidence provide i think the face is just a natural landform because a shadow can appear and make the rock look like it has a face, scientist have no proof that aliens excist, and the camera doen't always take good shots of the face.",
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"content": "Architects struggled obstacles constructing Empire State Building A ft dirigible moored top building held single cable tether would add stress building s frame The Architects could simply drop mooring mast top building s flat roof The observation area double boarding area dirigible passengers Once building framed roof completed framing mooring mast could take place The mast skeleton steel clad stainless steel glass windows The mooring mast Empire State Building destined never fulfill s purpose reasons apparent ever constructed",
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"content": "No, you cannot \"calulate\" on a person's feelings, In my opinon I think we should'nt have \"FACS\" because you don't need to know what percentage a person's feelings is, you don't know what a person is going thorgh and there are not ready to talk about it yet. Some people may ask \"what's wrong?\" or they they just put on a fake smile and say \"everything is okay/fine\", but When a person is not really okay/fine, A real friend will know whats going on with you, they can see it in your face, mood , they way you act or when you build a wall torwrds everyone. Some people are really good at hiding there feelings, but what if they don't trust anybody with there feelings or it's hard to talk about it. People are eventually are going to show there feelings, they can't keep hiding it forever, It's better to let it out, then just keeping it away from people. People can get through the day by listen to there music depends on they're mood is. People will rather hide it instead of talking to ther people about it, You'll never know what people can say about another person's feelings when they tell them, they might think its a joke or they just might not care.",
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"content": "The features surrounding landscape affect cyclist physically mentally First sun constantly beating cyclist causes body sweat makes ones body use energy The sun rays also add heat cyclist feels Also rough road forces cyclist pedal hard drains even energy For example cyclist Do Not Exceed Posted Speed Limit reached rough roads pedal harder made sweat caused amount energy decrease Finally lack civilization make cyclist feel hopeless cyclist essay felt water could see nearby town This affect cyclists keep pedaling determination cyclist go anywhere The features setting physically exhaust mentally strain cyclist makes harder keep going",
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"content": "Driverless cars are on the rise in the U.S. Lots of different car companies are trying to continue the development of driverless cars. I personally think that they are a great idea, and their are many reasons why i think that. A computer driving the car is safer than a human, if a plane can go on autopilot why can't cars, and last but not least, the human in the car can take over any time.\n\nI think that if all computers were controlling cars on the road it would be much safer than all humans controlling cars, and this is why. People get distracted on the road all the time. Other people in the car, their phones, things happening outside while they're driving and some people even drive drunk! The computer will never get distracted by the surroundings, giving it ultimate focus on the road. All the human has to do is stay alert and make sure they're ready to take over when they need to use their human skills.\n\nPlanes are put on autopilot all the time, and the people that make driving laws think driverless cars aren't safe. If that's the case, everybody should be scared for their lives when they get on a plane. Planes are put into autopilot a lot, and have no problems. Sometimes, autopilot flies the plane smoother than the pilot. The driving laws think that people will not pay attention to the road with a computer controlling the car, but even when they're driving people still dont pay attenion to the road 24/7. So with a computer driving it, you atleast know something is watching the road.\n\nThe last thing i have to say is that when the computer can't handle a situation, the driver can take over at any time. When the person needs to take over, the car quickly alerts the driver so they can handle the situation. GM developed a seat vibrator for when the car is about to back up into something. Other options are flashing windshield lights and even the cars having cameras so they can watch the driver while the driver watches the road. So work zones and accidents wont be a problem,\n\nThe three things i have said: Autopilot, a computer driving is safer, and the fact that a human can take over any time are just a few of the reasons they should allow driverless cars. Soon they will be a big thing in the U.S and around the world. Automakers are continuing the development of them and soon they will be on the road. I know i'll be getting one.",
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"content": "The facial acting coding system that is being used to read emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because it can tell exsacaly how somone is feeling rather they are sad or happy just by their facial expressions . In the text its states that the whole process bgins when the computer contructs a 3-D computer mode of face;all 44 major muscles in the mode move like humans muscles. It also staes that six basic emotions was classidied happiness,suprised, anger,disgust,fear,and sadness. It associate with each characteristic movement of the facial muscles during the process your frontalis pars laterails muscles above your eyes raises your eyebrows when you are suprised ,and the orbicularis oris around your mouth tightens your lips to show that you are angery. The text also states that even though some people often show varying degrees of expression like smiling as broadly using video imargey the new emotion recognition software tracks the facial movements in a real face or in a painted face. They do this by weighting the different units,also the software can identify mixed emotions. It is hard trying to decribe each facial trait that conveys happy or mad so dr huang observed that artists like vindic studies human anatomy to help them piant facial muscles enough to convey specific emotions. His software stores anatiomical information like electronic code the technology can always reconize when a student is bored or confused it also can make computers animated faces more expressive for video games or video surgery. The technology can also indicare the diffrents between a genine smile and a forced smile its just all about those muscular action units. I think this technology to read the emotional exspressions of students in your classroom is really valuable because we dont know or have any technology that can read every emotion that you are feeling and that others around you are feeling",
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"content": "Technology in recent years has gone through many incredible advancements .In the past few years it has been making things that seemed impossible a reality. Things such as self driving automobiles. These wonders of technological beauty have the abilty to control and operate themselves without a driver. This is a truly marvelous feat that shows how far we as a society have come however this driverless cars should be seen as a mere fun idea. Driverless cars should not be used in our society as the will cause far to many proplems just so we can be lazy behind the wheel.\n\nMaking a driverless car is no simple feat it requires numours things to operate effectivly. One item that these cars require are senors and lots of them. Senors are used so that way the car can tell what is going on in\n\ntraffic. However what happens if one of these systems fail at one point on the road. That right a tragic accident will occur that could lead to the loss of lifes for no reason just because a stupid glitch occured.The senors may be tested to make sure they dont malfuntion, but so is everything in this era and yet gliches and mistakes still happen in all of our everyday technology.Our phones which are simple compared to a driverless car still have proplems all the time, and they have been tested and improved upon for far longer.\n\nThese driverless cars arent even truly driverless. Humans are still required to be behind the wheel to handle certain situations such as construction or road blocks.So whats the point of having one of these cars if at any point you can be thrust onto the wheel unprepared for what might be on the road at that given point.This fact truly ruins the convience of owning one of these cars as they fail to do their key function which is to operate on their own. These cars are also still only considered safe at 25mph which drastically reduces their overall usefullness to the consumer if they need to go anywhere at a reasonable pace.\n\nDriverless cars also are not practical in todays time. Imagne how many new types of tech stores would have to be opened to keep the senors on these cars running properley. How many times a year would someone have to get these senors checked? More importantly how much would it cost to fix one of these cars? The awswer is that we dont no as these cars are untried and untested. These Cars also couldnt fit into our soceity where barley anybody will have the money to afford to keep one of these new cars.\n\nSimply put driverless cars are intesting and facinating to watch. They are true marvels of the 21st century and show how far as a civilazation we have come. Thes smart cars truly are driving us into a new age of wonder and increbile ideas however the day when these cars are used in everyday life still lies far over the horizon.Driverless cars should not be implecated into our society because they are to impractical, expensive, and dangerous.",
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"content": "There are many resons that people should do that. #1 is that it it would be some much fun to go explor places that you havent been befor, and go see all the unic culters that many people dont ever get to see in their life. #2 is that you could get closer with some of yor friends and family if they go with you, or invite you to go with them. Reson #3 is that you could meet new people learn other languiges too. Also you cold become part of a family they could take you in and youk cold have another really close friend from some were far far away from were you live.\n\nIn the story Luke said\"It would a chance of a life time.\" An I think it would be a chance of a life time. In my opinone I would do it. I would love to go on a trip tio eventure around the world. I love learning new cultres and to see what what it could help me with in my life. Also that it would be cool to do a report on all the places that you whent to in the proses. If I were him or any one els that got the opertunity I would say yes to doing it.\n\nIn my family its important to learn and get youst to doing thatbecause my famoly dose alot of edventering. We go to the D.R, Hawaii Colorado, and alot more places too. I think that any kid that gets invited should that, because what they learn stiks to them and it stays with them for a long time and if they dont then they missed a big opertoonity to do that.\n\nI went to the DR for the first time when is like 5 years old and I learnd a lot of spanish when i as there. I also made a lot new friend people my age people that older younger than me too. An we bonded rely whell and i didnt know how to speek a word of spanish!!! I had a translator that helped me know what they were saying tio me and for them to tell the kids what i was saying too. i leand a lot of spanish when i wa there and i still know to say a lot of things in spanish too. I still kow my beat friens name in the D.R. We taught eachother how t say the alfabet in English and Spanish.\n\nJust saying I had the best time of my life and I stayed in the same place the hole time and I still lernd a lot in one day.\n\nAnd the hole time I was there I was so happy till it came to the part when I had to say by to all my new good friend that I made there. Its hard to leave but then you get to all the other places and meet other people there too.\n\nPeople that want to explor should do this in order to see what ist like and if thay want to do this for the a long time or not. Just one time at a different place then were you live is awesome because you never want to leave. You could also go see uther animal sthat you have never seen befor in a zoo or that you have never herd of too. I love to see knew thing even if I have heard of it,or not, or seen it, or not it is still really cool to experiance that. An I think kids, aldolts, teens, or eve the elderl would stil love to see that or experiance that time with the family.\n\nAnd that is my reso to do tha or a least tr yit out for the first time. It could only come once in a lfe time dont let it go to wast, because if you did than you made the biggest mustake of your life.",
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"content": "Today, almost every household is subscribed to a newspaper, which enlightens individuals with daily news and affairs. Moreover, the information it provides has the ability to influence one's perspective. I strongly agree that this is a negative situation for readers who have newspapers as the only source of information.\r\n\r\nThe main idea of a newspaper is to present its reader with facts and information about global or local issues. A reader shall be able to comprehend and develop an opinion about a topic with the information provided to him. According to a study, about 60% of generation z readers have newspapers as their primary source of information, which is a severe concern as they are not able to gain a broader perspective of a situation as they source information from only articles. To illustrate, The Guardian, an Australian newspaper, labels treading cryptocurrency as gambling, which later turned out to be completely untrue. In my opinion, one should explore different platforms such as news channels and podcasts to garner information and explore an idea rather than relying completely on newspapers.\r\n\r\nI believe it is a negative situation, as many corporations buy newspapers which can easily influence one's buying decision. For instance, newspaper companies sell big columns for advertisements to popular brands. Moreover, some of these articles are published to shape an opinion towards a specific topic. For instance, Tesla, an electric car company, is viewed as an environmentally friendly car, whereas according to many types of ,research its carbon footprint is not very good as advertised. \r\n\r\nIn conclusion, newspaper plays a vital role in one's daily life and they can easily influence their reader's perspective.",
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"content": "\"It reminds me most of Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\" That is a direct quote from Jim Garvin himself, the chief scientist for NASA's Mars Exploration Program. If a well-educated researcher such as Garvin says that the face-like feature on Mars is simply a natural land formation, why shouldn't we believe him. There is too much evidence disproving the theory that the face is an alien structure or artifact for the idea to even be fathomable.\n\nThe picture clearly shows that this formation could not possibly be that of alien descent. Scientists have proved on three different occasions that it is merely another isolated Martian mesa, which was common in the area Cydonia. NASA scientist Jim Garvin states, \"That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa,\" which only proves further that there is no sign of unknown life present on Mars.\n\nAlthough NASA researchers would have benefited from having found alien life on Mars, they have proved that no such life exists or has existed on the planet Mars. Three different images from three separate missions has only proved this point further, there is no ancient alien marking or signs on Mars whatsoever.",
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"content": "The advantages of limiting car usage is that it reduces green house gases and it can lower pollution percentages. Instead of always using a car to make a short trip why not just ride a bike or even walk that can greatly increase cardiovascualr health and save money. If using a vehicle to go somewhere try not to use diesel it can leave greenhose gases and pollute the envirment more than regular fuel.\n\nWhile using a vehicle saves time it is costly if you are traveling a long distance try car pooling to save fuel,money and the world. And there is always public transportation which is not a favorite but it is better than wasting your own fuel that should be saved in case of an emergency. Riding a car also causes great risk for injury or death which is not a something you would want happen to you or a family member. Drunk driving is one of the leading killers of children and adults.\n\nIn some countries such as France and Columbia they have car free days were you are not allowed to use your vehicle or you will be fined. Which is a very fair law considering if your country has high pollution rates or just too many cars on the road at once. If that became a law in the United States there would be widespread controversey but if the government provides transportation then it would make it better and you would be reducing pollution percentages.\n\nOverall riding a vehicle saves time but it is not cost efficent becuase you are spending money. Every time you fill it up and polluting the world when you drive around to every once in a while use a bike. Or carpool to save time and money whcih is always a plus if your a soccer mom. And you have to travel long distances at a time .",
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"content": "Businesses have always sought to make profits but it is becoming increasingly common to hear people talk about the social obligations that companies have .I completely agree with the idea that businesses should do more for society than simply make money.\nOn the one hand, I accept that businesses must make money in order to survive in a comparative word. It seems logical that the priority of any company should be to cover its running costs, such as employees wages and payments for buildings and utilities. On the top of these costs, companies also need to invest in improvements and innovations if they wish to remain successful. If a company is unable to pay its bills or meet the changing needs of the customers, any concerns about social responsibilities become irrelevant. In other words, a company can only make a positive contribution to the society if it is in a good financial health.\nOn the other hand, companies should not be run with the sole aim of maximizing profits. They have a vital role to play in society. One social obligation that owners and managers have is to treat their employees wel, rather than exploiting them. For example, they could pay a living wage to ensure that the workers have a good quality of life. I also like the idea that businesses could use a proportion of their profits to support local charities , environmental projects and educative initiatives. Finally, instead of trying to minimise their tax payments by using accounting loopholes, I believe that company bosses should be happy to contribute to society through the text system.\nIn conclusion, I believe that company should place as much importance on their social responsibilities as they do on their financial objectives.",
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"content": "In memoir written Narciso Rodriguez Narciso shows certain love passion toward family culture The mood memoir would love passion words emphisization feelings For instance paragraph three states family mean blood relations talked sorts cultures came together one always good friends along way Another way mood expressed foreshadowing showing kept tradition going My parents shared cooking duties unwittingly passed rich culinary skills love cooking still today Passionate Cuban music I adore day expresses foreshadowing two ways adding parentheses stating A third example mood memoir way talked love family important thankful I always told much courageous thing I could ever done Narciso also states ca nt thank parents enough taught none would person today I never forget parents turned simple house home Just adding love culture one s house turn caring home",
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"content": "The author concludes story paragraph Saeng failed test spring take test",
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"content": "I think that it would be a good idea of having FACS. You can tell other people's emotions or how they feel. If it shows that they are in a bad mood, you can help cheer them us. If they are angry, you can try to make their day better. If they are happy then you can ask why they are happy.\n\nIn paragraph 3, it states that \"it classified six basic emotions- happiness, surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness.\" So lets just say that your friend is always has a straight face, you can use this to figure out if they are happy, sad, are fearful, or maybe even disgust. If you don't have this technology, then they are just blank faces to you that you don't know what they are feeling. If you have this technology, then you can actually see what they are feeling and find something to help with, just being there for support, or to congragulate them with something in their life that they have accomplished.\n\nIn paragraph one, they say in first sentence and the third sentance. \"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\n\nIt's the subject of Leonardo da Vinci's Renaissance painting, Mona Lisa.\" If it can scan something that is more than 400 years old, then it can scan everyone's face. It doesn't say it is 100 percent happy no, there is so much to her and how she is feeling in the time period.\n\nIn paragraph four, Dr. Huang says, \"The facial expressions for each motion are universal. Which means that multiple people have the other reactions and facial reactions to diffrent things. Also in the same paragraph, it says that \"Each expression is compared against a neutral face.\" So if you think that they are just basing it on other peoples reactions or past times people have done it, it is just your face compared to a neutral face.\n\nIn conclusion, I think that as a whole we need this to help figuring out if people are fearful, if they are scared, or if they are happy. I think that there should be a Facial Action Coding System (FACS) at the capitals of each state. If it shows good improvement or good comments, then is should be moved worldwide. People are going to enjoy the FACS. Not to have fun with you and your friends, but it could help someone in need.",
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"content": "Twenty five years ago the world was amazed by the Face on Mars. NASA'S Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet, snapping photos of possible landing sites for its sister ship Viking 2, when the Spacecraft had spotted a shawdowly likeness of a human face. It had an enormous head nearly two miles from end to end seemed to be staring back at the cameras from a region of the Red Planet called Cydonia.\n\nA few days later NASA started studying the face and unveiled the image for all to see. NASA caption the photo \"Huge rock formation.. which resembles a human head.. formed by shawdows giving the illusion of eyes, a nose, and mouth. This engaged the public and attracted attention to Mars. The \" Face on Mars\" had became very popular.\n\nFew scientist believed the Face was an alien artifact. Photographing Cydonia became a priority for NASA when Mar Global Surveyor (MGS) arrived at the Red Planet. When Mars Global Surveyor flew over Cydonia for the first time, Michael Malin and his Mars Orbiter Camera team snapped a picture ten times sharper than the original photo's taken.\n\nThousands if web surfers were waiting for the image. The image first appeared on a JPL web site. The image reveaked a natural landform , evidence showing that there was not a alien monument after all. Because it was winter when NASA went to go capture the image it was some what cloudy and not many people were satisfied with the image.\n\nNASA has provided evidence. Nasa also proved that the \"Face on Mars\" was not created by aliens , in fact it was created by human form.",
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"content": "The value of using the Facial Action Coding System to read the students emotional expressions could be valuable in alot of ways. For example in parapgragh three , the process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major muscles in the model must move like human muscles (movement of one or more muscles is called an \"action unit\"). Dr. Paul Eckman, creator of FACS ( Facial Action Coding Systems) has classified six basic emotions- such as happiness, surprise, anger disgust, fear and sadness; each associates each with a characteristic movements of the facial muscles. Facial expressions are universal and transitional as such the smallest of the facial movement or the mood you choose can depic the varying degrees of expression. Using video imagery, the new emotion- recongnition software travks these facial movements- in a real face or even in a picture (such as Mona Lisa).\n\nThe software would help people understand facial expressions better to be more perpared on an emotional scale on what to do if that particular person is upset. In fact, we humans perform the same impressive \"calculation\" every day. Each expression is compared to a nuetral face ( showing no emotion). For instance, you could probably tell if your friend is having a bad day or good day just by the facial expression she/or he portrays. Dr. Huang; his new computer software stores similar anatomical information as a electronic code.\n\nBased on the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving your facial muscles not only expresses emotions , but also may even produce them. Study shows if you smile you release endorphines that'll actually make you happy! A renowned drama coach, Constanin Stanislavsky, had his actors carefully produce smiling and frowning as a way of creating these on stage to make it more believeable; That your portraying those specific emotions. Whoever thought that making faces could reveal so much about the science of emotions.",
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"content": "The features setting affect cyclist For example hot outside would need water normal Also raining would drive careful That setting would affect cyclist",
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"content": "Customers are opposed to climbing numbers of advertisements from competing businesses. The essay will discuss how serious this fact may affect shoppers and ways to avert its risks.\n\nTo begin with, this trend has several influences on shoppers. One of the main effects of this problem is ads may create unnecessary buying needs or lead to over-shopping. Therefore, this can make consumers spend too much money or buy unnecessary products, causing financial waste. For instance, young people today are exposed to a lot of social networks so they are exposed to a lot of ads that lead to over-shopping and waste. Obviously, too much advertising will make consumers unable to distinguish between quality and poor-quality products. This causes customers' wrong decisions. For example, Shampoo is being advertised abundantly with the function of preventing falling hair , I bought it, but it does not perform as its promotion.\n\nHowever, there are a variety of measures which can be taken to protect them. Firstly, Avoid advertising messages that are inaccurate or lacking information that can lead to misunderstandings and confusion in the minds of shoppers. Buyers only buy If the advertisement is well-designed and has a clear message. In fact, nowadays, there are many fake brands, so before buying, they should look carefully at that brand as buyer feedback. Avoid buying poor-quality products. Secondly, authorities should legislate and regulate the number of times ads are displayed on the Internet. For instance, Ads can be presented once or twice, but if there are more than two times, the company will be fined.\n\nIn conclusion, although advertisements have some specific impacts on customer purchases, there are a number of viable solutions to counteract this problem.",
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"content": "I believe that we, the people, should elect our presidens by popular vote. Altough all 48 presidents have been elected by Electoral College, I think its time for some change.\n\nIn the second source, \"The Indefensible Electoral College: Why even the best-laid defenses of the system are wrong\" by Bradford Plumber, he states that voters vote not for the president but for a slate of eletors. These electors are just simply pledged to whom the voters vote for. The people have no control who their electors really vote for.\n\nNow others like in our third source, \"In Defense of the Electoral College: Five reasons to keep our despised method of choosing the President\" written by Richard A. Posner, believe that when we vote for that slate of electors, we can \"trust\" that they will vote for the president the people voted for. In my opinon, I urge you to ask yourself. Can you really trust these electors? How do we know they will vote for the president the people really want? How do we know they won't ignore our votes? How can we trust these electors? Just like what Bradford Plumber said, \"Consider that state legislatures are technically resposible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people.\"\n\nTo some, the electoral college is unfair because of the winner-take-all system in each state. Candidates usually only go to \"swing\" states. \"Swing\" sates are states with tight races. This, if fact, is not fair at all because some states don't even get to see the candidates. In our second source, it clearly states that in he 2000 campaigne, 17 states didn't see the candidates at all.\n\nIn the third source, it states, \"....Voters in toss-up states are more likely to pay close attention to the campaigne... They are likely to be the most thoughtful voters...\". I completely disagee with this because what mathematial, tangible, or hard core evidense is there to physically prove that the people in toss-up sates are more thoughful that the people who aren't. I think that candidates should go to states that have more people that are the opposite party.\n\nSo with this said, I think Electoral College should be no more and we should elect our presidents by popular vote. Thank you and have a wonderful day.",
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"content": "People might want to believe that the Face is created by aliens but it is not, it is a natural landform. The Face is just a natural landform because it is just the shadows that make it look like a face, the landform is also common around the American West, and it is a mesa.\n\nThe shadows are the ones that make the Face on Mars look like a face. In the third paragraph in the article it stated \"huge rock formation... which resembles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" The reason there is alot of commotion about this is that \"The authors reasoned it would be a good way to engage the public and attract attention to Mars.\" He was right because it did.\n\nThe Face is also just a landform because there are landforms located in the American West that are also mesa's like the Face. In the last paragraph it said \"What the picture actually shows is the Martian equivalent of a butte or mesa- landforms common around the American West.\" Therefore, people are just altering the true facts to make a story of it. The reason many did not believe it was a Matian mesa is because \"Scientist figured it was just another Martian mesa, common enough around Cydonia, only this one had unusual shadows that made it look like an Egyptian Pharaoh.\"\n\nThe Face is just a mesa because it said in the text various times that it was just a mesa. In the very beginning it said \"New high- resolution images and 3D altimetry from NASA's Mars Global Survey spacecraft reveal the Face on Mars for what it really is: A mesa.\" It also said in the last paragraph \" That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face of Mars.\" That shows that the Face is just a natural landform like any other.\n\nOthers say that aliens live there and created the Face. In the eight paragraph it said \"The Face on Mars is located at 41 degrees north martian latitude where it was winter in April '98- a cloudy time of the year on the Red Planet. The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the Face. Perhaps, said skeptics, alien markings were hidden by haze.\" Although that might be true in the eleventh paragraph it said \"So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!\"\n\nFinally, there might be different speculations on wether or not the Face is a natural lanform or not. At this point according to scientist we know that it is a natural formation because it looks like a face because of the shadows, its common like in the American West, and it is a mesa.",
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"content": "In recent years, leisure time spent by the younger generation has become debatable. Some individuals share the opinion that time spent on activities such as watching television, playing video or computer games can be profitable while others are of the opinion that these activities causes more harm than good. I am of the latter opinion. This essay will discuss both views as well as state the effects of these activities on the younger generation.\n\nOn the one hand, individuals are of the view that time spent on activities like television, video and computer games are beneficial mainly because these activities keep the youths occupied during their leisure time. The belief is that instead of younger peers joining bad gangs and associating with the wrong crowd they would rather benefit from such activities. Take for instance, a high school student after the day’s activities join friends in smoking and drinking instead of going home and enjoying a TV show. Thus, it’s believed that such activities keeps the younger generation occupied. In addition, these activities relaxes the mind and body. According to a research carried out by the famous Dr Odumosu Bunmi in the early ‘80s which suggested that children are likely to excel in school activities, if they engage in activities at home that relaxes the mind and body such as watching TV shows or playing games.\n\nHowever, despite these undeniable benefits I am of the opinion that the cons outweighs the pros. The main reason for this is addiction. Young individuals these days get addicted to such great activities. A research was published by the National Health Institution in 2017. This showed that about 80% of youths are addicted to both video games as well as computer games and about 20% to television. Furthermore, these activities makes the youth very lazy. They would rather than help their society or communities and parents, watch or play video games. These cons have overshadowed the benefits of these activities.\n\nOverall, while there are great benefits such as relaxing the mind and body and occupying time, there are also great consequences. I am of the opinion that the cons outweighs the pros and that youths should instead of watching tv shows and playing video games can engage in other productive activities such as feeding the homeless, cleaning the communities and public awareness of illegal drugs.",
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"content": "As time goes on the use of cars have greatly decreased. The car use in some places are actually limited. There's communities where stores and parks are built close enough to walk or bike to. Other places there's actually days where the use of cars are restricted and only buses or transits become the only transportation allowed on the road.\n\n\"Street parking, driveways and home garages are generally forbidden in this experiment new district...\" (Rosenthal,paragraph 2). This community even forbids anything involving cars, making streets less crowded and never having to look both ways to cross the street. This is only an experiment to take this all away, to some it's punishment. As a result, 70 percent of families in this community do not own cars.\n\nThis idea of no cars has spread all over the world. \"Paris enfoced a partial driving ban to clear the air of the global city\".(Duffer, paragraph 10). This city in France is banning the use of cars to reduce the amount of smog in the air. \"Diesel fuel was blamed..\"(Duffer, paragraph 16). Because this city prefers diesel over gasoline, there's more pollution in the air. Therefore needing to reduce the amount of car usage.\n\n\"In a program that's set to spread to other countries, millions of Columbians hiked, biked, skated, took the buses to work during a car-free day...\" (Selsky, paragraph 20). There's even a day for this idea just to reduce the use of cars. \"These people are generating a revolutionary change..\"(Enrique Riera, Selsky, paragraph 26). Any participant of these places are supporting this idea as a positive revolution.\n\n\"recent studies suggest that Americans are buying fewer cars, driving less and getting fewer licenses as each year goes by\".(Rosenthal, pargagraph 29). Fewer cars are being purchased so not many people are driving. Because not a large amount of people make their legal license a priority they choose to walk or take the bus. \"it will have beneficial implications for carbon emissions and the environment...\"(Rosenthal, paragraph 34). Limiting the use of cars is positive physically, financially, culturally, and better for the enviornment.\n\nAs time goes on the use of cars have greatly decreased. Limiting the car use is becoming a revolution taking place all over the world. Think of using a bike or a new way of transporting to work one day. This is a whole new idea of life so get ready!",
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"content": "The technology to read the emotional expressions of students in a classroom is valuable because it can do a lot more than just read emotions to us now. It can help us understand each other, help us answer questions we didn't have the power to answer, and help us become closer as a species. The human emotion is very hard to understand, but once you do your life can become a whole lot easier.\n\nFirst I think that the technology is valuable because expressions are one of the keys of understand ourselves and each other. In the artical is states, \"The facial expressions for each emotion are universal,\" observes Dr. Huang, \"even though individuals often show varying degrees of expression.\" I think expressions are a way to become a sentiant being to.\n\nI also think its valubal because their are still lots of questons to be answered but can t because the lack of technology but most of it can be answered by just using this. In the text it states, \"She's 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry.\" all of the words said in the text were all just based af a 2D photo think what we can do with a photo that's already 3 dimensinal.\n\nFinaly I think that as a spices that amotions sre one of the thing that can hold us back or bring us forward in the future but that just a hypothosis of what i think. In the text it states, \"Accoding to the facial Feedback Theory of Emotion, moving you facial muscles not only expresses emotions, but also may even help produce them.\" Emotions are one of the keys to our future and it's to early to tell but hopefully it will be special.\n\nThe human emotion is very hard to understand, but with every thing that is said in the artical you can only hope the computer really becomes something special for all of us to observe.",
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"content": "The author created calm mood Everything talks tone When talks kitchen home also created happy mood He calm talking memories old home He stayed calm talked caring parents Overall whole writing calm mood",
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"content": "I think the technology to read emotional expresions of students is valuable because it would help the student more if the technology knew why they were having problem and where they were having problems at. The Facial Action Coding System could also be a bad thing because some people are more hands on learners and can't\n\nwork with computers and some students might show expressions that don't have anything to do with the tasks at hand .\n\nTelling someone to make a certain face cannot change how they're feeling on the inside.People could be feeling a different way then they're really showing on the inside.The computer wouldnt be able to tell how your really feeling it can just tel how your face is looking.\n\nIn conclusion I think this facial coding system could help some people and othere need hands on. I dont think it is neccassary but can be valuable.They should get this technology to help the special needs kids . I think it would be very valuable to them because what if they can;t tell you how they're feeling then the computer can.",
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"content": "The electoral college should not be used and the popular vote for the president should be in active\n\nTo begin with,the 'electoral college' is not fair. The people should vote for who they want and most popular vote wins.'under the electoral college system voters vote not for the president ,but for the slate of electorals, who turn elect for president' (paragraph 10 'whats wrong with the electoral college,)Citizens of america should vote for the their new leader. The slate should not then decide the election of the president.\n\nTo countine with, many problems can be caused with the electoral college.'the 2000 fiasco was the biggest election crisisin a century;the system allows for much worst .Considering that the state legistarter are technically responsible for picking electors, and that those electors could always defy the will of the people.' (paragraph 11 'whats wrong with the eclectoral college.')the system had caused a big diaster in voting history do to the electoral vote. with the electoral vote people have then no choice but to blame the state considering that their the ones who are responsible for the voting.\n\nTo continue with another reason why it should not be used is because depending how big the state is (population) thats how many elecctoral votes they get. 'obama ,who won the vote,got 29 electoral votes' (paragraph 21 'big states') 'if you lived in texas, for instance, and you wanted to vote for for john kerry . on the off-chance that those electors won the statewide election,they would go to congress and kerry would get 34 electoral vote' (paragraph 10 'whats wrong with electoral college') people should have all equal votes its not fair for rhode island to get less electoral votes then florida because its size. if the state of rhode island people vote for either party there vote should count as much as florida.\n\nin conclusion the electoral college should not be in use and the popular vote for the president should be in active. because every citizin should have the right to vote for who they want to be their president.",
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"content": "It's argued that with today's advanced automation, robots will replace humans in all jobs in the coming days. I strongly disagree that there are many jobs that cannot be substituted by automation despite the advancement in technology. This essay will elaborate on few real-time cases.\r\n\r\n Firstly, not all task can be replaced. For instance, Labour delivery in hospitals must and should be done by doctors, because of complications at times, that need to implement on the spot which only comes with experience. However, robots with programme implanted might not be the better option. Secondly, not only this, we have few more cases where mechanisation fail if replaced. Let's take the pilot, Also like the above case, we need to act on real-time circumstances such as weather, turbulence etc., where human pilots have no replacement. Therefore, I strongly oppose the opinion that all jobs will be replaced by artificial intelligence.\r\n\r\n There are few jobs that can be replaced by robots in place of humans. For example, in an Insecurity stream such as bomb dismantles we can save lives if we can use automated gadgets such as drones and robots. In future we can see way more robots in the military, replacing humans. Other than few tasks, artificial intelligence cannot replace the individual.\r\n\r\n In conclusion, Eventhough, some argue that jobs will be replaced by automation, I strongly believe that a lot of jobs may not be substituted by any technology in the coming future. However, few works can be and should be replaced for human safety as discussed.",
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"content": "Mona Lisa is 83 percent happy, 9 perccent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and 2 percent angry. The softweare is the latest innovation from Prof. Thomas Huang, of the beckman institute working in collaboration with Prof. Nicu Sebe. Dr. Huang and his colleage are experts at developing better ways for humans to communicate.\n\nThe process begins when the computer constructs a 3-D computer model of the face; all 44 major musceles in the model, Eckman has classified six basic emotions happiness,surprise, anger, disgust, fear, and sadness with each characteristic movements of the facial muscles, your front lateralis muscle (above your eyes) raises your eye brows and when you're surprised; your obicurlaris oris (around your mouth) would tighten your lips to show anger.\n\nThe Mana Lisa demonstration of da Vinci's panting had alot of emotional feelings to it was, really interesting to know how they performed every little piece of the work together to make it and to know the understanding of how Dr. Huang and his coleague done some observations on how da Vinci studied human atonomy to help them paint facial muscles percisely enough to understand specific emotions helped make a great understanding.",
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"content": "In a argument between against or for driverless cars, I am for driverless cars. I think it's a good idea to have driverless cars. It will safer on the streets. There\n\nshould be a whole new set of laws regarding to these cars. I also think they shouldn't be released until these cars are truly driverless.\n\nAs I said earlier driverless cars shouldn't come out until they are completely do not need a driver. When they are driverless it would resolve conflict between if there were an accident who the blame would be on. The blame would be on the company that made the car because the driver isn't doing anything. I think there should still be a mode in the car where the driver can takeover if the driver sees a situation where he should control the car. I think the car should be smart enough to know how to get through traffic jam, that shouldn't be a problem. The new laws should be that all cars will have to go a certain speed. I don't see how you could get in a car accident if they are all going the same speed. Even though most people would have a driverless car, some people will still have old cars that need a driver. So if there is an accident between a driverless car and a old car that requires a driver, I think the blame should be in the driver in the old car because the driverless car is following all the laws and is going a certain speed so if there was an accident it would be on the driver that isn't following the laws. But then again the driverless car could have technical difficulties and could crash. I think the car should know when it is having technical issues and pull over to the side so the driver can take control. Even though the car is driverless I think the laws for getting your license should not change. Also some people like to drive so the should be and option that is opposite to cruise control we the driver can drive, but when you are driving you have to be ready to take responsibility for anything that happens while you are driving.\n\nIn conclusion, driverless cars would be a great idea. It would lead to less accidents as long as the car it programmed the right way. Texting and driving would be as big of an issue as it has been lately with a driverless car. With a driverless car there are less choices being made and less opinions. Our generation would be great to take on the challenge because we take on new things everyday with things being invented everyday. With all that being said I am for driverless cars. It is a great idea and would save lives also.",
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"content": "censorship No dont think take certin book shelves alot thing found offensive gangs politics race even school small children go I understand wanting shelter children cant keep every thing Inner cities gangs right awfal words trains building anything possible cant take shelf Politics worst presidentual elections always bring color skin everything find person All kids watch tv Race wars get bad people around world fighting color skin You cant either going battle never one keep getting worse I cant speak schools mine lot little problems little kids cussing older kids fighting people try good school get picked You cant hide kids ever sooner later find problems If want help kids keep streets reading book alot better seeing real world You prepare problems ahead dont might get hurt alot worse little words book magazines movies",
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"content": "Drivless cars seem to be a big visionary of manufacturing companies in the near future. Many people love the idea of these driveless cars, but what makes them believe that these cars will always work the way they are made to work? Here are some reasons why I believe that driveless cars won't be as successful as these engineers believe.\n\nFirst reason is the technology, yes we have all these GPS, radars, and sensors but technology has a limit. With technology anything can go wrong, it can stop working at any time, the conductor of its energy or power might stop conducting and with that it means the driveless care won't drive anymore meaning it could cause a huge accident and a lot of people could get hurt. Even though Google has modified cars with lazers and sensors, the car still doesn't have the advanced technology that it needs to drive without needing its passenger to take control when it enters panic mode.\n\nSecond reason is the money that comes along with this project not only will it cost a lot to produce a mass number of these cars worldwide but it would cost a lot while in the market. Not everyone will be able to pay the price to own one of these smart cars. Most people owning these smart cars will be filthy rich people, superstars, and government officials. Then the price of making these cars will be high, producing enough equipment to make sure that the car will work the way its suppose to is going to be a pain. Mimicing the skill of a human at the wheel isn't cheap, especially if they are wanting safer roads.\n\nPeople think that this will be safer and that the roads won't be as dangerous but its all just a lie, Computers are just machines they can only do so much. Humans are humans, look how far we've come since the first cave men. We are much more capable to do things then machines are. Yes machines have helped us do incridable things but in this case they wouldn't. We have free will, a heart, and a mind. A machine doesn't.\n\nManufacturers are having this vision of driveless cars, but why take away of the experience of learning to drive or the skills of the racers in races or just simply take the fun away of having your hands on the wheel and controlling the cars every move? I agree that we need better cars but Driveless shouldn't be the way to go.",
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"content": "In this contemporary era, most industries or organizationswhich are large pay much higher salaries to directors than that to normalemployees due to this some people think it is necessary to pay, while othersoppose it and consider it unfair. I will discuss both views and give my opinionin the conclusion.On the one hand, directors are the one who manage theorganizations because of this they have a burden on their shoulders more thancommon employees. To explain, in any company, directors make decisions that areconnected to the organization’s future and manage the whole organization, thatis why they get high salaries that normal people. Moreover, directories havemore knowledge and skills about work. Thus, directors are paid higher salariesbecause of their knowledge and their work.On the other hand, it is believed that employees are the mainpillar of the organizations. To illustrate, most of the normal work is done by employees.In addition, they spent the most time in the organization doing theirwork, while other high-position individuals do not spend that much time. That iswhy it is considered that employees should be paid equal salaries as directors asthey spend more time at an organization. Additionally, the organization cannotrun without employees. Therefore, ordinary employees should get more salariesas they do more work and are considered as a pillar of organizations.In conclusion, in my opinion, directors should havemore salaries than normal employees as they have more knowledge and skills, alsothey make some hard decisions about the organization’s future, because of thisthey have more burden than common employees.",
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"content": "The reason you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program is because its an opportuntiy of a life time,as said by Luke. There isn't just one reason why you should join the Seagoing Cowboys program there are thousands of reasons. The main things are the locations,the people, and the experiences.\n\nTo start my reasoning, you could help thousands of people. You could also have fun on your adventures sailing to all these different contries and states. As you grow you will learn more about what you are doing. You could get really cool things when your traveling too. You could even help take care of animals.\n\nSecondly, you could do really cool things on board. You could get to watch animals, play baseball,volleyball,table-tennis touraments, fencing,boxing,reading,whitting,and games that could pass the time. All of those things Luke did on board. You can do all of those things in empty holds.\n\nIn addition, for Luke it was much more than an adventure. You have someone to look off of and to see a ture experienceof being a Seagoing Cowboy. Now you should see why Luke said it was an opportunity of a lifetime.\n\nIn concusion,I see why its so great to be a Seagoing Cowboys. The places you travel to,the people who you travel with, and the adventures. Just think of all the fun you could have on that very special boat just wondering what lies on the other side of that island and what you could learn the points are endles. So join the Seagoing Cowboys and then you could get in for sure. How you will react when you take that first step onto the next part of your life\n\nSome of the parts to make this possible are ,''Luke could't say no. He knew it was an opportiunity of a lifetime. Paragraph 7 tells you that he lives with his aunt Katie and paragraph 8 is where i got how many things he did while he was on board and why they thought theose activities were fun. The end about how it was more than just an adventure , I got that from paragaph 9.",
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"content": "I will say yes I think is a good idea to use the new technology \"Facial Action Coding System. I think this new technology is great to use so we can find how the sudents are feeling while they are in the school with teachers or friends so thats why I think this new technology is going to be great if we used to see what are the feelings of other people while they are smiling or they using a fake smile in front of other people.\n\nLike in this passage they are trying to make Mona Lisa smile, but I see she was not feeling really happy. What I read in this passage about how they were trying to make Mona Lisa to smile it was a good way to use the new technology. In paragraph 9 they said, \"By the way, did making a happy fave in this experiment also make you feel slightly happy.\" another quote they use it was \"According to the Facial Feedback Theory of Emotion. moving your facial muscles not only expresses amotions, but also may even help produce them in a good way.\"\n\nLastly, for these reason the new technology can do a lot for all the people. Because we can see what are they feelings and maybe we can try to help them. Another good reason this quotes can help us is because some of them explain what the \"Facial Action Coding\" is a good way to figure out and it is eassy to used with out hurting people or making them to feel wrong if they are making a fake smile while they are doing the process.\n\nIn conclusion what the author said it was Mona Lisa is only 83 percent happy, 9 percent disgusted, 6 percent fearful, and only 2 percent angry.",
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"content": "The obstacles builders Empire State Building faced nature safety Safety played large role building Empire State Building Two main safety conserns getting passengers safely dirigibles substances filled Most dirigibles outside United States used hydrogen rather helium hydrogen highly flammable paragraph The next obstacle builders faced nature The wind speeds would shift due violent air currents causing dirigibles swivel around Even dirigible tethered mooring mast back ship would swivel around around mooring mast paragraph Due nature safety issues builders Empire State Building faced obstacles allowing dirigibles dock",
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"content": "There material people consider offensive material nt want youth indulge Such items include music books movies I going give thoughts issue On materials like music movies ratings item saying age apropriate content music movie Like movies ratings means older view parental guidance PG means parents younger kids And age groups If something offensive language bad music cover lable says explicit content I agree I nt think take anything shelf unless completely nescessary If someone nt like content item option listen watch read There people might disagree I see coming Say book discriminating race I agree taken shelves There also people leanent others strict Just like parents example A lot parents want raise kids envirenment swearing violence parents let kids watch listen items age group Like parents let watch read listen I want opinion I turned fine others might thing I seen kids parents nt strict let indulge items turned well behaved adults Then also people strict parents turned good person vise versa That I say topic You seen views I believe In summary I guess I could say everyone opinions views",
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"content": "The mood memoir alot things First makes warth feeling It also makes happy mood says thank enough For And lastly makes kind sad talks people need help And says love cuba wants remember heratige There moods story brings",
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"content": "If I were a scientist at NASA and I was disucussing the Face with someone who doesn't think the Face was just landformation I would say, it is because of what other scientist in NASA believe it was a landformation that looked like a real human face.\n\nThe Face was just something formed by the planet because the artical says, \"huge rock formation... which resemles a human head... formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, nose, and mouth.\" Which means that is was just a rock that was formed a different way to look like it was a face. Although few scientists believed the Face was an alien artifact, but there were more scientist to prove them wrong. Another piece of evidence was when they were taking pictures Garvin said, \"As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size,\" he added. \"So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Egyptian-style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were!\" What the picture actually shows is the Martin equivalent of the butte or mesa-landforms common around the American West. This evidence goes with my argument because if it was some type of alien siglnal the camera would of picked it up and they would of seen what it really was, but they didn't all they saw was a landform like the ones around American West.\n\nIn conclution it was not an alien signal, or artifact, it was just a piece of land formed differently. Now you all know it wasn't from aliens. All it was, was an illusion that looked like a real human face with a nose, eyes, and more. Don't assume everything on other planets are always from aliens because for now we don't have proof aliens exist.",
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"content": "Many people think that aliens are real, but they're not! Many people believe that this photo is caused by aliens. They don't know the true story of this and that it has to be caused by natural landform. There's no proof that aliens are real and no one really proved it at all! People just assume that it's caused by aliens because they see a big hole, but it's natural landform. Until I see proof that aliens are real then I will believe them, but right now there is no proof at all.\n\nMany people think that it's caused by aliens, but it's not. It even said, \"NASA unveiled the image for all to see. The caption noted a \"huge rock formation.\" It may look like a face, but that's just how it is. Conspiracy theorists don't even know what they're talking about. They just assume things, but they never show proof. NASA even showed proof that it's not caused by alien, but it may look like it was caused by aliens. It's just a natural landform.\n\nMany people waited to see if the natural landform was actually caused by aliens. JPL revealed that it was a natural landform and that there was no alien monument after all. Many people still believe that it's caused by aliens and people even showed proof that it's not caused by aliens. Not everyone was satisfied that it was a natural landform because, \"The camera on board MGS had to peer through wispy clouds to see the face.\" There really hasn't been a single one proof that aliens actually exist.\n\nAlthough, the natural landform does look like an alien, but that's just how the natural landform is. The picture was actually showing us a butte or mesa, which is a landform that is common around the American West. So, this is common here, in the Earth, so this has to be common in Mars. They even said, \"That's a lava dome that takes the form of an isolated mesa about the same height as the Face on Mars.\" So, it was provened to be a mesa.\n\nMany people thought that this picture was to be an alien. Many people, including NASA, even showed proof that it wasn't an alien. NASA at first did think that it was an alien, until they showed us proof of what they researched. People even showed us proof that it was just mesa, which is common to happen. It may look like it was caused by an alien, but it was just a natural landform that looks like an alien.",
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"content": "Environmental issues are one of the major problems the global world is facing. fuel is one of the major factors that have a negative impact on the environment. But Increasing its cost will not solve the problems because countries depend on it for their economic growth and development .As well as that ,there are other factors that affect the environment other than fuel. \r\n\r\n Fuel is the most important substance in the world . It is a widely used source of energy. For this reason , society , the economy depends on it to reach its economical performance . The energy produced from it has many applications such as powering vehicles, ships, aeroplanes as well as providing electricity for homes and industries . Therefore , increasing the cost will not stop consumption .As can be seen, the main issue is not the fuel but it is consumed by the people. \r\n\r\nIn addition, there are other factors that affect the environment such as deforestation,pollution , waste disposal ,climate change etc. All those issues are caused by human disturbance . So , we indirectly contribute to the problems facing the environment.\r\n\r\nIn this , the case we need to change is our lifestyle that can positively impact our territories as well we as replacing the fuel with another substance which will be more beneficial to the nature \r\n\r\nTo conclude, increasing fuel is not the solution to save the environment since it contributed to the development of each country .Also, there are other factors affecting the environment negatively which the world is indirectly responsible for all those actions .",
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"content": "It is true that large public spaces play an important role in urban areas. Although some people do not agree, I believe that it is essential for towns and cities to have these spaces.\r\n\r\nOn the one hand, there are some arguments that cities and towns having common areas are unnecessary. Firstly, those areas can be replaced with useful facilities such as hospitals, car parks and subway stations. As a result, those facilities provide convenience to citizens. For example, people easily receive medical care at accessible local hospitals. Secondly, there is a safety issue particularly during night time. Especially parks can become risky environments after dark, often attracting homeless individuals. Due to this, many people tend to avoid parks during the night.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, in my view, I am more convinced that having those spaces can encourage exercise and physical activity among residents. This means that exercise maintains good health and reduces the risk of diseases such as obesity and heart conditions. When individuals exercise in their daily routine, they improve their physical abilities, strengthen their muscles, and prevent weight gain. In addition, these public spaces have the potential to attract tourists and visitors. As tourists explore the local areas, they contribute to the local economy by spending money on nearby restaurants, cafes and shops.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, some individuals argued that large public spaces are unnecessary in our cities but I believe that despite the concerns about safety at night, large public spaces in towns and cities offer numerous benefits.",
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"content": "Throughout designing construction stages Empire State building s mooring mast builders engineers confronted many issues including distribution building stress fire hazards constant shifting caused winds During planning stages engineers confronted issue alliviate stress Empire State Building s frame According engineers making thousand foot dirigible moored top building held single cable tether would add stress building s frame building would require sixty thousand dollars redesigning modifying current building s foundation framework Secondly engineers builders never considered fire hazards confronted completion mooring mast The American dirigibles filled hydrogen rather helium making gaseousfilled transportation highly flammable An example safety violation occurred burning dirigible Lakehurst New Jersey causing builders reflect possible severity possible accident heavily populated area New York Thirdly New York violent air currents could cause rear dirigibles swivel shift The possible solution way back lead blocks would neither practical safe Engineers builders Empire State Building confronted many problems concerns sometimes addressed irrational solutions",
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"content": "CAPS hour thirty minutes kidding I said dad I got line ride maverick point Thats sign says could take longer dad replied I said disappointed tone I gusse wait head I reminded zero zipo none patience Why I say yeah Right thoughts done line moved little That quick I thought During time time line moved I occupied watching people rides go The line moved Watching people didnt work time I thinking much fun maverick would ride rides I wanted go next Those thoughts lasted half way line My patience running I started thinking close school much I wanted go back I didnt want go back I would miss looking forward We almost I losing patience every seconde I started tap fingers side leg I thought nothing tapped fingers move We finally front I didnt complain I got seat ride started At end I really worth I thought Now time go rides complain That time I patient",
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"content": "Driverless cars are indeed a step into the future. They would further automotive technology to a place it's never been before, and issue in a new age of learning when it comes to driving. I believe that driverless cars are a great idea and have great promise for the future.\n\nImagine streets filled with vehicles that were more machine operated than human. If you can, it looks kind of frightening, but it also looks amazing. By further testing and creating more advanced driverless cars, humankind is taking steps into the future of technology. By doing so, we are pushing the limits of what automotive intelligence and engineering can do. In the article it says, \"Further improvements in sensors and computer hardware and software to make driving safer are also leading to cars that can handle more and more drinving tasks on their own.\" Car manufacturers are working hard to improve the lives of others by creating these automobiles.\n\nAnother aspect of driverless cars that would greatly impact people is public transportation. In the article, it states that Google founder Sergey Brin says, \"The cars he foresees would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus.\" Using driverless cars for public transportation would benefit millions of peoples' lives by providing a safe and efficient way of travel that doesn't have some of the setbacks that buses or cabs do.\n\nOne more thing that the cars would positively impact is the car related mortality rate. The article states, \" The information from the sensors can cause the car to apply brakes on individual wheels and reduce power from the engine, allowing far better response and control than a human driver could manage alone.\" Dr. Werner Huber also said that some manufacturers would bring in displays, such as texting, that would disappear when the driver took control. This would actually a safety measure not offered to people who simply text and drive now.\n\nOverall, driverless cars would be a step into the future of automotive engineering and technology as a whole. It has shown, through test studies, that it would positively impact many aspects of day to day life, and create a safer place on the roads.",
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"content": "Walking library looking good book magazine read run disgusting books offensive people Some people think removed shelves I one Are There books magazines movies ect run bad language racism bad religious talking even sex Nobody needs reading kind books bad minds offensive people A lot people like hear curse words see Seeing words book make person think wrong things library put wrong words head Then books racism worst topic people If someone came across book would hurt feelings would want finish book Their others religious come across something wrong religion offended There ways library could handle books offend people The librarian could think putting warning sign seperating books magazines etc section people get offended things know know look Or inside front cover librarian could put warning note show person things offend someone It would helpful many people In every library wo nt see books perfectly good We know going bad things books books way inapropriate books removed There way many people get offended reading books want read Let s put stop In conclusion many libraries around going kind books offend people There stop removing shelves least warning others things books magazines entertainment people like days It would amazing know people love read offended reading",
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"content": "This story is about evaluating The Challenge of Exploring Venus. In the first paragraph it is kinda misleading because it says that venus sometimes called the evening star is one of the brightest points of light in the night sky. Then it goes on to talk about how venus is also a planet so the name is very misleading. Then paragraph two it talks about how its a planet again not a star and its saying that its the closest planet to earth.\n\nVenus is the closest planet to earth and yet to there has been a spacecraft to survive the landing. Although it could be a little bit tough seems haw venus's atmosphere is almost 97 percent carbon dioxide blankets and the clouds of highly corrosive sulfuric acid in venus's atmosphere. On venus surface the temperatues average over 800 degrees fahrenheit. With that kind of heat and pressure could even crush a submarine.\n\nIn conclusion the story had some great details about what venus was like compared to earth but i also think that it was a little misleading about star planet and i think that could have been fixed up so it didnt have you on your toes trying to find out wether or not it was a star or a planet that was earths twin.",
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"content": "Driverless cars may sound like something of the future but they could be they could easily be the destruction of the future. Driverless cars that are operated by computers and microships, and sensors could pose as huge threats agains the health of humans. Driverless cars could cause more accidents, would cost more to manufacture and sell, and also would eliminate skills already valued by certified drivers.\n\nThe biggest reasons that driverless cars should be a hopeless dream of the future is because of the amount of risks there is when riding in one. Everyone knows from expiereince that technology can never be 100% reliable, so why should we put at our lifes in the hands of technology? One may argue that there would be no irresponsable drivers when technology is in charge, but that is untrue. What if there is a malfunction with the technology and the car stops running on a busy highway? Not only is driverless cars a bad idea, but it also would cause more accidents then driver operated vehicles.\n\nThe second biggest reason that driverless cars may not be the best for the future is that they would cost much more to produce, manufacture,and sell to the general public. Everyone knows that cars can take big dents in a vehicle owners bank account, but vehicles in todays age are a neccescity. If we were to switch over to driverless cars, they would have to produce all new driverless vehicles for everyone that owns a car today. Just think about having to sell your car to be able to pay for a much more expensive technology operated vehicle. In the passage on paragraph 6 the writer says \"Radar was a device on a hilltop that cost two hundered million dollars. It wasn't just something you could buy at Radio Shack\". The writer is comparing radars in 2000 to sensors in 2016, if radars costed 200 Million, what do you think a new upgraded driverless car with \"sensors\" is going to cost us?\n\nThe last and final reason I believe driverless cars should remain just a dream is because it would eliminate skills already valued by drivers today. It talks in the passage about how the popular electric car brand \"Tesla\" is expected to have a 90% driverless car out by the end of 2016. This may sound pretty nice to those who hate driving and can't stand to be behind the wheel, but what about the people that enjoy driving and find it as a hobby and a past time? I have a friend who dedicates his whole life to driving and racing, he loves how independednt he can be and how he can control the vehicle all by himself. If driverless cars become the new trend then people like my friend will have no other hobby to return to and there passion for driving will be a thing of the past if technology becomes the future of vehicles and driving.\n\nAfter all these reasons it should be pretty obvious that driverless vehicles should remain just mereley an idea, not having driverless cars and remaining with the independent driving sysytem we have today would be beneficial to our safety, our values and our bank accounts. Let's leave this wreckless idea of driverless cars in the past!",
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"content": "The author concludes story paragraph many reasons One reason author trying say going overcome obstacle test matter In text say it make cold months consumer supports last paragraph also new country starting new beginning In text says Not like kind beforeThis implies different country soon adjust Finally says this hibiscus budding means bloom",
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"content": "Hi I am Luke and I was in a job on a boat called a cattle boat. I was on the boat for about two years and it was amzing. The job is all about getting cattle acores the oceans to other countres because of World War II.\n\nThe Nazies done a lot of work to destroy theso countery and they need food and supplys to get back on their feet and they make a great counrty once again. This job in opioun is the best because we get to go to other countris and give them supplys for them to get back on their feet to once great again. I did this for two years straight and had a blast and we even got so much free time that I got to take a tour around a caltle on our way to chine and I had a blast also got see Greece and other amzaing conutries. I also I got a trip to italy and got to ride the strits of their beatful town. So this was a good trip for me a small-town city boy. On the way home we got to play sports like baseball, vollyball, table-tennis tournaments, fencing, boxing reading whittling, and games to pass the time for the two years. But I do got to warn you about the danger about this job when I had the late night shift I had to check the animals every hour and one hour I fell back in if that railing was not their I would of been lost at sea and I would of dron out their if it was not for that railing.\n\nSo this jobeis good ofr some people if they wanted to see the world and to sail around the world and have a adventure and exting two years about cattle boating but keep in mind it is very dangers to cattle boatign so that is some reason to cattle boating and so I hope you would like this job.",
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"content": "Driverless cars are the future. Sergey Brin is the creator of the Google Cars. He believes such cars would fundamentally change the world. They are made to take people to where they need to go without them really even having to drive. The only time the person will need to take over is when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents. These cars would use half the fuel of today's taxis and offer far more flexibility than a bus.\n\nMy opinion on these new inventions is that I do not think these cars are needed and i don't think that they will be the next big thing. A lot can go wrong with them. The car could malfunction and possibly get a lot of people into a crash. The article says that the car is made so it automatically sensors the driver when they are needed. They are supposed to have seats that vibrate to notifty the driver, but what if the driver doesn't notice it and they end up crashing and hurt a lot of people.\n\nThe cars are also supposed to have cameras to watch that the drivers are remaining focused on the road. While the driver watches the road, the car watches the driver. But what if the camera breaks and it takes a while for the owner to get it fixed. Then how is the car going to watch the person? Plus by having these it just makes us all a little more lazier. Driving can be fun and nice to know how to do. I myself, enjoy driving. I personally think it's fun.\n\nOur lives are being taken over by technology. Everyone now a days depends on it. They're lost without it. By making cars that will drive us around, without us barely even having to drive it is stupid. They're also most likely going to be outragiously expensive. The name also does not make sense. Why call it \"driverless\" cars, if people are still going to have to drive it.\n\nThe article states, \"If technology fails and someone is injured, who is at fault--the driver or the manufacturer?\" In my opinion, it all just depends on the situation. If the car itself has an issue then its going to be the manufacturer's fault, but if the person just wasn't paying attention, then it is the driver's fault. To come to a conclusion, driverless cars are not worth all the hard work and time. They may be in style for a few months, but then i think people will get tired of them and just go back to their regular car.",
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"content": "Driving vehicles is a easy way to transport, but on the downside it is effecting the air in a very bad way. Every day people are driving cars and trucks knowing that it pollutes the air but are doing nothing to stop it. If everybody stopped driving vehicles the world would be a much healthier place and much safer too. This is because the burning of fossil fuels pollutes the air, and brings harm to pedestrians when there is a unexpierenced or drunk driver. A good way to prevent this from happening is to get a bunch of people or even everyone to quit driving.\n\nThough driving is an easy means of trasportation so is riding a bike, a skateboard, walking, running, all these things can get you to your destination. Yes these things will take longer but it will also be a good exercise and will not be polluting the air. Not only is it polluting the air but it is also a very expensive way of transportation because you pay for the car then all the gas it takes to get from one place to another. Every year the world should have a week of no driving so the air can clear up and to show everyone that they are making a big mistake driving every single day to get to work or go pick up groceries.\n\nIn Vauban, Germany they have a suburb with nearly 5,500 residents that live car-free! These people try to keep their environment as clean as possible. In the article \"In German Suburb, Life Goes On Without Cars\" by Elisabeth Rosenthal she said \"Automobiles are linchpin of suburbs, where middle-class families from Chicago to Shanghai tend to make their homes...\" This meaning that to many people are relying on cars and need to stop to help us, to help earth.",
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"content": "today we are here to argue over the fact that the fact that Mars is not created by aieliens so hear they are famous scientist matthew girardot and famous dante girardot dante the face on mars is not made by aieliens because ailens donot exsist but profesor they must exsits if that face on mars is real and it is there and you can not denie it i know that i can not denie it because i know that it is\n\nrealy there and that aileans did not create it . yes but the\n\ncamra never lies that there was a land form in that picture and that natural land form looked like an ailen did it not? i will not denie this eitherthat picture did look like an ailen but that is imposiblebecause where it was snowing\n\nit was raining and whereit was raining it was snowing and that makes nosense so i guese that this is the end so byebye.",
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"content": "Every day is an opportunity for people to become better. Many public think that the state should have the authority to choose how their constituents live, while some believe that it is up to individuals to decide how they want to live their lives. I believe in the latter notion, and this essay will discuss both positions and my opinion that each person should be sole-decision maker of individualized existence. \r\n\r\nTo begin with, some groups support the notion that the government should change the living conditions of their own community. It is true that the ministry is the head of a nation, and they have the power and authority to govern how they want to run their country and impact the lives of their citizens. For example, they can be authoritative, which means they can organize and structure their action of living so that everyone in the society will be equal in their position and possession. If everyone can obey and submit, it will be easy for the community and the authority to live happily and worry-free. Personally, I do not support this argument because the government can be corrupt, and if it reigns, many citizens will suffer from the poor decisions of corrupt officials.\r\n\r\nOn the other hand, many believe that it should be the individual who will decide how they want to run the course of life. This is a democratic world where the public is given freedom of choice, rights to life, autonomy, and independence. For instance, every person has a different drive, wants, contentment, and passion that needs to be cultivated for improvement. One can be fast and effective in achieving their dreams, while another is contented with the little resources they have. Moreover, the congregation will be responsible for their accomplishments which is why I support this kind of thinking.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, I totally believe that democracy is best for a country where society has the right to live how they want to enjoy their everyday practices, it will give them more chances of growing and being effective citizens. On the contrary, if governments are structuring the family where equality is observed, there would be no chance of personal improvement and can suffer from corrupt politics.",
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"content": "In modern society, art is one of the most important subjects. While some think that it is an essential subject for children at school, others believe that it is a waste of time. It is clear that students need to be taught art at the institute. \r\n\r\nThe first aspect to point out is that art is an important subject for the youths. It is often said that when individuals are doing artwork, it gives them creative thoughts. As far as I am concerned, this is a vital element for them. If they could improve their creativity, this skill would help them with other subjects.\r\n\r\nHowever, it could be suggested that some young people might think that the art class is a waste of time. This is because there is high competition in terms of academic skills in modern society. The youths have much pressure to achieve their academic goals. Therefore, some might prefer to learn more other subjects such as mathematics and science in order to enrol in a university.\r\n\r\nAnother important issue is that the young need to have a relaxing time at school. For example, the painting would allow individuals to express their feelings which leads them to feel comfortable. If children were taught only academic studies, they would be stressed. In order to avoid this negative impact, schools need to provide the young with enjoyable classes.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, art is one of the most important subjects at school in terms of improving children's creativity. Additionally, the youths need to have a relaxing time in order to avoid being stressed with their academic studies.",
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"content": "There's going to be a time one day when driverless cars will come. There's new technology every year and engineers are starting to make a run on the future. Driverless car would change the way humans get to places but, do people really feel safe in them? If the technology fails and someone ends up dieing, then that would be the manufactures fault. There's so many problems that could happen with these cars that no one could even see coming.\n\nInventing driveless cars are a complete no to me. Eventhough they sound \"cool\", driveless cars could lead to big disasters all over the road. Having driveless cars does sound like a good idea but, you never know what the outcome could be. I think it's more about the safety of the people and not to have them in harms way. In the passage it says,\"They can steer,accelerate, and brake themselves, but all are designed to notify the driver when the road ahead requires human skills, such as navigating through work zones and around accidents\". If your going to make a driveless car might as well make it where it does everything by its self and it takes no human skills.\n\nIf these cars ever got in an accident, who's going to take the blame? I'll tell you who will take the blame, the manufacturer of the car will. If someones sitting in the car and the cars driving them, what happen if the car fails and drives off the road and crashes to another car? Everyone in this world doesn't want to but a car that leads to crashes and fails while there driving down the road. Im not saying these driveless cars wont be successful, but people dont know what it could lead to when there driving down the road.\n\nThere's so many problems that could happen with these cars that no one could see coming. These cars are not a little toys to be playing around in. Eventhough they sound like a good idea for the future you never know if it will lead to crashes and deaths.",
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"content": "Given are two figures representing the results of a survey of people who visited distinct kings of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999.\nIt is evident from the information of the pie chart supplied that theme parks attract the most visitors, standing at 38%, while museum and galleries is the runner-up, obtaining 37% of all visitors. The theme parks, museum and galleries take three-fourth of the overall tourist attractions, which remain historic houses and monuments, as well as wildlife parks and zoos, occupying 16% and 9% of visitors respectively.\nWith regard to the table, in theme parks, Blackpool Pleasure Beach has the most tourists visited among five places, with 47% of that. For other places, having 1% adventageous than that of Pleasureland, Southport, Alton Towers attract 17% of tourists. The places with the least percentage of people visiting are Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland, Windsor. Both only occupy 10%.",
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"content": "Imagine a world with a great transportation system that doesn't involve humans controlling the vehicles, yes, driverless cars. Sound futuristic? Yeah, but I think it could be better for us. The cars would have amazing technolgy, keeping us safer from human errors, because, let's face it, humans aren't perfect. We could take better care of our planet. And, no one would need to pay for another car, again.\n\nThe first reason we should have driverless cars, is because it is better for the planet. Google cofounder believes we could use driverless cars that would use half the fuel we use today. This would save fuel for future generations to come. Since we wouldn't be using as much fuel, there wouldn't be any concern of global warming. Think about your kids, your kids' kids, and so on. Do you want your grandkids to be suffering without any power source, or not even having a stable planet? No one wants that. Not only would driverless cars save our planet, they can help save lives.\n\nAnother reason we should have driverless cars, is because they can help save many human lives. These driverless cars would be computers, they can communicate to other driverless cars. And also, computers are perfect, they don't make mistakes. Humans, on the other hand, are not perfect. We make mistakes, it happens. So when a computer is driving a car, it would not make the mistakes humans do, therefore, saving hundreds of thousands of lives each year. These driverless cars would help save some money, as well.\n\nThe third reason we should have driverless cars, is because they would save a lot of money. No one would have to go out and fork out thousand of dollars on some new car. They could just use these driverless cars to transport them. Also, no one would have to pay for wrecks or insurance money, because these driverless cars wouldn't make mistakes to get them into car wrecks. We are looking at possibly of millions of dollars saved in just a year.\n\nI think that having driverless cars would be a plus for society. They would save our planet, they are a lot safer, and they would save a lot of money. I don't know how soon this could be a",
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"content": "Is the Electoral College a good thing? A Majority would say no and that it is a non democratic method of selecting a president. Many believe this system should be changed, as it is not really an accurate way to show what the majority wants, and that the president of the united states should be chosen through the popular vote. What if there is a tie in the electoral vote? In the case of a tie the election would be given to the house of represenatives. Given that many voters vote one party for president and another for congress, this isn't really and accurate reflection of the will of the people.\n\nThe electoral college is a system that has voters vote for a slate of electors, not the president. If you lived in california, for example, and voted democrat, you actually voted for a slate of Democratic electors pledged to the Democratic party. These electors, if they won the statewide election, would then go to congress and the Democrat candidate would recieve the vote of these electors. Anyone not holding public office can be an elector. And it depends on the state on how they are picked. Sometimes the presidential candidates themselves choose who the electors are. Voters can't always control who the electors end up voting for.\n\nOf course the electoral college method has its upsides. Being that with this system in place the outcome of the election is more certain. Of Course a dispute over the outcome is possible, it did happen in 2000, but it's less likely than a dispute over the popular vote. However, it can be argued that this method can turn off potential voters for a candidate who has no hope of carrying their state, Democrats in Texas for example, or Republicans in California. These voters, knowing their vote will have little to no effect, would have less incentive to pay attention to the campaign than they would if the president was chosen through the popular vote.\n\nAt the most basic level, the electoral college is unfair to voters. Most states have a winner-take-all system in place. Which means that they award the winning presidential candidate all of the electors votes. Because of this candidates dont spend time in states they have no chance of winning. They choose to mainly focus on the undecided states. In some cases, states don't get to see the candidates at all during the campaign, or even a single campaign ad.\n\nIn short, Does the electoral college work? In some ways yes but in many ways no. The electoral college is unfair, outdated, and irrational. The electoral college should be abolished, and the decision of who becomes president should be left to the popular vote; seeing as it is a more accurate representation of the collective will of the people.",
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"content": "The face you see in the photos is merely an illusion to you. The face is a huge rock formation which resembles a head formed by shadows giving the illusion of eyes, mouth, nose, etc. There has been three photos taken of this rock formation since 1976, since the 1976 photo the camera resolution, meaning the focus of the camera, has improved. Since the resolution of these cameras have improved you can see clearly that there is not actually a face on the surface of Mars. It is just merely a large buldge of rocks.\n\nThe face you may have once saw is only a shadow of a rock formation. NASA's Viking 1 spacecraft was circling the planet to look for its sister ships possible landing sight when they found the rock formation, then they snapped pictures of the rocks. Remember the camera resolution was not as clear in this time period.\n\nDue to the scientific studies and the fact of the camera resolutions we have found that there is not an alien life force on the surface of Mars. The only thing we've found are rock formations. The most recent picture taken was at least tens times sharper than the ones before, revealing it is just a natural land form.",
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"content": "Some cars are to loud and causes alot of polution in the world today. The most problem is the polution thats coming out of the cars. Limiting the usage of your car can become a big help in the community today, not only that it can help our atmosphere and the air that breathe from sun up to sun down. For years people have been using the cars that run on fuel that polutes our air. some countries do not like speacialy Paris. Lets find out more why Paris dont like fuel using cars.\n\nParis enforced laws that ban car usage to clear the air of the global city. Motorists that has driving licences were ordered to leave their vehicles home. If they did not follow that law they would have to pay a $31(22-euro) fine. Some people had their car impounded due to their reaction for paying the fine. THAts when they came up with an idea by making cars that run on electicty or solar to cut down fuel usage. For this reason, car traffic was down atleast 60% in the capital of France. Thats one reason why you should limit your car uasage.\n\nBogota, Colombia made up an event, they called it car-free day. Thats when everybody leave their cars home. Thats the day when you would had hiked,biked, skated or even took the bus to work or where ever you were going. The reason for them making that up was to promote alternative transportation and to reduce smog. If you didnt follow this event you would have to face a $25 fine. Even though on somedays it would rain, it hasnt stop people from participating. This was a way to cut down stress on people and to reduce ait polution. THis event has spreaded through cities. This is an another advantage for limiting car usage.\n\nBasically these are somethings that you can do to help the communtiy. Some people may not like the idea, but it doesnt help to atleast try.",
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"content": "I am a scientist at NASA. I am argueing with someone who thinks that the face on Mars was created by aliens. I will provide simple facts that everyone will be able to understand and hopefully help you see that the face on Mars is nothing but a landfom created by natural causes.\n\nWhen the first picyure of the \"Face\" came out on the Viking 1, the small indents and the shadow angle showed what looked like a human face but was actually just one of the many mounds that for there. The United Staes actually has mounds of lava that had formed NATURALY in Middle Butte in the Snake River Plain of Idaho.\n\nMany people believe that if it is used for advortizement that is is a real true fact and they can believe that what ever is on that buildboard or sign on the highway that has had or is going to happen. The Face of Mars has been used for marketing for over 25 years so it would sell more item to the population and the buisness CEO's would make more money.\n\nPeople also believe in one picture on a cloudy day that they could see markings on the mound that would show that Martians have been and built the Face, but on a cloudlaess summer day in 2001 we captured a picture of the mound with our new and improved cameras that spans 1.5 meters compared to the 43 meter camera that the Viking used. The newer camera can discren things in a digital image 3 times bigger that the pixel size,so we could see if there was anything on the mound that would show living things on the planet Mars",
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"content": "\"The Face''\n\nAs we all know in the year of 1976 Nasa's Viking 1 spacecraft captured a photo which was belived to be a \"face'' formed in Mar's surface. There has also been arguments over the years if \"the face\" was created by aliens or was it just a natural landform. Here is why I belive it is a natural landform.\n\nIn the article \"Umasking the Face on Mars, in paragraph 12 it says what the picture that the picture actually shows that the Martian is equaivalent to a butte or messa which are landforms common around the American West. Some migfht that you can't actually tell what things really are just from a picture because it is only a proportion. Well, in paragraph 11 Garvin says that ,\" As a rule of thumb, you can discern things in a digital image 3 times bigger than the pixel size. \"So, if there were objects in this picture like airplanes on the ground or Eqytian -style pyramids or even small shacks, you could see what they were.\n\nSome might say that you can tell by the picture thaat Viking 1 spacecraft took because of the type of technology they were using in the 20th century. Well in paragraph 10 they said that they rolled their spacecraft 25 degrees to center in the Face in the feild of veiw. Malin's team captured an extraordinary photo using the camer's absolute maximum reslotion. Each pixel in the 2001 image spans 1.56 meters, compared to 43 meters, 43 in the 1976 Viking photo. This tells everyone that they did not make their decsion based upon 20th century technology, but they captured thier photo with morden day technology.\n\nIn conclusion, I belive that \"The Face\" was a just a natural landform. I belive this because of the eveidence that NASA provided and the fact that they went back to space and took anthor picture with up to date technology.",
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"content": "There many obstacles builders faced order allow dirigibles dock atop Empire State Building One obstacle safety Foreign countries used highly flammable gases fill dirigibles According passage German dirigible Hindenburg destroyed fire Lakehurst New Jersey May owners Empire state building realized much worse accident could taken place densely populated area downtown New York Another obstacle whether The winds top building always shifting violent air currents For example US Navy dirigible Los Angeles could nt tie mast wind might resulted puncture shell dirigible One obstacle law banning airships flying low urban areas According passage This law would make illegal ever tie building even approach area Because many obstacles builders faced Empire State building unable fulfill original purpose still considered worldwide landmark today",
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"content": "What teenagers should do with their spare time has become a topic for debate. Some are of the opinion that this time be used for beneficial community work. I strongly agree with this because of the leadership traits it will groom in children, it is a great way to spend time, and also, support for the elderly is improved.\r\n\r\nFirstly, partaking in activities such as this prepare children to be leaders in future. For example, Dr. Martin Luther king, known to be a very passionate leader used to help to the community by serving them in ways such as cleaning up the street, and helping the elderly run on errands, even doing some menial work for them. Furthermore, When young adults assist in nurturing a community it fosters a sense of responsibility in them, and this bodes well for society.\r\n\r\nSecondly, working for the immediate environment is great way to exercise. Research, shows that teenagers in India suffer health related problems because they allocate too much time to sedentary lifestyle, such as watching tv shows, cartoons, and playing video games. Consequently, 2 in every 5 India child suffer some sort of ailment such as back pain caused by the sedentary lifestyle. Finally, when teenagers assist the elderly, it makes them happy and this contributes positively to the social life of their communities.\r\n\r\nTo conclude, when teenagers are partly responsible for their immediate environment, it builds positive traits, it is a good way to work out, and also fosters togetherness. Thereby, leading to a better community for all.",
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"content": "With all the possiblities that could happen if drivereless were everywhere on the streets, Driverless cars are a bad idea for the future. Driverless cars are remoted for a computer instead of a human being, Human have better judgement calls than a computer. With this being said, Human are more aware and experienced to their surroundings. Since Driverless cars are powered from technology, there is a very high chance that it can malfunction in use, not be aware of a situation of a traffic issue, and if an accident happens, no one is sure who is responsible for it.\n\nOne reason why driverless cars would have a negative impact on daily life is malfunctioning. Driverless cars are powered through technology and technology is not perfect. There is always a chance of malfunction. For example, a driverless car couldn't monuever through a work zone correctly or if there is a traffic stop or issue on the road. Because of this, this could cause more issues for the driver inside the car.\n\nAnother reason for why driverless cars are a bad idea is because of laws/law enforcement. One of the main purposes of the driverless car is to avoid accidents in traffic. With driveless cars being on the street driving themselves mostly, this would mean that there would be new state laws enforced on driveless. Since this idea is new to our generation and is developing, laws will constantly change to make sure the driver is safe and is driving/watching with caution. If a driver is in the driverless car and the car gets into an accident, who is in the fault? The driver or the car? Also individuals could argue their case of that the car caused an accident instead of them. If this were to happen, car manufacturers could be penalized from many different cases.\n\nLast reason why driverless cars are a bad idea for the future is because of characteristics and human judgement. Companies can say \"The combination of all this input is necessary for the driverless car to mimc the skill of a human at the wheel.\" but the vehicle is not human at all. The vehicle is operating off of sensors and a gps to locate where it is going. In life, a human has better judgement on how to solve a real life situation than a computer. An experienced human driver can read a road sign and operate a vehicle from what the sign warns them of whats ahead. A computer/sensor can not do that. Also human driver knows what to do if their is an emergency like if they need to pull over off the road or take a detour. A computer/sensor can not do that.\n\nIn conclusion, Driverless cars would have a negative impact on the future of humans. There is always a chance of malfunction. Also new laws will be added and changed constantly. Another reason is for liability in the case of accident because no one will be sure for who should be held accountable.",
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"content": "With the boom of technology, video games are gaining in popularity among children and young adults. Some hold the belief that playing computer games is beneficial to their development, while the opponents voice their criticism against it due to the health risks it may pose. However, from my perspective, video games significantly impact the child’s growth if played moderately. \r\n\r\nOn the one hand, gaming can promote children’s health, whether mental or physical state. These virtual games are capable of easing anxiety and helping tackle some mental health issues due to positive chemicals one’s brain produces when they are playing. Moreover, multiples of games such as Sudoku or online puzzles also foster brain development and enhance thinking capacity. Besides, playing games can be an inventive way of exercising. A case in this point is a game called “Ring Fit Adventure - Nintendo Switch”, which requires players to perform an abundance of physical activities and attacks in-game.\r\n\r\nAppealing these health benefits may seem, there are still some potential pitfalls if children play video games too frequently. Even though games are fun and relaxing to some extent, teenagers may still stand a great chance of being addicted. Gaming addiction is detrimental to various aspects of life, ranging from the broken parent-child relationship to poor academic performance. In addition, in 2018, the World Health Organization declared it a serious mental health issue. Furthermore, most children tend to sit in front of the screen for a long time during the game sessions since only an insignificant number of these games are fitness ones. Consequently, they may suffer from eye strain, visual impairments, or other diseases such as obesity.\r\n\r\nIn conclusion, it is undeniable that playing video games may positively affect a child’s health since it helps them unwind and encourages exercise. However, they should acknowledge the appropriate amount of gaming; otherwise, this can result in severe health hazards.",
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"content": "The new software that was developed could potentially be a benefit to society one day. Using this software might allow current researchers to determine the emotion of a person from many years ago. Although these may be the claims, this technology isn't proven to be efficient with the results it gives. Using this new technology would not be valuable to students in a classroom.\n\nThe calculation the computer can make may not be factual enough to prove it's calculations are correct. In paragraph five, Dr. Huang is said to have incripted the same studies that Leonardo da Vinci used for his own anatomy studies, into the computer software. Even though this may be the case, the software used may alter the specific details in it's own study because an electronic device is determining a human situation.\n\nAlthough using the software may not be factual, this software also has the benefit of increasing a students emotion. As said in paragraph six, the software could determine a students emotion and display an ad of some sort to alter their mood for the better. \"A classroom computer could recognize when a student is becoming confused or bored,\" said Dr. Huang. If these claims are proven to be true, then a students energy and mood could be altered when needed.\n\nTo determine an emotion of another through a computer software, still does not give perfect results. These results may also not be trust worthy because human error is still involved due to the fact that humans developed the software itself. However, if the program can alter a students emotion in a classroom then the student may benefit greatly from it. Even though the software may not yet be perfect, it may change the perspective of a student and their attitude in a classroom.",
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"content": "Dear newstimes I really think computers good thing let talk people online ways things people people manage alot money hills computer First let comunicate people know people united states family different state never get see well thats computers come handy computers thing calle vidio chat thats webcam talk peoplem different places around world see camera also thing called allows talk people whenever want online mom got chatting nt seen since highschool happy see old friends secondly computers away people like emergency go computer save Like email email emergency even thing computer call someone even call along emergency people say computer many people think computer Thirdly computers help people paying bills mony Did know people united states pay bills computer manage mony computer I know parents I know lot people nt pay bills would nt able home anything thats pretty much need computers nt people would nt mony In conclusion people really need computers people like people know helped many people united states lastly computers really help manage money bills every body computer good reasons",
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"content": "I recall famous madican named prefering stunt took enourmous amounts pateints courage named CAPS In Time The madichian stay block ice days hours The great madichian sweater He consiled ice open public magnificent madichian said I could bearly hear anything He waited hours like falling abyiss bottomless pit Until final seconds ended The madichian finally free And alive",
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"content": "I think it would be a good idea for other people to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program. I have done this program many times. The program is a lot of fun on the way back after unloading all the animals. Also this program allowed me to experience adventures and visit unique places.\n\nI have done this program many times. I was 18 befor arriving at Greese and that meant I could be drafted for military service. When my draft board learned I was on a cattle-boat trip they said to just keep doing that as my service. By the time I was discharged I had made nine trips, the most of any Seagoing Cowboy.\n\nThe Seagoing Cowboys program is a lot of fun on the way back after unloading all the animals. After unloading the animals we would play baseball and volleyball where the animals had been held. We had table-tennis tournaments,fencing,boxing,and more this all helped pass the time. Games we played also helped pass the time.\n\nThe program allowed me to experience adventures and visit unique places. I had the benefit of seeing Europe and China. Though seeing Europe and China was awesome, seeing the Acropolis in Greece felt very special to me. Taking a gondola ride in Venice,Italy,a street of water was also felt very special to me. I also toured an exavted castle in Crete and marveled at the panama Canal on my way to China. I had time to go on adventures and visit enteresting places in this program with the spare time I had.\n\nI think it would be a great idea for other people to participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program for these reasons. I have done this program many times. The Seagoing Cowboys program is a lot of fun. This program allowed me to experience adventures and visit unique places. I had a great time in this program and I know from experience that you will too if you participate in the Seagoing Cowboys program.",
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"content": "In memoir Narciso Rodriguez nonstalgic mood created memories The mood created parents lives One way mood nonstalgic s grateful towards parents I always grateful parents love sacrifice I ve often told much courageous thing I could ever done CAPS By grateful towards parents helping nonstalgic mood grow Also live helps mood And I never forget house gracious neighborhood many things I learned love I never forget parents turn simple house home CAPS Since parents turned house home never forget making memoir nonstalgic In memoir Narciso Rodriguez creates nonstalgic mood memories past",
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"content": "Driverless cars, whether one likes it or not, is inevitable. Simply the technology these day are far too advanced to not be testing out computer operated vehicals. On the other hand with any good thing there will be drwawbacks.\n\nPersonally I believe that non-human operated cars are a good thing. If you think about it say a big rig trucker for example has to make his or her delivery on time but they have caught a sudden cold. With computer driven cars they can take a break and relax but will still be making good progress. Another advantage to self-driven vehicals is that humans can only do so much at a time if you're running late for work but haven't finished getting dressed or putting makeup on for the ladies you can hop in your car start the automated procedure and finish whatever you need to on the way to work.\n\nAlright yes there are resonable doubt for these new age cars but for good reason. for instance like in the text it says for liability reasons who would be to blame if there so happened to be a crash the driver, or the manufacture? But to solve all of that mess there should just be regulation for everywhere once a decission is made on who to blame. But experiments have proven that these new age cars can drive for over hallf a million miles without a crash, now who can say that for themselves?\n\nThe ¨smart roads¨ as they called them could help out too with this new age driving. Instead of having stop light like we do now there could be sensors at intersections to tell the car when and when not to go. This could also help with those that are colorblind and can't tell the differance between the lights on the stoplights. Another advantage to this is that there would be less acidents from drunk drivers who would run stop lights and T-bone anoher car causing a major crash and possible death.\n\nSmart cars could help with many problems but can also cause new problems when it comes to the act of driving. With technology catching up with peoples dreams, more and more cars I believe will become computer operated with little help of the human skill.",
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"content": "The mood created author memoir begining memoir tells parents hard time coming another country deal allot problem mood really sad allot suspense middle memoir talks grown family everbody happy live everbody together allots feast mood changed happy mood joyfull mood family end talks thank parents person opportunities give change mood thankful mood grateful mood And author creates moods memoir",
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"content": "There are many nations that put the young generation’s education a priority, but there are some individuals who think teaching illiterate adults how to understand a word or even write the words should be more important. I partially agree with the statement, and I will elaborate on my view in the following paragraphs.\n\nOn the one hand, youth are the future of a country. The progress of a nation depends on the education of the young generation.In other words, young people play an important role in the country's development. Liang-ChiChoa a leader of a reform movement once said that a strong youth makes a country strong. For instance, a demonstration called the Tiananmen Square movement was held by students fighting for democracy.As a result, we can see how vital the young education is.\n\nOn the other hand, reducing the number of illiteracy shouldn’t be overlooked, because the illiteracy rate will influence the employment rate. If many people in a country don’t have a job, the authorities need to provide a lot of unemployment benefits, which will cause a country’s financial burden . Moreover, the unemployment rate and the crime rate are positively correlated. A thesis shows every 1 % increase in unemployment, the number of prisoners rises by 4%.Two years ago, there was news about a father who had to rob a family to feed his own family, hence the relationship between the unemployment rate and the crime rate should be considered.\n\nIn conclusion, while the effort invested in promoting the illiterate rate seems more immediate, education for the youth brings hope to society. Therefore, striking a balance between the education for adults and youth.",
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"content": "Censorship libraries great issue world today Many authors use offensive methods terms persuade audiences However many All authors right say wish limit books placed view If libraries accept offensive types magazines books music movies etc certainly placed reach children Like many libraries city section children sperate section adults Any materials found offensive placed special section adult area customers warned way Since everyone view right wrong special team placed charge keeping offensive materials seperate Those borrow anything library right bring special book movie attention charge By sticking method offensive materials stay hands wish see Items containing vulgar language unjust There still majority however engage oppertunity view materials Everyone right wish personal experience growing home I taught right wrong people treated dignity well respect No matter color size looks personalities created equally constitution says Therefore view would considered After everyone wishes treated kindly right",
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